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8F16365E363D | Online classes or video conferencing it is one of the many opportunities that some school offer, for those who have a full time job and they really have the volunteer to graduate but they doesn't have the time to attend to school,they still can graduate, taking online classes and complete the credits that they need...
for example: my bother is taking online classes because he works full time, and wants to support the family at the same time.
Students are going to be more than benefit because they will have the opportunity to finish their classes.
The program distance learning has many advantage:
the students will have more space and time to review the same, if they did not understood it.
they will have more privacy they will have a flexible schedule, and they can take the class when they want.
they will not miss any class for any weather changes, etc.
Personally I think that is a great opportunity for us, because if we are not able to attend at school, the school gave us the opportunity to take online classes that way we can finish our classes and to graduate, also it is not like that you have to be there an specific time. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2 | 3 |
8F1F5D0CEA06 | People always check out the books in the library, after finished Reading a book then turn in and another books If you want. If you do not finisher the reading a book, you pick then you can recheck the book again in the library. People play the game on the phone, or some people play the game in the computer and online and most people interested play the game on TV. P
eople can shop whatever they want clothes, shoes, make up, toys, game, and Food anything.
Also people going to they are Fevirot market for shop whatever they need and some people going to the shop target, for Food or clothes. Most people won't because they like shop to the Rose low price better Quaalude. Some people going to the shop for Food, in the Food line and most people around the story found whatever they need. Most people are going to the toys story because they kids like to play with toys and game board,
some people like shop to the mall.
Some students like sports play with team, no all students are play same thing and some like football, basketball, tennis, soccer, band and baseball. Most people like to watching sports and a lot of people watch on TV. Some people going to the watching real game play in the Field and whatever sports they kids play, they like to watch. Most people like to watching the game all the time football, baseball and basketball. Whatever game was they interested then they are always watching on TV and going to the watch real game.
Most people really like reading a book because they learning a lot of things in the books and some people didn,t like reading a book very much. They didn,t very good it reading or uncountable and they don,t know how to read a book. Most people know how to read a books but they doesn,t want to read aloud front of people. Also, a lot of people parties reading a books and who learning English in the world. They like to read a long, because some people shy read with others people.
Most people read a books a lot they use to they can better It. Most girls like beauty shop because they like make up, and dress up all the time. Some people have a lot of Fun watching game because they like watch they game. Most girls like shopping a lot because shop is Fun things to do, looked like cool on dress. Most people play sports because they have so much Fun and make a lot of new Friends and sports is usually really Fun thing to do. people come watching you If you are win people called your name loud and they are parents prout of them . | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
8F29D9B8D64E | Have you heard about this aweson!! place, where no matter what you do, you will be amazed for all the things that are in that wonderful park? well.... that one place is Generic_City park. Generic_City park it's located in Pennsylvania and is one of the places I would like to go there with my family. One of the reasons is because there are great attractions, like roller coasters and games. One thing I would like to see as soon as I arrive is the Chocolate factory and the Lazy river that is in the Aquatic park.
As I said before, "There are awesome attractions in
Generic_City park" let me talk to you about this amazing roller coaster I would love to ride and the name of that roller coaster is 'The Super dooper looper'.
The Super dooper looper is one of the greatest roller coasters and the reason is because this roller coaster has more loops then the other attractions and one of the loops is super big. But that's just the beginning, there is also one section in Generic_City park that I would like to go too, and is the area where all the video games are and you can win tickets every time you win a game. You can win prizes with those tickets and you can also buy food near that place.
I also said that I wanted to see the chocolate factory. The chocolate factory shows you the process of how they make that delicious chocolate, you can see everything there, from the beginning to the end, that is one of the best places I would love to go because you can't only see how they make chocolate, you can also buy it and feel the taste of the best chocolate ever 'Kisses'. The chocolate 'kisses' is one of my favorite chocolates that's why I would like to see the chocolate factory.
The aquatic park it's the best place to not feel to hot when is super sunny outside. Everybody sweats when they scream and feel the adrenaline of the roller coasters. After all of that you want to just relax and enjoy your day after walking and waiting in line, Well the Lazy River is one of the pools you would like to go in while you do nothing. The lazy river is one of all the attraction I would like to go. The fun part is that in the lazy river is that you can talk with your friends, and enjoy the journey after a long and fun day.
And that's is one of the places that I would like to go and maybe you will like to go, because Generic_City Park is a fun place where you can have fun with your family and friends, and have an amazing and unforgettable day, with so much adventures and fun. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 |
8F3B39C509B9 | Why should students identify their career by the time they enter high school?
some people say that Students should identify their career by the time they enter high school. Their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward their future life. Students could study on their future work, to become better and have a better knowledge on what they do,get more money and respect at the same time. one student may thing of Ben a Doctor but have no idea how to come one of this dream work so this students take biology class or others student can think of Ben a manager this student have a chance of been one because in high school that teach blitheness classes or economy class. students have many chose in high school to become who they want to be.
Students also could learn how to take responsibility by doing a little things like doing their Class work, Home work, and also by doing some school activities. students are mostly scored to take a responsibility by them safe but doing a little thing can Chang every thing for their future.
Students could be participating in sport at their school, they can be playing profession in the future or even while their in high school. they can get a scuoralship by playing any tap of sport at the same time they can have fun. in one school there are many kind of sports like soccer,basketball,voliball,tennis,racte,etc... sport can help one student mentally or phicaliy. most student experse theirs elf by using sport, that make friends, becoming one big family.
However some people things that it is a good timing for students to identify their career by the time they enter high school,Their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward their future life. some do not thing it is a good thing to do. As some people said making teenagers chose his/her career is wrong because teenagers age is what old people call it as "The fire age" to make big chose like this, so they can west their time doing something that was not meat for them. some people come up with some idea like counselors make a good chose bathed on their grad in midel school,or wait for the students to finish 9th grade than make a chose for him/her the best thing to study instead of the students making wrong choice.
Students make the wright choice and identify their career by the time they enter high school! | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
8F5F3F2519DA | what do you think about a program that school provides to pair the younger students with the older students? It can be a exellent choice for the younger students and the older students. Therefore, many younger students have less experience than the older students, so the older students have more experience than them. Older student have already halfway done going to the school. Also, it has a great effect on them to be a good students. This program would help both the older and the younger student in responsibilities, socialization and improving behaviors.
Certainly, this program could help both the older and the younger student in taking care of their own responsibilities. They both can get some useful knowledge that it might be helpful for them to take care of their responsibilities. It could make a good change on how they used to do their chores and homeworks. Taking care of responsibilitis is hard but if they work together than it will get more easier and better on it. It will make them productive and helpful on doing works. Like I said, it will also be useful for their future, when they will have job and other things to do.
however, this program could help both the older and the younger students in socialization. It will make a great change on how they used to work in group. Usually, younger students don't like to talk to the older students, so it can make them be more confident to talk to others. Some older and younger students like to be anti social but if they join the program and work together than it will make them social. It will make a good impact in spending time with others and playing outdoor games. Also, it will effect them in good way to make some new friends.
Therefore, this program will also help both the older and younger students in improving behaviors. If the older students are not respecting and talking polite with others than it will change them. Like I said, it will also help them both improve on how they used to treat other peoples. It will help them to speak a good langauge and be nice to the people they don't know. Also, it will have a good impact on their future when some students will like to a teacher when they grow up and teach their students about behaviors.
In the conclusion, this program could be really helpful for both of them. It could effect both of them to learn something new that they have not know about yet. Therefore, it could be a great program for the school to start and earn money. This program could develope their minds in a good way that will impact their future and their daily life. It could be great and wonderful to learn the things that the students have been struggling in. Also, it will lead them to be a good students and a good person when they grow up. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
8F6DFE02DF75 | Topic:
Influencing others.
Argument:
Influence is a big word. It has a lot of meanings. It has a lot of ways to describe.
Position:
Mi position is negative for the word influence. It gets othes in wrong ways. It is the word that convince othes to do somthing.
For example:
Somebody offer you some beer, wine, or drugs that are bad influence. If a friend say to you, hey come on lets stole that bicicle it's a bad influence. I now some people that they copy the stile life from others that is not right, so that is the bad influence. Infuence is when somebody buys things that are not health, like Mc donal's, red bulls or chips those are bad influence for you.
Conclusion:
In my conclusion I think that influencing others is not good because it to force many people to do several things wrong. It convince many children to go throught bad ways. However, the word influence can be exellent too. It can describes many things that can be good in your work or in your life. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
8F78E9AF1D0E | Do you challenge yourself often? In this society today do you think we challenge ourselves by making harder goals or easier goals? Michelangelo had stated a quote that proves how society is today and how we set goals we know we can achieve rather than set harder ones and give up when its not accomplished as quickly as you thought it would be. For instance, it can be the littlest things that you wouldnt realize such as, doing your bed in the morning is challenging but you know you can do it so you make your bed every morning.
Furthermore, Setting easier goals that you know you are capable of achieving gives you an opportunity to continue to create more and more goals as time goes by. When you accomplish something it makes you feel like you can do many more things leading to something bigger. For example, when you study for a test and you take the test the next day then later received an amazing score you challenge yourself to study every night before a test rather than take a risk and challenge yourself to study the same day as the test because you think you would remember it better.
We give ourselves goals we know we can achieve and play it safe rather than challenges because its easier. Such as, knowing your limits and knowing what youre capable of accomplishing. For example,
you would rather do something you already know instead of doing something you have no idea what to do in and no longer enjoy it therefore, you stick to what you know you would enjoy by knowing your limits.
Finally, Giving yourself a harder goal and not achieving it frustrates you and can cause you to give up on your goal. When you dont know how to do something it's frustrating and you just give up for example, In the movie frozen Elsa was forced to keep her powers a secret and to no longer use them but she tried using them and froze Anas heart because she was frustrated. Elsa tried to challenge her self and try to use her powers but since it was so difficult she got overwhelmed and started hurting people
In conclusion, People prefer to set easy goals that they are able to achieve because it inspires you to continue to do multiple goals instead of one challenging one that you know is to hard. People need to realize that its okay to have many goals instead of one big challenge goal that can make you lose interest in things | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
8FD83605AA61 | The imagination is a trait of the human with a fundamental function, this is due to the fact that imagination is one of the most important bases of knowledge, also the imagination is the inspiration of everything, therefore without imagination the human will not have knowledge.
The imagination is a fundamental function to every aspect of daily life. Could be job,family,school etc, every time the human is using his imagination to think about the steps it needs to perform activities, and the knowledge and skills it will use to complete a specific task. The imagination is a very important skill for life that the human uses for evolve, therefore the imagination is the reason why the humans had evolving for years and it has adopted to different circumstances of the daily life.
The imagination is always the first step of everything ideas,tasks,decisions everything, the imagination will always be the first model of every idea. To give a image every time when the human creates a object to complete a respective task is using his imagination to think about what people needs and how that object will complete the specific task to help somebody. Every idea it comes from the imagination, and then the human perform his skills and knowledge to create the idea.
Without the imagination the human will not have knowledge. The base of the knowledge is the imagination, the the imagination is the ability to the think the knowledge is all the different ideas that we think to perform any activity that the human want to perform. To give a image it will be useless if a human has skills in math,science,
etc, but it can use his respective skills to perform in a idea or task. Basically the imagination is the base of the creation.
The imagination is a fundamental skill for the daily life. That the humans uses it for his respective life for job,
school,family,etc. Is the ability to think and create ideas. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
8FE04E30F621 | What is something you would like to do in the future? Well I for one want to become a forensic scientist later on in life. Now others, just wish for money or want the job that pays the most but I do not. I want this job because I think I could really be happy with this job, I could feel like i have a purpose in life with that job, also as an added bonus I could be near the police force, and i have always admired the police force because of their bravery. thats why this is going to be what I want to accomplish.
First and foremost, I want this job because I could truly be happy. I love working by myself because I would get to work at my own pace and not have to worry about slowing down for others. And I really feel this is a good way of helping to get justice without getting in the action. For example I could help the police catch criminals by helping with fingerprinting. And thats why I feel I could be happy with that job.
Additionally, I would take that job because I would always get to be around the police force. And I admire them so much for their courage and bravery. something that we have in common is that we both want to help people. One time i saw someone take someones purse and the police officer chased him and pinned him down and returned the purse. The way I see police officers is that they love to help other people.
Lastly, and the most important to me, in this job I would get to feel that I am helping people on a regular basis by getting justice for them. Because most of the time I just hate myself for not helping others more often. People deserve better than me but I can not change over night so all I can do right now is hope, that in the future I can be better. But in the meantime the things I can do are the little things because those are the things that count the most.
In summary I can tell you the future is under control for me I have a dream an I hope I can accomplish it. On another note the future is in all of our hands if we work together that future can be the brightest it can be. We can all decide what we want to do or be but we can be nice and to me thats all that matters. I hope whoever is reading this has a wonderful dream too. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
8FF22F2804A3 | A city council is debating the adoption of a 10 pm weekday curfew and a midnigh weeknigh weekend curfew for teenagers the curfews. I strongly believe that this is great idea curfews keep teenagers out of trouble. Like this away children will be save. Children has to be at home early. If they do not obey the laws they will have troubles.
First reason, why I strongly believe that curfews teenagers out of trouble because children do not has to be at the strees too late. In the community are people crazy that use drogs and that is danger for them.
Second reason, children will be save at home with their families because this is the best that they can do! Be with their families maybe doing home works or talking about the good things that god has for us.
Reason tree, why children has to obey the law? Because if they do not obey the law they will be in serious problems.
In conclusion a city council is debating adoption of a 10 pm weekday curfew and midnigh weeknigh weekend curfew for teenagers the curfews. I strongly believe that curfews teenagers out of trouble. Cause one, joung people do not has to be outside after 10 pm it could be danger. Cause two, children are more save at home than anywhere else. Cause tree, is important that the people obey this law it is good for their lifes. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
8FF3A8F178E1 | If you wake up a day and you asked yourself what make a person different than other let me tell you that you are not the only one there are many other asked the same ( which is weird). But like John Lubbock says " your character will be what yourself choose to make it". I agree with John Lubbock because is important that you have to choose what will be your character traits and this are my reason. Firts reason is you create your own personality. The second reason is the you are not monotonous. And the last reason having others people respect.
When we create our own personality is means in a group of friend we are the funny, the serious, or the person the never pay attention what the other friend is saying ( that is me I never pay attention what my friends is seaying). Have your own personality is important because that is what make you unique when don't permit the other people influeneces with idea.
When a person is monotonous is they don't a different way to do the work they always is going to do the same every single thing for example in art class the teacher make a painting of a sundown and then they have to the same painting all the student is gonna put their own style to the same painting but this student is make a replica of the teacher work he don't put a different style or a different color.
Some people may says that be differentof the other people is no important. However having your own personality is very important and that is my tird reason, having your own personality can get other people respect and some is gonna says the why you are talking about. Well get respect from the others people with your personality can be healthfull because when you are good leader the workers respect you and they work more and if you still confesed well let me ask you if you work with boss the is always angry and he is always yell you will be confortable to work ( I don't belive) or your boss is always making jokes you know to be "cool" you will respect him (I don't believe).
In conclution is does matter what other people says or what they influences you always have to be you. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
8FFDA5B9D359 | Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? I agree with this statement i have three reasons why I think students should be able to attend classes from home. One reason is some students have a alot of responsibilities at home and sometimes students arent able to go to school. Some might have kids and they need to stay home to take care of there kid because nobody can babysit. That's really hard for a student to do. Trying to go to school and have a kid can be very stressful to the student.
My second reason I have for this statement is some students feel comfortable having class in there own safe environment where they feel comfortable and not anxious. There are some students that have anxiety and are not able to function in a classroom full of students that can be really hard for a person because its not easy trying to get your work done in a classroom full of students and dealing with anxiety. That can be very stressfull I feel like a student should comfortable in there learning environment because when they are comfortable they achieve better in there work. They can focus better and get work done and won't be distracted by anyone there's a lot of benefits with that. Parents would also agree that having ther child in a environment that they are comfortable in is the best way to keep there child focused and willing to pass there classes without any distractions that the child doesn't need.
My third reason i agree with this statement is students can feel more determined to do there work at home in a quiet place its very helpfull to the students needs to be sucssesful. Some students get distracted easily and can't in a classroom so attending class at home helps the student concetrate and perform better with there work.
Another reason is parents would feel comfortable with there child being at home doing school work where they are safe and focused on the right things which is school work. Some students find it easier to do things online than in a classroom so its all about personal prefrence and i agree with this because it could be hard trying to understand what the teacher is saying or talking about. It's good to have a sense of understanding when it comes to learning something that's very important for students.
My conclusion to this statement is that i agree and I think it is a great idea for schools to offer this to students because it gives students a chance to be at home and pass there classes with no distractions. It also gives them an oppotunity to sucsseed and graduate. I also agree about doing school online because some students find it easier and better than being in a classroom all day and not being able to understand the teacher. I also like this because you can do your class work where ever you are you dont have to be at home if you have somewhere to be you can take a laptop and do work. I think doing online class works for a busy students schedule its all around is a good idea and I am happy that schools are letting students do online classes its a big benefit for them that's why I agree with this statement. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
9000217714BE | To. Principal,
My opinion about this change is a good idea. But also many students have a grade of a (C) or lower it would not be a good idea changing the policy sport grade for those students. For others this policy my be a good idea because that way students that love sport's can start doing much better in school and have better grades. A, (B) or higher is a good grade so that way they can play a sport they like.
Teachers would probably accept this policy so that way their students will pay more attention. This change would not effect much but for students who don't study this idea might not be good, and might fill bad because they love sport's but can't play them for having to not pay attention or do your work at home.
Instead we should vote to see if we like this policy or not so we wont have to pass thru all this stuff of the policy changing. A fact about students here in SCHOOL_NAME would choose not to accept this new school policy because the old policy is u can't have more than three (F) and i would say the old policy is better than the new one our principal want to change it to. So if i pick my own decision it would be no changing policy and its good as it is and the policy they should really change is having to no wear uniform to school because its such a distraction to me an much others.
sincerely, STUDENT_NAME | 2 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
900D1E184F63 | Enjoyable educational activities are really good source of learning and doing something fun. Saying so, it's a really good idea that we can get the chances or we can do the activities anywhere, anytime we like.
Activities are or can be educational, many activities can help a lot, on something someone missed or failed a subject in school. It helps the brain work a little harder then other basic stuff that aren't educational. School activities are really educational in many ways, anything that helps or can helps study on anything. Studying is a great reason why we can do fun activities with the subject someone wants to relearn, practices, or just for the feels of it.
Participating on an activities, sports is a great why to participate, not only that is good for the heath, but to socializes. Activities is an easy way to make friends and socializes. Participating in activities can allow to share opinions, or give ideas on something. Participating is a good why to show efforts on something someone is working on in a group of people.
Working in groups, makes the activities fun and more enjoyable. Enjoyable is that someone can talk to their partner or teammate. Being in groups of teams or just a group of people in activites, makes the groups work together. (?)
Not only activities are just to learn and educate, but activities can be fun and enjoyable. Activities can be extremely fun if you give it the efforts of playing, or know how to play. Fun activities can turn into fights or arguments. It's all ways good that we, or someone know how to handle it. The good way for that to never happen is that we need to be respectful, and show kindness to our partner so we don't have problems in our group activities. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
902341F8EB11 | If I choose my specific job, I would choose to be a surgeon and a doctor because my main goal and dream is to help people in life and prevent people from getting sick. I can fix people if they have any medical problems in life. I was reading books about doctors and I started to get interested becoming one. Being a doctor is alot of hard work, I love doing hard work because hard work makes you pay off. My parents told me don't do something what you think it's fun, do something what you love, what I want to do and love to do in life is to become a doctor.
I sometimes mainly do hard work because of money, one of my main goals is to get alot of money. I need money to buy a house, have children, and taking care of my family. Doctors get alot of money when they do hard work, it's not easy to become one. Hard work makes you feel tired, but at the same time you relax and get alot of money. Money is not important in life, when you have alot of money, the first thing I think about is family first, then I think anything I want on the second thought.
My uncle is a doctor, I learn alot from him how you become a doctor. He told me to read some of the doctor books at this age and then when I get to my senior year, that's when he told me to think about becoming a doctor. How my uncle become a doctor is he going to medical school for 7-8 years, but I want to be different from him, I want to become a surgeon and a doctor. My uncle is just a doctor, but he still works for surgeons but dosen't do actual surgery to people. My uncle was the one who got me most interested becoming a doctor.
I would mostly become a surgeon than a doctor because I read mostly about surgeries and it get me even more interested. Surgery is not that disgusting when you get used to it, that's why I read alot of surgeon books. When I first thought of surgery, I thought it was really disgusting, but then my uncle told me alot about it, then I stopped the disgusting part. My favorite part about surgery is fixing people, I feel happy that i'm fixing the person. The main reason why I want to become a surgeon is because I want to get alot of money to take care of my family, and I want to help people in life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
90526CA48E47 | I strongly believe art classes such as drama, acting, and music should not be a requirement for students. I also strongly believe that students should have freedom to choose which elective him or her want's to take. A student that has the freedom to choose his or hers electives, he or she views the classes as more divers fun and interactive, then required art classes.
First of all most people believes that all students are required to take art class, music, and drama class. Most of all others think that students will actually cooperate to there fullest, and pass the class with higher letter grads. Like in an unrequited class most students will not actually take the art classes seriously, and fail with low letter grades. In comparison students with a required class will most likely take the class seriously knowing if they dont tighten up, and do what is asked the'll get low grades on multiple assignments like projects, class projects, and event tests. An nonparticipating students score will drop significantly. Which in fact they are wrong student shouldnt have to take the art classes to begin with.
In my true opinion student should have the chance to express his or her true feelings, and reach a main goal in life. People arent going to tell use students what career paths to fallow we simply choose our own paths. Really in fact art classes should be an elective instead of it having to be required. Art classes are fun I my self take art by choose and enjoy ever single part of it. Again arts should not be a requirement for students it is unethical, and unheard of as far as i know.
Music, drama, and art class are three amazing electives, and forever will be electives. what sense is it to make an art class a requirement to pass? No sense in my opinion art allows us students to express out inner happiness, deepest emotions, and embrace them. However, at the end of the day art classes should be and always stay an elective. What use will it be to us students in the real world? No use at all, unless a student wants to fallow a career path in art.
All the more reasons why I know art classes such as drama, acting, and music classes should not be a requirement for students. Electives are much more divers, fun, and interactive. Also students should have the freedom to choose his or her electives. There is no sense in making an art class a requiermnet for use students. Most students are not fallowing a type of caree in art, and will not be of much use to us in the future. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 2.5 |
9054912D1EA7 | Do you think modeling is something wonderful to do? Well I think it becasue I love trying new things. Theirs modeling componies i would like too visite one day and see if I get more intrested. I would like to model makeup, shoes, clouths, and diffrent type hair styles. I think modeling is something really fun to do it's also really intresting beacuse you get to do multipe stuff. Like for example i think you get to travel to diffrent places to model diffrent metirel.
I think you should do modeling too beacuse modeling is something wonderful to do. I think it really would be fun because you would do hair styls with new cloths that desiners make. We would be the first people to try the new cloths and to show the world to buy it. We would also be on TV in diffrent chanels so people can seee us modeling. Modeling diffrent kind of thing modeavate me to want to do it more.
I would really like to visit a modeling place thats always been one of my dreams. I would be so exited to atually see what a real modeling componie looks like. On how the models learn how to walk how they get ready for there pictures. The way stand the way the have to move around and show off anything they have to show off.
I think it would be so intresting to do all these type of modeling and showing off I hope one day in my future I can do that. It would also be so thought full if i actally did a modeling thats somthing I would always want. I hope you thivk about me going to visit my future manager. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 2.5 |
907275FA42D0 | Has the limitation of humans contact due to the use of technology had positive effects on peopl;s lives . I think should humans has limitation contact because to save their life from destioyrd. In the rest rest of this eassy i will say that why limitation of contact to the use of technoloy is important and has positive effects. Also, limitation of humans contact to the use oftechnology is good for our healt and body. Anyway, what informato can give us technology in our entire life. I will explain why we should have limitation of contact ot using technolohg.
First,Why limitation of contact to the use of technology is important and has positive efects; It seems to me that , when i used to much my phone i feel so pain in my eyes and head because i didn't had limitation of contact to the use of my phone. And phone,computers .... is part of technology to help people contact with each other and we should have limitation of contact to using these techonlogy when we need , we can use technology.
Second, limitation of humans contact to the use of technology good for our health and body because when we use alot our body going to hurt and we always feels sick and we can not eath food as much is we need, feell deperessed.
that's why limitation of humans contact to the use of technology has positive efects. For example some people destoiyerd their eyes because of using to mach technology.
Third,what inforamtion can give us technology in our entire life. technology is the biggest things which is we need in our life to do,technology is not the only using phones, computer, robots.. technology can change our life without technology we can not contact the world with humans and information about world.
In conclusion, i have to sat that has humans limitation of contact to use technology because has positive efects. We have take care our healt and body to save from dengeours happening with technology. In additaion, techonloy has alot information which is we need for now, past and for our future. Finally, in my opnion technology can help us alot in our whole life but, also can destioyrd our life. Every one knows that without technology life is hard but, if we have to save our health aslo. With technology our life giong to easy also can hurt oue life. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
907FC59841EC | I disagree to school board adding an half hours to school each day. I think is bad because adding another half hour to takes time away from there family and it takes to be with there family.
some children do not have time to see their family in the week days because there mom or dad comes home after they are going to sleep or before they go to school but maybe Fridays to Sundays is when they can see their family. Some students don't have time to say a few hours because some students have sports to do or they are going do something else at home or have to go see the doctor.
If they add a half hour to the school system I think all most all of the student will not come to school half of the school year. I disagree to the school board adding a half hour to school each day. I been to school all year except when I have to go the doctor for cheek up that is the only time I miss school. I play sports so I do not have time say a little bet longer of school or I am not on the term anymore.
To sum up I think school should be the some as it is or take sum time of school because is too long to add time to it. All in all school help as to learn. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
9086C0A2BF10 | How the humans use the technology.
The technology in the world is change all time or each year, sometime people use the phone with excessive time; practically we live on red social. The cellphone it's the first device that the humans use more time in the world.
How we can see at the pass to the years the technology advance to fast around to the world, and thanks to the technology we forget how is the content in a book; in my personal opinion is happens.
I think that the technology was some revolutionary for the humanity because the technology come to make the life more easy to the humans in the world. We are blinds because we prefer pass more time in the phone than pass more time with our family, we dedicate our time in red social, where only we are lose the time.
In conclusion the technology was a benefit very important in the humanity, we need to learn how use the internet with responsibility, and understand how the technology change the world; like help us to care the planet, but I think we are did the against because we are lose our time all thanks at the reds socials, we need to know that the technology is a creation of the human to did the life more easy in the world. All what I can said is thanks to my ante past for create the technology that today in day I use for my benefit, each day I learn something new thanks to the technology. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
90978A2F8599 | 1-24-2011
Dear principle,
Community service should be a job, not for students to perform. Requiring students to do that job is very difficult, especially during school days. Community service should be a job that the government should be giving to people who don't have jobs. Students should have their time in school and after school to learn and enjoy part of their life. Example, that of a person who comes back from school, tired and with a lot of homework to do. If he goes to do that service, he might not do all of his homework. And if he stays late to night to do it, he will not focus the next day. So that will hurt the student from both ways. As my position was stated to you to read, my advice to you is; at least help some students get our of this difficult service. And if the community needs some help as stated; take them in a specific day during school. But if it's everyday, community service jobs should be announced. That way students have some time and also learn community service during school.
Sincerely,
STUDENT_NAME | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
90BF447C6E83 | Dear principal i am writhing this letter, to aprove your oppinion about changind the school menu because is something good for the school and for the student, to try something different, and something healthier, some student would like the idea of changing the food menu because they have been eathing the same food over the first day of school, and other would not like the idea of changing the menu because they have already have they favorite food, but most of the student would be happy, to change the food menu to something better, and it is a good idea, because some studend dont eat at the the school lunch, instead they go ouside the school to buy food at the restaurant, and other make they onw food at home to eathed at the schoo, in my oppinion it will be better to try something new to see what it would happend in the futere and how the student would react on the change of the lunch menu, instead of eathing the same food every year of schoo, it cand be a bad thing or a good idea changind the school menu for example it may be worse and student would dont like it or it cant be good and more student would eat the school lunch. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
90C81189C58D | One day a random lady came up to me and called me gorgeous, and it made my day even better. The small things matter to someone. It helped me to show kindness to others because it impacted me and I want to impact others. Once you show small acts of kindness it can lead you to a better life. When people show small acts of kindness it can help someone's attitude to improve,
it can make someone's day better, help someone become a better person, and can help someone going through some hard times.
Showing small acts of kindness can help someone's attitude to improve by doing things that make them happy. Telling them what's wrong to say to someone so they know to not say it. Show love towards them because the attitude they have might may be really bad, but showing them love can help it improve a lot. Finally, they will slowly improve it might take time. The most important part is having a good attitude towards them even if you think it's not going to help it is because you're showing them how to give a good attitude back to anyone.
Helping someone's day better is by giving them a compliment it can effect them in the most positive way you can think off. Text them good morning and good night because you never know if there having a rough morning and night shows that you care. If you see them sad give them the biggest hug it can easily bright up there mood. Showing them acts of kindness can help them show kindness to others. SPREAD KINDNESS ALL OVER THE WORLD!!!! you won't regret it.
Showing acts of kindness will not just benefit the person , but it will also make you a better person. Helping someone become a better person can be easy or it can be hard it depends the way you do it. Doing little things can easily make someone a better person by giving them a smile or a hug. Once you helping someone become a better person can help you as well ! Most important is be yourself nobody is perfect in this world is okay take a deep breath and relax everyone cares for you.
Finally, a small acts of kindness can help going through some hard times is by being there for them in general you never know what there going through. Ask what's wrong and if there not comfortable telling you let them take their time it might be hard for them at first but they'll get used to it. Hang out with them 24/7 keep them active so they can forget everything they been thinking off recently. Be there for their family's as well they can also be going through a lot too. How can you show small acts of kindness to others? | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
90E2214EFEC8 | Have you ever wonder how enjoyable science experiments is? You can create new substances from chemicals. Also, you can learn more about chemical and their reactions. In common, you can try some new experiments in the lab. To conclude, these are some enjoyable science experiments that you can do in a lab.
Did you ever try to create a new substance from chemicals? Will this is how people in the lab can do it. First, they measure the liquid and check the temperature. Then, they add another substance to react with the liquid and measure it again and check the temperature. Lastly, the liquid will precipitate or create a gas form. To conclude, this is how people create a new substance and chemicals in the lab.
You can't do a experiment without learning more about chemicals and their reactions. People who want to study about science take science class or a course to learn more about substance and chemicals. Also, people in the lab learn about chemical compounds and their specific names. To conclude, this is how people studying or learning about chemicals and substances.
You can't have fun without trying some new experiment in the lab. If you try a new experiment in the lab you can understand more better about science. Also, trying something new is hard, but it can become more fun and enjoyable to do in your life. To conclude, trying something new in your life is the best life choice.
In conclusion, learning about chemicals, creating something new and trying new experiments in your life is more fun and enjoyable than anything else. This can also help you become a scientist for those people who like to study about science and learn about chemicals. Than what are you waiting for, get your science class or courses now!!! | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 |
90E5BB6CBE11 | I personally think that student should chose there on summer projects because is not going to be as much fun if a teacher choose it. I dont think students are going to do there summer project if is something boring. If student do something there interesting on they are going to do research and finish there project on time because went summer hits not many student are interesting on doing work. I think that is going to be fun doing something i like and not something the teacher wants us to do.
If student do a summer project about just studient animals look for there behavior, some student mite think is fun. They would be some student that is going to be boring or they won't go out as much and not see animals at all. I think student should just pick the topic they think is going to be fun for them and they are going to enjoy reaching about whatever they want to learn. Teacher can grade something interesting not some boring work they tell us to do. i think even the teacher can have fun reading all the thing we come up with in the summer is just going to be fun for student and teachers.
I think teacher would be even happier if student do something they are going to get the benefits of it maybe a student wants to learn about how to treat a open cut or how to save the world from pollution. That would be something interesting that a student can learn about and who knows it mite come in handy and same the world from pollution and treat open cuts because your mom or friends got a dip cut in the house or in school. I just think is a way to learn about something you want not what the school wants us to learn.
I think this is a good way to make all the students to learn something they enjoy doing. You are going to do a interesting project the you are going to like and is just fun to learn new things. you are going to learn even more by doing something fun. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
90EBF38FCFBA | Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is something you know, imagination is anything you want to see. When you were a kid you had imagination it was with you when you were born, knowledge you have to learn. With imagination you can believe anything, new ideas are made with imagination, imagination is fun.
You can believe anything you want with imagination. What is imagination? Its something you imagine for example an imaginary friend. Something not real but you see it no one else can see your imagination. You can make your brain think whatever you want you control it. You want to believe your touching a teddy bear, than you just imagine it and feel it. Our imagination is in our brains with us it's something you're born with something only you can see it, feel it, and only you can imagine it.
Ideas happen because of imagination you can think of new ideas for a movie or anything. Some people just have a bigger imagination then us but we all think unique. Everything we have in earth is because imagination happened. Those people think "what do we need, what can help me." First you gotta imagine it, then you have to believe, and finally you do it.
Imagination is fun just let it take you where ever you want. its something you're born with not something you learn. Take vantage of it.
That's why i think Imagination is more important then knowledge. You have it with you, you just need to let it shine. Just image anything. Don't be afraid to show your imagination. Just do it and keep imaging, you imagination can take you anywhere you want. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
90F73F20ECF0 | something I want to accomplish in the future is to play on a professional soccer team . I want to accomplish this because soccer is my main sport, If I had a chance to play in a professional soccer team it would be amazing. One specific team is Barcelona, Because Barcelona is one of the best soccer team in the world winning a lot of trophies. They won the champion five time, they also won "La Copa Del Rey." Barcelona they got a lot of good player they got Messi,pike,Ansu fati,Luis Suares, and Griezman.
I'm a Barcelona fan if I had i chance to play for Barcelona it would be a dream come true for me. I would be so happy for the rest of my life playing as a professional soccer player. And one last thing I also want to play for my country as a professional soccer player. Because my country is not good they have lost to many other country but they haven't won any game so I want to change that. I want to make my country win a lot of game not just getting destroy by other country. I want somebody that can change the way they play i want they to play in a good way.
The player who is going to change how my country plays is me. I want to change how they play I don't want my country loosing a lot of game my country need to win a lot of game. One day I will accomplish that I would be the player who change my country but not just win game, win the World Cup for the first time in History of my country. That would be a dream come true again, and then Avery person in the team is going to be happy about winning the World Cup. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
911DD337DD61 | In my opinion, students should take electives instead of music, drama, or arts. Some students may dislike to be in music or drama because they don't have experience to be singing or drawing. They should focus on what they are good at for themselves.
One reason that students should take electives, they will pay attention to their classes and finish up their work to get the credit. Some students can't multi-task if they do drama class and math at the same time. They would have to focus on the important things that they're good at. Students shouldn't be wasting time on taking drama or music classes because they may not be interested in doing those classes. It'll be easier for the students to learn more with their assignments, instead of worrying about arts or dram classes.
For example, during in my junior year, the school wanted me to take art and music. I never wanted to take art because I knew I would be awful at drawing and fail the class. I had to take music also, I was horrible playing the guitar and I was failing in that class. I've told the teacher that I couldnt take art nor music because I wasn't great at it. I just wanted to focus on my course classes, so that I can graduate and get pass all my classes to graduate my year.
Second reason that students shouldnt take it, they will finish with their course classes and will get to graduate their year. It's hard when some students can't do what others can do at drama or musics. It'll be the best opportunity for the students to focus and work hard on their course classes. They should not worry about the electives because that can be done at the end of the year. They won't have to stress about their grades to be below F if they don't take the electives. They wouldn't stress about taking electives and course classes at the same time because it'll stress them out.
Last reason, students shouldn't take advantage of making themselves work more as they are now. They should only worry about their course classes because those are the only classes that will make them graduate. Some students have no talent or experienced to do art or to be in musics classes. It's better for them to finish their course classes and then at the end, they can take their electives.
Therefore, these are the reasons why students shouldn't be required to take classes in arts, musics, or drama. | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
91377BE7D4ED | Imagine if you could do school from home and have time to relax or do more stuff. I would love to be studying from my house because I would never have any distractions, and I can just stay comfortable the whole time. People say online school is better than online school, but online school is more comfortable and nicer for students because they don't have to get dressed and ready just for school, they can take their time with the school work, and they have more time to do more stuff like get a job or play a sport.
A lot of students get stressed in the morning because they don't know what to wear for school. What if they didn't have to worry about that anymore? I don't like to get up just to dress and get ready for school. Online school, the type of school that students don't have to worry about what you wear or how people think of you because no one will ever see you. We all get lazy at some point in life, and we just want somethinh that will make us feel comfortable while studying.
All students get rushed because they have too much work to do, and sometimes, they don't do it on time because it's too stressful for them to finish it all. Online school gives you a long time to finish all your work and maybe a little extra time to relax. My friends and I are always stressed because of how much school work we have to do, but if we could do online school, it would all be so easy and less stressful. Online school is the best way to get time for all your work.
Everyone that goes to a school knows how hard it is to keep up with the work and what they do outside of school. Maybe it's a sport or a job or it could be both. It would be great if we all had that extra time to do all that without stressing. I rarely have time for school and work , but my friend, Generic_Name, does online school, and she has all time she needs to finish her school work, go to her job, and play lacrosse.
Some might say that going to a normal school is the best way to study; however, online school is a better and safer for students because they are able to take their time with the school work. they don't need to get up and stress themselves about what they should wear or how they look, and they have more time for other stuffthat aren't related to school like sports or jobs. How nice would it be if we didn't have to worry about any of these problems? Online school will have you relaxed most of the time. | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
9145AB74E1DA | I don't think it's a good idea to work from home they're a lot of kids that would just take advantage from working from home. Kids would rather be at home then have to go to school at seven in the morning. They're different kinds of people out there who would stay at home just because they didn't feel like getting up so early in the morning. Other kinds where kids put effort into going to school. I don't think working from home is a good idea for school students.
There are some kids that can't really work at school, but then they're others that just do it for fun. By saying how kids take advantage is because some of them would do their "school work" from home but it would end up with them just sleeping and doing their work later. School may be difficult but that's why we have teacher to help you the staff and your parents they will always be there to help. Even the classes online that you do if you work from home have people to help you if you have any questions or if you just need help. Some people are visual learners like right infront of you that's is why i think kids shouldn't work from their homes. People are different some work better by themselves others work better in a group or with a partner that's is why working in school is the better idea.
I'm not saying saying it wouldn't benefit the kids who are doing their work online i'm just saying working in school is easier. I'm saying some students wouldn't benefit from working from home they would just sleep instead of work or they would just goof off instead of work. They're a lot of reasons is to why I don't think working from home or working online is a good idea. You never know who your going to meet online. Some kids don't have internet access so they wouldn't be to work online and when your at school you have all kinds of resources to help you.
My opinion in this is that working at school is better than working at home kids actually have a chance to get stuff done and at home kids would just sleep and not do their school work because well, they're at home. Learning at school is way more helpful then learning online you always have someone there to help. Yes their will be some kids that will learn online and there won't be some people do work better with the person right in front of them. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
9152EA0F430B | This world have many energy and resources, but we have to something to conserve all of them. Some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, to try to conserve energy and resources, but they work ten hours each day that's mean that they still doing the same thing because they are working the same hours weekly. So I think this is not a good idea to conserve energy and resources, should my school follow this model by extending the school day two hours? I would say that my school should not follow this model because students would not have time to do things, students might miss a lot school, and is the same thing is like we come the five days to school.
We would not have time to our things because is going to be a long day two hours more, so we are going to be tired we might not want to do our homework. Somethings we have to do our personals things like help at home, or some other stuff that we need to do such as have fun with our family, or do what we like to do as play soccer, play video games, etc. I know that school is more important, but not the majority of the students thing like that. We would have to do all the things over the weekend, we might not spend time with our family because we would been doing homework, or some other stuff like personal things. Also some students only would go home to sleep because like I say we would be tired to much work at school. Even the teachers would not have time to plan what would be the assignment the next day, I know that they need time to plan in what we have to work on the next day, but they have to do things in their house as we the students too they also have homework to do after school. This is going to one problem that I think must happen if this school extend the school day two hours more.
We might miss a lot day of school because somethings we have appointments as go to the Doctor, or go to somewhere else also do some important things. some students might decide to not come to school because they have to go the appointment. As we know some students miss a lot school on this day if school extend the day they might miss more day of school because they might say that is too long the day, or if they have a project to do and is a big project (we get out until 5:00PM), so we have to finish in whole night supposing we finish the project until 3:00AM, in the morning we not going to wake up because we are tired, we would miss the day of the school also we would not turn it in the project (It was the only day that we would have to turn it in), so we didn't get the grade for the project. Also teachers would have problem with their children for example if they have their children in a day care id they only work until 5:00PM they have to run to get they children, but if there is traffic, so they would be late. They might have to paid extra money to someone can pick up their children. Even when we come for the five-days per eight hours we have more time to do our thing that we have to do after school.
Some people might say that they support to come to school to a four day school week and extend the day two hours because we would have three free days. However, is going to be the same if we come the five days per eight hours because we would come ten hours per day, so ten per four is equal to forty hours for day (this is if we come four-day a week), so eight per five is equal to forty hours (this is if we come the five days per eight hours). We would still using the energy and resources at the same amount as we use to do it now, as we see is the same thing if we come to school the five days per eight hour. We need something that help us to conserve energy and resources not something that would give the same amount the we are using now.
Finally, I think this is not a good idea to conserve energy and resources because we would use the same amount that we're using right now. My school should not follow this model because they have to think that consequences like people would miss a lot of school they might be tired too much work in one day of school to long one day, we would not have time to do our things at home like homework, personal things, and we would not have time to have fun by doing what we like to do as play soccer, or other stuff, and is going to be the same thing if we come to school the five days per eight hours. We have more time to do our homework, to do what we like to do like have fun, and spend time with our family when we come the five days per eight hours. If we really want to conserve energy and resources we have to find something that is going to be successful, not something that would give us the same result. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
915D8BF74963 | Is it good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age? For example, I got a academics scholarship into George Mason. With that scholarship I earned and worked so hard I could have a high chance of becoming a banker or someone who runs money and I been committing to this career from 8th grade. Knowing and committing to a career puts you on a very a head spot in life and also on what you want to become.
First off, having a head start of knowing what career you want in High School puts you on a spot that you're a head. People who don't know what careers they want, gives them a struggle because when you get to College or finish High School they would be in a position of not knowing what to do after. The stress will build up, over thinking, anxiety, give up, depression, and lastly the most important going to the wrong path. But people who know what career they want in High School will be ready for what college they should go to, what classes to take, after college they'll be applying to jobs, and lastly, doing something they always wanted to become or do since High School. For example, I have a friend who just turned 20, He always told me about what career he wanted to do and his plan after High School. A year ago, I asked him about his career and plan. He already has a job of what he wanted since High School but at the age of 19 and also told me he was thankful for staying with the career he always wanted and never gave up. He also told me, It wasn't easy to become what he wanted and no matter what if you want something, keep pushing and never give up because soon you'll be proud or yourself.
Secondly, The stress of committing a career from High School is less than not having one. People who already know what they want to become or do will have their challenges because it wont be easy to getting up there. For example, people who already know what they want will face tests, projects, public projects, quizzes, finals, and etc. But that's only what they have to face. For the people who don't know what they want to do, will start worrying about what they want to do, stressing over why they didn't think of a career in High School, over thinking, and etc. It's better if know what you want to become early than late because it could waste your time if you start late instead of starting early or on time.
Lastly, having to learn different careers is good, but it'll some times be confusing, over whelming, stress, anxiety, and etc. But just knowing one career you'll be able to focus on that specific career. Trying to push yourself passing those limits, making yourself you can do it, never giving up, and reaching your goal. Having to learn many careers is very good, because you know a lot and a high chance of getting many jobs. But learning and staying one career is better because you will know what to do in a mil of a second. People would want to hire you because how fast and hard worker you are. It's better to have a head start from everyone than being last.
Therefore, knowing and commting to one career puts you on a very good spot. For example having a head start, less stress involved, and lastly choosing you love since High School. Finally, these are the reasons why it is a good idea for students in High School to commit to a career at a young age. So what, are you going to commit to a career at a young age because time is clicking and soon it'll be too late. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
916811E780BD | How do people think younger and older students help each other? older students help younger student understand that it is ok to need help sometimes and younger students teach older students how to help other people.
Older students help younger students that it is ok to need help sometimes like when I was in seventh grade and I was in dance club and there were 8th graders to and they would help us with the moves if we needed help. If they were doing something wrong the older kid would help them. It helps the younger students to help others like as they are helping you it teaches you how to help someone the same way. Older students help younger student to
Younger students would teach older students how to help other people like when the younger student were getting help the older students were learning to help others. Younger students helps you by teaching you that it is ok to not know something. Younger students teach you that it is ok to need help sometimes like if you are helping a younger student and you don't understand a problem you can ask a teaher to help you understand to. Younger students help older students to.
Younger students teach older students how to help other students and older students teach younger students that it is ok to get help sometimes. The program help the student tha twe are need some help sometimes. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
918C1880FCD8 | When did you decide to research your future job?
Students should start thinking of a certain career they would want to encounter by the time they reach high school. by the time students reach high school they must have a job they're interested in. If students start viewing the concepts they need, they can become what they want to be. Also by starting early with a goal, researching, and acknowledging goals they can find a job that they would like. Also will have a distinct idea on how to succeed.
First step, In most societies students start researching different jobs at a young age, so they know what they want to become in the future. Research helps students find what they need as a teenager, for example: getting a Standard or Advanced diploma, going to College, and getting a degree. when students start encountering what they need to accomplish they will tend to work hard and start receiving the information they desire. Also research gives a better understanding for the student to know what to find. Although some may say "Information online may be false" but there are multiple sites you can examine to observe the true facts.
Second reason, Goals help students with finding a career to start. Goals help by giving an idea to a student of what the second step is, to find the best career for them. Goals can be both limited and unlimited. Although some may say "Students should start thinking after they graduate high school because there's many jobs in life students might pick the wrong job", but starting young helps the teens mind to find different careers. Also students can decide what they would want to commit to.
Third reason, Acknowledging your goal will take a very important role of students life's. If students complete their goals, and research they can acknowledge their goal. Examine the work they have finished and look through to check if they are missing anything. After students have finished their steps students may continue on finding a job that they want from the data they collected. Finally acknowledging goals will help in examining job duties.
In conclusion students should start finding a job early. Starting young will help each individual student with, finding a job, how to determine if the job is right for you, and following along with accomplishing every goal. Students will have a less stressful time finding the right job. These 3 steps will help students find the right job: Goal, Researching, and Acknowledging their goals. Also it's a good idea for young students to have at least a couple ideas of what they want to do as a career after high school. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
91B88A23A5E4 | Dear principal,
you are considering of changing school policy so that we the students may not participate in sports or other activities unless we have at least a grade B average. while many of us have a grade C, i know you are trying to make us bring our grades up by doing this but understand that we like doing sports and activities especially our favorites but you can't do that because it sounds like threat to us. you can do something else but not stopping us from sports and activities without making at least a B, please cancel this policy because we really need sports and activities to keep our body focus and healthy and we also promise to keep the good grades and do our homework's, and try our best to keep up the A' s and B 's.
P. s please don't forget we love sports and activities because we the students really have fun with it.
Thank you.
From Your
Students | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
920BEE439862 | I believe Thomas Jefferson is right. If we are always doing something we get things done faster and there is possiblilities of starting new things. Why should we wait to finish something we can finish the same day, we never know what can happen. I also believe the inactivity is good not only does it give a chance to rest but we also can think through our ideas. We can perfect things we didnt think we could. It can give a chance to see different views of are own ideas. Maybe taking a break can refresh are memories and remind us how important things are to us. Woring all the time can exshuased ours bodys and make us think a little less. With a fresh mind set it can make things easier than we thought. Sometimes we over thinks that aren't that big of a deal and a big part of it comes from not taking the time to rest and refresh our memories. Many people would agree with Thomas Jefferson just like I do but would also agree that taking time to rest is also getting things done. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
924748264D34 | High school year is the most important year in students life. Some school programs allow students to graduate in three years,if you can choose, which one would you like to take? traditional or three years? For me, I would think of four years high school. Because traditional four years high school is more better than three years high school. For example, if you take three years high school, then you can not take elective courses except you take the courses during the summer time. Also, I think three years high school don't have much time to let you get ready for college. In addition, I think four years high school is more comfortable then three years high school.
First of all,if you take the three years high school, then you can't take elective courses except if you take the courses during the summer time. I think have elective courses was important, because that mean you can take courses that you interesting of. For example, I was taking the traditional four years high school right now. A year before, I remember I have two elective class, and one of them was Korean. Even know learning different language is hard, but it was very interesting, because you are learning about another countries' culture and how did they treat people in their ways. That's why I think elective classes was important.
secondly, take the courses during the summer time? Of course not. In the summer everyone was plan go to the beach or traveling to another country with the family. Think about that sunshine, sky, golden sand, and beautiful seas. There are people swimming and surfing, people wear the sunglasses sat down there and have coconut on their hand. But at this time, you have to take courses at home or summer school. Sitting at chair, face all these hard problem and finished it. In addition, summer is the time that people relax and have fun of. So I would not taking the courses during the summer time.
In addition, lots of students are feeling nervous and scared in the last year of their high school time. Because they are wondering what college they going to and can they do well when they get in the college. Even know I was senior right now, but that still happens to me, because college is totally different than high school, and I worry a lot about it. So when I laying down on the bed at the night, I was start thinking about college, can I make friends in college or what if the class that I take is going too fast then I don't understand what teachers are talking about. So I think four years high school would have more time to get ready for college.
Even know some programs are allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years, but think about that, if you and your friends didn't go to the same college, then you will have to leave them early and you also have to leave your family one year early.
Finally, I think traditional four years high school is more better then three years high school, and it makes you feel comfortable and have more time, instead squeeze the time together and make your self busy then others. Lastly, these are the reasons why I think traditional four years high school is better then three years high school. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
925371DCF84D | so another reason i agree one is because the most technologist people who makes technology are the most smartest people in the work. the brains of them help them out .it dont mater what is the technology this day are the matter is that one of the time technology dont work. we cant live without technology . the people know that technology the day are best thing .that ever happened in this world .and those who complete the world. i s thnk that we the reason we need technology is because its vey important to have technology becaus ein case an emergency had happened at work school somewhere else you will need ur phone to contact the pwrsom ur friend police station second i agree because technology makes you famouse to have the category .the technoly make u ven beter ur brian pople have the smtest barin in the wold | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1.5 | 1 |
9255DC307B75 | Have you ever been in school and your teacher tells you to come after school to get your work done? Well i think that having after school clubs is good because it can help us in school. It will help then get they work done faster, and also better for them to understand. Sometimes kids at home dont like to do they homework but if they do activities after school they would actually want to do the work so they can do the activitties.
To begin with kids get bored of just sitting there doing homework but if their actually doing activitties they would'nt be bored and actually work on they homework. If the kids are active and are having fun they would get things done faster and easier like say a student was gonna pay sports and you tell him he has to finish they homework in order to play if the kid loves the sport he would do it. nowadays kids like to do they work in activitties such as math games, card games, and many more. The teachers can explain the work better for them so they can understand and learn it better.
To continue you must show them that the work is very important, and the kids would actualy take it seriously and they could actually improve there grade. Kids nowadays don't really be trying to take things serious so the adults got to push them and show them that there homework is important and has a big impact on your grade. Its better to have someone constantly on your back because it will help you in the future it's always good to have people push you to succeed. A lot of kids give up in school and don't be wanting to do they homework thats why when soembody is doing activitties and learning they wouldn't give up on they selfs that easy on they selfs. the students also get bored of being in a quiet room just working on they work students like to be active not just sitting in one place bored.
Last but not least you got to put effort in the work to be able to understand it and to get it done or if not you would be having a very rough time on your assighnment. But always remember never give up and keep pushing for your goal because not only in school will you be stressing. Lastly these are some of the reasons why I think it would be a good idea for our schools to have afterschool activities it will help a lot. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
925DBAC486E5 | Have you ever thought about finishing high school early? Not every student wants to finish school in four years. The reasons high school students would want to do this is to reach their career early or they have personal matters that make them want to leave early. To some teens going through with the program could be a difficult task. It is a good idea for teens to take the three year program, because they are trying to accomplish their goals early.
Not all teens want to spend all four years of high school. Their reason could want to move on to college after those three years. Another reason to why students want to finish is because they could have problems at their school. High school has bullying and other issues that could leave them with no choice but to want to take the three year program. There are teens in high school that want to join the work force at a young age.
The three year program has a lot of good benefits for students, but its not an easy thing to do. Students would have to take extra classes, which means more work. This would mean students will have to take extra math, science, history, and english classes. For the electives the students would probably have to switch them out with core classes. For highschool teens who do this program would have no time to slack off and would have to work had achieve their goal of finishing in three year.
In the three year program you are given choices on how you would like to do youre work. There are schools that could let you take the program through online. Students could also have the choice of taking the work over the summer right after school goes on break. High schools that have this program are giving students a huge benefit. it is a good idea for teen s that are taking a three year program to advance quicker to their future goals. | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
92B418CEA06E | My mother's uncle Generic_Name wanted to be a lawyer, he did all the step that everyone do for go to college and he started work hard for pay all his classes. Generic_Name woke up every day early in the morning and he went at the college, after he took a bus for his job. After all his effort, after all the nights that he could not sleep, he became in a lawyer but Generic_Name never imagine that the real challenge is coming. After two years of his graduation he found a job ,he bought a house and a car and that is all Generic_Name did for the rest of his life. Should we aspire just at one thing? In every single aspect of our life we have aspiration, to be more every day to get the most beautiful house, the better job but that is all when we get all the we want and the set we stop there. In my opinion,if we don't try to do something beyond what we have already mastered,we'll never grow because we'll never have the enough experience and a better quality of life.
First,we'll never the enough experience because we always being in the same situation, every experience that we have make our knowledge,the way that we see the life and the problems. If we never give up to do something beyond our spirit preserve young while we have more experience we'll have more opportunities nos just in a professional aspect . For example,if we go to college and we finish the career but we stop there for the simple reason it is more safe so we never grow because that make us to be stagnate in one place,we think that doesn't matter that we good.
Second,We'll have a better quality of life because when we try to do the best every day,when we kept learning we became in a successful person which is good point because you inspire at others. we'll have all the thing that one day we wanted an the most important thing we'll have the power to help other. For example,when we continue learning more and more we'll stay one step more near of our challenge and we need continue to the same way.
In summarize,I'm agree with Emerson's statement because we always need to be more that we were yesterday. The success,the opportunities,better condition of life and the happiness is part of never stop grow. Is really important for everyone be happy with ourselves is like wake up every morning see us in front the mirror ,and say I can be better tomorrow. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
92B8F2F85C44 | Although some say "Unless you have try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." Based on my experiences I do agree to Emerson's statement because life isn't easy you have to try new things in life, you have to risk yourself to walk through that bigger path and try not to look back to something you couldn't accomplish back than, instead look up, stand striaght and tell yourself "I know I can master new/harder things that are to come my way."
Some say if "You don't try to do something beyond what you have already mastered you will never grow." How are you suppose to grow if you haven't master something you can't accomplish? Life puts us in a sitution where not everything is going to be perfect, not everything is going to be rainbows and butterflies you have to challange youself, you have to show everyone that just cause you messed up once doesn't mean your going to make the same mistake again. You have to go through the rain to get to the rainbow, you have to be prepared for the big situtions that are coming your way. You have to learn how to handle the bigger situiton to know how to handle the smaller sitution when it comes to you. Don't let smaller things effect you at the end of the day the sun is still shinny brighter than ever, challange yourself so you can master and accomplish the situtions.
Therefore if you can't accomplish something you've tried so much you shouldn't give up but also don't stress about it too much either. If you think what your doing is the best than don't look back and keep doing what you've already started, life will be harder sometimes but it's up to you to show that you can master things you haven't been through. People might think you can't handle what your going through, people will laugh at you for not being able to master something that is easy for them but harder for you, you can't just stop trying just because you feel like you can't no more. Take a deep breath and I promise that at the end of the day you'll be happy because you master something you thoght you couldn't handle, but not only that you'll be happy because you didn't give up and you showed all these people that didn't beileve in you that you did it!
Others say that "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." I agree with this side of the argument because it's honestly the truth you have to master new things or you'll never see yourself growing, for an example if you just had an argument with your sigificate other and you break up with him/her your really just throwing things down the drain instead of sitting down to talk to that person to try to solve what went wrong. Try to master things so you grow not just kick things down the road and think that their going to come back to you. Maybe that was the first break up and he/she actually wants to break up, are you going to let her/him to let you go just like that or are you going to ask him/her for a reason? Get on their shoes, sometimes things happen for a reason and if what ever your going through hits you in the back of the head is for a reaon, don't confuse yourself on accomplishing something and showing off.
In conclusion some things might be harder for you than others but you shouldn't end up backing up and telling yourself you can't do it, that it's too hard. Instead you should do the opposite and tell yourself that you are better than what you think you is and that your going to master lots of things with or without someone by your side telling you "You can do it." This is my side of the statement I agree with and the way I look at things when I feel like I can't master big/small situtions. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 3 |
92CD1BD0C18F | A good attitude is one of the most important things in life, because when you talking or do something with the best attitude you can see how everything is going great, and people feels good and comfortable with you. In the same time, it can open a lot of doors for you, and it can be a good opportunity for be a successful.
On the other hand, people believe that have a good attitude all the time is not a good idea, because some people will make use you, but most of the people who think like that don't have a success life; most of that people in the future feel depressing, feels like they don't do nothing with you life, they are not sucessful, and is something that every person needs thing about, you need prove that you can do it, that you can be a professional, and that you are more than people thing of you, because you need show people that is nothing imposible in life, that all your goals and dreams can makes real.
For example, a person work in a restaurant and you have a good attitude with the customers, you make them feel like in home, not waiting too long for their drinks and food, you will show them that you really happy for have them in there; in the other side, a person who works in the restaurant, don't smile to the customer, make they feel uncomfortable, and don't care about their drinks and food they don't going back to the restaurant or don't choice you for be their waitress, because you don't have a good attitude with your customers.
Also, make yourself a successful person, a person who the people want to talk, a person who a company want to you for work there, a person who do all ther goals and dreams, and a person who love himself, because you got love yourself, respect yourself, and try your best every single day, that is really impotant in your life. The attitude make you go for the best or wrong way, the best give you the best opportunity for a successful person; however, the bad give you the the work in where you do feel good, and where the best part of your day is when you go to the bathroom and use you phone for a couple minutes, when you got to life for check to check, that is the life of people who think the attitude is no the key of success, everyone don't reserve that, they reserve be happy, and have a good life with the people they love.
Is the same way in shool, talking about teacher and students, "respect if you want respect back", most of the students always have attitute with their teacher, they never respect them, but they want respect, a good attitude in school is the best thing we can do, because the teacher will help you more if they see you respect and really want to work, you are the person who need good grades, if you have a good attitude you will se the process in your life, in your classes, and your home. Also, in home, their parents need show and teach their kids that the attitude is the key of life, that they need have a good attitude if they want to be a good person in the future, that they want to be a professional, and be better person everyday, they will think on that, they will ask themselves why their parents try teach them that the attitude is important, and they will tray to have a good attitude for be a successul person.
In conclusion, the attitude is the key that will open all the doors you want, thats no matter what problems you have, when you do something you need doing with the best of you attitude, all is going to be perfect when you got a good attitute with people and with yourself. Try and see how your life is going for a straight way. They will enjoy their life, be happy with themselves and with the people around them, is all about how you acting, how you express yourself, and the way you talking with people, every person need make a different and show to everyone that the attitude is important to life, they will learn if the see that most of the people is doing it, try to make a different and see how everythinh is change for you. All is based on you. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
92D03AB56C53 | Failure the Success of Life
Winston Churchill was a British Minister.
He was a writer famous for his phrase that he ussually used.
Once said that "Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."
I belive, that failure is an important element that plays in the persuit of success, because the failure lead to succes, failure is unavoidable, learn from your mistakes, and the failures often leads to problems.
One reason is the success that consist of going from failure to failre without loss the enthusiasm.
Failure is unavaidable, the path of success is not a straight on.
Every people have to fails sometimes in the life, but that is part of the life.
For example sometimes, invest money in some bussiness, but we don't know if go to win a lot money, or lost all the money or just one part of money.
If for some reason we fails, doesn't matter, we need to try again, maybe that would be the success to have your company owner. Never say not, before try it.
Another reason, is to learn from your mistakes, if you make a mistakes at least you know, not to do it again.
A failure might put end thing idea or opportunity, but lead you others.
If you ready failure and you know what was the mistakes try to find a solution, and not come back with the same ideas, you need to learn for each mistakes.
For example, if I say something wrong, like English word, if somebody heard me and corrigir me, I try to not say that word again.
One more reason, failure often leads to problem, we need to solve our problems and getting throught difficul times makes you smarter and stronger as a person.
By dealing with your failures you will to be prepared and have most experienced in the future.
If you know that to fails before, so you are somebody with most experience in the life, you know that if you have a important roll in your work, that is why you to fails in some time, but you need always to continue ahead.
Everyone have differents kind of problems, but each problem have solution.
If for find solution is possible that we go to fails, just doing that, we need to solve each problem without doesn't matter what come ahead we always want the success.
In conclusion, failure can change who you are, and what path you're on the life.
To fails in our life is something that cannot to avoid, but we not wanted to be a failure always, we want to change and have success. Each mistakes is a success more in our life, I think that failure it plays an important role in the persuit for the success. We need to pass for differents path and in each one, we go to learn new things.
Mistakes only makes smartes, and working to solve problem only makes us strongen. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
92E97E947628 | Dear Principle i have herd that you are deciding whether all students should perform in the community service. I think it will be a great idea for our school and for our community. This will be able to help people know that if we do are work together as a group we will accomplish more work and that not just one man can do everything but if we are united we will succeeds. By doing all of this it will be able to make are town cleaner and let people know that we care about this town. By the way this will be a great opportunity for our community to be clean so if different people who comes from different places will make good judgement about are community and maybe they might tell their friends how they think about it. I hope you make your mind to say yes but whatever you choose I will still be happy with it.
Sincerely STUDENT_NAME | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
92EA64272FB4 | High school is like a preschool for young adults, where they get a chance to explore the world much earlier.
Students at grade nine through twelve get to learn what they want to be at a young age. It gets them more interested in the careers they choose in the nearest future. As they get through high school, they will know what path to take and what needs to get done. As soon as these young adults leave they won't have to stress of what their going to be. It's agreeable for students to start looking into their career at a young age.
Through out the years in High school, students will have the rights to choose their own courses, which follows up to their interest. For example: culinary arts, design multi media, masonry, and more. They can also choose any subjects such as: math, English, science, and history. These courses can also help those students with their future careers. While these students are learning they realize what they like and what they don't like. The upcoming goal for them by the time they leave high school is what they are going to become.
As these young adults think of what their going to be, they will think twice on some careers. Which gives them time to research options, and that research will reflect on which career is the best for them. While being young an thinking of a career students will have enough time to sort the ones the students like and the ones they dislike. The average life Span of a human is up to 75 years, which means 18 of those years can resolve of what the students are going to do when they grow up. Teen's can dream what they could be but can they put the effort in trying.
As in college, students will have to get credits to graduate high school, and need to pass a amount of exams.
From there the students path will flow to what college they'll go, when thinking young they got to think smart, which means they got to put the effort. When thinking of a career at a young age the students will have most of everything planned. Its never too much to notice that a student has more potential young than old because they got more time.
The students won't stress out because their not out in the world alone finding what to do.
Teens can commit to any career because they have had a whole lot of time to think of any career.
Its never bad for a kid to have dreams of being a cop and going for that career. Its always good to plan ahead, to always think and do. It's great that a young adult wants to think of it's future. Agreeing something that everybody has done, is something that people can agree on. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
92F6C1E71237 | This is a very good prompt to write about but i might have to agree on this becuase if you keep failing in life and sometimes you get bored of it you might have to change your mind and be success. Bacuse fialling in life is not that easy for same people. But sometimes people might disagrer it becuase if you fail you can't be successful in life, and if you are trying to get a job and you keep failing on what the boss is asking you to do you might not get the job. Even thought in school you can't keep failing.
I also agree with Churchill's satement becuase you can't just success in life without trying becuase life is evry hard to success in it. and if you wants to be success you really have to try in life, there's so many people in life that don't have job,place to sleep or food to eat becuase they did not success in life. Success also consists of going from failure to failure becuase sometimes in life you have to fail, no one in life have success from the day they were born.
My comclusion is that failure can leasd you to success. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
92F7DD653EFB | Some people think that is more beneficial working alone that working in group. Which I disagree with for two reasons: People always need help and is more beneficial working in group. I feel that the benefits come from others.
The first reason is that we as a human being, we need help. When we are working, we need help from others at work, during class at school, anywhere where we work. For example, at work when I'm cooking I also need someone that can brings the ingredients. Some would argue that, working in group don't help you to learn, but we learn from others not from ourselves. As a result, we obtain help from others working as a group. Additionally, we obtain benefits working in groups. In addition, benefits to us are made it from others, benefits to others are made it from us. To illustrate, when I'm sick, and I can't go to work I need someone to change his scheduled, and take my place, for that day, so he is going to need the same benefit from me to cover him one day he get be sick, or will have any emergency. Some may say that working in group is not beneficial, working in a group we acquired more benefits than working alone. As a result working in groups give us the chance to have more benefits.
It's obvious that, working is groups is more beneficial this will allow us to get the help need it from others, and to have more benefits made it by others. We should always work in groups, helping each other as a human being. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 |
92FFB3530304 | I'm disagree with this statement, that the first impression is impossible to change, because, I have seen a lot of people who doesn't had a positive impression at first, but later they completely changed. They become to change themselves from what they were before, tried to forgot about the negative impressions they had before.
if you Have a negative impression at first, and you want to change it, it will be hard, but it is not impossible, if you really want to change it. Everything that you have control of them, and you want to change them, you can do so. It well be hard, but not impossible. First impression can also have a large effect in someone's life, if it is a positive impression it can lead to the success, they want to have, but having a negative impression will not only take away your success, but it will also keep you down in your society, you will not have the respect, that you want have in your society. For example; if a boy in a place or society have a negative impression, other people who live in there will not let their children s to play with him, or to go to school together, or even their parents will try to change their children s classes if they know that they are in the same class, because they don't want their children to be like him, or to have a negative impression that he has. As the boy grows up, and recognize that he should change the negative impression that he had at first, which kept him away from his friends or classmates. He will try to change it to positive impression, which will be hard and for him it will be a strange thing, because he never tried this before, but, as he continues he will realize that, how much he was bad with that negative impression, and how much he was hurt, by that negative impression. Having a negative impression at first, and changing it will take much time, but changing this will help you to reach where you want, it will help you to achieve your goals, and it will help you to find a good friends, everyone will try to be your friend, and wants to have a good relationship with you, so you not only help yourself, but you will also help your friends to reach their success or to achieve their goals. Changing the first impression is not impossible for those who have a strong trust on theirselves, and really want to change this, especially, if this impression is negative, because he knows or soon he will know that this can be very bad for him, and can keep him down in school, society, or in the place they live. As, he knows that how much a negative impression will hurt them, they will try to change it. It is not going to be easy, but that doesn't mean that it will be impossible. In the process of changing this impression they will also learn a lot of new about how much will a positive impression good for them what can a positive impression do for them. They will know that having a positive impression is not in everyone's luck, those who have a positive impression, on their society, school or etc will have a successful future. Most of the peoples want to change their first impression, because they haven't seen any positive result from it; they want to change it for a good future. Those who have negative impression can't reach their success, because having a negative impression is like a wall between you, and your success, that will prevent from you achieving your success. First impression is like the first step toward your goals, so if you have a negative impression it will be almost impossible for you to get there, because having this impression can also effect your lessons, but if you have a positive impression it will be much easier to get there, because you can have more success in your lessons. For most of the people changing their first impression looking impossible, because they are never going to try it, they never want to experience a new thing, or maybe most of them think that this is not that important, but, I think that first impression is also very important in life. It can bring a lot of changes on you it can change you future, your position in a place.
I think that those who want to change their first impression should know that, this will not be easy, but if they try, and keep this in mind, that if they bring this change in their life they actually achieve a very big success. Changing this show them that everything that they want to change in their life is up to them, however, it will not be easy to do that, but that doesn't mean that it is impossible. Everything in your life is in your control, and you are the only person that can change what ever you want to change in your life, it just depends on you, that you are going to handle the situation. If a thing come to your life, and you know that, it will have a negative impression on your life try to keep them away, because they can make problems for, they can pretend you from having a good future, they will try to destroy you, so you are the only person who can keep all these things away. For most of the peoples it will be hard to forgot about their first impression, because they have a good knowledge with that, and they think it is good even if it is a negative impression. This kind of people will have a hard time to forgot their first impression. When we try to find new friends we always try to find about their impressions in our life; how can they help us to solve our problems, or how can they help us to achieve our goals. Having friends with positive impression in life will help you to take over your problems easily, but if you have friends with negative impressions, they can put their own negative impressions on you too, they will make think like a loser, because they don't want to reach your success.
In my idea those who want to change their first impression, first they have to think why they want to change it, what negative result they have seen with this impression, after they reached the position to change their first impression, they should start working for. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
930CF711E6B6 | I agree with Mr Ralph waldo that To be Yourself in a world full of fake people is a great accomplish,No matter what you do for other people they will always treat you like a piece of garbage,So What's The point of Pretending to be someone that's not me.
I Prefer to be Myself and be happy Then, Pretend to be someone else just to make people like me,
people will like me for the way i am and not for who I'm Pretending to be so that I dont have to waste my time hanging out with fake friends.
I know people that are a shame of where they came from and they started forgetting their culture and start adopting a new one. every time someone ask them about their past they just look a way and try not to answer because they dont one the rest of the people to know how they use to live and now that they have everything they wanted they act like they were never there.
theres people that pretend to have lots of cars,money and houses just to look superior than others that just messed up i dont see the point of making others feel bad just to make you feel superior thats just stupid why do you pretend to be someone that you are not even close to?
thats messed up i seen this happen a lot of times in my life and it makes me feel sad.
That is all have to said i hope that one Day this society will change their point of view and accept all the mistakes they had done. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 |
93385DED39E7 | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing.
When i was 15 years old, i broke my leg and that made me incapable of going to the school for 3 months, during those 3 months i didn't get any support to keep track on my classes because the school i was attending didn't had distance learning; Consequently, i almost failed my school year, because of this i support the option of having distance learning.
The fact that some schools have the equipment to offer distance learning is motivating, because it gives an opportunity to teenagers that struggle to get the education they need and this can be for several reasons that can limit them to get to their schools such as a medical condition, being isolated from their schools, or any circumstances that can happen during the school year; Furthermore, having distance learning as an option that is beneficial to the students and to the schools in general.
Students who are having problems to get to their schools, for factors such as not having money for the transportation or the schools are located too far from them, will benefit of having distance learning. For example, if a student can't get to his school because he can't afford a way to get to their classes on time; Consequently, the student is probably going to fail his school year for not being able to get to his classes, this shows that having distance learning support is beneficial for students that struggle with this type of problems.
Students who have for a medical condition, will have problems to get to their schools because of their medical state.
For example, a teenager that suffer from osteoporosis is hardly going to be able to get to his educational institution, and this is not going only to affect the student in his education is also going to damage his life by not having that knowledge that he needs to be progress as a person in his life; Furthermore, having support of distance learning to student that can't arrive to schools is an important and necessary characteristic that every schools must have in their options, this demonstrates that having distance learning support can help student that suffer from a disease that makes them unable of being present in school.
One of the most important characteristic of having distance learning is that it can be useful in scenarios where the students are in danger of coming to the school for something like a pandemic that would make the schools close, losing a huge a amount of days that will have an impact on the school year; Similarly, to what is happening with the COVID-19 in several country's around the world that are getting infected by this disease and where they are closing the schools because of this virus, however with the use of temporary distance learning students would be able to keep on track of their studies even when a disease or something similar to this is happening at the moment.
On the other hand distance learning can be used in a wrong way, where students simply don't care about their classes, this shows that is not a perfect system that needs to be used only when is necessary to put on practice.
In conclusion the use of distance learning in schools is important and useful to the students when they have problems to get to their educational institution and that it also can be used in scenarios where the student won't be able to assist to the school. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
93552F3ACA5D | The limitation of human contact has been a negative effect in peoples lives; people are so caught up in today's technology that no one really talks in person anymore. People do anything on phones, but it has negative things to using them a lot: dating people through text, and less communication in real life and more over text. While most people believe that technology has positive effects in reality, it is mostly a negative effect.
Technology is not a good thing in certain situations. It is better to get to know people in person rather than social media or anything. No one knows who someone is until they meet them in person because some people lie to make someone like them. Technology can hurt people in different ways: physical, emotional, or any other way. People tend to do things to hurt the other person online rather than to their faces.
Some people decide to date someone through social media when it isn't a good idea to do. People can fake identities to make people think they're another person. people decide to not say who they really are, so they could either kidnap them or make the person they're tricking to send them money if they live in another country. It's rare that people find someone who doesn't lie about who they are. Some people probably decide to date through social media because they think that they won't find anyone who will really like them.
Most people who have technology now use them to communicate with other people instead of in person. Most people decide to communicate through online or text so that they don't see the person's face. People feel more brave to tell a person something mean or hurtful through text or anything. People just decide to not talk, but instead to text.
Most people feel like technology has a good effects when it mostly doesn't. Technology is mostly a bad thing because people decide to date each other through text rather than in person and people communicate mostly through text. People need to go out into the world and talk to new people. Everyone needs to see the difference in the real world rather than through text. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
93575D076743 | Dear Principal,
The reason why I'm writing you this letter is because, I would like your students and all your school to help us to do a perform community service.
All the schools are planning to do one in their community because the state weather its not so good in the communities, because of the contamination of the fabrics and cars, its better for the students and teachers to do a community service because that way we can have a better life without contamination and another way that helps is that we can have a better health. Those are my reasons to do a perform community and, I will like your school to participate with us on having a clean area to live in.
Thank you | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
935A26E2610C | Do you think that the first impression can change my statement?
some people change the statement with the impressions for to made best result or to have a bets answer, therefore not all people can make this possible,
but while the people always try the bets.
i'm disagree because, based on my experience some time i said my first impression, and its hard to change, but is not impossible all is possible if you try the best, my mom said that you always have to change the first impression if is not correct.
My mom said that you always have to change the first impression, because you will be more secure of what you doing, and your life will be more better, and safe, I remember that she always toll me becarefool of what you choice, because that what you do in the present will affect your future.
Some time you have to think of what you choice, and i choice that i'am disagree, because i said if you think two time your impression your impression will be better if you said a best impression, so you have to think what you said because if is not correct you will have a big problem.
Should the people said the first impression, but if you see that you first impression is not correct you have to change the first impression, and make a better impression, because two is better than one. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
9392E2E0AA1E | I agree with the writing "
Determine never to be idle
" buy Thomas Jefferson. I agree with this writing because it is wonderful how much can be done if we are always doing something. the second reason that I agree is that I think we can accomplish more if we are always doing something. Lastly but not less I think that inactivity also can serve a purpose.
The firs reason that I agree with Thomas Jefferson writing because it is wonderful how much can be done if we are always doing some thing. What I think Thomas Jefferson was tring to say was that if we help others we wold be doing a lot for others. For example if we see someone that is tring to cross the street and they cant do it by them self because of a bad weather or because that person has a disability you should help that person because belive it or not you would make that person day. I also belive that Thomas Jefferson writing stans out for those people that dont have a home or a family y that can suport them if you can try to make that person day better by getting them a some water or food. I also belive by bing nice to people you could make there day better because you dont know if that peson had a bad day at work or something bad hapen.
Seconly I agree with THomas Jefferson writing because we can accomplish more if we are always doing some thing. For exampel if you are tring to pass a class or a SOL try your best and no matter how much you fell get up and get up stronger and keep tring. I think it also meen that is that if you are working and you dont know how to do it ask for help like that the next time you do it you can do it better. I think Thomas Jefferson was tring to tell us not to givre up.
Lastly but not less I belive that inactivity also can serve a purpose. Inactivity also can serve a purpose because if some one is provoking you and you jump up and keep it going then there can be some problems. For example if you are at work and some one provoke you and you reack to the provoke you could lose your job. If you get in troble because some one you and you keep the problem going it can afect you later on when you going to get a new job because they going to see that you cant control your self. Thats why i think if you go an talk to your boss when some one is causing you problems is better if you react an you lose your job for not contlroling your self.
In conclution I think we should help any one that needs the help and not just think that they would be fine because we dont konw what they been throug and we would like for some one to help us when we are in troble or when we are not dong well. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
93B8C8DAFE20 | Doing projects at school is really fun when it comes to working in groups. I think working in a groups is more beneficial because of the extra help you'll have. You wont have to work a lot because your group will help and share the project so that everyone has a chance in it. Group projects will show you how to work with others and maybe even help you make new friends. Projects of any kind will look and be better when in groups, lots of ideas will be on the table for everyone to look and pick from.
Working at school is hard. You get lightheaded and maybe even get tired. Group projects are so helpful because the project will be split up into parts where everyone in your group can take a part of it, all they have to do is post it together when finished. Having not to do all of it by your self is super nice.
Another beneficial gift in working in groups is that you will be able to learn teamwork. Learning that is a good skill because you'll need teamwork for your life time. New people, classmates, workers, and much more will want to work with you because of how you and your team get along with one another.
Projects of all kinds have to look good. Lets say your having a hard time trying to find the perfect color background for your poster. You can talk to your classmates who are in your group and ask them if they have any ideas of what color you should pick. Together you can find the perfect color and together you can make your project look perfect and maybe be the one that has the best project in your who class.
Group working is so much better for everyone because you'll learn teamwork, learn that you'll always have help when you need it, and your projects will always look good and perfect. The more people in your group, the more help, care, and ideas you'll have for your project. You'll learn something new from all of this and others will to. This is why I think working in groups is more beneficial for schools and jobs. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
93BAA0D48EF3 | Adopted a four-day work week with each conisting of ten hours should my school follow up with this modle.
From my opion yes. Reason i think it should is beacuse we can have a 3 day weekend, spend more time with family, get enough sleep,if studnts have after school jobs they can have good hours. Like for example If my school have adopted a four day school week with each day two hours. It would help alot because i can go school do my two hours on Monday,Tuesday,Wedesnday, and Thursday and i feel like we could help out teachers alot not only studnets could help out staffs teachers and studnets . Have Friday Saturday Sunday off go work on my 3 day weekend get sleep spend time with my family get my sleep and naps. It would help alot and be more easier for others and myself. So yes i feel like our school should follow up with for day school week extending the school day two hours others students would not like it that way but teachers and studnets to but from my opinon yes i think our school should follow up with that . | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
93C575DB7931 | Would you rather ask one person or multiple for advice
I think that if you talk to more than one person for advice it will hep you more .One time i saw this quot by Lebron James that said if you need advice always ask more than one because one person could be right and the other could be not be right so dont be scared to ask more than one person there is noting wrong about asking the person you look up to. it will most likely be better if you ask multiple people for good advice.
If you are a person that does not like taking to other people you can just go to one person or you can try something different and ask someone else but if you just want to ask one person you have to go to someone you trust so they can give you some good feed back and good information. If i was to ask someone for advice i would go to a person that is very wise and makes smart choices so they can help me make a smart choice so i dont make the bad choices. If you need good advice make sure your going to the right person because you do not to be getting bad information if you have bad information you can make some bad choices.
Getting advice from one person can also be good because what if your telling them personal thing they can keep it a secret but if you tell multiple people your personal information can get out there and can start getting bulled and you would not be able to trust anyone again so that is why sometimes you just have to tell one person if it is important information. And if you just dont trust anyone you can just go to your consular because your consular will never share your information with anyone and she will under stand you more because it could of happen to her as a child so one person can also be helpful.
Dont forget asking for advice can always be useful if its one person or it multiple people it can still help you but if it is a person that does bad things and you ask him for advice he can tell you to do the things he does and you will turn out just like him so do not do to someone for advice if they dont make good choice. advice can change pepole live if it is good. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
93DF867BE1C5 | I am agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the persuit of success .The Success consists of going to faillure to faillure without loss of enthusiasm. Next the success consists in many things. For example the Prime Minester Wiston Churchill said that, because he always persuade . That the enthusiasm is it the most important to any business or personal in your life consist in that simple word.
First I think that prompt has a specific message that persuasive that everyone who read can reading the message. So if who read the prompt may perform their success and should not failure in the future business. Next the futere business can thinking about it. Then if they don't have any enthusiasm they won't have success in a not very far away future. Finally that is what I think about the prompt said Churchill's statement very important role that failure plays in the success.
First I think it is very important that statement role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. Second if you persist and never give up you should be successful. Also if you are not persisting what you want with enthusiasm. That means you will have the same situation going to failure in your live. Then finally never loss the enthusiasm that is the point for all success.
For the success if you are unwilling have a little enthusiasm. So, as you are trying to do and you fail. It's only one reason that was not enough enthusiasm to doing it. You have to preform and trustly in yourself.
Also I think that success is for who are looking and persist with enthusiasm. Finally that is the enthusiasm consists in the future.
The important role from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. I am agree with that statement said, you never think you cannot do anything. Also I think if you feel without enthusiam you always will failure. So if you purpose is the success you should hard work and don't feel you cannot. Then if you willing you won't failure. Finally I think just sometimes that if believe in yourself you may do anything including if you came from failure to success. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
93E62B4919A6 | People who value self-reliance are people that can make their own decisions. They know what to do when it comes to the important matters in life. They aren't dependent on other people when it comes to most things in life and know what to do to get past certain things. These people grow a lot mentally because they end up knowing a lot because they go through with the decisions themselves; they don't listen to other people and don't make their decisions based on what other people say.
Self-Reliant people know how to get through their important or "life changing" decisions. For Example: Buying your own house, getting married , and dropping out of school are all very important decisions that you and only you can make. They think through about what decision they are going to make. People that don't make their decisions on their own always depend on someone or something else, especially when they are very important. You can learn a lot from making important decisions by yourself and it can help you in the long run.
Self-Reliant people aren't dependent on other people and always follow their instincts. They know making your own decisions is better than being guided towards what decision to make. Being Independent also goes in the same category as making your own decision. You do everything by yourself when you are independent, all the decisions you've made has either had positives or negatives for your life, asking someone for their opinion is only going to make you more biased to that choice. People should make their own decisions based on what they want/need to do for their life.
Making your own decisions helps you grow mentally, every major decision you've made affects your life every day. Most people always seem to ask somebody for help on a very important decision,
while others just think about what they should do themselves. People should just follow their instincts, their gut feeling of what they want to do; they shouldn't listen to other peoples opinions. The people should always try to make their own decisions instead of always relying on the guidance of experts and authorities. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 |
93EF5F755313 | To who may concern.
The Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm", is well know that some people believe in this statement and some other don't. There are some reasons to believe this is true: one, failure gives experience to do it better next time, two, failure makes one think about different possibilities to be prepare to control the situation, three, failure gives the option to try again.
First, failure gives experience; this helps to learn how to dont make the same mistake. For example, to learn how to cook is a "try and fail" because one needs to put a specific amount of spices and vegetables is a long process to give the food a good flavor; failure said what are the mistakes one needs to correct like to dont put much sugar in the cake or dont put much salt in the salad. Another example, learn a new language is difficult in various forms like the pronunciation or the form to make a sentence; failure give experience to improve abilities like these too.
Second, failure makes one think about different possibilities. For example, if one try to built a ship inside a bottle and fail because the little pieces of the ship broke inside for dont be careful, that persons if going to think about what can make the pieces break next time to avoid the same situation. Another example, if one flew a kite and a bird or the wind make the kite crash, the next occasion "what can make the kite crash?" is going to be a possibility to think.
Third, failure gives the option to try again. For example, take a test driver and fail but still studying to take it again; to get the necessary score to pass, this show that person decide to try again. Another example, when one try to learn how to do a magic trick, the first times fail is guarantee, but with perseverance one can be the best magician, this can be only reached if one decide to try again after fail.
Although, one can learn from the failures, is not necessary fail to success, but sometimes one can't decide to don't fail; fail is a form to learn something from the mistakes, for example, fail to do something can make one know what is wrong and what is necessary to do to correct and prevent a future failure.
In conclusion, one dont need to fail to learn, but "perseverance is the key for success" and when one go from failure to failure without giving up; the action to dont give up show how capable is that person to success. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
940441D4CF9C | Someone the has share wisdom, and experience to me is my friend Generic_Name he has stage 2 cancer and he been fighting all his live he is someone I look up for as a super human he says that everything is fine and he just wants to enjoy his life he is an awesome friend funny he is everything that a friend could have he knows the real meaning of struggle he suffers daily from his deadly cancer but he is always happy We play mostly every day Me and One of my friends from school Generic_Name we play video games with Generic_Name and he destroy us. He is always happy and smiling he shows wisdom and makes other around him happy. My other person the shares wisdom and experience is my grandma.
She has share a lot of her experience of cooking I learn something new from her cooking ability she is a bit old but it does't stop her she has a lot of energy to make food for her family I learn from by seeing her cook an egg or make chicken I see her, and learn from her experience.
When we go to the beach my grandma always takes food so she wakes up early and starts cooking.
From the experience from my grandma I learn how to use spices and cuts of meats in a dish,
Also learn the amount of vegetables or spices that some dishes have my grandma been cooking for almost all her life she knows what taste good and what taste bad.
She teaches me how to cook some basic but delicious plates.
I think Learning from the experience of others is better because they been alive longer and know a lot about the topic like cooking, playing a sport, Driving, swimming or teaching they study or practice a lot that they became masters at it. They also been a live longer and knows how it works. Like my grandma she is good at cooking so I press attention to her cooking and see what new things I learn. An Example is when you are a teenager you want to buy the best of the best pair of shoes to show your friends that you got something that they done But if your parents say to not buy them and to save the money instead to buy something better and more special later in life like a car there is were we should press attention to what they say about spending money because they are older there brain is fully developed and they know what to save for because they are older and have been here longer and know how to use money.
Thats why I listed to what the older grandpas and grandmas have to say when I do something Bad or incorrect because they pass that and know how it was and they want us to Be susses full in our on life and they share with us wisdom and experience and thats Important because they we can learn from them. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
94131A88E955 | In my oppinon school is good how it is now. having go to go school for a couple of months straight across and then just have a couple of months off for summer. If they were to change the school routine to kids having to have breaks for 3-4 week's they wouldn't come back with the same effort as they do when they come back off of summer break.. For example if I were to leave shcool for 3-4 weeks I wouldn't want to come back to the same classes and with the same routine, It's just that Students do retain the information they teach they would have to go over it just so they get back on track. But the fact of having year-around school isn't it just doesn't make a diffrence. and im an sure that kids wouldn't like to have only 3-4 weeks off school after all the time they spend in school
This is why students should have a right amount of school and a certain amount of months off. a year-around school benifits teachers not students. because they if they did have a year- around teachers wouldn't have to worry about re-teahing it again to the students because they would expect them to already know what they are taking about. so they should have a regualr schedual for te schools board to follow.
But at the same time the fact of not having to go to school for weeks sounds good. when their break is over they would have to go back to school not only that but they would have to pick up from where the left off at first. I feel like leaving in the middle of a lesson that is important that really wouldn't have the studets as much. if they were to change the school routine it would just mess things up with the students and their grades and that would e more work of teachers. What if some important test is coming up for the students and they only have a certian amount of time to get things done within the time period and then they would leave on break what if the teacher couldnt get everything done in time then te whole class would fail the test.
This is why they should just leave school as it is just so that student's and teacher's wouldn't have to go throught all that trouble, Just get what they need to get done within the time they are their and then when they are done with all the work they needed to get done with they could leave for summer break, just so students dont stress over the facts that they have to get things done in a certain amout of time. These are some of the many reasons why they should have school for months and not take breaks inbetween school days just so that they have months off on their summer break. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
941A269CE055 | The resources is very limited in our world. How to economize resources? It become a topic. Some businesses have four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. This way may economize resources so school can use this pattern also.
But for this idea people have different opinion. Someone say school should not follow this model by extending the school day two hours because only four-day school students can not learned enough knowledge. But in my opinion I think school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours because this pattern is very good for economize resources and four-day school may promote students efficient study.
Some parents think four-day school is too sort for them children can not learned enough knowledge. And three-day weekend is too long. them children may do not study. So parents worry about the foreground for them children.
In my opinion I think school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours because this pattern is very good for economize resources. We can do a easy math for this question. How many electric for one lamp? How many lamp in one school? How many school in US? You can image it is a big resources spend just for electric. That is why I am agreed the four-day school.
The four-day school have benefit to student also. Because students need learn five-day knowledge in four-day. It may promote students efficient study. The efficient study is useful for the study and work at future.
The resources is valuable for us. We mast economize them. So, I recomment should follow this model by extending the school day two hours. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
946D8B23ECA6 | I agree with Albert Einstein when he said that imagination is more important than knowledge. within you knowledge comes you imagination. in that imagination you see that it will help you receive your knowledge from somewhere that you did imagined. even tho sometime you imagination can mess your Brain a little when you go ahead of yourself. Like when you think about a subject that takes you way over that your brain wont handle itself.
but mabey sometimes your knowledge can be more efficient than your imagination because your brain is acting more mature when it comes to obstacles that are difficult. your brain acts more when its come to a problem like that time you got stuck on that question on that math test you've taken. sometime even when you are reading a book. reading a book may help you vocabulary when you read.
but there're time when they both help each other. both knowledge and imagination can help when you construct something. mabey you wanted to built something but you had no idea what. thats why you have you imagination comes right on in to tell you many ideas on what to build. once you think of the build you knowledge is there to help out to figure out on how you should build it. your brain get all the knowledge to help to build that dimension of the building there s how both can work together,
but still there're some negative times when it come to imagination and knowledge. like that time you are felling a bit down and your imagination said that you cant find anything to make you happy. sometime when your imagination goes a bit to far like that time you play with friends when you were younger you can make thing a bit unfair with your imagination and can loose that friend. in middle school with that knowledge of yours can change many things on a test. you can do good or bad. but say you did good and you were the student that had the highest score but you friend go one of the lowest score but you bragged about it yo can also loose that friend.
imagen if a 16 year old boy wanted a job. he may have not be the smartest but he has a few bad grades. either he will get a get a good job or he'll stay jobless cause if how much knowledge he had since he does no study hard enough. so other students may have better knowledge and have received the job they have wanted. mabey t he 16 year old boy needed the job to pay for food but he had to ask all his friend to buy food since he had no ob nor the money. so in the future he became homeless because he had to pay the money back to the friends he had cause he needed money.
young children have the most imagination since they have nothing to expect. but at night children think they see monster are on closets and want to have their mom and dad to come see it for themselves but their parents say that there are no monsters. later the night they start hearing noises but cant tell were its coming from so they scream mom dad again because the child thought there was still a monster in the room. but the parents still say that there are still no monster in the room. later on the child starts to think that there it still a monster so the child went on outside the room and notice that it was no monster it was just their parent just making noise just to scare their child just for fun. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
948771F795EB | We accomplish more when we are active, and are always doing something. I want to go to a university, but to achieve this goal, I have to put forth effort my going to school and studying all the time. I am always doing something while I am in school, and I am not allowed to be on my cell phone. This will not help me pass in school, even after school I sometimes stay in tutoring for Math and English, because I have trouble. This will be true in school, sports, and in life like my mother tells me all the time. I have to agree that always staying busy will allow you to accomplish more in life.
In my school, soccer also helps me stay busy, because I am on the team. We have to practice everyday to have a chance to win. I want to be the best player that I can be, and to do this I have to always practice. My coach tells me the more I practice, and the busier that I am the better condition I will be in for the game. Soccer takes a lot of energy and you are always active in the game and you need to be more active than the other team to win. Always doing something in sports allows you to be better.
My mom told me when she was growing up that she was poor, and she did not always have food to eat so she picked mangoes off of the tree. She did go to school, but when she was not in school she had to always stay busy. She would go to her grandmother's house to wash clothes or sell some of the mangoes that she picked in the street. She was fifteen years old, and she had no shoes so she worked for rich people in their house cleaning. She tells me this so that I will understand that I have to stay active and she has worked hard to give me a better life. She gets angry when I try to stay in bed and not do anything, because I always need to be active to get somewhere in life.
We achieve more when we stay active, and we always are doing something good. My goals in life are to go to school, and graduate from a college, play sports to stay in condition, and make a better life for my kids like my mother. I can only do these things if I stay active and work hard. It is wonderful how much you can achieve if you always stay active and focused. | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
94ACF6006DB9 | My first opinion,
would be that to be a good person,
is you have to be your self no matter what is going to happen . For example a good behavior star at home because your parents have the responsibility to educate. Also some people said the students are very bad for other students, like they are bad influence .
My second, reason would be the your own problems can affect, your career. For example your grades at school if you are a good person with other people to be a good citizen just be you because people the just talk never do something good. But sometime teen don't deserve what they have for example school, job, people the they love them.
After that well, if you work that is a good idea because you can focus, and two things but if you are weak that will be a terrible decision . So a good behavior is excellent, because you always can find friends, and maybe a girlfriend but den pent of you.
In conclusion, if you are a good behavior you will be a good person, and the future, and a good guide for you children. Also if you are a good students,you will be have credit for college but you have to be a good behavior. So the mean, that you responsibility is work very hard to complete your goals. And help other people, who need help because the would make you a good behavior. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 |
94C1C9CD10B7 | 'If the school adds one hour and thirty minutes in a schools day'' honestly i dont agree nor disagree their some pros and con with this topic. The pros are that you learn more its good because schools get out earlier for the summer so their more summer days to enjoy. Another pro is if you have question on your homework the teacher can help you out by teaching you and you dont have to worry about the time because you have plenty of minutes to learn. Second If their were longer classes kids will lean more things and pay attention,if its their favorite class well it will be good for them because its longer. For me I love music class if i have more time in that class i could learn more things about music and i could be better player. Third pro it give us more time to hang out with our friends because your could be busy because they sports or church. Well for me i cant hangout with my friends because i have strict parents they wont let me get out of the house unless i have good also they don't let me hang out with friends so the only way i can see them is at school. Fourth pro is you can get to know your teacher and the students in the class you can learn many new thing about the teacher that you would never know about sometime its cool to hear their story because it could teach you something or can make you laugh. So i learn that their many good thing of having more time in a school day.
The cons of having one hour and thirty minutes in school day. First con is kids will be tired and they wont think that much or pay attention because all their energy is gone. The kids will be rude and wont do anything because they are tired or hungry. Well the only way to fix this to give them snack yeah that could help but how your going get the snack you have to buy them with money they are going to tell the kids to buy the snacks and the schools wont buy it. Second con is if the kid has doctor appointment they will go and the next day they will miss a lot of stuff in class and they make it up and the teacher wont teach it again because they have to move on and learn something new. Third con is classes will be harder because you have remember a lot of stuff for the test that your going to have that week. Honestly for me everyday when i get home i take a nap if dont have that nap i will be mad all night so many other kid could be just like me when they dont get a nap they are really rude so that bad for them ant the teachers also you will see kids falling asleep and teacher will yell at them. So i learn that their many not so great things of having more time in school.
In the end they are many good like getting help for work and their may bad things like getting tired. So having more time in school is good and bad . | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
94EC7DF6EA74 | People these days dont go outdoors as much as they used to. I think that many people are avoiding going outside, because of cell phones. going outdoors is actually more fun than staying indoors doing nothing, because you can do a lot of activities. Some activities you can do is play sports, practice sports, run laps, and do exercise. I think that some people find outdoor activities enjoyable, because they can do activities with others and enjoy the weather while doing activities.
People should go outdoors more, because if they dont go outdoors and dont do activities, there is a chance that later on in life they can have weak bones. There are people who stay indoors just listening to music, but you can actually go outside and do activities while listening to music. If you dont like to play sports, exercise, or run laps you can just ride your bike. Riding your bike can actually help you later in life, because it can give you stronger bones and can improve your stamina and strength.
Another thing that you can do is play outdoor games, such as tag, freeze tag, and hide and go seek tag, but there is many more. These outdoor games can also improve your stamina and strength. A good time to go outdoors is when its sunny and when you have nothing to do. Also when your going outdoors make sure to bring someone with you so you can do activities with them. And if you have no one to do activities with head over to a local park to do activities with other people. Therefore i suggest that people, especially kids, to go outdoors more. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
950729DE3582 | Duke Ellington was a jazz legend of his time. One quote he said," A problem is a chance for you to do your best." I will explain the meaning behind this. And if i agree with this or disagree. Let's begin on the meaning first.
The meaning that he is saying is that form your problem you can make it better for your self. To see your problem you can teach your self to do better. That not to give up on your problem. That something bad can turn good. This quote is trying to modevant you.
I agree with this statement. Something bad will in fact turn something good. Not all bad thing will turn bad
As long as you can make them turn out good. You just have to see a chance to do so. Duke Ellington also may of had the same problem.
Duke Ellington was a great jazz ,but was also so a great person. That something bad that can turn to something that is good is very modevation. I agree with this very much. This is what it means and my opinion on the statement. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
951DBA563386 | Do you make your own decisions or do you seek guidance from experts ? I believe that people should be able make their own decisions. I believe this because people are not away right about things and what they say. Another reason would be because only yourself know what chooses you want to make in life and so those are your decisions. My third reasons why I would say that people should be able to make their own decisions is because you shouldnt follow what others do. You always see people making good or bad chooses or making not good decisions but does that mean you got to do what others do, no because you have to make those chooses on your own.
My decision for people to make their own decisions would be because trusting others on what they say isnt always the right things. Would you want your best friend making a decisions for you ? Maybe not because you never know if she/he could be right or telling a lie. People in life are not always right about things ,you dont want to get in trouble for doing something dumb or that isn't the right thing for you to do . If you make a good decision on something at school or basically anywhere you can show others on how to make good chooses so they wouldn't make mistakes . This why you shouldn't listen to people making decisions for you this is because they can cause problem and get you in a situation where you dont want to be put in.
In life theirs so many things you can do but it all up to you . You decide what you want to do, you shouldn't let other people judge you in your decisions because they shouldnt get in involved . This is because everyone does what they want to do in life . If you make a bad decision thats all on you because you made the decision not someone else you can't blame others for that when it comes to you getting involved in a situation that you got yourself put in. I know your children in school might've gotten in trouble with something and if not it because they are great children who don't follow what others do. There are ton of students in school who make bad decisions and this because they like to do what others do by following what others do and seeing others do bad chooses. In that case that is not right because it makes them get in trouble and they lose time of education for making bad decision.
When it comes to making your decisions you make your chooses. Only you know what chooses you want to make. If you do don't want to do something you should't do it . Don't be afraid to not do something because you think it a bad decisions just first before everything think about what your doing. You should always question yourself is it a good choose or not because your the one making your own chooses. Everyone is their self you shouldn't be controlled by anyone. When it came to me making new friends at school I choose wisely with who I would want to be friends with because I didn't want me to be influenced by making bad chooses by others. No one has the right to choose to do things for others when it comes to making chooses it all depends on yourself.
In conclusion just always remember that you should always pick your decisions and not others for you. I know in the world we live in we all know that not everyone makes good chooses which is okay in some cases. This just means that not everyone is perfect which is true because their is at least one thing in life that you made a bad decision on. People just need time to think about what chooses or decisions they want to make so that after they make the chooses or decisions they don't think about it twice and why they should've made a wisely decision. Don't let yourself down or stress about what's rights for you in life. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
9523FBA791BE | Imagine yourself getting out of high school early, and going to college or the workforce. It's really exciting because all that hard work was worth it, and you made it, but to get through you had to give up many of the activities you liked as well as your time. That is why it's not a good idea for students to finish high school in three years, and enter college or the workforce one year early. Students must take classes during the summer. Many students may not be able to take elective classes. Finishing early can be very stressful for students.
Students finishing high school in three years must take classes during the summer or in the evenings. Many students work over the summer, and having to take classes would not give them time to get a job. Instead, students would have to attend to school, do homework, study for tests, and quizzes. Similarly, if students take classes in the evenings, and want to be enrolled in sports, or clubs, which require students to stay after school. They would not be able to participate.
If students finish high school early, they may not be able to take elective classes. In order for students to graduate, they have to take required classes. This required classes are also important when getting into a college. Having to take all the classes they need, can barely fit into their schedules. This would enable students to be enrolled in elective classes like art, drama, music, or photography.
Some people may say that students finishing high school in three years, and enter college or the workforce one year early, it's a good idea. However, it can be very stressful for students. Students have to study for all of their classes, do homework at home, and keep up with their classwork, so they won't get behind. Additionally, students have to do projects, and presentations. All of these can stress students a lot, and won't have time for their own.
It's not a good idea for students to finish high school, and enter college or the workforce one year early. Students would need to take classes during the summer or in the evenings. Students would not be able to take elective classes. Also, finishing one year early can be stressful for students. Schools should not offer students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
9528CA8FFC22 | Farmer British prime minister Winston Churchill once said that ''Success consists of going form failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. I agree with Churchill's Statement because some time in life u fail but never gave up in life. keep fighting and you will get to the place you want to get. Work hard if u fail and fail never say i'm done trying the same thing over and over. Because one day u will not know what will happen if u keep trying.
Firstly,Some people think that success consists of going from failure to failure without loss some time people feel safe without loss in their life. For explane you trying to became a prime minster in the future and people telling you. Can't became a prime minister but all you get to do is work heard in life true in yourself you can do anything you put you mind to in life.
Secondly. some people think that success consists of going from failure to failure with a loss. Some people think that failure to failure is good because some time people like to try one think over and over on tell they do good at it so that what some people think in life to gave when the chances to do the same thing over and over even if they could't do it they just when to keep trying.
Sometime people think that success consists of going from failure to failure without loss. Because they dont like to keep trying one thing over and over so they feel safe without loss in their life. But other think that success consists of going from failure to failure with a loss. Because people like to try the same thing over and over on tell they do good at it.
Conclusion, sometime is good that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." In everything you do in life. But sometime is good that ''success consists of going from failure to failure with a loss of enthusiasm.'' in life... | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 |
9532BA8E40BA | why is better to have summer break than have it in different time of the year? Some educators feel that the summer break is too long and that students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall,and some people argue that should be year-round schools, where there would be a 3-4 weeks break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. I disagree that students should have a year-round schools because students will not learn if they have many breaks during the year, students would not have enough time with their families, and friends, also students would have hard time to do their work.
First, Students will not learn if they have many breaks. I think that is better if students have summer break than have it in different sections of the year. for example; if students want to travel to other state for vacations they would have to travel a week before so they can have fun, but students have to come back a week before school start, and they will forget what have they been learning the pass months. the main point of this example is that there is no point of doing a year-round schools, because that would affect students.
second, students would not have enough time with their family, and friends. Students travel every summer to other states to visit their families, and friends. for example; Most of the students travel every summer to other states or countries, but if students have year-round schools they will not have enough time to have fun with their families, and friends, also they would make less plans, because students would have to come back a week before the school start. from this example the main point is that students should have their vacations in the summer, and not in different sections of the year because they take time to those students, and when they go back to school they will not make any effort to do what they suppose to do.
third, students would have hard time to do their work. they would not have enough time to complete their worksheets from school, because they were having fun with their families, and friends in other countries. for example; if most of the students travel to different countries or states, and when they come back home students will be tired, and lazy to do their work, but if they have summer vacations they will be exited to go to school, retain information as easily when they come back. from this example the main point is that students should have summer vacations so they can be exited when they come back to school, and be great during the school.
finally, students would be more time in the school learning more, and paying attention to the teachers, also they will get their work done more faster, and students would be more positive to pass their SOL'S. Although students would be more successful in school. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
953BEF800163 | Finish high school one year early sounds pretty good. Students can start doing something out of high school that helps them in the career they will choose in the future. But, its better to finish the traditional four years in high school, because students can prepare more they self before go to college, its too early for students to finish high school at the age of 15-17 years old, and students might not have the enough education that they need.
To begin with, students will be more prepare to go to college after the four years of education from high school. They can prepare more they self and see what they need to work on or what they wanna do in the future. For example, these four years in high school helped me to find a passion about what I would like to become in the future, and also helped me to be more mature and feel ready for the next step.
Also, its too early for students to finish high school one year before, because students might be in the age between 15-17 years old and they may not be that ready to start a responsive life in college. For example, my sister is 16 years old and she's a junior. When we don't have nothing to do or we are having a conversation, I always ask her if she is ready to go to college or at least, if she have an idea of what major she would like to study and her response is that; she's not even ready for her senior year, and I understand her, because that happened to me when I was her age and when I was a junior.
Moreover, students might not have the enough education that they need to learn in high school, and that can be a problem in their classes in college. For instance, I've heard from some friends in college, that sometimes they really lost in some classes, even though they graduated from high school when they were 18 years old. That means, if students graduate in three years, they would be confusing in their classes when they're in college.
To conclude, graduate in four years from high school it feels longer, but it will be a big reward at the end, because students will be more ready to go to college, also they will be in an age where they will be more responsible, and mature. Lastly, they will have more acknowledge in everything. High school, its one of the best step of your life, where after you graduated from there, you would like to come back and stay more than four years. | 4.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
9551DA943B01 | First impressions are very important because that is the way people know you. It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change and I agree with that statement, because it is hard to change people's mind and the way they think about you.
When someone know you or see you for the first time, the way you act, speak or the way you look is what they use to create an idea of how you really are. And when people already have an idea of how you are it is very hard to make them think different. Sometimes when you tell them you are a different person, they won't give you a chance to demostrate if is true, and they will just keep the idea they already have. People who knew you time ago and did not see you again they will keep the idea that they have about you, even if you already change.
Sometimes you meet people in the wrong moment, and they get a bad impression about you. Then they just keep their distance or go away and you can not do anything to change their opinion. First impressions are very hard to change because the majority of people judge you on the first thing they notice about you, it can be your appearence or the way you act.
Although I think first impression are almost impossible to change there are people who thinks that it is not hard to change first impressions , and they may be not wrong also, because there are people who give you an opportunity to start over and show them that you are different; However even if there are some ways you can change the impression that someone has about you, there are more reasons why it is almost impossible to change first impressions.
To conclude first impressions are almost impossible to change and people should be more carefully about first impressions. Because it is very hard to change the way a person thinks. and also it can affect your reputation. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
95540EBC3FC9 | With the development of education, every school always have classes to support student's natural abilities and students, who love arts, are also free to enroll and find out their strength. Beside that, they also need to release stressful after two or three hours from studying. It's a good condition for students to recharge and heighten their energy for the next efficient block when they take the classes of art but it wastes time for students who won't spend time to practice it.
Today, studying in high school, which turns to boring with almost students because they can't locate where they are, what they are interested in at school. In that case, finding the funny things, which is the best way to counter that situation, is helping us to reduce stressful and recharge us from hold blocks study. For example, there are multiple choices for us like enrolling a band, joining a drama, taking part in an art class for making motivation in studying . We must be required to take those classes because that also is what we choose.
Beside that, choosing to sign up an art class are not only helping students to clean up their brain, which become easily to adopt information from the following block, but also increase efficient- adoption. For instance, after a serious block with full information in our brain, we must to clean it up by singing, acting or drawing class, it will help our brain feel relaxing and ready for adopting more information. It also depends on our type of favorite in entertainment that your body and brain can feeling relax when we are into it.
We agree that every students should be required to take those classes but if such classes won't be electives to select student's natural abilities; a huge students, who aren't serious about a music, a drama, an art class, will make other students feel uncomfortable. Like they are going to sleep or make noise which effect to everybody around to enjoy their fresh time.
To sum up, we know students should take a class from arts to make them feel fresh after a tired day or two to three blocks in a row to recharge and make our adoptive abilities improving; it help students produce motivation from school and make them feel comfortable without pressure. But classes of art still need to be electives to choose which students own availability to take part in that class to make sure they don't waste time in the block they even aren't interested in. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
95671082C3A1 | The use of technology has positive effects on people's lives, because the technology is very important at the present time, and people can finish their tasks without having ask others. People can check out books, shop, and play games. Some people believe that the technology has a negative effect, because people loss human contact.
Firstly, people can check out books online or read books without having go to the library. For example, some people do not have time to go the library and grab some books, because they are busy or they are working. Also, they can read the books any time that they want without bothering others. Secondly, some people shop online because is more easy for them to do it like that, for example, they can order anything like food, clothes, or shoes. Anything that people ordered would be delivery to their homes, this is more easy because they do not have to go the stores and buy what they need. Thirdly, some people like to play games because there are a lot ways to play games for example, people can have they portable nintentos, they can download games in their phones, or they can have they own games at home.
To concluded, the use of tecnology is very important, it helps people to complete their tasks without having contact with others. The use of technology has positives effects on people's lives because it makes some things easier for them. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
959946A3FB03 | Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has positive or negative effects on people's lives. Technology allows people to complete many task without any contact with another human. Technology has a negative effects on peoples live's. After awhile of using technology and not having any contact with other human you seem to forget how to actually hold a conversation with other human. Technology restrict's you from getting out of the house. People meet other people via online or in online website which can be really scary because you don't know the other person behind the other screen.
After awhile of using technology and not having any contact with other human you seem to forget how to actually hold a conversation with other human. Technology restrict's you from getting out of the house. Technology restrict's you from getting out of the house and completing task. People really enjoy the fact that they don't have to leave the house or if the need something it will be delivered to their front door. Without you ever leaving the house can really effect your life you start to become lazy different task become harder for you because you don't have technology by your side.
Technology can help alot of people becasue a lot people buy stuff online and don't go to the store which can save time and but people start to get lazy knowing that they can get whatever they want and never have to leave the house. A lot of people have jobs in which they work from home and don't really live the house. I personaly would hate to be stuck in the house all the time i like to go outside and talk to other people and go to the store to get something other than wating for it to arrive at my door.
People meet other people via online or in online website which can be really scary because you don't know the other person behind the other screen. Kids get kidnapped because other creepy people who talk to little kids and act like their friendly to the kids. Some people go as far as finding where you live and what school you attended which can be really creepy. One of my friends had a stalker like that which she meet online and thought he has the same age as her and it turned out to be false he was away older then her and had wrong attentions for her i'm really glad that she found out soon who he really was and called the cops.
In conclusion Technology allows people to complete many task without any contact with another human. Technology may have a negative effect on peoples lives or it may not some people say it does not and some say it does. technology is a great tool to have, technology can get in bad hands and turn out really bad. After awhile of using technology and not having any contact with other human you seem to forget how to actually hold a conversation with other human. Technology can help alot of people becasue a lot people buy stuff online and don't go to the store which can save time and but people start to get lazy. People meet other people via online or in online website which can be really scary because you don't know the other person behind the other screen. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
95FD6DF25420 | Hi my name is Generic_Name and I am going to talk about energy and resources. The reason why we are talking about energy and resourses is because ,some busineses have adopted a four day work week. They want to because they want to conserve energy and resourses.
Each work week is going to be for 10 hours but in my opinon that is not going to work. I think it is not going to work because, people are barely working 8 hour shift and working 10 hour shifts. It is going to be more painful for people, and they are going to get really tired. In my opinion if they are going to make people work for 10 hours for 4 days, they have to increase the minumim wage and pay a little bit more money.
Their is alot of reason why I do not agree with this new change. The only positive reason I see is getting 3 days off. Another positive reason I see for this change is, if you get payed every 2 weeks, and you worked
4 days and, make 40 hours 1 week and 40 hours another week, it is going to be a good paycheck. Now it depends how much you get payed but im pretty sure if you are going to do 10 hours shifts, they are atleast going to pay $12.00 an hour or they are going to pay you $11.00 dollars in hour. Those would be good reasons to work in a job like that. It depends to if the people have time to work 10 hour shifts for 4 days.
Their are some school that want to have those same rules that some jobs have of 10 hours. I do not think that would work for students, because 10 hours of being in school is really stressing. I know how it feel like to be in school for 8 hours, is it is not fun and it is really stress full. I think that the classes in highschool would be more longer the students would not concentrate .The reason they would not concentrate is because, you would be doing a lot of asighnments and, you would lose intrest in what they are teaching and, you would lose focus. In my opinion I would not like that but I am pretty sure the school would like it because, they would be completing more work and they would be finishing lessons really quick and the students would study more.
There would be another advantage to that because the students would be in school for 10 hours for 4 days a week. They would have 3 days off every week that in my opinon it would propably be friday saturday and sunday. It would sound kind of good since you get 3 days off every week, but at the same time no students want to be in school for 10 hours for 4 days a week ,that sounds stressing and hard .You would propably have more classes, a lot of home work ,and more test, and quizes. It would propably be hard for teachers to do 10 hour shift to because ,they would have to do more planings of lessons because they would propably have to teach lot of classes during the day since the school day is 10 hours.
In my opinion this prompt that I wrote today was really intresting. The topic was really intresting it made me think a lot of what I was going to type in this prompt. The topic was really intresting because it was about what I thought about jobs only working 4 days a week and 10 hour shifts. The other part of the topic was what if school was 4 days and 10 hours. This prompt made me put myself in that position and I did not like it if this would ever happen in real life I would be against it . | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 |
960D7C072801 | Hello Mr. Manager I would like to vist your work space. Visiting your work space could help me learn about how you work and everything. Visiting your work space can help others understand what your do. Visiting your company could help understand how things are made at your company and what your goal is for the future of your company. This visit will help me understand how the people are too.
Visiting your company could help people understand what you do at your work space. Looking at a work space can help people see what the company is working on. Also at a company while they are working help people see how things are here and if they like it or not. Letting people see your work space will let them know what kind of company this is.
Opening your company to people would help them understand what kind of things you need to work here. This could help chosing colleges and schools. Instead of wasting time looking all the colleges looking here could help narrow the options a bit. Knowing what course to take will help me pick what college I want and will help me narrow the list instead of looking all over the place.
Letting people vistit your company would them see what your working on. Letting them come in and everything could help them know what they might be getting in the future. Helping people understand is a good way to keep your company out there in the world. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
9613CEAFE86E | " Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing" Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose? In my opinion i think we as people accomplish a lot if we are always doing something. One reason is because in oder to do something or succeed in something you have to be doing something for that to happen. I feel like if people want something to get done you have make a change and stay determined just like what Thomas Jefferson said in his quote and that's very important to keep in mind when you are trying to achieve something and you wanna make a difference.
In Thomas Jefferson's quote he says something that really makes you think about how in society today how people deal with some things. It makes you wonder if people are doing the most they can to accomplish something and it also makes you think to yourself if you as your own person are doing whatever is it you can to accomplish your goals in life. I feel like some people don't do anything to try to accomplish the set goals they have for themselves and they expect for that goal that they are waiting for to come to them instead of them working for that accomplishment. It shouldnt be that way but some people think life is like that also when there is a major issue going on in the world some people think that doing nothing is okay. When people witness a problem some people decide not to do anything and the issue will go away when maybe that's not the case in some situations.
There are people that are dedicated to what they want and will always do something to accomplish or achieve whatever it is they need to achieve and i think that is really good because it just shows that you are determined to do whatever you can to get what you want in life. People that are very determined achieve so much that it inspires others and makes them feel like they need to do something so they can start achieving want they want in life. I feel like that's very important because if you dont do something to accomplish what you want then nothing is going to happen in your life and I know there are people that don't do anything and they have nothing good going for them.
I feel like Thomas Jefferson was the type of person to stay determined and focused on the goals he wanted to make. He set goals and he made them happen he made things happen for our country and all that happend because he was determined and focused and he wanted to do something so he can accomplish what he wanted. Everything in life you have to work for it and do something about it. It doesnt just land in your lap everything you do requires you to work for it and the end result will be that you accomplished everything you worked hard for. For example I feel like a lot of issues in this world could be solved if people would do something people wouldnt be running for there lives because there is a war going on in there country if somebody would do something about it. There wouldnt be so much negativity and so much hatred if somebody would just make a change.
My over all conclusion about this quote that Thomas Jefferson wrote is that it is important for people to actually do something and work hard and achieve there goal. When you put your all into something your hard work pays off and you finally accomplished something and that's all that matters. I feel like what message Thomas Jefferson is trying to give is that life is always gonna be hard no matter what but you always have to push yourself and accomplish what needs to be done. When you do that good things come in return and it does serve purpose in you life it always have and always will. I think that is what Thomas Jefferson is trying to say in his motivating quote and it really inspired me and i hope it inspires others as well. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
9615F113FAA1 | My principal has decided that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity. I disagree with my principal because you cant force anyone, they can do whatever they want, and some people are not best doing extracurricular activity.
Forcing someone is not good because you cant tell someone do things that they couldnt do. Some people dont like playing sports, working the yearbook, or serve on the student council.
Not everyone have the same opinion, but many people have different opinion. Forcing an students to do something probably make them feel that they have no rights.
The students should decide what they should do, not the principal because students should get their own opinions. Letting the principal decide the students what to do, make me feel not very good because it make me feel like he is telling me what to do and i dont like that.
Some other people are not good at doing sports or working the year. Some people are different from others. Some students are best other things and some are not. Many students have their own taste on something.
I disagree what is the principal is saying because they cant forcing any the student, the students should decided they own, and some people are not best doing extracurricular activity. The students should be able to choose what they ever want. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
96220F2863D1 | Imagine walking outside with your dog and someone comes up to and treats you like a criminal like he just killed a person, stole money, and bombed a house! Would you like to be treated like a criminal for the rest of your life with nobody talking to you or respecting you? 62% of the people around the world are not being treated with kindness or respect. People in many countries like Canada, France, and Russia are not being like a human being. People should start treating others how they want to be treated, that includes being nice, kind, and helpful to each other.
In many countries people are not being treated right. 55% of the people have depression, loneliness, and sadness, because when they are not being treated with kindness they think no one likes or cares about them. Over 200 people around the world have committed suicide because they were not treated how they wanted to be treated. Not being kind or nice to others can cause damage to peoples feelings. People have been effected by other for not being treated correctly.
Treating others with rudeness is not going to effect you or kill you, it is the opposite it will help you become a different and better person than you were before. Treating others with kindness can make peoples day wonderful. Some people might have a bad day and if you help them and treat them with kindness, they will feel a lot more better. Being nice to people will make your life a lot more easier and you will feel like you have accomplished something big.
I strongly believe that people should start being nice to others even if they are not respecting you. Being nice and respectful to others is what everyone wants you to be, but if you do the opposite than your life is going to become harder. People should start treating others how they want to be treated, and that includes being nice, helpful, and kind to everyone. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
963501C88479 | Some people say that failure plays in the pursuit of success. Other people say that failure do not play in the pursuit of success.
Some people say that failure plays in the pursuit of succes because if we fail we learn how to stand up after every time we fall down,For thing we never had we have to do something we never did,If we fail big we learn big things,and we fail once we have to try again.
In life stuation we fail but it does not mean we never pass,Life is hard to deal with it but we can deal with it,every time we fail we have opportunity to fix it,Life is about gulliblety bad ideas come to our mind but we don't have to think about it we have to think positive,Every time we fail we think we are guilty,We think we are useless,We think we can not do it but there is somwthing in the back we have to catch it that thing is success.
We are skillful that thing is notthing against our skills,we always worried about what others think what we accomplish and what we carry out but it is our job that what we do, We have to lead our self to get success and we are the finder,there is alot of ways to pass we can get help from others:family,teachers,friends,and people;every body is liable for there own work.
Once i had biology class that i had to pass SOL I toke the SOL fourtimes at the last time i pass it,It was hard to pass SOL for me but i never stop accomplish even i hate that,In some point in our life we fail but we do not have to loss our firmness or solidity,We do not have to shrik responsibility,We have to strenghen our ideas,We ahve hopes in our life that we need to make them true,In some points in life we have to calm down take a teep breathe and focuse on our work, In a test when we fail we learn things like:what was in the test,how to use an other strategy to pass the test,how to try,and what can we use in the test like dictionary;This is how failure play in the pursuit of success.
Other people say that failure do not play in the pursuit of success because every time they try they fail. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
963AD357A595 | Be greatest accomplishment, i would like to say yes, to exhibit your hobbies , to be recognized you must have to do your own work be kind. As you must do your work every people can recognize you as the winner that you always do, if you can't do it do it because is the succeed to enter to your next level.
when we wont something we always ask for our success and always go for it, if you want to success be the person that you always want to be. As long as you path you will find many obstacles that will not give you your next step while you do the biggest thing many peoples will look for you and will say as you can do this i can do it as well. I see many peoples that you are one of the reasons are here.
If i do my work i will be one of the peoples that you always wont it, when i resolve my life i think i will be more than help other on what they need and what they want. I don't want to graduate because i fell the school is not for me i wasting my time i want to do what i want to do it for my world and with that be happy that help one nation, try to do something else than i can will be more than help other the way i do my things is the way to too many peoples like, what i need to succeed is my knowledge and be on the position of others, if i could pass my class i will not be trying do my homework.
I can't do what ever i want to pass my life to other it is simple, to be myself i need to create many thing that help on my continue life and the others can join when they ever want. In my life time the thing are as i didn't inspected because i want to be one of the peoples you always want and take a little res on the thing i even do.
On my conclusion i would like to say if i what to do many others thing i need to make many others decisions. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
964E9DBFDBAA | image having a good skill. like being good at a sport, sing, cooking, or just getting good grades at school.
People can have skill or talent they might not even know they have one. Skill can be anything like being good at math when other people are are not, you might not be good at English but other people are. it does not matter if your not good at something. like you can be good at soccer but be bad at baseball. skill can come in different ways.
like mine. My skill is talking to people. I don't know why I like to talk to other people but i just do. But It can get me in trouble like. When Im doing a test I like to turn around and talk to my friends and i always get in trouble for this. or when Im in class I like to talk to much with my friends and not do my work and sometimes I talk to the teacher for a long time and not do my work. Talking to other people can be a good thing you like not being shy. I used to be shy but i start talking to people and became not being as shy as I used. There are more ways that talking can be good for like building a good friendship with other people like least year. I started talking to other people this year and made a lot of new friends. And you can become best friends with the teacher it a good thing to have a good friendship with the teacher. Talking can help you with making new friends out of school. like at birthday party you can talk to people you don't even know. talking is a good skill to have because. it can help you with the real world. Like when you see some one have a bad day you come and talk to them and make them feel better then they were. my skill can be good or bad at sometime. but that my skill. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
9653A4188D80 | I think we choose our character traits and we are influenced beyond our control. I say both because sometimes we choose to be who we are without nobody telling us what to do, what to say and not forcing us to do something we don't want to do. Choosing our character traits can be something hard for some people, because some of us think that we are going to be judged by other people and some of us think that we are not going to get accepted for who we are. Me I do both sometimes I choose my character traits and sometimes i'm influenced by other people, I don't think its good to be influenced by other people because I think we should be the one's controlling our character traits at all times. But sometimes we feel forced to do something we don't wanna do or say and it's not part of our character, But we feel we have to because there maybe someone watching or it could just be pure pressure, Doing stuff we don't always do that is basically getting influenced by other people because we are doing something that we don't really want to do. This is why I say it's both we choose and we are influence.
I think you don't really choose if you control your traits or not, because some days you can be yourself and other days your kinda getting controlled, because you do what people are telling you what to do and basically your not yourself your not doing what you want to do your listing to other people. I really think theres no option I think everyone does both, one day they are themselves and some days they are not themselves because there not doing what they want to do, there kinda getting controlled in some type of way.
In conclusion I think every one does both they choose or sometimes they don't, Honestly I think everyone should be themselves and not let anyone control them. Everybody in this world should choose there own character traits but it doesnt happen because we all sometimes feel that we get influenced by some other people, Basically what i'm trying to say is be yourself and don't be someone your not. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 |
965DC6768854 | Though most people think the inactivity serve a purpose however, the people always need to doing things in their lives. All the people need to have something to do in their life. Most people in the world think an inactivity person can have in effect to other people, so the people need to always do something in their life. The people need to have more activity in their life. A activity person can have many success things can change their life and the future a new generation in their families. A person with more activity can be more successful .The inactivity is a person lazy can do not care about doing something their life so, they may be do not care about other people too.
Many people in the world does not have a job , but they do not look for it. The people feels lazy to move around looking for work and they only waste their time doing nothing. The people pass their time without a work so, they are not doing nothing for their future for that many people in the world are very poor. They can have a good future if they do not waste their times doing nothing. In many countries there are people who are very lazy for work, so they going to streets to ask other people give money to them. The people have many opportunities in their life but , they do not think about it. An inactivity person do not care about if they can have a job or not. That kind of people just think have a free times. To be a lazy person do not have any purpose in the life. Many children in the world suffer with their parents because, they do not have a job .The children with young age have to work because, their parents are very inactivity in the their jobs. The inactivity can have a effect in the children because they have to go to streets with parents ask for money to other person.
Most people in world are very lazy. Some students have inactivity in the schools .The students when they have to do a work in group, they want to the easy part of the work for that some students have problem when they become adults. Most the students are very lazy so, they want all the things easy. When the students become in adults they think all are going to be easy for them like student years. Sometimes the work is next to them, but they are so lazy for doing any work, so they only avoid the work. The people want to waste their time in easy ways like spend time in home. Sometimes the people want to find a job with easy ways to do it for that many people do not have a job. The students need to be more activity person. To be a inactivity person in young age can have a big a effect in the future. The students need to have a purpose do not have to be inactivity person.
In the world many people are unemployment, so they think that can be better for them. The people can spend more time with their families,but they not need to be lazy. They need to doing something for their country or their families. Many people says if the world have less unemployment the economic can change for a good way. The economic is very important for a future of the countries. If the world can have less inactivity person the economic can change, so the countries can have less poor people.
In conclusion, to be an inactivity person does not have a purpose in life. The people need to always do somethings for their life. If the people always do somethings, that people can change the ways how can be their future life. An activity person always are doing things with a purpose, so the person can be successful in anythings they done. If the people are an inactivity person that mean they can not have any purpose, so the people never has to be an inactivity person. The people never need to act lazy around. Any people need to act like more a activity person so, they can be more succesful in life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
9664D9C4C5F9 | NO MORE LIMITTING!
Some people believe that students should be required to take a music, a drama, or an art class. But should students be forcibly required to take a music,a drama, or an art class?
Students should not be require to take a music or art classes, and make these classes as a electives.
Dont limit they're choice
If school start to limiting classes and require to take certain classes, this is truly ineffective for everyone.
All students have rights to pick what they're interested in, and what they need. For example, If they're applying colleges and they need some specific classes and credits ,they might want to take what they're needed other than art and music class because its simply waste of time.
It's unpopular, unnecessary, and unprofitable for some students.
Not every students are artistic person and want to take a music or art class. Maybe art or music is not they're area ,according to newspaper "CNN" 's participation experiment graph, it compared to people who are interested and those who are not, and graph showed people who are not interested seems to loosing they're focus and even irritating them.
It's waste of time if they're not into it, they will eventually end up loosing interest.
There is no point of waste our precious time by doing things that we are not into it, obviously it's always privilege to take academic classes in school ,but it's not always the case. we rather do something else that are more fun and more productive for us.
It is mortal for some students especially seniors.
If school is limiting and make require to take academic classes it is mortal for some students especially seniors, those who failed one or two classes and need to make up. But because of school is limiting and make require to take academic class they couldnt graduate on time.
I strongly believe that students should not be require to take a music or art classes, and make these classes as a electives. If school make art and music and other academic classes as a elective, it will be more effective for everyone, because every students will have choice to pick what they really want or need. Even for teachers as well, teachers will be teaching students who really want to learn. it will be beneficial for both of them. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
9685DD18847A | Some students don't have an idea of what career they want to take when they enter high school. Family members and teachers expect students to know what career they want when they enter high school, so it can help them choose the classes they need. I think students should have time to choose what they want to major in.
One reason I think students should have time to think what they want to major in is; they can get tired of the career they chose or change their mind of what career to take. For example, my friend Generic_Name is in AFROTC, she has been in AFROTC for 3 years. In her Junior she decided she wanted to leave AFROTC to do something else, she wanted to do nails instead. If Generic_Name can leave AFROTC her scheduled for the next school year can change. She will have to learn how to do nails and learn the more, difficult, ways to do them as well. For this reason it will be good for students to take their time and find out what they really want to take. They have all of high school year to think about it before they entering college.
Another reason students should think about what they want to major in is, they don't know what career to take or they could have many options but can not chose one. One career could be too difficult or one could be fun but not earn has much. Students should look over the careers they want and see if it is right for them. For example, I have 3 careers I'm thinking about but can not choose one. I have 1 year to think about which one. For me photography would be the one for me as I like to take pictures of the most beautiful places in my home town. I would also like to see other parts of world, see beautiful people who live there, work with amazing people, and see what I can take a picture of. i also want to the world to know what is going on fromw the different parts of the world and not the news. i want people to see it not hear.
Some students already know what career they want to take. Most of the students are thinking which one will be good for them, and which suits them the best. It is good for students to know what career they want, but it is also good for them to think it over or think it through. As students already know what they want to do and go straight to college. Some students like to take a break and not go to college right after they leave high school. These students are taking a break to figure out what career to take, what college to go to, and save money to be able to go to college. This can help the students in many ways. In one way if the student does not like their major and think its too hard it will change major. The student will keep changing major until it finds the right for him/her. By taking a break the student can think if he/she really likes the career they have chosen.
For all of these reasons I do think it Will be good for the students to take their time on choosing a career. They don't have to have a hard time choosing one or changing the career for another one. If they don't have an idea of what career they have a lot of time. They can take a break and think very well about their options. It can help them from not changing majors when they are in college. Students taking their time for choosing careers is good for them and will help them choose the right career for them. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
96A7646236BF | I agree with him because, we all have a specific dream or mission we want to accomplish and every dream or mission have a standard end point on less you expecting something far more better than what you are having or where you are at that particular time or moment.
Taking myself as an example or personal experienced person,I had always wanted to be a model when I was kid which I still want to be, but one thing have noticed is that you can't do anything on your own without sometimes you need help from people around you. Becoming a model was my idea and something I think it will be better for me and nothing beyond that standard; was calling people for help, applying from one agency to the other but there was no help. Sometimes people even want to take advantage of that to use for their satisfaction(sexually) even though I know that is bad I still wanted to do it because of the goals I have set for myself .
But then I got to realize I have to wait for the right time to come else people will take advantage of me. If I had never mastered it wouldn't have any experienced and would have never grow because I thought it was easy.
Life haven't be easy after loosing my dad some years ago,used to have a lot of plans in the nearest future with my dad. Was planning on graduating and buying a big house for us when I find myself a good job, but since I lost him everything just shattered and i don't know what to do. Am now living with my mom and step dad so they the ones providing for me; I don't work,I can't buy personal stuff and that makes me feel bad ,it makes me feel like am not doing anything in this world. Sitting idle will never let me grow until I do something better for myself.
In my opinion we have to set a goal for ourselves at a certain point so that we won't rush or stuck in between things , and also not everybody or anybody have to master things before they take a step and things work out for them well, some even have experience from childhood. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
96CCD6C82658 | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson once wrote "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." I agree with this statement, a couple of reasons why i agree with this statement. The journy, learning new things, and the final results of what you have mastered.
First reason will be the journy. The journy will be the important part becuase its going to be the part where you will be going to grow more. The journy will teach you mastering new things therefore this brings me to my second reason the learning new things. Mastering new things will be so much help in the future. You will be able to master new things along the way on your journy to growing up more. You can never stop growing omn something you want to master. My last and final reason will be the ending. The ending is the part where you have already mastered all the new things you wanted to master on your journy. You will be able to use it any where you go, any where you are at, and with anybody.
As the ending result i totally agree with the Author Ralph Waldo Emerson about "unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will not grow." You have to still keep on mastering new things in order for you to grow more. Those are my three reasons why i agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson's statement. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
96F4AB949807 | First I will like to change lunch manu I would said 3 time every week I will let you know the riason why I will change the manu because no everyone like to eat the same food every day for example I know many people who they don not eat because is bored be eating the same food every they and I know many people the they better have food from home because something is better lik anyway this is my oppinionds about that second somethingI some student like to trie something new like different food that is the other reasons why I would like to make they trie new food every week maybe they get more exite to came at school maybe that can by one of my other opiinion but look if they see the in cafeteria they get more food maybe they came school every day fanally we can plovate with more food this is my oppion about this discusion we have to maybe exite the studens to have more open window to by at school and healthier manu that me is if is helthy we have to provate fruts too | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
9702AD260172 | In this essay I will talk about how courses and daily life in high school influence the students to guide them and to think in a specific career. When students enter at high school are likely to get interest in anything and I believe their great skills they can show at high school, the support from their parents and think about their own future, is a good idea for students commit to a specific career at young age.
The great skills that a student can show in any course say a lot. There are many students that have differents roles inside the high school. Some of the roles they play are in different environments. There are students that really like Fine Arts, Music Band, Chorus, Act, etc. However, students usually get interest to show skills in differents areas to be a professional like Masters, Lawyers, Bachelors, Doctors, etc. Actually, these careers are more convenient to students but also they need support.
The most students gain total support by their parents and is a big priviledge. Nowdays, there are students that leave the school because they do not have enough support from their parents and this is a awful situation into the society.
Students should be supported to do their job as students and not be concerned about any other stuff beside school. Parents have not to be just the supporters. All the school staff can also support students. The support is very import into society because students are future of the entire wolrd and I know we can make a change at worlwild.
Think in a great and awesome future for us and new generation is amazing. For youngers students is easy to figure out what is necessary and what not. That's why the world needs brilliant minds and leave a legacy that can make bigger differences. More culture, respect to the Rights, more opportunities of jobs, more health to everyone, feed to everyone, and a health and wealthy world are some needs students and people wish to live in good environment to everyone.
In conclusion, students are guided and helped to think in a specific carrer by influnces like cources and lifetime in and out of the high school. The skills that a student can shows is simply awesome, they have great imagination. The support for students is in our hands, students have to be supported. The most important area is focus in their future as the best, doing big differences and doing a legacy. To be young is awesome. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
9715AAF5B952 | Have you thought about your first impression of someone and did it change or not? because our first impression are possible to change when you are making new friends at a new school and when you go to an interview for job.
First, first impression are possible to change when you are making new friends at new school because people can look at you by the way you are quite, shy, and serious. But once they start to get to know you they start realizing that you are talkative, loud, and fun to hangout with. Their first impression of you starts to change. For example, when I met Generic_Name I thought she was ignorant, rude, and selfish but when I started to hangout with her I noticed that she was a sweet and caring girl. And we became really good friends even my first impression of her from the beginning changed.
Second, first impression are possible to change when you go to an interview at work because when you arrive at the interview it may seem that don't have the courage to work by the way you act. Meanwhile those impressions start to change because they notice that you actually want to work and you want to put an effort on the job. For example, When I went to an interview for a job the manager thought that I didn't actually wanted to work and that I wouldn't take it serious just by the way I look. Later on he realized that I actually wanted the job even that I would take it serious. In other hand some people think that by the way I talk or my face impression, people think that I won't get the job because I would not take it serious but they are wrong because once they start to get to know me. They start realizing that I actually want the job.
In conclusion, first impression are actually possible to change when people are making new friends at school and when you get an interview for job because we need to get to know each other better, instead of letting our first impressions be right. So don't judge a book by it's cover! | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
97167C9DC677 | Do people accomplish more if they are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose?. In activity does serve a purpose by showing maturity; however, people accomplish more if we are doing something. People accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows they are striving for excellence, it shows determination, and it shows progress towards their goals.
Firstly,people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows they are striving for excellence. In a everybody lives or in today's era, everyone wants to achieve greatness, but by achieving greatness people often or need to start from the bottom of their league or what I like to call "THE CASTLE STANDARD". In The Castle Standard each have their own class their, the bottom league is the beginner class, the middle is the amateur class, and the highest class is The Hall of Fame class AKA HOFC. Each person start from the bottom to get to the top, by starting from the bottom they can show higher authorities what they are capable off. For example, there was a movie called The Pursue of Happiness, the people in the movie was Will Smith and his son. The movie was about how a man, who worked at a business company as a mere employee, he and his son was kicked out of the apartment and they were homeless, they were trying to find a new home, so they started to live in a homeless shelter, but that didnt stop Will Smith from going to work. He went to work even though he was homeless. They authorities he worked with knew his situation, and they knew his dedication to his dedication to the company,so they decided to make him CEO of the company. In the end he got higher paid he was of the greatest CEO in the company and he was able to get a new house for him and his son. Furthermore people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows they are striving for excellence.
Secondly, people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows determination. People often shows determination, once they set their mind doing something they personally want to achieve or accomplish. In people mindset have something they want like, saving up money to buy an expensive item or staying on task to get a promotion at your work place. Determination is also one of the characteristics of positive attitude that leads people a success in life. There also shows determination when they are trying to reach their goals in what they want to become in their future. For example, the movie I used in the first paragraph The Pursue of Happiness. Will smith even though he had a situation which he was homeless, he had job at the company and he was in a huge situation with the company. The situation was they wanted to fire him to give him time to set his life or plan his life with his son, since he was homeless and they are living in the homeless shelter. He showed determination to the job and gave them a huge reason why the should keep him at the company. because he solved the companies huge problem which almost led the company to bankrupt, so the authorities decided to keep him in the company and give him promotion and a huge check to be able to sustain his daily life with his son. I believe that people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows determination.
Lastly, people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows progress towards their goals. In everyone life has goal, there is no human being in this Earth who doesnt have a goal. The goal can start from High school or middle school or somewhere were people have been brought out by their culture. In every goal there is a purpose why that person is setting that goal, maybe it could be huge reason like impressing your family or following your idol and so on, but by setting your goals people often need to plan how they can achieve that goal. For example, in TC Williams High School my goal is to join the Airforce, but by doing that I needed to take specific subjects that can help me or give me the experience towards my goal. I had to take Aerospace, JROTC, physics, and this was kind of personal ,but I had to take PE/Fitness for a physic body structure, so that I wont be weak,fat or plumply when I join the Airforce. So I had to take step by step or take my time to accomplish my goal. Furthermore, people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows progress towards their goals.
In conclusion, people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows they are striving for excellence, it shows determination, and it shows progress towards their goals. Also by stating you rmind on what you want to do people can make remarkable or impossible things that might shocked the world. I think the right thing to do is for people to accomplish more if they have set their mind on something extraordinary or even more enhance. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
9725E454418F | Inteoduction, I planned my paper befoer writing. there are maney school in world. to my paper capturess the reader's attention. the option for students.
The have distance to learn. The school is an importand in live, you do not delay to the classes. We do benefit from being, because we do not know how to, writering, spelleing it is very important and reading . Also we have serves at school. All people need education. Sam students they do in online, sam in night and daly. To be indebend students.
In my convenient for me, I learn write, read and speek. When I took my certificate from high school. and then I look for job, I like working to schools and goverment office. I want to help my family and people. when they need.
Conclusion, with pleasure, I talking about school. The school is necessarily and beast place in world. is that savety. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
972782BCDEA4 | According to Emerson's statement and what he wrote, which is about to be myself in a world would make me something else and it will be the greatest accomplishment. I am totally agree with his statement because there are many thing I can do well. Also, I can show to the world that being myself would make me see that I can do more than I think, I can develop many good idea about life and how to build my future making good choices, which ones will make me feel good about what I am accomplishment.
One reason why I am agree with this statement is because being myself make me feel confident about what I am doing and how I can make it better. For example, I like the way I am and being happy, I like to be a person with positive thoughts. I like to demonstrate people that I can do good and make them feel proud of me of all the thing I can accomplish by my own. It will make me get really good experiences in life which will help me to be an unique person and honest with myself.
Second reason why I am agree with Emerson's statement is because when I be myself I feel comfortable with me, I can demonstrate that being myself I can make good choices to be a better in the world, I can show many things which I would feel proud of. For example, I like to be myself when I have to present any project at school or at my job, I feel good to be myself and that way I explain it, I am confident with what I am presenting. It makes me feel honest to myself and everyone else.
Another reason why I am agree with this statement is because being myself I can develop many good ideas and I can share those ideas with everyone, I can do a good job and accomplish all what I want. For example, when I talk with somebody, I like to speak with the trust and share what I think. I like to do my job being myself because that way I would see how I am doing and what do I have to do better.
In conclusion, being myself is a good way to see what I am good in and how I can get experiences in many different thing, I can learn more about the world and learn more about me. It would make me see the world in a different way which one will help me to do the right things and also it would make be a strong person in this world. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
9735E542665C | Imagine having less day of school, students would be happy and could make their education simple. Some films have alredy adopted a four day work week, but they will work ten hours a day. Should school do the same thing by extending the school day and have four days of school? I believe that extending the school day and having four day of school could affect students by; getting them tired and they coud no longer in school.
To begin with, it has been said that students are tired in school because they have seven hours of school everyday . Imagine giving them nine hours of school, they could get tired quick and have stress. To illustrate, a student woke up at 6:30am to prepare to go to school, he will start the school at 8:00am and he will be finish at 5:00pm. After school the student will got home tired, he will jus eat dinner and go sleep. As you can see,
students could not have time to play and do their homework. If school extend the school day, students could be just tired all the time. in conclusion, students are not slaves, they need time to play and do their homework.
In addition, extending the school day for students and have four days of school for them, this could make them not going to school. Another example, imagine a high school student have to finish school at 5:00pm knowing kids nowadays they don't like school that much. This could be an obstacle for this high school student and he will decided to not going to school anymore because he will feel a long day of school. As you can see, students could be absent in school if they extend the school day, and this could be a big probem for the community and for the country.
Yet some people argue that extending the school day and having four day of school, could make the students more intelligent. It is tue that giving extended time to students and give them only four days of school, could make them smarter. But they will not longer like school because they will feel tired and they will not going to school anymore. And this could be a huge problem for students and schools
In conclusion, schools should not allow to have four days of school and extending two hours more because this could affect students by; getting them tired and they could not longer in school. Let's make students feel comfortable in school, but not make them feel slaves. Students needs time with friends and family. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
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