prasanthyss/dpo_submitted_train · Datasets at Hugging Face

###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: The unborn child may have the chance to get the disorder from his parents. ###RESPONSE:

The unborn child may have the chance to get the disorder from his parents.

The unborn child may be given the chance of getting a disorder from his parents.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: They may be denied insurance due to their disorder. ###RESPONSE:

They may be denied insurance due to their disorder.

They may have been denied insurance because they have a disorder.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: This has brought about many debates on whether the individual who undergo genetic testing should have the final say in revealing the results. ###RESPONSE:

This has brought about many debates on whether the individual who undergoes genetic testing should have the final say in revealing the results.

This has brought about many debates on whether individuals undergoing genetic testing should be given the final say in revealing their results.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: While some proponents suggest that it is the privacy of the individual who undergoes the genetic testing, but the test results might also have adverse effects to those who are closely related to that person. ###RESPONSE:

While some proponents suggest that it is the privacy of the individual who undergoes the genetic testing, but the test results might also have adverse effects to those who are closely related to that person.

While some proponents suggest that it is the privacy of the individual who undergoes genetic testing, but the test results may also have adverse effects on those who are closely related to that individual.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Hence, this affects not only the person with genetic disease, but also the life partner. ###RESPONSE:

Hence, this affects not only the person with a genetic disease but also the life partner.

Hence, this affects not only the person affected by a genetic disease, but also the life partner.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Employers can use the information acquired from genetic testing to ensure that their employees are not exposed to environmental agents that might caused them to have increase risk in genetic disorders. ###RESPONSE:

Employers can use the information acquired from genetic testing to ensure that their employees are not exposed to environmental agents that might cause them to have an increased risk in genetic disorders.

Employers can use the information obtained from genetic testing to ensure that their employees are not exposed to environmental agents that may cause them to have an increased risk of developing a genetic disorder.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: The second reason is an obligation to tell his employer about his diseases. ###RESPONSE:

The second reason is an obligation to tell his employer about his diseases.

The second reason is that an obligation to tell his employer about his diseases.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Therefore, the use of RFID to track people should be banned as it would bring about negative impacts to the society. ###RESPONSE:

Therefore, the use of RFID to track people should be banned as it would bring about negative impacts on society

Therefore, the use of RFID to track people should be banned as it would bring about negative impacts to society.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Criminals may have access to these information and this may put our life in danger as these criminals can easily harm us once they know our exact location. ###RESPONSE:

Criminals may have access to these information and this may put our lives in danger as these criminals can easily harm us once they know our exact location.

Criminals may have access to these information, and this could put our lives in danger as these criminals can easily harm us once they know our exact location.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: As such, patient's medical information may leak out, which in turn may result in social discrimination and loss of health care coverage. ###RESPONSE:

As such, patient's medical information may leak out, which in turn may result in social discrimination and loss of health care coverage.

As such, patients' medical information may leak out, resulting in social discrimination and loss of healthcare coverage.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: In conclusion, the use of RFID to track people should be banned as it will cause invasion in privacy, security breaches as well as health problems when RFID chips are implanted. ###RESPONSE:

In conclusion, the use of RFID to track people should be banned as it will cause invasion of privacy, security breaches as well as health problems when RFID chips are implanted.

In conclusion, the use of RFID to track people should be banned as it would cause an invasion in privacy, security breaches, and health problems when RFID chips are implanted.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: However, critics have been quick to point out that it is an intrusion of privacy and are calling for it to be banned. ###RESPONSE:

However, critics have been quick to point out that it is an intrusion of privacy and are calling for it to be banned.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: I believe that the benefits of RFID used in tracking people far outweigh the 'uncertain' disadvantages and thus it should not be banned. ###RESPONSE:

I believe that the benefits of RFID used in tracking people far outweigh the 'uncertain' disadvantages and thus it should not be banned.

I believe that the benefits of RFID technology used in tracking people far outweigh the 'uncertainness' problems and hence, it should not be banned.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: In conclusion, I believe that the usage of RFID in tracking human should not be banned as the advantages of its usage outweigh its disadvantages. ###RESPONSE:

In conclusion, I believe that the usage of RFID in tracking humans should not be banned as the advantages of its usage outweigh its disadvantages.

In conclusion, I believe that the usage of RFID in tracking human should not be banned as the advantages of its usage outweigh its disadvantages.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: Genetic testing is used to examine the genes of a patient or a latent patient, in order to analysis the causes of some diseases. ###RESPONSE:

Genetic testing is used to examine the genes of a patient or a latent patient, in order to analyze the causes of some diseases.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: However, with the application of genetic testing, some problems are revealed gradually, such as whether the patients should tell their families about their testing results. ###RESPONSE:

However, with the application of genetic testing, some problems are revealed gradually, such as whether the patients should tell their families about their testing results.

However, with the application of genetic testing, some problems may be revealed gradually, such as whether the patients should tell their families about their testing results.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Firstly, a couple who is planning get marry and one of them or a close relative of them has an inherited disease is advised to take up genetic testing. ###RESPONSE:

Firstly, a couple who is planning to get married and one of them or a close relative of them has an inherited disease is advised to take up genetic testing.

Firstly, a couple who are planning to get married should get married and one of them or a close relative of them has an inherited disease is advised to take up genetic testing.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: Others argued that it is unfair for the individual as the result is a kind of confidential information. ###RESPONSE:

Others argue that it is unfair for the individual as the result is a kind of confidential information.

Others argue that it is unfair to the individual, as the result is a kind of confidential information.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: The risk of giving birth to inherit genetic disease child is high and also endanger the individual by exposing himself to work environment that may be hazardous to his health. ###RESPONSE:

The risk of giving birth to an inheritable genetic disease child is high and also endanger the individual by exposing himself to work environment that may be hazardous to his health.

The risk of giving birth to an inheritable genetic disease child is high, and also endanger the individual's health.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Thus many will say the results must also be make known to his relatives even without his consent. ###RESPONSE:

Thus, many will say the results must also be made known to his relatives even without his consent.

Thus, many will say that the results must also be made known to his relatives even without his consent.

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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: In conclusion, there could be some laws pass down to settle all these ethical issues. ###RESPONSE:

In conclusion, there could be some laws passed down to settle all these ethical issues.

In conclusion, there might be some laws passed down to settle all these ethical issues.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Ultimately, it still does not solve the root of these problems and the unforeseen situations in the future. ###RESPONSE:

Ultimately, it still does not solve the root of these problems and the unforeseen situations in the future.

Ultimately, it still does not solve the root of these problems and the unforeseen situations that may arise in the future.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Thus, such use of RFID to track people should be banned. ###RESPONSE:

Thus, such use of RFID to track people should be banned.

Thus, such use of RFID to track people is prohibited.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Health concerns are also related with the use of RFID to track people. ###RESPONSE:

Health concerns are also related with the use of RFID to track people.

Health concerns include also relating to the use of RFID technology to track people.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: Furthermore, ifthe microchips react with a strong electrical or magnetic field, the implant could be destroyed and cause serious burns. ###RESPONSE:

Furthermore, if the microchips react with a strong electrical or magnetic field, the implant could be destroyed and cause serious burns.

Furthermore, if the microchips react to a strong electrical or magnetic field, the implant could be destroyed and cause serious burns.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Another social consequence would be when individuals are discriminated against in Health coverage based on their genetic make-up. ###RESPONSE:

Another social consequence would be when individuals are discriminated against in Health coverage based on their genetic make-up.

Another social consequence of discrimination is that individuals are discriminated against in health coverage based on their genetic make-up.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: While it may be difficult even for the individual to accept the results of the test, sharing the news with their relatives and friends may be the larger concern. ###RESPONSE:

While it may be difficult even for the individual to accept the results of the test, sharing the news with their relatives and friends may be the larger concern.

While it may be difficult to accept the results of the test, sharing the results of the test with their relatives and friends may be a greater concern than just accepting the results of the test.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: Therefore, with these concerns, it is important that the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing. ###RESPONSE:

Therefore, with these concerns, it is important that the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Firstly privacy is one of the worries one will have while considering whether or not to carry out genetic testing. ###RESPONSE:

Firstly, privacy is one of the worries one will have while considering whether or not to carry out genetic testing.

Firstly, privacy concerns are one of the worries that a person will have when considering whether or not to carry out genetic testing.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: This is generally known as discrimination. ###RESPONSE:

This is generally known as discrimination.

This is usually known as discrimination.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: One of them is about the privacy and confidentiality of the individual who undergo genetic testing, whether he or she should reveal the results of the testing to third parties or not. ###RESPONSE:

One of them is about the privacy and confidentiality of the individual who undergoes genetic testing, whether he or she should reveal the results of the testing to third parties or not.

One of them is about the privacy and confidentiality of individuals who undergo genetic testing for either whether they should disclose the results of the testing to third parties or not.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: There are several advantages by revealing the results of genetic testing to third parties. ###RESPONSE:

There are several advantages by revealing the results of genetic testing to third parties.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: If the genetic testing is revealed to the relatives and they end up having the same disease, they could be saved by preventing the disease to develop further more. ###RESPONSE:

If the genetic testing is revealed to the relatives and they end up having the same disease, they could be saved by preventing the disease to develop further.

If the genetic testing has been revealed to the relatives and they end up developing the same disease as before, they could be saved from developing further more.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: By allowing proper usage of surveillance technology, one could increase the level of security and safekeeping in a country as well as improving work efficiency at a workplace. ###RESPONSE:

By allowing proper usage of surveillance technology, one could increase the level of security and safekeeping in a country as well as improving work efficiency at a workplace.

By allowing proper usage of surveillance technology, one could increase the level of security and safety in a country as well as improve work efficiency at a workplace.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: The cubicles allows employees to do things unrelated to work and employers are unable to push the employees to get the work done when they spend more than half the time using the facilities available for their own indulgence. ###RESPONSE:

The cubicles allow employees to do things unrelated to work and employers are unable to push the employees to get the work done when they spend more than half the time using the facilities available for their own indulgence.

Cubicles allow employees to do things unrelated to work, and employers cannot force them to do things that they would otherwise have been able to accomplish without spending a lot of time on the facilities available for their own enjoyment.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Genetic testing is a medical test, which is used to diagnose the disorder in the genome of a person and determine if this mutation can cause a specific disease. ###RESPONSE:

Genetic testing is a medical test, which is used to diagnose the disorder in the genome of a person and determine if this mutation can cause a specific disease.

Genetic testing is a medical test that is used to diagnose the genetic disorder in the genome of a person and determine if this mutation could cause a specific disease.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: To protect the welfare of patients with genetic problem, their genetic information should not be disclosed over their objection or even without their permission. ###RESPONSE:

To protect the welfare of patients with genetic problems, their genetic information should not be disclosed over their objection or even without their permission.

To protect the welfare of patients with a genetic problem, their genetic information should not be disclosed over their objection or even without their permission.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Whereas advocates of such surveillance technologies emphasize on the benefit as to promote work efficiency and secure communal settings, opponents strike back by stating intensified concerns related to individual privacy. ###RESPONSE:

Whereas advocates of such surveillance technologies emphasize on the benefit as to promote work efficiency and secure communal settings, opponents strike back by stating intensified concerns related to individual privacy.

Whereas advocates for such surveillance technologies emphasize on the benefits as to promote work efficiency and ensure security, opponents claim that intensifying concerns about individual privacy are raised by emphasizing the benefits of increased community setting.

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###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: Sometimes criminals will be deterred if they are aware of the hidden surveillance. ###RESPONSE:

Sometimes criminals will be deterred if they are aware of the hidden surveillance.

Sometimes criminals will be deterred by knowing what is being done with their information.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: While not compromising the benefits it brings, the ethical and moral issues regarding surveillance technology far outweighs the benefits it bring. ###RESPONSE:

While not compromising the benefits it brings, the ethical and moral issues regarding surveillance technology far outweigh the benefits it brings.

While not compromising the benefits it provides, the ethical and moral issues surrounding surveillance technology far outweigh the benefits it brings

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: They are visual, audio and data surveillance. ###RESPONSE:

They are visual, audio, and data surveillance.

They are visual, auditory, and data surveillance.

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###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: This causes the employee to have low morale during work, and thus reduces work efficiency when the aim of the CCTV is otherwise. ###RESPONSE:

This causes the employee to have low morale during work, and thus reduces work efficiency when the aim of the CCTV is otherwise.

This causes the employee to have low morale during work, and thus reduces work efficiency when the aim of the CCTV is not otherwise.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Therefore surveillance technology should be banned. ###RESPONSE:

Therefore, surveillance technology should be banned.

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###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: The individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing. ###RESPONSE:

The individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing.

The individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say on whether to disclose the results of such testing.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: With the outreach of the mass media, reports of genetic disorder of an individual could be known to the world in minutes. ###RESPONSE:

With the outreach of the mass media, reports of genetic disorders of an individual could be known to the world in minutes.

With the outreach of the mass media, reports of a genetic disorder of an individual could be known in minutes.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: When they are informed by the potential risk of the mutation that could lead to a genetic disease that is also hereditary, they can undergo their own genetic test in order to determine the extent of the mutation risk as soon as possible. ###RESPONSE:

When they are informed by the potential risk of the mutation that could lead to a genetic disease that is also hereditary, they can undergo their own genetic test in order to determine the extent of the mutation risk as soon as possible.

When they are informed about the potential risk of the mutation that could lead to a genetic disease that is also inherited, they can undergo their own genetic testing in order to determine the extent of the mutation risk as soon as possible.

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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: Secondly, when the result of a particular genetic test is beneficial to the whole society, researchers have the very right to disclose such outcome. ###RESPONSE:

Secondly, when the result of a particular genetic test is beneficial to the whole society, researchers have the right to disclose such outcome.

Secondly, when the result of a particular genetic test is beneficial to the entire society, researchers have the right to reveal such outcomes.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: As we know, scientists all over the world are working together to make people life better by studying the genome of human and other organisms. ###RESPONSE:

As we know, scientists all over the world are working together to make people's lives better by studying the genome of humans and other organisms.

As we know, scientists all over the world are all working together to make people's lives better by studying the genomes of humans and other organisms.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: In contrary, the results should be shared among scientists and researchers for the whole world's sake. ###RESPONSE:

In contrast, the results should be shared among scientists and researchers for the whole world's sake.

In contrast to this, the results should be shared among scientists and researchers for the whole world's sake.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: The use of surveillance technology should not be banned because it is useful in ensuring the public safety and monitoring workplace in a company. ###RESPONSE:

The use of surveillance technology should not be banned because it is useful in ensuring the public safety and monitoring the workplace in a company.

The use of surveillance technology should not be banned because it is useful in ensuring the public safety, and monitoring the workplace for a company.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: Employees might seem to be surfing the web for business purposes at all time, but what they actually doing is personal business such as online banking, shopping and chatting. ###RESPONSE:

Employees might seem to be surfing the web for business purposes at all times, but what they actually doing is personal business such as online banking, shopping, and chatting.

Employees may seem to be surfing the internet for business purposes at all times, but what they actually do is a form of personal business, such as online banking, shopping, and chatting.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: However, monitoring can take place under suitable circumstances and to an appropriate extend. ###RESPONSE:

However, monitoring can take place under suitable circumstances and to an appropriate extent.

However, monitoring can be done under suitable circumstances and in an appropriate extent.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: Development and advancement in the field of genetic research has challenged the scientists and the public on a wide range of issues especially issue relating ethical concerns. ###RESPONSE:

Development and advancement in the field of genetic research have challenged the scientists and the public on a wide range of issues, especially ethical concerns.

Development and advancement in the field of genetic research have challenged the scientists and the public to a wider range of issues, particularly those related to the ethical concerns.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: Therefore, result of genetic testing should be revealed without the consent of the person who requested it. ###RESPONSE:

Therefore, the result of genetic testing should be revealed without the consent of the person who requested it.

Therefore, the result of genetic testing should be revealed to the person who requested it.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: Genetic testing is able to analyze whether a subject is confirm to develop or inherit a particular genetic disease. ###RESPONSE:

Genetic testing is able to analyze whether a subject is confirmed to develop or inherit a particular genetic disease.

Genetic testing can be used to analyze whether a subject is confirmed to develop or inherit a particular genetic disease.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: But are they able to inform the family members to safeguard their personal health yet not breaching the issues of confidentiality and privacy? ###RESPONSE:

But are they able to inform the family members to safeguard their personal health yet not breaching the issues of confidentiality and privacy?

But, are they able to inform the family members about their personal health but not breach the issues of confidentiality and privacy?

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: Firstly, the ethical aspect of privacy and confidentiality, need to be preserved. ###RESPONSE:

Firstly, the ethical aspects of privacy and confidentiality need to be preserved.

Firstly, the ethical aspect of privacy and confidentiality needs to be preserved.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Genetic discrimination has place privacy and confidentiality in jeopardy, because subjects have no control over their genetic makeup. ###RESPONSE:

Genetic discrimination has place privacy and confidentiality in jeopardy because subjects have no control over their genetic makeup.

Genetic discrimination has a place of privacy and confidentiality in jeopardy because subjects have no control over their genetic makeup.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: While the use of this seemingly intrusive technology is shrouded by concerns over privacy, morality and health issues, its benefits? ###RESPONSE:

While the use of this seemingly intrusive technology is shrouded in concerns over privacy, morality, and health issues, its benefits?

While the use of this seemingly intrusive technology is shrouded in concerns about privacy, morality, and health issues, its benefits?

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: One pivoting reason to why RFID should not be banned includes its application to augment public and national security. ###RESPONSE:

One pivoting reason to why RFID should not be banned is its application to augment public and national security.

One pivoting reason for why RFID should not be banned is that it can be used as a means of augmenting the public and national security.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: There are severe consequences if the results are not handled and communicate properly by third parties. ###RESPONSE:

There are severe consequences if the results are not handled and communicated properly by third parties.

There are severe consequences if results are not handled and communicated properly by third parties.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: In conclusion, the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of genetic testing. ###RESPONSE:

In conclusion, the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of genetic testing.

In conclusion, individuals who are seeking genetic testing should have the final say on whether to reveal the results of genetic testing.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: In doing so, time could be greatly minimized and many more innocent lives will be saved. ###RESPONSE:

In doing so, time could be greatly minimized and many more innocent lives will be saved.

In doing so, time could be greatly minimized and many more innocent lives would be saved.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Secondly, implanting RFID tags into ex-offenders facilitates the authorities in monitoring their activities. ###RESPONSE:

Secondly, implanting RFID tags into ex-offenders facilitates the authorities in monitoring their activities.

Secondly, implanting RFID tags into ex-offenders allows the authorities to monitor their activities.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: This helps to save innocent lives and reduce crime rate in the country. ###RESPONSE:

This helps to save innocent lives and reduce crime rate in the country.

This helps to save innocent lives and reduces crime rates in the country.

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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: Expediting the cracking of criminal cases is another point to why surveillance technology should not be banned. ###RESPONSE:

Expediting the cracking of criminal cases is another point to why surveillance technology should not be banned.

The speeding up of the crimes in the country is another point to why surveillance technology should not be banned.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: The storage of key medical records and information in a radio-transmitting chip will cut down time spent on registration and thus, allowing patients to receive prompt treatment. ###RESPONSE:

The storage of key medical records and information in a radio-transmitting chip will cut down time spent on registration and thus, allowing patients to receive prompt treatment.

The storage of key medical records and information in a radio-transmitting chip will cut down time for registration and thus, allowing patients to receive prompt treatment.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: This can prove to be vital in saving a person's live. ###RESPONSE:

This can prove to be vital in saving a person's life.

This can prove to be vital for saving a person's life.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: With the use of RFID to locate a victim, it will allow the authorities to capture the people behind such activities and provides a solution to the problem of human trafficking. ###RESPONSE:

With the use of RFID to locate a victim, it will allow the authorities to capture the people behind such activities and provide a solution to the problem of human trafficking.

With the use of RFID to locate a victim, it will allow the authorities to capture the people behind such activities and provide solutions to the problem of human trafficking.

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###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: Therefore, the use of surveillance technology on tracking people should be banned. ###RESPONSE:

Therefore, the use of surveillance technology on tracking people should be banned.

Therefore, the use of surveillance technology in tracking people should be banned.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: RFID tags can be easily put on one's clothing which information could be easily available to marketers, government agencies and criminals. ###RESPONSE:

RFID tags can be easily put on one's clothing which information could be easily available to marketers, government agencies, and criminals.

RFID tags can be easily placed on one's clothing that information could be easily accessible to marketing, government agencies, and criminals.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Furthermore, some research has shown RFID computer chips may be linked to cancer based on animal studies. ###RESPONSE:

Furthermore, some research has shown that RFID computer chips may be linked to cancer based on animal studies.

Furthermore, some researchers have found that RFID chip-based computers may be linked to cancer based on animal studies.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: For instance, a ten years-old child could undergo a genetic testing and predict the risk of getting Huntingdon's disease in middle age. ###RESPONSE:

For instance, a ten-year-old child could undergo a genetic testing and predict the risk of getting Huntingdon's disease in middle age.

For instance, a ten-year-old child can undergo a genetic test to predict the risk of getting huntingdon's disease in the middle of his life.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: This is obvious and could be imagined that when the individual discloses the information to his brother who is doing preparation for the A-level final examination, for example, the latter would be overwhelmed with stresses whereby affecting his performance during the examination. ###RESPONSE:

This is obvious and could be imagined that when the individual discloses the information to his brother who is doing preparation for the A-level final examination, for example, the latter would be overwhelmed with stress, where affecting his performance during the examination.

This is obvious; it might also be imagined that if the individual discloses the information to his brother, who is doing preparation for the A-level final examination, for example, the latter would be overwhelmed by stress, which affect his performance during the examination.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Admittedly, employers and insurers would always make a decision that benefits their corporation. ###RESPONSE:

Admittedly, employers and insurers would always make a decision that benefits their corporation.

Admittedly, employers and insurers would always have made the same decision as benefiting their corporations.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Firstly, all individuals should have the rights to make decisions that will affect their future. ###RESPONSE:

Firstly, all individuals should have the right to make decisions that will affect their future.

Firstly, all individuals should have the right to decide what they want to do in the future.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Thus, the individual requesting genetic testing should not have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such thing. ###RESPONSE:

Thus, the individual requesting genetic testing should not have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such things.

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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: In fact, large amount of government grants on surveillance technology implementation can be alternatively invested on issues of greater importance namely eradication of poverty, famine and diseases control. ###RESPONSE:

In fact, large amounts of government grants on surveillance technology implementation can be alternatively invested on issues of greater importance namely eradication of poverty, famine, and diseases control.

In fact, a large number of government grants for the implementation of surveillance technologies are also allocated to issues of greater importance such as eradication of poverty, famine and diseases control.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: By planting this device into their body, we can detect where they are in case some urgent diseases break out. ###RESPONSE:

By planting this device into their body, we can detect where they are in case some urgent diseases break out.

By planting this device into their bodies, we can detect when they are in a situation that might cause them to be in danger.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: It was reported that during the September 11 terrorist attacks, fire fighters wrote their names on their arms for fear that they would be unidentified by their family members if they are disfigured. ###RESPONSE:

It was reported that during the September 11 terrorist attacks, fire fighters wrote their names on their arms for fear that they would be unidentified by their family members if they were disfigured.

It was reported that during the September 11 terrorist attacks, fire fighters wrote their names on their arms for fear that they would be identified by their family members if they were disfigured.

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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: Nonetheless, it is more persuasive to believe that surveillance technology helps in tracking of properties and improvements in medical care. ###RESPONSE:

Nonetheless, it is more persuasive to believe that surveillance technology helps in tracking of properties and improvements in medical care.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: The tagging system is also a measure to deter the problems of having Alzheimer patients lost wandering at other places or patients collapsing outside of hospital area. ###RESPONSE:

The tagging system is also a measure to deter the problems of having Alzheimer patients lost wandering at other places or patients collapsing outside of the hospital area.

The tagging system is also a measure to deter the problems of having an Alzheimer patient losing their wandering at other places or patients collapsing outside of the hospital area.

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###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: Hence, with such surveillance technology, the risk of patients getting injured while getting lost outside can be reduced to a minimal percentage. ###RESPONSE:

Hence, with such surveillance technology, the risk of patients getting injured while getting lost outside can be reduced to a minimal percentage.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Since most couples in this competitive era have their own business or enterprise, home surveillance is then installed in order to guard their residence. ###RESPONSE:

Since most couples in this competitive era have their own business or enterprise, home surveillance is then installed in order to guard their residence.

Since most couples in this competitive era have their own businesses or enterprises, home surveillance is then installed in order to safeguard their residence.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: In conclusion, the effects of surveillance technology surrounding us are based on both major and minor premises, which are privacy and right of freedom of individuals, as well as the psychological condition. ###RESPONSE:

In conclusion, the effects of surveillance technology surrounding us are based on both the major and minor premises, which are privacy and right of freedom of individuals, as well as the psychological condition.

In conclusion, the effects of surveillance technology surrounding us are based on both major and minor premises, which are privacy and freedom of individuals, as well as the psychological condition.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Patient with this disease can be easily disoriented, hence, causing them to lose their way. ###RESPONSE:

Patient with this disease can be easily disoriented, hence, causing them to lose their way.

Patient with this disease is easily disoriented, hence, causing them to lose their way.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Although the use of surveillance technology will raised ethical concerns, to obtain important information that might save thousands of lives, there is no choice but to do it. ###RESPONSE:

Although the use of surveillance technology will raise ethical concerns, to obtain important information that might save thousands of lives, there is no choice but to do it.

Although the use of surveillance technology may raise ethical concerns, to obtain some important information that might save millions of lives, there is no choice but to do it.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In conclusion, we can impose law and limit the use of surveillance technology but we cannot ban it. ###RESPONSE:

In conclusion, we can impose a law and limit the usage of surveillance technology, but we cannot ban it.

In conclusion, we can impose law and limit the use of surveillance technology, but we cannot ban it.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: In light of this ubiquitous and accessible availability of genetic testing, many have started to question the problems that are associated to the results. ###RESPONSE:

In light of this ubiquitous and accessible availability of genetic testing, many have started to question the problems that are associated to the results.

In light of this ubiquitous and accessible availability of genetic testing, many have begun to question the problems that are associated with these results.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Patients with positive test results will be susceptible to physical and emotional stress and thus will need support from his loved ones. ###RESPONSE:

Patients with positive test results will be susceptible to physical and emotional stress, and thus will need support from their loved ones.

Patients with a positive test result will be susceptible to physical and emotional stress, and therefore will need support from their loved ones.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Genetic testing is the examination of the fundamental human genetic information, so as to access an individual's risk of contracting diseases. ###RESPONSE:

Genetic testing is the examination of the fundamental human genetic information, so as to access an individual's risk of contracting diseases.

Genetic testing is a procedure that determines the fundamental genetic information for individuals and allows them to access their risk of contracting diseases.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: However the same technology can also be used to track people and intrude private information. ###RESPONSE:

However, the same technology can also be used to track people and intrude private information.

However, this technology can also be used to track people's private information

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: The application of tracking technology has spurned heated debates from both public and private sectors. ###RESPONSE:

The application of tracking technology has spurned heated debates from both the public and private sectors.

The application of tracking technology has spurned heated debates between the public and the private sectors

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: Behavioural advertising on the other hand has invaded the individual's right to safeguard their personal information and browsing habits. ###RESPONSE:

Behavioral advertising on the other hand has invaded the individual's right to safeguard their personal information and browsing habits.

Behavioral advertising on the other hand has invaded the individual's right to safeguard his or her personal information and browsing habits.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: Genetic tests are laboratory techniques used to determine whether a person has or probability of getting a genetic disorder. ###RESPONSE:

Genetic tests are laboratory techniques used to determine whether a person has or probability of getting a genetic disorder.

Genetic testing is a laboratory technique that uses DNA to determine whether a person has or probability of getting a genetic disorder.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Individuals should maintain their rights in whether to reveal the results of such testing is so that they can protect themselves from genetic discrimination. ###RESPONSE:

Individuals should maintain their rights in whether to reveal the results of such testing is so that they can protect themselves from genetic discrimination.

Individuals should maintain their rights in whether to reveal the results of such tests are so that they can protect themselves from genetic discrimination

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Thus, to protect themselves from genetic discrimination, individuals should maintain their rights in having the final say whether to reveal results of genetic testing. ###RESPONSE:

Thus, to protect themselves from genetic discrimination, individuals should maintain their rights in having the final say whether to reveal results of genetic testing.

Thus, to protect themselves against genetic discrimination, individuals should maintain their rights in having the final say whether to reveal results of genetic testing.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Even with the improvement of the technologies related to genetic diseases, these individuals are denied of the opportunities to prevent, or even treat the genetic disease that could be present. ###RESPONSE:

Even with the improvement of the technologies related to genetic diseases, these individuals are denied of the opportunities to prevent, or even treat the genetic disease that could be present.

Even with the improvement of the technologies related to genetic diseases, these individuals are denied of the opportunities to prevent, or even cure the genetic disease that could be present.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: If the results of genetic testing are to be forcefully revealed, less people will be willing to even go for the test. ###RESPONSE:

If the results of genetic testing are to be forcefully revealed, less people will be willing to even go for the test.

If the results of genetic testing are to be forced on them, more people will be willing to even do the test

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: The concerns for safety and security have increased the number of use of the surveillance systems. ###RESPONSE:

The concerns for safety and security have increased the number of use of surveillance systems.

The concerns about safety and security have increased the number of uses of the surveillance systems

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