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B279118BA2EC | introduction, My interests work and i want to visit is about food because i think is good work and i want to work in this work and you lear many thing and i think many student like this work and you lear to cook and you cook for you work or for you family or when your family have party. Good work,good food in the school for student and you lear to cook and after when you family have a party you cook for them and i think you family is happy with that. when you work you have money for you and you family. when you work you no have time for you family and you miss they.
first,when you work you lost the class because you has tried. when you work you no have many time for you family and for your friend i want to work because i want to learn about food i like cook and i cook in my home but, i want to learn more. for example, when you no go to school you los the test. second,when you lear cook you work school kitchen and i think you cook good food for school. when the work like you are happy but when the work not like you are sad. i want to visit because i want to see who do the food and i learn introduction, when you work you work only ten because you have school and the school is important for your life you need to go the school because the school help you in the future. when you select the work you has to select the work do you like because when you work in a place not like you not good with yourself. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
B2919590BDB0 | I do agree with Prime Minister Winston Churchill. My first reason is because most of the people in this world will think that is really easy to be successful, but time will get difficult as you and your self are growing up, for you to be failing over and over again is just a meaning that life at some point will be easier, Most people if they keep failing they won't know what to do, Keeping your hope and thoughts on your mind that's how you will succeed. keep on following that dream no matter how hard time will. Sometime you will feel like you're not getiing answer or at least a signal.
My second reason is that failure is going to come at some point in your life for example; teenager come at school, adult come at work, money wise, housing. failure is something that we all should learn how to over come that problem we should think for a solution make a plan in our life. how are we goinf to fix this part and find a solution to over come that problem if we need help from somebody.
My third reason is that as soon as you over come failure you start learning thing about themselve, that they didn't know before, most people find ways to stop going back failing, that's when you start gaining the believe on keep going on practicing every single method to do not fail again.
In my conclusion most of the people have those hard time and is bext to talk to someone about a look for answer, in way to find the solution and fix this problem by yourself or with someone important in your life. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
B2AD2177A42C | People can form their own character based on what they choose to make it. A person is given the responsibility of choosing whether to do the good or bad thing. For example, if a person hears that their friend is in a bad situation and then choosing to help them out, they are showing that they are capable of make their own character. Others may say that people do not get to choose their own character because it is beyond their control. However, people can determine their own character based on how they want it to be because they know what steps they have to take in order to achieve their goal, they know what is best for them, and they know what they want to become in the future.
Knowing what steps to take will help the person make the right choice in defining their character. People tend to ask to other if the choices that they are making is the right one, but instead of asking others what they think the person has to be confidence in themselves that they are making the right choice. For instance, if a student wants a good future they have to work hard and study in order to accomplish it, and not choose to go the wrong way. On the other hand people may say that having a second opinion is a good thing, but that is wrong because it may cause them to doubt themselves. This is why people should first plan their transaction then take action on it.
People have the free well to choose what they want to be and what is best for them. A person knows what their interest are, so they choose according to what they like to do the most. Furthermore, if a person finds a job that they really like and want to get it, they will work hard for it. Some may disagree with this because others may see that what they are choosing to do is not the best thing for them. This is why people need to think about their choices before doing anything.
People can choose their own character and what they want to become in the future. People could choose to became; artists, actors, singers, or doctors because they have dreamed of becoming one of these seen they were a child. For instance, they would have to focus and work hard in order to achieve their future selves. However, others may say that it is impossible to become what you dreamed to be in the future because they will face may opsticals in their lives. On the other hand, if a person really wanted to become that person they will work intensively for it.
A persons character can be constructed by how they choose make it because they know the course that they have to take in order to achieve their goal, they know what is best for themselves, and they know what they want to be in the future. For example, If a person wants something badly, they will work persistently for it. Another example is that, the person will prove to everyone that they are capable of achieving their dream, and that it is possible to get. People should choose to make their own character because they will be comfortable with their choices. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B2B6C25D967A | I always say attitude is something that make big change. If you have good attitude maybe you always stay happy, because the people with good attitude never had problems because they take everything with calm, so you need to have a good attitude because that can help in the furure to open door,in
HIGH school, collage, univercity,and your job, you can ascending if you ascending you have more opportunities to make more money, you can make all that just with you attitude is easy to do.
If you have a nice attitude you never have problems because,some people thing fight is the most better way to resolve the problems. For example, other people thing different than me, they thing if you doest like to fight you are Hen, and they thing, they are better then everyone just because they like to fight. I thing is better be humble, relax,crazy ,funny, but always with a good vives, never with negative you need to be happy how you wanty with you want. That no matter what other people say.
positive attitude is the key to be success in life, sometimes others people say that can make feel bad they doest thing before of say that, they doest thing, if how you are going to feel good when you listen to her, or ,hem ,But need to thing about that if you want to do you can do. Dont listen to the people with negative thougtht. Everything is on you own if you want to do you can do never say, I can do it,before stard to do remenber if something is hard you are going to the right way.
Some people always go over you, dont want to see you happy,they try to puch you on the bad things, all because you are,amazing with everybudy you are friendly and they dont like that but is no your problem,some times when you no talk with no one they thing you are a bad person,if they maybe know how you are. So live your life how you want, life your life on your own way be happy with your .
The most important thing be with a good attitude
Everything is on your own. If you wanna have a better future,or life you need to make an effort,because nothing iss easy in the life. if you have goog attitude you can do everthing you want.
You need to give all your effort because if you no try can no due,for example. many people born poor but, they decite to efort they dreams. they trying and trying they never stop to trying and now theey are profetionals. Another example. The soccer player some of they born in colonies poor,and that no metter for they,they never stop of following they dreams. So now the has everything of want when they want so if they try so hard we can do to. They do everything because they have a good attitude ,if they born poor and now they are rich we can do to, never stop of fallowing you dreams with effort, sacrice,a good attitude everything is posible. You have the key on your on. attitude is the key to be success. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
B2C32E74812E | Generic_Name.
11/20/2019
Generic_School.
Generic_City, Virginia.
I really think that if we want to be success in life, we have to be positive on everything, a lot of famous people said that for example, Michael Jordan said: the key to the success is to be positive.
We have to be positive on everything that we do if we have a negative attitude everything is going to be negative, maybe we are going to fail but that is another key to the success, that means we are doing everything well, but if we fail, we have to keep trying and never give up, until we get what we want, Michael Jordan said: I fail a lot of times but, that is the reason why I am who I am.
There is going to be bad moments in the journey but that does not mean that we are done, we have to be positive and think positive, because for everything there is a solution.
But another key to the success is to be humble, when we get what we wanted we have to remeber from where we come, be positive is important, but be humble is the most important thing.
But the most important thing follow your dreams and never stop fighthing for them, until you get what you want.
I am agree with this statment: It has been said that a positive atittude is the key to the success in life. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
B2D03F892B0D | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home?
In my position I think it's a great idea to attend classes from home only if you work, or if you can handle any type of work by yourself without a person that will persuade you to do the work, and if you know English perfect.
I think that some students will benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Because for some students it's difficult to wake up early because some students who work on
Part-times, and some students don't want to wake up early, or they go to bed late for playing games on their phones.
Secondly. I think that some students might benefit from this program if they can handle any type of work independently without a teacher or any person persuading them to do the work, because some students are smart and they like to work independently, in silence, without people disturbing thems or without too much explanations.
Also. I think that the only students that can understand any work and can only attend classes from home, are those who knows English Perfect, because if you know English perfect then you can work in any topic or subject without the help of anybody, If you are a Hispanic born in other country then this program it can work for some Hispanic students because they are used to get everything easy, to get what they want without making a effort.
In the other hand, I think that this program it won't help to those students who distract easy or those who don't do work without any person who will persuade them to do the work, because there are students who likes everything easy, students who don't want to make an effort, this program it won't work to those students who don't like to study, to those who have only F on their classes or those who are skipping, or not going to school.
In conclusion I think this program can only help those students who can handle any kind of work without the help of any person. and for those students who have dreams, those who makes a effort to get what it can help thems in the future, for those that knows that life it's not easy, to those students that know that if you don't work for it you won't get what you want on life. those students who can handle any kind of work without the help of any person. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
B2DAE4CC6597 | Today schools offer many tools or ways to complete your diary learning process. one of these tool is called "school at home" or "distance learning". Basicaly students can complete all their schoolworks and learning process at home through different methods like, in this case, the students attend classes form home by way of online or video cinferencing, but is it really good for the students?. Probably not.
It is know that students learn how to be sociable at school, and also they learn how to act at to many different social events or situations in the daily life. For example, we have a group of students, they are all the day working in a classroom with other students and friends that they knew at school; and we have a group of students that take "school at home ", they do their school work in their houses and they just can socialice with they family at home. How can you learn how to be sociable without socialice with new people? different than your family ?. The answer is: you can't. Talk with new people improve you confidence and helps you to make new friends, and as students or young people, we do not used to try to talk with new people, because we are afraid, we don't have self-confidence, etc. and school force us to be social with our partners.
Moreover, some people claim that school is not a good way to improve your social abilities, but that people passed and important point and is that the school is the best way to improve your social abilities. For example, you (as a student) are working from monday to friday at least six hours per day with other students and teachers in different classrooms, the students aren't going to be the same in each classroom. All these factors made you get used to different personalities or behaviors of your teachers, friends, and classmates. School have to many different people with different behaviors that can help you to understand the way that people act and how to be their friend.
In addition, school teaches you how is going to be your life when you grow up and trains you for that. There are to many similarities between school and a job, for example: the schedule that makes you get use to the early woke ups, the homeworks that make you understand how long can be a job journey, and the teachers and students that represents your boss ans partners at work. All these examples of how school trains us for our future. Without all the training that the schools gave us, it would be a problem to get use to or daily life when we grow up.
All these reasons show us that school will benefit students more than "school at home" or "distance learning", because it teach us how to be sociable, it develops or social abilities, and it is a necessary part of our training for our adult life. In conclusion, school trains us as people, it teach us how to socialice and work. | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
B312F104B015 | I agree that the option the some schools are offering is very beneficial for students, which is the distance learning option. Distance learning is being explained in the prompt it says "distance learning is an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing". I think that this option that some schools offer to their students benefits them in many ways. For example the food and transportation are tow big things that some students worry about. This essay will contain the benefits that this option will provide and some of them might apply to you
Some benefits that students will have being in this program are the food and transportation. Let's say that a middle school students always have problems with transportation because their parents work and he have to wait thirty minutes after school everyday, in this case this option that the school offers will be beneficial for him. Another thing is the food. There are some students that do not like food from school some of them bring their own food but some of them opt for not eating anything the whole day. Last year I had a friends that never ate at school because they did not like the food. This option will be beneficial for students like my friends because when you take classes from your own home your are not force to eat something you really do not want.
The benefits that you get does not end there. We all as student had struggle at least once trying to find what cloth to use the next day and if you do not find what you are looking for you might have to go out and wash cloth or use for second time and no body likes that. Well taking this option that the school offers you will not have to worry about that and you can use the same cloth you had when you woke up in the morning. Another thing are the uniforms because not every school let you use the cloth you want. When a school require uniforms you have to use it like or not. By taking the option that the school offers you benefits you in the way because buying a required uniform that you do not want is a waste of money that could have being wasted in cloth that will really going to use. This where tow more benefits that might apply to you.
There still one more benefit and is the liberty to choose whether to do things or not because of the free time you will have by taking this option. Like for example let's say that you are in high school and you like sports but you want to work you will have to choose one of them because school consume a lot of time. In my case I am a senior now and I stopped to play basketball which is my favorite sports to start working because being in school take a lot of time. Taking classes at home take less time than being in school and you could do both things if you want to which are to work, sports or just to do whatever thing you want to do.
Concluding my response regarding to this topic my thoughts are that this option benefits students in many ways.
By taking this option you will not have to worry anymore of transportation, food, or making the things you like the most. Like for example you do not have to decide whether to practice your favorite sport or having a job. As you can see above I talk about some benefits that you should consider by taking this option and that might apply for some students. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
B3145EA3395B | To see someone impression, that might be possible to chang. Because the majority of people might be mad when from somthing when we see them from the first time, I disagree with this statement because most people chang there impressions when they're in a spicific mood, Some might change after a proplem has been solved. Because when I was yonger from now my dad allways use too tell me
"too mach agreement kills a chat". Many peple chang thier imperssions after the first time we see them.
So I have a frined who allways chang her mood by any time, some times she would come to my house and knock on the door even if we were just argued about something, but when I saw her the first time when we met she was very nice and my parent invited her to my house and her first time her impression was very happy and intersted to see us and learen about our culture, so when I saw her the next day we were so happy that we met. and I told her my trip how we came to the US, she was so impress to know more about us, But some time she woluld change becaus of her parents and when she's sad she comes to my house and tell me how she has been and how her family is with her, and I was listen to her as she tells me every thing, But when some one come to our house and see's her like that they say that she's wired from how she acts, but her first imression was't like that, she changes with what impact throw her life, and we're a teens also, Every day my parents sees her they say that she's very talented because she has a very good voice and I use to be so happy to see her singing because she had a good voice, but her impreesion changed after I saw her how she reacts with others, and I use to get surprised of how she's diffeent with methen others, but now I found that people are like a door each person need a spacial key to open them and understand how they feel and think. To see people's impression, I have to look at them when they are in thier good time that will chang the ideas. and to affect especially forcibly or deeply to some one's mind when they see some one impressions for the first time.
I encorage everyone to change thier opinion about the first impression are almost impossible to change. Because the majority of people impression can chang etheir over time or by the area sourounding them, and figer out how make time to understand how it goes and how people thier features from influence by the socity around us and how I said can give the impress with your senserity follow people's impressions, and literally the word impression is the sence of feeling in how someones feeling from sirten situation.
Seeing the reality, Most humans have their way of reactions to react to every thing they can show or chang by somehow in their life, In this period of time no one like to listen to someone's story, Real people who shows their impressions by the area sourounding them it effects us as who we are and the time that we are in, So the place that we are often been can effect our impressions, The place that we been raised in can impact on our impression. People's reactions might chang after an accident happen to some one's in the past It can be a very big and huge chang for some one's reactions if we see them the next time or day. Places and moumints can be on of the reasons why people impressions are mostly can change by this way, This kind of things might be wired to be impossible. Emotions and there behavioral changes in some bodeis deppend on how they think by a word or emotinal apperance can be changed with their behavioras, and some might be in need so bad for somthing and that can also shows their impressions behavioral chang.
When I was in my country many people came to the area where we live there was so many that your mind can't relate to what we see and we all were very nice to them and we gave them many of the things that we have and as much we can, There was so many kids from them I use to be realy sad when I see them like that I refused to give every thing I can to them but some of them was vrery hungry and some are mean but I said to my self in my mind that their impreesion won't be like that if they weren't in need like that. So to see people impression we have to see thier past and what they been throw, Many of them change there mood, and some might change after a prolem has been solved. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
B31D05A5A9CB | Has anyone ever shared wisdom with you? well my grandpa did before he passed away, three years ago my grandpa died because of cancer he struggled and was fighting through but still never gave up. My grandpa once said to me " giving up is just for lazy people that don't care about life, so fight through until your successful". My grandpa was a very wis man, he loved sharing wisdom with anyone that was having a bad day. Well how can you change someones day by just telling a wis thing, has anyone told you anything that change your life and why you should never give up.
You can change someones day by just saying good luck. Last year I was walking to school, I was very scared and worried because I had a unit test. Then this lady came and started talking with me, she asked me questions and suddently said good luck that made me so releived and I got this feeling that I was going to do good on the test. You can change someones day without you knowing that you were acually wis and helped change their day. When someone gives you a chance to tell you wis things always accept and just listen because one day you may give it to someone else in the future and they will pass it on to other people.
Has anyone gave you widom? My grandpa did once, it was the best thing I ever heard and I still remeber the day he told me, it was the day before he died I have a feeling he knew that he was going to die the day after. My grandpa was a very caring and nice man he loved everyone. Everyday I remeber going to the hospital any wonder why did he have to die and leave me. Wis people are the ones that can change the world, make an impact on someones life and are the believers. Sharing wisdom is not bad it is a very important thing to other people because my grandpa said "giving up is just for lazy people that don't care about life, so fight through until your successful" from that day I always try my hardest so if he is watching me he knows that he impacted me in so many ways. I have shared wisdom with my friends my favorite one was, believing in yourself is the key of life, that means believing in yourself is what is going to get you through life, tough times, and challenges.
You should never give up because if you do you will regret everything in the future. Giving up is not going to make you successful in anyway in life. Giving up is when you never got to hear a word about believing in yourself or you have never accepted a wis word from anyone. People can just say anything to bring you down but fighting through is the oppisite of giving up. My parents always told me to never give up because giving up means you want to shut anything in your brain and not do anything about it. Wisdom can change a way of how your feeling and the ways you can change the world anyday or anytime. If you are going to give up, there are a lot of people that are going to try helping in life so take the chances they give and believe in yourself.
Wis people can change the world. Giving out wisdom to anyone is the best feeling and you should never stop giving it out even if its the only wis things you know. Wisdom is the most important thing to everyone. Wis people can change your day around in many ways. Wis people can impact your life. | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
B3241FAB44C9 | A homework club is a great opportunity for students who have a difficult time understanding their work. Sometimes work can be hard and not everyone can understand it. Homework clubs can help students understand their work better and have more confidence with it.
The homework club would have to start at the end of the day when everyone has their homework,the club can be from 3:00pm to 5:00pm that way students have 2 hours to get their work done and have time to chill out at home.
I am sure that many other people agree that we should have a homework club. We all know this would be a great opportunity for students that have a difficult time understanding their work.
Homework clubs can also help students improve grades which will then lead to higher test scores all because students will get extra help and have someone who will help them understand their work better. I am sure that starting a homework club will lead students in a great path to success and wealth. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B32F41984B27 | Here is my three reason why student should not go online do the classes work at home.
My first reasons:student should not do there classes from home.
Because it can be hard doing you work at home it batter do the work at work because you can get help by the teacher at home no one can help you. It can be hard to do the work from online because you don't know what the teacher can gave to you i will rather do it at school because it will be easy to do the teacher can help you with it will be hard try to do you classes work online at home.
My seconds reasons:student who are smart should do there classes online at home.
Student who pass the SOL and the class they should get out early from school because people who have a job they should get out early from school. Student should have a high GPA so they can find a collage they want to be they have to think what they want to be when they finish high and collage so they can have there own business person and make money. People who is smart should not go to school because they already pass every they did.
my third reasons:They should make classes work online only for the kids.
Because it will be easy for them to do they classes work online. They should make classes online only for kid it will easy fro them do it it at home batter then school but some parents they want there kid to go to school and do the work at school. If they school do classes online for kid it will be easy for teacher and for the kid.
My finial reason:For school offer classes online at home.
I think all high school student should have classes online at home because it will be easy for student and for the teacher. If student have classes work online at home they can copy from his friends that why is not good to have classes online. Middle school should have a classes work online at home.
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Collage should have online classes becuase it will easy for them do complete the classes online at home they will have time to do it and get a batter garde so you can complete the classes and take a new classes when you get A or B. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
B3493FBE6476 | Distance learning is a great option for students to attend classes from home. There are many students that fail the grade just because they don't attend their classes at school. This is a great way for students to still take classes and learn more their education. The generation from now aren't as motivated as generations before. Theres might be a some people that wont agree with this statement because they probably think going to school is better than taking classes online or conferencing from home.
Some people may say that it isn't a great idea for schools to offer distance learning for students especially the parents. Most parents would want their kids to go to school and take classes because they think it's better for them. They probably think that they're are ways to cheat if they take classes online. Some parents would want their kids to interact with other students and not just be home all the time.
I agree on all the reasons why they student shouldn't take distance learning as an option but I think otherwise. It's a great option for students because there are many student that fail or drop out of school just because they didn't attend school. If students had the option to take classes online from home then it would give them a second chance to pass and graduate so they wouldn't give up. It even may help other students understand the curriculum more.
The generation now are giving up at such a young age just because they don't even want to attend their classes at school. This is why its a great idea for schools to offer distance learning so students won't just give up and drop out. Having the opportunity to take online classes from home with probably help those students the don't want to attend school. The students would take classes from their homes and learn the same information they would learn at school.
In conclusion, I think it would benefit many students if schools offered distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. It's a great way for students who don't like attending school most of the time. It would be a great advantage for students to have that offer of distance learning, it woud make a huge difference for the generation of students now a day. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
B370B0D18727 | I think that working with a group is way better, because working with a group gives you a better understanding of what you are doing and helps you to be more focus. its can also be very important when you have your teamates around you that if there is any mistake you and your teamates can come together and try to solve that issue. and also working with a group can be very beneficial. because working with a group can also makes u feel confident and makes you good at social interactions. so that when u go out in the world you already know how to interact with your boss and fellow coworkers. and working with people can also make u grow not physical but to grow as a person and to make u more mature and to make u have a better understanding of life and of your responsibilities. so i feel that as a young adult comming up in this world. i would like to have my work experience with a group. that way i can be more aware,focus and to be more understanding of my environment that im working in and that i can learn not just from my self but learn from the people around me.
Working with a group can also be fun you can work with kids your age or you can work with people older than you. it can teach you self awareness,kindness towards others and its can influence you in so many ways because if you are working with people older than you are going to start acting more mature and want to live up to your teamates expectations. and also working with a group can improve on manners, behaviour,self esteem, self conduct and politeness. working in group is very important you can have experience and learn alot from other people it also teaches you what to expect and how to prepared for it in the future. it also teaches you how to act around others and teaches you the importance of life so i think that working with a group is better it teaches you better and you can learn better. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B379CB700CCD | Technology is making people's lives easier, because with technology people can find jobs, play video games, read books, and talk to other people, and buy buy products online thats why technology is a good effect, because is helping a lot of people, because without technology it would it be hard to find a job , you would have to travel a lot to find a job, to comminicate with someone that is from anoher state you would have to travel just to tlak with your friend , and it would be hard to buy stuffs because you would have to look for the thing that you want to buy and travel to other state and pick it up.
With technology buying stuffs online is easy you can pay for the things that you're buying and they wil deliviered it to your house.
Technology is around the world wherever you go you will see technology.
Military uses technology to train their soldiers.
Technology is neccesary for everyone its helping a lot of persons to make their lifes an easy way.
Technology is helping scientifics to discover bacterias or make new medicine for cancer or other problem. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
B37D0A9D7859 | Do you have a positive attitude? I agree with this statement about the importance of a positive attitude. Being positive is the key to being successful in life, I think having a positive mind can help us in our bad circumstances of life and help us overcome bad time faster. Having a positive attitude will give allow you to have a good days. Others may think you do not have to have a positive attitude in order to be successful.
Having a positive mindset will always help you get better opportunities, for example to get a better job or a better home or a better car, but everything requires that you have a positive mindset.
Also having a positive mind will always help you to be better every day every time you overcome a bad situation you will become stronger or also every time you reach a goal, that will help you be better.
Sometimes it is also necessary to be negative to understand or experience bad things or it can also help you be prepared for bad things, or also bad news or bad times. We have to try to be positive most of the time to be able to make good decisions and have better opportunities, but also being negative can help us make better decisions for ourselves.
Different from how I think, people say if you are smart, why do I need a positive attitude? They believe someone can be successful just knowing the skills. There are those that believe if, you work harden than most you can be successful.
In closing, it is my belief if you have a positive attitude you will have a successful and rewarding life. A positive mind will give you better opportunities, and great energy. It is not good to have a negative attitude. People think you only need to be smart in order to be successful, but it is nice to be positive too. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
B385E5EE33B9 | If you ever get a chance to go on vacation, it should be the Bahamas. The Bahamas will blow your mind away. The Bahamas will have everything you want to see. It will also be the best place you've ever go to in your life.
You would want to go to the Bahamas because the beach is crystal clear. You can see all the baby fish that are swimming around you which is so cool! I always try to catch one but it never works. There will also be very colorful snails stuck on the rocks. They look poisonous so I never try to touch them. You can also go surfing there. I am too scared to surf so I just lay down on the surf board and relax. There are coconut trees near the beach which looks really cool. One of my favorite parts is when big boats pass by and big waves come your way.
Another reason why you would want to go to the Bahamas is because the restraints there are like no other restraints here. The restraints there look big and fancy. The best part is that you get to eat at a restraint for every meal because there is no store there for you to buy food and cook it up. Although that may be a little expensive, but you have to keep in mind that you are on vacation. It takes about ten to fifteen minutes for them to serve your food. I don't know about you, but to me that is not long at all. The food taste so good! They also never over cook your food too! One of my favorite dishes is the shrimp pasta. If you go to the bathroom it is super clean and it smells good too. I hate it when I go in a bathroom that is dirty and smells bad.
Another reason why you would want to go to the Bahamas is because of the awesome, clean, and fancy hotels there. The hotels there are nice and refreshing. It is super clean. There are two closets, two beds, and one bathroom which is pretty good if you ask me. There is also a big TV right in front of the two beds. There is also free WiFi for you to use but that is kinda unless when you have a big TV right in front of you unless if you want to play games on your phone which is what I do. There is also a mini fridge for you to put your water so when your hot just grab the icy cold water out of the fridge to drink. The best part is that there is air conditioning and it actually works.
These are all the reasons why you should go to the Bahamas. All I am trying to say is that the Bahamas is a great place to visit with your family and friends. If you ever get a chance to go on vacation, go to the Bahamas and you won't regret it. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
B39F335086FB | Positive attitude Agree Or Desagree
Positive attitude is the key to keep going well in the life and make a great future, believe in yourself that you are doing something well and you feel proud about it, is the most important thing that you are doing, because you had a positive attitude to do it, these are many reasons to agree about positive attitude.
First, one reason to agree about positive attitude is believe in yourself. However, she try never give up about her math class and she believe in herself that with positive attitude she can get an A and will be the best in her class, she aproved that with positive attitude all is possible in the life.
Second, woking in team show us that they use positive attitude working together to win any sport game, as a tool to be successful in the life and became famous in the future like great players game like Messi, Cristiano Ronaldo, and Jordan, but the most important is when they are playing in the field they show importance in the game and convince us to believe in positive attitude to be successful in the future.
Anotherwise is considered that many people believe in attitude positive because is the best way that they follow to be successful,
actually a few people didn't believe in positive attitude, they don't think in their future and they give up easy, when it is the best way to follow and became a successful person.
In conclusion, positive attitude is the key to be a successful person changing our future and always believe in our self that's the most important thing that we have to do. show to others people that positive attitude is the best way to follow. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
B3AAF502DFFE | In this generation people use Technology for their needs and wants. If their was no Technology than I would not be able to take my writing SOL which I am taking it right now. In my opinion I believe that the limitation of human contact due to the use of Technology had positive effects on people's lives.
People use Technology to complete many tasks through out their lives. If their was no Technology their would not be any improvement in our lives neither country. people can contact their family with video calls to see their families that they havent seen each other for years. It has been 7 years that I am living in United States of America and I cant go back to my country for various reasons, but I have been in contact with my family everyday, which makes me really happy, and feel good about it. Nowadays everyone need Technology for everything. My friend father is an engineer, and all his work is with computer, and Technology. If their was no Technology he wouldnt be able to complete his task or learn new things neither earn money.
Technology saves Millions of people lives in many ways. Many people do not have money to take tutorials for their kids, but they can use YouTube and Google which let them learn in a better way, and without paying any money. In fact even though if you had money you could save your money and use Technology/ Internet for learning. My parents never took me to any tutorials not because they didnt have money but because they wanted me to be independent and use Internet to learn more. Technology had helped me a lot, and will be helping me and millions of people in this world. I think in this Generation If their was no Technology people would not improve or even learn anything. I have learned from Internet that you can read books online instead of going and buying. Technology has let people gain education and experiences through our lives.
Their are thousands of disabilities in this world which they cant go and work, but they use Internet to sale some stuff so they can earn money. My cousin is a specialist and he was born with not having one of his leg. He was so depressed and didnt have any confident that one day he could work and earn money, but with the help of Internet I have thought him to buy some clothes and other stuff and put it online so people can see and buy it. Technology has lots of benefits that we humans are so lucky of being able of using it which some people cant, because of various reasons. It has been 3 years that we have opened our own clothing business in Unites States of America, and as we all know it's really hard competing with clothing stores here in USA, but from the time we started putting our clothes in websites and becoming popular day by day we are making lots of profits which makes us really happy. Technology has a positive effects in our lives which a lot of people agree with my opinion.
I agree with that, that Technology also had a negative effects in our lives , but also that depends on the person itself which decides how to use Technology. Most of my friends make fake accounts on Instagram and Facebook to bully people which a lot of people die from being bullied. Technology has a lot of advantages and disadvantages that we can use form it. Some people's use Internet for watching bad videos, making fake accounts and put putting fake news on websites and hacking people through social media which are really bad, but their are only 5% that they do those things, and not everyone which we should think of the other 95% of using Technology for their needs, and the benefits of gaining lots of education.
In my perspective I believe that the use of Technology has positive effects on people lives, because we human are earning money out of Technology, learning new things, and gaining experiences in our lives with the help of of Technology. I think their should be a way of blocking the bad websites and making securities for people making fake accounts and for people that bully others to stop it. In my opinion we should think about the benefits of Technology than the negatives because. If their was no Technology our lives would never improve and we would not be able to learn new things. Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contacts with each other. My dad has been in Generic_City for 30 years and his job is sailing Fabrics and all his customers are from Generic_City, Generic_City ,and Generic_City which they have never been in Generic_City. They have founded our sites through online, and buy from us. My dad has never seen most of his customers in real lives they only have been in contact. We should look at Technology from a good point of view.
In General we have variety of reasons that we could use technology of our tasks to be completed. Technology could be good and bad in both ways which we human should decide of how to use it either of our needs or for negative things. I believe that technology has had positive effects on people lives. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
B3AB4E6C5678 | Dear principal
I think that we should have policy number one. All student should be ably to use there phones in their free time & in lunch. Its better to have them off in class time. Because if we don't then the student wouldn't learn. They should be turn off or it should be low. Some student would really like this idea about using phones in there free time. There some student who don't like to go to lunch or like to eat and by using there phone they have something to do. The teacher get mad when there standing up by having there phone i don't think they will be. Most kids use there phone in school when the teacher don't look so its better to have the rule about only in free time. By having this rule i think it will make kids be better because if there not then they will not be ably to use there phones. That what most kids like and want to be ably to use there phone in school. Not all kids have phones so to make it far for everyone the rule should be phones and ipods only in there free time .Think this would work good as a rule but we need to try it first. In high school you can use it so why not middle school. Kids should start see how it work with the phones in high school. So they can have in idea about it. But not everyone is going to think how i do but i think we should try it for a week or two to see if it works. But think that policy number one is a good one and a good idea.
We never now if we don't try. We should try if it work we keep it if it doesn't then we just say it didn't. But we can say at least we tried. For some student it will work good but for some it wont. Some will have hard time with it but other wont. Most student do there homework when there testing and do good in there class. Maybe is not a bad idea doing this new rule about the cell phones. we should all look at this there some good things about having this rule and yes there some bad ones too. But i think this would work as a good rule for the school. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
B3B9D116021C | People tend to think that setting a goal high to achieve is a smart idea. While the other side thinks that setting a goal low is the better. Although some people may hate setting a goal high and falling short, it can cause a person to give up, but they forget to neglect the part that goals or achievements come in different shapes and sizes. People should be aiming their achievements high because people can achieve more, people can feel more motivated, and people can feel more successful.
Some people may not agree with this position because setting a goal to high and then falling short can cause a person to feel less motivated. they believe this because when setting a goal high and it fails, it can make a person give up and not try. they may think this because when giving up on a goal it can cause a person to feel empty and wanting to not try again. this shows that some people are afraid of failing, and when they do fail it makes them not try again. However, the oppositions looks over other important points.
People should be aiming their achievements high so they can achieve more. when a person sets their goal high, it could mean they are setting multiple goals and not just one, having one goal is great, but having multiple is also fantastic. this can also make the person feel good about themselves, knowing that they have accomplished more than one achievement. it can also make them feel proud about themselves. Even if a person failed one goal that doesn't mean they can't accomplish other goals. People cannot accomplish every goal, all goals are different then one another, but other harder goals can be accomplished.
people should be aiming their achievement high because it can make a person feel more successful. Once a person has completed an achievement it can make them as if they succeeded. it can also help with their confidence, it would give them less anxiety. it also shows that the person who is working towards his or her achievement can do so much more. it can also help some people in the future because they have the confidence they need because they hit different goals. people can also feel like they did something with their life and not feel like they did not accomplish anything in life.
People should aim their achievements high because they can feel more motivated. Setting an achievement means working really hard. It means you must focus on, it should be the only thing you are working on. Most people in their mind focus on this and this is what motivates them to work on one persons goal. In their brain they get this sense of energy, their brain is telling them to work on their goal. that is what make some people want to work towards their goal or try to finish their goal.
So this is why aiming your goal high is a good thing, motivation, success and achieving more can help a person in life if trying complete an achievement. People can get scared of goals, they are afraid it could fail something could go wrong, but the thing is in life you will fail, nobody is perfect, people will have get over their fears and accomplish their goal. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B3F0F2F6487F | should the school extend the school day two hours and four-day a week?
people have different opinion about being ten hours in the school day. some people think it is a good idea for their kids to be ten hours at the school day. However, I believe that being ten hours in the school day it is not a good idea, because it dose not help for the energy and the resources, everyone's brain needs to take a break in the day and ten hours working in the school day is too much for a kid.
First, being ten hours in the school day dose not help in the energy and the resources; Because we spend the same amount of time at the school, But instead of spending an eight hours a day in five-day a week we will spend ten hours a day in four-day a week. so we are going to spend the same amount of energy in both.
Second, everyone's brain needs to a break. If we spent ten hours of our day at the school we are not going to be having that much time to live our lives, do our work and see our family. everyone needs to relax and sleep enough during the day to focus more and do more good at school.
Finally, ten hours is too much for a kid to spend in a day at the school. kids will dislike going to school. they will get tired. for example when my sister stay a little longer after school for extra work, she comes back home so tired, not talking to anyone and doing noting, because she is tired of being a little bit longer at the school.
In conclusion, as you have read. extend the school day two hours a day in four-day a week is not a good idea because it dose not help to conserve energy and the resources, everyone's brain needs to take a break in the day and ten hours working in the school day is too much for a kid. so what we can do is not extend the school day two hours a day, so all the kids can do good at the school, focus more and live their life happy. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B3F18E671DF2 | Do you think it is good decision to make school longer? When i was in my home country schools was only for six hours i disagree that schools extend two hours a day because the students will lost their focus, teachers will get tired from standing more than two hours, and some of the student will change their high school.
The student will lost their focus for example when i was in Afghanistan our school was from 8 to 12 and we where tired from listening to teachers. However, when i came to united state it was tough for many reason. for instance
When i came to united state it was so hard for me to get up at six and come home at two o clock. In addition if we have school ten hours of school each day the student and the people who work inside the school they all will get tired of school and student will not learn the teachers will get tired of teaching ten hours a day. Teachers will get tired of sanding for example they teach more than two hundred student a day so they will get tired and they teach for tomorrow. Once students get tired they will lost the focus form the teachers and they will start to talking with each other playing around the classroom or they will using their cell phones taxing their friends planning to skip their classes or panning to drop out of schools. The student will not get everything in their mind they will forget it for the next day. Maybe some student come to school and stay at school longer than seven hours a day but maybe some student cant stay longer than seven hours a day because maybe they work after school or maybe doing some think at home for example maybe they take cares of their little brothers or sisters or maybe they clean up the house. Teachers will get so tired because they will talking all day long explaining the chapter and students will not listening to them. Some students will change their schools because they doesnt want to be at schools more than six or seven hours a day. And also those who works in the schools it will be hard for them to clean up the schools the bad rooms or to cook food for students and than after that they have to wash ever think for next students that are coming after A lunch.
In conclusion, imagine you dismiss on the usual time of school. I wish that we dismiss from school on the usual time. I hope all the decision maker wonder how much students get tired and stress. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
B403A4E28BCE | Why do we need to seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters? Why can't we make our own decisions? It's because the adults knows what's best for their kids and they been through everything that we are experiencing right now as a teenagers. Or is it because they would like to keep us safe and make good life choices in the future? But, I think we should make our own decisions because we know what's best for us, we can learn from our mistake, and we want to be more independent.
First, when we do something bad and get in trouble for it, we know not to do it next time. For example, I had a friend and she decided to go to a party and I told her not to go because it's always a fight. Well she went and ended up getting hit in her face. I tried and warned her but she make her own decisions and I wanted her to make her own decisions so I let her go. Now she doesn't go to parties anymore.
Then, we know what's best for us. If we know something we're doing is wrong but everybody is doing it too, then we will do it just so they wouldn't make fun of us or we want to be "cool". But, I only do it one time, while other people keep on doing it. For example, when we choose the wrong groups of friends to hang out with. Knowing they are bad but sometimes they bring out the other side of you that nobody have seen or they get you in trouble just so you can fit into the group. Then you wonder why you even became friends with them in the first place.
Last, we don't listen our parents or any adults telling us what's right and what's wrong. we would want to figure things out by ourselves and be more independent.
We know when they telling us that we shouldn't do certain stuff because they did it before when they were younger. But we know what we're doing ( well at least some of us know). Sometime we don't tell our parents what's going on at school or on social media but somehow they find out whats going on with us. We sometimes try to hide the problem and solve it our selves but it doesn't go well.
In conclusion, teenagers today will want to do everything and not listening to the adults. When we get older and start to understand why we did all those crazy and nonsense stuff in high school or middle school, like fighting (knowing it's not going to solve the problem), making fun of other people (knowing that's not how we would like to be treated), and smoking (knowing it's bad for our lungs). We just wanted to be like everybody else". But,
at the end of the day we learn from our mistake and become a better person in life. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
B407B3F81C9F | Everyone has their personal choice or opinion they believe in. People should not seek guidance from an expert. People in today's generation know what wrong and right is. If the expert were to guide you, he or she would guide you from their prospective not what you believe in.
You will always have to make tough decisions in life. It can impact you in the future but you will be mature enough to know the right decision. It's your choice and opinion on what you do with what matter comes into your hands. Some go with their instinct others do mindless choices.
Some of these choices can be personal to tell an expert or maybe your not comfortable. The expert may have their own opinion on the decision. The ideas you come up with for your for your choice can be a better solution. There is no point in paying money for an expert when you can make the choices yourself.
The ideas you have can be very successful and impact your choices. With the ideas you can influence the choice so it can lead to the right path. It's a good choice to come up with your own ideas. Possibly, the ideas can persuade the choice you make and will not make you regret it afterwards.
In conclusion, I believe making your own choices and decisions is a better choice. The choices you make will lead you to success or failure but you have to keep trying. You do not need any expert to tell you about your decision. You need to make the better choice and decide what good and wrong is on the decision. Your opinion matters and will influence your choices in the future. This will impact you to become a better person to benefit to society. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
B41ED2C0C016 | One place in the world I would like to visit is Generic_City,Peru. The reason I want to visit Peru is because my grandma and my dad live there, I haven't seen them in 7 years and I want to see them at least one more time until I grow up. Once I arrive I want to spend some time with my grandma and my dad to catch up what has happened over the years. I also want to go to the beach and the pool and go to the park with my whole family and have an awesome picnic and we would make smores and tell creepy stories, also I would want to get a tan,but one of the things i haven't done ever in my life is skydiving I know it would be really scary but it would also be really fun to see their reaction when the jump out of a plane it would be really funny to watch it over and over again. The last place I would visit is machu picchu because it is such a clam place. At night you see the stars and in the morning u see the sunset rising. I would never want to leave .To sum up i would have an amazing time with my family.
Because I would visit Peru I would see my cousins,brothers,grandma,aunts,uncle and my dad I would see them everyday and we would spend some family time together.
When I go to the beach we are going to have a picnic we are going to go swim also we are going to play some games we are going to have a blast !
I am going to visit machu picchu. The first thing i would do is watch the sunset, ride camels,ride horses and take awesome pictures. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
B459B5B87707 | Just listened that people started taking classes in summer for graduating in three years, Where are the breaks? Don't they need any break. Even machines don't work perfectly after being used continuously for a long time. Doesn't the same goes for humans? In fact, we need more break because we have a lot to do with friends and family. What is the purpose of going to three year graduation if you don't get time to spend with your closest ones? One year is not a long time if you are in a productive environment and surrounded by positive people then why to go for three year graduation in high school ?
High school isn't just about graduating it is about making memories, spending time with friends and learning to socialize. High school is the time when everyone, even the most innocent start to get off their limits and it is when the fun begins. Everyone like to have fun, joke around with friends and skip the school for no reason. It may seen like a child play to most but those who miss this part, miss the most enjoyable days in their life. In the old days it is not money or success that makes you happy, it is memories from your past that bring a light, wrinkled smile on your face.
Memories are memories you can let them die but what will you do of your interest, interest never leave. It will always hunt you in your dreams. If you are scared of failure and not fulfilling your wishes never leave the electives, which you obviously miss if you go for three year graduation. Electives are not needed for graduation but graduation only doesn't serve a purpose. If you can't have a class that you enjoy because of three year graduation then, interest and wishes are worth giving an extra year and you also get so much with it. Human beings don't need much to be happy even a small success or a short class that gives them pleasure can have their face bloomed for the whole day.
More ever, high school teaches to take mature decision and have good manners. It is not that we get a extra decision making class or manner class in high school but being in high school itself teaches to take better decision. Being around with people teaches us to behave accordingly. Having many friends and busy time schedule teaches us to tell 'no' sometimes. It is the place where most of the people struggle and get a better direction in their life. Everyone becomes a better person when they graduate from high school compared to what they were in their middle schools.
Being a high school student it is not wrong to dream for one year faster graduation for the sake of one year job experience and one year salary. In my opinion, one year of job experience and salary is not even close to the memories you have with your friends and the happiness you fell when you come to school.
In the nutshell, everyone of us know that college life is not so enjoyable and fun as school life. We hope to do so much but can't accomplish our wishes in the whole college year. One extra year of high school can do more than ten more years in life. Is a year too costly to spend for the life long experience and knowledge? Of course not. Some may think that three year high school saves a lot of time but trust me, it will be the thing that you will regret most in your old age. This four year of high school is the golden time for everyone as it gives the life long memories and a never ending satisfaction to each and every student who has attended high school. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
B469122B9ACB | Success Consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. I think he is said is right you never give up on anything, you are always going to wings and sometimes you are going to fail. Because thats how you are going to wing never giving up. There is a lot of stuffs that I been done on my life, that now i start thinking i never finish what I start. But I dont give up i know I m going to end up doing them soon. for example there is a lot of people that have the motivation, then they start winning and fail ones and they give up. when you love something you gotta chases it because then you are never going have it.
Failure is a really strong word that nobody likes to like that hear some students get upset for failing a test or class they cant be late because they want to win is just like work if you want to start getting paid more you always gotta be on time and all that. so you can become better everyday. Soccer is one example about success soccer you got to learn a lot of new stuffs, Because you have to do a lot of practice. To win you gotta do something,and do it right all time. We all hate failing I hate failing, I always think that is just a waste of time. I fail so many times but i never give up because I know that I gotta finish what I started ow you are going to success
Enthusiasm thats whats the way to success on your dreams if never use that enthusiasm to do something you are going to be good at it you might fail more than ones but still think about what is going to give you. And just think positive that you are gone be sussefull. Lets said that i m trying to go to collage and I stared to work and stared to get a lot of money and all that. then I think about going back to collage and think of all the work that they do and all that im not going to keep going. Because I lost the enthusiasm that i had. Why because I stared to get more stuffs, and I wont feel success
Thats why i agree with what The britishs prime minister Winston Churchill said. That to get where you what you got to fight. And never give up on whats coming next yeah some times you going to fail but get up and keep going so you can be success and become better and always have a good enthusiasm on your life because every body deserves to be success. never lose your your enthusiasm because thats your key to success. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
B46E31AA2653 | Its important to learn from the experiences of others whether its a good experience or a bad experience.
My mom told me once that it was hard for her to go to school and that was all because she was the women of the house. And she had to do so much work and that was not easy for her every day. Having to cook for many other people and do work for school was really hard even when she would try to do her best it was not easy for her.
Knowledge, Judgment, and Succeed are part of experiences from others as well you might have that in yourself. Knowledge to know and keep in mind that maybe that person you learn something from put so much effort into it or maybe not. Judgment is part of learning to never judge somebody whether its wrong or right.
To succeed from that experience to do better, to learn and to know that from that experience you can succeed and keep in mind what to do good.
Its a good thing to learn from experiences. You might as well relate to their experience that maybe you did not even know you could relate to.
Sharing wisdom with somebody is always a good idea. I think it helps people to improve and succeed and learn from mistakes and learning new and different things.
In other words, sharing your experiences with somebody brings a connection between you and that person.
Sharing your experiences and what you had to go through and knowing the other person know that it was not easy to be successful, there was a lot of work done to put on to be able to succeed. | 2.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
B4994C771190 | Do you think that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home?
I don't think the students would get benefits from being able to attend clasess from home. First, the students not have somebody like a teacher to tell what to do and no body give pressuare. For example: if the student don't want to do what the student have to do no body tells nothing. Second, the student who takes oline classes will not have any friends or somebody to talk. For example: Everybody want any friend or somebody who can we talk if you do stay at home you never meet someone and never know somebody. Third, the student maybe can get frustate to be lonely at home. For example: if the student take oline classes and watch videos conferencing maybe will be boring and the studend get stress in another part if the student take the classes at school he be with friends or somebody to talk. Next, if the student stay at home the student can do whatever the student want to do. For example: if the student want to play video games the student can do that and if the student want to sleep he can do that too because the student will not feel with any responsability also, if the student wants to go outside he can do that because the student will be at home and maybe their parents work all day. Finally, if you take the classes at home and never came to school you cannot live the experinces that we live at school. For example: if you take a classes at home you cannot participate in any activity that the school have like a any sport or party or any activity that one is so funny and you can enjoy the activities with you friend or teachers who always are there for us to lisen if you have any problem and the techer are like a secret box because you can tell whatever you want and they never tell to someone. That's why I think is nice to get classes at school and I think is not so good to take classes at home because you can get more fun at school and is a experince that you will never forget.
In another part if you did not want to get school because someboby bother you like if another student tell you a nickname that you di not like maybe can be a reason that you did not want came to school but you can took with you adviser or your's parents because every body have a opportunity to be at school and anybody can't tell you anything. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
B49D86AC2062 | Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm? its a 50% chance you will be successful,reason for this is that some people give up too easily,some people get tired of failing and failing again. You dont need to fail many times before you get successful.
Some people never put in work to be successful as they are today some just became successful out the cut. Right now the world we live in you dont really need to put in alot of effort,there are many ways of being successful for example we have social media! Social media now has a big impact in the world we live in.
Scientists are perfect examples of this statement. A scientist can start an experiment and fail over and over again till they get they expected the results. Students can fail a test over and over again but whiles he's failing hes learning from his mistakes to pass his test.
Working on something new or getting used to something new,you wont get it right the first time you would mess up or fail but once you keep getting used to it you learn from your mistake which helps you to become successful.
If you ask most successful people of today,some might respond by saying they experienced alot of failure on the way to the top some might respond with a no,this states that failure might plays a role in being successful it may also not play a role in being successful. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
B4B2CB4AA07F | The School Board plans to add one and a half hours to school each day. Is that a good or bad idea?
I disagree with that because, many students have other activities after school. It could also affect the teachers by them staying after longer and kids would just have to take in a lot of new material including homework and its not healthy for them.
I feel like when they add extra school hours to the day it would mess the students schedule up, they could have sports after school or tutoring. They could really enjoy their activities and for them not to be able to do any of that anymore does not seem fair."I have soccer practice every day after school and I love it and it would be a shame if i had to give it up because of more school."The parents would also have to change their schedule because they could be at work and then have to leave to pick up their children, they would also not have as much time hanging out with friends or family because school would be their main focus when they could be outside being kids. However students enjoy seeing their friends at school and saying "hello or hi" we need more time to communicate as well so our friendships don't fade.
Teachers as well would have to work longer shifts, and they already stay after grading students papers while they also have to find out what the next lesson is going to be the next day. They take time out of their day to help the students who are falling behind in the subject and need a little more help to make sure they succeed in school and in their future. Teachers also have families just like every other person in the world, which means they should be able to go home at a good time and help their children out with their work or be able to cook dinner and take time out to care for their kids. Teachers need breaks as well they work very hard to maintain the material we need to understand. They leave the school late like 5-6 and when they leave they look exhausted just imagine them leaving at 7-8 including the fact that they sometimes would stay after helping students and that makes the student tired. We need to give teachers some credit and not push the limits for them as well.
Students stay at school for eight hours each day and if you extend it to nine and a half hours that does not seem like a good amount for students. If they get a lot of work on top of their homework that could stress them out, and because of that their grades could go down because of to much work. We only get three months from school and some shorts breaks and then we have nine months of school, and then you add another hour then what is the point of a break when you just make the school days longer. Kids love going outside and doing there hobbies they can't just sit in a chair all day that also just makes them more irritated. Students also have test's and quizzes including homework each week. If you add more hours kids are probably going to fall asleep and not pay attention which would lead to not participating, students would not have a good attitude either because they would be grumpy and upset that the school day is longer. Our brain can only take so much and they would over due it which is not good for our health. We sleep 9-12 hours a day and have another eight hours at school and then we come home and do more school work and study which leads us pretty much with two hours of they day for us to eat and get ready for bed, just so we can do it over again the next day.
As a student I feel like that would be to much. We are people not robots we need to live not be stuck in a building all day long. We have family and friends that we want to spend time with and that won't be able to happen if they change it because," they think we need longer days." Yes we need our education and we will get it, but for now we only live once so need to make it count and focus on the present. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
B4B82E063D04 | is setting an good example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people or are there better ways too influence others my opinion is that setting a good example can influence other people around you why because if they see you do something good they might catch on and say oh since he was being nice im start doing the same thing and start doing good deeds and that will help others because than people will start catching on and start being to nice to everyone. your setting example for the younger kids because most of the kids look up to there older siblings saying when i grow up i want to be like them so setting an example for the youth or anybody is great. it also helps with safety too if there was something going down like a robbery or a shooting adults will probaly try yo protect the younger kids and than when some adults see some kids by themeselves they will see other adults and run to protect more kids. and if your in school and you went to class and show up on time teachers can use you as an example for coming in on time being ready to do your work and people will look up tp that and say i want my teacher to use me as an example and start doing the same thing they'll be on time and ready to do there work. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
B4B8BEB77C2E | One topic that is frequently debated is about the benefit people receive to take classes online. Some people think that if someone want to keep study they have to go a school to take that class or the classes that they need. They feel that some people do not deserved the chance to take classes from their home. In my opinion i think that taking classes online is a good opportunity for many people because people can work and study at the same time, those classes can be more cheap, and not everybody have the opportunity to attend a college or an university.
First taking classes online is the opportunity that everybody want, but not everybody have. The people that take classes online is getting many advantages. They can work at the same that they are taking classes, they can take the classes during the flight or if they are in another country visiting their family they can take the classes there. They can do a lot of things during taking classes online, and they always have free time to do whatever they want. But the most important you can help your family in home or and your country.
Second online classes can be more cheaper than attending a college everyday all day. All my aunts that graduate from high school are taking classes online and they are close to end taking classes. They said is more cheap and we can save money taking those classes than attending everyday to a college. They save money and now they are capable to pay and attend a college. I personally think that is a good option for me to keep study save money and got o a college.
Finally go to a university in United States is something that not everybody can do. Because you have to speak a perfect English, you have to have good grades, your GPA have to be great, and for people that does not born here and is not a legal and just have tree or 4 years studying is almost impossible. My sister born here she went to Generic_School she was in the ten best GPA and now is in Virginia Tech University one of the best universities and Virginia. I do not think i will go there i just have tree and half years here, i will take classes online during my parents and me save money to pay a college. I am planing to got to NOVA but i will take classes online first.
As you have read classes online have many advantages that we can get if we take it. We can save money, spend time with our family , visit many places and the possibility to go a college. Classes online is the way that you can get your goal, the way that you can feel comfortable taking it at home. But also is the way that you can work and get money. classes online was made for people like us, that are trying to study and be a professional in the future. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
B4CBDAF1161C | Although some people say that classes such of art, music, and drama should be electives because you let students think on themselves, actually some say that students must be required to take drama, art, and music classes because regarding to this classes students can earn a lot of experience in this area and in a short future they will be contributing to the culture of the nation.
Often people comment about the classes that students are taking on school. They are agree that art, music, and drama should be electives because you let students think on themselves. As every person in this country we must let them take part of their own decisions. Let me remain you, when you were young there is a bunch of classes that you didn't like to take, you complaint a lot. It's the same with this classes. Students must decide what they want to do in order of their own benefit. Many students don't even care about those class and their grades look affected because schools required them to take those classes.
People suggest that students must be required to take drama, art, and music classes because regarding to this classes students can earn a lot of experience in this area. For instance we are in at school!. we are connected to other schools we can make events and build good relations between students in order to let them gain experience. as soccer, basketball, baseball, and football also we can create competitions to motivate them. the kingdom university during 3 years asked to 100000 people " How do they feel about competitions"
and the 90% of people said, competitions motivate you, is not matter what kind of competitions the human nature always wants to win. In other to this some schools are more likely to invest money on those areas.
Culture is a good reason why students should be required to take art, music, and dramas classes. When we talk about culture we have to do mention that it does a huge contribution in the society. for example Tourism, some research showed that the 70% of people who travel to another countries just to know how their culture works. like in years before the music had been changing. The United States of America have long history in music like Jazz, Rock, Heavy Metal and so on. That's why music classes should be required for students to maintain the culture of music in our country. When we talk about art everyone has heard about the famous Leonardo da Vinci and his picture of the Mona Lisa. Outside there is good amount of artist who became famous because they impressed the world with fantastic pictures. drama, our world is a age where we use the social media for many reasons and social media need authors. Example Hollywood every year produce movies. All those authors have a really good home, cars, and many facilities to live. That's why students must be required to take drama classes because many of them can have the opportunity to enjoy a life like this.
Some say classes as art, music and drama should be electives for students because the own decision is important but classes such art, music and drama must be required because it give the students the opportunity to gain experience in those areas and contribute to the culture of our society and nation. | 2.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
B4CF5269C465 | Is it a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early?. Some students take courses during the summers or in the evenings or may not be able to take elective courses that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. It would be a bad idea as students need more preparation before go to college, because students need advanced classes, time to know what they want and get more opportunities that help them in college.
Some Students dont be prepared go to college when they graduated. because some people know college is more difficult than schools. for example: My sister graduate early to high school and go to college, when she take the test she dont know the answers; because ask to her about classes that she never see in high school, she lost the test and she had to pay for take that classes before to start with her profession. Is it not a good idea to graduated early as students can get all credit in high school and star to take more advanced classes that they need to college.
Some students take one year more in high school to take advanced classes. For example: my best friend dont have the money to pay college and they want to get a scholar ship in high school, he has all the credits and sol's that he need to graduate, but he take another year; because he want to take advanced classes like physics or difficult classes that he need in college, and is it opportunity to learned classes that you need in college free. but if a students have just three years to graduated when they go to college they dont know nothing classes that they really need.
It would be a bad idea to allow students to graduated in three years as they dont be prepared to the college. students need to experiment elective classes and find what they want because some students when graduated dont know what they want to do after graduated. some people said is better go to college one year early and be professional early however a good professional is not who get all diplomas early is who have the more experience and know more about that.
In conclusion, allow students to graduated early is a bad idea. students need prepared more before go to the college and get time to take the opportunities to take advances classes or get scholar ships that they really need in college. A good student is no who finish their high school early; is who know and learned more that they need. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
B50C9D328FAD | If you could visit one place in the world where would it be? One place that I would like to visit is Pakistan. Here are some reasons why I would like to visit this place. First, it is known for it's parks. Secondly, the food is amazing. Lastly, Pakistan is one of the nicest culture. As you can see, Pakistan is an excellent place to visit.
Pakistan is known for some of it's best amusement parks. One place I would go to is Aladdin park. It's an amusement park with a lot of thrilling rides. I could go on the chair lifts. They are so awesome. Another place I would go to is Sea view. It's a beach. There I could go on horse and camel rides. The rides are exhilarating. About three or four people can ride the camel at the same time. They take you all the way to the water than back to where you started. Another place I would go to is Safari Park. It is an amusement park /zoo. There is a section for animals. You can go on a safari ride to see them. One of the best part about the ride is that you get to go to the elephants cage. There you can pet the elephant, you can even feed it, and you can go inside the cage if you want to go close to it. As you can see, Pakistan has variety of places to go so you won't get bored.
Food. It's the most important thing..right? When I wake in the morning after an awesome night. I will be hungry. So I start my day first by going to the local breakfast shop. There I will order eggs with some round hot parathas, and than some hot piping chai. Then when it's lunch time I will go to a fast food restaurant. There I will order a chicken burger with yummy fires and soda. When night comes around it will be time for dinner. For dinner I will go to a local restaurant. There I will order steaming hot Chicken Korma with buttery naan and Mango lassi. For desert I will have hot gulabgamun. They are like little doughnut balls covered with sugar syrup, and are very soft. As you can see, Pakistani cuisine is very delicious.
The people are very nice in
Pakistan. Wherever you go you would see people helping out each other. They are very welcoming and kind. They treat each other like they all are equal. They laugh, talk, and they just have fun. They don't disrespect each other, they take care of each other, and are very grateful. They are very protective towards each other. They're like a community and support one another. As you can see, Pakistani culture/people are the best.
In conclusion, I would say that Pakistan is awesome. So get your plane ticket right now and come to Pakistan. It is one of the best country you could visit. | 4.5 | 5 | 4.5 | 5 | 4.5 | 5 |
B5106AB5C81C | To conserve energy and resources, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. Is not a really good idea, its important to conserve energy, but only in that sense. Because for some students is going to be very boring, and they do not want to going to school, that is why is not a really good idea to change the schedule.
First at all, the students will be really upset, because who want to be at school for ten hours.
Second, its the same if you come five days per week for eight hours, to come four days per week for ten hours.
Third, the business if different than a school, because if a school only open four days per week, are going to be the same if they open five day per week, because the teachers leave one or two hours after the students.
The students will be really upsets, because who not to be, nobody want to be at school for ten hours, many students had a part-time job after school, if the school want to choose that option of four-day for ten hours, so the students who has a job. They are going to lose their jobs because at the new schedule.
It is the same if we come to school five days or four days, its the same time that we spends on school, and then the teachers leave one or two hours later than us. So, is not to much the energy or resources that the school would be conserve if they change the five-days for eight hours to four-days for ten hours.
In conclusion is the same thing if they change the five-days for the four-days of school, because they are going to spend the same time or maybe more than they think, but not is a good idea , for the students who have a part-time job after school. They no want to lose their jobs for that change, and is going to be the same charge if they change the schedule. That is why is not a good really idea for school. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
B543953F757A | When I think about and enjoyable activity, I think about sports, and the reason why it's because a lot of people find sports as a fun way to be healthy and make them feel better of them self by being physically active, I also believe that any sport is a good example to learn from others as well as your self, and for I know sports is not all of just about competing against other teams and winning or loosing, is very helpful if we're talking of team work.
One of the most enjoyable activities in the world it's sports, in some way many different kind of sports have proof that it's a really entertainment thing to do and to be as much healthy then doing a diet from a doctor's recommendation, people actually agree that if there's something that might have a plethora of fun and includes a reason to be healthy in daily life it's sports,a 78 % of people in planet Earth consider and invited people to joying a sport for the good of others and good of your self too.
Sport it's a specific activity that in cases have help people feel better about who they are, how they look, and the way it has change people globally, most of the time a person doesn't know what they like to do even thought they try other stuff like being smart, video games, music etc,
they feel like they don't belong or fit in something, but at the end they go along about what other friends says about sports and find them self the right place to be.
Sports as a good educational activity example of learning about others as learning from your self, is very important when getting a job that consist in the statement of knowing other people, like being a teacher, a teacher doesn't get a job without presenting him/her in general to his/her teachers partner, or teach a class without presenting to the students in classes they'll be taking, they will also ask a new student to present him/her self to every one in the classroom,teachers mostly do with their classroom as a coach will do with his team in a sport.
These two educational activities are alike to each other in the simple reasons that they both teach their learners to get to know each other and get along with one another, another way that they're alike is that they're preparing them for the big challenges, a English teacher prepared the students for the big writing SOL as a soccer coach prepared the players for the final game of the season.
However it's not only learning from others, many times sports definitely let you learn more about yourself, it takes out the person who you truly are it will also take all those stuff that you had no idea you new, doing sports can have experiences in which you'll learn from.
Team work is the hard work that a group does together to complete their goal, it's not about the leader or the best member of the group, what most matter in team work is work as a group no matter the worst or best you do.
If you ever play a sport you might know that the main thing to do is team work, for example football,if one of the football players has the ball, he can't go across the field and do a touch down if his team mates don't do anything to stop the defenders of the other team that wants to knock him out,but if they decided to play the game by doing team work he would of made a touch down because he's team mates would of help him pass through by knocking the defenders.
Sports team around the whole world has a immense number of followers, followers keep on touch with them because they have something relative to it or because they had won a lot of times,and this is thanks to the strategy they do ( team work ),
In conclusion sports are not only of competing against others, is something that is productive in the way that you don't only get a metal or a good job, sports are also to have fun with friend or even with people you don't know, and it's a really good way of being healthy and be able to do two things at the same time, it also help us understand other people that needs it as you do with your team mates by knowing them and getting along with them, in sports you can learn from your self when you make a mistake, and finally in any kind of sport you will have to know how to play as team work because that's what matters in teams.
There is a lot of other educational an enjoyable tings to do but I think sports are one of the best ones. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
B548BF7A2A8F | Hello, my name is Generic_Name. I'm student in the Generic_School, and the reason for this letter is because I have give my opinion about what I thing about the British Prime Minister said about the success.
I agree with the British Prime Minister Winston Churchill for this reasons: Failure in want pursuit your success do you make wrestler in the life, failure in want pursuit your success this one can do you make better in the life, and failure in want pursuit your success do you make more strong in pursuit your success.
The first reason failure in want pursuit your success do you make wrestler in the life I thing that because every day fight for want pursuit you success but many times failure in things but continued fight every day. Also I thing that because if you effort every day you fight for pursuit your success and that do you make a wrestler in the life.
The second reason is failure in want pursuit your success this one can do you make better in the life, I thing that because when you commit one failure this teach you to don't make that failure again. Also I thing that because when you failure that help you to want overcome more every day and make better.
The third reason is failure in want pursuit your success do you make more strong in pursuit your success I thing that because the failure give you knowledge in the life and help to make the correct in the life. Also I thing that because when you failure that help you to overcome.
I agree with the British Prime Minister Winston Churchill for all the reasons that can help you to pursuit you success though failure many times but you can overcome all the failures if you don't loss the enthusiasm, all can be more easy when you have enthusiasm and when you want continued forward with you life and pursuit your goals.
Sincerely,
ATT: Generic_Name. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
B54DBEF87F11 | One day Generic_Namehad to go somewhere important with his family, but the problem was that he also had school to attend to. So he decided to do a video chat with his class, so he didnt he didn't have to miss anything from school. Some schools offer distance learning as a option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Doing oline stuff and video conferencing is a great way for students to stay on task with their work. I think that students would take the benificial of being able to attend to school from home because they have responsibilities and also a future ahead of them.
First reason on why students should take the benificial of doing school from home is because they have responsibilities. What if you get sick and don't want to miss anything then you can just video chat with the class. Your familiy decide to take a trip somewhere on a school week what do you do. You take your school stuff with you and a laptop to talk with the class. You can't miss more than like 9 days of schoo if you do you automatically fail, and that's your biggest responsibility on not failing, so you can take the advantage of video chatting with your class. Those are the reasons why I say students should do a video confrence because they have responsibilities.
Second reason on why students should take the benificial of doing school from home is because they might want to have a future ahead of them. When you are in your senior year that's when ou got to step up your game. What if you miss the bus or don't have a ride and you can't get to school then you obviously just video chat with your classes. If you don't understand with your school work you can do learning stuff online so you don't feel behind. Doing online stuff as well help students who don't know what they are doing and feeling left behind. Those are the reasons why students should do video confrences and online stuff because they want to have a future ahead of them.
Lastly, some people don't want to take the benificial of having video confrences or oline stuff to do school stuff at home. The reason why they don't want to do that is because when they are home they just want to have free time not to do school work at home. Also when they are sick they don't do anything because they think that they don't have that much work to miss. Well you see when you are home not doing anything then what are you getting done obviously nothing because they think that when they go back to school they won't miss that much work. That's why you should either do online stuff or a video confrence with your classes so you don't miss anything or be left behind.
Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. There are many reasons why students should take the benificial of doing stuff like that because they have responsibilities and also have a future ahead of them. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
B558AFC603D4 | There was a girl named Generic_Name, and she wanted to play violin like she used to. Generic_Name was struggling. It was not easy on getting back to playing it. Generic_Name practiced everyday no matter what. Generic_Name made a lot of mistakes on the way, but successed at the end. When you accomplished something; you have failed before you could have successed. Failing can cause before you succeed because you try to get where you are, you make mistakes, and you can make the wrong choices.
To begin, failing can lead to succes because it happen before you succeed. For an example, you tell yourself that you will get your work done for all of your classes. Then you end up not understanding the work, but tried and turned it in the work. It can also be doing all your chores before you could go out and be with your friends. For another example, you had a lot of chores to do. It was getting late and you have finished all of your chores. At the end you could not go out, but finshed with all of the chores. It can also deal with reading a book. For an example, you want to read a hard book and finsh it, but you end up reading a different level and finshed the book. These examples show that you fail before you can succeed.
Secondly, failure happens before you can accomplish anything because everyone makes mistakes. It can be when someone is trying to make a cake. For an example, you try to combine the inderigdeints, but they were not the right indergridents, Then next time, they put in the right inderigents. It can also be about when someone is trying to practice on their drving skills. For an example, The driver prcatices everyday, but makes many mistakes. Later on, gets better at it. People can aslo make mistkes by giving poeple directions on where to go. For an example, a lady needed help to get the location at the supermarket. The lady asked an old man where it was. The old man gave the direction, but made a mistake where the superamlrket was at. Then the old man told the lady that it was the other way. All of these examples show that mistakes can happen before you can success.
Lastly, failing can cause by just making the wrong choice. Such as a girl wanted to tryout for outdoor track, but she loved playing softball. The girl tried out for track and made the team. There was a problem, she couldn'[t be on the softball team because it was too late. The softball teamwas full. At the end, the girl should of made a better choice. It can also be about how you want to turn out your day. For an example, the boy wanted his day to be fun, but the boy was paying attention in his classes so he was sent to the offfice. This turned out to a bad day. Then he apologized and made his day better. This all shows that making the wrong choices can lead to failing on what you decide.
This all sums up, that failure can cause before you succeed. Others say that failure does not happen when you succeed, however, I say that it does play out before you can success. Failing will always occur when you succeed. You push yourself where you want to be, you make errors, and doing the wrong decision are all reasons why failure can happen before you can success. Do you think there is failure even when you succeed. | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
B5618012B782 | The influening somepeople ued or beliefe that are for make a money or make more friends for have good relationship with people are rich and have many service with other country are so much rich,benfic,and other things,That he can do for you job or family has the life resolve and don't need said othre people help for have good life.
Influence sometime is when you have friends,the friends say do this not happen or make bad decision like rob,kinll other people. The friends you want or interest is because is the "THE MOST POPULAR" in the school or where you live. If you don't want this in you life you ask why are do this?,this I want in my life?.You need thing very caution for not make things in one day;Some people are in the jail beacuse they are do thebfriends said and now this people are in the jail.
I think the influencing use for many reason in this life,you can use for:make a money,friend,do good thing not bad things with other people do. The friend never are you friend beacuse if you have god said don't doing this beacuse you problem with the police,in the school or maybe with you parent's. When somepeople said this is not you friends is because there are not you correct friends ,the friends are doing god think for with have problem or go to the jail. When you need something the real friends are for you.
The influecing is the what in you life you want influce other people with god things for this people do the same you donig with the same people. The best way to influence is donig god things other people beliefe in you,never thing if I donig bad things I'm the influence,I'm the most popular in the school or village. Only you do if doing bad things is go to the jail or make many poblem with the people are closed with you,you need make are god decision in you life because if you don't donig has so many problem in you life.
Influence is not better with other people,you influence is whre you donig with you friends or new people you nevre see,if you want god person you need or change you influence because if you donig bad things the person never want you friends because they not want problem or go the jail for make a rob there not want.
Some peope beliefe thay you do bad decision or make something very bad you not are god person. Other people said if you belief in this is beacsue you never thing you can do god person in the life.
You don't change if you not want but rember if you want the other people beliefe in you and with you influence you need change you influnce.
The influencing is the best or the influence is the better is the same for me because if you tryng do god person and change you influnce you can do.
The bes influence is make god things for other people need help or do something specializ for you friebd or family.
The better influencing is you change becuaes some people said or you familiy same need you change you influence beacuses the influence one day you used for you dream job or when you go many office for job,some offrice said you have god influence with other people work idifferent country.
If you not have or has problem you never have god influence in job.
You need god influence in the futere maybe you used for make money or relationship with others people are in you social class.
Also,you need god influence in this life,you never thing when you used the influce,donig good thing but never take bad decision in the life.
And the end;If you have god influence with other people never take or make bad thing that you go to the jaiil. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
B5663D6B5854 | Many Students have become more involved and to the extracurricular,
and many students ,
want more education.
to be exprerience , and some students ,
want to be and the. involved in so many activities so they have to have more . tittle time to study and to do better and complete homework. and assignments. to should the schools cotrol student involement in to the extracurricular or octivities ,
should the decision . have to be regording a extracular involvement to be left and to the student and they families to take a position and have more support and your response with a reasons and my my reason was to have more time for the students they like to more work and to do more assignments and class I think that is more better so the students cant have more time and more education and also a better grave in the class and then the students cant do fin and they class but we have to have more time so we cant get the work done and then we has to get time to study and complete and the homework and assingnments beconse we have many students compling about the time so school control they student but went the students get involvement in extracurricular activities so the school have to doit so the students have more time to work after school sothe students cant pass the class and more support and more people also they can help the students get better but what the students has to do is to work hart and star doing good and class or and to do work after schools to do more work and to help some of the students the need help and thas a good reasons to do after schhol and to do many activities so the students get more better and to have a good grave and they class but the most import is to gradue but the students has to work hart not only and the school after school and to some work at home to and then the students who see the diferent | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
B596C01C5E87 | Considering businesses have adopted a four-day week , is probably good for them. On the other hand, maybe students in school can handle that. This would come to no harm for our society. We could make this a habit if we wanted it to be, just have to take some action in this. More energy would increase if this would happen. It could change many things, specially recourses. This also can come with responsibilities
Well , were trying to help students out more if we change a full week, to a 4-day week. Their would be no harm. Although , it may effect some students. I feel that, more energy, will come more as students. Coming to school with more energy to a 4-day weekend, students would often get things done more. This would be no harm to us. A full week might just be little too much. If businesses changed the policy for a 4-day week, why not us schools change that. This would benefit us students to get things done. Some of us students have sports or work after school. This policy would benefit us to do better in school and out of school. If schools allowed this , students would benefit this as a gift. If we would be able to take a vote on this, I personally think our schedule would be changed for good. Although, this policy can come with some responsibilities. Maybe most of us students can also handle this policy.
By extending school day for 2 more hours isn't a bad thing. Maybe for this policy to change, would require more school hours in the day. Furthermore, some of us students wouldn't mind that. Regardless, this helps us get more energy for sleep hours by making it a 4-day week. energy is important in this topic. Although, this helps our environment with no harm. This wouldn't be a problem overall. For example, How much energy would be transferred into a 4-day school week than a full week, way more and their is nothing wrong with that.
By handling business, taking care of things, it's all about responsibilities at the end of the day. All were trying to do is help our community and our resources. Students would benefit this and would be a helpful to us. As us students would have to take action into this situation. End of the day, we just want this to help us for the real world and specially after high schools or college. This could all depends the energy we bring also. If this policy would change, we will all be still in good hands. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
B59B6731525B | If you were in the middle of the situation, and struggle with making decision. You try to asked one of your friend, but still don't have an answer for it. Next time, try to ask or talk to more people. But why getting more opinion is helpful for you? Getting multiple opinion can help you get a better idea, more choices to choose from, and help you make a good decision.
Asking for opinion can help you get a better idea. Imagine a time when you were writing an essay. You ask your mom to give you her opinion. But that didn't enough for your essay. Then, you ask your dad and your sister. Now, you have three opinion from different people. You can combine those opinion together to make it a better idea. Getting better idea will help for writing an essay.
Getting more opinion can also help you have more choices to choose from. You continues to ask for opinion from people around you. Now, you are a billionaire with many different opinion. You can use it however you want. You will decide you want to "spend" it or keep it for another time, like you are holding your own little world.
You will get more choices to choose from by asking people around you.
Talk to people for their opinion can help you make good decision. You don't know what college should you go to? Ask your parent, they will know what good for you. But, sometime people don't always choose the better one for you. So, you have to decide which option you want to take. People's opinion will help you make a good decision.
Getting opinion will always helpful for you, if you know how to use it correctly.
Listen to people's opinion and then make your own decision. But you don't have to always follow people's opinion. You can make your own decision.
But, asking for opinion from people around you will help you a lot. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3.5 |
B5AA232A7261 | Dear, Mrs. Generic_Name
My opinon is that i'm disagree with this policy of students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. I don't think isn't good idea for students to commit to a career at young age.
It has come to my attention that some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time enter high school. Their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward a specific career and my position on this issue is properly to not makes that they aren't allowed to indentify a career at a young age from selected to guide them toward a specific career because for all of those who has a career and is because their are worked hard to arrive from they are and they get to propose.
Currently they can't have a commit to a career at young age, because for that has to be prepared and work hard nobody can has a commit to a career at young age.
for that you need to finish high school and college and work for the career you want.
Thanks for considering my opinion let me know if you have any question we can contact any assistance.
Sincerely:
Generic_Name | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
B5AE26EEE247 | Do you think that having a positive attitude is the key towards success in life? In my opinion I do think it is key towards success, and the reasons why I think this is one finding a good career, second is meeting new people in a good way.
In life you need money to pay bills and in order to get money for your bills is to get career, a good one at least, and everyone knows that you need a resume, a good skill that your going to work for, and a good/positive attitude to help you get the job. you people may wonder "why need to have a positive attitude to get your job?" well you want to impress and increase your rate of the person that is considering to hire you or not, also if start talking in a boring way the person might not hire you.
The second reason is meeting people in a good way and never in a negative way. meeting people in positive ways is very great thing to do meaning that if you treat someone like garbage they'll treat you the some or even doing something terrible that will ruin your life, and nobody like that at all, so thats why you should treat people positive to avoid the things that I mention or you just like treating people positive because thats your nature.
I know how this world works and to survive the world of negativity is to be negative as well to survive this world, however that isn't the way to live and nobody likes to do negative things as well as they can't hold it for long time and end up taking away their own life, so staying positive is a great way to live in life.
The conclusion I am trying to give at out is that being positive is the a great way live instead of living in a way of negativity since being negative is way to tough to live out and positively gives you joy and give more paths to walk through and thats what I think a key to success means. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B5FF33681C22 | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Some believe that attend classes from home is not great for the student. But others think that if you attend classes from home you learn so much more. Attending a school can get you ready in the real world then just attending classes from home.
Those who say attending classes from home say that because teacher cant teach the way they want. They have to follow the way the schools wants you to learn. For example, the teacher does not want to teach some of the stuff hes given but he has to because at the end of the day this is his job and he does not want to lose his job. When your attending classes from home you have more sleep and you wont be tired because it will be at your own time. And also you dont have to be in a class that the teacher dont really like to teach because over time some teachers lose that feeling that they loved.
However, people believe that attending schools is way better then just staying home. Some reasons you should attend school then stay home is that you will have more fun in a class room then just home all the time. For example, you will make friends and do stuff together the will make your time more joy able then just at home. you wake up and go to school you see your friends and you make jokes and help each other and it is limitless.
Another reason you should attend school then classes at home. Schools have field trips,sports,after school activities that you will probably love to do. Because you have the chance to try all of them at school. For example, there are filed trips to the art museum that have great at works like the monalisa. And filed trips to New York and other places that you will love to see. Sport teams are like family, you watch each others back and help improve you game together and thats something you cant get from home or video conferencing. Other reason why you should attend school with others is that someday you will find a bond with someone or a group that will last and you will be grateful for. For example, There were couples in high school that later on got married and there were these groups that became friends actually the became family.
In conclusion, Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Some believe that attend classes from home is not great for the student. But others think that if you attend classes from home you learn so much more. Attending school is better for your kids in the long run. You can learn more in school then you could ever at home and you will make friend and maybe family. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
B5FFED1536FE | I disagree with Emerson because if they have already mastered, and they still want to try something new, it's good for them, and they will grow up by the time they figures out what they want to know more.
While you already mastered, it doesn't means you known everything in life. Emerson wrote, "Unless you try to do something..." You should doing something more than what you have known. For example, "You want to study more languages than other people and they keep telling you not to do it." The reason they say it because they think if you good in one thing, you should only focus on that things and try to do as good as you can, but if you are a person who are interesting in many thing, you shouldn't listen to them. Keep follow what you are interesting and try to do it. If you want to know more than a languages or want to try to do something not your domain and you have no skill in that things, you should try to learn what you're interest, and try to talk to a person who is speak a language you are interesting, and asking a person who have known about the domain you are interesting, and try to do your best in that thing. If you're a person know one thing and only focus on that thing, sometimes it good because you are so good in that thing and you can help other people what you good, but it also not good because you don't know anything except your master degree. When you're interesting in many things, people can't despise you. If you try to do the domain it's not your skill just try as much as you can to study that, then ask for help to somebody good in that domain.
Eventhough if you are a person who don't have any interest in other thing, you're still good but keep in mind if you want to do something not in your master degree, it will be challenge you because you are not know anything about that domain. However, try something new beyond your mastered will help you, and it's good while you are a person have a lot of dream and you're keep follow your dream and don't listen you other people against what you are interest. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
B68C62AB1515 | Careers are a big part of a person's life. People can choose from thousands of careers that interests them. Careers usually tell a person's personality. A lot of people take careers very seriously and want to know more about careers. Students committing to a career at a young age is a good idea because students will know what a career is really like, they will find something fun to do everyday, and they won't have to worry about it in their adult lives.
Students committing to a career at a young age is a good idea because students will know what a career is really like. Some students lack information about becoming a doctor. Students often don't know what it is like to become a doctor, or know the basics. In order for students to obtain information and knowing how to treat a patient, they need to experience it physically. It is a good idea for students to take action in a career because they will get more information about it. In addition to knowing what is like to become a doctor, students can look up a career they want to know more information about. For example, if a student wants to know more information about dentistry, they can easily research what do you need to do to become a dentist. Students should engage in a career early because they can find a lot of resources to get there.
A second reason students should be in a career early is because they will find something fun to do. Most students don't really do anything after school or in their free time. The students who don't take action in doing anything, will more likely become miserable and bored. For these students the only thing they should do is join in after school program that helps and educates students about careers. Students should be involved in a career at a young age because a lot of students don't know what to do in their free time. Also, students don't really have a hobby they can do. Students sometimes don't really think about having a hobby that can keep them happy. Students can find that hobby by taking part in a career and actually find something that really interests them.
Students need to be in a career at a young age because they will find something that is important to them.
A final reason students should commit to a career early is because they won't have to worry about it in their adult lives. Most teens don't know what they wanna do later on as they become adults. These people usually struggle in finding a job, and also getting that job. If a student spends extra amount of time in school reading and getting information about a career, they won't have that problem later on. In fact they will easily know what they want to do. Students who get into a career at a young age won't have any problems in finding a job later on. In addition to finding a job, students as they get older won't have any stress on what they want to be. When students graduate high school they are pressured in finding a job, which makes them really stressed. Some students aren't as stressed as others because they already know what interests and them and what they wanna be.
If a student who doesnt know at all what they wanna be, they should spend lots of time on researching and attending career based programs to give them an idea or two on what to be. Students should part of a career at a young age because they won't be as stressed.
Some people firmly believe that students should not commit to a career at an early age because they arent well educated about a career. Unfortunately, these students are more likely to have problems later on when finding a job. In order for students to fully know about a job is to take part in a career fair or just overall being in a career so they can be sucessful when doing so. Students should commit in a career early because they will be more educated in a career. In addition to, they will find a hobby in their free time. Finally they won't have any stress or problems later on in finding a job. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
B6A5721D64C1 | To: Manager
Dear manager I write you this letter because I would like to visit your company. I want to see how the doctors work in a company. I decided to write you this letter because in the future I want to be a doctor, so I want to have experience working with a doctor or at least see how they work. I decided to applied to this job because I always wanted to be a doctor that helps people because I always like to help people even if I don't know who they are.
I apply to your company because I know that is one of the best company in the country. Every person that come to this company have the opportunity to be a professional, but only some persons can work in this company. I want to be in this company. Please give me the chance to come to this company.
I will do my best to be in this company. I want to be the best doctor in the world and have a lot of money. I want to see how can one normal person can change her life and make her a professional. Please give me one chance to be here.
Even if I don't have the chance to be here I will work hard, and to ask be here again. I will do my best to be here, and make my dream happen.
Thanks for listen to me, and I will wait for your answer.
From: Generic_Name | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
B6ADED946A1A | Hello Ms or Mr teacher,
I'm writing this for convince you to don't work in groups ,and here are my cons and pros about working alone or in groups. The benefits of working with a group, or working alone are complete differents because some people feel more comfortables working alone than working in groups. In my oppinion working alone is much better than working in groups. In some cases your teammates of you group don't participates in the work or they don't want to work in groups. I feel more comfortable working alone for many reasons.
First reason , I can do whatever I want to do in the work or do the work in my way, but in some cases the person who work alone doesn't know how to do the work in this case is good to work in group because maybe your teammates knows the answers of the work.
Second, If I work alone I have more chances to unertand the work by my self without distractions. Because in some cases your teammates of your groups are distract you or other teammates of the group.
Third, working alone can be more benefict than working in groups because you can learn more things about the work, and do it in the way you like the work, without worry about what your group is doing. If we work alone we will have the opportunite of learn more about the work.
I know working in groups are the easy way because maybe your teammates of you groups knows the answers of the work, and you dont have to worry about the work because you know your teammates will do the work for you . But in some cases people who don't participate in the work gets credits in the work what he or she doesn't participates it. And that isn't fair for you or your teammates who did the work.
That's why you should sonsiderate us to do not work in groups anymore. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
B6B85CE5C8F5 | When it comes to trying to be someone, is it better to improvise or follow the script all the time?
Everyone needs to have their own individuality and be original instead of trying to be something else because that way you learn more about yourself. Also, you are acknowledging different methods about how to be better than yourself. And one of the most important things, you could make a good influence in someone else's life and teach him/her how to find their path in their own way. No matter what happens, you always have to follow yourself.
When you learn more about yourself it means that you do not just learn things that you already know about yourself, you also learn new things that you did not know about yourself. For example, one day you are going to the basement of your house which is really big and put some good music. While you are listening to your favorite songs from your playlist, you are dancing according to the tempo and doing the dancing moves that you usually do. After dancing for a long while, suddenly you let the music take control over you and you make a back flip without practicing it before. You are very surprised because you did something that you did not know you could do and after that, you keep practicing that move and perfectioning it and it comes out natural. That is how you learn more about yourself.
You are acknowledging different methods to be better than yourself. This means you will do whatever is right in order to become a better person. For example, Robert Downey Jr used to have a terrible life by consuming drugs and other things that got him in trouble with the law. He even went to court for all the messy things he did. After a long time taking bad decisions, he finally decided to make things better for the people who cares about him and specially for him. It took him over 5 years for him to get back on his feet; with his own effort and the support from his family and friends, he started to make a good difference for the world. Right now, Robert is one the best actors in Hollywood, he has an excellent life with his wife and kids on his side, and is a great influence for millions of people. That is how you acknowledge different methods to be better that yourself.
Some people say that you are copying someone else when you try to be yourself. However, they are wrong because you actually are listening to those tips that you have heard and following them under your own perspective. That way you are definitely writing your own script but at the same time, giving the deserved credit to the person who gave you those tips. For instance, when you are trying to get a girl that you met in a party but you have no idea of what to do in order to get her attention. You ask your friend for some advice to accomplish your goal so you do not go through a bad experience. He tells you what to do exactly and shows you with some women at the party and now you have some ideas of what you can do. So before you reach out to that girl, your friend tells you "be yourself all the time" and you get the courage to talk to her. After following those examples in your own way, the girl started to have deep feelings for you and everything worked out a lot well and make some influence to some of your friends who need that kind of help. That is how you follow your own script with your own terms.
In conclusion, it is very important that you have be yourself all the time because it shows that you do not need somebody in order to be somebody. You learn about yourself so you can get to know your own person more than you can know about an anime character. You acknowledge new ways to become better than yourself like if you were in a videogame, you are going to the next level slowly. You make a good influence by doing things as right as possible and you give people some benefits out of it. To be yourself you have to do what your gut tells you to do if you think it is going to give some benefits in some way. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B6D958C73D90 | Some businesses have adopted a four day work week with each day consisting of ten hours
.To conserve energy and resources, my school should not follow this model by extending the school day two hours. because everyone get tired or estreced, do not make enought money to buy resources, and dont have enougt time to be with the family.
The beneficts to conserve energy is to sleep the eight hours. so you can conserve the energy and don't be extreced about be more time in school. In contrast if you do not sleep well you feel like you will felt sleep. so is better less hours of school because eveyone will conserve enegy and the less hours of school can bemore better because everyone would be consentrated and learn more.
Is hard to be in school and have a job after school. because both of them are important for our life. but must people what need is money. so must people prefer to work and make money than have more hours of school. for this reason many people prefer to have money because can buy any resources or enyting that they need.
for example. If I am working and also going to school and the school day extend for two hours. I feel very extreced, so many peolple cuit school. And prefer to work.
There are also some disadvantages because if they extend the school day two hours is not inought time to be togeteher with the family.
everyone need time to have and be with the family because family is importan. so for these reason my chool should not fallow this model. if you spend more time in a job or in school there is not enought time for the family and olso everyone need time to make the differents responsabiliies that have.
for these reasons my school should not follow this model because many people get extreced or cuit school. so they can conserve anergy and resources and have have enought time with the family. and the hours of school everyone can be more consetrated and don't felt sleep and learn the possible. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
B6E9E12159E3 | When people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one person. I think they ask more than one person for advice because other people can speak there opinion and give the person who wants advice some ideas. For example, Generic_Name wanted to plan a birthday party but she needs help on what theme she wants for her party. Generic_Name asks her mom, dad and her friends. They all said golden and blue would be a good theme for her party. Generic_Name takes there ideas. Generic_Name is now having her party golden and blue!
I also think people ask more than one other person because sometimes people don't have ideas of something they need help with. Some people need a better choice, so its better to ask other people then just think of your own ideas because hearing other people's thoughts can make your ideas better. I think people should always give at least another person's thoughts on what they need help with. It is always best to get another persons idea. It can make the person who needs the advice to gain some confidence on what they need advice on.
Overall, I think everyone should get another idea from someone else because it gives people more ideas. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B6EB1835EBE0 | This sentece is literaly true, because you never to be idle, because you can do wonderful things, just need belive a little bit more on yourself and always we need think that sometimes we commit a mistakes, and that's good because the mistakes is how we can learn about that nobody is perfect, no metter if are wrong things or good things, always you learn that the life is not easy, but is not impossible, so don't be scary, the life is a game and you decide if you want to be a winner or a loser.
So you don't think that to be mistaken is wrong, but if you make a mistake, try to don't do it again. I give you a example: If you are on a game (football,soccer,basquetball,etc), so if you are on any game and your time is lose, but you know the wron in the other team, so you know that you can attack on this wron and you can won the game, or if you lose that game but you got the revenge, well now you know where is the wrong and maybe your team won the game. So you can make a mistake, but no more that one time. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
B6F445EE304C | Dear principle:
I think that changing policy so that students may not participate in sports or other activities unless they have at least a grade B average is a good idea. Students mostly don't try hard unless they're rewarded. If you change this policy maybe students will try on they're best to get a grade B or above. They will see their friends playing all these activities on their hard and best work. So next time they would want to try hard and play those activities.
On the other hand though, not every kid is good at every subject. If kids try their best on the subject and still don't get a grade B average, this wouldn't be fair to them. They would be a lot of students who wouldn't agree with me because of this reason.
Changing school policy isn't a great idea, but to make the students get good grades and to benefit their lives, in that case then it would be good idea. Not every students will agree with me but that's the best way to get them educated even though it wouldn't be fair.
sincerely yours,
STUDENT_NAME | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
B7053BDF5BA0 | Do you think older student should assist younger student? i agree i think it would be a fantastic idea. I think older student should assist the younger students i think they would get a lot of work done. The student would get along easily if they work together. I feel like older student would help the younger student improve there thinking by getting help from the older students.
I feel like the younger student would not be afraid to ask the older students for help. It would help the class communicate to one another. The program would be a success because student helping one another is great seeing them work together as a class having a good time with there class mates. Also the older student are more responsible there also likely to be more trust worthy. They would help the younger student a lot i feel like they would learn more.
Then in a few years later the younger student would come the older student and from there they help them as well too. This program would be a great one it would there student a lot. I also think they would be focus all the time. I would also like to be in this program it seems like you would know so many things. I really think this program would be successful to all the student. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
B7075CD10BCC | In my opinion the attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing is a excellent idea for everybody. We have many benefit from to being able to attend classes from home for example, we have more time for sleep and have more energy for study, also the students has more dedication, the students has more concentration for study in home because, nobody distract to the student, the students have more time for make other things like work or others pastime
Many student don't like this idea because, they think the attend classes online is so difficult but I don't think so because we have help of all teachers. One reason very important is not mess around, because take the bus for me is lose time, maybe the classes online can start early and we have more information, more experience for the future, the thing more important is learned more, in my opinion the school is a little distraction for many students because they don't pay attention to classes, they go to other places when we need study more for the life.
Another reason is beacuse is about the video conferencing this idea is great because we learned to communicate or socialite with the people in the video conferencing, I think because, some students are silent and this option help you.
For many parents I thinks is a great idea because they have more control in home like they know when the student work in classes or not, maybe the parents wanna see the progress of the children. The idea is productive, is a new experience for the students and parents. Maybe
This option for the students classes from home by way of online is in my opinion a great news because for some people stay in home and practice and study is more comfortable. Classes online is not difficult for the students because in the computer we have modules and information and others things can help you, and is more easy in video conferencing because we have always somebody who can help, we can talk with a teacher or somebody, so is a good idea and new experience.
In my conclusion I support and for me is a good idea the option to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because is a new experience and i like it the idea and is more comfortable stay in home is more peace, more concentration, is more time for study and more important is learned more things, new thing for the future because the place is not important you can study in others places but the important is study more and more. Study is more important, the place is not important beacuse when the person want to be someone like a professional in the future they need study much. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
B727B720430B | To whom it may concerned:
For me, Policy 1 is better, base from my own opinion. Because Policy 1 would be better from Policy 2. For students to avoid breaking the rules of their own school, Policy 1 would be the better choice. Because they can use their phones during their break, lunch periods and whenever they have a free time. In some cases, most students and parents prefer to have the Policy 1 so that whenever they have an emergency or an important thing to do so, they can easily contact each other, except for contacting each other inside their classes.
As long as their phones are in silence or they won't be using it during their class time, Policy 1 is a good choice. And for me, Policy 1 is the best choice among all of the choices that the principle would have. For students, having Policy 1 could be nice. I think they would really appreciate it if they would be having that policy. Because if in some reason, Policy 2 would be the one that the Principle will be choosing, there's a possibility that a lot of students will make a way to break the rule just to bring their gadgets, even though they might get into trouble. But, students must know their limitations whenever they use their phones or gadgets inside the campus.
Students shouldn't be using it whenever the teacher is discussing or whenever they're inside their classrooms. Because, instead of learning a lot of things from the school, they would just waste their time using those gadgets. I hope that you understand me why I chose Policy 1 rather than the other Policy which is the second choice. Because I know how it feels like when you don't have your phone by your side and didn't noticed that something emergency from your family is happening. I wish you would be considering or approving my opinion. I choosing the right opinion so that won't have any alibis for breaking the rule of your school.
Sincerely yours,
STUDENT_NAME | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
B7291A99BF2E | The example is a good setting to influence other. The people more understand and accepted by the example. The example help people to understand more. The people accepted the idea by the example. The example is the best way to make the people know the idea. More advantage, more accepted by people, and more understand are why the example is a good setting to influence other.
Even thought, example are more advantages and influence to other. Examples make the people to understand the idea. When someone give you examples for title you will understand easily and quickly. Examples make the main idea enter to the people's brain very quickly. For example, the examples make the people more knowing about the others by know what the others want and need to understand the idea .The example is a good way to explain the idea to the people. The people want more examples to understand the idea.
First of all, examples make the people accepted the idea very quick. For example, the idea needs many example and details to understand it. When someone give you idea with examples and details you will understand it quickly but when someone give idea without examples and details you will understand very slowly or you will not understand either. In addition, some people understand the idea and title by the example and details. Finally, the examples and details is best way to explain your own behavior to others.
Thirdly ,The examples are the good thing to understand others by influence them. For example, if you want understand something you should know some the example for it. The examples make you know the idea. When you leading by example your idea will influence others. Addition, you can make your idea easily by add examples and details. When people leading by example, they will understand each other. Finally,The leading by example is the best way to people understand each other and understand the the ideas.
Some people argue that example is not the main thing in influencing other. They say some examples are not advantages. This may be true ;however, the examples are the more advantages and affects to others. For example, the people affect from the tittle more then example. In addition, the make the people understand then example. Finally, the example sometimes confuse the people to understand the idea.
In conclusion, example are more advantages and influence to other and make the people to understand the idea.
examples make the people accepted the idea very quick. For example, the idea needs many example and details to understand it.
The examples are the good thing to understand others by influence them. For example, if you want understand something you should know the example for it.
More advantage, more accepted by people, and more understand are why the example is a good setting to influence other. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
B7350254EE93 | Why people should make their own decisions for them self.
Should people make their own decisions? yes people should make their decisions because important, people will accomplish more faster, and teaching responsibly.
People make decisions important. Everyone wants to feel like they play an important role in the family. By allowing your children to help decide entertainment or snack types, you give them a place in the family where they realize their voice are heard. from something as simple as deicing which good thing to buy they can feel like they are a part of the family more so than will be present they simply want to matter.
When people make their own decision people will accomplish more faster. When you know exactly what you are trying to achieve, you can do it faster period. I doubt that requires more explanation speed comes from greater clarity of purpose and process.
People make decision teaching responsibility. Not all decisions can be met with a successful experience. Perhaps a child picks a movie that is not as good as he or she thought it would be or dessert was disappointing in last. This can help you teach you child to learn from previous experiences. He or she needs learn that not all decisions have a good and positive out come and we learn from this process to make better decisions next time.
Should people make their own decision, it is important for themselves, and important role in the family. People can teaching a child decision have good things and positive. When people make decision they will accomplish more faster you can know exactly what you are trying to achieve. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B744CD534ADB | Dears, teachers of Generic_School.
First, I think that we all should work alone, because each student can be working for their self with out any other help from students that do not care about their projects or homework, all students has different ideas, working in a group would be more stressed for the student, they may not have the opportunity to show their own ideas working in a group. However, working in a group sometimes can be helpful but working alone can be more helpful to the teacher, working alone, the teacher would see who deserved a good grade, working in a group one of the persons can be the only one who does all the work. In addition, working alone can be the best way to show our own ideas because everyone has different opinion about the projects or the homework and how is going to be, working alone should be more helpful for the student who had different opinion in their topic.
In my English class we all were working in groups, well in my group were three people one of the group was at their phone seen social media, and doing nothing, I ask if he needs help and if that was the reason why you are not helping us to do our project, I said, he just answer and said don't ask me, that's not your problem, he was unreasonable but there wasn't nothing more that I can do for someone who do not want to work, that's one of the a lots of reasons why is not helpful working with a group.
Wherever, I believe that working alone is the best way to show up our mind and be sure that we can do all that we want to do, some people think that working in a group they can get done more fast any projects but I think that we should work alone because there is some people that do not care about their subjects and sometimes the teachers think that they just do not want to do nothing but there are people that we really want a good grade, working alone let the student to focus more in their own work than someone who is stressed about if his partner is going to help or not. Some people said that working in a group it's more fun than working alone but I think that working alone some times can be also fun because you make your own rules and use your own imagination.
In conclusion, students should work alone, each students can be working by their self and with out thinking if their classmate is going to help in any kind of project, all students has different ideas, working in group would be more stressed for the student, working alone can be more helpful to the teacher, the teacher would see who deserved a good grade. Working alone is the best choice, teachers considerate students ideas like the most big new option to improve our society, working alone is the best way to show our own ideas, by working alone students will be feel more confident about their work and more likely to explain their work. Finally, students can work for their self, and is not always necessary to work in group, sometimes work in group can be annoying and distractive by others students. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
B7468C4DD17C | Students wouldn't benefit from attending to classes at home. Schools offer different options that distance learning does not. It's a good opportunity to attend regular classes. Everyone can learn in different ways but a better option it's by attending normal classes. People have the option to choose whith what they feel comfortable. Attending to regular classes gives the opportunity to pick their own classes. We can have many benefits by this. If students attend to regular schools they have the opportunity to meet new people, to participate at clubs and they have the chance to talk and get help from teachers.
Students who attend normal schools have the opportunity to meet new people. Not everyone likes to be anti-social and to be alone without not knowing others. Sometimes is great to have a person that we can tell everything. By going to school, we have the chance to talk to a thousand of people and to make new friends. Once Generic_Name got the options to pick home school or to attend to normal classes. She chose to do classes at home. She was happy for the idea that she has not to wake up early. For the first couple of weeks everything was fine. She was getting use to it. One day she realized that she has no friends; she feels alone. Generic_Name when to talk to her mom about the way she was feeling. Her mom told her that if she weren't pick to stay at home and doing distance learning; she weren't to feel that way. Generic_Name thought about what her mom told her and she decide that the best option was attend to normal classes at school. If we attend to regular classes, we are not going to feel alone and we can make new friends.
Schools provides the chance to participate at clubs. While distance learning don't have activities or clubs for students to do. Public schools have different kind of activities or clubs that they can enjoy. Activities and clubs are a good way to help and to prepare students for the future. They have the option to enjoy a team from their preference. For example, a person who like football. They might like to form part of the football team and that's what normal schools provides. If this person form part of a football team; he can get scholarships to participate in big leagues. From clubs students can get an idea of what career they want to get in the future, to discover new things, and to get experience from this different activities.
Other might argue that distance learning gives students time for their jobs, they can avoid being getting in trouble and they can take care of their youngest siblings while they are at home. However, people by attending to classes have the chance to get help from teachers. It's a reality that not everyone is capable to understand easily. Sometimes we need a push or help from others who knows about the things we don't. The awesome thing about normal schools is that teachers stay a little longer after school to help with hard work. To pay attention during classes can be hard because of other classmates are making noise or it's really hard to understand. Teachers talk about our grades and gives us advices to improve them. Talking to teachers helps to understand because they give us a deeply explanation.
At school people have the chance to make new friends, to have the oppoortunity to try new activities and to improve academically with the help of teachers. Some people can be in disagreement with public schools, but they have on mind that sometimes it can be a better option. School it's a good way to get out of home for at least some hours. Not everyone likes to being at home for the whole day. At school we can have fun with our friends, lunch time is unique and that is something the distance learning don't offer. Activities after school are a good way to keep people out of trouble. To help them to choose a good path. School have a variety of ways to have fun, not just by playing, also by learning. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
B7626C8D1FAB | Students should start picking a career when they entered high school, so they can pick classes in school or ask teachers to help you with your career.
If students start picking a career at a young age they will already have an idea of what to do, they can do research about their career at school. how much do people with your career make, what does this career do, how much do they make a year. You can even ask your parents to help you with your career by giving you some advice to help you out. The libary is a great place as well you can find books that match up with your career ask they libarians to help you find the right book. If you have an older siblings that have already gradated high school and have their career they can talk to you and help you out and to tell you what to do.
School counsulers are great people to talk when your looking for a career. You can ask your counsuler any questions to help you set up a plan after you graduate high school, talk about why you choosed this career for you, do you have some experiences with this career yet, what do your parents think about this career that you want to have. Counsulers can help you look for colleges or universities that you wan to attened. You can also have your counsuler set up a meeting with you and your parents to talk and see what they can do for you.
If you know anybody who has the same career that you want to have. Have a talk with them and ask he or she questions about what do you do in your job, how much does your job pay you, how much do you make a year, if they can take you where they work at and see the other employees there and have conversations with them. Its good to talk people who has the same career that you are studying for because. They have worked hard to get where they are today and they have jobs that they enjoy doing making money and living their best life.
You should start looking for colleges when you are in your junior year of high school because. When you are looking for colleges you have to check how much you have to pay to attend the college, how much do you have to pay a month. That's why some teenagers start working while they are in high school, so they can start saving money for college. Some parents pay the college for their kids, but i think its better if you pay some of that money with your parents, so they don't have to waste all of their money for you to go college. Some jobs will help you pay for the college that you will be attending at.
As we read this is why i think students should start pickcing their future careers while they are in high school because. So they will have a plan ready after they graduate high school, go to college, graduate from college, and start looking for jobs of the career that you choosed. Help other students who want to have your career as well. You can talk them to help them out, answer all the questions they have to ask you, tell them what to do you are looking for colleges to help with their career, show them where you work and show how your job is. And eventually they will become successful as you are for making the good choices while you were in high school. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
B76C582FA08B | Some schools use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes. But are students really doing educational purposes? Should students really use their phones in their classrooms? Are students actually getting education? This is what I think about cell phones used in classes.
Most students get distracted by using their cell phones especially in class. I feel like every school should at least have laptops to give out for their students. It's more easier and less distracted. Because a lot of websites are blocked. Everyone gets distracted I know but thousand of teen are obsess with their phones. And if you're a teacher and let your student do their
"work" in their cell phone, just know they might not be doing their "work" in their cell phones.
Some students might care more about their education then the things that's going on in life. Maybe not everyone feels the same, thinks the same, are the same. They might be capable to use their cellphones without getting distracted. Most of us can handle the distracting than others.
Most teachers actually let their students use their phones and don't really pay attention to their students. It might be our responsibility to be on track. But i feel like the teachers should at least stop us from getting distracted. Most students do get mad at teachers when the teachers stop us from using our devices. But do students know it for our own good.
When my parents take my phone away. I feel more free, relax, I feel good to be honest. I do get a bit mad at first. But then I think why they took it and how many time I lost. I feel like i'm back in reality and just leaving my moment god gave me. Honestly cell phones had ruined many peoples life's. Even toddlers these day all they do is come back from school and play on their parents cell phones or their losing sleep to watch videos .
I honestly don't think cell phones are healthy at all not even in education. Teachers shouldn't let their students use their phones at all. Only if it's in an emergency. Than that's when they should let them use it. But a real emergency. That's what I think about teachers letting their students use their cell phones during classes. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
B7938A92A4F9 | Thomas Jefferson wrote, "Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." I can not say this is a wrong opinion, but I have a different opinion with Thomas Jefferson.
While other people might think that if you keep working hard, and there will be one day that you can get successful. Because you did not give up for this things, however this is a wrong way to thinking, the reason behind this is yes it is ture that if you are keep working and do not give up then you might be become a successful person but It's still depend on what kind of ways are you choice to go. if you choice a wrong way to go then you get a big mistake, you have to start all over again, that's wasting time.
Other reasons that behind people think they should keep working are it can let people have the spirit about do not give up and have brave to try something. But people will get lost when they working to hard, they do not know what should to do, and if they failed about what they doing now, they will be worry about next time when they want to do something, they became afired to try.
So my suggest is people should be thinking before they want working hard, to make a plan or talk to someone and konw what they think. Then you cna get more easily to successful. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
B794B3C07254 | It is my pleasure to take this great opportunity to express my view or opinion on the above topic; which is positive attitude is the key to success in life?.First and foremost i would like to briefly talk about the term attitude, it can be shorty defined as a good or bad conduct or manner ones shows in public or the kind of act you put up which is either good or bad. If we really take good look at how people live,attitude is the most relevant thing they mostly pay attention to, lets talk about work school.
WORK OR SCHOOL:
If we take good look at this two places, we can see or sort of attitudes aspects, either good or bad that is coming from the students,teachers and many more , showing good attitudes towards others shows how respect you are and what kind of family you came from, most people had a good relationship with others because of their good attitude they have acquire from school or at home,students with good attitude are more easily to associate themselves among others, and become very good friends , teachers really love students who always show a good attitude, sometimes too they can earn some gift from others.
HOME OR CHURCH:
This really take places in our various houses, showing good attitude to your parents or it can anyone ,mostly help to gain favors from people you might not even know they might be your futures helper, because there is a saying nobody knows tomorrow, for instance you went out and some random person ask if you can help him or her to find a place but your attitude did not let him even to ask you anymore ,but imagine some few years later came and you met such same person that ask for your assitance but your attitude was not good at all, maybe he is a manager at your dream job you have prayed to work there, so as soon as you get there you saw he is the one who is going to interview you do you think he will be willing to gave you such opportunity even though you qualified the answer is no he will find any means to let you not get that job , your bad attitude ruin up your whole life, this goes to church too,having positive attitude at church draws human being more closer to God and attract more blessings from him as well.
POSITIVE ATTITUDE AMONG INDIVIDUALS;
Last but not the least is the kind of attitude we gave among ourselves ,this has become a daily rampant that need to failure to get help from other people, imagine you had like 4 close friends but they are be asking for your help on something but some of them attitude is very pathetic , but insisted they really need your help and what you have on you can only help few of them, so would you go ahead and help those who had a negative attitude the answer may be no,because you going to help those of your friends whose had a good attitude first before you assist them too , this really tell us having positive attitude can really gave you so many opportunities or advantages.
THESE ARE SOME MERITS OF POSITIVE ATTITUDE:
1. It creates good interpersonal relationship among individual.
2. It easily to get favor from other people.
3. It always bring peace among others.
4. It really depict the kind of family you came from or the type of trained you have acquired.
THESE ARE SOME VITAL OR MAJOR REASON WHY WE SHOULD ALWAYS HAVE A POSITIVE ATTITUDE;
1. B
ecause it enable individuals to always have a good name in any places they found their selves in and, it also promote economic living,
because you individuals really knows good your attitude is so therefore they will always be proud to share their issues or problems with you without been hesitate.
2. It attract blessings from God , because the bible is even against anyone who does not show a positive attitude among his or her neighbor, and can make your life been successful with the help of blessings you getting from your creator.
HOW POSITIVE
ATTITUDE HELP US IN OUR OWN LIVES;
having positive attitude really help individuals a lot because this earth we live in everything is about attitude even assuming you apply for a job and they monitor you for awhile then later realized you had a bad attitude, do you think the person who is in charge of that work will be willing to hired you the answer is no, because no one can hired someone who has a negative attitude, so imagine now you had positive attitude everything is excellent you even feel proud of yourselves you do not even care wherever you might find yourself in because your attitude is really good and it can gave you so many chances in life that you think you not even to have it, you can also become a remodel to some people , they might even look at you and learn from you , so therefore is very good to have a positive attitude and move free wherever you go , some people really pay attention to people attitudes even more than everything in this word.
CONCLUSION;
Due to time factor i would like to bring my above oppinous to an end and i am pretty sure it may be taking into consideraton and publish it for other people to have access to read and if they had to made some changes in their lives they can surely do so to it.
Thank you. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B7A0347C68C3 | I know taking online or watching video conferencing class can be relaxing sometime, and sometimes student even pray for school to be close. but that does not mean student should take online classes or watch video conferencing , It not a good idea for student to be take online classes and I am not in favor of the idea for student to take online or watch video conferencing because they can find the online teaching to be boring and it will be very hard for student to understand the teaching of the video.
Although some people might think that taking online or video conferencing class can be helpful because student can get a lot of sleep before starting the class and the student will be the one to choose the time he or she wish to take the class or watch the video conferencing.
firstly why I don't agree with the idea of taking home school or watch video conferencing is because student find home school to be boring and they can't focus in the teaching of the video conferencing. like for example if the person who is teaching in the video speaks softly it will make that student feel sleeping and by the time he or she get up the video might be finish at the end of the day the student don't gained anything from the online teaching, and other student will turn on the video and still be charting with their friends on the phone while the video is playing, he or she will not focus on the video that is teaching.
secondly why I said home schooling or video conferencing can't be beneficial for student is because student will find it very hard to understand the teaching of the video conferencing or the home schooling. like if the video is playing but the student don't understand the teaching of the video he or she can't get the chance to ask question about what they don't understand .And some of this video teaching sometime is really confusing the student that why other student prefer to set in class while teaching so that if he or she don't understand they can ask question about the topic. other student have their young ones at home while he or she want to listen to the teaching their young ones will be make noise so they can't get what the video is teaching about and that will make them not to understand the teaching.
I am not in favor of the idea of student taking online classes because they will find it very boring which they can't focus on the teaching and it will very hard for them to understand the teaching of the video.
for this way I find it very difficult for student to gained any learning from taking the online or the video conferencing class. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
B7AABB24BDB8 | Yes,we accomplish more if we are always doing something rather that doing inactivity. If we keep on doing something to accomplish it then victory is always near to us. Our continious work to accomplish any task will be paid later by our better results. Hard work and dedication always lead us towards the success so does if we are always doing something to accomplish the task. Doesn't it sound foolish that inactivity also serve the purpose. It somehow can help to accomplish taking much time but not the same way like if we are always doing somethng.
There is a famous saying that "Rome was not built in a day". Here the people were always working for many years to built Rome into a beautiful city. We can see their hard work and dedication really worth it as it is one of the most beautiful city among the world. Would it have been possible if they were doing inactivity? Obvioulsy no nah? Doesn't it sound foolish that inactivity also serve the purpose. It somehow can can help to accomplish taking much time but not the same way like if we are always doing somethng. As "Where there is will there is the way" in the same way if we really want something then we can achieve it if we keep on working and always do something for that. I can support it by saying that failure will never ever take you if your determination towards success is strong enough and keep workng for it.
Let's take an example of two students. if two students are assigned a long project in the summer vacation and one student started working from the mean day so that it will be easier from him to complete before the due date whereas the other one kept on realxing thinking that he will start working on it at the last of vacation. Now all of us what the result gonna come. One student happily submitted the project accomplishing it before the due date and the other one had to suffer a lot. So which one would you prefer accomplishing by always doing something in the right time or rushing to complete task in due time.
So,in my opinion always doing something to accompish more is better idea than thinking that inactivity also serve a purpose. No one want to rush to complete any task at the due time so we should be always doing somehing to accomplish more. Slow and steady always wins the race but it doen't mean to say that doing work slowly will worth it everytime. I mean that you should be always doing something in oder to accomplish in time. We can learn lesson from tortoise and rabbit story. From tortoise side,like topic says we should be always doing something to accomplish more or in time in the same way tortoise kept on walking for the race although he can't run having faith in himself that he can do it. From rabbit side we shouldn't do mistake to think our competetors not strong enough than you. We should always respect your competetors thinking that they are as stronger as you and keep doing our assesments to be the most deserving one of that victory. We should have strong believe in ourselves that I can do it then nothing seems impossible.
In conclusion,last but the least I would like to end up saying that if we are always doing something then we can accomplish more compare to the one who works inactively. Time is the most important key factor in our life. Once it is gone it is gone for forever..So,the key point is we should understand the importance of time and utilize it properly and make it effective by always doing something which leads us to the accomplishment of our task. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B7C150A40F86 | It is known, that students truly enjoy the most they can any break of the year. Giving a break to students in the evening and all summer, is better for their process of graduation. That is why, students must do the traditional four years of high school before graduating.
First of all, since students have so much schoolwork and homework to study, they often need a break, so that way they can relax in their home and do other activities with their family that are not related to school. Summer is a season in which students need to go out in vacations and spend time with their family as well. Generally, not every students and their families get to spend so much time all together in the evenings, that is because of their routine. Most parents have from their jobs summer break, and they prefer enjoying it together with their children. It would be unfair for them to have to not enjoy that much their summer with their children just because the students have courses during the summer.
Another reason of why students must do the traditional four years of high school before graduating, is because after they graduate, they are more prepared for the career they decide doing. It would not be a recommendable period of time having three years of high school for students that still need to keep studying and preparing themselves for the career that they are going to study in college. The students can get more experience while they are reaching to their goal which is their graduation.
In high school, every student should have at least an idea of what they are going to be dedicating themselves for the rest of their lives, and most of them suffer by not knowing what career to choose. Some students may say that they would really wish graduating as soon as possible, but the fact is, that by being in a hurry of getting out of high school with a diploma, they would make the mistake by maybe choosing the wrong career in college for themselves, or even maybe deciding to not go to college just because they did not have the enough time of high school to think and decide the options that colleges offer. Giving students more time for this particular decision is a good way to let them know what they are capable of doing in their future.
In conclusion, students having four years of high school includes many benefits that can help them to be more prepared for college, rest more in summer, and giving them a better process of high school for their future in college and job. Students can challenge themselves by experiencing the traditional four years of high school and see the advantages of the result that they reached which will be very beneficial for them. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
B7F56382EF7D | people should make their own decisions about life's important matters. First, it could be profitable for them. Second, An expert could make unhealthy decisions among people's life. Third, people would make the best decisions through their life. people should make their own decisions because it could be profitable for them, it will be healthier than a decision of an expert, and people would never make an unhealthy or a negative decision about their life.
At first, people should take their own decisions because it could be profitable for them. If people take their own decisions than they can save a lot of money that an expert asks for. Also, people can save their time that an expert takes to make a decision for them. Therefore, people's own decisions could be much more healthier among their selves and their families. A healthy decision could also be profitable in the future. As an example, a good financing decision could make someone's life better and keep him away from being bankrupt.
Second, people should make their own decisions because an expert could make an unhealthy decision among their life's important matters.
For example, a bad financing decision of an expert could result in a bankruptcy of someone else and that could destroy a whole family. Also, an expert would never know what a person need and what is the best decision for them. As another example, if a person choose his career by the advises of authorities or experts he may not enjoy the job that the get in the future and that could result in depression. Also, an expert or an authority may not care enough about some one else's life.
Third, people should make their own decisions because every individual knows what is the best decision for him. People will always make the healthiest decision among their life for a comfortable future. Also, every individual knows their own reasons that an expert does not knows those reasons for a healthy and a save decision. An expert would never know what a person needs and what is the problems of a person in order to make a decision for him. Therefore, people should make their own decision in important matters of life.
In conclusion, it could be said that people should make their own decisions because every individual knows their own good, a person will always go for the healthiest decision, and it is also profitable for their present and future. At the end, people should always trust their selves for making their decisions. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
B7FABBC13A0F | "Character is something what you yourself choose to make it"
I agree with John Lubbock because our character is something we make by ourselves. We make ourselves the person we become in the future. We choose our traits and characters by ourselves. Everyone has a right to choose what's best for themselves. Some people choose worst traits but others choose good. It depends on ourselves what we want to be in the future. Although some traits in a character of a person comes from experiences and most of the time bad traits comes from the worst experiences in our life. But it is completely our choice if we want to make those bad experiences a process of learning and learn something good from them. Some people choose to learn worst possible things from their experiences that's how most of the people get their worst traits. It is not wrong to say that people choose what they want to be and how they want their life. It is true that some traits are formed beyond our control but it depends on ourselves if we want those trait in our characters or not.
Some people get too comfortable with bad traits and they don't want to change their selves for example lying is a worst trait anyone can possibly have it leads to do things that we don't even want to do but we do it anyways because we get comfortable and have no fear. "Lying is not better than silence" so it is way better to not say anything than lie about it. Lying is something that leads to other bad traits like dishonesty. If a person is not honest than they are not trustworthy. Trust is something very important because it is extremely hard to gain.
If a person is not trustworthy than there is nothing they can do other than try not to lie. Trust is like a glass if it breaks it will never be the same. All these problems are caused by lying and it depends on our to choose if we want to lie and make ours characters full of worst traits or be a better person choose good traits. In this world there is nothing more important than being who we are and choosing best for ourselves.
Our characters can formed by influences beyond our control for example something bad that happened in the past can lead a person to lie and being dishonest. Lying is not something to be proud of and bad experiences doesn't give anyone the right to lie because it doesn't matter. There is a huge difference between right or wrong. We choose our traits and what we want our characters to be like by ourselves we should know what's good and bad for ourselves. Even though sometimes being honest and speaking truth can lead to difficult situations and most people don't want to deal with difficult situations which is okay but it is important to do something right. Difficult situations make a person stronger and traits like honesty will make us proud of ourselves in future. Most of times its the journey that matters the most than the destination because it not about how we choose to become a better person it is about the experiences that led us to who we will be in the future. It is about how some people choose to learn worst possible things from their experiences but others learn good things from them. It is true to say that we become what we want to be and we choose our traits by ourselves. The harder the path will be the stronger the person becomes so it depends on ourselves to choose good or bad. There will be always two paths one will lead to good and other will lead to bad although our it depends on our own selves to choose from right or wrong,good or bad the choice is ours. If we want to be become something we'll be proud of or something we will be ashamed of. We write our stories by ourselves so it is all on in our hands what we want to be.
Although some people might disagree and yes it is true that our characters can formed by influences beyond our control but it depends on us what we want to be. Everyone knows the difference between right or wrong. There will be consequences of choosing bad and sometimes it will be easy to not be brave and choose the worst traits for ourselves. It is completely your decision if you want to add good traits in your personality or bad traits. The difference between Joker and Batman is that Batman chose good traits while Joker turned himself evil by choosing bad traits. Even though tragic experiences led Joker to be evil but his past didn't give him the right to be evil. So,you can't be evil because of your past and becoming a better person or having good traits will lead to a better future because it past is past and future is something to look forward to. Traits like honesty and being able to do what's right without any fear will make us proud of ourselves in the future. Everyone wants to be proud of themselves and to make that possible they need to adapt good traits. Good traits will lead to success and a better future which is very important to for ourselves. Bad traits will lead to an unsuccessful future and which is not best for anyone. It is important to choose good traits.
In conclusion the person we choose to become today will reflect on our future selves whether we choose good or bad traits. The decision is ours and what we want to be ourselves to be like it totally depends on us. Most of the problems in our lives can be solved by choosing good traits over evil. Good traits will lead to success and a better future which is very important to for ourselves while bad traits will lead to an unsuccessful future and which is not best for anyone. It is very important to choose good traits. If you want to be proud of yourself then it is a must to choose good traits. Our traits make our characters and personalities. Some people make their life miserable by choosing what's worst for them like bad traits. It is important for ourselves to choose good rather that ruin our lives with choosing something like bad traits. A person can ruin their character by choosing bad traits. That's why it is extremely important to choose good traits for ourselves because it is good. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
B7FCFC6A7011 | I want to work as a animal babysitter, I had a lot of experience of taking care of animals I learned how to take care of animals and fishes, everyday I feed my guinea pigs and fishes and my dog, I have taken care of animals since was little, since one day I want to visit a pet Daycare and explore the daycare of how dogs are being taken care of, I want to learn about how to take care of new animals, I want to rescue animals in Mexico, cause I'll save animals in Mexico since I have a ranch there, I could care for the dogs or other animals, since I saved lives of them when I was in Mexico, I would feed them or help them from abuse from other people, I had experience for caring for animals, since I want to learn the correct way of taking care of new animals that I have never experienced with, I may want to learn when they get sick, taking care of animals can be hard and a lot of work, since you need to take them a shower, clean their pee or poo, and feed them, it depends how many you need to care for, I want to convince employees to hire me since I've had a lot of experiences of how to care for their health, I know how to take care of freshwater and salt water fishes I know what they need to eat, When I see a fish dying I put it in a separate tank and I watch over them when they start breathing healthy I wait there for hours until its healthy to go back to its tank, i have saved a lot of fishes lives and animals from those who are dying, everyday I study about fish types and their water, and I study about fish gender everyday, I study about Pleco, goldfish, Molly, betta, bunbunshkin, koi, puffer fish, kissing gourami, gourami. I want to be a farmer to take care of animals such as horses since I love them, I want to learn to take care of them, I want to work as a daycare and a farmer since I want to have a secondary job [ animal daycare, and farmer] and I want to learn to grow crops and take care of flowers and plants, I have plants in my front house that they are healthy but they die in the cold but grow back again when its warm, I water them when its warm, I want to convince the farmer to let me work as their asisstants. swimming is my favorite sport but I want to keep learning how to swim better so i can be a swimming teacher to teach my students how to swim while not drowning, I want them to learn how to swim so their life won't be drowned, I want to learn for their kids safety I could, If i retire I could work as a life guard since I had experience of swimming. which four jobs should I pick? | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
B821E1D68BE7 | our big break. Summer is a season with very hot weather schools take this whole season to give students a big break summer is almost 2 months of break .Although some educators feel that the summer break is too long and schools should be year round schools. Which mean schools have one month of summer and a longer winter break. Nevertheless I think schools should not be year round schools because summer have a very hard weather also students use this time to plan some trip with family and friends.
Summer has a very hard weather to even think go to schools. Some day the temperature goes to 96c or more this is to hot for students. This hot temperature will make students swearing a lot and have very hard head hurt during class time level of streets will increase make students get bad grades or be angry all this time. Students who work in hot areas will feel more difficult to do a simple thing than students who work in a warm area . Hot areas make you not focus in your work.
In summer students have 2 months to enjoy make some family trip or things like that .Some students and families take this time to make some big family vacation plan. students wait for this time of the year to do their vacations. Because summer is a perfect time to go to the beach with family and friends or go outside the country to visit other country as we do not have school in summer we do not miss any day of school . trip can take so much time and students think summer is a perfect time to do. In summer students have enough time do anything students want some students use this time to find a job during summer as students do not have school they are more focus making money,so summer is very important to us to have some time with our family or make money.
In conclusion summer is a hard time to go to school but a good time to make some trip or money so the government should not cut off our summer. this is our time this is our big break. this when students can relax for a very long period without any preoccupation about schools work summer just happen one time each year students have to enjoy students deserve it for all hard work than students did in the whole school year. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
B83897288B43 | As human beings, our character traits are important in our lives, because they are what determine who we are, and how we are going to develop with the people around us. But those traits, do we really aquire them ? Or they are formed by little and dieferent pieces of things that trough the our lives they influeced us ? In this essay I will argue my point of view and why do I think.
Our parents, they were our firts teachers, and also the firts influence on us. I'm lucky for having really good parents, but not just becuse how they treated me, but also for what they teached me; being respectful, responsible, having manners, the good things. Those are traits that not everybody have, but the ones who do, it's because they acquired that influence from somebdy. When we are growing some other factors influed on us, I remember that in my firts group of friends everything we did was play with those Hotwheels cars and everything I wanted during my five trough nine years old were Hotwheels cars, it was in my personality the fact that I liked them, but if it wasn't for those ads on TV, those external influnces I wouldn't realize that I liked them, same with LEGOS when I was twelve, and videogames nowdays, and during that time and even now, those friendships became another influence on our lives, we play or talk about same things and when we are doing that they become a influence for me on the same way I become a influence for them.
We share and receive those little traits for outside and we forge them into a unique trait by mixing them with ours, making it part of our personality. Someone who says the opposite may have their point, because in this world there is a lot of people who came from the worst places, when you could see the worst influences for then. becoming an admiable and respetable person, but then were you listen their story, it was something, even a little influence, but for them was bigger than any other, even the ones that were in front of that people, so they wanted to reach it and they did it. People is really suseptible, specially kids, so lets try to keep those bad influnces on them, because as the same way a great person can come from a bad place, a bad person can also come from a rich place just because they were under some bad influence, teach them good things so they can avoid the bad ones. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
B83DD09D3129 | I think What thomas jefferson wrote is a pretty good idea. But i also believe that some other people think different , some are agree and others are desagree .People always will give threir own opinions about what the other people do .
There are reason why i think what tomas jefferson wrote is a pretty good idea . For example , if we work hard every day and we always doing something that much may be done . Also the person who wrote the testamnet was someone with classic and that make help to inspire some poeple to never give up . But some other people accomplish about doing something everyday . althought other people are thinkig that inactivity serve a purpose , other are always doing something to be done as soon as they can .Because inactivity will bring you nothing wonderful to your life . In conclusion , i think we all need to think the same way as thomas jefferson to be success in our life's , withouth complaining and always doing something . | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
B84EF55EE7F0 | Although student-designed projects isn't a horrible idea, because students would pay attention more to the assignment since their putting effort of their own into it. But at the same time student-designed project can effect them learning more,because all the assignments will be the same. It could still be a big distraction for the students.
The reason why i believe it can be bad for their learning enviorment. Since all the work will be the same the students can look things up online. Getting all the answers from the internet and being able to just cheat off friends. Students copying from friends causes students to learn less. Causes them not being envolved in the assignment. The students would be able to pick their own type of questions in the project. Those questions can be really easy for them and picj it for the less work.
For example since the students will be not learning very much during the summer. They will not be ready for the beggining of the school year. Students will find the school work difficult for them since all they did during the summer was choose easy assignments for th project and cheat off of each other. Putting in type of effort to the student-designed project.
Teacher-designed projects will be outstanding for the students. It would so get the students for envoled. The teacher can possibly let the students have partners and it'll be more exciting for them. The teacher-designed project will have work thats equal to your grade. Not make it too easy but also not too hard. Each student or group would have different kind of project so students can have their own work.
Yes student-designed projects would be cooler for the students to have their own project and not be assigned one. It can also help them learn more as much as not help them learn more because students who actually do their own work and choose good questions for the project can help them be successful. But there is just too many students who would cheat and not give effort to the project. In conclusion i think teacher-designed projects for the summer is far more successful for the students than letting them do their own designs, because of the lack of effort is going to be put in if they do student-designed project and the amount of similar project they'll be from cheating off of each other. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
B84FF4E3504F | what is self- reliance? gladly you ask let me tell you that self reliance is when students and adults make decisions on them self or others. There a lot that we can talk about but i highly recommend start off with the events and problems that we are having today. These events are not only effecting us it's effecting the whole UNITED STATE OF AMERICAN. Government shutdown it not only effect us it's effecting everyone business ,stores,farms . Seeking help and guidance make a huge different .Not only one mind that is speaking but there should be more so we talk and decade bout the issue and we can give more ideas and information. we don't need to tell our child to be followers there are leaders by teaching them these skills make a big impact . Leaders always seek help too they start off small but over the time the income until one point you have all knowledge you need but still to this day we still ask question grab more information.
we can compare these skills and source to our family,jobs,lifestyles.
It's not only students that need it .Having self-reliance and seeking guidance by seeking more information make us better in our jobs,lifestyles. We are also leaning but at the same time we also teaching it to others these skills are not useful. We would all need them reliance can be compare to leaderships standing up with you think it right for you and your career we believe that our answer is right but we don't want to be wrong but by seeking guidance and other people ideas always asking questions give you other option to choose from. I highly recommend that we always want to be the right but sometimes seeking answers and ideas give you more to think bout not only you and others too. we don't have to go far the military ,world decision does it effect us? yes it does why i'm asking you it because things no one really care bout really we should these are problems that need to be solves.
Military is a job,life and a career in your hands. Those man and woman that are serving our country they had a hard call to make. Before doing all that they need those soldiers to be ready there mind and skills are the most important that were self -reliance comes in to play. They can wait commander give you the call but you have man and woman life on the line you have to make a decisions. That why drill soldiers get you ready at base boot camp for mind and skills to ready and thing of these issue would not happening .doing that time you always need to ask question grab information it important you give you more feedback on what you work with or what are to get these skills are so important not only for the military in our life too we have big decisions to make it can involve your kids or career these thing you need to keep a look out.
NO matter what age,race,sex,color you are is so important to seeking these things the are really useful in the future and now always think that these skills get far and one day you would teach you kids bout money and business and more but right we all need to see what is really going with our government make a change we do not what to have a stock market crash again so use your voice,skills and etc to helps others not only yourself this world need to voices and our government need to rise again where it was before our jobs and homes are so important and how we spend our money and time and seeking out questions and answers make a big different in our society and community
Our jobs we get by our boss and our boss get there money from the government. When our government shut down there would we lose a lot of money a lot of business owners we lose there business and homes these thing we have to look at not should i get the new 2019 car no what is important is that show other step by step always seek guidance and give new ideas never forget to ask question it doesn't hurt to ask people you would see thing different and clearly. never be fare of asking we here to Lean everyday. we are people and no one is perfect we would learn everyday until we get old never stop seeking answers and always share your ideas to everyone. i'm ending this today saying seek guidance never stop asking question thank you so much for your amazing time have a great day. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
B8624C2D465A | For various reason's i think that student's should have at least a B average to be able to participate in sports or other activities. the first reason is because a lot of student's maybe think that a C average it good. But , for many other student's a B is a better average then, a C.
Also, i think that it would be a better reason for the student's because a lot of student's want to participate in sports or other activities. So, then they could focus more in school and, get good average's.
The second reason is that parent's would also be happy for there children to have good grade's and, that they could participate in school activities. and, also they will be proud of there self's. So | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
B86530090737 | There are lots of activities one can to do outdoors. Many people now a days stay in there home and play video games. There is so much to do outdoors like you can go rock climbing. Rock climbing is a very fun, dangerous, and healthy outdoor activity to do. Many people who do rock climbing are living the happiest and healthiest life they can. You can also do hunting. Hunting is also a fun outdoor activity you can do, but it requires risk to do. Hunting is done by a gun which many people cant use or dont have but hunting is a fun activity to do if you do have a gun and know how to use it.
you can also go to parks. Parks are really enjoyable, there is lots of fun stuff to do in a park. There are slides, swings and other fun stuff. There are also animals some times in a park. its like a park and zoo mixed together. people can really enjoy there self in parks. Parks are not only for little kids and there are not always slides,swings, monkey bars etc. in a park. There are some parks that are only made for people who like to jog, run and walk. There are so many different kind of parks.
One of the most enjoyable thing you can do is play a sport, like Soccer, Football, Baseball, Tennis etc. There are many places outdoor you can go to play. There are soccer fields made for people who like to play soccer. There are Football fields etc. Sports are not only fun but they also are healthy for you. Like in Soccer there is nothing you can do accept running after the ball. Football is also fun and healthy for you and many other sports. Doing something outdoors is way more fun than doing something inside. If you play video games all the time you can lose your eyes and you can get fat easily.
You can also go to the beach. Beach is the most funnest and enjoyable place. There is sand. ocean, sun, waves and other fun stuff. if you cant swim you can also stay in the sand and make a sand castle or something like that. If you do know how to swim you can go to the ocean and swim in the waves and have lots have fun. If you dont want to swim and make sand castle you can just lay on your towel ad enjoy the hot sun. If you are with your friends and family you can also play lots of different games like frisky, Tag, etc. You can play music on a boombox or a speaker and have fun with that.
Another fun activity to do outside is skydiving. If you want to fly skydiving is just the thing for you. It is another one of the most fun outdoor activities but it requires skill and lots of confidence to do a skydive. If you dont know how to open or use a parachute you will not be skydiving alone you will be tied to professional skydiver and you will skydive with him/her. You still need the confidence to skydive or you can have a heart attack or you can pass out and passing out in the midair is not very good for you, you can break your neck with the air pressure or die.
Skydiving is not really healthy but it still is fun and enjoyable.
Hiking is also one of the outdoor activity and it is really fun. In hiking you can go to mountain peeks or just walk to the middle of a mountain. Hiking is similar to rock climbing but you dont have to climb rocks you just have to walk on the track and and have fun. hiking is also one one of healthy outdoor activities. Once you reach your goal you can enjoy the view and be proud of yourself. Hiking is not an easy thing to do there are many rocks and unstable ground on the way but if you do hiking often it will be easy for you.
Camping is also one of the outdoor activities. camping is fun and enjoyable but it is also dangerous and risky. Camping is when you alone or with your friends go to a forest or camping spot and live there in a tent for one or four days. camping is so much fun especially if you are with your friends or family. you can cook yourself food, enjoy the nature etc. If you like nature camping is just the thing for you. camping can be dangerous and risky because there are a lot of dangerous animals in the woods like lion, bear etc. but if you pick the right camping spot for yourself then there is no danger. many camping spots are where there are less harmful animals.
Outdoor activities are fun to do. Most people dont them because they waste all of there time time on video games and indoor stuff. Most people dont like nature and the are discussed of it. outdoor activities are fun and healthy for you they can keep you in shape and you can have the time of your life. Outdoor activity is for people who really like nature and want to stay healthy. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
B8656754E9EB | Do you believe failure could lead up to a better person? Shortly, I am going to discuss as to why making mistakes is necessary for a person to become a better human being. When a person makes mistake he's/she's is more likely to learn from its mistake. However, not all person learn from their mistakes in the first time, some take longer than others. Therefore, you should always look back at what you did wrong and always fix your mistakes. Making right decisions should help you become a better human being for its future community, country, and even the world.
I personally strongly agree with Churchill's statement. A person should not always be right, some people think that by doing what pleases them they are doing good. However, little do they know they're hurting people because they decide whats good for them and whats not good for them. That leads up to a person who is selfish, mean, and has a cold heart. Mistakes are a problem, and problems can always be fixed.
Once upon a time my friend Generic_Name had a girlfriend, Generic_Name. He was a good kid with a good heart, therefore, that led to people takeover him easily. Generic_Name's girlfriend or friend would always takeover Generic_Name. She would tell him what to do and how to do it, she was the man in the relationship. Thats how good my friend's heart was. She knew she could trust Generic_Name because Generic_Name loved her like he never loved anyone else. Till the day came, sooner than what we expected. The day that he will never forget. It was a Thursday and Me and my friend Generic_Name were on our way to work, I was driving when all of the sudden he starts screaming like if he was having some sort of a seizure. " NO how could you do this to me" he said. "What happened?" I asked. He tells me that he was on snap chat just chatting and looking at snaps when all of the sudden he sees his "girlfriend' kissing another man. I tell him to relax and to let it go that she was not worth his time. He calms down, breaks up with her and moves on. Years passed, I noticed that he has changed. He is not the sweet boy with the good heart anymore. He now learned from the mistake he did, which was to let his girlfriend controlled him. He now knows when to say NO and when to say YES. People make mistakes all of the time in their lives. However, that does not mean you cannot change it or fix the mistake you did.
Mistakes are mistakes. You cannot go back in time, but you can move on and make a change in your life. In conclusion, a better person makes a better future for its world. People can change,and we all make mistakes. However, we shall learn for the better.
In Conclusion, I would like to give an advice to all people to never give up. You made a mistake? You all shall learn from it. Fix it. Make of yourself a better self being and be and example for all others. We are not perfect, but we could try or at least act like we can be. Learn from what you did wrong an improve yourself. Love everyone because you only live once in this life. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
B88EA53BC496 | Of course you accomplish more if you are always doing something.
Sitting down on your behind trying to accomplish your goal or your dream will never come. Get up go grind for it , go plan for it,
set steps you will take to accomplish that goal of yours. Now if your sitting down doing nothing how will you ever accomplish anything if you are putting no work into your craft. Nothing in life is given to you , get up off your behind and WORK.
. Some of the greatest athletes in the world like Larry Bird, Michael Jordan , and Lebron James all had to get up every morning and train master their craft before the can be great and accomplish the amazing milestones they accomplished in their careers .. Before every game Larry Bird would shoot 100 3-pointers because that was his craft. Lebron James was fresh out of high school and trained then ended up getting drafted. Do you think if some of the greatest athletes in the world would be able to do what they do if they sat around and waited for it to come to them?.
Same thing with money , you think you can just sit at home all day eat,drink,sleep and watch TV all day and think money is just going to fall out of the sky?. Money requires work, and sitting at home on your couch all day will not get you a profit i can guarantee you that . I understand that yea maybe sometimes you should sit back and let things play out but no the more you let that happen the more time you are wasting in life.
One of the best NFL football Running Backs ever to play was Walter Payton. He was not your average RB . He had a hill in his neighborhood he ran everyday which separated him from the other players in the rest of the NFL players. In the off season 90 percent of the League goes idle but nope not him he worked and trained everyday, you know where that lead him to ? Lead him to the top 10 rushing yard list of all time. The people who work everyday all day will and comes back the next day to accomplish more will have more accomplished when they are dead and gone.
Everyone should want to accomplish something nice in life and work and constantly striving to do better 24/7 and trust me it will happen. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
B8961D64A158 | dear principal,
I would like you to change the policy to at least a b to get in sports because people would work harder for it and because you would have much more people passing school and getting healthier. It would get more people cunserned on there grade and will ask for help to there teacher or they would stay after school for tottering. people would do better in sports because they learned how to do it. And it would make the collages wont them even more. It also make less people feal on there test or any exam because they would have studied allot more then they have before. people would wont to work so hard to get in any sports they wonted and when the get that score that they wonted they would be happy of what they got | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
B8AD03895BE6 | I disagree with school the board of adding one an half hour each day to school. Students would have more class work like math or home work. Students would have more drama each day at school. Also, students have other thing to do for example they might have to go see their family. Having a extra half an hour would not be good for the school because students would not be focus in class.
First, students would have more class work. They, would have more projects, more class work students would have a hard time focusing when doing their class work. Students would have a hard time with home work or studying. For instances many of the students would have to study after they did class work they would not want to study in the mean time they would want to take a break. Students would not like to have in extra half an hour.
Second, students would have more drama every day at school because of the extra half an hour. Students would go around the school an start drama every where then, students would have a hard time focusing in class. Then, their grades would start going down. Although having an extra half an hour would have many problems students would most likely have more drama then ever before.
Lastly, having an extra half an hour students would not like having it because students would be messing thing, such as football games, soccer games maybe even a cook out at the park with their family. Having an extra hour would not be so good because students then, would be messing the thing they do not want to mess. Having an extra half an hour would then be a problem because it would be more work, drama and other thing. Many students would most likely not like having extra school time because they have other thing to do. Also having the extra half an hour would change every thing students then, would not have time to do the thing they like to do like going to their friend house or play outside, because of the extra half an hour.
In conclusion having the school board plan to add one an half hour to the school each day would mean that students would not want to come to school. Because, of the extra half an hour students would have to wake up in the morning and thing about the school extra half an hour and students would have more class work, study more for a subject. Then, students would start drama at school then, students would not be focus in class. Also having more time in school students would then mess other thing beside school. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B8EE6B6594BD | Most students enjoy summer vacations,but some educators feel that the summer break is too long and the students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall. Some people argue that there should be year rounds schools,where there would be a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring fall.
This is the opinion of some educators that think the students dont need a long vacations ,because they cannot retain the learned in the past year, some students think the same .The system to the long long vacation for students in high school can be a very problematic because they are start the adultlife and need time off for live.
The idea that the students's vacations need are more short is bad because the students in high school needs long period of vacation for find their firts job, some students need travel to other country for visit their family and need a long vacations; if the students not have a good long vacations they can stressed and have other nervous problems.
For this situation to improve that the vacation are very short is impossible because not all students have a same system to live and some need time to find independitzation, some enjoy with their family and other can study in their homes, in other words the students need explore the world and this only can possible when have time in vacations the rest of the year they can study.
Educators and other people that think the system of short vacations need understand that before they was a students and they also was need vacation for forget all thing and enjoy the life.
The other side for take postion in this issue is that the short bacations are goof for not forget the learned in old classes.
Some people think that the student need a long periods of vacation specifically in summer , but this is bad because the student only need study and the student cannot retain the information for long time and they need more time in the school for learn more thing and repeat the learned in past years. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
B8F0ECC9DC86 | Dear : Principal
I think that would be a great idea if the you let the student to do community service , because if they do that the street were clean, they go to put more attention helping others person . i mean i know other person doesn't like to clean but i know that we cant make the other people to change ,ho know if they start helping us to like not throwing the trash on the streets. it's not necessary clean the hold day but like 3h that would be great. i know we cant do that i only need to know if you agree or disagree with me. EX: painting the sidewalk cleaning the beaches cleaning the street school helping people that really need are help like paralytic, oldest, veterans persons. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
B936994E140D | I agree that students would benefit better on taking online classes and video conferencing at home. Most of the students prefer online classes because they can't get transportation from home to class. Video conferencing and online classes would benfit students in a way that their will be less distraction and work in your own level. Society now in days has many bullies in school that it comes to the point that studuents don't want to come to school and prefer taking class at home by there self.
For example I had a cousin that took online class at home because he had no transportation to get to school. He was able to benefit better at home because even when he was sick he would still be able to accomplish his work. Most of the teenagers want to go to school but they can't because they have no way to get to school. Online classes and Video conferencing is way were students can get education and graduate without leaving their house. My cousin got education and he graduated and he only took online classes and it helped him a lot due to not having tansportation to school.
There are many kids out in the world thet get bullied in school and they want a education but they can't due to bullys. Classes at home can benefit kids getting bullied in many ways for example,
you won't have to worry about getting bullied at home if you take classes at home, you will get less distraction, and you will work in your own level taking classes at home.
Therefore, This is why I agree that students can benefit better taking classes at home in many ways. Online classes and video conferencing may benfit some people but due to experience with family members and friends
I feel like it benfits most of teens in the world. Not all teens get to have education due to many reasons which is why I feel like it can benefit many teens in taking classes at home. | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B942E0DA6A0F | I agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson, it is best to be yourself than to be someone you're not. You won't have to meet some jobs perspectives. You won't have to be someone you're not. You can have many accomplishments throughout your life.
The first reason as to why I agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson is because, when it comes to jobs it can be real tough for some people. Some job's ask who you really are as a person, once you let them know they don't like the response. But, there are some job's that will accept you and will like who you are truly.
Second of all don't have to be someone you're not. You shouldn't have to please others only because they don't like who you are as an individual. Some might even say that its for the best when in reality it isn't. You shouldn't have to be the opposite of who you are just so you don't get judged on. Pay no attention to those who don't accept you for being nothing but yourself, and don't change for them unless you're doing it for you. You should always please yourself no matter what.
Lastly like Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, "To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment." That writing is nothing but the absolute truth. Your individuality can bring you so much success. It can take you places you can't even imagine. Being yourself can benefit you as a person, people can perhaps like even love the real you. You can become a role model to those who are having trouble on deciding if they should be themselves or be what this world want's them to be. People could admire you and accept you even more.
In conclusion I agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson because it is best to be you own individual self than not, because you won't meet jobs perspectives, be someone you're not, and also it comes with amazing accomplishments. Some think otherwise because the believe that it would make life more simple and easy. Also you might find that being your own individual self gets you no where. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
B948405746B5 | Many students like to spend time with their friends in the school. Specially high schools are good places for students to learn and get fun with their friends. By the way some students are coming to school just for the pass their classes and work hard to graduate with high grades. I think graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years from a high school would be good for these students. Because they can go to college/university early, or work 1 year full time in a job to save money after graduated from high school or get more time to think about their career desicion.
First of all a student who graduated from high school in three years can attend to a college early. This means this student also can graduate one year early from the college and start his career early. If this student already decided to which college or university that he wants to go and what career he wants to do, this can be good for him. Also, student can understand how college classes are.
Second reason for to choose graduate early is save money for college/university. Some students who graduated from high school don't go to college/university directly. These students choose to work in a job one or two years full time to save money for college/university. This is a good option for the students who doesn't have money to pay for college/university or who doesn't want to be dependent to his family. Some families don't have money to pay their childrens' school. In this kind of situations students choose to wait one or two years instead of go to college/university directly.
Another reason to graduate early from high school is to get a extra year to make a desicion about career and college/university. Some students think it is hard to choose the right career for them in high school because when they graduateded from university their careers is going to be their whole life. Like an example sometimes students choose the job according to the classes that they liked in their high school but after they go to college/university they understand this career is not interesting more to them. According to the scientistists 35% of the college/university students decide to change their career in their freshman or sophomore year in the university. This shows that students need to think carefully while they make a decision about their careers. Also the career that a student choose effects the college/university that he wants to go because many students choose the university that gives good education and opportunites to this students about their careers that they choosed.
In conclusion I think graduate one year early from high school is a good idea for the students who wants to go to college/university early. Another reason is save money to pay college/university and final reason is to get a extra time to make a desicion about right career and school. I believe also to study and get prepared better for SAT
to get a higher score can be an extra reason. Graduate early from high school is a good idea but also can be hard for all students. So, student who wants to graduate early from high school needs to work hard. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
B950C326FB77 | First impressions are always the most important thing when you meet someone you want them to think good of you so you do your best to make them feel comfortable around you. If you make a bad impression the first time with probably that person It is going to think that you are like that forever. There is no way you can change what others think even when you have not talk to them,people think what they want to think and it is hard to change their thoughts. You can do a couple of thinks to make them trust you and change their perspective about you: like be kind,ask them about what they like,etc. Start a conversation that makes them feel they can talk with you about whatever they want,however sometimes things like that do not work and simply you just can not change what other people thinks that is why you should try to make a good impression the time you talk with a new person that is the reason why first impressions are important. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
B9733BDA883E | High school the place where we can all do anything we want and just a step before going to college, or at least this is what a lot of middle schoolers think. In high school we take so many classes that are required and those classes are supposed to open up doors and get us closer to our goals. But, classes like arts, music or drama will give us something that we cannot get from others classes. These classes are like a little break, just a whole class to forget about having to write an essay or doing some long math equations and, instead just have fun with friends and enjoy singing, painting and even acting. These classes teach the students how to socialize and communicate with others.
High school is not as easy as some would think, students usually get really stressed because they have to pass their classes, their Sols and start getting prepare for college all at the same time. There is where classes like this can give a little opening to reduce some of that stress. Usually the environment in this classes is always joyful and fun, it is a place where students can learn through socializing and having fun. Who knows may be students would never think they like music but after some months taking music they would find out they love it and decide to become a musician and that can also happens with art and even drama. Classes like this not only give a little time off all the stress and pressure from high classes but also can give lessons to students that they would never even imagined they would learn.
Now, think about a extremely coy student who has never had the confidence to speak up in class not even to ask a question their math class, we know we all have asked something in math is just a class that at least a question per unit seems mandatory. However, how can that same student later on give a speech or have the valor to push himself up in a big company if he never has learned how to properly communicate. Even if he has huge talent and the brain of a genius he will never be successful. In life being able to express ourselves is something required, something that we have to do if we want to move keep moving up our hill path. Nothing will be easy but communication is a social skill we all have to learn.
Many will not agree on this and can will make strong arguments on how this classes are a waste of time. That after all we do not get anything from this classes and students just see these classes as a place to hang around with friends and procrastinating for 90 minutes. well, what about those students that do not have friends, students that always sit back in a corner and the teacher has never get him to say something. The students no one has ever heard from, or sometimes even noticed they are there. Shouldn't school concern about them, shouldn't school be the place where they can grow and open up their winds to start flying on their sky of opportunities.
"Tu voz habre puertas" It is something i heard from a commercial once i was watching TV with my mom, it means "Your voice opens up doors" but those doors will never open if we open our mouths to ask questions that will give us answers those answers will impulse us further in life. Not matter how smart a student can be but if they cannot make themselves be notice their brilliant brain will be worthless. | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
B983F2965167 | Influencing other with positive qualities by expressing action or even he way how we talk, is the best and only way to represent your character. I strongly agree with Albert Schweitzer, a good example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people. Because it represents your positive qualities and as well as culture, and help others understand more about you.
One reason that people should behave positively, is that they can represent them selves to others. As an example, people with positive behave draw others' attention by the way how they physically act and speak. They are easy to convince, open to everyone, and humble. In my real life experience, I have met a lot of these kind of people who I consider as friends now.
I was influenced by them the first time we met, with their positive attitude and respect.
Another reason why reason that people should behave positively, is that they can influence others by their culture. In my real life experience, I have who drew my attention by the way how they interact to others and I wanted to know and learn more about his culture and religion.
In the final analysis, acting positively influence the surrounded people, helps making meet and make new friends. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 4 |
B9A542B2C36C | I think students should not be able to take classes at home. Because is not going to benefit them with their work. Sometimes students dont know how to do their assignment assigned. Students need to communicate with others to gain more experience.
a lot of students needs help with one person to support them with their work. Some students are not smart enough to work by their-self. If students take classes at home they might have some issues.
For example from my point of view I think students should come to school. Because is more helpful for them they get help from their teachers. They communicate with others share their thoughts. If their having problems with their assignment they can ask for help.
however some students are not agree to come to school because they might not like to wake up early every morning or deal with others. Some students have bad attitudes and they dont like been with others or forced to talk. But it is more important to come to school because it benefits you gain more experience. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B9B02A6FB3F9 | Dear Teachers,
Date: 03/12/19
Address:
Center St Generic_City
In my opinion working in group should be more benefits.
Teacher should let student work in group.
Teacher should be allow students to work in group. There are three reason why should they let student work in group:
Working in group think more stronger and faster. Each of every students can catch a mistake. It would benefits to get more information about what topic they will do it.
Firstly, you can look more than one idea. Secondly, each students can make one question about what they are doing. Thirdly, if you work in group you can be more comfortable with your work.
Your working should have the best idea and should not be any mistake because before to give the work to the teacher every students should look at it.
It would be more interesting to meet another students and know what they can do it, and if you can help in something that they don't it. Also, in some schooler teacher let student to work in group because some students don't feel comfortable to do the work by themselves. Some activities should be necessary to do in group.
For example, when they are doing a project. However, most of the classses have workshit to do in group.
For example, make experiment in a lab, present in front of the class.
Some students say that work in group is more funny than being alone.
Sometimes, teacher don't like to put student in group becasue they observe that when student are in group they just talk about anothers thnig not about what they tell you , but not all the students like that.
In conclusion,
for these reasons is more benefits to work and group than work alone.
Sincerely,
Generic_Name | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
B9B71CEE162B | This is a very important important subject to me Thank You fore giving me the opportunity write about it. In my opinion i believe that graduating in four years is a lot better than, graduating in three years. The traditional four years of high school does not put the student under pressure, unlike the three year plan. The four year plan allows the student to have some elective classes. The three year plan helps students graduate faster but it also, it does not give people time to enjoy the summer or have free time to do their favorite hobby.
High school is the best time of every student's life, because in high school students do not have a lot of responsibilities. Students who decide to pick the three year plan will be making a big mistake. Students might not be able to have any elective classes, these classes are made to be easy classes that help student do their favorite hobby like playing guitar, piano and sports, these type of classes help students remove the stress from their brains by doing something they like. I am pretty sure that students who do the four year traditional plan will be doing better in school because they are not pressured, unlike the other students with the three year plan. I was born in Egypt i moved to the United States in 2015, which was my freshman year of high school. I had to take all the mandatory classes in my first year in order to be able to graduate on time. I was not able to take any elective classes, which put me under pressure and made feel bad, because of the amount of homework and the number of hours i used to sit in my room and study.
Students in high school should be enjoying their lives. Students who do the three year plan do not have time to enjoy their lives with their family all year long, because they will have to study in order to pass their class and graduate. We all know that social life is important to every single one of us and, it affects how we do in school. Students who do the three year plan do not have time to do anything but study and do school related stuff which causes a lot of people depression and anxiety. Last year one of my closest friends had to do summer school, every time i call him he barley answers and says that he can not hang out because he got school related work to do. My friend used to hangout with me all the time but he did not because he had to go to summer school, he was telling me that he was not happy be cause he would wake up go to school finish school, go straight to work, come back from work do his homework and sleep, he barley had time to eat, which made him very tired mentally and physically.
Some of the students in high school are independent, they live on their own have a job and dont ask parents for money. Independent students can not do the three year plan because the will not have any time to do anything other than work and school. For example i have a job i live on my own and i do not as my parents for any money or anything in order for me to do the three year plan i will have to quit my job, so i can be able to focus on school or else i will fail in school and not be able to graduate and if quit my job i will have no source of income to take care of myself and pay for my rent, but i do the four year traditional plan and i have a good job where i can focus on both school and my job so i can live.
In conclusion the three year plan is not a very good decision to make and everyone should think twice before deciding on it. The three year plan does not let students have their free time to hand out with their friends or do their favorite hobby. That plan also does not give people time to have time with their family or the people they love. The three year plan will not give you time to have a job if you need one. I believe by going to high school for four years students will be able to get more experience and enjoy the best time of their lives. Thank you. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
B9BA0955819D | Is it possible for younger and older students to work together? Older students are smarter then younger students, because they have more experience then the younger students. Also the older students could help the younger students with their school work. Schools should have a program that Paris older students with younger students because they could help each other with school works, help them learn more about team work, and they could learn some viable things and give each other great advice when they need it.
How could older students help younger students with school work. Older students are smarter then younger students, whereas younger students could learn faster then older students. My older sister is really smart every time I ask for help she always helps me and she shows me how to solve the problems that I dont understand. After she shows me how to solve the problem I would understand the question and solve the other problems. That is how older students could help younger students with their work.
Older and younger students learning about team work together. Team work is something really important to learn about, because it could help you talk with more people, and you could get great ideas from other people. When older and younger students work as a team it could benefit them both with their team work and their project that they are working on together. One time I had to work with an older students with this project that I had to do. They were such a great help and they showed me how to start it and how to end it. They were so intelligent and they would tell me if I had done something wrong and how I should correct it. That is how older and younger students could learn more about team work together.
Older and younger students learning viable things and give each other great advice when one needs it. When I was in third grade I was going to have my first SOL, I was so nervous and scared about it. But then my older brother gave me great advice and that I should calm down and focus on it. He helped me to study for and he was a really big help. That is why older students can give you really good advice when you need it, and younger students too can give great advice. Therefor, older and younger students can teach each other viable things and give good advice to each other.
Schools should have a program that pairs older students with younger students, because they could give each other great advice and learn viable things from each other, And they could help each other with team work.
Also they could help each other with school work. Older students are sometimes wise when it comes to helping younger students, in other words they give great advice. Team work is something that we all need to learn about because its important to work with other people and hear their ideas. When you work with older students they will help you understand how to do the project or it could be the other way around it depends on the work that you are going to get or it depends on the students that you are working with. Older and younger students sometimes team up together for school work,
And they always help each other with it. Therefor, schools should have a program that Paris up older students with younger students. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
B9DABCFD687D | Being able to take online classes from home, is something that i would like for all schools to offer. Graduating high school is a need in this time and generation, for the reason being that most jobs ask for at least if you graduated high school. There is lots kids in school and not all have the time to go to school, some kids have to help there parents work for there not financially stable. I myself have gone through that where had gone to an alternative school so i could have more time to work in the day and come home to do some of my courses. Many people say education is the number one thing you should worried about and thats right, though some kids can't cause they have to help there family to provide in relation to paying some bills, put food on the table or picking up there siblings. providing school to be done at home will help the kids that have to go through all of this.
high school can be hard at times work is stressful some kids hate to having to get up early is hard for them so they miss out in some of class time. You keep missing some of class every day it can turn into hour's of class time that you missed, also can effect in the way you are learning having more time in your day to work can help you for there you are learning at your own paste, not the teachers. Some students that learn slow. takes time for them to learn one thing and by then the teacher is on the next unit there learning about. everyone has there own way that they learn better students that are fast learners wish that they can learn everything faster to get the class over with to go on to the next. those students can get classes online so they could do them at home to get the most credits they want this would also help them graduate faster.
Very few kids know what they want to work as for there career. Doing online classes can help these students graduate earlier to go the school they want to go to, or there career they want to lean on. This can help these students out in many ways. Going into a career path the earliest you can is a great thing you can get more time to learn and get good at to what you want to be doing like working become a master tech the younger you are the more experience you could have when you get older. The more chances you can get to become the best master tech at your location. Many students in high school learn in there own way also are smart in there own way graduating early can help students to become what they want to be the most. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
B9F6B348FC3A | In my experience I don't disagree, that Emerson thing that mastered will never get him grow.
First reason, all people get mastered and that stop them to grow in something that they tried to do,For example if you are doing like your own job, and you are the manager you will see all the product that you are selling is going down, and you job it's not going well, of curse, you will be in unless to try sell other product and your stored that will happened to you and you stored that you will fell terrible and you will you not valuable to continue in you job because you are so tager to see that you job is going down not going up.
Second reason, Mastered is like you are in favor of something and your friend fight to tell you that you are round with what are you trying to do, After your friend try to tell you that you was so round you undated that you was round, them you tried to do the thing right but, you are you get in mastered and that make you to not have other change to tried again, everyone are unless to try something that they already mastered and, something for example you are teenager and you are is school and you did a test and you get bad scored of curse you feel so bad and you will no tried to retake your test again that having mastered .
Third reason, being scared to try again something that you love and that you thing if you try again that will be a same way that you did the first time, but went you try again, you will have more experience because you will try to not get the same mistake that you got first time, and will have to look so careful to not get the same mistake because you have more experiences. we all can do the thing many time the thing is that you have to believe in you,
and you will look that you will grow not matter how hart and, how many time you get upset, you have to be positive and to be screed if already have mastered.
Conclusion,It's that you never give up at what are tried, not matter how many time or change you take you feel that you get in mastered you always will have other change to start and trust that you can believe that you can do it because that's all that you need to start again. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
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