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DBC8CBF56BB9 | As a child, I always loved to go to the park. It was my favorite thing to do because I loved playing games with my sisters and sometimes we'd even make up our own game to play. However, things have changed in the past few years and now I barely ever go to the park. The park isn't the same fun and cool place that it used to be anymore, but why?, Why did it change so quickly?.
There are so many reasons to why the park hasn't been visited as much as before, but, yet again only one reason explains why most people barely ever go to the park. The reason for why people never to go the park now is because they don't know what to do at the park anymore. People think that the park is a boring and useless place, but the park have many purposes. People now spend more time on their couch and on their phone and it's very unhealthy and concerning especially when it comes to health issues in the future. The park is a fun and entertaining place to be because there are millions of activities that you could do at the park that are very enjoyable. I'm going to list a wide variety of fun and entertaining activities.
First off, you could always go the park with friends and/or family members. It's always great to be around the people you enjoy the most, especially in a beautiful environment like the park, where everyone could enjoy themselves. Second, you could always head to the park for some quick exercise. You could run, jog, do yoga and much more when you're at the park. It's always a good idea to clear your mind and go for a run at the park when it's beautiful outside. It's always important to make sure your health is in good condition and you can make sure that happens by taking a walk at the park. The third activity is, play some fun games at the park!. When your at the park you could always play some fun games that get you pumped up and happy. With the nice, fresh, open space that is available, the possibilities are endless!. You could make up your own fun games with your friends or family members. Now my fourth fun activity is, throwing a fun party!. It could be a birthday, graduation or even a going-away party, The occasion doesn't matter at all!. Having a nice party at the park is one of the funnest things!. You could do a barbecue and play with your friends and/or family members. celebrating outdoors is a great way to have a blast. My fifth activity is, help clean the park. This activity might sound really boring but helping our your community is 100% worth all of your time. When helping out your community you're not only helping those around you but you're helping yourself, the environment and the animals. Many animals live in parks, for example. a squirrel , birds, worms and even small insects. So next time you go to the park, or are planning to go, make sure you at least pick up one piece of trash, because that small piece of trash could save the animals and the environment.
Now my last but certainly not least reason is, grab a book and head to the park and read. This might seem like boring stacked on top of boring but doing this helps you clam down and relax a lot. When you're in a beautiful and peaceful environment, how could you be mad?.
Why should you try one of these activities?. These activities aren't only fun but they do help you in the long run. Hanging out with your friends and family members help you appreciate the people in your lives but also the environment that it giving access to being able to be around people. Taking a nice run at the park helps you by being healthy and improving your well being. Exercising doesn't have to mean running and jogging, it could be yoga too. Making up your own games help you build up your mind especially when you have access to so much space, you can pretty much create a fun and entertaining game. Reading a book is one of the most important things that you have to do in order to build up a stronger brain and doing to it in a peaceful, quite and beautiful environment makes the experience 100x more pleasing. You don't have to choose one of my ideas, you can choose and make up your own activities!. So next time you go to your local park, make sure you contribute and acknowledge the beauty of your community and make sure it's being properly taken care of. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
DBCAB09E41C7 | This is a good idea, and the educators should be agree with this. Summer Break should be more longer. We fell the summer is not enough time for us to enjoy the vacations. We need more weeks to rest and enjoy the beach and many things. I am agree with this people who think that the summer should be four weeks of break, and a long winter break. because during the vacation, we go to the beach, work, play with friends and family, visit friends or family that live far away or in other state, and sleep more. I think idea is great. Because during the period of the school we do not have time to go out. We only do homework, projects and many others things, and that is the reason that I like this idea because is the best way to enjoy the summer and have more time to rest. Winter should be more longer because during this season is very cold and dangerous, I think winter break should be more longer.
Because Winter is a beautiful season of the year, but it is also a problem because during this period of the year, if people who drive do not take precaution they would have serious problems, and I think the school should be closed during this period, because the buses can slide on the ice, and can cause a big accident, and this is a risk, because many people can die. The educators should know this and think about. Because this is seriously, we have to be more careful during winter, many students come to school, buses drive over the snow, and this is a risk, I think this is a great idea why winter should be more longer, and more weeks of vacation, this days of snow should be make up on the spring. I think this is the reason why people think the Winter Break should be more longer because they know what can happen. They know the dangerous the snow it is, we all know that is beautiful, but can be very painful. This should be note by the educators and think the days or weeks break that they want to give to the students.
In conclusion the educators should be agree with this idea, and think that we more weeks to rest and enjoy the summer. During winter take precautions because can be really dangerous, and we would have more time to do many things at home or might be work, and have more time with the family. This is how the school should be because it is hard to be here everyday, and it is so boring sometimes. This is what I think that how the school should be, but every head is a different world, and that make think the people in different ways to do things. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
DBDBF971510B | It is often said that you can not make a child, teenager, or adult do what they do not want to do. Imagine starting a new school year; students are ready to learn, to take classes they will really enjoy, and to see their friends. It comes time to pick up their schedule and they see that there is some classes that they really would not like to take but those classes are required for them to take. A students starts stressing because there is no way they can change their schedule since those classes are required. I believe students should not be required to take a music class, art class, or drama class because it would not only affect them but it would also affect their grades and their future, students would skip the class; making their attendance bad, and students might show up to the class but they would not put in the effort they need in order to recieve the credit.
In many cases, students who do not like the classes they are taking will not do the work in order to get a good grade. Having good grades is what makes your GPA great. We all know that having good grades and keeping a good GPA is very important when it comes to college and universities. Students will need to attend a college or a university in order to get a good paying job. By requiring students to take these classes, you are forcing them to learn something they do not need in the future or that will not fall in their career field. For example, a student might want to work at a fast food restuarant in the future but in high school this students was required to take a class that has nothing to do with it. How would taking a music class help this student achieve their goal of working at a fast food restuarant? Many people may argue that taking an art class should be required because it opens the mind on being creative but again what does an art class have to do with what a student wants to be in the future? Unless that students wants to be an artist of course.
Secondly, if you force a student to take a class they do not want to take, they would just skip the class or just won't show up that whole school day. Having good attendance is also very important to have because if students do not have good attendance they get put on an attendance chart. An attendance chart is a chart where students have to sign in at the time they got to a class and sign out at the time they left that class. If a students keeps skipping the class they do not like, their grades get worse because they are not recieving the work they need to due to skipping class and their attendance keeps worsening which will only get them into bigger trouble. For instance, where I live if a student does not show up to school for more than fifteen days they get put into a juvenile detention center. Requiring such classes that should be electives will not motive a student to come to school because they are really not learning anything important from those classes.
Lastly, every high school student knows that they need a certain amount of credits in order to graduate. In order to recieve those credits a students grades, GPA, and attendance must be excellent. Requiring such classes that should be electives will not motivate a student to get good grades, good GPA, or good attendance. If anything making these classes required will only make these students less motivated into coming to school and earning those high school credits.
In conclusion, forcing or requiring students to take these classes that should be electives would affect them mentally. It would affect them mentally because they might not be as good as the other people in that class. Students should not be required to take such classes like art, music, or drama; those classes should stay as electives. Helping every student learn new material, graduate, and get them into college should be our main focus instead of making them take classes they do not need to. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
DBDE16551908 | I think the best way is to work as a group. You might ask why. is the best way students get to learn, For example; I'm the type of student that like to hear about peoples opinion. By listining to other people opinin give the other student a idea on how the project or the assigment should be done. When student get the chance to express they idea they feel confident no fear to express themselve.
Many students like to work bby themselve, therefore no other student interrupt the by asking to many question. Most of them already have a topic to talk about they already have a plan. For Example student that work alone they mostly working at their own pace, working alone give then the chance of finishing on time.
Working as a group give the student the chance of dividing the work in different sections, For example; this student would do this part, the pther student would design the project, the other student would do the research. Dividing the project in different part let the student look or choose the part the thing is easy to do ot they know how to do it already.
Student get to meet new people, by doing a project like a group student somtime don't get to choose who they work with, The profesor might give the students a group of people they never meet before. working as a group with new people let you find a new ways to work or write. For example you meet this new student who make a T chart and write the good about this topic and the negative side about the topic next to it. After looking at it he decide what side he should talk about.
You get things done a lot faster by doing in groups as I said before working with a group let the work get done a lot faster, it's give the people the chance of focusing and the part they have to get done. If you finish your part of the project or assigment, you can volunteer to help other team mate. For example someone that works by themselve might need more time, because she's working by her self and you get the chance to volunteer to help her out on something, she might found difficult to do.
In my conclusion, working like a group it teach the students to listen to other peoples thoughts and, it's the best way students work as one. But other peolpe would say that working alone is the best choice, because it teach the student how to make decision on their own and how they should write their own paper with anybody helping them out. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
DBE977177080 | Have you ever found something on the ground and picked it up and pretended that is was yours.
That right there is called a lie and its really bad because you dont know if that money you found or that toy you found was somebod's when they come back to look for it its gone because somebody else just walked away with there stuff that they spent there money on. When I was a kid I would always see this stuff, people would drop there stuff and I would pick it up and give it back to them or tell them they dropped it and hand it over to them. Usually when people find stuff just laying around the first thing to come to mind is take it but that isnt very smart because you never know whos it is or where it came from, and taking if its not your is stealing. Many people say leave it where you found it because people will comeback looking for there stuff, because nobody leaves there stuff somewhere and then just walks away with out knowing or caring. I know many schools teach this because when I was at my elementary school there would always be signs all over the place talking about leave it where you found it and dont take whats not yours, many kids listened to that in my school but sometimes people just dont care and thats not okay because they might not even need it and just want it. Needing it is like you have to have something or its really important to you and if you dont have it you would have to struggle to find, but if you really need something then I am pretty sure you can buy it from any nearby stores. Wanting something is like you dont have to have it but you just want it to brag or to have fun with it or you just dont really care and dont need it but just want to take something that you can buy, even though your not struggling or going through any trouble you just felt like doing the action you did and dont really care.
If you find something dont take it
If you see somebody drop something give it back to them
Be aware of your actions
Dont listen to pear pressure
Be helpful
Be kind
This lesson is very important because many people now dont do this stuff and just take and many parent dont really care anymore so thats when the school has to step in and teach the young kids whats wrong and whats right. When somebody drops something always hand it back why you say, because if you drop something and you think you lost it and it was your favorite toy or a toy that you spent your money on and really liked it, what if somebody just saw it and took it how would you feel, probably mad, sad,upset, you would be very upset because your favorite toy is gone and you cant get it back because the person that took it does not really care and didnt need it but just wanted it or took it because there was nobody there. Now imagine you drop your favorite toy and somebody saw you drop it and ran up to you to give it back to you how would you feel, probably happy, proud, delighted, because that person gave it back and didnt have any intentions with it or didnt think about even taking it they just wanted to give it back because they are not the owners of the item that was found on the ground but the owner that dropped it is right in front of them, the owner of the item could of just walked away and never realized they dropped it until they needed to use it for something. I lost my iPad years ago because the person that saw it took it and didnt really care do I know who it is no because I never payed attention to who took it I just was really happy and didnt realize what they were gonna do, and didnt think of this stuff happening to me when it did happen I was very upset and had to use my moms phone until my dad would buy me a phone. Thats why this lesson is very important to show kids that taking something that isnt yours is not smart or needed, many people dont care but when it happens to them they care and ask there self why did this happen to me is because you didnt leave what you took where it was found so the person that saw the item you own they did the same thing you just did, they took it and you will probably never see it again. Many items are very expensive like phones people love there phones and can never get off it and when somebody cracks there phone they go nuts and get mad because that crack can make your phone glitch or tweak, but if somebody lost there phone I already know that they would be so mad because nowadays phones are over $1,000 and they can be more expensive then that so when they lose there phone and find out somebody took it they wouldnt be very happy and probably go every where to look for it and would do anything to get it back, because phones are so important to people and sometimes they need it for calling somebody to pick them up or they would be stuck at a place for a long time or to call for help if somebody needs it. If somebody stole my phone I would get very angry and sad because the item I just lost and somebody picked it up or stole it is very expensive and isnt easy to buy because new phones are like the cost of a used car that you can buy from the internet. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
DBF44F842C57 | Dear Generic_Name
It is a honor for me to respond your statement about human individuality and I agree with your statement and i believe that be yourself in a world is hard. The world is something that the human we can not answer and be yourself is definitely the same is hard everything is hard but you can get a lot achievements for do and treat the best the you can.
First, I think the when you are alone and the city or other place and you got this situation you are alone there is not family, friends, parents nobody is there but you have to be sure that you can live without people that grow and start think what is going to happen. I believe that everyone can do everything that we want each achieve or something else because everyone can be smart, we are the people that we wanna be and yes if you are alone in the a big world you are going to scared first you have to work and pay everything that you want but that is help you to get the greatest accomplshment.
Second, be yourself is everything that all people want because to can express the real person that you are not a fake person cause if you are in a meeting or school or whatever place you have to be yourself and demonstrate the person who are you inside the feeling the you have all the characteristics that you have the point is to desmonstrate the world the you can be yourself and make more to get something else and be something else.
Next, desmonstrate the person who are you one reason is you can get more friends because your are showing to other person who real you are.
In clonclusion, be yourself in a world is more better then not we have to continue trying the person who wanna be for get more achievements and other things. Thanks for give me this opportunity to response you what i think and give you my opinion.
Sincerely. | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
DC099826F469 | People is always trying to make you be someone else or follow new tendences ,especially in this time everyone is trying to have the same haircut,color hair,or body. A lot people is afraid to be themselves which is mean show to the world who they really are. For these and many reasons is why i am agree with Emerson's statement because if you obtain to be yourself you are gonna be unique,you are gonna follow your dreams,and you are gonna be confident.
Everyone is trying to do the same things that someones else does, but imagine being unique you would be different from other people you would play or practice any sports that you want. You can get your own style use or create your own clothes, and start to use your imagination. You do not have to be worry for follow any fashion because you would have your own sunshine.
Dreams? I am pretty sure that you have dreams like I do, but my dreams migth be differents from yours, probably you want to be a doctor and i want to be a singer. However if you get to find yourself you are follow your owns dreams you will be more happy that anyone else doing the things that you love. You are gonna enjoy your life every single day, every moment ,and everywhere. You alwalys are gonna get the positive side of the things even in your bad days because you are gonna love what you have and what you do.
In this time be confident is something really hard for many people but if you are a confident person you will not care about what people say, which is mean you are not gonna care about they opinions because you will be focus in your goals .You will belief in yourself, in your decisions do not matter what will happen. You will be an example for many people who does not felling in the same way that you do and you migth inspire them to follow their dreams.
In conclusion be yourself does not matter what people say or what they want for you,live your own life because life is only one. Get your own goals ,and do not try to be like someone else, do not follow their style because if you do not be yourself ,you are never ever gonna be happy with your life and you will not get all the things that you want in your future. Get your own sunshine just try it, it is inside of you and it is waiting for you ,Love and be yourself. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
DC1271D1294D | No one should leave this world without taking a trip to Generic_City! Generic_City is an amazing destination. What do you think about the incredible sites like the white house and Abraham Lincoln monument. Are you interested in museums? for example the Air and Space museum and the Art museum. You could also observed the extraordinary Cherry Blossom. You wouldn't want to miss this would you?
My first stop would be at the breathtaking sites. The white house is a really old house that was built a long time ago. All presidents of the United States have lived there except George Washington. I would also make a stop by Abraham Lincoln monument. This giant sculpture has an amazing texture and is a great view to just relax.
Next, i would visit some museums. In the
Air and Space museum you could have a memorable experience. You could learn about rocks from the moon and about the first rocket that was sent to the moon. Also you get to see the first airplane that was created by two brothers. In the art museum you have fun gazing at really good pieces of art.
Finally, taking a little trip to the Cherry Blossom wouldn't be so bad. Who would miss having a great view to relax? People that have been to the Cherry Blossom before has enjoyed a lot. When you go with family it can be fun taking in the gorgeous sight. People usually go in the afternoon because it looks mesmerizing and no one would want to leave.
In conclusion, no one would regret taking a trip to Generic_City This amazing sites, breathtaking museums, and the mesmerizing Cherry Blossom are not leaving and someone should visit them and enjoy it. pack your bags now and take a trip you would never regret to Generic_City with your family and friends. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 |
DC247D62DB3E | Why do people need to follow their own instincts and ideas?
I think people should make their own decision because they have to follow their own instincts and their own ideas. They have to believe themselves because if you not believe on you ,so no one can believe on you too.
First of all,I think people should make their own decision because they have to believe on themselves. They don't have to think as much because the ideas come from their mine not from someone else. When they have to think of some ideas that mean their don't have to ask ideas from anyone. When they have to do some writing that mean they don't have to copy from someone or from internet.
Secondly,I think people have to follow their own instinct because when something happen to you that mean you don't have to wait for someone to help you solve a problem. They don't have to seek for guidance because you have confidence in yourselves already.
In addition,They have to believe on themselves because if you not believes on you by the way no one can't believes on you too. For example,like when you have to do a presentation in class and you have to present in front of teacher but you not believes that you can do it, so it mean the teacher might not believes on you too. After that is might effect to your grade because when you have to present you keep asking teacher that you say the right thing or wrong.
Conclusion,I believes that people should make their own decision because they have to believes on themselves first before they ask for some help. They have to believes on themselves because if you not believes on you by the way no one else can't believes on you too. Lastly I hope all people believes on themselves first because if you just listen to someone else but you not listen to yourselves that mean you not have enough value. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
DC2E6750CDEC | Nowadays we live in a world where everything has to be perfect if you wanna fit into this society, therefore humans have made up an exteriotype of how people are supposed to dress, look, act and live. We all have the right to do whatever we want and be whoever we are unless you want to hurt someone. We are free to do what is better for ourselves without being judge, so why do we let society control us?. People should not be afraid to be who they are and show the world what they are made of. All humans are different, we all come with different shapes, sizes, personalities, skills and that is what makes us beautiful, the power of being ourselves.
Experiences make you grow and morph you into a better person, life makes you realize how bold and smart humans are, in addition to this we all have been raised differently so trying to follow an exteriotype is like letting go the opportunity you have been given by life to find out what you are made of, to find oud your power, your way of doing things and solving problems, and last but not least you are letting go the opportunity to make up your own thoughts just because you are giving people the chance to control your mind and the way you think.
I totally agree with this statement, to be yourself in an environment that is constantly trying to make you something else is one of the best decisions you could make, perhaps just by being yourself you could teach someone else how to improve its personality, or maybe you could show them how to act when it comes to solve an issue, theres is multiple opportunities we miss just by trying to be someone else . All humans have a superpower within their selves that they could share with everyone, therefore, trying to fit in, follow an exteriotype and trying to act the same way the others do is equal to not take advantage of our power wisely.
We are afraid of showing who we are because, to us is more important what they would say and think about it. We care more about their reaction towards us and what we do not realize is that maybe they would like more who we actually are than the person that we are trying to be. Once humans face the truth and notice how valuable and special we are, that will mean that we have gotten the greatest accomplishment in life, which is being ourselves no matter what the others say or ask us to do. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
DC33D5F69792 | In China we don't have the thing that Ralph Waldo Emerson. I know Ralph Waldo Emerson think he is grow up because he beyond he has already mastered. In my opinion people are different, so not everyone can grow up from beyond the things his already mastered. If they beyond the game that they already have play the best, they are not grow up. And there are three reasons I disagree about what Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote looking for new things and learn it make people grow, some small vital can make people grow up, and other vital matter can make people grow up. I am disagree with Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote.
People can look for new things and learn the things to grow up. The new things are not for human control. Students learn new things make their knowledge be more, they can grow up in this way. This is a example of my mom. When she first time can to America, she didn't know any English. She is learn English for three years, now she can talk a little bit English to other. Nobody can say she is not grow up, she learn a new Lagrange she never know before. In my mom story I know not the things you have already mastered in past make you grow up, the new things can make you grow up, too.
People can have many small things that they don't care make they grow up. In a science experiment if you get a small mistake, the all experiment will be destruction by that little mistake. People who learn science, if they make that small mistake they will get their master abusive, nobody knows if the experiment will make people change. I think this is a big things will make people who learn the science grow up. They can control it is happened or not. In this example I learn the little things happen let they know the mall will become the big thing than it will bother you life.
People can have many things in their life can make they grow up. When you go to the society, you will find it is so different between school and society. When you go to the work, you can feel effort is not the only choice, it is many way can get you go to the high lever. If you know this one, now you really become a adult. When you have a wedding with a girl. That will be you best time time, you grow up again. Then if you have a baby, you will get what is the really mean about responsibility. Responsibility make you get a word called grow up. Many things make people grow up the work, wife, kids, and other things make people really grow up.
Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." It may work for Ralph Waldo Emerson or other people, but I disagree what he say. People are different, they have many different way to make they grow up, not the only way like Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote. People can study new things to make their knowledge be more. They can learn the things from the small mistake that they made. They can grow up from society. In China it has so many reason make you grow up. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
DC391957FF10 | I am agree with the acthor Ralph Waldo Emerson, Most the time in order to be successful we must know the most important tip about what we doing. For example my past
It's been teach me how can I master a lot situaction in my life now. I am confident in every single step or move that I'm doing. At time I may not succed the way I want but I took my mistake like a lesson which I will be more careful in my next move. I understand that the only way to grew up in life, business, etc is doing what we know better and for that we need to appliying our past too. In our past is the best experiences, that we also have learned the most impiortant lesson of our life.
In my personal life I have been victim of humiliation by my ex husband, now I am trying heal the pain that he left in my heart.
This time I am learned a huge lesson with the relationship. And now I will do better in this part of my personal life with my next partner. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
DC467256CD82 | Technology, 21st centuries finest product. nearly everyone loves technology, is it really that beautiful? When i was a kid people used to say "technology will end our social life." I didnt believe that then, but now i see what they were trying to say.
Primarily technology's goal is to make certain tasks easier, not to make us anti-social or make us obese. In my opinion technology has a great potential, and we are not using it to the full potential, we are supposed to use it to make simple task easier, but people are spoiling this potential by instead of making our own food we now order it from a restaurant which is ten times unhealthier. Another thing that is a huge problem is people building their life around technology, if they lose that technology they think they'll die. Everyone uses social apps on their phone, and that's a huge issue because that is one of the main reasons of people choosing social media over having conversations face to face.
Secondly, technology has it's pros as it has it's cons. One of the main advantages of technology is minimizing the waste of time in simple daily life tasks. For example, before technology people used to communicate with mails which took a long time to arrive at the designated place, however currently you can shorten that whole process to only a minute or two. Also with technology we can make waste free houses, cars, planes, and many other things by making them operate with electricity rather than fossil fuels which harms our planet. We can harvest electrical energy by solar panels, wind turbines, hydroelectric turbines. Another great thing about harvesting electrical energy is that they are infinite unless a disaster happens and suddenly all our water vaporizes or the sun gets blocked or the wind stops blowing. Until disasters like those happens we are good to go with waste free energy.
Third of all I think that technology is a great invention for the human kind. Although it has multiple harmful effects for people, the way to cure those are as easy. If we stop building our life around social media or technology, and keep technology as just a secondary communication device. Technology has come a far way from where it started. Once it was used just to power a light bulb, now its used to power our cars, houses, phones, cities, everything you see that is human built has some sort of technology in it.
Finally all these great inventions, all of these dazzling things took our attention and isolated us from the others. I think that technology is a brilliant invention but also it is a very harmful one for our social life. Human is a social creature by it's nature, if something blocks the socializing part of being human it will end badly. If someone tries to change a creature's nature it will try to avoid it, for thousands of years it has evolved to its current state, and now we are trying to change it... All Im trying to point out is technology is a beneficial element of our life but social-life is not one of them. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
DC56EF65D59D | "Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"
I agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success, the life consists in make mistakes, nobody is perfect, everyone in any moment of our life we failure, but the purpose it's stand up with faith and enthusiasm, and doesn't give up; failure is not something bad like many people think, that's the reason why too much people feel lees than other's, when they make failure's in they life, so we resolve our mistakes with sadness, without enthusiasm, or fear of what people can say, believe in yourself is the key of an better life, and failure in our life it's just the teacher of our own future.
Churchill's statement bring a beautiful statement of what successful can be signify in our life, so success it's something what everyone can obtain in any situation, however, it's the most wonderful opportunity for our own willingness,while, in my other hand failure means practice of our own future, because failure it's just the perfect manner to learn, to be better with the past of the time. How your going to teach your children's, if you didn't make mistakes? Failure make people with experience, "if you don't make mistakes,you don't learn" and you can't teach other people, when they are in warning to make the same mistakes that you did before, this is a great example of family, so you need to be the example of your children's helping to show the danger, but as well the wonderful manner to see the failure with enthusiasm to commence again.
The failure make better people? absolutely, because mistakes sample the things what we didn't wanted to see before; failure to failure probably it's tired, but have a great recompense; failure prepare our own life, for example if we failure the test, probably next time we are going to study better than the first time, but we get a great experience to see with better perspective than before. The point of failure is what we need to live failure in our own life, for understand and see with different perspective than before, failure create a maturity person with experience, and big knowledge;however this great statement it's a example of persevered,progress, and growth in our own life to get experience, maturity, productivity, and fortress.
My conclusion is basically in the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success, so make mistakes is no bad it's part of life, just don't give up and show that we can be better, we can do better than before;failure is the teacher of your future, don't be fear on what people can be say about your decision's, or you manner of see your failure, it's fine make mistakes "we learn something new",but it's important the manner that we see it, with enthusiasm or sadness?,because we continue,we start again,and we can get better results. Failure it's the experience of the teacher, of a persevering, progressing, and productivity person,life it's not perfect, but depends the perspective in what way do you see life, so" we need to make mistakes to be the teacher of the tomorrow". | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
DC5DAF538DF2 | During the World War II, most of the people were influenced by the behavior of the people. For instance, a lot of people choose to follow the anti-Semitic politics of Hitler and the Nazis because they were afraid of the death because the Nazis convinced them to follow them. Indeed, by setting a good example you success to convince them because you use both of the major things to influence, the feelings and the acts. You try to reach his heart by the sensitivity and by the concrete you show him that it is easy to do it. In this way, when you are setting a good example you are using the feelings of the people in order to show them the better behavior to adopt. The fear, the happiness, the solemnity can influence a choice of a person and that is why it is the better way to persuade. Through the fashion, the advertisements, the politics the sensitivity is always utilized to change the mind of someone. The behavior is the only thing that can help someone to change their opinion because trough it you can transmit all of your feelings to your speaker. Furthermore, people can be persuade by acts more easily than by words. So, by setting a good example, you can also influence people by showing them the better way to do something. Although people disagree with philosopher, physician, and humanitarian like Albert Schweitzer and affirm that there are better ways to convince someone, people should consider that to set a good example is the better way to persuade somebody.
Firstly, the behavior is using the feelings to convince people. Indeed, whatever things you do to influence someone you use their feelings. And this is the best way because the feelings are something that stay in your mind and touch you directly and can let you do things even bad. The first example is in politics. A politician who takes a solemn tone and does a serious, and sad speech will influence your opinion and by modifying your state of mind he will transmit these feelings to show you what he wants you to think. Martin Luther King said: "I have a dream" so immediately you know that this dream is something anchored in his heart and he will give you all of his arguments to persuade you. Then, the second example is advertisement. As well as the fashion than the TV shows, each publicity lets you feel so be it fear, so be it happiness. They carry away people with them in their opinion and by choosing beautiful musics or pictures they help the spectator to feel the good vibes that the actors or advertising want to give you.
Secondly, by setting a good example you can convince people to do acts. The first reason is people of our generations need to see to trust someone. And this is the reason why you need to show the example to someone to help him to trust you and give him the directions to follow. It was always easier to speak instead of to act but people want to see to know this is the better choice. For example, when you are doing shopping most of the girls prefer doing it in the shop instead of in line because women want to see their clothes to try them and be convinced this dress or this shirt is the better. The other reason is that you always want to have a concrete thing. So when you show the example you demonstrate that what you do is possible and affordable to you all and you encourage them to do it with you and this is what influence others. You give a proof of concrete and the speaker only need a little bit of will. For example during an humanitarian mission, if you are the leader of this one you need to show them the example not only with your behavior but also in what you must accomplish. If you are here to rebuild a public building you will do it with the volunteers to help them and lead the group.
To conclude, the example is the best way to influence people for two reasons. The first one is obviously the aspect of the feelings. The transmission of a posture or opinion can help you to do a choice. The second one is the aspect of the concrete part. You give the example of what to do and the others can do it easily. Finally, there is not better way to convince people as Albert Schweitzer said. Because there is only one way which combines feelings and action and it is the good example by your own behavior. | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
DC6EDCFCFBC2 | Students should participate in extracurricular activity because it can help them find new friends and skills or talent moreover helps them out of trouble.
First and foremost, it can help students get out of trouble like getting into fight or getting detention. Students can also get away from being a bully. Like other students they show you bad influence. Students makes you do it to other people is like your adopting it from them and it makes you think that it's ok to do bad stuff like bullying or trash talking to other students. Students can also be out of trouble in social media by poser. posers use your name and picture in social media to get a lot of followers or to get someone in a relationship.
Secondly, students can socialize like meet new people of friends. Students can also find their new skills and talent by participating in any activities like sports or being a students council. Moreover students can also share their interest in sports like playing soccer they can show you what part of that game their interested in. Sharing your interest to others makes other people people share what their interest. Also sharing each others interest can lead you you guys to be a good friends.
Thirdly, students can have better future by getting their resume. Resume help students get a good job in the future. Students can be a doctor when they grow up and they can also be teacher or coach. Students can have better life, they can buy a big house and a nice car. students can also help their family.
Lastly, students should participate in extracurricular activity because it can help them get out of trouble, socialize, and have better future.
In conclusion students should participate in extracurricular activity because they can meet new people, get out of trouble and they can also get their resume to get better job and be successful in life. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
DC77E1C50756 | My prompt is about how everyone has a skill or talent and I have to identify a talent or skill that I have and explain how I develop and use it. Well I'm an Athletic girl. I play different sports during some seasons, for example when soccer season has ended. Another sport I'm kinda good at is basketball. I play sports in school and outside of school. A few other things I can do is sing and dance.
I'm going to start with soccer. So I started playing soccer in 2018. I dont really remember my age but I do remember the year. When I started playing soccer was when I lived in Generic_City. I played there for to seasons. I played in the spring and fall seasons. When I played in the spring it was the best thing ever like I'm telling you I literally fell in love with soccer at that time. My team was a good team we were called the sharks. I was number 14 and I was happy because that's the number that both of my cousins jersey numbers are. Anyways, we won a few games and lost a few ones but we always played good, we gave our best, and we gave it all. After, spring season ended I played on the fall season. I'm going to say that fall season was okay it wasn't as good as spring season but I still enjoyed it. My jersey number changed in that season so then I was number 16. I haven't played since 2019 ended but I will start playing again pretty soon and I'm really happy and excited.
Now I'm going to talk about my basketball season. Last year in 7th grade I was in Generic_School and they put up the girls basketball season was coming. I was interested in it so I decided to sign up and try-out for the team. I can't lie try-outs were rough but at the end of the day I gave my best and it was fun. A few weeks later they put up the paper of the people who made it and I saw my name and I was so happy. Anyways, that season ended, then school ended, and I moved to Generic_City. School started a few months later girls basketball season started. I was happy so I sign up. I went to try-outs for the whole week. At the end of Friday which was the last day of try-outs the coach Generic_Name told the girls who made the team and who didn't and guess who made the team MEE!!!!. I was so happy my friends and I celebrated on the way out. The whole season was great, I made so many fun memories with the girls and I was just so happy.
My third skill is dancing. I love to dance everyday. Like I'm always dancing in the car, shower, kitchen, my room, just everywhere. I love it and I enjoy it very much. It's something that could never leave me. Im going to start taking dancing classes so I'm very excited for that. One app that I always use to dance is Dubsmash it has different song that I can dance to. I'm always dancing to a song in the car when a song comes up and it has beats I just be going crazy.
Finally, the last thing I love to do is sing. Singing for me is just very enjoyable and calming. I sometimes get on my feelings and cry but it's just because they are really good songs and I cry because I'm happy or sad. I love to sing the songs of Sydney R. But my top favorite songs to sing are All of Me, Into you, Love don't Change, and How you gonna. And yeah these are all the stuff that I do as a skill or talent. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
DC7961960711 | Activities that are being done in school will health benefit for most students. School activities will bring enjoyment for some students, and they would see there friends which makes them happy.
I agree that the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families because of students needing more time on homework and studying, students wanting more time on other hobby's, and students would like to choose the right activities for them.
Students would like to have there own time to finish homework and studying. Some students would like to be involved in extracurricular activities which makes some of them having a hard time in school or having good grades, because they don't have the time for studying and completing homework, and also it makes them stressful because they might be having hard time to understand the teacher in the classroom.
Students would like to have more time on other hobby's that they enjoy to having. Having extracurricular activities after school or before school will be affecting the student in some ways like students won't be having much time to hang out with friends or playing video games, and also it would make the students really tired for school or free time.
students choosing what activity they want will be easy for them. Students would probably choose the activities that there good at or if they want to try it, and it helps them trying out new activity because it will be health benefit for them and they get to meet new people.
Some might say that the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families, because they will need more time on homework and studying;however, being involved in extracurricular activities can help with scholarships. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
DC7F27315FCF | I agree that we should have positive attitude in life to be success in life. Showing positive attitude to human beings and animals by not harming others and the nature. Staying and spending time with positive attitude people is also a key to a successful life. It`s also important to show positive attitude it will help us to become better and successful in life. Show positive attitude you will get the same positive attitude back.
If we show positive attitude to human beings and animals, by treating people with good maners and helping them out with any kind of work in life that is for a good cause we will get the same positive attitude back from that human who we were helping out. Same goes for the animals treat them well they will be safe in returun that animal might protect you from harm. Having a positive attitude people will not judge you for being wrong or innocent because of the positive attitude you have.
Is positive attitude important? Yes, because if you want to be successful in life you need to have and show positive attitude with that you also have to show respect and responsibility. For example going for a job interview showing positive attitude might get you a job. Many people love positive people because of their way they talk to other people, how they act, and the important things that the perosn might have done. Staying with positive people and hanging out with positive people is also a important, because that`s one place you learn positive attitude and it`s a key to be succuessful in life.
Positive attitude is a key to a good life, positive attitude people don`t show attitude over small things or fuss about somthing that is not important. They let things go by easy and don`t care about the samll things that won`t affect them. Even if we have positive attitude we should not treat ourself by saying we a king or a role model, instead we should help others into having a successful life by helping them out with positive attitude and showing what is good for them.
Finally, but not last I agree to be success in life you need to have positive attitude. Positive attitude is the key to success in life. Showing the way you care for others and animals, making positive thoughts and thinking. Positive attitude people stay in their circle which is a good thing helps them be focus in life and have success in life. Show positive attitude to others you will get the same attitude back. So spread positive attitude and making this world a better place to be successful in life. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
DC88C1130FD9 | I agree with Bristish Prime Misnister Winston Churchill. The failure comes before of success So, I think that everybody had a failure in their lives but I think that is good because we are learning about our failure and I think that the failure is important becuse with the our failures we can be a better people for the socity or community. I think like Generic_Name goes to university and fail science class, Generic_Name had a failure but he can think about it what happen or that is wrong in science class and then, Generic_Name study a lot for recover science class. the final of semester Generic_Name recover science class, Generic_Name had a success because Generic_Name study a lot to recover science class and Generic_Name doesn't loss the hope to recover science class. So I think that the success is good for us because the success make us better. I believe that my failure that I had before that help me to be a better person to learn more to do thinks that I don't believe that i can do and the thing that a have is thanks of my success that I had it. I think if you have a lot success it is because you are donig well. If you have mistake in your life just learn about it because that help you to don't do it agian the same mistake. My concluison is The life is amazing and maybe in the future we can have fails or we can have success but the most important is that you learn abour yours mistake and yours failure because that helps you to be a better person in the community and the socity and in your life. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
DCB1A6F255A8 | Technology is something many people use in their daily lives, I belive technology has definintly made an imppact on people over time. Phones, cell phones, laptops, tv's have all been upgrated during the past couple of years, technology can effect us in both negative and positive ways but i belive that their are more negative's than positive's.
One reason I belive technology has more of a negative impact is because it causes a lack of communication with friends and with family, I myself have witnessed and expirinced this. Another reason in why it would be negative is the children using technology. Children can become more obsesed with electronnics than most teenagers and adults, I have a little brother that recived an ipad as a gift from my parents whe he was only three years old, only because he would'nt let my mother use her cell phone in peace, getting that ipad might have been the biggest mistake thats my parents could have made. My little brother (when he recived the Ipad) stopped playing with his toys, stopped watching his favorite show which was spongbob, stopped eating as much and also stopped listening to direction and became rebelious. Everytime one of the members in my family would try to talk to him it would be like he was zonned out; he just would not listen. Another negative impact this was would be that my little brother would yell when someone tried taking his Ipad away and thats when my parents knew it was a very huge problem, so they decided to put his Ipad away for a while as well as our electronics or atleast keep them out of his sight and over time I got my little brother back and my parents got their son back.
Secondly, technology can distract people in many negative ways, one way is safey, you could be walking, driving, on a boat it does not matter, but if you're on your phone and not aware of your surrounding, or not paying mind to them, than you could get hurt. Their have been many reports on people getting in car accident or getting hit all because they were not paying attention, but overall their have been more incidents while driving.
There are some ways that technology has also been benefial to us. Some ways that technology has been beneficial is if you work in a job that requires you to have a computer or laptop to make work easier, or having a busy work schedule that you can type into your phone and it would alert you about the things you have to get done. Another benefial way that technology has helped is shopping! eveybody loves shopping but somtimes you can't go out and do some shopping for yourself becuse maybe its been a long week and your exausted from work or you're injured, as well as having children. Children are the worst when it comes to doing things for yourself, which is why there is technology to help you out, you can do online shopping for grocieries, clothing, exc without having to leave the comfort of your own home.
In conclusion, technology overall has its ups and down, there are times where it can be beneficial and there are also times where it can be a distraction but it has definetly helped in the past in many ways one really big one is hospitals, technology has saved many lives and helped alot of familys so it really depends how you use technology for it to actually be benefitial. It's not good to take advantage of it, you have to use your brain as much as you can, people depend on technology too much and that's what causes problems. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
DCB9EAF9C92A | No i think students should not have any cell phones at school at all because there could a lot of noises , and maybe it could be distracting to other students . That's why i think students should not have cell phones during the school time .
To begin with student should not have cell phones during the school time because it could make a lot of noises . so if you have a cell phone right and your in class and its in high volume and you receive a call or a text message that's not right because teachers are trying to teach you and all your doing is making noise . That's why i think we should not have cell phones during the school time .
In addition i think we should not have cell phones in school hours because it could be distracting to the students or even the teachers , because last week there was a girl texting during class and the teacher saw her so he had to stop his lesson and take her phone away and rite her a referral . So that's distracting and a waist of time isn't it. That's why i think they should not have cell phones during school hours because its distracting .
Those are the reasons why they should not allow cell phones during the school hours because is distracting and it makes to many noises . | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
DCBE020F2A4F | I agree honesty is the best policy but sometimes honesty is bad beacuse you can hurt people feeling and people dont fell the same with you when your hones with them. Also someone that like when people are honesty with them they wont care because it good to be honesty with them beacuse what if there doing something bad that you dont like and your hones with them and you tell to fix that thing that where doing that you dont like. Another thing if you get in trouble in school be hones with your teacher and tell them what happened be hones dont ever lie to your teacher. Then if your in a relationship with some and you dont like them anymore dont be shy then the true be hones. finally if you go to a store and you tell something from the store and they tell you are you stealing something tell them the true beacuse if you leave with out paying you can get in trouble with the police that why be hones with some ask you if your stealing something tell them then true be hones. That why i agree with honesty. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
DCCA609D1212 | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson once said, "Success isn't around the corner. You'll have to work as hard as you can until you reached your limits. Always trying new things will make you grow." Life can be great, if you know how to make the best out of it. Although, it may seem that trying is hard and it's a waste of time, it is actually true that trying can make you achieve your goals.
Trying my hardest showed me who I really am. I accomplished some of my goals, but I always try to be inspired. This helped me get through my problems. None of my goals have been easy, they're hard, but that doesn't stop me. My plan is to be successful in life and not to be a failure. Sometimes I loose and sometimes I win.
I used to be 275 pounds, I wasn't happy with the way I looked. I also experience random pain in my heart. My body was telling me to start loosing weight. I really wanted to go and loose all of my weight, but my lazy side said to just sit in the couch and play video games all day. I had to get my life together and started going to the gym, the following day. Day by day, I started to feel something different. I felt more energetic and strong. I ate healthy and those heart pains were gone. My parents were always there for me to encourage me. I also wanted to be an example to my little brother that anything is possible, as long as you try.
I lost 58 pounds to be exact. I feel lighter than ever. I went beyond my limits to accomplish my goal. All hard work always rewards you as it did for me. My reward was having cheat days. I always love cheat days because you can forget about your diet for a day and eat whatever you want. Cheat days are the best to have, but not all the time. You can loose track and fall.
Accomplishments are hard to achieve, but it's a lot of fun to do them. They can make you a better person and makes your life so much easier. As long as you try your best, you can do anything. My grandpa told me that trying is your best buddy. It can make you push yourself and it can take you places you've never seen in your life. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
DCDDFA12E124 | We humans aren't really perfect, there hasn't been one human that has never made a mistake, for example the person that is writing this prompt, has had a decent amount of failures in his life. One time he was taking a really hard test like this one, but he didn't know that it was going to decide if he is going to attend college or not, so he just sat down on the chair in Generic_School Library and he began to take the test, he had to take another year of high school, but he figured that he doesn't want to fail this senior year.
If he fails again he has to graduate with a bunch of kids, that doesn't sound right, does it? i'm from a family that always want their kids to be a doctor or an engineer, and they want to show to other parents that "my child is better than yours". So they kept putting pressure on me for months and years but it didn't seem to help a lot, but I had to make a change one day not because I was trying to make my parents happy or impress the other parents, but I was tired, I was tried of not having respect in the family, like anything that i said didn't mean anything to them, so I had to change, and with that change came a lot of consequences, for example losing my friends, not leaving the house as much as I used to, working less so it means less money on my paycheck by the end or every two weeks, but i didn't care as much, because I knew that this is going to be my last year at Generic_School.
I will learn from my defeats, and make sure that they wouldn't happen again, like one time I was working at Panera, my main job, and it was still my training week so I had no clue what the names for the dressing and the food was, so there is this computer above every line that tells you what the name of the food is, and it tells you all of the ingredients in the food and what kind of dressing that salad or what kind of sauce that food needs, so I followed the ingredients on the computer but i had made a peanut butter and jelly sandwich before the order i was making, and the costumer was allergic to peanut butter but i didn't know that so i made their salad with the gloves that was contacted with the peanut, so I gave the salad to my friend to bag it and he asked me "Hey Generic_Name! did u make sure to change your gloved after each order?" and I said "I'm sorry, I didn't know that i have to change my gloves every time." he said "It's fine, just change your gloves and make another salad." after that i have always changed my gloves after every order.
By the way my side job is detailing cars at all in one auto group located in Generic_City, VA. It's not a really easy job, but the pay is good, $50/hour, for a teenager that's a really good amount of money and imagine me working every day for a year and working 5 hours every day, yea, that is a lot of money for someone like me, last year i bought a lot of stuff with the money i made, I bought a car, a new phone, a really expensive watch, and a bunch of other stuff that u get when u have a lot of money, they don't affect your life, but they are just there, for entertainment purposes, like who really needs to have a Nintendo switch and a ps4 at the same time, like what type normal person would do that, you only do this type of stuff when you have too much money, and having too much money and not knowing what to do with it is insane.
Me failing makes me stronger, it's like you are running a marathon but every time you fall u get faster and faster, you keep getting closer to the finish line, and that is a good thing, the finish line is where we all are going to end up, but it depends what u do during this race that decides if you are going to win or not, if you keep failing and failing and not learning from it then I feel bad for you, but you have to focus and learn and decide what is good and what is not good for you, you should not be distracted by the stuff around you and your life. humans are stronger that what they think, i read somewhere that humans only use %1 of their brain capacity, imagine the day that we all would use at least %50 of it.
If you ever feel like u have be defeated in life, you are not correct, get back on your feet and started working hard again, there no way that you would do something the right way and not get a good result out of it, it's impossible to do so, unless you are pretending that you are doing it, in fact that used to be me last year, pretending like i'm doing homework, pretending like i'm listening to the teacher, but where did i go with all of that, just because I was lazy and didn't want to pay attention, I lost the race, but I got back on my feet this year, and i'm making sure that i'm happy, more than anyone else, I'm not going to let any negativity impact my life.
My dad used to tell me, he still does, but he says that "imagine you are a racing horse and you have covers on your eyes, so you would only see in front of you", apparently it makes the horse focus on the race but he said that "you have a lot of distractions on your way but focus on what you have to do and only that, nothing else. just keep running and don't let the distractions affect your life, if they do you will lose balance and either affect someone else or you are the only one that will fall over, and that is not a good thing."
In general just focus on your life have fun at times but make sure it doesn't affect anything and if it does, make sure that you, with the help of someone else or by yourself can figure out a way to resolve the situation, sometimes it's a really good option to get help from the people that you know, like for example friends and family or even the school counselor or the principal, just get some help if you think that you can't resolve it by yourself. so the former British prime minister called "Winston Churchill" is right about "success consists of going from failure without loss of enthusiasm." I agree with his opinoin. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
DCDED7261D03 | "Your character will be what yourself choose to make it" everyone should be free of deciding their own character this is important because it can help with being more confident about yourself while making difficult choices, making clear what your goals for the future are, and makes easier to show who you really are to other individuals . In the other way some people believe that our character is formed by the difficulties and influences beyond our control.
First, feeling confident about yourself is one of the best ways to succeed in life, it makes easier when deciding difficult choices, sometimes when people go through difficult moments in their lives, being confident with their self can help them choosing the best decision by just looking at the positive way of their decisions. For example, every time people visit a new locations they should feel confident with their selves while creating new friendships or business.
Secondly, setting your goals is not as easy as it sounds, because you have to know what you really want, when people know what their goals are they have to work really hard and encourage their selves to achieve it. If people chose their own character its easier to set their goals because they really know who they are. For example, one of my goals is to graduate from high school. So,I need to put a lot of effort and hard working to achieve it.
In the other way, some people claim that our character if formed by the influences beyond our control, some of those difficulties might be what your parents want or economic resources. Also, when people let others create their life choices or character they don't enjoy their life as how they want to enjoy it. Foe example, if your you let your parents decide what to do with your future, you might don't like that decision and that would not be really who you are.
In addition, making your own character influence in how you show others who you truly are, this is important because, it feels better doing something that you chose and want than doing something that other individuals what you to do or difficult situations.
In conclusion, I am agree with "John's" quote because everyone should be able do decide what that really want to become, feeling confident with their selves, having clear all their goals and work hard to achieve them all, your character shouldn't be former by influences beyond their control. You should be able to show everyone who you really are. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
DCE760033193 | The school board plans to the school for more better earth and help all in this planet.
The first reason for the school have plans is for helping the earth because the earth need more plants all the schools need plants because is good for the animals humans. I am agree the schools have one and a half hours for each schools day and when is more tree morelife is in this planet
Another reason
I agree for the children help to plant tree for help the earth each school need a gardener because is necessary care this planet. The tree is so good because when is summer is good to sit under the tree
Finally, I am not agree to other person like to mistreat a tree or animals because all the people need the tree. I am so disagree with some persons because no I like the tree the tree is so cute
In my decision i don't like when others person say to don't like the tree the tree si so pretty more when is summer i love it my favorite reason is summer because all the tree is green and when a go to the rivers is good to pass a relax day with my family or friends.
The is help to when a walk the sun is to hot the tree is fresh. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
DCE82F61BE10 | Is good idea for students to recive online courses. In my point of veiw, it will be better for students to attend to regulars classes at schools. In this way students will be able to socialize with other people. Also, they will have the opportunity to do other activities. In this days sudents recive free education and it is easy for them to attend to school. Online programs may have a cost for the courses or classes.
if students attend to schools they will learnd more about their classes because teachers will be able to teach them with enthusiasm. In the other hand, is good idea to recive classes online but you will not have the opportunity to interac with teachers or other students. If you go to school there will be a way that you can make new friends that you can share adventures and stories with them. It will be more benefit for students who go to school than students who stay at home watching their scream on the computer.
Attening school also give you the option to enroll many activies. For example, you can join the football team. music band, and the theater shows. I know a friend that he didn't like to attend school, but when he start to play for the football team at his local school, he was more exiting to speen time at school. At school you can do many actiivities. In contrast, reciving classes online can be a good option for does students that don't have the resources to go to school. For example, if they don't have a bus stop or the school is to far away. Also, for the students with special disability.
The united states have the advantage to have free education. This is a good thing for does parents with not reasourses. Parents can send students to school without worry for a monthly payment. They know that their children are in a good learning place. In the other hand, having classes online may cost a amount of your money. It will be difficult for students because they will have to find a job to soport their online paymants for the courses. In this way have classes online is not a better option for all.
Offering distance learning as an opion for students is not a good advantage for all the people who want to study. it's because many students prefer to attend to school than staying at home.
It's a good thing interac with your teachers or other students at shool. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
DCED139D2C03 | "How Small Acts of Kindness can have an Impact on Others." Happiness, Safety, Health, and Anger. people can be more happy, be more safety, and take care more of their Health and be less angry, a small act of kindness impact others to make better choices in their lives and many others good things. Kindness is a big thing in this world, without Kindness every one would be in a war. So as little of Kindness you have that can still impact other to make the right decision.
First, People will be more happy, when someone act kind to them and made them have more energy to do anything. You can have a better friendship with your friend or a family member so you can be a better person. You will have more friendships, if you are kind to others, people will respect you for your kindness and how you made them happy. People fell depress when no one act kind to them that's why people have to be kind to each other.
Second, People will be more safe, they will be less car accidents because people will be more careful when there driving. People are getting hit by cars often, when you are upset and try to cross the street and you don't look were the cars are coming from you have a big chance of being hit by a car. People will act more carefully when you doing something. Athletes will be more careful so, less injuries in all of the sports. Workers will be more careful about doing their jobs, one of the dangerous job in the world is working doing sky-fellers workers are risking their lives doing there jobs.
Third, People health will be better with an act of kindness and be less angry, people have a better health when they get an act of kindness. People will go outside every day and play sports with others in the sun and people will have more Vitamin D. Vitamin D is good for your health. Anger when people dont get kindness they will do something wrong and they will be less problems and fights. Sometimes people cant control their anger and want to get revenge or do something to someone. The other thing is people act buffoon when they are furious.
"How Small Acts of Kindness can have an impact on Others." Happiness, Safety, Health, and Anger. people can be more happy, be more safety, and take care more of their Health and be less angry, a small act of kindness impact others to make better choices in their lives and many others good things. Kindness is a big thing in this world so as little of Kindness you have that can still impact other to make the right decision. This is how an act of kindness can impact other. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
DCED9DA8896F | Technology allows people to speak to others, People cam do meny diffrent task at the at the same time It help us to make progest, Technology allows me to complete many tasks,
Many times It suppout me in my many accompaniment tasks,
Technology has the limitation of human contact . On the otherhand technology can also hart people,
It Can take all of your money from the bonk, Overall techology is good more than bad, More and more people's life change wit the help of technology, Finally technology help people to check out books, shop online, And play games. Finaly technology give us the chance to take the test on line,
Technology had posiliv or negaliive effects on people's lives and a hald good and bad inthe long run we nrrd tecnology to improve people's life and take a position on people, after all this thin call technology is the best thing in this centry, we all benefat from It in many ways,Technology allows people to make many plances,
Another person has the limitation of contact other people wit good and bad nuse,The illegally casts a vote at each of relationship to other It impurties in this time, | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
DCEE7FD21CFD | Imagine if you we're confused about which activity you should choose. There are a lot of activity you could do outdoors like for example, you could go to community parks, state parks, national parks, or other outdoor activities. On top of all of them, spending time with your friends outdoors is the most enjoyable activity of all others. A lot of people enjoys spending time with their friends because playing with the people you know is enjoyable, you can discuss things with you're friends, and they can make you comfort.
One reason, people enjoys spending time with their friends is playing with the people you know. It's not fun to play with the people you don't know, like you dont know what's their favorite game or what other kind of things they like or dislike. If you we're not playing with you're friends it's not enjoyable and it can stress you out. It will be a lot of fun playing with you're friends because they will know what you like or dislike. The people you know, you can always discuss things with them.
Another reason, people enjoys spending time with their friends is discussing things with them whether it's a good thing or a bad thing. Friends are always there to help you, if somebody needs to talk about how they feels they're always there. You should always trust you're friends,so they can trust you back. If your friends are trustworthy you can always discuss things with them and they will gladly to hear it. When you discuss things with your friends they also make you comfort.
Lastly, when you spend time with your friends they can make you comfort. When your feeling horrible or anxious about something, they will take away all the horrible feeling you have and cheer you up. Friends are also there to make you calm,so you dont worry about anything. They take away all the negative emotions, so you dont feel bad. Friends will always make you feel comfortable if something is wrong with you.
Undoubtedly a lot of people enjoys spending time with their friends outdoors because playing with the people you know is enjoyable, you can discuss things with your friends,and they can make you comfort. Playing with the people you know they will know which things you like or don't like, and you can always discuss things that bother you with your friends. Friends are always there to comfort you,so you don't have to worry about things that make you feel bad. In conclusion, there are other a lot of activities people can enjoys, but one personally will be spending time with your friends outdoor. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
DCF9F70FBA91 | Do you think we choose our own character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control? I believe that we choose our own character. I don't think that our character is formed by influences. Our character is what we make out of it. Some of the reasons why I think we choose our own character is because of the way we are, the way we treat people, and the way we tell ourselves to be.
One of the reasons why I think we choose our own character is because of the way we are. The way we are tells people about ourselves a lot. It describes who we are. For example some people who know my sisters and I so well say that we're all so different. That's because we are all our own character. Some siblings look up one another so it makes them wanna be like their older sister so , they don't get to make their own character.
Another reason is the way we treat people. The way we treat people is part of our character. It helps other people see the way you are. They judge you to see if you're nice or mean. Also what you hear about yourself makes you wanna act different.
The last reason is the way you choose to be. You get to pick who you wanna be. Although some people say that your character is already formed by influences. They may have a point because they say that it's how your family is. If your family taught you to be a certain way then you would grow up being that way because that's the way you grew up, but at the end of they day you are you. your family might've taught you to be a certain way but you can always change how you wanna be.
In conclusion, I believe that we choose our own character. I don't think that our character is formed by influences. Our character is what we make out of it. Some of the reasons why I think we choose our own character is because of the way we are, the way we treat people, and the way we tell ourselves to be. We are our own character. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
DCFBEEAC3AA8 | I am support should people make their own decisions because they are practice make their own decisions and they are confidence their decisions.
I am support should people make their own decisions because they are practice make their own decisions. If people make their own decisions they should get how to learn their own decisions. They are practice individual make decisions. They are find own idea to make the decisions. They are find more information to make decisions. They are more active their decisions.
I am support should people make their own decisions because they are confidence their decisions. If people make own decision they can do more and more better with confidencecal descions. They involve more confidence. They learn how to show with other people their own decision by confidential. They learn how to improve their decisions with confidence. They are more strong than make with the group thire decisions. They decide what ever they want desions. They show their confidential make with other people.
In conclusion:
I am support should people make their own decisions this is important because they decide what ever they want their decsions. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
DD00E48BC258 | Honestly, I do not agree about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. The pursuit of success in life is achieving it in many ways.. Therefore, you can push yourself to be successful by putting in effort.. Failure can lead to serious conflict because then you will not be able to succeed. The important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success is not agreeable because you can overcome obstacles, aiming the goal to success, and to achieve the plan to .success.
First reason, is to overcome the obstacles, for that you must have to work hard. Also, it takes practice the better you get to succeed. Do not give up on something you are overcoming in life. One of the biggest problems that people have in life is not overcoming what they are afraid of and from being afraid will not get you to succeed. Most of all to overcome the obstacles. is to try them not to give up on them.
Second reason, putting a great effort can lead to improving. Efficiently the work you do can increase a great impact towards your achievements. In order to achieve a method, working pays off and by earning it. For example, people push themselves to making progress. Others might work hard in different ways to be successful and to aim what they want. Eventually, when making progress towards something, can influence the goal your improving.
Third reason, to plan the success is to try achieving what your aiming for. In other words, enthusiasm can be those people that want to be successful in life. Pursuit also aims for the goal your trying to influence. When planning goals, is the most valuable thing to achieve. There must always be a plan towards the target you aim. Majority of the people, look for something easy they can achieve in their future goal and that is how they succeed.
Finally, the key to being successful in life is by achieving it. To be honest, I do not agree about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of improving. Many people find success by putting in effort and time towards big things. It is not to late to start pushing yourself to be successful and being something in life. Therefore, is it not an important role that failure plays in pursuit of success, and to achieve the plan to succeed | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3.5 |
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DD265EC28AEB | Now a days schools are finding new ways to use cell phones for educational purposes. Schools and teachers want to find new ways to educate students through cell phones since every child is attracted to them. But with schools trying to find ways that works, it does have its negative effects to it. The effects with using cell phones in classroom for educational purposes is that many students will end up getting off tasks, no more hands on learning, and they will start to relying too much on their cell phones. With cell phones being use for educational purpose, it has its negative effects to it and will affect student's learning in the process.
As cell phones are being use for educational purposes, a negative effect to this idea is that students will not focus or get off task in their classes. If they use cell phones in classroom for a method to educate people, students with tend to get distracted on their phones and not learn what they are suppose to teach. Students will also end up dozing off and start to listen to music or even end up playing games on their phones and not focus on what's being taught. Also with social media being so big now a days students will focus more on texting friends or being on their Snapchat, Instagram, or even Twitter rather than focusing on what teacher is showing the classroom. With cell phones being use in classroom, students will end up getting more distracted and off task than when you do not use cell phones in the classroom to teach. The next paragraph will talk about another reason why using cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes has its negative effect.
As cell phones are being use for educational purposes, a negative effect to this idea is that there is no more hands on learning for students. If school are using cell phones as a method to teach people, the students are not getting the hands on learning that they should get. Back then before everyone had a cell phone the way they were taught was with the step by step on doing the work and trying to understand how you ended up doing the work. But if they use cell phones in the classrooms the students would not be getting the step by step understanding of the work, rather than they doing it on the phones and just getting the answers. With schools using phones in the classroom the students would not be getting the same knowledge and understanding to specific problems and work than those who learn the step by step learning to the problems. In the next paragraph we will see another reason why using cell phones for educational purposes has a negative effect in the classrooms.
As cell phones are being use for educational purposes, a negative effect to this idea is that students will end up relying too much on their cell phones and technology to get the work done. As the more classroom or schools end up using cell phones for educational purposes the students will end up relying on their phone to get the work done for them and not try to do it theresleves. For example imagine students cell phones end up not working and they only used their cell phones to get the work done, what are they going to do now if they only use their phone to do the work and they did not learn the material on their own. With schools using phones as a way of teaching it with effect the students ways of learning and will start to rely on his/her phone in the later future to get their stuff done. In the last paragraph it will concluded the paper and sum up everything about the paper.
In conclusion if more and more schools end up using cell phones for educational purposes they will make more students get distracted during class, not have the hands on learning they should have, and also they will start to rely on their cell phones more for the work rather than them trying to do the work them self. With cell phones trying to be used as a method of learning, it will end up not giving the students the education they need but rather them showing a way to get the work done quicker without all the extra work that should be done. So schools should stick with the methods they have now and not try to add cell phones as another method of teaching these students. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
DD279F25DC1F | "Oh my God Generic_Name," I did not have enough time to finish my power point, me too Generic_Name said. I think our school should add two hours more and we should come four-day school weeks like some businesses they work for ten hours and they only work four days it can benefits students and teachers because, some students can have more time to do their homework, some teachers and students can saved more gas and money, and some students can ask their teacher for more help.
First,students and teachers saved more gas and money. For example, my friend needs to drive herself to school everyday and she needs to pay for her gas. The other day she told me that coming to school for five days is stressful because, she has to pay for gas and she is not working everyday like she just too, so her parents have to pay the gas for her .They told her if she do not start to pay for her own gas they where going to take the car away from her, I told her about how some businesses have adopted just going four- days to work for ten hours and I told her that our school should have four-day school week too, I think that would be a good idea and she thinks that is a great idea too, because she gets to saved money and gas and she do not have to worry about paying a lot of money for gas anymore and her parents would not be mad at her anymore because she would have the money to pay for gas.
Other example can be my Spanish teacher she lives a little far from school and she has to drive to school, but she is having some problems and she does not have enough money to pay for her gas. She told me that if she do not get the money to pay her gas she was going to be absent for some day into she get the money to buy gas for her car, that make me so sad because she is my favorite teacher, she is like a mom to me, and she would not be able to come to school just because she dont have enough money to pay her gas. My friend told her about what I said and she things its a great statement because she would have more time to grade students homework ad would have more time to spent with her family.
Second, students can have more time to do their homework. For example, myself sometimes in my math or chemistry class we talk about something new and it takes almost the hold class and my teachers give us a lot of homework so I think the if we go school for ten hours it would be great because I would have a lot of time to do all my homework or I would have time to study too and I would just get home to relax and I would not get stress because I already did my homework.
Other example can be my best friend Generic_Name, she is taking all AP classes, and she gets a lot of homework sometime she does not get the enough time to finish her homework in class and when she gets home she has to take cared of her little sister, so she does not have time to finish her homework at home or sometimes she has projects do the next day but she does not have enough time finish in class. Generic_Name said that she gets really stress about all her homework and how she has to do it in so little time, she thinks if we go to school for more time she would have a lot of time to do her homework and she would just go home and take care of her little sister, she should not have to be stress about doing her homework.
Another example can be my friend Generic_Name, she loves to do homework because she likes to compete with other students, but ladle she has being so worry and angry about everything. I ask her why does not she compete with the other kids like she used to, she told me because she has a lot of test's coming up and she needs to study and that she wish that we have more time in school so she can get everything done the same day because now she has to take her homework to her house and finished over there, now she does not get time to relax and chill like she always did.
Third, some students can ask their teacher for more help. Like myself the other day in math class we were talking about a new topic it was so hard that I did not understand the topic. After the teacher show us how to do it, I was asking for help every three seconds because I did not understand, after she explain me for the hundred time I was still confused, before the class end she gave us homework I did not how to do the homework ether, so I stay after with her so she could it explain me again, but the after school time is only for fifteen minutes. My teacher explain me again and show me how to do it again but I did not get it, she told me the if we have more time in school hours it would be better because would take her time and explain us how to the work more slow, but we only have like one hour in her class so we do not get enough time ask a lot of questions. Other example, my friend Generic_Name sometimes his teacher talk so fast that he can understand what she is saying, he want it to stay after school so she could explain him again, but he could not stay because needed to go soccer practice he being missing a lot of day because he always stay after school with a teacher for extra help and if he does not start going to soccer practice again, his coach is going to kick him out of the team, he is the only one that has been missing a lot of days, and he needs to get back in track because his team has a really important game coming up, so he can not stay after school for help anymore.
Some students think that they get stress for being in school for a lot of time;however, they are wrong because some students think that if they go to school for a lot of time they would get more time to do their homework.
Some students and teachers get to saved more money and gas, some student can have more time to do their homework, and some students can ask their teacher for more help this are some benefits of why should my school adopt a four-day school week. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
DD474E5804C0 | Do you think students should work on assignments from school at home?
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I will argue about how students can study from long distance, not all schools approve the current subject. If students were to study from home it would be difficult for them to understand what the assignment that is being asked to complete at certain time. The students should be able to afford a device which is necessary to study any subject. Attending classes from home can cause for students to be able to work more and do their assignments on time.
Schools will not exist if students leave to study home which will make it hard for them to communicate with teachers when help is needed. Students would not meet each other or talk physically which would be awkward, can cause them to not trust each other if it comes to a project that needs to be done. Physical education would not be a class since everything would be on devices which is a conflict, which is needed to graduate. In many short word students will be gaining so much weight that they'll not be able to do certain sports they want or walk to their destination.
Typing online or video conferencing is not easy if the person on camera is shy and doesn't like video conferencing which can be very often. Accessing to both subjects can not be trusted if the school will be monitoring every movement you take on your device. Testing online can be easy to cheat if the teacher is not around walking and watching what your doing. Students might not know many things but cheating and being sneaky are the two most known words we understand very well.
In other words there are advantages to studying online, disadvantages online and it would be a big disappointment for students to fail almost every class that needs to be taken for graduation. If they have a job they will consider work their first priority instead of school. Student's would not receive a scholar ship or diploma so that they can go to college and accomplishing the goal of having a better job.
Some people say that school is very important for students, that they'll earn more money than their parents who probably dont have a well paid job and education. But I think it can benefit sometimes it can be a amazing idea for students to study home because they won't drop out of school. Students have different emotions that trigger them to want to leave school behind, since they start working more to pay bills that need to be paid each month.
All students should go to school to focus on what they want to be in life or do. Physical experience is not the same as typing online or video conference. Knowing that student's can succeed in different ways is not bad even so they will be expected to have any sort of education someday in the future. School is providing knowledge for those who pay attention to school and more. Believing you can do what you always dreamed of is a motivation that will help learn more about life and the way it works. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
DD66EBC605D1 | Some schools offer the option of attending classes by "online" or "video conferencing". This may not be a good idea because how does the student going to get responsible? or how can the teachers know if the student is not cheating on a test?. Is there any benefit to know is this option is going to help the student phsychlogy, mentally or physically?. Education is too important! And a better way of learning is by attending to SCHOOL! The way as many people done it. Also, by this way attending to school students might join in sports, activities, etc. It gives more benefits and helps to refresh your mind. School gives classes of "PE" which is important because doing sports is healthy.
In 2015, a student at Generic_School took the option to attend classes by online because the student was not a "social" person which means the student did not like to communicate. But after all the student did regret it. The student noticed that communication is too important because is part of education and how to success in life. The words of the student to advice the students were " There is no more benefits than attending to school. School does help you to your knowdlegde and prepare you for your future. Did not like the fact of waking up too early and to deal with all those people every single day, but here is the thing as people we cannot avoid people. It does affect you plus It does not make sense at all. Why? because WE ARE THE PEOPLE. What I learned by taking this option and what made me regret it was : We are the community, we are the voice of the world and as a group working together we can make big changes and a better society as well. And classes from home by the way online or video conferencing, this does not give you "P.E" classes and doing sports is wealthy. So by now attending to school is the best option for everyone." The student had excellent grades, scholarships, made new friends than he expected to have. Where is he now by making the best option? He is now at SCHOOL_NAME preparing for his major as a lawyer. He became an example for many students that have the same issues as he had.
As an immigrant this is a real big request, they must attend classes by going to school. It is too important because the lack of language and credits are needed. United States is an immigrant country and their schools has these excellents programs called "Esol". Of course, immigrants need these kind of help. They need to get involved by attenting to school. Why? Many immigrants come to this country to have a better future, they absolute have different customs, a different kind of thoughts, etc. So that infers a lot more than you think...Especially, each country have a different system's programs for graduation like in South America you only need to pass all of your classes for graduation, but how many classes are they? More than 17 classes. In United States you need to pass all of your classes plus the SOLS. This is the reason why immigrants must attent to school, It does help you to refresh your mind, to have new thoughts, new experiences, and to know what you need for graduation. Its is hard because Immigrants needs an esol teacher and to not attend to normal classes for awhile as long as you learn the language.That is why it takes a little longer for them to graduate and that is why they do need to attent to school. To understand much better the topics of each SOL class because they do need credits as any student. Otherwise if they choose the option to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing is not going to help them as much as the school will.
In conclusion, a better learning is by attending classes from school because school give you more opportunites, more methods of learning, to socialized, to communicate. It inpires you to keep going and to have an idea of what you want your future to be like. Which means it prepares you for life. Any issue that you have they will help you to work on it, to find a solution. Like this student did not like to communicate at all, but he noticed that attending to school is the best option because it gives you the ideas of what you want to do, the opportunity to meet the college you want to go. To know what you can do to improve yourself! Also, It helps immigrants to learn the language with this program to pass your SOL classes to graduate, they receive a double help from school. Going to school has more benefits than you think so you need to fight for it because anything in this life is not easy, but is worth it. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
DD91A86810BD | March 2020/10
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People consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Success have motivation to do new ideas even if they can not do it. They push them self to keep trying because it makes them stronger as a hum being. Being enthusiastic makes you confident, in want to do more thing's in life. people push them self on being enthusiastic, it makes them excited on being confident in them self. More you try the more you want to get interest in exploring.
Having enthusiasm makes you happy it only gives you have positive thoughts. There are great people in the world that will give you advice. Telling you that you can do it if you only put your heart into it you can get it. Even if you fail always keep trying, you most likely would not get it the first time. Seeing other people on their success makes you have enthusiasm and make you uncomplash your own dreams.
Now in days their are people that expect if they try on doing something once they can not succeed again. Humans' relay on other's for their own achievement. Not having motivation makes you not want to do anything and you will keep failing. If you fail and fail, feel sad and give up you can become depressed. As you stop putting in effort in things you lose interest and do not try.
Failure is what makes you strong so you do not give up on trying. Failing is what should push you to make improvement and know your strength. Tell yourself to always think positive never negative you should have enthusiasm because that is what makes you stronger. Who you are is how you make of it and having interest on new things makes you a believer in yourself. British Prime Minister Winston is whon showed people to not stop and believe in yourself when you are failing. Because failure is what's good. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
DD96F81877AF | The one place in the world that
I would like to visit is France.
I wanted to visit France because french was my favorite language and when I watch TV some
TV shows brings up some staff about France and the French people and if I wanted to visit France I would want to know staff about them. That is why I would like to visit France.
If I visit France what I would like to visit and see is the museum that they have. I know that France have the most biggest museum in the world it has everything about all the history of all the countries. I would also like to visit the tower that they have in Generic_City I wanted to visit the tower because its really high and it looks cool to me . What
I want to find out is about what people do on holidays such as Christmas, what they eat and about their education .These are the things I would like to see and visit.
This is why I want to visit France and what I want to see and do when if I visit France. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
DDAA14DE7D11 | They should be able to work with each other they can do this program so that the schools have new students. If new students are having difficult time in this school,classes,people then they should send someone to help them out a little. Everyone had some hard time getting used to the school being shy in all, they get the other older students to assist the younger ones. Programs that pairs older with younger, some younger kids gets used to a new school thats hard for them, if they have trouble in classes. the older and younger kids could be able to work with each others.
It's hard getting used to a new school for other people seeing new people,new classes getting to know other people,making new friends, and everyone gives time for the school. For some people it could be easy for the others really hard whether it's elementary, middle , high school thats hard getting ti know the school. Say we get a bad grade and they try so hard to get the perfected score. But they studied so hard to get a good grade. So they assist someone.
So the schools created these things to help other students if they are having troubles with there grades, their classes, assist the students get there grades up so they can get better and better. They help each others for reasons to get a good grade. Its good that each schools are doing this to help pther students. They can get a school a chance make new friends get better in school and then they could help other students to get good grades this is a good program for the other students. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
DDB673D3627D | Who wants to work alone by themselves when you have the chance to work together with a group of students in your class. Working together is more beneficial because with a group you can get all the work done more faster and students are less worried. Many students should work together as a team in school because it helps them with good life skills life. People might need this to help them when working at a job in the future. I agree that working with a group is more efficient and help students learn more better. Benefits of working with a group is more beneficial because allows students to collaborate, allows different ideas or opinions from peers, and allows each individual to have feedback from peers.
However not everyone would agree with this position. Some people believe that benefits of working alone is more helpful for themselves. For example, when a students is working on the computer for a certain projects in fashion marketing, fitness and foods or other subjects in school because they're able to finished it themselves. This explains that people can put their own ideas and will get the work done more quicker without any help from peers during class. Nevertheless the oppositions over looks other important points.
First reason is that student can collaborate with other peers but only about 30% of people work together with other people on school projects assignments or activates. For example, in classrooms students have more possible chances to separate the task with each other. Also people would't have to worried about not getting each slides done because their peers would be there to support them. This shows that students who work together with peers they are not only benefiting themselves but helping other people too. Students can enjoy and have fun working with friends also everyone will get a good grade.
Second reason is students can come together as a team by listening and hearing out all of their peers creative ideas and opinions in a group on the project. For example, each person might have a good suggestion or reason on a history project that will help their group with the assignment. This shows a person will have many ideas that they can chose from a peer in their group and it's always nice to use different reasons from a student.
Third reason is when a student can get a individuals feedback to help them on a english writing essay in class. For example, the person is writing a essay for class on Google docs with each other it helps them talk and get feedback from a peer or friend in class. This shows that having a students help is important because you can fix the error in the essay with a peers correction and students can learn more better together from people.
To conclude that working with a group is more better for people because allows students to collaborate with peers so that people can separate the task with each other, allows different ideas or opinions from peers when each person has good suggestions for projects and allows individuals to get feedback from peers on helping a students with a english writing essay. Maybe good for students to work alone but working in a group is helpful to have someone support them. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
DDC3C4A828DA | It has been said that first imperssions are almost impossible to change, do you agree or disagree? In my past experience, I would highly disagree with this statement. When first meeting somebody, you don't always get the right thoughts about that specific person. Once knowing somebody personally your thoughts start changing, your mind starts messing up on thinking "What should I think about this person?". Due to my past experience I always have luck to my first opinion changing to a good opinion after getting to know them. I always ask my friends what were there thoughts of me when they met me for the very first time and all of my friends would always tell me that I look like I was mean and not very kind. After, they're opinions later changed once they got to me personally, knowing my personality and knowing how kind I am. My friends were very suprised.
Second, I would insists of not always having a first opinion on when seeing somebody for the first time because that usually is never how the person actually is. First imperssions always depend on the person on how there feeling or just based of anything that can be said.
Second impressions always get more better once they seen each other at least ones.
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I would like to speak on my past experiences with this statement on why I disagree with this reasoning. When I was a couple years younger I had some very means thing said about me in middle school due to a couple of very mean people. Due to those sayings and rumors a various amount of people knew about me and the stuff that was said about me. People thought they already know me through thick and thin but in reality they really didn't. Once, I wanted to meet new people they never actually really wanted to speak to me or actually meet me because they already had there first impression because of the sayings. Later on, years started passing by and a few people started meeting me more and started speaking to me and once they did they noticed that I was very different person then what people would say about me.
In Conclusion, In my past experience I would highly think in my beliefs I would defiendely not based my first impression on somebody I'm just meeting. I like to get treated on how I treat others. First impressions are never good that's why it's never good to get based off that. You've read my about my past and now know why I don't go off that. If you ever decided to go off first imperssions and not change your mind about your first impression then good luck to you. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
DDCB2CC96EA7 | I am strongly agree the failures in our lifes means to keep going and be a successful person. Although some say success not consists of going from failure because people always fell many times keeping doing the same mistakes in several times in their lifes, actually success consists of going from failure because failure help us to learn more in our lifes and get experiences to teach other people.
Those who believe success not consists of going from failure have they reasons. One reason people always fell many times keeping doing the same mistakes in several times in their lifes. But doing the same mistakes many times does not help people to be successful; makes the person wake in front of others. People that are better to them can make bullying at them because they feel that they are perfect than others .Many of the people that keep thinking that they are a loser think about diying is the better thing to get out of the failures. Did you know is that 90% 0f the teenagers kill them self instated of find help to keep going with their lifes. It is very scary and make me sad at the same time. If we use social medias we can see people talking about their lifes or using drugs and drugs makes the person to lose more their mind.
However, success consists of going from failure because failure help us to learn more in our lifes. Learning from failure to failure is better for all the people. Having the enthusiasm in our mind can be the better word to start our life every day. We are capable of doing many things it does not matter how many times we have to do the same things to be better in our feature but we have to keep going not matter what. In my position I have a experience; when I was in my country I did not what to do with my life; I just was trying to finish my middle school, get a job and then have a family and now here I am making better things for my life; now I am tinking about to have a better life. when I came to USA I was tinking about how am I going to do if I do not nothing about the language but now I feel more conformist knowing the language because makes me keep going studying. I though that learning another language was a new obstacle for me to keep going we my life.
Also, success consists of going from failure because people get experiences to teach people. There are many people that think that they are failure and they are not; I think that every people are genius. The things is that people don not let the talents get out and that can be because they think about others people opinions about them. I have many experiences keep seeing people about failure. Had you ever try to help others? I have it done many times. When I was in my country I saw this person trying to be better but at the same time this person was with many problems that did not let to keep going. In many occasion I help the person to be better like getting solutions with the problems and it is very difficul to teach others with the problems and try to make them better.
Seeing our life in a failure can be the worst thing, but keeping trying to do better things each day is going to be the better effort in our life and that is going to help us to get more enthusiastic every day. It is very helpful to find ways to be better in the world because every person had to have new things to do the life better for themselves and help others if they are struggling with their life. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
DDD1A1F08FDF | Identify a talent or skill you have, when you have a talent you can show it to people. Like share what you have when other people don't have what you have like if your gifted. Talents is not so it could be hidden in you it is to shown the whole world what you have that is amazing or imprresive. Do something you have that will make you trend around the internet or something rare in your body thats's cool and rare, you can even be a very populor person if you show the world these would be examples Sing,Dance,Magic tricks,Card tricks or even things that people haven't even done.
No one in the world is going to khown what you have if you don't share it with everyone. What would be the point to have a very cool or special talent if your going to hide it or not show it to everyone. This can be an opprotinity to amaze the whole world so go out there and share your talent. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 |
DDD24AF9146F | Many people dont know their own character traits or who they really are. They are stuck in a fantasy on what people tell them how they are like. While John Lubbock wrote, "Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it." Our character traits is based on how we choose it to be. We should choose our Character traits by the way we know our self's best, Other people opinions could be wrong on what they might tell us, Character traits shows how our personality is really like.
Knowing our self better then many people are can build character alive it shows how much strength we have. By the way we represent our self best and what all of this can build out of it also shows how much knowledge it bring as well. Having many traits and how well we can identify about them shows us and others how best we know our self and how well we can put a label on it. showing many different types of traits on an everyday life style isnt easy nor impossible. It takes time to realize what kind of character trait you are trying to build. by digging deep and finding many different types of personalities in yourself will build a strong trait you may never knew about.
Asking for other peoples opinion about who or what character do you bring out upon yourself might give you wrong information. Maybe asking a friend could bring ideas to build a good character trait but might not give enough information. Finding about your own character traits is difficult. There can be many different types of option instead of asking for someone else opinion. Online could be a strong benefit about finding more information about your character traits. There is many other website that could help find more information to what kind of character you build. With this information you realize how much you know yourself while reading and finding.
Personality can show a big character to who you could possibly be. It shows how you are when you are with other people. You build stronger traits when you know what kinds of personalities you have. There can be many different personalities but many people have an important one that explains who they are and what kind of traits they have. Being with the right people with great personalities could help and explain why yours is just as strong and kind. Having this good trait can be a big part of knowing who your character is.
Choosing our character traits can't always be easy. It shows how difficult it is to finding good traits and building character wise. Many people know their character traits from what they know about themselves. It shows how we choose our character and how strong it comes alive. Its always a good reason to why we should choose our own character traits. | 2.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
DDD3771E1DF6 | Many people believe that they do not need advises from others in order to take decisions in their life,and they believe they should take their own decisions. I do not agree with them. It is important to listen what other people think about it. Each person is different in a special own way and someone else might help you to solve your problem. I believe people should seek guidance from experts and authorities because they may have a better idea,or they may have been in the same situation before.
One of the main reasons is that other people may have been there before and they may know what to do. For example, You are undecided about taking swimming classes or piano classes,and you know you are a great swimmer,but you've also wanted to play piano since you were 6 years old. Your brother have been in that situation before, and he thinks that you should take piano classes from Monday to Wednesday after school, and swimming classes every Friday after school, but you have to work from Thursday to Sunday;then he says that you should take piano classes every Monday and Wednesday after school ,and Swimming classes every Tuesday after school .You believe that is what best suits for you.
Another reason is that other people might have a better or different idea than yours. Another example is that your parents give you two choices: going to Canada for spring break or going to The Bahamas for Christmas break. Generic_Name,your best friend have already visited those places and she tells you to go to Canada because she knows you love extreme low temperatures .You tell your parents that you've decided to go to Canada and once you are there you realize that it was the best decision you've taken. Thanks to your friend's advise;you are enjoying your trip,and you are glad that you asked for her opinion.
On the other hand,letting others influence on the decisions you take is not always the best thing to do. A simple example can be that you go to the mall and decide to buy a pair of shoes but you do not know what color to choose, so you ask your sister and she thinks that the red pair is the best for you; you buy it and when you get home, you realize that you do not like those shoes. The first thing you would probably do is blame on her because she told you to buy the red pair, but if you take that decision by yourself and you regret for the decision you make; You cannot blame on somebody else except for you.
In conclusion, people who seek guidance from their family,experts, or authorities are most likely to take the right decision. All persons sometimes may need an advise from someone on what to do, or if they should follow their own instincts; but the one who will make the decision is you, so do not blame on others for the decisions you make. Humans are not perfect and we do not always take the best decisions in our life; but with help from others , we will be able to make them right and move on. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
DE06A0AF7DEC | A fames person ones side,Your character will be what you yourself chose to make it.''Do we choose our own character traits,or is our character formed by influences beyond our control. It's inpoten to keep a good name for yourself for people can't think badly of then for inset
Bad chose, like people teens tin to make bad chose when they are around other people. Even around there friends they like to do stuff you should be doing like doing drugs, spelling and getting into tridol. Having a mindset that they need to live up to standers because it a tread or it's Popper. And it's usley young teens because they are always on sholmetuy,seeing all these's videos of people,getting frames over something sipol,they think that they can do it to. If a young kids see's someone doing drugs or stilling from a story they are most likely to do the same, it has a big inmates on the young generation,people don't know how much it efets them.
Snead people want respect but don't know how to give it back, like for insteps if you tire other with respect then they well give it back. Don't give yourself a bad name like if you opliyening for a job but the manger saw you stell something he or her is not going to trust you anymore, you need to urn that trust. A other thing is not to be rude because if your rude to people well think of you densely,do to you being rude and not good with people. And trite them how you would want to be tread with respect and not being rude to people if you give them all of that they well do the same for you. And that's what's truly inppont in life.
So in other words be around the people you love and that well bring the good out of you,don't give yourself a bad name in this world. Be who you wanna be in those world but think before you chose. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
DE0F5C13960F | Have you ever wondered what it is like to have a homework club at your school, well its pretty useful. The idea is for kids to do their homework at school instead of at home, you can get help from a teacher and also work with your buddies.
One reason why I argue for school clubs to be available is because you it gives you time to do other stuff such as, spending time with your family,spending time with your friends,and even go to the movies. If you do your homework at the homework club you won't have to worry about due dates, quizzes, or tests. If you dont go the homework club you will always have tons of homework and not even do it which can cause your grades to fall down and probably not graduate if the required skills aren't meet.
Secondly, if you and your friend are in the same class and get the same homework then you can work on it together,check each others papers, and quiz each other on it. If you work on it alone you might get confused and frustrated, or maybe stressed, obviously copying one another does not make you learn anything, but there is a teacher who can help both of you at the same time.
Video games are very fun and addictive but you cant play if you got homework in the way. If you get you homework done then you have the whole day to play with your friends, communicate with them and even battle to the lat one standing. Some video games have blood, gore, and violence and some kids love those games which can be a small problem but not a big one, most parents can take devices and electronics away because kids dont do their homework so if you want to play video games and have fun you better go to homework club.
In conclusion the homework club should be available and going so that kids can finish their homework all at once and have fun in and out of school. Homework is really important and kids very often dont do their homework and thats probably the reason why kids hate school and do not want to got to school. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
DE1A1149D54B | I agree with that because positive attitude always bring the success in our life. It helps us with alots of things in our life. All people love those who have positive mentality and a good personality. In order to be successful in life u need to be respectful with every single things that we do everyday. We can get so much benifit out of it. It helps people to get more friends and make a good community. It also make our family think that we are smart and make them feel proud of us.
The first thing we all should do is to love our self if we cannot do that it will be hard for us to control our positive attitude. if we don't love our self we can't love others as well as you do to ourself. We are human we cannot be same as others in some point we make mistakes in life we always should try to move forward. Some of us might have have seen some people they can't be satisfy with their life beacause of their behavior and the way how they think of there life. We need to conduct our self in a perticular way to bring the power of success.
There are many people who can't show their love to people or who are kind of broke on their life most of them have negative mentality. Its not their fault maybe the situation makes them to be like that some of us living with depression and it causes a massive differents into our brain our thinking area and more other part or side effects. It also happened to me when i was freshmen during the highschool year. I started to giving up on my life i didn't feel like to doing anything in life. Every single day was the hell of my life. i broke down myself and put my self somewhere where no one can find me. I didn't talk to anybody just trying to stay at home all the times and realised how could i get out of this kind of situation. I was starting to loose friends in that time. Only those will understand if they ever gone through depression.
That was the worst feelings i ever felt in my life. i was trying so hard to figure out why this is happening to me and where does this come from and didn't get any response out of this. I felt negative every time. I tried so hard to change the situation but it didn't work. I didn't have anyone to share my feelings all i did is just to kept that in my heart and made my self cry alot. I throught of myself i will never be successful in life.
After few days passed one of my friend came to my house just to visit our family member and me. when i see him i was little happy to see him after a long time. i took him into my room and we were talking about somethings and recently he came up with a topic which is call depression. He knew how i was feeling with my life so he started to giving me some lesson to make me feel better and everything. First he told me i need to changed the way how i think about my self and people and he also told me there are many people who always try to push others down and make them feel bad and make you think something that is not good for you. My friends told me to ignore those and listen to my own heart. No matter, how u feel, always love your self and change the way how you think of youself. As a human no body is happy about their life in some point their sad but the main thing is we got to move onto forward. Forget about everythings that happened in the past.
After he have told me all the lesson i was feeling way better than the past i realised how crazy i was before and the way of my thinking. My friend he was so motivated. Whatever he told me it was so appriciated to me and it forced me to changed my self to become a normal and to be a possitive person. I decited to not to keep my life stop because i dont want to be in the same situstion as before. I want to make my family friends and all of my relatives feel proud of me. Every one of us need to love their selves and if they think in a negative way to bring the success in their life, it will never work thats why we all should try to handle our mind in a positive way. It will help all of us to become successful in our life. This is why the positive attitude is the key to success in life. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
DE20CFA52C1D | What are the benefits of working with a group and working alone? I believe that working in groups helps you to have more ideas, more knowledge, because if you communicate with your group members, they'll think about different ideas to proceed the work that is getting done. Working alone sometimes helps you more than working with groups because you are responsible for your own work.
I rather work by myself because I've had bad experience working with groups. When I work in groups sometimes I'm the one that has to do all the work, and in my opinion if we are working in groups we have to help each other, communicate and share our thoughts because if we don't do that what's the point of working in groups. However, I think working in groups is important because you can come out of your comfort zone and be free to share your thoughts with your group members, and you can make friends too. For example, I'm a very shy person, it's rare the times I talk in class but when I'm in a group I have to talk, share my thoughts with my group members and communicate with them.
Reasons why I prefer working alone are: I focus more doing my own work, it's only my responsibility not others, I have to worry to turn it in on time, if i get a bad grade it's going to be my fault not others, I'm responsible for my own actions, I have to make sure if everything is right to get all the credit.
Reasons why I don't like to work in groups are: sometimes they're not responsible for doing their part, if they do their work they do it all messy( you can't even understand their hand writing), they play around too much because sometimes they take it as free time, they spend most of the time on their phone instead of doing what they are supposed to do, sometimes they don't do their part in time and we have to turn it in late and don't get all the credit.
I believe working in groups is beneficial but at the same time it's not, I think it depends with the people you work with, because if you work with people that do their work and actually care about school they will definitely be beneficial and make your group work out. If you work with someone who doesn't care and is always playing around, you won't get anything done and will receive a bad grade unless you do all the work and the other person will just get credit by not doing anything, in that case there is no point to work in groups.
In conclusion, I believe it's more beneficial to work alone than groups because you can focus more on what you're doing and take responsibility of your own work, because if you don't take care of your school work nobody is going to do it for you. So you have to chose what's better for you and what's going to benefit you more, but for me I feel like working alone is more beneficial for me than working in groups. | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
DE3867FD43DE | well hello today I will discust the diferent between working wit a group or working alone first let me ask you a question how hyou like to? with a group or alone? well i chose working with a group lets see why...
working in group and working alone have advantages and disavantages for each one,I like wirking as a group because your team can help you with some ideas and ways to do your work and at the same time have fun while your are doing the work. disavantages in a group there will be always a person that want to be just playing around and don't like to do any type of work just have fun. nut if we being on the side of be working alone thant advantage will be that you will have more oportunity of do your work the way you want to and no be worry about other people opinion. you will finish your work faster and the way you want the wor kto be done,but some disvantages you will no have fun because you have no one to be with and it will be difficult to have a lot of ideas. i think working with a group is more beneficial because if you think there will be more people at the ppresentation helping you and you will feel more secure with your work.
working with a group can help you to increase your skill level of talking and self confidence and being social(meet new friends) , working alone can sometimes can get borring and you dont finish the work because you don't have someone to share the ideas with,
workingt alone can cause you a damage on yuor personalty and your aparetion people will think i he don't like workign with aother person around that he should work by it self andf then there will be a lot of caos that person fall in depresion because no one acept him and it was because you make them to be like that or feel that way.
while you are working with a group you learn skilll like having respect for others and diferentsd way of doing things and work as a team,or even for example you love play sport well you can not do it by your self because there will be team, and how you will work as a team with out learning how to work as a group, you need to learn how to work as a team if you want to be succesful in the comunity, in your future working with a group with the perople you trust you learn that friendship is alway good for you have thar confident that people you like being with help you to increase on your life that is a feel that no one can easy aford it.
went oyu are working with a group friendship will always be there why because is the keey of being succesful on your life. in your future, and your career, in your job.
for example;
lets said that you was driving on the higway driving normal but you forgot to past by the gas station you are in the middle of the street you don't have gas well if you don't like to work with a group then you will push your car and problably you will end up getting a desease or crashing another car.
while if you learn how to work as a group then you can have four people helping you push your car others stop the traffic and some calling the police to help you with that issue.
now you see why it is importan to learn and work as a group, even though with that you already meet new people and have new friend,what I try to said is that working with a group help you a lot in harders things that you need help with.
working alone is depent of what kind of personality you have and if you love working with out people than is fine but there will alway a time that you have to work as a team or group becasue there are things that someone by them self can not accomplish.
when you work as a group you gain respect and great friend ship because if you help with everything then everyone will love working with you and you now will feel that you are important and useful, something that working alone it will be dificult to make.
well i hope you like my explanation i did my best and i feel that we should be more socialize with other nad let then join us for our better future so they can have friends and they never feel like their are alone, lets make everyone happy and having a good time helping other and always respectful. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
DE41897F9C7E | Although, some say students should not be commit to a career at a young age because students don't have time to commit to a career at a young age,actwalay students should be commit to a career at a young age because
If you know what you want to do at a young age by the time you get older you will know more then the one who did not commit to a career at a young age and having a career is a good idea it means you don't have to try everything just to find what you will do when you earnt high school
Some say students should not be commit to a career at a young agebecause students don't have time to commit to a career at a young age actwalay student should be commit to a career at a young age.
By the time you enter high school. I know what I want to do when I enter high school and now I'm in high school I can do my best to know more about the career I want.
Some students want to know their career by the time they get out of high school they will have more idea on what to do with their choose of career.
Howevery, people think students should not commit to a career at a young age because they are not yeat at high school, some think it a good idea for students to commit to a career befor entering high school.
In concushon student should commit to a career at a young age because when they get older they will know more about the it. | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
DE54A8F9C29C | Should students be required to take a class in the arts and should those classes even be a elective? I believe students should have a choose in what they take while in school. Most students when they are not interested in something will most likely not do good in that subject. If you put students in those classes when they dont want to take then the pass rate may drop in those classes. The music, drama, and art class should stay as electives for students that enjoy those classes. I do see how those classes can help a students with some aspects on life but if they dont want to be in that elective then they wont be as involved as everyone else. School is meant for learning and not just putting students in a class they dont like, it's not a good way to teach students. If the student have a choose in what they take, then will students find it interesting and will want to learn more. The classes students choose to take should help them get ready for there future career. I am opposed to having classes in the arts as a required class but I do believe they should stay as electives.
Since I am still a student myself, I know what it is like to be put in a class that I do not finding interesting. I do not feel as if the school should have the right to choose our required electives. Student should have a choose in what class they want because it appeals to them and it's something they actually want to take. If a student choose that class they then choose it for a reason. Thats why if a student gets something they dont like, they are no going to be as engaged in that class and not learn that much as well. A student should have a right not to take the classes in the arts and schools should not make it a required class neither. If school makes those classes required then the pass rate is going to drop and students will not want to attend school as much because they are failing a class they don't even like.
The schools should keep those classes as electives and not as core classes. There are plenty of students that enjoy taking those classes and that do really good in them as well. The classes in the arts are great classes to have a option to take while in school, it opens so many doors for students that want to make a career out of those classes. I'm sure some students learn a lot of life lessons while taking those classes and has helped them in some way. I believe you can learn a lot of skills in those classes as long as your engaged in them and actually like the classes. School should keep music, drama, and art class as electives so the people that want to take it can.
The classes students take should help them in there future career. If a student want to take a class that he want to work in as a career, they shouldn't be rejected to take it because the classes in the arts are required to take.
For example, if a student whats to become a construction work, then I do not see how taking a music class is going to help that student reach his goal to be in that career. The things students do now while in school can change there lives just by simply making them take a class they dont like. There are a wide range of classes students can take that will better prepare for when they leave school. The classes students take now will help them but if schools make the students take something they dont want to take then will it possible ruin them. Thats why students shouldn not be required to take the classes in the arts and choose in what they want to take.
I don't believe schools should me the classes of the arts so be required to take. But I do believe they should stay as electives in the school. Students should be able to choose what they take in school and they should take something that is appealing to them. The classes to have benefits to some of the students and is a great elective class to have. The students should be able to pick a class that is going to help them in there future career and also get a aspect in what they are getting into. In conclusion, the class in the arts classes are a important role in the students experience but manly to the student that enjoy taking those classes. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
DE54F3466948 | When I first get interest in the medicine area, what I what was help people, be like the doctors that helped my little brother; learn how someone can save lives. Today Mr. can help me to learn more to help others, to help who needs. It's necessary start to think in the future doctors, start to pass the learning to the next generation, the theories, and the grow of the modern medicine.
This partnership can teach me what the doctor learn all this years. The learn of the doctors can help me to learn why the things are doing this way, for example em de patient stop to breathe the doctor has to put a tub to the patient start to breathe; and if this don't work the doctor has to do a mini-surgery. The reason why when some one brake a leg the time of the recuperation is different; the reason why when a car chars happen the patient has to went to a T.C. The reason why cancer happen, if it is in our DNA or can happen with anyone.
This partnership can help me to learn the theories. The theories of the causes for the repenting blinding, or way some patients wake up to the coma and other don't. How will be possible in the future faith with the cancer and the autism to help the people that have it; how its possible someone o broke the cervical walk again. If it's possible create a substitute to the glasses, what will be the percentage of people who have obesity in the future.
This partnership can help me to learn the grow of the modern medicine. Talk about how the treatment to the cancer cell can be done with radiation, and what can be done to change this process because of the negative effects in the humans body. Talk about the big number of surgery in the kids, and how it's possible do something do the recuperation be less painful to the kid and to the parents. Talk about how is possible prepared the kids for a emergency and how act in one.
Some may say that learn knew things is boring. Yes, some times it's, but if you learn knew things this can help in your future, and prepared you to possibility that you haven't imagined. Some may think that teenage are just kids and is not necessary think about the future. Yes we are kids, but in other hand we are the future and if we don't think about it who will think for us?
It's necessary start to think in the future doctors, the grow of the modern medicine start to pass the learning to the next generation, the theories, and start to pass the learning to the next generation. So Mr. I really hope that you chose me and gave me a chance to me for prove myself, and learn many knew things in this process that will help me to grow as a person, and as a future provisional that can learn knew things every moment in the medicine area, the future is coming and we are the chose that you want to make. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
DE56AA9B4BF1 | Every students desperately waits for the weekends. Because they hate all the school days. But believe me, adding one and a half hours to schools will be beneficial to all the students for their future. The school board should add one and a half hours to school each day because the students can learn more, they can use their time wisely, they can improve the understanding skills of the students.
The school board should add one and a half hours to school day because all the students can learn more. A long time period can make all the students to get a good knowledge about their chapter or topic, So, most of the students might started to get good grades on their tests. The students can take their time to do their own work. So, all of them can discuss about their projects. Sometimes the students can finish their homeworks during the class periods. That might save the time for everyone. Firstly, the students can get some more knowledge is a reason why the school boards should add one and a half hours to school each day.
Another reason is, all the students can use their time wisely in the class. The students will be more into their study at that time rather than their phones. So, the time will be more useful to them. The students can finish their all work in the class. So, they can get some extra time to spend with their family and relatives. Sometimes, the students can get some extra time to read books. And that can improve their reading skills. Secondly, using the time properly is another reason why the school board should add one and a half hours to school each day.
Although, some people may argue that, adding one and a half hours to school each day is stressful to all the studens. But, believe me or not, all the teenage students are always on their phones. So, it isn't a bad idea to add one and a half hours to school each day. At least, they can't be in the touch of their electronic devices for one and a half hours! Lastly, for a better understanding skills the school board should add one and a half hour to school each day. The teachers can explain the chapter or the topic by taking their time. So, the students will understand the chapter more better. The students will be more responsible and the teachers will teach the students with a good understanding level. That will be more beneficial for the whole class. Good learning or understanding skills is the last reason why the school board should add one and a half hours to school each day.
Adding one and a half hour to school is beneficial to all the students for their future. Because they can learn more about their topic, their time will be used more wisely for them, they will understand the subject better. The students will finish their work in time. they can read books, they can discuss about their projects and stuff, the teachers will get some extra time explain the errors or problems. The students future will be more brighter! | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
DE8162CAC353 | where is one place i would visit ? I would like to visit spain! because i heard that spain has "good soccer teams". But the reason i 'll want to visit Spain is if i do good in soccer i can have a chance to become professional and have alot of money and help my parents. Also because theres nice places you can visit like beaches , soccer stadiums, soccer team, professioanl soccer players mostly everything fun at Spain. Spain has every nice weather and if i visted Spain I would go to the beach, and go see soccer teams.
I want to go to spain to see Messi, Ronaldo, Neymar or get my shoes or shirt signed by one of them. If i went to Spain the "first" thing i"ll visit is this one places were a soccer player grew up at. The reason i would visit it is becasue i wanted to see how he grew up like and how it was like. I also want to feel how it felt to live like they did.
Imagen being were somebody lived at it would be really cool you can take pictures, maybe meet there friends, or uncles, maybe there could visit were they use to live at and give you a hug, or something. I imagen me,and my parents going to watch a soccer game together, going to th beaches. I"ll like to go to Spain just to play soccer with Messi,or any Professional Soccer player. If i went to Spain i would love to train with a professional soccer club.
Spain would give u a chance to become a good soccer player that all i want .Mostly everyone became rich at Spain. I feel like Spain would make a better soceer player i"ll have better training,food,house and you''ll meet new people,friends, and most likely to speak another lanuage. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
DE841BF24A2F | A wise man always said " Thinking out of the box can get you a better choice." Seeking multiple opinions can help people make a better choice for several reasons.
First, they will have more choices to choose due to this problem. Everybody will have a different idea because of their way to look at the problem, they might think the problem out of the box and give out some choice that you never think of. Recently, my friend Generic_Name were in a problem of what sport should he choose and we all gave out different opinions because some of us think that which sport can benefit our future better, some of us think that is important to match your hobbies and benefit to your body health after you play the sport, but we never think about the sport that Generic_Name like better. It is important to think the problem in a different way because after that you can find a better way to solve it .
Second, seeking for multiple opinions can help you collect ideas and solve the problem with friends and family. It is important to think together with friends and family because it can help you with more ideas and power. Recently, my friend Generic_Name got bully in school two moths ago, Generic_Name cry in the restroom alone because the person that bully him told that
Generic_Name cannot tell anybody about what happen, after he get home he told his parents and principal start to find out the person bully Generic_Name. After that, Generic_Name know it is very important to let parents know that his feeling.
Third, seeking for multiple opinions can let people feel like they are not alone to this problem, most of the time people can cause the mind to do wrong things because they feel like no one want to help them and leave them alone. Recently, Generic_School did a report that said three percent of people died in the year is because they feel alone, they think that no one with help them. If everyone can also help each other when they have a problem, maybe we can make the world much better.
In conclusion, seeking multiple opinions can make people make a better choice and it can also benefit other and make the world much better . | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
DE8EAEAC72D9 | Imagine of having your own business by the time you graduate from high school. I think its a good idea for students to commit or take specific courses at a young age for their future lifestyle because you will have more experiences also you can save a lot of money, you don't have to worry about for college. Althogh some people think its a bad idea for students to commit to a career because they just into high school, However they will have more experience by the time they graduate frome high school and live a better lifestyle because they already havea good career and have money and they might have graduate early and started their own family or family business. Some students like to be me a business man or women so the plan to take classes about thoses to topics so they can learn more and they can help the others with their busines.
The first reason why its a good idea to commit to career in a young age is because you will gain more experience and gather information that can help you with your career and have a better lifestyle so you can have everything you need and don't need nobody to help and you can ask others for their advices on hows to gain more experience and some students can take online class. I understand having to plan your career little early in hard because you have to have good grades and enough credits graduate early. So if you want to have better lifestyle you have to put in te hard work and you can't stop unitl you reached your goal and your happy with it. also you apply for jobs to gain as many experience you wanna gain for explam you can work at the fast food resturants and at subway and the doctor offices or at walmart and forever twentyone. and having a business is hard because my dad has one and we barly get to see him because he's so busy and his bussines is not even to close to us is at TN and we get to see him only once a month or two.
The second why having a career is so impartant because you can save alot of money like a lot. Because saving money is good because you can really rich and you have to be selfish in the begging if you want to became something great in life. although you have to spend a lot oof money at first because you having for your classes and programs that your in so you can study what you want and there are some school that will help their students to be succesful in life but have to put in the hard work first if you don't then thats a big problem because your not going to be rich your not going have a lot of money to have good lifestyle. So thats why students need to applying for jobs at age of sixteen and build baby steps to save money and doing good at school and having a better. There is alot of ways for stuents to gain money and save them for explam you make cupcakes at home and sale them at school or other events you can make alot of things a sale them and that how you save alot of money by working hard in school and having a job or making stuff.
The last reason for having your career planed out in a young is to help you in the future weather you have to go college or not and if you have enough credits and your testing scores are good and you don't have a history of getting into a lot of fights and trouble. Then college is for you and you don't have to worry about having to pay for college becuase you can get a schoarship to the best schools ever and college is a important part of your career and life its where you can get more education and help you to become a better at what your doing in the future and if you want to something big you have to work hard like you can't stop because people that put the work they don't stop until they got they want in life and honstley some people have to work hard for everything they want but others don't because the were born with golden life.
Although some its a good idea to have experience with other careers and with making stuff and having alot of money and not playing for college but first you have to put in the hard work in oreder to be commit to a career in a young age because its really hard when you wanna commit to something don't have the goods and good testing scores for in that means you have to do double the work that your already doing. some peple can do anything when they put their brain and mind to it and thats good because if i only foucus in school would have been a straight AB student but i didn't so its hard for me to do that now because there is no time left and what i am trying to say is that don't wait until the same minute to do something specially if you wanna have good career and want to commit to it. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
DE921CECE21A | Do we accomplish more by constantly doing something? Thomas Jefferson wrote, "Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." He believed that more would be accomplished if there was something being done most of the time, I agree with this. Accomplishing a task motivates some people to do more, accomplishing more, It also helps us learn more about ourselves. Although, people believe that being in-active is better because it provides less stress and more free time, It also keeps us from succeeding our daily tasks and influences us to be lazy.
Being busy would require us to be awake and alert of what we are doing. In some cases, after finishing up a task, all people want to do is move on and rest. In other cases, people choose to knock out more work that they have in mind. Having this kind of mindset it good, because it allows a person to have more energy and to keep themselves busy. A personal experience would be when I was so tired one afternoon, but I had to keep myself from napping because I had homework due. After I completed that one homework, I was too awake to even sleep; So I decided to knock out other work I had in the meantime. In the end I received a better grade from that class and I had chores finished from that week so I didn't have to do anything in the weekend. To conclude this paragraph, when I accomplished one thing I ended up accomplishing more than I expected.
We all have our different ways of living and learning. One way to help you learn more about yourself is by keeping busy. You learn how to manage your own time, you learn about how you react to a hectic environment which can help for future references, and You learn how your own mind works. For example, When I was in my sister's sixteenth birthday party, I also had school to focus on, homework to get done, and Sol's to focus on. For me it was a pretty hectic schedule, but I learned how to respond and manage my time. Learning how to manage my time came in handy when my sixteenth birthday came along. Everyone has a different way of living and learning, and keeping myself busy taught me a lot about how I live and learn.
Although being in active provides us with less stress and more free time, which is not always a bad thing, It influences us to not only be more lazy, but to procrastinate. To procrastinate put off something that should be done, To leave it for that moment and do it later, as you repeatedly tell yourself, but you occasionally never end up doing it. Procrastination can lead you to become more and more unprepared. Being unprepared isn't the best way to live. Having more free time can have it's positive outcomes, but also its negatives. For example, who wants to accomplish nothing now, only to do the same in the future? People may believe being in-active is a better way to live because it relieves you from stress and work, but doing nothing can follow with other bad habits that can lead to worse in your future.
In conclusion, we accomplish more by keeping busy. Keeping ourselves busy can help us prepare for our future, and help us learn more about ourselves and how to respond to a hectic lifestyle. Although some people would like to live a lifestyle doing absolutely nothing, that wouldn't be the case for all. Others would prefer to accomplish more by staying active and helping themselves prepare for whatever comes next. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
DE962FEDCD9E | Being a successful person in life require some essential things. Successful person is someone who achieve goals in life and make dreams true. People who are preising for a good work will feel great and ready to start a new project to progress in life. People who have a success life can be because they haved teachers who praising they for doing outstanding school's project so, this inspirated they to try the best they can and be a successful person in their future. However somepeople believe praising a student's work to build self-steem is a good idea nevertheless, I think the source of true self-steem is archievement because, praising students who did a great job will feel amazing and also, it helps to have a better self-steem and students will have the ambition to improve their skills and archieve something to their future.
Praising students who did a great job will feel amazing and also, it helps to have a better self-steem. Students feel great when someone is praising them so, this help they to feel better and happy. Positive personalities become to a good self-steem also, this make a better environment. Students with a good self-steem will be doing a better job and will make true the things their love. Praising great students can help to other students to try to do a better job like that great student and be praising like they. Praising students who did a great job will be benefitial for the entire classroom becoming a positive environment and making the students more active to do a better job to be praising like an outstanding student and this help they to progress and do things better.
students will have the ambition to improve their skills and archieve someting to their future. The students in a classroom will want to be outstanding students so they will trying the best they can and start to progressing to reach that goal. Students with a good self-steem and smartness will want to have a great future and the ambition to be a better student every day. Praising students help they to improve their skills and doing their best. Students who are praising for a great job will help they to improve teir skills and do better jobs every day and become outstanding students.
In conclution, the source of true self-steem is archievement because when a great student is praising will have the ambition to improve every day more to become a better student. My suggestion is to start praising great students to make they and others to feel the ambition to be better every day and create a smart, competitive and happy environment. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
DEA1F417949A | Did you know that people who stay out of trouble, have greater change of succeeding in life. So the city council should take step forward in to adopting the curfew law, because that would keep the teenagers out of trouble. Many teenagers follow the law, but those who do not will be breaking the law. This curfew law is going to help many ways, some teenagers stay out late socializing with they are friend; many times they are late to school the next morning. The benefits of this law would be that, it keeps the teenagers safe and out of trouble.
If the curfew is adopted, it is going to keep the teenagers out of streets late at night. Me and my friend sometime go to 7-eleven late at night during weekdays around 10;30 p. m. If the law was in order right now, we would be breaking the law. On the weekend some teenagers might want to stay out longer with they are friends: socializing, making new friends, and building a good friendship. But a law is a law, If you are still out on the streets after 12 a. m then you would be breaking the law and going to be in trouble.
This curfew law will set a boundary for teenagers who always come home late at night. This law might cut down little bit of they are freedom, but it is for they are own good. My mom always tells me to be home by 9:00 p. m on the weekdays, but I am always an hour late. When the curfew law is in order, my mom knows that i will be home by 10 p. m, because i do not like to break the law. It is better to be safe and out of trouble than getting in trouble and breaking the law.
Many people would disagree with the curfew law because some teenagers work and do not have transportation; they have to walk from work to home after those hours. There-for it is parents job to make sure they are kids make it home safe. As parents you never want to see your child in danger or in trouble on the streets. The city council should adopted the law in order, so the teenagers will be out of streets late at night and home safe with they are family. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
DEB7816C7CAF | I gonna maybe take a long summer but i feel like is so nice take a that vacation. I need go to every park and everithyng can i go. They take a good vacation so long but good that is so cool. I need go to Oder side for vacation. they take a education summer and they past so good i think they need more vacation on a school because that is so important for they but in the school any time have vacation i will go to talk my teachers for vacation whit a school people.
i like that school but need more programs and more activities for the students. that is not good because all the time they pass in the class that is so boring i cant now other thinks in the life like how is the Virginia history in the museum Thais a good idea is important that thinks for the students vacation i gonna maybe take a long summer i feel like is so nice a that action. i need go to every park and everything can i go. They take a good vacation so long but goo that is so cool. i need go other side for vacation. They take a education summer and they past so good think they need more vacation i will go to talk my teachers for that vacation whit a school people i like that school but need more programs like more thinks more activities in the life how is the Virginia museum an history that is a good idea is important that thinks for the students vacation. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
DEC2349902F8 | I disagree with the school bored adding one and a half hour to school each day. Because students will have to wake up very early everyday and get out from school late that's messed up to do to us like every class will be like more than a 1 hour and 30 minutes of class time hell no. I will die having a class like that but. I hope we have gym for 2 hour and 30 minutes everyday that will be fun but without having health and I will be so happy if we never have 5 sol every year like 2 or 3 is fine but 5 no that's to much sols for 1 year like the county is so mean to us but it's all good and having recess like what I had when I was a little boy.
I think when i get older I want to be a soccer player or a basketball player but I do not know yet like when my dad was a little boy he was poor and he want to be a soccer player but his dream never became true but when he came to the united states he went to her don high school for 2 or 3 year and than he learned how to speck engli8sh and got to play for the schools soccer team.
I think school is not that hard but for some people it is but the hardest class for me is Math and
History that all the class that I hard for me the other class are not that hard for me.......... | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
DEC2A1A6A1CA | The famous Albert Einstein always said "Imagination is more important than knowledge". I agree with this amazing quote because without imagination you wouldn't be yourself. As a kid everyone has always imagined of them being like or better then someone. These are my reasons of why I agree with the famous Albert Einstein.
First of all, without an imagination you wouldn't have dreams to succeed. Myself for example I've always wanted to be a professional soccer player. But than I realized that soccer isn't very popular in America. So than i started playing football and I enjoy playing that sport very much. Since than I've always imagine of being a professional football player.
Secondly, imagination is an everyday thing you use it everyday in many ways. Imagination is like an opinion,no one can take that from you. It can be positive nor negative either way no one can change the way you think. Imagination is everything because you always imagine or wish you were doing something or wish you were with someone. As a person that has dreams to succeed you need imagination to achieve them.
As one can see,me as a football player. I use my imagination a lot for many reasons. Because I am very competitive when it comes to sports, I always want to be better than the old me. I always want to be one step ahead from everyone. For that reason I think I use my imagination a lot. Like if I ever lose at something I would think about it and say "imagine if I won".
Lastly, the famous quote can say a lot in my opinion. Because without an imagination you wouldn't be a regular person. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
DEC50B420484 | Think about the benefits of working with a group or working alone. Which do i feel is more beneficial?
Well working alone get you more focus and not playing around. If working with a group it will be different then working alone, because you can work faster or get the answer of them and be a great group to past the class and work on it but working together as a group it will be hard not you not gonna focus too because they gonna be playing around and not pay attention to what the teacher is saying in class.
Some people wanna work alone or work as group and the reason why people want to do that because working long they can focus and not play around, and working as a group people are gonna work together just to play around and not be paying any attention just being in the phone or talking.
Teachers need to do something about working together as a group because they just gonna goof around and not do there work they just gonna be talking and being on their phone. I feel like people need to work alone so they can focus on there work and be paying attention to the teachers and do there work. I don't think people should work as a group. At the same time people should work as a group because they can help each other and give answer to each other | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
DED3BCBE5049 | What would you think about an after school homework club at your school. Do you think that it would help the students with their homework or that its just a waste of time to do this type of clubs. Some people might think that the homework club its helpful and others don't. Others might do it just to get their homework done early. That way they have free time at home to play games or to go out with friends.
I think that this club can help so many students who have difficulty with certain subjects like Math, English, or Science. It can also help them get their homework done or any projects that they didn't finish in class. The teachers there can help the students with their work. Also they can work with a friend that is in the club with them. It would be a really fun thing because you get everything done faster.
Some people might think that its a waste of time because they can do their homework at home. Other students just go to get all their homework done early. They can also go to have a little fun with their friends after they are done with all their work that they had. This club can also help you study for a test that you're about to take or something else. They can also just go to play video games if they have no homework to do.
I think that the schools should keep doing this club after school because it can help students get their homework done. That way the students can improve their grades that they have in the class. The students should also not be misbehaving while in the club. They shouldn't do any inappropriate things or say anything inappropriate during the afterschool club. If they do they should get a consequence.
I would like to have afterschool homework club because it can help a lot of students with their work. They can get their homework done faster and get more help. You can also go and get your homework done earlier. You can study for a test that you're about to take. You can finish any projects that you didn't get to complete in class. Afterschool homework club is a really cool thing that every school should have. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
DEDCC703F6FC | Some school districts offer programs that allow high students to gradute in three years instead of the traditional four years. In my opinion, I feel like it is a good idea for some school districts to allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years.
The reason on why I feel like it is a good idea for students to graduate early is for Job oppurtunity, Entering college early and also Moving other places and starting a whole new life without no worries on education no more. Job oppurtunity's will help you out to save money, working on what you like doing and also find some jobs can help you get into college if you are interested. For example, I am studying about autotechnology and it is my second year doing it. My plans are to continue working on cars and hopefully find a job at a dealership so I can learn enough at college.
Another reason on why I feel like allowing students to graduate in three years instead of four is so that they can start off there future earlier than others by attending college. Entering college early is a good thing because you have some time to pick and decide on what you might want to study and learn about so you can get your masters on it or so that you can finish early and move onto what's next on your accomplishments in life. My school has the option to do Dual Enrollment which basically means starting college already and getting already college credits and still having to be in high school.
Finally, another reason on why I feel like graduating high school earlier than others is to have the chance to move to another country or state and start a brand new. Starting a brand new life can become very hard and very stressful. Starting a new life moving somewhere else means finding a better job oppurtunity, finding a olace to live in your budjet and also finding new people to hang around with but in my opinion at the end it will all be worth it. Some students are already looking somewhere to move on there own or with a roomate because they might be having problems at home that they don't want to deal with. At the same time of moving to another place you have to make sure that you are ready on what's about to come into your life. For example, paying bills, paying rent, house supplies and also if you have a vehicle make sure that your payments are on time.
In conclusion, I feel like allowing high school students to graute in three years instead of the traditional four years is a good idea. Job oppurtunity, Entering college early and also Moving to another state or country in my opinion are one of the main important things to focus on after finishing high school. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
DEDD5C568B4C | I agree with being honest at all times because you need to be honest with your true friends, you need to be honest with your family, and you to be honest with yourself.
The first reason you need to be honest is with your true friends because your true friends are going to want you to tell the truth to them.
Your friends always check on you to see if you are okay and tell you how is your life so far .You got to tell the truth to them because they really care about you a lot. For example, what happens if you are in a bad situation like being chased by a stranger and you told your friend to call 911 because you are being chased. The police got there in time to arrest the stranger who was chasing you. You see, friends care about you and for your safety as well.
Your friends will always got your back no matter what happens to you or them.
Your friends just want to hangout with you have fun .
The second reason you need to be honest is with your family . You got to be honest with your family because you got to tell them the truth of what is going on in your life. What happens if your Mom or Dad are calling you while you are walking to school with your ringer cut off. They just checking on you and for your safety. Your does not want you tell them lies cause sometimes kids do not want to tell their parents what is going on in school. You never know when they are getting bullied and being harassed.
The lesson of the story is that always be honest and tell the truth with your family.
The third reason you need to be honest is with yourself at all times. You have to trust yourself because you never know what is going to happen to you. For Example, someone is selling drugs in school and he told you that you want some drugs . You have to think is this going to kill me or just say no. In my opinion I would say no to person who is selling the drugs. This actually can happen in real life . If you were in that position just say no or make an excuse . The lesson of the story is always be honest to yourself. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
DF058CBE24A6 | The people are discussion about the use of technology has positive or negative effects on people's live, some people think technology allows people to complete many task without having contact with others, other people think the technology is the cause to the limitation of human contact. The technology it is positive effects because have many advantage, it is a big help in the people's live.
In the actuality, we live a life busy with many works, sometimes we have others commitments. The teenagers have to much homework and some teenagers have work after school, and finally we have a little free time in the night, but all this is more fast and easy thanks to technology, because the technology make more easy some things, for example if the homework was in paper without technology, we need go to the library for buy pictures, colors, history and more materials and that take more time and we need wait for somebody, because we need ride, finally without technology we are spend money and that take more time.
However, some people think the technology has negative effects and we don't should be use the technology because when the family want eat together sometimes everybody use the cellphone int he table, and they don't have a good relationship, but the technology is big help for many things, for example the technology is big help for contact with friends or family who lives in other place and the technology help when we want got to other place and we don't know where is the address so, we can use Google maps, everything you need, we can find with technology.
The technology is a bigger help in the life for example, I have family and other country and also I have friend and different state, and I miss my friends and my family, and I love talk with them, but I use technology for communicate, we can talk and we can see each other and we are so happy, when is my birthday my family always call me in the morning they call me with face-time and the same with me when is grandmother's birthday I call her, and we feel happy, but the technology is more help and different places, also I use the technology for located to my dad, everyday my mom need pick up to my dad and his work so, we use Googler maps, it is a good help.
We can see the technology is a great help in the life, use correctly you will have good result,
the technology is positive but no everybody have a mind positive, because If we talk about scientific, doctors, physical and etc. Technology is a big help, they find the cure many illness, but everything is about use technology, we know many things about history but is also for technology, doctors have different machines for save many lives.
Finally, the technology has positive effects in the people's live, is our help, thanks to technology we feel more close persons that live in other country and always be a big help in the life in different area. The people determined how want use the technology. everybody work with technology for a good reason is because is help in our lives. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
DF111089EFA4 | We have to work to survive. Employers give us the opportunity to work and to overcome different financial problems. Many high schools have partnerships with companies that help student to know about different jobs and companies. Some companies have internships and shadowing opportunities that helps student to find out their interest. Schools should have partnership with compamies because it helps students to get ideas about Work environment, work skills, and jods requirement
The partnerships with companies and schools allow student to know waht kind of skills need for different jobs. Then students can find out their strong points and select the jobs according to their skills. Studens are good on math work on computer programing,web designing, and computer engineering. Students without internships activities take time to select the work that they want to grow up. They suffer to select their jobs. On the other hand, students with internships activities already had began to grow their occupation. They are heading toward in college as well as their jobs.
Work environment is very importent. Different people like different work environment. We should select the job that attends our demands. Some people like to work individually while other like to work with group. Internships and shadowing allow student to know about different work environments before select the jobs. Some people may say people adjust themselves with the work environment but the question is how long time it will take a person to adjust with the environment?. Also, in a recent report says that we accomplish more when we work in a favorable environment.
All jobs have some requirments. All the jobs do not have same requirements. Some jobs need experience while other jobs do not need experience. Internships and shadowing opportunities help students to get these information from the employers. With these information student get a chance to prepair themselve. They meet the requirement before their high school graduation. People may say that job requirements can be find out in online, but often we get the wrong information from online. By internships and shadowing we are getting right information directly from the employer without any difficulty.
In conclusion, students are getting a lot of information from the companies that have partnerships with the schools. It is a great way for the students to build up their future. This opportunities gave students ideas about jobs they should select. The informations help students to be successfull in their career life. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
DF149975C610 | I agree with emerson's statement. I will grow every day, I do best in life. When I wake up most days, I think on my goals. I will reach my dream in my school to grow better in Algebra. I will grow in my school , to improve my english. to set up my plan to become a doctor. I study hard every day. I can do this finish my goals. I work hard. I feel tired most all the time , but that is not my stop sing to leave my school. I will finish finish as soon is possible I will be satisfied getting my goals done.
I disagree we don't have to challenge other person's to do better. Some people they are satisfied what they have,for example job,school, and other activities. may be they still in high school and they are no ready to go to the next level to go the college.
In my case, I want more challenge on me to have a better job, better opportunities, to support my family. Majority of people think, I can't complete my studies or finish my school. I believe on me, I will grow up to see my self in a good job, I will grow in Math, english and History. I believe also some people, are happy what they have in life. Further they will discover new ideas, to put in order to bring on their future plans to move on to the next activity or achivement.
People grow evendough, when they have done journey in life to achieve their goals. I saw some students today. They were my classmate in the same school where I done too, now present day some of them are lawyers, profesors, and doctors. Solutions I agree we should learn new things in life, is important to have wisdom to share. I agree I can get my High School Diploma.
I will motivated people to back school to done education. To do progress in life, we do have to find the excited things what should like to do. If we are good in soccer, let's go play soccer. if we like music, we should find the ways how to learn to sing. I agree I'm the solution to get things done one of them my education. I disagree I am no the problem to stop my goals.
Finally with effort one day, I can be a doctor. I know is no goig to be easy. I love dificult things on me to get my dream to become thrue.
satisfied is a word I will declined, I will see my self with my family, friends, and teachers given me my diploma. I respect people, is satisfied with their goals.
In my opinion, if we have the opportunity to have a better future. We do have to challenge our soul. To become a such a profesional to help our world. We should live in peace, a share the wisdom, and love around the world with people. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
DF193A9E1C5A | Thomas Jefferson wrote Determine never to be idle.. it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing. I agree that we accomplish more if we are always doing something right or important, however, that it doesnt mean that you are idle. While, if we are working or study.
They are many people that works on importants jobs, sometime they suggest you to have a lot of energy and be preparated. For example at the job alot of employees that against you because they said that you are idle, and you dont want to do nothing. Insted that the employees at your job dont know that you are tired because you have two jobs.
Some people, students or parents lived so tire and they look idle. At my house we live all togethers and sometime i dont to do nothing at my house. My parents argument me that i dont clean the house. For example that i dont study or help my mom with my little brother. In addition my family doesnt know that i have tow jobs because i want to help her to play the rent of the house, that why some people lookd idle or tired.
They are some friends that they teach you and they support you to be a better person with good behaviour those people want you to be how great you are doing something productive. Neverles, some friends want you to be like them with bad reputation. For example unemplayment, without money, you need to be reponsibility of your acts.
In conclusion, it doesnt matter if other people are telling you idle or unemplayment, they are time that it is hard to find a job or you just want to rest because you are tire, it is wonderful to know that how much may be done if are always doing something;Therefore, some people think that does inactivity also serve a purpose. In my opinion they should be doing somthing at life to receive a good pupose in your life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
DF1D43973CFA | My opinion about If school students have to a four-day school week. The students and teachers can get more a free dar, that day we can take sleep, study for other you need study someting, enjoy with your family, develop your self and what do I want to do. I can have many good someting for you. But the other days, you have the school day two more hours. You need think about now. We have seven hour on school, you dose not tired for long times in school? The seven hour is very long time,
every early morning all students wake up the may de am 5:30 or 6:00, you need take prepare to go to school, and stay there for seven hour. But if we have a four-day school week and expending the school day two hours, you should loss the two hours from many something. For example, I can't have a sleep, study for you need know someting, enjoy with my family, develop my self, and what do I want to do. Because of we have a four-day school week and expending the school day two hours. If we have two more hour in school, we need stay two more hour in school, more study. I don't want to lossing my five day's happy and free. We need more think about what is really good for us. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
DF23B896A1C2 | American jazz legend Duke Ellington said, '' A Problem is a change for you to do your best.'' I agree with that stamens because when you have a problem it a chance for you to to your best and overcome it. Unfortunately that not the case. Mostly in sports you are driven to do your best when losing. But adults tend not to do there best when facing a problem. You should be always motivated to do your best.
If you play any sports you know that when you are losing you are motivated to do your best. No mater how many points you are losing by you try your best to make that come back and win the game. If you don't win that game you at least know that you tried your best. If you were to give up you would have wondered, if you tried would I have won. This not the only example, for example you boss is about to fire you and try you best to keep that job. There are many more examples you can try to be your best.
Some times adults have to face problem and they don't know what to do or how to face that problem, they think there nothing they can do. They give up form the start they don't try there best when facing that problem. They simply give up. They miss out on that chance. For example, My dad got fired from his job, he was depressed and did not care at all about anything. He did not try his best. he simply gave up. But you should never give up always give it your best no matter what.
Form trying your best you don't lose any thing you only gain something. you can't follow you dreams without trying you best, does not matter what you want to be. you will face problems no matter what path you take. For example bill gates he did not become one of the most successful people by doing nothing. he gave it his best. So why should you not give it your best .
No matter who you are, you should take the words of Duke Ellington and try you best when facing a problem. Does not matter if you are playing sports or having a issue at work. or trying to achieve you dreams . Never fail to give it your best, or you will regret it. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
DF328FBE5029 | The British naturalist and John Lubbock wrote.
Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it.'Do we choose our own character traits ,or is our character formed by influences beyond our control.
Although some people think that character is formed for other persons that are around them and that their character is always going to be formed for people around them but character is formed by the way of your own emotions that shows how you feel how you are, other people says that if they don't be like other people want to they be they feel out of the group in that moment some people starts to hate their self, but what other people do is they ignore what people says about them as they don't hear anything and never give up.
Other people think that if they don't change their character they are going to success in their life and that they are obligate to change for they future and when they change they start to feel bad because they change something better than what they get and when other people ask them for what they change they says that for be an adult they have to be like one but what is a adult is a is a person that looks death and is always mad with other people or they say that the character is formed from the moment they born and that hey can not do anything about it .
In my conclusion, We choose our own character and it's doesn't have nothing with others person ,we choose how we wanna be and how we feel better with our self...
Thank you for read my essay i don't really understand about what a have to write so sorry about this. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
DF64D7FF61F1 | I disagree that the school bored planes to add one and a half hours of school each day, because student need to have a period of time that they can stay at school that they can get home on time. I want the school bored to take less hours off of school for students because they can hang out with family and friends after school at the regular time everyday.
First of all, students learn so much everyday that they get so tired and frustrated. Also the student don't want the school bored to extend time for one and half hours to the regular school time because they have carfare.
Second of all, there family probable wonder where there son/daughter are at, that's why we don't want to extend the time. If the school bored extend more time there would be more homework and the students won't like that there would be homework involved.
Third of all, the teacher probable don't want to stay at school for just an hours an a half. the teachers don't want the school bored to extend more school time because they probable are tired to teach so many students every day of the week.
As you can see, the school bored shouldn't extend more time to school for students because we don't want to stay after school for more learning. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
DF74545A44C8 | The great artist Michelangelo once said, "The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark."
This is mena that people setitng their direction to high they falling quick, but they setting their direction too low that achieve their mark.
For my opinion, people set their aim as high as they can, because they know that if they set too low; they won't have that power to finish or to get it. This made people thought their aim is high; they need to work harder not just the 100 precent they need to put more than 100 precent into it and get thieir aim. Not all the people can reach as high as they set, but at least they try eventhought they fall they still on a good postion. For example, I have a quze total points is 100 and I try to get the full points, but in the end I only get 85, it's still good, because I know my aim is high, I need to do hard. When people set their aim too low, they won't have that power to finish it, because you know that it's easy to get it, and you don't even have to prepare or try for it. This make you don't know what you really want and need. It will let you just stuck there. From my opinion, I really agree Michelagelo's satement "The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark."
In my conclusion, people should set their aim as high as they can, eventhought they cannot reach it, but at least they try it, but don't set a easy aim that you don't even have to try your best to get it, this will not improve yourself. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
DF785B00E2A2 | I think to working in group will be more beneficial for me, Some reason the
I prefer to work in a group is becouse will can share ideas and opinions that way will be get better grade, Another examples will be, every one in the group will found diferent information and that way we can pick the better information before to proceeding to writng and finich the work.
And another hand my central opinion to work in group will give you the best beneficial because if one of the student get sick the other student can continued to work, that way we can not stop working. And alway work together will supported the idea with the specific information,
Another importan examples is if you working in group you can asked to you group for help, you can shere the work, either one in the group can provide the better ideas and following information in order,
that way all together we can planned the work before writing.
Athoner reason for work in group in my personal opinion is feel more beneficial because you not work alone, that way is less stresfull for each student because every one share the work.
And some time for one reason one of the student has a emergency and the position the best option is work in group because will be more beneficial for each student and the way all the rest of the group can countinued wokt.
and still whole group will be get same grade, however they work together in the group.
In conclusion working with a group is the best, in my personal opinion, I prefer to work in group because the way I improve my work,
working in group is the better way to work because we has many benefits like share ideas, imformation, etc,
and the end I hope you prefer aech student has to keeping work in group.
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Thank you. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
DF8B648769C5 | PROMPT
Many people today likes give advises to others, sometimes about their life, work or personal relationship. But the question now is, ''Example is not the main thing in influencing others; is the only thing? I think it is, for two main reasons.
Fistly, When you talk to others, you sometimes gives a example about other people experiences. For example, someone who was a bad person in the past and now he change. You can change bad relations or yourself . You are influencing that person with reasons, examples and actions, he can change himself. If he wants.
Second, always we influenced people with reasons, maybe bad reasons or good reasons but is the only way to influence others. Influence people is not easy, you need to be prepared with the examples they need to ear.
In conclucion, the only way to influence people is with examples, actions, reasons and your personal advise. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
DF9E11F7A06E | Ralph Waldo Emerson says"unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered,you will never grow."On one hand,some people disagree with statement. On the other hand,some people agree with this statement. People should try to do something beyond what they have already mastered since their confident level will grow,it makes them feel good,and make their live easier.
However,not everybody agree with position,some people claim that people can grow in live without trying something new because they don't want to get out of their comfort zone and try new things. Nevertheless,this opposition other important,namely that trying new things give us a high level of confident. For example,my biggest fear in live is airplanes and i never been on it,but if i try it for the first time in my live even i scare or not next time,i would have more confident for trying new thing since when the airplane was my biggest fear and i try it. I could do more. Further more, trying new things make our confident level high which is an important thing in our live.
In addition,it makes us feel good. For instance,my cousin was always sad and she hated to try new things. One day we went swimming,everyone had fun except my cousin. After condensing her for a long time,she try it. On that time,my cousin was so happy that she even wants to be a swimmer now. Thus,people should try new things to make them feel good and happy.
Finally,it makes the live easy. To illustrate,if someone be so strike in live and doesn't wants to try something beyond what he/she already mastered,that person will have a hard live. The person will never grow in live since he/she scares to get out the comfort zone and try new thing. Moreover,we should get out of our comfort zone so we could have an easy live.
Based on this argument,one must conclude,people never get better unless they try new things in live. In the whole,Ralph Waldo Emerson's statement was true based of the reasons. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
DFB7AB4481AC | I think that people can success without having the cosists of failure without loss of enthusiam. There's other way to success without failing, one of them is to practice. An another way is sometime you can get it on your first time without have to fail. Then you can just study other's failure and not make them same mistake, or sucess and try to do the same. These are other way to success without having to fail, and they are maybe more ways also. So Winston Churchill isn't wrong, there's still other success with out failure.
First you can practices, practices makes you better that thing to want to success with. It like you can't success to be the best soccer player if you don't practices. So instead of taking the test or what ever if you practices, you might not fail, you'll be ready for it or good to do it. If you want to success in a sport, you can success by practicing you can build mussel memory that can help you in many ways. If you want to success on a test you can practices on practices tests, that can help you out. That one of the ways you can success without failure.
Also you can success by getting it are on you first time, there's some time people do will on their first time without having to fail, practices, or study. They are mostly lucky when that happen, and it does happens much, but they still success. Most people like to call this, winging it, some people might success, and some might not but that a other way so still success. it might be the best way success, but might have done it and success for it.
Another way people can success, is by watching other's failure and success. When you watch other's failure you can study and try not to make the same mistake as they did. So if you saw some player or some slowed down when they were about score, but they miss or someone block them you can say, "they shouldn't have slowed or whatever that would have help them. So when it your turn you can try to not make the same mistake and success. You don't just have to watch their fail, and can also study their success and try to do the same thing. So by watch others people success and failure, you can copy their success or improve their failure.
So Winston isn't wrong you can success form your failure. By look on your mistake and improve them and making you'll self better, at what you have trouble at. Failure without loss of enthusiasm is better then getting so mad about it and might make it easier to success next time.
So I don't agree with Churchill's statement, because their is more then just failure to success. There's so much way to success with having to fail. You can practices, study other's failure and success, and sometime success on you first time by winging it. So those are some reason, why i don't agree with Winston Churchill. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
DFCF2A3BE972 | The program that the school provides for attending classes online could have a positive outcome or it could have a negative outcome. Different school have different ways of doing things. Some school don't provide this type of programs, in others do. Different type of people have different type of view of attending classes online. People would agree that is a good idea but other would say its bad idea. Having online class you don't have to wait for other people to finish. You could do what pace you want and to do your classes. It could have a negative part to attending online school. Your WIFI could go slow or not work at all. Having a hard time to achieve the work. Not having a different environment with people with the same age. Not doing the work that they assigned you.
When a student have class online they could find it defalcate to achieve the work that they been assigned to. You would not be able to ask question about the problem. Would have to figure it out by your self. Some online website would not help you to achieve what you are looking for. It could give a bad answer and then you got the whole assignment wrong. In videos you could find ways to achieve it but sometimes there is not a lot of videos on things that you are looking for. If you where in a class room you could ask a teacher to show you how to solve it and you would probably would understand it more. In online school sometimes there is no teacher available at the time when you need them. Sometimes student don't have the time and sometimes they don't turn in there work on time. Would just put it to the side and say" they would probably do it later" and never do it. It could be found defalcate to achieve the work on time.
When you so round your self with people that are the same age. You could have study patterns and you could ask them for help. Doing online school its just you and the computer and the class you are taking. Probably have friends but they mite not be taking the same class as you,would not be a able to work together or study. Doing online school would maybe not have time to socialize with new people. You may work or do other things but most of the times they could be older or you just don't talk to people a lot. Having different environment could help you to learn more and plus you would not be by your self. Have other people with you in the same room. Not just you home by yourself with a computer. Having classes online you would not be sou round with people your age.
Doing online class sometimes could give out a lot of work to do in one day. In the same day you have to turn it in. It could be challenge when you dont know what they are talking about or you just don't understand it. Doing your work is one important thing to do, to understand the class and what its teaching. Not just going online to find something that kind of looks like the work and you just copy it down. Sometimes student could get lazy and not do there work. Would probably leave it for the last minute to turn it in. The laziness of student could end up with no good grades or passing the class, would take the class all over. You could get distracted really fast with other things that is going on in your life. Not doing the work, it would not take you no where and would not finish the class on time before the due date.
The school would give different ways for student to attend class. It could be online class or going to a classroom in a school. It would be helpful for student to attend more class and probably have more free time. Sometimes student could take advantage on this program to just stay home and do nothing. Life could be hard sometimes and you could go through things that you don't expect to happen. It could be defalcate when you don't know the subject and there is no teacher around to help you. Students always choose whats right for them. Attending classes online could be defalcate to achieve. Would not be sou rand by people their age and probably not do there work. Attending classes online dose not always work out for students. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
DFD93C26F453 | An old adverb can hurt someone no matter if it's through songs,books or movies. It can hurt us in any way and the adverbs matter a lot of your typing and use the wrong verb.
It can bring down your grade but you can practice everyday to get better at writing and know your verbs.
Depending on the verb if its right or wrong if its wrong your grade goes down lets say if you have a 96 on a test and the verb is bad.
It will go down to a 94 if its more then the lower your grade goes and if its right you have no problems with typing. A correct prompt
You can even miss a verb if your not careful enough. Anything can hurt your grade by being small things to big things including miss spelling.
Bad verbs can be everywhere including movies and books to scripts that's why people have to be extra careful typing. spelling. reading and pronouncing a word.
That's why you have to be extra careful and read the sentence over and over again till you know it's correct and to see if its all good. if you do it good enough you might be looking at a grade thats would be higher than a c but if you dont at least a c or a d and it couldnt be bad. But your grade means anything more in school and you should take good care of it to. if you want to keep making your parents proud and get rewards too. so thats the good thing about it to keep a higher grade | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
E0209F1D5DF6 | In this quote that Albert Schweitzer wrote said "Example is not the main thing influencing others; it is the only thing." There are many different ways to influence other. for example talk to them about your experience.
Although some say that should not influence other people about own behavior because people will get mad, actually some say there should be own behavior is the way to influence others because you can have more friend and be a good person.
In my opinion, the best way to influence other is talk softly and calm because they can understand more. For example if you scream everyday to them they will not respect you and then will not care anymore. They will be doing the same to other person.
Other Person when they talk about they own behavior they get mad because they know what they are doing something bad they get nervous. Second they have to be brave to talk about to the doctor, for example if you kill somebody and you don't know what to do and you have bad attitude than you have to go to talk with somebody you trust, you have to be brave.
But as you can see there is many ways to influence other and had talk to them they will have good education. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
E033F3B6B044 | The first impressions can change depends of each person; Each person have different reaction when they see something the first time, but after that your thoughts can change when you know more about the life of the other person. The first impressions are important because is the first reaction of each person; First reactions sometimes can change after 1 hour or 1 day.
When a person have a bad impression about a class the first day because the class is bored; But the second day the class is fun your reaction can change. Some times the firsts impressions depends of your attitude because if your have a negative attitude your first impressions are negative too. First impressions sometimes are bad and if a person react bad that can show what kind of person you are.
Sometimes impression are impossible to change because many persons don't change the first reaction.
When you have a good impression about somebody your through can change if a person do something bad.
The first impressions change , when you have a good impression about a work because you thing is easy and fun a you make friends but in the second day know your boss and he have a bad attitude with you your impression can change and your through about the work change because you don't like the attitude of your boss. A first impression is a important moment because your first thought about a person or something and that is important because if you have a good impression about somebody you can make a good friend.
In conclusion the first impression can change depends of each person and depends of your attitude too but no always the first impressions change because sometimes many person don't chnage their thoughts about something. Do you imagine if the first impression don't change? that is bad because when your impresions don't change just because you thing the another person is not cool; you can't have that thing because you have to know more about the life of the another person. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E03B0AA78E40 | Committing to a job at a Young age is bad and good idea, why you may ask? Well at a young age you might have a fantacy and a very huge immagination well at least i did, as a kid this could help because if you commit to a career at young age. When you're older you'll be an expert and know the job by memory. Having to commit to a career at a young age can save you time in the future, when you have graduated you would automatically have a option and know what job you are going to do. This can also be a terrible idea because at that a young age you don't really know what you want as a career, you just go with what ever your parents or the person you look up to does and as you get older you relize you were not really into that career. Your brain also isn't fully developed until you're older it is a proven fact.
Having a fantacy and a very great immagination is good because it can motivate you to choose a good carreer which you would obviosly enjoy in the future. May aslo be a bad idea because when you get older you learn to hate things you enjoyed as a kid and it would just leave you with a career you cant enjoy as much as you use too. For example when i was a kid i enjoyed to play Football i always thought i would do it until i died. As i got older i began to hate it, because it wasn't really what i wanted to do it was what my dad wanted me to do which i enjoyed because it made him happy. Now i know i want to travel the world and be a Photographer and learned to speak up for myself and it helped me to communicate with my dad and be straight forward with him there for kids are confused at a young age.
Reasons why commiting to a career at a young age is a good idea. The more you get older the more you know about the job so you'll be a wealthy man getting paid good by the time you are twenty five. There for you wouldn't be worried and freaking out about what career you are going to do after school you would already be prepared mentally and physically.
As a kid you enjoy whatever your parents are doing, so you would obviously choose a career to be with your parents and thats a good thing as a kid. It'll make the job easier, funnier and more comftorable.
"In some societies, students are expectected to identify a career by the time they enter high school." Personally i think Choosing a career at a young age is a bad idea, because like i said it is a proven fact that your brain isn't fully developed at a young age. That can be a bad idea to choose a career at a young age because you can choose a career you know nothing about, which means once you learn the job you might not even like it as much as when you first chose it. For example let's say Your father could be working as a construction worker and because he does it you might chose your career to be a construction worker. When kids are young they like what others like its just how society makes you think, as you get older you become wiser and realize thats not what you actually want to do. There for you should not choose a career when you are in high school and just enjoy your school year's once you graduate you'll regret it and wish you had just relaxed but that does not mean you should'nt plan for upcoming careers you should have more than one option, prepared for after you graduate. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
E03B6B157C32 | "Does true self-esteem comes from praise or does it come from achievement." Self-esteem comes from achievement because it makes you feel good. It makes you feel that you could do anything. Also you can learn not to give up.
Self-esteem comes from achieving, it will make you feel good about yourself. For example, if Generic_Name achieves shooting five times at the three point line and makes all of them; he will feel good about himself. His self-esteem is feeling good so he may try to do more next time at the three point line. But feeling good about yourself is not the only thing that will help with your self-esteem.
Another is it will make you feel that you could do anything. For example, if Generic_Name wins the art fair only in her class, but the school is having an art fair for the whole sophomore class. Her self-esteem will kick in and she may sign up
Also you can learn how to not give up for example if Generic_Name lose the class discussion but the class is going to have another one the next day she is going to try her hardest to win the next class discussion.
I think that achievement will help kids with their learning because nowadays kids like winning and winning things at the end it makes their self-esteem built up. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
E04208981449 | No! it is not a good idea to graduate in three years instead of traditional four years. People think the actual life of a person starts after the high school but most of the students wants to graduate early to go collage or start working. Because they want to graduate early, they have only time to complete their requirement courses for early graduation. They do not have the option to take elective courses in high school which make them confuse in collage; what they want to do, they need to take extra classes ,and they have no vacation for relaxation.
When the student grow, their interest of subject changes because they came out in a real world. They observe from their around,what they want to do and what they want to be but in early graduation they have only choices to complete requirement courses in given time which make them specific and confuse in collage. When they go to collage they have some specific options to choose courses, if they want to do something different from what the choices they have they need to take elective courses in collage which make the study more harder than what they have. Because they want to graduate early, they have only time to complete their requirement courses for early graduation. They do not have the option to take elective courses in high school which make them confuse in collage; what they want to do, they need to take extra classes ,and they have no vacation for relaxation.
If the student did the early graduation and planing to take admission in collage and get admission in course, what they want to persuade .The classes they took in the high school are only for graduation requirement and the study you want to persuade is different then the elective classes ,you need to take extra classes in summer or night time to complete your graduation credits to complete the course. It is important to do four year high school graduation ,in the first year of high school ,they understand what they want to do in future and start taking those classes which help them to graduate early from collage. Because they want to graduate early, they have only time to complete their requirement courses for early graduation. They do not have the option to take elective courses in high school which make them confuse in collage; what they want to do, they need to take extra classes ,and they have no vacation for relaxation.
When the student did the early graduation and they want to go in collage, and take the admission in a course which the student have no high school credits and the student never took in school. They need to take a extra classes in summer break or in the evening time. When you are in collage you need to do some internship in the evening time , if you are study skillful course, so you can understand practically but you have extra classes in the evening time , its difficult to do job or internship in the evening time. Collage education is harder but if you have extra classes in the evening and in summer break, you do not have the time took some time off from collage and job and do some vacations. Because they want to graduate early, they have only time to complete their requirement courses for early graduation. They do not have the option to take elective courses in high school which make them confuse in collage; what they want to do, they need to take extra classes ,and they have no vacation for relaxation.
They have only time to complete their requirement courses for early graduation. They do not have the option to take elective courses in high school which make them confuse in collage; what they want to do, they need to take extra classes ,and they have no vacation for relaxation. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
E0538F7AB083 | I agree with this statement, first impressions with people or places are difficult to changed.
But first the definition of Impression is a lasting effect, opinion, or mental image. Is a belief of understanding of sth. Here is a example in a sentence,
I made a bad impression by arriving late for the interview.
I always see the bad and good things in each person and in each places too. But sometimes the impressions can change, It depends on the person. Now I'm gonna make some examples about the first impressions in people and with places.
For example, If I'm going to a restaurant the first impressions that I'm looking for, are If the local is cleanly(floor, chairs, etc..), the bathroom they aren't dirty, the employers(making sure that they are using gloves when they touch the food and when they prepair the food, Plague(rats, cockroach, etc..) that's very important because we don't want to get transmit a bacteria or something like that). Another example, If I'm going to a friend house, my first impressions that I'm looking for, are typically the same of the restaurant, instead of the part of the employes(obviously), but if the house is dirty, for example: (the floor, the kitchen, the bathroom, etc...) that impressions can change for me, because they probably clean the house everyday, but just that day they don't clean it.
And now I'm gonna make some example of first impressions for a person, the first impression that I saw in a person is the personality(vibes, etc..), the education level(respectful, responsable, etc..), the way of she/he dress it(outfits) that's when the phrase "dress to impress" takes place,
if the person is comic, etc.. Some person do the same, but some person just talk in the bad way of other persons, and sometimes they don't know them, they don't talk to them, and that's too bad impression for the person that is doing that, they are wrong :/
So my point, is I just said before, the impressions can change and it depends on the person. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
E0553AEE109E | Most students enjoy having a long summer vacation, but others prefer it not to be so long. Schools usually do three months for a summer break, but people argue that there should only be a month of summer break. Also have a longer winter break and a week off in the spring and fall. I do not think this is a good idea. Even though, when it is time to come back to school students will have forgotten everything, it is nice to have a long summer break because people go on vacation a lot, students can have an opportunity to work full time, and reduces stress for students.
Educators should have a long summer break because people go on vacation a lot to see long distance relatives, or to just spend some quality time with family and have fun. For example, if you live in Virginia it will be a long car ride to make it to Florida or any other place. You will need a long break to plan your trip and have enough time to stay at any place you will go. Other people do not necesarily go on trips to just see family maybe it is a gift or a tradition that families have. Having time is the most important thing when it comes to going on a vacation.
Another reason why it is a necesity for students to have a long summer break is because most students will get to work full time and make more money of their own. Most parents like their child to learn how real life is and what struggles you have to got through to get the things you want. Being a teenager will make you want more things it is the age you will start to drive and experience new things. For example, you will get to the age of driving and you will ask your parents for a car. You will need to earn some money to help your parents out they might give you an estimate amount of how much they can give you, but if that is not enough for you then you need to find a job to get to where you want to be at. If you have a part time job you will eventually get to where you want to be, but it will take longer that is why having a full time job will be easier to get there. To have a full time job it means summer break needs to be longer.
Finally, my last reason why summer should be long for students is because it reduces stress for students. Being in school all year is hard for most students because sometimes is not just school what you have to deal with it can be things going on at home. Having to deal with both is difficult, so it is nice to have a long summer break to get a break from things. For example, if you keep failing tests it might be because you can not manage to study at home. After failing tests, having bad grades, your parents yelling at you for it, pressuring you to do better, and having other things to deal with that will make you have stress. It is important for students to be able to have a long summer break so they can get their minds off in a lot things and have less stress.
Overall, having a long summer break means people will run out of things to do there should still be a long break because people go on vacations a lot, students can have an opportunity to work full time, and it reduces stress for students. A long summer break means more fun and less stress. Most schools have three months of a break and people are used to having a three month long summer break, so there will be a lot of arguments into why change it now. It is best to just keep it the way it has always been. Having long summer breaks also results in a lot of solutions for people. | 5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
E060D90D6CB9 | Dear Principal
I don't agree with your decisions about the new school policy. I think that students needs exercise. I believe that students joining sports is a good thing for there health and it also makes them happy. Its not good for students to think about school work too much because it causes stress.
If you change your mind maybe more students would actually work hard in school because of there accomplishment's in school. Kids should be aloud to play any sport without doing anything.
If they think about school work and sports at the same time it might cause them to stress out. At the same time i also want them to have fun in school. There are lots of reasons why students shouldn't have to work hard just to play the sport they want. Changing school policy is a bad idea.
I think it will encourage kids to work harder in school. Not only it will encourage them they will also have a better future.
Changing the school policy back to normal would be a good thing for kids. They will also have a good exercise everyday because it encourage the to practice. I am also a sports fan my myself. I know how it feels if that happens to me.
I wouldn't like it if I have to worry about my school work and my favorite sport. I hope that you will change your mind after reading this note.
Sincerely: STUDENT_NAME | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
E0656353B8F2 | School districts shouldn't give the three year instead of four year program. Why? because students should receive all the education they need to succeed everything they want with completing four years of high school. Most colleges look for students that have completed four years of their high school education, also they don't like when students have free periods unless they have a specific reason of requesting free courses. Students will always have time to do what are they want in life with a four year high diploma it doesn't matter if your birthday is late and you want to graduate with three years because you don't wanna graduate at that specific age. Teachers, parents,siblings, they should be the ones telling they're children or young adult that it is important to complete there four years of high school. The process you have to follow to do a three year of high school is more stressful because you have to summer school or evening school where there are not really a lot of teachers to help out with most of the stuff you need help with. When your in school you have English, history, science, mathematics teachers, you have counselors librarians everyone that can help you with anything you need to finish high school. Most students may graduate early because they have an illness, disease, or something and they just can't take the pressure of being in school no more. From my point of view parents should always talk to there children about how important education is for them they can pursue all there dreams if the parent didn't have the opportunity to finish there high school career. Also entering college early wouldn't be so convenient because maybe the student missed something they didn't learn then when they get to college there like my teacher didn't teach me this or I don't know what that is. The work force accepts a lot of young teenage children that graduate from high school and expect them to have a high school diploma and of course they'll have a high school diploma but they wont know how many years they completed which I believe still shouldn't be accepted. Children think that just because they have a high school diploma they're better then everyone else if you only completed three years you shouldn't feel superior to everyone else. I would feel disappointed in myself for not completing all the four years I needed because I would feel like I didn't complete everything I need to be the most intelligent most outgoing person I am. If your a child that believes you can't do it and finish high school because it's stressful, of course you can do it I punish myself all the time for saying that. I may not be the most smartest person in my family but i'm giving it my all to complete my high school career as an older sister and role model of two younger siblings that I have. Also if your a three year completer you should always take younger siblings in to consideration because they look up to you and they are gonna think that just by completing three years its OK. To be someone successful in life finish all four years of your high school education schools shouldn't provide three year programs for students or at the age of eighteen they can drop out they are going to get no job no one will accept them without an education. There is nothing good out in the world without an education or some type of proof that you have completed or have gone to school. In conclusion, to all of this children, teenagers, anyone take in mind that colleges, jobs, anything will most likely look for a four year completer because if they see you as a three year completer they'll take the other person instead of you. Even if you have all the requirements you needed to complete high school you still really didn't finish your career. Schools should stop providing this program and make students complete there four years in high school because it is very important for them to get an education till they are 18 and they are free to make their own decisions if they want to drop or just do three years of high school. And don't be the type of person to just finish high school with three years and do nothing after you have decided to not finish school you just decide to drop out to be home and do nothing for yourself. Be the bigger person and take full responsibility of your education because you only have yourself throughout your journey in high school there will be no friends once it comes down to your senior year in high school. The more you pressure your self to finish high school the more stressful and painful it'll be for yourself because you may not have all the requirements completed and you have to complete them in summer school thats why parents and teachers mentors anyone should always come in and talk to the child and make them finish what they have left of there high school career nothing is impossible. Do what you can to complete and finish high school with all your four years and you'll be the most hard working work force person ever or the best and college student that completed all four years and will complete all her college years needed to succeed to accomplish there dreams or whatever they want to do. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
E069D2A8AE1E | Have you had a friend sharing wisdom and experiences with you? You probably had that a million times. Here is the thing though. People just want to learn the experience of you and the others, which isn't a bad thing. It's also important to learn each other's experiences. I think it is important to learn from other people's experiences because you get to understand who they are, you can help the person if they're in a situation, and you can communicate each other. To clarify this, let's dig in deeper.
First, I think it's important that you understand who they are because you get to know about their favorite hobbies, the places they like to visit, the pets they have and their dream vacation. Getting to know on who the person is can give you a good start off to make a bond, or form friendship between you and that person. If you shared your experiences with a person, they might feel interested on what you're talking about. Telling a person on what you like can bring that person's attention deeper.
Second, it's important that you help the person if they're in a situation because you can cheer them up if they lost a family member. Helping someone out can make that person feel better and most of all, feel comfortable, and they will think that you're a good person. If you didn't reach out and help somebody, they could start getting into a tougher situation where they might not be able to handle by themselves. They could also feel very lonely or left out, and that is not okay.
Third, communicating with others is important because you can text them in Social Media, such as Instagram, Snapchat, and Facebook. You can also go shopping with them. Communicating others bring closer friendship, and keep the bond strong between you and you're friend. Watching movies and hanging out at each others house are another examples of communication. They're lots of ways to communicate with your friends and other people, and that is a good thing for friends. Activities is another thing for communicating with other people because sometimes, when people do activities, it provides teamwork.
In Conclusion,
I think it is important to learn from other people's experiences because you get to understand who they are, you can help the person if they're in a situation, and you can communicate each other. So now that you understand, think about these as you make new friends. Question yourself on how to get a good start to form a bond between you and that person. Try to reach out and help him/her if they need help with something. Make that person feel comfortable by hanging out with them at lunch or at home. They might need good company from you! | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
E06EDBA28C44 | Some people say that aim too high is not for them. This should be because people does not feel ready. Some people would want to aim high, but they do not want to know how would be the outcome. Although, some people think that aim too high is a waste of time, nevertheless, humans really need to set their aim too high to know if they would achieve their goals because some humans thinks that they are not prepare to aim too high and fail and some humans prefer to aim low and achieve their goals.
My first reason is that some humans thinks that they are not prepare to aim too high and fail. For example, if a person aim too high but fail that person would not feel good about him. Some times people who fail get depressed. If that is a humans who is a persistent person he would be trying more time. Until that person achieve their big goal. Also, that kind of people who are persistent that always keep trying that people one day they achieve all their goals. In addition,
the key to have a awesome overcome is to never give up and never stop.
My second reason is that some humans prefer to aim low and achieve their goals. People who do this are people that always want the easy thing. These people does not want to effort that much and achieve their goals. However, these people do not know the significant of have something that took a lot of efforts. In addition, some people may say that if they aim low they can achieve more things in the time a person that aim too high. Thats not the point, the thing is that every human have to effort to know the significant of never give up. Also, when humans has owned something by their own effort the valuate more what they had achieve.
In summary, humans really need to set their aim too high to know if they would achieve their goals. Some humans thinks that they are not prepare to aim too high and fail and some humans prefer to aim low and achieve their goals. Also, on these latest years humans has been lazy than doesnt want to effort to do big things and achieve it. Now humans really needs to efforts for something. Every human need to aim high and be scared of failing that something normal, but never give up always keep going. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
E07B043F3C2B | People should seek guidance for help, because like us are still having trouble in the real world even if we graduate from high school or college, we even still have trouble trying to make our live easy. Having guidance is always helpful and learn something new.
Reason to have guidance is to release stress or don't add more stress. In daily hours people get stress out a lot at work and could get out of the control very easy,getting help from another one is good idea so you know what you doing and how you doing it. People stress things out and they don't know about what causing it, that give even more stress and have a chance to get an heart attack and lose motive to do work. Guidance could help us by rethinking our plans or working. While taking a guidance you could learn more things that we didn't know of.
Having guidance will also help you keep tack in time and help everything more clean in your work space. It good idea to have an open mind and have work done easier and fast. Having an open mind can give a good mind set in life and think more a head in time and saving time.
Another reason is people have depressing life or have health issuer. Depressing is a big thing that come to life in everyone and it cause a lot problem the way they living. Most of the population on earth have depressing in their life, so it a good idea to seek help at all time. People who having that need get some help from guidance right away to tell them what going on in their life, it could help them cure their depressing.
It a bad idea to to let people guide they own way without any help at all, because trying teach yourself is hard enough, and try to teach yourself might get even more worst because they mind might be wrong and could cause more problem in later runs. People rather do it on their own and not get help because it might give them false inform that they need to learn or think it a waste of time, but guidance are here to help. Having guidance will always help you and they always teach you more things. People can still guide on they own way, but it better to get guidance. It be more easier and get better in live in the long run.
In conclusion, guidance are here to help release stress, learn better, get thought life, cure depressing, saving time, give more open mind it, have work done in time, and make life little bit more easy. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
E07F7A913FB6 | A football manager OleGunnar Solksajer once said "Prasing his players and kids helps them work to the best of their ability". That is a very significant statement because every student have their own set of skills and abilities. Some students are good in sports,math,science,art or music. However, plenty of students are not able to perform to the best of their ability because they have low self-confidence which is mainly caused by the lack of praise and incentive by their parents,teachers or coaches. Praising a student's work is important because it helps build their confidence and motivates them to work harder.
Praising a student's work is vital for their productivity because it builds their confidence. Studies show that people with high self-confidence are usually risk takers,creative,optimistic,hardworking and productive. This shows how important it is for teachers and parents to praise their students. Self-confidence is not something that happens suddenly, it is a process that builds up from a young age. Little praises and incentives from parents and teachers are not only important for the students' performance in school but also when they transform into adults.
Additionally, another importance of praising students is the motivation for them to work harder. Students always seem to work harder when they get an incentive or praise. That is because students feel appreciated for their work and it also make them feel like they are doing a good job so they always stay motivated to do better every time. Motivation is vital for everyone because its as important as an oil is for a car. Motivation is a motor that keeps the sudents happy and hopeful. Motivated students always work hard and give their best effort.
There are some people that think praising students will undrmine learning by lowering standards and some believe a true self-esteem and confidence comes from achievment and not from prasing. Although it's a fair opinion, it is wrong because students who get praise from teachers and parents always seem to do better acadamically and in outside-school activities. In conclusion, Praising a student's work is very important because it helps build their confidence and motivates them to work harder and smarter. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
E08185D94A44 | I should be selected to visit the ''AD Assets Inc''. The AD Assets Inc, is the most important company of Assets in United States for the last 35 years. Company that going to select one person to visit and show how they works. Since I was six years old I was secured that the Assets was going to be my job. Learn about business and assets without a persons that really know what they are doing is almost impossible.
This opportunity is one of the most important things in my life. I need to go to the field trip, since I was six years old I was secured that be in the business world it was my purpose. Try to do business with other people and my friends was my goal. Then I realize that it is mandatory to learn about the assets and management to be a business man. That's why this opportunity is so important for me. My whole life dreaming and wishing about be in a company and now my dreams comes true.
I've have been learning a lot by myself about the business and assets my whole life. For example I'm in a group called ''FBLA'' (Future Business Leaders of America), this group is so important for me. Because I've learn so many things about the assets there, and acquired a lot of knowledge, so important to my future career as a business man. This new opportunity in ''AD Assets Inc'' let me acquire more information about my future career, prove myself, and increase my knowledge. Improve my knowledge is one of the reason of why I want to go to the company. Because every day I learn something new and I am very exited to learn new thing in the AD Assents Inc company.
Some people argue that this partnerships with companies are useless because the teens do not know what they want; however, this view is mistaken because the best way to teens to know what they want to study is let then explore and see, that's the best way to decide. I've been sure that I should be the one who needs to go to ''AD Assets Inc'' since they make the announcement. Some people want to go to see and discover if they like it, that's why I should be the selected. Because I am completely sure that I want to be in AD Assets Inc after I graduated and completed my high school.
I am the most completely student to go and learn about the assets business. Nobody want to go to this field trip as much as me. Around the years I've dreaming about be part of a company and this opportunity is the first step to it. I should be the selected for this incredible opportunity. If you want to know about me and my knowledge about business you can find me in ''FBLA.com''. There you can find all my scores in competitions and exams about business that I has been doing my whole high school years. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
E083802BEB79 | I want to accomplish of graduating from school. I want to graduate from school in front of my class, teachers, friends, audience, and families. I would like to have a promotion and accomplish my future.
First, I want to graduate from middle school. I want to get good grades and be in a higher level. Therefore, I have to study and work more. I have to keep going with the hark work and getting good grades. In the other hand, passing my SOL'S test. I would like to be awarded from teachers in front of others. Then, go out with my friends that grauted from eight grade. After, going to high schol being a freshmen and getting good grades.
Next, I want to graduate from high school. I'm still keeping with the hard work and study more. In addition, getting good grades and maybe going to a higher grade level. I would like to get myself promoted in a higher grade level. If I get promoted to another grade level i'm going to double the studying and the hard work. Similarly, passing all the SOL'S test of the year I am going to be proud of myself. Therefore, finally getting my diploma and being done with school. Then, getting a better job ,because i'm done with school. After, i'm going to be celebrating my graduation, having a party, and inviting my friends and families to see how proud they are of me.
Finally, I might be going to college after high school. College is a new life there's more work and test to do. Getting a better promotion will make me proud of myself. Similarly, I would like to get a scolarship it would make my mom, uncles, families, and friends proud of me. This will change my life in the future and it's a success. Getting the scolarship will help and change my life. I might go to a University if i get a scolarhip and it costs too much.
In conclusion, i'm accomplishing my fututre. Graduating from school and being done with school will help your future accomplish. Therefore, school is very significant for your future. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
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