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D1A866170CEA | Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? There is a debate if students would benefit or not from online classes? Some people believe that students would do better if their classes are at home. I believe that you can learn more if you are in a regular class than just being at home because students can learn from other cultures or more things about life with other friends, if students do not interact with others in a future they are going to be afraid to do it, and finally if you are in a regular school you can do more activities and share with your friends.
First, when you are in a school of the united states you learn a lot from other cultures. Therefore besides than world geography, you learn from your friends countries and how is to live there. Also, when you have friends at school you share your problems and most of the time you learn more things about life with them and how you can be a better person.
Second, sometimes there can be shy people at school because they do not know how to interact with others or how to start a conversation. When you do activities in groups sometimes you make new friends and talk to others became easily than before. However, if students do not learn how to talk to others in public places they are going to be afraid in a future; imagine if they need to make a presentation at work, they are not going to be able to do it because they will be afraid to talk in front of all the co-workers. Learn how to interact with others is important for your future.
Third, it is important to get involve in activities at school; activities help you with your curriculum when you apply to college. Also, if you are in any activity you can share more with your friends. However, when you get involved with activities at school helps you to clear your mind when you have to many homework or when you are stress out about your classes. Therefore, some of the activities give a lot of skills in the thing that you would like to do in your future.
In conclusion, if students do not interact with others or neither have a friend to talk with, and they do not have activities to get involved with other people; students are not going to be successful if they try in a future to interact with a large group of people. Therefore, it is very important to learn from others and interact at your school. That is why I believe that everybody should take classes on a regular school, to learn how to get involved with others and be able to express your self. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
D1B607165DAB | In the past, I was scared to go beyond at what I was good at which was soccer. I agree with what the quote which said, "Unless you try something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." because if you stay at the limits that you were already at before you'll never know what other things you can accomplish and we as people have to acknowledge the fact that in one point in life you probably said to yourself
" I am going to maintain this life." by saying that your not improving your life.
I agree with what the quote said, "Unless you try something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." if you stay at the limits that you were already at before you'll never know what other things you can accomplish. To begin with, you want to to go beyond standards because maybe you'll learn something new ,or you will encounter an ability that you probably thought you didn't have. For example, when I was in freshmen in high school I decided to start playing and training for soccer and I tried out for the junior varsity soccer team I told myself I am gong to play at my standards, so the coach saw me playing nervous and he asked me " why are you playing nervous" I said, " I am trying to play at my standards" the coach said, "Just relax." after that I found out I had so many abilities to become a great soccer player. In addition, it's not bad at all trying to go beyond your limits because the more you go beyond your limits the more you'll want to keep doing it. Also, there's that one saying " Go Big Or Go Home" one of the sayings I live up to. Finally, you always want to think big for the most part of your life. Also you always want to try new things in life that's the only way you'll grow in life.
I agree with what the quote said, "Unless you try something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." we as people have to acknowledge the fact that in one point in life you probably said to yourself
" I am going to maintain this life." by saying that, your not improving your life. To begin with, life is short to be honest you and I am still trying to do things to improve my life. For example, I am 17 year old in highschool, I listen to with one song called "the nights" by Avici. He talks about his dad telling him you always want to experience new things and try to live life to the fullest, so right there I am just saying to myself don't maintain the same life, try to experience new things in life period. In addition, don't have a simple life try to be creative in this life. Also, you might not be ready to go beyond your limits, but just know that one day you might be willing to give it a try. Finally, there was one time I was scared to go on big roller coasters. I could only go on medium roller coaster because they didn't look scary at all, but there was moment on the day I told myself I getting a big roller coaster so I did and it made feel good about myself because I tried something new.
Also some people may say that, you will grow even though you don't try anything new in your life. In addition, some people probably don't even care about life. Finally, others might have their own opinions about this topic. Also some wouldn't really care about. In conclusion, in the future I will try to improve my limits and think big. | 2.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
D1B9985EAF6C | People should seek guidance from experts because they can help you to make a wise decision. For example, sometimes we as a person take bad decision that isn't favaroble for our life; but our guidance as our parents, mother or father give us advice to not take a wrong decision, and we have to follow their instructions because they're wiser than us, and they help us for our goods, so they don't see us ruining our life by ourself. Experts can show you how valuable its our life and how much we have to appreciate it. We as teenagers are not suficient mature to take a wise decision and mostly we as teenagers take the wrong path for not being wise enough or not having knowledge about how to take an important decision for our life without noticing how damage are our bad decision for us, and how much we can hurt ourself by not knowing how to handle it. Our decisions hurt people we love even though you don't want to hurt them because we let our impulse control us, and because of those decisions we hurt ourself and we hurt others by not realiazing that we push back our family and friends. Your decisions makes you grow as a person, but also make you find yourself, your decision are the ones that makes you be who will you be in the future, so you decide who you are gonna be.
In concluision, be wise about your decision get help from a person with more experience, and don't let your bad decision to define who you are, be yourself always following the correct path. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
D1B9A2A7BEDA | Technology is one of the big reason behind the success of this world. Because of the technology peoples are able to do a lot of progress in the different field's of their lifes. The technology makes our work easy. It helps you to save our time. Technology also help us to run a lot of businesses .But on the other hand most of the peoples do the missuse of technology and use it in different ways for example robbery,hacking,and the murders of different peoples. It also effect's a lot on our new generation by inventing and by adding a bunch of vedio games in their computer or their phones.
In past if you wants to read the book and to write a book for reading you have to go to the library and find the book and read it or if you wants to write a book you have to collect a bunch of papers and ink and it takes a lot of time to do it but,now because of the technology we are able to access every book online and we also able to write a book on the computer that saves our money to buy the papers and ink. It also saves our time.
In Businesses the technology is really important because of this we are able to handle our money because the technology shows us in business that how much profit we get and how much we spend on the stocks and how much we spend to buy our products and also you can get your money in the form of direct deposits so quickly .We don't have to wait a couple of month's to get our money.
So, the missuse of technology is also one of the big reason. The hackers hacks the different websites and crash their important data or sometime's they enter into the websites of bank's and transfer their money to a different account. Most of the peoples use the technology for robery or murders. They follow the person for the couple of days and check their every history that what time he's in his home or what time he's out from his home. So when they see's that nobody is at home. They go and do the robbey.
Most of the teenagers and childern's do a lot of missuse of technology. They spent teir lot of times in watching movies or playing the vedio games of differnt types or kind. The rays that come from either our computer or our mobile might also effect eyes sometimes really badely.
So in real if we have the advantages of technology we also have the dissadvantages of technology. Because every thing have opposite side. So,we are not able to do anything with the disadvantages but we are able to overcome the disadvantages.
If there is no technology the world might be nothing. No body knows each other from a long distance. We still have a rular system on us. Without technology we are also not able to established the well maintained govt. and if there is no technology its mean no social media and we are not able to interect with each other from a long distances. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
D1C316C7ED37 | My enjoyable educational activity is P.E
P.e is my favorite educational activity because i mostly enjoy it. Because all my friends are in that class. The most thing i do in that class is play basketball which i am trash at it but i still play with the boys and i enjoy the time .Another thing i like to do is soccer because its playful and playing with friends is more better. Because it helps you with teamwork,speed and skill.
Soccer is my favorite sport because when I was little I would always see all the games. And i would enjoy it because soccer is my family favorite thing to do when we are bored and its nice outside we would play like two hours and before we play soccer we would have steak and enjoy the temperature. And after the steak we would play soccer with my uncle and some of my dad's friends and we would play soccer until we would get very tired.
So back to p. e some people think that p. e is boring but i think that it is fun because thats when most of the time i play with my friends and i would enjoy it mostly because thats like the only time we would be free a and out of school work and play with my friends. But the other thing is that when we are at p. e people don't like it because some of them are tired and some of them are just bored at p. e i don't really get it but they just think that it is so boring or their tired of doing anything.
P.e and soccer are technaclily the same thing because they could run around and they could enjoy their time with some friends but like i tell you that there's people that doesn't like doing p. e. So i don't know what people say about it but i enjoy p. e because its enjoyable to do it to not the test but the activity's they have.
And soccer to they have lots of training to do but the rule is to have fun and play nice for you can enjoy the people and the coach. so if you or any one else is bored than try doing soccer for you can not be that bored anymore so just be playful a and play right for you can not be that bored at anything anymore so just try it one day and i highly recommend you that you will like playing soccer
But like i tell you if you are that lazy that you can't even do anything then you have to try one thing. Because you have to try something because you can't live a life that you can't even do anything you have to at least try to do something in your life so yeah thats all i have to tell you so play something right not bad. Just try to play soccer don't be that lazy and do it. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
D1C5C7879A33 | Since that program it can help older and younger studen. First,
it can help meet each other making friends.
Next, it can help working each others. Next, it can help younger stdents learn older students. This program it can help older students learning more what they never know. There is one adventages of older student and younger student. one is younger students respect older students. There is two disadventage of older students with younger students. One of then is older people don't respect younger students. Next one is older students kick younger students. I think this program it can help younger students and older students is to take care each other. And learning each other and helping each other. And working each other. And older student can help younger students what is wrong and what is correct. That why this programs it can help older and younger students. Sometimes younger students help older students. And sometimes older students learn from younger students. Also programs can have sports and have the opportunity older students work or play with younger students. Also sport in a program it can help younger students learn how older student play sports. There are alot of sport in the world. Sport are amazing and we can learn alot of things in sport . program are amazing it can help every one. sport in programs are fun. I think thats why sport exist in the world. Because programs it can make feel peoples fun. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
D1D770AF6855 | I believe schools should allow cellphones in classrooms because , If someone needs to call you , family emergency , and it could also be used as learning tool.
Although sometimes cell phones in school might be used for personal reasons like soical media the pros of being able to use your cell phones in school outweigh the cons. In todays current society millions of people use electronic devices at work and school , Schools should implement more use out of technology and let kids use their phones in class to help complete tasks assigned to them ,
for example , If a kid does not want to use a dictionary and to find a word he can easily just look up the words meaning on he internet using his phone.
If someone needs to call you during school they can easily do it by just dialing up your number instead of having to call the school. It is much easier to call someone during school on there celluar device instead of having to call the school wait for the school to find the classroom the student is in and then transfer the call to the student in that classroom. In case of a family emergency , parents , relatives will call you on your phone most likely they will not call the school. I have had personal experiences with that as my parents do not contact the school when they wish to speak to me , they call me on my cell phone.
Implementing better rules in school for cellphone usage is beneficial , instead of punishing a student for having there phone out in the classroom the school should make better use out of cellphones by allowing students to have them out and or use them. More schools , classes are making it easier to access assignments that can be completed online ,
you can view what assignments you have to complete in class by using your cellphone instead of being overwhelmed with paperwork , your tasks can be completed online.
I believe schools should allow cellphones in classrooms , it will make learning in class easier due to the easy access of the internet , in case of family emergencys and for any other reason you might need it. Cellphones are in alot of students lives and we should punish them for having todays technology in classrooms. | 4 | 3.5 | 5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
D1EB6E3F8A28 | People should always take the student's work as an effort because of the way they work hard and because of the best they try themselves to reach a goal.
All students do not deserve to learn by lower standards otherwise students have the right to learn of the most helpful and powerful way.
I believe that self-esteem comes from praising because all students should be supported by people, and people should have the right to support students in many ways to learn and help them to could reach their goals for life. The support from people is the best way to make a person feel better.
Also students should have someone who can helps out or making this person feel better, comfortable, giving ideas or finding many different ways to support him to keep going and helping to never give up.
Praising a tudent's woork it helps to build self-steem and make it feel apreciated and also dont make it feel lower just because of the hard way this person work.
In conclusion all students have the right of being supported by family friends or private people making it feel better and helping outr every time this person need it. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
D203157DCBF0 | Society as it is now needs to support teenage safety, and a curfew would be a great start. Parents should support being more strict with their children's. Even on the weekend a midnight curfew is more than enough time to enjoy themselves.
It is very dangerous at night, and anybody that is out after midnight increases their chances of doing wrong or becoming a victim.
Teenagers are still learning how to fit into this puzzle of life, and without a curfew to guide them bad things are bound to happen. Teenagers do not understand when their parents tell them no, and think a curfew is not needed because they are invincible and bad things never happen to them.
Teenagers need to learn that being more responsible, mature, and becoming a contributing member of society starts with having limits. Curfews will benefit not only teenagers, but society as a whole.
Teenagers think being responsible is not a good thing, because they never want to be told what to do.
If you want graduate from high school you have to be responsible.
Going out after midnight is not being responsible. I have already loss friends to violence, and it occurred late at night.
I have friends that have jobs, and they work after midnight even on school nights. They have trouble staying awake in class, and their grades are not good.
A curfew would also address this situation and help them succeed in school.
Being mature at sixteen is hard for some, but it needs to happen.
Parents need to show their children part of maturing is doing the right thing.
Being mature is understanding that you do not need to be outside late at night.
Maturity helps us understand that in life we can not always do whatever we want. I have friend that complain about not being able to stay out late, but as they mature they will understand that a curfew really helped keep them safe.
Going outside after midnight is very dangerous.
Teenagers must understand that with everything that has gone on the past decade with gun violence, drugs, and robberies; most of it occurred late at night.
There is a reason that most places are closed late night, and there is really nothing to do late at night.
Teenagers need to value their safety, and know that whatever they can not do before midnight does not need to done.
Curfews can help with this mindset and keep teenagers safe.
To reiterate, society as it is now needs to support teenage safety, and a curfew is crucial part in making this happen. Parents should support being more strict with their children's curfew. Midnight is more than enough time for teenagers to experience life.
There is really nothing good for teenagers out past midnight.
Teenage life is one of the most difficult times in our lives as we still are trying to constantly learn. Teenagers do not understand when they are told why they can not do something or how to deal with rejection.
Teenagers need to learn that being more responsible, mature, and becoming a contributing member of society starts with having limits. Curfews are necessary if our society wants to continue to grow in the right direction. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
D2035E3721BA | Don't put yourself down if you are trying to succeed ,but you fail.
Prime Minister Winston Churchill said "Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm" I agree with Churchill"s statement because you have to work hard towards success and In general not everything turns out to our favor the first time so, you have to try again until you reach success.
On the other hand success does not consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Success is gain through those who choose to succeed and you do not need to fail in order to succeed.
Working hard towards success without losing enthusiasm is important because you have to be patient and sometimes we can be inpatient so, we loss our enthusiasm we will loss interest and will no longer be motivated to succeed. Enthusiasm is strong warmth of feeling interest. Failing is alright because to succeed you are going to fail and you learn from your lesson, try again, and move on.
On the contrary side success is obtained to those who seek it. Studies show that 78.2% of people don't succeed because they chose to be comfortable and not motivate themselves. Success does not consist of failing and failing ,People should be assertive that they want to succeed so they are prepared with the mindset not to fail.
In conclusion "Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm" I agree with Churchill"s statement because you have to work hard towards success and In general not everything turns out to our favor the first time so, you have to try again until you reach success. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
D22D2878F4C7 | I agree that being honest at all times is a good thing because you can be honest with them even though it might hurt there feelings. for example what if this boy or girl likes you, and you dont want to tell them that you dont like them. you have to be honest with that person and yeah it might hurt there feelings but at least you were being honest with.
For example One day i got in trouble for hitting my neighbors car with a soccer ball, the next day my mom told me to tell the neighbor about his car and i didnt want to tell him because i know that he will get mad at me. so i went and told him that i hit his car with a soccer ball, he was mad at me and i got in trouble. but i was honest to him that i didnt mean to hit his car.
when i was a kid broke my mom vase on accident, the next day my mom called me and she said "who broke my vase". I was scared to tell my mom that i was the one who broke her vase, when she told me and my cousin to not touch it or play with it. so my couisn told me to my mom that i was the one who broke it, at first i didnt want to her but i went to her room and tell her that i broke it. she was pretty mad at me but i was being honest with her if even though that was her favorite vase.
Me and my cousin were play fighting and i punch him on his face on accident,so he went went to the bathroom and his face was bleeding. the next morning my aunt went to the bathroom and she saw the drips of blood on the floor and i told my aunt that i punch him on his face on accident. i didnt get in trouble but i was being honest with her and tell her truth.
its important to be honest all the time and always tell the truth if u did something or if u dont liked nobody. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
D23D870D5333 | Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. People can check out books,shop,and play games without speaking to another persons .Has the limitation of human contact due to the technology has positive or negative effects on people's lives? I think this is negative, because the rate of oversize people will grow. People shouldn't spend most of there time on devices or inside. They should go out in the real world and see how things are. How nice people are to them .
First, Being stuck in the house isnt fun because you won't meet new people or reconnect with people from your old school or meet the love of your life .Things like this is what makes people kill their self because they dont have fun. They also meet people online and let what the people online think of them. that effects a lot of peoples lives.
Then, teens would be on video games all day rather than go out and do something active. That will increase oversize teens and adults in America. Technology can take over someones life they can be hooked to it. That its self harms the brain all types of ways.
Although, people are getting there things done without having to go and talk to other people. They can lose a lot of vitamin D. That can cause to death and in that way we would have a lot of deaths. and our population will decrease because of technology.
In Conclusion, what the people are doing isn't right technology shouldn't keep us away from each other. we as people should stand up for each other. we should get out more and have a community picnic and be with each other. Not away in our houses getting what u want from online and letting people you haven't meet and hadn't meet you determine who or what u are let your friends say what they thing and u tell yourself who and what you are. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
D2421A895FFA | In this world has many countries, some are big, some are small. And they all have their own special places. Although some countries are not as that big and not outstanding, but they must have some places that can grab people's attention. So, I know there is a country described like that. Japan, the one place in the world I would like to visit.
Whenever people mentioned this country, I believe that what they're thinking to are the scenes and foods over there. However, the such beautiful scenes in Japan is also the one thing that attracted me. The blossom tree is the most beautiful image I have been wanted to see from Japan. Many little pinky leafs formed numerous soft and fluffy flowers. And now, just imagine that when all leafs are falling off from the tree, that scene just looks like many butterflies are dancing in the sky. Only this image is enough to grab all people's attention from the country. Sometimes just bring your food outside and find a blossom tree, then sit under it, looking at the image while eating. I think that's a such enjoyable thing.
The Japanese foods are also famous. I can't describe it, but I know there is a wonderful place in Japan where can eat a lot of things, and also can buy anything you want. The Japanese market, the one place I want to go at most in my mind. Everytime, you already can hear the laughing sounds even you're not step in. With this happy atmosphere, and walk slowly to find out the things you want to buy. How warm is it. The nicest scene is not just that, but also when the night is coming. During some special holidays, a bunch of people will came here and participate some small activities which only have at night. At this time, the laughing sounds is even louder than morning.
Japan, a such wonderful place, a place that I would like to visit. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 4 |
D242BBCBEAFB | Some student can take classes at home because they could find a subject of course that like. Learning websites can help them get better at what they do. It could benefit because they it would seem easier to go on different classes or to take a video to study a subject. For example, taking classes online would give you a head start. Many other schools have students at home take taking these course and have them apply for it. It is like a benefit for them to take some opportunity to get taught about something they have learn or to have a different way of learning it.
I will think they would able to do this if they are interested. For example, Home-schooling could that much money. There could be some reasons for them.
1. They want to try out some different learning strategies.
2. They can apply online.
3. They can try taking some subjects that they like.
In conclusion, it could be able to work for the home-schoolers to also have an education because they did not go to public but have it at home. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
D250DB9080E0 | I agree with this prompt about the first impression, based on my own experience and for what I've seen in myself is related or better said similar on my every day life, and what I really mean by that is: First impression that we show it won't change that easy as many people expect to change between one month to a year, not because we couldn't change it but because this is who we are, also because this is how we act and it won't change because is part of ourselves.
In addition to this prompt i think it might be impossible to change our first impression not because we can't change it, but it'll be because is part of our personalities, in my case should I say is part of how I really am, how my culture distinguish me, that's what makes me unic and by trying to change a part of me it would make me feel empty, because first impression means a lot to me and is all thanks to my past experiences that I've been through.
In conclusion to this paragraph i think that first impression is important, it helps you to understand how a person is, also it helps you to analyze that one person, and most of all i think it helps a lot when you're patient when trying to understand others at the first time, sometimes or most of the time people would judge others by their first impression without seeing what's really their intention, this is what I think about it, we shouldn't judge just by the first time you meet someone even if you think that person is an stranger, just give them a change to prove you're wrong with their actions and their way to treat people, thank you. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
D2517350CB3A | Elective classes are chosen by student who are intresting to be part of it. Many students
Probably prefer to have a elective clase because they are learning what they like, and will be less difficult for them to understand the class. In my positon students should be required to take elective classes because they attend to school every day, students are teach in what they want to learn and students are much success in class.
Many students do not attend to school in order to not have a clase that they do not like. Students that use to not attend school is when he/she have a class that is not intresting to learn; they may think that the class is not important enough to help them in a future, and letting students to take elective classes probably will stop the absence of many kids because they will want to know new things about the class . Furthermore if students have an elective class they will have that exicitement to start the class on time and not be late, neither to miss school any day because of their interest of learning .
Students should be guide in what they may think is useful and much helful for them. In some school people had heard that many students are teach In things that may not be needed in life like art, some students take art because they like that clase and problably because In the future they Might be plaining to become an art teacher, but for others is preferable to select an elective class that will manage her/ him to be succsessful. As a result of take an eletive class can be a tool for students to discover what subject is most important for them to have knowledge and have the passion of keep learning.
However other may say that students should be required to take a music, art , drama class because students can have intertainment having these kind of classes, but I stiil be thinking that students should be required to take an elective class because learning what they like, they put much effort to get knowledge and good grades, for example study, pay attention to what the teacher is saying participating in class or any other activity. Moreover obtain good results of what they decide to choose to become a successful student.
Students who take elective classes have the advantage of learn what is interesting for them , and be succsess no just in class also might be helpful for students in a future. Be able to choose a class is a good opportunity because it helps students to be intresting in new projects, know new things and obtain a good education at school. Obtaing a good education might encourage students to be succsessfuly in other classes and in other places. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
D25868F1C5C3 | Dear, Principal
Hi, my name is STUDENT_NAME and I'm a student of SCHOOL_NAME. I believe that Policy 1 is a good idea for the school. That students can be allowed to use there cell phone during lunch time or when we have free time. And that we aren't allowed to use them in class. If you don't allow cell phone's at school all of the student's will not be in the same side as you.
One of the reason's that you should allow phone's at school, is cause student's would not be in the same side as you. and they would still bring their cell phone's. When that happens student's will be in the office all the time.
That's why you should allow cell phone's. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
D25F59B6DC95 | Although some people say that first impressions are impossible to change, nevertheless I think that first impressions can sometimes change because you get to know thaht person, how they act, and that can sometimes change what you think about them or they can sometimes not change.
In order to think about something about that person you have to get to know them because if you don't know them you won't know why are they being like that. You can't just think something wrong just cause of how they dress. If you get to know that person you will know what they been through. Sometimes people judge just to judge or to think someting that is not true about them. For example when I first saw my guy friend I thought he was wierd, but when I started to talk to him he was totally diffrent from the guy i thought he would be, he is fun to talk with and hang out with.
Some peoples' first impression about someone they are not good. Some people jugde you in how you act and how they dress. The way people act is how sometimes how they are actually are. But I mean if you talk to that person they might be fun to hang out with 24/7. Talk to that person then you will see how first impressions are not always what you think they are.
If you talk to the person and you get to know them, then you will see how first impression about someone are not always true about them. First impressions could change if you decide to talk to them. Don't juge someone if you don't know them
Always be nice to people even if you don't know them. You don't know what they been throught, in oder for you to judge them. It's true sometimes first impressions are not always going to change. But first impressions are not always true about someone be careful on what you say or do to them. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
D26C9B0368D0 | No, students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home. There is a lot of action students have to take from being home school.
For example the state has to make sure their doing their work instead of sleeping and lacking around. You have to be responsible and be aware of your work. I'm not saying all students can't attend online classes at home, but most cannot.
Going to school helps you learn and understand things better. if you dont get something, you can ask for help and the teacher can explain the problem to you. You also have a person teaching you instead of you reading things by yourself and trying to understand. Being in class accurate and up can keep you from falling asleep instead of sitting around at home eating and sleeping all day. In addition of other students because i can't speak for everybody, some students can handle that and learn way better on their own than having somebody teach them.
School groups is also another reason how student learn faster and better. Working in groups help you learn more from other students. Other students may know more than you or you might know more than them, which is a good thing. Everybody has their own ideas and opinions. You can't forget some students are antisocial and like to work alone. If you are one of them people, than working alone and at home is best for you because you have nobody around to bother you.
Another reason being home schooled isn't a good idea because you have to be responsible. Doing your work, making sure you up, and making sure you finishing it on time. You have to make sure you get up on time, not staying asleep to long, or staying on your phone. Being at school you have to get what you need done, at home is like you know what you need done but you can do it later. Which makes you lazy, staying at home eating,sleeping,and playing on your phone makes you lazy. Its gonna make you forget that you have school to do. On the other hand some students are responsible. They know what have to get done and they get it done with or without any one telling them what to do or reminding them.
School is learning place where you come and get your knowledge from. Every parent should put their child in some learning program where they get taught not taught on their own. School is the most popular place in the world. Getting a education and great job is good reasons why you should come to school. Great job equals great money. Good education equals a high advance in getting in wonderful colleges. With out school you life won't be to bad but you know you can live a way better live with school. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
D28F4250040D | Imagine running through the wind so fast with something under your feet running by people kicking is as hard as you can for your team to be in the lead. Just imagine doing something you love that makes you exited and it just feels like you have never worked a day in your life, my three major reasons are improve, have the mindset, and play professional soccer.
First, one of my biggest reason is to improve. I want to improve by practicing everyday. Similarly, asking for help from a coach or someone better than I am. Specifically, if I make a mistake I can learn from what I did wrong, so I can do a better job at it next time. On the other hand I could play for a team and
I could practice with people better or not. Moreover, if I could play for a team I could play in games compete in tournaments and learn from other people.
Next, this one is huge having the mindset. The mindset of playing professional. playing with no fear, playing the game that is like a life time. Specifically, believing that you can do it I can make it to professional. Therefore, having the mindset for my future because I know as I go there will be more challenges for me to face. Finally having a good mindset is very important.
Furthermore, what I have wanted my entire life, my entire life I have wanted to play professional soccer because I have practiced my entire life for it. Another reason, it is just what I love to do. However, it could be rough sometime, and you could get hurt. It is a great way to get to meat new people. Moreover, it is like you just started a new life. Lastly, you get payed really will that is one of the biggest reason why plethora of people want to play professional.
In conclusion, when you do something that you love you dont have to work a day in your life. My three major reasons are First, to improve at soccer, next, to have the mindset, furthermore, play professional soccer because that is what I love to do. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
D2910C3C8E3B | I agreed with Auther Ralph Waldo Emerson " Unless you try to do somthing beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow" which is ture. Hard working pays you back!
Some people think they become rich by nature, every time knowledge need to upgrade ,and to keep our wealthy life need to work hard.
First reason, most of the time people think they become rich by nature. Which means they become well to do when they born. I personally do not support this idea because behind every success they is a hard working. For example United State of America is number one powerfull country in the world but, before America got that name their was a lots of scrifice. In my opinion If we dig the ground and we found the piece of gold that is not wealth that is a sign of destination, that means until we got the gold reservoir do not stop excavate.
Second reason, when a year change lots of thing change. For instant knowledge. Now adays tecnology descover the world. In this case every time knowledge need to upgrade. If you have degree in the filed of IT in 2016 and, still you did not upgrade your knowledge you are out of the game. The system or the caricullem is change so fast so we need to ajest our speed to run with the generation. If we need to grow what we have, we need to try somthong.
Inaddition, to keep our wealthy life we need to work hard. For example Bill Gate is wealthy man in America he have everything house,car and money. Bill gate does not say I have everything I do not need to work after this time. He is working hard like us. Because unless he did something to grow his wealth he will going to lose what he have. This is real life by any means if we stop trying we lose everything work, food, money, and family. The key is work hard do not Give Up.
In conclusion, we need to do somthing or try our best to live our wonderfull life. I strongly support Author Ralph Waldo idea. Dreams are not somthing to wait for; they are somthing to work for.
Which means works are the rode to get our dreams. Today is a great day to learn somthing new. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
D293D510A140 | Have you ever struggled in school and needed extra help,Well I have struggled in school and i didnt like it so then teacher came up with a great idea to help kid that need extra help with homework or a specific subject the idea was called a homework club.
Homework clubs can be useful for kids that can't do there homework at home because they do not have WIFI.
Kids can stay after school and be in the homework club if they do not have computers at home to do essays.
Homework clubs can also help you get better in a subject like math because you can get more 1 on 1 help with a tutor.
Homework clubs can also be used for kids who are in a sport or after school activity the homework club would let you get your homework done quicker in school so that you can go to your after school activity on time.
For example if a kid has an F in math and a teacher gives him extra credit work to do and the kid doesnt understand the work the homework club with be there with tutors to help the kid understand and finish his work.
I believe that homework clubs would be a great way for kids to learn more about the subject they are studying in class.
Sometime dont you feel like your teacher is explaining something too fast and you dont really understand,Well the homework club can help you with that the homework club will get you a tutor to explain to you more about the subject.
Have you ever been in class and kids are talking well in the homework club you would have peace and quite so that you could do your work in peace.
Have you ever had that one class you couldn't pass well I have,so what i did was go to the homework club were i had teachers and other fellow students helping or teaching me what i didnt know about the subject i was struggling in.
The homework club is also a great way to interact with other student.
The homework club is a place for learning not for fooling around so if you want to join the homework club it is because you need help with your homework or classwork.
Anyone needing help is math science or in any subject should join the homework club.
The homework club can help you raise your grade in the class if you try hard and try your best.
The home work club is there if you want to get your homework done is school so that when you get home you can relax.
The homework club also has lots of benefits because you can learn more than other kids and you can get special attention from your tutors so that you can learn more in class.
In conclusion the reason why I want to create a homework club is to help kids that need extra help in class.
I also want to help kids who can't do there homework at home because they have no WIFI.
I would like to help kid who teacher aren't really teaching good so they can have a good grade in that class.
I would like to help kids that need special attention to learn.
These are all the reasons I think schools should have homework clubs. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
D2C7BE42DEF6 | Do you think it is a good idea for students to commit to to a career at a young age?
You can think about you own opnion , and get in your own word your conclusions and read the 2 reason and one example, ideas and one view the prompt follow the anwers in the same tittle.
2 Reason.
Good and bad.
1..Good reason...
I thing some students need to commit to a career at a young age because the young age, see the world in different forms, when the olders people dont see anymore becase, were see different because if somethink gift stop i get stop but the young students is different.
2..Bad reason..
I think is bad too because you young you see the world in different around you but is good too beecuase you can think the everythink impossible for olders;. is any stop for your show that you get a opportunities but the reality is different.
Example.
If you go to High School if you here in 10 grade but you get 17 years old, and you get a jod because you have a single mother if the work of you momm its imposible for pay everythig what you need for survive. you stop too go of follow you career and you said i dont due anymore, why because you see the real what is happening and you need something else, but when you think and young world you said i can help my mother and I also too I can finish my career too because you see if you want or need something you can get..
Ideas.
Young age Students can get more Imagine.
Can think that everything is possible.
Can get more opportunities for the future.
Some true reasong that you can see example.
The young age student is the future the tomorrow conclusion..
Anything can stop you, if you are student young age because is not matter in you age but and you think you can due and you show how you are ?you can due eveythink nothing is impossible because you can get stop in you career or you goals only if you permit this in you future or now everithing is depend you, and the young age is the future of tomorrow is something that i can said is true.
View the Prompt.
Do you see the all conclusion that people can get in the hands, but olders that is not mean that you feel ready for what you whant that is mean, you feel ready and you what is happenig and you now can said when you need the stop and get you own conclucion the you... I see one video that now the young age student that olders said not because you young you dont born for this or for stupid reason now that young age student have money and power and the society or margen that humant create.. The reasong why? is because they never forgive whent style young age what people want and need for they futures. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 1.5 |
D2C9C1EE55F2 | I think that if we always do something we are going to learn something new from our miskes. We have to do something always everywhere in the world even in the bad times of ours life time. For example we have to work, take cares of our children's and also ours country. As we born and grow up we have the right to work harder at school until we finish than we have to work.
we always have to work in untied state because we have a lot of bills every month in the Mali box everyday a bill is coming from different companies, Every month the rent of the house. Than the rent of the cars we drive. And the insurance of the cars. The bills from gas and water so from every where. We work this much money and we pay back more than we make and at the end nothing will left for us. Than we have to take cares of the kids always something new when ever they see something we have to buy it to them no matter what you cant say no we have to work so that we can take cares of them anytime anywhere. Unit they grow up they always asking for milk if the government dont give the families or the kids the snap which is a card they always or each month they sent money into the card so you buy food from it and thats for kids. If they dont help people and the people have to work even at night to prevent every things for their kids. We always have to do something for our country to do our jobs like we have to work hard to protect the people from dying we have to take cares of our jobs better. We have to help the government by paying taxis so they can do something to the country make the roads safer for us so we can drive in a better roads. We always have to do something that the people whos lives in the country proud of us such as the police mans, military and air forces or anything else who ever work they should be honest with their work. That way we can do something for the country.
In conclusion we always have time to work its never late if we want work or do something and instead of staying home is better if we work outside. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
D2D9D0C94A14 | Is positive,because that say something real the positive attitude is the key to success in life. When some person they have a positive attitude they are more blessing in the life and more apportunity to triumph in this life.
The person who have a positive attitude they have enithing, because in some job or company they see and check to the another people and they see who have a good attitude for the work and some job need to the dismiss the person who have the negative attitude.
To have a positive attitude you can make to much friend because some person like the people who are positive because when they need support or help you are there whith you good attitude and they can do a very good trusted. And the person who have a good attitude they have more prosperity to arrive in to be successful and do they goals cross all obstacle.
In some time in this life occasion the person need to have a good attitude when are do somenthing because the life wait with to much surprise and when the person who demostrate have the best implement to win and the best form to win,what want is have a positive attitude and to much dedication.
For triunfal and to have a good to be succesful the people they need to havea possitive attitude when they are doing something because when the people do the righ things and with pleasure always they are winer and the good look that coming in they future with recompense valuable for that person. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
D2DF0FA5218C | Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive or negative effects on people's lives?
I believe that it is a negative way for people to have too much technology, one reason is because, people get to be more lazy, another reason is that people don't put much effort on what they are doing, and the last reason is that people get to be shy or nervous whenever they go out. People get to be more lazy on the way that technology can bring them everything to their doors: clothes, food, kitchen stuff, etc. They can do everything by only moving one finger, they don't have to make any eye contact with others. If people are always using technology they are not going to put much effort on what they are doing: paper works, homework, projects etc. They just can copy and paste stuff,
it is better what they have in their minds, talk with someone else about it, socialize with others so they can have more ideas, one person can explain it to each other so they get to understand it better, be proud of what they did and not what technology did for them, see their skills. Sometimes people get to be shy or nervous when they go out because they are use to order things by technology, they are just on their cell phones and not socializing with human contact, most of the stores have machines so they can get to pay without looking or talking with another person, that way people get to be more insecure of themselves when they have to socialize: job interviews, going to college, making a group when they're at school etc. With technology, people get to be more dumb in the way that technology does everything for them. It is better to get up and explore the world, give some effort on what they are doing, and meet new people. Some people while they are walking down the street, and they see another person coming they just look at their cell phones so they don't make any eye contact with other people. It is really sad what's happening with our society. While some people believe that technology is a positive way to grow as society however, I think It is making the people to not explore the world or socialize with others. Without technology kids would be in the parks playing games with other kids, having fun, exercising, learning new stuff ouside, and not being in their cell phones playing video games, watching cartoons or YouTube videos that is not going to help them in their futures. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
D2E2605EE795 | Do i agree or disagree that "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow? In my own opinion i say i would agree in my 17 years on this earth that i have to agree because if you stay to comfortable you won't do anything in life you will want it all easy and not try to strive for the best version of yourself.
you can stay comfortable but it won't help because your just wasting time and effort that you could become a better human being and spread your knowledge with other people. You should always try to strive to become the best you can be.
I say people should agree on this because not trying to fix your or improve yourself is not the best way to go. Like they shouldn't disagree i say because it not a bad or good thing but it would be amazing to push yourself and be more educated get pain a lot for having that big of a knowledge and use it think help people that can't help themselves. us humans should help everyone we can even if it's little people sometimes don't ask for help but if they dont ask you tell them you need help.
Some people also may disagree because they might think only about themselves or they think that there at a good point that they dont have to try anymore or try there very best they think thieve mastered the problems and situations. They think that they can't learn anything else but there wrong we human beings can always learn something more strive to be better humans, father,mothers,sons,daughters etc... but the point is don't settle for okay do more.
We Should learn not to stay cozy you should try to improve a bit everyday or learn something new help yourself and help each other out if they need help or if you need it learning and talking to other people wont hurt you so like
Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow"
is a true fact and you should try to be a better human or person in life and become someone that people can look up too. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
D2E545CFEBF3 | I would agree and disagree at the same time because their can be good reason and bad reason of why it good to extend 2 hours of school and working for 10 hours each day. My first reason is that it good extending the 2 hours helps you learn more things and catch up with any work. What is good about Working for 10 hours each day is that you will have money for colloge and save up. What is bad for working 10 hours is that you will be tired and sleepy.
For example if you work four-day week you should work at least for 8 hours only because you need to get enought sleep, leave some time for home work. But it also can be good because you can only work for four-days and rest the week days. Working more than 8 hours you will feel tired,sleepy and frustrated. Therefore it better to work only 8 hours instead of 10 hours because it too much,as a result you can get bad consequence or bad grades.
My other reason is that I think school should not follow this model because working each day 10 hours it too much. However their can be bad consequence of working 10 hours and extendidng
2 hours in school. My first reason is that you can be tired and not listining to the teacher while she teaching. Second reason is that if you extend the hours of school many student will be livid for staying more hours in school.
I think that the school should not extend the hours is because some teachers need to be in places too,needs to rest and also needs more time on grading papers. I also think that many students have part time jobs and also they need to be somewhere. Some students will be tired and sleepy. Another reason I have is that student needs to go home early to go do their homework,rest alittle. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
D2EBEB5FDA90 | I believe technology has limitation human contact with other people is a negative effect on our lives. The reasons are,they buy thing online that are not good and they start to become lazy,communicant becomes hard for them.
Purchasing online things are not always great. When you do purchase it online sometimes they don't always tell the truth and when your getting phones or other things like clothes or makeup. These thing you never know if its used or brokering and if someone could of warn it too. Also food that are buy online are not fresh and they could Carey germs. Take for example when you go out you look at the food to see, which one is good and which one is bad but when your online you can't tell what your getting. This cause people to become lazy.
People become lazy because of how much stuff there is on online and games,
TV shows. Therefore people rather watch a TV show then go out with there family. This is bad for people because this can cause people to become depressed,more stress about online chats and what there saying online or watching a TV show;but you wish you could be that person. People will stop going outside. Take for example YouTube, YouTube is the most used media but also there are non-stopped videos they can go on forever and people stared to thing they have to many things to do. This cause peoples communicant with others harder. YouTube cause people to give up.
Communicating is becoming harder for people because they don't face to face talk anymore. Now they use phones more. Phones are used for texts ,calling. So why is communicant important? Communicant is the main thing in your life it brings people together and you need it for jobs. Jobs where you have to work with other people and help people that buy from you. Take for example Generic_Name is the co work and Generic_Name is the costumer,Generic_Name does't talk to people that much because she texts more ,therefore, when Generic_Name came up to her ask for help. She didn't help because she doesnt like talking to people.
Therefore,technology has limitation human contact with other people is a negative effect on our lives. I believe these are the reason,they buy things online that are not good and they start to become lazy,communicant becomes hard for people. Peoples need to use less technology and try to open there self to the outside world and hang with there friends and family or read books. Some will still choose to use technology today. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
D2FB14A7C43B | Albert Schweitzer said, "Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing." However, it is a good example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people. People may follow every step you do, because they want to success in life by being influences by others. It is the main thing to show people that they can do what they think they are not able to do.
First reason is, People may follow every step you do, because they want to success in life by being influence by others. For example, my friend
Generic_Name has a son, who according to her he wants to be a lawyer. Generic_Name husband who's name is Generic_Name is a lawyer. Although their son Generic_Name is taking only math classes in collage, which it has nothing to do with laws. Generic_Name and Generic_Name want to influence Generic_Name to become a lawyer. But Generic_Name is being influence by his Algebra class teacher. Generic_Name has a very high score on math, and his Algebra teacher believe that Generic_Name can be a math teacher in a college. Generic_Name teacher knows how hard he works to do everything right and how his behavior it is showed.
Another reason is, It is the main thing to show people that they can do what they think they are not able to do. For example, when my brother was nine years old he wanted to be a Pilot, but he was just really scared of heights. When my brother graduated from high school he wanted to go to Army. Somehow my mom find out that he really did not wanted to do that what he really wanted to do was being a Pilot. My mom is a Flight Attend and she told my brother that some people will say you are too weak to do this and that, but they actually does not know what you are capable to do. With those words my mom influence my brother, and now he is a Pilot and he works for the Air Force. My mom gave him an example that no one believed on her the only person who believed on her was her mom. As my mom says, " Don't let other people think you are not able to do things, which they we're not able to do."
Some people may think that there are better ways to influence others. However, it can be true, but people get more influence by examples. There are not many ways for example, if someone who is very important who wants to influence someone else who is not that important to be come important as they are. Does not mean this person is going to have the same luck to become really important. Do not let other people influence you by other ways, let them give you an example of how you are going to success.
In conclusion, It is a good example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people. To teach them what it is good and what it is wrong to do. Given your own examples and teach them how to behave. Dot let people think that example is not the main thing to influence others. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
D30614F0911F | Some schools are considering the idea to offer distance learning for students to attend classes from home. Many students can benefit by considering this new idea for students to take classes from home by the way of online or videos. Although, many other students would not be agree with this idea.
In my opinion, I am not agree with the idea for students to attend classes from home. First, if the students are in their houses they would have more distraction, for example; they can get distracted by the food, many time food is a big distraction for students to concentrate in classes. They can also get distract because of the television, they can see something interesting in the TV and they would quickly get distracted. Also one of the biggest distraction for everyone is the cellphone. If a student is taking classes at home; no one would be responsible to tell him/she not to use their cellphones. Second, they would not take it seriously. They would feel free because they are in their houses. Sometimes they might take the classes; and sometimes they would not take them because no one would be telling them to do it. They would feel allow to do whatever they want because they would not have the rules like in a classroom. If the student is in a classroom; he/she receive more information, more examples, more attention, and more help. Every teacher has rules in their classrooms; rules that help students to be successful. And third
They would not be able to learn as much as they would in a classroom. They would not be able to ask questions and get the answer they would need. They would not receive as much attention as they need.
However, many students support the idea for students to attend classes from home. It can be considered a good idea for many students; because they would not be traveling from one place to another; it would safe them time. Also many times when there is a bad weather outside; many schools cancel classes; because they can't travel. And by considering this idea for students for students to attend classes from home would help them; because even if is raining or snowing, they will not cancel their classes. Therefore, many students agree with this idea because is not only going to safe them time; it would also help many students. Many students do not have transport. Sometime they have to walk or even pay so that they can go to school and attend to class. using the online program would give them a big support.
In conclusion, considering the idea for students to attend classes from home by the way of online or video can be a good or a bad idea for many students. I do not support this idea. Students should not attend to classes online or video. Students can get distracted easily by anything or anyone in their house. Many time studying at home give students many issues; there can be many people at home and too much noise that the student would not be able to concentrated and will get distracted. It can also happen that watching a video and that there's no one there to explain it; can make the students tire and he/she can fall sleep. Also, students will not take it seriously because there's not a teacher telling them and explaining them what to do. They would not receive as much education, information, and attention as they need. My position on this issue is to maintain the students attending to school. The students will learn more if they receive classes in school. Attend classes in a classroom with a teacher will provide students more support and it would help them in many ways to be successful in the future. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
D30D6D7F3D39 | Some teachers think about the benefits of working with a group or working alone. I feel that working together would be more helpful for all students because they can share more ideas, have less work and can be working with less stress.
Students can have a little conversation for get more information, then they can pick one or more ideas for make their work more easy . They can argue from each idea that could be more important. Every students have different thoughts that can help them to realize a good work. For example, When I was in my country my teacher said that we can choose work together or alone, and I prefer to work alone because I thought that working alone was more beneficial for me but I was really confused about it. Working together help us to know different option and students can have more social communication.
Working together imply to have less work. Students can be take more opportunities for learn new thing everyday, also that can help teachers too. Less work can be helpful for a lot students because they can realize missing work, extra work and other activities during class. Furthermore, I remember when I was in 6 grade my teacher said that ''less work can help you to have more time for you'' that means that sometimes with less work teachers and students could learn and have more progress.
Some classes can be stressful for a many students because teachers need to realize all activities during their classes and sometime students do not understand what they need to do. Otherwise, working together would be more easy for students to finish their work quickly. One important fact in my life that
I never forgot is when my English teacher said that we have just 10 minutes for take the exam, and everyone fail because he was very strict with us. Working with another person have a lot benefits for reduce stress. Students can help each other and check their own work .
In conclusion, Working together could be very helpful for many students who need help for get better grades during the year. All students prefer to work with people who has different option, ideas and new thing that help them. They can have more time for make missing work or do homework during class. Working together would be more beneficial for all students. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 |
D325C8F858F6 | A group of students have skill to take decisions, there're a lot way to do, students can react to any problem, but work alone can be good as a group, people who like work alone have abilities: reasoning, recognize, and expression. Groups were created to share ideas. Therefore, it's not bad get help from other people, everyone say, " two head think better than one."
Groups make different way to share or send a message, a few people can create a lot, base in their share of thoughts, abilities, and decisions. Groups have the most of attention in this case. Elsewhere, work alone is base in just you, and what you know, if something that you did it, come to be wrong, you will not share it. If people who like work by their self can't support ideas with reasoning, can't do a perfect project. the change of ideas always will be a good work and the can support your reasons, why you had make it.
Work in group include: less work, time, and money, back to work alone you have your own words, spend a lot of your time more than you think, also could take too much time to finish. To different of groups students can do other activities. The group help to students to learn and combine new thought from other students. Friends can help to get a correct answer or do a good work.
The important of groups is that students learn to share, help, and be kind with other students make a friend, besides that learn, help, and teach to other, they make fun their work. work alone give stress and that show someone who want to make everything by his\herself they share their own ideas. Sometimes work alone can be a good choice, because is you're wrong, you can't blame to nobody.
In conclusion, I believe that groups are more helpful for students, because they learn to take other decision and compare. About work alone, I'm not agree, because you try to do something, maybe that's good, but you're not count with other ideas, expressions, or declaration of other thought. In my opinion is more beneficial working in groups that show us compare, analyze, and be friendly with others. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
D326DB3F4FCF | yes becuase students would have more time to there work and is give more time the techer plan out the lesson but thye got give a time limeit to finsh the work cuz then students can get done the work and it would be hlepful to some students cuz some learn better by them self and they wouldnt feel rushed by the teacher to finsh the work before class ends but some other students learn better when ther is a teacher right there teaching face to face some students learn diifernt then others and there would be problems with students like getting trouble and it will teach students responepillity and it would show if they are willing t the work or if they care or dont care cuz now a days students dont really care about school they just come cuz they have to cuz if they didnt need to come they wouldnt come they just think that school a waste of time for them but they dont know how much they need school and how much school os gooing help them in the futer but it will give students more time to sit dont and work maybe they like it more then coming to school | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
D3291B198D36 | Generic_Name
Grade: 12
Teacher: Generic_Name
Date: March 29 2019
The philosopher, physician, and humanitarian Albert Schweitzer said, "Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing." I am agree with this statement because there is not better way to influence others than have a good example by our owm behavior. The change start in us to show a good example of habitat, religion, responsability, respect to others, and over all humility.
The first reason is that nowadays the people see and judge of how peple look like, how people are dressed, or if people are old or young, in that way they are giving examples to others to judge the people, instead of give a good impression or example to other that everyone needs to love each other like they love their selves, no matter how they are. Respect other to get respect, always kind with everyone no matter who they are. Helping each other everywhere. Be a good citizenship: Payin your bills, respecting the laws, and be a good neighborhood. Because without examples, no one can make differences.
The second reason: Be a kind person, study to have a good future. For example: "I am in High School I am graduate this year. I am a English learner. When I came here in US I did't know how to speak English, but I came to school, I study hard all the words, and I practiced my English. Now I know the languaje, not at all but I can defend my self. I want to encorage all hispanic people to learn English or let their child to go to school, and I know that is not easy but not impossible. I hope to give a good example for all hispanics. I will keep doing it to influence them to learn the language of this country."
Some people say that there are many ways to influence others like with words and not with actions. However, they are wrong because how people will change without an example of life, like Martin Luther King, he was a great person, and he passed through a lot of things, and everybody knows that he influenced a lot of people in that time and I think that he still influencing more people even that he is not with us anymore.
In conclusion, giving example by your own behavior is the best way to influence others. encoraging them to learn english, helping each other, loving other no matter their religion. Influencing lifes with actions is better than jsut words. What would happen if no one wants to be an example for other. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
D344D0003B84 | Every person has their own feelings, emotions, and their own talents. But people are thinking that if they that talent or skill, and they can not do that in front of the world or people. As all people has different talent, that they really want to show to people. Before they think about their talent to chance their own world, they will be so nervous that they can't do that. They will be afraid, they will not show that to people that can learn from it. That they can try it on their own life, so they can learn new thing from new people. Over 90% of all people in the world has their own talent or skills because they are being being appreciated that who are they, and by believing on their self that how hard they worked.
To begin with, one way that all people can develop their talent is by being appreciated on their self that who they are, and how they can change the world. For example, one day it was our first day that we came to America, and I even didn't know that much English that I can talk to person. So one year later I learn some English, and I got to 8 grade, by other day we were going to do the student let decision. I really did not talk that much because I was so nervous about it like how I have to talk in front all the teachers, and students. I wanted to try it but I couldn't do that. This evidence shows that, being in different country and not knowing their language is really hard. My mom, and dad was always trying so hard that one day I will be able to speak English. My mom, and dad were always telling me that "always be appreciated that how you got to this level, and think about hoe you can make different talents that people can see, so they can improve it on their life." After that day I told to my self " I always will be able to be appreciated to my self, and by being in this world." As always that one day I will show my talent to people that I never thought of that one day I will learn English too. clearly, if I wasn't being appreciated to my self, to my teachers, to my family that they were working with me together. I wasn't be able to even write this essay. now even if I am not that much perfect I am happy that I got to that point that I and my family really wanted.
In addition, there is other way that you can show your talent to people by believing in your self that you can get to your goal by working hard as much as you can do it, and as much as possible. So you can see the result of it by your working hard. For Example, my brother Generic_Name, he is in 12 grade, for him it was really hard because he was always worrying about his grades, and he was saying "how I can get to finish my
12 grade by being a perfect student. He was always wondering about his self, and that how hard will be next year.
One day my mom, and dad told him that "if you believe in your self, by that time you already got this." this evidence shows that,
Generic_Name couldn't believe on his self. Generic_Name wanted to know that how he can show his own talent . He was always worked hard to improve in his new talents or skills. Now he got to finish his 12 grade by being successful. By next year he will go to collage. Clearly, if Generic_Name didn't listen to my mom, and dad he wasn't able to finish his 12 grade by showing to all of his teacher that how he improved om his talents.
In conclusion, developing your talent or skill is a different way or different thing that you can bring it into your own life. By being appreciated and believing in your self that change your life, and bringing a smile up on your family face. As always people want to develop new talent to their own life to make them change, different, and happy. Clearly, being in a different country, far from your own family, And you can't see them. It's really hard for everyone especially me with my family. But I got a strong talent that no one can pull me back from it. For bring appreciated to my have that they were working together with me that I can get to this part. Today I realize that how much I improving in own life, in writing, and speaking English. Even if not that much perfect. And like Generic_Name, he believe on his self, and he worked hard that he got to that point. Now he is working hard that he can make this world a better place for his future that is coming up. Clearly, if you want to improve in your own life or in you own talent or skill that is in your heart, and that can show your develop to the people for this world, and it will be applying to your own goals. Always be thankful, be appreciated to your family, teacher that they worked hard for you to learn new things that will persuade you to your new goals. As everyone has a talent to the world, And that way they can change the world too. Always work hard in your life if you want to develop your talent. By improving a skill can make your own place, and your own world beautiful as they can see the result of it at the end. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
D35A126B4379 | Anyone can have a talent or skill, you just need to see what it is. They can help along the way to get you something really helpful, for example collage. Your talent can be playing an instrument, singing, or dancing. A skill can be building things, sports, and cooking. The talent I have is playing a Guitar because it took time, practice, and studying.
When you want to do something big it can take a lot of time. Time is what we all need and time can go fast or slow, but thats good because it can really be helpful. Playing the Guitar took a while but it payed off, mostly because I used my free time to play. Sometimes I can get stress playing mainly by not having much time playing before a concert. It could be hard doing it ,but by doing so I can see my self getting better each day.
Practicing could get hard, but if your relax and not think too much you'll see it will be easy. Practicing can make you accomplish anything you've been doing a long time. Doing the Guitar was hard but not too hard because I've been practicing for a while. Playing some of the songs were fast and long, but when I got home I'd play the song over and over until I got it just right. Thats how I know by practicing is really helpful and made me be good at doing the I wanted to do the most in life.
Some people don't like to study and its not something we have to do, but something we need to do. I think studying is more of a thing you want to do if you care so much about what your doing. Studying the notes was one of the first things I had to do before playing the Guitar and the songs. By studying I can see the notes were not that easy to play and also tuning the Guitar, but thats why I studied to see what I was doing wrong. Studying is what I did to be fantastic at the Guitar also being amazing at the concerts.
In conclusion, If you want to be awesome at what your doing you need to use your time wisely, practice, and study. By doing all that you'll see that you will be amazed at what you did. Maybe you can even be famous for what you did by focusing on your goal. To sum this all up just do at what you do best in life maybe it can pay off real good.`` | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
D3612C6F0653 | Generic_Name
March 20, 2019
Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose? Some people don't like to be always doing something; however, do we accomplish more if we are always doing something. We can accomplish more if we are always doing something because we don't get bored, we can have a good and healthy life and we can achieve what we propose.
Firts, we don't get bored. For example, if we are in our home and we are doing something like cleaning the house, or cooking we don't get bored easily because we know how to spend our time. Another example, when we are doing nothing during the day, the day feel so long, but if we are doing something during the day, the day feel faster. Also, when we do something different each day we don't get bored because we don't repeat the same routine each day. In sum, focus on do always something is good to not stay bored.
Next, we can have a good and healthy life. I think, if we are feeling sad, or we are having negative thoughts we can start to do always something to distract our minds and feel much better. Addionally, when we are always doing something like activities we can have a healthy life because we can spend our time doing excersises in home or going to they gym. Also, if we don't do any activities and we just spend our time watching movies or staying in bed, we can get sick because our bodys are not in movement, but if we are always doing something we don't get sick because we are having our body in movement and doing good activities. To conclude, It is important to do always something to have a good and healthy life.
Finally, we can achieve what we propose. For example, if we are in high shool and we want to graduate, we have to do always something like go to school everyday, do our homeworks and pay attention to have the opportunity to graduate. Also, when we wat to get a job we need to do always something and go to find a new job to have our own money and be responsible. Also, if we are always doing something we are gona fight for what we want and we are gonna be better persons. To summarize, we have to focus and do always something and achieve our goals.
In conclusion, we can accomplish more if we are always doing something because we don't get bored, we can have a good and healthy life and we can achieve what we propose. For example, We can can do activities everyday to not get bored, we can have our bodys in movement to have a healthy life and we can have good opportunities and fight for what we want. For these reasons and many more its important to do always something and we can accomplish more. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
D36CCF111F86 | A positive attitude is more helpful to others and motivational,But ones attitude dose not necessarily have to be positive in order to succeed. Ones attitude can be either positive or negative as long as it improves ones ability to succeed. There are many keys to success but attitude is a major key , because attitude introduces or rather shows character. A positive attitude is a great thin but ones attitude can be negative ,but it is more over whelming to others and some might not either like or no longer associate with that person. As long as that attitude helps with your success it should not matter what type of attitude youve got.
Ones attitude is ones guide as it allows more options to come ones way. In a way attitude can guide and help ones path to success or it could close all the doors to ones dreams and success. On the side of a beneficial attitude; people can really catch the feeling of your attitude. What that means is if the attitude is negative but it gets things done then it should not matter as long as it benefits the amount of work or what ever is being or getting done. A positive attitude is more or rather feels more rewarding that much of a negative attitude. A positive attitude is more rewarding and dose allow the people getting that attitude to feel more successful and more appreciated.
Although a positive attitude is more beneficial it can lead into less work or less progess being made and shows that one is not trying hard enough to succeed. By having a negative attitude your showing to others that your work matters. And by doing so you can encourage others or rather inspire others have have a good work ethic by tring your hardeste even if some one is pushing you to work in a negative way. Success come to ones mind and it over comes everything if they put their minds to it.
Yes attitude is a key to success, but it dose not have to be positive if its beneficial to one in their path of success. I do believe that a positive attitude is more appreciated but a negative attitude is less appealing. I feel as long as your attitude is improving your work ethic and it benefits your progress then is should not matter wether or not its positive or negative as long as you have the right mind set you should have a successful work ethic. Your attitude reflect on your work it just depends on how you use your attitude in your work. for example if my boss came in yelling at me saying " get to work your not getting paid for nothing." thats a negative attitude so thats going to make me have a negative mind but if i can use that frustration and negativity to inspire e to do my work I will notice that all I have to do is do my work and my bosses attitude will change one me. But if my boss were to have a positive attitude then I could also use that as a motivation as it not only shows me that my boss likes that I do my work but it shows me that im appreciated.
I can see that having a positive attitude is more motivational, but ones attitude can be negative as long as it benefits you and others in a positive way. people need to understand that they can use these attitude to benefit themselves. Peoples attitudes are what helps people succeed as it should motivate and help make their attitude more positive through the day knowing you did good enough to improve your self. Attitude is much more than just success, its the key to motivation. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
D37157CEC26F | A positive attitude is a key to success in life because having faith on yourself can bring you to big things. Having a positive attitude gives you more strength and believing on yourself. Keeping your head up high and moving forward. Being positive is the key to life. Believing in youself is the key to a postiive attitude.
Having faith on yourself can help succeed in life. Telling yourself that "You can do it" will motivate you and help you more. Taking a big step can be hard but having faith and a good attitude will bring you nothing more than success. Believing in yourself and not caring what other people say is having faith on yourself. Being yourself and trusting yourself and doing what you have to do will help you out more in life.
Positive attitude gives you more strength and believing in yourself. Being positive about anything that you are doing will help grow in life and be a great person with a positive mind. Telling yourself that everything is possible if you put your mind in it will help you even more to succeed in life. Even if you try something different always have faith and be positive about it. Having a positive mind is the key to life and everything, just believe on yourself.
Keeping your head up high and moving forward is a way to succeed. If someone says "You can't do it" just ignore and keep your head up because thats how you will succeed. If you fall just get back up and move forward because thats a way to have a positive attitude. Being positive and moving forward will help succeed. Having a positive attitude will help improve more.
The key to life is having a positive attitude because that is how you have faith. Moving forward is another way that you will succeed. Having a positive attitude and believing in yourself. The key to life is success because you have a positive mind. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
D371D73ACCC2 | Some People Believe in praising a student's work to build self-esteem,even if the work is not the students best effort. they believe that students must be self confident to learn.
I do not, i believe that if you give a student false praise then the student is going to get lazy & stop producing work with the quality and efficiency that they used too.
In truth I was just like this, I once had a teacher who put so much false hope and praise in me that i started to not care as much as i used too, it effected my social life & determination as well as my standards, intent & self-esteem, I was no longer able to spend more than five minutes on work without getting distracted or discouraged, eventually i came to terms with the fact that not all my work was gonna be perfect, but if i spent enough time on it then it would be a hundred times better.
So what is the best way to build self-esteem, well that would be hard work and dedication, lots of people think that just because they do some work they should instantly be rewarded, there work does not even need to be good, for them to think they deserve praise.
The best way to actually build confidence is through achievement's,when you accomplish something and you do it well you get this since of success unlike the half baked work most people get credit for.
Once you actually build up confidence everything in life gets easier, you start doing your home work on time, when a test comes up you would be very well prepared to get an A, your friends and teachers start to respect you more & your parents will be proud of you, but most importantly you will be proud of yourself.
In conclusion having false praise & hope is bad it lowers your standards and makes your work ethic terrible the only good way to build self-esteem is through achieving something out of hard word and dedication. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
D38A414FA051 | Many believe that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Carrying a positive attitude can get you far in life. Job opportunities and getting notice by important people are opportunities that come with having an affirmative attitude. This kind of posture can benefit ones future.
If more individuals convey a positive attitude many would have better employment opportunities. Jobs can help you be successful. Working for the president of the United States is a more beneficial job then working a regular nine to five. Showing an affirmative attitude can help you work for the president and can also help you have a better income which can lead to success. Having a good occupation is important.
Since it's important to have a positive image it can expand the people you meet. One way is by having a confident posture. This helps you have a better chance of engaging with significant people like the president. This attitude can lead one to have job opportunities.
Looking at the other side being negative can also help you be successful in life. One example is by being selfish. Putting yourself first in everything you do can lead to success. With this negative image shows that your the most important person that can only bring you a favorable outcome.
As many have stated displaying confidence is the way to go in life. Employment opportunities and getting noticed by important individuals can bring success. With most success theres always positive results. Obviously one should always be positive if they want a desirable outcome in life because life is too short to be unsuccessful and negative. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
D390FE972D8F | Changing the cafeteria food's to healthier options is a good idea because, it shows kids new variety of food's they never tried before, and it makes kids have a balance between food's when they eat.
Changing the menu is going to give kids a better experience and have a open mind to foods they never ate before. Once they try it at school and realize how much they like it there most likely going to eat healthier on a daily basis which is going to help there diet and help there body become bigger and stronger.
When kids go out to eat or are eating at home there going to have a better balance between when they should eat junk food and when they should eat healthy. When they eat dinner at home there going to have more on their plate than just the main dish there going to have vegetables fruits everything because they've tried that fruit or vegetable before and they know they like it. Kids will also see that they like a different combination of food with there vegetable or fruit.
So changing the cafeteria lunch menu to healthier options is a good idea, kids will have a better diet and will have better options when picking out what food to eat for the day. Kids will also start having an open mind to a different varieties of food. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
D3999CF53EFE | " In some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school."
Some students want to take a career during they study but some students don't wanted to thinking about any career when they study in the school.
First, for example people want to know what do you want when you study if you think is more import ants to take a career when you study, and you are young most students know that is more important because you think about you future, and you want to try to progress you life maybe for give your parents a better life when they can to help you because they are older for work.
Secondly, we have many people in the world want to progress in his life because they think is more better for the future have a better life with your family, but is more important to know what do you know what career do you wants for progress your life because we have many career in the world that you progress better some students like to take a career more difficult like technology, teacher, technical and polices but any career progress your life.
However, students don't want to know what they want for his future because they thinking I was in the school I am young, and is the reason when they don't want to take a career during the students is study, but I think is important to think your future a career for helping your parents maybe your uncle, sister, brother, but we have many students they want to go to the school for have friends, girlfriends, boyfriends, and don't progress his life many people have problems about drug, drink, and fight.
In conclusion, I agree with this position to take a career before you graduate because is more easy to know want do you want to know what career you are interesting for progress your life is better know before that after because you have a career, and your mind have this position to take a career for better life maybe when you almost done you have what career you have for making money, and try to help your family in your life | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
D3A5813D8C06 | Most employers are looking for expecific characteristics in a potential employee. I writing this card for you Mr, Generic_Name
I totally agree with you are excellent boss ,however, in you store for the present, and future you need good employees. I dont have excellent experience for this work, but Im wonderful cadidate for developing, I learning stremately really fast, and have the skills for this wonderful work. For take this position I always remember there are three most importantly reason there are time, habits and good attitude for customers, and how to socialize with everybody. Im honest person and never give up when I have clear odjectives, and I demostrated you Dear Mr Generic_Name my abilities.
The firstly reason is the time and dinamic is very beneficial for our mind and our spirit. Every single day need to respect our horario for developing our personal work for perceverance we have all the posibilities on our life to build our own character. We need keep moving forward the coriosity keeps leading us new paths and more oportunities in work, and personal lives.
The secondly reason is habits I think everybody have different actions how organize, and develop more suphisticated method of work this is important, for example, when customers go to the restaurant on weekend the tables, and flour everything need to stay crystal clear. The character we learning in home we need to put in practice in our work. Aiming high expectetions and setting big characters to succeed the consistency and perseverance.
The thirdly reason is attitude for developing our work need to stay with people with excellent energy for charger our mind, and everybody demostrated the costumers we are the store with stremaly potential, and very respectful, and kind workers. We have the controlling of store and wonderful attention,and broadly with easy work and constant positivity will make them too soft to compete in the work with struggle attitude have the custumers. In will demostrated our method how interact and socialize with people.
Dear, Mr Generic_Name, I writing this letter for you take cosiderancy. Im good worker and have the skills for this store I promisse you put in practice my specific reason, for example, time, habits and attitude all this things considered it seems reasonable to implement in the work. The are important how to communicate and demostrate responsible in my work and developing, and please take consider my personal opinion thank you. | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
D3A6B04B54A9 | Should school have a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall? People said most students enjoy summer vacation, but some educators feel that the summer break is too long and that students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall. Some people argue that there should be year round schools, where there would be a 3-4 week break in summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. However I believe that students should have a longer summer break because a long summer break will give the student time to travel, spend time with their family, and work in summer. The first thing you can do by having a long summer break is travel overseas without worried about how many day you can stay. By travel overseas you need time to explore the country go around the city, and enjoy yourself. Cause travel in a different country you can learn new thing that you never learn anywhere, or experience the thing that you learn in school like go to a history site that you learn from history class. Traveling is not all about playing around didn't learn anything, but you can have your choose of where you want to go, and what you want to do. There are one type of travel that I think is really good for student that they're going to have fun, experience, and still learning. It's the tour during summer break with your teacher, and your schoolmate. It's recommend by school where you can come to a country that you learn about their language, and culture in school. There are a lot of different thing that you need to get ready to go to another country, so you can't get everything done in a week of spring break. The second thing you can do by have a long summer break are spend time with your family, and friends. When summer come you, and your friends plan to go on vacation together because all of you have the same summer time even if ya'll come from a different school. Because all the schools doesn't have a same winter break, or spring break that is the reason why you, and your friends can't go to vacation together. Family is the most important thing for everybody. On summer you can spend more time with your family, or go visit cousin. Summer are the students break, but their parent still have go to work. The 3-4 week summer break is too short for students to have a chance spend time with their family. For overseas students that even worse they're study in a year, but still don't has a chance to come back to see their family just because the short amount of time that they have for break. The third problem is the student work on summer break most student are get their job during the summer. Because with the amount of time you available to work for them, they will hire you. For a student work in the summer is the best choose when you work on summer you can save a big amount of money to use during the year, and don't have to go work during school year, so you can be more focus in school. With a week off in winter break, or spring break you can't find a job because the short amount of time. Some people say their should be a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and week off spring and fall. It's will help the student return to school without forgot everything that they have been learn. However I disagree with this idea I believe there should be a long summer break by that student can do what they want, and still learning new thing. I think a long summer break is the best time in a year for students travel overseas to study in the United State like me. Because this is the only time in the year we can come back to the motherland to meet us family, and visit cousin. During school year we can't come back to our country to celebrate holiday like Christmas, or mother day...etc. We have to celebrate a lone because the limit of the time won't let us make it home. A long summer break will help the student overseas spend more time with family because there are enough time for them to get ready, and travel a long way home. For students that live in United State you can go travel with your family to make more memory. When students have enough time to enjoy them self in summer it will help them return for school in a exciting way, so they can learn faster. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
D3B45F8759E3 | Have ever thought a problem can take you to do your best. knowing that you made a mistake or have a problem come to you can eather ruin your plans or take you to do the best. Duke Ellington said " A problem is a chance for you to do your best". A problem can present in any ocattion but is inportant for you to not give up to keep trying and to make that problem a new chance were you can try something new.
Being able to show your solving a skill can also help you in any ocattion. If you are able to show that you can solve anything and take risk to solve tha problem that can be an inportant step for you to take and try to flip that problem to something good . Show your skill show that you can keep trying and try your best to solve that problem wich can take a long time to do but by showing things can also help you in your future.
studys show that solving a problem can increase your brain knowledge imagene if in stead of solving a problem you can flip it into a good thing, and also help in the future. a problem can come from diffirent situation and from different topics which can help increase your knowlegde in that certain topic what happens if you try something new and it fails that can also can make you or can break you. it can break you in the form that you stop tryingand give up or it cna make you if you dont let that problem take control of you and you take your time to solve it or turn it into chance.
do your best to solve that problem or take that chance or turn it into a lelarning process that you know you try ur best and you know you took your time to solve that problem and you can have that expirience in your mind and you know you learn a lot from thatt chance that was once a problem but knowing is a learning expirience. All that you learn can help you in the future. and I agree with what duke ellington said a problem can be a chnce of learning.
making a mistake or having a problem fail can teach you a lot of thing were you can learn from your failing expirience it can sometimes ruin your expirience but at the end of the day you learn from that mistake. That problem can present in any ocattion or time. having the powers to turn that problem into a chance of learning. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
D3C9A3C2BB08 | Does technology have a negative effect on people lives? People believe that technology these days is a big part of society and that its effecting people lives in a negative way. They say it makes people feel lazy and depend on it so much and without they feel like they can't get nothing done. Although, technology has a negative effects on people lives, I believe that its positive effects is greater for few reasons.
First reason, it allows people to do much more in less time. We can complete many tasks without having contact with others. For example, people can check out books, shop, and learn without having to go no where or speaking to another person. Not only that it saves us time it also saves lives.
Another reason, it helps us and others on emergency situations. For example, we are able to make emergency calls at any given time for help without having to go no where. Also, we can call to report someone or something that will harm us and others. Not only we can call for emergency we can also call people we care about that we cant reach.
Final reason, We are able to talk to people we care about and love that we can't reach. For example, If your parents or someone you care about are in a different state or country, and you want to check in on them you can just call them without having to go or travel to them. This what makes technology a positive effect on our lives because it makes everything easy.
In conclusion, technology has a positive effect on people lives because we can save time, save lives, and contact people we care about. This why technology has a positive effect on our lives. But at the end of the day it all depends on you and how you want to use it you can make it positive or negative to your life. | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
D3D5841674F5 | Technology has positive effects on people's lives because they can help you with many information that your trying to look up for example if your trying to shop, play games, or even buy or read books. They help you do a lot when you really need it. Technology is not for only buying or doing any other things it's for doing projects in class or a if your doing your homework, applying for jobs, and applying for college. Here are my 3 reasons why technology is positive for people's lives.
First, let's say that you want to go to college but you can't go to the college because you don't have time or maybe that you just can't go. What you can do is that you can go on your laptop and go to the website and apply there and you can take your time on it and not have to worry about going there. You can apply to many collleges online and that is really great so you can get accepted to many colleges out in other countries or states. When my brother was in 12th grade he wanted to go personaly to the colleges but he said some of them were too far and that he didnt want to go because he needed to do something really important and so what he did was that he went online and started applying for 5 colleges and he got accepted to 4 of them. He said it was not even hard. Having to fill papers with people takes up so much time that you will be there the whole day instead of you doing it online at home and not having to rush up anything and if you mess up the laptop tells you that there is something that you typed up is wrong.
Second, If you don't feel like going to the store because your just tired and you just don't want to go out but you need some clothes for that night and you don't have any then what you can do is go online and start shopping there and buy everything you need for that night and you will be fine with out the need of going to the mall or going to any other store. At the same time even tho your not going out if you shop online there is a posibility that your clothes that you ordered does not fit you or it might not come on time when you really need it. The process of returing it and everythig is just too much. That's why people prefer that it's better to go to the store and just buy it from there. If that was me I would prefer to go to the mall or the store to. When you go to the stores sometimes you have to handle some workers that are aggressive and they have a bad attitude. I don't like seeing people with bad attitude it makes me mad and it always makes me just go away and not look at them anymore.
Third, In school sometimes you have projects and you have class work but you can't find information about your research or anything about your topic or about your class work then you have to find information online. When you ask your teachers what they would say is that go on your laptop and look it up and then go ask your classmates if you can't find anything. For my US VA History project are teachers gave us many different websites that we can use and they were very helpful I got all my information from there. I didn't even have to go ask him for help or anything. Also when you have test it's mostly technology because you don't really have test on paper anymore now it's on laptops and you don't have to write anything now it's only typed it is really easy and fast. Even essays it used to be essays on paper and now it's essays in laptops.
In conclusion, These were my 3 main reasons why technology has a positive effect on people's lives. There can be many positive effects on technology but theses 3 were mostly about how technology is even tho you do not interact with other humans face-to-face it is good doing online things. There are better chances that you get many things done and also you get the chance to have some time off of looking and talking to people. If I were to ask many people which side they prefer they would choose the positive effect side. "It's better technology instead of talking to people". | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
D3F44CC7EC17 | Do you think that people can be influence with your own example? or do you think that they need more than that. Although some say that giving your own example is the best way to influence others because you are giving a real example so people will trust you more , actually there are better ways to do it because if you give more than one example people is going to trust you more and you can make a plant for take their attention.
people can be convinced by looking at other people`s example because they think that doing what others do is better.
In my opinion we should give more than one example to the people because one can not be enough for people who do not believe what other say, so what we need is more options where they can find their influences. Giving more than one option is giving them a chance to choose them what they can be influence by.
some times we need their attention because that way we can convinced them that we are telling them the true and they will follow us and they will fell comfortable with them self.
in conclusion giving more that a lot of choose to the people is better because they can choose what influence they want Although some say that giving your own example is the best way to influence others because you are giving a real example so people will trust you more , actually there are better ways to do it because if you give more than one example people is going to trust you more and you can make a plant for take their attention. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
D401F5D87E45 | Dear Principal
The Police i think is correct is Policy 1. I think police one is correct because not only the students sometimes need to call their parents to come to pick then up or pick up early or come bring their lunch, but also because is impossible to make everyone obey Policy number 2, even if is a school policy most people will ignore it, so I think Policy number 1 is harder to be ignored. And even if we have a Policy against cell phones students would ignore it if is at lunch time because nobody is there to tell them not to use it, and the school already have to much to pay so the school would not pay someone to look at those students who are using cell phones during lunch. I think sometimes phones are problem while using during class, but if is in lunch or free time I don't see much problem, because you are not being rude, or interrupting anyone. So I think that sometimes phones are useful at school.
If we put policy number 2 at school it wouldn't make any bad things but students would still not following it, and lots of students would have their phone taken away or get in trouble because of their phones uses at school during lunch time or free time. So I think that school are a problem while using it in class but I think that is not bad to use it during lunch time or free time. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
D41787486DA6 | Generic_Name has a plan on the future, but she need to think and she need to trust in herself to achieve the plan, and she said that she like working alone and she don not want have friends and she said that not needed help somebody more. Every people have the opportunity to realize the plan that they have to achieve the dream that they have. To be yourself in a world is the greatest accomplishment because every person have a great dream to achieve on the life or every people take a great decision by to realize a great things.
First, every person have a great dream to achieve on the life. For example: A student have a plan to realize a job, but the student don not want to have friends by to finish the work. Another example: One boy is working in one project by the school, but the boy want to work alone, the boy said if he working with your partner never to finish the job. Every person have the opportunity to achieve their dream, and every people can try to make something else is the greatest accomplishment.
Second, every people take a great decision by to realize a great thing. For example: On boy is playful and don not pay attention on the class, but the boy take a decision of no more play, and the boy start study and he is so happy because he has a great qualification. Another example: A teacher said at the students that working together buy one student take a decision not working together,
and the student that working alone he make a great job and the others not make nothing. All people have the opportunity to take a great decision because every people thinking different, and have a different dream.
To conclude, every people take a great decision by to realize a great thing, every person have a great dream to achieve on the life, to be yourself in a world is the greatest accomplishment. is better to be solitaire because you can achieve a lot beautiful things alone, and when you make everything you need to take your time and relax yourself. Is better that the people to keep the trust themselves and trust their own decision, if a person love anything to make that person trust in yourself and that person is feeling better when he is alone. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
D4269468970A | I agree with honesty because it's good to be honest and make people trust you and believe in you and because you have honesty it will get you friends and teachers will like you as a student. And also it is respectful to be honest and if it's your friend or family I think you should be honest because it's your friend and they probably wouldn't care what you say if it's mean because they probably know that you don't mean to be mean and that your just being honest with them.
But being honest is also not good because it can hurt someones feelings and can make them sad and not being honest could make you lose a friend and or make your friend happy. And if your not being honest and the person finds out you could lose them as a friend or they will dislike you a little bit.
But if i could choose both I would because it depends on the situation on why you have to be honest being honest or not honest could make someones feel sad or happy. And being honest or not could make someones day and make things better for them.
In conclusion:I say it would depend on the situation on why you have to be honest or not so that is what I think if you should be honest or not. But you have to be careful on what you say with honesty or not because depending on what you say it could be a big situation for you if you say something wrong. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
D42B6354404D | Dear Principal
I think we students should at least have a B average to play sports, that would make it fair for who tries their best in school, but i bet that those who really love sports would try their best in all their classes. Students who do not try their be st and don't like sports they could just stay with whatever grade they get because they deserve it. Students who also have a bad attitude should not get to play either. If students really want to play sports or join activities they would really try hard not to be bad. If students have a 69 or below they should not let them play sports until they have a passing grade.
If many of the students have a C average they should try harder on their work for those who love sports and who like to join activities. I bet students who have a C average are mad because they cant play sports until they get a C average. I would like to convince the principal that they should at least get a B average. All students have to do is listen in class and pass all the test that teachers give out so you could pass the class and be able to pass your class and you'll be able to play what ever sport you want.
Students and people who try their best will always get everything they want because they do everything said and everything they tell them to do. doing everything they ask you to do will make you a good person. If you try your best you will get to play sports and join in activities you like. Your decision depends on you if you make a good decision you will get what you want if you don't you don't get everything that you want.
Love,
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D42B99110E5C | I want to work at a supreme store for a day in Generic_City or Generic_City. And seeing if im a good worker and to see if the boss will let me stay there . to work there for a while. what makes me want to work there. Its to get experiences i want to help him with his work and i want to feel all the presser he gets so one day i try to start something ill have the experiences. So thats why i want to work there. I want it to be my first job. so i can learn how to work.
Why i want to work there is because supreme toys or hats or cups are vary valuable and by the older it gets the more is caused. so it gets more expensive by the time lot of people go for old staff because its valuable and if you want to resell it youll make money of of it. but new thing or valuable to if the people like it and if it sells out . people make a living out of it because some thing cause millions of dollars working there can get me thing that are vary expensive for free of half the price. working there can help my brother and i because i can tell my brother what are they going to drop and what they are making for the future. I want to help my brother to have a big supreme culechion so one day he can sell it and make lots of money i want to help my family.
my brother and i cutlet supreme. each week they drop new supreme things like bags and cups and hats t shorts they drop new thing each Thursday and new thing they dont drop the same things because if they drop the same things each week the value of the the thing they dropped it will go down so they make share that everything the drop is new. I want to work there because i cant get things faster and i can see what there going to drop every Thursday. And i cant see what there making whats on its way for the future. and one day i want to move to Generic_City or visit it for a summer vacation. In Generic_City and
Generic_City both have a supreme store. but Generic_City is the original place where it was first created.
I feel like ill be caorthuble working there because thats the thing i like doing and thats the type of stuff ill like to sell and I will like working there because my brother likes supreme and i like it to. I think working in the supreme store can sometime give use free stuff. I dont know if its a good working there or if they pay good money to work there for a day or two but thats why i want to try something new some thing that i enjoy. supreme is not that expensive when it drop but when you buy it and then resell it thats when the price go up.
I feel like working there in the supreme store is fun because working there you can talk to lots of people works there or go shopping. i like showing people about the history of supreme when it first came out or when did it start getting famous and i like telling stories about the things they sell. After doing all of that i want to start my own organization so i can start something like that thats why i want to work there because i can learn about the how he started supreme and what he did to make supreme famous. But theres a lot of people that get supreme and make a living out of it like they buy it and then make there own website and then they sell it for lots of money.
thats how Gucci started that had hard time but one day the blue up they started selling a lot of things but Gucci is very expensive. But i feel like its fun to start some bigness like that.
I feel like working there is going to be fun i want to see how it feels how to work there and i want to see if im a good worker. So i want to show the boss that im a good worker but i want to see if that job is for me because if i go and work there for a day and the boss likes me and tells me to stay and i dont want to stay working there because the job is no for me im going to regret it. But if i like it and the boss tells me to stay i will stay and maybe move to
Generic_City of & Generic_Citynbsp; but i want to go there for a summer so work docent distraked me from school. and then i can see if i can start a store over hear. I think the supreme store is a good job. My brother and i are trying to start a big supreme culashoin. so i think they should let me stay. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
D43F13CE2638 | Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something?, Or does inactivity also serve a purpose?. This question is fairly easy because if you just simply do nothing, Then nothing would be accomplished, Unless you believe in "when the times right etc." but sitting around doesnt make you more successful, For example if you wanted to be very successful you have to work with it. Like staying after school to study for the SOL
the very next day, Or remembering to do all your chores before your parents came back from work. But on the other hand doing nothing can also accomplish many things. For example if you were to be in a car accident and broke several bones then obviously you'll be in a wheel chair for several months and You wont be able to move at all. And doing so will help you accomplish healing, Your doing nothing but still getting better at the same time. Have you herd of the saying "All good things happen to those who wait" this means it could be a normal day then suddenly something really good comes to you like either you find a job or the love of your life and have a happy ending. There are other ways too, for example theirs a saying "dont mess with something that doesnt need to be messed with" and "Theres light at the end of the tunnel" these quotes connect in a way because sometimes some things should be left alone and over time something good will come to it, like you able to accomplish your goals.
Or maybe your the type of person to let Fiat decide, so you let things happen naturally. Overall you can accomplish many tasks for both doing and not doing anything, But in my opinion you can accomplish more when your doing more because your working for whatever it is your aiming for. Also the quote from Thomas Jefferson "Determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." This quote in a nut shell is my response to this question. I'd rather be busy and know that i'm accomplishing what i want than to wait until something happens. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
D43F9C906CD6 | Generic_Name
02/14/19
societies decide student at the young age are expected to decide what collage or univercity they want and what carrer they should be going to chose. students in freshman year cannot decide what they want to study or what collage they want to go ,because their too young to make that important decition even if they make it , when the years passed they are going to study another carrer, anoher one that gives then inspiration
.student should not commit in a carrer with young age,they can make a bad decition, if they have another oportunity to change their decition it can be good but if they can't it can be bad if you get in a carrer that your are not going to improve.
students who enter to HS for the first time they should focus on get classes for example: art, economy, guitar, etc. Another responsability that the student shoud focus is in get credits for dipoma that they want that can be standard or advanced diploma another think they must focus is get good grade for all four years nine, ten, eleven, and the most important 12 but when the student get into the eleven grade they must being thinking about what they want to study, searching for collage and carrers, get imformation about collage and universities that can be good for you. when they get a good noulesh ,they can ask than self, its that what they want to study and don't led anyone make a decition for you,think about a carrer that can like you and benefit you in the future something that like you and never is going to get tired of your carrer because you like what you chose for your and you have a pasion on your carrer that why society have to change that expectation that the students have to make a desiton in young age,choosing a carrer is not a game its imortant to contrivuted with the society in life if you choos a carrer that you are not going to improve is going to be dificult cause yo have make a wrong decition
Teachers in higt school shuld provide a good ideas for student talks about, how the collage or the univercity it can be teach them how is the way the collage and univercities work with the students. However, when the students are youngest they cannot decide what they want to study, firts they want be a doctor and the a few years later a police and thats how it goes youngest student can't decide what they want to be until they get to a good age and a good inspiration on a class and that helps them to decide what carrer they want,student should focus on the carrer they want baced in what class are they very good when you are in eleven garde you see that your are good in something, you don't have to chose a carrer that you don't understand or you don't like. schools shuold focus on what the student want to be in the future but they can focus to in what are they good for example: they can see if the student if good painting it can be a painter or if the are good in number it can be good in bussines such as banks , cashier and they can improve all this nuolage in the job that the students has as a part-time ,thats what the schools should focus in what the students are good and then make a decition of what can study and what it can be a good collage or univercity for each one .
societies should not expect that students with young age should decide to chose what to study (a carrer) they don't have clare ideas to decide what they want to syudy. However, many student that make a decition in young age they can decide but in a few month they are going to chose another carrer because they don't like what they decide or they don't have the noulage, that why youngets students cannot make a important decition until they get in a good noulage. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
D447CB3558A0 | My uncle usually share their different experience with me and it helps me a lot. My uncle is 40 years old and when ever he visit me he talks about his different experience with me. He travels different countries of the world like China,Australia,Japan,France,UK,Italy,Spain Canada,America,Saudi Arabia and Germany. He talk about their about their culture how different countries have different culture. He also talk about their languages. His every single world i heard carefully because i have a lot of interest about world. He also talks about different countries have different laws and rule. He talks about different countries have different religion. I love when my uncle share their different experience with me.
It is important to learn from others because it helps you in different ways it helps you in your future it also helps in your whole life and it also saves you from an accident. We should share different ideas with everyone probably it will help him a lot in his life and maybe it will save him from a bid accident.
How does sharing experience helps us in our future??It helps you in future when you are going to a new school or collage so you should know going to this place is good for me or not..It helps you in future when you are doing some work. It helps you in your future when you are move somewhere else so you should know going to this place is good for me or not. It helps you in your future when you are choosing some path in you life so you should know choosing this path is good for me or not so you will not go that way. It helps you in future when you are becoming something so you will know if i become this it will help me in my future or not. It helps in you life when you are finding a job so you will know if this job will be helpful for me in my future or not. Learning from other always helps you in your future we also share our experience with everyone it will also help them in their life.
How does learning from other helps in our life?? It helps in our life when we are going to a new school or collage so you will know is this place is helpful for me or not. It helps in your life when you are doing any kind of work so you will know how this work gives me benefit. It helps you in your life when you are going to some new place or country so you will know how this place gives me a benefit. it helps you in your life when you are choosing some path in your life so have know is this path is good for me or not. It helps in your life when you are becoming something so you will know if i become this it will gives benefit in my life or not then you choose that path. It helps in you life when you are finding a new job so you have know if this job is good for me or not how much does it will gives me a benefit and then you choose that job. Sharing experience with others always gives someone a benefit we also share our different experience with everyone.
How does sharing wisdom with someone helps??It saves you from an accident when we are going to a new school or collage so you will know is this place is good for me or not then you choose it otherwise it is not good for you it will gives you disadvantages and it will saves you from an accident .It saves you from an accident when you are doing any kind of work so you will know how this work gives me benefit and then you choose it if it is not good for you it will gives you disadvantages and it will save you from an accident. It saves you from an accident when you are going to some new place or country so you will know how this place gives me a benefit if it's not good for you so you will not go there and it's saves you from an accident. it helps saves you from an accident when you are choosing some path in your life so have know is this path is good for me or not. and than you choose it and it saves you from an accident. It saves you from an accident when you are becoming something so you will know if i become this it will gives benefit in my life or not then you choose it and it will saves you from an accident. It saves you from an accident when you are finding a new job so you have know if this job is good for me or not how much does it will gives me a benefit and then you choose that job and it will saves you from an accident. Sharing wisdom with someone can save them form a big accident we should share our different experience with everyone. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
D4490C9F73B9 | It has been said first impressions are almost impossible to change, but I'm not agree with it because people always change and the first impression doesn't define who you are.
The people always change to good or bad. For example, I met someone that in the first time I saw him he was mad, he never smiled, and he was very shy. And at the pass of the days he was changing, he started to smile, and he wasn't mad like the first time I saw him. Now my impression changes and now I can see that he's different and the first impression I had about him changed at all. Another example could be that in the first days of classes your teacher is nice, doesn't give you homeworks, and he is patient with the students. However, He is changing every day. Now he's always mad, now he gives you a lot of homework, and he's yelling in class. At this time, the first impression you had about the teacher totally changed because he's not the nice teacher that you met in the first days of classes.
The first impression doesn't define who you are because first impression is like a front of a book and the front of the book is nothing comparable to the that is inside of the book. For example, I have some friends that told me that the first time they saw me they didn't like me because they says that I'm always mad and I was a boy that don't talk with anybody just with my friends and they told me that they never thinked that I'll be their friend, but they were knowing me and they saw that I was different from their perspective and from the first time I met them, so they changed their first impression about me and their point of view about my personality. Another example, is that some people thinks that you're like they think just because they have a bad first impression about you. I mean sometimes we don't have good days and we are not like always. Let's go to suppose that in those days you met a person and you're having a bad day, you're mad, and with problems, so that person will think you're like that because that person will have a bad impression about you, but if that person have the time to know you better, he will see that you're not like he thinks you are just because the first impression about you is bad. If he is knowing you better, he will change his impression about you compare to the first time.
Clearly, the first impression always is going to change because one impression doesn't define my personality and how I am and I can change that impression. It have to be like more than two impressions to know a person because it will be hard to changes those impresions. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
D45494CE3D2E | Human survival depends on technology, we can not live without it. Technology is used in our everyday lives, from the very moment we open our eyes to the end of the day when we go into our sleep. Technology has really advanced a whole lot in comparison from the first telephone made up, to todays modern devices. Technology may have a negative impact to it, since technology is everywhere it is almost impossible to keep out of reach. Young children start to us it to early in life, they get addicted and they cry if it is taken from them. Technology may have that negative affect but it has many positive affects that come from it as well.
The beginning of technology all starts back when the first telephone was created by Alexander Graham Bell. The telephone he had created is much different from the ones you see today in everyday use by millions of people. His creation of the telephone was like a brick, very big and heavy. That device was more of a at home used only kind of device, not something you could easily just carry around with you. his invention probably was not the most popular right away since everyone was so use to living with out one it was not much of a necessity. As time progressed other inventors took Graham bells invention and invested further into it, adding and taking away things it had. For one the size and weight of it was changed by a lot through out time as well as the capability of what you could do on it. At first it was used only to transfer calls to communicate with somebody verbally without having to be face to face or even at close distance with them. Many individuals wanted to be the inventor of a phone and there are more than one, therefore because of this there are different companies, not just one that produces electronic devices. Around the early 2000's Apple, which is one of the biggest electronic device companies had released the first Iphone. Everyone and everywhere all around the world people were purchasing Apples new product. Throughout the years Apple has made so many products for people to purchase from cell phones,earphone, tablets, computers, watches, portable chargers, to just about anything for people to buy that they may use in there everyday lives.
Though all these advancements in technology may have caused some negative impacts in life such as that children from a young age get addicted from them it has also helped them. Parents have a big impacts in this whether they decide to hand their children a electronic or not, most parents that do let them opporate a device usually have limitations in what they can do or watch and for how long. Letting young children use this technology isnt all bad, there are television shows that help them learn their shapes, colors, objects, movements and simply learn how to communicate with others before entering school, nothing wrong with being a little ahead of others. ABC mouse is one of many great resources online that help children with their education and it is also done in a fun way for them to learn and enjoy their studying.
Technology is used by everyone all around the world and even out in space! Everything around us is being technologically used by us, inside of our own homes and outside. Security cameras, the thermostat that keeps us warm in the comfort of our homes and AC that helps us cool down on hot sunny days, the foods and drinks we store away in our fridges and freezers, WiFi box, T.V(s), door bells, all of that technology and thats just in our homes. Outside everyday technology would be like he vehicle we use to get to our jobs, the traffic signals, GPS to help guide use to get to our desired destination. You have a paper due or something you really need information on whether it is school related or not and the library is closed or you just can not get in reach of one you can simply do your research from any location you may be in with a click and swipe on a screen like your cell phone or computer. Machines are technology used like those in hospitals that are seriously used for human survival when someone is terribly injured or a new baby is born. Technology is still progressing and it will only become more advanced through out time, everyday inventors and scientist use it to make new ways to cure up diseases, find out where they come from and how they can be prevented.
The creation of technology on our world has been very helpful to us all in every way possible, without it there are many possibilities of certain deaths and accidents that could have occurred if it did not exist. The amount of advancement that it had gotten to will only help it get greater so we can be prepared for future tragedies that we would not want this world to face. Technology has been an extremely positive thing that has happened in this world for millions possibly even billions of people who use it. | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 4.5 | 4 |
D457F3AEAC6D | I do agree with Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchhill without failure how can we humans excied in life to get to success? To prove my statement i will provide two reasons, and also two examples, explaining why i believe that failure can lead humans to a world we couldnt imagine it could exiest.
Reason number one would be Battles and Wars. I believe that losing Battles and Wars help us the united states of america create new weapons wither it was nuclear or bullets. Another reason why i say that is because without losing those battles and wars how wouldve we found out about atomic bombs or harden steel bullets. It sounds crazy and highly dishorroable to are fallen heros who were killed in action, but if we won wars and battles everytime we would soon fall. Because we keep using the same positions and plans in order to win, and we also would feel too confident in wining so we will be using the same weapons over and over again and let the other team discover those new atomic weapons.
Reason number two is about automobles. Automobles have been around for a very long time now i guess if my calculations are right its been almost 1,500 years since Henrey Ford showed the world his first ever automoble, the Model T. Henrey Ford had to go through so many people doubting his Model T project would work. Day by day, month by month, even year after years of failed experments. But in the spring of 1830 he successfully got one fully working and running. He had to go through so much walls blocking his path in order to show the world that a automoble was and still is possible. Another example would be Tesla. The famous electronic car company to power there cars with electricity. those guys mustve gone through so many experments that i cant even imagine and the amout of failed ones too and im pretty sure there is alot more failed test projects than passed ones. I say that to be reasonable about it not saying it to make fun of them because if they didnt fail the first time the first modles would have been super crappy, like the cars would suck. Because after every failed project you get new ideas and new imagines of how you want the car to repersent the company and have a good repuation. So if failure wasnt an option for these two companys the cars of 2020 wouldve sucked so much because the company will only car about the money and just send running crappy looking cars that we humans have as a need for work and family.
Those are my last two thoughts about failure and Wisten Churchill isn't wrong at all. Without failure succces would feel like nothing like if it was pointless. And we wouldnt live the world we live in today if it wasnt for people back then who didnt stop failing until they reached succesed. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
D45A0B7F9D48 | A topic that is frequently debated is whether students should be required to take a class in the arts,or should it be elective? Because of both students and parents opinions I believe students should not take a class in the arts,besides it should be an elective.
There are several reasons to consider when debating this topic,for example:the class in arts will require a block that could be used for a class the student is interested in taking,or it could be used for a class the student requires to take in order to achieve graduation. As a student interested in having an advanced diploma,I believe art classes will not help anybody to achieve their goal of obtaining the advanced diploma,also if students are capable of choosing their own classes they will gain experience in that field,and be more successful.
Students should be able to make their choice when deciding if they are really interested in the class,if someone else choose the class in arts for them and they didn't like it;they could ruin the experience of other students who are really passionate about arts. Students who are not interested in art could be a problem for the class and even their grades could be affected if they don't participate,or turn in assignments. Moreover,it could lower their GPA and their dream about graduating could be affected.
In addition,art classes will not give them much credit as other classes,will not help grow their GPA,and it might not be as helpful as other classes. As mentioned before:not passing the class will lower their GPA,even passing it will not give them too much credit,and of course school want students to be successful during their journey through high school. The choices they made during school and the classes they took during school will impact when they graduate.
As you have read,giving students the opportunity to choose either they want art classes or to take classes by their own choice could have a big impact in their graduation status. Schools should offer our students classes they are willing to attend,a class they feel will help them succeed in life,and in a way they enjoy their journey through high school. It might see insignificant to debate for something too simple like this,but letting our students take their own choices could help them take better choices for our society. Moreover,if our students are able to graduate and accomplish their goals our society will have more people that could help to assure a better future for our legacy. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
D464E294DDB4 | Our character traits are formed by influences beyond our control. For example family has a very huge impact on who you become as A person because you are with them every day. Another big impact on our life is the community we grow up in.
We do not get to choose who our family is therefore thats beyond our control. Family can influence you to either be a great person or A horrible person. For example If you grew up watching your father abuse your mother, you have a higher chance of putting your hands on females. How ever if you have kind, loving parents you have a higher chance of becoming a nice, loving person. Keep in mind we are with our family everyday so were most likely going to end up like them.
We can't choose our community either therefore its beyond our control. Personally I feel like the community we grow up in has a huge impact on our life because it determines the kind of people you grow up around. For example if you grow up in a bad neighborhood you will be around gangsters and drug dealers. As a kid you may think selling drugs is fine because you seen other older kids do it. Selling drugs is going to result in you going to jail which means your going to be around other bad people which is most likely going to have an influence on the person you become.
Others may think seeing bad should inspire you to be better but unfortunately it is not that simple. Your character is usually built over the years not over night.
In conclusion the person we become is built by influences beyond our control and we can not just change when we want to. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
D49547B9FCB3 | A lesson that i would share would be that some thing the would befinfit there lives like how to be good in school,because if you wanna be someone in life you have to go to school and get your education. because most job look your grades in school and a diploma and if you wanna go to college you can get soclerships. And how to get good grades is to turn all your work in to the teachers and dont turn it late because that takes your points off and you dont want that and if you dont turn it in that will bring your grade down by a lot until it is a zero and you diffidently dont want that and how not to get in trouble is when a teacher ask you do something do it because they are to only going to tell you once only then after that is in school suspension and you dont want that because it is boring and it goes in to your record well i dont that or you dont want that ether so just what your are asks and DONT talk back to a teacher the rude and not nice .that the lesson that wanted to give you. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
D4A0BB487395 | Have you know that being honest is sometimes good and bad. But to me it likely good because when my mom tell me stuff that i have to be honest she give me a snack. when you be honest it bring you to a better life and the future because so that you are kind with in other and so that you can go to college,and have good grades. also when you are honest to a person, that person will be your friend and know that he will truest you for ever. when my family want me to be honest I sometimes tell them or not or because even if i tell them i will still get in trouble in either way.
honesty can bring you to a better life and future. because so you can have a lot of friend that can trues you, and you can have good grades at school, and might go to college. also when a person come up to you and tell you stuff you have to be honest and tell them no please leave me alone. honest is good in life because no one would like you if you lie with other about stuff you have to be honest to your self sometimes not always. lieing will get you in trouble at school, home, or other places so that why you have to not lie and tell the true. because so people will be happy not mad at you and people like a person not to lie because a lot of people say that lieing is a bad habit for anyone in the world.
when you be honest to your family they would say this kid tell the true all the time he is a good son i every have. and they might give you something like a price for not lieing and your mom or dad they teach you to be kind with others. so when you grow up as an adult you remember what your parents tough you in the past. like be honest, dont lie, always act good to others have respect to teachers or other family member. your family want you to be a better person in the future that why you should tell your parent thank you for telling me to be an a some person in life.
finally when you be honest to teacher they would say you are a good student in the class because you have been kind with student, and you have been telling the true when someone is doing a bad choice. when you be honest in school the teachers will tell your parents that you are doing good in school. school want us to learn make right choices and always be honest around you dont follow want people are do if they are doing something bad in school dont fallow and tell on an adult that they are doing something bad.
honesty is a something you tell that true like it bring you to a better life that you can have a lot of friend that trust you so they dont think you are bad person for a example in school when you be honest the teacher will say you are a good student to have in class. when you are at home if you be honest to you parents they mint be happy and give you a price for being a honest person. honest is a good in life so people will respect you in any way it is important in life. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
D4A38C52F57D | Why should students have a good attitude even when they're not in the mood? I think that students should have a positive attitude because. it might make them forget why they were even upset in the first place. They can also brighten someones day by giving them a compliment or just as little as smiling at someone.
Also if you have a positive attitude you can accomplish your goals. Therefore if you have a positive mindset not only can you achieve and accomplish your goals. You can be proud of who you have become and your hard work. Once youv'e done everything you dreamt of achieving. Your parents would be so proud. Having a positive mindset encourages young children to treat everyone with respect. And children could learn from the elderly and mimick their actions and words.
In conclusion i believe that everyone should treat everyone with respect and have a good attitude towards one another because were all one. Regardless of race and religion. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
D5202DF530D1 | I feel like people making their own decisions will be a lot better for that person. But seeking guidance is that bad either for someone to make their own decisions says to someone else that they know what they are doing and can build something great with how their working and planning for the future.
Although seeking guidance is the worst thing to do, i feel like people making decisions for themselves is better.
For example if i were to go to someone for guidance or for something more and they give me some sort of guidance or idea and it turn out bad for me. Than i would never be able to go another person for guidance and ideas and i would most likely turn to myself. Then theres the problem that the reason that i went to seek guidance was because i couldn't make a decision for myself and now since I'm self reliant it will be hard for me to make my own decisions.
Now if i didn't go to the authorities and experts and made the decision for myself but it still ended up being bad outcome. It still would have been a lot better for me so that i can use the experience of making my own decision to help make better one in the future.
Now if you go to the authorities and experts to seek guidance and it it come out great and now your life is going great. Until the time to make your own decision it will be even harder to make then the time you went for guidance. That you yourself will fell behind and lose whatever chance that you had because you never made a decisions for yourself and thats problem some people have because they have been going to someone else to make your life decisions.
In conclusion to go somewhere to seek guidance isn't bad it's what comes out of it to help you if it turns out bad or good it will effect your decision making to be better and worst. In my opinion making your own decision will be better then any expert ideas because it help yo in your life and what comes after every decision you make for better or worst. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
D537BE6997F7 | I agree with success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm because everyone need to be stronger, successful, and become independent youself.
Success are things that everybody need to be stronger the most they can with every single thing in your life because everyone has bad moments in lifes and there are many peoples that they want to see them fail in everything. For example, if someone is given in they can find someone who is bad person and the only thing that they do is to given words that did not help in anything, but that's why they have to failure, but do not have to loss enthusiasm because if you loss enthusiasm you are failed in everything because in lifes you can find peoples that want to help you a lot, but sometimes you are going to find good peoples that want to help you in everything. Therefore, it does not matter what other peoples want to tell you people just have to continue their lifes and do not have to give up in anything, it does not matter peoples have to do everything they can because if you propose what you want you can do it no one is going to said no.
Success is that everyone has to be successful in lifes because everybody has to be esthusiasm in everything. You do not have to loss that because you have to be with good smile because it does not matter what is happened in your life you must have to had a good smile in everything because it does not matter how many times in your lifes you are falling you have to continue because if you do not do a good job, thinking that you can not do what you want, or said that you are going give up in everything. For example, if your sister said that some people said that she can not make her dream true you can talk with her with enthusiasm and said that she can do everything she can propose because she do not have to listen those peoples that can not want their lifes good they failature is her past that means that others peoples are going to do the same thing because in this lifes exist peoples that want the bad thing to you that ever can exist.
Success something in life is more harder than you think because you have to pass a lot of thing in your life and you have to stay strong the more you can because if one day you are going to fail in something and there is no one to give you support and you can not anymore, but you have to said in your mind that it does not matter because you are thinking in your mind that you are never give up with anything because you have your mind with power, esthusiasm, and stronger. However, you do not have to be thinking bad things there are some times that you failure with many things that can be in the school, work, or test. You always have to be in mind that it does not matter how many times you took your test and get bad grades you have to do it until you get good grade or how many days you are going to take to learn any kind of food the thing is the you have to be a good person to show to other peoples that you can do whatever you want to show to the world that you can do everything you want because they are here to fail, but if you lose a lot of time you are going to wake up twice.
Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm because in this world everyone is here to be something in their life to be someone stronger to make your skills stronger to show to the peoples that you want to be someone with energy to show that there are so many things that you want to do be a successful person to help peoples when they need something; it does not matter what you are passing or what your life is give you. You just have to learn how to be a good person, how you can make your skills stronger, and how you can demostrated to yourself what you can do and can not do because that is a harder to know yourself to see what you can do or not because you can see more peoples that if they can not do anything they do not tried anymore they are sad, mad, or angry with their self because they can not do what they wanted. For example, if your friend want to be in the future a teacher and he/she has to learn, to be prepared, and study. He may not want all of that or he/she may have travel with all of those things he/she is going to get mad with herself, sad with herself, angry with herself and he/she is going to said no i can not with all of this is so harder that i think, but everyone has to be stronger show that you do not have to get mad to show with enthusiasm that does not matter how many times you may fail you have to learn, study, be prepared everything you need and you will see that you can everything you want.
In conclusion, Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm because you have to be stronger, successful, and become independent yourself because you have to be stronger with any problem in your life, stronger with every person, and stronger with whatever you have to do. You have to be successful with yourself, with your work, and with your own things. You have to be independent with yourself because when you are older or you are lonely you have to see for your owns things, you have to fight for you owns problems, and for your owns bussiness. For example, if you are going to be a good police you have to see what is coming what your enthusiasm is going to be what you have to be. You have to fail many things, but you have to tried the most you can because is this life everything you do have to be with enthusiasm. Therefore, If you find a job and you boss said that you have to go to do a fish and you went, but you did it wrong and he said this is wrong you failure you have to tried again you have to go with enthusiasm not be angry or sad because you are going to do that with enthusiasm to said im going to do this rigth not wrong because everything you do with enthusiasm everything you will get more better and you will be happy because if you do everything good you are going to feel thatyou do a esthusiasm and good work. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
D54C778A8F9C | I think it can go both ways people can make their own decision or they can seek guidance from experts, or authorities. But its really their choice on what they want to do, it would be helpful to have an expert or authorities to help you with ideas.
People who make their own decisions on life important matters shouldnt need no help with decisions because they have it all planned out its called being responsible. Its always good to make the decisions on your own. There fore you dont need no seek guidance from other people.
People, who value self reliance is doing things on their own like homework,classwork,jobs but then they are talking about should they take guidance from experts, i would take guidance from experts because they know more. they have been there and they have experienced everything so they know how it is. I feel like doing everything on your own can be difficult and tirering and then you just feel like giving up.
In conclusion i think people should get ideas and help from experts and authorities just like i said before they have been there and they are more experienced and i feel like they can help you a lot with anything and help you be successful. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
D5588B5DD6FF | Once The great artist Michelangelo said that
"The grater danger for most of us lies not only setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark". I personally disagree with this because not all of us people really wants to more than what it is asked to do, what really matter in this world it is to achieve your goal, and aiming low is a representation of honesty and humility. Some people may say that this may agree with Michelangelo's said, because sometimes getting out of our comfort zone it is what most of us should do; challenge our selves to get even higher expectation and results, but to be realistic not all of us aims for that.
First of all, most of us do not really wants to do more than it is asked to do. For example, Generic_Name a orange contractor, he has been asked from his boss to fill 10 trailers of orange per day, one day he filled 12 trailers of oranges and thought that his boss would pay him the 2 trailers extra of orange that Generic_Name and his worker filled, in his paycheck did not appear the 2 extra trailers of orange causing Generic_Name pay his workers for the extra hours and work that they had putted, Generic_Name never again did more of he was asked to do. People took Generic_Name as en example of not doing more of what it is asked to do in their jobs.
Secondly, what really matters in this life is to achieve your goal. For example Generic_Name is a student from Generic_School, Generic_Name and his friends in their freshman year aimed for the advanced diploma in his school, but Generic_Name aimed for the standard diploma, his friends bought that by choosing the advanced diploma would be easier to earn credits and graduate faster, but little did they know they would get challenging classes, having almost AP classes in almost every material, Generic_Name from the other side having his standard diploma resulted him having normal classes and passing almost all of them. At their junior year Generic_Name's friends decided to change their diplomas because their classes was so difficult that their credits was not high enough, Generic_Name had the needed credits to be considered a graduate. Sometimes it is better to achieve your goal and do not try to get out of your comfort zone and challenge yourself because at the end what really matter in this life it is to achieve your goal.
Lastly, aiming low is a representation of honesty, and humility. For example, Generic_Name have a Mexican restaurant, she does not aspire her restaurant to be the greatest in her town, but what she really aspires for her restaurant is to keep her with the same love and passion she has for cooking and the satisfaction of her clients. Aiming low does not mean that is going to be a failure, but if you do it with honesty and humility, the 'danger' will not be as big as it appears.
As you can see, Michelangelo's said its not all the way truth because, people from all over the world thinks differently, having different experiences in their lives causing them to disagree on his said. Not all the people wants to more what it is asked to do, what really matter in this world it is to achieve your goal, and aiming low is a representation of honesty and humility. Not always setting our aim too high and falling short it is what it means to survive in this world. | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
D579D6F26A91 | Have you ever wondered if you have extracurricular activities are getting in the way of your homework time or study time and if the activities you take should be up to the school or the student and his or her family? I'm going to explain why I believe the decision should be left to the student and his or her family memebers.
My first reason why I think extracurricular activities should be left to the student is because capable on choicen activities that would like to take and enjoy. For example if the school choices classes that you dislike and not enjoy you would have to be stuck with it. Also you would be very stressed that you're in that class and that stress can affect other classes in a negative way.
My second reason why I think extracurricular activities should be left to the student is because idf students choose to do more activities they gain more expirence in diffrent types catagories. This is a good thing beause it allows students to test the waters and find out what thy like to do so they can think about studying in college and persuing it. For example if you have more activities you have a way better chance to find something you like than less activies.
However, the school might say that if a student has more extracurricular activities it would affect the time students has for doing homework and studying. They also might say they know more about time managment but some students are fast at doing homework and are very fast at studying. So I think that the decision should be left to the student and his or her family memebers. The family and the student should know if they are capable to have many activities and still get their work done. That is why I believe the student should choose if they want to do many or little extracurricular activities. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
D57EBE64C7A2 | I am agree with students to use their cell phone in the classroom because some students came to the United State with not knowing any words in English, and even of a student that born in the United State or their native language is English can get to forget the meaning of a word in English. For instance, cellphones or another type of device.
And it can drive you to many type of option which is very good! if you are not clear in the first option you can jump to the second option or third option if needed.
Some students came to the United State without speaking English which mean is so bad, and they don't know how to communicate with teachers so they are likely to uses their cellphone for translating words. I was one of the student that came to United State without speaking any English, and teachers can't speak Spanish too, so I was able to use my phone for translate words to my language, it was helping a lot to communicate with other students that only speaks English. In another reason, I daily uses my phone because it is easy to carrying It in the hallway instead of a big dictionary, and some dictionary does not contain the word that you looking for . Beyond of that, in the cellphone you just need to download the dictionary app or go the Google web and type easily the word that you need to fine information for.
Therefore, cellphones can give many way to you how to understand the word specially the Google web site it can give you pictures, or it can led you to a video link where you can see resources that are explaining the meaning of the word or different manner that they can be clear at the point. I use Google a lot of time because has everything that the dictionary can not be included for example, Google translate can tell you the pronunciation, quickly to research, and even if it is bad it will tell you the meaning besides that if you don't know how to spell the word it contains an option where you can talk to the cellphone which is a lovely option to use.
However, cellphones is a almighty thing to be used in the classroom to help students knowledge or everywhere. beside, been smart and having powerful resource we can learn from cellphones to do many things as some teachers want us to use our cellphones for Wikipedia, kahhot , dictionary web, and googlecassroom for reading , writing or gave us homework throw it.
As we can know already cellphone is very useful for this options too. calling ,sending message, receiving message , set remainder, multiple resource, ects.
Despite of each year is advancing many students at the among of age 12 or 15 years old have a phone or a tablet device which is fine to have. Then, If needed teachers can work in an online website to gave them homework to do at home or working in classroom. And some point, approximate all people have their cellphones in their bag, and easy to care and some people have said that the cellphones is like their friend.
finally, which I did understand that cellphones is necessary needed to use in the classroom which is helping to translate word in another language and cellphones can give you many certain information, idea how to be specific in the word that you are looking for. And also, it can have a different variety of information and some teachers will ask for it during the class, if you have one . And is a small size it is easy to carry, And is an important device to carry everywhere. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
D581D89A822A | Should people make their own decisions, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters? People should make their own decisions because if you trust your decision there is no reason why you should ask someone else. Putting some trust on your decision can help you do what is right or wrong. However, part of your decision needs to come from your heart.
Firstly, If you want to accomplish a dream in your life you need to put some extra work trying to get it done. Also, getting it done is not going to be easy but sometimes you need to try. For example, lets say you are a soccer player and you have a game but you don't trust your team mates what is going to happen is that you might lose that game. I know is hard to trust someone who doesn't act or look the same as you. I would take my decision and ask my self should I trust them or not?
Secondly, trusting your team will not always be the same but you should follow your instincts. Example, one day I made a bad decision of not cleaning the back yard of my house for like three months and it was fall and what happened was that it got full of leaves. If you take wrong decisions will cause you things that you don't want. When I saw my back yard full of leaves I ask to myself why did I make the decision of not cleaning the back yard. Ideas are part of what you should take seriously in your life. The idea of going to school should be one of the most important things you should do.
Thirdly, asking for help in taking a decision is not a bad idea. However, every day or every time you want to ask someone for help you must know who you are asking. For example, if you want to ask someone what you should do after graduation must come from you but sometimes you can ask questions to your family and talk about it, they might know what is the right thing you should do.
People agree with you taking your own decisions than doing what other says. Other unknown person's decision is what you should never do in your personal life. What I do when I have to take a decision of doing something is to think the decision twice.
In conclusion, never give up a decision of you doing the right thing. Always do what your parents says or ask you to do because they are the ones who wants you to accomplish your dreams, be there when they need you, talk to them when you need to. Other people who you should talk to are your siblings. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
D58980F5EC66 | I believe this would benefit students around the world, students would be able to attend classes from any school no matter where students live, this would help students who live far way from school and can't get a ride to school. Attending classes online from home would make it more comfortable for students.
Distance learning is good thing for students that want to study in school around the world or get the best education, students can be at home taking some classes that their country does not offer. Let's say a student lives in France and the student takes classes from United States, that's a good benefit, because you are learning education from another country in a different way that your country teaches you. This will be good for students who live in different country temporarily and are coming back to their countries.
The schools that offer distance learning are making life easier for some students who can't get education of they have to walk for hours to go to school. I remember watching a video about girl's life where she explains how far she has to walk though the mountains for 4 hours just to get to school. There are students who can't get education, because of the places they live, like places that are cold or far way from the city. This a good benefit in the United States since there's is a virus called corona virus in some states people are already effect with it, schools are closing cause of that students will be talking classes at home.
In school some students feel uncomfortable of working with their teachers or classmates, that makes students to stop working or lose interest on their work, but when they are home school students feel more comfortable, because they are at their house with their family, they feel more safe at their house and they can trust their family. In schools one of the main reasons why students feel uncomfortable of going to class is because some students get bully by their classmates, others get peer pressure to try to do things they don't like or be something they are not, making students not to be themselves. There was this famous video of a kid who was crying and told his mom that he wanted a knife to kill himself, he was just 7 years old, the reason why he wanted to kill himself is because many people at his school make fun him for being small, the students at his school were bullying him so much that he had to be home school and get therapist to help him get better and be comfortable.
At the end being able to attend classes at home depends if the students like it not everyone would think this is a good benefit for students others would think that is bad for students to take classes at home, because students will not get the chance to be social with other, this will make students not be able to work or talk with others outside in person, because they spent so much time at their houses taking classes by themselves. I have friend who used to be home school, now he goes to a high school and because he was home school, he doesn't talk that much in school, he doesn't have that many friends, it takes a while to get to know him. Taking classes from home is only good benefit if you want to take classes from another school, can't go to school because of where you live or it takes too long to walk to school, and if you don't feel comfortable in school, those are the main reasons students would taking classes from home. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
D5916B1F52BB | My Presentation For Elementary Students
My Teacher Wanted me to Share a Lesson With Elementary Students
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Next, I told The Students, What I was going to present to Them. it's very Important to Speak With The Students About Something interested That They Would Love, to hear About. I told The Students What They Want to be when they grow up, They said I
Want to be a Police Officer one Day. The other one said He Wanted to be a fighter fighter. And I told Them to Become a police officer or a Fighter Fighter They need to graduate high School And Get a Degree For College And Take Those Classes, to have a Good Job for The Rest of Their life's. Finally When My Presentation Was Almost over Suddenly' The Students Ask me Those That I'm going to Take Do I have to Past Those Certain Classes to Get my Degree, Also I Said it's Not That Easy to Have Your Dream Job That You Want. You Have to Work For it And Earn it And Try Everything You Could We're You Want to Be. Motivate Your Self, Push Your Self If You want Your Career that you want Then, Always Believe in Your Self When You Have a Dream Career Don't Give up on it. When You Give up on Something You're Not Going To succeed in Life. I'll Tell My Self To Get Back Up On Your Feet And Chase Your Dream. But in Life there's No Second Chance. Last, When You Finally Acheive Your Dream Job You Can Thank Your Self for Believing in Your Self and Working, Hard every day. because After All The Struggle, You Been Putting Your Self to Succeed And That's Why you Are We're at And Always Chase Your Goals to Succeed. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
D594B486E6B5 | People that have their faces in front of a screen with there back slouching with the help of technology. Technology is advancing year by year and month by month. When teens or adults get there hands on the new technology they will spend weeks or even months in their rooms, trying to figure out what the device can and cannot do. The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a negative effect on peoples lives, because it can lead to bad communication skills, health problems and being inactive.
However, not everyone agrees with this statement. Some people claim that technology has a positive effect on peoples lives. Neverless, this position overlooks an important point, mainly that technology cannot change how much human contact you have or do not have. For example, my friend she cannot drive, but she can have items get delivered to her; books, food, and clothes. Furthermore, when the delivery person came she did not know the proper way to greet him. Do to technology, people can have bad communication skills and they don't know how to communicate with people when they are in contact with someone.
Moreover, by being isolated, technology can lead to bad communication skills. When someone gets the newest device or game, they want to know how it works. By learning what the device or video game can and cannot do, they usually spend a month learning how the device works or how to unlock the next level in the game. For instance, my brother got a new video game, he has isolated himself in his room, so he can beat the level and go on to the next. When he was finish with the level, he had a hard time communicating properly. Before he played his video game, his grammar was good; now it wasn't. For example he would use the wrong past and present tense. Thus, by staring at the screen for so long, he has got very inactive.
Additionally, sitting on the couch or in a chair with a screen in front of you, every day for a whole month can make a person inactive. People that are inactive can become very lazy, and they intend on making a lot of mistakes when they are talking. They can also gain weight or have health problems. To illustrate, sitting in front of a screen while eating junk food can cause you to gain weight and can lead to health issues. During spring break, my friend had nothing to do, he was on his laptop everyday eating junk food.
Now he has to be careful on what he can and cannot eat, because he will get heart burn.
If he does not stop eating unhealthy foods in front of a screen he will gain more weight and have more health issues.
He does not know how to ask for help; he needs someone to push him to go outside and enjoy the weather, instead of being in front of a screen all day long.
Based on this argument, one must conclude that the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a negative effect on peoples lives. Technology can effect us in many different ways; bad communication skills, health problems and being inactive. In conclusion, technology can change human contact in a negative way. | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
D5A110D65134 | Changing first impression is easy and for some people its, because they do not think nor care about it they just do things that makes them feel good about themselves so i disagree with the statement. We have all meet people we did not know and got introduce by someone else and we would start talking to them to get to know their background. First impressions are the biggest factor in the world we live in right now, because we all want to have a good life, so we have to present our self properly. When you do not show manner the first time your meeting someone they will think you do not have home training and you do not care what people think about you. We meet new people everyday in our life because of the environment we put our self in. The people i have meet in my life have changed their impressions real fast around because when they get attached or close to you they show their true colors and personality. Always put yourself in a good position to succeed in life because when others see that your respectful they will put in a good word for you to feel like you earned that prize that you are being awarded for. I always tell myself that first impressions tell the person everything about yourself right there and now because you do not know what they can do for you in the long run. Take every chance you get and do good for your self and others because if you act like a clown what are you gaining from that. Like all say do not be the one to ruin your own life because you do not care take action and do something good for yourself and it will take you to far places. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
D5AC4A35BAF8 | Thomas Jefferson wrote, " Determine never to be idle. . It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing". When he wrote the quote
" It's wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing," hes referring that when we always do tasks, assignments,or other things, It's a wonderful feeling knowing that we could complete or finish the tasks if we were always doing something. I believe that when someone work hard or try their best on what they're instersted about they could accomplish their goals.
When setting up goals, we want to accomplish them in the furture. By accomplish our goals we have to keep working harder and focus closely until we could reach our goals. Get ideas how you could accomplish your goals; for a example , by particupating schools programs ,or other smalls groups that could help you reach your goals. Keep praticing on what you're instersted about because we accomplish more by always doing something repeatly. Always be positive on reaching your goals and always try something new beacuase you won't know if you good at something else that you never knew before or try before.
Most of time we don't accomplish anything its because we not trying or we don't really care about finishing or completing anything. Sometimes always doing something repeating doesn't help for some people, since it may not work out for them. If your other goals is not working out for you, you could try something else that's new or challening. Accomplish something is not only for goals, but you could accomplish your tests, chores, group activity, and more others. Most of times people want to accomplish short-term or long-term goals because they're the most important things that they want to accomplish in their list.
Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something or not ? Yes, we do accomplish more when we always doing something because if we keep repeatly doing something for kinda long period we will accomplish it and accomplish more goals too that we want to achieve too. When most people accomplish their goals, they feel amazing and exicted that they accomplish something that they stick with and praticed for a while. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
D5C7212A31FD | 20/11/2010
Mr. reader`s how are you?
This statement it`s made for informe to you ,
we are sure based in the prompt called; THE FIRST IMPRESIONS ARE ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE TO CHANGE , we undertand that because is very important for everyone is this world, and sure we are agree with the statement and we want knowledge to you how we expresed.
its very important remember sometimes is very hard forget the firs espresion because is one of the things what make to you in the life , like marked in your hart , and we know that is not easy for each person , example; when you was a little boy you almost haved 6 years old and you see a new toy like spiderman and your's parents really buy that new toy so you was very happy and you never gonna forget that day because was very especial for you and ,therefore; that make a big impresion to you and its almost imposibble to change.
the central idea in this statement is what how much impotant is the first impression what happend to you, because is very important how you feel in the inpression , you feel very especial when you do the thing what do you like. and they do that one when is really appropiate for you or whent is the rigth time for doing with the inttention enpressed to you.
The First Impression are almost impossible to change because ,we really know that is one thing what marked your life for complete and is impossible change that because, the firt time what you feel that is when you know how important make to you the impression.
this writing is very importan because, im let you know how we expressed the firts impression make to you and its impossible forget that day or special thing.
mi opinion in this statement is im empressed with this because that happend to me one time when i was very young , and that one make to me very happy and inpressed because it's feel so good , i never gonna forget that day, its marked in my hart for the rest on my life.
The conclusion is bring ideas to the peoples who's are disagree with the statemet , because they need see how important is the FIRTS IMPRESSION IN THE LIFE and is very hard forget that one. by that we are knowedge to you is very important know about that one . so we wanna give to you some ideas, examples; when your's parents buy to you the firts toy that's make to you very happy and impressed , or when you go by your first time to the beach you see a lot water you make impressed rigth . or your first day of school maybe not was very good but you never gonna forget how that was, you see now , how important is that one , we now that make to you a big impressed in you don't gonna forget, now you can undertand better the things , you can do a big expressed to other peoples how you change your opinion, and how important is for you life, do the best you can good luck.
This information is made for see how important is the statement called THE FIRST IMPRESSIONS ARE ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE TO CHANGE. therefore im agree with the statement because is really interstering in important for everyone in this world.
sincerely Generic_Name. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
D5C7AA1266CC | Yes teenagers should do curfews because they will stay out of trouble and stop braking the law. They will be discipline,and have respect of themselves and others example lets say you have a child is a minor and he or she breaks the laws and always gets in to trouble the military is one of things that will keep you discipline or otherwise they won't be well trained. The next thing I want to add is young people have to be shown and have experiences the a 10:pm weekend curfew is a descent amount of time to get them well trained other places like military, Juvenile, and like closing of businesses. Teenagers have a hard time staying in one place of a very long time with no free time a midnight curfew for teenagers is good for them so they can reflect and learn for their mistakes.
Some teenagers are committing crimes and getting away with it but this program well benefit them but in a matter time they will become good teenagers and obey the law. However, they will carry the behavior through their work place and public areas with good attitude and good behavior and it will never interfere of young person's live for example,lets say a job interview and the person who wants to hire you and he or she will see your characteristics and how many times you have broke the law and getting into trouble the person won't hire you can't get a job when you have a bad record of committing crimes and facing the law so, curfews are a good suggesting with young people that you can't say no to. However, another example is vandalizing when you harm someone's property without permission as an example like graffiti, braking car window's, and invading somebody else's property.
In conclusion, every teenager who brakes laws should attend to curfews for a beneficial life experiences so they can get the best out of them and they can prevent teenagers out of trouble. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
D5C8C29F17D8 | If school can offer options to students to finish school at home is great because they want students can learn and give them more opportunities. Students can be more benefit if they attend to school and they can learn more than to did at home. Also there are many students can't come to school because they have a job and they have to did school at home. Students are not that much of prepare if they did school at home. If students could attend to school it can be great for them to be more able to did more prepared them for the future. Also that can get opportunities if they attend to school and good reviews from teachers.
If students attend to school there are more ways to learn. Also students can be more able to ask more question to teachers. If they did classes from home that are not able to ask a lot of question and they can't met friend who can be a big help for them. If you attend to school also teachers can prepared you more and they talk to you if you did wrong in classes. All teachers in school i believe that they can see your capacity or level that you are and at home they just give you work and they didn't know anything about the student. The teacher at school can see the way that you better learn and they can work with the student to don't fell classes because the know you better if you go to school. Home school is a great idea for people that can't come to school.
In the world are students that can't attend to a school because they have a job or others problems to go to school. In the world is not only one single reason to don't attend to school. Many of the students that can't attend to school in the United States of America is because they work and this work can't give opportunity to attend to school. Sometimes they don't attend to school because is hard to work and wake up in the mornings to go to school. They also many times prefer to do school at home because they maybe have physical problems and they feel better if they did at home. Many students can't come to school but if they did at home this shows that they are planing to graduate even if they don't receive a good chance to learn more.
Students at home are not learning what they can learn in school. They are not very prepared if they did school at home because sometimes teachers give activities with friends and students can learn from that activities or presentations of projects that the whole class did it. School also you can practice more if you are learning and at home you can't practice what you learn. If you are learning English and you did school at home if they speak other language that is not English you can't practice it. If you did school at home there are also many distractions that you can't concentrate and if you are not concentrated in what your working on you are not going to understand what you are doing. If you are in a classroom teachers make sure that you are concentrated in your own work and they also make sure that you are doing right that why students who attend to schools can be more prepared than students who did school at home.
In conclusion if you have time and the opportunity to attend to school you should do it because you will learn and get more opportunities. If you can't attend to a school and you are doing school at home you must concentrated in your work and don't get distracted. Also if you are receiving school at home you must find some one who you can work with to practice. The opportunity that many school offer is a great idea. School wants to students can complete their dreams even if they can't assist to a school. But the schools are giving opportunities to finish at home and must students should appreciate that because school is thinking about the future of the society. In fact school programs are working for people who really want to have opportunities and make their dreams true. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 |
D5E3716C5E49 | I think students should come up with their own summer projects design because, students can come up with really creative projects, could have more fun doing their own design projects,and will have less stress over the summer.
Students can come up with really creative projects over summer by researching experiments, or about someones life. A student can look up science experiments to do as their projects that could be entrusting for the class or for them selves to. Also they can talk about a famous person or about someone in their family and explain why they wrote about that person. Students can invent new projects and show off to the class and explain how they came up with it and what will their invention help them or others.
Students could have more fun creating their own projects. Students will be more exited to be able to do create their own projects then follow a boring one a teacher assigned everyone. Students can come up with really creative work if you let them free roam. Students could in joy doing work that doesn't have to follow a checklist. Students could also can work on a project with their friends.
Lastly students can feel less stress about doing a project. Students will be able to work on a project without having to stress about it being perfect or if its following the checklist. Students can come up with their own checklist and show their classmates how they came up with it so the other students can do it one day for fun.
In conclusion, these our my reason why i think students should design their own summer projects. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
D5E4F0C7D0BC | Are educational activities enjoyable? There are many different kind of people that like different things. But, if you are a person that likes science this is for you. one educational activity is a experiment because there are a lot of people that like to record data and find out how something works.
Many people like to like to record data, so they might really enjoy a experiment. For example, in a experiment that a person has to measured and put the data in a table. Some people would fight for this task, that is how much a person love recording data. There might not be author person to fight for it but there is always going to be a person that wants yo do it. Experiments might be enjoyable to some people that like recording data. Some people might be in a math class recording data, but I think a experiment is more affected.
This is one reason why I think experiments are a enjoyable activity.
In the other hand, some people like to find out how something works. For example, a person might want to find out how the Faces of Matter changes. Maybe that person already knows, but want to know more about it. Therefore, that person does a experiment to find out more. Some people love to learn different things. other people will spend all their life trying to fine something out. It maybe new or not.
This why I think a experiment is a enjoyable activity.
Recording data and finding our how something works are just two reason why experiment is a enjoyable activity. People will fight just to record data. Other people will spend all their life doing experiment just to fine something out. This are the reasons I think a experiment is a educational and enjoyable activity. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
D610B092DAD9 | If you where a high schooler would you know what you would want you'er career to be ? Some say that students are expected to know to the career that they want to have so that they take specific class for that career. So that it could help them acive or get closer to the career that they want.
All though some say that high schools students should not be expected to know what specifice career they want. Frist peopel tented to chang over time so somthing that you might have liked three years ago you might not like that much anymore. Second you cant really telll if you like somthing intell you try it. Lets say that Generic_Name has wanted to be a teacher her whole life but then she gets the job and finds out that she is not that happy with her job and that she should have tryed other class in high school. Finaly most student dont really think about thier careers intill the last two years of high school.
actuily all students should know what they want thier career to be by the time they are in high school. Frist if student where to know what they want there career to be they could take specific class for that career. By students not having to take other class that they dont need it would help them focuse more because they whouldnt have to worry about having to take or study for a test in a class that they dont need. Finally if a student was to be taking class that he/she wants they would show up to class more because they would be intersteded.
Thats why I belive that students should know what career they want when they get into high school. Because it would help them out and even make thier life esay. Even if that idea was to chang but it all ways good to have a goal so that you can acive it. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
D61FC9795679 | Half or more humans use there technology for social media instead talking to them in person. Most websites on the Internet shows that humans that keeps using there technology for along time goes through out depression. We should stop using technology for fun. It could help humans have a battler life, also you could protect your eyes form getting glasses. One of my best friend had glasses wend he was only 5 year old. He was watching TV in front of the screen
Technology can help us in a way like sending pictures to someone that live far away form you, Doing your homework. Finding out the time and also the mind reason of technology is calling your family members and also you friends that live in a different country. But technology cost a lot of money. But my option is that technology does not helps you on any thing. Technology just routines you brain cell.
Technology can also make a dumb guy. Like if you keep using you phone and not study for a quiz or a test you going to get a bad grade for it. This is why technology bad for everyone. If If you use technology if going to eat your brain cell. One of my friend cheated on a test with his phone come on, the teacher was just seating on his chair and playing on his phone. Even one of my best teacher was using his phone to.
Not most of my teacher are this, but some are. Even in gym people just play on there phone and just sit there. But, me i play soccer, baseball and even basketball some times. Mostly I play soccer. Ya
I am talking about students so, even gym teacher do it to. OK lets get to the point am I the only one that know about this? Thie things happen everyday, everywere. Did you just found out? | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
D6278021E119 | I agree with this way to learn and study. I think that is a good idea for many students that can't coming to the school or have a work.
One of the benefits is that the students can wake up late, because the class is online so, you can take the class in the afternoon, you can stay in your home relax in the bed also if you want eate you can do.
Some guys work in the morning, in the night or all the day.
I have a friend that he work of
8am to 5pm and he always is tired and this can help his, for the future.
He can study in the night and have his class with tranquillity.
Some people think that this a way to lose the time, but I do't think so.
Because I believe that you can be a profesional person if you want.
My friend don,t wanna work in a restauran all the time, he want to be a mechanic and if he take class online his dream can be convert a reality.
In conclusion I believe that if you want something if have a dream, you need to follow your dreams I don't care if is hard NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE.
If you have the opportunity you need to take it. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
D62F970B0DAE | Did you know that teachers work with one of the best culture of the entire world? Teachers work with smart and beautiful students who want to have a bright future. Students argue about having afterschool programs because is bored. I'll rather have afterschool programs because is a better way to improve your skills, is easier to do your homework, and it helps students with special disabilities.
One reason why I'll rather have afterschools program is because it improves your skills more than you could ever had. Afterschool programs are reasons why students have been growing a lot this past years. I had a friend call Generic_Name who had really bad grades, he sign up in a afterschool program and in a few weeks, he already had almost all A's. In transition, this is one reason why I'll rather have afterschool programs.
Another reason why I like afterschool programs is because is a easier and faster way to do your homework. I'll rather do my homework afterschool because they can help me and I could have more free time at home to do whatever I want. Homework is good to improve your grades specially if they count as a quiz grade, because quiz grades count as thirty percent of your grade! Furthermore, There's one more reason why i'll rather have afterschool programs than having nothing.
Last but not least, A reason why a like having afterschool programs is because it helps special students who have disabilities. Special students are the same as regular students, but people say that students who have problems or disabilities count as "Special childs." My brother had difficulties with his reading because he didn't know how to read that much, he went to a special class and he had improve his reading skills over the past ten years. Moreover, This is my last reason why i'll rather have afterschool programs.
This is all of my reasons why I'll rather have special and afterschool programs than not having nothing to do afterschool. My favorite one is that is easier to do your homework because you will have more free time at home. To get in a program, all you have to do is ask for that program's sign up paper and sign it. If you need a fun program in the whole city of Generic_City, NextUp is the best one you could find. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
D6407F1D3515 | Technology has had positive effects on people because you can use cellphones to interact people, you can also be shopping at home without having to leave your house, and also if you are a gamer you can also play with people from around the world. That's why technology has had a positive effects on people.
Technology is a big impact on people because phones can do anything. You can be in video call with friends and family without having to leave your house. You can also call your family with just your phone. One last thing you can do with phones is that you can make group chats with your friends and family. You can be playing games with your friends or you can just chat with them.
With the important of technology you can also do shopping. You can shop without having to leave your home at all. If you are from another country you can shop from around the world and you can buy things that represent your country and feel like home. One last thing you can do with shopping online is that can order food from any restaurant and it will get sent right to your home. you can also send stuff to your friends and family by just sending it to them
With technology if your a gamer like myself you can play with anyone from around the world. With gaming you can play with your friends and you can be talking and playing at the same time. Also with your gaming system you can also watch hulu, and with hulu can watch movies without having to go to the movie theater. Also with gaming with friends is that you can just have a blast while gaming. The counterclaim will be what if your not a gamer? If your not a gamer then you can take school at home without having to leave your house.
In conclusion i agree that technology has had positive effects on people because it has brought us cellphones to connect people from around the world. You can also shop online without having to leave your home. You can also be gaming with people from around the world. That's why technology has had a positive impact on peoples lives. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
D6504339A690 | The reason its good to ask more than one person about advice about something is because if you ask somebody for something that can help you for your daily life. It might be helpful and it might not be helpful, but now you know that it doesn't work for you.
When ever you ask someone for their opinion about something, you shouldn't expect what they tell you. You should be aware that it might not work and might not go the way you want it to go or the way you expect it to go. Before you do anything tell your self, ok, if this doesn't go right, this is my fault not the person I asked advice for.
Also when you ask a person for advice and it does work, make sure before you ask the person make sure you say thank you because somtimes people just walk away from you pretending your not even there when they know your asking them something. so just know that your thankful for people wanting to listien to you and wounder what you need or what you need information on. | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
D669349412FB | He is a good thinking,but you see fast all fall,said you are ageeri him. He said you going to success god help us.
Yes i,m agree because every people fallow the role and going to toghader don,t loss enyone.British Prime Minister Winston Churchill so good idea,because people go just one satap success god help,s more help go up belive the god and yourslaf. Failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.
I,m agree with him. He has a good idea about the improtand role and that failure plays in the pursuit of success,because you have pawer fight with failure,and failure you won oneday success and you have prode yourslaf.He is a nice idea give you but fast all fasl the most improtand everywhere fallow the role,success consists of failure loss you enthusiasm. My sentences content of my idea. My word organized in a logical manner. My idea supported by British Prime Minister Winston Churchill said,success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Pursuit of success i hope so the maen idea is success of help god but said him good idea give us all.
One day you have success fight the failure ever peolpe fast fight the failure than have a success. Eevry people dont have success because thay are not sarvie life no fallow the role,s and dont have good thinking go up.
Mr: British Prime Minister Winston Churchill said is very improtand idea and good thinking every people fallow the rules than you go up success you don,t have good think you not move go up success.
Main idea is success and failure with fight than go about success.
He is very amizing idea and supptand the success and you know without failure not have not success. You frist down than go up going to success you not fight failure you not go up you not have success.
British Prime Minister Winston Churchill i,m agree with you. Yes success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Churchill,s ststement is will because all success is with failure. | 1 | 1.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1.5 |
D679B3291B9C | Would you agree that schools having partnerships with companies is a great idea?. Some may say that people won't take things serious and just not even pay attention to it and see what the partnerships have too offer but, however it could help a lot of students who need too decide on what career they wanna do in life, so they wont be wasting time and money on a career that they dont even wanna pursue but, not also that people could get a head start on everyone who hasn't made up their minds.
Also for an example a companies like Google could offer a internship for cyber security. And if they see that certain people are putting in work and are making a change in the work environment or even helping out a good amount in the work space. They will for sure end up giving you a job you like, but not only that many companies have really good benefits so thats always a great plus. It also comes down to what people wanna do in life and how they are willing to pursue it.
then school is really expensive and time consuming. For example schools can cost up too $100,000 , and no average Joe has that kind of money just laying around so that when people have to get loans from banks ,but then end up owning the bank money and not only are people going to school you need to go work so people can pay for school, food, rent ,car payments and clothing. So then people end up living check by check and therefore people have no time for their families because they are so busy working on themselves.
finally it just comes down to what people wanna do in life and what benefits them in the long run so they can be stable with money and mentally. and also if they would like to do these programs that schools have too offer and what works for them, but they also gotta choose what they wanna do and actually like it because at the end of the day its their life. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
D684AE8A9418 | Many people are going say that we can be our self, but even though we can be as we want in certain things, our character is formed by influences beyond our control because we tend to try to fit in society, we fear making mistakes, and we try to be like someone we admire.
As humans we tend to try to fit in society; we like to feel liked by the people around us, so we act different than we actually are. The feeling of being liked by society in most cases makes us feel pride and self confidence, which is fine but makes a line between being our self and being influenced. Fitting in a society might be hard for some people,even frustrating, but people still are willing to do it so we can not be seen as different. trying to fit in a society might be the biggest reason why we do not act as we want and tend to act as everyone else in front of other people,because we fear that if society categorize us different then society is going to dislike us,however, there is some people that are careless of what people say about them. There is always someone that will not care at all of what people say about them which is good,but, there is always a time where they cared or will care about it. It is part of being a human that we care about what society says because we do not want be seen as someone different that can not fit. For example, students in schools dress as the trend is, so they can fit in society,even when they grow they will care how they look.
The fear of making mistakes influences part of our character. We fear that making mistakes will make us imperfect or not good at something, therefore, we think that if we are not perfect we are a failure,the fear of making mistakes is what makes us human, and that is a gigantic influence to us and we can not control it but makes people stronger and, help us to develop a character that will represent us in the future. we fear many different things in life for example,our appearance, if we think our appearance is not as we want, we get insecure in many different ways but, it is a huge help in the development of our own character because we learn from those mistakes. Being insecure is a huge obstacle and mistake for people to get to choose their own character, because it does not let us decide for what we really want,therefore people should learn from them which it will hopefully help people to develop a better character. Many people find themselves as insecure because of the fact that people might dislike them. Scientist have said that having the fear of making mistakes will make it harder for people to achieve their most wanted goals in life. We all as humans make mistakes, therefore we can not or it is harder for us to find our own character by our own self.
As humans we all have at least someone that we admire a lot,and we see them as a person we should imitate so we can be even a bit as them. Imitating someone in any way will make our self to struggle when trying to develop our own character because we are thinking of how someone else would think. Imitating someone else that has had such a great impact in life might be good for your self and you might achieve your goal because that person did. Even though our character is formed by influences of other we admire we also have to have our own character into it, so we can feel the pride of achieving a goal that has had our effort in to it. Having a bit of your own character into what you do is important too because it is not a full imitation of what someone else did. Many famous es have said that they also had followed someone else's steps to get where they are, so being influenced by the people you admire might help the people a lot to achieve their goals as it did with the famous people,and they also said that the people they admired a lot was the one helped them to find themselves, because if it was not for them they would have probably the same as they were before being famous.
In conclusion, we can decide how we want to be but that does not remove the fact that our character is mostly formed of influences that we can not control because we tend to try to fit in society,we fear making mistakes, and we try to be like someone we admire a lot. People are going to find themselves mostly from experiences and influences that they can not control,however you should have some of your own character to do things so when you achieve something important you feel better about yourself, but we,the people tend to act different so people like us and it is something inevitable,either control in life. As humans we dont like to be categorized as different and our main goal in a big percentage of people in the world is to fit in society and that is something that can not be controlled, but it helps us a lot to find our self afterwards and form our character at the end. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 5 | 4 | 4.5 |
D68907DB12ED | Do you think school's should extend the school hours? Well, I disagree. First, student would not concentrate in school if they got out an hour and a half late. Some student's may need time to do homework, go places that take a long time, or just make up time to study. If schools were to add more time the students would not get enough sleep because they stayed up late studying for a quiz, test, or just homework causing the students or the other classmates to sleep during classes
Second, it would affect the mental health of the students. Making them stress out over knowing that they would have to wake up early and be dismissed late.
Third, the education time of some student's may be cut short. This may happen when some student's are in a sport or they just need to leave school early. Student's who participate in a sport may have to leave class early to go practice for an up coming game making them miss half and hour or more of education.
What is your opinion? | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
D6894AB9188B | Failure plays in the pursuit of success. Although some say that success shouldn't be consist of failure because a failure makes you a loser, not a winner, actually failure plays in the pursuit of success because people fail, but they learn from their mistakes and it's positively affects people personalty.
Those who believes success shouldn't be consist of failure have their reason. Some say failure may negatively affects people in their life. But, success makes people feel proud and enthusiasm. Because a failure makes you a loser, not a winner.
Failure helps people to find their a path to success. People fail, but they can learn from their mistakes. For example, I took math test last week, and I didn't do well on the test. My score was 50 out of 100. So, I checked my test paper, and I saw what mistakes I got and learned from it. Then, I retook the test, and I got 91 out of 100, I was proud; after, I saw my score.
I know many people hate failing, they think it's negatively affects their life. But, failing is sometimes there's benefits because it's positively affects people personality. Such as, hard working, proud, and encourage. First, people have their dreams, some wants to be a football player, or some wants to be a president. They need to work hard to accomplish their dreams. Some people fail or success, but they are working hard to accomplish their dreams.
Lastly, pride and encouragement. For example, I have cousin who into sports, and he is in race track. there was a race in high school between Generic_School. So, my cousin was in it. He's family was there and I was there, too. we saw the race, we were encouraging and cheering for him. So, he came in second place. I was mad at first, and I saw my cousin smiling. I told him, "why are you smiling?" He said," I'm happy that you guys came, to see me race." he was so proud. I was happy for him. He didn't care if he is second or last. He cares about his relative cheering for him.
Conclusion, Failure plays in the pursuit of success. I believe failure helps people to find their a path to success. People fail, but they can learn from their mistakes and it's positively affects people personalty. Such as, hard working, proud, and encourage | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
D6930DD4EDD0 | Knowing what your future career is in high school is very important. In high school there are many classes that could help you with your future career.
If the student talks with their counsolor they can figure out what classes the student can take that is helpful for their future career. The student can get a head start on their carrer and by the time they graduate they know what to do. Therefore, The student will be well prepaired after high school. when it's time for collage they already know somewhat about their career.
Take advantage of the classes high school has to offer becasue in the future when your no longer in high school you'd have to pay for those classes.
After high school I'm looking to become an auto motive tech. Talking with my counselor helped me figure out what classes I can take to help me with my career. My counsolor recomended this class called Auto Tech and through that class I got hired by Toyota. Taking that class helped me a lot ; for example, Mercedes Benz ranked me 3rd meaning I could go work for them. I wouldn't be in the place I'm in right now if I didn't know what I wanted my future career to be while in high school. If you know what your future career is talk with your counsolor they can help you figure out what classes are best for you. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
D6B34BAFC908 | When people ask for advice it can help them make better choice because, it help's them choice better decisions, help them give other people advice, and it help them in their life. When someone is giving you advice listen to them because it could have help them in their life and it could help you to in your life. Also your family, friends, and other people can give advice that could help you in life and still people are going to give you some good advice. Give some advice to people that need help with there life.
When people give me some advice i listen to them and i give some advice to the people i know and it been helping them in their own life. Sometime i give advice to my little sister so that she can be good at every subject she have in school. I have been giving advice to so many people and it have help them make better choice in their life they have been thanking me for helping them. After listen the advice the people have giving me i want to give some advice to kids so it help them in their life. After listen to all of this advice it help me so much in life i have made better choice where ever i go and keep give people advice.
After i was giving people advice they came to and thank me for help them with there life and with the advice i gave them. I have giving advice to my family, friends, and other people they have make better choice in their life and sharing advice to those who need it the most. And when giving advice to those people who need the most it have help them in thier life.
And the reason why people ask you for advice is so that it can hlep them in thier life and they can pass it down to other people. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
D6C9DE61BAF4 | There are three examples about if I agree or desagree about the statement "It has been said that a positive attitude is the key success in life". I agree with this statement about the importance of attitude and I will give some reasons.
Firts example, one reason that why I agree with this statement is because,if you want to apply for a job, you need to have a positive attitude to be sucessful for other people because they want to see the best of you and if you can have that job and how you relate with other people and you will see the results about it . Many people with bad attitude are lay off of their work because at work you have to show your best attitude with the costumers,boss or with other workers but some people don't do it . If you are the boss, you needs to have a positive attitude or try to have it because your workers hope the best attitude of you to manage the job and that can show respect of your person.
Second example, another reason that why I agree with this statement is because all people desserve positive attitude like, if you are walking at the park and you say "hi" or "have a good day" to other person with a positive actitude they will feel good and they would think that you are a good person . Be a person with a positive attitude can be successful for yourself or for your family for example, if one of the family members has a bad day and they see you, his mood can change because of your positive attitude, you make him feel better with advices about how he needs many options to resolve his life but if you have a bad attitude you make him feel irate of you.
Third example, the last reason that why I agree with this statement is because, if you are in the school there are many teenager like you that have hard classes, but some of them have a positive attitude because they want to have a good grades, pay attention in class and try to help other students who needs it, they try to make them sucessful too, so they can have a good grades or a good future . But, if they have a bad attitude they would be have bad grades,they don't pay attention in class,they try to distract the students who want to pay attention,make argument about the class or sometimes they scape the class because they feel that they have a bad attitude and that's why it has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life.
In conclusion,in this three examples I give reasons that why I agree or desagree with the statement "It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life". If you have a positive attitude that can make you a better person or successful for yourself and other people. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
D6CCEE56DA9D | Do you think students should have career durimg school at a yong age? Their's some families have poor economy. They dont have that much money to keep their child dreams. Student should work during school at a young age because students need save money for college payment, this help students to acuaintance with work environment, they will have their own credit cart.
Firsly,Student should work during school at a young age because students need save money for college payment. All the students have dream to studey in a collage and become someone in future. some families have poor economy, they can't pay for collage of their child and they are earnings that much to eat and make a living like pay insurence and simething like that. For example my friend Generic_Name she is 11 grade. she is working in patrakandy mall as a cushier, so she doce't have father and just her mother, her letter brother is with her. she is working and saving the money for her collage.
Secondly, this help students to acuaintance with work environment. The more students working the more they are getting smarter and understand about the job. Students will become a enterpreneur in future, and get familier with different people in community. For example to know more poeple and be familier with different job this make easy, successful life work for their future.
Lastly, they will have their own credit cart. This is good for student to have his/her own cridet card and to take responsibilty for paying their car insurence and other stuff. some childs have pride and can't ask for money of their parents. For example some student have a big maind that means their brain is older then their age and they will have their own responsibilty not asking for help , they will work hard and become stranger.
Some people thing this is not a good idea for students to work. They are too young and they have to study and they are still high school, have a lot of homework to do,this is right they are too young for working, but still some students need to work because they need to pay for their collage. for some people who have a lot of money it it is nothing to pay for something like collage of their child ,or other stuff like this, but for the families who is earning just for eating, make living and have poor economy this is really hard so we shold realize those people too.
In conclution
Student should work during school at a young age because students need save money for college payment, this help students to acuaintance with work environment, they will have their own credit cart. Student should have responsibilty, they shold see the hardness meanness of life to grow up. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
D6FF6E26EB7D | Being successful in life everyone goes though failure but believing in yourself is the key. Everyone can learn from there mistakes, without learning or believing you fail and stop. People who stop and fail they don't learn from there mistake. The ones who fail and self believe they learn form past mistakes and try again. By practicing over time the person can understand the subject or the materials they'er trying to learn thats how some people can be successful. People who don't practice the won't get any where in life or get to there goals where they need it to be.
Winston Churchill say "susses is consists of going to failure with out loss of enthusiasm" yes i do agree with his saying. The reason being if you fail for an example on a math test you got an 53 but now this time on the retake you want to get a 80 now that's a goal you want to achieve. By practicing over time people can learn there mistakes from there past experiences and see how the develop over time. People who become famous, millionaires, and company owners they had good and bad ideas but they still became rich or powerful people by learning their mistakes. Winston Churchill is tilling us that by failure and believing in our self we can successful.
There are many ways to be successful to get where the person wants be to. The first step is were and how to start company or store. Second step is how to get the money, recourse, and a company to. Will the two steps are that easy,step number 1 always start off small use a room or make a stand out of wood if that doesn't come up with other ways. The second step buy the material off the item the cost mummers are buying if that a back fires you can always use you own money to buy the rests like company poster. Thats how some people can have bad or good ideas.
In conclusion people can be successful or not by learning the mistakes they make in the past. Finding a way of how people can practice there mistakes an be more productive in the future. Sitting a goals and having more of what you expected to have for example have a higher score on a math test. Having ideas and recourse to start small business. Believing in yourself on what you can achieve on what you can work on. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
D7301CAAFAB0 | When are parents gave us advice we are able to learn do the right thing. For example if you go work with your dad he gave you advice. Also they gave us advice we learn how to do the right thing. Learning the right thing helps us to make our life better. Learn something from more then one person because they help you dont get in trouble and be a good student or son if you learn from someone us.
Learning advice from school is good because everyone learns and get good grades. Do something good for school is good because when they gave you advice to do the right thing is class. For example the gym teacher gave you advice to do the right not the bad advice because if you do the bad thing you will get a bad grade and get in trouble. When we get in trouble is bad and you always have to listen when they gave us advice for you do well at your test. When we do well in our test is because the teacher was having us advice and we were paying attecion.
Friends gave us advice out side of school and inside school. When friends gave us advice inside school is because they want a better life for us. When friends gave us advice for our life is because they want us to be happy and be a better person. Also when they gave us advice like when we play sports. When we play sports the coach always have advice do win the game. When coaches gave us advice to play good and win games that teams will be come so good if the players get the advice of the coach.
When people ask for advice is because they want to know what things are better like to buy. If we shop somewhere then you need a advice from someone to know if is good or bad. When they gave a advice of food you have to know if is good or bad for our health. If we dont get a advice like for something maybe will be bad for us to eat or do and may have problems. The person who do not gave a advice of what they doing they will get in trouble if good for our body or not good.
When we are in math class the students gave us advice same with the teacher. Sometimes students gave us advice how to do the work of the problem more than one student gave us advice. When teacher shows advice of our class work how to do it and know when test are coming for be ready. Also the bus driver gave us advice how to act inside the bus. If the bus driver does not gave advice everyone in the bus will act crazy and maybe a accident. Thats why everyone should said a advice for we could be safe and be good. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
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