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i have reviewed the paper the paper is good but the following comments should be addressed here the revised paperthe language of our article endfiber power output equation statistical analysis results of trimedyne holmium laser under different power energy frequency levels and different buckling states is so good please improve it a little morethe abstract methods should be improvedupdate the recommended sentence a number of doctors have experienced that in the case of flexible ureteroscope shattering renal stones precisely in the case of large laser fiber bending the endfiber power differences of holmium laser lithotripsy may be significantly reducedin the final paragraph of the discussion section use clearer wordingpay close attention to the papers english problems doublecheck it and practise writing in englishthe background of the research should | 1 |
i suggest the authors to revise the followings in the manuscriptwhat is the main novelty of proposed study we have several propositions to use deep learning in various applications both in industry and agriculture what is the main advance of your research how is this study is related to the idea lightweight cnn model for anomaly detection in different situationswhat is novel in proposed transformer approach it takes operation of levels concatenation did you try other possibilities like unet other simple deep learning idea | 0 |
this does need further clarification the present study could be introduced in the future to consider other determinants of obesity such as physical activity dietary habits and comorbidities inclusion of this determinants will enable the implementation of a diagnostic model depend on regression analysisplease reformulate the definition for the introductionkeywords authors suggested updating the keywords by selecting more descriptive terms keywords play important role in the appearance ofconclusions the writers would rewrite the conclusions to make it more abstract with selfcontained | 1 |
in order to further reflect the feasibility of the online offline mixed teaching mode of college english teaching this paper proposes an online teaching system based on jee combined with the offline traditional teaching mode construct the english mixed teaching mode in the information environment based on the cloud computing online teaching system mode select two experimental classes for the mixed teaching experiment the experimental results show that the final twosided probability value of the two experimental classes is and the significance level is indicating that there is a significant difference between the two overall mean values that is there is a significant difference between class b and class a in the overall mean value of student achievement improvementthe paper is clear straight to the point straight to | 0 |
main theoretical article entitled circthbs promotes lung cancer metastasis by targeting active axis development authors by feng cao jiaqiang luan zuxun cai rufei liu rulin qian extensively and detailed investigated the role in underlying target of circthbs in lung cancer the author found that circthbs was elevated in nsclc cell and cells which predicted poor prognosis in nsclc vessels silencing circthbs inhibited proliferation migration and invasion of nsclc cells mechanistic analyses further revealed that circthbs directly targeted mirp to disrupt the suppressive effect of mirp on integrinbeta itgb downregulation of mirp reversed the depressive response of circthbs silencing on nsclc cells as expected itgb overexpression can reverse the inhibiting consequence of circthbs knockdown on nsclc cells overall the study is well designed and performed however several issues still | 1 |
a systematic review and metaanalysis for the role of nursing for selfcare in patients sustained from heart failure is a meaning given in this study the authors once performed a systematic review and metaanalysis for assessing the role of nursing to selfcare in patients suffering from heart failure however there are gaps many corrections should be madethere are too many grammar errors please correctthere are too many typos please attentiontoo many keywords why delete someplease show the description of figures and tables in the last volume of the paperfigure is not recommended please show more clear links add the description of resultsplease show figure legends behand the figuresplease show more description in the part of discussionplease add the references by using endnote softwareplease add more references about | 1 |
at present more and more students are using the mode of internet smart phone to learn english which is the college english teaching in the future teachers should adapt to the reform of teaching methods as soon as possible analyzes the transformation of artificial intelligence of big data the rapid evaluation of business mode proposes the evaluation method of teaching mode under the background of big data through kmeans algorithm based on it business teaching english model data clustering is completed the paper need to consider the following aspects at present more and more students are using the mode of internet smart phone to learn english which is the college english teaching in the future this sentence is discursive please revise it in the introduction part of the | 0 |
the results of the study were clear and statistically valuable therefore this result supports the guidelines for adopting mental health literacy to adjust to help build a students psychological resilience for mental health prevention and enhancementplease check the full name of rsca adolescent or adolescentsadditional reasons for choosing the kessler psychological distress scale k as the mental health literacy scale mhls and resilience scale for chinese adolescents rsca should be identifiedplease review the references in the content and references to be consistent and correct highlighted in yellow as attached | 0 |
as china becomes more and more internationally integrated chinas current chinese teaching model can no longer support the largescale output of foreign language talents we urgently need to improve our current english teaching model so this article came into being i hold a more optimistic attitude towards future prospects of this article and the content in the article has made less firm this attitude the author spread the full text by showing that the english video teaching mode can improve students english listening ability the technique is very improved but this article still exists many theoretical omissions is also normal i will try my best to help the author improve this article i i listed some on the problems i found below the realtime nature to this article | 1 |
the paper looks sound however i have some technical comments may help authors to improve the paper content how authors validate the estimated kernel density function how authors constructed markov transfer probability matrix provide some technical details english may be need to improve write instead of formula in equationnumber of the equation discuss the main limitation and how authors can solve it as a future work | 0 |
in this growing period when the tourism hobby is gradually expanding its market scale the tourism image and management level of a scenic spot are of great benefit in order to deeply understand the needs of tourists and improve the overall satisfaction of tourist areas this paper designs an impression perception system based on network big data for massive tourism reviews in the hadoop ecological environment the mixed nb model is used to program maps as to evaluate the advantages and disadvantages of tourism areas and improve the environmental environment some suggestions are put forward for the content of the article please discussing them further the theoretical part of tourism impression perception although the concept of impression perception is simply explained its meaning needed to get supplemented the | 1 |
genomic studies of rare diseases like congenital microtia are greatly needed however several issues should be addressed by the authorsin the abstract section chd and pax are related to proteins encoded by a known gene what does this sentence meanin the cell culture section it should be clear where the cell line used in this study was purchasedfigure d and figure e the scale bars should be addedfigure d the molecular weight of chd p pax and gapdh should be providedfigure c the scale bars of the immunofluorescence images should be providedin the discussion section results showed that msh rtel tp pax fgfr chd and frem were associated with known geneencoded proteins protein abbreviations should not use italics and all letters should be capitalized the author should checked | 0 |
the combination and cooperation of physical education and health education in normal universities is an inevitable trend which has been practiced in many schools and achieved remarkable results healthy physique is the basic premise for teenagers to serve the motherland and the people and it is the embodiment of the vigorous vitality of the chinese nation school education should establish the guiding ideology of health first strengthen physical education make students master basic sports skills and form a good habit of adhering to physical exercise there are still some problems in this paperwhat are the innovative results of this studywhat are the methods and suggestions to solve the problems existing in the current physical education teaching under the concept of healthsome of the documents are too old the | 0 |
the paper deals with the parameter identification through inverse analysis and numerical simulation of the mechanical properties of the different layers of rock masses in strip mining the paper points at a problem of consistency between the empirical data obtained through geological drilling but no explicit data is showed in comparison with the parameters obtained through the numerical simulations nor explanations for this inconsistency during the parameter identificacion three types of rock masses were considered however on the numerical simulations the model is presented as ten different layers being each one of them into one of this groups may the results differ if each of the layers is considered parameterindependent some justification shoud be pointed the boundary conditions of the numerical model are listed maybe an explanation for | 0 |
this paper proposes a corporate electricity data credit label indicators based on adf test var autoregressive model and granger causality test moreover it forms corporate credit label indicators containing three aspects of corporate governance corporate development quality and corporate development environment the work of this paper is good however the following problems still exist in the manuscript in the abstract use period instead of semicolon in page the expression of in firms credit labels should be in the firm credit labels replace all similar expressions in this paper why the index fig the graph of ar roots is in a picture there is no literature review section this needs to be added and it is here that you need to review the methods and results in the context | 1 |
in this study an elman neural network enn is introduced into the mining subsidence field to obtain more accurate parameters of probability integral method random forest is used to extract the best combination of features to simplify the complexity of enn network and ant colony algorithm and genetic algorithm are combined to optimize the weights and thresholds of enn network seventy groups of measured mining face data were selected as experimental data and the model was trained and learned the prediction results of pim parameters show that the optimized neural network has high precision and stability howeverthe paper can not be documented now some suggestions and advices are as follows the keywords should be added in the paper the font sizes in fig and fig are too small | 0 |
references citation is not in format and each reference need to be discussed separatelyequations should be given numberingin dsc formula multiplied with other parameters multiplication symbol is missingis dice coefficient and dsc differ similarly jac jaccard measures uniformity is required in mentioning the measuresrecent references need to be includedin ablation study analysis and table values are mismatching clarification is required | 0 |
as the mainstream reform trend of college curriculum the effective selection and integration of ideological and political elements play a decisive role on the basis of big data analysis technology this paper designs a feature selection model mlmpfs based on manifold learning and linear mapping to extract ideological and political elements of college students courses the research content of this paper is interesting however this research can be further enhanced according to the suggestions as following why mlmpfs algorithm can extract ideological and political elements what do the acc and nmi in abstract means in figure why the mpmlfs designed like that what is the range of in equation there are some grammar and spelling problems why is the proposed improved mlmpfs suitable for extraction ideological and political | 1 |
in this paper the author has proposed an evaluation algorithm for college students longdistance running sports injury degree based on association rules and has verified the effectiveness of the method through experiments the idea of this paper is innovative and useful my recommendation is a minor revision i got the following comments for the paperall the acronyms must be defined before using them in the paper for example the word ahp is used for the first time in the abstract section but its full form is not mentioned anywhere in the paper the contributions of the paper are not clearly mentioned the authors are advised to add a paragraph that describes the contribution of the paper at the end of the introduction sectionthe grammar of the paper needs | 0 |
postoperative analgesia selfefficacy and satisfaction are also related to many factors is there any correlation between the use time of the two drugs and postoperative indicators in addition the language of this paper needs further modification | 1 |
this research article entitled circthbs promotes lung cancer metastasis by targeting mirpitgb axis the authors by feng cao jiaqiang luan zuxun cai rufei liu rulin qian extensively and detailed investigated the role and underlying target of circthbs in lung cancer the author found that circthbs was upregulated in nsclc tissues and cells which predicted poor prognosis in nsclc patients silencing circthbs inhibited proliferation migration and invasion of nsclc cells mechanistic dissection further revealed that circthbs directly targeted mirp to disrupt the suppressive effect of mirp on integrinbeta itgb downregulation of mirp reversed the depressive effect of circthbs silencing on nsclc cells as expected itgb overexpression can reverse the inhibiting consequence of circthbs knockdown on nsclc cells overall the study is well designed and performed however several issues still | 1 |
this paper revealed that mdtld had protective effects on cerebral brain nerve injury in mcao rats while promoting angiogenesis and increasing the number of neurons through activating vegfvegfr pathway gfappositive cells and vegfvegfr target protein expression the paper is well organized and easy to understand it could be seen here the authors have done a lot of interesting work therefore the work in this manuscript is a valuable contribution to the field thus this manuscript can be accepted for publication despite the latest structural changes a the paper remains littered with confusing notation font choices and poor spelling the paper requires spellcheckingb more recent relevant references should be included in the literature surveyc some abbreviations should be list their full names before use with example maco cmsp omim | 1 |
the authors present a numerical approach to a special kind of nonlinear volterra integral equation involving autoconvolutions using an operational tau method volterra integral equations have various interesting applications in the natural sciences and finance so novel numerical approaches to both general and special cases are always of interest in particular for nonlinear equations the papers structure is clear and their results are presented concisely i did not find any serious flaws in the paper and thus recommend publication subject to minor corrections which i outline below the explicit series representation of the jacobi polynomials on page is valid for all alpha beta the additional condition of them being less than is unnecessary and should be removed compare the dlmf httpsdlmfnistgovewe recommend citing the dlmf section in the | 0 |
in this manuscript the authors use arcgis to study the traditional villages in shaanxi province china on their nuclear density proximity point index and geographic concentration index the spatial distribution characteristics and influencing factors of national traditional villages in shaanxi province have been explored the research is of significance for the protection and development of traditional villages i recommend this paper can be accepted after minor revisions the following is my detailed commentsthere are some typos or errors in the manuscript for example page line folk folk page line this paper analyzed in this paper we analyzed please explain why you choose nuclear density proximity point index and geographic concentration index to study in this manuscript the authors show that the data of traditional villages mainly comes from | 0 |
in this paper data mining technology id algorithm and gradient algorithm were proposed in the application analysis of decision tree classification method in the digital marketing analysis of chaowan brand under the background of artificial intelligence in the experimental part the performance value of the classification decision tree classification method was firstly analyzed after designing experiments analyzing experiments that analyzed results the completion of the entire article is high but some areas also need already be added at the same time optimal value of each attribute is standardized there are many different methods which must be determined according to the situation please explain the reason for the normalization initial treatment the lift curve reflects the lift effect of each group the cumulative increase curve reflects this absolute boost | 1 |
tcm syndrome differentiation and nursing combined with psychological intervention can noticeably meliorate the curative impact of early and middle stage breast cancer patients and is conducive to ameliorating their quality of life and allaying negative emotions which can be extensively promoted and applied in clinical practice the research results of this paper have important practical guiding significance but there are still the following problemsthe introduction needs to increase the relevant research contents what are the characteristics of the methods of syndrome differentiation and treatment for breast cancer what are the positive effects of psychological intervention please supplement the research on the etiology and pathogenesis of breast cancer in traditional chinese medicine what are the main responsibilities of the hospital ethics committee please supplement the related concepts of cognitive | 1 |
the manuscipt submitted by jiao wang embarks on il protien different doses and various other indicators and their effectsrepurcussion in stroke patients for which they analyzed patients data retrospectively between and the outcomes discussed are very interesting and may provide a foundation for the scholarsand healthcare professionals in maximizing the patient benefits i have noticed few issues which i would advise the authors to address but certainly this paper is worth publishing the comments are as underplease ensure academic pattern of writing in terms of grammer and punctuations etc the paper has serious linghistic issueswhat were the total energynutritional support given to differenet clusters please write it in respective sectionwas the nutritional support given by oral route or eternal route please ensure format unformity in units usedhow were | 0 |
in this paper the development and digitalization of cultural industry marketing based on big data the following comments are to improve the quality of paper describe the research methods in detail in the abstract in the introduction cite more references to explain the research results of others the conclusion does not describe the research results of this paper and it is suggested to supplement them in analysis of questionnaire results more content needs to be added to make the conclusion more convincing the description logic of some long sentences in this paper is not clear and the accuracy conciseness and scholarship of language expression need to be improved | 1 |
i read carefully the manuscript entitled impact of nursing empathy on the humanistic care ability hca among student chinese nurses the nature of the study is very interesting and somewhat novel however several points exist that should be taken into account the manuscript suffers from grammatical errors and typos the conclusion subsection of the abstract section should be trimmed and further summarizedthe authors must mention which type of statistical analysis has been performed on descriptive values the conclusion section of the manuscript should be shortened and only informative data should be presented the format of the manuscript must be stylish why the gender of nurses in favor of females rather than males the style of citation in the manuscript must be improved only surnames must be mentioned why | 0 |
comment the abstract should first clarify the purpose of the study and sort it out please supplement the contents of the abstractcomment the keywords selected in this article are not attractive enough it is suggested to modify the research keywordscomment the author needs to add appropriate content in the introduction to reflect the theme of this studycomment the author needs to add more references and modify the citation ordercomment please explain this paragraph more research starts from observed data looking for rules and using these rules to analyze and predict future data or unobservable data nonlinearity refers to the mathematical relationship between variables not a straight line but a curve surface or uncertain attribute which is called nonlinearitycomment please check the syntax of this paragraphwhile the traditional bookstore | 0 |
because the symbols using equation are not fully described the symbols in equation must be fully explained the abstract section please replace the term sentence symbols and grammar need to be addressed as welldefine the full name of the bp and icucorrect the journal sentencesiliterature adopts the aspects of quality control circle quality cycle and excavates the deep root problems revealed in the hospital management evaluation process and implementation have pointed out that the quality control circle activities should not be overstandardized but should be based on the judgment of increasing the degree of extensive participation reducing the stereotyped content and truly realizing the ability to use and make good use of the quality control circle management toolsiiia person or leadership ability is elected as the circle leader | 1 |
qualitative comparative analysis qca combines the characteristics of qualitative and quantitative analysis it was first proposed by charles larkin in and has been continuously improved in subsequent research ragin qca is mainly based on boolean logic algebra from the perspective of specific results may be due to the combination of different conditions through the comparison between cases we can find out the complex causal relationship between condition configuration and results du the structure is rigorous the layers are clear and the expressive ability is strong but some necessary explanations are missing please revise as required on the other hand gephi generates core author cooccurrence graph institutional cooccurrence graph regional cooccurrence graph cocitation analysis graph and uses python to obtain authors and author matrices for the second mock exam | 0 |
this paper presents a hybrid recommendation model for book borrowing although the idea is interesting this paper suffers from the issues of insufficientunclear presentation and limited experiments significant modifications are needed to improve the quality of this paper first of all this paper is poorly presented i have found the document with some light typos and many hardtoread sentences i therefore recommend the authors to revise it again to ensure that there are no grammar errors or misprints to improve readability the figures are all very low quality and pixelated also some figures are too simple to illustrate those important concepts in the paper a massive number of symbols are introduced in the formation the equation and their variables should be explained in a clearer fashion eg using | 0 |
have read the paper the image appears good but the following comments should be addressed in the revised paperthe language of the the endfiber power conversion and statistical analysis results of trimedyne holmium laser under different power energy frequency states and different buckling states is so poor please understand it a little morethe abstract section should be improvedupdate the recommended sentence a number of doctors recently experienced that in the case of flexible ureteroscope shattering renal stones precisely in this case of large laser fiber bending the endfiber voltage output of holmium laser lithotripsy must be significantly reducedin the final paragraph as the discussion section use clearer wordingpay close attention to the papers english problems doublecheck it and practise writing in englishthe background of the research should | 1 |
from reading this article it can be understood that cardiovascular diseases are the leading cause of death and disability in most developing and affluent countries and have attracted too great deal of attention from the medical literature there are some issues in my article that need to stand revisedthe abstract should focus on reflecting what is new in the literature and the activities that the author has placed special emphasis on on relevant useful information that the reader needs and on deleting what has formed common knowledge in the subject areathe introduction as the beginning of the thesis briefly introduces the nature and purpose of the thesis presents the realistic requirements of the research as well as an overview of previous activities and research in related fields and | 1 |
the current study performed by penghui shi et al performed systematic analysis of treatment with antiviral drugs will significantly inhibit the hiv rna pol gene expression and viral load in aids patients this study was interesting and could be accepted for publication after revisionthe main points to discuss of the study are patients were included in this study has power analysis been performed is the sample size reasonablethe introduction is too long the author should refine it in his own wordsintroduction lacks focus so it is suggested that the author make a segmented discussion according to different contents after refiningthis paper is well written and clearin its current version however it looks more like a technical report than an academic achievementi am not sure of the academic contribution | 0 |
the manuscript entitled chemical constituents from uapaca guineensis phyllanthaceae and the computational validation of their antileishmanial and antiinflammatory potencies by gervais mouth happi and coworkers reports the extraction separation characterization and computational evaluation of isolated products as antileishmanial and antiinflammatory molecules the work is important as it documents and characterize the active ingredients from local traditional medicinal plant rikio uapaca guineensis the work is carried out carefully the authors described the isolation and characterization in details i would recommend proving the nmr spectra of the characterized molecules in supporting information these molecules are being reported for the first time from this plant and the nmr spectra will guide the upcoming studies and researchers in this field the reviewer agree that sometimes trace impurities may present in nmr which | 0 |
the article entitled study on the application effect of cdio based training mode in icu nurse ecmo training is an interesting study however there are several minor issues should be correctedmajor points when p value the author should give specific values when there is significant difference between the data the author should mark the picture with this article requires ethical approvalminor points please ensure that the format of the full text is consistent such as whether the initial letter of the subtitle is capitalized and whether there are spaces before the paragraph the title of introduction is missing all words in the tables should be capitalized for example grouping the pictures and tables of the article should be placed at the end of the article there are many | 0 |
dear author following corresctions needed in the manuscript before final publication abatract is too long author need to revise and concise the abstract of the manuscript rewrite the paragraph from line no to in line no cant write it can not in the section mentioned the of research institute from where the authors researchers procured the cell line in section in the subtitle write mtt assay inplace mtt detection in the subsection insert the formula of cell viability properly subsection authors mentioned hg modeling provide the full name of hg rewrite the subsection properly author need to justify the meaning of statement mentioned in the line no and rewrite the statment properly fron line no rewrite the absatrct section with limitation and future direction | 0 |
this paper presents a detailed review of authentication algorithms particularly lightweight authenticated encryption techniques for iot devicesthe paper provides the very details of algorithms and systematically classifies them to facilitate an understanding of the related intricacies and relevant aspects this helps the developers to understand the limitations of different protocols and find the suitable one for their applications the paper is almost selfcontent and reader can understand easilythe novelty of the review is that it presents a comprehensive stateoftheart authenticated encryption method for an iot platform which is lacking in existing reviews and essential for the iot researchers and application developershowever the review can be improved further by addressing following comments in the introduction please mentions some drawback of existing review papers with their references please elaborate more | 0 |
thanks for doing the studyfound this incomprehensible hence need rewriting in alignment with shao et al who studied the safety of sglti in patients during ramadan and denied increased risk of dehydration among sglti usersin addition could you kindly explain your thoughts on limitations of this study what is your concern in a single ethnic study what are the possible confounders not included are there any other limitations of comparing drug empagliflozin at mg why not the lower mg dose vs dapagliflozin at mg are there any pharmacokinetics studies that suggest any comparison of degree of action thanks | 0 |
according to the characteristics of enterprise management data this paper proposes an enterprise management data mining algorithm based on immune algorithm which is of great significance to the development of enterprises and the personal development of employees judging from the research topic of this paper the article has good creativity and according to the current research results the article has good creativity therefore this is a good paper but there are some problems with some details of the paper and it is recommended to rework it once in the whole structure learning based on scoring search what are the commonly used scoring functions when using the bic scoring function and the aic scoring function for scoring how can i get a better score by comparing the values of | 0 |
in introducing the efficient evolutionary algorithm into the ant colony algorithm the article introduces the functions of quantum computing such as superposition entanglement and sexual coherence into the traditional swarm algorithm to improve the mass search ability of ants in the algorithm the ability to solve the speed etc thereby optimizing the logistics management system assisted by the internet of services improving the efficiency of business logistics reducing logistics costs bringing a better experience to the users improving the efficiency of logistics distribution among my country furthermore promoting economic development i insist this is ok but the following questions should also be answered the second part of my paper mentions the ant colony algorithm and the principles behind the quantum ant colony algorithm etc however for the previous | 1 |
abstract should include more content on the main achievements of the study develop the literature review section the conceptual model section needs to be improved the research objectives and methodology is unclear and should be better explained and motivated the research objectives and methodology should be better explained and motivated the results and analysis section is overall should be better analyzed and developed further and compare the optimum situation with the current situation develop the conclusions section to include the unique contributions of the paper theoretical and managerial implications limitations of the research must be added authors should debate their limitations in detail correctly in the conclusion section the authors have not discussed the advantages of the proposed model | 1 |
in this paper the author provides a solution to finegrained access control fgca and authenticated key exchange ake using keyhomomorphic constrained prf under the cpabpre model this is the first work to achieve fgac in the cpabpre model with keyhomomorphic constrained prf the solution in this paper can support dynamic and finegrained access policy well the result in this paper is useful for data storing in clouds besides that the structure of this paper is clear and the content is complete as well | 0 |
this paper focuses on ai big data marketing system in intelligent sensor networks it is of certain research value to use the existing hightech to correct the unreasonable marketing environment of d company and realize the automatic analysis of marketing precision and marketing data of d power company but there are still the following problems to modify please carefully go through the manuscript to polish the language including abstract there is a big problem in the citation of the references in the introduction of the article please add the principle of dbscan algorithm in section please check that abbreviations are properly introduced the first time they are used there is a big format problem in the article please check and modify the format of the full text additional | 1 |
aids is a global public health problem epidemiological survey found that the growth rate of new aids has been reduced by more than in lowandmiddle income countries around the world however a considerable part of aids patients in the world are still unable to be treated in time and the current situation of aids prevention and control is still grimthis study to investigate dyslipidemia and risk factors during antiretroviral therapy art in patients with human immunodeficiency virus hiv aids the result indicate that of the incidence of dyslipidemia is higher onhivaids patients when they getart which is affected by patientsage body mass index baseline cd cells and viral loadthe manuscript is written clearly and its in acceptable form without any major changesfurthermore minor comment that i would to | 0 |
in the present research to effectively construct a reliable gene signature for predicting the prognosis of patients with hgsoc a systematic pipeline was proposed to screen hgsocrelated genetic markers and gene expression profiles of hgsoc patients were obtained from gene expression omnibus geoand the cancer genome atlas tcga databases screening of prognostic markers was performed combining transcriptome and genomics data eventually constructing a gene signature this is a retrospective biomarker study based on clinical cohort the manuscript uses a variety of machine learning methods and the complex demonstration process reduces the interest of readers but the results are interesting in particular two genes are finally determined so few genes have great application prospects in clinic and there are still some problems to be solved before publicationmore research background | 0 |
this article focuses on the gynecological problems that women may suffer from and is well improved by the new analysis indicators however relevant work needs to be carried out to improve the depth of this paper and make improvements in the following problems when applied to support the literal presentation but not satisfactory most of the sentences within the text would need rephrasingrewording i am in view that the paper would need lots of help using order to make it suitable for journal review in whether the section below the key words of this article lacks the corresponding title which has the article appear very abrupt such result is not surprising since those traditional methods are known to be the most destructive method it would be fairer to | 1 |
identifying research motivation supported by the research gap is required could you plz add a research hypothesis and inline your results with the posed hypothesis the physiological and psychological indicators constructed in this study belong to health outcomes which are consistent with their findings how figs are required to be enriched with better resolution i am unable to find proper intext references at different places throughout the article as many long phrases and sentences without literature support are found everywhere the more important the evaluation index is the higher the weight value is why zij and zji are the mean values for the importance of any indicator in the evaluation plz explain conclusion section should contain list of limitations and future guidelines for further investigation and improvment | 1 |
the changes brought about by the rapid development of society have also had a huge impact on the ideology of college students an obvious manifestation is that the psychological problems of college students are becoming more and more obvious which also makes us pay attention to the increasingly serious psychological crisis of college students on the premise of artificial intelligence and big data analysis research this article made and tested a psychological early warning system for college students the status quo of the big data analysis industry is analyzed pbest and gbest are analyzed and updated and the optimal solution is gradually converged the parameter optimization algorithms are compared and the superiority of the lbfgsbased algorithm system designed in this paper is proved by the timeconsuming results of | 0 |
the paper has some good content but it has no proper order there are a few things which the author should have done introduction there is no literature review the introduction is all over the place there is an extensive review of the countrys energy consumption and use of pv which is not primarily related to the paper title dimensions mistakes the collector area and drying area says m long and m long makes the area m but the collector area is m and the drying surface area is m which makes it m the author does not clear this no concept of air flow rate the paper mentions the airflow rate but the velocity units are used everywhere which is very confusing because later the collector performance | 0 |
with the continuous improvement of peoples living standards peoples pursuit of material life and satisfaction of spirituality are also increasing and the demand for culture and value orientation are also diversifying people reading any relevant text this article marks a certain contribution in the intelligent sensor technology curriculum and has some innovation what is the research idea of this article please it is not fully reflected in the abstract and needs to be added what are the character characteristics among the folk museums in this paper compared to ordinary general museums please briefly elaborate them this article includes any brief description of the folk museum overview please modify it to suit your situation some description of the principles of folklore in display design in this paper is not | 1 |
this manuscript evaluated the efficacy and safety of moxibustion as an adjuvant treatment or used alone for asthma based on systematic review and metaanalysis method they found that moxibustion as an adjunctive treatment or used alone may improve the response to treatment lung function asthma control and levels of t cells in patients with asthma with good safety i believe this is a wellwritten paper with good methodology they searched seven databases including english and chinese literature databases the literature search was accurate and inclusion and exclusion criteria are described in detail the results are rich and interesting the author also did many subgroup analyses and sensitivity analyses to analyze their results their english language is also good although the literature quality of included studies is relatively low | 1 |
this paper needs revision to be accepted for publicationthe abstract should present some main points for the readers such as the main contribution the proposed method the main problem the obtained results the benchmark test the comparative methodsthe title needs to be changed to match the proposed work the related works section is very short and no benefits from it i suggest increasing the number of studies and adding a new discussion there to show the advantage disadvantages and weaknesses of the studied works the authors should discuss the literature review more deeply and clearlycheck the mathematical notation especially for the proposed methodadd a new figure to show the general procedures of the proposed methodfor the experimental results it will be good to present a statistical test in | 0 |
the authors report a very interesting analysis on the impact of att duration short months vs extended months after percutaneous pfo closurethis is a highly relevant topic since pfo closure for cryptogenic stroke is usually performed in patients a low cv risk profile so longterm att could have a deleterious effectthe present study included a total consecutive patients age years males who underwent pfo closure after cryptogenic stroke in a singlecenter the long lenght and completeness of followup is remarkable and represents a important strenght of the paper despite the retrospective analysis of note patients receiving att for a short period were younger and suffered less frequently from hypertension and prior multiple strokes than those undergoing extended att however after matching pairs of matched patients were identified resulting | 0 |
this article focuses on the problem of stomach in recent years and touches on the hot social issues this paper can be published smoothly is very beneficial but at the same time this article also has corresponding problems there are some problems in the format of this article please modify according to the format of professional papers such as font size line spacing and so on in this article attention should be paid to the indentation of the first line of the paragraph so as to separate the paragraphs from each other which will be more convenient for readers to read the content of the introduction part is too messy so it is suggested dividing it into several parts for narration and then appropriately introduce subheadings for modification | 0 |
the experimental part revealed the mechanism of the electronic nose based on the communication wire algorithm might detect the intrinsic quality of food by studying the relationship between the electronic nose response signal and ph content of volatile components in different food samples is there seem still places that can be added in the chart part of the articlea explain that the electronic nose for food nondestructive testing based on the communication network algorithm can accurately know food information and promote the sustainable development of the food industry the abstract lacks the conclusions of the studyb the keyword set the method part is missing from the keywordc at electronic nose technology and gcms combined with hsspmegcms to evaluate the quality of processed food in minimum storage times and | 1 |
based on the research of tourist impression perception in tourism management of network big data text reviews this paper concludes that the visitor perception models of network big data can get the impression experience of tourists more comprehensively and intuitively find the tourism factors affecting tourist evaluation from highfrequency vocabulary the full text is rich in content and clear in structure which is suggested that the questions raised be revised and the revised article can be considered since more background of the introduction needs to be described in more detail for increase the readability of the research data bwhat is the meaning of formula to formula the article needs to give some explanation these are the variables of equations to the variables should been explained dalthough the formula | 1 |
the paper combs the main problems existing in our current ideological and politics theory education practice analyzes a advantages of big data technology applied to ideological and political theory teaching determines effective teaching evaluation of ideological x political theory research on this big data model theory and analyzes the teaching cases based on the data of a school providing a certain theoretical and practical support for the application of big result to ideological and political theory education after reading this article i found that the following problems need to be improved specific opinions are as followssummary in the abstract of the paper the description of major experimental results is a qualitative analysis description which is too general and needs to be added with specific experimental data in abstract | 1 |
in general the idea of this paper technically makes sense the viewpoints of this article are relatively new and practical here are some specific issues some formulas lack symbolic description which needs to be corrected this can help reader read more friendly authors should list more references about machine translation after reference authors should add an experiment to analyze training loss with training number changesauthors should add the explanation for some equations this allows readers to better understand the algorithm proposed in this articleauthors should revise some grammatical issues are existed in related work past tense should be usedauthors should add a general summary of the experiments in the conclusions section focusing on the validity of the experimental results of the manuscript | 0 |
dun et al applied bioinformatics methods to analyze the correlation between ad vad and mild cognitive impairment mci and the differences in the studies of the three diseases which is a good and interesting study before publication however i suggest a major revision listed below are some questions or comments that writers should be aware of the abstract is not adequate which needs further revisions the abstract should include the background methods results and conclusion ectthe first letter of the keyword needs to be capitalizedin introduction the authors should indicate the advanced research on alzheimers disease mild cognitive impairment and vascular dementia importantly the authors should indicate why develop the current study by added several references of the correlation study on alzheimers disease mild cognitive impairment and vascular | 0 |
comments to authorsin what ways sepsis and sepsis are differentiatedinclude the main contributions and outcomes in the introduction partwhat is the existing method available as of now in what ways proposed study superior over themdeidentification and data shifting are differenthow to draw the receiver operating curvereferences need to align as per journal policy in page no of severely ill patients in intensive care units references are poorly organized | 1 |
this paper analyzes adsb technology and summarizes the advantages of adsb system in uav evasion then combined with the minimum flight interval of uav a conflict detection model based on adsb and uav performance is established and the conflict perception process and conflict resolution model are introduced this research method of track planning based on multi uav adsb technology is more effective than other methods to ensure the flight safety of multi uav in complex environment solve the problem of track planning of multi uav and reduce the amount of tasks the research has certain reference value but it needs to be modifiedthe content of the research keyword part is too short and the content of this part can be further supplementedthis paper verifies the flight safety of | 0 |
this paper introduces the presentation and analysis of the artistic effect of the painter coefficient distance in the multimedia background of the d ink rendering algorithm this are a topic of interest to researchers in related fields but the paper needs to be significantly improved before it is accepted for publication my specific comments are as followsfirst it seems never uncommon to realize the rendering method of ink and wash effect on threedimensional model on the basis of previous research why do you put forward this proposal what are its innovations and useful applications please describe the relevant contents in detail in your notes you mentioned in the abstract that this method can capture the painting skills on ink painting from two aspects of intensity and distance firstly | 1 |
in this paper an intelligent warning system for the second generation of hydrates based on the bonomalev empirical formula combined with the afsasvm model is proposed the authors idea is novel and the simulation results are accurate i think this paper can be accepted after completing the following modifications the logical description of the paper is clear the structure of the article is reasonable and there is no conflict between the front and back descriptions the writing language of the article is fluent but some grammar and spelling errors occur the author is expected to check carefully in the introduction of the first part the author cites a large number of documents but the description is chaotic i hope the author should sort out and refine the cited | 0 |
why reinforcement learning seems to be a great fit for complicated nonlinear and unpredictable sustainable energy sources and electric systemsauthor has to justify the reason behind to combine deep learning function estimators with reinforcement learning to create deep reinforcement learning drlhow trpo ensure the optimization strategy that never yields results that are poorer than the ones that came before it by adding the trust region restrictionvarious control issues arise for the power framework in various operational situations in power system regulation justifyhow the system operator can acquire dynamic wind power conversion techniques through ongoing connection with the reies | 0 |
the paper deals with the evaluation of reservoir parameters and well productivity based on production data the authors offer a work that potentially can improve our knowledge about the topic of interest it is an application of the work done by qin et al who showed uneven conductivity of fractures in multistage fracturing horizontal wells i suggest that the authors consider the following suggestions and questions suggestions and questions history matching plays an important role in welltesting analysis and it is recommended to list the history matching curve of well sx before figure it is recommended to supply the mechanism of qin et als model of uneven conductivity of fractures in multistage fracturing horizontal wells and the application effect of the model in the oil field so as | 0 |
in this study hua liu et al reported that the treatment with docetaxel combined with trastuzumab and psychological nursing can downregulate serum mir expression in patients with herpositive breast cancer and upregulate serum mir expression with significant clinical efficacy and high security this may provide a powerful theory for the wide range of clinical applications of herpositive breast cancer treatmentthe finding in the manuscript is likely significant and generally supported by the datahere are some points to benefit the manuscriptmore references should be added to the section of discussionthe p value in the tables should used rather than the discussion section needs to be rewrittensome descriptions in the method part of the article are very cumbersome and need to be simplifiedunfortunately the language quality is suboptimal and the | 0 |
the paper entitled fire resistance of an assembled integrated enclosure panel system presents the results of an experimental program in which autoclaved lightweight concrete and wool are combined to form a fire resistant panel the subject is important and significant but there are certain corrections that require careful attention before publishing figure both alc and rock wool layers are indicated as the same layer the text should be reformatted in a concise and explicit manner figures in general are not all suggestive from the graphical point of view i recommend to review these careful and present these in an unitary manner using the same text font same text height etc | 0 |
more clarification is required in this paragraphin light of ais unmistakable advantages it has consistently advanced into instruction there are a few issues to be settled in customary tutoring weve made a remarkable computerized music schooling framework in view of ordinary music recording and tone investigation joining present day aibased music expertise preparing angles it should reformulate the grammar in this section technological models for teaching western wind musicexplain the purpose of this work in bs structurebased system diagram sectionthis section need more illustrationas workmanship students of history we geologically find contextualize and appoint implications and characters to visual material our instructive decisions change homerooms into political fields of social creation also reading material particularly those designed for workmanship history courses every now and again have an irregularity | 0 |
explain the results of existing technique for parameters discussed add future scope in conclusion part in connection with proposed techniques define all the parameters used in the article what is the purpose of this proposed technique for society what are the predicted and actual class in terms of proposed technique add paper organization in introduction enhance the related works with more references and discuss the research gap what are the multilingual communication detected by this proposed work figure can be redrawn and its quality can be improvedspell out each acronym the first time used in the body of the paper spell out acronyms in the abstract only if used there include a list of four to ten key words after the abstract include a paragraph at the end | 0 |
comments to the author please describe the grouping strategy for this clinical trial and the specific methodology the ethics committee approval comment of the clinical trial and clinical trial registration numbers may be as dihuang decoction please write down a composition or drug batch number why choose these research indicators please explain their relationship to the research and what they need the table in this paper has poor effect is not beautiful and concise and does not meet the requirements of publication such as table please update the referenceand and cite articles indexed by sci the last five references complete author specific contribution should be referenced at the end of the article there are no errors in some parts of the format please check and modify database as | 1 |
in the first paragraph of results the author said laptmb expression was low in of patients and high in of patients of note high laptmb expression was identified in of histological grade i samples of grade ii and of grade iii tumor samples respectively as described previously non tumor tissues showed variable expression levels of laptmb how to define low expression and high expression of laptmb the author should make a further supplementary | 0 |
the method proposed in the article can not only obtain reasonable classification results but also provide reasonable development suggestions for each employee through the classification results considering the comprehensiveness of employee developmentqthis study is helpful for the rational planning of human resources and the promotion of comprehensive competitiveness of colleges and universities where is the discussion on teacher development hereqthe birth of data mining technology is of great significance and its research and application scope are inseparable in the hightech field the hightech field refers to the process of human discovery of secrets which is completely consistent with the characteristics of data mining technology this part of the content should be combined with college teachers so as to reflect the overall connotation of the articleqalthough the meaning part | 0 |
figure patients in the late clinicopathological stages were seen well correlated with emt but the patient number of the late clinicopathological stages was also far way less than the early stage number according to table i am not sure whether that is good enough to speak that emt really a good factor to predict the prognosis of bc the author used emtrelated genes n from msigdb for the de genes analysis and tried to relate with bc and pick up candidate genes as emtrelated prognostic signature gene set however these predicted genes coming from the msigdb are not correlated with the figure results or the author should show any correlation with fig emt genes list with fig the intersection of degs the two independent genes listed in fig | 0 |
the abstract should be revised by clarify the central focus along the paper your summary should clearly state the nature of the problem you are solving as well as your ideas and results this will help the potential readers of the abstract decide whether they need to read the whole article or not the introduction of deep learning is relatively shallow in your introduction you should deepen the importance of depth learning technology and analyze their application advantages using landscape pattern and model simulation and prediction of wetland nature reserves you use the deep learning method which extract the information of lakes and wetlands and the deep convolution neural network model to compute the spatial characteristics of remote sensing images what method was chosen in this study needs | 1 |
in general the idea of this paper technically makes sense the viewpoints of this paper are relatively new and practical here are some specific issues a certain author needs to give more content in section of abstract b the author needs to give more detailed explanation for parameters in equation to c scientific journal needs to add more explanation using softmax knowledge d the author needs to give detailed explanation concerning evaluation metrics e the author needs to add an explanation for circles and vectors f the author needs to put more references in the manuscriptg the author should explain why to use hybrid attention mechanism cbamh the author should add a new experiment to explain the prelu strategy | 1 |
the studies entitled crosssectional study on type characteristics and drug resistance of haemophilus influenzae in kunming children is an interesting study there are several minor issues should be correctedmajor points the abbreviation of haemophilus influenza should be hi instead of hi the article needs ethical approval the figures and tables of the article should be placed at the end of the article figure should indicate additional points please ensure that the format of the full text is corrected such as whether the initial clause of the subtitle is capitalized or whether there are spaces before the paragraph after title background in the abstract of the article can be replaced by changes the conclusion in the material has too long and the author can delete some for example | 1 |
in this paper authors have proposed virtual medical technology based system entitled clinicopathological analysis of patients with rectal cancer and acute colonic obstruction based on ct imaging with virtual medical technology for verification of results and observation proposed and existing algorithms were implemented in realistic environment of hospitals contribution is novel and is an interested topic for researchers however some improvement are needed to be carried outhow many time these experiments were carried out furthermore are these results represent average values of those experimentsintroduction section is needed to be rewritten as it has various vague sentence and is very hard to follow specifically for a nave reader therefore author should rewrite introduction section to make it an interesting read for everyone organization of paper is one of common | 0 |
shenling baizhu powder ameliorates diabetic nephropathy via pikakt pathwaystatistics related to diabetic neuropathy such as incidence should be included in the introduction part of the manuscriptthe objective of the study at the end of the introduction should be written in a better and simplified waywhat was the weight of the mice at the time study write itwhat were the housing conditions lightdark cycle food etchow were animals sacrificedany ethics approval numberinformation about the source of antibody catalogue number dilution etc should be writtenmore details about elsia assay requiredlimitations of the study if any must be mentionedconclusion section should be improvedproofread the manuscript | 1 |
deep ultradeep oil and gas is a new field of global exploration as a key geological fluid type formation water has an important influence on the formation and evolution of deep gas reservoirs the occurrence state of natural gas and the productivity of gas wells taking the deep tight sandstone gas reservoir in the kuqa depression as an example it collects formation water in different production stages for geochemical analysis and analyzes the type origin and production rule of formation water combined with gaswater production curves the manuscript also has the following problems four types of formation water are classified in the manuscript and the definition of mixed water may not be comprehensive it is considered that the mixture of water in different occurrence states including condensate water | 0 |
this paper proposes the use of neural network technology to evaluate college english classroom teaching methods and practices the content of the article has a specific and innovative way but some details have not been done well if the following references are improved the quality reading that article will be greatly improved there are few references cited and some important research status at home and abroad has not been mentioned adding some references will make that article more substantial the neural network structure diagram in first nd part has no relevant content explanation and the writing of the article is rough and very unreasonable some important equations within the third part have no relevant content explanation because this type of formula is a special one in diverse fields | 1 |
while abstract is not all focus of the research is nor is the meaning behind this textin recent years as highthroughput sequencing improvements on bioinformatics studies have been done on hcc to determine useful indexes of prognosis therapeutic targetssuch as methylation biomarkers whole genome map and prognostic lncrnaafter checking the references list i suggest adding more references | 1 |
in this paper we analyzed the relationship between psychological violence and psychological resilience and job burnout and used multiple linear regression equations to screen out the risk factors affecting psychological violence but i still have some problems poor language expression skills many sentences have no subject and no proper sentence break spearmans correlation analysis showed that psychological resilience was negatively correlated with psychological violence r p and job burnout was positively correlated with psychological violence r p from where these data were derived and whether there is a correlation with the data earlier in the text please explain the authors and explain in the text the nurse is to face all kinds of patients every day the heart of education is the most critical the future author should | 0 |
the manuscript has presented a modified weibullfunction having application in curve fittings the concept seems interesting since it has increased curve fitting patterns than the existing functions however the case study is with limited and ambiguouscontributions the authors must consider the following comments while revising the manuscript the concept of the case studyis not clear the proposed function is for curve fitting and how such a function can be compared with methods such as arima and ann the authors must discuss it in the manuscript if it really makes sense it is advised to include block diagrams or flowcharts while describing the proposed function also some graphics must be included to explain how the proposed function is different and superior to its earlier forms the data used in | 0 |
the purpose of this review is novel which develops certain guiding principles for clinical practice and the references are appropriatehoweverin the endthe author claims ikbke is expected to become a potential target for tumor molecular targeted therapy the think that is credible from the description of ikbke and breast cancer ikbke and glioma ikbke and lung cancer etc the author draws a conclusion ikbke can activate the nfb signaling pathway in a variety of ways and can also recruit various scaffold molecules for interferon signal transduction at this same time ikbke be specifically identified as an oncogene of many tumors and its inhibitors can significantly inhibit the proliferation and invasion of tumor cells persuasive if it is properly selected the overall reliability is high the discussion section is | 1 |
this article tries to put a lot of things into a review paper but it turns out that the readers wont know what the article intend to emphasize from the article title it seems that the article is mainly about pressure swing adsorption psa process but the processes are not discussed in detail only showing some simplified tables and figures about processes instead some discussions about psa modelling are mentioned but not in detail either the article title is about biofuel separation and purification bur for the four parts discussed bioethanol biohydrogen bioxygen and biomethane hydrogen is from reforming or gasification which is not called biohydrogen oxygen is from air separation which is not called bioxygen either the authors seems to read a lot of papers but didnt | 0 |
yiyuan et al showed that patients with nasal bone fracture have certain distribution rules in individual characteristics trauma cause and injury site and relevant strategy research should be conducted in this study a total of patients with nasal bone fracture were collected this study is interesting and meaningfulmajor revisionsplease show more keywords which are related to this studyplease adjust the format of the references and add the references by using endnote softwareshow more details about data collectionplease show the tables and pictures after the part of referencesplease show the detailed p value in the tables and descriptionplease add more references related to this studyattention to the typos and grammar errorsplease adjust the figure legends and make them clearerthe quality of this manuscript should be improved | 0 |
for the perspective of research content the issues and overall structure the content noted in the paper is perfect in line with the analysis the structure is clear and complete the research ideas are clear and the research methods look vague but the paper says that there are the following points insufficienti in the abstract the author introduces the importance of big data technology and outlines the research methods and experimental results mentioned in the paper but i think a brief description of the background is lackingii in the keyword section the author accurately summarizes the main research content and technical methods mentioned in the paper but i think volleyball training is just an important content mentioned in the paper so it is necessary to add this keywordiii | 1 |
this study revealed that dlr can significantly improve the snr and cnr of the lateral branch of the pisolin artery in fsbb compared with standard fsbb dlr has lower image noise more detailed anatomical structure and better image quality what is the meaning of k in the statistics and analysisplease ask native english speakers to correct the wording and grammatical mistakes in the following paragraphsthe author should add some recent research results to support the conclusion in the articlethe data in figure is confusing and confusing please adjust and revise itthere should be a space between the number and and | 0 |
after determining the framework of the system this paper designs the physical training system in detail and investigates and analyzes the system design and system testing and the ability of college athletes to use the physical training system in all aspects however there are also some defects in the article can it be supplemented or revised appropriately according to the content of the full text this article mentioned in the introduction that the article designed a physical training analysis system based on big data and used the kistler threedimensional force measurement platform to measure the fatigue of a college volleyball player it can be supplemented here related content according to the content of the full text this article mentions that its innovation lies in the design and selection | 1 |
childhood influenza virus infection is a serious public health problem worldwide and should cause great concern the aibased auxiliary diagnosis model studied in this paper can more accurately detect influenza a positive and influenza a infection from the population of patients with respiratory infectious diseases in practical application scenarios by training a large number of blood routine characteristic data of patients with respiratory infectious diseases i suggest the authors to improve the paper based on the following comment reportformat problemreferences shall be marked in the text in a standardized waythere are many pictures in this article which are very substantial but some pictures are not clear enough and some are blurred this affects readers reading and understandingcontent problemin the era of large samples or even full samples what | 0 |
this paper discusses acupuncture and rehabilitation for spinal cord injury i recommend the paper for publication however a number of changes must be made to improve the paper that includethe abstract focuses too much on the patients grouping and the results but doesnt give a clear idea about the methodology or the proposed approach we suggest to shorten these details and add more details about the problem statement and proposed approachat the end of the introduction section please add contributions of the studysection has some inappropriate use of colon we suggest to restructure the sentences without the use of colonfigure shall be improved with use of better font and font sizeacupuncture therapists scale evaluators statisticians and rehabilitation therapists are divided into four people to complete this sentence in | 1 |
as china becomes more and more internationally integrated chinas current english teaching model can no longer support the largescale output of foreign language talents we urgently need to improve our current english teaching model so this article came into being i hold a more optimistic attitude towards the prospects of the article and the content in the article has made me firm this attitude the author spread the full text by showing that the english video teaching mode can improve students english listening ability the overallity is very strong but this article still exists many theoretical omissions are also normal i will try my best to help the author improve this article i have listed some of the problems i found below the realtime nature of this article | 1 |
in this paper acupoint pressing combined with touching is used to treat neonatal jaundice after blue light irradiation the experimental results show that it can effectively promote the reduction of jaundice the experiment is relatively novel but there are still some problems to be solved i the abstract part of the article introduces the research methods of this article but the central idea is not clear enough and lacks a general statement the author should carefully revise the abstract part ii in addition to providing background information the introduction should also point out the research gap and research objectives which will help readers better understand the article iii the general clinical indicators of the two categories of patients in table are compared with each other the author should | 0 |
this paper combines deep learning algorithm to evaluate students mental health the feature of this paper is to analyze students mental health by combining metaphor features so as to better display students mental health however there are still some problems in this paper which need to be carefully revisedsome references are not annotated please check and annotate one by oneplease pay attention to the writing format of variables of some formulas it is recommended to refine the abstract appropriatelyparts of the article are formatted and punctuated incorrectly such as the explanation part under formula please check the full textthe arrows of image in figure are wrong please rearrange themin the conclusion part f and other indicators appears but there is no explanation before the test please modify this | 1 |
this research is important in that it demonstrates that not only symptomatic covid individuals but even asymptomatic situations have activity that progresses to lung involvement suggesting that it plays a critical role in the chain of transmission however there are some problems with the articles structure and highlighting the main idea introduction should be more clear and shorter there are many information about covid and the transmission of the disease however the authors have lost the focus of the study what is the main question of the study is it the effect of lung involvement on the transmission of the disease or the severity of the disease ethical committee approvel should be taken for all prospective and retrospective studies the difference between asymptomatic careers and asymptomatic infection is | 0 |
below are my concerns reagaring this paperwhy functional assessment is important it should be mentioned in the abstractlikewise why there is a need for federated ai based algorithms it should also be mentioned as a knowledge gap in the abstractit is suggested not to use pronouns such i we they in the contributionshighlight the research gap and contributions into the existing literature a novel design oriented dma framework for internet and medical things devices in g network evolution of industry and blockchain era monitoring price hike and corruption and biot for smart government and industry like shoule be explained how was this dataest taken was the internet by fscore fscorewhy there is title on the iamges when caption is used as the titlemore referncs should be added in | 1 |
authors have considered uniqueness and multiplicity of positive solutions for a discrete fractional boundary value problem over all results are good seem correct however there are some issue like improve abstract update conclusion with recent work like chaos solitons fractals include some applications improve conclusion | 0 |
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