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CCA58535073C | Picture your self enjoying spending time outdoors playing catch, or riding bikes, or even just doing any other activities.
Its fun to do many activities outdoors and its also good for you to be outside moving around and doing things.
Spending time outdoors are great for doing activities,and to see what other things you can do at parks. For one, playing catch is a good activity to enjoy with others, and to move around. People can find that playing catch is a good activity to enjoy outdoors, because most people play it differently and many of them can learn how to play, its also a good way to play fair with others, and to throw/catch a ball.
Secondly, riding bikes is a great activity to do at a park with your family or friends. Therefore, riding bikes is an amazing activity for outdoors, you can enjoy riding along the streets, and to enjoy the outside nature by looking around the park and to hear the people playing around having fun outside.
On the other hand, doing any other activities are good to enjoy outside. For example, playing football is a good game to spend time outside practicing or playing with friends, and tag is another game that kids love enjoying outside running around and laughing and playing fair with other childrens on the grass or even just chasing little things that they see, like a dog they like to go after a dog and pet it.
Conclusion. Spending time outdoors with many activities like, playing catch with your friends, or riding bikes around the park and enjoying the nice ride,or even just enjoying doing any other activities of your own outdoors. What ever activity is interesting to do outdoors to spend time on, then just do it to enjoy it. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
CCB13E22A439 | Technology allows to the people, technology they has positive or negative effects on people's lives. First, technology is a systematic treatment of application of Knowles esp. Second, technology is very important for some people because some need for job, communicates, homework, play online or other things. Third, some people uses the technology for good things like " people can check out books, shop, and play games without speaking to another person." This explains the technology is good and promote more easy lives of the people. Also, the technology sometimes can had negatives effects on people's lives because some people do ban things with technology for examples, cyber bullying, steal ID form other person, or to trick the young person. Finally, technology is good for communicates with other people that lives far away or other country.
Furthermore technology had good benefit for the people life and essential for young person, but no all people usable good for example, the young uses sometime only for play game or post ban things in social minded. So technology can be has positive effects on people's live, if the people can be use right the technology. Also technology had negative effects on people's lives, if the people used technology for ban things. Sometime technology can be effects people because when the other people used social minded for make bullying to other person, this person can be effects emotionally.
In the past does not have technology; so was hard for communicates with other people, buy things from other country, or for to looking things for homework. Now is more easy to do things like; pay in online, reading book, communicates or other things now can do. My Mom and my Dad say " in the past was hard to communicates because did't have technology (telephone,table,or computer) so before use letter to communicate with other person, but to take long time. Now is more easy to communicate because the people have cellphone.
Now the time chances because technology increase more better and more easy to do things. technology increase each years because put new cellphone computer or other things like that. Now the company have good money because all people have cellphone or computer and the cellphone year to year they more expensive to buy. In conclusion, technology has positive and negative effects on people's lives. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
CCB5EED97986 | I do agree, attitude is energy, and without energy we are nothing.
All the time, the attitude of every single person could change radically, but that could demonstrate what kind of person who you are. Every single person who can not do their own things with attitude, is like if they're not doing it with energy.
My mom change radically her attitude when she's talking with an unknown person. My cousin is the one that teach me how to be a better person just with attitude,
because of some problem's that we have in our family, for all the things that happen in my country, and also for the death of my uncle.
I love my big brother, I want to be as him, for the things he achievement on all his life. My brother is one of the most kindness person in the world. He could talk with an angry person, and just a few minutes, he would be able to change they're mind, how can that be possible?. Its all about attitude.
It's been a while for all the moment's that I lived in my entire life. Every single night that I'm going to sleep, I think all about what I did during the whole day, and I go over to think what do I did wrong, and what do I have to change to have a awesome personality, so when people talk to me, just for the way I talk, they would know if I have a great attitude. The attitude can help people life, because when you are going to ask for a application to get an employment, if you are thinking negative things, nothing is going to be positive to you. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
CCC05B237877 | Your attitude is the best way to achieve your goals or just a plus to get everything easily. In life if your attitude is pleasant you will have a lot of opportunities, and also be succesful in work, love, and friends. For example if you help your partners in work, and do your work well probable your boss prometed you in a better stand for all your effort and devotion. Another example can be in love if you are affectionate, charismatic, and loving probably you gonna find someone love you and give you the same love, and actitud you have with her.
To begin with, the best way to get a best position in your work is to show a good attitude. The majority of contrators like someone everyone loves too, because is more effective to everyone and effective for the company. For example last year in my uncle work someone will be ascent, 3 workers inclued my uncle, the most part vote for him because they said is the most friendly, and the most appropiate for the jod. To conclude this if your attitude like the others everyone wiil be agree with you and they going to follow you because they trust you.
Secondly, the best manner to be in love with your partner is havening a great attitude, and communication. The most part of relationship work, because both respect each other, and have a great communication. For example my Mom and my Dad never fighting they prefer talk and solve them problems and teach me how is not necessary have a load attitude to solve a problem. This show how have a good attitude is the best way to prevent the love gone and preven divorces.
Some people say, is not always neccesary have a good actitud to be succesful in life. A lot porcent of people think have a bad attitude is a caracteristic to be succesful and is not a obstacle to have a great career in the future. For example the president of my country his attitude is disagreeable but he has a faultless career and although he is likeable is the president of El Salvador. However everyday people say ''he is the president because we need him no because we want he lider us''. This demostrate how you can have a good career or power, but if your attitude is unpleasant although they need it never gonna like you.
People with good personality and good attitude have the benefit to get everything more easy for how you expresed to others. And people who have a weird attitude no matter what they said if they sttil have that attitude and don't chance people never gonna try have a friendship with them for this reasons. In conclusion be a person charismatic a great friendship with the most part of the people your life will be benefit and different just to have a good attitude. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
CCDD77656701 | Do you thing that most danger of us lies not setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark? Sometimes is not good to tell others what you want because some of them may not want good things for you to get or have, you want to not used too much you phone, you want to loose some weight, and you want to graduated from high school.
Today in day many people used their phone a lot and sometimes they don't do things because they spend most of their time on their phones. For example, you get home from school and you have to do some homework, but you don't want to do it yet because you just got home from school, and you tell your self that you will relax for a few hours, and then you will start to do your homework. You ate dinner and everything you go to your room and one of your friends ask you if you want to play videos game? you tell your self I will play a little bit and then I will start to do my homework. Two hours pass by and you are still playing videos games. You tell your friend I must stop playing because I have to start doing my homework and your friend tells you don't go, we ask someone to give us copy, and you say yes, because you want to continue do keep playing. When you get to school you don't have any body to ask to give you copy. It was your choice to keep playing. That day you make a plant you put a timer and when that timer stop you will stop doing what you are doing. It work because when you time your self you can do more than one thing, you could also have more time to just play but the good thing is you have finish all you things.
For new year resolution you say that you will loose some weight this year. Your family laugh at you because you had said that almost every year and you have not do it. Sometimes is good to just tell your self to do things and don't tell anyone because some people don't want others to get things because they want to get it first and if they don't get it. Those kind of people don't want others do get it also. If you want to loose weight just do it and don't tell any body because you don't know what others want for you. It's better to do things in secret because at the end you are the one you are doing it and no body is helping you. The things that you do are for you not for everyone. When you have your things you can tell to your closer people and some of them may be happy for you and some may not, but that doesn't have to worry you because you have already do your thing and they can't do nothing to take that away from you. Your family may see you that you say things but you don't do it. You have to show them that you can do things that you say. You may feel sad because of what people say and you just have that in your mint. That is why not good to tell everyone of what you want to do because they may be jealous and they don't want you to be in a very good shape. Just go and workout and when they see you again they will say wow you look different what did you did to look great; they will not see you as a lair because you show them that you can do things. It can take time to see the different but you are doing it.
When you are in school you will have friends that are good for you and also those that are not. When you are in high school you want to pass all your classes so you can make your parents proud and they can be happy; but their will be some friends that will tell you to go out and have fun etc. In school their will be students that care about classes and their will be that they don't care. You want to be with those friends that help each other to have good grades. Their will be friends that don't like you and want to get you in some trouble, and they will want you to don't have good grade and be like them. You want to be with friends that support each other. Also you don't want to be that kind of person that say you have good grade and you don't have those good grades and you just are copying others and when it's test time you don't know what to do because you didn't do the work by your self. To get things that you want; you have to work for it. It's better to have friends that help each other and that also that help you to do your work and can be easy for you to also help others.
People may disagree with this because they have good people around them and that they help each other. They may say this because they haven't go through things like; one of your friends don't like you and they don't want you to have the things you want. Sometimes is better to do things and don't tell everyone because you don't know what people really want for you or what they think of the things you want. In this world are people that they don't care what you, they will agreed with what you do and if you felt they always be with you, their is those that they don't want you and others to be happy. The best thing to do is just do things and when you have it tell to everyone that you want because when you already have it they can just talk bad things of you and you don't stay in front of them as a looser because you didn't they don't know how you did it. Us human been we always have the thing inside of us that always make us jealous for what others have. For example, If one of your friends have a news phone you will get a little bit jealous because you also want to have that phone. Every single person in this world has when through that. That's why people don't trust each others.
It's better to do things that no body know because if you felt or don't get what you want, their will not be people that knew. You didn't get it and they will not be talking bad things of you or look at you as a looser that you can't do anything. You will be the only one that will know and if you want to tell them you can it will be your choice. You want to do things because you want to be proud of yourself and that is the only thing it counts. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
CCEFC4392340 | Most students enjoy summer vacation, but some educators think that summer break is too long and students do not retain information as easily as they would in the fall. Because of this a lot of educators think we should have year- round school years. This would be shorter breaks in the summer (3-4 weeks) and longer more spread-out breaks throughout the year. I disagree with this statement and believe that summer break should stay the way it is.
The first reason I disagree with this statement is that it would ruin certain summer activities or even business plans. Think about all the activities in the summer that kids usually take part in, this could be sports, some sort of trip, etc. All of these activities students would preferably do during summer break. They have this preference because they see the summer as a perfect time to do all these activities without having to balance their education as well. They can put most of their time on this activity. The same preference applies to things like summer jobs or internships. During the summer they can learn important values like how to save and earn money. Or if a certain student has a chosen career path they can explore this career path by going in a internship for that spesicifc job. For all of these activities students at the very least would be discouraged to participate in if there was a year-round school year.
The second and probably most important reason is pertaining to the students mental health. An article, by Complex News writing about kids mental health stated, that over 40% of kids by the end of their freshmen year in high school are depressed or overall feel exhausted and depleted mentally. The article continues to say that this number from the time of their freshmen year only increases after each school year. Students use the summer break as a way for their brain to refresh from the long almost ten month school year. Students need this time to relax their brain and get ready for the next year of education. As a student, I can say that during school my brain goes into this state where I am mostly just focused on school work. And I can admit that my brain at multiple points during the year is worn down and damaged by always be in this state. My brain does not get a chance to heal from this until the summer, when school is over. So if we were to hypothetically have a year-round school year, this would mean that the brain would also be in this damaged state year round. If this were the case than the brain of the student would eventually just break and shut down. No student should have to experience that because of a year- round school year.
Although the strongest reason for this year-round school year is that students cannot properly retain enough information for the next school year, I think I have a much stronger counter claim and solution to this problem. A very simple way to take care of the problem of retaining information, is to make mandatory (but simple) assignments from the previous year for the student to complete so that they don't forget this information. This way students can have their long summer break to refresh their brain and do their activities, without them having to forget any information. You get the best of both worlds with no need for a year-round school year.
In conclusion I think my assertions for the summer break to stay the way it is is much stronger than year-round school year argument. Having a year-round school year would be unnecessarily tedious and dangerous as it would negatively affect summer activities and mental health. As someone said once upon a time "Don't fix it if it ain't broke." | 5 | 4.5 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
CD1D7EC5810C | It has been asked by one teacher about the benefits of working with a group or working alone. Work is the ability to do something that given by any one it can be a person, a company or at school that we do it by ourselves or with group. One scientist said that, "one country can developed not by the Prime minister(President) its by working together". Although some says working alone is more beneficial then working in group because they learn how or accomplish things by themselves or responsible for that work, actually working with group is more beneficial than working alone because we can get more ideas from other person and it is limited by shorten time to complete the work.
Some people says that working alone is more beneficial than working in group because they learn how to accomplish things by themselves. In our world almost all people struggle to accomplish their work by their own, which is good to learn many challenging things in our work. For example, Thomas Edison invented the light bulb with out asking for help, he also fail many times to passing light through in the bulb. Also Leonardo Davinci took him more than a year to draw the most expensive and beautiful woman Monaliza, but he didn't ask anyone to help him. We can do any thing by ourselves if we work hard and struggle not to fail.
Actually Working with group is more beneficial than working alone because more ideas flow out from another person. In Biology our nerve system can stuck when we thing over and get stressed, the last level of stress is stuck. One person can do one or two things but if another person help him they can have more ideas. For instance, the two brothers who made the airplane, now a days we can see what kind of airplane made. However because of they are two they mix their idea and get it done.
Time is short in this world. God gave as the time interval to do in our inter life. Bible says God gave 900 years for Adam, and when the people become a lot the time interval became more less, and now a days the interval for our age(time) is 80 or 90 in average. When I came to my idea, it is limited by shorten time to complete the work when we working with group. Lets give an example for this; the teacher gave an assignment for each student to do research about global warming, he gave 1 month to submit it, but if they had work in a group they can easily do it with in less than a month. In this world we stay for shorten time interval we can work together to accomplish our goal.
although some says working alone is more beneficial then working in group because they learn how or accomplish things by themselves or responsible for that work, actually working with group is more beneficial than working alone because we can get more ideas from other person and it is limited by shorten time to complete the work. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
CD4135EAFB1E | A Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered,you will never grow. Some will said you'll grow but won't reach their beyond what they mastered. Some will disagree with Ralph Waldo Emerson statement, because doing something beyond that already master will never stop you from doing it. In the pass year I played a Villain before I reach goal becoming beyond with a instrument that I didn't know how to play, I master how to soccer for the first when I was little, and at the end of the day your going to be beyond great when you don't give up.
When I was 6th grade in middle school I never though I was going to learn how to play instrument for the first time in my life. The instrument that I'm now play is Villain my brother though I wasn't good enough to play a instrument. I practice every days to get better and to try my best. I played three year in middle school I was getting good and then I love how sound made with bows and string. The teacher once said if stop playing then your going to forget the string note and how to used correctly. When I got to middle I learned how to play a interment for the for time in my life become beyond. I didn't stop growing I kept growing to become better to play.
Why won't we reach our goal then become beyond because doing something beyond your reaching a goal to finish. This was a time where I want to learn how to play a sport. When I was little I wanted to play soccer but I didn't started learning until I was 10 years old. My goal was to learn how to play soccer, until one day I was at the park with my family and friend I learn how to play soccer. My uncle tough me how to played soccer for the first time.
He showed me how to kick the inside and outside of my feet. My uncle told me that I was fast learner that I kicked correctly with forced. So we played soccer just kicking back and forth until knew how to kick. When I was 7th grade I sign up for the girl soccer team for the school. When I made the team I was exacted because I never though I going play for school soccer team and it was the first to play. The couch liked how I played but my friend though I was beyond great but I didn't believe them. When I got to 8th grade I wanted to sign up again because some of my friend was joining, then when I made in the team next then I know they voted for me to become captain for the girl soccer team. The coach was beyond how I played for the game I made 8 goal in the season but I never stopped playing soccer. Until the moment in my life I knew that I had master my goal.
I'm 16 year old about to turn seventeen in July I have reach so many goals in my life and then it when beyond. I learn so many thing on my own because my parent didn't know English. At the end of day I had teacher and friends that help me all my school year. The one key that my parent tough me was never give up on yourself, if you don't understand the problem then go to the next problem then come back to finish the rest. So all this year I learn how to play a instrument that was a villain and playing a sport that love I become beyond great and master to become better. I grew up become better the thing I love the most and did it because I had sibling following my foot step since I was the oldest in my family. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
CD47F64F2398 | The benefits of working with a group and why you should find a group to complete your assignment isn ted of doing it alone.
It's really beneficial to be with a group because of everyone collaborating. Working with a group makes the assignments to be completed in a easier and a faster way. Having a lot of people in a group means that everyone is going to be sharing their thought and ideas of how to complete the work in a easiest way. Working alone means that you have to work harder more responsibilities and also it will take you much more time to complete your assignments sense you are doing everything by yourself.
Being with a group allows others to collaborate with each other that means that no matter how hard the assignments are all together are going to be able to complete it. Having a group guarantee you less responsibilities as well because you have others whom can do a different task from what you are doing. Also being with a group guarantee you to complete the work in much less time that if you were to do it alone. A group gives you better understanding of what you all have to complete do to everyone strong thought and ideas.
Something really important in a group is the Lieder someone who is responsible to check if everyone in a groups is done with their assigned task. Also having a lieder will be easy to assign each one a task without everyone complaining about doing the work. You can also contact you lieder to inform him that is going to be impossible for you to complete your assigned task do to a problem with your family so that way a lieder can inform the others and find someone who can take you task and finish it, if you were alone you would not be able to complete that sense you wouldn't have anyone to depend on. A group guarantee you success when it became to complete any assignments do to everyone effort and sharing ideas, sure a lieder might be important but with a a group the lieder is nothing so everyone is really need in a group in order to successfully complete the work.
Overall working with a group give you much more benefits that be working alone. Being on a group give you a better understanding of what the work is all about do to everyone ideas, also you have less responsibilities including much less time to complete your given assignment. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
CD506B5747F7 | Students should are espected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. they can know how long they took at high school and graduate. The lasthing they can focuse of school if they can identify a career and they can study more fast to take out at high school. Students can be preparede about the career what they want to study at high school.
First, studenst can know how long they are at school and they can know how long they take to go out at school.
however they can see what they can need to graduate at school to not take to long at school. Also students don"t like they come at school and they want to go out fast at school. There are many students that don't want to stay at school long time because some students want just work.
Second, should students commit to a career because they can focuse of school if they identify a career. Many students will focuse in their future. However students have the oportunity to have a career at school at a young age. They can study what they really want especific at school because they going to know they career. Also if a student have the career that he wants it's going help him to be prepare more when he go to a collage.
Third, If students have specific career, student can be prepared at high school what they really want to be or to study in the future. This is going benefice the students when they go to collage because they not going be thinking about their career. Students can't spend to much time at collage or Univercity because if they are preparede making progres at high school about their career.
Some careers take long time to have improve your skills ant practice more study more but if they do that at high school it's not going take to much time in the future.
Finally Students should are espected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. they can know how long they took at high school and graduate. The lasthing they can focuse of school if they can identify a career and they can study more fast to take out at high school. Students can be preparede about the career what they want to study at high school. Those are the reason why students are expected to commit a career at a young age. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
CD52F56B2392 | I disagree with the school board.That they should had more time in school. They have no time to do anything after school. They also will not do their school work because they won't have time to do there homework and they have to go to sleep because they will have school the next day, and they won't get a good grade because they didn't do there homework and there is reason why school board add more time.
Why they should not add more time in school because people won't have time to do anything because they will have to do other things too. This is why the should board should not add more time in schools. 1 They have to do there homework. Number 2 they have things to do for after school or they have a plan for after school, Number 3 they have to go somewhere. If the school board add more to the school hours that means that they will have no time for anything.
Reason number 1 They have to do there homework,they won't have time to do there homework because they don't have a lot of time because when come back for school they
are doing something and the end they don't do there homework,because they have to go to sleep and they need to go to school the next day.
Reason number 2,They have to do something or the have plan's to do after school. For a example Generic_Name need to pick up his sister and brother form school but he can't because the school board add more time in the school.That is the other reason why the school board add more time to the school.
Reason number 3,They have to go somewhere. For example PROPER_NAME needs to go to church after school because the church is 2 hour of class when he comes back it is 8:30 then he eats then he goes to sleep because he has school the next day when he went to school he got in trouble because he didn't turn in his homework. That is another reason why school board should not add more time to the school hours because they want have time to do their school work.
reason number 4,They will get broad in the class room,For example the teacher is talking forever that they will sleepy and they are going to be sleeping in your classroom, because they been sitting down forever then they won't do there work, because there getting tried.That is the other reason why school board should not add time to the school.
That's why I disagree with the school board by adding more time to the school hours, because the students won't have time to do their school work and other things, because school will end late, because if they add more time the students will not do there project or there homework,because they don't have time to do school work.Then they will get a F and that class because they did't do there homework or school work. That the reason why the school board should not put more time in school. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
CD5F70E5C1D7 | To begin with, in my opinion i think students and parents should get the choice to be involved in any type of extracurricular activties. and why im saying this is because the school does not have no right to tell you you can do this and that but if they ask you to stay to finish some school asignments or afterschool studying then i suggest you stay after if you really want to finish those assignments and get a good or decent grade on it. or if you want to do great in school or in any job and you need a lot of school for that type of job then you might want to do as much of extracurricular activites.
Second of all, if the parents dont think that you are going to do good enough in school after the extracurricular activites and if you dont have enough time for study sessions or you homework because your to tired from sports such as football, basketball, lacrosse, and soccer. then ask your teacher or whoever is controlling the activties and ask them if you can get off a little earlier because you dont have enough time for homework, studying, or FAMILY or for yourself or your friends.
but i think the school should give the students and thier faimly diffrent choices of extracurricular activties so the students can pick 2 or 3 diffrent types of them instead of not having time for thier own life. like the students can pick and choose the 2 or 3 they really want or like to do or they can pick the ones that's going to help them the most in the future of school or in thier adult life, because teachers can teach the students things from extracurricular activites that they learned or did so they wont have to ask no one else for help or hire somebody then from that you can save money and you can also get money if you help someone that doesnt know how to do that type of thing.
And thats why i think it should be the students and parents choice if the students want to or not do extracurricular activities. because the school doesnt think about the students family or what they got going on at that time they just want to boss the kids around and tell the students to go ot not go. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
CD7201C66BBC | Students being able to graduate a year early from high school is excellent choice for any lower clansmen thinking of graduating early in the up coming school year. In the past years lots of high schools have witness a portion of students graduating early due to the students choice in education. Not only does the student have the choice, but gains more responsibility, and thinks about his college future. Every student should have that choice in graduating early since they have every right.
Having the choice to graduate early probably sounds like a pretty good idea, to any lower class men trying to see his options in high school. High school choices are pretty slim but knowing you have that option during your 4 years of high school, means you could take that challenge and overcome the odds from everyone else not taking that choice. A student taking that choice is well aware and willing to take full responsibility on his choices.
Gaining responsibility through out this path, is great for a student to obtain. Obtaining responsibility shows a lot in a character, because having this trait takes you far in life, and shows you don't procrastinate in completing a task. In all Honesty responsibility is a major key in a student looking to graduate early, a reason is because you are getting double the work, taking all core classes, and multiple tests happening throughout the week. Just by having double the education in a single year takes a lot from a student, but having that commitment and responsibility shows, and proves a lot in a hardworking student trying to graduate early.
Working hard and succeeding in graduating early is gonna look good, in a students resume for college. One of the reasons a student could graduate ahead of time, is most likely because they wanna get straight to college. Going to college is probably on every high school students mind right about now, but colleges will automatically notice a change in the students class, and be aware of them graduating ahead of time. Colleges noticing the students activity is a good thing for them, because they notice how the student is ready to take another step in their life, and willing to put a lot of effort in their tuition as well, just by doing this they could take a lot of consideration in allowing the student to attend their college.
Overall graduating early is a great choice for a high school student looking into this option. All students in every school district, should all have that choice for themselves. If the student makes their choice they should take into consideration that they will need to take a lot of responsibility in completing all task through the year for all core classes taken. Lastly to take note that colleges have a good eye for them, and seeing the choices they make and how they are doing through their high school years. | 4 | 4.5 | 5 | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
CD81F6CCE819 | I believe that self-esteem comes from achievement because the more a student work hard, the more achievements he/she get so when they receive more awards and/or achievements, it makes them to proud of their selves and build true self-esteem.
There are so much students who works hard, complete their work on time and also have a part time job after school, but they don't know how to build their true self-esteem so what they need to work is that they must be self confident because they can't build their self-esteem unless they're self confident.
Also, there are much more students who go to school and don't have a job or anything after school or during weekend and they're self confident, but don't know how to build their self-esteem.
So, students should try their best to receive achievements because it encourages and/or makes them to build their self-esteem.
Self-esteem is something that students can build it by theirsleves if they work hard, be punctual at school and have a checklist or a plan for what they should do first as a calender.
Students aren't working hard nowadays I have no idea that it's because technology makes them lazy or they don't want to plus they're not trying to achieve something at school.
I'm sick and tired of seeing these kind of students because if they just open their school backpack and at least study for two hours at home, they will receive a lot of achievements at school so that's how they can achieve their goals.
So, when it comes to build their true self-esteem, they need to work on achievements and become self confident first and then best version of their selves.
Teachers also have a role in this issue because I think students spend more time with their teacher compare to their parents in a week.
I don't mean teachers discuss with them to build either their self-esteem or self confidence unless the student is smart and curious to ask his/her teachers and peers about becoming like a person who has self confidence and already built his/her self-esteem.
But, at least they show students the right way to get achievements or achieve their goals so that would be enough, and students will start thinking about how to get achievements and then they'll probably start working on their self confidence and self-esteem.
In addition, when I came to the united states it was 2017, I didn't know any English and I didn't have any friends at school so everybody knows how hard it is to go to school and can not speak with anyone or don't have friends plus I was a shy guy.
When somebody was trying to talk to me, my face was becoming red and start blushing so it's all because I didn't have self confidence.
So, I am still trying my very best to learn the language and make some friends at school so I can play or do my work with them together.
That being said, now I can speak, write and read very well and I became so much more confidence, best version of myself, have a lot of friends, and so happy to attend school.
Overall, being self confident and working hard for achievements are like a key for building students self-esteem which comes from achievements.
Students should focus at school or wherever else they study so they get achievements which helps them to build their self-esteem.
Students also should be encouraged by their parents to build their self-esteem as well as by their selves unless they're self confident in life. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 4 |
CD99E2D6DBE9 | Hey dear employees.
I'm writing this letter to tell you about some of my characteristics that are needed for this kind of job. I'm a responsible guy, who likes to be able to help the others if they need help in anything. Also I'm a hard worker because I'm constantly doing work, never stopping to do anything else if I'm not do with my work.
First,I think that I'm a responsible worker, because I never stop doing my work until I'm done with it. A lot of people tells me that I should get this kind of job, because I dont like when people are irresponsible and since I'm a responsible worker the rest of employers will like how I work, then they will start to their work just like I'm doing mine. I'm always on time. I'm always trying to able to do all the work and to help the others if they don't know how to do it. If I want to go out and be with friends, the first thing that I tell them is that I have to finish my work if I have time to go out after work then I will be able to go with them, but if Im not done then I cant go, because the job is the first thing that we all should have in mind, then the second thing are friends, free time, all that kind of stuffs.
Second, I'm a hard worker in any job, because I like to demonstrate that I can do the best and any job at anytime. So if you need that type of employee I think I'm the right person, because I will work very hard to finish the job by one day. I don't like to many works to be doing at the same time, so I try to finish one per day so later on I wont have to come and start to do the same work I was supposed to finish the day before. Like I said I like to work hard, to finish everything by the same day. I like to make other people work hard to, not just me, because if we all work hard we are all going to be successful in this job, I'm not trying to be successful by myself, I like to see more people success in life. A lot of employees dont work hard for the job that they have, if they dont work hard, that makes the company or the rest of workers look bad because he doesn't want to do anything. That's what I'm trying to change in this job. I'm trying to get this job because I know that I can help other people succeed, I can make this work by helping others and by working hard every day.
In conclusion. I think this are good reasons why I would be a good candidate to be hire for this job, I'm here trying to get this job, so I can help the others to be good workers and help the company look better, because we will work hard and be responsible to make the best out of the best.
Sinceraly.
Generic_Name. | 2.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
CD9AF89E5CA1 | Do you think, graduation in three years of high school is enough to make a brilliant future? Some students say, early graduation bring a successfully life in the future. High school students are graduating in three years because open more opportunity of life ,knowing the new world of college works,beneficial being a young student .
first,
open more opportunity. for example the journal life of my older brother Generic_Name it is easy. He finish high school early in three years, bring it to him advantages to be successfully life for get a job a early age, he also got offers for different colleges ,the Harvard University send to him a letter for being a youngest students to finishing the school early, the day , I remember exactly we were sitting on the table eating the breakfast, my brother was brought a letter in his hand and crying at the same time, we did not realize, the most grateful new getting a free scholarship to attend at Harvard University so my brother Generic_Name was in shock. This explain getting early high school diploma bring a lot of opportunities.
second, knowing the new world of college. for example. Generic_Name my oldest brother is attending the most prestigious university of the world Harvard university. He talked to me a few details about the roll day at university, he says the University its not hard, to being at early student attending a university with just three years of finish high school. He, say the university feels other home with news experiences to discover it. This explain University with early graduation in school it's not a problem.
Third, beneficial being a young student graduated from high school. For example my dear brother Generic_Name. I'm super proud of him to taking major responsibilities in young age, he just took three years of high school and get done it. he called to my mom the day, when he notice the program to graduated early in school , my beautiful mom told him that is a good way to set up early his future and would be able to star a enrollment in university. The university believe students must be a genious to finishing high school early, University offer extra credits for being a young student. This explain young students graduated early are considered as smart person.
Three years of high school to achieve it the most dreaming diploma.
High school in three years, people belief students enough mature or full of knoledge to throught a real life but Graduating in three years of high school brought us brilliants benefits for the future.
New generation would be involved a system, where students finish their high school early to get good opportunitties in their lifes. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
CD9FDD5F9F9E | Does failure play a big role in success? Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that, "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." Although failure often just ends up in failure, I agree with Winston Churchill's statement that failure can lead to success if people continue to use enthusiasm.
First of all, many of our inventions used today are a result of failures.
For example, Edison created the lightbulb, but failed many times before he discovered electricity.
He used his faith and motivation to not give up and keep trying even though he had many set backs.
He accidently made a circular shaped like glass ball which became a source of electricity. If Edison did not keep trying, we would not have electricity today. Also, many scientists have created medicines after many failed attempts.
For instance, there is now a chicken pox shot that prevents people from getting the chicken pox.
Through many experiements with mixure of chemicals and failed trials, scientists were eventually able to find a shot that prevents chicken pox from entering your system. These examples show that failures often lead to success if people never give up trying.
Second of all, many students have failed in school, but if they keep trying and keep their enthusiam, they will succeed. For example, I have had a hard time in school, especially with passing my sol's. When time goes on, I try harder and harder, and spend more time studying with my teacher.
As of today, I have passed all of the sol's I need in order to graduate except for the one I am writing about right now.
I also have a learning disability and ADHD and have a hard time paying attention and often lose focus in my classes.
Even with my disability, I have not given up and keep coming to school and get extra help from my teachers so that I can graduate this year.
I make sure I follow the rules, don't skip class, or don't miss school becuase it's so hard for me to make up what I miss. Although many seniors like to skip class, I do not skip becuase I want to earn a high school diploma. Even in education, there are failures, but through hard work and a good attitude, students can succeed.
In conclusion, I agree with Chruchill's statement "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of entusiasm."
Even though people will experience failures, there will be success if they work hard, keep the enthusiiasm, and never give up. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 5 |
CDA4015E635A | Just think being in a curfew on adoction, just becauses we are on trouble,think about it, sometimes we teenagers we are who has more troubles because of our friends dependen what kind of friends tha we have they may be good friends also bad friends, but think there are people who wants tha all teenager become a good person,they are people who wants you to become a professional. The city is debating the adoction,because they also wants that the teenagers had less troubles, so they can have a family that the can help to advice what is good and bad.
The council it may help the teenagers to be more safely, and being out of many bad things, the council the only thing the it wants to do is find a family, and being more happy, and the family can help the anyone being out of troubles. I think the being adocted by the age of a teenagers it can be really hard ,for they and the mew parents, i think the because we all teenager we already know many things bad or we know things good, but also having new parents they may wants us do new things, that maybe that are gonna help us in the future,
but we don"t know.
Youngers teenagers the only things the we need are parents who are there talking with us,
I thing the it will be fine for many teenagers being adocted bye a family because he can knew new life, out of many troubles, and also it wiil be fine being out of bad band. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
CDAA99F49D42 | My prompt say that district school offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. Some students wanna do online class and night school to help them graduate and get there GPA for there classes for college. Do students do online classes and night school right now? Tutoring and and night classes and can help with everything you need in college.
Students that graduate early helps you to get ready for college. This helps all the opportunity for them to understand the learning. The classes you do to understand all the things that happen in each course to help out all. For example, I know a lot of people that that do classes in the morning and at night time to catch all the work for the classes they hard. The more work you get done during summer it counts your GPA scores. Doing everything done with work at school can get ready for everything to be done.
Do students do online classes and night school right now? If so, how do students get it done with all the activity and what programs they do to make it done. Some school offer programs for students to help them with there grading and work they make during the past school year. I remember all the year that I did all my best for high school I've done after school tutoring and morning tutoring to just get everything done so I can just graduate and help my family. This oppoturniy graduating early helps me get ready for school.
Classes in school is hard because they helping you out to get ready for college, because when you enter college its very different than in high school because all the oppotunity you can make for your self. Being orgizinize with all the work you do in school can help you with all the work you will do in college this is you being independent for everything you do in high school because teacher's helping you out. For me being a high school students all the elective classes I do helps me with the course I'm taking in college and doin online classes was the best way to get it done.
Programs you make in school and trying to be in it will help you with all the work you have. Early gradutes, yes, there's alot of them in the country to just get there education done with everything. Colleges do look at your scores and work you do with all the information you do in school all the records and everything. Having good grades and always in school that's one of the records to make college look at you and be like I want her to know to be in my college.
I will say that offer programs from different school you can get accept with all this around you because this can help you out with all the career you do in high school. Graduating three years instead of four years you can get everything done. That's why students graduate early. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
CDABA09822C7 | I my opinion the Minister Winston Churchill its right, because to learn something you need to see it not just of the success fool side. You need to learn of the mistakes too.
The problem of someone how never has experimented the failure, is that when this happen its going to be more pain fool that someone how has that experience.
Imagine a pro football player and he never in hes life lost, and for the first time in his career lose: he is going to suffer more and maybe get in depression because he never experiment the feeling of lose. But the football player how has hes loses and didnt stop and keep fighting if he lose now he know what is the feeling, he is more prepared.
You need to feel what is loss, its going to make you a more prepared person, who knows what you want and how to do it, but you cant surrender you need to all ways keep going; is your life, your goals, your decisions and no one cant stop you. | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
CDBB3ACAD2C8 | Honesty is a good policy because you are being strong, even thought honesty can hurt some people. I also feel that you are being responsible,mature enough to tell the truth. Some people can't be honest sometimes and that's okay because not everybody is the same, we all are different. I will say I like honesty because I don't like when people are not honest with me, so that's why I like to be honest with them. If they are not honest with me than that's totally fine, I'm not going to force them on being honest with me. But in the other hand I will have to agree being honest is a good thing to do. You never know what could happen if you lie an any case. I could disagree but I won't because people need respect and I'll show them that I can be honest with anybody. Honesty is good, It might help others think good, different in a way, but smart. I know how people feel when they tell a lie and I don't feel comfortable with it, at all. Aproving to this is good, why? why because people will like to be honest to, and they need to learn how to do it. They need to let go of shy, and be confident, agree with yourself if you will like to be honest. If you don't, then don't push your self, If you don't want to be honest and hurt somebodys feelings is okay, it all happens. But we still have to be respecful to others and all treat them the same. Like I said I will like to be honest with others so they can know how I feel about stuff or how I feel in my own way. I'm not trying to be mean if i'm honest, I'm just letting it go how I feel. But don't just go to others and say how you feel about them because that is just really disrespectful. It's good to be honest to your parents because they have always been there for you. Be honest with your friends, they are like siblings to you, they won't judge. Be honest with the people you trust or see them hurt an any type of way, help them feel happy, grateful, they will appreciate it alot, seeing that you stood up for them, that you helped them do something succesful. trust me they will be greatful. you are being productive. People will appreciate it alot if you help someone close to them, they'll see you are one of a kind! Just be honest with people and if they might hurt others feelings, try to say it in a nice way, don't be mean to them. And if they get it, they will like that you were being honest with them. Because you are just letting go what you think and you want to help them on whatever it was, So that's why I agree being honest is a good thing! | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
CDCE16D2C836 | Boom that's the sound of a volcano that just erupted. An enjoybale educational activity for me is a volcano because they are intresting and an excellent science expirement.
The first reason I like volcanoes as an eductaion activity is because they are intresting. I've always wandered what caused a volcano to explode. Now I don't need to because I know now what causes them to erupt so voliently. Valcanoes are very fascinating to watch erupt when you see the magma flowing down. The magma can be so hot it can be like being hit with a ray from the sun. It's very awesome how the volcanoes are fromed and made. But as cool as volcanoes are they can still be pretty dangerous,because they could cause harm and erupt,cause chaos. sometimes volcanoes erupt at random times. Sometimes in villages or islands and in this case people don't have time to run. Because the magma flowing down is like an avalanche because it goes really fast and the people can't outrun the magma because it is to fast. There have been more volcanic eruptions that have killed people even children. Like pompei which was a huge volcanic eruptionthat killed a lot of people. After the eruption paremedics and police went back to discover the remains of people under huge rocks. Volcanoes are very intresting althougj they can be dangerous at times it's amazing how it looks when it erupts. Volcanoes are one of the greates things to study.
Next a volcano would make agreat science project. A volcano is a good science fair project. Because it's very amusing to see how the volcano erupts. When it erupts you can see the hot flowig magma as if people on a raft were going down. Volcanoes are a good science roject because it lets you know more about volcanoes and how thy come to form. Volcanoes are very rare to find here where I live at but there are still some outhere. That's a good science project not only because they explode but because you can even show the layers. Volcanoes have layers the top the middle and the bottom. The top is where the magma shoots out like a bullet from a rail gun. The middle is the less calm part and the bottom is where all the magam is. That is why I think a volcano is a good science project.
In conclusion an enjoyable educational activity is the science project of a volcano and i gave my two reasons why a volcano is a good educational activity. What is en enjoable educational activity for you? | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
CDCE6EB37AF6 | why shoult be don't try somthing else new in my life? If you have already mastered, you will never grow in life. Although, I am totaly agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson that what him wrote, but somepeople are conform in yours life with they know and have. I agree because I can learn everyday new things in my life also
I can help others how to do something different if I can do that very well.
learn and help that things make my self very proud and don't feel me comform with
I have.
firts is all, I can try and learn to do something different in my life, how I can learn new things. For me it's very importan to learn something differerent everyday in my life. for example. If I am cashear in my job and don't have any idea how to charge some extra price in one orden thefood, I need to ask my manager how I can do. Another example. If I can't to resol some problem in mathematic, I need to learn how I can resol that problem for after will be easy to me how to resol that problem, and that why is very importam to learn everyday somethig different or new in life.
secod is all, in life very important to learn and try to help others because not body kwon when will be need help. I like to learn and try to help others how to do something new for them. for example, if I know how to ride bicycle, and one person aks me you can ride bicycle and that person need help to learn how to ride bicycle, of corse I can teacher how to ride bicycle or somebody want to know how to use computer I can teacher that and aditional help others that I learned make me feel every good in life.
In conclusion, learn everyday in life is importan and don't stop to do something different also are importan, that why Ilike to learning something new in my life and them help others how to do the I know and learned, that why Iam totaly agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson. Nobody can't stop to learn except that person like be conform in life and don't like to grow in your own life. I don't like to be conform I like to learn something everyday and help others that my self wil be proud. everybody for reason of life need to learn somenting and help others. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
CDDAB6C29BF8 | This company is interested me and is a opportunity to me to show what a can do to deserve the job. The art is a way to express your self or if you do not want to say your feelings then, say it with drawing are coloring. If is a day when you feeling alone,happy, or you are excitingand you don't no what to do then start to draw, paint, or color. If I could express and any art will be drawing people because we all look different that is why a like drawing people.
I can travel different places and draw what a see there. If i could go to Mexico I could draw there tradition like dia del muero that is the day of dead. And their different design that they wear and their festivil. I can start by desing are drawing clothes. That is how you starting to get small ideas then you sart building more details on you drawing.
This job is and opportunity to show my potential and I work so hard to be come how I am now a grat artist. The art for me mean that I can express what a can see and think in start to draw what I am imagine in my mind. I deserve the job and I will work hard and I will give all I got. I am the one for the jod and i will not let you down on the job. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
CDDCA13DB734 | The determination make us to do something and do not stop until we finish, in the prompt show us a little piece of all the wisdom of Tomas Jefferson "
determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how may be done if we always doing.
" it make think about how much a person can accomplish is the person is always doing someting.
If we always are doing something we learn more. For example: I work with my parents in construction and thanks to that I learn many things that I can use for my future.
We can accomplish almost everything. Why I said almost? for the simple reason: do you like what are you doing?. Example if you want to do the best doctor ever, but your parents want you be a famous lawyer; you will strive for be a doctor no matter what.
We will learn the value of the things that our parents do for us. Example: I come from of a little country in Latino America. Generic_City is a beautiful place but is poor, violent and do not have the sufficient money for live; in Generic_City if you have a car it means that you are rich or you have a good job. but I born in a place called Generic_City in the state of Generic_City in the rural part.
now I am very graceful of my mom come here, because if I still live there i could not finish high school or middle school, but thanks to my mom I can dream for go to a college and speak more than one language.
All those reason make me want to give the best of me in everything, and always do somenthig and do not seat and wach the world rotate and do nothing for the people that I love, and my new country. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
CDDFBBACC7B6 | I think that people find community parks,state parks enjoyable. Because everyone can go to them, family time and also if your stress you can go there.
My first reason why i think that community parks or state parks are the best is because everyone can go to them. You and your friends can go and just have a blast. There's so much stuff to do like play sports with other people .You can even meet new people that you don't even know. Because not everyone that is there your gonna know because everyone can go. For example the Generic_City park that place is so fun you can play sports with you family and buy stuff like food,clothes and other stuff.
my second reason is that you can have family time. Family time is so important to me because your family is always going to be there for you and the park is a great place to spent time with them. You can meet up with your family at the park. And also you can have a small little birthday party and just have fun there with your family. If you have little sibling they are going to love it because there's a park and kids love the park and the adults can be talking like your aunt with your mom. And also i fell like being outside with your family is better because you just get to look at the trees and nature instead of being inside.
my last reason is if your stress, i been stress before and i feel like the best places to go are the parks because you just can forget about everything and just draw or write. And if your stress you can do so much things like yoga and after cumming things. The park can also help people in different ways like they can be relaxing .And also if your going throw something i feel like being outside is the best thing because if your inside your only going to get worse. So the park can help in different ways like stress.
In conclusion the reasons why the community parks or the state parks are enjoyable or people might find them enjoyable is because everyone can go to them, family time and If your stress. And you can do more fun stuff not just this. I love to go to the community parks because i get to spent time together with my family and we just have a good time. And also it helps me in so many ways going to the park like if i stress or just having a bad day. That's why i feel like community parks are enjoyable and a great place to go and just have fun the next time you go. Do you like community parks? | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
CDE661A599F5 | Imagine the president and the government of our country being nothing but idle and letting the country run on its own. There would be no regulation in the country. The history would repeat itself and many of the tragic historical events that happened in the past would happen again. We talk about the American Dream a lot but being lazy and just waiting for something to happen will not take us anywhere.
As Thomas Jefferson said, "Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing", I agree that if we always do something we accomplish more.
We as human beings have so much potentials in us but we will never discover it through inactive.
Firstly, I believe that inventions and new discoveries have made people more lazy and inactive. I dont blame Inventions and discoveries because they were made with good intentions and not through idle ism but there are people who trust inventions more then they have to. There is always something to do in this world; we accomplish more when we aim higher. Even small chores prepare us for something big. laziness is a big wooden door which can only open by ourselves and once we open that door, theres always something big waiting to happen and once we accomplish that another big adventure awaits.
In the history of United States, there were many people who idolized idle. We had a government who let the country run free, this had a great impact to the country. the country was poor, people died because of huger, disease etc but now the country has accomplished so much then the people in our past would have imagined. The country is well know all over the world now. The country has accomplished by establishing government regulation which removed all the laziness from the country. If a whole country can accomplish so much from not being lazy then imagine what a person can accomplish.
I believe there are people who supports on being idle more that have to do work. I agree that it is okay to not do anytime sometimes because everyone needs a break in their lives. There are people who believe in not having to go outside their house because they have all the technologies or they think they have nothing to do. Technologies serve their own purpose but we have our own purpose, we are born to do something big. If we could just go out and just help one person and day, that person would help another and another to another, this would be such a great accomplishment.
In conclusion, I agree on what Thomas Jefferson said and believe that there is more happiness in doing something everyday then being a idle. I hope everyone see's how much bad impact idle is in our lives. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
CE11907D971D | How technology can effect people's live or human contact?. I agree, because technology is not the best thing human created. Sometimes people say, "technology is bad because effect the family can't be together" or just they don't like the technology. I feel when people say that, is because they know technology effect people's lives. This are some reasons how technolohy can effect people's live or human contac. Peolple be adictive with their phones, They can be adictive with shopping online, and don't have communication with other people.
The people is adictive with his phone or the game, in my opinion is bad because they just thinks in his self. For example, if someone need help he or she can help the person because, he or she are used the phone and sometimes mean, their phone or the game is more important that someone need help. That person can be a adult or a child. Sometimes we need to be more kind an have a good heart with other people.
I know is you are woman, you always shop online that is the best thing make womans. but some of woman have addiction with shop online. For example, some of woman shop online and that good because you can be indepent and shop you own clothes, others shop a lot clothse and they have big addiction with shop online.
I my opinion the person don't have communicate with other people, is a person don't that ispiration for his life or future. For exmaple, if that person never do something that motive or that is good for that person, literally he or she is one of more.
In my conclusion, we nedd to be a ligth between that people is addictive in their phone. Because that bad for they life and their future. That was I agree, because technology is nor the best thing human created. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
CE19B516A167 | should the school board add one and a half hour to school each day? The school board should add one and a half hours to school each day. I agree with the school board plane to add one and a half hour to school because it would effect the students learning and help them get more smarter and it would effect the school worker's because they money they get payed will increase.
1 first of all the school board plane to add one and a half hour to school each day.
if the school board add one and half hour to school if will effect the student because they will be able to have more time to study with they teacher which help them gain more learning. for an example when Generic_Name was 10years old in Generic_City, he use to not like school because he had school from 7am to 4pm and the teacher's use to force them to do homework,classwork and all the learning he needed it felt like being a maid having someone telling him to do this and that he hated the teacher but he learned a lot from them and him and his classmate still cared they teacher's teaching everywhere they went and it's very helpful, for an example they teacher's was like your parent's telling you to do something you don't wanna do they know is good for you but still you don't wanna do it so they force you to do it then you get mad over them for doing that which they find it helpful for you later in life in fact you hate them at that moment for what they did, but after years when your adult you get struggle about something and you remember what she thought you and you find it helpful the how our teacher's was like back then in Generic_City, the more hour's we had the more smarter we got . This evidence show's that the more time we got learning with our teacher's the more smarter we got. clearly sometime's the teacher's rush teaching when they do not have enough time and that does not help the student so the more time the teacher's get to teach the more student understand the subject well without rushing through the subject.
2 I agree with the school adding one hour and a half to school each day.
perhaps if they do add one hour and a half to school each day it really help the student and teacher's because they will have enough time learning not rush through learning. for an example when i was in school back then in Generic_City, Generic_Name was in classes doing his work but the classes hour's was short so this time when he did not have enough time to do the classwork in class the class hours was like
1hour and 30minites in math class the teacher told us to '' turn your work in it's time to go '' innocent didn't have enough time so he try to rush through it so he can get it done.
after week's innocent got 60% on my classwork he was disappointed in himself innocent wished he had more time to finish it was not the teacher's fault so he didn't blame the teacher because they did they best to make sure we had enough time. if we had enough time it would had really helped us all student's and teacher's.
in addition for student's to have better grade they need more time to focus and do they work in class.
clearly if school board add one hour and a half to school it will effect student's grade because they will have enough time to do they work in class and not rush.
In conclusion the school board should add one hour and a half because it will effect student learning and it will also effect they grades too so it will be a good thing to add one hour and half to school each day sometimes the student don't have enough time to do they work and they need sometime to finish but they can't and that effect the decrease the student grades. like in the story when the boy name Generic_Name in his school they didn't have enough time to do they classwork so he rushed through it and got bad grade, so if student's have enough time to do they work in class it would be very helpful to the student's. if the school board add one hour and half the student's grade will be different all they need is just more time to do they work in class and not rush through they work the more time they get to do they work the better they grades will get and the smarter they become. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
CE214B0C2CB6 | The British naturalist and politician John Lubbock once wrote, "Your character will be what yourself choose to make it
In my opinion, we do choose who we want to be. I agree with John Lubbock because not everyone has the same intentions as the people who surround us, we choose our own path, and people are raised differently.
Not everyone has the same intentions as the people they hang out with. Not because I want to go to college and become a nurse, means that my best friend, that I spend most of the time with, would want to be a nurse or be in a medical field as me. Some people might think differently and say that we are influenced by the people we spend our time with. We choose who we want to become. People have their own dreams and choose their own path.
We choose our own paths. I once got invited to a party where I knew there were going to be lots of teens drinking and doing drugs, so I told my friend, who invited me, that I didnt wanted to go because I new it was bad. For some people it is just fun and dont think about the consequences. Not everyone thinks the same, and people are raised differently.
We were all raised differently. For siblings, I think it is different because they are being raised by the same people and have almost the same points of view, but that does not mean they are or think the same. There could be two sisters being raised the same but one might have different habits or opinions than the other. At the end of the day we choose who we want to be.
We choose who we want to be. Yes, we are influenced by the people we see everyday and we might just take it as inspiration, but we are the ones who work towards our goals and not anyone else. We do choose who we are because not everyone thinks the same, we choose our destiny, and parents raise their children with different habits and knowledge. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
CE246FE2471F | One day my mom told, " son, be positive in your life,and everything will be of success". Since i started to be more positive in my life, everything was looking better, i found the job that i wanted, i bought my first car, and, me and my family move to a new house, overall everything was looking better. Based on my experience people should be positive and be around positive people, listen to positive music and found activities that incorporate positive attitude.
People should find new friends that give good vibes and help them become a better person, because sometimes the problem might not be themselves , might be people thats around you telling bad stuff, and always making you a have a bad day.
Changing the music that you listen to, could help you be more positive, because most of the songs and artists that most people listen to these days, sign about, drugs, killing people, gang related stuff, and thats good if you want to be positive.
Founding activities that incorporate positive attitude could help also, like going to church, going to the movies with the family, or going to a motivational speeches, will get you into a positive mood and forget about all those negative stuff going on in your life.
Being positive is good, and it makes you feel good and have success in life, but not always is good, because, life sometimes is unfair and we have to deal with it, we cant be leaving thinking that everything is good, when the reality is that the world is getting worst and worst everyday.
Looking ahead in the future, i see the new generation incorporating positive activities over the whole world, and making the whole world see life of a good and successful perspective. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
CE2EC298670A | I think that it a good that some schools offer distance learning for the students because some of them can't go to the regular schools and some of them are not able to finished one school and the distance learning offer a good idea for them. and is a very good experience. If can be a good apportunity for does who can't fiinish the school for example
Some of the students have kids and have to take care of them.
Another reason is that the students does not have the support of their family and they have to work for them self.
Also the family of the students can not affords the students education.
The person who received the distance learning it an oldest person who does not finish the school and that person is trying to finished now for get a better job.
I think it good that some of schools offer distance learning. First some of the students that are taking the distance learning have kids and they need to take care of the kids. Next The students does not have their family support and they have to support them self and work. Also the families of the students can not affords the student education. And finally the person or students that received the distance learning it an oldest person who does not finish the school and is tying to finish now to get a better job. because with a better job they can support the baby they have and the things they want to finish up.
First some of the students that are taking the distance learning have kids and they need to take care of them. Also the students a girl or boy get a pregnancy when they go to school and they had to leak of school for the baby. Also the parents make them to work because they have to support a baby. And some moms have to leak school because the other parent of the kid does not take care of the baby when she was pregnant. Study in the distance learning program they want work in the day and in the night they cant received classes.
Next another good reason is that the students does not have the support of their families and have to work for them self. Some of the kids are immigrants and they doesn't have their parents in this country. And also the student have to work and maintain by them self. The students have to work and go to school .But sometime get difficult for them and the time it not always log as they want to do many things at the day. And it better to have a option .Because with that option that can still working and receiving a good education.
Also another reason is that the families of the students can not affords the students education. And they try to do another thing for them like the parent can buy a computer. And with that the student can received the classes online or in the distance learning. But some of them use their phone to received their classes. Also some of them like to study but their parents cant not affords the school and they try to do anything to get a good education and a better future. Because that is going to help them to be able to have a family. And with that they prepare for the future.
The last reason that why is a good idea to get the distance learning is because some of the people that is getting the classes online are oldest people the they did not finish the school and now they're trying to finish the school .Because they want a better job and a better future for their family and their kids. Some of them did not finish the school and they now want to finished. They just want a opportunity to study and the distance learning give that opportunity to the old people that want to overcome. And that is a great help for the people that just want a better life a great future for them and their families. With that the people who is trying to finished the school can be prepare to have better opportunities of work. And also finished the school he or she can get a better job and be able to be with their kids. And don't leave their kids with another person many time. And spend more time with them.
In conclusion the distance learning education is a very good idea in my opinion. because the people that can not go to school because they have kids or the teenager that have a pregnancy when they were on the school. That give opportunity for the people with low income. The people that can afford their school. And also the people that does not have their family in this country. The people who work and study and does not have the time to go to a regular school. Classes in online is good for does that need to finish the school. For does that when they were in the school have some problems. Also is a good benefit for those that there time is not long as they want. The people of the distance learning have good opportunity for their future. And can be productive for the people who does not have a work because they did not finish the school. because have an education is important for this country and for all the people that want a good life and better opportunities of work. Finally the distance education is a good ideas because help people with the things they want and that they need too. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
CE43CDF8BAA4 | Social Media,Technology,and Education. The World around us is a beautiful place , but we do not take notice.
The smart phones play a vital role in today's society , it is the hobby of the century. The schools are now taking the advantage of the new technology , but along with the new use comes new problems.
Although, using the technology in schools becomes a faster way to learn , most schools are relying in the new invention of the century. Nevertheless, distraction in the schools will be a problem, also the students will be less perceptive in class because the students will fail to maintain self control over their devices and the results will be disastrous in their future.
To begin, the students in the school should have all the things they need to learn such as books, they should not rely on the devices to give them certain information. For example, the internet has a wide variety of information which could have a negative or a positive impact on the user , also the information in the web is very inaccurate which could lead to misunderstanding. This shows that the students could gain wrong information and could be getting a misconception in the topic , which could lead to failure in academics and to achieve nothing in their future careers. Clearly, the user have to make a wise decision between using an information in their cell phones that could possibly be wrong, or use a textbook that it is revised by many authorized teachers.
Further more, in today's society there is social media which is use to stay in touch with close family members who are far away. Cell phones are a great tool for anything , it is a mini computer. The students will be using their cell phones in social media to talk to friends instead of focusing on their task. For instance, if the school allowed such action, not only will be making a very poor decision but the school will earn a bad reputation from parents and even to the national level. This proves that it will not only hurt the kids academically but the school itself will have a downfall in popularity. Obviously, the teachers and staff will be unemployed by the county due to the lack of income from the state , teachers but not only students will be damaged by the decision that could be taken.
Overall, having the ability to own a cell phone is a privilege to have not a right , teachers and administrators should take away the device from the student if and only if the student is not cooperating, and return it at the end of the school day or simply not bring it to school. The devices were not made to harm others in many ways that people have tried .Social media plays a role too in the students it is like a temptation in their pockets , they always have to update their status in social media and text their friends and stay off task. In conclusion, Cell phones are a great way to study and do some homework and stay in touch with family members but in school is a learning place where it should stay like that and cell phones should not take that away. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
CE43DBA12965 | The growth of technology has made it convenient for people to use anywhere and any time. Technology has made it easier for people to do online education, jobs, and shopping. People are now in favor of this technology growth.
First, online education has made it easier for students to study at home without worrying about how they are going to get to school. I'm in favor of the online education because it made it easier for me to take my online classes at home and I can do my assignment any time I want to do it. The online education is also convenient for students in colleges; most of the students in colleges study at home because they don't have to worry about transportation, nor the gas money for their car. My brother is in college and where he lives they get a lot of snow in the winter, so it make it hard for to go to college. Now he does not have to worry about the weather because he can study for his classes online.
Second, most people are now doing online jobs because the grown of technology. In my opinion the most popular online job is to be a you tuber; a lot of you tubers film their lives and put on the internet then the get money of it. One of my friend is a you tuber and he gets decent amount of money just form putting videos of him self on the internet. The way YouTube work is the you tuber up lodes a video on YouTube and if he gets a lot of views then he gets a lot of money. Another online risky job is buying and selling in stocks. One time I bought an online stock form the company Tesla and it was really good price, after three months I sold the stock double the amount that I bought it in the first time. When people buy stocks from other company is like having a percentage of the company that buyer own. The risky part about it is people never now when the stock will go up or down.
Third, online shopping has made it convent for people to order everything online. The most popular online delivery is Amazon; Amazon made people lives so much easier by having everything delivered to their houses. When I order online I always order from Amazon this company has everything I need for me and for my family. Amazon also has fresh grocery that they deliver it for the costumers in the same day that they order it. In these modern days other stores are now delivering online, so people can buy their needs while they are at home.
Although technology has made people lazy and decreased the communication between humans, but it made easier for student to do their homework, it made it easier for people to make money while they are at home, and it made easier for those people who don't like to do grocery shopping in the stores.
In conclusion the growth of technology has helped a lot of people with their lives including student and online workers. All people are in favor of this amazing growth of technology because it has helped them to make their lives easier. I think that people are going to proceed with growth of the technology because it's making people lives run smoothly. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
CE54FF437FFC | Sometime in life , if we dont try new stuff, we will never succeed. The author, Ralph waldo Emerson wrote," Unless you try to do something beyond what you already mastered, you will never grow", and i agree with him.
Sometimes in life to succeed , you have to be passioned.
If you are passioned, you will be better at everything that you do, also, we have to be passioned to look for new stuff that you will like to know more about and learn about it.
If you want to grow in life , you can't be scared,
sometimes for being scared of learning or asking a question, we miss big opportunities and stay stuck, also, dont be scared of what other people think about you.
Other people might say that if you are good in life right now , why would you want to learn something new?, and you have tell them that you want succeed in life,be better person, not like the average people that dont do nothing to be better in life.
Many times to grow and succeed in life, we have to try new things, we cant be stuck in the same thing for our whole entire life. The statement that Ralph waldo Emerson wrote, is very true and i agree with him, if we dont try new stuff , we wont grow in life. we have to be more passioned of our life and start looking for new stuff to learn, and stop being scared of learning because we are missing big opportunities. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
CE6A2E382FBE | its aboute the plans of the half day i agree because they are planing the activities for the students so they can have have a fun day backgrown:what the teachers have to do to make there class fun for the students
Thesis:the have hours so the students go home early and they can do their homework or the classwork if they did not finish evidence:some teachers agree because they thing that they can go home get rest they can study more elaboration:but the thing is that that some people disagree because they do not want the students in home early but i thing that they shot not make the same thing each day because the part evidence:i thing that if they do DAT
some people are going to be like i disagree because the kids they are not to elaboration :i thing this is a way so the school can have like more time to prepare for the other day the school is like going to be the important thing for the kids so they can have more education and more productive in live i thin thats the thing that some people like school like have day or some thing like that in the but i disagree the things can be the same thing the school hours can be the like evidence:i thing that if they do dat some people are goin to be like i dissagre beause the kids they are not goin to do elaboration :i thing this is a way so the school can have like more time to prepare for the other day conclusion:is that somany people that gree to so | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 |
CE7E3C75BAF8 | This statement says that "first impressions are almost impossible to change." I disagree with this statement because it is possible to change anyone impressions. Like if they are having a bad day and someone walks up to that person and does something to make them feel a little better. They can also do that to other people by making new friends and making their day better. By getting positive with them they would feel a little bit happier around you and people.
It can impact on how that person day changes from bad to good. Knowing that is helps that person out a lot by having a good mood now. It can change other people mood as well. They can share the positively to other people making sure that they feel alright. By doing that they can share with there family as well.
Getting other people happy will make you even more happy by how you were showing other people. It doesn't have to be random people it can be your boyfriend/girlfriend. By doing that you can meet a lot of new people in life that can make you happy. It can bless you by other things in the world. Other people can make you feel better by sitting next to you if your alone and talk.
By showing being happy they could be friends and get well with each other. Also if they are gonna be friends they can show each other positive mood if they are feeling down. Having those types of friends would be nice to have around with you that make you laugh and smile. The attitude that they give you could change as well by how they talk to you. If they talk to you aggressive then it would change your mood.
Making sure you have the right people to have in your life is important beacuse you don't want to feel down all the time and if won't make you feel sad. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
CE7FCD160837 | It's been brought up that student should chose a career and be committed to it before entering high school. Do you think its a good idea for students to be committed to a career at a young age? Even though choosing a career at a young age gives you a early start on researching that career. Choosing a career at a young age is bad idea.
Its been proven that even collage students change a career they want to major in. So when it comes down to committing to a career at a young age there is a high possibility that a student will change it down the line.
Although there about to enter high school students still need more time on choosing s career. Students are 14-15 years old making chooses that even 18-20 havent even desisted on yet and dont even know all there interest and hobbies yet. It's been brought up that before students enter high school they should have chosen and committed to a career. It has come down to my conclusion that choosing a carer and committing to it a a young age is a bad is a because of many reasons. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
CE9843304D87 | I am agree, but sometime it is not possible to make something that we want. There is a lot of thing that we want but we can not to have it. Yeah, he was right to be ourselve in world that is constantly trying to make us something else is the greatest accomplishment. but in some situation we can not do what we want? for example; I want to be a doctor and my family support me for that, but the problem is that I am trying to to learn and search something about human life but I can not, because it is hard for me. Only in one condition I can reach for my goal. if I try my best and I study a lot. then I will be a good doctor.
If we do something for ourselve it will be good because we do the thing what we want it. It will be great to doing something good but we should discase with someone who is so close to us. by asking someone about our problame maybe we solve it. If we want to do something for ourselve so we need to finish high school and university. take digree after all that I will take a good job and then I make a good career for myself and tehn I will be have a great life in nthe future.
sometime it is possible to do the thing what we want. world is to big. whatever we want we can do it but we need someone to support us in the any type of situation if it is bad or good. if it is bad thing then he/she can tell me that it is bad and you can not do that stuff then I will never do that. If it is good thing then he/she can tell me and support me for doing that good stuff.
Everthing is possible in this world if we try and we should search about the thing that we do not know about it. by asking someone who have experience in the thing that we do not have. by searching I can change my life. trying is best to have great life. I will try to make a good life for myself. i have a lot of goal to reach for those goals but I should try because it is hard for me. everything is possible.
for making a good life in this world is not that mach easy that we thing. We need to face to face every problems. if we scare from the problem then we will not be able to do something what we want it before and we can reach it in the future. so we should be do the thing what we want to do. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
CE98C42F51C2 | In my opinion I think the kid's that don't listen to there mom and dad. then They need this program the most. One the older student this telling the younger student what to do. And the older student is acting like there parents. Then if they do the program for like 3 or more time a week then,the younger student will get use to it. And the they will maybe listen to there mom and dad.
How is this program going to help them later on when they have kid's. This is for the older one one. Because he or she is telling younger kids what to do and it pretty much just getting ready when they have kid's later on. And it also teaching they how to respect there orders.
this program is going to help both younger kids and older kids because... Then a older person tells you to something. you should do it. its called respect your orders. Like if u respect other people it dont matter how old you are. You just have to respect older people. And one more time it's just going to prepare the older students when they have kid's. And younger kids how to behave in fort of there parents.
And what i wrote about. Is how is program is going to help they later on in life. How it's going to help both older student and younger student. Also my opinion on who need this program the most. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
CEAD27DE3263 | We tend to accomplish more if we always do something. In my opinion, I think that if people want to accomplish more, then they would do more to make their lives better. For example, a teen who gets eight hours of sleep before school wont be tired then a teen who slept for three hours. The teen who slept more will accomplish a successful school year because he slept earlier. Responsibility is a big role of being able to accomplish something; unfortunately, not everyone's responsible.
There are many ways someone can accomplish something, but they all start out with them taking action. as an example I'm going to use Steve Jobs and Bill Gates. Both of these men started out with nothing. no one knew who these two men were 13 years ago. But that all changed when both of them announce their new technology. If it weren't for them, no one would have these useful items: IPhone, Android, Xbox, Window computers, etc. However, the reason they accomplished all that, was because they both studied and worked hard.
Inactivity can also serve a purpose in a person in my opinion. I think that people who do not want to accomplish something is because they do not want to push themselves into doing so. Another reason I think that they're not pushing themselves is because they don't have anyone to support them or help them out. Those are two main reason why I think people are inactive.
In conclusion, we do accomplish more if we are always doing something. you cannot simply do nothing and wait for it to be accomplished by itself. everything thing you do now will lead to a bigger accomplismnet. If you want to be sucessful, you always have to do something, Even though it's little things like helping your parents cook, or washing the dishes. | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
CEC1115B69DB | When i was younger my parents told me to do different things in life. Get out of your comfort zone and go beyond your wildest dreams unless you go and get it yourself. Would you get out of your comfort zone and chase your biggest dreams? I agree with Emerson statement because, how will you get better, being unique from everybody ,and the end result when you accomplish your goal. This is why i agree Emerson's statement.
PRACTICE.MAKES.PERFECT. I know you've herd this phrase a billion times from your family or friends. This is what Emerson is trying to say. How can someone be better without practicing. Furthermore, how can someone grow without working hard as you can? When i was in middle school i wanted to be in the basketball team. But, i was not good at it. One of my best friend who was in the team told me that he will tech me everything, only if i wanted to work hard and keep practicing with him everyday. We practiced everyday in till tryouts, whenever tryouts came i did really good and i got in the team. i've gotten better from working hard and never giving up on myself.
Do something different from everybody else. My father always told me that when i bring up college. He wanted me to do something big. Yet, not only big but unique unlike everyone else. In my last year of high school i was thinking about taking an online class. So, i got into a online course that will not only give me a credit and see how a online class really works. At the start it was hard for me. Because, i was getting out of my comfort zone. Just imagine being in your house or class with no teacher to help you. However, two weeks later i've gotten better at it. Two months later i finished the class with a B+.
At the end of all of your hard work and time, it will be worth it. When i was taking my online class i was scared, now i feel like i can do all of my classes online if i wanted to. Because, i've experienced it. Its all because of practicing alone or with somebody,also getting out of your comfort zone. You are going to do something beyond if you tell yourself to do so.
Some people say that you dont need to try to do somethings different to grow. Well their wrong here's why, most people cant get used to anything without trying to do so. Moreover, you dont need to master something to grow,because if you try you will now your right from your wrong.
In conclusion, If you work hard and try to get out of your comfort zone to try new things in life you will always ascend and be better! | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
CEC5B40D1688 | The technology that humans have developed is very advance; a lot of time has been dedicated to it, so society can have a better and easier way to access to technology. However, as all things that are crated by man are not perfect, and it has its positive and negative impacts on people. A lot of those impacts that technology have are negative impacts. For example, you loose the opportunity of interacting with other people, you can get addicted to technology, and you can get lazy, and all these negative impacts affect the new generation the most. The little kids end up playing video games their entire childhood; instead of playing outside, and making new friends.
First, technology it is not just to have fun with; you can play video games, but keep in mind that if you abuse of the use of technology you are going to get addicted in a very short period of time. Spending all your time in technology have its consequences. You loose the opportunity to be in contact with the people around you, you can loose your friends if you had any, and most important you can loose your communication that you once had with your parents. You can have hundreds of friends on social media, but it is not worth it if you do not spend time with them. Also one of the most negative impact is that little kids are getting addicted to technology. They are spending most of their childhood playing video games, and doing things that are not going to do any good for them in the future. They should be playing outside with their friends, and enjoying their childhood which is one of the most beautiful things they have. When you are a little kid you are so innocent that you do not have to worry about any problems the adults may have, and you do not have any problems to worry about either. Unfortunately that childhood have to end at some point because nothing last forever, but in the meantime you just have to live your childhood and not worry about any video games.
Second, you can use the internet for any need you may have, for there are hundreds of websites of anything you would like use. For example, shopping online, checking out book, and get any information you want. Some other websites are not quite useful like scams, or some websites that contains virus. At some point you may or may not run into a scam website which are used to obtain personal information that you have put online. They can get that credit card information that you used for your online shopping, your social security number, or even your own bank account number. There are people that work on trying to protect your personal information; they use their knowledge for the good of society, but there are also people who uses their skills and try to get your personal information, and use it for their own benefit. Keep in mind that those people can be smarter than you, and they can take every single dollar that you have in your bank account if you put your information at risk.
Third, you become lazier when you can get any information you want without making a big effort because you have everything at the reach of your hand by having access to the internet. You got so used to getting things fast and without making an effort, and when you have to wait to get any kind of information you get frustrated, for the fact that you have to go through a whole book, so you can that information. Man have been making your life easier by creating all the technological advances you have now. For example, you do not have to make an effort to wash your clothes, or wash the dishes you have been given all of that, so you have became lazier.
At the end technology can result positive impact to society; it has made our life easier, but it has resulted in a negative impact for the new generations. It has made the youth lazier than it was in the old times; teenagers are now addicted to social media, and we are loosing the communication with our parents which is very important to have. Little kids are loosing their childhood in result of the new technological advances that allows them to be playing video games and not going outside to make friends. Technology has put the security of our information at risk by no protecting it enough. Maybe it is the way we use technology, but it has more negative impact than positive impact to our communities around the world. | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
CEC6870D564F | Hi, These is Generic_Name. In my opinion is a good idea the school allowing students to have and use cell phones in classrooms.
First, at all student can use cell phone for any emergency or use the Google translation because sometimes is take minutes to find out in the dictionary. Also, because in some schools Student can't have access to use computer.
Second, Sometimes teachers put some worksheet or order tints to do in Google classroom and we have to do by using a computer and sometimes computer gate very slow and we can do by use cell phone device is sly.
Third. We know some student use cell phone for bad propose like to no't pay attention in class or make bulling other classmate. But, I think if the Schools use different methods like to block some app for example Snapshot or other student use to bulling.
finally, It's convenient to use cell phone in class special wen the teacher is to busy and we can use the cell phone to gate information about math or any other class.
In conclusion,
base in that is necessary to use a cell phone for any emergency. We can finding word that we don't known by using Google translation. It is good to use cell phone for education purposes. | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
CEC71375C061 | Policy1: I think we should be allowed to use our phones in lunch and free times a long as we don't use it in class. Maybe it would help us in a way cause is not fair to us that teachers do use the phone in class and we don't an that way it would be fair for both of us. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
CED4F9C63B9B | The first impressions are almost impossible to change because when people meet new person, their personal information is only what is she or he looks like, so it is hard to change their first impressions, and people do not often change the first impressions.
Firstly, they find the first impressions and guess the person who is she or he because that is what human does every single time when people meet new person. For example, student meets new person who does not look healthy body and the student guess the boy cannot play any sports by seeing his body, but people says that he is the best player on the team. Even if the student watch his game and he plays really good, it is difficult to change the first impressions because he still does not look like athletic person and the student knows how unhealthy he is.
Secondly, people do not often change the first impressions because it is individual opinion so they want to keep it in their mind. For example, there is a man who is very shy and show people that he does not want to talk to anyone, so people decide that not to talk to him. Some day, he talks to his friends and find out he loves talking with people. But his first impressions are shy and not talking with anyone so people cannot talk to him because they are not able to change his first impressions.
However, some people could change the first impression as long as making a good relationship with a person who talks to. For example, there is a man who is really big and angry face. Everyone afraid of talking to him, but a student tries to talk to him and the student find out he is a nice person to talk. Sometime, people can change their first impression which makes the person feel better so the student can talk to easily.
In addition, it could be possible to change the first impression by showing difference between now and before. For example, a student who is being mean to some friends. But some day, the student realize that it is not good to being mean to friends, so he shows the difference which is being nice to friends and helping people instead of being a mean person. Although, the friends change the first impression of the person which makes both of them happier and be able to make better friendship.
In spite of these issues, it is still almost impossible to change the first impressions. So everyone should not focus on the first impressions too much. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
CEE41F7526FA | I have some reasons why I would disagree with the school board because I don't like the idea of staying more time in school. Either way it is not a good idea because the school would face alot of work with the time extended plus it's gonna be more work than ever with the school extending. And I have a lot of reasons why its a bad idea so I guess start the reading the paragraphs right now.
First extending the school day would get a lot of students mad at the school because they want to go home and do whatever they want. The students would have to stay longer in the school and some would be mad and some be happy about it. And students that are bulllies would have a bigger chance on picking on people during the extended time of school. The next day the school would most likely be getting emails from students and parents complaining about the extended school day. While other students and parents wont care and go to school like a normal day and al lot more.
Also the jobs in the school could change like the teachers job and other jobs in the school time would be extended. Some teachers would complain by the extended school day if there gonna do a extended day everyday they are gonna have to be payed more or else the school would die slowly because all teachers,staff and other jobs in the school would quit and go work somewhere else better and get paid more. If one teacher does quit their job because of the extended time he/she would most likely tell other people that the school is terrible then the school would barely get people to work there and in a couple years later probably the school would be abandoned for other people to explore to see the leftovers of the dead school.
Finally the school would change by alot than before it ever has in its couple years of existance. The school would have to face a lot of consequnces like a lot of students posting on the internet about how the school is trash,boring and now they want to go to a different school. And the teachers would complain about if they are going to teach more than ever they want to get bad even more money. And they would have to change the whole school time of the day,the bus time and the students classes time which would took a very long time to do. Either way other jobs in the school would be more difficult than ever for example janitors,staff and teachers.
Even though the school really does want to change original time to a extended time it's not the smartest idea in the world because theres gonna end up being consequnces to it and they are not going to be fun for anyone. Either way next thing you know the county that owns the school will just die because of the extended day. Because then who knows probably no one then later on wants to go the either school in the county anymore and would probably just moved out to go to a better school. So this is why this idea is a bad idea. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
CEE6F38D4ED6 | Yes, it would be nice for students to have a 3-4 of break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. students enjoy summer like everyone else. in my opinion, i'm a student and i would love that my school give us a 3-4 weeks off summer break, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. so that i can relax, go out with my family and friends, and do a lot off crazy things.
In summer we go to different places with my family, we like to travel, we go to crazy water parks, museums, and we go to the zoo sometimes. when you're in school you don't get a lot of time to spend with your family. because you get busy doing your homework and studying.
Summer is the best part of the seasons. in summer is always sunny outside, you can go to the beach, play soccer with your friends and brothers, you can do skateboarding .you can do a lot of things in summer.
In summer you can got to different places with your family. you can travel, visit a lot of places you don,t know and want to go there or you can just relax at your house watching movies, series or shows that you like to watch.
In conclusion i think having breaks is a good idea because you can relax, go out and spend time with your family and friends, and do a lot crazy things. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
CEF302996231 | Dear Dr. Generic_Name,
Thank you for taking time out of your day to read my letter, hope you and your staff are doing well. My name is Generic_Name and I'm currently a Junior at Generic_School. I believe that some students should benefit from taking online classes because we won't have to worry about turning in papers late, or having to hearing teachers to put our phones and headphones away, and also I won't worry about owing school lunch money. Online classes is a should and it can also be a shouldn't, and i will explain why its a should.
In school we all panic when we hear a due date, especially when its up close. Students work better at their pace than rather to wait on the teacher, teachers go slow just for the other students get to know what's going on. When taking tests, or quizzes, we seemed to get rush because we only have that class for and hour and some change. In some cases if we don't finish on time they, will ask us to stay after school. Some of our parents work late nights and won't be able to get a ride back home. Also in school we all get distracted so easily, like from fights that happen in school, drama, and class clowns that are not really doing their work. And kids need to concentrate in their work instead of lacking off.
At Generic_School, phones and headphones are a huge problem. Some of us like to listen to music and work better with it, but however, some teachers don't always allow it in the classroom. Classes at home can be such a big change in a good way, we won't get in trouble if we get found using our phones or even listening to music. A lot of teachers find this disturbing and run to writing us up, but they won't understand how much faster your brain functions when listening to music, it gets you more concentrated into your own work.
Our parents work and the school thinks that they make lots of money, due to that cause the school charges us for the food we eat. In some cases we get milk that's been expired, and they dont even notice it. Classes that we can take at home could benefit us here, we have better food at home and wont worry about if the food that we get at school is expired or not. Online classes can be much cheaper than to actually go to school. At home, we can eat breakfast and lunch and not think about that eating breakfast or too early or if eating lunch is too late.
Thank you once again for reading my thoughts, I strongly agree that our students should benefit from taking online classes while being at home.
Sincerely,
Generic_Name | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
CEFC32741811 | People who have self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas. I think that getting guidance from experts could help make decisions better because most people look and ask for guidance on a lot of things most of them are on decisions to make whether it's a good or bad decision to make.
I have asked people for guidance on decisions i remember i asked my old teacher if i should move to the U.S or stay in my country Generic_City. He told me that it would be better to move to the U.S because i would have more chances of being successful over there than staying in Generic_City and that i would have a better life too and that was one of the hardest decisions i have ever made in my life because i was leaving friends and family behind and i didn't want that to happen.
I have been asked for help before, my friend one day she called me and asked me to help her on her relationship i could tell that she needed help and guidance i could her it in her voice they got into this argument and she told me that it wasn't the first time they have argued before and she told me that it got to this one point that it made her cry so i told her that she needs to break up with him and that he wasn't good for her and if she keeps dating him the argument's could get worse what if he starts getting violent with her and stuff. I told her that it's going to be hard but it's for the best.
People ask for help when they need it or when they want it , However some people may not agree with me because they value their self-reliance and trust their instincts, they think that they should keep their personal problems to themselves but eventually those people are going to start having this feeling like they should talk about it to somebody and ask for their guidance because the same thing happened to me i didn't like telling people what was going on with my life later on i started feeling like i needed to talk to somebody about my decisions and i started to ask my family and friends for guidance. It's not bad to talk to ask people for guidance it can help you make decisions easier. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
CEFDC545C24F | Should high schools extend the school day two hours. This is important because students need time to learn the maternal. I think students will get a better benefit from two hours more. My first reason is students will have a better education learning. My second reason is students wouldn't have to stay after school hours to get get help, while they have extra time in class to ask any questions.
Students will have a much better understanding on the subject. The high schooners would get to learn the maternal more, spend more time on the subject. They would ask more questions on the topic. Students wouldnt fail if they spent more time to learn it. They would have more practice and more additives to do in class. Because some teacher teach it way to fast because of the sols they have to finish all of the units before sols. We have to be prepared for the sols but we have to take time on it learn it.
Students will have time to learn everything, therefor they wouldnt have to stay after school.
Students wouldnt have to waste teachers time after school to caught up what they messed from class. Teachers have to come home to there families too. Most teenagers have jobs so some of them cant stay after school. Some students dont have rides after school. They would have a three day weekend. Only go to school four days of the week. Have time to study on the weekends.
This is why high school should extend two hours more of school. They will have a better understanding. They need time to learn the maternal in time for the sols. The highers schools will have a better knowledge. They would know the maternal on time for the sol comes, more will pass it if they understand it more. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
CF288DDE1328 | Most student enjoy summer vacations, but some educators believe that summer break is too long and that students do not retain information easily. Educators argue that there should be a year-around school, where there would be a 3-4 week off in the spring and fall. But as a student, my position is the opposite of what some educators believe. If our summer keeps as all this past years we can do so many things. When our summer vacations arrive is when all students fell free and out of pression of passing the course year. Summer vacations also open different doors in our life, students chooises are vacations and traveling, others prefer to work, gain money and experience for our future. If summer vacations will be shorter not many students could handdle school, beaks in summer, longer winter break and summer would not have the same impact as summer vactions. It can sound exagerate but that wouldn't be much time to us for do our sumer change.
First of all, In my own experience I like when summer is coming because I know that new experience are waiting for me, but also I like summer vacations because all the "suffer" of final examns and the S.O.L are over once again, and I think passing your goals during the years always deserves and award, in this case, Summer vacations. What educators don't see about summer is that gives us an opportnity to be more responsable; many students like me decide to start working. Working has made me a more responsable man, has teach me how reality is, and that money is not an easy thing, and the easier way I can make money is study. Summer is one of the greates time for students, many students go to new places, to visit old family menbers and pass time whit them. Summer last year gived me the chance to go back to my countrie, I couln't do it during winter or spring because I have to study, and the time educators think is the best for us would't provide the same amount of aventures.
More over, When winter break is coming we all happy but it feels too short, adding a few days wouldn't make it so different, plus your adding the same amount of days in four seasons, time for us will pass flying. I also think that many of us would fell like school is never going to end, I would be so stress out that my preformence during the school could be decreasing more and more. Last time I looked an article were they showed a chart, out of 100 student 80 said that they prefere summer vacations over having longers breaks during the year. After that they made an experiment, during a year they sow how was the performence in the students who's choices was summer vacation, and it got prooved that they were doing better because they were constanly going to school.
On the other hand, educators are not at all wrong, when I start againg the school year I some times don't remenber thing that I sow the year before. Also having so much vacations makes me miss school, been with my friends and learning new things. Educators may have a diferet opinion than I, and they can be the one's who are correct, they said that summer is too long because of their experience, and maybe they had learn less. Educators are people who know more than students because of their understanding in the power of learnig.
In conclusion, summer vacations is the best, and it never has to change the aumount of days that they give to us, is prefectly the days that we all need to refresh from school and things that happened over the year.
Summer bring us new experience and it teachs us things like reponsability, a very importat human thing that we all has to have. I beliebe that we things shouldn't change, people and cientificts had prooved that the best way of lerning is how we do it. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
CF290C0884F0 | To conserve the energy and resourse, we do not should have to work a four-day for week. Some jobs, work during the week, and others in the weekend days. We can not conserve it much of the resourse or energy even they give four days of work, because some workers do their jobs in the week days, others will do it in the weeekend days. This is because there are a lot differents types of jobs, that do not permit they to work only in the week days. Add to more hours its not make a diference because some job are in the night, some in the mornings.. Most of the people they have off and want to go outside to have fun or go to a restaurant have dine, some bussines have to be open in this days that the people have off and want to do something in the weekend day. In my position I don't think we conserve the energy and resourse doing in a four-day work week. It's have to be nesesary that the businesses have people working and open their bussines the 7 days, to those people who go to their businesses. Schools must don't have to chanche the five days to four days in the week. Students can adopted the two hours more but, they will be have three days to spend their time.
One reason why I will be desagree if the system want to change the schedule of the schools is because it's going to affect most of the students, since they don't have a job and will be pass must of the time in their fhones, using the internet, social media, wathing tv or playing video games. Students will be doing nothing productive in their lifes doing this we will waste most of our time. This will be affect in our lifes, I take a position in this situation because I am a students and I know the students hobbies what we like to do, what not and how we wasting our time.
However to add two more hours in the workers scheddule. It can be good for some of them because they don't have towork 3 days, but also going to affect most of the workers, that are parents. Most of the parent can not aply to work the week days. Suppose they aply for work the 4 days, but can be diferents days like their are a lot jobs that have diferents schedule. Monday to Friday, Sunday to Thursday, or Wednesday to Monday.
Schools also chanching the schedule, parents will be have to pay for babysitting for those who have kids.
Not all people have a government job the require only work the week day and weekend days off.
Most of the businesses ask to work 5 to 6 days and which its not have to be Monday through Friday.
Also we can see it's imposible to change to the four-day to conserve the resourses even people work 4 days. People have to work between the 7 days, some have to work 4 days and when this people have off the other half have to work that days because businesses can not be close the 7 days. People must will have to work even diferents day.
In conclusion for me it is not a goog idea to change the schedule of the students, to a four-day, when they have 5 days. Students can do more work in school and learn more and develop their knowladege passing more time in the school. Can be good idea for the people who work because they can have rest more time with family, or doing hobbies. Work 10 hours its good for those who will have off 3 days, but not for students because students have to develop in school more time. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
CF3DC2587708 | I'm strongly agree with the statement of Ralp Waldo Emerson, because unless a people try to do something the person gets more far away from the porpuse. and that happens because sometimes the people lost the interest, and sometimes because the people doesn't want to make an effort or is very difficult to solved it.
while, there are so many reasons why people that think that, their goals are very hard to achieve, because they have to do a lot of test, in those 4 semesters, homeworks, activities, but, suddenly a problem comes to the person life, which is that he has to work at night, have to take care of his mom, he have to pay rent, food, and it's very difficult to think about it, because in those cases is more problabbly that he leave school, and don't follow his dream of graduated from high school or university and get the job that he was dreaming with.
Therefore, even knowing that he was giving up, he started to create a plan, it was a bout a project that should chnge his life, some of his friends tell him, that he will never going to graduated, and that he wouldn't achieve his goal, but, he never give up, and when summer cames. He graduated from the university, 4 months later, he created his own bussiness of tourism and travel.
As a result, he was trying to do something that someone else wasn't doing, he was trying to grow up someting that should make big changes in his life, and in his family. However, I support that sometimes is good to make some changes to your plan, i'm trying to do the same thing, I'm doing my best, to achieve my goals. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
CF45352F8424 | Do you think positive attitude is a key that everyone need in order to be a successful person in life? In my essay I will talk about positive attitude, if it is important or not. In my opinion attitude should be always positive, because it can help you to succeed in work, can encourage people to do their best, even if what they have to do is hard to do it, and it can be a great tool in order to succeed in relationships, and believed in yourself.
When I was working in Mango Paradise, my boss was a really bitter person, that was always angry with everyone in the work, but I was one person that I didn't care about his bad attitude toward us, I was always with a big smile, perhap how he treated us. There was one day that he had a bad day, because one member of his family was in the hospital, and was very delicate, he was an a mood that did not look like he was the same one, he was sad, he was devastated, and worried, because the person that was in the hospital was his wife, she had cancer. So, that same day I asked him if we may talk, he said " Yes", I just wanted to talk with him and tell him that perhap everything, we were there to support him in everything he needed. Unfortunate, his wife pass away, and as I said to him, we were there all the time supporting him, we were there with a positive attitude telling him, that everything will be okay, that his wife is gonna be in a better place where can rest in peace, where she will not suffer more. He was so thankful with us because how we supported him in that bad moments that wanted to increase our salary, many of us accepted, but many others not. He really change since that days, that many of us, we are still working there, and earning more money than we regurlarly earned.
In every human life, there is always a hard problem, that make us to give up, but there is also a person with a positive attitude that makes us to get up, and continue with our life. There was a time in my family where we had a problem of money, my father got fired on his work, we almost lose the house where we were living, because we did not paid the rent in almost four months. My father was devastated, he was looking for a job amost for three months, and he could not find any job to pay the rent, so we would not lose the house. As every wife do, my mom came to him and said "Do not worry sweetheart, we can get out of this problem as we always do, I am here to support you". My father almost immediately changed his attitude, he gave to my mom a big smile and said to her " Thanks babe to be always with me, and for trust on me", he get up take the keys of the car, and went out to look for another job. He found a new job where he earn a little bit more than his previous job, so our money's problem disappear.
Believe in yourself not always is easy, some times we though that is difficult to understand yourself, but there is always a lovely person that help you to believed in how strong you are, and to see all the thing that you are capable to do. When I was in 10 grade, I had an algebra teacher that was always telling us that we had to believed more in ourselves, sometimes we did not do what she asked us to do, because we did not understand, many of us were disappointed of ourselves, because we didn't even try to do it. In the first quater many of us in our class period failed. We though that our score would never change. After that many student changed their attitude, but it was not because we wanted. It was because our teacher talked with us, and made us to believe that we can do anything that we want to do. Some time later many of us had changed, as we changed, we saw that our teacher changed too. The second quater passed, and the students were happy because their score in the algebra class, many students's score were from 50 to 90, it happened because all us changed our attitude in different manners. We paid more attention as we should since the beginning of the year, we started to believe in us, we started to do things even if we didn't know how to do it. Until this moment I am thankful with my teacher, because of her, we changed to a better score, because of her we believe more in ourselves, she just wanted our best, but sometimes we made her get angry, because we did not believed in ourselves. We changed, all of us did, and she became for me the most good person as a teacher and as a friend, she was always supporting us, and teaching us. That is why until this moment she is one of my favorite teacher, and I think that for my other classmates she is too. For that experience that I had, I think that possitive attitude is something extremely important in every human life.
Our attitude has to be always positive, even in the worst moment of our life.
Some people think that a person should have a positive attitude just during a very important moment, or in happy moments, this is not correct, they all are wrong, we need to have a possitive attitude always in order to succeed in life, and to be happy. In our homes old people as grandmother, grandfather, sibblings and parents, need to give the example, so kids will take it, and they will be confident and a positive person. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
CF453C152FD5 | This is an easy choice technology has a negative affect on people. There are many reason why but three big ones are. one you lose a lot of communication skills. another is you only see things through your phone. And finally you lose family time or time with friends .
The first reason is people lose communication skills. such as you dont see people face to face you are just texting them and you dont know how to talk to them in person so you dont hang out with them you just text them. and they pretty much just a become and online friend. another example of this is during a job interview you don't know how to talk to someone. it's really hard to do stuff when someone doesn't have communication skills. and you can get food online so you won't have to talk to people.
most people just see things and hear about stuff thats happening. don't go and explore or experience thing the just go on the Internet. because everything around us is technology based. you can't go anywhere without the internet or a TV. so everyone has gotten used to that so they don't have a need to go out or play outside if they have games on there phone,computer,iPad. so people don't have to travel because you can face time people or use other apps to see people. you can order food from uber eats so you don't have to leave your house and people won't know how it feel to be in a restaurant.
finally people wont be spending time with family because of the internet. because someone could be watching a YouTube video and then another then after a while it could be dark outside and you just lost the day and havent said anything to your parents because you have been watching YouTube or Netflix. people get used to that life style and a lot people won't change because its become a habit and its a bad habit to over come. people also forget about there friends because they just wanna be on there phone alone watching videos,playing games , watching TV. and you forget about family and friends not on purpose and you still do it without knowing. And its not just kids it's also adults. They pay everything online so they only leave for work and nothing else. then come back order food or get groceries online. and cook while watching TV or on Facebook . | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
CF4E6D77F514 | Our cell phones could help us in many situation, but they can also distract us in many ways. Some teachers thinks that they should let their student use their cell phones for educational purposes while other don't. Cell phones could affect a student in their process of learning.
A cell phone can be a distraction for anybody specifically for a student. If students are allow to use their phone in their classroom for educational purposes they could get distracted with the other apps on their phone. For example: Sanpchat, Instagram, Facebook, or even a text message. All of this apps could distract the student from doing what he or she is supposed to be doing in the class.
All students most do their own work at all time to show the teacher what he or has learned in class. Having access to a cell phone in class could tempt the student to cheat on their class work or test. Also students could send each other answer through a text. Classroom should be a red zone at all time so students won't have the chance to cheat in their work.
Every student should be focus on one specific thing thing while they are in school which is to have good grades in their class. By being able to have access to their cell phone in class the student won't try as hard to keep their grade up. Not having their phone would push them to do better in the class. The student will have all their attention on getting their assignment done in time.
Some students know how to control them self while others can't. Cell phones are a big distraction for teenagers now days. Most of them can't go anywhere without their phone in their hands. All classroom should be a red zone just so students could put all their focus in school work. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
CF7AF5FA5DDC | Some people say that having a positive attitude is one of the keys to success in life. Everyone around the world is trying to be successful in life, people fight for that everyday. A positive attitude is really important when you are trying to be successful, is sometimes what motivates you to keep going and achieve your goals.
However, just having a positive attitude is not going to make you a successful person. To reach the success in life you need to be proactive, you need to believe in yourself, work as hard as you can, and do what you love because your soul and hearth is what guide you during your life.
When you look at the big Hollywood stars, or the players in the NFL, you can see that they successes in life, making millions of dollars and doing what they love. Believe or not, but they gave everything they had to be there. It was a mix of positive attitude, hard work, and talent.
In conclusion, a positive attitude is the key success in life, but only who's really trying and giving their hearth into this, will be successful. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
CF961DD37C82 | At this period, technology changed our life. Such as technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. Although some people say the use of technology had positive effect on people because It improve efficiency of people's life, actually in my opinion I think the use of technology had negative effects on people because It reduce people's communication to each other and make people more loneliness.
some people say the use of technology had positive effect on people because It improve efficiency of people's life. Our life pace very fast. So, the efficiency is very important. However work and life because time is money. Thus depend this situation technology provide more fast more easily way occupy the primary market. More and more young people don't go outside. they just stay at home because Internet have everything they want.
in my opinion I think the use of technology had negative effects on people because It reduce people's communication to each other. Have a conversation to others is very important part in our life. Some thing you can't learn by Internet and book but you can learn it by take with people. At a family, which member rely technology too much. It will inflict some crack by lest conversation.
in my opinion I think the use of technology had negative effects on people because It make people more loneliness.
Technology has big attraction to us because it is interesting. But also people are easily indulge. People will in to a world for themselves and don't like talk to people face by face. Finally they will be deserted fact life that become a stoic person.
Depending those reason, I think the use of technology had negative effects on people. Although some people say the use of technology had positive effect on people because It improve efficiency of people's life, actually in my opinion I think the use of technology had negative effects on people because It reduce people's communication to each other and make people more loneliness. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
CFA41112FF1B | Hello, I would like to visit your hospital, the one is next to Sanger Avenue because I would to learn more about how to a good doctor, I think it will be really helpful for me because it will help with me with my carreer. beause
I am learning how to a Doctor in the Generic_School, Being a Doctor is my Biggest dream and is my favorite job since I was 5 years old. In my Opinion, I think that this a great hospital for other people come and learn how to be a Doctor, However, this can benefit your hospital because maybe the people that come from different Universities may want to work in this Hospital and that will improve the sevice of your Hospital and help more people or safe more lives.
I think that this is a important job because you can sefe lifes, I think you should let people to visit your Hospital because their are mnay people that want to learn how to a doctor, they try thier best to learn ,and they / we need the espirience a profesional, In my Openion, I think they try their best because they want to safe lives just like you do or they want to help their family. In my Opinion, If you let me / us come to your Hospital it will be really helpfull for everyone because our dreams are to help people and sefe lives and oour dreams can not coem true without your help.
their are millions of peole that needs your help and our help, if learn how to be a Doctor we can we can work together so we can safe lives, if more people becomes a doctor more lives will be save. thats why we need expert to help us become doctors. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
CFA55621F274 | One of John Lubbock famous quotes is, " Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it". Some people think that setting yourself goals is something that can't help you in life and you have to follow what others do to be able to find success. They feel that people don't have enough potential to do things and by doing that they have to do what others do and not showing who they really are . I believe that choosing your own character is a way on finding who you really are because you can be able to show things that you never thought you were able of doing, you can set goals and try to put your best on accomplish them, and by setting your own character you can be able to help other people to follow the right path to success.
My first reason why is good of showing your own character is that you can show things that you never thought you were able to do. you can be scared of certain things in life or wont be brave enough to try them but you have to be able to get out of your conference zone and try to step for yourself. this can help you in so many things later in life because you can create or be able to experience new things that can be come very interesting in your life.
setting your own character can provide you on setting yourself goals too by believing in yourself and working hard everyday for what you want. it can help you in so many ways because you can see your own potential and see who you really. not being lazy it all and you would be able to have more energy in your system and try to work for something that can help you in the future and being proud of doing.
Last reason why setting your own character is a good thing because you can help a lot of people too by showing them the right path of success. you can be able of leading them to work hard everyday and help them in motivating by not giving up easy on what they want to accomplish. try to provide them certain thing what they can or cant do making them things a little hard but believing in their self and working harder then usual.
As you read, setting your own character is something that can bring you always to success, it motivates you and you can believe more in yourself on what you can do and getting out of your own conference zone. Help other people whose doing things that they are not supposed to and leading them in the right path, and you can accomplish so many things by hard work. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
CFBD5DD8ECFD | Having shorter summer break can be beneficial for students to remember information. Although, some students enjoy having long summer breaks, but I think there should be year-round schools because students can have 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall.
I believe it is enough for students to have 3-4 week break in summer because long summer break can make students bored and forget all information that they already learned in school. For example, in three weeks I can go to beach with my parents and friends. I can start my basketball practices, learn new skills, and be more active. Also I will not forget any informatin that I learned in school in three weeks. So this is the good reason that schools should have three week summer breaks.
The second reason that schools should be year-round is because students can have longer winter breaks and celebrate the new year with their family. For example, one of my friend loves winter break and he always wanted to go back to his country and celebrate the new year with his family but he never got chance to celebrate the new year with his family because he didn't have time because of school. So having longer winter break can help most of the students to go to their country and celebrate the new year with their family.
The last reason that schools should be year-round is because students can get a week off in every season of the year. For example I love to go out with my friends in spring because it's close to summer and weather is very nice to spend time with your friend. Me and my friends always like to play soccer in spring because it is so fun and you can enjoy the weather while you playing soccer. In addition I can rest and sleep more during the weeks off in each season, so I don't get tired and get bad grades in school.
In the end I agree with having year-round schools because students can have 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. So government should start thinking about these issues and make schools year-round. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
CFD0D13D3180 | Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill got the concept that "success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.". Many people failed and successed in life. Some people learn by their own mistake, fail is part of growth. Others, feel like to fail is being a loser and cannot admit their defeat from a battle. In other words, they have no modesty. Success consist to not give up on your goals, to not leave your dreams from a simple mistake; to not describe yourself as a coward.
Many people failed during their career, even the most professionals, but they kept trying. It may be that to fail bring some issues of closed minds, fears, etc. For example, There is a doctor that knows the hard work to finally done with college plus to achieve what you'd love to be. This doctor studied for 7 years, this is a huge and long way of his career. As you know doctors never stop studying because the technology changes every year. Therefore, the start is not easy as, others, thought because the first stage of college, it may be the hardest stage than the others. Some people fail the first test, or the first semester so they prefer to abandon their studies than do better in college. This doctor have failed on the way of his career, but prefered to ask for help instance of giving up. The importance of failing is to learn and the importance of learning is to success in life. Above this, a 15 years old guy used to fail in High School and this student was down-hearted, but the family supported him without criticize him. It was not easy because some are not smart enough, but this 15 years old guy put a little bit of effort and now he is a doctor in Spain.
Failure to faliure is the key of succes. Besides, Failure gives you more knowledge of your mistake and opens your mind to discover news to things to learn. For example, a cook is trying to do new dishes from differents cultures. Now, the cook wants to try peruvian dishes because the gastronomy of Peru is one of the most populars in the world. Also, this would be a benefit because will gain more money. By trying these new dishes, the cook fails because most of the customer did not like the food plus received many critical comments. As many cooks receives many critical comments, they decide to abandon the kitchen and do something different. This cook enjoyed when he commited a few or big error; to do better next time. Learned to do better the new peruvian dishes, listened to the rest of people and finally, succeded in the kitchen.
Some feel ashamed to fail, they usually compare themselves to others because life is a competition and this may bring issues of insecurity. That is one of the biggest problems that many people have in these days. If there are 2 lawyers that wants to face a case of an innocent and important person, who is involved, in a serious problem. The best lawyer would defend the case and will be recognized as one of the best, would get inmmediatly many jobs for being recommended. On the other hand, if a lawyer fails a case would not get inmmediatly many cases often. Therefore, the lawyer knows that to fail have a positive side of learning, gives you more skills of how to face any case.
In conclusion, as Churchill said that to fail is the start to success. As many people fail, they learn. Some people are not smart enough, but they put effort of what they want to do. Even though they fail, they keep trying because is the ability of their knowledge. People that are already professionals, they make mistakes and enjoy of their mistakes because they learn more of their speciality. Finally, even if you want to be the best of something, do not feel ashamed because life is a competition and do not closed your mind of making a few mistake. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
CFD454F55693 | The American jazz legend Duke Ellington was famous because of jazz music for being so good at what he did.
he said this phrase " A problem is chance for you to do your best" and what the means is that if theres a problem with something you can try your best or do your best to fix that problem think of a solution or make a solution or to that problem to do good and keep going forward to fix that problem and that's the meaning of the phrase hat Duke Ellington said.
The phrase that Duke Ellington said is a good phrase and i totally agree with it because the problem you have or that you will get is a chance for you to do you best at fixing it or solving because the problem will give you a chance to do your best unlike if you come across a problem of just get a problem and you dont try to fix it or dont care or sit back and just watch your problems just pile up and then problems just come and come one after another then you have more then one problem and its just better if you do good on your first problem and you fix an if its big problem and you over come it at the end you will feel great like Duke Ellington he is now legend at jazz music and you know t is not easy to get were he got to be called a legend at jazz music and on his way to the top to become a legend all ways remembered every were you go for he had to over come lots of problems the hate the way he was going to play jazz were he would play his jazz to start up who could give him a boost or help with the jazz to be known more around him were he would get more new instruments money for a place to keep all his music how would he sell his music and all those problems he had to over come and fix and he still made it to his dream and know he is legend.
In conclusion when there is a problem its good to do your best at it or any problem even if you have more then one problem just over come because in the end it will turn out to be a happy ending. | 2.5 | 1.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
CFEC920440CE | We accomplish more by doing tasks that we are assigned with to complete.
We have always get something done if the tasks or assignments are done.
Take for example people that work jobs, day and night they tend to get work or tasks or assignments done.
How do they get stuff done, workers usually plan it out like steps to go though to complete them if they dont follow the steps like how are they going to complete the task or assignment to get it done. Workers always need to plan it out before proceeding to the task or assignment to finish or complete. For example Generic_Name wants to figure out how to complete his project, he need to plan step by step and what materials he needs for the project. He follows the step by step plan but realizes what he needs to do later on he gathers the materals and starts to complete his project just by always doing it.
All of us always have to something to complete any tasks or assignments to finish.
It's not going to work if we dont always doing something or plan it out , it's the reason why if you wanna get it stuff done you have always do it in order complete it. For example take school students for a example, they tend to always to get work done so they can free time to themselves and usually making sure the answers they write down are correct to get good grades. School students have determation to complete classwork they're assigned to, so later on they don't have to complete it for homework at home for free time. It's better to always complete work so you don't have to complete later on. For example any job work usually has work to do like car manufactures , they have a assembly to work on because it's where the cars are starting to be made by the workers in the assembly line. They have to work the machines to put the parts on the cars that are being work on so it can shipped of to the car dealership. Everything revolves around on always getting something on time, so it doesn't become a problem later on. Everyone like to job workers to school students alwayss have to something , its why we tend to get stuff done.
Always accomplish it by doing it
Reasons why, we have to do it if we tend to get our task or assignments done then that work doesn't get it the way of what you are trying to on the next task. Accomplishing that we are trying to get to is a good way to start off, you see like CEOs of a company planning what they want done and to figure it how to accomplish it. For example take CEOs they're good at getting stuff done and accomplished it pefectly cause they own businesses and tell his workers what food products or drinks that stores need for people to attract to buy their goods or clothes. People always have to plan to work towards to they want to achieve or accomplish even for their future. it's not going to work if you don't put the effort into the assignment or tasks to make it happpen. You always have to make sure what you want and to make it happen so that your future has more opportuniites.
In conclusion Always put the effort into it so you can accomplish on any work,task, assignments that you can achieve later on in your life. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
CFFD84E8F43B | My exmple:
My opinion is that all the student taht can take drama, music, or art or any other class it is good because many students partcipated in many activities with other's school, or they made many show where invite to the family.
or the future the can be the teacher for the next generation coming.
If the student graduated from the class that they taking be better for then because maybe some student have more oportunity that others they can be progress maybe they can be teacher or they can be gave examples how they can duda with your class, and the people believe that all the student taking any class the people believe that they can change the future they can be better the future for all new generation can help with the poeople that need help with something.
When the student taking like a drama class they can be actor, or they can be supervisor of the drama show or they can help with the ideas how can see better the shoe, movies, or the student taking music class can be compositor of music manager from any artist they can have more oportunity to practice all that they learning about the class that they graduated. The student that have.
All parents believe that your childrens be better that they was the parents gave the oportunity of they can have a diploma from any class that they takinng or from the high school or collage if they continue with any subject that they want to taking. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 |
D001F6D3A0D0 | Everybody would like to be succesful in the life, and that's possible, but is not easy you have to try one time and one more time until you have what you want; it doesn't matter how many times you try for it. In my opinion there are a lot of people that if they fail one time they give up and shouldn't be like that because you will be happy if you complete your goal, you will be a good example to help others to be successful, you can earn more than you expected.
Complete your goal can be really important for you, and will make you happy, for example, my Mom wanted to have a beauty salon, but she knew that it wouldn't be easy; she started with a small room and a few customers, sometimes she didn't have custumers, and that made her think to close the beaty salon, but she never gave up, now she has a big room with a lot of customers; she is happy because she is doing what she likes, and the most important part she never give up. That' is why we have to try many times until we are happy for what we have or what we are doing.
Some people would like to have an example to make their goals, and you can be a good example if you don,t give up at firts time that you fail, for example, I have a cousin, Generic_Name, she was a bad student; she didn't care about her grades, tests, homeworks, and nothing about the schools. when I moved to live with her, she saw my grades and all that things that I do. She stared to ask me how I can have good grades in the tests and be successful, and I said to her," you need to have more enthusiasm for the school" ,and now she has a really good grades and she is going to graduate this year. If we don't stop even if we fail, we can hel others to be successful.
Some people might say that you lost the time trying something many times, however, you can earn more than you expect if you try as much as you can, for example, I saw a video on facebook; there was a man that was loking for a job to support his family; he went to many places, but nobody gave him a job. One time he was walking on the street, and he saw a man trying to fix his car, and without thinking he went to help the other man after that the man was thankful for the help, and he offered a job for the man. The man who was without job; he didn't know that he will get a job on that situation, what would happend if the man would be sleeping in his house; he would never get that job. That is why we never have to lose the enthusiasm to be successful; we never know what is prepared for us.
It is clear that you will feel good if you complete your goals, and you will be a good example of persistence to help others to be successful, you will earn more than you expect if don't give up at the first time that you fail, and maybe is not easy, but you have your whole life to make it happen, and nobody will tell you when to stop; it doesn't matter how many times you try or you fail. The most important part is that you will be successful if you are constant and and what you are doing. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
D0056301ADA8 | Many individuals want to pursuit their goals to succeed. It's basically a career academy, to help people like us to have an amazing future. Adults think it's fun and educational, other people think is boring or noneducational. Every once in a while people would want to visit an opportunity company because if they help me and I could help them, convince others to participate, and they could help me become more and more successful.
First, they help me and I help them. I'm interested in Landscape Design, I would want to learn more about that work force. Many things about Business Management, improving a business is worth any companies while. In return for them helping me, we could talk about improving the managers company to draw more attention. It's a win-win for both me and them.
Second, I would convince others to participate. When I get the help I want, I could explain to different individuals that there is many work opportunities. For example, if they want to work in Construction or Welding the company can teach them about that work force. Gathering people for a job opportunity could be hard. For example: giving out fliers, business cards, or writing a book and selling it. Only what matters is to convince others to part-take in an opportunity.
Last, the company could help me become more and more successful. In the future when success comes my way, I would start my own company/opportunity work. On the behalf of the first company/opportunity-work, who has helped me be the best in the future. This is a little off hand, but it's for the one who has made me successful. Many other individuals, adults and young teens think its a waist of time or this won't help me in the future. In reality, opportunity work will help you to be successful or famous.
In conclusion,
I would help them back and help their business grow to be the best. I would return the favor of them letting help me. In the future, I would want to grow be or be famous. I feel that opportunity for future working is very important. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
D01F88C1F2A0 | I believe that when people have their first impression on something they can change, people can have different impression and different changes no one has the same attitude as others
.Sometimes they don't even change because they don't care about it, and some of the people they get altered on something or on someone, it's based on what experiences people already had .
Some people don't even change when they have their first impression because they don't even care about it and people can change when they really give them a bad impression about them. Sometimes they keep doing the same thing every day and they don't even care about other people who are talking about them. But when they get another impression they start to think on what they did wrong and they analyze it. People start to change when they really need to change who they are. And to change takes time some people don't change quickly because they can commit the same thing without thinking it.
People can get impress on relationship about betraying each other, they can get altered on something or on someone . In a relationship their are always going to have problems it could be jealous, toxic, and bad influence. Many adolescents are dying just because they give them a impression about her/his boyfriend betraying them with another one and they don't even think about how hard is goig to be to that person knowing that they betraying them in that moment. Being on a relationship is not to impress others that they can get jealous at, sometimes changing is hard but it's a good way to have a good relationship.
In my experience, when I had my first impression I think that it was impossible for me to change myself. In that moment when they told me that I was a girl who disappointed other people about my attitude, I really feel very disappointed in me that I think negative everyday. And that I can not do what other people are good at. It was impossible for me to change my attitude because I was use to things that it was good for me but for others was not. So one day I say that I was going to change who I'm no matter how hard it was but it was going to be possible for me to change with or without help.
I believe that when people have their first impression on something they can change. changing is a good way to show to everyone that you are not the same person you use to be, and that every impression that they going to give you is going to be a way to try and to not commit the same thing in the future. People can say that it's impossible to forgot what we did in the past but when we try every day to forget it, we can get better to it. Everyone are not perfect but we can get better at changing our attitude on not trusting people who we think that it's not the kind of people were are going to trust. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
D0211302AE30 | The limitation of human contact due to technology has a positive effects on people lives. It is a faster and easier way of getting information on topics that humans want to learn about and takes you to wed sits that can help people what they are looking for and get to read about it to more. I think technology helps people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. Although people can check out books,shop,and play games with out speaking to another person nevertheless, Technology has a positive effect on people lives, to be able to complete many tasks with out having contact with others, and it is faster and easier to get information more quickly.
Technology has a positive effect on people lives and to be able to complete many tasks with out having contacts with others. Technology has many benefits for humans it can be a good way to to complete tasks you have to do. Technology helps you improve your skills and many other things. Studies have showed that we need technology for studying purposes and research projects and school activates that our teacher sign us to do. Some teachers like using the internet for lessons to make it more exciting to learn about what we are leaning about in class and be able to read the notes on a near pod and do it at our time and really get to learn about it more.
Personally for me, I like using technology for projects it helps me get more information more quickly. It is faster and easier to look up things about my topic. The internet is a good source to use because it has a lot of information and different things. For example I did a project for history and I used the internet to do it. My topic was about Anna Frank and her dad and what she went though as a little girl at a young age and how she died and why it was remembered and why we still talk about It. This project was all online and we had to use special website to use for the project. All my articles were online and i've learn more about the holocaust it was and about what happened to Anna Frank. I read a lot of articles and books of her.
people can check out books,shop,and play games with out speaking to another person. Books are very good sources to get information from. If people go to the library they have sections like fiction or non-fiction and many more and helps people explore and find books they are looking for. They can look around and pursues books and take it home and read it. They can play games with out talking to each other. If we didnt use technology and only used books it would take longer to get information if we only used books. kids wouldnt be excited if we only used books for our projects.
In conclusion, The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a positive effects on people lives and technology allows people to complete many tasks with out having contact with others. Technology has many benefits for humans it can be a good way to to complete tasks you have to do for school and work. Technology helps you improves getting to learn the topic more. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
D03AC4A82463 | do you enjoy peolple that is contantly traying to meke you momethimg else?
Some people believe that is good to meke people change because they might like the person but not the person's personality. I'm not agree, becase if someone loves you they are not going to try to make you change, they knew how you were and even thought knowing your deffects they decide to be with you, and to love you how ever you are, if they try to change you means thet tey do not leve you the way they say, so is better to get away from them.
If someone loves you they are not going to try to make you change, dont let anybody to make you change, because if they really loves you they need to learn to loves you, and your deffects matter what.
They knew how you were and even thoght knowing your deffects they decide to be with you, and to love you no matter what, just be yourself do not let anybody play with your mind, because all people are going to try to make you change and they are going to even start say bad things about you but you know who you really are.
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f someone ever try to make you change means that they do not really loves you the way they say, so is better to get away from them becase it can be that they can hurt yourself.
However you can change if you want just remind if you change is a big step and it's because you want to change not because people is asking you to change bvecause if they love they are not going to make you change, they are going to treat you good. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
D03BCE849DEA | John Lubbock wrote one's "your character will be what you yourself choose to make it." I believe that we can choose our own character traits.
Everyone is different we all have distinguishing quality's, put it this way if your an apple and your around mangos every day, is not goint to be different even if they trying to make you a mango your still going to be a aplee.
Going back to what John Lubbock wrote, "Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."
i belive this prompt is right we can choose our own character traits.
We can be happy, sad, angry, or crazy. People are not going to tell us when we can or can't do.
I dont like when people tell me staff for example, I dont like when people are trying to make me something im not. I can choose what i want to be. This is why i belive that we can choose our own character traits. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
D03CE04CF47C | "People believe in praising a student work to build self-esteem, even if the work is not the student best effort". First, you have to make respect your self, because if you don't do that change, people never is going to respect you and that is something you have to achieve. Second, making the best effort is very good in the today society probability not every one cares about how much you work some people just doesn't see that way. Third, another way that you can make your self respect is acting with a good behavior that's what people see on a person.
To be self-confident. In order to learn students needs to put more attention in class and on what they're doing. First, learning doesn't have anything to do with self-confident, because learn and self-confident are two different things. Second, if you trying to make your self respect you have to start respecting others first, and if you respect then they are going to respect you. Third, I believe that true self-esteem come from achievement, because you earned not is just there for you that is something you have to earn.
In conclusion, self-esteem is not something easy to have you have to work harder to earned that privilege, I don't think school's have something to do with self-esteem or self-confident, but that's something you have to work to get it. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
D044FCEAE0D7 | Based on my experiences
I agree with Emerson's statement when he said, ''Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow''. sometimes in life we have to do things that we already have mastered but it never grow. One time when was little child I learned that I can't master the things that I already have done.
For example; My brother took his master degree when he was 22 years, now he wen back to school to take his master degree again .He regret what he already took his master degree in the past and come back to take it again it did't help him it all. another example my friend decided open his old store after the government shut it down. he open store and the government came and shut it down again. I learned in this life somethings that we mastered we should leave it behind and move on to different things. I try do something I dont liked it didn't work it all but when I try work on the stuff and things that I like it works and master it no matter what the thing is. This why in life we should master the things we like and never go back to it .
While, I understand that some people disagree with Emerson's statement when he said, ''Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow'' and could be right sometimes we should master all the things we have been done in the past .
These are the reasons and specific examples why I agree with Emerson's statement when he said
''Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow''. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
D06951B19A28 | Most people believe that working in a group is more beneficial than working alone. Other people think otherwise, they say that working alone is more beneficial than working in a group. People is different, they have different believes and ways to work.
Some people prefer working in a group for many reasons. One of that reasons is that people in a group get more things done in less time. They say that is better working with more people because when you work alone you get bored or you don't get motivated as the people that works in groups. Working in a group is better because people can share their ideas with the other people in the group and they can do a very good work using all those ideas. Also, the work can be divided in equal parts, and that's fair, in that way everybody have the same amount of work to do.
Some people think otherwise, they prefer working alone for many reasons. First, it is a little bit boring because they don't have nobody to talk and to share their ideas but they know what they are going to work with. They can do their work in their own way, they can take all the time they want to do the work. Second, they do not have to wait for people to tell them what to do or to ask if the work that they did is correct. Third, people can edit their work many times without asking other people what they think about it. Another reason is that people does not have other people rushing them. And sometimes people that work in groups have a lot of issues because they do not agree with other people work, and a lot of times the grade that they got for that work is the same for every group member. That means that if somebody made a mistake every group member will be affected because of that.
In conclusion, working alone is more beneficial because of a lot of reasons. Every person have their own way to work but if you work alone you are not allowed to get in issues, arguments, problems and bad grades. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
D06C0F3D5553 | People love doing their favorites things where it will keep them safe and healthy. Activity means when you are doing something like playing sport, going outside, or participating in some type of competitions. There a lot of activities, you can choose and participate in it. My favorite activity is playing with my friends at national parks. The choice, I chose is playing with my friends at national parks because it keeps you healthy and unstressed.
To start, one reason I chose is that playing outside keeps you healthy. For example, I had one friend like some years ago, but now we don't talk because we kind a faded, so we used to play a lot. One time my health was getting bad because I stayed at home all the time and doing nothing then I talked to my parents about my health and they said that I should play outside with my friends, go somewhere special where you haven't been. Then, I went to the parks and played there tag, played hide and seek, and played soccer. I had fun and after some months, my health got better and I just continued playing those 3 games. It's important because nobody really wants their body to have some problems and then they regret, so that's why you should go outside and play with your friends.
In addition, other reason, I chose is that playing outside doesn't give you a stress. For example, in 2016, I had this big stress about school and about homework and what we do in classroom. I just couldn't focus on my studies and got like bad scores on the test. Then I tried to find the way to get out of the stress and it said that you should go outside, do activities with your friends that you like. I asked my mom about this and she said yes to me then I started to go outside with my friends everyday and I was kept forgetting about my school and homework which was good for me. I didn't have any stress after in 2016. it's important to be not stressed because then it affects on your study and also it affects your health, so that's the other reason, you should go out and hang out with your family and friends.
In conclusion, playing outside helps you not stressed out and keeps you very healthy. As a result pf these reasons will help you in your life and honestly these two reasons are actually reliable, you just have to follow them and there you go, your life will be amazing. Playing outside and doing more activities help you a lot and it doesn't give you any bad day or anything like obviously you don't want any and bad situation to be in your life, so follow them. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
D06EDF336392 | A city council is debating for the adoption of the curfew for teenagers. That create an enormous positives and negatives reactions the rabble who is for the curfew and who disagree this and said we are in a free country. This laws prohibit to see a teenager on the street at 10 P.M weekday and midnight weekend. In this prompt we will show the reason why the curfew can be a marvelous benefit for teenagers and keep them out of trouble.
In beginning, the decision is reassuring for the parents. For example, when the parents know where their children are that can help them to stay calm. Because sometime we have a parent suffering from high blood pressure and don't know where their children are can affect them. In this case, parents are the main piece of the education of children. When the parent stay at home with their children that can help them to planning the schedule of the sleeping period to be the optimal version of parent of their children. If this case, parents can have a few control into the life of their children. the idea there is to leave a parent with their children to help them to be close and to know each other. Because we have a french proverb what said "Tell me who do you walking with and I will tell you who are you?" And the best people for approve your friend and answers us the fabulous question "Who are you?" Is our parents.
Furthermore, this law would reduce work of 911. Because everyone know that most of the crime are commit at night and that can not be the moment where we leave our teenagers outside. For example that will help the 911 to reduce call for emergency at night. Because we never know what can happen in a teenagers party, they can do a prank call challenge, they can have a fire in party, or they can fight. In other case, the law can heaven preserve them from eventual aggression in the minor. We do not know who the people who walk in our street and their mentality. We have immensity and variety of people in our street like drugs dealer, a daring, and a rabble we do not go to let our children walking in this environment at night. In this case, the law can decrease a criminality rate in the street. Because teenager are the principal target of people in the street because they are easily influenced. This easily influenced can associate them with a sort of people disreputable.
In auditioning, the curfew can help a teenagers in their education. that can help teenager to study. Because the first priority of a teenager is school and they can have time for studying, that decision can create the future amazing men and women in the future for emergence of our city. In this case, that can help teenagers to sleep early. To have a fantastic performance in everything we doing, we need to have our eight hours of sleeping that is also the case of school. To have a marvelous performance at test and at class we need to sleep the time recommend by a specialist. In this case, teenagers can learn to be organize and responsible. Because the curfew can sharpen their sense of priority what is actually to back home before 10 P.M. And this sense of priority can help them to be a wonderful adult.
Finally,to sum up the situation, we saying our vision about the beneficial effect of the curfew in our marvelous city. The beneficial effect what can impact our the families situations, the local authority, the society and in school, or class. That rule can be very strict for some people, but that is after a long analyze the best way to put our teenagers safe. The curfew can assure the best future for the children in our city and
United State of America. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
D08BCAC0B1D6 | what ever we have to accomplish we will all do it until we beat it and be big in live getting threw challages that we have never facesd before. Nothing in our live will stop use from doing what we would like to do in the furture. if some tell you that you will never get there in live dont belive what other peolpe thing about you, just do you that you will be albe to do anything in live. also It would be great if alot of thing could be done but how by alot of people working on only one thing that's for sure would finish the proeses quicker and get other thing start alot fast, but they just can't everyone has a part to do when they are working on project, that would be working on building new cars and, new home. that one thing that people would wish to do if they could accomplish anything they would go right ahead by do it and finish it until they secces accomplish it, what they dream for finley happened.
One way to example how we can do this is by getting a job or something that he/she would like to do in live to be the best they can be or just be their own boss by having your own bunisses, no one telling you what to do or nothing like that but one thing that they have to do is keep track of how make people are working for you, pay those who are warking all day and who ever is on time for work. but that for who own there own bunisses. Like for us we work for other people at store, fastfood placse, divilering other plasce that you guys can thing of. We always start somewhere when we first start working getting our own place paying for our own stuff all the cool stuff you can get with your own money.
everyone will start out easy but when they want to do better they want to accomplish there dream and do better and bigger things in there lives, to do what they always want to do so they give it a try unti they have try it out how it is and if its going well they go for it keep move front to accomplish what they alway wanted to do in there live. Helping out in the real world making your ideas help other peolpe to help them get most of your ideas off of you. everyones dream is alway to own a nice big house, with nice cars a big pool in there backyard. But there one thing to that when you do accomplish your dream, you have all this money you will want to just party. but its not all about the money spending it going to party, just doing the right thing to help out in the world there people that really need it the most anyone can do anything if they work for it, like what every you want to be or become you can just go with it no body is going to stop you if you just put your mind to it. Just you and only you will do anything in this world you will be able to accomplish big things in the furture ahead of us will be the next step to your seccess. our furture await us for new people to accomlish bigger and better things | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
D09D2C17FB38 | Does your teenager have a curfew? Do you think they should have a curfew? Keeping teenagers safe is really important especially when it's dark out. Thing out in the world are not like they used to be. A city council is debating on a curfew adoption. If this curfew is adopted does this mean teens on the street after hours are breaking the law? Will curfews keep teens out of trouble or unfairly interfere with their lives?
A city council is debating on an adoption of curfew for teens. Why are they debating about this adoption? The first reason is city council does not want teens getting hurt or putting themselves at risk at a young age. Second, they want to keep teenagers safe from the bad things out in the world. Lastly is they do not want trouble, some teens make bad choices about drinking and other stuff they should not do at a young age. That is why city council is debating a curfew adoption.
If the curfew adoption is adopted by city council, does it mean that teens on the street after hours are breaking the law? Many people have different opinions. I also think it depends on why they are out. I would say they are not breaking any law if its for work or any emergency. They are also not breaking the law if they are with an adult because it is not like they are on their on there own. However if they are out to be hanging out with friends and partying stuff like that, yes the would be breaking the law. Does this mean if teens are out they are breaking the law? In some ways yes and in some ways no, it depends on why they are out pass the curfew.
Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble or unfairly interfere in young lives? First things first most teens would say that by having the curfew law its interfering with there lives. Teens would say that because they want to go out and have funny and other stuff. having the curfew law will keep teens safe and out of trouble because you never know what could happen. Another reason i would say keeps them out of trouble is because most teens like to leave the house at night with out their parents knowing. That is never something you should do. Teens should think, Is it worth the risk? A lot of things can happen even though you may think everything is okay and that nothing will happen, but that is what you think there might be a chance you could be wrong. Now teens should think, Do curfews keep them safe or does it interfere win there lives?
The city council's debate about the adoption of curfew for teenagers. Many believe it should be a law and others believe its should not be a law. They debate upon this law because they want to keep teens safe and do not want them to get hurt or in trouble at a young age. Will it mean that any teen on the streets after curfew is breaking the law? It Will probably depend on why they are out for example for work or for and emergency and unless they are with an adult. Some reasons other than that like to go to parties or hang with friends, is most likely breaking the law. Will this law keep teens out of trouble or interfere with there lives? Most teens opinions would be that this law is interfering with their lives. Some teens most likely parents will say it's to keep teens safe instead of risking themselves. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
D0A218161D37 | Prompt essay
People who value self-reliance define it as they need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas. Should people make their own decisions or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters?
People shouldnt make their own decisions,because they might do something and the need someone thats cam help then or else their going keep doing bad decisions and if they make bad decisions they can get in trouble,problems and etc.
Some pf the people think that they make the best decision but they might be wrong because they always choose the right one or the wrong one it depends on how good are you making choices not always their going to chooser the right one.
Just like how it happen to someone his told him that he could help him go to college but the kid didnt want to go to college as far I can see now he regret not going to college why? Because he made a bad decision his dad could help him but there was a problem he didnt want to go to college. Now he have to work 8 or 10 hours peer day and when he juts could go to college study a carrier that he likes but now his suffering why? Because he didnt make a good decisions. He should be working as a lawyer or Doctor.
There is some people that they dont believe in themselves then juts do whatever they think is good for then but it doesnt work that way they gotta make a decisions a good decisions if they are under 18 years old they have to ask their parents father or mother. they can help him. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
D0A5FF29C338 | First impression counts the most and it's impossible to change. A person point of view on someone can never changed because of the many thoughts that go throught the mind, after getting to know that person because no one would want a friend like that. Having a serious face, not taking care of yourself and dressing wrong can lead to having a bad impressions, thats when people think of you in a different way and get things wrong that are not true,but due to the bad first imprsssions it change everything.
Having a serious face all the time can mean lots of things, say for example you're life is horrible, your ready to go fight someone or it can mean I hate everything around me, thats not what makes a good first impression and it makes it impossible to change that. People now days don't want to be friends with someone who is always mad and is ready to fight someone, and because of that particular time you had serious face it led to you not having a girlfriend or a friend that was going to be with you for the rest of your life. First impressions can be hard to change and its impossible because once you had that one chance you waste it all due to that one serious face that everyone was intimidated and now people don't want to talk to you because all it would've took was a smile.
Then,not taking care of yourself can make people not wanting to talk to you. Hygine can can change everything and lets people know about who you are and it makes people wanting to talk to you. Having a bad odor can lead to people running away,can make you look like you just don't care about your'self why would you care about others. Hygine is really important if you want to impress because otherwise it would make a bad impressions leading you not having friends or a girlfriend because no one wants to be around a person who smell bad and doesn't take care of themselves. The smilling comes in quick too, because you have a friendly convertion with people around you and people wnat to be your friends and it may not be because you don't smile. Your breath also counts becasue people like to have a conversation without having to smell what you ate for dinner or what you had for lunch, so is important to saty up with all those things beause people take notice of all those small things and the see that is woth talking to you.
Therefore having the proper clothes for the proper time can change the way people look at you and it can make you have friends and be known for dressing good and people now days want friends who dress up good, for example is the homocoming dance and you go with your friends and you're wearing jeans and shirt and you have your friend all dress up for the occasion and theres you now no one wants to take a picture with you or dance with, dressing the proper way can make a difference on how people see you and is somehting that is a proven fact. When my satrted working as a chef people in the streets would see that her clothes would be all dirty with food stains it would make people think that they don't know how to cook and what is funny that she was making lots of money making food for important people and people was thinking of a different way when she was making more money than the people judging her, but when she started working as a nurse people would respect her for the way she was dress, eventhought she was not making the same amout of money, but people people saw her differently. Those all cahnges that you make in your clothes can make a difference and they don't have to be expensive of from a popular brand because all it is clothes is just how you use them and what makes it good that the clothes can be cheap but how you use them for the proper ocassion can make a difference.
In conclusion having a serious face,not taking care of yourself and the way you dress up can make people have diffent thoughts of you. When being approche or even if they don't talk to you they will see that your not worth talking to and after they know who you are and your way of life style can make people hard to change that first impression of you. All this small things can chenge your life because I have been through those situatioins where people look at you differently and it makes it hard to change someones thought of you and that first impression that is important. Having a diffent mentality can change everything and peoples way of thinking. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
D0C50EB5CB1F | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow," I agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson, because he says that if you don't do something you will stay in the same place and never grow up if life, you will not advance, and you conformed with what you have. I believe that peoples always try to overcome in life, that's why you always have to try progress in life and grow up and not be an conformist. because you always can be better in life. We have the ability and the opportunity in our hand.
First , never stay where you are, always try to do something else and try to get more experience, always try to overcome in life,because you can always try to be bigger, and bigger,and try to dominate other things because you have the ability and the opportunity do grow up and never give up easily and if you have the opportunity to grow you will do it because never let opportunity get away from you chase the opportunity to be better and to master other things.
I believe that you always have the ability to chase your dream and if it is not enough you can find more and you can get to your where your limit is. I think that all people have the potential to follow and surpass them abilities and if you already dominated your, you can find and try another one don't stay with the same one because there are always there's a lot of things inside of us that we don't want to take it out of them but if a person take it out he can do things that non one can believed, because it still inside of them you know that you have capacity for that but you don't want to do it.
all people make them own decision but some of them don't know what's them capacity is. Sometimes they don't take the opportunity they just throw it on the trash.
Like the feeling of a person they don't fight fort that they can be a big house a lot of money but they can't feel the love that someone has for them that's the one that a person has to recognize they stay in the same place without doing anything they know that they can change that make that happen. But they can change in like and they can grow up.
As a person we have to respect each other, make decision on life to grow as a person be a good person in the association take care of my and my family respect my family, be respectful with everyone. Be clean be a good person help someone make a man as a person having good attitude be as good person with my mom. If we make be thinking in this life we ave not gonna grow as a person if we are doing something that we are not suppose to. I think
I think that respect is one of the most important part in the world.
conclusion
In conclusion I think that all people can always finds more opportunity and they can get more experience by doings new things and overcome a new person in life, and chase dream because if they chase that dream they can make it happen for real. I think that all people in this world has the capacity to do things in life but some of them don't want to do it because they just can't, and they stay there without doing nothing, they should chase that dream and never let it go. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
D0CC47FFC293 | To have a good life we need to have a good way of think, it has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. I'm agree with that statement because a positive attitude make you a better person, and makes your life easy, with a positive attitude your been optimistic and that is very importan during hard times in life. There are a lot of importants reason why it is important to have a positive attitude.
A positive attitude is the key to succes in life because you will have a good relationship with people. People like to be around a person that has a good attitude and is optimistic because they know that you are always going to try to help others and you are going to keep a good attitude during adversities, also if you have a good attitude people will know that they can count on you. You can give people good advices as well as a constructive opinions. Conversly if you have a negative attitude you are going to transmit a bad energy, and people will stay away from you. That's why is very important to have a good attitude because you are going to be surround with people that has a positive attitude too.
Also a positive attitude is important because it will help you to solve problems easily. If you are calm and keep a positive attitude during problems you will find a better solution for problems. If you are positive you will try to think in a way to solve the problem without stressing too much. Also if you have a positive attitude you will not give up easily during hard times. People who have a negative attitude always struggle when solving problems, because they think that maybe the problem does not have solution or if it has is to hard to solve it. Negative people always focus on the bad side of things that's why it is very hard for them to handle problems. Thereby is important to keep a positive attitude, no only because it will help you, but also because you will be more happy.
Another reason why is important to have a positive attitude and why I think is the key to succes in life is because I have seem that people who have a positive attitude are more happy than people that have a negative attitude because they stress for little things that happen , positive people are always trying to see the good side of things, they know everything that happen, happen for a reason and that everything has solution, we just need to look for a way to solve it. People with positive attitude always make better choices than someone negative. For example; The majority of the people with negative attitude give up when they don't reach what they want instead of strive their goal. Largely people with positive attitude always keep going and fighting for their goals until they reach it.
In conclusion a positive attitude is very important to be successful because, it will help you to make a strong relationship with people. Also it is important because you will always find a way to solve conflicts, if you keep a good attitude you also are going to make good chices. You are going to be happier and live peaceful because you are not going to stress about everything . Your friends, family and coleagues will know that they can count on you because you are a reasonable person. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
D0D7C3A056CE | Should people make their own decision ? or should people seek for guidance ? I think you should live your life the way you want to live it with the guidance of your parents because they already lived theirs. Our parents have experienced life and it's challenges and which they would want the best for us and nothing else. For example you are looking to purchase a car, you would ask your parents for their thoughts and guidance because they have already been there done that. Deciding what you would want to be in life, Now thats a choice you choose on your own, you choose if you want to be successful in life, you choose if you wanna have a big house, a nice car, a good job thats all you from what i've learn in life is that nothing is gonna be done by it's self. You are not gonna get what you want if you dont get up and handle it yourself.
I look up to my older brother because he moved out with a goal and that goal was to own his own car, his own apartment by the age of twenty one and still going to school part time. I aspire to be like him so hard working and with a goal to do it all by himself with the guidance of my parents of course. But thats not the point, the point is that he left my parents house with a goal, determination, and self trust he always told me that its all about taking risky decisions in life.
Nobody cant make you do anything but yourself the only person that can harm you is yourself the decisions you make in life will impact yourself. You decide what is right or wrong in the real world because outside of high school its a whole different ball game you are gonna make bad decisions and good decisions but its okay mistakes will happen and mistakes are good because you will be able to learn from them and grow as a whole. i think mistakes are a blessing because i know that my parents both made mistakes and some a regretful and some are a blessing that you will learn and live to tell on.
I think it's important to have something or someone to inspire you to motivate you have to trust your own gut because you can always look up to them. Or be someone a person can look up too, be motivation for someone else be someone you want to be in life. But its not just gonna be handed to you you have to work for it there are always gonna be obsticals in the way or challenges in the way but you have to tell your self to just keep swimming. SO YES i think people should make their own decisions in life because its your life do what ever your heart desires! | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
D10BBD82D66F | Former Primer Minister Winston Churchill once said that "Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm", and in my opinion I agree with Churchill's words. Failure has a enormous role in success. Failure is all about, learning from the mistakes you made and gaine all the experience you can out of it, Not giving up and plan what can you do better to accomplish what you have been fighting for to get even better results that the ones you were expecting in the first place, that is what failure is all about and that is why it has big and important a role in the pursuit of success.
Learning from the mistakes that were done is a big example of the role that failure has on the pursuit of success; throughout history there had been many times were our society, nation, and specie had learned from their mistakes; as an example of this is the League of Nations, it was created after WWI to maintain worldwide peace; It end up being a big failure. we learned from this and the U.N was created to maintain global peace through nations and till present days it stills been one of societies biggest success. this is an example of how learning from mistakes you have made in the past is useful but overall this is one of many examples you can put to show how failure is related to success.
Not giving up is also really important on this because giving up is not an answer as an example of this is, Pele, he became one of the best soccer players in history but it also became the youngest player to win a world cup, since a really small age he was told that he was never going to become a soccer player, he was told numerous time that his talent was not enough, but he did not gave up, he gave all he had and when he had the chance he showed everyone of what he was capable of and became one of the best players in the world. In his debut on first world cup he suffered an injury on his knee while training for the first match, it let him out for half of the of world cup. Doctors told him that he had to do exercise every day to get better, but that he was not going to be able to play in the whole tournament; he did not give up he trained day after day and in the third phase of the world cup he was given an opportunity to play in one of the games. This is a great example of the strength that people have when they do not give up and they give all they are capable of. This is also a great example that shows how failure has many things directly related at helping people to success at what they are trying to achieve.
Another example of how failure can help you success is trying once more. this is the most important feature in the relationship of failure and success because once you have looked back at what you did wrong last time and learning from that, you are ready to try once more and accomplish what you have been fighting for. As an example of this is the spaceships that have send to space to reach many places in the universe. Its well known that many of the spaceships that have been send to space failed, and in really big proportions. Many of those spaceships exploded do to problems on their systems or other problems. After many tries looking at what failed and what went wrong humans were able to send satellites and people to the outer space, it took many failures to till we got all of this finished, now we are able to send spaceships throughout the galaxy to explore the stars and many other places. failure taught us what were we doing wrong, and we learned from it, this shows us of how failure is related to success by trying many times to achieve what you are fighting to achieve.
Many people believe that failure is not related in any way to success, they have arguments saying that, you can accomplish something at the first try, that you do not learn anything from the mistake or the times you have failed at something, and they also say that you lose all enthusiasm when you fail numerous times at something. I believe this people are wrong because you do not always accomplish something in the first try, and you always learn from your mistakes, you might learn valuable lessons out of them; their last argument can be denied by telling to yourself that you can do it, we decide when do we lose our enthusiasm or not. this is why I believe they are wrong failure is related in the pursuit of success even if we want it or not because you learn and gain experience out of it, that is what makes this world a better place, failure, and it might sound like is not true but I believe it is; failure is always there and we can always learn valuable lessons out of it.
Like I stated in my examples above failure is related to success; failure is not a bad thing because we learn from the mistakes we have done, we can gain experience out of it, we learn what are we doing wrong, but what we have to keep in mind is that we decide if we lose the enthusiasm in something whenever we decide to do it, this is why I believe that the words that Winston Churchill said are true, because from failure to failure we learn from the mistakes we made along the way to success, we can think of a better plan with the things we learned and after that we can try once more to accomplish the thing we have failed with better results that those we were expecting. That is why I think that failure is related to success. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
D116B2A5E044 | People always argue when it comes to does positive attitude is the key to success in life. Although some people say positive attitude is not the key to success in life nevertheless a positive attitude can make a change in peoples life in various of way. Because when you stay positive in life, you can have more friends and people will remember you easily also you will live a happy life.
When you are positive you will talk to people and others will talk you back that makes you even more happy, and makes you more friendly. When you have more friends in life you less likely to to alone. So when you have more people around you you will be busy with them so there is no time for stress.
People say first impression is the key to opening love the door. when you stay positive people will remember you easily and you can give a great impression to others. which makes you a excited and more friendly person either at school or at work.
Study have showed us that more stress is bad for humans health. To be not stress we have to stay positive because when you positive a lot of things in life can change you will be good friends with your neighbors and you will have more people that you know and you can have people to that you can talk to. when humans are positive they live a happy and a healthy life.
In are conclusion we conclude that positive attitude is the key to success in life because when people are positive, you can have more friends and more people will remember you and you will live a happy and a healthy life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
D129F19FF7F7 | People should make their own decisions to avoid bad guidance from other "experts".
Everyone should make their own decisions because they know themselves better, they know what they like and what they want, mentally and physically. For example if someone bought someone else something that they didn't like or didn't want and is the total opposite of what they needed, they wouldn't have sent the other person to go get it in the first place, now would they?
Also, people should make their own decisions so that they could learn from their own mistakes and their misjudgments. For example, people buy the wrong size of clothing online everyday without trying it on in stores first. People will now know to go in stores first or to get themselves measured first before ordering clothes online. Another example, is that people look at something they think is interesting and nice, but won't read the directions or the descriptions that come with it and once the package that they got or ordered it at their homes and in their possession is either not like the picture or is smaller then what they thought it would be or is just one piece of what you ordered. This is a great learning experience for them to not do it again and to always read the descriptions of what you're ordering comes with.
Lastly people should make their own decisions because not all "experts" can really help you with your situation or not even do so well on your case. For example, people can pay a lawyer a huge amount of money for them just to fail on your court case. Another example, people pay to see a doctor for something they think is wrong with them because they're hurting badly and doctors will say you're perfectly fine and prescribe you an expensive pain killer, which people can already have at their homes. Last example, a therapist can also prescribe you medication that you don't need but will still give it to you because they can. Some therapist don't believe in that but most do.
So therefore, these so called "experts" sometimes don't know what they're doing or sometimes they are trying to make money out of innocent people or even sometimes is it always okay to make some mistakes and learn from them and your misjudgments. So it is always better to make your own decisions to avoid bad guidance from others. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
D139A5C53DE9 | Most people create their own way or destiny to go in life. They also know that believing in themselves will improve their capacity and potential to be successful. People who are motivated all the time tend to rich a 99% of their goals easily at school or Colleges. As they know being focus is the key to succeed in life. But those who has never tried are the ones to come last , because they do not have enough motivation or self-confidence to do it.
In some cases people are reponsible for their own motivation in life and what'd help them to be successful it is to take good decison.
There are so many opportunities out there, that will make us to be better and what we don't have to do is to make mistakes that will lead us to bad life style. Because later on we won't have second chance to prove our skills and be someone important to admire.
Although people who has a positive attitude are trustful, smart, and kind etc. Even they could help people to reach their dreams. But not always people have the same motivation or satisfaction to stand up and fight for what should be helpful and worthy. Most people tend to give up, because they think it's complicated or hard to get it. But if they do not put a bit of effort to make it won't happened. The success of a person is being dedicated all the time and no matter how hard it's going to be. But they will always give their lives to make it real and that's when they realized that all the effort was for a good reason to be on where they are now.
Those who keeps a positive attitude are the ones to inspire other people by writing books, quotes, poems, etc. People look at them as a way to motivate themselves and believe they can do the same to reach their goals. Sometimes people apply their concepts as how to be successful in life and what it is required to the success of school. People just have to be apassionate for things they love to do in their daily life and the opportunity to prove they are better. Even they will shine like a pearl for the effort and work ethic. They used to give to be positionated far way from others like one of the success person ever seen before.
School, Grades, Homework are important to the success in life. When people tries the best to do well at school there's an increase of chances to be committee for an University, because they look for all the things students do well and because the success for people is believe on what they can do right and how can do it to bright out there. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
D13D39A7CD7E | To be yourself is the best privilege that just can do, and can get many accomplishment in the world. It is difficult make you something in a world that is constantly trying to which , to be yourself in the world should be the greatest accomplishment .
Have a positive attitude help their many security by self . Always think duly with positive mind for example , get many things important in the world . It is best option have in clear of be positive for to going for a good way . Also , to be yourself is best manner of demonstrate greatest accomplishment .
The principal point in the life it is have dream . Inspire to have many accomplishment in the world for example , it is beginning to created your own ideas for be greatest in life . Is important have dreams because the life not is easy but neither impossible . However dream is the principal goals that can reach accomplish by yourself .
While some people believe that to be yourself in the world not should be the greatest accomplishment , other argue that to be yourself in the world should be the greatest accomplishment
, because all is possible accomplish if a purpose . Although this be valid , there are several important ideas to be considered , such as goal yourself need thing you can do everything that you purpose , for example all sacrifice made by yourself get great opportunities . Endeavor is the principal motive for ahead leave . Nevertheless , make your purpose in the life advance to be matter .
To be yourself accomplish goal of reach many thing in the world . Not good be negative attitude in the life because all people can reach much objective in the life with a positive attitude . A self have that get inspire something for be the greatest accomplishment . It is consider to be yourself in the world of created and make ideas for accomplish the difference that can do greatest accomplishment , nevertheless , i believe that be yourself in the world don't matter the opinion of others people because yourself are responsibility of greatest accomplishment . | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
D14413B502FD | We accomplish more when we are always doing something. Where would the humans be if we had been inactive. Do you believe in people when they say prates makes perfect. It is a proven fact that when we work on something we get more done. Malty million air companies work on improving their product each day.
The greatest people on earth say or have said prates makes perfect. When you work on something for a long time you often tend to get good at it. We have tacanolagey all around us, it helps us corpulent a lot of our daily tasks, but there people still working on making it better and better til this his day. People work on things everyday, so they can reach their goals that they have seat for them self.
We solve more problems when we are working. The smartest people on this earth have worked their entire life to invent different types of things that still help us today. They have done a lot of thing i their life because of their hard work and wanting to keep doing something to help their community. Students go to school five days a week to accomplish more in their life.
Malty million air companies are always doing something. We have tacanolgey, medaction, and transportation because of these companies employees working hard everyday to provide us with the best of best products. That is why these big companies make so much money because they work hard like for example Apple makes so many updates to there product each year and there one of the biggest companies. Inactivity also serves a purpose by having your mind fresh when your ready to work again and can lead to having bigger and better ideas.
We accomplish more when we are always doing something. Where would the humans be if we had been inactive. Do you believe in people when they say prates makes perfect. It is a proven fact that when we work on something we get more done. Malty million air companies work on improving their product each day. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
D151A06B4136 | This prompt was written by Thomas Jefferson, he wrote a quote on how we can have a lot of things done, when we put the effort to do it." Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing". It determine your personality, and helping others may recompense yourselves. We can achieve many goals by making things work the way we want it. And we do accomplish more when we are always doing the things we have to get done. It helps you a better person.
Theres a lot of people in this world that feel unless, because they think that they can do anything, we can help them. It feels satisfactory on changing life's, making things go other way for others. You must have the enthusiastic on getting things done. To make a lot of things work, and to make sure were helping others. It is fantastic when you achieve your goals, because you can see the effort you put to get things done.
Help homeless who does not have food or somewhere to live. By starting on making an effort, and changing life's we can help homeless. Sometimes they feel like they dont have no one. Help others and you will have done many things for the future of someone. And whenever you need help someone will help you back. Give back what you receive and be kindness.
It determine that you can change someone else life. If we are not the ones that help others who else is going to do it. It must be difficult, but we can change someone else's life. You will be successful when you accomplish your goals, or helping others. We accomplish more when we do good things for people that really needs it. We can do it ourselves to see the different in the things or gaols in this life.
In my conclusion, you must help others because whenever you need it they will help you back. Be different from others, never let others tell you cannot do it. Because if we do it we accomplish more, and we feel honored to see someone else happy for what we been doing or accomplish our goal. We can do it even if they let you down telling you, you can not do it. Must people dont like to see you accomplishing your goals, they feel unless because you did try, even if they told you you couldnt do it. Accomplish what ever you want in life to be successful, and if we are always doing something we will get to where we want to go. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
D159EE3218BC | Showing kindness to others is very important because people see you that you have a kind soul, people can spread kindness around the world, and kindness will help you throughout your future. Kindness is the key for success and enjoying your life. The world would not been the same if their were not any kindness, imagine what it would be like if no one knew what kindness is. Having kindness in your blood could change your future to an even better one. Having no kindness means that you are negative and misrable but all that could change when a person shows you how kindness could change your personality.
When people see you showing kindness, that shows that you have a good heart and a good soul. And, it also shows that you care and very nice so, people could trust you. Thinking kindness is very positive and relaxing because it is a very good thing to do in life. Kindness will never be a bad thing because it is meant to change the future. No matter what, kindness could never go wrong as long as you try it to others.
Spreading kindness around the world could change how people think, in terms of doing something bad is not part of kindness. Therefore, giving kindness to a person could spread around the world, and you would not even know that all this kindness was because of you. Without kindness, all the virture words would not even exsist. There would be no such things as being caring, loving, sharing, humble, and so much more. Every small kindness you show to others, will change their emotion and follow your action as they did to you.
Kindness will really help you in the future because it shows you who you truly are. If you show kindness everywhere then their could be a chance for you to get into jobs easily or, for you to get good grades on your school work. Also, in the future you would be very grateful that kindness brought you here into this amazing life, and all the kindness you have done in your previous years. Kindness is always by your side. You will appreciate having kindness in your life because it helps you to become a better person.
Kindness will not randomly appear to you, you just need to make and share kindness. Life is waiting patiently for the people to spread kindness everywhere but, unfortunatly some people would not let that happen. In our expectation people should already have kindness for, in reality thousands of people do not want to share their kindness. Some people are trying to spread kindness because they want the world to be a good place for the future. Finally, kindness will always be their in your heart, you just have to let it out. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
D15E85D292CE | "Cell phones", for the main statement I must evacuate cell phones in school time. Students are often breaking "expectations" about using your cell phone in class. But some schools choose to use cell phones for educational purposes only during that time. Now, we should be able to see why cell phones are doing to the students of any school. Cell phones may disrupt students' work, make them feel misplaced, and make them rebellious.
Cell phones may disrupt students' work. This may happen when students play games or text in their cell phones. Probably when students might make them less focus on their work just checking social media. Students of many ages have trouble enough with their homework and also classwork. May cell phones be causing this to begin with? Maybe, just so we know cell phone may disrupt students' work.
Cell phones may make them feel misplaced. What I mean for that is a student just be on their cell phones a lot, an student may just feel better on their phone instead of doing work. which makes the student disconnect with class time. Not even using it to complete work making a opinion sound like a fact. As we know cell phones may make them feel misplaced.
Cell phones may make them rebellious. Another meaning by this is to disrespect authority. "Authority" means the staff of the school of any kind of departments. Some students in blood are rebellious, but not the man made kind. They may feel furious when criticize for anything done on phone. They may feel like that anytime with the main disturbance of the classroom. So cell phones make them rebellious.
Next,our argument against cell phones is extremely important to all others expect the students. Students will fight back other supporters of the opposite answer hes been fighting against. My counter argument settles the fact cell phones are not good in class room for any time. Now, students would be more efficient without cell phones than with cell phones. So, this has settled against everyone.
In conclusion, Students think their doing a great work with a cell phone in deck. But in reality, it is making you more and more dependent with your mind. But many people actually learn from it. Either you have a learning style or make great grades with cell phones must see the negatives of this. Other students using cell phones may disrupt students' work, make them feel misplaced,
and make them rebellious. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
D16B3304A010 | A positive attitude is the key to success in life.
Can you imagine the world without positivity? Some people are doing successful achievements through the positive attitude, but others have a discrepancy to that. I believe that positivite attitude is important because positivity points to the healthy mental health, genial and successful accomplishments.
To begin with first reason, there are successful and unsuccessful people in the world. We are all humans, and we all have feelings, strenghts, weakneasses. Usually, those weaknesses make me stronger and give me lessons, and good lessons bring the keys to the successful doors. Life is like a school, teaches, tests, grades. However, my attitude decides who I want to be, but the importance is in being positive.
Another reason, "being positive" for me means being patient. For example, the person who is admiring me everytime. He is my father. I know all of his experiences connected with his job. There were a diffucult times too but because of his positive attitude, he is at proffessional level of his military career. I remember, when he had strict bosses, not very loyal friends, when we had the money shortgage. My parents teach me everytime: "It doesn't matter where are you, be mature show them respect, take your community to the positive sides, be kind. Therefore, it will help you to be successful".
On the other hand, some people say that the world is diffucult and success is not in the positivity because there are other things like money, good community, good education. Yes, that is true, but thinking positive and having efforts to accomlish something, that is already success. Success doesn't mean being rich and eminent. For me success is when I follow my dreams, help people, motivate them to be positive. However, there is the times when there is no place positivity, like loosing someone, or being unresponsible for something, hurting someone's feelings.
Eventually, to be successful in life, I have to stay positive in difficult situations. I like to be humor ,when I want to cry. I am responsible for my life and I choose positivity to achieve accomlpishments to be better and helpful to the community because that would help me to be successful and success makes the bliss! | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
D175411080CC | Many students become involved in extracurricular activities to enrich their educational experiences, and some even become involved in so many activities that they have little time to study or complete homework assignments. Schools should limit on how much extracurricular activities they can do, having too much will cause confusion among students in class and too much is always not good. having their families decide for them is an option, but the best decision should be for the school, for they know how well the student is doing.
Research from age between 21 to 26 shows that 95% of them wanted to decide for their children,They wanted the best for them and the best they will do, That is the job of the parents. A blog back in 2006 shows that people who decides for their children most likely to get a job than people who decide on their own.
A Research conducted back in 2010 shows that 80% of people prefer to decide for themselves, having them to decide will greatly benefit their mind and shows that they are responsible on how they act. They like to choose their own path and find their own talent. Finding their own talent shows responsibility, and having responsibilities at a young age takes courage, dedication, and hard work.
Having too many activities will also cause a lot of their energy to get drained, they won't have any energy to spare for other activities like cooking for dinner, or doing assignments. The school should keep track on every students activities, This ensure their safety and heath. Having every energy drained from your body is bad, and the school should keep track at their time as well. Having more energy will greatly benefit their health. The school is partly responsible for the students, but the parents are most responsible and should know what their children's are doing, if they think their doing too much, they should talk to them and have a simple chat about overworking.
The school can also add a one simple rule where people who has 3 activities or more should be given time at the end of each classes 15 to 30 minutes free time to discuss with their teacher on how well they are doing and to do missing work or assignments. In Generic_City, Philippines, University of Mang Totomas, Practice this method. Research from this school shows that students have increased their grades when they added this rule back in 1996, it increased from the average of 3.0 GPA to 4.1 GPA, This huge increase show's that adding this simple rule will benefit not only the students health, but their grades as well.
Hard work is good personal ethnic, but too much can lead to more bad than good, studying many subjects at one time can cause confusion and stress, The schools job is to teach students, and the students goal is to learn from school, if they want to learn an extra subject or do an extra activity, that's fine, but aslong as they don't over do it. the school system should ensure students safety to be top priority, and if their wearing themselves out with the extracurricular activities, they should notify their parents or limit how much extracurricular activities they can do. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
D1769512AB23 | When I said to my first impresion for to change is. When I live youselt in your future you need to woriking so much is your responsabity to pay your bill,rent and, the food. You need to do help your family when is necesary when you have your money is ther you need to have traspotercion for you move you youselt, in whatever state.
By you need to Finiched the School firts for you have a good work, that its very important for everyone. if full one to work when I go to the College I with like to study to doctor because I like to helped another person when I need the one I like the Medicine when I working this programa I need to impresional to my family this is to simple world.
To be as a good person to change and response with your reasons, do you need to are change before you due something bad, You need to suppor another person to cause danger something peolpe change for more danger because sometime is don't have a family to trotencion her or dont have one home,
If full need to change you need to teachable, In important person in your wolrd.
You will need to due talking a person if you have and somethings problems with another person in your world you need said that were are happedened before to cause more danger I thinkg you have Opportunity to focus, in your work whatever type ther work you will be asked to recomencion to fined the somenthing due .
The more importante part is you need to find everthing for you graduction in ther to be extra work and the don't be star alone because this it not good I Agree when something person to prefer to due in your work before that school her don't no the firt part is to study for a good futeure to finid the college her need to have more money that are a pay in the oder work
I need to Preparecion because do you to for painter do you need to do finid the college firts their its so much type for your future in your simple world you need to do. | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
D184EDBFB3B8 | I believe most of the students prefer to work alone, but I prefer to work with a group because we have more ideas and we can finish our work faster.
One of the reasons, I like to work in group when we are doing a project or classwork for English class is because I know my classmates and working together we can share more ideas of how we are going to create a magnificent project and impress our other classmates and specially to you our great teacher.
The other benefit will be to finish our work faster because everyone in the group will collaborate with some work that it will help us to finish the work without worrying to turn in the project late because we will help each other to get the work done and get a good grade as a group.
On the other hand, most of my classmates prefer to work by themselves because they do their project the way they wanted to create it and they like to have just their ideas in their work. Also, they don't like to be working with classmates who are only playing and not taking the work serious.
Overall, working with a group shows, how the students or other people become more successful not only in a business, but in classes too you can get good grades and have done an excellent work. Team work not only help you to get more abilities and ideas to work with partners, but also helps to create a strong and unique friendships. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
D190133EDD2B | Dear council
I think the city council should adopted the curfew for teenagers because it'll keep them out of trouble. They're some teenagers who will stay outside to trouble the people. It's a good idea for some teenagers to go home at 10 P.M because they are on the street leasoner to muise, and doing nothing but to trouble athers. Will there some teenagers who is stuly for schools, and trying to sleep becuase they are going to schools. If the curfew is adopted, they should make a law that saying teenagers who is out on streets after 10 P.M would be breaking the law.
Most of the teen are jail because they are doing things they should not do. Some of them have gam but most of them not ever 18 to have a gam with them. Some of them is on jail for no reasons but they well find with teen who had gam, and other sutf with them. Most of the teen who have a gam not eve there's, some of the gam that teen have are find in water that people put in and all the thing that other person did in that gam are now everthings is the people that find th gam. The city council and the curfew helping teen, they want all teen to stay out of trouble.
Some people belive the curfew interfere in young people lives. If we look in other side of the stoy , yes the curfew interfere in young teenagers lives but those young teen doing things they should not do. The curfew just trying to help them.
overall I believe it's good idea teen to not be on streets after 10 P.M beaucse they will be out of trouble | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
D1A0AFC80A9A | Ever since, we were kids we started choosing our own character traits. it can be good or bad based of the environment we live in, how we were raised, and personal experiences. But we can always change our character traits, it's similar to an opinion on something or someone. We choose who influence us. we decide if we want to be happy or sad,making good and bad decisions all those are character traits that we choose with our minds.
Lets say you are inspired by Kobe Bryant. You look up to him as an idol because, of what he accomplished in his lifetime. You either wanna be like Kobe or be better than him. That right there is a character trait, the ability to choose who influences us by what they have accomplished. Some people believe we can't choose our character traits because we did not decide nor choose the way we wanted to be born, we did not choose if we wanted to be tall, short, black, white etc.. But, they miss the fact that character trait is not about the things we can't change, its about the things we can change and decide for ourselves to become a better person or be like someone who influenced us.
Choosing character traits is not an easy task for everyone. In fact, adults have a hard time choosing character traits. Unlike,most kids that dont care about the consequences nor judgments, kids usually choose careless traits but as they get older and become adults, they realized their mistakes and they choose traits with precautions. Mainly because adults have a lot of things to worry and take care of, their character traits can cost them to miss out on big opportunities like a job or a promotion. Something we all have in common is character traits, without it our lives would be meaningless we would not achieve nothing big or anything to be proud of. Our lives are based off the character traits that we choose. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
D1A682106D3C | It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Although some people think that a positive attitude will not help a lot help a lot to be successful, actually that is not true. A positive attitude is the key to success because, we can always be out of stress and bad thoughts, we can always have a high confidence about ourselves and for something good to happen, and we can always have a good and friendly personality wich makes others to feel good about helping us and we can use their experiences in our lives.
Here are some reasons that explain why a positive attitude is the key to success. the first reason, is we can always be out of stressand bad thoughts. For example, when we are in the bad situation and we don't know what to do, if we have a negative attitude you will be filled with bad thoughts and anxiety, we can't think properly and find the right solution. The second reason, is we can always have a high confidence about ourselves and for something good to happen. For example, if you are studying for our test, and if you have a high confidence and you are certain that you will pass the test, you will absolutely pass it. And last but not least the third reason, is we can always have a good and friendly peronality which helps others to feel good about helping us. For example, if we have a problem and we don't know how we can choose the right way to slove our problem, when we have a good and friendly peronality it'll makes other people to feel good about helping us, and we can use our experiences in our lives.
We have been talking about the benefits of having a positive attitude and how is helpful for us to slove our problems and have a healthy mind. These reasons such as, first, we are always out of stress and bad thoughts, which makes it difficult to think in the right way. Second, we are always have a high confidnce about ourselves and for something good to happen, which this gives us strength and make it easier for us to solve our problems. And third, we are able to have good and friendly peronality, which makes other people to feel good about helping us, so we can use their experiences, are little details that effects a lot in our lives. Therefore let's put all negative things aside and encourage everyone to have a positive attitude. | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
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