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I still encourage the authors to have a deep reflection on the legal and population acceptance of their proposal, but this can be the goal of another paper.
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Once infected people have been identified, they are supposedly in quarantine.
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COVID-19 Scenario: Outbreak of COVID-19 in Korea ) scenario assumed by this study is uncertain.
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However, despite the good improvements, I have some remaining concerns.
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Thank you again for your supportive review to improve the manuscript.
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I was not conviced by the authors' response regarding my suggestion for putting 3.1 into Section 2, but this was a quite minor comment anyway, and there is not only one good way to structure a text, the paper is also understandable with the structure proposed by the authors.
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In Smart Cities, Green Technologies, and Intelligent Transport Systems (pp.
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Do the authors propose to track everyone and then go back to the records of infected people to retrieve their paths and contacts?
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Wastewater and public health: the potential of wastewater surveillance for monitoring COVID-19.
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The legal and ethical aspects are still too much overlooked in my opinion, but I appreciate that the authors added a note on the legal framework of Korea.
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Third, smart city services should only be used to cope with pandemic situations: 18 the healthcare-system data consists of personal information.
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There are referencing issues with sections as well (e.g.
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The abstract is very confusingly written and needs a lot of editing.
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This is a very important point, since it changes what is the contribution of the paper.
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There are some phrasing issues and typos throughout the paper.
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As a result, the critical point of being identified before an infectious disease spreads was missed.
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Current Opinion in Environmental Science & Health, 17, 14-20.
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I'd argue that one of the areas in which Smart City applications (in particular) and urban automation (in general) have been most important during the COVID pandemic - the monitoring of sewage and wastewater for population level assessment of infection - isn't even mentioned.
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The Impact of COVID-19 Experience on Smart City and Future Mobility.
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Indeed, if my understanding is correct, they are the factors that cause the limitations of smart city services the authors want to address.
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I stand by my position that the feasibility/ethical aspects should be discussed, at least from a social acceptance or a legal point of view, as the reader is left skeptical about whether it can actually be done with the current explanations.
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In addition, errors in the sentences have been reviewed and corrected.
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I stand by my position that the feasibility/ethical aspects should be discussed, at least from a social acceptance or a legal point of view, as the reader is left skeptical about whether it can actually be done with the current explanations.
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1 Dear Reviewer #1, I am grateful for your suggestions and kind commendation.
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In Smart Cities for Technological and Social Innovation (pp.
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Once infected people have been identified, they are supposedly in quarantine.
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Sharifi, A., Khavarian-Garmsir, A. R., & Kummitha, R. K. R. (2021).
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First, I have a series of concerns regarding the form.
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It is also hard to read, as it contains more tabular content than text.
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Please check especially the conclusion, this is hardly readable.
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Smart City and COVID Webb, W., & Toh, C. K. (2020).
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In other terms, what can we use from the authors' paper to achieve a more flexible smart city service structure?
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The authors bring up interesting legal considerations in their response to my comments, it would be nice to have them in the paper to show the reader under which conditions the authors' solution can be used.
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I'd argue that one of the areas in which Smart City applications (in particular) and urban automation (in general) have been most important during the COVID pandemic - the monitoring of sewage and wastewater for population level assessment of infection - isn't even mentioned.
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The legal and ethical aspects are still too much overlooked in my opinion, but I appreciate that the authors added a note on the legal framework of Korea.
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It is important to operate the monitoring system for sewage and wastewater for population level assessment of infection, which is considered to be the most important source of infection.
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We sincerely apologize for the basic mistake.
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Lines 352-354: here we have two times Figure 2.
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I will give a clearer example from p.15, line 345: Second, the ( Figure 4.
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The legal and ethical aspects are still too much overlooked in my opinion, but I appreciate that the authors added a note on the legal framework of Korea.
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Section 2.3 has the same title as Section 2.2.
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It is also hard to read, as it contains more tabular content than text.
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Thank you again for your supportive review to improve the manuscript.
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In addition, we will use a more advanced paper by reflecting it in the ongoing research.
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The authors argue that this would be precious to predict and fight against a pandemic, and as such they propose a smart city structure model.
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1) Confusing or awkward wording in the abstract:
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I have checked the online source and it mentions other aspects such as treatment and isolation for the recognition phase, which have not been picked up by the authors.
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1 Dear Reviewer #2, I am grateful for your suggestions regarding my paper, and my answers to your comments are provided below.
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In addressing the comments, I have been able to improve the clarity and content of the manuscript vastly.
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Thank you once again for your pertinent suggestions and feedback.
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Several different plans are described, which is useless information for the reader.
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For technical reasons (most smart cities have less capability and are less developed than Korean ones), but especially for legal and normative reasons (concerns about surveillance, governance, cybersecurity, etc.)
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The literature review is very long (it represents half of the paper) and can be significantly shortened as it contains few information that is actually useful to the rest of the paper.
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In addition, errors in the sentences have been reviewed and corrected.
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I'd argue that one of the areas in which Smart City applications (in particular) and urban automation (in general) have been most important during the COVID pandemic - the monitoring of sewage and wastewater for population level assessment of infection - isn't even mentioned.
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Please feel free to add them back if you feel they should be included.
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This is a very important point, since it changes what is the contribution of the paper.
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Please check especially the conclusion, this is hardly readable.
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I have made major revisions to the paper based on your inputs, as mentioned below.
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(pg3) Tables 1 is interesting, but it’s not clear the source of the data.
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Although there are still many things incomplete, we did our best to reflect the opinions of the reviewers.
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1) Confusing or awkward wording in the abstract:
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The authors made substantial efforts to take my comments into account, and I commend them for that.
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For many other sources, the local access path of the file is provided, which again prevents the reader from retrieving the source.
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I thus find it now less essential to discuss the practical aspects of service adding and removing.
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However, I am lacking the contribution on the more general issue of integrating and removing services in an existing smart city infrastructure.
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In this source you can find a whole list of smart city technologies http://www.sinfonia- smartcities.eu/en/resources/d21--swot-analysis-report-of-the-refined-conceptbaseline Might be of interest for your work.
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[15], [22], [25]) it is impossible to retrieve the source.
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Thank you once again for your pertinent suggestions and feedback.
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The authors could remove the table and mention 1-2 standards relevant for pandemics and make the same point.
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(pg2) Does the use of police/telecom monitoring of patients translate out of the Korean context?
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However, it misses a critical point of COVID.
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It is well-known that many standards exist and are not used in every service, which causes integration issues.
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Third, smart city services should only be used to cope with pandemic situations: 18 the healthcare-system data consists of personal information.
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The abstract is very confusingly written and needs a lot of editing.
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Regarding the references, my point was that there are many references *with formatting mistakes in them*, and not that there are too many references in the bibliography.
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Section 3, named “Main discussion”, should be renamed to be more explicit regarding what the reader can expect to find.
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It is well-known that many standards exist and are not used in every service, which causes integration issues.
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My last concern is the ethical aspects of the proposed services.
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Third, smart city services should only be used to cope with pandemic situations: 18 the healthcare-system data consists of personal information.
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I have made major revisions to the paper based on your inputs, as mentioned below.
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Thank you once again for your pertinent suggestions and feedback.
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Additionally, I've included a few other pieces on COVID and smart cities.
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Do the authors propose to track everyone and then go back to the records of infected people to retrieve their paths and contacts?
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For many other sources, the local access path of the file is provided, which again prevents the reader from retrieving the source.
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- “This study proposes a method for timely and sequential responses, through a flexible combination of the healthcare system and smart city services by envisioning a scenario that sequentially grafts the current status of COVID-19 in Korea.” #4.
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Section 2 would thus have a part on smart city services, a part on COVID-19 response plans, and then the current content of 3.1 which deals with the relationship between the two parts of the current Section 2.
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In the introduction, I could not understand the motivation of the paper.
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Also, references to figures seem to include the full caption and cause line breaks instead of the figure number only.
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I think that is both a big oversight, and an opportunity for critics.
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However some parts still appear unnecessary to me.
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I think it synthesizes some important and useful literatures, and has some useful points to make.
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I'd argue that one of the areas in which Smart City applications (in particular) and urban automation (in general) have been most important during the COVID pandemic - the monitoring of sewage and wastewater for population level assessment of infection - isn't even mentioned.
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Thank you again for your supportive review to improve the manuscript.
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Therefore, smart city services respond- 19 ing COVID-19 must exist as a flexible.”
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Also, references to figures seem to include the full caption and cause line breaks instead of the figure number only.
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We sincerely apologize for repeating basic mistakes.
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should appear as Second, the Figure 4 scenario assumed by this study is uncertain.
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You have some values that are not included in this interval - maybe because of the outliers from the figures above that I recommend to exclude.
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However, there is no in-depth discussion or recommendations that follow.
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The authors presented and analyzed the variables/areas of certification with many models, it is interesting and is a basis for analysis in the next section.
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Literature review: There is still work to do discussing the five areas, not just relating them to each dimension of the Triple Bottom Line of the sustainability concept.
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Reviewer’s suggestion: This paper analyses the consistency and robustness of the B impact assessment model in measuring sustainability impacts in five areas of ?
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What is the main result of the B assessment with the confirmatory analysis?
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Point 2: Further, the hypothesis does not seem to be written correctly.
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The authors test a popular assessment tool using confirmatory factor analysis and finds that the model is weak.
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The method section has been improved (text in blue).
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The authors should develop more theory than describe a model which has already existed.
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The Cronbach’s Alpha ‘selected’ just ‘environment’ area of the B Lab model.
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Point 2: Are the research design, questions, hypotheses and methods clearly stated?
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Abstract: The main objective is to analyze the B Impact Assessment, verifying the robustness and consistency of the model to measure and improve the economic, social, and environmental impact of companies.
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It’s their signature in the text, so I understand that they deserve this recognition.
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Point 3: The text has some improvements, but there are some points that still demand more attention.
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Point 6: Results: The sentence from line 137 to line 138 isn’t clear when I saw Figure 6.
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Point 6: Results: The sentence from line 137 to line 138 isn’t clear when I saw Figure 6.
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The authors answer the comments by saying that Figure 1 was done by them, it’s fair to provide this information.
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In fact, the discussion needs to be grounded in previous research findings in regard to CSR/sustainability indices/assessment tools/initiatives.
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Overall the information presented it makes sense to me.
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Some authors were added, but for me, this section demands an improvement to enhance the quality of the text, and to turn it into a scientific paper.
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It was not clear to me who is the author of Figure 1, the B Lab, or the authors of this paper?
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The manuscript has been revised to improve grammar and english language.
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We have made all the minor corrections indicated.
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Point 3: Unfortunately, I cannot recommend publication unless major changes are made to the discussion section and possibly recommendations are added for future research and practice.
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First, it should be stated prior to the methods section.
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The authors must add the source of that areas, and it is enough for the objective.
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Overall the information presented it makes sense to me.
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For me, the answer to Hypothesis 1 isn’t clear.
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1 Response to Reviewer 1 Comments Point 1: Thank you for giving the opportunity to read such an interesting paper.
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The section demands a literature review about the theme, as the relationship between the certificate with adding value, sustainability, and the ‘areas’ governance, workers, community, environment, and customers.
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Line 199, L. 223) • Paragraph presented after Table 2 (page 7) is a repetitive content to what has been presented in the Table.
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- workers values greater then 40, community greater than 58, environment 45, customers 46 (the bullets), in Fig 3 - values with global score greater than 130, in Fig.
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1 Response to Reviewer 1 Comments Point 1: Thank you for giving the opportunity to read such an interesting paper.
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For me, the answer to Hypothesis 1 isn’t clear.
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The source of data from all companies in the sample isn’t clear, is B Corporation (site) or authors contact all these companies and did the survey?
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The authors answer the comments by saying that Figure 1 was done by them, it’s fair to provide this information.
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1 Response to Reviewer 3 Comments (round 2) Point 1:
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The sentence in the Introduction is more complete than the main objective in the Abstract.
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What is its contribution to the structure of a model using Confirmatory Analysis?
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• It is better to show the P-values in Table 3 rather than (***) although a note is indicated in this regard.
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This is an interesting result, which could be more analyzed with other assessment models presented in the text, to say what the authors wrote at the end of the section.
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I suggest the explanation given in the reviewers’ response about the decrease of companies in the sample be available in the text (“The reduction in the number of companies was based on the analysis of the database and information collected from B Lab that allowed us to see that there was a change in the measurement model used in B Corp certification during the period January 2017 and March 2021.
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The authors should develop more theory than describe a model which has already existed.
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The content in this section is exclusively dedicated to the Certification and the Corporation which offers it, there isn’t any scientific information there.
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• It is better to show the P-values in Table 3 rather than (***) although a note is indicated in this regard.
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Point 2: Abstract: The content is well organized, but the results need some to attract the reader.
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Point 2: Are the research design, questions, hypotheses and methods clearly stated?
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Response 5: We believe that the reviewers' suggestions have been very helpful in improving the manuscript.
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For me, the answer to Hypothesis 1 isn’t clear.
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For me, lines 39 and 40 show the aim of the paper, but the idea is different from the ones presented in the abstract (“The main objective is to understand the B Impact Assessment, verifying its added value in the sustainability process and socio-economic development of the business sector”).
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I suggest cutting the text from lines 90 to 103 because it’s quite an advertisement for the B Certificate.
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Overall, I believe that this study has a high potential to add to the literature on the relationship between gender diversity and firm environmental performance.
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This is particularly relevant for countries vulnerable to shocks whether internal or external (Covid-19, war, conflicts, trade tensions, etc.).
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Below we provide the details on how your comments and suggestions have been addressed.
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In terms of policy, our findings suggest that promoting gender diversity cannot reach full potential, and may even lead to adverse results unless accompanied by measures that mitigate political and economic uncertainty.
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This, in turn, discourages in-vestments in costly abatements technologies and environmental-friendly processes.
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The rational for this result stems from the idea that uncertainty adversely affects the enabling environment of an economy.
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In terms of policy, our findings suggest that promoting gender diversity cannot reach full potential, and may even lead to adverse results unless accompanied by measures that mitigate political and economic uncertainty.
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In terms of policy, our finding suggests that promoting gender diversity on corporate boards should be accompanied by measures that reduce political and economic uncertainty.
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This threshold value points to a standard and very important result in the literature.
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These reduce their aversion to risk, which increases their confidence and willingness to invest.
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These measures would create an enabling environment both for households and entrepreneurs.
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This refers to the critical mass theory, by which the impact of gender diversity on the environmental performance of firms materializes only when a critical mass weight of females is realized in corporate boards (Konrad et al., 200839; Torchia et al., 201140; Schwartz-Ziv, 201741; among others).
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Amended data is already available on the product.
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As it stands, the paper offers little insight into the reasoning behind their hypothesis.
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More gender-diverse corporate boards would not lead to better environmental performances of firms in countries with higher uncertainty (higher WUI score).
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Please provide some, and position your work in that (brief) strand of literature.
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This is a well-executed study with a solid research base.
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4- Add a discussion of results section and relate your results with theories.
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Similar problems might exist for a negative tobin's Q.
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Similar problems stem from the following paragraphs discussing the results.
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Ultimately, this would put pressure on firms’ behavior and worsen their environmental performances (Bloom, 20149; Atsu and Adams, 202137).
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The only remark on the content refers to “Are the arguments and discussion of finding coherent, balanced and compelling?
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It would be useful if the authors provided some speculative thoughts on the finding that the slope of the GenDiv variable is negative in highly uncertain countries on the firm's environmental performance (Figure 3 (c) red line).
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The arguments above provides a rationale for the worsened environmental performances of firms in response to higher uncertainties, and explains the gap in effects for firms across countries of different uncertainty levels.
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Similar problems might exist for a negative tobin's Q.
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I only have a few minor concerns that I'd like the authors to clarify and address when revising.
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Ultimately, this would put pressure on firms’ behavior and worsen their environmental performances (Bloom, 20149; Atsu and Adams, 202137).
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We deeply regret the inconvenience caused due to this.
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They contribute to anchoring economic agents’ expectations, and stabilize the economy.
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They contribute to anchoring economic agents’ expectations, and stabilize the economy.
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I would like to recommend its acceptance for publication.
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I would like to recommend its acceptance for publication.
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Among the three methods used, the upper bilateral floret injection (UBFI) maximizes DON accumulation in grain and significantly distinguishes DON content in different wheat genotypes, indicating that the method could be useful for breeding program to develop wheat cultivars with resistance to DON accumulation.
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The paper describes a set of experiments carried out in 2020 2021 on isogenic lines of wheat using different methods of Fusarium inoculation in order to assess the effect of Fusarium inoculation on FHB disease index and DON accumulation.
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Mycotoxin deoxynivalenol (DON) contamination of wheat and other grains has been a concern of food safety.
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Authors in this manuscript report that DON accumulation in wheat grain is affected by inoculation methods (infection points).
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Minimizing DON contamination in grains is a major goal of Fusarium Head Blight (FHB) research community.
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Point 7: Fhb1- and Fhb1+ don’t appear in Table S1, so they can be removed from the footnote.
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Mycotoxin deoxynivalenol (DON) contamination of wheat and other grains has been a concern of food safety.
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Point 2: Line 142: “proportion of PPSD” should be “proportion of PSD or PPSD”.
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Given that 2.4 chapter discusses data of supplementary figure 4 would suggest to make figure S4 as Figure 4 of the manuscript.
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Point 2: To further clarify the infection methods a supplementary figure detailing graphically the modes of inoculation with figures would make the paper extremely useful for the community.
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1 Response to Reviewer 2 Comments Point 1: I would suggest to avoid citing supplementary figures at the beginning of the chapter.
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Among the three methods used, the upper bilateral floret injection (UBFI) maximizes DON accumulation in grain and significantly distinguishes DON content in different wheat genotypes, indicating that the method could be useful for breeding program to develop wheat cultivars with resistance to DON accumulation.
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Given that 2.4 chapter discusses data of supplementary figure 4 would suggest to make figure S4 as Figure 4 of the manuscript.
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Authors in this manuscript report that DON accumulation in wheat grain is affected by inoculation methods (infection points).
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1 Response to Reviewer 2 Comments Point 1: I would suggest to avoid citing supplementary figures at the beginning of the chapter.
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While DON concentrations in grains are usually correlated with disease severity, high DON levels have been observed in asymptomatic kernels.
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