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EEEF07B3D146 | Do you accomplish more when you always keep yourself busy? In this essay i will argue that keeping yourself busy serves a purpose. You get more things done, you will not be considered lazy and you get to learn new things.
When you are always doing something you get more things done and out of the way. You will not be behind on anything. This is a good habit to have because it can affect you in the long run. For example, when you get older and have to pay taxes or bills. You will be caught up and on time which is really good for your credit score.
You will not be considered lazy. Many people in your life will notice how you like to get things done. This habit will definitely get you a job. No employer is looking for someone lazy and does not like to do things. Keeping yourself busy can be therapeutic. Many people do this to relive stress or think about things instead of being useless.
You will learn new things. Take advantage of the things you do because it can lead you to new opportunities. You can experience different things which is phenomenal. It is always fun keeping yourself busy because you feel great after the things you have accomplished. The more things you learn the more things you can try to keep yourself busy.
Some people say inactivity serves a purpose, but they are wrong because when you are always doing something it keeps you motivated, experienced and makes a good habit to have. In the future I hope we have less useless people and more people who like to get things done. | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
EEEF81C2E133 | I am writing this prompt to inform you about the position for hiring. I would be very delighted if I could be hired by you. I do not have experience at all but, I can show you that I am a good candidate for this job and I could handle the job very well. Here are some few reason why I would be a good candidate for the job.
One reason on why you should hire me is that even though I don't have experience I tend to learn really fast and do multiple things at a time. Usually I memorize them very easily. It has a greater impact on me because I learn fast and customers are more happy with the service. Also, I could do many things at a time which is good for the job and good for the customers.
For example, in some restaurants it takes long for someone to do your order or even get to your table to get your order. It is better if you have someone that is fast and shows that the customers are there number one priority. It is good that the customers feel welcomed and feel important when the workers are giving them attention.
Another reason is that I have an amazing, outstanding attitude with people. I am a very joyful person and what I feel like is right, is giving joyfulness to customers who need it. For example, I have friends that sometimes have had a rough day and I tend to help them and make them happier and change their perspective to a better one. I think it is good that if a restaurant has someone happy and joyful the customers would want to come in because its a very joyful place. My goal is always to see poeple smiling and keept encouraging them to always be happy.
The restaurant can always make more money when customers feel like its there home.
Lastly, I like meeting new people at jobs and working as a group. What I love to do is bringing everyone together and making new friendships.
I've seen that when working as a groups it is better because you get things done faster. You also make greter connections with your coworkers. For example, If someone needs something for a customer and your busy doing something else its better to ask a coworker to help you out. I like bringing bonds together and working with them.
These are some of the reason I would love to get the job. I want to learn something new thats not from my perspective. I love trying new things and getting to know the different types of jobs around the community. I also learn very fast and I love being commited to anything and working as a group. I hoppe you consider me to work there and I would be very happy. Thank you for your time. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
EF1CF9E844F7 | I believe high schools students should not be expected to stick to a career, They are barely finding themselves. Choising a career a at young age can lead to mistakes like choosing something you don't enjoy.
High Schools Program shoud be a way to help the future profesional to find what they are really want to be in the future, high school stage is one of the most important step for the young age students, Because there is when they choose their future, We need to work with them the best way is posible, We need to find out a programs that impulse them to continue students after high schools graduate.
In some case parents try to tell their children what career they have to take, In that case if the students have to choose a career by the time they are entering to the high schools, Most probably will be their parents choosed what career they are going to take it, So that may be a mistake for the student because when they finally found themself, Probably they realize there were something else more interesting for them that they could take it, At that time would be too late.
Also some students may take a career that doesn't make the money they were expecting, or choosing a career that's not fit for them,
What the high school should be concern about is to form the best profesional for the future, Teaching them the best educations is posible and the same way showing them what kinds of career are there,The advantage and the disadvantage all the career have it.
High schools programs should know they're playing a really impotant roll in the future of the country, However the programs needs to be concentrated, should be educated the young guys the best way is posible,
Create a programs to keep them away from problems like; Grugs, Alcohols, Gangs. This 3 problems are killing our new genetion, This is one of the reason why the students leave the schools at early time. Also the high schools needs to help the students to find the career that will make them be happy in the furute. Should not be the high schools expected to the students to identify a career before or at the time their are entering to the high schools.
In conclusion, high schools students, In my opinion are not ready to choose a career yet, At their age they may not know what really want, or be ready to make such a big decision. | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
EF2E939F92B2 | Generic_Name
Pd. sol
3/21/2019
"Commit a career at a young age gives time for students to approach their goals and advance towards the future"
During High School, many Juniors and Seniors are already preparing themselves for college, taking classes that would give them credit and would benefit them as they go, also there are some classes that would provide students lots of experiences, these experiences prepared students in a way for them to see how much effort they must put to approach their goal.
The Board of Teachers in a private school have said that, "The more early a student starts their way to a career, the less struggle is for them to accomplish it", because at their young age they have more time, less worries and not that much of responsibility, as a person gets older the more problems and responsibilities come to them, Although students also have many struggles in school, their house etc, is more less then an adult, That is why teachers think that is better for a student to commit a career at a young age because they are less worried.
The percentage of students that commit a career at a young age is high, many of this students received a schoolarships others financial help, because of their behavior and their effort,The other half of this percentage of students have a well financial situation and there is no need for help or schoolarships, although there is a low percentage of students that prefer to work instead of going to college, because of their financial situation,However many students with low financial situation have succeed at their young age because of their effort to accomplish their dreams by working hard and knowing what they want to succeed in.
Commiting a career at a young age could be difficult or it could be simple, there is more students that had said that is a great idea, because your mind at a young age is envolving in everything that surrounds the student, such as important information that would benefit him, as i said, the brain has more potencial to store as much information as it can, because the student is young and is focus on its goals and there is no problems or thoughts that could disstract the student.
Other students had said that is a bad idea in a way of making the biggest decisition, which is choosing what career you want to accomplish, because at that age they do not actually know what they really want.
Parents and the societies have a big influence when students are choosing which path to go, some parents wants their kids to follow their steps, so they encorage their kids to take courses that would help them as they go, parents would always want the best for their kids more when its about their future.
Accomplishing a career at a young age brings many benefits, one of them is that the person not longer have to be thinking about it, takes a big weight off their shoulders, also the person would have more time for the family and especially the person would have many opportunities to find a job, because that person is young and lots of doors would be open for them.
As we see commiting a career at a young age has many advantanges the biggest one is that, the students approach their goals and advance towards their great future. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
EF36F9497E96 | I think i'm going to agree what Churchill had said. Because, if i success so easily, i won't able to understand how hard to earn something. Some people think they are smart and they'd never fail. But me, i thought a different way. I thought that if i fail,i 'll have more experience. For an example, in my country, Vietnam, people always say that failure is the key lead to your success. I have failed many times in my life, but i never give up. I remembered when i was 8, i was really love the egg that my mom made for me. So i asked her how to made that egg, and of course i had broken a lot of eggs. And i also wanted to give up, but, i'm really love the foods that made from egg. So i continued learning how to cook the egg, and now i succeed with the fried egg dish. In my conclusion, i want to say that being a failure isn't a bad thing, because it helps me know that i can do better. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
EF3A72193AAF | The
British Prime Minister Winston Churchill said "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". I agree with Churchill's statement because you have to work hard to be success, sometimes you are going to failure but you have to try and try and never give up.
There are a lot of obstacles to be success, you have to avoid them. Sometimes you are going to fell but do not give up. You learn from the failures. Churchill said that you have to failure to get success, if you failure you never have to loss enthusiams. For example, if you want to go to college and you do not have money to pay the college, you are going to feel sad because you can not do it, but you have to find a way to solve your problems, you can work and study at the same time, work to get the money to pay the college and then complete your carreer.
To become successul, you have to work hard, do not give up, be positive, solve problems, try your best, and learn something new. Do not forget that success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
EF455BB07922 | The grow is the stage of the life on the grow-up it is.
The life is on the present for on self, the firs stage of the life is, you live born be, grow up, desedence, up old and stage of life. Writing easy but, is so long the years like has registered will people live centenary
I was to agree
By the word raw and direct is more eficas because way take the life like game and way take the responsibilities, like made you personal money no the money will you dad give, for you work for the future you no how is the life.
Example is me, by when was like little boy i understand how doing on the life when have 8 old year i made may bred fast and clean when i am eat shower my uniform of my school, to 15 year working little but i can paid something and i star the the actuality i no how is the life and what need doing for the future have my vision my dream for have so cool future for me and for some was with me.
When you no can doing something you calidad of life is so more short, but
Finalized, you need the comprendetion the life, what is you vision for the function , what is you dream , for you an you family, star made you personal plane thin complete you tin and no depend of nothing i am free | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
EF45D0314A20 | Almost 95% of people goes to the beach or swimming pools, and I imagined what enjoyable activity to do. I think swimming club is the most enjoyable activity. Swimming is an enjoyable activity because it helps me calm whenever i'm mad, I can also swim with my friends and play together, and it is also more easier and exciting to exercise whenever i'm swimming.
First of all, swimming is an enjoyable activity because it helps me calm whenever i'm mad or feeling down. Last year, when the school just finished, and all of the people left, I jumped into the pool and just swam. It made me happy because as I swam into the surface of the water, I heard the water droplets drop as I moved my feet up and down, the sound of the wave made me sleepy as they touched the wall, and the sound of the gushing water that made me feel alive as I went out of the pool. Another example would be, when I was on a field trip, we all went to the beach and stayed there for two days. As the day goes by, I was sad and upset because I didn't want to leave. What I did was I changed my clothes, took my camera, and went outside. As I walk on the sandy beach, I heard the waves as if they were ready to eat me, I heard the birds chirping as I take a picture of them. It was a very fun and calm day. That is why swimming is an enjoyable activity because it helps me calm.
Second of all, swimming is an enjoyable activity because you get to swim with your friends, even make new friends! An example would be when I was swimming alone, I was okay because I don't really mind being alone, but when my friends came, they instantly made me laugh. All of us were doing tricks and racing with each other, which is very fun. One time, when my friends was swiming underwater, they bumped each other's head and as they reach to the surface, three of us laughed. Also, learning how to swim is easier because swimming is fun, and it's more fun with your friends. An example would be your friend can help you out when you're struggling how to float. Even doing dog swim is hard for some people, which is easy for me. Also, learning by yourself isn't fun, learning with your friends is more fun. That is why swimming is an enjoyable activity because you get to swim with your friends.
Lastly, swimming is an enjoyable activity because it's mpre exciting to exercise when you're swimming. I once took a swimming lesson every friday after school. I didn't like it at first, but as soon as my third day came, I liked it so much. I gained 145 pounds for a ten year old, but when I took my swimming lesson, my weight decreased to 111 pounds. You don't really see the result, until you started having fun on what you're doing. An example would be I was really not into swimming and all I wanted to do there is to lose weight. I didn't see any improvement onj my swimming skills, and I didn't lose weight at all. Weeks passed and I started losing weight, and im becoming more better at swimming. I thought is because I got more passionate and determined when swimming that I didn't see those changes. After all what i've been through, swimming made me happy at all times. That is how swimming impacted my life.
It's more exciting and easier to exercise when swimming, you can swim with your friends and play together, and it helps me calm whenever i'm mad, and that is why swimming is an enjoyable activity. It is important for people to know this is because this is a real life story. It already helped three people when they read this. Swimming club is an enjoyable activity. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
EF47AB98271A | Do you agree or disagree with the impression are almost impossible to change?
Many people in the society are taking several changes in the life of them, this will be a form to improve their goals in the future, some people thinking that made changes might be completely complicated for many reasons that they cannot do this, sometimes would be for some issues that we have. Also, each one we have different purposes but anything is impossible in this world made some changes that even more will be like a window with many opportunity. Opportunely sometimes we don't take the worst to start made certains changes that this will be big chances. In my own opinion this might be to begin a new style of life with the propose to change and improve my goals that will be the beginning of new opportunnity increase my ability to achieve my dreams that I have in my mind, open me in the future with new goals in the mind and never give up till that my dreams can be successful. The impressions never can be impossible because, can be new opportunity in the rest of the life, to improve our goals and dreams in the future and to make plans to increase our ability of achieve our ieas.
New opportunities in the rest of our life, will be a opportunity that are certains change that might be like a door with new offer of jobs, that this will allow change in our life to increase our knowledge to put in practice and improve our ability in create new ideas that would be a big help to develop in the society in any job that we will do, each day the technology advance. This means that, we have the opportunity to learn any more and to achieve different kinds of project to develop at the society.
Improve our goals and dreams in the future, will be the best form to change and improve our ideas or plans that we have in mind to develop ourself. To discovery new ideas and be capable to do that and put in practice our knowledge and to get excited in achieve our goals that is the better for us, each day put more dedication in improve our mistakes and made certains changes about theses mistakes that we did. Sometimes happen that because some people don't follow their work for some mistakes that they did, the most important is to learn of the mistakes that we did and trying to improve it.
Make plans to increase our ability of achieve our ideas, this is a form to thinking about it and made a list of things that we would like achieve to improve our knowledge, to learn and create projects that we have in mind to realize. Thinking about different ideas and plans that might be the better for ourself in our develop in any area. Also, this will be a big idea to realize our ideas to increase our economy if we have good work in any job that we do and each day trying to be more better in the society with our family.
In conclusion, all this definitely is the better for us in made some changes that we know will be the form to create and realize our plans that we have in our mind, sometimes can be so hard to do some changes in our life, but everyone know that is the better to improve and increase our abilityin the develop of different plans and ideas that we have, even more this will be better opportunity in the rest of our life, we can achieve all our goals if everyone start change for a better life. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
EF4966D17FFB | Eating healthy food is good for our health. People can also live longer eating healthy food in their life, and eating same food everyday can also be bad for our health. Taking this situation our school principal should change our lunch to healthier food because students will not get bored eating same lunch everyday, students will stay healthy, and students will have new experience.
Students at school are getting tired eating same meal every day. If our school principle change to the healthy lunch, students at school will be so proud trying new food, but some students who have their favorite cafeteria food they might have to get their food from home or try new healthy food at school.
Students will stay healthy from eating healthy food. Eating same lunch everyday can be very dangerous in our life. Students are getting sick everyday and have to struggle with disease like food poison, vomiting, and so on. Changing school cafeteria food to healthy food can help many students stay healthy. Over the past years many people have died eating same meal everyday, and that's what we are doing here at school "eating same lunch every single day".
Students who had never tried healthy food like salad, vegetable, apple and so on. For those students it will be fun experience and also some students love to try new things. Students who have their favorite food in school cafeteria, they can try new food once. Students might like those new food and be their favorite food.
Eating healthy food is one of the great thing to do to satay healthy. If our school principal many people would like the food. And eating healthy food or trying new food have many advantage like stay healthy, new experience, and they will not get bored with same lunch everyday. So, eating healthy food can be lot safer than eating same meal every day. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
EF5922BDE9E5 | Benefits of working in a group is much easier than working all by yourself. For example, working with a group can help the students communicate with their classmates. They can also get a lot of work done by working in groups.
Working with groups is such a good idea because the classmates can communicate with each other , take the stress away from working alone. For example I have a lot of teachers who like to assign assignments independently and group work. It's a hassle for me to work on my own because I have a busy schedule after school. At times I dont even get to turn in my assignment when it's due. When my teacher assigns group it's way easier for me because all of my classmates will get to get a job to do with the assignment and we can work on it at school and be finished before the due date. It's also nice to go out of your confront zone and make new friends while working on assignments and an easy A.
Being in groups knowledge you to understand better by your classmate. Example one day in history we had a project to do as a group and I was completely lost on the civil war. I had to ask my classmates questions if they can help me so I can understand better and get to do the work. Sometimes teachers doesn't know how to be specific so it gets hard to understand. Seeking help from a classmate that's in your group is a good thing to do and you learn more and becomes more understandable. Not a lot of students like to work in groups because their scared they have to do the work , however; if you communicate with your classmate and assign a job it will go easy on them and get the work done quicker and easier.
In conclusion , working with groups it's more beneficial instead of cramping in the work and not get it done. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
EF5B4AE52BE6 | In some societies, some students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. The courses of study in High School are selected to guide them toward a specific career. It would be amazing if students start when they enter High School. It is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age? Students should be commit to a career at a young age because it helps students to develop more and it allows a lot of opportunity for many students.
First, start a career at a young age it's important for students because it would helps to develop more. For example, sometimes students choose to do other stuff instead do work. Some students really want to success and get everything in life. Students would always like to have good future over everything. If students commit to a career at a young age, they would be develop in different ways. For example, students would have more stuff to do, more homework. Their mind would be thinking about stuff for their careers. They going to take things more serious for their life.
Secondly, start a career at a young age it's important for students because it allows a lot of opportunity. For example, Generic_Name was a student from Generic_school, she choose to start commit to a career when she was 17 years old. It was hard for her because she took a lot of extra classes. But, she planned to get better lifestyle. She work really hard to complete what she want. By, Generic_Name start a career at a young age was the best option she did in her life, she have a lot of opportunity, she can work wherever she want to. Thus, start thing at a young age students would success more.
However, some people may argue that students should not be commit to a career at a young age because students would not enjoy High School. For example, people argue that students would be more incline about their career, and the would not enjoy High School as a teenager. However, start at a young age would be benefit for students because they would take High School as serious part of life. Also, students would have more opportunity in life, and they would develop more as a person.
To conclude, people would always say that students should no be start a career at a young age. But start at a young age would be the best choice for students in life. Students have the opportunity to be more successful in their careers. Sometimes would be hard for them to do double work, but as they focus and work hard, they would complete a lot in life. Start things at a young age always have good benefits for students and people in general. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
EF6B8CD5EDE9 | to be active
According to Thomas Jefferson wrote, "determine never to be idle. It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, because we have more activities, get more possibilities to be someone in the life, and develop our mind.
My first reason is we have more activities help our body to be active ,and health for example when we play some games like, soccer, baseball, track, our body imediatilly is activated, because we need to be active and that helps that our body can be healthy, and that prevent some diseases because if our body is inactive we can feeling,sad and stress. My second example is, when I went to field trip, I was happy ,because I went to some place where I can distracted and relax with the nature, and that help me because doing activities that maintain the body active and it is more helpful for our mind.
My second reason is get more possibilities to be someone in the life,for example, we can always pay attention in the classes,and concentrate, we need to be more active the mind because that help learn more and that too help in the future. My second example is, last year wanted to pass my grade, I needed to be active in my classes and had better scores in all my classes and do my homework, so I can pass my classes because I was active and all my classes and homework, and I put attention all that the teacher said me during the class.
Some people think to be active is not help in the life, and idles is more better than active because, people said to be active people can get transtorn in the mind. But they are incorrect because, development our mind for example, sometimes we can feel depress we don't want to do nothing, our mind is develop each day about the activities, works, and other things what do each day, and that help to our mind be more active.
In conclusion, to be active people can do more activities, get more possibilities to be someone in the life, and develop our mind each day, to be active one of the most important things because that help to our body and, our knowledge that we have and we need. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
EF7E0CBD62D2 | I am agree whit this statement about the importance of attitude. because If you have good attitude, you can thinking carefully about the life we commit error every time. But we can learn the a adult he can give me a good advice.
If you have good family your attitude can be patient with the other people i know some time we keep bad moment but you can step out with your friends and forget everything, and you can reflect very wall your parents can be teach, good thinks and they can give you a advice for your, life some people dont like give you advice because they said we dont matter the life. some people said the adolescent not matter how they said but we are conscious the outcome.
My opinion is important to do good think in your life. Because the people remember like a good person they dont said something bad of you is important to have good attitude because is mirror how you are,in the school you need to have a good attitude because you dont want problem with the other people.
I remember some day my grandparent told me dont get problem because is bad attitude what you show to the other people you will prepare for the future when you are adult you know how to do with your boys you have good experience to show they and they can believe you.
I believe we know how to solving a problem because you need to thinking carefully and you get the answer for your problems. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
EF8047505E53 | Thomas Jefferson once said, "Determine never to be idle...it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." Being active like career goals and helping others and being inactive can lead to alot of health proplems.
Do people accomplish more if there pursuing their own interest, or just being inactive also accomplish goals also?
Being inactive can lead to health benefits, and also your not helping yourself in life, also there is no purpose. If not being active can lead to an unsuccessful life. Just being inactive is bad in general but people do have opinions on about it. Some people like to stay inside, not get a job, dropout of school, and fisk of having a unhealty body.
Being out of contact of the world is bad, and it very unhealthy to do that.
Next is being active. It serves a purpose, and it benefits a lot in life like: maybe healthy body, pursing career goals, school goals, and helping others. Getting a job is good example of being active. Taking time out of the day to go accomplish anything that people are interested in is a good idea. People can pursue new learning skills in school or universities. Being active and getting goals accomplished is good in life.
Having to participate in a activity will do good in life. As Jefferson said "Determine never to be idle...it is wonderful how much mat be dine if we are always doing".
There will always be different opinions on being active and inactive but not everyone is the same in the world. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
EF9677DEFA79 | I think the teacher should let any students play in any sports or activities in school because the might be better at sports or activities than any other kids. They should at least have a c grade to play in the sports. They should at least have a c grade because they are not to low nor to high. I think just because a student doesn't have a b grade and higher doesn't mean that they cant play in a spot or activities. Maybe they are not that smart but they are trying there best but they might not be able to succeed. Sometimes kids cant improve because they might have problems at home the teachers might not notice.
Maybe even smart kids grades go low and the teachers might not notice.
Maybe they have problems at home.
I think before they not allowing them play activities or ports the teachers talk to them why they have low grades. Maybe the teachers could help them with a problem and help them improve their grades. If the teachers connect and get the confident with the kids they might now what is going on with there grades instead of the teachers saying "you can not participate in an activity of sport."
The teachers could talk with kids and see if they could do anything to help them with their grades and help them improve. | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
EF9D616EAC4E | On group works either at school, job or any other place or activity that you could do, sometimes you have the option of working with someone or multiple people, and you can also have the option of working by yourself, we all have our own opinion of either if we would like to do our work by our selves or to work with someone or multiple people for different reasons,and we can all have benefits or working with someone or working individually,and here are going to be reasons why it would be good to work either individually or in group.
When we have the option of working individually or in group, some people may choice i different choice of how they would like to work for different reasons, some people may like to work in groups because they feel that may have more possibilities of talking to their friends or someone that they like, or they may feel that they work may get complicated or may take longer and that they may need help to accomplish it,so they would like to work in group to get help and to finish the work faster.
Some people that would like to work individually may chose that choice because maybe they like to be alone and work by themselves,or maybe because they feel that they okay and that they don't need the help from anyone else to finish or do the work.
In some cause on school, teachers sometimes don't like or don't prefer students working in groups because they want to see if they know how to do the work and if they can actually do it by themselves, or sometimes they worry that one person won't do the work and just let the rest of the people in the group do the work,or just do wherever the other guys are doing, or copy work from them, is true that it could happen in some occasions, but is not always like that,and the reasons why it would be good to allow students to work in group would be that, if every student knows how to the work,then every student can participate doing a different activity on the group and cooperate with anyone, or if the student doesn't know how to do the work, then he\she can get help from his/her partners to explain the him/her how to do the work ,and them she/he can be able to do the work,and they all can be able to participate in the activities.
Has a conclusion, it would be better do work in groups, because in that way it could be easier to get the work done, because you can get help from others in the work,and it would be more fun because you can work with your friends at the same time that they do the work, and it could also be another way of how to met people and make new friends when sometimes you have to work with people that you don't know, and for the people that like to work by themselves, maybe they should know all those benefits of working with people, but is they think that they have no problem working by themselves or that they can get the work done by themselves, then that should be okay to. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
EFACA593A52B | Can you imagine a world where every person is optimistic and responsible in their job. According to "
The Washington Post,
" 65% of the workers are hard-working and loves their job. "Most employers are looking for specific characteristics in a potential employee. For example, they look for someone who is responsible and hard-working, and often they look for a person who has experience." In some countries, start working at age of 15 years old is mandatory, because it helps to young people to obtain new views about different kind of jobs. Everyone has the capacity to be a responsible in their labor, but some people are hard-working because they want to accomplish their goals, and have an excellent record and experience from the last job is so important.
The first reason why is so important to be a hard-working is because you can accomplish your goals. For example, my friend Generic_Name, she started worked when she was 16 years old, she studied and worked at the same time. Generic_Name worked very hard to accomplished her goals. Generic_Name's goals was: be a teacher, buy a house, a car and save money for the College. It was not easy for her, but she was optimistic. She wake up every morning at 6:00 o'clock to go school, and she always fought for have a better future and accomplished her goals. Generic_Name over time get a lot of experience and she inspired others people to do better their jobs. She won a prize for been doing well her job and supported others to inspire to do an extraordinary job. Working hard is the best way to demonstrate you can work in any place and loves your job.
The second reason is when you are working is important to leave an excellent record, because it help to develop a good characteristics and experience. In some jobs, they call to ask for details about if the person have an excellent record and experience. Furthermore, my uncle Generic_Name, he just moved from New York to California, and he was looking for a new job. Generic_Name worked as an engineer in
Village's Company
. He was doing well his job in New York, but he needed moved. He went to apply in this new place, and the employers called to Village's Company asking for details about how he was doing his job when he was working for them, and then Village's Company says "Generic_Name was one our best worker we had, he was responsible and he have the knowledge about his job." The new company hired my uncle because he leave an excellent record. Hiring a person who has experience is important, because it help to develop better a job. Some people may argue that be a responsible and hard-working is not necessary in a job. However, be responsible is so important, because people are getting more experience and more capacity to do their labor. Some people do not like to follow the rules when they are in their jobs.
In conclusion, we can not change the entire world, but start been responsible and working hard in our jobs is beneficial, because it is the place where we can inspire others to do their jobs well and any company will hire us for been excellent workers. Every labor is admirable, and we can care our jobs because it depends we can accomplish any goal we has in our life. We can show a lot characters in our work such as: be respecfull, be on time, and the most important things is love our jobs. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
EFB208F9EF60 | They say that conserving energy and resources, some buissness have a four day work week consisting ten houres a day. Extending the school day two houres and a four day school week ain't a bad idea for people who need's more help and are focusing on their future and college. Do you think this is a great idea? Yes, because the more time your at school the more time you'll be learning and getting help. If added 2 more houres to school on a four day school week, the more school work will be finished and learned. I think my school should fallow this model because in my opinion test and quiz scores will show a greater improvement over time.
First reason why my school should have a four-day week school with a exteded 2 houres is because, many work can be done at school and teachers would have more time to explain details with deeper nolige. Teachers could have more time to study practice with the students before taking their test like using websites like kahoot's. it/quizlit. live and notes so the students can feel confident of what they have learned. This will be consiting longer periods for every class that every student and teachers will have to make sure every student leave the school grounds successfuly and informed of what they have learned that day.
Second reasons is that being in school for 2 more houres will help you work smoothly at every class. Plus every student will be haveing a three day weeknd from Friday to Sunday to rest and to have more time to complete homeworks and to study for testes and quizies. I could get work done when i have not been in school because i was sick or on vacations to get back on track with my studies and school work. Great idea for people at school becasue they won't have any excuss of loosing or not finishing work.
Those are the reasons why a four-day school week is a fantastic idea with a 3 day weeknd everyday. And ways for students to be ready for college and to get good grades everytime with extra help. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
EFBD506FC8F2 | Select me to visit your company It would be a great opportunity to learn more about this job, but also is going to help me to have better skills in what I do. I could easily write about my six years of experience in this area, and you would see that I could "qualify" for this visit, but I don't want you to select for those reasons; working in a TV Production company has always been my dream since I was a kid.
I was a little girl with a lot of energy, goals and really confident about myself, I enjoyed being in presentations, ceremonies or anything about being in front of the public. I kept growing, and a lot of people thought that I was going to forget about all this crazy dream to be in TV, but it wasn't like that, my interest was increasing more and more; I was still in my country, Generic_City, when I went for my first time to a news channel, the principal of my school in that moment selected me to make a commercial about a festival that we had, I'm not going to lie, I was scared and really nervous, but once I touched the microphone, I forgot all my fears, the employees of that place were so surprised, they told my teacher, "how a 13 years old little girl can have a lot of talent? The way that she speaks make It see it so natural and easy to do it"
I would never forget those words, because It was there, when I realized, that all this was for me, ever since that one day, my principal asked me to do all the commercials for the school.
Two years later I had to move to a different school, and I had a big surprise, this school had way more opportunities to be successful in this area; the owner of the school saw my potential in the way I speak, and yes, he asked me to do every ceremony and commercials during the whole school year. But that was not enough for me, I wanted to learn more, so I stared to used professional cameras and make homemade videos to practice a little big more; that same year my family decided to move to the United States. I was really sad, no only for my family and friends, also, I didn't know If coming to America would change my dream,
everything was different, traditions, school and most important, the language. This change was not going to change what I like to do, I stared taking this class called: "TV and Media Production" and I felt like coming back to home, everything that I love to do, was right there, I learned how to editing videos, how to record professionally and take all I know, to a whole different level; couples moths in this country and I already had the opportunity to being in different news channels,video for the school and they loved how I did it, and I don't have to think a lot to know that this is what I want to as a career.
These are just some of the reasons why you should select me to visit and learn more about your company, I know you may have more applications of students with better grades and experience than me, but no all of them have the passion and enthusiast that I have, because this wouldn't be just a job, I would be a the biggest accomplishment for me. | 4 | 2.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
EFBF293CC2AF | Dear, Local hospital manager
I would love to visit your hospital because i can imagine my self walking through those doors, smelling medicine and noticing the sound of machines, seeing surgents running and rushing towards the surgery room, soon to save a human's life.
I wanna visit your hospital because i think its pretty cool and brave what you guys do. One reason why i would love to visit your hospital would be because i think that the hospital is a very cool place, surgents get the feeling when they save someones life and they get to use some cool machines that they probably havent used until they started to working in the hospital and they get to open up people and see the inside of a person's body. One other reason why i think it's pretty cool, is that there is three different type's of doctors, the first kind of doctor would be an Intern, which is a doctor that just started there first year as one and that is learning to be the best, another kind is a mid tern resident, which is the second to highest level, one last kind of doctor is the highest which is a resident,i think its smart that you guys have that because i think it keeps everything organized and it keeps every doctor in order. One example why i want to visit the hospital is that i want to make people that they are in good hands, that they are going to be safe, also i wanna become one of the best surgents out there, most of all i just wanna help and save lives, i think its cool that surgents get to use machines and other tools to open up people that need medical help. When i was smaller i would have to take care of my sister because my mom would be busy going to work, one day my sister got cut when she was playing outside she was bleeding a lot that i grabbed some paper and rolled it around her leg and then called my mom because it seem so deep, ever since that day i wanted to be a surgent because i didnt feel disgusted by the blood and stuff, i thought it was pretty cool that i cured her leg, and stopped it bleeding.
I wanna have the opportunity to visit your hospital because i wanna save peoples lives when i grow up and have that desperate feeling when you save someones life. One reason why i want to have that feeling is because, i just wanna save peoples life and make them better, even though it might get exhausted its gonna be worth it because at the end of the day i think of how i saved someone's life. Another reason is because i wanna see how the hospital works and how every gets in managed, i want to learn if there is anymore different kind of doctors for example, there is cardio heart surgery, plastic surgery and more, i wanna be a surgent when i grow up because i wanna save peoples lives, i feel like there is so much good around the world that i wanna do good when i grow up. One example is that, me being a surgent would be a good idea because i can learn and help people that are struggling in life,i wouldnt just get to help people lives inside the building, i would get to save someones life outdoor of the building too because if something happens to someone then i can help them, if i become a surgent then im gonna work hard and learn about medicine to be the best and help anyone that comes through those doors. I wanna become into a doctor/surgent because i just started watching this show and its very interesting because its about doctors saving other peoples lives and how they struggle and how that connects with there life because they feel like they haven't been spending time with there friends or there family because they just have been busy of work and i feel like ive been learning on how i can not struggle in life if i do work as a surgent.
I wanna visit the hospital because when i grow up i wanna become into a surgent and learn about all the medicine out there. One reason why you should let us visit the hospital would be because i wanna get the opportunity to feel to be a surgent one day and learn about everything. Another reason why you should let us visit is because if some kids are interested into becoming into a surgent then they can think of taking a medicine class in high school and learn about it more so they can prepare them self if they become into a doctor or surgent, being a surgent isnt just about opening people up and sowing them and saving peoples lives, its about learning and learning because every time you do something you have never done before in your life, you have just learned something and by getting the opportunity of just going to see the hospital and seeing how it works, i just have learned something new even though i didnt do anything other than watching. One example why you should let us visit is because we would be learning something new and getting to feel how everything works around the hospital if we were to work as a surgent or doctor. I mostly wanna become into a doctor because i think its cool how doctors are brave and work and how good they are at there jobs, mostly its cool because they learn something new everyday and at the end of the day they have saved a lot of peoples lives or changed peoples lives.
A local company i would love to visit is the hospital because i feel like the hospital is very cool, the feeling of saving someones life is incredible, and you get to learn everything about medicine/medical stuff. I think working at a hospital is a gift because you get to learn and everything and save peoples lives and most of all you learn.
I hope you consider thinking of letting my school visiting the hospital.
sincerely, Generic_Name | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
EFCC45260444 | Well on my opinion I think that the best accomplishment is when someone tell you to be your self, no need to act or being someone we are not, It's better when we can be our self on this world.
When someone act something they are not, they are kinda lie about how they really are, When we chose to be something we are not, It's the worse decision that we can do. But I know that every person think different to what others think. some think that act someone they are no is something better for the world. I totally disagree.
We need to stop thinking or worry what other people are going to say, we just need to worry about our self and for the people who accept how we are, with the people we can act how we really are and those people who don't judge are the best people in the world the best accomplishment a person can give is when they tell you that they accept you how you are and that we are unique, don't need to change to something we are not, that is the best accomplishment that someone can give to someone.
I don't agree with what Emerson's statement say because, we don't need to change to someone else. We can't let the world change how we are. I don't think the greastes accomplishment is to be in this world constantly trying to make us something else. The greastes accomplishment is that we show how we really are we all have something unique we need to be ourself in order to make the world better.
Being our self with someone it's kinda the best thing someone can experiment, being our self with a person is the greastes thing in the world, now and days most all the people can't be them self around other people some of them laugh at the people who act exactly how they are, some of them don't really care or pay attention to what others are doing, and I think that's how it should be. now and days we see a lot of things, people that are gay, transgender, people that are bisexual, homosexual, now we see all that for almost all the people in the world that is something normal but most of them is not. but they just acting how they really are but sometimes it can just be confusing.
Something that happened when I was 16 years old is that I had a friend that always was lying of how she really was, she used to said that she had a lot of money which wasn't true, she did have like the normal she was okay with what her parent had, she said that she was rich and all that, and because of that she make a lot of friends even that ones that were my friends stopped taking to me because i wasn't how they wanted me to be, they would tell me to go party with them, to drink, smoke and all that, my answer to all the was always no, so they stopped asking me, later on they find out that the new girl didn't have that much money as she said she had, the people who I thought that were my friends told me all that and the realize that acting something we are not is not always good being someone we are not, or telling people that we have something when is not true. We all have to be honest with each other.
That's why I always tell people be yourself no matter how hard it get, the best thing we can do it's to be our self, people need to start accepting others how they really are, Don't need to be two faces, that is how we saying now in days. Now in days most of people would wear say whatever they want,
most of the people don't care anymore they just focus on what they are doing no in what the others are doing.
When you show to someone else how you really are is because most of the time, we felt comfortable with that person. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
EFD563DFAC60 | Although some people might say that students should use cell phones in the classroom for education purpose. Also some people might says that cell phones can effect students study and their grades in school, and it is not a good thing for students to having their cell phones in classroom.
However, not everyone agrees with this position,because cell phones can effect students health such as eyes problems if students look at it for a long time. And it can get students interest about games or social media or app for chatting. Additionally, there might be support for this idea that cell phones can help students to search on things or information that they are looking for in class. Also cell phones can help students easily to contact with their friends at school or to call their parents in an emergency situations.
Ultimately, this argument cannot stand because cell phones can effect students scores, students might be missing something important in the class while playing with cellphones. It seems like nothing but cellphones can destroy students future. The reason this idea is fallible that students cannot focus on class if they are using cell phones in the classroom.
Given these points, students might be get addicted to cell phones and cell phones will became a bad habit for students. One possible solution to this issue might be using cell phones only for an emergency problems or education problems. some students that can control the limit of using cell phones. Students better to use cell phone in the classroom when it is necessary, but not for the game or chatting with someone else. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
EFD7D87EF4C9 | Most employers are looking for specific characteristics in a potential employee. Responsible and hard-worker people are the top choosen. Employers need to know that they can rely on this person in rough time. A trustworthy person who can help the team be better and cooperate positively.
No employer would hire someone who can't be at work in time, someone who always finds excuses to stay at home, someone who can't accept to be wrong.
I remember the way I was raised. My mother do not know how to read just because her parents were poor. In my country, Haiti, school is very expensive and not accessible for everyone. But, I had this opportunity because my mother made the impossible become possible. As she always said, '' Je me leve a l'aube du jour et m'endorme apres le couche du soleil pour que tu sois fiere de toi meme, et sois capable d'aider les gens comme moi. " I graduated high school with advanced diploma. My mother died. She did not have the chance to see the fruit of her hard-work.
I want to make her pride from where she is. Because she was a hard-worker. She is my model. I have known how it felt to be miserable, dependent, be rejected, to count on someone, to fail again and again.
Even though I did not go to college, I am proud of myself. I can read, write, and speak not only one language but, 3 different ones.
I have learned to offer the better side of me in anything I am doing. I will not say I am the "Albert Einstein'' of this generation but, I am intelligent , fast learner, humble and cooperative. I might not be the most experienced person for this work, but I am a good candiade. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
EFDAD69E103B | I have being asked to explain the effects of a program involving pairing, older students , and younger students.
Some schools have a program that pairs older students and younger students. I think that a program like that will be helpful. The older students are available to assist the younger students.
This program can be helpful, to both the older and the younger students, because both the younger and older students, can learn new things from their opponent, or classmate. Also is fair that the older students assist, the younger students, so both of them can be sucessful.
Like maybe the younger students can teach the older students, some new skills the've learned in school, or somewhere else. Or maybe how they've learned to play baseball or softball.
The older students can teach the younger students, how to do algebra / solving equations or how to ride a bike.
Helping out younger students helping order students can be fun and can also turn out to be great. Or sometimes bad.
Like for example, in my school, they have a club that both younger and older students can be in. It is free and not obligatory. So me and some of my friends, joined that club. And also some othe r students. Some of the older students, helped us, if we needed help, and we also helped them if they needed help. Every time during that club we each bring our own snacks or the teacher gives us some snacks himself, and we get to work. That club at school was so helpful for me and my friends, because we can get our homework done in time, and some older students or adults assist us if we need help. Me and my friends also enjoyed that club because it was fun at certain time.
In conclusion, pairing older students , with younger students, can be very helpful to certain people in need.
Being kind an cooperating is the best thing to do while being in a club or working with younger and older students. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
EFDC396D9F7A | Date 3/12/2020
To: The school
From:Generic_Name
RE: Classes online
Not bacause I take classes online many of the students will not be responsible and they miss many grades, They will even have not internet in online classes for be doing their own things at home for example, if i have online classes i would be distranted by my brother or other things and i feel that my online classes is not would not be good idea like i say that online class is not a good idea there are many distraction. also, if we have that problem I think that beging with teachers is the best idea cause they help us a lot in the amies.
The firs reason is not all student have the internet in the houses some students don't have the internet because their parents don't have too much money to but one or maybe because they don't have the tecnology. One friend told me that their parents think that the tecnology is bad for him because it is distraction and he needs to focus on his future. and if he dosen't take that class online he will fall that class. every parents think different.
Another reason because not all student are not responsibles. some student came to school but they don't do anything' but it the teacher letf them that they need to do this, they do it, because they feel pressure and they know that the fall the class but is their class is online they will no care about the class, And they don't will take care about the class.
The conclusion is tha bad idea take classes online because the internet is one of the things that they need it, anbd not all the students have it, they need to have their responsability the class and not to all the student care for their classes, and the last thing is because not al the students like to have classes online because they know that they can't consentrate in their house bacause all the noise around.
Generic_Name. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
EFE2BC73A573 | You think first impression would change a person or not? Some of are stuff that we have right now is because of first impression.
In this essay I will argue about First Impression. Let's said that you go to the store and see something that you fall in love with at first impression and you buy it, but is not what you expect to be as you saw in the store because the commercial lie about the product . Now you don't think the same about the product that you fall in love at first impression.
First, I disagree about First Impressions statement. The feeling of first impressions everybody have it, but is not impossible to change it. I would give you a example of how your first impressions can be change. For example you see a nice car for sale in you way home and you stop by to see the car because you are in love with the look of the car. The owner of the car let you try it and when you get inside, car interior is ruined and a lot engine problems. Now your first impressions is ruined just like the car you thought look nice. Next weak you see another car for sale close to your house, but this time the car does not engine problem and ruined interior like the last car you try. Your first impressions from a car for sale change.
Second, this is my experiences with first impressions. When I was 13 years old I thought that my sister phone have the best camera ever and best software ever. Now in 2019 the new IPhone 11 come out and my first impression with the camera and software was a lot different from my sister phone.
In conclusion I think first impressions can be change. Just try other placer where you can find the same product with best thing. Your first impressions about last change. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
EFF1803E4B81 | Why are people scared to fail? Is failing really a bad thing. NO! For example Churhcill says that "success consists of going from failiure to faliure without loss of enthusiasm". I agree with him. I believe that to have success in life you have to go through failiure. Failing with the same feelings and mindset is hard but you just have to think failing is a way of getting better. Failiure is also not something you should be afraid of or embarressed of. You should be proud of failing cuz you know what you did wrong and next time make it twice as strong. Failing does not mean that your to dumb to do whatever it is. It just means you need some more time. Churchill bleieves that failure has an important role in the pursuit of success. Which I also believe this becuase once you fall all you want to do is get right back up. Which I encourage everyone to do.
When you fall get back up everyone falls. Life is about taking risks and failing. Which in my opinion evryone should do. Failiure is the key to success. Without failing you can't really call it success. I beleive you can only succeed in something that you have failed at. Without failing life would be boring and everything would be the same because people are taking riks we have lots of different things in the world today. Everyone has failed to do something. Not everyone in the world is perfect. I wrote this to persuade my readers to take risks. It is also fine to fail just get up and try again. Surely, if Churchill was a live today her would be spreading the same message around the world. That without failiure there is no success. Also, that everyone has failed at something, nobodies perfect.
Churchill Is trying to say that faliure turns in to success. Once you fail you know what you have to do to get yourself back up. Then you try again and again until you get something you are happy with. This is what makes you try again. This is what makes you find and fix your problems. You get a lot out of failing thats why i think that anyone that is going through something tough don't give up so easily becuase its is ok to fail. Failing is a good thing not a bad. However, its hard for people to think in this way becuase they think once they fail its all over. Its not over until you want it to be over. Keep trying and Try your hardest. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
F0078F48B6D1 | Im Generic_Name and my special skill/talent is that I am a competitor. I like to compete when it comes to certain things, because It motivates me to practice and work for what i want to achieve. I got my competitive spirit from my older brother. But I usually get competitive when it comes to video games or sports. But I also like to compete because I like to win.
How did my brother make me competitive? He would always say that I would lose and it would change my whole perspective of things. He would always win, so it would motivate me to practice. Me watching him practice would also make me competitive cause him practicing would motivate me to practice to try to be the best. He would also like to say that "you're gonna lose" and it would change my whole mood.
How does being competitive motivate me? It motivates me to practice, because it makes me want to be the best I want to be. It also motivates me more if I lose, because it makes me want to do the same thing again until i win at it. Watching my favorite sports motivate me cause it makes me want to be in those big leagues someday. My goal is to be a pro basketball player and I cant get there if i'm not competitive.
Being competitive can get you a future in anything and you should work on this skill. It will teach you life lessons, it will make you be successful, and it will teach you to work hard for what you want. You should have a goal set in mind and just go work hard and achieve that goal. Are you a competitive person? Whats your goal so you can work hard at it and achieve it? | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
F0116D8BA334 | Do I agree that my school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours? Some of this businesses have adopted a four-day work week, without thinking about the consequences. Each day consisting of ten hours to conserve energy and resources which it would be difficult for them since they will be working ten hours per day during four days of week. Taking the model of the businesses expending school day to conserve energy and resources, with each day consisting of two hours will be a difficult choose to make. First of all the government need to be part of this decision, and need to be include to see which are the consequences going to be in taking this choose. personally i am fully disagreement with this model, but not only myself is in disagreement there is a lots of people that believe school should not follow this model to conserve energy and resources by expending the school day two hours. The government and society is the one who's need to be taking control of this decision, because they know what is good for the students and what is bad for them.
In a society it is unlike the average American work week, so it would be difficult for families to adopt to the changes. Having longer school days and shorter weeks does not align with the structure of a typical parent's work schedule. Most students being involved in extracurricular activities after school, and not being able to drive, the four day school week will create many conflicts. Parents will most likely struggle to get their children to those activities and anything involving life outside of school. Most parents would have to adjust their work schedules to accommodate for the new school hours. Also, an extra day off for students but not necessarily for parents and child care would be required for the younger students on the extra day off. Additional expenses such as that are not always easy for families to come up with. Lots of changes would be put into action. Some others believe that the positives of changing to a four-day work week outweigh the inconveniences brought on by extending the day.
Their main rational revolves around improving to transportation, building and it will be good for students to be able to have more down time.
Taking part of this i would argue that the benefits seen so shortage, like a lack in the amount needed. In real world application of this plan applied in a education settings does not posses the same bonuses. The advantage of having another day off most likely Friday, while promising, does not necessarily means a day without work to do. In fact, there is a lot of many ways that you can conserve energy and resources, some business adopt different ways to conserve energy and many resources. Although i do not like this plan that our school should fallow this model (their plan is so bad), if we start doing this plan we will be in a several problem. We usually go to school seven hours per day, and barely have time to do our homework after school. Students like me need to go work after school, since some of us are living already on our own and this plan will affect our jobs.
In conclusion the idea in adopt a four-day work week, is not the best plan to conserve energy and resources. This plan is not the best plan that this businesses company have came with. There is a lot of consequences that need to take care of, before get into the point that you can not have the right for a opinion of what to do and what not to do. In this plan i will rather say that the school should not follow any plan or anything that is not for the goods of our students. Speak with the society about it and then make a choose that it is going to effect for good or bad. Sometimes changes are goods, but not on this plan people said that there is some benefits and what i see is just disadvantages on this plan. Adopt a four-day work week, is not the only you have to save energy. There are so many ways to conserve energy and resources. Example: not use a lot of water or try no to use the electricity that much last, but very important think first and then do the use the plan or the choice that is best. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
F032D40816C0 | Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm I think is a good idea because, you can be a successful person, you need believe in yourself, and you need support of your family.
You can be a successful person, because you can do all the things that you have in mind, and you can realize more than you already have, for example once my friend Generic_Name told me that her cousin Generic_Name he loves fix computers, but he only can fix computers he can not fix telephones, TV, refrigerators and another electronics devices and he always was sad because his goal was that he can fix all the electronic devices, he join in a group of people that fix electronic devices, he always cry because he did not understand the things that he was learn, he always was try day to day, so one day he was the winner in the competition of who was the person that fixed one TV in the less time as possible, he fixed the TV in 1 minute, other people fixed in 10 or 5 minutes, finally he earn a diploma of the best fixed person, after 5 years he learn that nothing was impossible for him , in the actuality he has a store that he sell and fix electronic devices. The experience of Generic_Name is a good example in our life because he learn that never give up, he always fight for his goals and that example we can do exactly the same that Generic_Name always fight for our goals and always try another new things that we think that we can not do.
Also the reason that you need believe in yourself is that you always need be positive person, every day see what are the things that you need for have success or what you need to do every day. In my experience I was in 10th grade was my first day of school at Generic_School,I never was with a lot of nervous, and I did not speak English ,so all my classes in my first day of school I feel many eyes on my because I was the new student, then at the end of my day I take my correct bus and when I was at home talking with my mom I told her that I do not like the school because was different of my schools on my country and my mom told me that with the pass of the days I will feeling a good person, a correct person. So in my first year in the school I get all my classes with A at the end of my first year I earn one diploma in Math and four diplomas for each end of the quarter, so I pass 11th grade with excellent grades too, but sometimes I fail my classes my test in Algebra I fail many of the test or sometimes I get D or F in my classes and when I fail something is when I was think that I am not good in my classes or in English that was to hard learn the language English, all my teachers talk with me that I was a good student always complete my work, every day I was pay attention to my teachers, and then I pass to 12th grade this year is more difficult because I need pass all my classes, all my ESOL and other things for example my WISE test, and now my teachers, my counselor, my mom told me that I am a excellent person, and sometimes I think leave the school and start to work because I feel that I cannot go to the end of High School . This is my experience and I believe that sometimes I am wrong because loss enthusiasm it is not a good idea always I will have failure or another experiences that are not good.
And this is why we need believe in our self if you do not believe in your self you may be you do not complete all your goals or all that you have in mind.
Other people say that success consists of going from failure to failure and loss enthusiasm, but otherwise you need support of your family because the family is very important in your life and always you need a opinion from your family. For example one day my uncle
Generic_Name he was in his college George Mason his family was in Mexico he was the only person that was in Generic_City. He always try to do all of the way correct and always be a good student and a good person, but one day he fail a very important test in the college that test was the final test in his College, and if he fail this test he can not graduate from College and he was feel like a person that he can not do anything and he told to his friend Generic_Name that he did not pass the final test, but Generic_Name said to Generic_Name that he can not tell to Generic_Name's family because they may be feel sad for Generic_Name, so the option for Generic_Name was that he was need start one more time all the College or he can paid extra money for retake the final test, but was a lot of money, so he decided that he was taking one more time all the College, but he do not see for support of his family, finally Generic_Name told to Generic_Name's family what happens with Generic_Name and why he still do not graduate from College, and Generic_Name's family talk with Generic_Name and he tells the true and his family tell him that why he do not see for support in his family. This example is exactly the explain for why the support of your family is very important, the family is the first group of people that we need to tells them always the true and they will have a excellent opinion about what you asking them.
In conclusion, loss enthusiasm when you are failure it is not a good idea because can be a successful person, you need believe in yourself, and you need support of your family. And always think about what are the things that you are complete or for what you need this goals. Also, think about that if you failure you need keep going and never give up because if you feel that you can not do anything all your life may be your will think that you not are a good person in something that you have in mind. Finally think about all the good things have a successful person and how you can do like a successful person what you need to do or what materials you need for be a successful person. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
F0524CAE23DC | why you should have good attitudes? first having good attitudes will make you more succsesful in your life and there's 2 reasons why you should have good attitudes and how it's going to make you more succsesful in life,second having bad attitudes won't get you anywhere, having bad attitudes will make finding a job harder for you,finding good deals harder for you,and if you are in a court and you have bad attitudes the judge won't be happy about it and will probably write something you don't like, here is the reasons why having good attitudes good for you, first it will make people like you,second you will gain respect from others,third finding a job will be easier.
1-People will like you,
people will like you for having good attitudes because you are showing them respect,therefore if you are showing respect they will start liking you and respecting you back and will help you become more succsesful in life and if you ever go to a job interview and you don't have good attitudes they won't hire you,but if you do have a good attitudes the chances of you getting that job will increase and you will most likely get that job.
2-respect,
gaining respect from others makes you a succsesful person becuase they are not trying to make you fail, but if you have bad attitudes they will disrespect you and try to make you fail,however gaining their respect is not easy, you have to have good attitudes,you need to respect them so they can respect you and you need to help them so they can help you,getting their respect will make you more and more succsesful in life, so you should respect them first.
3-finding a job,
finding a job with bad attitudes is going to be really hard for you therefore you should have good attitudes to increase the chances of you getting that job, or getting into a good college, both of them will be harder because of your bad attitudes, let's say you are trying to get into your dream job or the college you want, having good attitudes will make it 100% easier for you, but if u have bad attitudes you will end up getting rejected or kicked out.
in conclusion I think having good attitudes will make your life way easier than having bad attitudes so having good attitudes will make you more succsesful in life and you will get people liking you and you will gain respect from that and your chances of getting a job will increase. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
F05D3802BC94 | Last year, a student in my classroom was caught using his cellphone during class. He pointed out that the reasoning behind it was that he was searching something that involved the class, but the teacher still took up his phone. By allowing the use of cellphones in class many students would get even more distracted than they already are. It would also be easier to cheat and get good grades, since all the information would be of easy access. On the other hand, this would make the technological integration in school even better and easier, something that many dream and believe will happen in the close future. I believe cellular devices should not be allowed during educational time.
Initially, cellphones would draw too much of student's attention. Teenagers spend enough time of their day staring at screens, and school should be a place where that doesn't happen. Many are addicted to social media, and have the "need" to check it every 10 minutes. Sometimes when I am in class and decide to take out my phone, not looking and paying to the teacher for more than a minute makes me loose focus of class and need to ask the ones around me for help. Class is a place where students should focus and pay attention, by allowing the use of phones many would get distracted and use it for non-educational purposes which would make learning harder, since this focus should be used on what the teacher is saying instead of what their friends are posting online.
Secondly, it would be an encouragement to cheating. With the integration of cellphones in class students would start getting better grades, since many of them would simply Google all of the answers for a worksheet instead of paying attention to the class and answering it based on what they've learned. This would make so that daily grades get better, but when test day arrives, the student who Googled every answer in the past week would get a bad grade because he didn't really learn anything, all his answers were based on someone or something helping him. This would then encourage cheating, because that student would most likely realize that with the use of his cellphone daily grades were getting better, but when it came down to not using the device his grades would drop.
However, it could be helpful and very easy to set up. With limitations in place, like blocking certain apps and websites that have nothing to do with school, cellphones could be useful during educational time. Technology integration in schools is already happening, many give chrome books to students so they can use it during class, but these are expensive and getting one for every student is not always viable. Everyone has a cellphone so there would be no need for extra devices ,since phones have 1000 different uses, including many that could be of help during educational time.
The student from my classroom which was caught using his cellphone still uses it during class, he is barely passing that class and complains that the teacher is not explaining something correctly and that is why he has such low grades. But everyone knows the reason he is almost failing is because he'd rather stare at his cellphone screen instead of paying attention to the teacher. Cellular devices draw too much of teenager's attention and can also encourage cheating. On the other hand they can be helpful in the right occasion. I strongly disagree with the use of cellphones during educational time and believe they would cause more harm than they would help. | 4 | 4 | 5 | 4.5 | 5 | 5 |
F06699DB73E0 | Some people say that:success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.
Success consists going from failure without loss of enthusiasm because every human want's success in there future. and every single person have failure success in there life,even the humen can do their best and derirative for them self ,and alwys when i saw this every success have failure behind them. every human have good and bat thing in their life,and some people past their failure and have a good life know,and some people do have write know .
The live is like "cradle" every thing is happen in this world. some times we have a good time and some time we have bad, and then alwys we want to have a good live and we do enthusiasmy when we loss something. and we have alot casualyies and all the lime,we should do conflict with a bad stuff.
When people are thired with their life, we shiould help them, and we make them "He/She" sure to be a laborer peron in their live.
even we have a bad live or bad stuff happen in my live we should resistance with that because every thing in is possible. and we can solve our problm.
Other people say that: success consists is difficult without enthusiasm. so even we knows that we have failure we should do preventoin about that stuff to have good and happy live in the future without failure, and we have happy and good live . | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
F069420C6DB7 | Some schools are offering distance learning for students to attend class from home. With online or video conferencing . I support thus idea of distance classes Because you can wake up anytime you want, Go in a slow speed to no overwhelm yourself, no one can bother you while you study.
First of you can wake up anytime you want so you can have the right amount of hours in case you work at night and you dont get seven to nine hours of sleep every night. Also you can do classes later in the day in case you want to work in the morning instead of the night. So you can have a career and have time to study to make your future come closer. It's also a good thing for people that have to stay home to look at after their sick parents or little brothers they won't have to worry at school if they are okay because they will be home taking classes and making sure everything is okay while studying.
Therefore they won't be overwhelmed about missing days or which classes he needs to make up a test or if he/she has a project coming up in class because all of that info is going to be in his/her phone or laptop. Its a better thing to have online classes doesn't take up half of your day you dont get overwhelmed with new info for like 4 different classes in one day. So you wont be stressed out as much that (study shows most kids that drop out is because they are being stressed out with so many info in just one day for like 4 different blocks in a single day). Online classes are better from what i heard it help's you better cause it teaches you what the state want's you to know instead of things you dont need to know like some side stories that teachers say to make you try to remember but end up getting lost in the story.
Finally when you do your work no one can bother you about the answer or what problem you in and they cant cheat off of you and you end up getting in trouble because they didnt stop asking or taking to you. Its also a good thing because if you don't understand you can go back a lesson to relearn it again in case you forgot how to do the problem. thats why Online classes are more proffered then actual class when you have to wake up early and go to school all tired cause you only slept a little staying up because of work or studding for the next unit so you cant fall behind or re doing a new untie while going into a new one. So i support the idea of distance learning for students and that schools are thinking about doing it would be a great idea. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
F06D9612B900 | One activity i consider really enjoyable are science experiments . One of the reasons i consider these activities fun is because they are different from other types of projects . And what i mean by this is that for example when one does a math project or a language arts project is nothing more then doing many math exercises or writing an essay . Unlike the science projects for example one time i got to see a frog's interior . And it might sound desgusting to many of the people reading this and to be honest it did'nt smell good either . But one of the things that facinated me from the project it was that frogs dont have as many organs as we human's do . Or maybe they removed some of them but there wasn't a lot of organs in there
And another thing i was curious about was that they were different colors . i remember seeing blue and pink unlike us humans almost all of our insides are red . Frogs actually got different colors in their interior but they looked a little dry because my teacher told me that they have been frozen for some time . But it defenently made it easier to cut parts in the interior of the frog . And also sense my teacher told me that we were able to cut whatever we wanted me and my group tried to explore as much as possible . But there was a part that was really desgusting which was that there was some flies in the frog's stomach . And that part definently disgusted me but it didn't made me want to stop either.
After we finished trying to see everything inside the frog the teacher told us the name and function of each of the parts of the frog . But one of my friend decided it was silly to poke the frog's eye . And until this point i still dont know what went trough his mind in that exact moment . But wen he poke it , it resulted that the frog's eye was'nt completly frozen so liquid from the eye just came rushing out and he got wet because he decided to do that . Fortunently it did'nt reach me but it defenently reach my mate . After that the teacher send him to the bathroom to wash himself .
After that happened my teacher decided that it was best to just stop the project after that . But it was defenently a lot of fun .
Another example of a project was recently when my tacher decided to have us do a project in the dark because is themed to what we are learning about right now . Which is the unit of light and the project was really simple and to be honest it wasn't as amazing and funny as the other project . But it was to spray a liquid in front a flashlight . And what was supposed to happen was that i would be able to see the waves which light travels on . And after the teacher explained the process of how this happens she told us to spray the liquid in front of the flashlight and being honest i didn't see anything i was kind of dissapointed . But after four seconds i could see them and they were kind off hard to see and it was for some few seconds but i actually enjoyed the project . But it had some downs like it was really short and the teacher took forever to explain the process . But i still think it was a really interesting project .
And what i tried to show by showing you this examples from my own personal experiences is that . Science experiments are not always boring and you may not like them but you should give them a chance . And i promise you that you are going to like them or at least one of the many projects there is . Because they make class a little more interesting . And in my opinion projects or experiments are the best activities there is in the school . Beacause they teach you in a more directs type of learning . And that's why i think they are the best . | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
F074C2FEC1AF | Technogly can allow peolpe to so many different things, it can make life much easier and more convenient for people. The use of technology can allow peolpe to get more research and even get the job done faster.
Families now a days have television,computers, laptops, tables and cellular phone. technology is a good thing it can decrease labor, and make the job faster,
there are so many ways technology can be used. Back then there wasnt technology and it was hard to communicate with peolpe that lives far away but now with the help of cellular devices it makes it much easier for peolpe to communicate. Kids now love to play in video games and pareants dont have to worry of their children going out and also they can use their tables to read a book with out going to the library and checking out books.
Technology has helped people around all over the world, and it can make things people never seen or done before now a days you dont even have to go out and buy stuff you can just use your moblie phone and go online and purchase the things you want and it can be delivered to your door.
technology has great effects and one of them is evolving, it helped evolved the world and has made many chances and many postive effects like education,
jobs, traveling also dicover new things. With out technology it would be hard to communicate contacts with family and friend that live in different places of the world. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
F075F9AD2AA4 | Do you think it is a good idea for the students to commit to a career at youg age? That is a good idea because the school will give the opportunity to know more things. Also, is a bad idea because some students have a lot of things to do after school, they have responsabilities example; they have to work, they have to do things in their house, or many things what a young can do. I choose students have to take the career at a young age because:
They will be ready when they have to work in that career, if they going to take the careers that they prefer it is going to be good, because they will practice and they will learn a lot in of that ,so they will focuse everyday in that career. The most important is they won't have any problems when they have to show everything what they learn after they did finish their career.
It is a good idea because is not bad that in some societies the students has to expected to identify a career by the hight school, because about that form the people can know what is his/her specialty, or what work realized in the high school ,if that person was good or bad in that career.
Is good that person know what he/she wants to be in the future, because some people don't know what they want to be, what is their dreams when they become adult ,but some people know what they want to be ,and what is their dream job. Is very important to know that you want to be sure about your future because this opportunities are not in every where we have to exploit the things the life give us, because when I was a little girl my dad alwas plead me that I enter a couses like English, computation,to play guitar, dance, and many things ,but I always respond no ,because I just wanted to play and that set , but now I know the importance to learn ,to know ,to make something ,and show to the world that you know that you can do that ,and nonthing in this world is impossible.
They will have the capacity to learn more things about the careers what they will going to choose. Also, the school will give them the opportunity to work in the summer or after school, this idea is amazing because in others countries like my country there are not career to choose in the schools ,the student are not ready or they are not ability to work in something because they don't practice nothing in the shool they don't know anything .They just study and don't have elective courses that ways, the student in my country don't work usualy the parent are who work.
The conclution is that the students have to take some career ,bacause is very important for the societies also for them, they will be capacity to know many things. Also, they will be ready to make the work what they choose in the hight school. And the student won't have complication or doubt to may complete their job. Finaly, the students will have a profession in something that they can make very well, but this courses is not just to show to the others persons the career that you took in the high school. This career is for you ,for your future more forward. What happen if you can process with your study, this courses is an advantage in your live. You can take out a benefit to this oppportunity. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
F07EB7B6F40E | I have been through so many things in my life and imagination has help go through the crazy thing in life. I would want to leave everything and everyone . Imagination has helped me realize that i could become who ever I wanted to be. It even helps me through any problem. It help me realize that can prove people wrong by just imagining the best things in life are coming my way. No matter how much i'm going through, i'm always going to be happy and grateful for what I have and gone through. Without the bad days you will never know how to enjoy the good ones.
Remember everything happens for a reason!
Imagination helps me have hope no matter what I have gone through . I had to imagine a lot when my brother went to jail. I would always have to believe thats it going to be fine. I would always imagine that my brother was home and that I could see him again. No matter how hard it was for me. Every time we would go visit him and it was time to leave I had to imagine that he was coming home with me. Even every time we would go to court I would have to imagine that they would let him leave. Sometime knowing thats their two much on my head, imagining help me feel free and peaceful with no problem.
It was hard dealing with my brother and school on top of that. Imagination really change how I look at life. It makes me bring out my creativeness out. It made me realize what I have been missing out on. Imagination help me forget everything thats going on in life no matter how big or small the problem is. Also it help me feel myself and not pretending to be someone that i'm not. Sometimes going through things help you understand why it happened to you. But at the movement it might seem horrible. I just know that there is a purpose for me and that end!
Knowledge might be a great thing but imagination helped me achieve things that I never thought before. Imagination help me feel good about my self. It help block all the negative things. Imagining helps me know that I can do what ever I want , I just have to put my mind and heart to it. Also it helps me feel unique from everyone else. It helped me gain self respect and convinces. Imagination is a great thing for every thing. It might seem weird but it helps in many different ways. Thinking out side the box is not always a bad thing it help me bring out my smartness and strongest things through everything in life. I do think imagination is really important in life. Also it can take me really far in life. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
F093FCEEC17E | How does technology impact our life in a positive way? Some people argue; that technology is creating a division between us. I believe the appropriate use of technology does not divide, or limit human contact. If we give a good use to it, we will have great benefits. Besides, technology improves communication skills, helps parents, and facilitate jobs.
Research has proved that technology has been a useful tool for communication skills. This is shown in the facility that we have now at making a call, or video call to another country. It has improve communication for people who are speechless, defeat or just shy. All of them has problem at talking or listening, but with technology this is getting over. And they are interacting in certain way with other people. To sum up, technology is improving communication in different ways.
Parents always have many things to do. Passing time with their children is not easy; however, technology is making easier it. Now parents can work from home; this is giving them the opportunities to share more time in family. Also, for parents that work out new machines are helping them to finish quickly. Although, new phones schedule appointments and others for them, in order to be organize. In resume technology is giving the opportunities to spend time in family to parents.
In centuries before how many time does a writer spend writing a book? Technology has being a helpful tool for years; long time ago a writer spend one year writing a book by hand, now they just spend 3 to 4 months writing a book in a computer. New technology give us a lot of opportunities like:
We do not work all days, We get a good pay, and We do not work in the sun shy. In resume, technology is facilitate our life.
In conclusion, technology is a wonderful tool that let us develop our communication skills, unify families, and makes easier our jobs. People who does not have skill of listing or talking; they can still communicate their selves. families now are more unify. Jobs now are more easy. I believe technology is having a good effect for those who use it appropiately. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
F094225CAE4F | I am agree with this idea because is the best opportunity not only to the hispanic people, well for everyone who want to follow his/her dreams, and has responsability or lower resources.
I think is great idea, because some students sometime or usually work. One reason why the students do not go to the high school is because they do not have enough time to do homework, study, or just hey want to make more money.
Rarely students really want to learn, or to feel like they need to go to the college or university, cause they have a few time to go to the high school. This idea is great and amazing to someone really dream and feel that the high school is the door to the college, university, or opportunity to do your dreams real. The advantage is if you finish high school in three years you have more probability to go to the college or university. The disadvantage is that three years would be very stressing and harding time, because you need really to focus in the high school and all that stuff like: homework, worksheet, project, study, or simple attention the class. The good news is you can do anything if you have purpose, if you have motivation and completely focus in your dreams and What do you really want to be or to do?. Do not worry is you feel fear that is normal everybody feel like that about the test, high school, or dreams.
I think is a big opportunity to me; well, I work and really need pass my last year, but sometime feel like "I cant anymore", and I want to leave or run of the high school and just work, and work, and work, but everytime I think like that just say me " NEVER GIVE UP ", always remember everything I did, why am i here?,and How too far wil be go for my dreams?.
Sometime the life is very unjust, cause some people have the opportunity of study withouth work, While others people do not have chooses, and that is the situation where the hispanic people live today. Well, that it's my point and why I am agree with this awesome idea. I have been thinking this system or program will be helpfull and better for every student that the system we have today. My view is if you finish the high school in three years, will be more effective, easy, and fast to be gratuated.
Thank you for your attention. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
F0B44890C961 | Dear Sir or Madam:
Yes school should control students involvement in extracurricular activities, If they're doing terribly in school. If a student is doing terrible in school and he is in so many extracurricular activities, The School should take action right away. If the student has no time to study and involved in so many activities the student is defenitely going trough something. For example: The student's familymight be going trough rough times and he does not want to come home early, and Also he might be avoiding someone at home.
Second reason School's should control student involvement in extracurricular activities. because the Student has no time to study and the student is in so many school activities that is going to result to a bad grade. If the student has bad grades the Student is going to be stress about school and The student might ended up dropping out of school. If the student drop out of highschool it is not going to be easy for him to find a good paying job.
That is the reason why school's should take control of students involvement in extracurricular activities. If they do take control of the students with bad grades the it's in a club. They should be taken out of the club and help the student to get his grades up, and if he does he he get to join the club. Every students should earn it by having good grades.
Sincerely, Generic_Name | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
F0BB52DD1DB6 | I strongly agree with this statement that author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote because i can relate to it based on my passed experiences as a little kid not wanting to try new things in life like other food and activities. I did not like to try new things as a kid because when i would fail at them i would get mad or upset. But i ended up trying new things in life anyways and it helped change my mindset from not pushing myself to believing in myself that i could accomplish things and also help me grow as a person.
For example when i was l lot younger then i am today like a lot of kids i did not like to try new food. I was that type of kid that just did not like to try new thing at all. Say if i did not know what it was or had not try in before in the past i did not want it at all. Some times my mom would tell me to eat my food or she would not let me go outside or take me to the park to play. so i would eat it but not because i wanted to it was because i wanted to go play outside or go to the park because i was just full of energy all the time and always liked to be outside.
Thinking back to those memories at least the ones that i can remember i always seem to get easily upset. When i did not know how to do something that other kids or people knew and could do. I would throw a fit you could say sometimes and not want to be a part of the activity at all and just straight up get mad over simplest things that just needed some time put towards them. So i could learn them or master them or someone that could have taught them to me. I think if i wouldnt have gave up on some things when i was younger i would have know how to do a lot more then i can today. Instead of just watching the other people do this type of activities and enjoy themselves. I always wanted to know how to play these sports as a kid. Like know how to play soccer,football,and play basketball. Instead i would give up on myself on the first time i failed at it.
But as time went by and the older i got little by little i started to try new things in life besides just other foods. I think the reason for this was that my mindset was changing and i did not give up on myself anymore i started to push myself to achieve my goals. I learn that anger would help me too like this one time in middle school i was in my math class my teacher said that i could not solve the problem that he had put on the board because i did not pay attention in class. So i got mad and did my best to solve him and show him that i could solve that problem and i did after class he came up to me and told me that he was proud and that he knew i could do it cause when someone tells me i can not i get mad and work hard to prove them wrong. He also told me to never let what other people say stop me from achieving my goals in life and to also try to control my anger. I understand that know because i know there people who look out for you and help you. But also there are lots of people that do not want to see you make it in life and do better then them.
This is why i strongly agree with this author by the name Ralph Waldo Emerson and his statement. That go by the lines of unless you try to do something that you have never done before you will never grow. Its just how some people play it safe in life and do not attempt to do or try scary things in there life like rock climbing,sky diving swimming with sharks sneaking into abandon house cause its haunted by a ghost or something not like other people who live their lives with no fear. You can be scared i life but do not let them fears keep you from having fun and enjoying life. | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
F0E76CC2EF7A | I disagree that all students must participate in at least one extra curricular activity because students may have other plans or don't want to do an extra activity. Students may have different plans for there future and want to work on what they want to do. Some students want to focus on graduating school.
It also may cause problems on most students. Students want to do less work at a time. Doing an extra activity may cause students to panic with a lot of work to do.
Another reason I disagree that all student must participate in at least one extra curricular activity because students may not like that there is a lot of activity they have to choose from. Most students like to do things on there own or at home on there bed or personal space. Many students don't like to do activity with other people around them and going with what the teacher wants them to do. | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
F0EA44C34C13 | Today,we talk about the career for student at a young age. Are the student need to commit to a career at a young age ? Is it a good idea ? The answer is yes. They need to know what they want to do when they grow up. Their course of study in high school will help them to choose what career they think they suppose to do. They have to focus to what career they choose and they gonna fathom out that career .Example ,when a student want to be a doctor when he grow up that's why he have to focus to learn well biology and all about the doctor's job. If we don't show them what they need to do or like to do , they gonna lost outside the world . They don't know what career they need to follow and they are not going to have a good job. We gonna ruin their life indirectly. So that we should teach them about career and guide they to the right way . We love our student that's why we should support they to have a better life in the future. That's all of my opinion. I hope we don't make any mistake because everyone deserve a happy life. Thank you all. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
F0EECEC5C84B | Some people believe that they should seek guidance from experts and authorities about life' important matters because some of they wants to do all the things perfect they don't wants to make a mistake. But I think that is not necessary to seek guidance from experts. The first reason that I think that is not necessary to seek guidance from experts it is that you can learn new things in your life doesn't matter if you make a mistake. The second reason that I think that the people should make their own decisions it is that a expert does know every thing about your life does know your feelings.
As you can see my first reason that I think that it is not necessary to seek guidance from experts it is because people can learn new things in their life you can make a different in your life. Doesn't matter if you make mistakes you not are a perfect person. Every person learn about their mistake. Do what ever you want. The people does know what is better for you every people thinks different to what you think.
The second reason that I think that the people should make their own decisions it is because a expert does know every thing about your life. You can make your own decision. A expert can't choose what is better for and what it is not. Also experts can be incorrectly to what is tell you to do.
In conclusion, I think is more better to do your own things and do what you think is more better for you don't let people do the things for you. So, I believe that the people should make their own decisions. The reasons that I think that you should do your own decisions are 2. The first reason it is because you can learn new things and doesn't matter if you make mistake you can learn of yours mistakes. The second reason it is that a expert does know every thing about your life. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F100483B6259 | Can you imagine someone that want to study more and to get more knowledge? Well, many people do want to continue studying because the more knowledgeyou know, you will have a more benefits in your life. Furthermore, like the Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." He's because we never stop learning the little things in life such as: explore the world and to never stop your dream of continue your study. I agree with Emerson's statement because we want to get in our goal in the survey and to never stop growing with mentality.
First reason is that we have to explore the world. For example, by exploring the world we will know like the different cultures of each country or by having friends that are different country. Like my mom always said "You have to get out of the box to learn more, to see and explore what you have at your surroundings".
Second, to never stop your dream of continue your study. For instance, if you want to grow mentally you have to study more to get the knowledge you want. The more knowledge you have, then the more great will be your job or even more better you can be your own boss. However, people will never grow if they don't continue their survey.
Finally as you can see, Emerson's statement "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow" is true because we will never stop learning, and the more you study the more knowledge you will know. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F11E6745A8DA | I think this is benefiting being able to stay at home and do online classes sounds good. I agree because doing online class it goes on your own paste and you wont feel to rushed to finish, another good reason would be doing online is that you dont have to show up to school anymore so youll get to sleep in and wake up whenever. My final reason is if someone if decides to go to college they'll be ready because thats how college is online.
Think about not being able to have time to finish your work and your teacher saying you only have 25mins or by the end of class everything needs to be finished? well that wont have to be the case anymore because doing online means youll be going at your paste and you wont have to rush to turn things in. For example, I take an online class, so for me I already know how it works and honestly I think its way easier because no teacher is yelling at me to hurry about or I dont have to turn in incomplete work. so I like doing the online class is also fun because I be at home while doing my work in my bed.
Rough day at work, and you know you have school the next morning? Well no worries because you get to sleep in and do you school work from your bed. Thats right, dont have to wake up early and go to school. Just chill at home in your bed and do your work. Thats why i agree that we should have online classes because Ill enjoy my bed and do my work from home.
finally, last but not least college. if you ever plan to go to college then best believe that college is online class and video conferencing. Nothing new go to the library and study from there who wouldnt like that.?
In conclution online classses and video conferencing is the best way of learning. yes they benefit from learning and it helps them out. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
F123CF0BF9DB | Should people make their own decitions, or should they follow, others experts and authorities about life's experience. However from what think if you are alone out of no where and you don't have any exprerience is much better because you get to have your experiences and no one bothers yours plans. You make your own decitions and follow your own rules. On the other hand if you have some one on your back that do have more experiences them you they will be correcting you and bodering bothering you. Some people think that is better to follow some one decitions, but others think that is better to be alone because you must create your own decitions and follow yours rules is like you have a family no one is going to correct what are going to do with your family you don't follow others people they may be incorrect and you are correct and is better to be alone becuse you make your onw family whit your decitions and your rules.
To begin alone is better because you make your experiences from the mistakes.
you make your own decitions, but went you make a decition that coust you a mistake you get to have more experiences from the mistake that you did and went you have experiences from the mistake you learnd from the mistake that you need to be more responsible went you have a mistake you get to have a big experiences and that make you more strong and what you do and that makes you feel good and you become more responsible from the things that you do form the experiences that you have some people see that and they will have a hope on you and that you are going to be some one in the future and they will know you better because you are alone and not with some one that has more experiences you will raise you and your decitions.
Another think is that you must follow your own rules that you make. When you make your own rules no one is going to say some think to you they will follow your rules if they want to be with you however if you are with some one that has more experiences you must follow their rules and you dont want that to happent went you make your own rules and follow your rules you will know what is goint to happen but if you follow some one else rules you must be awear because you dont know what is going to happen, so is better to make your decitions your rules because you know that is good from what are you going to do so make your own rules and follow your own rules dont follow some one else rules you become more strong and more smart person.
Fanally the last reason why you should be aonle is that no one is going to bother you you will make every thing in your hands and no some one else hand they will not be on your back bothering you you will make every thing posible on your hand and if you are alone you will become and expert on the jod,company,schools the things that you do you will be the head on your decitions and you are no going to use some one else head and if you use their head they will correct you in what you do and if you do is like from what they thing is better ithey will be bodering you and that is not to good because it will be bad why it will be bad? Because they will make where do you walk in a way that you must don't want to walk they will make every thing possible to walk in their way and you want to walk in your way thier will make every thing possible they will bother you and no yuo must follow your way and your road to make every thing possible to have your own experiences and your own rules.
To conclude people must make their own decition, they should not be with some one else that has experiences or some tipe of company you must star from zero and trow the procces you will get to have some experiences from the mistakes that you did while you where working and wnet you have more experiences you will get to be more storng and you will grow in the things that you know and some people look at you and they will have a hope on you that you will make it to the end. On the other hand you must create your own rules you must be very organice on the rules that you make dont follow others person rules make your own rules and went yuo make your own rules you must know what is going to happen if every thing is going to be okay or bad, but if you follow some one else rules you will not know what is going to happen do must make your own rules so you can be unique and a expert. In adition, if you are alone no one is going to bother you in the things that you make becuase you are alone you are the boss no one is going to some some thing to you and you will guide others people went they see that you are alone and no with some one else you will grow alot in the thisngs that you do. Fanally you know now that the best thing is that you should be alone and no with some one else that they will make your own rules and you will learn from their experiences and you will not get to have your own experiences and no one is going to bother you is you are alone because of hall of that you must be alone and star from zere Thanks. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
F1270F8362F8 | "Hip hip hooray!". "Thats a talented kid!". The whole school cheering for you after you made the winning shot for your school to win the whole basketball game. Imagine the enormous crowd enjoying your performance. One talent I have is using math everyday. Some people do not use math as much as I do. I use it when I go to the store,at school,and at home. Math is one of the things I use everyday.
I use math when I am at the store because I have to calculate my money and how much I will be using. I develop this skill from school because I have use math is most my whole school career. Some individuals might think my talent is unusual,but I think that my talent is helpful in the real world. I would rather spend my life as a math expert than just staying at home and doing nothing. I want to succeed right now ,so I can become a well-educated and successful adult.
In addition,another place I use math is at school. This is the place where I developed this skill. Teachers have an excellent job making me the person I am today. For instance, I am doing my project and need to get the dynamics right I use make to help me with the project. I would like to became a math teacher at my school. Math is all around us
, but you just don't notice it.
Moreover, the last place I use math in is at my house. I use it in dividing my chores with my siblings and I use in the kitchen when I am measuring ingredients. I also use it when I do my homework. It helps me when I am playing basketball because you need an arch to make the ball straight in. It helps when I am older because I would already know how do math and know how to use in the real world.
In retrocept, there a variety of talents ,but my talent is using math everyday at home,at school,and at the store.
I use math almost everyday of my life. Math has been a huge part of my life. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
F12B9AF96175 | should people make their own decisions,or should they seek guidance from experts? people who make their own decisions will have success in life. I agree with people who make their own decisions because it will build up confidence,higher chance of accomplishments, and it helps them understand from their mistakes.
My first reason why I agree with people who make thier own decisions in life is because, it will build up confidence. Having confidence is a big thing to many people because thay can do many thing in life and will not fail. Having confidence can help people in many places. For example,If you are going to a job interview you will have to have a high confidence in you ,In order to get the job. Making your own decisions will help you build up more confidence.
My second reason why I agree with people who make thier own decisions in life is because, you will have higher chance of accomplishments. If you make your own decisions you can have many accomplishments,because if you make good decisions in life you have more chance of success. You can accomplish anything you want if you make your own decisions,because making your own decisions can be anything you want and you dont have to follow anyone.
My third reason why I agree with people who make thier own decisions in life is because, It will help people understand from their mistakes. People who make mistakes from thier own decisions will have a higher chance to understand and will not do it again. On the other hand,Many people seek guidnace from experts so they dont have to make thier own decisions;However,making your own decisions will help you be a better person and it will help you be you.
In conclusion,Making your own decisions in life is a good thing for many of us. Making your own decisions will make you a better person and you don't have to follow others. Many people could seek guidance from experts If they can't make thier own decision. These are all of my reasons why I think people should make their own decisions. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
F12C7794CDCB | People should follow their own instincts and ideas. First if people disagree with what people are saying then they can say what their idea is and put it to a vote to see who's ideas better. Second if people idea's are being ignored then the people ignoring are taking away their freedom of speech. third people should have the right to say if their idea is good or not. However people are being ignored and not having a chance to speak and have to listen to someone ideas instead of standing up to people and telling them their ideas to see if people would agree. If authorities won't let people put down their ideas then they are breaking the law of freedom of speech and denying people to speak and say what's on their mind. Finally people should have their voice heard and follow their instinct and ideas instead of being forced to listen to someone elses idea. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
F12EC7A7D168 | The topic am going to talk about is showing kindness. Showing kindness can change peoples lifes because you can make them feel better in better different ways for example what you could do to show kindness is picking up peoples trash. Small acts of kindness can help others be succesfull in life. Showing small acts of kindness makes you a helpfull person because you are helping someone out in real life. For example one way to show kindness is when someone drops something you can pick it up.
Small acts of kindness can help a lot of people because showing kindness even if you are mad at them you can still be kind to him or her. For example anotherway that you can show kindness is by talking to someone nicely. also showing kindness is really helpfull because you can help other in very different ways. kindness can impact peoples lifes because you can make them happy even if their sad or mad at you. For example another way that you can show kindess is by helping someone with their homework.
Small acts of kindness can have an impact on others because you are being helpfull for them. I think showing kindness is really good because you are helping someone out that doesnt fell good or their just mad at somethingt that happen one way that you can show kindness is by helping someone translate english to spanish. Showing kindness is really kind because i think is nice to be helpfull to another person. You can show kindness in many different ways like helping him with his homework. Even if you help someone with one simple thing you will be showing kindness.
Showing kindness to another person even yourself you can make yourself feel better or make another person fell better. Another way that you can show kindness is by helping your friends or your family with cleaning the dishes. Even small acts can help someone out cause you are showing kindness to another person.
Small acts of kindness can impact peoples life because you are doing something nice for them it also helps yourself because you are showing kindness to another person. one way that you can show kindness is helping someone with petting their dog.
I think showing kindness to a person makes you feel better because you are doing something nice for them. showing kindness is very helpfull because you are helping someone out and it makes you a better person. one way that you can show kindness is by picking up the trash. showing kindness even if their sad could make them feel better. one way to show kindness is by if a person is lonely you can talk to them. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
F12FEB0FE5B6 | In this word we accomplish more if we are always doing something outside or inside. There is always something we are doing even like simple stuff like watching tv, walking, working and etc... If we are not always doing something we don't really accomplish anything in life. So lets get up and always be doing something around this world.
I think if we always be doing something we accomplish it no matter what it is. If you keep on doing things over and over and you can't get it aventally you will find a way and get. Also you keep on trying and you got it and you do it over you get better at it. Its like when you were a little kid you try to ride a bike you keep on doing it and try to get it to balance but every one in life falls but we always get back up again. Eventaily you will get it because you be praticing all day.
Also trying new things in life your always accomlishing it. Say you want to do something new that you never done before like building a bird house and you don't know anything about math, measuring or how to use the tooles. You will probably learing all that by yourself until you get or you might go see a friend that knows all about building qnd he could teach you. After he teaches you your going to try and see what you learn. You might not do it right but once you do it and keep on repeating on what your are trying to accomlish. Always set a goal for yourself.
Everyone in this world always mistakes on what they are trying to accomplish but we always learn from our mistakes. We always get back up and keep on trying till we get it and once you get it you keep on doing it and you are really good at. You be abble to do things faster and eayier in life.
I think if you are always doing something in life we will always accomlish it even if it is really hard. If your not always doing something you can't learn and wont be able to accomish on what your goal is so never give up on what you want to acomlish set a goal for yourself. If you fall get right back up again and keep on trying. So lets get up and try new things. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
F131A67F5B95 | Being yourself is better than try to be someone else, being yourself brings you a true friends, not afraid to know who you are, and the most important is that you are honest. When someone is dishonest the person will not have true friends, maybe the person do not know who is. Being someone else is the greatest accomplishment in this world.
Being yourself brings a true friends.
In this world we love to make friends. Why? it because friends never let you down when we need them. Friends brings as happiness in our life, we can count with their time in conditional, friends are gift of God, whatever place we go, we always are going to find a friend. Friends are like family, they there for you no matter what, sometimes we fight with them but they will there for us because they know that you are being a true friend. Being our selves we always going to successful whatever we go.
Being yourself is know who we are. Know who we are, is being honest with our selves and not only with our selves same thing with the society that is around us. However;
some people might not likes us too much because of our action and the way how we talk hurt them. One action talk a lot of a person because demonstrate that that person know who he is. Know who we are helps with our self steam, also we make friend, the love of people and most important is that we loved who we are and not act like if we are someone else.
Finally being honest, is the best action that a person can have in life no lies, no disappointed on people, no issues. Being honest is how we can have true friends, not only true friends, we earn the respect of every single person that we work with or meet in life. People will trust in a person that is honest. not in a person that is dishonest. Whatever place we g, we most be honest with all kinds of people no matter what. Friend, teachers, family, etc; will not disappointed on us, if we are honest every single thing will work for as , there is not issues when a person work honest, it is all the contrary.
Being yourself is the best choose than try to be someone else, being yourself you re not fear to know who you are. Also, the most important is that you are going to made, "real friends". However, honest is a strong part of being yourself. No matter what, stay the same, because try to be someone else will hurt you and all the people that is around you. Stay your self eventho the world constantly tries to make you something else. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
F1329DA98283 | How much can we accomplish if we are always doing? Thomas Jefferson once wrote, "Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." I think he is right, if you think about it, the more you do, the more you will get and learn.
Over time, we've seen how many people had accomplish their dreams and goals, because they were always trying and working hard for what they wanted and what they needed. If we are always working hard, we can achieved what we want and even more, I think that's what Jefferson wanted to said with his words, the more you learn and do over your life, the more you will get, people will need you, and because they will need you, they would do whatever they can to get you.
Let me put you an example, think about your job, imagine you work in a restaurant, and you start as a cashier, and then you start to learn more, like you start to work in preparation, and then you put your hands in the kitchen, over time, you learn the system of the restaurant, how it work and everything; next thing you know you are the manager, but then you get tired and you quit your job, so then you can open your own place, and thanks to all you did in the restaurant now you have the experience to run your own place, and even better. Everything you get in your life will be thanks to all you try and learn, because even though sometimes things get difficult, it will always have a reward at the end.
This is like when we were kids, and our parents made us do things that we didn't like, for example, when I was a kid I hated to do my reading and writing homework, because I didn't know to do it, but now that I think about it, thanks to all the homework I did, now I know how to read and write in Spanish and English, because even though I didn't want to do my homework, my parents push me to do it, to learn and to be better every day. When I was a kid, my grandma always told me to said "excuse me and thank you," at some point I did it because my grandma told me to do it, but now I see that my grandma though me something a lot of people forgot to do. Everything we learn make us better everyday.
Some people may believed inactivity is also something good; sometimes doing nothing, is doing more, and is okay to just stop everything and take a break once in a while, but just wait to see if things work by their own is not the best, if you want things to work in your life you have to work hard and never stop, because if you don't work for what you want nobody else will do it for you.
"It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing," Thomas Jefferson was right it is wonderful to see what we can do if we never stop. We are humans and we are smart, not perfect; we can do so much amazing things if we just try and work hard, all we have to do is don't give up. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
F13C7EC54868 | I agree that the programs that allow students to graduate in three years, will be a perfect idea and everyone must like this. As i know some students really need to graduated early some of them need, to help their parents with some money. It's a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college early.
Some districts are offering programs for students ; for example they are allowing them to graduated in three years some students need to help their parents with some money. Also they want to graduate early because of college this programs really help students and high school.
Students who follow all this plans they have to be persistent to graduate in three years. To illustrated students wants this programs to be able to have the things that they want ; for example buy a car buy some clothes. Also students enjoy to hang out with friends so if they graduated early, they will work and have some money to buy what do they want. Students must follow all this plans to see the results.
While some people think that it's a good idea for students to finish high school and three years to enter college early, others argue that students don't learn enough in three years. There are several's ideas that improve this such as they didn't focus in learn more about assessments. people think that they don't learn enough in three years, they missed classes that they might need in the future; for example construction class we don't know if one day we are going to work in construction then we will need some skills in that job . Also advanced PE we are going to needed it for our healthy students need to know more about other classes that they might need it in the future.
I think it's a perfect idea for the students who wants to get a diploma in three years. Students need to work to help their parents for example pay the bills and all that. Also students wants to work the year that they have off to save some money for college. In conclusion i like this idea because students have opportunities to be a better person in life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
F144EA4BE505 | is number 1 because same time samtin import is happenings in the school and we can tell are parents what is happenings and is crite we cant have are selfon in classroom we need to log of same tame is reining in the classroom and the strident is text
whet samebari in class and not looking in the teacher bate and same tame we can have acsidid in the classrooms and are parents don't no nation and and the sefon we can used to call are parent for satin is happenings in school
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and same tame want to tell are parent same ting bat we cant to be texting in class we neon to have thebe sefone off and we can text when the school is over yes we can have slfone for text went that school in ban. | 1.5 | 1.5 | 2 | 1.5 | 2 | 1.5 |
F1596AB60E72 | Do you think it is more beneficial to work in groups? Do you think working in groups makes you focus? Do you think working in groups is easy and fun?.
Do you think working in groups is more easier?. May people will say No and others will say yes to all these four question. working in groups is more beneficial than working alone. I think working in groups is more beneficial and good for many reasons because; we collaborate and share ideas, it more fun and easy working together and get a chance to work with people we really dont talk to. and we also get our project or work done on time.
Working in groups helps us by sharing ideas: i think working in groups is very important. it helps us bring our minds together to brainstorm some ideas or by sharing opinoin about the project or the assignment we are working on. we can discuss and make sure we understand and know the topic that we are working on. by doing this is a great thing because every person is contributing or participating in what we are working on.
Secondly, We get everything organized and get our things done on time: working alone somethings is very terrible because i takes a while to finsh, you dont get it done on time and sometimes you might need help from somebody, which sucks but working in groups more quicker. since there is about atleast three or four people in the group. it makes it more faster to get it done on time. it makes it even more easier to get the assignment done by contributing and aslo,
assigning or giving each and every person in the group a role to play or something to do to support the group in order to get it done on time.
Lastly, another reason why working in groups is beneficial is because it is easy and fun working together and let us get a chance to work with some people you really dont talk to in school. Most people likes dont like to socialize with people they dont know so they choose to work alone. which is okay,
but i think working as groups fun and easy. plus ,
it is very beneficial. I feel like working in groups is more fun. it makes us feel more free and more open to work together. when working with a group of people it is more fun because someone in the group may crack a joke or say something funny, it might cause a little bit of distraction but it brings laughter, smile, joy and happiness into our faces and that is what makes more fun and exciting to work together as a group.
In conlcusion, it is more beneficial working in groups than working alone. In groups we share ideas, we finish on time before due date and it is more fun and easy to work together with people but not just by yourself. because in groups we disscuss and make sure everyone in the group understand before we start putting effort in what we are about to do. it is very important to work together in groups because it tells us that we should encourage ourselves and work together as a team. And by showing a team work, hardwork , support and determination makes a group work more successful. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
F160E7B1FD96 | In the future first thing i would really like to do is graduate from high school with good grades and also making it to a great collage. I would really like to go to collage to study about how to be a lawyer but before i can make it to collage, it's very important for me to make sure i'm doing good in school and also making sure my grades are good, i am hoping to graduate high school with being top of my classes. I want to show people that with trying your hardest, you can sussed in life. I would be the first in my family to make it to collage. I want to make my parents proud. something i also enjoy doing is helping people out. Me being a lawyer means i can help people out with problems might they have with the state law.
2. Before my dream can come true, i have to work hard. I have to make sure I am doing all my school work, making sure i get to school on time. also something thats very important is keeping your life profile clean. staying out of trouble is very important, something collages well look at is grades and your background life. a collage wouldn't want someone who has bad grades, someone who is always getting into trouble or someone who just doesn't care bout anything. They look for people who are trying their hardest to be someone in life. going to collage means you want to try hardest so you can be someone in life. collages teach you everything on what you want to be. they help you make your dreams come true.
3. Something i'm also looking forward is to learn on how people do their job. i want to learn how they speak up for the person who they are helping out, how do they know what to say, is it scary? i have so much questions t ask. my goal is to be someone who can help people out, who everyone comes for when they need help. i would like to make people happy but right now my goals are to make sure i finish school. i have to work hard to keep my grades good and also make sure i stay out of trouble. | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
F1620489BEB3 | I agree that changing the school lunch menu to a healthier option would be a better solution. This could help resolve some problem we have today. The top problem in the world for this topic is that many people in America are obese and numbers are growing. This also helps show a new generation the many healthier option to choose from. What i think the best thing is the amazing new foods and cultures it can be introduce to you. How many people do you know that their or your kids don't eat the school lunch cause of the food almost everyday?
In America we have gone through many tough time's but a big issue that started happening in the late 90's and early 2000's was the growth in obesed. The line for what was good and bad for you was smudged and the only thing that was okay was that it tasted good. That's why schools started noticing a change in peoples decisions for healthy or unhealthy choices. And change if not only a small bit to try and help, but that didn't mean they couldn't bring in their own food. Having a more healthier option would be good for students bodies and a better state of mind cause you know your giving your body energy and what it needs.
We go through life living the way we were raise. That also comes with the food that was given to us as teenagers and kids. All of us have at least one trait that your care giver did that now you inherited, some people drink coffee more then other cause that how they saw life as. Which is why showing kids and teenagers a better more healthier life style early show them better eating options and that all starts with what to eat for lunch at school cause your there for almost half the day.
The best part about eating a healthier life style is that you can try new and better options instead of the same lazy food. Almost every country use natural fresh produce in everything they eat cause of their culture. And showing people that might not like that idea, a food they wouldn't eat but end up loving it is the best feeling. This is also educational cause it introduces students to new culture are the world. This show's how they eat and prepare food in their country and the difference in our own lives. It's really eye opening for some people and it show kids not everything that doesn't look good is bad food.
Having a healthier option for school lunch is good but it take a lot of meal prep and it's more expensive them getting can or frozen goods. Employees that work in the lunch room are gonna have to come in more early to wash and cut fresh fruits and vegetables which means the school is gonna have to pay them more money cause their doing more. And to get the best quality produce, schools are gonna have to pay more money which some schools can't do. But the only thing that should matter is the students not this or that. The problem with schools is that their lowering down their standards with food to get things that aren't necessary. They could be using that money for better food and better silver wear items then what we have now.
Having school lunches be healthier is better for everyone even if it needs time to get use to. A better lunch can show people different and more unique foods around the globe also helps show's that not everyone's different. This also help's show people that there are better options in fresh and natural items rather then foods that have yellow dye-7. This would also help America be the country it wants to be and how Americans want other countries to see us as a stronger, mature, and all around amazing country. And show that this school is ready for change no matter what happens. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
F166A6757369 | Present. A lot people have a busy life and work hard. Because every one need to have a happy life. A lot people have a happy life just because they have to do something they like. But lot people believe happy is come from money and work hard to get it. But most of them not happy. Because they just work for money not for happy.
Generic_Name graduate yesterday from university. She begin looking for the job and go to work in the TOYOTA company. She smart and working so hard and because that make she have a good income. But when she working almost 2 years she so tired every day and she begin don't want to work. And then she begin thinking "I have money, I have house, I have car but way I am unhappy" Generic_Name go to consult her mother. And Generic_Name mother say " Maybe you are tired you should to take some rest" then Generic_Name go to vacation to rest. And then between vacation she see the flower farm. She like the flower and she have idea to make a flower farm to. She sill work in the TOYOTA company but only 3 day per week. And other day she make the flower farm and she feel happy. She can sell some flower and get some money. And then 1 year has past. she don't work in the TOYOTA company anymore. She choose to spend time for flower farm. She like this work and she so happy.
The life is short. Everyone have only one life. You should spend you time for something you like to do. It doesn't matter you have a good income or not. To be yourself. You might think the rich people is happy. But rich people happy not because they have money but because they have time to do anything they like. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
F167D1995565 | It Has Been Said That First Impressions Are Almost Impossible To Change.
Do You Agree Or Disagree With That Statement?
People don't know everything by born. They have to learn everything by culture and family. Every culture has different impression but we have to caught it because we are human. Everybody has a lot of impression. Many people would have different opinion about this statement. In my opnion, I am disagree with that first impression are not impossible to change because all people are live in culture, practice can change anything, and they are adjustable.
First reason, I believe that first impression are not impossible to change because all people are live in culture and culture change impression. One person has more than one impression and different culture has different impression. People make comfortable with new impression. For example, I born in bangladesh but I live in USA. I have a different impression than before becuse now I am live in new culture, they have new impression. Almost I forget my old impression because USA culture change my impression. People help us to change our imression because whatever we see around us we can hold it.
Another reason, I am not agree with that first impression are impossibe to change because practice can change anything. People don't want to do whatever they don't like. But if you do everyday whatever you don't like oneday you will like it because practice can make anything perfect . For example,
my friend who came from bangladesh without family even she disn't know anything about this place. But she have to do everthing her ownself. Everyday she is practice new culture that's make her to learn new impression. Now she doesn't remember her old impression becuse if you practice everyday new things. You will forget old impression becasue she doesn''t preactice her old impression.
Finally, I disagree with that first impression are almost impossible to change because people are adjustable. In the world, people are the only things who can adjust themself to any other new things. When we went to the new place we have to do lot of new things. Even we have to change our impreassion because every place has different kind of impression. And people can adjust themself with new impression. For example, people impression are like water. Doesn't matter where you put water it will be shape like where you put water because water is liquid and people mind is changeable. When we go to the new place we have to have change our impresson and it does't matter who you are and where you are.
In conclusion, people have to say that first impression are not impossible to change because people live in culture, practice can change anything, and people are adjustable with new things. Most of people wouldn't agree with that statement. We don't have to believe that whatever other people said. People has a right to say whatever they believe. Human beings are adjustable with impression becasue we are changeable. Whatever we can imagine we can do it. Everything is possible for human. Even I believe that first impression are not hard to change but we have to be faithful about our opnion. | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
F16AFE936F49 | Disney land is the place I would want to explore! Have you ever heard the saying " Disney land is your land?'' Well I would like to explore the nights with marvelous fireworks,and blasting shows. Disney land is a great place, for kids that enjoy watching Disney movies and/or shows.
At Disney land kids would enjoy the shows,fireworks,and rides! A family would see the look at their kids face after a fantastic night of fireworks mashed up with fantastic plays. Therefore, I would like to go out to Disney land to view the huge castles with decoration ,and visible lights that would just glow my night up!. In sum, Disney land would be my elected place because I love, and enjoy watching Disney shows, and love to see people act out as Disney characters.
In additional, Disney land is my dream place to go because I get to watch my favorite shows, and enjoy myself! However, my way of explaining Disney land is... Imagine yourself playing your favorite sport or your favorite hobby. In this example i'll be using hockey. Lets say you just love being offense since your really good at it, and always help your team to win with your blossom hits. Therefore since you would love hockey (defense) ,and I love watching plays both would connect to form a connection which would be a joy of winning in hockey ,and a joy of watching people preform plays. In conclusion you love to play hockey, and I love watching plays which all leads to a great night of our favorite shows/sport in a optimistic way that will be unforgettable. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
F17A4EF296EB | Every one love school, but not every student want to be in school. Before i go futher i wold like to list few things in my introduction. Not all student would be able to take and online classes or a conference talk, because everybody want seat in class and see what the teacher is teaching them. Beacuse
Every one love school, but not every student want to be in school. Before i go futher i wold like to list few things in my introduction. Not all student would be able to take and online classes or a conference talk, because everybody want seat in class and see what the teacher is teaching them. Why is this so matter, not all student would like to distance himself from school. Even if you seat one what are going to do by listing to an online school site. Now every is time to twlk bout my three more reason why i post these.
Firstly, bot all student woud be able to take online classes i don't see nothing from i as a student would not like it, i woulike to say by taking an online classess is is not worth it.
My Second reason is about me whiles i was growing up. Since the i was born coming up, my mom said to me the day you start going to school Henry make it your own. Because there was no tecnology, no internet to used for and online classes. Because when ever mom give 1 dollar to go to school i will walk from my house to school which is 4 miles away from my home. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
F17D56052066 | I think it's good to know people's opinion because it can help you deside on something you wanna do. Maybe that person has already tried the thing you wanna try he can give you his opinion on the item. If you wanna buy something first it's good to talk to someone who has bought the item they can tell you if it works or not. Maybe you wanna buy a car and some how the car doesn't work you gotta talk to the dealer ship about the car. Or if you wanna buy some medicen you have to ask first before you drink the medicen or else you can even die from it if it's bad for you.
And you have to talk to more then just one person to be sure because if you don't you can waste you money just like that. And you always have to be positive when people give you advice even you know they aren't saying things right they are just trying to help you. It's always good to give your opinion on things because maybe they aren't sure if they wanna buy the item or not. If you care about a person your going to give your advice to a person because they are some how confused on something you can help them. Giving advice is a way to be nice because you wanna prevent from that person to buy that item if they buy it and it doesn't work they are just going to waste money on the item.
Also by giving advice you can prevent people from getting hurt like if a guy walks to a store and buys something and it doesn't work he is going to come back to the store and fight the guy the sold him the item and then they both go to jail from fighting. Also if a parent comes to her friends house her freind can give her advice how to cook something maybe she doesn't know but her friend does and she can give her advice. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
F17DDEB77A2A | Most students hope and enjoy a summer vacation after a long school year, but some educators thoughts are completely different as the way they should get their vacations. Although, during the summer break some students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall, overall, the summer is a good season to have a school break because of the great weather and the posibilities to get a job for students.
Initially, we all know summer is the best season of the year, because it brings more attractions. Of course, the weather is one of the important factors that makes it possible. For example, amusement parks to entertain people, beaches's opening, as well as others entertainment places to go visit and have fun. Summer also is a known as a time where family can share moments with others and recover all the energies leaving the stress at home. Also many people likes the summer, beacuse you can practice any sport you want outside, a good way to decrease the percent of obesity and improve our helth. Another advantage of the summer is that we have more sun light during this season than winter, spring or fall, it allowing us to get done more stuff we need to do and being productive with our time. In short, the students's vacations should be in summer, because is a great season to do many activities and enjoy with friends and family.
In addition, as we have more attractions, more personal the companies need, which gives to many people the opportunity to get a job. As a students, a job is helpful in several aspects for good on their lives. For example, maturity, responsability , new experiences and connections-which is very important to your future. Each one prepares you as a person to deal with your every day lives. Also, students have enough time to save their money and keep it for their purposes, it can be for a college or buy whatever they want without the necessity to pay with their parents's money. As a result, students are aviable to gain their own money during the summer, because its offer more opportunities, and also gain new experiences that will help them move fordward.
Still, some may say that summer vacations are too long and there should be year-round schools, which would totaly change how long the breaks will be. Then, students can have a balence on their personal lives and scholar lives. The knoledge they aquired is still fresh in their minds so, new stuff to learn will be easier for them and consequently they will obtain good grades. In summary, the significance of the idea to administrate better how long, and the appropiate time for a break is to know if it are gonna affect the student progress, which is the priority of the school.
In conclusion, educators wants the best for students,and they just want to find out a better way to rise their progress making them as a better students improving their knoledges. But, it can becomes as an issue because if you are constantly over preassure, and studying all the time without an a consider time to free your mind, it will get you tired. Overall, the summer vacations will keep you distracted with many productive activities during a long break, which are gonna let you back to school more exited and willing to keep study. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
F17E1C91D1DC | S
tudents should not be allowed to graduate of high school a year early, as this will cause students to only have a lack of free a time and enjoyment of being of high school.
These student will have to take rigorous courses during the summertime vacation and late into the evening.
These students will miss out on taking electives, as well as missing out on valuable high school experience by being forced to grow up a year
Some high school offer students the option to graduate in three years. However, allowing a three years school programs would result students taking extra classes in summer and and at night. As results would no larger be an idea on summer for the students. In they are working throughout with no mental or physical causing more stress and responsibilities such as extra homework and getting to night. In order to get classes during nighttime, students would have a transportation to and school. Driving to school would in students spending money and increase price of gas. School also have to spend money pay teacher for extra hours after school. Another common problem would be teacher will want to work after school will would result in the hiring of teachers. Overall, high school condensed in three years would in spending lots in excess money an increase of complications for students' lives. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
F17F4DF6095D | In my opinion i agree honesty is the best policy sometimes, however, honesty might hurt a person's feelings because the quality of being truthfulness is the key through out life. For that reason to support my answer your being trustworthy is better than done or obtained without lying to that person. hurting them more when you lie to them then be hundred percent honest with that person. so that why i believe honesty is the best policy sometimes even if u might hurt a person feelings.
First, not stealing, cheating because people will not have respect and lose trust for you. sometimes you could end up in bad situations and problems. so i feel like if you do these things i least own up to your problems by being honest by saying you did this or this happened. Also, people will say bad names to you like your all lies, your not trustworthy, and your dishonest so if you don't want anyone in this world to call you these names be honest at all times.
Then, being careful and saying sorry to the things u told people that was a lie instead of being dishonest changing that honesty i say that people start thinking your real and wanna be friends with you. instead those people out there hating you and talking behind your back almost everyday. so if u do these things it could change you as what type person your now then back then and it will change how people act towards you or behind your back most of the times.
Next, not hiding anything frank from people. For example, Generic_Name dating her best friend boyfriend secretly. like you don't wanna hide anything from the people you love or care for you always wanna be honest with them no matter what. you could break there hearts by not telling them somethings if the situations important that they most know. if you don't be honest life will make you feel stressful by hiding all these things your hiding from people so you do not wanna hide anything from the people u love or care for.
In conclusion, no one questioned the honesty of the judge's statement. so these are my main reasons to support why i agree with this old proverb says honesty is the best policy. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
F1883C3A8C1E | It has been said that having a positive attitude is the key to success life. I agree but at the same time i disagree. First being positive can bring success in life we so many great people who found the key to success in being positive like Micheal Jordan. He was cut from his varsity basketball team but him being positive and putting in work help he found the key to success in his life.
Next my second reason i think being positive can be the key to success is. Da Baby he was always told we wasn't every going to be anything but had stayed humble and positive and keep his head up and now he is one of the top rappers of are time now. he has multiple gold and platinum records and he has millions of fans and followers he has people who want to see him because he stayed positive and found his key to success.
last i disagree because having a positive attitude isnt always the key to success because when the people out in war doesnt have a positive attitude because they have to be ready for the enemy and i think you wouldnt want to have a positive mind set in that predicament. In conclusion being positive can sometimes be the key to life and sometimes not having a positive attitude can still be the key to life. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
F1933BF43F45 | I agree with this idea and I think it's a good idea for me to choose a career at a young age because it's a good way to start to study. If I choose a career at a young age it's good for me because if I don't know about the career then that time teacher can help me and it's easy for me to study when I am in college. At the young age, if I choose the specific career it's good for me in feature and it's important for me.
Yes, it's a good idea for me because if I choose the career at the young age it's easy for me to study when I am taking a career course. It's easy for me to taking a career course because I already learn when I was young. It is important for me if I choose a career at the young age because when I am taking a career when the teacher ask me the question that time I can easily give them the answer. If I do the really good about a career course then one time i'll get success in my life.
It's important for me because if I finish about a career course i'll get a job or i'll do the business. If I do the really good about a career course what I choose one day i'll get success in my life. If I get success in my life i'll be so happy and also my family will be happy.
In Conclusion, if I choose a career at a young age it's good for me and when I'm taking the career course it's easy to take it. One day i'll be success in my life and i'll be so happy and my family and we will stay happy. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F19CD0CE3534 | I am agree with the positive actitute because that describe the kind of person that We are,with a positive actitute We can do our job very well, We can be succesful in the life with good and positive thoughs, and We could be very friendly with the people.
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We could do the job well with a positive actitute because We could have a good moment with the others employments. We can do a clear and a very good job. We will be very respecful with the more workers. We can help the other employments when the they could need help. We could have a funny and happy day if We do the things that we like.
Next, in the life We can be succesful if We have positive thoughts for our future. Many people would like to help us if We have a good actitute. We could have many opportunities in the life beacuse the people could feel good and happy with our actitute. We can have good ideas about a bussines or our kind of life. We can have a good relation with the family and friends.
Finally, with a positive actitute We can try with respect to everybody. the respect is one of the more important things in the life because that show the kind of life that We are living, and We could show tthe respect with a positive acitute. If We show a positive actitute with the people We could to give to them a good day. If we have a good actitute in our home We have a good moment with the family and We will be happy. With a positive actitute We could have less problems in our life.
In conclusion, I think that have a positive actitute is the keys of the life. We can good relations in our home, job, and with ours friends. The opportunities in our life could be more. Do you think that you could have good relations with your family and friend if you have a negative actitute. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F1A4167422E2 | I disagree with the fact that the school board wants to add an extra hour and a half to each school day. I disagree because many students might have something to do when they come out of school,they are also going to have to get used to a whole new schedule,and they might not have enough time to study or do their homework at home.
After school many students might have something to do or attend. For example,students might have to attend a club, take care of one of their younger siblings, or maybe they have a job after school. If the school board adds another hour and half to a school day these students might have to miss the activity that they have or might have to change what they do. This is bad but what is even worse if having to get used to a whole new school day routine.
They will need to get used to a different schedule or routine. Students will have to get used to much more longer classes and having to leave at a later time. Like I mention in my other paragraph sometimes students have things to do out of school,so they might have to change everything so that they will be able to attend or do what they need to do after school,For example,if they have a job they might have to change their job schedule so that they won't be late. This leads me to my other reason about not having time to do their work at home.
Students might not have to time to study or do their homework at home. Think about it. By the time that students get home,eat,relax,and do anything else they do when they get home,they might end up starting their homework at a really late time. What if they have to study for a test,by the time they start studying they might only have an hour to do it. I know some people might say to their school work before anything else,but what if the student is not able to do their work right away.
In conclusion The school board shouldn't add an extra hour and a half to each school. Although, many people might think that it is a good idea to have extended school hours. It would save a lot of time and work to just leave the school hours like they already are. And,their wouldn't be a reason to add an hour and half because students get a most of their work done in the amount of time they give them in the school day. | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F1A5FE43ADD0 | Even though other believe working alone is easier and better. I
strongly believe student do benefit from working in a group. Working in a group has it's advantages, and I feel it's a better choice. When work work in a group you can see different ideas,learn to work with other and also you can met new people.
When you work with other people you can see the different ideas also you can learn know things. You can see the same problem in different ways but as a group you try to find the best way to solve them. For example let's say you have to do a project for a class, and you have to do it in a group. As a group you can share you Knowledge of what you know about the topic and share them with you group . Also you can share you ideas with your group,and see if they like it or maybe they can add something more to your idea to make it a better one . You can see who you have in common with them also you can see the differences you have with you group members .
Working as a group can really have a good advantages. If it is a really big project you dint have to do it alone. Also you can split work and everyone can get a small portion of the project. You can also see people creativity. In a group every one is good in something, so lets say if there is some who is really good at drawing and some one really good in writing then the project can look really nice and the penmanship will look great. You can get it done half as fast with every one in the group does what they have to do and work as a team .
When you work in a group you can met new people. Maybe you change schools. You do not know any one at your new school. When you work in a group, you can meet new people and make friends. It also work if you are shy because in a group you have to communicate with others to get the work done, or you are just a born leader you can help other how to start the project together or tell people how to do thing because they do not know what to do first. Also it works so you can get out your confer zone and try new things. For example you really like to draw but you do not know how to draw really good maybe some one from your group knows how and they can teach you .
As a conclusion I think student do benefit when they are in group. Because not only they can share there different ideas. You learn how to work as a team. You can met new people, and make new friends. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
F1AAB82CE621 | yes impression can be change based on your experiance or your attitude that you show to the people around you, we know everybody have a different impression, but in the different ways. you can be impression if you respect your self, be nice.
and to love other,example celebrity they do good things to impress us, after that they start have a impressoin to people, but if they acting badly to people they impressoin start finished, but if you be good or nice impressoin will come to you it not just to be famous that mean you gone have impressoin even if you not famous you can have impressoin, just you your kindness or help other nobody can,t take you impressoin or change it if you used it. in good ways, you can,t be impressoin if you fighting with people oall the time you can,t impressoin if you don't know how to talk nicely with people impression, person always is cool with people show people your impressoin prove it to them let thems see your impressoin because you can be success because of you impressoin nobody can't take you impression, nobody can't change exspect your self you are the only one can make your impressoin go away you can make people not to trust you but if you keep show tthem your good, impressoin in good way don't acting mean to other because you have impression, just you peole or the one you make that impression work to you...
impression c an't be change because i know if you have impressoin you impress people around you even older people friends in school your coworks you will impress them because of your impress but if you use you impressoin to make other feel bad that impressoin can be change based your ways you are acting impressoin it good many people wish to have impressoin because they can ipmress other's people with it person have have a impressoin can say anythings and people will still agree with that person even he say bad think if you have a impressoin and you use it in good ways you will be a king because of your impression impression is good sometime and bad because people will alway want you to do good things just remember you will face alots of attatoin because of impressoin that mean you need to be nice kind and careful because many people want to have a ipmressoin they need attatoin that why your impressoin can't be change based on your experiance or your attitude in same ways used your impressoin. as Gift because if you mess with it you will neverhave a impresssoin even celebrity they have too many attatoin bacause of the impressoin they have that wht people buy ticker to see them it because of the impressoin if you don'thave any impressoin nobody will buy a ticker to see you, used your impression in good ways it one chance you get use it as Gift many people need it, your impressoin can't be change if you don't use it in the right ways because impressoin it axample of famous if you have impressoin you are famous in same way | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
F1B1760AD63F | I disagree with Emerson statement about individuality, because you can't think about only yourself, I mean sometimes but not everytime like me, me, me and nothing else bised yourself. So you have to think about others like; family, parents, brothers or sisters, grandparents, collagues (sometime), friends when they helping me in some situation and after that I do care. For example if you are in team or more than that, when you participate your members may asking quiestios to solve the problems, what are the planes for next few weeks we will do, or projects. And "it's about teamwork not a selfish" if you decide to ignore and don't even trying to helping your team members, what kind of person they will think about you as team member, but if you will help your team, well then.... push yourself and at least do your best to succeed. When you have a job at business office or somewhere else, they will watch you how you behave, why they should higher you, handel your working and etc. Just don't overthink about yourself, and just do not forget about other who you have. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
F1B4090C8B06 | If you challenge yourself, you will never become good at something you want to do or achieve it. Others believe that challenging yourself won't improve your growth. It's only going to make people struggle. Myself, however, agrees because putting yourself to a challenge can make people explore or learn many things. That is how many people become so talented at things they do now.
Going beyond can raise your confidence higher. My first time experiencing playing the flute was very difficult. The more time I practiced the notes and songs, the easier it got for me. After awhile, I wanted to to play a different instrument. The second instrument option for me when I began playing the flute was a violin. It was more difficult than playing the flute but eventually I got used to it. The more things anyone can accomplish, the more challenges there will be to be completed to improve growth.
School is a good example of improving yourself. There are specific kids who has disability in learning called Special Ed. The experience of being in self-contained classes were easy. For the kids who are capable of being in a larger group class have to make growth in order for them to be in a co-taught class or regular classes. I've got out of self-contained classes by making so many improvements to show that I don't need to be in self-contained.
Going beyond can make a big difference. Going beyond the goal is a great feeling because the goal is achieved and then the on to the next level. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F1B4412674FE | My thoughts on what author Ralph Waldo had wrote, is something I can agree with. The things i have experience and has made me the person I'am today, has taught me that doing the same things will not help me learn and grow. Being fearless and taking a risk on something, will change me and anyone else to a more powerful and successful person.
When I was young, my parents had gotten me a bike with training wheels, I had started to ride it and it was pretty difficult to ride. Every day when I came home from school, I would go outside and ride my bike. I started to get better and better, I was'nt struggling anymore. My parent had saw that I have gotten the hang of it and told me that I should try and do it with out the training wheels. I was to afraid and nervous that I wouldnt be able to ride the bike with training wheels so I didn't let him take them off. He told me that if don't take the wheels off, how will I grow and take risks in life when im older and have big things that i'd have to develop and learn what I made a mistake on not doing and learn from my mistake. So i started to think to myself, "If i didn't take them off how will I know that im good or horrible". I told my dad to take them off, once he took them off i was pretty scared but then i started to get better and better that i wasn't afraid. I was pretty proud of myself and gave me courage.
Once you've done something in your life that was huge and still did the same thing over and over what would you grow from it. You are in this world to learn and grow. To become a stronger, and successful person to accomplish something big and grow from where they have started. If someone was to started off as a employee at McDonald and was thinking of being a manager somewhere and have his own company how could he do that if he's just a worker at McDonald. If he wanted to be a manager and own his own company, he would have to be the hardest worker there and show that he can handle and work and follow all the rules. He ends up getting a raise and is the employee of the month for showing that he's a hard worker. the manger realizes that he's got a big future ahead of him. Year's later, he's a manager at his own company and is being successful in life he's learned that not giving up and risking things to become what he is now is incredible.
Last but not least, if someone is not challenging them self, how would they know that they are good at it and could be able to do so much. Ralph Waldo has gave people the courage and make them think that they can do anything to become someone you'd never thought you could be. If you believe you can do anything then you are growing and realizing that all you need to do is to be fearless and take risks. That's the point of growing. I have learned so much and ready to learn more and to become successful in my life. The statement Ralph Waldo had wrote is something i agree with and will grow to be successful. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
F1BB39C5E549 | In a centair time, many of us think about the benefits of working with a group or working alone. We the students treat the must that we can do to us califications. Exist a controversy,
that is how more we ca have concentration during the assigments in class.
I think these thow ways of work , can get a good results. Because working with a group or with ourselves , oneself have the responsability to concentrain and do our work. It is only put us effort to aprove classe.
When we working with a group during in class, this are help for us in class to convert more fun. We can share our ideas to do more faster the assignments. Also help to ourselves when one of the group don't usterstand about the topic. Even if the assignment are complete ,
the rest of the time the members maybe can talk to each other.
But this happen also when the students have a good communication and they are friendly. However sometimes can be difficult even the sudents don't try to study with the group or only due the part of oneself.
Sometimes is better working with agroup , because when working by oneself taht can be a little frustrate.
Students can have support with a group , but when a student working alone is difficult research information without a opion of another person. Working with a group students can be more fiendly with anothers students of differents countries and they can be more caring.
Students can show their abilities and be more prepare when they get a job. Also students learn more of the members . In totality this is a argument to the students that they can't work alone , but they have the opcion to work with a group to prepare.
In conclusion , I agree that is more better to work with a group in class than alone . It is a benefits to discover new people, hear more ideas,
and be fliendly. I think is more helpful to students do the assigments in class. Work alone can be difficult , but sometimes these help oneself to be indepent . It is more great have a goup with members that gonna help. It is only concentration in a group or not , beacsuse oneself need to be more improve everyday and pass classes. Work with effort , the students always need help in study in class is a benefit when students see all persons equal to working. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
F1CB29904BBD | My dad is someone who has shared wisdom and experience with me these are the thing's that my dad shared wisdom and experience,He show's me his experience that he has,He shows me wisdom that he has that he gain,He teaches me about life.
My dad show's me experience like working on the cars he showed me what to do for working on the cars. one time me and my dad was working on the engine of a car he tells me this is how it works or how to fix it. He show's me wisdom,my dad he would tell me to not give up on something,when I can't do something and it's hard to do it my dad would tell me to not give up you can do it believe in your self. He teaches me a lot about life he says that life isn't always easy or simple,sometimes in life it can be bad or hard but he would always say keep your head up and never be down on yourself. when he tells me about life I feel like I can do stuff in the future that I would take off and be sussesful in the future. And its cool when my dad talks to me about life. My dad is a really good dad he show's me wisdom and experience and other stuff to like he helps me in stuff. In conclusion it is important to learn from other's that are experience too, Because you will learn new things or will will new thing's that they will say that you don't know of in life its really good if you get to know a new person and get to know them and hear what they say or there experience that you dont know of. And it's great to learn new thin'g about the person that you meet or already know because you will find new thin's about that person and you will learn about that thing is you liesn to them. It's better to learn about there wisdom and the experience because once you know there wisdom and experience you will tell them your experience and your wisdom that you know of that you got from your parents or your other friends. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F1DF4F89F70D | Do you think that too much oil in your food affect your health, or it improve the ability of how you work at school? I think food that contains too much oil makes you get sick and that's what we have right now, but others think different and they have their reasons too. Although some say that the school's cafeteria should not change their food because the food that they are offering right now is especially made to make students work better actually, the school's cafeteria should change their food because it gives students more variation to eat and by having a healthier food less students will get sick.
Those who think that the school's cafeteria should not change their food have their reasons. One reason is that the food that they are offering makes students work better; this is because it has a lot of oil. Scientific studies say that oil awake people, and make people do their usually activies better. Also, students who have their test after lunch, and they have eat something that contains a lot of oil; they tend to get better scores than those who didn't eat at lunch; this might be because some of them can't think with the stomach empty, or it can be because oil really helps them concentrate, who knows right. The oil food doesn't sound that bad, isn't? but I will tell you next what is what I think that is bad about it.
There are many people who think that the school's cafeteria should change their food. This is because they have their reasons, one reason is to make students eat healthier; this will help prevent students get sick. There are many sicknesses caused by oil, and one of them is cholesterol; cholesterol can kill people if you don't know how to take care of it. Also, by preventing students get sick they will not lose any day of school, and that will help them have good attendance and they will not get lost in their important classes. For example: Science, Math and History.
Another reason to change the cafeteria's food is that it will give more variation for students to eat. This might sound simple, but by giving them more variation to eat; students will feel more free to explore food that they don't know. Also, students will feel more comfortable as if they were at home because you know that when you are at home food variate and that makes it fun. moreover, Variation of food will attract those who are more likely to stay out of the cafeteria; maybe they don't like the food that we have right now, and they are hoping that the cafeteria change the food. I think that by changing the food in the cafeteria will make a good impact in the school.
In conclusion, I think that the principal of my school should change the cafeteria's food because the variation of food will make a good impact in students who don't like to eat at lucn right now, and it will also prevent the majority of students to get sick. Eventhough those who don't want to change the food had a good reasons; "The food that we have right now is made to make students be more active". I think that the reasons to change the food are more productive for the improvement of our school. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
F1F6D7CAE400 | I am agree with Churchill's statement about that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." Failure plays an important role in the pursuit of the success. We learn of our owns mistakes, including others persons mistakes. At the same time, is very important to be enthusiasm and with a good attitude to address and learns of ours mistakes, to continue progressing in the pursuit of success.
If we do not try, we do not make mistakes,
if we do not make mistakes, we do not learn, and we will not be success as we want to. It is so important that when we make a failure. With enthusiasm,
checking where did we fail, how can we fix it, and give the best of our self. You can see, that how the next time that you pass with the same circumstances, you will not make the same failure that you did the last time, and at the time you will became an expert according at the area you are trying to perform.
Do not let the fear of going from failure to failure, prevent you of pursuit the success. Every vary make mistakes that is why, it is very important that we do not have to loss the enthusiasm. The enthusiasm is what make us, to stand up, learn of our failure, and continue pursuit the success, do not matter which one, or how it is the circumstances of our failure.
At the same time you can learn of the failures of others persons. that way you do not have to pass with same circumstances that they pass before; and you can economize your time to success faster. Listening, reading and paying close attention of what other person transmit about their failure can help us more then what can we think. Imagine the much you can get just for give some of the minutes of your time, to listen the important things you can get from the failure of others. so open your mind and pay attention.
In conclusion it is good to failure. Every time we make a mistake, we learn about it, and we will never forget what we learn from them. Therefore do not let a failure prevent you to be success, and learn of your failure and other people failure. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
F2029DDE1D2B | Do you think first impression is difficult to be change? Some people said that first impresion is difficult to change in a person. Firs impression can be change in some people because you can related to the person, You can talk to the person if is having a bad time, sometimes you can change the first impression to a person.
When i was in middle school i meet a girl, her name was Generic_Name, i didn't like her first impression and i noticed that she didn't like my impresion too. She was my neirbor for 3 years and she didn't talk to much and she was always angry. One day i notice that she was having problems with friends, like me. We were relatived to some things and our first impression.
Sometimes people can be having bad times and that is why their first impression it seems difficult to change. I had a friend that it was having a bad day at work the first time i meet him. Generic_Name was angry and he didn't talk to me that day. After that day i was surprised of his impression . Days after he explain what was happening to him that day.
If you meet a person more closedly you can change their first impression. You can be come a friend to the person, sometimes they change. You would like more that person than the first time. LIke i said before , they can have bad times the first time you see their impression. Not everyone is happy every day.
First impression is not difficult to change , people can due it and people can change it. some said that is impossible to change first impression , but is not , if i can due it with some people , you too can change it.
In the future we will see that first impression is not impossible to be change. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
F2165F132C87 | Many students become participated in extracurricular activities to acquire a great educational experience. In addition, some students involved in activities that they don't have so much time to study or complete assignments. Finally, the students who participate in activities after school they don't spend so much time with their families in the afternoon. Some people argue that if students participate in activities they will focus more in what they participate; however this is the opposite because they can obtain help with their homework, and projects. Undoubtedly, sutudents involved in the activities of the school.
To start, many students become involved in extracurricular activities to enrich their educational experience. Most importantly, a student who wanted to overcome in life wanted a good education. For example, Generic_Name is a student with a great purpose in life, and he wants to study a career. He become involved in activities like staying after school while he was in high school because he wanted to improved in the school, and be a good student. As a result, he thinks that maybe is not necessary being involve in so many activities to enrich a educational experience. With a good behavior and good grades he will enrich in his educational experience. If he show good grades in class, then probably he will be better in his education. Not only the extracurricular activities enrich the education, being involved in activities allows a student to have little time to do homework assignments as well.
Additionally, some students become involved in activities like sports and they have little time to do their homework or study. A student who join in activities don't have so much time to finish their homework. Case in point, Generic_Name is a student she goes to high school, and she likes to play soccer. Generic_Name is very athletic she join in the soccer team, and she stay after school for practice everyday during the week. She is a smart student, and she likes to get good grades as well. Furthermore, when she get involved in the soccer team now she don't have so much time to complete homework assignments, and study. If she doesn't stay after school every day, then she probably will have more time to complete her homework. She thinks that it can possible to her because she shows interest in what she wants. Participate in activities allows to have little time to complete assignments, and allows to spend little time with the family as well.
Lastly, students who get involved in activities after school they obtain little time with their families. However, many students likes to participate in activities of the school. In particular, Generic_Name is a student who likes to participate in the activities of the school. She likes to participate in the class activities, games, and clubs. She likes to stay after school because she is participating in one club. She just stay after school on Mondays, Wednesday, and Fridays. When she stay those days she pass little time with her family. If she doesn't stay these days, then probably she will have more time in the afternoon with her family. Plainly, the participation that she demonstrate in the sport she improve as athletic.
Some people say that involved in activities will impair some students because they can focus more in participating in activities, and not focus in their class grades. However, this idea is inaccurate. For illustration, Generic_Name is a student and he participates in a club where he obtain help with his homework, and projects. When he don't understand his homework assignments he go to the club. If he didn't participate in the club, then likely he will no receive help from the club. Therefore, participating in other activities the students can obtain help with their homework, projects, and improve their grades.
In conclusion, participate in activities can be helpful to some students. Many of students prefer to participated in extracurricular activities to improve their educational experience. Secondary, some students become involved in activities, and allows students to not have so much time to finish their homework. Finally, students who participated in activities after school they have less time with their families in the evening. Conversely, a lot of students participate in extracurricular activities, they have less time to study, and they have little time with their families. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
F21B26DBED29 | What is your favorite thing to do during your free time? Do you stay in bed and watch movies? Do you go to your community library to read books and study? Or do you just go outside for a walk?
Studies have proven that 75% of people go to parks more often during their free time. These specific people say they usually go outside to relieve stress, and get their mind off things. This is one key factor to why you see elderly people outside. But our main focus was on modern day children and why they love going outside.
Children always want to have fun, but usually with their friends. Additional to this fact, they start to create games and activities with their friends giving them a chance in looking forward to going outside everyday. One popular game from the 1800s is hopscotch, which is surprisingly still played today. Though this game was only played by girls, through recent years we start to notice not only girls but boys and adults playing this game. Though hopscotch isn't a really competitive game and can be played alone, it's better when its played with other people.
Another game played much more often is freeze tag, or tag, which consists of two teams and two catchers and played by both girls and boys. This game involves running which can improve both your physical well-being and cardio-respiratory endurance, This game isn't usually played by adults as seen in frequent surveys, and tend to be a child only game. This game is one of the most competitive outdoor games played my modern day kids.
Comparing these two games, there is a high chance that people who enjoy running would go for tag, and serene people would go on tho playing hopscotch. Though you could still play tag being a quiet person. These are some examples of what to do when you ever want to go outside, or to the park. | 4.5 | 4 | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
F22B25257E47 | Two minds think better than one. Working with someone else can bring many benefits and opportunities to everyone, but there is many people who prefer to work by their self . working in a group can help to have done everything on time, and we can establish a good environment in the classroom. Each person have different opinions, and we have to respect it.
Working in groups help to have everything done on time, since we are gathering many types of ideas and information from everyone. For example, in USA there are a diversity of people from different parts around the world, and each person have a different opinions and ideas in how they see everything. However, some people think that they have better opinions about what they are doing than others, but an opinion or idea is just a help that can guide to the best option. Having groups in classes is a help that can benefit. Because, they are helping each other. When someone is working alone can be struggling and do not ask for any type of help to keep going and make things nicely.
When we are working in groups, we can establish a good environment with our classmates, since there is a lot of communication between classmates. For example, if we work alone, we would not be able to communicate each other, because, everyone is concentrate in what are they doing. Otherwise, people from different parts of the country would not have the opportunities to meet each other and learn different cultures from their classmates. Knowing each other can create a calm and gradable place to stay and share with every student in the classroom. Even other students would prefer to be there.
Many people would like to be in a place where they can share and work together. But many people are looking where they can work with people from different types of cultures and listen every idea or opinions in life. having someone to work with, can make evening easier than working alone. Every teacher should allow or try to create a better place where students feel comfortable. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
F22FE8D7FA16 | Students should commit to a career at a young age?. Many people thing that this would be an advantage in the future, because if many students choose a career when they are young, then there's going to be more professionals that can help the country, but other people thing the opposite, because they thing that the students are not ready to choose a career,because they are not in the age to thing by themselves. In my opinion, I would say that both arguments have good reasons to support their arguments, but l would prefer to be disagree with this opposition.
For my first reason, I would say that it's too much responsibility for their age, because they don't have the experience necessary to complete a career that they like, but they are not prepare to complete, however if they choose a career, then they have to worried about the college that they want and how much it's going to cost to them and their family to start a career, also because they are not going to take the career seriously, and it's going to be a waste of time in a career that they can not hold by themselves, so they are going to leave the career.
In addition, my second reason is that they don't have the ability to maintain a career mentally, because they can not control their actions and thinking, and if they do things wrong ,and they try to solve their problems alone, it's going to be stressful for them, what can cause a distinct kind of future that they don't expect , so they can get affect by all the things that can occur on your way, and also because there's going to be people that instead of help you, it's going to use for their benefits, and one example of that is the people who works in factories, construction, and bussines.
Finally, my last reason talks about how much time they have to enjoy their life, if they have to work in their career at a young age, because you can choose to be a professional when you are young and find jobs with that kid of career, but if you already know that you are going to work almost the rest of your life to have better future and keep progressing, so why don't enjoy your youth and be happy doing things that you like, instead of worry about find a career that if you are not ready, it's going to make you problems that you don't want to have now.
In conclusion, supporting with the reasons, I would like to say that the best thing to progress in life, is to find something that your are good, that you can control, and also something that you can make money with that,
however if know what you want to do in the future, and you know how you are going to try to make it possible, why don't enjoy what you have now, and leave the occupations for later, so you can concentrate in what you want now, before it's start to being late,because life is only one and we have to enjoy the maximum as we can. | 3 | 2 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
F2387DA187A4 | Positive attitude is the key to a successful and happy life. People who has positive attitude will act more with integrity and honesty. They will respect the dignity of others. They will take responsibility for your actions and their consequences. In order to gain self-respect and confidence people needs to have a positive attitude. 3/5 people in the world has a positive attitude. It has been proved that people who has a positive attitude has the highest acceptance rate in a community, then the people who do not have a positive attitude. However its true that people who has a positive attitude are more happy and it has an important impact on the society due to their daily life activities. They will show empathy, compassion,and care towards the needs and feelings of others. People who has a positive attitude will always think creatively and find different ways to solve their problem. it consider many perspectives and how their solution will impact others in so many different ways.
As we all know people who has a positive attitudes are more respectful people among the people in a community. They still need more attention and encouragement for their good deeds and being a rule model for kids. People who has a positive attitude will impact the society in good terms. for example most of the people who has a positive attitude are more knowledgeable, They will help others in their problems, they will seek ideas, information, and share their personal experiences just to help others in their hard times and show them the right way. People who has positive attitude are open minded and so as creative. If you want to bring changes in your life you have to hangout and make more friends who has positive attitude. People who has positive attitude are intelligent and smart, they have a solution for every problem, they will act the same, they will have the same energy, they will not give up easily. like they said welcome mistakes as a way to learn. celebrate when you achieve something. Think of ways to improve everything you do in your life.
In order to gain some experiences and life lessons. People needs to spend more time with people who has positive attitudes. People with positive attitudes are so caring, balanced, and have a lot of experiences from life. which it includes as a good experiences and bad experiences. However these experiences are so helpful for the people who want to change their bad attitude to positive attitude. If they want to change for the better version of themselves, They have to talk to someone who has a positive attitude and stuck to the process and let go of off their bad habits. Therefore we need more people who has positive attitude and at the same amount of time they can help others to change for the better version of themselves. People with positive attitude are symbols to kids and for the upcoming generation. Moreover people with the positive attitude are all this world needs and we have to give them their credits and salute to them.
lastly, people with positive attitude have self-confident, and reflective views. society will introduce them as a rule model, their good deeds and positive attitudes will encourage kids to call them, their real life heroes. People with positive attitude are so down to earth and so kind hearten people. We have to give them the respect that they deserved and knows their value, that how important they are and they can be. People with positive attitude will commit everything, just to bring a good change in your life, and to see you do good and be a successful person in your life. People with positive attitude are people who will not let you down, they will not break their promises, and they will not lose your trust. For example: sometimes people will lose themselves in world with so many people, at the same they can find themselves with the right person who can guide them to the right path in a lost world. To help them get through their hard times and hold their hand and guide them to the right path, where they can work on themselves and build up what they have lost in the past. They can take the second chance and move forward to a successful life.
To be continued, People needs to have a positive attitude in order to graduate from High School, College, and Universities. A lot of people are smart, they have money, but they are lacking on having a positive attitude. It cause them a lot of family problems, problems in public, and in school. However its not good for their life. Generally, they needs to bring changes in their attitude if they want to do good in life and be a successful person.
To conclude, it is one of the most valuable factors, that everyone needs to know about it and share it with others. Positive attitude is the key to successful,self respect, and self-confident. people who has positive attitude are the most honest, trustworthy and they are so down to earth people. Positive attitude can help people to rebuild their identities and to stay focus on daily activities. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
F2649F7F089F | I will be honest with this. I know about politician just a litterbet but I don't know what? John Lubbock wrote about it the british naturalist and politician something. I will do is to try to tell you about this thing like politician it's control people on different ways like. we saying one persone it's runing to be a precident but he need suport of him own people on his party like suport what choese he had to make and see fro the people if you make people happy they will love you and they will vote fro you but if you don't do anything from then they don't vote for you. this mean you have to convencet the people or other work buy the people waith no the way you give money for you vote. The way. I mean to buy the people it's to do something from then and they will see if you are the best choses they can make or fro the country. Whent they see you trying to make the country better or fix something it's bad they will take the best choese fro the country evenben you will do something to the country but you need to be the precident frist and you promese you will do it! the british naturalist this mean the just the naturalist is whent the people come from other country and they stay longer to be a cityssent this mean him will be have to naturalisation from him con from and the new country him staying after him is done with naturalist him can vote whent the coutry has fro vote for any reason like we saying buy and sale of gun on the street. that can be right to do it. the type of stuff you can give a opinion now after you naturalist they are many people on the wrold they mouve to the new country just beacuse the economi and the politicion. they looking better oportunit on life. We can see all this on the goverment like the precident promesse him will do some with he play and never do it. they are other thing he say but he never make a work. I try my best to explant this my best example if I not wrong if the everything it going on on life.
I honest I feel like all this I write for the politician and naturalist I'm be worng or maybe not I never no but I di It my best and I hope the next time I will preper for this I can keep going text by text just taping stuff. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
F27DE7F7F3AB | In my opinion, The school shouldn't have to follow the model by extending the school day two hours. because schools have seven hours school day and when they use two hours for that it will be not help full for students because student. when we use the same amount of time for school that is better for me because student have more time. If we want to make our life easy or conferrable it is not help full. for example if we have a two hours expanding the school day its not helping us because the using our schedule. All school schedule is help full for all who attend the school. so we don't have to use the two hours expanding the school day. The energy of the four-day two hours extending schools extending is not help full for me so. The school follow the school management systems.
we dont have to use the two hours extending police. because,it is not help full for who attend the school and who need more time for his/her class. fore example some student need more time to do the Home work, and assignment. its not helping for that kind of student, some student need more to understand . it mean it is not help full the four-day school week and the extending the school day for two hours. Finally the am disagree with this idea its doesnt help student and teacher in the other way. school have to follow his extending police. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
F28D4ACF03AA | I have multiple talents and skills, but my favorite one is skateboarding. Skateboarding is a very difficult skill it takes several hours, days maybe even years to accomplish and learn a trick on a skateboard, but that's why it's such a unique sport and skill. Skateboarding has become a daily activity for me, it takes all my stress and problems away, that's why I enjoy it so much. I skate everywhere to the store, a friends house, and maybe even to school. although I get lots of injuries like scrapes, bruises and many more I still love this sport because skateboarding has taught me a lot like, being able to be confident when i try new things, getting right back up when I fall, and being able to learn from my mistakes. Skateboarding isn't just a sport, skill, activity or hobby it's a way of life and even tho it may not be the safest sport ever it's still one of my favorite skills that I think I wont get bored of any time soon. When I was nine I had lots of friends that would skateboard and I didn't know anything about skateboarding at the time so it was really cool being able to observe such a unique sport. I would always see them practicing and skating everywhere and that encouraged me one day to try it. So a couple days later I went up to my parents and told them that I wanted to try something new and it was skateboarding, my mom said she would think about it because she didn't want me to hurt my self, but my dad on the other hand told me to just go for it and that's exactly what I did. The next day after school I asked my mom if we could go to the nearest skate shop and she said yes. Once we got to the the skate shop I was looking around and i was so confused I saw decks wheels and so much more that i didnt even know about. So as I walked in the guy that was working there asked me "is there something specific you are looking for". I told him I was new to skateboarding and that i've never been on top of one, so he taught me what i needed to know about a skateboard like about the deck, grip tape, trucks, wheels, and hardware. After that we got into assembling my first ever skateboard. Once I was done picking out all the stuff that was going to be on my skateboard we payed and he stared assembling it, once he finished we left the skate shop and it was to dark so I didn't get to skate that day sadly. The next day I get back home from school I put down my backpack and I imedietly went outside to try my new skateboard out the only thing i knew was to ride but i imedietly fell in love with skating. Since that day i've been skating every day and if it's not every day it's every other day. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
F29244150DCB | Schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by video conference. This might be a good option for students who really do need it but there is some other students who won't take this seriously.
I am writing this essay with the porpuse of desagreement with the idea of providing this "benefit" to the students, this is a way of making students lose interest in school because they might think that they don't have to take the conference every time and they willl think that they can do it whenever they want which gives to think that they aren't prepare for making good decisions when it comes with schools classes. In my opinion this is an opportunity that the schools gives to the students to drop out of high school considering that students are teenagers and they don't have the same amount of responsability than adults in most cases.
As a student I desagree with this option. We need to be able to communicate, create good group work, and meet people and I can assure that most of the students will ended up leaving this classes when they half way done. Being with more students make classes fun, helpful and even more interesting, students sometimes needs to have a adult teaching them and having a conversation face to face instead a computer taking to them.
Taking classes online is a benefit when you know how to manage time for example: My brother is a college student who is getting his master degree in Genetic Engineering some of his classes wasn't a requirement that he had to take them inside school so he decide to take them online so he can have more free time when it comes with work and school. He made a study plan which consist in spending one hour each day so he can focus on his online classes which helps him to study for every single of his classes.
My friend Generic_Name is a senior on high school and she decided to take two of her classes online so she can have enough time for work, school activities, and graduation plans. She has been overwhelm with all her activities and assignments which it made her drop out of one of her two online classes, she said she felt like she couldn't do it by herself which it made her start getting bad grades in her school classes. Later she decided to take those classes in school so she can have her classmate help her in case she get stuck in a topic. I think this opportunity can make students get stuck and give up on school which it can't happen because we are the future.
In conclusion this option has it advantages and disavantages which for some people might seems good and differentes but for some other this option seems to be useless when it comes with the progress that we do inside the school. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
F2A721819364 | Generic_Name
3/8/2020
Dear, Mr Generic_Name. I am a student who is in attendance at your high school, writhing to you about the changing of our school menu. I for one think it's a grate idea to change our school menu into a much healthier one.
Our current school menu has its redeeming qualities, but it also has a few lose ends. For example; they serve things like pizza, burgers, rice with chicken, nachos, spaghetti, Pb&j , and salad. Do you see the problem with the food items listed above? 99% of the schools menu contain high levels of fat and carbohydrates, which is not a proper meal for a growing student, or any human being. I remember seeing posters like the food pyramid, posted on the lunch room walls of my middle and elementary schools, but not once did the school lunches follow that expatiation. This is the problem with the school menus all over America today, they serve fatty foods filled with carbohydrates and not enough protein, fibers, and good fats.
As growing students, we need food that'll give us energy through out the day, and keep us focused in our classes, but the current menu isn't serving us the food we need; don't get me wrong, they have things like fruits, vegetables, and other good side options, but that's not enough. We need the main meal/ main dish to be the most healthiest thing on our trays, not the side dishes.
The students at our school may be disappointed with the sudden change in the school menu, but they'll just have to adjust to a healthier menu. It'll be nice if the school menu items was a bit more healthier, but the side options must stay the same. The side options our school menu currently have are just fine; they meet the expatiation's of a healthy side option; the offer fruits vegetables and the occasional desert.
The health of your students and my peers are important, and a big part of being healthy starts with what you put in your body, so please continue with the plan of changing the school menu, our future self's will deeply appreciate it. Thank you for our time.
Sensually, Generic_Name. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F2A97549C778 | We live in a world were everything revolves around technology. People these days don't know what the world outside holds. Why? Because they always have their noses in their phones and they never take time to go outside. Very few peoplw know what it's like to actually spend time outside.
Sports are another example, not only are they fun, but they are alsp helping you stay healthy especially if you play almost everyday. If you think about it every sport requires you to run or to keep moving. Sports can also be something you do after dealing with a lot of stress or work. They were shown to be a good for both your body and your mind.
Families also become closer when they spend time together with no sort of technolgy that can distract them. I think now in days families aren't as close as they used to be because we spend to much time on our phones and not so much on the people who care about us.
Technology has advanced a lot in these past years and it is fine that people want to explore new things. But we shouldn't get lost in it and forget that there are other things waiting to be discovered beyond a tiny screen. Activities like sports bring you better things than a tiny screen can. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F2AE464DA15E | Do you think a good way to success in life you had to fail first?.
In this paper i will argue about, why people should believe fain in life it is so important because if you fail a least in one thing in life it's help you be more confident and be prepared for the real world and also help you that if you want something you had to fight for the.
My mom always tell me " Be confident i believe in you". When i was in 1 grade in my country Honduras one teacher tell my mom that i'm not in math the i'm going to fail the grade and i did it. But my mom tell me that and she also tell me if you fail the grade it's no becasue you are not intelligent. It's because it is difficult for you but i know you can do it and i did it the next year i have to take again 1 grade but that year was diffrent and the teacher tell's my mom that it was amazing how good i was in math and the other class too. I'm happy that i fail 1 grade because shows me if you fail one time doesn't mean you had to give up , you had to figth back like i did.
I always said to me you had to fight back never give up in my dreams no matter how difficult is. When i was a kid my dream was the i want to be a lawyer. One time in my school we have to said what we want to be when we grow up and i said i want to be a lawyer. One student tell me how could you be a lawyer you never going to complete that career and said to him you never know no matter how many times i fail. I know i'm going to be a lawyer because if you not fight back for your dreams. That's mean your i said you are failure person and i'm not a failure person. Not allowed other people said you never going to make never.
If you fail one time or more doesn't mean you never going to make is the contrary. In my whole life that it is 18 years old i fail many time but i always i had in mind. I fail i learn a new lesson today beacuse all the fail times i had in my life i take as a lesson to help to prepare for the real world and how it is.
Someone may think i wrong to think like that but they are the wrong ones beacuse no ones is perfect in life everyone make a mistake or fail in something in life
To be a successful person in life you have to take step by step and also no matter how many time you fail keep going. You are gonna make don't allowed other person said what exactly you had to do.
In the future i hope people never give up in their dreams just because they fail one time or more and also show the person's who tell you "You never gonna make it". Shows them that you did it all by yourself. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
F2B360408003 | Imagine taking advice from two people, which person should you choose? Asking advice from two people is a hard digestion to make, but he will go with his gut feeling and make the right choice. Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice because he will know which advice to choose. Also he will have better opinions of advice, then bad ones. If he chooses older person and not younger person, it's because older people have more experience.
First, reason is he will know which advice to choose. He will go with his gut feeling and make the right choice. For example, if he asks advice from his best friend and his friend he would go with his best friend's advice because that is his gut feeling. He also knows if it's smart, or not. He knows he has to listen to his heart not his head.
Second, reason is he will have better opinions of advice, than bad ones. If he chooses older person and not younger person, it's because older people have more experience. For instance, if seeking advice from his mom ans his best friend he would choose his mom's advice. His mom has more experience. The older people are also wiser too.
In conclusion, seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice because the person will know which advice to choose. Also he will have better opinions of advice, then bad ones. If he chooses older person and not younger person, it's because older people have more experience. In the future advice can change your life. It's difficult digestion to make, but when you seek multiple opinions you will choose the better choice. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F2B390040C12 | My school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours, and four day school week. There are some benefits but also disadvantages.
First reason, if we take only two hours of class during the day probable should more express try the best of us, for use that time of class. In contrast, lose hours in others things not necessary; with more hours and days off the students would be distract of the responsability that is demanding the school.
second reason, less pressure for the students that have a job is a big idea taking the school day two hours, because they want time for both during the week. For example, i work 27 hours in three day i came home so late, hungry, and tired sometimes i miss days of school, for that reason i think is benefit take time on sleep then came to the school just for few hours. But, one disadvantages that could be happent is less time of classes when the students don't work or spend time in others distraction. Clearly, they feel more in liberty in do something else on free time, and would not put all in the study.
Third reason, another disadvantages is not focus at all maybe should not work that idea; in the way that lost time of school is lost sacred time. The teachers miss day of their job too, and the student do not see the loss of the oportunity that is the school. However, one benefit and important for the students is the repose, so when our brain is in repose with not too much pressure it was relax, and we going to be blessed. Because, we have more time to think much better what we want to do for our future,so we think most clear.
In conclusion, in my opinion it is a great idea if my school take a four day school week of two hours each day. Obviously, it's probable that students feel more easy in this way, for making their homework with time, wisdom, and decoration. Finally,the school will make the change for a good reason. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
F2BAC6095D8A | I belive that students would work more effectivelly online rather, then sitting in a class room all day and not engaring in there learning rather then talking to there friends and being sociable.
When working online the student and teacher has obligations that he or she sould complete foor example a student that has a project due on wednesday and will do it ,on time and correct rather then the student, that goes to school and has the same project due on the same day there will be, more higher chances that the student working online will have it done first becuase the student has less time, to socalize with friends and has more time to stay foused on he's or her work .
Many kids have this advantage and it is a good one becuase they learn so much though out a online school rather then a public school ; becuase the class it more advanced and has for advantages for example the student ;online is taking pre calculas the student can easely tell the teacher what proble he or she is stuck on and the teacher can go over it explaning it in more it also help the student to be more engaging in there learning ; turo details rather then asking the teacher after class and not giving you a straight foward awnser .
Many student's taking classes online have the capibilidy and asset of graduating much earlyer becuase there classed are more advanced and with more potential to succed in life becuase of the parnts and the dissition that they have enrolled there kid in to online school ,rather then regular school .
Many parents do benifit from this great advantage becuase the student can take a class knowing that the parent will give suport to the kid in his or her future carrer. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 2 |
F2C012ECBF9C | I agree with the statement because when you get your first X box game the impression you have is almost impossible to change. that impression can be almost impossible to change because you are so happy that you could burst into tears but that impression can also be embarrassing, when you realize it you can change your that impression and make a different impression to an impression that is less embarrassing and the could be OK for you but the first impression is the best impression of you being happy about having you first X box game and that impression can be OK for you if you like. You can chose not to change that impression because it is the impression that makes you feel good about your self even if that impression can be embarrassing it is no problem for you because it's your impression and no one else impression. So I agree that first impression are almost impossible to change. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
F2CB99D1FE9F | Dear Generic_Name, in our school is common to see many students working in groups. I would like to tell you that by working in group I can get a lot of benefits. For example, getting a good grade,
having a chance to meet new people, to know more about my classmates and even make new friends. I believe that working in group is more beneficial than working alone.
I think that having the opportunity to meet new people is really important. When I meet new people; I feel inspired, confident and happy. Because most of the time I like to share my ideas with other people. Although, not all time they will feel related to my ideas, but that's one way I make new friends by demonstrating my interest. I also like to hear peoples' ideas and stories. For example, I like to hear peoples' stories about their life and childhood.
I personally like to get good grades on school projects. I think that when I work in groups I feel more confident of what I am doing. I also do my work on time, and I even put an extra effort on my task to get a decent grade. For example, If I make a mistake my teammates will let me know. I will learn from my mistakes. If I make a mistake does not mean that I didn't try, I always try my best every day, to be a better person. So I can not complain that I do not have support because I do have it.
Some people say, that working in groups is not beneficial as working alone, people usually complain that they easily get distracted. But I think they are wrong. Because working in groups is more beneficial than working alone. When I work in groups I receive the support from my teammates. But when somebody is working alone they do not receive any support. So I think that working in groups is an easy and beneficial way to do my job and get a good grade.
When I work in group there's a lot a benefits I can get: I can meet new people, hear new stories from new people etc. If I get a school project and I have to choose whether to work alone or work in group, I will choose to work in a group without thinking twice. Because I have experience how good it feels to work in groups.
Sincerely: Generic_Name | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
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