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D743AC1EB08D | how conserve energy and resources
The energy, and the resources are the most important factors in the world, for the evolution and survival of the human. There are many types of resources such as money, products, and energy power. Factors that have supported the human life for long time, and actually continue it happening. Every body in this world must be career it, because these resources are helping us to survive ,and support our life style. But the sad-reality is that the human does not career it, because they do not know about the consequences or they are ignorant. We need to rectify our mistake, and keep safe our resources. This written will be about advice, benefits, disadvantages, and plans how career our resource.
Let talk about the benefits that we are go to get if we safe our resources. First, there is a plan or recommendation what is about adopt a four-day work week, with each days 10 hours work, and school days with two hours. This is as a way to save our resources, and obtain the following benefits; we are going to save the energy, food,internet, water, time (to spend in our life with the family or whatever we want), the deterioration of our clothes and shoes. We are going to help the environment to keep it safe from the pollution, to make a better style life for the humans, and save resources for critical moments in the world. As you can see there are many resources what we could save, if we have adopt this plan.
In this plan, there are many benefits but also disadvantages. For this time I am go to talk about the disadvantages, if we implement this project. There will be present many problem such as the loss of time to learn, time to work, we will lost our social life in the school as in the work, became a professional will be harder and tardy. The technology advance will be slower, and it is go to affect the human evolution. Then we will lose many important things, and resources. Factors that could support in life, and make it easier.
In conclusion, There will be many people whom will benefit from this project , but at same time it is go to make many problems cause the disadvantages. If we implement this plan, we must be able to understand, we are go to take our risk. Moreover we must be think about the risky that this could be, and prevent more problems than we already have. I recommended do not waste our time anymore, starting to create a better world with a better life style, and creating new project to save resources. This support or this type of project need to be created by the government, because they are whom have the power to control whole country. Now take career our resource became a new goals for me after reflect a topic as this. We are going to understand that is necessary protect our resources, because they are indispensable to keep us alive and keep going with this life what we have in the twenty-one century. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
D7528DEBA951 | Isnt technology just great? through time technology has been advancing, and it's just getting better, but is it minimizing our connections with the human contact? I believe its had a good positive effect on peoples lives. see it this way, technology helps us so much like buildings cars and airplanes, technology has taken over restaurants in such a way that you no longer have to tip! technology and stores do mix and its just speeding up the process.
Although technology might be taking hundreds of jobs, technology is one of the best things we have in this world. Ford industry is a great example they make their cars using robotic technology! by using these big instruments they are able to make a car every ten minutes, that's incredible, and not just that they have the capacity to sell trucks without specking to a customer, representative its all online no need of customer service. Having to buy parts has never been easier thanks to Ford/store. org get the piece you need the next day. Near my local ford dealer they have a great restaurant where technology is all they utilize.
Who would've known by using technology in restaurants everything would run much smoother, by using technology ordering your favorite meal off a tablet was never this cool. Yes that means there would only be a few people employed and less contact with waiters/staff members but there is a good side, no need to worry about tip, especially no human mistakes, order everything off your finger tips. while your enjoying your meal staff members will have a chance to be doing somethings else unless called by a customer. Have you seen how long it takes to check out in Walmart! thanks to technology now and days?
Have you ever experienced or seen a cashier take a billion years just to scan the chicken your considering purchasing? i have and It was devastating to watch! or have you witnessed a wrong change? things like this happen way to often and if you never noticed it on your receipt you just lost some money. That's why they invented self checkouts to speed up the process of purchasing, thanks to these great machines leaving Walmart was never easier to do. Just scan and go! sooner or later every store in America will have these great machines. Yes they'll once in a while have some bad performance but most of the time there really reliable. Is it weird not seeing a employee in the cash register? yes but you'll get use to it as time continues.
Having technology in our side has made us better and has lighten our sense of being, technology has been so good to us that it has brought positivists in our lives. How stressful would it be for Ford Junior to hire millions of workers, and finish one car every five hours? or opening up a restaurant and hire twenty workers who are rude, lazy to there customers? and last but certainly not least, Walmart having hundreds of workers who take forever to scan and pack your items. All of this would stink if we wouldn't have such great technology in our hands. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
D752DF2541DD | Dear Principle,
changing the policy is a good idea, because many people have c average, and if they play any sports, they might get a lower average than a c. Also they have to focus on their school work first than the sports, and like I said before playing sports might get them failing. Also, if nobody is making a change, on their grades than maybe she could change it but, meanwhile she should keep it to a b average to play any sports or to be in any activity, the students are going to try their best at making good grades to play sports. It is good in many reasons to keep a good average, because then they get their report card or their progress reports and they see that they have a low average, it is going to be because they are focusing to much in their sports or activities. The principle should first see how the students react to the changing, and if it works than, yea keep it, but she can always change it. It doesn't matter if they have a high C, but then need to have a B. Most students would argue about having to study, but i think its for their own good, also the school will change, for example, the school recognized for having a C average ad letting them play sports or do any activities, that could change if the students try hard enough and change the C to a B, then the school will recognized by having a B average on, most of the students.
The reason that its best for students to have good grades, its because also at the end of the year if they don't have a good average, they will not be able to pass the year. Back to the point it will be challenging, but I'm sure the students that love playing sports or being part of school activities, those people will actually try and make those grades, but if for some reason, those people who tried their best, like they went to tutoring, did all their home and school work, and turned it in, then you might want to check in with his/her teachers and see if they want to let them participate, but everyone can make at least a B, not an A but a B, because we all are very smart, some smart as others, but yes I'm sure, it will all work out, but if they keep on complaining, and they don't actually try to do their best, and they slack off, go to sleep in class they you won't see a difference n their grades, then that's their lost, because we want our school to be recognized, with all of out players with a B. one of the reasons why i want the students to have a good average, its because, those who want to succeed will try until they get it right, but if you are the person who doesn't care, then whose fault is that?
So i would like to have that policy. As i told you before, everyone is smart enough to pass their grades, even if, they don't think so.
It wont be so bad, either, to try your best at school, even if you just do it for sports, but i you were the type of person that was failing, then now you can say that you are passing all of your classes, don't think of what other people have to say, just do it for yourself. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
D760EF65B80C | Many people think that it is a great idea for high school students to only attend three years of high school education, by taking courses in the summer or in the evenings, It will allows you to graduate a year earlier than your orginal class year, I prefer to attend all four years of high school education, which means that i would attend all four traditional years of high school education, such as: Freshmen year, Sophmore year, Junior year, and Senior year, which is the last year of a student high school education. The reasons for my disagreement are: Age problems, Graduation issues, Lack of Experience, and Shortage of a summer break.
Firstly, lets talk about age problems that people who follows this plan are going to go throught. Freshmen students should be starting thier first year of thier high school career around the age of fourteen or fifteen years old, So they can graduate while turning the legal age of eighteen years old in the United States, Which is the correct age of finishing thier high school education. Sophmore students should be starting thier Sophmore year while turning the age of sixteen years old. There are few students that start thier Sophmore year at the age of fifteen years old, Which means that they attended thier first grade in Elementry school younger than others.
Secondly, Graduation issues, Graduation should be the most significant accomplishment in anyone's high school education, When following this program, You are not going to be able to graduate with the same class year as you for example; I graduate with my orginal class of year twenty-twenty. If following this program, you are going to be ahead of your friends and class year.
Thirdly, Shortage of summer, students only get two months as a summer break in the United States, before attending thier next school year. By following this program, you are not going to be able to go on vications and rest from the year that you attended. You must study the classes and cources that the program gives you, so you can finish all of your credits and graduate while your family are on vications having a good time.
Finally, In conclusion, this program will mess up your summer plans and would not benefit you with any new progress. I suggest the traditonal four years of high school education. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
D77456B25F73 | We're form to have different types of personalities in ourselves which it is hard to understand others behavior toward us, we pretend to quickly think that we are in control or think we are in control of subtend things in life which we are not even in control of our own distinguishing traits.
When a baby is born the mother nor the father is clueless of what their child will grow up to become in life. There are two types of individual traits: the that pretend to be someone the're not and the one that stays true to who they are. At some point of a human being life they tend to join those who have bad taste in life and always make horrible decisions and by becoming a follower of those people they also become one of them slowly but surely with time.
We can decide to be ourselves to love who we are deeply in the inside and not care what others think of us in the outside. God knew the second he decided us to be part of this world how our distinctive traits would be like when we become older, us loving ourselves influence others to do the same in there life.
In conclusion we we're not born to follow others we we're born to stand out for ourselves. In every actions we choose to do there will always be circumstances to our actions. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
D7766B98F761 | It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. I believe that attitude is everything in life. Having a negative attitude can be helpful when someone is defending themselves for what they believe in, but having a positive attitude might change someone's life and at the end of the day you feel good about yourself.
It's important to have a positive attitude in everyday life because your reputation goes up, others want what you have and you set a positive mindset for yourself.
First, having a positive attitude in your daily life will raise your reputation. For example, you are at a job interview, you dress very properly for this job interview. When you first walk in the room, you greet the interviewer with a smile and a handshake, and you start to introduce yourself. That gives the perfect first impression to getting the first place in this job. People in my life have taught me that giving positive attitude around my peers is very important, because having a positive attitude can change what someone think of you. In summary, being positive in a job interview will get you that job that you've been working for your whole life.
Second, people around you want what you have when you show positive attitude. For example, you are doing a group project, you don't know any of the people you are working with. The first thing that you did was to introduce yourself with a big smile, and then you ask for their names. All those people in your group sees that enthusiasm, and they think " Man! She must be a really nice peson, I wish I have that kind of positivity in my life." Someone in that group might not been having a good day that day and they saw how positive you are and they want that same positivity that you have.
In summary, a person giving another person positive attitude can help others to be the best that they can be in life.
Third, having a positive attitude can set your mind on positive things in life. For exmaple, in 1999 there was a shooting in Generic_School, 200 people died and 500 people were injured. It was a very sad event for both families and friends. A girl name Generic_Name was injured badly that she has to be in a hospital. But what she said in the hospital that caught everyone's attention was that " I may be hurting very badly right now and I may or may not be able to walk, but I am glad that I am still alive, and that i get to see my friends and family's faces right now". Generic_Name was injured so bad that she couldn't even walk, but she had that positive mindset that at least she's not dead. In summary, positive attitude will switch your life around in life's hardest moments.
In Conclusion, positive attitude is the key to happiness and success in life. One person being positive about something, the others follow. That's what so special about positivity, it spreads everywhere you go, as long as you are positive. This changes people's lives every single day.
When someone have positive attitude, your reputation goes up, people want that positivity and you have a positive mindset in everything you do. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
D776E7CA9913 | The students enter in high school for graduating, and they expected to indentify a careers of cources in high school and are selected to guide them toward a specific career. I think was a good idea to commit to a career at a young age because they have more time to think about our career and learn more for that, and practice of the career, and take the position of a good life with work and pacient on careers.
The reasons why is good for a young age by know more careers and learning for a future, and earn more money and teach others about you learn in this proffesional career, and is most easily to find jobs in internet of in stores. For my example of this I choose a chef's carrer, and I learning more they teach me everyday of how to cooking and other things I do not know that; other example is when i am in high school and my teachers select me and others students for what is my career for my future they show me how to find careers in internet and i choose one of chef and the other is a doctor career i, choose the doctors and they help me more in topic doctors and how to work in this job etc. and i more of medicine and i help people for have more safety. This is my examples of careers.,lol
The students enter in high school for graduating, and they expected to indentify a careers of cources in high school and are selected to guide them toward a specific career. I think was a good idea to commit to a career at a young age because they have more time to think about our career and learn more for that, and practice of the career, and take the position of a good life with work and pacient on careers.
The reasons why is good for a young age by know more careers and learning for a future, and earn more money and teach others about you learn in this proffesional career, and is most easily to find jobs in internet of in stores. For my example of this I choose a chef's carrer, and I learning more they teach me everyday of how to cooking and other things I do not know that; other example is when i am in high school and my teachers select me and others students for what is my career for my future they show me how to find careers in internet and i choose one of chef and the other is a doctor career i, choose the doctors and they help me more in topic doctors and how to work in this job etc. and i more of medicine and i help people for have more safety. This is my examples of careers. The students enter in high school for graduating, and they expected to indentify a careers of cources in high school and are selected to guide them toward a specific career. I think was a good idea to commit to a career at a young age because they have more time to think about our career and learn more for that, and practice of the career, and take the position of a good life with work and pacient on careers.
The reasons why is good for a young age by know more careers and learning for a future, and earn more money and teach others about you learn in this proffesional career, and is most easily to find jobs in internet of in stores. For my example of this I choose a chef's carrer, and I learning more they teach me everyday of how to cooking and other things I do not know that; other example is when i am in high school and my teachers select me and others students for what is my career for my future they show me how to find careers in internet and i choose one of chef and the other is a doctor career i, choose the doctors and they help me more in topic doctors and how to work in this job etc. and i more of medicine and i help people for have more safety. This is my examples of careers. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
D779EEB6F8BC | The school board should not add one and a half hour to school each day because most students have stuffs to attend after school, students can't work for to long because they will get tired, and students need enough time to be out of school and have fun.
The school board should not add one and a half hour to school each day because most students have stuffs to attend after school. There are many students who take after school clubs and activities. They should have enough time to prepare their self's for the activity they are doing. If the school decides to add one and half hour than the students will have hard time focusing on their activities. Therefor, the school board should let students have time to go home and practice and get done whatever they need to.
Next, the school board should not add one and a half hour to school each day because students can't work for too long because they will get tired. It's enough for students to be at school for about 8 hours but if the hours increase than the students will be extremely tired. They won't have enough time to finish their homework and they won't have enough time to do their house work. The students will feel exhausted in school and will be to tired to do school work. So the school board should not increase school hours each day.
last, the school board should not add one and a half hour to school because the students need some time to be out of school and have fun. Students will be stressed out for being in school for to long. They should go to fun places after school to get their mind of out of stressful things and have a great time with their friends. If they stay in school for extra hours than their brain won't be functioning that good. Therefor, the school board should not increase school hours each day.
In conclusion, the school board should not add one and a half hour to school each day because most students have stuffs to attend after school, students can't work for to long because they will get tired, and students need enough time to be out of school and have fun. It's enough for students for being at school for almost 8 hours. If the school board adds more hours than it will be difficult for students to handle all the school work. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
D77A3352CB34 | For some reason I think it is not a good idea because the students are not decided what they want to be in a short time, they need learn more things in school, because they can regret for take some careers because they have another perspective when they was a young, sometimes they lost the time at find another career that they want because they choose one career that probably don't know how was it when they wasa young.
Still better option choose the career when you finish high school for you have more time for looking something that be for you agrade and that you prefer, you need take a decision when you choose one career, some you are good or something that make feeling well,example you are very nice doing somehting that make you happy or some career hard that making a lot money, is your choice.
For another way if the students are decided what they want to do when they are younger, they had more time and get more experience. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
D7817C171926 | Benefits of long summer break
Most students enjoy summer vacation and like to have a fun time. Some students may have more time to share with their family. However some students uses that time to have a job and earn money for any emergency or for keep saving for their scholarships, if they have planned go to the college. I believed that students should have a regular summer break because some students have the ability to remember everything they learned before summer break, and also students may enjoy the weather and have some fun time.
First reason that students should have a regular summer break is that students may be able to develop their strength, while they are enjoying their summer break. For instance some students may have summer school where they could make some extra school's work and keep everything they learned in mind. for instance my family just have time in summer, so I would like to try to do some extra help in summer school, and then enjoy the rest of the summer time with friends and family. also there are a few reason that why students may have a regular summer break. Continuosly I will explain some more reason.
Second reason that students should have a regular summer break is that students may be able to enjoy their break going to the pool, to camp, the river, the beach etc. however students may have also time to study on any subject that they want and have a fun time. Students may have a time for themself, for instance they may sleep and wake up at any time they want, hence they have to clean up their house and give to their family some help.
Also students may study at home with their sibling in case they have, and do some activities to remember everything they learned.
Third reason is that some educators feel that the summer break is too long and because that students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall. but if educators really knows their students, they may be agree with the regular summer break because that the only time that with have with a good weather to enjoy outside of the house. what about if students have a long winter break, they will not be able to go outside because the snow or for the lowest temperature. what about if students have spring and fall off, also that time of the year is still cold not a lot of snow but cold, students may get sickness or something else. In addition if students need to work because, they do not have the resort or the benefits as another students, they have to work but in winter time in some place of job are not hiring so the could not work in winter break.
In the final analysis some people would argue that students should have three-four week break in summer, a longer winter break and a week off in the spring and fall. however, the summer break is the best time of the year, because students may do something else as play any sports they want, and enjoy that time. Students may have the ability to retain information even after summer break. addionality students would like the advance that they have of having a long summer break and be prepared for the next school's year. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
D7B9BEAEE50E | Dear ; Mr principal i have done some resarch, and i think that it's a good idea to change the school cafeteria menu, to a more healthier food. I know that it wil be a big change, but it will help the students alot here in school, i have some reasons of why you must change the school menu and how it will help us.
The first reason is because the parents of the students won't have to be worry anymore of what thier children are eating in school, you know that there are some parents that want thier children to eat healthier, and if we change the menu they wont be worry all the time, because they will know that thier children are eating healthy food, every single day they wont be eating junk food.
My second reason is that the student will be heathy, and strong, they will also be more active, and ready to learn at school they wont be sleeping that much, and they wont be so lazy, because what the student are eating right now in school that is junk food it will make them, less active and their brain won't function good though the whole day. Thats why you should consider to change the school menu do it for the children that goes to school so they can be healthy and learn new things every single day.
My last reason, is that the student won't be geting sick alot, and they will coming to school more often, they wont be missing alot of school day beause of the healthy food that they will be eating from our school every day, we will also be helping their parents because when their children get sick they spend alot of money for doctor and medicine, but since we will be giving healthy food to the children they wont be geting sick alot. and we will be teaching them the importance of eating healthy food and being healthier.
This are my reason of why you should change the school menu so please consider this idea because we will be alot more healthier then what we are right now and our brain will functon good, and it will help us for the rest of our life, because in school is were we spend must of our time and we learn everything here, its like our second home do this for our future and for the good of the school. | 3.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
D7C6DEB19630 | Technology
Technology have changed people in a lot of ways. People use technology almost everywhere they go. Technology, sometimes, is helpful and sometimes its not. People use technology to find resources that are very helpful. Some people use technology to play games and discover inconvenient sites. Technology change peoples the way they live their lives. Using technology can have some intense effect on peoples health issues. Technology can cause people to perform bad things.
Technology can change the way people live their lives. When people are using technology, they can't focus on what the other person is saying. Technology cause people of losing communication with their parents or their friends. Young people use technology more than old people. Young people are addicted to technology which is bad for them. School's do not like to let students use their cellphones during classes, because they will not focus on learning anything. If someone could take the technology away from young people, they would not communicate with their parents or not even make an eye contact with them. Technology can cause a bad habit for them.
Using technology can have some bad effect on peoples health. A lot of people die in car accidents on account of them using technology while driving a car. People can get addicted to their technology devices, which is bad for their eyes. Using a lot of technology can cause people to go blind. Young people don't get enough sleep because they use their phones and stay up late. Some parents let their kids to use technology and avoid what it can do to their kids. Some parents do care about their kids health issues and they take their devices away. Technology can cause people to get hurt.
Technology can cause people to perform illegal actions. Technology have a very negative effect on the peoples lives. Many people kill themselves because the media tells them to do so. People see negative effects of the technology and then they use them. People kill because of technology. Using technology can turn people aggressive, independent, and impudent.
People shouldn't use technology a lot because it effects them emotionally. Technology is bad for people because it changes the way people live their lives. Using technology can hurt many people in different ways. It is bad for peoples health. Technology effects different kinds of people young and old. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
D7C9E22CC216 | Graduating Early is a Bad Idea
Personally I think graduating in three years instead of the traditional four years should not be allowed. School should really think about this idea before making it an actual thing, because for some students this could be a good thing, but for some students this could be really bad.
Graduating early to me is a bad idea because, I dont think it gives students the right amount of time to learn everything they need to learn while being in high school. In high school students go through situations, make mistakes and bad decisions, learn how to fix those things and not do them again. Students find what they really like to do in life while being in high school but some students need a lot of time to find out what is that thing that they love and want to do for the rest of their lives. Students that play sports need to play for a good amount of time to get better at it and maybe get an scholarship, students that take mechanic courses or photography courses need a good amount of time to learn about everything they need to dominate on whatever they do, so that way colleges can come to their school, watch them and find out if they deserve a scholarship or not. While being in high school, students learn how to adapt to new environments, new people and even different languages so that way when they go to college they are ready for anything. Students that do want to follow this plan and graduate a year early, are going to have to go to school during the summers or in the evinings, if students do that then they won't be able to get a job and work what being in hish school and they won't be able to learn to manage their money and to figure out what's good or bad for them economically.
I have a friend her name is Generic_Name, she graduated a year early because she took online classes and stayed after school to graduate a year early. Generic_Name goes to college and has trouble adapting to the new environment and dealing with defferent types of people, Generic_Name is having emotional pronlems because she is not sure anymore about what she wants to do in life. Generic_Name and I talk everyday and she tells me about everything she goes through, she tells me she can't get a boyfriend because she doesn't know how to maintain a healthy relationship, she tells me she's having economical problems because she's doesn't know how to manage her money because while being in high school she worried more about getting her credits than actually learning what she had to learn to be ready to the real world.
In conclusion I think is a bad idea for schools to allow students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years of high school. Give students the right amount of time to learn everything they need to be ready for the real world. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
D7E4E0A1B943 | Do you agree or disagree whith Emerson's statement about individuality ? Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote ,to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment ." I disagree with Emerson's statement about individuality .
my first important why I disagree whith Emerson's statement about individuality :
the humen, or the person, if he whant to be the greatest accomplishment i don't think he can be greatest accomplishment by hemself because he need help from shool or the teacher because you cant do that whithout help .
to be the greatest accomplishment you shoulde to study, or work whith groups not only if you work only you cant understanding you cant investigation your dream .
the work with groups that will help you to know our life that will help you to be greatest accomplishment my most important reason why i disagree whith Emerson's statement about individuality ;
To be th greatest accomplishment you need to study about what you whant to be you need to learn a lot of things about the world and every thing about the world you shoulde be the best one on the earth in conclusin , why i disagree whith Emerson's statement about individuality because he cant be the greatest a ccomplishment to be your self in aworld that is constantly . | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
D7EC70BFCAB6 | Allowing cell phones in classrooms it can be a benefit for some students and a disadvantage for others. Although some say that cell phones should be allowed in classrooms because they believe that using cell phones in the classroom it can help students to research for a project or it can help to do any other assignment . Actually it shouldn't because students can cheat during a test and they get distracted.
Some say that cell phones shouldn't be allowed in classrooms because students can cheat during a test and they get distracted. For example one day my English teacher told me that she let her students to use their phone during a test to search something about the meaning of the words that they doesn't know. Then, she told me that she told them that they can only use their phones to translated the words that they doesn't know what it means or to translated to their own language. After that she says that she gave to her students the test and she went to seat to her desk, but then she was observing that one of her students was using his phone too frequently, she went to see what the student was searching and she saw that the student was searching for the answers of the questions that the test have. After that, she saw that one of the others students was taking pictures of the exam, she went to see why the student was taking pictures of the exam, she ask him that why he was taking pictures of the exam and he told her that he was sending the answers to his friend who was sitting in the back seat.
Moreover, she told me that the other day that she was explaining the class, some students were using their phone and paying less attention to the class. Also, she says that the students who were using their phones during the class when they got the test they doesn't know what to answer because they were distracted with their phones and they got a lower score in the exam. I believe that cell phones shouldn't be allowed in classroom because is a distraction for students, sometimes there are students that when the teacher is explaining the class they are using their phones and when the teacher gave them a test they got bad score in their test and that can be a problem because their grades can get very lower.
Those who believe that cell phones should be allowed in classrooms have their reasons, they believe that using cell phones in the classroom it can help students to research for a project or it can help to do any other assignment. One example can be my friend Generic_Name, his history teacher always gave him assignments that he have to search in the book about the Civil War or World War II. He told me that it's very complicated for him to search some things about those tittles in the book because the books doesn't have enough details for him to what to put in his assignment or sometimes he doesn't know how to summarize the meaning of the paragraphs that the book have. However, when the teacher let him use his phone he began to search about the tittles that he have to search and he says that it's more easy for him to understand more about those tittles because he is using his phone for a educational purpose. Also, he says that when he plays Kahoot or Quizlet live (
those are learning games that sometimes the teachers use to help students to study
) he learn more than when he read a book. In my point of view I believe that cell phones should be allowed in school because for me sometimes is very complicated to read a book because there are some words that I don't understand, but when I use my phone to search it's more easy because in the phone there are some meanings that I understand .
In summary, some say that cell phones shouldn't be allowed in classroom because students can cheat during a test and they get distracted. However, some believe that cell phone should be allowed in classrooms because it can help students to research for as project and to do any other assignment. In my opinion I believe that cell phones should be allowed in school because it easy for me to search the meaning of a word that I don't know and I feel that I learn more then treading a book. | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
D80B98C274D4 | Extending each school day
I totally disagree with extending each school day, because kids wouldn't have enough time do other activities, kids need a distracion away from school, they need to put their minds in something other than just school. Kids, parents, and teacher have other things to do, they all have plans and will get in the way of that.
One of the reasons why i disagree with extanding the school day is that kids will not have enough time to do other activities, for example after school programs, clubs, and practice. If the school board adds another hour kids will get so caught up on homework that will not have enough time to other activities
Kids need a distraction from school, although school is really important, kids needs to distract their minds away from everything in school, like test, wetheater or not they failing, drama, all the stress schools brings sometimes. They just a rest from everything, they need a "stress free" time. Kids needs time for themselfs, time to do something that's not always school.
Kids, parents, and teachers do other acitivites after school, for example kids go to football practice right after school or pian lessons, they might not be able to go. They can have doctors appointment,
since some kids get appointments late in day so they won't miss a day in school. Parents needs to go places with their kids at a specifc time, and if they come late and kids will be too tired to go with them. Teachers got palns, they need to do stuff after school, maybe their kids has a game, or they need to go to their kids rehersal and if school board extends a day, teacher would not be able to go because they are working, maybe some teachers studies after work, or they do homework if they in collage. Adding one more hour to school can ruin everyone's schudule.
In conclusion extending each school day can be a big change with time for everyone. Kids needs time for themself, they need distraction away from school and the time it's left for them to have a free time it might be nothing since they will be in school and then do homwork. Everything doesn't always have to be just about school. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
D80ED2446C0E | Setting examples by your own behavior to influence other people is better for many reasons but still has its pros and cons.
My first reason why is because the majority people around world learn and comprehend better when they have an example in front them. In addition it is easier to influence others by your behavior becuase you experience it everyday and it would be very easy to set an example.
My second reason is setting examples makes you a leader and when other people start to notice it they will strive to act upon that action because they where influenced and want to become a leader like you,soon more and more people will start doing it.
There is only one con and that is depending on the individual and situation that person might not be good at making self behavior examples because they may have not experienced it before but there is a solution for this problem. You can ask a smart adult and act upon there actions and carry it on. Nobody is perfect and its okay to ask for help sometimes.
In conclusion setting examples by your own behavior to influence others is a smart thing to do and you'll be surprised by how many people youv'e influenced. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
D81AEDF6E262 | Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. For example, people can check out books, they can do shopping from online, and play games without speaking to another person. However the technology had positive and negative effects on people's lives. Although some people say that technology is good because all the people can use it for an emergency situation, actually many people believe that technology can change the attitude of the people and technology has more important people behind a screen than people around them.
Although some people say that technology is good because all the people can use it for an emergency situation. Imaging that a family lives faraway from us and need help and nobody lives around this family. Further, in this situation is very necessary the technology because they can be in a very hard situation. For example, when I was in my country many families were living faraway from the city, and some of them did not have any device to communicate with their families or another person; however, some of them were having a really hard lives because sometimes they got sick and they did not have the help from others and they died because the technology was necessary by the moment.
In addition, many people believe that technology is bad because technology can change the attitude of the people. In 1978 people were more respectful and some of them did not study but they show the respect to each other. However, people keeps saying that a person change the attitude because of: movies, music, novels, and cartoons. It is true the some people the use technology constantly they can get mental problems or they get blind using technology over and over. For example, I know this families that have a girl that is fifteen years old, and she likes to see many TV shows. This young girl acts like she is more older than other teenagers because she does not obey to her parents. Her conduct is very bad, but that is the way her parents are growing her. This girl goes out whatever she wants and with whatever she wants. Sometimes I think that is her parents fault because they still keep buying many technology things. They do not paid attention to how their daughter is using the technology. By contrast, allowing children using technology at young age is very bad because some of then do not use it appropriate, and when they get older their parents can not control them because they learn many bad things from the technology. Otherwise parents can go out with them instated of using technology.
Also, many people believe that technology is bad because technology has more important people behind a screen than people around them. It is true that many people are more focus on a screen almost all the time. The Psychologist Generic_Name said that "it is better have conversations face to face because people can be more clearly about situations", and he is right because using technology people can lie behind the screen. By this time factories create more devices that makes more people loose their mind in technology. Moreover, about ninety percent of all the people paid more attention to the technology than their families, or people around them. There is one example about lying while using technology, about five months ago I was reading this book that is call "
Behind the Wed
" and was very interested because the character was a woman teacher that was having communication with someone that she did not know nothing about it; however, when they were sending messages the person the was behind was acting the was a man but was a girl acting like a man. When this teacher ask her about if they can do a video call she said not because she was lying to her. There are more examples the happens and real life to many people.
In conclusion, technology can be good or bad, but thats depends on the manner of how the people wants to use it. Technology does not stop increasing, yet people have to know how to use it in the appropriate moment and the correct form. Technology can change the life of many people. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
D84024335230 | People are love challenges and learn new languages. There are 67 languages have spoken in the world, 8.9% of us speak Vietnamese. Vietnamese is on top 10 hardest language has spoken. My skill is can speak Vietnamese fluently. I can do a lot of things with Vietnamese, such as translate English to Vietnamese, teach my friends how to speak Vietnamese and to communicate with others Vietnamese.
I can speak both Vietnamese and English at the same time, so that's mean I could translate from English to Vietnamese or even Vietnamese to English. Don't you think it would be helpful for your parents when you 're on a family vacation. That is my main job whenever I go out with my mom, because she doesn't speak English or able to understand it.
My friends are love Vietnamese, they always convince me to teach them this amazing language. When I come to my class my friend start saying "Xin Chao" it means "Hello" in English, I'm so glad that they love and want to learn it. I had a friend who is American, I taught him how to speak Vietnamese, and now he can speak Vietnamese like his home language.
However it would be helpful if you are in Vietnam or a place where the most Vietnamese people lives, you could ask them in Vietnamese when you need help( I bet if you are from a foreign country and you can speak Vietnamese, they will think you're super cool). I remember that one time, I had a family reunion and I went to Vietnam. Then I was lost, I tried yell "Help me, I lost, I can't find my parent", but they couldn't understand what I was said, luckily I can speak Vietnamese, I asked them where is the police station so I could find my parents.
Overall, Vietnamese is the perfect language to learn if you want to challenge yourself. It would help you a lot if you want to visit Vietnam one day. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
D840D9ED669C | Do we accomplish always doing something, that quastion can be answerd in different ways on the tipe of person that you ask; theres people that are accomplished with what they do, but theres people that not like to do their stuff because maybe they do not like to do what they are doing, or its hard to do it or they are just tired of it. For people that like to do what they do they have some stuff that make them feel acomplishwith what they do for example:
The space are were they work at.
The relation ship that they have with other workers to work together .
How hard is the job that they are doing that makes them feel comfrontable.
In the other heand the people that do not like what they do, they don't feel accomplish for this reasons for examole:
The work area is not comfortable to them.
The people do nt have a good relation ship with the workers.
The work is to hard since no one likes to help echader.
In my way of think I would pick that i feel accomplish with what I'm doing because maybe is hard or I dont feel comfrontable odoing it, but I enjoi doing it is something that i considere accomplihsment for; Im the one who is doing it that nothing is going to change it and Thomas Jefferson was right it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing it.
My conclution is that if we have to enjoy what we are doing even if is something that we dont like to do, or is just a person that you are working with is not good enght to work with , but it doen's not matter about what you do your idias that you have made the work that they did and the prgres that could be helpfull to expire you to do more thing to feel accomplished with your self. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
D84463ADEE19 | If the curfew is adopted,teenargers on the streets after those hours would be braking the law . Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble or they unfairly interfere in young people lives.?Yes the curfews keep teenagers out of trouble in those hours ;because,First it is not save for teenagers to be out on the streets after those hours,Second police department have a code were it say that teenagers can't be out on the streets after 10 P.M
,Finally teenagers at lest will be out of trouble after those hours they are not on the streets.
1. First it is not save for teenagers to be out on the streets after those hours.
It is not save foe teenagers to out on the streets after 10 P.M
; because, after those hours is so many people who are driving it alcohol in their blood system,also many people on this day sales drugs to teenargers parents and family don't want their teenagers to count that things thats why the curfew is es fantastic idea for teenagers to stay away from drugs in those hours we all know that teenager can get in trouble in others different places for example: many teenagers cant get in trouble during school hours,also in their way home,They cant also do bad thing when they are in their homes. In may places are crazy people that don't know what they are doing;for example,imagined is a crazy man shutting all over the place and is a teenagers out at the time the crazy man see he or she is will want to shot him or her,in many cased we see on this day bad people is every were around the world looking for teenager to sales or kill that way the curfew is perfect for teenagers.
2. Second police department have a code were it say that teenagers can't be out on the streets after 10 P.M.
the polices department have a code were it say that any teenagers under eating years old can't be out in the middle of the neigh by there self. The teenagers can out at the middle of the nigh only if they are we their parents, or family members who she or he have to be eating years old or more. In may states have this code to presents cases like;illegible burgs sales or illegal alcohol sale in many countries don't have this code but others are taking advantages of it.
3. Finally teenagers at lest will be out of trouble after those hours they are not on the streets.
Teenagers can be out trouble an those hours intend of been out at 10 .P.M
he or she can study more for schools,There for they can get better grades in school, they can go to bet early. Also they can pass more movie night in family intend of being out getting in trouble. They also can stay away from breaking the law.
In conclusion;Yes the curfews keep teenagers out of trouble in those hours because First it is not save for teenagers to be out on the streets after those hours,Second police department have a code were it say that teenagers can't be out on the streets after 10 P.M
,Finally teenagers at lest will be out of trouble after those hours not they are not on the streets. It is important to have curfews in or city because it can get teenargers to stay away of trouble and pass more family time and don't breaking the law. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
D8532CCFE454 | Yes I identify with churchill and his statement that for us to reach what we want, we have to pass for a lot of things.
For us to be able to achieve our goal, it doesnt matter if our goal is a short goal or a long goal, first of all we have to pass some difficulties to be able to reach the goal that we want. If we want to see the results of success in our life we never have to loss the enthusiasm on it to be where we want it to be.
To reach the porpose that we want is something fantastic because only the person that fight for them know what they have had to pass to reach the goal. How can we be a support for does people that need help to reach their achievements, but for our on self is difficult to give us a impulse to reach our own goals. The things in this life are hard nothing is easy, but not impossible. What can we do for us, so we can always have the the enthusiasm high, so we can have the decisition to tell our self we got this. Sometimes there have to be a person to give us a shove to undestand that we got it. In my opinion and I say this because this happen to me all the time, I give out advice , I help those people that dont believe on there selfs no more, give them a word to push them to keep goinginto the get it and tell themnever put there self down.
Every single one that have complete a goal have had to pass on problems, that you have problemts doesnt mean that you are on the way to give up, to throw everything you have done at this point. Those problems, those failure you have had are helping you to bild your character, to change the way you see life to see the things with other prespective. I never heard someone saying that reaching something is easy, fast or simple. To be successful is something hard, its a huge feeling to get your own respect that you can do it. Being successful is something difficult to overcome, the reward is amazing. It is a nice thing to see everything whta we had go over to get where you at is just for the effort that you put on it. Is a bless to go forward in life tellingpeople how to do, what to do so they can get a advice from you to be a successful person, to try very hard to achieve their goals.
In conclusion to be a winner require to pass all difficulties that life give out. Those failure are horrible but at the end of the day of the day you will understand why did it happen. Whene you get along very well you would say now I understand how to haddle out this problems. Like i said before to achieve something is like get out of the something and enter to other failure. when the years pass out you will have create anew version of your character, personality that you construct, this new person will have the capacity to make the hard esay. In my opinion I believe that getting or achieving our goals consist on a route of failure, problems, difficulties, ect. The things that are up on the hill those that are hard to reach are the great ones, the right ones. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
D86C20117DC9 | Students should work in groups or should works alone. Working alone students can be more focused during class; however, work in group is better. Work in group is more beneficial for students because students can share they ideas, they can be better in class and they can learn from each others.
It's more beneficial for students work in groups because they can share they ideas. For example, if the students are doing a important project or a simple homework they all can says theirs opinions. Also, they can research together to support they ideas and make a better work. Last, working in groups students can support the ideas from each others. It's more beneficial for students work in groups because they can share they ideas and make a wonderful group project.
Is better to to work in groups because students can be better in class. First, they can talk and find out what they don't understand and ask to the teacher together. Also, teachers can safe time because if they ask questions in group them the teacher can explain just one time and not explain one by one. Last, working in groups students can learn from the mistake of the other students and make less mistake. It's better to students to work in groups because they can be better in class and be more proper.
If students works in groups they can learn from the people in the group. First, if a students need support or not understand the class material other people from the group can support them. Also, they can help each other to make a better group and everyone can understand the class material. Another example, is that students can research together to find better information. Is more beneficial for students work in groups because they can learn from each others and learn from the others people from the groups.
Students should work in groups because students can share they ideas, they can be better in class and they can learn from each others. If students share they ideas them the other in the group can learn from them. Also, if students work in groups they can be better in class and they can pass the school year. Last, working in groups students can learn from others and be better to the future. In conclusion, is more beneficial for students work in groups. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
D875C4365BC3 | Been said thet a positive attitude is thr key to success in life.
Because, thet attitude is the definition for the person.
My central idea is whet the attitude definition of the person.
A men position or feeling with regard to the fact or state. The position is they something in the une relation to somethinng else. A negative or hostile state of mind, a cocki or arrogant manner.
My idea is an offensivery pesonal remark and they attitude tietine so mach what, thry collection of emocional and beavioral traits that charecteriste a person, distribution of personal and social traits a well knonk person.
Think is what they attitude is very importan of they people.
Definition on Spanish:La actitud define a las personas si nuestra acitus es mala las personan se alejan de uno. Pero si somos personas con buenan acitud todo va a salir bien.
In my person my attitude is very dificul. For my attitude i lost many person in my life. Therebe sideways our evil attitude's. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1.5 |
D87F1B0CE93F | Thomas Jefferson wrote "Determine never to be idle...it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." By saying this I believe he meant people should never be lazy but to always be working towards something. Not doing anything and waiting for something to happen is not realistic. Working hard to get something feels so much more cherish able. Being able to out figure a way to accomplish something can help benefit others.
I believe we always accomplish more if we are always doing something whether it be small things or big things, we always have to keep moving forward. By moving forward we get to discover new things and see a change. Working towards a goal helps us to become more aware and understanding of the world around us. By always doing something we are always moving forward no matter what it is. Not doing anything is bad because you are just wasting your time and sometimes other peoples time too.
An example of being active and it helping/benefiting someone is if a person gets good grades so they can get into a better collage. By working towards getting better grades the outcome is getting into a good collage. Working towards a goal is beneficial and an accomplishment.
Inactivity doesn't serve a purpose at all but maybe in small aspects it does. It all depends on the type of situation. For example if someone is having a bad day you can't change their mood they have to do it themselves so in this situation you can't do much for them. By not being active accomplishments aren't being met rather someone else doing it.
Actively working and trying to accomplish something is most ideal. Never attempting to do something is bad. Always try your best even if you feel like you can't. Trying is always the best option because at least you attempted to do something. Things can get done if we are always doing. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
D8934CA35801 | Teachers should not be able design the students project because the students might have have trouble on the assignment the teacher gives them over the break and they wont be able to get help because the teacher and the students will be on break and it will make it hard for the students to finish the work and if students choose what they want to do for their project it will be easy and understandable for them and they can do a lot of research on what they they do on their project and when the students get to do what they want n the project they can get good credit on the assignment if the teacher gets to choose what the student does on there project then then the students will have a hard time thinking and coming up with ideas for there assignment and probably wont do good on the project and fail if students get to design what they want to do on there project then there creativity will go up and the way they think will be different and if they design it themselves then they will be more intrested in the assignment then if the teacher did designed it then the students would probably wont do the assignment. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
D8D84A2E4CE0 | I think that working in group would be beneficial, because ya'll can help each other and learn about work and can be practice words that they don't know. Another beneficial that help's you to work in group is that they can finish he work more faster then working alone, because if you work alone it takes to much time to finish the work.
Sometimes when the teacher tell you to make a project and tells you that she's going to put groups to work you know that you don't have to speak by yourself because you know that your friends will help you to make it together. I think that work with someone else helps you to relax because sometimes you don't know something, but you can ask your friends if they know and they help each other, but sometimes it's better to work alone because no one distract you and if you have friends that would be distracting because if you trying to make your work and they playing aroud that will be extrecing even that you know that it's going to be more hard to finish your work you feel relax because everything that you doing its right. If i have to choice from working in groups or working by myself i wirll prefear to work in groups because i think that would be more help full for me.
It's beneficial for me to work in gorups, you know sometimes you been stresing for to much work and you know that no one can help you because you have to work alone, and if you work with someone you can talk with him or her ask about what this thing means or ask them for some opinios and get it together. Working alone you are thinking i have to do this and this i don't have no one to help me and sometimes you don't finish your work because the project was hard, thats why it's better to work with groups both have benefices, but you did't working alone for me it's not a good choice, but it's not a bad choice. Even if you have to work by yourself you have to try your best. I know that a lot of people choice to work by there self, but one time you going to be wrong and you gonna need help, both choices benefical you one way or the other way.
One day i was maiking a project by myself and that take me to much time to finish the project, and i was stresing because i didn't understand somethings that they was asking me and i have no one to ask about it. I have do a lot of projects by myself and in groups and i know that working in groups helps you more 3 or 4 breins works more then one brein.
If you finish the work faster you know that you have more time to do other things that you wants to do, | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
D8D90E042134 | In my personal opinion, I think that students should decide on their own. I mean if they're eight-graders, they should be smart enough and decide on their own on what they want, or don't want to do. For me, I would choose helping the community, 'cause if you think about it, your actually doing it for your own goods, maybe in some points your not, but most of them from peoples personal experiment's basically, your doing it for your community and your country, the world and people that are around you. What i would do, I would make a list from easiest, to hardest on helping the community, and start from the easiest because at first, your not used to it, and you need to learn how to be responsible for your things, and for what you do. For example, I'll pick, helping students in your classrooms. Then, I might start tutoring my cousins or neighbors, something to start of with, like a practice. If I'll see or think that I'm good enough, I might move on, tutoring Elementary kids. Later on, I'll be a famous tutor! If I'll be doing a good job at tutoring, I might starting subbing for teachers, then they'll ask me to be a teacher! Which means, that now I'll have a job! So basically, I made my own personal carrier just for helping the community! What I'm trying to say, helping you community isn't as bad. If your one of the lucky ones, you'll make your self a carrier, if not, keep on trying! And one important thing to no is, keep on trying, what you give, is what you'll receive. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
D8F9861CD318 | It is a good idea for students to finish high school in three years, and enter college or the work early ?
The programs that some school districts offer to the students that allow students to graduate one year early, is not covenient for the students. To do only three years of high school is not good way to start forming yourself. They will not have the necessary knowlege as a regular high school student. It is not a good way to enter college nor work without finish the four years of high school.
First, to do only three years of high school is not a good way to start forming yourself for the future, all this is based on the future and what you are going be able to do, for example, if you do not do the four years in high school you will miss more information, that is going to affect you in the future, and sometimes you will not be able to select courses, or in some cases you will have to take these courses on summer, which is not a good idea, because most of the students with ages around sixteen and eighteen hang out a lot, so for the students is harder to focus on their thing as their courses, While the students that are doing four years of high school will have more time to focus on their courser, and they will have the oportunity to learn more.
Second, the student that decided to graduated early are not goint to have the necessary knowlege, as the students that are doing the four years, for example, responsibility is one of the most important things, that you will use in the future, so how can you get it, for example, the homework, projects, and team work that you will have in high school, because doing four years in high school give you responsibility, and new abilities in the proces of learnig, also it develop your brain, and as consequences of learnig, and responsibility you will get new skills that you will be able to use in your work area, or college, while the students that graduated early are not going to be able not have the enough experience to enter a new system.
Last, in my opinion the school that let student graduated one year early are not thinking in the welfare of the students, because they are not just letting the students go ealry, the schools had found a way that the student can rush themself to get out of the school soon, to go to college or work instead of doing the four years in high school, that will help a lot in the future.
Because it is not a good way to enter college nor work without finish the four years of high school, the students will not have the necessary knowlege as a regular high school student; to do only three years of high school is not good way to start forming yourself for the future. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
D8FCB1AB9867 | Student should commit to a career at young age they will save more money, and they will independet at young age also they can work and study at the same time when they get out from High School it would to be more easier that career they want to take and you have that help of the teachers during freshman year until you finish high school. When you want to become someone on this life you got to do whatever you have to do no matter if you need to work and study at the sametime. But if you want a good career you need to start at young age some people leave their family right after they finish High school. However for people who was independet during high school they already know how life is and it would be more easier to to leave their family,sometimes parents they don't allow you to live in another state or country because they say that you are the only daughter or son but what i said you got to do whatever you got to do to do someone on this life. For example some parents are immingrant on this country and they did not have the opportunity that you have now so,they need to undesrtand that you want to make them pround and let you be who you want to be on this life.
Also you always have the support of the teachers during High school they will always going to push you foward it would make your future more easy because they will give you choices of that career that you want to take and help you on your classes if you are not passing a class they will give you homework to get your grades up at the end of the year you ready to the next step. School is your second home becuase school will take you to your goal, teachers are you support if you don't have support from your family, but you got support from your good friends,and teacher. Otherwise if you don't have support from your family do never stop looking for your goals because than they will be proud of you,sometimes family give you their back when you most need a support from your own blood,but sometimes you don't have any support from them and makes you sad,depresed. But at end of the day you have your teacher that they will never let you make you stop from who you want to be. That's why is a good idea to to identify a career by the time they enter high school.
In conclusion,age doesn't matter to make a dream,there's many reasons to stop your goals but do never let anything or any person stop your goal but you always going to have a support of your teacher and family,sometime you might not have any support but never stop doing what you want to be because at the end of the day you will be proud of yourself. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
D9018539576D | Technology has had the biggest impact on human interaction. Most people might say it's made a positive impact on people's lives while others may disagree and say it's had a negative impact on people's lives. There may be some pros and there may be some cons to this situation. Can the impact of technology be a good or bad outcome?
Let's start off with the pros or the positive effects technology has had on people's lives, now technology has made people's lives easier. Some may say because it's easier to access what they need easier online instead of heading to the market. Some may also say it's easier and faster to call your friends or parents, any family member really, instead of driving all the way to them, which is true. Watching movies on your phone instead of going all the way to the movie theater and pay for your ticket and it only being a one time thing. There are countless positives outcomes of how technology has increased over the years. The technology nowadays makes everything faster and easier on people's lives. Unfortunately, all these great, glamorous, fast, and easy ways have some downfall to them.
Now, technology definitely has it's flaws and negative impacts on people's lives. Most can say there's not as much human interactions since technology has been brought upon people. Communication is key when interacting with one another. Today most people are also glued to their cellular device, not physically but you get the point. Especially teenagers, they have a bad habit of not being able to put down their cellphone. Whether that being during school hours, at home when you're supposed to be doing work, and maybe even at work. The generation we have today is usually all about social media, and just being on their cellphone in general 24/7. Point blank there's just no physical, verbal communication anymore between one another. It may be causing a lot of students to slack in school, and it may not only go for students and teenagers, they're not the only victims. Some particular parents may be also glued to their cellphone just as teenagers. It's not their fault nor do the teenagers have any fault in this. All this is because of the evolution of technology. It's not pleasant to live in a world with not so much communication and everyone being constantly glued to their cellphone nor is it pleasant to do awful in school because you can't put your cellular device down. Now, these are just some reasons and examples why technology has a negative impact on people's lives. Can you imagine how many more scenarios like this happen daily?
Though technology has evolved drastically through out the years and is still evolving now as we speak, there's always going going to be positive and negative impacts. Technology does help and allow people to complete tasks without having contact with others. There's the problem right there, there's no communication. Even though there are some positive effects of technology that doesn't change the fact that there are more negative effects than positive. Technology effects each person a different way, whether that being in a positive way or whether that being in a negative way. It's all a mix, and by mix I refer to positive effects and negative effects all over the place. Some people may disagree or may agree whether it's a bad mixture or a good mixture. Cell phones and all technology can make it easier or harder for certain people.
Whether if it truly is a positive or negative impact it will not change what people think or at what position they're in. Some people just like taking the easy way out and not cope with what they are losing and missing out on, communication. Human communication and interactions are not it anymore. Everyone's opinion and saying on this dilemma is different, people's mindsets are different even their actions are different from everyone else's,but this is my opinion. In conclusion, that is why I strongly, and genuinely believe technology has a negative effect on people's lives. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 5 |
D9130F5402F6 | I think that you should let us bring our phones to school cause what if there is a emergency at our house or with our families and we don't know about it or our parents need to tell us that we cant stay after school because we have to go pick up our little brother or sister. I also think u should let u bring our phones to school cause it would make the school better. then people would want to come to this school because we could bring our phones to school . then u could use it as a punishment instead of having to think of something else you could just say you cant use you're phone for 2 weeks. these are some of the reasons that think you should let us bring our phone to school hopefully you
consider what i have wrote for you. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
D91D25F55AD9 | This world would never be how it is now if it wasn't for technology. Technology has made a big change to this world. Most people think it has made a positive change, and others think it's made a negative change. Technology has helped schools and business, but also has made some people's life impossible. So maybe, some people are wrong maybe having technology isn't so great after all.
Over time people stop talking to each other. Stop focusing in school, families, friends, relationships, All because of technology. If there was no technology there would be no social media. People see thing online that will make then mad and always want put it on other people and it all makes it a big problems. The relationships with those people then gets broken and never want to talk to each other again.
Before technology was created, families use to have game night, the whole family would all be at the dinner table eating their food and talking about their days. They would go on trips and have fun and enjoy their beautiful moments with friends and family. They would have a nice healthy sleep. Now it's all different. People get home from work to go watch T.V. or be on their phone all night long. People don't have family dinner anymore. This is a big problems that has effected a lot of people.
When I was younger I remember my parents giving me a lot of attention. As I started growing up it started to go away. We wouldn't go on trips anymore. We all wouldn't be at the dinner table anymore. Everything started to change, then over time I started to realize it was because of technology. They were just so obsessed with it, they never got off it. Then I got my first phone and I understood why they didn't come out of it. You always wanted to know what was going on with the drama, news, Facebook, Snap Chat, etc. That shouldn't be how this world should be running. God created this world so we can all stick together, be nice to each other, and care about each other.
If technology wasn't created then maybe everyone would be happy with their life's. Everyday would be a happy day for everyone. Even though technology has made some good impacts, I still think it would be better without it. Life will never be the same how it was before without it. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
D92452B93539 | Reasons why the school board not add one hour and a half more for each day. i have a few reasons why we shouldn't do that. first reason homework. Second reason the time after school and third reason why is teachers. these are going to be my reason why in this passage.
First reason is homework if we have more time in the school day how would students have time to do their homework. If we had a hour and a half more then teachers shouldn't give homework to students. students shouldn't have more time in school then have homework after school students have have some time to enjoy themselves and still do homework if we have more hours in school students wouldn't have the time to enjoy themselves. If students did their homework after they wouldn't have time to enjoy themselves after because it would be dark outside then they have to go to bed.
Second reason is students having time like i said in the other paragraph students wouldn't have time if we had more hours in school. students wouldn;t do fun after homework after school because by the time you know the sun would go down and it would be too late for anything. go out somewhere, play outside, and hang with friends.
Third reason why is because teachers. teachers would have more work in their hands teachers have a life too they need to get to their families too. and all the work they have to do would them holding longer which would keep longer away from their families too this is is why schools shouldn't have more hours in school | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
D92BFF2AC7FD | Do you think is a good idea to change the school lunch menu for something healthier? In this essays, I will argue how a healthier lunch menu can improve students diet and make them more secure of themselves. People that eats healthier tend to be more active and optimistic like my family.
My mom has been a great example to my family. ever since, sher started eating healthier we have seen a big change in ther. she gets on time to her job and has more time for me.
Although, my family eats healthier, not everybody keeps their diet. My uncle was the second one that started eating healthier but, it has not shown any results out of his diet because, he eats junk food before he gets home. this behavior has make his more fat and lazy.
Moreover, when my family started eating healthy, we stopted expending in junk food. Eating healthy helped us reduce our expenses by a lot. All the money that we used to spend on junk food has been going to an index fund, that will be used once we finish highschool. It wiil be used to start a company.
Some people think that eating healthier doesn't get you anything but, they are wrong because, healthy food gives more nutrient than junk food. In the world, healthy people have been very successful. In the future, I hope that the school change the lunch menu, so we can have a healthy and active life. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
D93895A285B0 | It is not a good idea for student to graduate in three years because some students don't want to to take classes in the summer because they want to graduate all four years and chose to go to college or chose to go straight into the work force. But some other students chose to take those courses and graduate in three years and take some classes in the summer. It up to them to chose if they want to go to college or go straight into the work and start making money to help themselves.
but I suggest graduating high school in four years is a good idea because students want to spend some time with their families before going into college if they chose or go straight into the working force. So it is not a good idea to graduate high school in three years and take summer or evening classes because it can be too much for you if you work in the summer because you will always be going back and forth from school to work and you will not have time to be with your family and go on vacations with them.
So graduating high school in three years is a bad idea because it will take up all your free time in the summer and you won't be able spend time with family and friends and you won't be able to do all the things you wanted to do after you graduate high school in three years because of all the summer classes and you have to take when you graduate high school in three years. Because when you graduate high school in four years you have all the time in the world if you don't go to college but when you have a job you can take some time of to spend some time with your family and friends.
And also if you go to high school for four years you will be able to take all the elective courses you want and graduate high school in four years and not having to take any summer classes or evening classes and also having the time to spend some time with your family your relative and your friends and also be able to do all the thing you wanted to do before going to college or into the work force. So I think that graduating high school in three years is not a good idea.
There are so many thing to do when you graduate high school in four year like going to the beach sky,diving,go carts,barbecuing with your family and friend and so on and so forth. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
D939E8851FAE | Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice because, you're getting people's opinions and their way of handling a situation people can give you advice that you wouldn't have thought about before and that will help your choice in many ways. Some peoples opinions can support your choice or can go against your choice. Getting other people's opinion can help someone think of a better choice and make that choice more helpful to that someone.
Why getting other people's opinions can help someone make a better choice or think of a better choice is because, people can tell you the same thing but in a different wording. Having different opinions can make someone think of a better choice because people give that someone ideas of the choice they're going to make. Having more opinions does help a lot because they could make someone's choice more beneficial and help someone's way of thinking about better choices, having less people wouldn't really want to persuade someone to make better choices and it wouldn't be that make someone think of a better choice. The more opinions people give someone, the more likely the choice will be or they will think of a better choice.
Opinions can persuade someone to make a better choice because a good friend or a good person can give his opinion that would make someone want to make a better choice having lots of good opinions can benefit someone's choice and make better choices. Having two or one opinion doesn't persuade someone to make better choices but having five or eight people could make someone want to make better choices because people can be very persuasive and some people wouldn't really listen or care what one or two people say but if its at least five or more then there is chance of that someone might listen or even care because lots of friends and family or even teacher want that someone to make better choices and he or she can't just ignore that unless they want to make bad choices. Having advice from close ones can be helpful to because they can persuade someone to make choice that will benefit their life and ensure that they will not regret that choice they made in the future.
That's why having multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice, they help people think of better choice and new ones to, they can persuade people to make better choices, having more opinions can benefit their choice, having more opinions can make someone's choice more beneficial, having more opinions can give someone ideas. That's why having multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
D93EC6A7E859 | people who value his ideas came be a millonarie person example when his wan t to do something like a market places or store his thinking what to put on his store his making his own decision or he came go to the expert or he came has for help the expert and autorities they came do nathing because his my ideas an things if i need too kill some body they not going they what who came do it people always do his own decision never faul the rules in this worlk thats why is so many deaths if the people are more focust to the work the work his going to be more betther the life is inportant because you only have one on this worlk you no have second time if you you dead all your familly is going to be crying i know i not going to pass this test bout is a example what i saing to life.
life is beautyful whit god on you thats another level that why i saing to life the life is mathers becaise with my own ideas an decision came do anything a want to do if the people are respecting his own decision are gone be bery good. | 1 | 1.5 | 2 | 2 | 1.5 | 1.5 |
D940E4357737 | It has been said that positive attitude is the key to life but other people think otherwise. Due to the lack of happiness people get depressed, sad and lonley. Having a positive attitude all the time would only make things worse cause you don't always have the best days. Someone can tell you bad news, like someone dying, you can't be positive during someones death, especially if its someone close to you. Having a positive attitude all the time is not the key to life. If it was then why do so many people have to get hurt in our day and age. Imagine a heart break, loving someone for so long but them leaving you just cause they didn't want to date you anymore. People are going to be positive after they've broken up with someone they been with for so long. That's why Being positive isn't they key to life, if it was the key to life then why do so many bad people live on this earth, and want to do bad thing to others just living the're lives. Being that you could have a happy life is possible but you will always come across obsticles that you can't just be positive about and not caring for. Would't you be misserable if you had a positive attitude all the time, always looking happy and never looking down. Something can always happen in any moment at anytime in you're life. That's when everything crashes down on you and falls on your lap. In cunclusion, having a positive attitude is not the key to life because you will always have a gloomy day and there won't be an escape then. | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
D9469EFAE287 | I'm going to start explaining and giving my opinion, Technology is one of the main reasons, why the world is changing and accommodating with the necessities that the person have, for example: we live in a community that if everything is easier is better, few years ago people had to walk hours or days to go some where, on this days the transport is a lot easier because the technology had increased,
you can use or have your own car or you,
can take the public transport and go everywhere with out problems and if you want to go to another country you can! because the air lines exist now, and you can fly to go to the country you like.
So technology have a positive effect because is helping us to make our daily necessities at home or everywhere better, a reason why i think that is because the future of the students is going to be with more opportunities to learn what they like, with out saying excuses, the help of others is not going to be that necessary with technology in your hands; no body have to advocate for you with your problems and decisions.
Technology is going to be increasing, For example years ago you could not talk to your family or friends if they were too far away from you, in that edge the only thing you could do was write a letter and send it through mail and then the people who was waiting for it has to wait like one or two months; for have that note, but all that had changed too,
When the telephone was invented people start buying and using, that invent, for the public in general the telephone start to be necessary for the people for emergencies like call the ambulance or call the police in case that something dangerous could be happen;
years before, the history of the telephone became with new ideas like you can not just call with the telephone because is has be made it smart you can take pictures play read book and more, today the telephone have a drastic change is nothing like the old phone is something different. technology had changed our way to communicate and transport and a lot more. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
D948703E8026 | Should the city council adoption the curfew of a 10 p. m weekday and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers?
You often hear people say that teenagers are costing more problem to other people and for the around them environment. The city council should adoption the 10 p. m midnight curfew for teenagers because teens would stay out of problems, and they would have more time to do school work.
To start, the curfew would avoid teenagers being in problem with the law. For example,teens with the curfew would not be in gangs or cost problem to others. Lets say that teens had the curfew it would expand beyond the level of doing good to others and staying out of gangs or doing bad stuff. They would be able to achieve their goals fast and force on what is next in life. Even though, this curfew sounds bad its not bad because teens would learn that the curfew is just to help them and help the environment around them.
Secondly, the curfew would allow teens with more time on their schools work and have time to force on their work. For example, teens would have more time to focus on their schools work than being on the streets with gangs. With that being said teens would have a chance of achieving their dreams and being successful in live without a bad influences. In this scenario, it show that a curfew is not bad because it has some good way in live and it allow people to do good stuff for others. Ultimately, with this curfew it allows young people to see the better side in life and it would help them to stay focus in schools by achieving their work and doing the right things.
Some people may say that having a curfew is unfairly interfere in young people lives. For example, young people have the right to choose the way they want to be. Therefor, being later in night dose not meant that young people are doing bad stuff or their are in gangs also they are just having fun in their way. Thus, being in a curfew it show young people that their are controlling by other people just because they have a different way of having fun. In this scenario, it show that having a curfew is just unfairly for teenagers just because other teens got in trouble it dose not means that all of the young people needs to have a curfew.
In conclusion, the city council would just being helpful to the young people by add a time limit. And it would help the environment around them and it would give more time and focus to the young people. All in all, it is a good thing to put a curfew because teens would have more time to spent with their family and doing good stuff for the environment. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 |
D949A947DD92 | Asking one person is great! Maybe asking your best friend for there opinion is great and all, but have you tried asking more then one person? However even though asking your friend is great, but have you thought about what other people may be thinking or there opinions on it? Wanting to ask your friends is nice of you, however they could be lieing to you about there real opinion. Therefor asking more then on person is better then asking just one, and you get honest opinions on what you may have asked about, or what you may have wanted to know about.
People think if asking more people for there opinions on what they asked about is better then just asking one person about there opinion. For example, somebody wants to know the best why to make some great yummy cookies. Nevertheless, there may be some times were when you ask people you may get a tie between the two choices, and if you do get a tie just go ask one more person for there opinion.
Many people ask more then seven to eight people some people don't have even numbers, however if you do get a even number there can always be more on one side of the vote or opinions. I was drawing in my note book and I finished a drawing, but for some reason I did not know what colors I should use. Then I asked my two sisters my mother and my father for there opinions on what colors I should use. Most of them picked the same colors, but my mother and my two sisters all picked the same color.
Therefor, if you ask more then one or two people then you can find out which is the most best out of the two things you wanted opinions on. Even though some times asking more is great you still have to pick which one you like the most if there were to be a tie and you don't want to go ask anymore people for there opinions about the topic if not your fine. Either way the most voted would be best, but if you pick the least liked am pretty sure that other people may not like it. Like my grandma used to say, "more votes are more points in life". There are most likely 10% of people who don't ask for others opinions, and 89% of people who go out and ask people for there info about the topic or there opinion about it.
Go ask your friends or family if they ever asked more then one person for there opinion. See almost everybody has asked if they haven't they well soon. My mother want's to get a tattoo, however she doesn't know which one she should get, and she doesn't want to get something that people or here kids may not like.
After she put the pictures of the one's she liked she then put then on Facebook to find out which one people like the most. Also I gave here my opinion as well, and now she has enough opinions and she knows the one she is going to get. Honestly asking people for there opinions are great because you get peoples opinions on which one is the best and which one is the worst. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
D95A9CC4C62B | One educational activity I would like to do is being in a chorus class. Because I get to practice my singing skills,I can learn from others,and also I can perform in from of people. I can do this by staying after school so i can practice more skills,or ask the teacher or students for help when I need too.
I think practicing your voice skills is very important if you want to enjoy the chorus class because you can get alot out of it. Ones you're out of the basics you can get more advance classes.
Secondly i think learning from others can help you because if you don't know something that other student knows you can ask if they can help you. Also seen what other student might do you can get an example from them or you can do what they are doing for you to get better at it.
Also when it gets to performing in front of alot of people I might get nervous because I'm not use to that I might even forget the lyrics of the song that I'm singing ,but ones you've done alot of performs you are not going to be afraid of going to sing in front of alot of people.
In conclusion, joying a chorus class can be fun because you can be with your friends or you can make new friends,and you can learn your singing skills,you can also learn from others and ask for help when you need too. So I think being in a chorus class can be helpful for you and others. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
D95B78E39793 | It is 21st century people have their own opinion and decisions. Human revolutionary has changed drastically over the time. People now are smart and makes wise decisions on their daily basis. However, people tend to take risk upon their decisions without any consultancy with experts and authorities.
People should always seek guidance from experts and authorities whenever they are making any big decisions. It will be more easier for them to choose options when they seek guidance from someone who already knows about it. People often tend to make wrong decisions when they make decisions by themselves. A lot of celebrities have their personal guidance which is their manager. Manager makes a thoughtful decisions for celebrities to keep them on track of their career. If celebrities tend to make their own decisions many celebrities would go downfall in their career.
The decisions people make should be thoughtful and have guidance from experts. Christopher from into the wild book, he is one of the example for to take advise from experts or else people will end up like Chris. Christopher did not take any guidance from anyone while going into the wild of Alaska alone. He did not have any good materials to take with and didn't ask for help. MC candles died into the wild of Alaska because he was not prepared for the trip he was going into. This is exactly why people should take advise, if he would have taken any advice what so ever he would most likely have survived in the Alaska wilderness. He chose not to take any guidance which is the reason he died into the wilderness.
Everyone wants to have a successful life but not everyone gets it. If people wants to have a success in their life they have make right decisions or seeking the guidance from experts. There are only few people who people who succeeded in their career while making their own decisions even if they succeeded on their own they will need a manager to keep on track of their career. Person who seeks lot of advises from experts and authorities tend to be on advantages on their business. It will be more reliable to make a big decisions while seeking advice from expert rather than making it all alone. People are more likely to take a wrong decisions while doing it alone.
Overall, everyone should seek guidance from experts and authorities while making the decisions. It will be always more beneficial to have a advise while making big decisions in life or else people will end up like Christopher from into the wild. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 |
D96EF27304E5 | Should schools control how many extracurricular activities you take? There should be a certain extent in when schools can control how many out of school activities your in. The students family should be the deciding factor in whether you leave or not. That is if you start to fail classes, your parents ask the school to take you out of some, or if your attendance towards the meetings look bad. Then that is when the school helps decides what happens towards the student.
First of all, I think it should be a certain extent in what you can enroll for but it should always be up to the student and their families since that is a major factor inn deciding what to do. If the family thinks the child has no time to do homework or study for upcoming test then they should talk to the student about the issue and hear what the student has to say. If the family decides on letting the child continue is upon them but if they chose to take their child out of the extracurricular activities the must notify the child's guidance counselor and notify the main person in the activity
However, if the students starts to fail classes or most of your grades keeps dropping the the students guidance counselor should talk to the student and see why. If they see to many extracurricular activities then there should be a talk with the student to see which ones he can drop for the time until the grades are up. This should encourage the student that if they want to be a part of the activities the they have to be able to maintain their grades.
Lastly, if the child's attendance to the meetings are bad and are inconstant they should not be allowed to participate in the extracurricular activities. The child should only miss up to five meetings per month with out any consequences. By making the child leave the club and notifying their parents the reason why then should the child be kicked out. Without furthermore, reasons the child could be suspended from coming to the meetings for a certain amount of time.
In conclusion, the school should have very little say in the decision of a student being apart of a extracurricular activity. More or less said the families have the most say in the deciding factor unless the students grades are dropping or starts to fail some of their classes. Their attendance towards meetings are bad or if they just don't go to any meetings. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
D99C71A15BA0 | Society said that the first impression are almost imposible to change. But, I am totally disagree with that because there many people in this world that when they go to their first interview they don'tknow how to dress up for a interview and they may not have have someone to show or teach them how to act, how dress up or how important is to be on time when they have interviews or when they're going to meet someone important. It could be a girl or a boy that they're interesting on and their first impression may not be how his/her boss want it to be.
But if they're really interesting on that boy or girl who want the job or went to meet them they may give them a second chance to make their really good impression and that man/woman that like or want to obtain or to meet they will work really hard to get what they want ,they will search or obtain imformation on how to be presentable or to act in their interviews or when you're meeting someone you are interesting on. For example,If i want a job that is really flexible and easy and that's my first time getting a job and I am don't no nothing about how to be dress up, how to act infront of your future boss or future or girlfriend/boyfriend and how important is to be o time because it's how it works,If you're late to an interview or a place when you will going to meet with that girl/boy they will left or they may not interview you. However, If explain them what happend at the first date or interview that i wasn't presentable or on time they may gave me a second chance to do it and that's where I'm going to be at least 10 0r 20 minutes before on that interview or on that date that they gave me and be presentable and known how to act infront of them. They will like it and there you will gave them a second impression and they will gave you that job or you will have the chance to meet more that gir/boy that you like really bad. In conclusion,there is always a second chance to show or gave people a second impression that they may not believe that you can do it.
Finally, people can not judge people at the first time,they may gave them a second chance or explain them how to do it an that way they can be successful in life and they can make you happy if you get love each other. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
D9AAC11BC7AC | The benefits of having a good attuide is always being postive when their's a bad day, and helping others if thier having a bad day too, and just always be excited to have a postive day. For example in my life when I don't have a good morning for example like missing the school bus or having a disaggrement with my parents. I try my best to leave a smile on my face and just have a great and postive day. Another example is when I see it in other people would be just diffrent because people are diffrent and they act diffrent in every way. What I mean by that is that they can be either mad, sad, or annoyed, or just super excited to have a great day. Why I say that they can act diffrent in the morning or afternnoon is because when your going to work your maybe tired and exhasted and stayed up till like 12 AM for an asssignment for your job. Same with school. On the other hand there could be people that are super excited to have such a great day for work or school. Those people are probably really excited because maybe they finished there assingment or homework quickly. Another one is the afternoon people that come back from school or work there. Sometimes there's people that can't wait to go home and eat and see their family and just go to sleep after that. On the other hand there's some people that are so tired that they can't even drive or even talk to the person that they've been picked up by. I've seen it all from so many people. But again people are diffrent in so many ways. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
D9AAEE4C9BCC | Do you think that influencing other is imporant or not important?
I think that it is a good way to influence other and guide them to a better way of thinking. so that they can understand the main point of the topic. My three reasons are guiding others,influening others, and sharing your thoughts.
Guiding other will make people believe in what you are saying and that will make you feel great because you are teaching other what you have been taught.
Influencing others can make others listen and hear what you have to say and then share it with others. Sharing there thoughts will guide people to doing good things in there lifes. Like buying stuff when they are old enough to. So when they go somewhere they would already know what there are doing.
Sharing there thought will help people to doing great thing in there life even though life is not always perfect you will have to make the best out of it. You have to move on in life and never look back because if you do then you will be stuck and still be thinking about things that effected back then,then now.
When giving others important information it will help others with there upcoming future an teach them how life really is. When they have kids they can teach there kids information that you already know so that they can have a heads up. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
D9B44BD44222 | To be my self in this world I do not necessary need all the people that are around me. I can continue with life by my self. All the achievement that I been doing are made by my self because, I effort without the help of people that are around me.
In this world that I am know, I can not trust anybody because instead of wishing me the good things they wish me the worst. People sometimes are bad because they are telling me to do bad things, school does not help me to be someone in life, and they do not want me to be successful, but without them I would be someone with a better future in the world.
To make an accomplishment, I do not need all people that are around me. They are not going to help me to be successful in this world. An example is I had a friend named Generic_Name she was a nice person with me, but them she started to change. Generic_Name told me to me to skip school with her because, school is not going to help me to be someone in life. She had a misconduct with her parents. She did not stop to do bad things, so I stop talking to her because, My parents did like her anymore. I wanted to be friend with her but,what she was doing it was not good, so I need to worried about me.
To be someone in this world I have to work hard to do what I want without others around me because, when I need something or I get in a trouble they are not going to be there with me. An example is yesterday I took a test with others students in math class, and one of them told me to help him. I did not wanted to help him because, the teacher can get mad at me. After we finished the test he got closed to me, and he was complaining. I told the student that he should studied because, people are not going to be their when he needs to take a test.
Another reason to be successful in this world is that I would never give up, and will always do what even if the people said that I am not going to made it. A example is I am graduating this years and my cousin told me that I am not going to graduate because I am not very smart. I do not care what she said but, the only thing that I know is that I am trying my best to graduate this year. Sometimes I want to cry because she is always saying bad things to me. In this world I dont need nobody to be someone else even my family.
After all this, I think that I do not need people around me because they are not gonna be there to support me. Being with people that is around me is not good because, some of them would tell me to do bad things instead of doing good things. In this world that I am living right know people can killed me and cause me so much damage. It is better to just you in this world because you do not have to worried about someone else. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
D9B51C663A5F | "no act of kindness. no matter how small, is ever wasted".
I agree with Aesop, no kindness is ever wasted.
First,any kindness can help others in life. First, anyone who is going through a rough time needs kind words to get them through it. Second, people who are thinking bad can help by haveing nice, kind, and careing people with them. Lastly, kind words can other people happy and welcomed. By showing kindness others can learn or do the same.
Second, showing kindness can have an impact in your life. First, others will be kind to you. Also, many people will know how to be kind to other people who are thinking bad. Lastly, everyone will know you are a kind and careiing person. By haveing kindness you"ll live a happy lif knowing that u do something good in life.
Lastly, being kind can help the community. First, we can all help pass food to people who are in need of it. Second, by cleaning up we can help keep the street cleans so wild anamils don't come. Lastly, we can have people come together and help the people who are homeless. By helping the community will have more people helping.
In conclusion, being kind to people and helping the community we can live a nice and peacefull life knowing that there are nice people out there being kind to others. I think being kind is everything beacuse if we say bad things to a person knowing nothing about their life can get they more sad and by being nice we can help them by our kind words. | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
D9B80F897473 | The better way to influence people to have good behavior at school or anywhere is to be a comppassive friend.
Giving advice, try to talk to them, Otherwise people does not have good behavior because sometimes they have a lot of problems at home. For example if i saw someone who is close to me like my best friend or something like that and they have a bad behavior.
I will try to find ways to helping being kind, nice, social and give new perspective to other people. Being good influence for them is very friendly, is good in all of the reason's. The bad influences are the peolpe who had a to much opportunities and they don't care.
Be influence for other people "it depent's" what's type of of friends did you have, and how you're parents educate you. Because friends can make you to get trouble at school or at home with parents that the bad influynces make it you. For example people with bad behavior tech you bad things in differents aspect and that people are not you're friends. But is that a life you can have nice friends, people who had a bad influence too, people who are a very good influences for you.
Giving people better influences can help you in your future, basically in everything. For example you can have a Social life, Friendly smile, Nice peronality, Kind and all of the others specialityes. A lot of people had a bad bahavior at school they influid their friends too. The problem is the major of students sometimes they have a bad life a lot of problems at home. That's why their bahavior is like that. Some of the parent"s does not care about their Son's or daugther's how is the behavior at school or anywhere. Because they are awesome kind of persons or parents can't get the control of them.
However, they are true friends who love you, help you to had a normal behavior some of youre're friends not all of them. some of the friends when they saw it that you in trouble they don't talk to you anymore. For example in my own persoanlity i never, ever get suspension or problems from the school. So that is what's fake friends do theyprefer to lose a comunication, but for some reasons are good because it people who are not a nice person with you, bad influence. So that are the reasons why cause not all of your friends be there for your when you need someone can be for you; True friends and good influeces be there anytime that you need help or talk to them that's why you had to select your friends. You have to know who are your real friends and who are not.
For instances, People can have a opportnity to had a better life, future is the kind of people who had a bad behavior. It the type of people who influid the better influence for bad honestly sometimes is sad when you see that.
But, anyways nothing can do about it because a lot of people try to help them. They don'n wanna put their part for be a better person, influenece for give new perspective. So people get tired to help and they continue in the same way. These are all of the reason's why some people had a bad behavior some don't. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
D9BC7F4F22F0 | Well what i think about praising for a student is that it could be achievement or self-esteem. Praising could be good/bad the way how you used it. People who is a praising could be good/bad people who helps other people just like a hero, it also mean a ruler too. People who used praising could used it as a expression. Some people used praising as self-esteem to get there anger out on someone,and some peolple used it as a achievement. Some people used praising as self-esteem to ignore their pain or just get ther anger out.
some people that are using praising as a achievement is good person why becasue you can do lots of things that make other people think you are a hero or a leader. It could used it in school,wrok or in general outside the word. theres lot praising in the world. Theres fighter fighter who help people with a burning house, and theres a cop who find bad guys who deserve to go to jail like crimital or robbers. And now theres us we can help people by asking if they need help if they are strugging to carry something or they have a flat tire you can help them. Just overall help people that are struggling because peope will follow your step by seeing you do it. If you see a old lady go help her bring the stuff to her car or ask her do you need any help if she say yes then help her and if she say no then shes fine but atleast you ask because some people are watching who is helping or not.
Our world need more better people by help other people, we dont need any drama or bad stuff happen to our world like that. We need our world to be friendly so other people can visit us more. How you can make this world better is by help other peolpe that are struggling, care for each other, be friendly to other people make friends, and lastly be positive to other people who you see. The truth about praising is that it deopend on other people sees it and used it outside the world. If you used Praising for bad thats on you but if you used praising for good then yay for you your making this world a better place and envirment for other people and changing others people mind about our word we live in. Some people used praising for good and some people dont and thats okay,why beacuse people sees praising diffrently from what we see in person, and thats fine thats normal for people that dont think the same as we do. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
D9D8AB28BD26 | I disagree with Emerson, because if you try to do something different of what you are doing you will grow.
But if you cap doing that same thing you will never grow. For example in your life you do different thing to know more about that world , you esperiment diferent thing to know thing that other people don't know to becme strong person and I thing doing different thing you will grow. For example when you are became father & mon you change you experiment thing that you never imagiane how that work. Like some people they still acting like kids I thing is because they talk we person they are not they age, they talk to young men like there age is 17 & 19 this you men they still dont know how to act like men, when there age is 40,
thas how you will never grow. Because a men change to a men is when they are 25 this is that age that you are change thing , and thas way people get old and they still act like kids.
Other people grow fast because I thing that wey how that family teache , like in all family they are not same they grow in difernt tipe. like some family star teach to there kids thing that they dont be doing , try to teache the better thing. For example when they are having diner all together in a restaurante some perent talk to there kids before they go in. they are having the food they need to be put off they table & phone ,to not talk when they have food in there mause at that time you star grow. in the fulture you be different that other people. like whent you goint to othere hause you will be better person for example your friend they you hey what are goint to do after school you like to have diner whit my family you know more beter thas how your perent teach when you are kids. Because when you are youn men and you still know how that work you will cap doing that wey how you learn Like other family they dont that ,when they are eat they use table &phone that wey you will never grow,you get to old person and you will cap doing that same thing that you be doing when you where a kids and i thing you main dont grow. | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
D9E77CD4506B | Name: Generic_Name
Date:
03/15/19
The benefits to working in group or working along.
The benefits to working in group are the we can't share information with other's to help amswer the problems the we working in and if i working alone i has to put my on ideas. My tree reasons to working in group are we will working all together, we get more support of the other people that are in my group and my last reason are the i will feel more relax and the tree reason that a think if i will working alone are the i has to support my ideas by my self, and if i get confuse nobaby can't help me, and my last reason are the i will feel more frustrartion to finish the work or if the idea the i put are not good. The benefit that i think can't help the student more are to work in group because we can't support other.
My first reason about working in group are the we work together and can't be more easy to finish the work in time to learn how work in group we will share some information to my group and all people that are in my group has to share some imformation i will feel more motivation to other's.
My second reason that i put the we can get more support because if we work in group we can't help each other's we lear to work in group that why a like more to working in group because some time if someone no know the answer we can't help hi or her to answer the question.
my last reason that i put in my essay are the we feel more relax because we can't not get frustrartion because the other's people that are in my group can't help us if sometime we can't get confuse to some preoblems they can't give us support to answer the problems .
That are my tree easons that why i likes to working in group that why i don't likes to work alone because some time can be more frustrartion to us and sometime we can't get more homewoork we can't give and get support because we work in to a group i think that is more easy to work in group because we can't support that ideas and we check if that ideas is good and not and coul be lest work to the other's because we can't share like one person do something and the other's person another thing about work that can't work . | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
D9E7B148EF8C | I DISAGREE
Hello there!!! do you know that Albet Einstein is one of the smartest person that ever live, he discover by using knowledge and imagination. Then he said this " imagination is more important than knowledge." I disagree because you see you use imagination and knowledge in the rest of your life, when you work as a team you use imagination and knowledge and you need to be fast, strong, and smart, and imagination and knowledge is important. OK' let me explain why i disagree what Albert Einstein said.
First, when you was a kid you use imagination to make things, to draw, to make discoveres, and to have fun. When you grow older you will get knowledges and use it to pass your test, do your homework, and more, but you use your imagination too. For example by thinking, to brain strom, to make music and more, is the same thing however you use knowledge with imagination. Both imagination and knowledge, you have those things from your rest of your life!!! Starting when you were a kid and when you grow older you still use both imagination and knowledge, thats one of my important reason why i disagree.
Second, you use imagination and knowledge when you work with somebody or working as a team, making something or thing how can we make it stronger or how can we win. if your working as a team and battling a robot battle you use imagination to think whats the best robot to build and how to make it stronger, that one of the examples. If you play sports you use knowlege to think what to do, how to win, its the same but you use knowledge. However theres a battle that you work as ateam, using imagination and knowledge, it is a war!!! let me explain its beacause you use imagination to know whats the plan, what is the things were using and knowledge to know when to attack , that one of my reason, when using imagination and knowledge in a team you need to be fast, strong, and smart.
The last one, imagination and knowledge is important, because imagination and knowledge is both important because if kids can't imagine theres no knowledge or if there no knowledge there no imagination. Every body need imagination and knowledges to do what they want and both of these is fun like they can make things, they work as a team, and it will be at there rest of there life. This last body or body 3 is conneted in body 1 and body 2 this is the most important reason. If there's no imagination there's no knowledges, both of does is important every one need imagination and knowledge.
That's all my reason why i disagree that "imagination is more important than knowledge" both of those is important, you use it by playing, making, thinking, and more, that's all i have to say that i disagree on albert eintein. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
D9F549A8EE63 | I agree with Thomas Jefferson we must never be determined to be idle. Becuase life is too short you got to follow your dreams don't be idle. Everday you do more you learn more, you acomplish more as long as you believe, and have the heart for it .I don't like braging about my self but I am allways doing something. Right now i am 18 and belive it or not i own two busniss. I make good money but it everday is a struggle to keep the busniss runnig good and going to school but i never once thought about stoping here i wana do more i wana be sombody .
Frist, reason why i agree with Thomas jefferson is becuase if your idle you will never make it out i promise here is a example Donald Trump he is one of the richest people in America and he has his own air plane decraded with 24k gold so you know he has accomplished a lot of things he can be retired living in a island right now but right now instead he is the president of united states you know why becuase he is not a idle person he wants to do more like what Ragin(rip to thats mans) said "dont ask what your country could do for you ask what you can do for your country" and that is what Donald is doing right now he is doing more and acomplishing more .
also, its okay to be idle some times we humans everydody needs a little break just as long as you believe. And make goals for your self you will be alright. The most important thing is that you do it the right way their are no short cuts in life and that is why i agree with Thomas Jefferson "determine never to be idle." | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
D9FA943B5453 | Should schools control the involvement of extracurricular activities, or should extracurricular activities be left to student and their families? Many students become involved in extracurricular activities to enrich their educational experiences, and some even become involved in so many activities that they have little time to study or complete homework assignments. Extracurricular activities can affect a student but also can help students. Extracurricular activities should be left to the students and their families because students would do something they like, and students will concentrate more in class.
First reason why extracurricular activities be left to the students is because, student would be doing something they like. For example, the student chooses a activities they like such as soccer:they would be having fun without stressing out over school or any other problem going on. Many student wouldn't like for the school to put them in a activity they dont like. In fact, many students would prefer to not be in a activity they do not like, than being in the activity they dont like.
Second reason why extracurricular activities should be left to students is because, it would make them concentrate in classes more. For example, many activities require to have good grades to be part of it. Student would focus more in class and work harder to get good grades. This would make the student look good but also the school for having students who out reach others. Having good grades is important when being in any other activity because the student would have to manage their time for school,activities, and homework.
In conclusion, students and their family should be able to control what the student take or not take. If schools were to control what a student can take student would be who they are. They will also not care about the activity and start not caring about their grades. Student would also be happy and calm not having to worry about something they dont enjoy doing. Students are still growing more and more;
the more students we have which means more students to be happy. Student shouldnt be forced to take something they dont enjoy because they wont learn anything from it if they dont like that. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
D9FB5E411A4F | I'm disagree with this statement, that first impression are almost impossible to change,there are so many examples, but some of my examples are these, for example:
First, in my case if I see a beautiful girl, I start getting in love of that girl and having good impression about her, but may be I see something wrong that i don't like of her, I start changing my good impression that i had of her.
Second, when somebody watch YouTube videos, then that person person watch a publicity about the new amazing iPhone 11, he has good impression about the amazing iPhone 11, but when he buys the iPhone, he looks that the battery is not that good as he thought, so he change his opinion.
Third when I go to fancy restaurants, I see a lot of delicious food coming throw the tables, I have good impression and expectation about the restaurant, and I think that the food is delicious, but when I try to eat one of those plates, the food was disgusting and it didn't taste that delicious as it looks,that's because my impression change totally.
In conclusion I think that first impressions are possible to change, not just me it could be case of people that I don't even know, people that I know, and me. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
D9FC1CDE9B10 | DEAR PRINCIPAL,
I think that students can help if they want to. but it will be very helpful to the community service. people and parents can take position helping the community. it will be more helpful if all the school cam and help the community. teacher can help to if they want. service to the community will help your town in lots of ways. like help pick up litter, help people in need, save in dangered animals. it can all so help cleaning the planet as well the students can start helping the would clean up the planet. they can stop the green house effect. then we fine better way to use power to support the world.
love, you friendly student. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
DA00F2B25B8C | According to the author
''To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you someone else is a greatest accomplishment '', is hard because we are in one world that the most important thing is the appearances more than what you are, most of the people prefer be and appears something that they can not be, for example most of the people when someone comment about how they look or how they are, some of them get frustrated, is a biggest accomplishment because they critic your form of walk, how you use your clothes and how you do the things.
We lives in one world that the opinions are more important or what others thinks about you, are more important because the constantly opinions from people that the only things they care about is their appearances, one of the first reason why is a biggest accomplishment try to be yourself and be individuality is that you need to appear how you are, do your own stuff, no matter what the opinions are.
I am agree with the author of this prompt because is true that is a biggest accomplishment that everyday we have to tried to completed and do not do what others want you to do to make them feel better, or just do it for appear something that you are not, is good to be individuality and do your things by yourself and do not get influence with bad comments or opinions from others that are not satisficate with their personalities but is not easier to be strong in the world where the appearances has a big influences in the community.
In Conclusion, not everything is easy, when people do not try to let the stereotypes when is talking about how to be yourself, and leave others decided for you or left them influences you with negative thoughts, those people are not better enough to stay in your life, is a greatest accomplishment to dissolve but nothing is impossible and believe in yourself individuality and do the rights things can help you to finish the thoughts about others people with try to change everything. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
DA1ABE125640 | Working in group
Sometime working alone can be hard, because by working alone you can't know your class mates and then you don't have any friends to work. So students should work in group, Although, working with group is more beneficial because you can know more about your class friends, can have fun during work and you can divide work in group.
First reason, why working in a group is more beneficial, because you can know more about your class friends. There are many students that come from other countries or other school so they should work in group. It is good idea to show for those students that come from other countries they will love to know the way they work in class and it is great for English learner because By working in group you have to talk more then work. In group work students can help each other as friends explains something to each other.
Another reason, why working in group is more beneficial, because you can have fun during group activity. Like working on project is fun when you have group, because every person have different idea and when as a group you put all ideas together it is going to be very interesting and by working in group you can increase your knowledge. There are many fun activities in classes that students should work in group like you can debates to other groups on any class topic. That turn a boring topic into fun topic so that way students can also work happily.
Finally, why working in group is more beneficial because you can divide work in groups that way students can complete work on time. students can focus more than working individual. They think it is kind of challenge to them against other groups. that way they give their best to work and complete assignment on time. Students can study as a group for test they can make some quizzes for their group to study for test that way they can do better in test.
Working in a group is important to students and it has many benefits. Many people do jobs with different kinds of experience people and they work as a groups they get many benefits in group work. So it is great for students to work in groups and to learn many new thing from other students. So that's why working in a groups is beneficially. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
DA228B928B61 | Would students benefit from taking classes home? Some would agree and disagree. Taking classes online would help students who need that one on one teaching. Some students have a hard time focusing in a noisy environment because other students are disturbing the class whiles they are trying to pay attention.
Students who aren't comfortable in a noisy environment cant express themselves in class,but if you take classes online you get to express yourself for example video confrence you get to express yourself and ask good question with good explanation. Because everybody has a way of learning some students adapt quick and others learn slowly,but taking this one on one course helps you adapt really quick because you are alone in a quite environment which is going to help you adapt really quick! Online classes also helps because some students have a hard time waking up early in the morning to school which causes you to be late everytime,being late can lead you to detention,saturday school and other things. But with this online course you can take it anytime during the day. Mainly my point is online classes are very helpful and it helps students to concentrate more.
Some students would disagree to take classes online because some people have a fast away of adapting. Some students like to interact with others,students like to experience the high school life.
Do you think would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? It all depends on the ways the student learns. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
DA254A895F0D | what type of workplace would you like to pursue at school with partnerships, local companies, and organizations. I would like to pursue something fun and that I like, and that that I know what is it about what would I do. it's fun to do something that I like and that I know what to do and I know what is it about and if the employer allow me to go visit I would chose something fun.
I would like to pursue something that I like to do. I would explore and see everything. when I do not know something about like partnership with local and organizations. I like to learn when I do not know about something or what is it about. I would ask someone to talk about partnership with local companies and organizations. after someone have talk to me partnership with local companies and organizations. I would chose something that i like to explore. i would chose something interesting that I like.
I would like to pursue something fun. I like to chose something that I know what to do. I would like to do something fun that I like and I know what to do. I like to have fun. doing what I like to do and learn. I would chose something that I understand. Because I do not like to do something that I do not like to do or learn. I would chose something fun, that I understand and that I like. If the employer allow me to go visit.
I would tell someone to talk to me and explain everything. About everything that they do and learn. I would I would like to know what would I like learn in there.
And see if I would like and what is going to be about.
I would like to know what would I explore and learn.
If I am Interesting in something.
I would chose something interesting.
it's fun do something that I know what to do and what is it about and if the employer allow me to go visit I would chose something fun.
In all of this I learned to do what you like and that some school have partnerships local companies and companies.
I think is fun to do what you like and have fun. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
DA26E5E2C08E | Many people believe that teenagers should have a 10 p. m curfew on the weekdays and during mindnight weekends. In my opinion I say having a 10 p. m curfew on the weekdays for teens that works and get out of work late might not be a good idea. Another example can be, you never know when an emergency can happen at your house and or anywhere else and you have no one to pick you up or an emergency hoccurs at your house and you have no one to take you, at least you got your son/daughter to help you out. Lastly during high school is when you get a lot of projects to take home and when you have test the next day and a project due before that can be a hand full and it can stress them out, by letting them do their work and have more time to study, it improves their grades in school and they do better in their classes.
I have a lot friends that as soon as they get home they get ready to go to work, and most of them come out at 10 p. m but by the time they get home it can a little more passed 10 p. m depending how far their job is from their house. Many teenagers help to support their family in whatever they can, having a job that can help them support your family is truly a good help. Letting your son work passed 10 p. m is not something you want to get in between due to thier boss changing their schedule sometimes and if hes helping you out by giving you money to pay a bill or to go buy food for the house it's worth him/her working a little late. I have friends that work very hard in school and after they home they change, they put on their uniform and they go to work to bring food the house due to his mom not getting payed good enough at her job. Others work to buy themselves their own needs, for exmaple when they have school dances and you need to buy a ticket and your mom has no money, by working you can buy a ticket and attempt to the dance. Another example is prom, prom can be one of the most exiting activities high school has, but it can also be very expensive if you have no money and your trying to look nice and presentable.
You never know when an emergency can occur at your house and you have no one to call or help you out. I once had a friend that his mom was pregnant and he had little sibblings that could not drive but him, and as the pain started to get worst he took her the Hospital and thank god everything turned out fine for them but the reaon they didn't call anyone else for help due to the fact they we're new in the city and didn't knew anybody and it was passed midnight, so his older son carried her to the car and drove her to the Hospital. You never know when an emergency can happen to you or someone in your family at anytime. Another example was when my dad and I drove to Walmart to buy my mom some medicine because she had a bad fever and a headche and we left the house exactly at 10:30 p. m and when we got back home we gave her medicine and the next day she felt a lot better.
During high school is where I have gotten a lot of projects that are hard to make and thier due two days later, not only do I be having projects, I be having homework from all my teachers and test that I need to study. Staying up late to complete your work can most definately help you complete your work or at least do more than what you couldn't had finished if you were to sleep at 10 p. m. Whenever I have a lot in mind like projects, homework, make-up work and test that I need to study really be stressing me a lot until a point where I feel like i'm being rushed and I can't concetrate right if I have other things in mind that I need to get done. But by having no curfew you can go to bed late, but at least you were calmed about it and you werent rushing into getting it done, when you took your time.
Many people can see 10 p. m curfew as something that should be done, but think about the consequences that it can have for example, not being able to work and help your family because can work passed 10 p. m or you never know when something can happen to anybody at anytime and there's noone to help out, or when you need more time to complete your project that you weren't able to finished due to curfew. Think about many other things that can be done, other things that can help others. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
DA43320FCA57 | This quote by Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote "to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else the greatest accomplishment". People don't have to be something else as a greatest accomplishment. People are not being themselves in the world. This quote is not true because people are not achieving their goals, they are trying to be someone else, and they are not being about themselves.
The're not achieving their goals if the the world wants them to do something. People need to achieve their goals without someone telling what to do in their life. They have to know if they if the goals right for them to achieve, People with goals often don't like their goals because the world wants them to be something else in their lives. Often times people mistaken for want they want to be versus what they don't want to do. People who are not achieving their goals they go to be something else because they don't have a goal, or they are not themselves.
People are trying to be something else in their life by being not themselves. People have tried being themselves but failed because they can't find themselves. The majority of people will be something else rather than then be who they are inside of them. The world is a big place to be in for people and they don't want to express themselves out in the world, so they try to be something else to fit in. The majority of people who are something else are not happy for their decision because they are trying to hide their real self.
The majority of people are not being themselves in the world because they are not happy about themselves. People don't want to express on who they are in the real world and hide themselves. People are not showing who they are out in the world.
Often times people don't like to see themselves because they haven't found themselves.
People are most likely to go out at be something than to follow their goals.
People don't have to be something else as a greatest accomplishment. People are not being themselves in the world. They hide it to become something slese in the world. This quote is not true because people are not achieving their goals, they are trying to be someone else, and they are not being about themselves. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
DA4E1BDBD778 | What Ralph Emerson say,sometimes it could be a challenge for some adult but it is more then a challenge for teenagers,because since you are a children you know how your life is going to be.
If you grow up in a family who cares about you on what you do the whole day you know that you are lucky because not all people have the same family as you. When a teenager have a family who do not care about him he is going to end up having more problems them that one who have a good family. At this point this teenagers has to decide to be himself a man of good and make proud his family and show them what you did with out their help or end up in jail. When the person don't have support from their family they do what they can so they can have some money on their pockets and have some food on the table for their family. That is what be yourself mean care about you and your family and give to your little brothes the opportunities that you did not have. Most people take that decision when they are teenagers,that is the most hard decision to make because you are living all your past behind and trying to work hard and never go back to the same place.
People who did take that decision when they where young they know how it feels be on that situation, they learn how to be themself and how a real man act. This world is for the people with strongest feeling weak people don't survive in this world. So to be yourself you have to be strong mind. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 |
DA5CA667B729 | My dad once said" that one day I'll save a life just by calling 911". The reason he said that is that the technology today is better than the one he grew up with. Technology today can do more things than the technology a few years ago. Technology today does have a positive effect on people because it can help people communicate with people around the world, and people can call 911 for an emergency.
It helps people communicate with people around the world. For example my Uncle can't leave the country to go visit his mom but if he does he can't return to the states. So the technology now allows him to Skype or Facetime his mom when he wants. In fact 70%
of the people around the world can communicate. All the people can now connect with anyone with just a simple button.
People can call 911 for an emergency. For example my dad had witness a car crash when he was driving to work. When he saw the car flipped over he quickly got his phone and called 911. The cops came in like 3 minutes. When the cops arrived they quickly got the guy out of his car where he was flipped. So thankfully my dad was there to call 911 for him and saved his life. In fact 55% of people that call 911 save a life. So if you ever witness an accident call 911 because you might save a life.
Technology does have a positive effect on people. It can help people talk to people all over the world. People can also call 911 for emergency. Other people believe that technology is the root of evil, however technology helps everybody no matter what. So technology is the best thing humans ever created because it can help anybody do anything. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 5 | 4.5 |
DA674E9EB26C | What are some enjoyable activates to do outdoors at parks?. Well there is many ways but it also depends on what the park provides. some enjoyable activities at the park are, playing golf, you could go for a walk along the trail, you could play any sports in the field.
To start, there are many enjoyable activities you could do at the park. However, you could play golf at the park If you like to do golf. In many different parks they provide many different things. If you went to a national park there will be more fun activities to choice from because it is a nation park. Also the people you decide to go to the park will depend on how your mood will be. If you are interested in golf then that is what you could do while you are the park.
Next, another enjoyable activities is to go on a walk along the trail. Staying active is a good thing for humans. If you are having a bad day or if you are just not a good mood take a walk on the trail and you could refresh your mind. Many people when they arrive to a state park, community park, or a national park they go for walks. Their could be long trails or short trails. There is about 60% of people in the world that they like to walk. I could say that because I like to walk on the trail when I go to the parks.
To end, another enjoyable activities is to play any sport on the filed. There is a few people that like to play sports. I like to play volleyball. If you are a sporty person then you could play in the filed. You could play soccer,basketball,volleyball,football and many more sports. Plus you can stay active. In some parks they provide you some soccer balls and many more so that is a good thing.
To conclude with these are some enjoyable activities you could do at the any park. You could play golf, go for a walk, play any sports.
Thanks for reading. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
DA6899CADE97 | The British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." Although many people believes that Churchill's statement is wrong, I believe in the important role that failure plays in people's lives to be successful in the future. In fact of the society, failure is a bad experience, however, I believe that failure is a way to help people to grow in personally, to be more successfully, and teaches you how to be mannerly.
Every single day, we are exposed to a reality that can be favorable or unfortunate. Where people need to learned about their failures, and grow personally from their new experiences. They made you more mature. That can be the example of my aunt, a nice woman who had an accident in the past. She was traumatized after that accident, but that never stop her to receive professional help with enthusiasm and do what she likes to do, helps others. My aunt understood that everything is possible if we do not loss our enthusiasm, and our pleasure to be success.
Life treat of deal with all unexpected situations. Failures that people never thought that could happen to them. However, everything depends on your enthusiasm, if you want to stay in the same place or learned about your failure and keep going until you accomplish your dreams. Generic_Name, a friend, is an example of the statement just mentioned. Generic_Name wanted to pass his classes in order to graduate. Generic_Name's teachers always told him that he was wasting his time if he was planning to go to the university, but Generic_Name never loss his hopes. Generic_Name became more expert in every subject, he graduated. Moreover, he demonstrated that everybody could be successful, if they try their best.
Everything has two faces, like a coin. As failures can be bad experiences, they can also be helpful if we look at them with good eyes, and if we receive them with good manners. People need to realize that the way in which a thing is happening is not bad at all. Things happens to foment our self and made us more mature. An example of this can be all of us. When we are passing for a bad moment we need to control our behavior, take a rest and think in a positive way to be successful.
In conclusion, Churchill's statement is more than right. Do not pay to much attention to the different failures and keep going with enthusiasm, is the key to be successful in life. Accomplish a dream that we are fighting for, is the best that could happen to everybody. That is why we do not need to discourage and loss our enthusiasm just for a failure that happened to us. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
DA7C756EEA38 | Do you think imagination is more important than knowledge? I think imagine is better than knowledge because you can imagine a lot of thing. Imagination is more important than knowledge because you get to picture or about what you want to do when you grow up or something you want to do with your life or your friends. You can imagine all that by thinking about it or just doing it when you want to.
I remember one time my mom ask what I want to do or to be when i grow up I said a soccer player and I said i imagine me playing with one of the best player playing with me mom said but you have to practice very hard to even make it on the team and I said you going to see on your television very soon. Knowledge is not important than imagination because knowledge you have to learn about it to make sure you no what you talking about but imagination is when you imagine something in your life that you know is going to happen in your life one day is as fun as everything in the world that can make you happy in life or a point of your life.
So ne time i was playing soccer with my friends outside in the rain and I imagined myself making it on the school team I was very happy when I made on the school team. So the next day i went to school and they were calling out the people who made it on the school team, So I head the call my name and I was very happy because they called my name out and it is because I imagined myself making it on the school team and every worked out good, So I was the best soccer player in middle school, now i can not wait when I am famous and ever body know my name.
In conclusion imagination is more important than knowledge and you can imagine what you going to do before it even happens. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
DA86BC9B9FB6 | I think is a good choice for people to take classes online or at home because they can learn more and concentrate better and put more attention and nobody can distract them. I think if people do it online or at home they are not going to make friends. Sometimes is good to make friends because they can help you or be with you in someway is good to go school then taking at home or online. Also if they do it online or at home they are going to be more prepared and ready for wet ever situation because they was putting attention in their lessons. But being in a group in school is more interesting because you can meet new people and don't be alone doing the work but everything have their good choices for do it and people can decide how they want to do it or how much they want lo learn.
some people prefer to take classes from home or online. because they can be more concentrate without nobody distracting them. I think it will be a good choice for them to do it online. For example if they are doing work in a group they are talking and don't concentrated but if they are with nobody they can work better and do their work. This can be the reason for more people take that classes because they work better with out no one else. The people who studies online or at home are more intelligent, and learn more because they are concentrate in what they are doing. In sometimes in the schools they are not concentrate because they are playing or talking with their friends and that can distract people. If they make a competition an student who studied on line or at home with one student is a regular school I think the student is not on the school can win because sometimes that students are more prepared then the regular school. Also sometime the students who go to a regular school they just go for play with their friends is good to have some friends but they are not concentrate o they are sleeping when the teacher is explaining and then when they do the exam or quiz they fail. But if one student is studding online or at home they are listening for when they have to take the exams they can pass and are more responsible with that.
When the school is over at the end of the year some people learn a lot but some people no because they were just playing and don't putting attention or sleeping in class. But the people who studies online or at home they are ready know a lot because they were concentrated and no one was distracting them and that if how they work someones want to learn and pass and someones no each one can take their own decision. I think studies online is more better, more productive at the and of the year. Taking classes at home can benefit at the students in many ways and they know more at the end of the school. When the students at the regular school at the end of the year they have an SOL test. some students fail this test because they did not learn nothing for the rest of the year just for be sitting and doing nothing. But if someone who studies at home have the ability to pass the SOL because they were interested of the class of what were they learning and don't have distractions all year. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
DA8E64EC1304 | I think the tecthnology is helping to every people in the world and this has s positive effect on people because using tecthnology is an easier and faster way to do something. For example if you want to apply for a job you don't have to got to the office to get an aplication you can do it online.
Another positive effect of the tecthnolog is that we can at home and shop online. There are many app and website to shop online and they bring your thing at home they left the thing on your door of your hause, if you want adelivery faster you can pay ore money. So, the is an easy way to shop using tecthnology.
The tecthnlogy is a very comun way to way to contact our family or friends because we can call or send a mesage to the. So, there are many way to contact the people. We can do it in videos game too. Finally the tecthnology is havin a goog and positive effect on people and is very helfull too. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
DA8F8C0D6952 | I believe that students attending school from home will benefit for many different reasons. Students who experience anxiety attacks, depression, bullying, or just not being able to attend school for the day will find great use in online school, they can connect with their classes or teachers without being in school and not have to miss out on important information or work. Students are able to be in a safe environment at home if they do not feel comfortable in school.
Furthermore, students with anxiety or depression may have a harder time going through out the school day then their peers. For example, my girlfriend who has very often panic attacks, dislikes attending her current school. She was a new transfer student to the school and was also new to the school itself. She found it hard to not have anybody to go to and vent during the school day which causes her to stress and have anxiety. Moreover, she gets very often panic attacks during the day which makes her not want to come to school more often. She finds it easier and safer to stay at home. When ever we're on the phone over face time, she's always doing her class work that she takes home to complete. She's a hardworking student and always does her work but because of the environment she's in, it limits her on what she is capable of.
Not only that it would help students feel secure, but for the students who are sick for the day and cannot attend school, wouldn't have to miss out on important information or work. For example; there are days where I just feel weak and tired but I wouldn't want to miss a review day for a major test the next class. If there was online school, I would be able to connect with my teacher and the classes from home where I feel comfortable. Also, my mom wouldn't have to worry that i'm failing my classes because i'm not showing up to them. I believe that other students would agree with me on this argument because almost everyone I know, wishes they could attend school from home.
Moreover, adults might not have knowledge of this, but let me tell you; there is a lot of drama and rumors in every high school. No matter where it is, the policies it has, the advances of the students, there is drama. And drama is one major factor on why students wishes to attend school at home. Just Imagine the advances of our present civilization if there was no drama at school, and no have you heard this or have you heard that. Drama and rumors are big time distractions to daily school work and it peaks the interest of every student. By enabling online school, students dedicated to become scholars are able to take this distraction out of their equation. They can attend school without dealing with the big mouths talking up and down and all around the school.
Overall, distance learning has a very good impact on the students. Students feel safer at home, and when they are sick or cannot attend school for they day, they wouldn't have to miss out on important information or work. Online school would be very beneficial for everyone. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 |
DA92389BB8F0 | PROMPT
Prompt is somthing that can we done everything but some times somthiny bad can happen, we have to thik fisrt, before to do something.
First in my opinion, for me is bad, because no all time yo can be lat, also if you have excuse or a reason why you are lat, but we have to be prompt, for instanse some times people are lazy, and is not good, por example if you going lat in your job probale lose your work , or if you get up 7:30am in the morning and your bus raisin
7:35am again you lost the bus, according how you are, especially we can be lazy.
Especially always we need to be prompt because is necessary, in different place where you go. you need to be the first person, but no't the all peron are prompt, some people have a excuse,
but we can accomplish if you want, and if you can, also some people have a lot of things to do, but we can meke a calendar, and be more responsible, we can take the time for different things to do, also looking you watch or clock.
Then we can give a good example, prove a good prompt, also one thing in the life, and more important is the promt, but for mi some times is impossible, when I lose the bus school, one thing how to change this, for this get up more early, and take the time, aslo we have 24 hours is so a lot of, we can do the all things, depend how you want to live, if you can't to live runing all time, is because you are lazy or other reason.
For intsanse the prompt, all time you have in your life, when you have a appoiment, when you need to go in your job, also when you need to go in the school, when you need to go in the church, when you need to go in the court, you can lose that things. in other words alwasy you need to be prompt, is very important. we need to do the all things. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
DA994B5C3784 | People who value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas. That's why I believe that people should always try to seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters. I understand that some people may like making their own decisions but it's always good to take advice from experts. It's always good to talk to someone in case of an emergency. For example I was sick at home with a lot of pain and I refused to go to the hospital, until I talked to a doctor about how I was feeling and he suggested that I go to the hospital to get checked up and I did and it made me feel a lot better. Sometimes it's good to take an experts advice in a matter like I was in, you don't always have to take their advice but its good to just talk to someone about it and keep in mind what they say for future references. It's always good to follow your own instincts but sometimes it's not. Their are people who have experienced the same thing you might be going through right now and are certified or trained to help. For example my aunt is currently training to be a consular for high school kids and her goal is to gain the trust of her students so they can come to her when they need help. She always tells me that she was a high school kid at a point and she knows what its like and the problems kids might be going through, so that's why shes training to help them in making the right decisions. When I need help making a life decision about something like college I go to my consular who's been in college and knows what could be right for me, I always take in mind what they advice me and make a decision. It doesn't always necessarily need to be help for an adult it can always be help from a sibling or other family member who has been through what you have and who you know will lead you in the right direction. I understand that some people may like making their own decisions but it's always good to take advice from experts. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
DACE7A4DE7DB | I agree with this statement, because a positive attitude helps you cope more easily with the daily affairs of life. It brings optimism into your life, and makes it easier to avoid worries and negative thinking. If you adopt it as a way of your life, it would bring constructive changes into your life, and makes them happier, brighter and more succesful.
Whith a positive attitude you see the bring side of life, become optimistic and expect the best to happen. It is certainly a state of mind that is well worth developing.
Also a positive attitude leads to happiness and sucess and can change your whole life. If you look at the bright side of life, your whole life becomes filled with light. This light affects not only you and the way you look at the world, but it also affects your enviroment and the people around you.
If this attitude is strong enough, it becomes contagious. I'ts as if you radiate light around you.
When you are positive, you tend to pull yourself out of negative loop and don't lose focus from what you really want to achieve, the person with a positive attitude has a better perspective of life. understand that is important to take resposibility for one's actions for example: problems in your work, family, school etc. A strong sence of responsibility always envokes positive and constructive actions. A positive thinker is never impulsive, they always wait to get clarity of a particular situation.
Being positive and calm always enable you to see both sides of the coin.
Positive attitude is the key to sucess in lifen because if you are positive you will belive and trust yourself, and you won't let negative people affect your deams, if not you will work hard until you get them and go will sucessful. | 4 | 4.5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4 |
DACF12F21A7C | Dear, Principal
I think that you should allowed the students of your school to use there cell phones when they have the time to. The students should have in mind that when the teacher ask them to put it always that they well. But also to remember that they have the right to use them. Will this is why I think that allowing the students to have there phones with them is ok. One because they want to time in school to call friends that may not be in the same school or if they have an important thing to do after school in they can't go. Another is if they need help with something and on one is with them . Now I what you might be saying that the students are never going to leave their phones not even if there in class. will there can be a punishment to that person that dose not flow the rules. You can assigned any thing to that person like after school clean up or Saturday school something like that so that they know not to do it again and that they need to lessen to the teacher when they are ask to well that is all i have to say principal. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
DAD01CB5C8D8 | I'm not against having the after school homework club. I'm not against it because some people are failing their classes especially me and i would want to go to an after school homework club because one it would be helpful, two sometimes I forget that I have homework, and three sometimes I just want to get it over with and be done with the homework.
One of my reasons that I'm not against the after school club is because the students can get there grades up and have more practice when you take any test that you don't know about. For my opinion I would like to have this club because some teachers go really fast when there teaching and I can't catch up to them and it's really difficult for me. Some of the students don't know what the teacher is teaching about because maybe the subject there learning is there weakest strength to learn about.
My second reason is that students need this class because they want to achieve in life. Maybe someone wants to go to college to learn about photography but the school they want to go to is too expensive to afford like for example they want to go to a well good college but it's to expensive but the person who wants to be a photographer needs to apply for a scholarship that means they need to have good grades, participate in after school activity and much more this is why students like me need to have a after school homework club.
My third reason is that some students don't do there homework because they forgot it at school or they don't remember they have homework. People like me don't like doing homework because it's really difficult and sometimes I need help doing my homework and it would help me have in my school a after school homework club because that would be helpful to me and other students. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
DAD5BCDAB7DD | When I grow up I would like to do five things. The first thing I would like to do is go skydiving. The second thing I would like to do is go to Europe and visit many places there. The third thing I would like to do is own my own construction company. The fourth thing I would like to do is go back to my country and buy back my childhood's house. The fifth thing I would like to do when I grow up is Learn about my family and where they come from and how it was for them.
The first thing I would like to do when I grow up is skydive. One reason why I would like to go skydiving because I like heights and high places. Another why I would like to go skydiving because I would like to see the view from such height and how amazing it looks. The last reason why I would like to go skydiving because I would like to feel like I'm flying like a bird skimming through the sky. I would like to go skydiving because of those three reasons.
The second thing I would like to do when I grow up is go to Europe and visit many places there. I would like to go to Europe because I like many countries and their history that are located in Europe such as Greece, Germany, France, and Italy. I would like to go Europe because I like most European history such as the Spartans history, the Roman Empire's history, and the Persian Empire's history. I would like to go to Europe because I would like to Learn many European Languages such as French, German, Greek, Polish and much more. I would like to go to Europe because of those three reasons.
The third thing I would like to do when I grow up is own my own construction company. I would like to own a construction company because I like construction and engineering. I would like to own a construction company because I like building and would like to build famous buildings and many other things. I would like to own a construction company because I would like to build as a career and as a hobby. I would like to own my own construction company because of those three reasons.
The fourth thing I would like to do when I grow up is go back to my country as a visit. I would like to go back to my country, Generic_City, because I've spent most my life, and all my childhood there. The second reason I would like to go back to my country is because I want to buy my old house back and go to it once a while. The reason why I want to go back to my country is because I was born there, and feel at home there. Those are the reasons I would like to go back to my country and visit it many times.
The fifth thing I would like to do when I grow up is learn about my family. One reason I would like to learn about where my family comes from and what struggles they went through and how they got there. Another reason I would like to know from where they came from came from and why they left it and what race they were. I would like to see to who I'm related to and if they were bad or good people, if they served in any wars or were famous people. Those are the reasons why I would like to learn about my family's past.
When I grow up I will do five things that I would want to. The first thing I will do is skydive because of the view from such height. The Second thing I will do is go visit many countries in Europe and learn many of the European languages. The third thing I will do is own my own construction company because I'm into construction and would like to build many things. The fourth thing I want to do is go back to my country and visit it many times. The fifth thing I would like to do when I grow up is learn about my family's past and where they come from. Those are the five things I will do when I grow up. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
DAE1AA29184B | Should Generic_School extended school day's by two hours for four day's a week? My opinion about this is we shouldn't let this happen for many reasons for example; Students would be waking up late,People got jobs after school and responsivbles after school, Students wouldn't have time to do homework and actives after school. Having to go to school for four days would be great and all but I would rather go to school for that extra day then just four days for ten hours. Other people would agree with me and my reason why we shouldn't let this happen. I'll give you more detail reasons about why we shouldn't let this happen.
My first reason, Students would be waking up late to school, It's very important to go to school and people waking up late could cause a lot of problems with the government and with parents. The student attendance would drop a lot, Students would be waking up later on in the day, And would be missing a lot of class work in the moring that could be important. That they would have to make up which could be hard because they would have to stay after for school if we would have ten hours of school and it would be hard to do it in class. If we didn't have two hours added to are day then it would be much easier to stay after school, And students would be waking up on time and going to school more often.
Next reason,Some students have jobs after school and responsivbles. If we would have ten hours of school it would be impossibe to take care of those thing. Having a job is important some students could be going through tuff times like family issues,Some students even have kids to take care .Some students got a lot to handle that and school work and going to school. Other students they got other thing to do for example vist people family members,having chores to do around the house.
Now,My last reason would be students wouldn't have time to do homework and actives after school. There are alot of students who stay after for help with there homework, Clubs and sports,some students enjoying staying after and practicing to join the soccer team,foorball team etc. Students even have time to work on there homework when they get out of school. If we would have added two more hours then we wouldn't have sport or staying after, It would probably be late and teachers don't want to stay longer then they should and parnets could get worryed about the kids for staying longer. These actives could affect students class work, How tired the students get and sore when they come back from school.
In conclusion, We shouldn't add two more hours to the school day for four days a week it could affect students attendents and how they act with others,People have jobs and responsivbles after school and students actives and homework. That's why we should keep the school days nomal and how long we stay in school. Student's come to school on time and prepare to learn. They do want they have to do after school and everyone is happy with that,Others will be unhappy if we would add two more hours to are day. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
DAECE15EE507 | small act of kindness can impact on other by showing that you care about others. And even though you don't show a lot of kindness even a little bit change on the other person because of the kindness that you were showing. If you think showing kindness is a waste don't think that because showing some kindness can show the other person that you care about them. Also you can think that not showing enough kindness is bad then you wrong because even just a little bit can show yourself and the other person that you care and that you nice. Even though your not the type of person to show kindness to others can change about what the other person thinks about you like maybe the person thinks oh like this person doesn't care about me. But when the person show kindness can change the option on what the person is thinking about you. And if your the person that is always nice and you think your not good enough because you think that you don't show enough kindness just know if you say something nice or show thats kindness. In conclusion this is why i think showing small act of kindness can impact on others. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
DAF9AC30424E | The school day should not be extended even more and I dont want the be their for an extra hour and i dont think anyone else would want to be their for an extra hour. Reason one we are in school almost all day 8 hours is enough there is not way i'm staying their for an extra hour. Reason two staying in school an extra hour is less time to do our homework and they give out a lot of homework,we will probably be done with homework by bed time. Reason three with more school hours,less homework time,less free time. We wont have any time to do what we want because they give out a lot of homework witch means we have to put in more time on home work and we have to stay in school for an extra hour also means more homework time and way less free time. thats why we should not be in school for an extra hour because we are in school almost all day,less time to do our homework,even less time for free time. | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
DB050381035B | Some people may say that oppocite but to start with your aim low helps with the little mistakes that need to be fixed.
People should considere setting their aim low so that they can star by reviewing the stuff that needs to be fixed,those are going to the things that are going to make you stronger and capable to lots of stuff.
The people that start the lowest are the ones that overcome their dreams,the ones that are capable,the ones that set their aim's low and achieve a mark. People overcome themselfs because of the mistakes that some people make along the way are the ones that help by building their character and makes themslef in a way stronger and more capable of lots of more stuff out there.
Some people will star high thinking that by doing that they would be able to get on top of stuff and all problems that are along with that are somehow fix without putting any effort or even think about it for a second,people should star a bit lower than that because that way they can work built that character that can help with achieven their goal by just putting a bit of effort and try to not aim high and fall short. For example a person that saids thats going to do lots of things riskign everything he or she may have a by just taking a single step loses it bacause of not being able to a list think before doing anything,by starting low can help not putting things and not taking any risk,by taking stuff step by step and learning things along the path.
Setting the aims at a low risk help with not losing what it was to hard to get or to achieve,by understanding that thats what help getting far in life and not let anything fall short and just taking the time to think and overview that things that are still around and star making them better and just work on them step by step. As some may say that its good for people to chalenge themself once in a while but without risking whats around it because whats the point of being able to work so hard and by just one step that was taking without having a chance to think of what was happening and lose it all by not taking it step by step.
My oppinion is that people should considere think before doing anything because that what helps getting you on the top and not just let anything fall down in front of your face,by thinking that to risk thing and not having to even think about it for a second was going to get you to the top,and if your going to chalenge yourself make sure to think about it stuff before doing it. | 3.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
DB0A595A4723 | Dear Principal,
I write this letter to you because children are not suppose to perform community service. so sometimes children have time to do community service, and some don't have time to do it. For me I rather kids not doing community service because maybe they have better thing's to do. first of all, that kids have to do homework and important projects. secondly, children have the choice to do community service. finally, children have to do chores at home or help mom do something important.
first of all, kids have to do homework and important projects and that's because they have final project for the quarter, but you have to do community service what do you rather do i rather do my project for the quarter. Also homework is a important thing in your school grade and you also have to another community service again, and it is important too and that's why children are not suppose to take community service it take away to much time from important things like family, class work, and projects. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
DB1838237151 | Restate.
Whats one place in the world you will like to vist?
Why would you want to visit that place and what would you like to vist when you first arrive.
3 clamis
.Generic_City because of the Eiffel tower
.Generic_City because of the zoo
.Florida becasuse of universal studios pargraph 1: First thing when i go to Generic_City is to see the Eiffel tower.
Becauae l want to see how really tall is the Eiffel tower in person,the buliding helps people because it has alot of lights, you can see the view up in the sky, you can go with your family for a vist to Generic_City
Example
The Eiffle tower is really tall.
Transention:After Generic_City i vist i will like to go to Generic_City because i want to meer actors and singers so i can get autographs from them and see them live singing
Pargraph 2: First thing i want to see when i go to Generic_City is to see actors,singer and see them live.
I want to go to Generic_City because you can meet the best actors and you're favorite singer you can ask like how did you make it so high how did you become one of the best just ask for some tips and they can help you acheavie your goal and try your best.
Example
You can see alot of actors and singers and vist other places.
Transention: After i vist Generic_City i can go ohio and go to an amusement park and ride the fastet roller coaster.
Pargraph 3: fisrt place when i vist ohio is an amusement park called cedar-point has the fastest roller coster on earth and i want to ride the fastest roller coaster on earth and try it for my self.
I want to go to Ohio because Generic_City has the fastest roller coaster on eath and i want to go on it how fast does it really go and i want to ask the people who made it what meatriels did they use in order to launch the roller coaster so fast.
Example: The roller coast is a car that lauches really fast.
Conclusion:I want to go to Generic_City because of the Eiffel tower that is the first thing i want see when i go to Generic_City.
When i go to Generic_City i want to see is actors and singers live thats the second i want to see. The last thing i want go to is Ohio because they have the fastest roller coaster on earth and its at Generic_City and u want to see how they made it. | 1.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
DB2E935F461F | Some say technology is just an extension cord of our bodys. For example a cell phone, you take it where ever you go and use it. We use technology everyday ,but technology can cause less contact with people and a distraction. Although some say technology has a positive effect on lives ,actually it has negative effect on lives.
Despite the fact that technology gives negative effects it actually gives positive effects as well. We use technology everyday it is a part of our life. Technology helps us in many ways for example our jobs, many of our jobs involve technology and the use of it helps us get our job done succesfully and easier. We use technology to commuincate for exanple a cell phone is used to communicate with other people this helps us know where people are if needed or just to see how they are doing. We use technology in school for example computers, cell phones, these devices help students on their everyday assigments it helps them use the internet when needed and it helps teacher with their teaching as well.
Technology causes a distraction. For example cell phones are used every day in schools cell phones distract students from their learning and their peers around them also. While using these moblie devices when not asked to students grades go down and they don't show interest in school anymore. These cell phones are not only a distraction they are an addiction to people. Another example driving while using your cell phone, this can cause a distraction and that can lead to a car crash. Some people are texting while driving or playing music and even the gps is a distraction because you are looking down at the gps instead of keeping your eyes on the road. This shows us distraction can make you loose focus or not pay attention your surrondings.
Cell phones can cause less contact with other people. When using your cell phone you don't look up while walking you just keep your head down this is usually the case with teenagers and kids. Teenagers don't interact with parents, peers and family memebers anymore becasue of these moblie devices. These devices can cause people to not have interaction skills for example people don't know how to approached some one if talked to. This show us that with this technology we are loosing our social skill we don't even know how to say hi to someone anymore it is very sad what technology is doing to us it is stripping us away from the world.
Despite the fact that some say technology has a positive effects it actually has a negative effect. Technology is part of the human life we can't take it way anymore. Technolgy can a distract people and can loose interaction with people. Technology is not bad but it is the way we use it that makes it bad and addicting. If we only used technology when we had to the world would be a better place. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
DB2EA5C4828F | Technology is positive, because is the good possibility for people the accomplish method system, the effect by people is have playing blow up when is play have a ball is very good for your health. the many person said the woman is not good that sport but the woman is very good for all along time. reading the books is good for your skull you think by relation in your life. never put down handle by another person when you had acquire that examples when me litter girl get at in the unites states but my parents they say no you no sties here but for my 15
years I no like for party i sad my parents my gift is the trip.
I don't spoke very more English sorry this is story in Spanish, I litter stands the question.
para mi el juego es bueno siempre cuando tu lo vez como una meta tuya no como una competicion solo como algo que tu crees que puedas ase, no para ser mejor que los de mas todas las personas piensan que cuando tu puedes una vez lo puedes siempre no siempre en la vida se gana y se pierde nunca tedes por vensido con lo que quieras ser, leer libros te ayuda atomar cual quier situa sion aprendes de los personajes y siempre pon encuanta todo lo que lees si es malo no puedes mejorar tu vida si tu quies. nunca terrindas con lo que quieres ser si tu estas dispuesto a ser eso pues con ti nua con tus metas pero solo se tu no te creas mejor que los de mas todos somos iguales por esos algunos no pueden a ser las cosas que quieren por que siempre quieren verse mejor que los de mas.
cuando yo hera muy pequena queria viajar para los estados pero mis papas me lo inpidian ellos siempre quisieron lo mejor para mi pero no sentia queera muy ariesgado para mi el camino luego yo les die que no me importava que tanto tenia que sufrir pero que queria estar en los estados unidos por que era lo mejor par mi luego ellos si aseptaron por que veian que donde estaba era mas complicado y no me iva superar.
y gracias al efuerson de mis papas y adios no estaria donde quiero estar siempre hay que tener encuenta lo que quieres aser no por que los de mas eso quieran para ti hay que ser ponsable por si solo por por que alguien quiera que tu seas difernte | 1 | 1 | 1.5 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
DB34A89420F2 | I understand why you want to add an hour and thirty minutes to school for kids to get more time to learn.
But think about the children may think its a bad idea and I agree with them as well. Why? you may ask, well lets think about it kids dont want to be at school for a very much more time in what they are already in for. Many students go to after school activities at certain times and get out later others dont but do some outside of school activities like sports, helping the community, getting chores done, {etc.}. You may seem like those arent important but for the students do think its important and also school, but the home work time they have left to do at home my not be a good idea on the different after school programs they may be in at different times when it starts and when it end times go fast and may not be time to go over homework or study for a test the next day. Education are good for the kids but getting low grades may not help them in the future and for the family. Many students wont have anytime to be spending with their family together any more with those times being spent on school and sports and other activities.
Families may think its a bad idea too add more hours to school and to take away time after school to get things done and to have time to enjoy with families at outside places at an restaurant or to go out for walks before bed times and the next day. While other parents my think if there going to add more time to school then students should arrive to school at least 20 minutes later for kids to have more time to sleep for an long school day, so they wouldnt be sleepy in the mornings. As may I think that over the week ends families like to go to far places and if students end up having projects and home work to do could effect the time with family and school and that wouldnt be so good for the students. Think about it kids not doing well in homework and test for not studying for not have any time after school for the extra hour and thirty minutes they are going to get that wont be good for the school county and less students would start coming to there schools and rather transfer to a better school with less hours or just consider home school and your school would have kids leaving and wont be able to have students to teach anymore. Witches end up shutting your schools programs and closing the school and there wouldnt be any jobs for teachers or you to find quickly enough to pay bills and rent witch wouldnt be so good for the employees. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
DB621DB9A4C3 | Some people or business have adopted a four-day work week but everyday they will add two more hours and today our school want to try this model by extending the school day two hours after considering the benefits and disadvantages to a four-day school week. Now I want talk about this.
Although there are some people might say it's not have any different with the old model. It just add all of extending time together and people already used to the old model. We should not change to the new model. It's good if we cut one school day off and just add two hours for each day because you will have three day off , that's sounds great , we can do a lot of things if we have one day off. For examples you can hung out with your friends, go work out, because you already sit there for four days ,you need some sports. Usually 12th grad, they don't have any P.E class, they need to have some sports to make sure they are more health. Or you can just stay at home for study if you think school time is not enough for you, help your family do some work at home, like clean house or make some food for your family.
However people should have some change and progress for our life time , and make it become more and more good, perfect. Don's always keep the old way for your life, try some thing new. It will be fun. There are lot of first time you try already some not, for examples first time eat fish or some food that you never try before, first time go swimming or some sports that you never try before, life only have one time, and it's short , fast , don't make your life without color and fun. It will be boring, nobody want have that kind of life.
It's good for the teacher too, they are most tired people in the school, when they teaching, they can not sit there ,they need walk around and make sure you understand that the knowledge he just teach you. they need time for break too. so I suggest our school should change to this model, extending the school day two hours for four day. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
DB69B98973B6 | One topic that is frequently debated today is if schools should be allowed to control students involvement in extracurricular activities. They think that sometimes students take too many extracurricular activities to the point that they do not have enough time to do their school work. They feel that extracurricular activities don't help students manage their time wisely. I believe the decision regarding extracurricular activities should be left to the students because it helps students learn how to manage their time, make new friends, and it helps students make colleges be interested in them.
Firstly extracurricular activities helps students learn how to manage their time. It helps students learn how to manage their time by making them make a schedule. By making a schedule students learn how hard it is to an adult. Students make resposible actions and learn how much work they have to put in for them to be good in school. Extracurricular activities doesn't always take studenst time but prepares them for life
Secondly extracurricular activities helps students learn how to make new friends. Extracurricular activities helps students how to communicate and make new friends while making good memories. Students shouldn't always be focused in school I believe that students should also have fun and friends. Friends will make school and other school related activities enjoyable for kids and teengers.
Lastly extracurricular activities helps students make colleges be interested in them. Colleges get interested in you when they see all of the thinggs you've done althrought high school. If colleges see that you've a lot throught high school they would be even more interested in you. Colleges also check your grades and other stuff but the thing they check the most is extracurricular activities because they want to see if you were consistant.
As you have read I believe the decision regarding extracurricular activities should be left to the students because it helps students learn how to manage their time, make new friends, and it helps students make colleges be interested in them. Only when we let our students choice they would resposible and wise. When that day comes our students will be great and mature. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
DB6B9E64CFF0 | All around the world involves people learning something new. We learn about different creatures, peoples ,and objects. An Individual that is willing to learn more each and everyday will succeed in life. Some people believe that Emerson statement "unless someone try to do something beyond what they've have already mastered will grow", but I disagree. I believe people who try to do something beyond what they've have already mastered, they will never grow because due to lack of experience, and not enough knowledge.
To begin with, every individual want to become something in life. There's literally a certain career that every individual is discovering for. People who wants to learn, participate in certain activities or classes would most likely get the dream career as they wish. Putting the effort is the answer to everyone problems. For instance, my friend Generic_Name shes a server at a restaurant. She is nineteen years old. Generic_Name has been working there since she was 17 years old already. Therefore, Generic_Name knows all of the meals that are served, places that need to be restocked etc. Unfortunately, she getting tired of the job. For some reason, she doesnt want to try something new.
Having only one job experience is barely enough for the person to know about different experiences from other jobs. I strongly believe,as if Generic_Name does not put effort into applying for a new job. She will never grow out of her self esteem or confidence into getting a new job. Clearly, getting involved into different jobs will even give you different alternatives.
Pursuing this further, knowledge is very important when it comes to trying something new. Individuals need to know atleast some knowledge when trying to reach further into their career
For example, my eighth grade teacher Generic_Name would sometimes sit with me at lunch. We would discuss about anything. One day, I brought up about going into high school. Since my middle schools years were coming to an end. I asked her if their were any advice for my upcoming freshman year. She told me high school it will get harder . Also, I needed to become more serious about my education. Mostly likely I will have to pass all exams, sols ,and keep my GPA high. These are the years I will0 start thinking about what I want to do with my career. She gave me advice to guide me through to become better. I strongly oppose, knowing more knowledge about something will make yourself grow.
Obviously, if an individual is trying to do something beyond then what they've already mastered, they will never grow. Just by having lack of experience will lead the individual feeling in their comfort zone. Also, the lack of knowledge will leave the person clueless. Some people may argue that unless the person try to do something beyond what they have mastered, they will grow. How can someone grow from repeating on doing what they do on a normal basis? How can they learn something new with such little knowledge? For example, my dad came to United States when he was 14 years old. He knew little English. Also, he knew how to write some words, but that was all that he knew. He put his full time effort to learn a new language. Each step he took he accomplished. He himself grew out of the stage of not knowing something. He went beyond into what he really wanted.
Finally, everyone needs experience and knowledge in order to grow. Imagine doing a science project on an unknown animal. Surprisingly this creature changes colors, sizes, and shape. Wouldn't you want to invest in the creature more? Learn how the creature lives? Or you would just want to know the basic facts of it? | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
DB80C6963DB7 | With great imagination comes with great knowledge, with both, you'll be able to conduct something amazing! You can have great knowledge and little imagination, but you can have imagination without knowledge.
I personally disagree on Albert Einstein stated, yes imagination is very important and useful, but it's not more important than knowledge. I say that because, people everyday, all the time, imagine great things all the time but without any knowladge, how will they make that thought turn into reality without having any knowledge what so ever??
Knowledge is way more important that imagination because many inventors, scientist, constrution workers, normal people, use it in thier every-day lives! Imagination us just one step with in into reaching to a goal or something, if you have plenty of knowledge of your dream, you'll be able to grab that goal!
But knowledge isn't just about reaching a goal or building something, it's about having idea or knowing what your doing and what's going around you.
In conclution, knowledge is way more usefull than a thought bouncing in your head, Knowledge is way more better because it helps us build many great things like, electronics, machines, stores, ect. Sorry Einstein, I just don't agree with you. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
DB85B6DDB462 | Once a British naturalist and politician John Lubbock said, "your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."and some people believe thats true and I agree with them. I believe that we our self choose our own character traits because no matter who you are influenced by you make your own decisions. Yes, there maybe others who will be in your life time their to persuade you to do bad things but its up to you if you want to stay with those kinds of people.
First of all your character is something that make you,you and thats whether you choose to be good or bad, nice or mean. Their are many different types of people in the world and they have their own characters.
Secondly all people are different and special in many ways like people could help others, they could donate their time to help the elderly, they could spend time with loved ones, or they could do bad things like stealing and other stuff like that but that all comes from you, you decide to do all those thing whether good or bad that your traits as a human being.
Last of all people with bad and good traits can change whether you decide to or not its all up to you nobody else's. People can change in many ways possible you your self just have to decide if that's what you want to do.
In conclusion John Lubbock a British naturalist and politician said that "your character will be what you yourself choose to make it." and I believe thats true. but its also true that some people some people may influence the way you act like who you grew up with, people who were role model's to you, or people who motivated you in your life time. In other words I believe people choose who they want to be and how they want to act like cause its who they are it's their character. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
DB8F7B150495 | Every city always have curfew and it is create for people follow it, and it always have some people break the law. DO curfews keep teenagers out of trouble, do they unfairly in young people's lives. Curfew will keep teenagers out of trouble because it will make they aware about time .
Curfew is a law create to make people have a good life. When all people can keep the law, they always can live in peace and have no fear about anything.
Curfew is require for all people, and because they have curefew, they will grow up and they can care themself alone.
Some people say curfews is unfairly interfere in young people's lives, however , curfews will keep teenagers out of trouble, because they have a lot of time to do their work at the morning and evening. At night at 10 P.M is a curfew, and teenagers should follow the curfew, because it will make them safe and they will awareness it in the future.
Curfew is a good law for teenagers, it can keep they out of trouble, and also it will make them grow up faster and they can care about themself. With that all parents don't need to worry about their children go out at night , and all teenagers can have time to prepare for next day in school and in work. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
DB9BA6D8278F | Is it expected for students to identify a career by the time they enter high school, i say no to this because there are many students that still do not know what they want to do when they get older. For example there are students that are waiting to know forsure on what they want to do in life and it takes time to know what you want to do. Another example is there are many students that may not be able to afford college, if that is what they are planning and that is why it is hard because many students do not have enough for it, and that is why students take there time thinking what they want to do but can do so they can be successful in life.
Another reason why students do not know what they want to do by the time they enter high school, some parents want there kid to do what they want when it should not be like that, that is also why students have hard time thinking on what to do in the future. Students should have to worry about there future so they end up being successful in life, and end up doing good in life and making your parents proud on doing thins that they couldn't have.
It would help out students if he/she knew what they wanted to do in there life entering high school, so later on they don't have to worry much on what they want to do because they will already know. It gives them an advantage because they already know what they want to do and so they're going to work for it, they can change there mind if they want later on if they would like.
If you know what you want todo in life its a good thing because then you know how hard you are going to work for to get there and be successful in life. If you know what you want to do it will give you an advantage because you will be working hard to get there and achieve your goal, just be successful in life and if you don't know what to do just keep thinking about it until you know the career path yo want to choose to be successful in life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
DBAB680CBC5D | Dear, principal
I think we should not allow the student to bring there cell phone to school because they only use it to play or text that why peoples grade are low and 10% of people are failing. I know a lot of kids in my class that are failing. Kids in my class surely text a lot to the other kid in school. That why I think that we should not allow cell phones | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
DBAE7F4F7837 | The reasons i would argue for students and teachers having a after school program. Fist, the student will have more knowledge. Second , When students are in private with teachers the teachers will teach them new stuff. Finally , So they students can study for quiz and test and pass the quiz and test. There's more reasons but those are my reasons.
When you go to school you learn. The longer you stay the more you learn more . The more you learn the easier it is to get in collage . Collage looks at people who learn a lot so the after school program is gonna make them have a better future. Learn more and youll have a better career.
When you get tough new stuff it can be fun to learn about the new stuff your learning about . So when you learn new stuff you can be ahead of your class. Learning new stuff can make you twenty percent smarter than you usually are. Learning new stuff can get you a better job in the future.
There's always time to learn new stuff .
By going to a after school program you can study for quiz and test. If you get a good grade on mostly all your test then your gonna have good grades and thats a fact. quizzes are mini test so you should also try to pass them because both are huge deals. Passing test can bring your grade from a F to a C+. Passing quizzes can bring your grade from a F to a D+. So they bring you from a failing grade to a passing grade.
Teachers and Students Volunteer to meet with those who either have difficulty in a certain subject or wanna finish there homework .
Why is it after school ? | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
DBBAF0AB97FB | Well,A good attitude is always the key in our lifes be good with others people,I'm agree with the statement the good attitude represent, Where we we're born, How our parents gave us education where i was born they always taugh me how treat people do the right thing, If we always do good things around us, Good things will come around us.
I'm going to tell a history about me, my parents alway before i go to shool they always told me be respecful with the olders people if you see people when your walking say hi,Good morning no just old people, kids like you need respect if you respect they will treat you with respect, Then i was walking in the street i alway remember, What mom told me one month after i forgot what mom told me one month before,I went to shool there was a party at school the teacher who was my science teacher he was so rude with me what i did was so rude too, but i remember just in the moment what my mom told me what i did when i remember what mom told me, i just turn around and walk away,I said ,Wooow his parents didn't taugh him how to treat people with respect the night was so fun the party over around 4:00 am in the morning, When i get home my mom was so worry about me bacause i didn't tell her, The days pass and you don't know the time is a clock never stop if you see around you your parents are getting older in that time you want the days pass too fast, I'm 18 now i see what my parents told me, how bautiful is see kids,boys, old people together is bautiful when you see there's respect each other respect is the key for many ways to see people they are like you to get respect others and wetherever you go everyone will treat you with respect if you respect them the positive attitude always bring you good things,your future is in your hands don't waste your time is running respect others people the positive attitude will bring you a good job and new opportunities. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
DBC04530D2F9 | Have your ever ask yourself what makes a person's character?. Some People think that a person's character is define by their actions and by what their selves choose to. While others think that character is form by influences beyond control. I agree that as individuals our character is influenced beyond our control because of , internet influence, fit in society , and by actions.
One reason why character is influence beyond control is because people get influenced by internet platforms. Internet platforms in influence in many ways some could be good , while other not quit so. Character is influence by social medias posts , YouTube videos and variables of things. These kind of things interfere with a person characteristic people might want to follow and do what they see on internet. a person might not even be awarded that they are being influence by internet.
second claim why a person's character is influence beyond control is because they get influence by society. People might feel that to fin in society they have to have the same characteristics and act the same as others to be accepted and tolerated by society. People who is pressure by others would act and do things that they know are no specifically good. For example you are a very respectful and kind person but they you turn into a not so kind person their has to be something making you changed the way you are and that could be other people , changing your character.
Lastly people's characteristics are influence beyond control because of the actions they take in life.
People's actions influenced the way they are and act. By taking good actions your character will be defined in a positive and understandable way. good actions will be the key into having authentic and unique character.
In conclusion there are many factors that influence that a person's character.
People some often get their way of acting and doing thinks from internet platforms which could be something bad it's not take with careful. Today,s society can have a big impact in everyone's lives, we are living in a time were people would do whatever takes to fit in and feel like think they are part of society, but sometimes being around people is not mentally healthy. Actions are a big part a person,s characteristics because your character will depend on actions. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
DBC60BDBC49E | The school board shouldn't add one and half hours to school each day. To begin one reason i think they shouldn't is that a lot of kids who play sports or clubs after school might not be able to because they don't have time to learn about how life is and how difficult it is and people's life difficulties. One example is that some kids play videos and since they dont have lots of time out side of school they might just play video game instead of sports and if you give them more time out of school more opportunities students will have. secondly Students will be more tired and less focus because if students have more time in school the more earlier they will have to sleep and most students don't fall asleep early also students have homework since they well most likely be tired from school they might take a nap and there might either wake up to late to do homework or not have time to finish all there homework. Thirdly more students will not want to be in school and may drop out from either too much stress or they just don't want to be in school because the longer time there in school the more tired they are and less time they have to do what makes them feel relaxed or not have time to do what they love to do. students also might not have time to make friends because there focusing on school and it might ruin there social skill and conversation with strangers out side of school. Lastly less amount of time they have to spend with there families because they would have to go to school for extra time and as soon as they get home they have to do homework and honestly by the time there done there going to be most likely tired to do anything beside resting or sleeping. Also some students have younger siblings to take care of after school so that would put more stress on a student and either a family would have to pay for a baby sitter or some families don't have money to pay for one so parents might take there student out of school just to take care of there sibling and so the extra time in school wouldn't help him. To conclude those are the main reasons why I think we shouldn't have more school hours in school. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 |
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