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6BE1E93612AE | For feeling better in our whole life, of curse we have to do someting else, like to do great, wounderful, and something different. when you want to do enything different you have to be perseverant,and also you have to do responble. For exemple, to be yourself in a world you should be constantly and work hard to feel better in everything. You can try someting new like learng art, or to be volunteer, or you can do exercise.
One reason, to be yourself you should to learn something new like about art. I believe, is a good idea to try enything else, to feeling greates. Because when you try to learng enything different you always to be feeling better. For exemple, if you learng about art,
you can peinted beautiful pintures, and buy to many pictures. Also,
you can to became a famous person araound the world, but for accomplishment this goal you have to be perseverant.
another exemple, to be yourself in a world you should to give enything else. like to be volunteer, in to many places a round the world most people need help. For exemple, schools need people to help with the students. sometimes teachers, and studets have a fild treat, and schools need volunteer to help with students.
For to go to the zoo, and learn about animals they can learng about the biger Giant panda, or about elephants. Also sometimes students and teaches, have a fild treat,
to Washintown. to learng about the presidents, as a president Gorge Washintown. Student can learng about Gorge Washintown, who was the firts president at the United States. Asls they can learng about Mrs. Lucker's
King, he was a great person, And he help to many people. You can feel better to help to others people who need you.
In addition, to be yourself in the world you should to be different, and do enything than you like
As exercise. I agree with Author Emerson. You have to trying to do different things,
to have greates accomplishment, you have to be perseverant. Like to go to the gyn, and do exercise everyday. exercise ca be fun, you can do exercise outside like run, dancing, or just walking. If you want to be heathy, and have a loger life you have to be constantly, responsable, and try to do something else, as to eat healthy like to eat vegetables, fruit and druiking more water.
In conclusion, if you want to be yourself around the world you always should to trying to make differents things .Also for have greates succeful in your life, you have to be perseverant in everything you do. For exemple, if want to learng about art, or trying to be volunteer, and do exercise. Just have to be constantly. Do you think we have to be responsable? | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
6BEE2EEEDD39 | What do you think is a enjoable way to spend outside. A fun way to be outside is ? An fun way to be outside is t play around in nature and explore it. Havea great and fun with your friends and play games with them. To have enjoyable time with your parentsFirst if you want to go outside you can exlpore near your house to see is cool or nice that you have discovered. Playing outside with friends give some fresh air if you stay inside, and by given you fresh air you may think of new games to play. Just going outside with the fresh air and draw would be fun for some people or play around with your dog. For instance going outside and just playing with friends can you a chance to meet new people and ask them to play with you and your friends. Playing with your friends give you a chance to play games and a chance to meet their friends. in adition you should also spend time with your parent well they have time to because some parents could have to work all day, and with that you should play games with them outside like soccer or basketball. Going outside with your parents and go a to cammunity parks,water parks or just any park to have an enjoyable time. In summary enjoy time with friends, family, and just go outside t just have fun. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
6BFDA0FE1CB2 | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, "to be yourself in a wold that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment." I strongly agree. Have you ever felt like you have to be someone else you are not? This is something that most people who living in this world are dealing with. Us human being live in a world nowadays that is actually don't want us to be ourselves, no matter how hard we try, we most likely end up not being confident, and having low self esteem. we think that we have to be someone else to please our society, which is not very true. Therefore fighting with this world to be ourselves is one the greatest accomplishment because, people become more confident, they get the chance to be their real selves, and they don't try to please others.
Firstly, people become more confident. No matter how good a person can look, having no confidence fade the beauty away. No confidence make people look weak and they don't believe much in themselves. As an example, some people may have terrible stuttering problems, and sometimes it may make them feel like not wanting communicate with others, or some people would love to have a conversation, but they might think that they are going to get laughed at because it's hard to get their words out. However fighting this obstacle can improve their lives and build them up to have more confident. This is one reason why I agree being yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.
Secondly, people get a chance to be their real selves. Some people get lost trying to be someone else that they are not because the society want to change them.
For example, in some countries, especially my country, Haiti, people get bullied for being in the LGBT community. Some parent, family members, or friends might not accept them for who they really are, so they have to hide it and try to be normal like every body else. Sometimes some of them feel like they are getting rejected by the community and they just to want to be alone crying or even want to commit suicide. This is a major reason why I agree being yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.
Lastly, people don't try to please others. Some people would do absolutely anything to please their significant others or their friends. As they pleasing them, they end up making that person happy and automatically forget about their own happiness, which is not right. For example, some people might have abusive boyfriends/girlfriends who want them to do everything their way. Deep down inside they don't really want to, but they probably love that person and they have to do it if they want to please them. They end up falling in an awful situation that may even risk their lives. This is a last reason why I agree being yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.
As a summary, be yourself in a wold that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment. you become more confident. you get the chance to be the real you. You do not try to please others. If people keeps being themselves in this world that just want them to be someone else, then they would find themselves where they've lost it and they would also find happiness. | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
6C045F130B28 | Technology in today's life is, so advance that it has both positive and negative impact on people's life. According to me, I think that technology has change people's style of living. Technology at some point slow downs the physical growth or development of our body and it stops us from learning new things, But on the other hand it helps us to complete many task and save time. Modern technology has negative impact on peoples life.
People can check out books, shop, and play games without moving form place and talking to anyone. This leads to no physical activity, which slow downs physical development of our body. In fact, there was a survey taken few days ago and it states that more then 45% of middle schoolers in U.S.A has to take some kind of vitamin medicine as the dont eat their lunch properly because they watch t. v or phone while taking lunch, 38% middle schoolers have glasses because of sitting in front of TV or using phone all the time, and more than 46% students are overweight or underweight as they don't do much physical activities.
Secondly, technology stops us from learning new things. Technology helps people to complete new task in every day life, and then we get use to taking help from technology instead of trying it our self or learning it we get a habit of letting technology do our work. For example, if our mom not stopped us form spoon feeding then we would take it for granted and never learn how to eat our self.
But, On the other hand technology helps us to complete many task and save time. Technology helps us from not being delayed, it complete task 50% more faster than us, and helps us to save 25% of more time. For example, Our group got an assignment to do on Monday and the deadline to submit it was on Friday, So if i would read books to find some info, it would take me at least 2 weeks to complete that assignment, but thanks to modern technology,I was able to finish it in 3 days.
At last, I would like conclude that technology plays a major role in our day to day life. It has both type of impact negative and positive and it impact's on our life, but the main thing is "how and when we use it". Technology changes lifestyle of people and if we use it more it slow downs our physical growth and stop us from learning new thing, on the other it also completes our task easily and faster that us. So less use of technology gives us positive effects and more use of it gives us negative effects. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
6C16FC9FE7A4 | Some people think that is a good idea, but actually it is not. I think we shoul keep folllowing the plan thatbis already planted by the goverment.
The reason are so many and complicated to explain right now, that is why I am only gonna explain and give example to three of those reason. One of them are that students should not go to college at very early age or go to the minlatary at very early age, Because of the their are not older anough and are not anough responsible handle to much presur in college and in high school, and most ot the time they don't really know what they want to be when grow up, and the course during summer and evenings are not much presur for the students.
They don't have the experience about what is life look like and how harts it is. They would not have any freedom duirng their all life if they follow that plan, because they always will be "between four walls", that's not the life that people want and that's not the sad path that parents want for the children I guess and I hope, but you never now what parents want and never ask what you want, and is another presur on their shoulders.
The elective courses are a way to expriment other classes and learn something else that students really want to do or maybe would like to do, I admint that students will learn the necessary, but not what they want, their will be sad if they never had a freedom to do what they want to.
In my conclusion: it's better to take things with calm and peace, not to take it to fast, we still have bunch of time to decide what's really matter and what's matter to us. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
6C1913BE2903 | A poll by a student from San Antonio high school shows that 92% of people between 14-21 years have been influenced by others. Influencing others can be catastrophic or great but only a selected group of people chosen by the individual can do it. Humans are being influenced constantly by different people and ways of thinking, but he most effective ways to influence others are: peer pressure, advises from others and social stereotypes
Most adolescents are extremely insecure and need their friends's approval. Many times teens are challenged by their friends in order to do something that can cause fatalities or a great success. Generic_Name was a terrible student when he moved to Generic_City from Generic_City, but when he met Generic_Name his life changed because Generic_Name peer pressured him, taught him English and influenced on him to achieve success on Generic_Name's high school career.
Parents, siblings, friends and idols have the power of being able of influence on others by giving advises based on their own life experiences. Old people advises are the most effective because of their great wisdom and erudition. Generic_Name's grandfather was a well-known writer and gave many advises to Generic_Name about how to write good essays. after all that, Generic_Name has been awarded with different prices and many scholarships that required essays.
Every culture have different societal rules, but each rule can influence and shape anyone as a person. All personalities are different but most personalities are modified by cultural rules. When Generic_Name went to Dubai, she decided to wear a hijab although she was not Muslim because if she did not wear it, people would look at her with contempt, this shows how social. stereotypes can affect anyone.
The most effective ways to influence others are: peer pressure, advises and social stereotypes. If all humans were influenced by good people with good intentions, life would be easier, and there would never be a lack of good poeple trying to influence other on the way of success and saintliness. | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
6C3B373B84C2 | Dear, Manager
Have you ever had a dream job? I have always wanted to be a professional gamer. Gaming is so unique in so many ways, like the fact that you can create your own game and have such a large fan base growing ever years is incredible. I have been gaming ever since I turn five years old. Gaming is such an important part of my life because my dad gave me my first console to play on. This was really incredible to me because my parents did not have a lot of money at that time. I will fill in great if I get this job being a twitch streamer, because I had always wanted to become a professional gamer and with twitch i can do that. People can tune into my stream and watch me play. My stream will be filled with entertainment, competitive game play, and live events.
To begin, my stream will offer a load of entertainment. Some sort of entertainment my stream will offer is introducing celebrity and playing some video games with then. Every Tuesday and Thursday I will invite a famous celebrity to come over and play on stream. My fans can decide which celebrity they want me to bring in to play games. In stream like Monday and Wensday I will make challenges which I would have to do. Some challenges I would like to do is play with my eyes closed, play under water, or even play on a airplane. On Fridays I will have a special day for my fans. I will Make a discord and communicate with my fans and see whats going on. I will also ask them if they would like to go in a match and play so games. This will be the entertainment I would give on my stream every weak.
Secondly, I would like to add competitive game play to my stream. I am a really competitive player and I want people to relies that. When ever I go to play in a tournaments I will stream and let my viewers watch me take this victory royal. Once I am playing competitive I will teach my viewers tips and tricks on how to be come more aggressive. While playing competitive I will have good quality game play, the reason for that is because I want my viewers to think that there ones playing and not me. While recording a competitive stream I would like to play extremely aggressive. This is the type of competitive game play I will like express on my stream.
After then, I would love to schedules live events where my fans can enjoy playing and meeting new people. Some Ideas I would like to add is have large station were they can eat and talk. Another idea would be for my fans to be able to meet me in real life and take pictures or autograph with me. The greatest idea I would like to add is to be able to earn ten-thousand dollars. You can be able to earn ten-thousand dollars by 1v1 me in a match. These event will only take places on Sundays which I will be putting it on my stream.
In conclusion, I think that you should let me visit or become a twitch member because I had always wanted to become a professional gamer. Twitch can help me achieve the goal by letting me stream on there platform. If I earn the job then I can get people to tune in to my stream and enjoy the entertainment, competitive game play, and live events preserve for them. This is why you should allow me to join your community and allow me to become a part of the family.
From, Generic_Name | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
6C449C1EDB2D | A Positive Mental Attitude by Generic_Name
A possitive mental attitude can make you successful but it can also blind you from seeing how you may fail. The idea of being successful in life has nothing to do with a positive attitude or negative attitude its how you struggle to try and be successful and not just say that you will be successful, a lot of people have wanted to try and be successful or try helping by being successful but also fail and their hardwork goes down the drain. You should think about working hard and being the best
YOU
that you can be, but yes you should still try to keep a positive attitude but also a negative attitude in case you need to keep up if you make a mistake. If i were to be the one saying this from trying. I have never been successful in anything
WITH
and
WITHOUT
the positve mental attitude its difficult to keep the positive attitude but you should keep that attitude and strive for success. I'll show you pros and cons now
Pros
Keeps your mind at bay
Helps in tough situations
People may be encouraged to help or stand by you for your attitude
Cons
A failure in what you do could make you depressed
Your anxiety may skyrocket and make you uneasy
Everything might seem hopeless
You might see yourself as a failure
People around you might move away from you because your attitude may change.
I know it doesn't seem right but thats what a PMA could do to you. It's bad but could also be good. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
6C6B01577E01 | Yes i agree with Churchill's statement about the importance role that failure plays in the pursuit of success because we need to learn to not lose hope in what we want for success and our future. Imagine you keep on failing and failing but knowing your going to be successful in life? Imagine not losing fate or enthusiam to pursuit for success? That is what the Former British Prime Minster once said that "Success consits of going from failure to failure without the loss of enthusiam." How would you know your going to fail to pursuit for success?
What is success? Success is to achieve goals you been wanting to accomplished. Everyone wants to accomplished something or anything. It feels extraordinary to be successful in life but to fail is something that no one likes including to success. It's understandable to make mistakes because you can learn from them and try again until you get it right. No one is perfect,it's understanding to make a couple of mistakes here and there knowing you can learn from it.
Everyone wants to be successful in life or in anything. For an example when you apply for a job you to apply first, then wait for a response for the interview,After when the interview is done you have to wait a couple days or two until they call you to notify you if you have gotten the position or not. Well thats how we feel when were trying pursuit for success hoping that we can do this and having fate to not give up.
When you know your failing to pursuit for success is when you keep making mistakes but you keep going until you get it right. No matter how many times you keep making mistakes it won't stop you from what you are doing or trying to get. You can be still successful no matter how much you fail because it will make you smater for success.
Success is something that many have achieved or have not but at the end of the day were resposiable for any mistakes,actions and verbal language that we have used,It could affected anyone or anywhere. As we as people must continue on to be motavated for success if not someone else will speak up and take charge. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
6C802D3F5F2A | One topic that is frequently debated is "Does true self-esteem come from praise or does it come from achievement". Some people think, that praise that is given for deficient work undermines learning by lowering standards. They believe that the source of true self-esteem is achievement. I believe that the source of true self-esteem is by praising a student's work because that could help them grow more independent. By praising a student's work, they are going to be able to; work efficiently independent, have a bigger self confidence, and learn better.
First reason, When a student's work is praised that helps them achieve there work more efficiently. It emphasizes that they are capable of working independent and being able to have a good job. When some one is praised for their work, it makes them feel good and makes them want to do more work. A student's work should not get praised for their work if they didnt put any effort in the work because that would just make them want to not put any effort in the work, because they will think that they would get the same grade as someone that actually tried and actually wanted to get a good grade for something that they put so much effort into.
Second reason, When a student has a big self confidence that helps them get their work done more constant and with more effort because they know that they can do it and that are capable of having a good grade. when a student is willing to put a lot of effort into the work. their work should be more praised. praising a student's work can help them have a by self confidence, which can help the students learn more. when a student is willing to learn that is the true motivation that is considered being able to achieve more work and do it more efficiently and with more confidence.
Third reason, When a students is willing to learn a lot and are always on track, paying attention, and turning in work on time. and always putting a lot of effort in school, those kinds should always be recognized and praised, because they show how mature they are and how willing they are to graduate and have a good job. If a student is willing to learn and put a lot of effort in work, that makes them mature because it shows how willing they are to learn. other students dont care if they graduate or not because for them being "popular" and not listening to the teacher, and disrupting the class and doing what ever they want it more important than learning and getting an education.
Having a strong self confidence, being independent and willing to learn more are some examples of praising a student's work. when a teacher shows an appreciation to their students it shows that they care about them and it shows that they are willing to help them carry on and push them forward and being their when they need it, and that makes the students want to go to class everyday and want to learn because the teacher is fun and knows how to work with students very well. and that is why it is good to praise a student's work. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
6C86103B510D | Albert Schweitzer said, "Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing." Influencing others with your own behavior is the best example you can give. The example of showing someone your actions than your words is the best way to be an influence. The actions as words are powerful over another's person life but I think that the actions are the best way to show someone who you really are.
I agree with Albert Schweitzer because it is the best way to influence others by showing and doing your own behavior. People follow others because they like the other person's personality does not matter is it good or bad. We always have been influenced in our lives by our family,society, school, and now more than anything the social media.
Some people might no agree with Albert Schweitzer because they might say people are what they want to be not necessary being influence for someone. Also other people might say that people act and react to situations depending on how they feel at the moment and how the situation was based on. However I believe that people are always being influence for someone else without maybe they noticing, that is why I think there is always someone looking at us and maybe we are not paying attention, but our actions and reactions is the only example we can give to others to follow.
I also believe that actions speaks louder than words, that is why for us to be the influence over someone else's life there is nothing better than our own behavior. We all have our own personality,likes and dislikes and sometimes those "likes and dislikes" can be an influence for someone else. In my opinion people's actions are really important and have a powerful influence over others.
Albert Schweitzer said, "Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing." I believe this is true because at some point of our life we have been influence for someone else looking at how they are and what they do. It is like when someone ask a child, " what do you want to be when you become an adult". | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
6C98327DA084 | Explain how small acts of kindness can have a impact on others?
Did you know that if you pick up trash out of your way or someone else way you can actually help them think about why did they not pick up trash. Act of kindness are everywhere from picking up trash to doing your brother or your sisters chores one day they will realize something about why you wash their dishes everyday. I think kindness is the most important personality of a human being why i think kindness is a important personality?
You can change peoples mind or the way how they think about some stuff, for example if you can help someone to get across street when their is too much traffic you are doing a act of kindness, and you can help change other kids minds by making them think about their parents who is trying to cross the street trust me they will jump right in. One important thing about kindness is that you always need to have a positive set of mind that means that if someone is asking you for help jump right in and help him don't just answer "I don't know" if you actually don't know where the place is try asking someone else if they know about the place the other person is talking about.
Some people take kindness in a negative way only some people and at a certain time some people like to do stuff on their own and sometimes they like their own time and own place and own work they don't any help from others like me sometimes I like to do stuff on my own, but sometimes I need someone to help me. I would like to help people in need for example; taking out someone else trash, helping my new neighbors settle in the community, and mow my new neighbors lawn.
kindness can open many opportunities some people even think that kindness is a part of their religion and I really think it should be a part of every religion because it can really help you and people around you and you can change each others mind or opinion on one thing by kindness,all these thing just does not sound it is possible but it could be. To be honest I think that kindness is one of my superpowers if you ask me but sometimes its not but those times without kindness goes by quickly with kindness on your side you can become anyone you want and be a bigger person that everyone.
In these days people who understand kindness they are actually showing kindness and they are also telling us to be kind to each other. I feel like kindness has become a big part of peoples life in 2019-2020 and i expect the same or more amount of kindness over generations and I also feel like that the person who really teaches us kindness in childhood is our parents. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
6C991A1A6C39 | Some school offer distance learning as an opinion for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. the students not focus in home sometime, for the TV, video games, and cell phones. The 20% the students, not go to school because is more difficult, but 80% the students go to school students don't benefit because have a distraction in home the TVs, are distraction or watching movies the students not focus in work in study some not doing a work or copies in internet .
Students don't have a friends because not work in groups sometime not distraction with other students and more distraction in home sometime not focus some students said 5% the students not focus in house because the cell phones distract the students not benefit being able to attend classes from home.
The some students story and online because in the morning not necessary take a shower or not wake up late, but some students is more fanny story in school because distract more went a house.
The video conferencing you need to pay for a classes, in work some students have a job, and pay school.
The students said is more easy go to school for have more friends and you understand more because the teacher explain you went you have a question the teacher explain you or went you have a work and you need help she explain you.
The peoples said is more easy went you story is school because not pay for you education is more fanny one time in here in school the students talking about the school pay but in online some people said is a bad idea some people said is a god idea about this topic.
The students, went you go to school has a library, old the material paper, or notebook, doing homework, and has a lunch, break fast in the morning, and the after noon so you have old the classes for example art, geographic, and music etc. Some students, and some people said is more easy story and the home because some people dont doing a bulling for a skin color.
The video conferencing you need to pay for a classes, in work some students have a job, and pay school.
some school offer distance learning as an opinion for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. the students not focus in home sometime, for the TV, video games, and cell phones.
The students is not a god idea to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because some students copies a test in home or use a internet for a project or something like that. Connected to, served by, or available through a system and especially a computer or telecommunications system as the internet also done while connected to a system, online shopping. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
6C9BFD05D35D | Have you ever gone to a place that you have never been before ? what activities did you do to keep yourself occupied ? The activites I would do is sight see, swim, and climb or walk to where I want to go.
If I could go any place in the world it would be Jamaica because there are many places you could go to do activities, there is a variety of food,and different types animals.
I would go to Jamica because there are many places to go to do activites like a mountain or a beach. There are many activites I would like to do at a beach or mountain. I would swim at a beach so I could feel the fresh water. I would also climb the mountains to feel the fresh air. I would want to sigh see at the top of a mountain. Since there are creatures in the water I could look for them. I would like also just laying on the sand and enjoy the weather.
I would also go to Jamaica because there is a variety of food. I could find the variety of foods in reasturaunts, on tropical trees, and in a creek. I could find rice and beans in reasturaunts. I could find coconut and banana on a tropical tree. I could also find crayfish in the water and other fish. If you catch a crayfish or regular fish I would fry it. If there is a variety of foods then I could change my eating style while I am there.
Lastly I would go to Jamiaca because there are different types of animals. I would probably find chickens or other birds that fly or run. Also I could find stray dog that roam around the streets. I would like to find fish that have claws or fish that have fins. I might find frogs that are poisonous and ones that are not. I think I could find goats roaming around eating peoples plants. I could also find snakes that have fangs or are poisonous.
I would go to Jamaica because there are many places to go to do activities, variety of foods, and different types of animals. This place is unique compared to others and also this place has lot of nature. This is why I would want to go to Jamaica If I could go to any place in the world. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
6CA2ADCE9A7F | Do curfew keep teenagers out of trouble and safe, or do they unfairly interfere in young peoples lives. And why is it good or bad for them.
In my opinion I think it would be bad for them If teenagers stay until after 10 p. m and not having a curfew, so it is good for them to have it because of these three examples.
If this was a law I think it would be good for them to have the curfew because they will have a time limit and they'll know what time to not go outside, because if the stay outside until after 10 p. m they are basically breaking the law.
I think it will be good for them because if they don't have it it will interfere their lives and their life schedule. And it will make them and keep them unorganized about everything. Because they can't sleep well, they won't have enough energy to keep up with their daily works.
In my opinion it will be good for them to have it because, it would be more safe for them and they will be more safe and it will keep them away from danger and trouble. Because they will know that after 10 p. m it might not be safe for them.
In conclusion it is good for the teenagers to have a time limit or a curfew for them to go outside. Because it will keep them safe and out of trouble. And it will make them and keep them organized. And the point is that if it was a law. It would've be better for them.
These are my three reasons to , why it's good for the teenagers to have a curfew and make them a time limit for them to go outside. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
6CB31DED1BF0 | There are people who are not happy with the career path they took. People wished that they could of done something to change what they do for a living and do something they will be truly happy with. There are people who are sad and deperessed on the job they have now. It takes time,focus, and motivation for a student to find the career they truly would want to take in the future.
Not everyone is the same there are people who need a long period of time to find out what they would want there career to be. Students might love to do multiple things but cant find out which one to do as there career. Sometimes the students needs to have the experiance and see how it is with there own experiance. Students should not be pushed and forced to pick a career so quickly. Not everyone is able to be like that.
Not most students can afford the right education for the carrer they are being forced to take; therefore the whole time the high schools have been forcing them and guiding them towards a specific career it would all have been a wast of time because they could of not afford the right education for that career. If student are being forced in studying a career they dont want to do and then cant afford the right education to do that they are going to be unhappy and they will b forced to go downhill to a job they would never imagine them doing. And in doing so when they are doing something that they never imagined themselves doing then depression and regret will start happening.
With the job they are being forced into doing they might not be able in doing it. For example if a student is being forced in a scientific field of learning but they know that science isnt there strong suit they will have a hard time and start having a hard time in that field. Students know what is best for them and know what will benifit them and find a path that would be best for there needs.
Some people might say that having students pick a career at a young age will help them in the future because it will give them more time so strengthen that career and become very good at it. What people dont understand is that some students might not be intersted in that and would want something they would b happy with so they can improve on the stuff they know they are good at and have alot of skill in. Students have the right and the liberty in choosing a carrer they would want to do for the rest of there lives they dont need to be pushed into doing it they should take as much time as they need to find what is it that would make them happy. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
6CB7C1B3C548 | Do you image a Middle School student being in you classroom and telling you what you shouldnt do so you dont get introble I you future at school. Have you ever though what you can do to stay out of trouble in school? You might always have that one friend that gets introble a lot right? Ways you can prevent that from being you is try to prevent from getting into a fights that would just make it a bad idea, if you know someone that is doing what they are not so post to tell a teacher, dont make a poor choice and you get introble because you decided that you were going to do something that your friends wanted you to do.
When you get into a fight in school the only thing that that will do to you is get you into in school suspension or you would get suspended from school for a while. You dont want to get in school suspended that would just get you in a room with a teacher and you are not going to be able to talk to anyone. If I were you and I knew that some one wants to get into a fight I would ell the teacher and let them handle it not you. Another thing that if you do while there is a fight at your school and you record it you could get in trouble by that as well.
If you know something is wrong with a friend and they need help from an adult I would tell a teacher at school that can help them or there parents if you know them. If you try to help a friend by talking to the person that made your friend feel upset you could feel a friends mom or some adult you know close to your family.
When you made a poor choice it could get you in a lot of trouble when you are hanging around with friends and they want to do something thats not a good choice you could talk to them and tell them that is not going to be a good idea. A lot of times when kids make a poor choice they would have to face the consequences and they may not like them but they should of thought the things two times before they made there design.
There are so many different ways that you can stay our of trouble but theses three are the most common ones that i know of try not to get into a fight, help out your friends or tell an adult if they need help from some one, and dont make poor choices. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
6CD1B8B6BEA8 | Should people make there own decisions, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters? No people should not make there own decisions because sometime people need more opinions with thing they do. Like if they want to watch a move they can ask others on what to watch and they can help you out. Some people will say it's your life do what you want, make your own decisions but it is not that easy. I feel like sometime it's better to get guidance from other people, like my parents or older siblings because they are older and have been through some of the thing I have gone through. Sometimes things get hard in life and you are going to need help, we all as people need someone in life to help guide us through thing that may be bad. If you don't know what you want to be in life then you can think about things you like or get help from someone that you know that had that career. There is always going to be someone to go to for help even though people will say it's better to work by your self because you will not make any mistakes but we all make mistakes.
There was a kid named Generic_Name he was a smart kid he always got A and B in school Generic_Name really never talked to no one. People though that he was ward because did every thing by him self and never talked to others he did not even talk to is mom. One day a kid named Generic_Name went up to Generic_Name and started bushing him and every one was just watching and not doing anything about it. Generic_Name got mad and ran away and started crying he did not like what had happen Generic_Name did not want to tell the teacher because he though it was going to get wars so he just stayed quite. The next day Generic_Name wanted to take Generic_Name lunch money, Generic_Name was scared so he gave it to him and walked away people still did not do nothing about what was happening. Generic_Name kept on thinking he can do it by him self and that Generic_Name will stop but he did not stop Generic_Name though he did not need no help, but he did so one day a kid his name wasGeneric_Name came up to Generic_Name and told him "he need to talk to some one about this because he was getting bulled". Generic_Name did not know what to do because he always tries to solve all his problems by him selfGeneric_Name told him "you need to tell his mom" Generic_Name started thinking if he tells his mom it will get wars. The next day he went to his mom and told her he was getting bulled his mom was not happy about that so she asked Generic_Name who is bullying you Generic_Name said " a kid for school his name is Generic_Name". She told Generic_Name she will come to the school and talk to the principal and we can end this so she came to the school and talked to Generic_Name's principal about it they called Generic_Name and Generic_Name so they can talk about this Generic_Name said "he only did that because he wanted to be friends with Generic_Name and get help in class but did't know how" so Generic_Name said " sorry" and they both became friends and Generic_Name even help Generic_Name with work. Generic_Name was happy that he talked to his mom because he could not do it alone and he was happy that Generic_Name gave him that advise and he was happy that he mad a new friend. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
6CD851AF4D16 | I think we accomplish if we are always doing something, because it will help you to learn more things, we have to always stay busy doing something if we want to achieve. Doing anything will not help you if you want to be someone in the life. One reason to stay busy doing something is that will help you to develop new things, and focus doing things that you like to do, and see your potential and be able to do anything you have in mind.
Another reason is that doing something will help you to open your brain, and think positive, also have big ideas that will be very helpful for your life, if we want to be a successful person, never have to be idle. For example if you want to be a professional soccer player you have to train and work very hard everyday on it to get it, practice skills, develop your abilities. If you just watch videos on YouTube and don't do anything, that will not help you to get it, you have to put on practice to get it.
Another example is if you will have a test and you want to get an A, you have to studies your notes and not be lazy, if you just go to take the test without know anything, you will fail the test, you have to be a positive person, feel comfortable, and believe in yourself.
In conclusion if we want to be a successful person, we never have to be idle, and we have to always stay busy doing something, always be positive, see the potential you have and feel able to do everything you want, and never be inactive, you have to be an active person to reach your goals. Also you have to believe in yourself and take off negative persons of your life. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
6CDE42A3FA9F | People think sometimes that influencing means you have to be an example for the person, but in my opinion influencing someone could be through anything like : internet, words, a friend and even family. I disagree with Albert Schweitzer because he said, Example is not the main thing in influencing others ; it is the only thing.
First reason why I think an example is not the only way to influence people. For example, I go to a party and there are people under the age of twenty-one drinking alcohol, they do not have to be someone I know for them to influence me to drink alcohol. Some people would feel pressure to do it just because the other ones are doing it.
Second reason why I think an example is not the only way to influence others. The tv can influence people to buy thing from the commercials, it could be anything. People sometimes do not think about how much money they spend on stuff; at the and of day they use it once, and then forget about it.
On the other hand, people think that the only way to influence someone is by an example. In addiction, my mom is someone that consider as an example for me, if she do soemthing wrong it doesn't mean that I am going to do it, too. I think being an example is something good as long as you don't do what they did wrong.
In conclusion, I think there are more ways to influence people. It could be you influencing someone else or someone influcing you. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
6CE97E45BF79 | The past decades technology has been advancing and helping humans to achieve goals that looked hard to accomplish. Although some people say that technology have a negative effect on peoples lives because technology is making people to not socialize, actually technology helps the people to communicate with others that are far away and technology makes people's lives easier.
The people who said that technology has a negative effect on people's lives have their reasons. One of the most important reason and approved from experts is that technology is making people to not socialize. According to scientist now in days people rather to play on their electronic devices instead of going out. According to an article people expend at least 10 hours playing videos and using social media.
However, technology helps the people to communicate with others that live far away. A lot of people have now the opportunity to communicate with their family thanks to technology. Technology allows people to video call others and to have connection with others and socialize with people around the world via internet. A good example can be soldiers. Sometimes soldiers are out of the country and the only way they can communicate with their families is by video calls.
Also, technology makes people's lives easier because you can shop via internet, complete your work, and plan projects. Technology gives people an advantage to have an life without stress. In other works technology helps people to have better life. Thanks to technology we have the access to success in our lives.
In conclusion, Technology helps us all to have a better life and to have better communication with people we dont often see. dont you agree that technology makes our lives easier?
As you can see this essay is supported with reasons. thank you for taking the time to read this essay In hope that you think different about technology. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
6CFD58799701 | Hi, my name is Generic_Name, nice to meet you.
I was looking for a job, and i see that here are hidding so, today i'm here because i think im a good candidate for this job, this job is really insterasting for me, and when i see it for the first time it attracks me, because i really like this kinda jobs, and i think that if you like your job you're gonna enjoy it, you also gonna take care about it, and you just gonna appreciate.
I'm also think did i have the characteritics that you are looking for, and when i see at the first i just realize the characteristics did i need to be hired, and i pretty sure did i get them, just with one exemption i need to get experience because i don't have any on this type of job's but, i am that type of person who learn really easily, im pretty sure did i can do this work, i'm also are a responsible person and i always make sure that my work is well done and always try to make as much i can, i'm also responsible to came all days at time, because i know that is really important to be a good employee.
I'm also respect my work mates, because i think that the work environment is gonna be really good if all us respect each other, preventing disagreements between us.
i'm also that type of person who try to stay away of the problems, i always try to prevent them, because i know how bad they can be, for example: Get me on trouble in my work, with my frinds, or with my work mates too, so i just try to stay away as much i can.
I'm also are a healthy person, i didn't have any healthy issues before and i didn't presented them now, i don't take any type of medication so i think i'm ready for this work. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
6D06DAD5446C | I agree that people should get the help, so they can make great decisions. Because the other person could probably be wrong with somethings. Also the other person doesn't have any saying in your life, if you don't want them to. And you are the only person who can change the outcome of your life. even so your the main person in your life, its okay to hear others out even though they are wrong sometimes or if they are sometimes right.
The first reason is that its okay if you don't want the other person's help. But you should hear them out so you can get something out of thing. For example my friend Generic_Name, she love to write stories and love to sing, and dance, but she too embarrassed to do what she love. So one day I gave her some ideas, but she didn't want any, because she don't want to do them, but next day, she gave some of my ideas a try and she like it but still don't want to do it anymore. But long as she listened that good enough for me.
The second reason is people don't have any saying in your life, yes its true, but theres people willing to help you through your life. But it only depend on you, if you want their help or not. For a example my sister Generic_Name doesn't want help from me nor our parents. But its okay, because she know that we want to help her, because we care about her,so we will not stop trying to help her. But there is times she let us help her out with her life, and that's good. Longs she lets us in her life, thats good enough for us.
Last reason is you still are the main person in your life, so no matter what you do your life, just remember it your life is your alone, and you are the only one who can change the outcome of your future. even If you want the help of others or not. For example I'm 18 years ago, and i'm still having problems in my life, but there are people that are willing to help me, but i'm scared at no matter what i'm still feeling down with stuff. But no matter what they are still willing to help me. And i'm happy, so yeah thats good for me.
So basically, NO MATTER WHAT THERE'S ALWAYES WILL BE PEOPLE WHO WANTS TO HELP YOU. So its good to get some advice and wisdom from others. even though you don't want the help, its still good to get some advice from others. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
6D104CA14B33 | 75% of the time students graduate early to go to college. Matter of fact I believe that students should graduate in three years and work, because they would save money for college, they will be mature for college, and they would have time management skills. This will help students gain lots of opportunities before college.
First, students would have the opportunity to save money for college. Some students like to get a loan for college, because they don't have enough money, and parent's can't support him/her. But if students get a loan for college, then they would have to pay it back after college. If students get out of school in three years, then they have the chance to work and save money for college. Students won't need a loan if they work, and the parents would not have to worry about the money. This is good, because students would have to rely on themselves, and have responsibilities. This will show others that you matured, and will make your parents proud.
Secondly, students who work will be more mature, because they would have to rely on themselves, have lots of responsibilities, and they would understand the outside world better. Some students who graduate early tend to be 17 years old. If they do the one year work force, then they would gain money and become more mature. Maturity matters, because students need to understand how to turn in work to their professor on time. Being mature will make you an adult, and make others take you serious, not a joke. Some students get bullied, because they are younger than everyone else, and we do want that happening to anyone. But if you do work that one year you graduate early, then you will get into college the same year your friends are, and you won't have to worry about being alone.
Lastly, Some students don't turn in school work on time. Work could gain the student time-management skills, because they would have to be at work on time, do what they have asked to do on time, and never be late. Time management skills will help you in school by, turning things on time, not being late to class, and sleeping early for the class you have the other day. Time management skills isn't only for being late and turning work in on time, time management is also important for setting a time to sleep and to wake up. It also helps you by having a time for each thing you do, like studying, working, playing, relaxing, and sleeping. If you have all of that set, then you don't have to worry about being late or not turning anything on time, because they would already have the time management skills and you would be used to it already.
I believe that others might disagree with me and say that students should go to college right away, but with all do respect I believe that students would gain a lot of opportunities if they work before going to college, because if you go to college and you aren't mature enough, then you will struggle.
In conclusion, I believe that students who work before going to college, will gain a lot in life and they will be ready for college. Because they wouldn't have to worry about paying the loan off after college, they would have a better time management skills than others will, and they will become more mature by being responsible and handling it themselves. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
6D114CB7EBB3 | The Character of beyone my control it take influence to make it right. This prompt support that i am able to have my own character. The british naturalist is right because people make bad chooice sometime it dosen't mean they are bad. My character will show that how much i can do the right thing. Influence beyond control your mind but it mean you have to strong and kind to other. I control myself to do bad and good things i can only control me and my action that can be a issue. I make misstake and l can learn from my own mistack that are right. This is also supports how i act to other and be truth to myself. Sometime you don't have to be selfish but their many selfish human being that do the wrong things and they know what they doing even that were wrong. I tell myself that you are not perfact but doing the right things that isn't issue but the issue is when people take it wrong way and you can't do or said anythings. If i really things about that what is my character i'll able to said that i am not perfact but i do the right things and i care about other people feeling may hurt by me and action and influence that i can control myself to not make misstakes that i'll regrade later. i support that my character is influence because i control myself and the rest of is you body do the rest in science that are study knowledge about human body but it's nothing to do with this but your character tell you how to choose and be youself. Sometimes i am not proude of who i am but it's not about who you are it about what you do and and what you said. I can control myself to do the right thing and their many teenager that dosen't know how to be yourself because it takes lots of controling your character. Your character tell you to support your respond to other that you choose away you can control yourself. My character will show that how much i can control myself to be myself and not to be the person that other want me to be. I can't give up i have to be postivie to myself and other and not to things nagative went i have to thing postivie to myself. I do agree with this quote because my character will be what i can just be myself and choose the right thing to make it right. My character makes me who i am now even went i wasn't my self. My pass what make me more strong and to be brave to control my self to choose make it all the way. It wasn't easy i work really heard to be the person that i am now my jerueny the reasons that i know how to be able to controling my self. Life isn't easy to know everything you have to thougt your self to live in this world there many people even don't know what is to be able to love yourself and do the right thing. The Britesh naturalist and politician and John Lubbock wrote this quote and i do believe that i can control what i said and i also control what are my action are that not usless to me because it's importan to me by influence beyond control take a position on this issue. For example i did losed control went i am not thinking postivie and choosing to be nagative that's why people need to know how to be able to control them self. Thinking postivie is't force it's come by influences and the people you around with not always the you round with their know how to control them sefl but it is not them that you can't depond on you have to learn your own and not all people are bad to hanging out with. I believe that one person can change the whold world just by their bravery and thinking postivie to them self i may not be prefact but i know how to control myself just by thinking postivie and think before i said or do anythigs. Some teen that are don't know how to control them self but you really don't have to know how to control your self they're many reasons influence that control youe self that you don't have control over what you have is you control you i know went i frist nocite that i have to make everything right but it is not what i have change it is what i am. Character influence beyond and it takes many reasons to be able to do the right thing i support that influence do control our character that we have and it make it more hearder to believe that i know what is the right and wrong thing as the time goes but my responds has to be the same i can't not change what other people do or said but what i can do is just be myself and think postivie that what makes it my character right. Character formed by influence beyond my control i do have many ressons to support this prompt do i choose my own character formed that is real by influences beyond control that i have over myself is my action and my thoughts that able to do the right thing as my character choose to be make it right. John Lubbock was right i do control my character formed by influences beyond that my brain tells me to do. it is positible to my character will be what me and myself choose to make it right, my responds with this prompt that is i can control my character will be show as i think postivie and do the right thing to improve my self that i can control my to be make it thru all the way as i'm useing character formed by influences beyond. I can control my actions and my thoughts that will not hurting other but if they're someone is not nice to me i can just use my postivie thought and postivie mind to control my nagaitve thoughts and use my postivie thoughts not to be bad as their to me. I do also support this prompt i am controling myself to be the person that i am and not to be the person that what other people want you to be. My influences that control my action that i am able to do the right thing and think postivie as same time my undestaning one anouther that support that what other may feel. I choose to make it right because that is who i am and it make me more stronger every time i am controling my action and that may not be the problam as the respond stay the same ans iam supporting this because i also do believe in myself that i do really can think postivie and do the right things by influence beyone my control. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
6D21E6095A62 | Many schools are starting to offer online schooling for students. Students or teachers may believe this can be a very beneficial program. However, I believe that online classes can be difficult or tough on a student. Students some times need an actual teacher showing or explaining to them face to face content, others take extra-curricular activities, and many students may even forget they have an online class.
First, not every student can learn by just one explanation, many students need a teacher showing them or explaining how to do something. Take for example my cousin, She's taking online classes but has a difficult time learning the material because she doesn't understand the explanation they are giving her. Her struggles with the material is there because she doesn't have an actual teacher explaining why such ans such are like that. Not many students have the capacity to learn off of the words of a website. Many students need that extra help, whether its a different way of learning or just a better explanation.
Secondly, A large amount of students take extra-curricular activities. Many are in an art club, Spanish club, and maybe even drama. The struggles for taking an online class for those would be a large amount. For example, The time I took an online class for art, it was terrible, either I didn't know how to transfer my painting to the computer or I just didn't know how to draw the picture. Extra-curricular activities would be difficult to learn without the extra help of a teacher.
Lastly, Students can even forget they have an online class. Many have jobs, others just like to sleep, they'll forget they have a class online and forget to turn in the work. For example my cousin, she sleeps a lot, By the time she wakes up she realizes that her assignment was already due. Online classes don't send out reminders of the assignment so any student can easily forget and fall behind the rest of the class.
In conclusion, online schooling isn't very beneficial. I believe that it can be tougher and more difficult on students. Many need a teacher to show them face to face content, some take extra-curricular activities, and majority of the students forget they even have an online class. For those few reasons is why online schooling shouldn't be an option to students. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
6D2AFE5412CB | Many schools are agree that students can finish high school in three years. Many students think that is a good idea to finish high school in three years. Some students think that they are waste time in four years in high school. In my opinion is a good idea to finish high school in three years, because the students can take class before school or after school, then, they can graduate in three years instead four years, instead elective courses, the students can take class, they need for graduate, and the students will have more time to go to college.
The students can take class before school or after school, and they can graduate in three years instead four years. The students can come one hour early, before school start, and they can take class every day of school, or they can stay one hour after school to take the class. However, some students think that is tired to come early to the school, or stay after school.
Instead elective courses, the students can take classes, that they need for graduate. The students can use the time, that they uses for the elective courses, they can use it for the classes they need for graduate. The elective courses it does not prepare to the students for college, and the regular classes prepare them for college. If the students finish high school in three years, they will go early to the college.
The students will have more time to study in college. The students will have time to think, what they want to study in college. Also, the students can finish very early their career. However, some students think, they need four years in high school for to be very prepare for college. The students will have time to think, which college they want to go.
I believe that is better finish college in three yeras, because the students get more time to go to college, so, when they finish their career. Then, they can study another career, because they will still young. If, the students stay four years in high school, they will not have enough time to study two careers. If, them finish two career, they will have a lot of opportunities to get a good job, and have a good pay. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
6D41FAC8F3CF | The author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote," To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.
Imagine in a world that is trying to change you in everyway.
I'm disagree because you have right to do what you want to do with your life or who you want to be in your life and nobody have to say what you need to do. Example; all people in this world have rights, bacause alot people trying to change your life, and they want you to do what they said, if you think you are right do not lessent to the people.
To many time the comunity try to change your descision and they do not respect what you said. that's why is alot problem in the poblation. Example; to much politician people want to change customs and religions they can't do anything about it, because that is a decision from there culture.
If you took a decision about to put your own company and your friends say you can not do that, just try to do your best and don't peatention to him. Example; in a company every employer have his own rights like what time they need to be there or what time they get out the work.
The reason why i shoose disagree is because to many people in this world do not respect when you make your own decision, if you can do something do not worry about what people say. The solution to this problem is do what you thing is right; and the comunty need to have a good relationship families,neightborhood, and students. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
6D6E937C3A67 | We do not choose our own character, if everyone gets to choose their own character nobody will have any bad people in this world, everyone would be full of good things because they will be able to pick their characteristics. If everyone had the same characteristics life would not be as good as it is now. Each person has different characteristics based on their culture, environment, childhood makes difference in their character. These are the three main reasons that differentiate people's characters, and makes them good in their own way.
Each person has had a different childhood which is an important part of people's characters. Childhood is very important because it is the the base of the building this is where person starts building their knowledge. Childhoods can effect kids when they grow up in a lot of different ways. A lot of teachers in the middle east hit their students when they do not do homework or get a bad grade on a test, this makes the students not wanting to go to school and hating school because they get hit in front of their friends, this does not give students enough confidence which is going to effect their characters in the future. Children who spend hours and hours on video game and making online friends, this make them anti-social people when they get older.
People's environment such as work place, friends has a lot of effects on their characters. If a person has a lot of bad friends that person's character is not gonna be the same as a person who hangs around with good friends, for example if a guy has friends who do drugs even if does not do them step by step they are going to get him to do it and that will start making changes in his character, on the other hand if a person has good friends who tell him let's go to the library to read or study that will have a positive effect on that person,s character. In work if a person is working and his manager yells at him that will lower his self confidence and have a negative impact on his character.
Culture has a big impact on a person's character in a lot of different ways. Culture is what is going on around the person and what he believes in or does not believe in. Sometimes cultures effect the person's character in good ways sometimes in bad ways. Culture makes people religious, pray and be good people. Sometimes culture does not give the person the freedom they need for example, in the middle east sex before marriage is not allowed which makes a lot of difference in peoples characters making them do secret stuff and not being able to communicate with the other gender because they are not even allowed to talk to each other because of culture.
In conclusion people do not get to choose their character. People's character is formed by a lot of different things such as environment, culture and childhood these are the most important to form a person's character. At the end of the day all characters are good in their own way, the difference between people is what makes them stand out and complete each other. This is a very important topic and it means a lot to me and other people Thank You for giving me the change to talk about it. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
6D728858E86F | Technology
I think has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive on people' live. Technologyy allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. People can check out books, shop, and play games without speaking to another person.
Because technology makes people to become more single, we can do a work or we can finish something by ourself. For example, if I want to buy a book for my friends that he live very far from me. I do not need to go to the bookstore buy a book then call him ask him when does he have time, and we make a time to meet each other. Right now I can buy a book online and then I type his address to delivery. I just need to wait a few days and then he can get the book. This is the technology makes life more confortable.
If today we do not have technology, maybe we need many people to do for one work. We need cost more time. It is not a good things for us. Time is important, in fact, we do not have too much time in our life, we need to ues the less time to finish one thing. So how can we find a way to use less time to do the work? Technology will help us.
People do not need contact work together. It save many time and improve the work. We can use the less time to do more work.
So that is why I think has the limtation of human contact due to the use of technongy had positive on people's live. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
6D7377CA8608 | Technology allows people to work in an easy way, technology helps to connect people from different parts of the world. Also technology works as entertainment for kids and old people . Technology has affects in our life is basically something that we need everyday or something that we cannot live without it because is really important
Fist, Technology connect with a lot people around the world, different web sites get money making app that people can text, call or make a meet with people that they do not know. As a student technology helps me all the time doing my homework or learn about different cultures, connect with my friends.
Second, as a young lady I use Facebook, Snapchat, instagram, photo editor, online books, etc a lot of this apps that technology give us, my life is easier with technology. When I was a kid my family decided to move a different country it was new for me I thought that I never will see my friends and family there I cried in all our travel because I miss the people in my country I did know anything about technology, I grew up I have my cellphone, laptop and table, I can make video call with them and see them, last Sunday I made a video call with my grandmother, is really incredible everything that we can make with technology, I still missing them but at least we can talk everyday.
Third, technology effects positive in people lives, think for a moments our life without technology, how hard life or boring, technology is. At this time our life depends of technology, millions people using everyday different apps for work, studies or just for fun.
Conclusion, technology is part of the world that we live, it makes our life easier and connect with different thing or people use it for good things and be successful on things that technology give us. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
6D8B9B8431A6 | It has been said that working with a group benefit more than working alone because it can be more fun. Have you ever been in a situation where you feel alone and you don't want to do any homework. I agree that working with teammates can help us feel better and they push us to be better . Although some say working alone is beneficial because we don't waste our time, actually working with a group is more beneficial because we can share information and work fast.
Some say that working alone is beneficial because we don't waste our time. Working alone can save our time because we can work at home, we don't need to wait for the rest of the group or even go somewhere else. For example, last year, my Science teacher gave us a group assignment where we needed to meet each other outside of school. That day my group and I talked where to see each other, then we went to Generic_Name's house. We enjoyed talking and eating but we never talked about the project. All I can say, we all just waste our time.
However, working with a group is more beneficial because we can share information. It is true that many heads think better than one because if one comes with an idea then all together discuss about it. Furthermore, some child think better if one person gives them an idea. For example, before doing a class work I always have to ask my teacher if what I'm thinking is correct because my mind gets freeze out. Working alone doesn't help in answering doubt that we could have.
Also, working with a group is a great benefit because we can work fast. All the group can work at the same time, some can do the posters, others can look for information, and the rest can divide the information about what theme each one is going to talk during the presentation. A survey showed that a faster way to work is working in groups because all the team can work in different areas at the same time. It means that working with a group is a great benefit, it help us to have better thoughts.
Working with a group can bring joy to our soul by making new friends. We can work and have fun, also working with a team is great because we can talk not just about the project, but our lives. Moreover, a group work can make learning more passionate.
In conclusion, working alone is beneficial because it can save our time, actually working with a group is more beneficial because all the group can share information and that can bring a faster work. Thank you for taking your time to read my paper, I hope you understand why I prefer working with a group. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
6D9728CB8711 | School should add one and a half hour to school each day. because student will get to learn more,student can get more help from teachers,also student can do more sports.
First of all,student will learn more if school board add one and a half hour to their school day. probably student will learn more because their classes will be extended. Also they can get more time in each class,so they can get more information and learn more about each subject. Also they will have the opportunity to do more activity in class. And learn how to work with others. And listen to different opinions and get to a conclusion,For example if some student are good in a activity and others are not that good. They can have the time to work as a group and explained what they are good at and what they need more help, so they all can help each other. They will also have time to work by them self. And passing there SOL.
Secondly, student can get more help from teachers. It will benefit all the student in the school, because some student need more help and different subjects. So they can have the time to go to their teachers and get some help. for example some student needs help in Math,English,civic etc. But some student are better in that subjects. So they can used one and a half hour to do another period. In that period student can go to the classes that they need more help. It will be better for some student because each student are different. And learn in a different ways . It does not mean that others are smart. It means that some student learn better in small groups. Some student learn more faster than others. Extending school it will help them get their grades up,By retaking quizzes and test and finish unfinished work. they can get help in homework too because homework is like practice,they can practice what they learn in class and get a better score in quizzes and tests
Finally,student can have the time to do more sports. With some of their schoolmates. They can have different sports. For example soccer,basketball,baseball,kickball and more sports..Student can make a vote, for what sports they will like to be in. They can learn new skills and get better by playing that sport. and get more healthy because they are playing a sport. because a big percent of student used a lot of their technology at home and don't do any sports. By extending school it can motive them,by doing some sports with their friends. They can play a lot of sports and see which sport they prefer to play,and see in which sport they are good at. They can do more activity for example Art, photographing for people that like to be creative.
In conclusion extending school it will benefit student in different ways. for example getting help from their teacher so they can get better in that subject and get good grades,Getting more time in class,They can get more information. Finally playing sports,they can be healthy and have a hobby that they like to do after all the information that they had learn during the day,some people like to do different activity like Art photographing. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
6DA4157C9B4F | Many people believe that self-esteem comes from achievement.
They believe that the source of true self-esteem is achievement.
True self-esteem comes from achievement because accomplishing a goal pushes you to try harder, help you praise yourself, and it is a long lasting satisfaction for you to remember.
Accomplishing a goal pushes you to try harder.
This is important because achievements comes from all your goals you have accomplished and that helps you want to try harder and to achieve many other goals you might have that you want to achieve.
This helps you build self-esteem by making you feel good for what you have accomplished.
Also since it makes you feel good it helps you want to accomplish other things because it makes your self-confidence grow stronger.
Also achievement helps you praise yourself.
What this means is praising yourself inspires you to continue to do many other things.
Praising yourself keeps you wanting to keep on achieving your goals.
It is like an inspiration because you know that after any achievement you are going to praise yourself and that is going to make you feel good.
So praising yourself makes you have a higher self-esteem by helping you feel good within yourself.
Moreover, achievement is a long lasting satisfaction.
For example, you have jsut achieved a goal you've had for three years now it makes you feel very satisfied that you finally made it.
Eventhough some may think satisfaction on something you achieve is not important you should because satisfaction with yourself makes your self-esteem go up.
satisfaction is a result of an achievement and a achievement helps you be more confident with yourself.
Achievement is the key to higher self-steem because it pushes you to try harder, helps you praise yourself a little more, and it is a long lasting satisfaction for you to remember.
If you want to have higher self-steem then achievement is the key. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
6DB65C457200 | Students committing to a career when they about to enter high school is by far a great idea. From elementary to middle school students are allowed to choose what they want to study toward a specific career or what they want to be. When kids are still in elementary they can say what they want to be, but they can not choose the class for the specific reason because they are still kids. But when it comes to middle school students they can choose what class they want to take for a specific career they have in mind .
Student can commit to a career when they enter high school , but they do that when the student already know what they want to be or what they want to do by the time they enter high school so the student at they would be committing to what the student want to do so the person doing so chooses the class the person want to study . Students committing to a career is a great idea when you really want to do it .
Committing to career
When elementary students are in 5th grade they start carefully thinking about what they are gonna do,
because when they are in 5th grade it their last year in elementary school so they have to think about what they want to do. When they enter middle school and that when students from elementary school start thinking about their choice and taking their career choice serious ,because that when they start thinking what they want to do in the near future. Elementary students have 4 years where they take class that are chosen for them in the 4 years they study just to get good grade ,but they do not think about choosing the class for themselves .But when it comes to 5th grade they still study the class that are chosen for them except that when they start to think what if I could choose the class that I want to study for my career or what kind job I am going to study to be able to get that job and that how they start committing to a career .when it comes to elementary school students.
Middle school students are commit to career because they are teens and they have to think about a lot of things that they want to do personally when it comes to career or what they want to be when they grow up that when they start .Committing to career start in elementary , but mostly it begins for real in middle school because that when young teens start taking class like algebra,earth science,biology ,world history, etc . When middle school students start taking these class students think only about passing so that they can not repeat that class and some just want to pass the class but mostly it about passing the class so that they can be able to get credit, and that leads to taking the class the will help that person career or what kind of career they are into. When looking you will find a lot teens thinking about their career .The career they want to commit to and some teens do change want they want to be , but still they are committing to it and they can just change if they do not want to do it .For some reasons young teens around the world that are still in middle school are already commit to a career and that is a good thing right most of them are really into it , and they are taking their career far enough .So far like 10,00 teens are most famous because of their career that they are doing now and they take serious because they like and they are good at it mostly middle school teens. These days they are unstoppable for what they do sometimes they are good more than adult at committing to career when it comes to what they want to do in life.
Some people might argue that students identify a career by the time they enter high school , because they think some students can not do that when it comes to committing to career they think that young teens can not do it .Because technology has taken the mind of teens .They say that teens can not do anything because all they think about is technology and all the things they do they always use technology so some people do not believe that teens these day can commit to anything i .Many people believe that it is hard for teens to commit ,because they can not take responsible of what they do and some think that they are so imature .When it comes to committing to career the parents thinks it how they act at home that why they can not commit to career and some thinks it how they behavior when they are in school .Some people believe that teens can not commit to a career ,because they do not know what to do and some thinks that young teens can not do it because they changes their mind most of their time on settling on what they want to do .Bunch of people believe that teenager can not do it because they quite so early and so easily anyway a lot people do say that can can not be a good generation because they do not know what to do.
But it doe not mean that all teenager are bad some might change when they grow up and some might not change ,because they just do not want to change consoling the thing they might have gone through so for these people. Who believe that some teens can not commit might be wrong because people change teenager hood do change as well
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For these who believe in change I as well believe in change people do change and they can commit to what they want to commit to as well as job, career,family or love. People believe in what they want to believe in so I say that commit takes responsible ,but I know that we teenager can change the world and show them that not all teens are the same and keep believing in what career you want to commit to because committing is not an easy thing to do expressly when you are a young teen or kids .I know people say that we can commit to what we want ,but not everyone is good at committing to a career when it comes to young and committing to something that is big than your own head or mind. So keep believing in what you want to commit to because once you found it I know for sure whatever it is you will success ,because we you teens work hard for our dream. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
6DFD772CFC64 | School required students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during the break. The time we live on right now students should get projects over the summer, so they can prepared for college and other things in life this is why the schools are giving them work so they dont forget about school and keep learning everyday. While some people around the world say that teachers should design the summer project for the students. It is better for the students to design their own summer project because they have better ideas, Can make their projects less stressful, and make it more fun with their friends.
All students in the world have better ideas to how to design your own project and make it better. Students have better understanding of what they want to do for there project like having better ideas and knowing what they want to work on. Cristiano Ronaldo wrote a article about why is good students should design their projects and why teacher should let them design their own article. Cristiano Ronaldo is a soccer star but he went to high school and know what the students want to do and design. He wrote on the article that students brain is still developing;he said that if students keep making their own decision and teachers let them choose their designs of projects they can come up with better ideas that other people cannot even think about. In the article he wrote that we students have a amazing brain and we can come u with the best ideas and design of projects that no one else can't. Everyone keep saying that teachers should make the designs of students projects for the summer.
Students of everywhere can make there project design less stressful if they get to choose what they can do. When students get to design there own project is less stressful for them because they can choose how they want to do it.
Leonel Messi came to every high school in the united states to talk about how stressful is when teacher give students projects over the summer. They make us work super hard and is super hard to communicate with their teacher over the summer. He talk to us that picking our own projects is way better than teachers picking the design because we can make our own ideas and it is less stressful and that is going to be easier. When students pick their design they don't need to worry about asking question to their teacher and stressing out. Messi told us that when he was in high school,he used to choose his own design of project because it was less stressful and more fun to do. when people keep saying that teacher should choose our design it so stressful because us as student want to choose our design for our summer project.
People in all high schools keep saying that is more fun for students to make our design of project ,because it makes our studies more fun and incredible. The mother of my friend ones told me that there is nothing more fun than getting to design a project as a student. She told me that when she was in high school their teacher choose the project for them and that wasn't fun for no student. That's why she told me that is more fun to get to choose your own design of project because when teachers get to choose them is super boring and stressful students sometimes cry. She told me that If i had the chance to make my own design to take it because it was not going to be fun to if the teacher choose the design. It is going to be more fun if you get to choose your own design for the summer project because i can get to make it with my friends and probably family members. Never let your teacher choose design the summer project for the students.
While other people might say that these summer projects should be teacher designed because the student keep learning more and keep working hard;however, if students make their own summer project design it is way better because student have better ideas, less stressful, and get to have more fun while doing the project. Messi gave us a great talk about how to choose your own design of project can make every students less stressful. Students around the world have a ruff time trying to do projects that their teacher gives them over the summer. Teachers should let students choose their own design so students can relax and have fun over the summer and they can keep doing there project and still have time to have fun with family and friends. Every student around the world should start making their own design for their project. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
6E248B1F33B0 | The one person that has shared wisdom and experience with me is my friend, Generic_Name. Learning or sharing wisdom and experience with her have taught me a lot of thing that is around the environment. The benefit of learning experience from people is because it help to make the right choice, help to know activities more easily, and also it help people to be strong.
Making the right choice is not something that everyone are able to do on their own. The experience and wisdom learned form people can help to know the mistake that have been done which will help them to prevent it form happening. It helps with learning from other failed experience in life which also help to bring the best out in making that right choice in life today.
People doing thing and knowing activities more quickly other it because they have more wisdom and experience for a long time or they have notice the activities form someone they know in their life time. Having the experience of knowing thing easily can happen in both in school or at the work place. It helps them to move forward with others that are high than moving backward.
It also help people to be strong in so many ways by giving them some encouragement that they can be better than what they were before. It also gives hope to a lot of people in today's life. Experience and wisdom can easily help people that are not too great in doing thing outside their home and also make them to the top of their school or their work.
In conclusion, learning wisdom and experience can be very helpful in people life today. Experience can help give them power that they can be better than what they were and also learning for people's mistakes so that they can prevent it from happening . | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
6E3D46F9AAE1 | It is true that as soon as you stop learning, you stop growing as a person. Learning is what we spend most of our human lives doing; when you stop learning, you almost stop living -because what are you going to do then? Do the same things over and over again? You will always eventually reach a point when you are not even satisfied with what you do and know.
I think we all have struggled with dissatisfaction at many points of our lives, it is as if we have reached a point where we do not know what to do next. Satisfaction restricts creativity; you start doing the same things over and over again, and like a scratched disc, the music gets irritating. Life gets irritating. The stuff that used to bring us joy have been overdone and gotten boring, we need something new. We are always looking for something new. We never reach complete satisfaction. It is part of our nature, curiosity.
Even the things you are passionate about will lose their meaning. We need to do other stuff that we are not as passionate about to know what we are actually passionate about. Imagine me, a two-year guitar player with dreams of become a musician/music producer, going to college to study music and only music (mastering the guitar and only the guitar). It might be a bit unrealistic, we all know we have to take multiple classes to get a degree, but imagine if that was my only things. How will I bring something new to the table when all I know is what the past musicians have discovered and put together? My only option is to replicate and do over what has been done. I will need to find a new inspiration, a new thing to influence my music besides my music studies. This new inspiration will affect how my art grows, which is a reflection of how much I have grown as a person. We need growth.
Limiting what you do, causes you to shrink. I have always put limits to the kind of people I can become friends with. It was not always much of a choice, but now it is. I have reached points where I could not be with anyone because I was stuck in a group of people that I did not like. I still get to those points sometimes, and I get sad very easily because I am unsatisfied with my friendships. Dissatisfaction has become a normal and almost natural part of my existence, which makes life much harder than it has to be. You complicate the human experience and it makes you shrink as a person, something you should avoid doing (you should always be going after growth). Limitation in most cases is not a good thing.
Sure, many might say mastering on something that you love takes you through all the processes you need to grow as a person, but that is putting limits to how you grow and what you love. We can learn to do new things that we love and get to know ourselves better. There are always parts of you that you do not know or have not discovered because you limit your loves. As has been said before, we need to get to know things that we do not love to know what we love; it makes everything you love much more meaningful when you have to get to know something that you do not like.
Doing things beyond what we have mastered helps us to grow and be happier. Once you stop doing and learning, dissatisfaction (and sadness) consumes your life and leads to a dangerous path. Emerson was right and very wise about what he stated. We should always be going after growth. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
6E5F280580C4 | Should some school offer distance learning for students to attendend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Some people are agree with these class, because classes in online it's bennefit and better for students, students can learning more, students can do a better work, and students can have a more time for to spend with the family. If the students will can study in classes online they can have a big opportunities and they can follow his dreams and has the all they want to do or they want to has.
One reason it's classes in online is benefit and better, students can learning more and they can have in the house because they can do a time for make all things they needed make, for example I want to graduate and I want to follow study but it's difficult for me because I don't have time for anything I can't not make my homework, and study for my quizz. I need to work for buy my things, pay my house and my car. It's for these reason that I frefer class online, with these class I can have a lot time for me, and I can make my things and I can do the two things study and work.
The second reason is the students can do a better work, and they can have a better grade. They can turn in a good homework or proyect with more information explained. For example when the students have more time, they can make a better work, because they are enfocus in his obligation like homework and proyects, and they want to be a good student is for that they can do effort for turn in a good proyects with the use the internet. They can do a good investing for make a homework they can find a lot information, if the students are a relax and they have a time they only need to study a few hours no is like in the school. In the school is more tired because they need to wake more early and they need to do a lot homework in the many classes. But if they study classes in online it's more easy not it's very hard like in the school.
Some people say that the classes online it's a lost time the student do not make nothing in his house, when they have classes online they lost time. For example, when they are in the house they play with the cell phone or they are using his phone for other things, and they not study and not learning like in the shool. However, the classes in online is wonderfure because is a way to spend with the family because they can make a day fun with them and make differents things like play football, wath a movie, they can go to the cinemark and other places that they prefers.
In conclucion class online it's benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Because students can lerning more, students can do a better work, and students can have a more time for to spend with the family. This is important and benefit because students can make a lot things, and they have a more time for make a lot things wathever they want. If the students take a classes online this is benefit for them and have a lot adventages, and they can do the both things work and follow study in online classes and they can follow the goals like find a good job and finish his studies. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
6E70CECCE25D | One topic is frequetly debated is whether or not should your school follow this model by extending the school day two hours? some people think that because students can learn more. They feel that because if the school extending two hours more, we can have more time with our friends. I believe that because you can do homework,expending time with your friends, and learn more.
One reason why the school days can extending two hours is because alot of students need help with their clases,teachers can help us to pass the clases and that it is good time the students think about, if they want to graduated they can make an effort to pass the clases and don't distracted other people in the classroom. Students have bad grades because they don't listening to the teacher while she's explain. We have bad grades because the class is boring or the teacher is great with the students and she don't say anything when we are using our phones.
Second reason why the school days can extending two hours is because you can participated in school activities or, you can play in some games like Soccer, American football, basketball, and you can have more time with your friends and helping the soccer team. you can help to clean the school and decoring some of the classroom, or you can stay in the library and help to organized the books or doing homework, and we can use the computers to search and find what book we want read.
Third reason why the school days can extending two hours is because some students want to stay in the school doing projects or homework because they don't have time to do in their home some of they go to work, and others students have alot of homework from the others clases, and that's one reason why the teachers be mad with the student because they did not do his homework, and the students explain why he not did that homework we have alot of homework from the others clases and i don't have to much time to do all the homework i have because at night i got to the bed early and the next day some teachers give me more homework and that's why i don't do your homework.
The last reason why the school days can extending two hours is because some students need help with their homework, they need to practice more to understand the class but the most important thinks that students need to have are good grades and pass all the test to graduated, if they have very good grades the school will give a certificated to saying we are proud of you, and your family will give to you some gifts because they are proud of you ,and you will graduated without trouble and then any university will accept to you because they will see your grades of your colleges and see how good you was in your clases.
In conclusion why the school days can extending two hours is because most students want to stay in the school to participated in activities of the school or participated in some football teams. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
6E71B040D5C6 | What i would like to accomplish right now i guess it would be my grades. because they are not good im not doing good at any clases that i have right now. my grades are bad and one thing i would like to accomplish right now i guess is my grades for the moment because now i feel that im going to fail all my test. that im having right now im failing all the clases and i guess that's the only thing i want to accomplish for the moment i still have time to learn and study for my all my test that are coming this year hopefully i can do good. last year i did my writing ESOL and i didnt pass the test but i got the maximun number so i can retake the test again and that time i didn't did good a fail the test i didn't know how i did the first test that i got 385 on my ESOL. then i fail when i was going to retake it again i know that i did my best that time but i stil ask my self how i fail it again i even stay after school so i could retake the test again i guess that time i was lucky. that day i guess i didn't study well i guess because this time i didn't pass it or because i was doing the test fast and i couldn't read the test or i just didn't care about it. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
6E842F21D6E4 | There are people in every part of the world that, they can not be retract based on what they say, or on what they have done as a result of their acts giving in their first impressions. The first impressions can give to a people in a idea, feeling, or an opinion. A people can hurt someone else feeling based on their opinion, because they do not think what adequate words they going to say. And when they want to fix the problem may be too late. The first impressions are almost impossible to change, because people can hurt someone else feelings and cause people change.
First impressions can hurt people's feelings in fact, I did to my sister yesterday. My sister and I were talking about her wedding yesterday, her wedding is next year in April, and we are preparing for her best day ever. We have to look for her dress and all the things that she is going to use for that day. She is like my second mother, and I want to make sure she looks beautiful on that day. While we were talking and looking for dresses in the internet, she saw a wedding dress, and my first impression was like, no that dress is ugly, and I told her she was going to look like a real skull in dress, because she is skinny. But I never thought I was going to hurt her feelings in my first impression, the dress was ugly, even though she liked but I wanted for her the pretties dress for her wedding. I felt badly for her, because I did not think my words before I said to her. I told her sorry, but she was little upset about me for the words I said to her, as I always say, what people say is what they receive. Lately my sister did not talk to me, I was sad and I talk to her, I apologized for the words I said. She told me it was okay, that I did not meant to said it. My sister and I, we are happy now. In the following manner, my friend Generic_Name invited me on her birthday and Her friend told me that I was looking ugly, and that I was a ugly and slow girl, in front of her other friends, her impressions about me hurt my feelings. She retract based on what she said, but it was too late, I left from Generic_Name party I went home, and I was little sad, the girl went to my home she wanted to talk to me, she apologized and I told her she hurt my feeling but I was fine, and gave her some advises and she left with this, first impressions are almost impossible to change because hurt someone else feelings.
Additionally, first impressions can cause people change, as an example of my best friend I gave her an opinion about her boyfriend. I told her that he does not love her, because I saw him kissing with a girl in the school. She told me I was crazy, I was just jealous because she had the most handsome boyfriend in the whole world. Matter of fact he was cute, but he wanted just play with the girls. My best friend change with me a lot, she did not want to talk to me no more. About the things that I told her. Lately I realized that he had a twin brother I made a mistake, that my first impressions to him was a fatal mistake. After all, I wanted to apologize with my best friend, but she was mad with me. It was impossible to talk with her. I realize that my first impressions about the idea of his boyfriend had change my friendship with her. Today I just talk rarely with her, it was almost impossible to change my idea, but I did, but my friendship is changed. First impressions cause people change.
Some people may say, the first impressions is possible to change immediately, because is not a big deal. They may say that the other people, does not care about their first impressions from them. But this is not case, people always get hurt when they receive a bad impressions to them, they make them to change even with themselves. First impressions are almost impossible to change, even if the problem is big.
Thus, the first impressions is almost impossible to change, because what people say is not easy to retract. Is not easy to correct the mistakes, is not easy to correct the words that people do not meant say them. If people say their impressions without thinking them, and then apologized that is fine, but sometime is almost impossible to correct the first impressions, because people hurt someone else feeling. Also, there are sensitive people and they may not forgive people. People may change based on someone else idea, feeling, and opinion. The impressions are almost impossible to change. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
6E90DC70B7A9 | I am not agree with those educators that say, the summer break is too long and the students can't retain imformation as easily when they return in the fall. The summer break is made to a students's benefit, it help the students as a relajation during the summer. The students have to spend time with their family a lot as possible they can. Some of them need to make money, and they take the summer break to make it. That is why I am not agree the educators that does't wants the summer break long.
One reason,the students are in the school almost a whole year, and all that time they are stressed by all the work they have to do in the school. Caming the summer break the students wait it with antusiasm, and work hard to finish the school's work and enjoy summer break, it help them as a relajation after a school's stress, they have to forget the school by a mommet, and relax their brains. Second reason, during the school's time the students does't have a lot of time to spend with their family, and the summer break is a good time of the year to spend it with their dear, persons, friends, classmate, girlfriend, and family. After it, the students are more prepared to star the school's year concentred at what they have to focus in the school with a clean brain ,and do all the school's work. Third reason, some students have some obligations in their homes, for example some of those are: pay cellphone, pay room, buy food, and pay car, so some student take advantages of the summer break to make some money to helps them to pay all their obligations in their homes, and don't take the school's time to spend it in other obligations, and take their time just to teh schools. Finally, the student does't need the summer break shorter, they have a lot of things to do during the summer break, and it would't be justly to them, I am againt to the educators that feel the summer break is too long. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
6EA18B20DA5A | Cna you imagine how good it feels to live by choosing your best character? Choosing our own character for ourself will never make us regrate it in the future.
People choose theire own character because, they know that theire choice will make them win at the end. When it comes to choosing, it might be as hard as a stone at the begining because, we are not sure if it is going to work or not. But nothing comes in an easy way if you want the reall succesful ,we need to follow our character.
Whenever we choose our own character, we have the confidence to do on what we are planing to do. And when we have the confidence, it is way easier to manage any case that comes to our life. We do not choose our charater whitout knowing ourself, and that is why it is better to choose our character by knowing what is best for ourself. For exampe: Sometimes in life we get so many bad things on our way, but if we choose to take it easy on them by choosing our best character, that helps a lot because it is making our life easier in an easy way without much stressing.
As long as we know our charachter, we will always have the right chocie to make, because we know what is going to match with our character or with our wantings. Sometimes when we are planing to get married, we do not just guess to match with our parteners ,but we choose our character to match with our partner's character, that is because we know that we can choose our character in any how that makes us feel the best way to our living. Or sometimes you can fall in love but you partener might have a better character then you, so you decide to change your character by choosing your partener's character, and that is why we should choose our own character.
A lot of people choose thier character when they start school, because they see a lot of diffrent characters in school and they start noticing which character belongs to them. Or they can learn from what thier teacher teaches them, and we all know that our teachers are always willing to teach us the best behaviour and that is why the most students start to choose thiere character at school.
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When we choose the character that we want, it helps us to find the right people in our life, because we are more happy when we find people that are the same as our character without changing our character. You can not pretend to be the character that you do not choose to be, that is just like living a fake life. Life is easier and happier when we follow our own rules. Let's follow our character that we choose to be, no matter what!!. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
6EB1681A5880 | I disagree that students should be required to take an arts as a class but as an elective they can choose between what type of art class that they want to take,for example if a student wants to take a music class as a elective they,ll have to check in with their counselor to see what class that they don,t need so that empty spot can be the elective that they have chosen.
Electives can be helpful to students because it teaches them something new about the history of the different kinds of arts class and help them understand whats going on around the world and teach them how to play instruments and see where the origin is from and how it is played,art is teaches student s how to paint and make clay and shows who are most the famous painters,where they,d come from and how,d they became such great artists. drama shows who are the greatest actors,famous plays and how they became famous.
Students say that an elective is better than it be a required class because its like having free time but you get to do something that you dont get a chance to do and it could be a career in the future for someone who is interested in doing it and sometimes the counselor puts the students into an elective that dont like and its not a required class and if they dont like it they don,t have a choice but to stay in the elective .
Therefore students should be able to choose their own elective rather than it to be a required class that you need to pass in order advance into the next step of life and it will help them learn something in the future and remember what happened during their time in that they spent in that elective. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
6EE4A9C8F158 | Do you agree or disagree with extending the school day? Many students said that it's good for them to finish homework at school, but some of students disagree this idea. I disagree with expending the school day, I think it's not good for us.
First ,every student have something they like to do, so students can join a club or an activity after school. If the school board adds one and a half hours to school each day, students will attend their activities late. The activity lasts about 2 hours or later, students may get home after the sun sets up. In the winter ,the sun sets up so early, the day is short, it's too dangerous for the students who walk home.
Second, we have about seven hours in the school every day, I think we need more time to study at home. It's quiet when we study at home. Students can use these time fully. We can learn new knowledge, do sports, review everything we learn, and so on. However, there are some new students from different countries, they can not speak English very well,they need more time to study. So, I think it's not good to expend the school day.
Lastly, if the school board will not expend the school day, it can not only help us do what we want to do for a long time ,but also let us have a long and good sleep. We have a lot of homework in the high school, we may finish homework late. It's not good for students. The students in the high school must sleep for about eight hours every day. If they do not sleep very well at night, they will not have good mentality to study next day, their grades may decline.
These are my reasons, I disagree to expend the school day. I think my idea can help the school board to make the decision. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
6EF7CBB46501 | The statement that the author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote about to do something else just to be someone in the world, it is completely an error. I disagree with this statement, since, I believe that every person think differently. For example, people has their own ideas and ways how to do their own business. Everyone can make a biggest impact in the world, but, by doing what they love. Not what others think that it could be beneficial for you. To be someone in a world you should believe in yourself, make right decisions, and success.
First of all, people could enter in your mind by telling you what could be beneficial for your life or carer. Some of them accept their opinion and do what they do not like, or love. For example, when students are thinking in what career they want to study. Parents influence in their choices by telling about what career would be properly for them. However, those "properly careers" it is not in their list of careers they want to study. This action make some teenangers to take that step of let parents choice by themselves.
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they do not help them to mature or even take responsabilities. Everyone should believe in themselves by doing whatever they love, without any interpose in accomplish their dreams. Since, we have the right to build them, it does not matter if we commit an error. Because of our capacities to avoid them or even get over it and keep going.
People has the right to make big choices in life. Making decisions it is hard and important because it could be beneficial, or even worst. However, if you choice with your heart it might be right but by the time you can change your mind. But, you won't regret it about those decisions because as they say, "You have to learn for every error you commit to be success." This means that we learn through the past of the time every fall, because you have to stand up and continue your life. It helps us to growing our knowledge to build a better version of ourselves.
Finally, by being confidence to yourself helps you to surpass any obstacle. Beliving in your ideas and trying to make it come true, it tells us that you are persist person chasing for your dreams. Which is quite favorable for person in any career or even job. Because of seeking to be successful at your own way, by do not depend about what others can say. Everyone has a differently perspective than others by doing what you love without any "obligation" or to be oppresed.
In conclusion, I am not accorded by this statement, since, we have different points of view. However, I believe that every human being can make their dreams come true without any oppression by others. People should stand by themselves by starting to be confidence in their belief. Also, by being patience on making important decisions, since, everything takes time. And, do not be afraid on doing what you love because it brings you to the way to be success. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
6EF996C09864 | I agree with the author Ralph Waldo Emerson, because is important to be a yourself in the world for the example, in my case is very cool be writer is constantly trying in the world. In th worl needs people like auhors.
In the world needs very much people where exist much writers, and having books for to read, all needs books about the inspirations like people, for example like be yourself is luris be unique.
I want to be someone else they don't like to much think in yourself just what they want.
In the else of the jobs, if you try to be yourself and the built the company want you will never fine the happen to me a lot of time, when try to apply to a job they want you altogether with different expresion like: Happy, active, team work, and accurate.
I agree too with Ralph Waldo Emerson with this theme "to be yourself in a world is constanly triying to make you something else is the greastest accomplishment."
This theme is for to learn much are sentences small but is interesting are word for go ahead, for demontrate a good energy a all person that feeling of be yourself is a theme muy interesting like my person is a segment that transmit securiy, and joy in we soul.
is like for example that persons that feel less than that other person this is a agurmen or texbook like this transmit good vibes a that person.
Exist person that don't like understand because they don't care this theme they want cell phone, video game, and all insignificant over there take a very bad conduct the person having that to read, to learn, to listen, to silence, after to know they have to help and counsel.
The life is a circle when all people have to learn, to living, of good form. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6F0330A6C504 | This shows how students could think and have thoughts about what they want in the future, a career is what benefits them in their lives, preparing them would make a change in their minds on what they really are interested in or what would they want to be successful in their future, it would take time to prepare to finally decide whats on their minds to choose their careers as a young age, this opportunities will make a big change is students choose wisely.
After keep studying students should make positions on what they already are studying,thinking as a young age students are more creative with their minds and heart; Students should think as young age for a beneficial purpose,deciding on a career at a lower grade (8th) many societies et their students have this opportunities to choose their path and make changes on what they really want in their life,the're changing from a playful mind into a mind where teenagers starts to make decisions; In reality this is a path where they would finally decide what they want or could be do for being graduated as a honorable person, by doing the most of the students frequently found what they would do and could be doing on their future as a older person, as they think they organize them self and be more clear on their positions in life.
This could make a big change for teenagers, now they show they can make a more positive and strong decisions, to show that they make better decisions as a lower grade society could being tested for all middle schoolers and keep track on how do students on how they are getting ideas as they turn from Middle School to High School; Most of the students decide good careers and some of them great careers, but is not only about choosing a career is about what students could think as a teenager; having students deciding on what they think the're going to be success.
However, letting young kids think on what the're going to study as a career would not be the best because not all students want to keep studying before High School; it would be a waste of time and effort to give them a great opportunities to start thinking as young adults, this could not benefit all students because as they get into High School they keep changing careers and by the end of their 4 school year they didn't decide what career they want to take, most of students end up not enjoying their career and giving up deciding they shouldn't get that career and deciding to not finish the college. Therefore, students could not take a career they didn't want but if they know they could pass and be an excellent person, even in the career they didn't decide to take they could make even a better life in their future by choosing and changing the career they were thinking as they were at Middle School, they continue thinking on what they want until they reach what they're looking for in real life as a young adults.
By telling this students should see and think very carefully as parents understands their children and teachers helping their students how they could or might do to get that career on what they need to focus on, for society is really difficult to choose right ways hat might help students and which ones might not letting students choose sense their getting more knowledge they will increase the capacity to get into what career benefits them as students,there are many student that want a career and the society helps them with their courses a they are getting into High School, their final thoughts and knowledge finish for them and they should start to think more in what he career is and how they're going to deal with their job | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
6F30733E6B4B | The first impressions are almost impossible to change. I disagree about that, cause me personal i don't have issues with no one around me. Maybe I can be a little annoying sometimes with my peers, but that doesn't mean that they don't like me. They hang around because they know how I am and what I do when they are around me. In the end of the day it doesn't bother me if they like me or not, because I know they are gonna come back and enjoy the day with me.
This first impression thing had me thinking about something that happen a long time ago. It's not based on my experienced, but one my best friend's that we go back a long way in middle school. He told me that he didn't like me that much so we didn't talk too much. He didn't even talked to me when we where around each other, but something happen that change our friendship. There was guy who always was there with him the guy had done something terrible and caught suspended for sometime. My friend and I started talking more, after the guy got suspended he told that he didn't like me because I was dating someone he liked that's what happen.
My first impressions where good cause everyone that I know are cool with me, but if it wasn't I could of make-up something to be good with them. This thing about first impressions is not that hard to if you have charisma or personality in you. I never had a hard time making friends, because I have personality and charisma this two things you need to have if you wanna be friends with someone or making a first impression. There was a time that I went to talk with my father-in-law that day I was super nervous to even talk to him. In the end my father-in-law was just a great guy we talk about every comment he had to talked.
I don't get nervous about nothing, but he was tall and looked like a hard-dude. Even thought I all ready knew him he still looked intimated to look at him. Her wife was the opposite of him she was pollute and nice with me, but I knew that all ready because I seen her in parties. It was a good impression in the end we broke-up in a few days, but we still friends her mom still remembers me that good. sometime it is hard to make a good impression with people you know.
It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. My conclusion I disagree about that, cause me personal I don't have issues with no one around me. It's just that you need personality and charisma to make a good impression in my opinion. So go and look for that its's not difficult to have that. If you only have personality that good or have charisma that even greater to have, sighing out. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
6F3C318ED62E | Of course that i'm agree with Churchill's statement, because for to have success or to be successful in the life you need to have many failures. No one is perfect and you don't need to be it for be successful. This quote reminds me when my grandfather used to tell me " Son, if you wanna be someone important on the life your gonna have ups and downs, don't matter how many failures your gonna have, but however, in spite of everything your gonna achieve your goals and dreams without matter what other people says about you, the most important is not loss the enthusiasm".
I think that if you do your best on everything and you try to do it better always your gonna achieve your goals. You don't need to do it perfect all the time, because despite everything you always gonna have a failure but that doesn't mean that your gonna stop try to do your best or your gonna loss all your enthusiasm, it's mean that despite of each failure your gonna follow your goal. No matter how many times you need to do it, just try it!!!.
The failure plays a important role for be successful, everybody has ups and downs, for example:
In the school, if you have a test and you were studying for that test but you fail, don't stop just try it again and try do it better the next time.
For a job, if you are searching a new job and you completed many applications for any job but no one is requesting you for a interview, or unfortunately, you not were accepted on that job, don't matter, you will find another job, just don't loss the enthusiasm.
In a relationship, if you like a girl or boy and you declare your love at her/him but you not were accepted for her/him or what's more worse she/he doesn't like you, don't be sad you will find the right one for you.
In a career, if you wanna have a important job like lawyer but you have a failure in the progress, don't loss your enthusiasm you can try with another profession like nurse or another that you like it.
In the life, i say in the life because i have a stepfather that he always says that he is right all the time when it's not true but he never want to accept that he are wrong and that't a problem, because if you never listen at the other people that are right then your gonna have a failure in the future, for the same reason that you thought that you were right when you doesn't.
Be successful in the life is not something easy at the contrary it's hard because in the progress you always gonna have many failures, but however, nothing is impossible in the life with enthusiasm and to much effort you gonna achieve many big things, always fight for your dreams and goals. Remember nobody is perfect on this life and you are strong and intelligent don't matter how many troubles or failures you have just try to do your best and fight for everything that you want.
In conclusion to have failures is not bad at the contrary is very good for you because you learn more about how to do it better the next time. My mom always say: " Each failure it's make you more strong and more intelligent ", and the truth that's true, you never gonna learn about your error if you don't have a lesson for to learn but everything without loss of enthusiasm. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 |
6F9741277AB3 | People should make their own decisions instead of seeking guidance from experts or authorites about lifes important matters. I personally know that making your own decisions is better then other people making your decisions because if a expert or other person did, they could probably decide something you dont want and then regret it later in life.
One reason why i know making your own decisions is better then seeking guidance from experts is becuase when making your own desisions you know what your doing but you have to think twice about it and then go with it. Like for example, if i chose to take geosystems instead of physics i think about it twice because i know what could be the bad thing and the good thing about that class and then go for what i think is better.
Second reason why i know making your own decisions is better because when a person makes a decision they made, then later regrets what they chose, they made a mistake. Thats a good thing because learning from your mistake's helps you a lot and benefits the wrong and making mistake's will make you a more successful person. For example, if i were to take an exam then get the results that i failed because i got a really bad grade i would try again but wouldnt give up which makes me successful.
Final reason why i know making your own decisions is better because who else in this world can? Its your life and theres never gonna be a person right by you telling you what do and what not to, so they have to learn by their selfs becuase no one is. For example, what if i said i wanted to go buy a house, who should i ask to make my decision? no one because you make your own decisions in this life.
These are the reasons why making your own decisions is better then seeking guidance from experts. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
6FDAD6124B9E | Ever since you were little, have you ever noticed that your really good at something as you grew over time? Everyone has a talent or a skill that are common or very unique. I have gained a talent over years and I just realized not to long ago. My number one talent I have it dancing hip-hop because I took classes for 9 years and I got inspired by the artist I mostly love.
My number one talent is hip-hop. Hip-hop's really been a big part of my dancing life over years. I took classes at a place and just remembered having so much fun and learning new dance moves. Since I started taking classes of hip-hop and learning new things, I thought that this might be the number one thing I might actually be good at. I have once broken my ankle by learning a new dance move. The bone was out of place and the bone was a bit cracked. At that moment I was just thinking about the pain but once I got home and was able to rest, I just had the fear of not being able to dance and it made my heart shatter into 7. After a 8 or 9 weeks I felt better and was able to dance again. I had to be careful and not hurt myself again. when I first got there I was not a good dancer like most of them. Once I was there for almost a year I learned a lot because they would tell me little secrets of their's. I got better ever since and now I teach my closest friend how to dance. I took dance class for 9 years and it helped me a lot with my dancing skills.
I got inspired by the artist I love the most. Ever since 2012 December 22 I found a group of boys that were new. I watched their video's and I was in love with them. They debuted in 2013 June 13 with their first song called "No More Dream". They were called BTS. There are a seven member group, there stage names are RM, Jin, Suga, J-hope, Jimin, V, and Jungkook. They are a band from South Korea. Their fan's are called ARMY. As years passed by and they became the biggest boy band in the whole universe and galaxy! I was inspired by their music but also their dancing, which got me more into dancing. I learned all their dance moves from their music video's to their stage performances. They also inspired me to dance more because ever since I was little I liked dancing and over the years I got better, they kept telling me to keep going which I did and that's when I made up my mind. I was now planning to become a back up dancer for them when they went on tour. I was planning to already become a dancer so I practiced more. When I became 13 I was able to dance and more like some one was controlling me with strings, like I was a puppet.
Now that I am 14 I decided to teach others who wanted to learn how to dance. It's been 9 years of dancing so why not. After learning to dance hip-hop I felt like an animal that's been let back in the wild. Dancing is a big part of life if you love it and enjoy it. BTS has taught people many things but the one line they said about dancing is "There are 2 deaths in life. The first one is when you lose the passion of music and dance and the second one is death. The first death though is more painful." Those are not the exact but very close to the meaning. My number one talent is dancing hip-hop because I took classes for 9 years and I got inspired but the artiest I love the most. What's the one talent that you have, do you actually want to become better or move on. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
6FEF6D46714D | Has it ever crossed your mind that people today are struggling to make their own decisions, and wanted feedback from other people and just maybe wanted to change their mind. Well people today are just going what their own decisions they make, I am the type of person to ask for some feedback or ask other people about, is this a good choice im making, can I do something better then what I did yesterday. I believe that people should take other peoples' guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matter due to people wanting help in the real world, and also tell them about the past so they do not mess up on there life choices.
What is more important the choices you make or the outcome of it? Teenagers about my age need to make better choices, but why you may ask. Today Teenagers are just ruining their own life in school. Teens need to focus on what is right for them making better decisions, like not to drink, help mom out in the kitchen, and do something productive. Teens decisions now can affect the decisions they will make sometimes in the future. For example I changed one of my friends decisions to not drink because that will cause him in the long run, like ever makes it big and someone sends that picture to social media his life can be ruin. Therefore I think teens or people should also ask other people that have already or still is living for a better decisions in important matters.
Why should I go to someone else for a better decisions for some dumb reason they are going to give me, wrong. If you ask someone, you should actually listen to see what they have to say and understand the concept. It is better to have someone else opinion on how to change my decisions. Well they have lived longer than you have, they have more experience,and more life choice taking. All im trying to say is that in my opinion is that you should always take someone else decision because maybe it will help other people in the long run. Maybe it will lead them to build something amazing, start their brand company. Just something between those lines. Someone else decisions can actually change the person you are right now. I've had so many people bring me down on how I'am going to never make it the Army branch. I'm just gonna be a lawn mower, a person who just cuts grass for living. Even though they making money that not my passion. My recruiter told me to never let someone enter your head with bad thought and let them struggle you with these bad thoughts. One of his saying was "yesterday was the past,today is the present,and tomorrow is a mystery".
In conclusion People should take other peoples guidance from experts and authorities about matters due to people needing a little more help, telling them stories about the past so they dont go through that rough past and make the same mistakes. I agree that some people may not what to interact with other people or even care about what they want to say. I agree but if you just hear them out they might just convince you to change your mind. All I'am just trying to say if you do not like the hits or opinion they are trying to give you just back off and find someone new or just go with the flow and follow what your heart attends you to do. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
70041E13A0CC | Distance learning was popular, and had so many students and parents chose instead of attend in class. It is convenient and highly support for students in many different way. In the other side, it has a limited things become disadvantage for students who taking classes at home such as communication to solve the problems, competition each other and experiences inspiration from teachers. Those are the most important things school offer to students. It is made valuable that distance learning never could gives to students.
The first and the obvious things that students would not benefit from distance learning is communication. Communication is the the person gives and exchanges information to the others, either verbal or non-verbal. For example, some students have watched video, and they still misunderstand and how would they figure out what they have learn, different teachers is different way to teach. Instead of video conferencing, school offers to students time to see teacher, professor to discuss their problems and find out what they were struggling with. That is why communication so important that distance learning can not offer to students.
The second advantage to being in class instead at home is competition. Competition is person versus or competitive with another person or group, each of which is trying to do better than all of the others. The best example is the one student in class got an highest score test, the others will do whatever it takes to get higher that score was. School always creating the competitive for students to participate, and that way makes students get more interesting at work help them to prepare for examination. That is the reason why competition is necessarily and advantage that distance learning would not have to offer students at home.
The last thing students could not get from online classes or video conferencing is the experiences and inspiration from teachers, professors. The experiences is the knowledge or skill gather from the pass; the inspiration is person with confidence and desire to do something that makes the the other people follow. During the class, not just the lesson from the math or English or Science, students would receive a life lesson from their teacher. Teachers could share the experience from their pass and motivation student who has the same the path, then students would not struggle with the same mistake they did. That was the most valuation that students can not get anywhere except in class.
Eventually, classes give students a lot of thing that they would not benefit from being at home. Attend to class offer students communication to easier solve their problems, created competition place for students and experiences inspiration from the teachers for students have a better way to learn. Those things that online learning students would never received. class is not just a lesson, it is also the small society that students should have before the real life. That was the reason why attend classes better than onine learning at home. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
7007EB8E265D | Working alone can be more beneficial because you can work at your own pace and we all have different levels, in that case we do not have to argue with anyone about putting your own ideas. Although other may think working with a group is better and more beneficial.
Also, working alone can be more beneficial because you can work at your own pace. Working at your own pace is very important, you will not make mistakes and if you do it is totally fine because that is where we learn from. You may be the type of person that likes working little by little every night instead of doing it all at once. You will not have people over your house horse playing instead of helping you out and working with you on your project. When working alone you do not have to worry about all these concerns because you will be the only responsible one for your own work.
Working alone is more beneficial and can be very helping, it will prepare you for the real world. When working alone you may write or put what you think is correct, your friends will not be there to tell you that you are incorrect. You might be a independent person and prefer to work by yourself. You do not have to worry about someone rushing you because you should know when the due date is. While working alone you just have to worry about you, and finishing your work of course.
Although, others may think it is more beneficial working with a group. Working with a group can bring a lot of distractions. Research determined that when it comes to group projects people complain and prefer to work independently. Also, why would you want to work with others if you do not know if they are in the same level as you. When working with a group you have to check up on your group members to see if they finished there part of the project, if they are not responsible enough to finish it themselves you have to fill in for them because it is a group project and project grade.
Does it not feel much better working alone? You can work at your own pace and we all do not have the same mentality, so we do not have to argue with anyone about putting your own ideas and what you think is correct. Let me tell you a little secret, working with a group can be pretty complicated. Always working alone, it is more beneficial. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
7033DB6BA12E | I agree because there might be some kids out there who say that they want shorter school time and maybe some don't want that but i think there should be shorter school time. The reason of that is because nowadays theirs youtube and most of the people have phones computers and TV's and so people can go learn stuff from phones,computers,and tv. And theres places that you can learn math too.
The reasons of why i think its fair for having shorter school time is because sometimes you learn something that you've learned already and in the other hand its just not fun anymore either i mean for some other kids they think its fun and some not. And also i've seen on twitter that they been hating on the guy who tells us if school is closed or not and people always hope that school is closed because no one is really looking foward to go to school on a monday and my opinion going to school on a monday is the worst and some other people might think the same as well.
Some celebreties became famouse for example Eminem who is a rapper he dropped out of highschool and he became famouse for something that he likes to do i would do the same if i didn't what to go to highschool but i wont because i have really good friends and all the years i've known them i just can't leave them like that.
I guess it just wont be fair y'know to leave someone you've known for awhile and just become famouse and while there in school working hard.
I guess we could all agree that we should have shorter school time because what if your doing something and you don't get to finish your project or something important you'll have to wait intill you get out of school and then come back and what if theres traffic and then you get home around 8:30 to 9:00. You wont have that much time to finish your project but if you live close to the school then i can't complain but i agree to this because like how i said we have phones,computers,and TV's and on the internet you could learn anything you want for an example you could learn about 10th grade stuff even though your an 8th grader maybe your interested in that.
My point here is that we should have shorter school time because nowadays we could learn by ourselfs and for the preschool kids and kindergarden kids they should stay there a little longer because they are toddlers and they can't learn anything by them selfs but for us we should i have shorter time in school hopefully you could understand. I don't want this to effect anyone but like it'll just make all the kids who go to school have more time when they have to do something important instead of coming home late and barely have anytime to finish there project or anything they need to do but thats my point of view. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
7065B172D758 | When you have a problem do you think to yourself, how can I do my best to fix this problem? American jazz legend Duke Ellington said,"A problem is a chance for you to do your best." In my opinion, I agree with Duke Ellington's quote. One reason, is if you don't try to do your best in a situation you could end up regretting your decision. Another reason, is if you try do your best in a situation you could end up learning something new. Lastly, if you don't put any effort try to resolve a problem you could end up back in that hole.
I agree with this quote because if you don't try to do your best in a situation you could end up regretting your decision. One reason, is the amount effort you put in to a problem could affect your future. Also, a chance to do your best to fix a problem could be a one time opportunity. One example, of this is about my cousin he could have been playing professional soccer but he didn't try his best on the tryout which made him not make the team. Lastly, if you don't do your best in a situation it could affect your life.
I also agree with this quote because if you try your best in a situation you could end up learning something new. First, if you try your best in a situation you can learn on what to improve on. One example, is about my brother he did his best on a test and got a 82 percent now he knows he has to improve in that subject. Another example, is when one of my friend's brother did his best in a race and lost which made him train more and harder to improve his speed. Overall, If you don't do your best you will not learn and improve from a situation.
Another reason, I agree with this statement is because if you don't try your best in a situation then you will end up back in the same hole. First, if you don't try to solve a problem then it will come back in to your life and you will have to deal with it again. First example, is about my younger brother who didn't try on a test and got a bad grade which made him retake the test. Also, if you try to solve a problem then you will learn from your mistakes and wouldn't commit the same mistake twice. Finally, it is important to do your best in a situation because it would make you improve yourself from your mistakes.
In conclusion, I agree with this quote because you should always try to do your best in a problem. First, you wouldn't regret at least trying to solve a problem. Then, you could learn ways to improve on, to help you solve the problem. Also, if you try your best in a problem then, when you have the same problem you will know how to solve it. Finally, if there is a problem it's also chance for you to show others what you can do. | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 5 |
709156BCF733 | Dear Principal:
I think students must have a least a B average to participate in sports. That way the students can bring their grades up. A lot of students would want to bring their grades up because they would like to participate in sports. That's a way students can bring up their grades. Maybe the students can bring their grade up and that way the students can work harder in class.
That way students can work hard and participate in a sport that they deserve for getting good grades. This policy may work so students can bring their grade up and stop failing their classes. One way they can bring up their up and be able to participate in sports is by turning in there homework and completing their work in class.
Here at SCHOOL_NAME we have a policy that says " If you have more than three (F)'s you cant participate in a sport". That's why a lot of students try to get a good grade, and that's why the students turn in all their work, in order to participate in a sport. Their is a lot of students in SCHOOL_NAME that don't have good grades and cant participate i | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
70996505E3B0 | Technology has a lot of the positive and negative side to it. In the positive side technology comes in handy a lot you can shop online , pay a lot of your bills online and do a whole lot. In the negative side you loose contacts with humans cause every person abuses technology , people always on their phones , people losing eye to eye conversion with each other.
technology will always have a good or bad side in way how humans use it.
In the positive way of technology , a lot people use technology to shop online , a lot of times people try to find the products that he or she wants to find in the store and its to expensive to buy in store , people find it more cheaper products online than outlet stores. Not only people shop online, people also use technology to buy programs that colleges recamend them to use. It helps a lot of people that are in college that do a lot of homework a lot teachers assign homework online than paper. technology always advance everyday in a good way to enjoy. A lot of high school students use technology to do homework for a class that the students miss that day he or she was absent.
technology keeps everyone in check and organized. But yet even if theres a lot of positive stuff about it ,
there's a lot negative things about technology.
In the negative part of technology ,
a lot people thats on their phone ignores the person that he or she was having a conversation with.
The main big problem right now is that people are abusing technology by texting and driving while using their phones , a lot of people are getting distracted on the road cause they want to answer their text message but most of the time people that answer gets into a car crash for getting distracted.
Theres always gonna be a bad and good ways about technology it all depends how humans use technology.
The way I see people using technology its good cause it a lot easier to organize important documents , shop online , doing homework for school and everyday technology will always advance each day.
The only problem thats bad about technology its that us humans getting distracted easily by using our phones , playing games on console , and getting distracted easily. Theres always gonna be a bad and good towards technology it all the depends how humans use it.
Technology is the best thing we have in our world. It makes life more easier for us to do stuff online. Technology will be there for us when we need it to organize documents , buy stuff online , and it will always advance. technology will always have a positive and negative side to it but most of the time its positive. it all depend how humans use it. thats what I think about my side technology the bad and the good. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
70B91D253E27 | I think that it's a bad idea to put more hours of school beacause after school people,students and teachers have to do important stuff like take there kids to soccer or go to a doctors appointment and thats the only time that we have free to do are important missions and there are teacher's that live far they could live in Generic_City and other places that are far. And if we make it longer there are going to be parent's that are going to be waiting for there child to take them to the football, soccer games and then when they come home its going to be late beacause like they want to change the hours they are not going to have enough time to do anything there going to go home to homework and then when you know it it arleady like 8pm and you have to go to bed. And we arleady wake up at 7am and then coming back home and it's like 5pm-6pm it's stress out kicking out stuff that you do but now you can't to beacause they put more time in School.
And i think it sucks beacause there are kids that go to my school that live in Generic_City and it take along time to come to school and go back home from school beacause i've lived in Generic_City before and it suck when i stay after school i get home like at 7pm-8pm and it's sucks so it better to not make school longer beacause there are kid that live pretty far and there are going to get home late and then they have to get there homework done too. so it's dummy hard work to get that on time. And us as chidren its going to ruined are shecdule and are parent's to maybe we have not go to soccer or any activity that we take just beacause they put more time in school it going to suck being in a class room for 80 mintues now. it's to be trieding.
They meant if we get a half an hour of more school they start giving us more homework then we mostly get and doing that for just 3 hours that we get just beacause they want to add more time it's going to be hard for everybody and they teacher if they live far it's going to be hard beacause at 6pm thats when all rush hour are so much traffic and there going to come home late and when they come home late there going to be grading work and then waking up at 5pm to go back to work and that trieding doing that smae rountine for there whole life it hard I dont even go to work and i'm like wow if that happens it going to be bad.
Another thing that why would should have on more half an hour is beacause we wake up early and have another half hour kicking ints not far if they want to do that they should a least change they school time and wake up like at 8am or something beacuase its not far wake up early and then leaving so late it should be the oppsite wake up late and leave school early it going to be better beacause then everybody going to kbe happeir no one is going to be in a bad mood and it's going to be chill and then .
Anothe thing way we should have an half an hour of school left it's beacause we the 8th grader we get lunch at 1:40 and then haveand half and hour of school were going to have lunch at 2:10 or something I arleadly hate that and i dont wanna be starving beacause then i wont to my work beacause how hungry I i'm going to get mad i'm going to get hangry and having busdriver taking the kid home at 6pm its going to suck beacause they need there time too for they could do stuff and have time with there family's and there going back and forth it sucks for them having ti puck up kids late and stuff and taking them home. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
70D93EF3CE5F | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote "To be yourself in the world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment." Currently your accomplishments, acts, and attitude speak of you and how great you are, around the world many of the people think do something else is a act of a humble person for example: on your career, your area of work, in the school you do something it's not your responsibility,the people gesture the big heart has and how important it is show to the world you trying make something else to dial the different. I am agrees because when being yourself the people see something special on you and try to be a person you like to learn new things maybe in the first try thats no gonna be perfect but you never give up to be different around a lot of person. three reasons for being yourself is important: first other persons gonna be like you, second you gonna be inspiration for everyone, third your accomplishments can change the mentality of many people around you.
First being yourself is important because other person they gonna be like you, in a situation like you always do the extra mile, is when you help other no matter it's no your job example: in the school you explain to your friend how resolve any equation of math but is not your job in the class, because you are only a student and it is the teacher responsibility of the teacher explain to your friend, and the accomplishment many person they gonna be like you
Second being yourself is important because you gonna be inspiration for everyone, in many area like in your house, neighborhood, school, college, including church. For example: if you neighbor look it you clean you yard or your house or helping others neighbors, like cut the grass and help each other you can be motivation for other person, thats how complete your accomplishment of be inspiration for other person.
Last being yourself is important because your accomplishment can change the mentality of others, than the people see it your progressive on your life doing thing the other people ask them self, how they did it?, you can leave a massage and tell them how you did it , and if you did it they can do it too. For example: in the family always we can see different type of family, one they have job but with lower salary, and one with their own company, if we are the type of person like to help your own family you gonna transmit that like good vibes, hope, etc.
In conclusion, like the author said is constantly we like a humans trying to do extra things to have a great result and accomplishment in the life, and more then 50 percent of the world do that because the majory of the person see the benefits of help to others, and the most important the world see a positive side of this massege that the author said always do something else and our greatest accomplishment can be example for another person around of us because more than example we can be inspiration for many people in the world. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
70E490A83717 | To begin with many students enjoy summer than winter. Making winter break longer than summer and a week off in spring and fall is not a good idea. When students come back from break regardless of the season they most likely cannot retain information, because they have been gone for a long period of time. Having a longer winter break than summer is a waste of time. Why should educators feel that a longer winter break than summer could help retain information?
In my point of view having a longer winter break would not be enjoyable students like the fact that they can be able to enjoy their break. Even though students cannot retain information on learning targets, at least it wont waste time because having a longer winter than summer would extend time causing time to be lost in the school year. Changing the season of the break would not be enjoyable either cause of cold weather, it would certainly not help students to remember the information they learned when they were in school. Whats a break if you cannot enjoy it?
In addition what maybe the students can take into consideration is to review some of the things learned, during the free time on their break. Teachers should assign online classes and review's for students to help memorize information at least once a week. That way when people return to school others wont be so behind on things and can remember the objectives taught. A longer winter break could possibly help the scholar remember what was learned, if they were to revise and analyze work that was given to in the past in this situation.
In conclusion changing the season would not help students retain information and is not a good idea , unless the individual were to spend time studying a few times out of the break. Overall there should not be a longer winter break than summer. | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
7101C080C12C | What if your school wanted to add one hours and a half would you agree or disagree? I presently think that no one would like that like dont like that idea at all and let me tell you why I would int like that. First if you dont like school that much like me you would do what ever you can to stop that. Most likely be that people will get tired really fast. Finally not that much people would come to school they would not like it even more.
Some ways you might like this is that. They might add a day to the week end which would be more days per week end that sounds good to me. Another thing that they can do is add lease day to the school year I think that people would really like that and other ways are. You learn a lot more thing for next year which is really help full for the next year of classes you have. Finally you simply like school you like seeing friends in school and you like learning more things.
How you may be able to stop it? will first you have to go to your principle and him/her how you can you stop this form going on well they might say get a exact amount of people to sign a paper. Well then if they ask you to do that then you know that you have to ask every one in the school to sign the paper if you really don't want this to happen. First you know you got to go to you best friends and people that dont really like to stay in school that long. However if it's not that much people yet you know you have to go to every one in the school asking them if they dont want a hours and a half to be added and at the end of that i might have the number you need of people.
Do you want this to happen at your school but your school isnt do it? Well like the other one go to your principle and ask them if they can add another hour and a half but and another day to your week end or less day of the school year. See if other student want to join you if they want less day of the school year or a another day addend to the week end like a Monday because every hates Mondays right. If a lot of people agrees you might get this to happen in you school. However there is going to be some one to not like you idea and they might go wrong for you but I think you can get this.
So now that you know how to do this it say do it. If you want this to happen then ask your principal if this can happen in any way. If you want it to happen in your school then do it. If it's happening but you dont want it to happen then stop it. However think what is going to happen if i do it so think what your going to do before you do it. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
71129FE0D18F | Some schools districts allow students to graduate within three years. This is a good idea because of legal statuses, not having financial support, and also some students having almost all required credits.
One reason is my friend Generic_Name. My friend Generic_Name lives in Texas he is going to graduate with the class of 2020. Due to his mom's immigration statutes they left Virginia to go to Texas in the summer of 2019 to seek for help. In fear that his mother would be deported in less than a year he decided he would finish a year earlier than what was expected. This year Generic_Name is taking high level class while still being ahead of the game.
Another reason is some students have no financial support. Some students want to go into the work force but do not want to effect their academics. Graduating early would be a great solution for them. Even some want to join the work force to earn money for college or help their families financial problems.
Lastly some students have almost all credits to graduate due to taking high school classes at an earlier level. For a standard diploma in the state of Virginia you need 3 math, 3 science,4 history, 4 English, health grade 9 and 10, 2 sequential fine art, and a language. Due to some students taking some classes at earlier levels it dulls it all down for them in high school.
Graduating within three years is a good idea it helps students end up with their high school diploma while also helping there problem. I agree that gradating within three years is a good idea for students who need and choose it. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
71131D46F019 | Some schools use cell phones in the classroom for educational purpose. People think it is a good idea for students to have phones for educational purpose. I believe students should not have phones in classrooms because students could easily get distracted, they will not have the chance to learn better, and having a phone should be a privilege.
First reason why I believe we should not have cell phones for educational purpose is ,students will get distracted. They will start using their phones for other purposes that are not educational or what their teacher has recommended. Students will start texting instead of doing their assigned work the teacher gave them. Students will start thinking it is okay for them to take out their phones when it is time for learning.
Second reason i believe it is wrong for students to have cell phones in classroom. Students will not have the chance to learn how it use to be. Students that actually take notes have a better chance to memorize what they learned and doing better in tests. When teachers do hands on work during class students can learn and teach their peers.
Last reason why i believe students should not have phones during class is ,phones are a privileged to have. Teachers should not allow phones during class time because students will not know when is the right time to have phones during class. Even if they put strict rules students will find a away to go around those rules.
In conclusion, this is why I believe some schools should not allow phones in classrooms. Students will get distracted, they will not get the chance to learn more, and having phones is a privilege. I believe schools should not allow students to use their phones during class. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
7138786DA45C | Is it a good idea to finish high school in three years than four years?
Four years is to long to graduate from high school. In four years you do a lot of things you can participate in many activities. For example: sports, clubs and help the teachers. High school is an important and necessary step to get to the successful, is a requirement in life because of the education and the things that you should learn. The school will help you in life to know how to act and guide you in what is better and you get a better life with school.
School should be just 3 years instead of four. In four years the student learn more, but I don't think is necessary to be in the school all that time. Three years of high school is a challenge. The student have to be after school and take classes during summer is a lot of stress and a lot of things to do, but is not impossible. If the student want to success in life it doesn't matter how much time it will take the only thing that is important is to accomplish the goals.
I am agree with the idea to finish high school in 3 years, I think that 3 years are enough for the student to learn all the stuff that needs. high school is hard but not impossible to finish, and is a good idea to push the students to graduate before, there are better opportunities and the only thing that I think when someone is telling me that I have to be more time in the school is "I'll be old when I'll finish the school" and that doesn't sound good. It's better 3 years than 4 because, you get a job, you get on the college earlier and you accomplish your goals before what you expect.
Most of the kids are looking for end the school early, is a good motivation for the students that they will end the school early. In that way maybe the majority of the teenagers will be more focus on what they are doing, and have a better future. The majority of the people when is young always think about that they leave school because they don't want to end when they get old. That's why I like the idea. Before you finish high school, before you get in the college and you do not finish the university to old. Plus, you have better opportunities and also you don't waste your time.
Even four years is not a bad idea because you do more and you learn more and you can get more information. You have the same facilities even if you finish early or you take more time. Four years Is good but not all the students like to do the same thing in that time and they get bored. Four years is a good option, but three years or less sound better. Both options have a good opportunity to be in a good university. It just depends on what the student wants to do and what decision it will make. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
7155F142CE58 | Some people believe that we accomplish more if we are always doing something. Others think that inactivity also serves a purpose. They argue that they are not focus and they are not learning. One should always accomplish a goal if one puts their mind to it. they gain new knowledge,skills, and information.
If one has the knowledge he can accomplish anything. I wanted to learn how to make a dog house. I had no knowledge on how to build a dog house. My friend had told me that the school was having a science fair and that they were giving knowledge on how to build a dog house. I went and I had got the knowledge that i needed. I had the knowledge to stat it and to finish it. The dog house came out looking pretty good with the help of knowledge that I had. If one has the knowledge,skills, and information he can accomplish anything.
If one has the skills to accomplish a goal he can can do anything. When i was in school I wanted to improve my skills in English. I would ask mt teacher to give me tips on what I needed to improve. She would tell me me not to use the word you. By the end of the year I was not using the word you. She had told me that my English skills were improving because I had been working on it all year. She told me that i was a strong writer. If one has the knowledge, skills , and information he can accomplish anything.
If one has information he can accomplish any goal in his way. When i was in high school I wanted to take welding as a class. I had no information on how to join the class. I asked my friend on how i could join he told me that I had to go to the office to get the information that I needed. With the information that I got I now had to fill it out so that I could join the class next year. if one has the knowledge,skills, and information he can accomplish anything.
If everybody in the community had the Knowledge ,skills, and the information then everybody would accomplish a goal. Although others think that they should not be focused on accomplishing a goal. One should have theses skills so that they can accomplish anything that they want. | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
71A9098715EB | Self-reliance is better then hoping someone makes the best decisions for you. This is because people need to follow there own instincts in life no one knows them like they do and what is best for them. Why would anyone want someone to make decisions for them, People will always want what is best for them so if people trust someone to pick a important life decision what if they pick something that will help them in there long run and not you.
My older brother 5 years ago was done with school and was planning his career he wanted to be a engineer but my mom and dad wanted him to be doctor; He made his own decision at the end and now lives his best life with a kid and wife. If he had chose to be a doctor he would be in school still and never meet his wife. This shows how important it is to trust your self even if no one agrees with you.
People will say that someone with more life experious will help others more then they can help them-self but they can make it so much further then others. Im not saying people should't have rolemodle just don't do something because someone else did it do it better then they ever could. My friend Generic_Name wanted to be a football player his whole life he was the best in our middle school team, but his mom and dad hated the idea they thought all football players end up hurt so he did't play in high school he did't like any other sports so he just went to school and went home. this left Generic_Name with not that many friends and he is sad and deperested today.
Making your own decisions all the time can be hard and at some point you may fail but if you keep trying you can make it big one day. There are many reasons to have someone make decisions for you it would be much less stressful and you would have less chance of failing, but everyone need to grow up at some point and do what is best for them, You can't live under someone your whole life at some point you will be on your own.
Those are the reasons I believe everyone should make there own decisions in the long run you will be 10 times the person if you trust your-self and do it your way. A person should never put there life in the hand of anyone but them-self. If someone stops talking to you because they dont like a decision you make and did't do what they said to do then they don't deserve to be in your life. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
71B72E8890F1 | Summer is a hot and nice season and most students need time to enjoy the break and here is why, so first off most students go on vacation out of state or country to visit family members and they stay longer than three to four weeks. When visitng family you need time to be with them and enjoy time with them, because you wont get to see them often when you leave. Even if the student stays for two weeks and the student returns they will not have enough time to do their summer assignments or to gather materials for school. One month is not enough time and not fair when us students go 10 months straight to school, two months and couple days is a good amount of time to relax.
Also when it is summer there are plenty of activities to do like go to national parks, amusement parks, water parks, play outdoor sports, have gatherings with family members, and relax at home. I mention these type of activities because they are not available in other seasons like fall, winter, and spring. There should not be a week break in fall, because first there are no special holidays or reason why we should have week off, also if no school for a whole week and Columbus Day people will start to get the habit not to come to school. Although a longer break would be nice for the winter, all we need to have is two weeks for Christmas and New Years.
We need to have more time to learn and be prepared for future exams, especially if some students do not have good grades and are falling behind on their work. Some may argue that two months and a couple days is too much, but parents would not like it if their child was starting to stay home and not go to school. We need to have all the time in the world to be educated and be caught up on all missing assignments. Finally it might seem that most students will forget information during the summer, it will not matter because the student will not be learning the same information as last year. | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
71BA665B1B31 | I think that imagination is not more important then knowledge, so I disagree with this statement that Albert Einstein made. It know for a fact that I use knowledge more than imagination.
Some reasons why i disagree are if you don't know anything you cant imagine anything. You might be asking your self why? But the simple answer is that if you don't know anything, you also won't know what to imagine. Without knowledge you can't imagine and create or do stuff.
Next reason is that, I think knowledge counts as experience and experience could save you from getting hurt or killed. I know that if I got burned because I sipped from o mug full of hot coffee, I would not sip from it again until it cools down because I have experienced the burn.
My last reason is that, sometimes when i use my imagination, I use it to create or do something and make it creative. But you can't make it creative if you dont know what creative you are looking for. One example is when i had to make my name out of macaroni and cheese.
That was my reasons and what I think, what do you think? In conclusion I disagree because its just obvious to me that knowledge is more important than imagination. Do you agree or disagre with me? | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
71F12F9F01DE | I agree with this prompt many cases it is impossible say the people but i will tell you something we can, many peoples says is impossible to change the world, and you know what we can is something is on our head that keeps blocking, i think it is our priority number one, change the world, change our vision of watch our environment,
the people needs to change to see the real thing that is happening on our environment, change one little thing is a big change does not matter what but the change began, i would say among the world and our life, do you think our life are safe i say no because the global warning it is on us, and we can change it of course, the thing is nobody it is gonna get up until someone do, what we have been doing is not wright, the change is coming. We have been doing a lot of work every day and you know what for global warning, know let's talk about the people many peoples say can't change them self because is hard, it is impossible, no one will see change on my, and many other thing but peoples need to change their behavior, among the day peoples feels tired because they had bad day or they do many work. but i will never give up because as the tree can change the leaf to another color i can change the world one thing i can change myself but we can change it as a team with many other peoples, is better together than alone the change will even bigger and bring many others countries and join us, if i can change myself i can change another peoples to see the real life in what we live. I want to talk about me i really want to change myself because many other peoples needs me to help them be courteous, kind, responsible, on time and try to do better on what i do, change myself and the life of peoples it is my priority number one, if i know what is write and what is wrong i know what i gonna do change the impossible to possible nothing is this world is perfect nobody but we have to support other in what they need, we have to be happy of our self from the right thing we have been doing and up coming. I like technology and electricity those are the to matter i want to study with technology i would like to build a personal robot because everybody wants one and help in the day with the task of the home i know that will cause dangerous because can damage itself with an update or make it crazy but that can change the life yes everybody will be happy and peoples can rest better, with the electricity i would like to do the first smart phone that can charge with the sun because can not be generate a lot of energy. Is never too late you can make many thing as you can but if you make it you are right is not wrong make mistake i can tell you one thing is good because you can learn from them if you never make mistake you are wrong the mistake are the key to successful to change the bad thing to the right. You are my passion to live my mom say and you can change the world or may be not because in your head there is your world where you can build many thing to help peoples maybe you can not build a big change but one little thing is more bigger that i big thing, the change is coming very soon around the corner. but the change is not enough many peoples think the opposite and they never will change their minds that the bad thing are right and is very sad see peoples thinking about it they need to open their eyes and see what is really happening around their environment. It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change this prompt is easy to understand because in the actuality there are many impressions that can never change of course others can do it but not a lot will be agree, sometimes i don't know what to write i write what i see, i heard, and touch my experiences to change are really small but the dreams come true sometimes not in the real life but in your head yes if i could dream a big dream to change world and the life for the peoples who need a little help to make their dreams come true and they always will say thanks because you change my whole life and others now is is my turn to change other you did your part now i have to do my part thank you very much. The behavior in the school, in the house, in the community, in the country, in the neighborhood, and with the peoples who you talk those are part of the change, something ugly to something beautiful the change we have to bring it from the house and the teachers are those who change our self from the way to study and get a better future, The most part of everything is get started if we don't do that nobody is gonna get up until i make the first right thing, my teacher say it is important change the way thing are build and get the point you want it, i love the way i think to change anything but i need some extra help many cases i say if i could do one thing is make something like a video or video animation and upload to the social media will be great because many peoples will see the video and they are gonna say this is what i want it, this is what i was looking for and the hole word will see it, i like many others prompt but this is not difficult to say something nothing is impossible everything is possible if you never give up everything is gonna be right and the change you are gonna do is going to be the one of many peoples will be proud of you all, and i am going to finish with this last word, everything you think is wright is write if is the opposite you are right as well just never give up and continue strait, may be if every people can think and put the most of his part will be great at this point you change it, and i will tell you because you already have been change the bad thing to the right the only thing is wait until the process is complete, i make mistakes and you too and we know if we fixed we can change what you want and the make it possible the life is passing too fast and we have to live it like is the last day of our life and never give up. i will try my best the change is near to you. | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1.5 | 2 |
71F1B96A18BB | In most student's summer time,they learn different things from their break,such as work experience,new knowledge from a book,and tradition about other country;In this cause,teacher's designed is not a good choices for student's project,because teacher can not make suitable choices for students,so the way can help students more understand about what they can do in the summer project is student's designed.
When the summer break start,student can make a lot choices about their plan in the summer,for example,they can stay home,travel to somewhere,or work at some place they like;Most student's summer break have a lot different,they learn different things from their break,teacher could not really know what happen in student's break,this is why student need designed their own title.
In half way of the summer,some student might not even start making their project,in this cause if teacher give student a hard title,such as"after you read this book,what your opinion and what you learn from this book?",then student have try rush through the book,and start making a project,it will make student have a bad project content,if student can decide they own project title,such as"base on your break,what you learn from your travel,it can be anywhere",if student can create their own project title,it will be a lot interesting and easy.
Most student want to learn a new things from interesting activity,and spend a time on those things,and student always know what whey like to do,they can create title base on animals,vehicles,or their life experience,it will be so much fun and efficiency will improve,if they can decide their own project title.
Between teacher's designed and student's designed,student always like to make their own choices,they can learn things from activity they are interesting,talk and share experience with their friends,and have a easy project in their summer time,that's why student's designed better then teacher's designed. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
71F27422C5FC | My friend, Generic_Name, is a very good student, he will not go to bed unless he finishes his homework. However, because the school has changed the system from five-day school week to four-day school week, he had to do more works than usual. He cannot sleep for a few days, he did not done all his works, and his grades tend to be bad. His parent decided to move him to another school. Changing from five-day school week to four-day school week has lots of disadvantages, mainly these three reasons: students do not have time to do more works, students move to other school due to the pressure of homework at school tend to rises, and students do not focus on learning because of three-day weekend.
To start with, students do not have time to do more works. let say that if we have an extra day to review all works that we done to prepare for the test on the next day, it would done well than when we just have more few minutes. For example: before the school change the schedule, I have a whole day to review my works to do the test, now I have to rush off my feet to review my works and that make me completely exhausted. Whenever the test would start on Monday, the students will have three-day weekend to do so, that is a completely waste of time.
To continue, students move to other school due to the pressure of homework at school tend to rises. For example: My friends, Generic_Name and Generic_Name, they are good students, but because their homework is too much, they could not done all homework, they had to stop all the club activities to catch up their classes, their grades went bad, so their parents decided to move them to other school to help them study easier.
Some people believe that the school has four-day school week is better because they can have more time to learn and relax, they are wrong because having four-day school week make their time rush and their have to run to catch up the schedule.
And the last, students do not focus on learning because of three-day weekend. For example: Generic_Name, a student from my class, he usually absents from school, since the school change the schedule, he started to go to school more often, but he did not study, he went around and talked what he did in the last three-day weekend, his grade was bad, but he did not care.
In conclusion, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week to conserve energy and resources, but the school does not have to because school is where people come and learn new world, to explore more what are we capable and able to do, we are not wasting the resources, so why we have to adopt four-day school week? Please write a letter to the local government of the city to change the schedule of our school. We are not using resources to waste, we are using resources to make a key to open the "Success Gate" leads to the bright future for our generation and the next America's generations. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
7203112033A1 | Hello my name is Generic_Name and I am here to tell you why I think, distance learning is a good idea, rather then a bad idea. I will be giving you three diffrent points of view, and why it wouldn't be a bad idea for some of us. My first opinion on distance learning would be, maybe he or she gets bullied for the classes they take and dont want to be in school no more. My second opinion would be if your not in school range and your parents can't drive you to school on time, then you could easily stay home, pull out your phone, computer, or tablet and do you work on it. My third opinion would be why not try it you know maybe you'll like it.
1 OPINION: Everyone one knows school is very hard for everyone, nowadays school is based off of how you dress, or the way you walk, or just in general who you are. I used to get bullied in school a lot but ever since I switched to online school I've never felt better I get all my work done, the teachers are so nice to me, there very patient and polite, and I dont have to put up with nobody's crap from school. It was a good switch for me, and it'll be a good switch for you too!
2 OPINION: Every where you live there is always one problem, school range. I know its hard for everyone to find a ride to school or maybe it isn't, but say one day you move and u can't find a ride to school the next week and you dont have a ride cause your parents can't take you cause they're running late for work, or you just missed the bus and your house is to far from the school. Well that's why you've been given the option for online school. Would you take it ? I would because iw ouldn't have to stress on trying to get up on time, and trying on clothes for school, or finding something to eat all in a rush. I love online school cause i can get up at whatever time i want to. I wouldn't ave to make my parents late for work every now and then. Also you can start your assignments on your time, say like your not busy u can start it then but you have to do them because there are new assignments everyday. So think about it for a minute and see why it might be a good option for you.
3 OPINION: Why not just try it. I think you guys or girls, or whatever should give it a try because not everyone has the privilege to have sort of secondary learning challenge I think that if your try it just like I did. The price for online school is around from 150-200 dollars, I know it might sound a little exspensive but its worth every penny you spend. So dont hesitate to try it you'll love it.
In conclusion I think it is a good thing to do distance school because it gives you benefits you've never gotten before and it might turn out to be the best decision you ever made in your son, or daughter life. So dont hesitate to call, call right now if you can I love it and they will to. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
72095D288A5B | Establishing a homework club would be a great idea because students can get help. Another reason this is useful to student is because they could finish all her/his work and get more time to do what they want at home. Lastly It gives them an chance to learn more.
Students can get help in a homework club easily. One way they can get help is by asking a teacher for help. Another way a student can get help is asking a friend for help. They can get help with a teacher and a friend. This is how students can get help easily.
Students can finish there work at school. When they finish there work at school they got more time to do whatever they want. They could play games. They could read a book. they could take frequent naps. In conclusion people can do more things when there done with there work.
This gives them a chance to learn more because they can ask more questions and get there work done.
In conclusion they should establish a homework club for the people that need help. Also for the people that want to finish there homework. Thats why they should establish homework club | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
722C353F2831 | I agree with being honest because holding the truth for so long can hurt a persons feeling wether you know them for long. Being honest is a good choice because it is over to get easily without lying and worrying about it later on about it and what you did. Lying about something you did do could get you to make the person believe that they aren't your friend or aren't special to you but telling to truth means that they can also tell honesty and how loyal you are.
Lying would make it hard for you in your life (future) and the people who care a lot for you because they wouldn't trust you ever again or talk to you. It'll make it harder for you to communicate with them when you see them or try to talk. Later on your life lying would make you regret what you did and why you did it because you'll lose someone in your life as well as the person you love.
Being honest with you family and friends would be the best choice because later on your life you dont have worry about any regrets on your actions on what you did. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
7231635A63C8 | The technology has improve this years, allows people to makes think much faster than before and the technology every day its going to keep improving. I think that Technology makes thighs more easy for everyone but especially for does that cant walk, speak or heard. Technology makes thinks much easy and quickly for everyone, If you dont have a car you can shop online. People can buy food, materials, video games, books and everything that in necessary. Technology also makes more easy to talk with people that is far away and you miss. Last year I call my grandmother and she never had a cellphone before, she was surprise that she was talking to me event that she is far away from me that makes me so happy and I was thinking that if technology does not exist I dont know how to communicate whit does people that are far away from me.
Technology is very important this days, for everyone but if we used for good because their is some people that use technology to do bad thinks and that way technology have some negative effects on peoples lives. The limitation of human contact has something to do with technology because there is some people that dont know how to use technology they think that technology is the only way and they feel like there is no other friends but that wrong because technology its a tool for human and if we know how to used its going to makes us life much easy.
In my opinion technology its one of the best tool that we have, but we have to lean how to used because it can helps us a lot and makes us much easy many thinks, but there is only one rule we have to used for good. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
7248792ECAC9 | Many people believe that success consists of going from failure. because we all human making mistake in our life. being faliure is good for must of peoples. however we all taking lesson from faliure to faliure to be come success in our life. for many resons: fristly,must of students, agree with this statement that Minister Winston Churchill once said. and secondary, part of students did not believe in this statement. however they are thanking we do not want to failure in our life or tests. we want to success once time. previosly must of people agree failure is key is success.
for example: Abraham Lincoln, one of the 16th president of the U.S, once time said in during in civil war said to his people or audience, we have to be strong, does not matter for us how hard is life is it . and he continue his speech he said. whatever success, going from failure to faliure without loos any of enthusiasm. he said never contrition in your past. the constant to be succsess consists of going from failure. and aslo he siad that, this a good convenience for everone in consequence Lincoln, said you guys have to conscious and be awake all the time. this confirm to everyone or to all of us key of failure is in success.
other peoples , did not agree what Abraham Lincoln said. must of them said this is not compulsion or compulsory, they said this is over las conclusive in our decide we want to success one time without lossing any enthusiasm or failure.
In my opinion that " succcess consists of going from failure to failure without loos of enthusiasm. we agree in this prompt. because before that i said faliure of key is becoming in success in our life we should all battle with failure we all know that way is become austerity. we have to fight with failure we did not want to win us. we want to success,in improve our self.
Many people making a mistake in thier life some of them success, and most of them failure. this is our life.
no mather success congsists of going from failure to faliure. some people dismal when they got failure in thier life.
They are become depression most of them and finally when they got success in thier life they are become happy, and depreciation. of course that" success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
72635AF44FA7 | Some schools use cellphones in the classrooms for educational purposes. Allowing students use their cellphones in the classroom may have a positive effect in the education of the students, who use their cellphones frequently. In other words, it will make students feel better about doing their classwork. Because it will help students finish their school work or homework, check their grades and assignments, and students will learn better.
One positive effect of allowing students use their cellphones in the classroom is that students will have a chance to finish their classwork or homework. Some students have classes that left many homework, so that means that they may need more time to finish their assignments. Moreover some students have personal issues, for example; Sometimes I can not focus in do my homework because I may have a problem that blind my mind and that makes me feel stressful, and that does not let me work on it. Also some students have jobs after school, for example. I have a job after school and sometimes my tiredness is huge that it does not let me finish my homework, and I can tell that it is really difficult, so having this experience I think that it would be really good that school allow students use their cellphones in the classrooms to educational purposes.
Another reason is that students will have the chance to check their grades or assignments. Some students miss school and they probably does not if have assignments, or they does not have time to check it in home. Most of the students forget easily that they have homework, for example; Sometimes when I get home and I started doing some of my labors and when I notified it is already time to sleep, so they next day I do not have any time to finish it. Therefor it will be good to most of the students check what they are missing during class, and they can probably ask the teacher for permission if they can work on what they are missing. Also ask for help to the teacher if they does not know how to do it, for example; I had a friend that math is hard for him, so he check his assignments in the classroom and ask the teacher for help to understand better, so I think it will help students to get their grades better.
Some people say that the allow of using cellphones can cause a negative effect is because it will distract students, for example; some teachers say that students will be doing something else, like texting or playing video games, in other words students will not pay attention in class. Whatever they are incorrect because students will a better way to learn, in which one they will feel comfortable. The point is make feel that they can learn in an interesting way, for example; Some teachers let students play trivia games on their cellphones, so students can learn and have a good time doing it. They will learn better because most of the things that students look in their phones they are capable to memorize it. May be the pass generations think that the use of too much technology, like allow the use of cellphones in the classrooms is a bad idea because it will make our brains slow is not true it just help us to learn in a better way.
In conclusion, the school allowing the use of cellphones in the classroom will have a positive effect because it will help students finish their school work or homework, check their grades and assignments, and they will learn better. We are the new generation and the future of the next one, we have the help of technology to get a better knowledge. The future is on our hands and make it easy is our decision. They are just finding better ways for us to learn and educate better because they want us to succeed in school, like in our lives. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
7270750C775E | MEMORANDUM
I See no problem not a big essue about using cell phones at school,a lot of students need the cell phones to stay informed or to keep in contact with the parents,students can use cell phone in case of an emergency at school. Cell phones are a safe thing for the students at this times. Some students don't have a way to search a subject or a problem because they don't have a computer with,so the cell phone is faster, and small easy to look through,share ideas with other students,point of view about a subject,political opinions,stay informed what is going on outside of school,students have to be informe about everything that happens outside of school,bloquing students devices can cause a bad effect and this will make then find other way to brake the rules again,and get what they want .I think students should be allowed to use cell phones for this reasons.
However, some students can take to other side,and don't pay atenttion in class because of the cell phones,a big part use cell phones to play games,or get distracted with music,and this can affect a lot of other students in the class,use to much of the cell phones also affect the social midia. Using social midia at school can cause a bad point of view of the school,examples of it can be recording fights, or sexual things. Most teachers don't allow studenst using cell phone during class because students can be out of the subject that the teacher is trying to teach,this can be a rock inside the boot.
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72732FD01203 | "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow".
In my opinion, I agree with this quote because, if you do not try to do better everyday, you are not going to reach your purpose. When you have the experience, on doing something you have to keep doing it, and you will improve each day. If you keep working on something that you have already work on it, and you don't stop focused on, it will make you grow. The more things you learn the more prepared you will be in your life.
My first reason that support my response, is that if you don't keep trying to do better everyday, you are not going to complete your goal. If you keep trying your best and doing what you like to do you will grow each day. Its important that you try your best everyday not only you will grow in your life but you are going to make yourself proud as well. For example, some people have their goals but they don't try their best.
My second reason that support my response is that when you have the experience on doing something you most keep doing it, and you will improve each day. Every time you try to improve, its a good opportunity for you to grow. The experience you have will make your future better. If you work on something that you have already work on it, and you don't stop focused on it will make your life easier. The more you work on something the fastest you will see the different in your life. For example, in my experience every time I know how to do something and I keep practicing, on it I get to improve myself.
My third reason that support my response is that the more things you learn the more prepared your will be in your life. If you try to learn more things and not just stay focused in just one thing will make you to be able to grow. Everyday you most have the purpose of learning new things. Learning new things each day, makes a person specialized and all the things you know. For example, in my experience when I try to learn more about something, its easier for me to talk about it.
To conclude, I agree with the author Ralph Waldo Emerson's statement. The more you know about something, the best future you will have. If you focused on doing good everyday you will grow. Trying to do something you have experience with will make you grow. Working on your purpose will make you have a better life. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
72765D1D4721 | Should we as students learn from home or school ?. Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I strongly disagree with this because some students would not attend the classes from home, some students can cheat on a test or quiz while they are at home, and the final reason is that this can make teachers lose their jobs as teaching and make some students drop out of school.
Many people believe that learning at home by a way of online or video conferencing is a great idea to attend classes from home. In my opinion, It's a bad idea because some students would not attend their classes from home. For example, students can wake up late for these online classes and forget about them throughout the whole day. In another case students won't do anything at home because they are at home relax and doing nothing but, just watching tv and playing video games. What if a student gets sick at home ? they won't do the work that is due while they are at home, some while take like the whole week off and not do anything at all. That's my first reason why we shouldn't attend school from home.
My second reason why students shouldn't attend classes from home is because some studennts can cheat on a test or quiz while they are at home. For example, students can search up the answers on online or use textbooks to help them out at home. I say this because they will use the internet or a textbook because they know that there's no teacher watching them cheat on the test or quiz while they are at home taking it. Students always find a way to cheat and plus if they take a test or a quiz at home, they are for sure going to cheat on it because they know that there isn't any teachers telling them to put their phones away or notes. That's my second reason why we shouldn't attend school from home.
My final reason why students shuldn't attend classes from home is because this can make teachers lose their jobs as teaching and make some students to drop out of school. For example, what if students don't attend their classes at home and also what if the ones that actually do their work do bad on it ?. Teachers can be balme for this because the way they teach it throughout online or video conferencing. This puts teachers in a bad situtation because that means they are not doing well while they are teaching online or video conferencing. Another example is, some students can just drop out of school while they do this at home. For example, if they don't do any work at home they might just drop out of school without telling anyone. Students can give up easily and just contiune their life without any education. That's my final reason why students shouldn't attend classes from home.
In conclusion, some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I strongly disagree because some students would not attend the classes from home, some students will cheat on a test or quiz while they are home, and the final reason is that this can make teachers lose their jobs as teaching and make some students to drop out of school. So in my case you should talk with your principle about this offer, unless there's a sicknees happening throughout the world and it's making school to shut down and do online classes. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
72766FE38307 | dear principal i think they should help to do require community service because some kids don't community service. what about who gets in bigger trouble how to are require to do community service. the kids not in trouble don't how to do community service. it's a good a idea. do you like my option. some people don't like to do community service. they say to much work .i say it not lot work to if you help out. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
727DEC0706F0 | Most employers are looking for specific characteristics in a potential employee. Many people may not have experience and never but I'll be a great candidate to hire because I'm hard-working and I'm responsible.
I'm a great candidate that employers are looking for because I spend time volunteering at school and working with job owners as a helper. I take care of people kids and work as a school bookkeeper all school year. however, some people may think having more experience is better than being responsible, having experience help but having responsible help employers trust you more with important job. But I manged how many people check out book out of school and I clean the library some times. Later in the year i volunteer at a two company has a filer. I plan paper for employer because they know that I'm responsible to do the job and get done.
In addition, Im a hard-working person because I have a job and play sport but I my time to volunteer some time. I do a lot of work so I don't have to do anything later or the next day. I was a food stocker at my job but now I'm a manager. Because I work every day and put all my heart to complete my job every day. I never miss a day at work are late I come to work ready I check if every is done if not I do it before the store open and set plan for the day. I put one hundred percent in to everything I do in life to finish with my task. In fact, most people are lazy and don't want to do any work are complete any task there boss gave them, but a hard-worker will get the job done than a lazy person. But I may not have any experience but I'm hard-working and responsible to do my job on time and responsible to do important work for employers and other people that ask for help. Even though I don't have any experience, I'll be a good candidate to hire for the job. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
728AD690E87F | Dear principal I agree with the school cafeteria plans because our health would be better if we eat healthier than chunk food, It will makes us not get obese and fell into depression, healthier food makes your body be more active.
Does healthier food makes your health healthier?, is obesity a problem for students?.
Healthier food would make our health be healthier, Instead of eating chunk food we should eat healthier school lunch ,because If we eat healthier food it will be easier for us to do any sport because when we eat chunk food our stomach feels heavier than when we eat healthier food, professional athletes they maintain their shape because they always eat healthier food.
It will makes us not fell into depression, When we eat chunk food and we don't eat any healthier food it makes us get fat and when we can't stop eating it makes us go to the level that we get obese and when we get obese a lot of students fells into depression because they don't like that way they look after they weight increase.
obesity is a big problem for our health, because it can take you to the level that you will not be able to walk.
Healthier food makes students be more active, when we eat healthier our body don't feel to heavy so we are able to move faster than when we chunk food. Chunk food makes stomach heavier that after we eat it makes so lazy that we don't e want to do anything after lunch. Healthier food activates our brain like when we do exercise we activate our body .
In conclusion i think it's a great idea this new plan, changing the school menu into healthier food because it will make our health be healthier, It will help us not fell into depression, It will make us be more active. healthier food is the best the school cafeteria can do for us because they will help us prevent obesity and they will help us take care of our health. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
72913948CDAA | Positive Life
Do you have to be positive attitude to have success in the life? The answer for this question yes, because in the life everyone should be positive, and successful in order to be happy, and intelligent everyone must be positive. Their are a lot of reason's and evidence to have good life. The most important one is be positive because being positive make the life better. For example, when the person are positive that will make the person have a lot of friends, if the person are positive that makes him/her happy, and the person will pass all his/her test with good score or in his/her job be the smarter one.
First, in order to be happy, and intelligent everyone must be positive, because when the person positive that will makes him/her have a lot of friends. For example, Generic_Name always smiling and positive. So, everyone in her school loved her and they want to be friends with her. So, now she is positive girl's with a lot of friend's. Being positive makes the life more better. As well as, if the person are positive he/she will always be happy.
Second, in order to be happy, and intelligent everyone must be positive, because that help the person to pass all his/her test with good score or in their job to be the smarter one. For example, Generic_Name student in high school, and after school he works. Even if he has a lot of stuff to do in his school, and with his job, but he is always positive person, he helps anyone need any help, and he always get the highest score in his test. Also he is the good person in his job. Positive person will have the most beautiful life and will live with peace.
Some people may argue that to try to be a positive person because the world we born on sometimes have a lot of problems. That is true because the world looks like the mountain sometimes hard to claim it, and the life looks the same usually it's hard to be happy and positive because sometimes their is a problem or something happened makes you feel sad, and negative, and makes you feel that you hate your life, but everyone have to try to be positive, and to love his/her own life because if the person always negative that will makes him/her sick, sad, mad, and complicate. However, to be positive that will protect you from a lot of problems gonna happened to you.
To summery,
in order to be happy, and intelligent everyone must be positive. Just be positive to get the most beautiful life ever. Overall, if anyone want to be positive is not the hard work it's easy, and again relax, and get the good breath, try to lose all the negative ideas. Lastly, enjoy with the positive life. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
72A69C1B34A8 | I think students should have the opportunity to choose their own classes as electives rather than taking a class in the arts because if they were assigned to a class they know nothing about then that would be setting them up for failure and I do strongly believe that is not the right way to go about things especially in the school district. We cannot let the students fail because it is important to have something to look forward to when they arrive to school. It is a definite requirement for students to take classes such as music, drama, and art however, it would be fair to let them decide on their own behalf. Once a students picks the class they would hopeful and full of joy to attend to it everyday. I believe that no matter what a student can decide what they believe in and have no dought about it. The students should have the ability to be successful in school if they put their minds into it.
Although if the counclours put students in the classes they dislike in my opinion, the student will most likely not attend to the classes they were assigned to. Furthermore It would be appropriate to encourage students to choose the right fit class they would want to enroll in. I challenge you to go through with this action to let the students decide on their own.
in conclusion, given this opportunity for the students it will increase the satisfaction rate and expand on more ideas for the school in the future. The students will become positive and get good grades because they made a decision that could possibly impact their future goals. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
72C0B0B91BFC | There are so many things that can make good deed too someone with a good attitude even you can make yourself happy, But sometimes its hard to keep a good attitude while its a difficult time. I myself have witnessed someone with a good attitude it was my good old friend he was having a good attitude all day,But than someone in his family passed away he was really sad about it. Than his attitude was going bad I tired to make his day get better to go and get ice cream but than he was up for it so I was in a good attitude so was he so we were happy, But than his mom got really sick and the doctors said that she might not make it and than he shaded tears and than his day was just going horrible. So much was going on with his family like his mom is so sick she can barley move she was taken to the hospital because she had a high fever of 103. The day they took her to the hospital has got a heart attack at the night she was there and when she was there for a few days and than they brought her back home and that same night she got a heart attack again and my friends dad just said she can't leave the hospital or she might die if we take her back a few weeks passed and his mom recovered and now they are a happy family.
I have witnessed my family member have a good attitude even during a difficult time. One of my family members were going though depression but no one else knew because everyday he always looked happy there was always a smile on his face when someone saw him there was not a time he looked upset or sad but just happy all the time. No one knew what he was going through they didnt know he was getting bullied,failing his classes and last of all no friends he thought he had no one and he kept telling himself he was alone. Everyone thought he was mad at something little like him not getting a toy or something because he was just a 10yr boy the rest of the family thought he was just a regular little kid running around all over the place laughing at everything and even cry at little stuff, but no he did nun of that all he did was just stay in his room lights turned off and the door was shut and locked. But than one day he forgot to lock his room and than I walked in and he was just crying and kept saying "I got nobody I got nobody" and than i made him feel better and then we put him in counseling for a few months and he started getting better and better while time went on.
When you have a good attitude it can make your day be good and you'll be positive with everything. Even in a bad times like for example if a family member or a friend is sick you can make there day by getting them there favorite food or snack that can get them in a good attitude with you because they may be a little grumpy while there sick.
While your in a good attitude you'll feel like you accomplish something for today and while other people will try to take you down you mind and your feeling will be strong and you won't be able to be in a bad attitude. Most people would want to be be in a good attitude but others are the world should just be happy and not always mad at something. I wish everyone in the world can be happy and something they did and not be mad at everything like sometimes when you play sports when you lose its a little upsetting at first but than you lose your attitude get stronger and you start being your self way more.
I witnessed another of my friends trying to keep a good attitude his attitude was getting stronger and better because he played a lot of soccer but than his dad kept taking it to seriously. My friend was so tired that he wanted to take a break but his dad didnt let him he kept telling him get up lets go play everyday and on weekend his dad woke him up at 5 in the morning to go play soccer. Than on Monday when he got back to school he started getting eye bags under his eyes and than he was tired of it and went o his dad and i said '' Im tired of soccer and i give up''. His dad looked so shocked and upset that he left him speechless and than he said fine when you grow up you are not going to become a famous soccer player. My friend still played soccer but he only played when he wanted to and he still was really good at soccer that I bet you he is better than me.
One time my friend and I were in a good attitude right we were playing at the park and than my friend jumped off the slid and than he broke his arm is was so nasty His bone was popping out he was crying and yelling and Ididnt know what to do and i called his partents they came so fast and than they took him to the hospetil and I was sad because I felt like it was all my fault and than his partents cheered me up and they said ''its not yout fault its okay its just a common mistake and a few weeks later his arm got better his arm was in a case so he was good and I was the first one that sighned it so i was happy about that and than we were both happy we got ice cream and we had a sleepover and the rest of the day was good. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
7302457525D4 | I think some student take a class at home because they live to far or they not have any transportation however the students can study for video or for online, but I think that is not benefit because it most better to learn more going to the school, for example the teacher they wants to theirs students learned but something they can put a lot homework because they want to their students learned however some student they live to farm from the school but they take the bus or they take the train and another transportation because they want a do something on the future, but is not bad idea to the students take class on the home because everyone wants to do something on the future for example if you someone wants to do something on the future they need to going to the school or take class for online becuase the school very important however not everybody have the same opportunities.
But I think the online class is not benefit for the students because they can not learn better maybey the students they can not consentrate good at home becuase they distrate for something and they cannot learn about the lesson and maybe the teachers they cannot teach good however on the schools the students they cannot distrate and they put attention when the teachers theach the lesson better however they force the students to put attention because the teacher wants their students learned.
However some people they don't have the opportunities to going to schools but they pay a class for online maybe they work the all day and they wants to studies, for example, the hispanic people they work immigrant to this country but the work hard to pay the rent and other bills but some people they wants to learn English to have a better wrk so for the reason they pay for online class becuase thyey wants to learn other language or they wants to have a better job so for the reasons is benefit for they pay for online class however not everyone have the same oppotunities.
The school is very important but some students doest like the school and some students like the school becuase they want to do someone on the future so if the students wants to do something on the fututre they need to have a dreams because the person doest have a dreams they don due anything because we can take the opportunities to the parents give to their childrens becuase some childrens on the world they wants to have any opportunity.
But in my opinion some people is possible to take a class for online maybe is not possible to their going to schools but they can pay classes for online but is not the same like the schools but they can due if they have dreams they can due because everybody have dreams. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
73038C17880E | Yes, I do agree, because it's a great way of learning because we don't have to deal with other kids in school, we're save because we are home, we don't have to worry about going out to the dangerous world that we in now. For example I have friends that do school at home and they are just like regular kids from High School, a lot of people would say that being home school its like going to prison but it's not, home school just gives us a better way of learning at home with no one to bother. Another benefit of being home school is that you never have to worry about school shooters bad people in school, getting abues in school, not dealing with any problems with other students. Another benefit of being home school is that you dont have to wake up early in the morning to go to school, you don't have to miss the bus anymore, don't have to worry about sports, staying after school, basically you have freedom to do more stuff, a lot of people in high school dont have time to go out or have som fun, not many kids are able to go out becasues their parents are strict and dont let them out but that's besides the point, many kids take avantange of home school some of those kids, they have parents that travel around the world and they dont have a chance to sit down and talk about what is going on in school or the everyday life, their parents will take their kids with them becasue they dont want their kids to be home alone, instead they take the kids with thme so they don't have to miis out on their aventues, and a lot of these kids are very talented and ready for the out side world becasue their education was high quiality and always on point. They are good kids and bad kids that do home school, some of them coud have got in a ot of trouble and its not able to go back to school and some kids are home school because their patrenst have to work out of the country and they can be home by their selfs and they take thier kids with the. That's all I have to say. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
73234AB62383 | Would you wanna be extending 2 more hour to your school schedule because you work for four days for 10 hours? In my opinion I feel like no because sometimes some students decide they want to spend some time with their family . Also some students have to go home early and do something else instead of doing their school work and some students have to enjoy their free time instead of working all day.
Some students decide they want to spend sometime with their family. Some students decide that because sometimes they might not have enough time with some one that lives far from them so they decide they want to go where they live and they want to be with them before they leave. Also some students might want to spend more time with there grandparents because they might not be able to see them or they either want to spend more time with there grandparents because they want to help them out side there in the stages of being old so they might need help with something. Also some students might want to hang out with their cousins since they might not have seen them for awhile. Student usually like to spend a lot of time with there family since they might not have seen them for years so they decide they want to spend more time with them .
Some students have to go home early and they have to go do something else instead of doing their work from school. Instead of doing their school work some students have to go after school to go sports so they might not have time to stay in school for 10 hours because they might have to be going to their practice whens school finishes. Some students might have to go straight home because they might have to go babysit their little siblings since there parents are working. Some student might have to go home early because they might have to go straight to work or they might get in trouble if they don't go at the time they tell them they could get into trouble. Students usually have to go do something else instead of having to go do their school work all day.
Some students have to enjoy their free time instead of working all day. Instead of staying at school all day or at work all day students decide to go out and hang out with their friends. Some students might want to go out and go shopping .Some student decide to go out and spend some time with their parents since they don't have that much time .Also some student just want to enjoy the only time they are free to do something instead of being stuck at school all day or being stuck at work all day.
In my opinion I feel like we shouldn't add more hours to out school schedule because at this time we are still young and we want to enjoy the free time that we have before we get older because then we won't be having that much time left since we will mostly be in school still or might just be working all day. Also I feel like some people might just be getting tired of all the work they give us to the point were some students might just give up on there work. For example when I get out of school I usually have to go home and take care of my little sister because my mom can't .
I wouldn't like to be stuck in school for another two more hours because I would have to be leaving school late and if I had a four day work week I would not be able to do my school work at home , When I would get home from work I would be really tired and just decide to fall asleep. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
732952FF57F2 | For the time students get to high school, Is time for the students to focus more on their future. Students that go to high school are expecting to do more work and be with a different mind set. Going to high school, is the time when students need to think what they want to do in the future, and pick a career that they like. But there are many students, that don't care about their futures, others don't think about their futures in high school. High school is the time when students are able to get focus and think about a career they wanna take. Also to pick a career that you like,and you enjoy doing it. But there are many students that take career just to take them but thats no the career they like so they end it up not achieving nothing.
In high school, is where a lot of students work so they can get money and buy what they want and Also to pay their college career. So identify a career by the time students get to high school help. Because now the students now how much does the career cost, and where he can go studied when he finish high school. Also choosing a career when your young helps, because students have more time to get more information, about the career. And see if there are others career that students would like to take. So thats why committing to a career by the time you get to high school helps you, have more time to view different careers and choose the one u like the best.
Many student that are almost in high school, think about how high school going to be like. So been able to choose a career before high school helps. Because the student can get their mind set and think about what courses the student wants to take in high school. Those courses can help, because it teach the student the things that he needs to learn therefore hes prepare the career, he wants to take. And also to be able to search where the he wants to go studied and pick the collage that teach the best for his career.
And finally preparing for a career before high school, gives the students more opportunities. So I agree for students to identify a career by the time they enter high school. also high school has a lot opportunities, for students that wants to take collage course. So they can be prepare for their careers, and when they get to collage they now a lot about the career they want to take. So it helps committing to a career before going to high school it can get you prepare for your future. And acomplish what you want for your future. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
7333B4549006 | Conserving energy and resources is very benifical for human life and nature. Human damage many nature things while making energy and resources for their daily use. For example deforestation, use of water to make electricity, which can decrease the ammount of aquatic animals and water on the earth. Some buisness have adopted the idea of a four-day work week so they can conserve energy and resources. A four-day work week can also effect on thier buisness and put them in loss but it depends on them how they manage their work in four days. But Should schools follow this model by extending the school day two hours and make a four day school week? In my opinion school shouldn't follow this model. student's already have five- day school week which sometime seems very short, when students have lot of work to do and they need more help of teachers. In a month there are some federal holidays in weekdays, Which make a five- day school week more short. Extending the school day two hour and adopted a four-day work week have many disadavtages. It can put bad impact on students study and on thier grades, they will spend their weekend more with friends not with books, Students may spend their times on computer games and on phones. So, four-day school week will effect somewhere in student life. It's better to keep the five-days school week for students goods and for their better education.
Every student study hard in school to get better grades in all classes. Student's always try to learn more from their teachers and do their best in class. But a short week can a put bad impact on their study and their grades will go down. For example when students have an extra time in their classes, they mostly spend it with thier teachers and asking them questions so they can get answers in a specific way. But what if they don't have time in class or teacher's don't have time for student's. If a teacher has a short time to teach soemthing. They will teach in a very fast or a different way to students. Some student's may not get everything in class, and their class performance will go down and it impact on their grades. It's very important for a teacher to spend a time with their students and ask them about their problems in classes, and also for a students it's very important to share their problems with teacher so, they can find a way to solve the problems. It can only happens when student and teacher both have time in class to discuss. so the Four-day week can make a distance between a teacher and a student.
Second, Friendship is a very important thing in every person life, Friendship with a good friend can tell you the path of your success. Spending time with friends is a good habbit. But it doesn't mean that you have to spend you al free time with friends. Almost every studnt spend their weekends with their freinds and they dont care about school study. Even we spend our one school holidays with friends and forget about study. what if we have three days off in a week. Do we spend that time with our books? the answers is no we cannot spend time with books on weekends. We need to spend our times with books and the schhol is the only place where we can learn something and soend times with the books. For example Last week we had an five days off from school and i didn't study in that week and i forgot to complete an project i got bad grades on that class. i spent my time with my friends and i didn't know the meaning of study in that time that's why i got bad grade in that class. But when i have regular week of school i always complete my work first so i can keep my grades up. More school holiday's will give more tension to student that's why they didn't study at home and they would like to study at school. A regular school week is much better than four-day week of school because in a one day we can learn a lot from our teachers at school.
In this century every single person is using technology. Students are using more technolgy than others, spending time on computer and on phones isn't bad thing but you also have to spend some time with other activites like sports, cultural activites. But children doesn't want to do this and they play games on phones and on computers. For exaample I have a younger who's fourteen year old. Whenever he arrived at home from school, the first thing he do is get out his Laptop from his school bag and start playing games with his friends on online group so you can easily estimate that how many school student playing that game on computer and on phones on weekends and on off days. Playing game on wekends and on holidays can effect you and your studies and gives you a bad grades. It's better to be in school than on computer games, so we can learn something new. A four-day school week can make a big difference in student's school life.
At the end, I would say that if school will follow the model by extending school and a four-day school week. It can develop a big difference in student education. Students come to school for learning, sometime they get bored from school. But if school make this rule for student the student will be happy with this but in future they will understand that how wrong it is to make a school week shorter without getting anything and just stayed at home. From more school hours and with regular days student can learn something more and keep their grades up.
They will spend their more times with books and paying attention on the study not games or electronic. So the Four-day schhol week will not work for the school it may only work for the buisness but not for the school. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
7369FE94C1C6 | Working with a group is more beneficial or working alone is more beneficial? Working with a group is more beneficial. People can get help from another person and they can be more successful by working together. Although some people thinks that working alone is more beneficial, working with a group is more successful because it would be easier to ask for help and to succeed in life.
Some people thinks that working alone is more successful. It gives people time to plan and easier to make good efforts. Some people prefers to not work with a group because they might make bad efforts on other people's work. Overall people says that working by yourself is more beneficial, they are wrong because working with a group can help you be more successful.
Some people prefers to work with a group. It is more helpful to get help from another person. Some people had a hard time planning what they want to work on like homework or school project. Working with a group is more successful because it would be easier to get help from another person.
Some people prefers to work with a group. People can be more successful by working together. Some people had a good idea and they used that idea to make good efforts. Working with a group is more beneficial because they can use other people's idea to make good efforts for their work.
Although some people prefers to work by themselves, a group work will help them be more successful. A group work helps other people to be more successful because one person had an idea and other people can use their idea to get their work completed. People can share their work to another person so they can check if they made good efforts. | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
736B285BF88B | It is wonderful how if we are always doining something. If always we doing someting we got more that we think before. We need practice everything. we need practice something that we want.
Do we acoomplish more if we are always doing something. We need think that's what is that we want to acoomplish more that we thing. If I want to be a police I will study hard to be more that a police. I want to buy a iphone 5 but I will work more to buy a iphone 8. I want go to Generic_City with $600 but I will save more to got $1000. We need think before to do something. we need to learnd to save money.
If we doing nothing we never got soemething that we wants. We need to work because if we do not work we never can buy something that we want. if I want pass the SOL of Geometry I need study but if I don't want study i will not pass the SOL. I want a good future but if I doing nothing I will had a future bad I will study and work to had a better future. we need think in the future before doing nothing.
Determine never to be idle. I don't want to be a idle but if i don't be a idle I will never had everythig that I want. I want a car toyota but I will work hard, and think like a idle to work more hard and get more moey to buy a BMW. I need pass all the class to graduate but I want a diploma better that normal one I will doing all homework to pass al the class. we need to be a idle to got everything that we want.
In conclucion, It is wonderful how if we are always doining something. Do we acoomplish more if we are always doing something. Determine never to be idle. But if we want thing that speend a lot money we need to be a idle to got more money, or we want graduate we need study more that other to be better person in the future. for this reason and many other we need to be a idle. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
736E8C8444E6 | Had the technology a negative or positive effects on people's lives? People are having a negative effects with the technology, I think people can't control it. At this time everybody are forgeting how beutiful is lives with out technology. We can do alot of things with out it. For example: Play outside with friends, go to libraries, and stay outside with natural. Some people say the kids have to have limitation of what they doing on they computer or cells phones. On the other side people say that is good for teenager having not limitation because they can learn more. I think teenager need a limitation of what they doing in the phones. Furthermore parents should cheking what they doing in the internet.
However, some people think is good for teenager not having a limitation because they learn more for their future. On the other hand some people say that that tenenager can't complete a taskd with out having contact with other person. I thinbk having a conversition with other is good because you get to know that person and also get stronger the relationship. When you meet a strager in the internet is dangeous, not everyone is a good person. Some parents think that the kids are just playing in the internets but they do not. I think having a conversiation to you or playing games without speaking I think that have a limitation until you know well that person.
In addition, sometimes people used to buy alot of things from the internet without knowing that person, that is dangerous. People that are seeling on wedsides that always offer what the really have or maybe they just want the money. If you going to buy anything for the internet just make sure the wedside is safes. Buying staff for the internet is getting wrong because people do not want to go aout and spend time with family. Since wedsides liike Amazon, Ebay, and others came up people atart get all they need from wedside. Bad people are used this on favor to them, they are creating so many fake wedsides to racket people.
To continue with, I think a good way to get the kid out the technology is take them to have fun outside like hand out with friends, having friends in a computer like into a videogame or a social media is not healty for the kids. You have to get to know the person before play or talk to them. Sometimes people trick the kids ask them to do bad things.
That why technology shoul not be allow for kid at all or if parents decide to give a cells phone or a computer always have to be a limitation.
Technology does not aloww people to complete task with out haave a contact with others. I think this is having a negative effects on people lives, people are getting racket because they used to maney wedsides. Wedsides are not save you have to have a limitation and also take care of the like. Kid are also getting into the technology they are losing their childhooh. Furthermore parents have to a limitation on their kids and put a limit on them. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
7370AB0DDC7F | Since I was a little kid my dreamed job has always to be a mechanic, and you might ask why do I want be a mechanic well; when I was little I remember watching my dad fixing cars all day long, at the end of a long day of work I always got played with my bicycle and whenever my bicycle got broken I remember running to my dad telling him to fix it, and I loved watching him fixed it, so whenever I was not with him I always knew how to fix it by myself, when I started to grow I began helping my dad more, he never actually led me work on a car because he said that was it dangerous, but when I was going try
I had to come to the United States and I never learned nothing about car so now that i'm big I'll love to learn more about car and how to be an mechanic.
To be honest I remember telling my dad that one day I was going to be the greatest mechanic of all the time because I wanted him to saw that I could do it and make him feel proud I remember him smiling and telling me that
I could became whatever I wanted to be in this world I just had to worked for it and don't stop until I reached my goal, the only memories I have with my dad are me working with him, we did not spend too much time together I only saw him when he was at work and some weekends because he did not leaved together but now that I'm big and I can make my own decisions and have the opportunity to be anything in this country I want to be an mechanic and make my dad proud.
I know that been a mechanic is not easy and it takes a lot of skills, patience and practice but if I ever get the opportunity i won't waste it i will give my best and i will focus and try to give it all because my that once told me ''nothing is impossible it can be very hard but not impossible'' I'm always having those words in my mind because i'm that type of person that it won't stop until it gets what he wants and all i want is to lean how to be an mechanic and while doing it make my dad proud I'll love to have the opportunity to explore an mechanic company I'll be very thankful for giving me that opportunity.
I'm also looking to be an mechanic because I love cars and when I get a new job I will buy my own car and if learn how to be an mechanic I won't have to pay somebody to fix my car when I could fix it by my own when I always had like and obsession to open stuff and take everything how see how every little thing makes a function and how all together make a hole system works and when I'm finished taking everything out i like to put them all together as before and if put everything how it was maybe thats why i like math so much because in math there are many different ways to salve something and at the end they all give the same answer and cars work almost the same way and I would like to open a car and find what is wrong and see how to fix it and get paid by what i love to do | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
7373B4F44528 | Have you ever accomplished something in your life? Because people nowadays are very lazy and hard headed because they are easily distracted by social media, people around them, and also the society that's why they cannot focus on their goals in life. Although some might argue it is not better to work on something to accomplish, actually it is better to work on something to accomplish because you will gain more knowledge and people will be proud to what you've accomplished.
One reason why it is better to work on something to accomplish is because you will gain more knowledge. For instance, based on my personal experience when I was in middle school, I dont do my projects, homework, seat works because I'm too lazy and I just love talking with my friends everyday in our class. However, when I moved here in America last year things have changed because I'm new here in this country and I dont know anyone. I realized that my friends here are not the same like in the Generic_City that I used to talk to everyday. That's why I decided to study hard and make my parents proud again. I have an five A's in my classes right know and I'm proud because I accomplished something. And yes, Thomas Jefferson was right "Determine never to be idle.. It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something."
we should never stop doing something that can benefit us. This proves that working on something will help you gain more knowledge in life and dont stop believing in yourself. Another example that proves it is better to work on something to accomplish is based on my dad's personal experience. My dad was a college graduate in the Generic_City, he dreamed to become a successful businessman and he made it. My dad started a business near to schools and shops so many people will go to his store. The first few months was amazing because his customers was very loyal to him my dad didn't expect that it will happen. Unfortunately, my dad's business went down because something happened that he didn't liked. People are robbing and digging all the way to my dad's store every night. That's why he was forced to closed his business and rest for a while. After a few years he didn't have a job because he was still shocked to what happened to his business. However, he decided to take culinary class to work again because he wants to help our family and to gain more knowledge about baking. After taking the culinary, he went to Generic_City to seek new opportunity. He is now currently working in five star restaurant owned by a rich man in Generic_City. This proves that it is better to work on something to accomplish like what my dad did in his life and he changed for a better living.
Another reason why it is better to work on something to accomplish is because people will be proud to what you've accomplished. For example, from the movie
PELE
it is about a young boy who dreamed to become a professional football player. He lived in a small house in Brazil and played football with his friends in his neighborhood. Pele was a poor little kid but plays well even he is very short unlike other people in his town. When they play against other teams, they always laugh at them because they dont have a proper gear for playing. And there is a guy who is recruiting players for their club. Pele was the youngest player in the club thats why he was treated like a slave. After few years playing in his club, its his time to shine to represent Brazil in the world cup. Pele scored a lot of goals and Brazil went to the finals. He was so incredible that time no one can stop him and Brazil won the world cup. This proves that you need hard work to accomplish something like Pele he never stop doing what he wanted to be and now people from Brazil and all over the world are proud of him. Another example that proves it is better to work on something to accomplish comes from Adidas' quote or saying "All in or nothing". For instance, that line is very effective to people especially the athletes around the world because doing your goals in life makes you more stronger and better than the others. And you should give your best all the time and make people proud to what you've done in life. This proves that is it better to work on something to accomplish like the owner of Adidas he became famous and rich because he worked hard, focused on his goals.
The other side will argue it is not better to work on something to accomplish because you will have more time to do what you want or something else. However, it is better to work on something because you can practice your weaknesses. For example, my friend Generic_Name who really dont know how to write a perfect essay but can speak fluent in English. He was really bad in writing essay when we were in middle school. Generic_Name was always shy to read or present his work to our teacher. So, I told him to work with my classmate who is really good in making essay and ask him to teach Generic_Name how to write a perfect essay. After a few weeks of learning, Generic_Name improved his writing skills. This proves that it is better work on something to accomplish like what my friend Generic_Name did he started practicing his weakness and became a good writer. Another example that proves that it is better to work on something to accomplish is based on my personal experience. For instance, I've been playing football since 5 years old because my dad is also a football player. When I was playing with my club my coach said my first touch is not really good unlike the other players. However, I practiced by myself like what what coach told me. And my mentality was I should prove my coach that I will be a better football player. This proves that practicing your weaknesses will make you more a better person.
To conclude all these statements above, it is better to work on something to accomplish because you will gain more knowledge and people will be proud to what you've accomplished. We people have different purposes in life, we should never be idle in life. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
738112C600B8 | Do you think first impressions are impossible to change ? In my opinion a first impression on someone or something change be changed, because you never know what the stereotype of the thing can be.
When you first meet someone your first impression on the person can be one thing but you never know what the person could have. For example you see a fat guy or female and you can be quick to judge them but you don't know anything about there life, till when you talk to them and get to know their true story that they medical conditions on why they are the way the appear and look like. You could meet a Hispanic, For example you might thing they came to US illegally, but you don't really know that some Hispanic are actually born in the united states and are legal citizens. when you see a Asian person you may think there smart because of your first impression stereotype, but not all Asian are actually smart and appear to who you really think they are.
Next is the type of thing you purchase or are going to purchase, it can look nice and be expensive but you dont know the background story on the item or thing you are going to purchase. For example when you want to purchase a car or house, you can be looking at it on the internet and like it a lot but once you buy it you start noticing strange thing. If it is the car you realize the its starting to give you a lot of problems that you are constantly taking money out you'r pocket to try to fix it to your expectations and what were your first impression on the car being nice and reliable. Second a house you're impression where "oh wow this is a really nice house", so you go on and purchase it the you start realizing that the house was making wired noises at night while you are trying to sleep, Then one day you go online and contact the landowner or research the history of the house and realize the house is haunted because the original owner past away their.
A first impression is just a stereotype or judgment that you think of someone or something before not know the background story on it. Before you go and be quick to judge some based on their looks talk to the person see why they are really the way they look before making fun of them of talk about them because everyone in this world isnt perfect and everything has a story behind it. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
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