text_id
stringlengths 12
12
| full_text
stringlengths 76
6.04k
| cohesion
float64 1
5
| syntax
float64 1
5
| vocabulary
float64 1
5
| phraseology
float64 1
5
| grammar
float64 1
5
| conventions
float64 1
5
|
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
80EF60E3EA04 | One school activity that kids enjoy are field trips because it provides them a brake from school work and it gives them a opportunity to explore their surroundings. Teachers and students often get tired of being at one place everyday. Students are also constantly working and the only break they have is lunch and electives. The teachers also get brakes but they have their phones on them all day. Teachers and staff may feel stressed planing the trips but in the end i think they enjoy it just as much as the students.
Middle school is a stressful time. Students have to complete lots of work that isnt needed. They also have packets of homework to complete and the packets are usually due the next day. Teachers just hand out papers and papers of homework without thinking about it. meanwhile, students are trying to study for important stuff like tests,sols or exams. I try to complete all the work i have but it is hard when all the teachers are saying,'my work is more important.' We are constantly reviewing, working or studying and sometimes it's just too much. This is why we want to go on field trips or go outside more often.
Schools are not the most funnest place to be. Many schools, like Generic_School, are extremely stuffy and dirty. Being in a building that's stuffy all day makes many people annoyed. Everyday students asks to go outside. However, the teachers and staff always say no because the administrators wont allow it. My school has a outside siting area in the middle of the school but nobody gets to sit outside. Students often look forward to the end of the day or field trips because it gives them air and a chance to breath. Being outside or in a new location gives students the chance to get to know their surroundings. however, being controlled and forced to stay in one place makes them feel like prisoners. This is why students love field trips and new outdoor places.
In conclusion, the most enjoyed activity in schools are field trips because it gives them a breather and it gives them the opportunity to explore. Students and teachers should not have to be in a place like prison. I think there should be more field trips not just two a year. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
80F044EBC71B | I chose the lesson math for elementary school because. It can help out a lot,it makes number more easier when going on to middle school,it can make your intelligent bigger. When knowing your numbers or knowing how to do math it makes math seem really easy. When moving on later in life you dont have to keep on struggling because you will already know how to overcome prices because you been practicing math all your life. It pays off if you keep on doing math and practicing it over and over. When moving on to middle school or high school you have to already know your steps math setups or your going to have a hard time in middle school and high school. Plus you will have good grades in math all the time and your test score will be good as well. I will always do math because i know later in life math will be every where you go and plus learning this in a young age will help you out a lot and it make a really smart person If you really keep on. Math will be every where you go and sometimes you have to do math when your in the store, gas station, when your buying stuff online,
even when your buying a gift for someone. Learning how to do math will help out a lot. I know sometimes it will get boring or you will get bored of it but just knowing how to do math it will help you and save your life in college. Because in college your going to see some pretty big numbers and math problems. Math will be important in so many ways because in life your going to use a lot of math so its better learning it when your young. So then you dont have to worry about it so much later on in life. This is why math is an important lesson for elementary students. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
80F9E6D6503C | do you think that these classes should be electives or a core class?.I say that it should be an elecitve because some peole are taking it as electives and so they cahn graduate on time thats why i say they should make theses classes go for elecitives and kids will like more drama and art and or music classes. more than core classes cause core classses are required for gradutaion and the elecitves are for fun and i think that the school should give these classes as an elecitve because it will be fun to learn new things and explore what you would be good at.
some people may believe that you should take a music class,or art class,or drama class however; i believe That those classes should be electives cause their less important then the core classes. but at the same time it would be fun to have one of those classes. and so you expiernce something new. and you get to meet new and differnt people and thats why it should be an elective. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 1.5 |
81218F777A2F | Energy should be conserve more because alot of people do not use alot of these particular items half of the time. It is better to save energy rather than waste. Like for eample, we use light everyday to see things around us so that we do not trip or bump into things. If not we wouldnt be able to see things near us. At times we take advantage way too much. Were wasting alot of light source that we hardly ever use at times. Therefor, were wasting alot of energy that we should not be wasting. Alot of people tend to go out to places to run some errands and leave there lights on for no reason or just keep the light on for no particular reason. The best way to save energy would be to turn off the light before you go out and not just leave it on because your just making your bills go up. When you do not even use it half of the time. It would help alot and keep you from wasting alot of money.
Second reason, would be us not recyling things that we drink or eat. We tend to just throw it in the trash instead of the recyling bin. Even in schools they have recyling bins but us people do not pay attention to it because it is nowhere to be seen. It would be better if the recycling bin was to be seen. I feel like people would use it and recycle more. Also will save resources that can be cleaned and used again. Rather than just using more products to make the particular object. Schools and other places should make an improvement and stop using alotof energy and resources and make it easier for the resources that are being used. Us people should recycle more and save light source and actually help the world be a better place and keep it clean and simple. If we were able to do that it would make everything else easier.
Overall, schools should not be extending it for two more hours. Reasons why is because teachers tend to use alot of paper to give students to work on. Most of the times teachers would not use front and back of the paper. They would always do work on seprate pices of papers and give them to the students. To make things easier for them would be to use front and back because there not using alot of paper. So that it can be graded on and be thrown out by the students. Students never like to keep paper with them when teachers grade them after. So alot of paper is going to waste for no reason. Teachers should consider of teaching students with technology and doing work on there rather then using alot of paper. Technology would help because trees would not be going to waste and harm the things around there surrounding just to make paper out of it. Alot of trees would be save and have alot of resources still. People should just think about the goods thing and the bad things about it. Like is it worth wasting all these resources rather than using technology.
There is advantages and disadvantages of extending school for two hours. The advantage would be students being able to learn more and have more time spent with their peers and teachers. Students would have more time to do work rather than doing it at home and struggling. It is better for them not to waste time and get the help they need. But, at the same time the teacher is giving them work which is bad in the way but good also . The work that is being given to them is not bad but the resources that makes is because of how it is made. Eventually, schools should just use technology and do all the work there. Students would be able to access it easier and teachers would not have to worry about the students losing work or having problems. Students would also be more entertain because all they like to do or be on is technology and it would help the teachers alot.
Overall this point, teachers or not just them should consider of managing the time they use on things that use alot of energy. It would make the world a better place and more healthier. Trees would not have to be cut down alot and affecting their surroundings. Basically would not cause pollution in the air and hurt things around it like for example animals . It is important to save energy an keep the world safe. Schools should just do everthing on computers and make things easier. Rather than wasting alot of materials for no good reasons. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
81306D4B4CC1 | You know what I want to accomplish? I
want to be a soccer player. I want to play for my own country and I want to be recognized when I play soccer. It would be really fun to play,train,play championships and play in big events like the World Cup.
I want to play soccer for Mexico because Mexico is a good team and they have good tactics on how to play the game more inffiencetly and they have good strategies. I want to represent my country when I play because I am representing myself and to the people in Mexico. The team I want to play for have many games such as friendly games. Friendly games is a game of fun not to compete but to have fun.
If we want to get better we have to practice and after practice we want to play games. We want to practice to get better and stronger. In practice we learn things that we have no idea what to do or we want to learn about it. After practice we want to get into games and play. We play to learn so that if we lose we get to see where we made our mistakes. We learn those mistakes by learning it so that it won't happen again.
Sometimes we don't just play friendly games. We play championships to win trophies. We play in knock out stages which if we win, we go to the next round and if we lose we get knocked out of the championship. We work hard to get trophies. Every game we play in that is a part of championship wise we compete and work very hard to win this trophy and we try our best to win.
Every four years we play in a big event called the World Cup and we compete to earn a trophy that is made out of all gold. We have to qualify to enter so we have to play a game to enter. If we win we get into the World Cup, but if we lose we don't get to play. Sometimes we play in leagues and we have to be first in the stage to get the trophies. We sometimes win but other times we don't. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
8149E792E505 | Some schools offer programs for students graduate in three years? students needs to go school for learn and be success in life in high school normally is four years but some schools give to students some programs for to graduate in three years. a lot people think four years on school is good because in that years you can take to much classes. I disagree with this statement all students need four years in high school for know what to do in the future and they do not have any problem in college
Students graduate in three years is not good because in four years you can learn more about that career you prefer to be in the future, you can take more opportunities for to be successful people think that is good because you can graduate one year early but some times is much better continues in high school for prepare yourself. in four years you take more classes and learning about it. For example student wants to graduate and wants to be a mechanic he needs to keep going in high school for four years he learn about that career he wants and another subjects.
Some people they do not like the idea for to graduate early because they do not think that is prepare for to go to college. College is a serious thing so all people need to prepare for to go there ,when you go to the college you have a idea that difficult be for you but not impossible . you need to pass all your classes in college but for that you need to study and try your best in high school that is the way for a good student .
Some people prefer graduate one year early , they has reasons, they wants to finish the career for to help the family or some people just finish the high school and go to work. is probably is the bigger reason why some people choose that opinion. for me both reason is good because you need to stay in school for to be successful and understand why some persons wants to graduate early they wants to help his/her family so both options that is very good.
Four years in high school is the bets option can you choose because you learn more, study more, and prepare more , for me that is the good way for to successful in life. Probably be more hard but you can do it, you need to try the best do yo have for in the future you will be a good person with a good job and can help your family. when help your family you are a good person and recognize that job was your parents did for you so keep going and do it a 4 years in high school this is good for success in life . | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 |
814EE41F6FF3 | What do you prefer, keep eating food that do not help you or food that is good for your body? Eat healthier food make your body stronger and helps you to be in good form. I think a change of the lunch menu, could be a good idea.
In my soccer team, I have practice everyday, after school. Sometimes
I don't feel good to practice,
because the food was not heath to my body or it wasn't enough. My team mates told me that they bring their own food because the lunch menu of the school do not like them, and they are tired to eat the same food every single day
Some students have to go out to buy healthier food.
Another reason why the lunch menu should be change is because an healthier lunch, keeps you awake and with energy. Some student need to eat health because they are in school teams. Also, sometimes you feel tired when you are studying. you feel that your stomach hurts and feel that something is wrong with your body, you feel sleepy, sometimes hungry, and you can not concentrate in the class. For example, I have Personal Fitness on my last period, when I eat my regular lunch menu, I feel tired and sometimes I don't want to do anything because I feel my body too heavy. My doctor, told me that I have to eat healthier. Since, when you are growing up, your body needs food that help it.
A change of the school menu could be beneficial for all of us. An healthy body, stronger, and with good aptitude. Our health, depends on all of you. Let's make a change, for the future of all our children. Let know to the principal of all the benefits that This change will bring. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
81674F80999A | why should peopel make their own decisions? Each person has the right to make his/her own decisions. Each person has different ideas about what is important and what makes them feel best. Some people believe by making their own decisions. Others peopel believe to making your own decisions you have to have guidance that's means is not helpful for those peopel who want guidance because when some one help you to make your decisions for that time you can, but that person it's not help you for ever, so you have to practice to make your own decision. I believe peopel have to make their own decisions, here is some decisions peopel can make, decision of marriage, moving place to place, and choiseing a bad and good thing in your life.
First, some peopel think that making your own decisions is the best way to bo what ever you want in your life. Indeed, you can make your own decisions to do what ever you want. peoples make decision to married. Marriage is the most important thing for many peopel in this world. Having marriage is help you to have a better life. Because when you have wife you know you are taking big responsibilty for your self and for your family. Having family is good, but you have to work a lot to keep your family save. Having marriage is help you to make many kind of decisions. For exampel, if you are alcoholest you gonna make decision to quit alcohol because you have family.
As you can see, this is not the only thing making your own decision can do.
Also, making your own decisions helps you to move place to place. Some peopel the don't have confidence to make his/her decisions, because they don't believe by making their own decision. Moving place to place it's not really easy, because you have to have a plan which means decision before you start moving place to place, because you don't know what to do, so make your own decision to do what ever you want. Some peopel enjoy by moving place to place because moving place to place is help you to find a new things and to see how this world look like. As a person i really enjoy by traveing place to place because it's gonna help you to enjoy ,meet a new peopel, and new place it'a a lots fun. In addition, making your own decisions help you to have a confidence. However, making your own decision is definitly a best way to do what ever you want.
Finally, making your own decisions is helps you to separate dad and good things in your life. In this world there is many kidn of problems is going come in your way. In this condition you have to know which one is good which one is bad which means you have to make your own decision to make your life esay. Some peopel they don't know what to do when something happen in their life. Every time you have to have a decision and choices for every sengle things in your life. This is a few decisions peopel can make it, we can make more than this decisions.
In short, making your own decisions is very helpful and best way to have esay and better life . Some peopel make decision of marriage. making decision for marriage is one of the bigest decision you can do in your life time. Also, making your own decision is the right peopel got by constitution and naturally. The others thing peopel can do is moving palce to place and decisions of know a good and bad things. Making you own decision is helps you, your family, and other peopel around you. This three different thigs peopel can do by making his/her own decision. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
816FC4D1628F | Busch Gardens is one place that I would like to visit. I think it is the perfect place where I should go. I want to go there because it is fun, all the rides, and I had never visit their before.
First of all, it is fun to go Busch Gardens. I heard that their are some good games that I can enjoy. My friends told me that are a lot of good shops for shopping. If I ever go their I would spend all my savings on buying games and toys. The best thing in their is I can spend time with my family.
Next, I would love to try all the rides. The first thing I would like to do in there is to ride the biggest roller coaster. I would love to try every single ride that is in their. Those rides are probably fun than any other thing. Then I would get in the horror house and scare my sister. Afterward, I would get in that maze and try to solve it.
Finally, the last reason is it is the place that I never visit before. I really want to go there because I just heard about it from my friends and other peoples. I think it is a good place to visit with my family. All my friends always recommend me to go their. They said that it is a great place for me to visit in the world.
To sum up, I would like to visit Busch Gardens because it is fun, all the rides, and it is a place that I never visit before. I think Busch Gardens is a magical place to visit. I would love to go there. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
81946793B89A | Have you always wondered how your parents accomplished what they have for your future, How famous people like for example singers and world wide company's became so influential to the world. Well Thomas Jefferson once wrote "Determine never to be idle..It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." Now when you think about it, is it beneficial if your always doing something or do you think inactivity also serves a purpose?
In my point of view I have to agree on what Thomas Jefferson has stated. You can't accomplish something without working for it and I will be listing examples on why I believe in a strong way that if you keep doing something you'll be able to accomplish what you want.
My number one example is my parents, Of course its unthinkable that your parents want you to have the best future that you can get but have you ever asked on how they got to this point in life. My parents are heroes for me in a lot of ways but the most important one is how they never stay idle. they work nonstop to make sure my future is bright. They even left their home country so I can have a better life here, They never stayed idle even until this point and they've gotten pretty far.
Second example would be singers, In this day in age believe it or not singers have great influence in this world. That's because a lot of singers known to man never stopped singing or dancing. They always worked hard to become the number one or wanting to be someone in general that people would look up to. Like Micheal Jackson, Even when he sadly died to this day people still praise him for what he made in the pop music world. Or Snoop Dog and his ability to rap really fast which people gave him the title of rap god. There's a lot more people that have changed the world because of music but I think they had the highest impact.
Now the last example is company's and their founders per say. Car company's, or company's in general had or have someone who started it all, One big example would be Ellon Musk and his Tesla car company. After he made Tesla the best electronic car company to date he decided to keep moving forward with his plan to go all green. His made commuter vehicle and now his focusing on diesel trucks so there can be less pollution in the air and more safety for the drives. His making a lot of impacts in the world because his not just standing around waiting for someone else do it for him. I think I've said enough and stand by my opinion that if you are doing something you will accomplish what your wanting in the future like how this other people have just like Thomas Jefferson wrote. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
81B000BCC5B3 | Succes come from failure without loss enthusiasm. Success does not come as a easy as a it sounds, succes comes from har work and failures.
Succes is not somethig everyone can reach specally without fails and enthusiams. Fail mades people stay down but people decide if yhey want to be down or work harder until they success.
Cristiano Ronaldo is one of the best soccer playes in all the world. When he begins his soccer correar ,he was seen as a normal soccer player, he fail some many times. There were soccer games when he did not score any goals or his team loss. His enthusiasm made him work harder and harder. Hard work made him the person who he is now, he is considered by so many people the best soccer player of all the history but is wasen't easy, fails made him work harder in order to success in his correar after 15 years he keep working hard to be succefully in life.
Enthusiam made people work harder until they reach succes. Enthusiam is the feeling that makes people go foward even they fail multiple times. When people have the type motivation fail is just a symple word becuase most of the people want to keep trying until they finally succes in life.
My mom is a good example , a few months ago she was trying to get her Driver Licence Permit. In order to get it she had to took a test that consist about all the rules in the road. She fail the first time, she was sad beucause she could not get her permit but she had a big motivation inside her that impulsed her to go and retake the test again. She fail the test twice , she never give up she worked hard to pass the test. She did not tooked the test 3 or 4 times, she toked 5 times until she finally passed the test and she got her permit, months later she go her Driver license. She fail so many times but she never give up. When you want to succes does not matter how many times you fail, you most get up work hard until you succes . As you can see, succes consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
81B5D8CBA063 | The limitation of human contacted due to the use of technology has a negative effect on people. It prevents the young generation of today basis social skills. It allows bulling on the internet. It also allows trolling on the internet.
First, Technology interferes with student social skills. For example, the student walks into the class room they are in their phones 24/7 of the day. In the class room the students are on the computers playing video games instead of interacting with one another. In a way people are trapped in their own world it stops people from learning about them self and others.
Second, someone can post a video to make a person feel bad about them self attempt suicide. Or a person can post a picture where their drunk and they post it on Facebook and tag them on it and on Instagram. I saw a video on YouTube.
A girl from Australia is getting bullied online, and at school also on the intent and her family had to move at lest 3 time because of this issue.
Lastly charting rooms where you can meet serial killers. fake news post on Twitter spreading rumors for an example
Michelle Obama is running for president in 2020.
The limitation, First, it percent the young generation basis social skills. Secondly it allows bulling on the internet. Lastly it also allows trolling on the internet. In my opinion we should turn off our phones for at lest 1 to 2 day and going out to eat with our friends with out our phones. In school teachers should wait for students out side the door with a box so they can't use their phones during class. So on bulling last longer and that goes beyond the internet so in conclusion should be more stricter, technology limits people talking about their issues. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
81B7A7CB8829 | A man named Albert Schweitzer once said, "Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing". In this case setting an example by your own behavior is the best way to influence others. For example, younger people look up to those who have struggled like they have and whom came from broke down homes and had succeeded through out their way. People are also influenced by those who have been into sports and who started in the struggle just like they've had, who later became the best. Showing good actions lead people to persuing you and your examples, which later leads them to the right path.
When Albert speaks of an example influencing others many ideas come to mind, one of which was how people who grew up in broke homes and succeeded with their life have had a huge affect on the youth. These people who are known for their success have gone through struggle and hard bottom rock moments. Although through out their journey people may have put them down, they still try their best in being a good example for others and the generation after them. People like this have gone to school and have worked hard in getting good grades to persue what they wanted to major in. They have gone through many obsticules to do what they love and see potential in. Leaders like these have worked their best to do what they want, which leads to having an amazing job with a great career.
Although many people look up to those who came from rock bottom, they also look up to those who are well known for their athleticism. As we may know football, basketball, wrestlers, soccer, ect. are sports that are well heard of through out different countries. These sports have not just helped people out with their physical apperiances but have also helped them out mentaly. For example, for those who have started from not knowing the sport and who were told that they weren't good enough didn't just give up because they were told so, instead it pushed them into getting better. For those who have tried the sport know that when you join a team you later find love for the sport and want to get better. Well known players have trained and worked hard everyday to be where they are today. They've taken risk and tried their best in their games or matches, they've given their all to be noticed by college coaches, or even scouts.
However, both doing great in school and being a great athlete have been known for being a example in influencing others. These two however different but very similar examples both persuade others in; working hard and trying their best. They influence people that you have to never give up in what you believe in or in what you hope to persue in life. They make you mentaly stronger and challange you in becoming the person who you soon hope to be. In conclusion, setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence other people. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
81D266D94D6D | Do we get astonished when people behaviors change over time? This makes us surprised and wonder because of their first impressions to us. I disagree that, first impressions are almost impossible to change. People changes all the time just like how the world moves every second. First impressions are possible to change. A behavior is a conduct of oneself in a particular way. A person's character is similar to how a pregnancy grows. When a woman is pregnant, you may be unable to tell but as times goes on, it is definitely going to show.
People hide their true and real behaviors to get what they need or want.
In today's world, struggles and difficulties are playing a very huge role in modern societies. Needs are the most crucial things in life. Some examples of needs are shelter, clothes and foods. We need all these to survive in life and we are going to lack something necessary, desirable or useful when we have no one to provide all those needs. So a person can act in a good way when you meet them for the first time because they just want to accomplish some goals. Last time, I was watching a Ghanaian movie with my family. In the movie, a man named Mr. Bright was very poor. He couldn't cater for his wife and three daughters so, he decided to deceive every rich or wealthy woman he meets the first time. His first impressions to them was to act and brag as a wealthy man who travels to foreign countries to hoax the women and get some money to cater for his family. You see how poverty makes a person behaves? So first impressions are possible to change because some factors affect humans all the time.
Sometimes relationship issues and depressions makes people behaviors change.
Marriage is a union between two people in which no one can separate that. No one gets married to his or her nemesis so bad pressures from our partners affect our characters. Depression makes people sad, causes difficulty in thinking and concentrating. Two years ago, I met a girl called Generic_Name. She was so isolated and sad. I decide to ask what was going on. Immediately I began to talk, she shouted as if I was a monster but later on I realized she was being bullied by some guys in our school. So the counselors helped her out and we became very close friends. I realized she was very respectful, kind and good. So how we see people for the first time doesn't mean that is how they are. People change all the time.
Peer pressures and bad friends make people characters change to a different level.
You will meet a person who was respectful for the first time but later on, you will find the same person talking back and arguing with their teachers in a very bad way. Bad friends are the worst thing in life. They can affect your future and perspectives. A girl who was very shy to talk in my class became the most disrespectful student in our class all because she joined some five bad girls in our school and after that, she decide to live the life she wants which was very bad. Our teachers know the road to success so they have to be respected and treated in a very nice way. No teacher wants his or her students to fail and every teacher wants to be awarded by the good efforts of their students. First impressions are possible to change all the time.
"Every coin has two faces" so, we must deal with people in a very pleasant, patience and respectful way. A person may be good at the first time but changes later whiles a person may be bad at the first time but changes later because some factors like needs, depressions and poverty are affecting them. How a person behaves the first time you meet them may change all the time. And if we understands how the world is moving every seconds we all going to get peace! | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 5 | 3.5 | 5 |
81FB30DE2618 | To Whom It May Concern, I heard that you are looking for a employee who is responsible, hard-working, and has experience on a job. It would be my pleasure to work for you. I have a little bit of experience; I'm responsible, respectful, and hard-working.
I have a bit of experiences working. I've worked with my mom cleaning houses,hotels, buildings and on multimedia. I also know two languages; Spanish and English. It may take me time understand the routines in the job; but it's not impossible. Once it's in my head what to do and how you want me to work, I won't forget. No one is born knowing things, people have to teach other persons on how to do things right so they can teach others. You learn from your mistakes.
I should be hire for the job, I am perfect for the job. You won't hear any complains about me. You won't regret choosing me.
Thank you for taking your wonderful time to read this, have a blessing day.
Sincerely,
Generic_Name | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
82294A32E3E3 | I believe that people whom value their self, should be guide for a person who they admire, so they can look at them like a great example to follow and hopefully one day be like them or better.
People always make mistakes even though when some times we don't admit it, no matter how good we are on something people always need help we can not always do things by our own. we always require someone to tell us that we are doing wrong .
Even in some circunstance we need to grow up and believe and our self, that we have the capacity like everyone else, to make our dreams comes true even when things goes wrong, that does not mean anything is just a challenge that we need pass to make us strongers.
However, just for being clear doing things by your own is fine, but if we have the incredible disponibility to have someone always there for you who you trust in. I think is the safe way to go because todays days those person whom use to give you advice and support you rarely appear, so do the best person you can and remember ask for help is just an option to help you out and improve the best of you. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
822F6C3B3C03 | I agree with Thomas Jefferson quote,"Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." because yes we may always be doing something but we never really put in mind what we really are going to do.
One way to be able to accomplish things is if you have a goal set. If you set a goal that means you are going to want to achieve it. Prove others that you can do it and that nothing can stop you from doing it. Always give it your best, never think negative because if you think negative then you're never going to accomplish anything in life. Prove to yourself that you can also try new things and that can help you a lot.
Always be confident in yourself no matter what. Always put in mind that you can do whatever you want to do. For example, if you have to mow the lawn but you're in your bedroom laying down looking out the window, the lawn isn't going to mow itself because it needs someone to move it around. Trying new things doesnt hurt at least trying for quite some time and it also benefits you because you're doing something for your own good.
Never use laziness as an excuse to not do anything. If you always say i'm tired then you're never going to do anything, you're just giving up on yourself.
For example, if you hate being home all day doing nothing, then go out go find what you can do because if you try new things you'll end up liking it. If you're an active person you'll accomplish way more than expected because you're going to be moving around and getting out you're comfort zone. Helping others also can be a way in accomplishing more than just sitting there because you're talking to someone or showing someone how to do something. Helping the community in many different ways can also be a good thing but not just for you but the community, because you're going out and helping. Doing and trying new things motivates you to keep doing more.
I strongly do believe that if you're doing something that you put your mind to, then you're always going to accomplish more than expected. If you sit down and say you're going to do something you'll never do it because you're just sitting down. Your words are way different than your actions. To be able to do something you have to get up from the couch and do it without having to think so hard about it. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
824896E8F91B | IT will help they can be friends, like they tell something about them self or they will fight either like some older students make fun of the younger kids that will be a problem to me this how it will go down the younger kids start fighting back and then it will be a war zone of fight older vs younger. Their is no reason what will their reaction be to me back in the day , they didn't know what the older students and younger students react i bet they pray for the older students and younger students to get along on the first day of school, to see their reaction. What i think is it will be normal the effects like they will get use to it and they will mine they old busness plus to me they will say we gonna have to treat the younger students the same like everybody else . The older students have to assist the younger students, to do service hours or get credit on service and to do more and more service hours. The older students are having bad grades in classes , their teacher will get a student who is really smart to be the older student twoder. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
82618B162AAC | I don't think its fair to change the policy.
What if the students were close to have an a grade or b ? We all are trying are best and for you gust to come and change the policy. students are even going to have worse grades. Because them thinking that they could only be in a sport if they have an a or b . And them trying there best to bring grades up and have more points! ITS NOT fair.
I say you just leave the things the way it is! Kids are going to do better in school and bring there grades up. But if you just come and take those sports away trust me its not going to be so good at all! Guys are going to argue about soccer and foot ball. Girls are going to argue about there sports and there not going like it.
Leave everything the way you think is best but there not going to like it and the scores are going to down. And your not going to like the way everything is going to be. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
82722CEBCAB3 | When the entire class need to make a project in groups, but your group work more than the rest of the class do you think it's fair if the teacher give a praising to the entire class? When I think about praising student work, I think in: hard work, effort, patience, and a consistent student. I agree with the self-esteem come from praise. Also praising students help to built self-steam, but you only can praising when the student make your best effort.
For example; one student go to the bed at three in the morning and sleep only three hours making his project and checking all the project make sure is complete, but other student go to the bed at nine and sleep all night and don't worry about his project. Some students are more lazy than the others. The best decision the teacher can make is recognize the student who really make the best work and effort.
However, some people believe that praise given for deficient work undermines learning by lowering standards. The teacher recognize student's work maybe work more hard in the next project or homework. If the teacher built a self-esteem praising students must be self-confident in order to learn. They believe teachers need recognize all student's work not only some students.
In conclusion the teachers only need recognize student's work when the students really make a good work, best effort and this way the teachers can help to built self-esteem and motivate the student work hard in all the classes, projects, and homework. Student's with a high self-esteem are the students who make a lot things is this world. Many times the students with high self-esteem are the students who go to the university, because they know are good in something; this is the reason because we have today doctors, lawyers, teachers, other professional people. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
827D807512AB | churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success? Success consists of going from failure without loss in enthusiasm. I think that churchill's is wrong about that failure of the plays in the pursuit of success because not many people are failure of there success and many people are in inspired from what they are going and so many people are pursing a failure.
Firstly, not many people are failure of there success. For example people that are failure is not succeeding in doing something else. Lets say that student that goes to school that they don't want to succeeded in there education. That they don't want there education for college or a university if they don't succeeded . Another example is if you are not succeeding then you can't do something just as outcome.
Secondly, many people are inspired from what they are going to succeeding. For instance people are are working or getting a job they have to be inspired of there job they have to succeeded in what they are going. They have to love they job or do a better to succeeded in there job. If you succeeded in your job you might get a raise.
Thirdly, so many people are pursing to failure. They don't want to pursuit anything because if they do then they are not succeeding in doing something else. for example if a students want to graduate on time with there class mates they he has to get good grade pass the sol then he has to succeeded in school. They have to be enthusiasm meaning they have to be inspired.
Iin conclusion Winston churchhill's is a failure of the plays in the pursuit because not many people are failure that who want to success and many people are inspired from want there are going and finally so many people are pursing to failure. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
8281058A7684 | Ralph Waldo once wrote,"unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered , you will never grow."I agree with this quote because of my experience learning another language like English it can be hard to learn English coming from a Hispanic family,and video gaming. Some may disagree with the quote because there is nothing else to learn .
When I was in first grade I came to school not knowing any English. Honestly I felt isolated because the language barrier I did not know what the teacher was telling me. All I said was "Yes" and "No" thats all I knew. I think it was a few weeks later that they call my parents . They notify my parents that
I was not doing well in school. My mother as always told me practice makes perfect. My mother with little bit of English that she knew she helped me to perfect it. Now, I could speak both languages fluently because of that effort I have more opportunities for a better job .
In Christmas the year 2017, I got the probably the best and worst gift of my life. It was an X box one at first felt happy because it was my second gaming console, but I did not know how to use it. It took me two weeks to understand the full operation. Then when I starting playing the first game that I bought was Fifa 18 by the way I did not pay for the game it was my dads credit card.
After that I downloaded Fortnite it was free so I didn't get in trouble . I found the games difficult , I started to practice a lot , then a few weeks later it became an addiction. I couldn't focus in school my grades were falling off where I had them before I got the X box one. My father told me if I did not get better grades he be forced to take away . So I started to focus on my grades ,but yet still thought the gaming console .
Some may disagree that what Ralph Waldo wrote. For example, if your'e a teacher you probably know what to teach for the semester. The job you have does not require that much only a master degree. Or being a car washer you just clean cars.
This has been all I have for this quote. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
8283155E54A0 | The ancient greek story teller said no act of kindness shoudn't be wasted because They wan't everyone to be kind like they say no act of kindness should never be wasted. They wan't everyone to be kind and no wasting act of kindness. My oppinoion I wold at least do one to five act of kind ness a day to make someone happy. If you do a act of kind ness you might get some to say something good about to make you feel good. It is nice to do in genral. You can feel good if you gave some a complement of there self and make them feel good. You can make someone day because they might have had A bad day and you gave them a complment and that make them feel good. I think the auther made this becuase they can make people feel good. The ancinent greek is relly old and they were doing alot of act of kind ness. The ancient greek story teller said no act of kindness no act of kind nees shoud never be wasted no matter how small. I think Aesop is a ancient greek king That can tell people to do act of kind ness. He said in his words NO! act of kind ness should never be wasted for no small reason I think that means that evreyone should do a serten amont of acts of kind ness a day like I said that I woud do do like one to five act of kind ness a day to make someone happy. I think That is why he wants evreyone to do acts of kind ness. For people | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
8295FC2CA419 | Aiming too low and falling short isn't the best way to be successful.
Being confident in what you're doing is great but what if you're too confident ? Not everyone has the same definition of success; Your vision of success might be their way of seeing failure. By setting your goals low, you're taking the potential risk of not attending the necessary capacities expected from you.
When aims are set high, you are also sure to achieve your marks, have the pride of succeeding and be confident in what you're doing, this affects your mood too, therefore you are happy in how well you are doing, have the desire too do even better.
The science fair is coming up this month; Doing a project on volcanoes sounds like a good idea, you're familiar with the subject and have done it before, teachers love projects that demonstrate real life actions, all though; This idea is unoriginal and five other students are thinking the same way as you are, by doing the volcano project, you would be aiming low, you must get out of your comfort zone in order to achieve your goals. Choosing another subject for your scientific project without being boring and using a real life causes would impress the judges, give them useful information without being too specific.
By setting your aim too high you are taking a risk and could possibly fall short, but by aiming low you are closing the opportunities of going bigger and doing something you wouldn't normally do that could lead to potential Utopian future of yours. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 5 | 4.5 |
82BA3E4396CC | Imagine you are going to a diffferent country, and you do not know anything about that country or how it works and you have only heard people talk about it or may have seen it in movies. But you know you have to go there because the education is not well supported by the government, and the president is corrupt and does not care about its people in your country so that is your option to be something in life. It is good to hear what other people have to say even their personal opinions because you may never realize that you may be in their position in the future struggling.
Knowing as a kid that you have to listen to adults, but you may think it is not neccessary, I have thought the same thing before I was a teenager and before coming to the USA from Generic_City only knowing 1 word in the new language that you are going to be using the rest of your life everyday. I was born in Generic_City 2006 and moved to Generic_City I grew in a town where snitching and getting into peoples life is a daily routine because people don't finish school bacause they are lazy and others who work to feed their family and never get an education and if you get to finish everything there arent many job options to enforce your career or to make money for yourself so you have to travel to the larger cities for work and you only get paid for day not by hours unlike the US.Everybody tells you to go to the US but everyone gives up because getting paper is super hard and stressful, the chance for you to get accepted are low so people just stay and get a job at a small store until they die and it is sad because they can't reach all the goals they wish they could achieve in such a developing country.
Since I was 4 years old I wished to always go to the US because at that age I already knew I had no future back there and I used to watch tv a lot and the US looked like a promising place to live at and there we're more job opportunities and I could be what I wanted thats what everybody told you back in Generic_City, and some of it was true you get more chances to be what you want and not end up as a "vago" and not be a blockhead. People used to say the language was their biggest obstacle even my mom said the same thing well I never thought I would come to the US of A I guess until my mom met my stepdad who brang us here but before comeing we spent a whole month and more on papers before coming to the US.It took a lot of money, work, and time which was the reason I did not want to come to the US because it frustrated me seeing my mom stressed out about some papers that we needed to come here where I now stand.
Once I came to Virginia my mom, and stepdad told me to work hard because the language would be my struggle as well as his when he came to the US around 20 years ago. My first day of school I got in trouble in less that 1 hour and 27 minutes into the day, because some kids decided to bully me and thought I wouldn't say a word because I didn't know how to even say good morning in english well this all happened inside the hallway bathroom I beat them up because I totally forgot fighting was not allowed in the schools and they said "He started it he was trying to hurt us we we're just trying to use the bathroom and he came out of nowhere" and I got in trouble I wanted to say something but I only knew one word in english which was "hi". My school was Generic_School which I used to get taken out of my class for a teacher to teach me english she told me I was the fastest english learning student she had in her entire career as a teacher which I was already starting to speak the language 6 months into the year with no background of me speaking the language in Generic_City. I was in fourth grade by the time I could comprehend almost what everyone was telling me and all the kids became my friends even the ones who had bullied me a year ago. I had struggles with my homework a big struggle my stepdad would come from work late and stressed out and he would not have much patience while helping me with my work and I would say I learned the language because I needed to become independent as soon as possible because it was too much stress on my back not being able to do anything on my own. I came to a whole different world where the school system was different even a math problem was different than what I used to learn back there I was 8 when I came.
Something I really like i the fact that there is snow here in the US because there was no snow where I used to live, as well as water I noticed that there was water everyday and all night here in the United States. Water is something that lots of developing countries may not have while others have it for their wet weather and jungle like land where it always rains. In the town I lived you only used to get water for 2 hours of the day and not every day. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
82CCCAD3BA5B | From my view point im really sure that never would be possible to change it , because there a fiew factors that cannot make that possible . People can not forget the first impression they have from you . i went to play soccer a few years ago it was my firts time, that day i was knowing too many new people from every where around the world.
We were played soccer and they told me that i'm so good for soccer they like the way that i play it. Now every where when they see me they say to me '' hey you play really good for real ''. so here is the conclucion. People never going to forget the firts impression that they get from you those people still remember me the time goes fast i didtn meet them for a year and half and the impression still stay that they think that im really good for soccer .Some people say that impression can be change not matter if is good or bad impression but you gotta work really hard for it and its going to take a long time. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
82DE4E49CC52 | Thomas Jefferson wrote determine never to be idle, it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something, people can accomplish if we are always doing something, people can follow his purpose what they want because all people can done with want they accomplish in ours life its many things that can we do something.
First, People like to be idle with other people like in some works when they do not want to employed in his works just because they have a inability personal but if people want to accomplish. They can doing something like in his home or a thing easy that they can make, for follow living but some people something just think about what they want to make his purpose but they never do something.
Second, People can follow his purpose and doing something wonderful, but if they do not are idle for example in some works like that people who work. in some place the boss are idle and that do that people leave that job for his idle personality it is wonderful if people do something good for his life because, some people do things bad and that happen that in some place never proposed something.
Third, In some place or country are bad, because people do not accomplish to have a good country because they do not do something good, for example something steal person, and happen that country accomplish a purpose we need to accomplish what we can or what we what for ours life, and do not be idle because are idle do not help for make something better for ours life, so we need to have patience with want we accomplish.
We need to doing something good for examples, people that work in office need to be amiable with people that need something most of the people who work in office do not have to be idle. Also be a wonderful person in jobs like restaurant help to have more client but depend how the people serve. So first to all we accomplish more if we are always doing something for ours life and do not do bad things that do not help for what to accomplish so we need to think first the things and glide that things what we want to do. | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
82F7210163B5 | When learning at school with other students who cause distractions it is always hard to focus would you be able to focus? Even though going to school makes you socialize with friends and they feed you it sometimes is hard for a student to show up to school or even learn.
For me I would rather work on my assignments and others things my teacher would like me to do at home reason why is that some students would not be able to focus especially when a student is causing lots of noise making it hard for you to focus on your assignment. Another reason is that some students could live far from the school making it hard to get to school everyday. Finally students could have more time to work and study making it easy for students to revise in a quite place at home.
Students could limit distractions in many ways at home one way is that they can put on headphones to relax and work hard and listen to some music. Some teachers hate when students have their phone out or when they are listening to music so begin at home may cause the student to focus more by listening to music because every student has a different way of studying and one student might be more focus if he or she loves listening to music when working or studying. This also makes the student more relived that he or she can listen to music. Students who are always trying to bust a joke or make a noise causes problems for a student who is trying to work to get her grade up this makes it very hard for a student to focus on what their are supposed to do. Students can benefit from listening to music because for me when I listen to music while I am working I feel great and energetic making it easy for me to knockout my work at a fast rate.
Some students could live far away from the school and may not have a reliable ride to take them to school everyday. Some students can't catch the bus because the bus is too far away from their house this makes going to school very difficult because without a reliable ride to school everyday you may be coming to school very late making it hard for you to study or work on assignments because you are worried about how you will get home because you do not have a reliable ride to school to home. This makes a student stress a lot thats why working at home you would not be worried about who would be taking to and back from school. It also makes the student more productive because they would not have to find a ride all the time they could study and get their work done faster than other people. Also coming to school late makes it very hard to understand what was taught in the classroom making a student very stressed over it because a student grade might go down because he or she failed the test cause they came late to school so that student might not have understood what was taught.
Finally students could have more time to study and work on their assignments sometimes teachers may go through the assignment very quickly making it hard for a student to understand the what he or she or supposed to do. Also teachers may not give as much time for students to finish assignment working at home makes it easier because you have as much time as needed for you to complete your assignment and also for a student to revise over their work before turning it in to the teacher students may not be able to turn in assignments on time depending on the assignment this makes a student very stressful because they do not want to turn in the assignment late and get a late grade for it. Sometimes students worry about things like this especially when a student grade is flunking and they need to get it up to graduate or move on to the next grade level.
Although going to school could very exciting for a student or very happy to see friends your happiest place is home and if you could a student could work from home that would change the way a student studies and complete assignment because they have time on their hands and also the are relaxed they would not have to sit in a class for over 55 minutes. Working at home could be very beneficial because It could be very difficult for another student to learn at school because they might be that one student who is making it hard for a student trying to focus or a student might be stressed because they might not have a ride to and back from school and worried that they might not enough time to finish their assignment and get it turned in on time. Working at home may not stress a student because they would have enough time to complete an assignment. This is why working on assignments at home would benefit a student. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
82F7D233871E | Some schools have a program that pairs older students with younger students.
I think this program is good idea for the students because it will help them work together . And it will be good for them so they can be able to learn from each other. It will help the older students to be able to do something after school and help out in there community. Also it will help them get battle in school. They can learn to work with the younger kids. Therefor it will help teachers to be able to get there work done at that time. It will also help there teachers.
For the younger students it will help them learn from the older students and there younger friends. It will also help them in school too to be able to listen to there teachers and there families. It will help them to get smart in school, Help one other, under stand from each other and anchor each other. There for it help there grades get battler. And it will help there parents that work later to get there work down when there kids are at the program. So there parents don't have to get off work so they can get there kids. And it will also help them make more friends and get to know each other. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
82F9FDBD6F98 | My argument about the 10pm curfew for teenagers statement; is they should have a curfew for teenagers because it can get them out of trouble, and make it home safe and they can get rest for school.
Example of staying out of trouble is you can get mistaken at night; and get hurt just by not going home at the right time. Another example a teenager can be at there friends house and if they leave late or outside with there friend, anybody can be outside and would want to hurt them or there friend because it's dark out, but if you have the 10 pm curfew you can leave without worrying about being in trouble. also can have a guardian to pick you up when its late so this scenario would not happen.
Another reason is to get some good rest for school and have lots of energy. If you do not have enough sleep, but can have the 10 pm curfew to help you to get some rest and will also help you concentrate in school. An example for this is a teenager could be outside and they do not have a curfew so the teenager comes home late. And does not get good sleep or no sleep and goes to school tired and can't concentrate.
A good counter claim for both is you can just stay home and don't have worry about a curfew or going home really late. because if you are scared to go home late or can't get some rest just stay home. You will be more safe home with a guardian or sibling then outside in the dark and not knowing who is outside. And parents should just be more protective so they don't end up going home late. And they can stay home and sleep earlier and get lots of rest for school.
with both arguments i think the best for teenager is that they should have a curfew just for safety reasons. And no parents should be worried or scared for there kids being outside late because there city council do not have a curfew. And another reason is they can get good sleep for teenagers is very helpful for them so they can have a lot of energy and concentrate in class better and get good grades. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
830CCF8E0B23 | Elective Classes
I believe that classes like arts, music and drama should be elective to the studnets. It is not required for every students to take every classe. Students should have their own rights to choose what classes they want and what they don't want. I believe that it is a waste of time to force those students to take classes they are not interested in. Instead of forcing students to take every classes, it is better to give importance to that one particular class that the student is interested in.
Students should have their own rights to choose what classes they want and what they don't want. Schools where they allow students to choose classes they want are likable. Students prefer to go to that school where they can choose classes as they want. They don't prefer to go to those schools where the students are forced to take every classes. If students are to take every classes, it might be too much for them to handle.
I believe that it is a waste of time to force those students to take classes they are not interested in. It is not only a waste of time for students, but it is a waste of time for teachers who works so hard. If a person is not interested in something, you should not force them to like it. Classes like music, art and musics are extra activites. They are important for us but not that important where studnets have to be forced to take every classes. If students are to take every classes, they might loose interest in that particular class they were interested in.
Instead of forcing students to take every class, it is better to give importance to that one particular class that the studnet is interested in. Studnets might like only one class and has a talent on that particular class, they should be allowed to take that particular class and does not have to take other classes. If a student does not want to participate in any particular class because of their personal reasons, schools should not force them to take those classes.
It is not that classes like arts, music and drama are not important to students. They are important and we should not neglect thoses classes. But the studnets should also not be forced to take every classes. Students should have their own rights to choose what classes they want and what they don't want. If they have to take every classes, it might be too much for them to handle. I believe that it is better to give importance to that one particular class that the student is interested in, than to force them to take every class. As it is a waste of time to both teacher and student | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
830E5FA9FC72 | The Negative Effects Of The Technology On People's Lives.
Technology helps people to preform many things hence, classes online, shop and communicate with others. I believed that technology has negative effects on people's lives because people have a limitation of a human contact due to the use of technology. Also technology had changed our style of lives; People used to visit parks to talk with other. Families do not spend time together. Students are distracted with their cell phone at schools. Children do not read books or have fun like in the past. Now everything had changed due to this issue.
One reason that technology has negative effects on people's lives is that now some stores closed because people do not shop in this stores anymore. Some people prefer to buy their materials or clothes online stores as Amazon. Amazon has a strong impact of sales in the world, Their sales are more high than any other stores. For example I recently heard about two store named STORE_NAME and STORE_NAME. They have this issue due to the use of technology. STORE_NAME is about to close because people prefer to stay at home and buy online. This stores are on sale of everything to close right away because
Fewer people visit this stores. Their sales had exceed on online store than in the located stores. Additionally people who work in this stores are going to have a layoff due to this matter.
Another reason that technology has negative effects on people's lives is that some places are empty namely: Parks, lakes, and malls. People decide to stay at home playing video games, and buying online.
Some people think that technology is a better way to express themselves. However, there are to many ways such as painting, drawing, playing even dancing.
Example I am a member of a dance class, my teacher was talking about this problem with technology. She was saying that sometimes our lives depend on a cell device, but not all the time. My point of view is that what she told me was true because I came to United Stated of America since 2016; I was not be able to understand or speak to others. When I did not understand some difficult words I used Google translated, so technology helped us sometime. However, I had seen some students who used their cellphone during classes. When the teacher ask them questions related to the topic, they do not know what to answer due to the technology.
In the other hand Some people will argue about technology has positive effects on our style of lives. Technology helps us to communicate with our families and friends. However technology limited us to express our ideas with no need of a cell phone device . Also it had destroyed our culture. It limited the growth of children because, they do not want to go outside to play with their friends. Children want to stay at home playing with their laptops. In fact this generation do not read books or magazine because of the technology. Example, My cousin is in the middle school he played Fourtnite everyday. He goes to sleep late, had bad grades and he wake up late for school. He does not read any book and neither go outside to play. He always is with his cell phone playing. I believe that the life is so short to waste.
In the final analyses technology will keep going to destroy our cultures. People will not go outside at all, to buy, to have fun, or to spend time with their families. My point of view is technology have a really negative effect on us because it had changed us, our world. everything in this world is going to be different. Technology limited the develop of ideas.Technology limited our communication, our knowledge, our curiosity, and our happiness. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
8311ABD30CC1 | Many people thinks that the school should not follow this model by extending the school two hours. Students, teachers, and others employees have responsibilities in their houses and others places after school. Also, fathers can get a bad attitude about why theirs kids need to be ten hours at the school. Schools should not follow this model by extending the school two hours.
First, some fathers believe that extending the school by two hours their kids will get more stressed. For example, extending the school by two hours students will need to do more homework, test, and projects. Students can feel like they can not do all of the work what the teacher give to them. A lot fathers doesn't have a good transportation for can pick up their kids at the school that late. Therefore, schools should not follow this model by extending the schools by two hours.
Second, some students have responsibilities after school. For example, some of them have sports, drama classes, and jobs. Extending the school for two hours can cause that these students can lost their jobs or some hours, they can not go to drama classes, and can not go the their sports practices. For other way, students need to have some rest of all. Schools should not follow this model by extending the school two hours.
For instant, extending schools for two hours and four-day school, students can have three days free. Students can have more free time, they can hangout more with their friends, and they can have more rest. Consequently, with four-day school and extending for two hours students can get more stress, and their grade can go down. Schools should not follow this model by extending school for two hours.
Extending school for two hours, will cause that fathers will get a bad attitude, and some students will lost their jobs, sport practice, etc. Students will feel like they can not do it, and their grade will go down. Therefore, schools should not follow this model by extending school two hours. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
83165647126E | One way to improve student achievement is to create a homework club. I think making a homework club is wonderful for students a homework club can help students improve their grades,have more free time,
less tired from school, and grateful to turn to that and get help from teachers and students at the same time.
First, of all, establishing a homework club is creative because it helps students improve their grades. Students get more work done when teachers and other students are helping them. They also, get to study more and don't have to worry about failing the test. Lets say a student is having difficulties on a question on their homework. A student can stay after school and get help with the questions they have trouble with or needs help with.
Also, students have more free time after school. Students have the ability to spend time with their family and friends, and go places. A homework club sounds like a club i would join because after i come home i'd relax or go out or hangout with some friends. if i joined a club like that i'd be happy because i wouln't be the only one who struggles on work and we could help each other out on work we don't understand.
Furthermore, A homework club helps students less tired. They don't need to worry their grades being bad because they had help from teachers and students. They get to sleep more and wake up the very next day and get ready for school. Students should have it easy because theses days students go through so much in life. Just imagine what their going through right now.
Next, Homework clubs and help students on many different things but at least they learn something new. Everyday Students these day try and try the best they can but they lose hope because they feel like they can't do anything. I
believe every student has the courage to get something they done just like that.
Finally, I think creating a homework club is great for the students because it helps students improve their grades, give them more free time when they get home, less tired from school, and grateful that they have this club.
Sincerely,
Generic_Name | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
833489139971 | Former British Minister Winston Churchill once said that 'success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Many people are not perfect and fail, and some think failure is bad. Failure is actually good, because it teaches you what was wrong. Although some people may think that failure does not play a role in success, it should be known that failure dose play a role in success.
One of the reason failure plays a role is that people can learn from their mistake. when people fail they can find out what went wrong instead of giving up, Another reason is failure makes people stronger. A lot of times failure may cause people stress, and stress makes people strong and not give up. Also failure helps people become better people. leaning from there failure.
Although some people think incorrectly that failure do not play a role in success it should be know that it dose play a role in success, because you can lean from your failure, failure makes you stronger, and failure makes you a better person. people should not give up when they fail, they should learn and try again until they succeed. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
833F25175AFC | Dear principal
my name is STUDENT_NAME and I don't agree with the new school sports policy. My opinion about the school policy that no one should be left behind that every one should have a chances to participate in the sport that they want to play. Am an example because I cant play sports because of my grades I love to play volleyball butt i cant participate i fell left out. When I see the other girls with there uniform am I just look away that just makes me fell like dam I should be on the team. I know that there is more kids out there that want to participate and fell the same why I do.
Some kids
that I know are in gangs because of that reason. Ether just because of that resounds that they cant participate.T | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
8369840DE791 | Determine to do not be idle is hard because we do not imagine us doing something if we never do it because we are very idlest to do it. We do not imagine how wonderful can be if we never do it.
Lets say that you want to be a soccer player, but you are so idlest to do it, like you are imagine that you are the best soccer player of the world, you earn a millions of millions of dollars with a lot of girls around you and a lot of fame. How you want to accomplish that if you are so idlest to do start doing it. If yo want to be the best soccer player of the world that you imagine in your mind, wake up 6 or 5 am and start practicing and running and training your body and do not be a slacker lying in your bed imagine something that you can do it.
Other people say that be idle is good and is right. There are many persons like inventors or scientist that they have great ideas when they are sleeping or when they are lying in the bed, but when that brilliant idea comes to they mind, they dont stay right there imagine that idea. They get up and they start working in that idea that they have and they work day and night until they complete and they make it real.
If you want to be idle is good like no one gonna stop you, but if you want to do something or you have to do something go and do it. Or if you have a idea but you are lazy to do it get up and start working on that. Be idle in your free time. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
838093B60075 | Imagination is important than knowledge!
Imagination is more important than knowledge because you don't actually have to know something, you can use your imagination instead.
You can use your imagination to solve math problems. You can use your imagination to build stuff. You can use your imagination to draw or design.
You can use your imagination to solve math problems. When you don't know or don't understand something, sometimes you can use your imagination. You don't actually have to know anything to solve the math problem, but sometimes is best to use your imagination because you don't know what the problem is going to be about. For example, if you don't know how to do math or you never got to go to school, you can use your imagination to solve the math problem.
You can use your imagination to build stuff. If you like to build or to make stuff, you can always use your imagination. It's best to use your imagination when your building things because if you use your imagination, you can create things that nobody did before. Some of the useful things that you're building can help a lot of people. For example, you can build toys, make video games, or do anything you want to build with your imagination.
You can use your imagination to draw or design. You can do a lot of great thing with your imagination and not just have to know everything. You can do different things or different designs with your imagination. Some people use their imagination to draw things or make things. For example, you can draw pictures, make cloths, or design things that you like using your imagination.
You can do many different thing like designing, building, or even making things just by using your imagination and not just your knowledge. Like Scientist Albert Einstein said, "Imagination is more important than knowledge."
That means that you don't actually have to know everything, some people can use their imagination to change the world and make a lot of things. You can do anything using your imagination! | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
8397368B57EA | Do you think being in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is a good thing? I think it can be bad.
When you are trying to accomplish things and make friends, it can get you hated. First off when you open up to people and be honest with them, they aren't going to like it and turn on you and hate you. when they see you succeeding and doing better than they are, they will talk about you because they arent where you are and they will make you try to feel down and unsuccessful.
When trying to do good things in life people will down really low to the point where you give up, and just try to fit in and do bad thing that could lead you down a wrong path, to where you can end up in prison or dead you can end up in the wrong crowd, when you thought they were good people. They will manipulate you at first thinking they are good people and want to see you accomplish being thing in life. Once you get to know them and see who they really are you will see the complete opposite and it could be too late to turn back.
In conclusion whether you try to be your self and accomplish your goal there will always be people who will hate you and bring you down with them. No matter how much you try you will end up falling because of being yourself and choosing the wrong crowd. | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
8399BA1DF44B | I am not agree because everybody in this world can be freedom to think or to do whetever they wan because we have the independence of right. They can enthusiasm for things or wons that they did.
If they want to do that the rule said is they decition,or they opioniom because they are freedom right, but i am disagree with thus rule for one reason, that it's. That if they don't want to failure you have to fight for yours dreams for everythink that you can do it, and say thank u god for give me that opportunity and say i am so pround of me.
you never give up just kept going and follow your dreams to have a good future and don't be failure and don't play with that things beacuse you can practice once and you can take that thing for a while of your life.
I will give you one example for this thing, you see the poor people that they follow the rules just for money or do whetever things just for money is because they just wanna a good future for they kid's and they don't wanna failure they just fight for they kid's to have a good education and they hope that one they they can be somebody profetional like doctor and help them family to get out the situation of poor.
I hope that everyone in this world can see the right things and complete and don't be afraid if you don't do nothing bad why you suppost to be afraid you have your right laws. If you play wiht that thing you can fail in your life, but you can learn that way because when you broken down and you say i can't continue with this, is when you have to say i am stronger, the life give a leason, and i learn about that. Now i see and i can be better.
You can see now that you can do it. When you wish something like be profetional, soccer player, but if you play with failure you can fail thats right you can not have to play wiht that.
Also there is going to be peoples in your way that they dosen't want that you can be happy, like a fake friends, and sometimes we were really surprised because someones in your family are fake too, but don't pay atention to them just focus in your dreams and finish.
Another example is my self because when i came in United States, i don't even know English and i thoght that will be more difficul for me, i thoght that i will fail every class, but is not how was i thihk because i just focus in my class and i work hard every single day, and i never fail one class that's right you never have to loss the enthusiasm in your life and enjoy every single day, because the life is just one and we has to make the most of opportunitys in this life, and be happy every single day.
When i came in United States without my parents i thoght that will be more difficul for me, at the beginnig was so hard because i always live with them but i never give up because i know that they want a good future for me and i saw that way and now i juts want to help them because they are a good example in my life they say to me, son just fight for your dreams and don't worry about us you know that will be ok and that's right i never loss my enthusiasm because i want to reversed the help that they give me one day.
My father and my mother say, you arer the reason for work and fight so hard for you. You will have a good future don't be afriad don't loss your enthusiasm. That's right i never loss my enthusiasm because i take the example that they give me because i wanna be a good example for my childrens and be like my parents or better.
When you have a problems to solve and you feel that you can fail just think creatively about different ways to solve and actively work to balance your mind, health and emotions or enthusiasm. we have to develop many ways to solve the problems. Our environment it will be consider many perspectives, and how we can work to balance our mind, health and see many solutions in our life. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
83B3CD03C693 | An enjoyable educational activity could be playing an intrument,an intrument could teach someone to practice everyday,by practicing could lead you to learning new techniques to play that type of instument. Being enspired by someone to do that instrumet or what ever you want to do you need somone to motivate you for example, their was this one time where my brother motivated me to play the chello and I did and it felt good,because I practiced everydaycand I loved doing it. Thats why practicing is important.
Having fun while playing in band or orchestra your able to travel to diffrent states to learn how difrrent groups play,
learn diffrent songs, and learn the sites of that certain city. Thats why I joined orchestra when I was about 9-10years old I learned about 20 new songs that 1 school year and I loved doing it. It was fun to watch, and hear them while playig it was probably the best year i had in 3rd grade.
The people in your group are like your family you guys are going to travel together and perform together. And even making freinds to the new kids who join later in the year so dont worry about being left out while traveling to that certain state your always going have someone to talk to be around. YouCAn also make friends in the new state you travelled to thats why playing an intrument is so enjoyable. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2 |
83C48C5697AE | Living in a place with frequentely hihgest demand to provide my best, is one the must important achievement. I agree with Emerson statement because with the individuality we can reach all our goals.
It is to important for me to recognize that i have to get my goals with effort. Because this help to provide, work hard, competition, and bocome the best .Individuality is a good factor to trust in my self to be the best because help us to look for option that help our lifes
.Working by my self make me work hard. when a person work by his own company he try to do a great work fixing everything it is the such as work alone, if you work alone yo going to do a perfect job to impresione others labors .For example, when i work without partner, i try to do a great gob to be one on the best workers. When i do my own work i feel excite cause, i could receive an award for be a good producer. everybody want to be award for their job so everrybody wish a reward. But to be award we have to hsave capacity in the jobs Many person due the same thing like me cause doing my the own work provide a big result. So working by my self make an emotion to work hard and to increase the amoung. Consequently to do a individual work make a good results. Doing own projects workers show more production In the factory and result good Therefore this help to get alot resources by workers.
Competiton is a ways to decrease the teamwork. individual competition is a big example of overcome. Examples could be when a person start to work in his job and start to recieve more money because the person is doing a great work ,this make that others poerson get mad so in the factory start the competition cause everyone want to recieve more money and they thick is unfair be reciving the same amoung of money so they start to argued why the manager give more money to the new guy but the thing is that he has a good specialization in the job. concecuently Many time the work competition provide a good production in the factory so, everyone want to get their goals like a good amount of products also,big accomplishment occur with the worker is trying to find a new way to get more product than other. For example, when a worker finished his assignment could receive free time,this make feel angry other workers so , they are going to try to look for others forms to produce more than the winner because, they want to receive the same reward for the production . To do a good competition the work have to be alone to and with big group people. competition is a good way for individuality work to provide a emotional affect. In many companies the owners look for a way that workers produces a lot and they offer money or free time to the person that make more products .as result, being in a factory with many labors working seperated make a big impact where everyone want to procud the most materials. Therefore,challenge could be a a good idea for separated jobs .
Looking for an accomplishment to become the best. Every one in this life want to have something to be recognize in this world althogh,to be a succefull person we have to work hard. Not matters what tell about us such as critique,bullying ,etc. The only thing that is important for us who we are. So the best thing that could can happens in our life is be a place where frecuently we are demand to do different things. Although with many problem we have to be patience and support all bad things. Because,if we wish to be different than the rest of persons and realize our goals. thought must be working by our selves. Because sometimes nobody is with us to provide help. fighting by my self i could be a big man in the socierity. Currently in the world we have many competition one example can be soccer,almost the majority look in the tv .Soccer is a game where a team have 24 for player. They have to compite who is the leader in the team. So like in the real life the leader is the person that work hard,help the other players .Otherwise, could be a leader in a company, to be the leader of a company ,the leader had to compite with other person that wanted to become a big leader ..Therefore to be a person succesfull have to take individual decision .
Being in a world where have to take decision and concern about goals is the best thing that we can have to show our capacity. Doing my own job make me put effort and dedication. Work in gruop is affect by bet. Being a different person than others. The person that different quality could be someone that can help. Because, this kind of person make the differences in the world trying to win in a place where the competition and the demand are in high level ,so they try to have imfluences in the in their jobs. The individuaity help alot in the world to be a succesful place. For example in the govermen there are many people with a big level to compite with other this, that means it i s has a great achievement in the government,so i agree with Emerson statement cause the competition provide good benifit for us and too the progress of the government,factory,countries,therefore being a part with competiton meke us to improve our best | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
83F57096AF9C | Be a master in any area is something really awesome, because you already have experience and you already know what are you doing. There is positive and negative things for being a master.
In my opinion
I disagree with Emerson becasue even if you are a master in an specific area you never stop growing, everyday you learn more about your mistakes and about life and how to live a good one, also you learn something new that helps you in all types of areas that you have in your life.
However in this world there will be someone that will disagree with your opinion, because they have different type of mentality,or they think in a different way.
If you have a goal you never need to stop growing on it, becasue is something that you really want for your future and you want to do that for the rest of your life. That is why you need to choose carefully what do you want, because maybe in the future you can regret and that is a bad thing that you can erase,becasue you feel frustrate because you spend a lot of time on something that you didn't like.
Being an expert in an area is something really important, the positive things for being a master is that:
You domain your area and nobody needs to command you.
You can do the things easily and quickly.
You are an expert in what are you doing, so you are exited.
Is more easier to get good things, something that benefits you.
You can get great jobs with a good payment.
You can be also your own boss or manager.
There is also negative things for being a master:
There are many people that they are an expert in any area
You need to compet with your rival
You need to try to be the best
If you have a business and you are making some mistakes you need to fix it quickly because it can affect to your own skills.
In conclusion
I disagree with Emerson, becasue you can still growing even if you are making a lot of mistakes, you can still achieve new things,you need to grow in person and in skills,always.
You can stay in the position that you are right now but you can always grow and be better everyday. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
83FBBD0447F2 | Have you ever feel something different after receive support or help like a special feeling well that feeling is a act of kindness it feels great and wonder and unique. Acts of kindness big or small can have a major impact to our lives. Some explamples of acts of knidness are sharing, helping or supporting. Acts of kindness can help others who are in need of support, trying to solve problems and more.
What is act of kindness, Act of kindness is a form of kindness but in any size big or small with a effect that could change people. Showing a little bit of kinds to those who are in need of support can have a major effect. Act of kindness can change those who are need of support and can effect them for the greater good.
How does acts of kindness help others. If you do any acts of kindness it can have a major impact like Changes people lives, in a good mood or a positive way of thinking of things . It can also effect decision making and giving kindness can have positives effects on you.
Why do we need acts of kindness in our lives, Acts of kindness can have long lasting impacts to many lives it changes how people feel or think and you even feel better if you show or receive a act of kindness from someone act of kindness a chain reaction it's a never ending chain it will effect everyone in one point in their lifes
Biggest to the smallest of kindness can change many different people lifes in a good a positive way and it could help those who are in need of support with their problems Because act of kindness impacts all of us. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
840357B74A16 | Should students have partnerships with companies that interest the type of employment they want? Students think it's a great idea to go to different businesses because it will be helpful to them in the future. If a student is stuck on what he wants to do in life the businesses can help them see what they want for their future. Students should have partnerships because students can get more skills about that job, students learn more about the job their going for, and student can see if that the job they really want to be in.
First, students can get more skills about there job because they are in the business hands they can go around learning on how they do everything. They also get to see how the company is ran and how they handle business. Student can learn a lot we it comes to the business if the company shows them about it. If the company helps the students then the students are going to want to take classes about it. Their going to want to go to the Tech center about it their going to want to learn more.
Second, is that they learn more about the business by going to the company. They learn how to control the mechanical stuff over at the company. They will learn about the paper work over there. They will even know where they want to work at over there if they learn more about it. They will have a fun experience about their job they most likely want to do when they get older. They would be even more interested to take classes at school about business and will pursue in that type of employment .
Third, students can really see if they want to be in that type of business. Similar to the other two this helps them, but not only if they want to pursue in that job it's for if they really don't want the job. Also they can find a back up plan if that business is not the right one for them. They can go see if its a bad business, if it helps with the future, and if it's the job they want to go after. They can't focus them to like if they didn't see it for themselves they won't do it if it's not for them, they're going to find something that they want to do not what they need to do. Students can see of they want to work there they can see the positive and the negative of the business they can't be focused, or they can't just cant be focused on that one thing.
In conclusion, The students get to choose if they want to or not. They should know what they want to or figure out what they would do in the future. Students can't be focused to do mainly anything they have to find what they like for they can do it. Other people may say that they will go there and not learn anything,however if students go there for what they are a looking for they can pursue it. If students font get to choose then students wouldn't get more skill about the job, wouldn't learn as much about the job, and wouldnt't even want to see the type of job. Students can see they future if they get the help they need by companies letting them learn about it will help students pursue their occupation. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
840619A0CF0B | Thomas Jefferson wrote,"Determine never to be idle...Its is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing". Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something,or does inactivity also serve a purpose?
The way you determine to do things is pushing yourself to do it, nobody gonna be there to tell you, when you gotta get your stuff done. We the people shouldn't be idle at all ,it would be boring ,not doing anything like just relax at home,and get fat on the couch,being lazy from time, to time isn't as bad. Also you want to have a break,so you won't stress out as much. Most people are determine to be inactivity and will get upset or,have a panic attack,health issues,It can affect your life to be honest ,and it sucks! that's how life is,it gets harder,and harder and you need to motivate yourself, makes your mind stronger. People who don't motivate themselves they got to at least try to get things done, and it never gets any easier....you just got to do it like this essay;I'm writing.
An inactivity does serve a purpose based on people who don't accomplish much by being lazy and not realizing how the situation can get worse instead of getting it done on time. People got to be always doing something ,and be well organized,it will also be wonderful too see people not being idle too always be doing something,so they would feel good about themselves and be like "Yes! I did it!"and that way they won't have to deal with it anymore ,and move on with their day,just like anybody should. In order too always do something you should just look for something you like to do,to keep yourself busy like: playing soccer, working out ,rather not doing anything ,and just being on your phone on social media.
In my opinion being be responsible and accomplishing is a whole relief ,and taking your time getting stuff done can also help to focus.
For us kids our responsibility is to get good grades in school, and graduate,be successful in life to become better than what our parents were,or be a better person by being active and helping a church out .People sometimes need emotional support because everybody is different, everybody handles their attitude,or situations differently,and they might be going through something and it will affect their life. Taking a position of where I stand in school is me failing tests because,I don't study and I know,I should study but when I try too, I forget ,and forget the next day ,and I hate that, I know ,I can pass my tests ,and get better grades, if I studied this is one of my accomplishment I need to work on.
Thomas Jefferson wrote that because, he wants to motivate people to accomplish more by doing things and finding a job, and work hard,by being successful. Thomas Jefferson also did some things,He wrote the Deceleration Of Independence,he is one of the Founding Fathers and accomplished being our President.
There are lots of people in this world with different point of views of how they accomplish of always doing something,people try to plan out ideas to see what will work out for them, and help them think harder based on how they handle what works for them because,their is plenty of strategies in the world people can use to do something,what makes them feel more comfortable .It is very important for people to accomplish things that they need to do to get it off their hands and help each other out, if they need help ,and not stress about it but,most things you can't depend on someone being their,you got to do it on your own ,and if your stressing about it, you just got to relax your mind ,take yoga if you have too! but than again everybody is different and at least you need to try because,if you dont do that than where do you think your set of accomplishments is gonna go?. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
840D73A3804A | Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose? I believe that if we do more, then we get more things done. I say that because if you just do what you're gonna say, rather than talking about it, you can get very far in life, and you will be successful. You know why? because you're a action taker, and not just a dreamer, who just expects stuff without the hard work. You also get more noticed, and people will like to be around you, because you're more active, and you're more unique, than most people.
My first reason is that if you just put that action into movement, then you're powerful already. No one can stop you, because your mindset is on a whole new other level. People can't ketch up to you, and people will be jealous of your success. You will have haters. Hate on you, but don't let that slow you down! keep doing, and achieving and great things will come down to your way. For example:There is a saying that If someone is hating on you, then you're doing something great, if they're not hating on you, then you're not doing anything really.
My second reason is that you're a type of person willing to do anything to achieve your goals. You will let nothing in your way. You are ready to grab life by it's neck, and just yank it, cause it's yours. You gotta take over your life now. Don't wish, and wait. Start now, and don't let stuff handed to you. You gotta work for it, and just love the process. Trust me you will not regret it, if you just start making good habits for yourself. For example: doing your homework, and stop procrastinating on the stuff you need to do, or want to do, doing tasks when you don't feel like it. You will be great, and you'll thank yourself in the future.
My third reason, and final reason is you get more noticed, and people will like to be around you, because you're more active, and you're more unique, than most people. Ah, yes nobody likes a person that's just "normal". I find that quite lame, and boring. They would like a person that is quite different, and not the same as everybody else you know. For example: You wouldn't want to meet the same people every time now would you? of course not. You would want to meet different people, and find new things, and also most importantly learn new stuff by different people. You would want people with different personalities, not the same ones, as that would be boring. You are more active, than just sitting down. You are taking your chances, and not blowing it. You are taking advantage of life, than just wasting it. Nobody wants to hang out, or deal with someone that is just negative all day, or a loser. They would want to hang with someone that is quite active, respectful, and successful.
My conclusion: Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose? I believe that if we do more, then we get more things done. I say that because if you just do what you're going to say, rather than talking about it, you can get very far in life, and you will be successful. You know why? because you're a action taker, and not just a dreamer, who just expects stuff without the hard work. You also get more noticed, and people will like to be around you, because you're more active, and you're more unique than most people. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
8415937CA4D9 | In my opinion i think a homework club would be great, most students want to fix the grades and get better ones mostly with subjects they struggle with usually math or sci ens but with extra help the student will be able to understand better which helps raise there grade.
Teachers are usually very open when it comes to help but most students are afraid to ask, with this club it will be easier to ask for help from the teachers.
I dont see a lot of cons with this idea but i tried my best find some, some students are fairly slow learners and it usually takes up time to teach them, its also hard for the student to be engaged in what there learning. most students have after school activities other than the homework club. Like sports and might arrive late to there activities.
There might not be enough people to help, though i doubt that there wont be enough people to help it may be possible but in a different way after school or work people are usually tired and dont have enough energy to stay engaged in learning or teaching.
Back to pros ya know the good stuff, mental health almost every student goes through a faze where the stress levels are high but most of that stress comes from is school work, with the club teachers will be able to helps students with home work, students will be used to asking for help.
I think this club is a good idea it will defiantly help students learn better while there struggling. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
8416C7C6F146 | when someone is already mastered something beyong , they will never grow, base on what they experience alot of people they can not do another thing becuase when they star they just mastered, alot of people try to do something new or trying to make another future but is it imposible becuase they alredy master up. And they will never grow becuase people star duing the thing wrong they did not see the thing write
One reason thay people can star a new life or do another thing it becuase when someone is alredy mastered or they alredy pass for the momet and now they canit erased and they never grow up, they will can go back and fix what they alrady did that why is it importan thing before when someno it about ro do something and also what someone alreadi did it hard to fix it again for example all what a people did before in they pass they canot go fix it, people did thing and they dont think about it that why they will never gow up when someno thyaying to do something but they already mastered they will nwver can do other thing and they will not ba a person that why can do something alse the autor refere that, what you do beyong now yu anot do it again some people may say people has mastered when they already pass but a person can change that people can satar what they alredy mastered and the can fix it agin people do bad thing and do something bad byt they stuill can starded and they can kip growing and kip going becuase ther is ntohing can stop a person whataver they already did they still can fix it there fore it no mater what they did it just or what they pas when they satr the thing but alway can fix it and kipp going kip growing on myon people experience they do think and ther mastered up but alwas they fix and they satrded again and alwast ont satar againg. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
84192B65683A | Community parks has it all open space, sun ,green grass, tables and a nice setting in general.
Community park provide a lot of opportunities such as spending time with friends and family, sports and exercising, and doing school assignments. These are my three reasons what you can do respectfully and peaceful at your nearest community park. I hope you find these helpful for you in the future.
Spending time with friends and family at a community park is a good way of making bonds stronger with each other. Parks have a lot of activities to do in a park for example there is a lot of outside games you can play. My opinion on how parks can make your bond stronger is that you can talk to them while you walk, jog and other activities. For example Generic_Name and Generic_Name went to the park to go play checkers. They talk about grades and other subjects for one hour. Their bonds got stronger they hang out every day.
Community parks have a lots space playing. Sports burns calorie's and it is very fun to play sports. You can make new friends with sports might even get ask to play on their team. For example Generic_Name brings her new ball to her community park nearest to her. Generic_Name brings her ball to the court kids dashing as fast they can to her. A crowd of kid show up to her begging if they can play they make teams. Generic_Name makes a lot of friend and plays soccer with them everyday.
Parks are good way to study and do school work because it is peaceful and natural sounds help you get relax.
Imagine nice sunny day no wind hear of birds and grass bending every direction. Studying in a park will help you a lot because you are not going to get interrupted my neighbors and relatives. People from the park might help you and give you way and strategies to get a good grade on a test. For example Generic_Name want to pass his test. his sibling are loud he can't focus. Generic_Name goes to the community park to study for the big test.
In conclusion parks are a good way to do every day activities than staying home being lazy. I hope this helps you with your every day situation. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
845693DC199E | Dear principal, ''This is what i think about community service."
I think community service is helpful because you can help the community. For example, some tutor elementary school children and others clean up litter. Community service is helpful because you can help people in the hospital and you can clean the streets. By helping people in the hospital, you can help people that are sick and in the streets you can help clean up from the parks and the street floor. Also i think that the principal should decide the people that should do community service. One way that the principal should decide is by choosing the people that got a 75% or higher on their report card. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
8476588805D9 | 3/7/2019
Cedar Walk Way,
Generic_City
To the manager of
Amazon
School is the place where we get opportunity to learn different things. Schools makes you capable to choose your own way. The main reason to go school is to make our career. Career is directly related to the employment. Everyone wants to do the best in their life. Employment is the thing that helps you to do best in your life and also helps us to understand who we are and how important we are. Now a days, school have partnerships with companies to help students to choose their interests employment. So, if you select me to visit and learn about the works, it will helps me to understand about the interest that I have for my future.
The most important things in students life is to choose their own interest, to make their future happy and peaceful ,but they really don't understand where will they go because of the pressure in their mind. So, I want to be selected to visit and learn about the work. It helps me to understand about the characteristic of the different works, and also helps me to recognize my interest for my career. Employment is not the biggest thing,but the interest is the biggest things. If we have interest in something, we defiantly work hard to get that goal. For example: I had a one friend whose name is Generic_Name, she choose to be a doctor in first, but then she realize that she never had any interest in doctor. After that, she left her job and become a photographer because photographic is her real interest not to be a doctor. That's why, I don't want to be confuse in my life. I want to be clear about my future.
All the people in this world are different, they have different aim in their life. Some wants to be doctor,some wants to be an engineer,pilot,photographer,dancer,etc. In this 21st century,all the parents wants their children to be a doctor or an engineer or in the other biggest post but not all the children have same interest as their parents have. Although they have different aim or interest, they join in the work that their parents wants because they don't understand the value of their interest. So, if the school or any companies allow students to explore or visit about the works, they better understand the value of their interests and never join in any other works that they don't want to be. I have an example of my own sister: In first, she joined in the medical line because my parents wants her to be a doctor and after she read some of the courses of the medicine,she realize that her interest is not to become a doctor and then she left her courses and start another courses. So, I really don't want that same things happened to me.
Time is very important for everyone. Nobody wants to waste their time because they believe that time is money. So,why students waste their time to choose the way that they don't want to go. Everyone has rights to select their own jobs. The problem is not that they don't get opportunity to choose their jobs,the problem is that they don't understand where is their destination. For example: If you left your dog in a street that he never walked,
then how can you expect that he accomplished his destination? Same happened to the students life, if someone who is well-experienced didn't tell them about the journey of life or how to choose their interest,how can we except that they will become a successful person.
Lastly, I want to say that if you select me to visit and learn about the work ,then I get opportunity to learn about my interest which helps me to get a better future. And also, if you select me I will aware other people about the interest or works and also help them to choose their interest. If I understand my journey, then I expect that I will success to get my destination. So, I humbly request you that please select me to visit and learn about the work that I have interest to do.
Generic_Name, | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
84765FE3E472 | Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with other. People can check out book,shop, and play games without speaking to another person. It is limited human contact do to technology.
Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with another. It is a fact that we need human contact humanity has been working to gather for hundreds of years we are more a part today then we have aver been. That's why it is so in portent to speak to a new people .That is why we need to take a break from technology.
technology allows people to check out book. shop and play games but It is a biological need for human contact with a another person. We get to use to ordering it off online and we need to cheng that. Kids are getting to use to video games and shopping online. I under stand that it makes it easy but are is a person going to make new friend and how are you going to meet new people in life.
It is limiting human contact kids are given tablets before they can even walk we are getting no wonder you see kid walking alone you they dont do anything but get on there Phone in class are work they are not forecast on just the'er Phone and nothing else. | 2 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
8484D27254B3 | Date 3/11/2020
Name Generic_Name
Test Esol writing (2010)
They look for people working with responsible and hart working, they person can dou the work well and do noy need to do tolk this person what we need to do because the responsible is good because is some time you need made responsible in the life or is more in the work because you need put you can to do some people dont" like meke The think good because that peolpe don't have responsible and the responsible is help for you because is very Important is something very nice and if you have responsible in your work that is very well because tou has to do Make different with another person, becaus the people have an hard work this people they like to do everything because for the peolple have hard work someone who have hard-working, employer you to all work good, the best you can fybally is the employee very well more people are look for this peolpe because is the best you cvan work good and the employee has the good reason in the hard work they are good for tha.
Most employer have experience in the hard-work becasue is a work very hard and they like work like this and they don't have another work this person need work hard and I thing have a people work very hard is good because they can work can do all work not import what work is good if you finally people working hard in you work you work is caming uo because to you have a person thay can working hard all work wiht people working hard they finish all work very fast and Show how you has to work and learne how you cand working and hard work most people are looking for this person has responsible and hard-working because is you can i need in the work workinh gard and responsible not got to play in the job or don't do nathing is very well you can put you can you do un the job because if you are resposible in you work you to expres why you work or why more people like people working hard and do everything, a employee is a person how need may averything has a control of everything may everything becasue in the dard work you need nat the thing un series becasue most people died becasue they play in the job when is a jab hard the employee noy need to ply need to work gard if not work hard they can died because this work is so hard and very hard more peolple don't like when ypu play in the work that is why more people are vlook for employee has more respomsible and may the thing how they due more like du very good.
well I seek maybe I can do because I like the seme thing I like may job hadr and because is very good may gorgeous im the work because in may nation the people have only work hard and nobody can to work with the other people some people necessity a work but some people don,t likr work hard this people deny work and I thing have a job is like natural and you need to budge and look I can to can may and a hard work because I am peasant and this is you need to walk in you life because sometime you are alone and nobody help you and you may averything in you life more when you has to modify in you home and we can do job inself in you home because if you have work hard is a golf to be do enyway you porpose is for you because if you job is not your you has to put more experensia I can to or may all work because I like this I am this is when I learny this is my job and we need to do all good continue everything and secure and have sensation this is very Import cause you nrrd to mach all people need effort, because is Import but a hard work is very tiredness but for me is very good because I like may hard work is something good I happy when I have a work like this becasue how employee you need harshly endeavor,
you we need to preparation in enyway job more then job requiring more employee work hard is more matter for the jog and for the res the peop0le who working ther and for me I can do everything and I can candidate cause this is not dificul and maube can to everything only we need to do and may examples more peolpe like hard work some time is good working and do a good job because that can help you for me Iand my reason all employee need cand working vere well I seek are a good candidate because I can do the seme think equal the another employee more then job is good the hard job is not bab work is only how ismore plural | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
84CE7281265F | My uncle has in his wallet 100 dollars, he give to me 10 and stay with the rest,I tell him to save the money for tomorrow he well need it, but he spend all the money to buy shirt pants and hats, and the next day he was asking for money for the gas for the car. My unclewas happy for the money and to buy things with the money and fro not listen we was need it for tomorrow. He spend all the money in things that are good for him but he knowing he will need it, for tomorrow he spended it, are all.
Why seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choise. Once of my friend was having money on his paket he says,"lets go whatch a movie on the cinema". but all the rest of my friend we tell him to "NO", Because the movie was aready in CD and was much less money than go whatch it in the cinema. When my friend recibe ours opinions we see the situation in other perspective of the he was thinking. Even my friend want to whatch the movie on the cinema, should be a to spend a lot of money to pay. and that how we tell him to buy it.
When people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one person. My Dad give to be money to buy anything that i want, knowing that tomorrow I will need a white shirt, I buy a game and my dad tell me about the place that we need to go and will need the shirt and for my obsession for the game the nezt day was asking if they can give me money to buy the shirt, and my dad tell me yesterday,"I tell you to buy it, but you don't listen to me". Even I was knowing about the shirt, this happen because i did't listen, In adition, all the talk and learning, and that day after the money I save it for this type of case.
The case that happen in resume, all talk about how important is that to listen to the people around you, All this situation happens because there were listen to the person next to it.
and you, In sometimes is okay to that more than one person talk to you? | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
84FC9651F650 | First impressions is what I learn from many people. People have many impressions and yes it is hard to change.
Impressions are special to some people but it also could effect people in certain ways. Ways where your whole behavior might change or attitude or maybe your whole person. When we first meet people we see their first impressions and we see on how they are or we check on how their behavior is. We all have a instict on where we look at some people and judge but we also see the attitude in the people. First impressions are special sometimes because you dont know who you are going to meet next and on how they are good or if they have some bad in them.
Everybody is unique in many different ways. People do say that first impressions is impossible to change. I think it's impossible becuase people are very different everybody is different and sometimes we just have to accept it.
Some people don't understand that some people can't change even if its for the better or the worse some people will just always be the same. Impressions are something you can't change from people. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
85004BC426B1 | Would you like to seek multiple opinion from different people? I think is good for you to seek opinion from people . Seeking multiple opinion can benefit you make new friends,
have good relationship with your friends and make someone trust in you to tell their secret to you. Well that is what i think about Seeking multiple opinion.
Seeking multiple opinion can make someone trust in you. When someone trust in you, he or she can tell you their secret about everything they have in secret. If someone trust in you he or she will know that you are a good friend. For example,
if you do something wrong to your friend who trust in you, She or her is going to forgive you when you say sorry because, he or she trust in you. Being nice and respectful for example, not saying bad word to someone to be depressed, saying please when you are asking someone for something can also make someone trust in you.
Seeking multiple opinion can make you have good relationship with someone.
Having a good relationship with someone is a good thing to do in life.
Having a good relationship with someone can make him or her get close to you . Helping your friend for example, helping him or her with his homework or something he or she needs help with , advising him or her to do the right if he or her did something wrong, being nice and respectful to everyone can also make someone have a good relationship with you.
Seeking multiple opinion allow you to make new friends. Sometime when you are making new friends you dont just have to make friends, you have to think about it .
Make a friend who respect everyone, correct you when you do something wrong and someone who is there for you because, when something happen to and you have a bad friend, he or she will not help you but, If you have a good friend, he or she will help you when you are in a bad situation. Good friends are all way there for you when you have a problem with something or someone.
Well that is what I think about seeking multiple opinion. I hope you know some benefit of seeking multiple opinion . Whould you like to seek multiple opinion from different people ? I also hope you learn smoething from what I think about seeking multiple opinion. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
8521B650F8A9 | Dear principal
I think that you should require students to perform community service.
It will help all elementary school students to do better on their school work. you can let students that are interested in this program to participate in it.
Students that do not want to participate, must let them do what they want.
Principal I will be part of this program and i will help those elementary school students.
you still have to ask the students that are interested if this program will affect their grades in school.
I will help you organize this program.
I will also bring as many tutors as possible.
I will try to make this program successful.
Many other students and parents are going to help us organize this program.
This program is going to help educate many elementary school students and make a good future for them.
I will do my best to make those students successful.
You should announce this program to the whole school so many people can participate.
We need as much students as possible.
Helping people is one of my hobbies.
We can also provide different interesting stuff that students can do during tutoring time.
We can provide sports and other things that they want.
We can make it as an after school program.
We should also provide buses to people that are going to stay.
Mr. Principal let me handle this program and make it ready for all students.
We should do our best to help those kids.
Parents can also help.
You can also ask for donations.
Mr. principal its my pleasure to help all students that need help.
sincerely: your student
Date: 2/15/11 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
852C90E3FA05 | Yes, I'm agree. I'm agree because the success consists of keep trying without never loss the enthusiasm. You need to keep trying until you get what you want because that's the goal.
I will give you, and tell you what a pass through like a example. When I came to the United States; It was a may 21, 2014 (I thinks that's the correct day, I'm not sure). I was 13 years old, almost 5 years ago. I didn't know any English, but I said to myself, "I'm never giving up, until i get it". That was my goal. I learned some English, how to write it, and how to speak it, although I'm still learning it, but I keep going trying it without giving up, and the most important think is without losing the enthusiasm because if we want something, we need to keep going, and trying until we get it.
Some people think they can do it, and those people prefer to gave up, and NO! That's wrong. YOU NEED TO KEEP GOING UNTIL YOU GET IT, and NEVER GIVE UP! That's it. :) | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
856351253492 | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." Will if you try will you be able to grow more? Does it matter what you eat? What can you do about you height? I disagree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson because i dont think that you can make yourself taller. He say if you try will it even work? I still think if you try it wont work because the height we have now is because our father in heaven made how we are now.
First, it doesn't matter if you try or not your height and how you look it comes from your parents genes, and it can also come from another family member. I don't think that you can do anything about your height because it depends on your family too. Even if you try you all you can do is to try to have a nice body, but about you height i don't think you could get taller then you already are. The only thing that can change is your body what i mean is if you chubby, over weight you can do excuse so you can have your body the you once wanted to have. If you really skinny you can eat a little bet more, but if you like how your are now you dont have to change anything. But like i always say "Love yourself and how you look no matter what people say, the only one who could change you is yourself."
Second, I don't think you can make yourself taller because there is no way that you can become taller then you already are , and don't you think that the really short people will be taller by now then shorter.
I think that they would not like to be short because in this world there is really mean people that will laugh about others, or how they look, and how short they are. So that is why I think that there is no way to make yourself taller.
Don't you think that short people will be short, and be laugh at no they would not like that son that is why i disagree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson.
In the other hand, it does matter to eat healthy so you can be in shape and you will be in this life longer. Normally you can do anything about your height because trust me if you could i've been taller by now. I don't like to be short because sometimes i get judged by my height, or how i look, and how chubby i am and i would like to have everything perfect like all those ladies and girls in the magazines or in the TV shows, and i would like to be 6 .3 ft tall then 5.3 ft. So yeah they is no way to change how you look , but by fixing yourself like: Appalachians, surge, and other things you understand what i mean right.
So that means that i still disagree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson because there is no way that people can make them self taller because even short people or person will be the size or shape they will like to be. This world is not that perfect because if it was everything or everyone will be how they world want to be in this world. So that is why i disagree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson as you can see i give reasons and examples.
This goes to the person that ready's my story please give me a changes to pass just one i have never pass an SOL before and i will be really happy if you could pass me just once in my life. On this one i have tried my really best so you could understand me what am talking about.
So please please please i beg you am just asking for just once; but if i don't pass thank you for taking your time on reading it; plus English is my second language and i dont understand it that much, and i can't read it that well either. | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
857574FE9711 | In my opinion.
I agree with Emerson to be right when he wrote everyone can do eny things, but not every one wants to work hard to do.
Example.
In my personan I think to have my own helicopter in the future.
In this word evething goods is posible something more than more beyonnd whtaever my effort my or how many i give to soporting them. Even in my life or my phat way so many dificult, but I velieved in my faiht there is nothing impossible.
But i have to work hard to get them ,because nothing come easy ,everything have price first then came be true, But I can't lose nothing to try ,try and try becouse wiil be successful In the future.
Even if I see now only in my dream and, dream in my future it's already mastered.
The people never grow because they fear to try, to do some bighest or highest is the most enemig byself .I can't grow more toll,but I tread believed in my self and first God, will be grow me in wisdom that is my best part I can't do by mayself,the first thing to is to have good health, and my family to.
So I agree to do something beyon what I already Mastered. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
857B7FB712ED | One topic " success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". when the person want to progress with something the person maybe failure or maybe not, if you work hart and you focuss on your goals because everybody try to do some better on his life.
I'm agree with churchill' because the statement is important role not always your won when the people has a goals , each time when we try something new, we will able to success the first time but the problens is to how your work for you not failure on your life. when you start everything is enthusiasm only you know how work going for the future you cant not failure.
Second ereason, the british prime ministern say that because maybe he do something and he try to do with different ways. The
British look at for you wan to have something good or other thing is when you start but the first thing is when you failure because not always your won on your goals but if you want to mejories your own life, you need to focus on goals and them you will have your success on life. When you get a success, your was enthusiasm.
Last reason, I see if you want to be successful on your high school or in your job you only need is beleive in your self.
Because you was enfocus at 100% when you wannt or need something tat was be more easy for you beacuse you work really hart for take a success because when you have success you was a enthusiasm and them you try to work more and them in your future was more success.
conclusion. to the british say that is really important because not all of person want to work hart for won and them take success. On my case when i start study on Generic_School , I failure to many time on my class because on the time i dont like do nothing but when i failure the last time on my sol . I say and thing own my self , to i want success on my class . My goal and dreams is pass my sol and graduated from Generic_School. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
85808F0851D8 | Some schools offer distance learning as a option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing.
My position on this issue, I think students would not benifits from being able to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing, because schools programmes its helping you to get more informations, learning more things to get high level.
For example when you attend classes in the schools it will be conversations between the teachers and students about the term than you will benifits more informations and working between students like a groups its reason to get more knowledge.
attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing you will not have attention like in schools classrooms because the teachers they helping you to understand and explaine more.
When you have a research at schools attend classrooms you can use technology and books and you can work like groups it will be more easy to do your research. But when you have attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing you will not have a conversation between others students to get more knowledge.
In my opinion, I prefer schools attend classes because when you focus with the teacher you will understand more about the term. For expample in my english class i pay attention at the class i can understand, and when i have a questions i ask my teacher to explaine for me.
I desagree with students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Some courses you can't take it at home because you you need to worked like a groups. For example when i have work to do at schoul classroom's we work together to make the exrcises or a topic easy, and when you get absent and you left some works the teachers helping you to do it.
The schools classrooms programmes will help you about the time and they have specific time to work confortable and to know what have to do, some students they need support from they teachers and counselors to make sure they do alright. For example when i need support my teachers they support and they give me enough time to make i understand everythings.
Students who choice to learn at home by way of online or video conferencing they will not get conversation with speaking with others and with teachers. For examlpe when you have to work on topic it will be hard for some students to understand more.
In my opinion for the students who prefer to attend school classroom's it's good decision, because they will have more infermations and more experience about the way to make a plan and more knowledge about the courses you taking at school.
I think students would not benifit from being able to attend classes from home. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
858DFA7A9980 | Good Morning,
I just want to start this letter by telling you a little bit more about my interest towards your company . As a matter of fact, the day I heard about the oportunities our school were giving to some students to be able to visit some companies. I absolutely want it participate, Because I want to develope more practice and skills about the job I would want to have when I get out of Collage .
Farther more, I'm very interest to work for a Microsoft company that has being my dreams sinse the day I started using computers and I would want it create something that can help others and create new technology for future Generations. However in my school theres not a lot of programs or clases about computer management or software programing, that could help me and other students to improve our nolage about computer Software. I would want to learn more and get more experience about crearting and fixing computers.
For sure woking at a Microsoft company is what I want to do for a living. Also allowing me to come and visit one of the companies would help me undertand what I'm going to be facing in the future when I start working for a big company
For example, what is exactly the job I'm going to be doing or what job I be able do enjoy doing , or what is going to take to get there etc.
If you allow me this oportunity I can show you my skills and you can see and judge me by my job or what I can do. I belive I can be caplabe to do very creative work and come up with ideas in a matter of seconds to improve new producs. And this oportunity can help me figure out what other type of work i can be able to do.
I appreciate the oppotunities your companies are giving to our school and other schools in general, but now I would want to know if you could give me chace and the privilege to come to one of your companies and learn more about Microsoft Programing and computers. I believe I can apport a lot to this company. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
8593D649EBE4 | Dear, TEACHER_NAME
I know that us student are responsible for our grades in school but a B average just to play sports or be i some sort of activity is pretty dumb most students have C averages if you change this policy you will have lots of mad parents or students i think you don't want to be the bad guy here. I think and i think i speak for the whole school we at least should have a D average because if you really want to play in a sport or do an activity you should keep your grades up above an F that way you passing you class or classes but you also know that its not all fun and games you have to do your studies first in order to be in any type of activity and if you do good in school you can accomplish anything in life. I know parents say that its good to be in any type of sport but you have to like its because it keeps you out of trouble well its true i mean if you change this policy you might see this straight student go from a good student to always calling his/her patrol officer to see if he/her doesn't have any type of weapon's please TEACHER_NAME think about how this is going to affect the students and our community. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
85C54BD4D416 | Thomas Jefferson, writer of the Declaration of Independence and founding father of the United States, once said, "Determine never to be idle...it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." In Jefferson's eyes, a world spent in constant work and motion represents a more productive and accomplished world. However, there is merit in a world that does not work without break and resolves to be idle at times. A world that is always working may also be a world that is burning out, diminishing the value of building connections and reflecting. A world that is idle when it recognizes its need to be has more value than a world that is always working, as it allows time for cognitive development and reflection, mental health, and inspiration.
In the body, the brain represents an entity that is constantly developing, creating new ideas, and planning for the future. If a human was always working, there would be no time to create new ideas or plan. The potential of the human brain would reduce, as the human brain would never have the time to step back and reflect on its past experiences and how it wants to reflect lessons learned from those experiences in the future. For example, if Thomas Jefferson had not taken time off to create new ideas and plan for his country before writing the Declaration of Independence, the United States would be very different from the way it is today. Every idea would be thought of on the spot, and the potential ramifications and consequences of each idea would not be carefully taken into consideration. In addition, the human brain requires breaks to keep working, just as the human body needs sleep to continue on the next day in a healthy state. Time spent idle does not equal time spent wasted; time spent idle is time spent reflecting, planning, and developing. Time spent being idle carries the potential to be a valuable learning experience to the human life, as well. In colleges, the requirements for acceptance do not only include academic excellence - they also include extracurriculars and attention to when the brain needs a break. If students did not take time off to develop, their potential for achievement in life would reduce. Therefore, a world spent constantly working does not always represent a world of accomplishment.
Some argue that if one is not always working, then one cannot accomplish as much as one can, as a minute spent idle could lead to a day spent idle, and so on. Contrastingly, if one is always working, then one has a much greater risk of crashing. Mental health is an essential reason as to why the world today does not and cannot constantly work as Jefferson wants it to. Many studies show that top students in classes, those who never stop working towards their goals, can have a greater risk of developing depression, anxiety, or addiction to drugs. This is because their brains cannot comprehend the constant work, and moves to other unhealthy tactics of releasing emotions. Several stories in the world detail the downfall of the most intelligent people, simply because the never took a break for themselves. Furthermore, if one's life is spent constantly working, one's brain is exposed to extreme competition and high standards. These two concepts are unhealthy for the human brain, as one may believe that they actually are not working hard enough and need to work themselves even harder, when reality shows that they already work themselves unhealthily. This concept ties in with the concept of unhealthy comparison, which further proves why mental health is one of the largest reasons as to why the world cannot constantly work. Those who always work also always compare themselves to others who are working, and often times do not take into account that what they are doing is very unhealthy. All of these concepts combined greatly heighten the chance in the deterioration of mental health. A world spent working constantly is a world exposed to bad mental health.
Finally, if the world is spent constantly working, then there is no time for inspiration of any sort. If one's brain is constantly in a working state, it will never spend time appreciating the beauty of the world around it and taking in inspiration for future plans. A prime example of this concept is the work of artists. If an artist such as Vincent Van Gogh or Claude Monet was constantly working, said artist would never spend time collecting inspiration, and the work of said artist would be mediocre instead of beautiful and inspiring. Inspiration flows from person to person, and if everyone was working constantly, no one would serve as a source of inspiration for others around them. Also, brainstorming represents one of the most important parts of formulating any plan for any person in any situation, and constant work does not allow time for that brainstorming and inspiration to occur. In schools, teachers emphasize the necessity of brainstorming before writing, and this concept is emphasized so much because inspiration is what leads to the development of mankind. Role models also result from the need for the world to take a break, as it allows for humans to gather inspiration from others and plan how they want to lead their lives. Thus, if the world was constantly working, there would be no inspiration. Without inspiration, the world would not be where it is today.
Cognitive development and reflection, mental health, and inspiration represent three of the most essential reasons as to why the philosophy of Thomas Jefferson cannot apply to how the world works today. Constant work leads to stunted development, deteriorated mental health, and no sources for inspiration. Without time spent being idle, the inventions, buildings, ideas, movies, and other parts of the world today would have never come to fruition. A person always working does not represent a person living life to the fullest. The United States and our world today would not be the same without time spent idle, | 4.5 | 5 | 5 | 4.5 | 5 | 5 |
85C71A1E0117 | Yes, i am agree with Emerson`s statement about show your own individuality.
I believe that each person has 2 face`s 1 is used in the work or in the school,and the other face is showing on specific moments in your life as stress or your soccer team is losing 5-2.
one example of that is: when you are so angry an involuntary you use bad word, and after that you feel very well with yourself. Although what you make,but some part of you is broken for what you did;That simple think make you more human as anyone in this world, because is innecesary try to be perfect when you are not ready to be perfect in this accomplishment and wonderfull world. Being more specific about my statement lets talking about; a tennager he has 17 years their birthday is in january 12 when he come to united state he had 14 years then in 3 years on school.
He make friends but those were more adult`s for them but that neve was something important to him that really change now, nevertheless every friend that he make left the school, the acctitude of him change now;he make sure to pass 2 SOL in the 11 grade but also something in their hearth was gone. He is trying to make new friend`s but no matter hom much he want their head is thinkig just as a adult; i think that this teeanager can make new friend`s why it is simple he has other face but his feelings are from a children. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
85D3E5A1D64E | Students chould not be required to take a music, a drama or an art class. Student should only be required to take classes that they actually need. Having to take those classes just adds classes you need to graduate. It is also all a waist of time if the students are not actually in to it.
Firstly, these classes are just extra classes that we dont really need. In my opnion, I believe that student should be able to graduate highschool with the classes they need. English, Math, History and Science are all classes that can support them when they go to college. If student don't take these classes they may also graduate ealier then they are supposed to. For example, I go to a highschool where I get the credits I need and I am able to graduate a year earlier. Which I think everyone should have the chance too.
Lastly, if a student is not interested in one of these classes they won't try. Even if they do try and fail then its just holding them back. They will start stressing over it when they won't actually end up needing it. Student will also consume most of their time bringing up their grade in these classes that they will not work on other classes. Then they will end up failing.
On the other hand, some might say these classes should be required because student might find interest in one of those and would like to persue it after graduating. I think that if a student is interested then they should be allowed to take the class of your choice. However, if your not then you should not be pushed to take them when you dont want to.
In conclusion, student should not be forced to take elcective classes. If they want to they should but if not then they shouldnt need it to graduate. Electives are just extra classes needed to graduate and they also have no pont if the student are not actually interested. po p | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
85E3C840FCBF | I agree with the idea of a year-round school because It sounds great to me. This idea has a lot of benefits towards the students and also the educators too. This idea provides a beneficial environment for both the students and the educators.
One of the reasons that this is a great idea is that,It makes the students to retain information easily when they get back from their break. They would retain information easily because the break they were given wasn't a long break and that will help them remember the materials that they were taught before the break. The other reason is that,the students will gain more knowledge by learning more materials. They will learn a lot of which will be beneficial to them,not only inside the school but also outside the school. They will also stay on task and be more focused on their studies.
Another reason is that,this idea of a year-round school will make work easy for the educators. It will make their work easy by not making them repeat the materials that the previously have taught because the students are able to remember the materials easily. They won't be forced to create retake tests and assignments and that would allow them to have an easy job. An example of why a year-round school is beneficial is that,It creates an environment where the students enjoy learning and the educators enjoy teaching.
Lastly,I would say that a year-round school is a great idea because It creates an environment where both the students and the educators can benefit from. It Impacts both the students and the educators in a productive way. The students would have more passion and love towards learning while the educators would also gain more passion towards their profession and remarkably enjoy teaching. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
85F4C57672EA | "Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home"? I do not believe that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. I believe the students can get distracted so easily at home. For example, you start watching a movie; when you were supposed to your homework. That would affect your grade because you didn't do it on time. Another, example is when your mom tell you to buy something and then you forgot what were you doing. In addition, time is another reason why is not beneficial taking classes from home.
Time is one of the consequences attend to classes online is not beneficial because unexpected things can happen. You can't control time. For example, someone in your family die or they have a car crash or even work schedule. Those examples can affect you by reducing the time and material you were to work on. That's why you can't predict what is unexpected. Unexpected times take away your energy, concentration and comprehension on what your studying. Another, reason why classes from home isn't good.
Energy keep you awake. Being concentrate shows interest on what you doing and comprehension is how much you understand. If you're sleepy you cannot do any of that. However, I want to focus more in the comprehension part. Never ever compare a teacher vs a computer. For example, you didn't understand the new unit because is confusing, you can always put your hand up and ask the teacher. The teacher will explain at their best for you to comprehend. On the contrary, you can't do it because you're at home and nobody can explain the material you don't understand.
Some students agree they can benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they can do it later, if they miss something on class. Also, they can study anywhere they can have access to it. That reject to be in certain place. You're free to study and work without any restrain. All you need is to manage your time.
You be able to kill two birds on the same shot.
To conclude, students will realize that a teacher is way better than a computer. The teachers study the materials on what they gonna teach and they graduate from college, gain a diploma of what they teaching you. They have the proof and I believe they are doing the right choices about giving you materials for you on the future. That's why i would never change them for one computer at home. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
85F5FADDDC0E | Here's a fact why you should go to the museum, going to a museum helps you pay attention more. A museum is an enjoyable, education activity here's why I think it is, you can be with your friends,learn new things school hasn't taught you yet,you get to move around.
First of all, you can hang out with your friends, so both of you can learn together, understand, spend together so you both can know each other better. Usually when you hang out with someone when it's not during school you can build your friendship stronger, trust each other better. You feel a lot comfortable around people when you both learn together. Bonding together with someone is really important helps you communicate to your friends, when you forget what happen the next day you could ask your friend.
Secondly, you can learn new things school hasn't taught you yet, or understand things school taught you, but you forgot half of the things. You can review it again, you can also be ready when school teaches you that lesson or subject and you would already know what happen. Study shows if you go to a museum you will likely pass that class you're struggling with. When you go to a museum, improve you listening skills and pay attention better, later on you can pass your tests and SOLS.
Finally, you get to move around when you're in school your brain gets tired so it focuses on other things when it should be paying attention,your brain pays attention when you're moving. When you're sitting down you usually think about sleeping soon, and you forget things fast when you don't pay attention and get a bad grade in that class. Or forget what to turn in,or even forget to write important things down like notes, tips, what you're gonna do tomorrow in school. Moving around calms your brain down and your body too, you wouldn't feel rushed, or you wouldn't feel sleepy at all.
In conclusion, this is why you should go to a museum, you can be with your friends, learn about new stuff you didn't know about, and move around. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
861349CA778E | The reason why the school board shouldn't add hours to school because students already go to school to much and they would like more time off of school so they can do their homework, hangout with their friends, play sports out of school, and get more time to do their chores around the house.
The school board shouldn't add more hours because if students have appointments then they will have to put a later time but if the place of their appointment closes a little early then the students will have to leave school and that will make them have missing work, late work, more work to do at home with little amount of time, and more stress for the students to finish the work on time.
If the school board adds hours it will become a disaster for the students that have a job and need to get there in time also if they live far from their job their boss could get mad at them for being late and if they dont belive their worker they could get fired and then the student won't have a job, they won't get paid, and they won't have money to pay for what they need.
This is why the school board shouldn't add hours to school. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
861B660C2E86 | Would you want your comunication skills to be much greater than they are now, or being able to make good choices that you think can help you out. If you do the best way you can start is by seeking multiple opinions from other people.
If your asking how can this help me, well their are mant ways this can help you out. I will talk abot 3 ways it can help you out and that is by improving your comunication skills, helps make good choices, and can help you give advise to others.
Lets talk about the first way it can help, seeking new opinions from others will require comunication skills and by talking to new people your skills can improve daily.
It would also help on making choices and you can have more then one option when having to make decisions this can make you more independent and you can relie on your self much more and wont pick someone else to do it,
this is very important because once you become an adoult you will be on your own and having to make more choices for your self, and your family, this is why seeking help first can help you in the future and you can have much more choices from the people you have listend to.
It can also help you quide others and give them advice like family, friends, at work, and you can quide your kids and be a good parent as well, its just like how a teachers job is to quide their students so that in the future they can become someone important.
Now that i gave you 3 reasons on why this topic can help you now and in the future I think its time for you to go talk to more people get different opinions and ansewrs to your problems and you can chose wich choices souts you the most. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
862ACD748291 | the effect of the program is a good thing because it can help the younger who to behave in classes and other stuff and learn form the older students the good part
1) the older students can help and teach the younger one who to behave in the class and they can make a good effed tried to teach them.
2) the younger students learn form the older one so they can learn form them.
3) if they learn they can teach the more youngest or the new kid by doing that the bad part
1) the bad part of this is that the youngest can get in trouble if they go whit the kid that don't behave correct in the class.
2) they can get in trouble if they miss behave and be whit the wrong people in the school.
3)
some people want to make trouble and can make the younger kid in a big trouble by teach them bad behave.
the thing is that the program can run well but if people that just want to mess up other is not a good idea and that's why the progra can hep other make and do good decision . | 1.5 | 1.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
863550AEB938 | I agree, they should adopt the 10 P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight weekend curfew. Parents wouldn't be worrying all the time, kids would be focusing more on school, and curfew could teach kids how to be more responsible. Teenagers mostly want to go out and have fun with their friends. Teens are more outgoing when their around their friends. Teenagers might even be disrespectful to their parents if they don't let them go out. Teenagers should feel more grateful because of this curfew law.
Parents are mainly worried about where their children might be because nowadays there are so many things going on in society and we might not even know. That's why parents would feel like it's a great idea for the city council to put this new law. When parents let their children go out with their friends they usually tell them a time they may go and a time to come back. Most of the time kids don't even listen to their parents and they just come back at whatever time they want, but if they put this law parents wouldn't feel as worried as they usually do when they let their children go out. Kids would actually listen to what their parents are telling them and not just leave and come back at whatever time they want like if they didn't have parent's. Society now is really dangerous compared to back then because theres a lot of kidnapping, even killing teenagers. Now the fact that they brought this law parents might start to feel relived because they know that if their children are out on the streets after ten p. m. then they will get caught by the police and they'll have to face their actions.
If they put the 10 P.M. curfew law. Kids would go home early to their parents. Kids would go to sleep early. If teenagers would go to sleep early they would be getting a good night sleep and also they would probably not be falling asleep in class most of the time and actually paying attention in class. Teenagers sometimes think it's not important to learn like if it isn't important. Thats why they go out with their friends and forget theres even school the next day, but their wrong. We indeed need school to educate ourselves and so we can be a better person in the future. There are so many things teens can avoid so they can focus in their school and grades, but sometimes we make poor decisions by not listening to the adults.
Curfew teaches teens to be more responsible. They learn how to manage time and see if they can make it on time because if they don't. They know their going to get in trouble. Teenagers shouldn't be in the streets after 10 P.M. and if they are then its probably not something good their doing. Teens could avoid getting in trouble by the cops or anything by simply going home. Sometimes teenagers like to learn the hard way instead of the easy way. If they don't listen after they've been told a million times then they have to face their consequences. Teens should look at this new law as protection from not getting hurt or anything harmful.
In conclucion, If they choose the ten p. m. curfew hopefully teenagers start listening and respecting the time their parents want them home. Hopefully theres a change in teenagers learning in school, and on how responsible they are. Hopefully they know how to manage their time around their friends and not get in trouble. They should be more considerate about how much their parents worry about them every time they go out and anywhere they are at. At the end of the day this is only doing the best to help teenagers from being in any type of trouble. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
8656F070846C | I agree with these statement because the students need to finish the school for graduate.
Many parents support they's sons.
After you finish the school need to looking for a job.
For example i divided my time for study and working after school.
It's a hard work but is necessarily for a better life.
The people need to divide the time for doing many things.
Many people do not done the school for different reasons for example, disscution with the parents a bad relationship parents with the sons.
Sometimes the students do not pay attention in class because in home they have a lot of problems.
The students can't concentrate because the problems between the parents affect they's life.
My life is come be hard because i do not have my parents by my size is sadness know they's far away of me.
Keep you brain busy thinking good idea is better that stay on home doing anything.
When i was begin to study i was so scared because i had not idea about a word in English.
The teacher do not understand the Spanish people ,if they are in similar situation was same thing because they don't speak Spanish. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
8658D3ABB67F | The meaning of this is to save all the energy that we can. In all the schools spend a lot of energy using; cell phones, internet or using the computers doing test, works or homeworks. It is probable that students and teachers are not agree to extending the school day two hours.
First, the schools don't need the follow that model and also to extending the school day two hours. If all the schools are agree about to extending two hours more, then they are braking the rule to converse more energy and resources. It is a lot of things that schools can use and the principal thing that school are using is energy. In the school office all the teachears are working all the time making copies, works and they are doing a lot of files.
Second, it's not necessary to extending two hours more in the schools, students can do campaigns to how reduce the energy or making groups of people and try to do things that help to conserve more energy. In this case we can created proyects that help better to try to not spend a lot of energy in fact to try to conserved. And then conserve some of energy.
Third, some of the students can created devises for extract the solar energy and used. Teachers can help to support to the students creating more ideas or proyects. Maybe is not going to change as how much energy we are using, but it is some that helps to reduce the energy, the point is to try to conserve the energy that we are using.
At this point to conserve energy and resources schools can follow that model, extending tha school day two hours. They have a lot of time to make more proyects maybe better ideas to how conserve the energy.
In all the cases the people, students, and teachers are not agree to extending the school day two hours. Beacuse it is something that we can stop it, making proyects to conserve de energy and resources. To sharing the campaings to anothers students. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
869B37DA1D3E | Dear: Generic_Name
I Understand that you are concidering the idea to work in group. I appreciate what are you trying to do and I agree with, for two reasons I think working in group can give you a lot of benefits because you can help each other, so you can do a better job and, also you can share differents ideas with your parners.
The first reason is that you can do a better job working in group. For example when I am working in group in my job I ask my parners to check my work to make sure I am doing a good job.
additianally, you can share different ideas with your parners or also, you can share your toys that you usually use for work. For example when I am working in group with my class I always ask my friends if I can use their stuf.
Therefore I strongly believe that working in group give you a lot of benefits. which I allow with positive for two reasons. you can do a better job helping each other and, also you can share your ideas with your parners. thank for your time.
sencerly:
Generic_Name | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
869CC4EDD3B5 | It working in a group more better or we get beneficial them working alone?
working in group have many beneficial them working alone. In my opinion working in group is better them working alone. Because friends or partners can help us to do the work better and more simple. Also we all can do the work more faster than doing the work alone. And we don't feel the job or work hard as we usually felt doing alone.
Friends or partners can help us to do the work better and more simple. And we all put our interest to do the best as we can with the work. And we try that the work look good and nice. Also we put our effort to do the work and that the teacher see that we all work together. And we try our best to do the work the way that she or he wanted to be. And friends or partners can be good if we need to do a drawing or with the hand writing. Also if you're partners help you with the work the teacher is going to sacrifice with the work that all of you are doing.
We all do the work more faster than doing the work alone. Because we try that everyone have one part of the work. And that way we can finish the work fast. Also everyone participate in the work. And we all have some part of the credit. Also we try to do the work fast but also we try that the work look good. And we no just do the work fast because we want to finish quick and them do nothing. Sometime it because the teacher a specific time to finish and with a group we can finish on time and also the work can look good too.
We don't feel the job or work hard as we usually felt doing the work alone. We don't feel the work hard because we separate the work in parts. And if there is 4 in a group we all 4 do a list one part of the work. Also in a group there is always one or two person that know how to draw, have a good hand writing, or know how to decorate, and one that is looking the thing we need in internet for the work. Also we divide the part to every person and we all are attendant that the work do okay. The job is more easy to do if there if more than one doing the same work.
In my final opinion I think that work in group it better them working alone . Because working in groups have many beneficial that we can use wisely. But if you are working in ground and the group is doing nothing if better for you working alone in that situation. Because you have to intelligent and organize first and everyone know what they have to do we all can get a good grade in the work. Some of the benefits that we can get working in groups are. Work with friends or partners can help us to do the work better and more simple. Also we can do the work more faster than doing the work alone. And final we don't feel the job or work hard s we usually felt doing alone. Also working in groups it help to the development. For me it better working in a group have many beneficial and is very helpful to do the work good and nice foe the teacher can be proud of the group work. And also is mire fun to be in a group with your fiends and all of you get a good grade. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
86A511A55117 | I think students can benefit if they are able to attend classes from home, even know the distance but learning as a option for students who wants to finish a carear or have a good job.
Take those classes online or videos conferencing is not the same thing like to be able to go to classes. In class students can ask about any question they have or get the information they are looking for, and the schools teacher can see how they are learnig but, online they don't have much oction like read a book or be able to ask any question they have to anybody.
Attend to classse is great is a oction from student to choose but is the smart oction for for student who know what they want to do in they future. Schools is a place where students have the desition by you're own. There is where students can start makeing options and try finish what they really dream. Be able to atted classes from home is hard thing to discuss but when students are able to go there is great bacause is where they have to be and never give up during that time.
School is not a principle to starts getting information about how thing are working, or what options we can choose for be a porofessional after schools. Prevent oction in schools is preposterous because that is not ducing, good octions during school.
Students who rually have the decition to go to schools even know the distace but they are benefit. that is a oction, but when they get there is alot of information and option they can lissend from teachers and other students. When they go to schools they are giving a step more every day, to them life and they are benefit in school for the alot of option they can have in schools.
Schools is a benifif for all yung people to learnd how start life, when you get out from schools and have a good job. for have the opportunite, students need finish school firts. Not matter the distance or the skills they have during that period time. after that they will see how everything is change to be better in they way.
For somo students is hard to make that decition.
But when they have the oction and they can do it is a good thing because they can learning more about and have more opportunities when they graduate from schools thay have good jobs and more oction to choose.
Some students think is preposterous to to make decition in schools, bacause is alot of oction they can choose, and alot thing they want to be but they only have somo octions. For somo of then is hinder to go and pick that oportunities.
Instance when students live far fom schools is hard to get there they need like a car to get there, but parents are allways insist to students to go to schools not matter how hard is all they wants is a good future for they childrens.
School is a personality decition in life, butsmart decition for people who is looking for good oction in life. Ertheless who finish school have more oction the people who don't finish. During school students need have to be inmate because schools is a hard time.
For students in schools is like stairway, because they walk aroung getting information, that is a good oction for teachers, to stall information and try to preparate students to then life. One way to be a perfectionist is graduste from schools.
Fanally when students finish schools they did a good job and they have more option to choose. More of they have good jods or go to college and finish a carear, and they know how follow the the dreams, because when they was in chools there was alot of skills and the crusts those over and over that was like the firts hard thing they start with, that was alot of bad action they can choose but they don't choose any of those. Finally finish with right thing, Now is fancy work and alot oction to choose in life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
86B2AFB816D5 | Most employers are looking for specific characteristics in a potential employee. The employers look for people's responsible, and make a good job. Most time the employee do not have experience, and many time the employers look those. Many people look for a job without have experience for a better life, and learning new stuff. In lots places taking decision for giving job for people's do not have experience.
First, most of people do not have to study by cause not working, by do not have experience, and do not can pay the study. The employers can giving news opportunities of working for people's have a better life, and future. Anyhow, the employee doing a hard-working, and the employers be glad. When the employee doing a hard-working is for news opportunities.
Second, nevertheless when you are responsible may-be your employers giving a raise. To be a good employee help always for letter of recommend about your ability. Also more people have the requisite by working; although needing experience but can learned. A job can teach the people's a lot things. For example, responsibility, respect, and more manners. The manners is very important in your potential, and your characteristics is important too, because the employers evaluate this.
Some may say, which people's do not have experience can not working, because thinking this persons have a bad conduct. Most employers think which the employee do not following the rules, and doing a bad job. When the employers misjudge a people's because not have experience this remove the opportunities; but the reality is everyone learning, and have the privilege of working. The people want learning about the job for more experience, and a better future.
In conclusion, many people need a opportunities, and show off the potential. I'am a good candidate for working, because I have manners and learning fast. The reality is which work help me for my future,and giving more experience. In fact all word need the opportunities for working, and general a good future. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
86BB790A5875 | The more the better ! Getting Advice from many people is something that every person has do at least once. Getting advice from many people can help you get a different perspective, it can help you in the future,and it can help the community.
Having a different perspective is really good . When you have a different perspective of something you might have a better adtuided . Let's say you fail a test and you have a really bad adtuided and you asked many people what could you do to help and what they say can make you feel better which causes you to have a better a adtuided. Having different perspective also gives you different opinion. I believe that having different opinions is something you should always consider because you most likely will hear the same thing and you might like what they say but you might hear something different and you might like it even more. Having a different perspective can not only give the situation a better perspective but it can also give you a different perspective. Hear me out not only can other peoples perspective give the situation a different point of view but yourself as well. I believe that having advice from many people can really help you have a better perspective, adtuided,and understanding.
Advice from more then one person can help your future. As you grow up you will release that you start to ask for more and more advice. I think the more you ask for advice the more you are most likely to be successful in your future. Advice that is given to you now will help you your whole life. For example my teacher once told me that not understanding how to do something is okay because from that is how we learn from it. The advice given to you is something you will pass down . I think that it's amazing how much advice form who know how long ago has come so far. Advice can help you in the future by developing more and more,remembering it though your life,and pass it on to other generations.
Advice also helps the community. It is proven that when advice is given the community becomes better. I believe that the community can become better when given advice. Part of becoming a better community is teaching others how they can become better. I think that this can be done with giving others advice. When advice is spread form person to person it spreads form community to community and then it spreads from state tot state and eventually the world. Advice needs to be spread all over the world and to make all our communities a better place. Advice can not only impact the community but the world as well
Asking for opinions from more then one person can help you see different opinions,help you later in life, and help the world. Advice can help to see different points of view, help you in your ,and help our community become better. In conclusion I believe that getting advice can help having different perspective and help the community. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
86E335C1EB06 | Is it a good idea for a young students to commit to a career in high school? It's a great idea so students can work on there career, and not need to focus on what they don't need in high school, to work towards their career. Reasons I agree are, they may want to follow their parents choice in career, can use school courses to excel in career choice, and why it's a good idea to start a young age.
They can follow their parents choice in career. That can be a easy choice for many people, because the student can ask for advice from their parents. They can ask their parents what courses' they took as a young student as they once were. The reader may be asking "what if their parents' didn't go to high school?" that can be true and what if the career the parents' have isn't for the student to follow. Then they don't have to follow their parent career, and they can choice their own career, or any close family members, or anyone they look up to, and would like to be as close as possible as them when their older. You can always just follow your own career and can start a generation for your family to follow your example.
If the parent choice didn't work they can choose what classes they can take to help them reach the career the student wants. Schools are all different so not all of them will have the same courses. Example if you want to be a chef and some sort of cook, you can take a cooking courses for the year. The teacher can show you how to prepare a dish and how to present. There are so many choices in career's you can pick from. If you want to be a engineer you have to take your four main classes Math,Science,History,English. These classes will help you in the long run through high school years. The more experience you get from this courses will give you in vantage to the other student that choice your career later in their high school years.
Finally the last reason, why it's a good idea to start early. It's pretty simple that you don't have to worry about what your career is going to be. It can be a lot easier if you know what you want to be, you can already plan the courses you would like to take. When people ask you "what are you going to do when your done with school?" you would say "it's none of your business will see in the years to come!". You shouldn't say that it's just rude to say. When someone does say that you would have a answer and you should say it proudly. You would just focus on what you need to do. Don't let anyone distract you on what you want to do.
Conclusion on why it's a good ideal for students' to have a career choice in their younger age. Following parents or close family member to the career they choice. If their career choice isn't for you, make a career you can follow and want to follow. Taking courses in school that can help you excel in career that you picked for yourself. When asked that question on what your going to be, you'll be ready answer it. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
86ECF13FEDEF | Why I disagree that first impression are almost likely to never change overtime? Well,In this world many people have experience bad,nice,and fake first impressions. Why because people have a bad feeling about you, you are not aware of what is happening in their heads, and maybe they just wanna take advantages of your personality or who you are.
One, First Impressions that I deal with everyday is give nice impressions with my friends. However, the person need to be interest on the topic you're talking about or just be goofy. People sometimes come up to you and smile and said hi or was sup because they know you're alone. If you wanna make new friends or have the respect that you want you only got to show them your nice impression. For Example: In the movie Everything,Everything the girl couldn't go outside because she could get sick,but the new neighbor his name is Generic_Name and he decided to smile and said hi through the window. She smile back to him and then she went to bed.
Two, I have experience bad impressions about people being rude for no reason. They bring a side of me that when they said bad stuff they think that I am going to stay quiet. I just give them the same energy back because nobody deserved to be treated on a bad way when you're trying to just said Hi or want a new friends. If your in pain or suffering don't take out your anger on others cause for a first impression you going to be looking like a bad guy. For Example: If a Hispanic kid decide to ask a person for the class room number and that person start to laugh in his face the Hispanic kid gonna feel oppress and feel bad. People don't realize that by first impressions you could win the whole world, but no people like to be hard and act childish.
Three,Fake Impressions make the person to take advantage of your opportunities and your personality. The person wants attention all the time but then start talking mess up things about you. I have experience people making fake impressions when they said Hi they look at you a certain way that you know is wrong. Fake Impression led you to think that the other person is talking behind your back. The person pretends to like you, but in particular the person don't care about your feelings or the friendship. For Example: My Ex BFF a year before we stop talking we meet and is was fun, but until I left to VA she decide to not care for me,text me, or call me. That hurt me so much that months past by an you even feel better without that friend because since the begging she was giving me fake impressions and I didnt catch on.
In conclusion, Sometimes you need to calm down before to start speaking to a person. Be nice and never let negative thoughts on your mind that are going to make you look bad. Let people talk to you first and then think about their first impression. I been nice, but sometimes I gotta get mad with people cause they don't even know you and start calling you names but is not worth it to think about that cause that said a lot about their first impressions. First Impressions will never change cause once you speak whatever come out your mouth is gonna stick to that person forever. You know that you when accomplish somebody smile or laugh that's everything to them is important that is their first reaction and by First Impression you can win the world by been nice all the time and make new friends or win the respect that you deserve or them. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
86F87A96D2DB | Some schools have a program that older student and the young ones that could help one another. For example, the young students could get some advice from the older ones because they ready took the program or the Sol before so can help them understand what their are trying to do. Another example, would be that the older ones can learn new things from the young student to see what is different from the past and preisant. Last example, that the older student and the young student can help each other out to come up with an ideas so other student can help out to try and make the a bigger program. Some school do not have program but they should so others student can get to now each other and even have ideas that can help others.
Secondly, student form lower grade to higher grade level should be a in the program to learn stuff new. For example, if they don't understand they could ask one of the student to get help of understanding. Another example,the older student be in the program to help a younger to try and make something easy to him. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
875151F79017 | Students should not be alowd to graduate with the three year program because the student my have a job, focus on there academics, be involved in a extra curricular activities after scholl. Students may have or need a job for many such ass, being able to sport there family so they are not always going to be available after school to attend those classes required to graduate in 3 years. Students my also need to save up for a higher education if they plane on attending a 4 year university or even attending a community college. students also need some time of work expires so they need that job so they are able to put on there resume that they have some form of work expires so if they decide that right after high school they want to just jump in into the work force they have some type of work expires. Another reason why students should not be allowed to do the 3 year program is because its going to be stressful trying to put a 4 year education in 3 years. Some students take advance courses that are more chalaging, and give out more homework then regular classes. some students are not going to be available after school because they may have to stay after school to retake important quizzes or test that are going to affect a big part of there grade. A student may have to go home and work on big projects or homework so there ability to stay after school is going to be limited due to the fact that they have homework to do and other assignment. One other major reason is that the student with be involved in extra curricular activity such ass sports some sports can be year around sports so even is not there season they still have to condition and train for the upcoming season so they are most likely going to have to stay after school hours to do those things. another reason is that they might be involved in clubs so they also have to stay after school and also have to do some type of volunteering in the community so thats going to take away time so they may not be away available to attend to all the required classes to be able to graduate using the 3 year program. another reason is that they might have tutoring either at home or in school so they are able to get help on homework and other material that they need help with projects and stuff like that.
My conclusion is that no students should not be alowd to graduate early using the 3 year program, became is going to add on to things that the students already have going on in there lives so i believe student should just graduate with there class and take there time and graduate high school in 4 years. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
87669696162F | do you agree or disagree with the statement?
in my personal opinion i do agree that first impressions are almost impossible to change. its impossible to change because thats the very first time you meet someone new in your life. first impressions are very important. there is no way you can change first impressions its not like we can go back in time to switch our answer. making a bad first impression can go very wrong but thats that its done and you cant go back. for example like making a first impression at a job interview like obviously making a good impression is very important if you want a job.
i can also understand why some may say "almost impossible" because technechly you kinda can. for example if both of you say "can we start over" or something like that. your always going to have that impression from the first time you guys ever meet. so really it goes both ways how someone may take it. i personal dont agree with that because it dosent sound right or feel right. some may move on and ectually forget. while others may not and mentally remmber.
inconclusion it is all based on the reader and how they take it. like i have mention i personal dont think you can change your first impression. we cant go in time and change the past. it donesnt sound reasonablie theres no real reason. some may agree with what i say some may not. then again i can kinda see how someone may want or how to change there first impression. | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
87692B9A8184 | Have you ever felt that the weekend isn't enough? that you might wanted to do some kind of activities during weekend, but the time wasn't enough. I bet that you did it, and I'm going show you my point of view of why we should keep having a normal school week of five days instead of a four-day school week.
Although some say that my school should adopt a four-day school week by adding two hours each day. Actually, my school should not adopt that kind schedule, because the standard week with eight hours each day increases the productive time, and the standard week allows student to do other activities after school, such as: work, to do homework, sports or even spend more time with family and friends.
Those who believe that the school should changed their schedule from standard five-day work week to a different schedule model that consists of ten hours per day have their reasons. They think that weekends aren't enough and they really need and extra day off to cover their needs. They also think that two extra hours each day are not a big sacrifice, knowing that they are going to have an extended weekend and making the same amount of hours which means the same paycheck amount, and they might have time.
One reason why the school should not changed their schedule of five-day school week to four-day school week is because, the standard week of five days increases the productive time of each student. In this case students might feel tired of being ten hours in school, and at the end during the last period of class they wouldn't pay attention to the class, because they would feel to tired of had spent almost half-day in school. As example of this is myself. If my school adopt this new policy, I wouldn't be able to keep my grades high and I wouldn't pay attention to the last period of class, because by that time I would be tired and bored of have stayed that long and having classes the all day. Therefore the schedule of five-day school week should not be changed.
Another reason why my school should keep its schedule of five-day school week is that, the standard week of five days gives the opportunity to do activities after school, such as: work, homework, sports or spend more time with our families. A perfect example of this is my friend, PROPER_NAME. PROPER_NAME goes to school, but he lives alone. So, he pays rent, his cell-phone payment and food. Then, he really needs to work after school to pay himself. If our school changes the schedule of five-day school week that each day is formed for eight hours, instead having a four-day school week of ten hours per day, but having an extra day off. PROPER_NAME would be involved on a problem, because he wouldn't be able to have a job after school. Therefore my school should not change
its schedule of having five days of school.
Based on the reason that I gave, it's clearly to see that having four-day school week offers good benefits that the regular standard weed of five-day does not give, but I strongly believe that the five-day school week is way better then the four-day school week. Although some say that my school should adopt a new kind of schedule that some business are implementing called four-day work week that consists of extending the school day two hours. Actually, my school should not adopt this new idea, because the standard week formed by five day of eight hours increases the productive time, and it allows student to do different kind of activities like have a job, homework, play sports or even share time with family. Therefore four-day school week should not be accepted in my school. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
87694700310E | First impressions is always something that i pay attention to when meeting a person for the first time. I will always agree with the fact that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Why? imagine meeting a person and the only thing you think about when they cross your mind is the way they first greet you or the way that they introduced themselves to you.
For instance, in my opinion, i feel that people will always put on a different character for their "first impression". For example, calling a job for a interview is something you'd want to change your normal character into a more formal and nice responsible person. You can never change your very first thought of someone, it may change later but not the first second of your conversation. Another example could be is getting someone introduced to you from a friend. On the other hand, there's always an "i wonder" question in my mind about everyone, because it's totally normal. When meeting someone new there is many of ways people act towards you. They may act shy and make you feel awkward, or they may act friendly and make you feel welcome. So, with that saying, you can never change the way you first think of someone, first impressions will always be a permanent statement that your brain can't erase.
Accordingly, if you do have the abilities, you can always tell what type of person they are. With just one impression someone can teach you about themselves a bit, theres no doubt in that. It's fun of how our brains permanently label people from our first impression until it is changed to something else. For example, imagine seeing some person that is always quiet, always seems like their mad or doesn't want to be at the function. What first impression would you get from that person? I would honestly not even bother to talk to them, they could say anything mean to me, But with first impressions changing overtime, you never know once that person starts talking they wont stop smiling or talking. You never know truly about something until you experiment it.
In conclusion, the first day of school where you have to introduce yourself, or being at public place and someone asks you for something in a nice way, what do you think about that person? From first impressions, after seeing that person for the second time you would always go back and think about how the first time went. While getting to know them that same thought changes about them because now you truly know who they are. The first times will always be different than the regular times. I will always agree that it is impossible for first impressions to change because of our natural human traits. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
876B9CDDC1FC | I donr undertan why people is stupid to ''act' as someone else. From my point of view, is so stupid. Also, there is Latinos who copy other Latino's accent trying to be cool or staff, and it's not make sense, because that means they do not love their own country and do not have self-steem. Because with that they're showing someone who is not themselves. And the most stupid thing is when they show some love to their country and apparent like nothing happen. That means being doble face. I do not like that kind of people. However, that's no the only thing. People start to follow what someone else say. For example, if someone say that they like short hair, someone else do it to feel a little bit of atention. What I want to get with that is,that they is another people who do not have atention or love and start doing things to their friend or other people start to pay them atention. Personally, I feel comfortable with the little what I have. It's not my idea be someone that I don't. And I also start to be neutral. How is it? For me, it's like if someone want to be friend, good; if people do not want to meet me, it's ok, too. Lastly, I don't care about other people, I only care about me, my 4 friends and my family, and that's it. I feel I don't need to meet more people. I'm good with what I have, because while less people I met, less people treason me. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
876CDA4D152D | Do you think that all students have the capacity to commit to a career at a young age? In this paper I will argue about how students do not have the ability to commit to a career at a young age. Students shouldn't commit to a career, because they can change their mind, they are not good at only one thing or they don't want to do anything.
A lot of people I know keep changing their mind, they are not ready to keep doing only one thing for the rest of their lives. My sister is an example: She is now almost about to finish her career but she wants to leave it because now she is interested in another thing. When she was in high school the career that she is in right now wasn't something that she wanted because she didn't like it, she does now, but she wants to do other things. For some people is not easy to stick with something, because they will keep changing their mind.
Since I was young I wanted to do a lot of things in life. I can't commit to only one career because there is so many things that I want to do and like to do, for example: When I was 6 years old I liked playing the guitar, I still like to play the guitar but it is no something I want to to as a career. At 3 years old I loved to dance, it is something that I will always like to do but that is not something that I see myself doing for the rest of my life. And when I was 10 years old I started to draw, I started by drawing animals or any cartoon character, but now I draw whatever comes to my mind, however, it is not something I want to keep doing. Since there is not only one thing I like to do I can't commit to only one thing in life and If i do commit, later in life I will probably regret doing it.
There are many students at my age that really don't want to do anything with their life or they don't have the ability do it. Some drop out of school because it is no something they are interested and probably it's something they are not good at and give up. Most of them just want to stay home and do nothing. They stay at their parents house, which is not bad, but they stay there and do not look for any job. Some look for jobs but it is not something they like, it is something that is easy and can get them money to survive.
Some say that all students can commit to a career, but they are wrong because not all students have the same mind sets as other students. At a young age not all students can do a career. In the future most of the students wont want to stick to only one career because they wouldn't only like one thing, so they should decide when they are ready and really know that the career that they are choosing will be the one that wont get tired of doing it. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 |
876DD6D022A9 | Do you feel confident comes from achievement or for praise? People are concern about the students must be self-confident in order to learn and other thinks that self-esteem come after you achieve something. People might think a lot of things but this is my opinion; to achieve something you have to be full of self-confident. Some examples could be people have to have self-esteem in order to work hard and learn new things every day or once in a while, people have to be confident and positive in order to get something done, and confident is feeling sure about what you are about to do.
Succeeding in something is a great achievement but if there is no confident how can you be sure what you. First, people have to have self-esteem in order to work hard and learn new things every day or once in a while. For instance, there are some jobs like a doctor they never stop learning new things because at some moment a new disease will appear and new medicine will developed. Learning a new language, being someone who knows Spanish and want to learn English is pretty hard. Why? Some words might mean the same as the do in English but all of them do. One word in English might mean five different words in Spanish and some words aren't even similar. You will never gonna to achieve to learn the whole language no even the native can but you will build a confident inside yourself knowing that you will never going to be done with it but you will be learning everyday new words. Secondly, you have to be confident and positive in order to get something done. For example, anger doesn't let someone to concentrate and it lead to chaos. When the final days of school comes and the exams and SOL arrive slowly and you are feeling unprepared for it. The confident that you put yourself every day to come to school even if you feel bad is the one who will keep all your information and it will help you in your nightmares that is those big tests. If you study for a long time then when the time arrives, you will feel ready to pass it. Thirdly, confident is feeling sure about what you are about to do. When trying to find a new job at any place but you don't know how is going to be like or how they are going to receive you. You have to be sure about yourself and letting your confident falls over your fears because with fear nothing is possible. Because you won't have any clue about what is going to happen in that first meeting and those people who will hired you have to feel like you are really to do the job. They won't choose you if they feel you are not really and no have confident to do well the job.
However other people think that self-esteem come from achievement. To begin with by achieving something, you are getting what you fought for and self-confident come as the result. For example, achieving something is no that easy. You have to make a mix of all the things you have to include to get it. When you are at school, it is so easy for old people to think that students just have the obligation of going to school and nothing more at all. Studying it's not just passing classes but it's about learning things for the next day. SOL is a good example of it; teachers prepared us for about eight months to pass a test that is no that long, the problem is that it's not just one SOL but many of it no including the exams. The satisfaction of telling yourself that it is over and summer is coming, there are no more worries about next day because you have fought for eight months to pass it. When you pass something, you achieve it somehow. But what if the SOL is failed twice won't that prejudice your next year. Secondly, after achieving something, usually that person feels joyous for the reality that it's over. For example, if you study so hard for the driving test the night before and feel like you know you are going pass it. That's happiness in yourself but what is you fail, all the effort for the last night is not over yet because you have to do it again until you pass it. Let's pretend that you pass it in the first try, well, you achieved it and you are happy because it's over and now you are getting closer to get a car and drive by your own. Your confidence will grow high because if you did it at a first try then you can do anything that you feel afraid of. Lastly, a positive person is someone who is full of joy and feels confident for what it wants and it's there to fight until it's achieve it. For instance, in all the world there are always different kinds of people: positive and negative. Learning a new job it's so frustrate because at the beginning you won't have any idea on what you are doing. Positive people always think that everything will go right and they tell themselves that they will end up knowing this job like their own hands. Why? Because they have confidence that they can do anything if they fight for it. Nobody was born with the intelligent to get something form the beginning. When you are learning to walk for the first time, you fall and fall until your knees get red and even end up with blood but after all that effort comes the realize that now you don't depend on them to get something because now you can do it by your own. Believing in yourself is feeling confident. However I still believe that confident have to come before the achievement because confident is courage that every person put itself into his or her heart to full-fill the fear.
As previously stated, things cannot be achieve if there is no confident on it. People need self-esteem in order to function at work and keep learning, the confident and positively that is in every person will make possible for them to get things done, and confident is a feeling of courage that makes the fear goes away. My solution is to have confident in yourself. Make the confident to cover your fear and be sure what you are doing. If something is achieved then the fear will go away and the confident will stay forever. Hope you enjoy this and it will be helpful for your day. Thank you!! | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
8772F74F5EE0 | "Failure is not the worst thing, not to try is worst thing in the world." To become successful, people must try. They should not give up. If people fail and grow up without losing hope, they can be successful in their future. Although some people thought failure is not good for their life, nevertheless, some were thought failure plays an important role in their life, because, it makes them to learn more about themselevs and become successful in their life.
Failure can make people to learn more about their self. Because after failing, people can know themselves better than before. They can know about their strength and weakness. For example, Generic_Name told her friend that she is good at Science and English. But she said she is not good at math. For that, she don't like to do math at home or do it by herself. She always copied from board in classroom. Because she never try to do it. Suddenly, one day in her math class, she was called by her teacher to solve a math in board. First she was saying that she doesn't know how to do it. Fortunately after looking at the question, she did it. And then after this, she got to realize that she know how to solve the equation problem. Which makes her feel confident about math and herself. While she was talking, one of her friend interrupted her. And said that, he was satisfied with her math. Unfortunately, she failed one of her test, which makes her feel bad. After test correction, she got to understand what she missed. So she prepared herself for retake and she took the test second time and then she pass the test on second time with a good grade. Some people who fail on first time can also prepare themselves for next time. Which can take them one step ahead of their goal.
Furthermore, failure can make people successful in their life. To become successful people have to have positive enthusiasm. For example, Generic_Name is senior of Generic_School. In order to graduate she need to pass her English SOL. Because when she was a junior, she didn't pass her English 11 SOL. But this time she tried her best with positive energy and she didn't gave up. As a result, she pass her English SOL this time. Some people also cannot reach their goal in first time. But that doesn't mean, they never can be successful. To reach a goal, people need to pass the small steps first. If they fail, they can try their best for second time. And always there is a second option for every problem. For to become success, people need to learn from failure and they have to try again and again. And then they can become successful on thier life.
Overall, without loss of enthusiasm people can reach their goal by failure. People can successfully reach in their goal if they learn from failure. From failure people can learn more about themselves. And people have to have positive energy and hope to handle any situation. Because failure is an important role that plays in the pursuit of success. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
8773AAFA4355 | Have you ever wondered what it would feel like to be in a school play? I have, one enjoyable activity I would want to be is a school play. I think this will be an enjoyable activity for school because you can meet new people, work with a team, and most of all have a great time.
During the play the cast members can make new friends and meet new people. It's important that the cast gets to know each other and become friends. Also they can rehears lines together. It's also helpful to make new friends especially if you shy. It's important not to be shy on the night of the actually play. You have to be brave and have confidence in yourself for the night of the play.
Another example why this this would be an enjoyable activity for school is working together as a team. Working together as a team can be enjoyable and important. For example the cast can help build sets, make costumes, rehears lines, and so much more. Sometimes after rehearsals the cast can go out to eat or have fun. also working together as a team is easier so you can get more work done.
The last reason why having a play is enjoyable because after all the hard work with the team everyone can watch the play. You will be able to perform the play in front of students,teachers,friends,and families. The most important thing is that you had a fun time making, being in the play, and working with other students.
Being in a play is and enjoyable activity because you can meet new people, work as a team,and have fun. Those were a couple of reasons and examples on why having a school play is an enjoyable school and educational activity. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
8778DE7C8D0E | introduction
The people who value selft-reliance should seek guidance from experts and authorities,
instead of taking their own decision about life's important matters. When we say experts we are talking about people that know alot more about the topic then us. We can compare this an a teacher and student.
The teachers they have graduated from what they know lets say science class. They have to do alot to become a teacher in that career. This is why I say that if we value self-reliance we need help from experts. that way we can subcess in life. However there is some decision that we can take by ourself. For example, we can choose if we want to drink alcohol, and smoke. for that type of decision we just have to think about who we are hurting too, and as we know it is ourself and nobody else. if we don't take about ourself and the decision thaty we make nobody will.
Reason 1
In my opinion self-reliance is really important in every single person life. When we talk about Self-reliance is about decision. There is times that we think we are right in every decision that we make. However, we have to know that no one is perfect as a human. So, there is times where we make bad choices. One good example could be when we are tenergers. at that age is when we need more help than anything because there is alot of things that can influenciate us really easy. At that time is when we need help from experts and what better experts then our parents. They want the best for us, so they will teach us what could be the best and what have to really matter is this life because they love us. I'm not talking and general because there are some parents that don't really care about what his son or her dauther are doing, but some of them do. Also, we can look for another type of experts who can be profesional and have a diploma in what they are experts in. So, it can be really helpful for us to subceed because they have been studying for years their career. Also, it can help us to make better decison trought life and make us a better person.
Reason 2
Bad decison can hurt ourself. decison is something that we all have to make one day. it could be good or bad decision or sometimes there are some decision that look good, but it could take us to do something bad. However ther are decison that cna hurt ourself and can take us to do something stupid in life. For example, a person want to nibest money to create a restaurant. At first it sound good because what we all think is that we only win in this type of business, but the reallity is that it could be like a challange for the person. some people don't take sometime to think about the consecuences of creating a restaurant. They don't think about the things that they have to pay out from the money that they are making of the restaurant. They don't think about that they can lose all their money if the restaurant doesn't work. When it happens that people lose all their money they can get depress, and some of them have even take their life. So, here is when we need the help from experts and not take the decison of creating the restaurant by ourself. Those people that we call experts know alot more then us because they have graduated from it. They know everyhting about business and what could be best for us. So, we can subcess in business life and don't lose money.
counterclima.
Someone would argue that making decison by ourself is better because that way we won't have to blame on anybody if we make bad decision. Also, we can learn how to be responsable in the decison that we make. Howevere, we don't need to wait untill that happen better look for experts, so they can help us to make good decision and not bad decision two heads are better ten one.
conclusion
In conclution the help from experts is the best way to do the things. They can teach us how to be better and thats why they have been created in this world to look for them and ask for help. sometimes we need to acept that we can do it by ourself and thet we need help from experts or our patrents. We have to look for different sources to subcess in life. In some points we have to be strong but to take any decision we need to be social, what I mean by it is to ask for help and make good decision. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
877EC536B112 | Many schools have partnerships with companies that allow student to explore because many student have goals or student have many opportunities to have partnerships with companies and they can explore a big business or to have connection another place to use partnership with companies.
people can have business because they got a good study and they have goals to exploring business and they can have easy partnerships with another companies and showing more opportunities to the futures.
many student have goal to get a business in the futures because many young man have experience how to find partnership or connection in another place or other country, and many of young man have brain to think how can make the good things of the life, and the technology can help now for every body how can investigate many things, and have a good employment to work many people there and every year can grow a employment with the business because good people can work about and companies can pay of employments better.
some school teach student about how can drive a business how can open a companies start building a employment because many companies can not grow without employment work strong every day because most people can have the same idea like professional student or some student graduate for business class so they have more integenci than many peolple who can not use a companies of a business | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
8799E3BD41EB | Do you know that almost the 50% of the society are conform with what they already attained? I know many people that not are surrender easily. It is the way how they got their goals. I think see beyond we can reach success and keep people that we love.
However, everybody wants to have a great life, but we have to work harder to get it. Then, is essential to have a goals, if we can protrude means that we have more opportunities. Opportunities like get faster a job or make more money. I know we have to pass a numerous of obstacle, but we have to not give up. Be conform cannot help to reach the success.
In addition, is not only about be a professional or success. Also, attempt of be a magnificent human, for keep what is already in your life like friends and family. If you are merry with someone you know that love be maintain day by day. Same with family or friends in order to have happiness or better communication. It is for this reason we can not be conform, and we have to work beyond of the love the we already have.
In summarize, a numerous of people are conform. Improve your master can help to have success and maintain people you love. Protrude, could be easily to get a job or get an abundance of money. Also, could have a better communication with people that we love. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3.5 |
87A8B315A26E | I think "taking online class is not a good idea and it, doesn't have any benefit for students". Some of students asking for online class they think "we can do it, but it is not too easy". I used to have online class, and
"in my opinion online class is very hard"
. And doesn't have benefit. when there is no teacher in class to help students, and some of students are too lazy. they need some body to pust them in class.
in,
june 7,2017. I took my online class. And i was new in USA. That was really hard for me, because i was new here and, i didn't know. How i need to do my works? So that wasn't fun. And i didn't get any thing from that class. Because the class was boring for me and very day works became alot so, unfortunately i drop my class. It is very different; when we are in normal class or we are in online class. Because in normal class, there is a teacher, students and a lots of things to they can make class very easy for students. And have a lots of benenfits, but in online class there is noting of these stuff are in online class. And some times online class make students to skip
, because when they face to face with a problom. They can not ask from online class, teacher direct that make students to skip the class, and make the class boring for students, that is what happend with me. And some times student can not have good attend in class, and that can make student to drop the class.
As wall as online class and conferencing class are the hardest classes. But nothing is impossible in this life we can do it " with hard work and with a good attend in our class". If i need to take online class in future. I will always try to have communication with my teacher. Because teacher is the only person to can help the student on that class. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
87AF2FEABA83 | Some schools thinks that students should attend classes at home. Others might think that attending classes at school will give benefits to the students. Attending classes at school will get the students to learn more subjects than online classes. If students does not attend classes at school there would not be teachers and staffs at the school.
Attending classes at school will get the students to learn more of other subjects. If a student takes classes at home they would not be focusing on their assignment. They going to be on their phone, TV, or other type of devices. There will be no one supervising the students at home. They need teachers to teach them, educate them, and motivate them to learn. Attending classes at school as you can see will benefit the student..
In addition, If the students does not attend classes at school there would not be no teachers and staffs at the school. Many jobs will be lost due to students taking classes online. Plus, the students needs to build a relationship with the teacher and staffs. Online classes would not teach a student face to face, It would be better If a teacher teaches the student face to face. As a result, there should be teachers and staff at the school, If the student takes classes at the school. Plus, the students will get a better education.
Many people may argue that students should take classes online instead of going to school. People think that online classes will give the student benefits. They also think that the benefit of taking online classes, is to give the students more opportunity to learn. In the other hand, they are people who also believe that taking classes in school is better. Schools are meant for students to learn on other subjects. If a student takes classes in school they will have the opportunity to learn much better.
Therefore, students should take classes in school. Schools are meant to be for students to learn from all subjects. Taking classes in school would benefit the students. If the students take classes in school, there will be more teachers and staff at the school. Truly, learning from a teacher helps you a lot, because they are teaching you face to face. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
87B7C44BBB7C | Some schools have programs were they pair older kid with younger kid. Many programs can help both young kid and older kids in many ways. They can also learn new stuff that later on can help them in life.
There are many ways programs like this can help older kids in many ways. One thing they can learn is to learn to help other people by showing them how to do there work or also teach them how to ask a teacher for help when needed. Another thing that the older kid can learn is to talk to people without being scared or shy this can also help them by getting a job when they grow up. Talking to the young kids can help them learn about the kid and how they act in class and around other people.
It can also help younger students in many ways. One thing it can help them with is learning new thing from the older kids somethings they can learn from them is like how to do math,homework, and how to act in the middle of class without being rude to the teacher. It can also help them learn how to respect others like there parents,teacher,and the older kids. It can also teach them how to talk to other people without being scared or shy to talk with someone or i front of the class.
Programs like this can help both young kids by making new friends with the older kids or talking to other kid and making friends that way. They can also learn a lot about other people like were are they from how old they are. This can also help the older kid see how the younger kids act and see with they need any help during class with work like reading ,writing or math.
Many programs for kids can help them in many ways by teaching them many new things that can help them later on in life or when they need help they know how to do something because they had learned in from some one older i their past and maybe later on he can help other people by teaching them how to do stuff they didnt know how to do. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
Subsets and Splits
No community queries yet
The top public SQL queries from the community will appear here once available.