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In the show Sonic X, sonic asked one of his friends on how to get all 7 kaos emeralds. wait wrong story [music stops].........I meant the Japanese story The Question, the story talks about a kid, and this kid was trying to be the strongest kid to ever be ,so then the kid started to ask people how to get strong , and that was the question the question he asked him self and the choices he was going to make. another kid showed up and the kid asked the other kid "do you really want to be strong" the other kid said"yes" the ghostly kid said "you have to choices to make one is you have to 10 people 10 question about why you want to be strong the second choice is you have to slay the super dragon" the kid chose number one, the ghostly kid said "well done" .The kid went off to the mountains and asked the 10 people and after he was done he came out of the cave with the power to destroy the universe.
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You should always remember that perpendicularity of the potosytithsis crosses the bisector witch then the kinetic energy will bounce off the radios and hit the diameter witch then will colaps on the pythagerm therom,So now the genetic energy will explode like if it was uranium 232 witch then the servers will connect and create millions of nitros and million of galaxies will explode, and after that is done the microwaves fusses and make the chemical reaction witch is using thermal energy ,so then the protons,electrons,neutrons,and the nukul s combines witch then you use length times wight and also height. but i am not done yet ,so you see that 111=34=345 that is a very important number . as you can see that theses numbers connect the servers between the gaps of the potosytithsis, so then if you sad Creeper awwwww man, so we back in the mine got our pickaxes swing them side to side, side side to side , just task the gruling one hope to find some diamonds to night , night night night diamonds to night, because tonight the creepers are going to blow up our stuff tonight...[music stops] "wait a minute..... this is not time for mine craft songs" now back were i was talking about", every day people die for a unknown reason, about 10 billion die a second because of it. some say the reason was because of potatoes and the only solution is to stop the potato and the only was to stop the potato is to go the the potato tree where the magic potato will be there and the only way to stop the potatoes is to eat the magic potato the heroes will face 0 challenges for 2+2 is 4 - 1 thats 3 quick maths.
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Now what did we learn today. that some types of people have good advises and some people don't witch is very sad
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another thing we all learned from reading this is that you can't trust people on this earth, and how you can't trust humanity, and we all learned that every war was a mistake , and we all learned that the government just wants peoples money.1919, almost to the end,1894, close to the beginning of the mad world and this was another reason people ask for advice,
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you see secretly i was showing examples of people asking advice to other people, another reason of why would people ask meany other people for advice its because the person asking needs help in some way, or it needs the right advice for the right thing it wants.
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The person might be asking for a advice but they give the person wrong one so the person will go to a different human and ask for a different advice. people listen to get smarter and by liaising to a good advice the person will know what to do and whet not to do. one advice would be "it is not strength that wins for its skill that matters" that is also a quote so its pretty much the same.
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Always remember that the perpendicularity of the potosytithsis crosses the bisector witch then the kinetic energy will bounce off the radios and hit the diameter witch then will colaps on the pythagerm therom,So now the genetic energy will explode like if it was uranium 232 witch then the servers will connect and create millions of nitros and million of galaxies will explode, all of these thing combined will make the Mississippi river,BUT I'M NOT DONE YET, after that is done the microwaves fusses and make the chemical reaction witch is using thermal energy ,so then the protons,electrons,neutrons,and the nukul s combines witch then you use length times wight and also height so then the electrons can symthisissize the H2O so then it connects the pontentchal energy and kinetic energy to fuse ,and to cause a rerefration to cause a refraction to case a reflection. The diameter of the cercumfrance gets cut into a cubic meter ,witch then goes 9,233,525,623,6326,464,999,000 miles per second . It then hits the hit box from the perpendicular outer space to hit the chromosomes witch then the American dictator takes over the plant bye.
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Imagine you cannot give birth but you can adopt
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Seeking multiple opinions can help make a better choice
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not every time that your deciding what to do is better,
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when you decide on something you think about it over and over again so many times,
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when you only ask one person they may sometimes not have some advice to give you.
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It is hard deciding on something, however asking to get multiple advice/opinions is hard too. Multiple pieces of advice are very helpful and can make you more sure of what you are going to do
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First of all it depends on the situation you are having. Second, having second guesses on the last minute is very normal since you can't go with one you go to the other. When you really do not have anybody to ask advice to all you could do is maybe go online and do some research, but you could also do it if you have someone." Better choices, better plans go to together like ham and cheese." This could be one of many things you could have heard when you are asking for advice from other people that you do not talk to a lot or hang out with much.
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Different people give very different advice sometimes
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Never the less it actualizes between the people you hang out with or talk to the most. Sometimes those trusted persons will find a way to stop you or tell you to not do it or say etc. But you should go for it, the possibilities for it coming true or false is a 50/50 chance. However, keep in mind that people act different when there is something in it for them. So never ever negotiate what it takes to just give you advice since they are too insecure about letting you know what they feel about you. The best choice that you can have are your parents. Some may try to hurt you and some may try to help if they know the struggle you are going through then it will be no problem into helping you.
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When you decide something it stays in your file mind until it pops up and says "alert late notification" years later ad after that you just do not know what to do and keep it in mind for days or even months, years, decades, etc. It is very strange for a human to do that but there are some cases when there are. It is difficult to human for them to just automatically say yes, when they are in a strained situation
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. It will not help to make a better choice if you keep thinking about it, it will just get worse. Maybe, when you have found your piece of advice you were looking for just act fast before it is too late.
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Because when people are trustworthy of the advice and/or opinion they gave you, it will tell when you look at them in the eyes.
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It is better seeking multiple opinions because it will help you figure out what you need the most. Now you can do what you think is right with the advice of others combined and act. Also if that person you really trusted is off the chart just tell them you appreciated the advice and break the connection with them. Maybe some of the advice they give you might sound hideous but it is promised that it could have worked later on. At least it is not hurtful like giving birth, although you cannot. 
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You've been accepted to two ivy-league universities, but you can only go to one. You're torn between the two and don't know what to pick. Your intuition says to go to the first one because it has a better program, but it's also nearly twice the cost of the second one. Which do you choose? This problem is common for many in our country. While it may not be about picking a school, we constantly comes across two choices, but can only choose one. Many of these choices do not matter, but during important times, they must be deeply thought about. All benefits and downsides have to be taken into consideration, but these factors don't need to be tackled alone. One can always use advice from your parents or mentors because asking it will always make an action easier.
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When making a decision, seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice.
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looking for multiple opinions will make one more knowledgeable about their options.
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the Micheal Scott Institute of Human Services, an American group aimed at providing mental health information, states that when a person has at least two opinions on a decision, 88% of people make a choice that isn't regretted. In other words, when someone gains more information on something, they're bound to make a good choice. With most students having access to a mentor, they can be taught to make smart decisions for themselves, something that not every person has the knowledge to do. This will impact their lifestyle as an adult and make them conscious about their choices, knowing that if they need a second opinion, they have one. Adults often feel like they can only trust themselves with decisions, but it can't hurt for someone to give you their opinion. In addition, according to an interview with high school student Marie Dongle on NBCNews, the largest news station in the United States, she became pregnant during her junior year. Marie was intelligent and had a big future ahead of her, but this was a major setback for her acting career. As a result, she got many opinions from her mentors and parents who were all in her best interest. Therefore, she decided to abort it. Marie says, "It was the best decision I've ever made, and it was all because of the amazing community that helped me." She now has her own talk show aimed at helping girls in similar situations. To rephrase, after asking other people about what she should do with her baby, Dongle aborted it so she could have the future she wanted. Taking care of a baby is a difficult and exhausting job to do in your teen years, and Marie knew that she first had to learn how to take care of herself. This wouldn't have happened if it weren't for her supporting community around her. Gaining knowledge about a choice before you make it is crucial to becoming a rational decision maker and making smart choices.
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trying to make a decision alone can cause physical and mental harm.
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In fact, the FDA, the national food and drug administration, says that when many teens are excruciatingly stressed, they can turn to brain suppresents to keep their mind off of it. Brain suppresents include items such as vapes, juuls, cigarettes, or alcohol. When a student makes a decision alone, they become increasingly stressed, which can possibly cause them to make unsafe decisions and unknowingly harm themselves as a way to get away from it. Teens shouldn't have the burden of having extreme amounts of stress because they're still young and learning the ways of our ever-changing world. The reason these teens form habits like these can only be because of our corrupt system of mental health in both schools and our country. Enough measures are not taken to ensure that actions like these are not to happen, and who's fault is that? It's certainly not that of the student in need. Famous philanthropist Oprah Gates says, "It's not the fault of a child for hurting themselves, it's the adults. They fail to provide a safe world for their kids." Adding onto the previous statement, the CDC, the US national health organization, states that 65% of people who decide to make their own decisions, typically introverted teens, results in high cortisol levels or chronic depression. High cortisol levels are released when one is stressed and can cause osteoporosis. To clarify, going solo when making choices can cause long-term depression and other illnesses. This type of problem is very small and easily avoidable by simply asking for advice and can make a large difference in our physical and mental health.
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asking for help when making a decision to make a better choice can cause better mental health.
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Surprisingly, OOPS, an organization aimed at informing people about health improvements, reports that nearly 99% of students that received help from social workers while making a decision about what classes to take increased dopamine levels in their brain, which caused them to not only feel less stressed, but more happier and confident. That may seem far-out, but it's true! By simply knowing that someone can guide you to a right path can improve your mental health. In our modern world, many factors such as bullying or poor self image can cause a student to feel depressed or alone, but by making strong decisions, it can rejuvenate their spirits and cause them to work and thrive. If 99% of students resulted in stronger mental health and less stress, then one can practically say that getting help to make decisions can result in both a good choice and a better person.
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it's clear that asking for opinions while making a decision can truly help someone pick a better choice. It educates them about their choices, increases self esteem, and could cause physical and mental harm if not done. It's important to have your opinions be heard about this topic because it's important to many people across the nation.
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In the vast idea of being right or wrong, an individual can easily be swayed or unsure whether something is just the way they wanted it
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In this case, and many others, seeking outside advise or help can solve this problem
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Not only can seeking help create a better understanding for the person who was unsure of something
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but it can also relieve stress and anxiety, which is a major component of a decision about to be made
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Also, a further benefit of asking for outside help, is for the well-being of others. If this decision could affect the lives of other individuals, its only common sense to be one hundred and one percent sure before making that decision, and what better way to be one hundred and one percent sure than asking the advice of others.
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Seeking understanding is a huge skill that many don't have and is a skill many should develop.
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Asking someone a simple question like "Is this good to go?" can truly impact someone's mindset of how to deal with problems, and can give them strong advice of how to handle the problem they currently have. Multiple pieces of advise would make an even bigger impact on a person and give them more understanding of what others think. Because of this they will be more prepared, and have a different mentality for future problems. From my personal experience, I can relate to having others critic and check my work because I know the helpfulness and understanding I get, can make a real impact on me.
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It has been proven that stress only causes harmful and emotional side effects to individuals. So, why not remove it? That is exactly why simple checks on your work, or something you may be unsure about can make a real impact. As stressful as everyday human lives can be, there's no harm done in taking a little out of your time to ask others about your situation and how to deal with it. Being more sure on something can cause an individual to worry less and end up making better decisions. Maybe you have a huge decision coming up like a proposal. You need to be absolutely sure and know it in your gut that this is the right decision to be made, and asking others can help you know that you are making the right decision or you are making the wrong decision
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The more advice someone has, the more confident that someone can be, and can have less stress going through with that decision.
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If you live by the motto "Put others before yourself" it is critical to understand that the decision you make could negatively affect others, as well as yourself. An example of this is smoking marijuana. By doing this, you could be causing others to be doing it as well, just because you are doing it. You could be at a legal age, but marijuana is still bad for you as well as others. Asking your friends if they are okay with it and if it is a good decision, can cause you to realize that in the long run, it is a bad and not a thought-out decision. Like said before, other people's lives are also important and seeking help before a decision, to make sure that it is good and well-thought out, can make a true impact in others.
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Also, as modern day society is getting bigger and bigger, and people are becoming more reliant on safety, it is extremely important to ensure and provide safety for each individual, and asking for other's advice can ensure you that your decision is safe and responsible.
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All people strive to do what's right, whether it be doing right toward others, or to yourself. Doing right toward others and yourself doesn't just mean getting good grades or achieving an award, but it means doing the right thing. Asking others for advice can ensure that you are doing right toward others and yourself. When doing this, you can seek out understanding of the problem you are facing, which can be an important skill for people to have. Throughout asking others for advice, you can relieve stress by knowing what you did was right, and you can be assured that what you are doing is safe and responsible, which won't have side effects that could harm or hurt others. A simple skill, asking others for help or advice, can truly make in impact in others and yourself.
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"I stayed up all night listening and asking for advice to fullfill my dreams, while you went out and partied, not caring for yours." ~ JeonJungkook.
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Normally getting more advice from people is a good thing because you can choose from multiple points of view.
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Everyone is entitled to their own opinion, you might not like it but it's true.
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Advice comes in many different ways
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Jeon Jungkook, a famous korean singer has made it all the way to where he is now with the advice of his seven group members, he was young when he auditioned maybe 15 or 16. He was in a really bad place at the time, failing highschool, going through finance problems, not being able to talk to people well because he was scared or shy, but he listened to his close friends that hes known for years, and he passed highschool, he's making millions, and he's overcome his fear of talking to people due to many fan meet-and-greets. Someone else who followed advice is Min Yoon - Gi he is one of Jung kooks members, Yoongi was going through really hard times, his parents were having finacial problems and they were mistreating him because he wanted to be a music producer. He was kicked out of his parents house at age 16, he went and moved in with his friend Kim Seok jin, who was also a music producer, Yoongi suffered from depression and anxiety, he spent half of his time asking for Seok jin's advice because he was older and had a lot of experience with these kinds of problems. He listened to all the advice he got from his friends, and now he's in a band with all his friends as his members under a big compony called BigHit Entertainment and he's also a solo artist making millions off of songs and albulms, and he gained his families respect for being sucsessful and fullfilling his dreams even with all the things they put him through.
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Reciving advice can come differently for each person, some can be good advice, or some could be bad advice.
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You can tell good advice from bad advice by seeing how the person is saying it, do they look suspicious, are they being positive and happy, are they making eye contact, are they facing you at all times and relly listening to what you need help with, sadly not all advice will be helpful, this can be caused by going to the wrong people for help or interpreting the advice wrongly. Always go to the people you have known for advice, friends, family other close people. Don't just go to a random person that you've only known for a few months because most likely, they know nothing personal about you, they know nothing about what is going on in your life, and when your sad and need advice they might be there for you but not give you good advice. When you're sad you're really vonurable and will most likely listen to anything someone says is good advice, when in reality it's really not. If you go to the wrong people you are giving them a chance to overpower you because they know if they make the advice seem real enough you will believe it and do it just because they told you to. That's not good advice.
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you can always learn new things from getting advice frome different people.
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Good advice can lead you in many different places, you could be a singer under a big compony making a lot of money, or you could get a good paying job, some good advice can come from music, I know a few lines that halp me get through my darkest days. Some of them are; "let them be them, let us be us."-BTS "count one, two, three, take my hands now and close your eyes, ill lead you through the dark." -BTS "you got me, even in your darkest days, I got you, to be the light to shine my path on this dark narrow road." "just one day can we forget about all the fights and pains of the world, just one day."-BTS " all of those lyrics have uplifted me and made me feel positive about myself, they shaped me into the person I am today, and that's all because they put their life problems and all they advice they have to give into music, so people like me who are going through problems can read it and see that they went through the same things, so they can let us see that it gets better in the end and that we dont need to wait for good to come to us because we are good. If you listen to good advice from good people you most likely will always be in a happy positive mood and feel proud of the person you let that advice shape you into. While if you listened to bad advice and stayed with the wrong friend group it could lead you to spending your life behind bars or doing comunity service. You need to make the right chioces and be with the right people and listen to good advice if you want to make it anywhere in life.
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take the advice form people but pick out the good advice and leave the bad advice out, talk to your elders for advice, they've been through what your going through. think about you're friend group and if they're good for you're future. 
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The day of election for the next Commander in Chief of the United States is rapidly approaching, and voters are prepared to place their votes in a ballot to determine the next president. However, would if this election was altered. This altered election is different, as only the current president may choose who the next Commander in Chief may be, instead of the public. This could arise controversy among the public, as seeking multiple votes on the next president is more beneficial than only having one person determine who it will be. There will also be multiple opinions on who the next president should be, not only one.
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Having multiple opinions on any matter is vital to fairness, and giving people a word on how they feel on any certain situation, such as voting.
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Having multiple opinions is vital in any vote, as a vote could not be held on any matter without having multiple choices when voting. Votes held around the world all have multiple choices for one distinctive reason, everyone has their own opinion. You wouldn't want one person to make one gigantic, and very important decision on behalf of other people, as other people could have different views on the situation or issue. For example, the Chief Executive Officer of Amazon has decided to halt all production of the Amazon Echo smart speaker. However, the workers disagree with his opinion, and they decide hold a vote instead, so everyone can have their say in what they believe is right for their company. After the vote is completed, and the all of the votes are tallied up, all of the workers voted in favor of continuing product of the Amazon Echo smart speaker, instead of halting production as their Chief Executive Officer was first intending to do.
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multiple opinions is also very useful for receiving advice from people.
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If you were walking along the old, dirty, and muggy sidewalk of New York City, and you found someones lost purse laying in some saturated mud, you'd ask someone for advice, to determine where you would bring the purse. Let's say you ask one person, "Where should I bring this purse?" and they respond with, "Bring it to the recipient of the purse." You would take their advice, and try to find the owner of the purse. However, it turns out you could not find the owner of the purse, so you proceed ask another citizen strolling along the sidewalk, "Where should I bring this purse?" The citizen responds with, "Bring it to the lost and found, the employees will take it from there." You then bring the purse to the lost and found, and the employees take care it. In theory, if you only asked one person for advice, you would be scavenging New York City all day looking for this one lady. Since you asked multiple people for advice, you found a solution to your problem, and brought it to the lost and found building nearby.
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Citing your sources is always important when doing a project so you do not get plagiarized for what you wrote, but how do you know the sources you use are telling the truth?
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Let's say you are writing an essay about why the Dinosaurs became extinct on Earth. It is proven that they were killed by an asteroid, however, you didn't know that at the time, so you looked up, "How were the dinosaurs killed off?" After processing your search, the search engine produced many results containing articles, newsletters, and much more about why the dinosaurs when extinct. You clicked the first link you found, and paraphrased what the article said. The article mentioned that the dinosaurs were killed by rhinos that were killing the dinosaurs for food. You continued to write down what the article stated, until you wrote as much as you could. Right before you were about to submit, you had a gut feeling there was more to it, so you looked up four other articles that all stated, "Dinosaurs were killed by an asteroid." This situation is an example of researching multiple views and opinions on how the dinosaurs went extinct, and why seeking multiple opinions will benefit you.
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Seeking multiple opinions for a better outcome is always the right choice opposed to one opinion.
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Receiving multiple opinions or views on any matter will positively effect the situation. Multiple opinions are used in all circumstances, such as voting, clarification, and debates. Without sharing advice or giving things a second thought, this world could be a whole lot different than it is now.
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when people ask for advice, they somtimes talk to more than one person seekeing other opinions can lead to so many things, people ask other people on advice to know what to do or the better disision to make
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people aks for advice for a reason it is rather they don't know what to do so they ask for advice or it is rather they know what to do but they wanna make sure they have made the right disision so they ask other people on their opinion they had and ask other people is their opinion right or should they go with somthing else. Well people would tell you if your opinion is the right thing to do or it the bad thing to do so we are going to have to come up with somthing different, lets say if someone is in a bad situatuion like as someone accidintly hit someones car in a parking lot trying to get in a parking spot,should you wait until that person comes back and then he or she arrives then you apologize and try to work somthing out with that pesron or should you just forget about the car you hit and go away, so that is an example for why people need advice on what to do because they dont know what to do.
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Making the right disision can also sometimes can lead to good thing making th right disison can get many people out of trouble and a lot of other good stuff too.
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"The more the merrier" is an iconic quote that nearly everyone has either used or heard in person. Now, this quote could refer to anything; more cats, more dogs, more trumpets, or more frogs. In this case, the quote is referring to the number of people advice is taken from. Sure, one person could give outstanding advice, but diversified perspectives are always helpful.
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For example, you're the quarterback of your football team and one of your teammates (a wide receiver) is advising you to launch the ball down the field to them. If you had only listened to this one piece of advice and chucked the ball down the field, the odds of you throwing an interception and having an angry coach would have been very high. The opposite could have been said if you would've taken advice from multiple people to rule out one person's bad advice and gave yourself a higher chance of a more favorable outcome. Another example of this would be if you were getting chased by an alligator. Let's say 3 or 4 of your friends had said to just run as fast as you could and hope for the best when you were discussing this a few weeks ago, and a few adults, including your parents, told you to run in a zig-zag pattern because alligators are much less agile on land than in the water. You started off by following the advice of your friends, but quickly notice that the alligator is gaining on you, so you desperately switch to plan "b" and begin to run in zig-zags. The alligator gives up and returns to the lake. Had you limited yourself to one perspective, you would've ended up as a headline on CNN, but since you had multiple perspectives in the back of your mind, you were able to fall back on that previously stated "plan b" and make it out with your life.
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Additionally, one person may feel a strong way for or against the topic that you're wanting advice on, so having multiple perspectives on a topic will rule out that first person's biased advise, whether it was intentional or not. For example, you might be thinking about playing football (American Football) in high school, but one person begins to change your mind because they start giving you a whole bunch of one-sided, exaggerated stories about injuries caused by football, simply because they don't like the sport. Although you agree that the sport can be dangerous, you decide to get some different views on it. You go and talk to the head coach of the team, and he tells you that these injuries can be easily avoided with proper technique, mature decisions, rather than recklessness. You go to your parents as one final source of advice, knowing that they'll be neutral and unbiased. Upon receiving all of this advice, you can then make a well-informed decision on what and what not to do because you can detect the bias in the advice, now that it would act as an outlier in a larger collection.
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This is not to say that all individual solutions are completely ineffective and useless on their own, but rather to say that when they do come up short on their own, they can be combined to generate a better, more effective solution. Take the civil rights movement of the 1950s and 1960s as an example. There were many influential activists such as Martin Luther King Jr., Malcolm X, and John Lewis that provided efficient, nonviolent solutions to try and end the racist descrimination that had held them down for so many centuries. These ideas were combined and formed the Civil Rights Movement that, after 14 years, resulted in success. Another example of such combination would be the millions of people working against global warming. Many people and organizations are starting to bring their ideas and perspectives together to combat what is turning out to be, arguably, one of the most important issues that humanity has ever faced. No matter how good the solution is, no one solution could solve a problem of such a magnitude. Rather, a large chain of solutions cooperating with each other would be needed. This is because the reason the issue has grown to such a large size is because it is made up of many smaller issues.
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Diversity in perspective is greatly important because it gives you multiple solutions to a problem, eliminates the bias of a few people, and can be combined to former a stronger, more effective solution. If one was to only take one proposed solution, they may be left stranded if that solution doesn't work with no secondary option to fall back upon. Furthermore, there are often biased advice-givers who can mislead someone looking for genuine advice. Getting a larger amount of perspectives will push that outlying bias to the surface and allow you to avoid it. On the other hand, some strategies may not be effective enough or simply ineffective on their own, but can form a better solution when combined with each other. All in all, advice is always more useful in a greater collection size, rather than coming from just one source that may or may not be biased. "The more the merrier."
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When people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one person, and they do that
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you can see different view points
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it will help you decide on a better choice,
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if you only talk to one person they may not give you good advice.
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Seeing different points of you view is very important when it comes down to choices, and that could be choices that might change your life
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What i mean by different points of views is different ways of seeing things, because one person might only think one way about a choice. Asking multiple people really help you see things in ways you might not have thought about. If you only ever asked one person what they thought about a situation you might only ever think one way because you aren't expanding the thought process if you only look at it in one way.
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Another reason why you should ask multiple people for advice is the fact that then you can make your decision based off of the advice you received.
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When asking multiple people for some advice (whoever you do ask) they might tell you things that are good, but they might also tell you things that can be bad. Thats why asking more than just one person can be beneficial. There are always two outcomes of a decision, and most of the times it comes down to being between a good and a bad outcome. So make sure that you think hard when you make your decision, and pay attention to what advice the people give you and some of the things they say to you, because making a good choice can be pretty especially with things like pure pressure. Make sure you ask more than one person, because it can be the deciding outcome of a good or bad choice.
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My last reason that you should talk to multiple people is that if you do only talk to one person they might be a bad influence on you, or they might only give you one way of thinking.
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My point is that you should try asking a different amount of people you trust and that you know give good advice. Try asking more adults or people older because 9/10 they will give you better knowledge and advice of a situation, and thats because they have lived longer and they are most likely wiser than other kids your age. Ask close family members, and the people who know you the best, but also make sure that they are being mindful at the same time.
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making the right choice can be difficult, but if you remember to ask the people you trust, look at the decision and see it in different perspectives, and make sure to make a good choice then deciding on a decision or choice won't be all that hard.
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Pop! Great, now there's a hole in the ceiling. My friends should have listened to me when I told them we should've done this experiment outside. When people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one person
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. Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make better choices
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people have different experiences,
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people can give good, bad, or biased advice.
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people have different experiences
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Not all experiences go down the same way. One time when I went to a zip line park, I asked my friend who has gone zip lining if it was scary. She said it was exhilarating and was terrified but told me to do it. On the other hand, my other friend claimed he hated it and didn't recommend that I do it. In the end, my other friend twisted my arm and convinced me not to do it. I had missed out on a really big first experience, and now I regret letting him convince me. Different people have different experiences that are either good or bad.
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some people give good advice, while others give poor advice
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People can give pretty biased advice to others, which in turn affects other people. My sister asked for advice on making new friends. I told to tell her to just be herself, and hang around with people that share similar interests. When she asked our dad the same thing, he told her that friends don't matter once she become an adult, and if she wants to be a successful person, friends will just bring her down. Poor advice and false assumptions can lead to poor decision-making.
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different perspectives can help someone get a feeling of what is going to happen.
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Every time I try something new, I try to ask multiple people about their experiences. For example, when I was starting orchestra in middle school, I asked an eighth grader about her experiences in the advanced ensemble. She said that it was really exciting to work with different people that share the same talent and appreciation of music. Her favorite part about being in orchestra was going on field trips to different places and getting to play at different schools. People like and dislike certain things, but that shouldn't make someone feel like they can't try new things, even if they think they dislike it.
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Overall, people giving good advice and seeing different opinions and perspectives can help people make better decisions, especially if they ask multiple people. Advice shouldn't be one-sided either. If someone gives advice that is biased, he or she should go find someone else to ask. When someone asks for advice and the person giving advice is not a good person, he or she probably shouldn't listen to him or her. Seeking advice from multiple people can help someone make better choices.
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Why do most people ask one or more than one person for advice?
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In my opinion is because the person who is seeking for advice
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has one already but wants to hear what another person says about the situation
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hey want to learn from other people who been in the same situation as them
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they just might not know what to do in that situation they are in.
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some people just want to hear the same advice they have already
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