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 # Org Information
 
-Welcome to our community organization, specifically designed for women-identified individuals! Here, we aim to foster community and celebrate their contributions. 
+Welcome to our community organization, specifically designed for women-identified individuals! Here, we aim to grow our community and celebrate our contributions. 
 
-By tapping “join the org” on the top right, you’ll get your contributions on Hugging Face showcased in the feeds of all other members of the community. If you do not identify as a woman, we kindly ask that you support us by tapping “watch repos” on the top right instead of “join the org”.
+By tapping “join the org” on the top right, you’ll get your contributions on Hugging Face showcased in the feeds of all other members of the community. If you do not identify as a woman, we kindly ask that you support us by tapping “watch repos” on the top right so that you can still see our awesome updates.
 
 As one of the initial members, you play a crucial role in shaping this space. We encourage you to add your work to Hugging Face and invite other women-identified friends interested in joining us.