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9DD22B9D10F4 | Technology is taking over the world! There is now less human contact. People may think that the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has positive effects on their lives, but that is false. The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a negative effect on people's lives because it impacts their health in a negative way and people get too dependent on technology.
Health is very important, but people take good health for granted; To begin with, technology may impact individuals health in a negative way. For example, people's vision might get blurry and people that are looking down at their electronic devices impacts their neck position. Furthermore, people may slouch down when they are using a computer. This is important because people need to be more aware of what can effect their health in a horrible way.
The use of technology is phenomenal, people use it in their every day lives. Therefore, individuals get too dependent on technology; For instance, Individuals use technology to communicate with others and they use it for location. In addition to that, people use technology to educate themselves. Although those are beneficial perks, it causes people to be too dependent on technology. This is important because instead of people completing tasks with technology, they can easily do it themselves. To illustrate, if people want a snack they can walk down to the store and buy it instead of ordering it online
People think that the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has positive effects on their lives since people with no available transportation can order online or if others live in a area that is dangerous, they can order online to receive the things that they want to be safe; However, technology has a negative impact since it makes people risk their health. In conclusion, the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a negative effect on people's lives because it can possibly impact their health in a horrible way and people get too dependent on technology, but they use it to help themselves. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
9DDBBA28EBD0 | I agree with Michelangelo's words, because some time when we whant to do things we start a low level because we think we aren't not good enough to do it, even known that we can do it good. And you think others have more opportunitties to have success and you would not have any of them, and it only matter how fast you can learn and how good you do them.
One good example of it could be sports and I have had a time when something like that happened to me. These happened when I was at my last school Generic_School, I knew that the practices to try out for the teams were going to start in 2 days. And I thought about that I could make it to play with which ever one, but when one of my friends told me that a lot of students were going to try out. When he told me that I thought that wasen't good enough and that others could be a lot better than me, so I decided to not try out and I was already playing for one team of Generic_City and they told that if I whant it I could play for both and I answered no. I didn't accept to play with my school and next year I did the try outs just to see if at least I have a good level compared to others and the coach saw how I played and he put my on Varsity team. I played almost all games I got a record, and I archieve one goal that was to proved to me that I could play at a high level even knowing that a year before I was scare to try out.
Another reason Its that really frecuently that people got scared to try a challenge, and to show themself that they can do thing at a higher level than what they think. A similar expample is one of my cousins knew how to work in construction in El Salvador and he was really good at it, and when he just got here in US he knew that there was contruction sites and places that he could work on it. First he told me that we was excited and that he would get one of those joobs and somehow the next day he told me that he wasen't getting it any more. That was not inetersted any more and told that he didn't have enough skills and it was going to be to hard for him. I told him that yes It was going to be hard but he had a lots of skills and knowleage about it and it would take less time for him to learn what they do there. He said he was going to think about it and after a time he got the joob and it olny took him less than a month to know how they operated there and got hired more fast than others, because he was doing a good joob on everything that he has to do. He told me that he was happy to take that joob and first he was wrong when he said that he had not enought skills for that joob.
Also another reason of why I agree with Michelangelo is that I remenber that around 3 and the hallf years ago I played soccer just with friends afterschool and we played just for fun and to relax. I didin't whant it to play for a team because I felt that I was not to good to play for them. One day I was playing soccer afterschool with some friends, and one of my friends dad was a coach for a team of Generic_City and remenbered that he said to all of us that if we whant it to play for him in his team. All my friend got in the team and I was the only one that did not got in, because I felt that I wasen't good enought so i decided to not join the team. And for the next season he was loking for a goalkeeper and I accept it to got in because my friends convinced me to join. After I going and play my first games I sorprise my self and the team to cause I was playing a really good level and we won the league that season. For next season I got a record that was not receiving any goals in 10 games and that lead me to win the best goalkeeper in that season. And at the beggining of my third season our captain left ,and I got surprised that all all in the team wan't it me as a captain and my coach said that I was the captain of the teamI just got really happy.
And won the league and the All Starts tournament that year and since there I have played like 8 season because every year there are 2. I have won for my third year in a row the best goalkeeper in the league. First no one was interested on my and after some seasons almost all team in Generic_City teams whant it me and teams from Generic_City I had like 7 teams that whant it me to play with them.
In conclusion I strongly agree with Michelangelo's words, its really common that the worst danger for most of us is to set our aim too low and achieving less than what we can do, I have had some reason and example but in all of them I realise that if I work hard I can accomplish more than I think I deserve. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
9DE684107A66 | should churchill's statement About the importnat role that failure plays in the pursuit of success be true. I think that failure plays a big role to success but is just for those who really want to changed their lifes. First of all, learned something from any failure. Second of all, A failure shows up the real people. Third and most important, try not to do the same failure over and over.
"Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiams". First of all,learned something from any failure because we are humans and we all make big mistakes in our lifes. Those who learned form their mistekas are the best to help the ones that are passing the same process. Learn because there would be always more failures in our lifes. Second of all, a failure shows up the real people because those who you think are good friends would help you on a failure. the person that you thought was the worst could be the only one helping you. An example, A real girlfriend would never run away in your first failure. Third and most important, try not to do the same failure over and over becuase the first think you loss is your enthusiams when you had been passing the same failure for many times, it becomes harded not to loss it. There is always gonna be more failures in our lives but, if u dont even pass one it would be more difficult to pass more then one at the same time.
My conclusion, everyone has a failure or more in their lifes but the most succes full thing of a failure is to pass the page knowing that you had learned something good of it and you wont do the same mistake ever again. Everyone has the opcion to change their lifes but the key word for this is that the person has to want it and be ready to changed. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
9DF267887BEB | I disagree with this artical because is not always how you will see first impression is how you will see the person in general. Is not a great idea to change how you are to impres other people. Like for example I'm shy meeting new people but sometime I don't know what happen to me that I talk to people like I meet them before. Not all what you see is who it is sometime the apparance lies. People sometime lie to get something or someone. Other people do it to get attention because they fell alone and they change to get attention.
Other people do it to get attention because they fell alone and they change to get attention. I sometime do it to but only because I fell left out of the group so sometime I act diffrent. I don't like it but is the only way that I can get people attention. Some people will like if they are them self because you don't what to date sameone and that person is not the person that you see in the pictur. Other people like to deceive other poeple only for the money, to play around with them or be bad with you.
Like for example I'm shy meeting new people but sometime I don't know what happen to me that I talk to people like I meet them before. Sometime when I act crazy is becasue I like someone or because I need sleep but most of the time is when I'm in love. I am very weird to be around. I like to jock a lot but that dosen't change me who am I.
Is not a great idea to change how you are to impres other people. There are sometime that you have to impres other poeple like when you are trying to get a job. You have to look impresing so they can higher you for the job. Sometime it will need more then changing who you are. But most of the time you don't have to impres the people with the look you can impres with how good you are with the job. | 2.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
9E1DFDF33C0B | I think classes such as art,music,and drama class should be electives. Why should we be required to take art,music,and drama class if we are not interested? Schools should allow students to pick there classes. If we were allowed to pick our electives then students would enjoy school more. We should be able to like our electives not dislike them.
What if student had to take art but they dont like it? They would not try the work and just fail the class. What about drama class,not everyone enjoys it so it shouldnt be required. Not every student wants to sing or play an instrument. Therefore they shouldnt be forced to take a music class.
Although it would be great for some student not all would like those classes. Therefore student should be allowed to pick there classes. If they were electives we would pick classes that interest us and would actually try to do work. Students would pass their classes more. Therefore those class should be electives. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
9E21506EADC7 | I agree that to being yourself in the a world is the greatest accomplishment. for example after working hard you will a chive your goal ,success in your life and you will be the greatest person. you will be the role model for your kids, because you follow your dream and you did everything by yourself. and you will expire a lot of people. of what you did in your life. But there is some people who will be against you because they get jealous of your success they do not want you to get more success. They will always try to put you down, they will fine dagger ways to show you and take your success from you and they will teach you bad things. But you got stack on your plan never give up there will be a lot of things to break you down but you got follow your dream make good life for yourself and for your parents make them poured. make all world poured so some people can also follow their dream so they can also get Success in their life so they can be something in their life. some people do not want to grow and they do not want you to grow, so you got stack on your plan, and see what your heart want n follow it. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
9E2645222231 | Although some says that inactivity serve a purpose, because the can get more time to them selves then when they are in activities, actually determine never to be idle, because we can accomplish many things; If we are always doing somethings such as involving in activities, having more time with our book, and trying out new things.
It had been writing by Thomas Jefferson " Determine never to be idle ". It is very true that some many people and students are always idle; they don't use their time wisely. We can do a lot if we involved our selves in activities instead of been idle; for example, when I came to the United States in January 8,2017. I was sitting at home for two months without going to school, and doing nothing. I got tired of been idle, so I told my mother that I wanted to something instead of been idle. I wanted to sign up for the Generic_City Soccer Team, so that I can get busy with my time, and use it wisely. I finally signed up for the Generic_City Soccer Team, and I got accepted by the coach. I started training with new people, and I made a lot of friends.
Instead of been idle, why can't we spend more time with our books? The more we go close to our books the more we learn faster, and increase our skills in reading; for example, my friend Generic_Name, his parents never wanted him to hang out with friends that much, or neither been idle without having his book to read. Generic_Name kept on spending most of his time reading his books for a long time, and he became a good reader in his English classroom. The teacher always asked him to read out story books and passages to his classmates in school. He inspired many students in his school, and most students wanted to be like him, so they started having more time with their books at home.
In addition, people who wanted to be idle, or people who think inactivity serve a purpose are people who are not determine, and not planing on their future; they don't want to involve in activities, or interact with people. Idle people are lazy, because they don't want to try out new things. try out new things when ever you are idle. You can learn a lot even if you are not perfect; for example, me and my three friends Generic_Name, Generic_Name and Generic_Name. We were sitting at home idly doing nothing; until when Generic_Name suggested that we should go and try out the UFC GYM. We went there, and signed up for the training; they gave us a one day trail to see if we would like the training. We went there the next day and started training for one hour; after training I told my friends that I don't like the training, because it was gave me back pains, so I quit the gym, and my three stayed in the training, because they like it. I was not perfect, but I tired out a new thing and I got some experiences from it.
As a result of all the reasons and examples. I encourage every idle human and people who thinks inactivity server a purpose to get engage in activities, having more time with their books, and trying out new things when ever they feel like they are idle. You can do a lot if you try out new things. We can accomplish more if we are always doing somethings; therefore, determine never to be idle. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
9E40BFCC6F62 | I agree with the idea of after school homework club,because by actually coming to a after school homework club it can help you get better at the class you need help. We know some students don't like doing their homework and that's why they don't get good grades.
All we want to do is help them get better at school so they can be something in life,school it's important for learning and a after school homework club can help then. It doesn't matter if you get your answer wrong you learn from your mistakes by practicing you get better at it.
And by coming after school to finish your homework is great because you have time to do other activities after you finish your homework. Doing your homework is gonna help you be someone in the future. Homework helps you raise your grades up. An a after school club is going to help you a lot we all want kids to be good at school. I know some students think the homework is a waste of time but no it's gonna help you anytime in life. We should have a after school home work club it's better for our school and students all we want is their best in school.
But it's their choice to come after school to finish their homework I know we want the best for them but it's their choice we can't make them come. A lot of student are failing school because they don't do their homework you just have to try it homework helps a lot like in math,science,social studies and reading class being good at every class is going to help you in college. We need after school homework clubs in our school, every school should have after school clubs it's for the best for every school we all need them after school homework clubs. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
9E478C982AD0 | Dear. principal
I'll say the policy #1 because student its a good rule that student can only use there cell phone during the lunch and other free time so that the student can do something that make them fun during lunch time. its also good because student uses there phone to call there parent to pick them up or they forgot something on there house he or she can just call there parent to bring it to school.
Bring cell phone in school is important because cell phone is not just for texting its also for emergency for your parent if you need something or you have to go somewhere after school. you can also call and tell them that don't pick me up because I'm going to my friend house and i call you when you have to pick me up.
by: one of the student | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 |
9E49399B42B4 | Some people belive that students should be required to take a music, a drama, or an art clases. Should students be required to take a class in arts, or should such clases be electives?
I belive that students should be require to take these clases because it plays a great rolls in our lives. students should take these clases because they're part of our daily activity. Some students are really good at arts, and some are good at music, while the others are good at drama. So such clases should be allowed in schools for students to take.
I also agree with those that says that students should be required to take clases like art, music, and drama because some students wants to become an artistic, some wants to become a musician, while the others want to be a dramatist, so it should be allowed in school for students to take them. I believe that through arts and music, or even a drama, people are able to express their emotional feelings, or their passed lives. As for me music and art should really be allowed in schools because through those subjects people will be able to express their grievances.
Some people may say these clases should not be require for students to take and such clases should be electives because not evryone are good at them.
Well it's true, but these clases are really helpful to the society because not everyone have the face or the abilies to really express their emotional feelings to peolpe, however, people have their passed life stories to tell, but they don't know how to let them out. Probaly through arts, music, or even drama they'll be able to express them out to the world. Through this subjects many people are rich today, and many people was able to let what had been in them for years upon years out, so they should be required for students.
For instance: Beyounce, Rehanna, Nici and so on. I believe those people didn't just come up to become rich today they study music because that was their goals in life.
In summary, music, arts, and drama should be required for students to take, and such clases shouldn't be electives in school or for students. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
9E4F43374DD5 | Do you think that school students should have at least participate in one or more extracurricular activity, agree or disagree. I think that students should participate in one or more school extracurricular activity. here are some of my reason on why i think that student should participate in a school activity.
I think that student should participate in a school activity because if you normally have noting do after school but just setting around waiting for something to happen, but if you were in any of the school sports you be wont be bored all the time anymore. school can make you meet new friends or get even better at the sport than you are now. sport can make you keep in good shape and good health.
school clubs are really fun to do because you get to some really big project and activity but it also depends on what clubs you chose. like for example theres the FFA club , the FCCLA , the confetti club those club are really fun to do. you get to make new friends too if you waned to and when your in high school if you wanted to, you could run for school present for your school and make some changes to your school.
after school activity like sport can school clubs can also be on your patent reared all out throw out high school and on to college and thats why i think that student should participate in one or more extracurricular activity. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
9E753C182039 | What I believe is that your either trying to get attention or really going through a hard difficult time and the people you already went to and gave you advice didnt really help with what you going through or trying to do. You really just want a person to give you really good advice and see if it help you, if it doesnt help you go talk to another person and see if the advice they give you is more comfortable and helping. The reason some people do this is because they probably get the same advice the other person already told you and already tried doing that and it just doesnt seem to do anything really. What i would to is try to go find a person that has been through the stuff your going through/trying to do and take their advice it really help because that person has already been through those things or tried to do those things and went to someone that has already been through it to and took their advice and it really seem to work.
They might just also go get advice from multiply people to see which advice the person gives them is best. They can also just be going to person to person for advice to see if they are really there and car about you when your going through a really difficult time. They can be doing that because the person they went to first was not really giving them advice about what your going through and just throwing things in that dont even make sense. I would just go to someone that really gets you and is there for you and knows how you feel.
Some people that do this just really want comfort because you never know what their going throw and really just wanna take everything off there mind and just want advice for all the things their going through. It really is hard to find someone with good advice but you never seem to find a person that give you that one good advice. I would do the same and get advice from other people its just better it give you comfort and more things that you can do to help you | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
9E817DB62497 | Are outdoor activities enjoyable? Outdoor activities are enjoyable for everyone people can play outside with they're friends and get a chance to meet some new friends. There are so many activities someone can do. They are a lot of sports people can play soccer, football, baseball and the list keep on going. outdoor activities are good exercise for everyone for the soul reason of doing something outdoors than doing nothing indoors people are getting more lazy and stupider by the day because of technology humans wast most of they're lives on technology than the outdoors. The outdoors activities help people to get more active. Outdoor activities on any season and weather. If it is winter and snowy it's a great time to go ice skating or snow boarding. If it is summer and hot then it's a great time to go swimming and it is a great time to head to the beach and go swimming on the ocean or to play sand valley ball. Then fall is a good time to throw a football around or to kick a soccer ball around. Spring is a good time to play soccer go running and to go bicycling.
What is some of your favorite activities? My favorite activity is soccer. I love play soccer because everyone can play soccer is easy to learn and it is simple to play. One thing about soccer is that it can be played at any time on any weather if it is snowy, hot, cold, and rainy. The best time to play soccer is on the spring because the weather is not to cold but not to hot it is just perfect to go outside and kick a ball or to play with friends. Then the trees and the plants look beautiful because they are growing during the spring. The outdoors is fun and enjoyable there are so many activites some can do so try some of them out. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
9E8984D81AC3 | The only talent or skill I have would be doing tricks. I also think that mostly everybody can do it so in my opinion that is not a talent. I have other talents which are that I am good at sports like basketball ,softball,, track, and soccer. I been doing it seen's I was little my dad wanted my siblings to be out of the house instead of being on our phones so we had to learn to do sports.
The first one I learned is soccer because it's just kicking a ball and running . The cool part about soccer is doing the tricks and everything. Soccer isn't big as well know as it should be. In the middle east it's big but not like basketball or football the whole world loves those sports. Also in the England they call it football instead of soccer but I get it makes a perfect name for it because you just kick it with your foot.
The second one I learned was track it wasn't that hard because you run or jump. When running in the track it is not about winning because the wind is in your face and running and your mind goes blank it feels so good when you are stressed. The long jump is my favorite because when I jump it's like flying then I touch the ground and it is gone. That why running is my favorite it's not about beating the other person.
The other one I learned is I think it was basketball. basketball because it is a mystery if you make it or not you just shoot and hope you make it .Seeing basketball players on TV I think help me to be better just like them. The thing about is that the boys ad girls are separated because they think the boys are too rough for them the girls can be rough too but thats why they made the WNBA [woman national basketball assonstion]. In my school they have one for girls and one for boys but a lot of people come watch he boys one way more than the girls.
The next one is softball this one I just wanted to do something different when the other seasons are over. It was boring at first when you learn how to play it becomes a game not a sport. In school we have softball but we don't have baseball for boys but I wish we did I think is unfair that the girls have one but they don't. I wish we play it at gym but we don't all we do is play field hockey. Softball is also good arm excise if you play it all the time. Thats why of all the sport my favorite is track. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
9E8F3C6405CA | Why do people ask more then one person for advice? I think that people stress out about the problem that they are having that I'ts better to hear it in another person's perspective, what If they have gone through the same problem that your facing, they all have different things to say so you can think about It in multiple perspectives.
I think that going to more then one person is a good thing because people may stress out about it a lot they may over think it and that's not good I'ts always better to talk to more then one person because they all have different things to say so you can think about it in different perspectives It actually helps you make a decision faster or it helps you with whatever you may be going through.
I think that going to more then one person is a good thing because what if they have been in the situation as you they have already gone through it so they can help you out and tell you how it was for them so you know you arent the only one who has gone through that problem it may also help by doing what they did when they were in that situation.
I think that going to more then one person is a good thing because they all have different things to say so you can think about It in multiple perspectives like you can think about everything they told you and it can help you with what you are going through. in conclusion i think that it is best to talk to more then one person for advice. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
9E96EB0152A6 | I feel that this learning program can hep younger and older students and have a very big a effect on the people involved in the program, that is taking place in the schools.
Not many many other schools have this program to get extra help and kids need to understand that the there is a big opportunity that is being given to them and they need to take it.
This program helps the younger students get a opportunity to get better at something that they are having a hard time on inside of school.
If the kids are having a hard time on doing work at home or not understanding, they dont have to get worried about there grades dropping because there are other options that you can do.
If the younger kids parents do not have that much time to sit and help them with work, then they can just get help from the learning program that happens at there school.
The more you go to the meetings the better you will get even if it takes time.
I also feel that this could be important to the older kids that help as well.
This program would do very good for their service hours for there service hours for school.
It must be a good feeling for them because they were chosen to do something they are good and smart at.
They could possibly put this program on there college resume if they would like to become a teacher when they grow up.
There are many other reasons that this program could be helpful to others. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
9EAB766AF4BE | Students and teachers have important roles in their life. The students need to pass the class in order to graduate and the teacher gets paid for doing his/her job. As long as the kids are not failing teacher has the job it is very key that students and teachers should be having good relationship. If the student ever needs help he or she can feel comfortable talking to the teacher and the teacher should be helping the students. If they need it because they can loose their job.
Lets say if the students decide to design the project there own. The only problem with that its going to be to easy for them. Also it wont challenge them so there brain will not learn anything and it will be useless. If it was a group project most of the kids would go with the smart people so they can finish it. And not worry about it and some of the lazy kids will cheat on the projects. If i was the parents i would tell them do it yourself and learn how to finish the project the right way and get a good grade.
Having the teacher design the project is way smarter. They will know what kind of project to create. And also if this was a group project it will be smart for the teacher to put some kids in the group because then the teacher can decide how many points it can be. And how long they have to finish plus the students dont do anything in there break myself being a student i can relate to that. But they have to learn something so when they do start school they will be one step of ahead of everyone. My personal opinion is that i probably wont do the assignment during break right away but i will finish before it ends whenever i have the time.
At the end of the day both teachers and students are trying to help each other out. And i think its more productive the teacher designs the project because when the teacher grades them or goes over them teacher can give feedback. Thats very important see what parts you did wrong or where you did good at. Having feedback can help you a lot but staying with the teacher to design the project is the best idea. Because the students can learn more and get more information on there project. And they will get good grades on them and it should be required to have teachers designing projects for the students. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
9EADCECA2FB8 | i think that students should have cell phones at passing time and lunch time so these students can relax and they don't have to get their phones taken away and they don't have a problem and they need to put their cell phones on vibrate or turned off but students don't want to put their phones in their lockers cause they get stolen which they get mad and they need to buy another one.
students needs their phones so they can contact their family if some thing happens or their family get robbed then how are you going to communicate. cell phones are okay but students are always texting during class when teachers are teaching. the cell phones company are starting to make new cell phones and people are starting to buy fancy phones like droid so are the students. cell phones are very cool to have and its kind of a lot of money to pay for those fancy phones. all students are buying cool phones cause they think they are cool cause other kids has cheap ones and telling them their phones are ugly. students are mean cause they could use someone's number and tell them awful stuff and would say the same thing what they say. so i say lets not have cell phones at school that would be okay to me. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
9EB5AA842FEF | Many student's take districts offer programs because , They think that is more easy . School's maybe is easy ,if student's going to school only three years . Also, some parents maybe are agree with that . if student's go three years to school . the students parents spend a little money in their . Also, student's can work early and get their own money. Especially , if school during three years. but, definitely , many student's take the longer way in high school . that's the mean. the four years.
Also student's choose this districts offer programs to graduated quickly from high school and work . for example , my friend take districts offer programs and he is graduated rigth now. but, he spend all his time only studing and him have his diploma and him is working. but, i'm taking the four years in school ,not only ... but also, obviously , i'm learning more . because , i spend more time in school. Clearly students wants to graduated from high school , that's why they take this programs . and some student's choose this programs because , they want go to the collage . and want to meet their dream.
I understand that many student's wants to graduated quickly and get their diplomas . but take the four years in high school is better than districts offer program . because , student's who take this programs are grieve and
, obviously , their are very busy and extressed . because they don't have time . They only pass all days , evening and summer studing , but student's who take the four years are fresh of the mind and they have time for studing and work at the same time. and can spend time for their friend and family, thats why four years in high school is bettter than three years. Definitely , some students prefert districts offer programs. but they kill their own self . because they pass studing ans studing. their many students like studing alot , but its importantly, that they safe their health . | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
9EB7D09C785B | Take classes Online can help busy students, but is you are interested in take this classes can help you too. Take classes online is a good opcion for busy people because some times they do not have enough time to make food, do the homework and go to school, sometimes they need money so they need to work, and they look at this like an obstacle that keep them away from school. By taken classes online they can make a better sketch, eat at home, do the homework, have more time to do the things that they need to do at home. For example if you have a baby, you can take care of you baby, and they the classes olnine at home. Also, if you need to go to work, you can go to work and in your free time take the classes online. Another reason is that some students live far away from the school, and they do not have a car or transportation, is more easy for them to take the classes online in the comfort of their home. Also, if they are in a normal school and they want to keep learning by the summer they easily can take the classes online or the video conferencing. In my opinion I think that the classes online or the video conferencing can a lot of students, if they are busy or if they are interented in this classes they can take it too. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
9EBA120196BC | I agree this decision because, if kids are bored they could do activities after school. Or learn different things about the things that the principal said. It said that you can participate on the year book. So you can also help those people by finishing the work they have left. And you participate on sports for example doing exercise and learning how to play that sport. And everybody can serve the student council. And after trying one of those you might like it. And you might want to join one of the activities. Or there might be more than one activities so you can try. "So go try the activities and learn those new things that your learning and I'm sure you might like them and maybe you might join one of those activities." I might even fo them because I want to learn new stuff to because if I get a job that might help me in life or in the future. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 |
9EBCC1131B13 | As we have two different people, we have two types of parents that one of them, they believe and they force their children that should take some classes like music, drama, or an art class instead of elective classes. But another parents they do not believe and force them to take those classes. On the other hand we have some students that they like to take elective classes instead of those classes; and in opposite, we have students that they do not like to take elective classes.
In general, as we know the place of schools, we can easily discover that students need have some classes that they want to be and they like to enjoy it and has fun and exciting for them. Here are some reasons that is showed why they have to take those classes; like music, a drama, or an art class. First reason is if they took those classes, they can decrease their stress that they have in their life and their school. Second reason is, they can easily figure out what skills are they have in their life and out of the main classes in school. Third reason is, if they really learned from those classes, they can teach to another persons and get money for that. Fourth reason is, it is good for their health from all aspects. Fifth reason is, it gives them energy; so they can always be active in their life specially in their school.
First, on the other hand, some students is special because maybe they came from another country or have special condition that they not required to take those classes because they have to graduate or because of their English language; so they have to study and practice more; and they can not require to take those classes. They have to take main and elective classes that their counselor suggested to them. for example, I came from another country so I have to practice more in my English language and other main classes that I have in school, for these reasons I could not take an art, music or a drama class.
Second, another students just take those classes because their parents want to, so these students can not learn and enjoy from those classes and even they will hate from those classes. for example, I saw my friends that he took a music class but he did not like that, but their parents force and required him to take that class, in summary he fell from all classes that he had in his school, and finally he did not graduate from school because of that.
Third, some students that know English language include writing, speaking and listening, and has all A's in their main classes like Physics, Math and Chemistry and another main classes, they can take music, an art or a drama class. As I said some benefit of those classes on above, they can improve their skills and they can go in forward to their life that they want to be.
Finally, those classes can be help students a lot, but it has hinge on their status, and no one should not force students to take those classes unless they want to and they like to take those classes.
In conclusion, those classes should not be compulsory, because in general, each work should has be with love, until we can learn and help others and improve ourselves. | 4.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
9EC4A16802BF | I believe music, drama, or art class should be classified as electives because some students might not be interested in these classes due to them are wanting to learn more about other subjects, consequently failing; furthermore, students may also have an interest in a certain job and do not need these classes, students can also find these classes a waste of time because they are learning a subject that is not aiding their future, students would also not take these classes serious because they are not necessarily an essential.
First, Students may find that the class is not of interest to them because they may want to learn about other subjects that could impact their future. Due to the students dissatisfaction and not being interested in the class they have a high probability for failure. For example, Generic_Name wants to reach his goal of going to a high end college but was not accepted because he had a GPA lower than the minimum requirement due to failing drama class.
Second, Students can also have an interest in a certain job. Music, drama, or art can be a waste of time for the student because it is taking time from classes that can help towards getting that job. Taking these classes could also help the student explore more possible job opportunities as well as learning skills.
Lastly, Some students would not take these classes serious. As oppose to essential classes like math, English, and history students would use these classes as an opportunity to horseplay. The students that are constantly participating in horseplay are going to be a distraction to the students trying to succeed in these subjects.
In conclusion, I believe music, drama, and art should classify as an elective because students may find that the class is not of interest to them, students can also have an interest in a certain job, and some students would not take these classes serious and take it as an opportunity to horseplay. Support our opinion on this subject at www. MakeLearningEasier. org | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
9ED1E2DB0B0F | If someone wants to grow more as a person, they will have to try different things. I believe that Ralph Waldo Emerson is right. To grow more as a person people have to try different things because the most things they do the more experience they get. If a person mastered something already he will feel that he know everything but the true is that he only know whay he mastered, but if a pereson try different thing he would get more experience that can be use in the future.
an example of this is Pique. He is a famous soccer player. he get pay a lot of money, but to grow more as a person. he also become a busines man. Now Pique have a lot of companies that work for him. he also created his own Tennis league in Spainh. Pique also support a fundation that his wife created to help kids in Colombia.
Other example is one of my uncles from Generic_City. his mane is Generic_Name. He study to be a teacher. He was very happy with his work, but to grow more and get more knowledge he go back to college to study to become a doctor. Now he feel like he know more and that he have grow more as a person.
I also like to thing that I'm a example of this. I always try to do my best to leard different sports. I'm a really good soccer player, but I prefere to try others sports. I play a different sport everyday because I feel that this will help me to become a better player and will give me the experience to grow more as a athlete. I also like to to study a lot for the classes that I'm having problems because I get more knowledge about different topics and make me grow more as a student
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People can still growing when they mastered something. An example of this is Leonel Messi. he is a soccer. he has play soccer all his life's. He always was getting better and better every year. he never play other sport in his life's. Now he is considere one of the best player in the world. He grow as a person by doing what he already mastered.
people have to do different things in their life's if they want to grow as a person because if they think they are the best is a lie. They are the best in what they mastered, but they don't have any type of knowledge in other thing. In conclution if someone wants to grow more as a person. He will has to try different things to get more experience and more knowledge. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
9EE9E6991968 | I 'm Agree with this because if you have a positive a ttitude when you do staff you can make Better things Happen at the moment . and people can say that you are a great person because of your attitude how you treat other's people having a good attitude can make people think you are a different person than people say, how you treat others people thats why being good can help you count on different types of people including your friends and your family. when you are having bad things and problems.
happen in your life you feel sad depressing and trying to quit of everything .
but you don't have to give up you have to still Fighting so you can Solve all this and leave this at the Past .and start like nothing Happen and keep having that positive attitude on you. having a good a ttitude in school can make teachers see that you are a quiet and chill guy who just traying to do great on classes and trying to pass the school and graduated and be a better person than others who just having a bad attitude in school and quit.
thats why having a good attitude can make you be a good person with others and people see that. you can make all your wishes true if you being honest and prepared so you can be in the work you want for you in the future and make a better life to your self and your family.
and being good with your attitude can make easy thyings happen to you and people treat you good | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
9F1230B269C1 | My name is Generic_Name and I conclude my subject of topic to one of my most enjoyable educational activities to be the of subject P.E. I chosed this subject because me myself am an athlete in many sports such as basketball,football,swimming,and lacross which is why i feel as if i have a great connection with the subject of P.E since the platform of the class is physicle education which most of the time includes sports. This connection is established from the joy of physicle and fitness related activities that health/P.E can assure.
I find this activitie mostly enjoyable since it has some of the sports I play in after hours outside of school grounds,which builds a strong connection. I also enjoy the connection i make with others such as the other students and the teacher since health/P.E are mostly social based activities, were teamwork and cooperation are needed.
This is an art in which others and you could interact with each other which if to the right exstent can bring joy to those who socialize in educational manners, but with that also brings educational activities which is much more of important when it comes to P.E because education always comes first when it comes to any class in the education atmosphere. P.E may bring a positive inpact on others who need social activites to interact with others,which is what makes P.E enjoyable and impactful for me and much others.
I feel as if this interaction and connection in physicle education/P.E is a great enjoyable way inside of shool grounds that can provide a break from classes which you sit all day and study and is why i choose this as my topic of intrest when it comes to my oppinanated most enjoyable activity. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
9F1CC7603B64 | I agree about that some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing, the students can would benefit. One of the reasons are that I think this can be a more easy way for students to learn is because they cannot be distract to anothers students, so they can work with tranquility. Another reason is that the students can save a lot of time working online at home, because they don't need wait for the bus, or walk directly at the school.
For example, if you work at home, you don't need permission to use the bathroom, because you're at home, so you can use the bathroom anytime. Another example is that some times work in the school can be so noisily, also can be uncomfortable, but if you prefer to work online you get not problems because you can be more focus in your work, and also you can feel more comfortable working online.
Another example about why I think that working online is more benefit for students, is because they can have all the recourses, and tools necessary to work, also you cannot be feel bad about if you don't finish a test ,or a quiz at time in school, working online you ge all the necessary time to complete a test ,or a quiz, you can more time to do your homework, also you can eat everything that you want working online, in the school you cannot eat on classes time.
In conclution, working online is a more easy way for students to learn than working at the school, because had a good help and a lot of good reasons, and also a lot of good benefits. That's what I think that working online or video conferencing is a more easy way to lear for the students, and also I think is a big opportunity too. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
9F27EAC1E27D | How people live their life is up to them whether to follow their own decisions, or seek guidance from experts and authorities for life's important matters. People should make their own decisions because relying on others will make you less self-sufficient and you should develop your own self-identity not from the choices of other people, although some people may say that people who seek guidance from experts are smarter than people who do not.
People should be able to rely on their own decisions on life, so that they do not become less self-sufficient in the choices that they make. Firstly if you keep relying on others than you become someone who can not do anything on their own without the help of other people. Another reason would be that people might think you are unable to do simple tasks in life because you relay on other people too much. Lastly self-sufficiently is an important skill that everyone should have through-out their life. Your past choices defines who are you today, so if you relay on others too much than you become a different kind of person you once were
Other people who spend their whole life heavily relaying on other people develop no self-identity of their own. I highly doubt that Tesla or Einstein relayed on anyone if not no one on the work that they did. Additionally if you do not have a self-identity people will not remember who you are. Secondly if you always have people telling you the answers in life it is hard to live without those people who helped you in the first place. Finally always become a person who does not have to relay on others for the sake of your own well being. You should always listen to your brain and not seek out help too much, or it will affect your life in very bad ways
Still, some may say that people who seek help from experts are smarter than people who do not. That people who seek out help will be more informed in life, therefore they do not have to worry about the things they do not know. This may be true but it's better to find the answer on your own than to always ask for help from experts.
In the end you shouldn't rely on other people too much because it will be harder to be more self-sufficient and it will be harder to develop your own self-identity. People should be inclined to make their own decisions in life whether they like it or not. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
9F401E75755A | In this writing you will find some reason why, 4 years of high school and graduate are better than, 3 years of high school and compare the opportunities that you can find during this years of high school and also help you to make to take your choice.
High school is a great place to know people that could help you in the future, and help you to reach your goals also high school is a great place to learn a lot of things and have fun at the same time.
In my opinion, 4 years of high school are better than 3 years because you have more time to study, you are able to have a break during summer, and keep your stress lower.
During this 4 years of school you are able to have enough time to study and prepare for a test, if you have a History test you have time to ask to your History teacher to help you, before or after school to make a review or practice, and get ready for the test. This is one reason why 4 years of school are better then 3 years of school, and you will be able to prepare for your next test also you can have some rest in summer.
In 4 years of school you will have a break during summer, and able to enjoy it with your family or friends doing some activities as going to some parks or museums, and any other different activities that you will like to do, and maybe go back to the school with more energy after summer. This reason also could help you to keep your stress lower when you are in high school.
When you are in high school you can stress a lot because you have to many homework and you need to study for a test, and if you take the 4 years of high you will have a lot of time to study do your homework and keep your stress lower, and during this 4 years you can practice some sports or any activity that you like in your school or outside the school and also this could help you to keep your stress lower. During this process of learning you could find people that are not agree with your opinion and they can say 3 years of school are better then 4 yours of school.
3 years of high school sounds great for some people they want to start working or maybe they think it could be easy but you will not able to enjoy your summer because you have a program to follow during summer, and sometimes you would need to stay after school for study, and you are not able to do the different activities that you like.
In my opinion 4 years of high school are better then 3 years of high school and in this 4 years of high school you will be able to graduate and you can enjoy the process of learning, and know a lot of people that could help you to graduate and reach your goals in the future. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
9F68BAB4FB63 | Students graduated in three year of the High School!
I think is good idea because all student that want a best future try to do a good thing that it is a benefit for the school. when a student is smart make the time important for take other course for to have for credit is for that some student don't need to take the four grade in the high school, A student also that have excellent grade in all the classes, and only have a difficult classes, this student that had the opportunity for graduated early that other students.
Example:
A student of Generic_School is in 9 grade, but this student have a difficult classes, but this students is focus just in the classes, and have a excellent grade also this student take a deport after school all the days. The student he's prepared every time for the quiz, and for test.
Finish the school the student is the best student of the year in the school because He passed all the classes and the SOL. During the summer He go to the summer school for to pass other class that he going to have in 10 grade, finish the summer school He pass the class with excellent grade, so this student had a so much credit of the normal.
He stars the 10 grade, so He had other advanced classes, because in summer school he pass the classes that He was going to have in 10 grade. This student continue that, He pass all the classes, and SOL that He need for graduated. Now this students is in 11 grade, but the student had a big credit and He go to the school for 4 classes so this student have the opportunity for graduated in 11 grade because is a excellent student.
He finally is graduated the school in 11 grade, so He finish the school, but He said that want to go the collage because want to prepare more for to go to the university, because He want to be a excellent lawyer.
The excellent student finish the collage, and the university, so now He is a big lawyer with a great statutes. The parents of this excellent students, and good person, so they feeling fortunate for have a big son.
All we have the opportunity for to be a best person in the life, all depended how we wants to be in the life. Many student wants to have a excellent grade but don't put of they part for be a good students.
Now in day the most students just want to come to school for 3 or 4 classes but don't want study for had a good grade,many students go to school but don't go the classes, and other students is stay outside of school for smoky, because the most students used cigarette or other thing.
We don't know appreciated the best opportunity of the life.
Reasons for graduated in three year
All students who graduated early have a big opportunity in the collage, and the university, and the work or whatever place.
why?
because the old person thinking that this type of person are responsible in all the thing.
Are a people responsible!
Why?
because when have a big responsibility never said 'NO' and have care for all thing.
Example:
I'm Generic_Name, I work in Bank Of America, today my boss need to leave early because He had a compromised with other important person, and He give me the responsibility for received the money of today.
Be carefully!
Why?
because they try to make with carefully the work or whatever thing.
Example:
My name is Generic_Name, and I work a company of cake, and my supervisor said me congratulation because you are very carefully with the work all the time.
My Idea!
I think all the people we have the best opportunity in the life to be a best person in the live,but the major opportunity is that when we have somebody is protected, and supported our decisions.
When we start the education needed to keep the marge for be the person who we want to be. The thing are best when we support all bad thing.
The best idea is continue with the school and be a good students, because all student that it is educated, they type students have a more opportunity that other who they don't want to be a best person in the future.
Why the younger people just thinking in pass the life in party or in the street?
Why now in day we see a kids abandoned in the street?
Because many mother don't have a good education for to have a compromise of the had a kids, this type of mother just thinking in that the drugs,alcohol,or party is the major thing.
Many mother having a bad decisions!
So is for that what we need to prepare for to make more easy our life.
Have a diploma of the High School is very important because we work less, and we have a good job,when we have a good job we have a lot money, and when this happened we are prepare for take a funny moment in our life, But just for that is not the base for make whatever thing, first we need think what we need to do!
We know that this life is so hurt, and is more hurt when we take a bad decision like not finish the school or don't put care to our thing for to be prospered.
Some time is good help take course when the people don't finish the school.
Example:
take a course for by the license, and put a beauty salon.
take a course for by idea how to have a company of electricity.
take a course for be some body also a little important in the life.
take a course for be a teacher of music.
We have so much course for prepare more when we don't finish the school.
Some time when a students go to the school, and they not finish is responsibility of the parent guardian because the parent need to see for the son or daughter keep going the school, I think when the students don't finish the school part of this is fault of the parents.
How we can finished the school, and how can I do graduated?
The things for to finished the school is:
Go to the school every day.
Make the homework.
Prepared for the quiz or test.
Pass all the SOL.
Pass all the classes.
When you make all the work in the classes or in the school, and you pass all the thing, you can graduated. If you not want to go to the collage, the diploma of the High School is very important for have a good job in your life. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
9F7610DBE2DC | Positive Attitude
Positive attitude is the right choice it's like a no brainer. Also you will be happy, like who dosen't like to be happy. Finally positive attitude will bring success to your life and the people around you.
First reason is attitude effects the people around you in a different way. If you see someone who is feeling down go help them. If your always positive you'l get things done the right way without being stressed.
another reason success is great good things will happen around you even if you don't suspect it. Success will get you to wherever you want to be, but you have to be positive. If your positive, and a teenager you could nail your first interview you just got to be positive.
Final reason is be your self it's so important because being unique means your special and something good will happen to you in life. People will love who you are when you are yourself ,and get real friends who will help you. Don't be like everybody trying to be the same like every body.
Positive attitude actually helps without positivity you will get nowhere. Another reason bad attitude will make people dislike you and not want to be with you any more. Final reason bad attitude will get you to bad places. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
9F7E189A2DCF | Do you believe to know a person through one impression? Some people believe that most of the people's personality will depends on their presentation or the way that dress up, they think that your knowledge or your personality is base on how you look. I believe that the first Impression could change for the following three reasons; Your clothes or how you look do not show your type of personality, the kind of person who you are will depends on knowing the person and through knowing the person your idea about the person could change.
The majority of people classify the type of person base on how they look, What I believe is that your clothes and how your look do not say or show your type of personality or the kind of person who you really are.
Base on my short experience to know a person takes time and the first impression could be unfavorable in strong relationships or friendships that's why I believe that who you are will depends on knowing the what kind of person you are.
Most of the strong friendships or relationships that I know they were enemies or they did have a good impression about the person at first time but through the time they had the privilege to know the person and they found a good kind of person.
To conclude the first impression is good way to present ourselves but through knowing the person we will find that the first impression does not care when knew the kind of person that's why I believe that first impression could change through knowing that person. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
9F803521F9A6 | yes i agree if that if your attitude is not good you will never success or you did not get what your want in your life if you a person nned to success or learn something from other you most know attitude is good or bad because attitude it the key of your life ad your success if you want to live with people nicily your most knw your self first take care of your attitude because you can't make your life bad or be homeless because of your bad attitude control your attitude everyway you go at work don't let people judge you bad because of your attitude even home don't let your parant or your sibling judge you wrong because of your attitude use our attitude in right way so people can judge you in the right way your attitude is your way to success and to make you a nice person of all the time to other don't let your attitude contron you but you can contron your attitude attitude is good sometimes or bad in many ways example your get hiring asa teacher and your attitude it not good. you get angery so easlier to your student or your other teacher you say something mean to your them end of the day you dream to be a teacher you will lose it because of your bad attitude you can use your attitude to make your life so much easy to your self and for other because if you control your attitude even a person you work with will be nice to you because you use your attitude in good ways thayou post be to do. attitude can make you a lot of friend in the same way time your attitude can't make you to lose your friend your attitude can make you a rich person your attitude can make your life so much easlier if you control your attitude you control your while life if you control your attitude you control your success or your life. yes attitude is the key of your success | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
9F9C42BD3B7A | We live in a world where each and everyone of us, will always need someone or others to rely on. In this world not everyone is born complete. However being yourself is always good, but you can also change yourself if you feel the need to. But if someone else were to change you then that would be very bad, because they could be either delusional or emotionally negative of certain things in life. When your being yourself on my opinion it means you shouldnt have others change the way you are but its up to how you feel about yourself.
I strongly disagree Emerson's statement on how individuality is a good thing, and i have various reasons or examples on this statement. I have many important people like my mom,dad,sister, and very close friends who are also like family to me. Having other people is vital because you get through life more easily, and able to change yourself as you live on. But if you got rid of all of that then you would probably live a lonely life in deep and total solitude. Having other people isnt trivial, you have to have faith in one another to get through life.
There was this one time where i was about twelve to fourteen years old, i would always struggle with my grades in the beginning of the school year, and have a strong sense of unease everyday i go to school because i always felt like wouldnt be able to provoke my self to do better in school and get better at socializing. I was only caring for myself most of the time, and when i get back home i would feel depressed and repugnant. But that all changed later when i realized i needed to have others to help me. As time went on i was able to change myself by others around me. The world isnt changing you you are changing yourself by just living a life with others around you, and you wouldnt notice that you changed either, but that is a good thing because now you know that if your able to change then anyone should be able to.
The last thing that is bad when you dont have anyone else with you, is that it can be really boring and not fun at all. When your all alone in your life, you wont have anyone to socialize with you, and keep you company. But when you have a lot of friends and get to know other people, you can have an experience with them and its what makes life really entertaining. When your with your friends you get to have lots of fun, like play games together, socialize, travel together, and get to have more and more experiences with each other and maybe learn more lessons in life. Theres a lot of people who think that we live in a society where no one cares about you and doesnt want to help you at all. but thats not true because it isnt there fault, because when you have others with you, it can have an effect positively and negatively. And people who are negative all the time can provoke others to be a bad person, which is why they end up all lonely because they fear of others or hate others because they think no one cares about them. But thats not true because all it takes is to change yourself, by having others in your life, or asking for help.
In conclusion individuality can be pretty awful and lead others to a path that is bad. Having others in your life is necessary because we can lift each other up, no one is worthless. Leaving someone on there own can be pretty sad, helping them is what makes you a better person and gives you a better and easy life. But as i said dont let anyone change who you are, being yourself is good but being alone simultaneously can be a bad thing. You are the protagonist of your own life, your life is your own. | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
9FA1ED280D8E | Do you think that the school hours should extend?
School is already not fun for many of the students, and by staying more in school students may have a bad mood or adituted, and it may lead to bad behavior and not make them get good grades! I disagree because it can be very tiring to stay school more longer, it can change your mood of being in school, and you may want to got out with friends or family.
The First reason, Is because if we stay more longer in school you are gonna get more tired. If you get tired in school you are not gonna have more energy to go outside and entertain yourself. And you would just go home and sleep all day long. However, if we don't extend the school hours, we won't be as tired, and we would have energy to go outside.
The Second reason, Is that if we stay longer in school it can change the way you are. Staying in school longer can change your mood because you won't be as happy. Because you would have to stay in school longer. Also you might have teachers you don't really like and you would have to see them longer. However, it doesn't have to be that way, if we don't extend the school hours.
The Final reason, Is that you woudn't have time to spend with your friends or family. Because most of that time you would be in school. ANd spending time with friends/family is the most important thing in life and school shouldn't take all the space froem your life.
In conclusion, I disagree that the school should add more school hours. because it is a waste of time, and it gets you more tired, it change youself, and it doesn't give more time to spend with friends/family. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
9FA90B94782E | Wow! A talent I have is soccer, I have played soccer when I was born. Loved to play the sport because It always entertained me. So then I started playing more and more of it, and then I started playing in tournaments and leagues. I started of in defense, then I started to up my way up, so then in three weeks I started playing striker. When I started playing soccer I used skills like communication,passing and shooting so then my coach said I had potential in me. So then I started to watch soccer in my T.V..Soccer got famous in the late 1800's. Also in soccer you had to work hard and train hard. Like professionals they worked for 5 to 8 hours a day. Well in soccer games I use communicating,dribbling,passing and shooting.
In my opinion communicating is the most important soccer talent professionals need. Professionals need communication to score or win a match. For example my soccer team always use communication to pass to even score, and to win the match. Pele was a young Brazilian when he went to the world cup finals, he was only 18. His position was striker, he was known for his bicycle kick in the 80 minute. In 1900 professional in different leagues used communication also to pass to ball. Everybody needs communication to win any sport game.
In my opinion you need skills to be good at the game. In one of my games I had to score two goals at least to win the finals in soccer then I two use my skills called the fake. In 2009 there was a player named Lionel Messi he plays for Generic_City and won six ballon d'or. He used skills in games and in training. In my other soccer matches I used skills like passing and dribbling in a soccer matches. There was a player named Ronaldo he played for Generic_City when I was born, so I saw one of his soccer games in the T.V and I looked how he used other skills in the match against Generic_City. So I trained for an hour before my soccer tournament. So then I used one of his skills and it worked. So I used his skills for two games. So I saw professional players skills, so I can use those professional skills in a soccer game.
In my opinion you have to work hard and train hard because if I don't I wont be active so those are my other soccer skills because I train to learn moves, running, and defense. I train everyday so I can get better and better. Other professional have to train everyday to win other soccer matches and communicate with other teammates. I also practice dribbling a lot in my soccer practice. I use it a lot in soccer matches and I really good at it. In 2008 there was a player called Alex Hunter he was a rookie, then he started training and training until he gotten famous and good at soccer. I train everyday when that happened to someone.
If everybody tried to play soccer it wouldn't be boring because it's fun, you can play with family members or friends, and you can know new people. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
9FAA62801E13 | Imagine school day extend two hours every day. School day should not extend two hours. If school extend two hours student will not have time for anything els after school. Student will be tierd of school and they will hate it. Student will not be abole to have normal life.
If school extend two hours student can not be abole to do any thing els. They won't have time to join sport team. And they can't join any club activity. Also they won't be abole to do anything after school or to practice for the sport they like.
Student will be tierd and don't want to go to school. Most of the student will hate to be in school for extra two hours. And some of them will not attend school every day. They will be tierd and sleepy during the school day.
Alot of student won't be abole to have normal life to live. Also most of the student will not be abole to speand much time with their family. Alot of student won't be abole to have time for their own live. Or anything they like to do after school.
Student will not be abole to live in a normal live and be abole to do any type of sport. Or to do anything they are intrsting in it after school. They won't be abole to orgniz their time in live. Student will be stress and tierd to do anything after school. Finly school day shouldn't be extend two hours so the student can have a normal live . | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
9FD1F622BAC3 | planning to change, healthier school lunch would eliminate sutdents favorite cafeteria food. students won't get full and will still have a empty space in their stomach. the healthy food won't make students concretate in class becuase they're going to be hungry, might make a impact in students body's. changing school lunch to a new, healtheir lunch could cuase some problems students way to learnd and eat.
having students eat in an healtheir way, could cuase a problem in their body, highs school and middle school students will be the ones who are going to be affect by this change. tha's the time when they hahve to eat enough food so they can develop their body's becuase that's when puberty comes on, and students need to prepare, for this type of sickness that they might be going throught, they need to be prepared, eating in a healthy way sometime cause weakness in some students bodys.
by eating in a healthy way students will have healthy life, will be able to play any sports that they want, they're going to be ready for school, will have their mind opend, they will be succed in class and school, life, this could make students to be out of any pain or sickness the planning of changing food cafeteria could be a problem in students way to eat, students would make a radical change in their body, i think the administatrion or county need to make a survey whether or not do this change, they need to understand that some shool have differentes religion,races, they need to consider that as aone of the cons becuase they can't make studentsneat food that they're not allow to eat, if that's the case students won't eat and that might a problem becuase those students might get sick, if they're planning to do a change, it has to be the one with offering food from around the world so can everyone be able to eat. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
9FDD8A146288 | i think it not good for students because it didn't help students learn and you have to do the work by self . I think that school is better because it teach you how to do the work and the teacher helps you on the work. online school is not good is because it didn't teach you and you might not know how to do the work for the class for online. you might ask people for help when you don't know how to do the work when your at school the teacher teach you how to do the work and gets you all the help you in class and and afer school too so you can get more help on the work and the missing work and wok and if you don't understand the lesson. you could ask your teacher for help and be ready for test and the sol. You will learn better in school then online school. School is better learn because the teacher are there for you if you need to talk to them or to get help in the work or to get more lesson and they give you a lot of time on work and give you time on the test and gets you ready for the sol. one examples that you get better learning in school and the teacher help you understand the work. second online school is tell you how to do the work and you have to find it out for yourself. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
9FE2FE6E997E | Thomas Jefferson wrote, "Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing". Do we accomplish more if we are doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose? Keep doing something helps you get a chance to accomplish and also makes the time you spend out is worthwhile.
Determine means you have reached a decision. Firstly, once you have determined yourself, you will know what to do forward. For example, you are having trouble with your weight so you are planning to be fitness. You spend two hours a day going to the gym or go jogging every early morning. As the result, you will lose weight and have a nice body. Secondly, determination can be a supporter for you to reach your goal. For example, you are a senior in high school and you want to graduate this year; however, you are having trouble with your grades. You try to improve it by asking teachers and you friends, or you go studying online and do some practices at home. If you do that everyday, you will get good grades and graduate.
Determine can also make your time more worthwhile. Imagine after all the time you have to spend on doing something are now accomplished, you will feel very pleasant and proud of yourself. The more time you work, the worth time you pay. Otherwise, it can make you have more patience in life. You will not stop chasing on what you want to do although you have to face many problems in life. Therefore, you both get good accomplishment also a better personality.
In the other hand, being idle in determining makes you are a useless person. You will have no job, no money, neither future. For example, you need to buy a house but you have no money. Instead of finding a job, you do nothing, which makes you waste time and get nothing for your benefit. Beside that, idleness will make you have no respect from people. Although people are working and getting success, you just sit there and get failure.
It is not hard to determine what to do. Making lists is a way. It helps you analyze a lot of things to work on, makes you have more accomplishment, and you will become a successful person in life. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
9FE689F5F44D | Achieving the knowledge based on the books or on the notebooks is common but achieving a knowledge by involving in the extracurricular activities is a different and extra. School is the place where students get suggestion, get inspire, and get strength to accomplish their goals. From school, students can learn optimum knowledge and experiences about the inside and outside of the books as well. In addition, school is the career building place for the students. School is the best place to evaluate the skills and the capability of each students. By controlling students involvement in the extracurricular activities, many students can fulfill their dreams which gives them happiness and makes them feel special by doing it. Also, gives them a wings of hope to do something more and make their parents and themselves proud tomorrow.
As we all know that, if the students doesn't have that ability and interest in order to take a particular class then school never force students to involve in those particular class or field. But, talking about family, there are maximum parents who force their children to take a class and choose a career as they want. There are many parents who wants their children to become a doctor, pilot or engineer; though, their children doesn't have any interest on that faculty. In other words, though their children are weak in math and science, but their parents wants to make them, a doctor, pilot or engineer. It's only because according to the parents, only doctor and pilot can make a huge money and has a great reputation. At this situation, we have seen many cases that parents do emotionally blackmail to their children. In that condition, children sacrifice their dreams just to make their parents happy. We all know, every student do not wants to become a doctor and pilot. They have their own dreams and interests on particular faculty. For example, if a student is interested and good on soccer but his parents do not support to his interest because they feel it's a waste of time. But, school always support him. According to the parents their children should be good on knowledge based on books rather than extracurricular activities. They should have only focus towards their study which is totally wrong.
If schools control student involvement in extracurricular activities then it can show a right path and right decision for the student's bright future. Schools are available with each and every information regarding the bright future of students. If a student is interested on an art then teacher let them to take that class with a huge strength.
School knows every skills and talent about their student because they spend more time with their teachers, counselor, friends and their coach than their family. In fact, they share everything about their interest to their teachers and counselors because they understand them. But they do not share those kind of things with their family because family gives only pressure instead of understanding their children's interest. If a student is good on photography then school is the only one who gives more information and put more efforts to help them through different strategies. They try very hard that how students will feel easy and comfortable. Students are also able to learn different knowledge through the school's coach. Coach is the only one who teach, tell and motivate students about their strong and weak point through which student can do better today and give their best tomorrow than yesterday.
School provides a beautiful and colorful feathers to the students in order to fulfill their dreams in which faculty they are interested and dying to do for it; only by controlling student involvement in extracurricular activities. There are many students who do not have any interest on their study, who do not have any interest on the words written on their notebooks, who do not have any interest to become a doctor, engineer or pilot. Instead, who are interested to become a famous photographer, to become a great dancer, singer and a great actor. These dreams will be remain on dream until they do not get any supports from anyone, if they do not get any motivators to motivate them and also if anyone won't become their inspiration to inspire and encourage them. Similarly, school is that place which do not give their student's dream remain on dream; school helps students to give all those things which are needed to them; by motivating, encouraging and being inspiration for the students. It also provides an elective classes and other different activities to make them feel happy and special or in order to let their colorful feathers fly in the high sky and able to touch and feel it.
At the end, we can see that there are many benefits for the students which also teach them about the importance of extracurricular activities. Therefore, school is that place where it motivate, gives a strong strength to accomplish student's passions, suggest students to go through their interest and teach many significance knowledge about the educational experiences. Because of the schools control student involvement in the extracurricular activities, students can accomplish their interests, dreams and make their career in a particular activity in which they are interested, in which they see a big hope, declare it as their passion and happiness. I believe that not only the students, everyone should follow their passions and see success will comes towards you itself because all we need is our happiness. It is only possible if the schools control students involvement in the extracurricular activities rather than giving decisions to the family and student for the involvement in the extracurricular activities. | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 |
A00A8837B25B | Anybody is capable of doing anything no matter how bad obstacles can get. Failure is one of the biggest reasons why most of people are successful. Although people believe setting our aim low, and achieving our mark is less dangerous than aiming high and failing, nevertheless, aiming low, and achieving our mark is a greater danger because there's no limits to what people can do and failure gives motivation to work harder to achieve more and be successful in life.
To begin, setting our aim low, and achieving our mark is a greater danger than setting our aim high and falling short because there's no limits to what a human being can do and achieve. For example, Isaiah Thomas, he was one of the best basketball players in the NBA at Boston. He's very short, and everyone doubted him and said he's too short and can't make it. That didn't stop him from aiming high and achieving his goal and becoming of one the shortest people to make it to the NBA. This shows that no matter who the person is, they can accomplish a lot in life as long as they work hard. Clearly, everyone should always aim high and accomplish their goal to have a better life later on.
Furthermore, people should always aim high even if they fall short because failure gives motivation to achieve more and come back stronger. For instance, The Golden State Warriors lost the NBA finals in 2016. It was one of the worst finals ever for them. They lost very badly, but that didn't stop them from coming back the next year and winning the championship. This proves that it doesn't matter how bad failure can be, as long as they come back from it stronger. Obviously, no should be scared of failure and everyone should aim high and try to be the best at whatever they do.
Overall, the greater danger for most of people lies in not trying their hardest to be someone in life and aiming low to accomplish their goal because failure motivates the person to comeback stronger and have no limits. In conclusion, Aiming high will get anyone successful as long as they keep working hard and fear nothing. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
A0129E84B1D4 | First of all, the technology is really usefull and i think that it will have a posiitive effect in people's lives, the cuestion is how?. For example, people will not have to take a bus to visit other people, or walk miles to see other folks, instead they can just call in their phones and have a little chit chat by using tecnology.
Second, is that the tecnology can do part of the work, for example you are writing a note for a paty, ceremony, marry, whatever, and it have to be one for each person, what are you woing to do? just by using the technnology you can print evrithing you want, it makes easy your work, also have more time to do something else. In the mean time you can use your phone and unload an app to shop somthing that you like, there are several things like clothes, shoes, food, tools, and other things that can be usefull for you or you child, whatever, and there is also the app for books; people don't have to take a lot of time loking for a book, they can just find it by put it in the device or the computter
Third, some benefits of the technology is the time that you spent looking for sonthing or deciding, another benfit is the things that you can learn with all the information that is in the web, ofcourse if you use it properly like it is. You can learn how to be an artist, how to cook, and how to fix something broken.
In addition, sometimes people get addicted in a web and that could be bad, that is when the negative effecs came, people don't know what they are doing when they get adicted to it, that is why people have to know how to use it correctly
Consecuently, the technology is developing more and more, we can built great things for the future and create more, eventually, the tecnology is not the only one that is developing, there is the science too because it help to develop other things and bring protection to people.
In conclution, the technology can bring positive effects to people because is a sounce of knowledge that you can use to inprove people's live. | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
A02E1D0BEACF | Hello, this is Generic_Name and i go to Generic_School. Today ill be taking position on an issue i have been hearing alot about .The issue is should students go to school or study online and take online classes. School provides more social life more teachers, and more classes that you have to go to everyday. When online classes are providing the classes you need to gradute but its online and for free unless you are trying to take extra classes to gradute earlier. It will be all your responsablity.
Students that go to school. They will have to wake up early around 6:30 - 7:00 to catch their bus to go to school because the bell will ring at 7:55. School also provides lunch and breakfast which i think are very good for you. they care about how your nutriton is or if the food is fresh or not. They have vegeteran food for those who are vegeteran and they got chicken and rice which i find pretty healthy. There will be social life going on during school because you will be meeting all these people from different places which i find very intresting to meet other people from different countries. You have to be very responsible on how to talk to people and how to act in public because it can get you in a serious trouble if you dont act straight. You will have 5 minutes to get to each class otherwise you are late!! be on time always. You are also getting so much help from the teachers you are not alone. If your teacher isnt there you have your friends in class they can help you figure out what you are stuck on school starts from 7:55 and it ends at 2:55. School will help you find your college there will bea class for you which is called career center that can assist you and help you find whats best for you and contact them if you decide.
Online or video conferencing (home school) is what people usually call it. If you are homeschooled you get to wake up whenever you want and you can go to bed whenever you want. You can start working along studying and balance your time and see what benifts you in the future. The choice is yours of what you want to eat. You will have more freedom, there will be noone there to bother you if you get bothered easily or like to work quite. I personally know alot of people that care about what others think of them and if they have friends or not or would people judge them because of what their wearing. If you are homeschooled you dont have to worry about that. The course will take you where you need to be its very straight forward , and they will quiz you very often to make sure your on the right path. You can decide when to study or what days that will depend on your schedual if you are working or not. There will be onone pressuring you to do homework or yelling at you if your late to school or class. Students consider taking online classes people judge alot nowdays and if you arent smart enough you will get your feelings hurt and that might cause depression for some people which can affect the student life.
My position on this issue. this issue is very common and i hear alot of students considering taking online classes .I think students should go to school and learn there because their will be all the help they need. They will take care of you not only that you also learn how to deal with people in real life and experience stories that can maybe one day make you laugh or maybe some stories that we all have learned lessons from. for example: lets say you get in a fight with someone and you and the other guy both got in trouble over something silly during your time in high school you will realize that its not worth it fighting people therefore you should take at least 10 seconds to think before you do anything that you might regret in the future. You will have teachers that can tutor you after and before class if you need to they will be on you because that will benift both of you guys. teachers would have very good history of good students and good grades teacher and students will have a good grade that can get them to college. If your taking online school you might fail to organize your time and the year might just go to waste. I say that becasue you will be with your family or working trying to save money for yourself but then you run out of time and your finding it very difficult at this point. i think its a very risky move to do because you will miss out alot of good days and a great atmosipher to be in with all these people around you and the teachers who try to help you success in your life and help you achieve all your goals by going to your dream college.
go to school guys and stay in school. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
A04B4B412DB3 | The school board should add an hour and a half hours of school to each school day. Do you agree with this? Three reasons why school board should add an hour and a half hours to school are, students wouldn't have much homework, schools could add another elective to the day, and teachers get more teaching time. Help me do this!
The first reason why I believe the school board should add an hour and a half hours to the school day is students wouldn't have much homework. Most students have responsibilities after they get home from school. Some have responsibilities at home, work, and sports. Most students take care of their siblings when they get back from school. Others work after school and don't have time to do their homework. Also a huge amount of students have after school sports either inside or outside of the school, sometimes both.
The second reason why the school board should add an hour and half hours of school to each day is because schools could add one more elective. Studies show people become disinterested in an activity within an hour. If schools added one more elective to the school day most students would be on board with the hour and a half idea. Some people naturally like school and they want the hour and a half thing to happen. Instead of the elective this class could also be a study time for students that are struggling with a class or an assignment. This could help students grow their brain because they would try to understand it, instead of just giving up.
The last reason why an hour and a half hours should be added is teachers would get more teaching time. Teachers tend not to explain some topic well because they run out of time. Students don't ask questions because usually they run out of time. Sometimes the teachers is explaining to another student because they didn't quiet get it either. This doesn't mean the teacher doesn't know how to teach, it means the teacher made an effort to teach as fast as possible so he or she wouldn't run out of time.
The school board school board should add one hour and a half hours to each school day. Three reasons why I think this should happen are students wouldn't have much homework. schools could add one more class or elective,and teachers would have more time to teach. Do you agree with me? If you do help me make this happen! | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
A055576C0F9E | My name is Generic_Name. I am going to take a position about self-reliance, whether or not about if should people make their own decisions, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about lifes important matters. I honestly think that seek guidance from experts is better, because you can ask them about how they did to accomplish their goals and also they have more experience about life.
First, guidance from experts it can be much better, because experts can give more options, more ideas. Also you can ask them about what you need in life to be success. Also ask them about their life, how they did to accomplish their goals. Because if we are in any situation that we know we could not do it alone , we should ask them about any idea that they will give to us.
Second, those people they know almost everything about life, they could tell you whats steps you need to follow to achieve. As we know, billionaires people worked hard to be success, even if they failed something, even if life make them week, they never give up. they keep trying and trying until they make their dreams comes truth. thats why seek guidance is important for someone that want a better life.
Finally, in life we need help, even if we say that we dont need we need it. Because we can not do everything by our self. Thats why we should ask for help with people that can teach us about life. People that will give us tips to be success in life, because they have more experience and also because they know almost about everything.
Sincerely,
Generic_Name. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
A094036DE672 | I think that setting a curfew time for teenagers during the week and weekends is good because it's letting them know the time they can leave there house, and the time they so there parents wouldn't worry about them leaving in the middle of night just to go out with friends. If there weekday curfew is until 10pm then it's acceptable because it's a school night so they at least just go home after school, change, and go out with friends until 10pm. If they get home after 10pm then they are disobeying, and breaking the law which would get them in so much trouble so like the consequences would be go to court, talk with the judge, and know what there punishment would be either going to be on prohibition for 2 weeks, having an ankle bracelet so if they try to sneak out it would alert an officer then they would immediatly would be put in juvenile detention center for a week, and if those consequences don't work then they would be offically be put with an officer to take him to school, home, and work so they don't try to sneak out again. The weekend curfew would be all day until 12am. this curfew time is only set only fridays and saturdays. If they come back home after 12am then there are gonna be actual real more serious consequences like being on house arrest, be on prohibition with an officer watching you, taking you to where you're supposed to be if any of those dont work then they will just be locked up in a Juvenile detention center for 4 weeks so they would actually have no freedom only time is when they get visitation time with there parents visit, and when they are released from that place. Inconclusion I believe that havig a weekday and weekend curfew is good because it warns kids what there consequnces will be if they disobey the law and going out after curfew hours. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
A0A2D6856B0E | (1)A talent I have is pranking people. Something that inspired me to do pranks on people was a
YouTube creator. He went out in public and did these prank that inspired me to try them. My first prank I did was on my family by putting a woppie cushion on they seat it was fun and it made me laugh. I started to do more pranks on them but the pranks started to get boring they were no more good ideas.
My new ideas were using the pranks in new ways. Not what they were designed to do in new creative ways like putting a cockroach under a cookie that idea went really well it scared a lot of people that was one of my creative pranks.
my second one was. It was called Valentines through the hand box. This one took a little bit more effort then the rest of them because you had to cut a big hole through the box that was the size of your hand. How this work was on Valentines I would of gave someone a big box that is the shape of a heart and cover the bottom of the box were the hand would go in and they would open it and a hand would pop out at them. this is how I started to develop to use pranks to make people laugh. I still use these pranks I buy them off
Amazon and at 5 Below. Now I .use the prank more on teachers for the most part and how I use it is is in public I place a fake poop on the ground and people got disgusted and I once had a robot cockroach made people freak out. Well I think it is important to have some pranks in our life it make us feel joy and happy afterword because how the world is now a days, they is not that much joy in life more people then ever are sad so we all need sometimes a laugh in our lives no better way to do it by a harmless prank. pranking people is my talent those are some reason why I am good at pranking people and that how I use pranking in my life. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
A0A56F7995D6 | I disagree with the statement about a positive attitude is the key to success in life because there's others things you need to be success in life anyone can have a positive attitude and they are not success or probably won't be, theres only few percent of people in this world that are success there are some people that dont have a positive attitude and they are success in life.
For example people with a positive attitude they try so hard to be success in life but they cant they keep trying, trying and nothing happens. now some people with a bad attitude are success they dont even have to try to work hard to be success.
Image how many people work hard and hard every day just be success in life, but theres a couple of people that have a positive attitude and they are success in life basically living life great, there are people people that dont have a positive attitude they just do bad things to be success. now doing bad things is not right because you can be success for a while. for example it can be stealing or drugs if you are dong those things you will be success but is not a right choice for you and you keep doing it one day you will have to pay for what you did, most people prefer to work hard every day to be able to have at least everything, I prefer people to do the right thing because doing bad is not going to get you anywhere you might be success but it wont be forever id rather work hard so i can be success in life | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
A0B2BF94231C | First impressions are almost impossible to change. I disagree because when you look at a person for less than 6 seconds you think you know that person. Until you have a coversation with that person at least for ten mintutes. Your impression will change. However i disagree that first impressions is almost impossible to change. The reason why is that the way a person looks,personality, and their communication skills are always that change your whole point of view of that person. From your first impression, when you look at them.
However the way a person looks from your first impression isnt always who they really are. Your observation on someone aren't truely who they are. The person can be good looking person you've ever seen and you really want to meet them. Until they are the wost person, that you hate so much. This also works the other way around too, the person could be the ugliest person you have ever met, but you never gave them a chance. Thats when you realize that, that person is really good. Its also like dont judge a book by its cover. Until you actually meet that person and get to know them.
Personality can change your first impression. Personality is mostly who you are finding out, who that person is, can be life changing. For you not knowing who someone is can have a big change for you. You really dont know who you are really meeting. Personality gives great insights in that person and who they really are. Also however they want to come out to you.
Also communication is key its really important to have communication. Communication gives confidence to the other person who you are communicating with. That shows that you understand the other person and feel comfortable with them. Having good eye contact and hearing all the information of the conversation that they are giving you, makes them open more up to you.
Additionally, i disagree that the first impression is almost impossible to change. Their personality, the way they look, and communication skills can always change your whole point of view on a person. Looks can be looks, personality being honest no matter what. Communication skills are you by listening, can help you on your first impression. Therefore by taking the time, day, hours , and effort to get to know someone can benefit you from not judging a book by its cover. First impressions can change ,by getting to know that person and who they really are. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
A0B58CDB939A | We choose our own character traits. Because you are responsible for yourself and waht you want in your life. A lot of people are going to defenetly critisize your traits and tell you that you are not good at this and that. Therefore you are responsible to succeed in life by doing the right things and using the right traits. For example if someone else comes and tells that you are not good at your job and you know you are doing good and everyone tells that you are doing awesome. And you are strong and cofident at what you do then you are good.
In the other hand people think that traits are formed by influences or beyond our control. But influence comes from our own family. For example our ancestor could have done the things that our dad or mom are wanting us to be doing. Therefore our traits are every good because our dad and mom already did the traits that our ancester thought them. Fortheremore we are getting strong and have the capacity to teach others about what traits are all about.
As a result the younger genaration is learning about a trait really is. Traits really means a lotin life becuase a trait definetly describes how your personality really is and what you are really good at. For example if you are good at playing soccer thats a persona trait. Sometimes it takes a long time to learn what really your traits are. But if you now you are good at something show the world who you really.
Our character traits are more important than we realise beacause it defines how you are. In addition our traits is what gets you a real job or a habbit that you have. Also character traits are you being smart you acting or doing other things. For example helping your brother or your friends at school is a trait because you now the topic and they dont. In Addition of this is waht deifnes your character traits.
In conclusion we are the ones that decide our traits even now our parents or other people try to tell us what to do. At the end we are the ones that decide our future and what really our character traits are. And where we to fully develop them. We just got be strong over come any obstacle.
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A0B8C1FA3811 | I think the students should not be allow to use their cell phone in classroom, the effects of allowing them is not going to be useful comparing to how it will take their attention from their class work to the online world of cell phone. The reasons that most schools have free computer or laptops for all students for educational purposes, and distracting other students, teachers, and the student, who does as well, with out even knowing that .
Most or every school has too many online items for student to use for example, in my school we use laptop and iPad as a main educational resources to do the class work. Using the school resources with free internet, and that allow teachers to know what is everyone doing and help them if they need to. Also, that most schools have a libraries have a lot of the best free educational recourse for all students, so that make students have too many options instead of using their own cell phones in classroom.
Moreover, using cell phone in the classroom would distract others students with their class work for example, I prefer using the outline resource instead of the online once, so I can not focus to my class work when students use their cell phones around me. Also, using cell phone in the classroom could be less useful compare to how it could take students attention to the cell phone Social Medea world or the online world, so if one student didnt use the cell phone in the right way or for an educational purposes all the classroom's people, teacher and students, wold be distract out of their subject and lose their class time.
Others people might have another opinion about that, for example the can say using the cell phone is useful for student for educational purpose and contact family. That can be right when we can be sure that all teenager students would do this. Also that every school has a free phone for students to contact their families if their is a need.
Therefore, using cell phone in the classroom is less use that it's, because that would wast all class's time, and students have more options to search online for their class work.
We all must respect people's, teachers', and our time in classroom by not use cell phone to distract and lose the attendances' benefit in classroom. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
A0BC5780C987 | Going outside can provide fun and enjoyable things to do for example going to the park with friend or people that you enjoy being around with, playing a sport, riding a bike, riding a scooter, and lastly a way you can spend time outside if you don't want to be so active is just walking around the neighborhood either with yourself or with a friend.
Going to the park with friends or people you like surrounding yourself with is fun and enjoyable because you guys can make up a game or play a game and play in different teams and see which team wins first. Playing with some of the park equipment is another way to have fun for example the swings to see who can go the farthest upwards, the slide maybe you guys can time yourself to see who goes down the slide the fastest, or the monkey bars to see who can get across the set of bars quicker or who can hold themselves on the bars the longest. A little of a made up game my sister and I played when we were younger was obstacle course so what I would do is tell my sister that the floor was an ocean filled with hungry sharks and that would make the game more intense because at the time we were very scared of sharks and so if one of us fell of the monkey bars or rope the other would have to start chasing the person who fell until the person who fell gets to their "safe spot" which the safe spot would have to be far.
Another thing you can do outside is play a sport, ride a bike or ride a scooter. Playing volleyball, soccer and basketball are my favorite sports not only because it's fun but it's very competitive and that always gives me so much energy and having energy just makes the game better because it makes both the competitors competitive since the boost of energy makes them tensed and careful to make sure they don't mess up so they watch the competitor like a hawk. If playing a sport is boring and not interesting to someone, riding a bike or a scooter is an option. Riding them is exciting and fun. Riding a bike or a scooter around a park is relaxing if your just calmly passing through but if your racing with someone or yourself then it's fun so both ways is enjoyable to a person. If I go out to bike or scooter I'm with either a friend or a family member because we like to bike or scooter next to each other and just talk or race to see who's faster and better at doing biking or riding a scooter.
If going to the park or playing a sport doesn't interest you and you just rather do something calming and relaxing then going on a walk, run or laying outside with a blanket on the ground and watching the clouds go by is an option for you. If you're with someone and you guys want to run then you guys can calmly jog next to each other or have a small conversation while running or run and just be next to each other for support and comfort. If you're walking just with yourself then you can breathe, think, or just look at your surrounding look at the trees, houses if they're any near by, or the flowers. Laying out a blanket on the ground and staring at the sky is enjoyable to some people because watching the sky and how the clouds move is angelic and peaceful to them, so if you're wanting to do something that includes being outside and you don't want to do anything then walking, running. and sky watching is for you. Laying out a blanket and watching the clouds go by is probably one of my favorite things to do just because it's very relaxing to me, distracts my busy mind, and I find clouds beautiful so watching something that gives me peace to me makes me happy mentally and physically.
Going to the park, playing a sport, going on a walk, or a run is some of the things you can do outside and enjoy and have fun. Being outside is important because Vitamin D if it's low then a way you can raise it up is going outside because the sun is apart of vitamin D so not only going out is good for you physically but it can also be good for you mentally. Fresh air we're use to being home all day and going out to get some fresh air willl cleanse you. | 3 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 |
A0D37DDFBE96 | There is a lot of ways to safe energy and conserve resources, but not all the pepole follows along with them. As an example for that could be, that every time people is not using a light at their house they must turn it off. Also when students use their computers at school for a long time just playing games and charging it, it's a waste of energy. Not every body understand how important the energy is. This is why bussinesses and schools should adopt a four-day week, with each day consisting of then hours.
Having a four-day work week has their benefits. Workers would only work four days and have three day weekend, they would have more time to rest, and have a time with their families. On the other hand working requires using energy for any type of power tools as computers, printers, and construction tools. Working four days a week will decrease the use of energy.
Also some people drive to their job, and others ride the bus, using this method of working only four days a week will safe the people more resources, as gasoline, money, and vehicles.
As working four days a week has their benefits, it also has their disadvantages. students would have to go school, and workers would have to go to work only four days a week, of each day consisting of ten hours. Students would have to stay at school two more hours, meaning they would waste more energy as they usually do. Workers would waste a very big amount of enegy due by the power tools they use. Students would only go to school for four days, and wokers to work for only four days as well, but each day constis in ten hours, however they still will work for forty hours, as if they worked five days a week, workers and studets will be wasting the same amount of energy and resources.
Being a student and going to school for only four days a week and having a three day weekend has their benefit. Students would have more time to complete their homework, and study for tests. On the other hand going to school requires to waste some energy, and resources, students uses their computer that they need to charge, and teachers uses paper every day, while using this method students and tacher would safe resources and energy. Some students drive to school, others take the bus, or they also drive to academies, this all relates to the wasting of energy and resoruces as gasoline. Otherwise going to school for only four days a week, will decease all the energy used in computer, and the gasoline the cars need to get students to school.
Students going to school only four days a week has their benefits and disadvantages. Students would waste less energy than they do in five days, they aslo would waste less gasoline and money if they only come four days. Having this method the comminuty would safe a lot of energy and resources that can be need it for the future. Schools should follow this model by extending the school days two hours and waste less energy and resources. | 2.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
A0D47C0DD67F | Individuality is the idea of freedom of thoughs, but why we are concerned what other people think? Let's be honest everybody had copied at least one time in a test or quiz just because it was more eassy to coppy than being trying to remember the anwer that obviously you did not know. We own our thoughs, thus, we should do ours ideas not somebody else's ideas
In the book called "Maria Magdalena" based in the movie "The Davinci code" states the ideas of one individual who thalk about the true behind the story about Maria Magdalena ( Jesus' mother). To catholic people Jesus's mother is saintly. Their sanctuary, the church. To the author of the book "Maria Magdalena" she is just a lie's layer. On those old times there were many poor people who were opressing by the church, they sufer in the church's hands. The church killed to protect the true behind Maria Magdalena. On those times existed the crusades in spanish the "cruzadas" in which the church fought the protestants to convert them in their cristianity if they negated to accept it they killed them. The victims decide to follow their own beliefs and the consequence was the death. This is a good example of individuality similar to our way to live in the present. The politics want us to do what they want to their advantages opressing our rights just like the church did with the protestants during the crusades. The author of "Maria Magdalena was very brave to wrote about those things. He was very successful because nobody used to talk about this, now they do. In this book he shared us a little part of what was to be different from the others and take their own decitions. Based on this I state that we can share our ideas of individuality and do not let our corrups politics to opress people's rights.
In the present we have a huge amount of successful guys because of individuality. The influential ideas of the past are not in our day to day anymore. Parents now teach their offspring to take their own decitions knowing the consequences of this. Now we, the tenageers, are more prepared to develop our ideas and beliefs. Constantly, my mom develop the ideas of individuality in our family. One year ago I decided to start to work, and I am very proud of my decittion.
I remember my first day of kinder garden, All the kids playing and runnig around the field. To be honest, I prefer being painting rather than be runnig for no reason. My art's teacher gave us draws made by her."Ready to paint" she used to say, but I was so rebel that I made my own draws just because I though her draws were so bored. I was a little girl taking individuality decitions and I did not know it
In my conclusion I am agree with individuality, If we want to spread the individuality, then we should start saying what we think, because the bravery of the unexpected ones, will persuade the shyness ones. Individuality can be hard but not impossible. We live in a world with influencers that try to persuade us to be like them. Do not choose the easy way. I prefer the hard way, so then I would be proud of my achievement just like Ralph waldo Emerson said: "To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplisment" | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
A0E95D8119F7 | I would agree with Emerson's in this world be yourself which is most important things . If we have confidence your own because we face with different kind of stutionan that we have to fight and difficult staff in life never give back keep working hard encourage find way that take of your stutional.
For example: If we start something new that took long time to resive that result we have to be patient for that greatest thing never get quickly every beginning took time for that accomplishment we are face diffcualte time like might field are might be win for first chance never lost our hope keep working hard.
don't depended to other people never improve in life because depended to other. In the world indefinite multitude or great quantity or distance make a difference a way. For all the world in every way ex acuity copies which look for all the world like the original. You should trying to become succeed in life to get of the way from problem find solution how to succeed in you're life.
First, trying as mach could doing make more successful this new world sometimes is life easy but, sometimes is not because life complicate and busy. If continue this way your life totally change working hard more successful and, more achievements. Should be put the goals what should I, do to accomplishment my goals for that you should keep trying to never stop your trying because noting impassable without trying. When start something for that need trying to resive achieve your pride. Those people are trying are working hard now the a have more power.
Then, greatest thing you have to skill which is more important that part of life also. Without skills never get achievement because everything bast on standing everyone the have special skills that make encourage and make them successful in the life. For example one person good in the reading some are the writing, some cooking, some are management, and some are making with hand ext... Those are part of skill everyone they had for that resance this greatest achievement this very important. Those people the don't a have those are more make terrible never couldn't solve the own problem the need the come to help them this is showing weakness a person. Some people thing the don't have skill this impossible but, never are used own skills the thing couldn't do it the always thinking negative they lost.
After, beyond every good thing the have achievement. When get our aschivemnt that made feeling proud your self encourage you doing good things that challenge of life the person make more successful.
I do agree with Emerson statement the encourage you working hard trying your life you would be get greatest achievement. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
A10755158FEF | Some people believe that in order for a student to put their best effort they have to go to a praise , as well as others think effort wil find others to believe that true self -esteem comes from an achievement. Achievement can make a students accomplish alot of things way in their life such as goals they have set ,
new things , and focus on things that have to be done .
As a student achievement could let students accomplish a lot of things in their life such as golas they have set . Students like to get their work done . Also have good grades that makes them feel confident about themselves . Try new things that they always wanted to do . Especially students wil be able to think that things can be accomplished by working hard towards it . It's accomplishing what they have set to reach true - self esstem because the more you accomlish as a students the more you want to do in your life
Having confidence in yourself can lead you to true self-esteem . It can let you do many things also your favorite things . Without a person having confidence in themselves can lead to negative things . It will make a student focus on what they are doing also what they have to accomplish in order for them to finish what has to be done . Having a postive attitude will make a person interact with other people , and make you look as a good person .
Students having true self-esstem is an important rule in everyday life . It lets you do thngs that you thought you wouldn't do .There is more socializing with people and learning new things by them . It makes students put the best effort in what they do . It gives new learning skills and become more smarter . Many students can become the best version of themselves with being postive at all times . It's important to believe that things can be done with being postive in what is ready to be done .Students should believe that having true self -esstem is important in things you do .
As some people believe a students work to bulid self -esteem , it's imporant to have true self-esstem because it makes you accomplish things such as doing great things , have self confidence , and have a mind of goals that can be accomplished . However ; it;s important to maintain a postive attiude to accomplish things . | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
A10E91E49973 | Yes, I do believe that imagination is important more than our knowledge. Albert Einstein is recognized as the most brilliant person who has ever lived. He used his imagination more than his knowledge, which made him accomplish so many things. He imagined things first, then used his knowledge to make that happen. If we couldn't imagine things, it would've been difficult for anyone to invent something or do a lot of things. All the inventors, who has invented things first used their imagination to create an image on their mind to see how it will look like, which helped them to make the item. Imagination helps us to accomplish our goal. It shows us what we can do to achieve it. Imagining helps us in many ways.
I always think or imagine before I do something big. I always imagine before making a choice or decision because I do not know how it will turn out. Sometimes some people think its funny and laughs that imagination can't come true but I do believe that no matter how hard is to accomplish my success, I will always try. My parents always tells me to imagine what I truly want to be when I grow, which is amazing. I think many parents are strict and tells their children to stop imagining things and always study, which I believe education is very important but telling someone to stop imagining is not quite right, Once I read in a article where it said that imagining thing is a natural habit and you will imagine things unless you have disability or blindness.
Once I also read a article that says that according to physcology imagining things is important for our brain . We imagine things everyday. When we are imagining things or just thinking, it helps to improve our brain. Scientist always has a prediction or imagines before doing an experience because they don't know what is going to happen. That helps them to be prepared so that if something happens their going to be ready for it. Albert Einstein had a an amazing knowledge also he believed that imagination is important, which made him be a successful person. There are so many celebrities, who wrote a quote about how imagining helped them achieve their goal. For example Taylor swift always imagined that shes going to be a singer when she was young and now she is a singer. Sometimes people can use imagination in a bad way like imagining to rob a bank but its not good, but they need to think deeply how it can affect them.
If you also don't use your knowledge can't succeed because you have to use imagination and knowledge to succeed, you have to use both. I will always remember this quote. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
A1196779A15B | Do I think we choose our traits? In this world people choose their pathway. What they want to be in life. What career they want to do in the future. Some people have not figure out what they want to do in their life. It is always up to yourself to make life choices and some people like to listen to other people ideas but not listen to themselves. Humans like to listen to their friends or family members ideas too see if they can help them out. I think people like to listen to others people ideas but their own idea which is showing they can not make their choices by themselves.
Many of the humans depend on their friends or family being their to help them out. Being part of this life is learning how to make choices by yourselves and going out in the world and making yourselves an adult. Kids that turn sixteen start looking for jobs so they can grow and see how the money and dealing with customers works. When I turn sixteens years old I went out to look for jobs i wanted that feeling where I could earn money. People would make fun of me for working at a thrift store. At that time I cared what people would say about me and I told my manger that the job was not for me. I would listen to people comments but it was not worth it because they are not going to be there in the future. The point is we let people make our choices when we can do it ourselves but we like to depend on others.
Some people can feel like the world make their choices. Someone who you do not know about can judge you for no reason. Some people feel like they have to make everyone happy but not make themselves happy. When it comes on choosing who will be our next president not a lot of people like to tell others who they will vote for because there is always a person who will say something about it. There was a time when I was in my government class and a student asked what i thought about our president and his issues. I told him how i felt and instead of telling that he agreeing with me he told me how wrong I am and I did not know anything about the issues and how the president is trying to slow it. It can always be a person who you do not know trying to make your choices. Even though sometimes we make our mistakes however I feel like we depend on others
When it comes to make out choice we like to learn from experience we been through. We like too watch other people do it or we like to do it ourselves. I think it happened too be before when I thought I was doing it the right way and I would look around my classroom and I would see the other students doing it differently. By the end of the class the teacher got all of us in trouble because we did it the wrong. I should have asked the teacher or kept doing how I was doing it before. I feel like some people do not have the confident in themselves. I think that is right because sometimes I over think about something that is not a big deal.
In this world we do not like to do our things. We like people choosing for us, making decisions for us, and depending on others. Some people take time to figure out their life and who they want too be in life. I think we like to depend on other people ideas and not listen to ourselves. Living in this world is always about making choices and living by those choices. Do not have to listen what other people say about what you think and how you should live your life. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
A11969208401 | Dear Manager,
My school would like to have a partnership with your local companies. This organization will allow many students to explore the profession of being makeup artist. They can learn how to do hair, makeup, and how to dress.
Hair is very difficult to manage . Some people dont even have healthy hair most of the time. Humans die there hair to much,They put so many product in there hair it damages. To many people straightens or curl there hair with heat every day,and that damages your hair really badly and fast. If students go to this course ,students can learn how to take care of hair and keep it healthy.
Many people want to learn how to do makeup but today's makeup is to expensive . If students take this cores it would give them the chose to learn and not wonder how it would feel like if they didnt take that cures because it was to expensive or because they didnt have the tools like makeup. I want this partnership to show people they can become who they want to be when they grow up.
You wear clothing every day,people dont know how to dress. This course will help you how to match ,color skim and many more. This class will help you in your every day life.
This partnership will really with with the students personal social health. The students will learn more ,it can help them in there every day life. they dont have to weary about if they cant afford tho go to collage and they cant accomplish there dreams. Theses course hair, makeup and dressing with really dost there self confident. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
A18B82F7407B | When you first meet a person for the first time, it is good to have a positive attitude towards the person so that they see a good impression of yourself and how you are as a person. meeting someone for the first time is a way to show them who you are but that impression never changes because they know that you are that person of character. theres many ways of having a good, bad, and persuasive attitude when you meeting a person, businessman, and even a friend. i think that the first impression towards a person can be like how they view you as a whole. it doesnt always have to be about character this could go for anything even including: movies, video games, and television shows. they can have a strong impact on you, even little kids that are growing up that watch TV, those television show have a first time impression towards them.
Meeting a person with a bad attitude/ impression can show you that they are not good for you or even around the people that you hang out with, many people tend to have the impression of a cool and awesome person when in reality they arent that person, many people try to put up an image so people think that you are "awesome" or "cool". leaving someone with a bad impression can have a big or negative impact in their life for example when you first meet a person you wanna date they could leave you with a good impression but over time that person can change the way they feel about you and you see that a they are changing as person which many people arent comftarble with change of a person. also having a bad impression on the job you are trying to get, wont get you the job because of how you are behaving or using words or even body posture says a lot about a person.
Good impression that you show the first time to a person meets you be kind and just have a good attitude so people will have the same to you. being good to people in life can alway have a positive outcome. dont always be god to people that treat you bad and run you over and over again.
i think its best to havea good frist impression to anyone you meet in your life because those people will like you and some will not like you at all, but being the best of yourself to your potential can be amazing at times but always have a positive mind set about impressing other people and its not always about impressingother people its also about having that thought of being your best at all times. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
A1976FDEA9E2 | If I would pick a enjoyable activity it would be art. I
would picked art because you can do anything you want with it. The reason I
picked art was because a long time ago I would be sad or mad. So I went to the consular and she told me
I can use art. And how will
I use it? I would color what i felt and i would take my anger out its like telling someone what you feel except your drawing it.
My secound reason is its not always about drawing you can also the other things with it. You can gather resources and you can build things with that. For example if you had feather and bottles or cans you build a bird out of it. And even just painting something like a wall with difrernt kinds of color thats art.
Also it can be soothing because when you have a lot of tress you can paint. Because whe you paint and your trying to paint the beach it relaxing. For meits relaxing because whe you start to paint the brush won't be hard like a pencil it will just go by so soft you won't have to worry about messing up.
It's also great becauseyou get to learn about artist. Because it will kinda help you. Because it can tell you about how they draw or paint they can have a special way doing it. Like I read artist that used dots to paint and draw I thought that was enterested so i tryed it was kinda of hard. But I enjoyed trying it. This is why i like art becuase you can use it for anything. what is your favourte thing to do? | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
A1B06DEEA15C | I agree with the Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill, that failure plays an important role for some people in life, If they fail once they could get it right the second time and succeed. People will learn from their mistakes and it will take time for people to be successful in their life and accepted that they failed for the first time.
Its very important for people to know that if they fail they can try again and can go back and check to see what was wrong or think to them self what they did wrong, They can learn from their mistakes and not give up when they fail the first time.
People that have failed in life know that its not a bad thing when they fail. Its actually a good thing to fail in life and people that know what its like to fail would get inspired to work extra hard and take more time to look over everything. They would also stay on the positive side and have family, friends, and other people supporting them and cheering for them no matter what happens if they fail or don't fail.
The British prime minister probably has fail in the past years when he was younger and was successful after he learned from his mistakes. Nobody is perfect in life thats why we fail in life to see what we did wrong and make sure that it doesn't happened in the future.
Here is one example, If someone wants to open a coffee shop the person would need to get a loan from the bank so they can purchase a building and to start their own coffee shop business and come up with the name's for the coffee shop, drinks, pastries, and food that will be on the menu. People that have wanted to start their own coffee shop business or other kinds of business, doesn't always work out for them for some reasons and are not very successful when doing the planing their ideas and would want to hire someone to help them come up with more ideas. The person might not be happy when he or she were unsuccessful for the first time to try and open their own business and take a few more months to come up with more ideas to be more successful for the second time.
Overall, I think that failing is good thing and not a bad thing its just people dont have to give up after they fail the first time they need to give another second chances until they get it right. People should get inspire to keep working hard when they fail and not quit, because not everyone in the world is perfect in life. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
A1BFCDA12FB1 | People should make their own decisions about life's important matters. i agree with this statement because once people get older as a person they know what they are doing and what they want. another reason is high school, people are a teenagers and people are still learning, but sometimes make mistakes. moreover when people are eighteen they start to make important choices and actions about their life.
When a person gets older they learn between right and wrong. for example a person should never spend their money on something they don't need and knowing if they do they'll be broke and have financial problems. people know what are the needs and wants in life, they learn this through out life and the one to make the decisions.
High school is where people start to have an idea or know what you wanna do as a career. In high school you get to meet a lot of people and make new friends, in addition you make a lot of decisions. The decisions people make and ask their self are, should i be friends with this person, should i go to this class, and sometimes people don't wanna continue school. more over people wanna experience a party in high school so they sometimes make the decision to go and drink or do drugs, but end up getting in serious problems. In the end people make the decisions.
When a person turns eighteen they are an adult now and probably out of high school. People are either in collage or working when eighteen. That's a decision people make before graduating and thats a very important life choice. Sometimes people make the decision not to go to collage or sometimes go to collage then drop out and thats a decision a person makes because they think its the best for them.
in conclusion people make decisions and learn from it. People know between right and wrong, need and wants, and what they wanna do in life. You also make mistakes in life and sometimes you need to make that mistake in order for you not to make the same decision again. At the end of the day people know what they want in life and know the decisions they make. Guidance from others is a idea or option, people will still have to make the decisions. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
A1C1C0FE3C7A | The best thing about on this statement is how can I learn about us, maybe are you will say how?
well that easy we have to see who we are or maybe what we going to do
I have a many reasons to show and too see how can I show the people who we are?
well that's easy.
The first thing what we have to see is how we wanna say the thing examples we don't have to never give up never say no just do it and you not take care what the people is wanna say you can do whatever you want in your life just work up for it because we never did know what is wanna happened if you not take care what you want
The big reason I have in my life is some people want the thing we have maybe can be the opportunity the education family
Always i say the education is always came from the family because there is your power or your support for your future that why we have to be positive on that because we ready know that some people want the things what we have on us.
The opportunity what we got everyday or whatever we get we always we have to be thankful with everybody. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
A1CA2A691C98 | Do I agree or disagree on Ralph Waldo statement well I agree on what he is trying to say because you can master beyond something and get somewhere in life.
Also following your dreams and do what you want to do. Try not to follow anyone's decisions they make for you because it's not right for them to do so. It's your path to choose what you have set in life. You can master things in life if you believe in yourself and never give up. But people can tell you that you aren't too good for things and you should give up on everything.
If you were to master something important you will get somewhere in life. It can start by graduating from any school. If you mastered graduating from school it can get you a new job where you can do something better and you can grow from it. Also you can be willing of having a family , that for me it's a huge thing to have because they will help you get better opportunities. However mastering what you can it can take you to places and you can improve to becoming something better. Trying your hardest is a big key note because if you don't you may never get to become what you want and you may never grow from it.
What do I want to do and should I follow my dreams or goals. By following what you want to do you can become the next big singer out there. If you want to achieve something no one believed you can do you can become the next president. Also by thinking out of the box it can make you do things you have always wanted to do. However if you believe in yourself you can be a professional soccer player without being so ostentatious. But people can bring you down and you can always bring yourself back up if you believe that you can do it.
How can I not try to follow anybodies decisions they make for me. Well you always have to make sure that things are about you even if you don't want it to be about you. People can make you do things so you can give up on something you set you goal on. Don't listen to what they say or on what they want to tell you. It's not good for you to have negativity around you. Also you have to efface on what people have to say about what you do or how you are going to do it . However make your mark and show them what you can achieve and make the people who believed in you proud that you did it.
When someone has something so positive to say that can change someones thinking I have to agree to what he or she has to say and it's true we do have to master beyond something or we will never grow. To never give up on following your dreams and what you have set your goals for . Also try not to listen or follow what anyone decides for you and try to make it about what you want it to be . If you mastered that goal by you having them set then you will be going to places and having great opportunities. It's hard if you don't do things you have set your mind to because you will go nowhere. But you can always get advice from people whom you think will help you out. | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
A1D0490FD324 | I am writing about should students work in schools or their homes. Most people think its best for kids to be in school than in their homes because it can help them in their social life, make friends in there world instead of being lonely. Even though lots of students like to work at home, I strongly believe its better to work at schools.
Students should have friends in there lives to be more social in the world. When I was younger I use to switch schools to schools then I went to a school called Generic_School I was the only new kid in school I had no friends I was the quite in class, then one day I join a club called book club we just read books and talked about what happen in them. Then one of the kids came up to me and ask what do you like I told him what I love like animals, sports. Those were the things we both like too he was my first friend in that school. Students should be in schools because they should be comfortable when meeting, talking with other students because they might have things in common.
At school students can help each other out in class if they dont understand something. For example, In history there are students that don't understand they would just sit in their seats and not ask for help. One day I saw a student frustrated with work so I decided to help him in America Civil War. When we took our test we both got A's. In my class students can be helped by fellow classmate or the teacher.
During school projects students can be in partners or in groups to get a good grade. In my science class we have projects to do we get in a group of friends to get a good grade and we see a student work by him self. When we got our projects back we got an A and the student got a B. This shows that in schools we should be with other students to bring in ideas, ways that others can't see.
In school you can be well taught and understand better when people like teachers, or other students help them. Its best for students to be in school rather than be home school. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
A1DC92E4E3C8 | In the United States, the limitation to human contact due to technology has had a positive effect on people's lives. in mordern times, technology has been very helpul to everyone. Technology performs multi-tasks without physical contacts with others. Due to this, people don't have to go to stores to get groceries and other materials. This is especially convenient for older ones because they are weak and stressing themselves could cause heart diseases and even death. But now they sit home and order anything, saving their health.
Secondly, technology has gone to the highest level. Today one could stay at home and socialize with friends and family without physical contact. Technology has provided social media apps making it easier to communicate without making human contact. Besides communication, people feel safer talking about their rights, the government and politics in general on social media than in public. In cases of emergency, social media has been proved to be the fastest way of saving lifes, accidents, and most importantly many deaths.
Obviously, technology has made it possible for kids who don't like school, and are poor learners at school due to the nature of the environment to learn online at home giving them another opportunity to become something great. Even though they don't make physical contact with friends, they are provided a better learning environment, less stressful activities, and the motivation to learn more and become a contribution to the society's well being which evryone today wants. Again this brings us to the good part about social media, though kids may not have physical contacts with friends, they have the social media.
Big Thanks to technology, there might not be human contact but it is going to the positively change peoples lives. The world will be a better place. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
A1DE235AFFC8 | What are we in the future. Who are we now from then. How did we get this way. The fact is a lot of people are born everyday. We can not stop who people are and become. Character traits start in ones teenage years. When you grow big you keep some and throw some. If it was your choice or some else who influence. There are a lot of people who change them selves. People who change for others . There is a lot of ways to become you.
When you know who you want to be as a person thats when you pick up traits. When you want to be something you start learning things. You can't have character if you don't want to be someone. Character traits are things people notice about you. Like right now there are to Women right now one is dressed nice has done her hair. She like to be fancy she blow her nose outside. She teaches Spanish I think so she travels for sure. She actually beautiful so you know she married. This another women is dressed causal and is wear a school jacket. She has a bun
But seems to be nice. She teaches science she most be smarts.
You thoughts of a lot of traits for them. How do you think they built them. They lived in different house and different schools and have a lot of different traits. Everyone can different trait and same one. You can never find someone with all the same traits. People see them in other and copy. People learn from them selves and make them. Traits are something you learn and keep.
Now if traits were something beyond your control thats different. If something beyond are control was doing this you'd think different. If you are talking about TV thats cool yeah I think so but not like that. TV is kinda like school but a lot of different things. You learn a lot of things from the TV that aren't the same. So you build off that. If you are talking like someone controlling of thats a whole different story. People would be more a like and thats how you tell we are in control.
People make their on character always. People will always be different from others . We all want to be are own person in the near future. Who wants to be someone else thats boring. We make new character and be are selves. We have control over who we are. You can live the same life as everyone and end up different. You control your own life. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
A1EC959B8C13 | Would it be surprising to know if students to know that students learning at home helps them not stress out as much? Stress is mainly caused by the students getting to much school work that cannot be handed in one night. Students complain about having too much homework and when working at home there is not any homework. Allowing any students to work on their own schedule help them become more motivated to work on their assignments. Students being educated at home gain more time to study and make up their own rules but responsible with it. Learning at home and not at school helps students to benefit themselves to get better grades.
One of the advantage of homeschooling is it can be done anywhere and at anytime. Because it can be done by a touch of a good night sleep, students rise up in morning fresh and have a flexible time schedule. The students can work around their parents schedule instead of the parent working around the student's schedule when it is time do some distance learning. Some students have trouble working at a school because they cannot understand the material at the pace set by teachers. The students cannot always work at the pace set by teachers. Distance learning allows students to work on their own pace and on their own schedule. Additionally, that there are no misguided rules about tardiness or how to dress. Because instead of worrying about the rules the students can focus on their studies. Distance learning can improve certain students learning process by having a more available schedule and by letting them learn in their own way.
When taking a test or notes at school there are many distractions that can make students lose focus on what they are doing. This is another reason that learning from home benefits students. Learning from home doesn't have the distractions that a classroom has. As a result of this, students won't lose focus on the work they are doing resulting in better grades. One of the reasons students get distracted in the first place is because they are in a class where other just fooling around which makes others who want to stay focus feel uncomfortable. If a student learns from home they will feel more relaxed and comfortable and won't stress about work. In school, you are stuck at a desk listening to the teacher's teachings for six hours and have a limited time to eat and take bathroom breaks. But there is other way around, if you are home, you can eat and do what you want when you want. Because of this, students will feel less pressured and get better grades then they would have if they were in school.
There are still a few reasons not to do distance learning. There many more opportunities with public and private schools. People from different colleges don't go to student's homes and try to advertise their career options. Making friends from home would be difficult without social interaction. Public and Private schools are great places to socialize during free time. If everyone goes home to attend school, funding for public schooling will fall and teachers will lose their jobs because of budget cuts. In public schools and private schools, depending on the teacher, cheating is hard to do. On the other hand, schooling at home, the students can easily look up the answers on the internet on a different device. So for all that matter it was you choose from not what want, it what you need.
Students should be offered classes online or at home because it is less distracting and less stressful. The flexibility of the time students are allowed to complete work would benefit the mental health and grades of the student. With a more flexible schedule, students would be more likely to succeed and make good grades. Even though socialization in the school environment allows students to make friends. The conclusion of the argument was that it is highly doubtful that the lack of interaction could affect the student in adulthood. Many students all over the world successfully take some, and even all classes from home. In the near future, school systems and all districts should provide distance learning. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
A21A69767BEE | So why do ask other people for their own opinion to help us make the better choice, well by improving your people/talking skills, That most people are usually nervous to talk infrount of others, and how we organize what got from the opinions. Let's to learning these reasons and hopeful teaching you some life skills!
What do to improved our talking/people skills, it's important to get feedback from others and you don't even know when you need it of not. Like here's an example, Generic_Name problem weather she should join the lacrosse team or not and does'nt know what to do. But she gets nervous, so she gets scared asking anyone to help her. So she goes to ask her friends and family weather or not to join. Questions like that are used in everyday life and it's always good to have a second pair of eyes to help you along the way, But it's hard when you are nervous.
How to not be nervous is hard thing to do, Because thing has the mindset were people are judging them every second. When you talk to people about something like Generic_Name she ask different friends and family on problem and still gets nervous around them. When those moments happened you take a deep breathe. Because this what want to say. The people arent going to bite you, they will answer you just like everyone else. Focus what you want to say, no one wants to be stuck in a cage of guilt, because of one questions they never asked. Now I hear that a lot and why I'm telling you this it's because I don't want to see the coward out of anything you are going to strong to go through the future, jobs, relationships, and more.
Now you to ask your friends about your question you need help decided on. When you go the ask something they feel like their opinion valves you a lot to help you with that decision, and might give you more information form other person also could build a stronger relationship. With a lot opinions weather you should join that team, it does give you different perspectives on how different people react to that problem. Others will say yes or no, and might give into details. Now that Generic_Name understands to strong and not scared, she gets her opinions and now ready to sort them out. She uses the simple pros and cons list, and able to find her answers easier then before. Now she checks the list and more votes for her to join the team, and she happy to use her life skill in the future.
Now what did we learn while reading this well, we understood what type of problem Generic_Name had and probloby relate to your problem. we learned that some are scared and nervous to talk to others and that it's important to get over with it, to not cause even more problems in the future. Lastly how can we organize the opinions and how simple it is to do. That why I think it's better to talk to other to more then one person for their opinion. So I hope next time you can remember to use those skills in the real world. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
A22BC15DDB95 | To conserve energy and resources, some businesses have adopted four-day work week, with each day consisted of ten hours. Like other places, the energy conservation in the school is also important. To have four-day school with additional two hours, is not a good idea due many problems.
Having four-day school is a good idea, because of some advantages. By having three days off from school student will have more time to do other things such as, they can spend more time on job, sports, picnics, other courses, etc. The students will have more time to relax and the students will be mentally well prepared for coming work days. Due to this, we can also conserve large amount of energy and other resources.
On the other hand, it also has a lot of disadvantages. By having two additional hours every day the student will be tired and they have to do more work every day. As a result, the students will not able to pay attention toward learning. When you are tired you can not able to pay full attention toward studies, due to which this is useless because students will not able to learning anything. This will also effect their grades. The students that do part time job they will face problem in doing that. The students who are willing to participate in extra curriculum activities, they will not able to participate in it. These are the reason that makes it a bad idea.
Four-day work week have more disadvantages. To make education and studies wealthy, we should not adopt it because it makes the studies and learning worthless. That is why having f our-day work week is a bad idea. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
A22EECAB91E9 | I support that schools should follow the same model as the business model who have adopted a four day work week to conserve energy and resources, energy, and extending the school day two hours, this kind of model could make them feel better to attempt to class, and start taking action about conserving energy and and think about our future there could be a day when our energy and resource comes to a end for humanity if we dont take actions.
However they should considered that energy and resources benefits us and the world, we mostly need energy in everything to survive and resources its a natural source of wealth or revenue that enhances the quality of human life, if businesses have adopted a four day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours to conserve energy and resource for their future, my school should follow this model because i think schools are the most who spend and waste energy and resource by their thousands of students that attempt there.
With a four-day school week , student would at least get rid of depression which adds unnecessary stress, they will have a one break day to do their homework and assignments without staying up all night just to finish it, at the same time it will benefit the environment by just having a four day school week , it will be harder for them to adapt for a longer days of school and a shorter week of school, some of them will not adapt to it but still it would help them to be more time at home with their family instead of be at school stressing.
Whatever, If parents and students got the benefit of having a day off, parent will have the time that they didnt have before with their kids they will more hours of work and school but still it may help them to have a better connections, and at least they would have a day off stressing and worrying about their work and assignments.
In Conclusion, cutting one day out of school would be helpful for young teenagers who are studying and working at the same time to help their families, and it would conserve much energy and resource than before, making our environment greater by conserving energy and resource in only four days of work for adults and four days of school for teenagers who attempt to any school. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
A25E8EBA43CA | I agree with this prompt or sentence because it the truth. A problem is not just a problem it a way fro a second chance and a success in life. A problem dose not mean your a life is over or i can not go back to redo it again, yes you can it your life you choose how to solve your problems. An example, having an F in your test dose not mean it the end no it not it the beginning because that how you start by giving your self a failure path and make it a success and that how a problem start. A way to solve a problem is like in school, at home, in the street, is talking it out with someone who can help in school you can talk to you teacher your consular, at home you can talk to you mom, sister, dad, brother, in the street if it a fight talk to each other, cause a street is not a place to fight. When having a problem you will know because it will give you this negative feelings like you are not perfect you can do anything right, you should know that failure is a lead to problem, a problem is a lead to second chance, second chance is a way to be success, just so you know giving yourself a second chance and accepting second chance when someone offer it that like the best thing in life cause keeping the positive spirit is what and giving yourself a chance is what other want so use it like you use your phone. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
A263E403FAC3 | it's a gtood idea for us the students, like that we could know what we want to study when we be graduated from the high school. we have a lot of time to think about it. I would like to study for pilot, so i can try to choose one class to be related about that and learn about how to drive an airplane.
But, Not all the schools has these benefits and also because some students don't have how to go to these schools and all of us students do not can go to any high school. I think that's the only bad thing because if you drive, you just can go and then back your home and some times if someone is giving to you ride is good as well but it's not gonna be every time then you would have to find who can take you to school and who can pick you up from the school.
Well I think we the student to commit to a career at a young age is well because we can be graduated more early.
the good news is if you go to thats schools you can learn more and choose what do you wanna study for college thats a good point and also you may have a lot of opportunities, In some high schools you needed have good grade for going there and passing clases too.
in others words if you don't have a good grades you can't sign for that schools.
You needed be prepare every time, If you do, You can study in the best university and achieve your dreams. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
A28940CA5863 | Do you think it is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age? Personally, I would rather go to my house, and eat spaghetti because people need to realize of what career they would want to choose if they would want to succeed in the future. Few of my friends want to become a doctor, and some of my other friends would want to become a mechanic. Careers are like longtime thinking, for people would want to change their minds, and choose another career that is more suitable for them to learn in college. The reason why I choose this topic, for people need time, impression, and support for their careers.
People always need time to think of what career that they would want to choose, so they can enjoy their careers, and have better reputation in their work. Some teachers think it is a better idea to think of a career in high school, yet some students disagree with the teachers. Students in high school need to understand that if they don't like the career that they choose, they are more likely to fail than succeeding than others in their careers. Bunch of students agree that having to think about career in high school is a good thing; however, a lot of students disagree that we should have more time to think about careers at a older age. These are the reasons why I think young people should have more time to think of what career that they would want to have, so they can gain more confidence in the future.
Impression is also important, for it helps people gain morale if they would want to think of a career. Some students think having impression won't help you, yet some students do agree that having impression would help pressure them to find a career. Generic_Name went to college with impression, so she had the confidence of choosing what career that she would like to choose at a older age. Impression isn't for everybody, nor it is for some students who need of help finding a career in high school or college. Impression would help some students in high school, but some teachers do think it would also help them in college. Personally, I would need impression if I would wanna go to college.
Support is also good too, for people who aren't confident of choosing what career they want to learn about, so they would ask their friends, or even family members for help and support. Support is a main key to success; however, few of my friends disagree with me. The reason why they don't believe in support, for they found careers easier without receiving help in college, or even in high school. People also need to support young kids that having a career is a longtime changing, so they would have to think about it in college, and not in high school. Generic_Name wanted to become a doctor, yet she didn't do well, so she gotten support to look for another career in college. The reason why I like support, for I wouldn't want to brainstorm careers by myself.
The thing about young people is that thinking about careers in high school should have more time to think, for it is always important of what career they would want to choose. I do agree that some students should brainstorm about their careers in high school; however, I am not very sure if they would like to learn a lot about whatever career they have committed to. Even people do want to commit to a career at a young age they would still need to know what to do to learn in college. Thinking about a career isn't easy, yet some students don't take it seriously of what career that they are committed to. These are all the reasons why I think we should have time, impression, and support. We should commit to a career at a older age, not at a younger age. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
A28E9B475935 | My mother always said, "You will never learn if you stay at home, go to school to learn more things." Math, English, history, and science are some classes that students need to learn. If students take classes from home, then student will not learn so they will not benefit from it. Students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because student will gain less exercise, students will get less social communication, and student will be less focus.
Many claim, students will benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because they will feel more comparable. However,students will not learn anything even if they feel more comparable at home. Clearly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home.
To begin, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because students will gain less exercise. For example, Generic_Name, who attend classes at home before, said that he will get less exercise, now that he goes to school he gets more exercise than before. To further detail, two friends, Generic_Name and Generic_Name, both attend classes at home before, they would both say that they would gain very little exercise before going to school. Clearly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because students will gain less exercise.
Additionally,students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because students will get less social communication. For example,
Generic_Name, a girl who use to attend classes at home, would not communicate much with other students at first, after some time she is able to communicate with other students. To further detail, Generic_Name, would talk very little to other students because he use to take classes at home, after a while he would talk to other students. Clearly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because students will get less social communication.
Lastly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because student will be less focus. For example, Generic_Name ,a student who attend classes at home, had to difficult time focusing on the lesson at home, some later she began to understand the lessons. To further detail, Generic_Name had a terrible time focusing on the lessons when he toke classes home, he said that his surrounding was very distracting. Clearly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes from at because student will be less focus.
To concluded, student will gain less exercise, have less communication experience, and will be less focus on lessons are reasons why students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home. These three argument state why students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes from home. If students attend classes at home then student will not learn a home. There is one option: students should not attend classes at home. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
A2957D006D28 | It has been said that the first impression are almost impossible to change. I disagree because when you look at a person for at three seconds you think you know that individual already, Until you have a conversation with him/her for at least ten seconds your whole impression will change with a "blink of a eye". However, I disagree the first impression is almost impossible to change. The reason why is that the way a person looks, personality, and there way communication skills are all ways that can change your whole point of view of a individual. From your first impression when you look at them.
However the way a person looks from your first impression isn't always who they really are. Base on you information on someone aren't ever really true. Meaning looks can be deceiving. Ex. The guy/girl could be the cutest person you ever seen and you really want to meet them. Until they were the worst nightmare and you hate them with a passion. This also works vice verse. Ex. The guy/girl could be the ugliest person of the time, but you never gave them the time of day. Until you met them and started talk to each other. That's when you realize that this person is the one for you. It's like saying don't judge a book at its cover. Until you opened it and read it. That's when you really like this book. Sometimes a personality can be a huge factor on your first impression.
Neverless personality can change your first impression. Personality is mostly made up of whom you are. The basic qualities, and beliefs you have on a individuals. Find out who someone can be a life changing event for yourself not knowing who someone really is can have a big affect on you, because you really don't know who you are dealing with. Personality provides great insight into individuals and their lives. Being honest no matter what with someone can build a strong first impression on yourself and the person right in front of you. Showing the courage to do what's right in those situations, being loyal at your friends and love ones are good ways to boost you relations with another individual. Having the drive to keep going can rise-up your personality and your first impression to a different climax. Communication is key to your first impression.
Furthermore, communication skills consist of verbal and non-verbal by transferring information to another individual. Communication involves displaying confidence, and passion to show that you understand the individual topic by being eye contact and hearing all information that they are telling you. By you giving your honest opinion on a situation can grater your chances being with that individual, when keeping an open mid and resisting to give your quick judgments are clear signs of good communication skills.
Additionally. I disagree that first impression is almost impossible to change. The reason why is that the way a person looks, their personality,
and their communication skills are all ways that can change your whole point of view on a person. In other words, looks can be deceiving personality because being honest no matter what is key, and communication skills are caused by you first impression. Therefore by taking the time, day, hours, and efforts to get to know someone can benefit you from not judging book by its cover. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
A2BA5F95C077 | Why high school school students should not take school programs that allow to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years .Students who take this program most take class after school , summer time or they not allow to take elective courses .Consequently students who take this program have less time to do homework, spend time with family or friends, enjoy the summer time or they not allow to take important elective classes like, foreign language, nutrition, music classes, computer skill class, or HPE.
Also students who take this program they could take classes for the same subject like, English nine and English teen at the same year. However students who take this program and they are going to college they could finish more early college and students who not going to college they can start working more early. But students who take this program are more exposed to fail or give up for the rush time that is in the programs and regular school years don`t have that problem. In conclusion thats why high school students should take early graduation program. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
A2C232F3D92C | Are you happy with your self? Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, "To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment." Do you agree or disagree with this statement? I agree with this statement, being yourself and not letting people change you is a great accomplishment. One should never allow someone to change you.
To be yourself is the best way to the greatest accomplishment because people try to persuade you or talk to you about doing something else that doesn't impressed you. You have to actually think about what you actually want to do to accomplish in life. You don't have to listen to what other people say and tell you. Most of the time people gives wrong advice to others. You have to believe in yourself, that you can accomplish greater thing just doing what you admire.
Go with what you think its a good decision for you, either being by yourself or need someone to tell you what to do. Most of time people doubt others. Having a strong feeling that being by yourself is a good decision for you, that a good thing because thats means you have no problems of being by yourself. If you know that you going to succeed in life then that amazing because you believe in yourself . Go with that decision that you think is right and don't allow nobody to make you do something that you don't think is wrong.
However, there are people who think allowing someone to change you can be an accomplishment. Only if it is for the good. For example, if someone is having a hard time being a good citizen and they are always getting into trouble, then yes changing them is a good thing. You can help them out by saying " what you doing is not a great decision, you should have better choices then getting into trouble." Another example, is if someone is having a difficult time, you could help them by giving them good advice how to accomplish something.
Being yourself lead to great accomplishment. I agree with this statement. Sometime people try to change you because they thought you couldn't succeed with what you wanted to become or wanted to accomplish. Sometimes being yourself doesn't goes as plan as you thought it going to go. In my decision being yourself and actually knowing what to do is the best decision to the greatest accomplishment. | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
A2CAB9C551B9 | "I would identify you playing an online game such as cahoot, coolmath, and theres lot of other games you could play online that will help you learn something. The thing is the games are fun to play and are educational. Examples would be Cahoot is this game where you and your classmates play the teacher gives questions and whoever gets the most right wins at the end of the game sometimes the Teacher might give you a reward for winning. There is also coolmath it's not one particular game but its a website with tons and tons of games you can play math games there really fun.
The games are fun because you get to play with your friends and specially on cool math there is this one game where your a cube and you have to run and theres levels it helps you with geometry. "I would say lots of people that go to public schools have played that game because it's just that popular and fun. Especially cahoot every kid that attends a public school has played this game either to study or just have some free time.
"Im not just saying you have to play games to have fun while being educational but it does really help a person out some kids would just rather maybe get a book or do the work straight up and thats also good but sometimes you could enjoy playing games and those games are enjoyable and help you learn to "I really suggest them. But there are other things like doing a science experiment you could find interesting things that you never knew before, also playing an instrument "if you enjoy music thats really fun you can learn how to play a instrument,You could also be in a play if you like acting anything that fits your interest and is educational you should try it.
" I also identified math , chest , and science fairs. First we will talk about Math , when your good at math and want to compete against other students or just learn more and be good at math there usually pretty fun when you finally get to know all that stuff its a great experience.
"Now we will talk about chest , chest itself is a really fun board game you have to use your brain to make good plays and focus on what your doing why its fun is when you become good at the game or already are it gets easy and enjoyable. You can win money from chest if your competing for your school or maybe a team they have tournaments and you can win money which is great because everyone wants some type of money.
"Last one science fairs making volcanoes erupt, making just in total something amazing which you can show your whole school thats pretty cool. Why its enjoyable is because when you make something cool your peers around you get to see it and if your good at stuff like that you will most likely enjoy it. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
A2EA2D3D0542 | Have you ever worked individually on an assignment and was stuck and had no motive to keep pushing? well if yes I'm here to tell you why working with a group is more beneficial then working alone. I believe working with a group is far more easier than working alone,communication is key. Therefore if you have communication you don't have to do as much work; just have to gather your thoughts and put them together and let it make sense. Group work has to be one of the most easiest things as an highschooler group work assignments are the best,hearing what others have to say can really open up the brain. Sometimes group work may be challenging but it also helps you in the real world which us people need which takes me to my next topic; respecting everyone ideas and having a goal.
Group work isn't always about who has the most ideas or who can put it together and what not,It's more of letting people get their thoughts out. Having one or two individuals speaking over everyone can affect the whole group chemistry,making sure everyone is conformable before you start is very helpful of the process. Working with a group you have to come up with a goal;However every goal has a destination. Therefore if everyone in the group has a designated job too do no matter what they're working towards the same goal. In my opinion goals are good when doing anything when there is a goal to accomplish it just pushes the work ethic to obtain that goal. History shows you that having a destination pushes the brain to do better and has a big effect on the outcome.
Personally,as I work in groups I collect other peoples ideas and analyze their way of thinking and use it to my advantage. This helps expands the thought process as many can see a different perspective on things. It's actually amazing how someone thoughts can open multiple thoughts for an individual that didn't even know they could think of such thing,that's why I stress so much about group work it can be rough,frustrating,inpatient but at the end its all worth it. Another way you can think of it;lets say you were working alone and you got your project done,well that's okay but wouldn't you want to know more about whom ever you are? wouldn't you want to get pushed out of a shell and experience new things. Also a group is not always a maximum group of 5-7 people it can also be about just 3 maybe even two.
Group work has more pros than cons; criticisms is in the category or pros if were being honest, even if your partner not giving you as much feedback your at least getting something. Than not getting anything at all in my opinion people that work by themselves are just flat out :selfish,hard headed,and think they're too good for everyone. While people are working alone they could be working on their work place readiness skills.
However,some may say working alone is much more precise than working with a group,In some ways they are correct. Yes the process goes faster and there is less to do;as a team may have to do more before they get started. Also you can state your own ideas how and where you want it to go without someone thinking otherwise of that thought. All around working alone much faster than working with a group but if you ever want to get to that next step/level your going to have too sit down with a group of peers and express your feeling which takes:character,time and patient.
I have come to the end of my writing I hope I have changed your perspective on things and hope you even learned something with reading my essay. I just want everyone out there to know accepting critsm isn't bad neither is accepting that you are wrong and someone else is right. So take that next step and go interact with others to better yourself! | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
A2EF5BCC488B | Some people think that when they master at something they've never mastered at, then they will grow up. That is what Author Ralph Waldo Emerson said in his quote. "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow.
An example of this statement are babies starting to walk. Then they achieve at it, then they will start talking. From that point on, they will grow into toddlers where they will learn about letters, numbers, how to share with others, and some easy words to pronounce. When they get to kindergarten, they will learn about math, reading, and writing. Upon growing into teenagers, they will learn about harder math skills like harder math, reading, and they will even apply for a job. When they grow into 10th graders, they will learn about business, marketing, and learning to drive. A similar experience I had was when I was starting Automotive Technology was when I learned about how to operate tools like wrenches, ratchets, how to lift up and carry things like tires, how to use safety equipment, and how to operate electric tools like machines, impact guns, and drills. It was scary at first, but overtime, I've been continually practicing using these tools, and now I'm an expert at using these equipments. Another experience I had was when I was doing chores like cleaning, vacuuming, washing the dishes, and taking out the trash. I can do these chores without having a family member like my mom asking me to do it.
Another reason why Emerson's quote is correct is because if you continue practicing at something you've neve excelled at, you excel at it, then you will continue mastering at it. It will make people happy that they achieved at it. A similar experience I had was when I was in my elementary school years when I was eating dinner with my family. Back then, I used to eat a lot, and that is still true today. I would finish almost everything from meat, soup, etc. My family was impressed at how much I've eatan. As a result, I grew so much that I was taller than most of my family members, and it's still true today. I continue to eat a lot and I will eat more in my future. Another experience I had was in elementary school. In elementary school, I learned about mathematics from addition, subtraction, multiplication, and division. Back then, it was a little tough at first, but I kept practicing, and now I can excel at this.
In contrast of Emerson's quote, if people keep practicing, but they don't seem to achieve it, it might make them feel upset and defeated. However, to remedy that, if people continue practicing at something challenging, there is a higher chance that they will achieve at it. It will certainly make people joyful that they achieved it.
As Emerson said in his quote, if you try your best or master at something you've never excelled at, then you will grow up and feel joyful about it. By continually practicing, you will most likely achieve at it. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
A336FB5F2623 | Having online classes could be so much helpful and easier for those kids who doesn't leave near the school, or doesn't own car, it could be helpful because student wouldn't had to wait outside for a bus to pick them up, or for someone to take them to school, it could be easier because they could finish their classes from their house they would just need any electronic device and a connection to WIFI.
By having online classes I think it could make students life much easier, because if they get sick they can still take their classes and they wouldn't have to worry about making other students sick and there would be less chances of getting sick by other student, student would not have any excuse for not taking their classes, taking online classes could also help those student who are always late to school because they would take their class from their house so any bad weather could not be an obstacle.
There are many good thing about taking classes online but there always somethings students would need to give in order to have this benefits and that thing is social life, many students would never see their friends again because everyone has a different mind no everybody has the same goals and not everyone likes the same stuff so in my opinion thats one negative thing of online classes, but there are always a solution the teacher could make a project that could involve working in groups and I think online classes could change students life. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
A33D66485059 | Tomas Jefferson wrote "Determine never to be idle...it is wonerful how much may be done if we are always doing."
In this prompt I thinki that Tomas Jefferson was triying to said is that people have to determinate to never be idle to always do something, because after that you will see how much things you may done, and there always 2 types of people . The pople who would be agrere or not agree with this frase. That is why some people may think that is not always necessary to do something or work hard for things that we want, because they think that we can work for our things when is their necessary time . Also some people may think that you need to do something when things are really necessary or when you want something. I hardly believe that the frase that Tomas Jefferson wrote is totally true. We need always been working in our life to get wonderful thing , as he said is wonderful how much we can done whit things if we are always doing something for it. It is also that we that he worote that sentences, because I can totally feel how he specificly said " Determinate never to be idel " I take that sentence like never let yourself be that.
In the world are so many people negative that always think that we cannot get that things that we want that is always the reason why people become lazy with their dream , because they always think with negativily.
there are many people outside looking for a excuse to be idle.
In conclusion I hardly believe that I'm totally agree with Tomas Jefferson because we can keep working or doing something because after that, we would see the things that we have done or our resuts that our hard work. Just we need to keep doing something or working for something great in our future as a person succeful that we want to be. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
A356547BF789 | Generic_Name writing SOL day
10/23/2019
prompt: School program
"Life in high school". In high school to ca be graduate and learn how the new life is in here, and learn a lot of things to adapted or to fit to the new language and the new people what did I say new here is another world, new people new language that is why I'm here, I came from to my native country. To learn English and speak like a normal person like I speak Spanish, speak bout same without of problems. I'm going to take position on myself to spoken in this introduction, things did i most enjoy in high school is having the opportunity to study here in the United State. And also learn a new language I'm so thanks full for all those opportunities.
All of the things did happen on my life was not easy, and also I remember when my cousin speak English like a normal language and he also came from where came from and i remember did i said i want to spoke like you i was so impressed and how he can speak English like a normal person here in the U.S, because in that time I did not any English at all. When was my time to get in high school begin all this things did i was want for a long time. first day I was so nerviest but at the same time exerted because I came in with my mind in what I'm want and what I love was and is learn English and spoke like normal.
Generic_School give the opportunity at the students graduate on three years, except at the normal traditional four, let me tell you why I take three years except at the normal four cause my age I'm almost getting on (21) at the date to graduate for example, if I'm taking the four years of high school when the people have more then 21, they kicking you off the school
I thing was I good idea taking just the three years to can be graduate on time.
In addition all what has to happen to can be graduate is taking all of the classes did I need it to get the credits. making or taking classes on summer school maybe night school to graduate on time is hard process to graduate in three year but helps a lot to the people who work after school or another thing that probably they has to do, to graduate without credits missing. And here I am in my last year of high school I'm a senior I feel good can be say this is my last year here and all this help me for the program what they made for us to graduate in three years that helps me at all.
In conclusion; I enjoy the must time in high school I know was and is a big way to run was not easy but also no difficult when we want just put in your mind what you want and if you want you can this is my lemma don't give up at the last moment we can cause if you want you can nothing is impossible in this life don't lust the time because the time is like gold I know all this no to much relate about the prompt but I'm know did I doing well believe in yourself. one of the things did I'm thinking about what I going to do after school is going directly at collage don't lust the time did I win. Was the perfect idea graduate in three years that helps me in everything I'm agree wit that program and idea of the district. thanks was hard. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
A35B4B7CBD24 | There are some of the school districts offer programs that allow high schools students to graduate in three years. There are also some good students who always have good grades in all the classes. To graduate one year earlier, students must take extra online classes or elective courses. Otherwise, they will not get enough credit to graduate in three years instead doing it in traditional four years. It is a good idea to graduate one year earlier and enter college or the work force one year earlier because if students finish high school one year earlier, they can admit into a good colleges and fixed their career little faster for lifetime, they can help their family with economic problems, they can also make their own purchases.
Initially, this idea to finish high school one year earlier is the best idea for them who want to fixed their lifetime career earlier. Some of the student who come from the other countries just by themselves also graduate in three years, may be because their entire family lives in back home.
Suppose, they do not live good life in their back home. That's when students want to give them a better life by bringing them here. To bring them here, the students have to be able to have enough money and to feed them enough after bringing. And students can do all these works earlier if they finish high school in three years instead being in a high school for traditional four years.
Secondly, this idea is good for the students who's entire family already lives here, and there are some economic problem in the family. Student have permission to graduate high school earlier and enter work force earlier to help their family with economic problems. They graduate in three years and get a better full time job and help their family with economic problems. So, that way their family will not get stuck anywhere for the economic problems.
Finally, this idea to graduate one year earlier is good for them who want to finish high school earlier, to go to college and also to have a part time job on the other hand. So, they can make their own purchases, like phone, paying phone bill, going out to eat with friends, going on a trip with friends, etc.
Students can also have a full time job who do not want to go to college.
There is nothing wrong with graduating from high school in three years by working hard.
Some students do it to make their dream become true faster, some students do it for their family problems, some students do it for their own problems. However or whenever students graduate but parents want them all to graduate and make their future bright. After all, graduating from school is most important thing in every students life. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
A35F3D111E9A | I agree with this statement becaues I think that unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow in you life. some poeple try very hard to mastered thing in there life. for examples poeple will try there best do mastered something in there life and with there friend and family.
first some poeple try very to mastered something there life they are not good that. and poeple try to be a good friend to there best firend. poeple try very hard, to keep there jod and to not get fire for there job becaues they need the money to pay bill at home and food to there famliy.
at lest poeple, if you try to do somethig beyong you will not never grow in life. poeple go beyond thing at they are not good at and the try very hard be at end they fail and get sad about it. some friend are good at mastered vidoe game and they play vey day. some friend get mad wind they loss and then they get into a fight just beaues they loss to a video game. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
A366CC7B0D05 | Are first impressions impossible to change? No, I believe that first impressions are not impossible to change because when you typically meet someone for the first time many people just try to " fit in " or be someone who they really aren't but within time the perspective of how you are viewed can be changed and the first impression you made of yourself the first time won't matter. Also, when you first meet someone , typically you are nerves and you can be seen as a quiet and closed person when in reality you are really outgoing but it just takes you time to adapt to someone and many people don't act like themselfs.
A example of why I disagree with "first impressions being hard to change" is because the first time I met my boyfriends mom I was really shy and nerves and I thought was giving off a bad vibe and making myself look " bored " even though I was just trying to be careful and not seem so crazy with what I said or did. After a while of me being around her she started to see me as a different person/much better person than i was and she started to see how outgoing I was and how I was nothing like the first impression I gave her and her view of me changed.
Another example I have of how first impression can be changed is the from the first time i met one of my best friends. I first met her through a mutual friend we both had and when we got introduced to each other i thought she was annoying and that she could never be serious but with the time that went by I started to see how she really was and that was her personality and maybe i judged to fast. So when we started to become closer friends my first impression of her changed because now i love her and the first impression of her didn't affect me after all.
So in conclusion , no , I don't think first impressions are almost hard to change. But it is also not something that can be changed within hours but with time the impression you give off can definitely be changed for the better or for the worse based on your actions as well. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
A38187259EEE | For my own opinion , I think most students that have problems at school should take online or video classes at home to make it easier for them to learn and study.
Most students that are special , speaks different language or problems could and should take online classes. Even if you don't have problems you could take online classes if you wanted too. You dont have to go to school and learn , you stay home and learn in the computer. Homeschooling and online classes could be different but the sames at the same time. Learning at home could be better for you. Because at school cause you dont have no one to bother you , or giving you bad ideas , or cause trouble at schools on you learning experiences.
Some students would have benefits from being able attend classes from home? Some benefits could be like. " What if its a bad idea to do it ? " , " What if I don't do good at it ? " or " What if I can't do it at home or at school ? ". Some have different ideas that it could be better for them to learn. At school it mighty be different cause there a lot of teacher and students that be different than you. At online school your at home with your parents and siblings? ad have only one teacher that teaches you on the computer. Its your dession to choose school to learn or online whatever that you comfortable for you to learn.
For me if I could choose , I'll choose going to school. Why? because its more better for me to learn from a teacher in person and see what they are do for me to learn. Online its okay , but staying at home make me get lazy and too comfortable by staying home. So for me to learn , is by going to public or private school are better for me to learn , educate , and socialize to others , its better for me.
So online classes are not for everyone. Like me I perfer going to school , not taking classes online. But what I say
" whatever that make you comfortable for you to learn ". For me is going to school learn amd talk to other students. Wahtever you chosses for you to do then do it. Online classes are greate! but for dome people don't think so, So my option are both some students benifets to do online or some doing it school. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
A38A3B76558A | Nowadays, the majority of students in high schools do not think about their future for many factors: time, dedication, or buget. Schools are a very important tools to help students to realize how important is to to commit to a career at a young age, because It is something that will help them for their future. It is a good idea for many reasons: prepares students as a future adults, keep them focus in their goals, and It gives students the time to realize what could be the ideal career for them.
One important reason, is to prepare students as a future adults, because each person has a responsibility as an adult, and this a good skill for each student to learn and built a knowledge when they get to the point of being an adult. For example, at a young age like teenagers in high school are able to absorb new ideas and words everyday to built their knowledge, and have the ability to apply it in the future for their career. This is really important, because this will help to molding them as a future adults for the society.
Also, It is a good idea to for students to commit to a career at a young age, because It keeps them focus in their goals. By selecting a career at a young age, students can be focus on what they want or what do they need to achieve it. For example, schools can provide vital information about the career students may select, depending on the course they like. How much is it cost, how long it may take, and do they need to know about the career. This is really important, and it can motivate students to follow their dreams, and strive to achieve their goals.
In addition, It gives students the time to realize what could be the ideal career for them. Each person needs the time to know what could be the ideal career or job in order to keep foward. For example, if a student is in his or her first year of high school and she or he wanted to be a doctor, but it realized that now he or she wants to be a teacher. The student still has the chance to change its mind and can choose the career of becoming a teacher. That is why is really important to have the time to think about a career at a young age.
In conclusion, commiting a career at a young age is really important, because it can help people focus in what they want to be. At a young age, shows the level of mindset of each person, and who wants to be succesful in life. Starting from a young age does not mean people have a final desicion, but it may be an idea in general that everybody should practice at a young age to not have struggles in future decisions, and it would be more easy to choose a specific career. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
A39343536B4B | Spend time outdoors is amazing. An enjoyable way to spend time outdoors would be to walk your pets, spend time talking with your friends, people can relax while reading a book.
First of all, people who loves pets would enjoy to take a walk with their dog or cat, Animals also feel freedom when they are playing outdoors with their owners, and you are going to have a good time with your pets. People might find this activity enjoyable because I am sure they love to see their pets happy and playfully.
Secondly, you might have an enjoyable time talking with friends, you can talk about whatever you want, it might be about funny or important things that you been through. People might find this activity enjoyable because they like to be social and also make new friends.
Finally, all type of persons can have and amazing time while reading a book outdoors, they will not feel stresed or tired,and they will be feeling better. Someone might like this activity enjoyable because you would not stresed and persons will be reading outdoors.
In conclusion, an enjoyable way to spend time would be to walk your pets and let them feel freedom, you can be chating with your friends about whatever you want, and people will feel good while reading outside of their houses. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
A394468CDEC1 | Do you think getting advice from more that one person help you make a better decision? Yes I think getting advice from more than one person help's you make a better decision. First getting more than one advice from someone help's them make a better decision because they know what advice they need and what they don't need. Second receiving advice from more than one can make you combine all of the advice's together to make one big advice.
While getting advice from one person is great, Receiving advice from more than one person is beneficial. Getting advice from more than one person is more profitable than getting it from only one person. Getting advice from more than one person can help you really think about the advice's people gave and you can benefit from the one's you understand. When you get the advice's from those people they want you keep it so you can use it in future. You can get advice from anyone but you have to understand the advice that will benefit you.
When you receive multiple advice's you can combine all their advice's to get one big advice that summarizes all the advice's you were given. When you get advice from someone it connects to things such as, School, Sports, Jobs,and many more. When you get advice it's to motivate your self to do more. When you get advice from more than one person it's usually something your good at. When those people talk about the same advice you have heard before it all connects together to make a big advice. The big advice you get from all the people that gave you advice's is to either improve or be successful.
I think getting advice from multiple people can help you make a great decision. First getting more than one advice can help know what advice is useful and what advice is not useful. Second you can a lot of advice from more than one person but you combine all the advice's you got into one big advice. Receiving advice from more than one person is beneficial and it can help you come up with your on decision on what advice is good for you. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
A39660CA003E | Imagine that you like photography but they required you to get music, art, and drama instead of photography they will be upset. Although some people say that taking drama, music or a art class is required, but I disagree because it's their choice to take those classes or not to take those classes.
If you think that those classes are required, then your wrong because, they won't do any classes that are forced them to take. If they are forced then they might like it when the class goes on, but if you say take the class or you won't pass then they will pass the class then just not doing anything. Say one student who doesn't like art but he takes it and he goes on and become a popular artist, then people will think I should try those classes and see. Say, they did take the class because it was required but they fail, the passing average of that class will go from high to low because of it bring required. If they say it's required for half a year than full year then, I will choose they are but if it's for whole year I will choose they aren't required.
I think they aren't required to take those classes, because those classes aren't meant for them. Because say they want to go for other things after high school that doesn't need music, arts and drama then it was just a waste of their school time studying those, but not the one that you need for after high school. They will take it but they won't do anything in the class if they are forced to take what they doesn't like. I think school just have some class that are mandatory to take but elective aren't mandatory to take. Those classes should be elective than are required to take all those class.
In conclusion that, if they choose it's required to take those class, it might change their subject on what to do after school, but for some it will not change it. If they choose not to make it required than it will have their passing average higher than going low, and that the student can take the classes they want to take. So I think that those classes aren't required to take unless they want to take. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
A3A0AB366927 | Working idenpendently is harder than working as a group, but it's also better to learn things. Etheir working as a group or not you are still getting work done, and learning as you go. When I state that you can "learn" it means that you can find out things especially as a group where everyone has they're own ideas and facts about topics. Some people just take working as a group as an advantage to just copy and get answers just to get things done. Copying others does not help you learn anything other then getting your work completed.
I think it is better working alone beacuse it would be better for me to learn. Yes, i'd probably take a long time getting it done just because I would be taking my time finding little details. Some people choose not to work independently but I do. One reason why I think it is better to work alone is because of the fact that after your done you'll feel relieved and happy. If you did what you had to do alone without anybodys help besides the person who gave you the assignment, or job whatever than you done a good job just by doing your work independently.
Working as a group isn't bad I just suggest it should be better for students or anyone to work idependently also to learn what their doing instead of just getting it done when you can learn and get it done. Some people end up just copying off someone else to get stuff done. Others they actually do it and share with others who actually also have stuff done to share. Not everyone copies, nor cheats just alot of people such as students take working as a group an advantage to copy. Working together as a group can be much more easier than alone but still working independently is much more helpful for your learning benifits.
Anyone who is not used to doing independent work gets a little kick on working alone because their so used to working as a group. It helps people push them selves on finding more details, facts, and clues for what they need. If you do struggle of course you can obvisouly ask a teacher or anyone for a hand in help because you could be stuck on something. You can focus more on your work while your alone because if your in a group working it gets you distracted. If you hear other students or people talking to you, and the rest of the group giving each other ideas while your focued to find your own ideas gets you to unfocused.
Somebody elses ideas in the group could be wrong, and when you write them and use those ideas you could be wrong as well. People usually rely on others to get answers which is not right. Also it's hard for others to communicate with others as a group which it also makes it better for anyone to work alone. You could do things your own way while working independently. All of the things I wrote about help show that it is better to work independently than with others in a group. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
A3A5003C8AD1 | Something that i would like to accomplish is raising and taking care of my baby bearded dragon, until it is fully grown and ready to start breeding. I have to feed my bearded dragon its required insects covered in reptile calcium, and bearded dragons need proper lighting. Bearded dragons need these requirements so they can grow up to be healthy and strong, the calcium covered insects makes the bearded dragons bones strong, the UVB lights also help the bearded dragons bones. The climate of a bearded dragons natural habitat is very hot since they can be found every where in Australian deserts.
I want my bearded dragon to grow up being friendly, and not so aggressive, so since bearded dragons are social animals they often need to be in contact with a person and keep being played with or can be taken out of its tank and let it roam around the room. Bearded dragons need to get bigger tanks as they grow old because they get bigger and more curious. This is really important to me because I always loved reptiles as a kid and i want prove to my parents that i am capable of taking care of a bearded dragon. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
A3C5DE6588D0 | Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. People can check out books, shop, and play games without speaking to another person. I think it's a positive effect on peoeple's lives. It can make there lives way more easier. Someone may not like going anywhere to check out books and shop so they prefer to order them online.
Technology helps a lot of people in their lives, an example can be someone that doesn't wants to attend public school so they prefer taking online classes. Online classes are helpful for students because they may have jobs to go to and they don't have time to attend so they can take online courses. Not just students but also teachers, instead of grading papers they can grade them online if they want to. Technology helps a lot of students with school and teachers with grading and other stuff.
Technology can help people lives in other ways, someone that doesn't like to go shopping can order them through online without speaking to anybody. Maybe they don't have time to go to the store and don't have transportation to get there. Technology can not just help you to order stuff but it can help you find an item that you don't know where it is without speaking to another person. There are many stores that you can check out by yourselves instead of waiting in line for another person that can ring you up. Technology helps a lot of people's lives in shopping.
So yes, I think technology has a positive effect on people's lives. It helps them in a lot of ways. Not just ordering stuff online but also physically. Someone that is it a wheelchair can get a chair with buttons on it for it can move on its own instead of pushing themselves. Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
A3C8FABB8B29 | I think is a good, idea that students get different types of classes because that might help to choose their career. Its a really good idea knowing what you going to do with your life once you're done with high school. There are so many teens that once they are out high school they don't know what jobs they want to start and study for it. I think that thats why they should have many more classes that thats what its going to help them continue with their thinking of what career to choose once they gradute high school. for example classes that are for automotive technology is a confortable job in a way that you learn more about cars but in a way is dangerous at the same time because cars have so many heavy parts that could injured you. Another confortable job is being a lowyer lowyers don't do much other than being in the computer or doing paperwork in that cause you dont have to be outside in the cold working on a bad job that involves working in a construction site. And thats the main idea that schools should offer carrer choices that involves students in a carreer class that will teach them once they are out school and that the jobs will interest the students. There is so many students that drop out school because is not interesting to them but thats a bad idea of not going to school because if a student doesn't graduate they will be workingfor some restaurant not earning that much money and working so many hours thats why it is important for teens to stay in school so that the school could offer them on what job they will choose once they graduate high school. School is one of the most important places where they will teach students what decisions they should take on their life once they are adults. In some cases students start going to college once they are out school because they got an idea of how their class works and what for what job they are going to study. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
A3E6A572C6E5 | Do you remember a time where whether it was your parents, teacher, or someone very close to you excepts you to be something that you are not? According to me, every parents wants their kids to be perfect, wonderful, and hard working. Every parents wants to see them successes in life, and be happy, but what they don't understand is how much pressure and anxiety they put on their child. I remember a time where i was under so much stress and pressure because my parents wanted me to be this perfect, wonderful, and hard working person just so i could be the best torture.
Do you remember a time where you wanted to do something so bad, but everyone else wanted you to do something that you don't even like and want. I remember a very good friend of mine name Generic_Name, wanted to be an artiste, but every one in her family wanted her to be a doctor. We all know that being a doctor is not an easy job. sure you get high salary but being a doctor is not about getting high salary or wearing the white uniform is about carrying for others and enjoying your time with others . But Generic_Name's family didn't understand that all they care about was her getting in medical school and be a doctor. Generic_Name is very smart, carrying, and wonderful person. because of her family pressure her to be a doctor she let her dream go and now is suffering very much, because she doesn't want to be a doctor she wants to be an artiste something that she wanted to do her whole lives. That's why we should never pressure someone to be something that they are not.
dreaming and working hard to be something that you always dreamed of is very hard when you have people, who constantly try to make something out of you that you know that you are not. One example of that is when i was little i always dreamed of becoming the greatest dancer at all time, but everyone was against what i wanted to do. i remember i had to set down and have word with my family i had to explain to them why i want to be what i want to be. I was under so much pressure, stress, and anxiety that i thought i was in a war with my own family. Everything i said or do they use it against me it was very sad, angry, depressed, and unhappy moments, but i get though it i did become a dancer, i did something that i thought i could never do, and i didn't let anyone to shut me down with their words or actions. The lesson that we could learn from my story is not to stand against your family and disrespected, them, but no to allow anyone to take your dream away from you. Always stay strong and never give up.
"To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment." According to me every person in this world have the right to speak their mind and do whatever they wish or desire. No one should every try to make you something that you are not. In today's world we people try to make changes in others life by trying to make them something that they are not and that's where we lost loves one, friends and family just because we choice to do things we wanted insisted taking their advice and changing our path. We should be doing the thing we love and dreamed of no one has the right to tell you otherwise. You should never change yourself to make others happy or to show them you care about them, because if they really care about you they will accepted you for you.
Changing yourself for other just so could show them your carrying, perfect, and happy is not love. Everyone has the right to be happy in their lives and we should accepted them they way they are. To give you an example of what i am talking about is i had a friend name Generic_Name he was very hard working guy who was loved by everyone in the community. Generic_Name was born in single family he was living with his mom and two younger brother. Generic_Name's mom was a wonderful women who was loves by everyone. Generic_Name was the older child so he had a lot of responabilty he had to work to provide for his family, he had to go to school, and take care of his younger brothers'. when Generic_Name get accepted to college he wanted to study biology but his mom wanted him study music but Generic_Name was never interested in music. he want to learn about living and nonliving things, but Generic_Name's mom never agree with him she told him" you have to study music and that's that." Generic_Name was my best so when he told me about his problem i told him" Listen Generic_Name i know you love your mom so much, but do what you love to do will make you happy and you don't have to be something that you are not interested in because you will suffer in the future". Generic_Name loved his mom so much he didn't want to make her sad so we he went to college and he study music, but he never like what he was doing because he was born to be a biologist. The lesson to learn in this story is to never give up your dreams for your loved ones because once you started doing something there is no way back.
In the future knowing that you did something for yourself and knowing that no matter what other said you did what you love to do is the greatest accomplishment that you could ever accomplish. Some say to be yourself is not the great accomplish but i disagree with that because being yourself, not losing hope, not giving up, and fighting with others trying not to be something that they are make you to be is the greatest accomplishment. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
A3E9A1C9917B | In some areas they have their students pick their career right when they enter high school to help them, but personally that is not a good idea for students. Students may choose a career, and later on say they dont like the courses they have to take. Some students might even feel way to much pressure having to pick a career at a young age. Others may argue and say that having picked a career at that point, and be sure about it may feel that they are ahead of everyone else and prepared for the future. Others students might have only picked that career, because their friends have chosen the same career. Students may feel overwhelmed, and not like or take serious the career and courses they have.
Students may choose a career and later on say they dont like the courses they have to take. They might feel like that is not the correct path for them. Some change their mind because they may feel like the courses are to hard, or that the amount of work is too much. Others may change because their parents might not agree with that career, because its to complicated. Students may not have fully made up their mind yet if they even want to keep studying anything after high school. In addition, if students change their mind once they might keep changing their mind again and again, because they want to experiment other careers and courses.
Some students may feel way to much pressure having to pick a career at a young age. Kids may get stressed or even overwhelmed with knowing they have to choose something. As well,some students might already have jobs and it could be tiring. Some students could experience great amounts of anxiety, because they may feel forced to take those courses to succeed later in life. Furthermore, students may not like that feeling when they have to pick and rather give up. Some schools could help pick, but students may not like that and feel more pressure. For example, just having to pick regular classes for the year is somethings to really think about, because you wanna take easy classes but yet succeed as well. Adding on, having to pick your career in even harder and super stressful.
Others students might have only picked that career, because their friends have chosen the same career. They might think that its cool and fun, but not realize that it is a bad idea. While they start to spend more time together they could get super annoyed and agitated with one and other. Some of them might have actually like the career they chose and want to do good in the courses they take. In addition, the ones who actually want to take the classes and succeed wont let them if they get annoyed at each other. Teachers and parents may even realize that it wont be a good idea for other peers.
In conclusion, having to pick a career to succeed could be stressful. Students might not be able to enjoy their teen years, because they are focused on other things. Other may also agree that being prepared for the future and having plans is a good thing, and young adults can be prepared for it. Other may disagree and say that kids need some freedom and enjoy life as young adults. In addition, students dont need to have all this pressure and just be able to take regular classes and if they want to take classes that do help with their career then, let it be an option for them. Students may be overwhelmed, and not like what they had picked. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
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