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For example, Generic_Name asks Generic_Name if he likes her idea and Generic_Name gives his honest opinion, Generic_Name then is going to go to Generic_Name to hear her opinion. This is because everyone wants to hear one person's opinion, then they will go and hear someone else opinion, this is because they want to hear multiple opinions so they can make they better choice.
Evidence
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someone may not be sure about one opinion and another opinion so they would go to someone else and hear another opinion
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after that they should be able to make the better choice. People may ask about if their appearance is good, if their grades are good in school, and where they should travel during the summer. When someone asks for advice the best thing to do is give them your honest opinion so they can make the better choice after hearing multiple opinions.
Evidence
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when people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one person, this is because they want to hear multiple opinions so they can make the better choice. People can ask for multiple opinions this is because they want to make the best choice.
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Seeking others opinions is important so you can make a decision.
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Asking could get you out of trouble.
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You may even be able to get to know what decision you make before you come up to it
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Even the smartest people in the world ask for others opinions of their work
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Asking for others opinions is good for decisions,
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can make you a more responsible person
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help your choices in the future
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For example, if someone tells you something bad for you is good, you should ask someone else if that person is telling the truth. If you're working on a project, and your pier tells you to do something, you should ask your teacher if that is right. Even the most powerful and smartest people have asked for other people's opinions. But choose wisely who you ask, because you want to go down the right path.
Evidence
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It shows you're really trying to make a decision. There are so many choices you have to make, and this is a good tool to help you. You have to put effort into it, and this shows. Responsibility is a great thing to have, and choices start with it.
Evidence
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There are also choices you make that are life changing. If it's bad, then your life could go a whole other direction. Asking for other peoples opinion can help you go the right way, especially when you have a job. Lots of choices come into play at this time
Evidence
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Asking for other peoples opinions is good for decisions, makes you more responsible, and help you make better choices in the future. This is a great too for making decisions and choices. I guarantee that this will help you throughout your life. It can keep you from going down the wrong path. You could be smarter if you ask other people.
Concluding Statement
Concluding Statement 1
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When people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one, single person. In the past, I have asked more than one person what they think. Most people also ask more than one person for something as well.
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Seeking multiple opinions is good
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because you can get multiple opinions and compare them,
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and you can get multiple opinions for things people have experienced and haven't experienced.
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It's sort of like taking a survey, but in this case you are surveying peoples opinion. You would take someones opinion then go to another person and get their opinion. You could do this with more than just one person. For example, if you are going to try a new food at a restaurant, you go either ask people in person what their opinion is or go online to the review section of the restaurant website or rating website. You would then take everyones opinion and see the pros and cons for the food you want to try. The pros and cons could be about one certain dish you might want to try or about the restaurant its self. This is how taking many different opinions is good for making a better choice.
Evidence
Evidence 1
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You could take someones opinion if they have done whatever you are getting an opinion for. They might have experienced it before, but you could also take someones opinion if they haven't tried it before but get their opinion on what they think of it. For example, if you want to try something like a new ride at an amusement park, you could ask someone who has already riden the ride and someone who hasn't. You would get the person who already rode the ride their opinion of what they thought of the ride when they rode it like did it have loopty-loops, if it is really fast, or if it a spinning ride. You would then get the person who hasn't tried it and see what they think from just seeing and hearing about the ride. You could then get the pros and cons of each and decide whether to go on it or not. For this reason, you should take more than just one opinion.
Evidence
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In conclusion, you should get more than just one opinion about making a better choice. You could get multiple opinions and compare them. You could also get them from people who have experienced whatever you are getting an opinion about and someone who hasn't done it. For these reasons, you should get more than just one opinion to make a choice.
Concluding Statement
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Have you ever had to make a big decision? I definitely have had to. It was very hard to make and throughout the process I had a hard time because I didn't know if I was making the right choice. If I could go back now and make that decision again I would surely change some things. Maybe I would take longer to consider my options and the consequences that go along with them.
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Most of all, I would ask others opinions before choosing my final choice.
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everyone has different experiences
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some you ask may not know
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there are many opinions on different topics.
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everyone has different experiences
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Nobody has been through the exact same thing you have been trough because it's impossible. This means that we all have something different to offer. Experiences with certain things may change opinions and influence us. For example, if someone grew up in a Christian home, when they're grown, they are most likely going to stay Christian. Overall, nobody is the same and everyone has different ways of doing things and we should respect that.
Evidence
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Not everyone has the same knowledge and some may know things others don't. When people ask these individuals about a skill they are not particularly great at, they tend to freeze up. Either they do not know the answer or they're not one-hundred percent positive. Most people wouldn't want to give out false information to someone so, iif they aren't sure, they would tell the person seeking advice. Other reasons why people may not know is because they may have never been taught the information. If we only ask one person and they don't know then that could impact the outcome and that is why it is important to ask multiple people. Concluding that, we shouldn't just assume everyone knows what we are asking from them and we should accept it and find others to ask.
Evidence
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Everyone has their own opinion which may or may not line up with someone else. When asking for advice, beware of this and think things trough. Seeing situations from different sides may also help you in coming to a conclusion by realizing what the other side is going to think. No person is the same so everyone likes different things. For example, someones favorite fruit is grapes but someone else's is bananas. In the end, nobody is the same and we are not going to have the exact same opinions, things, and favorite ways to do or handle situations.
Evidence
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when making decisions, do them smartly and ask others for advice before deciding because it will give a better idea of the topic. Make sure it is realized that not everybody has been through the same stuff as others and have different stories to share. Also keep in mind that some people know things more than others and some may not know at all so make sure you are getting valuable information and if not then you should ask others. Lastly, remember everyone has their own opinions on different topics which may influence the final choice they would make. In conclusion, it is better to get multiple opinions and see the scenario from many different points of view.
Concluding Statement
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My palms were sweaty. I felt my face getting hotter by the second. My throat was closing in. I could hardly breath! I was so embarrassed. I knew I needed to ask for my friends opinions on my dress for the dance.
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I believe that getting multiple opinions can be helpful, beneficial, and has the best outcomes.
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I asked my friend for her opinion on my new dress. She said "It looks amazing on you!" I still didn't feel like I looked good in this dress. I kept asking more of my friends opinions on this dress. I got the same reaction as the first time. I was so confused. So, I thought I could ask my mother. My mother told me that "The dress was making me look like a young lady," and then she started to cry. After what happened with my mother I decided to wear the dress to the school dance. It was very stress releaving to have more than just my opinion.
Evidence
Evidence 1
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That is why asking for multiple opinions is extremely helpful.
Claim
Claim 1
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When I wore the dress to the dance I got a lot of compliments! At first I didn't see the beauty in myself. I was blinded by the pressures of middle school and trying to fit it. Over the years has broke down the confidence and self esteem I had when I was a child. When I was little I did not care what other peoples outfits looked like or what the latest fashion trend was. All I thought about was recess, play time, nap time, lunch time and snack time was. So, my friends and mothers opinions helped me see that I looked very flattering in this dress. If I didn't ask for their opinions, I would have put this dress back on its rack.
Evidence
Evidence 2
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In my case you could say that it was beneficial to ask for more than one opinion.
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The night of the school dance was scary. I walked into a crowded room with loud music. As soon as I walked into the room everyone was staring at me, even the DJ had stopped playing the music. I was so terrified and perplexed! I was never used to get this much attention from my fellow peers. I was always the girl who sat in the back and I always just felt invisible. I could feel the tension in the room. All of the boys looking at me, and their girlfriend jealous of me getting their boyfriends attention. I just froze like a statue. I would not move. My friend kept trying to drag me to the dance floor but, I just stood in the same spot. I was still trying to comprehend what just happened. Then the music started to play again. After the tension had died down I went out and started to dance. Throughout the night of the dance I got a lot of compliments. My confidence and self esteem was at it's highest just like when I was little! I felt like invincible and that nothing could stop me! I can't believe that I was going to put the dress back! Thankfully, I asked for my friends and mothers opinions, and didn't put the dress away.
Evidence
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asking for multiple opinions has the best outcomes.
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Due to asking for my friends and mothers opinions I have a higher self esteem and confidence in myself. I could not imagine what would have happened if I did not ask for more than one opinion. So, I conclude that getting multiple opinions is helpful, beneficial, and has the best outcomes. I hoped you enjoyed my paper. 
Concluding Statement
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Have you ever had to make a tough decision but you just couldn't because it was to hard? Sounds familiar right. Well you probably didn't have made that decision because you didn't have multiple viewpoints. Don't worry though. Many people struggle with the same thing. It's hard to make snap decisions if you don't have different viewpoints on it. Many people say that it's easier to make hard decisions with different viewpoints and, I agree.
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It's better to make a decision when you have multiple opinions
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you could discover relevant information about the topic that could persuade your decision.
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When I make a decision I seek out others for their opinion. This has helped me with the decision making process and it can help you as well. Every single day you make decisions. These decisions effect your life. For example one time I had to choose between quitting lacrosse or quitting acting classes. I loved both activities and, it was hard to choose one or the other. So, I asked my mom and she gave me her opinion. This was very helpful because if I had made the decision on my own, I wouldn't have been able to find another viewpoint and the decision I made would've effected my life forever. The opinion my mom gave was to skip lacrosse practice one day a week for my acting classes. Acting was only one day a week and lacrosse was three days a week. I liked this option. I wouldn't have discovered it if my mom hadn't given me her opinion.
Evidence
Evidence 1
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Say your making a big decision. Maybe Its a personal one or one at school or work. The decisions we make today will effect others. Sometimes positively and sometimes negatively. If you have an outsiders opinion, most likely you will become more empathetic. In our brain we usually only think of our own opinion. Our viewpoint. But, there are two sides to every story. We often forget about our peers opinions when making a decision. Having an outsiders opinion can help you learn other peoples opinions and point of views on the situation and it can help you learn how your decision can effect others. Maybe their opinion can help ween you in a different direction.
Evidence
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The other day I was watching a movie. The movie was about a court case in which jurors had to decide if a man was innocent or guilty. The trial gave a lot of useful information that was used in the decision making but, as they went deeper into the mystery, more information was brought to the table. At first twelve out of the thirteen men thought that the man was guilty but as more and more information was discovered by the man one man who though he was innocent, slowly the other jurors who once thought the man was guilty thought he was innocent. At the end of the movie the man was in fact innocent. If that one juror hadn't brought new information that was relevant to the case, they probably would've given the man a improper accusation. This is a great example of how having many opinions can bring relevant information to a decision.
Evidence
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it's better to seek multiple opinions.
Concluding Statement
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Some could say that it's not helpful because its your own decision and only you can make it
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but, I think its better to have other opinions because you can find new view points, you can have a outsiders opinion and you can discover more useful information that is relevant to the topic.
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I had a guilty feeling in my stomach all morning. After I woke up to that text last night I instantly knew that this day was not going to be good. I should have never done what I did but it happened and I can't take it back. I got caught and now I have to do the right thing. I whip out my phone and press the face time button to talk to my best friend about what is going on. "Hey Generic_Name." I managed to say while holding back tears, "I really need your advice on something." I say more serious now but facing the camera towards the ceiling. "Okay, what's up?" She replies sounding concerned. "I talked about Generic_Name behind her back with a few other people and I said some pretty hurtful things. The only reason I said those things is because everybody else was and I don't know." I start rambling and need to slow down. "Anyways she messaged me this morning saying that she found out what I said and it really hurt her feelings. Now I feel awful and I need your advice on how to apologize." I squeaked. "Were the other girls talking bad about her too?" Generic_Name asked. "Yeah, even worse than me." I yelp. "That's not what I heard." She starts but I cut her off short, "Wait what? You already heard about this?" She chuckles while managing to say, "Yeah, almost everybody has heard, but they said it was just you being mean and I believe them." I can feel the tears streaming down my face as I end the call without replying to her.
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When you seek advice from someone you want to know what they would do in your shoes, but sometimes they might not tell you the full truth because they are bias. For example, my little brother, Generic_Name, really wanted a monster truck for his birthday. He decided to ask his friend if that is what he should ask for just so that he doesn't regret it. Well, it turns out that his friend also really wanted a monster truck but his birthday wasn't for months. So his friend told him not to ask for it because he would regret it but the real reason is because he didn't want Generic_Name to get it first. This is why you should seek more than one opinion because the person you ask for help might not actually want to help you, just themselves. For instance, my neighbor, Generic_Name, went on a trip to Hawaii with her friends. While she was there she got into an argument with one of them and she felt really bad afterwards. So she asked a different friend named Generic_Name what she should do. Generic_Name said that she should quit worrying as much and not do anything for the friend she was arguing with. Little did Generic_Name know that Generic_Name didn't like the friend she argued with which is why he told her not to do anything about it. Luckily, Generic_Name was smart enough to ask another friend who said she should get the friend flowers. Generic_Name decided to get the flowers and they made up. This is just example of why you shouldn't just ask one person for advice. They could be completely bias and you wouldn't even notice.
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Picture this, Generic_Name is in Hawaii with her friends and they came across a cliff that lead into the water if you jumped off. Most of her friends convinced Generic_Name to go first. Right when Generic_Name was getting ready to jump one of her friends stopped her and said they would go check the water first to make sure there weren't any rocks. Turns out, there were tons and that could have seriously injured Generic_Name if she had listened to her other friends. Her friends did not want her to get hurt, they just didn't know any better. A further example is when my mom went to get groceries and forgot what kind of yogurt we get and called me to check. I asked my little brother to do it for me and he said it was the Light and Fit brand and it was organic. So that is what I told my mom. I decided to double check to be sure and found out that it was also gluten free so I immediately told my mom the correct kind. Now this would have resulted poorly because my dad is allergic to gluten and he eats that yogurt a lot. Once again sometimes people aren't trying to give you bad advice or make you do the wrong thing they just do not know any better which is why you always should have multiple opinions.
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What I mean by this is when you really need advice and nobody is available besides a peer you barely talk to than their advice will not have enough meaning or importance to even consider what they are saying. For instance, If they tell you that they think you were in the wrong, you might think that they don't even know you that well so why would they be right. Even if they are right about you being wrong. Which is why you have to hear multiple opinions. If you just hear from that person that doesn't have meaning in your life you will only agree with them if you like what you are hearing. Rather than if you talk to your older sister about it and they say that you are in the wrong you are way more likely to consider that and believe it. Studies show that 9 out of 10 people say they would always believe a best friend over a coworker no matter what the situation is.
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In conclusion, I decided to ask my friend Generic_Name for advice because she doesn't go to my school and won't be as bias. She told me I should apologize to Generic_Name and tell her the full truth. Generic_Name thanked me and cleared up everything. People should seek multiple opinions when in need of advice because it won't be as bias, they might not know any better than you, and you can hear from people with different meaning in your life. 
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When you talk to someone and you ask them, "do you have any advice on my SOL tomorrow," or, "what is the best advice you have for my future decisions?" Do they give you good or bad advice? Do they even give you helpful advice at all?
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When you ask someone for their advice, ask yourself, did they go through the experience that I'm interested in. If not, I suggest to listen to their advice anyways. They could give you positive or negative info. about their experiences. Their opinions are important when it comes to asking and listening to their advice, so that it will give you the options to help you through your life, and take you on the easiest path.
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When getting advice, ask them if its easy or hard, or ask if it was harder than they expected. When they tell you their answers to your questions, it doesn't mean that it's easy or hard for you, and that you will expect the same way. That's not always the case; in fact, it could be really hard for you than the other because they've experienced it longer than you. They would usually give you advice that you yourself can handle pretty well, because they know that you are a beginner and that you don't know what to expect. It's always good to listen to more than one person, so you can not only take an easy path, but the best path as well.
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They've experience their decisions they had before and then they give you the best option to take. They give you the most educated option, or if it'll help the person out. A good example about making the best choices is a job. You can ask if you will make descent amount of money, or if it'll help the family and be able to pay the bills of the household you live in. It's always important to ask questions, like why they'd choose their answer, about their decision
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Remember to ask yourself if they've given you good or bad advice, or even helpful advice at all. Always ask multiple people for their opinions, so that you can have multiple options, and choose the best choice for achieving your goal. Don't just ask your family, ask you friends and teachers. It doesn't hurt to try something you're not interested in and pick the best and easiest way. You can use the best and easiest path to get to where you wanted to be from the beginning. Just remember, I believe that listening to others can help you make good decisions in life, and that is my advice to you.
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people have different thought's so the advice they give might be different than what you need.
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some people ask more than one person because they want to know if its the right thing to do or not.
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you may not be like the person who gave you the advice so it wont be helpful to you. Or the advice they give can be the opisite of what you asked. Some people are rude and wont help you so you dont want to follow help from people who are lying to you. So their opinions won't be helpful for you because it can be what they would do and the advice could be the opisite of what you need.
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One persons thoughts might not be what you want so you will probably need more peoples thoughts to back you up. People are different than you so asking more people can help you get what you need.
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You could get one persons opinion and be worryed if thats what you should do. Because it just sounds weird or its just not what you think is right. Two people could could say different things so you will want to ask more people to see if thats the right thing for you. Because what one of those people say might be the answer your looking for but the other person is your friend or someone you like a lot, so listning to them makes more sense.
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geting advice from more than one person looks pretty appropriate because 1-One persons opinion is probably not helpful 2-people have different thoughts so they will be different than what you need and 3-You want to know if its the right thing to do
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Have you ever heard the saying "I know what is best for you"? People say this when they're older than you because they have been on this earth longer than you. Although, this is'nt the right decision by just doing what they have done
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Multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice because everyone has different opinions, only you know what is best for you, and that one person's advice on things could not be fitting for you.
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It is always good to have multiple people to ask for advice from. By doing this you can notice what they have done wrong and what you can build upon them. For example when I was younger my parents made me play lacrosse, because my brother was playing it and was enjoying a lot. In future years my dad was starting to train me in soccer and got me on a travel soccer team. This time I was playing both and it was just to much for me to handle. Since my mom was wanting me to play lacrosse and my dad was saying I should continue on with soccer. I finally made a decision by myself and to keep on playing soccer instead of lacrosse. I had made this choice over which sport I loved more and If my dad had not made me try out soccer. I would not be playing the sport I truly love to this day.
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Whatever the things people will tell you to do, the only person who knows what is best for you is yourself.
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If people made decisions in your life then how would it really be your life. The right to chose things that you want to do in your life Is what makes life the best. This is important to know because that one person who thinks its the right thing for you and was the right advice for them does not mean its going to be the best advice for you. Having many peoples advice is always better than one persons because of the fact that, if you are only seeing the one persons advice than you are going to see that side of it and that side only. When I was talking to my teachers the other day for the classes I am taking next year they both pretty much said I will be fine for all honors. The advice they both gave me about high school was so much better the only one of them saying it to me. Have more people give you more advice than less to make the decision you make much easier.
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Both of my parents have made me notice that I am not always going to be right and no one will ever be, but they also said that "as parents we will make you do somethings but not all things you do we are going to tell you to do".
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This shows that one persons advice will not always help you in how you want it to
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For example a sixty year old persons advice is probably much different than someone that is my age. This could affect a lot advice they give you and how they did things in their time instead of modern day. This means it is always best to see the advice everyone gives you and with that advice you make the choice that you think is best for you.
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If you could chose 1 or 10 people to help you get out of a problem you're in, it would be 10. This is because multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice because everyone has different opinions, only you know what is best for you, and that one persons advice on things could not be fitting for you.  
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When you need advice what do you do? Do you talk to someone? If so,is it good to ask someone or even multiple people?
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if you tell someone they might tell more people and you will have really good options
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So I belive its good to ask many people for advice.
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What I mean by this is,if you only talk to one person for advice then sometimes it can go bad because,their advice is not going to be the best choice and sometimes it can make things worse. So if you ask multiple people there is a chance you can find the best choice that can help you.
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