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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Write about the following topic:
Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed.
However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments.
Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Anwser:
Countless discoveries in scientific fields could have been successful due to a pre-clinical examination of living things. Hence, it is widely considered that animal tests are necessary for people. However, some strongly support animal rights. In my opinion, this step of scientific research should be banned. This essay will evaluate the reasons for my statement and suggest alternatives .
First of all, the treatment that animals receive during research is poor. Scientific institutions argue that they treat animals with respect and that they have ethical guidelines that should be followed. But the reality is not. Rats, rabbits, or monkeys are locked in small cages and they are barely fed. Furthermore, they have to suffer from pain and other health issues when they are injected with new chemicals. I saw a documentary that presents monkeys with mental diseases after a long time living in cages inside a lab. As such, I argue that it is inappropriate for humans to consider other living creatures as tools for them.
Then, what can scientists do to replace this brutal method? As technologies developed exponentially, people found a way to test newly discovered substances with computers. There are some companies which already adopted this method. A shampoo company manufactured a new merchant and had to undergo a clinical test before going out to the market. The company did not follow a traditional procedure, but they created an artificial skin tissue of a human with a computer. Eventually, the company effectively proved the safety of their new product. Like this, the world should constantly seek alternatives.
To sum up, it is selfish for the public to let this brutal circumstance take place just for their comfort. Scientists should develop existing replacements and also look for others, too.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Write about the following topic:
Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed.
However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments.
Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Anwser:
Countless discoveries in scientific fields could have been successful due to a pre-clinical examination of living things. Hence, it is widely considered that animal tests are necessary for people. However, some strongly support animal rights. In my opinion, this step of scientific research should be banned. This essay will evaluate the reasons for my statement and suggest alternatives .
First of all, the treatment that animals receive during research is poor. Scientific institutions argue that they treat animals with respect and that they have ethical guidelines that should be followed. But the reality is not. Rats, rabbits, or monkeys are locked in small cages and they are barely fed. Furthermore, they have to suffer from pain and other health issues when they are injected with new chemicals. I saw a documentary that presents monkeys with mental diseases after a long time living in cages inside a lab. As such, I argue that it is inappropriate for humans to consider other living creatures as tools for them.
Then, what can scientists do to replace this brutal method? As technologies developed exponentially, people found a way to test newly discovered substances with computers. There are some companies which already adopted this method. A shampoo company manufactured a new merchant and had to undergo a clinical test before going out to the market. The company did not follow a traditional procedure, but they created an artificial skin tissue of a human with a computer. Eventually, the company effectively proved the safety of their new product. Like this, the world should constantly seek alternatives.
To sum up, it is selfish for the public to let this brutal circumstance take place just for their comfort. Scientists should develop existing replacements and also look for others, too.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Write about the following topic:
Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed.
However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments.
Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Anwser:
Countless discoveries in scientific fields could have been successful due to a pre-clinical examination of living things. Hence, it is widely considered that animal tests are necessary for people. However, some strongly support animal rights. In my opinion, this step of scientific research should be banned. This essay will evaluate the reasons for my statement and suggest alternatives .
First of all, the treatment that animals receive during research is poor. Scientific institutions argue that they treat animals with respect and that they have ethical guidelines that should be followed. But the reality is not. Rats, rabbits, or monkeys are locked in small cages and they are barely fed. Furthermore, they have to suffer from pain and other health issues when they are injected with new chemicals. I saw a documentary that presents monkeys with mental diseases after a long time living in cages inside a lab. As such, I argue that it is inappropriate for humans to consider other living creatures as tools for them.
Then, what can scientists do to replace this brutal method? As technologies developed exponentially, people found a way to test newly discovered substances with computers. There are some companies which already adopted this method. A shampoo company manufactured a new merchant and had to undergo a clinical test before going out to the market. The company did not follow a traditional procedure, but they created an artificial skin tissue of a human with a computer. Eventually, the company effectively proved the safety of their new product. Like this, the world should constantly seek alternatives.
To sum up, it is selfish for the public to let this brutal circumstance take place just for their comfort. Scientists should develop existing replacements and also look for others, too.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Write about the following topic:
Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed.
However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments.
Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Anwser:
Countless discoveries in scientific fields could have been successful due to a pre-clinical examination of living things. Hence, it is widely considered that animal tests are necessary for people. However, some strongly support animal rights. In my opinion, this step of scientific research should be banned. This essay will evaluate the reasons for my statement and suggest alternatives .
First of all, the treatment that animals receive during research is poor. Scientific institutions argue that they treat animals with respect and that they have ethical guidelines that should be followed. But the reality is not. Rats, rabbits, or monkeys are locked in small cages and they are barely fed. Furthermore, they have to suffer from pain and other health issues when they are injected with new chemicals. I saw a documentary that presents monkeys with mental diseases after a long time living in cages inside a lab. As such, I argue that it is inappropriate for humans to consider other living creatures as tools for them.
Then, what can scientists do to replace this brutal method? As technologies developed exponentially, people found a way to test newly discovered substances with computers. There are some companies which already adopted this method. A shampoo company manufactured a new merchant and had to undergo a clinical test before going out to the market. The company did not follow a traditional procedure, but they created an artificial skin tissue of a human with a computer. Eventually, the company effectively proved the safety of their new product. Like this, the world should constantly seek alternatives.
To sum up, it is selfish for the public to let this brutal circumstance take place just for their comfort. Scientists should develop existing replacements and also look for others, too.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Handwriting today is less formal than it was in the past. What are the causes of this change? Is it a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
In the contemporary world, the popularity of handwriting has been on a continuous decline as opposed to its heyday back in the 1900s when there was no alternative. It is my contention that the advancements accomplished in the field of technology have caused people to switch towards sending online emails and using instant message tools to communicate, therefore, completely substituting handwriting as a method of communication which I believe is a multifaceted phenomenon with both positive and negative implications.
First and foremost, handwriting is an important breakthrough that has revolutionized the way humans communicate. Its popularity is still active in schools, hospitals, and some government agencies to send official letters to the citizens. However, as we live on the edge of technology, digitalization of written communication is being rigorously developed in order to replace this old method which is slow and not limited in inclusivity. For example, with the help of instant messaging applications, people can send personal messages, videos and voice recordings in a matter of seconds to someone who is located in the farthest part of the world. In comparison with letters written by hand, digitalized solutions cannot be interrupted or lost during the process which puts them one step ahead of the race. Now that we have super-fast communication tools and technologies, the most critical cases can easily be overcome, thus, showing a prompt reaction to the thousands of emergency cases all across the world.
On the other hand, there are some areas where handwriting is still active and it is unlikely to be changed any time soon due to certain environmental requisites, especially in schools. Handwriting is perceived as one of the pragmatic methods of studying by juveniles at schools, helping them to memorize and conceptualize the most challenging formulas and equations in math and physics.
Furthermore, another area where letters written by humans are still being employed is governments. A majority of government agencies opt for letters as an official way to notify residents and other governing powers.
In conclusion, the less formal nature of handwriting today can be attributed to the rise of technology.While some may argue that it is a negative development, as it may lead to a decline in handwriting skills and a loss of a traditional form of communication, others may view it as a positive development, citing the convenience and efficiency of digital communication.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Handwriting today is less formal than it was in the past. What are the causes of this change? Is it a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
In the contemporary world, the popularity of handwriting has been on a continuous decline as opposed to its heyday back in the 1900s when there was no alternative. It is my contention that the advancements accomplished in the field of technology have caused people to switch towards sending online emails and using instant message tools to communicate, therefore, completely substituting handwriting as a method of communication which I believe is a multifaceted phenomenon with both positive and negative implications.
First and foremost, handwriting is an important breakthrough that has revolutionized the way humans communicate. Its popularity is still active in schools, hospitals, and some government agencies to send official letters to the citizens. However, as we live on the edge of technology, digitalization of written communication is being rigorously developed in order to replace this old method which is slow and not limited in inclusivity. For example, with the help of instant messaging applications, people can send personal messages, videos and voice recordings in a matter of seconds to someone who is located in the farthest part of the world. In comparison with letters written by hand, digitalized solutions cannot be interrupted or lost during the process which puts them one step ahead of the race. Now that we have super-fast communication tools and technologies, the most critical cases can easily be overcome, thus, showing a prompt reaction to the thousands of emergency cases all across the world.
On the other hand, there are some areas where handwriting is still active and it is unlikely to be changed any time soon due to certain environmental requisites, especially in schools. Handwriting is perceived as one of the pragmatic methods of studying by juveniles at schools, helping them to memorize and conceptualize the most challenging formulas and equations in math and physics.
Furthermore, another area where letters written by humans are still being employed is governments. A majority of government agencies opt for letters as an official way to notify residents and other governing powers.
In conclusion, the less formal nature of handwriting today can be attributed to the rise of technology.While some may argue that it is a negative development, as it may lead to a decline in handwriting skills and a loss of a traditional form of communication, others may view it as a positive development, citing the convenience and efficiency of digital communication.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Handwriting today is less formal than it was in the past. What are the causes of this change? Is it a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
In the contemporary world, the popularity of handwriting has been on a continuous decline as opposed to its heyday back in the 1900s when there was no alternative. It is my contention that the advancements accomplished in the field of technology have caused people to switch towards sending online emails and using instant message tools to communicate, therefore, completely substituting handwriting as a method of communication which I believe is a multifaceted phenomenon with both positive and negative implications.
First and foremost, handwriting is an important breakthrough that has revolutionized the way humans communicate. Its popularity is still active in schools, hospitals, and some government agencies to send official letters to the citizens. However, as we live on the edge of technology, digitalization of written communication is being rigorously developed in order to replace this old method which is slow and not limited in inclusivity. For example, with the help of instant messaging applications, people can send personal messages, videos and voice recordings in a matter of seconds to someone who is located in the farthest part of the world. In comparison with letters written by hand, digitalized solutions cannot be interrupted or lost during the process which puts them one step ahead of the race. Now that we have super-fast communication tools and technologies, the most critical cases can easily be overcome, thus, showing a prompt reaction to the thousands of emergency cases all across the world.
On the other hand, there are some areas where handwriting is still active and it is unlikely to be changed any time soon due to certain environmental requisites, especially in schools. Handwriting is perceived as one of the pragmatic methods of studying by juveniles at schools, helping them to memorize and conceptualize the most challenging formulas and equations in math and physics.
Furthermore, another area where letters written by humans are still being employed is governments. A majority of government agencies opt for letters as an official way to notify residents and other governing powers.
In conclusion, the less formal nature of handwriting today can be attributed to the rise of technology.While some may argue that it is a negative development, as it may lead to a decline in handwriting skills and a loss of a traditional form of communication, others may view it as a positive development, citing the convenience and efficiency of digital communication.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Handwriting today is less formal than it was in the past. What are the causes of this change? Is it a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
In the contemporary world, the popularity of handwriting has been on a continuous decline as opposed to its heyday back in the 1900s when there was no alternative. It is my contention that the advancements accomplished in the field of technology have caused people to switch towards sending online emails and using instant message tools to communicate, therefore, completely substituting handwriting as a method of communication which I believe is a multifaceted phenomenon with both positive and negative implications.
First and foremost, handwriting is an important breakthrough that has revolutionized the way humans communicate. Its popularity is still active in schools, hospitals, and some government agencies to send official letters to the citizens. However, as we live on the edge of technology, digitalization of written communication is being rigorously developed in order to replace this old method which is slow and not limited in inclusivity. For example, with the help of instant messaging applications, people can send personal messages, videos and voice recordings in a matter of seconds to someone who is located in the farthest part of the world. In comparison with letters written by hand, digitalized solutions cannot be interrupted or lost during the process which puts them one step ahead of the race. Now that we have super-fast communication tools and technologies, the most critical cases can easily be overcome, thus, showing a prompt reaction to the thousands of emergency cases all across the world.
On the other hand, there are some areas where handwriting is still active and it is unlikely to be changed any time soon due to certain environmental requisites, especially in schools. Handwriting is perceived as one of the pragmatic methods of studying by juveniles at schools, helping them to memorize and conceptualize the most challenging formulas and equations in math and physics.
Furthermore, another area where letters written by humans are still being employed is governments. A majority of government agencies opt for letters as an official way to notify residents and other governing powers.
In conclusion, the less formal nature of handwriting today can be attributed to the rise of technology.While some may argue that it is a negative development, as it may lead to a decline in handwriting skills and a loss of a traditional form of communication, others may view it as a positive development, citing the convenience and efficiency of digital communication.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in other countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Various controversies have emerged as to whether professionals should work in other states. While many people think that professional workers owe a debt to the country they trained in, I believe that they should be free to work where they choose because they can earn more money.
On the one hand, professionals often receive considerable funding from their government to become fully qualified. It is only fair that they should repay this subsidy by working in that place. This is because they often do jobs that greatly benefit society, and this is why their government invested in them in the first place. Take Taiwan as an example; the government spends millions of TWD training junior doctors through university tuition fees and training programs.
On the other hand, every individual should have the opportunity to reach their maximum potential. Those employed in the professions are some of the world’s most highly skilled employees. Thus, they are in huge demand in the labour market. There is a global market for their skills, and they can command much higher salaries by moving abroad. If they were blocked from doing so, it would be a substantial financial drawback for the individual. For instance, software engineers can make hundreds of thousands of dollars more in well-paid countries, such as the US, compared to remaining in Asia. In my opinion, I totally agree that individuals have the right to work wherever they please, regardless of any nationalistic considerations.
By way of conclusion, though there is a tremendous amount of investment in a professional’s development, I firmly believe that people should have the right to choose whether to repay that by working in their home state or moving to a region that pays them the highest value for their skills.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in other countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Various controversies have emerged as to whether professionals should work in other states. While many people think that professional workers owe a debt to the country they trained in, I believe that they should be free to work where they choose because they can earn more money.
On the one hand, professionals often receive considerable funding from their government to become fully qualified. It is only fair that they should repay this subsidy by working in that place. This is because they often do jobs that greatly benefit society, and this is why their government invested in them in the first place. Take Taiwan as an example; the government spends millions of TWD training junior doctors through university tuition fees and training programs.
On the other hand, every individual should have the opportunity to reach their maximum potential. Those employed in the professions are some of the world’s most highly skilled employees. Thus, they are in huge demand in the labour market. There is a global market for their skills, and they can command much higher salaries by moving abroad. If they were blocked from doing so, it would be a substantial financial drawback for the individual. For instance, software engineers can make hundreds of thousands of dollars more in well-paid countries, such as the US, compared to remaining in Asia. In my opinion, I totally agree that individuals have the right to work wherever they please, regardless of any nationalistic considerations.
By way of conclusion, though there is a tremendous amount of investment in a professional’s development, I firmly believe that people should have the right to choose whether to repay that by working in their home state or moving to a region that pays them the highest value for their skills.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in other countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Various controversies have emerged as to whether professionals should work in other states. While many people think that professional workers owe a debt to the country they trained in, I believe that they should be free to work where they choose because they can earn more money.
On the one hand, professionals often receive considerable funding from their government to become fully qualified. It is only fair that they should repay this subsidy by working in that place. This is because they often do jobs that greatly benefit society, and this is why their government invested in them in the first place. Take Taiwan as an example; the government spends millions of TWD training junior doctors through university tuition fees and training programs.
On the other hand, every individual should have the opportunity to reach their maximum potential. Those employed in the professions are some of the world’s most highly skilled employees. Thus, they are in huge demand in the labour market. There is a global market for their skills, and they can command much higher salaries by moving abroad. If they were blocked from doing so, it would be a substantial financial drawback for the individual. For instance, software engineers can make hundreds of thousands of dollars more in well-paid countries, such as the US, compared to remaining in Asia. In my opinion, I totally agree that individuals have the right to work wherever they please, regardless of any nationalistic considerations.
By way of conclusion, though there is a tremendous amount of investment in a professional’s development, I firmly believe that people should have the right to choose whether to repay that by working in their home state or moving to a region that pays them the highest value for their skills.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in other countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Various controversies have emerged as to whether professionals should work in other states. While many people think that professional workers owe a debt to the country they trained in, I believe that they should be free to work where they choose because they can earn more money.
On the one hand, professionals often receive considerable funding from their government to become fully qualified. It is only fair that they should repay this subsidy by working in that place. This is because they often do jobs that greatly benefit society, and this is why their government invested in them in the first place. Take Taiwan as an example; the government spends millions of TWD training junior doctors through university tuition fees and training programs.
On the other hand, every individual should have the opportunity to reach their maximum potential. Those employed in the professions are some of the world’s most highly skilled employees. Thus, they are in huge demand in the labour market. There is a global market for their skills, and they can command much higher salaries by moving abroad. If they were blocked from doing so, it would be a substantial financial drawback for the individual. For instance, software engineers can make hundreds of thousands of dollars more in well-paid countries, such as the US, compared to remaining in Asia. In my opinion, I totally agree that individuals have the right to work wherever they please, regardless of any nationalistic considerations.
By way of conclusion, though there is a tremendous amount of investment in a professional’s development, I firmly believe that people should have the right to choose whether to repay that by working in their home state or moving to a region that pays them the highest value for their skills.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the advantages of video surveillance outweigh the disadvantages?
Anwser:
In recent years, the installation of video cameras in public areas has increased to reduce crime. However, some people believe that these measures restrict our personal rights. This trend has both merits and shortcomings, and I think that the merits outweigh the shortcomings.
To begin with, video surveillance is highly beneficial in reducing the crime rate. To be specific, offenders can be effectively captured by a police officer through numerous CCTVs all over the city. Moreover, when people are aware of the cameras, they are reluctant to commit a crime due to the anxiety of being punished. To illustrate, a notable study conducted by Korea University revealed that a city with more than 10,000 security cameras showed a 10 times lower offence rate compared to cities with less than 4,000 cameras. Hence, installing video cameras is overly favourable to lower the crime rate.
Furthermore, it is also helpful in finding a mission person or objects. For instance, it is possible to track back where the missing person went or the object was lost. In addition, a policeman can search for an old man with dementia via public cameras or get a clue about where one's belongings have gone. Indeed, video surveillance is truly advantageous as it suggests a guide to finding people in need and goods.
To conclude, in many regions, the number of video cameras in public places is increasing. Although it can harm our individual freedom, I think the number of advantages overrides the disadvantages. Thus, the government should attract investment in installing more CCTVs.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the advantages of video surveillance outweigh the disadvantages?
Anwser:
In recent years, the installation of video cameras in public areas has increased to reduce crime. However, some people believe that these measures restrict our personal rights. This trend has both merits and shortcomings, and I think that the merits outweigh the shortcomings.
To begin with, video surveillance is highly beneficial in reducing the crime rate. To be specific, offenders can be effectively captured by a police officer through numerous CCTVs all over the city. Moreover, when people are aware of the cameras, they are reluctant to commit a crime due to the anxiety of being punished. To illustrate, a notable study conducted by Korea University revealed that a city with more than 10,000 security cameras showed a 10 times lower offence rate compared to cities with less than 4,000 cameras. Hence, installing video cameras is overly favourable to lower the crime rate.
Furthermore, it is also helpful in finding a mission person or objects. For instance, it is possible to track back where the missing person went or the object was lost. In addition, a policeman can search for an old man with dementia via public cameras or get a clue about where one's belongings have gone. Indeed, video surveillance is truly advantageous as it suggests a guide to finding people in need and goods.
To conclude, in many regions, the number of video cameras in public places is increasing. Although it can harm our individual freedom, I think the number of advantages overrides the disadvantages. Thus, the government should attract investment in installing more CCTVs.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the advantages of video surveillance outweigh the disadvantages?
Anwser:
In recent years, the installation of video cameras in public areas has increased to reduce crime. However, some people believe that these measures restrict our personal rights. This trend has both merits and shortcomings, and I think that the merits outweigh the shortcomings.
To begin with, video surveillance is highly beneficial in reducing the crime rate. To be specific, offenders can be effectively captured by a police officer through numerous CCTVs all over the city. Moreover, when people are aware of the cameras, they are reluctant to commit a crime due to the anxiety of being punished. To illustrate, a notable study conducted by Korea University revealed that a city with more than 10,000 security cameras showed a 10 times lower offence rate compared to cities with less than 4,000 cameras. Hence, installing video cameras is overly favourable to lower the crime rate.
Furthermore, it is also helpful in finding a mission person or objects. For instance, it is possible to track back where the missing person went or the object was lost. In addition, a policeman can search for an old man with dementia via public cameras or get a clue about where one's belongings have gone. Indeed, video surveillance is truly advantageous as it suggests a guide to finding people in need and goods.
To conclude, in many regions, the number of video cameras in public places is increasing. Although it can harm our individual freedom, I think the number of advantages overrides the disadvantages. Thus, the government should attract investment in installing more CCTVs.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the advantages of video surveillance outweigh the disadvantages?
Anwser:
In recent years, the installation of video cameras in public areas has increased to reduce crime. However, some people believe that these measures restrict our personal rights. This trend has both merits and shortcomings, and I think that the merits outweigh the shortcomings.
To begin with, video surveillance is highly beneficial in reducing the crime rate. To be specific, offenders can be effectively captured by a police officer through numerous CCTVs all over the city. Moreover, when people are aware of the cameras, they are reluctant to commit a crime due to the anxiety of being punished. To illustrate, a notable study conducted by Korea University revealed that a city with more than 10,000 security cameras showed a 10 times lower offence rate compared to cities with less than 4,000 cameras. Hence, installing video cameras is overly favourable to lower the crime rate.
Furthermore, it is also helpful in finding a mission person or objects. For instance, it is possible to track back where the missing person went or the object was lost. In addition, a policeman can search for an old man with dementia via public cameras or get a clue about where one's belongings have gone. Indeed, video surveillance is truly advantageous as it suggests a guide to finding people in need and goods.
To conclude, in many regions, the number of video cameras in public places is increasing. Although it can harm our individual freedom, I think the number of advantages overrides the disadvantages. Thus, the government should attract investment in installing more CCTVs.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
The movements of people from the villages to the cities for work has caused a lots of problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?
Anwser:
The migration from rural areas to cities has gained momentum over the last half of a century. It poses numerous issues for both villages and towns. This essay will shed some light on the main problems of such a phenomenon and provide several plausible solutions to resolve the same.
Firstly, mass migration can exert severe pressure on finite land resources and skyrocket real estate prices. For instance, Hong Kong faced such a problem at the beginning of the twenty-first century, and today, an average apartment costs approximately twenty years of family income. To resolve such a predicament, governments throughout the world should develop a fast internet connection and pass new regulation measures to make their economies more decentralized.
Moreover, when youngsters leave their families in small towns to excel in big cities, it creates additional risks for senior citizens who lose necessary support and puts additional pressure on healthcare systems. For example, according to a study conducted at the University of North Carolina, seniors without children and grandkids support spend twenty-three per cent more on health-laden issues. It is recommended that a group of small cities with reasonable accommodation prices in one particular area instead of developing infinite megalopolises be developed to make it possible to move the whole family during the immigration process and cut some costs.
Although the domestic migration phenomenon provides new opportunities for the young generations, it has its own drawbacks. It is predicted that technological development may help to make neglected rural areas great again.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
The movements of people from the villages to the cities for work has caused a lots of problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?
Anwser:
The migration from rural areas to cities has gained momentum over the last half of a century. It poses numerous issues for both villages and towns. This essay will shed some light on the main problems of such a phenomenon and provide several plausible solutions to resolve the same.
Firstly, mass migration can exert severe pressure on finite land resources and skyrocket real estate prices. For instance, Hong Kong faced such a problem at the beginning of the twenty-first century, and today, an average apartment costs approximately twenty years of family income. To resolve such a predicament, governments throughout the world should develop a fast internet connection and pass new regulation measures to make their economies more decentralized.
Moreover, when youngsters leave their families in small towns to excel in big cities, it creates additional risks for senior citizens who lose necessary support and puts additional pressure on healthcare systems. For example, according to a study conducted at the University of North Carolina, seniors without children and grandkids support spend twenty-three per cent more on health-laden issues. It is recommended that a group of small cities with reasonable accommodation prices in one particular area instead of developing infinite megalopolises be developed to make it possible to move the whole family during the immigration process and cut some costs.
Although the domestic migration phenomenon provides new opportunities for the young generations, it has its own drawbacks. It is predicted that technological development may help to make neglected rural areas great again.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
The movements of people from the villages to the cities for work has caused a lots of problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?
Anwser:
The migration from rural areas to cities has gained momentum over the last half of a century. It poses numerous issues for both villages and towns. This essay will shed some light on the main problems of such a phenomenon and provide several plausible solutions to resolve the same.
Firstly, mass migration can exert severe pressure on finite land resources and skyrocket real estate prices. For instance, Hong Kong faced such a problem at the beginning of the twenty-first century, and today, an average apartment costs approximately twenty years of family income. To resolve such a predicament, governments throughout the world should develop a fast internet connection and pass new regulation measures to make their economies more decentralized.
Moreover, when youngsters leave their families in small towns to excel in big cities, it creates additional risks for senior citizens who lose necessary support and puts additional pressure on healthcare systems. For example, according to a study conducted at the University of North Carolina, seniors without children and grandkids support spend twenty-three per cent more on health-laden issues. It is recommended that a group of small cities with reasonable accommodation prices in one particular area instead of developing infinite megalopolises be developed to make it possible to move the whole family during the immigration process and cut some costs.
Although the domestic migration phenomenon provides new opportunities for the young generations, it has its own drawbacks. It is predicted that technological development may help to make neglected rural areas great again.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
The movements of people from the villages to the cities for work has caused a lots of problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?
Anwser:
The migration from rural areas to cities has gained momentum over the last half of a century. It poses numerous issues for both villages and towns. This essay will shed some light on the main problems of such a phenomenon and provide several plausible solutions to resolve the same.
Firstly, mass migration can exert severe pressure on finite land resources and skyrocket real estate prices. For instance, Hong Kong faced such a problem at the beginning of the twenty-first century, and today, an average apartment costs approximately twenty years of family income. To resolve such a predicament, governments throughout the world should develop a fast internet connection and pass new regulation measures to make their economies more decentralized.
Moreover, when youngsters leave their families in small towns to excel in big cities, it creates additional risks for senior citizens who lose necessary support and puts additional pressure on healthcare systems. For example, according to a study conducted at the University of North Carolina, seniors without children and grandkids support spend twenty-three per cent more on health-laden issues. It is recommended that a group of small cities with reasonable accommodation prices in one particular area instead of developing infinite megalopolises be developed to make it possible to move the whole family during the immigration process and cut some costs.
Although the domestic migration phenomenon provides new opportunities for the young generations, it has its own drawbacks. It is predicted that technological development may help to make neglected rural areas great again.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that countries with high incomes have to allow a larger number of refugees to cross their borders. I completely agree with this statement because it is morally correct and beneficial for their economies in the long term.
It is not adequate just to watch other nations suffering from being deprived of food and safety. Wealthy states are capable of helping those who require this help. War, hunger, and other negative circumstances happen all the time around the world. Rich states have well-developed agricultural and construction sectors, so it should not be challenging to provide a "safety net" to displaced people. For example, many European regions were involved in the biggest migration crisis in the past decade, and provided shelter to millions of foreigners, showing a good example of humanity.
Besides being cheerful, a positive effect of migration can be achieved. Some of those, who had to leave their homeland, will start settling down, opening businesses, and becoming a labour force in the end. In addition to that, it will be quite beneficial for economies over a long distance, because a lot of new jobs will appear leading to an increase in incomes for local areas, and it can boost economic growth overall. One of the prominent examples is the migration policy of the USA; people from abroad were accepted, sheltered, and allowed to open businesses thereby increasing the country's GDP.
In conclusion, from an ethical point of view nations have to support each other and provide all the necessary stuff like food or accommodations for refugees. Moreover, this movement can be paid back in advance by those who were adopted, resulting in an upward trend in the labour market.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that countries with high incomes have to allow a larger number of refugees to cross their borders. I completely agree with this statement because it is morally correct and beneficial for their economies in the long term.
It is not adequate just to watch other nations suffering from being deprived of food and safety. Wealthy states are capable of helping those who require this help. War, hunger, and other negative circumstances happen all the time around the world. Rich states have well-developed agricultural and construction sectors, so it should not be challenging to provide a "safety net" to displaced people. For example, many European regions were involved in the biggest migration crisis in the past decade, and provided shelter to millions of foreigners, showing a good example of humanity.
Besides being cheerful, a positive effect of migration can be achieved. Some of those, who had to leave their homeland, will start settling down, opening businesses, and becoming a labour force in the end. In addition to that, it will be quite beneficial for economies over a long distance, because a lot of new jobs will appear leading to an increase in incomes for local areas, and it can boost economic growth overall. One of the prominent examples is the migration policy of the USA; people from abroad were accepted, sheltered, and allowed to open businesses thereby increasing the country's GDP.
In conclusion, from an ethical point of view nations have to support each other and provide all the necessary stuff like food or accommodations for refugees. Moreover, this movement can be paid back in advance by those who were adopted, resulting in an upward trend in the labour market.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that countries with high incomes have to allow a larger number of refugees to cross their borders. I completely agree with this statement because it is morally correct and beneficial for their economies in the long term.
It is not adequate just to watch other nations suffering from being deprived of food and safety. Wealthy states are capable of helping those who require this help. War, hunger, and other negative circumstances happen all the time around the world. Rich states have well-developed agricultural and construction sectors, so it should not be challenging to provide a "safety net" to displaced people. For example, many European regions were involved in the biggest migration crisis in the past decade, and provided shelter to millions of foreigners, showing a good example of humanity.
Besides being cheerful, a positive effect of migration can be achieved. Some of those, who had to leave their homeland, will start settling down, opening businesses, and becoming a labour force in the end. In addition to that, it will be quite beneficial for economies over a long distance, because a lot of new jobs will appear leading to an increase in incomes for local areas, and it can boost economic growth overall. One of the prominent examples is the migration policy of the USA; people from abroad were accepted, sheltered, and allowed to open businesses thereby increasing the country's GDP.
In conclusion, from an ethical point of view nations have to support each other and provide all the necessary stuff like food or accommodations for refugees. Moreover, this movement can be paid back in advance by those who were adopted, resulting in an upward trend in the labour market.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that countries with high incomes have to allow a larger number of refugees to cross their borders. I completely agree with this statement because it is morally correct and beneficial for their economies in the long term.
It is not adequate just to watch other nations suffering from being deprived of food and safety. Wealthy states are capable of helping those who require this help. War, hunger, and other negative circumstances happen all the time around the world. Rich states have well-developed agricultural and construction sectors, so it should not be challenging to provide a "safety net" to displaced people. For example, many European regions were involved in the biggest migration crisis in the past decade, and provided shelter to millions of foreigners, showing a good example of humanity.
Besides being cheerful, a positive effect of migration can be achieved. Some of those, who had to leave their homeland, will start settling down, opening businesses, and becoming a labour force in the end. In addition to that, it will be quite beneficial for economies over a long distance, because a lot of new jobs will appear leading to an increase in incomes for local areas, and it can boost economic growth overall. One of the prominent examples is the migration policy of the USA; people from abroad were accepted, sheltered, and allowed to open businesses thereby increasing the country's GDP.
In conclusion, from an ethical point of view nations have to support each other and provide all the necessary stuff like food or accommodations for refugees. Moreover, this movement can be paid back in advance by those who were adopted, resulting in an upward trend in the labour market.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
It can be noticed that the dangers of consuming cigarettes are well-announced, yet many individuals continue to smoke. This essay will present the cause of this trend as well as suggest the augmentation of campaigns that would talk about the risks related to smoking.
Some believe that stopping their smoking habit will lead to unbearable withdrawal of nicotine. Furthermore, even if the said population knows about the impact it has on the body, the withdrawal caused by nicotine addiction leads to important mood swings and terrible pain, which no one wants to deal with. For instance, a study led by Harvard University in 2021 in China, the country with the largest population of smokers, showed that 60% of the surveyed Chinese are well aware of the consequences on their bodies, yet they express the need to satisfy their nicotine cravings.
An effective solution to this problem would revolve around the creation of a campaign. Moreover, creating publicities is a good way to have an impact on individuals since marketing strategies use sociological approaches in order to influence any opinion. This solution could help in having an influence on those who have a smoking addiction. For example, in 2017, the French government launched a campaign called “Look at the Kid”. The purpose was to impact couples that smoked and target the potential desire to have a child. The publicity series was successful, leading to a decrease in the quantity of French smokers by 5% in 8 months.
To conclude, this problem is caused by the addictive aspect of smoking but can be resolved thanks to the use of publicity strategies.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
It can be noticed that the dangers of consuming cigarettes are well-announced, yet many individuals continue to smoke. This essay will present the cause of this trend as well as suggest the augmentation of campaigns that would talk about the risks related to smoking.
Some believe that stopping their smoking habit will lead to unbearable withdrawal of nicotine. Furthermore, even if the said population knows about the impact it has on the body, the withdrawal caused by nicotine addiction leads to important mood swings and terrible pain, which no one wants to deal with. For instance, a study led by Harvard University in 2021 in China, the country with the largest population of smokers, showed that 60% of the surveyed Chinese are well aware of the consequences on their bodies, yet they express the need to satisfy their nicotine cravings.
An effective solution to this problem would revolve around the creation of a campaign. Moreover, creating publicities is a good way to have an impact on individuals since marketing strategies use sociological approaches in order to influence any opinion. This solution could help in having an influence on those who have a smoking addiction. For example, in 2017, the French government launched a campaign called “Look at the Kid”. The purpose was to impact couples that smoked and target the potential desire to have a child. The publicity series was successful, leading to a decrease in the quantity of French smokers by 5% in 8 months.
To conclude, this problem is caused by the addictive aspect of smoking but can be resolved thanks to the use of publicity strategies.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
It can be noticed that the dangers of consuming cigarettes are well-announced, yet many individuals continue to smoke. This essay will present the cause of this trend as well as suggest the augmentation of campaigns that would talk about the risks related to smoking.
Some believe that stopping their smoking habit will lead to unbearable withdrawal of nicotine. Furthermore, even if the said population knows about the impact it has on the body, the withdrawal caused by nicotine addiction leads to important mood swings and terrible pain, which no one wants to deal with. For instance, a study led by Harvard University in 2021 in China, the country with the largest population of smokers, showed that 60% of the surveyed Chinese are well aware of the consequences on their bodies, yet they express the need to satisfy their nicotine cravings.
An effective solution to this problem would revolve around the creation of a campaign. Moreover, creating publicities is a good way to have an impact on individuals since marketing strategies use sociological approaches in order to influence any opinion. This solution could help in having an influence on those who have a smoking addiction. For example, in 2017, the French government launched a campaign called “Look at the Kid”. The purpose was to impact couples that smoked and target the potential desire to have a child. The publicity series was successful, leading to a decrease in the quantity of French smokers by 5% in 8 months.
To conclude, this problem is caused by the addictive aspect of smoking but can be resolved thanks to the use of publicity strategies.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
It can be noticed that the dangers of consuming cigarettes are well-announced, yet many individuals continue to smoke. This essay will present the cause of this trend as well as suggest the augmentation of campaigns that would talk about the risks related to smoking.
Some believe that stopping their smoking habit will lead to unbearable withdrawal of nicotine. Furthermore, even if the said population knows about the impact it has on the body, the withdrawal caused by nicotine addiction leads to important mood swings and terrible pain, which no one wants to deal with. For instance, a study led by Harvard University in 2021 in China, the country with the largest population of smokers, showed that 60% of the surveyed Chinese are well aware of the consequences on their bodies, yet they express the need to satisfy their nicotine cravings.
An effective solution to this problem would revolve around the creation of a campaign. Moreover, creating publicities is a good way to have an impact on individuals since marketing strategies use sociological approaches in order to influence any opinion. This solution could help in having an influence on those who have a smoking addiction. For example, in 2017, the French government launched a campaign called “Look at the Kid”. The purpose was to impact couples that smoked and target the potential desire to have a child. The publicity series was successful, leading to a decrease in the quantity of French smokers by 5% in 8 months.
To conclude, this problem is caused by the addictive aspect of smoking but can be resolved thanks to the use of publicity strategies.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers. What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?
Anwser:
In this day and age, it is considered by a plethora of individuals that, elders have difficulty acclimating to new high-tech devices. The main cause of this is the novel nature of the technology revolution and the best solutions involve education.
To begin with, the elderly have trouble catching up with new developments in technology because computers and the internet are fundamentally novel. Furthermore, laptops require a skill set that is completely foreign to humans who did not grow up in the last 30 years. To utilize these kinds of gadgets, one must be able to type, set up online accounts, recall passwords, troubleshoot IT problems and navigate both the internet and a wide range of internet-based apps. For those born into the internet era, this is all second nature, but for others, the learning curve is often too steep. The simple process of turning on these sorts of appliances and locating programs exploiting an unfamiliar interface can be overwhelming and serves as the principal, initial barrier.
On the other hand, the best solutions for this relate to education. Firstly, older people who are still working require special training programs and patience from their employers and themselves. Competence is likely given detailed instructions and enough time to practice. Secondly, a great deal of retired citizens want to spend more time with their kids, grandchildren and old friends, but it can be difficult to travel, particularly if they live far apart. Old-timers would be enormously motivated to make video calls and keep in touch with familiar ones with applications like Skype, Facetime and so on. Through simple instructions from family members, it is possible that video-conferencing could become a routine task.
In a nutshell, elders today often can not understand the machinery because it is a seismic shift in perspective and the solutions involve patient training at work and home. In this way, the benefits of technology can be extended to a generation that missed out on them in their youth.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers. What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?
Anwser:
In this day and age, it is considered by a plethora of individuals that, elders have difficulty acclimating to new high-tech devices. The main cause of this is the novel nature of the technology revolution and the best solutions involve education.
To begin with, the elderly have trouble catching up with new developments in technology because computers and the internet are fundamentally novel. Furthermore, laptops require a skill set that is completely foreign to humans who did not grow up in the last 30 years. To utilize these kinds of gadgets, one must be able to type, set up online accounts, recall passwords, troubleshoot IT problems and navigate both the internet and a wide range of internet-based apps. For those born into the internet era, this is all second nature, but for others, the learning curve is often too steep. The simple process of turning on these sorts of appliances and locating programs exploiting an unfamiliar interface can be overwhelming and serves as the principal, initial barrier.
On the other hand, the best solutions for this relate to education. Firstly, older people who are still working require special training programs and patience from their employers and themselves. Competence is likely given detailed instructions and enough time to practice. Secondly, a great deal of retired citizens want to spend more time with their kids, grandchildren and old friends, but it can be difficult to travel, particularly if they live far apart. Old-timers would be enormously motivated to make video calls and keep in touch with familiar ones with applications like Skype, Facetime and so on. Through simple instructions from family members, it is possible that video-conferencing could become a routine task.
In a nutshell, elders today often can not understand the machinery because it is a seismic shift in perspective and the solutions involve patient training at work and home. In this way, the benefits of technology can be extended to a generation that missed out on them in their youth.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers. What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?
Anwser:
In this day and age, it is considered by a plethora of individuals that, elders have difficulty acclimating to new high-tech devices. The main cause of this is the novel nature of the technology revolution and the best solutions involve education.
To begin with, the elderly have trouble catching up with new developments in technology because computers and the internet are fundamentally novel. Furthermore, laptops require a skill set that is completely foreign to humans who did not grow up in the last 30 years. To utilize these kinds of gadgets, one must be able to type, set up online accounts, recall passwords, troubleshoot IT problems and navigate both the internet and a wide range of internet-based apps. For those born into the internet era, this is all second nature, but for others, the learning curve is often too steep. The simple process of turning on these sorts of appliances and locating programs exploiting an unfamiliar interface can be overwhelming and serves as the principal, initial barrier.
On the other hand, the best solutions for this relate to education. Firstly, older people who are still working require special training programs and patience from their employers and themselves. Competence is likely given detailed instructions and enough time to practice. Secondly, a great deal of retired citizens want to spend more time with their kids, grandchildren and old friends, but it can be difficult to travel, particularly if they live far apart. Old-timers would be enormously motivated to make video calls and keep in touch with familiar ones with applications like Skype, Facetime and so on. Through simple instructions from family members, it is possible that video-conferencing could become a routine task.
In a nutshell, elders today often can not understand the machinery because it is a seismic shift in perspective and the solutions involve patient training at work and home. In this way, the benefits of technology can be extended to a generation that missed out on them in their youth.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers. What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?
Anwser:
In this day and age, it is considered by a plethora of individuals that, elders have difficulty acclimating to new high-tech devices. The main cause of this is the novel nature of the technology revolution and the best solutions involve education.
To begin with, the elderly have trouble catching up with new developments in technology because computers and the internet are fundamentally novel. Furthermore, laptops require a skill set that is completely foreign to humans who did not grow up in the last 30 years. To utilize these kinds of gadgets, one must be able to type, set up online accounts, recall passwords, troubleshoot IT problems and navigate both the internet and a wide range of internet-based apps. For those born into the internet era, this is all second nature, but for others, the learning curve is often too steep. The simple process of turning on these sorts of appliances and locating programs exploiting an unfamiliar interface can be overwhelming and serves as the principal, initial barrier.
On the other hand, the best solutions for this relate to education. Firstly, older people who are still working require special training programs and patience from their employers and themselves. Competence is likely given detailed instructions and enough time to practice. Secondly, a great deal of retired citizens want to spend more time with their kids, grandchildren and old friends, but it can be difficult to travel, particularly if they live far apart. Old-timers would be enormously motivated to make video calls and keep in touch with familiar ones with applications like Skype, Facetime and so on. Through simple instructions from family members, it is possible that video-conferencing could become a routine task.
In a nutshell, elders today often can not understand the machinery because it is a seismic shift in perspective and the solutions involve patient training at work and home. In this way, the benefits of technology can be extended to a generation that missed out on them in their youth.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases. This is one reason that people are living longer lives now than in the past. Discuss the effects this might have on society.
Support your answer with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Anwser:
In our fast-paced society, advancements in technology have made it easy to fight against grave illnesses. Some societies have a notion that it can result in increased quality of life and people live longer compared to the past. In the forthcoming paragraphs, this essay will delve into the salient impacts that modern science has on individuals and societies as a whole.
First and foremost, it is evident that we live in a digital and modernized world. Thus, all the things that surround us develop constantly and these improvements have wide-ranging effects on healthcare, like in all fields. Initially, robots can participate in delicate surgeries, reducing the risk of human error and increasing patient outcomes. Furthermore, today, more and more laboratories have a plethora of experiments to generate and improve the quality of medicines.
There is no doubt that the consequences of modern medical science are manifold and invaluable. Hence, the enhancements in healthcare can directly affect people, providing them with fast and painless services. Perhaps an eminent example of this would be the surgeries when the doctors use lasers and they make operations less painful, diminishing the time required to heal. Additionally, the potential positive results from the medicine trials may pave the way for accelerating the healing process.
In conclusion, after having meticulously discussed this phenomenon, it is important to emphasize that the good repercussions of modern science on medical care are far-reaching and cannot be ignored. Scientists should continue their practices on medicines and technology to stave off diseases, mitigating the dire ramifications of traditional medicine while protecting the posterity from possible threats.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases. This is one reason that people are living longer lives now than in the past. Discuss the effects this might have on society.
Support your answer with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Anwser:
In our fast-paced society, advancements in technology have made it easy to fight against grave illnesses. Some societies have a notion that it can result in increased quality of life and people live longer compared to the past. In the forthcoming paragraphs, this essay will delve into the salient impacts that modern science has on individuals and societies as a whole.
First and foremost, it is evident that we live in a digital and modernized world. Thus, all the things that surround us develop constantly and these improvements have wide-ranging effects on healthcare, like in all fields. Initially, robots can participate in delicate surgeries, reducing the risk of human error and increasing patient outcomes. Furthermore, today, more and more laboratories have a plethora of experiments to generate and improve the quality of medicines.
There is no doubt that the consequences of modern medical science are manifold and invaluable. Hence, the enhancements in healthcare can directly affect people, providing them with fast and painless services. Perhaps an eminent example of this would be the surgeries when the doctors use lasers and they make operations less painful, diminishing the time required to heal. Additionally, the potential positive results from the medicine trials may pave the way for accelerating the healing process.
In conclusion, after having meticulously discussed this phenomenon, it is important to emphasize that the good repercussions of modern science on medical care are far-reaching and cannot be ignored. Scientists should continue their practices on medicines and technology to stave off diseases, mitigating the dire ramifications of traditional medicine while protecting the posterity from possible threats.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases. This is one reason that people are living longer lives now than in the past. Discuss the effects this might have on society.
Support your answer with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Anwser:
In our fast-paced society, advancements in technology have made it easy to fight against grave illnesses. Some societies have a notion that it can result in increased quality of life and people live longer compared to the past. In the forthcoming paragraphs, this essay will delve into the salient impacts that modern science has on individuals and societies as a whole.
First and foremost, it is evident that we live in a digital and modernized world. Thus, all the things that surround us develop constantly and these improvements have wide-ranging effects on healthcare, like in all fields. Initially, robots can participate in delicate surgeries, reducing the risk of human error and increasing patient outcomes. Furthermore, today, more and more laboratories have a plethora of experiments to generate and improve the quality of medicines.
There is no doubt that the consequences of modern medical science are manifold and invaluable. Hence, the enhancements in healthcare can directly affect people, providing them with fast and painless services. Perhaps an eminent example of this would be the surgeries when the doctors use lasers and they make operations less painful, diminishing the time required to heal. Additionally, the potential positive results from the medicine trials may pave the way for accelerating the healing process.
In conclusion, after having meticulously discussed this phenomenon, it is important to emphasize that the good repercussions of modern science on medical care are far-reaching and cannot be ignored. Scientists should continue their practices on medicines and technology to stave off diseases, mitigating the dire ramifications of traditional medicine while protecting the posterity from possible threats.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases. This is one reason that people are living longer lives now than in the past. Discuss the effects this might have on society.
Support your answer with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Anwser:
In our fast-paced society, advancements in technology have made it easy to fight against grave illnesses. Some societies have a notion that it can result in increased quality of life and people live longer compared to the past. In the forthcoming paragraphs, this essay will delve into the salient impacts that modern science has on individuals and societies as a whole.
First and foremost, it is evident that we live in a digital and modernized world. Thus, all the things that surround us develop constantly and these improvements have wide-ranging effects on healthcare, like in all fields. Initially, robots can participate in delicate surgeries, reducing the risk of human error and increasing patient outcomes. Furthermore, today, more and more laboratories have a plethora of experiments to generate and improve the quality of medicines.
There is no doubt that the consequences of modern medical science are manifold and invaluable. Hence, the enhancements in healthcare can directly affect people, providing them with fast and painless services. Perhaps an eminent example of this would be the surgeries when the doctors use lasers and they make operations less painful, diminishing the time required to heal. Additionally, the potential positive results from the medicine trials may pave the way for accelerating the healing process.
In conclusion, after having meticulously discussed this phenomenon, it is important to emphasize that the good repercussions of modern science on medical care are far-reaching and cannot be ignored. Scientists should continue their practices on medicines and technology to stave off diseases, mitigating the dire ramifications of traditional medicine while protecting the posterity from possible threats.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
The last 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the number of marriages in lower ages even from 8 or 9. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether it is better to settle down at an earlier age or leave it after 21. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay, I would contend that working on goals and postponing marriage even after 25 would lead to more successful and happier consequences.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that rather than concentrating on getting married at a younger age, determining goals and working hard to achieve them should be a priority in humans’ lives. In order to have a more successful marriage, gaining skills or academic education related to the dream job, which enables individuals to have a higher salary and a wealthy life is more advisable. Otherwise, it would lead to economic dependency on parents, which, contributes to unappealing feelings and loss of confidence.
Secondly and even more importantly, though, is the fact that due to the lack of knowledge and experience, starting a family from less than 21 years old would result in disadvantageous ramifications. According to the statistics, the number of divorces among couples less than 25 was 10 times higher than those higher than 25 in 2021 in Iran country. So, before getting married, gaining a job and engaging in social life would lead to the expansion of the horizon of thinking and opting more logically in the process of marriage.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that although settling down from under 21 would be accompanied by some benefits, the irreparable drawbacks seen in most cases are incomparable with those benefits. Thus, regulating a legal age for marriage would contribute to the advancement of societies.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
The last 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the number of marriages in lower ages even from 8 or 9. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether it is better to settle down at an earlier age or leave it after 21. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay, I would contend that working on goals and postponing marriage even after 25 would lead to more successful and happier consequences.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that rather than concentrating on getting married at a younger age, determining goals and working hard to achieve them should be a priority in humans’ lives. In order to have a more successful marriage, gaining skills or academic education related to the dream job, which enables individuals to have a higher salary and a wealthy life is more advisable. Otherwise, it would lead to economic dependency on parents, which, contributes to unappealing feelings and loss of confidence.
Secondly and even more importantly, though, is the fact that due to the lack of knowledge and experience, starting a family from less than 21 years old would result in disadvantageous ramifications. According to the statistics, the number of divorces among couples less than 25 was 10 times higher than those higher than 25 in 2021 in Iran country. So, before getting married, gaining a job and engaging in social life would lead to the expansion of the horizon of thinking and opting more logically in the process of marriage.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that although settling down from under 21 would be accompanied by some benefits, the irreparable drawbacks seen in most cases are incomparable with those benefits. Thus, regulating a legal age for marriage would contribute to the advancement of societies.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
The last 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the number of marriages in lower ages even from 8 or 9. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether it is better to settle down at an earlier age or leave it after 21. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay, I would contend that working on goals and postponing marriage even after 25 would lead to more successful and happier consequences.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that rather than concentrating on getting married at a younger age, determining goals and working hard to achieve them should be a priority in humans’ lives. In order to have a more successful marriage, gaining skills or academic education related to the dream job, which enables individuals to have a higher salary and a wealthy life is more advisable. Otherwise, it would lead to economic dependency on parents, which, contributes to unappealing feelings and loss of confidence.
Secondly and even more importantly, though, is the fact that due to the lack of knowledge and experience, starting a family from less than 21 years old would result in disadvantageous ramifications. According to the statistics, the number of divorces among couples less than 25 was 10 times higher than those higher than 25 in 2021 in Iran country. So, before getting married, gaining a job and engaging in social life would lead to the expansion of the horizon of thinking and opting more logically in the process of marriage.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that although settling down from under 21 would be accompanied by some benefits, the irreparable drawbacks seen in most cases are incomparable with those benefits. Thus, regulating a legal age for marriage would contribute to the advancement of societies.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
The last 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the number of marriages in lower ages even from 8 or 9. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether it is better to settle down at an earlier age or leave it after 21. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay, I would contend that working on goals and postponing marriage even after 25 would lead to more successful and happier consequences.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that rather than concentrating on getting married at a younger age, determining goals and working hard to achieve them should be a priority in humans’ lives. In order to have a more successful marriage, gaining skills or academic education related to the dream job, which enables individuals to have a higher salary and a wealthy life is more advisable. Otherwise, it would lead to economic dependency on parents, which, contributes to unappealing feelings and loss of confidence.
Secondly and even more importantly, though, is the fact that due to the lack of knowledge and experience, starting a family from less than 21 years old would result in disadvantageous ramifications. According to the statistics, the number of divorces among couples less than 25 was 10 times higher than those higher than 25 in 2021 in Iran country. So, before getting married, gaining a job and engaging in social life would lead to the expansion of the horizon of thinking and opting more logically in the process of marriage.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that although settling down from under 21 would be accompanied by some benefits, the irreparable drawbacks seen in most cases are incomparable with those benefits. Thus, regulating a legal age for marriage would contribute to the advancement of societies.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extend do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
Anwser:
The last 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the longevity of humans in various parts of the world. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether this is a positive or negative trend. While there are valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay I would contend that the advantages of the ageing population are incomparable with its drawbacks. Two of the primary reasons for this are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that providing the opportunity to utilize these generations’ experiences in various aspects of managing a country could be accounted as an invaluable asset. According to the statistics, a salient example of this could be Japan country, which, rehires retired individuals in more prominent management positions in order to gain the most efficient benefits. So rather than viewing them as outdated people, providing the opportunity to implement their worthwhile ideas would contribute to benefit the whole country.
Yet perhaps the strongest argument in favour of this opinion is the fact that despite the expenses spent for their treatment or their insurance, they could play a supportive role for their children and grandchildren. As the expenditure of life has soared in recent years and both parents have to work in order to afford the costs of life, grandparents could take the responsibility of caring for their children. So, implementing more effectively at work is more likely as worries related to the care of children are alleviated by the support of elders.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the ageing population is accounted as the grace of god. Thus, rather than neglecting them as hassles to governments, they have significant potential for the advancement of societies.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extend do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
Anwser:
The last 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the longevity of humans in various parts of the world. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether this is a positive or negative trend. While there are valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay I would contend that the advantages of the ageing population are incomparable with its drawbacks. Two of the primary reasons for this are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that providing the opportunity to utilize these generations’ experiences in various aspects of managing a country could be accounted as an invaluable asset. According to the statistics, a salient example of this could be Japan country, which, rehires retired individuals in more prominent management positions in order to gain the most efficient benefits. So rather than viewing them as outdated people, providing the opportunity to implement their worthwhile ideas would contribute to benefit the whole country.
Yet perhaps the strongest argument in favour of this opinion is the fact that despite the expenses spent for their treatment or their insurance, they could play a supportive role for their children and grandchildren. As the expenditure of life has soared in recent years and both parents have to work in order to afford the costs of life, grandparents could take the responsibility of caring for their children. So, implementing more effectively at work is more likely as worries related to the care of children are alleviated by the support of elders.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the ageing population is accounted as the grace of god. Thus, rather than neglecting them as hassles to governments, they have significant potential for the advancement of societies.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extend do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
Anwser:
The last 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the longevity of humans in various parts of the world. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether this is a positive or negative trend. While there are valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay I would contend that the advantages of the ageing population are incomparable with its drawbacks. Two of the primary reasons for this are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that providing the opportunity to utilize these generations’ experiences in various aspects of managing a country could be accounted as an invaluable asset. According to the statistics, a salient example of this could be Japan country, which, rehires retired individuals in more prominent management positions in order to gain the most efficient benefits. So rather than viewing them as outdated people, providing the opportunity to implement their worthwhile ideas would contribute to benefit the whole country.
Yet perhaps the strongest argument in favour of this opinion is the fact that despite the expenses spent for their treatment or their insurance, they could play a supportive role for their children and grandchildren. As the expenditure of life has soared in recent years and both parents have to work in order to afford the costs of life, grandparents could take the responsibility of caring for their children. So, implementing more effectively at work is more likely as worries related to the care of children are alleviated by the support of elders.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the ageing population is accounted as the grace of god. Thus, rather than neglecting them as hassles to governments, they have significant potential for the advancement of societies.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extend do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
Anwser:
The last 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the longevity of humans in various parts of the world. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether this is a positive or negative trend. While there are valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay I would contend that the advantages of the ageing population are incomparable with its drawbacks. Two of the primary reasons for this are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that providing the opportunity to utilize these generations’ experiences in various aspects of managing a country could be accounted as an invaluable asset. According to the statistics, a salient example of this could be Japan country, which, rehires retired individuals in more prominent management positions in order to gain the most efficient benefits. So rather than viewing them as outdated people, providing the opportunity to implement their worthwhile ideas would contribute to benefit the whole country.
Yet perhaps the strongest argument in favour of this opinion is the fact that despite the expenses spent for their treatment or their insurance, they could play a supportive role for their children and grandchildren. As the expenditure of life has soared in recent years and both parents have to work in order to afford the costs of life, grandparents could take the responsibility of caring for their children. So, implementing more effectively at work is more likely as worries related to the care of children are alleviated by the support of elders.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the ageing population is accounted as the grace of god. Thus, rather than neglecting them as hassles to governments, they have significant potential for the advancement of societies.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?
Anwser:
In this day and age, it is considered by a plethora of individuals that, a good deal of schools have made uniforms obligatory. However, there are plenty of schools where students are allowed to dress what they want. In this following essay, I shall express the merits and demerits of wearing a uniform.
To begin with, there are several examples of this statement. The prime advantages are the elimination of social and economic differences and instilling discipline. First and foremost, when all the students wear the same clothes, they look alike and a sense of equality is created among them. For instance, with the same dress code, it becomes sophisticated for others to know the social and economic status of kids. This saves poor juniors from bullying or partiality. Secondly, it helps to instil discipline in children because the dress costume obliges them to comply with the rules and regulations of an academy. As an example, if a student is found smoking or wearing a school uniform, then they can be punished as per the academy's regulations as this implies that the act was committed even after being aware of the regulations.
On the other hand, there are a great deal of ideas for this viewpoint. The foremost disadvantage is that it suppresses the kid's creativity and individuality. It is widely accepted that creativity is needed in every sphere of life to be successful. A youngster needs to create a bridge between creativity and knowledge to discover something new. For example, kids will not be able to highlight themselves and experiment and they will lose out on thinking out of the box. Multiple studies prove that the mandatory status of uniforms may turn children into passive youth who cannot express themselves via their dressing style. Therefore, it is significant to enhance creativity and individuality while their personalities are still developing.
In a nutshell, putting on a school uniform can be beneficial as it allows to diminish the social and economic divides. In addition, it should not be forgotten that it limits the creativity of a young mind.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?
Anwser:
In this day and age, it is considered by a plethora of individuals that, a good deal of schools have made uniforms obligatory. However, there are plenty of schools where students are allowed to dress what they want. In this following essay, I shall express the merits and demerits of wearing a uniform.
To begin with, there are several examples of this statement. The prime advantages are the elimination of social and economic differences and instilling discipline. First and foremost, when all the students wear the same clothes, they look alike and a sense of equality is created among them. For instance, with the same dress code, it becomes sophisticated for others to know the social and economic status of kids. This saves poor juniors from bullying or partiality. Secondly, it helps to instil discipline in children because the dress costume obliges them to comply with the rules and regulations of an academy. As an example, if a student is found smoking or wearing a school uniform, then they can be punished as per the academy's regulations as this implies that the act was committed even after being aware of the regulations.
On the other hand, there are a great deal of ideas for this viewpoint. The foremost disadvantage is that it suppresses the kid's creativity and individuality. It is widely accepted that creativity is needed in every sphere of life to be successful. A youngster needs to create a bridge between creativity and knowledge to discover something new. For example, kids will not be able to highlight themselves and experiment and they will lose out on thinking out of the box. Multiple studies prove that the mandatory status of uniforms may turn children into passive youth who cannot express themselves via their dressing style. Therefore, it is significant to enhance creativity and individuality while their personalities are still developing.
In a nutshell, putting on a school uniform can be beneficial as it allows to diminish the social and economic divides. In addition, it should not be forgotten that it limits the creativity of a young mind.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?
Anwser:
In this day and age, it is considered by a plethora of individuals that, a good deal of schools have made uniforms obligatory. However, there are plenty of schools where students are allowed to dress what they want. In this following essay, I shall express the merits and demerits of wearing a uniform.
To begin with, there are several examples of this statement. The prime advantages are the elimination of social and economic differences and instilling discipline. First and foremost, when all the students wear the same clothes, they look alike and a sense of equality is created among them. For instance, with the same dress code, it becomes sophisticated for others to know the social and economic status of kids. This saves poor juniors from bullying or partiality. Secondly, it helps to instil discipline in children because the dress costume obliges them to comply with the rules and regulations of an academy. As an example, if a student is found smoking or wearing a school uniform, then they can be punished as per the academy's regulations as this implies that the act was committed even after being aware of the regulations.
On the other hand, there are a great deal of ideas for this viewpoint. The foremost disadvantage is that it suppresses the kid's creativity and individuality. It is widely accepted that creativity is needed in every sphere of life to be successful. A youngster needs to create a bridge between creativity and knowledge to discover something new. For example, kids will not be able to highlight themselves and experiment and they will lose out on thinking out of the box. Multiple studies prove that the mandatory status of uniforms may turn children into passive youth who cannot express themselves via their dressing style. Therefore, it is significant to enhance creativity and individuality while their personalities are still developing.
In a nutshell, putting on a school uniform can be beneficial as it allows to diminish the social and economic divides. In addition, it should not be forgotten that it limits the creativity of a young mind.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?
Anwser:
In this day and age, it is considered by a plethora of individuals that, a good deal of schools have made uniforms obligatory. However, there are plenty of schools where students are allowed to dress what they want. In this following essay, I shall express the merits and demerits of wearing a uniform.
To begin with, there are several examples of this statement. The prime advantages are the elimination of social and economic differences and instilling discipline. First and foremost, when all the students wear the same clothes, they look alike and a sense of equality is created among them. For instance, with the same dress code, it becomes sophisticated for others to know the social and economic status of kids. This saves poor juniors from bullying or partiality. Secondly, it helps to instil discipline in children because the dress costume obliges them to comply with the rules and regulations of an academy. As an example, if a student is found smoking or wearing a school uniform, then they can be punished as per the academy's regulations as this implies that the act was committed even after being aware of the regulations.
On the other hand, there are a great deal of ideas for this viewpoint. The foremost disadvantage is that it suppresses the kid's creativity and individuality. It is widely accepted that creativity is needed in every sphere of life to be successful. A youngster needs to create a bridge between creativity and knowledge to discover something new. For example, kids will not be able to highlight themselves and experiment and they will lose out on thinking out of the box. Multiple studies prove that the mandatory status of uniforms may turn children into passive youth who cannot express themselves via their dressing style. Therefore, it is significant to enhance creativity and individuality while their personalities are still developing.
In a nutshell, putting on a school uniform can be beneficial as it allows to diminish the social and economic divides. In addition, it should not be forgotten that it limits the creativity of a young mind.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Due to availability of fast food nowadays, many people have low-quality diets. What problem can this cause? What can governments do to resolve these problems?
Anwser:
Some individuals have improper diets due to easy reach to fast food meals. This leads to some difficulties and this essay will discuss its reasons and solutions.
On the one hand, it is generally acknowledged that widespread colourful advertisements of fast food absorb citizens' attention , especially the younger generation. They tend to use whatever they find trend by seeing its adverts. Additionally, a lack of information about the negative points of fast food can be another cause of people's unhealthy choices. As a matter of fact, fast food manufacturers do not attempt to inform their customers about the inadequate quality of their products. For instance, the high amount of fat in fast food which will bring obesity is not mentioned anywhere in users' information.
On the other hand, it is self-evident that governments must prepare some TV programs and environmental adverts to reintroduce traditional food to the younger generation and encourage them to choose healthier alternatives. If high-quality food had as much advertisement as fast food, it would definitely attract customers' attention. Moreover, writing about the harmful factors of each kind of fast food on the pack in order to inform people about the long-term effects on their health will let them choose their diet wisely. A point in view is the sentence on the pack of cigarettes which is written: "This product has different materials that are harmful to your health, try not to use it".
Consequently, dwellers' preference to eat fast food rather than traditional and healthy food has some reasons why authorities must take necessary actions to persuade people to choose the best alternative. This essay checked some causes and introduced proper solutions which can be done to increase society's health standards.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Due to availability of fast food nowadays, many people have low-quality diets. What problem can this cause? What can governments do to resolve these problems?
Anwser:
Some individuals have improper diets due to easy reach to fast food meals. This leads to some difficulties and this essay will discuss its reasons and solutions.
On the one hand, it is generally acknowledged that widespread colourful advertisements of fast food absorb citizens' attention , especially the younger generation. They tend to use whatever they find trend by seeing its adverts. Additionally, a lack of information about the negative points of fast food can be another cause of people's unhealthy choices. As a matter of fact, fast food manufacturers do not attempt to inform their customers about the inadequate quality of their products. For instance, the high amount of fat in fast food which will bring obesity is not mentioned anywhere in users' information.
On the other hand, it is self-evident that governments must prepare some TV programs and environmental adverts to reintroduce traditional food to the younger generation and encourage them to choose healthier alternatives. If high-quality food had as much advertisement as fast food, it would definitely attract customers' attention. Moreover, writing about the harmful factors of each kind of fast food on the pack in order to inform people about the long-term effects on their health will let them choose their diet wisely. A point in view is the sentence on the pack of cigarettes which is written: "This product has different materials that are harmful to your health, try not to use it".
Consequently, dwellers' preference to eat fast food rather than traditional and healthy food has some reasons why authorities must take necessary actions to persuade people to choose the best alternative. This essay checked some causes and introduced proper solutions which can be done to increase society's health standards.
Your lexical resource score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Due to availability of fast food nowadays, many people have low-quality diets. What problem can this cause? What can governments do to resolve these problems?
Anwser:
Some individuals have improper diets due to easy reach to fast food meals. This leads to some difficulties and this essay will discuss its reasons and solutions.
On the one hand, it is generally acknowledged that widespread colourful advertisements of fast food absorb citizens' attention , especially the younger generation. They tend to use whatever they find trend by seeing its adverts. Additionally, a lack of information about the negative points of fast food can be another cause of people's unhealthy choices. As a matter of fact, fast food manufacturers do not attempt to inform their customers about the inadequate quality of their products. For instance, the high amount of fat in fast food which will bring obesity is not mentioned anywhere in users' information.
On the other hand, it is self-evident that governments must prepare some TV programs and environmental adverts to reintroduce traditional food to the younger generation and encourage them to choose healthier alternatives. If high-quality food had as much advertisement as fast food, it would definitely attract customers' attention. Moreover, writing about the harmful factors of each kind of fast food on the pack in order to inform people about the long-term effects on their health will let them choose their diet wisely. A point in view is the sentence on the pack of cigarettes which is written: "This product has different materials that are harmful to your health, try not to use it".
Consequently, dwellers' preference to eat fast food rather than traditional and healthy food has some reasons why authorities must take necessary actions to persuade people to choose the best alternative. This essay checked some causes and introduced proper solutions which can be done to increase society's health standards.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Due to availability of fast food nowadays, many people have low-quality diets. What problem can this cause? What can governments do to resolve these problems?
Anwser:
Some individuals have improper diets due to easy reach to fast food meals. This leads to some difficulties and this essay will discuss its reasons and solutions.
On the one hand, it is generally acknowledged that widespread colourful advertisements of fast food absorb citizens' attention , especially the younger generation. They tend to use whatever they find trend by seeing its adverts. Additionally, a lack of information about the negative points of fast food can be another cause of people's unhealthy choices. As a matter of fact, fast food manufacturers do not attempt to inform their customers about the inadequate quality of their products. For instance, the high amount of fat in fast food which will bring obesity is not mentioned anywhere in users' information.
On the other hand, it is self-evident that governments must prepare some TV programs and environmental adverts to reintroduce traditional food to the younger generation and encourage them to choose healthier alternatives. If high-quality food had as much advertisement as fast food, it would definitely attract customers' attention. Moreover, writing about the harmful factors of each kind of fast food on the pack in order to inform people about the long-term effects on their health will let them choose their diet wisely. A point in view is the sentence on the pack of cigarettes which is written: "This product has different materials that are harmful to your health, try not to use it".
Consequently, dwellers' preference to eat fast food rather than traditional and healthy food has some reasons why authorities must take necessary actions to persuade people to choose the best alternative. This essay checked some causes and introduced proper solutions which can be done to increase society's health standards.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or the building they live in
Anwser:
In recent years, a noticeable trend has emerged in several nations, wherein a growing number of individuals are exhibiting keen interest in uncovering the historical significance of the houses or buildings they inhabit. This surge in curiosity can be attributed to several factors. Primarily, the desire to connect with the past and understand the lineage of one's dwelling plays a pivotal role in driving this inclination. By delving into the history of their homes, people seek to establish a sense of belonging and identity rooted in the narratives of previous occupants and the surrounding community. Moreover, the resurgence of architectural appreciation has fueled this trend. With an increased appreciation for craftsmanship and design, individuals are motivated to explore the origins of their residences, thereby gaining insight into the architectural evolution of their locality. Furthermore, the advent of technology has facilitated easy access to historical records and archives, enabling people to embark on comprehensive research journeys from the comfort of their homes. Online databases, digitized records, and virtual tours offer invaluable resources for individuals eager to unravel the past of their dwellings. To delve deeper into the history of their houses or buildings, people can employ various research methodologies. This may involve consulting local archives, historical societies, or municipal records to unearth documents such as property deeds, census data, or architectural plans. Additionally, engaging with local historians, conducting interviews with previous occupants, or utilizing genealogical resources can provide valuable insights into the lineage and anecdotes associated with the residence. In conclusion, the burgeoning interest in investigating the history of residences stems from a desire for connection, architectural appreciation, and technological advancements. Through meticulous research efforts, individuals can unravel the rich tapestry of narratives embedded within the walls of their homes, fostering a deeper appreciation for their heritage and sense of place.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or the building they live in
Anwser:
In recent years, a noticeable trend has emerged in several nations, wherein a growing number of individuals are exhibiting keen interest in uncovering the historical significance of the houses or buildings they inhabit. This surge in curiosity can be attributed to several factors. Primarily, the desire to connect with the past and understand the lineage of one's dwelling plays a pivotal role in driving this inclination. By delving into the history of their homes, people seek to establish a sense of belonging and identity rooted in the narratives of previous occupants and the surrounding community. Moreover, the resurgence of architectural appreciation has fueled this trend. With an increased appreciation for craftsmanship and design, individuals are motivated to explore the origins of their residences, thereby gaining insight into the architectural evolution of their locality. Furthermore, the advent of technology has facilitated easy access to historical records and archives, enabling people to embark on comprehensive research journeys from the comfort of their homes. Online databases, digitized records, and virtual tours offer invaluable resources for individuals eager to unravel the past of their dwellings. To delve deeper into the history of their houses or buildings, people can employ various research methodologies. This may involve consulting local archives, historical societies, or municipal records to unearth documents such as property deeds, census data, or architectural plans. Additionally, engaging with local historians, conducting interviews with previous occupants, or utilizing genealogical resources can provide valuable insights into the lineage and anecdotes associated with the residence. In conclusion, the burgeoning interest in investigating the history of residences stems from a desire for connection, architectural appreciation, and technological advancements. Through meticulous research efforts, individuals can unravel the rich tapestry of narratives embedded within the walls of their homes, fostering a deeper appreciation for their heritage and sense of place.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or the building they live in
Anwser:
In recent years, a noticeable trend has emerged in several nations, wherein a growing number of individuals are exhibiting keen interest in uncovering the historical significance of the houses or buildings they inhabit. This surge in curiosity can be attributed to several factors. Primarily, the desire to connect with the past and understand the lineage of one's dwelling plays a pivotal role in driving this inclination. By delving into the history of their homes, people seek to establish a sense of belonging and identity rooted in the narratives of previous occupants and the surrounding community. Moreover, the resurgence of architectural appreciation has fueled this trend. With an increased appreciation for craftsmanship and design, individuals are motivated to explore the origins of their residences, thereby gaining insight into the architectural evolution of their locality. Furthermore, the advent of technology has facilitated easy access to historical records and archives, enabling people to embark on comprehensive research journeys from the comfort of their homes. Online databases, digitized records, and virtual tours offer invaluable resources for individuals eager to unravel the past of their dwellings. To delve deeper into the history of their houses or buildings, people can employ various research methodologies. This may involve consulting local archives, historical societies, or municipal records to unearth documents such as property deeds, census data, or architectural plans. Additionally, engaging with local historians, conducting interviews with previous occupants, or utilizing genealogical resources can provide valuable insights into the lineage and anecdotes associated with the residence. In conclusion, the burgeoning interest in investigating the history of residences stems from a desire for connection, architectural appreciation, and technological advancements. Through meticulous research efforts, individuals can unravel the rich tapestry of narratives embedded within the walls of their homes, fostering a deeper appreciation for their heritage and sense of place.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or the building they live in
Anwser:
In recent years, a noticeable trend has emerged in several nations, wherein a growing number of individuals are exhibiting keen interest in uncovering the historical significance of the houses or buildings they inhabit. This surge in curiosity can be attributed to several factors. Primarily, the desire to connect with the past and understand the lineage of one's dwelling plays a pivotal role in driving this inclination. By delving into the history of their homes, people seek to establish a sense of belonging and identity rooted in the narratives of previous occupants and the surrounding community. Moreover, the resurgence of architectural appreciation has fueled this trend. With an increased appreciation for craftsmanship and design, individuals are motivated to explore the origins of their residences, thereby gaining insight into the architectural evolution of their locality. Furthermore, the advent of technology has facilitated easy access to historical records and archives, enabling people to embark on comprehensive research journeys from the comfort of their homes. Online databases, digitized records, and virtual tours offer invaluable resources for individuals eager to unravel the past of their dwellings. To delve deeper into the history of their houses or buildings, people can employ various research methodologies. This may involve consulting local archives, historical societies, or municipal records to unearth documents such as property deeds, census data, or architectural plans. Additionally, engaging with local historians, conducting interviews with previous occupants, or utilizing genealogical resources can provide valuable insights into the lineage and anecdotes associated with the residence. In conclusion, the burgeoning interest in investigating the history of residences stems from a desire for connection, architectural appreciation, and technological advancements. Through meticulous research efforts, individuals can unravel the rich tapestry of narratives embedded within the walls of their homes, fostering a deeper appreciation for their heritage and sense of place.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
The workplace nowadays is trying to employ the equal number of females and males. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In this day and age, more companies are making attempts to recruit and retain the differences between the total of female and male employees to the least. However, in my opinion, it can be possible in some specific fields, and the overwhelming sum of males is inevitable in physical jobs.
On the one hand, I accept that modern workplaces in some domains such as the service industry and paperwork are likely to have equal statistics of male and female workers. In fact, in many organizations these days, more job vacancies are available for girls than in the past, meaning that women nowadays can have the same opportunities as boys to be employed in some positions, even taking leadership. Besides, with outstanding and special human instincts, aesthetic abilities or detail-oriented personalities, for example, girls can even do better than boys in some specific careers, contributing to an increase in the number of ladies in modern workplaces.
On the other hand, I argue that it seems to be challenging and impossible to maintain the equivalent numbers of male and female employees in jobs requiring physical health. As a matter of fact, careers such as astronauts have very high requirements for physical health in order to deal with intensive training and tough conditions without gravity when taking a mission to explore a new planet, so it is likely to be more suitable for guys than females. In addition, regarding some manual work in society such as builders and porters, although a few women can be recruited for these vacancies, the sum of men by far outweighs that of ladies since males seem to be stronger and healthier to do the jobs more efficiently.
In conclusion, maintaining an equal figure of fathers and females in workplaces should be highly recommended, further, I am still more convinced that it can just be feasible in some industries, and with careers whose prerequisite requirement is good health and fitness, it is unavoidable to witness a surpassing figure of persons compared with mothers.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
The workplace nowadays is trying to employ the equal number of females and males. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In this day and age, more companies are making attempts to recruit and retain the differences between the total of female and male employees to the least. However, in my opinion, it can be possible in some specific fields, and the overwhelming sum of males is inevitable in physical jobs.
On the one hand, I accept that modern workplaces in some domains such as the service industry and paperwork are likely to have equal statistics of male and female workers. In fact, in many organizations these days, more job vacancies are available for girls than in the past, meaning that women nowadays can have the same opportunities as boys to be employed in some positions, even taking leadership. Besides, with outstanding and special human instincts, aesthetic abilities or detail-oriented personalities, for example, girls can even do better than boys in some specific careers, contributing to an increase in the number of ladies in modern workplaces.
On the other hand, I argue that it seems to be challenging and impossible to maintain the equivalent numbers of male and female employees in jobs requiring physical health. As a matter of fact, careers such as astronauts have very high requirements for physical health in order to deal with intensive training and tough conditions without gravity when taking a mission to explore a new planet, so it is likely to be more suitable for guys than females. In addition, regarding some manual work in society such as builders and porters, although a few women can be recruited for these vacancies, the sum of men by far outweighs that of ladies since males seem to be stronger and healthier to do the jobs more efficiently.
In conclusion, maintaining an equal figure of fathers and females in workplaces should be highly recommended, further, I am still more convinced that it can just be feasible in some industries, and with careers whose prerequisite requirement is good health and fitness, it is unavoidable to witness a surpassing figure of persons compared with mothers.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
The workplace nowadays is trying to employ the equal number of females and males. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In this day and age, more companies are making attempts to recruit and retain the differences between the total of female and male employees to the least. However, in my opinion, it can be possible in some specific fields, and the overwhelming sum of males is inevitable in physical jobs.
On the one hand, I accept that modern workplaces in some domains such as the service industry and paperwork are likely to have equal statistics of male and female workers. In fact, in many organizations these days, more job vacancies are available for girls than in the past, meaning that women nowadays can have the same opportunities as boys to be employed in some positions, even taking leadership. Besides, with outstanding and special human instincts, aesthetic abilities or detail-oriented personalities, for example, girls can even do better than boys in some specific careers, contributing to an increase in the number of ladies in modern workplaces.
On the other hand, I argue that it seems to be challenging and impossible to maintain the equivalent numbers of male and female employees in jobs requiring physical health. As a matter of fact, careers such as astronauts have very high requirements for physical health in order to deal with intensive training and tough conditions without gravity when taking a mission to explore a new planet, so it is likely to be more suitable for guys than females. In addition, regarding some manual work in society such as builders and porters, although a few women can be recruited for these vacancies, the sum of men by far outweighs that of ladies since males seem to be stronger and healthier to do the jobs more efficiently.
In conclusion, maintaining an equal figure of fathers and females in workplaces should be highly recommended, further, I am still more convinced that it can just be feasible in some industries, and with careers whose prerequisite requirement is good health and fitness, it is unavoidable to witness a surpassing figure of persons compared with mothers.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
The workplace nowadays is trying to employ the equal number of females and males. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In this day and age, more companies are making attempts to recruit and retain the differences between the total of female and male employees to the least. However, in my opinion, it can be possible in some specific fields, and the overwhelming sum of males is inevitable in physical jobs.
On the one hand, I accept that modern workplaces in some domains such as the service industry and paperwork are likely to have equal statistics of male and female workers. In fact, in many organizations these days, more job vacancies are available for girls than in the past, meaning that women nowadays can have the same opportunities as boys to be employed in some positions, even taking leadership. Besides, with outstanding and special human instincts, aesthetic abilities or detail-oriented personalities, for example, girls can even do better than boys in some specific careers, contributing to an increase in the number of ladies in modern workplaces.
On the other hand, I argue that it seems to be challenging and impossible to maintain the equivalent numbers of male and female employees in jobs requiring physical health. As a matter of fact, careers such as astronauts have very high requirements for physical health in order to deal with intensive training and tough conditions without gravity when taking a mission to explore a new planet, so it is likely to be more suitable for guys than females. In addition, regarding some manual work in society such as builders and porters, although a few women can be recruited for these vacancies, the sum of men by far outweighs that of ladies since males seem to be stronger and healthier to do the jobs more efficiently.
In conclusion, maintaining an equal figure of fathers and females in workplaces should be highly recommended, further, I am still more convinced that it can just be feasible in some industries, and with careers whose prerequisite requirement is good health and fitness, it is unavoidable to witness a surpassing figure of persons compared with mothers.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
More and more people want to buy famous brands in clothes cars and other items. What are the reasons behind this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development
Anwser:
A lot of people nowadays are drawn to buying branded things such as vehicles, clothes and bags. Some of the reasons behind this fad is because of the quality of luxury goods and the influence of famous artists and I think that this is a negative development because this can lead to debts.
One of the reasons why many prefer to buy branded material is because of their quality. Despite its expensive price, it can be used for a long time, thus, the consumers get value for their money. In addition to that, artists can influence the choices of the community. Many celebrities are posting their lavish lifestyle on social media and they get many likes from all over the world. That is why their followers tend to follow them because many of them think that it can make them famous as well. For instance, Kylie Jenner is one of the most followed celebrities on Instagram and her followers buy all the expensive brands she posts in the hopes that they get many likes as well.
However, I think that this is a negative development because this may lead to the accumulation of debts. Many populations may feel unsatisfied about their life and they might feel that the only way to be happy is by having luxury finished goods. As a result, they can end up in debt in order to achieve these things. For example, most crowds nowadays are in excessive debt because of buying luxury brands so that other folks think that they are classy. Hence, buying expensive products more than one's financial capacity is not a good thing.
In conclusion, many populations are buying expensive brands for many reasons and some of them are because of the quality and the influence of celebrities. However, I believe that this is a negative development because this can lead to debts.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
More and more people want to buy famous brands in clothes cars and other items. What are the reasons behind this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development
Anwser:
A lot of people nowadays are drawn to buying branded things such as vehicles, clothes and bags. Some of the reasons behind this fad is because of the quality of luxury goods and the influence of famous artists and I think that this is a negative development because this can lead to debts.
One of the reasons why many prefer to buy branded material is because of their quality. Despite its expensive price, it can be used for a long time, thus, the consumers get value for their money. In addition to that, artists can influence the choices of the community. Many celebrities are posting their lavish lifestyle on social media and they get many likes from all over the world. That is why their followers tend to follow them because many of them think that it can make them famous as well. For instance, Kylie Jenner is one of the most followed celebrities on Instagram and her followers buy all the expensive brands she posts in the hopes that they get many likes as well.
However, I think that this is a negative development because this may lead to the accumulation of debts. Many populations may feel unsatisfied about their life and they might feel that the only way to be happy is by having luxury finished goods. As a result, they can end up in debt in order to achieve these things. For example, most crowds nowadays are in excessive debt because of buying luxury brands so that other folks think that they are classy. Hence, buying expensive products more than one's financial capacity is not a good thing.
In conclusion, many populations are buying expensive brands for many reasons and some of them are because of the quality and the influence of celebrities. However, I believe that this is a negative development because this can lead to debts.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
More and more people want to buy famous brands in clothes cars and other items. What are the reasons behind this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development
Anwser:
A lot of people nowadays are drawn to buying branded things such as vehicles, clothes and bags. Some of the reasons behind this fad is because of the quality of luxury goods and the influence of famous artists and I think that this is a negative development because this can lead to debts.
One of the reasons why many prefer to buy branded material is because of their quality. Despite its expensive price, it can be used for a long time, thus, the consumers get value for their money. In addition to that, artists can influence the choices of the community. Many celebrities are posting their lavish lifestyle on social media and they get many likes from all over the world. That is why their followers tend to follow them because many of them think that it can make them famous as well. For instance, Kylie Jenner is one of the most followed celebrities on Instagram and her followers buy all the expensive brands she posts in the hopes that they get many likes as well.
However, I think that this is a negative development because this may lead to the accumulation of debts. Many populations may feel unsatisfied about their life and they might feel that the only way to be happy is by having luxury finished goods. As a result, they can end up in debt in order to achieve these things. For example, most crowds nowadays are in excessive debt because of buying luxury brands so that other folks think that they are classy. Hence, buying expensive products more than one's financial capacity is not a good thing.
In conclusion, many populations are buying expensive brands for many reasons and some of them are because of the quality and the influence of celebrities. However, I believe that this is a negative development because this can lead to debts.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
More and more people want to buy famous brands in clothes cars and other items. What are the reasons behind this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development
Anwser:
A lot of people nowadays are drawn to buying branded things such as vehicles, clothes and bags. Some of the reasons behind this fad is because of the quality of luxury goods and the influence of famous artists and I think that this is a negative development because this can lead to debts.
One of the reasons why many prefer to buy branded material is because of their quality. Despite its expensive price, it can be used for a long time, thus, the consumers get value for their money. In addition to that, artists can influence the choices of the community. Many celebrities are posting their lavish lifestyle on social media and they get many likes from all over the world. That is why their followers tend to follow them because many of them think that it can make them famous as well. For instance, Kylie Jenner is one of the most followed celebrities on Instagram and her followers buy all the expensive brands she posts in the hopes that they get many likes as well.
However, I think that this is a negative development because this may lead to the accumulation of debts. Many populations may feel unsatisfied about their life and they might feel that the only way to be happy is by having luxury finished goods. As a result, they can end up in debt in order to achieve these things. For example, most crowds nowadays are in excessive debt because of buying luxury brands so that other folks think that they are classy. Hence, buying expensive products more than one's financial capacity is not a good thing.
In conclusion, many populations are buying expensive brands for many reasons and some of them are because of the quality and the influence of celebrities. However, I believe that this is a negative development because this can lead to debts.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
The last 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the relocation of people from the countryside to urban areas. Although there may be valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay, I would contend that the drawbacks associated with this trend are incomparable with the benefits. Two primary reasons for this are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the relocation of the rural population to urban areas for the sake of better life facilities would lead to a recession in the agriculture industry. A salient example of this is Tehran the capital of Iran where according to the statistics more than half of the villages remained isolated in 2017 and the production of agricultural products declined by 20 percent. Furthermore, it is obvious that continuing this phenomenon would result in the integration of new movers into modern urban culture and forgetting the national cultural heritage.
Secondly and even more importantly though, is the fact that the climb in the number of the urban population would disrupt the balance between the supply and demand, in destination cities. People will compete for staples like employment or owning a home. so, predictable would be inflation as well as unemployment and criminal behaviours in urban regions. Admittedly growth in traffic congestion, air pollution and water pollution is more likely to appear following this trend.
By the way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that although a wide range of facilities are concentrated in urban areas, which, attract many people to those places, the mentioned drawbacks would be insurmountable in the foreseeable future. So, taking policies to reverse this trend is likely to be more constructive.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
The last 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the relocation of people from the countryside to urban areas. Although there may be valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay, I would contend that the drawbacks associated with this trend are incomparable with the benefits. Two primary reasons for this are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the relocation of the rural population to urban areas for the sake of better life facilities would lead to a recession in the agriculture industry. A salient example of this is Tehran the capital of Iran where according to the statistics more than half of the villages remained isolated in 2017 and the production of agricultural products declined by 20 percent. Furthermore, it is obvious that continuing this phenomenon would result in the integration of new movers into modern urban culture and forgetting the national cultural heritage.
Secondly and even more importantly though, is the fact that the climb in the number of the urban population would disrupt the balance between the supply and demand, in destination cities. People will compete for staples like employment or owning a home. so, predictable would be inflation as well as unemployment and criminal behaviours in urban regions. Admittedly growth in traffic congestion, air pollution and water pollution is more likely to appear following this trend.
By the way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that although a wide range of facilities are concentrated in urban areas, which, attract many people to those places, the mentioned drawbacks would be insurmountable in the foreseeable future. So, taking policies to reverse this trend is likely to be more constructive.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
The last 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the relocation of people from the countryside to urban areas. Although there may be valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay, I would contend that the drawbacks associated with this trend are incomparable with the benefits. Two primary reasons for this are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the relocation of the rural population to urban areas for the sake of better life facilities would lead to a recession in the agriculture industry. A salient example of this is Tehran the capital of Iran where according to the statistics more than half of the villages remained isolated in 2017 and the production of agricultural products declined by 20 percent. Furthermore, it is obvious that continuing this phenomenon would result in the integration of new movers into modern urban culture and forgetting the national cultural heritage.
Secondly and even more importantly though, is the fact that the climb in the number of the urban population would disrupt the balance between the supply and demand, in destination cities. People will compete for staples like employment or owning a home. so, predictable would be inflation as well as unemployment and criminal behaviours in urban regions. Admittedly growth in traffic congestion, air pollution and water pollution is more likely to appear following this trend.
By the way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that although a wide range of facilities are concentrated in urban areas, which, attract many people to those places, the mentioned drawbacks would be insurmountable in the foreseeable future. So, taking policies to reverse this trend is likely to be more constructive.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
The last 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the relocation of people from the countryside to urban areas. Although there may be valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay, I would contend that the drawbacks associated with this trend are incomparable with the benefits. Two primary reasons for this are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the relocation of the rural population to urban areas for the sake of better life facilities would lead to a recession in the agriculture industry. A salient example of this is Tehran the capital of Iran where according to the statistics more than half of the villages remained isolated in 2017 and the production of agricultural products declined by 20 percent. Furthermore, it is obvious that continuing this phenomenon would result in the integration of new movers into modern urban culture and forgetting the national cultural heritage.
Secondly and even more importantly though, is the fact that the climb in the number of the urban population would disrupt the balance between the supply and demand, in destination cities. People will compete for staples like employment or owning a home. so, predictable would be inflation as well as unemployment and criminal behaviours in urban regions. Admittedly growth in traffic congestion, air pollution and water pollution is more likely to appear following this trend.
By the way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that although a wide range of facilities are concentrated in urban areas, which, attract many people to those places, the mentioned drawbacks would be insurmountable in the foreseeable future. So, taking policies to reverse this trend is likely to be more constructive.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some People Say That Now We Can See Films on Our Phones or Tablets There Is No Need to Go to the Cinema. Others Say That to Be Fully Enjoyed, Films Need to Be Seen in a Cinema.
Discuss Both These Views and Give Your Opinion.
Anwser:
Some argue that portable devices have made theatres redundant, while others claim that films need to be seen in a cinema in order to be fully appreciated. Both sides of the argument will first be elaborated on before explaining why, ultimately, I side with the latter.
One view is that films can be fully enjoyed on small screens, such as phones or tablets. The main reason for this is the convenience. With the proliferation of streaming services, it is easier than ever to access films on small screens, and individuals can watch them wherever and whenever they like. For example, someone could log into Netflix on their phone and watch the latest release during their daily commute by train. Additionally, small screens may provide a more intimate viewing experience, as individuals can watch films in their own space and at their own pace.
However, there are also several reasons why opponents believe films may need to be seen in a cinema in order to be fully enjoyed. One is the enhanced visual and audio experience that a theatre can provide. With larger screens and better sound systems, motion pictures can be more immersive and impactful in a cinema setting. Many cinema complexes now offer even 4D options that have moving seats to make the viewer feel like they are part of the action. Furthermore, the social aspect of watching films in a cinema can be a key part of the enjoyment, as individuals can share the experience with others and engage in discussions about the film afterwards.
In conclusion, although both arguments are logical, in my view, the enhanced visual and audio experience, as well as the social aspect, can be key to fully appreciating a film. I believe that with excessive media options available on mobile devices, recapturing the romance of a trip to the theatre with loved ones should be cherished.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some People Say That Now We Can See Films on Our Phones or Tablets There Is No Need to Go to the Cinema. Others Say That to Be Fully Enjoyed, Films Need to Be Seen in a Cinema.
Discuss Both These Views and Give Your Opinion.
Anwser:
Some argue that portable devices have made theatres redundant, while others claim that films need to be seen in a cinema in order to be fully appreciated. Both sides of the argument will first be elaborated on before explaining why, ultimately, I side with the latter.
One view is that films can be fully enjoyed on small screens, such as phones or tablets. The main reason for this is the convenience. With the proliferation of streaming services, it is easier than ever to access films on small screens, and individuals can watch them wherever and whenever they like. For example, someone could log into Netflix on their phone and watch the latest release during their daily commute by train. Additionally, small screens may provide a more intimate viewing experience, as individuals can watch films in their own space and at their own pace.
However, there are also several reasons why opponents believe films may need to be seen in a cinema in order to be fully enjoyed. One is the enhanced visual and audio experience that a theatre can provide. With larger screens and better sound systems, motion pictures can be more immersive and impactful in a cinema setting. Many cinema complexes now offer even 4D options that have moving seats to make the viewer feel like they are part of the action. Furthermore, the social aspect of watching films in a cinema can be a key part of the enjoyment, as individuals can share the experience with others and engage in discussions about the film afterwards.
In conclusion, although both arguments are logical, in my view, the enhanced visual and audio experience, as well as the social aspect, can be key to fully appreciating a film. I believe that with excessive media options available on mobile devices, recapturing the romance of a trip to the theatre with loved ones should be cherished.
Your lexical resource score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some People Say That Now We Can See Films on Our Phones or Tablets There Is No Need to Go to the Cinema. Others Say That to Be Fully Enjoyed, Films Need to Be Seen in a Cinema.
Discuss Both These Views and Give Your Opinion.
Anwser:
Some argue that portable devices have made theatres redundant, while others claim that films need to be seen in a cinema in order to be fully appreciated. Both sides of the argument will first be elaborated on before explaining why, ultimately, I side with the latter.
One view is that films can be fully enjoyed on small screens, such as phones or tablets. The main reason for this is the convenience. With the proliferation of streaming services, it is easier than ever to access films on small screens, and individuals can watch them wherever and whenever they like. For example, someone could log into Netflix on their phone and watch the latest release during their daily commute by train. Additionally, small screens may provide a more intimate viewing experience, as individuals can watch films in their own space and at their own pace.
However, there are also several reasons why opponents believe films may need to be seen in a cinema in order to be fully enjoyed. One is the enhanced visual and audio experience that a theatre can provide. With larger screens and better sound systems, motion pictures can be more immersive and impactful in a cinema setting. Many cinema complexes now offer even 4D options that have moving seats to make the viewer feel like they are part of the action. Furthermore, the social aspect of watching films in a cinema can be a key part of the enjoyment, as individuals can share the experience with others and engage in discussions about the film afterwards.
In conclusion, although both arguments are logical, in my view, the enhanced visual and audio experience, as well as the social aspect, can be key to fully appreciating a film. I believe that with excessive media options available on mobile devices, recapturing the romance of a trip to the theatre with loved ones should be cherished.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some People Say That Now We Can See Films on Our Phones or Tablets There Is No Need to Go to the Cinema. Others Say That to Be Fully Enjoyed, Films Need to Be Seen in a Cinema.
Discuss Both These Views and Give Your Opinion.
Anwser:
Some argue that portable devices have made theatres redundant, while others claim that films need to be seen in a cinema in order to be fully appreciated. Both sides of the argument will first be elaborated on before explaining why, ultimately, I side with the latter.
One view is that films can be fully enjoyed on small screens, such as phones or tablets. The main reason for this is the convenience. With the proliferation of streaming services, it is easier than ever to access films on small screens, and individuals can watch them wherever and whenever they like. For example, someone could log into Netflix on their phone and watch the latest release during their daily commute by train. Additionally, small screens may provide a more intimate viewing experience, as individuals can watch films in their own space and at their own pace.
However, there are also several reasons why opponents believe films may need to be seen in a cinema in order to be fully enjoyed. One is the enhanced visual and audio experience that a theatre can provide. With larger screens and better sound systems, motion pictures can be more immersive and impactful in a cinema setting. Many cinema complexes now offer even 4D options that have moving seats to make the viewer feel like they are part of the action. Furthermore, the social aspect of watching films in a cinema can be a key part of the enjoyment, as individuals can share the experience with others and engage in discussions about the film afterwards.
In conclusion, although both arguments are logical, in my view, the enhanced visual and audio experience, as well as the social aspect, can be key to fully appreciating a film. I believe that with excessive media options available on mobile devices, recapturing the romance of a trip to the theatre with loved ones should be cherished.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?
Anwser:
Over the past decades, the number of overweight people has increased, and this trend is being observed nowadays. This essay will discuss the main reasons for this epidemic and then describe the possible effects of the problem.
To begin with, the foremost causes of obesity are an inactive lifestyle and unhealthy eating habits. Today, more and more people rely on cars instead of walking, have fewer physical demands at work, and prefer inactive leisure activities. This results in burning fewer calories and gaining weight. Moreover, the problem is accentuated by the growing number of people who eat irregularly and consume large portions of high-calorie food. For example, about 50% of the adult population in Europe suffers from being overweight due to disordered eating habits.
The possible effects of this problem include physical health problems and loss of productivity. Firstly, obesity results in the incorrect functioning of the human body and contributes to the risk of developing some chronic illnesses. For example, as body fat percentage increases, the person's metabolism worsens, which in turn may result in diabetes or heart disease. Furthermore, overweight people are very unhealthy and often suffer from stress and tiredness. This lessens their work capacity and leads to lower productivity. For instance, it has been proven that an obese person needs to put more effort into completing some tasks than a person with normal weight.
To sum up, obesity is a big issue that affects a lot of people nowadays. It is mainly caused by inactive lifestyles and eating disorders and has a detrimental impact on severe health problems and loss of productivity.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?
Anwser:
Over the past decades, the number of overweight people has increased, and this trend is being observed nowadays. This essay will discuss the main reasons for this epidemic and then describe the possible effects of the problem.
To begin with, the foremost causes of obesity are an inactive lifestyle and unhealthy eating habits. Today, more and more people rely on cars instead of walking, have fewer physical demands at work, and prefer inactive leisure activities. This results in burning fewer calories and gaining weight. Moreover, the problem is accentuated by the growing number of people who eat irregularly and consume large portions of high-calorie food. For example, about 50% of the adult population in Europe suffers from being overweight due to disordered eating habits.
The possible effects of this problem include physical health problems and loss of productivity. Firstly, obesity results in the incorrect functioning of the human body and contributes to the risk of developing some chronic illnesses. For example, as body fat percentage increases, the person's metabolism worsens, which in turn may result in diabetes or heart disease. Furthermore, overweight people are very unhealthy and often suffer from stress and tiredness. This lessens their work capacity and leads to lower productivity. For instance, it has been proven that an obese person needs to put more effort into completing some tasks than a person with normal weight.
To sum up, obesity is a big issue that affects a lot of people nowadays. It is mainly caused by inactive lifestyles and eating disorders and has a detrimental impact on severe health problems and loss of productivity.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?
Anwser:
Over the past decades, the number of overweight people has increased, and this trend is being observed nowadays. This essay will discuss the main reasons for this epidemic and then describe the possible effects of the problem.
To begin with, the foremost causes of obesity are an inactive lifestyle and unhealthy eating habits. Today, more and more people rely on cars instead of walking, have fewer physical demands at work, and prefer inactive leisure activities. This results in burning fewer calories and gaining weight. Moreover, the problem is accentuated by the growing number of people who eat irregularly and consume large portions of high-calorie food. For example, about 50% of the adult population in Europe suffers from being overweight due to disordered eating habits.
The possible effects of this problem include physical health problems and loss of productivity. Firstly, obesity results in the incorrect functioning of the human body and contributes to the risk of developing some chronic illnesses. For example, as body fat percentage increases, the person's metabolism worsens, which in turn may result in diabetes or heart disease. Furthermore, overweight people are very unhealthy and often suffer from stress and tiredness. This lessens their work capacity and leads to lower productivity. For instance, it has been proven that an obese person needs to put more effort into completing some tasks than a person with normal weight.
To sum up, obesity is a big issue that affects a lot of people nowadays. It is mainly caused by inactive lifestyles and eating disorders and has a detrimental impact on severe health problems and loss of productivity.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?
Anwser:
Over the past decades, the number of overweight people has increased, and this trend is being observed nowadays. This essay will discuss the main reasons for this epidemic and then describe the possible effects of the problem.
To begin with, the foremost causes of obesity are an inactive lifestyle and unhealthy eating habits. Today, more and more people rely on cars instead of walking, have fewer physical demands at work, and prefer inactive leisure activities. This results in burning fewer calories and gaining weight. Moreover, the problem is accentuated by the growing number of people who eat irregularly and consume large portions of high-calorie food. For example, about 50% of the adult population in Europe suffers from being overweight due to disordered eating habits.
The possible effects of this problem include physical health problems and loss of productivity. Firstly, obesity results in the incorrect functioning of the human body and contributes to the risk of developing some chronic illnesses. For example, as body fat percentage increases, the person's metabolism worsens, which in turn may result in diabetes or heart disease. Furthermore, overweight people are very unhealthy and often suffer from stress and tiredness. This lessens their work capacity and leads to lower productivity. For instance, it has been proven that an obese person needs to put more effort into completing some tasks than a person with normal weight.
To sum up, obesity is a big issue that affects a lot of people nowadays. It is mainly caused by inactive lifestyles and eating disorders and has a detrimental impact on severe health problems and loss of productivity.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative
development?
Anwser:
It is evident that nowadays many children spend a lot of time using their smartphones. The variety of smartphones’ uses may contribute to this case and I feel that this is harmful to children’s health.
I think this situation may be caused by the development of smartphones and it is also partly because children can not limit themselves. Children can not restrict themselves well so they are likely to be fascinated by interesting things. With the evolution of smartphones, today children can get a good kick out of them , they can play games, find interesting things, watch films and TV series as well as read stories on mobile phones. As a result, children, the people who are not able to control themselves well, will be fully attracted to smartphones. For instance, if they do each thing for an hour per day, then the total time will become at least four hours--it is long enough for children.
This case is projected to pose a threat to children’s health. Everyone has only 24 hours per day, so if children pay closer attention to playing on mobile , they will have fewer hours to exercise . Then this will lead to a weak body and it will be easy for them to catch an illness. And it is believed that using smartphones too often is responsible for bad eyesight. If we allow kids to spend too much time utilising phones, they will have to wear a pair of glasses at an early age.
To sum up, the reason why children spend a long time on smartphones is the many uses of smartphones and their lack of self-control and this will present a challenge to their health.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative
development?
Anwser:
It is evident that nowadays many children spend a lot of time using their smartphones. The variety of smartphones’ uses may contribute to this case and I feel that this is harmful to children’s health.
I think this situation may be caused by the development of smartphones and it is also partly because children can not limit themselves. Children can not restrict themselves well so they are likely to be fascinated by interesting things. With the evolution of smartphones, today children can get a good kick out of them , they can play games, find interesting things, watch films and TV series as well as read stories on mobile phones. As a result, children, the people who are not able to control themselves well, will be fully attracted to smartphones. For instance, if they do each thing for an hour per day, then the total time will become at least four hours--it is long enough for children.
This case is projected to pose a threat to children’s health. Everyone has only 24 hours per day, so if children pay closer attention to playing on mobile , they will have fewer hours to exercise . Then this will lead to a weak body and it will be easy for them to catch an illness. And it is believed that using smartphones too often is responsible for bad eyesight. If we allow kids to spend too much time utilising phones, they will have to wear a pair of glasses at an early age.
To sum up, the reason why children spend a long time on smartphones is the many uses of smartphones and their lack of self-control and this will present a challenge to their health.
Your lexical resource score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative
development?
Anwser:
It is evident that nowadays many children spend a lot of time using their smartphones. The variety of smartphones’ uses may contribute to this case and I feel that this is harmful to children’s health.
I think this situation may be caused by the development of smartphones and it is also partly because children can not limit themselves. Children can not restrict themselves well so they are likely to be fascinated by interesting things. With the evolution of smartphones, today children can get a good kick out of them , they can play games, find interesting things, watch films and TV series as well as read stories on mobile phones. As a result, children, the people who are not able to control themselves well, will be fully attracted to smartphones. For instance, if they do each thing for an hour per day, then the total time will become at least four hours--it is long enough for children.
This case is projected to pose a threat to children’s health. Everyone has only 24 hours per day, so if children pay closer attention to playing on mobile , they will have fewer hours to exercise . Then this will lead to a weak body and it will be easy for them to catch an illness. And it is believed that using smartphones too often is responsible for bad eyesight. If we allow kids to spend too much time utilising phones, they will have to wear a pair of glasses at an early age.
To sum up, the reason why children spend a long time on smartphones is the many uses of smartphones and their lack of self-control and this will present a challenge to their health.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative
development?
Anwser:
It is evident that nowadays many children spend a lot of time using their smartphones. The variety of smartphones’ uses may contribute to this case and I feel that this is harmful to children’s health.
I think this situation may be caused by the development of smartphones and it is also partly because children can not limit themselves. Children can not restrict themselves well so they are likely to be fascinated by interesting things. With the evolution of smartphones, today children can get a good kick out of them , they can play games, find interesting things, watch films and TV series as well as read stories on mobile phones. As a result, children, the people who are not able to control themselves well, will be fully attracted to smartphones. For instance, if they do each thing for an hour per day, then the total time will become at least four hours--it is long enough for children.
This case is projected to pose a threat to children’s health. Everyone has only 24 hours per day, so if children pay closer attention to playing on mobile , they will have fewer hours to exercise . Then this will lead to a weak body and it will be easy for them to catch an illness. And it is believed that using smartphones too often is responsible for bad eyesight. If we allow kids to spend too much time utilising phones, they will have to wear a pair of glasses at an early age.
To sum up, the reason why children spend a long time on smartphones is the many uses of smartphones and their lack of self-control and this will present a challenge to their health.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
There are different attitudes towards the best approach to gaining a better job position among other applicants. While some people believe that obtaining a qualification from a university is the most significant factor in this regard, others argue that developing soft skills and having relevant experience play a vital role in receiving a better offer. In my opinion, all these matters differ from one job position to another.
On one hand, it is worth mentioning the importance of a university degree in many professional fields. If you look at most of the well-paid job advertisements in various applications or websites, the minimum requirement for applying for these positions is having relevant university-certified qualifications. For example, to become a successful lawyer or doctor, one should study at a prestigious university and obtain the necessary certification. Moreover, many educational institutions provide their students with appropriate apprenticeships after graduation,offering valuable insights into career prospects and the work environment.
On the other hand, having relevant experience in a real-world environment can help candidates develop essential personality traits such as strong interpersonal skills, leadership skills and the ability to work efficiently in a team. For instance, when applying for a place in sales, marketing or customer service departments in a business company, the human resource manager typically looks for a resume with related experiences rather than just higher education certifications.
In conclusion, the controversial debate about the crucial factor in securing the best job opportunity continues. In my perspective, the value of an educational degree versus soft skills largely depends on the type of a profession and the employer’s circumstances at the time of applying for employment opportunities.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
There are different attitudes towards the best approach to gaining a better job position among other applicants. While some people believe that obtaining a qualification from a university is the most significant factor in this regard, others argue that developing soft skills and having relevant experience play a vital role in receiving a better offer. In my opinion, all these matters differ from one job position to another.
On one hand, it is worth mentioning the importance of a university degree in many professional fields. If you look at most of the well-paid job advertisements in various applications or websites, the minimum requirement for applying for these positions is having relevant university-certified qualifications. For example, to become a successful lawyer or doctor, one should study at a prestigious university and obtain the necessary certification. Moreover, many educational institutions provide their students with appropriate apprenticeships after graduation,offering valuable insights into career prospects and the work environment.
On the other hand, having relevant experience in a real-world environment can help candidates develop essential personality traits such as strong interpersonal skills, leadership skills and the ability to work efficiently in a team. For instance, when applying for a place in sales, marketing or customer service departments in a business company, the human resource manager typically looks for a resume with related experiences rather than just higher education certifications.
In conclusion, the controversial debate about the crucial factor in securing the best job opportunity continues. In my perspective, the value of an educational degree versus soft skills largely depends on the type of a profession and the employer’s circumstances at the time of applying for employment opportunities.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
There are different attitudes towards the best approach to gaining a better job position among other applicants. While some people believe that obtaining a qualification from a university is the most significant factor in this regard, others argue that developing soft skills and having relevant experience play a vital role in receiving a better offer. In my opinion, all these matters differ from one job position to another.
On one hand, it is worth mentioning the importance of a university degree in many professional fields. If you look at most of the well-paid job advertisements in various applications or websites, the minimum requirement for applying for these positions is having relevant university-certified qualifications. For example, to become a successful lawyer or doctor, one should study at a prestigious university and obtain the necessary certification. Moreover, many educational institutions provide their students with appropriate apprenticeships after graduation,offering valuable insights into career prospects and the work environment.
On the other hand, having relevant experience in a real-world environment can help candidates develop essential personality traits such as strong interpersonal skills, leadership skills and the ability to work efficiently in a team. For instance, when applying for a place in sales, marketing or customer service departments in a business company, the human resource manager typically looks for a resume with related experiences rather than just higher education certifications.
In conclusion, the controversial debate about the crucial factor in securing the best job opportunity continues. In my perspective, the value of an educational degree versus soft skills largely depends on the type of a profession and the employer’s circumstances at the time of applying for employment opportunities.
Your grammatical range score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
There are different attitudes towards the best approach to gaining a better job position among other applicants. While some people believe that obtaining a qualification from a university is the most significant factor in this regard, others argue that developing soft skills and having relevant experience play a vital role in receiving a better offer. In my opinion, all these matters differ from one job position to another.
On one hand, it is worth mentioning the importance of a university degree in many professional fields. If you look at most of the well-paid job advertisements in various applications or websites, the minimum requirement for applying for these positions is having relevant university-certified qualifications. For example, to become a successful lawyer or doctor, one should study at a prestigious university and obtain the necessary certification. Moreover, many educational institutions provide their students with appropriate apprenticeships after graduation,offering valuable insights into career prospects and the work environment.
On the other hand, having relevant experience in a real-world environment can help candidates develop essential personality traits such as strong interpersonal skills, leadership skills and the ability to work efficiently in a team. For instance, when applying for a place in sales, marketing or customer service departments in a business company, the human resource manager typically looks for a resume with related experiences rather than just higher education certifications.
In conclusion, the controversial debate about the crucial factor in securing the best job opportunity continues. In my perspective, the value of an educational degree versus soft skills largely depends on the type of a profession and the employer’s circumstances at the time of applying for employment opportunities.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Many Working People Get Little or No Exercise either During the Working Day or in Their Free Time, and Have Health Problems as a Result.
Why Do Many Working People Not Get Enough Exercise?
What Can Be Done About This Problem?
Anwser:
Some workers are not exercising enough during their daily routine and some of them are developing health issues as a consequence. This essay discusses the reasons behind this phenomenon and the solutions to the matter.
There are two main reasons why employees do not do physical activities regularly. The first of these is due to poor time management. This is because workers often schedule too many daily activities and end up not accomplishing some personal ones. For instance, home-based job workers often have trouble finishing tasks earlier to do their daily workouts. Moreover, tiredness is another common reason why people skip exercising. The reason for this is that workers usually finish their professional duties at night when they are too exhausted to go to the gym and, therefore, they might choose to spend the rest of the day resting.
However, some strategies might help mitigate these difficulties. Firstly, one should try exercising before engaging in their job. This is due to recent studies that have shown that working out in the morning brings more consistency to people's health routine since they usually feel more energetic at this time of the day. For example, the elderly tend to do physical activities in the morning because it is when their bodies are fully rested. Furthermore, having a gym partner helps the individual commit to their workout schedule. This is because doing sports can be more fun with a friend. In particular, workout partners can serve as mental support when one's lacking motivation.
In conclusion, the reasons why workers are skipping their exercise are related to poor time management and exhaustion after working all day. The possible solutions to this matter are going to the gym before work commitments and gathering workout partners.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Many Working People Get Little or No Exercise either During the Working Day or in Their Free Time, and Have Health Problems as a Result.
Why Do Many Working People Not Get Enough Exercise?
What Can Be Done About This Problem?
Anwser:
Some workers are not exercising enough during their daily routine and some of them are developing health issues as a consequence. This essay discusses the reasons behind this phenomenon and the solutions to the matter.
There are two main reasons why employees do not do physical activities regularly. The first of these is due to poor time management. This is because workers often schedule too many daily activities and end up not accomplishing some personal ones. For instance, home-based job workers often have trouble finishing tasks earlier to do their daily workouts. Moreover, tiredness is another common reason why people skip exercising. The reason for this is that workers usually finish their professional duties at night when they are too exhausted to go to the gym and, therefore, they might choose to spend the rest of the day resting.
However, some strategies might help mitigate these difficulties. Firstly, one should try exercising before engaging in their job. This is due to recent studies that have shown that working out in the morning brings more consistency to people's health routine since they usually feel more energetic at this time of the day. For example, the elderly tend to do physical activities in the morning because it is when their bodies are fully rested. Furthermore, having a gym partner helps the individual commit to their workout schedule. This is because doing sports can be more fun with a friend. In particular, workout partners can serve as mental support when one's lacking motivation.
In conclusion, the reasons why workers are skipping their exercise are related to poor time management and exhaustion after working all day. The possible solutions to this matter are going to the gym before work commitments and gathering workout partners.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Many Working People Get Little or No Exercise either During the Working Day or in Their Free Time, and Have Health Problems as a Result.
Why Do Many Working People Not Get Enough Exercise?
What Can Be Done About This Problem?
Anwser:
Some workers are not exercising enough during their daily routine and some of them are developing health issues as a consequence. This essay discusses the reasons behind this phenomenon and the solutions to the matter.
There are two main reasons why employees do not do physical activities regularly. The first of these is due to poor time management. This is because workers often schedule too many daily activities and end up not accomplishing some personal ones. For instance, home-based job workers often have trouble finishing tasks earlier to do their daily workouts. Moreover, tiredness is another common reason why people skip exercising. The reason for this is that workers usually finish their professional duties at night when they are too exhausted to go to the gym and, therefore, they might choose to spend the rest of the day resting.
However, some strategies might help mitigate these difficulties. Firstly, one should try exercising before engaging in their job. This is due to recent studies that have shown that working out in the morning brings more consistency to people's health routine since they usually feel more energetic at this time of the day. For example, the elderly tend to do physical activities in the morning because it is when their bodies are fully rested. Furthermore, having a gym partner helps the individual commit to their workout schedule. This is because doing sports can be more fun with a friend. In particular, workout partners can serve as mental support when one's lacking motivation.
In conclusion, the reasons why workers are skipping their exercise are related to poor time management and exhaustion after working all day. The possible solutions to this matter are going to the gym before work commitments and gathering workout partners.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Many Working People Get Little or No Exercise either During the Working Day or in Their Free Time, and Have Health Problems as a Result.
Why Do Many Working People Not Get Enough Exercise?
What Can Be Done About This Problem?
Anwser:
Some workers are not exercising enough during their daily routine and some of them are developing health issues as a consequence. This essay discusses the reasons behind this phenomenon and the solutions to the matter.
There are two main reasons why employees do not do physical activities regularly. The first of these is due to poor time management. This is because workers often schedule too many daily activities and end up not accomplishing some personal ones. For instance, home-based job workers often have trouble finishing tasks earlier to do their daily workouts. Moreover, tiredness is another common reason why people skip exercising. The reason for this is that workers usually finish their professional duties at night when they are too exhausted to go to the gym and, therefore, they might choose to spend the rest of the day resting.
However, some strategies might help mitigate these difficulties. Firstly, one should try exercising before engaging in their job. This is due to recent studies that have shown that working out in the morning brings more consistency to people's health routine since they usually feel more energetic at this time of the day. For example, the elderly tend to do physical activities in the morning because it is when their bodies are fully rested. Furthermore, having a gym partner helps the individual commit to their workout schedule. This is because doing sports can be more fun with a friend. In particular, workout partners can serve as mental support when one's lacking motivation.
In conclusion, the reasons why workers are skipping their exercise are related to poor time management and exhaustion after working all day. The possible solutions to this matter are going to the gym before work commitments and gathering workout partners.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
The World Cup is a very important event for soccer fans all over the world. Many countries compete for the honor of hosting this event. In your opinion, what are the major benefits and drawbacks of hosting an international sporting event such as the World Cup?
Anwser:
International sporting games are the principal chance for viewers to enjoy their favourite sports, the king sport like football is not an exception. Besides that, when a famous and huge undertaking happens, it contributes to the hosting countries not only gaining massive positive aspects but also disadvantages mentioned in this essay.
On the one hand, a country can own the polity to organize a global game that helps their nation achieve many advantages through this event. On top of that, the sporting games bring a significant economic promotion to the host. People invest a massive part of the government budget to erect infrastructure, facilities, and accommodations for competitors and visitors. In addition, hosting residents can have a wonderful chance to sell local products and advertise their speciality to tourists and viewers. Furthermore, inhabitants can have more opportunities to exchange their culture and traditions with others in the world.
On the other hand, it is undoubted that the hosting nation also suffers some disadvantages from organizing a huge sporting event. Firstly, they spend much more of their money on the sporting sector resulting in a lack of financial resources for others. Secondly, the routine residents’ lives may be distracted by massive domestic and international viewers, especially elders. Besides that, to ensure the security of competitors and participants, especially politicians or governmental people, organizers utilize a massive security operation.
In conclusion, many countries hope to set up an international sporting event such as the World Cup to achieve surplus advantages outweighing to disadvantages for the locals.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
The World Cup is a very important event for soccer fans all over the world. Many countries compete for the honor of hosting this event. In your opinion, what are the major benefits and drawbacks of hosting an international sporting event such as the World Cup?
Anwser:
International sporting games are the principal chance for viewers to enjoy their favourite sports, the king sport like football is not an exception. Besides that, when a famous and huge undertaking happens, it contributes to the hosting countries not only gaining massive positive aspects but also disadvantages mentioned in this essay.
On the one hand, a country can own the polity to organize a global game that helps their nation achieve many advantages through this event. On top of that, the sporting games bring a significant economic promotion to the host. People invest a massive part of the government budget to erect infrastructure, facilities, and accommodations for competitors and visitors. In addition, hosting residents can have a wonderful chance to sell local products and advertise their speciality to tourists and viewers. Furthermore, inhabitants can have more opportunities to exchange their culture and traditions with others in the world.
On the other hand, it is undoubted that the hosting nation also suffers some disadvantages from organizing a huge sporting event. Firstly, they spend much more of their money on the sporting sector resulting in a lack of financial resources for others. Secondly, the routine residents’ lives may be distracted by massive domestic and international viewers, especially elders. Besides that, to ensure the security of competitors and participants, especially politicians or governmental people, organizers utilize a massive security operation.
In conclusion, many countries hope to set up an international sporting event such as the World Cup to achieve surplus advantages outweighing to disadvantages for the locals.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
The World Cup is a very important event for soccer fans all over the world. Many countries compete for the honor of hosting this event. In your opinion, what are the major benefits and drawbacks of hosting an international sporting event such as the World Cup?
Anwser:
International sporting games are the principal chance for viewers to enjoy their favourite sports, the king sport like football is not an exception. Besides that, when a famous and huge undertaking happens, it contributes to the hosting countries not only gaining massive positive aspects but also disadvantages mentioned in this essay.
On the one hand, a country can own the polity to organize a global game that helps their nation achieve many advantages through this event. On top of that, the sporting games bring a significant economic promotion to the host. People invest a massive part of the government budget to erect infrastructure, facilities, and accommodations for competitors and visitors. In addition, hosting residents can have a wonderful chance to sell local products and advertise their speciality to tourists and viewers. Furthermore, inhabitants can have more opportunities to exchange their culture and traditions with others in the world.
On the other hand, it is undoubted that the hosting nation also suffers some disadvantages from organizing a huge sporting event. Firstly, they spend much more of their money on the sporting sector resulting in a lack of financial resources for others. Secondly, the routine residents’ lives may be distracted by massive domestic and international viewers, especially elders. Besides that, to ensure the security of competitors and participants, especially politicians or governmental people, organizers utilize a massive security operation.
In conclusion, many countries hope to set up an international sporting event such as the World Cup to achieve surplus advantages outweighing to disadvantages for the locals.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
The World Cup is a very important event for soccer fans all over the world. Many countries compete for the honor of hosting this event. In your opinion, what are the major benefits and drawbacks of hosting an international sporting event such as the World Cup?
Anwser:
International sporting games are the principal chance for viewers to enjoy their favourite sports, the king sport like football is not an exception. Besides that, when a famous and huge undertaking happens, it contributes to the hosting countries not only gaining massive positive aspects but also disadvantages mentioned in this essay.
On the one hand, a country can own the polity to organize a global game that helps their nation achieve many advantages through this event. On top of that, the sporting games bring a significant economic promotion to the host. People invest a massive part of the government budget to erect infrastructure, facilities, and accommodations for competitors and visitors. In addition, hosting residents can have a wonderful chance to sell local products and advertise their speciality to tourists and viewers. Furthermore, inhabitants can have more opportunities to exchange their culture and traditions with others in the world.
On the other hand, it is undoubted that the hosting nation also suffers some disadvantages from organizing a huge sporting event. Firstly, they spend much more of their money on the sporting sector resulting in a lack of financial resources for others. Secondly, the routine residents’ lives may be distracted by massive domestic and international viewers, especially elders. Besides that, to ensure the security of competitors and participants, especially politicians or governmental people, organizers utilize a massive security operation.
In conclusion, many countries hope to set up an international sporting event such as the World Cup to achieve surplus advantages outweighing to disadvantages for the locals.
Your task achievement score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe famous people’s support toward international aid organizations draws attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinions
Anwser:
There has been much debate regarding the role of famous people in raising public awareness of the major problems. While some contend that celebrities can attract people’s attention to problems, others believe that they can make them less critical. In this essay, both sides will be explored, followed by my opinion.
On the one hand, supporters argue that endorsements of international aid organizations by figures draw attention to pressing global issues. Celebrities often have large platforms and widespread influence which they can leverage to raise public awareness and mobilize resources for humanitarian causes. To illustrate, a well-known Vietnamese singer named Thuy Tien used her fame to raise a fund of two million dollars to assist citizens who suffered heavily from natural disasters. Additionally, the superstar can use their status to advocate for policy changes and drive fundraising efforts, resulting in tangible support for affected communities.
Conversely, critics comment that celebrity involvement in international assistance can sometimes overshadow the subjects themselves and detract from more substantial solutions. There is concern that focusing on celebrity endorsement may create a superficial understanding of complex matters, leading to tokenistic gestures and short-term solutions rather than addressing the root causes. Moreover, although initial attention to a cause can spike due to celebrity endorsement, there is the risk that this consideration may not be sustained over time. Once the star moves on to another cause or project, the public’s interest may wane, leaving organizations without the needed long-term support.
In conclusion, the impact of celebrity involvement in international aid organizations is nuanced and context-dependent. Whilst celebrities can undoubtedly bring attention to important issues and mobilize resources, their engagement should be approached with caution and critical scrutiny. It is essential to ensure that their involvement is genuine, informed, and respectful of the communities they seek to support. In addition, efforts should be made to amplify the voices of local activists and institutions working on the ground, as they often possess invaluable insights and solutions tailored to their specific contexts. Ultimately, effective advocacy and support for international aid require a collaborative and inclusive approach that prioritizes the dignity, agency, and empowerment of affected communities.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe famous people’s support toward international aid organizations draws attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinions
Anwser:
There has been much debate regarding the role of famous people in raising public awareness of the major problems. While some contend that celebrities can attract people’s attention to problems, others believe that they can make them less critical. In this essay, both sides will be explored, followed by my opinion.
On the one hand, supporters argue that endorsements of international aid organizations by figures draw attention to pressing global issues. Celebrities often have large platforms and widespread influence which they can leverage to raise public awareness and mobilize resources for humanitarian causes. To illustrate, a well-known Vietnamese singer named Thuy Tien used her fame to raise a fund of two million dollars to assist citizens who suffered heavily from natural disasters. Additionally, the superstar can use their status to advocate for policy changes and drive fundraising efforts, resulting in tangible support for affected communities.
Conversely, critics comment that celebrity involvement in international assistance can sometimes overshadow the subjects themselves and detract from more substantial solutions. There is concern that focusing on celebrity endorsement may create a superficial understanding of complex matters, leading to tokenistic gestures and short-term solutions rather than addressing the root causes. Moreover, although initial attention to a cause can spike due to celebrity endorsement, there is the risk that this consideration may not be sustained over time. Once the star moves on to another cause or project, the public’s interest may wane, leaving organizations without the needed long-term support.
In conclusion, the impact of celebrity involvement in international aid organizations is nuanced and context-dependent. Whilst celebrities can undoubtedly bring attention to important issues and mobilize resources, their engagement should be approached with caution and critical scrutiny. It is essential to ensure that their involvement is genuine, informed, and respectful of the communities they seek to support. In addition, efforts should be made to amplify the voices of local activists and institutions working on the ground, as they often possess invaluable insights and solutions tailored to their specific contexts. Ultimately, effective advocacy and support for international aid require a collaborative and inclusive approach that prioritizes the dignity, agency, and empowerment of affected communities.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe famous people’s support toward international aid organizations draws attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinions
Anwser:
There has been much debate regarding the role of famous people in raising public awareness of the major problems. While some contend that celebrities can attract people’s attention to problems, others believe that they can make them less critical. In this essay, both sides will be explored, followed by my opinion.
On the one hand, supporters argue that endorsements of international aid organizations by figures draw attention to pressing global issues. Celebrities often have large platforms and widespread influence which they can leverage to raise public awareness and mobilize resources for humanitarian causes. To illustrate, a well-known Vietnamese singer named Thuy Tien used her fame to raise a fund of two million dollars to assist citizens who suffered heavily from natural disasters. Additionally, the superstar can use their status to advocate for policy changes and drive fundraising efforts, resulting in tangible support for affected communities.
Conversely, critics comment that celebrity involvement in international assistance can sometimes overshadow the subjects themselves and detract from more substantial solutions. There is concern that focusing on celebrity endorsement may create a superficial understanding of complex matters, leading to tokenistic gestures and short-term solutions rather than addressing the root causes. Moreover, although initial attention to a cause can spike due to celebrity endorsement, there is the risk that this consideration may not be sustained over time. Once the star moves on to another cause or project, the public’s interest may wane, leaving organizations without the needed long-term support.
In conclusion, the impact of celebrity involvement in international aid organizations is nuanced and context-dependent. Whilst celebrities can undoubtedly bring attention to important issues and mobilize resources, their engagement should be approached with caution and critical scrutiny. It is essential to ensure that their involvement is genuine, informed, and respectful of the communities they seek to support. In addition, efforts should be made to amplify the voices of local activists and institutions working on the ground, as they often possess invaluable insights and solutions tailored to their specific contexts. Ultimately, effective advocacy and support for international aid require a collaborative and inclusive approach that prioritizes the dignity, agency, and empowerment of affected communities.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people believe famous people’s support toward international aid organizations draws attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinions
Anwser:
There has been much debate regarding the role of famous people in raising public awareness of the major problems. While some contend that celebrities can attract people’s attention to problems, others believe that they can make them less critical. In this essay, both sides will be explored, followed by my opinion.
On the one hand, supporters argue that endorsements of international aid organizations by figures draw attention to pressing global issues. Celebrities often have large platforms and widespread influence which they can leverage to raise public awareness and mobilize resources for humanitarian causes. To illustrate, a well-known Vietnamese singer named Thuy Tien used her fame to raise a fund of two million dollars to assist citizens who suffered heavily from natural disasters. Additionally, the superstar can use their status to advocate for policy changes and drive fundraising efforts, resulting in tangible support for affected communities.
Conversely, critics comment that celebrity involvement in international assistance can sometimes overshadow the subjects themselves and detract from more substantial solutions. There is concern that focusing on celebrity endorsement may create a superficial understanding of complex matters, leading to tokenistic gestures and short-term solutions rather than addressing the root causes. Moreover, although initial attention to a cause can spike due to celebrity endorsement, there is the risk that this consideration may not be sustained over time. Once the star moves on to another cause or project, the public’s interest may wane, leaving organizations without the needed long-term support.
In conclusion, the impact of celebrity involvement in international aid organizations is nuanced and context-dependent. Whilst celebrities can undoubtedly bring attention to important issues and mobilize resources, their engagement should be approached with caution and critical scrutiny. It is essential to ensure that their involvement is genuine, informed, and respectful of the communities they seek to support. In addition, efforts should be made to amplify the voices of local activists and institutions working on the ground, as they often possess invaluable insights and solutions tailored to their specific contexts. Ultimately, effective advocacy and support for international aid require a collaborative and inclusive approach that prioritizes the dignity, agency, and empowerment of affected communities.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the contemporary era, the phenomenon of global migration has witnessed an unprecedented surge, with an increasing number of individuals relocating to foreign lands for better opportunities and enhanced lifestyles. The question of whether immigrants should forsake their cultural norms and assimilate into the countries to which they move is a matter of considerable debate. From my perspective, I firmly agree with this idea.
First of all, it is an undeniable fact that newcomers face the risk of being sentenced or penalized if they fail to comply with local laws. For instance, in certain Middle Eastern countries, dressing modestly is a requirement, while in Singapore, littering is strictly prohibited. Adhering to these local cultural norms is mandatory for new immigrants.
Another reason why newcomers should blend into local customs is that it can pave the way for a smoother life; in other words, when they make an effort to integrate into the local culture, it not only helps build more harmonious relationships but also fosters greater social cohesion. They will find themselves gradually becoming part of the community, leading to a better quality of life.
However, it is essential to acknowledge that cultural exchange is a two-way street. The host country should also embrace diversity and provide an inclusive environment. Governments and communities should implement policies that promote cultural understanding, tolerance, and equal opportunities for all residents.
In conclusion, I once again restate my opinion that there are numerous benefits to immigrants integrating into local life. Therefore, I believe that newcomers should adapt to their new environment as soon as possible.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the contemporary era, the phenomenon of global migration has witnessed an unprecedented surge, with an increasing number of individuals relocating to foreign lands for better opportunities and enhanced lifestyles. The question of whether immigrants should forsake their cultural norms and assimilate into the countries to which they move is a matter of considerable debate. From my perspective, I firmly agree with this idea.
First of all, it is an undeniable fact that newcomers face the risk of being sentenced or penalized if they fail to comply with local laws. For instance, in certain Middle Eastern countries, dressing modestly is a requirement, while in Singapore, littering is strictly prohibited. Adhering to these local cultural norms is mandatory for new immigrants.
Another reason why newcomers should blend into local customs is that it can pave the way for a smoother life; in other words, when they make an effort to integrate into the local culture, it not only helps build more harmonious relationships but also fosters greater social cohesion. They will find themselves gradually becoming part of the community, leading to a better quality of life.
However, it is essential to acknowledge that cultural exchange is a two-way street. The host country should also embrace diversity and provide an inclusive environment. Governments and communities should implement policies that promote cultural understanding, tolerance, and equal opportunities for all residents.
In conclusion, I once again restate my opinion that there are numerous benefits to immigrants integrating into local life. Therefore, I believe that newcomers should adapt to their new environment as soon as possible.
Your lexical resource score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the contemporary era, the phenomenon of global migration has witnessed an unprecedented surge, with an increasing number of individuals relocating to foreign lands for better opportunities and enhanced lifestyles. The question of whether immigrants should forsake their cultural norms and assimilate into the countries to which they move is a matter of considerable debate. From my perspective, I firmly agree with this idea.
First of all, it is an undeniable fact that newcomers face the risk of being sentenced or penalized if they fail to comply with local laws. For instance, in certain Middle Eastern countries, dressing modestly is a requirement, while in Singapore, littering is strictly prohibited. Adhering to these local cultural norms is mandatory for new immigrants.
Another reason why newcomers should blend into local customs is that it can pave the way for a smoother life; in other words, when they make an effort to integrate into the local culture, it not only helps build more harmonious relationships but also fosters greater social cohesion. They will find themselves gradually becoming part of the community, leading to a better quality of life.
However, it is essential to acknowledge that cultural exchange is a two-way street. The host country should also embrace diversity and provide an inclusive environment. Governments and communities should implement policies that promote cultural understanding, tolerance, and equal opportunities for all residents.
In conclusion, I once again restate my opinion that there are numerous benefits to immigrants integrating into local life. Therefore, I believe that newcomers should adapt to their new environment as soon as possible.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the contemporary era, the phenomenon of global migration has witnessed an unprecedented surge, with an increasing number of individuals relocating to foreign lands for better opportunities and enhanced lifestyles. The question of whether immigrants should forsake their cultural norms and assimilate into the countries to which they move is a matter of considerable debate. From my perspective, I firmly agree with this idea.
First of all, it is an undeniable fact that newcomers face the risk of being sentenced or penalized if they fail to comply with local laws. For instance, in certain Middle Eastern countries, dressing modestly is a requirement, while in Singapore, littering is strictly prohibited. Adhering to these local cultural norms is mandatory for new immigrants.
Another reason why newcomers should blend into local customs is that it can pave the way for a smoother life; in other words, when they make an effort to integrate into the local culture, it not only helps build more harmonious relationships but also fosters greater social cohesion. They will find themselves gradually becoming part of the community, leading to a better quality of life.
However, it is essential to acknowledge that cultural exchange is a two-way street. The host country should also embrace diversity and provide an inclusive environment. Governments and communities should implement policies that promote cultural understanding, tolerance, and equal opportunities for all residents.
In conclusion, I once again restate my opinion that there are numerous benefits to immigrants integrating into local life. Therefore, I believe that newcomers should adapt to their new environment as soon as possible.
Your task achievement score is 8.0 |