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When people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one person. If someone was to have an issue, they could ask a group of people they trust like their family and hear their opinions to help them out.
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you can compare and see which one you like best,
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if you hear something more than once, you are more likely to start agreeing with what the person says,
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maybe the people you ask have gone through the same thing and you can predict the outcome of the situation before it happens.
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Someone could give you some advice that seems kind of sketchy but if you don't ask anybody else so then you might do what they told you to and the situation can end up even worse than what it was when you started. A better choice would be to not just ask one person but instead asking many different people to see which one you are most comfortable with and that suits you and your personality. Say you were a shy person and you ask someone that's almost the exact opposite of you and the advice they give you is kind of bold and out there which isn't who you are so you would ask another person who might have a more conservative piece of advice and choose to listen to them and everything works out because you were more comfortable with the conservative idea which you may not have gotten unless you asked more than one person.
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Say you were asking your friends opinion on something you want to get and they all start saying that is was pretty and that it looked good, you would be more reassured to buy that item because more than one person said that they like it. Studies show that people will agree with or do something if more than one person says it. When you hear the same piece of advice more than once, your brain encourages that piece of advice because hearing it over and over is a sign that maybe it will work and that you should listen.
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If you were to ask your mom to help you with getting a boy to like you and then you ask your aunt or your grandmother but after you ask them what the outcome was and your aunt was the only one who ended up being with that person, you would do what your aunt said instead of your mom and grandmother because their advice didn't work out in the long run and your aunts did.
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In conclusion, asking many different people that you trust for their opinions can help someone make a better choice because you can decide on which piece of advice fits you and your personality best, you might hear it twice so then you might start agreeing with what that person said to do, and asking many different people can help you predict what might happen if you were to do the same thing that person did. 
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Imagine that your best friend wants you to come to their late night birthday party, however your family wants you stay for their weekly movie night, who will you spend time with? Everyone will have to make an extremely tough decision in their life; they might go to a friend, companion, or a family member, to receive advice so he or she can make the correct choice.
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when making a decision, you have to evaluate the positives and negatives of the choices you have.
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People tend look at either the brighter or darker aspects of a side and may neglect the other critical aspects of that side resulting in a unpleasant aftermath but if you take the time to review both sides you will have a more pleasant result. One side of the argument may have more positive outcomes than the opposing one, however measuring the amount of pros and cons a side has is not a good idea because even though a side may have more minor flaws the other side may have a single major flaw. Looking at the positives and negatives of a side is crucial for making the right the choice because generally everyone wants a positive or an outcome that is appealing to them, and the flaws help draw a fine line between what is better choice. As a result looking at the positives and negatives of your choices helps you make the right decision.
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when asking one person advice they may or may not provide accurate information or they might even fib in front of you so asking multiple students, teachers and friends will help you determine facts from lies
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Some people may know information that others may not know, however groups of people may think a like and may give the same response when asking for their opinion and if some answer is constantly reoccurring then it is most likely true. People can be more biased than others so you can cut the parts of their opinion that has a information that is exaggerated by he or she and tie it other people's opinions to get more accurate responses. When scientist do experiments they do multiple trials and compare the results to get precise results; you can asking multiple people and jotting down notes to compare later similar to what scientist do will help you have better pin point evidence. Accurate information is important in making sure you receive proper evidence to making better choice.
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everyone is different; we all see and have a different perspective, asking multiple people helps anyone interpret the argument in a different way.
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Humans generally dont think the same, we may view topics, places, and people different, for example your friend may not like hockey, but your dad does like hockey; both sides have reasons why they might like or hate something or might choose one side but not the other. Looking at one side of an argument will only leave holes in your information, however when asking someone for their view point they can help fill in the missing evidence and change the way you might think about about the choices you have. A rock with two sides; the appearance of the front side of the rock is rusty, dirty, and broken down, however on the back side of the rock it is filled with divine, regal, and elegant looking crystals and the stone looks very shiny, clean, and transparent; a person may see the unpleasant side of the rock but they can change their perspective to see a magnificent jewel; people may see think and stick to their opinion however if they change their perspective they can see a whole different side to their choice, and opinion. Asking someone for their opinion helps anyone view all aspects of many other peoples' opinion; to lead he or she into making a better choice.
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Communicating with your peers will help you learn the positives and negatives of each side, clarify precise evidence from misleading information, and see the point of view from other people around you. So if you ever have a tough decision to make ask your friends, brothers, and sisters for their opinion. I decided to go to my friends late night birthday party and to bring my family as well.
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When asking for advice it is beneficial to ask multiple people. Each person is different and can have different opinions and view points. When you get multiple opinions you get a variety of different answers and ideas that you can use.
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Many people grew up different ways, in different places, and with different people around them. This can impact the way people think about things. According to a study, 90% of people who grew up in poverty know how important getting a job and being able to provide for others is. They know the importance of this because they grew up without it. For example when I was at a beach and I was debating whether or not I should use my money on ice cream or a sand bucket so I went around asking people what I should purchase. I went up to a man who was not from America and asked him what I should get and he said that since he didnt have ice cream in his home country, I should get that. The man didnt have ice cream in his country so his background influenced his decision to tell me what i should get.
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Everyone's experiences are different even if they did the same thing. This can influence what they tell you. A study has shown that people who have had fun doing something are more likely to give positive advice, and those who have not had a good experience are more likely to give negative advice. When someone has had not good experiences with something will probably not recommend you do that same thing where as if someone has had a good time doing something they might recommend it. For example when a friend of mine was preparing to go on vacation to Florida, he was wondering if he should take a plane or drive. Many people he asked said that when they had been on planes they were not pleased with the comfort ability of them and that he should drive. Others said that in their experiences of being on a plane where quite enjoyable and that driving would be very long and boring. Each person has a different experience and has different advice to give you.
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Each person interprets everything you say differently and think about things differently. for example I was wondering if I should start writing an essay now or wait a little bit and brain storm. I asked my mom and dad what I should do and my mom said that I should think and do a little bit of it now, then later go back check it and do a little bit more. I didn't even think of doing that and it goes to show that asking multiple people can provide new ideas and ways of thinking. According to a philosopher if man gets caught up with work and close his mind to other ways of going about it, he will need someone else to open it for him. this explains that different opinions can help one open their mind to different things and make better decisions
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getting advice from multiple people is beneficial because all people have different backgrounds, different experiences, and have different ways to think about things. Multiple opinions help you make a better choice because you can see what other people think about a certain thing. Getting multiple opinion can also help you a chance to think of something in a way that you didnt think about. If you ever need advice in the future, ask multiple people about it and make your decision from there.
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How can seeking multiple opinions help someone make a better choice? Throughout our lives we are forced to make decisions and choices everyday. These decisions can range from deciding what to eat for breakfast, all the way to really important ones such as what career path to choose. However, when we make these decisions we do not only make them by ourselves.
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Many of these choices that we make can affect other people. For example, making a big decision such as whether or not to go to college affects multiple people. A major decision like this has both pros and cons to the argument. When we talk to other people about a decision like this, they help us understand the benefits to making a certain choice and the negatives. According to a recent study, people are more likely to make smarter choices and decisions when they work in a group. This is because every single individual in that group is given multiple points of view to base their decisions off of. These multiple points of view shed light on to they ways different people view the choice to be made. Then, when every person in that group can then provide even smarter opinions, the entire group makes a choice that benefits everyone. This links back to a single person making smarter decision by basing it off other peoples opinions.
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When a person is faced with a choice to be made, they may not know all the information about it. However for them to better understand the choice, they seek other opinions such as asking a friend, or searching about it on the internet. When we do this we do not only learn more about the choice, but we better understand the choice that needs to be made. For example, a couple of months ago I was given the choices of what classes I would like to take in high school. I took this decision home to discuss with my parents and we both had opposite views of the classes I should take. I had only wanted to take three honors classes while my parents had wanted me to take four. The following weekend my Aunt, and Uncle came to visit along with my grandparents. All four of these people had gone through advanced schooling and had tons of advice to give on honors classes. Due to my parents and I being able to hear multiple opinions, we were able to make a decision that made my parents and I both happy.
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During times that we need to make a choice, certain people can help us with that. They can provide us with key information on how to go about making that choice. An example of this is a guidance counselor. Guidance counselors can help us layout the decision and help us see the pros and cons of the decision. The counselors also help give us details about the decision because they have experience from helping others in the past. This leads back to instruction and how getting instruction from different people and different opinions will help us successfully make a better choice.
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Have you ever had to make an important life decision? It can be very difficult, depending on the impact of your decision, to choose right away. As a result, you might ask your peers to give you advice to make the right choice. You may find that you agree with some people and disagree with others. Other times you might have to meet in the middle and find pros and cons about everyone's opinion and then make a decision with that information.
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Everyone has a different way of thinking. Your best friends way of thinking is very different than yours. Sometimes you might have the smarter idea, sometimes they will have the smarter idea. I know if I had to make a big, life-changing decision that I would ask all of my closest friends. I can recall one time when I was making a personal decision about a year ago, and I did not know what to do. I asked my closest friends what I should do, and almost all of them responded just about how I expected them to. Most of them said they wanted to see me happy, so they encouraged me to choose the decision that would make me the happiest. Others gave me facts, pros and cons, and why they would be disappointed if I made one decision over the other. They then told me that they believed in me, and I would eventually make the right decision. Having those multiple points of view on what they thought really helped me decide on what I should do. I think if I had not have asked them for advice, I would have made a decision I would have regretted.
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Sometimes when a decision is very impactful, you can get stressed out over the choice you want to make. Asking others may make deciding easier because all you have to honestly do is listen to their ideas and decide if you agree with them or not. Then, using your common sense and their advice, you can choose the decision you believe is best for you . Also, you actually might know what you are going to choose. But you might still want to ask other people what they think because that can "confirm" that you have made the right decision.
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Let's say you have weighed your options of certain decisions that you think are the right decisions. You chose what you think, in your mind, is best. You then ask your friends for their opinion, and suddenly everyone is saying everything different than what you thought. All of your wonderful thoughts are suddenly crushed with a wrecking ball. After listening to all of their thoughts, you find some are much more brilliant than yours. You then go back and completely rethink your decisions, just because of those few opinions. After extensive thought, you decide that your original idea was bogus. When you first make a decision, even if you had thought about for a long time, the stress of making a decision quick can sometimes fog your thinking. That is why having other people's opinions can help you make the right decision, even if it is the second time trying to choose what is best for you.
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having people help you is very, very important. I believe if I did not have people help me, not even just give me advice, that I would not do my best in school. We as humans need other humans! It's just how it goes. Asking for advice is a pretty normal thing to do. When asking for advice, remember it can only positively effect you by giving you different points of view, help you make a better decision, and you possibly can find a better choice than you originally thought. 
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It is a great choice to have multiple people opinions when asking for advice.
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Having multiple opinions on something that you're not sure about is good because there could be a good and bad side to the situation that someone is holding back from you.
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For example; I vented to my friend, Generic_Name,and asked her for advice on my love life or just my problems in general, and all she really said was "aww its gonna be okay", "don't stress about it, you'll find someone better." , but when i vented to my friend, Generic_Name, she told me a lot of the stuff i'm going/been through,she has also. So she had plenty to say and she was very supportive and caring and i knew i could reflect off what she responded when i vented to her because she has been in the situation before. Now I always vent to her because I know she'll listen and help me; i can always trust her not to say anything to anyone about what I vent to her about. From that example you can tell that they both had different points of view. One of them was completely all ears and could relate to me and the other one was just semi-supportive. It's always great to have different points of view because, you'll have those friends that asks are you okay when you're feeling down just so that they can know you're business; they don't really want to help you. Then on the other hand you'll have those friends that checks up on you everyday , and make sure that you're okay and if you aren't, they try their best to cheer you up, help you with the situation and are there for you no matter what. Those are the friends that you can trust. When you want to decide on doing something like, let's say jumping off a bridge. You really want to do it because it seem fun but at the same time you could get seriously injured. So you ask one friend would it be an good idea and that friend tells you "yea man, do it, it'll be fun!" Then you ask another friend and that friend tells you that you shouldn't do it because multiple people have died from jumping off an bridge. After hearing that, you decide that you don't want to jump off the bridge because that's basically committing suicide. If you didn't have that other person opinion you probably would've jumped off the bridge and that would've been the end for you.
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having multiple people opinions could sometimes be bad.
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So you're procrastinating about if you should do your homework or not. You want to get the grade but you don't feel like doing the homework. You ask multiple people in your class if they did the homework and they all say no. Then you're like okay at least i won't be the only one that didn't do it and maybe since no one did it then the teacher will push the date back or just forget about it. Then you get to school the next day and your teacher says that the homework counted as a quiz grade. Now you're sad and wishing that you did the homework.
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having a second or third opinion when asking for advice is good. It will never be bad if you use your common sense while taking in the advice. Having that second voice can prevent you from doing something that you'll regret for the rest of your life. It can also help you to be a better person and grow with yourself. Sometimes a second voice is all you need to be successful. Whether that second voice is a voice in your head, a friend, or even a family member. Sometimes talking to family about your situations is hard because they wouldn't understand it like someone your age will. Just make sure that second voice is someone you can trust, someone that wants you to do good, someone that wants to see the good in you, and someone that wants to help you be successful.
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Do you know whats great once in a while advice.
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I think you need multiple opinions
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it could help you get a better vision on something
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You could also use all of them to base off of each other to see which is the best answer to your problem
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seeking multiple opinions could help the person significantly with their homework, job, etc. i think asking multiple opinions from many different people could be great for everyone it could open up different jobs, and make many different products.
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I think people need multiple choices, so they could get a better vision on a topic that they wanted to know about.
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Because usually one topic is not enough to really imagine what that thing is that you wanted to know. it also helps the one person have an idea of what they were looking for. It can also make the other person feel good about them selves knowing that they just helped someone. You could also put all of the ideas together and find out which one is the best possible answer. for what you are looking for.
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why is advice so great advice is great because. You and someone else are interacting with one another giving eachother more and more ideas to do whatever you would like.
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Advice is great because it can help with your school project or even your job interview.
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Many people dont ask for advice because they think they have the better opinion they think that they have the best opinions better than everyone elses. But multiple opinions from different people could really make a change in what you are doing.
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Asking different people may lead to a better answer than just asking one person.
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Asking more people can help by getting then to say there opinion on the question your asking them
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if you asked me what does 2+2 equal and i said 10 but if you asked another person the same question and they say it equals 4 you wold believe him because he is correct. You should also if you keep asking for people how to succeed youll get maybe a whole paragraph of advice but then that will help you if you keep viewing different perspectives of how people succeed in life.
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Seeking multiple people for advice would make would be helpful sometimes but most of the time it is. Some good advice is that just keep on going or never stop trying because at the end there is going to be a reward and some of the bad one's would be stop trying you're never going to make it
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You should as different people only f they gone trough and they have experience with it.
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Another reason why you should ask multiple people for it is because some people maybe giving you the wrong advice
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thats why it's helpful to ask other people that are similar to you because then they can give some some good advice that could be reliable to you. Reasons why you should ask more than person is because one persons advice could be like i was very passionate about my job and worked really hard to try to et it and i finally got the job and now the CEO of it. and the some bad one's is don't try to work because you can do what you love even tho you can do that but it can result of not a lot of money into your wallet but it sometimes will get you a lot of money and can afforrd what other people can afford.
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Talking with more than one person can make decisions have a more clear best choice.
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Seeking advice from multiple people allows for learning from others' experiences,
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more inclusive actions
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different perspectives on issues.
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These all help a person make the best decision, and lead to the most prosperity.
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 When I was deciding whether I should apply to Awesome Math Summer Program, a prestigious math overnight camp at Cornell University, I was debating if this would be a worthwhile experience for me. It would have been the first ever time I stayed away from home by myself, and I was nervous I wouldn't make any friends. The camp was also highly priced, and I didn't want to put financial burden on my parents, who were already paying for my brother's expensive private college. However, Awesome Math Summer Program is known for the classes it offers, all of which would greatly benefit me as a competitive math student. Many of the courses there were perfect for my math level, and would provide a challenge I wasn't getting in normal school math. Many of my friends said it was a great experience, but I didn't know if they were providing me the whole truth on what the camp was like. I was very conflicted on what my plan of action should be, so I turned to another person who I knew had past experience and could guide me through my decision making. My brother had already attended Awesome Math Summer Program a few years back, and he said although it wasn't suited for his style of learning, it would be a great fit for me. The lessons were more problem solving based, which was my favorite type of class. His knowledge of the program allowed me to make the best decision regarding my application to Awesome Math Summer Program, which in the end I did apply and get accepted to. My brother's advice from his own personal experiences gave me a look into a camp I wouldn't have had otherwise, and allowed me to have one of the best summers of my life. His and others' advice played a large role in me attending this program, and also have made me more including of others.
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One of the biggest flaws I have is that it is extremely difficult for me to focus on what others need over my own needs. It can be hard to know how to include everyone so they benefit from my actions, as well as make sure no one is being left out
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In sixth grade, I was student council president of my school, and one of the topics many students wanted me to address was on bullying. I didn't know how exactly I could help students going through this horrible ordeal, because many victims of bullying don't like to stand up for fear of more shame. When I consulted with teachers, students, and my parents, they all had an overarching idea of focusing on kindness and the prevention of bullying, instead of bullying itself. This was something I never thought of before and never would have been able to think of, but with the aid of many others, I was able to form a new idea for approaching bullying in my school. I established a wristband kindness program, where wristbands were given out to students who were seen doing kind acts, such as helping another student without being asked or holding the door open at recess. When those students saw another student doing a thoughtful deed, they would pass on the bracelet and continue the spread of kindness. This motivated many young children to become more generous and understanding, a trait that will take them far in life. This idea wouldn't have even have been possible if it weren't for all the kids and teachers that helped me decide what I should focus on as student council president, as well as giving me the ideas for the project. I was able to develop a more inclusive program from multiple opinions, which also helps provide different viewpoints in conflicts.
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The judicial branch has the complicated job of making some of the most difficult decisions in our country. During the Supreme Court case of Hazelwood v. Kuhlmeir, the justices had to decide if school officials could censor the school newspaper, or if this was violation of First Amendment Rights. They worked together to deliberate the most Constitutionally fair outcome, and formed the majority opinion based off of what most justices thought was the best ruling
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Each justice was able to provide their own perspective on the issue, which is especially important for court cases since everyone has different ideas on what is fair.
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In the end, they ruled the First Amendment did not prohibit schools from censoring the school newspaper. They were able to reach this ruling from countless hours spent in debate of the conflict, and make a fair decision based off of everyone's unique perspective. The opinions from multiple individuals help make the most just decision in a court case, as well as help decision making in real life.
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Most decisions do not require much in-depth analyzing, but there are some can be very hard and draining to make. No matter how exhausting this can be though, there are always methods to make decision making more bearbale. One way to make this easier is to seek the advice of more than one person, as this can lead to the best choice. Others who have already been through what you are going to can give helpful advice, as well as make more inclusive decisions and give a different view on issues. From this, a person can take the best and most fair actions to help them succeed.
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In our world today, people are always asking for advice. Some people ask their friends if a dress looks good on them, and others ask their parents what they should do for a living. Advice can have a big and little impact on peoples lives depending on what your getting advice for. Unfortunately, not everyone gets accurate advice as people lie to others. Some people lie so they don't hurt others feelings, and some lie to hurt others feelings. Whatever the reason, I believe that people should not give other people unaccurate advice as it can lead someone to make a wrong decision. Advice can be described as an opinion from someone that can cause an influence on someone else.
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It is important that we get advice from multipe people as it helps us make the right choices.
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If one of my friends gave me wrong advice, I would have other people to give me the right advice so I do make the right decision.
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it would give me diferrent options to choose from and let me know what opinions differrent people have.
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I can see who is lying to me and who is not,
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I can get advice from people who may be smarter than others and care more about my problem.
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I do believe that asking a majority of people rather than one is a wise decision as you're not taking any risks.
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Some people may have different advice for me and I would want to get to know all of it. An example of this could be me asking someone if I should wear a certain dress to homecoming. The person I ask may say that it looks too casual, but then I go up to someone else and they say it looks perfect. I dont know who to choose from, so I go to ask a few more people. The majority of these people said that I should wear the dress to homecoming, but then there was still a few people who said I shouldn't. Since there was more people who said the dress looked good and that I should wear it, that's the advice I would take. This can happen in a many doferrent ways other than asking advice on clothing. It can be advice on what classes you should take in school, what design your room should look like, and even what you should do in your futur. Advice is just an opinion that can influence your decision though it doesn't have to. Imagine you asked advice on what you should do for a career and everyone says a doctor, but in reality you want to be a veteranarian. Would you take everyone elses advice or would you take the path that you want to go on. Personally, I would take the choice of being a veteranarian because even though there are more people who want me to be a doctor, I would choose the path that I believe is right for me. I do agree with the idea that you should take advice from otheres, but if it conflicts with things you want to do, then I do not think you should have to take the advice given.
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When people give advice, they may give inaccurate advice to either harm or help you. Either way, lying about advice is not okay and it needs to end. If someone is asking for advice about what classes to take and you give them incorrect advice, they may choose the wrong classes and be miserable that school year. This is where asking other people takes part. Even though one person lied, you can still go to other people and ask advice from them. Doing this is smart because you can choose the right classes and figure out who was lying to you. If you figure out who was lying, then you will know not to ask advice from them anymore. I've learned this the hard way. Although my decision wasn't smart, I learned two new lessons that day. One was to ask more than one person for advice, and the other one was to never ask my good friend for advice again. If you can figure out who is lying to you about advice, than you can learn to not ask them again and go to people who give good, strong, and accurate advice.
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Everyone is strong in diferrent things such as sports, music, pageants, and theatre. If I was asking about advice on what musical I should try out for, I would most likely ask diferrent music and thetre teachers rather than a football or soccar coach. The same could go for anything I'd need advice on. If I needed to ask one of my friends for advice on classes, I would probably ask a friend who has taken that class rather than a student who hasn't. Some people may also care more than others about a subject. If I was asking a student who is not stong in science for help with my science homework, they may push it off and ask for me to find someone else, but if i ask a friend who is strong in science, they would probably help me. The same can go for advice. Lets say I needed advice on what to wear, I would ask multiple people who have a good style so that I can get the best possible options. Even though they are strong in that area, I would still ask more than one person because I would want to get the most options I can.
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In conclution, I belive that asking multiple people for advice is key to making the right decision. I belive this because asking multiple people can give you different options to choose from and lets you know what opinions people have. It also can show you who may be lying and who cares more than other people might. Some people may also have better advice than others do. I strongly agree that asking multipe people for advice is very wise as you don't risk making any wrong decisions. Advice is very important in everyones lives, but you have to know how and who to get it from. If you know these things, you will be able to get good advice in your life while knowing you made the right decision. 
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What is something you are good at? This answer varies for different people based on a couple of different things.
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When asking for advice, we ask more that one person
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different people are good at different things based on their experiences
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opinions.
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we will feel more confident in that decision.
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Everyone has had a different life, some are similar, but none are the same. Since everyone has had a different life
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