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 Meet Harper. She's a young Assistant Editor at FP Ham publishing company. Now, her boss [Karen The Editor](https://huggingface.co/FPHam/Karen_theEditor-13B-4bit-128g-GPTQ), well, she's got a good grasp on not messing around too much with an author's language. 
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 But Harper, on the other hand, feels the need to rewrite every single sentence; even if just a little bit. (Oh, the youth these days...)
 But hey, that's what happens when you hire fresh college graduates.
 
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 User: Rewrite the following text: <the text>
 Assistant:
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-<the text> should be a short paragraph at a time, few sentences. If you write long paragraphs, Harper might feel the urge to shorten them. You see, her attention span is like that of the new generation.
+Text should be a short paragraph at a time, few sentences. If you write long paragraphs, Harper might feel the urge to shorten them. 
+You see, her attention span is like that of the new generation or a goldfish.
 
 You can even give her specific instructions like: 
 ```
 Rewrite the following text using aristocratic British English, also known as 'Receiver Pronunciation' (RP) or 'BBC English': 
 ```
 
-Oh, and just a heads up, if you ask her to use profanity, obscenity, or vulgar language, well, the outcome is all on you because she is very eager to comply.
+Oh, and just a heads up, if you ask her to use profanity, well, the outcome is all on you because she is very eager to comply.
 
-Don't be surprised if Harper jumps at the chance to correct your words, even if you thought they were perfectly fine. She's just that eager to make things right, you know? 
+Don't be surprised if Harper jumps at the chance to correct your words, even if you thought they were perfectly fine. 
+She's just that eager to make her mark, you know? 
 
 ## Examples
 
-Here are examples. The format was as just as above, an instruction to rewrite text follwing with the input text itself. 
+Here are some examples. The format was as just as above, an instruction to rewrite text follwing with the input text itself. 
 
-The input text:
+The input text was (of course):
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 It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.
 However little known the feelings or views of such a man may be on his first entering a neighbourhood, 
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 Rewrite the following text into a rhyming poem by Dr. Seuss
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 In a place where he is new,
 A man with wealth, they all knew,