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ABA60F0BD289 | How can you build self-esteem. self-esteem comes from achievement. Student's are confident when they have completed their work and their goals' has been reached. achieving work and goals build self-esteem because they learn how to have confidence, self- respect, and achieving goals.
When students have confidence is important because they can turn in their work with out thinking about getting a bad score, Students can put their best effort in their work and they have confidence they'll have a good score. when students have confident they want to participate more in class do class activities, Students having confidence is important because they can have a positive mindset and they have that confidants to teach other.
Students having self-respect is important because they learn how to respect them selves and others, when self-respecting they think about what they are going to say before they talk sometimes students didn't mean to say it in a wrong way do they make them selves look bad and others start making fun of them. when we have self-respect we learn how respect our decision how to talk with manners.
Setting up goals is important because you build off the skills you already know and getting better. when i was in art class i kept getting bad grades and i never thought that i was going get better at drawing, but I set myself a goal to get better at drawing go i started practicing everyday and started to build off my skills and eventually i get better at it. Now i love drawing with a Passion. when students set goals they can get better and achieve more then they can ever imagine they could. setting up goals and achieving is a good representation because it's showing them that they can achieve and do more than they could ever imagine
As you have read self-esteem is build off by effort, achieving goals and having self-respect is how you get better . only when we have self-esteem students learn better in classes because they will putting more effort on activities in school be more confident with answers and not be shy about getting it wrong students learn from studying or from their mistakes. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
ABBA50242CFA | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. That might a good idea for some students but not all. Today, many High Schoolers from the age of 15 to 18 have jobs. They work part time to help their parents pay for their phone bills, cars or something else. Sometimes they might want to work more, but school is 5 days a week, they have to do homework every night even on weekends. Going to work after school is very overwhelming. They get out at 9 or 10 depends on where they work, go home and do their homework, then go to bed probably late, and have to get up early the next morning. That goes on days after days. Many students can get stressed out easily. So I think attending classes online or video conferencing help lots of students who have jobs. Staying at home and study is still better than waking up and getting ready early in the morning to go to school. That might not be a big problem in summer or spring. But winter is the worst time of the year for students. The sun rises later than usually and sets earlier. It gets really cold and there is frozen ice on streets. Nobody wants to get up early and go to school or work when the sun hasn't even risen and frezzing weather outside. Of course they want to wrap around in their blankets and sleep in. But in the other hand, attending to school directly is better for some students. Leaning and teaching face to face is always easier than online. You could ask the teachers directly if you don't understand, and I think the teachers would be teaching and explaining in a better way face to face. Plus, you can meet new friends, socialize and participate in sports or any activities at school. So in the bottom line. I think it's better to combine both ways. The students can attend school everyday, except for snow days. They can take classes online since they can't make it to school. Cut the students some slack on some Fridays. They can stay home and attend classes online. Or only apply on seniors. Because it's their last year and they have lots of work to do. But in my opinion. Attending clases online or directly at school don't matter. What matters is that the students find their best ways to learn and relieve stress. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
ABBE700093F0 | A city council is debating the adoption of a 10 p. m. weekday and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers. If the curfew is adopted, teenagers on the streets after those hours would be breaking the law. Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble, or do they unfairly interfere in young people lives?
Curfew helps young kids to stay out of trouble because it can be dangerous. For example, if they just wording around at night they don't know what can happened like they can get kidnap, and be at a place at a wrong time. They can think it's cool but in reality it's not. If a police men stop or pull you over you can get in to trouble because they gonna ask if your parents know you out or if they know where you at and if you said no they gonna call you parents and ask them to come and get you.
Sometimes your parents can get worry if you not home. Kids want to meet up with there friends just to hang out but is it really worth it or to get in trouble knowing your friends ain't gonna have your back. Curfew keep teens from getting in trouble. Although curfew can be good but it shows that your parents can trust you. Night can be really dangerous because you can't see in the dark and you don't know what can be out there. There can be drunk drivers at night also.
Curfew is a law so if you go out late at night you would be breaking the law. Police man really do be canning this serious. All they want is kids to stay safe and be good also to listen to their parents. Teens think that meeting up with there friends at night is cool. But parents just want there kids to behave and listen so they won't get in serious trouble. Why lose your parent trust over some friends that ain't gonna talk to you later in life. Be smart on what side you try to be. Not everything is all about friends you gotta put your parents first then your friends that why them made a curfew.
Plus it the matter of respect for your parents.
Curfew actually helps teens from doing wrong things. Teens don't think that there parents gonna find out but when they get that call saying mom you gonna get nervous or scared because you dont't know what to say for being at late. Parents can be smart at times when they want to but they do be catching here kids in the act of sneaking out ! Teens really do have a choice by picking stay home or go out and have fun. People really care about this law. Who wanna see a kid walking alone without no parent around. Teens just need to sleep or play on there gaming systems . You can hang out with your friends during the day or have a sleep over . Whatever you can do to hang out with your friends but DON'T GO SNEKING OUT TO GO GET FOOD OR TO BE WITH YOUR GRILFRIEND! Just stay at home call up your friends or even your girlfriend so you won't put your self at a higher risk of getting in trouble.
Overall just stay out of trouble and have your parents trust. Don't do nothing stuiped. Stay at home make do homework or watch a movie just don't sneake out jsut to do stuff thats gonna get you in trouble. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
ABC59FCA6150 | In some schools think that attend classes at home is most better ;The fifty percent of the schools think that attend classes at home is not productivity. Some people might say that taking classes at home can't benefit students because when their need help or have some question any teachers can be there ,taking classes at home can benefit students because their can have more time to sleep and their don't need to take a bus or walk.
In the first place ,attend classes at home can't benefit students because when their need help or have some question any teachers can be there. For example , I have a cousin who take classes at home but he never know anything because no body can help him when he have a question. While, always I tell him that if he have a problem I can help him or another option is that he don't taking classes at home anymore. Also he don't make friends because he do not go to the schools. I choose this option because a lot of student waste their time taking classes at home. I am agree that attend classes at home not have benefit.
likewise, attend classes at home can benefit students because their can sleep more. In my case, if a have the opportunity to take classes at home i'm happy because I love sleep a lot. For example,the twenty-five of the student get classes at home because don't like to make a friends or their believe that their can do the work along. The classes start early so in this way they do not have to wake up early. Also, if people sleep more their can be more healthy this is the reason because student like to take classes at home to be more healthy. I choose this option because is important remember that many students want to sleep more or get extra time because their have a job and is hard to them do two thing at the same time .For this reason many student choose take classes at home.
In addition,attend classes at home can benefit because student don't need to take bus or walk. For example,some student do not have to take bus because are more near to the school. In my case, I have to walk from my home to my schools sixteenth minutes every single day. when winter come and is so cold outside it's not good to walk in this temperature. while , this is the reason because students take classes at home although sometime can't benefit. Another reasons is that some students have to take the public buses so is take classes at home don't have to take bus. I choose this reason because many people forget that many time is not easy for the students do that.
Finally,everything have advantage and disadvantage because some schools think that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home and some schools are disagree. Also some students work a lot so their can benefit with this opportunity. Although, attend classes at home is not the same thing like go to schools and receive help from teachers, students, etc. In addition, if some schools offer this opportunity have to think about it and look the best option. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
ABD38929777A | I'm disagree with it because cell phone can distortion to students, school may not be allow to use cell in calssroom, and they will lazy to do work.
First, Now a day many students are failing classes because most of the teacher allow to students use cell phone during they are teaching.
If students may allow to use cell phone then they can distortion by study, and their force can be in phone. When we keep use phone then we can't listen what teacher saying. For explain, last year in my histroy class we can allow to use phone so, when go to histroy class I alway usemy phone and i never listen to teacher.
I fail the class and sol because of use cell phone everyday.
School may not be allow to use cell phone in classroom because if school allow to use cell phone in classroom then students may not be able to learn anything.
If students are allow to use cell in school, then when students are doing testing they might be chage to chat on test.
Students can leave study, they gonna force on play phone.
Finally, When students have work in classroom they are so lazy to do it because they are busy to play game or use phone. In school we have lot of work to do, if teacher give us using phone then students might not do it. So, we have work then teacher sholud not give us using phone because lots of students are busy with phone or play game.
While, Many students are distorton by cell phone because they can't force on study. They think teacher give us to use phone so, we don't have to do anything and they don't do homework, classwork and study. That the mind reason school should not allow to use phone, it good sometime to use phone but not when we have work to do. | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
ABEA8B5724EF | The World We Live in
More than 4 billion people with different culture,different background and different mentality live in our planet Earth; and each person have their own way of life style. Naturally, we have to associate our self with others, to manage our way of living. It means life push us to open our doors and see different people quality and life style. Emerson's statement " To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment." In my opinion, this is wrong. Sometimes, we have to allow our self and live other people lives. It means we have to change our face mask everyday to be a head of somebody. this will help us to avoid conflicts, to accomplish our personal goals and to live in any environment.
Sometimes, I fell like we should change the name " world " to " different." It explain the meaning a lot more. our world is different. every living matter have their own characters and identity. Birds can fly but lions can't. Plants, they can't move but we can. This can show us how our world is divided in many ways. This is leading us to conflicts and fights in every aspects. For example, we can see a political conflict between Donald Tranp and the Democrat. Personally I don,t agree with Donald Tranp's ideas and terms. But if my community agrees and supports Tranp's ideas, It is mush easier if I put a new a mask in my face and put a fake smile on top of it and pertained that i am on same track like them witch is supporting Donald Tranp. It will help to avoid conflicts between me and my community.
Every strong person uses methods to accomplish their drams and goals. focusing is one of the beast way a person use it to be on the top of everybody. strong person fight to win and to be number one no matter what the situation is. Giving up is the beget enemy in their life. Not being somebody else cannot be the reason to give up in a dream. For example, If your goal is to be number one fighter, you have to fight first. Even if you have a lover personality. If you want to be a fighter you have to fight. thats the reality. You can't love some one and punch them in the face at the time. you have to switch up to get to your dreams ( to being number one fighter). American secrete service agents go to Afghanistan to catch terrorist. They are not Muslims but they have to dress up like Muslim and learn their language and culture just to make their country safe from terrorist. Being somebody else help them to achieve there goals.
I believe, becoming somebody else, can help you to learn about that someone personality.
This can help you to adapt the behavior of that person, witch can help you to establish a good relationship. For example, I am originally from Ethiopia living in the US. Sometimes I have to act like American just to establish a good environment around me. Thanksgiving is a well know holly day in American culture . But we dont celebrate it in Ethiopia. Just to respect for my community, i celebrate thanks giving with fake smile with others just to create a good environment in my area.
In my conclusion , sometimes we should be somebody else to live in our divided society. This can also solve our conflicts , helps us to accomplish our goals and to be live in any environment. I believe we have to be logic and see the other side. This could be the smartest way to live our life with our crazy the society . | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
ABF21C9A2160 | Are we the future.? Ralph Waldo Enderson said." To be yourself in a world that is costantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishement." I agree with the statement of Enderson. May be some people will disagree with me. So I think is hard to be yourself in a world that is constantly changing because technology and social norms.
First the new inventes and advances in technology has brote new changes to our lives. We live in a world that is sorrounded by new advances in technogy. This has become essential and indispensable to preform our daily activities. For example the internet has become very important tool and so essential that we can't stay with out internet for even a day. We costantly surfing the social media. even if we love and hate social media we are always conected. We want to know what others think about us. With out knowing we fall in a new world call internet and we make chages just to be acepted, love even hate by othes.
Second we are part of a big sociaty. We born, grow up and died in a sociaty that has norms that we fallow. This norms sometime are written norms that are laws and if we brake this laws the sociaty can punish and we face consequences. Some norms are just unwriten norms that we fallow in our daily life. This norms can restrict our selve expretion and can stop us for doing what we want. So to fit and be aceted we fallow the social norms. For example if we go to school we must fallow thier rules to be able to get in school. We can't just walk in with a sexy litle dress and havy make up. The norms of the school are make for your to fallow the dress code. Even if you feel like the dress code restrict your personality and selve expretion. this norms are make for everyboby to mantain a the order and balance.
In conclution I must said that I agree with Enderson's quote " to be yourself in a world that is costantly trying to make your something else is the greatest accomplishement." therefore we emgrace new technology and follow social norms to keep the balance and maintain the order. We are part of a change together we can achieve new ideas and build a better sociaty.
So we can leave a better future for our childrens. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
ABFEE879153D | I believe that graduating high school in three years is the best option out there, the reason why i support this statement is because, i myself i'm graduating early the reason why i decided to this was because, i felt like i was too mature for highschool and i felt like i could do more things that highscool will limit me from doing. So many students see high school as an embergo, high school literally takes four years that alot of time, we could be out there gaining expreinces from being in the workforce and actually studying what we want to do, i also feel like highschool don't really focus on what the students actually want to do, we take classes that we won't even need after high school. Ok let look at it this way, when we take history classes in highschool are kids really going to remember what was George Washington favorite food? or when did the civil war began? yes i know it can be important for us to know our history but we should'nt be taking it for four years non-stop. For example let take a look at bill gates he was a smart kid in highschool, he also use to sneak to the college libary to do his work, because he felt like high school didn't offer him the amount of knowledge he needed so he decided to drop out of high school, and has you can see his on of the top billionairs in the World. What if there is a kid like that in highschool and he/she felt like highschool is not giving him the amount of knowledge he needed and he wants to graduate early but he can't do that because, were required to take four years of everything, and it's totally not fair. When i decided to graduate early, both my counselors and teachers where discouraging me that i should'nt do it, that colleges frown at those type of stuff and all that, but they did'nt know that i already made up my mind and i felt like i was ready to take on the world all by myself without the help of my parents. In conclusion i think three years of highschool should be encouraged alot in highschool, so kids can go out there and explore and live their dreams and actually study what they want to study. And they should'nt really make students take boring courses like history for four years of high shool non stop. I'm very happy to say that i'm class of 2020!! instead of 2021, And i'm very happy that i took that road. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
AC0AAA109FA6 | They should require to perform community service because why will take time from my friend for community service. It will not take time from you guy just by doing that community service because it must take some time to learn a community service by telling are principal that we could do the community service. For that he could believes on us that we could do community service like other people from other elementary school. the principal said, that the community service will be due by in two week but we are go to perform the community service inside the GYM for all the students could hear us and see us said, are community service | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
AC1F60D0F85D | I believe people who value Self-reliance should make their own decision, because they know what decision they want to make, but
Sometimes you need to seek guidance from experts opinions about life's important matter, because not everything you think its right its going to be right.
Its also not a bad thing if you chose your own idea or if you seek guidance for the information, if you do both either one is right in my opinion. I think that if you really want to know about life's important value you need to either ask a guidance from expert that know all of the information about life's important matters or if you know the right information you will be fine but its also a great idea to check with experts to make sure that the information you know it's correct or to learn more about it.
In Life you will not know some things thats why another great idea is that you seek guidance expert that knows about life's important matter. Most time time people can be positive that they know about life's important matter and they dont need to seek help and that completely normal .
A personal story that i want to share is that most time i may think that i know everything about life's important matters.
If i sometimes dont go anywhere to seek guidance from expert because Im positive of the things i know, but also they are times where i do need to seek guidance experts about life's important matter and in my personal opinion that helps too when i need the help.
Seeking guidance from expert can help anyone know more about useful information about Life's important matter and much more information. While if you dont seek guidance you won't be able to learn anything about life's important matter.
When you know some information is also good to check with an expert who knows and can give you more information on the topic life's important matter its useful to know information to for the nearest future and also you can teach others who need the information.
Making a decision is not a bad idea neither is seeking for guidance from expert about life's important matters. You can always learn new things if you ask for help and you can learn more about life's important matter.
If you know your facts that can also be helpful and you dont need to go seek guidance expert about it. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
AC3111702C95 | First impressions are always important and can really effect how you are looked at but they are not impossible to change. They impact whether you get the job, make that friend or even if you get service if you are somewhere. I believe that first impressions are not impossible to change, they are hard but not impossible. Firstly, because someone could always forget, people can change, and you could receive a second chance to redeem yourself.
I have met people a second time that either I had a bad first impression with or they did and we forgot all about it. When you forget about somebody, the first impression with obviously not matter. You will forgive and forget. Also when I say the word "forget," I do not mean completely lose all knowledge of the other person, but I mean maybe you did not care or maybe the first impression was not terrible that it was easy to block from your memory.
I have changed and many people in my life have also changed. Your first impression or somebody else's first impression might change if you meet them again in five to ten years. Over a period of time if let's say somebody who had a bad job interview wants to change and really wants the job, they will change and they will ask for another opportunity. Even if you have a bad encounter with someone the five times you have met them, your opinion about them will change with just one good impression. People change and when they do, so do impressions.
Second chances are also very important with impressions. Redeeming themselves is something a lot of people tend to do. Chances are not hard to ask for, and when making it up to somebody for a bad impression, you need to make it count. I have asked several people for second chances to redeem myself for bad impressions and now, we are friends. When I first applied to my first job, I was late to my interview and that is why I did not get the job. Then I asked my boss for a second chance, he gave it to me and now I have an amazing job.
In conclusion, no, first impressions are not impossible to change because there is forgetful people, people change and second chances exist. It is not hard to be on your best behavior or to be well dressed when meeting someone new, especially if they are of higher authority. First impressions are not impossible but are difficult to change, that is why it is good to try and make a good first impression to save you from trouble. | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
AC5D4FAD6FDA | Imagine a classroom fill with students using their cellphones. What do you think they are really using their cellphones for? Some students do not really use their cellphones for educational purposes but use it as an excuse to wonder off and get distracted with it. Students should not be granted permission by any teacher to use their cellphones in class, it is a mistake.
A major distraction now a days is social media. Instagram,Snapchat, and Youtube have impacted the lastest generations. When teacher allow their student to use their phones most of them at times just login into instagram or snapchat. It can easily be proven by the amount of students that come after class and tell their teacher they could not complete their classwork. Social media can be a weapon in and out of school , it will distract students from their work.
Social media isn't the only distraction a student can have from completing class work. I've notice that student at my high school download these new games on their cellphones. When a teacher of mine tells us to pull out our cellphones to do some research, I see more than half the class flip their phones and start to play this new game called Fortnite. This game is very addictive that those students who decided to play when asked to do research, their grades dropped straight down to a failing grade. This is why allowing students to use their cellphones can be a mistake,they are failing their courses.
Texting you're friends during class is the last distraction for a student. Students during class might've been waiting for so long to text their freinds back. Most of the times it's really not more of a "hey" or "how are you doing?". Students really have long conversations and get carried along that they forget what they were asked to use their cellphones for. High schoolers are always just on their phones texting one another and wait until last minute or the last day a assignment is due. Texting can be the worst distraction for students and this is why they should not be allowed to use cellphones for "educational purposes".
In conclusion, schools should prohibit teacher granting permission to student to use cellphones during class. Cellphones can be distracted and it will allow many students to fail courses or not complete asssignments. Students spend more time on social media , games , and texting their friends more than doing homesworks or even reading a book. | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 |
AC6348A7ECB4 | SOME SCHOOLS OFFER DISTANCE LEARNING AS AN OPTION FOR STUDENTS TO ATTEND
CLASSES FROM HOME BY WAY OF ONLINE OR VIDEO CONFERENCING. DO YOU THINK
STUDENTS WOULD BENEFIT FROM BEING ABLE TO ATTEND CLASSES FROM HOME:
Some schools offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from home by online or video conferencing. Parents do not want their children to attend classes from home. Students will not get much benefits, whoever if they live in a place that is far away from school or they can't attend school for any reason then its has benefits. I'm not agree that students should attend classes from home because students can have stress, students can not pay attention very well, and the most important fact is that it will affect on students' grades.
The first reason is that the students can get stressed everyone time whenever they attend the class online because i know that its not easy to take classes online. students have to pay more attention. They can not understand very well by online or on video conference. It will be hard for students to learn or to understand their lesson online. Students will be stressed out because no one will be there to help them, not any teacher and either any friend (any other student).
The second reason why students should not take classes at home is that they will not able to pay attention by taking online classes. it does not feel like the school environment. students will spent more time on their school. At least in schools we pay more attention than doing our homework at home, because we mostly spend our time on our devices (cell phone) and on the television by watching episodes, cartoon movies, other movies, and etc.
The third reason is that it also affect on students grades and in the future they can not attend their favorite college. They won't able to understand the lesson, they will get bad grades in all subjects. It is so important to attend the classes at school, then you will know what is going on. students can ask teachers if they are having problems in their lesson. teachers can help them during school timing or after school. It will be easy for students to understand or to pay attention and they can get good grades too in all their subjects.
Students should not take classes at home. It will affect on their grades because they will not able to pay attention, they will get stressed out because if student need help, no one will be there to help them for their studies or their lessons, and it will be hard to pay attention at house by doing online studies. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
AC692F322516 | I personally disagree using cell phones in classroom, because students will not get the education they need. Students can go on other pages without teachers knowing like looking up something that they are not suppose to. It also can distract others focusing on their work, or studying for a test. It may cause an issue for teachers for allowing students using their cell phones in the classroom. Students using their cell phones can lose focus on the work that is given.
Cell phones can cause problems in the classrooms; while students are doing their own work and can not use a cellular device, while taking a test. Using any cellular device while doing any work or taking a test can get into problems by the teacher and it counts as cheating. Students can also lose their cell phones during class or losing it while going to the restroom. Students can get in trouble by other teachers using it in their classroom, can get in trouble for using it while walking, or hitting someone by accident or making someone fall. Students do not see where they are going to doing around them.
Using cellular devices will not help students learn the materials that is given. Students can get distracted on the work that is given to them and not attend to do it. Students need the education that the teachers has provided for them. So, students need to stay focus on the work and stay on task on the class work, students can genially have their cellular device off ,so is does not keep them from learning. Using cellular device can effects students thinking on a subject in class.
Teachers may not know what students are doing, on their cellular device in the classroom. It can cause problems for students if they are not using their cellular device properly in class. Teachers do not know if students are saying inappropriate comments to others students. Students can also send inappropriate images among other students.
Although, using the cellular device is not the best device for doing work or studying on a subject, that they have to do. Provided the knowledge that is given to students and stay on task when is need that way, it helps you not to get lost, but it also can provide students to learn and not to use their phones. More students lose track on time and whats around them. Using cellular devices can stop you from not doing the job quicker. It can slow the work and lesson that is given to them. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
AC7AB280A93C | Students won't benefit from being able to attend school from home. Students will slack and become less responsible if they are home school.
Students tend to postpone work and project since there isn't a teacher physically in front of them constantly reminding them "do your work" or "heads up this assignment is due next week."
Although some may say students benefit more being home schooled they won't because they will get comfortable. Students will have the sense that they can do the work whenever they want , so therefore they won't complete the assignment. Students will later find all the amount of assignments that have to be complete will increase the student will feel overwhelmed then later fail, quit , and drop out.
School prepares you for the real world. They take in consideration attendance and responsibility. For instance a job as well requires these characteristics. If your home school your not training yourself or the mindset to adjust to being responsible. Home school will make someone ,less responsible since they got into the habit of being comfortable and not responsible.
In conclusion students won't benefit from being able to attend school from home. Students will slack and become less responsible. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
AC8331539332 | "Do we choose our own character traits, or our character formed by influences beyond our control?" I think you should be you own character because not everyone has good intention in this world, and most people love seeing other people at their lowest just so they can feel good about themselves, or be proud of themselves so that they prove something and they can say that they're more successful than you. That's exactly why you shouldn't trust everybody thats around you. Its okay to communicate or socialize with people every now and then but don't put your 100% trust in them because it's always that one person that you wouldn't expect to betray you and really will. People are good at hiding their true colors. You shouldn't let people influence you in any type of way, be yourself and have confidence in what you want to be in life, after all its you life not theirs. For example, if your parents wants you to be something you dont want to be, don't to it because again its your life not theirs. I understand that that's you parents but live your life and just have faith and trust yourself.
You shouldn't be acting like someone your not, a lot of people act certain ways or try to be someone they're, usually in a relationship because they are scared that the person they're with is not gonna like who they really are, or they might be ashamed because they think that he/she might judge them if they really show who they really are, but honestly why be with that someone if they can't accept who you are? Shouldn't you question yourself, why are you even with that person in the first place, if your even thinking that they "might" judge you in any type of way. Sometimes its okay to think though just take a minute out of your day and think and you can actually realize a lot of stuff about people and especially how they're acting towards you. That's why I don't let people influence me in any way because you never know what that person's intentions. be your own person and don't ever be someone your're not, and you should never change for someone just cause they don't like you for who you are, your friends and your family should accept who you are and respect your decision. Sometimes it takes time to see who's really there for you but one day you are gone see who are really there and support you in every step. For example, if your friend don't respect your decision making to something that you wanna do then you should know or question, are they really friends or are they really there for me? because people come and go.
My point in all of this is just be yourself, trust yourself, have confidence what you wanna be and don't let somebody take control in your life or don't get influenced by people that don't have good intentions in you, basically make the right decision. Don't try to be perfect for somebody else's, if you wanna do that then do it don't do it for somebody else, do it cause you wanna do it.
But, I agree that you should be your own character , because you can't trust everybody or expect everybody to have good intentions in you, do something for yourself not cause she/he wants you to do it. Don't try to act or be somebody that you're not, show who you really are and your true color because that's how you really know who is there for you and who is just faking to support you because they want to see you at your lowest. It takes time for other people to open their eyes but when they do they will realize a lot of stuff going on. Be yourself and don't let nobody change you in any way, be unique. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
AC9719A6A375 | is setting a good example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people i agree that setting a good example by your behavior is the best way to influence people when giving a good example your trying to influence and direct the people so you must have a good behavior in order for them to be persuaded, you must also have good details to provide to the people or your clients,and good examples can guide you to next step or level.
when setting a good example for other people you want them to be to be persuaded, and to follow the example. so you must have a good attitude and a good behavior. when providing a information to other people you have to make sure that what your saying make sense and its accurate. i have a little brother that wants to play basketball just like me, every game i have he come and watches me play, the moves he see me do in the game, if he likes it hes gonna tell me and when i get home i show him the examples on how to do those specific moves. when you show good examples people will folow and will be pass those examples down to somone else.
good examples can guide you, to the next step or level. when i'm taking a test at school, it always begins with a three question example and it lets me know what i am going to be dealing with, so when I take the test i know what i am going to be expecting on the test ,and i am also gonna know what to do on the test. examples can help a lot of people succeed. when your working on any school work or classwork it always starts with an examples on how to show you how to answer the problems and do it. little examples can provide people with a lot of information. if you pay attention to the examples it can really help you in the future. some lawyers use examples when talking to a judge in court to help them understand or to persuade them.
when providing information to other people you want to make sure your attitude and behavior is on point in order for them to listen. my parents sometimes have trouble using technology so when they need help i'm ready to show them examples on what they are having trouble on, they know they can always count on me,and that is the type of behavior if they ever need any help. a lot of people doesnt tolerate poor behavior. when my English teacher is giving the class an example on what we are going to do later that day she makes sure that each and one of his understands what we are doing before she moves on. the source that your providing you have to make sure it actually or if it can other people out.
although some people may say giving a example with your own behavior may not work for a lot of people. another way you can show an example, is by showing them in person. I sometimes have trouble making or creating something so i got to watch someone else do it in order for me to do it. showing direction to people in person will make it somewhat easier for the the person to understand,instead of just telling them. you can influence other upon your action and they might follow id your attitude is good. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
ACA08DBF39EE | In my opinion, the students tanking to attend classes from home, by way of oline or video conferencing. I think the students not have benefit from being able to attent classes from home.
First, the students has more distraction in home; with vedeo play, and othe oction, more students work a time with taking a class, more with have a classes in distance, the schools need a tanking a other options. With lern in school the students are more specific learn, with a have a teacher opposite the student to learnig more specific, when she tanking the classes to has a more effective for a students.
Second, I hink this option for learning offer the class in distance wich a attend classes from home; not is a good option for example: in my house a have three brothers, and one sister, I think is distraction wich learning in home.
In finally; with reason with not is good idea the learning a distance the school, I think is more elementary, basic to taking the video conferencing online, because; learning more in the watch the vedeo conference, with online; is more effective memorize with the morning in not in evening, the students have forceful in the morning, but no think this is a good option for a students, not have a good benefit from being able to attend classes from home.
Conclucion; the students not taking the classes from the house or distance learning, but students learning more when she go to the schools. The parents thinks exactly whit me, because is most effective taking the classes in the schools, in not a distance the schols. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
ACA1A45EE438 | I strongly disagree with extending the school days. Longer school days can have a great impact on students. It also makes class hours long. Most students likes to have short classes. Longer school days can make students, exhausted, have less free time, and hate school. Longer school days will not make students happy.
Longer school days can make students exhausted. Longer school day causes the classes to be longer. Which most students get tired of being in the same class for a long time. Students get tired of doing a lot of work in class which make them want to do less work. Students will be exhausted which will make them not go outside.
By extending school days students will not have free time. Most students like to spend time with their family and friends. However, longer school days can take that privilege away. Longer school days can take away students free time. Most of the year it can get dark outside early, and students won't be able to go outside after they come from school. Since students won't have enough free time to go outside they will hate going to school.
Students will hate going to school when there is longer school days. Because students like to have less class time. Also students would want to do less work. Students wouldn't want to be in their least favorite class for a long time. If the school hours get longer students would not want to come to school. Also some students would skip the classes they didn't like.
By adding hours to the school days students will be, tired, they won't be able to have free time, and they will not want to be at school. Students will hate school if the hours get longer. Students will not enjoy school. Also classes would have a lot of work in one day which would make them not want to come to school. In conclusion there should not be one and a half hour added to school days. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
ACABA85B131B | Dear Manager,
Did u know that many schools do not have local companies and organization that allow students' to explore certain profession?
I believe that they should have local companies and organization because when work as a teacher, the teacher can help students, have fun with students, and solve problems.
When you work as a teacher, the teacher can help you with anything. Like for example: When you are stuck with any of your assignment ,or doing a project, the teacher can help you with any of your assignment, or a project. However, some teachers do not help with students because the students won't get it, or learn anything. When a student needs help, go ask the teacher for help because when u don't ask, then you won't get help by the teacher. And that it is important to ask the teacher for help because when u ask for help, the teacher won't help you because you didn't ask for help.
When you work as a teacher, it needs to be fun because the student can not be bored and that they need to do fun activity like for example: Like going outside and play fun activity playing educational games that contain subjects like Math, Science, Reading, or History ,or like playing Soccer,Football, and Basketball and do more fun so that the students can not be bored. And that it is important to have fun and instead of being bored and not doing anything in school.
When you work as a teacher, the teacher need to solve problems. Because a student might have bad situation, or might have a ruff day. And so the teacher needs to talk to the student who's having a bad day. Like for example: If a student is having a bad day or a bad situation, the student need to ask the teacher to help with this situation or a problem that u have that is going on. And that it is important because the teacher can help you with anything. Teachers are important because they can solve problems that u have or question that you have so you can tell the teacher about it. And that the students need to tell the truth because when your lying, the teacher won't help you and your getting yourself in trouble, and making your situation more harder and more difficult to yourself.
Therefore, working as a teacher is important because the teacher can help students, have fun with the students, and solving situation or a problem. And it is important to work as a teacher, at the same time it is hard to handle with the students. Consequently, a teacher can handle anything, or any problem that you have, or having a ruff day and you need to talk with someone, or a teacher. And that many school don't have local conpanies and organization that allows students to explore certain profession. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
ACAE11A04F63 | It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. I agree with this statement because it gives a perspective of how you are in your life, demonstrate how your personality is, and shows your live conditions.
It gives a perspective of how you are in your life because it shows the type of person you are, if you are irresponsible person or a bad person, and the manner of take the problems that came forward in your life. For example, if you have a job and you are constantly absent for work, it gives a bad impression because it demonstrate you are irresponsible, and the people can think bad things about you.
Demonstrate how your personality is because it shows how you can be with the people and demonstrate how you really are. For example, if you are honest and kindness with the people, they can trust you and have possitive thoughts about you.
Shows your live conditions because it demonstrate if you have personal cleanliness, if you care of your self etc. For example, if you go for a interview for apply in a job, and you not take a bath everyday, they would have a bad impression of you and maybe they not accept you in the job, and that led to the people bad comments about you.
Clearly, the prompt is correct because is how you shows how you are in your life, how is your personality, and your live conditions. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
ACB4771E367E | Imagine living an outgoing life or a lazy life. It's like talking about a traveler and a video game addict. In my opinion I think we do accomplish more if we are always doing something because when you are out doing something you gain experience, also when your out doing something you tend to meet new people, even though some would argue that living a inactivity life also serves a purpose because inactivity allows you to live a life closer with your family.
First when your out doing something you gain experience. In my opinion when your constantly out you gain social experience. For example you wont be as shy to speak to others, and you wont be awkward when socializing. Also, when your out you are traveling and getting to understand and appreciate many different cultures around the world. Another example you get a closer look into the lives of everyone around the world and allows you to help them get through any hurdles. These are some reasons on why gaining experience and understanding others is important.
Also when your out doing something you meet new people. For example your always talking to people when your out so you tend on making new friends. When your traveling and in need of a place to stay, by making new friends around the world you are possibly covered and dont have to spend a dime on a hotel. Another example when your out doing something you can possibly meet the right one, future (Husband/Wife). I've seen many stories of people traveling doing something and they end up falling in love with someone. This is why meeting new people by doing something is a good thing.
Some would argue that living an inactivity life serves purpose. For example you get to sit around and just hang out. Also you can make friends and do many things through the online world. Sure all these things are good you get to have a different form of fun. However you're just being plain lazy and choosing the simple way of living. Also once you have to go out into the real world you'll most likely be awkward and shy. This is why being inactive can be some what good but also bad.
In conclusion being able to travel and get to understand different cultures also gain experience is super fun. Also having friends from all around the world is just so cool and brings many different kinds of stories to the table. Even though living an inactivity life has it's flaws it also has it's pros theres so many different opportunities but your not living a fulfilled life. In my opinion we do accomplish a lot more in life being active and going out doing something than being at home being lazy not doing anything. This is everything on why I think we accomplish more by being active. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
ACC830989D7A | We all live with purpose, finding a nice job, having a big house, or traveling all over the world. Most of us are very busy to achieve our goals in life. Thomas Jefferson wrote, "
Determine never to be idle ... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." We accomplish more if we are always doing something.
Deligence leads us to a road of success. For example, The successful people are always willing to spend times and put efforts in their work. In history, a lot of leaders showed us that success comes from keeping doing and trying things over and over to make it what it is today.
When we become deligent, we spend our time doing meaningful things. We become more efficient and tend to be more responsible for our lifes, it pushes us forward to our destinations in a good way.
Experiencing lets us learn more. For example, We learn from books and documentaries about what other people have experienced or doing different things by ourselves then gain perspectives from it. Those things make us talented and gives us guides about how things might be when we grow up. It also gives us advantages when we encounter difficult things and try to deal with it. The more we experience, the more valuable and proficent we will be.
While some people believe that we accomplish more if we are always doing something. Other argue that inactivity also serve a purpose, for example, They say that we only live once, why give ourselves such hardtimes and do not do things that make us feel comfortable and happy. Although this may be true, it will just makes us lazy and does not give our lifes meanings and purposes.
We will accomplish more if we are always doing somthings. Deligence makes us have a positive attitude to put efforts in our works, we can become more responsible for ourselves. It shows us the passions. The more we experience, the more successful we will become. Gaining perspectives makes us be aware of what we can do in the future. we should keep doing things and learning knowledges for the better us. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
ACE1BE41A8E0 | One of the most famous quote by Thomas Jefferson is, " Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." He believes that there is so much that can be done if we are always doing something because if you are doing something all the time even if it's little it can be done but may take time. I believe we accomplish more if we are always doing something for example if you don't practice everyday then you won't get better at soccer. There is a lot of things that need be done in our country. One of the most important thing is racism , if we do something about that everyday to end racism.
If you are always doing something then you will get a lot done. When your building a house you are always doing something to it but if you stop then it will more time to build. I always believed that i can do a lot if i'm doing something all the time. When i was little i use to make Lego's i would always build them, i was always doing something to them. My mom always told if i'm building them everyday i could get done fast. I prepare for school the same way when i have big projects. When i have big projects i tend to freak out. My mom tells to just break it down and do little bit of everyday. When i do that i get my projects done fast.
If you don't practice everyday then yo won't get better at soccer. If you want to be professional soccer you will have to work everyday. When you don't do that you won't get any better because you have to train everyday so you can be great at soccer. I use to play soccer 2 years ago and i wasn't practicing everyday so i did't get any better. My dream was to be a soccer player but i wasn't training everyday so i didn't get where i wanted too. Everyone has dream to be something in order be that you have to do something everyday to reach your dream. Most people don't make their dreams because they don't do the little things that matter everyday.
There is a lot that need to done in our country. One of the most important thing is racism. I believe we can end racism by doing something about it everyday. One of the most important things in this country is racism because a lot people are getting killed by it. Police officer shooting black men that didn't do anything. That causes people that have been killed family's pain. I think racism needs to end as soon as possible. A lot white police men are shooting black men and are not getting anything for it. I think they should at least get some punishment because it's not fair to the people who died family's. I believe this could be fixed if we all come together and do something about it everyday.
As you have read we accomplish more when we are always doing something. Only when we do something you accomplish more. By doing something everyday you can accomplish your dreams and get your work done. The world would be in better place if we everyone did something to make the world more cleaner and safe. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
ACE3E472041C | Does taking classes from home benefit students.
People might said that,taking classes from home is a bad idea, that is not useful that kids don't learn and they do nothing. In case other people will said that it benefit kids , that keep them safe and I will agree by saying that taking classes from home benefits kids.
Well I think that parents, who decided that their kids need to take classes online is for one of many reasons. for example , I will provided you three reasons why
I think kids do home classes and it does benefits them and yes they learn from it .
Parents are famous and they cant send their kids to a regular school,kids might be in danger and they can attend school because of that or it might be because they have any medical condition.
First reason why students take classes from home is probably because their parents are famous people and they know that, if they send their kid to any school, people will be chasing them,asking for pictures all the time or may be telling them bad stuff. Parents know that in that situation kids are going to be frustrated about it, sad, angry and defently they will not be able to concentrated at school. It will be hard for them to be free and enjoy school. For example on of my friends he is very famous in my country and also in here wherever he goes people is always chasing him, hi has a kid that is 6 .years old but he said that the hardest part is when the little boy goes out all of these people get to him and he gets scared. That's why he said that he decided to pay for home classes, and they prefer their kids to take classes at home. Kids will feel free and no body will be making them feel uncomfortable.
Second reason it could be because the life of any kid can be in danger and the parent of the kid and also any school will know it. They know that if any kid, that is been treated lets said by any organization, attends to school people will try to harm him or it can become a bigger problem. Because the school will defently knows that if they received that kid at school they will be putting the life of many other kids at school in risk and they will not take that change. Of course parents are not going to allow that their kids to be harm or kill. That's why the school or parents proffered to have their kid to take his/her classes from home he/she will be safe and other people too, the kid will get a really good benefit from it because he will learn and he will be safe and other people will be too.
Last reason why students get benefits from taking classes at home is probably because they have any medical condition and it's hard for them to attend any school. They will feel shame,afraid,scared and they will be thinking that everyone at school is going to make fun of He/She, that they will bully Him/Her and of course as I have said before parents will never for any reason are going to let their kids to be unhappy to feel bad to feel frustrated and feel that no body love them that's why they let their ids stay at home and take classes from it so that way they learn and no body will harm them make they feel worthless.
in conclusion,parents who made the decision to let their kids stay at home and take classes from home they make one of the biggest and hardest decisions in life. Because they know that kids will be safe nobody will hurt them, be hunting them , no body will hurt them, tell them mean stuff. They will not feel embarrassed to let people see them, Parents know that defently is not going to be the same that it will not be the same as if he was listening directly to his teacher and getting his note but they know that at least his kids are going to be safe and they will learn to they will still get benefits from it.
When you want the best for your kids and you love them more that life itself, you do what you got to do if that means to pay for his classes in other to keep them safe,and we all know that people might talk and told you that doing home classes isn't going to help you. But you know that is not true, you got to keep working working hard because sometimes students come to school, but they do nothing. What they do is get in problems fight, with other classmates or eventhey fight whith their teachers,they used drugs at school but. If you know your kid is at home working and you see that he wants to learn the don't listen to the rest of the people. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
ACEDBB3C81A0 | They say some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by a way of online or video conferencing. I agree that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home, because some students rather attend to a class at home than at the school so they can focus more; However, some students suffer from bullying, and they rather stay at home and study than attend to school and get bullied again and again. Attend to school at home is a different type of learning is at your own place you got peace.
Attend to school at home is different when you talk about focus, at home, you at your own place quiet, you don't have people around you to stop you or distract you. One day at high school I was trying to focus for a test retake but I coudn't because my friend kept distracting me and that made fail my retake. If I was at home learning in peace without distractions maybe I would pass the test. The point is that studying at home is quiet and calm what can help you successfully at your school grades.
One of the biggest reasons students attend to classes at home is due to bulllying every high school students suffer from bullying whats is wrong but we can't change people we got sometimes you got to change your strategy so you can live a healthy life, thats why some students decide instead of getting bullied every day attend to school at home. I had a problem at freshman year that i've got bullied every time because of how skinny I was and I was kind sad, all my grades went down and I didn't knew what to do;Therefore, if I decided to attend school at home I woudn't have to face this problem every school day. In this case being abble to attend school at home helps a lot of students.
Allthrough, attend school at home got some issues too, when you attend school at home you don't socialize, you don't get to know a lot people, One of my favorite soccer player once said that "the only thing that attending school at home does not help is at socializing, meeting new people." that's of the reason not a lot people attend school at home, because they like to meet new friends, being together with people that you like.
Therefore, students benefit from being able to attend classes at home, you can focus more and you is a option that you can take if you have any obstacle in your way at school such as bullying or something like that, nowadays is more common to see people taking online classes. All the schools should have online classes that you can take at home so every student can study the way they want to study;Therefore, students benefit by being able to attend classes at home. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
AD095F1ADE0A | Students idea to change the school menu would benefit them a lot. This is going to help students a lot,they will focused more at school. I think it is a good idea to change to a new,healthier school lunch menu.
First of all,if students received healthier lunch, its going to help them a lot. For example, it would made students to be on task and be focused in their classes. The will help students to get good grades and to keep students active in all their classes. Changing school lunch menu will have a big impact in students, more people will start to get food and its going to help their brain to think more.
My second reason is students prefer good food than healthier food the taste nasty. In addition, mostly all students would prefer to eat regular food the is healthier. However,it doesn't have nothing to do with your body if you don't want to be fat because of the food you received, thats because you don't care about your body. Students will have to start worrying about their body not about the food they eat.
My last reason is about the benefits of receiving healthier school menu at school. For example, students will enjoy more their lunch. students would choose what to eat and students would have time to interact with theirs friends while they eat their lunch.
In conclusion, i think is a good idea for school to change the lunch menu. Students are going to focused more and students would be on task in school. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
AD097EE6B6D7 | Always doing something it's better than doing nothing.
staying in the same place where you star is better; however, doing something is always better.
it is better to always do something to accomplish what we want because it give us the best opportunities, it gives us a good future, and it can help us to make good choices.
First, it is better to always do something to accomplish what we want because it gives us more opportunities. we can have a job were we can earn a lot money to support your family .we can have the car that we want because we work to get the car. we can have a house for us. It is better to always do something to accomplish what we want because it give us more opportunities.
Next, it is better to always do something to accomplish what we want because it give us a good future. We can have a good future because we will know how to deal with adult problems. In our future we can earn a lot of money because we will know how to work hard to earn that money. We can have a house were it can be all my family. It is better to always do something to accomplish what we want because it give us a good future.
Finally, it is better to always do something to accomplish what you want because it helps us to make choices. we can choose the best career that we know it's going to help us in the future. If someone knows that he want to be a engineer he needs to take a career were he can learn everything about enginnering. We can choose what kind of job it's fore us. It is better to always do something to accomplish what we want becauase it help us to make good choices.
In conclusion, it is better to always do something to accomplish what we want because it give us the best opportunities, it gives us a good future, and it can help us to make good choices. we can have a job were we can earn a lot money to support your family. We can have a good future because we will know how to deal with adult problems. If someone knows that he want to be a engineer he needs to take a career were he can learn everything about enginnering. always do something it's better. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
AD175892EC1C | Attending school and Attending online classes.
Attending classes from home by the way of online or video conferencing is not a really smart idea. You can learn better by making eye contact, and asking questions from the teacher rather, than just trying to learn online. Education is one of the most important things in our life that we can't continue it in a good way by attending online classes. Attending online classes might look a smart idea for some learners because they might be able to stay home, and study, but there is absolutely a reason that we build schools. Students might get benifts by attending online classes, but not as they will by going to school. Attending school instead of attending online classes have a lot of benefits that can change an idea of attending online classes.
Attending school can give us a freindly character by being able to talk in front of a group of people. When we attend school, we start talking, and communicating with people by the time we get in the bus. We can find freinds, and get help from them when we need. We will be able to ask any question from the teacher at any time that we want, and they can give us the answer without waiting or searching it online. We will get ready for bigger communities such as college and university by attending school. Teachers don't just teach us a lesson, but they show us how to talk in a good way, and how to have a good character in our life. which online classes would't help us in such a way. We will have a lot of events at school that we can celebrate with the whole school. We can't celebrate any event while attending online classes.
Our chatacter, and the way we are is really important, and attending school will help us to have them in a best way. Talking, and asking questions in front of the whole class or several classes will help us a lot to get ready for college, and more other presentations. Comunicating is something that we will need to use in every day of our life. School is the best way to learn how to comunicate. When we go to college or university there will be a community bigger than a school. Therefore, attending school is a very good option rather than attending online classes. School is not just a place to study books, but its a place where we learn how to live like an educated human. Friends are like family. while we are attending school we will make a lot of freinds but we can't make any freind while attending online classes. Celebrating some events will give us the best memory while we can have that by attending school but not online classes.
Attending online classes have a lot of disabilities to teach a student they way they need to be teaching. A teacher can show us how to use a good language with other people but an online class wouldn't be able to do that. A big community like school can make us get used to talk in front of a group of people, while in online classes we are alone. We need courage in order to study. When we answer a question in the class or get a good grade in our class, the teacher, and students courage us but if we get a good grade in online class, there is no one to see our talent and courage us wihtout a small class massege. Attending online class might be good for some reasons. When we are sick or we have a poblem that we can't go to school; attending online class will help us, but not for a long time. Video conferencig has a big different with wactching what the teacher does in class, and what questions students ask.
There is a lot of ways that we can study but, attending school is the best way. Attending school is a complete education than other ways. we build schools because we can understand the importance of studying at school. School is a place where we start how to to earn someting that we want, and teachers help us with that by giving us courage. Attending online classes will just help us read something, and if we don't understand a word, then we need to search online for that either, whcih is going to take longer time than studying at school. I strongly prefer attending school than attending online classes because there are many benifits we can get by attenidg school rather than attending online classes. We can not learn all the good things on online classes that we can by attending school. Attending online classes will be a big process, diffuicult, less apportunties, and there is no one to encourage us or show us what is good for us. Attending school is a best way to have a bright future, a good way to communicate and a good preperation for college and bigger communities. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
AD19BF721C0F | Dear Principal of Generic_School:
The change of the menu at the cafeteria might be a good idea but also might be a bad idea for some students, the idea to have a new menu at the cafeteria should be made it first in a debate with all the students at the auditorium, students can have the right to vote if they would like to have a new menu at the cafeteria, they might give a vote for which kind of food can be remove and which kind of food should to stay, or they can decide if will be better to not make a change at the cafeteria, making this plan will not have any impact in students or school to choose they food or making a change because they will have the opportunity to decide what is good and what is not good for them.
Making this plan, students will feel comfortable to decide good things for their school, students can also share ideas with you and make different plans for a good change at the cafeteria, just think about it and you will see good results in students of your school.
If students decide to have a different menu of food...
"This might be a great idea for student to try different kind of food and make this change every year, the good thing about making this is that student will not feel tired for be eating the same kind of food every year."
"Students will feel excited every day to go to the cafeteria and see the new menu of food at the cafeteria."
"Some students might have a favorite food but they can try different varieties of food and have new favorite food."
"Also will be a great idea to give 35 minutes of lunch instead of 25 minutes, students can share time with them friends, have more time to finish if they have any work class or homework to do."
"Students can enjoy the free time to eat with no rush. Making a change will be an idea that all might students they'll support it.",
I hope you consider this idea as a good idea and students may consider it this as a good idea too, also think about the good change that you can make for students to have better time at school and enjoying they lunch will be great to fill they energy and get back to class.
Sincerely:
Students at Generic_School | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
AD28F2915402 | I didn't heard much about that, but what I read in this prompt is that "some high schools districts offers programs that allow high schools students to graduate early instead of four years", it means that they should have extra classes in summer, and they are not able to take elective courses. These are my thoughts that I have:
First, I can see that they don't have a brake to relax (except winter brake and some holly days, sometimes teachers give students homework for winter brake) , they are always studing hard, so they get stress.
second, usually they have a lot of homework, that's one of the reason that they don't really have time to their families and friends; they can get depress too and start feeling alone, that's what usually happen to me.
After that, they are done with the school early, so they have one year to chill or may be have a part time job, except that their parents make them join to college early. They keep studing, and then sometimes people have to move from house, because the college is at another state or city, so they have to rent a room close to the college.
In conclussion, graduate in less time is better and worst at the same time, but people know what they do with their lifes, in my opinion I prefer to graduate like a normal student, in four years. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
AD53B357BD0D | Have you ever had a really important decision you had to make? Did you feel overwhelmed because you didn't know what you should do? Asking for help or advise from people such as friends and family around you can really help alleviate all that stress. Most people encounter big decisions often throughout their lives, so getting advise from numerous people can help you get more input on something, and may end up helping you make a final decision. Seeking multiple opinions can really help someone make a better choice when dealing with decision making.
One way seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice is that by asking more than one person, they can get more input. Asking numerous people can be a huge help when making an important decision. Not only are people getting different ideas of what they may want to do, they can also get advise from people who may be more experienced than themselves. For example, if someone was debating on which college they should apply to, they may end up asking people such as older siblings or parents for advise because they may have more experience with that matter. By asking multiple people, you can get multiple ideas, each of them being different in their own way. By getting more people's input, you may be able to start to make your own choice about the matter because of the advise you've gotten.
Another way seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice is by not getting any biased opinions. By asking more than one person for advise on a subject, they can get more than one new idea that isn't one of their own. This way, they can get more than one person's thoughts on the decision, and have different ideas on it. For example, if someone were trying to make a decision on what sport they may want to tryout for at school, they could possibly ask their friends and family about which they should choose. However, they should also ask people like classmates and teachers, as they may have their own ideas, and won't give the person any biased ideas or information. Friends and family can have a great deal of influence on people, so it's important to always get people's thoughts that are on the outside. This will make it to where there's a greater chance of the decision maker not being biased, as they've heard numerous people's thoughts, and can make their own decision off of that.
A final way seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice is by being more prepared about the choice they're going to make. The decision maker can use all the advise they've gotten from different people to make their own choice, and feel better prepared. They will be more focused as they know what they want to do, and will feel more confident and less overwhelmed. Feeling less overwhelmed can be a big help as the person doesn't have to be so worried, so they won't have any distractions from making the best possible decision. For example, if someone is trying to decide what kind of car they want to get, and they've gotten advise from numerous people, they can make a better choice when picking. They'll know exactly what they want, as they've heard many thoughts from the people around them, and so they can make their final decision.
After getting advise from multiple people around them, the decision maker may be able to make the best choice possible, as they've gotten new thoughts and ideas. Asking for help or for some advise from those around you can help you make the best possible choice because you've gotten a lot of new information and opinions that you wouldn't have gotten if you had only asked one or no one at all for advise. Making an important choice can seem a little bit easier and less stressful after seeking advise from multiple people. Getting help from others around you can help you make the best choice you can. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
AD5621D2A958 | First impressions will always change bceuase you dont know the persons true color's yet. A lot of people act so nice on there job interview, but later on that first impression is going to change. On the first day of school teacher's act to nice but, later on in the school year the teahcer's first impression is going to change.
For example, when you first meet the person they act so friendly and so nice until you really get to know them, they start changing. you will see the persons true colors if they act the same and do what they first did when you met them. Finally, first impressions going to change because some people just act to do good on thier first impression.
For example, people dress and act good at there job interview. When they finally get that job, first impression is going to change because they are going to keep calling off and not work hard enough as they said in the interview. Finally, when the manager see's that you changed your first impression you will get fired.
For example, on the first day of school teacher's act so nice and tell you how the year i going to go. After that, the teacher's start getting tough on you and giving you more assignments. finally, its a proven fact that teacher's change thier first impression.
In conclusion, I agree that first impressions change because its a proven fact and anybody in this world can tell you first impressions change because you dont know there true colors. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
AD5F7E8C127F | It is a good idea for students to finish High School in three years? many students graduated from high school in a very short period. But, do you know if the student knows what he/she needs to know?. In some cases students didn't remenber something from high school. Many students forget everything that they learned when is Summer or when they stop to go to the school, in a very short time. It depend from the knowledge of a students if he/she can take everything on his/her heat. May be more time led the students to know what they want to do after the High School, and have elective classes can help the students to be a good worker in the future because they are more creative.
Depend from the knowledge of the student if he/she can take everything on his/her heat because some students have the capacity to learn a lot without forgered and other not, possibly they have apathy in some classes or they are more interested in other things since in some school districts offer progams that can contein clases that students don't want to learn. But, it can be very helpfull for the students that want to graduate so fast from the high school becuse may be they want to work without a interuption from high school's things or the want to go the colledge without they had a lot of time in high school. Also, some students think that have the capacity to graduate from high school in a short time and other prefert to graduate with the normal years because some students want to have the advanced diploma that can give you goods oprtunities.
May be more time led the students to know what they want to do after high school because some students graduated so fast that they didn't thing correcly what they want to be or what to do after the high, someway you have do to something in your life that can help you to live ecconimicaly between the world. For example, you are graduate today but in a week or a month you are doing nothing because you don't know what you want to do but you need something with your life. Also, if you want to graduate so fast from high school you need a plan like; i'll work after high school because i need money, or i want to study more because i think i need to know more and i want in my future. For example: the people who work after high school is the people that knows whar they want without matter the time that they took in the high school and the people who still stiding is because they arenot ready to know what they want or they still studing for a carrer.
Have elective classes can help the students to be a good worker in the future because they are more creative, and elective clasess led the students to learnd new things that can help them in the future and in their usually life. For example: if they take an art class they will be more creative, if they take a music art they can have their own record. Also , elective class give more oportunities that a progam that conteins the usually class and borred. Finally, summer is a good time to take a break from high school and you have the oportunity to be in a class
Online if it's difficult for you to remenber something during that time.
In conclusion, some programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years are good for the students who knows what they want to do after the high schools like if they want to work or if they will still studing. Also take a little bit time to graduate is not to bad because you never will to know what new things can you learn in the elapse of the time you keep have the oportunity to think more in what to do in the future. Also, if you have the capacity to remenber things for a log time is not too bad the idea to graduate in three years. The only thing that a student need to know is nake a plan for the future with clear ideas and be sure in what he/she wants. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
AD6986B56719 | Michelangelo once said "The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark." I agree with this because we should never set our standards low even if it means we will reach our goal quicker; we should always have a strong mindset in completing and tackling hard tasks no matter how hard it can be. This can be mentally be difficult for some people because they like to quit when something is too hard for them, this shows how weak minded a person can be and end up never completing that achievement. If you're setting your achievement low knowing that you can complete it, why do it then? It will be a waist of time and you'll most likely get no satisfaction out of it.
Waking up in the morning and looking at your to do list and seeing that hard goal you have to complete can really throw off people. They look at it and starting off their morning can put them in a bad mood. This can mean that the person is not mentally strong enough to finish his or her task, it can take weeks, months, or even years; some people just dont have the patience for it. This most likely means that you'll never complete anything difficult in your life and end up always choosing an easy goal knowing you can complete it in a short amount of time, That type of mindset will never get you anywhere in life, no one will want a lazy person working for them in the future; they'll want a hard working and determined individual.
A person should always set a task for them that is hard, but something they know they can complete. This can be working overtime at your job for that sports car you've always wanted or even just saving up money for retirement. Setting your goal low can mean the person will never grow up to be a strong individual or even be a hard worker. After completing your goal you should always get lots of joy, happiness, and satisfaction; if you're not getting any of those you're doing something wrong. It should never feel like your goal was just a waist of time or you did this for nothing, you should come out of your goal as a stronger and happier person.
Having a negative attitude can play huge role in why you're not completing hard goals. Two keys factors in completing a hard task are having the right mindset and having a positive attitude; Having neither of these will already be putting you in a major disadvantage. Through out your day you should always have a positive personalty, who would want to talk to an angry and negative person? These are very difficult skills to learn it takes patience and time, but already having these two key traits can put you in the biggest advantage for completing your hard task. Not lots of people embrace these because they think they are useless that it has nothing to do with your mind but more about the actions of the person.
In conclusion I highly agree with Michelangelo's statement, it can sometimes bring out the worst in us but that is how we grow and learn as a person. This quote separates the lazy week minded people out there from the hard working, strong minded, and positive people. Setting a hard task and taking the time to complete can influence yourself into completing harder goals you have planned for yourself in the future. This is how successful people are born and become who they are and make a name for them self, no millionaire would ever tell you to set your standards low just because you feel like you can't complete a hard goal; they would tell you to push yourself mentally and physically no matter what the cost may be. Some people are just born without that mentality that most successful people posses, you cant teach lazy but you most certainly can teach hard work, determination, striving, and dedication. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
AD72A536B54A | I,d kinda have to agree with micky here (least favorite tmnt turtle) because, if you don't aim high but go for short you might not get anywhere in life.
Like when you aim low like only work in fastfood and only get paid minimum wage forever, then get a job for a company like samsung of nintendo and get paid more then that.
1 of the examples is the debt/taxes you want to live a good life when you're down here right so do you want to live with so little money or more money that you save from a good job.
My 2nd example of this is like athletes if you learn what you did right, or wrong to achive that goal you have to push yourself further then what you are right now.
but if you succeed at the low standers your more like meh okay.
Though I can see the other way too saying you aim low but at least your aiming for something which i can get behind. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 |
AD730017246A | Prime Minster Winston Churchill once said that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." This quote indecteds that becoming successful is a lie in life that dose not have challenges,failures and have hard time in life to achive your goals and, without making it intersting. However, a lot of people belives this quote, because success is nothing with haveing enthusiasm and, lossing or being fail on something and being positive about it.
First, Haveing successful life without challenges is result of being fail in your success. The reason why you should have challenges in life to become a succesful its to make you a a better person in life and to make you a critical thinker and to garner your all skills and your talents for the better future. For example if you face your challenges later in life you would have the benfits from that hard or easy challenges.
secondly, makeing you challenigs intersting would led to be come successful, the reason why because having intersing and positive attuide towards your challengs would make it easire to handle. For example if your lossing a bussines or challnge do not bring nagitive atomsphere around it because it would never let your mind to have more oppotrunity that you could done more.
In my piont of view, failing or lossing is lie if you do not try hard for the intersting and successful goals. If you are lossing a challenge it okay to loss but with positive thought and never give up on the difficults challenge you have to face in you way to successful life and gaols. However a lot of people gives up on the diffecult challenges because its too hard for them to handle and at end they would have more diffcult thing to face. Make your challenges intersting it dose not matter if you fail it it matter how you play it. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
AD9CEE5A6FFF | I think it better to talk to more people than just one person, why becase different people have a different way of viewing a situation. People act differnet, one person might be angry and the other might be happy. Thats one of the reasons why i think its better to talk to more people than just one person.
You can see how different poeple think by just starting a conversation, different people might have better advice than others becase of the way they think or how they were taught to do things. Its also good to talk to the people that have been through your situation becase they have been through it and they can give you tips on how to be positive or how to be relaxed in that situition if it ever happens agian.
You can also talk to your familiy members becase they are are close people that you can always trust to help you like a project or just homework things like that so it doesent stress you out so much. Its good to know that someone will always be there to help you out. Thats way i think its better to talk do different people not just one person.
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Senceirly; Generic_Name | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
ADC42265FD32 | Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. People can use technology for read a book, watch TV show, shopping, play games, and people can contact random people whenever they wants.
First, Lot of people reading a book and watch TV show or video on the phone. When I was in Generic_City, I saw lot of people read a book with their phone or tablet, Also they are still watching a video almost every times when they are in the vehicle, but this is not a negative effects on peoples lives. This is positive effects on peoples lives, because they are still reading a book.
Second, many of student are not doing homework or not focus on their school, the main is they are not doing homework and play video game, Also they are using a phone or listen music while middle of the class. Or some people not studied and cheating on the test or quiz. but they will get a good grade, but they dont know what they learned.
Finally, Old people doesnt know about technology, so some bad people using a technology for old people, and they get money from old people. This thing still happening lot of country, like Korea. I saw my grandmother happened too. They took $1000 from my grandmother, and they got busted. This is really bad negative effects on peoples lives.
So technology is half negative effects and half positive effects, So whoever use technology for negative effects. I wish they are stop, and use for good place. | 4 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
ADDFE045FED1 | Although, I believe sometimes being around many different influences, such as religions, trends, and different cultures. We all choose our own traits.
Certainly, many different things can influence us. Such as trends, for a couple of weeks, months or years. Many different things could be could be trending. Like different genres of, movies, music, or video games, even clothing. In the moment when those things are popular it might feel amazing to own those particular things. Many people who cant afford things of such nature such as the latest cars, jewelry, and brands like Louis Vuitton, Gucci, Moncler, or anything of type nature that is trending. People like teens or young adults might feel terrible because their friends could be having those things and they cant afford it, and when they get some money they might go and spend it on expensive things to fit in. But as you get older, and the trend is over, most people regret spending a lot of money on things they didnt need. After the trends die out and everybody moves on to the next set of trends. People will start maturing and decide to wear, listen to, and do their own things, instead of being just like everybody else.
Most people, if not everyone would prefer doing things they like rather than doing things they dont like because their friends want to do it. A majority of people in the world have made themselves who they wanted to be. Every persons interests can influence them more than any person or friend. If it wasnt for peoples interests, and wanting to be themselves whether they were accepted or not. Most famous people wouldnt be where they are today. A lot of people use their interests to get them out of bad situations, which brings me to my final paragraph.
Following your dreams and being true to yourself can take you a long way. Although when people think of chasing their dreams, they picture being rich, famous, and living in a mansion. Others may think of starting a business with things they have a passion for and enjoy. Even having a daily basis of clients/ customers, even if its 5-10 people a day. At some point if that person stays consistent and humble, something big may happen for them and their business can just become huge, and they could keep on growing and having people who also share the same interests could come in on a regular basis. I believe everybody chooses who we want to be at some point, it may take time but in the end, everybody finds themselves. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
ADF1112226F4 | Do you agree with Albert Einstein when he said "imagination is more important than knowledge"? I think that is true because if you have now imagination than how are you going to get knowledge. I agree because Albert Einstein had to have a strong imagination to become really smart, Albert Einstein lived through a lot so he knows a lot, Elbert Einstein is smart.
To begin with, I think that Elbert Einstein had a strong imagination because he was one of the smartest human beings to ever live. He was really smart that is why I think he said " imagination is more important than knowledge" he had to have a strong imagination to think and become really smart. Elbert Einstein created and invented a lot of thing and to make to things he needed a strong imagination.
In addition, Elbert Einstein was really old and really smart so he lived through a lot as a human not as genus. He also learned a lot from being a genus but he did live through a lot and he was a human.
Also, I think that Elbert Einstein created cool inventions and gadgets from his imagination he needed a wild imagination to think and create a lot of cool things that is most likely why he said this quote. He was smart but he used his imagination too.
In conclusion, I agree with what Elbert Einstein said because he had a strong imagination because he was one of the smartest people, he lived through a lot, he was really smart. I think you should agree too because you can use your imagination to become a genus at you school, job or even your house o with your family. Use your imagination. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
ADFE2CDB6FF1 | Yes i think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home in the way that they can be more ready to start the class, and they will focus.
-The reason why i though that is because sometimes at school the students they have shame to show to other the best of them, " the intelligent student told me that i can't do anything or i can't speak very well English" still if we want make our goals we can do it. Without go to the school.
-For example:
If a student is on his house alone with no one told him what or how he need to do the correct things, but he has a lot of question about what he is doing in his online class. He will try to find the way to solve the problem by himself.
Also if i was in my home find new imformation and i work to much during the day then i would be hungry then i can go to the kitchen for cook something very fast and go back to my room continue with my homework. And if i have a question i will ask for help to some teacher by texting.
Eventually, attend classes at home with no pressure could made different and confortable for the students who are shy or maybe need a teacher only for one student for explain the class that the student is taking. Below for those students that don't like to wake up too early in the morningt they have the choose to study more later since at night without necesary be ready for school. Many cases when girls are pregnant they can still going at school, but it was diffult for them had to continue study and also after that they giving birth too. i know that because a friend told me and another girls too, she told us the process that she has to pass during her pregnancy and after when she has her baby with her I don't know how hard it is, but i can imagine in this position. So what my friend do? during her pregnancy she still coming to the school i saw her many time she was so tired with her belly and then when she has her baby yet she take in her house the next classes i was surprise about it either i do not how unconfortable it was for her that a teacher was with her when the baby start cry or when the baby need to eat, later she was done she back to the school but she didn't feel ok for leave her baby at home. This story make me think about it if i have the election to choose how i can study i prefer study and take the classes in my house better that school.
I think the students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home that's great idea. but there are many problems; what happen if the student do not have money to pay the online classes? either their families do not have the recourses for help them another reason that's why we have to work and make money for us and we missing many days in the school for stay at home because we want sleep more hours or we coming to the school and we are no pay attention what the teacher is talk about the class, So i think this if a student want money need to work and continue study online maybe in that way is more easy pass the class and the SOL. Attend classes from home by way online help this type of case the students go to work few hours and then coming home for the rest of the day to study or another option is one day work and the next day don't and stay at home taking the online classes, in summary "NEVER GIVE UP" when we want something that we can't get it in nowhere only in our effort we can make that possible. Also with some help ask when we do not understand something and put the best of us all including: try to solve the problems, research good imformation, and the most importat thing that we have to do is study. sometimes the other people make feel us so bad or without no reason to be in this world, go ahead and desmostrate to that person who do not believe in you that you can do it.
During school year is possible learning for online or video conferencing,in the videos explain clearly what or how to solve math ejercise or another kind of materials. Examples of benefit to attend classes at home are:
- Spend more time in the computer
- More focus in the homework
- Use the iphone for imformation whenever we want
- Study all the day
- No talk with your friends during your class
- Finish more fast with no distraction
All that things are benfit if the students being to attend classes in their home in the winter they don't have to worry about how cold is outside in the morning or what clothes is appropriate for school, and have to coming in the school in a good mood for study and see somebody that we do not want to see and prevent be involve in problems with another student. Could fine stay at home by self in own class than go to the school. Many student suffer of depreciation and that is so bad for them. If they school giving to them the opportunities to take the classes online it is more better for their healthy, this is my opinion about attend classes on the home. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
AE0DB193F5B5 | Today, in the actuality, a lot of people have a big dreams that we can to complete have a better life for our future family or also to own self but a many people be surrender becuase most of the time have the fuilures, when they are doing something; I think that our life without the fuilures will be bored and easy becuase we don't have the energies to work hard or fight for our goals or dreams. I agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success because you can help other to complete their dreams or their goals, also you can have more spirit and a positives attitudes than you have in the begging, also you can be a successful and strong person.
You can help others to complete with their dreams or their goals, because sometimes a lot of people who want to comply their dreams or goals they don't have the motivation of their families or the economy necessary to buy all the studies or all the things that they need, so when you finish all the goals that you make you, you can assist to others. I know an experience of child from Mexico, his name was Generic_Name. Generic_Name was a child with the low economy resources, I remember that he toll us all the things that he was comply to get a better life for his family and him self. So one day, Generic_Name received a big notice from a presidency of Generic_City, the place were we live, that he can have a opportunity to study whatever he want. He and his family were happy for the big opportunity that Generic_Name have. At pass of the years, when Generic_Name finished study the collage, I know that Generic_Name is a big entrepreneur from a big company that he created after finished the college. Today, also Generic_Name likes help other people who want to be a successful in their life like the presidency help him. In my observation to be a good person likes Generic_Name makes that you have a lot of open opportunities to get the success or the things that Generic_Name every day was dreamed.
Also you can be a successful and strong person because all people knows that the life is not easy and less if you want to do something hard or something that you need put a lot of time in it to pursuit of success and if you think that your goals or dreams are difficult to complete. Sometimes we need strive more that the people or your mind think. Another of my experiences is when was in Mexico, I was little girl, I remember that most of my days I talked with my family, my mother, my father and also sometimes with my grandfathers; about that I want study the High School in Untied States because I saw a TV Shows and movies shows all the schools and also my father lived a lot of years in this country so, he talk me about the schools, the teachers, the classmates, the classes and classrooms that were to different form my country, the lunch time and I think that the thing that was more exercise was with the lockers because in my country don't have lockers or something to put our things likes books, pencils, notebooks and sometimes, the food. At the time that was grow up, I was continue with the same mentality to come to this country to comply my studies. I remember that have a lot of failures in the time to the arrival to United States but,even if never let that my thoughts or the commentaries of the negative people will be fell bad about my big dream. I think that was a strong person because is hard to come to other place with different culture and customers in everything and also is hard and sad separate to the persons who love.
Other might say that the importance role that failure plays in the pursuit of success does not matter or they are disagree because you can lose your forces to continue and accomplish your goals and sometimes this failure can make us fell sad. However, you can have more spirit and positives attitudes than you have in the begging because when you have a failure in something that you study a lot or put your all time in it, you can have the mentality that you can to do well it, just you need strive a little be more that you make before. This is one of my experiences in my life; the last week, in my History class with Generic_Name, we have a quiz form the first unit so, we did the quiz, but the majority of my classmates and me, we don't pass the quiz, my teacher talked with us to give us a another opportunity to pass it. A lot of my classmates tell her that they do not were think that they can pass it even though they study a lot before the retake but, I have the spirit and the positives attitudes that I can passed the quiz with a good grade and study well at home. I think that my experience, it is good example because a lot of people who want to complete their dreams does not matter the times that they need to try to get a good result and a good recompense for the effort that they make.
In my opinion, I think that Churchill's statement "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm" it is important and I agree with it because you can motive other people to be a good person with good feelings and goals, another reason is because you can to be a successful and respectful person and you can have a good attitudes through haved a bad results, every time you need stay be happy. Most of the people we have the big goals to comply something that always we dreaming. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
AE156FEABF74 | Some reasons I'll be happy wrote something about my self is because i will be important is some one or some one will see they self in my self and then they will be happy to see the problem in other easy way I'll do the different to other person like me.
Other reason is because I will feel like finally I share my own story with the world and they will know how hard is lived in the world, for some people and how easy is for other.
When finally about my story they will put they face up and will feel like I'm not the only person with this life someone in the world have the same life I do now and the will be different and will said yes to the life they have in the present because all of us know how hard the problem are our own life.
I agree with him because him try to proud my own story and try to be different then others he thing about my experience and try to change what i did wrong in my life. He will change others life and what he is writing I will be happy with that because others guys will see what was wrong and what they have to change and they life. for example if i did something what i keep in my mind and I try to get back the time and now is to late is something what I can't do now I will fell like I help others to don't do what is wrong and they life. in sometimes we feel like terrible but we can change that when is the right time to do it but there is where we don't want to change anything in our way and when is to like we want to do something but is very late for some of us. but I will feel like wire when I'll see a book about myself because will be all what i did before and who I'm now. but the, Author Ralph Emerson wrote, my story because he though was important to to talk about other person and thing about what they do or what is going on in different's in some life and moved to others to change something but when we know any story or we red something the first thing we see on it is the what is important and what and what part describe the person in the story. when the author will writing something he get the all information he can can fist and then stars with the the important part to proud the feeling to reading that story.
the author like to share what he know ir what he investige fir others and try to moved others to grow up when they feel like they can follow the liofe but there is where they stop to something wrong tehy are doing at the time. for reasons like that is they like to we have author and good storys. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
AE178808D4FB | An enjoyable way to spend time outdoors would be to go to a state park. Spening time outdoors is a good way to relex yourself. Also because then you can enjoy new activities. Doing outdoors activities is a good way to learn new things and explores stuff. Outdoors activities is a good way to spend time with your family,friends. Doing outdoor activity can calm down all your stress and make you feel fresh. Outdoors actvities are important for you because they keep you energized and you do need to spend some times outdoors not only indoors.
Someone might find going to a state park enjoyable because thee will be a lot of fun activities you can do there. Also because then you can discover new things there. In state parks there are varities of new resources and things you may enjoy. There are more fun activities but in my opinon i think going to a state park is more enjoyable and fun. Going to a state park is a good way to spend your time because it can keep you energized and active. State parks do have a lot of space where you can sit and talk to your family or friends. State parks may have a food court aswell.
State parks can be small or big but it depends on which one you are going to. Usally state parks are big and filled with beautiful flowers. There may be a age limit on some of the state parks activities. You may think that parks are boring but you are wrong because parks do have fun activities but i know some parks are boring but parks like state park, community parks, and national parks aren't. If you don't like parks then you must go to a state park because they are really beautiful and may change your thoughts on going to a park. You can also book a birthday party or just a regular party and it will be really fun to book a party because state parks are really big and you will have enough space.
I know you may be wondering when is a good time to go to the state parks, well in my opinion i think going to state parks when its sunny and a good weather because you need that vitamin D. There are different timings when the state park will open each day so you may need to take some time out to go there. On weekends the state parks may be full and you may not even have space to sit but on weekdays there not that full so i think you may wanna go on a weekday so you can have enough space to play around or spend some time with your family, friends. Taking small kids to state park can make them happy and have time to play around.
At some state parks you may find some beatiful butterfly's flying around, isn't that beautiful. You can also meet new people and make good friends there. State park is just a peaceful and calm way to spend your time. If you look forward to going to a park then go to a state park because it has everything you want in a park. State parks don't have any fees to enter it its just opened but you may have to pay for the activities. Thats why I think outdoors activities are important. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
AE262E9DC747 | It's true that some schools allow student to their cell phones for educational purposes. But some use it to look for answers to cheat on a test or text some of their friends for answers. Some student who use their phones always get sidetrack for dumb reassons. Some kid will the others students attention to what the kid is doing. Why some the teachers let it happen well they sometimes don't know that is happening.
Students who take out their phones right in the open wil get caught easy. Other students try to hide them so no other tescher can't see them. Some other kids will even sneak glance at bag or pockects or enven in their bagpack. Teachers will even get the student with their phones out red handed. Even with their phones out students barely pay attention in class or at were there going.
Some parents will even get some complains form the school that their kids had their phones out. The parents will have to go the school to pick up there childs phone. Some students will try to steal their hone back on their own so their parents don't find out at what happen at school. The parents will tell their kids that not to do it agianbut we all know waht will happen. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 4 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
AE2E6B3472DB | A Former British Man a Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that ''
success consists of going from failure to failure wi t hout loss of enthusiasm
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is like saying that people are more afraid of success that they're are in failure. what Winston is talking about that is okay to lose once in awhile as long you have that smile in your face that you already a winner of yourself, like playing a soccer game but your team loses but you lose as a team, failing a quiz you just gotta do better in the retake you can't give up on something that is precious to you. People make mistake and people learn from it just try to do better next so you can succeed on winning. Some people are scared to take the chance to succeed because that taking a risk of failure and people have but you won't know if you try. Winston Churhill want people to never give up on your dream. if you learn more about the subject you won't got no worried about a thing. Once I was little I have a hard time learning and participating in class that my mother and father didn't knew about the time that they constant working to provide us a house,food,and clothes. I have to restart kindergarten because of my failure that I didn't bother asking my mother about was my mom knew about they took me to a doctor to check on me that I have a learning factor my mother was worried that I have to transfer every school that have a program for me then there was one school that help me learn better communicate with teacher answering question when I first started highschool I look back when I was little and started to laugh and think I have so many chances to succeed in life that one day I'll go back to the teacher and say thank you for everything so I have to go through of failing but never lose my hope of becoming a winner. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
AE370D914104 | Students would benefit from being able to attend a regular school more than an option for students to attends classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Students will learn more if they go to a regular school and they can help them self to be active in school or participate from sports, club member and etc..
Students would benefit from being able to attend a regular school because students will learn more if they go to a regular school and students can do more better or focus if they're in the regular class/school and they can ask for a help from their teacher or their classmate. The most important in a regular school is that you can ask your teacher face to face about your grade or your missing paper works on her/hes class. For example, Sarah is more likely to attend on a regular school more than an option to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because Sarah is more having fun to go to a regular school to see her teacher, classmate, and her friends everyday. This proves that Sarah is glad that she improve herself for everything especially for all her achievement in her life as a student.
Students would benefit from being able to attend a regular school because they can help them self to be able to improve them self to be active in school or participate from sports, clubs member and etc... Being a students you need to enjoy your life as a high school students because once you graduate or go to college you my not or my regret yourself for not trying/try to involve yourself to join some sports or clubs member etc.. For example, Enrique love to play basketball went he was a child until he's grow up, but he never try to involve he's self to join the basketball team went he's on high school because he always said that he's not enough or not that good to be part of the team that's why he never try to involve he's self at least one. This prove that involve yourself to any sports or clubs saw you will not regret yourself at the end.
Some people say it's better for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. 35% of many students agree with that because it's boring and they can't focus on school and they have a work that's why they pick to attend from home by way of online or video conferencing. 65% of it will not agree with that because if you do the home online class i think you did not give your best or your not more focusing on your classes online. 65% people said that if you really want to be successful person you need to proved your education, education is the key of your life. This prove that you need to choose Wesley for your self, not only for your self for your parents also.
Students would benefit from being able to attend a regular school more than an option for students to attends classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Students will learn more if they go to a regular school and they can help them self to be active in school or participate from sports, club member and etc.. you need to choose Wesley saw you can be a successful person. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
AE83E9155405 | We all dose mistake in our life . If your going from failure to failure without loss enthusiasm you will not going to learn from your mistake, Sometimes we need to feel bad about something wrong we did in our life because if we didnt feel bad or sad we will keep doing our mistake and we will not fail in the same things.
Me and My friend we took
IB math together , last year it was so hard for us. one day she talked to me and she says: Generic_Name you will not pass this class because your grade is not good you better change it or you will take it next year .
I went home i felt stressed for one hour a about what she says to me , later i told to my self that she is true about every thing she says meanwhile i didnt t study for the exam and i didnt want to study .
On the exam day i didnt stressed my self I was OK , I ask my friend did you study ? She says i didnt study ,I feel happy because its Friday .We took the exam both of us didnt pass but the thing i felt so bad, When i went home. My dad ask me about my grade , i told him that i didnt pass because it is hard for me .
I remember he got mad at me and i didnt says nothing that time . i remember he told me that is one of my big mistakes that i didn't try or study for the exam also he says that it is nooses nothing is hard if you try your beast , you can do it . he make me feel so bad about my grade, self so called my friend because i thought she will feel bad like me but she was so happy and she didnt care about her grade.
I took decision that i need to be A + student in this class , all my class , I decide to pursuit of success and push my self hard no mater what .
I start to study all the weekend for my math IB class also I exert my best .
On Monday i ask my teacher if i can retake the exam for me , my friend .
The exalt was so easy because i studied very good for it
, my friend didnt impact from me , She got a bad grade, She kept going from failure to failure with out loss any enthusiasm that why she didnt change and she is the one who took the this class this year because she didnt pass it .for example if she felt something she will be success in the class and her life. Moreover Failure should impact negative because if its not negative the people will neglect their failure and mistake. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
AE8A9585640A | when theres a problem its a chance for you to do your best. I agree with this statement because when you in a problem you give up, you dont know what to do, and you try your best to find out why its hard or why its a problem.
when I play soccer there was one problem, I never passed the ball to my teammates. The coach always got mad at me for not passing the ball. Sometimes I gave up because I forget to pass the ball. There was no way that I can remember to bass the ball. The coach always tells me in every game to pass the ball.
I dont know what to do to remember to pass the ball. If the other team has it I attack to get the ball but when I get it on my feet I cant pass because its hard. The only thing I can do is go in Google or YouTube so it can help me. Sometimes I don't know what to do to get better, its hard watching YouTube or going to Google is the only thing I can do to get batter, or not forget to pass, and help me. I search up "why do I never pass the ball and how can I get better to pass or not forget to pass the ball." It helped me a lot and now I started trying my best to get better at soccer and its going good so far. every game i have passed the ball.
when you have a problem its your chance to try/succeed. when you have a problem you need to try your best, try not to give up, and try not to get confuse or it will be even harder for you. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
AECE763751DB | They are many things or ways one, or a family can spend their time when outside or their time in the outdoors. And also will see that activity to be fun at the same time and will like to do it all the time.
One of the activities that one can do outdoors is going to the community park to have some fun alone or with their family to enjoy the environment and leave their life the way they want to, also they can take their dog with them and have fun with them some of the activities they can be doing with the dog is training them how to jump,catch things,and also how to make friends with other dogs in the area of the park they are. and also if they go alone they can also have some alone time on their own or even make friends with other people who also brought their dogs with the,and by this they will have some fun outdoors and also find that going to the park was a fun idea.
Another way to have fun or spend time outdoors is to go to the beach on your free time to clear your mind from all the things you did on workdays like from Monday to Friday,having al those kind of stuff on your shoulder at work I think that this will be the best time to go to go to the beach. But if you think that in your opinion that my first point I made about going to the beach was not the best idea then i think the second point may be the best reason why someone will have interest in going to the beach. The main reason why someone will go to the beach is to have the best time of his or her life or maybe find someone that the person is attractive to when they go to the beach. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
AEDDD593BF0F | Ralph Waldo Emerson is the author. He wrote, "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." I agree with his statement. Because he didn't give up to write a statement. For example, Generic_Name wanted to give up for the driving lesson. But Generic_Name thought, "If I am not gonna take the driving lesson anymore, I can't go far anywhere." So, he didn't give up and took the driving lesson. After that, he got a driver's license. After he got a driver's license, he can drive anywhere. He drives very well after he took the driving lesson.
Another example, Generic_Name wants to be a scientist. So, she is studying a science. Also, she is doing lab with the experiment materials in the laboratory. But, there are many hard science problems, and experiment materials. So, she wants to give up, and get another job that can do easy way. But, she decided to don't give up for her job. So, she didn't give up to be a scientist. She studied hard, and researched how to succeed in the experiment. After she did that, she got a job scientist. She realized, "If I give up, I can't do something later." So, she is doing hard for her job, scientist.
When you give up, it will be hard to succeed, and get the benefit. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4.5 |
AEE8A576989C | Dear friend
my name is STUDENT_NAME
am coming from LOCATION_NAME.
i speak LOCATION_NAME and LANGUAGE_NAME.
i am a student to SCHOOL_NAME to 8grade.
The community is very important. Because he teacher people a good idea.
ex: my idea is to respect the teacher and other people.
I don't no speak English good.
Because to my contry no English.
i want to be a good student in English and other .
Thank's | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
AEEEF8816516 | Technology is a tool for the human to amuse because people can check out books,shop, and play games without speaking to another person, but at the same time technology effects on people's lives. Here are some negative and positive reasons that technology cause to the people.
Many people lost their time with play games, for example, 75% of childhood and young play games every day thats means that more than 1 million of kids take their time with games, so the consequence of the future of this generation can be different because right know children's starts to loss communication with parents or starts to be aggressive with others. thats a negative reason.
Now, technology helps a lot because makes more easy on people's lives. for example, During the time technology creased every day, exist apps that you can use for jobs and apps that you can use to contact others easier. On this times young people study about photograph, edition, effects, agriculture and more because that is the feature, but we need to be careful because if we carelessness the future can be horror.
The technology is too important for the world. There is positive reasons and negative reasons it just depends what you care more, Technology or the world, and i'm not saying that we need to eliminated the technology. I'm just thing that we need to be care for this if we want a good feature, So one thing we can do is to get more communicate, friendship, share with people, go outside, visit the nature. If we still do those things our feature will be pretty good.
To conclude, Technology is a tool for the human to amuse, It's depends how we used. in the positive way or wrong way. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
AEF788DA28DE | I think that the principal should not change the school policy because there are many students in school that the only thing that make them happy is sports; and that is what makes them stay away from trouble. But if you take that away from them there going to have nothing and they wont be looking forward to going to school. And they may feel that they are not good in any thing but sports; and it motivates you to be better in school it teaches you how to cooperate with other student , how to be a good leader/captain, and many more. That's why I think that the principal should not change the school sports policy. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
AF20176EB127 | Imagine everyone or you having a great skill or talent that you dont even know about. You can do what many people cant do or you can even make a game out of it. You can develop new skills if you try or even come up with a hard talent or a easy talent that everyone can see it and do it. You can also combine talents and skills you never thought you can do if you dont try it or see it if it can work with you or with other people.
Everyone has a great talent and skill. Be the most fastest and the most smartest person in the world at math. Try to find out what's your best skill or what's your talen and if you are the worlds most fastest and smartest person at math you would have a good job later on for you. You can throw a football from the 1 yard all the way to 90 yards at age 11. You can never know what your good at if you dont try it out and if you can throw a football 90 yards from yard 1 at age 11 im sure later all the football team's would want you to play for there team.
Try finding out what are you good at. You are the tallest person in the world. You are the most tallest person who has ever lived and i think every basketball team would want you to play for there team and when you would run i think it would take you 7 steps from the half court of the basketball court. You are the most fastest person in the world. You would be faster then everyone in the whole school and the most fastest in the track team and could also go to the olyimpics. Find out your best skill and what your good at.
You can do what many people cant do in the world. You can develop new skills or make them so other peolpe can see it and do it or you can be even famous if you create a talent that know one has done or create the most best skill's that people haven't seen in the world and you can break world records that people have try to do it but faild. Everyone has a skill and a talent you just have to find it in you and trust your self that you can do it and dont give uo untill you have completed it. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
AF39DC7FF677 | Dear, Principal
These kids should be allowed to participate in the sports and activities. the kids a your school try very hard to get over a D to participate in your activities. these kids wake up ever morning to go school to study and work hard. if you let these wonderful kids participate in the activities trust me they will try harder to get better grades and to make your school top in the state. these kids just don't want to work they want to have some fun with their friends. but once their fun is over they must go back to work. thank you for letting me share my opinion . | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
AF4A2E8AD2A5 | Some people argue that working in a group has more benefits then working working alone. Some people also argue that working alone has more benefits then working in a group. Working alone is more beneficial the working in a group because, if one person in the group does not come to school the group will be short a person, if a member in the group does not care about the project, and not everyone is going to agree with each others ideas and opinions.
If a member in the group does not come to school the group will fall behind and not turn the work on time. if a person in the group is sick with a virus they would have to miss school and miss work on the project and that would hold back the rest of the group from turning in the project on time. When being put with someone who does not come to school often will cause stress on the rest of the group and also a delay. When working alone the worry of a group member not coming to school is not a thing because its alone.
When someone in the group does not care about the work the group will be held back because then more work would have to be done by the others. When being put with someone who does not care is hard because only the rest of the group is doing the work and putting in effort. Working in a group would also not be fun because you have someone who is not doing anything. When the group is working the one who does not care would be sleeping or on their phone. When working alone there is none of this to worry about because it is a independent assignment.
When working in a group not everyone is going to agree with each other on the same ideas. If one person says they do not like that idea, the group would have to take time and all agree on something as a group. Agreeing on something would take up to one or two classes and that would waste a lot of time and put the project behind. When working alone there is not agreeing on anything, it is whatever that person chooses.
Working in a group it would be more fun but when working alone more work can be done. Being pared with friends is nice but the amount of work able to get done when alone is a lot more. In a group there is more communication, sometimes that communication can hold someone back a negatively impact their grade. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
AF6E7702012F | Is doing your best a problem? Personally I feel like there is no problem by doing your best. You should always want to do your best no matter what your doing. But,some people don't like to try they give up so easily that they don't want to do nothing no more. Like me I try my best but,sometimes I don't apply myself,and when I don't apply myself it turns out to bad results.
For Example,Paul George,and the Clippers played against Los Angeles Lakers,during the middle of the game Paul's shots weren't falling so he was having a low scoring game,but he still tried his best to get rebounds and steals to win the game for his team.
For another Example Generic_Name had a test,and there were some questions on there that he didn't understand. so he still worked through the problems,and took an educated guess and still tried his best and got a 75 on the test. usually Generic_Name get a B or above on tests but he forgot that the teacher told him that there would be some questions on the test that the class didn't know.
Final Example,my little sister is a basketball player like me and every Friday i go to ball handling to get my handles right. My little sister never done it before,and the class that we took was advance,it was easy for me because i been doing it for so long. But,i look to my right and i seen my sister struggling and my Trainer told her she was doing it wrong. So she dropped the ball and walked out the gym. After the training we got home,and i had a talk with her,and i told her i was gonna help her out. I showed her the moves outback and she started to get the hang of it,and now she's been practicing on the moves for weeks,and finally uses them in the game. But, she gave up the first time but, she was willing to try,and the results turned out fine because she tried her best.
You should always want to do your best and not give up because if you do your best the turn out would be great. It makes you want to work hard and do better at the things you want to do or get the things that you like. It makes you feel good because you know you tried to give it your all and wouldn't have to stress about it. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
AF71C89CD199 | I think this pogram should be in every school beacuse this could help the younger students to learn more about the school. And the older students can the younger students and they can show them which room they have to go. And its better this way beacuse the older students knows more things about the school then the younger students do. And this could help the younger students learn more about the school. This will make the students feel about their seld beacuse they were helping other younger students. Now the srudents feel more comfortable beacuse they got helped from the other students from the other students so now the younger students feel way happier beacuse they know where to go. And if this was not a thing students will be all sad and fustrated beacuse they will be all lost beacuse they new to the school and wont have no one to help them. The younger students going to be really sad beacuse they wouldnt know what to do and what class they have to go. So this a reason of why every older students should help new kids at the school or any younger students. And the younger students gonna learn from the older students and this pogram can help the younger students get their grades up beacuse older students can help them do they work and get their grades up | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
AF83C17B5451 | In school there are a lot of fun and educational activities. One of my favorite activity to do in school is a science experiment. In science there are a lot of awesome experiments and tools you can use, and they are fun to use. If there wasn't any fun science experiments; I wouldn't like to go to science.
Some kids say that science is the worst subject in school and it is boring. In my opinion scinece has a lot of cool stuff that you can't do in any other fun activity in school. my most favorite experiment is when we are mixing chemicals because you don't have a major clue of what is going to happen when you mix them up, and that is what makes it interesting and fun at the sma time. There are more experiments that you do in science like making a volcano eruption or something else but science can be fun if you pay attention to what the teacher is saying and following the rules because there can be fun but there has to be rules or somebody can get hurt
In conclusion there might be some better educational activities but in my opinion i like more science experiments, however, it does get boring sometimes and you just don't want to do anything, therefor, you just can't complain about life, you just got to with it and enjoy it . | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
AF8963C142A0 | Benefits on working with a group is a better way to get work done because most students get to use different ideas,Helping each other out with different parts on projects finishing work faster,and communicating with each other is key if working in groups.
However not everyone would agree with this position, because it benefits of working alone is most students don't have to wait on others to do their work. For example The teacher assignes a project and they have to be in groups of five and two of the students do their work and the other three don't do their work. It brings everyone else down.
Working alone makes students not have to worry about others not doing their part of the work.
Most students get to use different ideas when they work on groups. For example students get together to start talking about how they are going work together and start giving differents ideas on how to work better as a group
Working in a group makes students jobs less complicated and stressful by having others helping each other
Working in groups students get to help each other out. For example each student gets to be in charge of one part of the assignment so everyone contributes and work gets done faster. Helping each other out is really important to the group and communication is key when students work in groups.
Communication with each student in the group is really important if students working in groups want to get work done. For example each member of the group comminicates with each other and work gets done faster. Communication helps in different ways,helping someone if they don't understand something,Giving advice to another student if they feel like they are stuck or need a different opinnion or not agreeing with someone else there's always a different way to communicate that to each other. communication is key to work in groups.
Working in groups benefits one another by working faster, communicating with each other, helping each other out when someone is not understanding something and giving different ideas. Working in groups can be helpfull if students know how to use it and take advantage of the opportunnity. It should be the best way to get work done and be able to help each other out. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
AF96A2176FB7 | Do you think students should have online classes at home? Do you think this will benefit the students in their life? In this paper, I will argue that students should not get online classes.
Students should not get online classes at home, because some students have to work and they are too busy to take online classes. Some people do not go to school, but they take online classes. some students work at night and they do not have time to take online classes. Students should not take online classes, because schools are for learning and home is for students to have fun, relax, and do what you want to do. Students should not take online classes, because they need to enjoy their free time while they are not in school. I do not want to take online classes, because I work at night and I do not have time to use online classes. My friend takes online classes when he is at home, but online classes took some of his free time.
Some people say, that students should have online classes because they need to focus in school and that they should start planning what they want to do when they are grown up and out of school. They are wrong, because life is not just to focus on what you want to do when you finish school, is to enjoy it and do whatever they want to do in their life. Some people want the best for their kids, but life is one and they should enjoy it.
I think in the future some students will go to school and do online classes in their free time, so they can focus on what they want. Some students will go to school, but they will not do online classes because they want to have a good career, but they do not want an excellent life like the other students. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
AF98232BDB08 | Some schools use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes. Students shouldn't use their cell phones in classroom for educational purposes its going to be big problem with teachers and parents if they are using their phones in class and teachers are going to be conserder about how bad they are going in school their grades are affecting them. I disagree i dont think that they should be allowed to use their cell phones in classroom It distracts them from learning and paying attention in class if they use there phones in class they will not know or learn the important information that the teacher is teaching cause what the teacher teaches is about what you need for your education. One reason is that They dont do their work if they have their cell phones they might be saying that they are getting their work done but they are not doing their work their doing something else on their cell phones. For example instead of them doing their work in class they are really playing games, watching movies listening to music , talking to their friends on the phone texting them they spent all their days in school using their phones doing all these thing that they shouldn't be doing and that won't help them in their education. A second reason why students shouldn't use their cell phones in class is that they aren't learning anything in class they dont listening to what the teacher is teaching in class its not helping them learn new things and have knowledge for other things and won't be really for quiz or test. For example when a test is coming up they don't do well on because they haven't been listening in class; they were too besy using their phones playing games, watching movies or whatever they were doing on their cell phones so thats why they get bad grade on their test and have bad grades throughout the year then they can't do anything to get their grades up before the quarter ends. Some say that cell phones are useful for school to have them as a resoucre when they need to find information about things their trying to look for. But they are wrong students don't need to be using their cell phone in their classroom at all it just distracts them even more from what they should be doing because if they are going a project for a class they don't need their cell phones with them they can find the information that they need by using other resource to get what they need for their project. For example if they are trying to find how to cook or bake they can go to the libary and look for a books that are about cooking and baking or they can also ask their teachers for help they won't need their cell phones to find their research. When we know that if they have their cell phones with them they won't be doing their work they will be doing other things that aren't importante. Thereforce that is why students shouldn't be allow to use their cell phones in class or when they are at school so that they can paytention in their class and learning what the teacher teacheing them everyday in class and like that they dont get bad grades. So student dont need their cell phones at any point in school they shouldn't be allowed for educational purposes they dont need to have them to distract them from learning in school. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
AF9F53EC3673 | Everyone has a talent or skill. In my case, Its music. Although my music skills are still improving, I would still consider it a talent or skill.
I've learned to play different instruments such as: the guitar, percussion, xylophone, and the violin, which is what i'm currently playing. At first I joined chorus in 1st grade and finished in 5th grade. I really enjoyed it ,so I chose to learn an instrument, which ended with me joining band. In band, I learned how to play the recorder. I played it from 2nd grade to 3rd grade. After learning the recorder I switch instruments to a xylophone, that played during 4th grade.
Since I didnt really like playing the xylophone, I chose to do percussion for 5th grade. I was also learning the guitar during 4th grade through 5th. when I entered middle school I decided to turn things around by choosing to do orchestra. I learned everything I had to know in 6th grade ,so I was ready to play the violin in 7th grade. I really felt passionate about the violin so I kept playing ,and still am ,and yet will continue until high school.
My music skills can be useful at times, for example: my parents once asked me to play a song for their wedding, they thought it was marvelous. Last year, I sang a song ,that I composed, for my sisters' birthday. She really enjoyed it. I like participating in music contests, concerts, etc. This year I went to New York for a violin concert, it was amazing.
My music skills have yet to improve, but until then I will continue trying new ways of music. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
AFB5CC3E27EB | Many people loves libreries, and they enjoy to share time with family,they will like to be like back in those days. Technology allow poeple to complete many task without having contact with others. Technology have a negative effect in people life because people life is passing in front of their face without knowing, technology hurts people in many ways,and make many people to feel bad with themself.
Some people think that technology is the best creation that the human ever made because entertain and hepl people to understand many things. Others believe that technology is a easy way to make assigments because google have every kind of information. Still other argue that without technology this world would not be the same because doctors would never find the tratment for the sickness.
Technology have a negative effect in people life because they forget to live their life and the time is passing, just because they spend all their time playing video games, in the phone, and they star to getting older and because the years are passing like nothing and really fast that when they react they would see that their best years just passing, without enjoy their time with the people that they love. Many people just react only when one family member death and they start to think that life is too short, and it is why people need to apreciate and enjoy,
learn new thing, meet new places, have more experiences, and also meet new people and learn good thing from them.
Many people hurt them self in many ways for example physical and mental because physical they star to get fat and then they do not take care about their healty and if they do not take care who else would do for them, because when they star to get sick they just do not care about it, because they want to keep concentrate in their video games or telephone. metal many people just not care about their future and goals, because they are really busy thinking how to get the most advance technology device and who is usining in where they go. many people do not take care about their personal life and after few years later when the affected would be them because they did not care about their future they would have nothing and the technnology every year change, and get new devices. People need to think about what is most important something else that is really important and needed or a device that in few months would be betters phone and other devices, because for example whe a phone just come out every one want to buy and the price is more than $1000 and after few monts the price is more lower and they have another new phone, it is in what people want to spend money and time, first think and later act after they know is the best.
Technology makes people to feel bad about themselves because now people believe everything that is posted in internet, only because some people said it ect. Other make their self look better in the phone and when they look their self in the mirror they hate their self, and sometimes people look other people in internet that they post picture they want to be like them and they star to despreviate their self and start to search in google how to change or do something they can not do it or does not work they get depress, stressful and tired of their life that sime search the easy way, that many people and doing in other country that is kill their self, so technology just affect people in many ways.
Technology affect people in a negative way because people spend too much time on techonology and life is just passing. Technology is taking over people, and into they get hurt with something or someone that they love they start to see that they was doing wrong, they get dissapoinment with themselves for being so stuped, people need to use less phone and spend more time with family and enjoy every second of life because life is just one and is really short. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
AFBC394080FC | Are you agree or disagree with the statement of Emerson about individuality?
I'm agree with the statement of Ralph Waldo Emerson, one example is because when you be yourself some people feel comfortable, but some doesn't but there is nothing more important than be yourself you don't know the things you can get done when you challenge you. And yes the world is going to take you down, is going to face you with things that will make you do wrong things, or change your mind like trying to be another person. But you has to face it don't give the rights to people to take you down. People when they see all the things you get done, they start to hating you. But you don't has to listen to then you dont' has to change your mind just because they are talking. Some people want to decide for you, i mean like for example; when you want to study a career but your friends, parents, etc they told you to study something you don't like, you dont has to listen to them you can make your own choice if you are a grow man you are going to do what you like, thats why you has to always be yourself,
doesn't matter the circumstance. You see me my father just left, he let me alone with my mom she work hard that i could be here, and i see that thats why i'm always try to be my self i try to work hard ever single day because the effort she did for me !bruh! is amazing. On my country the gangs shot you for no reason and i grow with my grandma and the gangs they live around us but all that i never change, i could ed be one of them but i grow with a really good education and didn't wasted.
I didn't pretend to be a person that was not me and as the author Ralph Waldo Emerson said "is accomplishment to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else"
Always be yourself don't change your mind, because life is hard nobody said life is going to be easy you has to work hard for your own things, to be someone in this life and don't listen to the world because the world don't want to see you grow or happy. Don't listen to it. Just trust on god and yourself, and you will see the the amazing things you can get done by your own. In conclusion, don't listen to anybody that is against your decision because that kind of person just want to hurt you. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
AFC600D922F6 | I agree because being yourself is very hard sometimes and feel a lonely. Today is in the world nobody like to be all by themselves but some people like to be themselves. If you being yourself you can able to do more work because nothing else to do and feel like board so let study something, work hard. How about your fun time go out with someone, you can't be work hard all the time because that is not a good experience. So I do sometime fun myself and be yourself It's doesn't means you can do any a good stuff. You can do something what is make you feel a happy all your life. don't feel strange yourself and being strong.
First, I like be myself sometime because that make me bring my own idea and also help me figure our myself. What is a good thing or what is a bad thing for me. That make me strong because I using my own bring and think twice myself before I do something. My first year was be American be myself without Family, I feel very sad, and I sad to myself I never want to be myself my life again. I want to go back where are I am came From, I don't want to be in American anymore because know language very important for me that time. I don't understand any English that time and I don't have any Friends. I still remember how hard the was being yourself and I never knew be yourself Will be that hard, Now I know.
Second, after couple years I make my own choose I wan to be myself but no more sadness. So what I did was no looked what other people do and people I ignore with Friends they're all together or family because that make me sad. I could't told you how bad that feel was for me and I relax everything will be fine, I take deep bread. Now I don't worry about be myself anymore because now I know that wasn't that bad after you use to and also, infect that make me a little bit more independent.
Third, Now I responsibility everything myself and be myself that make me diff rant. My last year was raft because my faster Family said to me you have to learn do stuff by yourself. I am so norvise because I can't do anything whiteout them so I have to learn be myself before turn eighteen. Now I did learn how to handle myself and take care of myself everything myself. responsibility for my work and thinking about my carrel. I never can thought I can do anything without them but I learn be myself first then I come independent. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
AFD325C9347D | What would happen if school offer the program to student that qualify for the program that only take three year of high school instead of the four years. Here are some examples, and reason why is a good idea for school to offer this types of programs.
Reason number one is that students that had A's and B's in the past years like middle school and the beginning of high school maybe qualify for the three year insted of the four year of high shool, because they are so intelligen that they not need the four years of high school.
Reason number two is that if they graduate from high school they may like to apply for a community service for there college aplication.
Reason number three is that some student don't have the money to pay for college so they may need a year to save some money to pay for college, or some student may not like college so they are only going to finish high school, and they are going straight to work, and the more experience you learnd form a jod the better it is so is a good idea to begin at a younger age.
So i think that the program that school offer to studen for them to take the opportunity to graduate early from high school is a good idea beacuse it will help them alot in there life. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
AFE6CAE937D8 | Generic_Name who is 17 , years old she is going to High school modays to fridays on sumer The school make a new rule to come three hours late on school but now the regular time is goint to be change, class we are going to finished five oclock , is not a big deal but she has to work every night in be a suport for her family , almost two year ago her sister do the same
her goals was to be a police officer in when the school make the desicion to come late are dreams in goals going down , letter her sister she move to new york ,in one week after she get merried right now she has a responsabilty to work because her parents can work because thet are young Generic_Name is a girl who is a exelent student a girl with great personality , right now if to conserve energy and resources , some buninesses adopted a four - day work week , by extending the day two hours of school is going to be students dreams in goals are going down a 90% of students of every :High school or college they not get a new change to be a excelent human in really hurd to think when yoo know a histoty when students lost semester because they are learning a new language ,a when the school do a new rule or or they change many things are peoples students lost evething , but if the conserbe energy not adopted a four - day work week school are not going to be exteding two hours because is going to be a big problen for every one .
First students missing school : for exanple my borfriend Generic_Name deside not going to High school , any more because days ago was missing some days is him continue like that he is going to be lost a year ,if was diffrent in the time was to long on school in he dont get support for him family is hurt alot if you dont have any one by your side in the reason is because he is 18 ,years old right now he has to work to pay rent bills an get a new change for him brother who now is a baby boy in for her mother who is not here also and other things , if the time to finished the school was not to long he has a opotrunity to continue on High school in go to college in be teaher of math that's how he love . , Another example is my cousing , he want to be a doctor but high school is not easay fo him because every morning hi has to take him brother to middle school in class should be star the same time to other school he not going to lost a semester in the year too in him is going to be a dortor who his mother after died tell him .My mother she get sickly for three months she make a decition , continue to going to the university in work was not a big deal for her do two things on the same time but her work was hurt because she finished almost eleven forty nine every day she not eat good , she was not doing homework months after lost her baby lost a semester with two weeks everything is going to be perfect is the hours of college was normal ,
Secondly 80% of students not do homework in they get a big problem for example Generic_Name how come to school because he want to be a good person on life now he is learning english we have a big different when you dont not a language because he het bullyng for other students in school because he dont speak english, when the principal know what's going ,he deside a new decition the class should be long , for one semester but junior get alot bullyng he deside one day died he write a note in say thaaks for your help principal but i can do this any more he died if the boss of the school be stop the bullyng a speak with the other students junior now should be here .Another example is PROPER_NAME was a normal girl one days the office send a mesagge , we are change many things this week for example we dont have school on mondays but right now we have school on saturdays a problem now was she has to walk every day to go the school in on saturday in the night we cant walk to late on the stree because she has to work after that one night she was tired to walk every day in she stop in a corner five minutes letter see four boys when she walk close around the boys they abuse her for boys if you think that s going to happen in your life you get mad because in the rules not changes every school college is going to be fine .
inconclusion many teens change rules in they things they changes for somethings better but is not true we have to tell to every people to want to conserve energy and resourcess , some buninesses they can not adopted a four - day work week we dont care if we have benefits we need to change many things to have a great world. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
AFF314E99BF2 | seeking multiple ideas can be good because...
they can give you good ideas and you can see that people think different.
you will be able to have multiple choices to pick from and make the right decision.
you can even meet new people while your at it and also they can help you see it in another perspective.
Are you having a hard time deciding something? if you are you should talk to other people and see what they think its good to see what others think because, they can help you decide and give you great ideas,for example i had a friend and she would help me decide all the time and she would give out great ideas and i would pick the right decision with her help.
Also they can give you ideas and you can decide what is the best one and you can make the right decision and see what is the best idea and you can make the right decision not just that but you can see how others think and they might think different from how you think for example if you think that chocolate is better and your friend thinks strawberry is better then you should give a try and see if you made the right decision by picking strawberry instead of chocolate or she might be wrong and chocolate is better then strawberry but you will never know in till you try it.
Perhaps they can help you see things in another perspective,also you can make new friends while your at it,but not just that you can share your ideas as well and they can see what you think and help you out if your stuck and they will tell you if your doing something wrong and help you out and see it in another perspective,you might think that going to the movies is better and your friend might think that staying at home and watching a movie is better and she starts telling you why its better and you end up staying home and watching a movie because the reason she gave you where good.
You should give new things a try to because you will never know if its a good idea or not just ask your friends on what you should do during the weekend and they will help you and you will be able to try new things and take new ideas from that and its also nice to talk to someone and share ideas it will keep your mind off things and you wont be as stressed because you will have someone helping you.
those are the reason i think you should be seeking ideas not just from one person but from more and i think you should give it a try and see how it goes and hopefully it goes well because it works for me so give it a try hopefully i helped you see things in another perspective. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
AFFCB27334C9 | Have you ever felt board, or idle? Thomas Jefferson ones wrote," Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." I strongly agree with Thomas, because when I'm feeling idle. I intend to get sad, or depressed, therefore never be idle.
Theres a lot of ways you can stay active and not be board out of your mined, for example; over the summer my Dad took me to work with him, as a carpenter. But not every one can do that, therefore here's some ideas for you: go to a gym, go for walks ,or get a job.
Going to the gym might be a big comment, but its very healthy physically and mentally, you'll start feeling good about your self, maybe even start looking good too. this is my first idea in how to stop being idle.
My second idea is walking. Walking was something that helped me fined my peace, just walking around admiring the world, breathing in the fresh air; now i'm not saying to do it alone maybe with a friend or two, or maybe walk your dog. pretty must enjoy the beautiful world that gods given us.
My third and last idea is to find a job. Working with my Dad has given me a lot of money, I bought nice shoes, cloths and bought my family things too, but it wasn't just about the money. Working with my Dad really has given me another way to look at life, gave me a reason to change my ways and made me see that the real life isn't easy. And its amazing to see the building now, to see how much its improved from last time i was there and now its just like a maze to me.
This is why I believe its never okay to be board, or idle. Because just imagine all the things you can get done, therefore, this is was i think Thomas Jefferson right when he said," it is wonderful how much you can get done if we are always doing." | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B03AB7243AE5 | Millions of kids graduated last year when taking the program for early graduation, this program helps student to only take three years in high school. Most of the parents, students, and the teachers like to see students graduate early in high school, and this programs are mostly in the U.S.A. Student who graduated early will have a lot of opportunity to finish school and have a better life, most summer school lesson can also help students to take less classes at school. It is a good idea for student to take only three classes in high school in order to graduate and go to college, back those days my mom use to tell me a story, about the opportunities we have in we that most people don't really care about. She used to tell me a story about her in high school, how hard it is to graduate, most people can take five to six years in order to graduate and go to college. And most people did- en make it to college, cause they don't have the money to pay and it really hard to find a job in Africa. Student drop out of school just because they don't have the opportunity we have right now to graduate in high school. Most people will say it like this, "Genius without education is like silver and mine". People are brave, strong, smart, last learning, and well educated but they just don't use it and decided to let it go. This mostly happened to people who have the opportunity to do the right things but decided to let it go, and my gran mother use to tell me a story. If you ready to help yourself, God will be ready to help you, if you not trying to help yourself, God will not going to help you. All this opportunity we have are all helpful in many ways, taking three years in high school is very help full for most of the students, reasons why graduation early in high school is better than waiting for four years are.
first reason, the three years of high school helps student to graduate early and move on to the next level, helps student to finish school early and have a better life.
Second reason, helps students learn faster and makes it easier for college, it also helps student to take less classes in high school.
the last but not the least, summer school programs can help students understand better and easier than normal classes because, less distraction from other students and having opportunities to ask questions you don't understand.
Student must take this programs very security, so you will be able to graduate early in high school or a small leak can sink a great ship. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B046D31B68F0 | Dear principal,
If you don't like to leaving in a place were there is lots of people that litter then I think you would be able to tell some friends to do some community service is a very good idea because it helps keep your town or city clean. I think that we should start to do community service because a lot of people litter and it is really bad for our oceans and if we clean litter up we will keep oceans clean and it will be save for the fish.
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B04F96DEDE6B | Once someone told me," Focus on your goals, and keep focusing until you reach them, it does not matter if it takes long, at the end of the day it will worth it ". I think it is a good idea if you identify the carrer that you want to take and start getting into it at a young age, because you will have more time to know and study about it and how it works, and it is gonna be more easy. It could be difficult if at the end of the day you are about to gratuate and you do not even know what career do you wanna take.
One of the reasons why you have to decide what career you wanna take by the time you enter high school is that, you will focus in all your classes, but more in those classes that are related with your career, and you progress in school is gonna increase, and also your grades. You will be busy in a productive way doing things that will benefit you in school, because if you really wanna reach your goals you will not have chance to waste your time,
which is a good thing, instead doing nothing, bad thing, or only in video games. As how we are today, many teens are leaving school because maybe they think they found a better thing to do or because they took a bad decition.
But for those who really wanna be someone in the future and go for it, will have more opportunities, like Univercities credits and in their future job by dedicating their interest in school and doing their best.
Another reason is that your knowledge is gonna increrase, which is also a good thing, because you will learn a little bit about everything. In any career, you have to know about everything, even if it is a little bit, but you will learn new interesting things every days, things that you did not know before, and your interest in those things will drive you to search more about it and make you feel that you wanna know more and more about anything you are learning. All those are benefits that you can get by dedicating your interest in school.
In conclution, I think all students should have an idea of what career they wanna take, by the time they enter high school , so their courses of study in high school can help them when they are ready to go to the University, to not be difficult learn about it. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
B067F0CBE15C | Having students take courses during the summer to graduate in three years isn't a great idea. The reason why I think it isn't a great idea is, students might need more credit to graduate, some students have jobs during the summer and could feel stressed workng and going to school at the same time, and students like to take a year break off school.
First reason why I think it isn't a good idea is because, students might need more credit and need to take more classes. if they where to want to do it but didn't have enough credit they would have to double up there classes and doing that, can make them feel stresssed and pressured. Three years of high school isn't enough, in four years a student can join a club, play a sport and have regular classes and not feel over whelmed, and doing all that can make he/she look good when looking at what college to go to. But if a student wanted to do all that while having way to much classses could make them feel over whelmed.
Second reason why, students have jobs when they start high school. We all people like to have money in are pockets and students get there money by working during the summer. But how can a student have a job and go to school, it gives less time for the student to do his hobi which is working. In the summer a student wants to work to save up for a car or for college, it's the only time a student doesn't have to worry about school, they could just be focusing on saving up to go to a good college.
Last but not least, at the end of the school year students like to go ahead and go to college but some might want a break to make money or think about what they want to do or just want a break of school. Having a break gives you time to work full time somewhere and save up for something you need like, a car, a house, or money for colllege. It takes time for you to be successful in life which is why you should take things slow and not make yourself stressed and tired doing everything fast.
In conclusion, students who graduate in three years instead of four years, isn't a great idea. Students might need more credit to graduate, some might have jobs during the summer and if they where to take classes they could feel stressed, and some students like to take a year break from school and would want to be working making money for them to buy needs. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
B06DEBFFD2A8 | Some may say you should seek for guidance; however i believe that taking your own path is really important and self taught. For example taking your own path is like concurring the world. enjoying what life brings and challenges to succeed Ur journey . you can be taught to be strong , no fear ever given fearless and a strong independent person. life can bring you so many surprises and you will fight and get what you truly deserve.
Taking your own path not seeking for guidance is a really important thing to do and accomplish. Its a wonderful thing its like doing the impossible ; never thought life choices crazy things that will change Ur life for the best . At the end of the road just no u did the impossible life changing,spectacular,amazing choice. Everybody will doubt you hate you tell you that you cannot do it that you wont last; but when you do it just no u achieved the impossible.
Taking your own path is setting you up[ for life things you have never done. being ahead of everyone knowing where the journey will take you. knowing that you have done that many have not is breathe taking. truly knowing where you want to go is all that u need at the end life will take you where will best deserve it . You can get where you hallways wanted to be.
There for i believe that taking Ur own way and doing it alone and succeeding it is the best way to Ur journey. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
B07B4B4428AB | I will always remember the first time I walk outside to enjoy the outdoors view. I could see the nice green grass moving side to side, smell the fresh air, and see the pretty nice tall green trees giving a nice long shadow to the ground. I can tell people were having a lot of fun by their smiles on their face, and by running up and down the field. I can see people are having fun it made me want to have fun too. I remember the first time I went to the Community Park, then I went to the State Park, and also I went to the National Park.
The first reason, is when I went to the the Community Park for the first time. I could see this big blue, and yellow playground. Also I could see people running up and down at the Community Park having so much of fun. There was also other people playing tag with other people at the park. Lastly, the Community Park had so many fun equipment to play. Like the swing, slides, wall climbers and the monkey bars. There were a lot of people there so we had to wait for our turn to use every equipment they had at the Community Park.
Second reason, is when I went to the State Park for the first time too. I could remember walking under the trees with a nice wind blow to my face in a nice shadow made by the trees. Also I kept walking and I saw a lot of animals that were not attacking people. Animals that I saw were Frogs, Turtle, Fish, Lobsters, Birds, Snakes, Deer, and Ducks all over the park. Lastly, I saw their was a big river where people were fishing. Then Other people were swimming in the river water because it was a very hot day outside at the park.
Last reason, is when I went to the National Park for the first time also. The park has a lot of fun things that we can go look at and visit animals at the park. The animals they can go and visit are Monkeys, Snakes, Giraffes, Turtles, Tigers, Pandas, Birds, Frogs, Crocodiles, Gorillas, Sea Lions, Donkeys, Horses, Lions, Lizards, Iguana, and Elephants. Lastly, the National Park has food stands were we can go and buy food if we get hungry at anytime. We can take brakes if we get tired of walking in the National Park and sit down.
In conclusion, enjoying the outdoors is very fun because we can go and visit a lot of different Parks. I will never forget the first time I went to the Community Park, State Park, and the National Park because it's a very fun way to enjoy the outdoors day. I will never forget playing at the Community Park playground that day. I will never forget walking at the State Park river that day. Lastly, I will never forget looking at does pretty animals at the National Park that day. | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
B083862AF3B4 | There are many students that has the possibility to take class at home. The students that take class at home are benefit because they don't need to leave from home, they can stay in home if are sick, and they can't be absent, because they always stay in home.
There are many reasons for explain that takes classes from home is a good idea, this are some of them:
First, the students that take class at home don't need to leave from home, nothing can detain take classes. The weather changes don't affect to take a class, if is snowing, raining or are a hurricane in the city.
The parents of the students that take class from home can be more unsuspecting, because they sons are in home, also this is benefit for the parents of students that take classes from home; they can be sure that nothing danger can be happen to they sons. The student don't have any excuses for be absent. This is good for the students because they at final a year has perfect attendance.
Second, the students that take class at home just can be absent, if they need to stay in home and don't take some class, they have the opportunity to explain to the teacher by text or just a call, then the teachers need to ask to your parents if is necessary don't take classes because you don't feels good. The students that take a regular classes in the schools can't do this because they need to be in the school everyday , if not in this case the correspondent sub school has the obligation to put absent in the class day.
Finally, the students that take class at home can't missing a class, they don't have the possibility to missing the bus or miss some useful for the school. The students can't forget the computer, pencil, notebook or other things that we use in school, because they have all classes online, this can be positive for the students that stay in home at care to they parents the student can't has some distractions that sometimes has in the school, like talk with any friend, use a inappropriate language to the teacher or don't pay attention, if can be some possibility to the student miss some class; they can take the missing class latter.
In conclusion, take a classes from home is a good choice because stay in home, do not have any absent if are sick, and don't missing class, are a good idea for take classes at home, the benefits that this have are good for parents and students that need to have more family time, or need to have more time with they sons. A reason that take classes in the schools take a big part time of students, this is a good choice because the students don't need go to the school just stay in home ,add that, this is a good choice for some students that need to stay in home, with they brothers or they parents. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
B08751C48DAB | Generic_Name
March 18 2019
Writting SOL Grade 8
Before, I would always like to try and play the guitar. My brother would always try and teach me, Everytime I hear the guitar, it makes me feel calmed. Also when I was in Elementary School, I used to live in Generic_City, VA. The school I used to go to was named Generic_School. In Generic_School I used to be in band, so I would play the flute. I always tried to play the flute. I would never give up in something that I like or something the was my passion. Though, later on in middle school, when I went to 6th grade, I got in chorus. Once I got in chorus I thought I would hate that class of chorus, but later on I noticed I cannot stop singing. I always like to sing along with music or people. I am glad that I got in chorus in 6th cause I found out myself what I like to do, and what I like to do is sing. Even though, what I still would like to do is learn how to play the guitar and the flute. Doubt I can learn, but I can always try to play hem or one of them.
Another, thing I like to do is workout/exercise. Doing workout/exercise relaxes me a lot and makes me forget about a lot of family problems. I used to be in boot camp. I was in bootcamp when i was in 7th grade then I in 8th but I had to quit for a very obvious and hurtful reason. That reason is that my keee cap is out of place. I was suppost to get surgery, but my mom dosen't have that type of money to pay the surgery. Now, all i do is take pills that my doctor is recommending me but i think they are making me worst but I take them cause I have too. Sometimes, they make my pain go away or they make my pain feel worst to the point where i fall in the floor. I don't really know what they are doing to me. Although I hope I get better by 9th grade cause I want to join the junior army that is at Generic_School. I always wished to a nurse or going to the army, thought sometimes I feel like if I go to the army I would get hurt real bad in there. Even if I worked as a nurse in a hospital, I don't think I would fit right in. I feel like i can disgusted easily but I still want to help people, but I doubt 'll fit right in. I don't think i'll have a great future. I can always try to get what i want all i gotta do is work hard, and ill be able to accomplish the future I want and i've been thinking of, i just gotta do the right thingand also at the right moment.
Hopefully one day everything I want to accomplish now that I can't do i hope I accomplish it in the future and i hope it turns out good too. The wishes i have of playing the guitar,flute, my knee cap getting better, joining the junior army, get in the actual army or just being a nurse I hope I can do all those in the future. I want a great big beautiful and wonderful future. I want to make my family be proud of me for once in forever. When all those have I accomplish by the future im going to look at the ones who would bully me or say things about me and just say what happened to you? I know for a fact if to accomplish those goals in the future they will become true. Some day ill be looking down at people who put me down even when I in a good place.
In the future i also want to play soccer or basketball in 6th and in 7th i sould love to play basketball. I woukld always go outside and go to a basketball court and takemy basket ball sometimes with some friends to play with or sometimes it used to be with my step dad. I have never tried playing soccer cause playing soccer looks hard to do but some say playing soccer isvery easy, thought it dosen't look like it. I have played with my brother before but i'm always scared that my brother is going to kick the ball too hard and accidentaly hit me. Hoping this summer i go to the store andbuy meself a soccer ball and a basket ball for the summer to go out and play. Maybe with my brother to play soccer or even to play basketball but i doubt so i don't even know. I'm not very good atr basket ball, but i sure can throw good in the hoops.
Also always wanted to be a professional coach in basketball but for that I need a lot of practice and me trying hard but I also want to focus in school. Though what i really suck in school is Math, Civics and Science and I don't know how to get better in those three claases i try too but I always fail and always get and F or a D. I don't know really how to bring my grades up in those three classes. Yet i still look fordward a amazing future that i probably cannot have. Even thought what I said, I always got to try on something that i want or else i cannot get it. That's why I always got to try on it. Hopefully bringing my grade up can help me on something cause i really need to bring up my grades i've been getting close too in other classes lately but in those three I can't. In the future I will just not now cause I can't jus try i can't say yes i can knowing i cannot at all. I wish i can ask for help but I am always scared to ask teachers in frony of everyone else so I leave teachers notes witch is ver y emberrassing but at least im trying to bring up my grade. I'm just trying to make my family proud for once in a while. I will not only make them proud cause i'll also make myself proud, and look up and thank god for helping and thank my dad that is in heaven that is right now watching me hopefully.
I have so many wishes and dreams in the future that I am looking fordward too, but i don't even know if i'll be abke to accomplish it and make it.
All im looking fordward too is to accomplish everything and make people happy and proud of me and im trying to be proud of myself and feel like myself for once in a while. All i gotta say is that, no one should give up on their dreams or on what they want to do cause i know everyone can do it and they accomplish there dreams, you can always make everythinmg right you just need the riht moment and need for us to be strong and do it. Never give up on big dreams like these. Everyone should try to make the best out of you. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
B0B703E881B7 | I think we should have phones in school only when we have free time on our own and when we are in class we should finish our assignment first and that's when we should have phones out. Including our music we would like to here it only when we are taking a test or we are doing an assignment quite and that you wont bother any people. If we abandoned the phones they would still not follow direction so why even try to abandoned them, that's why I say we should allow the school to have phones out in there free time and if they catch us with the phones they should not take them away. They should just say can you please put your phone away. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
B0CDBB24465F | The city council should adopt a 10 P.M wwekday and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers. Teenagers would be more responsible for themselves. They would have less risk to be out in the streets late night. Also, parents would stress less if they theyre child came home early. Eventhough it interferes with there young life.
Teenagers would get used to being home early. They would enjoy more time with there familys. Also, play video games with there friends online. Teenagers wouldnt miss out of dinner made by there family.
Teenagers would stay out of trouble. They could be stopped from doing bad late night and coming home. The teenagers parents would see them come home everyay and not have to worry about them. Teenagers would out of trouble from the police only if they dont pass there curfew.
For teenagers to actually go home before there curfew. Cops have to be involed and check the streets for teenagers roaming around after there curfew. If there are teenagers out in the street after there curfew, they should in trouble. It should be law for them to come home to there parents early and not be roaming around in the streets.
Adopting a 10 P.M weekday and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers would risk less trouble and deaths for them. Students would really benfit them for getting home early. If would benefit them for a job that they would have to get early too. Also, they would have time to do there homework or work they have to do. Finally, they would have time to spend with there faamily and see them again. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B0D627CB7309 | The American jazz legend Duke Ellington said "A problem is a chance for you to do your best." I believe that the meaning that this quote was trying to convey is that when we are faced with a problem it does not matter how challenging that problem is we must use it as a chance try our best. Sometimes a lot of things can happen unexpectedly but we must believe in ourselves that a problem could be an opportunity to try our best, it might also prepare us for bigger problems in the future. Although sometimes we might experience difficulties while trying to solve that problem in our lives we just have to keep on giving it our best to overcome it.
When we are faced with a problem it does not matter how challenging the problem is we must use it as a chance to try our best. Completing a group project, homework, or writing an essay are one of the few examples that can represent how sometimes it doesn't matter how big the problem is we must try our best. Finishing a group project, homework might seem as though it would be something that could be completed without difficulty it does take a bit of an effort for some people. However these people keep on trying because they want a good grade or don't want to fail class. This might apply to people that are still in school but being responsible and completing all of this work might prepare them for their future careers.
Sometimes a lot of things can happen unexpectedly but we must believe in ourselves that a problem could be an opportunity to try our best, it might also prepare us for bigger problems in the future. For example athletes, athletes sometimes sustain injuries while playing and have to recover. These injuries are not easy to recover from as it could damage a part of their body that could possibly prevent them from playing for some time. To overcome these problem athletes train a lot and use it as an opportunity to train and rest more to be in a good condition before finally playing with the rest of their team. These shows how sometimes you have to take advantage of something an use it as something to try your best on.
Although sometimes we might experience difficulties while trying to solve that problem in our lives we just have to keep on giving it our best to overcome it. Occasionally we encounter difficulties while trying to find the solution to a problem in our lives an example of this could be having to give a speech in front of a large audience. Some people t don't like speaking in front of a large group of people this can be a problem in their lives. These people have to be able to control their nervousness, something that could be hard to control. These people try hard to overcome a problem that is stopping them from doing certain things.
All of this examples represent how sometimes we're faced with problems that can be difficult to let go off. I think that the meaning of the quote is something important as it can apply to certain situations that are rather difficult. This quote shows us how sometimes there a certain problems in our lives that can be very difficult but we should try hard and do our best. I believe that there a lot of problems that we can learn from because sometimes while trying to solve those problems we make mistakes and we can learn form those mistakes and move on. I agree with this quote "A problem is a chance for you to do your best" I think its describes how sometimes we need somethings to happen in life that will makes us want to try harder to achieve our goals. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 5 | 5 |
B0DFC5E93591 | First i think what if someone have a agree and you try to do something what you have already for masterd you will never grow because you garren this so take not bored you have this will never living for experience.
For example you have a draem never grow and complite this agree after living this is my opponion.
Then you are disagree in do you not wants take your will what you have ready for masterd if you try to do this or try to do something that is bad for you you need taken this will never grow someone becuase you garren in do that in its for experience. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
B106E3896C56 | well to start off i do agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson on what he wrote because in my postion for me it is true like he said "unless you try to do somehting beyond what you have already done"
you need totry and see how it works out and if you are succesful with it then you master it even more bigger to become even more bigger so that is why i agree with what Ralph Waldo wrote.
one reason why i agree with Author Ralph is beacuase it is true once you mastered somehting you can also do something beyond like bigger. so that is one reason why i agree with what he wrote second reason why i agree with Ralph Waldo when he says "unless you try to do something" which i think its true if you try to do something and u make a mistake you can keep trying like lets say you go to collage and you failed 3 class and you give up which its not a good idea because you will make mistakes in life not all the time but sometimes so that is what i think when he says "unless you try to do something" means like you at least need to try once and see how it goes. thrid reason is he says you will never grow and what he is trying to say is that if you master somehting beyond that what you have already acomplished and you go more bigger then you will grow because you did somehting on your own and bigger so that is why i think there is a thrid reason.
These are all the reasons why i agree with waht he wrote and why i agree with him like i said you ned to try to bigger things in life and become more succesful and get more better things have what you want like buy a car a house and go on vaction with your famliy and like i said for reason two i said if you try and make a mistake you need keep on trying and become a better person. so that is what i think about what he wrote and why i agree with him. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
B110268BBFEC | Albert Schweitzer the philosopher,physician, and humanitarian is great at motivating people by saying, "Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing. What he means from that is everyone behavior is different. When it comes to behavior anybody could act different. behavior influences some people. when it comes to influence it often affects a person or events. Albert Schweitzer is a very successful man and he probably accomplished that by having influence in him self and believing on what he is capable of. Say one day i was having a rough day and somebody asks me, "hey, do you want to know something" or if they are being very annoying your attitude and behavior is going to change into something bad. Yes behavior could change somebody attitude and that's not good and that's what he's trying to say. Albert Schweitzer is setting good examples for people who struggle and people who really needed to hear his example.
Everything that Albert said in that quote is very true. Always setting good examples are a good and great way to influence somebody in many ways as what he just told us in his quote. Albert Schweitzer probably learned in the past and maybe thats what he's trying to tell us to watch our future that is ahead of of us in time. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B18BEE398BAD | For do yourself in the world is not contantly change tou only need to be yourself if not import that pople say and reflective,but your self in other peolpe and maybe she or he capture sonty to you and gif to understand they not be to change for nobody.
For some reason I think they I need to be only one person in the world the first reason is not necesary to change nothin of me., The 2 is they i never be change in my personality., The 3 reason I never change because I like such and hoe I am and I think the nobody can force because I like many thing.
Reason 1. Because the world need to be eqaul for all and is necesary to everyone accetp such and how I am.,Reason 2. For more they people attempt don't me change because I accetp my personality., Reason 3. Because I like help people wen they need my help and because I know they I have a good heart.
If tou treat to be another person in this world is bacause you these insecure bay if self and if you not accetp how you are never how you wan the people accetp how human. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
B18CF330D3CD | One thing I would like to accomplish is to lose weight for three big reasons. The first big reason is to do it for my health. The second reason is that I want to inspire other people that might be overweight and give them hope that they can lose weight. My Third and final reason is that losing weight is just better for me in general it would boost my self esteem and help me be not so self conscious.
To better explain my first reason I will talk more about it. The reason was that losing weight would be better for health. You see bad things can happen to you when you are overweight such things as diabetes that is a sickness that is a result of being overweight. Some overweight people find it difficult to walk or to do something simple because they are carrying all that extra weight on them. In fact i sometimes find it hard to do exercises in gym class that most people would find easy to do. There are many heath risks when it comes to being over weight and thats one of the reasons I want to lose weight.
The second reason I want to lose weight is because I would like to inspire other people that are overweight to try and lose wight. If I lost weight that could encourage other people to lose weight as well because they can say to themselves a person who was were I am lost weight and I can do the same. I have a saying it's "when you help someone you help everyone" an example for that saying would be if I helped someone want to lose weight they might feel the need to help other lose weight. So I hope that I could influence a sort of butterfly effect starting with me inspiring someone to lose weight and that person inspiring someone else and so on and so on. If I lose weight knowing that I lost weight not only helping myself but also others I would be proud of myself.
My third and final reason to lose weight is that it would be better for my self esteem and help me be not so self conscious. If you have any insecurities than you know what is like to want to get rid of those insecurities. One of my many insecurities is my weight and I think that if I got rid of that insecurities it would better my self conscious and make me think good about myself. I just plainly think that I would be better off losing weight because I would think better of my self.
In conclusion one thing I want to accomplish in life is lose weight. There are several more reasons I could list but those are my main and biggest reasons I want to lose weight. I want to lose weight because it's healthy,because I want to inspire people to do the same,and because I want to boost my self esteem. Losing weight is the one thing I want to do in life and helping others is also something I love doing. | 5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 |
B1A435B54D4A | It is not a good idea that the students commit to a career at a young age, because it will be to complicataed and difficult for them to take high school classes and their college classes at the same time , however if their high school are select to guide them toward a specif careeer let them take similar classes for example first week high school classes, and second week college classes that way they will not struggle in both differents courses and they can graduate with good grades . Also, it would be a good opportunitie for them to get done their career at a young age and start making money from what they are apassionated on it farthermore, some young people are interest in work on what they like and this could be a great apportunitie for them to commit to a career and start workin on what they have been apassionated on it and get a job that it would be able to made their families proud of them.
Commit a career at a young age give people the responsability to help their families and support them and with the time people at a young a age get more mature in life ,inorder for people to have a great future in life they should take their own responsabilities and learn from their mistake and with the past of time people learn how important life it's ;while people are gettting more elavate then others peple start to descriminate others who are down don't let people wash your head
,always be you because ,today you are up and tomorrow no body no it don't let appearance cheat on you.
Parents have to give support their child with the decision to commit a careeer at a young age, because that's what they want; don't be desagree with them because the only thing that they want is to be independent and lot of mothers don't let their childs be an adult; farthermore, mother's have to impulse their child to make their own decisions and let them learn from their mistakes.
If their sons/daughters go to work or finish their careers far away from their homes it will hurt to their families, understand they're been more adults them your litles baby's no more it doesn't matter if they are your adorations let them be free.
In conclusion,people are allow to make their own decisions and learn from their mistakes and next time they can make better decisions to allow them to choose the better opportunities people put on their life inorder to know what's right and wrong and wich make them to be more responsibles and mature in life.
Many have come to realize that life doesn't always is pink color ,people have to make their best effort doesn't mater if you fall down or make mistakes ,wake up and do it again until you do it right. | 4 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
B1AFACE6704E | I agree with Michelangelo's statement as I have found through experience that it benefits me more to set high expectations and not reach my goal, rather than settling on a low goal and achieving it. When setting high goals, I find that I learn more and progress my abilties further than I do with a lower goal. This is because setting high goals requires confidence, challenges, and pride.
Firstly, hard work is required to achieve high goals, and requires confidence. Confidence involves having trust and believing that you are capable of accomplishing something. I have found that when I set high goals, I feel more confident in my abilities. With lower goals however, my confidence is lower as I settle for the easier path and do not trust myself to do better. With a higher aim, my confidence motivates me to not give up. I tend to try harder, and always believe in myself. For example, at school, I had to choose whether I wanted to try out for the varsity tennis team or remain in the club team. The varsity team was a higher reach, and required confidence in my abilities for me to try out. The club team was a lower reach, as I knew that I could simply continue with it. I decided to try out for the varsity team, and was confident in my abilities. I practiced hard and did not give up. Despite not making it onto the team, I found that I actually greatly improved my abilities through the confidence I had gained, and tried harder than I had ever before. I managed to progress my skills, and was able to play more confidently on the club team and excel. Therefore, setting high aims requires confidence, which is a very beneficial characteristic to have in life.
Secondly, setting a high goal indicates a challenge. It will be more challenging to attempt to aim high rather than aiming low, yet this will also prove more benefits. With a challenge, I tend to be more motivated as I want to prove my capabilites. I try harder, and in return get further. Even if I fall short of my high aim, I tend to get further than I would have if I had settled with a lower aim. With lower goals, there is no challenge, and so once the aim is achieved any effort stops. Learning is limited to that low expectation, and will not be able to go beyond. For example, in my high school career, I have always struggled with picking between two types of courses: honors or academic. Honors is the more challenging course, which requires more work and effort and would pose as more of a challenge. Academic however, requires the bare minimum and is easy to succeed in. In the honors course, I would be setting my aim high yet might not get the grade I want; yet, in the academic course, my aim would be low and I would most likely get the grade I want. After hard consideration, I decided to opt for the honors course. This course may be a challenge, yet would allow me to learn more. I enjoyed the challenge, and found that it motivated me to try harder to try and accomplish my goal. Even if I fell short of my ideal grade, I was proud to have tried my best and felt that I learnt so much more. The course benefited me more than the academic course would have, despite not receiving the grade I hoped for. Therefore, challenging oneself with a high aim allows for more flourishing and encourages more learning. Overall, setting a high aim will pose more benefits.
Thirdly, pride accompanies setting high goals. When setting low aims, I feel that it is easy to achieve the goal. However, with high aims, it is more challenging to achieve the goal, and so I feel proud of myself for attempting it. Pride is a very important characteristic, as it increases self esteem. With a higher self-esteem, I tend to try harder and feel more powerful with my abilities. I am more likely to learn and improve upon my abilities, which overall allows me to succeed. For example, in high school I had the opportunity to write a poem and submit it into a writing competition. This was a high aim, as the goal was to win. I felt very proud of myself for taking the time to write and challenge myself with this competition, and ended up writing my favorite piece yet. I submitted my writing, and did not win. However, I felt very proud of myself for having tried so hard and was able to learn and flourish in my writing abilities. Now, I am more likely to sign up for competitions, even if I do not win, simply because I enjoy the challenge and feel that I am able to learn. I feel proud of myself for taking on these challenges. Therefore, setting high goals emmits pride, which can prove very beneficial in life.
In conclusion, I agree with Michelangelo's statement. Setting high aims and falling short can bring so many more positive effects than setting low aims and accomplishing them. This is because setting high aims requires confidence, challenges, and pride. These characteristics are very important in succeeding, and can encourage learning and progression in abilities. Through setting low goals, learning becomes stagnant. In order to flourish and continue learning, setting high goals is crucial, even when not achieving the goal. | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 |
B1BF25C4C28B | My mom always tell me " keep going until you reach your goals, never stop".
I believe that if we are always doing something we can accomplish more than we can imagine.
First of all, you should never give up on something, it might not work the first time but if we are working consistently on it, one day it will became a reality. For example, when I started 11th grade I was not doing well in Chemistry. I remember each day getting into the class and always starting with a warm-up about moles. The teacher gave us about ten minutes to solve the problems because they were easy, however; I always got almost all of them wrong. Almost all my classmates knew how to solve them, so I was too embarrassed to ask question in front of the class. My friend who's also in Chemistry, understood how to do those problems and much more about chemistry, so I asked her to help me. With her help
I was able to do the problems on my own because she taught step by step on how to do them. As a result, my grades improved a lot. If I'd decide to just let it passed I would've never been able to see how far I could have gotten get if I always keep trying.
Second of all, you should always go as far as you can, never stop at on point just because you think is worthless or you're are not going to make it. For example, the women who's my manager at a fast food restaurant she started as a employee. Most of the coworkers told her that it was going to be challenging for her to be a manager .They were trying to make her stop doing something she wanted to do for her future, they told her to just stay there and see what happens next. Instead, of listening to what people were saying, she worked really hard and accomplish a lot more than she could be able of. If you really want to make something happen, you should always have to work for it, and not think it will just happen as a miracle.
Third of all, some people may argue that doing something over and over again will never work, however; many people are able to prove that this statement is not true. For example, in a TV show about a girl who was always working toward getting into collage failed many times, but she never gave up. Because of her hard work and desire to keep working no matter what, one day she got accepted into a really privileged collage. By always doing something and never giving up is the key to accomplish everything.
To conclude, in order to get something you should never stop working for it. Most celebrities and rich people are where they're now because they always are doing something to make their dreams true and if at one point they had stopped I don't think they would've been successful. This world is full of opportunities but only those who always are working and never stopping are able to take advantage of it. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
B1C410876D33 | Churchill consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm, he said that because he wants to animate people to not be shy of anything and I'm agre with that.
Some say Churchill go from failure to failure without loss enthusiasm because sometimes people feel shy when they are doing somehing that they don't want to do, like me. I'm so shy when I have to do presentations, I don't feel confortable. But we have to get out our fears, that are killing us to not do what we have to do. People sometimes said that they going somewhere but they said that they don't want to go alone because he/she feels weird, like if you are new in this country, they tell maybe to their cousins to go with him/her.
People should be agree with Churchill statement about the important role that failure play in the pursuit of success because that makes you feel successed and that makes you to be a good person. Actually, Churchill said that because he want to people to not loose their enthusiasm in something that they want and that is a good choose.
People should not be agree with Churchill statement about the important role that failure play in the pursuit of success because I think people don't want to do want Churchill said in the statement and they are not going to follow the statement . Actually, people is not agree because people think that is not importat statement for them and thats why people are not agree with the statement.
In conlusion, people should be agree with Churchill statement because he don't want to people to loose their enthusiasm, that's hy people are agree with the Chuchill important statement because they feel success. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
B1D135A74E3D | Mr. manager i want to explore certain occupation through internships and shadowing i read that you are given the opportunities to student to explore a certain occupation;I want to learn about how became a teacher i like this profession and i think this is my opportunities to discover all of the things about this profession.
One of the reason is because i want to help children in a school and teach all of the things that they need to know for their future .
I can teach to parents that parents want finish a career and they want to finish and have a diploma so they can have a better job for that reasons is what i want to be a teacher so i can help people with education this is why i hope you can give me this opportunities, because i want to learn all the thing that i needed to this profession.
One example why i chose this profession is because when i was a child i see my parents they want to help me when i have homework but they dont know a lot of thing because they not have the opportunities to go a school if i can be a teacher i want to teach that kind of people i hope you can give me this opportunities. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
B1E1608C016D | 'Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.''-Churchill once said this phrase during WW2 to tell his people that it didn't matter how many battles Britain was going to lose but that they were going to win the war. Personally I do agree with Prime Minister Churchill many times on my life I have fail, and fail again but I got up because I knew that there was a good price at the end. Humans now at days think that life is all about planing the future, and they all just trying to avoid problems, trying to live only winning but to reach success there must be a long journey of lost battles, of big problems but you must stay put because it does not matter how many times you fall you most get up again, and again.
My Dad once told me ''Always try never give up''. Back in 2014 it was my first day on the soccer academy
I been playing soccer as a defender all my life but this time it was my first time training in such a good team I started training every day make some friends too. A few days later the first game came I was not on starting line up or on the bench I wasn't even call for the game I was upset but I though that it was because I was new in the team, or the coach didn't know me well. The next day during practice my coach call me out and told me if you wanted a spot on the team you need to work harder after that day I knew I needed to start training more, going to the gym more often, and I start eating more healthy a few days later during practice I started seeing results I was getting stronger, faster, and skillful a few weeks later I got called for the teams fourth game but I was not in starting eleven I was sitting on the bench the all game I was upset I though I was failure once more but I never gave up and the next day I was back practice, eating more healthy, going to they gym more often. Halfway during the season one of the the starting defenders left the team and I knew it was my chance I started and I play all the game and I didn't just prove my coach that capable more importantly I prove my self. Later during the season in one of the last games in one play I dislocated my arm and that meant that I was out for the rest of the season. After three long months of recovery after was heal I started once again training harder, eating healthy, going to the gym more often getting ready for the next season. beginning of 2015 that season I was chosen as team captain and I played all the games all that hard work was worthy at the end.
It dosen't matter how many times I failed I never lose my enthusiasm because in life we are going to have many failures and we will feel life given up but we most get up and keep going it doesn't matter how many times we lose a battle our main goal must be win the war because just like Churchill failed again, and again but at the end he won the war with his people I also failed in my team again, and again but I won my own war at the end. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
B1E8A95B0939 | One thing I would like to acomplish in the future is to play guitar and learn form people.
Its a beautiful instrument and you can learn from people. It can give you a possiblity of becoming somone known in the music industry.
Plaing guitar can give you a job in the music industry. You can play for a band in concerts or write people songs. One thing I would like to do is be finacial stable playing guitar. I would aslo like to play background music in a movie it sounds be nice to get paid for somthing you like doing. In total playing guitar or any other instrumnent can give you a job.
I would like to meet people with talent. Meeting pople that are intrested plaing guitar or having the same goals I do. I would like to find someone that can help me achive myh goals in the music industry. Also I want to teach people who want to learn how to play guitar. All in all meet talented people around the world.
This is something that is more likely to happen after traveling and playing in the music industry is to teach people how to play guitar. Teaching people around the world would seem nice. I would aslo like teaching at a school I want people to learn how to play guitar ,and I also want to learn from them. I would like to learn diffrent styles and techniqes overall I want to teach people who are intrusted in learing .
In cunclusion I think guitar is a good instrument to play. Its a dream I have to become a professional guitarist .There many talented people I would like to meet. In total playing guitar as a job and traveling and meeting new people is something I would to do in the future. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 2.5 |
B204869FA146 | Is technology a positive or negative effect on human life? Technology is a negative effect on all human life because it is a limitation on communication. With technology there is no talking to others, so you become socially awkward. You would not be able to talk infront of a crowd and you do not go out to meet new people.
People become socially awkward by not having the practice to communicate with others. You can not spend the rest of your life shopping online hiding from people. People who do not socialize hide their face when speaking, they can not even order food without getting shy. It is sad how the world is relaying on technology to do everything for them. Something that is amazing is having someone to talk to in person. You would be able to see their emotions and feel their energy when you are talking to them. People are not their just to listen but to also give advice to you. I do not think technology does the same. It does not ask how was your day or how are you feeling because it is not human it is a robot.
When you do not talk to enough people in your life you start to become shy. You will start to realize that in almost every job you need to talk in front of a crowd of people. Even if you can not do that you will have to because that is part of your job just to communicate. That is why in school they start to teach you at a very young age how to communicate. Teachers asign presentations for the students to get comfortable talking to others. Practice is the best way to handle talking to others because talking through the phone and in real life are two different things. When talking on the phone you do not need to see the person you are talking to or you can even just hang up. But in real life you have to learn how to start a conversation with someone and keep the conversation going.
People do not go out to find new friends. Yes, it is awkward going up to someone and saying, do you want to be friends. But that is where it all starts by making one friend you have achived a lot because now you have a friend that you can talk to and not feel alone. You can not stay at home just being online. You should ask your friend do you want to go watch a movie or go eat. That is better then staying at home a playing games all by yourself. Yes, you can talk with your friends and play games at the same time but it is also important to change things up a little bit. Just once in a while find something else to do rather than sitting at home. You can do a sport. You communicate a lot when playing a sport. Being at home you are just surounded but technology and you would never really get away from it if you do not try. Another thing: making friends on socail media is not the same as in person. There might even be a chance you never meet the person you met online or might not even be the person you thought they would be in person.
In conclusion even though technology is a great way to communicate with others that are long distance. It is still important to communicate face to face. Even if it is just for a couple of minutes you should still have someone to talk to. So that later on in your life if you get a job that involves you talking to a crowd you would not be scared. Also going out once in a while is not bad. You should not just stay at home playing games with your friends asked them do you want to go for a walk then you could talk to them in person. It is always a good thing to stay away from technology just somethings. There are other things that you can do even alone. You can read a book, sketch and color, or even just have a nice relaxing walk just to think. Technology should not stop you from having a good life and communicating with others. Just remember technology to some people is everything but to you it should not be. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
B2055DB7B29E | Some people believe that the source of true self-esteem is achievement. This is true because achievement is the key to success in your life. Achievement can give you compassion to follow and can give you more opportunity and success in your future.
To follow and make the dream come true, we need the compassion, so achievement can be the compassion for you. Some students was success because they made the achievements and they follow it. They knew that achievement could made them success and helped them to accomplish their work. Also, the achievement can give you many advice to improve yourself. Many advice can be from the failure to succes to get that achievement. It's not just help you in the current, the achievement also help you in the future.
Although achievement can be the the new door to help you reach your dream, it's can be your destination. The achievement can give you more opportunity and success in your future. Microsoft always find the employees have good achievements such as prizes, advance diploma to work for them. We can see that if we have achievement, you can get any job you want.
Also, the achievement can make you proud and feel confident to accomplish your work. It's can help you easy to focus your work. As the result, achievement is the road, the key to help you success.
While it is true that the achievement is the source of self-esteem, we must remember that we need to praise to make the achievement. Every achievement come from your work you feel confident, so you can get the achievement easily.
At the end,achievement is the source of self-esteem because it's can give you the compassion and the opportuniry in your future. We need to improve that everyday to improve your self-esteem. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
B2123357B114 | People have said "positive attitude is the key to success in life". I competely agree with the statement because the person would have a positive mindset even going through hard time in their life. They won't be giving up on their self. I belive without being positve a person would be depressed or being negative about their self.
I belive if you want to be successful in life you gotta belive in yourself. You gotta bring yourself up when feeling down. A negative attitude won't get you no where. I understand that sometime life problem can be difficult, but you gotta keep being positive. Don't let yourself get to a negstive stage beacuse you won't be anvoidable to accomplish your dream.
In life being a negavtive person isn't a good solution if you to be success in life. A person with a negative mindset would have bed thought in their mind. For example" you can't do this" or " just give up on life" . you won't have enough confidence to accomlished your goal. If you are a negative person then you should get some help or go talk to someone help. So, you can become a better positive person.
A positive attitude help you to be something in the future. It's give you happiness and make life easier. You won't be upset thinking " did i do this right " or " am i good enough ". Also, with a psitive mindset you will want to keep trying unitl you make it. when you a positive person ; people would want to be around you. You will have the best confidence you need to rech your goal.
Life isn't a wonderful place sometime but if you want to be successful in life have self-confidence,
be a positive person,and at least try to bring yourself up when you have negative mindset. Also, without giving yourself hope you will get no where in your life. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
B23BDDB4B5FA | Community Service??
Dear principle,
I would like to help in the community service group. I think it is very important for us as student's to help in the community service. It is important because we need to show that we care for our community and world. Some people say that it is a waist of time to be helping the community and the world they think that that's why their are people to work and take the trash out and stuff like that. But we cant leave other people that work all day and all week when they are tiered and want to rest to be picking our left overs!! Some people are eating at the park, mall, store, etc. and they think that when they are eating they could just through their rappers and some food on the ground and not pick it up they live it their so others can pick it up for them and i think that is WRONG!!! The people that have food, drinks, etc. and are eating any were they should throw their trash in the trash can's when they are done eating their food. And i think if we pass by trash being in the floor we should pick it up because to be honest i don't think another person would pick it up but they should. We don't want our community/world to be dirty and stinky with trash all over the place. We want our world to be clean and with nice fresh air that we could breathe with NO problem. That's why i want to join in the community service group to help our community /world be a better place for other people and us even if others don't want to help but i think that every one should be in the community service group and help the community. Well this is what i think dear principle and i hope you like my letter!!!
Sincerely,
STUDENT_NAME | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
B261F438E0DA | I think that honesty is so important because, being honest can make you gain trust from others. Honesty makes life easierit helps by telling the truth everyone can get along. What ever the situation is good or bad you still have to tell the truth because it is good for everyone and, yourselves. When your honest more people can trust you and, the more people that trust you the better of a person you are. However, when it comes to suicidal thoughts or someone isnt feeling good tell the truth to an adult even though your friend told you not to you did a great thing for your friend, you might have saved his life. You can always tell the truth because being honest is always helpful and, good because, you did a good thing. Being honest is needed everywhere because if everyone was a liar our country woudn't be good. Telling lies is not good for you it's a bad habbit for you and, once you lie a couple times you will countinue to lie over and, over. Whatever it's about lying is never the answer to solve problems it makes it worse. You loose trust, you don't get anything out of it, and you just seem like a bad person by lying. For example, say you stole something and it was your friends toy. You decided to take him when he left it there and, he asks you "Have you seen my toy", The best option is to give it back or tell him that you have it don't lie and take it. It doesn't matter how badly you want it it's not yours. The boy's mother bought him that and it wouldn't be nice to just take it from him. The boy would feels sad and, the mother would not like that too and, you wouldn't feel good after because lying hurts. Telling the truth is always the right choice to do in any occasion. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
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