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Comments 4 I found some minor English errors throughout the paper.
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In this respect, I find the work interesting, well-structured, and with promising results.
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1 Response to Reviewer 1 Comments Comments 1 Please add a table with patients' baseline characteristics, including BMI and smoking status.
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Comments 5 - I recommend deleting graphs 5, 8, and 11 because graphs 7, 10, and 13 show the same information together with lines obtained by analyzing the structural change of the time series.
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1 Response to Reviewer 2 Comments Comments 1 -The paper's aim should be the same in the abstract and the introduction.
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Comments 4 - In figure 3, the indication of the test time appears in the reverse direction.
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Subject BMI Smoking history A 23.2 Non-smoker B 19.8 Non-smoker C 19.5 Non-smoker D 19.7 Non-smoker E 21.5 Non-smoker F 22.8 Non-smoker G 20 Non-smoker H 24.9 Non-smoker I 18.2 Non-smoker J 21.8 Non-smoker K 18.7 Non-smoker L 21.4 Non-smoker M 21.4 Non-smoker N 18.2 Non-smoker O 18.5 Non-smoker P 19.8 Non-smoker Q 20.5 Non-smoker mean 21 - SD 1.9 - Comments 2 Did authors estimate sample size?
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However, I would like to make a few comments.
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In this paper, using a maximal exercise test on a cycle ergometer, it is proposed to determine the anaerobic threshold using the strucchange analysis of the time series and compare it with the V slope method and the respiratory and metabolic indexes proposed by Wasserman.
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Dear Authors: I appreciate the possibility to review the paper entitled "Exploration of an inflection point of ventilation parameters with anaerobic threshold using strucchange" by the authors Aida et al.
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Response 3: I described baseline load of the participants.
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Dear Authors: I appreciate the possibility to review the paper entitled "Exploration of an inflection point of ventilation parameters with anaerobic threshold using strucchange" by the authors Aida et al.
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1 Response to Reviewer 1 Comments Comments 1 Please add a table with patients' baseline characteristics, including BMI and smoking status.
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Comments 4 I found some minor English errors throughout the paper.
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Response 2: I redraw Figures1-2 and described them as an adaptation of the original publication.
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1 Response to Reviewer 1 Comments Comments 1 Please add a table with patients' baseline characteristics, including BMI and smoking status.
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We are hopeful you find our responses/edits to your concerns (expressed below) sufficient.
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Author Response Dear Reviewer 1, We are sending you the second version of our paper.
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Author Response Dear Reviewer 3, Thank you for your kind comments.
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We have tried to address all of your comments and take action on as many as we could.
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Please, notice that our responses are provided in bold after your comments/suggestions.
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We appreciate your feedback and the time and care you spent with regards to reading our manuscript.
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Having addressed all your proposals for change and improvement, we await your decision in the best interests of Sustainability.
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Having addressed all your proposals for change and improvement, we await your decision in the best interests of Sustainability.
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We have tried to address all of your comments and take action on as many as we could.
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While the paper seems interesting I have several concerns that I would like to share with the authors:
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I am not convinced on your explanation on why committees would affect CSR.
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We have tried to address all of your comments and take action on as many as we could.
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Please, notice that our responses are provided in bold after your comments/suggestions.
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Now, we would firstly like to thank you for your efforts in revising our study and we hope that the arguments and changes are satisfactory.
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Having addressed all your proposals for change and improvement, we await your decision in the best interests of Sustainability.
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However, I accept this article only for the moderating variable the authors have tested.
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The paper lacks of robustness checks Authors:
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While the paper seems interesting I have several concerns that I would like to share with the authors: The introduction lacks of motivation.
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The article is methodologically OK and well written.
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We have tried to address all of your comments and take action on as many as we could.
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su14020860_perova
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We have tried to address all of your comments and take action on as many as we could.
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The reader needs to understand why your research question is important.
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However, in general, we see many articles like this in the area of social and environmental reporting.
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Indeed, I believe you have some omitted control variables which may cause an endogeneity issue and drive your findings.
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The paper studies the relationship between remuneration committees and CSR as well as the moderating role of independent directors.
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While the paper seems interesting I have several concerns that I would like to share with the authors: The introduction lacks of motivation.
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We are hopeful you find our responses/edits to your concerns (expressed below) sufficient.
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Author Response Dear Reviewer 3, Thank you for your kind comments.
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We appreciate your feedback and the time and care you spent with regards to reading our manuscript.
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This study aims to explore whether the existence of remuneration committees tend to disclose more corporate social responsibility (CSR) information.
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Additionally, we have also introduced in the control variable paragraph more information to provide justifications on why those control variables are considered in this study.
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Your empirical model needs to be reconsidered.
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We are hopeful you find our responses/edits to your concerns (expressed below) sufficient.
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Author Response Dear Reviewer 3, Thank you for your kind comments.
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The conclusion needs to be rewritten to highlight the practical contributions of the paper Authors:
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Having addressed all your proposals for change and improvement, we await your decision in the best interests of Sustainability.
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One the one hand, the paper trumpets collaboration, joint principles and responsibilities, mutual trust, etc.
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On the other, the paper also refers to vested (eg ‘carbon’) interests (38, 619), strong voters’ resistance (574), policy holdups (507) and opposition from disadvantaged groups (118).
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The line-up of below figures in our manuscript (with two new figures compared to the original manuscript) has deliberately been chosen in response to a number of comments from reviewers.
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The theoretical debates and the literature on "social contract", "public governance" and "sustainability" are vast and controversial.
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su14052976_makarova
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One wonders whether the notion of transformative change really warrant this evolutionary perspective.
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The theoretical debates and the literature on "social contract", "public governance" and "sustainability" are vast and controversial.
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2, 3 and 4 above) in our manuscript (with two new figures compared to the original manuscript) has deliberately been chosen in response to a number of comments from reviewers.
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8 Reviewer 1: A second point is the limited elaboration of the social contract, including the natural aspect.
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Such an approach could help to better see the authors' contributions and the difference of this contribution to what has already been discussed about public governance, a debate that is nowadays quite robust.
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Achieving this requires and involves a rebalancing of society and new imaginaries (as master signifiers), such as the well-being economy and a Natural Social Contract, as important new orientations.
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Much of this, moreover, is action-oriented, pointing out major carriers and direction of change.
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We want to note that the governance approaches advocated have been tried and tested, yielding insights for future use.
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In the given circumstances, and for the given topic, this seems very appropriate.
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What could be helpful is, in your argumentation, briefly incorporate the genealogy of your key concepts, while you work with them, thus showing more clearly how you combine and transform them.
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20 Reviewer 3: The paper presents quite an interesting discussion.
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8 Reviewer 1: A second point is the limited elaboration of the social contract, including the natural aspect.
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3 Editor: First of all, we would like to underline that it is ok to be normative.
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The line-up moves from high abstraction level (figure 2), towards a tool for identifying options for co-evolutionary steering (figure 3), to an example of leverage points for a specific transition path (figure 4).
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In a nutshell, to quote, the NSC “involves the fine-tuning of top-down policy and visions with important bottom-up processes (…), and takes place in a hybrid sphere, in which there is room for collaboration between governments, businesses, knowledge institutions and civil society, among others, characterized by Penta-helix models and based on multiple value creation”.
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Comment Response by authors 1 Reviewer 1: “This paper has much improved, also because its scope is clearer.
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A social contract, as explained, consists of a consensual, value-based deal underpinning an institutional governance arrangement.
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Our line of argumentation has been revised, and examples have been reduced to examples.
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This would take care of the remarks about case studies and examples, and avoid the impression that there's several manifestos, or a manifesto immediately derived from one empirical situation.
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The paper’s general, theoretical story is very broad and ambitious, using an extensive, abstract and complex vocabulary.
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We have included a reference to the anxiety and (absent) feelings of control and competence.
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10 Reviewer 1: Fourth, the section on co-evolution warrants serious re-thinking.
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In particular, it is suggested to start from a systematic review on the studies that bring together co-evolutionary governance and the issue of sustainability, discussing what is the scientific advance of the proposition put forward here and how it enriches the current debate on these issues.
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18 Reviewer 2: 5) In terms of the debate on public governance it would be important to insert the discussion of co-evolutionary governance not only ideally, but also exploring the differences between this theoretical proposition and other forms of governance already discussed in the literature as collaborative governance (Ansell and Gash, 2015), for example.
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In the section, NSC is presented as a ‘master signifier’ (345) and the orientation of governance actors (536) towards the ‘well-being economy’ (Table 1); NSC is also associated with alternative business models (443) and integral and robust forms of transition (554-581); NSC is said to need horizonal governance as well as Transformative Social-Ecological Innovation (TSEI).
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19 Reviewer 2: 6) Empirical cases are very relevant, but are placed as "mere examples" without delving into the challenges and difficulties lived in practice.
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It is important that the authors give more emphasis on the scientific evidences of what they defend and anchor their argumentation in such evidences, whether theoretical or empirical.
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Section 2 on “Transformation pleas and approaches for achieving this” has been substantially revised and we discuss three models for working towards transitions: collaborative governance, evolutionary steering and adaptive governance.
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This paper is openly normative in the call for the creation of a Natural Social Contract and for transformation-oriented forms of governance, but the governance approaches advocated have been tried and tested, yielding insights for future use.
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The argument could certainly be presented more succinctly, and there is a need for a light language wash ("with the?
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The paper’s general, theoretical story is very broad and ambitious, using an extensive, abstract and complex vocabulary.
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Because of this collaborative, polycentric approach, the papers draw on Evolutionary Governance Theory, and develops a perspective of “co-evolutionary steering of interrelated transitions”.
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What could be helpful is, in your argumentation, briefly incorporate the genealogy of your key concepts, while you work with them, thus showing more clearly how you combine and transform them.
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It is important that the authors also go into the challenges, the difficulties, the dilemmas in these debates.
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And how then is the aspect of nature taken on board?
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The authors cite several debates/definitions/approaches, but do not position themselves in relation to them, making clear what their theoretical contribution.
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!” (France in anger) was a popular facebook site.
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In this sense, it is not clear the relationship between the propositions presented by the authors in section 4 and the empirical or even theoretical evidences presented in the article.
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All three deal with complexity, normativity and uncertainty in an action-oriented way and have mechanisms of self-correction and adaptation which is necessary for transformations which cannot be planned and implemented from the top, but which must find solutions to demands for participation, fairness in outcomes, unintended effects in order to remain legitimate and secure continued support from societal stakeholders.
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EGT understands governance as radically evolutionary and is mindful of limitations of any form of governance.
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I suggest that the authors present the debate and the different definitions and then present the notion of GE, relating it to the TSEI.” Changes have been made accordingly.
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In a nutshell, to quote, the NSC “involves the fine-tuning of top-down policy and visions with important bottom-up processes (…), and takes place in a hybrid sphere, in which there is room for collaboration between governments, businesses, knowledge institutions and civil society, among others, characterized by Penta-helix models and based on multiple value creation”.
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To mention just one aspect, the text makes little or no reference to the differences and nuances between the realities and contexts of the countries of the North and the South, nor to the relationship between sustainability and social inequalities or between sustainability and democracy.
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One the one hand, the paper trumpets collaboration, joint principles and responsibilities, mutual trust, etc.
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Format of figures and tables has been improved where appropriate.
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With our major revision we believe we have addressed these comments, which resulted in a substantially improved paper.
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7 Reviewer 1: First, my main problem is that the paper reads as a compilation of manifestos, rather than one argumentative thread.
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All three deal with complexity, normativity and uncertainty in an action-oriented way and have mechanisms of self-correction and adaptation which is necessary for transformations which cannot be planned and implemented from the top, but which must find solutions to demands for participation, fairness in outcomes, unintended effects in order to remain legitimate and secure continued support from societal stakeholders.
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Comment Response by authors 1 Reviewer 1: “This paper has much improved, also because its scope is clearer.
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A social contract, as explained, consists of a consensual, value-based deal underpinning an institutional governance arrangement.
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Cover letter to Journal ‘Sustainability’ Special Issue: Environmental Policy and Governance: Evolutionary Perspectives Subject: Minor revisions / point-to-point response to reviewers’ second round of response Date: 14 February 2022 Manuscript ID: sustainability-1512113 Manuscript title: Transition policy after corona: The importance of a Natural Social Contract and co-evolutionary governance No.
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16 Reviewer 2: 3) Make clearer and more explicit how the article meets the proposed problematic and responds to the gaps found in the debate, including raising the limits of such proposition.
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We agree that the "normative-prescriptive" tone and use of "should be" was excessive.
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I suggest to improve the interface between the propositions presented and what comes before in the text.
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11 Reviewer 1: Following on the latter, my final point concerns the relation between transformative change and NSC.
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For more information see section 2 on page 3-10.
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The case at local and regional levels are well developed, but the discussion at international level seems poor, maybe the authors could exclude this mentioned focus o the Introduction I'll suggest a format review in the figures and their quotations, as well as the box and the table.
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This would take care of the remarks about case studies and examples, and avoid the impression that there's several manifestos, or a manifesto immediately derived from one empirical situation.
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su14052976_perova
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I suggest to improve the interface between the propositions presented and what comes before in the text.
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3 Editor: First of all, we would like to underline that it is ok to be normative.
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su14052976_perova
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In the section, NSC is presented as a ‘master signifier’ (345) and the orientation of governance actors (536) towards the ‘well-being economy’ (Table 1); NSC is also associated with alternative business models (443) and integral and robust forms of transition (554-581); NSC is said to need horizonal governance as well as Transformative Social-Ecological Innovation (TSEI).
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The paper presents quite an interesting discussion.
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Indeed, it is partly a manifesto, but it also offers an action perspective in addition to an analytical perspective.
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For more information see section 2 on page 3-10.
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I am still puzzled about the selection aspect of EGT, notably the specific roles of metaphors, open concepts and master signifiers play here (as objects and agents of selection) - particularly now NCS has been presented as a master signifier.
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The paper’s aspiration is clear and laudable; yet its elaboration is wanting.
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The theoretical debates and the literature on "social contract", "public governance" and "sustainability" are vast and controversial.
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Two, the nature and form of evolutionary variation, selection and dynamics remain unclear.
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15 Reviewer 2: 2) Remove from the problematization the "normative-prescriptive" tone starting from questions and nuisances that justify the study and from gaps in the literature.
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We want to note that the governance approaches advocated have been tried and tested, yielding insights for future use.
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Comment Response by authors 1 Reviewer 1: “This paper has much improved, also because its scope is clearer.
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The line-up moves from high abstraction level (figure 2), towards a tool for identifying options for co-evolutionary steering (figure 3), to an example of leverage points for a specific transition path (figure 4).
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su14052976_perova
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Obviously, positive and normative approaches to support actionable agendas, like ours, do not escape the yardstick of scientific evidence.
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The case at local and regional levels are well developed, but the discussion at international level seems poor, maybe the authors could exclude this mentioned focus o the Introduction I'll suggest a format review in the figures and their quotations, as well as the box and the table.
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Figure 2: Possible systemic leverage points for a societal transformation towards a Natural Social Contract, through transformative governance based on co-evolution across several interrelated dimensions (this figure is a synthesis of table 3.4 in Huntjens, 2021) Figure 3: The Intervention Flower as a tool for identifying options for co-evolutionary steering through connecting actor-coalitions and interdependent systemic leverage points.
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I suggest to improve the interface between the propositions presented and what comes before in the text, specialy linking with the contributions and limites of the proposal to face this challenges.
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See section with new title: “Transformation pleas and governance approaches for achieving this”.
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One of the reviewers speaks of a manifesto, and I would agree, but see it as a positive.
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On the other, the paper also refers to vested (eg ‘carbon’) interests (38, 619), strong voters’ resistance (574), policy holdups (507) and opposition from disadvantaged groups (118).
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The question of how the NSC can help to meet and overcome such resistances has been addressed by diving into governance approaches that are capable of dealing with complexity, ambiguity and uncertainty, and with particular attention for multiple value creation and the mutual gains approach (e.g.
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Author Response Please see the attachment Author Response File: Author Response.docx
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One the one hand, the paper trumpets collaboration, joint principles and responsibilities, mutual trust, etc.
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su14052976_perova
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Two cases serve as quick illustrations, loosely underwriting some key statements.
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The paper’s general, theoretical story is very broad and ambitious, using an extensive, abstract and complex vocabulary.
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Third, smart city services should only be used to cope with pandemic situations: 18 the healthcare-system data consists of personal information.
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I still encourage the authors to have a deep reflection on the legal and population acceptance of their proposal, but this can be the goal of another paper.
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The authors than write that these services have a limitation in that cannot predict and prevent transmission of threats such as COVID.
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As a result, the critical point of being identified before an infectious disease spreads was missed.
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su14052981_makarova
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Section 2.3 has the same title as Section 2.2.
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I think that is both a big oversight, and an opportunity for critics.
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I will give a clearer example from p.15, line 345: Second, the ( Figure
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Regarding the content, the motivation is clearer in the abstract, and this clarifies the contribution as well.
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Table 4 presents smart city projects of several different countries.
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line 85) The reference confirmed that the error occurred when the formatting was moved.
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The authors do not explain how the services they propose could be integrated with existing ones (e.g.
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Author Response Please see the attachment Author Response File: Author Response.pdf
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Several different plans are described, which is useless information for the reader.
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I still encourage the authors to have a deep reflection on the legal and population acceptance of their proposal, but this can be the goal of another paper.
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The authors acknowledge that not addressing these is a limitation of their research.
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Line 320: according to the introduction the COVID-19 pandemic started in 2019 and here you state 2020.
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I was not conviced by the authors' response regarding my suggestion for putting 3.1 into Section 2, but this was a quite minor comment anyway, and there is not only one good way to structure a text, the paper is also understandable with the structure proposed by the authors.
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Regarding the content, the motivation is clearer in the abstract, and this clarifies the contribution as well.
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First, an epidemiological surveyor should decide whether additional collection of personal information is needed.
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I think many cities and countries will not be comfortable with this approach.
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However some parts still appear unnecessary to me.
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In this source you can find a whole list of smart city technologies http://www.sinfonia- smartcities.eu/en/resources/d21--swot-analysis-report-of-the-refined-conceptbaseline Might be of interest for your work.
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su14052981_makarova
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Section 3.1 gives an overview of the COVID-19 and smart city systems situation in South Korea, but is not part of the novel contribution by the authors.
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Regarding the content, the motivation is clearer in the abstract, and this clarifies the contribution as well.
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su14052981_makarova
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Wastewater surveillance for population-wide Covid-19: the present and future.
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For many other sources, the local access path of the file is provided, which again prevents the reader from retrieving the source.
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Thank you again for your supportive review to improve the manuscript.
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Author Response Please see the attachment Author Response File: Author Response.pdf
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Once infected people have been identified, they are supposedly in quarantine.
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I believe that explaining standard constraints (due to the multiplicity of service providers) and coupling between services in the introduction to motivate the paper would be valuable.
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In Smart Cities for Technological and Social Innovation (pp.
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I have checked the online source and it mentions other aspects such as treatment and isolation for the recognition phase, which have not been picked up by the authors.
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The authors argue that the smart city services failed to be flexible enough to predict and fight the pandemic.
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should appear as Second, the Figure 4 scenario assumed by this study is uncertain.
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The authors argue that this would be precious to predict and fight against a pandemic, and as such they propose a smart city structure model.
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I believe that explaining standard constraints (due to the multiplicity of service providers) and coupling between services in the introduction to motivate the paper would be valuable.
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Thank you again for your supportive review to improve the manuscript.
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In summary, my suggestions are to focus the paper on the Korean context, in an in-depth case study approach where authors detail more their contribution, clearly illustrate what the problem is and how their contribution helps solving it.
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The contribution is a proposition of services such as screening people with thermal cameras and tracking infected people through CCTV.
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Smart City and COVID Webb, W., & Toh, C. K. (2020).
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The literature review is very long (it represents half of the paper) and can be significantly shortened as it contains few information that is actually useful to the rest of the paper.
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I will give a clearer example from p.15, line 345: Second, the ( Figure
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su14052981_makarova
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The authors could remove the table and mention 1-2 standards relevant for pandemics and make the same point.
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Wastewater surveillance for population-wide Covid-19: the present and future.
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su14052981_makarova
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Current Opinion in Environmental Science & Health, 17, 14-20.
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- “This study proposes a method for timely and sequential responses, through a flexible combination of the healthcare system and smart city services by envisioning a scenario that sequentially grafts the current status of COVID-19 in Korea.” #4.
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su14052981_makarova
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Additionally, I've included a few other pieces on COVID and smart cities.
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“Additionally, smart city services couldn`t respond in-time series” (is this time series in the statistical sense?
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su14052981_makarova
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Unfortunately, they are enough for me to recommend to reject the paper, as I consider that submitting a report of scientific quality in this form is unacceptable.
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Regarding the references, my point was that there are many references *with formatting mistakes in them*, and not that there are too many references in the bibliography.
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su14052981_makarova
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Unfortunately, they are enough for me to recommend to reject the paper, as I consider that submitting a report of scientific quality in this form is unacceptable.
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The authors than write that these services have a limitation in that cannot predict and prevent transmission of threats such as COVID.
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su14052981_makarova
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Section 3.1 gives an overview of the COVID-19 and smart city systems situation in South Korea, but is not part of the novel contribution by the authors.
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“Additionally, smart city services couldn`t respond in-time series” (is this time series in the statistical sense?
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su14052981_makarova
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The authors made substantial efforts to take my comments into account, and I commend them for that.
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There are also many in-text reference errors with tables, which makes it hard to follow given the high number of tables (13!).
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su14052981_makarova
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Wastewater surveillance for population-wide Covid-19: the present and future.
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Do the authors propose to track everyone and then go back to the records of infected people to retrieve their paths and contacts?
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su14052981_makarova
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This may be because of the error message 3 in sourcing in the document I received.
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Section 3.1 gives an overview of the COVID-19 and smart city systems situation in South Korea, but is not part of the novel contribution by the authors.
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su14052981_makarova
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