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7A0A80926A0D | "Unles you try to do somthing beyond what you have already mastered you will never grow".
Yes you will never grow becuase you will never have now experience, that will need in the feater I agree with author Ralpn Emerson for three reasons. First, whan you try a now things you are going to have different naleg about a laset of different thing . Sconed , whan you have different ideas you have different way of thinking. Thired , whan you try to see other people and how they act and thiar coolter you will now how to talk with thim without disrspact thim . Lastly, that why we sholed alwase laren.
Whan I try a now things i alwas laren some thing now .
For exampe, whaen i came to the U.S i did not have enafe naleg about what is in the U.S so that was a issue ror me learening the language i shragl becuase did not go beyond what i have already mastred. Than ,whan i staret to learen more about the language i start to go beyond my noleg. Allthuo life is hared and learening is hared but som times whan you learen a lote you get a lote .
whan you have different ideas you have different way of thinking. First , people wode love to talk to you and now you. Sconed, whan you in school you will have a lots of ideas about what class to take . Thired, Knowing a lot healp your famliy tow . finely that why haveing a lot of ideas healp you.
Whan you try to see how other people and how they act and how thiar coolter is you now how to talk with thim othout disrspact thim. first, whan you you lisone to people and how the talk you going to larn e what cined of pirson he is and how to talk with thim . Sconed , you can choos the prson that you are going to love from larning about how the siseaty work . Third, bieing nice to every one mens you are goning out and seeing other people . and, that whay i agreed with the auther Ralph Waldo Emerson becuase going beyond what you have already mastered is laring . | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
7A239E4D1966 | My thought on the prompt are that I think it's better to be active. Being active or doing something all the time is good. You can be very helpful by helping people out or doing chores. Doing something all the time can make you physically fit. You can be moving all the time and a lot it can be good exercise.
I like working out or helping people out especially my family. Many people enjoy or like to be active and it makes them feel good including myself. I can'not stay inactive for a long period of time like many people in this world. In some people's life activity play's a major role in there life's. Like a personal trainer or a coach.
Inactivity is sometimes bad especially if you do it for a long time. It can be frustrating to other people if everybody is working but you and they need your assistance. If I'am inactive for a long period of time i can get sick or really anybody if you have been laying around doing nothing for days. Your body needs movement or some type of exercise. That's why it's better to be active.
Therefore, inactivity can sometimes be good or necessary. For example, if you are watching a movie at the movie theater. You can'not be jumping and running all over the place you are going to get kicked out. In some situations when something bad is happening out side your home is better to stay as far away as you can and do'not intervene is better to stay idle.
Finally,I some occasions is inactivity serves a purpose. You do accomplish more if you stay active and you can meat your goals in life if you put hard work and not staying idle. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
7A25BCF70487 | Without failure you won't succeed in life. Failure is something you didn't succeed or accomplish yet failure does help you succeed in life. As a matter of fact, this could actually help you accomplish your goals.
I agree with Ralph Waldo statement because, you won't realize your mistakes. For example if you only succeed in life you won't know what to do if you fail or how to fix them. There for you'll achieve and have more success by failing. This helps because you'll actaully know the struggle people would put themself to accomplish their goal. Also knowing you have fail you'll know what is expected in order the success.
I disagree with Ralph Waldo statement because you won't accomplish as much goals. For example you won't know what to do if you ever do fail. i mean is good that your sucessing in life but just wait until the unexpected comes thats whe all the boom lets lose. i fact success isn't as bad is actually good.
In my opinion i would say success isn't as better as failure. They are both a team. While i agree this is why i pick Ralph statement is cause the un expected always comes in lfe. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
7A552DBA7D71 | The effects of allowing students to have and use cellphones in the classroom is not listening to what the teacher has to say, not using it property for your educational purposes, and disturbing the class from learning. The students with not pay attention to what the teacher, because they are so busy in their cellphones. Some students decide not to use it for educational purposes and uses it for other purposes. Using cellphones in class will also disturb other from learning, because they are so in to their cellphone. These are the reasons how using cellphones in class can effect them from learning.
First, you will not be able to learn if you are using your cellphone in the class. Using your cellphone in class may get you off task and u would not know what u learn today in class. Some days u would be mad and take it out on other, because of what you heard on your cellphone. Overtime your cellphone vibrate you always going to want to see what it is and that will have your attention. You will not be able to focus like you use to with our education and be on your cellphone at the same time.
Second, using your cellphone for other purposes can not help you learn what you need to learn. If you do not use your cellphone for educational purposes you would not know noting from school to know about. You can get in some problem for not using it for education. They should not have it out unless the teacher say you can for your assignment. This is why people should not use cellphones in school for these purposes.
Thirdly, people will disturb other people from trying to learn with there devices that can cause a disruption. The cellphones will ring and stop everyone from learning, because they will pay attention on whose phone is ringing. You will not be able to know how to do the work if do not know what to do. you are disturbing your classmates that are trying to learn the material they need so they can do something with there lives. You should not disturb your classmates from being successful in life.
As you can see, the effect of having a cellphone in class while you are trying to learn to be successful. You should not be ignoring what your teacher has to has to you and your classmates. The use of the cellular device can only be use for education and not other purposes. Last but not least, do not make your classmates fell just because you do not want to successful does not mean your classmates do. These are the reasons why using a cellphone in class should not be allowed in the classroom. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
7A6599531E9C | Which be the characteristic that show a person positive always time? A person with a positive attitude be kindness with other people show that in life have that be change. In totality is agree with that should have a positive attitude in the life . For example being positive can help you to appeal better people in your life, make that life be comfortable with yourself, and positivism maintain good mental health.
In addition being positive can help you to appeal better people in your life. For example that people that are around you will see your positive personality at the point that you can became the people mood to a positivism. and have a character strong that show a person different that make that the people see a thought positive. everybody can be a person with a good attitude in your life for that life be easy.
Make that life be comfortable with yourself. For example a person with a character positive have more opportunities in your life because help that not have preoccupation, In your life and can explore thing that never see also a person that feel a positive actittude not have problem with other people because have calm when other people can be heat thing for your self.
While some people believe that should have a positive attitude in the life.
other argue that should dont have a positive attitude in the life because being positive can help you to appeal better people in your life. Although this be valid there are several important idea to be considered such as positivism maintain good mental health. For example, Held take best decision en your life because this help to have clarity thought, that maintain out of every conflict with the other person. also the people will tire to not became mad for simple thing that happen
In conclusion believe that help that be comfortable in life. Is a form that maintain in your head that make for help to have a mental strong, and that other people can see your positive personality in your life have chose a reason that will be change and mark the different for world. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
7A66900A3812 | How you can have a good relation ship with your dog?
You need to have a good relationship with your dog because, when you get a new dog and your dog need to take him/her out and you do not know that you soppust to do that the dog will do not like you at all, like here's I am gonna give you some exampls for what you should do for your dog to not hate you, the dog need to feed him/her a food every day, cold water in the summer to not be hot, a normal water in the winter need him/her to go out to walk or poop out side,the dog need to have you be with them all the time, he/she need to feel that you like them, give them food, water, play with them every day, take them outside when you hang out with you family, friends, etc..... .
The dog only thinking about you and the food and how he/she can save you from anything dangerous like, when someone come and stell something from your house and you sleeping, the dog will pits him/her in them legs, and the dog try to wake you up with his/her "wror" the the dog make, sometimes the dog need to have a comfy space so he/she come and set behind your legs and sleep, but when your dog wake up he/she get bored so they trying to wake you up by liking your face or your toes, a lot of people love dogs so they buy it for a lot of money because some dogs are no really avalable in some places so it's hard to find theis dogs, and they still cost a lot of money, dogs can alive like 11 years to 15-20 maybe if your dog not that long with you you not gonna be sad at him/her if they but if they at least 2-3 yeas with you you really gonna miss them and if you died your dog will cry on you because I tried that before when my grandma died my dog was not even eating or drinking water or palying she was just seting and crying, and I was having two dogs they was brother and sister, so they was playing together everyday but one day the her brother was died i was really sad and crying and she was not even eating or drinking like when my grandma die, she was really sad for a long time and then I give it to my uncle house he was have a dog and a cat, she started to play with them and having fun so she happy right now bwcause she forget her brother and found a dog and a cat to play with them.
The dogs like to live in a big house and a big backyard to play in, and they need to live in an organize place. You need to a vet to check your dog every month at least, maybe they have alergece for something or they need to take a shock for something in them body. The vet for your dog gonna tell you what you suppost to feed him/her and what you not soppust to give him/her. And what time you should go to the doctor to see or check at your dog. Dogs like to live with a family not one person because they like to set with them and if they have a childern they really like to play with a baby or children because the childern have a lot of power to run, play, to anything and the dogs have a lot of power, enrgy to run, to play, and etc.... . The dog need to take a shower at least 2-3 times at week, when the dog get out from the bathroom and she/he wet you should put planket on them to not get cold and sick, and you need to brush them hair and dry it with a hot air to not get cold, the important thing that you need to clean his/her eyes everyday in the morning because they will have something in them eyes because they sleeping like humans when they wake up they wash them face because it's not cleand and brush them teath. The dogs do not like to get wet a lot so do not get him/her out when it's raining outside. but you an put him/her in your car and go shoping with them. Sometimes people leave them dogs in the car because they not alawed to go in resturant so they leave them in the car, dogs feels that they lonly and they waiting for you to come back really bad. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
7A68E1FB7863 | Imagine an aboard student come from different country that is far away from United State, so she need a long summer break to return to her country for visit her family. Summer break is what educators and students are looking forward for. Whereas many people argue that the break should be year-round schools, and it should be a 3-4 week break in summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. The summer break should be longer and less short break because students need more time for their vacation, and they will not have to worry the homework that they left at home.
While many people believe that the summer break should be shorten, a longer winter break and a week off in the spring and fall because the educators feels that if the break too long and that students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall, this is a week argument. For instance, a break in the middle of the school year easy to get students forget what they have learn. Further more, students will not want to go back to school after few days off. Students need break but a short break is unnecessary.
To begin with, students are waiting for a long summer break where they can spend all their time at the place that they wish to be at. For example, an exchange student from Vietnam came to United State with her parents for emergrates, but her siblings still live in Vietnam because they were married before sign up. Summer break is the only time that allows the student to go back to her country for visiting. Furthermore, some students are working full time in summer to have a provision for their consumption in the future such as buying a car, college,etc. The part time work that students make during school year does help but not much for preparing or satisfy the claim inside teenager.
In addition, people want to have a relax time on a long vacation, none of the students want to be thinking that they still have work waiting for them at home and the deadline is coming. For instance, teachers love give homework during the break for no reason. Going out with friends but still have to bring paper and pencil to do homework is very humor. Furthermore, some teacher put onerous on students, which they giving out homework and big project for a test grade just because they don't want the student to forget the information that they have learn. Students didn't expect teachers to finish grading their work during the break, but teachers expect them to finish the big project, it is unfair for students.
As a final point, the summer break should be longer because students need more time for their vacation, and they will not have to worry the homework that they left at home. For long summer break teacher don't give homework, and students feel free to plan out their vacation for entire summer. The long break is much better than a short and unnecessary break. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
7A7660BBEE86 | The greats benefits to work with a group
To work on groups is better for many reasons,everybody can help each others,in groups student's can do a better work,and it can help all the people on the group to learn more skills,it can help students to know each others and be friends, more communications, more ideas and sometimes it can be helpful to work in groups because some students don't know what to do,i thing teachers should let student's to work more on groups so like that they would help each other and work better,and is good to work with a group because that can help you for the rest of your life like on your job also with your family and you con do better and a great job if you work in group
It can be helpful for students to work in group,First, because with more people helping are more and betters ideas and more helpful for every students,and sometimes student's don't know what to do,but if somebody on the group help so he would understand and know how to do a great job and work with a group is much helpful than work alone on many ways like to understand better with communication with your group and it can be helpful so you can do a good work and pass the class and not failed,and work in group it can help you to know others people that are in the same classroom but you never have the oportunity to talk wich their so in the teacher make a group and you can joing to one there is going to be new people and you can know others people
,Second,it is good for student's to work in groups because they can learn more skills such like the communication and they can help each others with the written,and also they can help each others how the way they talk. The communication is important and many cases because with communication you can do many things, like if you don't understand something you can tell somebody for help and all the persons on the groups can practice all days to do a great work,and also some student's need a lot of help so students that know more can join to the groups to help the others,but sometimes is not because some students don't know how to do the work sometimes it because they don't understand sometimes is because the language is a problems for some student's so there is good to make groups to help them,Third it can be an experience to work in groups because some students that don't know each others later on they can be friends and work in groups it can be helpful to students,but also to school because work on groups students can understand more and they can get betters grades also work in groups and a a good relationship it can be helpful not only at the school it can be helpful like in your home with the family and not to get in trouble with their, but also it can help you on your job to work well and not to have problems with the people that you work with,is like on soccer that why it call a soccer team because they help each others they share new or more strategies that it can help others to do a great job because work in groups students have more and betters benefits to do a great job,Finally is good to have a good communication in groups because with a great communication all the the group can understand each others and is important to have a good relationship in the group so like that they can do a better job and some students help others and that is great to be generous with others because if you help to someone that need help other people is going to help you on what you need and is a lot much better to work in group than alone sometimes when you are working alone and you got stuck in something no body is going to help you,but if you are working with more people in group they going to help you on what you need but most of the teachers want's to students work alone sometimes is good that students work alone because sometimes students got distracted for the people on the group and the teachers don't wants students to copy each others sometimes is good to work alone maybe better concentration,but sometimes is not that good to work alone because sometimes you got stuck in somethig, but if you are working with a group they are going to help you i would like to see more teachers that put more student's to work in group i don't think student's would like to work alone than with a group is better an sometimes is more easy and faster
In conclusion, is a great idea for me thats teachers make students to work in groups on my opinion is much helpful to they work in groups instead to work alone,because when people work in groups they have betters ideas and they can do a better work with more interesting and more opinions is better to do a great job and also have a great relationship and a great communication is so important to work in a group and some students know more than others so the students thats know more is good that they help the others on what they need and is good to work in group so like that you can know others people i hope teachers continuing making groups to students can learn more than what they know and work in group it can help you on your life because if you got a job and many people work there too but you don't like to work with others people as a group the boss is going to kick you out only because you don't know how to work as a group and if you only like to work alone it can be a problem if you don't understand work with others people is better always more ideas,opinions like that you can do a better work and it can help your future job and the rest of your life sometimes some student's don't like to work in group's sometimes it because they don't know others people,but i thing if teachers would like to student's work more in groups i thing they would like it and they can have more communication student's would like to work with a group, I like to work with a group because sometimes i don't know what to do so others students help me to do a great work and we all share other. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
7A7D7BC53938 | Its a fact that possitive actitude is the key of succses. In every single thinsg that you made, or every single act that you take, even a small ane like blink if you are not confident in what you are doing, on that i will make it fealling, you will be failing.
That does not mean that fealing is a bad thing because fealing is a important aspec of successes. Not only because you will learn from the mistakes that led you to the failing box. But also you will come back knowing against what you are figthig with, next time you will be back with a diferent set of mind, with a diferent plan, even with a diferent actittude, and all that because one thing wich all the people says is bad.''Fail''.
but lets be honest, why would somebody fail if you have the chace to be successfull ?, because if you are not going to win and get what you want and are looking for, do not even struggle, stay at home laying donw and watching some series. There is a real hungry world with real hungry people out there and if you are just giving the 75 percent it of your capacity it would be just not enougth.
Thats were positive actittude comes up, if you know your value and you are wheling to give the one hundred percent you dont have to worry.
If you are confident and positive you will go for what you are looking fof do not matter who is agaist you, do not matter what the people would say and specially it do not matter the cost of it. That is the key of success. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
7A89CCBBD747 | Thomas Jefferson wrote "Determine never to be idle" that is mean like some time we are busy. I agree with this prompt becasause it's something posible and if we always doing something.
In my opinion we acomplish more if we are always doing something because some times we have stuff to do for example going to work after school or study after school. But some time people they don't like to do school work for the reason they think there are not smart. In my position do work it's some i like to do every day because that's how i learn more stuff. IF we have a park time after school that is something good because you are reciving money for your self and maybe you can help your parent with bills.
Some peoples think that if we don't do something in this life we ca have a vetter remposible. That is mean if we don't work or study for a vetter life them we are not going to have nothing for .Exaplem if you are
18 or more you have to look for a jod becase you are respomsible for your self because your parents there are not going to give you anything what you want you have to work and buy your own stuff. This is something posible we can do in us life.
Some may said that to do nothing is better life. they said that becsause they never think about thre future or maybe they don't want to do nothing in the life and that is not going to work. for exaple I have a lot stuff to do for gratuade from hight school i have to pass my esol and have a good great grade if i don't graduate from hight school that choise i have is to work out side. However, if a want the opportituti to do something in the future the best choie is to study effort my self and go to the college to have a better jod.
people Sometimes they're bussy in keys that is something posible in us life becuse we want to become a good person and resposible in the future that's that way we learn it is easy to do something never give up. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
7AAE019F70D6 | I disagree with the principal saying that all kids should at least join one extracurricum activity because kids have other things to do like homework,they might be already doing a activity and they'll get tired faster if the principal make them do a other activity, and it can contain stress if you don't get it right the first time.
For and foremost, I disagree with the principal saying that all kids should at least join one extracurricum activity because the student have homework to do and I know that i get a lot of homework maybe you do too i also know teachers give kids projects and if the principal makes them do a extra activity then they wont be able to have anytime to do their own things. Also studies have shown that making kids do a extra activity can contain a lot of stress and who wants to be stressing I know I don't, and it can also contain kids losing sleep do to the activities if they have homework and a activity to do it'll make the students lose sleep due to the activity and the brain needs a good hours of sleep for it to function well. This is why I say principals shoudn't make students join activies
Secondly, I disagree with the principal because the students will get way more tired faster and did you know that someone in Washington DC, fainted due to the principal making the student do a other activity and thats why the principals shouldn't make students join a other activity because it'll most likely make them get tired faster and what we want is to keep our kids healthy but we can't keep them healthy if the principal makes them join a activity.
Lastly,my last reason is stress, stress can come from a lot of things like work,school,friends,parents,children as you see stress comes from a lot and school stress is a big oe because we all know sometimes our grades go down and when we try to bring them up it gets really stressful and espcially if your pricipal is making you do a other activity that'll make even more stress and multiple studies have shown that a lot of the stress that kids get is from school and other activies. Those were all of my reason on why the principal shouldn't make students join a other activity espcially if they don't want too.
Overall,I disagree with the principal making students do a other actvity because of homework,losing sleep faster and last but not least is stress. Those were all of my reasons on why the principal shouldn't mame students do a other activity | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
7AB87BA4342F | Kids play to have different jobs, but I know, since I was a baby, what I want to do. The world of the entertainment, in special the theater, is something that always catch my attention, thats why I would like to visit the Art and Performance Center.
The principal reason why I want to go is for my family influences, my grandma has been dreaming about me been an actress. I remember going to the theater with her, telling me that her biggest dream is, one day, see me on one of those performances or shows. When I was littler, I use to participate on local shows every summer, her proud smile and happy tears make me feel that I was on the right place, doing the right thing. I know she would be so happy if I become an actress.
Also, the Art and Performance Center has been the place of one of my favorites presentations,"The Rose", the feelings that the esterpians transmit during the hold act are powerful; they make you feel that you are part o the show, or even better, they make you feel that is not a show. Imagine myself on that scenario with the lights, music, the public, while I am realizing a magnificent performances is something that makes my feel really grate. I want to inspire people in the same way that actors inspires me.
My love for the performant arts isn't the unique reason why a should go, I am a respectful and courteous person; a hardworker which goal is to learn everything about arts. Some students aren't really interested on the place they go, playing around, acting boring, but not me, I am really interesting in this opportunity, in all the special details of the world of preforming arts. From the backstage to the actual scenario, everything would be a delaitful experience for me.
For all this reasons, I would like to go to the Art and Performance Center, seeing all the components and experiences that brings you the fantastic world of the theater. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
7ABD75EA7CBC | Imagine going to school everyday to learn and experience new things, when it comes to lunch, students are ready to eat and enjoy there favorite food with others but the principal made an announcement about changing the lunch system by getting rid of junk foods to healthy foods. Students favorite food being replaced by healthy food will be a nightmare to them. No more pizza, burgers, spaghetti, etc, will be all gone and will cause a problem. Removing students favorite food to healtheir ones will be a bad idea. Students will dislike eating healthy food, and students will feel hunger and lose concentration in class.
Firstly, Some students will dislike some healthy food that they don't enjoy. For example, Generic_Name goes to lunch and sees the only food aviliable is a salad. He never ate salad before but sees a lot of vegetables including lettuce, tomatos, onions, etc. He feels disgusted by the food he was serve and rather starve. What I mean is that students being served to vegetables which they won't take a bite of, won't make them eat because they don't enjoy eating vegetables that was served to them and might get student to not eat but starve which will be bad to there body.
Additionally, the students will be in bad shape during class time. They will feel hungry, sick, or possibly pass out. For example, Generic_Name came back to class from lunch and he didn't eat anything because of the food that was serve. While doing class work, Generic_Name doesn't feel well and his stomach starts to growl because he didn't eat anything. He will lose focus and will start begging for food. What I mean by that is students in class will feel hungry and there stomach will soon to growl and will lose focus on class instructions. The principal should not make these changes and keep the system of lunch the same because there body will be in good shape and will gain energy through out the day.
Some people will disagree my reasoning and opinion on changing the school food system to healthier ones is a bad idea. They will say say it's a good idea because they will consume healthy foods that will make students grow stronger, will have a healthy diet, and be more energized within there life.
That may be true but that's not the case because student are comfortable on what they eat and what suits them will suit there future lifestyle. Thus, changing students favorite food to healthy ones in lunch is a bad idea. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
7AC357DAA5D7 | Its been said that a positive attitude is key to success in life. I agree, I think its nessasary to have a positive attitude in your everyday life , in your work place, in your "time of need." those are the most important times you will need to show your best.
First , I think its important to have a positive attitude in your everyday life because, of the stress that goes on. No one will understand how you feel other than you. If you stay in the mindset of " i cant do this," "this is too hard." You will never see yourself prosper and grow. How can you have the biggest expectations in life when you are so dull and negative. To advance you need to be aware that everything is going to be okay, be reminded of that.
Secondly, your work place always has to stay positive. This is the place you go to work in , this is a place you try to distract yourself from the rest of the world. If you set your self to a person who feels as if they cant do anything then you will never reach that promotion youve been waiting for. If you set your self as the person who puts too much on themselves, you will never see growth. You can do the impossible it will just be up to you to change your circle.
Although, there are many people who live in doubt and build this wall of negativity in there life. You cannot be that person. Think about the little things in life , you have a roof over your head, your family is safe, you are safe. You never go a day without eating. Those are the little things that matter.
Lastly , in your " time of need" you should always be more optimistic. Whenever you are feeling down and feel like your world is falling apart be aware that your surroundings should never bring you negativity. There are so many other thing you could and should be thinking about, the little this matter in this life. Feelings are always temporary and you need to always make sure that the positive things impact you the most. Greater things are to come in everyone life.
In conclusion, being positive in many ways will always change your mindset . Positive attitudes are key to a better future and for the best success in your life. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
7AC5AC48813D | I believe that schools should allow the students to graduate in traitional four years,
instead of three years because If some of the student faill the class or the SOL, they should a time to retake those classess they faill. Most of the students dont what to take a courses during the summers. Some students want to take a elective courses in schools not in summers chas as a art, muise, and language they want.
I personily believe students graduate in four years because they will have time to retake a class or SOL if they need to do. I think it's head for some of the student to work and graduate in three years instead of four years. The most immopat think is that if the students faill a class they can't graduate the hight schools befor they pass the class they faill.
Most of the student's don't want to take a courses during the summer because they want to have free time , they don't want to work on summers. Some students work and save some money for college. They don't want to work for schools on summers. They're some family who love traveling with they're kids.
Most of the students want to take a elective courses but not in summer. Couses whay want to take is art, muise, and language they want. Some of the classes that students take as a elective courese can help them in college or in work force. Some of the elective courese that students take can help them find out what they like or dislike.
Overall my position on this issue is that schools should offer a four years hight schools, instead of three years because it's can hlpe students to get ready for college and work. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
7ACF284A8B7C | I think that work in groups is more benefit. Because work is groups make the class successful. also, the students can know each other and they can meet new people. therefore, work in groups is benefit for students and teacher. Here are some reason why
I think that work in groups is benefit.
First, They can divide the work in same parts. While someone is working in searching information the other one can think in how to make the work more creative. Also, if they divide the work is more fair for the group so they can have more opportunity to work successfully. Second, They have more opportunity to have a better work. If the class work in group they can do much better in the work that working alone because they can do the work more easily by working as a team. For example, If the class works in groups of 4 they can do a good work by dividing the work in same parts like one can be searching for information the other one can be looking for imagines. The other two can be checking that the writing is good and that the information is good. And the last one can make the presentation and make the work creative.
Second, In groups can take less time to work on it that working alone. If a group meet in one place and they start working they can easily finish the work on time. Also, they can search for information more faster then alone because they can divide the work but they can also help each other. Second, In a group decide what to do it can be hard. But when the group decide what to do and they finish the work fast. The group can check if the work is good or not and decide either to keep the information o to make some changes. So, the group can have more opportunity to have a better grade.
Third, Work as a group can also be fun because you are working with your friends or you can met new people. First, work in group can be a good for class because they can know each other. If the class meet each other the class can be more successful. Because there will not fight or enmity so the class can work more successfully. If a class is works more successfully that makes the topic easy and knowing each other makes the class more understanding. And, It will make the class more fun because everyone can help each other in thing that are hard for people. For example, if one student can't understand the topic he can ask for help to the teacher and he can ask to people around hem for help.
In conclusion, work as a group is funny and make the class better. Also, it makes the students to do better workers and meet people. therefore, I think that work will be better in groups because the class can meet and know each other and they can be better person and better students. This are some reasons why a think that work in groups is better. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
7AF7DC456D3C | This program is helpful for younger students because it would get work accomplished with the presence of the older student. Older students that volunteer helping younger students would make younger students feel more at ease. Younger students won't have to deal with their assignments being due because they already turned it in. This program will help younger students study with assistance by the older students to get a high grade in tests or quiz. Older and younger students can play board games or read a book to help them get better with their English and writing skills.
Play outside basketball, soccer, football, etc just to have fun and waste that energy. Younger students who want to pick sports is fine as well, Older students can support or encourage younger students to do what they want. Older students can review things in the year for younger students to remember the key things or notes for the SOL's. Then younger students won't have to fail the SOL because they have the knowledge to surpass the test. Younger students with knowledge can get past Elementary, Middle, and High school and get that degree to College leading them to jobs they need or want in the future. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 |
7B00EEFA1313 | If you should be want to do it a profesional, in your life is fine for you.
My ideas however about this career.
More tecnology, is good because in your life to help, for your family, if i am agree.
The ideas some time are bad. because you not undesrtan, if you already for the not is good.
Thesis:
.is important that, because help in your life are a career and the family put happynes about your caeer but you pay attention if you not pay attention you can not power, the something you has to possebilty in your life for learning to much something about your caeer.
.That is good, because you help on the family in the life the students, has to responssibility about that because is your responssibility because is your caeer.
. And i thing is a good ideas for students because the students has to possibility, about a caeer in the life about he , and in the school help the students about that he want to a caeer in the life for put happy on the family and he.
Paragrap: That is very good for the students, because he want to do it that is your responsability in all your job because is a agreer, waht you take for you life in the caeer is good because your family help on you and all family help for you caeer.
Conclucion: If you want to do it a caeer, in your life is fine for you and help in the caeer about you job. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
7B0430EDACBA | I agree that having a positive attitude is the key to being successful in life. I believe is important to have a positive attitude because having a positive attitude can open doors to different phase in life. For example, when it comes to school, significant others and obstacles that life may throw at us. Is important to not loose our cool and have the type of attitude that everything is going to turn out great at the end of the day.
Having a positive attitude when it come to school can be a way to cope with all your assignments, teachers and schoolmates. Especially being a teenager people thing is not difficult to wake up every morning 6 or 7 AM and deal with people's attitude and also having to worry about the amount of work the teachers give out to students and then going home to do chorus is something that teenager are capable of doing, but adults don't take that time to think that they was teens back in the 60s where life isn't easy but when it comes to school rules have change. Now we must pass SOLs to graduate but, a person who stays positive believes in there self makes it easy for their self to get through what's stop you from being happy.
Everyone in life have to deal with different types of obstacles physically and mentally. For example when i came to America I thought my life was over learning a whole different language and also trying to adapt to whole new country a whole different environment would be hard for me. Instead of being hard head i stayed positive learn English really fast and started to start feeling more comfortable in America. I also was thinking of families back home and how i cant let them down, because they would love an opportunity like this to have a free education and being able to make it to the 12 grade. We all go through so much and the only way to get through is having a positive attitude that things well turn out better than yesterday.
Others would say that you dont have to have a positive attitude in life to be successful because they probably dont have self confidence, someone around to give them hope or have giving up on their self to many times. I believe that having a positive attitude is the key to being successful in life because you viewing life on a whole other level all you see is good things coming your way and the nothing can get in between of your dreams and if you was to fall you going to pick yourself right back up and start again.
In conclusion being able to wake up every morning and thank God for another day and pray that things are going to turn out better than yesterday is an important skill to have in this world we call life. We all have them phase that we go through and we feel like we cant keep moving forward but why stand in the same place with that same negative attitude is going to prevent you from wanting or doing more. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
7B0C76128726 | I agree with Prime Winston Churchill; in he saying there is a lot of true and motivation. Failure is the most important element in the pursuit of success. Being successful is not a easy thing for anyone; there is a journey that you have to get through with many obstacles that you may fail at the first time. Also, no matter how many times you fail, you shouldn't give up on you want to do. When you continue to fail, your learn a lot from this mistakes or problems. The better thing are never easy to secure; we always make mistakes, but never too late to start again. As Winston once said "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm'' This statement is most certainly true if we are welling go put in the effort to past though feature and attain real success.
If you really want something you going struggle for that and effort the most you can. Everyone who is successful has been through things that has caused them to fail in something the admired dearly, but remember you should never lose hope; mistakes allow you to view your challenge from a different perspective. Failure is only an opportunity to begin again, only this time with a better plan and more understanding. Failure is an unavoidable obstacle, so you must be ready to affront and learn about it. Look examples about people who don't lose hope and keep trying until they did it, and see that these people are representation of success. See the mountain they've claimed and look to it for inspiration and all they sacrifice.
In conclusion, we come to learn more from our failures and difficulties than from our successes. Failure can bring us to better ourselves and begin our plans once more, this time more wisely. If everyone was to successes in their first try, we would not feel accomplished in the presence of success. The most important message to take from these quote is that after you have acknowledge both why failed and how it made you feel, you must attack the obstacle again with enthusiasm. Success it is hard work, perseverance, learning, studying, sacrifice and most of all love of what you are doing or learning to do. | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
7B1B2E8F7E89 | I think it took a positive affect on humans lives. I think it would be impossible with out technology. My reasons are that we use technology a lot,we use it for to shop online for our phones. My two other reasons are we use them for work. We use technology for school and to learn things from back then from now.
We use technology for online and for our phones. So if we needed to contact someone it would be threw our phones. If we needed something to wear we go online buy something. If we needed go some where the in our phones theres GPS will guide us. We use our phones for lots of thing like looking at the news, or to see what time is it. Our phones has a lot of knowledge so if we need something new we use our technology
We use technology for work like if we needed finish something we know how to do it. If we needed look something up for work we do it threw our technology. If your boss calls you in for something hes using technology. So if we did not have technology we could not do anything that what we are doing today.
We use technology for our school like now Im taking test on my computer. We use technology for learning things like in history we are learning stuff from the past. We use technology for tests and to print some papers out. We use projectors for class if we need to see something. We use technology for our safety like cameras.
So without technology we could not do anything like call or text or shop online or learn. Are lives have changed a lot when technology was invented. Technology is all around everywhere you go theres going to be technology. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
7B2B2910BB90 | Imagine you are going to buy some new shoes but you don't know if you should get them. So then you ask for some advice from family and friends. But you still don't know what to do. So then you ask for more advice. Then at last you all ready know what to do. So you can more. I think u should ask for more help and advice. so you can pick the better choices.
You can get more info on the topic you are doing. Like for one person can tell you one thing and a other person can tell you something else. Thats how you can get some more info. It helps more by asking more people because while you have your info they have there info as will. So then you can have more knoallige about whatever you doing. Last of all it's better to ask more people because like I said you can get more knoallige on the topic and will help you one making the better choices as will. It's all ways good to get more info on your topic because you don't ever want to do something with out any knoallige.
People can help you answer stuff faster. you can probably can get the answer faster by telling more then one person. like for example you are doing some hard work at school and you want the right answer you are not just going to ask one person you are probably going to ask more then one person. All really because everybody thinks different. And last of all ask more then one person can probably get you the right answer. you should other people for help.
you can help you pick the right choices. You can ask some friends or family for some help then it can help you go the right way. But if you do ask a lot of people you can probably can get confused. And maybe get mad and not finish your work. Then you will have no clue how to being aging. But all so all the opinion you got can help you a long way. Because you have gotten so much fact and options you can finish faster.
All Am saying is ask for some help and you can get the right answers and you can probably make some friends too. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
7B38A110CC94 | My grandmother used to say "Your goals are not going to be done if you don't even move a finger".
I am totally agree with what Thomas Jefferson wrote about how wonderful is how much we might done if we are always doing something. We can make plans for every goal in life, but it doesn't matter if we just have a plan because we have to work in that plan to get that goal done, we accomplish a lot things more when we are doing something, when we have that determination to get things done to feel proud of ourselves.
First of all we have to feel, we need purpose and strength to accomplish every goal in our life to feel proud in a future. For example, when I was little, my biggest dream was to be with my parents one more time as a family, we were separated at that time; I was in my home country, El Salvador and they here in the United States. I had that dream, but yes, it was just a dream. why? Because I was afraid of the journey to be with them again, they used to tell me "If you don't do anything you will never know how different your life could be here with us, so throw that fear away and let's do something". Then in my head I said "if I don't get that courage to make the journey I will never going to see my parents again" because I knew that they can't go back to my country, at the end I made that decision and I made it, I am with my parents again and as a gift I learned a new language, now I know i'll be more helpful for this country because I am bilingual now.
Furthermore, we can see in every aspect of life how persons that one day were a common citizen, now are really important in the society because they were always doing something, they were working on their goals. On the other hand we have as example my home country, El Salvador's new president,Nayib Bukele. He was just a citizen like others but he was tired, tired of the political corruption that my country was going through, so here is what he did; he made his plan, he worked on his plan, he worked and made things for the country. Then he became a mayor because people chooses him as their mayor because of all his honest job, he started running for president in 2015, he had a hard time trying to find a political party that supports him with his new ideas and purposes for the country but the parties rejected him because they said he was to young,also they knew he was honest and that he will not admit any corrupt job that affect the country, and they were always looking for reasons to reject him, but he did not give up.
Finally he made his own political party and he get the support of all the people that get tired of live in niggardliness during the governance of other parties, he fought against the two most powerful parties in our country, as a result he won the elections in 2019 and he became the new president of the nation.
Many people think that it doesn't matters if you have goals and make plans for your future if you don't have some resources as money or a good social status, they can also see life as a random game which means that if you accomplish something they will say that is just luck, however; what they call luck, other people call it, late nights of doing something for what you want for your life.
In other words if you want your life to be successful, you don't have to spend your time just dreaming about what you want, because things may be done only if you are always doing something which means; work for what you want, stop thinking about your life goals and start working on them, determine yourself never to be an idler. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
7B4B838D8360 | First of all, I agree with Minister winston churchill once he said success consists of going from failure to failure because when you failure somethig you have to see the important role the faiure plays in the pursuit success. In addition, you have to think about your ideas. Forexample, when I know the position of superviser is avilble at my work and traying to work harder and harder to get this position,but after three years of working hard they gaive this position to someone ealse at this time i feel failure and I keep asking my self why they did not give me the position. Moreover, after two month the manager taking to me about why I am not working hard same like before, and you telling him about the superviser position and you did not ask me for it you just give it to someone ealse. Socend, the city manager called me to ask me if I am still interstiing about the postion or not I said yes I am intersting for it. Then he meet me at the work and said to me to get the position you have to do a lot of things before I gave you the position I said a lot of things like what, I am always dowing every thing at work. Third, he said I have to work all the positions in the reastorant the positions are the following:Foodrunner, Host,Selver,and
Ketchen. And after all of that you will get a traning of two other restorants. In addition to that, I have to disid if I still need the superviser position or not, if I said yes I still need it thats mean I heve to do all the thigs what the manager said it to me to gt the position. FOrth, I accept my manager ofer, and i worked all the positions in the restorant accept the bartnder.
Fivth, the superviser position is good I will get good money and indepence on the location of the restorant our location in Washington Dalles International Airport. Thats mean the restorant always busy specialy Saterday and Sunday. Moreover, I am working with the campany since the open the restorant I am the seniorest preson in the restorant because the campany changed the manigment three times until now.
Then, when my manager saw me morking extrimly hard and when the city manager taked me again I am finaly get the suprviser position
Firs of all, when you going to failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm it is very great to have your enthusiasm and you have to belive in it, because this is the only way to seccess in your life. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
7B557B2F27CE | Do you think imagination is more important than knowledge? Well have you ever wonder how the first computer was made or how the first lightbulb was made? It all started with a imagination, if the person who made a lightbulb never had a imagination of building a lightbulb we will be using candles for a source of light. How a about google, snapchat or even, books it all started with a imagination. Thats why I think imagination is more important than knowledge.
We all know knowledge is very important but with out imagination we cant think or read because imagination is the key to knowledge. Without imagination we cant think and when we cant think we cant learn or solve every day problems. Knowledge did not just exist like that is was made how? By imagination thats why why learn and do things.
You can be the smartest person in the world but if you dont have a imagination you cant help the solve world problems like how to poverty. Imagination is very important because with out it our lives will be more difficult for example with out cars we wont be able to go to work or go places and without phones it will be harder to communicate. The reason we have cars books and computers is not because knowledge but because of imagination. Thats why Imagination is the key to knowledge.
Imagination is very important, why you may ask, well with out imagination we cant think of new ways to solve problems or read. Lets say imagination was never a thing we wont know how to read or count to 10 because imagination is the key to knowlege Without imagination we will be having a lot of problems like how to comunicate, read, think, or even count to 10 thats why imagination is important.
With out imagination we as people cant make new things like books, art, or even better things thats why imagination is very important in may ways. Imagination is the key to making new things like cars, phones, computers, books, with out imagination we wont have things like cars, or phones. It takes alot of thinking to make new and helpful things. If imagination was never a thing their never have been numbers, books, or even a language.
Imagination is how we have things like google, computers, cars, books, and with out imagination we cant think of new ways it make the world a better place.
Imagination is why we as people are advancing and getting smarter every day. Anything is possible if you can believe and think. Thats why imagination is vary inportant is many ways. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
7B5BC2343286 | In some Societies, students are expecting to identify a career by the time they enter to high school,Their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward a specific careers and take the classes they need for the career to practices more and be more specific in the career and have more thinks to know how it work for them, in some career they need a lot of think to try it and they need practice to be in high level of the career and at young age they are expecting what career they want to take when they get older and get to high school.
I think that's good idea for students to commit to a career at young age, because some career are really hard to take it and if they start talking about what career they can take from young age, they would know more about how the career work, and before they get to high school some of them would know what kinda of classes they can take and how it work to get better practice in the career because some career are really hard to take it, but some are not that hard to take it, but in high school they are many classes about careers and they talk about it and it work.
When they get to high school, they can ask what are better courses for this career and what is better for this career and get information. When they are younger they are thinking in many career and they talk to the teacher whats better in this career and what kinda classes they can help and bring up better in the career, When they get to high school the thinking in many more career and getting more ideas about careers and see which one is better and talk about it. and when they get age when they have take classes for the career they getting more ideas about the career.
By the time of the classes they meet someone who knows the about careers and they ask what they need for take classes, and visit the college or make a field trip and meet with the company of the career,
before they get to high school, they trying to be better in every classes they have and have good grades and take important classes that work for the career and trying to take everything what they need for the career and important thinks learning everything.
Most students from young age are thinking in career, when they start middle school are think what kinda of career they can take when they get to high school, and when they get to high school they are looking for the classes about their career, and see what can they do to learn more about what they think in their career and see how can they do to take it, and do the best with their classes to complete the career for their job and take about what they need for the college.
I think that's a good idea to be thinking from young age, so when they get to high school they already know what career they gonna take and what kinda classes they work for their career and be prepared for collage, and from younger age they are learning more about what they wanna be when they get older, When they get to their college they would have more experience with their career, because they start thinking from young and they take course that help for their dreams with the career. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
7B5F5B33B566 | When people ask for advice
, they sometimes talk to more than one person. Have you ever wounder why that is the case?, if you are a person who does not take advice from another individual , then you could use this skill, taking advice from another person can help you make better life choices, it will make you understand things more clearly and faster, and learn from them. Multiple opinions really is a foundation to a job like a mayor of a city, it is vital to take advice from the community in order to address problems and concerns. If it was just a city with no voice in the community then the city would fall into a bad place which no one wants to be in and the key advice is to receive it.
In the world we live in, we make a lot of important choices in life, some are big and some are small, but they effect our future and success. Next, advice from others can make you more wiser when you make your own choices, if
Abraham
Lincoln never saw how African Americans were treated for there skin color he would have never signed the documents for slavery to be band. if he never got advice he mostly likely would have never Andres the problems with having that toxic racism. If it wasnt for him, it would still be here today thanks to out 16th President, which boils down to good thinking and advice. At some point in our lives I know we got advice from someone we look up too,also what ever the advice they gave you, is an add on to bigger things, for example if a parent or guardian gives you some advice to never quit on things or problems that are hard and difficult for you, with just that you will Carey that for the rest of your life. Which eventually make you more wiser and resistant to challenges and in life. You will have a mindset that will help you be more successful and a hard worker. When you are at that point you will know what is right and wrong, from advice from your remodel, father, and mother. Multiple opinions is like trying different types of food from different chefs and if you just try it, you will see something you might like, if you never try something you will never see a different possibility taking advice is just like that. Only instead its intellects make the right choice to help you.
In Conclusion, advice is there to help you, opinions are there to guide you to something that gives you smarts to making the right choices in the world we live in live, sure not all opinions hear might not be in your favor. But just hear them out and be the best you that you want to be shaped in, advice will make yo wiser and more aware of scenarios. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
7B6FA03518AE | People who does not have patient cannot make an experience without helping from someone else, and a project is not hard to make, but you have to think about what you are going to say in the project.
There are a lot of way you should find to do something, and even if you would not undertand what you are doing. Don't give up, because one day you will realize your dream. For this subject I do not agree with it, because if you're making mistake often that doesn't mean you will never grow up. Sometime you have to force yourselfe to work, and in life you need to keep moving on, in what you're doing, you have to make sure that you never go back in the past, because you would like to realize your dream that you promised yourself in the future.
For this position you may say that if you are trying to do something, and you already know that it is not going to be right, just leave it until you find the right way to do it. If you have an experience to do something, and prove it you need to think about it first, before you try your best in what you were trying to do. You could have done something that you had to do. You have to check it, so to make sure it is good or not good, so that is the way you can learn from your mistakes.
Most of the time, you feel like you cannot do anything all you can do is just sleeping that does not mean you will never grow. You will grow in a good situation, if you are always doing good things and you never do something wrong. Now you will be growing up, and people will appreciate you everywhere you go to. For example you have already done some stuff that you are not supposed to do, life is going on that does not mean you will never grow. If you already have a plan to do something you need to think about it, before you start doing it. In life, you suppose to have done the right things to continue with the others. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
7B802407D629 | We choose our own character traits. One character trait is kindness, someone who is very kind and friendly to everyone. my second character trait is rudeness, this is someone is usually not nice to others. My third and final character trait is helpfulness, someone who is always looking to help others. I chose all of these character traits, as i felt these are all traits that people choose themselves.
The act of kindness is someone who is very kind and friendly, its one of many character traits. A lot of people choose to have this as their character traits, and most have it for a good reason. It should be said that people are not born kind, they choose their own traits that fits them best. Some choose to be kind after seeing how some people can act so different towards other people, or their parents just simply raised them to be kind. This character trait is a very common character trait, and i hope more people is it in the future.
Rudeness is a somewhat uncommon character trait used by a small number of people. Not everyone is going to be a good person, some are rude all of the time for no apparent reason. A lot of people are rude because they are most likely going through something, or thats just the trait they had growing up. I know a lot of rude people, teachers and students, most are rude just because thats the trait they decided to choose. My final thoughts on rudeness is that not everyone is rude, but theres always gonna be that small amount of rude people in the world.
The helpfulness trait is of my most favorite traits. Helpfulness is when someone who is always looking to help someone in need, and also make sure they get the help they deserve. I am a helpful person myself, i try to help people with their problems if i can. A person who is helpful is like that as they have always been like that, and just want to help anyone in need. The world is a much better place with helpful people, i hope they don't go anywhere.
My counter claim is that our character is actually formed by influences beyond our control, and that we learn from these influences what our trait really is. I say this is false, we are supposed to choose our character traits, and they are what makes us who we are.
We choose our own character traits. One example of a character trait is the act of kindness, a person who is friendly to all the people that comes their way. A second example of a character trait is rudeness, these types of people are generally rude to everyone that comes their way. A third example of a character trait is helpfulness, a person who wants to help others in any way. I have chosen these character traits as they are the most commonly used character traits. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
7B8400D217C1 | MRS Generic_Name HUMAN RESOURCES,
No, i don't represent the character traits ,i would like the British naturalist and politician to choose the character traits ,i also know that we must allow the British naturalist ,and politician to choose the character of the government to help raise the to help the US institutions and American individual who pass through the management that also cannot gain experience.
Therefore,American government should help the people to give or allow bass positions and cannot gain experience, i also give the opportunity by those who are one and highly options to develop the habits of passing out freedom for all African
Americans,and American .that will help avoid racism to people in America and also the make the politician allow Americans to vote"i can do to achieve it "and i will also brainstorm my idea to help me do the right thing to do to help the British and they a saying that"I CAN DO ALL THINGS THROUGH CHRIST WHO STRENGHTEN ME"this proverbs drawn me to help my fellow ones and also to achieve the little things thats letting me become a great person in the future some people achieve the smaller things that help them succeed
Another significant attitude is that these These Americans, is counted to give the logical manners of American that have the right to have the need to whatever pleads them ,like food,clothing,and all other resources i would love to help the government provide, but in all honesty, i also think we can manage stuff beyond our control by letting the president know what the government stuff in American will need to in other to help the homeless shelter and also providing whatever they request for like money,food and other kind in other to help them shine and happy .and helps me gets close to my family closely by going home to do my assignment ,eat .but when i also get home, i rest and do my laundry i try keeping my clothes clean everyday .
finally,my conclusion of other feelings and emotions is also what make me a great,if not the best candidate for the position which i was providing since i was younger ,i have always been an active and responsible person ,who can help others and i also know its vital in others workplace in my power to work on anything i could be responsible for in other to help the state department help to provides all the goods that needed for all Americans and also do what its allowed to do by paying out your tax to help builds school,help people when they in need and also help the government pay off stuff to support.
respectfully,
Manager Generic_Name | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
7BBB35F9D1BD | If I had to take a side I think I would disagree. One reason is that you cant always have success ,there's times where somethings don't work out. Then there's failure and thats how you have success in anything from learning from your failure But there is time where when you fail and your enthusiasm is gone because of that.
The one reason I agree is because there's time that you just cant have success. I have had that in my life in many situations. Once when I was playing soccer we had won all the games and then came to the day where we were playing for first place and we lost and that day all my enthusiasm was gone. I was so mad and just had no energy. I learned that there times that I wont win and times I will it's part of life but along the way I learn new things. Then there school there you do go from failure from failure to success because once you make a mistake and you learn from it and do better next time because your already know now but it does bring your enthusiasm down.
The next reason is that failure does does make you have success but also it make not encourage to keep going. From the first time you fail to the next will will learn something and later on when it happens again that's will you will get it. When you do fail and fail you lose enthusiasm but gain it back when you have success. You feel sad and mad and just not excited no more when you keep failing again and again. So when you fail and fail again you will away lose enthusiasm because you just can't get it.
So if I had to pick a side I would disagree because you cant just fail and fail and then have success and not lose enthusiasm. And I disagree from experience because in my life I fail and never still had enthusiasm after failing maybe some people do but I speak from my point of view. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
7BC73C8FBDBC | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Students should offer public classes, however, Distance schools will make students careless by doing online or video conferencing. Distance learning is not good because it would make cheat easier, there would be less social interaction, and they would need to be highly motivated.
Firstly, students would cheat easier. For example, If students allowed to use their technology system, It would be easy for them to do their work but It would be easy for them to go online to and copy the answers Some students have trouble working at school because they don't want to work.
some of teens says that they cannot understand to work at school.
Secondly, there would be less social interaction. For instance, when you are taking a test or taking notes at online school there are many distraction that can make students lose focus on what they are doing. Therefore, Learning from public school it won't have distractions that a online has. However, Students won't lose focus on what they are doing if they are only focus on their teacher and if they have questions, they can ask from their teachers so they would help them more. It would be more helpful if students come to school.
Some students says that Online schools have more highly motivated. For example, one of my friend, she used to come to school, but Furthermore, she stop coming to school, because her teachers won't helped her, she cannot understand well, she got bad grade, and she fail all semesters then she plan to start online school. she got the answers the error words which she didn't know. However, Online school are have much more opportunities than the public schools. online schools have more distractions on what you are doing and get more free time.
In conclusion, students should offer to attend classes because attending to classes are less stressful. Students get more help from teachers. there would be less social interactions, because they won't be distracted by any technology and would be focus on studies. Some students are more interests in online schooling because they get more free time and get more rests than the public schools. I think public schools are more helpful for everyone because you meet new people, learn different experience, you get new ideas from others, and it wouldn't make you stressful. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
7C08DA95AE9A | One way to improve student achievement is to start a after school homework club.
Teachers and students should start meeting after school this idea would benefit students by getting extra support, turning assignments on time get a better understanding of the things that the teacher teach on class, establishing the club would help those students who don't turn in assignments on time or those who like to do things early.
In order to students to be successful they need extra support a better explanation of the things they learn, many students struggle with the assignments and most of them don't ask for support through the school year I have seen many students raping the assignments because they don't understand them, but if the school make the the idea of starting a club there would be no excuse for students to not be successful in their homework, tests, and class assignments.
Students should start turning assignments on time specially those who don't turn in on time, the club would help many students like instead of going home and forgot that they have assignments to do they could come and join the after school homework club. I have friends who like to do homework and be successful, but the problem is that they don't understand the assignments and if someone don't understand something why should they do it because either way they going to get the assignment wrong the school must provide more support for students.
In addition the club could not be just of getting help or finish assignments early, the club could be a place were students can find support and motivation in order to be a better person on life many students don't care about school because they don't find the good thing about it maybe because they need a motivation to be at school the after school club could be a place where people can meet and share ideas or meet each other and make a friendship helping each other to understand better the thing that they don't understand.
In conclusion the school must make the after school club in order to get more successful students and to also help and motivate students to do their assignments and turning them on time. extra support is a better way to understand the things you don't understand, turning assignments make a student seem responsible and also get a good admiration of others making friends and share, discuss thing together is a better way to solve a problem that they had. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
7C14A6539215 | To keep the resources of the world, Can be necessarily to implement the idea " four-day school week". " The four day school week" consist of ten hours per day. Adopting this idea it is going to conserve energy and resources. If they spend the whole evening in the school they can learn more and be more prepare for school.
It's a good idea to implement this but at the same time it has some disadvantages . One of them can be that the students will be stressful. A lot of hours in just one place can make the students to got bored an tired of it. It's not just that a lot of students have responsibilities as paying rent and bills. They need to work to pay their responsibilities and if they come to school for ten hours they won't have enough time to make more hours in their job.
If the students assist to school for more hours they got the chance to learn more and improve their skills. In those 10 hours they can even get an extra class , a class that they want. They can have a lot of time to understand more their classes and be more prepare for them. Having that time will be easy to communicate with more people and teachers . The don't have to rush in class anymore , now they got the time to prepare more in class.
To implement this can be a bad idea because if the students come to school for ten hours they will end it up with stress. Be in a place for a lot of our can be really stressful If the students are stressful of school they won't do their best because they are tired of it. Not all the students like to go to the school and for them will be even more stressful. If the students have homework will be even more difficult to get a good rest. They won't have enough rest for them.
Some students got responsibilities at home like help their families at home or some of them have to work to pay their bills. A lot of students pay their own rent and they need to leave early from school and work more hours to effort enough . If they leave late from school they will work less hours and at the end they won't have enough money . Leaving late from school and working a lot going to make them tired of that routine. The students need time to rest as well. If they don't get enough rest to do what they want to do at the end they will end it up stressful and not doing their best at school and at work. If that happens they will have a lot of problems because if they don't do their job property the will got fired and without money to pay their bills. In school can happen the same thing as well with bad grades and not paying enough attention.
In conclusion having this idea can be a bad choice . A lot of students have things to do beside school like working or helping their families . Coming for ten hours can make them to stress easily .Student with stress won't do their best and at the end they going to have bad grades. The students need to rest and do whatever they want in their free time. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
7C2650EEA2B6 | Do you think a three month break is too long ? Some professors feel that summer break is too long and students are most likely to forget everything they have learned when they return to school. However, both professors and students deserve a nice, long break because ten months of high school can cause tons of stress, people get to spend more time with their families, and last but not least, students can take classes during the summer if they want to graduate early.
First, most students want to attend to good colleges, therefore, they take advanced classes in high school in order to receive more credits. Teachers give more assignments in advanced classes and the work is much harder than course classes. Students often have to stay up late to finish school work. In addition, with little amount of sleep can cause students serious stress. For instance, my cousin once took six college classes in her junior year of high school. She never had much time to eat nor sleep, to the point where she passed out. My family had to take her to the doctors for a checkup. They said that she had stress issue and it may take a long time for her to recover. Luckily, with three months of summer break, she became better.
Second, some students don't want to spend four years in high school when they have an opportunity to graduate early. In order to do so, they must take all of the requirement courses. Though, not all courses are available during the school year, however, students can take it in the summer. For example, my best friend, Generic_Name, took English 11 over the last summer, so she could graduate early from high school and soon become a nurse. She learned everything she needed for the tests within two months of summer school,
Third, many people love to spend time with their families. Summer break would be an awesome opportunity for both teachers and students to go on vacations with their loved ones. They can travel to different states or even countries if they like. In the summer of 2015, my family and I had a great time in Generic_City. I got to experience many amazing things, it was the best summer I have ever had. Though, the most wonderful time of the year is summer, however, some argue that there should be year round schools and only three to four weeks of break in the summer.
In conclusion, all students and teachers, including staff members deserve a nice, long summer break. Most people agree that school is very stressful, therefore, a three month break is not too long. Some says that when one is stress out, they can't think nor do things well. On the other hand, when their mind is relax they will achieve successful things in life. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
7C31C5E519FF | Where would i want to go vist? i would want to go to vist el salvador because i want to go vist my famliy. Also i would want to go the beach . Then i would love to eat their food that they have
My one reason i want to go to el salvador ,i want to go vist my famliy because i have not seen them in 6 years and i really want to spend time with them. Also i would want to spend with my baby cousin. the reason i would spend time with him is because he's a very special kid and he's very sick i would do many things for him. After i spend time with him i would take my famliy for dinner and they would be happy that i took them out to eat.
My second reason is i would want to go to the beach because i want to see how beutiful it is over there. Also many people say it's beutiful because of the ocean. Then i would want to go to swim! Many people say that the water is very warm because it's closer to the equitor, it's not like the US the water is cold. Then after swiming i want to buy a neckless for everyone in my famliy.
My third reason is i would want to try their food that they have because people say it's amizing. I want to try their poposa because it's better then the stores. The way you they make it,is they start with corn masa, then they make a mini bowl , then you can put cheese and beans whatever you want, then you close it you put it in the pan and let it cook. The best thing about poposa when they're over fill when the cheese and beans are dripping.
These are my reason where would i go to vist. we should vist many place because we can learn somthing new. Also we should try are best to go somewhere at least the cheaps trip you can find. maybe i would be able to go to el salvador. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
7C4960DF5CB8 | I think that there should be a after school homework club because its hard to understand homework sometimes and you dont know what you are doing exactly but if we were to have these clubs think about how many students would get there work done . We might think that homework isnt important but it is homework is worth 10 percent of your grade and sure that might not be a lot but it could really help your grade. And it could really help you like when it comes to test you could know the matrial you need for this test if you did that one piece of homework that one piece of homework could have helped you past that test you probly failed or quiz . Also some students dont understand the work the teachers give like when you dont understand that class work you were doing in that class how do the teachers expect that the student bring in there homework .
I hard for students to learn middle school student have a lot to do for example students have to worry about getting homework done for all 7 of these classes it isnt easy . Most teachers might give more than one piece of homework some might give 2 some might give 3
pieces of homework .
Students could also ask about what they dont understand they will help students in what they dont understand or what they didnt understand in that lesson that they had .The teacher will explain what you didnt understand , some students just dont have time so maybe that one day that can stay afterschool could help them get all that students homework done . Also help them undestand not just give that student the answer to the question they would actually learn and that . This also will get students grades up and might take a B to and A
. It will not only help the students but the school to because if these student are getting there homework done then that will make the school look better . Teacher will also know that students are getting there work done and not just getting the anwser like some students do now when it comes to homework . Other students that are cabelble of doing this work on there own but have a hard time turning the homework in on time and if the school had a afterschool club this it homework wouldnt be a problem .
In conclusion this club would be really good to have because homework is a big issue in alot of these schools and most students dont care or dont understand how much homework matters it matters so much you probly wonder. Why you didnt pass this test or why couldnt pass this quiz you took maybe if you did that homework you could have past the test , quiz also home plays a big role in school teachers give studnets homework so we can get better at that subject it easier for students not to care about homework ''BECAUSE IT DOESNT MATTER'' but it does and. No matter how many time you try to tell yourself it doesnt matter it does and that is not going to change so do your homework and if this afterschool club happend then homework will be one less thing to worry about . I think that if the school had this club it would really help studnets in school and help really understand the work and homework and help them be less stress because it it alot of work for you to get done and espcially if you dont get the work you need to do . Also students would be happy that they got there homework done now they can do whatever they want afterschool becaus ewhat was taking up most of there afternoon is now done . | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
7C54D7484145 | I think students should not be required to take a arts class . students have the rights to take the classes they want to take . If they like arts classes they are free to take that class . but students that don't like art class do not have to take the class .
For example i really don't like arts classes but i'll still take the class because at my school they do this thing that if we need to retake a curse class then we well have 25% of taking that class or if we don't need a curse class we had the 50% of taking that . It might be the same in some schools or it might be different it others schools. some kids may not like the idea of taking art classes and some may like the idea .
Kds may want to have space to take the class they want and they can't because they are required to take arts class . Like they want to take gym or something like this but i know that some boy's would not like this idea . If some kids do enjoy painting or acting . but some kids do not like acting or painting . They might think that it's boring for them to be in that class .
I know that some kids like to act cool and be rude to teachers that they don't like the class or something like this . That's why im saying that arts classes should not be required to take .
I think the best thing to do is to allow kids to pick their classes that they want to take as an elective class .
it's really the best thing to do in my thinking . Because look at it like this if kids that don't like drama and they don't let the teachers teach because they do not wanna be there . they want be in another class that they really want to be
. that's another thing that teachers have to go though dealing with rude kids .
This concludes my argument about students having to take arts classes . this is for all schools please let your kids to pick their classes . or at least give them one class that they like . like i said at first i really don't like this argument thats happening . | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
7C5E4E2779BF | I'm agree with Emerson's restatement, in my point of view or personality I can say that I want to be a different person with another qualities, create other ways to think how big or how much I can do to show to the world my authentic and proper knowledge, when I have to make a decision I don't have to think too much about it, I believe in what I'm doing. When you think to be a real person and someone different to the rest, you need to have a plan that consist step by step and develop that plan in the course of your life to make goals to short time and large period of time, be patient with each little detail that you want to do.
For example:
If yo want to do something that you think that is impossible for any reason, you don't have to leave that idea or goal that you have in mind, remember that all you need is work hard, be simple and don't complain for any problem or reason that tomorrow will have a lot of consequences.
At this time, the people and no one wants to see another person having their own goals or their dreams that they had when they were children. Every single person will try to impress to your attention to turn down your attitude and your positive life, I have too many experiences that I never want to pass that process again, in this world exist all type of people that want to help, to destroy your intention or the ways to see the real things, you're a guide and an example to change the format in this age. When you have a purpose that everyday make changes in your personal life or something like motivation to do anything that that have a great value to demonstrate to you family that they are the base to all of your goals have worth. A big percentage of people want to be rich, and my way to think about it, is that all thing that's material it doesn't have a real value for a great and humble person, the value is something that makes you having a great family, a simple life, because the world need to be protected by several and carefully people that are interesting in show another face to represent a different type of humanity.
Be an individual person is how you you can to do to confront the reality and give another perspective to make a great research in your your period of life to change or keep using that type of life and really cares about what are you doing with an specific and central idea.
I have a positive and big action to say that Emerson is right because nobody wants to be the shadow of any person or leave an opportunity that will make the life of one or more person to decide to experiment a new way to see the society and doing the correct process to be an excellent human with integrity and feeling of better life.
My conclusion for this restatement is that I want to be myself with great intentions to form an integrity in this society and have the best recognition to prove that it's possible to make and develop a proper identity with a new perspective to imagine and be the next person in the world that makes you a connection with your interior and have peace to concentrate in own goals that will converting on a genuine person to be autonomous of your acts, be someone responsible, charismatic and all of these characteristics define your personality it doesn't matter where yo come from or where you at, just be an example that if I can do this, you can do it better than me and better as you want. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
7C6ED140EF65 | There are many that have responsibility in the world that we have to do and with those responsibility there will be many challenges that we as humans have to overcome to theses things in one way or another. A city council is debating adoption of a 10P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight curfew for teenagers. Dear city council I find it amazing that you are doing this but I also do disagree mainly because. For example, we teenagers have to some activities after school or we have jobs and if its not because of those things its because were stuck in traffic. I do understand the reasoning of why we shouldnt be driving at these hours of the night It's mainly because we're exhausted at that point we can't focus that much. To say something we teenagers we can stay awake much more longer than you adults why do you think we stay up for so long its not because we're bored no its because we want you to see that we can hold our own wait and we stay up for our jobs and dont sleep until we go home when we get home because in truth we can hold ourselves now.
Dear to the city council I actually do think we should have teenagers off the road before 12AM. For example, thats when people that are under the influence are mainly on the road and depending on where you are there could be deer. There are lots of dangerous things in the night that no one can see or even some dangerous people that might harm us in the night. There are a lot of bad things on the road at night and you as the driver could of course from your long drive an turn tired and maybe crash. In conclusion I see why you dont want us to go driving at 10PM or even past midnight because of there being dangerous things in the night but I do also hope that you know that we dont stay up because of random things but we're actually staying up important things like our jobs or after school activities and that we will be very careful in the night because we know of the dangers of the night. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
7CAFF57E1775 | Dear principal,
I have heard of the school cafeteria's plan to change to a new healthier school lunch. And as a junior in this school,I take the position that this new dynamic idea to change the school's lunch menu is a bad idea. So I have decided to share my thoughts for the development of this school and with our health. I believe that keeping our school's lunch menu is a good idea. I know that my opponents would argue with me regardlessly,because they would probably assume that our students have been eating the same food for too long and would definetely want to have a different versions of food,and get to explore their school lunch like other schools usually do. But when they detect my reasons,they would know for sure that the school's lunch is way better than they think it is.
My initial reason for not agreeing to this change is that it would eradicate some student's favorite cafeteria foods, especially me,There are a lots of food currently in the cafeteria that are so good, clean and healthy.
they are also enough food for everyone to eat, so changing the menu wouldn't be necessary, it would be a waste of time and money. the school has got a bunch of stuff to focuse on. American's have this quote that " if you have lemons make lemonades" meaning we should make the best out of what we have by embracing it not changing it.
In additon, the current school's lunch menu is technically healthy, I have this extraordinary thoughts in my mind because I haven't seen any student that has protested against the school's lunch, this means that the current school lunch is unique on it's own way. Also the school lunch is potentially some of the amazing healthy American foods.
Again,Most American foods are junky and cause students to gain weight chronically and gradually. But our current food consists of fruits,vegetables and also green salad which prevents the body from gaining too much weight and sustain the normal body weight. I have been eating our school's green salad for a while and l have seen some fantastic changes in my body and it is very impressive. So principal, dont you think that changing our school's cafeteria's lunch menu is a bad idea?
For instance, our school cafeteria's lunch has got protein,Vitamin D and my weight is intact, as far as our health is concerned, so take all of these reasons into consideration and figure out your final answer,I hope that you make the right choice for the school and l know that the school's improvement is your priority.
Thank you respectively,
Generic_Name 11th grade( junior) | 4.5 | 5 | 5 | 4.5 | 5 | 4 |
7CB712FD1253 | There are some some school's that offer 3 years to graduate but then there are some school's that are still doing Traditional way's of the 4 year's of high school and in my opinion is that it is good to graduate early and go to college or the work force but it also depends on the person thats doing all this work to graduate high school or the evenings or night school but people still do it and its good. The people that are doing all this work are hard working people who want to follow through with there ideas and dreams in life and they are paying good for it by studying and working hard throughout high school and they keep on working hard to reach for there goal outside of high school. In my opinion It's a great idea to finish all of high school within 3 years because that's hard work paid off but some people believe that if you stay in school for an extra year that makes you smarter but in some sense that could be true but sometimes people stay the extra year because for 1 they sometime's stay because they fell behind and sometimes it's because they need one type of class for college but in reality the people who did the 3 year's of high school are the truly advanced one's because they did everything within 3 years and its good for them.
if these people go into the work place they have a higher chance of getting the job that they want because they have a high school diploma and the fact that they graduated school early so they that as an advantage for them when they find a job and most jobs are only looking for people that are either in high school or have a diploma because some job's just want people with brains so they could work smarter and not harder but the truth is these people are doing everything to make a living because they worked really hard in high school now they're working really hard at a job and now they are succeeding in life because they were smart and graduated earlier then everyone else
In the case that going to college after graduating the three year's are also good because they want to get into a field of a type of job that they wanted and now they're working even harder for it but in reality its working smarter not harder because they are studying for a career that will give them more money no matter what because they are studying for 4 more years to achieve there dream of becoming something in this world and they are smarter by doing that because a dream job is one of the thing's everyone want's and its good to have a goal in mind.
In my conclusion is that going to college is the better one because It's working smarter not harder and that's the better idea instead of working hard and not being able to get paid enough like the people at the college do so in my state of fact that college if the better choice to go with out of high school no matter if you did 3 years or traditional 4 years of high school the best choice is after high school to go to a college or a university that makes life better in the end for everyone. Some people like to chose the route of hard work but its truly good to head to a college or university after school is over fo0r this person. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
7CBB1B6F4E25 | Having electives classes can be a great opportunity to let students choose what they love to do and be lesss stressful. Schools, which do not have electives classes had become less popular. Students choose to study in schools that are less complicate for them. Although some say students should be required to take class in the arts actually, students classes should be electives because students can use the free time more helpful for their benifit and they will have less worries.
Those who believe students should be required to take class in the arts have their reasons. They believe students have to be more responsible and pass all their classes. They also think students can learn how to be good in arts.
One reason, why class in atrs should be electives is because students can use the free time more helpful for their benifit. For example, my friend Generic_Name he only had to take Algebra 2, English 12, U.S Goverment, and Chemistry to graduate this year. However, he had to take one class in the arts that was required to graduete. But, Generic_Name did not have more space during that day,
and the other day of school Generic_Name had to work to help his mother.
If Generic_Name did not have to take the class in arts. He will be able to graduate this year. In addition, he will not waste his time in one class that maybe will not be interesting for him. Also, he will be able to help his mother about taking care of his litter bother. When she was working, so his mother did not have to work less hours.
Another reason, why classes in school shoud be electives is because students will have less worries. For instance, my friend Generic_Name. One day she had to study for her History
ESOL. As well as, she had to make a big and beautiful draw for her class in art. Generic_Name took almost all the night making the draw ,so she did not have time to study and she fall the
ESOL. If Generic_Name did not have to make the draw for her art class. She will study for the ESOL, and she will get enough sleep. Generic_Name will be able to think and pass her test. And she will have more time to study. Sometimes taking a lot of classes is not a good idea for students bacuse it is to hard for them to concentrate.
To conclude, I believe that class in arts should be alectives becuase students will be more confident in doing what they love to do. Also respecting students opinions can be a great opportunity to demostrate them that school cares about what they feel. For those reasons I think class in arts should not be required. One is that students will use the free time more helpful for their benifit.
Another one is that students will have less worries. School have to see what their students need to make them capable and sucessful. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
7CC4A8E1948E | Winston Churchill is a good person everybody knows that, a person that give good idea or a person that bring idea to life . Thing he say they are true, they can open your mind, and make you think.
Yes : I agree with Winston Churchill. I know some people say that too, to be success at first; you going failure to failure, in once you try not to failure guest what, you fail again. This can be happen , but Winston was right , to success you can fail all the time. When somebody want to be success in he/she fail, that doesn't mean they cannot " try" again. But the thing is, they need to get up in keep trying on till then.
If success brought people failure to failure, then what would that be in life, when you fail on try to be success, it not a bad thing cause sometime in life either you: win or you loos, but at least you can try one more time. Failure might be discourages you, but you can Always keeping going to accomplish your gold, or maybe you might " successful" after all.
1)Success is a good thing for those who fail in fail in the results, they successful. Winston idea was right, so my position is that success consists of going from failure to failure without loosing enthusiasm are lesson you. With enthusiasm your success going greats and fast. Thats it true enthusiasm try to find your success can make a big differences. An in endurance can bring you to successful too, in time you'd need it.
2)If you pursuit or enthusiasm your can success anything that you thing that hard can be easier's for you, cause you put your ; Enthusiasm, and convicted your issue. Failure without trying " does not" gave nothing excepted discourage, in that will be stupid of you if you failure in you give up in the same time.
3) Failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm will give you something in return, in that is "fact" no dispute about it. Even those who loves you can make fun of you, it they sees you keeping failure; or stay away from you on till you "win" or find what you want's.
Anabel for you to be success you need enthusiasm, it gonna give courage, and not to focusing on you failure, then you'll never success or accomplish your gold. For example : Generic_Name his a psychology teacher in Generic_School,Generic_Name never thought he will be a teacher cause his gold was to teach psychology, unfortunately he cant past his test so that he can graduated, but he thought about it , he put all his enthusiasm on it Generic_Name past the test in now his a successful guy. There are tree reason that " success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.
ONE, if you a failure in you didn't put your enthusiasm on you "success" you'll never be successful.
TWO, take example about people who never thought they will success, such ass Generic_Name, Generic_Name,and Generic_Name Generic_Name.
TREE, always get up when fail, always focuses on you success, and take that serious when you a failure. As a Mather of fact , look at all the Hollywood stars' , some of them didn't born with success some of them were poor, having no skills ,and some of them didn't have no education. They work hard in hard to be success cause that was their gold to be " success" in they accomplish it even if they fail sometime.
Winston Churchill was right about that, i'm 100% agree with his statement. If you a failure in then you loss your enthusiasm you will never be " success" . That's a true statement for success, in
I really Agree with Churchill's statement about the important role failure plays in the pursuit of success.
If you have a gold to be success in you though you a failure , don't like that why cause with : enthusiasm, and consists you can accomplish anything, even thing that you image you'll never accomplish or be success. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
7CCC4CDC5CF0 | People make their own decisions in life but, people can make mistakes in life. A certain people don't have have other people to help them with their decisions in life. People should seek guidance from experts because experts can assist people in situations, making sure that the person is doing it correctly, and give advice to a person that needs assists.
First, experts can help people about relationships in life for example a breakup, fights, arguments, trust issues, and lack of communication. They are good amount of experts who can deal with peoples relationship problems for example my father helped me with a breakup. my father said to me that "she's not the only girl out there in the world". I listened to my father's advice it helped me a lot. Experts can actually help through with your taxes and bills if you're having trouble, for example my grandfather who was helping my dad with his taxes because my father forgot to pay the taxes.
Secondly,experts can make sure if people are doing stuff correctly. Experts can assist people with their taxes to make sure if the person is doing their taxes correctly,for example my grandfather was making surer that if my father was doing his taxes correctly. Experts can make should that people is going to make sure that the person is doing the bills right,for example the mortgage for the house people need an expert to assist the person if they're doing the mortgage correctly. Not just the mortgage it can be bills in the house. Experts can make sure that the person is doing their car payments correctly in order to keep their car and not fall behind on their payments.
Lastly,Experts can give people advice in life,for example experts can give advice for taxes,payments,and etc. For example my father was giving me advice about how to buy a car because I'm getting a car over the summer. Experts can give people advice when the Person needs it to be successful in life. For example an expert giving advice to a person that is trying to get good credit to buy a house. Some experts give advice to people that are serious, for example people that are in a verge of crisis right now.
In conclusion people can make their own decisions in life but, people make mistakes in life. people should seek guidance from experts because experts can assist people in situations, making sure that the person is doing it correctly, and give advice to the person that needs help. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
7CDB47E88B39 | Having a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall does not sound like a good Idea to me. Since It snows a lot in the winter we would be missing more days of school If winter break was longer. The school year is 9 months, students should get a summer break that we usually get, which is 2 months. We shouldn't have a break in the fall if we just got back into school after the long summer break.
We should not have a longer winter break. Since it snows a lot in the winter, we miss a lot of school days. Students would be missing lessons, quizes, and even tests because of the snow days we get. Students need to catch up on everything and finish lessons before the school year ends. If we get a longer winter break we would be getting out of school later on which means less summer vacation.
Since the school year is 9 months, students should get a summer break that we usually get. Students deserve the 2 months of summer break because of all the hard work and studying they did in the school year. In the summer students also get the chance to visit family members, spend more time with their family, and even get ready for the next school year.
Since we just got back into school, It is not necessary to have a one week break in the fall. We just had a 2 month summer break which gave the students the opportunity to be ready for the next school year and also gave them a chance to have a vacation. Since there is also a lot of holidays in the school year, a fall break would interfere with the day we get out of school. Which means we would probably have a little longer school year.
If we did have a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall, the school year would be pretty short and the students wouldn't like the short breaks. Even though the educators would like it and thinks that it is helpful for students, it would make the students feel stressed out since the school year would probably be shorter.
Having regular summer break, regular winter break, and regular spring break, would be a better idea then having a shorter summer break, long winter break, and a break for spring and fall. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
7CFA22351B27 | school districts should allow students to graduate one year early but only if they took the courses. If the students willing to sacrifice their time, elective course, and really work to get to their goal of graduating a year early then they deserve it.
From the process it takes to graduate a year before it would seem that yes, they are attending school for less time but from the courses in summer or evening theyre putting the same if not little change in time of the average high school student in just that one year. If they can handle the equivelent of junior and senior year in the same year then it shows how hard working and out going they are and could benefit them when they`re choosing a collage because:
it could impress the collages they'd want to attend they already know the stress of a collage class because of the extra courses they could be in a better position with organization, and being on time
It would also be a great benefit for students who'd join the work force instead of collage because:
they also know the stress from the extra courses if their family is going through financial problems it gives them more time to work they'd have a head start on their life
The only real problem of this would be the amount of time and stress the student had but thats only limited for the school year.
in conclusion i believe school districts should give students the chance to graduate early if they are willing to put the time and effort of two years into one and face the obstacles that come with it. itd be very beneficial to the student and/or their family and create a great layout for them fro what ever comes next. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
7D0CE6E00B68 | Aesop said, No act of kindness,"no matter how small is ever wasted" I think that what there trying to say is that no matter how mad you are or sad you can still find happiness or hope even if you lost someone in a family member it is ad but also just be a little happy that he is in a better place that he dose not have through any pain or suffering.
Aesop said, No act of kindness,"no matter how small is ever wasted". I think he is also trying to say is that dont let anyone drag you down do what you think is right and dont let anyone tell you that your wrong try to prove them wrong because you can do anything. Maybe you can be wrong but learn from your mistakes and try again.
Aesop said, No act of kindness,"no matter how small is ever wasted". I think what he is also trying to say is to be happy to have fun enjoy the little thing's as a kid once you become older your not going to have that much fun because were going to have to find a job, house, vehicle, and other stuff and it's not going to be fun so enjoy the little things and to have fun while you can. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
7D1825E2F4AD | Why should someone, tell people what matters in life , or what decisions to take?
Everyone has the opportunity to live however they want by taking the decisions they want , if they have self-reliance , they don't need no one to tll them what to do.
People should make their own decisios, even if they are not sure, because if they are making a mistake they can learn how to do it good, they will feel secure, which is impoirtant to take future decisions, and they can find out what matters in life by themselves.
People make a lot of mistakes in life by taking the wrong decision , but that's not bad , it is just a way to learn hot to do the things rigth, a lot of people look for experts when they have to take a important decision, because they are afraid of take the wrong decision, and there's nothing bad with it, but they should trust themselves before pay someone else to tell them what to do , or what decisions take.
When people take the rigths decisions by themselves they feel secure about what are they doing ,so they earn self-reliance to make future dedcisions, and even if people don't take the rigth's decisions , they learn from the mistakes, to take the corret decision in the future, with no help from the experts.
Why should someone else tell people what really matters in life ? People don't need guidance to find it out , they should take tehir time to analyze what really matters in life , they should take their own decisions about what matters , because people is different one from others , so they should take their decisions about what really matters in their lifes.
In conclusion people should take their own decisions ,because it helps them to feel secure when taking future decisions, they can learn from the wrongs decisions , and they can learn and understand what matters in life. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
7D2D5053D947 | What are the benefits of working with a group vs working alone. Working alone isn't bad because their no one to rely on. Then and working with a group is more beneficial. reasons being said are more people more ideas, getting help from teammates, and will be less mistake because there more than one person to get help. For example playing in a team sport working with teammates is better than trying to do every thing alone, same thing with a big project.
Just like the saying two heads are better than one. defiantly when working on a project. Being alone there going to be mistake because no one will correct you on the paper. Another benefits of working in a group is more ideas coming from different people and taking that you can learn from it. Not only that if a person is stuck on something the group with help out to solve it together, also it will save a lots of time trying to work by yourself.
Being in a team that the PE teacher assign you, will be hard trying to play alone in a group or team. Working by your self is not helping the team or people skills. In the long run getting a job there will be times when needed to work with co workers or bosses, doing group projects or playing for a team will benefit that. Because it helping on people skill. That learning in experience knowing not everybody is the same.
Working alone helps but I feel in a group is more beneficial. There no motivation being alone it attend to be boring. Therefor more mistakes could happen, limit to some ideas and knowledge, and can't get help because every one is working alone. Doing work in a group helps students be wake, reasons for that is there someone to talk to also it will be less work and save good amount of time. Students attend to dose off or stress when it to much work on their hands.
In conclusion I prefer working in a group feel more beneficial then working alone. It will defiantly help in school if a student is doing a project or playing for a team. Also in the long run With jobs, family, neighbors, or starting a protest will help if being in a group. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
7D519DA76B29 | The use of technology has spread all over the world. Everyone uses technology to talk to family/friends, text family/friends, pay bills online, shop online, etc. To me technology has both positive and negative effects. The positive effect is talking to people you can't see everyday or can't see at all, you can use technology to talk to long distance. A negative effect is the lack of getting stuff done, going outside for fresh air, no person to person communication, etc.
Instead of going outside to be with friends, family, etc most people stay home and just be on there phone all day, watching TV, on the computer, any device people have at home they use. Shopping has changed dramatically. Instead of going to the mall to go shopping most people can just stay home and go online to shop. Paying for bills or going to your bank has changed dramatically. You can pay all your bills, funds, credits, online. Everyone used to get out of there house and go to where they need to go to pay there stuff off, but technology as made it easier for people to stay home an do stuff online.
Half the people in the world think technology is not okay and should be gone. Young kids having technology is even worse because, kids dont play outside anymore they stay inside and play video games, talk to there friends online, watch videos, etc. Teen's are the same too. Almost every teen stays home and talk to friends, play video games like x box, PlayStation, etc. In schools teachers use websites to help students learn and understanding the subject.
Technology has changed the world. Technology does allow people to complete many tasks without talking to people. The world would have been so different if there was no technology made at all. Everyone would be outside more with there friends/family, traveling is the best way to get your mind off stuff and to have fun, eating in restaurants with people you love is the best. Ways to plan stuff out like traveling or eating with friends/family is either using a phone or just talking about it in person.
In conclusion, i think the limitation of human contact has a negative effect. Since technology has been made people have been getting lazy and lazy by the day. Theirs so much things we used to go outside for, we can just stay home and go online. Instead of playing with friends outside we stay home and play video games and if we're bored we stay home and just find something in our device to entertain us. Its hard for people to get there phone taken away from parents because what can we do without our phones? The world needs to see that something is wrong. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
7D94F809823A | Many people agree, that the use of technology brings a positive impact by allowing people to complete many task like. looking for information, buying a book,
buying video games, and shopping. and looking for technology as a way to communicate which can limit the opportunities to use verbal communication.
I strongly disagree with this statement on the use of technology, because it limits the amount of outside interactions and technology can do everything for you. For example, now people mostly use text as a way to communicate with someone through social media. using only this form of communication can limit the use of verbal communication with a person. Resulting in negative relationships with a person causing misunderstandings and negative relationships. avioding verbal interactions is very bad for somone. Technology can also be damaging for the health.
Technology be both physically and emotionally unhealthy. For Instance the use of so much technology can damage the eyes and can cause brain damage this can result to unhealthy problems in the future. On the other hand people think that by using there phones, tablets and computers. They do not have to be mobile and do a task by themselves with no technology. By sitting around and not getting up to go out and finish a task can lead to loss of energy and many other physical problems. The lack of day to day verbal communication can cause negative emotions. For instance not verbally talking to people can make someone feel lonely and unhappy.
Using technology as a way to purchase things and avoiding to go to the stores can have some negative outcomes. For Example purchasing an electronic on a website and having it delivered it can result to being broken, missing pieces, and can be the wrong thing this can lead to loss of money and can lead to no possible refunds. people use this as way to shop for food, clothes, and books instead of being able to feel the object or know the quality of the item it self or asking an employee about the items pros and cons.
In conclusion, Many people agree that technology allows them to complete many tasks without having to come in contact with others. as a result Technology has a negative impact on people limiting contact with person to person resulting to negative impacts on there day to day life, Although, technology is smart it is always best idea is to be able to do things more off technology and using more verbal communication with a people rather then a phone or computer using verbal communication is a best way to being positive out comes and being able to go to a store instead of relying on technology. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
7D955FAD0C73 | Likewise, many people belive that " Determine never to be idle ... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing". By all means that by being idle you wont get much done, but if active can get a lot of more stuff done. Others belive that by being idle, you can still get anything done as much as a person that is consistently active. I strongly agree that by being active will get more tasks complete and it will be less difficult. By always having something to do, your showing everyone your character and your morals. Inactivity and idleness is not good because by not having anything to do you wont learn as much as a person that has to do majority of time. Actively participator have better improved skills then those who dont do anything.
Firstly, being active is the best goal a mind set can have. It will be less likely for one to not complete a task or struggle with a task if is idle. Always doing something no matter if you have nothing to do, shows a lot about someones motivation and actions. Especially in a work place, if your boss sees you doing nothing while there being things to do, hes going to think your inactive. By showing everyone you always have something to do, your showing them that you are capable of doing anything. Theres no task to difficult or no job to big for you to complete because you are already used of always doing something in your everyday life and while being idle from the task isnt part of your expectation or motives. If you think of always being occupied and being successful it practically the same concept just because getting task done is like you doing anything you are asked to do and being successful is like achieving your goals.
Secondly, Idle and inactivity serves a purpose when you are a 100 percent sure you can do anything when asked to. For example my dad once told me, why are you always playing video games and that why dont i go and play outside with my friends. What i told him was that i did not want to and he told me that my actions show a lot about who i am. After that he signed me up for a youth soccer team, that i played being a defender. Although i wasnt good, i started trying my best and being active with the team. Later that day my coach was talking to my dad and telling him how i was participating and doing everything he told me to do. What he also had suggested to my dad was if he can move me up to a left forward because of all the hard work and commitment i had done for the pass warm ups and practice games.
Therefore, people that are always participating you will see improvement in grades, work ethic and body structure. People that always are doing something productive in there everyday life have good grades because they are used of finishing all their work, rather then the student that doesnt do anything and idled from the class. Humans that are always active rather than being idle and isolated have a better attitude and work experience. Going to the Gym doesnt only show that you have an excellent daily routine but you are person that has a goal to complete each and every day. Keeping your self occupied thew out any circumstance is a good skill and shows that you are not inactive and that nothing is excluding you from doing anything you have to do.
In conclusion, do you think always having something to do all the time shows who you really are? Participating shows a lot about a person goals and achievements. Inactive people show their lack of interest and the type of attitude shown. While a person that is consistently doing things and keeping there self occupied and does not tend to complain about what they are ever asked to do. Always doing stuff will make you want to complete more each and every time. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
7D98C85F9223 | Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive or negative effects on people's lives? Yes, people using technology on everyday bases can have negative effects on thier lives. For example, looking into your screen for long period of time can have negative effects on your eyes. Being on your phone everyday limits your time of socialing and having regular converstion with other people. technology can make you develop an ediction with your phone, video game, and computer making you unawere with what's happeing around the world. eventhoght technology has negative effects on you, sometimes technology can have positive effects on you and your everyday life.
For example, technology can help you keep and complite taskes in your everyday life. using your phone can alow you to do things like: order clothes, buy eddibles, talk with family and friends all over the world, watch movies, listin to music, playing games, remembering birhdays, and things you have to do in your long term plan. Getting things done just by your phone can make your life easier and stress free. In some cases technology is used more then to just watch movies and remebering birthdays, its used to save lifes and make new inventions.
For instance, older people with health problems use technology everyday, they depend on technology to safe thier lives. The technology that they have can alert and get the help the person needs without the person having to call or touch anything. people around the worls are using technology to help and make cure for people with health issues. some are using technology to make new inventions such as, self driving cars to make the world a better and safe place.
For students technology is very helpful they can use it in school to take tests, quizes, and classwork. They can use it at home to do homework and study. use it to reserch and watch visualy watch videos to help them understand things they don't know. help them communicate with teachers and other helpful resorces online. For home schooled students technology is very helpful, beacuse some student are able to learn and understand better if they got lessons online than in a classroom.
Moreover, technology is a very helpful thing it might have negative effects on you and your life if you use it in the wrong way but its very helpful in some cases, and people actually need technology to learn and live. Therefore, technology can benifit people in thier everyday life. technology isnt bad or have negative effects on you its the way you use technology. | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
7DAD3B639FB4 | Many people say how wonderful it is that much can be done if we are always doing something. But do we really accomplish more if we are always doing something to help shape our future or can inactivity also serve a purpose as well? In my opinion, much can be accomplish if we are always doing something to perserve our future and make it safe and way better then how our generation is now. We can make it better for all the generations that comes after us by keep on doing something to shape and preserve our society. Thomas Jefferson wrote that ''determine never to be idle'' which means that always be determined to do something to help shape our society into something more and better and to never lack your worth. If people back then would've never done anything like build roads or invent automobiles or anything, we would've never had what we have now.
Inactivity can also serve a pupose to our society and how our future is going to look like. It can make a huge impact on how we live now and how our future is going to look like and how is it going to be like if people would've been inactive. Everything that we built and invented would'nt be here in this generation or the next one. We probably would've been living like how the great depression was back then but a lot worse because there would'nt be any people working or there would'nt be any cars or even houses and buildings because people were inactive this could lead to all of us being poor. We would've been out there living on the streets with no houses all because people were being inactive back then and not build anything that can help shape our future.
We all have a certain unique skill set we can use to help our world and make our society a better place then what it is now. We can keep making things and accomplish our goals that can be done by not quiting and always keep doing something to make a change because who knows what we can accomplish and how we can make an impact on how our next generation is going to be like if we always keep doing something. A lot of things can be done when we do something instead of being inactive and doing nothing to help with our society because when we do nothing it has a much bigger effect then actually doing something, we could all be out on the streets probably with no job or even a house to live in because it was never invented because of the many people that were inactive in the past. We already accomplished so much because of the people in the past did something and they always kept doing something to actually make a huge difference to what the future will look like. Therefore we accomplish a lot more when we keep doing what we do now a lot can be done, if we keep making an impact our future is going to keep chaging into something more better then how we live now, having always something to do serves a huge purpose. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
7DB5E5FA8324 | As a teen every one have different opinion on what to do in high school year. In some societies, student are expected to identify to a career by the time they enter high school. I agree that is good idea for student to commit to a career at a young age.
Is the best option for student to commit at a young age for there career in high school. The Student could be more expert in their own career when they young. They could be much better and more expert when they keep doing there job every day at work. Also, they could get payed even more for working with the company they like. Even is fun for them to work because they give them the option to what to do in their career.
If teen start their courses they will have to try hard to reach their career. they have to be tested how they do if they are in their real job. If teen fails that means that they will not do good in their real job so they have to try again so they could could pass and go to their real job. thats good because you still young and you could still work and make more money then others. So that good to start their career when you young.
Some teens disagree that is a good idea for student to commit to a career at young age. Teens say's that student have to look for more career if they don't have one. while some say's that Teen will start doing there career as soon as possible when they study their own career in high school. Starting your career young is the best for money, you could make more money as you get older. Also, starting your career young is the best for your life. when you get old you will have to quite your job because you will not be quick, and knowing what to do.
as a result, this is important for teen to start their career in high school because they could start doing there career a soon as possible. Teen start there courses they will have to try hard to reach their career. teen could be more expert at their career. This is my opinion to teen. All teen need to start their career in high school for better life, more money, and better for the company you work for. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
7DBE22D9F0DA | Should your School have Extending Hours in a Day ?
Your School should have long hours because student will have four-day week out of school ;Therefor, students will get to relax and fished there work and it is a great way to stay away from stress. Seen some business have adopted a four-day work week ,with each-day consisting of ten hours, your school should do so too. The benefits This will have on your school is ; students will have more time to work in class and understand what the teacher is teaching . Also you will have more time to fish your homework over the four - week day . Long school hours are good for the students because they will remember more of the stuff they teach.
Students are told they have and sol and the students are stress because they don't know how to study for it and do there homework at the same time . Also students are worried there grads are going to get messed up. Also whenever the teachers is teaching there going miss out on it .When there are sol student meant fail it .
school should add more hours.
Student are in class and hours are passing by and some student are slow at learning but the teachers are rushing them to give what they have and the teachers dropped there grades down because they didn't fished in the time that was given, therefor, schools should give classes more time needed to fish there work.
Students that are tired dont have enough sleep because of all the homework and the jobs some students have to do in only two week ends and its not enough hours for the students to sleep, therefor,
they need a lot of sleep to stay awake during school days. School should have a four-day week off.
School is a hard place to keep up with . student are sometime stress about school and how much they need to catch up in subject .This is why taking a day off or add extend hour to a school day is import. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
7DC02C918305 | It has been said that a positive is the key to success in your life.
be positive in your decisions is the most important for any goals or dreams that you want to do, its important make sure of each thing before do it because sometimes just take decisions for other people say and this do that dont believe in yourself, however always you have to think about what i want to do? or what i want to be? and think about the achieve for you future and believe in yourself, be positive is the begin to carry up big dreams in your life.
for example when i start the school i was so positive but same time negative because i dont know anyone, the language also but always you have one reason to do something and i have one reason thats my son, i was positive about what i want and what are my goals,the time past very fast; i found people important in my life, my friends they always are positive and this help yourself. When i talk with my friends i feel positive also because they make me feel like that, so now it's my last year and i feel good and this is the point to make up my dreams and goals.
Never give up everything depends on your decisions, if you are negative or not believe in yourself you never to be able for your goals or other things like work, school and support other people it's important be positive, no matter what the other people say, no matter how many times you try, the key is achieve and think about your future.
The life present always new things,challenge,obstacle you has to be prepared for everything and give always the best.
For finally, the best way to achieve your goals in the life is always be positive, strong, believe in yourself and never give up. No matter the new change in your life just dont be scary and put your life in God's hands. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
7DDFB0CA2BF8 | Author Ralph Emerson wrote, "To be yourself in a world that that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment." He is totally wrong because to be yourself in a world and make the greatest accomplishment in your life, the wold do not have to take control over you liberty, you should take control over the world to accomplish whats you are going to be. Author Ralph Waldo Emerson did not think before writing these letter because to be yourself in a world, you should have to make your own decisions, do something that you would like to do, and being your self not letting the world to take control over your life.
First thing,
be yourself and never give the right to the world. To make that happen you should have to make your own decisions, because if you let the world to choose for you in the future you may get lost and tire about your life, because you let the world to take control over your life, and for not choosing your own decision. Being your self and not letting the world to try to make something else, is something that will bring goods in your future, because is something that you choose and you know why did you took it and why did you choose it. However, the peoples that let the wold to choose for them they will get tire about life.
The second thing for accomplishment; and not letting the world to control you,is being your self and do what you like to do, never letting the world to do whatever it wants to do with you. If you want to do the greatest accomplishment in your life you should take something that you that you like to do. because when you do something that you like to do you will never going to get tire about doing it, when you like to do something and you wanted to be the greatest accomplishment, you are not going to feel that job like a job because is something that you like to do. But to make that happen and accomplish that dream. never led the world to do what ever it wants with you.
Being your self and not letting the world to take control over your life, the best choice that you can do, because being yourself and choose your own decision will help you to know what to do,what's good , what's bad, what career to choose, and what goal to accomplish because the only person who know all about you is you. So you should not let the world to ruin their life, and take their own decisions and tell the world that you can do it in your own. Lots of people let the world to choose for them and in future they ruin their life and they don't know whats to do for not choosing the correct choice and because they let the world to choose for them.
In conclusion, never led the world to change your life . because if you led the world to choose for you you will never going to get satisfy. Always be your self because if you led the world to choose for you will have a bad and sad feature for for not choosing the right decision. Always do a things what you like to do, like sports or a profession that you would like to be, if you choose things that you like you never going to feel it like a job. sometime you let the world to choose for you, but in the future you will get bored because you did not choose what you like. If you want to make real the greatest accomplishment, never led the world to change you. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
7DDFF6DA8655 | What would make feel much better in class to work alone or in groups? Would it make you feel better and more productive? Some people think that working in groups helps them be more productive and helps them get the job done easier. There could be teachers who wouldnt support the idea of working in groups. If you're trying to convince your teacher you have to have examples to support your position.
Working in a group is more productive and easier it gets the job done quicker then you expect. You can assign each classmate your working with a job duty. One of each classmate can work in drawing, writing, searching up facts about the assignment and not least but last the leader to put everything together and help his classmates when needed. There can be minor things when working in groups. You could expect some who would do there job and just take advantage of time and not be productive. The leader is expected to get there classmates to work and not waste time.
When working alone instead of in groups there can be advantages. Like Having more time in the assignment and not rushing into it. You can have your own ideas without others forcing you to change it up into something they all like. When it comes to mistakes you can point them out yourself and correct them. Instead of stressing about who is not working and who can't get the job done you can work on your own. There could be problems too like not having enough time and can't get your job done as quick as you need it to be. There is other classes to worry about.
Some teachers wouldn't support the idea of working i groups. Instead they would like for you to work alone to get your job done easier. But not every student would support that idea of working alone. Some students could be left back and behind from class so they would need the help from his classmates. There is supporting ideas on why it would be so much better in groups and it would be to get the job done easier and faster. Being alone isn't very helpful when you need the help you do.
Working in groups would not just help students but teachers on grading your work. It can be stressful for them when it comes to working alone and having so much papers to grade. The idea of working with other students would be much more easier and productive. It would feel way better for you and other classmates. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
7E109A7AC169 | The first thing to consider, is that one person is not going to behave the same way as someone else, and all people are not going to act the way as they did when they were kids. Depending on the way people are raised they may change their behavior over time. If you are brave enough you can choose who you want to be, and you can guide yourself. Everyone is going trough something at this moment, and these are not always good things. People may experiment terrible incidents that are going to change their life forever.
These events are just going trough your life, and sometimes there is nothing you can do to make it different. All these things may change you character behavior. Anyone's personality is going to change if they are not aware of what they are doing, and these actions will lead you to live horrible moments. At this point you no longer have control over your actions and just doing what you want, maybe not knowing what your character has turned into.
On the other hand; will realize what is going on around their live as they grow up, and they are not afraid to know what is happening, they will use this problems to become stronger. As time passes; they will go trough different issues, experiment different changes, but they just don't pay attention to it, and do what they want. Those people usually have control over their life and decide whether they want to change or not. A lot of people around them will try to hurt make them feel different.
For some people is easy to just not care about anything and just care about themselves, it could be a good thing because not anyone is going to make you feel bad. Over time they become smarter, stronger and tougher, but they also know if they need to change something in their life. They were just raised in a different way and a different place that is why they will act different to the rest of people because they also know what is best for them, when something bad is happening they know how to handle it.
These situations may change anybodies personality and eventually they will become a complete new different person. it just depends on the actions they choose to do and the way they see the world. it could be because of tragedies, maybe many bad people around them, they could change if they wanted to. There is many possibilities and reasons for people to change and it will happen at any given point and when they realize it, they are completely different.
It just depends on the way of your thinking, only you can decide if you want to be different, some people may have a weak or strong mind. Some situations are just defined as drastic events that could happen to you and there is nothing you can do about it if you wanted to make it better, only you know if you can handle it. You can confront it or let it change you. Some people will form their own character, or because they don't know what to do anymore. As log as you are aware of what you are doing, you will know what is best for you. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
7E29ACA46157 | Summer vacation is a good break for the students to spend time with their family, also a good way to take a break form school and your annoying classes, to take some rest, change your mind, and think about what will you change, when you go back to school, also taking a long summer vacation will get yourself out of stress. you will be able to do other think than just memorizing stuff you don't need in a real life, that's why it's not a good idea to reduce students summer break just because educators say so, we need to have some fun and start learning new stuff about the path we want to take in our life.
First of all taking a long summer break will restore ourselves, it will change our personally there might be people that are devastated from getting bullied at school, some people that have stress and don't want to talk about it and need some time to think about it, some that fail the SOL,and are failing a class, and never want to repeated again, or get ready for summer school, some that need to get ready for the next school year. we need time to do all those stuff and make our life better, when we come back from summer vacation. Summer vacation also give us the opportunity to get a job and save money, two months is pretty enough to get you at least much money. Some students that take care of themselves need to have more time to get ready for the next school season, so they can buy what they need such as: school supplies,clothes, ETC..... summer vacation need to be long enough so we can spend time with our family. school is not our family but home, the only reasons most students come to school this day are to make new friends.
Second think school is worthless, we dont need to go to school for that long what we need is to work hard to achieve our dream, and have some fun with life, that's all we need, and if we stay in school for a year and spend less time at home, we will not be able to communicate well with our family, this is not a good idea, there are people that went to school, and got their high school diploma, went to college for 2 years, and are still working at McDonald for few money, that means they just waste a lot of time at school this whole year and didn't get any good from it, so if we stay at school for a year, we will then spent 12 year getting educated, and still not achieve our dream, still going to have a job at a fast food restaurant. we need a longer break so we can recover form school stress and spend time with our family, school now last for 10 month and summer vacation last for 2 months and a half, so we should leave it like that.
Third thing is taking off one week off spring break and fall break is really a bad idea, why because we need to have some rest and some fun. who want that, no one want a week off spring break and also a week off fall break. what, that's insane, we are going to do a year at school and get only a total of 1 months off out of 12 months what, no, that is a bad idea, if we get a year of school , how are we going to get 3 week or 4 week of summer vacation there will be no summer vacation. School start in September and finish in June so, when we will have a year of school we will be finishing in August that make 12 months of school, so where is the summer vacation break.
so some people might disagree with me, but i think that what we should do is change the school system. so lets say some students like school and want to get to the higher level.
i'm sure that they have families and have to rest. for example; let's take a place of a student that want to be a athlete, and is learning math, science, economics, and other stuff for 12 years without getting any lessons from the the types of athlete he want to be, so that's kind of bad and not good, why because getting educated for something you don't have any interest in or you don't like at all, it's not good. we can say math might help you a bit, but not everybody want the same things, also not getting a long break will weaken our brain.
Every country have the same system break as us, not all but at least FRANCE has the same as the U.S, by changing our break time it might affect other countries, students will have more stress and will not have fun at home with their family, parent might also complain about changing the break and going to school for a year, by the way every time we come for a new school season we learn new things and different things, At least half of what we learn just come in some of the topic, we will not have the same class as last school season, but new one and new different topic, you will only have the same stuff to learn, if you fail the class or if you the SOL in that class, and that's why we need a longer break so we can focus more on that in the break time and won't fail no more next school season.
Family over school, family is the most important thing, i'm don't know anyone that dont like his families members, so let's said that we should not reduce the school break, or go to school for one year, we should also change the school system so we can put students in what they are trying to become the future they want to build, the future might need more people that could do a lot of different stuff, we might need help for, then let's agree that going to school for one year is not worth it for some students and reducing the summer vacation is a bad idea. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
7E48A7A7B400 | When I was in elementary school, I've always wanted to have art lessons. Art is the lesson that I would like to share with elementary school students because it could help them in several different ways.
The first way art would help the students is by making them more patient. When you are doing art and using paints, sometimes you have to wait until it dries so you can add more details and etc, that is one way that art can help them be more patient. You have to be patient when you are making realistic drawings, because if you draw fast you might forget to add important details and the drawing may not come out as good as it would if you had drawn it with patience. Another way that it helps the students being patient is that they also sometimes might have to redraw it if the drawing does not come out as good as they thought it would, and that requires patience, especially if make a mistake when you are about to finish it. And also, when they are working in groups they might have to explain for the rest of the group what are their ideas and how they want to do the project, which also requires patience.
The second way art would be important to students is by making them more creative. When you are making art you have to be creative and think a lot. Being creative wouldn't only help them at school, it would also help their future. For example, if the student dream about their future, then it would help them to think more and be creative about what they want to do. Being creative would help them in several ways.
And lastly, art would help them be focused. When you are drawing you have to focus on what you are doing. If you lose the smallest bit of focus, you can make a mistake and might have to do everything again. Being a more focused person would also help them in life. And also, they woul need to focus in the directions when doing their work.
In conclusion, art would be helpful in several ways, It would help them to be a patient, creative, and focused person. Art would help them in life and school. It would help their future. This is why I would like to share this lesson with them. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 |
7E530A20DA68 | People and students' have some amazing talents and skills. Talents are very impressing and challenging for an example,people that can juggle with oranges or bottles and people that can sing. Some talents can be very difficult at first and people can give up easily but when people practice and they try they do not give up. The skills and talents I enjoy the most is playing the violin,cooking,and makeup on my own time.
When people play the violin they say It is very difficult and it is very boring. Some adults that have played the violins and the chelos are very talented and their skills are by playing the violin Is just slowly moving the bow towards up and slowly moving it down. When I first played the violin It was not easy moving the bow fast towards the bridge of the violin and knowing the songs that some students' had to play by their self. When I had my first Pyrimid Concert In Elementary school I had a great time playing and learning how to play the violin.
Cooking is another talent that some people like to enjoy while they are home or they help their mom cook. Cooking can be fun and people can experience new kinds of food that they never tried. When I was little I always wanted to cook with my mom and she cooked all different kinds of food like Rice with Chicken,she made Pizza,and also baked Cookies and Inchiladas. They are resturants that have good flavor foods like when people go to the Buffet or to IHOP.When I cook with my mom or my sister I experience that cooking can be hard because people do not know what ingrediants they have to use or the taste is disgusting.
Makeup Is one of the funest. They are some teenage girls that love to do their own makeup or they just do it for fun. A lot of teenage girls start learning how to do makeup by watching on the internet step by step. Teenage girls have really good talents in fashion and using good color shade on thier eye lid. Talents In makeup are fun when people have their own time with their firends when they come over. Some girls feel more comfortable by using makeup and some girls do not. Makeup can be enjoyable and fun to experience.
They are some difficult talents and skills that people give up on. When people experience or find something they like they would like to try it. Cooking Is like a talent where people like to enjoy cooking like the cheifs they make really good food. Makeup is fun to do and it is really amazing when people are a makeup artist and really good at fashion. Playing the violin Is hard at first but when people practice and they want to be talented It gets easy. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
7E5F489C8CE4 | I agree that imagination is more important than knowledge because when you imagine of doing something very important, like for example; you want to be successful in school education to become like a doctor, teacher, artist, or scientist.
Anyone in the world can be a smart and better person by working on a job to study about objects, study about computers like the use of technology and the learning of cybersecurity, and to visualize and gain your experiences on working in any job you want work on by putting effort and using your brain.
For example, you can imagine of becoming a scientist to learn about sceince, like chemicals, plants, experiments, and understanding more information about science and other objects by experiencing things. Like the more you imagine about things you experience through your job, the less knowledge you have to learn about something that haven't exist in the ability of inventing something creative that is very useful and better than anything.
All you have to do is believe in yourself and use your imagination like to decide whether invent something particular than the other like building a house, a long bridge, and create like a watch to study about anything and learn more about it, you can invent, create, study anythingby using your imagination by experiencing more about things you want to do when you grow up by using your brain, and knowledge to put more effort into jobs. You can also invent instruments, like an accordion, violin, guitar, and a piano, and you can imagine anything like cool stuff, like being an expert at teaching in school like a teacher, studying science,
being a doctor, a builder to invent or build stuff like buildings, or a manager who is in charge of training any team or an athlete for the next match, by having the ability to use your imagination.
We all know that using your imagination is a better thing to do than using knowledge, like imagining to build, invent, or do anything in your experience by learning more imformation, support, and details about using imagination of doing anything. | 3 | 2.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
7E669FF93EB9 | While, some students are distracted others are taking an advantage of it. Although some say that cell phones should not be allowed in classrooms. Actually it should be allowed in classrooms,for research purpose and projects during class. by the used of cell phones. We can learn more about any topic, an example of this can be,if the teacher is explaining something and i don't understand instead of asking him. I can go to internet and find out. all the things that i need to learn and with examples. I agree with the assertion of using cell phones in classrooms.
Those who believe, that cell phones should not be allowed in classrooms,have their reasons,for example they believe that cell phones are distracted, in a way that students can't control it. They also think that cell phones are addictive. However,that is not true because we all can control our self, and i think that if we use our cell phones in a corresponding way, we will not only learn more, we will improve our skills and in the future become professional in anything.
I believe that we should used cell phones for research purpose,for example i remember when i was in English class i got sick, and i had to go to the doctor when i came back, to school the teacher was giving directions for our next assignment,but in that moment i felt like i was out a lot of days,but no it was only 2 days out of class,so i said to him I feel like i had miss a lot of thing just let me know what i need to do, and i will try to do everything that i need,so he said we went over more vocabulary, but right now i am explaining something, if you want to do it you have to stay after school i will be happy to help you. I said no you don't have to explaining me nothing, just give me the vocabulary i will look it up in internet,and i will write down the meaning of each word i will be quiet,so you can keep doing what you doing. He said fine. If cell phones are not allowed in classrooms, I could not do my vocabulary, and not only that i improved my skills by researching for good information which is not easy. I think that this is a good example why we should used cell phones in classrooms, so we can use them in a correct way thinking about our grades.
I also think that we should used cell phones for projects. This is my friend called Generic_Name he is 17 years old we are friends from middle school. In this time we were in government class, once again the teacher gave us a group activity in this case we had to came up with a new country, otherwise invent country,so we had to give it name,where it will be located, and the rulers for its country. After that,all the students got their own computers,but there were not enough for everyone,so we had no computers next,we asked the teacher can we used our cell phones,for the project she asked if there were no more computers and we said no not more,so with no choice the teacher said yes,used your cell phones,but only for the project,without wasting time we got our phones out,and we started working on our new project we worked in our cell phones as we had computers after the hard work we stopped,because the bell ring. This is another proof why cell phones are important they are really helpful in many different s ways we used all cell phones,for the whole project and thanks to that we turned in our project on time.
In conclusion,we should all used cell phones in classrooms for research purpose and projects. having in mind that a lot of people will not agree,but cell phones are helpful. They are important. technology is here for us,so we can take an advantage, and use it like it is for our own purpose. cell phones will provide a better understanding to all the students in all schools We should reflect about it, and came up with our own position. If cell phones should be allowed in classrooms,or cell phones should not be allowed in classrooms. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
7E9D8E4921CD | Do you think student would benefit from being able to attend classes from home?.First attend classes at home they can benefit for student they can have fun and do thing's what they like on the free time,and doing. thing to have fun and be happy that is one benefit for students to be at home.
the most thing to have fun with the family and something they can do like homework during at home or study for the test that is one thing that they can benefit for the student. the next they can't benefit attend at home because they must has to go every day at school and if student don't go to school they will have bad grade on class and all classes attend is the most important in the school. attend classes from home they can't benefit at school and they can't benefit for student because tha is one of the most important rule the all school has and they must has to go to school.
Finally student would benefit from being able to attend classes from home that they can benefit like doing working on internet and also they can' benefit for student because they must has to go every day at school that is one of the rule of school studen must being on the school,and them if the student don't go to the school they will get travel for be missin the school and they will have bad grade and
,something they can benefit for student to be at home they can have fun with they family and play voideo games and they can do what they like more to be at home.
and they can benefit stay at home and do the homework and prepared for the test. that is they can benefit for students to be attend classes being at home.... | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
7EA986233EDA | One of minister Winston Churchill most famous quotes is "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". Some people think that most people are consists on going with failure as a way that shows us that most people end up with failure again. They feel that it's true most people end up failing and end up doing the same process over and over again. I believe that most of the people should believe that success can be achieved only if you try but you will end up failing some of the times because first reason some people give up so easily and second reason they'll never give it their best some of the times and final reason is that people end up saying "it's too difficult".
First reason is that people most of the times end up giving up is because of the lack of things such as work or other sorts of jobs it could also be anything in life that people will give up on. It could be like saying it's a job and your been stressing out so much that you couldn't take it anymore so you decided to just call it quits, but for this problem people should always try there best and never let any other problems get into the way of their accomplishment, all ways stay positive and never lose on what you enjoy like giving up on it.
Second reason could be is that people don't ever try giving it their best it's always a been a problem cause some of the times people end up saying i'm not going to even try. you'll need to give it your best and try to give it all you got it could be on a test or it could also be on another problem in life by doing this you could achieve on being successful and end up doing great with no struggle or bad choices.
Final reason is that people end up saying that "it's to difficult" but by showing this people can make it difficult on themselves by not focusing or doing what your supposed to it can be in some situations where you have difficult times but in the end if you end up following direction or staying on task it could led to having a successful accomplishment.
As you have read that people should have any other way but to be always successful and always trying your best, you will end up failing but it's always good to never giving up. Only when will we ever end up failing that will always find a way to end up doing it correctly. On that day will we ever have to worry about failing. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
7EB7BB90A2F0 | Technology has a good and bad effects, it allows us complete task without having contact with others. Also just makes things so much easier for us. Technology developed over time so quickly, i remember, i used to had a flip phone but, now there is iphone X. No buttens at all and the face ID. Much as the technology developes the people will be seperated from each other.
Tesla just intreduced Tesla Model X. It has an auto pilot mode. Self driven car. Also they announced they making tunnel just for the auto pilot mode. Elon Musk says "its much cheaper then the normal tunnel and safer".
And he mentions on his tweeter "Working on something","flying car picture". So he is already working on the new tech. It's only 2019, can you imagine how technologies would be in next 10 years?. It will be keep developing and devepoling. It won't stop. We will get to some point, we don't even have too see each other or talk to each other.
Nowadays kids doesn't play outside, they have their IPad, Xbox and PC. Even the babies got IPad. If you give the baby IPad,
the babies would be distracting them selves. It's much easier for the moms too. But some point kinds gets addicted to it. Crying and sometimes they just won't eat anything. Smart phones can be really dangerous to the eyes.
Technologies can be helpful but, it can cause negative effects. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
7EEB8E9614C2 | In my opinion do we accomplish is if we are doing something because if you are always doing something you can have what you want and you can always keep learning new things.
First, if you are always doing something you can have what you want you. For example, if you want to buy the car of your dreams, you want a big house is gonna cost too much money but if you have a good job and you doing well in what you do, you can have a car if you want or a house however if you do not want to accomplish you never gonna have something. So, you need to always doing something if you want to accomplish.
Second, you can keep learning new things in life, in the school if you still are in there and even in your job. For example in your job if you are new you need to learn how you gonna your own work and if you do to want to learn you never gonna be good in what you doing or in the school, when i start go to the High School i was scared because I doesn't spoke English but I started to doing something and now I speak is not the most better English but is work.
In conclusion, we accomplish more if we are always doing something because if you are always doing something you can have what you want and you can always keep learning new things. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 |
7EED34A43536 | Inside of each people always has the right and the wrong sides. That make they think if they should being themselves or not. If a person being themselves then they just want to do anything they know and do not care another person. However, they live in the modern world and have many things to worries. Although people have their own decision, people should not being themselves are great accomplishment because sometime they need to change and over time people have done the tasks they hate.
First of all, people have their own decision. So, we know that many people are accomplishment by their own decision but only for who are smart or brave challenge themselves. Some of them just live and do anything they like when they success. However, not being themselves should not change the physical world. For example, a man who has a dream that he can travel around the world. He always thinking about it but he can not. Because he know it is a modern world and has many things to do and worries. So, he put his dream on the side and focuses on the job. He hopes it will make his life better and can complete his dream later.
Also, sometime they need to change. Some people they never change their life, and they just live by the rules. Of course, they will feel boring and nonsense. They want to do with something else. For instance, a person who live with his family and he recognizes that he likes to become the doctor in the future because his family want it. Absolutely, he knows what he wants to do. But when he do this job for the long times and he feels that he does not has more interest. Everyday, he is so busy and he does not has times for his family and himself. So, he knows work to lives, not lives to work. After thinking about that, he wants to do the jobs that makes him comfortable and can enjoy the wonderful life.
In addition, over time people have done the tasks they hate. Task is the mission from the boss give them to completing. So, they force to finish it while they do not like. When they go out to work they need to follow all the rules of the life. Also, they can not do anything they like while living with their family before. For example, a trainee person who is young and do not have an experience in the job. Because he just graduation and he wants to become the employer in this company. So, he will manage by the marketing manager and he so happy about that. For the first day, the manager just wants him to do some work likes buy the coffee, copy papers... And he thinks it will better for the next day but the manager just gives him these jobs and no more. So, he hates it but he never give up because it is the rules of life. He recognizes that help him too much to create more skills and learn more experiences.
Thus, people should not being themselves are great accomplishment. So, people should not being themselves because they do not know exactly about themselves. Some people want to become another one to success. When they look at another people they can learn more lessons and experiences in life. Sometimes, they need to change to know the outside of the world have more fun than if they just stay at one place. Another lesson for that is something they hate is not mean they give up or not finish it because it is a part of testing in the life. Just do the best they can and maybe they can accomplishment if not being themselves. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
7F0703CF058E | Many people success because of their behavior or attitude and how well they do in school or how great they are with other. But having a positive attitude is good because, If you are a positive person other people would like to be around you more, You will feel better and in a good mood most of the time, You could help others do well in work or even if they feel down or without motivation. It also helps in your daily day. A good attitude is great for everyone and it shows the real you.
Having a positive attitude is good for you and others. Many people are depressed and being around someone with a positive attitude makes them feel better and more confident. An example of this is if your friend is going through a hard time and you help him or her or even talk to them positively about the issues they will feel better and even could possibly start getting a better attitude. Just because they getting the support or talk they need by a close friends with a good attitude. So people even feel so much better about them self whenever they talk to someone about their problems. And Having a good attitude is like having a good vibe and people love being around those type of people.
You will feel better with yourself if you are in a good mood. Being positive helps with your mood and they way you see life. If your having a hard time at work or any other ativities such as school, sports or even at home. You could gain motivation on doing those things by having a positive attitude. However this might not work all the time because of all the negative people that is in our world and how people act and treat others now days but it will make sure that you are in track and ready for whatever and it wont really affect you or hurt you.
A positive attitude helps a lot on your daily basic. Let's said you and you wife or husband argue. All you would need to do is think positive like about good memories or moments together. I'm pretty sure if y'all love each other the argument won't really affect anyone. Another example if you have a good attitude people at work would love working with you, People at school would love doing group work with you. No one likes to work with a negative person so why ruin the party when you can share positively to other. Many good things can come out of having a positive attitude.
However, A lot of people would believe that not having a positive attitude is the key to success, They are wrong because a lot of things could happen when you are a negative person. Such as being depressed, losing motivation to do almost anything, making bad decisions, not like being with others, and not liking things you use to do. All this reason could be because of a bad attitude. But soever if you have a positive mood everything would feel so much better and you gonna have better days and other would respect you because of your attitude.
In conclusion having a positive attitude is good for everyone and it makes people life better. Because of the good moods, helping others and yourself, having better days. And it just makes life so much better and easier. No one deserve to be negative or even mean to others. We all created equal and we all live in the same world. So why not just go on and share our positive attitude with others and for we could make our planet a better places for everyone. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
7F0B7DDE89B2 | I think it is a good idea that some schools have
Four-day work week. because, the schools can save energy and resources like.
food electricity water paper
Does this will help the schools?
First, this can help the schools not to spend Food, Water, Paper, and Electricity. Next, If we have five days of school we are wasting a lot of Food, Electricity, and money. Then, if we have four days of school, we save a lot of money. Finally, with four-day work week it better because, the fifth day of school nobody is in the schools to waste energy and food
. In conclusion, This can saves schools a lot of money.
Why is this a good idea?
First, This can be a good idea because, The Students can sleep more. they will have four days of school. This mean the students will have three days to sleep well. Then, if they add 2 hours more there will be some consequences. If the Students don't sleep well, they will be sleeping in class. After that, they will not do their homework, test, and quizzes. Finally, The Students have to sleep at least 8 hours each night every day. In conclusion it is good to have four day work week. | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
7F1E8663BAE8 | Is important to learn from other people experiences? The answer is yes, because they don't want you to do the same that they did. In this essay I would talk about why is important to learn others people experiences. In my point of view, learning the experiences of others is important, because you learn something that someone had already commit that mistake and they tell you not to do when you grow.
First, one person that had shared their experiences with me is one of my friend. He had tell me plethora of experiences that he had when he was young. One of the experiences that he had tell me. Is that when he had the same that I have, he use to go out of the house without asking permission to his parents. Almost every week he used to lived the house without permission. One day, he realized that he was doing something wrong, so he stop going out of the house without permission. He tell me his experiences, because he want me to learn that is your are below 18 you still have to ask permission to you parents to do anything.
Next, when people had tell you their experiences that they had when were young. You already know what not to do when you grow up, because someone had already tell you not to do it. Maybe your grandfather, parents, friends, e. t.c. had tell you plethora of their experiences that they had. They tell you does experiences, because they don't want you to commit the same mistake that they did in the past. In addition to, they want you to do better them what they did in their best moment of life.
Furthermore, they want you to do successful in life. One day, you are about to do something wrong, but then you realized that someone that you know did it before, and they had already tell you that it didn't went well. Then you stop and you think what happen to that person that did the same mistake you were about to do. In conclusion, maybe when you were young you did something wrong. You would shared that experiences to your children, grandchildren, and others, because you would not like them to commit the same mistake. Even that someone had already tell you not to do it.
Finally, in my point of view learning the experiences of others is important, because they don't want you to do the same mistake. First, one person that have shared his experiences with me is one of my friends, he had tell plethora of experiences because he dont want me to get in trouble as he used to be when he got the same age that I have. Next, when people tell you their experiences, they want you to do better them what they did. Furthermore, they want you to do successful in life. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
7F1F55F771F9 | I agree with the adoption about the midnight weekend however this did not mean that i agree the 10 p. m weekday curfew.
Although many of the teenagers are constantly restricted nevertheless, the teenagers more younger`s that 18 has their own`s responsibilities and obligations to themselves and for their families because, the teenager`s need education, a home and money.
The teenager`s need education, being from elementary until high school grades. In 5 or 10 years in the future the teenager been the support from the economy, the country and the next generation.
A home the teenager`s need a place to call "home" that place where him not only can relax, rather he should be tranquil and save from the rest of the world; that place where you know that someone is to waiting for you with a smile and food, sure will be you should reprimand but you know that is for your well-being and future.
Logically the money is the more important fact in the teenagers life, to won it is necessary to get a part-time job or work in the weekend, that is where is the problem to obtain money the teenager`s from 16 to 18 year`s has to use their value time after school to work. The part-times are approximate 6 hours; if a student work from 4. pm to 9p. m there is no problem, but if a student work between the curfew from 5p. m to 10p. m the big problem is that the teenagers will been accused be breaking the law when it did not happen is just a unfairly interference from the city.
In summary: The children`s from today will be the teenager of tomorrow and the adults from the new generation.
a home is the best place to a teenager to feel comfortable, save and tranquil. The money is the most important think for a teenager in the present and for their future and the time is a necessary value to get it. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
7F21F77E9AA3 | Big Responsibility Young Age
In most common societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they ending high school but in some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter school. What is the best? We'll figure out. Is not a easy thing to do, decision the most difficult thing to do in life and even more when your young.
Trying to know what a person want at young age it must be difficult, everybody pretend that you must know what you want at young age when you always have get everything by your parents, grand parents, aunt, uncle or tutor.
You can't know what you want to do in your life even if you haven't live by your self.
I don't think it's a good idea for students to star stressing them just when they have enter to school because school can be hard some times even if it's your first year at high school even if you are smart, so I don't think that could work making a student stressing at young age. Student have to do other stuff not only thinking about careers they want to take, students have to do homework, some students have to help their parents and get a job to help them some students love to do sport. Students also need help and time to know what they want for the rest of their life. Young people have to do it carefully because their future depends on their decisions on the present.
It's hard for a students to decide what they want for they life for instance when I was at 9 grade my parents told me, if you don't know what career you want to take it's fine you have 4 years to decide. When my parents told me this I felt so peaceful and relax because I had time to see what career I
want to take and I had time to get information about careers that were interesting for me. And I could do better at school because I didn't have to keep thinking about careers that I want for my life because I could do that in my free time.
In conclusion if a student it's a really young age let them think what they want not only because it's at young age it's also because they going to pick something that it's for the rest of their life. Not easy for a young boy or girl to know what they going to decide to do for the rest of their life, specifically when they haven't discovered what life is like. The only way that you could decide what career you want being a early age it's with help of God. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
7F336F4B9442 | Yes,I agree failure plays in the pursuit of success. Some people when they fail they learn what they did wrong and next time they fix it. If they don't understand or learn from there mistakes. They can't get success in there life. If anyone did any mistake try to fix it. If you can't fix it. Get help from your family or your friends.
When i was in 9th Grade. I don't like math. Because i don't understand math question. I read my question and find mistakes. What i did wrong. Then i fix my mistakes. I do my work again and again. I do my work very hard. I ask my teacher about anything that i don't understand. She help me lat to learn math. Because i did my work hard now i get the success. Now i am good in math.
When i came in United State. I don't Speak and understand English. I made many mistakes to write the work or speak. I try my best and I learn English from my teachers from my friends. Any word i don't understand i look in dictionary. If i can't find word in dictionary i ask my teachers. I speak English at home with my brother and sister they fix my mistakes and its help me to speak better English.
Some people when they loss they don't try it again. Because they think that we are not good at this. Cause of that they can't get success. peoples who are around them they need to help them motivate them so they can try it again. like Sport coaches motivate there team before they match. When someone motivate other they get energy to do something. Don't be afraid to loss next time try with more power. Everyone loss in there life and they learn from that.
Reasons why people fail. Because no one understand them so they think that no one care about them. people need to understand other problems and help them. Tell them that you make this mistake try to fix this and you will be better.
When someone break his/her leg. Then he/she is so afraid to walk. because he/she think that it's very painful. Then someone help his/her put his/her hand on the shoulder. Then they slowly slowly put weight his/her leg. Like this you don't need to lose enthusiasm in your life. When you feel failure see other people read about them that how they fight when they fail.
Many American famous people loss in there missions but they don't loss there hope. They try it again and now we are read about them. Because they did many things. Thats help us make easy and fast to do our work or travel. Like Airplane, Electricity, Computers, Cars, and many others things.
Some people fail in there life. They try again but still they fail. So try something else that easy for you and you can make your life better. Like if you are not in a basketball try soccer or baseball. which one is easy for you. Choose that and do hard work on that. practice every day don't be lazy.
I want to say that do what ever do you want to do. But do that you are good in and easy for you. If you like another thing thats hard for you. do hard work on it and make easy for you. Don't lose enthusiasm. how this world work? help others then they will help you not all ways. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
7F4706C105DE | Do you agree with Churchill statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success? Yes because in order for you to be successful you have to fail a couple of times. For an example when
I was 10 years old I lived in Miami Florida and I played football. Every kid I went up against they were faster than me and better and I got mad because I was not good enough. One day the coach pulled me after practice and told me what's up this is not the kid I saw play football in Miami Beach. He then matched me up with the best receiver he had and I still didn't surprise him with that kid he saw on the beach.
After a while of training and training back to back coach then matched us up again now I was faster and better it got to the point where I was his star receiver that season we finished 10-0. We went to playoffs and finished 5-0 coach was really happy in 10 years of coaching he had never achieved something like that with his football team. But it was the final game everything changed the team we went up against had stronger and bigger players they first took out are running back with a neck injury so that left me playing two positions. We were up 21-7 its second half 2 minutes before half and next thing you know I had both tight ends and safety hit me at the same time both tight ends hit me in my knee and I was done. What hurt the most was seeing my coach not being able to concentrate he had then even left the special team coach run the plays all because coach went to check on me.
He asked the doctors was I okay and they said he is done he cant play neither can he walk. After that coach went outside mad he was really mad and he then saw the score board it said 28-7. We were still up than theres the halftime coach talks to the players even I did so and they go back on the field we are on the 40 yard line and next thing you know boom are star quarter back is hit. He is not getting up his spine was broken and he could not even move after that coach knew we lost the game but coach did not know that i was feeling better without coach knowing i wen't back on the field the score is 28-28 theres 30 second left and the ball is on the 50 yard line. Coach starts to see the formation he than knew I was on the field and he tried calling timeout but there was no time out left coach knew I could throw but the team did not know my friend Ricky is running he cuts back and runs back up the field as fast as he can I throw the ball he catches it on the 10 yard line and he gets the touchdown coach than ran on the field and picked me up.
Coach then said how did u manage to hold in all the pain after being hit like that I told him the same way my brother managed to cover me when there was a drive by and he was shot 9 times. Coach knows I came from a rough spot in Miami especially the projects. Now i am 17 and i learned from my passed i learned from being a failure for you to be able to be great you gotta fail no matter what nobody is perfect. My brothers always told me if you eat okay now you will eat better tomorrow it is a saying just about being able to actually grind and stay humble. sometimes in life things will not always be easy because that is just the way things are and i personally will be better from yesterday.
How do you think all the star people from now and days have so much money they were not good from the jump they failed a lot in life nothing will never come easy to be great you gotta beat the great. Football players dont just get to be star just like that they gotta earn it. Rappers dont get to get platinum just like that they gotta make good songs. Everything in life is a sacrifice you gotta humble yourself and be able to go out and get it because nothing will be bought to you. you can feed a horse but you cant force them to eat it. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
7F6795CE405C | DISTANCE LEARNING
I think students can be benefit because they can have more time, if they have job or they need an extra class but, they could not be or stay after school or they just cannot come to school for personals reasons I think those students can be benefit.
First,student from high school much of them have a job and they need take class at home just for three hours and then rest to get ready to their job. They also can have time to do homework it's how it can be easy for them to study more and have a grade and graduate.
Second, if they are almost to finish high school, but they just need a credit and they don't want to be in school just for one class they should take that class online and have more time;
it can be for homework or they go to visit another place but they cannot missing that class because they need that credit and grade for graduation. What about they can not stay after school but they need that grade they can take that online while they're at home.
Third, if the person have deformity they could not walk, or just don't want to come to school for different reason most be bullying, they can be benefit with the online class so they can get they class done and fine what they want to be in their future, also can have their graduation.
I really think those are the reason why they can be benefit with the online classes they have more time for homework, job, rest, and visit others place, and also they get the grade that they need that is how they're benefit. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 |
7FB017FAC682 | Well I think we should always be doing something because it take your mind off of other things in your head. We can accomplish more if we are doing something like people have accomplished a lot within the years and look where we are now. We could be farther but some people are always lazy and don't like doing nothing. Those people gotta get out of there house and do something for that world each person can change the world a little but at least they are doing something.
The most greatest people that lived or lives on this world have done amazing stuff and it's not because they are sitting down in their couch eating and watching tv,it's because they are out their learning more and doing more for us the people so we can have a better future and I want to do the same thing so I can give my children a better future and a better life. Think of it this way if they are building a skyscraper do they only put a group of five people to do the work NO right they are gonna but hundreds of people because "much may be done if we are all doing".
What Thomas Jefferson said is true we can do more if we all but our part but there are people that don't want to do nothing but that is ok because there is people out there that is putting more effort then some of us. Imagine if the whole world doesnt do nothing for a whole day where would our economy go to or our community they would collapse. If we all do our work imagine how our economy would go and how our community would improve if we would all do something our world would be a better place for all people and animals. For right now more people our doing their part than people that are not because if more people are not doing nothing than people that are doing something then this world would have collapsed already.
If your are a person that is always putting in their part you will recieve more than the people that dont do nothing. Look life is a test full of choices the choices are what define you and what you have done and they will define you your whole life and your choices may be better for the people or not but if their not the chose wisely next time because choices can change the world like chosing to do something or not. Its not bad to not doing nothing your not doing damage to no one all i'm tryna say is that your help could help the community and the world so don't be afraid to do something and dont be ashamed of doing something and failing be ashamed of not trying. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
7FB1724D76FF | I want to be a docter of little kids. why I want to be a docter it becuase I want to work with little kids. I will hear his or her little heart. when they are sick i want to help them but I don't want no one die on my hand that will be so sad. when they are sick I will see what is the best for her or him. I want to be a good docter for them. I will be a funny and playful dactor I wish to one of the best docter. little kid are so cute when they are a baby.
I want to be a best docter so i want all the little to stop eat bad food and thing that it bad for them. Yes they can eat bad thing but not every day they have to eat food that there mom cook for them becaues that is better for them and they the little kids a small they need alot of good thing there body. I care alot about little kids.
I will help there mom to do the best there kids. I wll tell them what they need to do every day for the kid don't get sick that muche all year long. I will take good care of them when theny see me and there mom have to do there job at home by there food and help them when they need help.
When you come to see me I don't want to be a mean docter I want to be sweet like a candy. I wish that all kid love when they see me and there mother I will be my friend. When they need me to help them they just need to call me. I will be a good helper when you help me I will help you.
First if i want to be a good docter I want to study alot because I want know if I am doing that thing right. I want to study alot because I want the best for them. I don't want nothing bad happen to them. yes I will make mastiak but from them you learnd. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
7FED050A6D55 | Did you know that Robotics is the most funnest job than any other jobs out there? what I like to pursue is doing Robotics because it's all about coding and building.
Another reason why Robotics is a job for me to pursue, because it's all about coding. Furthermore, coding is basically you have to type in the words specifically. For example, Forward = (1). That means it tells the robot to move forward only one time. Also, coding is like math, you have to calculate what distance is the Robot is going to do and where it want to stop.
Another reason why Robotics is the one thing that I'd like to pursue is Building. Building the Robot is where you have to work with a team to make it happen, if you were to build it by yourself, it would take a long time to make, since it's only you and not 3 or 4 people helping you. Building is like Lego, but you have to screw in nuts, and not connecting them together like plastic bricks. Also, building the robot is most important, because if you screw something up, you have to remove every part of the robot to fix that one mistake you did.
In conclusion, Robotics is the most joyful job, because it's all about editing and creating a robot to make it function. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
7FF600C1F829 | There are some young teenagers that already know a specific career they want to follow after finishing high school. Some teenagers have planned to go to college after high school and some have planned to start with a job. However, there are also some teenagers that dont have any future plans and they dont care about it. In today's societie, Schools expect students to identify a career by the time they enter high school. To help that, high schools offers many courses to help their students identify a specific career and to also guide towards them.
Starting with the disadvantage of choosing a specific career at a young age. Of a young child, it's dream career is to become a policemen or policewomen, firemen or firewomen, a actor or actress or even an astronaut. By the time the young child gets older, it's interest changes in many categories such as their dream job. Starting as a freshmen in high school, students have a big and a open mind to almost everything and so they think they already know what they want to do after high school. However, after time passes, students will learn and experience new stuff in school and out of school, and they might get to know different intreset, and opinions of their friends and classmates. Those could change a young teenagers mind and interest easily. Therefore, some students will change their courses over and over again, till they final identified a career that they really like, and enjoy. However, some other students get tired of chasing a career they once dreamed of, that they change every school year and get lazy or dont care anymore.
Another disadvantage would be that students only concentrate on their future careers and focus on their difficult classes they take, and this might sound confusing because, that is the reason why students go to school, however only focusing on work doesn't mean it's healthy for a young teenager. Taking school not seriously is not the point here, however taking school work too serious "For the good of the students future" can cause serious damage in important relationships, such as the relationship between a child and his or her parents could be damaged because, the child has to much pressure on his or her mind and if his or her parents interrupt, a fight between parents and child would break out. Another problem would be that the young teenager will have difficulties making friends or has difficulties to talk to other classmates about anything besides school. During the teenagers free time, the teenager wont go out and play with his friends or maybe he doesn't have any and stays at home playing video games. That's why some parents disagree with today's societies. The reason why is because, they don't like that the schools expects students to identify a career by the time they enter high school, saying that the schools should give the young teenagers time to experience and learn new things before they have to chose what they want to be in the future.
However, not all students feel the same way as the other students. In fact, many students already know what they want to do after school and appreciate the opportunity to chose specific classes. Students can better concentrate on specific class to help them and guide them towards their dream career, of course there are other classes that have to be taken, in able to graduate however, students still have the opportunity to chose specific classes. Besides having a great opportunity to get helped and prepared for their future, is that young teenagers will have more fun in class that in regular class. The reason why is because, they will have more fun working on something that their interest in then working on other class work. Making friends will also be a lot easier, because the students in the same class will have the same interest and maybe the same opinion.
Choosing a specific career that they want to follow, at a young age is big step, in fact it's maybe a to big of step for a young teenager. However, there are also many young teenagers that already identified a career that they want to follow, it pretends on how the young boy or young girl acts, motivation and working speed.
It would be better to give the young teenagers a little bit more time to think about the future and maybe to just let them experience new things and learn more about our societie, so at the end they have a clearer view on what is going on and what they maybe will be in the future, so they can better prepare themselves. However, the optional courses should not be change and they should be stay like that because, they are very helpful and perfect to prepare and guide the students towards their dream career.
As we all can see there are many pros and contras to this subject that could be disgust and argued about. Those were my . | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
7FF6972B86C2 | Everyone chooses their own character no matter if you are small or big. A persons character is based on their personality. Its easy for people to choose a character for themselves either a good or a bad character. Having a good character shows that you are a good person, but if you decide to have a bad character people no longer will trust you and you will be worthless to others, so this is why we choose our own character.
We choose our own character because our character is based on how we interact with other people. Some people dont have a good character and that's why people neither wants to trust them or talk to them. Even in the movie no one likes the the bad character because they are mean, bad, and no good to others but to harm them and put them in danger. A coworker of mine was very rude to customers. He was always mad therefor no other employees wanted to talk to him. One day a customer complained to the manager about how he was being rude to her, so the manager decided to fire him from his job.
We choose our character based on how we dress. people can present themselves as neat person by the way how they dress in public or anywhere else. If a person has a job interview and he wants to look good then he has to wear a dress that fits his character and makes him that he wants the job. A few years ago my uncle was invited to a wedding party but he wasn't sure what to wear, however some some of his friend told him to wear something casual but that didn't fit his character because he was a boss of a company, therefor many of his coworker would see him there so he decided to wear a suit because it was best for his character.
We choose our own character by the way how we talk to other people. For example if my brother speaks to others in a good manner people will always respect him. Being nice and respecting others will represent a good character of you. It is very easy for someone to change their character, whatever you choose to be that will be your character. Having a good character is very important in our everyday life, furthermore having a good personality will also effect a persons character so in order to have a better character you need to have a good personality.
Some people say that we can't choose our character because it's beyond our control, however choosing your character is not hard you just need to have a good personality and have to be nice to others. Most people that we don't know how to choose our character traits, therefor choosing a good character do not need any special skills. All a person has to do to have a nice character they have to dress properly they need to have good manners and don't be rude to others and this is all it takes to have a good character. Other people may say its hard for us to choose our character traits because we are not able to, however for some people it's hard but the things that a person does in their everyday life those things chooses their character it determines if they have a good character or not. | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
800FE9615C63 | The misnister of
Wilnston churchill, he say that success in life or anyother things, theres a failure and don't lose enthusiasm because of that litlle things or because you fail one time in your try.
I agree with the minister churchill say because succsee it's a way to improve your skills or be betther in what you did and you try to not haves more make mistakes annymore, success can have failure but also you can lern for them, and learn how to rersolve your pronlemsand see how far you can go by trying, how you can have more expiriense by traying and traying again and again, no making mistakes annymore so the next time you don't have the same mistakes or pronblems because you larn about it.
I think with success you can learn a lot of experiance in your life, because with your failure you learn about it, because if you leave it like that you not trying and you are not exploing your self, so if you exploit your self you can see how far you can go to resolve the problems or the mistake you have.
So if you explod your self trying more and more you can maybe resolve the problem or see how far you can go to find a solution, the thing is if you keep trying your best in somthing you don't know exacly what it is or how to resolve it in many times you can find a solution and fix it.
failure is not you are not going to resolve it because if you are doing your best but you keep failure is becuase you need to find the problem you are not seeing, to resolve it failuture is not because is not working success is because you didn't find the solution at your problem.
For my conclusion for success you have to pass for a lot of problems and mistakes so you can find a solution for it, in your life if you don't explow your self you won't know what was the problem to that but if you explow your self you can find the solution and also learn from that, trying hard and hard moust of the times you can find a solution for evryting and that is how you also you can help others with they problems like when they say two heads is better then one. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
8042198ABB06 | Im disagree with extending the school day, because we pass the half off the day in the school and the people won't like that because they want to have time on the rest of the day and do what they like to do.
That is why I am disagree with extending the day of school because we are not going to be able to do what we want to do on the day,If the school add more hours to the school is not going to be good because will be sad because they can't do what they want to do on the rest of the day.
They will be mad at the school because the school will and late and don't have time to do anything because is we get out late of the school and the time that we get home are's parent wont let us have fun and they will send us to bed.
That is why the people won't like a extra hour of school because we are not going to gave fun and we wont be able to do anything about sport.
So that is why we dont what to have extra time of school because it can be boring because we only do homework and we don't go a out side we don't like extra time in the school. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
8060FCE12001 | Should students enjoy less summer vacation and more winter break. Why would they change the vacation time? Cant it just stay the same as usual? Would the students like like that change? Are those changes going to help the students in their studies?
First of all some students wont like this change because,in the winter time it can get really cold ,so the students wont be able to go outside,walk,nor play. Also one of the reasons they wouldnt like the change is that i summer break they can be outside and go out places. In the winter could get really cold and the students stay outside for a long period of time they might get a could and miss some school days and affect them. If they miss schools days they will be behind from the class.
In the other hand some students might like that idea because in the summer time it can get really hot outside .If its really hot outside people can get dehydrate ,but for other reasons summer days can be some amazing days. Some benefits of summer : going to the beach,amusement park,camping,and travel. Reasons that students will like to have more summer vacation:more vacations days,nice weather to go outside, go to the pool,explore nature and helps them to stop using technology.
If this change in vacations happen I wont like it,because I like being outside in warm weathers and i woulld hate to have less summer break and more winter break .Plus I hate when we dont have school when theres a snow s day. I
like how the vacation time is right now because everyone can enjoy some vaction in the tie that the like the best . I am aslo sure that most of the student will like to keep the same time of vacations beacuse they want to have more not less
In conclusion the time of vacation will not change because the students will prefer to keep the same one .They will like to enjjoy the time not hate it. My point is if the studdent dont like the new time they will problobly wont like to g back to school and just ingnore it. So if they want to change the time talk to the student if they are ok with it ,if not then make a solution about it. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
806672A60686 | Failure is a simple thing that everyone use to get. some people are loss of enthusiasm but some people they do not by keep trying. In my mind I agree with " success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." this is very important thing that we might think about, The reason why I agree whit this statement be cause of failure brings me a improvement, success.
I always improve myslef when I get a failure. Last year, I was in high school in New York, it was my first year for studying in America. because it was my first time so I fail a tasting so many tests, I could not talked to any friends and I also could not made friends. everything were so hard for me to pass or event talking whit someone, so I keep continued stady more English skill. Right now a year pass, my English is batter than first time that I got here.
Failure make me stronger and bring me success. I got a lot of problems last year, so
I was thinking about go back to Thailand but I always tell myself "don't give up Generic_Name,you can try it again, you can do it, you will get it" and I believe myself. I did not go back to Thailand and I got a lot of new things make myself stronger.
the Failure is important role in life. We get success form leaening from our makestake, we improve everytime that we fail. If we give up and walk away from our failure,than we are just a losser. | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
8079089BC4D8 | Former British Prime Minister Winston once said that "sucess consists of going from failure without loss of enthusiam and basically its asking me if i agree on it.
Basically i really have never heard about this prompt but i find it reallu intersting and would love to know more about it, I feel like if there were to ask me an a public place for example now but instead a public place and read about it more and even just reading a little bit about it makes me agree on it.
In my opinion i would definitly agree on it since what he said was pretty true, he basically said something that is basically true and not only that its basically making you think that it is right that "sucess consists on many thing but for sure loss of enthusiams"which is not wrong now i feel like ive thought about it just couple minutes and its making me think alot about it specially how much ive failed and life and always got up back like nothing was wrong.
May not be true for many people but for sure for me,I would agree on it 100% without doughting it at all , its always the ones that have failed and gotten up who would agree on it, it could be tuff for many to accept it but eventually they would agree to it if they were to think about how many times they have failed and won there battled with fighting for it and doing basically what they really want in their life. All you have to do to get through things are get stronger and work on yourself more, feel valued to your surroundings.
However, I have failed so many times and always thought about how i wouldnt make it not even how hard i try to i wasnt gonna make it out of the dark place i was in and eventually i told myself that it was very pointless of even trying anymore if all i was going to do is fail all over again , I didnt have no type of enthusiam whatsoever was horrible and all i did everyday was loss my enthusiam more and more until one day i got back up like a normal day and said to myself that "Life doesnt get easier you only have to get stronger' and i realized so much at that moment i wouldnt even believe myself that i was up like nothing and day ago i was not in the right mindset thinking i was a completely failure and even didnt have enthuasiam for nothing. so last i would agree to the saying of the Former British Prime Minister Winston it made me realize alot and a very true saying of course, | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
8087A7C3FCDA | Each school study more that one hundred students. Many students in high school took not much hard subjects, most of them are art and music . Educational programs alredy have to take courses during the summer, if student don't finish important subjects. Making rool that student finish faster high school, must takes courses during the summers or in the evenings or may not be able to take elective courses, is not a good idea.
Most of our life need time. Hobby, learning, traveling, study in school. Each our doing, need time and study too.
What about thoose who need extra time? What about imigrants, which needs extra time to their homework. Does they will be study good? And, does they will need this program? They need time to finish their homework. Most of them don't have time to study good with four years education program.
Also, what about teachers? Does this subject will be intresting to students to study? Does they will have time to explain students, what they study? Teacher need some time to be ready for topic that give school to student. Also need explane this on lesson and after lesson, if student don't undestand this on the lesson.
Nowbody, don't have extra time.
Of course some of school can make three year of education, but only some of school. Educational program must be have extra time and be intresting to all students. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
80AD3F379BD1 | I think that a act of kindnees is great for people to see that there are people that are nice and can do nice things. maybe people dont see that nice people get treated better vs. people that don't do nice thing don't get treaed the same way . that why people that dont do act of kindness need to starr now so they know what it feels like to be good or just saying somethnig nice is good to but when you put time to it that is better to. people need to help other and respet each other everone has a good side to them even if they say they don't . you can see that when they where kid they where nice and kind but they grow up and they think that they can do bad thing and do not help people that need it or saying soming nice to them, but ever one has a diffrent ways of being them self and finding ways to not be nice or kind to others that are nice to them adn they don't want to do the sma e that want to be the mean one thae one that does not care what other think or do and try to hide from the fear that they can get in troble for doing this that are not to be seen or done at school , at home or even outside where you can get in to big troble . people need to more act of kindness in school when i was in 5th and 6th with the same teacher all we did was do act of kindness because she wanted us to see that just a note to someone you care or love about can make you and the person feel better than they alredy where. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
80C0814AF16D | Dear, Dr. Generic_Name
Thank you for reading my letter. I hope it finds you well. I am currently a junior at Generic_School. I believe that the students should commit to career at a young age because. career can show how creative students can be, and have a had start to choose their careers before they get out of high school.
First, I would like to talk about how creative students can be in their career. When school. For example, I would like to express myself through my art to show my emotions and I love to excess myself through my art. It makes me feel happy but if I don't start choosing my career at a young age then how am I going to know what I want for my career and the students won't know what they want for their career when they get out of high school and that's how I would like to express myself through my career.
Also, about students having a head start to choose their career at a young age. for example, I would not know what to choose if I didn't start in high school it would be a waste of time for me to find a career if I didn't start at a young age, if I started at school then there won't be a problem for me to find one also I would rather start now then later on in my life and how Am I going to express myself if I don't have a career to start with thats why students should think a head of choose their career.
Last, students should think about what they want to do or be when they grow up because schools can help with your career when you need it, they can put you in a class where you want to learn about the career that you choose and it will make is so much easier for the student to start now. for example, if I where to choose a career I would have to tell my teachers what classes that I what to take for my career chooses it can help a lot of students with their career chooses it would be a problem for them to tell the teachers what careers they want and it would be more easier for them to start telling the teachers what career they want and put students in the class they want to take for their career but they have to trust their teachers first then they can tell the students what careers that they what to take or what good classes are good for this career that the student chooses and that's my opinion on students should be commit to a career at a young age.
Thank you for taking the time to read through my thoughts about career chooses that means so much to me and thank you again.
Sincerely,
Generic_Name | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
80C2ED8BE6A6 | Online school can be more beneficial to a lot of student's struggling with grades and being late to school because of over sleeping or missing the bus. Going to school takes up a lot of time off stuff you're interested in doing outside of school like playing sports and spending more time at home.
I agree with online classes over going to school because some students feel more comfortable learning in their house rather then going to school. Some students also have trouble with over sleeping due to a lack of sleep causing them to miss the bus and be late to class. Online school starts in a more reasonable time of day so it's more convenient for those that over sleep to attend class on time. This allows students to have more energy which will help them focus on their work and be more productive in class. When student's get sick they miss days off school which causes them to be behind on class work, for some students being be hide on class work causes stress because their grades go down. But you can still attend online class if you're sick. You can also attend online classes while on vacation with a laptop you'll rarely have missing work to do which is a big positive for improving your grades.
However, some may argue that looking at the bright screen for a extended amount of time will put a strain on your eye's. Also that it's easier to cheat on test's and quiz's in online classes then it is to cheat in school, because the teacher dosen't know what your doing on.
That is my reasoning on why taking online classes is more beneficial then going to school. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
80C97E7C2558 | High school students should graduate in three years instead of traditional four years. Most student who follows this plan should work hard and take more courses in the summer or in the evening. Therefore, students will have a good choice to work one year early or to enter the college early. Students will finish high school early, work force one year early, achieve their goals early. These reasons are why high school students should graduate in three years instead of traditional four years.
Firstly, students have a good idea to finish high school early. For example, some students take a courses during the summers and some of them take courses during the evenings. When students take the courses during summer and in the evening, students will finish school early. In addition, some students may not be able to take elective courses. When student not taking elective courses, they will finish high school one year early. when students finish high school early, they will have time to achieve their dreams.
Secondly, students will have time to work force one year early. For example, some students work hard for saving some money to pay the college. When students enter the college, they need money to pay the college for the courses which they will taking it. Therefore, some students like to finish high school early for to have time to work one year early. When students work hard and saving money for college, they will study without any worried about the money that should pay to college.
Most importantly, students will have time achieve their goals early. For example, some students want to achieve their goals earl, for to have a good career. When students achieve their goals, they will have a good life in the future, and they will have a jobs or career to support their life. In addition, students who achieve their goals early, they will opportunity to achieve another goals. When students achieve another goals, they will make a future more better.
Some people argue that high school students should not graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. They say students will not be able to take elective courses. This may be true; however, when students will not be able to take elective courses, they will achieve their dreams early. In addition, when students graduate early they will have time to working and saving money for college. In fact, students will have a good choice to work one year early or to enter the college early.
In conclusion, students have a good idea to finish high school early, have time to work force one year early, and students will have time to achieve their goals early. These reasons are why students should graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. Some students take a courses during the summers and some of them take courses during the evenings, for graduate early. Some students work hard for saving some money to pay the college. Some students want to achieve their goals earl, for to have a good career. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
80CCEFCCD166 | Some may say that working in a group is better because you have people around you that can help you and support you. You dont have to depend on anyone when your working by yourself. Your focused more and when your focused no one can distract you. You could ask people for help if your confused on something.
You don't have to depend on anyone when working working alone because if you have a group and one of your group members doesn't show up then your screwed because now your missing a piece of your project or whatever the situation is. It's going to be hard when working by yourself because everything is depending on you. So you have to do everything on your own.
When your working by yourself you are more focused on doing the work. You could listen to music to keep you even more focused. Music keeps you relaxed and calm. You want your work to be nice and organized so that the reader can understand what's going on. Also you can use the internet to help search information. You can also ask someone for an idea or for a little of help. | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
80D2FE30F665 | Offering distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing by schools is a good idea, but I take a position on this issue to say that, students would not benefit from being able to attend classes classes from home due to the following reasons.
First of all,some students when offered distance learning will not pay attention to their lessons. They will distracted either by their cell phones or electronic devices. And we all know students always like to be on their cell phones at anytime and anywhere. Also,Students can be distracted either by their parents or siblings which may cause them lack behind ahead of their lessons. So when all of this happens , students may be delayed which will cause them to fail and waste of time. For example,my cousin came to the United States of America with his siblings and he was permitted to to take one of his subjects or courses online. And anytime he gets home,he doesnt get a peace of mind because of the disturbances and worries from his siblings. Due to this,he fell apart in his studies which caused him to fail the course.
Another reason is that,some students finds it difficult and boring to learn on their own pace. Because they encounter a lot of problems in their studies. Students finds it very hard to understand lessons without the presence and explanation of a teacher. And again,students finds it very boring when learning on their own because there is no form of oral conversation between the teacher and student. Some students prefer being active in studies rather being dull or inactive. So when all these happens,the students may skip the contents because he or she doesn't get any understanding,
or close the contents and go to sleep. For instance,I had a friend who was struggling with these same problems,he feels bored and difficult to understand in distance learning. So anytime he gets to sit for the lessons,he feels sleepy during a short period of time. He sometimes drink a whole cup of thick coffee but it doesn't make any changes. So what he does is to off the computer and go to bed. And this hinders his academic performance each year.
Lastly,students feel fatigue or weak in distance learning since they don't get time to take rest after school. Some students even have to close work after school before taking the online class. With these,it makes student lazy and sleepy when he or she sits in fronts of the computer to learn. And me myself is experiencing this problem. When school closes, I have to walk half a mile before I gets home,and from there,I work on my assignments and take my shower. So by the time I will be done,then it is getting late, and I still have to take this classes online. I feel tired in learning at times which retards my level of learning.
From these reasons, I would like to conclude that,students would not benefit from distance learning because there are so many disadvantages from it which has brought low level academics in their studies.
Thank you. | 4.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
80DB9AB00E74 | i would take the offer of finish high school early and stay after school because they giving a chance to finish early so you might just take it you get to go to college early and probably get a full time job get you're own money and not worry about not having money no more.
It is a good idea because some people would like to finish early then late some of them would rether get a job then come to school but you need education to get a good job and be succsesfull in life and a better job gets you good money for the people that like to spent money on clothes and stuffs like that
A lot of kids dropping out ofschool why because like i said they rather get a job then go school but you need school to get a good job but they giving you the oportunity to graduate early but some kids just guve up on school and drop out of school but i would take the oportunity to finish school early so i can be succesfull in life and have a better life and not worry about not having money.
But some students wouldnt like to come during summer or after school so they would have to ask all the studets so they can agree to see what they prefer to do like just take the classes the you really need for graduation insted oftaking classes that you dont need for graduation so they wouldnt have to stay after school or come during summer | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
80DD7EE85BF7 | I disagree for adding one and a half of hour in school days. Because reason #1 is that we are in school for 8 hours doing work and other thing and we get tired and it's just to much forus kid's or grown ups.
Reason #2 is you don't have a lot of time to do your childhood things cause your in school for 9 hours and 35 mins.
For example you just cameout of school your tired you what have fun but then you got to do homework and that can take hours to finish your done but you can't go outside cause it's to dark and your parents won't let you cause of hours of school. That's reason #2.
Reason #3 is homework you always get home almost every single day doing some extra work and is can take hours to finish. For example you come out of school at 4:00 your tired but you got homework and then you finish your home for like 2 or 3 hoursof extra work but you can't do anything really fun like go out somewhere with freinds cause it's to late and dark. That's reason #3.
Reason #4 is a appointment you always come out school at 2:45 and your appointment is at 3:00 but you can't go cause you got extra hours in school i know you can leave early but waste you child or grown up learning time in school. That's reason #4.
I get it if yall school's set extra time in school just to make us smart,or have a good life,and a good job,but us kid's and adult's need time for are own self so this is all my reason and example's that I disagree for having extra time in school. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
80DFF2FC7C1F | i am disagree with this because, is going to have a negative effect because, you are going to lose the comunication with the people.
first reason: you can't go out side to shop.
example:when i was in my country, i was going to the store, i was go in my bike or walk but when i move to the united states i don't need to go because, my mom just call to the store and they bring the prouct or food.
second reason: play games with your friends.
example: the last week, i ask to one of my friend who live in my home country if they continue play games like soccer in the soccer field or anther game in the street , he tell that now they play populars games in the phone and they don't like play games in the street enymore.
third reason: the little boys don't want to do others thing just stay in the phone.
example: my little brother who is to years old, he just want to watch videos on the phone, when my mom take the phone he cry because he want to watch videos or play games on the phone he don't do other things, he don't play with my other brother.
fourth reason:
go to visit family or other places.
example:when i go to visit my family or other places i can leave my phone because everytime we go to visit my family i be bored. and when wi go to visit new places i like to take pictures of the place.
fifth reason: you will be a addicted with your phone or computer.
example: i have a friend here in the school who use the phone in the class, sometimes he is play games , some times he watch videos, when the teacher look at him he is in the phone she tell him to put on his packet or in the back pack but he never do it, some times he sit on the back of the room so the teacher can't see him. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
80E36876B2CB | No more junk food in the cafeteria anymore. Students need to start eating healthy, and take care of themselves so they can stay energetic for the rest of the day. Cafeteria needs to change to a new, healthier school lunch menu, which would eliminate some of the students favorite cafeteria foods. It's a good idea to change to a new, healthier school lunch menu because students will eat more healthy, students will not be obese, and they will be healthy instead getting sick every other day.
Majority of the people who eat healthy on daily basis are always in good health. My mom always eat healthy, and takes care of her diet, she's 60 years old, and she doesn't have any diseases or anything. She's in good health. So, she always tells me to stay determined to eat healthy, stay hydrated, and that should be the case for everyone else as well. Changing to a healthier menu is a good idea because students will eat well, and start to like the healthy food instead of the junk food. Eventually, students will start to like fruits and vegetables instead of chips and chocolates, and drink more water instead of soda, juice, and stay hydrated. They will be diligence towards their diet. Students will eat oat meal, milk, yogurt, and some fruits in the morning from the cafeteria. It would digest easily and students will not have stomachache or any other kind of pain in the morning after eating breakfast. In lunch, they will eat proteins, for example: meat, nuts, and beans, also milk, water, stay energized for the rest of the day, and not have any disease or pain.
Students will not be obese or gain a lot of weight. They will stay in shape because they will be eating healthy food from the cafeteria, and they will not have unhealthy condition of body or mind. Students will maintain their health, and stay fit by following their diet. Their body will not contain any impurities, and they will not have any diseases. Students will be able to play sports, run fast, accomplish their goals, and discover new things in life. Also, they will be more active. If you're fat then you become lazy, always not willing to work which is not good for health. You have to be productive in order to achieve your goals in life. Students will not eat junk food from the cafeteria anymore, and it would give students the opportunity to keep up with their body and be fit.
Students will be healthy instead of getting sick every other day. Eating healthy is good because you learn how to maintain your health, and it helps you to eat well. Students will the eat the food that is good for their health. Eating healthy on daily basis, and going to the gym maximum twice a week can keep them in shape, and get rid of the illness. Healthier school lunch menu would benefit a lot of students, and illustrate them "To purify, and be bright". My cousin Generic_Name used to eat unhealthy all the time, even from school cafeteria as well, and always used to cry about how her stomach used to hurt. After six months she gained weight, and she was crying about it that she's never going to be fit again because she gained too much weight, but my mom told her that there's always a second chance, she was eating unhealthy, and wasn't taking care of herself so that's why she gained weight. She told Generic_Name about her healthy diet and convinced her to immediately start eating healthy, stay hydrated, do not eat junk food on daily basis, and be diligence about working towards her goal to be fit. Generic_Name listened to my mom and started eating healthy, she lost weight right after 8 months, and her stomach didn't used to hurt like it used to before all the time, that's why students need to eat healthy food from the cafeteria, and take care of their diet because they spend majority of their time in school. It might not be the best food for the students but it's good for their health.
Junk food is not good for health. Cafeteria should have healthy lunch menu. So, students can have the opportunity to eat healthy and not face any dificulties related to their health. It's a very good idea to tell students to fix their diet, and start to become responsible for what is good for their health and immune system. Students will not gain a lot of weight if they stick to their diet and eat healthy from the cafeteria. Students wil not have stomachache or any other diseases. They will be able to trust the process of eating healthy, and keep up with it. Cafeteria should only have healthy food. So, people can minimize the amount of junk food they eat on daily basis. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
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