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7382F8B16AAF | Going to any parks is very fun, enjoyable, and exciting to always try their interesting activities.
People go to parks to have fun and able to enjoy their time with their loved ones. They go to a park to spend their time outdoors.
Community parks, state parks, and national parks provide a wide variety of interesting activities like enjoying the outdoors playing sports, kids can have fun playing, and you can also hangout with your friends.
Firstly, any parks has a lot of interesting activities that everyone can have fun and enjoy themselves, therefore they make sure that they have a lot of choices to do for example, you live near by the neighborhood park and the weather outside is beautiful, so you decide to call your friends and tell them to meet you at the park, so you guys can enjoy the weather while playing sports outdoor.
Secondly, parks is always a good place to bring children to have fun, enjoy themselves, and let them be free. Bringing your kids to the park is always a good choice therefore, they can go to the swings, sea saw, slides, and they can also go run around or you can also bring them to a amusement park where they can go on many rides. For example, Generic_Name is bringing her daughter and son to a water park, where the kids could enjoy themselves by going on a water slides or go swimming around the pool.
Lastly, park is the best place to go and hangout with your friends, where you can all talk freely, have fun, goof around, and mess around with. For example, Its summer so you and your group of friends decide to go to a amusement park so you guys can bond, enjoy yourselves, walk around, ride a lot roller coaster, and have fun before summer ends.
There are many different type of parks in the world, but all of them has one in common and that is to make sure its enjoyable and fun for everyone to enjoy with their friends and family. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
73851AC4551C | 78% of Americans students do extracurricular activities, by staying after school,doing sports and serving on the student council. This can help students to improve their grades,because every activity count as a grade or extra credit.
Firstly,students should do extracurricular activities because this can improve their grades, if they do extra credit after school teachers can replace a missing assignment for the extra credit. Students can improve their grades in different ways they can do particularly activities like sports, if students do sports they can practice their beneficent for do activities after school. One important thing is that students can receive help from others students or teachers,a lot of students stay after school for receive help especially when they have missing assignments,if they do not understand a topic.
Secondly,students can spend time with their friends, this is important because some students spend their time in technological things like phones,video games and things like that ,others students like to stay after school because they can share time,ideas or comments how they are in their grades,by sharing ideas they can help each other in their work,especially if they do not understand something. They can share and receive help from others they can do work together and when they finish they get free time for their friends.
Thirdly, this is most important because students learn more,they learn the importance of share time with friends,a lot of people have longer friendship because they like to spend time with friends and they do not spend time with a phone. All the kids should do extracurricular activities in school because this can help then in a future,especially if they take importance to improve their grades.
To conclude, every student should do activities after school,this is a benefit for their future and for their learning skills. Parents should be interest in these things because most students have bad grades in their classes and this is an opportunity for improve grades. Doing sports is an activity that can help kids to be healthy and stronger. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
73930228893B | I feel like if students want to graduate in three years or two years they should talk to someone like there teachers and they can ask them if there GPA is low.
there is a lot of ways that they can help them for an example if they are failing any classes then they can take some classes online, or if they can go to night school,or stay after school for more help. There is a another way for them they can go to school summer and they can take classes the ones that they fail or take some other classes the ones that they need to take if they don't want to keep on going to school. also if they stay in school, no abuses, and stay out of trouble they can probably graduate in three years.
If there bad grades are low or GPA they can take a another class that can bring up there grade up like, do a sport, like soccer or art. or they can ask a teacher if they can change there class where there where is two teachers.
I feel like my school they should let students graduate with a low GPA because there is some students that have a hard time keeping up there grades up like. If they have a brother, or sister that they have to take care of or they have to work two jobs to help there parents out. but i feel like students shouldn't work while going to school because that how they get bad grades and can't bring up any grades up. what i like about my school is that they let students pass there sol's with a 375 or more the ones that are in small group and that they need more help. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
739B9009D8D2 | While students are in Middle School in 8th grade, they get the opportunity to see many career's and see which one are they planning to take or have an idea of the career. students should have the opportunity to choose their own career, sometimes students are force to take the career that their parents want. Why? because in many occasions they do not have another choose. In this decade teenagers have the right to choose the career that they want to study. In High School students are preparing and learning different elements and different skills, however; learning others skills benefit teenagers in their future. How? and Why? because learning different skills prepared teenagers for any jobs or if they have any kind of problem anywhere. Guiding students for what they like since a young age is an acceptable idea because they learn more and more each day. Their mentality is improving each day. For example: They try to look for information, asking people that already have experiences with the career that they are thinking to take. After Middle School and High School students are ready to start college and they should be assuming what is best for them.
In some parts of the world teenagers do not have the opportunity to go to school, countries that do not have good recursive, for example: Honduras, El Salvador, Guatemala, Africa. In those kind of countries many teenagers do not go to school because they prefer to work beside of going to school, their education is not good enough. That is why so many people come to U.S. because they know that the education that U.S brings them is their future. Each Teenager comes with a dream to U.S. Kids at age of 12 of those countries comes with big mentalities with big dreams, that is what helps many teenagers to choose a good career in U.S, at young age they know that they have to make their family proud and be the alpha of the family with a good career. Also as the population in those countries is increasing day by day is harder to find a job even if you had a good diploma it do not matters. The society in those countries when kids want to go to school their parents don't let them, "the education here is not going to guide you anywhere" that is what they said, that is why now days are many terrorism in many countries because parents takes the dreams of their children and through them to the trash. Many parents should give teenagers the opportunity of studying and talk them about how important is to have a good education and let them think about the career that they want at young age.
The importance of knowing and thinking about the future at young age has been an impact in now days, because in many cases around the world teenagers do not think about their future, they do not care about school, jobs, education, or their family, but in U.S teenagers have many chances of getting a good job and getting a good healthy life and a great education.
Teenagers will have their life set after High School.
Teenagers are going to be an inspiration for others.
They will have a good job.
Ensuring that students should have their career in mind by the time that they enter to High School for them to learn more and preparing when they get to college and learn much more and be an inspiration for many other teenagers and for others to think of the importance of having a good education and career. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
73A997703BC3 | Does technolgy have a posistive or negative effect in your life? To me it does because it allows me to complete many things without having contact with others. For example when you wanna order something online you dont have to calll you can just order it online with out contaction anyone.
Technology can help you in manys ways. One way it can help you is by if you dont know the answers to a homework you can go on a computer or even a phone and look up answers and wedsites of where your answers can be. Another way is if you need to do technology work need to be done at home you can use a computer and send an email to your teacher without contacting her about it when your done. To me i see this as a positive effect on people because it can help you succed in school and complete things you need to do as well.
There are so many other ways technology can help you as well. when you wanna sign up for soccer you can regrister online. All you have to do is answers qustions put your information and once your done putting your information in you can pay for it and once you pay your coach will get an email that you singed up for his team. Technology for kids is positive when they are younger than 5. Letting them use phones and tablets would be good so they can learn how to say , words , letters, numberrs, and learn new things before they go to school and already know a couple things. So that to me is a posetive effect with technology
For sum people negative effects could also be negative for them also. When a parent dosent know how to use a phone it can be stressfull for them becuase they wouldnt know what to do unless someone is there to help him and do the things the parent needs to do on the one. Also another negative effect is when if you have all work saved in a computer and you get your computer wet and it wont turn on how are you gonna show your boss or teacher your so that would have a big negative effect on the worker. These are sum ways technology can have a negative effect on you.
To me technology has a poseitive effect in my life because I can be able to do more things and not have to worry about and contact people to help me do it. I also beleive for other people it can help aso for like, work, bank, food and more . But sometimes they can also be negative things but negative things also happen in life so its okay for that to happen. So Technology is good for life becuause it can bring posetive effect. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
73D2B941F40F | Would students benefit from being able to attend classes for home? In my opinion that wouldn't be a good idea but also be a great idea. School should allow students to decide if they wanna attend at their school, home, or both. Anyways it's a good idea that some school allow their kids to attend classes from their own house.
Allowing students to attend classes from school is good idea. That's giving the students time to do there work and to learn whenever. Students could sleep one or two more hours in. Most kids either play sports, have a job, or maybe both. They won't get much sleep then they will be tired the next morning. If we could have classes at home students wouldn't have to worry about sleeping in class and getting yelled at by the teacher. Most students wanna be home school because they either get bullied, tired of getting in trouble, but mostly students these days wanna graduation early.
If we also had classes at home more kids will be more safer than at school since what's happening right now in 2018. students wouldn't have to deal with getting suspend or expelled because most kids these days get that. School wouldnt have to deal with drugs, gang violence, or anything that's harmful to the school. Then school drama wouldn't happen a lot in school if we could just be home. It will also be a great idea if we could attend classes from school and at home.
It wouldn't be a good idea because most students wouldn't do anything or make someone else do it. Some students like to be teach in person and if they were at home then they can't learn at all. some students are just too lazy. What about gym and other non core classes? We could have a time when they gotta start there class and if they don't sign in then they get mark absence. If they have a non core class then they can just go to school to take it but most classes you could probably take online.
I hope you think about changing school to allow students to take classes at home, or allowing them to take some at home, or both. Thank you for reading my paper hopeful you thought about everything and how it could change everyone problem. have a wonderful day! | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
73D5C8D99F72 | I agree with Ralph waldo when he said's "to be your self in a world that trying constantantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishments."
although being yourself is a very hard thing to do especially when you have nobody buy your side though it all at first it seems easy but once you try so hard to make people proud you would wanna feel like fiting in.
But yet again here we are learning from our own mistakes why try to make our self just what others want us to be, why cant we just be us for just simply pleasing ourselves I wish we woulden't care what people think about us but do , but we have to face reality sadly weather we like it or not theres no alternatives.
Because whats the point?, just to be something we are not, for example one we would be lying to ourselves and second either way no matter how much we try its never enough for anyone because at the end of the day how we choose to be either our self or not nobody will ever be pleased with our decisions not the other way around.
Sometimes our influences may proswade us and to a sertin point we try so hard not to fit in but the people that we hang around the most we reflect upon them even if we see it or dont at the end of they day they try but the real question is do they succeed? yes but only temporary nothing lasts forever everything has its timing when it should or wont come to our lives.
I mostdefinlty agree to being yourself is a huge accomplishment, but we might not understand at the moment, how or why but we will soon rather then later at first its complicated even difficult although its just tempawarly things that accur in that priest moment it can also be for our great or good but we should've been proud of what diden't thad happen.
So i believe sticking with yourself is always the best policy dont worry what people say about you, you know where you stand dont let anyone tell you so plus being yourself will mark the difference in you people cant always tell what you are they dont define you thats for you to decide not them,So dont be embarrassed of yourself show yourself off believe in yourself because your limit is and only you.
Thank you for your time hope to hear from you very soon.
Sincerely
Generic_Name | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
73D69658CF95 | Some schools are offering distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home. For those who can pay a fee for it would be perfect because they have the material to do that, like enternet, computer, or any other device to joing by online or video conferencing classes. Some students woul benefit from being able to attend classes from home, but just those who really need it, like students with disability or health problems. It would not benefit students whom have a hundred percent of their ability to develop anything, it would make them more lazy than what they normally are.
Generic_Name is a student who has a hundred percent of his ability but he does not like go to school. He is always skiping classes and never make homework. Generic_Name is a student with health problems who can not assist to school like a normal teenager because he has to be connect to a oxygen tank twenty four, seven. Generic_Name does not want to go to school and Generic_Name can not do that. The school which both of them used to attend is offering a distance learning program for students and the first two students who joing are Generic_Name and Generic_Name. If schools decide to create this program for students, them most priorize at the moment to acept students.
Distance learning program as an option for students to attend classes from home. It would benefit thousands of students whom really want to learn and be successful in their life. If schools which have this program available for students allow students like Generic_Name and Generic_Name to be part of it. The one who is going to be benefit more would be Generic_Name because he is the one who really need this program, he is the one who want to learn new stuff, he is the one who want be someone in the future. Generic_Name would be just one more of those students who are trying to take the easy way for everything, acting like if the world goes around him. But there is also an amount of students who can not have access to enternet or any electronic device to access to the online classes. So it turns a problem for those who does not have acces to any of those things and has health problems like Generic_Name or who does not have enough money to have what they need to participate. The online classes would be hard to them no matter what. If schools created a plan for those students it would be more easy to them to develop themself.
In conclusion some schools are offering distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home, for students who does not have a hundred percent of their ability, student with health problems, students who really need it. Them also may create a program that help students without enough economy to take those classes. If schools are creating new ways or programs for those whom really need it, them most think about all the needs that them have and try to supply it, not with a hundred percent but helping with what they can. So students can learn and be successful n the future. Remembering that the one that are students right now, are the future of the world. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
73DF8CA712BB | Elementary school students, they are. examples:They don't do the work, They don't care anything, They are funny, Always go outside to play what they wants, In others schools they don't had to go with uniforms, They always be late, The moms pick up to go to the home, he majority of the students had 8-12 years old because they are in elementary school, If you had 13 years old or more you no can't go to elementary school or if you had 5 years old you no can't to.
They do draw, They had the same teacher everyday, They had 4 teachers, one of gym,other of music other of draw and the teacher of scients, math , They go to the lunch 11:30, In the morning in the cafeteria they can take a bag with food inside the bag had apple, milk,juice, and then when they finish the they put the trash in the trash and when is time for lunch they go to the cafeteria and take the food sometimes they eats in the class, Sometimes they eats in the cafeteria to, If you don't speak English you had a teacher of Spanish of depend what language you speak she help you to what do you need, They give a dictionary to you, That helps you to search the word you don't know, They don't fight is rare to see is fight in elementary school, Sometimes happened but is rare when that happened in elementary school, A day in the morning in the cafeteria two boys start to fight that was fast because the security coming to the fight he separe the the guys he take to the office and everything was fine, But in elementary school the fight are fast, In middle school or high school the fight are extreme the security don't cant separe the students because sometimes the others students coming to the fight to sometimes is because they friends are in the fight and they wants to help the friends, Everymorning when you enter to the class i always take a computer and i do what i want that is good, Because that help to learn more English to me.
This important, Because when was in elementary school i see that sometimes the teacher said today everybody had to take the food and coming to the class we are going to wacht a movie, Sometimes we had to go the music class the teacher of music class she was a good teacher, Sometimes we to the draw, Sometimes we had to go to the gym to play soccer, The most what i like of elementary school was the teachers she's always help me in my work,homework, Is important because when i coming of my country i was in elementary school, The first day of school for me was a bad day, Because i don't speak English the teacher asking something to me but how had to answer i don't understating nothing what she is saying to me, Is important to me, Because everyday we go to outside in elementary school we play a lot games like soccer, basketball, the lesson is important, Because i put things happened to my friends, I put things what i see in elementary school | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
73F2515B5BCE | I disagree with the school board extending the school day by one and a half hours extra.
Because Students will no have enough sleep with one and a half hours extra of school with homework,
also students will have less free time, and also student wouldn't have enough time to go spend with there family.
If the school board extended the school day by one hour and a half then students wouldn't have enough time to sleep because they have to do there homework , and that take probably one to two hours to finish there homework and then they will have to eat and get ready for bed.
I like have my free time to do mostly what I want to do but if the school board extended's the school by an hour and a half then we wouldn't have as much time for free time and we wouldn't be able to go outside and play with are friends or play video games, everything that you like to do will be shorter.
Do you like spending time with your family I like spending time with family but if the school board extends the school day by one hour and a half then you wont have as much time to be and spend with your family like going outside for a walk or playing games or going out places like to eat and those times are going to be making memories not being in school most of the time.
Thats why I think students shouldn't have school extended one hour and a half so they can have more time to do there homework and have more time to sleep, and so that they can have enough time to play video games and play outside with there friends , and finally so they can spend time with there family and do fun activities with them. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
7445CD7E0985 | According to the text I think is a good idea that students can graduate from high school in three years because if you graduate from high school very early you are going to get a lot of opportunities to be successful in life, I also think that if someone decide to start working contraction or hard works like that early, three years later that person going to get a lot of experience and money and if you decide go to college or some like that when you graduate from college you going to be young and ready for life, that's how a lot of people became millinery, because the must time you spend doing something that's more experience that you going to get, and when you got experience and you know what you doing, and what you want you life going to be better and easier in the future.
People also think that it is a bad idea graduate from high school in three years because they said that is to early, and you don't going to be smart enough to be successful in life but I said " that's wrong because we still have to go to summer school and take extra classes in summer school and you have to be very smart because you need to pass all you classes you cannot fail any class because if you fail one you need to take it in summer school again and that's going to be a problem so if you want to graduate early you also have to take classes online so you're going to be very busy so they should be ready for the next level.
I know someone that he is from Dominican Republic but he leaves in Generic_City, I went to one of his barbershop and i ask him
" what did you do to be so successful? he told me this " when i was 16 years old I graduate from high school' then i ask "how you graduate so early and he told me that he take classes in summer school and he take classes online" i said that' s good "keep telling me how you became succesfull " and he told me that after he graduate he went to college to take classes the barbershop 3 years later he was only 19 years old so he have to work for one year if he want to open his own busyness then after that he open three barbershops in Generic_City he said if you put you best effort to the thing you, and life going to get better everything.
Another thing is that not everybody make it,
is hard but i have i tip for those type of people never give up just do you best and put you hurt to it and put you best effort because at the and your mom and dad don't going to be there to pay for you food you going to be the man in that house so that's why everybody need to work hard everyday if they one to be successful in life.
In conclusion the best thing for student in graduate early because the must experience you get doing something the must money you going make and for me life is about perseverance, progress, and be successful because if you don' got nothing nobody going to respect you, and you need to help the people that cannot make it because people fail sometime life is not that easy for some people is you got the opportunity to do it good in life take that opportunity. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
745F880CEFA7 | When someone is asking for advice they might talk to more than one person because someone might have better advice than someone else or might have better and more advice than somebody else. I think people ask multiple people because the person who is asking for advice wants the most advice and best information and opinions from others. Another reason why someone might ask multiple for advice is that everybody has different experiences throughout their lifetime and might know more stuff because of those experiences throughout their lifetime. People might ask the elderly for advice because their wise and have lived a long life so they might know alot of information to pass on. Everybody has different opinions but hearing different opinions from others can help you make a better choice. I think you should ask your parents for advice first before you ask anybody else for advice because your parents are the one the ones who raised you and they know what's best for you. For example your parents probably told you when you were little to not to talk to strangers because they know its the best for you. Your parents also might have told you that to always tell the truth because its not good to lie. By asking alot of people for advice and hearing other peoples opinions and experiences throughout their lifetime you now know alot of information and advice from others with that you can make a better choices. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
746A0BFABA84 | It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Why should first impressions defined who you are? Why are they so "impossible" to change? are first impressions really that important, why should something so small change the way you think about someone. First, no one is perfect. Everyone has very different personalities or ways of being. Second, it should't defined who we are. First impressions don't always go well, you should be able to change that. Finally, It could ruin your reputation. A lot of people care about their reputation a lot. To the point that it could be emotionally wrecking
First, no one is perfect. We aren't perfect beings, we all have different personalities. Different things we do that others don't and some people may think its weird or we are weird to do that. That's when first impressions come to play. Meeting someone for the first time can often be hard to manage since is the first time you are meeting this person. Truly anything could go very wrong. They could think they way you talk, eat, and act is weird because you are trying way to hard for it to not go bad and sometimes that comes out as bad. Life sometimes will go wrong and we can't change that or let it get the best of us because we aren't perfect and it's okay if sometimes things don't go our way of liking. if it goes bad we should be able to change it or try again.
Second, it should't defined who you are. Every human is not alike in any way possible, all of us are unique in our own way. Sometimes we make mistakes and theres cases where people don't like that. When you are on a stated of mind of anger, you could do something drastic but that doesn't defined who you are on your heart and mind. You have your own mistakes and flaws but that isn't you is just a part of you that doesn't think and does thing on impulse. When you are trying to make everything perfect that person it could stress you out really bad and anything could make you go off. when it's the first time meeting that person it can really tress you out bad but that's okay. First impressions should be able to be change because if that were to happen it could really damage a person if that certain person was important to them. You should be able to reschedule the date when everything is better and you can be normal. If they are truly your friend they will allow to you to that.
Finally, it could ruin your reputation. Let's say you are the most friendly person in your school and everyone likes you because of how fun or nice you are. you would love to keep that way. But one day a new student comes to your school and you introduce yourself but right out of the bat they don't like you without knowing anything about you. That thought could eat you up for the rest of the time, and you try and try to get that person to like you but they don't. Being able to change that first impression is all that you would like to do but it feels impossible. But it isn't impossible if that person wanted to get to know you they could but they don't want to and yes there's people like that all over the world. Having a second chance could change everything for you but we should't let it get the best of us that person will come around at their own time. We can't make people be our friend if they don't want to. If they want to get to know you they will.
Conclusion, First impressions are not important things will go wrong sometimes and that's okay. We can always try again another day, it should't get the best of us or makes us feel some type of way if that person truly wants to be your friend they will not care about the mistakes you make or anything around that. You are human and you make mistakes sometimes. And that's okay, it doesn't defined who you are;only you know who you are on the inside. First impressions should't even be a thing they stress you out and makes you over think. Being able to change the impossible is something we should be able to do always. Don't let anything like that make you think less of you. | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
747E3560442E | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, "unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." Based on your experiences, do you agree or disagree with Emerson's statement? Take position on this issue. I believe what author Ralph Waldo wrote is true.
First reason, why I agree on what the Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote. I think if you don't work hard for what you want,you will never accomplished it. Also believe in yourself and be confident, if you have skills use them. However, someone people have skills, but are not confident with their self. Practice or training will help you be successful.
Second reason, why I agree on what the Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote. In my experienced I wasn't confident I would be shy to present my project. Although, I got my first job and helped me a lot with my fear. Now when my teachers asks who wants to present I will raise my hand first, so I can get over it.
Lastly, why I agree on what the Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote. In my second experienced I was good at algebra and my other subjects, but my junior year I gave up when my grades dropped to a zero. In my second semester i started bringing my grades to at least a C, to make my mom proud. Until this day I feel proud of myself too.
In conclusion, you should not give up on something you love to do nor let someone tell you what you can and cannot do. Author Ralph Waldo Emerson is right , work hard and you will be successful. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
749E089D7992 | My talent is i'm good at drawing when i draw i like to draw the stars, the moon,woods and the ocean, drawing is a talent where you can express your self by showing multiples of types of art ,there's a lot of types of art my favorite type of art is the one where you draw. When you draw you can do make whatever you want and if you made a mistake you can fix it ,my other favorite type of drawing is the one where you paint, because you can paint what are you feeling like if you're sad,happy,angry,upset. Art is one of my favorite talents i can make whatever i want and peolpe pay a lot of money for the drawings or paints they don't care if they cost billions of dollars they pay it, because it's beautiful art. Art is a talent that a lot people have it, some people are so good at it, that sometimes they think it's not good enought so they decide to throught it away, but they don't know that some peolpe will like it and they will pay it for their art. Art cost a lot of money but some people don't sale their art, because they want to keep it for memory or because they want to show it to their family and sometimes they sale it to their family, but they don'tsale it for billions or millions of dollars,because it's for their family. Smoe peolpe when they make mistakes on their art and they don't fix it and they don't thourght it away they just keep it,because maybe some rich people will buy it.
I think people should try to sale it
,
because they can get a lot of money for their paints or drawings. Art it's a really hard jod you need to be patient, because you might make a mistake and u have to start all over again, people don't start all over again what they do is they can make something beautiful of that mistake and by the way art it's also about you see something ugly, but you can fix it and make look beautiful.
Some people think art it's boring,but it's not, beacuse if you love doing art you don't think it's boring you love doing it, because it makes you happy and sometimes when you're so happy and exited to paint you don't have the control and you just start paint and you dont care if it's ugly you just lating your body do his work, because you're so exited about it that your not even think what is going to look like, sometimes i do the same i late my body to do the work by his self and actully it does fell good you happy and so exited.
Other peolpe get so stress when their work dosen't look how they wanted to be, sometimes i get stress out too, because i think my draw dosen't look good how i wanted to be, but like i said you need to patient, because art is not an easy jod it's hard. But when you get use to it it's hard but not that hard like before, i'm good at art but im still learning and sometimes it's really hard but i need to be patient and keep practicing, because practicing makes the teacher. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
74CDAF3BB9EF | I think that he is right in what he think, about the consists of succession going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm, because if you loss your enthusiasm in something that you are doing you loss the interes in it, but if your enthusiasm is to do it, you can do it many times you want the failure is just a little rock in your way to made your personality more incredible and unique from other that just give up at the firts time.
Enthusiasm is everything you need, when you want to strar something, without enthusiasm we can have a lot of failure if we don't try again and again, it is like the main function of your brain, your personality, and your attitude, to don't have any failure in your life, someone with a great enthusiasm is someone with many opportunities in his life, someone with a good control about what he wants and what he does, someone who doesn't give the opportunity to fail in what he is doing, failure will be always right there in from of you, but your are the only one who accept it or not.
An example of failure can be, ; like when someone went to ask for a job but, he doesn't had the job because he didn't finish the high school that is failure in his life, but he decide to retake the high school in his free time, and he graduate from it, he can back for ask in the same job, he is contracting at this time it was because he has a great enthusiasms in his life, he never stop because he didn't had the job at his first try he continue and he did it.
I know not everything is rose color but sometimes you need a little bit of failure in your life, to see how brave you are and how strong are you for the life situations, failure it's not mean that you are a loser, not it's mean that you are training for the difficult situations in the life but with just a good enthusiasm you can do it again and again has many times you want to do that is my conclusion about how failure can affect your life. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
74CE2F003968 | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from honme by way of online video conferncing. Is good idea to take classes online or not good idea to take classes online?
It is a great idea to take classes online, this is in my openin because it is fafe the students times. Like (work in deffrent time ) (Famileis responsiblity) (Sickness and transportion) work in deffrent time sa we all know that work that may effect the time of students becaue is impossible any work places give the students the schedule that they want it. So after student done from work ,they can take online classes fom home that will make them more relax.
Because after work is hard to focus in the classes but if students take from home they will have time to ate and more fouse. Online classes can give more time to do other activety,like sports, go out with friends.
Sickness,transportion ,Parke if students sick so bad do they can go to school ofcurs not first of all the student who is sick can make the other student sickt too. So that's why the online classes can make the different for students additional sick persons may can not drive too ,and may not all students have cars and parking some time students vhave to pay fo parking too. Frthuer more the wather may not help smoe time to dive to anywhere.
Families responsiblit,it is good benefit from families ,being to attend classes online. Because there we all know may some of students have chidern, or students are disaplelty person ,example disapolty persons can not go bythemsevs to school in the issue the online classes can make for thses students a big different so they can take time off if they are not feel well,and take their pale in the time. And that will help students that don't want to school because of these kind of issue the online class will be btetter for them. Or if students are moter or father, it will be easy for them to kake care of their childern and take classes online . So there will calm in the mind of the students because they will know that wouldn't be missing classes. Hwoevery; they will feel busy in their time but at lest there is options which is online classes. The great benefit of online classes for mother or father that may be they are students is the time. Which if they have kids or teenagers the online claeese can be benefitationl bacuse they can speent time with their kids and teen to see if they are doign good in school.
And the end the technology make the lifes easly and helpful;safe time,make anything be done on the time, so we can say technology refund the time for these who always busy. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
74D9504A6EDD | In the actuality, many schools have been a good support for all the students that want to continue studying, and have goals for their life, the schools provide opportunities and have partnerships with companies that allow students explore certain occupations.
It's hard for many students to choose the career they want to study, some students leave school after high school, so they loses great opportunities that the school provides, but my dream is to have passion for a job, so I want this opportunity to make a good decision whether if I want to study marketing, through internships and shadowing opportunities that the school provide. I'm really interested in this oportunity because I want to learn more about marketing, which is the business of promoting sales of a product, as by advertising and packaging, also learn about inform new innovations and persuade the people; I'm really creative, I enjoy making posters, using social media, talking with people, and I can speak spanish, english, and a little of french, also I want to have organization and administration of the things, however, I'm interested in pursuing that type of employment, that the manager of a business can tell us his experience, to motivate us because if you want something you will never give up, I will always put all my effort to be a better person.
In conclusion, I hope I can have this opportunity, to make sure if marketing is the job I want for the rest of my life because it's really important to choose the correct job, the people need to have passion for the things that they do , so they can enjoy and be happy everyday, and I want to transmit that feeling for everyone. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
74E468FCE398 | It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Based on my experiences, I disagree with this statement, first impressions are made by everyone but it is not impossible to change. Your first thoughts of someone. Everyone makes first impressions of people before even getting to know them by the way they dress, and looks. Some first impressions can be changed and some can't be.
First impressions is a human thing, I believe that everyone has at least made a first impression of someone and their first impressions can be impossible for them to change or it can be changed. The way someone's appearances can be affected by first impressions by so many ways. That is a major cause that is first seen. The way you are approached.
My Experiences can be said some of my first impressions can be hard to change, or I can be wrong about someone and my first impressions can be way off,and that person turns out to be nothing like what I have thought. This statement can be argued from two sides. Sometimes it can be impossible to change what your first thoughts can but than other times it can be changed.
One major first thoughts of a person can be the way a other person dresses, the way they look they way the walk, the way they talk. There are so many things a person can have first thoughts about a human being and just assume things about before even getting to meet . There is a lot of people in this world whos first impressions are impossible for them to change and would never change. But than theirs many other people whos first impressions are changed.
In conclusion, I believe that first impressions can be changed by my perspective, It is hard for someone to change the way they think of someone, but thats why its called ''first thoughts'' because it can be changed over time the way you look at someone can start to be seen differently and your thoughts will change. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
74FF4379012C | BEING YOURSELF.
Being yourself is by far the most fulfilling accomplishment any individual would have ever made. Not only does it take a lot of confidence, devotion, and self acceptance, but also the ability to learn, understand and love yourself both internally and externally.
people tend to have different role models for various reasons, for example my younger sister always wanted to be like the famous singer Beyonce because she had a beautiful voice. They might have some things in common which draws them closer to the idea of being just like them. Little do they know that them turning out exactly just like their role models is almost impossible because they lack their unique personality traits and acquire their own completely different set of traits which makes them who they are.
The sooner people realize that each individual is unique in one way or another the better. Being yourself does not mean breaking the rules because you like it but doing the right thing in your own unique way. Not only does that stand out but also makes you feel good about yourself. A perfect example would be comedian Liza Koshy from YouTube who made a whole career out of being unapologetically herself while she did comedy!.Using her as inspiration would be healthier than aspiring to be just like her.
With that I conclude that being yourself is not necessarily a walk in the park but putting effort into it would make a bigger difference than following the crowd. Ideas lead to actions and by visualizing yourself doing things correctly but in your own way is killing two birds with one stone! Author Waldo Emerson was right about being yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else being the greatest accomplishment. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 |
750184492A96 | Do you want to be board going extra hours to school, when you could be doing fun things? All the sports that you want to do will be ruined if you do homework club. Students should not have after school homework club because you won't have time to spent with family members, students are not going to have time to play there favorite sports, and they won't be able to play their favorite sport.
First of all, students won't spend time with their family. If youre in after school club and your parents are planning to go eat dinner, you are not going to make it. For example, Generic_Name is at school and the day is over but, he needs to go to after school club. Generic_Name call his mother and told her " Mom i need to stay after school today" but, his mother told him "we were going to your favorite restaurant Red Lobster." Generic_Name upset that we wont be able to go to his favorite restaurant because of after school club. This proves that after school can affect on family time. Generic_Name missed his favorite restaurant
just because school.
Secondly, students won't be able to play sports. If you are in after school club and in a sport your most likely going to be late for your favorite sport. For example, Generic_Name
plays Basketball but he goes to an after school club for English class. On Wednesday Generic_Name needs to go to the after school club, also he has Basketball practice after the club. Generic_Name goes to practice and he is five minutes late the coach tells him that is strike one. PROPER_NAME tried to convince the coach that he was at a club for school, the coach told Generic_Name ""Is either school or Basketball Generic_Name." Generic_Name got kicked form the team because he got to strike three. This proves that after school club can affect the sport that you play. Generic_Name got kicked from the sport that he loved, and the sport that he though that was going to be his career.
Finally, if you like video games their is only video games
on the weekend if take this club. You are going to come late from school which means that you are not going to be able to play. For example, Generic_Name is a gamer on YouTube he streams every day and plays games for YouTube, but now that he has to go to after school club he can't stream on week days because he gets out of school at 6:30 and the drive home is 30 minutes. So, Generic_Name gets home at 7:00 and he needs to do some of the home work that he didn't got to do on the club and is to late for him. Also, Generic_Name just bought a game and he can only play on the weekends. He lost lots of people that were following him on YouTube just because homework club. Generic_Name was playing for YouTube and had
a lot of people on his stream and lost half of them because after school club.
After school homework club is a waste of time, if you have things to do after school. It's difficult to do two things at once so don't do after school club. If you like doing sports do it because you should do homework at your own time. If you do after school homework club in school for more hours. Don't do after school homework club if you don't want extra time in school. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
750AFA674F45 | I think students would not benefit taking online classes or videos conferencing from home. Students not learn to much because they do not receive a good explication about the class as a real teacher would to explains in the school,
not have rulers and online classes not catches the students attention.
Students not learn to much taking online class because they need to receive a good explication about the class, as real a teacher explains in the school. For example, if you are a student but you have questions and doubts, but the classes online or videos conferencing does not answer and give you good explications about the class. Would you learn while you are keeping in mind all your questions and doubts? Other reason is that students do not learn taking online classes from home because they get confusion, not understand the class and they give up when nobody help them.
Would you able to do the right thing when there are not rulers taking a class? Electronics devices are the most powerful and useful tools that help us nowadays like cellphones, smartwatch and computers. However, many students are using electronic devices in the wrong way. For example, students that are taking online classes from home, they don't have rulers and they are using their phones to watch movies or texting with friends. This steal the students concentration, while they are taking the online classes. This can not happen during a normal day of school because teachers do not allows students to use electronics devices during class time. But students do not have the same rulers at home that teachers makes at school. This not benefit the knowledge of the students at home.
Online classes or videos conferencing not catchs the students attention like a teacher makes it. For example, if you are taking online classes from home and you are at the midpart of one the lesson but you get hungry then, you left the lesson to get eat. After eat you say, "I want to go to the park," then, you, went to the park, so forged all about your lesson. Would you able to do the same during a normal day of class in the school? A teacher does not allows that a student left the school or to go to the park at the midpart of the class, while he is teaching because he wants to catch your attention to make you to learn more and morer. However, online classes or videos conferencing you can stop it and go or do whatever you want, then you lose knowledge abou it.
Some say that taking online classes or videos conferencing from home is a benefit for students. They are wrong because the students not learn to much and they would have bad grades. Other say that online classes or videos conferencing explain in good details.. They are wrong because real teachers explain better than online class or videos conferencing.
As you can see, taking online classes or videos conferencing from home, not helps the students to learn because if they are confusing they will get bad grades , nobody answer their question or doubts and they don't have rulers or limited to use any electronics devices. This is not a benefit for students. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
753391D5E480 | I would have to agree with otherwise you try to do something in other side what you have is already mastered, you will never be successful, because whatever you have in your life is still nothing you should have a specific goal for you future, enough confidence, and demonstrated yourself.
Everyone should know what he/she want to be so they must prepare them selves for what they need to be, like working hard in order to achieve development in there ways. I want to tell about my friend Generic_Name that he is an engineer, he use be one those people that they think they can't do any thing in lives to find the way of success but he went for it to get it, thats way he is an excellent example for me. That makes me feel like it is your life, it is your choices just find it out whatever you want.
I think whoever believed to themselves and to the ability that they have they defiantly feel more strong in there goals. Also every one knows that when you have a problem do not complain just ask for help like me, when I was in Tenth grade I had a lot of issues the most important one is the school that I don't want to be in school because I feel that is just not going to work for me but I was wrong because I did ask for help from my teachers they provide me very helpful in formations. Some people might disagree with with me because they think asking for help can't solve all of the problems, but they are wrong because everyone need help no one is prefect.
As we know to confide in your self you need to toil hard a lot and you must tolerate more trouble that they are coming in your way. Of cores noting is easy but also is not that much hard that you should give up for it, so the more education that you have the more happier you will be in the future like my favorite soccer player Ronaldo he had a very hard live but he did find his goal and now he demonstrated him self to everyone.
In conclusion whoever try to do something in the lives like working hard on there goals, having enough confidence and tried to achieve them they well be successful. We all should believing to ourselves and use our abilities in right ways if there is a wish, there is a way for it. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
753E320B186B | In my opinion as a student: I don't agree at this type of method but the same time is good for students and teachers to learnd everyday, life is like a school we never stop learning something everyday and acquire new expirence and skills in our grammer. I should go neither everybody need their will to vote what they want to do or spend their summer break as they like.
like you see is their break and is not fair to obligate a student to do a project with out a vote to give them a choice to pick if they want to do it or not. Example; like the elections a President can't be a President with out votes, the country pick their own candidates and the citizens give the vote to the person they pick best for their country
Most likely everything have a vote in our community fuction nothing move with out a vote to people is fair to vote,
that how it works | 2 | 2 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
7545AC12D178 | I think have a positive effects on people's lives because is for be independent and make more easy your tasks , all humans must to work with technology , some people affect that because they think is negative for a teenagers but in this year all used , we need to modernize and not only for teenagers for all because is for make your hard tasks easy , and all , technology is not just for fun is for make your life more easy.
In my personal life i give you a example , i use technology for been fun and when i have homework i used my chrome book for make more easy my problems that help us for everything , i used technology for all, read books , play games , due my tasks and talk with friends , i like to use social media , technology is not boring you never been boring , reading books and play games is not boring , my family use technology for the same thing , take it easy your life.
An example of technology is in schools every schools used for is students , like in my school every student have a chrome book for do tasks and every classwork we due in the chrome book , the teachers have mac's for due tasks and this is my examples to why is positive in our life , i think technology has been modernize , a example is in the hospitals for take care of us we have technology , that is amazing technology can save ours lives.
A reason why have positive feelings about technology is because all examples i give you , another example is the police need technology for catch bad persons and technology make more easy tasks for a cops , god blessed the technology , i think we need technology for modernize , acceptable , and attitude, for a person get used technology is very easy only you need to practice and is a very easy to learned the technology.
I advise technology is for make easy your life that is all , you have work hard to do easy with technology because technology today in day have everything, you are a better person with technology , my thought is one day have we dependent about technology because this is the new fashion and everything , a example is the cars , today every car have technology , my thought is one day technology can make fly cars , and i wish that is the future. | 2.5 | 1.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
75707305C76D | Having a more advance learning can be beneficial because of career experience, graduating early, and recommendation.
Career experience is important to human society because it is needed in order to earn money. Some school provide programs that have different career. Student can have experience on what is like in the outside world. Without the help of the school program lot of student have difficulty on finding jobs.
Graduating early means that a student have master they're learning. They have the opportunity to start there career that they enjoy and have the requirement. Pre-AP classes, also advance learning can give students scholarship. Pre-AP classes means learning College while in High School.
Recommendation also falls on the same place as graduating early and career experience. When a student have master there learning they get to go to a special school that is more advance than regular school. They have reach the point where they succeed in learning.
Career experience, graduating early, and recommendation are all benefit of advance learning. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
757C5E55BA96 | I think it is a good idea that people should ask for others peoples advice because they can learn extra info from them. Because if you tell multiple people for an advice they can get more opinions from people. They can also get help someone make a better choice. You might learn different opnions from alot of different people and they can give you alot of advice on what not to do and what you should do. Its smart because if people ask for other peoples opinions they will get more ideas and facts and what they should do next.
The second reasons why I think people should ask multiple questions to a variet of different people is because so they can get alot of responses and more answers to their questions. The more people ask for advice they will get multiple opinions. If I dont ask questions iill never get any responses or advices. So thast why I think people should ask for others peoples advice all the time. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
759E0659FF69 | A city council is debating the adoption of a 10pm weekday curfew and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers. does curfew help teenagers or not help teenagers. Curfew is a bad idea because curfew do not help teenagers on weekday and also the weekends. My tops three reasons are stay out more, sink in/out the house, and they can get in trouble.
When teenagers stay out more it because they want hang more with their friends. My friends and i hang out and we smoke. My curfew was 11pm and i didn't check the time then i know that it was past my curfew i ask my one of my friend if he can give me a ride home i got my house keys. When my friends drop me off at my house and i open door of my house than i saw my parents sleeping and the next day my mom ask if i came back to the house at my curfew and i said yes and i got always with it.
Teenagers also sink in/out of the house. Some may say that curfew help teenagers to be home on time. They are wrong because most teenagers sink out of their bed room window. One night around four in the morning i was sleep and then i heard lot of noise. I got up from my bed and i saw my sister sink in from my bed room window and so help her to get in my room but around that time we are sharing my room because we had a room met. We both went back to bed and i told we will talk about this in the morning. In the morning i ask her why she sink out the room and she said that she need to think things over, she could't sleep, and she want go outside. I told her what happened if someone just take you and then what happened. She said well no one did and i told yeah thank god. We didn't our parents.
Most teenagers can get in trouble with their parents. When teenagers get in trouble it mostly with their parents because most parents are strict. When parents are strict it that they want what best for their children than they had. When teenagers are in trouble the person they go running to is their parents because they know they something bad and now they need help for it. On a weekend my friends and i are doing weed in one of my friend basement and her parents catch us doing weed and her parents told my parents. When i got home my parents were in the table and we all talk. My parents told me to stop doing weed so i did but few years later i was doing weed again and again they found out somehow. We talk about it now i stop doing weed for good.
Curfew is a bad idea on a weekday and weekends. Curfew do not help teenagers on weekdays and weekends because they can stay out more, sink in/out the house, and they can in trouble. This are all my tops three reasons. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
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75AA6229A116 | i strongly agree when the Former British Minister Winston Churchill say how failure takes a extremely important position in success. To success you have to fail many times as you need to the same thing so you can get it right and success on in. Success is the desire of outcome in many goals in life, is the gaining of wealth and fame,
Success is to attain desire of doing what you like even know you are going to have to fail on it many times doing in it.
Success consists of going from failure to failure because nothing is perfect in life. During life you are always going to have ups and downs everyday, you are going to lose people because you might be doing something that they don't like or maybe You might be facing some obstacles that stops you from success and doing what you like. During success you are going to lose your enthusiasm in what you are trying to success in. You are going to start thinking i can't do this because i have done it many times and i always fail on it or i can't do this because my friend's and family members say i can't do it because when i do it i always comes up wrong.
Failure consists in falling to do something,it consists in the inability to do something or perform To success you are always going to fail and fail and fail till you get it right. you are going to face many difficulties doing what you like or the choices that you make but in the end there is going to be a purpose for what you are doing. You are not going to success on something right away when you know is the first time you are doing it ,
you have to take steps by steps to do it. there are so many things that are going to be wrong, they are going to be times that you are going to fail on what you are doing. there are going to be times where people are going to try to put you down and tell you that you can't do it just because its your first time trying it and you fail it in your first time. And your enthusiasm is going to come down and down each day for everything that people tell you. but you have to always keep your enthusiasm up.
Because enthusiasm consists in strong and a warm feeling that tells you that you re always have to keep strong and keep your head up in what you are doing.
"success consists of going from a failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"is one of the Quotes you always have to keep on mind when you are doing something the first time. Ia the quote that you have too keep on mind when people tells you that you cant do anything because you fail it your first time. is the quote you have to keep on mind when you fail the first time and the the second time you got it right. thats where you are going to known the meaning of the quote. and you are going to see that all hard work you have done it was for a purpose to success more in life. maybe you might lost people during that battle but when you know the meaning of the quote and you understand it you are going to know that everything was for a purpose in life and after all you when through you success a lot in your life. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
75B44E3CE6DD | A positive attitude is not the key to success in life instead a hard working attitude is the the real key to success in life. Why? the answer is simple just because you are positive doesn't mean that you will accomplish your goals, complete your high school with an advance diploma or even find a job after years in the university, studying a career that you hated but decided to study that because its was the one that it will give you a better future. Therefore, you have to work, study, and move outside of your zone of comfort for you to have a successful life.
You will accomplish your goals with a hard working and diligent attitude. If you just have a positive attitude and maybe your goal is to have a car the coming year let me tell you, that you will not only need a positive attitude your will need a lot of requirements, like find find a car insurance whre you will have to pay monthly and also to the car company if you want a new car from there. After that you will have to work more an your payment will not be that same as before it will be less. Basically what I want to say is that just because you have a positive attitude it doesn't mean that you will have a car of the year, no it's not like that, for you to accomplish your goals you will need a hard working attitude and actually achieve your goals.
You are telling me that if you have a positive attitude you will graduate from high school with a advance diploma? No that is not possible, to graduate from high school is a work that you do for 12 years. And all those years your are telling me that you had a positive altitude? that's is not true, what happen to those days when you were sick in the school and you couldn't go to home because your house was alone and no one could pick you up from school, you thoughts were positive or they were just thoughts about how will you survive until the end of the school day?. Having a positive attitude is not the key for your success in school neither in your life everyone has moments when they want to give up on everything and live in a island were you will not have to support the society that this world has.
After years of studying a career that you didn't like hoping that when you finish you will find a suitable job for you to be successful and help your family. Years of working in a part time, nights of no sleeping, hundreds of essays, homework in the midnight and group projects, sometimes not able to pay the next semester, and a lot more is what a university student has to go for them to have a successful life not a positive attitude. And after all that they have to find a job to start paying their debt with the bank. They have to prove in their interview that they are the best of all those people before and after them.
In conclusion your successful life will come when you accomplish your goals, graduate from high school and university then find your suitable job. And not all the people can have a successful life because not everyone can go to high school neither university and those people live their life everyday hoping for a miracle to come to their life they will have to work everyday hoping that one day they will win the lottery and they will not have to work anymore. Your positive attitude will not take you anywhere. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
75C950F8EA18 | Sucsses is the common word that we hear every day, and everyone want to became successful in their life.
The first step of a person toward sucsses is school, and it is the golden part of our life, and to make it more enjoyable and comfortable for a student, school and teachers let us do some educational and exciting drama role plays, do a funny science experiment, and let them play their favorite instrument.
Today, we got some talented actors,comedians, actresses and etc, but they were also students in a time and were sitting on the chairs that we are sitting now. They did their best, try hard, participate in role plays in school, and now we can see were are they now. We can also reach there, and a best way to reach there is to participate in role plays in school, and improve our self from now. However, participating in role play is really fun and enjoyable. Role playing make us improve our daring to stand on podium and represent our self, and improve our emotions. By doing role play we can make people happy, and making someone happy is the biggest joy.
The technology and science has developed a lot and experiments are done day by day, and no one wants to stop these experiments. So for that now we want students to learn how to do experiments, and to make them more attractive toward science, we give them some fun and safe experiments such as:making rainbow in air, mixing colors or maybe disappearing coin, which increases their attention and focus on science, and it is actually fun to do these, and our big reason to do this is they are the future.
Every student has got a hide talent in their self such as; some students can play music, may draw, or maybe athletic, but these talents are not hidden for always these talents will get appeared sometime. The most popular talent among students is music. Because music directly touch your heart, and make you focus on it. Music have a lots of types it could be happy, sad, angry and etc, and it make you feel like that. We hear music everywhere on TV, in music class,and etc. When we hear music we get our emotions out and make our mind light, and we enjoy that.
At last, I think school is a place of learning, if someone want to learn something he always enjoy everyclass and get something learn from it. We should always enjoy at school and learn something. Because school is our main resourse of learning. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
75D13F3E0B2E | Most students who want to graduate before the years, that they should be take. Students with the capacity of make their mind strongest, go to their limits, and make one year early. Schools that allow students make more short their school years, if better for most of students who want get their diplomas, enter college, and start a career. Students who have a lot responsibilities and their want a diploma. These program is good to make steps in life. I think college do not have a specific age, just with your goals to make everything without leave school is strong enough to make a year early.
Those plans do not make problem, if just a way to finish what you want many people admire those people and see their potential. when a student have a early year because want a start to make a goals. If you see, passed, and remember high school lesson you will be fine, if you study and make your task these option will be good. Many reasons that take people to get these program, if because they usually do not have enough money, have to work, and need to study at the same time, everyone do not have the same opportunity opt for study during summer or online classes.
If you analyze students work after school, they want to get a diploma and make a force one year, when they make get one year less that say you are study and passed your classes different can be when teachers give you a year when you don't know nothing and teachers approve your year that's different go college when you have no idea how react to many classes than you never see or never show during the period of high school, the students that study during summers or in the evenings are focus in their classes that's because they finish fast and go college to involve in a new goal.
Example if you go school and need to work you'll to opt for study in summer or in the evenings that's your best option, students follow to take courses because it's a better idea maybe do not be the same learning, but with effort you can advance. Is not important how many years do you spend in high school, the think is what is your percent of each class. how you can involve in college: studying, focus, and remember what you see or learn.
In conclusion each student have different way to think how want to study and how many time want to spend in high school. Most students who take this decision if because they have to work and can spend much time, and they sacrifice some summers or evenings to get close their goals and each one do what is more beneficiary for their way. For me, if a good option opt for finish fast school and start a new stage in our life. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
75DAA54880C1 | The author Ralph Emerson wrote, '' To be yourself in a world that is constlantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.'' I totally agree with Emerson's statement because be something else is not the most greatest accomplishment that you can do, the most important accomplishment that you can do in this big worl is always be yourself, be humble about everything, be kind with others, and never change the person that you really are.
First, bring humble is one of the most important thing that we always need to have no matter what. Being humble can take you to the top, to be successful in the life. For example, Marisela de Montecristo, is a salvadorian beauty queen, who wob the title of Miss Universe last year and Nuestra Belleza Latina in 2013. Marisela grow up very poor, but when she was 10 years old, she emigrated with her mom to this country looking for a better life, however, when she came here she went to the school, she learned English, and she did graduated in social communication. In 2013 she decided to compete in a reality show that is called '' Nuestra Belleza Latina '' and she won, and with all the money that she won, she decided to founded an own restaurant for her mom in Las Vegas, Nevada. Six years latter, she decided to compite for Miss Universe El Salvador 2018, where she resulted the winner. That year she went to Thailand to compite for the title of Miss Universe. Now she is a famous person and she have her own foundation that helps people in countries around the world like Africa, El Salvador, Mexico, Philipines. Also she is modeling in differents countries like Paris, Spain, and Great Britain, but above all this things that shes is doing, she always still humble. In one interview with Telemundo, she said that being humble is the key of being successful in the live, and I totally agree with her.
Second, be kind with others is something that defined you as a good person, because people love when someone is really interesting in help others. For example, I think that we should be kind with others, help others, because we never know when we going to need help of these people, in addition, being kind is other accomplishment that you can do in this life, and is something that you can feel proud of be.
Third, never change who you really are for something passenger or for something that can not give you happiness, because be yourself is the most important thing that you can do in this big world. For example, my mom told me that being myself is the only thing that can make the difference of me between everyone, she also told me that being gay is not a hindrance to triumphing in my life, because with effort, dedication, and persistence I can do many things in my life, without necessity of change the person who I am.
To finish, be yourself is the only and the best thing you can do in your life. There is not other way to be happy and to demostrated to the world that you don't have to be something else to be successful and to make greatest accomplishment in your life, because the key always is going to be be yourself and be proud the person who you are. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
7600F1C7D884 | Would students benefit from being able to attend classes from home? I personally don't think students would benefit learning from home because you can learn better by being taught face to face, being able to know the ideas of you're classmates, and from being around people who already know enough to help you out. Being homeschooled would be much less stressful than from actually going to school, but if you really want to learn and be a scholar, I think you'd have a better chance going to school rather than learning from home because at home you can get distracted easily.
Being taught face to face is so much easier becasue you can ask as many questions as you need to help you with your problem. also, I think your brain focuses more when you're being taught face to face than from learning through a computer. For me it's so much easier to learn when being taught in person, because I concentrate more on the words the teacher is saying and when its through a computer I get distracted easily because there's no one around to tell me that I can't get up or go to the restroom. I remember this one time in math class I had an assignment I had to do and it was online, I could never understand it until I asked my teacher, personally, after that all the problems that we're similar to that one probelm I couldn't figure out, I did them in seconds and I think thats because I was being taught face to face.
When your in school you're never alone in a classroom because there's always other classmates and when you're homeschooled and it's just you by yourself. I feel like being in a classroom full of other people is better than being at home and learning on your own. Having people around you while your in class isn't always as bad, I know some people get distracted easily and not concentrate while being around others, but sometimes it's good to be around other people because you never know whose around and you don't know if the answer of one those people in your class can help you in any away. Me, personally, I enjoy working with others or even just having people around me, I feel less lonely like that and well I don't really get distracted as easily because I can talk to people and and at the same time concentrate on the work i'm doing, but that's just me i don't know how others are.
Thirdly, going to school is actually fun, you meet new people and you don't have to be locked up in your house the whole day. In middle school I remember that I wouldn't talk to no one that worked at the school because I didn't trust them, until this day I still don't trust them but it wouldn't hurt you to be around them and ask questions about something you need. Having people around you who already have been through everything were going through is very helpful because they know the steps to help you feel better since they've already been through it. Plus, you get more opportunities at school than learning from home, and that's because school can help you achieve you're goal and you're career, maybe not always but they can most definitely give you advice on what you can do to achieve you're goal.
In conclusion, I think you'd learn from home too, but you can learn more from school. This is to the people who homeschool their kids, wouldn't you rather have your kid at school where his safe, getting fed, getting his education, more opportunities on becoming someone in this world, and meeting new people in his life? or would you rather have him at home where his lonely and getting distracted easily? and it doesn't matter wether they're the ones who want to be homeschooled because you're the parent and your in control not them. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
760988C4BA3B | In the future, I hope that one day I will win a "Super Smash Brothers" tournament. Growing up, Smash Bros has always been one of my favorite games as a child and it had helped bring my siblings and I closer together. I can get paid for winning a tournament, and it will help me get through in life. I know that I can't just win a tournament right off the bat but I want to try, because the thrill of just winning and having fun is what makes people enjoy this game. Winning a "Super Smash Brothers" tournament is something that I can enjoy while helping me in life.
"Super Smash Brothers" had helped me bond closer with my siblings throughout my life. Even if we've gotten tired of doing other activities together, we've never got tired of fighting each other in the game. Fighting with my siblings had molded me into the competitive person I am today, so because of that I want to fight other people and get something out of it. It helped me learn to be competitive because it's a competition in the real world. Smash Bros helped me discover other games to enjoy with others like Kirby franchise and the "Legend of Zelda" franchise. Beating other players with characters I love makes me want to play more with new people. I never really had the best communication skills, but I can enjoy playing different video games and competing in tournaments with others while improving my social skills.
Winning a tournament can help me get money, so I can buy my necessities in life. Getting the money could help me buy luxuries like a house or a car. If I can win a tournament and get the money, I could have those things and even get more that I need. If I can buy those then I won't have to have help from my family. I could get other games that I enjoy watching other players play. Just by watching people play these games makes me want to compete with them. I always loved competing with others and now I could even get paid to do so if I win a tournament.
"Super Smash Bros" just gives me the thrill of competing with others and having fun while doing so. People always get this thrill of winning and it keeps them going to win more. Every time I beat my brother in a game I get excited each time, and I want to beat new people just to get that thrill. If you don't get that thrill of wanting to do more of what you are doing then you wouldn't do that thing again for a while. Like other games, Smash Bros bring players together by competing with each other and just having fun. I want to experience that with other people in tournaments. Winning a tournament or just competing in one will help me learn that doing activities are not always as fun as doing them with others.
My life will be brighter when I accomplish something big like winning a Smash Bros tournament. I've always enjoyed the fun in playing games with others and talking to them about it. It also sounds great when you get paid to do something you love like competing in tournaments. I learned that doing activities are never as fun when you're doing it alone. "Super Smash Brothers" brings others closer together with their families and friends. | 4 | 4.5 | 5 | 4.5 | 4 | 5 |
761E2670197E | Self-confidence is really important for people to feel good about their own selves. Building self-confidence may be hard on some students because the way they was raise or the way they are treated by others; Students should be able to build up self-esteem for their own good reasons in life, learning may be hard on some students at first but is just one of the task they have to get through putting a lot of effort in to it wot be that hard getting it done will be; Others may believe that praise given for deficient work undermines learning by lowering standards. Students should be able to do work that they understand good enough at their own risk to make the effort of being self-confident. Some people may not agree just because building up self-confidence is not an easy thing to do or even an easy thing to accomplish in life. Does true Self-esteem come from praise or does it come from achievements? Self-esteem comes from achievements; Achievements that you got to make the risk for put up in life throughout school. There i'll be some difficult times where you will want to give up in life times where you will feel like you just can't do it anymore, but students struggle with their own personal problems but they can get through it all and that is what makes the build-up self-confidence about the risk and task they make in life. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
762839543BFC | In the quote, Thomas Jeff er son take about determine will never to be idle and wonderful to be if all of come to and accomplish many thing come to one people and serve purpose in you life.
IN my point of view, Thomas Jefferson tray to say if all of the colonies come and vote if they wont to stay with under grate British control or come join to fight for Avery freedom. bay the way do not frogat we blood for British we die for British we won France Indian and war in the end what the king do take all new land control if we can not go in the new land because kings and they friends or nobles can go to the new land. then way we have to pay tax to a king who do not care about his people in the colonies,But only care about money and power he wont then. what you wont no one say nothing then
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we do not say thing Avery child and wife and bread a very house take Avery food and money. or be kill my British because they think all of as are traders they duty to kill as all for they king. but what about in sad woman and child will die because we do not come to fight for freedom and Justice labile or if you die for freedom you die a man not a slaves.
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Thomas Jefferson and Jones watches and they great people in end one man can not hand wide of the earth to gad come groups we can to anything. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
763EF698F56B | Well In this part I
think is good and bad idea.
I think is good because if they have any emergency in home they do not going to dismiss any classes they can take classes from home they have already tools do not needed to go outside they have everything in home, and the teacher they do not need to wake up early everyday, and also some family they are going to agree because now they do not are going to think every time how is my daughter or my son if they are safe or if they are in trouble.
the bad things that if they going to give to all the students to take classes from only or video confederation some students they not going to do their work. in some others parts they do not have any internet or money to buy a computer they do not have opportunity that the others person have, also the teacher do not have any jobs they are going to need they works back, and some family they do not need to send to school to their sons because they do not have many or they want their son to work. Is very different have the people think is hard to take decision.
if they are old they can choose what they want, they have to think very careful if they said yes they want to take class form online , is going to be more easy from them because they do not have a job or they do not have to take care, they can do it they have a lot of time in the world if they do not have any computer thats is going to be a really good problem form them because they do not have school open or they do not have the materials they want for learn,
they have to look for job but sometimes if your looking for a job they need to know how you was in school they need to see you record, you are going to need in the future.
If you are going to say no because we need to learn something, we do not have any money to pay to go to school theirs so many ways to go to school their have school that are free you do not need to pay anything, just you need is go to school everyday, and do not get in trouble. Is good idea if they do this in college for students they work they know, they have more responsibility.
If you put a child with computer is going to be more concentrated in computer and maybe they going to have problems with their eyes or any problem when their grow up.
if is a old is more easy from them because they brain is more they can understand and they do not have any issues to work in the computers.
so is bad idea that they students take class form online they do not have any money or they do not work. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
7658C61156C7 | According to the Generic_School, that believe that 70% high school students change their mind about what career they want to do after high school. I believe that high schools should never let students choose specific courses because, some of students don't even have in mind what they're trying to do after high school, another reason is that they're way too young to choose something that is going to affect your whole life, my last reason is that students may change their mind and choose another course and the school is not going to let them choose another course.
High school students change their mind all the time we may want to be a doctor today and tomorrow we want to be a barber or wanna go to the army, for example my best friend go to a school like that you have to choose some specific courses so when you get graduate you don't be confused about what you going do in college and he told me that he's trying go to a different school because that school doesn't let him change his courses because he was trying be a firefighter but now he change his mind and want to a doctor.
We high school students are way to young to choose some specific courses for our careers I believe they should make a conference and discuss all that with our parents.
My final reason is because students not really sure about what are we trying do in my opinion they should let us do that on the student's senior year because, on their senior year students have a clear mind set of what they going to do after students graduate, like my other friend that go to Generic_School now he's a senior and he's going to be doctor so the school just want him to take the nurse and biology class.
In conclusion, I believe that school should never let students choose their classes or courses, even though it would be nice if you want to be a doctor for example the school should force you to take doctor's relate classes so you can get use to do things that doctors does. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
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767920BDAD93 | Wouldn't it be better if you have the option to attend your classes from the commodity of your house? Although some say that distance learning would not benefit students, actually students should be benefited from distance learning to attend their classes from home because it can help students who have disabilities and it can also help students see school from a different perspective of learning.
Those who believe that distance learning would not benefit students have their reasons. They believe students could have trouble with social interaction in the future. They also think that it can motivate students to be dependable on artificial life. For example, my friend PROPER_NAME who rather attend his classes online and also rather spend his time playing video games and not with his family or friends.
Distance learning can benefit students who have disabilities. When I used to live in Honduras, I had a friend called Generic_Name. Generic_Name had a weird condition on her legs, she could not walk. It was very hard for Generic_Name to attend school. Her mother, called Generic_Name, had to push her wheelchair every morning so that Generic_Name could attend school. Our school was about 30 minutes away from home, by walking. During school time, Generic_Name had to push her wheelchair to get to her classes, restroom and recess. Even though, Generic_Name would get ready early in the morning, she would usually be late for school. Sometimes, Generic_Name would not get good sleep, so it was very hard for Generic_Name to pay attention in class. I think that it was not Generic_Name's fault for not attending school on time. I think that people with disabilities like Generic_Name, can benefit to attend classes online from home. It would save them time, so that they can get a good sleep to pay attention in class.
Distance learning can benefit students see school from a different perspective of learning. Last year, my cousin Generic_Name, refused to go to school. My cousin, had bad grades at all of his classes, at the beginning of first quarter. My cousin didn't like school at all. He would usually say that he would always be tired to attend school because he had to wake up early in the morning. My cousin, thought that he was really bad for school. I would usually hear complains of my cousin about the school's free lunch or about him thinking that he was not made for school. My cousin then talked to his counselor about this issue of him not being able to pass all of his classes. His counselor told him that he could attend all of his classes online, so he did. My cousin's grades are really good now, and he also thinks that it was and amazing experience, for having the opportunity to attend all of his classes. I think that my cousin was not bad at school, he was just not receiving the way of education he needed. I also think that people like my cousin, can be benefit by distance learning because they can experience their school year from a different way of learning.
In conclusion, distance learning can benefit people with disabilities, to help them feel that their necessities also count as students. Also it can benefit people who believe that they are not good for school, so that they can experience a different way to learn and feel useful. I think that distance learning can benefit students with this kind of problems, improve and be equal like the rest of the students, regardless their way of learning. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
7680EF5AD3CB | I believe students should not be required to take a music, a drama, or an art class. Therefore, it should be an elective. Not every student is excellent in the same things. However, taking a required class a student may not desire or need in the future can cause a student to fail. I believe students should not be required to take any of those classes because it's pointless, unfair, and not important.
To begin with, it should be an elective because not every student will need any of those classes to become a succesful person. Other students may want something dissimilar for their future that has nothing to do with singing, art or drama. It's also not helping a student to become smarter or to learn more. It's no where near educational related. It wouldn't be entertaining for students who do not want to take the class.
The second reason I certainly believe it is unfair to make it a requirement because it can cause them to fail and hold them back from graduating. It also shouldnt be a class that should hold you back from moving forward on to college. Students would feel as if it were a pathetic reason for them to repeat a grade over a class that is useless.
In conclusion, I believe that it should not be required classes to take. it's not important for students to take any of those classes. It's not a class that will help or provide a student to get a job. Majority jobs don't require for you to have any of those classes. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
768FA278A16D | It has been aid that first impressions are almost impossible to change. For me i think you can change from the first impression. First of all you can come off as someone who don't care about anything or any one but when you get to know them your mindset change on how they are in your eyes. the second reason is i had someone that i thought that was the one the person i thought i can spend my life with i know it sounds crazy but my first impression was she was a good girl then i got to know her and found out she's nothing but plane evil and has nothing but hate in her soul and always trying to find something to blame me for just looking for es cues for her to do what she wants to do and Little do she knows its making my love for her fading away every step of the way. so in conclusion this is why i think that first impression arent really impossible to change because people family even loved ones change that why i think first impression can change. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
76C0FD26B20A | I think sometime is good online because any students no have time so many students work part time,then can't go to the school the better option is take a little free time and make online.
First :But is better they go to the school because if you need something you can took with you teacher or partner is past time with amazing friends and learning more about what do you want in the future ,the things and feelings ,ideas and occurrences ,memories and expectations and possibilities ,fear desires ,delight the smallest and most ordinary issues of our lives as well as the large and mostpowerful ones. then online web is the tools for study we have that permit us to share with others what is really going on inside our minds and hearts .they are the only intruments that reveal whether speaks and writes .
second : some times the students no came at the school because they live long them no have money for transportation or when need buy any book ,any students don't have the support of your family ,i think is the way more easy and very well for the people can do it some thing ,we need more people have want learning more the way the best election for our the student speaks , writes and lives not on a thing barren changeless level but with all the breadth and height and depht and movement yyou have a right to as a human being .As you ever open discover those words ,the online can be the most important web you ever open.
Third:There are probably very few people would claim online las their favorite book .However all the words are there ,it is the order ,But if you need company whose work it is to prepare materials that advance your learning and show you how to think for yourselves , the online web is the reason the words stand for things and feelings , from outline and notes to the final form of the paper .It tells you how to write paper .how prepare for applying for a job .However It gives you advice you need to choose the correct language and to avoid expressions ,after its helps you understanding their parts and pronunciation .
Finally : The online web is very well for everybody because in the web we can find the signification about whatever word, that we dont know and helps for keep going more learning for get good job ,after you can use the online web for look video that you are curious then helps own like better people make our life better for everybody, if you dont know the support your family the class online help for you keep gonig learning more . | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
76C2E20AF20E | When you were in high school would you have commit the career you have now?
Many people do know what they want to do for their career, but others do not. In my opinion committing to a career at a young age is not a good idea. There are many people that choose a career at a young age, and now years later, they are not happy or they get bored. A lot of high school students do not know what they want to have as their career. It is also a lot of pressure for students to figure out what they want to do for the rest of their lives.
When students go to high school , some of them want do explore different class to figure out what exactly, they want to do as their career. For example , I am in the 11th grade, and I still have not committed to a career. In the last 2 years, I was able to see what I might want to commit to and ones I do not have interest in. Some might say they want to be a doctor, lawyer, or even a teacher. But many might not go for that career in the future . Maybe it is because they found a different career that they love but figured it out at a different age.
I see some people that are over 30, and are not happy with the career they committed to at a young age. They do not like going to work as much. Also when they committed to a career, they could have through it was totally different . But when they started to study for that career ,it was a little to late because they committed to it. When I am older , I want to be at least a little happy with what I have my career as.
In the other sides opinion, I do see why committing to a career at a young age is pretty important too. It is better to have students study what career they want to commit to , so they can start to studying for it . Then they can start to expand their career at a young age. If I knew what career exactly I wanted to commit , I would have been taking classes for that specific career in high school. It always good to know what you want to study for at a young age, so you do not have to worry about it in the future.
Students still not knowing what to commit to and having to commit to a career that the students might not like in the future are my two main supports to my opinion. I choose these two, because I think it supports my opinion the best. Students can always figure out what career they want in college , they do not have to know right away . Its a big part of a students life to commit to some thing they are going to be doing as their career. But it is always a pretty good idea to know what career you want to do at a young age. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
76E5D0DEC30A | People who value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas. There is a quote that says, "If you want to go fast go by yourself, but if you want to far go with someone else". As the quote says, I think that it's very important to have someone to guide us throughout the course of our lives. I agree that seeking for guidance from experts to make wise decisions can have a great impact in our lives. Experts and authorities can provide us with advices to make good decisions in life and accomplish our goals more easily.
First of all, having someone to guide you throughout the decisions you make in life could help you accomplish a goal a lot easier. For example, when I was in middle school I used to think that doing individual work was faster and easier. However, I noticed that most of my classmates who worked in groups finished all the assignments in less time than I did. This experience showed me the importance of always having someone to give you their opinion to accomplish a goal quickly and avoid wasting your time. Thus, seeking for guidance from experts can help you achieve any goal you set in life and avoid wastig your time on making wrong decisions.
In addition, you will learn and gain experience if you have someone expert to guide you. For example, having an expert guiding you will allow you to see his different points of view and learned from his teachings. This will allow you to learn from his teachings and experiences and reflect about them. Furthermore, relying on with an expert will give you the chance to learn new lessons and in the future give you the opportunity to make your own decisions. Finally,
you will learn how to make wise choices by learning from the lessons that an expert or authority could offer you.
Some people say that having someone telling you what to do will limit you from choosing what's best for you. For instance, when I was 10 years old I really wanted to make my own decisions that I thought were best for me. In whatever manner, I rarely got to choose my own decisions because my brother was always there telling what decisions to make. As I grew older I understood that my brother was just guiding me through the right path. Because my brother had experienced many of the situations I went through, he was able to help me and in many occasions avoid me from failing. Therefore, experts and authorities will be there to not let you fail and always look for what's best for you.
In conclusion, seeking from guidance from experts may not give you the freedom to make your own decisions, but it will help you accomplish your goals rapidly and efficiently. Since experts have already experienced many rough situations in life, they will know how to make decisions that will benefit us in the best way. Furthermore, in the course of the path with an expert guiding you, you will learn a lot of things that will help you make better choices. Finally, you will avoid wasting a lot of your life's time trying to follow your own instincts and ideas. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 |
76F0144EB703 | Why should people make their own decision? I think so people should make their own decision becuse all peolple have to make their own decisions or their own choose. It is really helpfull to make your own decision you will know better what to do. It is our own life than we should make our own decision. If we make our own decision I think so we have more freedom.
All people should make their own decision. They all need to make own decision becuse you will have more freedom,you will know butter what to do,and mabey if we make our own decision life will be easy for us. It is hard to understand other people own decision. We all need to make our own decision to choose what we want to do That why I think so our own decision is butter than other people own decision.
I think so people should make their own decision. To make our own decision It is like we have more freedom want we want to do. Freedom is like that what we choose and waht is our own decision to do everyday ot on future. Our own decision is butter than other people own decision. Own decision is like wath ever you is raght you will do it.
Our own decision is butter I think so. We will pick waht we like to do in our own life. If we make our own decision than our life will easyer. Mabey other people own decision is differnt from oue own decision or mabey we don't like their decision. Then we will have hard time with their own decision.
Mabey if we make our own decision life will be easy for us. They mabey want something differnts or we don't like each other owen decision that why I thank each porson should have their own decision. It is good to make oue own decision we will have allwes a gerat life. It is our own life that we should make our own decision or our own choose.
Our own choose or our own decision is butter than other people decision or choose.
I think so people should make their own decision becuse all peolple have to make their own decisions or their own choose. It is really helpfull to make your own decision you will know better what to do. It is our own life than we should make our own decision. Other people own decision hard for some people to understand them. if we both don't like each other own decision we will have hard time. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
76FB58BB4BD7 | when i first came to the U.S.A
i was not able to speak English, and every time i went out to play or go to school people were showing me examples of what to do or where to do same for me if i want to go play soccer or go to the play ground ill point outside the window or draw a picture of it, i tried to come up with anther way to example what i want but examples was the only think avalibel for me until i learned English.
Example is not the mine thing in influencing others; it is the only thing because,thats the only way others will figure out what you talking about examples is what everyone use to help each other to also understand each other however,others say that example is not the mine thing to influencing other because, there are many other things to influence others for example, Google translator,Google,YouTube there is a lot of other apps that help to influence others.
i agree that Example is not the mine thing in influencing others; it is the only thing because , example is used every where and most of the time even when you want to speak to someone with another language and also kids see adult people as an example too them they see what they do and copy them example is used with everything for ex, for parents if they want there kid to be good they got to be an example of them or they have to show them an example of something or someone how to be behavior is one of the most important things because it show others hot to act and it it gives other people example of how to act in a sernat place for ex,if a kid go to a library and see tow adult being loud and playing around he going to do the same because he think that they doing the right thing because they are adult and should know how to act in place like that .
wall others say that Example is not the mine thing in influencing others because there are more thing that we can influence each others with technology made a lot for us that we can help and influence each other with other ways for ex, Google translator if i go to another country i dont need to show people examples of a museum or draw i can type it and show them or say it to them and they will give me direction and students that dont speak English can use a dictionary or Google to help them understand. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
770541C6A2C1 | Would you like to start your life early?
Graduating is a privilege in general for everyone. Most find it very very important if you want to succeed in life and make great money. on the other hand some many not and find it important and waste of time. I think everyone who doesnt find it important should really think twice. Yes I understand that some classes are better than others, but its all required for one to graduate.
In my opinion i support both sides of the story. Some people want to start their life early some do not. Even if you wanted to graduate early its a challenge. obvious you would have to take extra classes, and to make those up you have a choice to take it during the summer, online, or night school which ever is best. its nice to graduate early because if one goes to college they see that and they think best of you.
On the other hand i do not think it's a good a idea to graduate early. Only if you have the right skills and capability for it. Gradating early is not for everyone some struggle in the normal four standard years of high school. It is not a requirement at all. High school is not a race its preparing you for your future its good to take all the time you need maybe if need to stay in extra year or two.
In conclusion like I said "I support both sides" it is not necessary to graduate nor is it a requirement. Graduating early is only for those who already want to go to college or go into the work force. Graduating in the normal four years is grate if you dont know what your going to be yet after high school. There is never no rush. Always take your time its your future. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
770E1717845C | In life, their is ups and downs. you can live you're best life and still fail at times. Failure teaches most people lessons. People also don't care at all. Although, failure can also bring success, if you move smart. Yes, I agree with Prime Minister Churchill with this statement, it all adds up. This all depends on you're level of enthusiasm. How you can handle failure and just grow, learn from mistakes. Failure can bring success.
In life their is ups and downs. Nothing wrong with that at all. For example, you try so hard at something and still fail. All you can do is too learn and grow from that mistake. This just how life goes. When you have are down bad, just pick yourself up and move forward. Positive attitudes will help a lot. Failure teaches people lessons also.
If you're trying, working hard you are leading yourself to success, you could probably fail at times. Failure is part of life is my point. Growing and learning from mistakes help a lot for most people. With good enthusiasm, leads to a good path and positive mindset. Learning from mistakes can or will lead to success, just depends on your'e next actions and command.
This is a important topic , because who doesn't want to be successful in life. Being positive can help a lot. For example, people that have negative attitudes can lead to bad mindsets, we don't want that from you, unless you want that. The things or people you are around may cause a bad or good mindset. This all depends on how you approach things and act. Positive actions, thoughts, people will help you learn many stuff.
Failure is an important roll in life. It brings success. It doesn't feel too good to fail, It just how things goes. Nothing wrong with failing, its all about learning from mistakes. Failure plays the roll of life and success. Even the small can lead you to success in many ways. For example , you can fail at school, home, at anything, just pick yourself up and move forward. It isn't easy but it is worth the weight on your life.
Failure is a big word, so is success. Their are many ways you can lead to success. Without loss of enthusiasm and good attitude brings you to a real world. You can fail and still succeed thats the important part. Not give up is also a good solution. Positive surroundings, small things, full enthusiasm , you will be on the right path. Their will be ups and downs, you should understand that. Learning from mistakes is most important role of success, it helps you grow better and in a positive way. Yes failure can lead to success. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
7726A1F9C660 | The violin is a hard instrument to master, even with many years. It takes hours and hours of practices and skill to enjoy putting your time into it. I always had a great amount of interest in violins as a kid. Soon enough, I was given lessons for the violin. Somethings skills you would want to have is patience, knowing to push yourself to a current limit, and enjoying it. With those skills, my talent on the violin has increased over the years and overcame phases.
When I first shown interest in violins, as I remember, was in Generic_City back in 2008. We were at a gas station on a road trip, and stopped to eat. I saw a kid magazine with a toy violin that came along with it. That really caught my attention, as I begged my mom to buy me it. Eventually, she gave in and bought me the toy violin. I pretended like it was a real violin, and strung the strings with my fake bow. Ever since I had gotten that toy violin, I would not stop bringing it everywhere with me. After a few years went, I had moved to Generic_City and my parents decided I should actually get lessons on the violin in 2013. On the first lesson, I felt really nervous because my wish was finally coming true. I really thought I was going to be perfect on the first day. Of course, I was not good at all on day one. Soon, came to my realization that the violin is something you could not master in just in a year. My dad had made me a daily schedule for me to practice everything, so I could increase my talent and abilites. That's how I was able to go through the "first phase" of violin lessons went by.
Saturday afternoons felt super weird since I was not attending any lessons. My family and I had moved back to Generic_City, and I did not have any violin lessons. During the last two years of the four, in Generic_City I had be slacking off from my practices. Yet, I still wanted to continue with my talent and not give up. After a few months went by in Generic_City, I begged my parents to let me take lessons on violin. It was dejavu all over again from 7 years ago. We found out there was after-school lessons I could take. Suddenly, everything felt like the very first lesson I took in 2013. The new instructor said I was pretty good and could immediately start on the second book, instead of the first "beginners" book. It felt great knowing I was off to a great start.
Everything was going fine for the next five months, until I started to slack off again but worse. I always enjoyed playing the violin, but it began a chore. I was not improving as much, as I was back in Generic_City. I did not feel happy about the violin for the next three years. The thoughts of how the violin was not going to take me anywhere always lingered in my mind. It was not my dream to be a famous violinist or an instructor. Reasons just kept piling up till I told my parents about my thoughts and feelings. They had told me it would be a waste of six years worth of money for me to give up. I still practiced and slightly improved, but I still unhappy. You can tell if someone is doing something they clearly don't want to do, but are forcing themselves. After countless of arguments, cries, and rants to friend, I realized that no one can convince me to enjoy the violin again instead, I had to convince myself to. Our family was moving once again, but to Virginia. Every since we left Generic_City, I had not touched a violin in a year and that is when I was reminiscing on the days when I was playing the violin. I thought to myself, why did I hate practicing and going to lessons so much? The violin is something that I could never let go of because of the amount of work and years put into it. I would love to improve on my talent more instead of throwing it all out, it would be a big waste to do so.
You should always push yourself to a current limit though, not until you breakdown. But you can give a lot of time to decide whether or not you will ever be happy from doing something you don't currently want to do. It could really be just a phase you could be having. The best feeling is honestly really great knowing that you weren't pushing yourself to do something you didn't want to do anymore. That is how I grew my skills, and my talent in violin more. I also grew to enjoying the violin more. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
772D27D400BB | It god to have a possitive attitude when you don't have a possitive actitude you not treat god the people and they feel inconforteble. I agree to this statement because when the people have a possitive attitude they can faund a job and to have a positive attitude is very important in life and also to have a god attitude is important in the hausehold.
First: I work in a reusturant and I always have a god attitude with the costumers for example, I now a manager how work in the reastaurent she always have a negative attitude, and I think that is not god to have a negative attitude ,
to have a good attitude help a lot to have a job in my oponion a think that if I have a possitive attitude I can work very well and also a think that possitive attitude that we have is because the parents of as they teach as how we can have positive attitude .
second: I have some friends that they are negatives and that is not god we have always to are positives some people think that is god to have a negative attitude and is not real if we are negative we can do thinks bad , my mom always tell me don't be negative that is not good that why I'm always positive, my grandma always tell me don't be negative .
Third: positive actitude is good to have I think if we are happy we have a possitive attitude all people can have a positive attitude,if people don't have a posittive attitude they can't get a job that's why all people can have a possitive attitude is important if we have a positive , in all the works they need that we can have a positive attitude because in my job a girl how wants to work in their but she just went one day when my boss are treaning her she dosen't have a possitive attitude that's why a think we have to be positive always.
In conlusion if all people wants to have a job they have to learn how to have a possitive attitude if you have negative attitude plis change you attitude the negative attitude is not god in work or in oder things , we need to have positive attitude always , the positive attitude depend and how we traet oder people if you don't want to see oder people sad for you bad attitude be positve, have a positive attitude always . | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
7740DF009E10 | Did you know that staying active is the path to accomplish our goals? Staying active not only hepls us with our goal, but with health too. To achieve our dreams we have to keep fighting and take the long run. Our knowledge is gather by all the activities we have than since we were only childs. In my opinion, 1. we can accomplish more if we stay active,
2. Activities helps us gain knowledge and expiriences, 3. We build self-steam and confidence in ourselves.
First, we can discover and implement more if we can stay active. For example, we have a higher rate of winning if we are pertinacious. In the other hand, its wonderful to enjoy the world and whats around us. To sum up, descovering new places and getting involve are the most important moments in life. Having an active life can help us in the future.
Second, Activity help us gain knowledge and experiences. such as, growth of our brain and skills. It keep us healthy and stronger. For instance, performing new activities hepls us have an inquiring mind. If we are always doing something that will become a habit and it will make as a more mature, inteligent person. If we are always doing our objectives will be stronger.
Third, we build self-steam and confidence in ourselves. For example, our character grows and develop in a stronger and confident personallity. Our rate of achivement will be higher. Moreover, we stay strong as a person. To keep on doing you have to get out there and give everything you have. To conclude, doing will always have a purpose.
In conclution, we can accomplish more by doing. Activities play an important role on our daily life. Winning in any type of sport or at work makes us feel positive about ourselves. Our determinations have to be very complex. Being part of a team and have interaction with other people can be very supporting. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
776FBF88E6FF | Welll its going to be ah good beefit but in the same time it's a bad benefit to doing class in the house .
(03/10/2020).
The oportunity the not miss one class and be in you house is the best thing the can happen to one school students, this benefist the school and the students beacuse they never going to miss one day of school and the homeworks and tests to. In the actually some kids miss the school for be sicks, some familiar pass away ,they in vacation and they not return in time to the country , they miss the bus school and they can't go to the school beacuse they not have car ,oh they wake up late. This is a benefit because they can learn about the class oh activity and not miss homework oh test and be prepare for the next class in the school, and be in his house relaxing and be in a safe place and always have ready you homework oh test to next class and its ah good benefits to the people ho its in the hospital and can go to the school for ah broken legh oh medical condition .
But not everething it's good about this idea some kids maybe oh actually they gonna stop going to the school and stay in his house and skiping the school. this its going to affect them beacuse they can't sociable with other people ,they can have ah computer oh in his house, they not have wife oh cellfone and other guys oh kids will skip the online class to and go play video games,and they parents are not gonna have idea about what his kid did oh do, and during the test they can copy using this class peapers oh using his fone to find out the answers. ( In my case i will always if they give me the opportunity to online classes i will always stay in my house relaxing in my bed when i listening the class ) but in the end this option of learn in his house have his good and bad bennefits (some school in the united states are not using this becuse they not have personal wedsites and can garanteed if the student are going to use this ) .
( I have one idea in how they can do this in ah good way. The students ho miss the school need to call the school and inform why they not going to the school and need the have a parent in his house, then they send them the link of the online class and notify the parent if they are doing work, oh they are skiping the online classes, and they can have ah limet time of online classes so they can be focus to his work and doit on time and when they are doing ah test they doing the test in a video coferincing with one teacher if they and not chating oh copy during the test. ).
My personal opinion:
In my opinion its ah good offer becouse sometimes i miss the school bus and i can't go to the school becuse i not have ah car and i always miss the class,homework and tests, and this can be help me a lot to have all the work in time and be prepare for the next day of school and be ready take the class oh to take one test .
one sad fact:
In the intere world some kids can have this oportunity to have online classes in some countries around the world they not have the tecnology to do that so if they miss the school one its like they are missing one day of his life and fact even they are kids ho not are going to the school bacuse the parents not have money to send them to the school ( yep in some countries the education cost money and they not have free schools like united states ) and they have to work in one short age to help his family in my country was like this thaks to good i was alow to go to the school thanks to my mother and come her to the united states so when i come to the school her in united states and i hear students said i hate the school and i wanna be in home i remember my country and i said thanks to this country for give me free education (even in her they do video school conferencing to the people ho not coming to the school and i said wow , Even they do that for the students, and the students are doing protest to have more off days so what i try to said is always thanks to you parents for the education they are give to you and thaks always to you country to give you free education to you can be some one in you future and have a nice work and never ask why i not have this. and always think some in around the world not have the stuff the you have and always thanks to GOD for the stuff you have ( I always do that wen i wake up).
Extra fact:
In some countries i the world like China,South Korea,Russia... etc, the education in vidio its ilegaly in all school this is bacuse they think the education its have to be like the oll days paepar pencil and uniform (some schools in united states more in the private schools) and they not use laptops to do classes the have to read every single book and the attendence its obligatory what i read if you miss the school in that countries they punch you in the hands with one metal stinck ( like in some countries in south america) and the leave detention in the school and you have to writte in 10 oh 20 pages the i have to come to the school every day . sometimes they stay in the school all day bacuese they need study for ah test. I some countries ( South Korea ) its elegal have computers and cellphones in the school . in south america yeah they can cellphones and laptops in the schools but the problem its the internet so many people have to steall the wife to his neighbord. | 1.5 | 1.5 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 |
777CB894A285 | I believe on what Mr. Emerson said about being a master at something but not growing. In my experience In working In construction I learned how to measure wood, cut wood, and Install wood frames and all of that taught me how to be a more efficient person at my job. It also taught me how to use power tools and utilitys and for me I think it's better to know how to do different things like how to change the oil from your car or how to fix something that went wrong In your car like If something went wrong with your engine or If some hoses came loose. I believe If a person just want to know one thing and be great at It that's their right and that is acceptable, but they will be only focusing on one thing. But It's alright because not everyone would have the time or just would'nt want to do It. So I think it great If someone has already mastered something that they really like doing, but I believe it better to know many different things like construction or car mechanic or how to connect electricity wires because I truly believe that knowing many different things can give you more knowledge for the future. | 2 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
777E845C3A93 | Generic_Name It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. It has been said that a positive feeling is the solution to be successful in life. To be with a positive attitude in life is the most important feeling for yourself, and some students can learn from their own personality. Some students had their own positive attitude because is the key to be successful in life. A positive attitude is the key to be desired in life.
To begin with, a positive attitude in life is the most important feeling for yourself. This point mean that to have a positive attitude is the better things in this world. For example, Generic_Name who had a positive attitude with a important feeling It can help her for her ownself or she can be a different characteristics. Generic_Name is showing her attitude in a positive way to make sure about the important attitude that she had. However, to have a positive attitude with a control to be successful in life is the most grateful key.
Furthermore, students can learn from their own personality. This point mean that students can learn skills, and lesson from their own attitude. For example, some people may said that having a really positive attitude in life is the most right things in the world. But being a person with a wonderful personality It can make that person with a better details in the future. A positive attitude you can be the key of your own feeling to success in life.
On the other hand, some people may argue that a positive attitude is not the key to success in life. But in other way you can also be the person with the positive attitude, and behavior. For example, Generic_Name It has been said that in this life the best way is to have our own success, and a positive attitude. Generic_Name have a positive attitude because he is saying the opposite of having a positive attitude is the key to success in life. This point mean that Generic_Name is trying to said that It can show everyone the differently attitude that a person can had.
To summarize, It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to sucess in life. For some people a positive attitude is not the key but for some of them is the positive attitude. A positive attitude It can be for some people because is can really explain to them the different direction of motion that they had in life. However, in this case people can represent to everyone their own attitude and teach other people the different between a positive attitude and a negative attitude in life. Some people may say that the most important things in this life is the attitude because is can describe everybody personality and the different characteristics that a lot of people had. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
777F0E16E55E | Some people don't know how to play basket ball, Well I have some things that might help you with basket ball or build it or anything with the sport. The frist thing is the enviroment, most people play outside and others play inside, well I think you should play outside mostly on summer days because the enviroment is more cooler or warmer than other months. The second thing you should do is to try not to play in extreme temperature. The thrid thing is make sure its not high winds outside to be cold, this will effect your gameplay for basket ball if its high winds. Fourth thing is the good days to play basket ball, like summer days or sping time. The last thing for the enviroment is the day time and nigth time, you should play in the day time because nigth time you can't see much but in day time you can pretty much see everthing.
Equipment is important for basket ball, so here some things you would need for basket ball. The frist thing is a basket ball, make sure the ball is full of air and a frim grip. When play basket ball make sure the court is large enough for the sport. The court need to be a flat surface for the basket ball not to roll off. The next thing is a pole for the basket, make sure the pole is high enough for the basket and the ball to reach. The basket needs to be wide enough for the ball and a net that is short enough for the ball. The last thing for equipment is the out line of the court, it needs the out line for lineing up shots.
The skill of basket ball is important because of the gameplay is to win the game. Fitness is important for basket ball because it can bring up your stamina. Team work can make the game change from a losing game to a wining game, just by passing the ball to a teammate is important for skill. If you want to be good at the game then practice and trained your shots and make new openings. Strategy is important with teammates to win the game, think of new ways to beat the oppitsite team. Then you have planing, planing ahead is good way of back up plans to prevent losing. People just need to practice and trained if they want to be good at something. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
7797541CF0A6 | The succes is what people really want all the time, but it is not easy at all. Sometimes we have to pass throught dificults situationt to get to the sucess. Each person want to be succesful in life, but to get what we really want, we have to be positive with the head up. We dont have to put ourselves in an unconfortable situation because it won't help us to get the succes that we want. It just going to help us to go through the way of failure. Not all the time going to be easy. We must have to fail a lot of time, it help us to see what we are doing wrong, and what we have to change to get what we want. We just have to keep going with enthusiasm and believe in ourselves. The sucess help to the people to be someone in life.
We can see in our everyday how hard is life, and how we have to strive ourselves to get the sucess, but we can see that there are obstacles and we have to know how to pass through it. Life is hard, but nothing is imposible if we have already planned what we want. Sometimes we dont get the result on what we have been worked. But nothing can be hard at all, we have to know that all is posible, we dont have to take it as imposible. One example that we can see in our everday are the students in the university. Not all of them have the support of the family to cover the cost to pay the the clas in the university. Some of them have to work to get the money and pay their study. Some of them have to fail because it's not easy to do at lot of things at the same time, but we can see that they keep going through it, doesn't matter what. To get the sucess we have to work and just focuss on what we want. At the end we can see the result. We must have to fail a lot of time, but we have to have in mind that we can do it. The people who graduate, at the end they remember how hard it was. But they believed in theirselves and also keeped their head up with enthusiasm, and learned of each mistake that they had done in the way to the sucess.
Other example can be the student from other country in high school, at the end of each year the student have to do a test of each subjet they have. But is not easy fo them because not all of them speak english, they have to learn a lot and out themselves in a hard situation to do it. They have to effort a lot themselves, some of them have to fail like three time to pass the test. But they know that nothing is imposible if they believe in themselves. They know that they have to take tests to graduate, we can see the hispanic student in Generic_School, they have to take the ESOL test each year but they have to study a lot because their first language that they know is spanish, and they just have been in this country in a little while. For some of them the situation is hard, but at the end we can see them in their way to graduate and how proud they are of themselves because it's not easy to learn english.
Also, we can see the organizations that want to help to the people who doesn't have nothing, they have to do a lot of thing and have to be prepare because no one know if they gonna get what they want. The goverment and other institutions have to aprove the organization and one of the best examples is Shakira and her fundation ''Pies Descalso", she wants to help to the children with the eduation, and alimentation. She had to do a concert to get the money to start with her fundation, she has been in hard situation but she always believed in herself. We can see today how she had changed the life of millions of children around the world, how bennefitted with education and alimentation they are. child from poor families are now someone in life, some of them are in the university. All can be hard but never imposible. She accomplish her dream, doesn't matter what. In her way, were obstacle and difficults things. But she didn't give up because of that.
People have to know that doesn't matter what they can achive what they really want and keep going in their way to the sucess. Nothing in life going to be easy but they have to know that dreams can come true. They must have to fail a lot of time in the persuit of sucess. But they have to know that nothing going to be in the way they want but they can keep going until they can achive their purpose. Doesn't mattter how many time they have to fail, if they want to be someone in life they have to know that the way have a lot of surprices but thay have to have in their mind that nothing is imposible if they see that situation in that way. We all can be succesful in life, we just have to belive in ourselves and keep in mind that no one can make us feel less than them, we all are equal, we all have dreams and we all can achieve what they want in life to be successful. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
77A31D0A07A8 | Author Ralph waldo Emerson wrote,"unless you try to do something beyound what you have already mastered , you will never grow ". Based on mine on experiences, I disagree with Emerson's statement. Because people grow up every single day, people learn new things from things they mastered in,and people grow no matter what they in .
Firstly,people learn new things everyday. when it comes to studies and growing, alot of people try their best to master in what they are trying to do. Most people spend more time to mastered in what they want to do but the more you study the more you grow knowing all kinds of things. For example,when I first move to America, it was hard for to master or get used to the culture ,food ,speaking but the more I learn more about the country the more i grow in it. now if I tell you can speak english good you will not believe it. you do need to move beyound what have mastered in to grow .Because you can mastered in math but you don't know the whole thing about stuff. so I think the more person do what they are mastered in the more they grow. Specially, people like my who have been teaching for this whole life is even grow as new generation comes in. In fact ,even a busness can only grow if the CEO of the company have mastered on that position and ready to learn more things about it. Besides this ,people grow every single day.
However, Some people grow single day. because the more you study for the things you have mastered the more you grow. For example ,it like teaching a kids how to eat. it does matter how mastered you have be paient with kids,
teach them everyday and more the you the kids the more grow to understand not only how to eat but so many thing they saw from you. we may mastered in one thing but it have so many things connected to it .that can help throght life without changing your the career ,job or whatever it may be. I like how some student take cosmetology, they take this for two year to have a certificate but that does mean the student all have mastered in it so that is it. you learn about it to take you a different levels. it laso teach them to skill not only on make up and hair but to be paient with costumers and their own friend too. moreover, people can grow throght new education about their woke.
Sometimes, people grow through new ability about their work or what have mastered in. people normally change or grow when there is to learn about what they mastered in. I said this because many learn more grow when there is a new change in syetem of education, economics ,bussines. For example ,doctor grow more when they have to learn more about something have ever seen all done but in same field work. like how you get to study more when you take IB course but not just they bring new things to help do you work on time and stuff.
In summary,I think that the qoute Emerson wrote was not right because how can someone mastered some that can not help them grow .people thing will help them grow in future .I think people who are hopping jobs to jobs or whatever they are doing is bad , because doen't help you to grow .because you get enouch time them you swtiches. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
77B932D27C9E | It is a good idea for students to finish high school in three year and enter college or the work force one year early.
The students will have a all year they can use. If they graduate one year ealy it would help they in college or after college, it would be helpful for them in their future job too.
The students will be able to experience a early college, and they will be able to take their time to get everything they need for their life after college, it will also help some of them in the job they dicide to do, they will have time to get more experience for their job.
It will give them the time they need to get the diplomats or the dregrees they need for the careers the will chose after college. for the one who will be working after high school, it would give them the time they need to get to know their future jobs better.
Graduating in three year will help the students alot, it may take alot of effort, but its a gift and they will be the ones to get something out of it, that's why the students should be able to de everything they can to be successful in their ealy graduation programe. They will have to take courses during the summers and probably in the evening, some may not be able to take elective courses, but it will help them alot in their lifes.
I think that it's a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early, because it will be very helpful for them in their lifes, it will give them the chance to eperience college or work force a year early, and they will have one more year to prepare their futrue. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
77BB33DB5187 | The first impresions
The next text is about "The firts impresions can change with the pass of time". The object is give information to the reader about different things that make that the first impresions change, and how can affect. The text is made with examples and support ideas, that help to understand more the theme. Then tell that the impressions can change anytime.
The first impresions is when you current know at someone or something. It is the first opinion that you mind create, but this impresions or idea can change when you start to know better. When we current know a person, our mind create a idea that can be false or true, but is something that only can know with the time.
The change can affect or can benefit, that means that sometimes we thinks that is good and bad, thinks that is bad and is good. A example of affect is when we buy a car, and these is look like beautiful for autside, but when a mechanical check inside descover that have many damage. A example of benefit is when somebody told you something bad of other person, and when you talk with that person you descover that is false.
The first impresions can change for many reasons that our mind create; for example, false opinion, dissapointment, angry, or autocorrection. All these can have influence when you change your impresions of someone or something. For example, when we are angry all is look like bad or annoying. Other example, when we make a autocorrection of something that we believed that was bad or incorrect.
In my conclusion the firt impresions it's very important, no always going to be good or bad, your opinion going to change. I think when you don't know at someone or something is better wait a litte before make a bad or good idea about it. If for that I think that the firts impresions can change while passing the time. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
77BD30EC277D | Dear Principle,
My name is STUDENT_NAME. I think in order to help people in community service we should take the time to help people that are in need of help. This would be a great thing to do because it would be helping people. Helping people is a awesome way in showing how much people care about other people.
For an example; if we were to be require to take community service at school, some students would be need of help in math, language arts, science, social studies or anything that a student would need help in and would be able to receive help. This would make our learning increase and more student would be going to college. Parents, teachers, and even students want the best for themselves and with a help that each student could get it would make students comprehend and understand what the concept or subject they are working with. It will also make teaching easier.
Having community service will make students want to be focused in doing good things such as helping students or people and doing things that won't lead them to bad things. Community service will also help the community in having good and safe home and nice people around them. That's why i believe the principle should require community service to each student.
Sincerely,
STUDENT_NAME | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
77D210B9EC7E | Students will benefit from being able to do the classes from home because maybe they have reason to do there or having some problems because some people doesn't like the community or having to many people around them. If I have a choice to choose one of them i think i will choice to go to school to know more people.
These are my three reasons on how students can do the online classes from their home.
The first reason is why students want to do the online classes from their home, because maybe they don't like the people from outside probably they think that all people are bad, they are not nice, mean, in respectful. Probably their parents doesn't want because they scared of how people are going to treat them or they are going to give them a bad influence like going in the wrong life. Or they don't want because her son/daughter are bad having some medical problems they think that the people are going to laugh at them.
The second reason is maybe other students don't like to a normal day of school they probably like to stay at home and taking the online classes from there, because they feel that people are not gonna like them or judging them sometime students don't want to go because maybe they have a medical problems because they feel embarresed or something bad happened when they were at school.
Finally if I choose one of them like staying at home or going to school i will choice to go to school because I will love to help people to explain them that why is important to go to school and giving a advice to them that they don't need to be embarresed if they have problems they just need yo let it go some people don't think if he or she are hurting the person who is bullying them.
In conclusion is that if people choose the online classes and doing at their home they are free to choose because they equal are going to study but at their home they have reason to do there. But i will say that people don't need to care what other people is saying to them. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
77D5466305CB | Have you ever wonder what would happen if you know more about something you like, something you want to experience, how people can do many things, how they learn how to do a lot of things. Are you impress of how some persons can have more than one career, do you wonder how they make that happen, how they did it, how thwy make it until the end. People who knows a lot of things means that they have been trying differents things. People should try to do more things because trying new things is like an adventure, people learn more things and growing makes you a better person.
Trying new things is like an adventure. When people do something that they did not know or want it to know more about it, they look at that like a new experience, something that they would enjoy to do. My oldest sister know how to make cakes, she thought that was all she can do, but one time I dare her to do a recipe that is famous in my country, "pupusas" she didn't know how to make it, but she try, she fail and what she cook was really bad, but she started to practice and try until she reach it. Know she can make pupusas and cakes, but not only that, she was trying to do different stuff, so know she almost have her own restaurant. She demonstrate me that doing more than I know is awesome, that it can teach me new things and that I am capable of doing more than I know.
People learn more things. When people try to do something they start by trying and when they try, they fail and when they fail they learn something new, so next time that they try do not make the same mistake. When I came here I thought I wouldn't learn english and that I wouldn't have friends, but then I thought "If I don't start practicing or trying to learn I won't be able to communicate with others" so I start trying and know I speak a little bit more and understand a little bit more. Then I thought "I need to speak with other so I can practice more" but I was so scared that people wouldn't understand me but I had to try, and then I start trying to talk with others, now I am not afraid of talk with others enymore, my english is growing and my experiences too. I would be stuck if I hadn't try.
My sister is in middle school, she likes to do sports, she knows how to play some but not others. In her school after school they make clubs about sports. Last semester they had a club about basketball, she didn't know how to play basketball, but she wanted to learn, she wanted to try something knew. She enjoy the club and she learnd how to play basketball, know in this semester they have a club about volleyball, she doesn't know how to play volleyball, but she wanted to learn something more, know she is in the club of volleyball. She learn how to play 2 sports, she is growing in knowledge of sport, if she can play volleyball and basketball that means she can play any sport she likes or wants. She knows that if she wants to success she need to try and if she fail, she need to try again until she made, that knowing one thing doens't mean that's all she can do.
Unless people try to do something beyond what they know, they will never grow. They need to do things to know who they are, what makes them special, what can they do, what are capables of, what can they do, in what they are good, how they feel doing something. Doing something means growing, growing in knowledge, education, skills and more. People who do more than they know, makes them smarter, they try new things, things that they didn't know that they could do. When people want to do something beyond what they know they would fail, but failing doesn't mean you can't do it, failing means you are almost gaining what you want, you are almost reaching your goal, you are doing great, because you know what to do and what not to do. Just because something did not go like you wanted doens't mean it didn't work, it mean something went bad and you don't need to do it again, so next time that you try you already know what not to do. Experiences make people better, growing makes people better, trying makes people better, all person are capable of doing what they want. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
77FAA33476CA | Why does most people want multiple advice when they are seeking for advice? As human beings we all go through hard times in life because that is how life works. When we go through those hard times we want to ask for help from maybe a friend, family, or just anyone that is close to you and you know them very well. Seeking for advice does not only mean you are having trouble with something. Asking for advice can also mean asking someone if you are making the right choice. Something that we have to remember is that not evryone is not ok with asking people for their advice. There are many reasons why most people are afraid of asking their friends or family for advice is because they are scared they might judge them or laugh at them. Something else most people are afraid is their family or friends might think they are crazy or they are just making things up. For my final reason I think this reason is the really importent in my opinion because this is what a lot of time kids, teens, go through is people might think they are doing this for attention. Now by attention I don't mean something as so they could get the parents attention I mean they might be asking for your advice because you are the parent and you know what's right for your own kid and you want to always make sure you support them no matter what.
What I am writing about is something that I have been through in life. There were a lot of times in my life where a lot of my friends were going through really hard times in life and most of the pain they were going through was their families not caring or thinking that their kid is crazy and they just want attention. The truth is if you wanna help your friends or even family members you need to give them the right opinions that you have and help them find other people who can help them and give them their opinions. Something else that is really helpful when seeking multiple opinions is, it helps the person make a better choice. Again this might not be so easy for the person, but it opens more doors for them and it makes them feel like they do have a way out of their problems.
In 6th grade I had a really great friend she came from a different countrie and she was from Generic_City, and had no idea how to speak english. She did knew some words like how to say hi or say her name, but that was all she could speak. After a couple of mounths in school I noticed that she was having a very hard time in school because many people bullied her. Everyday when she came to class she was always sad or she was always in the office. I knew that my friend was going through something so I tried talking to her and helped her by giving my opinions of what she can do and what she should do in order to slove her problems. By giving her many opinions she was able to overcome her problems and she was always happy and she was starting to speak a little more english and it was like as if she was a whole new person.
This might not be easy for many people who has a close friend that is going through something and they don't want to talk about it because most of the time they are shy or they don't want people to know. Always keep in mind that just because that person does not want to tell you anything does not mean they are ok or they don't need help, always try to talk to them and tell them that you care and you want to help them. This can also build up the persons confidence and it helps them to open up more with their feelings and they can try to talk to their family members or their friends more often.
Now why is Seeking Multiple opinions really importent? Well I just told you there are many reasons why it's importent. It helps people to know they matter and there is a sloution to their problems no matter what they are going through. It opens more doors for them, and helps them know that they do matter and they should talk to people they can trust. Something that parents need to keep in mind is that when your kid asks for advice don't think they are crazy or they just want attention because that is not the point, they just want help with what they are going through. Again by attention I don't mean something as so they can get the parents attention I mean they might be asking for your advice because you are the parent and you know what's right for your own kids and you want to always make sure you support them no matter what. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
78018FB48420 | Students should not be able to graduate early. If students stay in school the extra year they have more opportunities. The fourth year of high school gives them more time to learn. It also gives them more time to explore different careers they might want to do. Students might be stressed out too much. It is better to take your time then to rush your career.
Students who go the last year of high school have more time to learn more. They can take more classes than those who would graduate early. The classes will be easier because they will be learning at their grade level, not a grade level above. They also won't have as much homework and classwork to do at a time.
The students will have more career choices to choose from. If they have more time they will be able to have electives that can help them choose their career. For example there is a nursing class, carpentry class, electricity class, welding class, and many more that can help them get started. If they can't take electives then they won't have experiences that may help them.
Lots of work on a students can cause them to be stressed out. Some students already get stressed by the amount of work they get in regular classes. Imagine all the stress they get when they are taking more classes at a time. They can get stressed by all the homework and classwork they get from all their classes. They might also have a job they have to get to save money for their college supplies like textbooks. Which gives them less time to do their work and study. | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
780D5663CB1E | A lot of people shared wisdom with me but the most important people who shared wisdom with me are, my mom, dad, and sister.
A lot of people shared wisdom with me but one of the most important people who shared wisdom with me is my mom. My mom shares wisdom with me all the time like for instance when i'm feeling down my mom would tell me when people been through worst to make me fell like what i'm going through isn't as bad.
A lot of people shared wisdom with me but one of the most important people who shared wisdom with me is my dad. Ways my dad shard wisdom with my is through sports. My dad helps me understand all of the tips and tricks through sports when I can't get anything right he's there to teach me some ways to move past that.
A lot of people shared wisdom with me but one of the most important people who shared wisdom with me is my sister. Ways my sister shares her wisdom with me is by teaching me about teenage life and how to be a better person each minute. She helps me when I need help or when i'm curious about how to be more lady like.
In the end when people share wisdom with you it can come in handy when your ever lost stuck or just need advice just remember when people shared there wisdom with you and what they said. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
7820048B53C8 | Dear principal,
You are changing school policy so student that have a C average can not participate in sports or other activities unless the students have at least a B average .I think that students that have a C average should at least have an extra class that they need help in so they can pull up their grades up so the students can participate in sports or activities. If the teachers of the student think that they are working hard to bring their grades up at least the principal should give the students 30 minutes of free time on the activities or sports they want to participate in.
The school should make a contract saying that students that have a C average cant participate in sports or activities. The parents ,teacher ,principal ,and the student should sign the contract .The students that don't even try to work hard to get a B average should stay an hour after school to catch up the work they have been missing. the students that don't recognized that what their doing is wrong and they don't get privileges like other students do.
sincerely, STUDENT_NAME
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782678016796 | Students believe in praising them builds their self esttem,even when the work is not at its full potential. But others say giveb praise for deficient work undermines the learning by lowering standards
Although student get to proud and tend to over do the work, giving the student praise always comes out to be better than what they actually expected to achieve. Giving students praise always makes students feel good. Praising students who fail always has a different outcome the second time they do the task been giving.
Giving the students praise always comes out to be better than what they were expecting;for example,a student who was doing bad before you praised them realized what the purpose of the work was and put all their effort into the work. Therefore, the work being produced was very productive.
Praising a student builds their self esteem by making them feel good about the work that has been done. Which means if they feel very good and proud of the work thats been done the work that will be produce will be very creative and outstanding.
Praising students who produce deficient work encourages them to produce better the next time work is been given to them. Therefore,the student knows that someone is always there to encourage them when needed.
In conclusion,praising students always tend to make them do better. In that case if the students feels good their work will be better. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
78303F7A5AB0 | My Dad is someone who has shared wisdom and experience with me. And it's really important for me for him to shared that. Because helps me get better at things ,it teaches me new things that I didn't even know about, and also helps me grow smarter and as a better person. Learning from someone like my Dad.
Hearing wisdom from my Dad will definitely make me a better and smarter person. Because it will make me motivated to think like him and be like him . It will also make me work and study harder so I can get to where his telling me to. And not only I could be like my Dad one day I could probably be a better person and smarter person than him. Because my Dad would push me to work as hard to be the best.
Learning new things from someone that has an experience like my Dad can help me have more better ideas about what I'm doing . And it gives me an open mind about new ideas that I didn't even know about. It also helps me create new ways how to do stuff. And will also gives me better techniques and more ideas. So in the future I can try to change and try different things from what I have learned from my Dad.
It's also really important for my Dad to give me his wisdom, Because I can't imagine doing stuff without someone helping me on things that I don't even know about. It just helps me to stay more focus in my work by just hearing from someone Like my Dad. It makes me want to try harder than other people and be better than them. And lastly it will make me think smarter and push my self to be the best I could be.
So I think it's kinda obvious that every person or even smart people needs help sometimes from someone thats has an experienced before. Because by just hearing from them will teach you new ways new ideas and even stuff you didn't even know existed. Everyone is not perfect in this world and everyone definitely needs helps on something it doesn't have to a big thing it can be a very small things. But I think by just hearing from someone that has an experienced before will definitely help you to be better person. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
7835355C55D8 | Dear TEACHER_NAME,
I WRITE THIS LETTER TO SAID THAT IS NOT FAIR THAT Only the people that have good grades can play in one of the sport. All the people with A, or B can play because the C is the baldest grade on the school. Because people | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
784627BD990C | My position about technology is this brings many effect positive for us huminity life. I take this opinion for the chaning on our life and the support positive in the knowledge.
First reason, for saying the the tecnology have good effects on the human's life is it helps to do many activity fast and easy. For example, many years ago we had to go the store and we watched the stuffed we need. now with the new technology, we do not need to move. we can bay only.
Second reason, tecnology gives support to the knowledge with the creation of new tools and more precision.
For example, before we used the telescopes for treated to understand the universo, now the technology us helps with the creation of new satellite .
Thrid reason, that support the tnechnology have good effects in our economy. For example on market every people want to down the price of production, the new technology helps on this.
In conclution, technology shows to good change on human's life,
in the economy, in the konwlege and many areas technology helps. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
785DBAB78957 | One educational activity I like to do is doing a science project is the most fun thing to do with your friends. This type of projects give you a lot of knowledge, and this projects give you an idea on how nature works is easy to do and is fun. Also getting help form your friends is better everyone gets to give ideas and help with the fun project. A science project is also fun because you get to work with chemicals and see the reaction of each chemical. This is one of the most enjoyable educational things to do.
Doing a science project gives knowledge specially if is about nature. If the project is about nature the things you'r gonna learn are fun and easy for example what causes wind,solar system,and how does the moon help us this projects are gonna make you learn about how earth works. Learning is boring but the science projects make learning more fun and it gives ideas for future projects. Also working as a team with you'r friends is helpful because you get to hear different parts,and it would help you learn more about the project you are doing.
Working as a team to see the different points of view of everyone is fun,and it helps for the project. This is fun because you get to help friends out, and do experiments with chemicals. Presenting the the project would make you nervous if your by your self if you did it in a group its gonna be fun and also more easy. Working on a project with friends is always gonna be fun specially on a science one because you have to repeat the project three times to make sure it gives the same result every time and its super educational to do.
The chemicals you use during a project could be dangers but at the same time they could be fun to use. This is an educational fun project because you get to see how the reaction of different chemicals. The most fun part of a project is that you get to repeat things more then once in order to get the correct results is the most fun thing during a project testing out stuff. This is one of the most enjoyable educational stuff you can do and its fun.
This is an enjoyable thing to do you have so much fun doing a project,and Helping out friends by giving them ideas for the project working as a team to make it perfect and learning. For me this is the most fun thing to do when i have a project, and theres so many more activities but a science project is enjoyable to do and is also the most fun thing to do. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
7862D2AE5697 | Failure playes a huge part of becoming successful. By failing people are learning on how not to make the same mistakes again. For example lets say that i was trying to become a professional soccer. I played for the best clubs, i was named the best player in the team, and i have never been cut from a team. One day my coche tells me that there is a professional soccer try out next week and he want me to get ready. So he gives me a schedual on what i should be doing to get fit. Everyday i have to eat right and train hard. I did all of those things somedays i did not want to train and just start eating unhealthy but i fought through it. Try out day comes and i was ready as i will ever be. we started out with warm ups and went to drills. I was amazing. i was like the best player at the fiald. at the end of the day they gathered every body up and called all the people that made it. I was not one of them. I have failed to become a pro soccer player. Now this is the part where enthisiasm playes a role. I can eather stop playing soccer and choes a diffrent routh or i can pick my head im and try again. Failing tests you on how pationant you are at what you are doing and are you willing to fail again and again to be succesful. A good example would be the book persude of happynes. In this book the main person makes a muchen and he wants to sell in. But nobody would buy it. He was also a dad with one kid and lived in a motal. he got kicked out of the motal because he was not able to pay his bills. So he was homeless for a cuple of weeks. Even though he was homeless that did not stop him from trying to sell his machean. Still nobody was willing to buy it off of him. Finaly after his ups and downs somenoe bought his muchean. The person that bought it told some people on how good the machen was and they started to buy it to. He became successful because he did not give up on his dream even though he was geting regected every time he tryed to sell it. failure is the key to your success. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
78704F723AE5 | Welcome to the story about 5 good firends. Who have a bit of trouble deciding where to visit. Then have a good time at all. One day the 5 good friends or known as Generic_Name,Generic_Name,Generic_Name and Generic_Name were planning. To go to a park,Generic_Name and Generic_Name wanted to go. At a community park but Generic_Name and Generic_Name suggested a state park. Generic_Name then was conviced at the state park but. Generic_Name and Generic_Name were not Generic_Name said "why not the national park its huge and beautiful". After some talking and arguments everyone decided. We'll go to the most voted park first to the least since. State park had the most votes that was their first destination.
When they arrived mostly everyone was happy except Generic_Name. Generic_Name didn't really care where we went he just want to hurry this up so we all can soon go to the national park. Generic_Name just a bit mad but also trying to have a good time. Few hours later park announced "the park is closed please exit have a good night" not noticing the time. Generic_Name,Generic_Name,Generic_Name,Generic_Name and Generic_Name all ran to the car then headed home. On the way home Generic_Name started getting a bit excited because in a week everyone gonna. Have to go to the park she voted for the community park. A week later Generic_Name waking up up early and telling them to eat breakfast and get. Ready to go, 2 hours later everyone all ready for the. Community park wasen't really that far its about 20 minutes over there.
When they arrived wasent really alot activites like the state park but was a good place for a walk and another spot. To eat and take breaks,"alright so eat or start walking" said Generic_Name. Everyone said walk first to see whats around and maybe play ball at a good spot. During the walk they came back to the spot where they can eat. Generic_Name said "well i guess its time to eat then lets play a quick game of ball then we go home. They finished then decided to play a quick ten minutes of ball. As ten minutes go by they forget about the time and. Instead played for thirty minutes they all went back. To the car and on their way home on the. Way tho Generic_Name was telling everyone "Guys next week finally time for the nation park"
Four days later everyone went to go buy 2 cameras because. If they loose 1 they Generic_Name will be holding the other one. Generic_Name will be holding the extra was expensive but they had to go with it. Three days later Generic_Name waking up late but he thought he was early. so he went to everyone rooms to go wake them up but they were. Gone in shock he ran to the living room to see everyone saying "good moring sleepy head". Generic_Name quickly went to get his clothes ran to his closet to change and get ready. As he is finally done he ran saying "are we all ready" with joy everyone shouted "YES". Then they drove of to the final park of their month and "hopefully" said Generic_Name last one of the year.
When they arrived Generic_Name with almost anything thats a positive feeling. Soon turn to sad because he comepletly forgot his camera because he was in a rush getting ready. Everyone felt bad,Generic_Name came up to him and said "dont work remember Generic_Name always has the extra". Generic_Name said to Generic_Name "Thank you i nearly ruied our whole trip". She replied "gotta be out their when ur friends need help". They hugged as they entered they were amazed to see how huge and beautiful this place is. Everyone want to go in a diffrent direction but they only had one camera so. Once again they had to vote where to go. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
78A3B43DFF8E | Former British Prime Mrimister Winston Churchill once said that ''success consists of going failure to failure loss of enthusiasm. "Do you agree with of Churchil's statment about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success ? Take a position on this question. Use reasons and specific examples to support your ideas.
Yes I agree.
The Failure in My life.
The failure in the life is just the first step of counsel to success. From experince , I'm saying yes that the failure makes my life better. like when I came America with zero English that was the biggest straggle in my counsel. As emyplee , student and self developing.
Emyplee.
First, as emyplee it was not easy to find job because of English language. So way where was applying for jobs the company require have whether Spinsh or English so I can not speak any of other, for tow year I was just home, job no money to help my family back home because of language
But I did not stop after two years fund a job so I was dishwasher, it was too tough to communicate with my Mangers and employees too. They were making fun of me when I spook English. But that never stop me from what I want to do. Now I'm a superior in the pace I work for it. I did not let the language or anythings else to stop me back from what would me my life best.
School and Study .
Second , as student that was the hardest than that I though . No back round of school like knowledge or education because I never been in the school in my childhood so that made it for me so difficult to understand what the teachers were saying. So another attack of failure in my way, I did not no how to study because there was no one to help me what should I do in that time so fall at school. Because of what other people were saying about me like that impossible that you can go further than that you are now which is can not get high school diploma there were a lot of failure in my life .From failure to a big surprise that I making this year, I will be my graduation form high school and the nest will be collage. Because I do not what let other people make decision of what should I do or not.
Self development
Third was to wake to believe of myself and to make nay decision. there were a lot of pressure no me . I could not focus with what I was doing like school and work and other thing because of people around me. I could not eat well for two years and I got sick. All my families were worry about me. So over and over I fall of everything. And one day I asked one of my friend what you did to be successful in your life. ''she said be yourself and if you are important to yourself that will makes it different''. That word change my life to think positive. Nothing can make me stay a way from what make me successful.
And the end, as human our enthusiasm can make us stronger then failure. We have to look what other people did in the life because of enthusiasm. As human we can learn anyn things that we thought that is hard to learn it. | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1.5 | 2 |
78B6F383CD30 | So many students need to finish the school more early than others, it's a good think the student finish high school in three years, they have more opportunities for study wherever they like. Although some students will don't want graduate early because they are not ready to being a university life or alone life, nevertheless for others students is a good choice being her life or overtake her life, for example they have more opportunities for study a long profession like Doctor, students will have more time to doing think they like as to travel, and if they want can make a family.
Students make a complied because they want to study a long profession and they don't have some many time to doing all thing they want. The students said normally the people finish high school between the 17 or 18 and they know are young, but some time they need a break before to enter the college and if one student want to study a long profession he or she don't have so many time to take a break and study a profession like a doctor than is during like
5 or 6 years. This significant than student need more time to doing one thing fun before to enter the college. Additionally in the future may be they need another break after the finish college I opportunity the young people like travel too much and know others countries, they own country, they want watch new things, they know different s people, different language, different accent or pass free time with her family, friend, or play any sports. This is important because although they have time when they graduate at 18 or 19. Maybe if they finish high school when they have 16 have more time to graduate the college early and doing so many thing they like to do.
Another students want finish early high school to do others things so different like make a family and find a good job they like so much. So many adolescences think in money since so young , they need money, money for buy some material thing like a car, an apartment, so many clothes so expensive. This is important because the adolescences think finish most early high school is like they said " if I graduate the high school a the 16 then a began to work like than i will have 21 i have all the thing I need for begin an alone life, then will want to married get a big family.
In conclusion, the this a good program of some schools than students can graduate in three years, sometime students need more time in her life for doing thing they like an the opportunities for choice a some long profession and have time to do thing they like or job for a better life. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 |
78B89BF70AE8 | I am agree with Emerson's statement about individuality because in this world you have to be yourself and if doesn't mater how you are, you have to be yourself even if the world is against, because the world doesn't change you. You change the world, and you have to be sure what you want and what you do not want, you have to be yourself, you can be different, the different it is not bad, because sometimes "Be like others is do not be no one".
For those reasons is why you have to be yourself, you have to follow your dreams and you have to fight for them, don't let the people throw you, and if you felt, you have to get up and keep fighting for your dreams. Remenber if you felt 99 times, you have to get up 100 times, and never let that people and the world convert you in something that you don't want it, in something that you don't love it, in something that you don't wish or something that you don't enjoy.
Also in my life some people tried to change myself, but I always try the way to carry on and keep fighting for my drams, and one of my dreams was traveled to this country, and some people told me that I can not do it, even some people told me that I will die on the long way from El Salvador to United States.
That was a long and a hard way, a diifficult trajectory, but I did my objective. It was not easy, because sometimes I had to sleep in the desert or in some mountains, so the polices can not found me.
Also sometimes I had to move the one place to another placer and some pelaple and me did it acrros the cars, but we had to hide on the trunk of the cars, and I remenber we was like 12 persons on a trunk car. It was not easy but I did it.
I remenber some days that I had to walk for hours to be in some place close the border, and also some days that i didn't eat nothing because I didn't have food, and in some ocassions I feel that I can't no more, but on my mind I had a objective and a dream. My objective and my dream were stay in this country and to provide help to my family.
But in my mind I am keeping have some objectives and dreams, and one of my objectives is makes to my parents proud of me and one of another objective for me is be a example to my brothers, I wanna give it to them the best of the world.
My brothers and my parents are the reason why I work hard everyday, and I try to do the best on school, I try to be a really good students but sometimes it is hard for me, because the languages are different, so I try everyday to learn English, so everything can be easier and that can help me a lot.
You always have to be yourself because a more than a person goes to like you, so just be you and don't let the world change you. Keep dreaming and get foccus on your objectives.
Don't be afraid in a world that is constantly trying to ,ake you something else, just be you and don't worry be happy, enjoy the little big things that the world give it to you like friends and family, enjoy with people that you love, and always be thankful with everyhing, if doesn't matter if it is good or bad, everything happen for a reason. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
78C22313F58E | Generic_Name
ONLINE CLASSES ARE BETTER THAN GOIING TO SCHOOL.
Talking online classes are way easier and better then attending/going to school. Some schools offer distance leaning as an option for student to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. If students get this opportunity to take their classes online, ''I'' think it will be a good idea and they will benefit from being able to attend classes from home, Because Many students can't be at for many reasons,they can be sick or injured. Two, online classes help to students to take class at anytime they want . Three, online classes save students more time and money.
Many students can't be at school for many reasons, for example the student can be sick or injured. So the student getting the opportunity for taking or getting his/her work done on online classes will make it easier for the student, instead of students going to school when they're sick or Injured. So a sick student can stay at home and get his/her work done so they wouldn't be to spread the sickness or the disease around the school. And it can prevent people from getting sick too.
Online classes are easier because, students can take the class at anytime they want and do what every they want do after the class. For example Students get a job and make some money to pay for school fees and bills and also they can support their family with the money. And they can take the class after work or before work on online. Also online classes makes it easier for students who have jobs and the same time going/attending school.
Moreover, online classes can save students some money and time. Because driving to school everyday is a waste of gas, money and time. Students can save that money for gas and do something else with, for example they can pay bills with that money or even they can support they're family with money. In some cases the student can have family ''(kids and wife)'' and online classes can help the student to spread more time with his/her family.
In conclusion,
schools offering distance leaning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. This opportunity will help students in so many ways. Students will get more time to get they're work done on time and also save money for them self. The students can do whatever they want to after taking the class on online ( spreading time with family and having fun).
THE END....... | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
78DD2317E359 | What Minister Churchill is trying to say is that going from failure to success is not gonna be easy in life. What could they do to reach their career and have success? People will agree with this statement. Not everyone is gonna succeed in life, we all make mistakes. People just got to try harder even if it takes years to achieve. Failure is not the end of the world, people just got to find what is best for them. Going from failure to success in life is not easy, but they just got to have the potential to reach that goal.
First, some people may tell others that going from failure to success is a good thing. For example, my friends told someone that playing basketball is not a good sport for him, but overtime he has gotten better at basketball. Most people in the world are gonna say "practice makes perfect." Another example is that my sister wanted to go to UVA, and she studied hard to get into that college, my family thought they wouldn't accept it, but a few weeks later, they accepted her in UVA. Things aren't gonna be easy, people just got to understand that it is life, we just got to work harder.
On the other hand, most people in the world experience this. There is not one person in the world that didn't have any issues throughout their whole life. Even in school, it is very unlikely to find someone that is not having a hard time with there classes. Everyone was not smart when they were born, people got to work for it to get smarter. Here is another example, my Math and History have good grades, but my English and Science don't have good grades, so not everyone is gonna have good grades, people have strengths and weaknesses, they just got to study and work because not everyone is perfect.
In addition, some others may say that going from failure to success is a waste of time. Others say that it won't help their career in the future. People think that there is a lot of information in school, college, and even a job that they have to go through just to have success in life. They also say that they have to work hard to pay for their house, their bills, health insurance, car insurance, and even for their family. The people in the world that say that it is a waste of time are the people that can be homeless or the people that just have no life at all.
Lastly, the reason why that everyone should always go from failure to success is because it's gonna make people feel good about there selves. Another reason why you should be successful is if people finish everything they need for their career, then they don't have to deal with it in the future than having to deal with it later. Also, it is a good idea if they study and learn the materials they could accomplish. Even if people don't succeed in life it is fine because they still have a chance, all they got to do is to study hard and work hard for it because in the future they will not regret it. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
78E692CD7085 | Students should have to commit career at a young age bacuse they can trust what their are doing. Studrents can reach their goals.
Students who commit to a career at a young age always doing better things in them life, and when students get a old age he or her always know what they have to do because they trust their work when they was young.
Ex: Generic_Name said, when she was a young, she was trust her things and it was always teaching her many thing and shows her what to do and how to be, and many people was care about her, they was not doing them things without her, when they want to do their things, they was waiting her because she was help them and teaching their, and she get an achievement in her life, and reach her goal.
Students having to commit to a career at a young age to get an achiever in future, they doing what their trust, and they always doing what they know because they believe that whatever they trust puting them in a good way to reach them goals.
Ex: Generic_Name said,When she was young, to commit to a career was the best thing that put her in the best way, and believe her thing, when she belive her things, always she was in a good way and it always protect her life, and many people get to respect her, because there are people who was not having an respect to her, and it's shows her what kind of something she have to do that can give her the way to reach her goal.
Coulcaim:Many people said, Students should not having to commit to a career at a young age because it's not important in their life,it cannot help them anything at all.
Therefore: to commit to a career can teaching students nothing in their life, they cannot trust or believe them work or what they are doing.
Coclusion: To commit to a career in life makes students to understand many things, and if students trust them things they can get good safe in their life, they can teach others and protect their life, and students having to trust them things in lives, students cannot lives without trust what they are doing and reach their goals. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
78E8970D0C13 | I argree with haveing a afterschool homework club, because It well help out alot of students improve in school, and do better overall.
also don't you want extral help when you need it? students are the same they want help on schoolwork and homework cause it could be difficult.
students don't really like difficult homework, so they give up and do something else, but with a homework club they can go afterschool and do the work there teachers can help students out.
for example I sometimes need help, so I have a teacher that helps me at home with my work and my parntents has to pay that teacher. and some parntants don't have the money to pay for a teacher, so if we can work togather to make a club that helps out students that would be great for the students, and the parntents would not have to pay alot of money to make they child good at school.
a other example would be that students can stay afterschool with there teachers, but for a little bit of time, so if were going to have a homework club lets make it more than 47 minumies. More time equlas a lot of work getting compled.
in conclusion we need a homework club it can help out a lot of students and save a lot of pernts money, and also make stundents pass more tests and help tham on schoolwork, and make students feel like difficult work is easy since they got all the help they need from the afterschool club, also if some teachers don't feel like staying for another they could just let the students help each other and let the teacher rest.
overall I think this idea is very good, and well help out a lot of students with there work. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
78EA0C3715FE | In most cases student are committed to a career at a young age by school or their parents to guide them early. This could be a benefit for them, since they are young and have the capacity to learn faster, also if they are in high school it would be good for them to be guided at a young age to help them on a career they would like to take, and when they go to college,they don't find the stuff they are going to see complicated, and they are somewhat prepare and have an idea of what they are going to learn if they choose to go to college.
I think it is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because it helps students prepare their mentality, knowledge, and give them an idea of what they are going to see, and focus on the career they want to choose. Most of the time students do not want to commit to a career at a young age because they are either so stressed out from school and they feel like they cannot decide what career they want to take or because they feel like it is not really going to help them much on what they choose. Some students don't know or can't decide what career they want to take, and that is not okay because they most know by the time they are at least in 11th grade, so school can give them the appropriate classes to prepare them for that career, and those classes to help them when they go to college. In fact, not going prepare to college it can be complicated to students and probably stressful since they have no idea what so ever of what they are going to see or learn. For example, when you know what career you want to take since the beginning of high school and you are focus on that career, and you take the classes that will help you be prepare for that career, when you go to college you have an idea, and you are not going to be as stress as other students who didn't want to take advantage of that.
I would personally take the chance so I can be prepared for college, I think if I take classes that will help me be prepared it would obviously be good for me. I already know what career I want to take and the classes that are recommended for that specific career, and it is actually good because I can learn more about that career, I know that I am capable for the career I want and that it will not be hard for me since I always liked what I want to do which is about computers, and technology related. My parents also recommend me to commit to my career at young age so I can learn and practice my skills. Some students don't have the support of their parents like I do and they just decide to finish high school and be done which is not really good if they want to get a job that will give them a lot of money, and most of the jobs requires you to have a degree of some sort or specific for that job.
There are jobs that don't ask for anything just the high school diploma, but those jobs don't really pay that much, and they are kind of heavy, not all of them but most of them. Some jobs like construction, and plumber don't require that you need to have a college degree just the high school diploma, and this jobs also pay really good, but they are really tiring and heavy, mostly construction that you have to be outside in that hot temperature or cold. If you compare this jobs with like a being a doctor, dentists, or technician; this jobs requires you to have a college degree, and you have to go to college for either 2,3,4 or 5 years so you can get the degree of any of this careers, and they pay you a lot and it is not heavy and you don't expose yourself to hot or cold temperatures, and that is a benefit for you if you want to have a really sotf or calm job.
Basically if you know what career you want to take, and you prepare yourself like taking all your classes, and what you need, you should be good for the most part. Not all the time going to college to get a degree so you can get a job is the only way to get money or make a living out of it. For example, you can be a singer, and if your music is loved by most of the people you can success and make money out of it by selling albums or promoting your songs to different platform in internet. Playing sports like soccer, basketball, tennis, or baseball can give you a chance to make money, for example, you can have a career out of that, but you most good for big teams to pick you up and pay you which payment is a lot if you make it to the big teams.
This doesn't always work for everyone only for the talented ones that were meant to be good at each of the careers. For example, I like to play soccer, but I am not good enough to make a career out of it, so I decided to finish my studies, follow my career, and get the job that I would like. Some students finish high school and then they decide to do this type of careers which sometimes work for few of them, they reached their goals and sometimes they don't even finish high school, but if they can't accomplish this, then they have all they need which is their diploma or they can continue with their studies to get the job they would like to have.
In conclusion, is a good thing that students commit to a career early so they can be prepared for the future this will also help them develop their capacity when they go to college where things will get a little bit hard for them. Most of the students do this and they success in their careers, I would to the same because I know high school will help me get prepare for college, and I don't have to feel the pressure of not knowing anything all, I already have a little bit of understanding and knowledge. | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
7907952E04B8 | A lot of people accomplish more if they are always doing something and others ask if inactivity also serve as a purpose. There is a lot of people doing a lot of activities everyday and some others doing nothing than just watch TV. Each human person in the world have a purpose , goal to get in a future and is something that we really want to have in our life. Unluckily purposes don't come by itself as a miracle. Every person has a different purpose,some purposes are complicated to reach,and there's also some less complicated but doesn't make any difference because every person decides and picks what are their purposes and whether if they give up or they do anything to reach them. Thomas Jefferson wrote "Determine never to be idle..It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing".
Some person's give up easily, they think is impossible, hard, complicated, but basically what they are doing is waste their capacity to make something and improve themselves, just because someone doesn't trust in our capacity means we have to stop doing what we like and quit . It won't be perfect at the first try , it may not be the same thing that we were expecting, but the effort you put is what it counts. Quit is the easy way to give up , and that is they way to demonstrate weakness the people that didn't trust in us would laugh and spread the rumors of our fail. We won't feel good after that and we'll feel embarrass of ourselves , we wouldn't be capable of going out with our mind thinking in what other people is thinking . If we fall down we need to stand up again , dropping some tears and being in bed all day won't help , think in what other people might think about us won't do anything than just make us feel even more weak. What we can really do is confront the reality , understand our mistakes try to solve them ,try to get better by the time . No one is perfect we might see people getting their purposes easily and we can't understand how , what we don't know is the reality of how the live by the way we don't need to be comparing our live with others life .
A girl from school had extra weight and she didn't played any sports , she was lazy to walk and all her friends were skinny and she felt bad about herself and very ashamed of her body she tried to lose weight but slowly she was quitting ,she was crying a lot and feeling weird and unwanted by everyone , some students started to judge her and no one wanted be her friend and they were bullying her . A lot of girls bother her, and others saw her crying and hurt and they didn't stop them. Among the time the girl started to eat healthier and started to walk everyday she was adding one more lap ,then she started to jug and after run . Her bones and body develop she got skinnier and after she got back to school everyone got impressed .Now she was more confident and it wasn't easy , it took time , tears , sacrifices but she did it . This is a experience that taught me to see different the things , to see how we can do it
, if we want , if we put a lot of effort and we are patient to see the changes. After everything we'll feel great and proud of what we've done.
It is hard to try without being scared , without doubt .Believe in our capacities is something that we stopped doing , and say I can't became more common and we hear that everyday. We don't do things we want to do because of our insecurities and our laziness when there is a lot of people dying to have an opportunity. Always is better to try than just watch .Everyone has their daily things to do , some people work , others study , others do both or more things and they don't have time for them. It is necessary to take our time to make this things possible, it is necessary to have clearly our mind and see what are we capable to do and how far we can go . We can't limit ourselves with good stuff we need to spend time and learn new things , experience , teach other people and share our experiences and recommend and help others to never quit. Show others trust and appreciation for everything they get , be happy for them and give them more motivation.
Generic_Name an English teacher said "People just see the defect in other person's life without seeing in their person's first" . This is so truth , we don't see in ourselves first , we spend more time critizating and wishing bad luck to those making their purposes , feeling jealous of them because they could do it and we could't because we didn't want to put effort and time so we'd rather give up and do nothing than just complain about it and make excuses .That is not a reason , choosing a goal or purpose is something we need take it seriously because if you take it like a game then we are wasting your time , and the time of those person's helping us and going through all our steps , in our mentality has to be all positive .Being more strong than our bad thoughts feel proud of us,because we are doing something that others can't do. We are trying we aren't being like the rest and that make us unique ans specials, show to whoever said we could't do it or make it how wrong they were and they judge us before knowing our capacities. Demonstrate the people that was supporting us what we did to make them proud and we know how good we are going to feel that day. We don't need to take care of what others say, they might give us advises but we are the only ones deciding our actions.
What the quote means is how we make bad decisions an sometimes we just do what others do,or we just quit to something we were trying to do and it was hard so we drop off that and now we don't do anything else than watch others happy for getting their purpose. At the beginning of every subject we want to experience by doing it ,is hard , we got anxiety, nervous,sad,happy. It is so much emotions going on and we can't describe the feeling after we went through all that and we finally did it,we got our purpose we make it and the feeling of victory is inexplicable,we need more positivism in us. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
790891A35047 | Dear, Principal
In my opinion, I think that you should allow students to bring their phones to school, but with the condition, to use them outside their classes. Students need their phones for any emergencies. However, students are to understand that teachers don't want them to be disturbing the class. Also, I think that the students know better to turn off their phones, if they don't want their phones to be taken away. Students still bring their phones to school whether you teachers and principal don't allowed them to. So, I absolutely agree with the policy of letting students bring their phones | 2.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
79098D096CB8 | TOMAS JEFFERSON
Thomas Jefferson wrote, important article for benefit the our society."His determine to be idle in his life.
It's wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing like Tomas Jefferson doing in the his life.
Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose to the our community. Like Tomas Jefferson was in the his life wrote important stuff.
Thomas Jefferson is a person that our society need because he was and still important, I learn from hin different thing .
Example; He was a wonderful man so we can learn from him and do many different thing to benefit my community.
In comclution
Thomas Jefferson was and still a wonderful person for our society. I learn a lot from hin how can be a good person in my community also in my life. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
791AF7B78178 | My position about this prompt is that students should not take the program that allow students to graduate them in three years, because is not like taking normal classes, for example what would happen if students get to take the program that will allow them to graduate in 3 years?
They would have to take more classes in less time:
Because as I read in the prompt there was one part that says "for students in order to graduate must take summer courses", and this means that they would not have a break in this time. Not because of the time but for those students that would decide that they would not only risk to fell some classes but also not to take elective classes during summer because that's what this prompt says.
It will be more stressful:
As we all know school sometimes can be stressful but imagine how stressful if for students that graduate in four years as every other normal programs that high schools offer, now imagine how it would it be for students that take programs allowing them to graduate in three years. I'll say they have to work even harder, during the summer they have to take courses in order to be upgraded to the grade the are going to, also a lot of SOL's test will be taking in less time, I'm not saying that those people won't have enough time to study, but what I'm saying is they would have a really busy schedule with all their classes plus all of those tests coming up it wont be easy for them.
The reason that why I used those examples to explain the main idea like this, it was for you to understand that such as that program it can be very difficult for students, not just that but for students that might not be quick to understand new subjects or new units, it can get them stuck in there with no option but to get into a point when they would just give it up and quit because it will get really hard for them. Now that I showed you how hard could it be for students that would take a three year high school program, now it clarifies that theres no need to rush with education and that students should take normal high school program because it wouldn't be so hard as taking the other program that I just talk about, in conclusion students have more changes to graduate with a four-year-program, as long as they keep themselves in track with what they are suppose to do it won't be no problem, and there will be less stress for them, more freedom to take a break when they need to, and enough time to study. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
7921F1381801 | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attand classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Yes, I think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Less take me as an example; I had personal problems before, and It was auwefull. What If It was so bad that I couldn't go to school?! Some students are just not good at school, and just prefer learning from home online or by video conferencing. Other students that gets in trouble all the time are just better off learning from home. There, at home, there is no one to to fit with. You get your work done and you move on. their will be no more trouble.
Most of the times our parents say that going to school and socialism is good for us. Is that true?! Is that the case?! Well I am not sure about that, but what I do know is that I think we students should have the options to decide what we really are confortable with, and our parents should help us with that. Anyways, It's not like people at home are doing less work than people at school. We all are doing the same work, depanding on our grades. We all need to turn in our work on time or it will be counted late, same test, same quiez everything. The only differance between people that are taking online or video conferencing from people at school is that they are not going to school. They aren't in a classroom. We all have to studie for our test, quiez... But this is what my attantion goes to. Do students that attand classes from home, ever cheet?! we'll never know if they do. I would like an answer for my question, but I bet there will never have a proper answer.
There is a lot of resons why it is good for students to be able to take classes from home, and I will never be able to tell you all that resons. all I can think of is what I provided. It is hard as a kid or a young teens to go to school and have to deal with other kids, and I get it, because it is hard for me to deal with other kids too. But not all of those kids are hard to deal with. Online or video conferencing are not so bad themself, I will have done if I have the opportunity to. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
79484682B23E | Should my school follow the route of a conserve energy and resource business to extend the school day to two hours for a four-day week? This idea has an advantage and on the other hand a disadvantage because student will be stress out, some will not get enough time to rest before going to work,and they wont get time to learn.
First,students will be stress out. There are different kind of people in a school,some may be fine when it comes to sitting for a longtime,others may have problems. Sitting down for more than three hours can cause waist and back pain. some students may be sleeping while the teacher is teaching. Example;if a teacher is teaching and the students are sleeping,the student will end up not hearing what the teacher said about the topic. When this happens,the student will end up failing the class which is not suppose to happen.
Again,most of the student will not get enough time to rest after school before going to work. There are a lot of students in high school who work and cater for their living. Majority work after school,therefore,they have enough time to rest before going to work. If the school hours is extended by two hours,they will not have enough time to rest and will be sleeping later in the day in class. Example;some people do not close early when they go to work,those student get a little time to rest before going to work.
This idea is important because,it will help teachers to complete their syllabus in time and also rest on the fifth day,and get time to be with their kids. some subjects involves a lot and needs much time to complete. Teachers always rush when they are teaching just to catch up the syllabus and students will not understand the concept they are teaching but when two hours is added to the time,the teacher will take her time to explain for the students to understand the concept very well.
I will conclude by saying,adding two hours for a four-day week school has a lot of disadvantages,therefore,my school should not follow the route of a conserve energy and resource business or else it will affect the academics of the students,and also weak the body since they dont have enough sleep. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
7949A941BF0F | What is success without failure?
I can infer that the mentioned statement Prime Minister Winston had provided has an strong point of view from many perspectives. Human behavior mostly influences in their achievements and failures throughout life. To be able to achieved your expected goals without loosing enthusiasm, and demonstrating resilience is the greatest accomplishment. I strongly agree with the Churchill's statement regardless to the critical role failure plays in life. It gives the enthusiasm every individuals need in order to be successful in life, it motivates young minds to follow their expectations, and provides more knowledge in many cases since we learn from our mistakes.
Accordingly to many researches, individuals tend to give up when they are facing an obstacle in a complicated occasion, that prevented most of society to stop achieving their accomplishments due to the constant fear of experiencing failure. Society has been exacerbating this concept by creating irrational fear in those who are not willing to take risks to become better persons once they seemed to have failed, which leads to the mediocrity of the world.
Furthermore, there are many people who were born in a extremely poor region, yet they became successful persons due to the hard work they constantly showed and the multiple failures they have experienced, that helped them work harder on specific goals, and that have made an enormous impact in many young minds since it exposes how someone could be able to achieved anything they are expecting, if you keep trying. If individuals were to give up in the first try, we would be a world with ignorant in it.
Moreover, It is psychological proven that a brain can effectively works in better conditions, if they seem to be in a place where failure could be the main issue. We, as humans tend to follow other's behavior to feel accepted by society. If we keep encouraging people to practice resilience, they would most likely be able to manage every hard situation in life and would have the courage to keep trying even if they are aware they might fail, in other words, they would be practicing negative reinforcement that is based on failing but being aware they could have rewards at the end.
Overall, Failure plays an essential role in the pursuit of success since it gives individuals the challenge of becoming better human being and achieving their goals regardless to the situation. It exposes how human behavior react with the idea that success is not only one extraordinary idea. Success means being able to manage the situation with resilience and perseverance even if they seem to have made multiple mistakes. It influences in many adolescences, gives the hope of being able to achieved their expected accomplishments and it provides higher knowledge from their mistakes. A successful person is the one who have seem to dedicated their time to be able to greatly achieved their dreams. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 2.5 | 4 |
79662DEC0A1B | Students can get benefit from being able to attend class from home. When they take online class they start thinking much. Students get more free time to do online class at home. They being prefect and smart. I prefer to take online class because it's much easier than taking school. When I take class in school i can not focus that much because to many students yelling at class. So taking online class is better. Students develop their studying skill and more knowledge.
Although, taking class in school isn't that much bad but student can't concentrate at class. When they take in class they start taking with friends they stop focusing on class. ,Nevertheless, Being taking online class at home important to develop knowledge. Gain smart. Gain perfect. Seeking to know more. being work harder. Because, Students being focus only on online class. Nobody yell at him he can concentrate and also he can think very well. Being gain smart. And Students will have confidence on their self. I have online class thins year. I am seeking to do more than I do on class. That's makes me have confidence in myself. I can do by myself.
To began, Taking Online class at home is help to take students time. They will finish early and they start doing another stuff. Students can get more opportunity to do better job. Student should have opportunity to take online class and Done with their work and have time to rest. Being happy. Being smart.
For example, When students before taking online class they pay for it. So they will take care of about the subject. However, Students have time to study. When he study at home, the place is quit that can he focus in studying, then he will be smart and good thinker. When you do by yourself you will have much confidence. Being confidence by yourself. Being Good thinker. Being work harder. Being developing skill of studying and developing knowledge.
This for that, Taking online class help you get more knowledge and skills. If students study a lot they can do better. they start seeking to understand about that class. They will be focus on that and getting good grade. Some people thinking taking online class is bored but isn't bored if you try to know something about what you are studying you will be loved it. Instead of wasting time taking online class at home. That is student can get benefit.
Clearly, The way of taking class at home can save your time. Students know what to do so, If they want to take their time, online class is one of the best way to take their time. If I start taking online class I will save my time on the other hand I develop my knowledge. Fixing The way of i'm studying before. Most students are hated studying at home. They don't want to studying at home. Instead of studying they prefer to play games. But, If they have online class they starting study and they will fix their problem. That is better way to improve skills. Students become work hard and study hard. They will get good job.
This provide that, Being though full. Smart. genius. work hard and believe in your self. They starting believe in their self. That is make students proud. They start thinking to do more. If you study a lot on online class you will do a lot. That is the way of improve knowledge. Also you could do any test. you won't afraid any tests. To change the way to you study. Online class helps you study more and also, help to having experience.
Obviously, Online class can provide your problems. If you senor you want to graduate this year but you didn't finish your credits, So the best way is that you can take online class which is you have to take to graduate this year. Then you will graduate. Online class can save your time. Gain perfect. Being develop skill. To be a good thinker. To avoid bored of study. Also, online class can help you to fix your problems. Students become thoughtful.
In conclusion, Students can get benefit from being able to attend class from home. Improve the way of studying. Instead of playing game study online class. Students being thoughtful and work Harding. Being taking online class at home important to develop your skills of studying. When you take online class you will save your time. gain smart. Nobody can bother you when you take online class at home. you will better than that you did on class. Students will get better grade. If you study on online you will get better and you will believe in yourself. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
79786E273D1A | Taking more then one persons oppenion is a good way to make your final call for example, ther was one time where I wanted two differant books but I only had eangh for one. I had to make a good disagon becouse if I did not then it would have been a wast of $15. one of the book was called Nialarmstrong it talked about the life of Nialarmstrong and the other was called Dog Man it talked about a dog that some how got transformed in to a human offecer cinda like capton americ exapet hes not a super solder. My conclogon is paople should take more then one oppeinon.
I dicided to take my frends Generic_Name oppenion he told me to " take Dog man it is so cool " but i feelt like there was something about the Nailarmstrong book. Its always fun learning about other peoples storys and what they did to get to where they are. I did not stop there I wanted anther oppenion so then I want and asked the libarn oppenion she told me " the nailarmstrong book sounds better to me but your choose to pick out the book that standes out the most to you" so then i took her edvide and the book that stoude out the most to me was Nailarmstrong. and let me tell you I had a lot of fun reading that book. I evan told my frinds about it and they where like "can I chick it out" if i sed no i would sound disrspactful so I said sure ill bring it tomorrow in lunch.
Taking more then one oppenion might be time consuming but trust me it will help you make a 90% better choose then if you would just run in blind and start makeing bad chooses. That is what all of the succesful peaple do inclouding the prastent, besniss men, loyers becoase if the make the wrong call they could posibly face some vary big concaconses and if you want to be succeful you will have to be vary careful and take as many oppenions as posoble.
Taking peoples oppeinons could be risky at times but a good tip is to take that risk. What i'm trying to say is takeing a risk is not always bat every thing happens for a reson at lest that is what my parants said. taking big riskes is a part of our lives every human being took a risk at lest ones in there lives sometimes you would not evan know that you took that risk but in realty you did for example im take a risk typing this ovesly the conscances are not that big but they still mater in life.
My oppenion is to watch out, becareful, and take the risk like I sad riskes dont alway tearn out bad. if you do lesson to every thing I said in this your oppenions to others would change a lot and what i mean by that is you will look at many thing in a differant precpactive, your disagon makeing would change lats say you take six peaples oppenions three of them said there favert coler was blue and the other three said green now this is when a risk comes in now you are going to chose a coler lats say you chose blue now the numbers have changed 4 blue and 3 green so blue won. these thing is are in you every day life so you have to becarful,take risks,and take other oppenions. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2 |
7982F5F494E2 | In my opinion setting a good example is the only way to influence people you're a good person. many people wont believe you're a good person just because you say you are. However, if you show them by how you act like for an example: you don't bother anyone, you show where a location is or try to, being polite, patience, showing manners, etc.
they will find you setting a good example or showing good behavior. Not only setting a good example can make people say you're a good person , it can also lead to "good karma".
Lets say you have a younger sibling, and they want to be like you , you can be smart , responsible,and a good behaving person, show them a good example so they can be as successful as you. same goes to people dont show them a bad behavior or example, thats not gonna get you anywhere, that'll only make people not like you and assume different things. Another thing is always set good example when you're out in public with a family member, because if you dont people will not like that and have your family at fault.
in conclusion to all this if you show good behavior or set a good example by showing it , It will not only make people assume you're a good person it will also influence young ones to do the same. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2 |
7999A063F80E | I agree that praising a students work is an outstanding idea to jump start a students path to success,but praise is not the way to increase their self-esteem. By overpraising a student his or her confidence has to be on a different level. Students will also have a harder time dealing with constructive criticism. However, if a student works really hard to achieve something,then that feeling of completion can motivate them to continue to their path of success. Getting your business done without any praising and knowing you put your all into it could make you feel way better about yourself and it would just not motivate you but the people around you. I say this because people don't usually thank you or give you any comments they usually mean. You would never know what could come out someone's mouth.
They wouldn't want to agree with this but, that's because we all think different and most of us know the real meaning behind something similar to this. If you achieve something and you keep on achieving things in life you will get many blessings. People don't usually know the difference between praising and achieving your goal without it. You don't need people telling you about your work or whatever you are doing because at the end of the day you're the only one who knows what you're accomplishing in life. Teachers should let students achieve their goals and not worry about what the other person has to do or say. By accomplishing something could make you learn new things in life too. People get confused and don't get the message, we need more people to believe in their selves and not about what other people have to say.
Although I think it's nice of people complimenting and saying positive things about your work but, I still have to go with achieving it on your own. So what if they dislike your achievements? so what if they start doubting? prove them wrong with all your accomplishments that are coming your way. Make them regret what they said and go accomplish more. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
79AC659EC790 | Many people believe that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Even if you always are failing in your life, but if you still have a positive attitude you can achieve your goals and be successful.
First, with a positive attitude the people are going to recognize you as a person that always like to fight with positive attitude an achieve your goals. Some persons are always trying to make you negative but you have to keep going and fight for your future. To demonstrate this positive attitude you can achieve your goals no matter what obstacle that life put in front of you.
Secondly, to be successful you need to have a positive attitude. Since the majority of people want the success, but the successful does not come over night. Something the success does not come as fast you would like. So you have to get out of your comfortable place and take control of your life without fear. The most important thing to success is to know what you really want in life and grab it with an attitude.
Sometimes it is not important to have a positive attitude to obtain success. In other words you just have to find your talent and prove in a different way that you can be successful. Clearly not everyone needs to have a positive attitude to have an accomplishment.
Surely having a positive attitude is beneficial to accomplish effectively what your proposes of life should be.
If you are not successful in something, it is because you are not trying something that is a passions of yours. you should use your talent and so you can change the direction of your goals. Obviously, having a positive attitude will help you success. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
79BE4A2D8223 | LIFE DECISIONS
In every part of our life, we need someone to share something with them.
Maybe they are our family or friends.
In these days, people are more self-reliance. They think, we don't need anyone to guidance us.
But I think in every moment of life, we need someone, who had a lot of experts to guidance us.
Father and mother are the best persons, to share our everything in our life.
They have a lot of experience and important matters in life. They can feel us In every situation.
We always should ask from our mother or father, about our life decisions.
we should have someone to hear us and support us.
Our parent experience can be a lesson for us.
Experiences make our life. We should learn something from the experiences.
Life is full of thing, actually new thing. Everyday we meet a new thing in our life. That we don't know what is it? and where is it come from? Our parent are older than us, they know everything. They were in our age and now they're older than us. thats means, they understand better about us and about our situation.
My mom she always feel me. If i am sad even if i didn't tell her she know that I am sad. Because she's older than me. She was in my age before me.
We are like a person that don't know about anything, because everything is new for us. Because we don't have any experiences of the thing.
My uncle, he was 17 years old. He wanted to open a small fast food in our country. He always just listen to himself.
He didn't share anything with anyone until he did the work, than he comes and tell us that what I did.
Everyone was sad about him because he was younger and he don't know about anything.
His mother and father told him to finish school first then open a fast food, but he didn't listened to them.
He leaved the school and started his work. In the first he was so happy, but after a few months he become sad.
When he saw his all friends going to school and he works he felt sad.
He was so regretful, because of what he did. He didn't listen to his parent and he just did what he wants.
Than he came to his parent and said sorry, because of not sharing his idea with his parents.
My grandfather said to him" I was in your age, I did the same mistake that you did, but in different way. I told you to school is the first important thing in our life, you can't leave an important thing in life"."I had the experience that why i was trying to tell you that. "My son always share whatever you have in your mind with the person that you can trust and believe, and listen to them, they will always guide you".
Finally he understood, what he did was wrong, but he also like to work too.
That time he came to his father and share that he wants to study and work.
His father was so happy that his son come and asked him for showing the good way.
His father guide him and show him that what should he do.
He went to school and also continued his work too.
Right now he's a businessman, he always says" to us to share anything with your family or friends".
He said that to us" the way that I am success and a good businessman was my dad experience, my dad guidance".
I learn from my uncle that if your mom and dad teach you how to speak and how to eat and.... they also can teach us how to life good.
I always ask from my mom and share my day happens with her.
She hear me and feel me. Sometime before i say anything she know, I'm thinking about what and what I want to tell her. Having the experience are good, you know better how to solve a problem and guide someone who trust you.
If I have a plan for future I will share it with my mom, she support me and guide me.
Experience of the life are best lessons to us, everyone should guidance from experts of their parent or friends. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
79D634E4575F | Some schools of the United States are looking forward to the day that students will attend classes from home by way of online. Dispite this exciment it can be not beneficial for some students in the way of learning. Making students to attend classes online happens will change many students lives. Although some say that offering online classes by the school would be more beneficial, actually it won't be beneficial for students who wants to attend online classes offered by the school because it will require more work for students and students will have less interaction with people face to face.
Those who believe schools should offer online classes have reasons. They believe that students will have flexible schudeles during the day. It will help students to relieve strees and to work if they have a part-time job. They also think that students will become more responsable attending classes from home. Doing their work in their own will develop a self- decipline.
One of the main reasons why schools of the United States shouldn't offered students to attend classes online from their is because it requires more work from the students. For example, my friend Generic_Name. He is attending one class online from his home. He says that he doesn't have too much time to practice a hobby or do something else because he needs to do a lot of assignments for his online class. Sometimes he has to do two homeworks each day just for one class. Also his class online requires to write a lot, such as essays or read books. Essays and reading books counts as a big percent of his grade. And it doesn't include the warm-ups and classworks during the class. Requiring this ammount of work schools shouln't offered these classes online because too much work is assigned just for one class. If students want to take other classes they won't have time to do it. Like my friend Generic_Name his life has become very busy since he stated taking this online class offered by his school.
In fact, students become very wird because they have less interaction with people face to face. For instance, my counsin Generic_Name she used to be a girl that really liked to interact with people. One day her school offered her some online classes to take. She said yes. Well in a short period of time her parents starting to notice that she was becoming a very shy and wird person when time was passing and continuing taking clases online. Later, her parents found out that her online clases made her become a wird child because of the less interaction she had with people. Schools should privide students a diferent method to help students to attend their classes becuase online classes keep students from the real world and their interaction with people. Avoiding classes online will reduce the percent of students to become wird and shy and to have a better relationship with people.
In conclusion, many schools of the United States should stop offering students online classes becuase it requires a lot of work for the students. These classes just make students's life busier than what they expected. Also, students are afraid to interact with other people face to face because they spend most of time in their computers. The real world need students who like to interact with people not shy students. Students don't see benefits of attending online classes, instead it just make their life difficult in many ways. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
79F917A8CFEC | People are capable of making their own decisions. Guidance is helpful if there are no choices that the person sees that needs it. With guidance it can be helpful, it can also be misleading and people aren't completely following their instincts. Self-reliance allows one to follow their own path and makes their own decisions. These types of situations is what most people struggle with, but this helps people benefit from themselves.
We all value self-reliance to the fact that if someone makes their own decisions they have to solve the problem. In our minds we think about different things in a situation, the good and the bad. Although guidance makes you sound weak, but we want to be satisfied with our decisions. People who are self-reliance are capable of doing the same tasks they are in. In nature, most animals get to be self-reliance in order to stay alive, for example, as bear gets older, their parents have to let them go alone in the wild.
We have voices in our minds that we talk to, and get really indecisive. Like when we shop, you choose between two or more pieces of clothing. An over-sized black hoodie and a regular sized white hoodie. The prices are in the same range, a worker comes up to you asks if you need assistance. Then you feel like you're being held back by people who offer advice.
When I read my prompt for this essay, I struggled coming up with ideas and examples. The thought of, what am I going to do, to make my essay satisfied so I can succeed? You feel like you need to find information yourself, managing your stress and time. The process of thinking about your ideas.
Our stance on the matter of self-reliance in humans stans to show people need to be self reliant because it is good to not distinctly require independence on any other. Others can conduse issues more than solve them, at times. With self-reliance, one is more keen on their own inabillities and strives to problem solve with a more in-depth and notable understanding. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
79F961AE9A04 | Do you think educational activity's can be enjoyable? I think they are because I like science experiments and I love when I do them myself. And sometimes I play tennis witch is pretty fun. When i was in the sixth grade I was in band and strings class and I
played the drums and the viola that was my favorite until i got to the eight grade I started to play the trumpet and I liked it.
first of all, I like to do science experiments and one time in seventh grade I dissected a frog and it was fun. Once I was in the fifth grade and I put a gummy bear in a cup of water and it got bigger. In the eight grade i made ice cream and it was fun but it was so cold.
furthermore, and the sports that I play are fun to because I play tennis and wrestling. They are very fun and i like tennis more because I got hurt more in wrestling then tennis. And most of my friends do tennis and I like that. And I have more fun around my friends.
finally, In sixth grade I was in band and I was in strings class. I played the drums in math class and I played the viola in strings class I was very good at the instrument but I stopped in seventh grade. But in the eight grade I started to play the trumpet and I liked it I think I can play that instrument better than the viola and the drums.
in the conclusion, Do you think educational activity's can be enjoyable? I think they are because I like science experiments and I love when I do them myself. And sometimes I play tennis witch is pretty fun and wrestling. When i was in the sixth grade I was in band and strings class and I
played the drums and the viola that was my favorite until i got to the eight grade I started to play the trumpet and I liked it. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
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