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E08B2DFE266D | "Positive attitude is the key to success in life" I agree with this because the key to get succes in your life is positive attitude. Because help you to do a better your work, study, and get better rusults. Positive attitude is important in our life. Positive attitude can help to create a better relationship with other people if you really want to get succes in your life you have to take positive attitude in your job school and with the others . For instance if you work and study with positive tttitude you can do it everything in your life. the reason are the positive attitude help you be a better person with the others. acomplish your goals, and help you in your job.
My first reason, is positive attitude help you be a better person with the others. For example, if you have possitive attitude you can express to the others. If other person is angry you with your positive attitude can make that the other feel great and create a better relationship with others.
My other reason is with posittive attitude you cam acomplish your goals. For example,if you are doing something hard and, if you have positive attitude you never give up and, you wiill doing again and again until to acomplish. Is like a in my life I do not have a grat attitude in many things but, everytime I tray to do it and that is a attitude positive because until sometimes I think that I can my pisitive attitude help me to no give up.
My last reason is posittive attitude help you in your job because you can do it everthing with a posittive attitude you can do better your job. You can learn many things in your job a get a better position with a better payment.
To summary, possitive attitude is important in our life if you are negative you can not doing anything but if you have a positive attitude you can do wherever you want the positive attitude help you in your job, in the school, and in the relationship with others. | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
E0A8EBEE657B | First impressions are almost impossible to change. Yes, I agree based on my own experience for me first impression is important. Because of how I see someone and feel someone by their energy.
For example I met my best friend other friend, the first time I saw her other friend I instantly like her. She was so sweet always giving me a good energy that I want for a person. She was so kind and love to smile, and she dress neatly. Her smile effect me she makes want to me smile, from that moment on I know that her and I could get a long.
Another example my seatmate, my first impression about him was a good one. Because he was just calm and his attitude is the same as mine. I see myself in him, him and I just get along well and his giving a good energy that I like for a person.
Another example first day of our club meeting, my club teacher paired me to someone that I don't know, For us to know who are other club members are to know each other. My first impression about her was not good, because she did not talk to me when I tried to talk to her. She gives me a bad energy that I don't like to a person.
Some people might disagree with me that first impressions are almost impossible to change, and some people might agree with me. I agree, because first impression are important to me it helps me to know instantly if I like the person that I just met or not. Some people might say or think that first impression does not matter, because you should know the person you just met more. Before you decide that when ever you like that person or not. And I would agree to that, but for me first impression are almost impossible to change, for my own opinion. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
E0B4FCC6FD58 | I feel like best way is working with a group is great idea because you have the chances to meet new people you dont know and have little convestions with them while working on getting ideas and finding the right respone for your work on what the teacher gave as a group. Well one good reason on why working with a group is a good idea my opionion is because by working in a group you can find different details on what the teacher given what to work on in a group yall can bring up all the information yall came with or got from the internt and have argument about which one should be the best answer. Another reason on why is a good idea working with in a group it's a easy way to get a better garde as a group and working in a group is really fun you get to talk and use the computer sometimes the teachers let us use our phone and we make like a little group chat for us to talk about the work she told us to do and share our answers on the group chat and see who agree with it or who don't and we all got different reasons and at the end of the day we pick the support detail and use it. My benefits of working with a group is that if you are one of them students who really want to be in a group and help people and on there work show them how smart your are and that you in the group of people you are a hard worker. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
E0B86027C5C5 | Do you prefer doing things in life by yourself or with a partner? Some people prefers to work or do things with a partner or in groups. Although, most of the people think that working or doing things individuality will make them more succesful in life because, you know what you are doing, you know what you want in life and what your goals are. being yourself in this society is the best for you.
Working or doing things individuality will result better for you because, you know what you are doing. you know what your dreams in life are, only you have that knowledge so, you will work hard to make them come true. when you are doing something and you feel like you are doing it wrong, ask for some help or advice. show people that you do noy give and that you can do it.
When working individually you know what you want. when you get that, you will feel proud of your self, because you did it by yourself without any help from anyone and that makes it more special. to the people who did not believe in you, you will make them see that you can do it. whatever positive things you do for your life, they are better when they are self made, you did everything you could to accomplish.
Achieving your goals individuality is the best accomplishment in life, planing things and accomplish them by yourself, is one of the best thing that can happen to you in your progress. always be your self, do not try to be someone else, put effort on everything that you do to achieve your goals. fight for your goals, the most special feeling is when you achieve something that you proposed to yourself. being yourself is the greatest thing.
Most of the people think that working or doing things individuality will make the more succesful in life because, you know what you are doing, you know what you want in life and what your goals are. you could have important skills and that could make you someone important for the society. always be yourself. don't try to be someone else because you can do things that the other person can not do or viceversa. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
E0BABC4506D0 | What are some decision that students take regarding extracurricular activoities?
Many students become involved in extracurricular activities to enrich their educational experiences, and some even become involved in so many activities that they have a little time to study or complete homework assignments.
Some activities carry out in the morning, with this the students have time to do his homeworks or study, however who practice in the afternoon can do it during school. A lot of them works after school, so the activities is the best option and they don't deside to take this extracurricular activities. Students who involve in many activities it's complicated to take hours to study, and some times the parents need to leave his sons at the practice, many parents don't have time to do that because they work.
In opinion of the students is that best decision it's take only one activity. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
E0BDF62838F7 | Hey have you been asked to teach a group of elementary students a lesson? well you have been chosen to teach a group of students a lesson and the lesson was multiplying and dividing because it will teach how add and subtract quickly. The 1st example is like going to a grocery store and don't know how much does 4 bags of chips cost for the party your going to well multiplying can help you figure out the cost. The 2nd example for dividing can help you figure out if you have a discount you can find the new cost and how much money you saved. Final reason is like multiplying and dividing fractions like 1/2 times 2/3 that would equal 2/6 and dividing that by 1/2 will equal 2/3 because if you add that is would be 3/5 and subtracting that by 1/3 would be 2/2 which is 1. So in conclusion multiplying and dividing can help you get answer more fast than adding and subtracting over and over. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
E0BFF1488787 | I disagree with schools having a program with older and youngest students
Many younger students does not know anything about program
Many older students are smartest then the youngest students
Many youngest students are not smarter than the older students
1. One day when i was on elementary school i was in 4th grade and my teacher put me on a program with older people and the older people were smarter than me and i din't knew anything and the older people knew everything i was the only one who dint knew any thing.
2. The other day i was on middle school and i was on a program and i was on 8th grade and i was in a program with youngest students the youngest students werent smartest than the older student and there was a kid who dint knew anything on the program.
3. The last thing when i was i high school i was in 10th grade and i went to a program with young students and i was smarter then younger students and and my teacher was prud of the older students. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
E0C521DEB367 | I disagree with the school board because we not trying be in school more time in school. Also students need to have their own time outside of school with family and friends. I also think this because students spent 8hrs in school more than what they spend at home. My other idea is that i think the schools around that county should have a essay in all schools asking students about how they feel about this decision. The county should take the students decision as a answer about what they think because our ideas matter too. Also the school should be thinking about the students benefits of being in school for longer and for less not just to one side. I think if they did that they point of view will change a lot knowing what students think also it would help them know about what students they are dealing with that would be a great advantage for them. That would help them with the decision and knowing what would be the impact on the students. This is my prompt to yall about if i agree or disagree. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E0DF99CD1D9C | What is something you would like to accomplish in the future. I would like accomplish alot because you would love it and wont forget it.
Thing that you would love is swim with sharks because you would get over your fear of sharks and swiming.
skydiving is fun doing it with a family because allthogether you would love it. Doing things that get you over fear is bad but doing it as a family is the best.
Things you wont forget is family and friend because you do fun things together and you wont forget it. Doing your favorite activite and enjoying it. The activites you do is all fun when you got family and friend with you.
I like doing things but other people have other opinion on what stuff the like or not like. lot of stuff is fun with family and friends foing activites with you. all the activetes you do is allways fun with or without family and friends | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
E0E060143B79 | Do you think failure lead you to do better? In this paper i will argue about never losing enthusiasm by falling and falling. Failure should be just another way to do better, because you try until you get it right, when you fail; failure lead you to success in life. Also, enthusiasm and try is the key to success.
First of all, when you try until you get it right, sometimes you get really frustrated. For example; in freshman year i remember that i couldn't actually get good grades in my algebra class, i remember that i try and try my harder to get good grades. I even stayed after school, I was doing my homework, i was watching videos from my teacher. However, i was still getting bad grades in my class but i keep trying and i finally become a success in the class.
Secondly, when you fail; failure lead you to success in life. When you are working on a project or you are working on a personal goal sometimes thing doesn't actually goes the way you had planted. For example; if you are trying to solve a mathematics problem but you never get the solution you're supposed to get. Although, you keep trying and you always fail, you actually learning from it. However, by keep trying your best you actually getting experience from your failure and that helps you to success later in life.
Finally, enthusiasm and trying is the key to success. For example; when you want to achieve something but you fail, each time you're losing enthusiasm because you think that you can not do it, but if you keep trying and trying their will be a time that you will going to success and you would said that you try your best and never lost enthusiasm for your goal.
In conclusion, some people said that failure doesn't lead you to success, but they wrong because the more you fail, the more you try, and when you get it right, it will be a completely success for you. Going failure to failure led you to a good way to do better in life because the harder you try the better you do to success. In the future never stop trying without losing enthusiasm because enthusiasm is the key of your success. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E0EBA1995BCB | First impressions works as a normal form to react to a person, the impressions will depend how scary or funny it is, and how people feel in that moment. Impressions are almost impossible to change, they come instantly, people can not have control of it because first impressions come naturally from the human, the maind sends the first impressions when people are impressed, and people are not prepared to the first impressions. It is impossible to change.
First reason, impressions come naturally from people, they can not have control of it. For example, when people meet with other people, they automatically have impressions of the new people that they are meeting, do not matter what type of people they are, but the impressions naturally come. Second example, people usually move around the country to live or visit, every new place that they are arriving, the impressions come by itself. Third example, during the school year, the students are exploring more about the classes, they even have been not thinking about it, but they already have impressions what the classes talk about, and the students did not can change those first impressions about the classes.
Second reason, the maind has an important work on the first impressions, the mind sends the first impressions to you. For example, when people go to shopping to a marked, they are looking and comparing the prices from other marked. People are having impressions about the prices and their minds are working sending them impressions and also information from the other marked's prices. Second example, people who work on hospital, they are constantly seeing people with cancer, their minds are prepared to make impressions and send them without any difficulty. The type of impression depends how their minds are prepared to react on that situation. Third example, people who come to the U.S from other country normally they are having new impressions, their minds are having a big change. The mind is who make the biggest work to give the first impressions and adapt to the new type of live.
Third reason, people are not prepared to the first impressions that they have during they are discovering new things, it come by itself. For example, when people go to the cinema to see the new movie about the world, they do not have any idea about what is waiting for them, they just infer that the movie is about the world, but stating the movie they start to have impressions. the impressions come without notice them. Second example,when people got 18 years old, they are not prepared to do everything by himself, they start to have impressions on how hard if the life outside with more responsibilities and without their parents. Impressions always surprise people because they never prepare for it. Third example, people who are starting new job, they are learning how to do it. They are having impressions how the job is, they were not prepared for those impressions that they are having during they are learning the new job.
In conclusion, first impressions are almost impossible to change, because first impressions are naturally from the people, it come instantly as result of a new thing that people learn. And mind has an important work on the first impressions, the mind is who send the first impressions to the person. Also, people are not prepared to the first impressions, it come as a surprise. People just explore new things and impressions come as a result. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
E0ED97D6F88B | Dear principal ,As a student i think we should balance The school menu of healththeir school lunches is a good idea and also a bad idea, the resaon why is when most students don't take care of their own body by eating junk food but most student like their favorite food for example, most students in my class when they eat their favorite food for example pizza, in lunch it will affect their stomach but not only their stomach but they have nothing health besides milk to eat.
My second reason is when you eat health on school days your body will feel better and relax and also when you eat healthier foods your body can help you in the future as you grow older health foods in school would be a great way for students not to be sick and they need protein to grow.
My thrid reason is if you take away our favorite food most students wont eat the healtheir food, remember when their was no Fried Chicken friday at lunch and thats like everyones favorite food the school was so upset they didnt eat lunch for the day over chicken. So in conclusion I think that we should balance them out like their should days were we eat health foods and days we can eat favortite foods.
When the food is Balance students will be able be more happy if they just have both their favorrite foods and something Health to eat, so in my opinon i really hope you make students have both their favorrite foods and healtheir foods so that all students would be happy and so as their body. | 2.5 | 2 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
E0EEC1CE4679 | I'm an 8th grader and I would like to shared somethings the I would like to accomplish in the futere. My firs thing the I would like to accomplish in the future is to gradute from Hight school and Collage because many benifts if you graduated frome Higth school and Collage you can have a better job like being a nurse and a lawyer and many diffrents types of jobs and you can be a professional worker. But you have to work hard a school dont get introuble at school and not have a bad record so you can accomplish to graduated from Hight school and Collage .In my opinion is worth it be in school for seven hours to pay atention in school cause it will help a lot in your future .The second thing I would like to accomplish is to learn French because that's one of the lenguage I'm intersted on because I like French culture and I feel that French is an easy lenguage to learn because its similar to Spanish and I would like to have the opportunity to know three lenguages (Spanish,Inglesh and, French) and if you know more than one lenguage you can help another people at school and you can also get paid more on your Job .The third thing the I really want to accomplish is to help my parents when I'm older I really want to do this have been with me all the time ,they are been such a good perents I know the they probably wont need my help but I really want to accomplish this goal for many other reasons one of them is because this is coming out of my heart. I ask god to let give them the opportunity to see me and my brother grow and make them proud once againg. The last thing the I would to accomplish is to help the shelters where all the immigrant people are because they are looking for a better future for there family because sometimes there life is in risk and they dont want there family lifes in risk so thats why they risk their life to come to this country. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
E103955391AB | Yeah we all have our own freedom but well that's not always true a lot of people let others control them. So it is said
Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote " To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment"
Like i said we all have our own idividuality that what makes us we have our own way of being, own name and own way of looking we are just our selves. Specifically individuality shows us that not everything should be given to you if you want something you work hard for it but also it's a sign of your own development that you can do everthing by your self but it's because you are who you are and no one can change you. Therefore, itis proven that it's better to be individual than anybody else just giving you everything by hand .
"FREEDOM!" is a good word all of us love to hear. When you realize you can do anything by yourself you feel like no one can stop or as free as the wind but theres always going to be obsticles without a doubt. To be Indivdual it can happen to any one such as a kid who has learned to do thier stuff alone or when you move out of your parents house and get your own home. It honestly can happen to anyone becuase thiers so many types to define the word individual. well to fell free is not a bad thing after all .
When your individual you mean something to this world because you think about yourself. You set your own goals and accomplish them and you maintian yourself the way you are it's even more better becuase it's the hugest goal anybody should have to not let anybody change you wreck all you have accomplished. To your self you feel like you value your self and it's not bad at all to value yourself because it biulds self confidence within you and that means you have you feet on the ground and yeah your ready to face any obsticale.
No one should define you except you because the world will defenitly try to change you but if you don't aceppt it won't happen like Author Ralph Waldo Emerson said "To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment" whom we have someone to look up to and understand that to be inividual is okay. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
E110443F5184 | "Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."Therefore,in my opinion character traits can be chose but it must show as true self that represent you. Why, let me tell you; every on has their own unique traits even the traits they get from their parent. lastly animal spirit do show has traits that represent as our character traits. Although,I do disagree with character traits with influences us that help improve our trait that can help us set right path.
Everyone has their own unique traits. Some people has traits like kindness,honesty,caring,and more. Unfourtely that some character traits can't be chose but sometime character traits chose you as your character traits .For example my character traits is pretty weird: kind honesty,helpful,caring,little crazy and lastly trickery like the fox. Same with parents has their own unique character traits;however, parents' character traits can be passed down to children base on their character traits and if they are worthy of the carry their parent's traits. For example,It remind me the time when I am all dressed up and got my hair done after that I look at the mirror; I notice that I look familiar at the time I realized that I look like mom. As poof that I do have my mom's gene meaning I have her physical look. As i explain even character trait and be passed down or chose have own character traits.
Next, everyone has their own spirit animal that is represent your character traits. For example if the person has the character trait which is playful,love water,caring,and fun loving as poof of this person character traits show their spirit animal is dolphin. Therefore, anyone can chose their character trait that is best suit for them. It is unique for people and important having spirit animal and character traits to help them balance it out and chose what character trait that best represent him or her. Which allow the person to identify what spirit animal is and identify which character trait the animal is. For insist,White tiger know for protect their pup like any mother would do as the same trait as our mom has show.
Choosing character trait could be tricky for everyone but it is important to be wise which character trait is best for you. You can choose which character traits,sometime it can lead to having great friend or loving family. But their will be a price to pay like if you are kind then someone will take avenge of you in order to trick or frame you. My opinion is to be strong and persist or sass but your pick add them long with your chosen character trait. Character traits can be blessing in disguise and curse.
As you see chosing your own character trait is better then someone influences you; it only cause problem and change you then your real self. Although, I explain my reason:everyone has there own unique trait ,animal,lastly the price of choosing character trait. Therfore I always said "Character trait can be beautiful but a curse in disguise". Anyway not a problem. That I truly believe that everyone has the right to chose their own character traits then having someone influences them to have the same character trait as them then having your own traits. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E11139259D4E | Students have enough hours of school already! I strongly disagree about the school board adding more hours to school every day. I'm not telling you this just because I'm a student, I'm telling you this because It doesn't just affect me, It affects other students in many ways too! This could bring students really bad behaviors, because they get tired of being in the same place for a long period of time. This could bring students grades down too, because students do not work the same when they are tired. If they added more hours to school, students wouldn't have time to do their homework or to study for quizzes and tests.
This idea of adding hours to school does not just affect students, it brings problems to the teachers and the school. Teachers have families and some of them have children of their own, this wouldn't let teachers to go home and pass time with their family. Another problem I see in this It's that some students have appointments, Just like me !
Sometimes I have to go to my orthodontist, and my appointments are always in the morning, I have to go there every month. I always miss two or three classes, and when I get there I have A bunch of work that I missed! If they din't add those hours to school I could ask my orthodontist to do my appointments in the afternoon. Sometimes students get sick, and if they miss one day of school they would have to do more work than the usual. This affects the school in many ways too! The school would have to pay more, because they would have to give the students more food than the usual. They would have to waste more money in paper, bathroom supplies and they would have to give the student a new agenda with more bathroom passes in it. the school would have to manage more conflicts and fights between the students. If they added one and a half hours to school they would create more car crashes and accidents in the roads, because the students would get out of school at the same time that elementary school students do, and then there would be a lot of school buses.
Students wake up pretty early, at least that's what I do. If the school added more hours they would get more than tired, the student wouldn't even learn the lessons or the teacher wouldn't even teach the lessons right. As you can see I listed many ways that adding hours to school affects students,teachers and the school. I think the school board should rethink this new idea they came up with. i think that they should hear other students points of view. I think I'm not the only student that thinks that this is not a good idea because it affects everyone. And some other students think different from others.
In conclusion I think that the school board shouldn't add more hours of school because of the different consequences it gives to the students, teachers and the school. And it not just gets the students tired but they wouldn't learn the subjects like they normally do in class. Teachers are affected by this decision too, because they get more tired and they get mad at students easier. This could create big conflicts between people in school and it could bring the school more problems than the usual, like more fights and they would have to give students more breaks. So please School board, rethink this idea you came up with and hear other peoples points of view!!!. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
E12401B92C3B | Some people want to be the best example in life; however, not all of them can be. Even the most famous and intelligent people that we can know is not the best example to follow because if we go and investigate their life they also have done things wrong. Everyone makes mistakes and is alright in this world. I disagree with what Albert Schweitzer said. In fact my personal conduct is not the best way to act for other people to follow me because it is difficult being a good example and is better if we influence them differently.
To begin it is difficult being a good example. Everybody does good things in their life; however, there are some days where we do not feel good and by accident or because we want to do it, so we do things not right. For example: I do not like when my aunts talk to their daughters about me. My aunts explain them that I am a good example in my family because I have two jobs and I go to school and in my free time I prefer to stay with them at home than going out with friends that they do not know. I know the things they say are correts but I told them do not use me as an explample because now I am like that, but if tomorrow I decide to quit school or I do other things is not going to be the best example they are waiting for. Some might say that it is easer having jobs and going to school and being a good example in your family because there are many people who does the same, but I know in reality is very difficult mostly if you are helping your family too.
Next is better if we influence them differently. Not by being their examples but being as a guide to follow. For example: I have an aunt who had her first kid at her 14 years old. Now she is 30 years old and she does not have more babies just the firt one. She tells to my cousins and I that it was the worse experience that she has not for her child but for her husband. She remembers everything that she lived at that age and how she had to deal when she can not have her baby because she was young and her body was not completely develop. Later for her surprise she had to work and maintain her child and her husband because he did not work or do anything. Now she cries when she tell us her stories, but my aunt says that she wants the best for us and she does not want it to happen to us. My aunt says that she is not the best example in our family because she did not obbey my grandparents, but she has learned many good things in life base in her experiences. Some people may say that they are the best examples for their children even if they do things not right in the past, but I believe that we learn from those mistakes but still we are not the best example because we already did bad things.
In conclusion being an example of our own behabior is not the best way to influence people! There are many different ways to influence others as you know it is difficult being a good example and is better to influence people diferently. There are many occacions where we recognize that we do great jobs in life, and people have to see us like good examples. However; people can see us like good examples but not to exaggerate because some people think that just because they do something good they are the best. And I know they can think that because every single minute in our life is count it and also challenged, and we do not want to waste our time. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
E12450BAE343 | Would it be surprising to know that kids learning at home helps them not stress out as much? Stress is mainly caused by student getting to much school work that cannot all be handied in on night. Every day kids complain about having too much homework and when working at home there is not any homework. Allowing children to work on their own schedule helps them become more motivated to work. Students being educated at school gaing more freedom to create their own schedule and their own rules. Learning at home and not at schools helps kids succeeed and have better grades.
One of the best thing about homeschooling is that it can be done at anytime, and anywhere. Children have a flexible time schedule which means that the parents can help. The students can work around the parents schedule instead of the parents working around the student's schedule. Some students have a trouble working at a school because they cannot understand the material at the pase set by teachers. Homeschooling allows students to work at their own pace and on their own schedule. Another thing about homerschooling is that there are no misguided rules about technology or how to dress. This is good because instead of worrying about the rules. The students can focus on their studies.
When you are taking a test or taking notes at a public school there are many distractions that can make students lose focus on what they are doing. This is another reason that learning from home would benefit students. Learning from home won't have the distractions that a classroom has. As a result of this, students won't lose focus on the work they are doing and get better grades. One of the reasons students get distracted in the first place is because they are in an environment their are not familiar with, which makes the feel uncomfortable. If a students learns from home they will feel more relaxed and confortable and won't stress about work. In a school, you are struck at desk for 6 hours and have a limited time to eat and limited bathroom breaks. This is not help a student's learning at all. On the other hand. If you are at home you can eat and do whatever you want when you want.
There are still a few reasons not to do distanced learning. There are many more opportunities with public schools. People from different colleges don't go to students'homes and try to advertise their career options. Making friends from home would be difficult without social interaction. Public school are great places to socialize during free time. If everyone goes home to attend school funding for public schooling willl fall and teachers will lose their jobs because of buged cuts. In public schools, depending an the teachers, cheating is hard to do.
My conclusion is students should be offered classes online or at home because the environment is less distracting, which could be less stressful. At home there are less distractions, rather than at school where there are many different thing to students, can greatly affect the quality of a student's work. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
E13F3C0CB738 | Can failure lead to success?
Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."
Many people who have dreams and goals would agree.
If failure is on the road to success it will give motivation, thought of improvement, and an opportunity to have experience.
Failure doesn't always have to be a bad thing.
Failure will give people that push of motivation many need. If students fail once then they know they have to get up and keep trying. Are many people just going to give up because they failed one time? Let's say somebody is setting a high goal and fail; if that person sets a high goal they will have to understand failure will come in some part of that; it is a reach to get there. As soon as failure kick's in, so should the motivation. If not then nobody will be able to meet the goal of success they want. For example,student is walking into class and spent the whole night studying for this test.
She turns it in and thinks she did well. Turns out that it is the opposite. She has the chance to retake it and is taking the chance. Sometimes expectations don't go the way people would like. That doesn't mean eventually the expectation won't get met.
It just means to keep trying.
Another reason on why failure can bring success is because it gives thought of improvement. Everyone knows the saying "You learn from your mistakes". That saying is very true.
If something goes wrong because the way it was dealt with, will the same mistake happen again? Of course not! People see when the mess up or fail after it happens and will try to do better.
That is improvement and it's leading you to success.
Then we will know where to start and where to fix things.
It's apart of succeeding. People who have succeeded can tell others than without at least one fail, they would not of made it to where they are now.
Last but not least, it gives you experience.
If we didn't fail there would be no experience for the next goal. Having that experience of failure will help.
When the goal is met and finally succeeded then there will be an amazing story to tell. Especially because failure was around. Speak on the obstacles that were faced and how to get through without giving up. Having this experience and speaking about it can influence others as well. Maybe some people also have failed but they want to give up, encourage others that failing doesn't mean you still can't succeed.
To conclude, failure can be a big step to success if used the right way. Don't sit there and give up because failing is a way closer to the goal. Use failure as motivation, thought of improvement, and an opportunity to have an experience. In this case, failure is a great thing. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
E17E9E75ECEB | It wouldn't even matter if the school lunch changes to healthy food. Even until this day they still don't change to a heathly choice. Students has tried to make the school lunch meals change, but there wasn't any difference. Sometimes the studentst doesn't make good healthy food choice there will be times that the lunch menu will have healthy choices and not so heathly choices. For example: the lunches gives us two options one is pizza and the other rice with chicken, students will definitly go for pizza.
It would be a good idea that the school lunches menu changes to a healthy menus. We do need to consider other students and their eating habbits, most students doesn't even eat, they even go a whole day without eating. If the school were to change the unhealthy food they should get rid of pizza, hot dogs, and chicken nuggets and make up for potatos with rice and chicken, a nice pasta salad with tomatoes, onions, and, spinich. Some students are vegan so maybe they can have a veggie burger anything with veggies. If that's the case to change school lunch menu, the school should consider about how and where they should spend money on things like changing the floor tiles it's unnecessary it could have been for something better. No one really cares about how bad the school lunch is, it's not worst thing in the world. Anyways thats why us students have to be smart and bring our own food to school like most of them do.
In reality, it really doesn't matter because students still eat school food, some students do complain about how nasty the food is but they still won't bring their own food how logical is that. To be honest there are sometimes good lunches like we said before it's not best thing in the world. So it's okay don't waste on changing something when you knew it could of been done from the start. Just bring your own food from home and you won't have worry about the school menu. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
E18675E47293 | Dear,
School Board of Education
I personally disagree with the idea of adding one and a half hours of school. This is a terrible Idea and here are some reasons why I disagree so please grab a seat, relax, and take your time to read this. The first reason why there shouldn't be extra school hours is students will have to walk in the dark. The second reason is students will have less time for sports and other after school activities and also less time for family and friends. And finally students will be sick of having school for a such a long period of time and possibly stop going to school.
First of all not everyone is fortunate enough to have a ride to school but that doesen't mean that they can't go to school so they walk, but if the school board adds more school time students who walk will have to walk in the dark. Walking in the dark could be very dangerous because you don't know whats in front nor what's behind you and that could cause students not to go to school anymore because they will be scared of walking in the dark and feel unsafe. Another example of why it could be dangerous to walk in the dark is if someone is trying to cross the street and a car doesen't see them they'll probably get ran over and the school won't be responsible for the accident. Something that also is good to keep in mind is that if the school hours get changed and even if you try to avoid students from walking in the dark There's a cost. You'll have to put street lights and that could be very expensive, and the money could be used for educational purposes.
The second reason why extra school hours shouldn't be added is students won't have much time for sports or other after school activities. Sports and school are both important and they both should be equally balanced. So if school gets longer than maybe we'll have less time to see our family and friends. I remember when I did football practice was getting shorter and shorter because winter came, and during that time it was also raining a lot and snowing a lot so we missed a lot of games and practices, imagine if school was an hour and a half long, there wouldn't even be a football season at all.
The last reason why an extra hour and a half of school is a bad idea is because, a lot of students would get really sick of school and stay home or try to get suspended so that they don't have to got to school. We've all been in that situation where we don't want to go to school so we pretend we're sick, even I get tired of having to go to school every day, in fact I don't really want to be here right now but I have to. We've all tried to make our parents believe that we're sick, but that's a really old trick and parents already know it, and make us go to school. If students get more school time they just won't stand it and they'll start skipping school. But don't worry I won't do that.
In conclusion I think adding an extra hour and a half of school is a horrific idea, it will just cause more problems for the education system, students, parents, and even for our hard working teachers because they will have a more work and less time for themselves. But I also understand why you would want to add an extra hour of school. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
E1898E71ABD6 | A lot of people think that positive attitude is the key to success in life. I think that having positive attitude in life is the key to success, and you might ask your why. I think that having a very formal manger and attitude in life will get you a long ways in life then being grumpy and mean toward other people. That's why there is a saying teat people the way you want to be treated. Therefor you will get the same amount of respect that you put out there toward other people
Firstly, I do believe that positive attitude is the key to success in life. Having all this positively and good energy will get you along way in life. Why you might ask your self. Having good positive energy will allow you to meet new people and they might want to interact with you for having good energy surrounding.
Secondly, this may allow you to meet new people. Meaning they might would like to share with you on how they found the key to success. After that you would probably would like to share the key to your success, and how it helped you accomplish your goals that you might have thought that you never would.
Thirdly, this may lead you to the success in life that you have been dreaming about. That being millionaire or stepping up in your woke place etc. Being joyful and happy in life will allow you to accomplish and allow you to work 100 percent good.
Lastly, all I have to say is that positive attitude is the key to success in life. The only reason I say this is,because I was one of those students that didn't interact with anyone because of my attitude. Now that I have learn and taught my self to be the person who I am today I have made so many friends that I didn't know I would talk. I didn't know that having all this kindness and positive energy could reflect on who i am today. That why I say have good strong positive energy and you will get a lot back in life | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 |
E1920CC1D734 | Should young students commit to a career. I think young students should not commit to a career yet because their minds can change at any momment and if they commit to a career and if they start to not like the career they wanted they will wasted all their time and effert to that one career. Also, If the class's for the career are defficult they and they give up halfway and drop out the class and never try again. So their goal to get the career they want is not in reach for them anymore. Also, you may still not be ready to commit to a career because there are different things you may be into and like doing more then the job you want to do. However, some people may not feel the same way as me on this topic. people may think that is a good idea that young student commit to a career because they have an idea of what they want to do later in life and won't be stuck as may other students may be. I still think at students that are young should not commit to a career yet. so For my conclusion if you are in high school and if you don't know if you want to commit to a specific career don't because you can chage you're mind at anytime. Also, you may not like the career you look into or may find it hard and give up and thats not a good thing to do. | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
E19CE100743C | "Getting something by doing something or doing nothing also bring us something"
We accomplish more if we are always doing something ,because if we do more than what we want or have we will always be growing ,everytime that we do something no matter what it's we receive something back ,many people called ''reward" , when we want something and we work hard to get that, we create a confidence in ourself's that we now that by doing something we can get what we want and we motivate ourself to accomplish that. we get more if we do more ,but some people think that by doing nothing you can get something back . accomplishment is something that you get by working hard , giving your best ,and by doing something about it , if we dont do anything we aren't going to accomplish anything or get anything in this life .
We accomplish more by doing something, because if we do more than what we want or have we will always be growing more. like one time I remember that I was in six grade and I really wanted to participate in the math competition that Generic_Name prepare every year ,only the fastest student's in math can participate ,so Generic_Name tell us that they were math reviews after school to practice for the competition ,but I didn't have the opportunity to stay in does reviews ,because every day in the after school I had swimming practice and I couldn't skip because my classes were already paid , so I remember that I was sad and I start thinking that if I really wanted to be in that competition I should do something to be there ,I start to wake up two hours early in the morning and I would practice math and also I will go to the library in lunch to work on math exercises ,but that sacrifice was worth it because when Generic_Name make the list for the people that would be able to participate in the competition my name was there. My mom always tell me that no matter how many times you fail in getting something , because the next time that you tried you wouldn't do the same mistake twice and at the end because of your effort and hard work you will accomplish everything that you want to make in your life. that's something I will remeber the rest of my life.
We get more by doing more ,because every single time that we do something ,no matter what it's we are going to get something back ''recompense''. when you take your time to do something with patience , will ,and gratitude that can benefit other people by not expecting something back ,we have that selfsatisfaction of making someone happy. like when you see a poor child walking in the streets ,looking for food in the trash ,bacause he is hungry and he doesn't have money to buy some food or maybe he doesn't have a mom that can feed him and you know that you can make that kid happy by giving him some food , because you have that feeling of helping him and make him happy once. one time I remember that I went with my mom to work , we went to clean a house of a 79 year old woman that the only company that she had was her dog , so I remember that I ask my mom if I can come the weekends to her house and join her during the day , and I didn't know that this woman would became someone special for me. she was very sweet ,kind , and lovely woman that i have ever meet in my life , she use to call me grandaugther and I was so happy to get the opportunity to meet her and when the time pass; her son that lives in Generic_City came to country and decide to take her with him and when the moment to say good bye comes, I was really sad because I would not be able to see her again ,but after she left I would always remember the words that she tell me; "I'm living ,but dont worry because you would always be in my heart ,and i will always have in present everytime that you spend with me and make me happy." that day I learn that when you do something no matter what it is you will always receive something back and that something it can change your life forever.
We get more by doing something ,because if we want something and we work hard to get what we want , we create a confidence of ourself, that we know that no matter how hard we have to work to accomplish that ,if we put our effort we can get what we want. like when you are at school and you have alot of assigments to do ,but you still motivate yourself to complete everything that you have to get done and you make the effort to continue until you are done, that's when you realize that you have that confidence of knowing that " if you purpose yourself you can do everything ". confidence is something that is going to help you in every situation that you are in , it would help you when you are struggleling to take a important decision that maybe it can change your life. I remember when my sister was confused , because she didn't know if she would be able to accomplish the career that she wanted to take in college, and since that day I admire her ,because she believe herself ,she take the career and I knew that she knew that confidence help her to continue fordward and to accomplish what she already know that she wanted ,but at the same time she was scared of taking the challenge and fail. Sometimes we have to take that fear of failling out of our lifes ,and bring that confidence that would help us to belived in ourself's.
Getting more by doing something, is better than don't do anything expecting that we are going to get something.
By doing something we will always be growing more than what we are , we would always receive something back and that can be the happiness of another person's , and we would have that confidence to believed in ourself knowing that we can do everything that we want if we work hard for it. It's important for people to know that in this life they can have the opportunity to accomplish everything that they want tio improved their life ,but also at the same time they have to know that to accomplish something they have to work hard , have confidence, and they get everything they want in this life. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
E19E1BEB08EA | I feel that working with a partner is more beneficial to students. Working with partners gets students extra help when in need. It can make new friends while working on big projects. Also it makes the work get done easier and quicker when working in big groups. I also personally think that any project with a presentation should be a group project. If that presentation has more than just the presentation it should be a three person group.
Working with a partner is beneficial to students, because it gives extra support or help on a project or classwork. If a project is too big and impossible for one person to complete they could split up the work. For example, when I had a final project in my english class; I separated the work with my partner. We had to do an essay and a PowerPoint presentation. My partner did the essay and did the PowerPoint presentation and we both finished in time. If I hadn't had my partner, I probably would not have finished the project in time. My teacher making it a group project made it way easier to do because I didn't have to worry about writing essay.
Another reason that working with partners is beneficial to students is that they can build new friendship while doing work. When students are doing work in groups, they are together the whole class and have to stay in contact outside of school. For example, when I was working on a video for my journalism class I had a very big video that was due in a few days. I made good friends with the people that were in that group because we spent the whole class together and staying in contact after school. Every time I'm making a video I want to work with them because I know they will do a good job.
Another way that working in partner benefits students is that it saves them time and makes them finish their work quicker. If the students split up their work and do their work efficiently they will finish quickly. The more group members will make it even quicker. For example, when I was working with a friend and two other students on a project for a book we finished the book very quickly and the book review was finished very quickly as well. When partners are helping each other it makes everything way easier and more fun as well, because you get to hang out with your friends while being productive.
Also if the teacher lets students pick people, they can pick people that know a lot about the topic of the project or classwork. For example, in when I had spanish we did a project about Puerto Rico and since I'm from Puerto Rico everyone wanted to pick me. I went to a group where a good friend of mine was and the project was very easy to finish and present. The project was done so quickly that the next class we had free time for the whole class. That's another reason why working in groups is so beneficial and good.
Working with partners can also make students more comfortable with the subject or the project. Students sometimes get handed a project or classwork without knowing what to do. Having a partner to help the out is great so they can get comfortable with the subject or the project. For example, when I was Earth and Space Science I had no idea what to do on a project the teacher was assigning. She assigned partners and my partner told me what to do and I finally understood. The project took us about two days to finish but it was a very hard project to do that would have been impossible to finish alone.
Groups of at least three people should be required for project of more than 2 assignments. Two people can't do a project with five assignments and should have that extra person to split up the work and no one does extra work. For example, when I was in the sixth grade I had a project where I had to write about Mozart's story and I had to write an two paragraphs, buy and design a poster board, and also give a presentation and memorize everything. I did the essay but forgot to do the poster board until the night before. I had to stay up to 12:30 at midnight doing the poster and memorizing the 2 paragraphs. If the teacher would have made it a group project, I wouldn't have had to worry about the poster because my group members were on top of it.
Another reason that groups of at least three people benefit students is that maybe one of the students doesn't want to do any work there's still another group member left that wants to do the work. For example, my english teacher gave us a presentation to do on PowerPoint and we split up the slides. But one of the group members didn't do anything, so the other group member and me had to do all of his work. We presented got points and he didn't. That's why it's so important to have groups of at least three people, because you still have a backup.
Some people say working alone is beneficial for students because you only have to worry about yourself and no one else. However, if you work with a group or a partner the work gets done quicker and easier. While doing your work you can also make new friends and get help from them. Also, it helps pick out partners for the future that you know that those people will execute and do their work. For example, when I was working on a video for my journalism class I had a very big video that was due in a few days. I made good friends with the people that were in that group because we spent the whole class together and staying in contact after school. Every time I'm making a video I want to work with them because I know they will do a good job and be productive.
I feel that working with a partner is more beneficial to students. Working with partners gets students extra help when in need. It can make new friends while working on big projects. Also it makes the work get done easier and quicker when working in big groups. Bigger projects have to be at least a three person group because two people can't handle big projects by them selves and should have extra help. That's why it's so beneficial for students to work with partners on projects and other big classworks. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 |
E1ACA6A0198E | Hi, my name is Generic_Name and I am interested in pursuing in Microsoft Engineering. I am experienced with most Microsoft products that they have made through out my whole life. I am also experienced with Microsoft Software that they have created.
I should be elected to work with Microsoft because Iv'e been using Microsoft products through out my life. For example I use there gaming console, laptop, tablet, and there desktop. I have experience with Microsoft products and I know how there system works. Iv'e study how they first made the gaming console and I also study how they made the Microsoft tablet/laptop. Iv'e been buying Microsoft products through out my whole life and that shows that I love there products and it shows how supporting I am to Microsoft company. I don't just use Microsoft products I also study the products and how the system works. An average person would just buy the project to use but they care less how the system works. In the other hand I care how the products works because its interesting. I also fixed broken Microsoft products therefore the only reason I knew how to fix it because I learned about the products and Iv'e studied them.
My second reason why I should be elected in Microsoft Engineering is that I am very experienced with Microsoft software and programs. I use Microsoft software on a daily base because I use there software to work on something or to study them on how the software works. Most people use Microsoft software, For example Microsoft Word. People use word too type an essay or something really important. Most people know how to use Microsoft Word because its built to be simple, but in my case I know more tools and know more stuff about the program. Iv'e studied most of the tools that Microsoft has to offer in there software and trust me there is a lot of more stuff you can do with Microsoft word then just type a simple essay. Most people only know the basic tools in word and that proves that they are not interested in the software then just to do a quick essay. I have studied most tools and all Microsoft software's. Iv'e taken classes to learn about these tools and more about Microsoft programs. It taught me a lot of stuff then an average person. The Microsoft Industry most likely want people to know how to use there programs and software's because they are most likely going to make the employee's use the programs.
Some people may disagree with me that you don't have to be experienced with Microsoft software's and products because they think in order to get the job they will have to spend money to purchase Microsoft products and there monthly programs. They also may disagree about me having to know more tools and skills about Microsoft software's is a better way to get the job. I will say they are wrong because in reality most jobs would prefer people who are experienced with there product and software because then they dont have to teach a lot of stuff to the new employee. It also shows that they where interested in there product even way before they where interested in the job. Most jobs I will say want people who are experienced in there products because it shows that you enjoy there company and it shows that you will do great things for the company. Better and skilled people equals faster progress and thats what company's want.
I should be elected into Microsoft Engineering because I endure the company and enjoy everything that they have to offer. I am skilled with most of there software and most of Microsoft products. I will do great things for the company and make the company better then ever. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
E1AE7FDD072F | Should students participate in extracurricular activities? There are many diffrenet activities for students, not only sports, but clubs and many more. There is other to life then school and activities. Students should have the ability to choose what they want to do in the extra time they have. Schools already take half of the students time with going to school and homework .I disagree that students must have an extracurricular activity because they could learn a new language, do better in school, and spend time with family and friends.
First, students can learn another language besides their own. First, the language that they pick helps them with their applecation to colloge and in the real word. For example, it is more likely for a student that have two or three languages to be accepted in a colloge, unlike the student that only knows one. Second, students could communicate with others around the world. For example, if they learned Spanish, they can talk to others in Spain or around other that speak the same language. Third, they could be the only one that learned that language in your class or school. In conclusion, these were the advantges of learning a new language.
Second, teenagers that are struggling in school could take their time and have an advantage to be better in school. First, they could study for their coming exams and be able to focus on them. For example, students could make study groups or study buddies for studying better. Second, after school students can get extra help from their teachers. For example, they would only focus on the students weak part on the subject. Third, they could make up for the extra work they missed from their classes. For example, a student is sick or had a docters appointment they could make up that work at home after school. In conclusion, students would do better in school with the extra time they have.
Third, we need to spend time with family and friends. First, help your family with work around the house. For example, help your mom cook for dinner,or help your dad fix his computer,or help your siblings with homework. Second, you could hang out with your old friends. For example, go to mall,watch a movie ,or go to their house. Third, get to know eachother better. For example, play Never Have I Ever, Truth or Dare,and many more fun games you could play. In conclusion, spending more time with family and friends could grow you a stronger relashionship.
In conclusion, I disagree that students have to have an activity because students can learn a language, have better outcomes on their report cards, and have quality time with friends and family. These were some reasons to not have an extracurricular activity. The principal should not force any student that do not want to do an activity make them. Students must have their own right to do what the want. Go stop extracurriculars! | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
E1B279EE81AE | dear principal
i think some of student want to go help the community and some of them didn't want to help the community but i think that student should perform community service because we not let down the student who wants to go and help the community because if u say the student will not perform community some of student will think that this is unfair and they will not agree with this decision. all i have to say is that student should perform community. have a great decision and also thank you. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
E1B30D0F1F11 | Do you ever just wonder how school would be like if you could pick your own classes/electives? My opinion is that students should not be required to take a music, a drama, or an art class. There are many reasons why I think the above. Sudents are capable of choosing whats best for them and what they like to do. Counselors or teachers should not be picking students or electives. Student want to be taking or doing many things that they are into to. I think that music, drama, or an art class should be electives.
Strudents are capable of choosing whats best for them and what they like to do because they want to do what intesrests them. For example, I do not like to take music, it bores me. I would rather take drama. People are very diferent from each other. Such as music, drama, and art should be extra credit for students that are interested in thiose kind of electives/classes. We just need to give students a chance to do their own things and be choosing their own kinds of thing.
Counselors or teachers should not be picking students electives. The reason why I think this is because all electives should not be classes in general. For example, some people like math, instead of students taking an art class, ect. They can be taking another math class. If thats what they love learning about because with art, we cant do anything with it in the future. Which in math we mostly use it and need it in everything.
Students want to be doing many things that they love in school. Yes, that is very true. CLASSES THAT ARE FOR FUN SHOULD BE ELECTIVES!! Not required. We should just think about what we like to do best. Everyone should be able to pick their own classes.
In conclusion, music, drama, and art should not be required. Student like to do what they like best. Counselors/teachers should be picking those classes for us. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
E1B9CAF68CA7 | Hilary Clinton, soccer players, people in the government everyone had failed once in their life time. Everyone is not complete. We are humans we make mistakes and we fail.
Failure without loss of enthusiasm is the best thing people can do. We gain experience by failing. We learn not to give up and chase our dreams. We learn how to be patient and deal with problems. We never know when is the best time to do something or to get something so be patient. my parent told me that"good things will come to you just be patient"
Although, after failing once most of the people lose hope and stop trying. Nevertheless, it is not easy to start over because it gets boring working on same thing over and over and people give up on their dreams.
To begin, failing help people to gain more experience. When we do same thing over again it makes our work easier. For example when we fail the test at school and we have to retake it we already know what mistake we did for the test so we do not repeat it. This shows that we will try harder when we get the chance to do it again. Clearly we will be successful next time.
Furthermore, we learn not to give up when we fail for the first time. Giving up is not the best thing to do after failing. For instance, we can make a whole new plan and ways to do our work. This shows that we are going to be successful next time. For example, when I was 13 I had to take a test in order to get in to the high school that I wanted but, the test was hard and I failed the test i said I will not take it again because it is hard and I can't do it but my sister said that i can't give up and I have to take it again and again and finally I pass the test for the second time.
Moreover, it teaches us to be patient. when we fail it is the best thing for us to wait for the good time to start over and to get what we want. obviously, it will take time to start all over and do everything one by one but it will help us to learn how to be patient and to deal with problems better than before. Clearly we will get what we want sooner or later after trying hard.
Overall, failure is a key to success. We will not get to success if we do not fail once. It is not something to be ashamed of.
In conclusion, gaining experience is the gift of failing. We start working hard and not to give up. We learn to be patient and chase our dreams. The best thing we can do is to be happy and joyful even after failing. Everything has it's own time so be patient. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
E1CAFEEB258E | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson, have's kind of a point about the world trying to make you something else.
My point of view is that we all have choice's we make to better our selves to make us better people in the world but some of the choice's we make as human's can lead us to a wrong path. We as people have to set goal's for the future and plan ahead to accomplish them. One thing i learn while being incarcerated you got to value yourself more than you value other's, if you dont value yourself what's the point for setting up goal's if all they going to do is collect dust.
Everybody haves different opinion's some people might think the world is at fault for the choice's they make and thats not true, people blame others when they know their in the wrong or done something wrong than try to say it's the other person's fault. I'll say is, with everything going on in the world we got to get together and help each other more and come together as a team NO! more as a family, when one of us fall down we lift each other up, if one of us get's hurt we heal each other. There's got to be thing's we can do, hard time's dont last forever at these moment's we got to remember how far we come from hard time's when things didnt look good for us. The world can try to charge you, it can try to break you, it can throw you to the side but the goal's you set up and the people by your side will help you complete the dream's and goal's you wish about. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E1D1EFCFD8CD | I agree because a positive attitude make your life more successful, also people see that things you make if you fail and you continue to do it and they see how you never give up they want to be like you with the positive attitude and they want to try to makes his goals.
the positive attitude make your life more happy you always try the things you cannot do it and make the things positive in you make your goals positive attitude make more friend you make people feel more good good decision with your good positive you can get a good grade always need a positive attitude for these life people want yo have someone who has a positive attitude to work or schools programs kind people
Bad attitude makes your life more unsuccessful .
some people who has a bad attitude always said why i cannot do this or why the other person is more good them me in the people who has a bad attitude enter to depression they always want to be alone they don't want to be with friends or family.
they don't try the things they want to do most people don't want to be with you, because you always have bad attitude you always are angry you can never realize your dreams people always want to be alone they always a problems for everything and make his or her life more useful makes you life more sad they are rude they always complicate his life that why i agree with the positive attitude makes your life more successful.
the positive attitude make you comfortable to your self,
In the more important you are happy ,you can make different with bad attitude and try to people see the positive attitude is more successful .
in helps people to never give up they can realize his or her dreams.
in these life all the things hart to get ,but if you have two things. the things are positive attitude in work hart you make all your dreams.
The but attitude it not success for your life . | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
E1DB041DD77B | The statement positive attitude is the key to success in life is true,the attitude is important in life. No one want to live their life with the negative way that not good for everyone, their family, and everyone around them. Let thinking about that when you have positive attitude and good energy and give it to everyone first thing you got is people will love you because that make people feel comfortable when near by, they feel your positive energy you giving to them,and you will have a good friendship when you give them the best feeling they need after all the problem, stress in their life. The second thing is that make yourself happy, life is tired you will not happy if always have a negative attitude in life, no one can make you happy except yourself. The last one is some people think they are having very bad life, they always get the worse thing than other people, and they want to give up but if they looking around them they are not the one have the baddest life. Follow that way you will never become success.
When you do a good thing make everyone happy and you will feel like you are so cool, you are very good, anyway you will feel happy because you was did a good thing and when they happy they will give their love, their respect. They like you and when you get in trouble they will help try their best to help you without your money like the way you make them happy. Or the long time no see they still remember you in the good memory, and not forget you make feel you important in the world everyone not forget you, that is the success in life.
I am very sure most of us learn from teachers and parents are always the positive way and positive attitude, they will not teach you some thing bad and negative, what is mean? That mean they want you to live the most happy you can because they know they can't go with you or following you forever. The success not mean you become you must be rich or must become famous, you can think it the easy way is make yourself happy. For example, when you rich but you not live positive attitude and people not respect you, love you, support you, or you always worry about your money, you get stress or some people always say they love you but for real they just love your money when become poor they will leave, I am sure you still not happy for that way.
People think they have very bad life and always think the worse thing that the negative attitude and it will go with you forever and you never have the better life, the life you want and you never become successful. Why people always say never give up or you don't know how far you can touch your dream, you think it very far away, some it next to you but you just don't take your chance and your time to finish your dream. For example you think you don't know or not good at anything, why you don't try it? whatever you are you still not doing great for the first time just do your best, you can do better for the next time, you will never know what you can until you try it, you believe you could and you did it. When you touch your dream by hard-working, and you will know the challenge in the life make you grow up.
in conclusion, the success in life is can be base on the attitude you have, the positive is always good thing for your life, that make you life is easier don't make you life become too hard. The first of all you need make yourself happy, then you can make other people happy, finally don't give up make your life going up by your hard-working if you can do all of those thing you are successful not by your career or your money but by your good energy and positive attitude make it become success. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
E1E09D32484D | Do we choose our character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control? Some believe people choose their own character traits and who they want to be. Others believe that our character is formed by influence. I think we choose how to make our own character traits and we choose the attitude we want to give to others. This is important because our character is what represent us and is what makes us responsible for the person we chose to be.
First, people have the power of choosing who they want to be and producing their own attitude. For example, characteristic is important because is the quality, or property of us and it is what makes us committed to keep moving on the person we chose to be and different from others. Furthermore, I believe that people should choose their own character traits even though if they think that is formed by influences beyond their control. Perhaps some people should do the effort to change it because not everyone have a good and nice character.
Additionally, a person's personality is the collection of emotional and behavioral traits that characterize them. Personality and attitude is the key to be a role model for others to become a great person and care more about whether we choose wisely our character we're giving to other peoples. People's humility and kindness is priceless. Personality and attitude is what represents us and what makes us noble. For example, people can think that our own character traits is formed by influences but they still change it and do the effort to be a better person everyday.
However, not everyone agrees with this position. Some people claim that our character is formed by influences beyond our control. If we do not choose our character traits and they are formed by influences beyond our control, it might have its disadvantages.
For example, one must consider that there are people who have a bad character and end up alone because of their attitude, also their character can brings other people displeasure and make them go away and not get close to you just because they think you will never change your character but our character will be what we, ourselves choose to make it.
In conclusion, I think choosing our character, personality, and attitude is what makes us a humble and noble person to look up. I also think that some people should focus on the attitude they are giving to others and analyze if its what they would like to receive from someone else and if it brings them displeasure, perhaps it encourages them to change a bad character for a good personality and attitude. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
E1EC4869981F | The decision that the principal made that students should get involved in the activities is an unethical idea. Who would like to waste their time doing something that is not really beneficial? At school students have a lot of works to do, and now being in another activity might have a bad affect in their academic goals.
If a student get involved with the activities they wont have time for there daily work. They will have less time to do their homework or projects. This can keep students away from their academic goals. They also wont have much time to spend with family. which means that there will be problems with those relationships, and there will be separations between there family.
Getting involved in these activities brings stress for students. There will be one extra program added in their daily routine, Which contains more work. The work that they didnt choose to do, but the have to do. By having stress after this much work students wont get enough sleep, Which is an unhealthy situation.
Having this much pressure can affect students's grades. By spending their time on something that they dont really want to do, but they have to can put them in a lot of pressure which keeps them away from what they want to do. They will join these activities and wont focus on their studies. Students will start getting bad grades.
So, after this many reasons we all know that getting involved in the extracurricular activities can really hurt students. Joining these activities is neither healthy nor good for grades. All this shows that students should choose to be in the activities if they want to not that they are forced to. | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
E20DE200FEA8 | There are people who believe that true self-esteem comes from praising the student's work and others believe that true self-esteem comes from achievement. There are situations where a student should feel that his real hard work is considered good by praising his work. There are some students that feel that their work was good, because of their achievements. There are some types of students:
Students that make themselves feel especial when their work is appreciated
Students that feel that their work was hard by achievements
Students that even if they do not try their best, want their work to be praised in order to learn
Students the feel themselves in a position to learn when they do not give their best effort and it is praised
There are many students that deserve their work to be praised to build self-esteem, because they have really tried their best in order to get their work done, but there are many students who do not deserve their work to be praised, especially if they have not tried their best on their work. Those students who try their best on their work, they deserve their work to be praised, so that they can notice that the real hard work that they have done is appreciated. It would make them keep their hard work.
There are some people that truly believe that true self-esteem comes from achievements. It makes a lot of sense, because achievements come from real hard work. If any student achieved what they wanted, it meas that they had worked hard for it. If people want to build true self-esteem through achievements it is a great idea that they have that on mind, because it would make them feel especial if they achieve it through hard work.
There are many circumstances where it depends on the type of people and situation where you want to build self-esteem. For instance, there are certain type of people that even if you praised their work will not keep it to build self-esteem. There are certain type of people that will. There are people that learn by achievements in order to build self-esteem.
In conclusion I think that true self-esteem comes from both, achievements and praising. There are people who build self-esteem trough the hard work that has been praised, but also achievements. There are many type of people that build self-esteem trough achievements, but also praising. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
E21038BEF290 | Could Impressions Change
In this prompt statement i disagree sometimes impressions can change time after time, but some people need help of how to control it ,or they may not know how to express them selves in front of people some impressions change by you trying to say something,a person maybe happy one day and the next day mad, or the person may not like you.
Impressions could change in many ways we as citizens, have so many expressions of how we should confront others. Some of the popularity of the United States don't like people because of their impressions, but some citizens hate it when they have the same impressions too. Even though people have problems of how their impressions work also they say that citizens may need help of how to control their: sadness,anger,happiness,and fear when they give impressions to others. Teachers in schools say they have problems with kids attitudes this year of how they approach others, and of how they approach their teachers too. We as citizens can't help of how we express, give impressions,and how to put our emotions out their even so you can't trust your parents,friends relatives for help nor the teachers the government can't help us or the president .
People can change their impressions;in so many ways of thinking they can: ask for help, ask for advice,and talk with someone about it.
Impressions can be held in different ways of being they can be held by trying to go for something at the store,eating ice cream, talking with someone close.
Parents think that their kids or others won't change their impressions towards others even though they think that there can be a possibility that can happen you can try and approach your kids by sitting down with them,giving them time to help them,trying to understand them.
Impression can change in many different ways,but it's not impossible to make that change sometimes impressions can be helped by others some of the people in the U.S. have problems trying to say good impressions about how they feel,wanting to confront a person,but others just might dislike that person they might also have hate in them,but they might not.
Into today's economy people are the same of their impressions,some citizens have the problem of dealing with those impressions,although they have the same emotions but also the same expressions. Everyone has a different background, so they may have different impressions of everybody around them. Impressions can be changed nothing, is impossible to do unless you give in the effort to do it or not try to have confidence of who to trust let impressions change or not nothing is impossible to do unless you put your mind into it. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
E218D28DBF0E | Have you ever hurt someone feel before? There are some people want to be honest to there friends or family but there is other people don't want to be honest because there are sacred it might hurt them. People don't want to be honest to there friend because they might lose there friendship forever.
Will i disagree for being honest at all time. You don't have to be honest all the time it might hurt them but they need to know the true. For the person who have to tell them the true is hard for them because they don't know it might hurt there feels or might lose there friendship and maybe not forgive them.
Maybe there will be a point you have to tell the true to your friends and maybe there will not be a point to tall the true to them but sometime you have to honest. There will be a point that you have to tell the true like how you feel about them or what you don't like them if you don't like about them tell them the true be honest to them and if they don't want to be your friends so don't be then.
There are some friends don't like to hear the true from other. There are other do like to hear the true from other so they can be a good friends or a person. So you can trust them and feel like they are you friends but a good and a very fun friend you ever want to have and dream of having.
If you can't be honest to your friends don't said anything just be quit but just let you know there will be time you have to be honest but you don't be honest every time you can said the true. Be honesty sometime you can think about before you do it but think about good sometime be honest doesn't go will as you plane it. It can go bad but very bad but something it does go good. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
E21BAA47A9F4 | People almost always credit their success by having a good attitude because they treat people the way they want to get treated, it makes other people happy and it makes the them happier. Having a good attitude to another person makes that same person give you that same attitude back, and to other people. They spread good vibes, and it makes them feel happier. Giving a complement to someone every day can lead them to doing the same thing. Having a good attitude can lead to having good karma so next someone says "nice shoes" to a random person. That someone will get treated with good karma like passing their test the next day.
Having a good attitude to people at school can lead to having more friends, and getting treated better. By treating the teacher with respect, and kindness. It can make the teacher do you same thing back. Good attitude is the key to success, and every famous person you see on TV always has a good attitude. Maybe thats why there successesful and famous all that hard work they put into their job. When someone has a good attitude it's most likely thier happy, or everyone they talked with was happy.
But sometimes there's a sad person and to make thier day or cheer them up a complemant can help. By saying their outfit looks good, or their hair cut looks better than last time. It can cause them to feel better and do the same thing back to someone else that's having a bad day. There's also people that have good attitudes to make them selfs feel better It's like leaving chruch you fell happier. But coming to church it's just feels good.
Having a bad attitude can effect other peoples mood it can make them happy or sad. Having a good attitude makes more people happier and feel calm. Attitude effects almost all of the day and other peoples day including your family and pets. If your mad all day it's because someone was mad to you or just got effected by it from someone eles.
It's just better to have a good attitude all day than being mad all day and causing other people to be mad insted of being happy. Being happy in the worst times in your life is a good thing and can change your fellings somehow. I would rather have a good day in a bad day than have a bad day. If half of the world had a good attitude next thing you now the whole world has a good attitude. But people don't like doing that they rather be mean to other people and that's why the whole world is violent and wars start and people die Because people don't have good attitudes.
Good attitude effects a lot of people like in music and in movies sometimes it's good and sometimes it's bad. People that are famous and have bad attitudes are really common they get mad at their fans but the fans is the only reason why their famous and rich. Rich people are usually the sad ones and the poor are usually the happier ones because they have better attitudes.
Good attitudes effect a lot and so do bad ones that's why thiers all types of people in the world. Good ones and bad ones the ones with good attitude and the ones with bad attitude. Good attitudes effect friends and family and that's why people should always have good attitudes. One time I was testing and I had a good attitude but when I saw my score I had a bad attitude for the rest of the day. And the same things happens when my parents are mad at each other it gives me a bad attitude for the rest of the day in school and in soccer. But when someone is nice to me or gives me a complement I feel better about myself and it chages my attitude.
Sometimes having a good attitude in the worst times is bad like having a good attitude in a funaral or at a sad movie. But sometimes it's best to be happy and have a good attitude to spread good energy to other people and family. It's sometimes good to have a bad attitude so people can know your sad and be happier near you to cheer you up. Being nice and having a good attitudes can really change someones day so try it and complement people so they will do the same thing back.
I usually have a good attitude even when I have a really bad headache or am sick because having a bad attitude is not fun. and it makes other people have bad days or feel bad so that's why I always have a Good attitude. To other people and my family so they will all have a good attitude and that's why having a bad attitude is bad because it causes bad thing and we don't need that we need to be nice and help other people. Thats why people are so mean and don't care.
And that's why problems start and people get mad and that's why you should have a good attitude everyday to make other people happier. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E21C97204867 | Changing the cafeteria food for students would be like taking a bone away from a dog. One of the reasons why changing the school lunch would be a bad idea is because, students that attend the school would not be happy with the change. When students are unhappy with changes of the schools sometimes parents can get involved and that brings a bad reputation for the school board. One day I was watching a show and they were making school changes without the students or parents consent and it turned into a big thing. Students were so angry the went on a "strike" and refused to go to school.
Another reason why taking away students favorite food would be a bad idea is because students would stop eating at school. For example, when I went to a family dinner they made meat loaf and I absolutely hated it, I couldnt bring myself to finish it and I felt extremely bad but i had to throw it away. Another example is also similar to my last one but, one day my friends and I went to a buffet and they didnt have a lot options to choose from, we ended up getting these wings and it was just awful we could not eat it all. When people see things they do not like then they most likely will not eat it or even try it out.
Lastly, changing the cafeteria food would leave students with less options to choose from. It would be unfair for those who dont like what they are serving and they would have nothing else to eat. Look at it like this, its like when you go out to your favorite shopping store and they have taken out all the clothes you loved so much about that store and they replaced it with clothes you hate. You would be very unsatisfied if that wouldve happen to you. Thats what students would feel if the school lunch were to change.
Some people say that changing to a healthier school lunch would be a lot better for students; Although, this is a good point, its wrong because it misses the fact that some students would be unhappy with this decision. These are some reasons on why changing the menu would be a bad idea for the school. | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E21D14227555 | A wise man once said ''the usage of technology has had an impact on humans contact for centuries''.The usage of technology has had a positive impact with human contact because people can see what others are doing for fun and it can result in finding people that are from other countries to become your friend.
Sense technology has improved through out the 20th centuries people argue that technology has caused limitations on human contact but that is far from being right. People have been brought closer thanks to the invention of the internet and it wouldn't have happened if technology wasn't improved. The internet has opened a whole new world of opportunities and awesome people to meet. People can laugh at a funny mems together and create groups where their you can talk about what ever you want. People can even ask others if they would like to be friends with you. Having the internet,people become more confident in being their true self. People can see how much fun a family is having and it can persuade them to go and try the place and experience the fun for themselves.
With technology people have learned how to do things by watching videos of someone else doing it or by calling a friend. Video games have also has let to people having to talk on the mic and being able to comunicate with each other. People can also build their sense of being a leader as they play a game they can ask people to saty with each other. Thanks to technology people can have online teachers and people who would do online courses say for instance if you didnt learn a lesson you can go online and find a somone who would eplain to you or tell you how to solve a problem.
Some may argue,that technology has a negative impact on human contact because it distract others from the real world. How ever,people still have human to human contact its just evolving and becoming something different. In conclusion,technology has had a positive impact over these years and i will keep improving an the people will have better ways to have human contact. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
E22AC96B8B1D | I agree what Emerson is talking about because nobody should ever tell you that you can not be yourself or feel wrong about them self. if you want to be a doctor then go head make your dream come true or if you want to be a nurse then go head do not let anyone stop you because at the end of the day your the who wants to make your dream come true and who wants to be a better person in life and who wants to make your family proud of you of, what you have become, what you have been working hard for. if you want to be a nurse then you will need to work really hard and study if you want to get to that level and to that point. if people do not like who you are and they think bad about you do not let to them bring you down keep doing you prove to them that you do not need them in your life and that you can do better without them
Because your the one who wants to be a better person in life. if people wanna say stuff behind your back igone them beacuse they are the ones who are gonna feel bad about them self. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
E22F1FD54169 | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson Wrote,"Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."I disagree with The Author Ralph Waldo Emerson because if you have already try to do something more than you have already mastered,
You will grow because now days there is too much competition in everything for examples Companies,Schools and Sports etc. I think if you try to do something more than you have mastered will make you more better than you are because if you have mastered in something it will not be a bad idea to practice more even you know everything because everyday somebody is getting good by watching people those have mastered everything so when they go against them they will beat the master because they already know whats the master is going to do and they will try to protect themselves. Here are some examples when people play video games like fortnite people be watching streamers from YouTube and twitch to get better and learn some new moves and after watching them for some weeks they know what they are going to do next and how they going to play at any bad or good situation
Here are some example like Apple is big company and Samsung is a big company they both have some bad relationships like Apple always make a good phone which is always better than Samsung but Samsung try their best to make a better phone than Apple so, Samsung has been trying to make better phones then Apple by trying to copy their features for examples the screen size, The GB, and motherboards. only reason Apple is making better phones because they have mastered everything and they are still making some new technology which Samsung might not able to make in next two or three years and here is a another example they are so many cars in the world for example Mercedes and Lamborghini they both are good cars Mercedes is a old company so they know everything about the car the way the want to make it luxury or fast and for example Mercedes is a fast and a luxury car where Lamborghini is a fast and luxury car,
Here is a last example like your coach if you play sports you need a coach which is going to teach you how to play and teach some moves that you can use to beat your enemy and make you strong and tell how to dodge some stuff when they try to hit you for example people play boxing and for new people they hires coaches which help them to learn how to play and stuff. and teach you how to defend your self from getting hit on your face or hitting him back.
The conclusion is yes, i disagreed with
The
Author Ralph Waldo Emerson Wrote,"Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." and you need to practice everyday dont matter how good your there is a lot of completion out there and some people dont even know there are so many people better than them which some people dont even know what kind of abilities they got. they need to go to gym and stuff to know hat kind of abilities they better in a moth year or days. and to get their mind working antler and help them to have a good mind and learn how to grow better and teach you guys to learn and thaknyou for grading my essay I love you from heart and have a nice day. At the end of the day the light away the light | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
E231B7832E0C | Energy and resources, are one the most very important things in the world. So we should all try to save it. If we waste both of them we can't live with out it. This is why most the countries doesn't have one them or both, because they spent more money on, doing other stuff like makin new buildings, restaurants and etc. Instead of that, we should be saving money on resources, so people can eat and save energy by turning most of the lights of just need to turn main lights on, beacuse in today's world companies make money of the people, by sending them extra bills eventhough they didn't use that much energy.
Schools are one the most places to waste more energy. It could change, if we have less school hours we could save energy. In my school i mostly see all the lights are on, if there is no class the lights should be turned of, this is one of the big reason. In most of my classes the lights are turned of, because we care about our school. My school mostly have all the resources, but we need to have more because more students are coming in from other countries. We should be taking care of our school, have it clean and dont waste. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
E23EF596D2B8 | I
think high school offer those programs to young students that wants to graduate in early age and other students take this programs, because they want to graduate to continue with college or work to help their families. In other cases students just took these courses because they don't likes school .
But however their are always students that decide to complete high school in four years to have full credits to go at the best colleges. These students that take high school in four years are more prepared to colleges and they have more probabilities to get a better job.
For me take school in three years is a bad choice, because you learn a few less.
Examples:If you take school in three years and if you don't have the result that you wanted than you are gonna think that was a bad choice in your life.
Conclusion: students would take the traditional four years of school and enjoy the young age at school. Than after the four regular years, It's time to think about what they want to do with life work or continue with college. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
E2456BDC6648 | Conserving energy and resources by attending less days to school. Adopting a four-day school week and only adding two more hours; each day consisting of nine hours. It will help to reduce the consuming of energy and resources. As we go out everyday to complete our duties in the school's building, we consume energy from the sky lights and others useful lights, the computers, and laptops. Also the food students receive in school as a lunch. Plus students frequently purchase gas to come to school; due that some students need to come in their own cars or public buses, because they don't live around the school area. Additionally students that are currently having a part-time job will be able to work more. In the case of student who are not working in a part-time job would get one more day added to the weekend, and they would be able to spend more time doing family activities or having a good time with friends, and close people.
To start with, reducing the consume of energy will help with our planet; energy is produced with some elements and one of them and a very important one is: water. The less energy we use or waist the less will be the affect for our planet. Adopting the four-days school week will make all of us stay at home on Fridays and reduce the energy use from the school when using lights, computers and laptop that need to be charged.
Secondly, If students come to school only for four days, the food that they usually obtain on Fridays will be saved and use for the next Monday; that way saving food will start to be a good benefit for conserving resources. Also some students come to this school but they living in a different city not closely to school; they purchases gas every week and they have to spend money, Therefore if they only come for four days a week; they will saved gas for the weekends or for the next week of school. That's one of the best ways to conserve cars' energy and resources; due to that gas use petroleum to be produced and other substances and chemicals that come from our planet soil grounds or others areas.
Lastly, Students will obtain benefit by adopting this for-days school week as well, because the students that are currently working in a part-time job will obtain the opportunity to work a full day on Fridays, they will be able to increase their revenue. In the case for students that don't have a job, they will have extra time to do homework, projects, and family activities as well.
Even thought, they are students with a different point of view, when it comes to adopting a four-day school week. they argue that adding two more hours to the regular school day, will be more exhausted and they will have less hours to work in their part-time jobs.
In conclusion, Adopting a four-day school week will help to conserve energy and resources. Firstly: conserving energy light and food and saving gas and money, having extra time for work, friends and most important: Family. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
E24A6E61B08D | Have you ever ask yourself why do some people are always are their home never go out to socialize with others? Since technology appear in the world, the life of millions of people got a easier way to live, because it brought most of the things and supplies that we need to make our life better and easier.
In my opinion i think technology has positive effect in people's live specially in young people, because teens who are in school have more opportunities to learn a get the skills that they need for their future, they have access to computers at their school to get more information about their classwork and the benefit to take classes or tests online without even attending to school.
Technology allows you to communicate with others without having contact, you dont need to be face to face to communicate with others, it brings people the facilities for those who dont have time to go out to buy the things that they need online like clothes or grocery without going to the store, and the capability to invent things that humans cant do.
However technology has negatives effects too, have you ever seen a little kid playing with toys like before technology was invented, you can see kids of 5-10 years old that already have a phone or video game console , they are addicted to it but not only kids young people too, therefore people can lose their vision by using it to much but its not the fault of technology its our own responsibility to take care of our health.
Technology affects peoples life by reducing their contact with others but at the same time it brings a lot of benefits to our generation and the future. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E24ADB91F6D3 | I wrote a prompt to determine one thta people made bullyng to, it is really wonderful how people change when they know you, I did a lot to try to be fine with other people's,but not everybody is nice there are still some people to make bullyng or watever to you, they just don't try to meet the people they just perjudice the people without knowing them that's why i am always alone because to much people talk a lot of someone and i really don't like that the people be talking things about others and that the people that are the one's that are threat with bullyng they don't even say anithing of sacared of those people they think they can make bullyng to them.
I always try not to take care of what other people say they can talk whatever they want is their problem but when someone come's and they don't like that they can get hurt and there is when they look for you when they are in trouble, when i am angry or sad i just like to play soccer because that helps me to forget the problemsm that i got in my mind, if could it do something.
i would it try to make games of soccer so all the people that want to play soccer can get to do it and they can forgot their problems too. that's why sports are made because people can have fun without fight, and one more thing it can be is to go with friends to see movies or to watch soccer games or basket ball games or volleyball i don't know but there are a lot of ways to get to know someone, in my way i think that everything got a solution for the problems the problem is that we don't our respect to other people if we do it everthing it would be really different
Everything that we want is to be safe in a place where no gangstars are bbecause they only know how to make peolpe get more poor of what they are we should get involve all the families to try to destroy the people that are hurting others, alot of people try to study their best to be someone in their life they just want to get out their families out of trouble, out of bad ways, they can make alot of money easier when they finished ther school, only with high school finish you can get a nice job not a job that you would like it but you can get at least something.
People can be safe having their things like if someone try to take all that you had they just can go the police and tell them what happens and they might help them and they might help to try to recover what they lose people shouldn't be scared because when they show that they are scared other people can be smart and do a lot of things to thm just because they show sacared and all that we are people really smart but we sould be smart in everything because not because we are smart in some things it means that other people can be nice with you if you don't show angrily other people angry can hurt you in one way that it's going to hurt you a lot.
All people are nice but when they get angry or mad they change a lot they can be reall angry and you can be scared of how they can get, but for not having problems with someone you should just invite them to play sports somewhere or to have fun with your friends you'll can go to the beach and have a lot of fun there so the people can not get angry and it can get to be your friends forever or at least only friends, but no one should show their debil point because when you get a problem with your friends they would aready know what's the point that you would mostly hurt that's hy i think no one should know the most imporant debil point of your body or of you so this is my prompt thanks | 2 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
E25FE9E05F36 | It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. There is a lot of benefits of having a positive attitude which are health or physical improvements, how to solve a problem, and the power that exists inside you.
The benefits of optimism extend beyond stress relief better health, more rewarding relationships and enhanced productivity. People with a positive outlook tend to experience are reduced incidence of depression, lower stress levels and are better able to cope with stress causing events, an incresed life span and overall better health. People with a positive outlook on life are also more likely to live healthier lifestyle, and to smoke cigarattes less and drink less alcohol.
Attitude is the way taht we behave and we react to the daily activities, consequently a positive attitude may influence our life and it aspects in a deep way such as how we think, socialize, and even how our health is. All these aspects might be affected by a positive attitude. Actually it is proved that successful people have been influenced by the way they see the circumtances in their life. In other words, successful people see those circumtances with a positive attitude and they see those circumtances as a challange to beat and not like a punishment to suffer. Therefore, these people will be more likely to fight and have success in their life, rather than the ones who see their life as a punishment. Positive attitude might be the key to all the people who want to fulfill their dreams. If everyone would apply these concepts in their lives, they would become happier because they will see that everything including their life, situations, and problems, is under their own control.
Even though there are some people who wonder how to get a good positive attitude, is not simple to get it. Almost every single person that has has a positive attitude is because tehy have had a motivation or a feeling that supports their fight to reach their goal or achievement. When you have a positive attitude, you feel that there is a power inside of you that motivates you to do something or to get involved with something. These people are most commons to have best attitudes of this world.
Having a positive attitude can lead you to the lighter, braver and stronger way to stand against negative attitude. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
E263EB3FBC22 | The principal should allow students to bring cell phones to school. He should let them use it during lunch periods and other free time. As long as they turn them of during class time or any other learning time. I think the students are old and responsible. To let them use there phones during lunch or any other free time. They should know when to use the phones.
Students should be able to use there phones during there free time. It is there free time and they should know what there going to do with it. Either walk around talk or what ever they like to do or use there phones. They are old already and they what there doing. That's why the principal should let the students. Use there phones during there free time.
The principal should also let the students use there phones during there lunch periods. There the ones that are having there lunch. There not learning there just having fun with there friends and eating. So there is no reason to not let students use there phones. During there lunch time they should know if there going to eat or not. So there is the other reason why you should let the students. Use there phones during there lunch period.
So why not let the students use there phones. During there free time or lunch time. If there not learning there just having fun. They just will have to turn them of when they have to learn. They are old and responsible to let them use there phones. So that's why you should let students use there phones when there not learning. You should really let them use there phones during there time.
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E2687856AA7D | School districts should not allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. Those programs force the students to take summer or evenings courses, don't allow them to take elective classes, or students might not have the time that they need to be prepared for college. This information can help students to think more about their decitions, and have a successful life.
Summer, or evening courses can always be stressful for some students. Sometimes, they will not have time for family activities, or they might not have the opportunity to get involved in sports that they like, which is a good way to spent time with other students. It is also very important to know that students need time to rest, a free time when they can sleep and release the tiredness.
The elective courses during the school year should be available for all the student that wish to improve their knowledge. For example, learning other kind of things can encourage students to think about more ideas for their future, and develop new skills on many activities. Taking away the opportunity of students to choose any of elective courses, and forcing them to complete all the hard classes that they need is not a good solution. That will make students to force themselves to do hard work, which can end up in a failing situation.
In other words, its very important for students to be prepared for college. Also students should have the sufficient time to prepare, and choose the career that they really want. If in case students are not sure about what career they want, four year of High School should be enough time to learn more about carrers. For example, students will have more opportunities to attent college day also, they could go visit, and get information about any college that they are interedted on. Being well prepared is the best key to bulid a good future nad accomplish dreams.
This decition should be made by the school district to eliminate this programs, and let the students have a comfortable schedule for thier everday activities. spending more time at home with family, and refreshing their minds it's better than summer courses. Students should know that getting involved in elective classes is more fun, and bieng well prepared for college is more important. Even though students know it's going to be a longer way, it would benefit them in the future. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
E28221F47AE3 | Yesterday, I was talking with my parents and they tell me that I have to start thinking about what career I want after I graduate from high school. I start seeing what issues can cause and I think that it is bad idea to select what career I want at this age, because whats is going to happen if I don't like the career that I choose when I was younger or if that career is going to give me the money that I'm looking for and what about if my parents are not in conditions to help me pay the career that I want, after think all this I meet with my parents again and I tell them the reasons that why I don't want to select my career at this time.
The first reason that I think why is not a good idea to select my career at this age was, what is going to happen if I select one career but after four or five years later I like other career and I really want to be in the other that its totally different from the one that I select five years before, maybe they are going to get mad at me because they are going to say that am just wasting my time or something like that and I don't want that I want to be sure about the career that i get is going to really like me when I get older.
The second reason was, who know's that is that career is going to help me in my economy because some career with the time they lose demand on the thing that they are doing and they give you fire or reduce your salary, but if I take my time to think and analyze all the careers that i like that can be better, because everyone wants a job that can provide a good salary and a good benefits and thats what I want, in that way everything is going to be more secure for me that nothing of that issues that I said before is going to happen and my economy stays in good conditions.
And the third reason that I think was, what about if I select my career and my parents after the four years that we have to do in high school they don't have the opportunity to help me pay my career and I ready get very excited that's is going to get me very nervous because i didn't think about what other career I want to do. This is why I want more time to think about it and see if my parents can help me to pay the career that I choose, in this way me and my parents don't get frustrated, I for having multiple choices of what careers I like and my parents for paying something that they can afford with their money.
In conclusion, I think that it is a really bad idea to let young kids decide what career they want because not all the time it is going to like the same career that we choose when we were younger or what about if after high school you decide to no continued in school because you have to work because your parents need help for paying some stuffs or because you want to buy your own things or just you don't like school anymore, so in my opinion I think it's very important to have a lot of time for choose whatever you want to do after you graduate from high school. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
E282639E23F5 | Although some say that is not a good idea that students commit to a career at the young age because when they get to school and they when to a class and sit they will file very tire and will say that is why I did not whants to gets the career because I ready no that will afeck my class and I am not sleeping nothing at the nigh, actually is a good idea for students to commit a career at the young age because they can see that when they get they career they are going to see that the life is very hard and they can try to fix it by working and helping there family wit other things , and they can buy what ever they wants if they shoes a good career that is helping them and it will continue helping there future.
However does that believe that is not a good idea that students commit at the young age one reason is that they will file tire , because when they want to pay atention to math class and they see that the teacher is talking to much they are going to say no I want to sleep to to be in this class borring,second when they are in the corridor study for a quiz and they will be talking about the career and when they are going to take the quiz they will know nothing because they did not study .
Does who believe that is a good idea for students to commit a career at the young age give one reason ,one reason is that tey can see can the life is very hard and they will have to do there own thing ,second is that they can buy a car so because if they shoes a good career they are going to resif a lot of money so can have a car and help there family with other thing at home .
Finally that career it have to be good some you are not going to be looking for another commit career because you try hard and ask you family and teacher to help you to fun a good one, second if you like that career you most talk wit you mom or dad that you are happy with that and tell you teacher that help you to found that career and tell her can you will talk to other students to come and talk to the teacher so she can help them .
Inconclution people shoud agree that students can commit a career because it will help other students that are in High School and wants to be someone in the future they vere found what career do they want to work or study for ,second they will feel for good if they get the thing by there own ,thrid if they are traying to make something in their country their very try to talk to someone a friend or other person that can help them ,finally they can get more oportunity if they study hard and them founf they career that they wants . | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
E2A60C034849 | Some school's use cell phones for education. In Some school's cell phones are not allow. We the students think that cell phones are a good and usefull. Cell phones have internet and we can do a lot of our work with it. A cell phone its like a computer. The students think that we should use cell phones in education.
Cell phones have a lot of apps. The apps are easier to handle in a cell phone that in a computer. We the students already have apps for our cell phones were we can see our grades and school calendar. Also with school apps we can email our teachear. Students think thats one good reason to use or phones with education.
Cellphones are small and they still have it all. Rigth now students are using computer wich it harder because it makes our backpacks heavier, why dont we replacet them for a phone. Its beneficial for us. If we the students could handle a computer, we can handle a phone. Some people think that migth be a good option.
Cell phones have more facility to get into stuff. In cell phones everithing its abvaible, that means we can found a lot of stuff.. Definitions, apss, movies about education ect. To be abvaible to everithing its something beneficial for us. .Sometimes we need to watch and old movie and the teacher dont find it but if we have the cell phones everiyone would watching it separly. Cell phones are a good thing for the education.
Theres people that think that cellphones are a bad thing to the education. They think its not rigth to have a phe out in class. Some people think that cell phones are too avaible. They think they are distractive. They think its not the same think as a computer.
we see the two parts of this, one part its showing that we need phones and they are easier for and the other part its showing that they are a bad option. We
Students think we should have them. School should let us have them in class. Basicly phones and computers are the same thing. We can handle it. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
E2B6281D99BD | some people believe that true self esteem com from achievement, I
think that they are wroung, i think that self esteem come from praising student.
people that believe that true self esteem come from praissing student work are think that they are right.
like for example;
if the student want to learn and and they are trying to do what you ask that to do and they died not do it the right way and you tell than that is not bad and you keep encorraging than to keep trying, it will give than the cinfident to do more work because they know that they are doing something good,
but if they are workung hard and you keep telling than that they are dum or telling than that they are not doing it the right way they will get tire and will not have the energy to work anymore.
people that prais student are people who want to show the student that they can do any thing that they want to do in life, I belive that many student will be able to do well in school if only the teachre can make than to know that they are spical like every one of the student in the class or school, there are many student out there that want to learn but they just need someone who will be able to encorrage than that they should trust in that self and tell than that they can do it. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
E2C3F26AB94D | Something I'd like to accomplish in the future would be to practice my singing because it makes me happy, it can turn into fun and games with your friends, it helps relieve my stress, and you can freestyle when you sing. Lastly, I think that singing is very fun and helpful.
Singing makes me happy because whenever I'm done singing a song it makes me smile. Once I'm done singing a song I'll have the urge to sing more because I love to sing. Ever since I was a little girl I would occasionally ask my dad to sing to me and ever since then I've always been passionate about singing. I sing whenever I'm sad and then I choose a song and I'll sing to the song I chose and it'll make me happy.
Me and my best friend play around a lot and when we do we'll start singing but in a fun way. We'll be so off key. And start goofing around. We'll do singing contests. This one time we did a singing contest that went on for hours and it turned out to be a tie. So we did a rematch and she won that rematch. So we had another one then I won.
Singing has been helping me relieve my stress a lot lately. Because since SOL's are like right around the corner I've been singing to just get my mind off everything that's stressful. I felt relieved to sing because I hadn't sung in quite a while. I also felt very happy to sing, after singing I was energetic.
In conclusion,
I think that singing is very fun and helpful and it can also get your mind off anything that bothers you. | 3 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E2D7273C427B | Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive or negative affects on people's lives?
Technology have a positive affects on people's lives for...
To contact people, persons have friends and family that are in other countries or states that they can not see them but can talk with them by technology, is using technology to meet new people and be more social, and it is easily to contact with friends and plan to hangout with them.
Some jobs and companies need the technology for; save information about its costumers as their names and orders, to organize documents that can be important to the company. and to contact with the workers more quickly or let them know what they have to do next day by calls or emails.
Now it is more comfortable to students, now some schools are allows for use laptops for schools, withe the books in the past was to required to bring all your books for schools every day, but now just you have to bring your laptops that has every book that you will need in all yours classes, and to turn in assignments and projects because you just have to press a bottom and your teacher will have your work to grade it, and it can help to teachers to explain to students more clearly with videos.
technology do not affect to people's lives in a negative way it is contrary it is a positive affect and the people that said it is negative is because they possible they are old people that they are not accustomed with the technology. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
E2E3D86A8CF8 | based on you experience , do you agree or disagree with Emerson statement should based on your experiences do you agree .
more support to try something do you more go up take more position you have more experiences you never go down should based on your experiences do you disagree
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no position no ready for that no complete nothing should base on your experience do you agree because have more support in you will go never grow and you try something and you have more experiences . and when you have more experience you go more up it is passive do you have more opportunities and you ready for anything should base on your experience do you disagree because no complete nothing when anyone have experience or support with reason . and when you not have good reading you no go up because you need to practice you first and you go to that what are you doing but when you ready for that when one person no complete everything it is impassive go up . many person go to up because no is ready for that and when you have more experience is more easy for this person you need to ready .
everyone is passive to proper for that because is no easy when you have good experience you good because you state good end good position is more experience star and good position so many peoples no proper for that and is imposing you have good experience thats why you need to proper first my reading for that is more experience and more practice because is more easy for one person practice to that everyone is proper first and you states where you are and something you have so many ideas when you no understand nothing you need to ask your Principe or your teacher or you boss he give to you reason or good question for you or your life or when you complete everything is more easy for you or you understand everything that why you need to ask first so many people practice that so many people no practice nothing . | 1.5 | 1.5 | 2 | 2 | 1.5 | 1.5 |
E2E6984894BC | "Determine never to be idle.. it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing" this is what Thomas Jefferson wrote and I am totally agree whith him some peoples always are saying they can finish nothing but is because thay never doing that, never try very hard they want to stay doing nothing all the time and thats why but when you are always doing someting you finish too much like when you are doing a report work on that and you finish and adter that you can do something more and than something more and more and more but you can finished because you are doing that you no just finish your report and stop and say "ok I finish this now I can go to relax all my life" noo you work and work and for that you recieve one recompence yo don't work for nothing.
And if Thomas Jefferson says that is because is true he allways do something and he done much things he never be idle and you never had to be idle too and I think his main idea is to persuade the people too do something all the time because when people doo the world change. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
E2E99090C7D5 | Should students be required to take a class in the arts, or should such classes be electives?
everybody knows that, that kind of classes could be funny, but what happen with those guys that does not feel interest with the class? it is a wasted of time, we could use that time in another class, where they feel comfortable, where they feel interest about the class, you can not be good in something if it does not like you, the classes must improve our skills, that's the reason why I believe that classes should be electives; on that way, I have the option, tp select my class, for example: art, music, chorus, drama, etc.
Why?
Simple, not everybody has the same capacity, as somebody said "we can not judge a fish by his ability to claim a tree", we must motive the student to take the class that he/she wants and they will give their best.
thanks for the attention, in addition, I hope that the principal could take a smart choice and leave the classes electives. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
E2F31005AF32 | Only topic that is frequenthy is debate today is whether or not conserve energy and resouces since some business have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. Should your school follow this model by extending the school day two hours? Some peolpe think that not only extending the school day should conserve energy and resource. They feel that is the same thing and also too that is more time in the school in addiction that they will spent more money in energy like electricity, ligths , charge to computers ,blackboard electric and the more things, an resource that should spent more is the water because some students when go to the bathroom they forget closed the washstand. I believe that should follow this model by extending the school day two hours because should be take care about of how to conserve energy, resources and the last but not the least is we will have more time for make a the world better and take consience.
One reason i believe why that should follow this model by extending the school day two hours is because we can conserve more energy for the future, and also too the school should instruct to each student to be careful about the how to consume energy, for example to teach wich focus is the correct for the use in the home and gives tips for that maybe they to pay the least possible bill of light.
Another reason is that i feel that a resource that we can save in the school is the water because all students use almost two time the bathroom and always to take down the pull of the toile, i think the students can make posters in where show the importance about how to save the water and others resources that in the school can save is the plastic and paper because in some places purchase this resources, and with the money the school should to be a better school than others and the students should be more careful about this rescources.
The final reason is that i believe if the school add two hours at the day students and teachers should will have more time for to do more thigs, a thing that the teachers and students will can do is maybe a propaganda, in this propaganda they can show the society how prevent the clime global and to instruct how to be careful with of world, other thing that the students can do is a page online in where to instruct the other students and people out school how make herself have to be careful.
As you have read i think that the school should add two hours per day becuase all peolpe in the school can have more conscience for to save the energy and resource the last but not the leas the world. Only when we take consience for change the world. Will we have a better world on day. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E2F71EA3C3FE | Decently the author Ralph Waldo wrote, Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow. Based with my experience, I agree with Emerson's statement. Because we can do something else for grow on the future for our family, it is important think what you will have in one time think for how many things we can have if we work hard. Some peoples are in the street because they do not think on there benefit. sometimes be had opportunity to grow but we lose it.
But for some reason people do not like when others people want help them because some times this not are good intention some times one people only want the other person don't grow. But not every persons are the same some one really help other people only who had a lofty heart. On this time nothing is the same the boys and girls only want go to the street and they smoking a lot they never are on the home, the mather and father are very bad, because they don't have idea were their children are. And the children they never grow is they have already mastered, they will never grow.
What someone can do with this situation for help the children. if the govern do anything for help those guys we can grow. Because it only they do this they will never grow, the peoples needs helps to grow too, or we need do this with our self no body help us every times is for us depend is we one day change the luck. What we need to do is had a good job if we work hard we can grow more. And in the future maybe are a manager or on the future have a company and grow everyday. with the help of
Lord he in the only person who know our destination, and we will grow with help and our effort, we can accomplish everything.
When we do something productive we are growing. If you want change your life for something more good, work, help, grow or look for something what can change your life. For example meet a very important job and if you had a good recommendation and if they give for you a job. You had a good job were you will grow more and you not stay the same. The job can help to much and pay to much money if we are good with the work and do everything how the boss want to everybody do.
Whenever, you want to do to grow not do more or want more then other or you not do nothing, not startle do more of the other, the people who want grow more then other for them never are something benefit or desire what other had that is not good. its for this the author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, ''Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow''. And we can guide other person, to are good employed and not want more the other. Put everything in practice and you will had a good life. With not problems in your had. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
E2F767441B44 | If in high school should young students be capable of committing to a career. Some adults say that young students should pick a career. Others say that they are not ready to choose and commit to a career. I believe that students should commit to a career at a young age. The age shouldn't determined how committed you can be to a career. Being young shows a lot of both positive and negative benefits.
Early experience for these students can benefit future jobs. For example, you take a class for cooking and seek for a job you will have a better chance then those who have no experience. Starting your career with prior knowledge before becoming an adult will make it easier to obtain a job once you graduate high school. Those who choose to wait after high school will have a harder time seeking a job. Your chances for a job are much higher then those without any experience.
Making less mistakes because of all the prior knowledge you learned beforehand. For example, you take a class for cooking and you start learning early how to stop from burning your food. So, when you start cooking at a restaurant you will know how to stop from ruining the food. Starting young will prevent less mistakes from happening in your future job. This gives the students a better resume if they know what they are capable of doing and doesn't need to be taught. Having less mistakes during the job will show your bosses that you know what you are doing for them.
The students will have some confidence before going into their career. For example, you learn about the kitchen and what everything does so when you go in you won't expect anything new. This will help students have some confidence since they know what to expect going into they're career. Before entering a career it's good that students can relax and feel better since they know how everything will go. A boost of confidence is what students need before going into something.
On the other hand, people say that having students commit to career in high school is a bad idea. For example, students are constantly changing there mind and changing there interests. Some adults say they are to young to commit to a career because of how uncertain they are when they make decisions. So, they think how can a student choose something for the rest of there life if they can't decide on some of the most simplest decisions. Those adults think that students should wait until they are older to make that type of decision.
Having students start early come with so many benefits for there future. They get to learn more in advance then the rest. Also they have better oppurtunites and better chances with getting there perfered career. That many positive outcomes will come out of starting early. So, I believe that students can commit to a career at a young age in high school. | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
E2FC55BF5005 | The idea of creating a new menu for the cafeteria affects people who are trying to have a healthier diet, and kids who need to be clean of bad supplements for the sports season. Otherwise, Students that come to our school since freshman year love the tradional food of the cafeteria.
It is a good idea to include the new recipe of food in the cafteria menu because, it will have more types of vitamins, proteins, and all type of good suppliments that a young healthi body needs. Also, Teachers agree that would be a good upgrade for the students to have a extra meal that is healthier and it is in a good quantity. If the changing in our menu happens, the students that do sports will have a second meal to support all the exercise that is needed for the soccer teams, football, etc...
In some others opinion, the new menu in the cafeteria will affect the businness in our school, beacuse the students that are in the school for a longer time will not like to change their favorite types of food.
Some students might not agree with the changing of the recipe in the cafeteria, but for those reasons, the principal and teachers agree that the new menu would be a healthier and more elaborated meal for everyone in our school. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
E2FC7B4466C5 | Do you want to know how a science could be enjoyable? Tune in and you'll find out. I think that a science experiment could be enjoyable because you can learn new things with your friends,you can work on the experiment with you friends,and you can talk to other people about what you got or learned
First,i think that science experiments could be enjoyable because you can learn new things with your friends. Sometimes your friends won't figure out things as fast as you or they might not figure it out,so you can explain to them how you figured it out and maybe they figured out something you havent yet so they might teach you about what they got to. Later on in the school year you might be asked on a test or quiz about the thing that you learned. When you get home and your parents ask you what you learned you can tell them and explain it to them.
Second,i think that science experiments could be enjoyable because you can do the science experiment with your friends. If you do it with your friends you can have fun. You could have time to talk to them about the science experiment that your doing, Also you could work together on it and get a good grade.
Lastly,i think that science experiment could be enjoyable because you can talk to other people outside of your group about what you got and learned. Lets say that you went to another group to see what they figured out and they tell you something you dont agree with,so you could explain to him or her about what you got and how you got it and then you can ask the teacher and figure out who was wrong. You can learn from what they got and add it to your work.
I think that a science experiment could be enjoyable because you can learn new things with your friends,you can work on the experiment with you friends,and you can talk to other people outside of your group about what you got or learned. Thats why i think that a science experiment can be enjoyable,so you can learn and have fun at the same time! | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E3096B04916A | Nowadays many students become involved in extracurricular activities to enrich their educational experiences. There is a debate if school should or should not control students involvement in extracurricular activities. Some people think that students should be more involve in extracurricular activities. However, I think that the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families because students will have to much pressure on their shoulders, students will not have enough time to complete school assignments or study, and students have to work.
One reason, why the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families is that students will have to much pressure on their shoulders. They will be always worrying about school stuff and the fact that they have to spend a lot of time in extracurricular activities. Spending to much time on extracurricular activities can led students to a depression. They will not get enough rest because of not doing anything else ,but extracurricular activities. Students will get tired that they would not want to do anything else. Students
Another reason, why the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families is that students will not have enough time to complete school assignments or study. Students will have little time to study for a test or quiz. Evidently, not having enough time to study can led students to fail their classes. Students will not turn homework or projects on time. Students deserve to have extra time to study.
Final reason, why the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families is that students have to work. Students work to be independent. Students work to pay for their future education. Students work to help their families financial. Students work to achieve their future goals. They work to not have a miserable life in their future. Work will give them more opportunities in their life.
To conclude, for these reasons and so many more is why I think that the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families. Students will have a lot of pressure, students will have lack of time to study or finish with their homework, and students got a job. Schools should think a little bit more about student's responsibility and how controlling students involvement extracurricular will impact their life. I know that the education is very important ,but student deserve to make their own decisions. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
E3097287CBD1 | Some school offer distances learning as an option for student to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I think student would not be benefit if they had distances learning. Many student would not focused during the lesson they would just do whatever they want so they won't learn as much as if they had a teacher. If student had online classes they would not get the attention necessary if they need help.
Some student often have a bad day so they often don't pay attention and they just don't do the work that is assigned to them. they often just search the answer without learning but they think that's okay because no one is watching them. Many of them don't learn the subject but still somehow they passed the class. Other Important, reason why student won't benefit from online classes is that the may have some big problem in their life and they need someone to talk to but their one home so they feel sad, but if they were in school they can talk to a teacher,coach,counselor, or any other they feel happy to talk too. Other student may be sad they don't have someone to talk too.
Online classes don't benefit students because they don't have the help they need. When student take online they can paid someone to do their work, and pretend that they did the work. One reason they can ask their brother to the work for them so they are not really learning anything. Other example, student may request some extra help but they won't get it because they don't a teacher with them. so they just don't understand but when it comes to do the text they failed. Other example might be that they are having family problem so they won't do the online classes. And they would not be focus. Having online classes won't help student in their life. one example is that they won't have friends and when they go to the real world they are going to have trouble talking to people because they don't know how too. Other important reason why school should not have online classes is that many student need to talk to a counselor for that they want to be when they grow up. and most. Most counselor guide their student the right way they teach the career we want to have in our life. but they take online classes they don't have the opportunity to chat with them.
When students get video conferencing they don't really understand because something the video don't really explain what the student want to learn. one reason is the student might feel lazy to replay the video so he does not understand. and if he was at school teacher would help them with all their work . School should not have video conferencing.
Student are going to feel bad when they get older that they took online classes.. one reason they going to feel bad is that they did not enjoy high school life. let's Image if a student was really good at soccer or any other sport and if they had played high school they could of get a scholarship, and maybe become one of greatest,
but they did'it because they were talking online classes. school should not have online classes because it take the right of student in playing high school sport.
Overall, student would not benefit from online classes. they won't learn that much at home, and student need the attention to do work, they also need people to help them with their work. In my personal option school should not have online classes or video conferencing. Student are going to have a better knowledge if they go to school and, they work with teacher. School should let student enjoy take their high school life and not have online classes. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
E312449DF480 | I think, first impressions are more effected than other events. Because first reactions are usually hectic. We will not know until we feel something. Somehow, recollections can give you positive or negative effects. If a person had a bad impression, it can gives you anxiety, which is a person needs to get help about negative satiation. It doesn't matter how bad or how good the impressions are, it is important how people get effect.
Second, I remember when I was first grade in elementary school, I did not want to go to the school. It was the first day I wanted to stay at home. On that day, I was a little bit bored, I took the big pillows from armchairs then put them together. I was trying to jump from the pillows to the other sofa. The first time I jumped it was successful. After a moment my mom caught me. I was kind of scared, she told me it was dangerous, and I can hurt myself with that.
After she left, I put the pillows together like I did it before, then I jumped to the wall. The walls corner was really sharp, and I hit to the wall. I realized I hurt my self so bad. Then I went to my mom, I was holding my head and crying. She was so mad at me, then I took my hands off from my head, it was bleeding so much. She called my dad, then we went to the hospital.
In conclusion, I agree the reactions, impressions are impossible to change the consequences. It is really important what people felt or lecture extract. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
E31B2A06C28C | It has been said that a positive attitude is the key success in life, that having a good thinking about what you do, and be proud of it is important. Well, in my opinion it is the only thing, because time is going forward, and not backward, things that you have already done cannot be changed, but by having a good attitude about it you change your future, like being successful in your goals, solve economy issues, and even in day to day life.
A positive attitude is really important when it comes to achieve your goals, if you want something but you think you can not make it, it is because you do not have enough attitude, in order to be successful with it, you must forget all the negative thoughts, and believe in yourself, and after all the effort you have been giving you will be a little bit more closer to achieve your goals.
Sometimes money can turn your life real hard, it can make you stop trying for what you want, and make you give up; is in this kind of situations when a positive attitude must come in, let me give you a personal experience: I used to live with a stepfather, my mom, and five brothers. At that time bills and debts were easy to pay, my stepfather was making around $3,400 dollars a month, my mom like $1,300 dollars a month, and my brother and I around $800 dollars a month, all these money was the house income, but after my mom and her ex husband divorced, everything changed, now we had all those bills on us, but because we did not give up, and we had a positive attitude about the situation, we started to work even more, now my mom is single, and we can make trough out the month.
Another good example is living every day with a positive attitude like at work, at school, at home, even restaurants, it does not matter where you are right now it is important to always have a positive attitude, it is crucial in life to be proud about what you are, where you are, how you are, be the one who makes the change.
Some people say that because you did something wrong in the past, it is impossible to make a change about it, but they are wrong because they might not able to change the past, but for sure they can change the future by fixing and understanding in what they have failed, the attitude is important be proud of everything you have done and do not be ashamed.
In conclusion, it is really important to have a positive attitude because to be able to achieve your goals you must have to have a positive attitude, money can make it hard for you to live, but you have to think and analyze the situation, wherever you go remember to have a good attitude about yourself, and never be ashamed about something you did wrong remember that you always can make a change, only if you have a positive attitude. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
E33FFA17ED69 | Thomas Jefferson once wrote," Determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity serve a purpose. I agree with the quote by staying on track, working hard, and getting things done can accomplish more.
Staying on track can help people focus. Some students from my school today lose track and end up not doing their work. Later on students fell unaccomplished from not doing the work and not accomplish anything. If students can focus and stay on track they can achieve more.
By showing effort and working hard people can accomplish more. My mother works hard in the hot sun to accomplish her goals. My mothers goals are to work hard so she could pay bills, make sure her kids have what they need, and food on the table for her kids. My mother works hard just to show us if you do nothing in life you won't accomplish much.
People achieve a lot more by getting things done. Soccer player
Cristiano Ronaldo
Pushed his team to the max by practicing every day to get things done, as a result from pushing his team and getting things done he lead his team to victory. Getting thing done is reaching for accomplishment and later on be an achievement.
Although some people may say that inactivity severs a purpose, the real point to consider is that doing something can accomplish much more by staying on track, working hard, and getting things done will lead to accomplishing more. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
E34E1B7D1691 | "I want to be a singer!", is what I told everyone, at 8 years old, I wanted to become someday. As I kept getting older, I started exploring more career opportunities that I could achieve someday and my interest started to grow. With high school and the programs and opportunities that they give us, It is tough to choose between the one I want the most. I wouldn't want to risk any of my hard work into a career that I would end up disliking. With that being said it would be a huge honor if I you could give me the opportunity to visit and get to know about the work that interest me.
While many students at my age have already decided what career they want, I am not sure enough to make a decision yet. However, I know that this program will help me decide what is best for me in the future, by learning the skills and requirements to the career I may be interested in. This program would help me sign up for events, classes or even trips to the road of my success.
In fact, even by talking to someone with the career I am interested in would help my knowledge. Also, it would help me narrow down between which career I would most likely succeed in.
The dedication there would have to be behind getting to where I belong to with your help, wouldn't be a problem at all. With the skills I have already learned with being in high school, I would already know how to manage my time with my career and real life. Your help wouldn't go to waste but would lead me in the right direction to my future. On the other hand, this career might persuade me to become an artist and not to have given up on that dream I once had. I am pretty sure that if you and of course, myself see an improvement in getting involved with music, and having a huge passion, you could help other dreamers like me in the future. Most importantly, by helping them find the right path for them.
Once the choice has been made and there has been improvement with the work I have put in and also being sure with what career I want in my future, I would gain more passion and inspiration. This would help me to push until I have accomplished everything I have worked for. I couldn't of made it without this program though, this company could help me a lot if you give me the chance to show you that it would be guiding me in the right path. With the opportunities you give, that not everyone sees, I may become one the greatest artist in this generation.
I am hoping you really consider the motivation I have behind this, to do whatever it takes to explore my options out in this world.
With that being said, It would be an honor to have the opportunity to explore the options in my career with your help. By leading me in the right path, and by not doing something I am not sure about and letting that go to waste. I would be able to develop the skills you guide me in and also by keeping me on track. The road this company would lead me in would help me become successful. May you please give me the opportunity to suceed? I would love to have your help by keeping me on track to my future. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
E353A05E7C8C | Many school have partnership with local companies and organization allow student to do there community project and just to help out. Local work places like a store and business. Student don't have to work there for like 9 hours insensate they will work to hour a day. If the work fro along period of time they will have an headache because they are not use to it. When i said community project like write an article about the company. Also help out is like if they need wood the students will give them.
One way i think student should not work in a company is because the side effect is student wouldn't do their home work , they will not attend in class on time and they will not study at home. What if the student did dome thing wrong there parent have to pay for it or the school. If the machine cost 10000 that is expensive to afford. Student shouldn't work it will make them get a bad grade. when you have a bad grade you will not be able to play game and use your phone. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
E3611716918E | Some people chosee to be diffrent drom other people. Some people act difrente from each other. All people diffrent from each other. Some people always in a happy mood,Some people always sad. Some people always mad. I belive all people should be happy. Is not fear if someone was sad or mad they all should be happy all the time. Some people they are sad beacse they lost there job, or they lost there mom or dad they always gonna be in sad mood. Like some people lost there mom there mom they always gonna be in sad mood no matter what. Noone can change them. Some people will change but if it was somone lived with his mom for a while like 25 years these people gonna be sad forevere. And I hopoe they will be happy. Okay now les talk about mad people they bad persolty these are not good. They always in a bad mood. some people have anger issuse like they get mad so fast they will do bad stuff like beat there kids or wife some people get drunk and get crazy these kinda people need help some people break evrething in the house this not good at all they some peoole are mad beacse they have3 jobs a day and is vrey hard when you have more the one job. Or they get paid bad or they just dont like to work. Some mad people always fighting in schools they alwsys get kicked out school. but they will change one day. Now we can talk about happy people they always happy. They have good jobs. They are rich they might have a lot of money. Some people are just happy no matter what even if they are poor or they dont have nothing they still be happy. Some people just happy even if they face bad stuff bad job bad money there boss treade them bad not good even they boss dont pay them good they will still be happy one day evrey preson in this earth poor people,masd people sad people, they all gonna be happy one day and they gonna be a team a strong team they gonna kill the word sad or mad we all should be happy we all live once. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
E362F08345FE | students should be required to perform community serves like by helping clean the school and the parks, and the students can also help other students with there homework ' it is very important to help the community, but many people don't know it and i think that it is a very good idea to have a talk with people about all the thing that they can do to help out also it is a nice idea to talk to parents all the thing that we are trying to do with all of this and so they can get some students entreated and helping'
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E36B406AFE70 | Although it may seem like being active helps us accomplish more is better, but it's actually true that inactivity also serves a purpose to. Three reasons why I think being inactive is that I have time to rest, I can catch up on any t. v shows, or I can hire a butler to do the cleaning around my house. Some people are always being active and have no rest: thats not good because the human body is not used to so much work being done. I think in a certain point of life inactivity will serve a purpose because people will be tired of all the work hey done and will just want to rest.
While being inactive there will be time where you can rest. Last year when I worked, I was so tired of the job I had received because I was hot and thirsty out in the sun all day picking up trash. Then one day when I was off, I spent my whole day resting. This served me a purpose because I was able to rest and get my energy back up to work another time. When I was resting I slept up to about 10 hours because I was very exhausted, and gloomy. While I was resting in bed I had time to catch up on bills and any other things that have to do like call in an order for some groceries. Resting this day helped me catch up on everything I needed
On weekends, when i'm at home and i'm lazy some times I call a butler to come to my house and clean everything. There is a show named Jessie, and on this show they have a personal butler named Bertrum, and he travels with them also: he cleans up for them, cooks food, and he even has to open doors for them. This helps them because while they are trying to rest he is doing mostly everything they need to do. In my opinion, I think he's doing too much work than he is supposed to because it can be overwhelming. Jessie and her kids are very lazy because they basically make Bertrum do everything; that serves a purpose but then not because Bertrum will be exhausted all time.
When resting at home I have a chance to catch up on t. v shows that I like: like Master Chef, Wild n Out, and also Real House Wives of Atlanta. No one can tell me to not watch it because I am going to be inactive and have a peaceful day where I have time to myself. The reason why I want to catch up on t. v shows is because, most of the time I dont have time because of work, or i'll be caught in a family emergency.
Overall, some people might think doing something will make you accomplish something isn't always true. In the world today there are a plenty full of people who are inactive, they sit there and do nothing but have business calls on the phone. I think it would be better for us to work at home and be idle thank to go to work and be very tired. Though some people may not agree with me its better to live that way so you can preserve your energy. Determine never to be idle doesnt always make me accomplishing something; putting my mindset towards that goal helps me reach that goal even if i'm idle. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
E376D913FA25 | The technology take position in the world, the technology has evolucionated in the industries of the humanity.
the people they communicative using technology and other tasks, the technology is not good and bad because have different emotions in the human like when you play a video game you can find a people playing and you can talk with their but you can find varies type of people example. a good people you play and said hey add me friends but their have another people insult you, like in the social media instagram, Facebook, and other.
The technology today has to perform creating news sites for the people can buy a books, or in amazon you can buy food using you phone, and the videos there some many company in the world working in news videos games.
in the social media people used for communicative with the family and friends like instagram and Facebook this is the most popular social media in the world because you can contact with the other and find new peoples.
But the question is the technology had positive or negative effects on the people, well this is different because the technology is not bad example, the social media you can find everything there videos photos but who public this videos and photo the people this is the problem the community insinuated the technology is bad but no it's because all from the human the human create the technology for what? the human used the technology to fight and create guns, airplanes, and boats. so the technology in not bad we can use the technology for a good thinks this is my example the technology bring a good thinks and sometimes negative thinks depend how you used. | 2.5 | 1.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 |
E382BBC2D88E | Does student really benefit from being able to attend classes from home? Students wouldn't benefit from being able to attend classes from home because I once had a friend who attended classes from home she never did what she was suppose to do she took that as an advantage to do other things that she needed to do she didn't benefit at all. Students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they take advantage of it, they don't do what their suppose to do, and they don't learn nothing.
First of all, student take the advantage of attending classes from home to do other things that they need to do. For example turning in stuff late that were long due, not all student that attend classes from home take it as an advantage but those who do they just take more advantage just to have fun and not do the work that they are suppose to be doing. Another thing is they will always try to come up with an excuse of why they didn't do the assignment that they were suppose to do. They take advantage of the time they have to go out with friends to party, to hang out with their boyfriend, and to do other things that are non-school related.
Most importantly, they don't do what their suppose to do, when they get an assignment or project that their suppose to do they just act lazy and not do it cause they know nobody for example, like their teacher wont be telling them to do the work. They will spend most of their time doing other stuff instead of the work that they need to be done with. Students will spend more time partying, hanging with their friends instead of actually doing the work that they need to do which will actually help them later on. Most students actually know the stuff they just preferred not to do any of the work cause they don't feel like doing it.
Finally, The students actually don't learn nothing by attending classes from home all they do is just party, hang out with their friends and boyfriend. They actually don't do any of the work that they are assign to do they just cheat by copying it off of someone or get the answers from the internet. Most student they attend classes from home as an opportunity to have fun and to take a break from school, they literally will learn nothing cause all they do is play around when they are suppose to take things seriously they just want to party all day long and not care about any of the stuff that they are suppose to be studying.
In closing, students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they take advantage of it to do other things that they need to do, they don't do what their suppose to do they don't do their work as suppose to do, and they don't learn nothing all they do is party, hang out with their friends and boyfriend they don't do none of the things that they are assign to do. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
E3CCA8712549 | Some schools have a program that have older students and younger students. The older students help the younger students with activities or homework. But how will this program help both the older and younger students? Well, I will be telling you three things how this program is helpful for the older students and younger students.
First thing is, the younger students will want some help from the older students because they know more than the younger students and it would be a great help. If this program is still going than more and more students will start joining in and they can start forming groups and they can each work on something different.
secondly, this program can be very helpful by teaching students that are getting poor grades or poor scores on their test they're getting. Students can even donate binders,books,folders,crayons,pencils,pens,paper,etc. Even the students themselves can start their own fundraiser by making food and can raise money.
lastly, This whole program can be very useful for the community and helpful for the students. This is why this program is so helpful and important for us student and adults
In conclusion the older students help the younger students with activities homework/classwork. And that this program is really important to us. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E3D9EE7C68F1 | Have you ever wonder how many enjoyable activities are outside of the world? They're thousands of enjoyable activities outside the world. Most people like to spend time with their families outdoors such as going to community parks, state parks, and national parks. Not everyone likes to go outside to spend time with their family, or go to a place to have fun because they don't like to go outside that much, but most of the times you need to go and look around what's around the world. I would prefer someone should go to and spend time with their family, or just to have fun such as going to the zoo, going to Disney or travel to a different state where you live.
The first reason, why someone should go and have fun is to go to the zoo. Most zoo's can be a little boring, but you can find a way to have lots of fun. The zoo can bring you lots of fun, and enjoyment such as taking pictures with the animals, giving the animals their food, and touching and giving love to the animals that are in the zoo. For example, at the zoo you can learn some interesting facts about every kind of animal that are you very interest in. Also, giving lots of love to the animals like talking to them or touching them is a way to be relax. You can learn new things about animals and the history, and it can be interesting and fun at the same time. In my opinion, the zoo is a great place and a great activity to have fun.
The second reason, why someone should go and have fun is to go to like a Disney park.
A large of number of people that I have known go to Disney to have fun with their family members. For example, at a Disney park you can go and try different games there, eat some different type of food that you haven't tried yet, and go and take picture of princesses that you really want to meet. For example, if you watch Disney princesses, you can go and meet them in real life, and talk to them. Also, going to Disney and trying games or riding any type of game is going to bring you enjoyment. It will take you the stress that you have, and you will forget everything that you been going through. In my opinion, Disney is the second best place to go and have fun by yourself or with the people that is around you.
The third reason, why someone should go and have fun is to go and travel to a different state, or country that they have never been to. For example, going to the Bahamas is a great place to go, looking at museums of what had happened in that place. Also, going to the beach in the Bahamas is another way to have fun, the beach is going to relax you in a type of way that you will not imagine. Exploring the world, or trying new things from a different state or country is a type of having fun, You can got to different parks, different beaches, and different restaurants where you can try different type of foods that you haven't even tried and that are the bets. In my opinion, going to different countries, or different states that you have never been is the third reason why it's a great idea to go and have lots of fun.
Many people like to have fun in different ways not just being outside. Most people like to spend time alone or with their family members. There's different types of way to have fun at different places not only going to the zoo, going to Disney a park, or going to a place that you have never been or explore what is it like to be in another country. Find a way to have some fun outdoors and all the things that keeps you stress are going get away in a second. Spending time in something that you really love is a great feeling that you will have experience in your life. Have fun with all the people that you love and that is around you because spending time with them and going to parks with them is the best feeling that you ever will ever have. | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
E3DBC3B092A7 | Do you want your family members to be healthy?
The workplace i choose was the Hospital because i see people doing surgery on people and i would love to do it so i can see there organs that i never seen before . I would like to vist it so i can se the baby's , mental people , elderly people ,and other people .I would like to take care of the baby's cause i like to take good care of them and i like to go see them each time and they also cry alot but it is really fun . When your parent is sick and you are a doctor you know what to do right away .Sometimes people are so close to get a heart attack but when you are there you save there life alot . I like to work at places were i can take to people and i like it to cause when you have other jobs and people barely talk to you it is boring and at hospital you can go to other people's room and can say how was your day and talk with them and tell them how do they feel. That's why i want to work at the hospital to have fun with them take good care of them they would like me alot cause i used to be a person that tooked care of old people and i used to play with alot and made them to color with me . They also liked to play with me tag but i always ' said yes and they would be so happy and we only played for a little bit because they would get tired. I would like to write this to the manager/employee because i would like to be making everyone feel good and not sick anymore. I would like to be in the news saying that i saved lots of people's live and that i was making them have much more life and i would like to be a doctor that people would like to go to and i would want everyone to come to me or make a appointment if they are sick and i can cure it any day i want just with a hint of a tool that can help me .I would like to see the organs because lets say you havent seen a organ but you want to see it so bad. I that's why you should always choose to do surgery but sometimes' people faint cause they see the blood alot. some people would like to see other people's organs .thats' why i would like to become a doctor but sometimes some people don't want you to touch them cause sometimes they say you dont wash your hand . I would wash my hand's all the time and make them smell my hands so they can know that i washed them.
thats why always wash your hands.
That's a good choice cause you want to be healthy and always run never stop doing laps outside cause you would not be healthy just by staying inside eating all day . I would like to take good care of the people that are super sick cause it is nice to be a doctor you walk all around and see lots of people. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
E3DF63035440 | I am agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. It is true that to be success first, you need to have a clear mind of what you want to be or to do. Because in some of the cases can be very struggle and difficult to be success. For example, a very famous statement says,
"After the storm comes the calm."
This can be similar with the Churchill's statement. Because this explain that it does't matter how worst you see it but it would be great after the problems or you are struggle with.
Furthermore, to be successful you would pass by a hard things, for example something that people says,
"Nothing is impossible if you don't tried."
and
"Nothing is easy in this life."
This is a true statement that all people have to do and we have to know.
Additional, the word
"failure"
plays an important role to be success. One important thing is that if somebody loss her or his enthusiasm or will power can be worst because that means that you are giving up what you have already and for that you already worked for it and don't want to fight that victory of success anymore. Sometimes you can fail but that does't matter because if you tried and tried again and again after you can get it. That would be one of your goals that you would remember. This shows how important is going from failure to failure to be success.
Finally, to be success we would failure first because by that you would know what you did wrong and thats why failure pursuit an important role in our life to be success. | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
E3E6D43F34B2 | Should our school extend the school day two hours? No, I strongly disagree with extending two hours to school day. By extending two hours of school day, students for sure need to take a rest, take a shower, some students need to do chores, and also focus on their goals after school. If we extend two hours of school day, then students would not be able to focus on their education, because the brain cells need a break and need to refresh itself. Furthermore, if there is 4 days of school and 3 days of no school, then students will forget what they studied 3 days ago.
In Afghanistan, schools adopted a four-day school week, with each day consisting of ten hours. Therefore, we are comparing the grades and attendance of students. With extending two hours of school day, this system had effect students educational life. Students are not showing up to school and they skip school because of the new system. This idea had discrease the number of attendance and the grades of most of the students.
Finally, the regular school days and regular school hours are more beneficial then the new idea of extending two hours of school. If we want to focus and have good attendace, therefore we should not extend the school hours. In conclusion, we should keep the school days and school hours as it is. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4.5 |
E4051C85D12E | If we think about the words that the British Prime Minister Wiston Churchill sait " succes consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." There is a lot of truth is this words well that is what I believe. So how important is the role that failure plays in the process to reach success and don't loss enthusiasm in the proccess? In my opinion it is very important because it make us gain experience, improve our skills, and it make you feel comfortable and happy at the end.
Les't think about how you feel when your staring in the proccess to reach a new goal that you propose to youself it could be hard at the begin, because is your first time in that enviroment and maybe you have none experience there, and that could make you to fail some times and could be desesperate to you.
you or people migth say, " this is not for me," because you already fail a few time and you think but is just the beginc how will be the future. That could make you loss enthusiasm, but if you think what happend when you keep going with all this fails you're gaining a lot of experience during that proccess. For example, when I star to study at Generic_School it was a big change for me staring with the lenguage, because I came from a coutry of Spanish speakers and here the official lenguage is English, so I remember that in the begin my English was really poor, and I just knwe a few words in English like good morning or the name of some school's supplies, but everytime I did something wrong I learnd something new from that mistake wich make me gain experience in the proccess of my English learning. Even if sometimes is embarasing to say or spell worng a word infront of people you will be learning to do it rigth with the time. Therefore we should see the fails as a good oportunitie to gain more experience.
Most of the time you will notice some changes in yourself while you're reaching some goal, I'm talking about the change on your own skills. That could be maybe improve some skills that you already had before or in the best of the cases developing a new one. Using the last example that I used, when I star to learn English I remember that my speaking was the most hard part for me, because is hard to think a word first in Spanish and then traslate that word in to English and also spell that word correct just on your mind. Sometimes I started a sentence but then I couldn't finish it. That was so embarrassing for me, but with the time that problem has been decreased not all, but now is not like the begin. Sometimes that happend to me again when I'm doing presentation or when I'm imfront of nwe people that i have never met. But I feel that the practice has been helping me to decrease that problem and now is easier for me to speak with some body in English at school or in my job . Even if you feel bad or embarrassing to fail with the time that will help. You can be improving skills or even descoviring new ones while you fail that is part of the whole proccess of reach success.
Maybe for some people the fact of fail is the worst thing that can happend to them in the proccess to reach success some of them could say," You have to do perfect if you want to reach your goals," but I think that we can not do perfection without failure. Failure is a big and les't say importnat part of reach success. Have you ever heard the words , " No pain, No gain,"
I like that words, because reminds me how good feels when you reach a goal in wich you speend a lot of time or maybe hard work.
For example, when you have a big test at school and you have been studing for that test all nigths for a week or even more and the day of the test you know all the anwers for that test and you got an A or A+ as a grade that feels so good and comfortable to you. Just because of your hard work you are getting all this good grades that you gain by yourself. That is one of the best sensations that you can ever feel or experiment. Using my example agin I can say that all the result of my hard work that I have done helping me to get good gains in my English developing .
Not matter howmany times you fail the last feeling is best in the world. Because is the result of all your hard work. Sometimes I remember how hard was for me to star school in a differnt country, but when I see that I'm about to garduate and get my High School diploma it reminds me all the hard work that I have done during this almost 2 years that I have studing here in Generic_School.
It could sound bad when you hear the word failure or fail when your trying to reach a goal, but if you think we should see all the forms that this words have. Success is not all about fail there is more. We have to go deeper into that words. As I said fail is a big and important part in the way to reach a goal. Success is a big proccess with branches and one of this branches is the failure. But failure give us more than we think. it give us experience that could prepare us for future problems or future goals, it also prepare or improve your skill and even if you don't have one you could descover one that you didn't notice, and finally, but no less important the comfortable feeling that give you at the end is incredible because remind you all the hard work that you have done. So I think if you don
't want to lloss enthusiasm during the proccess of reach success you shouldn"t see the word failure as it is you should go deeper in to try to understand the important role that it plays in the pursuit of success. I just mencion three reasons here but there could be more than three just don't think that just because you fail is the end of the world instead see how failure could help you to reach that important goal your or success. I hope all the time that I've fail in my English speaking will help me to in the future became in a perfect bilingual speaker having my home lenguahge Spanish and my new home lenguage English. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2 |
E4124757C2B0 | I
disagree with adding one and half hour to school each day because students would get tired and it would be more things to the students have to know.
In our school we have 9 hours of school and if we add it would have 10 and I don't think students want to stay in school for a long time. I get that school is a place where you learn and school get's you a job and you can get a free scholarships to college without paying but at the same time students need 7 hours maximum so they would fit all the knowledge and all the subjects in there mind.
Teachers want students to learn more because they want student's to have a successful life and learn more but student's have less time to listen because they want to go home .In our school we have 4 subjects were we have tests and some students fail it because there studying for other classes even though it's not important like for example,elective classes,I get that elective is important to but students but it's really not important. The important classes are Math,Science and Language arts, and History. The school board is not gonna like when students fail there tests when they have 10 hours in school each day. Students should have time when they get home to study so they can ace there test,Since our school is a Middle school we should have less hours so we can pass 6th,7th and 8th grade without having any difficult in school.
Students wouldn't benefit if the time is longer they would not even pay attention to the teacher so i disagree with having one and half hour to school each day. On the other hand,I think i could agree to this because in order to become successful you have to study and work really hard and get enough to time to do your work.
I think students would go to college if they had a lot of time and students would understand things better we should have a vote where students decide whether we should have one and a half hour or not so then the school board can see which one got the highest votes and they would decide if we should have a longer time or regular time. This year a lot of students are getting bad grades because there is so many tests and works they have to do and it's always do on time so i feel like we should have less time in school so when you get home you have a study time.
The school board will like this idea because being in school for us is so much and there is no point for staying 10 hours in school because teachers would get tired and students will get bored. Students have a lot of work they have to do so it's better to stick with 9 hours of school and let student's go home and do there homework and then read and study for the next day of school. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
E4298EE64777 | Dear: principal
I think that the policy is unfair because not all the students have a B range and they want to be in a sport team or other thing.
I why don't you change the policy to C' s. If not the team' s are not going to be complete and the school could lose all the games. Many students might change schools because they want to be in a team. sport's teach diciplean and team work witch will help in their future live when they grow up. when they get a jod were they have to do team work it won't be so hard because they already now how to communicate and show team work.
STUDENT_NAME | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
E429DAB69106 | what would happen if older and younger students get paired together? If younger and older students get paired together it would have a good effect on students because they can learn different methods of learning, give advise for what do expect in high school, and learn different ways of managing stress.
the first reason why it's a good idea to pair older and younger students together is because they can learn different methods of doing things. older students can show the younger students there ways of learning. younger students can ask questions when they don't understand something on their homework, and the older students can show them how to answer the questions and show them their skills. Other thing is that the students can show the younger students short cuts on any subject they need help with. When the older students show the younger students their ways of learning it will help them when they don't understand something.
The second reason why is that the older students can give advise for what do expect in high school. They can tell the younger students how much homework they will have and how hard it is. They can also tell them what classes they might enjoy. They might enjoy theater or cheer. The younger students can tell them what classes they want to try out. Other reason is that they can tell them the skills they should and need to known. it's a good idea to be prepared for high school and the older students can help them with that.
Finley the older students can show them how they mange stress. They can give some advise on how they take a test. they can tell them their test strategys. Other thing they can do is show them how to prepare for a test. older students can show them how they study for a test. and the last reason is the older students can tell them how they mange there time. they might tell them them what time they do things and how they sent up their work space. when the students known some ways of managing stress it will help them in high school.
thesis are all the reason why it's a good idea to pair younger and older students together because students can learn different methods of leaning, get advise for what to expect in high school, and show them different ways of managing stress. when older and younger students get paired together it's a different experience that is good to have. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
E433745B3F87 | Michelangelo the artist once said,
'' The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving mark.'' I agree with michelangelo statement because we want to aim our goal right, or we will ending up missing. However, there can be a better statement to explain this more. When people want to achieve their goal to be somone in life. It's like shotting a arrow to hit the middle, and aiming the goal we want. For example, to aim it at the middle you have to focus, believe, think, be positive, and let go of your arrow to aim your goal. Other people would like a better statement , and also a better example to go with it. There are mostly people that take it serious to aim for their goal to be success. However there are some other that don't really care and just try to aim for their goal, and ending up missing their shot towards the middle. Another example, is when people want to aim their goal they have to study , work hard, have faith, believe , take risk , be proud, and never giving up. But there's people that miss their one shot towards the middle. Because they are lazy, not prepared, not focus, negative, not giving effort, and not paying attention for what goal their aiming for , so basically they will end up missing their only shot. Third example, is people have to aim their goal just right not to high , and to low. The goal is to aim in the middle ,but Micheangelo is right in one part because you only have one arrow to make it th the middle. It's mostly saying you have one shot to aim for your goal without making any miskates. I could understand why Michelangelo said '' The greater danger for most of us is aming our goal target right in one shot.'' Because there are some people that would have to take some risks. For example, they are not a citizen , or they don't have any papers to work , don't understand english well, they have to leave love ones behind,
and get discriminated by their colors. And it makes it more difficult for some people to aim for their goal. For those reasons theirs fewest people's that end up missing there shot. But there are other people's that won't let this get in their way by taking the risk , and some of those risks come worth it at the end. For example , there are some people that get discriminated by how they look and their color ,but doesn't mean that they have to give up ,and point their arrow the wrong direction to miss their shoot to success. They have to show the others people that they can make their one shot towards the middle all because they study, work hard, put effort, being prepared, being positive and never giving up. These are my supporting details ,and reasons why i agree with Michelangelo the artist statement. However, I don't think that this is statement is the most greatest danger for all of us. For sure there's others statement that are more dangerous then this one. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
E43EB471951D | Do you think is good idea for student to finish high school in three years?
most in one point is good bad in other point is not really good because when a student take the four year of high school is most be prepared, when someone took three of school is not on total prepared.
Most kids wants take three year but they don't thinking about it; they think is easily for them. Take time and thinking, most student who follow ths plan most don't take elective classes courses for the simple act that finish high school early then other students.
Kids who finish high school, in four year they're going with knowledged that they know better than other, some high school's have programs three year until two years to study, but in some high school's it is necesary make four years for wherever reasing or for that is traditional four years as well one motive is because student after graduate they will go to work they don't go to college and that's why they took three years.
For example one's of my friend's took three years and her sister took two years my friend's who took three yaars she said that her don't have the opcion to take elective classes for the simple reason that her will graduate in three years from high school. But when she took one career of college she don't what is going on, because one of her classes has nutrition wellnes and she didn't know nothing about it.
Her sister took two classes her only have three clases; crime, cooking, and goverment;
and her teacher says that her want the opportinity of wanted to comes night school for finish the three classes, but she graduate beginig of time, her graduated in march that normal graduate for us is in june.
But if some high school offer that program is subs to you is good to take just three years, but is oportunity take four years to graduate from high school. Most studen follow that opportunity three years to graduate because they want enter the college early or work. | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
E446D60AD551 | I think that some things that we thought not are true in the history the students they will work is not the best effort. They believe that the source of true is self esteem is achevement. I take a positions on this issue I think that will look in the future. I think that are different peoples some person not look its future only think that the life them treat only of to live but not undertoond that not is only life. I think that students have reason of thougtht that is this is an achievement not is easy we have a achievement yes we have a achievement in this life because yes not have an achievement I do know that you thought in my opinion the trues is the point number firts in this life because that is really happened the true is import always me question for me is that yes not have true all away different.
Some things of this paragraph elieve o this prompt is that understand that the students they believe that students must be self confident and that sense have this world power CONFIDENT are two world confident and confidence Confident is feeling or showing that your are sure about your own abilities opcions and confidence is trust or stong belief in someone or something. I have every confidence in ability to do the job. They have much confident and they have much order to learn more order is to tell someone to do something in a strong way which does not permit him to refuse and without saying they ordered to learn more learn is to get knowledge a skill they learning work they thounght that are the best.
They have achievenment something that is done successfully espeacially through hard work or skill. The act of finishing something successfully the feeling that you get when you have finished something sucessfully. They in learning by lowering to move someone or something down to make something less in amount or quality. I think that the life have must chance or opportunity of have one better life of enjoy every moment yes have work hard but always enjoy every minut every hour every every year with the family is important in this life not all only have that them job always think that have must time and to stop one moment and look this life will look the future.
What is an future? an future is at or to a greater distance in time more to a greater degree the board needs time to consider the matter futher. I can't remember any futher back than 1995 at or to a greater distance in space. However many people also use futher when talking about distances especially in formal coversation only futher can be used in other senses we need a futher week to finish the project but make your life no have self rich with only proffession make your future preofession a type of job that needs special training or skill especially one that needs a high level of education and yes have one occupation is always a job or profession always a employment is a work specially when it is done to earn money it's very difficult to find work at the moment.
I think that yes have a carrer like the student best effort but work I think that I can always but have a carrer the job or series of jobs that someone has in a particular are of work usually involving more resposibility as time passes I have a friend she had a very distingushed carrer in medicine she have a profession I do know because is different a prefession with carrer or trade I think that a trade is a hob always but specially one that involves working with your hands and requieres special training but now talking of the students I think that not have a job because thought that they not have a experience in a job.
I do know that must talking of this only think in the job and the student that the other people thought that they no have experience and that is esperience is to have somehing happen to you to feel something it was the firts time I had ever experenced failure and experinced is having the knowledge or skill that is necessary for something the true this student put in me an expiration because the point important this but they is the true they have a good point the sincerity the quality of being sincere or honest sincere used about a person really meaning or believing what you say not pretending sincerely in a way that shows what you really feel or think about someone or something.
The student's have praising like you say when you are expressing admiration for someone or somethig I think that they have a precaution always precaution in the job I think precaution is something that you do now in order to avoid danger or problems in the future. We took the precaution of locking our valuables in the things with safe like precautions against fire. The students I think that they thought in implore when you implore someone when the situation is very serious and you need something very much.
They had importance about the job the decision was of great importance to the future of the business they have importance of this job only person not have tolerance but learning other people what is tolerance is like to allow accept someone or something especially opinions or behavior that you do not agree with or people who are not like you and other word is intolerance the ability to suffer something especially pain difficukt conditions the student only working together but self better so that two or more things are mixed with joined.
The other people no have compassion they no are considerable with students I think that they had considerable difficullty in getting the students they have a opinion are work the important is the true they must consider the matter carefully before they make our choice to have something in my opinion I think about someone or something in a particular way. They need considered that not are riks wastoo great to remember or pay attention to something the like the students is they have repect not are angry for no have experience in the job they are intelligent for no have insecurity is this I like not have insecure not are they have security Ilike they | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E4596B010B9B | Generic_Name was running the fastest that she could,
suddenly she cross the final line ; Everyone was screaming from joy. Most teenagers can't participate in any extracurricular activity for different reasons.
For example, in Generic_Name experience was because she had to look after her brothers.
Occasionally teenagers look for ways to spend time doing what they like. In fact, there have been many cases where teenagers use a sport to feel less stress or to spend more time with their friends, for these reason teenagers should be able to participate in extracurricular activities. Recently researches discovered that kids that are more active in their life-style can concentrate more than kids that stay in their houses doing nothing all day, like when
Generic_Name was practicing the sport she start making new friends and loving the progress she was making every day.
Generic_Name parents felt surprise because their daughter was following her dream. Some parents think sports are a waste of time and that you are not going to needed in the future, although its going to help you in the future in many ways . For example, before Generic_Name was in the team of runners she felt tired all the time, but went she start practicing she was more active . Most teenagers don't like sports, as a result of that the principal add more things you can do. Know you can decide what do you want to do after school.
I like the idea for students to participate in an extracurricular activities because students will have an activity to do after school and the will spend more time with there friends. If there is a student that don't have any friends this will help them make friends and learn new things. Teenagers should do at least one sport or participate in other activities for their own good. Do you participate in any extracurricular activities? why? | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
E45C9BFE63FA | THOMAS JEFFERSON WROTE, ''determine never to be idle.. it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing, I believe this because it is logical and i have experience and i have a personal topic to share.
in life you will not know everything so that why
I think might be to find out what they doing but, some people knows many things about him no matter what but is so many things that they can do things in this world and if he do something very important that people does't know about they can ask to other people that they should know about Thomas Jefferson...
conclusion
I have a personal story to share about Thomas Jefferson how he determine to never to be idle and how he talks about accomplish that if more we do are always doing something alse more important that why
When I was 10 years old and i was live in Generic_City i saw this topic. about Thomas Jefferson and I decide to study and be prepare because it important and have more chance to do many things to accomplish when we don't be prepare we're not going to do something in the life and the chance to have opportunity like this is do something to find out all that Thomas Jefferson did.
I have shared this topic about Thomas Jefferson because all the experiment that I have learned about all the things that he never Determine to be idle and also it is wonderful how he accomplish so many things, to copare when not do anything | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
E4643D2ADD0A | People who value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas. I agree, because it gives them more experience to use their brains more, it makes people develop more, and it helps you from being dependent all the time.
Using your instincts gives people more experience to use their brains more. Some people don't use their common sense to solve problems, because they're afraid that they're going to make it worse. It's okay to make mistakes. For example, If you're going on a trip with your family, and you find out that there's going to be a traffic in the morning, what will you do? Wake up early in the morning before the traffic forms. That's how you use your brain. You think and plan ahead before things go bad.
People developing more is great for your brain, because it makes you smarter and brighter. More ideas can be useful if you put your mind into it. For example, if you want your boss to be impressed by you, you need to act and use your instincts to create new ideas. It can help you be successful and more reliable.
Instincts help you from being dependent all the time, because you won't be able to be with your friends forever. You have to use your common sense to help you along the way to your adulthood. Having a couple of friends is nice, but your going to have to act and deal with life yourself. For example, you're in your apartment and you need to pay a bill for your car. You're going to have to call the bank that you want to pay for that car. Your friend does not need to tell you to pay for the things that you own. Being independent is important in life.
In Conclusion:
Some say that people who value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas, because it gives them more experience to using their brains more, makes people gain more common sense, and it helps you from being around your companions all the time.
Counterclaim: Not everyone can use their common sense, because they're not born that way. Sometimes, people don't know how to be independent, or maybe they just don't want to. For example, those who have no sight can not see what they're doing. Those who are deaf, cannot hear the people who are talking. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
E47A7E497F78 | One small acts of kindness can help other people by doing little things for them. Helping people with a small act of kindness is helpful because they probablly have never ever gotten a sweet thing said to them or something kind to them. Anybody should be kind to one to the other because it's something kind to do. It can have an impact in others because it can litterlay change the world by being kind to another. The reason why it could change the world is that people in this world don't care to be kind but if everybody does it then it would change by alot.
Just by saying something kind to someone could make someones so happy thats why doing something kind no matter how small it is, it could make someone really happy and amazed and if a person could treat someone like that there is a possibilitty that they could do it to other people and the kindness could go around. Kind is what a alot of people need and its somethimg great to do. You can impact someone by saying something really simple but all of it with kind. In my opinion i think that kindness is a wonderful thing and i can believe that its a huge impact for others. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
E481AA5C2F0B | Why we should be agree with have a positive attitude is the key to be success in the life?
because he does what he sets out to do.
When you have a positive attitude you can a good future.
If you have positive attitude and you did something wrong one time, you will try to learn about it, and you will not worry because the next time you will try to emend what you did wrong and you will try to do more better the next time.
This are some reason why we need to have a positive attitude.
They does what they sets out to do.
If your propose is graduate you can do it because you will try to give the best to do it.
My propose was to come to this country and study and study that is what I am doing now, and I say, I want go to The United States many people say why you go to that country, you are so young, other say why you want to study it is more better work and make money, but I don't listen all that wrong thing and I am in this country and I am study too.
If you have propose in your life you can have many thing that other people say that never can have.
When you have a positive attitude, you can have a good future.
If some day you have a accident with you car and after the accident, the car doesn't work and you friend say put the car en the trash and you say not because did you think the car have a little problem and you don"t want to put it in the trash and some day one friend come to check and say the car a little problem maybe you can pay $50 dollar and the car can be like new if you are no positive maybe you put the car on the trash, that is why it is good be positive in your life because if you are negative never you will live so well.
In your life you have to be positive because if you are positive you can have many thing and you can have more friend because some people doesn't like the people who are negative the person who are negative only think on bad thing can hapend or in thing they think that they cant do it.
I don't know the negative person can live if only think on wrong thing can happen and that are so wrong because you never can be have friend to talk because they think something bad can happen or they think that is a bad person.
When you have a positive attitude, If you do something wrong one time, you will try to learn about it and the next time I will try to amend what I did wrong and I will try to give my best for do it more better.
If I fail this SOL I will try to learn about what I did wrong for the next time I will try to give my best again and put in practice what I learn.
If I am doing a work and when i am doing I do something wrong I will try to n and when I have to do it more better next time.
If you are doing a project and you forgot write something you will try to learn and next time you will try to doesn't have any wrong.
I am agree with said that positive attitude is the key to success in life because If you have one propose you can do it.
your future can be successful. when you do something wrong in you life you try to learn about it and next time put on practice what you learn, amend what I did wrong and do it more better. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
E48441F53011 | Having a homework club after school isn't just a great way for students to get hel on homework but for many other reasons. These are my reasons on why I think having a homework club is beneficial.
Students don't just get help on their homework,but gives them a better understanding on the subject. Students also finish their homework and get a good grades on it.
Staying afterschool can encourage students to try harder on homework and school work as well. Staying for homework club can also make students to be more productive then going home and not getting homework done.
The homework club isn't just beneficial for students but as well as for teachers. Teachers can see questions that many students had a hard time on and then go over it. teachers find it useful to see questoions many students have a hard tim on so that they can practice. Teachers feel good about students finishing their homework and understanding the subject better.
In conclusion I think having a homework club is a great thing because students get a better understanding and getting their homework done. It encourages students to do better in school ,and it is very beneficial for teacher as well. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
E4905D0DD050 | Working with a group would be much easy because you have less work to do by yourself also you would finish it faster. In my opinion doing it in a group is helpful by having less work for yourself.
For example, doing all the work on your own would take much longer and probably wont do it right. Also I've done projects on my own and it takes a lot of time and a lot of effort to finish it and turn it on time. Needing a group would be helpful not just for me but for everyone who is in it because by doing together we would all get a good grade. Being in a group would make make everything much easier for everyone.
Doing your project wont take as longer no more because we would do it in groups. For example, doing your stuff takes to long when doing it yourself . As in doing it all together it would be much faster. Everyone would take a part to do of the project and put it all together. In a group everyone would put a part of there assignment they have done to pull in the whole project together.
There was this one time we all got to pick are group to this big project about the earth we all got a part we want to do. We had to full weeks to turn it in but because we all did want was assignment to us we finish in a week and turned it in and got "A" for our project. In for all doing it in group would be much faster.
I think by doing it in a group it really helps because you get to know your classmate more. For example, you can get to know them by talking to each other. By getting to know your its a good thing ya'll can all become good friends and do even more project later on. It's also good way to comutate with others in your class you haven't talk to. This one time by math teacher made us to get into groups but I didnt know anyone in the class but, a girl invite me to go with her's and I did ever since that we are always in the same group together and she became my best friend. By being in a group will help you get everyone in your class. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
E4BBB2E44D64 | Is a good idea for students to commit a cereer at a young age? Some peple believe that choose a career at a young age can be beneficial for the students while other people believe choose a career at a young age is stressful and a big responsibility, you do not have enough time to think about new options, over the time students gets new skills and you have to be sure about what you really want. This is important because it is not easy for students have expecifics aspirations and good options of careers at a young age.
First, choose a career at a young age is stressful and a big resposibility because you have to be sure about what you really want, you have to inform you about others posibilities, you need to know what are the benefits that some careers offer to you. For example, some schools offer to you a tutor and they help you to decided based on your interests and they recommended have differents options and spend a lot of time thinking about what is more covinient for you.
Secondly, choose a career at a young age is stressful and a big resposibility because you do not have enough time to think about new options. For example, when you are in high school you need to take your time and investigate patiently what careers are more availables for you, you need to concentrated on what you are interested becauase everyone have differents aspirations and differents visions of life.
However, not everyone agree with this position some people claim that choose a career at a young age can be beneficial for the students because that way you have an expecific goal and you can focus more in what you need. Nevertheles the opposition overlooks an important point is you do not have enough time to think about new options, over the time students gets new skills and you have to be sure about what you really want
One most clonclude, commit a cereer at a young age is not a good idea because you do not have enough time to think about new options, over the time students gets new skills and you have to be sure about what you really want. Students changed their aspirations because over the time they can find out new abilities and differents skills. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
E4C49D70C330 | What would happen if the school menu is change? Most of the kid will be upset because the menu have all the delicious food they like. This does not mean this food is healthy.
United States is consider the country were more fast food is distributed and consumed, and also where more people die because of their high cholesterol.
Now a days with all the technologies advantages people is doing less exercise and moving less , for example: We use the car to go everywhere so we walk less ; we do not even need to walk to talk to a person , we can just send them a text ; even to see the weather outside we do not need to stand up ,we can just check the weather in our phone; we have got to a point where if we are to lazy to go to the cinema we can just stay home and watch Netflix,Hulu, Disney or any phone app.
All this is great but at the same time is making lazy people more lazy and more fat , witch is causing more medical problems; like hart attacks , high cholesterol.
In a future if we do not change anything this it will get worse.
A way of helping the future kids like the students from this school would be by teaching them that there is more than fast food , that there is also healthy food that can taste awesome and some even better than the unhealthy food, for example: avocado, fruit juice ,Cesar salad, fish,etc. That all this types of food can create a balance between eating what your body need to work correctly , and what it want to eat.
One way of showing them other variety of food , is by the school menu. The menu could contain food that the kids have never taste before , and that could have less fat than a pizza.
This way when they get older they will not only look for , hamburgers , Chinese food or chicken wings. They will know there are more options that could help them with their body.
And if we do not teach them this habit right now it will be a lot more hard to get them in the healthy habit in the future.
In my opinion considering being part of the school community and thinking about my future and my classmates
I think that including a more healthy menu in the school cafeteria would be one of the best ideas for everyone. We do not want to have any medical problems because of the food we eat.
Thank you for your attention. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
E4DCBE75344D | Theirs a lot of activities that many people enjoy doing. Why are educational activities enjoyable? because you can learn a lot of new things, you spend time with friends and you'll learn from your mistakes.
First, Educational activities are enjoyable because you can learn new things. Trying new things wont kill you but it will benefit you,for example try to dance or experimenting it can be one of your liking if you tried it. You can learn from the new things you do. If you study more you will know a lot of things because of studying.
Second, Educational activities are enjoyable because you spend time with your friends. You and your friends help each other on the activities you do. Friends are one of the most important things in your life. If you spend time with your friends your bonds to each other will grow and for every memories you make with your friends you will realize the importance of having friends. Friends helps you in many ways like if you need help on something or if you need someone to talk to if your depressed.
Third, Educational activities are enjoyable because you'll learn from your mistakes. They say "Failure is the key to success."
its true, because every time you fail you will do your best to fix the mistake you've done. If you fail on your project or the activity your doing you might want to check it if whats wrong with it and fix it.
In conclusion, Educational activities are enjoyable because you can do a lot of stuff you enjoy doing. Educational activities helps us grow and make our minds brighter and wider. It helps our thinking and our imagination. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
E4F813D54870 | In some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. Their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward a specific career. I strongly disagree with this prompt because once we enter high school we are transitioning to a bigger school with more new subjects that catches our attention. My reasons for disagreeing is that I was once a rising ninth grader and I would be unhappy with the career I wanted in my freshman year. For example when I first came into high school as a ninth grader I wasn't sure of what I wanted to be once I graduate. Now I am a senior at Generic_school and I have two option to choose from.
In my perspective I believe that at a young age mindset changes; you find new interest in things and also our mind isn't fully developed at ages fourteen or fifth teen; we aren't mature wisely on what we want. I think the student should started preparing them self once they're in junior year which is when they're a eleventh grader. My reason for saying that is because you're close to graduating and need to start planning your future, looking for scholarship, and making sure you want the career you've chosen for a long period of time.
I don't think its a bad idea but i wouldn't agree with it because I know how this generation is like and we need more teacher to start talking to them seriously about life after high school. These past year a huge amount of student have dropped out of school because they do not feel like they have support from teacher, friends, or even their own parents; or maybe the student think they can't afford college; not many teacher talk to them about financial help or support. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
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