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06ec59833b06 | FD8A9514C8BC | Receiving opinions from multiple people can help someone decide on a better choice | Position | Adequate |
79a60b869a08 | FD8A9514C8BC | they can view the other persons perspective, | Claim | Effective |
a492c0d79440 | FD8A9514C8BC | they will get honest feedback, | Claim | Effective |
46b5f7c7d894 | FD8A9514C8BC | they might find out more information on the situation.
| Claim | Effective |
1f352a07b016 | FD8A9514C8BC | The trusted person helping you can show you how the other person might be feeling. Sometimes knowing how they feel can change your point of view on things. The friend or family member can inform you on what you did wrong. Even if the opposing person hurt your feelings, there is a high chance you have hurt them as well! If you are confused on what the problem is they can show you what it is or how it started. For me, I need to understand how the problem started before I resolve it. Understanding how the other person felt, knowing what the problem is, and realizing what you did wrong are important things the trusted people helping you can do for you to make a better choice.
| Evidence | Effective |
43dcec40ee2e | FD8A9514C8BC | They might have gone through the same thing in the past and know how to handle it. I feel a sense of relief to know that they understand what I am going through. If you are talking to a friend they will most likely already know about the situation and can help you out more than you think. Depending on how much they know, you'll have a clear understanding of what happened and feel comfortable enough to make a good decision. Another way you can get more knowledge is figuring out how you can prevent this from happening again in the future. That is something you're gonna need! Getting advice from someone who already knows about the problem, has dealt with the same thing in the past, and keeping the advice for the future are perfect reasons why you should seek advice from not just one person, but a few.
| Evidence | Effective |
851ce9b8d37f | FD8A9514C8BC | They will help you choose the best way to handle the situation. It always makes me feel better when the person giving me advice knows how to help me. The person can tell you if your choice is the best or not. You will most likely feel better after getting "the okay" from another person. Talking to a trusted person will make you feel more comfortable, especially knowing you aren't getting lied to. By then you will feel ready to make a great choice. Knowing if your decision is good or not, being told how to handle it, and talking to someone who won't lie to you will truly help you decide on a better choice. | Evidence | Effective |
12d78d69b1a2 | FD8A9514C8BC | Asking people for advice can sometimes help you make a better choice. Viewing other peoples perspective, getting more information on the topic, and getting honest feedback can help you decide on a better choice. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
d934843f1543 | FDF0AEEB14C3 | Going to school everyday can be difficult for certain students. Many kids and adults have work, sports, or medical problems that can get in the way of their learning life. This can affect the students education gravely and it can even prevent them from moving forward in their education. Although, people prefer their children to go to school where there are teachers and people who can help them, actually, it is better to have the option to learn through an online class | Lead | Effective |
ad0694ab7bb6 | FDF0AEEB14C3 | Online classes can help students who are not able to maintain the everyday school life | Position | Adequate |
eb496136077a | FDF0AEEB14C3 | because they may have certain things that can get in the way that an online class can work around like, balancing work and school, or having appointments and events at the same time school is taking place.
| Claim | Effective |
ea31017549c7 | FDF0AEEB14C3 | Every student is different and every student has a different life they have to maintain. For example, one kid may have to help support their family and is unable to attend school everyday. Even if they wanted to go the school and get an education, they have other things getting in the way. This can hold them back and hurt the education that they need to get to be able to have that steady life and career. If they were able to take an online class, that can work around their schedule, they could help their family out and also maintain an education. This shows that in certain cases online classes are needed and they should be accessible to any student that needs them. | Evidence | Effective |
711f7349914f | FDF0AEEB14C3 | Many parents and adults will argue that students will not get as much work done at home because there are too many distractions and there is not a teacher that can help them. | Counterclaim | Effective |
ef777c634560 | FDF0AEEB14C3 | This is a good point because if you are schooled online then you are more likely to get distracted from your work and do something else instead like play with your friends. Though there may be distractions at home, | Evidence | Effective |
313ce4374bb6 | FDF0AEEB14C3 | you can argue that there are many distractions at school as well. | Rebuttal | Effective |
27b745734ce6 | FDF0AEEB14C3 | At school you are in classes with many other people and many times your friends can distract you from your work. In both scenarios something or someone always has the risk of distracting you. This doesn't mean that online classes shouldn't be an option. | Evidence | Effective |
12b46838dded | FDF0AEEB14C3 | There is no harm in public schools having the option of taking school online. Online school isn't for everyone but going to school isn't for everyone either. | Evidence | Adequate |
a3316b0b4776 | FDF0AEEB14C3 | Schools should be able to accommodate to their students to be able to give everyone the best education that is accessible to them. | Claim | Effective |
78da4d4a8c9f | FDF0AEEB14C3 | In both situations students are at threat of getting distracted, but sometimes kids are more focused in their house where is is quiet | Evidence | Adequate |
19f2e38800e6 | FDF0AEEB14C3 | Some say that you won't be able to reach a teacher through online classes as much as you would in a classroom where there is always a teacher on hand. | Counterclaim | Effective |
4f50ccf12d26 | FDF0AEEB14C3 | Though you may not have a teacher in the room with you to hep tell you what to do; there are many other resources you can use now, such as YouTube,Google, and you can even email a teacher or professor and get your answers through them. | Rebuttal | Effective |
f440bb683b81 | FDF0AEEB14C3 | This shows that there may be many arguments against having online classes but there is always going to be a way you can get around them. Not everyone has to take online classes, either way, people should still be able to have that option available. | Evidence | Effective |
dc9995b62bb6 | FDF0AEEB14C3 | In conclusion, many people will argue that online classes prevent productive learning and it is better just to go to school everyday, this can actually slow down certain peoples education and prevent them from moving forward. If you have a medical problem or are unable to go to school everyday due to sports or work, you should still be able to take online classes that can work around your busy schedule and allow you to get an proper education while also doing your everyday tasks. Though there may be some areas in online classes that bring up questions like whether students will be able to get all their work done from home, there are many ways around these problems that schools should be able to figure out, to make their students educations as good as in classrooms. There are too many benefits to online classes to not consider them. Online classes will change the dynamics of education but they will change them for the better. Students should have a right to to decide whether to go to school and focus on their education in a facility that promotes learning, students should also have the option to choose whether to take online classes and focus on other aspects of their life like their career or interests. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
bf5f089e19df | FE3CA06DDCA1 | Why is it when someone asks you for advice there the one's talking most of the time? | Lead | Ineffective |
ac820a5b071d | FE3CA06DDCA1 | Here are 2 of the reasons I think that the person who asks for advice talks more than the one who is giving the advice. | Position | Ineffective |
8d66664512a0 | FE3CA06DDCA1 | they might want to give the on who is giving the advice all the info so then they can help them. | Claim | Adequate |
4c649f487587 | FE3CA06DDCA1 | they are give you as much detail as they have to give you good advice.
| Claim | Adequate |
b887de306ae7 | FE3CA06DDCA1 | They will want to give you all the information so you can probably find a solution or fix to there problem. As in this sit ions where my friend needed some advice for a test she had coming up. She was not sure what to do to study for it. She was telling me what she had to study but then she said è I donôt think these would help me muchè I told her to make flash cards out of the note she had then she did that. She was super stress. I think when your stressed you just say things that are on your mind as in you talk more. | Evidence | Adequate |
54851ec259ee | FE3CA06DDCA1 | If a person wants good advice they will want to give you all the details. If you know all the details you will most likely know how t fix it. Everyone needs so good advice because the how are they going to fix there problem. If you friend has a problem and they dont tel you all the details your not really gonna give then good advice. | Evidence | Adequate |
b7c27670f3bc | FE3CA06DDCA1 | why you need advice you will talk more then the person who is given you the advice. When you are in a problematic event you will take a lot more because yo will be most likely stressed. Also if you give all the the details of your problem you will get good advice. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
cea348b818a9 | FEF42864AE28 | During a long day at school, have you ever thought what would it be like to be home schooled? Home schooling, or distance learning, is a route that many young people choose to do as their education. Many people wonder however, how beneficial is it really for students to sit in their living room instead of the classroom? As many schools offer distance learning as an option, students can learn online or have video conferences with teachers. This could be beneficial for students to go at their own pace, however, there are more factors to both regular and online school than people may think. | Lead | Effective |
8520e8679735 | FEF42864AE28 | Technology has given education a new pathway for young people to learn and grow their future due to distance learning; however, taking classes from home is not as beneficial as learning in school | Position | Effective |
2a26c07f620e | FEF42864AE28 | due to the distractions for students at home | Claim | Effective |
3414073ceef9 | FEF42864AE28 | the lack of socialization.
| Claim | Effective |
354e864d19b1 | FEF42864AE28 | Home for many people is their comfort zone, as well as a place for people to do things they enjoy like hobies, sleep etc; home can also be a danger zone for productivity like school work because of the many distractions that the classroom doesn't have. | Claim | Effective |
39c91aae414e | FEF42864AE28 | In today's world, things like video games, cell phones, and computers fill up teenagers lives and distract them from things like homework. Schools and classrooms however, either have don't have those distractions or put limits on them to keep students working and not playing games or texting. If some people can't even complete their homework because of these distractions at home, then how will they complete their daily home schooling assignments on top of that? Student work completion would drop and their futures will be impacted dramatically. Many people, especially teenagers, need guidance and restrictions in order to get work done. Even though some students have already created that habit for themselves of getting work done, others have not and giving them an option of distance learning will be devastating for them. | Evidence | Effective |
06827a3513e8 | FEF42864AE28 | Many people may say that there is no better place than home, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
59ddb86ec706 | FEF42864AE28 | but when it comes to getting work done, there are too many distractions that home provides for distance learning.
| Rebuttal | Adequate |
3f9eea9b7b41 | FEF42864AE28 | At school, students interact with each other throughout the entire day, these social interactions are healthy as we humans require to talk and be around people; home schooled students dont nearly get half the amount of social interaction as students who attend regular school do. | Claim | Effective |
73f18bf4f58b | FEF42864AE28 | We as humans need social interaction, that is why we have friends and family because we need people around us. School provides for most of your early life friends and sometimes even long term friendships. Students who attend classes at home will not get these important early life relationships; this makes it harder for them to adapt and create relationships with people in the future when they are adults. As well as different social interactions we have whether good or bad, we learn from for the future. These interactions build social skills that are needed for the workplace. If students are not getting these key workplace skills to communicate, than it will be hard for them to succeed later in life. Regular school provides a social environment and communication to students which is imperative for later life in for the workplace; unlike home schooling where the necessary amount of human interaction is very low. | Evidence | Effective |
f5495df44ec8 | FEF42864AE28 | One major difference between regular school and home school is the pace at which student work at; home schooling does have the advantage at which students can work at their own pace, which leads to understanding the content at a better rate. | Counterclaim | Effective |
4519a570a167 | FEF42864AE28 | A significant problem in schools today, is students getting behind the pace of the class and having to rush in order to catch up. This leads to them not fully grasping the full understanding of what's being taught. Students will also tend to produce sloppier work when rushing and getting a worse grade than they could have. Home school however, does not have this problem as students can go at their own pace whether its fast or slow. This helps students get the grades they deserve instead of rushing and having them not produce their best effort. Having home schooled students work at their own pace also creates beneficial work habits due to them actually doing the full amount of work. If students are not completing the required amount of work or more, than they may start to think that it's appropriate to only give half of their best effort instead of putting the full amount of work in for an assignment. | Evidence | Effective |
35e42799f1be | FEF42864AE28 | While home school give students the opportunity to work at their own pace and complete assignments with their best effort, regular school however provides tools to do the same thing (after school, study hall, and teacher assistance). | Rebuttal | Effective |
4d8e878d993a | FEF42864AE28 | Technology is a major factor in our world today as it has both positives and negatives. It has also brought major change into the education system as now students may have an option to learn online instead of the traditional classroom. While online learning is new to education, it has also brought up the argument about whether it's more or less beneficial than regular school. Unfortunately, common problems arise with online learning that effect the young and future generations of our society. Taking classes from home may allow students to work at their own pace, but due to distractions at home and the decrease of social interaction, home schooling is less beneficial than going to regular school. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
abd14cf1ab13 | FF9E0379CD98 | Some school offer distence learning as a option for students to attend classes from home by way of line or video conferencing.
| Lead | Adequate |
11a6e326f6e6 | FF9E0379CD98 | I think is not benefit for student, that take classes online | Position | Adequate |
aa1e0cd8e3a9 | FF9E0379CD98 | dont have a teacher | Claim | Adequate |
0ae154c2131f | FF9E0379CD98 | not organized | Claim | Adequate |
1e92924f6555 | FF9E0379CD98 | dont have partner when are you take the classes online | Claim | Adequate |
6baea18af7b4 | FF9E0379CD98 | when are you take the video online you dont have a teacher for tell you what do you need do in the class | Claim | Ineffective |
409dce08ba40 | FF9E0379CD98 | him cant help in your work for example the teacher cant help with kahoot or quizlet or with others strategies of work . | Evidence | Adequate |
f6a04e6a32cc | FF9E0379CD98 | when you take the class online you dont have organized | Claim | Adequate |
625808403363 | FF9E0379CD98 | if you need highlights or pensil for write something for read it or explain your work. | Evidence | Adequate |
0ff39e8b59ff | FF9E0379CD98 | in the class you dont have partners or others people with you, | Claim | Adequate |
1f28b82aa998 | FF9E0379CD98 | are with your teacher online, but is not your confidence or your friend like in the school the many people is your frends | Evidence | Adequate |
f10ab8491ca4 | FF9E0379CD98 | the people can say you cant take the class online because you work for ten hours for this | Counterclaim | Adequate |
e8241b9934b7 | FF9E0379CD98 | but is not bad idea take the class | Rebuttal | Adequate |
74c58fcc7ef8 | FF9E0379CD98 | you cant work or cant study after school with partner. | Evidence | Adequate |
09692b158697 | FF9E0379CD98 | Conclusion: you dont are prepared for take the class online worst is a video coferencing because you dont have teacher, organized ,and partners | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
f7bb19f23dcd | FF9E0379CD98 | in the end you cant take the class because is more difficult for learn in your work. is more better take the class in the school you have more benefit how you can pass the class and more oportunities that the school have for you ,and in the school you can help new students ,and in the school you can protrude like better student in the school. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
9f63b687e76a | FFA381E58FC6 | For many people they don't like only asking one person for advice because somebody might give better advice than someone else | Claim | Adequate |
9d5bd7d86212 | FFA381E58FC6 | also people have different views and opinions on things. | Claim | Adequate |
f1b78becd573 | FFA381E58FC6 | Advice is something that can impact a persons view in many ways. It can be helpful or harmful depending on what you say. | Position | Adequate |
cc184624ca8e | FFA381E58FC6 | someone can use everything that many people said and use it to help them. Somebody might ask for an opinion of how they look, or what someone thinks of something.
The person that wants an opinion might want to ask many people because they want to know what is better to do, use, or wear. People always ask for an opinion. Some people do things based on someones' advice because they think it will be better or make the other person happy | Evidence | Ineffective |
c8a973681feb | FFA381E58FC6 | In conclusion asking for an opinion can be beneficial to someone. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
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