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E9CE2D1B2D50 | DEAR PINCIPAL:
I believe that the first policy is better because phones are good but no when are use in class.
Just imagine that something is bad how are they going to talk with their parents if they don't have phones. What would happen if something bad would happen after school how are they going to call their parents and if you don't let them bring the phones at all their parents would probably get mad. Then the parents can go and have a protest that wouldn't be good.
That's why the first policy is better.
Sincerely,
Your student
STUDENT_NAME | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
E9CE67114F63 | I think that failure plays a crucial role during the persuit of sucess.
Failure is inavoidable the path to success is not straight one.
everyone fails sometime in their life .
Walt disney was fired for a newspaper because he lacked creativity.
Learn from your mistakes, if you make a mistake at least you know not to do it again.
A failure might put an end to one thing (idea or opportunity) but lead you to other for example: I used to try to draw realistic people and animals with pensils, and then I found that i was better at zentangle (an art style that consists of repetitive designs and patterns. The success you end up having might not be the kind you originally had in mind. Failures could lead you into in something else entirely.
Failure often leads to problem, working to solve problems and getting through difficult times makes you smarter and stronger as a person. By dealing with your failures, you will be more prepared and experienced in the fututre. Strength, intelligente, problem solving skills, and experience are all thing that are gained from faiture and can lead to success.
Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that success consists of going from faiture to faiture without loss of enthusiasm. I think that faiture Plays a crucial role during the pursuit of success.
If there were not mistakes in life. Then no one would learn from then. Faiture is unavoidable, but it can be a useful tool that helps shape your future.
My conclusion is Faiture can change who you are and what path you're on in life, and I believe that it plays an important role in the persuit for success.
Mistake only makes us smarter and working to solve problems only makes us stronger.
Without faiture, no one would be sucessful.
Vocabulary:
-Blunder
-Unavoidable
-Principal
Prime
-Induce | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
E9E68651B168 | I disagree on extending school hours. I disagree because if the school board adds more morehours to school, students won't pay much attention to the teacher or staff. Another reason is that students will start disrespecting teachers because they have too many hours and they will start to get more tired or start to go a sleep. I also think that teachers might get anoyed by students replying on why the school board added extra hours of school. I think that instead of adding the extra hours to school, the school board should just make the extra hours optional after school. This should take place after school so kids can come and learn more about life and school.
First of all, I disagree because if the school board adds more hours to school students wouldn't be able to concentrate or pay attention in class. I believe that if students don't pay attention in class or to the teacher, the teacher will get very upset and students will start to get in trouble or would start losing points. I believe that the students don't pay attention in class or to the teacher, they would begin to be disrespectful to teachers and won't be respectful to others. I believe that students should tell their parents to do something about the school board wanting to increase the amount of hours in school. Kids should work very hard and keep up the good work and not be disrespectful to others or to the teacher.
Second of all, I don't agree because I think that students will start to disrupt or question their teacher about why the school board wants to change or increase the amount of hours students have in school. They are going to start asking a lot of question and their teacher isn't going to like that. I think that students should ask the school board why they are going to increase the amount of hours in school. Students should talk to their parents on why the school board is extending the amount of hours. Students should just be able to do the normal hours of school instead of doing extra.
Third of all, I believe that the school board shouldn't increase the amount of hours the should just make it an after school activity. I think that the school board should just make it an after school activity instead of increasing the amount of school for students. The school board shouldn't extened the school hours for students because students can just study hard for something or teachers should go over the subject the are learning about so they can learn and understand. If they just stay after school theyh will get so board and they wouldn't want to be there.
I decline on the idea that the school board wants to increase more hours for students. I decline beacuse students will get very bored and wouldn't want to do anything. The school board should think it over again and not extend or increase the amount of hours for school. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
E9F50492B159 | It is true that curfew keep teengers out of trouble. because, being out at night for to late might be dangerous. also, teenagers can have more time to spend it with they are family and friends. and , so they be more responsible.
First, being out at night for to late can be dangeruos. For example, if they stay to late out at night something could happen to them someone might kidnapp them because, at night everyone is in their home not a lot of people is out at night it would be easy for someone to kidnapp you and rap you or do something wrong with you.
Second, teenagers can have more time to spend it with they are family and friends. For instance, adults and teenagers are busy in their daily life teenagers go to school adults go to work in the morning they don't see each other often and, they dont have enough time to spend it with each other and talk to each other so they can have more time at night to spend it with each other and talk .
Finally, so they can be more responsible, Therefore, teenagers must be responsible and know what they should do in their life and what is better for them. In that age teenagers make a lot of mistakes it because, they don't have a lot of experience like adults do so they must listen to adults and follow the crufew in that way they can be safe and more responisble.
For these reasons, curfew keep teengers out of trouble.
First, being out at night for to late can be dangeruos. Second, teenagers can have more time to spend it with they are family and friends. Finally, so they can be more responsible. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E9FC757ED1E3 | Do you think is it a good idea for students to start a career at a young age under 18 or not,student should make their own choice. In some societies, student are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school.
First having a career in a young age,start work (having a job) and living by yourself. its like middle school and high school switch around youre pranging to live your life as adult instead living your life as teenage. At that age no one knows how to spend money or mange too. money is like water you have then spend it, all gone.
Then the other choice not having a career in a young age,living their life to the fullness plus spending time with family and friends. you dont have to worry so much about paying bills and other things. Your family will support you no matter what happen,you could go out with friend. At this point you could spend more time on studying mostly importation on yourself.
Be honest i dont think is a good idea,It take time to grow up to be young ADULT!!! Yeah sure everyone make mistaken but learn by it even if youre old,young it doesnt matter. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
EA03135D3C88 | Student-designed
Wouldn`t it be exciting for a student to create a summer projects for their fellow students to do during summer break? Summer break is a time for students to have fun with their families and friends. It a time to travel to so many places like Generic_City, Florida, California, and so forth. Furthermore, it`s great for students to complete summer projects during their break so their brains and memories can still be refreshed and for them not to forget most of the school materials they have learned before summer break. Moreover, requiring students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break is a brilliant idea. But these summer projects should be student-designed because the projects will be exciting, students will be more engaged with the projects, and the student-designed projects will definitely be less harder.
The first reason the summer projects should be a student-designed is because the projects will be exciting and enjoyable for other students. For example, when a students designs a Kahoot for their fellow students to use to study for their test and quizzes, it will be exciting just because the students will get to choose any names they wish. So, a Kahoot is a game that teachers use to create a test or quizzes for students to study to get them prepared for their test and quizzes. The Kahoot can be used inside and outside of the school premises. The student designing the kahoot will get to choose how many seconds or minutes it should take the students to answer their questions. Also, most teachers don`t give students enough time for them to choose their answers and that is unfair. Students needs more time at least 20 to 30 seconds to think about the questions before answering and not rush to choose any answer just because the teacher didn`t give them enough time. Students complain about how much time teachers give them because they need more time to work on their projects. For instance, teachers design boring projects like making a word puzzel about math. That is so boring because no students wants to spend their time making a word puzzle about math instead of doing other fun things like reading, going to the movie theater, going on vacation, and spending time with their families and friends. Most of the students don`t find math interesting beccause they don`t like doing math.
Another reason is that students will be more engaged with the projects. For instance, a student designed a project about each students choosing their own topic argumentative essay like increasing the minimum wage, the college tuition, and discrimination. After that, the student will design another projects about presentations. The presentation will teach them how to present to their fellow students and also how to present in future times like jobs. The presentation will also help them master the skills of presenting. When a student designs the projects, the student will give the students extra time to work on it because teachers will give students less time on their project and expect the students to be prepared when they are not. Furthermore, the students will decide if they need to present to teachers because most students are nervous to do that. And also they have not mastered the skill of presenting yet. The students will also decide how many words will be in each slides, how many slides they need, and how many minutes they need to present. Most of the times, teachers give students less time to present. Due to the less time, students won`t be able to finish what they have in mind or what they have to say and they will have to be rushed to finish before time is over. And if the students didn`t reach the time given or went over the time given, points will be deducted. But when the students chooses how they want their presentations to be, they are more likely to work on it more than when a teacher tells them how to do their own presentations.
The third reason is because the student-designed project will be less harder for students to do. For example, there was a project my history teacher assigned us to do, it was a project about the Progressive Era to make sure that we understand what it was all about. We had to come up with a creative title and 3 categories for the project. It was hard for us to do because we had to come up with a creative title that connects with the topic and 3 categories that 20 sub-heading can fit on one of them. If it was a student designed the project, it would be less harder because either the title is given to us, or we don`t have to create one. And also the 3 categories will be given to use to make it a little more easier. Then all we have to do is put the 20 sub-heading in their right categories and also insert some images where it suppose to be. Another example was when my AVID teacher gave a project about researching the college of our choice. It`s great that we had to choose the college of our choice, but the questions and the rubric was unclear. They were almost the same question and it was difficult for us to answer it because we couldn`t give the same answer to all the questions. Even though some people say that teacher-designed will be so much better because students will tend to take it seriously than a student-designed; however, student-designed is better because its made by a student and it will less stressful, while teacher-designed will be a lot harder and frustrating to do.
In conclusion, student-designed is better because its more fun, engaging, and easier to do than teacher-designed. Students need more time towork on their projects while spending time with families and friends. It`s great to have fun while learning and not stress out over a project during summer break. Schools need to give students an opportunities for them to design a projects for their follow students, and to show their skills and talents. | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 |
EA04020F5ECD | when people ask you for advice they sometimes talk to more people than one they ask they ask for a good advice becuase if they will not have good advice they can't think about a good decision somtimes a person who have trouble in her or his life or any depression our any happiness in thier life they can't make control thier a control on them. so they get pannic sometimes they can't think what to do they don't know how to do things so that's why they from many people but when they seeks multiple opinions so they get confiused they can't select one opinion that is good for them they want to think about that but they can't do that so they ask many people for different opinions so that's good but also not good tho but so they need to figure that what they should do or what not what i think is it's ok to ask people thier opinions but we should also need to think use our mind whithout our mind we can not do any thing the opinions that are given by other people we should think about them like what are they saying what's the point is it good for us or not or if i will follow this opinion it will make trouble for me or not then u will ask your friend or a person that is so close to you if that person will say yes you will be like ok than . lets do it!
so you do a whole long procisior for getting a one good opinion what you need to do is that ask opinions from two or three people and then if u think it's not a good opinion than think your own and then take a good decission. everyone takes thier own decission i think if you wanna ask for a opinion find a good trustful adult who really really wants to help you who will give you a better choice and then think about it if you think that she or he is right then just follow the directions for example i have a birthday party and i need to select the dresses for everyone and arrange the birthday party and i don't have enough time i am so worried and confiused i don't known what to do .
i need a help from people i asked from my friends, cousins ,family, teachers and then i think that i have a lot of opinions so i can't choose
1 so what i did was i asked my older cousine and then we discused about that she told me in details what to do and then i managed my time and i choosed the dresses i arranged the birthday party in one week everything was so good that's how we make better chioce for our self if u can't do that at least think on your own or ask for help and ask from a good person not anyone you don't know well becuase people can play with you so we have to be carefull so i think asking an adult is more better than asking a lot of people becuase asking an adult will help you more becuase the first time i need help and i asked a lot of people and i was so confiused and i was like what is going on with me because it was my first excperience i didn't use my mind it was so bad waste of time every thing was ruined and that's why i learned something is never do anything that your parents or adult don't like here is another way to make a better choice and that is always listen to your parents and your adult because sometimes the decisions that you are making it seems like they are good but after some time you realize that it's not good for you u get in trouble and all you have face somethings so thats why do what your parents are telling you to do not what you wants to do it's ok to listen to your heart but sometimes it's not so the best way to make a better choice is listen your parents and adult
2nd is use your mind to think that it's good or bad the 3rd way is to ask someone who is an adult and such a nice and truthfull person believe in your self and your god these are the best ways to make a better choice we should always believe in your self and your parents because they will always tell you a thing that is good for you no matter what it is just think that yuor parents tell you to do that and again believe in yourself if you will everything will be good if you be feel good believe in your god becuase he will help you everywhere he is with you so these are the best way to make a good choices are these.. | 1.5 | 1.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 |
EA105A8B8699 | I agree because in life you can achieve many goals and pass through so many good things like me i always think positive thats why so many good things happen to me also never disagree because in life you never know what could actually really happen maybe something bad that you have no clue about . Life is great if you keep a positive attitude for example give people advice on somethig good maybe one day they will do the same for you be greatfull with what you have or get beacsue soem people dont have what you have and they really want . Thats why i always have a postive attitude beacuse when i make good discissions i get what i want.
Here are some examples of why you shoud agree for example you get a job a costumer comes by needs help you give them a positive attitude they will give you a positive attitude to help eachother out give them respect talk to them nicely you never know something good could happen second of all what could happen if you give them a bad attitude they will give you the same attitude to. Look at the bright side what happens when you them a positive attitude and they give you a bad attitude you keep the same attitude no matter what they will see and think to their head wow he or she has a nice attitude while the perrson is giving them and ungreatfull attitude.
Always be the bigger person with great attitude even if the person is having a bad day probably try to give them a positive attitude and probably you might cheer them up its always good to make people feel good about themselves afterwards you will feel good because you helped them out . Its never a bad thing to have a positive attitude because good things will come to you . | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
EA1B7D05FE81 | The most enjoyable way to spend time outdoors is to hanging out with friends,spend time with family, and do fun activities or games outdoors. These are a few things to do in a sunny day outdoors.
Hanging out with friends can be fun if you make it fun, you could take bikes rides together, talk about problem or achievements you've accomplished, play games or just walk around. There are plenty of different things you can do in these parks, it's just up to you what you decide to do.
Other way to enjoy these amazing parks is by visiting it with you're families. Talking about how there day went can bring you guys more closer and make them feel a bit better, going to eat or bring food at the picnic tables can be fun aswell, maybe know more about what they been doing or what they are planing to do over the weekends, these are a few of things you can do outdoors instead of being indoors.
The last and final thing and most important in my opinion is to have some time by yourself, there's no better way to relax and enjoy the out doors is by yourself, you don't got to worried about anything just walk around take in a deep breathe of nature's air, see different things the you might not seen before only on TV, and meet new people with the same interest as you or just have some me time.
These are a few of activities you can do outside with friends, family, or by yourself to enjoy the good outdoors and the weather. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
EA37D9C12C91 | life is to much fun and joy and happines we just need to know how to organize it to make it easer, so we can be better as we can.
I do agree with Emirson's statement because before we do something we have to finish what we have in our hand, so we can go to next step, like we can't go to next flore without going into stairs.
to be better person as you can you have to be orzanize your stuff, so you can make it perfect because you have enough time to do what you got in your hand and before you start your day you should know what to do before you go out from bed.
without organize you will see everything hard and impossible to finish, like in school when you have all work from all other classes and you see them all facing your eyes, you will do not doing any homework.
To make life easer with happines you better organize it and make your life better as you can, or you will never grow up. | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
EA40087521CC | Failure is a dreaded thing in our daily life what we try to avoid. A lot of people trying to not get in any situation where they can fail, and just a lesser layer of the people want to face with them. Those people find it as a learning process and they a make great outcomes from they life.
Fear controlls every aspect of our life. How do we looks like? Did we made the right decission? In most cases we fear about failure because we are not sure about the success or a positive outcome of the situation and the consequences of our actions. This idea divide peoples minds to two sides, two ideology: shy, safety player and brave, risk taker. Both sides have pros and cons.
Those who chose the safety game, are using they background knowledge what they learned for long years and made it highly sure to not fail it. The word shy is not the best representation for them just in that case when something new and unknown came in to learn. They don't take the risk to fail it and they obviously will not fail because they will not even try. That can be any situation like answer the question in class; try out a sport; go to the gym; wear a new cloth; ect. The only thing what is make a gate between them and to try it is the fear. They don't take the risk and they will never know the outcome. If it's a fail then they take it as a lose. Maybe the only thing what is a benefit in their thinking they will really not going to lose anything but then the successes will come lesser. Also that doesn't mean they are not risk takers or they live in constant fear, it's just more safer. The cases where they are need to take steps can be not that scarry or it's doesn't need to be a big deal. These type of people are already made mistakes and the reason why then fear to try it again the previous experiences. Said something dumb in class and everyone laughted; tried a sport be he/she was not succes at all; in the gym he/she felt unconfortable because he/she was not that strong like the people around them, ect.
On the other side those people who trying out new thigs and got experience are usually the ones who make something in their lives what will stand for them after time. Great example for this is the former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill itself. His life shows the importance of trying. If we just think about how he becamed a Prime Minister of the United Kingdom, it's easy to realize it was not always easy for him. Biography of his life tells us how many times he tried and failed but even through he gained success. People like Churchill are thinkers and they take the failures as a lessons of the life. For them is a learning process of making an idea perfect; make an action successful; decide a the right way; answer a question rightfully. If a fail cames up after a wrong move they face with it and they are most importantly proud of it. Not proud about what they failed, about the correction, the knowledge what they gained and driving them to avoid the same and similar fails. Yes they can make the same mistake again but at the end they will be the winners. And this is the point where the enthusiasm came in.
People are trying to reach their goals and enthusiasm drives them. Winston Churchill won the World War II because his goal was to not fail his people, the mankind, and everything what he built. Enthusiasm can have different faces like duty as a president, joy like an istrument player, or to bring happyness like a parent. To keep the enthusiasm is depending on the person. The goal what is requires it can be lesser, greater, midling, makes no difference. The person who keeping it is matters, not the size of the goal because anyone can be a president if he/she really wants it but cannot go to the gym a few times a week if he/she is lazy and don't have enough willingness in their heart. That is a close connection with our life goals. Doesn't matters if it's short or long tearm goals. That enthusiasm can broke after fails or can be even stronger than before.
My example is with the martial art also an example for this. I learned how to dual wield the nunchaku and the learning process was painfull. I'm right handed and to learn, just to spin it, with my left hand hurted me. I was hitting my forearm thousand times. My skin was red after an hour of practice. People asked me why do I still trying and why do I don't stay down. The reason why I didn't stoped was my enthusiasm in my goal to master the nunchaku. After months of practice I did it successfully and in these days I'm not a master yet but at least I cannot hit myself.
A lot of people who going to failure to failure are also taking a risk to fail to the point where they can't try it again. That means a fail where a people can die. These are specific cases but not just death can stop us. Also there are situations where a person just become unable to do thing what he/she did before. And yes there also situations after tragedies where we can stand up stronger than before. There was a boy who loved to ride his bicycle and do tricks with it. One day he had an accident with it in a car crash and he lost his leg. He was in wheelchair for months but doctors offered him a chance to make him a plastic leg. He spent a lot of time in recovery and when he was able to move by himself he wanted to return to his dream. For a lot of time he failed to do anything with his bike. He was angry and broken. But he didn't gave up. After failing again and again he finally on his bike again. In these day he riding like before the accident because he never give up. His strory is inspire me.
I agree with Winston Churchill. We need to fail to learn and enyoj what we reach. We need to try and train not till we can get it right, till we can't get it wrong. And we need a goal to be enthusiastic and to never lose it, to make it stronger after every fail. We can stay in our comfort zones and try to avoid the fails or we can face with them and get experience. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
EA42A6028804 | People argue whether or not its a good idea for students to study or identify a carrier of their choice when entering high school. I agree that students should commit to a career of choice when entering high school because they'll be ahead in life than many other students who dont get the opportunity to chose a career they want to learn in high school and studying their choice of career at a younger age would have them college ready.
Learning a specific carrier at the time when entering high school is very beneficial to students because it would have students who do chose to learn a carrier would have them very much ahead of students who their high school's dont even offer the opportunitie to learn a carrier during their years of high school. Learning and mastering a career of choice is something that students should take for granted because once mastered it can lead u to many opportunities while your in high school or have graduated. These opportunities can lead you to Paid internship programs, college scholarships, and even a Job right after high school.
Students who get to study a career of choice during their high school career would prepare them for college. Having students identify a career during there high school years would give them a better feel to go to college right after high school. Your resume would look much more achievable when colleges see you have earned a certificate for mastering a career you choose to learn during your time in high school. Learning something you want to do in the future would prepare you for college because it would almost be the same as attending a college, but without all the nice technology or lab equipment colleges or universities have.
Others would disagree when i say that students should identify a career of choice when entering high school and I understand why. While some parents would want there child to study a career earlier in life, other would recommend that they shouldnt be pressured in to choosing some sort of career when entering high school because it can be really stressful for the students to already having to chose a career to pick right after middle school and other parents want there kid to enjoy life as teenager and then worry about that later. The first reason I understand, but picking a career of choice is super beneficial to that student because studying it and then getting a certificate to when passed the class will lead you to many opportunities during your years in high school and would put you ahead of many others.
This is why I believe students should identify a career when entering high school. It puts them ahead of the game and prepares them for college and the future. I also believe that we should have every high school in the United States offer some sort of options of careers that students can take during there high school career and that the schools can teach in all high schools around America. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
EA4AED3BFE34 | Some schools permit their students use cellphones in classroom for educational purposes. There is so many good and bad effects allowing students use their phone for educational puroposes .They can be more bad reasons than good reason beause we have to think how really they are going to use their cellphones, and if it's for educational purpose.
I think allow their cellphones to students is not a good idea because we know that we are young people, and we are not going to use our phone just for educational purposes; we are going to use :our apps , social media ,and that is going to distract our attention in class, makes us faild or test because weare not using our resource for good reason; we know there are students without resposabilities and that's what make cellphones a bad opction.
Some people may think that use our phone in classes can be a good idea because we are going to have more access to technology at school, and more easy research for our classwork. Also people think that we are going to have more privacity for our work. Students said that they can be resposinble at the moment to use their chellphones just for educational purposes.
Allowing cellphones for students can have good and bad effects , it can have good effects because is a easy option for students having their phone for: research information resources, have easy acess to internet ,see videos educationals abut the subject, and find deep information about the subject. The bad effect for students can be :they are going to get distracting , they are not going to do their classwork,and for all that reasons they can lose their classes.
My first reason is cellphones in class are not good tools for students ,because cellphones distract and make students lose their attention to class.
My second reason is cellphones is not a thing that we need for learn because our parents, teachers ,family in their time was no cellphone ,and they learn by other resources like books ,so is not a thing that we really need. there are computers we can use them for when we really needed .
My third reason is that cellphone is not necessary for our educational purpose because we can have better resources than a cellphone ; we have the most beautiful thing in this world and that are books our better resource.
Some schools allow their students to use their cellphone to a educational purpose they think that is a good idea to have cellphones in their classroom but in my opinion is a distracting thing ,and is not necessary for our educational purpose ; we have good tools for example one are the books and internet but not using our cellphones at class because we know that we are not goin to use for educational purpose, and cellphone are going to distract us. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
EA5B3C8E09D1 | I agree with this statement because, positivity is the key to success, if your always being negative and saying negative stuff it will be hard for you to find success. My dad once told me that whatever you do in life and even if you fail you should always tackle it with a postive attitude no matter what. Having a positive attitude has great benefits when it comes to work place,your personal business and even life in general, being rude or disrespectful to people won't pay, there is a saying that says what goes around comes around, so if you treat people with a negative attitude, in the near future somebody will treat you the same way. Attitude is very important in life, attitude determines if your going to be a better person in life or a bad person, attitude determines how well you are in treating people with respect. A good attitude goes a long way, even if you don't have enough money or you struggle to pay your bills having a good attitude and being postive will land you into a good job and also by meeting great people. Having a bad attitude can even ruin things that you know how to do well, if your suppose to be doing something and you do it with a bad attitude it won't turn out good, you will always end up doing something wrong because of your attitude. At the end of the day attitude counts, treating people with respect is very important and it will take you places you have never thought about. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
EA857E7CEFD9 | I disagree with my school adding one and a half more hours for these reasons there is no time for after school activities, going to have to give the teachers more, and your going to have to face a lot of students sleeping in class because lets admit it school is kind of boring.
One reason the school board shouldnt add one and a half more hours is because there will be no time for after school activities. For example if Generic_Name has soccer practice anymore. Another example is if Generic_Name hosts computer club she cant host it because there is no time for hosting her club. Another example is if they and one hour and a half then there would be no time to have fun at school.
The second reason the school board should not add one hour and a half is because your going to have to give the teachers more money for the extra hours. An example is that if there child is sick and they need to pick them up but they cant because they are teaching. Another example is if Generic_Name is the boss of the school board and the extra one hour and a half she is going to have to do extra work so she make sure that everyone gets there pay check. Another example is teachers are going to have to make sure they have enough work for the extra time and plus they have to grade all of the work the students do. The last example is that the bell schedule will be different and the people who work are going to do a lot of work to schedule lunch and everything.
Another reason i disagree with my school adding one hour and a half more time is that the teachers are going to have to face a lot of tied and sleeping students. Another example is if half of the students are sleeping and tiered there is no point of teaching them because they are likely not going to do work or forget everything they learned that day. Another example is that the teachers will be angry from all the students with their heads down because they are tiered. Another example is that students and teachers have family and places to be. Another reason there shouldnt be one hour and a half is that everyone has their schedules like for example shower,homework,eat,sleep and they wont have time to do all of their schedule
This is why i disagree with my school adding one and a half more hours for these reasons there is no time for after school activities, going to have to give the teachers more, and your going to have to face a lot of students sleeping in class because lets admit it school is kind of boring. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
EA8BE9778AA9 | On a human, the brain is the strongest part of their body. It control your body. Also, world's one of the biggest thing from a human brain is imagination. More than 100 years ago, people used their mind to build machines, planes, rockets, television , bridges, etc. Most of the things were build my their own imagination. Our world's one of the brilliant scientist of all time Albert Einstein said, "Imagination is more important than knowledge." I think that imagination is more important than knowledge in a lot of ways.
"Imagination"
is the power of mind to make something creative. Sometimes when you imagine something that you know you will do it no matter who stops you, It may come to real life and change the whole world. It can change a lot of thing in the world that you didn't thought of. For example: think that you designed a machine from your imagination about a robot maid who can help you to clean your house , do your laundry, make you dinner, washing the dishes, etc. From your idea, you made the robot and It worked just the you wanted it to work. And then your robot went to the market and the people brought it and loved the machine. How would you feel when you see your robot went viral in the world and people liking it? Your robot machine went from an a imaging thing to a big successful robot machine.
Also It helps your mind get stronger. When you thinking about anything, your brain is running from one place to another place to get the next task. In a human brain, we do 5% conscious and 95% unconscious things everyday. You are learning something new everyday, your brain collecting data based what you do in a everyday life basis. When you imaging something, your brain brings back the data from your past and puts it in your imagination. In that way,you know what you should in your imaginary work. Also, In that way your brain are becoming more conscious by your little thinking process and it's making your brain stronger everyday.
Imaginary can make you an open minded person. If you are good at imaging, when you are gonna talk to other people and they tries to explain you their situation, First, you will imagine yourself into that situation. Second, you will understand what they have been went through. Then you will think what should I do to make that person feel better. Next, you will give them some helpful advises that will make them better. If they feel safe around you, they will be more comfortable to tell more about them in future.
In conclusion, I think imagination is better than knowledge. It makes you a good person, It makes you open minded, It helps your brain to get stronger. And that way you will be able to help others' | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
EA970C38817C | Do you think people accomplish more if they are always doing something or do you think inactivity serve as a purpose?
Thomas Jefferson wrote,"Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."Many people think that they accomplish more if they are always doing something. When people are always doing something,they are always learning new things and gaining experiences. Some people think that the more they do ,the more they achieve because being idle will not lead you to success and nobody is going to come and accomplish things for you. Therefore much may be done if people are always doing something
Certainly some people think that inactivity serve as a purpose because people can be physically inactive but mentally active and they might be creating wonderful things in their minds. Still others think that being inactive does not mean that they are being idle because they already achieved their dreams and they are satisfied with what they have so that is why they see inactivity as a purpose. Others might think that not everyone have the opportunities to being always doing something and they do not have more option that being inactive.
However, people accomplish more if they are always doing something because they learn new things in the process of doing something. They learn more about themselves and about others. They learn how to interact and connect with others and how to fit in different environments. People who are always doing something gain more and new experiences that will help them later in life also gaining experiences and being in different types of environments surrounded by different kind of people will help them improve their mental maturity and also help them to to have a different perspective of see world and life. In other words people who are always doing something accomplish more,and learn more how to interact with others and gain new experiences.
Furthermore,people accomplish more if they are always doing something because the more you do the more you achieve. If people do not work and make an effort for the things they want to accomplish nobody is going to do it for them because each person is the author of their own success .Some people might be waiting that the things they want fall from the sky ,or appear magically in their hands making no effort to accomplish them and idles will not lead you to success .People who are successful today is because they were always working hard and making their best effort to accomplish their goals,they know what they wanted and they were persistent and did not give up on their goals. If people want to be successful in life they have to know that failure is part of achieving success and just have to keep trying and do not give up until they achieve their goals. Therefore people's success is based on the effort they put to achieve it because the more they do the more they achieve.
In fact, people accomplish more if they are always doing something because they are spending their time in things that really worth it .If people are going to spend time of their life that will never get back they better spend that time doing something that worth it and doing something that is going bring positive ,and good things to their life. Many people spend a lot of time or even their whole life doing things that never brought something positive or good to their life and that is maybe because they never found their passion in life and doing something you are not passionate about it is just a waste of time. Therefore people should spend time following their dreams and doing what they truly love because when they are doing what they are truly passionate about, they will see that every effort they did to accomplish their goal worth the time they spent and the effort they put .As a result when people spend their time always doing something they accomplish more.
In conclusion,people should determine never to be idle and never to conform with what they have. Always work hard and aspire for bigger things ,always try to be successful and do everything and anything to accomplish their dreams, and goals and do not let anyone to tell you that you can not do something because if you believe in yourself you are capable to do everything you want .People should always spend their time in things that worth it, in things that will bring good and positive things to their life .People should be always doing something and that is how they will see what wonderful things can be done by doing always something because the more people do the more they achieve and people who are always doing something are the people who accomplish the more. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
EAB299C6ECED | First Impressions are almost impossible to change this is true but they can also slightly change a little bit over time. I personally agree that is almost impossible to change an impression about someone so lets say that I agree and disagree because the statement is right but not everyone is the same, your thoughts and the way you think are different from everyone else, so the way you feel about a person could change over time. The first impression of a person about you could change over time just like your first impression about someone you've never met before could change as time passes and yall get know each other and hang out, go out to eat just like in a relationship, when the girl meets the guy and he looks so handsome, respectful, polite, nice, generous, very responsible from her point of view, when his at school, work, even when his home or even to the point of calling him sexy even if he is the skinniest guy ever you would tell him "Wow baby, you're so sexy", even if his not you would say it because you wouldn't want him to feel bad or anything to ruin that bond but when you guys start talking even more, start to hangout more often that bond will start to grow stronger in confidence and trust so when that time hits, It gives us a whole 360 degree spin now you start to be more open with your partner and you actually start saying the real things, Im not saying you have to lie but people in specific try to cover their lies with other lies and some times it dont even work or it don't add up at all but what Im saying is that when that right time actually hits you start being more open and you're not afraid and for the same the reason, you guys develop your ways up and work it out to the point of building a really strong trust, that confidence in you guy's eyes, that key to your heart and let everything be free.
It will take a while for you to see the prove but probably not to long but the results will come at one point and don't doubt it. however, with your first impressions you will represent yourself to the people or the way you act or the way you act in the beginning it will make them know if your child dish, immature, or the opposite.
If you put that respect and honesty in the beginning people will treat you with respect but if you like to mess with people yell at them without respect don't expect something else because it will come back to you and there's this verse in the Bible that I like that says " what you plant, thats what will grow" I don't think i wordily got it right how i said so what its meaning is if you're a lair don't be mad or don't ask God why is he doing this to you because that's what you planted in the beginning. When you meet a person what are the first impressions you get of that person on how they look, act and talk. When I first came in Generic_Name class and actually met her, my first impression was she's very nice, knows how to properly talk to students and as time pass I got my points proved right. Sometimes it is almost impossible for first impressions to change but its never to late it could come to the time it does. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
EAB3924FD98F | Students should take four years of high school, instead of three years, because students can have more time to learn, students can have electives, students can enjoy their summer vacations and their evenings, and finally students have more time to do stuff.
Althought some schools think that is better to offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years, actually students should take four years of high school. First students can have more time to learn. For example, in a year students can learn much stuff, and they have energy to learn, in the summer students just have two months to study, so they don't have much time to learn all the stuff they learn at school, in evenings students have three months to study, the classes start a 5pm and end at 7pm, so at that time students are tired and the don't have much energy, so it's difficult to concentrated and learn all the stuff. Second students can have electives, students can have classes like gym, art, and music students can discover new talents in that classes, also students relax their minds in that classes and enjoy the school. Third students can enjoy their summer vacations, students get tired for study ten months, is good that they can relax and pass time with their family and friends, so their mind is clear, and when they start study they have good attitude, energy and they want to learn new stuff. Finally students can have more time to do stuffs, because they can go home and do their homeworks, study for exams, pass time with their family, and have good sleep hours, they don't have to worry about go to school in evenings, they can relax.
Students should take four years of high school, so they have more time to learn, they can have electives and learn new things, they don't have to study on the summer and they can enjoy their vacation and evenings with family and friends, and finally they can have more time to do sttufs. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
EAB74EEE65B3 | Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others.
Everyday after school my brother and I go to the library to do our homework, when we get there I don't have any contact with him nor him with me. Nowadays, when I go to the library I can see many people sitting there, staring at the screen of a computer without having contact with the other person that it is near them. Having access to technology has positive effects but it also have negative effects. The limitation use of technology has negative effects on people's lives because it keeps us away from the ones that are near us, it can damage our way of living, and also it can make us to become addicted to it.
While we are in touch with technology, we are keeping away our self from the ones that are near us. For example, I have this friend we have always eat lunch together none of us have a cellphone, but one day my friend came to school with a cellphone that her mom bought for her. We were eating lunch, I was talking to her, but she was not listening to me because she was more into her cellphone than me. Technology can allow us to have contact with the ones that are far away from us, but we need to manage our time we can talk to them when we are alone and not when we are near a person that we can talk to. Having any type of technology near us while we are with somebody else it is not a good idea. Therefore, one day I decided to let my friend being herself with her cellphone, and I stop eating lunch with her. Technology send me away from her even though maybe she did not want that to happened. From that day I learned that if I want to keep the person that it is always near me, I just need to give them more attention instead of giving all my attention to a cellphone.
To continue, technology can damage our way of living, it can effect us in a way that we have not even think about it. For instance, when I turned seventeen years old my parents bought me a cellphone, from then I was too lazy to do my homework and refuse to talk to them because I have a cellphone and I can be in contact with the ones that are not near me. Access to technology made me lazy and careless about school. One day my parents decided to took my cellphone for a week I was really mad at them that I stop eating and then I got sick. Meanwhile, technology can help people with their tasks, but it can also make people careless about important things that can be useful for their future.
Some say that the use of technology have a great positive effect in our life, but I disagree with it because the use of technology it just stop us from being active with others and become careless about things that we were interesting in. For example, I was really interested on taking dancing lessons, so I decided that I can just watch dancing videos in my computer and it will be the same, but actually I did not watch the dancing lesson videos, I ended up watching something else that it does not have anything to do with dancing lessons. While some people think that technology have positive effects, I don't think the same. With the use of technology everyday we become addicted to it. Therefore I think technology does not have positive effect on people's life it might have some positives effects but there are more negative effects than positives.
In conclusion, Technology allows people to complete many tasks and can help us to connect with others around the world but are we really giving some time to the ones that are near us? I don't think so. Let's be positive don't let technology take away the people near us. Let's think smart we can do better in our life without being sitting there for an hour or more staring to a computer, cellphone or another electronic device when we can be enjoying the people that it is always there for us, near to us, and giving their time to us. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
EACD6F08F69C | Growing up, I was never into traveling. I never had a dream to go visit some popular place everyone went to. But as time went by, I had this sudden urge to go to Generic_City. The beauty of this place makes me love it. Visiting Generic_City, at least once in my life, in one of the biggest dreams I've ever had, and hopefully, it comes true. This city has been loved by almost everyone, and a lot of people talk about the beauty it has.
Generic_City is one of the most intriguing places in the world, and that is another reason I would love to go there. I would love to visit this place because of its friendly people, its cheerful environment, and its delicious food. Generic_City has been one of the most popular places that people visit and enjoy their time in. If I ever have the chance to go to Generic_City, I would love to see the Generic_City in real life, because it's the site nobody wants to miss when they visit this city. Even looking at its pictures makes people get lost in their thoughts because of the marvelous view.
Once I arrive, I would love to visit some family members I have in that place, and have fun with them. I have known a lot people who have visited Generic_City and told me about their experiences. I was always so interested in their experiences because even though it makes me sad, I get to know about the different places they have visited and their reaction. I would say visiting Generic_City, is a once in a lifetime opportunity and people should definitely go there.
I know that everyone has a different point of view, but to me, Generic_City is a wonderful place and it's my dream to visit that beautiful city.
Many people think the opposite of what I think, they may say that there are better places than Generic_City, and I agree, everyone has a right to share their opinion. Visiting Generic_City is just a dream that I want to fulfill one day and I encourage other people to do so too. No matter what dream you have, you can make it come true, if you try. After all, a dream is a dream, no matter how big. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 4.5 |
EAD2625A1711 | In some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. Their courses of study In high school are selected to guide them toward a specific career. Many young students do not have the capacity of choosing a career at that time of age. I believe, that kinds mentality about their career will change through out high school. Student should not be required to choose a career by the time they enter to high school, because they are inexperienced to know what they want, students could choose the wrong career, and unhappy of wasting their time on a career they are going to change their mind on.
Inexperienced of not knowing what they want,students could make the take wrong choices about their future career. When students enter to high school they are normally around fourteen years old, young students of that age are normally not worry about their future career yet. Students mentality starts changing abut their career when they are having more knowledge about what they really what to be. When kids are around sixteen is when are maturing about their future and looking at things differently. students do not have the capacity of choosing their whole future career at the young of age.
When students are force to choose a career when they first enter to high school, they could choose the wrong career. Most students know that choosing the wrong career could affect the later on in the future. Lets say that they choose a career when they enter to high school, but they are unhappy. They are going to be stuck their whole life time with something that does not makes them happy. When people work with things they like or enjoy they attempt to work harder and better.
Most people change their mind almost everyday about something they like or do not like, well it is the same with choosing a career. Wasting time is something no one likes to do, and specially when is about their future. Making kids choose their career at a young age could mess them up and they would have to do things all over again. When choosing the wrong career, accepting the consequences and restart over again with a new career of their choice. Making good research,planing things out first with a good process will help with their future career.
Most students are not prepare to pick their future career during high school. Most students have no knowledge of what they want to be later in life. Some students could make the wrong choice of picking a career they do not want. Changing their mind in a career could also make them unhappy of have wasted their time with something they was not interested in. Students should have enough experience and good knowledge of what their future career before they choose what they want to be. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
EAE70CCAFC13 | As a teens, do you think the failure can affect your life in the future? The issue of the failure consists to going from the failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. It is a good idea to have a failure.
The failure can make you better in the future. Alhough,the failure can improve a better ways in life. Becuase,when someone do something that they think are bad they can to make better next time, they want to have a better opportunities in their life's,maybe in their future can have better job .In conclusion, the failure can make a diferrent person to continue with their life and also their dreams. .
The failure can help to be a geat person. Although, the failure can make a different in your life. For example, if you have a failure you don't to do again, a failure can help to be a better person in the future. In conclusion, the failure can help in better ways if they think in opposite becuse sometime we do thing incorrect that if i have a role of failure can give a lesson to do thing in the better.
while some people believe that it is a good idea to have a failure. Other argue that,it is a bad idea to have a failure. Beacuse, all person have worries about failure, if they have a failure they want to be in thir house sad. Although this migh be valid, there are several importan idea to be considered, such as,they can learn about the failure. Although, they don't want to make the same error the same time. For example, if you have a failure you don't want to happend again you want to make better,also they don't want the same problems can afecct in the future. In conclusion,the want to learn about what the happened,they don't the same problems cuase toubles in their future.
The failure can give a lesson to be better in the future. Also,the failure can make people to improve to be a good person. I Think the failure can make people in good ways and also in bad too because when the people have a problems they don't want to learn they maybe want stay in the same position,in good ways can be you can examplain others to do thing better. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
EAE71A9E0247 | i think working 10 hours a day is way better then working 8 hours a day you can save alot of energy and electrricity and your time in a day. in 4 days working 10 hours a days is like 40 hours a week. still if you want to do overtime you can still do overtime on friday and saturdays.
working 10 am to 10 pm is better then working 8am to 4 pm. i think my school should change the school hours and save some time. they should extrend the school hours to 2 hours so that the kids can get enough sleep when they go home and they can do there work at the jobs too. if my school extends the school hours to 2 more hours then kids can get off for 3 days from school. that's how schools can save alot of energy water etc. teachers can get 3 days a week off too if my school extedns 2 more hours and make it to 10 hours. there should be just 4 days school in a week. some people have hard time to wake up early in morning so they can do there homework. when students get enough sleep they can focus more in there studies and they get more time during weekends too do there homewoks. that's how students can achieve there goals in high school when they get enough sleep they can stay more fresh and active during school hours. in high schools most of the students have hard time during the whole school year just because they do not get enough time to do there homeworks during the weekends most of the students work 32 to 38 hours a day so they do not get enough time to do there homeworks on saturday and sundays. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
EAEE04B1F712 | Scientist Albert Einstein once said, " Imagination is more important than knowledge." I agree, why do I agree with scientist Albert Einstein. When you use your imagination,
you can create it in your mind first, you can invent it, you can make the world a better place with it.
First, when you use imagination you create it in your mind, you can go to your happy place and just build it you see how it's. Your brain helps you imagine it right, for example in the game called Fortnite, you imagine what you want to build before you build it and how it's going to look like. In knowledge you just know it you can't make it more beautiful. When you use imagination you can see the problems that might happen when you are trying to build something in your mind. That's why imagination is more important than knowledge.
Furthermore, imagination can help you invent stuff like flying cars. I can use my imagination and and think about what can i do to build a flying car and boom! now you know how you can build it. You need imagination more than knowledge. I am not going to say you can't build flying cars with knowledge but, with imagination you can make it better. Imagination is literary a image in your mind, its like you drawing the things you want to invent on a piece of paper, and just adding some colors to it. In knowledge it's like you knowing the answer to a math question or just about any question.
Finally, imagination makes the world a better place, how does imagination make the world a better place. Well it has a lot of reasons but the best reason is, it makes people happy if people are happy then there is no violence in the world. If we don't use our imagination there would be no light bulbs or nothing. If you dreamed about something, with your imagination you can accomplish that dream and make your life better, and maybe that dream was you becoming a teacher than you're making your life better and the world a better place.
To conclude, scientist Albert Einstein said, "imagination is more important than knowledge ." and here is why with imagination you can create in your mind first, you can invent it, you can make the world a better place with it. If you can imagine something than you do it if you imagined it right. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
EB03C897F7E8 | Student and teachers are have opposing views on working together for various reasons. However, according to new Stanford research, when people are treated as partners working together their motivation, student are able to communicate with each other, therefore creating a better final product. Working in team also prepares students for future careers and job. Whoever they will be required to learn to cope with other people and personalities, it is valued by employers. Even though students are not agree with each other all the time, working together is ore beneficial than working alone.
Every body ha heard someone in their life say " two minds are better than one" before right, this quote has never range more, and all of the idea it promotes reflect crystal clear off of group work. Working in a group can be drastically reduce the amount of work you need to do as well as make thing of more efferent, whether it be a group project paperer presentation. Because it cuts down on how much work one person has to do. It allows for group to achieve more as alone. Things are also finished much quicker because of the way many people can split up different jobs in a group an people with different skill sets can do what they are best at and do not have to worry about what they are bad at, this broader range of skill can also be used to help other people members develop their own by learning from their team members. The diversity found within a group of people is one of most powerful resources a person can have when it comes to finishing a task.
it lends a group of people to have many more ideas to come up with and bounce off of because many people are working
"The best way to have good idea is to have a lot of the a quote from Linus Pauting dealing with dilemma new idea's. When dealing with abdicating an idea from thin air, it be best to have multiple people instant of one because it brings multiple ideas all have fair and different point rather than multiple ideas no opposition or diversity.
Another benefit of having multiple people working in one group is that this can cause an evolutionary like phenomenon with multiple, stronger idea that complete and mulute, creating one in tribute and exceptional idea. This also comes with the help of a group, as a group can decide which idea would be main idea and smoothe out the edyes.
Another problem that can come up is well problem. Having a group of people can become extremely helpful for solving a problem that may come up in situations where a problem can arise, having a group of people can allow for quick and easy way to get out of a situation. Now working in a group does not have its advantage but some things are best done alone
Though working in a group can seem to be good working alone can be better depending on the situation. Being in group full of adult and unfocused group members is infuriating and may seem like torture. Although, some people prefer working alone because they can focus better and make decision faster, in the end, it is a better to working in a group.
if one does not do work the only they fail. Also being in a group fell safe. While being alone means you are much more impotent so working in group
Though working alone can be better for one reason such as anxiety. paranoia worry about other preference, or simply because they would prefer to work alone. Working in a team is advantage over some others who are unaccustomed to doing so , it helps develop people skill decision making skills and general expertise for putting up with others.
working in a group is also good for getting other people's opinion on group member work, as long as they do their part, oftentimes students will learn and experience more in a group of their peers than working alone which is definitely better for their future an possibly what lies ahead. Developing these skill will most likely help in the coming times of college, careers their future family and even retirement.
Overall, working together is beneficial because it creates less work and allow work to be completed faster. Working together promotes constructive criticism from other member of the group , which produces a better final product, working together create different points of view with different points of view new ideas are generated. New idea create diversity is the way to success. | 3.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
EB0F373C1D2A | Summer breaks in most countries are 45-60 days long. Students mostly enjoy the summer by going to a vacation or doing fun stuff. From students' point of view, 60 day summer break is the last thing they want to lose. However, most student lose track of their studies after spending such a long break away from school.
Furthermore, being 60 days away from your frisbee practice would massively impact your game; and the same applies to to studying, you will forget most of the lessons that you've learned. One might say, "well there are summer classes to keep students connected with their studies." But to be absolutely honest, no one wants to go to school in a hot summer day. We all want to lay low and have a cold drink in beach while listening to the satisifying sound of waves.
What is the solution? Put an end to long summer breaks (not completely removing them), and instead give students a week off after every 4 week of studying. It gives students and the faculty a brief break after every 4 week, and also it gives students time to work on their important projects. For instance, if I'm studying History of US Museums, I can get a chance to explore the museums and write an article of my own observation about museums in my area. Student can't get everything done on weekends so they need more time. Teachers on the other hand can keep track of the students during the 7-day break and ask them for their progression. Moreover, this gives students to participate in community services and/or religious services, which in my opinion, are crucial in building one's character. The summer break, however, is still there but shrinked to 2 weeks, giving students a chance to go on vacations and trips but not for long.
All in all, 7-day break after every 2 week of school keeps students involved and connected to their studies, community and religion; while giving them the freedom they need to enjoy their summer without losing track of all the studies. | 4.5 | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
EB1500B8EA75 | Some students who live far away from their schools; they prefer to attend classes from their home instead of going to a school, attending classes from their home can affect some students education and affect their live in a future beacuse not all of the students who are taking online classes are going to complete their work .In my opinion I think is a bad idea to attend classes from your home because students can get distracted for anything, not complete their work and get bad grades.
If we have online class it can be hard to these people who got distracted for anything .Once I had a friend her name was Generic_Name, and she had a online math class that she needed to be able to graduated. One day I went to her home like at 6:00 pm after shool and she was working in her online class, but honestly Generic_Name was not really woking in what she suppose to be working on, yes she had her cumputer on and her online class open , but she was getting distracted by the her tv show just because she like the beaty and the best she stop doing her work. My friend Generic_Name she suppose to do her work but she always got distarcted by her tv show, if she had deside to turned off her tv she didn't got distarcted by anything and she could be success in her online class.
Students who attend classes from their home as there is anyone who is reminding them to completen the work some of them forgot to get it done and they had an incomplete work. This year I am taking an online class and sometimes I forget that I have to be doing all my requested assingments, and by the end of last week I got a bad score because i didn't complete my Vocabulary assingment. If I had put a alarm every day to remind me that i have tostudy and complete my asssiments i could get a better score.
Some others will say that attending classes from home can be a good idea because they can work on in any time,however,others may say that is a bad idea beacuse they can get bad grades. Some classmate that are taking online classes they aren't reading all the directions that the class is giving ;they are just doing the work without reading and that can affect their grades. Having bad grades can made you to not pass your school year, but if we efort we can be great.
For some students is consider to take online classes, but in some point can affect them in their education. There are many students who have online classes and they are falling because they dont have enough help, and some of they because they are not doing it .If schools provide after schools help for online classes will be helpful for all student who needed to be more success, and feel more confortable while they are doing their work and also teachers to be cheking if students are able to pass. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
EB3D751AD980 | Being asked to give elementary school students is a great thing ever. You get to see different people and also talk to elementary schools or the time and even gets to meet their parents and some of their family members.
Sharing lessons to elementary school students is fun. Giving lesson to elementary school students makes you remember your childhood. You can give the lesson by picking or taking one of their subject to teach or talk about it to the students.
Giving lessons to elementary school students makes your remember a lot of things in your past. For example teaching math or another subject in elementary schools and you asked one of your students an easy question that "what is a noun and he answer you and say the write answer" you will probably think that you want to go back to elementary school. Sharing or giving elementary schools lesson is hard but is easy once you fine how to associate yourself with children. And also when you fine out that there is different lessons or different actives. Getting to no more interesting things about elementary school students is really fun.
Helping elementary school students makes you to know more and interesting things going on elementary schools. You also get to see a lot of teachers and also meet the school principles,gaudiness and even somethings see your sibling or your family member. Going to elementary schools makes you improve your learning skills ,tectquines, and more.
Elementary schools can make you remember a lot of stuff you use to do in elementary schools. You get to see and make friend with some of the 5th graders and the 4th graders.
Students in elementary schools sometimes challenge you the teacher other subjects like math,science,English,and other elementary subjects. Elementary games are really fun and also fun at the same time. Teaching elementary school students a subject to learn makes them more interesting in learning every day and every time. They also feel happy anytime you want to give a lesson or teach them. They also make sure they do their assignment every day and on time.
Teaching or being asked to give elementary school students is really good and also fun. You also remember your self in your childhood being in elementary schools. They also do many actives like running and more. Giving lessons to elementary school students meaning helping them to get a better future. They can be successful in future because of the lesson you were asked to teach or give them. Sharing lessons is fun,interesting and also improve on your learning skills. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
EB403A2AA1DB | I would share that life is not easy. Enjoy your life as much as you can. enjoy your childhood. Because when you grow up you won't be able to go back
In the future you will do a lot of responsible things. Enjoy it bore it ends.
Everyone goes through something in their life. Everything will get better. Just don't think negative. Always look up never down. Cause if you do look down you won't see your bright future that will come.
Do good things in your life. Like be nice to people don't be rude, disrespectful, and mean. That's not going to help you in life. what's the point of being mean. Don't take your anger out on others. Just because someone else did something to make you mad. Taking your anger out on someone who didn't do anything is not going to help. Its's making the problem worse. Things happen for a reason, Maybe it happens to teach you a lesson.
Don't rush things in your life. Give things time, be patient. You don't know what can happen if you rush things in life. Everything has a time, you just have to wait until it comes. If something happens it happens you can do anything but to hope that things will get better. Life for an example, Lets just say that someone important gets sick. Like really sick that they had to go to the hospital. Its scary right? But what can you do to stop it. Nothing but to hope that they will get better. thats how life is. Life teaches us a lesson. We need to believe, have hope in life. if we dont how can we know things will get better.
We need to have hope to learn the lesson.
The more you give hope the more you believe, The less you try everything is completely blind.
For an example, I gave up and stopped trying. But that didn't help. Things got harder for me. I didn't have hope. But then i realized why am i thinking negative? and not trying. How is this going to help me in life. I opened my eyes and began to try. I started to believe. It helped me a lot. life is never easy. life is full of lessons that will teach us something. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
EB5924FBD25C | Although some say schools shouldn't extend the school day two hours because some students and teachers might have work after school, actually schools should extend the school day two hours because students get enough time to do their assignments and home works also teachers got enough time to check students work properly and students can add one more subject.
Some people say that schools shouldn't extend the school day two hours because some students and teachers might have work after school. But if we see that in another way instead of working after school sixteen hours with in four days we can just work eight hours in our three days weekend. also it is wast energy for instance, there is one student who works after school for three days until 5:00 pm - 11:00 pm. He came at school by 3:30 pm and he works at seven eleven which is the hardest place to work. It takes 15 minute to go and he have to at 4:45 pm to reach his destination on time. And then let's see after work he gets home at 11:00pm then he sleeps at 12:00 am. How can he focus on he's classes? this person is losing 2 things;
1, losing energy
2, not focusing on his classes he might fail the classes that he is taking
The student that wants to extend the school day will have enough time to do their assignments and home works, also teachers get more time to check the students work properly because they probably got 3 days off if is there any meeting or doing some things in school for example, if the government decide there is a meeting every Friday. However, it is better for teachers to do their work as an example they can check students work on one day of their breaks and they can relax, hangout, playing with kids etc. Students also can do what every they want if we see one example, one student can finish his assignments and other school stuffs in one whole day and the rest of the the weekend is his he gets enough time if he get enough time then he is free from school for two days if he continue work on it he got 2 days free every weeks. In addition those who needs long time to study this schedule can help the students that who wants more time work on it.
Learning is gaining knowledge, so that in these schedule students can add one more subject. How ever, based on this idea two argument comes from the students who wants to add extra class and the students who wants to extend the normal class by adding one hour for each classes.
Adding one hour for each classes is better to have the experience to sit for two hours and 30 minute in one class. And also it's good to work long time on one subject, but as we see in high school student this idea is trash. It can work for only in college class based on that the college students said that "one man trash is another man's treasure". When I come with my idea students can add one more subject because it is Better to get credit on that class and students can choose 3 or more elective classes . For example one student wants to take 3 classes that he have to take and pass for graduate high school he wants to learn 2 classes that helps him in the future. In Virginia law you have to take English 12 and Maths classes. Also to graduate high school it require Personal and Financial Economics to take it. those 3 classes are History, Biology, and one elective class to get a full credit. If the school can only learn 7 subjects this student is going to add another 1 year to learn only one class.
Finally Schools should extend the school day two hours because students get more time to do things that they have to do and it also useful for teachers they can get enough days off. Also teachers work harder than students, so that teachers work 4 days and 3 days off. And Students can add one class to get more credit. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
EB67209E0468 | I think the people should always accomplish more by always doing something. You'll be more successful, each time you do this by most of the times.
One of my life experience was me joining the swimming team. There's times that i would wanna give up on myself. some other days, i would feel too lazy, extremely tired, or having lots of work after school. One night, i decide that it's not the time to just give up on yourself, after everything what i've had done. After that night, whenever i thought this to myself. I went every single day to my swimming practice, also thinking thoughts of head to never give up. All this sudden, i became more successful ! i was a leader to my swimming team. My couch knew one day i would put more effort on myself, he always believed in me.
Some other days, there's times after swimming club. I just wanted to hang out with my friends, to able make time for them to go shopping, walking down the park,go on the beach or having fun at their parties. I know, if i wanna become a leader to my swimming team. First, i must do what's best for me. Then i can make plans for all my friends to hang out. When i became a role model and also starting do go my practices every single day. afterwords, i started to hang out my friends !
They completely understand me. what i was trying to do for what' best for myself . I took full responsibility on my swimming club first. at the end, i started to have more enough time to be with my friends and including family as well.
At the end, One lesson that i have learn in my life experiences is to never give up ! in order to be more successful. There's nothing that i regret on my choices. In matter of fact, i am very proud of myself, how far i become to be a great leader for my swimming team. In the future, i am chasing my dream to become a world famous swimming player on live television. If i would've make a speech on live television, I would want to say " by accomplish more you can always be actually more successful by making your dreams turn into a reality. Always learn by doing our own responsibility and never let anyone say otherwise.
People should start accomplish something that they think it's best for them self just to be more successful. By taking this advice, you'll see the big different how things could come into a great reality. Instead of not doing something in order to accomplish yourself. Try make enough time or be able to focus on things you may can do, By doing little steps each time, you will get a point to reach up your goals. It's very important how you make your choices, just in order to be more successful in your life. Take the advances, be a good leader and make this a good lifestyle. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
EB8030177678 | As Thomas Jefferson said "Determine never to be idle ... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." I believe that Thomas Jefferson's quote is right because if people determine to never be idle, they can accomplish more than those who determine to be idle. Although some says that determine to be idle or inactivity also serve a purpose because they can accomplish something with the time or when people make a purpose to don't be idle, actually Determine never to be idle is much better because we accomplish more if we are doing something people can make proud their family and people may growth having a better future.
Although some says that determine to be idle or inactivity also serve a purpose in the way of one day they will accomplish something even though they are lazy, and people determine to not be idle when they want to accomplish something and when people decide to not being wasting their time without doing anything, inactivity doesn't serve a purpose in the life and in the way of accomplish something
Determine never to be idle is much better because we accomplish more, we make proud our family when we do something great to our life, I have done many things in school and accomplish many goals in my life so my parents always tell me that I make them feel proud of me for all that I have been done even though they said that it is not that easy but they know that I never determine to be idle and I always like to accomplish something in my life.
I always like to accomplish things like having a better grades in school and learn more each day even though some classes are harder than other once but I like to not be idle because if I determine to be idle I may just waste my time doing nothing.
Determine never to be idle is much better because people can growth having a better future in their life,
people can growth having a better job. For example, I want to growth by studying a career and have a better job in the future. Make more proud my family and myself I know it is hard, but all the effort that I put on it right now it will pay it back later, and I will so be thankful to myself to be a person who never determine to idle in life. And it is wonderful how much I had done I never going to regret about what I had been accomplished.
In conclusion, if people never do something in their life, they never will accomplish something that can be a benefit for their future or make their family proud. As Thomas Jefferson said if people determine never be idle they can accomplish and have done what they want to done in their life, and it is wonderful how much people may have done if they always been doing something and don't determine to be wasting their time. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
EBA7A8A0384C | Some people be asking when some one ask them "where is one place in the world you would like to visit!!" Well,Those people might not have an answer for that question,but I do. You might love the place I want to go to or you might not like it,at the end its your choice if you like the place or not. Where is one place in the world you would like to visit this place,and what you would want to do or see once you arrive there.
First,One place i would want to visit is Spain because there are beautiful places like for example Generic_City,Spain orGeneric_City,Spain. Those are the two places that majority of the people wants to visit those places. Majority of the people want to visit Generic_City,Spain orGeneric_City,Spain because of the soccer teams that are there. One of them its called Generic_City and the other team called Real Generic_City. Those are the two soccer team majority of the people in this world prefer.
Second,One place i would want to go specificly is Generic_City,Spain because there a stadium thats from a soccer knowns as the Real Generic_City. I heard that it's a good place to be distracted from all your work and issues. What i want to see when i arrive at Generic_City spain is the beautiful statue that are in there. In spain there is beautiful places people can go. You can go to resturant which some of those resturant have good food.
Third,Spain it's located in europe. Most of the people love traveling to europe because there are some countries lots of people might like. For example,portugal,france,and more. It's so pretty if u see the country from up in the sky even tho when it's at night,all the lights will be lighting up.
In conclusion,Spain might be one of the people favorite country to visit. Spain is full of history too. I just wanted to say that spain might be the country you might want to take a break of whatever thing that's giving you a hard time. Is this country you're favorite country cause this is my favorite country. Hope that this information helped you so much and to figure out if you were stuck on which country you liked the most and where you want to travel. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
EBCC0B6D36D0 | In the years Thomas Jefferon be the President in that years many people loss they job or many people don't get the employement many people died for not get food or medicine they would not had job to get money and buy what they need to continue to they lifes. The people who life in the past they now are us ancestor but when they live the job it's in the farm or building they jobs are very hard and they work a lot and not get to much money for the families, the money they get for one day to work a lot and the little money they get its not to much for to get food,water, medicine etc. In the past the people don't have the technology we had on today that works they do its coming to har because they dont have the machines we had today to get the jobs more easy. Everyday the technology we have on today that technology help us a lot to get the jobs easy and more easy, and get more money to buy the all things we need to buy and pay to continue with us life, in the past and today the jobs is the property to all we need to do to get the resources we need at home. The jobs are not only for to get money the jobs its for to get the experience to one day on the future we need to teach to us childrens to they get a better life and when they get a job they know what they need to do, and when they are adult they form they own family and the experience they get in the past they would teach to the family.
In the all world we had many countries they had differents jobs and cultures the experience we get for others countries that help us to do better things day by day.
Everyday all people go to they own jobs and they use a machines to get the job easy and don't get tired quick we don't need to work all days we need to spend time with the family and do a food watch a movie talk about what are doing at job, school, the family is the property more important in us lifes, we need to get a job for to get that familie in good healthy. the childrens they had less than 16 years they don't understant the importance its to get a job and get money we spend in the future to buy a new thing the people invented or to buy things for the family, this childrens they only think about games, friends and they don't think about the importance the family is and saw how famly is very happy when they see we do the same things to the experience they teach, when parents teach something they do to us get a better life and don't get bad friends bad deccisions, bad influences, they think about own future they want to see that little son grow up for to do good things in own life and don't be never go down, us parents want to see we form a good family in a good place and that family never go down, the childrens we need to teach the all good things in this world and don't give games, phones the electronic devices for they birthay, they dont need all that, the need spend time to family in a river camping on the beach, but the electronic only do bad things, i saw a childrens more young then me and they smoke, consume drugs and that thing its not good for us healthy, if you do a tatto when you go to find a job they say, look its a ganster menber and when you listen that you feel really bad, us families and job are help us to us future be a good person. when you loss the job that is hard because you know all about that job and you don't find a similar job, when you get a job don't go a sit or look the iphone, the boss get mad and he say don't come to work anymore that is terrible situation.
The money we get for a job that help us but the money its go and comig againg its things about the life its happen forever and never change the people are be scare to spend they own money but the money come aging, when you spend the money you get for a job uou wold think in what you need to spend that money. maybe a get all this whrong but i try writen all things a listen, saw in my life my experience.
The things of the job you would need to care and dont be destroy, that thing help us to get that job for to much time and get more money to do wherever you want, when you come to other country and you go a house and you saw to much things but the person had all thathe work a lot for to get all he had in his house. The jobs are important because the time we had in that job, we grown up and the experience we get its go up to come to a profecional one day. Everyday we need to wake up and think what you would do in tha all day, try to create a new things use the technology we had for to do wherever we want. we had to much time to think and create, invented a lot thigs maybe that help a people in the future, the people are very important becuase its they don't invented thins like a machines all technology today we saw in the all world, the jobs they had its invented things new everyday and surprice the people. the jobs this perons had, the technology help they a lot to contine and the population grown up.
In the past to many years ago the population its not like todya we had technology and to much thing that help us a lot everyday, the population in the past hey don't pay the biils like today, rent or something, they would work on they own farms and grown up evryday, the ancestor we had in the past they work a lot and they suffer bacuse they dont get a lot money for buy supplies to they family. you konw much people say i don't need to work my parent give me all i need, but they know what importance it to get own money by us self, that money it's your and you do wherever you want.
In this world many people everyday they wake up and they dont do nothing they only walk around the house and they dont go to work they avert they family, friends only for not go to the job, the family and many friends are important because that people help you to continue your life, if you alone you would be get fell sad and you cry, and you would get the smoke drink alcohol, and you destroy your own life, you wold need go out side and spend time with family and friends everyday, and be happy.. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
EBD07D2D103C | I oppose the idea of schools offering distance learning as an option for students to attend classes,this is because not all students benefit from attending classes from home,and online.
Giving students the choice to attend classes online is a big responsibility; Causing the demand that they must follow instructions,and complete class work tasks. It is true that most students have no problem with this , they complete their agenda and assignments; Thus why they are more comfortable with this method of learning. But this method of learning is not always the case for some students, because it gives this students an opportunity to become nonchalant about their classes; Consequently, they start to fool around and get distracted at times. Attitudes like this can lead to: not meeting up with deadlines, missing daily classworks, poor understanding skills, and ultimately failure. Students that have poor learning skills would be incompetant to take online classes, Which mean at all costs their must be guidance for this kind of students. It is possible that due to a lack of connection with the Teacher in the classroom and the student, it is most likely they would not have the chance to ask further questions or recieve reliable advices from a teacher. In some cases students can benefit from seeking assurance from other students with more knowlegde about the subject, group activites ,and asistance.
In conclusion, distance learning and it's method of teaching is not helpful to every student, because a stystem of learning that benefits all students,and give students opportunity for futher understanding is more beneficial. | 3 | 2 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
EBD559A9576C | Being yourself is being true to yourself and to others for example. When you're hanging out with a group of people. Don't act like someone else but yourself because you will get caught for trying to be someone that you're not and get made fun of for being something that you're not. It's better to be yourself because you want people to like who you really are. Not someone you ain't your just lying to yourself and others.
Ralph Waldo Emerson was a Author who believe ''to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment''. I agree with that statement but not so many could say the same. There is many human on this planet who cant accomplishment being their self than being someone else than their self .
Many people struggle to be their self because of society. Society brain washes people to be someone else than being their self.
Nowadays being yourself is lame and being someone else is Amazing to some people. Their is con on being someone else like lying to people until they fine out who you really are. Than they might not like who you really are then your feelings are hurt . Therefore your friendless and hurt ,But you could always pick yourself up by being yourself. Than by over time people will start to notice how you change and they will want to have relationship with you.
It's healthy to have relationships with you being yourself than being someone else. The reason why i am saying that is because you dont want to be lying to the other person the whole time during the relationship . It will bring problems to the relationships .However its always a good idea to talk it out and come clean.
Being yourself make a huge impacts in people daily life. It could go for the good or the worse its all up to the person. Therefore its important to be yourself always no matter what or whats the cost of it . Also make sure to take pride of being yourself. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
EBD586EB3AA8 | Schools should not have a four day school because, some students may not have time to stay more hours, some students have a part-time job and others help parents to taking care of younger siblings. However, some people have different points of view by, believing that extending schools days that benefits the energy, resources and even helping students to learnd more. An example, is just having four days work or school week. This adaptation can have good and bad benefits. Some people believe that, havig just four days of school is a bad idea because a student will not have time to work or do other activities. A reason of this is because schools days will be more longer and there is going to be less time for them to do activities, student will not have time to work and help their parents taking care of their siblings.
One of a major idea is students will not have time to do their activities. Since school is going to end late. Students need to finish all school assignments. However, Elementary schools will end later that High schools or Middle schools. That will not letf them much longer for them to pass time with their family. Students will be more eshausted, that can be really worrying because their grades can go down. Parents will not be happy with their kids grades. This adaptation can be really helpfult for some people. However, it can affect some other people lifes.
Another reason is some students have a part-time job. They will no have time to work and even if, they have the time it's going to be difficult for them. An example, if students get out from school late they have to run to their house to get ready to go work because they may be late for work. However, going to work for them is not that easy some of them don't have their license yet. Some of them have to walk even take a public bus. Before considering the benefits of four days of school week there are a lot more disadvantages that can affect students with their normal life.
The last reason is teenagers helps parents with their siblings. Although that can change because if students have to stay more at school their schedules will be longer than a normal. An example, parents will have to find someone that can stay with their kids and that means that is going to be more cost. Parents will be unhappy paying more money to a babysitter. However, is reallly hard to find someone that can be dependable. Even if teenegers have the time to take care of their siblings, they will not have time to do their own stuff because they have to do two things at the same time.
In conclusion, these ten hours school not just affect students will affect the whole family because students will end really eshausted even, teachers will get tired too. After considering all the benefits and disadvantages there is a point about conserve energy and resources that does not make sense, if students get two more hours of school for four day that means that there is not any conserve anergy or resources because we still using the same five days hours in four days instead five days. Reasons why students should not have four day week is because schools days will be more longer and there is going to be less time for them to do activities, student will not have time to work and help their parent taking care of their siblings. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
EBE0730AFF0E | Adopting the failure is the way to become master and complete our goals. Everyone have experimented failure in some point of their lives. As the British Prime
Minister Winston Churchill once said "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss the enthusiasm". But should we really continue pursuing success after fail many times, even knowing that, it might be really difficult?. Although some say that we should give up after fail multiply times. Actually, we should not lose the enthusiasm after have failed in something that we wanted more than one time because, being consistent is a way the learn and become successful. Also, failure gives us more experience and mastery before we complete our goal.
Those who believe that we should lose the enthusiasm after fail many times in what we want, have their reasons. They think that being pushing your self getting stress by starting something that you couldn't have done before, is a way to waste time because, you're not going to complete it anyways. They also believe that it's really hard to start over again knowing that if you try it one more time you might fail it all the same even though you don't achieve success.
One reason why we should not lose the enthusiasm after failure is that people learn from their mistakes. A way to learn is being consistent and do not give up, even if there are many difficulties that make us think that we should leave our goals and dreams. As example of this is my friend, Generic_Name, who had to take his math test multiply times. First, he took it at the first time without even study, as result of that he didn't pass it as well. Second, the teacher gave him a second opportunity to take it. This time he studied much better than the first time but he didn't pass it again, he felt stressful "what's going on to me" he said because, he knew that he needed to pass that test. Then, he asked to the teacher for a third chance to take it. But this time he studied really hard for many hours, he also knew what the test was going to be like because he had taken it before. As result he passed the test with a good score. What happened to Generic_Name is a perfect example why should not lose the enthusiasm after have failed something couple times. If Generic_Name hadn't been consistent by studying and taking it more than one time, he wouldn't have passed the text. Therefore we should never lose the enthusiasm after fail many times.
Other reason why we should keep the enthusiasm even if we have failed something is that, failure gives us more experience and confidence before we complete or reach our goals. As example of this is my self. The last year I had lost to do, such as school, work and other responsibilities that required me to drive. Then, my parents decided that it was time to let me drive. I was really excited thinking in the way that my daily was going to change. But it wasn't that easy because, firstly, I had to pass the driver test, next learn how drive and finally get a car. In that point I wasn's really sure if I wanted to continue with that. Then I decided con continue it and I went to take the test, I couldn't pass it at the first time. I felt sad about it, but after studying all the rules again I came back to take on this time I was able to pass it as well. But, I still needed to get a car, fortunately my parents brought me one. Now I have a car and my driver's license even though I was hard to make it. What happened to me is a perfect example of being consistent and don't give to get success. If I hadn't been consistent even that I had failed it, I wouldn't have gotten my driver license. Therefore we should never lose the enthusiasm after fail sometimes.
In conclusion, based in those reasons I support Churchill's statement, and I'm agree with the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. Although some say that we should give up after fail multiply times. Actually we should not lose the enthusiasm after have failed something that we want because, it's a way to learn more and a way to build our confidence, and we also become successful by being consistent. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
EBE636368EBC | People make there own decisions because they don't want to blame no one when they take there advice. Being Responsible for there own actions will make people grow as a person with there Ups & downs in life .People don't want to blame the person that gave them advice because the advice did not go how they wanted to go .Failing in life with your decisions is not always a bad thing because it can lead to new doors/opertinities .Not regretting anything in life is a good mind set because each decisions you made where what you wanted .when people are responsible for there action/decisions they just got no regrets because they choose what they believed/wanted to do. Some people might say getting advice can warn you what not to do but how are you suppose to grow a person if you don't try it your self and just regret not doing it later on .People making there own decisions will make there action then will be responsible for decisions they made then grow as a person not blame no one for their failings and regrets they get. | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
EBEFF43F46EE | If you could accomplish one thing in the future, what would you choose? Something I would like to accomplish in the future would be attending and graduating college because it will make me feel successful, it will help me learn what I need in order to get my dream job, and I wanna be able to be one of the first and only people in my family to say I finished college.
The first reason why I would like to accomplish college in the future is because it will make me feel successful. Attending college has always been a dream of mine since I was a little kid because I'd always watch documentaries; in these documentaries people would talk about what they had to do in order to feel that their lives were successful, some people had the same reason which was that they had made the choice of attending and finishing college. Being able to have the chance to even attend college is amazing, not everyone in the world is given this opportunity. I know that college is a long time away for me but it's coming sooner than I think. Before I know it I'm going to be out of high school and out in the real world. In order for me to feel like I'm successful I need to finish college. College gives you the information to be successful in the job of your choosing. To me being successful mean you never give up even when things get hard. These are all examples why accomplishing college would make me feel successful.
The second reason why I would like to accomplish college in the future is because it will help me learn what
I need to know in order to get my dream job. Most jobs out in the world require you to have a higher education than high school. College helps you learn specifically about the job you want to do when you become an adult; the job I wanna learn all about is a pediatric oncologist. Being a pediatric oncologist has been my dream job for awhile now because I think that cancer is such a sad thing; people die everyday from cancer. When I get older I want to be able to help treat and get rid of children cancer so that they an live their lives to the fullest; to me helping these kids get rid of their cancer could help prevent it form ever coming back; it doesn't mean that there is a zero percent chance that their cancer won't come back, but I want to help these kids lives last as long as possible. In order for me to actually have the opportunity to apply and receive this job, I can't just have a high school diploma. There are jobs out in the world that do not require you to have a college education; maybe your dream job may not require you to attend school after you finish high school, but not all jobs are like this. These are all examples why college will help me learn what I need to know in order to get the job of my dreams.
The third and final reason why I would like to accomplish college in the future is because I wanna be one of the first and only people in my family to say I finished college. A lot of people in my family have not attended college due to not having the funds to afford it, having to stay home to take care of a family member, and most just didn't see the point of even attending in the first place. I know that no matter what my parents would do whatever was needed to be able to give me the opportunity to attend college. Personally, one of the really big reasons why I want to finish college is because of my mom. While my mom was attending college she ended up having me; she was a single parent at the time and she did whatever she needed to provide for me. One thing she never got to do was finish college. She stopped all of her dreams just so she could always be there for me. My mom has such a big influence n my life and I want to be able to finish college for her; I want her to see that all of her hard work payed off and make her proud. Knowing I have my mom supporting me no matter what keeps me going everyday, I don't give up on things to show her that I can do anything I put my mind to. Overall, this is why I want to be one of the first and only people in my family to say I finished college.
In conclusion, not everyone may want to accomplish the same thing, everybody is different, but at then end of the day there's one thing that I want to accomplish the most. Something I would like to accomplish in the future would be attending and graduating college because it will make me feel successful, it will help me learn what I need in order to get my dream job, and I wanna be able to be one of the first and only people in my family to say I finished college. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
EBF9131A638F | Distance learning is a new learning method for students to attend classes from home by online or you can video conference. Schools have brought distance learning in their system for students can do their assignments from home. Many people think this is a great idea and some oppose to this learning method. The schools can see if they are on track or online to their classes but if they arn't in the online class they will be behind in their assignments. Is this new learning method a great way to learn? or does being in a class with a teacher more beneficial for the student?
The main problem in distance learning is if students are really getting on the online class. Students who do get on are on task and on point. The students who get on the computer and get on the online class for a short period of time at home might be playing, or might not be concentrated, because he is at home and dosen't feel like doing it. Students who don't do their assignments they wait until they are at school because in school you arn't distracted like at home you are concentrated and ready to work. Is distance learning beneficial for students at home? for some students it might be but for many it isn't.
Is online learning at home beneficial for students? some students do think its beneficial and a really great idea. Many people prefer learning in class with a teacher because they can ask questions if they don't get the question that is being asked. Students do some of their work but get off in a short period of time if they are at home, if they were at school the students would be on task and doing their assignments, unlike at home they would be off task. Many students prefer teachers teaching them so they can get more information of what they are being taught. Distance learning isn't capable of doing what you do in a classroom. Is distance learning really beneficial?
Is being taught in a classroom more beneficial for students? many students prefer being taught by a teacher than online. Students are more productive and they share their thoughts and explanations in that specific assignment than online classroom. All the students are in the same page and all gathering more information by writing notes and being concentrated in their tasks. Students are more interactive with each other and sharing thoughts and many techniques to get the answers by fellow classmates, also getting good grades. Classroom learning is beneficial for many students and teachers.
Students have their own way of learning, it doesn't matter if its distance learning nor in a classroom. It is how they feel how they enjoy learning. Students will say this is the best way for learning other no this is, it doesn't matter what you think is the best way to learn its how you enjoy learning something it is the best way for you. The students who prefer distance learning really do it at home and feel like they are learning mush more at than in a classroom. Students who enjoy learning in a classroom like being around peers and want knowledge from everyone around them. They are both beneficial for that specific student. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
EC047D97041F | I believe and agree with self-esteem comes from achievement because i've learned this from experience .The people who believe in the students must be self-confident in order to learn statement really didnt think this through when they agreed to that . self-confidence really cant really be used or proved to learn better . Achieving anything like a win in a sport or something positive you get at the end can boost your self-esteem. achieving something or having a positive outcome after doing something can really make students think twice on how they shouldnt give on things and also boosting self-confidence too but just mostly self-esteem. I really have no idea what i'm doing or writing neither not knowing what self-esteem is all i know its something to do with your thoughts or emotions. I only typed in what i know and what I think is the best response to this stupid prompt that made me stress out more and waste my time doing nothing and only sit here and think what can I type that makes sense that closely answers the prompt and really all I did wastype and give it a statement and repeated with different words , I already know Im going to fail this wellI atleast tried and put in effort . In my conclusion achievements are the best way ,for motivating people to keep going and never give up and somehow in some way relate to self-esteem. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
EC07B11B2CF3 | a positive attitude is the key to success in life because being a positive is a good thing to have in life, if a person have an Negative attitude it wont let them go anywhere in life they just going to say in the same spot, positive attitude is the key to get respect from others, being positive and sucessful in the same time is the first step to succed
Negative attitude wont let a person go anywhere in life to be successful because having bad attitude wont let a person make the right freinds in life. Having bad attitude wont let your teachers get your atention. having bad attitude wont let a person go to the right point in life for example his dream job carrer.
positive attitude is the key to get respect from others because being respectful get you to make or get alot of positive friends than negative friends, having an positive attitude towards others will make you get their attintion to be part of them,positive attitude toward the people who hate you will make them respect you enogh.
being positive and sucessful in the same time is the first step to succed because it get you to your dream easy and faster, it will make life easy to atcheve, being positive on what your going to do and on what your going toatcheve is a key to succed in life.
but sompeople may say that it dosent matter what personality you have you have either positive or nective it will just going to let you have all the respect you want from other so it dosent matter if you have a negtive attitude or positive attitude because they think that no matter what you do you will atcheve and pass what you love in life. but in what i think thats not true because its all depends on what personality you have.
In the end it all matter because positive attitude is the key to success in life. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
EC0B04508F7C | WORKING IN GROUP
Why the most students like working in group and not alone? the most students prefer working with friends, because in schools the works or homework require more the one students ,but .Some people said of working alone is more benefits for the students. I believe of working in group you can make friends, helping together, and have more time for you work.
The first reason,
if working in group you can make friends because you need talk about the work,
sometime the students speak their experience or opinions about the work,but when the students is not the same country, and the works talk about the country or religious is good because. The students have different opinion and sometime you make friends when you with other students have the same opinion, and when working in group you and your friends have time for talk.
In second reason helping together, because you can ask if you work is good or opinions about the work and look of more information. You can help for materials if you friend not have, and helping together if you consider the work is good or not or change sometime or have or ideas you can tell.
The third reason you have more time for you work if you working in group. Because sometime the teachers not give much day for you work ,and the work is hard, and require much information you can divide the work with you friend . The finally check the information, and put together or you can decide what part you wants working or what parts you can create.
In conclusion is more essay for you if working in group because you can make friends , you can helping together, and you have more time for you work. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
EC2758A5B74E | Dear School board,
Why does a student's education matter? To me, it is extremely important because it can affect them for their entire life in positive or in negative ways. It could lead them to a job with a seven figure salary, or to work a part-time job at a fast food restaurant making minimum wage. What's also important to me is the learning experience. I believe learning should be fun, interesting, and not stressful for students. That's why I agree with the school board's plan to extend the school day by one and a half hours, because that way, students wouldn't feel rushed and would have more time to learn, teacher will have more time to teach and using new ways, and the school year would be a little shorter.
To begin with, I agree with the school board to extend the school day because students wouldn't feel rushed and they would have more time to learn. Right now, each of our periods are only about 50 minutes, which I think really isn't a lot of time to learn once you start working. If one and a half hours is added to the current school day, we would have at least an hour for each class. This way, the students would have more time to complete projects, assignments, or just have more time to really understand the subject without feeling rushed. I know this because right now, I am working on a project in science class that we only have two class periods to finish, which totals for just about one and a half hours! I am not saying that a little push isn't necessary or beneficial, but the extra time would definitely boost the quality of the student's work at our school without rushing them.
Secondly, I think the school board should increase the school day by one and a half hours because that will let teachers have more time to teach, while using unique ways to do so. With the students having more time to learn, the teachers could potentially also have more time to actually create a better learning experience. Extending the day ensures that teachers would be able to thoroughly explain new concepts and materials, while also teaching using better or more effective methods that wouldn't have been possible because of the shortage of time. For instance, sometimes we have educational scavenger hunts, where the teacher lays the information throughout the campus and we would have to find them. The issue is, we've never been able to finish, not because it wasn't possible to, but because there simply wasn't enough time. Those kinds of educational activities are, in my opinion, very fun, but it's also effective. So if we have more time, I am sure that some teachers would plan and teach more using different ways which are beneficial to both the student and the teacher.
Lastly, the school board's plan to extend one and a half hours to the school day is something I strongly concur with because school will be out earlier in the summer. While I do enjoy school very much, I think summer break is something that everyone looks forward to. The days that are cut down because of the increased time allows students to attend more activities and spend more time together with their families. Even though the students aren't at school, they could still be learning something new on their own. For example, they could be learning how to play an instrument, training for sports, or learning how to speak another language, which are all very helpful for them. Also, the teachers could be attending conferences which let's them collaborate with other teachers on creating newer and more efficient methods to teach, which will help everyone in the long run.
In conclusion, the reasons why I agree with the school board to extend the hours are because students wouldn't feel rushed, teachers would have more time to teach in unique ways, and school will be out sooner in the summer. Although I think there are many more reasons why the school day should be longer, those are the main ones. There are just so many benefits that this extended time would create; possibly having an effect on the entire community. This is not an immense amount of change but it can be a big success, which is why I think you should really consider extending the school hours.
Sincerely,
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EC35456D4E07 | Conserve energy and resources,some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours because they can care about their baby and have more time for their family,Also they can have more time for all the friends, and be responsable for the house.
If they have two or more day off they would try to do somenting else.
All people need to have time for care about the family and be responsable for their child.
If we have more time with our parents so we can expend more time on our school.
Conserve energy and resource, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day cosisting of ten hours because they can care about their baby and have more time for their family , Also tey ca have more time for all the friends , and be responsable for the house because if they have two or more day off they would try to do do something else,the people need to have time for care about the family and be responsable for their child,and if we have more time with our parents so we can expend more time on our school.
Should your school follow this model by extending the school day two hours.
I desagree because if we have two more hours we can not have hours for study and make the thing that we want. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 4 | 2.5 |
EC3B982A622A | I do not agree with adding another hour to school, because some of us would like to go home, some people have places to go after school. For example what if a student wants to go pick up his grandma from the airport but her flight gets in while the student is still in school. If school would've ended at the normal time he could've went to pick up his grandma. Even though staying an hour more would help students more, there won't be anytime left for after school activities. in the winter time it gets dark fast and some kids like to go outside and play for a while after school,but if they add that extra half an hour kids would have to get home fast and leave there stuff to go outside for a little bit. There are many bad reason why adding another hour to school is a bad idea but, there are many good ones too like a good reason would be kids can catch up on there missing work, a bad idea is kids go home later then they used to and some parents would not like that. If they do add an hour of school they should open the school at 8:30 instead of 7. If we come at 8 kids would get more sleep and not fall asleep in class with more sleep kids have more energy and with ms are more energy kids are more productive. In my opinion i don't think adding another hour is not so bad, just that no other student would wanna stay another hour. Students could get frustrated because all the work they do at school,and then kids got to go home and study and do there homework. Therefore i disagree with the idea of adding another half an hour. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
EC3F3F26E635 | One of the things I want to acumplish in the future is to graduate from college and become a pharmasist. One day I was thinking about what I would want to be in the future and my goals was to have a job that I would be able to help people in and enjoy it. I wanted to have a job that I would be exited to go to everyday to help others and make my parents proud. So I thought about becoming a doctor because you help people but I don't think I would enjoy that job and I don't like being at the hospital, and just then I thought about becoming a pharmastst then I remembered that my parents have already told me of it as a good job to have and it actually is, it will make my parents proud of me, I would help people get the medication they need, and I'm sure I would enjoy it. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
EC5138D8C9D6 | I dont think thats good what they doing with the student because there school are not letting then choose there career or what kind of career they want to follow i think is a bad thing what they doing because they not letting the student study what he wants they are choosing what the student can and the career that he is going to follow , i say thatthe student have to say what he wants to be ansd what the they want to study.
From the point the im seeing the situation i dont think in those societies are giving, them a good reason for them to simmit a career,to the student because they are choosing the career for the students and they not letting them to follow a career, that they like because in school they are selecting the classes for the students ,that they are going to follow for only one specific career, and for the age ,that they have i dont think thats a good idea to summit a career because ,you have time to choose what king of career you want to follow and by taking classes for a career that you want and having the time ,and then you think your ready you can summit a career , because what they doing in the school is choosing what the student is going to be went he grows up.
They not letting the student to select there classes that are going to help then in the future for a career , in the school that they going they are selecting the classes ,for the students they not helping them , what they doing is ,that they are giving classes for only one career , and i dont think that they should summit acareer because, they not choosing a career that they want tey are choosing a career, that they giving to them with the classes that they making them have, so student dont have the much career to folow they taking whatever they giving to them.
in conclusion im not agree with what they doing with the student and they still not on the age to summit careers , went they get to the point at school is went you star looking for a career and what you like and what is making you follow the career and i would say ,that if u still in school it dont matter but the school they cant choose what you going to be you have to chose what you going to do and what you like the most and follow your dreams not what others say the you can do do or what you can be you have decide what you going to do the school is to teach you not to chose who you going to be. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
EC64EE12DBB4 | McDonald is one of the most fast foods, and people who work their get paid a small amount of money, so if students can come, and visit this place maybe students will see how people without a education or not doing nothing at school will end up and a job like this, so i would choose a job that don''t get paid that much to show students what happen when you don't do your work at school or pay attention.
Students might change their minds of playing around in school from visiting this type of job students will see people working hard and fast every single day and getting paid a small amount so students would not want to be working at a place like that in there future so it could pursue them to start putting more effort in school and not to play around in class, and have a successful job.
Some parents don't have money to put their child in school Furthermore there are going to have to work at a hard working job but students don't have to because you have a chance and you got your education so it might teach students to take this advantage to have a success job and not to play around on the other hand teens that don't get their education will work at a place that pay a small amount.
If students don't take their education serious your parents paid the money for your education and if you just don't pay attention and not try the money your parents paid will be a waste because you didn't learn anything cause you goof of and you won't be able to have a successful job so visiting this job will change students thought pf whether they should play around or not so if you take your education serious you can have a job that pays you a lot of money and be successful in life but not doing anything in school won't get you anywhere.
I would right a letter to McDonald because i want students to see what happen when you just play around in school or your parents don't have money for your education because the employees at McDonald work hard but they get paid a little bit but if you take your education serious you can have a successfull job in life so this might change students mind of whether they should pay attention or not and students will take this as a chance so they won't end up a type of job like this. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
EC773C38B72C | I'll disagree because being success is really important and being a failure is one of the worst thing that can happened in life because when someone start failing their is no more reasons to keep doing the stuff that someone like in if when the person start failing for their success they cannot do like that much for they can help for that and when the success person is their best time they can do all the stuffs they want for they can keep being success and keep their position and in good conditions.
Being success the hold time can make someone to fail at the end because someone keep doing their same thing all the time and when that happened the people can start getting tier and that's hew can people can make their success carriers or jobs to fail and that's how they can prevent from all does things that can prevent them from failing and when the people doesn't see they can start to fail they don't pain attention or they don;t care about what they doing during that time,
When a person is a failure at the beganing they can get more courage and start working harder for they can be a great the success person in life after being a failure in life for a long time they can start being success from one time into the other that how the great brains can work after being a such a failure person they can be a great success person in life after being a failure and start working harder and start being a great competent person for working in that areas. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
EC7A73638669 | Some school districts offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. I agree with this position. I believe that it is a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college one year early. Although, some people think that it is not a good idea for students enter college or the work force one year early, nevertheless it can be helpful, because it can help students to start early to college, then they can have enough time to choose what they will want to study, and it also going to promote them to be eficients and take adventage of the time, they will have.
When people have to take a important decision, regularly, they think and they look carefully at all their options. If the students graduate one year early, they will earn time to correctly choose what profession they going to take, and then they will have enough time to elect the college or university where they feel comfortables to go. This is significant, because of one decision depend the future; the experiences that people going to live. With enough time students can give attention to their most important interests, thoughts, and consider possibles changes if it's require. Also people can take adventages of the time that they have, one year is not too much, but in one year is the opportuny for students to select a exceptional career and work and what they always dreamed.
The time is a investment and students have to take advantage of that. Some parents, students, and techers think that if the students graduate a year early, they don't will have time free to play, to share with their families, or to do others activities. The reality is that it going to improve the performance of the students. This method will catch the attention of them and it will show them their priorities. The children have the right to have their free time, but also the parents have the labor to teach them that are precedences that they have to comply with. For example, I took English 10, in summer school in Generic_City, but I was living in Generic_City, I drove every morning, one hour to arrive to my summer school, it was hard wake up early and then drive, but now, I'm sure that it was the best desicion because I'm at few steps of my graduation. People always have to remind that to can get extraordinary rewards, people have to do extraordinary efforts.
On the other hand, some people are not agree with those that offer the special program to graduate early. The opposition believe that students are not sufficiently prepare to graduate before of the schedule time. The contrary side, also think that students have to complete all their high school years to be ready to go to the college or the work. People that is in the opposite side not coincide with the programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years. In addition, some parents are not agree with the options that the program give to their children; to take courses during the summer or in the evenings. Parents refer to this like "a extra pressure to students." There are people that suggest that the better choice is that the students complete their four years of high school; however, it can prolong that time for students to graduate.
To conclude, it's important emphasize that in certain cases the pressure is a tool that help people to protrude in their projects and in the life in general. When people take risks and they have the courage to do reality their goals, they going to achieve all of them. The time that people invest in positive accions are transcedent to achieve their goals. The program offer a essential support to students, that going to be useful and it going to show to students that they have the capacity of achive their goals, before that they believed, they just have to establish their academic purposes and demostrate that they have the capacity to achieve it. The program is a great oportunitty to grow and success, one year can be the big difference, and it can approach us closer of that dream. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
EC82975E75DA | To conserve energy and reources, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, the benefits is that in the school have that conserve energy, the students have that adopted to your work, and the school and conserve enegy, and resources. It is for the student that in the school learning about the important that is conserve energy and resources of the businesses. I said that can adopted to the school and the businesses. I believe that the students have more responsibility in the life. The students have big responsibility in the life because the work and the school are important, the students have capability of have a businesses and go to the school. The student have that be sure of work and that take good grade in the school.
The work in the businesses can't affect the grades in the school. The work is part of a life and also go to the school. The students can have a job and go to the school, can work in the homework after or befored of the school. The businesses have adopted a four-day work week is a good responsibility for the adolecents because learning to share with the job and the school. The work not affect of a student in nothing in the school. The work in the businesses is important for the life because learn to mature and learn to have a big responsibility for the life. The student can work after of the school and every have good grade in the class. The study have that conserve energy and resources for the school and for make the homework and study for test, other thing. The study in the school can that the student after have problem for sleep and go to tarde in the school.
The advantages of have job is good because the work help in the development of the person. The advantages of a job and the school help to have responsibility in the life. The advantages of go to the school and working is very important with person help knowledge of the responsibility. The advantages is development with person and with responsibility. The advantages is good for a person with a good capacity intelligent. The advantages is that the people can have a good responsibility. The advantages of have a job and study is that help to grow with person. The advantage is have something and demonstrate that a can with job and study. The advantages is that the time of the school can combine with the job for that the student have time.
The disadvantages is big responsibility for a students beacuse not help in the school with your grades. The disadvantages is that go tired in the school is the tired. The disadvantages is because not get good grades in the test. The disadvantages is bad grades in the class only take F. The disadvantages is that in the school not pass the class because they work in the businesses. The disadvantages is not approve work as this in the school. The disadvantages is not good because fall the grades in the class of school. The disadvantanges is that the students not can with the job and study because exceed can be bad. The disadvantages is big responsibility for a students because they not this ready for a big responsibility. The disadvantages can weaken our mind and energy.
In conclusion, have a job as these in the school, can be a good because a have more reponsibility in the life and can mature more. The student can have the job and go to the school. The have a work and study help with person to have responsibility in the life and make more intelligent in every the aspect. The have a job help to develop our mind. The have a job and study can be bad for our health because use the mind. The have a job and study is good every and when get good grade in the school and not carelessness the class and the test or homework. The students have conserve energy and resource for the school and the work because is important the energy in our body and mind. The student can tired because the work and study is very difficult for the student. The work and study can the student have much problem because not good sleep. The students have that develop your mind and sleep the time corrects. The study is good because have a big responsibility and can mature for the life. The study and word is very good because is a big responsibility. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
EC8590A774E6 | I think self-esteem comes from real achievement because if you're not doing your best work In class and you feel like its not good enough, and someone tells you what you did wasnt good enough then it will just make you want to do better. On the Other hand If you do try your best and the work you completed is good, and someone gives you a lot of compliments then it helps you build a better self-esteem. Therefore you got to be self confident also, why? because if you're self confident and you apply for a job you will manage to be confident that you will get that job, when you go to an interview. If you practice to be self confident It will help you a lot in the near future. If you got an affinity for a type of shoes and someone else tells you they're ugly how will you feel? Of course you will feel some type of way because that's just how the human body works, but you know what? It dont matter what people think. If you Got an affinity for those type of shoes then it dont matter what people got to say about your shoes. At the end of the day its what you like not what other people like. People will always judge you no matter what you wear, what you look like, and how speak. Always remember that only god can judge you. Therefore you should take the negative stuff that people got to say, and turn them into something positive. That will help you build up better self-esteem because you always got to be yourself no matter what. Dont be something that you're not just because your friend likes you that way, be yourself and if that friend is really your friend he will accept you for who you really are. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
ECA6E86705B6 | Do you think positive attitude is the key to success in life?
Some job require you to have a positive attitude.
in this prompt i would argue that positive attitude is the key to success in life.
positive attitude is the key to become success in life because it has been said that in order for you to have job you need to be to have a positive attitude because that's what called the costumer's attention. It has been said that if you are a positive person you can became 10 times more successful then a person that is not because you are more likely to have a better job, have more friend and be more healthful . a lot of people would like to be around you for the reason that you are positive person and you always would bring them positive energy and also when you have a possitive attitude you are always thinking good things are going to happend in your life you are so patient you do not rush for think in life to be the way you want them to be also you leat things happend in the appropriate time because better things become in life if you wait for them in the appropriate time. For example a positive person has positive havin the characteristic roots real and positive, having positive attitude helps become intelligent in the way that you surmountable and you always work hard for the thing's you want in life for the better person you want to be. life always always have up and down and but no matter all the things that become to life all the proof that become to your life it can be good or make remember to always think positive because things happend for a reason. positive attitude would always be the key to become success in life. When a person always think positive in life they would always have a better life style because better thinks and better opportunity happend to those person that always have a positive attutude they always take things with patienta and think with a positive attitude. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
ECB127F00953 | I disagree, I think if you are honest all the time, you might say some mean things to a person, which might hurt their feelings.
First, being honest is good, that's how you earn trust. However, keep some things to yourself if you think it's not positive to say to another. Second, It might make the person feel bad if you do say something harsh to them. Lastly, A person might see you differently if you're honest constantly, Whether it was nice comment or a mean comment you said.
Firstly, there isn't a lot of honesty when there needs to be at times. Sometimes you have to say what's right in order to not hurt someones feelings from what you said. For example, your friend and yourself have to be honest in some cases to earn each others trust for the other person to be honest in return. Secondly, not being honest might lead you to trouble, if they might have found out you lied to them later. They might give you respect if you're not lying to them and not saying malicious stuff about a person.
Secondly, If you are honest "all the time" some people might see you ask a snitch from the way you are saying everything to a person. For example, a teacher comes up to you and asked you a question on what a person did you would have to be honest and say the truth. I also think that "honesty" and "truth" are a similar word because, you have to do both in order to be honest constantly. The truth is that honesty can get you into a very bad situation if you have to be completely honesty with a teacher. By the wrong person you talk to, you might accidentally start a riot.
Lastly, you should be careful on how honest you are to people, because you don't know whether they are going through some stuff you are pointing out to them. Being truthful to someone and saying everything to them might make them upset on how you view stuff in the world also. Honesty is like an opinion that may cause someone that went through something upset them drastically. This is why I disagree that honesty is the best policy. From the situation you are in say respectful stuff towards the person. It might make you a better person if you are not saying negative things towards a person too.
In conclusion, I disagree with "Honesty is the best policy" by the situation you are in with the person and what they are going through. May cause them to dislike themselves in a way you wouldn't know. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
ECC9E84CD3D1 | I think that students should start an after school homework club. 3 reasons I think that students should start this club is so that they'll have an easier time doing their assignments that their teachers give them, they can work together to get their homework done, and students can work with their teachers to raise their grades up in a specific subject.
My first reason is that students can have a easier time doing their assignments that their teachers give them. My 3 reasons that students can have a easier time doing their assignments is that the students can ask their teachers for assistance if they need it, they'll get their work done quicker, and when their teachers come to collect their work, the students will have it already completed.
My second reason is that the students can work together to get their homework done. My 3 reasons that students should work together to get their homework done is so that they can turn it into their teacher once they're done, they'll have it all completed when their teacher asks the students to give their homework up, and they'll receive a good grade from their teacher.
My third reason is that students can work with their teacher to raise their grades up in a specific subject. My 3 reasons that students should work with their teachers to raise their grade up in a specific subject is so that they can be more productive in class, they can catch up on what they've missed in class, and the teacher can guide the students on what they're confused on on their homework.
Overall, these are my reasons why I think that students should have the opportunity to have an after school homework club. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 4 | 3.5 |
ECCAD55DE7BA | I agree that we accomplish more if we are always doing something. I think it does because it helps us learn on what to do. We can teach other the same way as well.
We have other people helping us in different ways. For example, we can teach them different ways on doing things they don't feel comforable and that they would feel conforable if they keep doing it. Although it may take time to get use to it they would have experience at the end. Also those people can teach other people. Learning new stuffs is hard but if its a good idea people should do it.
I think we can make a difference by learning new things in our lifes. For example, if there were new ways by playing video games then people should learn it. Although it can get people mad if they lose or anything else. It can be helpful to others in the world. I think they would know a lot more if they did.
We would get a lot done quicker if we had a method on it. For example, other people helping out on big protects to make it happen and work every well. Although it would need a lot of taking to one each other. It can help by not getting to one an other. Getting to know new people by doing things.
If your not doing things you won't get anything accomplish in life. For example, if you don't do well in school that can effect your life by getting a job. People can stop being lazy and do their work. They can ask for help if they need it. If they ask they would have a lot accomplish. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
ECE377D2E967 | Dear principal,
I think that every students should perform and they should be required to perform community service. For example some children and others clean up litter.
But there are so many children who do not want to help other to get the job done .
The principal need to tell other to get the community clean. Everyone need to take position on the required to perform community service. we need to keep our community clean. Everybody need to be part of the job. I think every one should know that we need thing clean | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
ECEE1FB05BDE | Let's be honest if you're yourself and not faking who you are in this world you'll become a better person in this world. One thing you don't ever forget is to be honest,and to be real with yourself and everyone around you.
Girls,if you reading this please don't make the same mistakes that i did in my past be always honest with your partnership or whoever, because the consequences are not how you might think. When i was in 8th grade i met this person i was so in love with him,he add me on snapchat so that same day that he add me i post a pictures that i was in the field,35 minutes after he text me i was so happy,and nervous because i liked him so we start texting but we never talked in person,a week pass by and he start to being disrespectful with me,playing with my feelings i knew that we were just friends in those time. One day i told him that i want him to be honest with me,he always said that he was honest with me,2 week pass by he were keeping playing his little games and i did not say anything i just leave his message in delivered,1 years pass by he texted me saying that he felt so bad for everything he did to me in the past,i just told him everything that i felt for him in the past but he was not honest with me. Girls,let me tell you my big mistake that i did,we talk about 5 months as a friend after we talk for 5 months he make me his girlfriend,at the time i was still feeling butterfly for him that first years is was perfect like any relationship,those 12 months i was so happy,i always told him that he was ''the love of my life'' and i just say it for everything we went trough since middle school also,because he was my first boyfriend and my parents were fine that i was dating him because they though he was a good person.
Girls,find a guy who is real with you all the time they might be a lot of guys out there that can pretend that he is in love with you. Yes, they might be real and make you feel butterfly 5 months or 6,but things changes in this life person change not everything is always the same,anyways he started to lie to me when i knew that truth of that problems is when he start to hurt me all the time but when you love someone you let them hurt you,so i keep letting him hurt me,i started crying and to supplicated to stop hurting me he stop like any relationship we were okay for a week and then he started doing things that hurt,he started talking to girls,and cheated on me but us girls we so dumb that we keep them.2 Years after i was in depression i did not tell my parents they found out when they take me to the hospital because i passed out in my room crying, without eating for days i was in the hospital for a week after that i was able to go they take me to therapy. after 5 months of going to therapy,i was able to talk him to close a chapter because i learn to forgive but in my heart i felt hate for him what i told him was "i love you but i love other person more than you and that person i'ts me" yes, he cried but he did not deserved me .Finally i let toxic people leave my life,i'm not going to lie like i'm afraid to talk a guy again because i feel they will hurt me. i'm not thinking to go out with a guy because girls you have to love yourself to be able to love other person.
In conclusion,if you are honest with yourself your life will be okay without any problem. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
ECF0CBAE7E06 | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, '' Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow.''
I disagree with Emerson's statement, because you can keep growing by trying and trying hard on whatever you already know.
However; when you try and keep trying somehting is when you grow up more and more each time.
Additionaly, we grow more with stuff that we are good already, because we become more and more greatful.
Primaly, we think that by trying what we already know, it makes us better each time.
Generic_school made a survey to all seniors to get everyone's opinion base on ''Unless you try to do something beyod what you have mastered, you will never grow''. sevendy five percent of students desagree, they said that you learnd more and more of what ever you already know.
In my expecience I have become more and more good of what I already know.
Therefore, knowing more what you already know and you are good at it, you will become better and better each time, never give up on what you are already good at.
Secondary, expericences make us better, we learnd more of we already know, of what we are capable to do.
We have a company that has to do with Generic_school, they go to a lot of schools to talk the the juniors, and seniors of what they think about Emerson's statement.
fifty percent agree and the other fifty persent desagree, because some student say that we need more new stuff to keep succesing in life, and other say that we can still seccess with what you already know.
In my opinion I totaly desagree, sometimes we can keep and keep trying what we already mastered is either you become better or just fail in life.
Therefore trying your best and working hard base on what you already know helps you to grow more in life. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
ECF265A73C7E | According to the Washington Post, there has been an increase in student population in schools around the U.S. they are being crowed with more and more students every year. Because of this more students in the future will need to take online classes at home instead of going to the school and doing so. Being able to do class work at home, will benefit the students that live far from the school; they attend and make it easier for them to get the education they still need. Distance learning will also help the students manage there time better. Because of the fact the students don't have to go and spend time at the actual school. The travel time it takes the students to go and come back from school would not be a factor anymore if they attend online classes in there house.
A reason distance learning could benefit students is that it could improve student attendance. If you were sick and could not go to school you can work on the things you will miss at school. Another thing is that for the students that struggle with transportation to get to school on certain days; instead they can finish the school work at home which would be easier instead of stressing over how they are going to get to school. The way it would benefit students is that it will help them focus more on work than instead of focusing on transportation to school.
This could also benefit on the days that school gets canceled. For example school gets canceled because of a snow day or some other reason. Something that is really big on news right now is the outbreak of the Coronavirus. The U.S. is deciding to close schools in certain states around the country. Distance learning could benefit by if some schools were to actually close, it would not affect student education as much as it would if there was not a way to learn at home. If there was a snow day and some parents did not want there kids to walk to school on the sidewalk because it was dangerous; and they could drive them either because of the fact they had to go to work. A easier and safer way would be just to have them do the school tasks in there house. In the past when it rained or snowed really hard and the next day I had to go to school sometimes the roads would be flooded or their would have been an acident that prevent me from getting to school. In those cases it would be nice to have the option to learn from home instead of going through the trouble to figure out a way on how to get to school.
In some cases it is better for the students to work at school than it is at home. A reason being is at school they can meet new friends and be in a better working and studying envoirment. Another thing would be that their are less things that could distract you from completing work. For example when you are at home you have all your computers, phone, TV, and things like a Xbox that could get you distracted or off topic. When you are at school their are friends that can distract you to but when you are in class it is hard to do anything else besides work. The reason is that your teacher won't let you go on your phone or talk to your friends as much before you finish with your in class assignment. A Benefit from going to school is that a lot of the things that you learn come from talking or hearing it from people at school. So if you attend classes at home instead of going to school it impacts some things that you could actually learn from going to school. A lot of the things I have learned in my past is from talking or asking a friend how to complete an assignment, if you are at home and have nobody to talk to it is not as beneficial as it is going to school.
The fact being that their are benefits from learning at home and learning at school. Because when you are at home you can get distracted easier cause their is no teacher that is watching over you to complete your assignments. But when you are at school you are surrounded by other kids that could talk to you and disturb you on doing your work. Their are pros and cons in both situations but having the option to attend classes at home is better than not having the ability to. Because of that I think that distance learning is better in most cases cause it gives you more options in how you can complete work. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
ED06CD30103F | Have you ever wondered when is it a good idea for people to start thinking about what they want to do for a living. They are many reasons why high school kids need to start thinking about what they want to do for a living. Im going to tell you why it is a good idea for high school kids to have a (an) idea of what they want to do for a living. However, some people think it's a bad idea for them to start thinking what they want to do for a living.
If people dont start knowing what they like at a young age then they will not know what the want to do in the future. We should start knowing what we want to do by the end of high school for many reasons. When we finish high school we should go straight to college so we can study about what we want to do. They're many people in the world that still dont know what they want to do; and that is because they didn't know what they want to do. You should always know what you want to do for a living once your out of high school.
People in high school only think about living life and not thinking about what they want to do fro their life. They're many people in high school (including me) that just want to live life with out a job and just got party. Life doesn't for that way. If you want to work at McDonald, Burger king, etc the you won't be able to party like you want. All your going to do is work, work, and work all day. If you start think about what you want to do for a living right now, then when your older you wont be working all day. You will be able to take a vacation or have time with your family.
Some people think that if you wait until your an adult to know what you want to do, then its better, but thats not what I think. You should know what you want to do by the end of high school. Then when your older, like in your 50s or 60s then you can retire and not bust your butt of working at a minimum wage job for your whole life. Thats my reasons why I think its better to know what you want to do for a living once your in high school. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
ED0A8E614649 | Techonology has becoming powerful that let students and teachers to give and receive classes online. Disadvantages or adventages of taking classes online? These question are faced today by students deciding taking online classes. Often students work part or full time jobs while going to school or collage so their time is valuable. these students want to make the right decisions in choosing classes so knowing the disaventage and adventages is important. I believe that online classes is a good opportunity for students as it gives flexibility, they often offer any type of class desired and provide access to faculty, and they often offer accelerate courses.
To begin with, one of the best adventage of online classes is flexibility. A student can usually take the course any time during the day or week. While there are custom essay writing and researching assigments to complete, the precise time to take the class often depends on the student's desire. Students who work are able to take the class based on their schedule. Many students work on afternoon. The flexibility makes it possible for a person to complete the course, while attending school or collage courses in person might be imposible due to their work schedules.
Secondly, another great adventage of online courses is that almost any type of course can be found online. Distance learning course are often avaliable from a number of collages. A person can simply use the google to find a class. While most people believe a disadventage of taking online courses is that the students can not have access to faculty a member, the fact is that many online courses offer a grater access to faculty. Shy students are able to ask questons and receive the answer back almost inmediately.
Lastly, Online courses are convenient for most undergraduate and graduate students who can study when they want and they can finish writing or researching assigments based on their own person schedules. The fact is online classes offer flexibility and conveniece that are often vital to students who work and have families. In addition, many students are looking for classes that are advanced to complete the course faster. The best way to advance in the class is to make it online because in the regular schools it takes a long time as there are students who get behind and the teachers wait for them since everyone has to go at the same time.
To conclude, with online classes, students do all the work at their own pace. As long as they meet their deadlines and participate apropriately online. Also, studying online requires more self motivation and time mangement skills because students will spend a lot of time on their own without someone physically close to keep them focused on deadlines. Online course will not only teach students geology or poetry, it will also help them become more self motivated, a trait that will make them stand out in the workplace and beyond. It will teach educators to be mature choosing right decisions as it will make them explore more and be students with an open mind. | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
ED185DEBD213 | There is a debate abou to take a musica, a drama, or arts claas, should students need to take a electives classes. Some people believe students need to take a music, a drama, or art classes. I believe students need to take electives classes , so students can choose the classes they need , students have more oportunity to choose classes they like, and they can choose the classes with more opportunity for get more credit. Finally students can choose the claases they need to graduate.
First reason, is students can choose the classes they need , so they can have more oportunity to choose the classes they need for get the diploma, they can choose the classes for get more credit, this is a good idea students can choose a electives classes so tehy can talk with the teachers to choose classes tehy need to graduated. Many others students do not like music or drama claases, students have oportunity if they can choose electives classes so they can have few classes, they can have more time after school if they have a job.
Second reason, is students have more oportunity to choose classes tehy like, many others students doesn't like arts or drama classes, in my opinion this is a good idea students can choose classes they like, this help students to work in classes they like and have a good grades.
Last reason, students can choose classes with more oportunity, students can choose classes can help then to get credit for the diploma, students can talk witg teachers they can help then to get claases they need, this is a oportunity to students they work after school, this can help many students to get a good grades and pass all they classes.
In conclusion, this argument can help students to choose classes that can help then to pass the grade or maybe to graduated, this have many oportunity to choose electives classes, in my opinion i dont like drama and arts classes. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
ED35A1FF5ACC | Everything in life is enjoyable but we just have to find the fun in it by using our imagination. A test can be enjoyable because you can proof that you smarter than other people by getting a high score and thats fun and proof the people that they were wrong about you. Life is enjoyable because you have a lot of memories that happen since you were born until whatever age you are now but time is relative so don't stop having fun in life. Enjoyment can come from many things like getting a goal in a game, a hundred in a test, accomplishing something for the first time but there are many things that can bring joy in life. As you get older you learn new things, you get wiser but also you have more befits and disadvantages. For example, adults and older people have money and with money you can get things and spent it in anything you want and plus y'all can drive and go places and thats what people enjoy too. A huge disadvantage for adults is that they have to work for 8 or more hours but either way imagination never gets old but instead it gets newer. Adults and kids or teens however y'all want to call us but we are the same the only difference that we are younger but we all have a imagination awake or hibernating and thats what allows joy in peoples life even for the people that barely have it awake. Everyone needs to live life at its fullest being joyful trying new things like sports, music, or even puzzles but time is relative you stopping yourself because you think your getting old but thats not the case do everything you want to do before time runs out for you and you'll leave with regret but everyone need to wake up there inner kid inside of them and start living life without regrets try new things, talk to new people, spend more time with your parter or family etc. but make new memeries and be jolly and have such enjoyable life to new things you'll try. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
ED40DCB2F669 | Do you think is a good idea for student to identify a career at a young age?
In this paper, I will argue about the idea if students should commit to a career at a young age.
I think that commit to a career at a young age is a great idea, because it help student to prepare for the future.
I think is a great idea, because students decide there future at a young age. The student are not going to have time to be doing bad things with there friends, they are going to focus more in the school and in there future. And that way we as student we are going to have batter future, we can be more batter in what we do. It will help us to be more mature, it will help us to act like adult, because we are doing things of adult. it will help us to appreciate the life.
I know many people that they witch they could have a better career, but they don't have it,because they haven't being associate with career courses. I have a friend that he would love to have the career that he wants, but he didn't had experience in what he want, because he had never being associate with the career that he wanted, when he took the decision to have the carer that he wanted, it was to latte. That is why is batter to commit to a career at a young age, because it will help us to be more professional in are career. That will help us to be more responsible. It will help us a lot to know what we want for are future and what is better for us. It will help us to decide are are future.
I have a sister that she have great skill, and she is really focus in what she wants to be in her future, and she is doing her best to make her dream's reality, however is to hard to make her dream really because I think she is not ready for the career that she wants, she don't have that much experience.
It would be much better if she would commit to that career at a young age. She would have more experience, she would be more prepare, she would be more professional. I know many people that would love to have a better career, but they don't have it because they don't have experience and they give up easily, because they feel that they are not ready. commit to a carer at a young age it make us to to more professional.
Some people say that commit to a career at a young age is not a good idea, because they are to young and they don't know what they want, and Also they are going say, that commit to a career at a young age will ex tress the student and that student are not going to have time for there friends, they would argue that identify a career at a young age is not good idea, because student at a young age are not ready for identify there career, they would say many things, but they are wrong because identify a career at a young age make us, as student more professional and help as to know what we want to be in are future, and identify a career at a young age is like identify are future.
Identify are future at a young age make us more professional.
In the future the number of unemployment people will decrease, because the student are going to be more professional, they will commit to a career at a young age and that way the life will be more easy. It would be less people doing bad things, the students are going to be more responsible, we will be more better in what we do. but for that we have to give the example to other generation. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
ED4CAEB0D7A3 | A character is defined by what tdo they do? like for Example the main character in the story is the one that has almost the most attention of people, and others are just supporting the story, But can we make our own character in the story? A character is defined by what do they do into the story made by their improvements, skills and influences.
For Example: A character that like to be actor in a story is because he likes to be a character into a story.
Here are some Reasons
A character will be himself something that He like to do in a story and not what people want because too many people like the same story and everyone has different opcions.
a person that thinks that He create His own character it's totally wrong what happened is that He laike the character a lot and He thinks that the character is doing what He want.
That;s why many people thing that they can create their own character when the only thing that they do is to choose their favorite character in the story or een in a movie.
A character is the one that do all that he can give and not the one that has more power because in the story their work is to make people thing that what happen in the story is true.
For example at the end of the story some character are acting like they're dead or any other reason to tell the public that the story is real and make people thing that they are into the story too.
Like I said the job of characters is to get the attention of the person who is reading the story or watching a movie.
But going back to the question if we can make our own character?
We can't make our own character, Is just that our favorite character is formed by influences, and improvements to make hem a better character in the story. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
ED57CFEC1CF1 | I agree, because I think the influence helpen people when he or she smocking to much and need to stop smocking because the smoking is to bad for the body and think. The other I
think is to bad is the alcold because when people drinking to much after making crasy.
I thinking the position is becuase the parent don't influences when she or he are younger.
For example; when I,m childrem I living with my grandmother but she tell me when you have like 13 or 14 years old don't smoking because the cigari is not good for your life. And other example she tell me is don't drinking beer.
Im remenber one thing and I don't forget is when my grandmother tould me is contion with yours goals and don't stoped.
The other influences in my life is when came to united usted I don't speaking english but now I speaking more better because I ready book when stay home or when I have time. And other example because I speaking more better is when I'm not undertand the question I tell my teacher can helpen me in this question because
I don't undertand to mucho.
One example when the teacher tell you and you listen is if you need speaking more better is listen to the teacher when she or he sprey something and you paid atention.
One example when I finish the high school is I want to be a soccer pleyer and I want to player in one famous team. Becuase what is one goals in my life and because the soccer is the best player in the mood. I also what is one goals for me is because when a have like 5 or 6 years old I play for the first time. I think is the first becuase all of my family love soccer and players.
My other goals is finish the high school next years. And start to work for helpen my parent and make my money for something I need for myself. And also because I need to make money for pay my college. And for pay car also. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
ED6070D470FF | I despise it when someone your close to says "you can't be like me you have to be better than that." What right do you have to speak on what I have done, when you have done things people could not even imagine? This is why when it comes to someone you look up too or base your personality off of, make sure it is one who has credibility. Like people always say "you are who you hang around with." For example, being around friends who act in illegal activities your bound to do those things too. A man with honor, integrity, and takes responsibility for what he does will be respected because of his behavior.
Being a good role model is especially true when it comes to children. For example, have you ever had a little cousin or your bestfriend's baby sibling copy the same exact words that come out of your mouth? Be careful what you talk about around a kid because they repeat what you say; furthermore, it might not seem like it, but they can process everything you say. This is how in parts of the country people have various accents and pronounce words differently. When you grow up in a certain neighborhood or even in you household, while aging you will be using the different terms and phrases people around you use because that's all you ever known growing up. So staying away from words that can't be used in a school or around familly is your best bet.
A celebrity has an even greater audience when it comes to setting an example for others. People of all types of ages watch them, they are the ones who set the trends, the news revolves around, and control social media. When a celebrity messes up they get the most hate; however, if a celebrity does a great deed like a charity event then they're praised for it. They attract the most attention and most of those eyes are teenagers, who need the most advice and a figure to follow. For teenagers this is who decides for them if they'll be on the streets or in the books because famous people are who they spend most of their time with. Teenagers are always watching, whether on social media, a reality show, a sports game, or a movie, celebrities are dominating the world right now.
No mater who it is, a person always have some type of influence on somebody. That is why you should just hold that anger in next time you get in a fight because people are watching. Do some charity or show them you cleaning up the environment; in addition, just effect others in a positive way. However some would say setting example does not matter or no one pays attention to that, it is suprising how many people are effected by a person's behavior. Showing a good example with behavior does not necessarily mean change who you are, it just means be careful of the words that are exiting your mouth. No one would want their own kid to be effected by a bad role model. | 4.5 | 4 | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
ED74D2C2403B | Sometimes take classes from home not can be helf students to improve their learning. Although some schools offer distances learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way online or video conferencing. I disagree to students take the classes on home because they not learn the same as in the school, if students have a question, or doubt did not have a teacher to asking, and Students did not have the same opcion like others students.
The students who take classes from home, not learn the same in the school and this can be are difficult for them. For example, most of students lose the test because they forget the impormation that they learn in online classes and the time of the test they not remember enyting. Sincerity, take classes from home it is difficult for students the short learning because they not have the same capacity like others students. The students can be improve in the school more that from home, because from home they teaching they self. In addition, most of school believe that give classes from home can be helf students, but this is a big error.
If the students have a question, or doubt did not have a teacher to asking since, they answer themself. For example, sometimes the students do not know how to make homework, project, etc and they need someone to helf them. Also, every students need a teacher to explain everything that they need to make, and if they make the classes from home is impossible to make the thing good if did not have a teacher. It not the same to make the calsses online or in school because in online it is person who teaching for only a short moment, nevertheless in the school the teacher teaching for like 8 hours and helf in sonthing that students need. In effect,
some students do not have capacity to make the classes from home, they needing to make the classes in the school to learn more.
Students did not have the same opcion like others students like the time or the learning. For example, most of them have a job and they not have the time to take the classes from home, because they lose the time in the job and when they going to the home they are tired and only going to sleep. While, the others students improve their life in the schools the others students who make the classes onlone not learn enything because they not have time. Make the classes from home it is not necesary for students because they can going to school every day and work after school and with this method they have more chance to improve they learning. Truly, The school give the option but the students have the choice.
In conclutiong, they not learn in the classes from home that in the school, and this can be affect tehir learning. They teaching themself because in home tehy do not have a teacher to helf them. THey not have same opportinity like others students because they can be not have time to make the all thing. Some school have this option but it is not a good idea for students because they not focus in online classes and they fail. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
ED81EC443A69 | I remember one summer vacation, that my family and I took, where we went to another state to visit another relative that we haven't seen in awhile. Summer vacation had been the same for many years, summer vacation is when teenagers take a break from school to enjoy what they like to do during their free time. By having a long summer vacation, does not affect students to retain information from the past. teens should know that summer vacation is when they can enjoy their break to do what they want for fun.
First reason, why teens should know that summer vacation is for them to enjoy, is because they can spend time with their family. For example, the whole family can got to another state to visit another relatives that they have not seen in awhile. By spending more time with their family; consequently, teens can be more closer to their family. Teens can also, enjoy their summer vacation with their family by playing video games, watching movies, and go on a road trip.
another reason, why teens should know that summer vacation is for them to enjoy, is that they can hangout with friends. teenagers hangs out with friends to go to a party, or to watch a movie. by hanging out with friends teens can do what they think is fun for them and their friends. For example, teens can have a fun time playing pool with their friends or just by going to a gym. In addition, teens can also have fun with their friends by having a sleep over or go for a camping trip.
Lastly, on why students should know that summer vacation, is for them to enjoy, is that they are away from school, by being away from school students can have more time to have fun and do the things that are important to them. For example, students can stay up late and does not have to wake up early in the morning. However, teens can have more time in their hands, instead of having to learn.
In conclusion, these are the three most important opinions, on why teens should know that their summer is for them to enjoy, by having more time for summer vacation, teens can enjoy more time with their family and friends. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
ED8E7F6A56DD | Opportunity to Graduate Early
Some school districts offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. The programs include some activities that can be complete during the three years, taking place in summer or after school. Student also cannot take elective classes, they need to take the necessaries to be able to graduate with all the requirements. This programs give a lot of opportunities for students. This is a good idea for student to finish high school in three and enter to college or the work force one year early because they will be able to be educate younger and earn time.
Students have a lot of labor opportunities in jobs if they are able to finish their education early and being younger. For example, to work in a company; normally the company employer wants to have young employees, but at the same time, employees with experience. If students finished early they education they can begin to work earning experience and skills. Having a positive result for their capacities and opportunities for be selected or contract to the jobs. Also young people have more physical resistance than elder people, in this way they can permanence working more time and harder. This kind of opportunities are benefits for their future employments.
Earn time it is important for every person and more important for students. For example, they can accomplish college early. If student finish high school in three years they can begin go to college one year early. In this way they can begin their preparation for the career they choose to study and finish it to be a person educate and have a stable employment. Save and earn time forming part of this programs help the students to have a better future with a good education.
There is a lot of people that are disagree about the programs that allow high school student to graduate in three years. Some points of view of this people are that student should have fun in summer instead to go to school. Also they say that student should not stay after school, they should take advantage of their time to focus on other activities or working. However, student should be allow to form part of this programs because it is give beneficial opportunities for their education. Benefits in jobs and ingress early to college.
There are some school programs that give students the change to graduate in three years and not in the normal four years. Students should use this programs because it is have a lot of beneficial possibilities to take advance. Advance to finish their education younger to have better opportunities in jobs. Advance to earn time, finish their education, and have a career early. Be part of this programs is the best idea for students that want to improve them self. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
ED937FC56246 | The one thing I hope I accomplish is to get a high paying job. I would want a high paying job since it could pay off many things that I don't need to pay later. My reasons is to travel to many places I've never been to, buy many things as I want without spending my family money's, and I would try many different foods that could be expensive.
One reason why my accomplishment is getting a high paying job is to travel around the world or place that I never been to. Traveling around the world could be really expansive since your going to buy many things you would need or don't need. Sometimes traveling depends on where you are going since some places are cheap or expansive. Having a lot of a good amount while traveling is a good because you could do anything you want with that money while your not at home. I think having a high paying job is good for traveling is not always cheap, you can buy anything you've ever wanted and not worrying much about using to much money.
The next reason is to buy many things as I want without spending any or some of my parents or family members money. This is important because it wouldn't matter much if you used you own money but if you use your family money you might have to pay them back later on. Another reason is going out when you want to and you dont really want to spend your family money because you need a lot since you could be going to many places. When you want to take your family out to a really nice place or a place where you think they would enjoy or relax, you can just surprise them by already getting it done and paid off. Another reason it is a good idea to get a high paying job, to not spend your family money.
The last reason is trying many different foods that could be expansive. From my experiences I know that most places has really expansive food that is really good. I also know that going to a super fancy restaurant is expansive since all the foods could be really good or just a rip off. Sometimes going to really fun places or vacations foods are expansive because it could taste good and many people would might want to try some, also if it was cheap many people would've gone crazy. Paying for good expansive food is worth it then paying too much for something that taste bad.
In conclusion that a high paying job is good for traveling to places you've never been to, spending lots of money without using your families money, and eating or buying really expansive foods. Going to places you have never been to is great. Spending our own money lets us buy anything we want. Also buying or trying new foods is really nice when you can buy it. This is why I want my accomplishment to be a high paying job. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
ED9C6EDC5601 | Adding another hour and thirty minutes to the school schedule is just a waste of time! It means having to miss time with my family. It also means having to wake up earlier to get to school. Teachers would have to stay back and work longer but probably get paid the same amount for ten hours. So I disagree with having to add another hour and thirty minutes.
First of all I don't think kids would like to wake up extra early and get ready for school. Once the students get to the school they would be half asleep and it would be harder for them to focus. The students would have trouble staying awake and they would have more attitude then what they have now. More students would be marked tardy and there would more students skipping classes just to get some sleep. Not every student would stay awake through out the day and finish there work.
Adding an hour and thirty minutes would also have an impact on teachers. They already have to wake up extra early in order to be here on time and stay late to work on grading papers, going to meetings, etc. It would be harder for them to stay awake and teach. Teachers don't even get paid enough. So why would they want to stay back and serve more time.
Some after school activities would get canceled and student that would need those after school activities would get mad. Complaints would start coming in and parents would get mad and ask why their child is failing. Some sports would be canceled and and athletes would get frustrated because they won't be motivated or asked to go to a certain collage. Students would get low grades if after school activities were to get canceled. The school would become a laughing stock.
Adding an hour and thirty minutes would have a bad effect on the school and the people in it. There would be more trouble then there is now and students wouldn't get motivated. Grade levels would go down and students won't focus. Teachers would have trouble staying up for ten hours. Family time would be shortened as well. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 3.5 |
EDA0DCA3FC41 | I don't think that school districts should allow students to graduate early. I believe that this is a bad idea because students have to take more classes than what you usually take, students would have to stay after school or maybe even take summer school, so they can get enough credits to graduate early, and students would be very stressed having to learn all this material for each of their classes, since they won't be taking any electives. For these reasons, I don't think school districts should allow students to graduate early.
Students who are graduating early, will have to take extra classes during the school year, so that they can earn the credits for their classes. In many schools, you have to have at least four credits in one subject, so that means the student will most likely have to take two classes of one subject to earn the credits for that one specific subject. Some students graduating early, might have a difficult time being all caught up in each of their classes, which can lead to them having to stay after school to take tutoring classes in case they don't understand the material being taught.
Most students, will either have to take school during the summer or they stay after school to take extra classes. Students who stay after or do summer school do this, so that they can earn all the credits they need to graduate early. Students who choose to do summer school don't have to take that many classes when they go back to school, since they already took some classes during the summer. Students who choose to stay after school to take extra classes, will have to stay in school longer, so they can learn all the material for the subjects that they are taking after school.
Students will be stressed and under pressure when it comes to learning and studying for each of their classes. They will be stressed because they're going to have to study for a lot of their classes, when they take tests and sometimes they can have tests in multiple classes on the same day, which means they are going to have to study for multiple classes. Same thing applies with homework, they will feel under pressure to get all their work done. They wouldn't be taking any electives, so that means all their classes will be hard, since elective classes are usually easy.
This is why I think that graduating early is a bad idea, because students will be very tired and stressed trying to catch up on school work. If you do four years of High School instead of three years, everything will go a lot slower than three years and also you will be less stressed, when it comes to catching up on school because you will have less classes to worry about. This is why it's better to do four years of High School. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 |
EDA3FF6D2DCA | This is true for me "example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing.". If you talk someone for one thing, information, film, music, game, ... Best support for your idea is examples. I think is the only thing for support your idea. You don't have other options But never mind you have a one more way for influence others everybody know this way because is the best way of everything it is the money.
Once upon a time me and my friend talking about one film (i did not remember the film name know.) we are saying only examples (because we know is the best way for support our ideas) he is saying one example i am saying another and we are talking like a 30 or 35 min finally i gave up and i said if you accept my idea i will buy a large size pizza and he said OK.
After for this conversation i learned example and money is not the main thing influencing others; it is the only thing
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EDD899D4131D | Generic_Name thinks the school should control students involvement in extracurricular activities. Students are in extracurricular activities to enrich their educational experiences. Some people think schools should control student involvement in extracurricular activities because they would know if the students grades are good enough to enroll in a activity or more. Other people think students and families have the decision to pick whether students should be involved in a extracurricular activities because the school can't force you do a sport you dont want to do and they can't push away your dreams of playing a sport. Generic_Name thinks schools need to control students involvements in the extracurricular activities because not a lot of parents care if they children have time for extra assignments or they don't care if their kids stay out late to participate in any activity related to school. First of all, people think schools should decide students involvement in activities. Some students want to play many sports but not all of them will have time to complete homework assignments or study fr any quizzes and tests. For example Generic_Name's older sister use to play two sports. One was related to school and the other one was outside of school. She never had time to do her homework so her grade was going down. She also had to study for her tests but she didn't have time since she was practicing her sport too much and so she failed the grade. Secondly, other people think students and families have the decision to pick whether students should be involved in activities. An example is Generic_Name's friend wouldn't want the school to not let him play the sport he always been wanting to play. Generic_Name's friend thinks it wouldn't be fair to force him to play a sport he doesn't like. Generic_Name, Generic_Name's friend would like to play a sport to distract his mind if he is stressing or is having depression. Generic_Name also wants to have the choice to pick any sport he would like to play but also wants to finish his work in class or study his tests during lunch or before school so he doesn't fail. Lastly, the majority of people think schools need to control students involvement in activities because not a lot of parents care if their children have time for assignments or to study for tests. In general parents don't care about their kids schools or grades so they won't worry if their kids are out late for any sport. One example, Generic_Name's aunt don't care about his cousin Generic_Name so she is always out late. Generic_Name wants to try a sport in school so she can get a scholarship to go to college since her parents don't care about her but she wants to be someone in life and do better things. She wants to decide on her own if she should join a sport or not. I think the school should control the students involvement in sports. The school should control the students involvements in sports because they're can be students that want to get a scholarship by playing a sport but also want to have time to finish classwork they couldn't finish in class or study their test to not fail the class. I also think school should control the students involvement in activities to take their mind of things that are distracting them or stressing them. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
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some school have a program when the students they coming now they going to tace the test to teacher no how much they no English in then they to larne more English in then theyr going class they have now students then no English in then they lerun English they going to now school when the school is over we Hera somerschool they going in same we can larne more English if they dont have samerschool they gane forgat English some students dont going the teacher can help older students in younger students some school have difrint class in they dont have some program when one school have defiant in the ather have defiant but some of they have same but same dont | 1.5 | 1 | 2 | 1.5 | 2 | 1.5 |
EDE0A58B0B47 | Who wants to work alone when you have a chance to work with a group like common! Working in a group is so much beneficial because within a group your able to get your work done quicker and efficient. "who doesn't want that? I know I do". With a group you can also interact and descuse with your peers about your work and get feed back.
Weather or not you agree or disagree with this position. One good thing about working alone is that there are no group distractions. Example you might have that one person in your group that does nothing and just fools around the whole time. Never...
One of the benefits in working in a group is being able to get your work done quicker rather than working by yourself. For example what if you have an SA due in a week and a slideshow to go with it? But you had a choice to to work by yourself or within a group,''I wouldn't think twice about it, I would go with a group".
Also In groups you can discuse and interact with your peers. Groups can also help one another and give eachother feed back depending on what your working one.
Another benefit working within a group is being able to have multiple ideas, thoughts rather than just you having to think and work on everything by yourself. This is the best thing there is to working in a group is that all of you have ideas weather there the same or diffrent,groups can combine eachothers thoughts and ideas to make somthing incredible.
Weather its working in a group project at school or your partisipating in a high end business group its all set to say that working in a group is way benificial than working alone. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
EDFFA0E4D88C | Should school weeks consist on four days with days of 10 hours of school ? on my opinion there is no point on doing that, people that work is going to miss hours at work because of this, students are going to use that extra day to not study and be home doing nothing, and people instead of using electronics at school are going to use them more at home.
Some students work after school, they need time to go home and get ready for work and with school days being longer it would be pointless to work, you will be making 3 or 4 hours a day, some students,specially on senior year, need to pay bills or make money for the future to pay college. on my opinion the best thing to do is to keep the regular five days at school, and to keep working at least six hours a day.
Teachers and staff members are thinking that students are going home and they will do their homework or study, but what they dont think is that some people need help with school work, or they feel more comfortable studying at school, now with that less day they will be more students failing projects and exams, for example if a students used to study at the library after school he is not going to be able because it is going to be late by the time he gets out of school, they should keep the normal schedule for all the students that are getting benefits from it
People wants to save energy and money by taking away a day of school, but they dont think that students will be going home to use their cellphones, watch TV, play video games, and a lot of more things that consume energy, if they stay at school they are not going to be able to use their cellphones or any other electronic device, they will just use it during breaks and lunch, so that is less time than being home a whole extra day.
For all this reasons a think that it would be better for students to keep with the regular schedule and keep coming to school everyday, for the regular hours, in that case they will not miss any hours at work, they will have more time to study and to do homework at school, and they will not use their electronic devices as much as they would at home, even though the idea of saving money and electricity its such a good idea some students dont understand that and they will not do it at home. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
EE392BB6CFD1 | kind,caring,nice. Those words explain the meaning of a person if they are trying to be their self. Although some people may think its okay to be yourself in a world where its always trying to change you , nevertheless , some people may think is not okay to be in a world where its trying to always trying to change you into something else because people should express them self how they want to they shouldnt be in a world where its constantly trying to make them into something else and people should live how they wanna live.
For example , people should express them self how they want to be they shouldnt be in a world where its constantly trying to make them into something else. People have all right to be who they wanna be but if you in a world where it is trying to change you that is not a great accomplishment. Clearly people should be who they wanna be.
Therefore , people should live how they wanna live. Everyone picks how they wanna live in a world some people pick to live in a world where people get to pick who they wanna be and some people pick for them self who they wanna be. But its NOT okay to live in a world where everyone picks for you u not making a great accomplishment for yourself. If your making a change for your self you should be living in a world where it doesnt judge you for trying to be something you wanna be and you turn your self around and be come something where everyone want you to be a they call it "great accomplishment" . | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
EE3E133A2D55 | Positive attitude is the key to a successful and happy life. Now days people with positive attitude can achieve things so easily, because they have the confidences of doing such activity with their best. Students with positive attitude can get higher grades, being on tasks, and never give up. Which will impact on their way of learning, understanding the topic, and do better in their exams. Having positive attitude will increase students' braveness towards their goals. They will have the confidence of knowing what they are doing throughout their career. 4/5 percent of People in the world have positive attitude to their daily activities and they are successful in it, but the rest who is not showing positive attitude towards their issues will lose the right path, and stay behind. It is important for people to have positive attitude, because it makes our identity, and someone with that energy will always be the best in his/her duties. Having positive attitude will make the person be successful in his life, caring a lot about others, and get better job.
In order to be successful person in our life we should have positive attitude and give our best effort to achieve our goals. Having positive perspectives will keep high level students away from ordinary, because the way of their thinking, ability of knowing, and taking actions to solve their problems, but with positive attitude it will make them be successful person in their live. People with positive attitude will act with integrity and honesty. Also, they will respect the dignity of others, and take responsibilities for their actions and consequences. However, they seek and share ideas, information, and their experiences with others to better understand and change the world. They will take advantage of the available opportunities such as, scholarships that will help them pay for their college fees, great colleges offers which will make them reach their goals, and be a successful person in his/her journey. Their will be struggles that would keep them from reaching their goals, but with such attitude it will keep them focus on their studies, and become a successful person in his career.
Secondly, with positive attitude people care a lot about others, they show empathy and respect to the needs and feeling of others. They do not judge others by their looks, color, clothing, race, knowledge, and ability of doing what is needed. They are open minded accept others on what they are good at, not on where they came from, or what they have done in the past. They are very much creative, take actions on what is wrong, and help others in their struggles. Also, they volenteerly participate and help others in doing their home works, science labs, math problems, and getting ready for a tests. People who have positive attitude will respect the society, and those who are living in that society. Always care about others, talk respectively to others, and do not let anyone take advantage of their kindness. Always help others in their duties, and respect the environment.
Lastly, If someone is showing positive attitude towards school they will aced it, get good grades which will get them the best offers from the top colleges, and after graduating college, they will get better job offers that they cannot ever dream about. It is all depended to they ability and having the right attitude. everyone will trying to hire people with such an attitude because, they know that they have the ability of doing the specific requirement for the work that is required to be done on time. Everyone is choosing people with positive attitude because, they know that they are the one they looking for the specific positions, to take their companies to their highest level. They have the knowledge, and the resources that they can use to get done whatever that has been asked for. They will also get paid a high amount of money that they never thought about. They will live their life the way that they want to live. With the positive attitude the are building a strong bond of trust with the community that they are working with. People with such an attitude will never give up, face the challenges, and be focus on their duties.
To conclude, having positive attitude is one of the most valuable factors that everyone should have during their life time. It will drive people with positive attitude to their successful life, having empathy for others, and get qualify for their dream job that they always want to see their selves in. It is important for everyone to have such an attitude to achieve their goals. Having positive attitude is the consideration of the identity that people are leaving behind for others to learn from, and run on the same truck. It help us to have the confidence of communicating to someone, getting participation in projects, and better understanding of this world. Positive attitude is the identification of our self to the world. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
EE58A33AD551 | In my opinion, I gree with the Prime Minister Winston Churchill because the enthusiasm in the life is everything because without the entusiasm we are nothing, we can't go nowhere because we don't has the enthusiam, if we want something like jod, career, something the we want in life, we need the enthusiams first. Failure make people to give up when they mess up something but they has to keep going and doing thing possitive. Now i going to writting some example and information about the enthusiams and failure.
First, In this life if we not make a mistake (failure) we are not going to learn anything but we has to know if we fail we always has to try again and again no better what. We always need to thing possitive and has the enthusiams to do it again and get what ever we want in this life but always with the enthusiams because we need to has enthusiams to try again. Don't drop out your dreams if thing not going well.
Second, we need the enthusiams in our lifes no better if we failure, the enthusimas is the impulse to keep going and get everything like finish high schools, past the test, has a good grade but first thing possite and be enthusiams in things you really want to be successful in the future.
Third, the enthusiam is a great enjoyment, interest or approval . I think everyone has interest in something and we can make it, we can has everything but if propose in life. For me, my enthusiams is graduate from high school to make mother proud of me because thats why she came to United State to give me a better future and now she enthusiams to see her daugther graduate from high schools.
Addition, "Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm" in this quote said failure to failure is an instance of something not functioning properly but is not mean to give up just doing again but never loss enthusiasm to thing you love or want in the future just keep going make yourself proud of you and but never lost the entusiasm you has for things you love just because people talk bad things or thing is not good well, life give lesson to see if we are strong. Enthusiasm is everything in life.
conclusion, I will said that Minister Winston Churchill is rigth because how i said in the beginning of my first paragraphs enthusiams is everything in life, we need to has enthusiams in everything we do to make it better. Failure sometimes make persons to stay in the same place, failure don't let people to keep going because they think everything they do is failure and never try again or be unsuccessful in achieving something. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
EE6114478ECF | Business manager
Hello I hope you doing well, my name is Generic_Name. The present letter is to let you now that I'm fascinating of your business management, and I'll be glad to visit it. As you probably know many students are compelling to participate, indagate, and discover about distintic occupations in the work place. I think that it will be the most exiting thing that I could do because probably I can find an appropiated place of my interest to work at.
In fact, I can learn about the resposability and most of the times the presure that some workers have. The importance of follow the rules, every little thing in the work place it could be important for me in the future.
To adapt in differents positions and the most imporatnt thing is to love what I would do, to be an applicated, and apassionated person in the place that I would like.
Nevertheless, many people hate their work because they never had the chance to visit many different places that they wanted, couldn't achive their goal or may be the postion that they wanted was alredy taken by someone else.
The resposability at work has to be the most important, if a worker doesn't have the resposability in their job it will be a big problem, they might not care about the job and the things that their boss asked for.
I would like to be the person who has the responsability and all the interest of my job, and be proud of myself by doing the right things.
Althought, I can learn day by day how to impprove without an advice of the manager and be the best worker in my area. Many people think that work is only to get money, and bored and they are there just because they need to pay their bills, the main reason of work is to love what you like and enjoy doing it. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
EE6ECB910EB2 | In my opinion, the idea to take off one day of school can have some benefits and some disadvantages, so is bad because in my opinion is a totaly change of schedules and students who work after school can have problems with that, other thing is, for me is not a big chage if they want to save some resources and enegy, but also can be good because the students and teachers rest more and they can save a bit of energy.
The students who have a job can have problems with their bosses and it can make a more hard schedule for the student because they don't gonna have any time to rest and they can have troubles at school if they don't rest the necesari for their health and their consentration at school; other negative thing is because it's unnecessary because it's not a big chage, if the school want to save energy one day don't gonna make a big change and also, maybe it's okay as it's and I think the original schedule with five days of school is good for all and it don't make any problem, and the last negative thing I see is the hours of work of the teachers, the teachers maybe don't do enough hours of work and don't get the same payment and maybe can affect them in that way.
These idea also have positive things like the chance for students and teachers to rest more or just for students, they have more time to do homework or work, other positive thing is to save a bit of energy and some resources, in some way the school can get benefit of these.
The problem with the schedules and the save of energy and resources, are some of the benefits and disadvantages I thought for these theme and in my opinion it's not a good idea to change something what is already working with something who maybe not work very well and something who is don't give big changes. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
EE855A723FE0 | First of all Hello, Ms. In my opinion I think that is better to work in group. I have 3 reasons that I would like to share with you my reasons are that everyone would like to share differents ideas, Also working in group we can finish more early, and we can socialized with different people. Now I'm going to describe you why I choose this reasons. By sharing ideas I meant that everyone can have the opportunity to think and talk about that that person think. Because we don't have the same's idea's as other people thought. After all people in the group share their ideas we can writte in a piece of paper and see which one's are good and makes any sence, about the topic we are talking and we see which one's we can put on the class work we are going to do. Also about that we can finish more early, we can show it to the teacher on time and she can give as her opinion and ask her for some help about what part she think that we can add more especific words or meanings. Because sometimes we think that we have a good project but sometimes we have to figure out what part we can change and put differents things. And the last but not least that we socialized with other's this one is my favorite because in this one I can discribe a little bit of my self when I just came to this country from another I was so shy because no one came to talk to me in my second day of school. In my English class my teacher make a groups and some people start talking with me 2 person from that class help me in my english because it wasn't that good. I was so scare because first everyone was looking to me like I had something in my face and in this country everything is different to my country in this one we need some friends that help us when we need some help in english.
Them I introduce my self to everyone and I start making new friends. When we are new we think that no one is going to talk with us because we are from another country. Sometimes they don't talk with us because we don't speak the same lenguage as other. But we have to try our best to be friendly and make that the person doesn't feel shy we would like to that person feel happy in school and in each classes. Tha's why I think that is good to be working in group not alone. When we have homework or projects we like to have some help then doing by our self that is more hard, the projects are always so difficult or sometimes you don't understand what the teacher said because we are seatting on the back and some students are talking and we could't hear anything about what the teacher is talking about. But in a group they are 2 or more then 2 in the same group is good that one of that person of your group understand and explain to the people didn't get it. The internet is a big problem to alot of us some of us that we don't have internet or computer eather. I think that is a problem for me and one of the reasons that I like working in groups some family doesn't have enough money to put internet in home or buy a computer in home but also go to a public places that have internet and computer we have to pay. But working in group one of the students may have internet and go to that person home. I know that in our school we have computers in the library but on weekends is close the school or some of us we can't stay after school. Because we have to pick our littler brother or sister from other school. But the good thing is that one of us could have computer or internet in home and research some things about our work or project. Another thing that is good working in group is that when we are explaining a project in from in class we don't feel ready because we have to talk a lot or others reasons but in groups we can break parts and each one is going to talk about that part she or he loves more.
My Final opinion that I would like to share is that working is group is a good option then working by our self. Because not all of us have the opotunity to have internet, not all of us speak english some of us we need that someone speak our language for example sometimes I need someone that help me with some words in english that I don't understand because my first language is spanish and it's hard came to a country that don't speak your native language. And we can know new people to talk, not with the sameones because there is a lot of people that we don't talk and they are in the same classes of us we just want to be with the same ones and have to talk with everyone and help then when they need help.
Sincerely,
Generic_Name | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
EE99F74CAE44 | Philosopher, Physical, and humanitarian Albert Schweitzer say that example is not the main thing in fluencing others, actually being a example can not be a good thing to influence others becuase first you need to start doing the right thing on your own before you decide to be a example or influence others and that's mean that you need to do everything perfect when that's means that it is hard to do it.
They say that example is not the main thing in fluencing others becuase being a example can be stressfull. For example, they can be stressfull on trying to do everything perfect to do not do wrong things to influence others and they have to be responsible with what they do to not do mistakes so that they can influences others and they feel that it is a very stressfull responsability of influcing others.
However, they believe that setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence others people and being a good example makes they feel responsible to others and they feel that they have the responsability to do the right way in their own so that they can be a good example to others.
In reality, they say that setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence others people because they feel that they have the responsibility with their own behavior so they can do the right way in their own first to influence others. They also say the having respect to others is a good example of our behaviors and being humildity is also a nice examples that we can teach or influenes to others. They believed that being honest with anyone is also a good example of our behaviors. For example, they believe that being responsible with their own behavior is a good example to start doing the right way and to influence others because the responsability gives to others respect. They say the being on time in any meeting makes they responsible with their own behavior and gives other a good example of responsability. They say that responsability is a example of our own behavior and can be something that they can learn with the time and needs practice. I believe that being honest with others is a good example by start setting our own example behaviors. I also believe that humildity is a good example of our behavior because the humildity and that responsability is something that I can learn from others with their own actions or their behaviors. For example, I learned how to be responsible with my things for my mom and my dad because they teaches me how to do it and that this need practice too and I also they teaches me that being a example with our own behavior makes you humildity and teaches you how to valore what you already has and accept what
I don't have.
In conclusion, they want to argue that setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence other people because being a good example by your own behavior teaches they how to do the things rights, so they can influence others by doing and taking the right way and also teach how to be responsible, honest, and being respect to others. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
EE9EA950AAE1 | An enjoyable educational activity.
I think that a enjoyable activity for education wiil be a game y math like work in a group of 3 to 5 persons each person in the group to to answer a question, if they get the question right they get a point but if they don't they don't get any point, the group with more points get some candys for they exelent job doing what they are hate to do.
I think this a perfect activity because kids like to compete each other and is better when they know that if they win they get some candys.
Another enjoyable activity will be in science, doing a project of how animals live what thay ate and how they survive to the other animalto and give some importants facts to the teacher ,
i think this project may be of two persons because a think this will be to easy for them and there may be some student doing the project by them self.
I think that will like the project because they can get to know about an animal life and importants stuff about it and they can have fun with friends.
I choose math and science because this are my favorites subjects and i enjoy doing them with my friends and my teachers my favorite part is when we get to work in group that is in science, but in math my favorite part is when i get a question right some time the teacher give me some candys. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
EEB113169637 | Dear TEACHER_NAME;
What happened if thers a event but you have to clean up for community service? Is right to do the right thing. Community service is important to the community because in the future the community change and everybody is happy. Some people doesn't wannabe help or they have other things to do. Is the same thing as school. Some students is in Community service.
First reason, that Community service is important because the mayor of the city will be proud. Some people say ''What a mess is here!''. The community service is come for help. When you left trash then later it will smell bad. Some people hated when this happened. Please don't leave thrash on the floor put it in the trash can.
Second reason is that when there's a event the people who work there have to clean up before the event starts. Some people think that takes too much time away but no. They just want to help people and the community. In school is the same thing friends doesn't want to help and some to.
Last reason is that there's too much to clean up and during the night. Janitors need to clean up during the night because when the next day comes it will be clean and neat. Some people clean up their stuff alone and sometimes together.
I think t | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
EEB4D170D513 | Albert Einstein said Imagination impacts more than education on people, I kinda disagree with this statement. In life there many things people want to accomplish something in their future life. Like learning a new instrument, to play sports for a team and others. One thing
I would like to do is to stay on top of all my classes for school to be succesful in life. People say its a challenge to stay on top. When I look at it, I say every challenge always has a way to get through it.
The reason why I would like to pass all my classes is because I want to use that as a skill in my life. At the end of college, people always wanted to be big things like presidents, surgeons and other important jobs. In real life people who cared less about that, are just sitting in a cubicle just to answer calls for a living, which is not a bad thing. I dont want my life to end up as those people, I want to make a big impact in our everyday society, like Steve Jobs. He made a big impact in peoples lives by releasing a new iPhone model every year, but he didnt just start a company that fast. He needed to be educated and was the smartest kid in his school, all the way to college, he was a smart and cooperative guy until his passing. Thats why I am planning ahead to stay on top of school and college so I can try to make a great impact for people. Instead of trying to stay awake in a boring office with the meanest boss in the world and with a low salary to one meal per week.
Another reason why I would like to be successful in my classes is because It made a huge impact on my uncle, Generic_Name. Back in my uncles time, my parents and my uncle lived together in a small town house in Generic_City, he was uneducated. My uncle was an outgoing guy but didnt care about his education back in college, he was always on the couch eating Cheerios and watch Tom and Jerry on the T.V. My parents and I started to convince my uncle to start repeating college, but he didnt care, he just wanted fun in his life and not care about anything education related. That all changed when he realized that he had pay rent and that he wasnt educated, so he finally took the opportunity to repeat college, we were happy for him to do it. He scored high scores in all his tests and was awarded a scholarship for Generic_School and graduated with a high masters degree for law and got a job for jr lawyer. Now, he rose up to make the best lawyer in Generic_City and makes 500,000 thousand dollars a year and lives in a mansion with nice cars and to share all his fortune with his family. This story has inspired me that I should stay on task with all my classes and to plan my future career ahead in time.
The final reason why I want be a successful kid in all my academics is because of opportunities, just like my uncle, Generic_Name, He came to the top because of smart he really was in college. Just like my uncle, I want to be like him and to open the door to so many career opportunities in which society has to offer, like Will Smith's movie, The Pursuit Of Happiness which was based on a real story . This talks about some emotional topics about a man named Chris Gardner was not making money and has his son with him to look after. He wasnt able to do his job right by selling bone density scanners and barely enough to pay rent or daycare after his wife left him. He got his life back together by repeating college and moving, but soon he opened the door to so many job opportunities and later in his life became a multi-millionare in 5 weeks. Based of this act, I started to think that anything can be possible as long as you put your mind to it. That way I can open many opportunities in my life.
These are the reasons why I want stay on top in all my academics is because I want to change the world the way people see it. I want people to know my name for all the hard work and impact I did, staying on top of classes accomplishes anything, it can make me into a very important person who makes a lot of money, but in order to complete that task. I would need enough Education to make me successful enough to encounter that career opportunity in my life. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
EEB58B11D40C | I disagree that the principal has decided that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity cause some students just have lots of work and some students just don't want to do it. First of all,students have lots of work to do like homework,chours, projects, and etc. These things are a lot for some students to handle. adding a extracurricular activity that students must participate in would increase some students stress and could cause students to fail in school cause of how much work they have to do and complete. Finaly, some students just don't want to do it. Beause most students would finish their work and hang out and talk with their friends. If students where forced into participating in at least one extracurricular activity it would decrease the amount of time each student would have spending time with their friends. In conclusion, I think that what the principal decision was not a good and was a very very bad. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
EEB5AAA18E11 | Some people believe that student should be required to take a class in the arts, Or student should take classes such as elective ?
Imagine doing something that makes you happy, An doing something your comfortable at an decide what are your capable of doing in life. People believe that each student should required an electives in school cause people believe that this will help the students find what they want to do, Also this will help them find they skills an get opportunities, And importantly this will helped students in future .
Its really important that students should pick any electives they want to do, Imagine students get an electives they dont want to do. This will have the student feel lazy going to class, An when student feel lazy going to class student mostly skip class. When student skip class students will have a bad grade, An when students get a bad grade they get irritated. And they dont have the motivation so they give up and when students give up they will not receive any credit an students needs enough credit to graduate if a student dont graduate high school the students cant go to colleges. An the student cant have a better job , Also companies would not hire them. people who has no job they could be homeless an its very hard. So this is why it's very important students decide what electives they want to do.
People believe that everyone has their special skills. Students should find they skill taking the electives they really good at cause if a student is good at something they will love to go to class, Also going to class will have student have good grades and would like to learned more things and importantly you will receive an credit. An taking the class they good at will have a lot of benefit an opportunities in life, Cause people who has a lot of skill, Most people would love students to work in their companies. For example if students is good at drama company will hire them as an actress an people will get famous, Also have their own movie an this will makes a lot of money out of it . also not only a student can only have one skill you could have a lot of skill just not one but more, An this will help a student. If a student has a lot of experience an know a lot of things this will definitely help them. This one of the reason that students should find their skills .
Future is very important for the students cause when a students who takes electives and doing the electives they like an love to do students would take this opportunities to have a good future after graduating high school, Also College cause this when their adult life would begin and things will be different. And this why its very important student take their skill so future would not be hard it would be easy for students, It would have a lot of hard an rough times but with the skills they would get through it . Also this is when the student begin their dreams, An student could use the skills for a better future and things would not be hard for them cause students would know what they doing and what is going to happen also most student would find their destiny, An their destination they would love to be at.
But also people may think that student may not required electives cause students its not motivate enough to take it, An students dont really wanna do it, And mostly students will take it as a joke. | 3.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
EEDD6AC8DC5B | I guess because one person is determinate they have goals and dreams, and the person work hard for complement all something,when the person have a purpose though, tired or think you cant ,there are in you a voice said you can do it , at that moment yuo think i needed for my life, family . is more essay when the person have determinate direction , when the person not have anything in the life , I think its necessary that person to be linked with family, friends who is motivation for him or she. my diari life is a example because my goals is take my higschools diploma but i need work hard because , walk up 6 in the morning , preparate breakfast for everything in my family , then i needed take my thing necessary for my work , i working all day , to go out 5 pm then came for the schools night , i have for class for a years , sometimes i tired but , remember my family , what example given for my daugther , only work hard , to achieve my goals . | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
EEDF62EFA5D7 | Thomas Jefferson Prompt
Thomas Jefferson once said, Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." Jefferson wanted the world to become more active in life whether if it is a physical.
Being active has many positives. Activity in society can help people reach their goals, help society, live life to the fullest, feel good and use time wisely. In this world people have big reasons to have activity life for example, they need one work where maybe all the time they are move for this reasons and more I think that the people need one activity life.
Small actions like recycling or participating in community this help to disperse a good life for you and for the other people because people look that you have one purpose in the life. The life is hard, you need activity, you need to learn new things all the time, and never you be a inactive person because if you are a inactive person you not have good reason for live in this world.
Inactivity is not good for your dreams or goals in the life because if you have one dream about buy a sport car, the car is not coming if you not work hard to take the money for the sport car. Nothing coming so easy you need effort, and dedication the inactivity not help you, the essence of the life is to crate good reason of live and work for yours dreams and goals.
The idle person is a person how not have activity, That person maybe not have dreams or goals or maybe your dream is be idle, but the poin is that a idle person not have reasons for the society, not have support for your community, and he or she is lost in the life. For a idle all is for tomorrow not take actions today, not take effort and if make this person not put the one hundred percent only put five percent. Remember you need put effort to your activitys in the work, school, sports and your life all need effort. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
EEE6067CF9B5 | Some schools have programs that older kids can help younger kids. If they don't know how to somethings in school or out side of school. Or they are there just there to assist other kids that more help then other kids this can be helpful. For older kids that they might have to teach something new that they did not know or just teach something that they had some hard time in when they where leaning this in school. And can be more helpful for younger kids because they might have to work a little more harder and get more. Challenged more then they get at home or school and they get through there homework at this after. School program and then when they get back to school they have there homework done and then there homework. Might not be late or they might just be more on top of there stuff and when they get home they just can relax and play some games or just go outside. And have good jobs later in there lives and I think that more kids should have this. Chance to get this time to study and get better programs in there school. Because we have good programs and then if most of every school have likes programs they can get help by older students and younger students can help they older can help by helping the younger and the younger if they are not doing homework and if they are done with home work they can help other younger students. so they can get the help and the assisting that need or might need because if you are good with some like math but then the homework gets harder they might just need just need some more time or more time study and going over there past home work to see if he can or she can solve that problems or if they can't that why there are the older student. That can them help he or she with the home work or projects. They can help one and other to finish faster and get their projects done if they wish to or they can just work on it just by them self. and then when most of the kids are done with homework witch most won't be they might go on there computers or they can go outside and play some outside games witch so half would go out side and the other will stay to keep this program fun and not just doing homework and classwork all day long. So they can keep or gain some energy to when they are done form playing they can comeback inside with some. Energy and not being broad all the time there are there. at the after school programs. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
EEE7731E8A57 | First need to plan your work and need to be organized and have good details about what you need to read and need to wright. All what you have in your head just wright it all on paper first or then wh en your weighting your book or story you will have everything in copy and can read it to make sure its good. Like to best teachers told me Generic_Name and Generic_Name if you wright something on paper you will always be right or in the right path to do good on your book. Always need to wright your work what happens if you brake your computer but you have it on paper so your teacher can just grade your paper. Paper is the best way to get your work and plan it out because they are your opinions and computer it changes the words to what it wants to change it to. Next you need to be organized if your organized you can read your work fast and so can the teachers if your work is neater your can do it faster because you read it and if you don't have time to finish pages in your computer you can tarn the paper but not on the computer thing. Then if its organized you can use the same paper for next time but change some words or change the whole paper. you will need to do more work then just taring in the paper and not on the computer. Late you always need to be organized. After always finish you weighting dont leave it have way done just finish it to get done with the work you have to do because if you dont you will have to do way more work then what you have to get done just do your work on time. The end you will have to have everything done by the do date you have in school then you will do the rest of more work you have to get it done just do it. | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
EEED5054938E | I
would disagree for adding a one hour and a half hour because maybe parents might be worried about their child or children at school for another hour or two. I would say why would students want another hour of school if they just want to go home and see their family. i would even say that i would not want another hour of school cause isn't seven hours of school enough already. I can understand if teachers want to see their students even more maybe but maybe they have to email their students parents before having to get the extra hour of school. What i would say is that all the students should vote online or in public to see if they all want to have a extra hour or half a hour still because it can`t be the parents only because it`s not fair for the adults to decide if they have to get another hour or two the students have to decide because they are the ones that are gonna have the extra hour.
I
understand that kids might want to do activities for their school or they can stay after school to do it like, assignments,homework,projects,PowerPoints,tests,and quizzes. I usually would`nt want to have another because it`s complicated sometimes doing stuff there and it is just to much for me to handle at one time mostly and i have to do a lot stuff at home also so i rather not have another hour of school cause it`s a lot. If he or she doesnt want to stay they dont have to vote or say anything but other people might say something if they do want to have the extra hour or two i would speak up for himself or herself cause if u do want the extra hour or two go ahead vote or speak up for yourself and do your best to change the idea of the story or idea of the other people that would not have the extra hour. Now back to my disagreement about having another hour of school i would not have another hour of school because it is it much work for me to handle mostly cause the amount of work i have to do at school is so ridiculous really ridiculous cause the person or me has to write alot form time time and its worth it cause your getting a free education but i dont want alot of education i would want to stay me and me only. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
EEEEC24C9AE7 | The author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote. unless you try something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow.
Why the author Waldo Emerson wrote. Unless you you try something beyond what you have already mastered. you will never grow. The author want to let the people know that there's many way to grow up. The people should think about to do different stuff even if they are mastered in any profession.
Does Mr. Emerson thought about the people when he wrote his message in his text. Yes he does. He thought a bout it because he clearly is talking to the people in his writing. People shouldn't stop learning other stuff or do other kinds of work because they are professional in one job. I agree with Mr. Emerson about his writing. Many people in society just want to focus in one thing. but that affect the development of the community of work. Also if you never try something new you will never know. and if you do not try you are closing you mind and the opportunity to learn. The people should think about to grow up.
In my conclusion the people should try something else. The society shouldn't be focus in just one stuff all life. The community would be better if we keep going a head. and think about the future. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
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