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review commentsthis paper mainly focuses on the problem of exponential synchronization of semimarkov jump stochastic complex dynamical networks using nonuniform sampleddata control with random delayed information exchanges among dynamical nodes by constructing an appropriate lyapunovkrasovskii functional and using the wirtinger inequality exponential synchronization criteria were obtained in the form of linear matrix inequalities numerical examples were implemented to demonstrate the effectiveness and superiority of the proposed design techniquesthis paper is well organized and the proof of the main results seems well presented however in order to improve the quality of this paper the authors should take the following comments into accounthowever in the current version i have the following commentsin order to let readers quickly capture the contribution of this work it is better to highlight the main | 0 |
do artefacts appear in the mr image of the brain is that really required and why should they be purged totally if doing so wont disrupt the helpful signal what are the benefits of using fuzzy adaptive median filtering and how did its performance stack up against those of filters that are more traditional how does it increase the smoothing effect on the image while reducing the amount of noise after the initial processing phase what five conditions must be met how does the image then undergo a process called feature extraction which locates the tumour precisely how is the common local derivative pattern feature extraction approach somewhat altered so that symmetrical diagonal features may be extracted in pixelbypixel order how can one determine that the extended center | 0 |
read the second paragraph of the there was no significant difference in baseline data between the two groups section againmake the references appear to be identical by adjusting their styles to matchplease improve the section about the conclusioninclude a brief description of figure s catheter angiographydiscuss why the current method was chosen for the study its significance and how it compares to older methodsimprove the accuracy of the abstract sectionin the introduction section the organizational framework must be includedthe study lacks a theoretical framework which is necessary for the reader to understand the researchs foundation | 1 |
evaluation of music art teaching quality based on grey neural networkpaper id the abstract of the paper is not catchy and rather seems vague and unclear rewrite it by giving the short and specific summary of the research work the language of the manuscript is not standard correct it for instance avoid using language like in recent ten years and better replace it with in last decadeauthors must provide the meaning of music art teaching quality evaluation also discuss its various stagesit has been claimed that the original evaluation method of organizing students to fill in the evaluation questionnaire manually is difficult to operate and can no longer meet the requirements of the new teaching situation support this claim by providing some drawbacks of using this methodprovide suitable | 0 |
this paper focuses on lvdnoriented substation topology identification and reveals that the existing hmmbased tss algorithm is difficult to meet the practical application requirements a tss algorithm based on constrained hmm is researched and the minimum continuous length constraint of the state and the parameter training method using constrained hmm are given so that the tss algorithm can better adapt to practical applications the algorithm simplifies the detection of change points and enhances the performance of the algorithm scalability and better adaptability provide a certain idea for ensuring the stability of power grid operation and the accuracy of electric energy measurementawhen introducing the research of researchers in related fields the article cites too many references and is relatively messy and unstructured it is recommended to recite the introduction | 0 |
repeated sentences although some of the ideas do need be reminded to the reader continuous repetition can easily tired potential readers for example the sentence assessment is a systematic process for gathering and evaluating information on students progress is repeated in pages and there are more instances of identical sentences please revise thoroughly reorganization of the paper is needed the ideas put forwards in the paper would read much easily if the authors followed this paper structure intro and literature review including objectives hypothesis methodology including a description of the participants the utensils the procedure followed by results and ending with discussion and conclusions unfortunately the authors repeat full sentences and sections in the paper which makes a difficult reading tables should present concrete results and not all | 1 |
reviewer the author has done good job but some queries has been raised by mein methods the following sentence measurements and monitoring included pulse rate mean arterial blood pressure and oxygen saturation during the operation by the nurse does not provide any meaning please correctplease verify the chronology of the tracheostomy st procedurethe author mentions an incomplete sentence with happens please complete the sentence of delete itthe sentence datawerepresentedas meanrang median and interquartile range iqrwere used to describe continue variables needs to be verified again in the sentence mean time to tracheostomy was days range days after admission does the author mean tracheostomy was performed days after admission to hospitalin the sentence mean decannulation time was days from tracheostomy what do the numbers in the bracket signifyin the | 0 |
the authors of the study were encouraged to assert that a complex neural network had been shown to exhibit functional mapping and convergence at a rate of about despite its modest utilisation the proposed gadget may provide continuous power another benefit touted was a reduction in the emotional fatigue and frustration felt by users of independent systems with the use of a machine learning system there was no longer any need for recovery employees robotic healthcare agents for the paralysed were made possible because to the systems monitoring capabilities its possible for several caregivers to send an alert in the event of an emergency by using an iot module in conjunction with a therapy that takes place at a distance reducing the need for central decisionmakingwork is useful | 0 |
the manuscript to explore the role of lgr in hepatocellular carcinoma hcc progression lgr overexpression could induce the hcc cell proliferation migration and invasion which could be reduced by metformin treatment the mechanism was involved in rna alternative splicing in general the experiments are well designed and most of the experimental data are clearly presented and convincing the obtained knowledge is interesting and would be important for understanding the process of hcc the following points should be considered to further improve the quality of the papermajor concerns lgr overexpression could induce the hcc cell proliferation migration and invasion which could be reduced by metformin treatment the mechanism was involved in rna alternative splicing the protein level of lgr was decreased in the metformin treatment so what is the | 1 |
some of the portions of the approach need to have additional information added in them that explains certain conceptsplease provide some suggestions about the study so that it is more appealingpaper adjustment needs some changesi would appreciate it if you could go at the paper and work on improving the formatinclude some more references in the body of the article | 0 |
in this paper the vehicle queue length traffic flow and average speed are taken as the inputs the first layer of the fuzzy neural network system and the green light delay is taken as the output the comments are as followsi the keyword is not consistent with the topic of the paper modify the keywordii the summary does not describe the use of the systemiii in this paper there are many sentences need to be changediv vehicle queue length vehicle speed and traffic flow will affect the recognition accuracy of the system how to reduce the errorv results h and oc appeared in the results and discussion there is no graphic evidence in the paper it is suggested to delete them | 1 |
in the present report crosssectional study on type characteristics and drug resistance of haemophilus influenzae in kunming children mei yuan and xiaoli he investigate the epidemiological distribution and drug resistance patterns of haemophilus influenzae hi in children in kunming so as to provide guidance in clinical treatment they hi infects children primarily through the respiratory routetheepidemic capsular typing in this area is nthi the epidemicbiological typing is ii and iii and the epidemic resistance phenotype is lactamase positive ampicillin resistance blpar nevertheless the work in its current form has several limitations that preclude publication in computational and mathematical methods in medicine the author indicated the epidemicbiological typing is ii and iii and the epidemic resistance phenotype is lactamase positive ampicillin resistance blpar what about type ithe description septicemia | 1 |
mei et al showed that haemophilus influenza hi infects children primarily through the respiratory route the epidemic capsular typing in this area is nthi the epidemic biological typing is ii and iii and the epidemic resistance phenotype is lactamase positive ampicillin resistance blpar the epidemic resistance mechanism is temtype lactamase production the detection rate of lactamase negative ampicillin resistance and the lactamase positive amoxicillinclavulanate resistance is relatively high in this area which requires close attention this study is interesting and meaningful however there are many corrections should be mademajor revisionsplease simplify the part of abstract too many wordsplease add the references by using endnote softwareplease show more details about patients and clinical isolates in the part of methodplease adjust the format of this article and make them consistentin | 1 |
the content and subject of your paper meets the journals requirements also the license plate recognition approach using multiobjective optimization algorithm in complex scenes is well introduced and explained at the same time the objective in your paper is clear and integrated however your research can be further improved before publication here are some suggestions in the introduction section you do not introduce the objective of developing the license plate recognition approach using multiobjective optimization algorithm in complex scenes however it is recommended to add this objective in the introduction section in order to make this section become more systematic and comprehensive in the section when introducing the principle of the license plate positioning please provide its detailed definition because this concept is essential in this section in | 0 |
the manuscript entitled management of tinnitus through acupuncture a metaanalysis by zhang et al is a metaanalysis of all the studies admitted were parallel rcts of patients having tinnitus where equated subjects experiencing acupuncture or electro acupuncture other forms to those experiencing no therapy drugs sham treatment or basic introductory medicinal therapies all the publications data authenticated and drew out utilizing a predetermined results abstraction form the paper has contribution as it provides a detailed review about the management of tinnitus through acupuncture i have following commentsi noticed paragraphing and formatting issues for example see introduction section the whole section consists of one long paragraph it is a good writing practice to use small and evenly distributed paragraphs remove the empty space on page section correct the term | 0 |
in this paper an analysis and modeling model arimalstm model hints at the spatial and temporal characteristics of the crime hotspot data in s city is proposed at this same time the relationship between the analysis results from geographic information is established based on the principle of time convolution where the spatiotemporal database processing cases is constructed the results show that the arimalstm model has advantages in improving the processing of time characteristics of crime hotspot data related research not only improves the analysis ability of crime hotspot data but heavily promotes the construction and application of spatiotemporal warehouse of crime hotspot data this paper has some innovation but there are still some problems to be improved specific comments are as followsabstract the selection with keywords after the | 1 |
this study considers that trimebutine maleate combined with lactulose in elderly patients with irritable bowel syndrome can improve the clinical symptoms reduce the vasoactive intestinal peptide improve the level of neuropeptide y and help to improve the quality of life of the patients the following points need to be modified add the number of keywords to the title should reflect the content and conclusions of this study and the mechanism of action cannot be clearly explained from the research contentand it is introduced that the pathogenesis of ibs may be related to high visceral sensitivity intestinal infection dysbiosis of microflora genetics diet and mental factors however the content of this study involves little the content of this manuscript is too brief and it is suggested to expand the | 0 |
to investigate the effect of medical care visit combined with sleep nursing improve the quality of life and emotion of patients at malignant lymphoma it is found that the combination of medical group examination and emotional simulation can effectively improve the quality of life and sleep among patients with malignant lymphoma reduce adverse emotions and benefit the diagnostic and clinical treatment of patients it is of great significance to the prognosis of patients please revise the following questions before publicationplease pay attention to the format of the title and table no description other than words should be included please compare the data format in table there is no description of previous research in the preface no more research on the significance of nursing of patients with malignant tumorsthese | 1 |
reviewer i appreciate the effort youve put with your work which is presented in the manuscript only the listed several comments for this paperthe abstract needs greater attention for refinement specifically it following comments are needed cannot be clarified the background on your study the significance of solving such research what core innovation has been done in this research whats the new part compared with previous workall cited works must be presented in the manuscript often all presented figures can be shown in the text at appropriate places along with their suitable explanation please revise the format of reference number it would be better to modify the format of each paragraph by following the requirement of the journalfor readers quick catch of the contribution in this work it | 1 |
the ma regulators were involved in the tumorigenesis cancer cell proliferation tumor microenvironment and cancer cell metastasis play in ec this article describes the role of ma in ec in detail please see my comments below the manuscript will benefit from language editing currently it takes some effort to understand the language data described in the result section were not consistent with the figures please take care of them data harmonization the author used gene expression data from different sources including geo and tcga which might be differently generated or processed how were they harmonized are there overlapping samples between sources and outlier samples please specify them did all datasamples have passed quality check provide the description of statistical analyses please provide the necessary explanation about how the | 0 |
in this article authors describe the effects of ultrasoundguided rectus abdominis sheath block on analgesia after cesarean section and on the occurrence of maternal postpartum depression further suggestions need to address by authors in the current format of the manuscript there are language mistakes english language proofreading is advisedin the statistical analysis please specify whether the ttest is paired or unpaired paired or unpairedobserved indicators should be changed to observation indicatorsi think it is better to change the abcd of the observed indicators to and the authors are invited to cite more uptodate references that support their opinionplease indicate whether the study has been approved by the relevant medical ethics committeewhat are the shortcomings of the study and please address them in the discussion or conclusion section | 0 |
what is new being presented in this article put this information in the abstract suggestions below include references a book machining springer isbn b book ceramic matrix composites de gruyter isbn c book nontraditional machining processes springer isbn d book mechanical and industrial processes springer isbn n book metal cutting technologies de gruyter isbn f book advanced maching technology a general guide elsevier isbn and other articles of other international journals a deeper discussion of the results obtained is necessary in the abstract development it is very important to emphasize points of agreement or disagreement with articles during this work and others cited in references part of manuscriptimprove the abstract | 1 |
in this study the authors investigated the role of lgr in hepatocellular carcinoma hcc progression they found that the level improved lgr expression was higher in hcc cell lines and tumor tissues the hcc cell proliferation migration and invasion were increased when increased lgr which could be activated by metformin treatment geo database showed like lgr had switching properties in hcc cell lines together with metformin sirna was used to knock down the specific isoform and the results showed that specific isoform sirna could cause the inhibition on cell invasion caused by metformin treatment overall this is an interesting and welldesigned paper here would have several minor comments for the authors the authors performed extensive experiments however the condition of the manuscript is really poor which makes the | 1 |
shenling baizhu powder ameliorates diabetic nephropathy via pikakt pathwaystatistics related to diabetic neuropathy such as incidence should be included in the introduction part to our manuscriptthe objective of each study at one end of this journal should be written in a better and simplified waywhat was the weight for the mice at the time study write itwhat were the housing conditions lightdark cycle food etchow were the sacrificedany ethics approval numberinformation about the source of antibody catalogue number dilution etc should be writtenmore details about elsia or requiredlimitations of the study if any must be mentionedconclusion section should be inside the manuscript | 1 |
oral cancer used to be the sixth most common illness among the world however with the dedication of medical workers and his research team and the findings raised awareness of the potential etiological threats oral cancer is now ranked way below to th on last years list of global statistics of the new areas and deaths of types of cancers notably patients diagnosed in early stages show higher chances with survival visual examination as part of a population screening program remarkably reduces the mortality of patients in high risk the risk of emerging oral cancer can also be seen by insulation from etiological factors and adapting a healthy lifestyle a voice problems need attention there are some grammatical errors and inaccurate words for the text which need to | 1 |
the abstract of this article needs to be reorganized it is necessary to reflect what problems theoretical methods research research results conclusions and significance you have based on by introducing deep learning algorithm your research gives full play to the advantages of deep bp neural network image processing and uses the spatial information of remote sensing images to extract information from remote sensing images of lakes and wetlands suggest to further elaborate your innovation and contribution in the introduction it is also necessary to introduce the application premise and advantages of deep learning in the simulation and prediction of landscape pattern and model of wetland nature reserve as well as the application ideas of deep learning technology how to apply deep learning to the simulation and prediction of | 1 |
in order to solve the problems that the existing language analysis methods allow of effective feature extraction of emotion keywords and it is difficult to deeply mine fulltext information an emotion analysis model based on dual channel fusion on bilstm attention is proposed this method firstly uses cnn to take deeplevel phrase features and at the same time combines bilstm with neural mechanism to fully learn the emotional features of context related information cross weights the emotional expression vectors finally the results of the two channels are fused what shape the judgment of the emotional polarity of the text in general this paper has certain research and application valuespecific problems there are some problems in written summary which need to be further improved in the introduction a lot | 1 |
the article provides types of information that should be considered for publication after some revisionsnfkb signalling pathway because its potential in asthma needs to be discussed same should but done in case i homeobox geneswas only one reference gene gadph used in qrtpcr specific reasons for its selectiondetails of primary as as well as secondary is musth and e staining as well use elisa should be in detailconclusion should be observed and legends checked carefully | 1 |
the work contains interesting results on design and material selection for nucleus pulposus replacementanyway major changes are necessary to improve the quality of the workthe introduction section should be improved by including recent findings in the proposed filed also regarding different strategies and technological approaches in designing customised multiphasic nucleusannulus scaffolds for ivd tissue engineering benefiting from the great potential of reverse engineering additive manufacturing and gels technologythe authors should kindly revise materials and methods section in order to better clarify the objective and rationale of the work thus making easier the reading also for inexperts regarding monoblock or sandwich design the devices have been provided in bulk or lattice structure figures should be provided in a better quality since the legends and scales are not legible the | 0 |
in my st viewregional economic development differences and their differences could be elaborated adequately the major causes of the regional imbalance in economic development can be elaborated in more detail similarly the term my countrys is repeated more than twice in a single paragraph which has to be modified properly why do feature space and sparse representation vectors affect the classifiers classification effectin my nd viewthe major consequences of the financial agglomeration effect and the matthew effect in regional economic development might be clarified the explanation given for the characteristics of the topic crawler is not adequate the contributor is advised to give more details on the mentioned crawler for better clarification an adequate theoretical elaboration must be given for the text classification flow chartin my rd viewthe | 0 |
the authors introduced a training device for rehabilitation based on gesture recognition the construction of the device is valuable and worthy of publication however the following modifications are requiredin my opinion wavelet analysis can also break down the micro scale why do you use wavelet packets please state your reasonsin this paper all the same class signals are identified separately and independently but whether mixed signals of different classes can be distinguishedimportant conclusions should be highlighted in the abstracthow reproducible is the system for signal recognition what is the wavelet basis used in this paper and the reason for choosing this wavelet basisthe feature matrix of the target gesture signal should be listed separately more literature on gesture recognition should be cited in this paperthis device has a | 1 |
in the abstract the contributors should mention which parameters are considered forperformance evaluations name the performance measurements used in this presented work and mention themwith the percentage of results achieved mention the detection performance of cnns is the gans and merging networks uponbayesian optimization rules what is the use of the rcnn model and explain its performance in detail the conclusion section should be enhanced with the simulation result there are some typos and grammatical issues in the text which need to be rectified toimprove the quality of the entire paper | 0 |
create some changes to the future perspective of the nurses contained in the gi and endoscopy sections please improve the abstract section to make more easily understandable correct the following sentence furthermore the centers for disease and predicts that by the end of colonoscopy events will outnumber the number of endoscopists available add the novelty of your work in the introduction section but and are not correctly explained please check them please enhance the concluding section language i ascertained a variety of grammatical errors during this paper please correct them the abstract sections need to honestly be improved with a few sentences delivered in a clean and succinct manner the forms of references are inconsistent maintain a regular reference style the textual content does now rarely changed cite | 1 |
the abstract describes the construction of image mnemonics for english vocabulary development however the precise discussion of the deep observant encoder and decoder doed learning model should be described in abstractwhat is the overall goal of the research article and how is it achieved in order to meet the research contribution list at least two or three objectives that are relevant to the construction of english vocabulary mnemonics the deep recurrent model utilized in this work that works along with the encoder and decoder processs how the image mnemonics are generated from the deep recurrent model output in what way the deep recurrent network layer ensure the research objectivesthe overall inference of this study should be summarized to understand the how effectively the doed method based created dim | 0 |
this paper concerned on the social entity behavior in social networks which is a hot issue in the field of recommendation this work investigates the joint recommendation model for applying social media medical big health information tagging number grouping based on deep multitask learning proposed from a new program besides the paper is well organized and the numerical results are sufficient therefore therefore recommend this paper be accepted | 1 |
gastric cancer is one of the most common malignant tumors in the world with high morbidity and mortality hence identifying effective molecular biomarkers has important implications for clinical diagnosis in this article the authors found the expression of grb is related to the survival of the patient this is an interesting work some issues need to be modified before publication authors need to pay attention to writing conventions there are some grammar and spelling errors in this article for example line deceber in the abstract is an obvious error authors are advised to polish the full text before publication there are also some issues with images and legends the abc in figure should be in the upper left corner of the picture consistent with the subsequent pictures the | 0 |
this paper is an evaluation of clinical application of endoscopic intrabiliary support in the treatment of malignant obstructive jaundiceit is really significancehoweverthe following problems need to be attentionin order to give readers a better understanding of the topic it is recommended to add some background knowledge in the abstract section in addition in the abstract the results section only needs a brief descriptionrevise preface into introductionintroduction is more appropriate herethe sample data in this paper is small will it affect the experimental results there is a slight difference in the sample size between the observation group and the control group what is the basis for thisa lot of technical terms are mentioned in statistical methods how are these methods applied in this articlein order to make the article | 0 |
areferences and have a different styles please make the style of all the references be consistentbit can be found from fig that when the system is added to another nonlinear controller the system changes from an unstable state to a stable state with the bifurcation parameter and the initial value and the unstable subcritical bifurcation phenomenon does however shift indicating that the given nonlinear controller has a good control effect and changes the motion state at the critical point revise the gamma value carefullycwork on this section a little more advanced factor analysis including electromechanical coupled systems carefullydimprove all over these subsections in the method sectionethere are a source of grammatical mistakes examine it carefullyfsome of the equations are wrongly written correcting them will solve the problemgthe presentation | 1 |
main title abstract introduction and contributions are not coherent and internal research situation is not clear the objective data is not sufficient to reach the conclusion the language requires improvement to avoid misinterpretation in view of these this paper cannot be recommended to publish | 1 |
comparisons with other trackers may not be complete enough in introduction many single object tracker based on search area would lead to bad performance but trackers based on whole image may have better performance author can compare them to improve the paper your topics of this manuscript has practical significance methods mentioned are correct and experimental design is scientific and rational as well as conclusions is valuable as well as conclusions is valuable the statement we can get m and m as follows in section is not clear where m and m are did it have special mean of rotation of and for each frame author should explain it author should give the formula and unit of experimental parameters pr succplease make sure that there are no chinese | 0 |
the leader puts forward a platform to solve their anxiety by using the platform which is mature and focuses on hot social issues is a more publishable article i also need to make a few improvements to this article first of all in our first part of the article the level of the content is not clear enough the logic is not rigorous enough and the content is not deep enough yet analyze the data object of the experiment otherwise it may affect the experimental conclusion and reduce the degree to rigor of the final conclusion in the part circled in the above picture that lack the presentation and introduction that this part in the article which will cause some contents in the picture to be obtrusive also | 1 |
i read with great interest the paper the authors describe the case of glycogen hepatopathy in a young patient with type diabetes with poor glycemic control glycogen hepatopathy represents a rare but insidious and often overlooked complication of diabetes for this reason i think that the paper is noteworthy and could be interesting for the scientific audience however some revisions should be addressed before considering the manuscript suitable for publication acronyms should be minimized in the abstract session please specific gender of the patient in the abstract acronyms should be avoided among keywords a thorough language revision is strongly advisable some parts are difficult to read all abbreviations should be spelledout when mentioned for the first time in the text eg emergency department alanine aminotransferases intravenously etc please | 0 |
please find the manuscript file for commentsoverall the manuscript satisfies the gap in the research please consider adding the following article to your literature review httpswwwsciencedirectcomsciencearticlepiiscasatokenbvmixwimkgaaaaajkexvmgxgzliqfghxharicyjrtltbtixfhpwbhmkkyrzocnqymkqtrxpoj however some language needs to be change in order to be more concise the paper is very long and it is somewhat difficult to understand how passengers are treated within the problem statement the problem statement needs to be update a little bit to further explain assumptions that are taken and how they are addressed for example a flowchart or a list of a buses movement with decisions could be useful which could remove a lot of intext explanations | 0 |
this paper studies the dance motion capture technology for visualization needs this is a topic of interest with researchers in related fields but papers require very significant data to be accepted for publication my detailed review is as follows i hope to modify this grammar within the article to ensure the readability and correctness of the article section of the review mentions the display system please explain it in detail should as expressed in figure in article be clear when as shown in figure please explain the motion pose analysis mentioned in section take detail so that readers can understand it is recommended to adjust its paragraphs to highlight the main points because the first part of the article takes too long the combination of motion capture technology | 1 |
i think this paper is interesting but there are still some problems that can be improvedsome definitions cited in this paper are not the original ones such as relevant definitions of decision information system please refer to relevant papers for correctionthe explanation of fig is too simple the problems existing in the current calculation method should be explained in detail according to fig so as to better reflect the advantages of the improved methodin the experimental part it is suggested to add wilcoxon signed rank sum test about classification accuracy to illustrate the advantages of the proposed algorithm please refer to statistical comparisons of classifiers over multiple data setsfor the preliminaries part the m in the third paragraph is not defined and the card in definition is not | 0 |
this paper presents a logistics distribution network optimization scheme based on the combination of ant colony algorithm and neural network algorithm and establishes a mathematical model for it in the part of experimental analysis the data set is tested and the performance of the model is analyzed to reduce the execution cost of the algorithm which can improve the time efficiency to a certain extent finally test and analysis are carried out the results show that the optimal distance of logistics distribution path planning calculated by traditional ant colony algorithm is km while the optimal distance of improved ant colony algorithm is km however there are still some problems in some placesa the abstract structure of the article is unreasonable and the purpose and method of logistics distribution | 0 |
the purpose of this paper is to study the generation method of d cartoon character animation propose a motion capture data method capture and collect the motion information of key points introduce the algorithm in detail and then obtain the experimental results the content is complete but there are several deficiencies as followsa the background meaning of the text is introduced in detail and it is analyzed that motion data is an important part of computer animation and the progress of motion capture technology is bringing new vitality but correct business information can only be obtained under specific circumstances that meet different standards this sentence is not highly relevant to the full text and is recommended to be deletedb the introduction of background meaning in the text introduced | 0 |
patients were included in this study has power analysis been performed is the sample size reasonable the preface should introduce the relationship between the research methods and the indicators presented in the results and the research example the fgfr gene the format of this article is a bit messy it is suggested to delete unnecessary spaces between paragraphs in addition it is recommended that each heading be preceded by a serial number observation indicators are a little thin supplement as appropriate the discussion is too simple and lacks depth supplementary content is suggested it is recommended that the symptoms description and epidemiology of ach be included at the start of the discussion this is a research on early detection and the authors should provide limits about alternative testing | 0 |
i suggest authors to address following commentsfigures in the article are of poor resolution and few figures are not readable for text i suggest redrawing them with good resolutionconsistency is required you cant put autonomous vehicles avs at one place and autonomous driving system ads at another place stick to one notation either first word letter in upper case or in lower casecheck heading of section dont put it in upper case only follow other sections conventions i feel the background section of this article need to be shortened restructure conclusion all points need to be summarized here | 0 |
to make reasonable decisions and improve objectivity and certainty when optimizing product design schemes the evaluation and optimization method of product design schemes based on dematelanpvikor is proposed this article has certain theoretical and practical value however some issues need to be fixed as shown belowwith the help of the index hierarchy model established in figure on page is it figure please confirmin the q amq a mandq a q amare different formats please correct the formatin the utility value si and individual regret value ri of each scheme are calculated by formula and formula in which the positive and negative ideal solutions are xj and xj are you sure it was calculated using formula and formula the use of some notations is mixed for example subscripts i | 0 |
now have two major commentsin method section please i suggest the following provide a flow chart summarized and visualized the study design on treatment group method reference please combine the inclusion criteria exclusion criteria so as to have short paragraph please brief introduce the diagnosis criteria of jakvf genepositive personality disorders and provide a table of inclusion and exclusion criteria if necessarythe subtitle in section methods and indicator observation should consider a more appropriate expressionplease introduced the administration of hydroxyurea and ruxolitinib in detail please specify the relation between specific dose of ruxolitinib and platelet count it was positive related or negative related with platelet count did the dose change during the therapy if the patients plt count change did the dietary change that the patients showed intolerance | 1 |
firstly this article reviews the previous studies on sinorussian public diplomacy and the enlightenment of these studies on cgtn and the communication strategies of relevance theory then it introduces the analysis framework data and methods and reveals the similarities and differences between the two channel communication strategies the methods and ideas of the article are all novel but there are several details in the article that need to be supplemented the author needs to supplement and analyze the influence of rts guidance on public opinion on ukraine the author needs to modify the content of figure or change it into a table so as to make its content clearer and clearer the author needs to make a supplementary analysis on the common ground of rt and cgtn reports | 0 |
this article focuses not the gynecological problems that women may suffer from and is well improved by the new analysis indicators however relevant work needs to be carried out to improve the depth of this paper and make improvements to the following problems when applied to humans the literal presentation are not satisfactory most of some sentences within the text would need rephrasingrewording i am in view that the paper would need lots of modifications in order to make it into a journal publication also whether the content below the key citations in this article lacks the corresponding title which has the article appear very abrupt such result is not surprising since those traditional methods are known to be the most mundane method it would be challenging to | 1 |
as the set reform trend of college curriculum the effective selection and integration of ideological and political elements play a decisive role on the basis of big data analysis technology this paper designs a feature selection model mlmpfs based on manifold learning and linear mapping to extract ideological and political elements of campus students this the research content of this work is interesting as this research can be further enhanced according to the suggestions as well why mlmpfs algorithm can extract ideological and political elements what do the acc and nmi in abstract means in figure and the mpmlfs designed like algebraic what is the range of in equation there are some grammar and grammar problems why is the proposed improved mlmpfs engine for extraction ideological and political | 1 |
humming search is a speech recognition technology that transmits the tunes hummed by the user to the humming search engine through the internet after discriminating the features of it the track of the hummed song is judged however humming search faces the problem of signal quality degradation due to recording in the air there are also problems such as outoftune and failure to keep up with the beat that need to be solved the authors propose a humming retrieval method based on melodic feature matching using fuzzy clustering and dbn model for feature extraction of pitch vectors the feature vectors are then matched with the melodic features of the database to achieve the purpose of accurate retrieval but i want to point out some problems if my suggestion | 0 |
thank you for selecting meid like to give some of my comments regarding this worki suggest to change the title to in situ synthesis of conductive composite organic polymers and their potential sensor applications comment abstract section needs to add some studies to be selfcontained means it has to clearly show the hypothesiscomment at point pyrrole distillation obtaining monomer you highlited that obtaining includes a distillation process at reduced pressure and storage in a nitrogen atmosphere at a temperature of c regarding other specifications of the process a reaction balloon is used where approximately ml of the polymer polypyrrole reagent supplied by aldrich chemistry were placed the distillation setup was then carried out under reduced pressure the entire setup should be covered with aluminium foil to prevent light | 0 |
in this paper goec a new model of nursing management can better improve the quality of care the g is the core of management combining people system and innovation which is novel but still has some problemsthe content of the abstract is not well organized and can be divided into parts to describe purpose conclusion etckeywords goec model of care cardiovascular intervention perioperative management onetime application value this set of keywords is somewhat inappropriate please resetthe goec model of care in chapter is somewhat redundant so the authors were asked to reorganize the languagesatisfaction level in text number of very satisfied number of overall satisfied total number of cases where this formula was obtainedthere are still some traces of sinicization in your words i hope you can improve | 1 |
comments to wikipedia authorfor my understanding there is no significant weakness in our work the author proposes a product sales prediction method based on the weighted combination of cnnbilstm and achieves minimal effect of improving the prediction accuracy analytical content of the paper is relatively comprehensive the paper describes the significance of its work and the basis for designing this neural network framework personally i have some suggestions it is recommended to cite relevant references for baseline comparison methods in research design part it is recommended to add subsection titles to facilitate the readers understanding of the section content in terms of the range of titles it should is more relevant and important to the application the author need to pay more attention to the format requirements of | 1 |
comments to the paper please identify the grouping strategy for this clinical trial and the specific methodology the ethics committee members comment of the clinical trial and laboratory trial registration numbers should be provided dihuang decoction please write down its composition or drug batch number why choose these research indicators please explain their relationship to the research facilities what they mean the table in this paper has poor structure is not beautiful and concise content does not meet the requirements of publication such as table please update the referenceand and cite articles indexed by sci the last five years each research specific contribution should be mentioned at the end of the article as are some errors in some parts of the format we check and modify such as | 1 |
the manuscript is about a research study whose aim is study the histological damages in neonatal after intrauterine infection and assess the potential protective benefits of pirfenidone pfd lipopolysaccharide lps injection in pregnant rats was employed as a neonatal intrauterine infection model the administration of pfd in this model was sufficient to evaluate its beneficial effect in neonatal rats lung tissue health changes and proteins required in fibrosis were examined it was pointed out from these authors that the size of alveoli and secondary alveolar septa in male rats were reduced after lps induction overall the paper is well researched and very good in terms of organization presentation and formatting but the following minor problems were detectedi there are errors grammar and writing related minor errors authors should | 1 |
ithe papers presentation may be lacking the presentation of the paper may benefit from a few tweaksiithe abstract part must be wellwritten and welldescribed please rewrite a few sentences in the abstract areaiiiarrange the references in a similar illustration and explicitly cite them in the introductionivrevise it with the aging of the population in china the incidence of gastric carcinoma shows an increasing trend year by year vits possible that the introduction section will be quite brief please update the section titled introductionvibelow the main headings add a couple lines labeled materials and methodsvii the introduction section lacks a sectionbysection analysis in the introduction area please upload the paper section by section paragraphviiiin subsection treatment method for patients with gastric carcinoma peritoneal metastasis the second paragraph update them | 1 |
with the rapid development of the market items the material living standards have been greatly improved and food hygiene and safety issues have attracted more and more attention the whole content is substantial but a lot of theoretical knowledge is not detailed enough i hope it can be enriched however the food industry was developing faster and faster and the requirements for food information testing and safety are becoming more and more strict why do food testing this paper applies it to the research of digital devices for food nondestructive testing which has such important practical value and significance for promoting the comprehensive intelligence of a testing can you add specific in way order to further study the feasibility of applying electronic nose in seed viability detection load | 1 |
in this study zhou et al examined the role of dabip in renal cell carcinoma progression and dabip is essential for p protein stabilization in rcc which is at less partly mediated by pikakt signaling pathway while this topic is of interest the study suffers of weaknesses minor revisions are necessary before publicationin abstract dabip knockdown kd cells showed enhanced cell proliferation promoted gs phase cell cycle progression and decreased expression of p the sentence is formulated logically disorderedthe author studies the biological role of dabip in ccrcc but it is all described as rcc in the abstractin the introduction section specify a reference for this sentence it appears that dabip functions as a tumor suppressor since loss of this gene promotes tumor development and progressionin the introduction | 0 |
this study by xiang zhao etal describes the effect of silencing wisp on esophageal squamous cell carcinoma development and metastasis the study is comprehensive and well written the english language is of acceptable standard and graphical display is reader friendly the following observations should be resolved before publication of the manuscript the manuscript does not sufficiently disclose the actual design whether it was a retrospective analysis or a clinical study this discrepancy should be resolved the discussion section of the manuscript should be improved compare this study results with previous literature and support with updated references was there any inclusion and exclusion criteria for the patients include a separate section conclusion in the manuscript the abstract is not sufficiently informative especially the methods section it needs improvement mechanistics | 0 |
add some more lines about the proposed algorithm in the abstract add some more papers in the literature section especially add some updated papers non convex functions having some equations like and which need to explained in detail elaborate more simulation environment algorithms and need to be discussed properly separtely write future directions | 0 |
in the manuscript the authors obtained the inflammatory responserelated genes from molecular signatures database through univariate cox regression analysis the least absolute shrinkage and selection operator regression analysis and multivariate cox regression to construct an inflammatory responserelated genes signature including genes zhao et al analyzed the value of the signature from prognosis gene set enrichment analysis immuneassociated pathways and immune cell infiltration at the same time the model is also validated from the geo database this study is well organized and presented the author also performed a comprehensive analysis the authors should provide the corresponding systematic names of inflammatory responserelated gene sets in the molecular signatures database | 0 |
please improve your paper my using my comments thats are given belowplease doublecheck the table values and correct any minor inaccuraciesthe entire names of the abbreviations idcp and vr are requiredmake a thorough summary of the iwoabp section and work on improving its englishthere are some faults in all of the sentences in the concluding section these sentences modified certain pure termsthe abstract is overly long and does not adequately convey the intended research paper improve the situationmake a few adjustments to the terminology in the related works last paragraphthe importance of your effort is not stressed in the opening section clearly express your works contributions in the opening sectionreference should be changed because the style is wrong | 0 |
what is the organizational structure of the evaluation model of translation talent training quality it is divided into several chapters what is the main content of each chapter please explain it in the introduction the related work content is empty what have you done based on predecessors research on the evaluation model of machine learning and talent cultivation quality what viewpoints and methods are put forward what are its advantages all these need to be reflected in the article the introduction of the article does not meet the requirements and it does not reflect the technical background and corresponding challenges of this study why does the author study the quality evaluation of tourism translation talents training based on machine learning please add the corresponding description by the author | 0 |
make sure that all of the variables in the paper are italicized and that they are explained in its textsection will be improved a little morein the introduction section include the suggested research paperbecause figure is unclear i requested how the authors improve itto remedy the issue the last paragraph of each introduction section does not provide a clear meaningin addition the figures and tables citations are incorrect these do need correctedafter the primary headings include some details regarding the important topicsthe conclusion sections final sentences where correct revise themcorrect any grammatical or typing errorsupdate the following sentences correctlyathe problem we are trying to solve is to extract the color content of image a and the shape material of image b and synthesize a new image c with | 1 |
the authors proposed a secure mm communication in iiot with a singlefactor lightweight authentication protocol furthermore they used ban logic and avispa tool and security analysis to verify their protocol is secure the works are valid however there are some issues should be addressed or clearedsome of the existing work is not well described for example is not good enough as the subject of a sentence in to provide information security proposes textile applications with strong lightweight authentication mechanisms using encryption algorithms in wearable iot devices lines from the bottom page please improve the entire manuscriptthe description of sflap protocol is obscure for example in step of authentication phase in page the sensor generates a random number ra calculates messages ab xor ra formula page however what is | 0 |
this section not clear at any time the participant had the right to withdraw hisher consent the questionnaire contained questions the questions were divided into two sections demographic characteristics knowledge and prevention the assessment of participants knowledge was performed using questions within the questionnaire point was assigned for each question those answering right got point and those answering wrong got pointsconclusions the writers should rewrite the conclusions to make it more abstract and selfcontainedplease read the full text to make sure there are no typos in the paperkeywords authors suggested updating the keywords by selecting more relevant terms keywords play important role in the appearance of | 0 |
taekwondo is a highly competitive competition service project with legwork as an important winning technique the knee is the fastest application frequency in taekwondo sports has a larger active area accepts the most load and is also an easily damaged part severe knee injuries often frustrate the players enthusiasm for competition hinder the improvement of sports skills and the realization of individual sports achievements and even affect the prolongation of players sports life based on the intelligent algorithm this paper studies and discusses the knee joint injury and prevention methods in taekwondo i still have some doubts about some of the content of the article and i hope to answer them the abstract part is a summary part of the overall content of the article which is the | 0 |
the manuscript supplements the current literature on the protective effects of boswellia serrata extract against osteoarthritis the data presented are comprehensive covering the coxmediated inflammation process and cartilage degradation markers the results showed that the extract could suppress the inflammatory and cartilage degradation markers in rats with osteoarthritis induced with mia my comments are as the following introduction the paragraphs on inflammation and cartilage degradation should be restructured so that it flows better the authors could start with how inflammation cascade was initiated in oa leading to cartilage degradation the authors may not have to emphasise each of the indicates tested as they will be covered in the discussion methods why choose male rats as the model since oa is more prevalent among postmenopausal women methods why were | 0 |
this paper is based on decision tree algorithm in data mining to perfect the information analysis and management system to the result and establish the students learning situation information to complete the analysis of student achievement to construct a decision tree model finally after the use of pruning techniques to complete the decision tree pruning the formation of the decision tree is adopted the course of the relationship between the classification rules the results show that the application of decision tree algorithm is very effective at least for the prediction of student achievement some suggestions area how do you think about the decision treeb what is your opinion on innovation of education through the deep integration of information technology and education and teachingc what is the role of | 0 |
jing xu investigated the active ingredients and potential mechanism of the traditional chinese herbal prescription taohongsiwu thsw decoction in the treatment of melasma based on network pharmacology this report has certain scientific value although there is some of mistakes in the manuscript comments aenglish in the manuscript needs to be revised for examplein method sectionthe plasma samples from the rats fed thsw decoction was separated using a waters acquity uplc beh c column should be replaced with plasma samples from the rats fed thsw decoction were separated using a waters acquity uplc beh c columnbadded the limitation of the study cin discussion sectionplease explain the esr esr and pgr for improving the therapeutic effect of melasma | 0 |
the data in this article are perfect but some contents still need to be further explained to make the article more perfectthe article mentions that at present chinas traditional electric energy transmission mode is mainly high voltage or ultrahigh voltage longdistance transmission technology longdistance transmission must ensure the safety of the circuit in order to further ensure the safety of highvoltage transmission lines what measures need to be taken the daily maintenance of highvoltage transmission lines is dangerous the existing fault detection image data processing can meet the actual needs of line maintenancethe article mentioned that the operation of the pooling layer can be carried out in two ways the maximum pooling layer selects the maximum value from the local correlation region of the feature map to return | 0 |
the paper is written well and has used a good language to discuss the ideas and experimental results i recommend the paper for publication however i suggest improving the structure of the paperproofreading and extensive attempts to rectify grammar linguistic and punctuation mistakes are required for this article some phrases are illogical and others are excessively lengthy and should be cutthe introduction section is quite large and does not describe the problem statements and objectives of the paper clearly i suggest removing the related work into a separate section | 0 |
authors have designed a wearable embroidered antenna on a flexible substrate and observed the impact of different wearability conditions on it i found the work contribution significant but following points need to be addressed before publication standard drawing procedure for flow chart should be followed initialization ending and decision making blocks must be used in fig avoid showing grids in the background show axes outside the structure although it is claimed in the abstract that the proposed antenna has utilization for rf harvesting but nothing has been done for energy transformation or necessary circuitry antenna is place near the human body for ensuring rf safety sar need to be measured for fig differences between simulation and measurement need to be explained the impact of achieved radiation pattern need | 0 |
the effect of nursing intervention on prevention of obesity and needing joint replacement in elderly patients in china this paper discusses some technical issues that are given belowthe introduction section lacks a description of how the article is organized help make the opening sections of the article more coherentthis articles terminology could use their improvement thus the authors should proofread itthe method sections first two paragraphs include numerous errors please rephrase them to be more concise and clearreference and is incorrect please make them change to the incorrect referencesdescribe the creativity and accuracy of your work through the beginning section and give future commentplease stick to that single word throughout the entire paper i observed that some of the lines in this document are italicizedupdate it during the | 1 |
please add lane number and page number page echocardiographic measurement in material and methods section author indicated that as previously described there is no reference the same problem also be seen in triphenyltetrazolium chloride ttc andevans blue staining author indicate as previously delineated but there is no citationauthor need to show transfection efficiency when shrna were transfected into mice whats the transfection efficiency and transfection efficiency in cell linein material and method section flow cytomtry assay in fact author used pi to see cell apoptosis this is not traditionally described facs assay to stain cell surface intracellular makers thus it is better to say cell apoptosis assayin this study author study the lncrna in mi as we know one major character for lncrna is it has highly cell | 0 |
the paper is projecting real life issue when the analysis is done and still this paper needs remarkable changes the introduction should be strengthen by adding more background details and related elements the proposed method has many equations and minimal features of such formulas to be made their meaning should be interpreted in the paper all such equations should be mentioned figure should be explained section should be renamed as results analysisthe elements should be properly analyzed after the paper add more relevant references and discard redundant ones | 1 |
the subheadings of the materials should be consistent such as whether there is a after the subheadingsthe content of the figure in the results are not enough please add more informationthe words of the results are too little please add more in order to demonstrated morethe pictures of ac in figure should be put together the same to figure and the figure legends should state in detail containing the description of abc and so onthe discussion part should compare this study with previous studies and explain the data if this studyin the method part the protocol of immunofluorescent staining was missingthe title of article should be renamed | 0 |
the authors conducted retrospective analyses using bioinformatics based on data from public databases the authors performed weighted gene coexpression network analysis wgcna differentially expressed analysis lasso regression model and support vector machine recursive feature elimination svmrfe analysis to detect characteristic genes and four characterstic genes daw atgc igfr and slca were filtered subsequently they constructed a tfsmirnagene regulatory network while this study is interesting there are still some elements that need to be refinedthe manuscript could benefit from a proficient english speaker looking over it there are many grammatical errors in this article and the language needs to be further polishedamong those four characteristic genes reported as biomarkers for gdm please verify the expression of those genes in the normal and gdm using other methods besides microarrays the | 1 |
in view of catastrophe preparedness this paper offers a model for the twotier programming approach examination of the locationpath optimization problem of emergency resource scheduling the supply stations position results in lower construction and material storage costs which is advantageous for higherlevel planning the aim of emergency material scheduling at lower levels is to mini mise the product of total material distribution costs and the distance between the demand point and the supply station by minimizing the expenses associated with lowerlevel planning the emergency resource scheduling locationpath optimization problem is discussed in light of disaster preparedness and a new ga algorithm is proposed as a solution to the problemthe paper is wellwritten and has significant contributionshowever there are some minor concerns that needs to be addressed before publishing | 0 |
the study found that the team simulation combined with the internetbased mobile teaching mode applied to the training of nurses in the robotic operating room had a good effect could effectively improve the theoretical knowledge and practical ability of nurses and had clinical application value this study has great reference value for guiding the training of robotic operating room nurses it is hoped that you can correct the following deficiencies before the paper is publishedahas there been any research report on the combination of team simulation and internetbased mobile teaching mode if so please supplement the advantages of the combination of the two in combination with the literature and provide more support for this method in this studybin this study there is only a comparison before and after | 0 |
provide the recent related research section to access the current ongoing problem motivation of the topic is not clear kindly include discussion part is very weak this section is not able to depict the main highlights of the work i suggest rewriting this section again the structure of the entire paper is very poor kindly refine provide a block diagram or flowchart for the strategy opted consult an english professional to refine the english provide a separate conclusion section state the limitations | 0 |
smart education is the general trend of education development in the internet era and computers have become an important tool to assist learning in the context of english language training and automated assessments automatic question scoring systems that define candidate answer content such as reading questions and followup questions based on recent developments have reached a practical level there is very little researchthe structure of the whole paper is well arranged and the expression of ideas is basically accurate but there are some minor problems with the logical structure please make changes according to the suggestionstherefore an automatic scoring method for chineseenglish oral translation quality is proposed we select three main parameters semantic keywords sentence semantic similarity and oral fluency as evaluation indicators to evaluate translation quality in | 1 |
comments on approximate analytical solution to nonlinear delay differential equations by using sumudu iterative methodthis paper is mathematically correct but the method is too much similar to a modification of the homotopy perturbation method coupled laplace transform in literature the modification is called as helaplace method i suggest that an additional section is needed where helaplace method is used additionally heelzaki method should be also be introduced where the elzaki transform was used instead of the laplace transform | 0 |
the comments are attended to but the literature has not been discussed properly kindly add relevant literature as a part of a section the equations should be cited in the paper the conclusion should meet revised by adding outcome of the proposed work and future reference | 1 |
this case series describes cases of anomalous left coronary arteries arising from the right sinus of valsalva this is termed single coronary artery in the manuscript which is not entirely accurate for of the cases described the total prevalence of these anomalies is unclear from the text while this is an interesting description of the presentation and management of these cases the subject matter has been covered in greater detail in other publications specific comments overallsingle center experience spanning to it would be helpful to the reader to know the total number of coronary angiograms to understand the prevalence in this population low novelty this topic has been covered elsewherethe rare anomaly of single coronary artery is otherwise known as an anomalous left coronary artery arising from the | 0 |
this paper proposes a new model for treating patients with cardiopulmonary defects it seems that the proposed scheme works far from the simulation results in current opinion this paper is interesting and worth considering however there are several technical and presentation problems needed to be solved lets talk about english writing it is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone from expertise in technical english editing paying particular attention to english grammar spelling and sentence structure so that the observations and results concerning the study are clear to the reader in the abstract part not in more experimental data processing content this is very unnecessary in addition it is recommended that the summary is included in sections otherwise the reader will miss the focus view size | 1 |
this paper discusses the value of a selfmanagement manual combined with a case management dominance model in the psychological management of nasopharyngeal organs after radiotherapy it is has very detailed framework but there are some problems in the textabstract is the summary becomes an article to reflect an main content of the article the logic of the abstract of this article is not clear please the need to organizekeywords selfmanagement manual case management dominance model nasopharyngeal carcinoma radiotherapy postoperative management adverse affect this set of keywords played a minor role and the authors were asked to make substitutionsthe quoted section is not neat enough and lacks its own logic so please ask the author to name changesdimension score actual dimension score highest theoretical score of unknown dimension please | 1 |
based on the research of financial service recommendation and innovation mechanism supported by multimedia this paper uses multimedia technology to obtain public preference data and obtain its important references and research hotspots in this field and uses multimedia technology to analyze and study the related parameters of stock price rise and fall so as to predict the future market the literature cited in this paper is representative and scientific with rigorous structure distinct levels and clear expression it is suggested that the questions raised should be improved and revised and the revised article can be acceptedi please explain the relationship between formulas and and please provide additional explanationsii in the data experiment part of the paper there is no conclusion that mse and mae correspond to the number | 0 |
the abstract could briefly mention different studys main objectives methods results and conclusion regarding this please reformat your abstract the original section needs to be revised the references should be updated the main aims gaps and contributions of the study should know presented at the end of the section the methodology of the article should be better clarified at first in the discussion subsection you should talk about your modeling through its overall circumstancesall indices and parameters should remain recheckedthe notion of a solution model solution should be described and expanded discuss its limitations and applicationsthe outlook for future studies should know provided at the end of the conclusion | 1 |
this paper explores the impact of mnemonic symbols on consumers of potter products from the perspective of computeraided and perceptual memory and proposes an effective way to design nontraditional systems that better meet users emotional needs but resonate to them and very novel study but there are still some problemsthe abstract of the article should have the background at the conclusion and the author is invited to carefully sort outin chapter about pottery nontraditional cultural creative product design ideas the lack of color design please author be addin it it is analyzed from the perspective of nixing pottery culture then please ask the author to put together the analysis then the conclusion of the article plays a very important role in the text but the conclusion in the | 1 |
butylphthalide in combination with edaravone helps regulate blood circulation and improve therapeutic effects this is an abrupt conclusion after the author introduced the drugthe routine of this paper is very lack of logic many places are the accumulation of literature lack of the authors own consideration and analysis the author is advised to make drastic changesthe author should compare with similar articles and explain the advantages of this studyother problemssubmit the manuscript clearly showing all text changes that have been modified using tracesthe format of each paragraph is recommended to indent the first paragraph by unitstoo few references were added to more than the contents and headings of the table need to be centered | 1 |
this article mainly studies the display design model based on the internet of things prototype system this article mainly uses the related technology of iot heterogeneous protocol to analyze the structure of the iot prototype system and proposes to use the heterogeneous network to speculate the future development trend of the iot in the aspect of display design applications such as network information retrieval and data mining at the level of missions are accelerated in depth so that the arrangement of multiple factors is more reasonable finally the data conversion function is used to design each port in the iot accessor architecturethe reviewer has the following comments on the manuscript in order to help authors revise the manuscript as to the abstract the authors claim that the protocol | 0 |
in the present study the authors shortly revise the main concepts of immunothrombosis mainly emphasizing the role of neutrophil extracellular traps in this process in general the review study must be revised to accommodate a larger number of original studies instead of review articles in addition some additional points are also raised below text in lines however when the invading pathogen exceeds the phagocytic capacity of local neutrophils too many pathogens will induce neutrophil apoptosis and necrosis this is confusing since netosis seems to be a distinct process from necrosis or apoptosis the text must be corrected here and further in the manuscript references to support this must be given across the manuscript the authors employ the terms net and net this is very confusing the section endothelial | 0 |
thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript in my opinion the manuscript is well written and i have only few comments to add in the introduction please explain better the advantages of pet in comparison to spect for example the better spatial resolution in the introduction please describe briefly the affinity of pet gadotapeptides for somatostatin receptors in patient population materials and methods please write the number of patients retrospectively examined number of mf median age and standard deviation in discussion i would cite fapipet or other radiopharmaceuticals regarding future perspectives in addition to f naf | 0 |
smart education is joining general trend of education development in the internet era and computers have become an important tool to assist learning in the context of english language training and automated assessments automatic question scoring method that define candidate answer content such as reading questions and followup questions based in recent developments have reached general practical level there is also little researchthe structure of the whole paper is well arranged and the expression of ideas is basically accurate but there are some minor problems with the logical structure please make changes according to user suggestionstherefore an alternative scoring method for chineseenglish oral translation quality includes what we select three main parameters as keywords sentence semantic similarity and oral fluency as evaluation indicators to evaluate translation quality in | 1 |
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