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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Please elaborate on your current physical and mental health, including any dental or oral treatment, medical interventions, and mental health therapy or counseling.
Anwser:
At present, I am grateful and feel blessed to say that I am currently not facing any significant health issues. My commitment to maintaining optimal health is evident through my active participation in sports, particularly basketball, from elementary school to high school. Throughout the pandemic and continuing until now, I have made a deliberate effort to prioritize physical activity by ensuring I walked over 10,000 steps on weekend mornings.
However, I occasionally experience indigestion due to irregular meal times. Hence, since living alone, I have adopted a more consistent eating schedule, complemented by always keeping medications on hand every time I go out. Also, I always try to be mindful of my plate, sorting out nutritious and balanced meals while reducing sugar intake to maintain a healthy diet in the host country.
Being wary of lifestyle differences, especially in the UK or Singapore, where walking is more prevalent, I have adapted walking to the campus in Depok to minimize transportation costs. This not only contributes to my physical activity but also is more cost-efficient. Additionally, I engage in weekly badminton sessions with friends as a lighter form of exercise. Looking ahead, I plan to continue doing sports in the host country, utilizing the sports facilities and park.
For mental health, I am well aware of its significance, since I faced some challenges during my first year of living alone. I had to accept being surrounded only by myself most of the time, but it was not that severe to do extensive counselling. I learned how to cope by watching my favourite YouTube channel, "Satu Persen". To focus on self-improvement, I dedicated more time to self-reflection and cultivating new habits.
Interestingly, I have developed a newfound interest in reading, using books to fill the void. Also, incorporating self-journaling, I often express my days through video storytelling in English. Notably, my English language skills have improved significantly, from a previous score of 5.5 last year in a mock test to a more fluent level. This practice not only improved my language skills but also served as a stress release.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Please elaborate on your current physical and mental health, including any dental or oral treatment, medical interventions, and mental health therapy or counseling.
Anwser:
At present, I am grateful and feel blessed to say that I am currently not facing any significant health issues. My commitment to maintaining optimal health is evident through my active participation in sports, particularly basketball, from elementary school to high school. Throughout the pandemic and continuing until now, I have made a deliberate effort to prioritize physical activity by ensuring I walked over 10,000 steps on weekend mornings.
However, I occasionally experience indigestion due to irregular meal times. Hence, since living alone, I have adopted a more consistent eating schedule, complemented by always keeping medications on hand every time I go out. Also, I always try to be mindful of my plate, sorting out nutritious and balanced meals while reducing sugar intake to maintain a healthy diet in the host country.
Being wary of lifestyle differences, especially in the UK or Singapore, where walking is more prevalent, I have adapted walking to the campus in Depok to minimize transportation costs. This not only contributes to my physical activity but also is more cost-efficient. Additionally, I engage in weekly badminton sessions with friends as a lighter form of exercise. Looking ahead, I plan to continue doing sports in the host country, utilizing the sports facilities and park.
For mental health, I am well aware of its significance, since I faced some challenges during my first year of living alone. I had to accept being surrounded only by myself most of the time, but it was not that severe to do extensive counselling. I learned how to cope by watching my favourite YouTube channel, "Satu Persen". To focus on self-improvement, I dedicated more time to self-reflection and cultivating new habits.
Interestingly, I have developed a newfound interest in reading, using books to fill the void. Also, incorporating self-journaling, I often express my days through video storytelling in English. Notably, my English language skills have improved significantly, from a previous score of 5.5 last year in a mock test to a more fluent level. This practice not only improved my language skills but also served as a stress release.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Please elaborate on your current physical and mental health, including any dental or oral treatment, medical interventions, and mental health therapy or counseling.
Anwser:
At present, I am grateful and feel blessed to say that I am currently not facing any significant health issues. My commitment to maintaining optimal health is evident through my active participation in sports, particularly basketball, from elementary school to high school. Throughout the pandemic and continuing until now, I have made a deliberate effort to prioritize physical activity by ensuring I walked over 10,000 steps on weekend mornings.
However, I occasionally experience indigestion due to irregular meal times. Hence, since living alone, I have adopted a more consistent eating schedule, complemented by always keeping medications on hand every time I go out. Also, I always try to be mindful of my plate, sorting out nutritious and balanced meals while reducing sugar intake to maintain a healthy diet in the host country.
Being wary of lifestyle differences, especially in the UK or Singapore, where walking is more prevalent, I have adapted walking to the campus in Depok to minimize transportation costs. This not only contributes to my physical activity but also is more cost-efficient. Additionally, I engage in weekly badminton sessions with friends as a lighter form of exercise. Looking ahead, I plan to continue doing sports in the host country, utilizing the sports facilities and park.
For mental health, I am well aware of its significance, since I faced some challenges during my first year of living alone. I had to accept being surrounded only by myself most of the time, but it was not that severe to do extensive counselling. I learned how to cope by watching my favourite YouTube channel, "Satu Persen". To focus on self-improvement, I dedicated more time to self-reflection and cultivating new habits.
Interestingly, I have developed a newfound interest in reading, using books to fill the void. Also, incorporating self-journaling, I often express my days through video storytelling in English. Notably, my English language skills have improved significantly, from a previous score of 5.5 last year in a mock test to a more fluent level. This practice not only improved my language skills but also served as a stress release.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Please elaborate on your current physical and mental health, including any dental or oral treatment, medical interventions, and mental health therapy or counseling.
Anwser:
At present, I am grateful and feel blessed to say that I am currently not facing any significant health issues. My commitment to maintaining optimal health is evident through my active participation in sports, particularly basketball, from elementary school to high school. Throughout the pandemic and continuing until now, I have made a deliberate effort to prioritize physical activity by ensuring I walked over 10,000 steps on weekend mornings.
However, I occasionally experience indigestion due to irregular meal times. Hence, since living alone, I have adopted a more consistent eating schedule, complemented by always keeping medications on hand every time I go out. Also, I always try to be mindful of my plate, sorting out nutritious and balanced meals while reducing sugar intake to maintain a healthy diet in the host country.
Being wary of lifestyle differences, especially in the UK or Singapore, where walking is more prevalent, I have adapted walking to the campus in Depok to minimize transportation costs. This not only contributes to my physical activity but also is more cost-efficient. Additionally, I engage in weekly badminton sessions with friends as a lighter form of exercise. Looking ahead, I plan to continue doing sports in the host country, utilizing the sports facilities and park.
For mental health, I am well aware of its significance, since I faced some challenges during my first year of living alone. I had to accept being surrounded only by myself most of the time, but it was not that severe to do extensive counselling. I learned how to cope by watching my favourite YouTube channel, "Satu Persen". To focus on self-improvement, I dedicated more time to self-reflection and cultivating new habits.
Interestingly, I have developed a newfound interest in reading, using books to fill the void. Also, incorporating self-journaling, I often express my days through video storytelling in English. Notably, my English language skills have improved significantly, from a previous score of 5.5 last year in a mock test to a more fluent level. This practice not only improved my language skills but also served as a stress release.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a metropolis. The metro is the most convenient way to get around a city. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Overpopulated countries experience severe pressure on local transportation systems these days. One path to resolve the issue is to develop public transport networks like a subway. It is agreed that the metro is the best way to get around big cities. This essay will highlight some advantages of underground trains and provide several examples to support the points.
To begin with, a well-designed underground train network can drastically reduce pressure on an overwhelmed road system. For instance, over the last several decades, Singapore has diminished the total traffic level by fifty-two per cent by launching new underground transportation lines. Before these changes, the city experienced severe jams even at night, and such change was warmly embraced by society. Thus, Singapore's experience can be a good example for mayors of all cities in the world.
In addition, the majority of subway systems worldwide are electric-based facilities which do not exert additional pressure on the Earth's finite, depleting resources. For example, according to a study conducted at the University of North Carolina, the average citizen who prefers public electrical transport like a metro produces seventy per cent less carbon dioxide compared to his vehicle-driving neighbour. As a result, underground movements are not only the fastest manner to reach the destination point but also a convenient way to save the planet.
To sum up, the underground is a great example of a modern and effective means of transportation which solves not only traffic problems in metropolises but preserves our planet too. All together, the aforementioned benefits make the subway the best alternative to move across cities now and in the future. It is predicted that electric underground train networks will steadily supersed personal vehicles in the foreseeable future.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a metropolis. The metro is the most convenient way to get around a city. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Overpopulated countries experience severe pressure on local transportation systems these days. One path to resolve the issue is to develop public transport networks like a subway. It is agreed that the metro is the best way to get around big cities. This essay will highlight some advantages of underground trains and provide several examples to support the points.
To begin with, a well-designed underground train network can drastically reduce pressure on an overwhelmed road system. For instance, over the last several decades, Singapore has diminished the total traffic level by fifty-two per cent by launching new underground transportation lines. Before these changes, the city experienced severe jams even at night, and such change was warmly embraced by society. Thus, Singapore's experience can be a good example for mayors of all cities in the world.
In addition, the majority of subway systems worldwide are electric-based facilities which do not exert additional pressure on the Earth's finite, depleting resources. For example, according to a study conducted at the University of North Carolina, the average citizen who prefers public electrical transport like a metro produces seventy per cent less carbon dioxide compared to his vehicle-driving neighbour. As a result, underground movements are not only the fastest manner to reach the destination point but also a convenient way to save the planet.
To sum up, the underground is a great example of a modern and effective means of transportation which solves not only traffic problems in metropolises but preserves our planet too. All together, the aforementioned benefits make the subway the best alternative to move across cities now and in the future. It is predicted that electric underground train networks will steadily supersed personal vehicles in the foreseeable future.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a metropolis. The metro is the most convenient way to get around a city. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Overpopulated countries experience severe pressure on local transportation systems these days. One path to resolve the issue is to develop public transport networks like a subway. It is agreed that the metro is the best way to get around big cities. This essay will highlight some advantages of underground trains and provide several examples to support the points.
To begin with, a well-designed underground train network can drastically reduce pressure on an overwhelmed road system. For instance, over the last several decades, Singapore has diminished the total traffic level by fifty-two per cent by launching new underground transportation lines. Before these changes, the city experienced severe jams even at night, and such change was warmly embraced by society. Thus, Singapore's experience can be a good example for mayors of all cities in the world.
In addition, the majority of subway systems worldwide are electric-based facilities which do not exert additional pressure on the Earth's finite, depleting resources. For example, according to a study conducted at the University of North Carolina, the average citizen who prefers public electrical transport like a metro produces seventy per cent less carbon dioxide compared to his vehicle-driving neighbour. As a result, underground movements are not only the fastest manner to reach the destination point but also a convenient way to save the planet.
To sum up, the underground is a great example of a modern and effective means of transportation which solves not only traffic problems in metropolises but preserves our planet too. All together, the aforementioned benefits make the subway the best alternative to move across cities now and in the future. It is predicted that electric underground train networks will steadily supersed personal vehicles in the foreseeable future.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a metropolis. The metro is the most convenient way to get around a city. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Overpopulated countries experience severe pressure on local transportation systems these days. One path to resolve the issue is to develop public transport networks like a subway. It is agreed that the metro is the best way to get around big cities. This essay will highlight some advantages of underground trains and provide several examples to support the points.
To begin with, a well-designed underground train network can drastically reduce pressure on an overwhelmed road system. For instance, over the last several decades, Singapore has diminished the total traffic level by fifty-two per cent by launching new underground transportation lines. Before these changes, the city experienced severe jams even at night, and such change was warmly embraced by society. Thus, Singapore's experience can be a good example for mayors of all cities in the world.
In addition, the majority of subway systems worldwide are electric-based facilities which do not exert additional pressure on the Earth's finite, depleting resources. For example, according to a study conducted at the University of North Carolina, the average citizen who prefers public electrical transport like a metro produces seventy per cent less carbon dioxide compared to his vehicle-driving neighbour. As a result, underground movements are not only the fastest manner to reach the destination point but also a convenient way to save the planet.
To sum up, the underground is a great example of a modern and effective means of transportation which solves not only traffic problems in metropolises but preserves our planet too. All together, the aforementioned benefits make the subway the best alternative to move across cities now and in the future. It is predicted that electric underground train networks will steadily supersed personal vehicles in the foreseeable future.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is often believed that museums and art galleries have reduced their importance thanks to a computer which allows people to see valuable artworks from the past. I generally disagree with this, for they offer a unique experience that is not provided by the digital device despite its growing popularity.
On the one hand, museums and art galleries are essential since they provide a special moment for inspiration. In other words, a number of collections of historical paintings and sculptures are exhibited to surprise the viewers with the sophisticated skills of each artist to produce such precise images. Furthermore, the strong touches of the brush, which are hardly recognized on the computer screen, make them look more animated to the visitors, who feel like they are actually in the scene. For instance, they are able to experience the feeling of exhaustion of the workers, smell glasses and hear the voices of others as well as understand the severe poverty and the harsh physical workload, when observing the painting called "Gleaning" carefully. Therefore, museums and art galleries can offer stimulating experiences that are not attained on the digital screen.
On the other hand, there is a declining need for art facilities due to the prevalent uses of computers today. Indeed, they have made it more convenient for everyone to access a wide range of information, which is often sorted by category, chronological order and artists. Moreover, they include insightful explanations for each artwork from specialists, leading to the accumulation of knowledge about their beliefs and facts in history. Consequently, interest in art increases even among those who have never been to museums thanks to the abundant materials of art online.
In conclusion, I have a partial disagreement about the reduced need for museums and art galleries for the incredible impression people can gain. However, the growing spread of technological devices which allow them to obtain various information about art is likely to affect their importance.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is often believed that museums and art galleries have reduced their importance thanks to a computer which allows people to see valuable artworks from the past. I generally disagree with this, for they offer a unique experience that is not provided by the digital device despite its growing popularity.
On the one hand, museums and art galleries are essential since they provide a special moment for inspiration. In other words, a number of collections of historical paintings and sculptures are exhibited to surprise the viewers with the sophisticated skills of each artist to produce such precise images. Furthermore, the strong touches of the brush, which are hardly recognized on the computer screen, make them look more animated to the visitors, who feel like they are actually in the scene. For instance, they are able to experience the feeling of exhaustion of the workers, smell glasses and hear the voices of others as well as understand the severe poverty and the harsh physical workload, when observing the painting called "Gleaning" carefully. Therefore, museums and art galleries can offer stimulating experiences that are not attained on the digital screen.
On the other hand, there is a declining need for art facilities due to the prevalent uses of computers today. Indeed, they have made it more convenient for everyone to access a wide range of information, which is often sorted by category, chronological order and artists. Moreover, they include insightful explanations for each artwork from specialists, leading to the accumulation of knowledge about their beliefs and facts in history. Consequently, interest in art increases even among those who have never been to museums thanks to the abundant materials of art online.
In conclusion, I have a partial disagreement about the reduced need for museums and art galleries for the incredible impression people can gain. However, the growing spread of technological devices which allow them to obtain various information about art is likely to affect their importance.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is often believed that museums and art galleries have reduced their importance thanks to a computer which allows people to see valuable artworks from the past. I generally disagree with this, for they offer a unique experience that is not provided by the digital device despite its growing popularity.
On the one hand, museums and art galleries are essential since they provide a special moment for inspiration. In other words, a number of collections of historical paintings and sculptures are exhibited to surprise the viewers with the sophisticated skills of each artist to produce such precise images. Furthermore, the strong touches of the brush, which are hardly recognized on the computer screen, make them look more animated to the visitors, who feel like they are actually in the scene. For instance, they are able to experience the feeling of exhaustion of the workers, smell glasses and hear the voices of others as well as understand the severe poverty and the harsh physical workload, when observing the painting called "Gleaning" carefully. Therefore, museums and art galleries can offer stimulating experiences that are not attained on the digital screen.
On the other hand, there is a declining need for art facilities due to the prevalent uses of computers today. Indeed, they have made it more convenient for everyone to access a wide range of information, which is often sorted by category, chronological order and artists. Moreover, they include insightful explanations for each artwork from specialists, leading to the accumulation of knowledge about their beliefs and facts in history. Consequently, interest in art increases even among those who have never been to museums thanks to the abundant materials of art online.
In conclusion, I have a partial disagreement about the reduced need for museums and art galleries for the incredible impression people can gain. However, the growing spread of technological devices which allow them to obtain various information about art is likely to affect their importance.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is often believed that museums and art galleries have reduced their importance thanks to a computer which allows people to see valuable artworks from the past. I generally disagree with this, for they offer a unique experience that is not provided by the digital device despite its growing popularity.
On the one hand, museums and art galleries are essential since they provide a special moment for inspiration. In other words, a number of collections of historical paintings and sculptures are exhibited to surprise the viewers with the sophisticated skills of each artist to produce such precise images. Furthermore, the strong touches of the brush, which are hardly recognized on the computer screen, make them look more animated to the visitors, who feel like they are actually in the scene. For instance, they are able to experience the feeling of exhaustion of the workers, smell glasses and hear the voices of others as well as understand the severe poverty and the harsh physical workload, when observing the painting called "Gleaning" carefully. Therefore, museums and art galleries can offer stimulating experiences that are not attained on the digital screen.
On the other hand, there is a declining need for art facilities due to the prevalent uses of computers today. Indeed, they have made it more convenient for everyone to access a wide range of information, which is often sorted by category, chronological order and artists. Moreover, they include insightful explanations for each artwork from specialists, leading to the accumulation of knowledge about their beliefs and facts in history. Consequently, interest in art increases even among those who have never been to museums thanks to the abundant materials of art online.
In conclusion, I have a partial disagreement about the reduced need for museums and art galleries for the incredible impression people can gain. However, the growing spread of technological devices which allow them to obtain various information about art is likely to affect their importance.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Climate change is one of the biggest environmental problems of the 21st century. Some people think that humans should stop using oil, gas and coal and switch to alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others claim that fossil fuels are essential for many industries, and not using them will result in economic recession.
What is your opinion?
Support your point of view with relevant examples.
Anwser:
Climate change is one of the largest challenges that people face in this century. However, this is a controversial topic due to the varying opinions of differing groups. One mode of thought, which prevails in the popular mood, is for the onset of renewables on an industrial scale. Contrastingly, others believe fossil fuels are necessary to maintain the current economic system. In my opinion, the use of sustainable sources should be given priority.
Firstly, the abusive nature of oil and gas leads to a deterioration of the environment, which has been evidenced in recent times. For example, the rising global temperatures are causing the ice caps to melt which are impacting the level of the oceans, which in turn, are precipitating adverse weather conditions in many parts of the world. Under these circumstances, using clean energy is a necessity, rather than a choice. Moreover, climate change is here in the present and not in a distant future. The effects of this phenomenon are now visible. As an example, studies have shown that there is a direct correlation between unusual weather conditions and increased heat.
Secondly, alternative sources of energy can be made economically viable in the long run. To begin with, the exploitation of such energies will give rise to new industries. This, in turn, will result in more employment opportunities. Furthermore, new research can help in making these energies more efficient so that they can be used in traditional industries. For instance, in countries like Germany and the Netherlands, wind power is extensively used by households and the manufacturing industry. Thus, with time, renewable fuels can contribute to the development of the economy.
In conclusion, I think alternative modes of power should be reinforced in the forthcoming decades, due to all the advantages they will create.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Climate change is one of the biggest environmental problems of the 21st century. Some people think that humans should stop using oil, gas and coal and switch to alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others claim that fossil fuels are essential for many industries, and not using them will result in economic recession.
What is your opinion?
Support your point of view with relevant examples.
Anwser:
Climate change is one of the largest challenges that people face in this century. However, this is a controversial topic due to the varying opinions of differing groups. One mode of thought, which prevails in the popular mood, is for the onset of renewables on an industrial scale. Contrastingly, others believe fossil fuels are necessary to maintain the current economic system. In my opinion, the use of sustainable sources should be given priority.
Firstly, the abusive nature of oil and gas leads to a deterioration of the environment, which has been evidenced in recent times. For example, the rising global temperatures are causing the ice caps to melt which are impacting the level of the oceans, which in turn, are precipitating adverse weather conditions in many parts of the world. Under these circumstances, using clean energy is a necessity, rather than a choice. Moreover, climate change is here in the present and not in a distant future. The effects of this phenomenon are now visible. As an example, studies have shown that there is a direct correlation between unusual weather conditions and increased heat.
Secondly, alternative sources of energy can be made economically viable in the long run. To begin with, the exploitation of such energies will give rise to new industries. This, in turn, will result in more employment opportunities. Furthermore, new research can help in making these energies more efficient so that they can be used in traditional industries. For instance, in countries like Germany and the Netherlands, wind power is extensively used by households and the manufacturing industry. Thus, with time, renewable fuels can contribute to the development of the economy.
In conclusion, I think alternative modes of power should be reinforced in the forthcoming decades, due to all the advantages they will create.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Climate change is one of the biggest environmental problems of the 21st century. Some people think that humans should stop using oil, gas and coal and switch to alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others claim that fossil fuels are essential for many industries, and not using them will result in economic recession.
What is your opinion?
Support your point of view with relevant examples.
Anwser:
Climate change is one of the largest challenges that people face in this century. However, this is a controversial topic due to the varying opinions of differing groups. One mode of thought, which prevails in the popular mood, is for the onset of renewables on an industrial scale. Contrastingly, others believe fossil fuels are necessary to maintain the current economic system. In my opinion, the use of sustainable sources should be given priority.
Firstly, the abusive nature of oil and gas leads to a deterioration of the environment, which has been evidenced in recent times. For example, the rising global temperatures are causing the ice caps to melt which are impacting the level of the oceans, which in turn, are precipitating adverse weather conditions in many parts of the world. Under these circumstances, using clean energy is a necessity, rather than a choice. Moreover, climate change is here in the present and not in a distant future. The effects of this phenomenon are now visible. As an example, studies have shown that there is a direct correlation between unusual weather conditions and increased heat.
Secondly, alternative sources of energy can be made economically viable in the long run. To begin with, the exploitation of such energies will give rise to new industries. This, in turn, will result in more employment opportunities. Furthermore, new research can help in making these energies more efficient so that they can be used in traditional industries. For instance, in countries like Germany and the Netherlands, wind power is extensively used by households and the manufacturing industry. Thus, with time, renewable fuels can contribute to the development of the economy.
In conclusion, I think alternative modes of power should be reinforced in the forthcoming decades, due to all the advantages they will create.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Climate change is one of the biggest environmental problems of the 21st century. Some people think that humans should stop using oil, gas and coal and switch to alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others claim that fossil fuels are essential for many industries, and not using them will result in economic recession.
What is your opinion?
Support your point of view with relevant examples.
Anwser:
Climate change is one of the largest challenges that people face in this century. However, this is a controversial topic due to the varying opinions of differing groups. One mode of thought, which prevails in the popular mood, is for the onset of renewables on an industrial scale. Contrastingly, others believe fossil fuels are necessary to maintain the current economic system. In my opinion, the use of sustainable sources should be given priority.
Firstly, the abusive nature of oil and gas leads to a deterioration of the environment, which has been evidenced in recent times. For example, the rising global temperatures are causing the ice caps to melt which are impacting the level of the oceans, which in turn, are precipitating adverse weather conditions in many parts of the world. Under these circumstances, using clean energy is a necessity, rather than a choice. Moreover, climate change is here in the present and not in a distant future. The effects of this phenomenon are now visible. As an example, studies have shown that there is a direct correlation between unusual weather conditions and increased heat.
Secondly, alternative sources of energy can be made economically viable in the long run. To begin with, the exploitation of such energies will give rise to new industries. This, in turn, will result in more employment opportunities. Furthermore, new research can help in making these energies more efficient so that they can be used in traditional industries. For instance, in countries like Germany and the Netherlands, wind power is extensively used by households and the manufacturing industry. Thus, with time, renewable fuels can contribute to the development of the economy.
In conclusion, I think alternative modes of power should be reinforced in the forthcoming decades, due to all the advantages they will create.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In life education and sports play an important role. However, some parents argue that parents should urge their children to engage in more physical activity rather than studying academic subjects. I completely agree with this notion and the reasons for my opinion will be illustrated in the forthcoming paragraph with relevant illustrations.
To begin with, to achieve anything you must remain healthy. To emphasize, physical activity provides more opportunities for individuals to become strong. As a result, it allows students to study more and enhances children's health. Even if a student has an excellent academic performance in daily life, his grade will be affected if he suffers from several health conditions. Therefore, it is essential to maintain physical fitness to perform better in all situations.
In addition, playing more games may inspire an interest in their communication skills and improve their social circle, as the majority of games include teamwork. To explain, when youths have the chance to play with other team members, they have a greater chance to interact with a different personality. For instance, a game of hockey requires six players. Teammates must develop positive relationships with one another, which leads to a greater understanding of each individual's activities and interests. Therefore, it is essential to devote more time to physical activities to become involved in the world.
In conclusion, I believe that parents should encourage their children to devote more time to outdoor activities than to academics, as the fact that physical activity keeps the human body fit and provides opportunities to interact with others.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In life education and sports play an important role. However, some parents argue that parents should urge their children to engage in more physical activity rather than studying academic subjects. I completely agree with this notion and the reasons for my opinion will be illustrated in the forthcoming paragraph with relevant illustrations.
To begin with, to achieve anything you must remain healthy. To emphasize, physical activity provides more opportunities for individuals to become strong. As a result, it allows students to study more and enhances children's health. Even if a student has an excellent academic performance in daily life, his grade will be affected if he suffers from several health conditions. Therefore, it is essential to maintain physical fitness to perform better in all situations.
In addition, playing more games may inspire an interest in their communication skills and improve their social circle, as the majority of games include teamwork. To explain, when youths have the chance to play with other team members, they have a greater chance to interact with a different personality. For instance, a game of hockey requires six players. Teammates must develop positive relationships with one another, which leads to a greater understanding of each individual's activities and interests. Therefore, it is essential to devote more time to physical activities to become involved in the world.
In conclusion, I believe that parents should encourage their children to devote more time to outdoor activities than to academics, as the fact that physical activity keeps the human body fit and provides opportunities to interact with others.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In life education and sports play an important role. However, some parents argue that parents should urge their children to engage in more physical activity rather than studying academic subjects. I completely agree with this notion and the reasons for my opinion will be illustrated in the forthcoming paragraph with relevant illustrations.
To begin with, to achieve anything you must remain healthy. To emphasize, physical activity provides more opportunities for individuals to become strong. As a result, it allows students to study more and enhances children's health. Even if a student has an excellent academic performance in daily life, his grade will be affected if he suffers from several health conditions. Therefore, it is essential to maintain physical fitness to perform better in all situations.
In addition, playing more games may inspire an interest in their communication skills and improve their social circle, as the majority of games include teamwork. To explain, when youths have the chance to play with other team members, they have a greater chance to interact with a different personality. For instance, a game of hockey requires six players. Teammates must develop positive relationships with one another, which leads to a greater understanding of each individual's activities and interests. Therefore, it is essential to devote more time to physical activities to become involved in the world.
In conclusion, I believe that parents should encourage their children to devote more time to outdoor activities than to academics, as the fact that physical activity keeps the human body fit and provides opportunities to interact with others.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In life education and sports play an important role. However, some parents argue that parents should urge their children to engage in more physical activity rather than studying academic subjects. I completely agree with this notion and the reasons for my opinion will be illustrated in the forthcoming paragraph with relevant illustrations.
To begin with, to achieve anything you must remain healthy. To emphasize, physical activity provides more opportunities for individuals to become strong. As a result, it allows students to study more and enhances children's health. Even if a student has an excellent academic performance in daily life, his grade will be affected if he suffers from several health conditions. Therefore, it is essential to maintain physical fitness to perform better in all situations.
In addition, playing more games may inspire an interest in their communication skills and improve their social circle, as the majority of games include teamwork. To explain, when youths have the chance to play with other team members, they have a greater chance to interact with a different personality. For instance, a game of hockey requires six players. Teammates must develop positive relationships with one another, which leads to a greater understanding of each individual's activities and interests. Therefore, it is essential to devote more time to physical activities to become involved in the world.
In conclusion, I believe that parents should encourage their children to devote more time to outdoor activities than to academics, as the fact that physical activity keeps the human body fit and provides opportunities to interact with others.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time on physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is sometimes argued that parents should convince their kids to take the time to do physical activities rather than study. Personally, I completely agree with the statement for several reasons which will be given out in this essay.
First and foremost, it can be said with certainty that regular physical exercises are essential for maintaining both mental and physical condition. By this, I mean that doing these could lead to better sleep patterns, promoting deeper and restful sleep, and positively impacting mental strength. Furthermore, engaging in physical activities promotes overall physical well-being, as offspring participate in sports and exercises, thereby reducing the risk of obesity and related health issues. For instance, in Asia, where kids spend most of their time studying, developing the risk of health problems, often resulting in sleep deprivation and stress. Therefore, it is essential for parents to support their children in balancing between studying and staying healthy.
Secondly, a special consideration is that joining a team sport would allow kids to develop important social skills. The main basis is probably because a team sport would offer increased opportunities to meet new people, creating environments for children to communicate, cooperate and engage in teamwork. To illustrate this, consider the case of badminton, there are two individuals in one team, highlighting the significance of cooperation and teamwork in securing the top prize. Therefore, the advantages of doing physical activities far outweigh those of studying.
In conclusion, I strongly believe parents should encourage children to be aware of spending more time exercising due to the benefits of fitness and social skills.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time on physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is sometimes argued that parents should convince their kids to take the time to do physical activities rather than study. Personally, I completely agree with the statement for several reasons which will be given out in this essay.
First and foremost, it can be said with certainty that regular physical exercises are essential for maintaining both mental and physical condition. By this, I mean that doing these could lead to better sleep patterns, promoting deeper and restful sleep, and positively impacting mental strength. Furthermore, engaging in physical activities promotes overall physical well-being, as offspring participate in sports and exercises, thereby reducing the risk of obesity and related health issues. For instance, in Asia, where kids spend most of their time studying, developing the risk of health problems, often resulting in sleep deprivation and stress. Therefore, it is essential for parents to support their children in balancing between studying and staying healthy.
Secondly, a special consideration is that joining a team sport would allow kids to develop important social skills. The main basis is probably because a team sport would offer increased opportunities to meet new people, creating environments for children to communicate, cooperate and engage in teamwork. To illustrate this, consider the case of badminton, there are two individuals in one team, highlighting the significance of cooperation and teamwork in securing the top prize. Therefore, the advantages of doing physical activities far outweigh those of studying.
In conclusion, I strongly believe parents should encourage children to be aware of spending more time exercising due to the benefits of fitness and social skills.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time on physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is sometimes argued that parents should convince their kids to take the time to do physical activities rather than study. Personally, I completely agree with the statement for several reasons which will be given out in this essay.
First and foremost, it can be said with certainty that regular physical exercises are essential for maintaining both mental and physical condition. By this, I mean that doing these could lead to better sleep patterns, promoting deeper and restful sleep, and positively impacting mental strength. Furthermore, engaging in physical activities promotes overall physical well-being, as offspring participate in sports and exercises, thereby reducing the risk of obesity and related health issues. For instance, in Asia, where kids spend most of their time studying, developing the risk of health problems, often resulting in sleep deprivation and stress. Therefore, it is essential for parents to support their children in balancing between studying and staying healthy.
Secondly, a special consideration is that joining a team sport would allow kids to develop important social skills. The main basis is probably because a team sport would offer increased opportunities to meet new people, creating environments for children to communicate, cooperate and engage in teamwork. To illustrate this, consider the case of badminton, there are two individuals in one team, highlighting the significance of cooperation and teamwork in securing the top prize. Therefore, the advantages of doing physical activities far outweigh those of studying.
In conclusion, I strongly believe parents should encourage children to be aware of spending more time exercising due to the benefits of fitness and social skills.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time on physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is sometimes argued that parents should convince their kids to take the time to do physical activities rather than study. Personally, I completely agree with the statement for several reasons which will be given out in this essay.
First and foremost, it can be said with certainty that regular physical exercises are essential for maintaining both mental and physical condition. By this, I mean that doing these could lead to better sleep patterns, promoting deeper and restful sleep, and positively impacting mental strength. Furthermore, engaging in physical activities promotes overall physical well-being, as offspring participate in sports and exercises, thereby reducing the risk of obesity and related health issues. For instance, in Asia, where kids spend most of their time studying, developing the risk of health problems, often resulting in sleep deprivation and stress. Therefore, it is essential for parents to support their children in balancing between studying and staying healthy.
Secondly, a special consideration is that joining a team sport would allow kids to develop important social skills. The main basis is probably because a team sport would offer increased opportunities to meet new people, creating environments for children to communicate, cooperate and engage in teamwork. To illustrate this, consider the case of badminton, there are two individuals in one team, highlighting the significance of cooperation and teamwork in securing the top prize. Therefore, the advantages of doing physical activities far outweigh those of studying.
In conclusion, I strongly believe parents should encourage children to be aware of spending more time exercising due to the benefits of fitness and social skills.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Throughout the history, people dream to live in a perfect society while they haven’t agree how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? How do people do to achieving an ideal society?
Anwser:
Most people in the world have a dream to live in an ideal society and lead a happy meaningful life. However, they do not have the same idea about what a perfect civilization would look like. I personally think that there are two indicators that can measure the perfection of a society in the modern world: proper infrastructure and employment opportunity. This essay discusses these factors and the ways to achieve that ideal association followed by examples.
Firstly, a perfect community must possess robust infrastructure and efficient services to meet the fundamental needs of its inhabitants. Take folks living in Melbourne as an example, Melbourne is claimed as the most livable city in the world and the citizens can be classified as living an ideal way of life. This city boasts a multitude of modern foundation elements, including state-of-the-art public health centres, schools, bus stops, and various other essential facilities. Additionally, the city offers excellent services at the airport and local government offices. These optimal conditions are made possible when citizens consistently pay their taxes and adhere to the established regulations. Tax revenue serves as a valuable resource for developing sophisticated public facilities. When the community follows these regulations, they can expect high-quality sustenance for its residents.
Secondly, An ideal community requires an ample number of job opportunities to cater for the demands of its people. Adequate job prospects provide individuals with a satisfactory income and the promise of a promising career. Take Los Angeles, for instance, where the majority of the population dedicates a significant portion of their time to work and enjoys favourable financial conditions. Such a scenario can be established within a society if its citizens are encouraged to become entrepreneurs. Entrepreneurship opens up new employment avenues, ultimately reducing unemployment rates and fostering economic growth.
In conclusion, a perfect civilization must possess comprehensive infrastructure, essential servings, and ample employment opportunities. This condition can be cultivated through tax contributions, policy compliance, and the creation of job opportunities by entrepreneurs.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Throughout the history, people dream to live in a perfect society while they haven’t agree how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? How do people do to achieving an ideal society?
Anwser:
Most people in the world have a dream to live in an ideal society and lead a happy meaningful life. However, they do not have the same idea about what a perfect civilization would look like. I personally think that there are two indicators that can measure the perfection of a society in the modern world: proper infrastructure and employment opportunity. This essay discusses these factors and the ways to achieve that ideal association followed by examples.
Firstly, a perfect community must possess robust infrastructure and efficient services to meet the fundamental needs of its inhabitants. Take folks living in Melbourne as an example, Melbourne is claimed as the most livable city in the world and the citizens can be classified as living an ideal way of life. This city boasts a multitude of modern foundation elements, including state-of-the-art public health centres, schools, bus stops, and various other essential facilities. Additionally, the city offers excellent services at the airport and local government offices. These optimal conditions are made possible when citizens consistently pay their taxes and adhere to the established regulations. Tax revenue serves as a valuable resource for developing sophisticated public facilities. When the community follows these regulations, they can expect high-quality sustenance for its residents.
Secondly, An ideal community requires an ample number of job opportunities to cater for the demands of its people. Adequate job prospects provide individuals with a satisfactory income and the promise of a promising career. Take Los Angeles, for instance, where the majority of the population dedicates a significant portion of their time to work and enjoys favourable financial conditions. Such a scenario can be established within a society if its citizens are encouraged to become entrepreneurs. Entrepreneurship opens up new employment avenues, ultimately reducing unemployment rates and fostering economic growth.
In conclusion, a perfect civilization must possess comprehensive infrastructure, essential servings, and ample employment opportunities. This condition can be cultivated through tax contributions, policy compliance, and the creation of job opportunities by entrepreneurs.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Throughout the history, people dream to live in a perfect society while they haven’t agree how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? How do people do to achieving an ideal society?
Anwser:
Most people in the world have a dream to live in an ideal society and lead a happy meaningful life. However, they do not have the same idea about what a perfect civilization would look like. I personally think that there are two indicators that can measure the perfection of a society in the modern world: proper infrastructure and employment opportunity. This essay discusses these factors and the ways to achieve that ideal association followed by examples.
Firstly, a perfect community must possess robust infrastructure and efficient services to meet the fundamental needs of its inhabitants. Take folks living in Melbourne as an example, Melbourne is claimed as the most livable city in the world and the citizens can be classified as living an ideal way of life. This city boasts a multitude of modern foundation elements, including state-of-the-art public health centres, schools, bus stops, and various other essential facilities. Additionally, the city offers excellent services at the airport and local government offices. These optimal conditions are made possible when citizens consistently pay their taxes and adhere to the established regulations. Tax revenue serves as a valuable resource for developing sophisticated public facilities. When the community follows these regulations, they can expect high-quality sustenance for its residents.
Secondly, An ideal community requires an ample number of job opportunities to cater for the demands of its people. Adequate job prospects provide individuals with a satisfactory income and the promise of a promising career. Take Los Angeles, for instance, where the majority of the population dedicates a significant portion of their time to work and enjoys favourable financial conditions. Such a scenario can be established within a society if its citizens are encouraged to become entrepreneurs. Entrepreneurship opens up new employment avenues, ultimately reducing unemployment rates and fostering economic growth.
In conclusion, a perfect civilization must possess comprehensive infrastructure, essential servings, and ample employment opportunities. This condition can be cultivated through tax contributions, policy compliance, and the creation of job opportunities by entrepreneurs.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Throughout the history, people dream to live in a perfect society while they haven’t agree how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? How do people do to achieving an ideal society?
Anwser:
Most people in the world have a dream to live in an ideal society and lead a happy meaningful life. However, they do not have the same idea about what a perfect civilization would look like. I personally think that there are two indicators that can measure the perfection of a society in the modern world: proper infrastructure and employment opportunity. This essay discusses these factors and the ways to achieve that ideal association followed by examples.
Firstly, a perfect community must possess robust infrastructure and efficient services to meet the fundamental needs of its inhabitants. Take folks living in Melbourne as an example, Melbourne is claimed as the most livable city in the world and the citizens can be classified as living an ideal way of life. This city boasts a multitude of modern foundation elements, including state-of-the-art public health centres, schools, bus stops, and various other essential facilities. Additionally, the city offers excellent services at the airport and local government offices. These optimal conditions are made possible when citizens consistently pay their taxes and adhere to the established regulations. Tax revenue serves as a valuable resource for developing sophisticated public facilities. When the community follows these regulations, they can expect high-quality sustenance for its residents.
Secondly, An ideal community requires an ample number of job opportunities to cater for the demands of its people. Adequate job prospects provide individuals with a satisfactory income and the promise of a promising career. Take Los Angeles, for instance, where the majority of the population dedicates a significant portion of their time to work and enjoys favourable financial conditions. Such a scenario can be established within a society if its citizens are encouraged to become entrepreneurs. Entrepreneurship opens up new employment avenues, ultimately reducing unemployment rates and fostering economic growth.
In conclusion, a perfect civilization must possess comprehensive infrastructure, essential servings, and ample employment opportunities. This condition can be cultivated through tax contributions, policy compliance, and the creation of job opportunities by entrepreneurs.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-years-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals.To what extend do you think crime is determined by human nature?Is it possible to stop children from going up to be criminals?
Anwser:
Numerous experts assert that, in recent times, it is possible to assess the conduct of a child at the age of three to understand whether or not they will become criminals in their adulthood. In my opinion, while some personal characteristics can cause people to commit a crime, education and parental upbringing play a role in preventing children from criminal activities.
Engaging in criminal activities can result from some personal traits. Initially, when acting as selfish and arrogant people, individuals may consider a right for themselves to carry out any activity without considering regulations or even others' advice. For example, in Vietnam, studies indicated that criminals who were arrested presented rarely disciplined behaviour during their childhood due to the schools' records. Moreover, as people may be irresponsible in both their social and personal lives, they are less likely to think about their social status, thus not respecting laws or others' rights. Ultimately, because people may be brought up with the features of impatience and intolerance, they may be unable to handle hard situations, especially economic issues, leading to a temptation to satisfy their needs illegally.
Notwithstanding, teachers and parents should take the responsibility to teach children to abide laws. In the first place, as a school is like a minor society to live life, teachers should set the rules for the classes, which if children do not follow, they will be confronted with a mild punishment. Students, therefore, will practise to respect laws to avoid negative consequences. Furthermore, were children not to come from a family where the parents themselves broke laws, they would not be potentially prepared to ignore regulations in society. This is because there is a close between parental upbringing and children's personality. For instance, in accordance with a study in Japan, a large proportion of criminals belonged to unstable families which had experienced crimes to accommodate their needs. Consequently, parents should be extremely concerned about the environment, in which children are brought up.
In conclusion, although it may be acceptable that people with a few characteristics have more potential for offensive behaviour, it is hard to deny the roles of families and schools to learn how to respect laws as well as citizens' rights.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-years-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals.To what extend do you think crime is determined by human nature?Is it possible to stop children from going up to be criminals?
Anwser:
Numerous experts assert that, in recent times, it is possible to assess the conduct of a child at the age of three to understand whether or not they will become criminals in their adulthood. In my opinion, while some personal characteristics can cause people to commit a crime, education and parental upbringing play a role in preventing children from criminal activities.
Engaging in criminal activities can result from some personal traits. Initially, when acting as selfish and arrogant people, individuals may consider a right for themselves to carry out any activity without considering regulations or even others' advice. For example, in Vietnam, studies indicated that criminals who were arrested presented rarely disciplined behaviour during their childhood due to the schools' records. Moreover, as people may be irresponsible in both their social and personal lives, they are less likely to think about their social status, thus not respecting laws or others' rights. Ultimately, because people may be brought up with the features of impatience and intolerance, they may be unable to handle hard situations, especially economic issues, leading to a temptation to satisfy their needs illegally.
Notwithstanding, teachers and parents should take the responsibility to teach children to abide laws. In the first place, as a school is like a minor society to live life, teachers should set the rules for the classes, which if children do not follow, they will be confronted with a mild punishment. Students, therefore, will practise to respect laws to avoid negative consequences. Furthermore, were children not to come from a family where the parents themselves broke laws, they would not be potentially prepared to ignore regulations in society. This is because there is a close between parental upbringing and children's personality. For instance, in accordance with a study in Japan, a large proportion of criminals belonged to unstable families which had experienced crimes to accommodate their needs. Consequently, parents should be extremely concerned about the environment, in which children are brought up.
In conclusion, although it may be acceptable that people with a few characteristics have more potential for offensive behaviour, it is hard to deny the roles of families and schools to learn how to respect laws as well as citizens' rights.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-years-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals.To what extend do you think crime is determined by human nature?Is it possible to stop children from going up to be criminals?
Anwser:
Numerous experts assert that, in recent times, it is possible to assess the conduct of a child at the age of three to understand whether or not they will become criminals in their adulthood. In my opinion, while some personal characteristics can cause people to commit a crime, education and parental upbringing play a role in preventing children from criminal activities.
Engaging in criminal activities can result from some personal traits. Initially, when acting as selfish and arrogant people, individuals may consider a right for themselves to carry out any activity without considering regulations or even others' advice. For example, in Vietnam, studies indicated that criminals who were arrested presented rarely disciplined behaviour during their childhood due to the schools' records. Moreover, as people may be irresponsible in both their social and personal lives, they are less likely to think about their social status, thus not respecting laws or others' rights. Ultimately, because people may be brought up with the features of impatience and intolerance, they may be unable to handle hard situations, especially economic issues, leading to a temptation to satisfy their needs illegally.
Notwithstanding, teachers and parents should take the responsibility to teach children to abide laws. In the first place, as a school is like a minor society to live life, teachers should set the rules for the classes, which if children do not follow, they will be confronted with a mild punishment. Students, therefore, will practise to respect laws to avoid negative consequences. Furthermore, were children not to come from a family where the parents themselves broke laws, they would not be potentially prepared to ignore regulations in society. This is because there is a close between parental upbringing and children's personality. For instance, in accordance with a study in Japan, a large proportion of criminals belonged to unstable families which had experienced crimes to accommodate their needs. Consequently, parents should be extremely concerned about the environment, in which children are brought up.
In conclusion, although it may be acceptable that people with a few characteristics have more potential for offensive behaviour, it is hard to deny the roles of families and schools to learn how to respect laws as well as citizens' rights.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-years-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals.To what extend do you think crime is determined by human nature?Is it possible to stop children from going up to be criminals?
Anwser:
Numerous experts assert that, in recent times, it is possible to assess the conduct of a child at the age of three to understand whether or not they will become criminals in their adulthood. In my opinion, while some personal characteristics can cause people to commit a crime, education and parental upbringing play a role in preventing children from criminal activities.
Engaging in criminal activities can result from some personal traits. Initially, when acting as selfish and arrogant people, individuals may consider a right for themselves to carry out any activity without considering regulations or even others' advice. For example, in Vietnam, studies indicated that criminals who were arrested presented rarely disciplined behaviour during their childhood due to the schools' records. Moreover, as people may be irresponsible in both their social and personal lives, they are less likely to think about their social status, thus not respecting laws or others' rights. Ultimately, because people may be brought up with the features of impatience and intolerance, they may be unable to handle hard situations, especially economic issues, leading to a temptation to satisfy their needs illegally.
Notwithstanding, teachers and parents should take the responsibility to teach children to abide laws. In the first place, as a school is like a minor society to live life, teachers should set the rules for the classes, which if children do not follow, they will be confronted with a mild punishment. Students, therefore, will practise to respect laws to avoid negative consequences. Furthermore, were children not to come from a family where the parents themselves broke laws, they would not be potentially prepared to ignore regulations in society. This is because there is a close between parental upbringing and children's personality. For instance, in accordance with a study in Japan, a large proportion of criminals belonged to unstable families which had experienced crimes to accommodate their needs. Consequently, parents should be extremely concerned about the environment, in which children are brought up.
In conclusion, although it may be acceptable that people with a few characteristics have more potential for offensive behaviour, it is hard to deny the roles of families and schools to learn how to respect laws as well as citizens' rights.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Anwser:
In recent times, the number of people who tend to run their own businesses has increased significantly. This is owing to the fact that job independence brings great benefits to the owner in terms of economic aspects and having a flexible timetable. I would argue that this trend has its own disadvantages which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
One of the primary rationales behind the increasing preference for self-employment is the strong desire for independence and control over your time. To elaborate on my point, if you work on your own, you might have the capability to manage your schedules geared to your lifestyle. What it means is that there is no obligation to be in your workplace at a certain time. For instance, being freelance can pave the way for earning more money since the profits are not shared with an employer.
On the other hand, embarking on a self-employment journey also entails a set of distinct drawbacks. To present a better explanation, one of the primary problems is the absence of job security and benefits typically provided by traditional employment including health insurance and paid leave. Furthermore, statistics show that business owners might have to deal with more stress as it is challenging to maintain a work-life balance. To cite an example, one of my friends started up her online shop. After a while, she had a panic attack as she was so agitated about paying her debts and she was fully responsible for all the work ranging from financial management and customer service.
To sum up, having an independent occupation can be rewarding regarding financial issues and flexibility. As far as I am concerned, it has some merits but the disadvantages outweigh the positive parts.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Anwser:
In recent times, the number of people who tend to run their own businesses has increased significantly. This is owing to the fact that job independence brings great benefits to the owner in terms of economic aspects and having a flexible timetable. I would argue that this trend has its own disadvantages which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
One of the primary rationales behind the increasing preference for self-employment is the strong desire for independence and control over your time. To elaborate on my point, if you work on your own, you might have the capability to manage your schedules geared to your lifestyle. What it means is that there is no obligation to be in your workplace at a certain time. For instance, being freelance can pave the way for earning more money since the profits are not shared with an employer.
On the other hand, embarking on a self-employment journey also entails a set of distinct drawbacks. To present a better explanation, one of the primary problems is the absence of job security and benefits typically provided by traditional employment including health insurance and paid leave. Furthermore, statistics show that business owners might have to deal with more stress as it is challenging to maintain a work-life balance. To cite an example, one of my friends started up her online shop. After a while, she had a panic attack as she was so agitated about paying her debts and she was fully responsible for all the work ranging from financial management and customer service.
To sum up, having an independent occupation can be rewarding regarding financial issues and flexibility. As far as I am concerned, it has some merits but the disadvantages outweigh the positive parts.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Anwser:
In recent times, the number of people who tend to run their own businesses has increased significantly. This is owing to the fact that job independence brings great benefits to the owner in terms of economic aspects and having a flexible timetable. I would argue that this trend has its own disadvantages which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
One of the primary rationales behind the increasing preference for self-employment is the strong desire for independence and control over your time. To elaborate on my point, if you work on your own, you might have the capability to manage your schedules geared to your lifestyle. What it means is that there is no obligation to be in your workplace at a certain time. For instance, being freelance can pave the way for earning more money since the profits are not shared with an employer.
On the other hand, embarking on a self-employment journey also entails a set of distinct drawbacks. To present a better explanation, one of the primary problems is the absence of job security and benefits typically provided by traditional employment including health insurance and paid leave. Furthermore, statistics show that business owners might have to deal with more stress as it is challenging to maintain a work-life balance. To cite an example, one of my friends started up her online shop. After a while, she had a panic attack as she was so agitated about paying her debts and she was fully responsible for all the work ranging from financial management and customer service.
To sum up, having an independent occupation can be rewarding regarding financial issues and flexibility. As far as I am concerned, it has some merits but the disadvantages outweigh the positive parts.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Anwser:
In recent times, the number of people who tend to run their own businesses has increased significantly. This is owing to the fact that job independence brings great benefits to the owner in terms of economic aspects and having a flexible timetable. I would argue that this trend has its own disadvantages which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
One of the primary rationales behind the increasing preference for self-employment is the strong desire for independence and control over your time. To elaborate on my point, if you work on your own, you might have the capability to manage your schedules geared to your lifestyle. What it means is that there is no obligation to be in your workplace at a certain time. For instance, being freelance can pave the way for earning more money since the profits are not shared with an employer.
On the other hand, embarking on a self-employment journey also entails a set of distinct drawbacks. To present a better explanation, one of the primary problems is the absence of job security and benefits typically provided by traditional employment including health insurance and paid leave. Furthermore, statistics show that business owners might have to deal with more stress as it is challenging to maintain a work-life balance. To cite an example, one of my friends started up her online shop. After a while, she had a panic attack as she was so agitated about paying her debts and she was fully responsible for all the work ranging from financial management and customer service.
To sum up, having an independent occupation can be rewarding regarding financial issues and flexibility. As far as I am concerned, it has some merits but the disadvantages outweigh the positive parts.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Anwser:
It is true that some traditional beliefs upheld by older generations are no longer pertinent for the younger generation's preparation for contemporary life. While I agree that certain conventional ideas have become obsolete, I believe that many traditional values continue to hold significance and should be respected in the present day.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that some traditional norms have lost their relevance. For example, the advice often given to graduates, suggesting they pursue secure and conventional careers like administration or teaching, is increasingly irrelevant. The advent of the Internet and other technological advancements have expanded the array of career opportunities. Moreover, forcing young women to marry partners they have no emotional connection with is considered conservative, as they now possess the right to choose their life partners.
On the other hand, numerous traditional ideas retain their relevance and should be revered. For instance, the timeless wisdom that success is achieved through self-learning and hard work remains indispensable for the youth, given the ever-competitive job market. In addition, traditional values of politeness and good manners are invaluable in the contemporary world, where individuals from diverse backgrounds often collaborate and interact. These qualities foster harmonious relationships and effective communication in an increasingly globalized society.
In conclusion, although certain traditional beliefs have become outdated and no longer serve the younger generation, many of these values continue to be relevant and should be preserved. The challenge is to strike a balance between embracing contemporary progress and upholding enduring traditional principles to equip the younger generation with a holistic and adaptive approach to modern life.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Anwser:
It is true that some traditional beliefs upheld by older generations are no longer pertinent for the younger generation's preparation for contemporary life. While I agree that certain conventional ideas have become obsolete, I believe that many traditional values continue to hold significance and should be respected in the present day.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that some traditional norms have lost their relevance. For example, the advice often given to graduates, suggesting they pursue secure and conventional careers like administration or teaching, is increasingly irrelevant. The advent of the Internet and other technological advancements have expanded the array of career opportunities. Moreover, forcing young women to marry partners they have no emotional connection with is considered conservative, as they now possess the right to choose their life partners.
On the other hand, numerous traditional ideas retain their relevance and should be revered. For instance, the timeless wisdom that success is achieved through self-learning and hard work remains indispensable for the youth, given the ever-competitive job market. In addition, traditional values of politeness and good manners are invaluable in the contemporary world, where individuals from diverse backgrounds often collaborate and interact. These qualities foster harmonious relationships and effective communication in an increasingly globalized society.
In conclusion, although certain traditional beliefs have become outdated and no longer serve the younger generation, many of these values continue to be relevant and should be preserved. The challenge is to strike a balance between embracing contemporary progress and upholding enduring traditional principles to equip the younger generation with a holistic and adaptive approach to modern life.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Anwser:
It is true that some traditional beliefs upheld by older generations are no longer pertinent for the younger generation's preparation for contemporary life. While I agree that certain conventional ideas have become obsolete, I believe that many traditional values continue to hold significance and should be respected in the present day.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that some traditional norms have lost their relevance. For example, the advice often given to graduates, suggesting they pursue secure and conventional careers like administration or teaching, is increasingly irrelevant. The advent of the Internet and other technological advancements have expanded the array of career opportunities. Moreover, forcing young women to marry partners they have no emotional connection with is considered conservative, as they now possess the right to choose their life partners.
On the other hand, numerous traditional ideas retain their relevance and should be revered. For instance, the timeless wisdom that success is achieved through self-learning and hard work remains indispensable for the youth, given the ever-competitive job market. In addition, traditional values of politeness and good manners are invaluable in the contemporary world, where individuals from diverse backgrounds often collaborate and interact. These qualities foster harmonious relationships and effective communication in an increasingly globalized society.
In conclusion, although certain traditional beliefs have become outdated and no longer serve the younger generation, many of these values continue to be relevant and should be preserved. The challenge is to strike a balance between embracing contemporary progress and upholding enduring traditional principles to equip the younger generation with a holistic and adaptive approach to modern life.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Anwser:
It is true that some traditional beliefs upheld by older generations are no longer pertinent for the younger generation's preparation for contemporary life. While I agree that certain conventional ideas have become obsolete, I believe that many traditional values continue to hold significance and should be respected in the present day.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that some traditional norms have lost their relevance. For example, the advice often given to graduates, suggesting they pursue secure and conventional careers like administration or teaching, is increasingly irrelevant. The advent of the Internet and other technological advancements have expanded the array of career opportunities. Moreover, forcing young women to marry partners they have no emotional connection with is considered conservative, as they now possess the right to choose their life partners.
On the other hand, numerous traditional ideas retain their relevance and should be revered. For instance, the timeless wisdom that success is achieved through self-learning and hard work remains indispensable for the youth, given the ever-competitive job market. In addition, traditional values of politeness and good manners are invaluable in the contemporary world, where individuals from diverse backgrounds often collaborate and interact. These qualities foster harmonious relationships and effective communication in an increasingly globalized society.
In conclusion, although certain traditional beliefs have become outdated and no longer serve the younger generation, many of these values continue to be relevant and should be preserved. The challenge is to strike a balance between embracing contemporary progress and upholding enduring traditional principles to equip the younger generation with a holistic and adaptive approach to modern life.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Nowadays, some international companies become more and more powerful. Some people think it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In recent times, we can find that many global firms are growing more rapidly than before. Some people suggest that this phenomenon is bad progress while I personally believe that the progress of international corporations should not be deemed as a negative fact.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why people think that the growth of international companies is a negative trend. Firstly, the development of local businesses will be negatively affected because global companies give a competitive price to customers. In general, transnational corporations have an advanced position to negotiate the price of raw materials due to the vast demand, therefore, the cost of production is much lower than small local firms, and thus the selling price to clients is more competitive. Secondly, it can lead to market unfairness if international companies become stronger. Giant global firms develop their business in different areas, and they can take an unfair advantage to win more clients through their close relationships with governments and counterparties. For instance, some big international banks obtain some proficient policies from local governments by providing senior positions to some public officers’ relatives.
On the other hand, I stand with these people who believe that it is a positive development that global firms are increasingly powerful. Help boost the local economy and widen people’s version of the world. Global big firms provide a large number of job opportunities to people who are located in different countries. For instance, people from developing countries can learn technical skills from their jobs in big companies and increase their professional knowledge through job training. People who work in international corporations need to collaborate with colleagues from different backgrounds and nationalities, and they can be more open-minded by communicating and cooperating with different people. Furthermore, these people can utilize their international working experiences to assist local companies’ growth.
In conclusion, although the growth of international companies can have a negative impact on the development of local business and market fairness, I believe that it is positive progress because international companies aid in resolving the unemployment issue and widen people’s version of the world.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Nowadays, some international companies become more and more powerful. Some people think it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In recent times, we can find that many global firms are growing more rapidly than before. Some people suggest that this phenomenon is bad progress while I personally believe that the progress of international corporations should not be deemed as a negative fact.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why people think that the growth of international companies is a negative trend. Firstly, the development of local businesses will be negatively affected because global companies give a competitive price to customers. In general, transnational corporations have an advanced position to negotiate the price of raw materials due to the vast demand, therefore, the cost of production is much lower than small local firms, and thus the selling price to clients is more competitive. Secondly, it can lead to market unfairness if international companies become stronger. Giant global firms develop their business in different areas, and they can take an unfair advantage to win more clients through their close relationships with governments and counterparties. For instance, some big international banks obtain some proficient policies from local governments by providing senior positions to some public officers’ relatives.
On the other hand, I stand with these people who believe that it is a positive development that global firms are increasingly powerful. Help boost the local economy and widen people’s version of the world. Global big firms provide a large number of job opportunities to people who are located in different countries. For instance, people from developing countries can learn technical skills from their jobs in big companies and increase their professional knowledge through job training. People who work in international corporations need to collaborate with colleagues from different backgrounds and nationalities, and they can be more open-minded by communicating and cooperating with different people. Furthermore, these people can utilize their international working experiences to assist local companies’ growth.
In conclusion, although the growth of international companies can have a negative impact on the development of local business and market fairness, I believe that it is positive progress because international companies aid in resolving the unemployment issue and widen people’s version of the world.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Nowadays, some international companies become more and more powerful. Some people think it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In recent times, we can find that many global firms are growing more rapidly than before. Some people suggest that this phenomenon is bad progress while I personally believe that the progress of international corporations should not be deemed as a negative fact.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why people think that the growth of international companies is a negative trend. Firstly, the development of local businesses will be negatively affected because global companies give a competitive price to customers. In general, transnational corporations have an advanced position to negotiate the price of raw materials due to the vast demand, therefore, the cost of production is much lower than small local firms, and thus the selling price to clients is more competitive. Secondly, it can lead to market unfairness if international companies become stronger. Giant global firms develop their business in different areas, and they can take an unfair advantage to win more clients through their close relationships with governments and counterparties. For instance, some big international banks obtain some proficient policies from local governments by providing senior positions to some public officers’ relatives.
On the other hand, I stand with these people who believe that it is a positive development that global firms are increasingly powerful. Help boost the local economy and widen people’s version of the world. Global big firms provide a large number of job opportunities to people who are located in different countries. For instance, people from developing countries can learn technical skills from their jobs in big companies and increase their professional knowledge through job training. People who work in international corporations need to collaborate with colleagues from different backgrounds and nationalities, and they can be more open-minded by communicating and cooperating with different people. Furthermore, these people can utilize their international working experiences to assist local companies’ growth.
In conclusion, although the growth of international companies can have a negative impact on the development of local business and market fairness, I believe that it is positive progress because international companies aid in resolving the unemployment issue and widen people’s version of the world.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Nowadays, some international companies become more and more powerful. Some people think it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In recent times, we can find that many global firms are growing more rapidly than before. Some people suggest that this phenomenon is bad progress while I personally believe that the progress of international corporations should not be deemed as a negative fact.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why people think that the growth of international companies is a negative trend. Firstly, the development of local businesses will be negatively affected because global companies give a competitive price to customers. In general, transnational corporations have an advanced position to negotiate the price of raw materials due to the vast demand, therefore, the cost of production is much lower than small local firms, and thus the selling price to clients is more competitive. Secondly, it can lead to market unfairness if international companies become stronger. Giant global firms develop their business in different areas, and they can take an unfair advantage to win more clients through their close relationships with governments and counterparties. For instance, some big international banks obtain some proficient policies from local governments by providing senior positions to some public officers’ relatives.
On the other hand, I stand with these people who believe that it is a positive development that global firms are increasingly powerful. Help boost the local economy and widen people’s version of the world. Global big firms provide a large number of job opportunities to people who are located in different countries. For instance, people from developing countries can learn technical skills from their jobs in big companies and increase their professional knowledge through job training. People who work in international corporations need to collaborate with colleagues from different backgrounds and nationalities, and they can be more open-minded by communicating and cooperating with different people. Furthermore, these people can utilize their international working experiences to assist local companies’ growth.
In conclusion, although the growth of international companies can have a negative impact on the development of local business and market fairness, I believe that it is positive progress because international companies aid in resolving the unemployment issue and widen people’s version of the world.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries around the world,rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is the positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Anwser:
Migration of people is a widespread phenomenon throughout the world and is usually associated with concomitant problems.The rural population around the world in many countries is decreasing since people are moving to neighbouring cities, causing significant changes of previously unseen proportions. In my opinion, people moving out of rural areas is a negative development and this essay will present arguments demonstrating the same.
Firstly, the major negative impact is on the overall rural economy, predominantly on farming as the folk required for this activity will be inadequate. For example, the extent of farming produced is reduced drastically because of the shortfall in labour which will accumulate year by year and become unsurmountable.The outcome of the spending power for the remnant will make living in rural areas unviable.
Another bleak outcome is sociological in nature because migrations to urban areas are undertaken by younger men and women, leading to a predominance of senior citizens who are left behind to manage household affairs. More often than not this leads to a weak and helpless community who cannot do more than the bare minimum maintenance tasks. As a result, facilities in the countryside, like parks, hospitals, schools, roads etc become rundown and look poverty-stricken.
To summarize, the problem of the countryside being depleted of population due to migration is harmful to that part of any nation and has to be rectified. In the above paragraphs, we have seen two such issues out of many more possible deteriorating outcomes and we can conclude that unless there is a concerted intervention by the governments of various countries, the problems of the countryside will be exacerbated.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries around the world,rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is the positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Anwser:
Migration of people is a widespread phenomenon throughout the world and is usually associated with concomitant problems.The rural population around the world in many countries is decreasing since people are moving to neighbouring cities, causing significant changes of previously unseen proportions. In my opinion, people moving out of rural areas is a negative development and this essay will present arguments demonstrating the same.
Firstly, the major negative impact is on the overall rural economy, predominantly on farming as the folk required for this activity will be inadequate. For example, the extent of farming produced is reduced drastically because of the shortfall in labour which will accumulate year by year and become unsurmountable.The outcome of the spending power for the remnant will make living in rural areas unviable.
Another bleak outcome is sociological in nature because migrations to urban areas are undertaken by younger men and women, leading to a predominance of senior citizens who are left behind to manage household affairs. More often than not this leads to a weak and helpless community who cannot do more than the bare minimum maintenance tasks. As a result, facilities in the countryside, like parks, hospitals, schools, roads etc become rundown and look poverty-stricken.
To summarize, the problem of the countryside being depleted of population due to migration is harmful to that part of any nation and has to be rectified. In the above paragraphs, we have seen two such issues out of many more possible deteriorating outcomes and we can conclude that unless there is a concerted intervention by the governments of various countries, the problems of the countryside will be exacerbated.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries around the world,rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is the positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Anwser:
Migration of people is a widespread phenomenon throughout the world and is usually associated with concomitant problems.The rural population around the world in many countries is decreasing since people are moving to neighbouring cities, causing significant changes of previously unseen proportions. In my opinion, people moving out of rural areas is a negative development and this essay will present arguments demonstrating the same.
Firstly, the major negative impact is on the overall rural economy, predominantly on farming as the folk required for this activity will be inadequate. For example, the extent of farming produced is reduced drastically because of the shortfall in labour which will accumulate year by year and become unsurmountable.The outcome of the spending power for the remnant will make living in rural areas unviable.
Another bleak outcome is sociological in nature because migrations to urban areas are undertaken by younger men and women, leading to a predominance of senior citizens who are left behind to manage household affairs. More often than not this leads to a weak and helpless community who cannot do more than the bare minimum maintenance tasks. As a result, facilities in the countryside, like parks, hospitals, schools, roads etc become rundown and look poverty-stricken.
To summarize, the problem of the countryside being depleted of population due to migration is harmful to that part of any nation and has to be rectified. In the above paragraphs, we have seen two such issues out of many more possible deteriorating outcomes and we can conclude that unless there is a concerted intervention by the governments of various countries, the problems of the countryside will be exacerbated.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries around the world,rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is the positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Anwser:
Migration of people is a widespread phenomenon throughout the world and is usually associated with concomitant problems.The rural population around the world in many countries is decreasing since people are moving to neighbouring cities, causing significant changes of previously unseen proportions. In my opinion, people moving out of rural areas is a negative development and this essay will present arguments demonstrating the same.
Firstly, the major negative impact is on the overall rural economy, predominantly on farming as the folk required for this activity will be inadequate. For example, the extent of farming produced is reduced drastically because of the shortfall in labour which will accumulate year by year and become unsurmountable.The outcome of the spending power for the remnant will make living in rural areas unviable.
Another bleak outcome is sociological in nature because migrations to urban areas are undertaken by younger men and women, leading to a predominance of senior citizens who are left behind to manage household affairs. More often than not this leads to a weak and helpless community who cannot do more than the bare minimum maintenance tasks. As a result, facilities in the countryside, like parks, hospitals, schools, roads etc become rundown and look poverty-stricken.
To summarize, the problem of the countryside being depleted of population due to migration is harmful to that part of any nation and has to be rectified. In the above paragraphs, we have seen two such issues out of many more possible deteriorating outcomes and we can conclude that unless there is a concerted intervention by the governments of various countries, the problems of the countryside will be exacerbated.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
It is a natural process that some animal species are extinct (e.g. dinosaur and dodos no longer exist). There is no reason that some people try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that animal extinction is a natural process, so humans have no justifiable reason to avert it. I disagree with this notion.
Admittedly, the disappearance of certain animals such as dinosaurs and dodos is considered natural because it occurs without direct human influence, like asteroid impact or volcanic eruptions, so it cannot be prevented. However, I am convinced that it remains our responsibility to prevent this phenomenon from happening. Specifically, there is no denying that human activities, such as deforestation and industrial pollution, have led to habitat loss and pollution, which are the primary reasons for animal extinction. Since humans are the drivers of ecological destruction, it is their duty to ensure animals’ existence. By doing so, we are not only fulfilling our moral duty toward nature, but we are also helping create a planet full of diversity for future generations to appreciate.
In addition, apart from fulfilling our ethical responsibility, I am sure that our efforts to halt animals’ death may open new avenues for scientific discoveries, which could bring immense benefits to mankind. For instance, the Sumatran Orangutan, a highly endangered species today, is worth protecting. If we ignore them, we will not be able to utilize them when conducting scientific research involving evolution and genetics. When this happens, understanding their close genetic relationship with humans as well as the possibility of scientific breakthroughs like cloning or medical advancements will not be possible.
In conclusion, although I find it admissible that certain animals no longer exist due to natural reasons, we must still recognize our ethical responsibility and animals’ potential contributions to scientific discovery, so we should exert more effort on protecting them than neglecting them.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
It is a natural process that some animal species are extinct (e.g. dinosaur and dodos no longer exist). There is no reason that some people try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that animal extinction is a natural process, so humans have no justifiable reason to avert it. I disagree with this notion.
Admittedly, the disappearance of certain animals such as dinosaurs and dodos is considered natural because it occurs without direct human influence, like asteroid impact or volcanic eruptions, so it cannot be prevented. However, I am convinced that it remains our responsibility to prevent this phenomenon from happening. Specifically, there is no denying that human activities, such as deforestation and industrial pollution, have led to habitat loss and pollution, which are the primary reasons for animal extinction. Since humans are the drivers of ecological destruction, it is their duty to ensure animals’ existence. By doing so, we are not only fulfilling our moral duty toward nature, but we are also helping create a planet full of diversity for future generations to appreciate.
In addition, apart from fulfilling our ethical responsibility, I am sure that our efforts to halt animals’ death may open new avenues for scientific discoveries, which could bring immense benefits to mankind. For instance, the Sumatran Orangutan, a highly endangered species today, is worth protecting. If we ignore them, we will not be able to utilize them when conducting scientific research involving evolution and genetics. When this happens, understanding their close genetic relationship with humans as well as the possibility of scientific breakthroughs like cloning or medical advancements will not be possible.
In conclusion, although I find it admissible that certain animals no longer exist due to natural reasons, we must still recognize our ethical responsibility and animals’ potential contributions to scientific discovery, so we should exert more effort on protecting them than neglecting them.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
It is a natural process that some animal species are extinct (e.g. dinosaur and dodos no longer exist). There is no reason that some people try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that animal extinction is a natural process, so humans have no justifiable reason to avert it. I disagree with this notion.
Admittedly, the disappearance of certain animals such as dinosaurs and dodos is considered natural because it occurs without direct human influence, like asteroid impact or volcanic eruptions, so it cannot be prevented. However, I am convinced that it remains our responsibility to prevent this phenomenon from happening. Specifically, there is no denying that human activities, such as deforestation and industrial pollution, have led to habitat loss and pollution, which are the primary reasons for animal extinction. Since humans are the drivers of ecological destruction, it is their duty to ensure animals’ existence. By doing so, we are not only fulfilling our moral duty toward nature, but we are also helping create a planet full of diversity for future generations to appreciate.
In addition, apart from fulfilling our ethical responsibility, I am sure that our efforts to halt animals’ death may open new avenues for scientific discoveries, which could bring immense benefits to mankind. For instance, the Sumatran Orangutan, a highly endangered species today, is worth protecting. If we ignore them, we will not be able to utilize them when conducting scientific research involving evolution and genetics. When this happens, understanding their close genetic relationship with humans as well as the possibility of scientific breakthroughs like cloning or medical advancements will not be possible.
In conclusion, although I find it admissible that certain animals no longer exist due to natural reasons, we must still recognize our ethical responsibility and animals’ potential contributions to scientific discovery, so we should exert more effort on protecting them than neglecting them.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
It is a natural process that some animal species are extinct (e.g. dinosaur and dodos no longer exist). There is no reason that some people try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that animal extinction is a natural process, so humans have no justifiable reason to avert it. I disagree with this notion.
Admittedly, the disappearance of certain animals such as dinosaurs and dodos is considered natural because it occurs without direct human influence, like asteroid impact or volcanic eruptions, so it cannot be prevented. However, I am convinced that it remains our responsibility to prevent this phenomenon from happening. Specifically, there is no denying that human activities, such as deforestation and industrial pollution, have led to habitat loss and pollution, which are the primary reasons for animal extinction. Since humans are the drivers of ecological destruction, it is their duty to ensure animals’ existence. By doing so, we are not only fulfilling our moral duty toward nature, but we are also helping create a planet full of diversity for future generations to appreciate.
In addition, apart from fulfilling our ethical responsibility, I am sure that our efforts to halt animals’ death may open new avenues for scientific discoveries, which could bring immense benefits to mankind. For instance, the Sumatran Orangutan, a highly endangered species today, is worth protecting. If we ignore them, we will not be able to utilize them when conducting scientific research involving evolution and genetics. When this happens, understanding their close genetic relationship with humans as well as the possibility of scientific breakthroughs like cloning or medical advancements will not be possible.
In conclusion, although I find it admissible that certain animals no longer exist due to natural reasons, we must still recognize our ethical responsibility and animals’ potential contributions to scientific discovery, so we should exert more effort on protecting them than neglecting them.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. they think all health problems can just be fixed by visiting doctors.
What problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved?
Anwser:
Nowadays, healthcare is one of the most essential things in the world. Some people believe that their health depends on suggestions from doctors, so they do not keep their good physical condition by themselves. Although there are several problems, there will be a variety of possible solutions to overcome them.
The first aspect to identify is that the cost of health will increase if society only depends on the doctor. In fact, medical costs in some countries are exceedingly high and all poor communities do not have access to adequate treatment even if they need it. consequently, the number of deaths will grow in some countries. Another important issue is that if all patients who have mild illnesses are hospitalized due to a lack of independent care at home, therefore the availability of hospital beds for nations who need fast immediate care will decrease. Those phenomena could have a small group of negative impacts on association in terms of equality of opportunities and medical care.
even though these two problems may be unavoidable, there are various solutions for them. Firstly, the civilizations need to be educated on how to maintain their good physical condition day-to-day. For example, TV shows have an enormous impact because everyone watches them in the house. If there are a number of educational programs related to well-being and physical fitness, an individual would learn how to change the daily habit of eating to keep away from the problem of healthiness. Secondly, the government must give an opportunity to humanity to increase their welfare at local facilities. For instance, in Japan, there are a few educational meetings at local facilities given to the public on how to avoid obesity or how to maintain good conditions during pregnancy.
In conclusion, there are several problems in society if people are very dependent on doctors regarding the cost of treatment and the availability of beds in hospitals, but several solutions to overcome this negative trend. If the government tries to educate the public about the importance of maintaining physical health, then this problem will be resolved.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. they think all health problems can just be fixed by visiting doctors.
What problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved?
Anwser:
Nowadays, healthcare is one of the most essential things in the world. Some people believe that their health depends on suggestions from doctors, so they do not keep their good physical condition by themselves. Although there are several problems, there will be a variety of possible solutions to overcome them.
The first aspect to identify is that the cost of health will increase if society only depends on the doctor. In fact, medical costs in some countries are exceedingly high and all poor communities do not have access to adequate treatment even if they need it. consequently, the number of deaths will grow in some countries. Another important issue is that if all patients who have mild illnesses are hospitalized due to a lack of independent care at home, therefore the availability of hospital beds for nations who need fast immediate care will decrease. Those phenomena could have a small group of negative impacts on association in terms of equality of opportunities and medical care.
even though these two problems may be unavoidable, there are various solutions for them. Firstly, the civilizations need to be educated on how to maintain their good physical condition day-to-day. For example, TV shows have an enormous impact because everyone watches them in the house. If there are a number of educational programs related to well-being and physical fitness, an individual would learn how to change the daily habit of eating to keep away from the problem of healthiness. Secondly, the government must give an opportunity to humanity to increase their welfare at local facilities. For instance, in Japan, there are a few educational meetings at local facilities given to the public on how to avoid obesity or how to maintain good conditions during pregnancy.
In conclusion, there are several problems in society if people are very dependent on doctors regarding the cost of treatment and the availability of beds in hospitals, but several solutions to overcome this negative trend. If the government tries to educate the public about the importance of maintaining physical health, then this problem will be resolved.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. they think all health problems can just be fixed by visiting doctors.
What problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved?
Anwser:
Nowadays, healthcare is one of the most essential things in the world. Some people believe that their health depends on suggestions from doctors, so they do not keep their good physical condition by themselves. Although there are several problems, there will be a variety of possible solutions to overcome them.
The first aspect to identify is that the cost of health will increase if society only depends on the doctor. In fact, medical costs in some countries are exceedingly high and all poor communities do not have access to adequate treatment even if they need it. consequently, the number of deaths will grow in some countries. Another important issue is that if all patients who have mild illnesses are hospitalized due to a lack of independent care at home, therefore the availability of hospital beds for nations who need fast immediate care will decrease. Those phenomena could have a small group of negative impacts on association in terms of equality of opportunities and medical care.
even though these two problems may be unavoidable, there are various solutions for them. Firstly, the civilizations need to be educated on how to maintain their good physical condition day-to-day. For example, TV shows have an enormous impact because everyone watches them in the house. If there are a number of educational programs related to well-being and physical fitness, an individual would learn how to change the daily habit of eating to keep away from the problem of healthiness. Secondly, the government must give an opportunity to humanity to increase their welfare at local facilities. For instance, in Japan, there are a few educational meetings at local facilities given to the public on how to avoid obesity or how to maintain good conditions during pregnancy.
In conclusion, there are several problems in society if people are very dependent on doctors regarding the cost of treatment and the availability of beds in hospitals, but several solutions to overcome this negative trend. If the government tries to educate the public about the importance of maintaining physical health, then this problem will be resolved.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. they think all health problems can just be fixed by visiting doctors.
What problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved?
Anwser:
Nowadays, healthcare is one of the most essential things in the world. Some people believe that their health depends on suggestions from doctors, so they do not keep their good physical condition by themselves. Although there are several problems, there will be a variety of possible solutions to overcome them.
The first aspect to identify is that the cost of health will increase if society only depends on the doctor. In fact, medical costs in some countries are exceedingly high and all poor communities do not have access to adequate treatment even if they need it. consequently, the number of deaths will grow in some countries. Another important issue is that if all patients who have mild illnesses are hospitalized due to a lack of independent care at home, therefore the availability of hospital beds for nations who need fast immediate care will decrease. Those phenomena could have a small group of negative impacts on association in terms of equality of opportunities and medical care.
even though these two problems may be unavoidable, there are various solutions for them. Firstly, the civilizations need to be educated on how to maintain their good physical condition day-to-day. For example, TV shows have an enormous impact because everyone watches them in the house. If there are a number of educational programs related to well-being and physical fitness, an individual would learn how to change the daily habit of eating to keep away from the problem of healthiness. Secondly, the government must give an opportunity to humanity to increase their welfare at local facilities. For instance, in Japan, there are a few educational meetings at local facilities given to the public on how to avoid obesity or how to maintain good conditions during pregnancy.
In conclusion, there are several problems in society if people are very dependent on doctors regarding the cost of treatment and the availability of beds in hospitals, but several solutions to overcome this negative trend. If the government tries to educate the public about the importance of maintaining physical health, then this problem will be resolved.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that technology has led to many positive developments in their lives, while others think technology is gradually taking over control of the way people live.
Anwser:
In the past 50 years technologies have made a huge leap forward and have penetrated into many aspects of our lives. This has led to the division of society into 2 groups: those who believe that these changes are beneficial in many ways, while others are worried about our dependence on innovations. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and share my outlook.
It is true that people are gradually losing control over their lifestyle to technology. One of the reasons is an addiction to social media. Although it takes little time to watch one video or read a post, algorithms will recommend the ones that we might like the most, resulting in constant scrolling over hours. For instance, some teenagers find themselves consuming content past their bedtime, causing a reduction in time spent on sleeping and, consequently, health and productivity issues. Moreover, humanity has learned to store many pieces of data that otherwise we would have to remember by ourselves. For example, previously, if a person would want to go home with a taxi they would need to have their home address remembered, while now an application on a smartphone already has that information written on its memory. This can potentially lead to the degradation of the brain's abilities to memorise and not forget.
On the other hand, despite some disadvantages, I agree with the positive view of advancement. In particular possibility to work, shop and study anywhere as long as there is a connection to the internet, which can free an office worker from the stress and time wastage that comes with commuting or queuing in shops which can be reattributed towards having a rest, taking care of family and other things that can make a person happy. Besides, it helps us to learn and study without having to travel to attend lectures, thus making education more affordable.
In conclusion, even though both opinions are relevant, I believe that technology is mostly making our lives more enjoyable. Drawbacks that were mentioned above, can be dealt with if an effort is made by an individual.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that technology has led to many positive developments in their lives, while others think technology is gradually taking over control of the way people live.
Anwser:
In the past 50 years technologies have made a huge leap forward and have penetrated into many aspects of our lives. This has led to the division of society into 2 groups: those who believe that these changes are beneficial in many ways, while others are worried about our dependence on innovations. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and share my outlook.
It is true that people are gradually losing control over their lifestyle to technology. One of the reasons is an addiction to social media. Although it takes little time to watch one video or read a post, algorithms will recommend the ones that we might like the most, resulting in constant scrolling over hours. For instance, some teenagers find themselves consuming content past their bedtime, causing a reduction in time spent on sleeping and, consequently, health and productivity issues. Moreover, humanity has learned to store many pieces of data that otherwise we would have to remember by ourselves. For example, previously, if a person would want to go home with a taxi they would need to have their home address remembered, while now an application on a smartphone already has that information written on its memory. This can potentially lead to the degradation of the brain's abilities to memorise and not forget.
On the other hand, despite some disadvantages, I agree with the positive view of advancement. In particular possibility to work, shop and study anywhere as long as there is a connection to the internet, which can free an office worker from the stress and time wastage that comes with commuting or queuing in shops which can be reattributed towards having a rest, taking care of family and other things that can make a person happy. Besides, it helps us to learn and study without having to travel to attend lectures, thus making education more affordable.
In conclusion, even though both opinions are relevant, I believe that technology is mostly making our lives more enjoyable. Drawbacks that were mentioned above, can be dealt with if an effort is made by an individual.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that technology has led to many positive developments in their lives, while others think technology is gradually taking over control of the way people live.
Anwser:
In the past 50 years technologies have made a huge leap forward and have penetrated into many aspects of our lives. This has led to the division of society into 2 groups: those who believe that these changes are beneficial in many ways, while others are worried about our dependence on innovations. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and share my outlook.
It is true that people are gradually losing control over their lifestyle to technology. One of the reasons is an addiction to social media. Although it takes little time to watch one video or read a post, algorithms will recommend the ones that we might like the most, resulting in constant scrolling over hours. For instance, some teenagers find themselves consuming content past their bedtime, causing a reduction in time spent on sleeping and, consequently, health and productivity issues. Moreover, humanity has learned to store many pieces of data that otherwise we would have to remember by ourselves. For example, previously, if a person would want to go home with a taxi they would need to have their home address remembered, while now an application on a smartphone already has that information written on its memory. This can potentially lead to the degradation of the brain's abilities to memorise and not forget.
On the other hand, despite some disadvantages, I agree with the positive view of advancement. In particular possibility to work, shop and study anywhere as long as there is a connection to the internet, which can free an office worker from the stress and time wastage that comes with commuting or queuing in shops which can be reattributed towards having a rest, taking care of family and other things that can make a person happy. Besides, it helps us to learn and study without having to travel to attend lectures, thus making education more affordable.
In conclusion, even though both opinions are relevant, I believe that technology is mostly making our lives more enjoyable. Drawbacks that were mentioned above, can be dealt with if an effort is made by an individual.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that technology has led to many positive developments in their lives, while others think technology is gradually taking over control of the way people live.
Anwser:
In the past 50 years technologies have made a huge leap forward and have penetrated into many aspects of our lives. This has led to the division of society into 2 groups: those who believe that these changes are beneficial in many ways, while others are worried about our dependence on innovations. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and share my outlook.
It is true that people are gradually losing control over their lifestyle to technology. One of the reasons is an addiction to social media. Although it takes little time to watch one video or read a post, algorithms will recommend the ones that we might like the most, resulting in constant scrolling over hours. For instance, some teenagers find themselves consuming content past their bedtime, causing a reduction in time spent on sleeping and, consequently, health and productivity issues. Moreover, humanity has learned to store many pieces of data that otherwise we would have to remember by ourselves. For example, previously, if a person would want to go home with a taxi they would need to have their home address remembered, while now an application on a smartphone already has that information written on its memory. This can potentially lead to the degradation of the brain's abilities to memorise and not forget.
On the other hand, despite some disadvantages, I agree with the positive view of advancement. In particular possibility to work, shop and study anywhere as long as there is a connection to the internet, which can free an office worker from the stress and time wastage that comes with commuting or queuing in shops which can be reattributed towards having a rest, taking care of family and other things that can make a person happy. Besides, it helps us to learn and study without having to travel to attend lectures, thus making education more affordable.
In conclusion, even though both opinions are relevant, I believe that technology is mostly making our lives more enjoyable. Drawbacks that were mentioned above, can be dealt with if an effort is made by an individual.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people sat that it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and/or weekends. Other people think it is important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
Proponents believe that being extra-friendly with co-workers in our free time is a beneficial idea whereas opponents argue that we should completely differentiate our office relations and our social relations. In my view of thinking, interacting socially with work colleagues is good for making a workplace a happy place. However, sometimes being over-friendly with fellow staff creates some ethical issues with the disciplinary guidelines of the organisation.
On the one hand, making some good friends makes our lives easy in many aspects. Specifically, at offices, where many individuals spend their duty hours of the day, we need a stress-free environment. Therefore, it is a good step to socialise with our subordinates during possible hours like evenings or weekends. Good tuning between the job team is always beneficial for the outcome they produce, A TV9 survey in March 2023, for instance, proved that the social interaction between officemates is useful for boosting the quality of tasks they do together.
On the other hand, some issues related to mingling with company colleagues have been reported at many organisations. To be more specific, over-friendly relations between officemates may cause the likelihood of favouring someone all the time regardless of his/her capabilities over other hard-working fellow staff. Moreover, few employees may pressure their managers for benefits such as salary hikes, promotions or ease of duty. Hence, it is said that work-life must not get mixed up with our regular life. For example, in my first company, a senior manager was fired from his position on account of favouring his friend for onsite opportunities.
To conclude, admittedly, an office place should be a happening place to produce more and more quality outcomes and this can be achieved through bonding well with colleagues regularly. Still, there are some risks associated with it if not kept within limits.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people sat that it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and/or weekends. Other people think it is important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
Proponents believe that being extra-friendly with co-workers in our free time is a beneficial idea whereas opponents argue that we should completely differentiate our office relations and our social relations. In my view of thinking, interacting socially with work colleagues is good for making a workplace a happy place. However, sometimes being over-friendly with fellow staff creates some ethical issues with the disciplinary guidelines of the organisation.
On the one hand, making some good friends makes our lives easy in many aspects. Specifically, at offices, where many individuals spend their duty hours of the day, we need a stress-free environment. Therefore, it is a good step to socialise with our subordinates during possible hours like evenings or weekends. Good tuning between the job team is always beneficial for the outcome they produce, A TV9 survey in March 2023, for instance, proved that the social interaction between officemates is useful for boosting the quality of tasks they do together.
On the other hand, some issues related to mingling with company colleagues have been reported at many organisations. To be more specific, over-friendly relations between officemates may cause the likelihood of favouring someone all the time regardless of his/her capabilities over other hard-working fellow staff. Moreover, few employees may pressure their managers for benefits such as salary hikes, promotions or ease of duty. Hence, it is said that work-life must not get mixed up with our regular life. For example, in my first company, a senior manager was fired from his position on account of favouring his friend for onsite opportunities.
To conclude, admittedly, an office place should be a happening place to produce more and more quality outcomes and this can be achieved through bonding well with colleagues regularly. Still, there are some risks associated with it if not kept within limits.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people sat that it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and/or weekends. Other people think it is important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
Proponents believe that being extra-friendly with co-workers in our free time is a beneficial idea whereas opponents argue that we should completely differentiate our office relations and our social relations. In my view of thinking, interacting socially with work colleagues is good for making a workplace a happy place. However, sometimes being over-friendly with fellow staff creates some ethical issues with the disciplinary guidelines of the organisation.
On the one hand, making some good friends makes our lives easy in many aspects. Specifically, at offices, where many individuals spend their duty hours of the day, we need a stress-free environment. Therefore, it is a good step to socialise with our subordinates during possible hours like evenings or weekends. Good tuning between the job team is always beneficial for the outcome they produce, A TV9 survey in March 2023, for instance, proved that the social interaction between officemates is useful for boosting the quality of tasks they do together.
On the other hand, some issues related to mingling with company colleagues have been reported at many organisations. To be more specific, over-friendly relations between officemates may cause the likelihood of favouring someone all the time regardless of his/her capabilities over other hard-working fellow staff. Moreover, few employees may pressure their managers for benefits such as salary hikes, promotions or ease of duty. Hence, it is said that work-life must not get mixed up with our regular life. For example, in my first company, a senior manager was fired from his position on account of favouring his friend for onsite opportunities.
To conclude, admittedly, an office place should be a happening place to produce more and more quality outcomes and this can be achieved through bonding well with colleagues regularly. Still, there are some risks associated with it if not kept within limits.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people sat that it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and/or weekends. Other people think it is important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
Proponents believe that being extra-friendly with co-workers in our free time is a beneficial idea whereas opponents argue that we should completely differentiate our office relations and our social relations. In my view of thinking, interacting socially with work colleagues is good for making a workplace a happy place. However, sometimes being over-friendly with fellow staff creates some ethical issues with the disciplinary guidelines of the organisation.
On the one hand, making some good friends makes our lives easy in many aspects. Specifically, at offices, where many individuals spend their duty hours of the day, we need a stress-free environment. Therefore, it is a good step to socialise with our subordinates during possible hours like evenings or weekends. Good tuning between the job team is always beneficial for the outcome they produce, A TV9 survey in March 2023, for instance, proved that the social interaction between officemates is useful for boosting the quality of tasks they do together.
On the other hand, some issues related to mingling with company colleagues have been reported at many organisations. To be more specific, over-friendly relations between officemates may cause the likelihood of favouring someone all the time regardless of his/her capabilities over other hard-working fellow staff. Moreover, few employees may pressure their managers for benefits such as salary hikes, promotions or ease of duty. Hence, it is said that work-life must not get mixed up with our regular life. For example, in my first company, a senior manager was fired from his position on account of favouring his friend for onsite opportunities.
To conclude, admittedly, an office place should be a happening place to produce more and more quality outcomes and this can be achieved through bonding well with colleagues regularly. Still, there are some risks associated with it if not kept within limits.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
The only reason for people working hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Lacking money is an issue for some, which leads to the opinion that the sole purpose behind working diligently is to earn more money. I totally disagree with this notion and will give my rationale in this discussion.
Having financial issues could decrease the quality of life, which contributes to someone working harder than others to fulfil their basic needs. Take the financial recession in 2008 as an example, many people lost their jobs and their homes which consequently made people work harder and make more money to sustain their normal needs. Or if a member of a middle-class family was diagnosed with a terminal health problem, in order to pay for the long-term treatment, someone in the family potentially needs to double their time of work to earn more money. Therefore, some do have the need to devote more time and energy working to make extra cash, not with the sole purpose of making a lot of money but in order to cover their needs.
Another reason why some focus on work more than others is because they have a mission. Take ultra-marathon runner and Ex-Navy SEAL David Goggins as an example, he was able to participate in the world's most challenging marathon to date and actually finished it with record timing. In order to achieve such a feat, he worked very diligently on himself and with his mission backing him up which was raising money. Moreover, the funding he received from the marathon was not for himself but for providing for the families of his fallen comrades in the Navy while on active duty. Thus, there are higher purposes to push someone to focus on their job, career or mission.
In conclusion, earning more monetary possessions is not the only reason for a person to work harder but there are other purposes that motivate someone to do so.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
The only reason for people working hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Lacking money is an issue for some, which leads to the opinion that the sole purpose behind working diligently is to earn more money. I totally disagree with this notion and will give my rationale in this discussion.
Having financial issues could decrease the quality of life, which contributes to someone working harder than others to fulfil their basic needs. Take the financial recession in 2008 as an example, many people lost their jobs and their homes which consequently made people work harder and make more money to sustain their normal needs. Or if a member of a middle-class family was diagnosed with a terminal health problem, in order to pay for the long-term treatment, someone in the family potentially needs to double their time of work to earn more money. Therefore, some do have the need to devote more time and energy working to make extra cash, not with the sole purpose of making a lot of money but in order to cover their needs.
Another reason why some focus on work more than others is because they have a mission. Take ultra-marathon runner and Ex-Navy SEAL David Goggins as an example, he was able to participate in the world's most challenging marathon to date and actually finished it with record timing. In order to achieve such a feat, he worked very diligently on himself and with his mission backing him up which was raising money. Moreover, the funding he received from the marathon was not for himself but for providing for the families of his fallen comrades in the Navy while on active duty. Thus, there are higher purposes to push someone to focus on their job, career or mission.
In conclusion, earning more monetary possessions is not the only reason for a person to work harder but there are other purposes that motivate someone to do so.
Your lexical resource score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
The only reason for people working hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Lacking money is an issue for some, which leads to the opinion that the sole purpose behind working diligently is to earn more money. I totally disagree with this notion and will give my rationale in this discussion.
Having financial issues could decrease the quality of life, which contributes to someone working harder than others to fulfil their basic needs. Take the financial recession in 2008 as an example, many people lost their jobs and their homes which consequently made people work harder and make more money to sustain their normal needs. Or if a member of a middle-class family was diagnosed with a terminal health problem, in order to pay for the long-term treatment, someone in the family potentially needs to double their time of work to earn more money. Therefore, some do have the need to devote more time and energy working to make extra cash, not with the sole purpose of making a lot of money but in order to cover their needs.
Another reason why some focus on work more than others is because they have a mission. Take ultra-marathon runner and Ex-Navy SEAL David Goggins as an example, he was able to participate in the world's most challenging marathon to date and actually finished it with record timing. In order to achieve such a feat, he worked very diligently on himself and with his mission backing him up which was raising money. Moreover, the funding he received from the marathon was not for himself but for providing for the families of his fallen comrades in the Navy while on active duty. Thus, there are higher purposes to push someone to focus on their job, career or mission.
In conclusion, earning more monetary possessions is not the only reason for a person to work harder but there are other purposes that motivate someone to do so.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
The only reason for people working hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Lacking money is an issue for some, which leads to the opinion that the sole purpose behind working diligently is to earn more money. I totally disagree with this notion and will give my rationale in this discussion.
Having financial issues could decrease the quality of life, which contributes to someone working harder than others to fulfil their basic needs. Take the financial recession in 2008 as an example, many people lost their jobs and their homes which consequently made people work harder and make more money to sustain their normal needs. Or if a member of a middle-class family was diagnosed with a terminal health problem, in order to pay for the long-term treatment, someone in the family potentially needs to double their time of work to earn more money. Therefore, some do have the need to devote more time and energy working to make extra cash, not with the sole purpose of making a lot of money but in order to cover their needs.
Another reason why some focus on work more than others is because they have a mission. Take ultra-marathon runner and Ex-Navy SEAL David Goggins as an example, he was able to participate in the world's most challenging marathon to date and actually finished it with record timing. In order to achieve such a feat, he worked very diligently on himself and with his mission backing him up which was raising money. Moreover, the funding he received from the marathon was not for himself but for providing for the families of his fallen comrades in the Navy while on active duty. Thus, there are higher purposes to push someone to focus on their job, career or mission.
In conclusion, earning more monetary possessions is not the only reason for a person to work harder but there are other purposes that motivate someone to do so.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that too much
money has been spent looking
after and repairing old buildings, so
we should knock down old
buildings and build modern ones
instead. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is often argued that we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones because too much money has been spent looking after and repairing them. Although it is true that one can spend a lot of money to restore and look after the old buildings, I strongly disagree that we should just destroy them and build a new one instead.
To begin with, we cannot deny that old buildings have a lot of memories that are really precious for their owners. For instance, my house is more than 50 years old and was built when my grandmother was still a kid. It contains the memories from three generations including me, my parents and my grandparents. Every room always reminds me of a certain memory, making me remember my root and who I am. This kind of feeling is so treasured and no amount of money is too expensive for this.
Furthermore, old buildings have a cultural value that can be used to showcase their history. For example, there are several old buildings in my country that are being restored and transformed into museums such as Fatahillah, a museum that was built when the Dutch ruled my country. Fatahillah Museum now become the main destination for students to learn about the history, culture and architectural aspects of when Indonesia was still ruled by the Dutch, a hundred years ago. This kind of experience is meaningful and will not happen if old buildings are destroyed.
In conclusion, I do believe that old buildings have a special value. Repairing and looking after them is worth the price, hence we should not knock down the old building nor replace them with a modern one.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that too much
money has been spent looking
after and repairing old buildings, so
we should knock down old
buildings and build modern ones
instead. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is often argued that we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones because too much money has been spent looking after and repairing them. Although it is true that one can spend a lot of money to restore and look after the old buildings, I strongly disagree that we should just destroy them and build a new one instead.
To begin with, we cannot deny that old buildings have a lot of memories that are really precious for their owners. For instance, my house is more than 50 years old and was built when my grandmother was still a kid. It contains the memories from three generations including me, my parents and my grandparents. Every room always reminds me of a certain memory, making me remember my root and who I am. This kind of feeling is so treasured and no amount of money is too expensive for this.
Furthermore, old buildings have a cultural value that can be used to showcase their history. For example, there are several old buildings in my country that are being restored and transformed into museums such as Fatahillah, a museum that was built when the Dutch ruled my country. Fatahillah Museum now become the main destination for students to learn about the history, culture and architectural aspects of when Indonesia was still ruled by the Dutch, a hundred years ago. This kind of experience is meaningful and will not happen if old buildings are destroyed.
In conclusion, I do believe that old buildings have a special value. Repairing and looking after them is worth the price, hence we should not knock down the old building nor replace them with a modern one.
Your lexical resource score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that too much
money has been spent looking
after and repairing old buildings, so
we should knock down old
buildings and build modern ones
instead. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is often argued that we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones because too much money has been spent looking after and repairing them. Although it is true that one can spend a lot of money to restore and look after the old buildings, I strongly disagree that we should just destroy them and build a new one instead.
To begin with, we cannot deny that old buildings have a lot of memories that are really precious for their owners. For instance, my house is more than 50 years old and was built when my grandmother was still a kid. It contains the memories from three generations including me, my parents and my grandparents. Every room always reminds me of a certain memory, making me remember my root and who I am. This kind of feeling is so treasured and no amount of money is too expensive for this.
Furthermore, old buildings have a cultural value that can be used to showcase their history. For example, there are several old buildings in my country that are being restored and transformed into museums such as Fatahillah, a museum that was built when the Dutch ruled my country. Fatahillah Museum now become the main destination for students to learn about the history, culture and architectural aspects of when Indonesia was still ruled by the Dutch, a hundred years ago. This kind of experience is meaningful and will not happen if old buildings are destroyed.
In conclusion, I do believe that old buildings have a special value. Repairing and looking after them is worth the price, hence we should not knock down the old building nor replace them with a modern one.
Your grammatical range score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that too much
money has been spent looking
after and repairing old buildings, so
we should knock down old
buildings and build modern ones
instead. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is often argued that we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones because too much money has been spent looking after and repairing them. Although it is true that one can spend a lot of money to restore and look after the old buildings, I strongly disagree that we should just destroy them and build a new one instead.
To begin with, we cannot deny that old buildings have a lot of memories that are really precious for their owners. For instance, my house is more than 50 years old and was built when my grandmother was still a kid. It contains the memories from three generations including me, my parents and my grandparents. Every room always reminds me of a certain memory, making me remember my root and who I am. This kind of feeling is so treasured and no amount of money is too expensive for this.
Furthermore, old buildings have a cultural value that can be used to showcase their history. For example, there are several old buildings in my country that are being restored and transformed into museums such as Fatahillah, a museum that was built when the Dutch ruled my country. Fatahillah Museum now become the main destination for students to learn about the history, culture and architectural aspects of when Indonesia was still ruled by the Dutch, a hundred years ago. This kind of experience is meaningful and will not happen if old buildings are destroyed.
In conclusion, I do believe that old buildings have a special value. Repairing and looking after them is worth the price, hence we should not knock down the old building nor replace them with a modern one.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
many graduates want to start their first job in a big corporation. many others prefer to work for a small company first. compare and contrast their choices and express your opinion
Anwser:
There are conflicting views on whether individuals after graduating should land a job in small-size groups or large-scale ones. Although almost all people are fond of working for popular and big corporates, it is sensible that at the initial stages after graduation, graduates seek jobs at small-size companies.
To begin with, some merits of small association for being employed are presented. As a small community, colleagues and superiors at small workplaces can dedicate more time to a new commer owing to the flat structure of organizational charts or the few levels of hierarchies. Thus, this close relationship often enables students to learn more after graduation and be guided directly by top managers. Hence, the more skills and qualifications that those graduates gain, the more likely their advancement of career path will be. Moreover, rarely can we find a small business where employees do not face a wide range of experiences lacking the recruitment possibility for each problem which has occurred. Therefore, after working for such companies, individuals will get valuable and multi-fascinated knowledge which equips them for further success.
However, popular companies provide considerable incentives and facilities for their staff so that it is more likely for them to advance professionally. Besides, funding for innovative suggestions is nothing new in large-scale sectors. In terms of mental and emotional aspects, being proud of accomplishing successful tasks in such an enterprise, gives a feeling of self-confidence to staff.
To conclude, nobody can claim that recruitment in a big size enterprise provides the path for rising through the rank in terms of financial support and being stable, but a graduated person who has worked for a small business and learned well enough and then applied for a bigger company is more suitable career road map so that this multi-discipline and knowledgeable person can advance more easily when applying for a bigger company following working a while for a smaller one.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
many graduates want to start their first job in a big corporation. many others prefer to work for a small company first. compare and contrast their choices and express your opinion
Anwser:
There are conflicting views on whether individuals after graduating should land a job in small-size groups or large-scale ones. Although almost all people are fond of working for popular and big corporates, it is sensible that at the initial stages after graduation, graduates seek jobs at small-size companies.
To begin with, some merits of small association for being employed are presented. As a small community, colleagues and superiors at small workplaces can dedicate more time to a new commer owing to the flat structure of organizational charts or the few levels of hierarchies. Thus, this close relationship often enables students to learn more after graduation and be guided directly by top managers. Hence, the more skills and qualifications that those graduates gain, the more likely their advancement of career path will be. Moreover, rarely can we find a small business where employees do not face a wide range of experiences lacking the recruitment possibility for each problem which has occurred. Therefore, after working for such companies, individuals will get valuable and multi-fascinated knowledge which equips them for further success.
However, popular companies provide considerable incentives and facilities for their staff so that it is more likely for them to advance professionally. Besides, funding for innovative suggestions is nothing new in large-scale sectors. In terms of mental and emotional aspects, being proud of accomplishing successful tasks in such an enterprise, gives a feeling of self-confidence to staff.
To conclude, nobody can claim that recruitment in a big size enterprise provides the path for rising through the rank in terms of financial support and being stable, but a graduated person who has worked for a small business and learned well enough and then applied for a bigger company is more suitable career road map so that this multi-discipline and knowledgeable person can advance more easily when applying for a bigger company following working a while for a smaller one.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
many graduates want to start their first job in a big corporation. many others prefer to work for a small company first. compare and contrast their choices and express your opinion
Anwser:
There are conflicting views on whether individuals after graduating should land a job in small-size groups or large-scale ones. Although almost all people are fond of working for popular and big corporates, it is sensible that at the initial stages after graduation, graduates seek jobs at small-size companies.
To begin with, some merits of small association for being employed are presented. As a small community, colleagues and superiors at small workplaces can dedicate more time to a new commer owing to the flat structure of organizational charts or the few levels of hierarchies. Thus, this close relationship often enables students to learn more after graduation and be guided directly by top managers. Hence, the more skills and qualifications that those graduates gain, the more likely their advancement of career path will be. Moreover, rarely can we find a small business where employees do not face a wide range of experiences lacking the recruitment possibility for each problem which has occurred. Therefore, after working for such companies, individuals will get valuable and multi-fascinated knowledge which equips them for further success.
However, popular companies provide considerable incentives and facilities for their staff so that it is more likely for them to advance professionally. Besides, funding for innovative suggestions is nothing new in large-scale sectors. In terms of mental and emotional aspects, being proud of accomplishing successful tasks in such an enterprise, gives a feeling of self-confidence to staff.
To conclude, nobody can claim that recruitment in a big size enterprise provides the path for rising through the rank in terms of financial support and being stable, but a graduated person who has worked for a small business and learned well enough and then applied for a bigger company is more suitable career road map so that this multi-discipline and knowledgeable person can advance more easily when applying for a bigger company following working a while for a smaller one.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
many graduates want to start their first job in a big corporation. many others prefer to work for a small company first. compare and contrast their choices and express your opinion
Anwser:
There are conflicting views on whether individuals after graduating should land a job in small-size groups or large-scale ones. Although almost all people are fond of working for popular and big corporates, it is sensible that at the initial stages after graduation, graduates seek jobs at small-size companies.
To begin with, some merits of small association for being employed are presented. As a small community, colleagues and superiors at small workplaces can dedicate more time to a new commer owing to the flat structure of organizational charts or the few levels of hierarchies. Thus, this close relationship often enables students to learn more after graduation and be guided directly by top managers. Hence, the more skills and qualifications that those graduates gain, the more likely their advancement of career path will be. Moreover, rarely can we find a small business where employees do not face a wide range of experiences lacking the recruitment possibility for each problem which has occurred. Therefore, after working for such companies, individuals will get valuable and multi-fascinated knowledge which equips them for further success.
However, popular companies provide considerable incentives and facilities for their staff so that it is more likely for them to advance professionally. Besides, funding for innovative suggestions is nothing new in large-scale sectors. In terms of mental and emotional aspects, being proud of accomplishing successful tasks in such an enterprise, gives a feeling of self-confidence to staff.
To conclude, nobody can claim that recruitment in a big size enterprise provides the path for rising through the rank in terms of financial support and being stable, but a graduated person who has worked for a small business and learned well enough and then applied for a bigger company is more suitable career road map so that this multi-discipline and knowledgeable person can advance more easily when applying for a bigger company following working a while for a smaller one.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
49.Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Some educators hold a belief that all children should learn to play a certain musical instrument. Despite the disadvantages associated with students' hectic schedules, I believe that this approach is a good way to discover young musical talents and provide healthy pastimes for youngsters.
On the one hand, it is undoubtedly that students are likely to suffer more pressure when musical subjects are added to the educational program. This is because this approach adds more stress to the already burdensome volume of schoolwork. In fact, students nowadays are often subjected to a busy schedule with a mounting of homework and in-class assignments. Therefore, adding another subject to their curriculum can make it more difficult for children to study effectively. The situation even gets worse if a child feels frustrated and no longer excited about learning music. They must be better off using that effort and time to focus on something which they are really interested in.
On the other hand, it is understandable that learning music is believed to be beneficial for youngsters. Firstly, geniuses' musical talent can be discovered at a young age and later developed into a professional career. Dang Thai Son, who learnt the piano from his mother at the age of 6 and became the most Vietnamese successful pianist is an excellent example. Secondly, in the eyes of adults, learning to play music is a positive hobby and potentially replaces computer games. These days, teenagers spend most of their time watching mind-numbing television programs and playing digital games. Studies show that spending too much time on video games can produce behavioural and mental changes, leading to a lack of other activities and poor academic performance. Meanwhile, playing music can improve students' verbal memory, spatial reasoning and literacy skills. The main reason is that playing music involves both sides of the brain which strengthens memorial skills.
In conclusion, while learning to play a musical instrument can bring certain benefits to young people in terms of the discovery of young musical talents and organizing healthy pastimes, it is important to acknowledge its drawbacks such as increased pressure. It is advisable that musical education should be provided to students who are really interested in and willing to pursue it rather than imposing it on all children.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
49.Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Some educators hold a belief that all children should learn to play a certain musical instrument. Despite the disadvantages associated with students' hectic schedules, I believe that this approach is a good way to discover young musical talents and provide healthy pastimes for youngsters.
On the one hand, it is undoubtedly that students are likely to suffer more pressure when musical subjects are added to the educational program. This is because this approach adds more stress to the already burdensome volume of schoolwork. In fact, students nowadays are often subjected to a busy schedule with a mounting of homework and in-class assignments. Therefore, adding another subject to their curriculum can make it more difficult for children to study effectively. The situation even gets worse if a child feels frustrated and no longer excited about learning music. They must be better off using that effort and time to focus on something which they are really interested in.
On the other hand, it is understandable that learning music is believed to be beneficial for youngsters. Firstly, geniuses' musical talent can be discovered at a young age and later developed into a professional career. Dang Thai Son, who learnt the piano from his mother at the age of 6 and became the most Vietnamese successful pianist is an excellent example. Secondly, in the eyes of adults, learning to play music is a positive hobby and potentially replaces computer games. These days, teenagers spend most of their time watching mind-numbing television programs and playing digital games. Studies show that spending too much time on video games can produce behavioural and mental changes, leading to a lack of other activities and poor academic performance. Meanwhile, playing music can improve students' verbal memory, spatial reasoning and literacy skills. The main reason is that playing music involves both sides of the brain which strengthens memorial skills.
In conclusion, while learning to play a musical instrument can bring certain benefits to young people in terms of the discovery of young musical talents and organizing healthy pastimes, it is important to acknowledge its drawbacks such as increased pressure. It is advisable that musical education should be provided to students who are really interested in and willing to pursue it rather than imposing it on all children.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
49.Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Some educators hold a belief that all children should learn to play a certain musical instrument. Despite the disadvantages associated with students' hectic schedules, I believe that this approach is a good way to discover young musical talents and provide healthy pastimes for youngsters.
On the one hand, it is undoubtedly that students are likely to suffer more pressure when musical subjects are added to the educational program. This is because this approach adds more stress to the already burdensome volume of schoolwork. In fact, students nowadays are often subjected to a busy schedule with a mounting of homework and in-class assignments. Therefore, adding another subject to their curriculum can make it more difficult for children to study effectively. The situation even gets worse if a child feels frustrated and no longer excited about learning music. They must be better off using that effort and time to focus on something which they are really interested in.
On the other hand, it is understandable that learning music is believed to be beneficial for youngsters. Firstly, geniuses' musical talent can be discovered at a young age and later developed into a professional career. Dang Thai Son, who learnt the piano from his mother at the age of 6 and became the most Vietnamese successful pianist is an excellent example. Secondly, in the eyes of adults, learning to play music is a positive hobby and potentially replaces computer games. These days, teenagers spend most of their time watching mind-numbing television programs and playing digital games. Studies show that spending too much time on video games can produce behavioural and mental changes, leading to a lack of other activities and poor academic performance. Meanwhile, playing music can improve students' verbal memory, spatial reasoning and literacy skills. The main reason is that playing music involves both sides of the brain which strengthens memorial skills.
In conclusion, while learning to play a musical instrument can bring certain benefits to young people in terms of the discovery of young musical talents and organizing healthy pastimes, it is important to acknowledge its drawbacks such as increased pressure. It is advisable that musical education should be provided to students who are really interested in and willing to pursue it rather than imposing it on all children.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
49.Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Some educators hold a belief that all children should learn to play a certain musical instrument. Despite the disadvantages associated with students' hectic schedules, I believe that this approach is a good way to discover young musical talents and provide healthy pastimes for youngsters.
On the one hand, it is undoubtedly that students are likely to suffer more pressure when musical subjects are added to the educational program. This is because this approach adds more stress to the already burdensome volume of schoolwork. In fact, students nowadays are often subjected to a busy schedule with a mounting of homework and in-class assignments. Therefore, adding another subject to their curriculum can make it more difficult for children to study effectively. The situation even gets worse if a child feels frustrated and no longer excited about learning music. They must be better off using that effort and time to focus on something which they are really interested in.
On the other hand, it is understandable that learning music is believed to be beneficial for youngsters. Firstly, geniuses' musical talent can be discovered at a young age and later developed into a professional career. Dang Thai Son, who learnt the piano from his mother at the age of 6 and became the most Vietnamese successful pianist is an excellent example. Secondly, in the eyes of adults, learning to play music is a positive hobby and potentially replaces computer games. These days, teenagers spend most of their time watching mind-numbing television programs and playing digital games. Studies show that spending too much time on video games can produce behavioural and mental changes, leading to a lack of other activities and poor academic performance. Meanwhile, playing music can improve students' verbal memory, spatial reasoning and literacy skills. The main reason is that playing music involves both sides of the brain which strengthens memorial skills.
In conclusion, while learning to play a musical instrument can bring certain benefits to young people in terms of the discovery of young musical talents and organizing healthy pastimes, it is important to acknowledge its drawbacks such as increased pressure. It is advisable that musical education should be provided to students who are really interested in and willing to pursue it rather than imposing it on all children.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Anwser:
It is believed that modern innovations have changed the lives of people significantly due to the fact that it is becoming more convenient for consumers to purchase certain products. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement because I ponder that various machines have affected the way in which individuals do shopping.
Firstly, all humans, especially adults, have extensive working schedules, which means that the time to buy commodities, which are required, is extremely limited. Nevertheless, owing to modern technologies, it is possible to do everything on time because people do not have to dedicate minutes and hours in order to buy their desired products. For instance, in the past our ancestors could not make a purchase remotely, consequently, shopping was an essential procedure for them, however, now humans can easily order some goods, which will be delivered to their homes. Hence, with up-to-date technologies individuals are eligible to arrange their day properly for the reason that shopping is not time-consuming anymore.
Secondly, while searching for a particular product on the Internet, consumers are able to analyze the market precisely and draw appropriate conclusions because all the websites can be compared. Simultaneously, purchases have become cheaper since consumers have an opportunity to determine whether there is a beneficial correlation between quality and price. For example, if a person finds an elegant dress, but, a factor concerning finances does not satisfy, one can easily switch to another site and find something suitable. Thus, advanced machines have created a so-called huge network, where everyone is able to highlight the best offers for them.
In conclusion, despite the fact that some individuals claim that technologies are not influencing the way of buying and selling goods, I would reckon that it has an enormous impact indeed. Consequently, online shopping has revolutionized the consumer experience, thereby, creating an outstanding replacement for ordinary strolls by the shops.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Anwser:
It is believed that modern innovations have changed the lives of people significantly due to the fact that it is becoming more convenient for consumers to purchase certain products. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement because I ponder that various machines have affected the way in which individuals do shopping.
Firstly, all humans, especially adults, have extensive working schedules, which means that the time to buy commodities, which are required, is extremely limited. Nevertheless, owing to modern technologies, it is possible to do everything on time because people do not have to dedicate minutes and hours in order to buy their desired products. For instance, in the past our ancestors could not make a purchase remotely, consequently, shopping was an essential procedure for them, however, now humans can easily order some goods, which will be delivered to their homes. Hence, with up-to-date technologies individuals are eligible to arrange their day properly for the reason that shopping is not time-consuming anymore.
Secondly, while searching for a particular product on the Internet, consumers are able to analyze the market precisely and draw appropriate conclusions because all the websites can be compared. Simultaneously, purchases have become cheaper since consumers have an opportunity to determine whether there is a beneficial correlation between quality and price. For example, if a person finds an elegant dress, but, a factor concerning finances does not satisfy, one can easily switch to another site and find something suitable. Thus, advanced machines have created a so-called huge network, where everyone is able to highlight the best offers for them.
In conclusion, despite the fact that some individuals claim that technologies are not influencing the way of buying and selling goods, I would reckon that it has an enormous impact indeed. Consequently, online shopping has revolutionized the consumer experience, thereby, creating an outstanding replacement for ordinary strolls by the shops.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Anwser:
It is believed that modern innovations have changed the lives of people significantly due to the fact that it is becoming more convenient for consumers to purchase certain products. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement because I ponder that various machines have affected the way in which individuals do shopping.
Firstly, all humans, especially adults, have extensive working schedules, which means that the time to buy commodities, which are required, is extremely limited. Nevertheless, owing to modern technologies, it is possible to do everything on time because people do not have to dedicate minutes and hours in order to buy their desired products. For instance, in the past our ancestors could not make a purchase remotely, consequently, shopping was an essential procedure for them, however, now humans can easily order some goods, which will be delivered to their homes. Hence, with up-to-date technologies individuals are eligible to arrange their day properly for the reason that shopping is not time-consuming anymore.
Secondly, while searching for a particular product on the Internet, consumers are able to analyze the market precisely and draw appropriate conclusions because all the websites can be compared. Simultaneously, purchases have become cheaper since consumers have an opportunity to determine whether there is a beneficial correlation between quality and price. For example, if a person finds an elegant dress, but, a factor concerning finances does not satisfy, one can easily switch to another site and find something suitable. Thus, advanced machines have created a so-called huge network, where everyone is able to highlight the best offers for them.
In conclusion, despite the fact that some individuals claim that technologies are not influencing the way of buying and selling goods, I would reckon that it has an enormous impact indeed. Consequently, online shopping has revolutionized the consumer experience, thereby, creating an outstanding replacement for ordinary strolls by the shops.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Anwser:
It is believed that modern innovations have changed the lives of people significantly due to the fact that it is becoming more convenient for consumers to purchase certain products. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement because I ponder that various machines have affected the way in which individuals do shopping.
Firstly, all humans, especially adults, have extensive working schedules, which means that the time to buy commodities, which are required, is extremely limited. Nevertheless, owing to modern technologies, it is possible to do everything on time because people do not have to dedicate minutes and hours in order to buy their desired products. For instance, in the past our ancestors could not make a purchase remotely, consequently, shopping was an essential procedure for them, however, now humans can easily order some goods, which will be delivered to their homes. Hence, with up-to-date technologies individuals are eligible to arrange their day properly for the reason that shopping is not time-consuming anymore.
Secondly, while searching for a particular product on the Internet, consumers are able to analyze the market precisely and draw appropriate conclusions because all the websites can be compared. Simultaneously, purchases have become cheaper since consumers have an opportunity to determine whether there is a beneficial correlation between quality and price. For example, if a person finds an elegant dress, but, a factor concerning finances does not satisfy, one can easily switch to another site and find something suitable. Thus, advanced machines have created a so-called huge network, where everyone is able to highlight the best offers for them.
In conclusion, despite the fact that some individuals claim that technologies are not influencing the way of buying and selling goods, I would reckon that it has an enormous impact indeed. Consequently, online shopping has revolutionized the consumer experience, thereby, creating an outstanding replacement for ordinary strolls by the shops.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people are of the view that only university education can ensure success, whereas many others oppose this view. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Recently, there was an argument about whether the role of higher education is monumental for someone's success. While proponents believe that the debate is true, opponents opine the other way around. From my perspective, I strongly lean towards the advantages of a higher educational background since its contribution has been fundamental in our lives.
To begin with, some individuals view that only a university education can assure prosperity due to the requirement from the hiring company. Most of the prominent organizations only recruit graduate candidates with outstanding academic records from reputable universities. For example, the "Big Four" accounting firms in my country only hire cum laude finance undergraduates from the University of Indonesia. Consequently, this kind of custom creates a need for someone to carve a strong academic acumen.
On the other hand, others believe that there must be another avenue than a mere educational degree as the main reason for their opinion is skills in work can be acquired through real-life experiences. For individuals who aspire to become entrepreneurs, taking a 4-year commitment in college instead of starting their business early will be an opportunity cost. For example, my peer who had secured a steady income from his small business decided to become a full-time businessman and, hence, drop out of college. Besides, major corporates will give some sort of training program to their new employees prior to working in the firm anyway.
In conclusion, both views of the debate have their merits. On balance, nevertheless, I think that the tremendous benefits of acquiring an undergraduate degree outweigh some possible demerits. At the end of the day, having an undergraduate degree is a sharable achievement for our future offspring.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people are of the view that only university education can ensure success, whereas many others oppose this view. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Recently, there was an argument about whether the role of higher education is monumental for someone's success. While proponents believe that the debate is true, opponents opine the other way around. From my perspective, I strongly lean towards the advantages of a higher educational background since its contribution has been fundamental in our lives.
To begin with, some individuals view that only a university education can assure prosperity due to the requirement from the hiring company. Most of the prominent organizations only recruit graduate candidates with outstanding academic records from reputable universities. For example, the "Big Four" accounting firms in my country only hire cum laude finance undergraduates from the University of Indonesia. Consequently, this kind of custom creates a need for someone to carve a strong academic acumen.
On the other hand, others believe that there must be another avenue than a mere educational degree as the main reason for their opinion is skills in work can be acquired through real-life experiences. For individuals who aspire to become entrepreneurs, taking a 4-year commitment in college instead of starting their business early will be an opportunity cost. For example, my peer who had secured a steady income from his small business decided to become a full-time businessman and, hence, drop out of college. Besides, major corporates will give some sort of training program to their new employees prior to working in the firm anyway.
In conclusion, both views of the debate have their merits. On balance, nevertheless, I think that the tremendous benefits of acquiring an undergraduate degree outweigh some possible demerits. At the end of the day, having an undergraduate degree is a sharable achievement for our future offspring.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people are of the view that only university education can ensure success, whereas many others oppose this view. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Recently, there was an argument about whether the role of higher education is monumental for someone's success. While proponents believe that the debate is true, opponents opine the other way around. From my perspective, I strongly lean towards the advantages of a higher educational background since its contribution has been fundamental in our lives.
To begin with, some individuals view that only a university education can assure prosperity due to the requirement from the hiring company. Most of the prominent organizations only recruit graduate candidates with outstanding academic records from reputable universities. For example, the "Big Four" accounting firms in my country only hire cum laude finance undergraduates from the University of Indonesia. Consequently, this kind of custom creates a need for someone to carve a strong academic acumen.
On the other hand, others believe that there must be another avenue than a mere educational degree as the main reason for their opinion is skills in work can be acquired through real-life experiences. For individuals who aspire to become entrepreneurs, taking a 4-year commitment in college instead of starting their business early will be an opportunity cost. For example, my peer who had secured a steady income from his small business decided to become a full-time businessman and, hence, drop out of college. Besides, major corporates will give some sort of training program to their new employees prior to working in the firm anyway.
In conclusion, both views of the debate have their merits. On balance, nevertheless, I think that the tremendous benefits of acquiring an undergraduate degree outweigh some possible demerits. At the end of the day, having an undergraduate degree is a sharable achievement for our future offspring.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people are of the view that only university education can ensure success, whereas many others oppose this view. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Recently, there was an argument about whether the role of higher education is monumental for someone's success. While proponents believe that the debate is true, opponents opine the other way around. From my perspective, I strongly lean towards the advantages of a higher educational background since its contribution has been fundamental in our lives.
To begin with, some individuals view that only a university education can assure prosperity due to the requirement from the hiring company. Most of the prominent organizations only recruit graduate candidates with outstanding academic records from reputable universities. For example, the "Big Four" accounting firms in my country only hire cum laude finance undergraduates from the University of Indonesia. Consequently, this kind of custom creates a need for someone to carve a strong academic acumen.
On the other hand, others believe that there must be another avenue than a mere educational degree as the main reason for their opinion is skills in work can be acquired through real-life experiences. For individuals who aspire to become entrepreneurs, taking a 4-year commitment in college instead of starting their business early will be an opportunity cost. For example, my peer who had secured a steady income from his small business decided to become a full-time businessman and, hence, drop out of college. Besides, major corporates will give some sort of training program to their new employees prior to working in the firm anyway.
In conclusion, both views of the debate have their merits. On balance, nevertheless, I think that the tremendous benefits of acquiring an undergraduate degree outweigh some possible demerits. At the end of the day, having an undergraduate degree is a sharable achievement for our future offspring.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people try to create a balance between their professional life and their personal life.
However, very few are able to achieve such a balance.
What problems stop people from achieving a work-life balance? How can these problems be overcome?
Anwser:
The imbalance of daily life has been exacerbated in the wider range of the population, while a few humans could achieve an ideal balanced life. This issue stems from the more competitive extent of the overspeed developing economy and this puzzle could be solved by the following remedy.
To begin with, the cutthroat market and an unstoppable change in technology have put people into a specialized race to avoid layoffs. Initially, in the beginning stage of the fifth revolutionization, people could be replaced by automatic machines based on the Internet of Things, which led to a reduced workforce and an increased rival rate. In particular, many factories split their manufacturing procedures into a number of stages participating by almost mechanical devices and robotic arms, these producing chains not only enhance the quality of commodities with fewer errors and improve the finished product volume but also decrease the essential workforce. As a result, this model has significantly expanded because the capitalists could attain the surplus monetary amount from reduced labour for the same good volume. For example, many white collars have experienced a massive layoff as many repetitive tasks could use some specific artificial intelligence.
In order to achieve a balanced work-life condition, the public should spend time for themselves rather than working overtime in the workplace, which requires the government to find a way to reduce the unemployment rate. In simple terms, the crowds could be comfortable as they do not worry about some recent labour cutoff. Hence, this vexing conundrum could be tackled by cooperating among politics, academic institutions and multinational corporations. Firstly, the government should encourage all universities to catch up with the shift of technology, which helps them provide suitable punctual majors to meet future personnel demands and avoid unemployment conditions for some replaced occupations. Secondly, the collaboration between theoretical facilitations and companies could solve the shortage high quality workforce in some aspects and avoid layoffs as technology has the ability to replace humans. For instance, updating and editing the better curriculum and syllabus along with cooperating with some potential firms to prepare the job opportunities for their learners.
To conclude, some employees' cutoff has generated job pressures for the crowds and stifled them from an ideal life. However, this issue could be alleviated by the collaboration among the authority, academy institutions and corporations.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people try to create a balance between their professional life and their personal life.
However, very few are able to achieve such a balance.
What problems stop people from achieving a work-life balance? How can these problems be overcome?
Anwser:
The imbalance of daily life has been exacerbated in the wider range of the population, while a few humans could achieve an ideal balanced life. This issue stems from the more competitive extent of the overspeed developing economy and this puzzle could be solved by the following remedy.
To begin with, the cutthroat market and an unstoppable change in technology have put people into a specialized race to avoid layoffs. Initially, in the beginning stage of the fifth revolutionization, people could be replaced by automatic machines based on the Internet of Things, which led to a reduced workforce and an increased rival rate. In particular, many factories split their manufacturing procedures into a number of stages participating by almost mechanical devices and robotic arms, these producing chains not only enhance the quality of commodities with fewer errors and improve the finished product volume but also decrease the essential workforce. As a result, this model has significantly expanded because the capitalists could attain the surplus monetary amount from reduced labour for the same good volume. For example, many white collars have experienced a massive layoff as many repetitive tasks could use some specific artificial intelligence.
In order to achieve a balanced work-life condition, the public should spend time for themselves rather than working overtime in the workplace, which requires the government to find a way to reduce the unemployment rate. In simple terms, the crowds could be comfortable as they do not worry about some recent labour cutoff. Hence, this vexing conundrum could be tackled by cooperating among politics, academic institutions and multinational corporations. Firstly, the government should encourage all universities to catch up with the shift of technology, which helps them provide suitable punctual majors to meet future personnel demands and avoid unemployment conditions for some replaced occupations. Secondly, the collaboration between theoretical facilitations and companies could solve the shortage high quality workforce in some aspects and avoid layoffs as technology has the ability to replace humans. For instance, updating and editing the better curriculum and syllabus along with cooperating with some potential firms to prepare the job opportunities for their learners.
To conclude, some employees' cutoff has generated job pressures for the crowds and stifled them from an ideal life. However, this issue could be alleviated by the collaboration among the authority, academy institutions and corporations.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people try to create a balance between their professional life and their personal life.
However, very few are able to achieve such a balance.
What problems stop people from achieving a work-life balance? How can these problems be overcome?
Anwser:
The imbalance of daily life has been exacerbated in the wider range of the population, while a few humans could achieve an ideal balanced life. This issue stems from the more competitive extent of the overspeed developing economy and this puzzle could be solved by the following remedy.
To begin with, the cutthroat market and an unstoppable change in technology have put people into a specialized race to avoid layoffs. Initially, in the beginning stage of the fifth revolutionization, people could be replaced by automatic machines based on the Internet of Things, which led to a reduced workforce and an increased rival rate. In particular, many factories split their manufacturing procedures into a number of stages participating by almost mechanical devices and robotic arms, these producing chains not only enhance the quality of commodities with fewer errors and improve the finished product volume but also decrease the essential workforce. As a result, this model has significantly expanded because the capitalists could attain the surplus monetary amount from reduced labour for the same good volume. For example, many white collars have experienced a massive layoff as many repetitive tasks could use some specific artificial intelligence.
In order to achieve a balanced work-life condition, the public should spend time for themselves rather than working overtime in the workplace, which requires the government to find a way to reduce the unemployment rate. In simple terms, the crowds could be comfortable as they do not worry about some recent labour cutoff. Hence, this vexing conundrum could be tackled by cooperating among politics, academic institutions and multinational corporations. Firstly, the government should encourage all universities to catch up with the shift of technology, which helps them provide suitable punctual majors to meet future personnel demands and avoid unemployment conditions for some replaced occupations. Secondly, the collaboration between theoretical facilitations and companies could solve the shortage high quality workforce in some aspects and avoid layoffs as technology has the ability to replace humans. For instance, updating and editing the better curriculum and syllabus along with cooperating with some potential firms to prepare the job opportunities for their learners.
To conclude, some employees' cutoff has generated job pressures for the crowds and stifled them from an ideal life. However, this issue could be alleviated by the collaboration among the authority, academy institutions and corporations.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people try to create a balance between their professional life and their personal life.
However, very few are able to achieve such a balance.
What problems stop people from achieving a work-life balance? How can these problems be overcome?
Anwser:
The imbalance of daily life has been exacerbated in the wider range of the population, while a few humans could achieve an ideal balanced life. This issue stems from the more competitive extent of the overspeed developing economy and this puzzle could be solved by the following remedy.
To begin with, the cutthroat market and an unstoppable change in technology have put people into a specialized race to avoid layoffs. Initially, in the beginning stage of the fifth revolutionization, people could be replaced by automatic machines based on the Internet of Things, which led to a reduced workforce and an increased rival rate. In particular, many factories split their manufacturing procedures into a number of stages participating by almost mechanical devices and robotic arms, these producing chains not only enhance the quality of commodities with fewer errors and improve the finished product volume but also decrease the essential workforce. As a result, this model has significantly expanded because the capitalists could attain the surplus monetary amount from reduced labour for the same good volume. For example, many white collars have experienced a massive layoff as many repetitive tasks could use some specific artificial intelligence.
In order to achieve a balanced work-life condition, the public should spend time for themselves rather than working overtime in the workplace, which requires the government to find a way to reduce the unemployment rate. In simple terms, the crowds could be comfortable as they do not worry about some recent labour cutoff. Hence, this vexing conundrum could be tackled by cooperating among politics, academic institutions and multinational corporations. Firstly, the government should encourage all universities to catch up with the shift of technology, which helps them provide suitable punctual majors to meet future personnel demands and avoid unemployment conditions for some replaced occupations. Secondly, the collaboration between theoretical facilitations and companies could solve the shortage high quality workforce in some aspects and avoid layoffs as technology has the ability to replace humans. For instance, updating and editing the better curriculum and syllabus along with cooperating with some potential firms to prepare the job opportunities for their learners.
To conclude, some employees' cutoff has generated job pressures for the crowds and stifled them from an ideal life. However, this issue could be alleviated by the collaboration among the authority, academy institutions and corporations.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
37.Some people argue that parents of children who break the law should be punished in some way, because they are responsible for their children’s actions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Recent years have witnessed a significant increase in the youth crime rate, causing widespread concern among the public. Under such circumstances, some contend that parents should be responsible or even punished for their children's actions. Personally, I hold a different perspective on this opinion and I believe that teenage lawbreakers should take all accountability for their offences.
On the one hand, the idea that parents should be responsible for youngsters' malpractices is grounded in certain valid points. The proponents of this perspective argue that parents can serve as role models in shaping their kids' characteristics and behaviour. In fact, young children are likely to unconsciously imitate their parent's words and actions through a set of internal and external interactions. Therefore, whether a child has a good personality and proper attitude mostly depends on the parent's background. For example, a statistical report from the Canadian National Crime Prevention Crime revealed that individuals from families with a lack of order and discipline were 1.5 times more at risk of committing criminal activities than those from structured households.
On the other hand, I do believe that lawbreakers themselves, not their parents, should be punished to ensure a justice system that is based on fairness and criminal deterrence. Firstly, it is unfair for the community if offenders can escape legal punishment and continue their normal lives despite harming society. In fact, punishment is to let them understand the price of their actions and prevent potential crimes in the future. Furthermore, if parents take all responsibility for their children's misconduct, it can create misleading impacts on children. They might understand that whatever unlawful actions they commit, they will not be bothered. Secondly, threats of being punished may prevent the risk of other teenagers committing anti-social behaviour, thus making society a safer and more peaceful place.
In conclusion, although parents may play a part in their children's wrongdoings, they should not take a part or major responsibility for this. I firmly believe that all lawbreakers, regardless of how old they are, should be punished to ensure the fairness of the legal system and prevent the potential increase in the youth crime rate.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
37.Some people argue that parents of children who break the law should be punished in some way, because they are responsible for their children’s actions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Recent years have witnessed a significant increase in the youth crime rate, causing widespread concern among the public. Under such circumstances, some contend that parents should be responsible or even punished for their children's actions. Personally, I hold a different perspective on this opinion and I believe that teenage lawbreakers should take all accountability for their offences.
On the one hand, the idea that parents should be responsible for youngsters' malpractices is grounded in certain valid points. The proponents of this perspective argue that parents can serve as role models in shaping their kids' characteristics and behaviour. In fact, young children are likely to unconsciously imitate their parent's words and actions through a set of internal and external interactions. Therefore, whether a child has a good personality and proper attitude mostly depends on the parent's background. For example, a statistical report from the Canadian National Crime Prevention Crime revealed that individuals from families with a lack of order and discipline were 1.5 times more at risk of committing criminal activities than those from structured households.
On the other hand, I do believe that lawbreakers themselves, not their parents, should be punished to ensure a justice system that is based on fairness and criminal deterrence. Firstly, it is unfair for the community if offenders can escape legal punishment and continue their normal lives despite harming society. In fact, punishment is to let them understand the price of their actions and prevent potential crimes in the future. Furthermore, if parents take all responsibility for their children's misconduct, it can create misleading impacts on children. They might understand that whatever unlawful actions they commit, they will not be bothered. Secondly, threats of being punished may prevent the risk of other teenagers committing anti-social behaviour, thus making society a safer and more peaceful place.
In conclusion, although parents may play a part in their children's wrongdoings, they should not take a part or major responsibility for this. I firmly believe that all lawbreakers, regardless of how old they are, should be punished to ensure the fairness of the legal system and prevent the potential increase in the youth crime rate.
Your lexical resource score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
37.Some people argue that parents of children who break the law should be punished in some way, because they are responsible for their children’s actions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Recent years have witnessed a significant increase in the youth crime rate, causing widespread concern among the public. Under such circumstances, some contend that parents should be responsible or even punished for their children's actions. Personally, I hold a different perspective on this opinion and I believe that teenage lawbreakers should take all accountability for their offences.
On the one hand, the idea that parents should be responsible for youngsters' malpractices is grounded in certain valid points. The proponents of this perspective argue that parents can serve as role models in shaping their kids' characteristics and behaviour. In fact, young children are likely to unconsciously imitate their parent's words and actions through a set of internal and external interactions. Therefore, whether a child has a good personality and proper attitude mostly depends on the parent's background. For example, a statistical report from the Canadian National Crime Prevention Crime revealed that individuals from families with a lack of order and discipline were 1.5 times more at risk of committing criminal activities than those from structured households.
On the other hand, I do believe that lawbreakers themselves, not their parents, should be punished to ensure a justice system that is based on fairness and criminal deterrence. Firstly, it is unfair for the community if offenders can escape legal punishment and continue their normal lives despite harming society. In fact, punishment is to let them understand the price of their actions and prevent potential crimes in the future. Furthermore, if parents take all responsibility for their children's misconduct, it can create misleading impacts on children. They might understand that whatever unlawful actions they commit, they will not be bothered. Secondly, threats of being punished may prevent the risk of other teenagers committing anti-social behaviour, thus making society a safer and more peaceful place.
In conclusion, although parents may play a part in their children's wrongdoings, they should not take a part or major responsibility for this. I firmly believe that all lawbreakers, regardless of how old they are, should be punished to ensure the fairness of the legal system and prevent the potential increase in the youth crime rate.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
37.Some people argue that parents of children who break the law should be punished in some way, because they are responsible for their children’s actions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Recent years have witnessed a significant increase in the youth crime rate, causing widespread concern among the public. Under such circumstances, some contend that parents should be responsible or even punished for their children's actions. Personally, I hold a different perspective on this opinion and I believe that teenage lawbreakers should take all accountability for their offences.
On the one hand, the idea that parents should be responsible for youngsters' malpractices is grounded in certain valid points. The proponents of this perspective argue that parents can serve as role models in shaping their kids' characteristics and behaviour. In fact, young children are likely to unconsciously imitate their parent's words and actions through a set of internal and external interactions. Therefore, whether a child has a good personality and proper attitude mostly depends on the parent's background. For example, a statistical report from the Canadian National Crime Prevention Crime revealed that individuals from families with a lack of order and discipline were 1.5 times more at risk of committing criminal activities than those from structured households.
On the other hand, I do believe that lawbreakers themselves, not their parents, should be punished to ensure a justice system that is based on fairness and criminal deterrence. Firstly, it is unfair for the community if offenders can escape legal punishment and continue their normal lives despite harming society. In fact, punishment is to let them understand the price of their actions and prevent potential crimes in the future. Furthermore, if parents take all responsibility for their children's misconduct, it can create misleading impacts on children. They might understand that whatever unlawful actions they commit, they will not be bothered. Secondly, threats of being punished may prevent the risk of other teenagers committing anti-social behaviour, thus making society a safer and more peaceful place.
In conclusion, although parents may play a part in their children's wrongdoings, they should not take a part or major responsibility for this. I firmly believe that all lawbreakers, regardless of how old they are, should be punished to ensure the fairness of the legal system and prevent the potential increase in the youth crime rate.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Sometimes, companies choose people based on their personality rather than skill set. Why do you think that is the case? What do you think is more important – personality or skills?
Anwser:
Due to the complexity of processes within some companies, they have to hire people with specific attitudes and capabilities. While professional skills are vital in order to produce quality products or services there are positions and activities which require some specific personal features. I will bring some seasons and compare both approaches in the following paragraphs.
It's true that people are hired at a particular position not only for their professional skills. Moreover, there are cases when employers have zero experience in this field. However, the ability to cooperate and integrate new approaches is as beneficial as being productive. For example, in the IT sphere, management positions are mostly occupied by specialists from different fields. The main reason for this is the ability to comprehend and suggest solutions without regard to the technical side of the process. In other words, the ability to behave and communicate with people of different worldviews and approaches is like a lubricant in mechanical parts that makes it easier and more productive.
Consequently, comparing the significance of attitude and skills in work it is necessary to mention the role of a person in a company. For instance, there are no chances for someone without experience to be hired as a plane pilot. Meanwhile, a difficult personality is an obstacle even for a great master of his craft as others are facing difficulties that prevent the smoothness of the work process. Thus, we can deduce that both skill and personality are important for a healthy work atmosphere.
To conclude, people are hired not only due to their level of knowledge but for particular traits required to improve and fulfil work. It goes without saying that a healthy atmosphere is essential.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Sometimes, companies choose people based on their personality rather than skill set. Why do you think that is the case? What do you think is more important – personality or skills?
Anwser:
Due to the complexity of processes within some companies, they have to hire people with specific attitudes and capabilities. While professional skills are vital in order to produce quality products or services there are positions and activities which require some specific personal features. I will bring some seasons and compare both approaches in the following paragraphs.
It's true that people are hired at a particular position not only for their professional skills. Moreover, there are cases when employers have zero experience in this field. However, the ability to cooperate and integrate new approaches is as beneficial as being productive. For example, in the IT sphere, management positions are mostly occupied by specialists from different fields. The main reason for this is the ability to comprehend and suggest solutions without regard to the technical side of the process. In other words, the ability to behave and communicate with people of different worldviews and approaches is like a lubricant in mechanical parts that makes it easier and more productive.
Consequently, comparing the significance of attitude and skills in work it is necessary to mention the role of a person in a company. For instance, there are no chances for someone without experience to be hired as a plane pilot. Meanwhile, a difficult personality is an obstacle even for a great master of his craft as others are facing difficulties that prevent the smoothness of the work process. Thus, we can deduce that both skill and personality are important for a healthy work atmosphere.
To conclude, people are hired not only due to their level of knowledge but for particular traits required to improve and fulfil work. It goes without saying that a healthy atmosphere is essential.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Sometimes, companies choose people based on their personality rather than skill set. Why do you think that is the case? What do you think is more important – personality or skills?
Anwser:
Due to the complexity of processes within some companies, they have to hire people with specific attitudes and capabilities. While professional skills are vital in order to produce quality products or services there are positions and activities which require some specific personal features. I will bring some seasons and compare both approaches in the following paragraphs.
It's true that people are hired at a particular position not only for their professional skills. Moreover, there are cases when employers have zero experience in this field. However, the ability to cooperate and integrate new approaches is as beneficial as being productive. For example, in the IT sphere, management positions are mostly occupied by specialists from different fields. The main reason for this is the ability to comprehend and suggest solutions without regard to the technical side of the process. In other words, the ability to behave and communicate with people of different worldviews and approaches is like a lubricant in mechanical parts that makes it easier and more productive.
Consequently, comparing the significance of attitude and skills in work it is necessary to mention the role of a person in a company. For instance, there are no chances for someone without experience to be hired as a plane pilot. Meanwhile, a difficult personality is an obstacle even for a great master of his craft as others are facing difficulties that prevent the smoothness of the work process. Thus, we can deduce that both skill and personality are important for a healthy work atmosphere.
To conclude, people are hired not only due to their level of knowledge but for particular traits required to improve and fulfil work. It goes without saying that a healthy atmosphere is essential.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Sometimes, companies choose people based on their personality rather than skill set. Why do you think that is the case? What do you think is more important – personality or skills?
Anwser:
Due to the complexity of processes within some companies, they have to hire people with specific attitudes and capabilities. While professional skills are vital in order to produce quality products or services there are positions and activities which require some specific personal features. I will bring some seasons and compare both approaches in the following paragraphs.
It's true that people are hired at a particular position not only for their professional skills. Moreover, there are cases when employers have zero experience in this field. However, the ability to cooperate and integrate new approaches is as beneficial as being productive. For example, in the IT sphere, management positions are mostly occupied by specialists from different fields. The main reason for this is the ability to comprehend and suggest solutions without regard to the technical side of the process. In other words, the ability to behave and communicate with people of different worldviews and approaches is like a lubricant in mechanical parts that makes it easier and more productive.
Consequently, comparing the significance of attitude and skills in work it is necessary to mention the role of a person in a company. For instance, there are no chances for someone without experience to be hired as a plane pilot. Meanwhile, a difficult personality is an obstacle even for a great master of his craft as others are facing difficulties that prevent the smoothness of the work process. Thus, we can deduce that both skill and personality are important for a healthy work atmosphere.
To conclude, people are hired not only due to their level of knowledge but for particular traits required to improve and fulfil work. It goes without saying that a healthy atmosphere is essential.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |