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C0EAFCE50675 | I agree with Thomas Jefferson about accomplishing myself every time i do something, i think if we always woke hard or at least be with the mentality to work we will always get stuff done without even thinking about it. Most people realize how they can get there work done when they are actually doing something. You can do anything if you really think like Thomas Jefferson, Just like most of the people say '' Work hard to be succeful
'' if you never do nothing you will never finish what you have to do. Just think about how much people wanna be the same thing we wanna be , if you really wanna be succesful you have to work and you will always get stuff done.
Most people dont be active all the time and they take advantage of technology because now days technology can do everything. Nobody have any excuse for no finishing work. we live in a world where if u be smart doing what u suppose to do you will get it ''DONE''. One good example is:The president just think how much work he have to get done to make a country look good,no problems,etc.
It really is wonderful how much work can we finish if we always doing theres no excuse for not doing work Just like i said i think that everybody who work a lot they gonna accomplish more every time they doing something and think how fast they did it just because you are not thinking about how much work you have to get done and never think inactivity also serve a purpose because if u dont do nothing you will not be the person you always think about or goals you have in mind, Every goal or career you wanna do takes time and time goes fast so you have to take advantage of everything and make sure you always doing what you suppose to do and not wasting your time saying i will do it next time because theres no next time. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
C12DEB504856 | We choose our own character traits becouse we can choose if something affect ourself for three reasons:
First, if somenthing is doesn't matter for you, it will doesn't affect you. Some people when lose something material and they don't care the material things, they looking for a solution,
Second,
if you get a problem in your workplace, you would like to resolve the problem. Some people when have a problem in her workplace want to resolve the problem because they are passive
Third, if you discuss about something to someone and the person is losing the control of ennoyance, you won't response back because you don't want more problems. Some people when someone is losing the control of her ennoyance and want to fight, they don't do anything because they are passive.
However, I know sometimes it is difficult something it doesn't affect ourself because sometimes it relate to family, or somenthing is really matter for us.
In conclusion, we choose our own character traits because we can choose if something affect ourself. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
C1314085435C | I agree with Ralph waldo Emerson because he say that if you try to do something you will never grow and that mean you can't do anything with Emerson. but that is not possible to do that if he say that the people will be scared with that thing but if I agree with Emerson he can do something about opinion and the people they can do the other opinion and to understand, and how we can agree with other, we can agree something is very important Emerson he can need to stop how to agree or to take out if we do agree we can do each ether. and we can grow we can stay down, he can keep it up not down if will be down how that will be not grow that need to grow is not to stay down.
We can agree about the opinion and to come to understand the agree with the original, the people agree but is not all of them some they agree, because that give the opinion to understand ideas but spicy food that does not agree with person or to the people with other does. The person can agree and he can't do any opinion but he can understand the opinion that he agree. he suppose to agree because there are people they agree and they grow the people have experiences.
Emerson he suppose to agree and people will come to agree with him if is not that the people will not be able to agree with him and that is good to grow, agree is opinion of the people and correspondence the people they have experience to agree and he need to be experiences to other people. Emerson he has a opinion for something he agree and he can do whatever he know but that is not great if you have some ideas you need to took and we can agree each other with other people if we don't know it we can tell with other people they know how they can agree the think we have to agree and that will be good for other people they can say that was very good to agree.
then if that will be great to the people we suppose to it and that is good for the people or person If that he don't to agree the people they can do it many people they do something is important to them if they don;t do anything how they can agree If Emerson does do anything that mean he don't need the people to agree anything with him.
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I can agree and people they can be able to do whatever they want to do and if they have anyithing we can help each other. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
C13E41755D2A | "Where is one place in the world you would like to visit?"
"We should to go to
Generic_City over the summer, and talk to new people!" I excitedly told my friends 3 weeks before the school was gonna end. My friends, Generic_Name,Generic_Name, Generic_Name, and I think that Generic_City is the best place that we can go visit, because it can be a very exiting experience, and we can go out to see the Eiffel Tower, and experience the life of other people.
First I would visit the Eiffel tower with my friends.
The amazing height of the Eiffel tower. When we were walking to go see the Eiffel tower, it didn't seem big, but when we got closer, it seemed huge, I was shocked because I never knew that it was very huge. Then on the top of the Eiffel Tower, the city can be seen. As we were on the top of the Eiffel tower I could not believe that I could see the beautiful view of the lights of the city. Finally we took pictures of the the beautiful surroundings of the Tower. My friends were very happy when we got to the ground, so we decided to take pictures, they had a big smile on their face as we took the pictures, the place was beautiful, we walked all over the place, and took a bunch of picture with the Eiffel tower, and where it was located. Visiting the Eiffel tower was a very exiting experience for me, and my friends, we got to see the view of the Eiffel Tower.
Second we can experience the life of the other people that live in Generic_City.
Meeting new people in the park is very exiting for me and my Friends. When my friends and I went out for a walk on the morning, we walked by the park. My friends spotted a groups of friends that were walking in our direction, they introduced themselves and we did too, we told them that we were visiting here, and they were so nice, and we started chatting. Then we experienced their food, and the Restaurant that Generic_Name and his friends like to go to. Generic_Name was a very special person, he invite us with him and his friends to the restaurant. When we were walking to the restaurants that they were taking us to, I could already smell the delicious smell of the food of the Restaurant. Finally we got to the museum and saw the famous art of the Monaliza. Generic_Name and his friends gave us a tour in the museam, and he told us that the most famous art there was the Monaliza, it was a beautiful art, but we couldn't take pictures of it because it the not permitted. But we got to see her beautiful smile, and I was inspired by the way, the artist colored the background of the picture. There was a lot of things we learned about Generic_City with the help of Generic_Name and his friends.
The way other people talk, or the differences that we have among each other, and other places doesn't mean that you cant find good people, wherever you go, you just have to let your self enjoy an amazing experience in Generic_City. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
C15EC5707409 | To conserve energy and resources, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. Should your school follow this model by extending the school day two hours. I do not agree, with this model by extending the school day two hours. I Think my school should not follow this model by extending the school day two hours, because two more hours of school will be very streful for students and students will not have the enought time to do their homeworks after school. On the other hand this would be a big problem for schools.
In first place, I think this will be a big disadvantage for studets who have others responsiblity to do after school. For example, I have a job after school and I need to be there at four oclock, but if my school follow this model I wouldn't keep my job, because school will finish two ahours late and it will be very late for me to go to work. This show, that if school follow this model this really will affect me and not only me- but also other students who, also have to work after school.
Second, two more ahurs of school will be very streful for students, because classes will be longers than what they usually are, so students will get tired and they will not concentrate in what the teacher is saying. Also students will not have the enought time to do their homework after school, becuase they will get very late and tired at home and they will not feel like to do their homework, knowing that they need to rest for the next day of school. With this in mind, students, also will be affecting with their grades, for the reason that they will not turn in their homeworks.
Some say, if schools follow this model by extending the school day two hours, would be a big problem for students attendance because students will not show up to every single day of school, for the reason that they will be tired from the day before of school. Therefore follow this model would not be a good idea to deal with, because attendance is something very important that schools require to students can pass their school year.
In the final analysis, this rutine will not be easy for students to face, even know that there is going to be only for day of school, for me this still not a good idea to agree with. As a student that I am this would affect me in my daily rutine. Students will be very streful and tired during class. This would affect the students attendence which, also will affect their grades. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
C168D81A3425 | People should'n need an expert for their life important matters,they should'n be trusting other people you can create your own ideas, you never know at the end of the day how things can result you may need an expert you may not.
In my opinion having an expert for your lifematters is not the best idea, but for people that are old they may need a life important matter because they need other people to help then with their stuff, people should'n be trusting other people with their benefits or lifematters.
You may not know the person you never know how big of a deal can be at the end of the day they can take everything from you or they can be stilling your stuff without you knowing, i would rather manage my own life then being attach to somebody else.
being able to manage your own life make it easier for yourself, you can make your own ideas and decisions with out anyones consentiment, and you can achieve everything by doing it.
Having an expert for your lifematters is not neccesary for your life is just a waste of money by hiring or having one, you can depend from yourself or your family if you ever struggle on life.
Because people from those companies may treat you well and confortable, but you never know with what intentions they're donig it.
Not having a lifemattercan complicate your life style in some ways,your health is not secure you need to pay a lot of money for the hospitals but it aslo helps you how to live your life and teachs you how to manage your own buissnes and decisions, you can only depend on your self everybody should know their instincts; they should'n be scare to manage their own life at their own risk, you need to challenge your self of how live life with your own decisions.
In conclusion people should'n have life matters experts because, at the end of the day you never know how life can changes you ,so you need to live your life with your owns decisions and your own instincts, you need to create your ideas and achieve then with your consentiment and your own risk you need to be yourself with yourself and take care of your life style and your own buissnes. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
C16EB45BDFF5 | Positive attitude will get you far in life. Having positive attitude will get you a good job. If your having a bad day at work just know it can always be worse so might as well be positive. You see someone having a bad day help them have a good day. Ask them if they need anything ,take them out to eat.
Everyone needs to be there wont be as many fight and deaths. theres to much vie lens in the word. stop walking up in the morning and thinking about something bad your going to do. Think about what you can do to make the word a positive place. Dont go out there killing people just because things arent going the way you want them to be pray to god and be positive and he will lead you to the right path.
You want to get a car or house but cant at this moment work harder to get that think positively. Just because you having a bad day or week does not mean you can be rude to someone having a good day. Go to work say good morning have good manors be kind to one other. Dont worry what other people might have and you dont instead tell them that you happy for them. You time will come it might take some time but just be positive and have patience.
Stay positive with all your goals in like and you will achieve them. Thinking negative is only going to make it mores on you. Have a good attitude and people will like you and help you when you need it .Having a good attitude a work people will want to work with you. positive attitude will get you far in life. You can make a change in this world if you do your part them others will follow. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
C194E48A8236 | Technology had positives effects in people lives, it helps them in many ways like emergency, transport, and security.
Technology helps people in case of emergency, it helps them to comunicate with emergencies. It helps keep people alive in the way to the hospital. Also technology can help doctors, to determinate what is wrong with the patient. It helps doctors when they make an peration.
Technology helps people with transportation, people can travel around the country from place to place. People use transportation when they have to work. Also helps people in case of emergency, by taking them to the hospital. if someone wants to travel to others country, they can take a airplane or a helicopter.
Technology helps people in education, teachers use technology to teach. In schools they use technology to teach student how our first genaration was, how they dress and how hard was to live in the time. Student can find any information about projects in the internet. After school students can do their homework instead going to other places like in the pass.
Technology helps people with security, people use cameras to keep secure places. They use cameras in places like shopping store, food markets, restaurants and other places. Technology also helps with the traffic security, like lights in the road to see where are you going, see if the car infront of you stops, and cars have cameras to see when you are going back.
In conclusion technology had a great impact on peoples lieves, because it helps alot with transport, emergency, education and other. People will have more avanced technology in the future. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
C1959178FC53 | According to Thomas Jefferson: "Determine never to be idle...it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." What he wanna said is that if we are always working and never have free time we will accomplish so much more. We could see that why he is saying this because he is a hard working man and look at what he have done to the world, there is nothing wrong for working hard. But if we are always working and don't spent time for ourselves or time with family then you could accomplish more but you will suffer a lot more for that successful.
For example, when we work hard and don't spent time for our self or we don't have any private time to relax and stop thinking about work, we will get stress and stress led to a lot of thing like can't sleep at night,depressed,or maybe can't eat well. So we definitely have to manage time well between work and time for yourself to maintain doing good work and have a good and healthy life. Like another scientist that work hard like Thomas Edison, his name is Albert Einstein, he work really hard but don't manage time well so he have barely sleep a day. Some even said he only sleep 3 hours a day, and the consequence is he died at the age of 60 because of sickness and he even have autism when he stay awake for too long and talking to his own self. That is why we have to have free time because we don't want to get stress and get tired of our work so it can led to quit job or we getting fired.
Another important thing is that we need to spent time well with our family too because family is where we have the most support from and also the reason why we work for so hard if we don't have time for our family then they will leave us and then, by that time we gonna work and live so hard because we are lonely. And we might suicide or getting depressed and lead us to drugs. Family is what matter in our life and that is why we have to spent good time for them so they can be with us and support us when we need to so we can work harder for. I have an uncle in Generic_City, he is a successful business man, he work for a well-known medical company and and owner of a market but to pay for what he own is his time for his family. He start work at 5 a. m and go home at 11p. m and he never have time for his family. That is why during this summer his wife leave him, his daughter don't wanna see him anymore because he was never there for her, and his son just never call or visit him. Now he is 40 and he is a very success person but after all of that he is still and lonely old man. This is why we need to spent time for our family because after we work so hard in our lives but we dont have family after that we are just lonely peoples that have no one to make our life happy til the rest of it.
i think Thomas Edison quote have nothing wrong with it, and it is true that human can do so more if they are not have idle time. But if we don't have those idle time we will soon face with stress, disease, depressed, loneliness and also suicide, so why we work so hard and don't have free time so we die in miserable ways when we can work hard and play hard too and enjoy our life in a really good way. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
C1ACBD09B2FC | should our school follow this model after consitering the benefits and disadvantagesto a four day a school week will be not be not because,we will not expend time time with family. We will have a lot homework. It's a long day. children needs to be time. family waiting for children. students have three days a week free and some students start work some not. Students will be focuses to learn a long time i agree but, students had to dangers. I don't think students learn will be just school for good life. Some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. And businesses doesn't have students have a lot homework. Students won't because students some under 18 some over 18. Because students will be hungry, and they can't wait lunch time.
First, We will not expend time with family because, we will have long class and we will stay whole day at school. we will boring and tied we will focus to learn. and children will be free after class so,children going to out side with friend and they play game any area any time they will be happen. If we say you can't go with your friends students start cry and i can't say any think because,students already learn long time.
Second, "We will have a lot homework'' because, they will be have extra class and subject. They give more homework when they finish class they will come back home but,they are not free they have homework they didn't eat anything they can't talk anybody. they have mind foresters. It's a long day because, students cant,t be stay long time one place. students life will be not eager it's difficult,strenuous. they always thinking about enjoy a day and they will to go to new place and some think learn new subject. some students doesn't boring because they can used phone if they are free they pay song they are looking movies,they were talk to friends and if have lunch time they will go to to side and enjoy to lunch but,not every body.
Third, family waiting for children because,some children not above the 18. who not be above the 18 there needs to be parents when they are going to the school bus and come back to home. there parents can go to work because,class to be long but, they will come back to work when children come back home. Some time precepale call to mom and dad emergency they can't go to schools because, there parents think about children come to late so,they are will go to out side and fair way. Some students have work some not if they are working it's to be good because,they got money and experience how to work who to talk to costumer and help each their, make new friend,talk to different languages. Some students working they get money,they does't want to go to class because,they have extra money when students want they gone find anything they have a lot of money. If students left work students have money and student thinking about school then better then money. Students not interest for learn.
Last,Students will be accuse to learn a long time i agree but, students will be danger because, students have a lot of treble and they have mind they will learn many thing. they cachap imidetly but,every think same time and they talking just English if they want to learn another languages but,they do't have info time. So, if students long time at school they will be boring and they feel uncomfortable. i know some students want learn very excite. Now at schools has a subject in school a computer is there. computer has electrical energy. all students used computer and phone they did't know about computer,phones are dangers,but all students used because every thing election system. computers,phone helps a lot there have everything. ex: cell Facebook, map,dictionaries, calculated, document every think in there. So, all students use phone but ,they lose eyes, mind. i know a cell phone helps communication goes on but, it's dangers.
Finely,I don't think students learn is just school for good life because, at school for teacher give some idea how to learn .students know about what hempen out side because students all the time at school. If students have more time students learn friends,and mom,dad sister,brother there get some knowledge. businesses have adopted a four -day work week and students for day a week and students have four- day week it's different students students have dungarees and students have a lot homework students learn some thin but business have they know already know that. | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
C1B4AB227617 | If Thomas jefferson wrote that we always hae to do more acomplish bacause if we make more activities some students can be interestic to know about all imformation that they need to gire the other students or the others schools need better ideas, bacause if we dont any activity that's make student's think different thihs about the schoools.
Another way is make a new sport or activities more fun they can enjoyed and let the stress out of their head , because if many student alwaysdoinge something they can be grow in their life but they can't enjoy the time when they were young because always they just stay focus on doing something that's will be great but not all the time.
If they do inactivity is the same thing because they focus give their time always and sometimes they just left the family and they can't share all the moments with the family.
if you have like a lot of dreams and you want to make on the reality you can do that because if we always do something that we like we can do more and more, the result is wonderful because more than you do more that you done. also you have a lot of responsabilities which mean if you interestin in some sport you have to work hard day by day if you want to be the best player or if you want to do a challenge. so all that you have to do is focus and woek hard and after that you can see the result, just find your destination the most thing that make happieness. Thomas jefferson wrote this because he want to give us some ideas to be more creative or more entusiastic to lie your life and enjoy all those moment that you hae now so, you hae to be alwatys abalible to do many things in the world or in your life just try your best and never give up doesn't metter if your have problems you always have to be strong and just kept fallow your life sometimes you felt bad,but kept your head up. Thomas jefferson wrote this because he want to show you how wonderful is when you do your things and you got all the results that make you happie and you see how is when you may be done if you always doing it. much better all the responsabilities that you get and how responsible you will be. Thats is my position about what thomas jefferson wrote you just have to try your own and see all the choose you have to be or doing whatever you want on your life i like the word never give up because thomas jefferson was a good person and he just do the best thing he can and may be he can be one example for you. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
C1BED9EF3630 | Most high school students prefer to do their regular four years of high school and enter college after they graduate and apply for college during their senior year to get help from their counselors and school teachers. Graduate early could be difficult for adolescents because not everyone have the same way of learning and some can be more faster than others. School districts should let the students decide whether they want to graduate early or not and give them more freedom to do want they want about their future. students that do their traditional four years do not follow this plan because it can bring pressure and anxiety, they would have to do extra work and,
they are able to pick elective classes.
Every student know that it is very important to pass their classes and be aware of how many credits they have in order to graduate. If you want to graduate early this issue can be dangerous because it can bring anxiety and pressure to adolescents during their high school years. Graduate early can make your life difficult because anxiety combine with pressure frequently gives mental problems. Some parents are constantly checking grades and that can be very frustrated towards their kids and hard to handle because they are often being told to do well and if they don't their guardians limit important items from them and usually control their life because they don't get good grades.
The fear to be behind and getting low grades are always present in students but the worries should be less for those that do not graduate early. teachers recommend to the students to take extra courses during the summer or evenings to advanced in their classes. on account of doing four years of high school you dont need to do extra work. In spite of that you still need to do your assignments at the same time but being not in a rush like the others. Every person should be responsible for their own work even if they have to do it later on it doesn't matter.
The school provides the students the opportunity to take a new subject that they haven't took before. by given them the chance to every student to choose elective courses unfortunately for those that graduate early don't have the same option because it is a waste of time receiving a class you don't need; otherwise you can take take as many as you want to challenge yourself and become better at any new topic you want to learn.
In conclusion it is a better idea if students do their traditional four years of high school. In case they need help from their teachers and schools they can get support from both. Anxiety and pressure are serious problems that any student have to pass through because it distract them from their learning and the attention of the students is also taken away. Extra time should not be used to do extra work because the kids need have to do their assignments and barely have time to do extra courses.
Everyone should have elective classes because is a good way to learn new activities in school and get distracted from your most important classes that you are taking during the school year. | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
C1C75CB3BB17 | Dear Principal,
I'm against for having a grade B average or up because a lot of students wants to play some sports too. Their's a lot of great students who's really good at sports and some other activities, but has bad grades. Many students can improve their grades, a C is a good grade so why can't they play.
Playing sports can help make some students want to make their go up. If grades from A,B,C could their will be a lot of students playing and having fun, so if only students with grade B average could play there won't a lot, less than with students with grade C average to play, and by the way not everyone likes playing sports so everybody with a C or up could play maybe the team could be full. This is my reason about that students with grades C average or up could play. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
C1CA798352BA | It can effect people in a good way by lighting up their day or just talking to people helps them. Doing small act of kindness can really help people by if they lost money and you found it and you gave it back that helps them or you clean their car for them that could mean a lot to the person. picking up trash can help the earth that why no matter how small act of kindness it is' it can still have a big impact on someone day. I think more people should start being kind to other. tell me this when someone is kind to you. you feel happy right knowing that someone cared to do that thing for you when your being kind to other they feel the same feeling as you do knowing that someone cares about you. and when people show kindness it usually comes back to them in any forms like a person give you a bag of chip because that person was feeling kind. that all my reason that people should that being kind to others. how kindness can help you is when your car turns off when your in the road people will come and try to help you that's kindness they were kind to come and help you. when your stuck on the homework you ask your friends for help there being kind enough to help you. volunteer help people if something happened to their homes volunteer help people for no pay they are being kind. this is all my reason kindness is never wasted and how it can come back to and how it effect people and how it helps them and why you should do it. I hop you liked it | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
C1E9D98B3613 | I personally agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson with his quote saying "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." The reason i agree is because I believe that you have to set your goals higher, if mastered something already. Its always alright to fail trying to master your goal because nobody is perfect. You also need to try different goals to master so youre good at several things.
The first reason why i believe you should set your goal higher, if you have already mastered your goal is because if you keep doing the same thing youve done over and over and have already done great at it, you will not see any growth in you. For example if i was in a soccer team and played for a rec team. Which rec is when you sign up and get put on a team with no tryouts. If i played and score almost every game and always outplayed my opponents. I wouldnt grow as a soccer player because the opponents would be easy for me and wouldnt be a challenge so i would have to set my goal higher. For a higher goal i would have to move up to travel to see growth in me and have a challenge in the game.
I believe that people also disagree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson because they are scared to set there goal higher when they have already mastered it. The reason i think this is because they are embarrassed to fail and not do something right. When i'm reaching a goal of mine like getting three goals in the net in a soccer game. I work hard to try to accomplish my goal so i can master it and score three goals every single game. Sometimes i fail and dont score three goals but i always tell my self its alright because when youre reaching a goal you will fail at least once or probably more then once. Which makes me work harder. Nobody is perfect and always a good thing to fail to learn about your mistakes.
The last reason why i agree is because you have to try to master different things in life. Sticking with the same thing you mastered will just not make you good at anything else. Its always great to have different things youre good at because you can do a lot of other things. If you dont like any of the goals you want to master and cant reach it. Its always great to have other ones along the other one youre trying to reach because i know a lot of people change their thoughts and want to do more then one goal at a time.
You have to set your goals higher if mastered something so you can see growth in yourself. When setting your goals higher you will fail at least once, you shouldnt worry because it makes you learn about your mistakes and so you wont do what you did to make you fail. Also you have to try different things to master to be good at several things in life. This is why i agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson quote he wrote. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
C1EAD0C50570 | I agree all students must partticipate in at leasat one extracurricular activity at school, because it's good for them and they can spend more they'er time at school playing sport or doing some other activity like math clup or working on the school yearbook any other cluping or activity, and help student learn more new stuff.
students could leaen more about sports an be healther and know how to play it other thing is that they can do there homework at school if they cant do it at home or if they have no one at the house to help them.
participate at schools activity something that all school should have and make students have a better guatction in there furcht and help how to become good person later in life.
The most importent thing about participate to school activity is you can spend time with your friend and teacher and your principal too, and it help students with there grades too.
Not all students have or must participate to school activity, but is there choses rather they want to or not but i thing is impoent to partticipate an actiticy at school is for there good. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
C1F640A29D37 | Dear Barcelona FC,
Im a student from the school, Generic_School, I would like to like to play and work for a professional football/soccer league and team. It has been my dream to be a professional soccer player for your club,Barcelona FC, for my entire childhood. watching your players play on live television has always catch my interest every match they play. ever since then, I kept pursuing to be a pro for your club. I would like to know what risk and what kind of pressure your players take and most importantly, what motivates them,what keeps them active and ready during matches.
If you have the chance, I would like to make a request to visit your campus and department. I would like to know the works of every players routine, how they train and how much effort they put into their work. I would like to interview some of your players and ask them questions about their life being in your club, how they got into joining, and get a better understanding of this establishment and get to know the players a bit more better in person. better then any fan or article would know.
I would like to know the history of this club,when it was created, the changes that have been made since and the salary of the players. i would like to know the rewards that this club as won;how many international league has this club been in and what has the club been threw the most. this club has expanded over the world and i want to know the marketing of this company make daily and per year.
It would really benefit me a lot in to know the mindset of my career, and the idea of doing it for my family. It will change my point of view of the club gives and give me a new view of it. how it how it will my friends and family react and affect me. things would be different and give me new facts about the place and country your club. It consider to accept my request, please call my school or one of my family members.
sincerely
Generic_Name | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 2.5 |
C209AAD70DDE | Imagine if we accomplish more, if we are always doing something. Some people accomplished their goals in life, but some people dont do nothing to accomplished what they want. I would like to accomplish my goals in life; there are three thing that I would like to accomplish: having a success career, graduate from high school with an advance diploma, and studied the area of medical. I dont know why people dont accomplish something in life. People always says that things happen for a reason. There could be reasons of why things happen or not. In my opinion, people should always by doing something. If people accomplish what they want, then there would not be a purpose. It doesnt matter where we are, we could always be doing something. We could accomplish more by: helping our parents, being active, and helping our community.
My first reason, We could be doing something by helping our parents. It would be wonderful if we could help our parents at home, or, most thing may be done at home. Helping them by with laundry and cleaning the rooms, so, they dont be tire that much because they just come from work. Helping them with the chores would be a great choice because they would not be too tired from work. Helping our parents is good because they help us when we were little. By doing the chore is our responsibly because they could be mad.
My second reason, helping our community. Helping the community is a great choice because we could pick up trash so it doesnt pollute the our where we live. Helping other people good or bad. Some people could rape you or stole the money you have in your wallet. It depends of the people some people could be hypocrite and some people could be nice. The most important thing is help our community by pick up trash and cleaning the community. Our free time we could be helping the community so it doesnt pollute like other countries.
My last reason, being active anywhere we are. our health is important because if we dont care about our health, we could get disease. Doing one hour of exercise, workout, or something it could be good for our health. By always doing something our health could be healthy, and eat a good diet. Some of the disease are cholesterol, diabetes, and are other more disease if you dont eat healthy or you not do exercise. Being active is very important for you and other people.
Helping your parents is a great option because most things could be done. Helping the community is a great choice because we could pick up trash, so the community doesnt pollute where we live. Being active is very important because of your health. Your health is very important because you need to eat right and do exercise or workout. Some people accomplish something and some people dont accomplish nothing. If people accomplish what they want, there, would be no purpose. In mt opinion people should accomplish what they want in life. I hope people could accomplish something in life. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
C22B43EE7FB8 | School cafeteria plants to changue the school menu to a new healthier school menu. Some students' are agree and anothers students' are disagree to this plant.
Some students are disagree about this plant because some students have problems, they sick from have new food in the organism and they like to know what they eat for the rest of the day, because if they are sick they know what they eating. Also some students don't like eat new thinks because they like eat the same food all day. In adition some students have alergy for some food so they need to know what they eat if they have problems with the healthy.
However another people are agree about this plant because eat the same food all day is bored they don't like that. In adition the food of the school is not healthy for all students, the food they give to the students have not protein and that is a problem for the students,
because they can have deceased. Also some students like to eat new think they like enjoy differents tipes of food.
In my opinion the school need to change the school menu because more students are agree about this plant. The opinion for a lot students is change the menu because they are bored eat the same food all day the studens need to eat new think.
In conclusion some students are disagree about this plant of change the menu of the cafeteria because they don't like eat new thinks because they think meybe the food is not good or something can affect the organism. In adition some people are agree about this plan of change the menu of the cafeteria because eat the same food all days is bored and they want to eat new tipes of food and they think the food of the cafeteria is not healthy and they sick from this tipe of food. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 |
C2343290CC89 | Conserving your energy it's an important matter. But you may be wondering why? well, by conserving your energy you will be well rested, healthier and more importantly active, so you can last on your long day of work or in my case school, so I can focus on my learning in order to graduate on time.
Recently, some business companies started to conserve their body energy by working less days, but having long shifts a day. 10 hours a day to be more specific. I personally think that, this is not exactly the right way to conserve your energy and keep your body healthier. On the other hand, I would agree that you would earn more money an have better opportunities in your career despite your personal life.
As far as I understand business companies like Management, Grocery stores, or car dealers have a 8 hour shift Including
Schools and government jobs etc...
If people would work 4 days a week and 10 hours a day It would totally not be good for their healthy and personal life.
First of all, If you work 10 hours a day and 4 days a week you would not have enough time to rest. As a result you would definitely be tired, exhausted and having a bad mood for not getting enough sleep. Second of all, when It comes to your personal life there would not be a family time, and no time to go out with friends therefore, I conclude that the concept of having a 10 hour shift a day would definitely not be that best way to live your life.
In terms of education, specifically talking about schools. Since I'm a student I would not be exited about attending to class for 10 hours a day. Basically because I have responsibilities outside. For example, I have to go to work, study for school and attend to my soccer training during the weekends. Also I would not be able to go work by the time school ends during weekdays and I'm sure there are students like me who have responsibilities to care of outside of school.
Now If I have to attend school for 10 hours a day and 4 days a week I can definitely say that my learning would get affected instead of improving. Nevertheless, I would not able to memorize everything I'm learning in class, because there would be a lot more topics to go over. As a human being my brain and body needs to rest, so I can keep all the information I have learned in class.
In conclusion, whether about going to school or work for 10 hours a day would not be beneficial for your professional and personal life for many reasons. For example, It could affect your health and your emotions which could lead you to be stressed out or having a bad mood not to mention that It could also affect your personal life by not having the necessary time to take care of your responsibilities outside of work. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
C24F3DD7A37E | What are some benefits of having a good attitude, even in a difficult time? A good attitude can make people successful even in a difficult time. But not always people have a good attitudes, and sometimes affects them. A good attitude makes people strong, and to always have positive thoughts and emotions. Having a good attitude helps people to be more intelligent and to face their problems. It is important to have a good attitude because people can face their obstacles, it gives them many opportunities and experiences to learn.
Nobody is perfect in the world, everyone has obstacles to face forward. But having a good attitude can help them to face their obstacle, it help them to never give up, like famous actors of movies, shows, and many more. Before they came to be famous they face their obstacles to be someone in life. They past through many things to be came successful, but they face them with a good attitude and yep sometimes with bad attitudes. Some actors still have some obstacles to face, but they face them with good attitudes.
On the other hand, having a good attitude gives people many opportunities. People often have opportunities but they don't know how to confront them. A positive attitude helps people in their life because it gives them many opportunities, like
Generic_Name,
the mother of a girl, who had face many problems in her life. She never give up and she always was with a positive attitude, when Generic_Name was 30 years old, one of her son's died from Cancer. At that time Generic_Name was very upset, but an opportunity appear on her life. She decides to take the opportunity with a good attitude. Generic_Name always has a positive attitude even during in a difficult time.
Otherwise, having a good attitude gives people many experiences. Experiences appears in people life so they can learn from them, but having a good attitude makes then more fun and interesting. One of the experiences that learn is that when you give money or food to a homeless they shared it with other homeless with a positive attitude. They think about others, even when they don't have to much. A person once said, When give more, you receive more, that is true because when the homeless shared something with others they receive more but they wait with a positive attitude is like they feel happy, they have a good attitude but at the same not all of them have a positive attitude some of them have a negative attitude because they had a hard time.
Overall, having a good attitude can help people anywhere in the world. A good attitude help people in their future they have obstacles to face, opportunities to take, and amazing experiences to learn. Sometimes people imagine their life with having a bad attitude, and everything that they have will be rare because they will not have the chance to learn or to experience. To the contrary of people with good attitudes are awesome because they are intelligent and they have an incredible wisdom. A good attitude is important because even when people have a difficult time they can face them. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
C255CCC30A3E | "Technology can be Positive or Negative".
Positive: Everyone know that the technology can be like a friends for the people how like use all day like example, communicating with friends or families who live far away. but the techonoly permitted the people use like a tool like find books, or shop things which you can find in a mall or places where you like to go. In others words technology has a impact in the society, examples, help people to find jobs without need to go out and walk in the streets for a job or students need go a college and ask for information or when a people need to shop things without that the person need to go far away. something techonoly have a advantage when you have problems with you live everyone always looking for games which help to clear you mind or when have problems with buildings of your home.
Negative:In others words the techonoly always like show the good face but no one talk about the second face which can be a weapon for yourself or people who live around you. because when you find a page where you look everything good like safe, but you never now who create this page or for what him create that. In many occasion the people use technology for things bad like examples, groups terrorist which use technology with a idea to be close with adolescence for invited to be in the groups of terrorist and something that pass with adolescence which have fathers that dont care what yours children make. In others occasion the technology is like a tool, because people like use a lot time for Facebook o buy something in that, but l we know some people use that like a weapon like use for sell fake things and take the money from people who think they are stupid.
We now technology has two face positive o negative but that depends which always you find when you like use techonolgy | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
C25E3A9AA408 | dear:
I Help that i can get your atenchienhasi wish that i pass dis test is so inportan forme and may teachers because they have work harde forme i oso what that my children be brode of me that y de pass the test. a more options for estudent that cant go to school on morning they can go on the asfer nuon or they can home classes or vidio confedensil. i tink that all boy or girl shot go to school all the time they shot graduet work hard and they can go to nova or north carolina universiti dont have to pay tha mach money .i tink all the boy and girl shot go to university and have a diploma i now school is hard i tink the student shot have a diploma. school is a privileche to go no al children can go to school some have to work to get food to der home son of the little childrens are 6 year old they do not have to work they have to be in school or playn no all chindren are have some of them wish to go to school.
disten lornin is a good idia because no all the time wi can go aut sayd or have the mauch time but tha is a good idia i will go graduat my family will be happy thet y will be more is goin to be one of the most inportant day in muy life is adreem that all student have to du inthe life but that is i good idia that we can have to vidio chat for a classes. yes student will benefis for that promgran because not all student can go hay have to work to help der parents. but some wish that they can go to scholl but on the same time he now that thay can not go but that will be good idia is not a dreem ene more cal student can du what they what is goin to be more hese .i wist we can help all the world for the little children can go to school they will me so happy ther dreem cambe real what day wish to du or gohave dome for demen that is all forme thank you. | 1.5 | 1.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 |
C262F0931AA1 | This prompt is about some people that need help to make their own decisions or need someone to told what they need to do even in their personal life.
The question say " should people make their omn decesions, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters?" some people they will said that is better if someone as came and make there decisions in everything so, they don't need to worry about anything.
There are another person that think that is way to much because how someone that they don't know is gonna make their decisions and also the dicisions of their life.
This is a big topical because like I said before so many people can desagree with this but there are other that are agree with this,in my opinion I'm desagree with this becuause is my life and I need to leard how to deal with it. Even if my life is the worse one I going to take care of all my decesions sometimes we can ask at someone for a opinion maybe, because the person is more older then me but is only a opinion you're not gaving authorities at all at the person to go and make your decisions and then take care of all your stuff.
In my conclusion is better if you take care of your on stuff doesn't matter how hard that it, is your life and you are the only one that knows how to deal with everything that you have done so, this is my last decision people should make their own decisions. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
C265A20FB301 | Yes. I agree with Ralph Waldo statement becuase it is true you got to farther than what you already know if u wantto succed in life you got to go farther then what you feel capable of doing life for example: i have a frienmd who plays soccer he used to stay playing difence i was like yo Generic_Name u should trry out on playing forward, he was like i don't know i have never played forward only defence, so i was like life is not about staying in one place life is all about going out there and do things you feel like you can't because u cant stay in one flace for the rest of your life; and know hes one of the best forward players my school have, life is not about just doing things u can life is all about experimenting new things to do something out of your limits to see what else are you good at because its a good feeling when you find out of what you capable of.
When you go out of your limits, you can find out lot of things about your self you get to know who the real you is, you get to know how inteligent, how brilliant you is to do things out of your rutin of every day we only live life ones but we live every day with out knowing if we going to wake up the next day, on my opinion i do agree with Ralph Waldo on his statement. | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
C270D47D709B | A first Impression is the key to succes, because that is the first time a person is going to see how formal you are and makes in idea of your personality. Is very important to give the best, to let people see that you are a person capeble of making good decitions and for that, a first Impression is always good. A first Impression is more then how a person looks and talk, is telling others that you can do anything to fine a better future. A first Impression is very important because is your opportunity to let a amployer know that you are a good person for the job you are looking for.
When you are looking for a job or trying to aply for college, the first Impression is the important key for you. That can help you to achieve that goal and make a better future for yourself, it can open many job opportunities, sometimes with out needing to do a lot of work. No knowing how to give a good Impression, is something that can affect your life in a negative way, like clossing job opportunities something that is really important to achieve those goals.
For example if you talk to a employer for a job interview and you give a nice impression, that employer is going to call you back, but if is the other way and you totally did bad he or she is not going to call you back, and you will be waiting with out getting any call. Lest remenber that Impressions don't always change, and sometimes is very important to put your best and always give the nice impression not matter of who, because sometimes those opportunities can come from someone that you will never thing. Having a possitive attitude, is one good way to give a good first
Impression to someone, because having that you can show that you are happy and you will enjoy to do almost any job.
In conclusion, first Impressions are important to develope a good image about yourself, and it's the key to open many doors. People who gave a good impression the first time, are more capeble of achieving there goals, because they show that they can be responsable and there life, but those who are the opposive is a different story, they have issues finding new opportunities or jobs that they love. At the end the first Impression is always the best, to show more about you and let people know that you are a person with a positive attitude that can make good decitions and capeble to achieve your goals. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
C277BE295A41 | Being true to yourself in a world so cruel is the best to accomplishment. The most important lessons life can give is stand your ground, be more forward with certain individuals, cut what seems to be negative. Individuality can always be a good, sometimes you never need that helping hand because not everyone is helpful. Some try to be the bad person by stepping over you.
Most experiences, I myself have gone through were never the best. Everyone might seem like the good person, but we never know what is really behind them. First off, you should simply just stand your ground. Show them that not everything is meant to be worked within two people.
Another reason, achieving things on your own shows you a lot of things you never knew before. One of those might be you have made through school by yourself and got your diploma. Accomplishment comes with many struggles and steps. Not just anyone makes it through; some give up because maybe others told them that not everything is for them.
Lastly, cut out certain people that you know never got you anywhere. Everyday is a lesson if we recognize it or not. Some days are harder than others, but there is never a day you should give. Every job can be easy with a positive mindset.
In conclusion, my reasons to accomplishment to stand your ground, move forward, and to leave negativity behind can lead to bigger success and open opportunity. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
C2D061782462 | If you're afraid that you're going to hurt someone's feelings by telling the truth don't be afraid to tell that person the truth. Being honest can lead you to many benefits and help you in many ways right now and in the future too. When being honest, people will start trusting you with a lot of things. But you've got ot be careful with what you do or say. You can get a lot of good benefits in life. A benefit of telling the truth all the time is building new friendships and meeting new people.
On the other hand, people will have that mindset thinking that being honest is a bad thing. As you start lying more often, it can become a bad habit which you might regret later in life. Now if there's a case where you're trying to tell the truth, those same people that you have been lying too won't believe you. A negative effect that can ruin you is like losing friendships or losing a job based on the way you've been acting. Also, being dishonest can make people think that they can't trust you. Those people that you're lying too might think you're a bad person.
You can show integrity to lots of people which can be by listening to them and telling them the good and the bad. Think of yourself like a role model to other people and having a positive mindset. If you show integrity, people will start looking up to you. Also, have a good explanation to the reason why you're lying to that person, well that's if they find out one day. Besides, if you had a good reason for lying that other person might forgive you. But let me tell you this as a tip so you won't make a mistake and regret it "think before you speak", if you don't do that it can lead you to many consequences. | 4.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
C2D40AF42A53 | Does technology has limit to people?
Brainstorm
Positive
Negative
People can buy online
People cannot use other technology
You can buy and sell
Causes people to return the stuff they dont like
Thesis
Some people believe technology has a good reputation of searching the things you like and you don't like and stuff you want to buy around the world. However, others believe technology can cause bad influence to people and affecting the stuff they buy because they need to check before buying or selecting an item using technology and it has limitation to people because they have different technology around the world.
Body Paragraphs
First, In fact, people can use technology on looking the things they want in life.
Second, Nonetheless, Most people invest a lot of time researching and looking for something they interested in.
Third, However, people can conduct using technology.
Hook
People can buy thinks online using technology.
Bridge
People assure to use technology in time to time.
Conclusion
People believe that technology changes people's lives. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
C2DCF6EED519 | During school many student struggle with one or more subject in class, but there are teacher at school to help them with their work. When school is over and student try to gets started on their homework, but they don't understand the work and their'er no teacher there to help them with the homework. Beginning an after school program can help student gets their homework done fast, learn more thing, and also having more free time.
First, every one need to do their homework from the teacher. Some teacher give out homework to help the student remember thing that the student learn that day in their head. Doing dome work can also help student keep up the grade.
Next, learning more thing can also help you during school day, it can also get you ready for a test or a pop quiz at any time so you don't have to stay up late to study or wake up early int he morning to review. You can also get ahead of your friend in your class.
Last, every one need some free time after school,but you cant because on the homework that the teacher give you. Going to an after school program can help you finish your homework fast and also give you free time at home to take care of your little brother or sister.
After all, after school is a place for every one. It help you with your home work, help you learn more, and its also give you more free time. Now a student with low grade can bring their grade up and the student that do not know any thing now is at the top of the class. After school is a place for every one to have fun wile learning. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
C2E3AD707EDC | I have the idea that our school should adoptep this model that consist in extending the school day two hours. This model come from a system of some businesses have adopted to conserve energy and resources, this model can help student get more involvev in their apprenticesship and school's activities.
This idea can help stueden but it have disadvantages is well, because there will be some students that will take a lot of time to be in the habit because they were accustomed to the normal school day. Also some students have to work after school, this meas if they stay at the school more time, it will less time that they will have to make work's hours, but this dosen't affect them to much, because they will attend to the school only four day in a week. This is graet because they will have a long weeked to make their tasks and work and help their parents at home with the home's jod. One reasons why our school should follow this model is the creations of new classes like: workshop , drama, and stodios of art . Student can be involvev in every kind of activity to spend their time in something that will help them in their future. Everyone can join up to any program at the school like ORTC this is a great program for some student that are thinking about join up to some militar's branchs, as we know the military can give you many benefits really good, with this program they will get a rich knowledge about it.
Many peoples will disagree with this new model of extending the school day two hours because some of them dosen't like the school already. Also some parents can be disagree because they think that the students doesn't need that much time at the school that's why the school should make a specific schedule, addding more breaks and activities and then, they will realize that this model of extending the school day two hour will be good, and then student will take advantage of time that they will have to learn more.
In example we have a groups of society as we know like some businesses have adopted a four day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours to conserve energy and resources. That way the worker have a extra day that can be spend with another work and they are available to have a second jod. This can help them get a better financial life or take that extra time to esped it with their families. In conclusion there are many reason and caress why our school should adopted this model of expending the school day two hours more . | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
C2F34D6A76D4 | "Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". Although the word failure is the lack of success, is the loss of the ability to work normally. As humans, we all know that sometimes instead of get better in life, we currently loss our capacities to start over and follow what we want for us because as British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said "do not loss the enthusiasm".
To being, humans fail every time in life, every episode in our life there is always a failure, it is always there for us like if we need it and maybe this is why we always wondered why failure have to happen during the most incredible episode in our life, we always think this is because we did something bad or we did not tried our best as much as we can for get that job, pass that test or even keep all our problems in line, but why failure became a big role into our daily life?.
The reality of failure is not only fail, is to see what we did bad to get better, is to understand that we need to fail, understand that fail is good for us and help us to do not make the same mistakes that we did in the past because every time is a failure it is also an experience and a new lesson to success.
For example, scientists tried many experiments to just get one result and they fail very often but at the end they discovered new things not just only what they were looking for. This shows that not matter how many times you fail, there is always an answer and new things to discovered.
Furthermore, stay positive for humans could became a big issue in our community. Every human try everyday to stay positive and see all the mistakes as much positives as we can but this became more stressful after a failure.
What we all need to know is that feel stress, feel insecure of ourselves is good. We all are humans, our feelings make us more stronger than we actually are however, most people could feel depress after a failure and this is why we goes down, we loss our hope and most people stop to keep working in their goals and just get tired and feel depress.
For example, there is a book that the students of Generic_School were reading last year called "The life of an Indian". This book is about a poor Indian boy that lives in a reservation, he has no hopes after one day his teacher introduced the Indian to a different world out of the reservation to find hope and believe in himself, follow his dreams instead to keep poor in the reservation. He fail a thousand times, but instead to get back, he goes thought his issues.
This shows that stay positive after our failures even for a poor little boy is not always too hard. Clearly not everyone could do it that way, but we always want our happiness, and to get happiness, failure could became our big right hand.
In conclusion, join from our mistakes is the best way to be successful, to be better in life, to keep in mind that every failure is a new experience and a new lesson. Not matter how many times you fail, there is always an answer.
I am completely agree with Winston Churchill, feel enthusiasm for what go next in our life is more excited than we all think and as humans, if we start to believe in ourselves and stay positive and start to dream and also understand that failure is part of our daily, we will become more successful with the knowledge to how life really works and that life is not too hard as we all been thinking. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
C2FBC10F36E0 | so just because i couldn open the exhibit window am going to write about what do you i like to do in class. I like to work alone with no body bother me . sometime i like to with work with groups but is all depend what type of people am working with and also how is my mood during the day of in the class. When am working like to listen to music because it let me to focus what am doing and i dont get distracted with the others student talking about drama or what is going on an there life or school. Also when am in class i dont like when teachers or student start asking me question where i am from or what do i like to do. or sometime i like to work when the place is quiet because i can focus more and the place is quiet i can do my work in peaces. Also i like to have my personal bubble because i dont like when teacher or student come to my face and start asking me about stuff that i do not know or when they give me a attitude so that is the time when the situation will star to get worse because every time when the happen i will do the same to do them but mine it will be worse and sometime i cannot control myself. when the work in a group i like to work with people that wont talk to much and we do our own work. Because when i work in group who talk a lot i cannot focus on my work or they are just talking stupid stuff and trying to be funny there is when i get mad or when they trying to put me in there conversion that i do not care because if i am not talking to you or to the group that mean i am good and i do not need you or i dont need your opinion. I like to be my own personality because i know what i am doing and i am doing because i like it and when people told to stuff or me trying to be a different person just because they dont how i am or that way i dress or look. And i cannot be a other type of person who i am not because i will be lying to myself and lying to the people around me just because i am acting different or look different for other people to think i am like that. Also if you think we are friends and you start to get conferees around me and you start talking about your life i am just going to walk away because i didnt ask you about your life because i am not interesting in your life because if i did i probably would ask you but if i didnt ask that mean i really dont care what do you do or what do you like. If i dont like you you better understand i wont be nice to you and i wont try to have a conversation with you. Or event class class if i am not talking with anyone the mean i dont want yall to talk to me or if i dont like the teacher i just keep my distance but if the teacher i dont like and she/he come at know where an start yelling at me i wont stay quiet and i will say stuff back to you because you just come to my face an start yelling at me for no reason so that is telling me that you got a problems with me and i didnt know at about it. It is so ease if you respect me i will respect you back because if you come at mo where an start saying stuff to me and i really dont know what is going on i swear will disrespect you and say a lot stuff to you because you came to me saying stuff and every time that happen i really dont care if i hurt you or i hurt your feeling. If you leave me alone we probably we be cool and we wont have any issues with each other. Been around people is not my type stuff i like to do i just rather to be alone and do my own stuff but if need help would ask someone who i think they know just go to the internet and try to found what i need online. Because i dont like to bother people just to do it or try my best to guess in the answer. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
C31C0ED2A05C | For the pass few years students have been using cellphones more often than the last 15 years; is when cellphone just started to be an essential apart of our daily life and during that time cellphones were not allow to use in the classroom , but times have change and now students are allow to use their cellphones in the classroom. In this essay I want to answer a question "What are the effects of allowing students to have and use cellphones in the classrooms?".
When cellphones were allow to use in the classroom at first there was a lot of benefits for example: it became easier for teachers and students to do their work, for students it became more easier to find information about a topic by using their cellphones instead of using a computer because sometimes there is not enough computers for every student, for teacher by allowing students to use cellphones in the classroom the teachers they could find better ways to do a class work by using a app that it might not be possible to use in a computer, but obviously nothing can be that perfect by allowing students to use their cellphone in the classroom there was a downside many students started to irresponsibly using their cellphones in the classroom. For example using a cellphone when the teacher is explaining a subject, using your cellphone to distracted others during the class period, etc.
Does were some examples of the good and bad effects of allowing students to use their cellphones in the classroom. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
C3429FEF8AEE | I recently learned that some educators feel like the summer break is to long and that the students do not retain information as easily when they return to fall some people argue that there should be year-round schools. where there would be 3-4 week break in the summer a longer winter break and a week off in the spring and fall. In my opinion summer vacation should remain longer. I truly believe that a longer summer vacation can be beneficial for those students that want to work and save money when winter comes.
One reason why summer vacation should be remain long is that when school ends some students choose to work on summer vacation to save as much money as they can, so they can stay in their house when winter comes. If they have only 3-4 week of break they will not be able to save money when winter comes. Having to work during winter is difficult for those students that do not like winter. In instance when I started to work I did not like to work in winter days. In my country the weather it is hot and I am adapted to my country's weather not to cold weather.
Another reason is that when winter comes and it snows sometimes the roads are too slippery some students drive during the snow days if they work during winter season they might have an accident due to the weather. If they work during the summer they will nothave to work during winter days.
However, some students will argue that is better a shorter summer break than a longer break,
a longer summer break can be helpful to do a lot of things such as, work or relax.
Thank you for considering my opinion on this matter if you have any questions let me know and I will happy to talk about this matter.
Sencerely,
Generic_Name | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
C352BA103419 | Good actions can be helpful in most ways. Good altered can led to good grades,goal,and relshenship. If you do all of these thing you will be good in your whole life. People often do not use thins things in there life but they should use it. This are easel way to do it you can do it and any you can do it.
To be secssful you have good grades two of my friends. They name of my two friends are Generic_Name and Generic_Name. Generic_Name had good grades for all of her 4 years in middle school .Generic_Name is in the a roll every semester for the 4 semesters. Generic_Name trues so hard in all of the school work and she did not care about her friends. Generic_Name learned how to do math,reading, and writhing. She prates every time she had a test to do. That was Generic_Name life every year that she had school.
Lets see how Generic_Name life Generic_Name life was bad at school. Generic_Name get D and F in her report card cover. She never got the same grades the Generic_Name got she get blow the grades theist Generic_Name gets. Generic_Name never trues she things the school is game but it is not a game. All if her teachers have talked to her but she never rs pones to them. They told her you should stat working let harder they you do now. Generic_Name was the prensbol of the school he had a talk with her. He said look a Generic_Name grades he shod her grades to Generic_Name she god gels she said I want to get the same grade that she had but how can I get them. Generic_Name
Generic_Name talked to Generic_Name and they said how did you get this grades and she sad by prate sing and working in school and outside the school. She said teach me how to do it I would like to be good in school to. Generic_Name was so happy and Generic_Name got her grades back up. Generic_Name and Generic_Name became best friend in the school.
Seccuseful is all way help full for you and for other you can help other be sowing them how you do good. You got to be so good be doing this thing. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
C3549BC956DC | Positive attitude is the key to success in life. I agree having a positive attitude is always going to give you better outcomes. Having a negative attitude is difficult to be happy with life. In my opinion I think everybody is different.
Always going to give you better outcomes if you have a positive attitude . positive attitude is not the key to success in life because some people still have mistakes. Many persons positive and negative attitudes all depends on the difference on there personality. I agree having a positive attitude is the key to success in life, if negative attitudes didnt have a difficult time being happy. I disagree that negative attitude is always hard to be happy with life because sometimes good miracles happen.
If there were more succesful people in the world everybody would be a positive atitude. Most of the people are mixtures of both atitudes. The attitudes affect peoples life so much on which atitude they have.
In conclusion having a positive attitude brings a lot of success in life so, I think more people should have positive vibes. A person who has a negative attitude wont ever enjoy life at its fullest. I agree having a positive attitude is always going to give you better outcomes. Having a negative attitude is difficult to be happy with life. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
C3668997E921 | If I were to be asked to share a lesson with elementary school students it would be how to be respectful, to always learn and, be good communicators.
One of the first lessons I'll share with a student would be, being respectful. Being respectful is important to you and the people that surround you. For an example, you cant just go up to your teacher and tell them "give me a pencil" you should tell them "may I please have a pencil". Also if you don't be respectful to other people, people will not be respectful to you. The word "respectful" is not the only word you can use there's other words like nice, polite, and many other words, these "other words" are like branches of a tree that goes up to the main stem which is "respect".
Another lesson I would share would be to always learn, because in life it's always important to learn. To learn can be very hard or easy because how you learn is how you move along in life. For an example, when you first stared to walk how did you do it, by learning. Another example is, when your in school your always learning new things like math, history and, writing. Learning can be fun or boring, but in life you always need to learn for opportunities for jobs. The more you learn the better opportunities you'll get.
Lastly, being good communicators. In life you'll always have to communicate if it's your friends, teachers or your family, you'll always be communicating. For an example, I can't communicate with people, for me its very hard and every year goes by and it makes it more difficult to learn. When I came to my new school it was so hard to meet new people and I don't want anyone to suffer how I did but I learned and now I feel better I have new friends and if I never communicated then I would of just stay quite. A way for you to be a better communicator is to talk more and talk to new people, its an other great way to make new friends.
And those would be the things I would share to elementary school students to always learn, to be respectful and, be good communicators | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
C37595A8AE16 | People have different skills. Some people have different skills In their own way your are special. Like practecticin,be pation and loaning a tik tok dance.
Practicing is important because. One example is when I learn how to play soccer. The person that teach me was my cousin Im still bad but Im learning. Another Example would be when
I learn how to bould on fornite. I learn how to bould and sauces by my cousin. Lastly when I learn how to aim on fornite. I learn because of my cousin and he teach me how. Learning a skill Is better then not to.
Being pation Is good for you for example. One time when I was trying to bould hard thing on fornite and it didn't work so i got mad. But then I tried doing net part by part and I got what I wanted. Another example would be I was Inpatient of swimming on deep water. But then I learn how to swim on deep water. When I wanted to go on a water park I was inpatient. But I learn be pation Is good. I was waiting then got in the park and it was fun. In some cases Is better to be pation then not to.
Loaning a tik tok daced for me Is a skill. For example one dace would when I made my own dance. It was easy and I lorn. Another example would be a hard danced. I tried to duet but it was to hard so I quit. Lastly would be A danced that was hard but
I did step by step and I enjoyed. Loaning can sometimes be fun.
Practecsin is the way to success. An example would be a hard assignment that I did and it was hard. Second would be pattion when I need to. For example when I play to much games Im pattion and not getting mad. Lastly learning fun skills. Hard daces can be challenging but once I lornet it was fun. Doing all of this thing made my skills useful In life and Im happy that I now all of this skills. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
C37F09E24836 | In some School's not only do teacher's assist student's but now student's beginning do the same for younger one's at School. Some School's have program's that teacher's allow student's to pair up with younger one's at the Elementary School's. In this program student's do game's read book's and so much more exiting activities. They do this to help out younger students that are just beginning school and are scared and don't know what to do in School or how to react because of their first time being in School. The older student's assist out the younger one's on how to read, comprehend and to get the understanding of how books are read and what they could be used for in their future life, this is the reason older students are so helpful and useful.
Another amazing this program is useful is because for those student's that are home alone and have no older brother's or sister's, this program helps them get a understanding of how it feels having sibling's at home. This program entertains and not only that but also influence's younger student's on how it feels having a sibling at home and the amazing time spend with each other as well. I think this is a wonderful and interesting idea because it interests kids and makes them want to return to School and love School if they are having second thoughts about School, for example if they do not like it and don't want to return, having a buddy might want to change their mind because they can only imagine the fun and exiting time they can have with their buddy!
Teachers's, Principal's and other member's like the School bored did a smart plan of creating this fantastic program of older student's assisting out the younger student's and teaching them a thing or two about certain things. Younger student's look up to the older student's and the older student's are known as role models because they are much more mature and that is why younger ones look up to them. The reason why this program is helpful for both younger and older student's is because this program impacts both younger and older student's, it impacts the younger ones because it teaches them how to read and write and it impacts the older student's because they learn how to assist younger ones and how to communicate with them. This great program will help out student's right now in class and also they will learn how to use these skills in a daily life and maybe on their everyday lifestyle and job's.
When a student or any person assist out another, at the end they will always feel proud about their self's and they will want to keep on helping others in their daily life. That is why they might have this program so student's can get the feeling of how it feels helping out someone and so the younger student's can learn how to read and get the feeling of how it the sensation would feel if they had sibling's at home. They might fight but at the end they will later then respect each other and they will learn how to communicate with each other. School is important because student's learn from their mistakes and then next time the same problems happen to them they will learn from it and make it better then the first time. They learn and learn so when a student is a fully grown adult they know what is expected of them and how to assist other's if needed also they will be more mature and will know how to act. if someone is out their struggling or having a difficulty time doing something, the adult that was ones a students and helped out younger student's will automatically know what to do and how to help the one's that will need help. This is the reason this program is so helpful and I hope they keep having these things for student's in the past and will continue to help them in the future. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
C38334385924 | Their are some schools that offer to attend online classes or video conferencing what if they don't have a computer at home for to be able to use it for the online class. Some parents will not agree I think because they will be working and they don't know with who they can leave their kids with. Video Conferencing could work for students instead of online classes because that way the person that will come to teach you can explain more better from the assignments that your suppose to do. Some students just prefer someone to teach them for they can help with what they are doing. Students will benefit from being abkle to attend classes from home will some students they would rather take classes home then school because in school they think it's more harder for them for the reason of being with alot of stusdents. They like to work alone quite and with someone who can have patients and work slowly and have time. Same thing with there schedule when you have classes at home you can choose the time and day that you want to do the class. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
C3C1D527011F | Some school districts offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. That could be a good opportunity for students if they finish school early they can be more independent, also can make more money a early age and build a magnificent future, another good thing it's they can buy whatever they want, and don't have to be necessary ask their parents for money also save money for their career at college.
At school we can see different kinds of age some guys are older that others, so maybe some students want to finish school a early time, If the students finish school early they can be more independent, and see how life goes life isn't easy and all of us one day will learn how to be more independent. Be independent it is a responsibility because you have to take care about something as; pay some bills, if you have car, well take care about the insurance, for some reason you live by yourself have to pay where do you live, and other responsibilities.
Second, make money a early age is a amazing thing to do because you will prepare for the future your goal is finish school, and maybe that would require extra effort like take courses during the summer, or work in the evenings to make up things that you need to do in another class, maybe that require extra work. At some point, you may not able to take elective courses but that decision is made by yourself, if your goal is finish school early you have to leave some things to get what you want. All dedication that you put, for sure you would have a recompense in the future, also don't have to worry for money because you are working hard for that.
Finish school early that can help you to be more successful like work for your own things, so if you need something you don't have ask a your parents for money; to get what you want, and another good thing is you can earn, save money for you career in college. A young age you are getting prepare to what's is next.
However, everyone choose what they want, some things would benefits your future and if you wanna make it work out in less time you can make it possible, there always another way to find out what you want, need, and to be a succeful person in the future. Build a great future would make your life easier. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
C3D8E8E8B942 | Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. Should these summer projects be teacher-desdigned or students-designed?
These summer projects should be student-designed for varies reasons such as, engagment, vaction, and lastly, confidence.
Students during the summer have many things to worry about like having a job, looking after siblings or even their mental health and the last thing on their mind is a techer-designed project. The projects given throughout the summer should be student-designed becuase it allows the student to be engaged. The student will be more engaged because it is a topic that they want to learn about and being engaged shows that the student is willing to learn and is very intrested in his or her own topic. Typically, when a teacher assigns a project to a student, the student isn't very pleased and with that being said, it could affect the amount of effort and the desire that the students puts into actually learning.
Secondly, these projects also need to be student-designed because of summer experiences. During the summer, alot of students grow. Vaction plays a big role in the students growth and development, as the students travel they pick up more and more knowledge, which expands their knowldege and could possibly change thier perception of things, making it easier for them to have better ideas and to do well on their summer projects.
Lastly, student-designed projects over break leads to confidence. Because the student has had the freedom of choosing what he or she wants to learn about, it just makes it easier for the students to showcase their work with pride. Pride meaning, showing that the student has learned and is more than comfortable to enlighten others. To have confidence about what you have put alot of time into and worked on is an important skill to develop because the student will surely use it some other time in their lifetime.
In conclusion, these summer projects should be student-designed because it will surely keep the student engaged in his or her own learning and add a little more excitement to the students vacation because the project is something they are eager to learn and work on. Lastly student-designed projects will help build the students confidence because they know what they are talking about. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
C3E499B46594 | Althogh some school districts offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. Nevertheless is it not a good idea for students, because they tired more early, bring more focus on some classes but not in the others, and they not take a break on summer.
They can be tired more early because some time they worry for the work that they have . For example, students pass more time study and not take a break. Most students going to school sleep because in the night they study for exams, or make some proyect that they left. most of them have many homework and they not finish on time because they are tired and need to sleep to going with energy on the school though they are not finish the homework. In concept the students need more time to make the school work because if they take the offer to graduate in three years they need to give everything on time.
Most of them bring more focus on some classes that others because they think that some classes are more important and the others not. Nevertheless the grades can be going down for the reasons that the students not put attention on classes, or not make the work. Also they need to make the work of the all classes because that importan, and all classes they need for graduate. This can be give them problems if they not make anything for they grades going up because if they have bad grades they can not graduate in three years. Clearly the students forget the importan that all classes are for graduate.
The students not take a break on summer because they want to going the summer school for make more classes. For example, they make this for graduate more early but, they do not have time for they family or for the work. Many time they need to work on summer and this affect most students, they going the school in the morning and the night they work. some families going anothers countries for vacation and the students can not going for the reason that they need to stick for study. Clearly going on summer school affect students but, this can be help for advance classes.
In conclution some school help students to graduate more early like in three years. The students can be tired because they want to make the more importans classes, but this is more hard. They bring more focus in the importants classes and the others classes not. Most of them need to going on summer school because they need to pass the classes. For all students the graduate is it importans, but everyone need to take the time in the school an have good grades when they are ready to graduate this is more importan. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
C3E8D00403D9 | Letter to Principal:
Some of my friends perform community service, but my other friends think it just waste of time. I am supporting that the principal should require students to perform community service. This is a great way to show to the community that you care. Students should know that community service is very important. Community service helps you and your community.
There are many reasons why students should perform community service. Performing community service helps your community and other communities. Your community will be cleaner and fresh. Not just students but everyone in this country should have community service. When your community is full with trash. No one will care, but you can make a change. You will need a helping hand to help you with community service.
In streets, public places, and school campus, there are people littering. If you care about your community, you should gather people to help you clean it. Even if the trash is not yours, pick it up. It is not just picking up trash. There are planting trees, etc. So, when you are done picking up the trash, you could continue planting trees and flowers. To make it stand out.
In conclusion, everyone should have the pride to carry out community service. Community service is like a helping hand. So every stu | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
C3F3118898B5 | My sister decided to be a doctor at a young age and started to focus on that path. Now, she is a doctor. Choosing which path should be taken in an early age and preparing for it beforehand, will help a lot for the future. Although some people might argue students should commit to a career later in their life, students should commit to a career at a young age because it helps them to decide for their future early, it makes them focus on a specific goal, and they won't feel more pressured to choose a career later in their life.
To begin critics say that choosing their occupation later in their life is more beneficial because they will be open to more new options later than in a young age. To support this idea, a child decided to be an engineer when s/he was young, but suddenly s/he changed his mind and decided to be a surgeon. Should s/he choose what s/he wants to be now or should s/he choose what s/he wanted to be when s/he was young? However, it is obvious that choosing a career later in their life will only make them feel burdensome and their life will only be more intricating.
A more valid argument is that choosing a path to be taken at a young age will let you have a better life in the future. For example, a girl started to prepare for the career she had chosen when she was young and started to work hard for that. Finally, her hard work paid off and acheived what she wanted to be. This evidence is valid because preparing for the career in a young will let your life go smoothly, will give more free time in the future, and won't feel pressurized.
Although people might say that students committing towards your career and choosing it at a young age will lead you to a better life because it makes them to focus on a certain goal of their life, will make them decide what they want for the future, and won't feel pressurized to choose their career. People should consider deciding their path in a young age for their own benefit and betterment. | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
C3FBD51A2343 | One of the most qualities among human that makes one unique. Business owners look to work with a well mannered person, and also well mannered people often gets rewarded every day for their good deeds.
I strongly agree with what has been said "a positive attitude is the key in to success in life". Attitude is sign off telling or showing who you are without expressing yourself. Our positive attitude is what makes our dream come through. Positive attitude attracts wherever you want to do. For instance, working as a bartender is a great opputtunity to earn rewards. Approaching customers with a positive attitude and treating them right, makes you tips. And that person will pleased to work with you if he or she has a company or running some business.
In conclusion, a positive attitude is the key to success in life and makes us unique in ones eyes. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
C4086056BD37 | High School
Regular high school is 4 years 9,10,11,12 grade for graduate. But students can graduate and 3 years some school has a programs that allow high school to graduate in three years,
this programas has three opcion for gradute in three years. The first opcion is summer school the scond opcion is evenings school and the last opcion is do not take any elective courses.
My first reason, why i think is better finish high school in three years for students is because all of the students high school are teenager and they need time for do stuff. So why i think is good idea finish high school in three years is because they could be take drive licenses, insurance, all stuff they need.
My second reason, is because all of the students are teenager, and some working for save money for college. If they can finish high school and three years they can working one year and same money for collage.
My third reason is because all the students who follow this programs could be more opcion for find a good college , and find a good place for live close of the family and find a good job.
conclusion.
I think this programs are good opcion for students who want going to college. | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
C40BB9E0BC6C | Should success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.
l agree with what Churchill's about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. Failure is to do or perform. l agree because some people think that if you are failure it mean you can not be success, you will be success no matter what. Some people preform good in ever where they go and do what will make they there success so this is important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success without loss of enthusiasm.
First reasons, ln the world people will say that failure don't make they life by success so if they did something and they fail that all, they will never try it again because they did not get good thing from the fist one. Be strong in everything you are doing failure will not be without loss of enthusiasm. For example My brother wife have an exam to write in the morning so she was learning all the night she did not asleep so l went to her room and tell her to sleep some time before morning and she said no l have to learn so that l can pass me exam and l said OK then am going to sleep. ln the morning she get up and she went to write the exam. The next day they call her and told her that she fail her exam so all what she was thinking was that she will pass the exam but she will failure so she was thinking that she will be success in this exam but she did not loss of enthusiasm.
Also, Most of the people give up if they fail in thing they are doing they believe in them self that what they are doing will be successful for they but the end thing will miss up for them and the loss of enthusiasm the good ideas of bring success tell your that l can do this and do it all. For example, l was write am SOL exam last year and l don't know what to write and l don't understand what the question is say so l was thinking about the question but l don't know what to write so l tell my self that no matter what the question is l will do it and pass it. When the score came because l believe in my self l pass the exam. So you can be success in every thing you do if you made up your Maine in what you are doing. Make your self a good discuss and you will be fine.
However, Some people start their own business but they first tell them self my business will be successful and yes they will be because they believe first before they start the business. Yes the work will be good without loss of enthusiasm. For example, My friend dad has a big shop in Generic_City one night when her dad was asleep some bad people came to the shop to take all his money and the thing in the shop so in the morning people was cry infant of the shop so we all went there l see what is going there so when we went there it was so sad they bad people took everything in the shop not even a pen but do know something he did not give up because he did not give up he fail but he was successful in what he was doing. The reasons why am telling all this is that never tell your self that l will be failure on matter what you will be success.
Other might say that it is bad ideas to be success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. However you can loss enthusiasm any time but if you never give up in what you are doing people do things that they don't believe in what they. One of my teacher in my school called Generic_Name gave as a test and the test was as difficult for as to do so he told him self how can the student do this work so try not to give the test to as the student in the classroom told him that we will can do the test so the teacher the told as that do you believer that you can do it and we said yes we can so he gave as the test to do. infant all the student that told that test pass successfully and the teacher was so happy. So you will be success without loss of enthusiasm.
ln contusion, We have many things in the world that will make you a failure or success, make a discuss to yourself that you will success in life no matter how how things will go. My friends always told me that never give up in life, school and any thing you do. Maybe you have an exam today and when you went home yesterday you did not learn and you was watch TV and you want to pass the exam no matter what you will be failure in the exam. ls important to be success in life if you can be success you have to do what will make you success. l believe in my self that being a success is a good idea. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
C41DFE052637 | Imagine someone is doing the same skill that he already has mastered, he is going to stay in the same place. He will never grow. One reason why doing different things can help someone grow is by being stronger in other things. Being able to learn new skills can improve your ability. Someone can even find out if they are good at other things that they probably never thought they would be good at. Is the best to try to do new things than staying in the same place and never growing.
First reason, why doing different things can help someone grow is by being stronger in other things. Being stronger in other things can really put you to the top where you never thought you could be at. When getting stronger at other things it could make someone the best athletic person or the best person that is strong in so many things. When being strong or good at things, you can even help your friends if they are struggling. Once you become a strong person are you going to be able to do anything.
Next, being able to learn new skills can improve your ability. Learning new skills can help someone out a lot. When doing a lot of new things it can make someone a healthier person. Someone is going to start realizing their improvement and once they start seeing results, they are going to start getting motivated even more. When someone knows so many skills, they could probably teach another person that wants to be like you. Is a great thing to be able to improve your ability.
Finally, someone can even find out if they are good at other things that they probably never thought they would be good at. Finding things that someone never knew they could do will make someone pretty shocked. When someone finds out more things that they are able to do, it can help them join in more activities. The people that can do more, they have a better advantage because they can do more that others can't do. Its pretty shocking that there are people that don't know that they could do something that they never thought they could do.
In conclusion, someone can make themselves even stronger than what they are now. When learning new skills it can make your ability improve. Also, someone can even find out new sports or skills that they never thought they could do. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 |
C41E40F2D803 | Do you know how many careers' choices you have when you enter to high school? Most of the new students in high start thinking about what career they would like to take after they finish high school. Although some say students should not commit to a career at a young age because make students feel pressure, actually students should commit to a career at a young age because help students to preparate for the future and they have more time to choose the career they like.
Although some say students should not commit to a career at a young age because make students feel pressure. In most cases students become stressed because of their parents telling them to start selecting a career at a young age. Students behavior change; However their grades get affect it bacause of the stress and pressure. Some people say that school should talk to students' parents, so students don't feel pressure selecting a career at a young age. When the parents know they have a lot time before collage.
First reason why students should commit a career at a young age because help students preparate for the future and let them know what is better for them. Students preparation is base on saving money to pay for collage. They can see what is better for them; In other words what career benefit them more and if they allowed to pay it. Students can know early where they can get help either from their parents, or if they has to work for the career that they want. Students can talk with their parents aboout a student loans too.
Second reason why students should commit a career at a young age because they have more time to look for a career that they like more. They have more time to look for a career with the charateristics they like. Students have more time to save money. They can know other careers where they can get a good pay. Teachers can help students to get a good career base in their Knowledge.
In conclusion students should commit a career at a young age bacause as I said helps the students to preparate. The time is one of the best reason that help them. The knowledge from other people help the students what is better. Students dont get pressure also they have more oppurtunities. Students should commit a career at a young age because is one of the best choice they can do. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
C444D6A0AC1C | Although, many people believe that extracurricular activities can enrich students educational experiences, and some even become involved in so many activities that they have little time to study and complete their homework assignments. This decision should solve with their families, because this decision shouldn't made by school, school should help not control students to do the extracurricular for their good experiment with other student or get involved with different team works, and some student don't want to do or stay after school program or any other extracurricular activities.
First, whether student wants to join or do extracurricular activities they should ask parents or families first, because some parents don't wants to do the extracurricular activities. Example, some students have a lot of homework, project, tests or their different school works. Some parents don't want let the kids or students to do the extracurricular activities because of their other school works. This can cause their student fail the school or other stuff can happened to them. This is why extracurricular activities decision should made by families not by schools.
Then, school should help not control students to do the extracurricular for their good experiment with other students or get involved with team works. Some school wants students to do join clubs, sports, and any other after school program, because some after school program needs students to do join their program by forcefully. Example some sports coach ask to do join their team but the student don't want to join for some kind of reason, and sometime they email or call to their parents to let them join our programs. Some student don't want to join any after school program for some reason. This is why after school program or extracurricular activities should made by families decision.
Lastly, some student don't want to stay after school program or any other activities. Some student are already tired from school example, some students is already taking lot of extra classes at school and they probably have lot of test and quiz or even homework. If they decided to do after school program or any other extracurricular activities then it's up to their families choice, but most of students don't want to stay after school because they already have lots of homework, projects, prepare for their quiz and tests. If school wants to control student to get involve with any other after school activities then it can cause students grades, lack of sleep, and other stuff can happen to students. This is why extracurricular activities decision should made by their families or by parents.
This is why I want parents or families to make a decision about after school programs. This is the three reason that I want families make a decision about after school programs not by school. Although many people believe that school should control student involvement in extracurricular activities. For me I disagree that school should not make a decision for students, decision should made by students families or by their parents for my three reasons. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
C4472C6DFE66 | Some people believe in praising a student's work to build self-esteem even if the work is not the students best effort.
I believe that is not the best choose a student's to practice this work to build self- esteem; for many reason, because some people don't has the idea if the student's are agree or disagree this is no the best way to improve in their self-esteem to practice on praising. And other is they need to improve in their achievement, because they are not sure if this come from praise or achievement. Also students they has the last world, if they need to practice the things the some people thinking to the benefit for their self-esteem.
1. Reason some people don't has the idea if the student's are agree or disagree, i think this is not the best way to improve in their self-esteem, because students they believe in praising but, this is not the option to learn in their self-esteem they need to focus in their achievements. even if some people belief on praising,they think this help students to believe in praising i think students believe in this source but is not the principal option to believe in praising they need to focus in their achievements, values and skills because is one the priority and purpose to believe in their self-esteem this ideas must be to help to lean focus.
Students need to improve in their achievements, because some people are not sure if this come from, praise or achievements. I think this are two different thinks, also one is believe in religion, for example: I belief in Jesus this is praise they don't need to compare, but i don't dismiss this idea,because is good idea to students believe in praising. Another is achievement this come from the goals you made and the effort you did it for your accomplishments.
Also students their has the last word, if they need to practice the things the some people thing, to the benefit for their self-esteem, but the two are good idea for instill students don't believe, if this is the correct option, also they need to make the best effort to practice the best way to help their career in the future.
In conclusion the students dont need to practice thing that some people thinks,to improve to help and learn more about self-esteem, this is one the purpose to improve their self-esteem, this is optional in what you believe if their praising or achievements but this two different things, but is good idea learn both for better self-esteem to understand. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
C454239AC43D | I don't think our school needs to follow this model by extending school for an extra two hours. We need to be in school for seven days a week to learn and be productive in working on assignments, projects, tests or quizzes. We also be in school to be active in working and socializing with students and teachers. If we are in school for a seven day period, then students and teachers would involved in helping each other more and getting some work done that they were absent for or helping them work they have to turn in or they need help understanding the information they are given.
My first reason is that we should be in school for seven days instead of 4 days. If we are in school for seven days, then the students would be learning more about what certain topics the teacher is talking about. Another thing is that students can work hard on assignments that are due within two days or week. Also if they if are absent or just need help , then students can make up work by staying after school to catch on anything they have missed or just come in for extra help if they need it. One example would be if I were absent for like day or more, I could make up the the assignments that I missed by staying after school to make them up. Or having to just coming in to get extra help on assignments that I don't get or having trouble on.
My second reason would be that teachers will be there for seven days to help you with anything. If you don't get what assignment is asking or understand it, then a teacher can help you by reading it to you or explain it to you. Teachers will be there everyday to help you with anything that will help you succeed in their class. Also they will be there to help motivate you in getting good grades in any of your classes and passing them. My second example would be If I didn't understand the information or just give up on the assignment, a teacher would be by my side. they would motivate me to never give up and always try to do your very best on any assignment that was difficult for me.
My third reason would be students would be engaging with other classmates. Students and classmates don't have to only engaged in helping each other with assignments. During a seven day week, students can talk with their classmates or friends during lunch or if the teacher allows you to talk. Also your classmates or friends would love to ask you if want to participated in after school activities or clubs. My third example would be If my classmates or my friends ask if you want stay after, I would say yes. Then I would get involved with my with my classmates or friends and start talking with them.
Some people think that having a four day school week would be better for them. They think if they have school for four days only, they would have nothing worry about. Like for example, they wouldn't worry about much work needs to be done or how the work will affect how they are. Also what grade you will get on a assignment or when to turn in your assignments.
Some people think that having a four day school week for be bad for them. Students would be worrying about what they got on a assignment or test. Others would be panicking when to turn in assignments or when you can make up a test or quiz. Like for example, If students only had four school days to turn in assigments or make up a test or quiz, then it make the students feel bad for themselves or they can feel sad and sorry for themselves. Also they wouldn't know how they did on a assignment,test,quiz and what grade they got on it.
In conclusion, Students and teachers would much rather a seven day school week then a for four day school week. Then students can work hard on their work, while the teacher will be there to help with help or any questions that you have. Also if the students are having any trouble besides work, then the teacher will be by your side to help you or motivate you to make you feel proud of youself. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
C465964DA6D5 | Do you think that you need to fail over and over to become success. In this essay, I will argue about the important role failure plays in people success. people that become success is because they have failure a lot of time during the process, and they work harder each time to do it better.
When someone success in something, they had failure in something one time in their career. Maybe the fail they took in their career is what make them successful. They knew, if they dont work harder they wouldn't do any better. A failure can teach you lessons to do better that last time. That why a lot of people said that never gave up just for a fail that you can have. Thats what make a person successful.
Failure is something that all of us do. Thats what make us do better in life. If we all ignore are failure, we would keep failing over and over. That why we have become successful in something in are life. For example, when I was 10 years old, i couldn't ride a bike. I away fail trying to ride it, but i never stop trying. I try doing different way to learn. My success of riding a bike was based on failure that teach me different way to learn something and better.
My dad have a company that he have work hard and a lot to archive what he have now. He never loss his enthusiasm to make his company better, years over years. All the knowledge that my dad have now is by the failure. Sometimes he have lost a lot of money, or work for free, because he din't do what the customer said. Some times was because the customer din't like the work.
Now he know that he should do the work as the customer said and do the work better. He have learn that he should do what his job more better and do what the customer said.
Some people said that you don't need a failure to become successful, but they are wrong. Success comes from failure that make you have knowledge. All the failued that you took make you work harder and do way better. In the future, I hope people learn more from their failure to be successful in what they want to archive in their life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
C47E98E69AFB | I'm a gree because if we are enthusiasm is probavility that we have success in the future for example, when we take an test if we are bored and also we not are enthusiasm is probavility that we fail and no passing the test, sometime be enthusiasm is the first step to take the success,but sometime when we are enthusiasm also is probavility that we can loss to most but there is when we need to be most enthusiasm because is like it how we can have success.
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another example It's me because when my family and I decide that I will to come to United Stated and my other family that live in the United stated for many years they told me that if I coming I will going to the school I was feeling enthusiasm because I wanted to learn a new language a was the English and now I have three years living and studing here and for be enthusiasm today I speaking two languages
I think for be enthusiasm I have success for this reason I'm agree the success consist in no be scary to loss and alway be enthusiasm.
Also many peoples said that the success not consist in be enthusiasm because they said manytimes the peoples that are enthusiasm like for example, when they will stard a business or differents type of jobs they loss money for example or also they always fail in everything and the reason is because they are very enthusiasm for this rasson they said that be enthusiasm not always is good and also not a;ways consist in the success.
but is a opinion because there are many people that are agree and other are desagree because some people take a good opportunities because they said that they was very entusiasm and also there are people that never know what is success for this reason are desagree but in my situation
I was enthhusiasm and this support my success.
In conclusion, I'm agree because is probavility that if we are enthusiasm we will have success in the future and always will be a step to have success. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
C48A4DC42846 | Someone will find many activity enjoyable such as soccer. I think people should play many sport like soccer
People will find soccer fun because you get to work together and they just have fun. For example people now in days don't even talk anymore they text. If you play together you can communicate with others. Working together with other people would be good for the future because you will know how to get along with others even if you kinda don't like them you will learn how to be patient. When you play soccer you get to hang out with your friends and possibly meet new people that you might actually might like . So you get to make new friends by just playing soccer. In life it's not about winning it's about having fun with your friends. Mostly playing soccer can be fun other people you might not even know so you get to work as a team and having more then one person play with you. If you go outside to play soccer you get to run and thats good for your health so you get to have fun and be healthy instead of sitting at home getting sick by eating unhealthy. You can grow up to be strong,healthy,nice,athletic,ect...Soccer is a very fun sport that mostly everyone loves some people dont really like it thats why i am writing this to pursued people to play. This is why i think people are going to enjoy playing soccer and talk to their friends saying that soccer is enjoyable.. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
C495D1E686C0 | From my point of view, this is a good idea because most students have a different situation in their life. Sometimes, they woud like to become an independent person, so nobody can coerce to do something even their parent. In my eyes, it is not important that the students finish high school in three year or four year. After graduating from high school, they are a good person, aren't they?. I think this is a most important problem. To me, the students should be a good citizen because the society needs them to develop. A good behavior is more necessary than graduation, and they have to practise or use the lesson that were learned in high school, so they will get a lot of experience.
The life is an adventure, discovery, and study. Day by day, everything is changing rapidly. Due to this problem, the student not only study in textbook, or document but also learn from substantial. When we face up with difficult problem, it gives us more valuable experience in the life, i think this experience is too hard to find in book, or school. If you graduate in high school early it will give you more time to learn new things from your life, so you will grow up and have a lot of opportunities to success in life. For instance, Generic_Name who i admired, was a founder the Coffee Shop Company in my country. He was still graduate high school early and then i worked for his company. At that time, he was learning how to grow a special coffee, which is the only one not only in vietnam but also over the world. At the present,
his company is the best coffee company in Vietnam. He said to me that difficulty, experience are the keys to success. Actually, the life is a challenge: it isn't easy to you. If you would like subdue it you have to prepare everything as soon as you graduate high school. Therefore, the student finish high school early; it is very neccessary to prepare for new challenges in the life.
As we can see, the economy is delicated and various, so you have more time to find an occupation which is suitable for you. I believe that 50% senior were confusing about their future because most of their time is in school, class, which forgot going ouside to expand your knowledge and doing some part-time jobs to get new lessons. In my opinion, most of people fall down in their life because of lacking of experience.
In short, i support this idea because it make us mature, independent. Besides, we have more chance to success and to do new things. It's also a good way to demonstrate your ability | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
C49F716838E7 | Should students attend to year-round schools?
Considering year-road schools they are good for students to attend too because they retain more information,students stay in school,and become more responsible students.
In my point of view, I think they are too expensive,students do not spent time with family or friends,and dont have the opportunity to have new experiences in life; for example having a summer job.
For example the experience I had in life with year-round schools was in Generic_City, when I lived their with my family for over ten years after living in the United States for nine years for my life; and for my parents for over twenty year of living in the United States; moving to Generic_City was a big change of life to my family. My parents wonted the best for me and my brothers, so we attended to a year -round school. It was not easy being their because me and my brothers did not know much Spanish but know is are first language. Also it was too expensive,and students did not spend time with family, all kids do is attend to school all year.
After me and my brothers finish up are year in that school, my parents decided to move us to a normal school to spend more time in home, and have more life experience. It was so much better being in a normal school because I had more time in school vacation as a student, also had a summer job, and more time for me and family.
Also I experence more new thing in my normal school like being part of a band, playing for the school soccer team,being part of the drill team enjoying school like kids shoud do.
In my point of view student should not attend to year-round school because some students have part time job,it too expensive attend at year-round schools , and some students plan family vacation out of the country to spend time together.
But having this year-round school some students retain more information and stay focus to learn more information. Also by not attending to year-round schools some students have more life experience and become responsible in life.
In conclusion i consider students should attend to normal schools because they are less expensive,students can have a part time job, and also have some more life experience to help them become more responsible persons. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
C4A208FC02D2 | Can a positive attitude take you to the life that you always have dreamed?.There are so many reasons to support that a positive attitude is the key to open the doors of succesful!!!. Being positive, anyone acquire the capacity of be smart to make good decisions. For example a negative person never going to take risk to make a hard decision because always going to think in that everything goes to be bad. Positive attitude must be in the mind of everybody because is the only way to be succesful in this world. Positive person eventhough sometimes make mistakes never going to give up and always going to keep trying to achive anything, no matter the negative commentaries of the people. A positive attitude bring the happiness that everyone is looking, it's like be a super man with super powers. A lot of famous people like actors, singers,entrepreneurs, and others recomend be positive even upon a pouring rain all of them are a good example to say that. All these things prove that be positive always going to be the step that everyone should take to be someone in this life.
All these things that positive always going to be the step that everyone should take to be someone in this life there are a lot of famous like actors, singers, entrepreneurs, and others recomend be positive even upon a pouring rain because a positive attitude bring the happiness that everyone is looking, it's like be a super man with super powers, always a Positive person eventhough sometimes make mistakes never going to give up and always going to keep trying to achive anything, no matter the negative commentaries of the people that is why a positive attitude must be in the mind of everybody because is the only way to be succesful in this world, for example a negative person never going to take risk to make a hard decision because always going to think in that everything goes to be bad the only way to make it is being positive, anyone acquire the capacity of be smart to make good decisions think about this cuestion, Can a positive attitude take you to the life that you always have dreamed?.There are so many reasons to support that a positive attitude is the key to open the doors of succesful. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2 | 3.5 |
C4A5B0BAEB44 | In my Driver Ed class there was a boy who would always make natsy or rude jokes, fight or bully people, and disrepect teachers for no reason. He's known as a jerk and self-center person in school. When he's alone in class he's a quite and nice person to be around. One day another classmate of mine told me that she saw him having dinner with his family at a restaurant and wasn't acting out. One time I saw him help a old lady at the family food market at school;carry her grocery bags for her. First impression can change because people actions speak louder than words, your just getting to know someone, and you think know someone better than anyone else.
Actions speak louder than words because you may think you may know someone by what they say to you,but their actions their are as important as well. For example colleges are not only looking at your grades but they also look into what clubs you join. Because colleges want to find interesting people to recruit. Our president is also a prime example because he kept on saying "Let's build a wall.", and he did it. It shows what kind of person our president is. When people ask a upset or angry person "Are you okay?" the person always reply with "I'm fine.". Even if there body language shows their not.
Your just getting to know someone,If your trying to get know a new student in school by you saying hi to them, but they don't say hi back. It doesn't make they a rude person once you try to talk to them. Just image being a new student; who move to a school that everyone knows eachother since they were kids. Its much worst for the students that don't speak english as their first language to make a very good impression as well. People who choose to get a pet have to get know your pet in order to know their pet's wants,habits, personality and needs, also their dislikes. If you want a loving relationship with your dog, cat or anyother pet. It all starts with getting to know them first and giving love to them.
Inclusion, first impressions can be change because people actions speak louder than words, your just getting to know someone,and you think you may know someone better than anyone else. Everday you meet new people and some leave powerful impressions or terriable impressions. Overall we're all humans and on one is prefect. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
C4A874260D21 | Most students enjoy summer vacation, but some educators feel that the summer break is too long and when they return in the fall, they become more lazy and they can't retain information as easily when they were in school.
Summer break is the only long break that the school gave to the students to do all the things that they couldn't do during the school year and they can rest for a long preiod. I don't agree for these reasons:
First, A lot of students wants to work during the school year or do other things that take more time to do, but they can't do it because they got too much homework or they need to study for a tests that they have that week and they just had time for that. So in Summer break they got 3 months so they can work and do more things that they couldn't do during the school year. Students can work and have more experiences that can help them when they want to apply for another work that is much better for them and learn more things.
Next, Students needs a break after the school year. Most of the students get stressed for all the works and tests the teachers gave to them, their brains needs to relax and rest for a preiod time because it's not good to be always working, they got tired too. So Summer break is the best period to relax and distract for a period time. Students can go to the beach and have fun, Enjoy more time with their famillys, hang out with their friends, go visit new places, too much things they can do in this break and the weather is perfect too.
Finally, In Summer break the students don't worry about works or tests they may have need to present when the break is end. When they have Fall, Winter or Spring break the school gave to them just one week and in that week most of the teachers gave to the students works and tests they need to make after the week breaks, so in conclusion they don't have breaks because they need to study or do works that the school gave to the students. In Summer they don't need to worry about that and enjoy the time they got.
Some persons may don't agree with me because they think that have more breaks during the school year is better for students, but they need to know that the students got works during that breaks and they need to study for tests that they need to make after the week break, so in summary, they don't got that time to relax and give a time period to their brains so they can rest.
In conclusion, Summer break is the only long period that the students got to relax and they can do so many things that they couldn't do during the school year because of all the works they got and test that they need to study for. So Summer break needs to stay like that and is the best season for students so they can enjoy and have fun in their long break. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
C4B53350B704 | write to a covince a manager of a bussiness to select you visit and leanr about the work that interest you?
Explored on a role of computer is just a challange for me. This opportunity it will allow me to fallows my dream, goal and future for my baby's boy. I t may be sound selfish but, I will demostrated what I am capable. At thise time it may be many dreamer writting this letter, but some might not be so serious like the way I am because having many reason to demostrated this company to select me to go and explore what I like, it will no be a worst desiccion. Knowing some skills on computers in most factories are ussing technology and always have someone that is expert is always a good deccision. A energetic person fun, and responsable best seller. Responsible and what I do working in the same place for many year, deserved a change, schools who have this kind of opportunities are the greatest.
Technologiest is growing and growind days by days, and the most important companies now have greatest employees who are master on computers. I was studied computer skills for 6 years ,and them got my degree. After that I decided to go back to college and i got a master on how to designe web site ; during that time Five students were nominated to a competition that who write faster will wom a medal, I was the winner typing 200 letters for second. I also know how to created web sites, working in many different kind of programs.
In this days is hard to find a person who is friendly, energetic,good actituded and also who like to share with other. I considered my self one of those people,I experince my self already working with costumer before that I was not interesting on computers I was working on a salon cutting hair and I enjoy dealing with people sometimes is really hard but you get usually with them if you know the costumers better. I think i will be a pretty good seller if you are looking for one just contact me and give the opportunite that I need. Therefore if you not trust me I can demostrated you what I can do you can se me how hard I work
Working in the same place for 12 years make me a responsible employee. Loving what I do and see the people who are proud of me make really happy they love my job because they know that I do it with passion. Even if I dont know something I will learn how to do it and it doens't matter how long is going to take I know at the end It would be a reward. Being a yound girl when I started my first job, I can not forget that theb manager told my boss she can not do it she is too yound let her go, it make me really sad because I know that Ineed a chance to shows them first, and now they said we will make a big mistake if we let you go that why I think deserved this opportunity
I might be wrong in this possition but, is never late to tries something new and I know this is my biggest opportunity for my future. Therefore I want to show the world how the Industries is growing by using computers, internet. The technology now make a big impact in today's world, it is important that everyone know how to use computers in our future all companies and jobs may be requiered of that use of computer and I hope I would teach many people how if they decided to choose me for the program. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
C4CFCB3B7F13 | Dear principal today i would like to write about the plans that the school have with lunch food, I have hear form many students about the school food lunch chaging many students are disapointed and others aere happy for the news, My self personally I have my on opinion that I would love to share with you about this topic.
In my opinion I think it would be great for the health of the school and student to have a healthy food during school hours, one main reason is bacause it keep our body,healthy strong in which we can reflex our education, It will benefit all the students mainly the ones that are in PE class,eating healthy can improves more day of life and better human body, eathing halthy can prevent you from disease and probably some virus.
by eathing healthy you will not only will be able to be on a good fit you can also feel good and with feeling good about your self means more thant anything in this world, my opinion about this i agree with this change and i would like to see more plans for the upcoming futre years.
every plas have good and bad opinions many student at school have said and have their own opinion, Many of them dont like to eat halthy they just wnat to eat and enjoy their life at the fullest, which is reasenable and i undestand they point, we all know that the food that make our body get fat and get worse is the bad type food but we all love that kind of food, is delicius and it taste great for example pizza, hamburgers and all those kidn of food.
To keep a balance and for the students to be better and feel better about them self i think it will be the best to have a schedule of food for example :monday healthy food, Tuesday bad food...
In my opinon i thik it will be the best for our students and for everyone in the school to have a healthy food schedule that way we can be happy and satisfy with our body. I agree with the plan of replacing the school food for a healthy kind of food. thanks for all your pation and i hope you like my opinions and you could consider this on your future plans. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
C50BE3C76571 | I dont like becuase the student forget all information of the year in the vacations. Teachers or educators feel that the summer because students do not retain information.
I thick when the student have a spring breack or summer vacation we need study in vacatio for not forget all information, we take in the year of the school. Is necessary to be ready to next year. we need take care for not fall the clases.
The teacher well be ready to very year cause sometime the students well be ready for start the year. I think the students they need prepare every year after the summer or other vacation.
Is not bad have vacation in the year because all time study is no good, because the maind no have a relax, the maind need to distract in other thing.
I am not good student but a try to get one is so dificult for me cuse I'm not speak englihs good, but this is not scuse for not study in spring break or in summer, this is for every day to bad studen to good student. nothing is impossible to go better to better. | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
C51C5EA029D6 | There are many other ways, how we can choose our character traits. The first way is to choose our own character traits, by picking it for ourself. The second way is our character formed by influences beyond our control, by not being able to control it. The most reasonable character trait would be choosing our own character trails, because it makes the most sence out of all and most of the population can control on their emotions.
There are different types of character traits, for example funny, exiciting, joyful, and many more. Our character traits are formed by our own influence and by our own actions. That's what causes them to react from different types of emotions. For the most part, we are able to control our emotions, but sometimes we cannot control over them so they go out of control.
Character traits can be used in many different ways. However, there are some character traits that we can't control, it would happened to us by itself because we sometimes don't have control on ourself. For example anger, sadness, and depression are the reasons why we lose control sometimes because we are unable to control over it. These emotions can be dangerous once you are out of control, you don't even know what you will be doing, it could be something really terrible. That's the reason character traits can be good or bad sometimes.
Some people support the fact to pick there character traits for themself, some think it's not in our control and we are unable to control it. The people that said they decide to choose the character traits for themself, say when they do something they can feel the emotions in contol of them and do what best fits them. On the other hand, the people that think the charater traits is not in there control, say if they are working or doing anything the emotions of them just happens and they can't control it. In most of the cases it is caused by the bad emotions like being mad, or sad and more.
There are many more reasons of people talking about character traits. Not all of them are good nor not all of them are bad. It mainly depends on the person who is controling it. For the people that are unable to do so can control over it by doing couple simple things and not letting there emotions take over them. That's why controlling you're own character traits is different than having it controlled by some formed influence. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
C52B76D995C6 | Generic_Name
Where i would like to visit
3/21/18
If I had to choose a place to visit i would choose Brazil. I would go to Brazil to learn and expertise many new things. I could learn how to speak Portuguese, I can find out how Brazilian food is or i could even learn how to make it. I would even go and see one of the famous parades held in Brazil, one of my friends went to Brazil to see the parade and he said "It was beautiful." Going to Brazil would be great.
I would like to learn Portuguese because I could get along with the people and even be friends with them. I could even ask for directions if i didnt know where i was going.
I would like to try out Brazilian food. I would want to try it because I never had it. It would want to know how it taste and if i like it i would try to learn how to make some of their foods. I would try to make it because I could make it at home and never forget about my experience with Brazilian food.
I would like to go and see the Fantastic Parade in Brazil. I would see it and take many pictures and never forget about it. I would like to know how it feels to watch a parade that everybody loves.
If i go and do all of this i would never forget about it. I would always remember the good times i had in Brazil. I never forget about the expertise I had. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
C53073A5A9CB | I am going to talk about a prompt that Tomas Jefferson wrote, about being idle or always doing something;
Idle or active?
, I think that when you are active you can make and accomplish the duties that you have faster and better.
The reason that i think being active is better, Is because you will get accustomed to always do something and that can help you in your future in your homework, house duties, and in your future job; and i know that being idle does not help you to grow as someone that is uses full to the society, because one of my cousins does absolutely nothing and he start to get into a lot of problems with our family.
If you are always active you are showing to the people that you are someone they can count on, someone that demonstrate, values like determination, and responsibility; and most of the time people are looking for does type of people to manege a work place, food store,school,and companies.
I also think that active people are more likely to be successful,I am sure that it is true because my father star to work when he was only 9 years old and he was always doing something, and then whit the time he reach to be his own boss doing what he like but never stop doing the duties that he give to himself make him a really responsible person; and that why i think that person how are always active have more potential to succeed.
The reason that idle people are not going to get anywhere for me is because most of the time people are looking for somebody with energy and wants of work and if you are one of the people how are always on the sofa watching television i am sure that you wont be the first choices for them.
In conclusion the reason why i chose the people that are active make more accomplishment in they daily life is because that have more opportunities to show to the word that they are here and that they want to be seen and they want something to do and do it better and that they can reach their goals. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
C5376D2ED6EE | Generic_Name
EOC Writing Prompt
13 March, 2020
School Lunch Menu
Do you think that it is a good idea to change the school menu? Students are the only person who can choose what they want to eat. Students might prefer eat a hamburger than a salad. Changing the school lunch menu is a bad idea because students might be allergic of some types of vegetables and students' favorites food would be eliminate.
To begin, changing the school lunch menu is a bad idea because students might be allergic of some type of vegetables. For example, Generic_Name is allergic of tomatoes and lettuce. If the school menu changes then Generic_Name would not go to the cafeteria during lunch. Because of his allergies, Generic_Name have to stay away of those kinds of vegetables. For students like Generic_Name, the principal should reconsider the idea of not changing the school lunch menu. Overall, the change of the school lunch menu would not be benefit for some students.
Secondly, changing the school lunch menu is a bad idea because students' favorite food would be eliminate. For example, some students' favorite foods are pizza and hamburgers. If the school cafeteria changes its menu then many students would not eat because the cafeteria would not have their favorite food. For those students who would not eat, the school cafeteria will waste the food. Overall, by changing the school lunch menu can lead the cafeteria to waste food.
Some students might argue that changing the school lunch menu is a good idea. They argue that by changing the lunch menu students will have a healthier life. This point has merit; however, the change of the school lunch menu is a bad idea because others cannot decide what students should eat or not. Although, students will have a healthier life, other people cannot decide what students should eat.
In conclusion, changing the school lunch menu is a bad idea because students might be allergic and students' favorite food will be eliminated. For example, if the school lunch changes then it will have disadvantages for some students. Second, the cafeteria can waste food if they decide to change the lunch menu. And lastly, although students can have a healthier life; other people cannot choose students' food. Overall, students will decide if they want to have a healthier food or not. | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
C537E278BAE6 | No they shouldn't add an hour more because we don't need the hour but they should completely change the time for waking up and getting ready to come to school at 8 because i feel like every kid will have energy and not fall asleep.
also i think they should put each class an hour like example math should be an hour also Science , English , geography because all we honestly do need is come to school get our education then go home we dont need all stuff they put like electives they just make the day more longer and waste of our time honestly thats my opinion and how i see it.
they should only put the one hour in for the kids that need help or catch up with there missing work and that will help more for them because it would benefit them more but after all the day i think they shouldn't put that extra hour but like i said only if kids need help they should put the extra hour in.
after all they shouldn't make it an hour because its really not worth it if we already have a long day of school they should just take electives away so school can go more faster and just get it over it also just get our education faster. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
C548AD0C706C | 1. Many kinds can't understand because the different subject.Young student don't really get the work that older kinds do. It really hard to teach young kinds because some older student don't even remember the work from any grade like me some time time my little sister be like can you please help me in be like am sorry dont even remember it really difficult to teach a young student. Older kinds have difficult time to teach young kinds they have different way that there teacher teach them how to there work. It really hard to know there work in explain the way we explain the kinds the better they understand what they supposed to do.We have to have a lot of passion to do it.
2.I think many student don't really get it because they older student some student don't really get it some of them dont get it fast but some of them need more extra work with it.Older student some time they explain good more then the teacher but for me it better in adult because will ask question in they know well because they teacher. Like some time i explain my sister what is bad but some time i don't know so I ask in adult to explain me really well that how in school work to young kinds may not really get the older kinds a younger need a adult to understand it well.
3.I go to a program is about math but i really understand because we share opinions of different work they do like student have com plenty different work they have it the hard way in the easy way student get more confused when they have com plenty different work like my math teacher I have different completely different work. I don't understand her nothing at all but I think because different language but asking some else in the program she explain the easy way i cant understand her.
4. Student can"t really get it they need some one to be beside them in tell them or teach them I really wonder if there were only one student or a lot because is program but if it was only one person they really can concentrate that really good because there a lot lot if there was more than one person it fine because it will be more help that the main effect if there was only one person in not a lot of them in was a big problem with then.if there were talking to much it was big problem for the program.
5. paying attention is really good thing so the student can really get the work they can get in learn what they do. The most important is if the young student get it if they don't get it they will fell the test because the older one properly know but can explain can find the easy way so the student can understand it really understand it good they really more information how to treat the student in explain it good make sure it good to them make sure not to just yell at them you have to have passion. talking with some one like your age understand it all of us have different kind of ways to explain it in to learn it. Like me I understand it with a adult like PROPER_NAME that one my teacher i can listen to him but some with younger them me or alder them me. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
C57371A3E79F | I agree with Emerson's statement about individuality. It is find for me that I can be myself in a world. I'm thinking that the world is trying to make me who I am and make me see. the way I am can make me do whatever I want to do. I could visit wonderful places like seeing great nature, going into a big forest, and go see big hills. this would be amazing to see wonderful things.
I can be myself in a world when it is constantly trying to make me something seeing things like a place to see nature. Sometimes in some places to see nature is amazing. Seeing nature like seeing different kinds flowers, and seeing and beautiful. I will also went to see the blossom trees. Those would be interesting for me to see those kinds of Nature.
I would think about in a world and it would constantly make me something else when seeing nature a big forest. Going into the forest usually it is just trees, but when I see something new in the forest, it would be very interesting. I would see in the forest that the life is changing. Also I would see fresh fruit growing from the trees. And also I would see a beautiful area with flower bushes.
Sometimes I think in a world that makes me something else wants me to see everything. This can maybe explain that I am on top of a mountain or a hill. Hills would be better for me because I just only want to see a high view of the land, with the mountains it is too cold and windy. When I see big hills usually it is just grass. Going up to the top of a big hill and When I see that this land is clear, this may explain that there's only a plain grass area with trees, this is similar to the past a long time ago.
It is good for me to be who I am, and being myself in a world. This may explain almost everything. Saying that I disagree with this statement thinking that It doesn't seem very interesting, it may feel like Emerson's statement doesn't make any scents. For me this statement makes scents, because it does describe the world that is trying to make me something else about the greatest accomplishments. That is why I agree with Emerson's statement, to be myself in a world. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
C582EB969552 | Some believes that there act of kindness around the world. That happen to me once with my friends. Two years ago,in 2017,me and my best friend,Generic_Name,are ready for our first day of middle school. We were excited to see each other,we were excited because Generic_Name moved 3 years ago, in third grade. I was sad at first but until my mom say that they move not that far,my mom takes me to his house every weekends. Now when we start school i gonna see him every day. It because we have the same class and i was happy we have the same classes together. When i got to school i see Generic_Name in a far distance and start running to each other like we never seen each other before for a very long time. Now we start learning classes together every day
We where in English class to do a act of kindness to your best friend or closes friend. I say i was gonna do with Generic_Name,but then Generic_Name mom called him from the front office to pick him up. i said to Generic_Name what going on,he said "i dont know". soon after he didnt came to school for four days i was getting worried if his family are okay. i called to him many time,but he did not answer. until Monday he came to school looking sad, i said,"what happen",he said that his grandma was very ill and might not make it .I felt sad too because his grandma was like my grandma. She been treating me like i was her grandson. Soon my mom took me to see the grandma to see if she okay.
Once i got home from visiting the grandma of Generic_Name,i was thinking what should i do to cheer up Generic_Name and his family. I was thinking for a full one hour,and then i was thinking why not buy them presents for the family. So on Sunday i went to the Nike shoe store,Walmart,target,and shoppers when i got there at Walmart i was thinking," what should i get for the mom and dad",While i was thinking i went to the Nike store next to Walmart to buy his older brother air force one,that cost about $299 dollars. I said why am i spending money on expensive stuff. Then i went to target to get a $50 dollars gift card for Generic_Name and his little brother. So in total it cost me $100 dollars. Then i went to buy balloons for the grandma, it say,"god is here to protect you". Right after, i went back to Walmart to buy a vase that cost me $42. Then i went to shoppers to buy flowers that cost $40 dollars because i got a lot of flowers to put in the vase.
On Monday we went to Generic_Name house to give the family gifts. First i give the shoes to the older brother,he seems really happy about the shoes. then i give Generic_Name a gift card as well as his little brother. Then i gave the mom a vase with flowers in them. then they ask me how much was it. i say almost about 432 dollars. They felt bad at first but i told them i had more money. Then i went to the hospital to visit the grandma to give her the balloons. She said thank you and bless your happy life.
i was crying when she said that. So after that we went to church to pray and pray. When me and Generic_Name got pick up it was good news that the grandma live. We went to have a party with their family. Then i present the act of kindness to the class and got a easy "A"So this is a story of act of kindness. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
C5B351564A3F | According to this prompt can you imagine that some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, to conserve energy and resource. However, now did you ask to your self, should your school follow this model by extending the school day two hours?. went i think in that i give me some thing. although, follow this model by extending the school day two hours have benefists and disadvantages of follow this model to a four day of school week .
fist, think about benifist that is very important part for students and for the employees , however consider how this model is going to help students and employees from school. Then how this model is going to help the school if they dont conserve energy and resourse. For instance, teachers are affected in how they give students work when they need some proyect to do how they use energy if they dont have resources. Now left think about if school dont have resourses how students use the restroom if dont have water, students also use water to get a shower went they have a game in the school, another think is that women in the kitchen they need water for cook and give students lounch. However, some students work after school and teachers needs to take care their childres after school or some teachers live very far. Beside, they could affect school education. Lastly, school are affected for many manner this affect whith the hours being to a four day school week in the other hand,
let meask abouth disadvantages.
Second, students,teachers and employes are affected in the disadvantages. For example, some students work after school if students wants to stay after school maybe they lost their jobs because they dont present to his work or if they have some homework to do after school they can no stay because they need to work studens are affected. Beside, teachers are affected too because after school they need to take care they childrens or maybe some teachers live very far and spend many time for arive to his home. In the other hand, school employes lost his work because if school work only four day at week the drive lost some hours of job this affect some employes and their families. Thats why this dissadvantages affect studens work and students education because some students dont came to the school if they are resposable with his job. However in my case this affect me because i work after school and i need came to the school too but i need some money. They are many reasons why this disadvantages affect students and employees. Let me ask some benefist that is good.
Finally should fallow this model by stending four day school week you should have some benefist. For example, you should have one day off to stay at home with family, do the homeworks that the teaches give you or spedn more time to study, teachers can relax one day or maybe they prepare students assignment.
In conclution, to conserve energy and resource to considering the benefits and disadvantages to a four day school week, many pleople are affected mostly students and teachers because two hours would affect students job, also the teachers because some teaches live so far from the school and they dont have time to past with his family. In the other hand, the good thing is that they should have one day off and they can relax, students can do their homewors and they can study for his test or maybe they can go to his job in the day off. But is important can to the school every day because we need to learn more every day and in the future can take a better job we can do a good people and a good example for our family. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
C5C74A1D0020 | I think students should commit to career at young age because of these reasons.
Students should commit to a career at a young age because it may have them in school because students may be thinking about there future and then get movtivated to get more done. Students at young age also be invasted in the career they may choose for example being a soccer player, being a basketball player, being a football player etc. This the first reason why students should commit to a career at a young age cause it will help them become a better person in life and also help there future.
Students should also commit to a career because it will help them perpare for life because they will be getting for college and thats a big step from highschool that is there road to succues because when they are in college they will be learing about there future job whiles if students who don't think about there future at a young age will probaly go down hill for them somethng like getting into drugs or getting killed this is a second reason why students should commit to a career at a young age.
Students should commit to a career so that can can have a good life because if you don't think of a career at a young age you will not be good in life there many example like being homeless. Therefore students should start thinking about a career because it would be coming so fast.
These the reasons why students should commit to a career at a young age for a better future. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
C5CA6C22BAFE | Taking out the student favorite food shouldn't be taking out cause a lot of kids wont even come to school cause of the lunch and but if there different kinda food it would maybe make kids love lunch more. its a really bad idea coming from the principal. And something kids may not like the food from the beginning cause it may not be cooked right, or it may have the lunch lady hair in it, and lunch ladies should ware hair nets when they cook the food in the morning and after noon.
And this should be for the bananas too if they don't look good you should throw it away and some other food it are past days. well a lot of kids dont care about what they eat only if its good. And Chips or other snacks shoudn't be taking away either mostly poeple like snacks more then food. it would be better just too leave the food alone and let people enjoy it. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
C5DE10EA489B | Having a positive attitude you can find the key to success in your life because, having a positive attitude can influence your life a lot and for a good reason. As I know positive attitude is the key to success in life.
In many ways attitude can help to success in your life. for example with a positive attitude people can be more secure in their life's. They can make a good decisions at work or somewhere else. Also they can be more friendly with other people. Some people can be more secure in their life's with a positive attitude.
Positive attitude can help them in school. For example students with a good attitude can have a good behavior in school, they can obey directions from the teachers and respect their classmates. Students can have a good grades in their classes. Also students can stay after school for homework or for help their friends with their assessments. Students with a good attitude can influence in school for a good thing and in that way can influence other students to have a good attitude.
While some other people think with a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Other argue that it's not always being positive. There are several ideas that can improve this thoughts as positive attitude not influence in success in life. It's not always being positive.
For example sometimes some people need to have a bad attitude because other people are mean. Sometimes some people has a bad attitude because they have problems with their families. sometimes students have a bad attitude because they receive bullying in school. Some people has a bad attitude for the action of other people and that affect them.
I think that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life. People can decide a good decisions and that can me them successful in their life. Also they can socialize better with other people. In conclusion having a positive attitude people can be more creative with their ideas, they can think better their decisions and also can be more socialize with other people and that make them better persons in life. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
C5E45F477A84 | Have you ever met someone, or an interviewer, and show a good or bad impression to them? People think that first impression can be changed because everybody has a second chance. While others think that first impression can not be changed because it shows who you are. I agree to the motion that first impression are impossible to change because it shows your personality, your attitude and who you are.
Firstly, first impressions are impossible to change because it shows your personality. I had a friend, who dressed inappopriartely to an interview for her job. But to her surprise she did not get the job because of how she dressed. Also after a while, she couldn't get any job elsewhere. This means that whenever you go somewhere, you should dress appropriately, check how you use your tone with others, so people will know that you are a good person, respectful, can take responsibiliy for your actions and shows how mature you are. Not only does first impressions show your personality, however, it shows your attitude.
Additionally, showing your attitude is most likely impossible to change. I remember I used to disrespect, fight and insult others when they did something to me I didn't like or even if they needed help from me. I met this old lady and she asked for my help then I told her that I didn't want to and insulted her, then she said to me I am going to have a hard time in life but i didn't take what sh said seriouly and left. As a result of what happened, as I grew up, I tried to change but couldn't because when something goes bad and I knew it was not me, they will all mention my name. And I wish there was someone there to offend me. And thats when I remembered what the old lady told me, I wanted to go ask for forgiveness but unlucky for me she went to heaven and now am left with her curse. Which gives me this conclusion that always respect everyone you see even if you don't know them.
First impressions also shows the kind of person you really are.
Furthermore, your impressions shows who you are. Not long ago, this was this lady on the news. When i heard the news it shocked me because she went to a store, picked an ice cream from the fridge, licked it, and put it back in the fridge without paying for it. This obviously shows that, she ruined her reputation in public and everywhere. Now everyone knows who she really is. Not only did it ruined reputation but she brought a shame to herself, her family, and also her native country. First impressions are impossible to change.
Lastly, it is valid that first impressions can be changed because everyone has a second chance. But not really because sometimes your impressions towards someone stays the same even if you change. Others will think you are not your self today and also others will think it's a good thing but not everyone depending on what impression you made on your first time meeting. So I say that first impressions likely impossible to change.
In a Nutshell, showing your character, who you are, and your behaviour are impossible to change on your first impression. Mostly first impressions are not easy to change. Would you on your first impression be respectful or disrespectful, appopriate or inoppopriate, and be willing to take responsiblity of the concequences of you on seeing someone older than you, are you? | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
C5E4E48AB704 | studies have shown that one way to improve student achievement is to start after school to do homework. teachers and students have egry to staying after school to help other students that need help with their homework. some teachers need help other teachers have egry to help other teachers to do their work.
some students don't want to stay after school because they want to go home to play video games, but i think is a good idea to stay after school so students can ask questions to the teachers about homework.
students have shown that staying after school can help them to do homework, it can help students bring their great up to an A and Lord more then what they now, teachers can help other students to study, so more students can under Stan, doing homework after school is a good way to do it because wen you at home some times you are confuse so the better way to do homework is to stay after school to do it with your teachers and it can help teacher to, so the next day they don't have to teach them what she or he have learn.
teachers and students have to make a minting after school about helping students to do their homework after school some schools don't do that because students dont want to do nothing after school so teachers have to make a students to staying after school to do homework some students go home and they come next morning with there homework not done, some times is the teachers fold because they dont want to help students to stay after school to do homework or to study, so students can bring their great more up then what they have.
teachers shut do tutoring after school because some students want to go home and play video games or listing to music or videos on YouTube wen they haven to do their homework, some parents they dont event asked their child rends that if they did their homework, so teachers shut start doing tutoring after school so students do homework and parents dont have to worried about that because they now that thy stay after school to do homework, some student want to stay after school because wen they go home some times they dont Eben now how to do their work so some students want to work with their teachers so they can under stand more.
some students want to stay after school to do their homework with their teachers but some dont want to or students dont want to stay after school,l they shut do tutoring after school because student can learn more they can do their homework teachers can help them is a nice idea for students and for the school so some students can bring their grate up, students some of them dont want to staying after school because they want to go home and listing to YouTube or play video games and they dont bring their homework to school. | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
C5FF203DE2DE | I used my sowing to help me with having a choice to use it as a long term career, I can use it in case of imergencies. I can help people out, make money, save money, help myself out, and not be a failure.
If I have nothing else to do or dont have a nother career idea I can just thing of sowing as my long term job, many colleges have a arts and craft classes and I can get in to any of them
If I have an emergency and something is ripped I dont have to wait, get an appointment, wait for a few days, and get it fixed. I can just do it at home and do it Quick
I can make a good deed and just help people out with this for free for people who cant pay money or you can just brighten and suggest the idea. I can help any one i want from family members to next door neighbors.
I can save a lot of money because if your paying you have to pay a lot for a good job or little for a bad job. this way I can do it how I want withouth spending anyrhing or having a mistake.
If I can save money then I can sure make a lot too. anyone would cash for someone who can do a good job.
I dont want to seem like a failure to my family and sowing is helping with that, and this way I can prove to my family i can do better.
To sum it all up I use sowing to have a choice if wether I want to have it for a career or not, for emergencies, to help out others, save money. make a lot of money, and not be a failure. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
C616874461F9 | Is the most benefit to work alone because the students learn more, for example: if they work in group they need to divide all the work in always can't all the students learnd all the work because a student do one part of the work and other student also do the other part, but if a student work alone he can learn all the work because he do all the work alone and he know about al work.
Work in group also have benefit to, is more easy and more fast because all student do one part of the work, another benefit is if a student don't undertand the work the other student can help to explain, in this form all students understand the work, the mayority of the students prefer to work in group because is more easy and sometimes a student don't work and all the rest of the group do all the work.
But in my opinion I prefer to work alone because I learn more and understand more about any type for example if work alone I need to do all the work and I need to found all the information and do all the examples and explain all about my work, the most important about this two type is learn to working in group and workin alone because sometimes in the future all will work in group or alone,
in both form is good to work and always do the best and each work.
Both have benefits but I think that the best option is to work alone also because is better for the student start to work alone, for the teachers the best option is the same, the students work alone because in this form they can learn more about the student in how they work and how they think, the teachers can see the capacity of each student because not all the students work the same in this process help to all the teachers learn more about all students. | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
C616CFDBCA6A | Online courses and receiving your education at home can be beneficial in many ways due to the fact that you're technically not in "school" for seven hours a day learning. For this very reason, being home schooled and having online courses gives you the chance to have more time to do your work, reevaluate, and overall to take as long as you may need, and whats important is feeling comfortable and moving at your own pace.
Although, some may take this as an advantage or opportunity to try and fit in extracurricular activities and or to try and learn new things because maybe they want to pursue something different that needs more time of something and less time of a seven hour education course that restricts them of doing so because school takes up almost of half of the time in their every day life.
Online classes can often help people but make it harder for other people to learn, sometimes you'll need a buddy to help out or you'll need a teacher to ask questions to learn but people may take online courses because they feel that they can work better alone rather than to be working with others and thats where they could be in the wrong.
You're not always going to know everything, you have to give yourself the chance to open up and have the opportunity so that you could expand your knowledge of education, there's a point in time where you've got to say ask a classmate or teacher for help, and Im not speaking on the behalf of everyone but thats how people are, they think they can learn everything there is to know about something but you've got to take a step back and know when to say hey and say these five simple words and that is, "may I get help please".
Therefore I do Indeed agree that taking online classes is a great way to benefit off of beacause people may feel that they can work on their own and move at their own pace and overall just have an amazing experience at the end of the day. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
C61946131A41 | Identifying a career at a young age.
Identifying a career at a young age may be difficult for some students ,most of them think different ,some of them doesn't even care about their future or what they are going to do with their life ,parents may think this is a good idea because they want a good life and good future for their childrens and want them to be successfull and this will change their perspective of thinking.
Although some people think that this idea is a bad idea , and this is going to be hard for students,because the students are going to have more homework,projects,test to get prepared for their career and some quizzes too,Actually people this days is use to only if the students gratuated and get out of school is when they have to start thinking on what the students want to do or work , for example if students finish high school and they start to work in a regular work like a restaurant,they may think i'm already here working good ,I get pay good ,why would I go to school again,I don't need to go school again just to spend money ,I'm good like that just getting my own money to wasted only for me,and this would be the way he is thinkg because when he was in high school; people didn't talk to him about careers when he was at school.
One reason for start identifying what students want at a young age is because they would have a lot of time to think what they really want in their life ,for example if a student is in 9 grade and he says I want to be a police and then he is in 11 grade and he think different and he wants to be a doctor,he would a chance to change his career because he had time to do it , another example i can give if like what is a student want to start knowing how his career work, like the doctor career he may wanna know how much credits he need to make in high school , how many years his career is going to take ,if he is going to have the opportunity to go collage, would he be able to pay his career,that's why is a good idea to start thinking at a young age,and start to getting prepare for what he is going to do in his career.
Another reason for start thinking what the students want in their life,is that they may know on what they are good at,to know their self,and start to think if they are going to be successfull in their future ,they may start doing good in high schoool to do credits and try to get a scholarship ,for example the student finish high school and he is going for his career maybe a doctor and at the middle of his preparation for being a doctor he saids I'm not good at this and this career is not going to a successfull for me I would only give up a this point , he may think this way because he didn't have opportunity to change what he wannted to change ,why? because the school start to talk about this when he was in 12 grade and he did have change to think well,he didn't have chance to change his way of think ,another example I can give is that some students like latinos students , some of them doesn't have a good economical life and this may be hard forsome of them on finishing their career ,so they have to start getting credits ,start to get good grades to get a scholarship, Because most of the latinos students want to be successfull in their ife and this would work for them ,Identifying want students want for their future at a young age is good ,because they know what they really want and this really work
In conclusion ,Identifying a career at a young age is good because the students will have they time to know what they really want ,and to know on what they are good at,and start to do good at high school for they to graduated,the students will have more opportunities in their life is they choice a good career for their life , this is a plan that would change the way how students think;young students think better and very clear and this may guide them toward a specific career in their life. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
C623A886C6E7 | First i imagine if my school change the lunch menu i think that will be great for students, i agree to school have new lunch menu because we want to try different type of food, also i think students are bored to ate the same food every day and some time students those snt'
want to ate at school, they bring their own food because the school provide same menu every day we dont see any change for long time thats will be my reason we want to see a new lunch menu for the school.
Then after they change the menu all the student will see all the change and they start to comment about how is the menu, of course it will a percent of students they will be not agree about the food, thats why i recommend the principal will do a session for student to start to vote what kind of food they want in their menu. I recommend these for the principal to listen all the opinion are students said, when the menu change we dont got any issue or complain from student because that will affect the change of the menu because the principal take the decison in him self.
However if in case the principal convince about this i will give some examples about my opinion and what i agree to have a new lunch menu i support all my data because i want the school to change the lunch menu.
whatever happen about student reaction for the new menu the principal how to know have control in the students because that be a big deal if not be prepared or make a bad decision somehow the principal will prepared to fixed correctly and faster and improve a good resource for all student, but my opinion is to make all this happen because we need the school change and give attention all the opinion of all the students.
Finally we are welcome to have a new lunch menu, and we will enjoy the change what our school give to us, and for all.
The principal made are all students comfort in the cafeteria and give new menu all the students will be great and celebrate to have a change in their school and the principal need to do that action. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
C649BC3F0C2D | A students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early is a bad idea, maybe have a lot of problem after they are finish high school for three years.
However, finish high school in three years is a good thing to think about it, students will move faraway and move on their life, but that are a small group of students who are thinking one way of their life after three years high school, but the other group of students are have a problem after they finish high school and they need help to resolve the problem they are in. For the students who are have problem need help to resolve, they problem are they making more decision that let they think about can the students do it or can the students sure about this decision or that decision, because is a big decision to change one person life and it happen to every students even the greatest student.
Three years students don't have enough time to think more about their future and not 100% sure about they really are in future, have a lot of students who are finish three years high school and have a good jobs or have a good place to live, not everyone the same life so some students before finish three years of high shool know what they are doing and after high school they making other decision. Four years students they are more ready for the decision and they are have more time to think about what and where they will be in their future, and they got all help from teacher and parent to help that think in mind steady.
Students are mostly don't finish high school three years they have less experiment about college then students who are three years high school, however the three years high school students have more problem then a four years high school students, three years high school students maybe on the time they thinking what they doing next if they can't make it or they are changes they carrer they end up stay with their parent forever into they know what to do next and on the time they off school the those student going to forget everything that they had learn in school and end up failing.
My opinions is every students need more time to think about their carrer in future, before step forward into their life they needs more time to think and do whatever they need in every class and think for their carrer. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
C652190DB53F | Working alone is more beneficial than working with a group. People can work relax and calm without being interrupted, and no one has to ask other people opinion, and also people are shy , they might don't like being surrounded by other people. On the other hand, working with a group can be good, because everyone can share ideas. However working alone is much better.
Work is already stressful, and work with people talking and giving opinion about the job is worse. Imagine a work where the whole group is speaking and there is someone stressed, this person won't be able to work relax and think about new ideas, probably when the person get home, it will be more stressed than someone who worked alone and quiet. Being alone make any person relax, and once you're relax no one can stop it, the ideas come to your mind.
During doing the work, might suddenly appear a new brilliant idea, and with a group the proposal is check with them and see if everyone agrees, and it spend time, and also might happen that not everyone agreed. Working alone can gain time, because people can use the time they're asking the group to work more instead of asking someone opinion. Also it creates discussion, more and more people speaking at the same time, disagreements and agreements, wasting time, and making people confused. Then it is better work alone to gain time working instead of asking, everyone does your own work.
Being surrounded by a lot of people might be hard for shy people. For example, I'm shy, and work in group for me is a struggle, have to talk to other person, have to share my ideas, I can't do my work relax, I can't either think about anything. The impression caused is that people will look at your work and judge it, and won't agree, and there I'm, needing to do everything again, in most of the times I don't even show my own work I just agree with other people work. It is not good, the brain doesn't work how it was supposed to work, people looking and may judging, all of it might collaborate for a terrible work.
Some people might say that work together people could share ideas and open the door to new opportunities, of course share ideas is a good point, see every point of view. However working alone has much more benefits, is better to have a good time working, without stress than share ideas and get home stressed and full of everything.
Working alone in a peaceful place, just you and your thoughts, to think about everything, every point, to analyze all things, relax and calm, whitout being shy or stressed. It is the benefts that everyone needs to have. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
C655195F667C | The best way of work.
One question has been asked during a long time. Is it better to work alone or to work in a group?
Most of the people and analysts have got the conclusion that working in groups could be more beneficial.
A factor the support this idea it is because you get to have different thoughts, ideas and ways to see the life that can help you in bad situations. For example, if you are planning either something as big as a school event, or something as simple as a classroom presentation, there is occasions when you run out of ideas. You can count in the group. They are going to be there giving diverse solutions to the problem, otherwise, by yourself you could be struggling like if you are in road with no exit.
Working in a group sometimes can make you relax, laugh and bring positivism, even in challenging moments or when you are facing stress. Every time you have to work in this way, you do not spend boring moments. There will be always something to talk about. You and your team would be saving memories that in a future would be a moment of laugh.
Another fact about working in group is that you get to finish the work in a faster. More people working in the a series of things in a quickly way than just one, makes a big difference. It will give space to the creativity, where you can practice more, give details to the work or even do new creations.
Because you are working in a team you do not focus only in "I" you open your mind and start thinking in "we". This is going to be useful in the future, when you go out to the real world. Working with other people, you have to deal with different personalities and thoughts. The team working abilities are going to be place in your mind.
When as a team all your tasks are completed you will find a great euphoria in the results. It is going to make everyone proud of themselves and also it is going to be a method to keep pushing them up and never give up.
Sometimes when you get to work in a group it might sound or seem a difficult task. But instead, you learned new experiences and new abilities. It become a helpful tool to develop character and to grow as a person. You have to learn how to speak with the people and how to tell your ideas in a clear manner. That is why many people agreed that working in teams brings more benefits than just working alone. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
C6555F21F7CD | I believe that Winston Churchill's quote,"success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm", is true because after you make the mistake you learn how not to make that mistake again. The only way to learn how to be successful is to make a mistake. I think that you should always isten to your elders because they have been threw rough and happy days. When we are little, we always think that our parents are being really strict, but they're only trying to keep us happy.
I have made alot of mistakes when I was a pre-teen and I still make mistakes now,but at the end i realize that I was wrong. I was thirteen when I got my first phone and my parents always told me to not have social media till i'm sixteen. The only reason why my parents said,"no", to social media was because they didn't want me to get hacked by people. All though, my parents said no to socail media i got it anyways. After couple weeks of having social media, someone decided to hack my snapchat. At that point, I realized my parents were always right.
My parents have made mistakes before too. When I waa a baby, my parents took me to my grandparents house for the first time. After we got to my grandparents home, my parents forgot to close the door behind us. So, I crawled out of the house and they didnt see me. After that, this guy saw me crawling down the streets and there were cars driving by me. So, the guy carried me to his shop to see if anyone comes to find me. After couple minutes, my mom realized I wasnt there so she ran out of the house to find me and than couple blocks down she saw in someones shop. My parents always checked if the door was closed after that incident.
Always keep in mind that you shouldnt do anything without thinking of the affects. If you not sure if its right or wrong, then you should ask someone for their opinion. If that doesn't work out than your probably doing something wrong. If you do something wrong then people will change the way they look at you. It better to keep in mind that your family and friends have faith in you. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
C656A870B2B7 | Is it a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early?. In many schools districts offer programs that allow students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. This program make students to take classes that can help them to graduate on time, and many student take courses during the summers or in the evening. This is a bad idea making students to finish high school in three years. Because when students are try to graduate in three years, students may not be able to take elective course and student are no joy they last year of high school.
First, when students are try to graduate in three years, students may not be able to take elective course. For example, many students are interesting in elective courses, but they not got enough time to taking elective courses because they are take the basic courses for they can graduate on time. When students just take the basic courses they are not make progress in which courses they are interesting. In conclusion, students need four years in high school for they can take courses where they are interesting and they can start to grow up in that courses.
Secondly, student are not joy in they last year of high school. For example, school where are make student to graduate in three years, in they last year student have to take courses and SOL for they can graduate on time, if they dont past students most retake, and this make students frustrate. This program is making students to rush. But if they fail any classes that make students add more classes to they last year and all this make student to no joy they last year in high school. In conclusion, Last year for students don't have to be the worse year.
In other hand, there are people say, student just need three year in high school, for student can enter college or the work one year early. They argument, that student with three year are ready to graduate and enter college or the work, because many student may finish with their courses and SOL in their third year and the last year they don't do nothing. This argument is incorrect because in the four year students are doing what they need to finish and they planing where they wants to go if college or work. For example, students want to graduate on time, and they need to catch up or retake anything they can do it in the last year. In conclusion, student need a four year of high school for they can get anything what they have to be done.
In conclusion, put this program in school is a bad idea because make students to finish high school in three years. Because when students are try to graduate in three years, students may not be able to take elective course and student are no joy they last year of high school. Because when students just take the basic courses they are not make progress in which courses they are interesting and student are not joy in they last year of high school. In conclusion, make high schools just three year to students is not enough time for students to be ready and plan their future. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
C65705E1E072 | Human has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change or influence the character. Does human can believe that first impression are almost impossible to change ?Based on our support ,we going to discuss it.
Peoples' influences can almost change your altitude of understanding,many people are contaminate by their own environment where they live , certain believe on God whatever the type of believes ,they cannot change their impressions even the way they go through.
Human being uncontrolable in the Earth ,that affect the rate to make the problem grow up .The first impressions can be change if human wants to change to another impression more classifiable . The life knowledge affect also impressions , the education is the biggest issue to make you better ,parents can change the way you act by your impression . They play a huge rule in your life even in the future .
Based on science fiction on National Geographie they test humans' impressions can change depend to your own enviroment which you are in .All supports surround for exemple , money, education, parents , drogue, environment can affect your impressions. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
C65AD37C8194 | Desagree,To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplisment
To be yourself in this world is kind of difficult, but if you try really hard you will success with honor,respect,humble and make you strong. Not trying after you lose make people weakness, fearful and incapable.
If you want to success in life and future, just help others when they need it, and be humble with those people who do not have anything in life and they have to sleep in the street. Nobody is more than others, God make us equal. Be yourself every where you go, you do not have to change your personality because other people do not likes you. You have to prove yourself that you can do it, no matter how many time you fell down, just stand up clean yourself and continue. You will found a lot of obstacle in life and all you have to do is play like you are on the soccer field.
You have to be strong and prepare for what's coming in life and do not worry if others tell you that you are useless, just show it to them that you can do it. Sometimes people just left and give up. Not trying after you lose make you weakness person. Weakness person are those who give up in the first try, they are incapable to fight for what they want in life, and don't let no one change your personality, if they really love you,they would love you like the way you are. My mom always told me,"do not give up till you are in the top",after all the struggles you will be a better person.
Nobody can change yourself, you are the only one who can dicide what you really want to be in life. You make your own rules, but you have to respect others, I will give you a counsel, If people treat you worthless do not treat them like the way they treats you,be original and treat them like royalty, after that, they will see that who lose gold was them,not you. Do not let no one hurt you because we are in a world where no one wants to see any body get victory. All I can say is be yourself, if you want to dye your hair blue and you are afraid what people opinions are, just do it, do not start walk around to find your happiness because your happiness are inside. I hate it when people said like what happen if I do not looks pretty, you are pretty inside and outside, do not make yourself miserable.
The struggles will make you strong and get all you want in life, like David and Goliath, "the little boy who fight with the giant warrior and he won, when he throw the rock into his eyes", no matter how big is the problem and how small you are, you have to fight with your fear. If you pray to God and tell him what is going on in your life, he will helps you to solve it, like he solve David's battle. Do not let people change the way you are, because some people just come and goes through and we have to enjoy what we got while we have it and do all the things that we haven't, and thanks God because we are here.
Conclusion,
Live the life you love and love the life you live, just do what makes you happy. Remember that your happiness are inside, all you have to do is look for it and find something that you can prove yourself , that you made it without help and make yourself feel proud and do not let people take advantage of your insecurity because you are great, you are strong and that is all you have to do, focused on your success. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
C662BDD50395 | Have you ever made a really bad mistake and think you can never come back from it? You can always come back from a mistake. Duke Elligton the famous jazz legend always said "a problem is a chance to do your best because you learn from your mistakes.
If you mess up and make a mistake you will learn not to do it again. It's better if you make mistakes insted of being perfect because you can't learn and better yourself. We all make mistakes once in a while that's why we learn from them. You shouldn't let your mistakes hold you down. You should let your mistakes better you. Don't try to be perfect. If you do you will just end up never learning from an experince. When you make a mistake, adapt to how you can fix it and don't make that same mistake. This is one of the reasons why a problem is a chance for you to do better. Another reason is You learn not to make the same mistake twice.
You make a mistake and you learn from it. It's fine if you make another mistake just don't makr the same mistake again. If you make the same mistake twice you could get in trouble. When you make a mistake and learn from it you grow. Don't take a mistake as a flaw. You become wiser from a mistake. You become a better and smarter person. This is why a problem is a chance for you to do better.
The last reason is you improve yourself. You let yourself learn more instead of feeling like you can't come back after that mistake. Your mistakes become positive because you learn so much. Mistakes were never meant to be flaws. They werer always meant to be learnd from. Mistakes help you become a better person by learning from them. Mistakes were made by succsesful people and they became famous basketball players, Singers, Football players, etc. Remeber that mistakes are to be learned from. | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
C66B4F537548 | I Believe people who have positive attitude's towards life, are one of the biggest keys to success in life. You will see your life in a different perspective, than people with negative attitudes. They doubt them selfs threw life and never reach there goal's because they dont have a positive attitude. You'll never give up easily or at all, because you see that it will help by making you fill more accumplished with yourself by having a positive attitude.
Having a positive attitude will also make you a good person. You'll show yourself and others how to change there attitude towards life. As you are accumplishing your own goal's in life, you could be helping others do the same. So by helping people out with the way you see your life, you could help others reach the same goal on positive attitude with there lives. life its self, is the biggest challenge anyone can go threw. Where put threw challenges everyday with out even knowing, and get threw them no matter how hard it may be. By helping others it could make' not just you seced in life but others as well.
Even my family and I have been threw the worse. From living in room's, basement's, and being envicted from apartment's because my parents would'nt make enough money to keep us in one place. They were losing alot of hope with life and from ever being stable for there family, but me as the only boy in the family I had to keep my positive attitude in life for our family goal in reaching stablebility for my older and younger sibling and I. I would wake up on top of some folded blankets the hard wooden floor with my mom and dad aside me but I would'nt care cause as long as I knew my little siblings were on the bed comfortbly sleeping it would make me feel good because I knew one day it was all going to change.
Keeping my positive attitude with my life really helped me alot, because once I turned 16. I started to work at Mcdonald's everday after school from 3:30pm to 10:00pm for five days a week. Everytime I got payed I would save up my checks because I knew my parents never had good cars. We would always buy junky cars off the road, because we could never afford new cars. So I set my self a goal on buying my parents a new car, because I knew it could help them out. By not spending on old cars, I also knew they could never save up from all the stuff they had to pay and such. There were many days at work where I wanted to quit, but I would always look on how my family and I lived. Also on how much my parents struggled just to give us hot food on the table. So I always kept my positive attitude with me for my family.
The day came after 1 year of working I had saved up over 10k for a new car for my parents and the family. My mom and my dad where so proud of me and told me they could never thank me enough for all the hard work I had put in everyday at work for the family. Me and my family started to gain hope on our family after they saw what a big change I had made to the family just by having a positive attitude. So my two oldest sister's and I where starting to save up for a home for the family and that too, we had accomplished. Now we have a home that we have been living in for 5 years now, everyone has there room I bought my self a car too. Life is good and I feel super successful with my life already. So yes, I do believe having a positive attitude is the key to a successful life. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
C676CE973E9E | I think that by extending the school hours is not a very good idea. Because there might be some students that have things to do after school and teacher as well. It well effect everyone at the school because there are some student that dont like school very much. So by extend the hours they will not show up to school and that will effect the school and them.
I dont think it well be a very good because there might have some student that have work after school. Or they might have to go and pick up there little brother or sister. And by extending the hours it will not let them do it because they have to be in school and some student will lose there job because they had to stay at school all day.
Some student might have to walk to school and if you extend the school hours then it well get dark and then they cant walk home alone. It will get dangers to go home alone so its best if the hours stay the same because then they will all be fine and by keeping it all the same can help a lot of people.
By extending the school hours the student might not be mad to stay all day at school so some student will not show up at school. Because they will not want to show up at school because they dont want to and that will effect everyone that u know. Because the student will fail and that wont help them at all.
If you extend the school hour then there is going to be more homework to do and held at the end. Because there is go to be more work to do at the end.
Some teacher are going to have some thing to do and work at thing at there homes so by extending the hours the teacher that have think to do they will not be abole to do it and that will make them mad and then they will quit sand that would not be a good idea for the school and the teacher and the student.
So that is why we shouldn do it because it will effect a lot of people and then it will make al lot of people not very happy so if we just keep it the way its soapstone it will be all OK cause then the student will be happy and the teachers will be happy so keeping it the way we have it will help a lot of people. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
C693AA305835 | Should some high school districts allow high school to graduate in 3 year instead the traditional 4 years?
yes, i think high school district should allow students to graduate in years. high school students should graduate in 3 years because most students have all there credits,they can go to college earlier, also you would have another year to explore new things.
Most student have all there credit by the 3 ears of high school so which mean i think they should be able to graduate in 3 years instead of 4 years because they would be wasting another year in high school and they would have been able to go to college and so they can can already be studying what they want to become in the future.
Student who graduate earlier they can start going to college earlier it can be benefictional for you and people should take advantage of it and they would get college done faster and you would be almost be set on their career and moving on making money because every one want to go to college and e
Third reason is why school should allow students to graduate 3 years instead of 4 years because students would have a year to explore and try new thing maybe find a little better part time job save some maybe even rent a basement or something
In conclusion high school students should graduate in 3years not 4 years of high school.
Some say by graduating early you would not be getting the full experience of the four year high school but there are benefits when you graduate earlier. In the future i think school students should only have to go to high for only 3 years. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
C6A047494477 | Generic_Name
3/18/2019
what you have already mastered ,those people they don't bealive they don't grow up ,that is not true we have to create a new things improve us self we don't like to stay the same place and nothing is imposible.
I'm agree with Emerson's statement what I already know that's a adventage for us . because it is easy doing something what we have already know ,but if we never try it , and we never know if we can do it, I need improve my self and switch my position that's a new goal . so many people they do not bealive them self , well we born poor people , so nothing is imposible ,trying what we want to do in the life . with the time we can get , and reach what we always dreaming.
You will never grow up , if you doing the same things in the life there is I lot opportunity in the world choose a new goal you will see so many change on your way don't give up.
It's easy doing what I already know because we feel comfortable doing ,for example on my work , I'm working busboy helping the server we working team work ,and easy but the problem is want to be a server but they never let me to try it i want to grow up swith a position to earn more money.
Creater a new things , we have so many skill to grow up don't be afraid doing or tying new things we want to improve us self I don't like to stay the same place doing the same things I don't see any improve on my life your life can be change a week but you have to be a positive ,don't give up , try it, isn't nothing bad. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
C6B1B7E91EE8 | The most enjoyable educational activity would be when we go out side to play sports out side. The school has multiple enjoyable sports like baseball, basket ball, and soccer, but the most fun for me would be foot ball because it has a lot of physical movement.
Way I like it so much is because the strategy you and your teammate use and because u can put more trust in other people and it's fun to play against other team and learn how they work.
Or if sports is not something you like that much the science club dose different experiment like when they made a volcano they made erupt it was fun helping them. The drama club is something that most people like because of all the acting and getting to know more people its amazing wen people that nobody notice before can be come stars bay working hard and practicing all their lines and not mess up its amazing.
Or may be more of a musical person theirs a classroom for people that can play an instrument they make loud but enjoy able music to dance to they are kinda amazing and then wen people start singing its amazing wen your body hears their voices its incredible I wont lay right now out of everything the music classroom is what i like the most over sports and everything else. | 3 | 2.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
C6CAFAC5589F | A enjoyable way to spend outdoors it will be to go with your bike specially in summer you can get to even see places like stores, the river, birds and the cars an you cant take a food and have a picnic. You get to see other people too that they are with bike or you can buy food when while you are riding with your bike and get to a store too. While you are rididng with your bike you can see to really famous places like could be a musemoun or a a restaurant and see people in those places and when your riding with your bike you can go wherever you want its amazing that get to see reallly beatiful places, While you with bike you get to see a river and people taking picture of it. And get to see place like zoo and see beatiful flowers or whilw your wuth your bike you get to see people with their too that they like it too by going out with their bike. Its a enjoyable activies their its fun you get to see a lot beatiful places like store and or you get to see places famous stores and you get to going while your with the bike and its an amazing activies you get and you get to see lot of things while your riding with your bike. and by riding your bike you could feel exited.
Its an enjoy activies because you get to see places and you you ge to take a food and if you would like and you get to go whit your kid in the bike and you get to see different place or you can take your own food and while riding your bike and you can take your friends too to go out with the bikes and will be more relly fun and you get to have picnic with them and your family whoever you woul like to take while your going rididng whith the bike or you get to see desigh on places like beatiful art and you coul enjoy that activity while your discovering different places and get to know more about it. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
C6DDD966C9FC | Why working together is more beneficial than working alone? Working with group of people increase collaboration and allows brainstorming. As a result, more ideas are developed and productivily improves. Working together prepare students for future jobs and careers. Two or more people are always better than one for solving problems. However, it is an importan skill to be able to get along with others and it is valued by employers.
Everyone has heard people saying "Two minds are better than one" This quote has never rang more true, and all of the ideas it promotes reflect crystal clear off a group work. Working in a group can reduce the amount of work you need to do, as well as make things a lot more efficient. Things are also finished much quicker because of the way many people can split up different jobs in a group, and people with differents skill sets can do what they're best at. This broader range of skills can also be used to help other group members. The diversity found within a group of people is one of the most powerful resources a person can have when it comes to finishing a task.
Though multiple ideas are helpful, and it is less work to be in a group. Sometimes working alone is beneficial as well. It really depends on the circumstances you're placed in, and the people you are around to say wether or not working in a group is benign or unremunerative. Though working alone can be better for one's own reasons, such as anxiety, paranoia, worry about others preferences, or simply because you prefer to work alone. Oftentime students will learn and experience more in group of their peers than working alone, which is better for the futures and possibly what lies ahead.
Working together creates less work and allows more work to be completed faster. It allows constructive criticism from other members of the group, which promotes a better final product in the end. Overall, working together is beneficial because it creates differents points, new ideas are generated. Different points of view create divesity and diversity is the key to success. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
C6DDE5F881C2 | The school cafeteri should change the food to healthier food. they should not give to the student everyday chess pizza, MC checken and rich, beacuse those food are not healty, and Thoes food are not good for student health. the school cafeteri should give to the student vigetable food beens, fruite, mcgrni, fish, and the food that dose't have oil in it , beacuse if the school cafeteri keep giving the same food to the student, they will not take those food beacuse they ate everyday the same food and the student will not take the lunch, and then the school have to throw those food in trush beacuse the student do not buy those food.
and the school will not make any provite from those food the school will lose a lot of money. So I ruquset to the principal to bring those change to school cafeteri, so you can make money and the student will be also happy from school cafeteri and they will buy the lunch.
Thank you | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
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