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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Anwser:
Some say that earning important quantities of cash as well as having fewer intervals of leisure is better than having less money with more free time. This essay will suggest that owning loads of it is necessary in order to have quality relaxation periods and having more spare time allows you to feel, overall, more relaxed.
It is thought that thanks to having a large capital, individuals can enjoy the small amount of it they have. Furthermore, when having a lot of money, people are able to book extravagant trips to foreign countries and live countless and luxurious experiences. For instance, my uncle has only 2 weeks per year of vacation because he spends all of his hours working towards building an empire. Though he might seem tortured, he is one of the happiest men alive as a consequence of how perfectly he manages those two weeks and creates unforgettable memories with the cash he owns.
People also believe that money is not a crucial factor in having the knowledge of how to spend a free stretch. Moreover, it is possible to enjoy most of life with not much in capital since having a pleasure in life is accessible to everyone. For example, in the 2023 annual Harvard Social study, the results illustrated that all in all, individuals with less cash were happier than those possessing a lot of it. Between the first category, 50% explained that their happiness was due to the simple yet qualitative life they have thanks to the important amount of leisure periods.
To conclude, I personally think that having an important capital with little relaxation time is better than the opposite since it is possible to know how to organise these small periods of leisure in order to enjoy the most of it.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Anwser:
Some say that earning important quantities of cash as well as having fewer intervals of leisure is better than having less money with more free time. This essay will suggest that owning loads of it is necessary in order to have quality relaxation periods and having more spare time allows you to feel, overall, more relaxed.
It is thought that thanks to having a large capital, individuals can enjoy the small amount of it they have. Furthermore, when having a lot of money, people are able to book extravagant trips to foreign countries and live countless and luxurious experiences. For instance, my uncle has only 2 weeks per year of vacation because he spends all of his hours working towards building an empire. Though he might seem tortured, he is one of the happiest men alive as a consequence of how perfectly he manages those two weeks and creates unforgettable memories with the cash he owns.
People also believe that money is not a crucial factor in having the knowledge of how to spend a free stretch. Moreover, it is possible to enjoy most of life with not much in capital since having a pleasure in life is accessible to everyone. For example, in the 2023 annual Harvard Social study, the results illustrated that all in all, individuals with less cash were happier than those possessing a lot of it. Between the first category, 50% explained that their happiness was due to the simple yet qualitative life they have thanks to the important amount of leisure periods.
To conclude, I personally think that having an important capital with little relaxation time is better than the opposite since it is possible to know how to organise these small periods of leisure in order to enjoy the most of it.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Anwser:
Some say that earning important quantities of cash as well as having fewer intervals of leisure is better than having less money with more free time. This essay will suggest that owning loads of it is necessary in order to have quality relaxation periods and having more spare time allows you to feel, overall, more relaxed.
It is thought that thanks to having a large capital, individuals can enjoy the small amount of it they have. Furthermore, when having a lot of money, people are able to book extravagant trips to foreign countries and live countless and luxurious experiences. For instance, my uncle has only 2 weeks per year of vacation because he spends all of his hours working towards building an empire. Though he might seem tortured, he is one of the happiest men alive as a consequence of how perfectly he manages those two weeks and creates unforgettable memories with the cash he owns.
People also believe that money is not a crucial factor in having the knowledge of how to spend a free stretch. Moreover, it is possible to enjoy most of life with not much in capital since having a pleasure in life is accessible to everyone. For example, in the 2023 annual Harvard Social study, the results illustrated that all in all, individuals with less cash were happier than those possessing a lot of it. Between the first category, 50% explained that their happiness was due to the simple yet qualitative life they have thanks to the important amount of leisure periods.
To conclude, I personally think that having an important capital with little relaxation time is better than the opposite since it is possible to know how to organise these small periods of leisure in order to enjoy the most of it.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Anwser:
Some say that earning important quantities of cash as well as having fewer intervals of leisure is better than having less money with more free time. This essay will suggest that owning loads of it is necessary in order to have quality relaxation periods and having more spare time allows you to feel, overall, more relaxed.
It is thought that thanks to having a large capital, individuals can enjoy the small amount of it they have. Furthermore, when having a lot of money, people are able to book extravagant trips to foreign countries and live countless and luxurious experiences. For instance, my uncle has only 2 weeks per year of vacation because he spends all of his hours working towards building an empire. Though he might seem tortured, he is one of the happiest men alive as a consequence of how perfectly he manages those two weeks and creates unforgettable memories with the cash he owns.
People also believe that money is not a crucial factor in having the knowledge of how to spend a free stretch. Moreover, it is possible to enjoy most of life with not much in capital since having a pleasure in life is accessible to everyone. For example, in the 2023 annual Harvard Social study, the results illustrated that all in all, individuals with less cash were happier than those possessing a lot of it. Between the first category, 50% explained that their happiness was due to the simple yet qualitative life they have thanks to the important amount of leisure periods.
To conclude, I personally think that having an important capital with little relaxation time is better than the opposite since it is possible to know how to organise these small periods of leisure in order to enjoy the most of it.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the amount of money spent on library is a waste as a new technologies are developing and replacing library functions.
Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In today's modern world, many countries incur a huge amount of expenses to maintain their libraries. Whilst certain individuals claim that splurging money on libraries is a waste of resources, others contend the notion that new emerging technologies are capable of being a plausible substitute for libraries. It is my notion that although advancements in technology can furnish readers with the digitalized version of books, it is the environment and preservation of certain ancient books that cannot be replicated by technology.
First and foremost, as we live on the edge of technology, people should be more reluctant to head towards digitalized and more environmentally-friendly options when it comes to reading books in libraries. Now that many breakthrough inventions accomplished in this era, readers can now have access to the rarest readings and books in the world through numerous websites and online libraries. Countries and universities that are spending millions of dollars each year to maintain libraries can basically switch to digitalized solutions, therefore, decreasing the operation expenses and diverting the resulting funds towards other shortcomings of society and students. For example, universities all across the world now closing their libraries and establishing centralized information management servers where readers can freely benefit from the resources available from the comfort of home.
On the contrary side, libraries have always been a cultural centre for many societies, encompassing historical information and artefacts that are worth beyond the monetary valuation. It should be underlined that restoring or keeping these libraries in pristine condition is a challenging work which necessitates well-planned coordination and financial resources. Furthermore, the one thing that is impossible to create in an artificial environment is the ambience in these old libraries where you can almost travel back in time to feel these time periods through the centuries-old buildings and books that have been well taken care of. To exemplify this statement, the Egypt government spends thousands of dollars each year to preserve and maintain the condition of one of the oldest libraries in the world, known as the Library of Alexandria.
In conclusion, despite digitalized libraries being a more economically advantageous and pragmatic solution compared to physical ones, there are some properties such as historical importance.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the amount of money spent on library is a waste as a new technologies are developing and replacing library functions.
Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In today's modern world, many countries incur a huge amount of expenses to maintain their libraries. Whilst certain individuals claim that splurging money on libraries is a waste of resources, others contend the notion that new emerging technologies are capable of being a plausible substitute for libraries. It is my notion that although advancements in technology can furnish readers with the digitalized version of books, it is the environment and preservation of certain ancient books that cannot be replicated by technology.
First and foremost, as we live on the edge of technology, people should be more reluctant to head towards digitalized and more environmentally-friendly options when it comes to reading books in libraries. Now that many breakthrough inventions accomplished in this era, readers can now have access to the rarest readings and books in the world through numerous websites and online libraries. Countries and universities that are spending millions of dollars each year to maintain libraries can basically switch to digitalized solutions, therefore, decreasing the operation expenses and diverting the resulting funds towards other shortcomings of society and students. For example, universities all across the world now closing their libraries and establishing centralized information management servers where readers can freely benefit from the resources available from the comfort of home.
On the contrary side, libraries have always been a cultural centre for many societies, encompassing historical information and artefacts that are worth beyond the monetary valuation. It should be underlined that restoring or keeping these libraries in pristine condition is a challenging work which necessitates well-planned coordination and financial resources. Furthermore, the one thing that is impossible to create in an artificial environment is the ambience in these old libraries where you can almost travel back in time to feel these time periods through the centuries-old buildings and books that have been well taken care of. To exemplify this statement, the Egypt government spends thousands of dollars each year to preserve and maintain the condition of one of the oldest libraries in the world, known as the Library of Alexandria.
In conclusion, despite digitalized libraries being a more economically advantageous and pragmatic solution compared to physical ones, there are some properties such as historical importance.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the amount of money spent on library is a waste as a new technologies are developing and replacing library functions.
Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In today's modern world, many countries incur a huge amount of expenses to maintain their libraries. Whilst certain individuals claim that splurging money on libraries is a waste of resources, others contend the notion that new emerging technologies are capable of being a plausible substitute for libraries. It is my notion that although advancements in technology can furnish readers with the digitalized version of books, it is the environment and preservation of certain ancient books that cannot be replicated by technology.
First and foremost, as we live on the edge of technology, people should be more reluctant to head towards digitalized and more environmentally-friendly options when it comes to reading books in libraries. Now that many breakthrough inventions accomplished in this era, readers can now have access to the rarest readings and books in the world through numerous websites and online libraries. Countries and universities that are spending millions of dollars each year to maintain libraries can basically switch to digitalized solutions, therefore, decreasing the operation expenses and diverting the resulting funds towards other shortcomings of society and students. For example, universities all across the world now closing their libraries and establishing centralized information management servers where readers can freely benefit from the resources available from the comfort of home.
On the contrary side, libraries have always been a cultural centre for many societies, encompassing historical information and artefacts that are worth beyond the monetary valuation. It should be underlined that restoring or keeping these libraries in pristine condition is a challenging work which necessitates well-planned coordination and financial resources. Furthermore, the one thing that is impossible to create in an artificial environment is the ambience in these old libraries where you can almost travel back in time to feel these time periods through the centuries-old buildings and books that have been well taken care of. To exemplify this statement, the Egypt government spends thousands of dollars each year to preserve and maintain the condition of one of the oldest libraries in the world, known as the Library of Alexandria.
In conclusion, despite digitalized libraries being a more economically advantageous and pragmatic solution compared to physical ones, there are some properties such as historical importance.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the amount of money spent on library is a waste as a new technologies are developing and replacing library functions.
Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In today's modern world, many countries incur a huge amount of expenses to maintain their libraries. Whilst certain individuals claim that splurging money on libraries is a waste of resources, others contend the notion that new emerging technologies are capable of being a plausible substitute for libraries. It is my notion that although advancements in technology can furnish readers with the digitalized version of books, it is the environment and preservation of certain ancient books that cannot be replicated by technology.
First and foremost, as we live on the edge of technology, people should be more reluctant to head towards digitalized and more environmentally-friendly options when it comes to reading books in libraries. Now that many breakthrough inventions accomplished in this era, readers can now have access to the rarest readings and books in the world through numerous websites and online libraries. Countries and universities that are spending millions of dollars each year to maintain libraries can basically switch to digitalized solutions, therefore, decreasing the operation expenses and diverting the resulting funds towards other shortcomings of society and students. For example, universities all across the world now closing their libraries and establishing centralized information management servers where readers can freely benefit from the resources available from the comfort of home.
On the contrary side, libraries have always been a cultural centre for many societies, encompassing historical information and artefacts that are worth beyond the monetary valuation. It should be underlined that restoring or keeping these libraries in pristine condition is a challenging work which necessitates well-planned coordination and financial resources. Furthermore, the one thing that is impossible to create in an artificial environment is the ambience in these old libraries where you can almost travel back in time to feel these time periods through the centuries-old buildings and books that have been well taken care of. To exemplify this statement, the Egypt government spends thousands of dollars each year to preserve and maintain the condition of one of the oldest libraries in the world, known as the Library of Alexandria.
In conclusion, despite digitalized libraries being a more economically advantageous and pragmatic solution compared to physical ones, there are some properties such as historical importance.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Anwser:
Regarding the growth in technology, the number of kids who have access to these technological sources is increasing rapidly, as a great number of them tend to spend most of their daily time on their virtual lives. From my perspective, this statement is the result of upgraded technological devices that the companies are providing for individuals. Although I find this statement to be an extremely negative development for various reasons.
With a comparison between the way of communication by the last generations and nowadays, virtual communication is becoming more and more popular every day, as people tend to show more interest in this way of talking to others and this made the path for these technology companies to provide and upgrade their devices. As a result, most children are showing more interest in using them than before. Nowadays, a great number of kids own their own smartphones and mostly are using them to communicate with their friends through them which causes them to waste a significantly greater amount of their time to be involved in their friend's community and not be left behind. Smartphones are now an inseparable part of adolescents' lives. These devices, moreover, consist of some interesting features such as the capability of watching movies, playing video games, and reading e-books which seem mesmerising to many youngsters and grab their attention to spend hours on their phones.
In my opinion, this statement has various drawbacks. Firstly, it is extremely time-consuming as children may find themselves scrolling through social media for many hours without any reason which will take their time that has to be spent outside of the house playing with their friends and doing homework. On the contrary, the blue light of these devices will eventually have a damaging effect on their brain and their ability to think properly, as well as their ability to solve problems and deal with difficulties. This statement, furthermore, may lead youngsters to become unsociable and depressed over time. For instance, if a child only speaks to his friends through texting them, he would not be able to express his ideas clearly when it comes to face-to-face communication, which will make him depressed and anxious.
To sum up, to me, that is a horrible decision to let the kids use their phones as much as they want to since this will bring a variety of unforgettable damages while they are growing up, as this is the time when their brains are forming and can have huge drawbacks to their future.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Anwser:
Regarding the growth in technology, the number of kids who have access to these technological sources is increasing rapidly, as a great number of them tend to spend most of their daily time on their virtual lives. From my perspective, this statement is the result of upgraded technological devices that the companies are providing for individuals. Although I find this statement to be an extremely negative development for various reasons.
With a comparison between the way of communication by the last generations and nowadays, virtual communication is becoming more and more popular every day, as people tend to show more interest in this way of talking to others and this made the path for these technology companies to provide and upgrade their devices. As a result, most children are showing more interest in using them than before. Nowadays, a great number of kids own their own smartphones and mostly are using them to communicate with their friends through them which causes them to waste a significantly greater amount of their time to be involved in their friend's community and not be left behind. Smartphones are now an inseparable part of adolescents' lives. These devices, moreover, consist of some interesting features such as the capability of watching movies, playing video games, and reading e-books which seem mesmerising to many youngsters and grab their attention to spend hours on their phones.
In my opinion, this statement has various drawbacks. Firstly, it is extremely time-consuming as children may find themselves scrolling through social media for many hours without any reason which will take their time that has to be spent outside of the house playing with their friends and doing homework. On the contrary, the blue light of these devices will eventually have a damaging effect on their brain and their ability to think properly, as well as their ability to solve problems and deal with difficulties. This statement, furthermore, may lead youngsters to become unsociable and depressed over time. For instance, if a child only speaks to his friends through texting them, he would not be able to express his ideas clearly when it comes to face-to-face communication, which will make him depressed and anxious.
To sum up, to me, that is a horrible decision to let the kids use their phones as much as they want to since this will bring a variety of unforgettable damages while they are growing up, as this is the time when their brains are forming and can have huge drawbacks to their future.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Anwser:
Regarding the growth in technology, the number of kids who have access to these technological sources is increasing rapidly, as a great number of them tend to spend most of their daily time on their virtual lives. From my perspective, this statement is the result of upgraded technological devices that the companies are providing for individuals. Although I find this statement to be an extremely negative development for various reasons.
With a comparison between the way of communication by the last generations and nowadays, virtual communication is becoming more and more popular every day, as people tend to show more interest in this way of talking to others and this made the path for these technology companies to provide and upgrade their devices. As a result, most children are showing more interest in using them than before. Nowadays, a great number of kids own their own smartphones and mostly are using them to communicate with their friends through them which causes them to waste a significantly greater amount of their time to be involved in their friend's community and not be left behind. Smartphones are now an inseparable part of adolescents' lives. These devices, moreover, consist of some interesting features such as the capability of watching movies, playing video games, and reading e-books which seem mesmerising to many youngsters and grab their attention to spend hours on their phones.
In my opinion, this statement has various drawbacks. Firstly, it is extremely time-consuming as children may find themselves scrolling through social media for many hours without any reason which will take their time that has to be spent outside of the house playing with their friends and doing homework. On the contrary, the blue light of these devices will eventually have a damaging effect on their brain and their ability to think properly, as well as their ability to solve problems and deal with difficulties. This statement, furthermore, may lead youngsters to become unsociable and depressed over time. For instance, if a child only speaks to his friends through texting them, he would not be able to express his ideas clearly when it comes to face-to-face communication, which will make him depressed and anxious.
To sum up, to me, that is a horrible decision to let the kids use their phones as much as they want to since this will bring a variety of unforgettable damages while they are growing up, as this is the time when their brains are forming and can have huge drawbacks to their future.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Anwser:
Regarding the growth in technology, the number of kids who have access to these technological sources is increasing rapidly, as a great number of them tend to spend most of their daily time on their virtual lives. From my perspective, this statement is the result of upgraded technological devices that the companies are providing for individuals. Although I find this statement to be an extremely negative development for various reasons.
With a comparison between the way of communication by the last generations and nowadays, virtual communication is becoming more and more popular every day, as people tend to show more interest in this way of talking to others and this made the path for these technology companies to provide and upgrade their devices. As a result, most children are showing more interest in using them than before. Nowadays, a great number of kids own their own smartphones and mostly are using them to communicate with their friends through them which causes them to waste a significantly greater amount of their time to be involved in their friend's community and not be left behind. Smartphones are now an inseparable part of adolescents' lives. These devices, moreover, consist of some interesting features such as the capability of watching movies, playing video games, and reading e-books which seem mesmerising to many youngsters and grab their attention to spend hours on their phones.
In my opinion, this statement has various drawbacks. Firstly, it is extremely time-consuming as children may find themselves scrolling through social media for many hours without any reason which will take their time that has to be spent outside of the house playing with their friends and doing homework. On the contrary, the blue light of these devices will eventually have a damaging effect on their brain and their ability to think properly, as well as their ability to solve problems and deal with difficulties. This statement, furthermore, may lead youngsters to become unsociable and depressed over time. For instance, if a child only speaks to his friends through texting them, he would not be able to express his ideas clearly when it comes to face-to-face communication, which will make him depressed and anxious.
To sum up, to me, that is a horrible decision to let the kids use their phones as much as they want to since this will bring a variety of unforgettable damages while they are growing up, as this is the time when their brains are forming and can have huge drawbacks to their future.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification.
Anwser:
The majority of university students opt for learning various fields as well as their major while others believe paying attention solely to their qualification is more crucial. This essay will discuss both views and suggest my opinion in favour of the latter.
On the one hand, focusing and doing one's utmost to qualify is considerable as it leads to profound education. To be specific, the more students concentrate on their fields, the more they are exposed to higher-quality knowledge and information. For example, a student who spends 10,000 hours reading a biology thesis is likely to understand the lecture and the textbooks easily compared to others who only studied for 1000 hours and learned other subjects. Thus, concentrating on their subject only and studying hard for their qualification often result in excelling and obtaining a deep knowledge in their fields.
On the other hand, seeking various subjects in addition to their department enables people to experience various studies and to broaden their insight. Furthermore, studying a wide range of fields leads to flexible perspectives. For instance, people who learn Korean literature, social science, and biology will effectively comprehend social, environmental, and gender disparity issues as they have widened their knowledge and understanding. Hence, learning many subjects helps individuals to cultivate multi-abilities and deter them from having narrow perspectives.
However, in my view, I believe that doing one's best and endeavouring to a qualification is needed since I highly benefit from obtaining my master's degree. I was able to learn an in-depth section of law, which is my major. Also, I found a job with a high salary and work-life balance. It was possible because I was more outstanding than other applicants as I studied further and harder. In conclusion, although some individuals think that studying different departments is favourable, I stress that solely focusing on qualifying is crucial.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification.
Anwser:
The majority of university students opt for learning various fields as well as their major while others believe paying attention solely to their qualification is more crucial. This essay will discuss both views and suggest my opinion in favour of the latter.
On the one hand, focusing and doing one's utmost to qualify is considerable as it leads to profound education. To be specific, the more students concentrate on their fields, the more they are exposed to higher-quality knowledge and information. For example, a student who spends 10,000 hours reading a biology thesis is likely to understand the lecture and the textbooks easily compared to others who only studied for 1000 hours and learned other subjects. Thus, concentrating on their subject only and studying hard for their qualification often result in excelling and obtaining a deep knowledge in their fields.
On the other hand, seeking various subjects in addition to their department enables people to experience various studies and to broaden their insight. Furthermore, studying a wide range of fields leads to flexible perspectives. For instance, people who learn Korean literature, social science, and biology will effectively comprehend social, environmental, and gender disparity issues as they have widened their knowledge and understanding. Hence, learning many subjects helps individuals to cultivate multi-abilities and deter them from having narrow perspectives.
However, in my view, I believe that doing one's best and endeavouring to a qualification is needed since I highly benefit from obtaining my master's degree. I was able to learn an in-depth section of law, which is my major. Also, I found a job with a high salary and work-life balance. It was possible because I was more outstanding than other applicants as I studied further and harder. In conclusion, although some individuals think that studying different departments is favourable, I stress that solely focusing on qualifying is crucial.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification.
Anwser:
The majority of university students opt for learning various fields as well as their major while others believe paying attention solely to their qualification is more crucial. This essay will discuss both views and suggest my opinion in favour of the latter.
On the one hand, focusing and doing one's utmost to qualify is considerable as it leads to profound education. To be specific, the more students concentrate on their fields, the more they are exposed to higher-quality knowledge and information. For example, a student who spends 10,000 hours reading a biology thesis is likely to understand the lecture and the textbooks easily compared to others who only studied for 1000 hours and learned other subjects. Thus, concentrating on their subject only and studying hard for their qualification often result in excelling and obtaining a deep knowledge in their fields.
On the other hand, seeking various subjects in addition to their department enables people to experience various studies and to broaden their insight. Furthermore, studying a wide range of fields leads to flexible perspectives. For instance, people who learn Korean literature, social science, and biology will effectively comprehend social, environmental, and gender disparity issues as they have widened their knowledge and understanding. Hence, learning many subjects helps individuals to cultivate multi-abilities and deter them from having narrow perspectives.
However, in my view, I believe that doing one's best and endeavouring to a qualification is needed since I highly benefit from obtaining my master's degree. I was able to learn an in-depth section of law, which is my major. Also, I found a job with a high salary and work-life balance. It was possible because I was more outstanding than other applicants as I studied further and harder. In conclusion, although some individuals think that studying different departments is favourable, I stress that solely focusing on qualifying is crucial.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification.
Anwser:
The majority of university students opt for learning various fields as well as their major while others believe paying attention solely to their qualification is more crucial. This essay will discuss both views and suggest my opinion in favour of the latter.
On the one hand, focusing and doing one's utmost to qualify is considerable as it leads to profound education. To be specific, the more students concentrate on their fields, the more they are exposed to higher-quality knowledge and information. For example, a student who spends 10,000 hours reading a biology thesis is likely to understand the lecture and the textbooks easily compared to others who only studied for 1000 hours and learned other subjects. Thus, concentrating on their subject only and studying hard for their qualification often result in excelling and obtaining a deep knowledge in their fields.
On the other hand, seeking various subjects in addition to their department enables people to experience various studies and to broaden their insight. Furthermore, studying a wide range of fields leads to flexible perspectives. For instance, people who learn Korean literature, social science, and biology will effectively comprehend social, environmental, and gender disparity issues as they have widened their knowledge and understanding. Hence, learning many subjects helps individuals to cultivate multi-abilities and deter them from having narrow perspectives.
However, in my view, I believe that doing one's best and endeavouring to a qualification is needed since I highly benefit from obtaining my master's degree. I was able to learn an in-depth section of law, which is my major. Also, I found a job with a high salary and work-life balance. It was possible because I was more outstanding than other applicants as I studied further and harder. In conclusion, although some individuals think that studying different departments is favourable, I stress that solely focusing on qualifying is crucial.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
To begin, most people think that the loss of specific species of plants and animals is a main environmental problem. On the other hand, others believe that there are several more important problems. It has some bullet points which I will discuss in the forthcoming paragraph.
However, the loss of flora and fauna is due to human activity to explore businesses and companies so they have to do deforestation of this many plants are lost. The plant is a good source of oxygen, if continued deforestation occurs it will lead to serious consequences. Apart from, animals play a vital role in human life, if they also low extinct it is an environmental problem because it finishes the one Kingdom of species. For instance, building a factory of plastic bottles of tree cuts, and the garbage from industries returned by pets, and lost both species.
Moreover, pollution is a major environmental problem that leads to many health-related problems, especially for children and old age groups. Additionally, climate change occurs because of the greenhouse effect and as a result, the melting of glaciers and variation of seasons occur many other factors like global warming, water scarcity, and ozone depletion leading to ecological problems.
To conclude, some claim that the extinction of specific plants and animals is the primary environmental issue facing over time, and some claim that there are more pressing ecological concepts. In my opinion, other environmental issues like climate variation lead to loss of food, season variation, and scarcity of things which is serious for human beings.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
To begin, most people think that the loss of specific species of plants and animals is a main environmental problem. On the other hand, others believe that there are several more important problems. It has some bullet points which I will discuss in the forthcoming paragraph.
However, the loss of flora and fauna is due to human activity to explore businesses and companies so they have to do deforestation of this many plants are lost. The plant is a good source of oxygen, if continued deforestation occurs it will lead to serious consequences. Apart from, animals play a vital role in human life, if they also low extinct it is an environmental problem because it finishes the one Kingdom of species. For instance, building a factory of plastic bottles of tree cuts, and the garbage from industries returned by pets, and lost both species.
Moreover, pollution is a major environmental problem that leads to many health-related problems, especially for children and old age groups. Additionally, climate change occurs because of the greenhouse effect and as a result, the melting of glaciers and variation of seasons occur many other factors like global warming, water scarcity, and ozone depletion leading to ecological problems.
To conclude, some claim that the extinction of specific plants and animals is the primary environmental issue facing over time, and some claim that there are more pressing ecological concepts. In my opinion, other environmental issues like climate variation lead to loss of food, season variation, and scarcity of things which is serious for human beings.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
To begin, most people think that the loss of specific species of plants and animals is a main environmental problem. On the other hand, others believe that there are several more important problems. It has some bullet points which I will discuss in the forthcoming paragraph.
However, the loss of flora and fauna is due to human activity to explore businesses and companies so they have to do deforestation of this many plants are lost. The plant is a good source of oxygen, if continued deforestation occurs it will lead to serious consequences. Apart from, animals play a vital role in human life, if they also low extinct it is an environmental problem because it finishes the one Kingdom of species. For instance, building a factory of plastic bottles of tree cuts, and the garbage from industries returned by pets, and lost both species.
Moreover, pollution is a major environmental problem that leads to many health-related problems, especially for children and old age groups. Additionally, climate change occurs because of the greenhouse effect and as a result, the melting of glaciers and variation of seasons occur many other factors like global warming, water scarcity, and ozone depletion leading to ecological problems.
To conclude, some claim that the extinction of specific plants and animals is the primary environmental issue facing over time, and some claim that there are more pressing ecological concepts. In my opinion, other environmental issues like climate variation lead to loss of food, season variation, and scarcity of things which is serious for human beings.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
To begin, most people think that the loss of specific species of plants and animals is a main environmental problem. On the other hand, others believe that there are several more important problems. It has some bullet points which I will discuss in the forthcoming paragraph.
However, the loss of flora and fauna is due to human activity to explore businesses and companies so they have to do deforestation of this many plants are lost. The plant is a good source of oxygen, if continued deforestation occurs it will lead to serious consequences. Apart from, animals play a vital role in human life, if they also low extinct it is an environmental problem because it finishes the one Kingdom of species. For instance, building a factory of plastic bottles of tree cuts, and the garbage from industries returned by pets, and lost both species.
Moreover, pollution is a major environmental problem that leads to many health-related problems, especially for children and old age groups. Additionally, climate change occurs because of the greenhouse effect and as a result, the melting of glaciers and variation of seasons occur many other factors like global warming, water scarcity, and ozone depletion leading to ecological problems.
To conclude, some claim that the extinction of specific plants and animals is the primary environmental issue facing over time, and some claim that there are more pressing ecological concepts. In my opinion, other environmental issues like climate variation lead to loss of food, season variation, and scarcity of things which is serious for human beings.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
Academic studies have become a gateway to skills and prospective jobs. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether concentrating on qualifying in merely main subjects or pursuing some other related knowledge. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay I would contend that gaining as much information as possible related to the main subjects is more advisable. Two primary reasons for this are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that extending the horizon of knowledge could play a complementary role in fulfilling the future profession. According to my own experiences, a salient example of this could be learning Python programming language geographic information systems and remote sensing students at universities, which can broaden their analytical skills in processing satellite images. So, rather than concentrating on the main subjects, learning about other subjects is likely to be more constructive in the future job.
Secondly and even more importantly, though, is the fact that focusing solely on the issue is likely to be insufficient as the pace of life increases significantly. For instance, having a grasp of psychological principles could provide a better company for doctors with their patients which, would climb the process of treatment. So, having grown up in a technology era, insisting on such a limited attitude would result in unsatisfying consequences.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that although studying for a qualification would lead to being an expert in a future job, spending time learning related subjects would be accompanied by significant advantages for the betterment of societies.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
Academic studies have become a gateway to skills and prospective jobs. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether concentrating on qualifying in merely main subjects or pursuing some other related knowledge. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay I would contend that gaining as much information as possible related to the main subjects is more advisable. Two primary reasons for this are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that extending the horizon of knowledge could play a complementary role in fulfilling the future profession. According to my own experiences, a salient example of this could be learning Python programming language geographic information systems and remote sensing students at universities, which can broaden their analytical skills in processing satellite images. So, rather than concentrating on the main subjects, learning about other subjects is likely to be more constructive in the future job.
Secondly and even more importantly, though, is the fact that focusing solely on the issue is likely to be insufficient as the pace of life increases significantly. For instance, having a grasp of psychological principles could provide a better company for doctors with their patients which, would climb the process of treatment. So, having grown up in a technology era, insisting on such a limited attitude would result in unsatisfying consequences.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that although studying for a qualification would lead to being an expert in a future job, spending time learning related subjects would be accompanied by significant advantages for the betterment of societies.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
Academic studies have become a gateway to skills and prospective jobs. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether concentrating on qualifying in merely main subjects or pursuing some other related knowledge. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay I would contend that gaining as much information as possible related to the main subjects is more advisable. Two primary reasons for this are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that extending the horizon of knowledge could play a complementary role in fulfilling the future profession. According to my own experiences, a salient example of this could be learning Python programming language geographic information systems and remote sensing students at universities, which can broaden their analytical skills in processing satellite images. So, rather than concentrating on the main subjects, learning about other subjects is likely to be more constructive in the future job.
Secondly and even more importantly, though, is the fact that focusing solely on the issue is likely to be insufficient as the pace of life increases significantly. For instance, having a grasp of psychological principles could provide a better company for doctors with their patients which, would climb the process of treatment. So, having grown up in a technology era, insisting on such a limited attitude would result in unsatisfying consequences.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that although studying for a qualification would lead to being an expert in a future job, spending time learning related subjects would be accompanied by significant advantages for the betterment of societies.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
Academic studies have become a gateway to skills and prospective jobs. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether concentrating on qualifying in merely main subjects or pursuing some other related knowledge. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay I would contend that gaining as much information as possible related to the main subjects is more advisable. Two primary reasons for this are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that extending the horizon of knowledge could play a complementary role in fulfilling the future profession. According to my own experiences, a salient example of this could be learning Python programming language geographic information systems and remote sensing students at universities, which can broaden their analytical skills in processing satellite images. So, rather than concentrating on the main subjects, learning about other subjects is likely to be more constructive in the future job.
Secondly and even more importantly, though, is the fact that focusing solely on the issue is likely to be insufficient as the pace of life increases significantly. For instance, having a grasp of psychological principles could provide a better company for doctors with their patients which, would climb the process of treatment. So, having grown up in a technology era, insisting on such a limited attitude would result in unsatisfying consequences.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that although studying for a qualification would lead to being an expert in a future job, spending time learning related subjects would be accompanied by significant advantages for the betterment of societies.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries today, women have full-time jobs. Therefore, it is reasonable to share housework equally between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Anwser:
The trend of full-time labour among women has created a balance of chores and responsibilities with their spouses. Personally, I am completely in the same boat with this notion. This phenomenon can lessen the degree of patriarchalism and reduce the fatherless issue in a family. I will try to explain both benefits based on the condition of my country, Indonesia.
A current shift where mothers can achieve the same career opportunities as men might diminish the effect of patriarchism. It is a belief that exists in many regions, and consistently puts males as the top priority in any relations. To illustrate, in the early 1900s in Indonesia, females are entitled only to three places with three duties. Kitchen for cooking, bed for mating, and well for house working. However, since girls are able to enter the workforce, a lot has changed. Those who previously held patriarchy and overshadowed women all the time already realized that women are as capable as men. Thus, if initially, mothers were the only ones to handle housework, then nowadays fathers should be able to do it equally.
On the other hand, this alteration has the likelihood to alleviate the troublesome fatherless problems. As its name implies, fatherless means the lack of involvement or dad figure in daily life. Usually ensued as the breadwinner image being invoked on males. For example, a job can take up to 8 to 9 hours per day. It is true that from this, a husband can fulfil the financial needs of his youngsters. Nevertheless, it is also a hard pill to swallow that he will not have sufficient time to play with the children. Therefore, the psychological void will emerge within them. Fortunately, modern belief has countered it, hence men can spend more moments with their sons or daughters. A family's income is not confined to one source anymore.
Overall, once again, I am fully aligned with this concept. Two benefits have evidently been generated since females have even-handed circumstances with their spouses at work. The social issue of patriarchy and fatherless parents can be lowered. In the future, I assume that this lifestyle will be proliferated in more countries. The advantages are really invaluable.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries today, women have full-time jobs. Therefore, it is reasonable to share housework equally between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Anwser:
The trend of full-time labour among women has created a balance of chores and responsibilities with their spouses. Personally, I am completely in the same boat with this notion. This phenomenon can lessen the degree of patriarchalism and reduce the fatherless issue in a family. I will try to explain both benefits based on the condition of my country, Indonesia.
A current shift where mothers can achieve the same career opportunities as men might diminish the effect of patriarchism. It is a belief that exists in many regions, and consistently puts males as the top priority in any relations. To illustrate, in the early 1900s in Indonesia, females are entitled only to three places with three duties. Kitchen for cooking, bed for mating, and well for house working. However, since girls are able to enter the workforce, a lot has changed. Those who previously held patriarchy and overshadowed women all the time already realized that women are as capable as men. Thus, if initially, mothers were the only ones to handle housework, then nowadays fathers should be able to do it equally.
On the other hand, this alteration has the likelihood to alleviate the troublesome fatherless problems. As its name implies, fatherless means the lack of involvement or dad figure in daily life. Usually ensued as the breadwinner image being invoked on males. For example, a job can take up to 8 to 9 hours per day. It is true that from this, a husband can fulfil the financial needs of his youngsters. Nevertheless, it is also a hard pill to swallow that he will not have sufficient time to play with the children. Therefore, the psychological void will emerge within them. Fortunately, modern belief has countered it, hence men can spend more moments with their sons or daughters. A family's income is not confined to one source anymore.
Overall, once again, I am fully aligned with this concept. Two benefits have evidently been generated since females have even-handed circumstances with their spouses at work. The social issue of patriarchy and fatherless parents can be lowered. In the future, I assume that this lifestyle will be proliferated in more countries. The advantages are really invaluable.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries today, women have full-time jobs. Therefore, it is reasonable to share housework equally between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Anwser:
The trend of full-time labour among women has created a balance of chores and responsibilities with their spouses. Personally, I am completely in the same boat with this notion. This phenomenon can lessen the degree of patriarchalism and reduce the fatherless issue in a family. I will try to explain both benefits based on the condition of my country, Indonesia.
A current shift where mothers can achieve the same career opportunities as men might diminish the effect of patriarchism. It is a belief that exists in many regions, and consistently puts males as the top priority in any relations. To illustrate, in the early 1900s in Indonesia, females are entitled only to three places with three duties. Kitchen for cooking, bed for mating, and well for house working. However, since girls are able to enter the workforce, a lot has changed. Those who previously held patriarchy and overshadowed women all the time already realized that women are as capable as men. Thus, if initially, mothers were the only ones to handle housework, then nowadays fathers should be able to do it equally.
On the other hand, this alteration has the likelihood to alleviate the troublesome fatherless problems. As its name implies, fatherless means the lack of involvement or dad figure in daily life. Usually ensued as the breadwinner image being invoked on males. For example, a job can take up to 8 to 9 hours per day. It is true that from this, a husband can fulfil the financial needs of his youngsters. Nevertheless, it is also a hard pill to swallow that he will not have sufficient time to play with the children. Therefore, the psychological void will emerge within them. Fortunately, modern belief has countered it, hence men can spend more moments with their sons or daughters. A family's income is not confined to one source anymore.
Overall, once again, I am fully aligned with this concept. Two benefits have evidently been generated since females have even-handed circumstances with their spouses at work. The social issue of patriarchy and fatherless parents can be lowered. In the future, I assume that this lifestyle will be proliferated in more countries. The advantages are really invaluable.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries today, women have full-time jobs. Therefore, it is reasonable to share housework equally between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Anwser:
The trend of full-time labour among women has created a balance of chores and responsibilities with their spouses. Personally, I am completely in the same boat with this notion. This phenomenon can lessen the degree of patriarchalism and reduce the fatherless issue in a family. I will try to explain both benefits based on the condition of my country, Indonesia.
A current shift where mothers can achieve the same career opportunities as men might diminish the effect of patriarchism. It is a belief that exists in many regions, and consistently puts males as the top priority in any relations. To illustrate, in the early 1900s in Indonesia, females are entitled only to three places with three duties. Kitchen for cooking, bed for mating, and well for house working. However, since girls are able to enter the workforce, a lot has changed. Those who previously held patriarchy and overshadowed women all the time already realized that women are as capable as men. Thus, if initially, mothers were the only ones to handle housework, then nowadays fathers should be able to do it equally.
On the other hand, this alteration has the likelihood to alleviate the troublesome fatherless problems. As its name implies, fatherless means the lack of involvement or dad figure in daily life. Usually ensued as the breadwinner image being invoked on males. For example, a job can take up to 8 to 9 hours per day. It is true that from this, a husband can fulfil the financial needs of his youngsters. Nevertheless, it is also a hard pill to swallow that he will not have sufficient time to play with the children. Therefore, the psychological void will emerge within them. Fortunately, modern belief has countered it, hence men can spend more moments with their sons or daughters. A family's income is not confined to one source anymore.
Overall, once again, I am fully aligned with this concept. Two benefits have evidently been generated since females have even-handed circumstances with their spouses at work. The social issue of patriarchy and fatherless parents can be lowered. In the future, I assume that this lifestyle will be proliferated in more countries. The advantages are really invaluable.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
Anwser:
The debate surrounding an ageing population has garnered considerable attention globally, with opinions sharply divided. On one hand, an ageing demographic is perceived as a challenge for governments; on the other, it is seen as a societal asset. This essay posits that the benefits brought by an elderly populace significantly outweigh the drawbacks, given their wealth of experience and continued economic contributions.
Firstly, senior citizens are invaluable repositories of wisdom and experience, which they impart to younger generations. Their perspectives, shaped by years of diverse experiences, are crucial in guiding the youth and in policy formulation. Take, for instance, their role in shaping historical consciousness — many elders lived through pivotal events, such as the technological boom or significant political upheavals. Their firsthand accounts and insights are irreplaceable, ensuring that lessons from the past are not just remembered but integrated into current societal norms and decision-making processes. This intergenerational exchange fosters a society that is well-grounded in its history and more resilient to future challenges.
Moreover, contrary to the belief that retirees are a strain on economic resources, many continue to contribute actively to the workforce. In countries like Japan, where the ageing population is notably high, older workers are not just participating but are essential in addressing labour shortages. Their presence in various sectors brings a balance of skills and perspectives, often leading to more innovative and empathetic workplace cultures. Additionally, their mentorship roles in organizations enhance knowledge transfer, ensuring business continuity and growth.
In conclusion, though the phenomenon of people living longer than ever before is posing some challenges, these are far outweighed by the societal contributions made by the elderly. Their involvement in cultural preservation and continuous economic participation affirms their invaluable role. Societies rich in elderly citizens benefit from a wealth of history and experience, fostering more resilient and dynamic economic and social frameworks.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
Anwser:
The debate surrounding an ageing population has garnered considerable attention globally, with opinions sharply divided. On one hand, an ageing demographic is perceived as a challenge for governments; on the other, it is seen as a societal asset. This essay posits that the benefits brought by an elderly populace significantly outweigh the drawbacks, given their wealth of experience and continued economic contributions.
Firstly, senior citizens are invaluable repositories of wisdom and experience, which they impart to younger generations. Their perspectives, shaped by years of diverse experiences, are crucial in guiding the youth and in policy formulation. Take, for instance, their role in shaping historical consciousness — many elders lived through pivotal events, such as the technological boom or significant political upheavals. Their firsthand accounts and insights are irreplaceable, ensuring that lessons from the past are not just remembered but integrated into current societal norms and decision-making processes. This intergenerational exchange fosters a society that is well-grounded in its history and more resilient to future challenges.
Moreover, contrary to the belief that retirees are a strain on economic resources, many continue to contribute actively to the workforce. In countries like Japan, where the ageing population is notably high, older workers are not just participating but are essential in addressing labour shortages. Their presence in various sectors brings a balance of skills and perspectives, often leading to more innovative and empathetic workplace cultures. Additionally, their mentorship roles in organizations enhance knowledge transfer, ensuring business continuity and growth.
In conclusion, though the phenomenon of people living longer than ever before is posing some challenges, these are far outweighed by the societal contributions made by the elderly. Their involvement in cultural preservation and continuous economic participation affirms their invaluable role. Societies rich in elderly citizens benefit from a wealth of history and experience, fostering more resilient and dynamic economic and social frameworks.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
Anwser:
The debate surrounding an ageing population has garnered considerable attention globally, with opinions sharply divided. On one hand, an ageing demographic is perceived as a challenge for governments; on the other, it is seen as a societal asset. This essay posits that the benefits brought by an elderly populace significantly outweigh the drawbacks, given their wealth of experience and continued economic contributions.
Firstly, senior citizens are invaluable repositories of wisdom and experience, which they impart to younger generations. Their perspectives, shaped by years of diverse experiences, are crucial in guiding the youth and in policy formulation. Take, for instance, their role in shaping historical consciousness — many elders lived through pivotal events, such as the technological boom or significant political upheavals. Their firsthand accounts and insights are irreplaceable, ensuring that lessons from the past are not just remembered but integrated into current societal norms and decision-making processes. This intergenerational exchange fosters a society that is well-grounded in its history and more resilient to future challenges.
Moreover, contrary to the belief that retirees are a strain on economic resources, many continue to contribute actively to the workforce. In countries like Japan, where the ageing population is notably high, older workers are not just participating but are essential in addressing labour shortages. Their presence in various sectors brings a balance of skills and perspectives, often leading to more innovative and empathetic workplace cultures. Additionally, their mentorship roles in organizations enhance knowledge transfer, ensuring business continuity and growth.
In conclusion, though the phenomenon of people living longer than ever before is posing some challenges, these are far outweighed by the societal contributions made by the elderly. Their involvement in cultural preservation and continuous economic participation affirms their invaluable role. Societies rich in elderly citizens benefit from a wealth of history and experience, fostering more resilient and dynamic economic and social frameworks.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
Anwser:
The debate surrounding an ageing population has garnered considerable attention globally, with opinions sharply divided. On one hand, an ageing demographic is perceived as a challenge for governments; on the other, it is seen as a societal asset. This essay posits that the benefits brought by an elderly populace significantly outweigh the drawbacks, given their wealth of experience and continued economic contributions.
Firstly, senior citizens are invaluable repositories of wisdom and experience, which they impart to younger generations. Their perspectives, shaped by years of diverse experiences, are crucial in guiding the youth and in policy formulation. Take, for instance, their role in shaping historical consciousness — many elders lived through pivotal events, such as the technological boom or significant political upheavals. Their firsthand accounts and insights are irreplaceable, ensuring that lessons from the past are not just remembered but integrated into current societal norms and decision-making processes. This intergenerational exchange fosters a society that is well-grounded in its history and more resilient to future challenges.
Moreover, contrary to the belief that retirees are a strain on economic resources, many continue to contribute actively to the workforce. In countries like Japan, where the ageing population is notably high, older workers are not just participating but are essential in addressing labour shortages. Their presence in various sectors brings a balance of skills and perspectives, often leading to more innovative and empathetic workplace cultures. Additionally, their mentorship roles in organizations enhance knowledge transfer, ensuring business continuity and growth.
In conclusion, though the phenomenon of people living longer than ever before is posing some challenges, these are far outweighed by the societal contributions made by the elderly. Their involvement in cultural preservation and continuous economic participation affirms their invaluable role. Societies rich in elderly citizens benefit from a wealth of history and experience, fostering more resilient and dynamic economic and social frameworks.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
The most importan aim of science is to should be to improve people's life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this estatement.
Anwser:
Owing to the rapid growth of research and innovation in science, it is believed that the aim of science is to ameliorate living standards in society. I completely agree that scientific discoveries and technological inventions should be solutions for any problems human beings may be or are currently facing in order to have a much better life.
To begin with, numerous inventions since the past have directly contributed to humankind and provided an easier life in the modern age. These inventions come in a variety of domains ranging from the health sector to telecommunications. Telephones invented by Alexander Graham Bell, for instance, have altered the way pupils communicate as the technology allows them to have two-way immediate conversations despite distance. Furthermore, the form and function of telephones have evolved exponentially as mobile phones nowadays are multifunctional with a wide range of activities accommodated, including internet and social media access.
In addition, fostering and accelerating the betterment of human lives through scientific efforts are actually the responsibility of scientists. They carry an enormous obligation to put their knowledge and expertise into service for the greater good, especially since human beings keep on witnessing challenges such as climate change, potential global or wide-scale infectious diseases, and poverty. One perfect example was the development of COVID-19 vaccines that involved a substantial number of scientists worldwide joining forces. It was proof of their commitment to saving lives and the way to showcase the immense influence of science during a humanitarian crisis.
To sum up, scientific exploration, in fact, possesses multiple aims. However, the aim of enhancing people’s lives is undoubtedly the central mission as more and more discoveries and innovations ease people in doing their activities as well as it is an obligation for the scientific community.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
The most importan aim of science is to should be to improve people's life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this estatement.
Anwser:
Owing to the rapid growth of research and innovation in science, it is believed that the aim of science is to ameliorate living standards in society. I completely agree that scientific discoveries and technological inventions should be solutions for any problems human beings may be or are currently facing in order to have a much better life.
To begin with, numerous inventions since the past have directly contributed to humankind and provided an easier life in the modern age. These inventions come in a variety of domains ranging from the health sector to telecommunications. Telephones invented by Alexander Graham Bell, for instance, have altered the way pupils communicate as the technology allows them to have two-way immediate conversations despite distance. Furthermore, the form and function of telephones have evolved exponentially as mobile phones nowadays are multifunctional with a wide range of activities accommodated, including internet and social media access.
In addition, fostering and accelerating the betterment of human lives through scientific efforts are actually the responsibility of scientists. They carry an enormous obligation to put their knowledge and expertise into service for the greater good, especially since human beings keep on witnessing challenges such as climate change, potential global or wide-scale infectious diseases, and poverty. One perfect example was the development of COVID-19 vaccines that involved a substantial number of scientists worldwide joining forces. It was proof of their commitment to saving lives and the way to showcase the immense influence of science during a humanitarian crisis.
To sum up, scientific exploration, in fact, possesses multiple aims. However, the aim of enhancing people’s lives is undoubtedly the central mission as more and more discoveries and innovations ease people in doing their activities as well as it is an obligation for the scientific community.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
The most importan aim of science is to should be to improve people's life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this estatement.
Anwser:
Owing to the rapid growth of research and innovation in science, it is believed that the aim of science is to ameliorate living standards in society. I completely agree that scientific discoveries and technological inventions should be solutions for any problems human beings may be or are currently facing in order to have a much better life.
To begin with, numerous inventions since the past have directly contributed to humankind and provided an easier life in the modern age. These inventions come in a variety of domains ranging from the health sector to telecommunications. Telephones invented by Alexander Graham Bell, for instance, have altered the way pupils communicate as the technology allows them to have two-way immediate conversations despite distance. Furthermore, the form and function of telephones have evolved exponentially as mobile phones nowadays are multifunctional with a wide range of activities accommodated, including internet and social media access.
In addition, fostering and accelerating the betterment of human lives through scientific efforts are actually the responsibility of scientists. They carry an enormous obligation to put their knowledge and expertise into service for the greater good, especially since human beings keep on witnessing challenges such as climate change, potential global or wide-scale infectious diseases, and poverty. One perfect example was the development of COVID-19 vaccines that involved a substantial number of scientists worldwide joining forces. It was proof of their commitment to saving lives and the way to showcase the immense influence of science during a humanitarian crisis.
To sum up, scientific exploration, in fact, possesses multiple aims. However, the aim of enhancing people’s lives is undoubtedly the central mission as more and more discoveries and innovations ease people in doing their activities as well as it is an obligation for the scientific community.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
The most importan aim of science is to should be to improve people's life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this estatement.
Anwser:
Owing to the rapid growth of research and innovation in science, it is believed that the aim of science is to ameliorate living standards in society. I completely agree that scientific discoveries and technological inventions should be solutions for any problems human beings may be or are currently facing in order to have a much better life.
To begin with, numerous inventions since the past have directly contributed to humankind and provided an easier life in the modern age. These inventions come in a variety of domains ranging from the health sector to telecommunications. Telephones invented by Alexander Graham Bell, for instance, have altered the way pupils communicate as the technology allows them to have two-way immediate conversations despite distance. Furthermore, the form and function of telephones have evolved exponentially as mobile phones nowadays are multifunctional with a wide range of activities accommodated, including internet and social media access.
In addition, fostering and accelerating the betterment of human lives through scientific efforts are actually the responsibility of scientists. They carry an enormous obligation to put their knowledge and expertise into service for the greater good, especially since human beings keep on witnessing challenges such as climate change, potential global or wide-scale infectious diseases, and poverty. One perfect example was the development of COVID-19 vaccines that involved a substantial number of scientists worldwide joining forces. It was proof of their commitment to saving lives and the way to showcase the immense influence of science during a humanitarian crisis.
To sum up, scientific exploration, in fact, possesses multiple aims. However, the aim of enhancing people’s lives is undoubtedly the central mission as more and more discoveries and innovations ease people in doing their activities as well as it is an obligation for the scientific community.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
It is true that pollution is alarmingly becoming more serious due to the industries. While many people think that air and water pollution can be alleviated if the government expands the charges on numerous industrial areas, I agree with those who argue that other superior methods could be adopted to solve this problem.
On the one hand, it is justified why some people advocate the view that paying extra charges might help to tackle the problem of pollution. To begin with, the quality of air and water resources could be improved considerably thanks to the punishment of paying a heavy tax. It is undeniable that the factories may release a myriad of harmful chemicals in plastic-making processes and clothing into the rivers which can put the marine ecosystem at a disadvantage to be able to exist. Therefore, the government is in charge of introducing the law such as paying the fine to the industries so that they will discharge fewer unused materials outside the environment.
On the other hand, I contend that several further outcomes can be implemented to improve the situation. Firstly, the authorities should encourage the factories to put more resources into the water treatment system. Using this system to deal with harmful waste before dumping it into the rivers can minimize the negative effects on the natural habitat. In addition, there is a need for factories to recycle as much as possible. This is perfectly exemplified in the case of putting advanced technology into practice so as to reduce wastes including unused wool and chemicals, and, use organic materials as a fuel replacement.
In conclusion, there are many benefits regarding increasing taxes on the industries, whereas, I believe that it is more beneficial to adopt other alternative measures.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
It is true that pollution is alarmingly becoming more serious due to the industries. While many people think that air and water pollution can be alleviated if the government expands the charges on numerous industrial areas, I agree with those who argue that other superior methods could be adopted to solve this problem.
On the one hand, it is justified why some people advocate the view that paying extra charges might help to tackle the problem of pollution. To begin with, the quality of air and water resources could be improved considerably thanks to the punishment of paying a heavy tax. It is undeniable that the factories may release a myriad of harmful chemicals in plastic-making processes and clothing into the rivers which can put the marine ecosystem at a disadvantage to be able to exist. Therefore, the government is in charge of introducing the law such as paying the fine to the industries so that they will discharge fewer unused materials outside the environment.
On the other hand, I contend that several further outcomes can be implemented to improve the situation. Firstly, the authorities should encourage the factories to put more resources into the water treatment system. Using this system to deal with harmful waste before dumping it into the rivers can minimize the negative effects on the natural habitat. In addition, there is a need for factories to recycle as much as possible. This is perfectly exemplified in the case of putting advanced technology into practice so as to reduce wastes including unused wool and chemicals, and, use organic materials as a fuel replacement.
In conclusion, there are many benefits regarding increasing taxes on the industries, whereas, I believe that it is more beneficial to adopt other alternative measures.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
It is true that pollution is alarmingly becoming more serious due to the industries. While many people think that air and water pollution can be alleviated if the government expands the charges on numerous industrial areas, I agree with those who argue that other superior methods could be adopted to solve this problem.
On the one hand, it is justified why some people advocate the view that paying extra charges might help to tackle the problem of pollution. To begin with, the quality of air and water resources could be improved considerably thanks to the punishment of paying a heavy tax. It is undeniable that the factories may release a myriad of harmful chemicals in plastic-making processes and clothing into the rivers which can put the marine ecosystem at a disadvantage to be able to exist. Therefore, the government is in charge of introducing the law such as paying the fine to the industries so that they will discharge fewer unused materials outside the environment.
On the other hand, I contend that several further outcomes can be implemented to improve the situation. Firstly, the authorities should encourage the factories to put more resources into the water treatment system. Using this system to deal with harmful waste before dumping it into the rivers can minimize the negative effects on the natural habitat. In addition, there is a need for factories to recycle as much as possible. This is perfectly exemplified in the case of putting advanced technology into practice so as to reduce wastes including unused wool and chemicals, and, use organic materials as a fuel replacement.
In conclusion, there are many benefits regarding increasing taxes on the industries, whereas, I believe that it is more beneficial to adopt other alternative measures.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
It is true that pollution is alarmingly becoming more serious due to the industries. While many people think that air and water pollution can be alleviated if the government expands the charges on numerous industrial areas, I agree with those who argue that other superior methods could be adopted to solve this problem.
On the one hand, it is justified why some people advocate the view that paying extra charges might help to tackle the problem of pollution. To begin with, the quality of air and water resources could be improved considerably thanks to the punishment of paying a heavy tax. It is undeniable that the factories may release a myriad of harmful chemicals in plastic-making processes and clothing into the rivers which can put the marine ecosystem at a disadvantage to be able to exist. Therefore, the government is in charge of introducing the law such as paying the fine to the industries so that they will discharge fewer unused materials outside the environment.
On the other hand, I contend that several further outcomes can be implemented to improve the situation. Firstly, the authorities should encourage the factories to put more resources into the water treatment system. Using this system to deal with harmful waste before dumping it into the rivers can minimize the negative effects on the natural habitat. In addition, there is a need for factories to recycle as much as possible. This is perfectly exemplified in the case of putting advanced technology into practice so as to reduce wastes including unused wool and chemicals, and, use organic materials as a fuel replacement.
In conclusion, there are many benefits regarding increasing taxes on the industries, whereas, I believe that it is more beneficial to adopt other alternative measures.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the current era, some individuals firmly believe that high school students must participate in voluntary community service. I totally agree with this opinion. It seems that this kind of voluntary job exerts a positive effect on teenager’s character. In addition, they can earn work experience through this involvement.
It is undeniable that making a responsible character is one of the most challenging issues in the modern world. In this regard, the educational system should not only focus on the pursuit of knowledge but also the development of good personality such as being patient, caring, and responsible. It should be noted that students might learn these skills in the classroom but would not have the chance to apply or practice them. However, interaction with people in community service allows them to build up those morals. It brings that knowledge of morality into experience in their life. for instance, helping orphans makes a contribution to earning social skills.
Moreover, it is very competitive in applying to universities or jobs. Universities prefer influential students to adopt. For example, MIT University receives more than thousands of new applications each year. Most applicants obtained all A’s results, so it is not easy to select the new intake students. At that time, their contribution to the community would make them distinguished among the applicants.
To sum up, without a shadow of a doubt, involvement in unpaid community service brings great benefits to shape the morality of teenagers and boost their chances of getting into tertiary education. So I totally agree with the idea that unpaid work should be included in school programs.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the current era, some individuals firmly believe that high school students must participate in voluntary community service. I totally agree with this opinion. It seems that this kind of voluntary job exerts a positive effect on teenager’s character. In addition, they can earn work experience through this involvement.
It is undeniable that making a responsible character is one of the most challenging issues in the modern world. In this regard, the educational system should not only focus on the pursuit of knowledge but also the development of good personality such as being patient, caring, and responsible. It should be noted that students might learn these skills in the classroom but would not have the chance to apply or practice them. However, interaction with people in community service allows them to build up those morals. It brings that knowledge of morality into experience in their life. for instance, helping orphans makes a contribution to earning social skills.
Moreover, it is very competitive in applying to universities or jobs. Universities prefer influential students to adopt. For example, MIT University receives more than thousands of new applications each year. Most applicants obtained all A’s results, so it is not easy to select the new intake students. At that time, their contribution to the community would make them distinguished among the applicants.
To sum up, without a shadow of a doubt, involvement in unpaid community service brings great benefits to shape the morality of teenagers and boost their chances of getting into tertiary education. So I totally agree with the idea that unpaid work should be included in school programs.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the current era, some individuals firmly believe that high school students must participate in voluntary community service. I totally agree with this opinion. It seems that this kind of voluntary job exerts a positive effect on teenager’s character. In addition, they can earn work experience through this involvement.
It is undeniable that making a responsible character is one of the most challenging issues in the modern world. In this regard, the educational system should not only focus on the pursuit of knowledge but also the development of good personality such as being patient, caring, and responsible. It should be noted that students might learn these skills in the classroom but would not have the chance to apply or practice them. However, interaction with people in community service allows them to build up those morals. It brings that knowledge of morality into experience in their life. for instance, helping orphans makes a contribution to earning social skills.
Moreover, it is very competitive in applying to universities or jobs. Universities prefer influential students to adopt. For example, MIT University receives more than thousands of new applications each year. Most applicants obtained all A’s results, so it is not easy to select the new intake students. At that time, their contribution to the community would make them distinguished among the applicants.
To sum up, without a shadow of a doubt, involvement in unpaid community service brings great benefits to shape the morality of teenagers and boost their chances of getting into tertiary education. So I totally agree with the idea that unpaid work should be included in school programs.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the current era, some individuals firmly believe that high school students must participate in voluntary community service. I totally agree with this opinion. It seems that this kind of voluntary job exerts a positive effect on teenager’s character. In addition, they can earn work experience through this involvement.
It is undeniable that making a responsible character is one of the most challenging issues in the modern world. In this regard, the educational system should not only focus on the pursuit of knowledge but also the development of good personality such as being patient, caring, and responsible. It should be noted that students might learn these skills in the classroom but would not have the chance to apply or practice them. However, interaction with people in community service allows them to build up those morals. It brings that knowledge of morality into experience in their life. for instance, helping orphans makes a contribution to earning social skills.
Moreover, it is very competitive in applying to universities or jobs. Universities prefer influential students to adopt. For example, MIT University receives more than thousands of new applications each year. Most applicants obtained all A’s results, so it is not easy to select the new intake students. At that time, their contribution to the community would make them distinguished among the applicants.
To sum up, without a shadow of a doubt, involvement in unpaid community service brings great benefits to shape the morality of teenagers and boost their chances of getting into tertiary education. So I totally agree with the idea that unpaid work should be included in school programs.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that paying taxes is a big enough contribution to society, while others think people have more responsibilities as a member of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Taxation is a key ingredient in the social relationship between inhabitants and the economy. Moreover, it assists in improving every aspect of the country’s quality of life. For instance, healthcare, education and public goods and services. Some say taxation is a big enough contribution to a nation, meanwhile, others think that human beings do have more duties as a part of association rather than only paying tariffs. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view.
In my opinion, I strongly concur with those who argue that the population should take more obligations such as volunteering, obeying laws and donating money or necessary stuff to the crowd who live in poor conditions. In contrast, if some individuals create hazardous situations or are against the rules of the nation, that would require the state to spend an amount more money to take care of it.
Some believe that the government already takes responsibility and does its best in duties. They invest in the development of industries, public infrastructure, better citizen welfare, as well as vital military equipment. On the other hand, there are other obligations other than cash as taxes for residents. For example, during the pandemic COVID-19 everyone had to follow the social-distancing rules strictly, due to the situation being out of hand with the nation at that time.
In a nutshell, paying fines is a civic duty which the community must do to improve a country, but other than that there are moral behaviours which enhance a better social life and peace.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that paying taxes is a big enough contribution to society, while others think people have more responsibilities as a member of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Taxation is a key ingredient in the social relationship between inhabitants and the economy. Moreover, it assists in improving every aspect of the country’s quality of life. For instance, healthcare, education and public goods and services. Some say taxation is a big enough contribution to a nation, meanwhile, others think that human beings do have more duties as a part of association rather than only paying tariffs. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view.
In my opinion, I strongly concur with those who argue that the population should take more obligations such as volunteering, obeying laws and donating money or necessary stuff to the crowd who live in poor conditions. In contrast, if some individuals create hazardous situations or are against the rules of the nation, that would require the state to spend an amount more money to take care of it.
Some believe that the government already takes responsibility and does its best in duties. They invest in the development of industries, public infrastructure, better citizen welfare, as well as vital military equipment. On the other hand, there are other obligations other than cash as taxes for residents. For example, during the pandemic COVID-19 everyone had to follow the social-distancing rules strictly, due to the situation being out of hand with the nation at that time.
In a nutshell, paying fines is a civic duty which the community must do to improve a country, but other than that there are moral behaviours which enhance a better social life and peace.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that paying taxes is a big enough contribution to society, while others think people have more responsibilities as a member of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Taxation is a key ingredient in the social relationship between inhabitants and the economy. Moreover, it assists in improving every aspect of the country’s quality of life. For instance, healthcare, education and public goods and services. Some say taxation is a big enough contribution to a nation, meanwhile, others think that human beings do have more duties as a part of association rather than only paying tariffs. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view.
In my opinion, I strongly concur with those who argue that the population should take more obligations such as volunteering, obeying laws and donating money or necessary stuff to the crowd who live in poor conditions. In contrast, if some individuals create hazardous situations or are against the rules of the nation, that would require the state to spend an amount more money to take care of it.
Some believe that the government already takes responsibility and does its best in duties. They invest in the development of industries, public infrastructure, better citizen welfare, as well as vital military equipment. On the other hand, there are other obligations other than cash as taxes for residents. For example, during the pandemic COVID-19 everyone had to follow the social-distancing rules strictly, due to the situation being out of hand with the nation at that time.
In a nutshell, paying fines is a civic duty which the community must do to improve a country, but other than that there are moral behaviours which enhance a better social life and peace.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that paying taxes is a big enough contribution to society, while others think people have more responsibilities as a member of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Taxation is a key ingredient in the social relationship between inhabitants and the economy. Moreover, it assists in improving every aspect of the country’s quality of life. For instance, healthcare, education and public goods and services. Some say taxation is a big enough contribution to a nation, meanwhile, others think that human beings do have more duties as a part of association rather than only paying tariffs. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view.
In my opinion, I strongly concur with those who argue that the population should take more obligations such as volunteering, obeying laws and donating money or necessary stuff to the crowd who live in poor conditions. In contrast, if some individuals create hazardous situations or are against the rules of the nation, that would require the state to spend an amount more money to take care of it.
Some believe that the government already takes responsibility and does its best in duties. They invest in the development of industries, public infrastructure, better citizen welfare, as well as vital military equipment. On the other hand, there are other obligations other than cash as taxes for residents. For example, during the pandemic COVID-19 everyone had to follow the social-distancing rules strictly, due to the situation being out of hand with the nation at that time.
In a nutshell, paying fines is a civic duty which the community must do to improve a country, but other than that there are moral behaviours which enhance a better social life and peace.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Anwser:
With the advancement of urban developments, a growing rate of young adults from suburbs move to cities, seeking better employment. This leads to an imbalanced population between rural and urban areas. Some argue that this brings a positive impact on the country as a whole, while I believe that there are substantial negative consequences.
Looking at the upsides of the moving population from the countryside, cities provide rural residents with greater resources and better future development. For example, urban areas are building an increasing number of business locations, housing sections and all kinds of construction, which requires a significant amount of workers. By contrast, suburbs lack a variety of occupations, and most of the residents there engage in more conventional work. People are seeking various opportunities to raise per capita income and improve life quality. Consequently, increasing numbers of employers from all sectors enhance productivity and therefore boost the economic growth of a country as a whole.
However, the major drawbacks of a declining rural population can increase the urban-rural gap and result in unequal distribution of wealth. For instance, less labour force is devoted to traditional industries such as agriculture, farming or manufacturing, reducing the production of the primary sector and dramatically affecting the cost of those raw products. Furthermore, those who suffer from a production decline can result in a substantial reduction in their earnings, making the urban-rural gap far more severe.
In conclusion, although every country may experience this issue inevitably, we must take action on how to alleviate the challenges our countryside is facing and make adjustments to tackle the matters of decreasing labour force and revenues in the countryside.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Anwser:
With the advancement of urban developments, a growing rate of young adults from suburbs move to cities, seeking better employment. This leads to an imbalanced population between rural and urban areas. Some argue that this brings a positive impact on the country as a whole, while I believe that there are substantial negative consequences.
Looking at the upsides of the moving population from the countryside, cities provide rural residents with greater resources and better future development. For example, urban areas are building an increasing number of business locations, housing sections and all kinds of construction, which requires a significant amount of workers. By contrast, suburbs lack a variety of occupations, and most of the residents there engage in more conventional work. People are seeking various opportunities to raise per capita income and improve life quality. Consequently, increasing numbers of employers from all sectors enhance productivity and therefore boost the economic growth of a country as a whole.
However, the major drawbacks of a declining rural population can increase the urban-rural gap and result in unequal distribution of wealth. For instance, less labour force is devoted to traditional industries such as agriculture, farming or manufacturing, reducing the production of the primary sector and dramatically affecting the cost of those raw products. Furthermore, those who suffer from a production decline can result in a substantial reduction in their earnings, making the urban-rural gap far more severe.
In conclusion, although every country may experience this issue inevitably, we must take action on how to alleviate the challenges our countryside is facing and make adjustments to tackle the matters of decreasing labour force and revenues in the countryside.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Anwser:
With the advancement of urban developments, a growing rate of young adults from suburbs move to cities, seeking better employment. This leads to an imbalanced population between rural and urban areas. Some argue that this brings a positive impact on the country as a whole, while I believe that there are substantial negative consequences.
Looking at the upsides of the moving population from the countryside, cities provide rural residents with greater resources and better future development. For example, urban areas are building an increasing number of business locations, housing sections and all kinds of construction, which requires a significant amount of workers. By contrast, suburbs lack a variety of occupations, and most of the residents there engage in more conventional work. People are seeking various opportunities to raise per capita income and improve life quality. Consequently, increasing numbers of employers from all sectors enhance productivity and therefore boost the economic growth of a country as a whole.
However, the major drawbacks of a declining rural population can increase the urban-rural gap and result in unequal distribution of wealth. For instance, less labour force is devoted to traditional industries such as agriculture, farming or manufacturing, reducing the production of the primary sector and dramatically affecting the cost of those raw products. Furthermore, those who suffer from a production decline can result in a substantial reduction in their earnings, making the urban-rural gap far more severe.
In conclusion, although every country may experience this issue inevitably, we must take action on how to alleviate the challenges our countryside is facing and make adjustments to tackle the matters of decreasing labour force and revenues in the countryside.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Anwser:
With the advancement of urban developments, a growing rate of young adults from suburbs move to cities, seeking better employment. This leads to an imbalanced population between rural and urban areas. Some argue that this brings a positive impact on the country as a whole, while I believe that there are substantial negative consequences.
Looking at the upsides of the moving population from the countryside, cities provide rural residents with greater resources and better future development. For example, urban areas are building an increasing number of business locations, housing sections and all kinds of construction, which requires a significant amount of workers. By contrast, suburbs lack a variety of occupations, and most of the residents there engage in more conventional work. People are seeking various opportunities to raise per capita income and improve life quality. Consequently, increasing numbers of employers from all sectors enhance productivity and therefore boost the economic growth of a country as a whole.
However, the major drawbacks of a declining rural population can increase the urban-rural gap and result in unequal distribution of wealth. For instance, less labour force is devoted to traditional industries such as agriculture, farming or manufacturing, reducing the production of the primary sector and dramatically affecting the cost of those raw products. Furthermore, those who suffer from a production decline can result in a substantial reduction in their earnings, making the urban-rural gap far more severe.
In conclusion, although every country may experience this issue inevitably, we must take action on how to alleviate the challenges our countryside is facing and make adjustments to tackle the matters of decreasing labour force and revenues in the countryside.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Anwser:
Nowadays, some kids can mindlessly scroll through their smartphones for hours on a daily basis. This phenomenon is happening due to the lack of care from families. Overall, I firmly disagree with this contemporary habit as it has a degrading impact on children's ability to focus and social skills.
To begin with, the main contributor to this issue is the parents' ignorance of their heirs. To illustrate, many working parents spend most of their time outside of the house, thus, over-rely on the babysitter's role to take care of their offspring. Hence, the easiest way to soothe toddlers is by introducing them to consuming content on smartphones. For instance, I often watch mothers giving out gadgets as a shortcut to calm their toddlers every time I eat out at a restaurant. This kind of negligence builds the children's overdependent behaviour to gadgets.
From my point of view, this habit is destructive to the toddlers' development. Firstly, children will become addicted to the sudden endorphin rush gotten from entertainment and, consequently, weaken their concentration capability from such an early age. For example, my 5-year-old nephew found it hard to recall his own address because of his outrageous addiction to computer games. Moreover, kids will not be exploring avenues outside their comfort zone and making new friends that build their social intelligence.
In conclusion, families play a monumental role in overcoming the issue of the era. As the drawbacks of playing smartphones have undeniably detrimental impacts on children, I strongly opine that this is a negative development. It would be nice if kids nowadays could also chase butterflies together with their pals like our generation used to enjoy in hindsight.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Anwser:
Nowadays, some kids can mindlessly scroll through their smartphones for hours on a daily basis. This phenomenon is happening due to the lack of care from families. Overall, I firmly disagree with this contemporary habit as it has a degrading impact on children's ability to focus and social skills.
To begin with, the main contributor to this issue is the parents' ignorance of their heirs. To illustrate, many working parents spend most of their time outside of the house, thus, over-rely on the babysitter's role to take care of their offspring. Hence, the easiest way to soothe toddlers is by introducing them to consuming content on smartphones. For instance, I often watch mothers giving out gadgets as a shortcut to calm their toddlers every time I eat out at a restaurant. This kind of negligence builds the children's overdependent behaviour to gadgets.
From my point of view, this habit is destructive to the toddlers' development. Firstly, children will become addicted to the sudden endorphin rush gotten from entertainment and, consequently, weaken their concentration capability from such an early age. For example, my 5-year-old nephew found it hard to recall his own address because of his outrageous addiction to computer games. Moreover, kids will not be exploring avenues outside their comfort zone and making new friends that build their social intelligence.
In conclusion, families play a monumental role in overcoming the issue of the era. As the drawbacks of playing smartphones have undeniably detrimental impacts on children, I strongly opine that this is a negative development. It would be nice if kids nowadays could also chase butterflies together with their pals like our generation used to enjoy in hindsight.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Anwser:
Nowadays, some kids can mindlessly scroll through their smartphones for hours on a daily basis. This phenomenon is happening due to the lack of care from families. Overall, I firmly disagree with this contemporary habit as it has a degrading impact on children's ability to focus and social skills.
To begin with, the main contributor to this issue is the parents' ignorance of their heirs. To illustrate, many working parents spend most of their time outside of the house, thus, over-rely on the babysitter's role to take care of their offspring. Hence, the easiest way to soothe toddlers is by introducing them to consuming content on smartphones. For instance, I often watch mothers giving out gadgets as a shortcut to calm their toddlers every time I eat out at a restaurant. This kind of negligence builds the children's overdependent behaviour to gadgets.
From my point of view, this habit is destructive to the toddlers' development. Firstly, children will become addicted to the sudden endorphin rush gotten from entertainment and, consequently, weaken their concentration capability from such an early age. For example, my 5-year-old nephew found it hard to recall his own address because of his outrageous addiction to computer games. Moreover, kids will not be exploring avenues outside their comfort zone and making new friends that build their social intelligence.
In conclusion, families play a monumental role in overcoming the issue of the era. As the drawbacks of playing smartphones have undeniably detrimental impacts on children, I strongly opine that this is a negative development. It would be nice if kids nowadays could also chase butterflies together with their pals like our generation used to enjoy in hindsight.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Anwser:
Nowadays, some kids can mindlessly scroll through their smartphones for hours on a daily basis. This phenomenon is happening due to the lack of care from families. Overall, I firmly disagree with this contemporary habit as it has a degrading impact on children's ability to focus and social skills.
To begin with, the main contributor to this issue is the parents' ignorance of their heirs. To illustrate, many working parents spend most of their time outside of the house, thus, over-rely on the babysitter's role to take care of their offspring. Hence, the easiest way to soothe toddlers is by introducing them to consuming content on smartphones. For instance, I often watch mothers giving out gadgets as a shortcut to calm their toddlers every time I eat out at a restaurant. This kind of negligence builds the children's overdependent behaviour to gadgets.
From my point of view, this habit is destructive to the toddlers' development. Firstly, children will become addicted to the sudden endorphin rush gotten from entertainment and, consequently, weaken their concentration capability from such an early age. For example, my 5-year-old nephew found it hard to recall his own address because of his outrageous addiction to computer games. Moreover, kids will not be exploring avenues outside their comfort zone and making new friends that build their social intelligence.
In conclusion, families play a monumental role in overcoming the issue of the era. As the drawbacks of playing smartphones have undeniably detrimental impacts on children, I strongly opine that this is a negative development. It would be nice if kids nowadays could also chase butterflies together with their pals like our generation used to enjoy in hindsight.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people say that modern innovation brings about more problems than benefits? Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
it is known that our lives have changed with modern life. Even though innovation makes our lives easier, it has brought some issues because every good thing has a bad side. If we compare its bad and good sides of course it has a lot of benefits. İ do not believe it affects us in a bad way. This essay will try to explain why people think it brings more problems.
On the one hand, if humans did not find a lot of tools, would we eat food with our hands like animals? Moreover, if we did not invent a lot of machines like cars, planes or trains maybe we would go from Turkey to Germany but it would take a week. However, this distance is just three hours by plane now. For example, 20 years ago many people were not good at communicating with relatives or their family who lived abroad while developing the internet, lots of humans can speak with relatives through video conferences today thanks to innovations.
On the other hand, in the past, humans had good relationships, most people used to visit their relatives and kids played in the street. Unfortunately, technology has developed and the old relations are gone. In addition, most children depend on computers or telephones that's why their eyes get ill. For instance, my friend's son is 6 years old. although he is young, he has health situations due to using the telephone every day.
To sum up, inventions add many good things, but if we have a comfortable life thanks to the scientists and inventors. In my opinion, it brings some problems, I accept that. We use it incorrectly therefore we live with problems it is not an ıntentional mistake.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people say that modern innovation brings about more problems than benefits? Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
it is known that our lives have changed with modern life. Even though innovation makes our lives easier, it has brought some issues because every good thing has a bad side. If we compare its bad and good sides of course it has a lot of benefits. İ do not believe it affects us in a bad way. This essay will try to explain why people think it brings more problems.
On the one hand, if humans did not find a lot of tools, would we eat food with our hands like animals? Moreover, if we did not invent a lot of machines like cars, planes or trains maybe we would go from Turkey to Germany but it would take a week. However, this distance is just three hours by plane now. For example, 20 years ago many people were not good at communicating with relatives or their family who lived abroad while developing the internet, lots of humans can speak with relatives through video conferences today thanks to innovations.
On the other hand, in the past, humans had good relationships, most people used to visit their relatives and kids played in the street. Unfortunately, technology has developed and the old relations are gone. In addition, most children depend on computers or telephones that's why their eyes get ill. For instance, my friend's son is 6 years old. although he is young, he has health situations due to using the telephone every day.
To sum up, inventions add many good things, but if we have a comfortable life thanks to the scientists and inventors. In my opinion, it brings some problems, I accept that. We use it incorrectly therefore we live with problems it is not an ıntentional mistake.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people say that modern innovation brings about more problems than benefits? Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
it is known that our lives have changed with modern life. Even though innovation makes our lives easier, it has brought some issues because every good thing has a bad side. If we compare its bad and good sides of course it has a lot of benefits. İ do not believe it affects us in a bad way. This essay will try to explain why people think it brings more problems.
On the one hand, if humans did not find a lot of tools, would we eat food with our hands like animals? Moreover, if we did not invent a lot of machines like cars, planes or trains maybe we would go from Turkey to Germany but it would take a week. However, this distance is just three hours by plane now. For example, 20 years ago many people were not good at communicating with relatives or their family who lived abroad while developing the internet, lots of humans can speak with relatives through video conferences today thanks to innovations.
On the other hand, in the past, humans had good relationships, most people used to visit their relatives and kids played in the street. Unfortunately, technology has developed and the old relations are gone. In addition, most children depend on computers or telephones that's why their eyes get ill. For instance, my friend's son is 6 years old. although he is young, he has health situations due to using the telephone every day.
To sum up, inventions add many good things, but if we have a comfortable life thanks to the scientists and inventors. In my opinion, it brings some problems, I accept that. We use it incorrectly therefore we live with problems it is not an ıntentional mistake.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people say that modern innovation brings about more problems than benefits? Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
it is known that our lives have changed with modern life. Even though innovation makes our lives easier, it has brought some issues because every good thing has a bad side. If we compare its bad and good sides of course it has a lot of benefits. İ do not believe it affects us in a bad way. This essay will try to explain why people think it brings more problems.
On the one hand, if humans did not find a lot of tools, would we eat food with our hands like animals? Moreover, if we did not invent a lot of machines like cars, planes or trains maybe we would go from Turkey to Germany but it would take a week. However, this distance is just three hours by plane now. For example, 20 years ago many people were not good at communicating with relatives or their family who lived abroad while developing the internet, lots of humans can speak with relatives through video conferences today thanks to innovations.
On the other hand, in the past, humans had good relationships, most people used to visit their relatives and kids played in the street. Unfortunately, technology has developed and the old relations are gone. In addition, most children depend on computers or telephones that's why their eyes get ill. For instance, my friend's son is 6 years old. although he is young, he has health situations due to using the telephone every day.
To sum up, inventions add many good things, but if we have a comfortable life thanks to the scientists and inventors. In my opinion, it brings some problems, I accept that. We use it incorrectly therefore we live with problems it is not an ıntentional mistake.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subject. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
All foundation school subjects should be focused on by the youths while believe students should concentrate on the topic they are specialised in and attracted to. Consequently, these issues have been argued extensively. In this, essay I will argue whether I believe which has the most potential for the youth.
Nowadays, we all are living in the modern era where every culture and tradition slightly changed this refers to the illustrations of evolution in our society. The statement said that student should get their attention on all education topics personally speaking, I don't think it is significant for teenagers. As I am a younger generation, I truly understand why many parents want their children to learn all fields.,Nonetheless we should abolish this notion as our world has developed. Hence, we should let them study all of the core subjects just for the foundation knowledge and if they find it interesting you can let them research more.
According to many younger generations, they are more interested in studying what topic they are concerned about which is more efficient than examining all topics. Subsequently, if they are strongly attracted to any subject they could do it effectively and that might provide them with an opportunity to shine their potential in the future. Apart from that, as I have experienced , it is more delightful for me to spend my time studying what I am genuinely concerned about. That is the reason why many youths tend to concentrate more on what they are fascinated by.
To summarize all of my perspectives, I think that we all should let teenagers study all school majors foundation and spend more time researching what they are truly interested in. Our society will be a better place for everyone ,especially for those youths who will grow up in this community.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subject. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
All foundation school subjects should be focused on by the youths while believe students should concentrate on the topic they are specialised in and attracted to. Consequently, these issues have been argued extensively. In this, essay I will argue whether I believe which has the most potential for the youth.
Nowadays, we all are living in the modern era where every culture and tradition slightly changed this refers to the illustrations of evolution in our society. The statement said that student should get their attention on all education topics personally speaking, I don't think it is significant for teenagers. As I am a younger generation, I truly understand why many parents want their children to learn all fields.,Nonetheless we should abolish this notion as our world has developed. Hence, we should let them study all of the core subjects just for the foundation knowledge and if they find it interesting you can let them research more.
According to many younger generations, they are more interested in studying what topic they are concerned about which is more efficient than examining all topics. Subsequently, if they are strongly attracted to any subject they could do it effectively and that might provide them with an opportunity to shine their potential in the future. Apart from that, as I have experienced , it is more delightful for me to spend my time studying what I am genuinely concerned about. That is the reason why many youths tend to concentrate more on what they are fascinated by.
To summarize all of my perspectives, I think that we all should let teenagers study all school majors foundation and spend more time researching what they are truly interested in. Our society will be a better place for everyone ,especially for those youths who will grow up in this community.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subject. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
All foundation school subjects should be focused on by the youths while believe students should concentrate on the topic they are specialised in and attracted to. Consequently, these issues have been argued extensively. In this, essay I will argue whether I believe which has the most potential for the youth.
Nowadays, we all are living in the modern era where every culture and tradition slightly changed this refers to the illustrations of evolution in our society. The statement said that student should get their attention on all education topics personally speaking, I don't think it is significant for teenagers. As I am a younger generation, I truly understand why many parents want their children to learn all fields.,Nonetheless we should abolish this notion as our world has developed. Hence, we should let them study all of the core subjects just for the foundation knowledge and if they find it interesting you can let them research more.
According to many younger generations, they are more interested in studying what topic they are concerned about which is more efficient than examining all topics. Subsequently, if they are strongly attracted to any subject they could do it effectively and that might provide them with an opportunity to shine their potential in the future. Apart from that, as I have experienced , it is more delightful for me to spend my time studying what I am genuinely concerned about. That is the reason why many youths tend to concentrate more on what they are fascinated by.
To summarize all of my perspectives, I think that we all should let teenagers study all school majors foundation and spend more time researching what they are truly interested in. Our society will be a better place for everyone ,especially for those youths who will grow up in this community.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subject. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
All foundation school subjects should be focused on by the youths while believe students should concentrate on the topic they are specialised in and attracted to. Consequently, these issues have been argued extensively. In this, essay I will argue whether I believe which has the most potential for the youth.
Nowadays, we all are living in the modern era where every culture and tradition slightly changed this refers to the illustrations of evolution in our society. The statement said that student should get their attention on all education topics personally speaking, I don't think it is significant for teenagers. As I am a younger generation, I truly understand why many parents want their children to learn all fields.,Nonetheless we should abolish this notion as our world has developed. Hence, we should let them study all of the core subjects just for the foundation knowledge and if they find it interesting you can let them research more.
According to many younger generations, they are more interested in studying what topic they are concerned about which is more efficient than examining all topics. Subsequently, if they are strongly attracted to any subject they could do it effectively and that might provide them with an opportunity to shine their potential in the future. Apart from that, as I have experienced , it is more delightful for me to spend my time studying what I am genuinely concerned about. That is the reason why many youths tend to concentrate more on what they are fascinated by.
To summarize all of my perspectives, I think that we all should let teenagers study all school majors foundation and spend more time researching what they are truly interested in. Our society will be a better place for everyone ,especially for those youths who will grow up in this community.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people say it is a waste of time to plan for future. It is more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
People have always been concerned with their future. Some society members are of the opinion that we should not worry about the future but live in the present and take joy in life instead.I Partially agree with this opinion due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, there is a famous line that says "live in the moment" so lots of folks want to follow that because they do not know what tomorrow will bring. Focusing on the forthcoming years and having a plan for it put people under lots of pressure. For example, when individuals program their lifetime they have to work hard to make plenty of money and reach their goals and consequently,they may have to face lots of anxiety.
On the other hand, having a policy will ensure your future as well as your family's. If you have a long-term plan when you face difficulties, you do not worry because you have considered all the possibilities and you will overcome that problem. For instance, a lot of community members these days are investing in the stock market not only for themselves but also for their families and children so that they can have a secure prospective time and prepare themselves for a rainy day.
To sum up, as discussed in the above paragraphs I partially agree with the idea that worries about the subsequent days will delay your life you should put your mind on the moment and enjoy every second of the chance to live.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people say it is a waste of time to plan for future. It is more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
People have always been concerned with their future. Some society members are of the opinion that we should not worry about the future but live in the present and take joy in life instead.I Partially agree with this opinion due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, there is a famous line that says "live in the moment" so lots of folks want to follow that because they do not know what tomorrow will bring. Focusing on the forthcoming years and having a plan for it put people under lots of pressure. For example, when individuals program their lifetime they have to work hard to make plenty of money and reach their goals and consequently,they may have to face lots of anxiety.
On the other hand, having a policy will ensure your future as well as your family's. If you have a long-term plan when you face difficulties, you do not worry because you have considered all the possibilities and you will overcome that problem. For instance, a lot of community members these days are investing in the stock market not only for themselves but also for their families and children so that they can have a secure prospective time and prepare themselves for a rainy day.
To sum up, as discussed in the above paragraphs I partially agree with the idea that worries about the subsequent days will delay your life you should put your mind on the moment and enjoy every second of the chance to live.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people say it is a waste of time to plan for future. It is more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
People have always been concerned with their future. Some society members are of the opinion that we should not worry about the future but live in the present and take joy in life instead.I Partially agree with this opinion due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, there is a famous line that says "live in the moment" so lots of folks want to follow that because they do not know what tomorrow will bring. Focusing on the forthcoming years and having a plan for it put people under lots of pressure. For example, when individuals program their lifetime they have to work hard to make plenty of money and reach their goals and consequently,they may have to face lots of anxiety.
On the other hand, having a policy will ensure your future as well as your family's. If you have a long-term plan when you face difficulties, you do not worry because you have considered all the possibilities and you will overcome that problem. For instance, a lot of community members these days are investing in the stock market not only for themselves but also for their families and children so that they can have a secure prospective time and prepare themselves for a rainy day.
To sum up, as discussed in the above paragraphs I partially agree with the idea that worries about the subsequent days will delay your life you should put your mind on the moment and enjoy every second of the chance to live.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people say it is a waste of time to plan for future. It is more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
People have always been concerned with their future. Some society members are of the opinion that we should not worry about the future but live in the present and take joy in life instead.I Partially agree with this opinion due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, there is a famous line that says "live in the moment" so lots of folks want to follow that because they do not know what tomorrow will bring. Focusing on the forthcoming years and having a plan for it put people under lots of pressure. For example, when individuals program their lifetime they have to work hard to make plenty of money and reach their goals and consequently,they may have to face lots of anxiety.
On the other hand, having a policy will ensure your future as well as your family's. If you have a long-term plan when you face difficulties, you do not worry because you have considered all the possibilities and you will overcome that problem. For instance, a lot of community members these days are investing in the stock market not only for themselves but also for their families and children so that they can have a secure prospective time and prepare themselves for a rainy day.
To sum up, as discussed in the above paragraphs I partially agree with the idea that worries about the subsequent days will delay your life you should put your mind on the moment and enjoy every second of the chance to live.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Anwser:
Education empowers knowledge, In today's circumstances, some people believe that it is essential for an educational student to have an intense ideation on their curriculum subject rather than knowing about its application in the real world. I strongly disagree with this perspective, as it is predominant for an individual to be aware of the facts behind every concept. This essay elaborates on the reason in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.
To begin with, There is a myth growing among youngsters of the current generation that is necessary for them to understand their syllabus without recognizing the benefits that renders to our society. Subsequently, they are more concentrated on improving their grades to win over their competitors. However, in a real sense, it is controversial to believe that, despite focusing only on subjects, it is advisable to know about its real-time implementation. To give a good example, university students can bring up innovative applications by applying their theories in a practical world. Thereby, this kind of study method results in an upward trend in developing countries.
In addition, students who concentrate on the development process instead of producing documentary context would be fond of a multitude of opportunities to prove themselves in a self-desired place that makes them feel gratified. For instance, people who are inclined to produce appealing products based on applied math and science which satisfy the public requirements, would help to grow an uptrend graph toward their longed designation.
To sum up, It is good to gain practical insights through their educational process to enrich the self and social existence.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Anwser:
Education empowers knowledge, In today's circumstances, some people believe that it is essential for an educational student to have an intense ideation on their curriculum subject rather than knowing about its application in the real world. I strongly disagree with this perspective, as it is predominant for an individual to be aware of the facts behind every concept. This essay elaborates on the reason in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.
To begin with, There is a myth growing among youngsters of the current generation that is necessary for them to understand their syllabus without recognizing the benefits that renders to our society. Subsequently, they are more concentrated on improving their grades to win over their competitors. However, in a real sense, it is controversial to believe that, despite focusing only on subjects, it is advisable to know about its real-time implementation. To give a good example, university students can bring up innovative applications by applying their theories in a practical world. Thereby, this kind of study method results in an upward trend in developing countries.
In addition, students who concentrate on the development process instead of producing documentary context would be fond of a multitude of opportunities to prove themselves in a self-desired place that makes them feel gratified. For instance, people who are inclined to produce appealing products based on applied math and science which satisfy the public requirements, would help to grow an uptrend graph toward their longed designation.
To sum up, It is good to gain practical insights through their educational process to enrich the self and social existence.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Anwser:
Education empowers knowledge, In today's circumstances, some people believe that it is essential for an educational student to have an intense ideation on their curriculum subject rather than knowing about its application in the real world. I strongly disagree with this perspective, as it is predominant for an individual to be aware of the facts behind every concept. This essay elaborates on the reason in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.
To begin with, There is a myth growing among youngsters of the current generation that is necessary for them to understand their syllabus without recognizing the benefits that renders to our society. Subsequently, they are more concentrated on improving their grades to win over their competitors. However, in a real sense, it is controversial to believe that, despite focusing only on subjects, it is advisable to know about its real-time implementation. To give a good example, university students can bring up innovative applications by applying their theories in a practical world. Thereby, this kind of study method results in an upward trend in developing countries.
In addition, students who concentrate on the development process instead of producing documentary context would be fond of a multitude of opportunities to prove themselves in a self-desired place that makes them feel gratified. For instance, people who are inclined to produce appealing products based on applied math and science which satisfy the public requirements, would help to grow an uptrend graph toward their longed designation.
To sum up, It is good to gain practical insights through their educational process to enrich the self and social existence.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Anwser:
Education empowers knowledge, In today's circumstances, some people believe that it is essential for an educational student to have an intense ideation on their curriculum subject rather than knowing about its application in the real world. I strongly disagree with this perspective, as it is predominant for an individual to be aware of the facts behind every concept. This essay elaborates on the reason in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.
To begin with, There is a myth growing among youngsters of the current generation that is necessary for them to understand their syllabus without recognizing the benefits that renders to our society. Subsequently, they are more concentrated on improving their grades to win over their competitors. However, in a real sense, it is controversial to believe that, despite focusing only on subjects, it is advisable to know about its real-time implementation. To give a good example, university students can bring up innovative applications by applying their theories in a practical world. Thereby, this kind of study method results in an upward trend in developing countries.
In addition, students who concentrate on the development process instead of producing documentary context would be fond of a multitude of opportunities to prove themselves in a self-desired place that makes them feel gratified. For instance, people who are inclined to produce appealing products based on applied math and science which satisfy the public requirements, would help to grow an uptrend graph toward their longed designation.
To sum up, It is good to gain practical insights through their educational process to enrich the self and social existence.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
2.It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Anwser:
Taking a gap year off between finishing school and starting university has gained popularity in recent years. Moreover, the trend comes with several pros and cons worth considering. In my opinion, I believe that the benefit for students is to grow their personal development and career exploration, however, there are some detriments due to this delay that may impact study habits and affect long-term career goals.
Many people support a period after high school as it can generate a wide range of benefits for adolescents. Those who give themselves a break between high school and university potentially could gain their personal growth as well as work experience. For example, it allows young adults to explore their interests and passions, together with the chance to gain work experience in their chosen field, providing insight into their future goals. Another thing worth pointing out is that it is the perfect time to improve academic performance and broaden your horizons, which could be by travelling to another country.
Nevertheless, large fractions of individuals argue that if students stay away from the educational environment for roughly a period of time, it will result in a delayed graduation. In the long, run they might be behind their peers in career progression. In addition, they may lose interest in studying, such as, if they have a chance to earn sufficient money they will not come back to the educational environment.
To sum up, there are strong arguments on both sides. Whereas the significance of resuming academic education is undeniable, teenagers who have undergone multiple pressures need to unwind before starting university. Therefore, I strongly believe that the superiorities of a year gap outnumber its downsides.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
2.It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Anwser:
Taking a gap year off between finishing school and starting university has gained popularity in recent years. Moreover, the trend comes with several pros and cons worth considering. In my opinion, I believe that the benefit for students is to grow their personal development and career exploration, however, there are some detriments due to this delay that may impact study habits and affect long-term career goals.
Many people support a period after high school as it can generate a wide range of benefits for adolescents. Those who give themselves a break between high school and university potentially could gain their personal growth as well as work experience. For example, it allows young adults to explore their interests and passions, together with the chance to gain work experience in their chosen field, providing insight into their future goals. Another thing worth pointing out is that it is the perfect time to improve academic performance and broaden your horizons, which could be by travelling to another country.
Nevertheless, large fractions of individuals argue that if students stay away from the educational environment for roughly a period of time, it will result in a delayed graduation. In the long, run they might be behind their peers in career progression. In addition, they may lose interest in studying, such as, if they have a chance to earn sufficient money they will not come back to the educational environment.
To sum up, there are strong arguments on both sides. Whereas the significance of resuming academic education is undeniable, teenagers who have undergone multiple pressures need to unwind before starting university. Therefore, I strongly believe that the superiorities of a year gap outnumber its downsides.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
2.It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Anwser:
Taking a gap year off between finishing school and starting university has gained popularity in recent years. Moreover, the trend comes with several pros and cons worth considering. In my opinion, I believe that the benefit for students is to grow their personal development and career exploration, however, there are some detriments due to this delay that may impact study habits and affect long-term career goals.
Many people support a period after high school as it can generate a wide range of benefits for adolescents. Those who give themselves a break between high school and university potentially could gain their personal growth as well as work experience. For example, it allows young adults to explore their interests and passions, together with the chance to gain work experience in their chosen field, providing insight into their future goals. Another thing worth pointing out is that it is the perfect time to improve academic performance and broaden your horizons, which could be by travelling to another country.
Nevertheless, large fractions of individuals argue that if students stay away from the educational environment for roughly a period of time, it will result in a delayed graduation. In the long, run they might be behind their peers in career progression. In addition, they may lose interest in studying, such as, if they have a chance to earn sufficient money they will not come back to the educational environment.
To sum up, there are strong arguments on both sides. Whereas the significance of resuming academic education is undeniable, teenagers who have undergone multiple pressures need to unwind before starting university. Therefore, I strongly believe that the superiorities of a year gap outnumber its downsides.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
2.It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Anwser:
Taking a gap year off between finishing school and starting university has gained popularity in recent years. Moreover, the trend comes with several pros and cons worth considering. In my opinion, I believe that the benefit for students is to grow their personal development and career exploration, however, there are some detriments due to this delay that may impact study habits and affect long-term career goals.
Many people support a period after high school as it can generate a wide range of benefits for adolescents. Those who give themselves a break between high school and university potentially could gain their personal growth as well as work experience. For example, it allows young adults to explore their interests and passions, together with the chance to gain work experience in their chosen field, providing insight into their future goals. Another thing worth pointing out is that it is the perfect time to improve academic performance and broaden your horizons, which could be by travelling to another country.
Nevertheless, large fractions of individuals argue that if students stay away from the educational environment for roughly a period of time, it will result in a delayed graduation. In the long, run they might be behind their peers in career progression. In addition, they may lose interest in studying, such as, if they have a chance to earn sufficient money they will not come back to the educational environment.
To sum up, there are strong arguments on both sides. Whereas the significance of resuming academic education is undeniable, teenagers who have undergone multiple pressures need to unwind before starting university. Therefore, I strongly believe that the superiorities of a year gap outnumber its downsides.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children.
What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?
Anwser:
Being obese was once only a condition that adults suffered from, but it is becoming more common in youths. This essay will first discuss how fast food and a sedentary lifestyle are the primary causes of this growing problem and then outline how education and increased exercise are the most viable solutions.
One cause of obesity in youngsters is the increasing popularity of fast-food restaurants. Fast food usually contains an exorbitant number of calories because it is very high in fat and sugar. In addition, young people are living a more sedentary lifestyle. Nowadays, more adolescents choose computer games or social media over physical activity, so they are unable to burn the extra calories they are eating. It can be commonly seen in many Western nations, for instance, that the number of youth who participate in after-school sports has dropped significantly over the last decade.
The best solution to this problem of being overweight is to educate adolescents about the dangers of being severely overweight. If children are more aware of the types of diseases associated with chubbiness, they might think twice before asking their parents to take them to the local burger restaurant. Moreover, schools should introduce more exercise into their curriculums. If youngsters take part in sports, the physical activity will allow them to burn calories and avoid weight gain. Schools where youths are required to participate in at least one team sport, for example, typically have lower obesity rates.
In conclusion, many children are struggling with their weight because of eating too much junk food combined with a sedentary lifestyle. However, if schools give adolescents enough information about the risks they are taking by doing this and require children to do more exercise, the problem can be alleviated.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children.
What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?
Anwser:
Being obese was once only a condition that adults suffered from, but it is becoming more common in youths. This essay will first discuss how fast food and a sedentary lifestyle are the primary causes of this growing problem and then outline how education and increased exercise are the most viable solutions.
One cause of obesity in youngsters is the increasing popularity of fast-food restaurants. Fast food usually contains an exorbitant number of calories because it is very high in fat and sugar. In addition, young people are living a more sedentary lifestyle. Nowadays, more adolescents choose computer games or social media over physical activity, so they are unable to burn the extra calories they are eating. It can be commonly seen in many Western nations, for instance, that the number of youth who participate in after-school sports has dropped significantly over the last decade.
The best solution to this problem of being overweight is to educate adolescents about the dangers of being severely overweight. If children are more aware of the types of diseases associated with chubbiness, they might think twice before asking their parents to take them to the local burger restaurant. Moreover, schools should introduce more exercise into their curriculums. If youngsters take part in sports, the physical activity will allow them to burn calories and avoid weight gain. Schools where youths are required to participate in at least one team sport, for example, typically have lower obesity rates.
In conclusion, many children are struggling with their weight because of eating too much junk food combined with a sedentary lifestyle. However, if schools give adolescents enough information about the risks they are taking by doing this and require children to do more exercise, the problem can be alleviated.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children.
What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?
Anwser:
Being obese was once only a condition that adults suffered from, but it is becoming more common in youths. This essay will first discuss how fast food and a sedentary lifestyle are the primary causes of this growing problem and then outline how education and increased exercise are the most viable solutions.
One cause of obesity in youngsters is the increasing popularity of fast-food restaurants. Fast food usually contains an exorbitant number of calories because it is very high in fat and sugar. In addition, young people are living a more sedentary lifestyle. Nowadays, more adolescents choose computer games or social media over physical activity, so they are unable to burn the extra calories they are eating. It can be commonly seen in many Western nations, for instance, that the number of youth who participate in after-school sports has dropped significantly over the last decade.
The best solution to this problem of being overweight is to educate adolescents about the dangers of being severely overweight. If children are more aware of the types of diseases associated with chubbiness, they might think twice before asking their parents to take them to the local burger restaurant. Moreover, schools should introduce more exercise into their curriculums. If youngsters take part in sports, the physical activity will allow them to burn calories and avoid weight gain. Schools where youths are required to participate in at least one team sport, for example, typically have lower obesity rates.
In conclusion, many children are struggling with their weight because of eating too much junk food combined with a sedentary lifestyle. However, if schools give adolescents enough information about the risks they are taking by doing this and require children to do more exercise, the problem can be alleviated.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children.
What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?
Anwser:
Being obese was once only a condition that adults suffered from, but it is becoming more common in youths. This essay will first discuss how fast food and a sedentary lifestyle are the primary causes of this growing problem and then outline how education and increased exercise are the most viable solutions.
One cause of obesity in youngsters is the increasing popularity of fast-food restaurants. Fast food usually contains an exorbitant number of calories because it is very high in fat and sugar. In addition, young people are living a more sedentary lifestyle. Nowadays, more adolescents choose computer games or social media over physical activity, so they are unable to burn the extra calories they are eating. It can be commonly seen in many Western nations, for instance, that the number of youth who participate in after-school sports has dropped significantly over the last decade.
The best solution to this problem of being overweight is to educate adolescents about the dangers of being severely overweight. If children are more aware of the types of diseases associated with chubbiness, they might think twice before asking their parents to take them to the local burger restaurant. Moreover, schools should introduce more exercise into their curriculums. If youngsters take part in sports, the physical activity will allow them to burn calories and avoid weight gain. Schools where youths are required to participate in at least one team sport, for example, typically have lower obesity rates.
In conclusion, many children are struggling with their weight because of eating too much junk food combined with a sedentary lifestyle. However, if schools give adolescents enough information about the risks they are taking by doing this and require children to do more exercise, the problem can be alleviated.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the government should offer financial support and care to elderly, while others think that people should save money for their future life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
Issues related to government support for elderly people are frequently discussed these days. Although some believe that old citizens should save money for their future lives, others criticize this and argue that the government should offer financial support and care to them. The two sides of this argument will be thoroughly discussed and analyzed in the essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are some demerits associated with offering money to senior persons. First and foremost is the lack of financial management in some groups. To explain, aged individuals should prepare themself for their payments after retirement. For instance, hospital and doctor fees are a large number of expenses from all bills. Thus, If old people can take care of themself without support from the government, we can manage taxes to develop other pain points in the country which are transportation, health care, education, and others.
On the other hand, there are several merits of this funding. The principal merit is youngsters and offspring can save their money from their parent's monthly expenses. In other words, they can purchase anything that they want so the country's economy will grow significantly. Moreover, their parents can look after themself so they have more time to focus on their work or businesses.
To summarise, the two points of view of the argument concerning financial support to old people. I am of the opinion that the government should appropriately offer this money to them because it indirectly helps their economy.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the government should offer financial support and care to elderly, while others think that people should save money for their future life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
Issues related to government support for elderly people are frequently discussed these days. Although some believe that old citizens should save money for their future lives, others criticize this and argue that the government should offer financial support and care to them. The two sides of this argument will be thoroughly discussed and analyzed in the essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are some demerits associated with offering money to senior persons. First and foremost is the lack of financial management in some groups. To explain, aged individuals should prepare themself for their payments after retirement. For instance, hospital and doctor fees are a large number of expenses from all bills. Thus, If old people can take care of themself without support from the government, we can manage taxes to develop other pain points in the country which are transportation, health care, education, and others.
On the other hand, there are several merits of this funding. The principal merit is youngsters and offspring can save their money from their parent's monthly expenses. In other words, they can purchase anything that they want so the country's economy will grow significantly. Moreover, their parents can look after themself so they have more time to focus on their work or businesses.
To summarise, the two points of view of the argument concerning financial support to old people. I am of the opinion that the government should appropriately offer this money to them because it indirectly helps their economy.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the government should offer financial support and care to elderly, while others think that people should save money for their future life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
Issues related to government support for elderly people are frequently discussed these days. Although some believe that old citizens should save money for their future lives, others criticize this and argue that the government should offer financial support and care to them. The two sides of this argument will be thoroughly discussed and analyzed in the essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are some demerits associated with offering money to senior persons. First and foremost is the lack of financial management in some groups. To explain, aged individuals should prepare themself for their payments after retirement. For instance, hospital and doctor fees are a large number of expenses from all bills. Thus, If old people can take care of themself without support from the government, we can manage taxes to develop other pain points in the country which are transportation, health care, education, and others.
On the other hand, there are several merits of this funding. The principal merit is youngsters and offspring can save their money from their parent's monthly expenses. In other words, they can purchase anything that they want so the country's economy will grow significantly. Moreover, their parents can look after themself so they have more time to focus on their work or businesses.
To summarise, the two points of view of the argument concerning financial support to old people. I am of the opinion that the government should appropriately offer this money to them because it indirectly helps their economy.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the government should offer financial support and care to elderly, while others think that people should save money for their future life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
Issues related to government support for elderly people are frequently discussed these days. Although some believe that old citizens should save money for their future lives, others criticize this and argue that the government should offer financial support and care to them. The two sides of this argument will be thoroughly discussed and analyzed in the essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are some demerits associated with offering money to senior persons. First and foremost is the lack of financial management in some groups. To explain, aged individuals should prepare themself for their payments after retirement. For instance, hospital and doctor fees are a large number of expenses from all bills. Thus, If old people can take care of themself without support from the government, we can manage taxes to develop other pain points in the country which are transportation, health care, education, and others.
On the other hand, there are several merits of this funding. The principal merit is youngsters and offspring can save their money from their parent's monthly expenses. In other words, they can purchase anything that they want so the country's economy will grow significantly. Moreover, their parents can look after themself so they have more time to focus on their work or businesses.
To summarise, the two points of view of the argument concerning financial support to old people. I am of the opinion that the government should appropriately offer this money to them because it indirectly helps their economy.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some think that politicians should always be honest while others feel that there are times when they must lie.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
The question of whether the authority should always be straightforward is a critical concern for citizens, often rooted in a deep-seated desire to safeguard the integrity and strength of the nation. In my opinion, the government should prioritize honesty to the people.
On the one hand, there are instances where the head of a country may need to withhold certain information from the public. For example, intelligence data could pose significant threats to a nation, especially when governmental leaders are negotiating with other countries. Thus, keeping certain information classified will maintain an advantageous position in parleys or protect national security. Furthermore, restraining negative news related to societal and economic issues could help the country survive the crisis. Some people consider this a good measure to prevent mass panic and instability in the community.
On the other hand, it is crucial to acknowledge that national authority should act as a role model of ethical standards to citizens. A nation thrives on the trustworthiness and accountability of its governmental body. As a result, members of a society are inspired to act ethically in their own lives, leading to a more cohesive and compassionate community. Moreover, when leaders consistently live up to their promises, they communicate confidence in their actions and decisions to global politics. This trust will help build a healthy relationship with other countries. For instance, when Canada apologized for its violence against native people, the country gained credibility among its own citizens and a positive image on the international stage.
In conclusion, I believe that it is necessary for politicians to be truthful when addressing the public.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some think that politicians should always be honest while others feel that there are times when they must lie.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
The question of whether the authority should always be straightforward is a critical concern for citizens, often rooted in a deep-seated desire to safeguard the integrity and strength of the nation. In my opinion, the government should prioritize honesty to the people.
On the one hand, there are instances where the head of a country may need to withhold certain information from the public. For example, intelligence data could pose significant threats to a nation, especially when governmental leaders are negotiating with other countries. Thus, keeping certain information classified will maintain an advantageous position in parleys or protect national security. Furthermore, restraining negative news related to societal and economic issues could help the country survive the crisis. Some people consider this a good measure to prevent mass panic and instability in the community.
On the other hand, it is crucial to acknowledge that national authority should act as a role model of ethical standards to citizens. A nation thrives on the trustworthiness and accountability of its governmental body. As a result, members of a society are inspired to act ethically in their own lives, leading to a more cohesive and compassionate community. Moreover, when leaders consistently live up to their promises, they communicate confidence in their actions and decisions to global politics. This trust will help build a healthy relationship with other countries. For instance, when Canada apologized for its violence against native people, the country gained credibility among its own citizens and a positive image on the international stage.
In conclusion, I believe that it is necessary for politicians to be truthful when addressing the public.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some think that politicians should always be honest while others feel that there are times when they must lie.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
The question of whether the authority should always be straightforward is a critical concern for citizens, often rooted in a deep-seated desire to safeguard the integrity and strength of the nation. In my opinion, the government should prioritize honesty to the people.
On the one hand, there are instances where the head of a country may need to withhold certain information from the public. For example, intelligence data could pose significant threats to a nation, especially when governmental leaders are negotiating with other countries. Thus, keeping certain information classified will maintain an advantageous position in parleys or protect national security. Furthermore, restraining negative news related to societal and economic issues could help the country survive the crisis. Some people consider this a good measure to prevent mass panic and instability in the community.
On the other hand, it is crucial to acknowledge that national authority should act as a role model of ethical standards to citizens. A nation thrives on the trustworthiness and accountability of its governmental body. As a result, members of a society are inspired to act ethically in their own lives, leading to a more cohesive and compassionate community. Moreover, when leaders consistently live up to their promises, they communicate confidence in their actions and decisions to global politics. This trust will help build a healthy relationship with other countries. For instance, when Canada apologized for its violence against native people, the country gained credibility among its own citizens and a positive image on the international stage.
In conclusion, I believe that it is necessary for politicians to be truthful when addressing the public.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some think that politicians should always be honest while others feel that there are times when they must lie.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
The question of whether the authority should always be straightforward is a critical concern for citizens, often rooted in a deep-seated desire to safeguard the integrity and strength of the nation. In my opinion, the government should prioritize honesty to the people.
On the one hand, there are instances where the head of a country may need to withhold certain information from the public. For example, intelligence data could pose significant threats to a nation, especially when governmental leaders are negotiating with other countries. Thus, keeping certain information classified will maintain an advantageous position in parleys or protect national security. Furthermore, restraining negative news related to societal and economic issues could help the country survive the crisis. Some people consider this a good measure to prevent mass panic and instability in the community.
On the other hand, it is crucial to acknowledge that national authority should act as a role model of ethical standards to citizens. A nation thrives on the trustworthiness and accountability of its governmental body. As a result, members of a society are inspired to act ethically in their own lives, leading to a more cohesive and compassionate community. Moreover, when leaders consistently live up to their promises, they communicate confidence in their actions and decisions to global politics. This trust will help build a healthy relationship with other countries. For instance, when Canada apologized for its violence against native people, the country gained credibility among its own citizens and a positive image on the international stage.
In conclusion, I believe that it is necessary for politicians to be truthful when addressing the public.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
Anwser:
It is often argued that, due to the advancement in technology people will no longer spend money to purchase newspapers and books in some time to come because the consumption of people getting access to knowledge has shifted rapidly towards the internet. This essay agrees that individuals now get information about the world and read books on the Internet without paying any fund
To begin with, it is relatively cheap and convenient to get material online. This is because one does not have to travel and spend a lot of money before one gets information. With a little cash and a click on their phone or laptop, they get an array of news around the world, as well as more options of novels to read without stressing themselves. For example, a 2013 study from Cambridge University showed that 80% of citizens prefer reading on their phones and laptops.
Moreover, online publication is cheap. In other words, it is cost-effective to publish information online since no fund is needed to purchase paper, ensure quality info is printed out, also travel for distribution. With online one can sit in the comfort of his home and post information on social media and can be seen all around the world. For instance, research conducted in 2014 indicated that hundreds of people spent hours on social media just trying to catch up with the trending news.
To sum up, the above data has made us see that, a time will come when society will no longer read on paper but will solely rely on the internet for information.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
Anwser:
It is often argued that, due to the advancement in technology people will no longer spend money to purchase newspapers and books in some time to come because the consumption of people getting access to knowledge has shifted rapidly towards the internet. This essay agrees that individuals now get information about the world and read books on the Internet without paying any fund
To begin with, it is relatively cheap and convenient to get material online. This is because one does not have to travel and spend a lot of money before one gets information. With a little cash and a click on their phone or laptop, they get an array of news around the world, as well as more options of novels to read without stressing themselves. For example, a 2013 study from Cambridge University showed that 80% of citizens prefer reading on their phones and laptops.
Moreover, online publication is cheap. In other words, it is cost-effective to publish information online since no fund is needed to purchase paper, ensure quality info is printed out, also travel for distribution. With online one can sit in the comfort of his home and post information on social media and can be seen all around the world. For instance, research conducted in 2014 indicated that hundreds of people spent hours on social media just trying to catch up with the trending news.
To sum up, the above data has made us see that, a time will come when society will no longer read on paper but will solely rely on the internet for information.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
Anwser:
It is often argued that, due to the advancement in technology people will no longer spend money to purchase newspapers and books in some time to come because the consumption of people getting access to knowledge has shifted rapidly towards the internet. This essay agrees that individuals now get information about the world and read books on the Internet without paying any fund
To begin with, it is relatively cheap and convenient to get material online. This is because one does not have to travel and spend a lot of money before one gets information. With a little cash and a click on their phone or laptop, they get an array of news around the world, as well as more options of novels to read without stressing themselves. For example, a 2013 study from Cambridge University showed that 80% of citizens prefer reading on their phones and laptops.
Moreover, online publication is cheap. In other words, it is cost-effective to publish information online since no fund is needed to purchase paper, ensure quality info is printed out, also travel for distribution. With online one can sit in the comfort of his home and post information on social media and can be seen all around the world. For instance, research conducted in 2014 indicated that hundreds of people spent hours on social media just trying to catch up with the trending news.
To sum up, the above data has made us see that, a time will come when society will no longer read on paper but will solely rely on the internet for information.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
Anwser:
It is often argued that, due to the advancement in technology people will no longer spend money to purchase newspapers and books in some time to come because the consumption of people getting access to knowledge has shifted rapidly towards the internet. This essay agrees that individuals now get information about the world and read books on the Internet without paying any fund
To begin with, it is relatively cheap and convenient to get material online. This is because one does not have to travel and spend a lot of money before one gets information. With a little cash and a click on their phone or laptop, they get an array of news around the world, as well as more options of novels to read without stressing themselves. For example, a 2013 study from Cambridge University showed that 80% of citizens prefer reading on their phones and laptops.
Moreover, online publication is cheap. In other words, it is cost-effective to publish information online since no fund is needed to purchase paper, ensure quality info is printed out, also travel for distribution. With online one can sit in the comfort of his home and post information on social media and can be seen all around the world. For instance, research conducted in 2014 indicated that hundreds of people spent hours on social media just trying to catch up with the trending news.
To sum up, the above data has made us see that, a time will come when society will no longer read on paper but will solely rely on the internet for information.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Anwser:
The young adult proponents seek independence from their household as early as possible whereas the opponents fancy staying at their parent's house for a longer period. I believe that living under the same roof with your family has some advantages.
First of all, being housed together will save you a bunch of daily expenses such as rent, utilities, and food. Instead of spending your hard-earned money on these necessities, you could invest it in asset classes like stocks and mutual funds in order to grow your wealth faster. On average, financial experts estimate that costs consist of approximately half of someone's income, especially during this season of price inflation. Thus, shamelessly downgrading your life with your parents' providence will help you soar financially.
Secondly, you can also build a more favourable kinship with your household members through day-to-day interactions and activities. A nurturing and supportive relationship is greatly impactful to young adults' views in life and performance at work. My best friend who bonds well with her siblings tends to be more cheerful and demonstrates positive behaviour towards others. At the end of the day, it's only the family who is willing to help you at your worst as blood is thicker than water. However, I do understand that not everyone was lucky enough to be born in a providing and warm household. Sometimes unexpected and poignant miseries happened like divorce and bankruptcy.
As someone with a broken family, living with either my mother or my father comes at the cost of my mental health and peace of mind. For this reason, part of me can relate to young adults who demand independence over their lives as soon as they're financially capable.
In conclusion, I stand for settling with family as the most preferable condition due to financial and relational reasons. But I do acknowledge and still respect some young adults who decide to live by themselves for they must have their own background. We can never choose in which kind of family we were born into, but we can always have a choice to build a better family of our own.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Anwser:
The young adult proponents seek independence from their household as early as possible whereas the opponents fancy staying at their parent's house for a longer period. I believe that living under the same roof with your family has some advantages.
First of all, being housed together will save you a bunch of daily expenses such as rent, utilities, and food. Instead of spending your hard-earned money on these necessities, you could invest it in asset classes like stocks and mutual funds in order to grow your wealth faster. On average, financial experts estimate that costs consist of approximately half of someone's income, especially during this season of price inflation. Thus, shamelessly downgrading your life with your parents' providence will help you soar financially.
Secondly, you can also build a more favourable kinship with your household members through day-to-day interactions and activities. A nurturing and supportive relationship is greatly impactful to young adults' views in life and performance at work. My best friend who bonds well with her siblings tends to be more cheerful and demonstrates positive behaviour towards others. At the end of the day, it's only the family who is willing to help you at your worst as blood is thicker than water. However, I do understand that not everyone was lucky enough to be born in a providing and warm household. Sometimes unexpected and poignant miseries happened like divorce and bankruptcy.
As someone with a broken family, living with either my mother or my father comes at the cost of my mental health and peace of mind. For this reason, part of me can relate to young adults who demand independence over their lives as soon as they're financially capable.
In conclusion, I stand for settling with family as the most preferable condition due to financial and relational reasons. But I do acknowledge and still respect some young adults who decide to live by themselves for they must have their own background. We can never choose in which kind of family we were born into, but we can always have a choice to build a better family of our own.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Anwser:
The young adult proponents seek independence from their household as early as possible whereas the opponents fancy staying at their parent's house for a longer period. I believe that living under the same roof with your family has some advantages.
First of all, being housed together will save you a bunch of daily expenses such as rent, utilities, and food. Instead of spending your hard-earned money on these necessities, you could invest it in asset classes like stocks and mutual funds in order to grow your wealth faster. On average, financial experts estimate that costs consist of approximately half of someone's income, especially during this season of price inflation. Thus, shamelessly downgrading your life with your parents' providence will help you soar financially.
Secondly, you can also build a more favourable kinship with your household members through day-to-day interactions and activities. A nurturing and supportive relationship is greatly impactful to young adults' views in life and performance at work. My best friend who bonds well with her siblings tends to be more cheerful and demonstrates positive behaviour towards others. At the end of the day, it's only the family who is willing to help you at your worst as blood is thicker than water. However, I do understand that not everyone was lucky enough to be born in a providing and warm household. Sometimes unexpected and poignant miseries happened like divorce and bankruptcy.
As someone with a broken family, living with either my mother or my father comes at the cost of my mental health and peace of mind. For this reason, part of me can relate to young adults who demand independence over their lives as soon as they're financially capable.
In conclusion, I stand for settling with family as the most preferable condition due to financial and relational reasons. But I do acknowledge and still respect some young adults who decide to live by themselves for they must have their own background. We can never choose in which kind of family we were born into, but we can always have a choice to build a better family of our own.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Anwser:
The young adult proponents seek independence from their household as early as possible whereas the opponents fancy staying at their parent's house for a longer period. I believe that living under the same roof with your family has some advantages.
First of all, being housed together will save you a bunch of daily expenses such as rent, utilities, and food. Instead of spending your hard-earned money on these necessities, you could invest it in asset classes like stocks and mutual funds in order to grow your wealth faster. On average, financial experts estimate that costs consist of approximately half of someone's income, especially during this season of price inflation. Thus, shamelessly downgrading your life with your parents' providence will help you soar financially.
Secondly, you can also build a more favourable kinship with your household members through day-to-day interactions and activities. A nurturing and supportive relationship is greatly impactful to young adults' views in life and performance at work. My best friend who bonds well with her siblings tends to be more cheerful and demonstrates positive behaviour towards others. At the end of the day, it's only the family who is willing to help you at your worst as blood is thicker than water. However, I do understand that not everyone was lucky enough to be born in a providing and warm household. Sometimes unexpected and poignant miseries happened like divorce and bankruptcy.
As someone with a broken family, living with either my mother or my father comes at the cost of my mental health and peace of mind. For this reason, part of me can relate to young adults who demand independence over their lives as soon as they're financially capable.
In conclusion, I stand for settling with family as the most preferable condition due to financial and relational reasons. But I do acknowledge and still respect some young adults who decide to live by themselves for they must have their own background. We can never choose in which kind of family we were born into, but we can always have a choice to build a better family of our own.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
2. The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Anwser:
These days, every time we turn on television or flicking through the pages of newspapers, we learn about the impact of social media. There are some concerns about whether these platforms eliminate the direct interaction between people and people or not. In this essay, I will look at its pros and cons and also draw some conclusions.
First of all, overreliance on social platforms can lead to fewer connections in the community. A large number of users are surfing TikTok, and Facebook on a daily basis, for example, because the core content is so highly addictive and occupies the majority of their time. As a result, those who sit still in front of their smartphone's screen gradually forget about family reunions. Besides, some advanced functions and applications allow FaceTime, which means that they can call and have a face chat at any time of the day. However, without meeting in person, online calling will sometimes lead to misunderstanding if the internet connection is not stable or individuals cannot grasp the innermost thoughts of others.
On the other hand, social networks are beneficial due to their convenience. There are some features from them that can help solve the problems, especially in case of emergency. For instance, an app called Zalo in Vietnam enables people to have a group video call even though there is no WIFI nearby, which facilitates transferring the news urgently without the need to gather. In addition, long-distance relationships are truly in high demand of support from technology to carry on online calls since they are unable to see face-to-face at that moment.
In conclusion, social media does have positives and drawbacks in daily life. Although sometimes individuals can be overattached to it hence causing fewer reactions to family and friends, I do believe that the advantages can outweigh its disadvantages owing to its flexibility and excellent support.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
2. The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Anwser:
These days, every time we turn on television or flicking through the pages of newspapers, we learn about the impact of social media. There are some concerns about whether these platforms eliminate the direct interaction between people and people or not. In this essay, I will look at its pros and cons and also draw some conclusions.
First of all, overreliance on social platforms can lead to fewer connections in the community. A large number of users are surfing TikTok, and Facebook on a daily basis, for example, because the core content is so highly addictive and occupies the majority of their time. As a result, those who sit still in front of their smartphone's screen gradually forget about family reunions. Besides, some advanced functions and applications allow FaceTime, which means that they can call and have a face chat at any time of the day. However, without meeting in person, online calling will sometimes lead to misunderstanding if the internet connection is not stable or individuals cannot grasp the innermost thoughts of others.
On the other hand, social networks are beneficial due to their convenience. There are some features from them that can help solve the problems, especially in case of emergency. For instance, an app called Zalo in Vietnam enables people to have a group video call even though there is no WIFI nearby, which facilitates transferring the news urgently without the need to gather. In addition, long-distance relationships are truly in high demand of support from technology to carry on online calls since they are unable to see face-to-face at that moment.
In conclusion, social media does have positives and drawbacks in daily life. Although sometimes individuals can be overattached to it hence causing fewer reactions to family and friends, I do believe that the advantages can outweigh its disadvantages owing to its flexibility and excellent support.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
2. The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Anwser:
These days, every time we turn on television or flicking through the pages of newspapers, we learn about the impact of social media. There are some concerns about whether these platforms eliminate the direct interaction between people and people or not. In this essay, I will look at its pros and cons and also draw some conclusions.
First of all, overreliance on social platforms can lead to fewer connections in the community. A large number of users are surfing TikTok, and Facebook on a daily basis, for example, because the core content is so highly addictive and occupies the majority of their time. As a result, those who sit still in front of their smartphone's screen gradually forget about family reunions. Besides, some advanced functions and applications allow FaceTime, which means that they can call and have a face chat at any time of the day. However, without meeting in person, online calling will sometimes lead to misunderstanding if the internet connection is not stable or individuals cannot grasp the innermost thoughts of others.
On the other hand, social networks are beneficial due to their convenience. There are some features from them that can help solve the problems, especially in case of emergency. For instance, an app called Zalo in Vietnam enables people to have a group video call even though there is no WIFI nearby, which facilitates transferring the news urgently without the need to gather. In addition, long-distance relationships are truly in high demand of support from technology to carry on online calls since they are unable to see face-to-face at that moment.
In conclusion, social media does have positives and drawbacks in daily life. Although sometimes individuals can be overattached to it hence causing fewer reactions to family and friends, I do believe that the advantages can outweigh its disadvantages owing to its flexibility and excellent support.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
2. The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Anwser:
These days, every time we turn on television or flicking through the pages of newspapers, we learn about the impact of social media. There are some concerns about whether these platforms eliminate the direct interaction between people and people or not. In this essay, I will look at its pros and cons and also draw some conclusions.
First of all, overreliance on social platforms can lead to fewer connections in the community. A large number of users are surfing TikTok, and Facebook on a daily basis, for example, because the core content is so highly addictive and occupies the majority of their time. As a result, those who sit still in front of their smartphone's screen gradually forget about family reunions. Besides, some advanced functions and applications allow FaceTime, which means that they can call and have a face chat at any time of the day. However, without meeting in person, online calling will sometimes lead to misunderstanding if the internet connection is not stable or individuals cannot grasp the innermost thoughts of others.
On the other hand, social networks are beneficial due to their convenience. There are some features from them that can help solve the problems, especially in case of emergency. For instance, an app called Zalo in Vietnam enables people to have a group video call even though there is no WIFI nearby, which facilitates transferring the news urgently without the need to gather. In addition, long-distance relationships are truly in high demand of support from technology to carry on online calls since they are unable to see face-to-face at that moment.
In conclusion, social media does have positives and drawbacks in daily life. Although sometimes individuals can be overattached to it hence causing fewer reactions to family and friends, I do believe that the advantages can outweigh its disadvantages owing to its flexibility and excellent support.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |