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5D12067722AD | Everyone has a talent or skill, but not everyone pays attention to it. I have a talent even tho I don't pay too much attention to it. I have a talent that I should pay more attention too because it's a luxcturious, and extrordinairy talent to have, it can be a good job, and it could give me a bright future.
One reason why I think being skillful at soccer is a precious talent is because it can give me a talented job. There is a good soccer player called Kylien Mbape. He is very young, and he has that talent of being good at soccer! He plays nationally and makes lots of money. He has a skillful job and is very young, thats why being a soccer player is an extrordinairy job! My talent at soccer could not only give me a good job, I can make lots of money from soccer.
Being a soccer player can make me lots of money! I have the talent to play soccer, and I could make money off of soccer just like Kylien Mbape! Mbape makes an uncountable amount of money off soccer for doing something he loves and is very amazing at. Mbape is making lots of money off of soccer and he has a bright future ahead of him!
I have a talent of playing soccer, but i need to pay more attention to my precious talent. I have a talent I should pay more attention too. I should because it can give me a bright future if you have the right mindset. It can be a luxcturious job to have! It can give you lots of money for an amazing future. That is why I should pay more attention to my talent and so should you! | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
5D2B8506EC4F | I agree with the statement because the first impression that we make can't be change complete even the try to change.
First impression is something no one can forget it can be attitude, love, feel but with all this impression we can not forget or change even we went to it will not be the same to impress someone with an ex we are attitude they ways we talk, walk even eat no one can change and someone try to impress his love to a girl he has be in love since children even someone come out of no where he will not be able to change the first impression of this person.
When we make the first impression to people even we know they will try to copied or change it will be impossible because everyone know the impression it is not something that we can change even we change it is not going be the same an example Generic_Name tried to impression Generic_Name with her food Generic_Name love it and went to make the same food it will be the same but it will not taste the same way because he don't known what kind of ingredient she put in and even she tell him it will not going taste the same so every first impression can not be change.
We known what it is a first impression are almost impossible to change because it kind like feeling no one can change because impression is something we do to impress people with what we have sometime is not even real or fake but some time we think it real, Generic_Name lied about her personality and family to try to impression hers friends in school they will believe her so impression can be sometime a lie but impossible to change.
We need to understand that first impression it something that it impossible to change and we need to believe to our self and not try to change other people first impression or copied them it will be painful to retry even to we known but it will not going to be the same. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
5D4D6519DF94 | Haile G/Selasie, one of the most famous long distance runners of all time, did not pave his way to success because he was born with it. He came from a poor family, and walked a long distance to his school everyday. When he started running, he was not good at all. He worked day and night to get to where he is. And when he speaks about his past, he tells the story of how he failed again and again a lot of times but he never lost his passion for his dream. And now he is one of the richest people in Ethiopia and one of the best record holders of Marathon.
Success is a dream for most and a reality for only a few. When it comes to how success is achieved, it creates a great question in all our minds and that is,"How can I be successful?". Some say that success is achieved by going through failures without giving up or without losing hope. That is a truly arguable idea and some might think different. But I fully agree with that idea.
The fact that almost all of the masterminds that are known for their creations of the bulb, physics theories, telephone and many more of the things we take for granted at the moment told the story of how they tried and failed many times than they count. And that is one proof of the point that success doesn't come without failure.
There might be some people that argue this point by pointing out that many people have tried and failed and tried again but it didn't help them achieve their dreams. That is a good point but the fact is that failing is not the only thing that determines your success, but failing and not being discouraged is what really counts. If we plan to achieve a goal, we shouldn't lose our excitement for that specific thing we're doing, we should rather be more encouraged to try harder and to find another way to make it work.
For example, when we first built a rocket,it wasn't done in a day or in the first try. Engineers tried to fix the problem in the mechanical part. Scientists tried to see if their calculations was wrong or if the combination of the chemicals didn't work and many others tried to fix it but they failed more than a couple of times. By not giving up though, it was a success at last.
It might not always seem like it but failure leads to success. The main point is not giving up and not losing our enthusiasm. As the saying goes, "If you fail once, try and try harder". Never give up on your dreams and don't be discouraged by failure. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 5 | 4 |
5D5672D7C97D | The famous scientist Albert Einstein said, "Imagination is more important than knowledge." This is especially true for today's world. Even with seven billion people on Earth, everyone is unique. Your imagination is vast; an open plain of wondrous ideas and possibilities. This leads to even more diversity than our physical differences. It is also applied to our day, and it makes it more lively. And while knowledge is powerful, imagination can make it far stronger. Imagination is more important than knowledge because of creativity and experimentation.
First, imagination leads to creativity. Your can put your ideas to life through creativity, and there's plenty of ways to do so. You can construct a masterpiece of your choosing, whether it be art, music, or even writing! Even thousands of years ago, creativity makes its mark. Rough drawings by cavemen depict tales of hunts and adventures. Beautiful artifacts and pottery dot museums. Ancient literature such as Beowulf and The Odyssey still fascinate modern writers. And recently, artists and musicians such as Bob Ross and Duke Ellington have made amazing pieces through their creativity, just like the legendary Leonardo da Vinci and Beethoven. Time wears things down, but not imagination. This is immensely important as creativity allows you to express yourself. You can voice out your thoughts and ideas in so many forms. With imagination being limitless, so is your creativity, and so are your possibilities.
Next, imagination leads to more experimentation. Going mad-scientist isn't recommended, but you can poke around with new ideas and find a new talent or hobby. More experimenting can lead you to find something you really enjoy!
Trial and error can be disheartening, but don't give up! You could find something that could change your future. It can be fun too; testing different paths to a single destination. Not only can you find the best road to a goal, but you can spread the knowledge to others. The results from tinkering around varies from little things to giant discoveries. Take Damascus steel for example. The forging process for the metal has been lost, which has consistently frustrated modern metallurgists. A steel from times long gone, but still baffling today's scientists. That's a pretty amazing feat! Experimenting from your imagination is wild, but it's enjoyable and even rewarding!
However, some say knowledge helps daily life more than imagination. Valuable things, such as language, mathematics, history, and science. Knowledge does help with life, but most of the things you learn are often useless or forgotten along the way. Math and Language Arts are important, but unless you're pursuing teaching or poetry, some aspects aren't very useful. For example, being acknowledged that plants are green because of chlorophyll isn't going to help with paying taxes. Imagination can make life better and enjoyable. Decorating your house or doodling a picture can be more relaxing and fun than first thought. In addition, most of the knowledge obtained can't be applied without a good imagination. And while some people may have an upper edge in academics, everyone is on equal ground in imagination.
In conclusion, being able to experiment and create with limitless possibilities makes imagination more important than knowledge. Making ideas come to life is fun and shows what you're capable of. Creativity holds the ever-important ability to express yourself. Experimentation is enjoyable and can be rewarding. You never know what you can do unless you try, and testing your skills is a great evaluation. And all of this traces back to one thing everyone has: an imagination. | 4.5 | 5 | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 5 |
5D693DD9978D | How will be high school different if you will graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years? Three years things happen very fast than four years. you can't learn a lot things that happen in high school in three year because you will follow different plan for to graduate early. It is not a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college because I have to force my work, I will be indecisive and I won't be able to take elective course. All this will be hared days for me to finish my high school in three years.
Firstly, if I want to graduate in three years I have to force my work because I must have to take courses during the summers or in the evenings. And I do not wanna do that because normally my family every summer go to visit different country. Also I have to take course course during the evenings where I go to play soccer because I like to play. For example, if I want to graduate early I could not do this and I am to young to force my life, I have time to take this things slow because when I force my work I feel like my work will be wrong and I could not learn anything and that can not help me to go to the college. So three years is to short to learn everything that we have to learn in high school. It is not a good idea to force your work because like you did to learn things from the high school is how you will forget it.
Also, finish your high school in three years do not let you to think about what you want to study for the college because your course will be to short and you won't to do a good decision. If you have a lot time you can think better and you can find a new goal. For example, when i was in eleven grade i did not what i want to study when i will go to the college. But now i am taking geometry and i like it. Now like to be architect because i found that math is one of my favorite class. If i just took three years of high school i did not what want to do for college. So three years is to short to take decision for go to the college, you can go but as a indecisive student.
Finally, high school in three years will be boring for me without course elective because there two courses electives that i like. One of them is art and band those became me a good students, they change my life. For example, when i play the violin in my class with my classmate that moment, i forget everything that was wrong in my life. Another example is art where i can draw my happiness and i can remember that the life is not wrong. So i prefer to study four year and take my course elective than to study three years whiteout enjoy my high school with my course elective. it is a not a good idea to students to study three years of high school because they won't find the taste of high school.
Some people think that work force, indecisive person and won't be able to take course elective is better because they want to graduate early. They do not care about their life, they just want to do this to do that and they do not learn anything. However, to go the college you need to be more prepare because college is different than high school. That is why must of the college is hard to enter because some educational programs offer that allow high school student to graduate in three years and then when they go to college they do not anything. Because in three years is not enough for a high school students. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
5D742A0E0623 | It has been said that a positive attitud is the key to success in life.
I'm agree with this statement, I'm one of the persons that think that a good attitude can open many doors to anyone.
Example: If tou are looking for job, and you are talking to the person who is going to give you the job, and you are being with a negative attitude, and being arrogant tha person is going to think more about it.
Example: If your attitude is bein positive, and you are being nice with tha person his going to be nice also, and yuo would have more posibility to get it.
A reason of why you need to be with a positive attitude, is because life is more easy by tha way your main is out of stress, but more important you would be always happy.
And my last oppinion, I defent this position because, year's ago i was with a very negative attitude and always thinks happened to me, and i alwas was like why this is hapening to, and one day i say is enough and i was about to finish with my life and i dont know what happen that from tha day i change my main, when you do think with a good attitude everything is goin to be better. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
5D7D1445A7CF | Smooth Sails do not make Skillful Sailors!
In my opinion, anyone can succeed if they work hard and strive for what they want to achieve. Nothing is a piece of cake. There is handwork and determination behind every successful person. One should have a specific aspiration in their life, and should not do something because they are forced to. There will be a satisfaction if we make a mistake in the work we like to do. We try to find solutions and solve the problem, but if we do something our parents want us to, there will be no contentment.
School life should be the time where all the students should relax and have fun in addition to studying. It is not supposed to be a burden to anyone. Every kid has a right to receive the same education and programs. Discrimination should not be shown to anyone. They should be allowed to do whatever they want to, but should be taken care of so that they do not do something wrong. American school systems are perfect for students because they get to study and at the same time they can take courses they are passionate about. They have a chance to learn new things about the career they want to pursue. The balanced system helps them to manage stress level and also concentrate on how their future will unfold.
Some schools in the United States also allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of traditional four years. There is no point in students graduating one year early to work or enter to college soon. How does graduating one year early matter? This increases nothing but stress and restlessness.
Some students wish to do that not because they want to, but their parents force aspirations on their children. I do not say that it is wrong whatever parents do, but I say that this is not a right way to expect their kids to be successful. All the students need recreational time where they can forget all the school stress and enjoy their time, but parents desire to see their kids as the most successful person, is not letting them to be happy like other kids. Higher grades always does not matter. All that matters is that how can we use in ow much knowledge we attained from the school and how can we use that knowledge in the future. In order to finish high school early, the kids are required to take summer classes and spare their time in the evening. This is not something that is useful for a kid. They need some time to relax their mind, so that concentrate in their studies. They should be able to take their favorite electives as those classes can help them to be successful in the future.
I know an incident where one of my cousin graduated early from high school in order to attend college early. He was really smart until high school junior year. He had a great knowledge of what is happening around the world. He would share those with everyone and help us gain some knowledge too,but at the end of the junior year, he was so into graduating early that he did work hard and finally got into a college. He regrets that decision now as he did not learn so many things in the last year of high school that are stressing him now. If everyone finish high school in the traditional way, they will know everything about college and how it works. Then they can do whatever they want to and have at least some knowledge about it. We often hear news about how students commit suicide as they are stressed about academics, so I think they should not do whatever they do not like, and instead work on what they desire for.
Hard work is the key to success, but that does not mean that everyone should work hard on something they do not like. instead they should really work hard to achieve what they want. Our aspirations should not be impacted by anyone. If we have our own goal and ways to succeed them, we should follow that way and make sure that we become the most successful individual in that particular field. | 4.5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
5D843D1CD37D | I agree because maybe it could lead to new friendships or relate able things or a thing with a teacher. For example I had to do an assignment similar to this and I told them all of my most productive activates I could think of and almost everyone was similar to my activities like they do the same activities as I do too. You'll never know if you meet new people that you've never seen before or heard before and they turn nice and you guys could be good friends. I had friends from my soccer team and they were in my school that I didn't even knew that they were in my school so I started to hang out with them in school and after soccer practice. It's basically about friendship because if someone wants to meet more and new people they should go try out something they like and try it out with their future friends and enjoy together. For example, I keep meeting more and more people because of after school activities or someone in school that is friends with their friends. If you disagreed with the principals decision you would just do the same routine all year until summer has came and then high school and then that will be the similar routine and then graduation and then you've decided to go to college and it's another same routine for how long you're gonna be there and then you get a job and it'll be another same routine until you retire and then you just go home and rest until you die, sure it would be similar if you agreed but sometimes you just gotta try what's new what's been going on or how's it going go out with your friends and then you guys get closer and you've decided you guys wanted to hang out and do whatever you want to do. Sometimes your parents might force you do to some activities at school or outside of school it's because they want you to feel like you've like accomplished everything in life and you've decided to try something new for once and will actually enjoy it and stick to it as long as you live or until you quit or retire. You might even find your furture date and be very distance get to know each other so I am agreeing because it causes friendships doesn't have to be home all day and some thing you might like. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
5DA3135B6664 | Ralph Waldo, Emerson, wrote "unless you try to do something beyond hat you already mastered, you will never grow." I agree with Emerson statement these are my reaason why. First, i think if we do not prepare for more than one thing. We never will grow up. Second, have more than one knowledge than other people always will be advantage.
Last, if we do not try more than one thing that can be more hard of that we already know. we never will grow.
First reason,i think if the people do not prepare their lives with more than one knowledge. Their lives will be without direccion, and with less opportunies in our society, becuase they will do not have the enought knowledge to play a good job. For example, if they are looking to find better job with new experiencies that will be impossible to find for them, becuse they do not have the knowledge which one is require for the position. how they can be productive for the country or society. If they are not prepred to make done specific job that can be important.
Second reason, when we have differents knowledge our lives help us a lot to find the best or easy jobs. The knowledge is the most power thing the human being can have in thier hands. Some people think the knowlege is something that we can not buy from any where. Exmple, if you focus to learn. you always will be have advantage to grow. Last, i think if the people never try something hard they never will grow. we always need to try something who will bring new experiences on our lives. Exmple, when someone is goint to university and the person graduated from teacher, but if he stuck there, and not go for more hard profession he never will grow like principal etc.
Conclusion, i agree with Emerson statement, because he give to us expecific ideas what is life about when he said "unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered , you will never grow. this is why i agree to his statement, and i provide all this reason. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
5DB370AD8EFB | No I think it wouldnt be good idea to teach students from home. I think it would be a bad idea because students could easily get distracted at home. Students could just not answer the video calls. Students could just simply also not keep up with the work due to improper communication.
Students could easily be distracted in video conferences with other things. Things that could help them not attend to the conference that is going on. As for classes that are taking place online, Students could just not be doing the work and be on other pages.
It can be easy to not attend any of these classes, you could just not show up, do the work , or simply just sleep in. If you dont attend these classes it could lead to serious consequences. These consequences could lead to serious things. It would be better to have a physical class to walk into and attend.
Some students are better learners when you directly speak to someone one on one. Not all Students learn the same, some learn by being up and active such as athletes, mechanics, and others. Students that choose to learn online could also not understand a subject and could end up needing a little more help. Like me, I
need a little more help sometimes from teachers so I need a physical class and physical person to help me.
So in conclusion, I think it would not be a good idea to have students taught at home because of the distractions, Attendance, and miss communication. Therefore it would be better for a student to learn in a classroom with a Teacher that could help the student if he ever needs the help. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
5DD1954E47A8 | How old were you when you decided what you wanted to do for a living? Some schools are requiring students to choose their career before entering high school, witch shouldnt be done. Although it is understandable that students know witch career path they would like to take to start preparing early. Students should not be choosing their careers at a young age as they are to young and inexperienced with the world, should be more focused on enjoying their childhood and lastly should work up slowly to decide what they would like to be when they grow up.
Students before high school are to young to choose a career path, as they most likely do not have much responsibilities. For example a child with little experience on responsibility might choose a career that requires you to be very responsible. The child with little experience on responsibility will quickly be stressed and overwhelmed and will most likely under preform. An older student will have more responsibilities and will have more experience, most likely will choose a career that will be a better fit for them and require responsibilities they are comfortable handling.
Young students shouldn't be extremely focused on what career path they want to take. They should be more focused on enjoying their childhood. By engaging in extracurricular activities such as: sports, music, reading and acting. By participating hobbies they enjoy being a part of. The students will explore and experience more witch will help them as they get older in choosing what they like and what they would like to do for living by simply having fun. As we only have one childhood and we shall enjoy it while it last.
A way of introducing careers to young students without making them commit to a specific one. Is having classes in schools that teach a specific career such as: construction, engineering, agriculture and law enforcement. By providing classes like this to children they will be open to explore new things without committing to one career. Slowly introducing different careers to students by having extra classes. Is a good way for them to start thinking about their future without making them choose one specific career.
Overall students at a young age should not be choosing their careers. It its way to much stress for a child. They are way too inexperienced in responsibility. Should be focused on enjoying their childhood. Introducing different careers at a young age without making them commit is helpful way. This will slowly introduce them to different careers without making them commit to one and risk stressing them out. In conclusion students will wait till their time comes in high school and they will select their career path from there. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
5DEDECE96044 | Some schools use cell phones in the classroom for educational purpose. cellphones has become the major problem in schools for students and for teachers. I think that cellphones should not be allowed in the classroom because students dont do the work that they suposted be doing and schools already have tecnology to use.
Cellphones shouldn't be allowed for educacional purpose because students dont do that work that they suposted be doing. Sometimes students take pictures of homework or a test and then they pass it to a friend. They always wants to check theirs social media like snapchat or instagram. this in one reason why students fail classes or fail grades. For example, in my English class there is a guy who is always using his phone, checking his social media or checking his messages that his friends has be sending to him and he is not passing his classes.
Also, cellphones shouldn't be allowed for educational purpose because schools already have tecnology for students can use. The government gives the schools computers because they wants the students graduate and dont have any distraction by using theirs cellphones.
schools have computers or ipads and thas why teacher dont need to let the students use their phone to do any work that they have to do.
However, Students can do their work in the computer where the teacher can be checking what the students is doing, if his doing his work or not.
Some students might say that they can use their cellphones in the classroom because it is more easy for them to translate words than be looking words in the dictionary. Also, some students might say that they can't live with out using their phone. Finally, they might say that using theirs phone can be more easy because they can be checking their work any time that they want.
In conclution, I think that cellphones shuldn't be allowed in the class room. students have to learn how to live with out their phone because graduate and not fail classes is more important than be texting their friends all the time. Also, for teacher that let students to use their phone for any work
I think thats not a good idea because the teacher is helping the student to get distracted by using their phone and not passing their classes. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
5E3EA4C47C9A | The author Ralph Waldo Emeson wrote, ''to be yourself in a world that constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment .''
I agree with Emerson statement about individuality because I've actually seen people end up in big problems tryng to pretend for the world. . In the world we live in we can't even hide from the act because its in out tv's and advertisement . If I'm being honest there is no benefit from this whole act of changing for the world in order for them to like you .
My favorite rap artist is Tekashie Sixnine who has recently been on the charts and hot 100 in America for his songs .
The main reason he got all those views and streams was because he was puttting up a front and prenting to being someone else in his lyrics . This artist has even been also been skating on thin ice for awhile . He has also created and posted on the internet videos of him doing crimes which lead to his arrest in november 20 2018.Tekashie is now serving jail time for trying to prove to the world that he was a big time gangster.
My other reason for me to agree with Emerson statement about indivuality was because our lives has changed now that the advertisemnt is telling you change and look a certain way . For example I use instagram every single day and fifthy percent of the time the ads are about weight pills and cool clothes which have gang related logos on it now people buy these clothes and are'nt even part of gang related activity because the market is influence you to buy it . People can easly fall for the trap thats why you should always be yourself no matter what .
Now to my last reason as a human being I've made mistakes and I've learned you always have to be yourself from those mistakes. When you are trying to act a type of way the life choices you will be making and friends you hang around will matter . You can be acting for your friends and end up in jail due to to the way yo were acting to make your friends happy. I think its much better to be yourself and too see that as a accomplishement because we are all now in a tech phase were web presents is a big deal and people go at any risk too achieve that goal . I for one can say that it is hard to not act like anyone becuase I came from Canada to america and I didnt change and it benefiting me because I making better choices .
These are the reason why I agree with the statement author Ralpgh Waldo Emerson made about individuality .I also think that everone thats trying to achieve something good and do something with their lives should aways keep in mind to be there selfs no matter what . | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
5E49CEB56FB3 | I think that this is wrong for the students sometimes ,because they can't learning the iphone is one thing for that they can't focus in the school.
when the students use the iphone in a moment imporntat when the teacher is teching somthing they can't understand because the never put attention to the teacher, and is very important the eschool because you can be someone better the , you can have a good future and don't matter what.
We need to do everithing for get a good job , and make money , but if the teachesr never put a stop or don't help to the estudens they never do that .
the tecnology is something that have to the all person now all one want to be or use the iphon for everything , the people need understand that all is in our mean we can do with only think and want to .
Everyone need to finish with this problem with the phones and do something change the thinghs that affect we life .
One day verything can be different to now . | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
5E830B6462DB | Thomas Jefferson believes in that doing something is better than doing nothing. We do accomplish more if we always do something. There are great accomplishments and there are simple accomplishments. If I wanted to play an instrument, but i don't know how, so I learn how. Let's say I want to see other dementions' worlds', or go back in time. Lets say I build a machine to be able to do that. Cleaning the house, Cooking a meal, and doing homework. If we are always doing, then we can accomplish. We accomplish more by doing something. If we didn't we wouldn't have the things we do now. We can accomplish things' as a team or individually. Like sports, in sports people work together to win. A game company, these people work together to make a game, so that people can play it. In a game people play together online to win as a team or individually. It's better if we do our work, homework, or even little things like play outside, hangout.
Inactivity in it's own way has a purpose resting or sleeping, relaxing. If you do that you let out that steam. We take a break after working hard on something. So we do what we have to do for a couple of hours, we go home, we can take a nap, eat, watch a bit of tv, or sleep. That way the next day you can be motivated to continue doing your job, or go to school. If we do even a little during the day we've accomplished like go out and buy groceries, clean the house, and cook. If you do that then you've accomplished something. you can't really do anything if you sleep all day. Being lazy is not good. Its bad, because if we get lazy then we'll want to have the easy way out of things all the time. We can get used to at being lazy. It's better to be active and motivted to do the things we have to so we can accomplish something. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
5EA0A8768F94 | Students should commit to a career at a young age because they will have more knowledge about their career, have more experience, and if they don't like it they could change it before fully committing to it in college. Being committed to a career early can help you be prepared when you officially start it. If they start in high school they will have more experience about the career and might be able to get a lot more job opportunities. The more experience you have, the more you'll get payed. They will also be able to focus on their career before college and have more knowledge about it. Some people say you shouldn't commit to a career at a young age because if they dont like it they just wasted a few years preparing for a career that doesn't interest them anymore. However if they don't like it they can change it before entering college and have to pay for a career they dont even like and doesnt interest them, thats why its best to start committing to a career in high school. Also when jobs look at your resume and see you took classes in high school for that career and a lot more experience they will wan to higher you. when people see that you are committed to your career at a young age they respect you more and help you out to achieve your career faster. Its best for students to commit to a career at a young age because they will have more time to learn about it and see if thats the career they actually want in a few years from now. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
5EA71157D48F | I supported that people make their own decisions and here's why.
You can learn your own expression, that you can learn something new on your life like building your own home or learn how to run a town for mayor. Following your instincts that can help you bypass tough problems like how to escape from a hole or how to dodge a ball perfectly. Follow your own path to see who or what to see the true you is. I don't hate getting help from others to seek guides but I personally prefer it because it would be challenging for me instead of taking the easy way out, if I did what did I learn something? nothing that is why I would like to learn something on my own. another thing here is that if you seek guides from others, its a helpful way so you won't struggle a lot and that is alright, that you cannot do everything your own which is fine. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
5EA76942F5C7 | Me as a student think that we should have at least a (C) because most students use sports to express their feeling out. Sometimes if they don't get what they want they will just stop trying; in school work or even homework. But in the other hand some other students will try harder so they can play or do what they love. So a (C) sounds good but a (B) sounds even better; so students like me could try even harder and have a modification to so. So I say to the principal great gob and keep it up. When we are looking back and when we have a great job that we like; we look back to middle school and say thank u for pushing us to max when it came down to doing work THANK YOU. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
5EAC31CA561A | I agree with Prime Minister Churchill because failure gives you strength to keep going and to learn from your personal mistakes you make, so you can succeed in life.
While I was a kid all I ever wanted to be was an actress. I would try for plays in school and out, but I failed to be in the plays because I was to nervous, quite, not using the whole stage, ect. That inspired me used all those factors that where making me fail and improving them to make me a better actress.
In school/classroom always fail in sols, test, and quizzes but those students never give up trying and after trying and studying students succeed in their test.
In a community everybody tries to help out trying to catch people that break in peoples houses, but never do. The people made a list of the things they were doing wrong and they very upset people stopped trying. Until one day one person broke in to a house and instead of doing nothing like the people said the made a successful plan to catch the criminal. The planed worked and then community celebrated their success and for not giving up.
One of the most famous soccer player in the world Lionel Messi also has failed on the field whether it is on penalties, shooting, or speed he always tries to be better and all his failure has made him one of the best soccer players in the world.
In this world you become better on what you do by failure. If there is no failure there is no success. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
5EB7A0B134B4 | some school offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I think students would not benefit being able to attend classes from home because they can not be on their telephone and not due what they are spouse to due.
First, they can get distracted, In my position
I Can get distracted went I am at home doing homework i want to wache TV even some time I do not finish my homework because i get a lot distracted. I want to play whit my brothers go out side play soccer and i say just for a little I am to playing with then but a get distracted and i for got the i have to do homework or study for a test. Some time I get distracted by seeing my brother playing video even went they is a lot of noise i get distracted because i want to what is happening or what is going on. I remember one day the I have to finish a test review at home because I do not have time to do it at school I do not finish because I get distracted by brothers. They were making a lot of noise and i could no concentrate because of then. My brothers are the same way as me they can get distracted fully easy and not pay attention on what they doing maybe they star by doing they homework but they do no finish because they get distracted by the TV or the video game.
Second, they can use the telephone some time I get a lot distracted whit my telephone because I away want to be in the telephone. Went i home I just want to be in my telephone and i do not do my homework. I get fully distracted because I want to text whit my friends or playing video games in my telephone and not Du what i suppose to to do. Went I am at home I have all I want my bed my telephone the TV the I forgot the I have to how or study for a quiz or test. Only because I at home and I have all i need some time i do not want to do anything
I get distracted fully easy and more if I have my telephone in front of me because i want to leasing to music or video chat my friend and talk and pay attention on what I suppose to due. Some time my mom tell that I have to stuff in the house so I have to do it even if I am doing homework or studying I have to what she say and then a can kip doing what i was doing. If I have my telephone whit me the only thing i what to do is be in the telephone because it is a easy way to get distracted and not due what you suppose to due.
Some people my say that if students have home school it will be good because some students can get bully at school and they do not want to go back. The is say for then because some the students do not ride the bus the parent have to take then to school and the take a lot of time some time because they have to wait. Even they are going late for work and they do not have tame to take then to school. They may say the if they have school at home they do not have to do all the work by taking then to school. some time a lot of kids get bully at school and it more easy for then do do it by home because they do not have to deal with at school they do to have to be worry what would happen to then the net they or what does people are going to do whit then, But I chose to not have school at because some people can get distracted I not saying the all people have the problem I am just saying the i have the problem they my not have. But I do not like have home school because i want to see my friend graduate whit then have fun some time go to party and now more people have more experience.
In solution, people can do what is best for you if you like do school by home because you do not like people or have personal problem or have i disability that you go it no one is going to say anything. But some time people want to have friends have fun because you are a person the like to be around people that good to. the only thing i am saying chose what is best for you not what is best for other people or what other people think. Make you own decision be proud of you no matter what. | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
5EC5534F533A | The first impressions is importance for people. It's almost impossible to change, I'm agree with this statement, for example, you saw an ugly food, you not eating it, anyhow it good eating or no. Next, if one person give you bad inpressions, maybe you not try to talk to him or her. Finally, if you want to shopping, you will saw the appraisal about the store.
First, when you go to any restaurant to finish lunch or dinner, you want a perfect food for yourself. you waiting for food like 15 minute, after 15 minute, the food coming, but, the food looking for squeamish, you will disappointment, because, you feeling it's a bad food and can't eating that. If are pretty food on you desk, you don't care how was food, just try it first.
Secondly, you parents introduce someone to you, this guy talking too mach, the mouth can't stop,
just like fly. however, you hate people talk too much and want quiet. Than,behave of this guy let you discontent. you will hate this guy also, want leave to him or her. This impression will let you apart to this guy.
Third, when you go to shopping with best friend, but, here are new place for your guys, just came only 1 day, you don't know anywhere to shop, than you will check to cell phone to find a store. When you find a store, the things looking for pretty, your want to go, however, your saw the all appraisal are bad, only 3 or 4 appraisal are good, than, you will change other one, because, your think the quality of needs are bad.
Finally, the first impressions is hard to change, looking for the people one time, first impressions will in you head. Regardless to change, arise in you head almost are first impressions, because an effect of first time to meet are unforgettable. | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
5EE526AB840B | How can a students learn more from home than attend classes in school?. A student has more benefits if they attend to classes in schools because if the student can not understand a topic or has questions about it, the teacher can not explain by video conferencing as a teacher that can explain face to face an be sure that student understood. My second reason is a student does not have a person who trust or a person to appeal if He/She are passing for any personal or familiar problem. In schools We can find a lot of person as a teachers, counselor, police members, and psychologist to help students. My last reason is a student has to socialize with other students to be prepare for his/her future.
Firstly, if a student can not understand a topic and has questions about it, they can feel more comfortable to ask and said
"I do not understand, can You explain me again?, if they are with the teacher face to face. Generic_Name (My friend's name) decided to take the classes online, in the beginning He was so excited, but after one month He told me that was not a good choice because He does not feel comfortable asking a lot of question about one topic by the computer, and when He not understood something, He just do not said anything to the tacher who is given him classes by video conferencing.
Secondly, in schools we can find many ways to be help if we have any problem in home. Teachers, counselors, any person who works in the school can help us. In my junior year I had a classmate who was attending to the school but then she change her classes to online, When I ask her why she change her classes She told me that her mom was fired of her job and She had to start working to support her family. She was 16 when that happened she felt alone with nobody who help her.
Lastly, students has to socialize with other students to feel the sensation of surpassing. If they just does not want to attend school because they are shy or they does not like to interact with other students, We are not educating a good citizen. Students has to feel the sensation of surpassing when they do their homework or when He/She finished their assignments, that sensation the student can not lose. I read in a newspaper a case about Generic_Name, He was 16 when He attended to online classes, He never like attend to school when He discover the option for students to attend classes from home he decided take it. because He never like to interact with other students. After 2 years he graduated, but he never were prepare to socialized with persons, and that affects his personal life.
In conclusion, the offer to learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing in not a good idea because all of them are under 18, They does not have a good criteria to take that big decision that can bring serious consequences or affect their life. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
5EF21F142C51 | Have you ever wanted to seek others opinion on a choice that you had to make?.Seeking others opinion on a choice you have to make is right. I think seeking others opinion on a choice that you have to make is good,because people can help you make the right choice for your self,learn what they would do if they had to make the same choice as you,and learn new ways on making that choice
One way you can seek someone's opinion on a choice that you have to make,is by asking people what they would do if they had to make the same choice as you. by doing this you will known their opinion on making that choice. Most people don't ask others on what choice they should make,because they think that people would make fun of them on making a choice on a certain topic. For example when someone has to make a choice on if they would buy some toy against buying a video game. I too have been in that type of problem. Another example is making a choice between wanting to get something you like but there are more than one things you could get and your friend making fun of what you say you want to get. To sum up my first reason of why it is good to seek people's opinion on making a choice,because you then can use others opinion to make your choice.
Another reason of why you should seek others opinion to make a choice is to get help on making the correct choice. One way you can get help with deciding on a choice is by learn the steps of make a choice. One way I learned the steps of making a choice was from a book my mom had got me to read. The steps of making a choice are first think of all the choices you have,then checking which ones you like and they suit you,and finally making your choice!.One other way is to ask friends and family to help you decide on your choice. A example for asking your friends and family to help you make you choice is,One day you had went to the video game store and you see two video games you really want but you only have $70 to spend,so you ask your brother on which one you should get and he says the racing one,but you don't known if you should save more money so next time you get both or just buy one now.
Lastly,My final reason for why seeking others opinions to make a choice is right,because you can learn different ways of how you can make your choice. One way you can make your choices is by finding all the possible outcomes. Another way you can decide on what choice is by asking friends and family give you ideas on the different choices you have and which ones are the best for you. An example from my life I have is,one time I was going to the ice shop and me and my brother did not known what favor to get,so I said why don't we try the new favor,because we had not ate before,so I think my idea for what we should get was good,because I came up with a new choice that we never had thought of before.
In Conclusion,seeking people's opinions on making a choice is good. I think seeking others opinions on a choice you have to make is right,because you can learn what they would have done if they had to make the same choice,help you make the right decision,and learn new ways on making that choice. | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
5EFD8FA4133A | It has been said that a positive attitude is the key of success. Some people think that having a positive attitude is not the key to success. That is comprehensible but not all the time. I strongly agree that having a positive attitude can walk you threw success. In my opinion I think having a positive attitude is the key of success because It make you feel confident on what you are doing.
First of all, a positive attitude would help you to achieve many things. For example, one time I was taking a Math test, I was not thinking positive, I thought I would failed that test and that's what happened. In addition, I had my chance to retake the test and I went with a positive mind and I did it, I pass my test. Positive attitude also helped me to not get stress because I was positive and I knew I would pass that test. Therefore, a positive attitude can help you in many ways. It make you think that you are going to pass every test even thought you haven't studied.
Second of all, with positive attitude you can achieve many of your goals. Another example, one time when I was trying to get a job I was thinking in a way that I said to myself that I would not get that job. At that time I said that I can do it, That I'm going to get that job because now I have a positive attitude. At that moment when I got that job I felt so happy and my new boss told me that she liked the way that I had a positive attitude and that I was capable for the job. This shows that, a positive attitude can lead you to success.
Third of all, some people say that having a positive attitude is not going to guide you to success. They say that even thought you think in a negative way or in a positive way you can still achieve many of your goals. But, when you think in a positive way, It make you feel better and confident on what you are doing, because when you think negatively you can feel depress or sad because you don't believe on your self. Also, It can make you feel that you are not capable to, and you would fail. Furthermore, a positive attitude can guide you and walk you threw success.
To conclude, a positive attitude can walk you threw success. You can achieve many things, many goals, etc. It help you to be confident while you are doing something that is hard. It also help you to believe on your self. For me there were many times that I was thinking negatively and I didn't achieve many things but now that I have a positive attitude I'm achieving many of my goals and it make me fell proud of me. Thats why we all have to have a positive attitude. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
5EFF1BA0FBC1 | Although the extra time would benefit students. Some people dont wanna stay after school because they are already tired from staying 7 hours at school. Because school can cause stress if you are forced to do much work.
I disagree because the school board is adding it to our day. They should add a after school program for kids who need help with homework. Because if they add it for everyone then we would get out of school late. And we would barley have time to do homework. On the other hand if they add it everyday then a lot of kids will be stressed. Because when they come back if they have homework,or projects to work on then they might stay up all night working on it and come to school the next day .And they will probably be grumpy or stressed.
My second reason is The teachers will also be tired and stressed because if we leave school first. Then that means they leave after us. Also they have to grade our papers and other stuff so adding extra time to school will not be a great idea because the teachers can turn mean from all the stress. They can sleep from being too tired and then that means we wont get to learn anything. And dont forget that the teachers have a normal life too. They have families that they want to see so if the school board adds extra time then that teachers might not see their families often because they will probably be too busy grading our work.
So i think that the school board should not add the time. Because if they do then they will mess everything up like people's sleep schedule,The time they might go somewhere. So over all i think that the time we leave school right now is good. Because people have enough time to do their work and projects,and to get enough sleep. So the time we have now is good because everything is balanced. But if they did change it then we would have to get used to changing our sleep time and doing school work. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
5F1183463E9D | Thinking ahead of time of what you want to do after high school before you start high school may or may not be a good idea. For example it might get you prepared for what classes you can take your first year of high school. Because high school is all about getting good grade and getting the help you need to become what you want to become in life. High school is where you get your real start to your future. And here are some reasons why.
Thinking about what you want after high school before you even start could be beneficial to you. For example for some it might come as motivation. As in they are at a low point in life where things arent going so great, they could think about what they want tot do and see them selves in the future becoming what they wanted to become. It could even benefit you your first year of high school like picking your classes. You would pick the classes that are most related to the career you want to pursue. Another big thing that is good about looking into what you want to do before high school is the collages as well. Some collages might have the the class you need to finish and major in what you are studying for. It is like a head start on one the classes you take in high school, two the rest of your high school years, three the collage you want to get into.
But there are always some downs to thinking and or knowing what you want to do before you even get to high school. Such as there might not be a class for what you want to major in. Or you might not be eligible for taking that class , they could be over booked in those classes. There might be mix ups with your schedule that may cause you not to get the class you wanted. Even when you have your mind set on one thing for your future your opinion may change over time it may even change completely. And it happens to a lot of students. They make up there minds and then maybe weeks later it may change into something else. There are also other issues with what you want to do in your future. Some students work full time jobs and its hard for those students to focus on one goal and keep up with school work , Sometimes even miss school just because of work. If you think about it even after graduating high school some still work and move on to collage and are still stuck in the mud with work and even harder homework and class work. So dont have a ride to school or even work. Money is a big issue as well. With having to pay for a car or even other life needs you might not be able to get into the collage you want to get into because of how expensive it is. There are student loans but you still have to pay that back and sometimes you can be late on payments but then that doubles and no one wants that.
High school is where your future really begins really. Because if you think about it is where you start learning about where to get your start , how to start , when to start . This is where we as students decide what we want to do in life and where we want to go with it . And if we chose to chance our dream that thats where we end p with hard work and dedication. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
5F370D929BA7 | Would be good too that the younger students can be able to go to some schools of the older students, because they can learn how the High Schools goes and they can learn either what classes they are going to like.
When students go to different schools they can talk with their parents to what school looks better and if they liked or not and he can choose the classes that he wants and talk with their parents if that class is good or not.
They are going to be happy because they choose the classes that he have the chance to choose the classes for themselves.
Some students have a program that pairs older students with younger students. The older students are available to assist the younger students.
Is good that the students go to the schools but most will be the one's that are in the middle schools for what for nothing is good that the students that are in middle schools they are going to high school because they can talk with the teachers about the class and what is going to be about.
Can be good for some students because when get's the time to go to high school they can be sure what is going to be about the classes the he choose and all that stuff.
They are going to liked because they have the opportunity to choose their classes and for some reason is going to be more fun and the students wants to learn more about what is the teacher talking about because they choose them classes.
Sometimes the students don't know what classes they want to take when they go to high school because some students say that is hard to be in high school it is but you need to think that if you wanna do something hard you need to work hard and you can due because if you don't try you are not going to do something.
Sometimes the students don't like to help themselves but doing this can be helpful for them because they are going to say to themselves " wait but is going to be cool choose my classes ". And they are going to want choose them classes and and they can learn what classes they can choose.
They are going to be very happy because they decided to help themselves.
They are going to help others students and see what they due and what they are learning.
Helping other students is good they don't need to be at school but I don't like this class what can I do to changed but I can't changed it help them and they are going to be happy.
Always try to help other because they are going to be the future of this world we need to help them to find the solution of everything. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
5F407964AF46 | Hello to all the teachers in Generic_School.
My name is Generic_Name.
I Am From El Salvador.
Nice to meet you, to all the teachers in Generic_School that, i don't know.
But, i really would like to know, all the tecahers at Generic_School.
I am a hispanic boy, that i like to play, some sport after school, i really like to play, soccer, with my friends.
I like to come to school, to learn, about that the tearchers teachs to me, and all the students. I really appreciate that,
I don't like to be an ignorant boy, at school.
I always like to talk to the people, at shool, and i like to make new Friends, I like to be a respect boy, with all of the people.
I really like how, all the teachers at Generic_School, teachs to the students they, teachs to you really good.
I already read the
Prompt, and, I would like to describe that, and give my opinions, and reasons.
so let's started This. I know that so many students, want to have, some educational's experiences in some activities, but others Students do not want to be in activities, others students want to have all the homeworks, done. they don't want to Miss anything, at school and it's ok, If they want to be in an activities. Of course that the school always should have The student's control. Because students can have all very good without problems, and thats why the school and the Teachers should have their controls, all the students should have all done, if they want to be in an activity, because If the school did not take the controls, of the students they will not respect, the school's and the activitie's rulers, my Opinon will be that students should have time to do some activities and they should have time to study, to do all the Homeworks, like they don't should have a lot of activities, they needed to do the homeworks to. for example, if i Would like to be in some activities like sports i have to do all my homeworks first,have good grades at school. i Know that the activities are good for your body, normally the body always need some activities, the school always Have some activities to do and thats really good for your body. I see a lot people running by the roads like in the Summer because, it is good, for body and healthy. When i was in 10th grade i did have some activities at the gym From Generic_School and actually i did all the activities that the teachers tells to me and others students. it was very fun To do all the activities at gym from Generic_School. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2 |
5F467A8F3896 | What are people going do if they find themselves in a situation of danger because of meting the wrong person on social media? No body would like the idea of being on danger but if we do not know how to manege social media we all are in danger. What are people going to do if they find themselves all alone because they did not take the chance of meting someone new, o because they did not enjoy the little moments whit their family? How could someone think that human communication is not necessary? People would not have the chance of having a nice chat whit their family or friends. Although some people say that the limitation of human contact due the use of technology has a positive effect because it helps people whit communication problems interact whit other people due social media, actually the limitation of human contact due the use of technology has many negative effects because people miss priceless moments whit their family and friends and there is a high risk of meting someone dangerous on social media.
People say that the limitation of human contact due the use of technology has a positive effect. This is because they think that it helps people whit communication problems interact whit others due social media. Many studies have showed that social media is very helpful for those people that are insecure of themselves to interact whit others not just from their city but whit people from different places in the world. Technology is advancing, and it is trying to help people whit different needs. In this case technology allows people from everywhere to communicate whit others does not matter the place they are.
It is a privilege for the people that are far away from their families. It is also a way that people use to get away from having uncomfortable chats whit people from their surroundings.
However the limitation of human contact due the use of technology has many negative effects. Because people miss the opportunity of having nice moments whit their family,
their families start to break apart. That's the case of my cousin's family. they were a beautiful family but everything went apart because my cousin's wife spent most of her time on Facebook, where she found a random guy, so she left my cousin whit their three daughters and one son. social media can destroy families and relationships in seconds, but is our duty to enjoy our time whit the people that we love because we show the love that we feel for them and communication by technology can never do that. We do not know if one day the people we love are going to leave, but if they leave we are going to keep those priceless memories on our heart. Family is everything and we should never let anything get us apart from it.
Even if social media allows people from everywhere interact whit each other; there is a high risk of met whit someone dangerous. There are many cases where young ladies have being abducted.
This happen when young ladies decide to met boys from social media that result not being what they thought but kidnappers. Those kidnappers sale the young ladies, and this poor girls are forced to give up on themselves and work as prostitutes.
All of this could be avoided if we start to know better about the people near us instead of trying to met someone that we dont know anything about . It's important to recognize that social media have benefits if we know how to use it correctly, but we need to be careful because we have to know other people better before trusting them, and it is even better if we already have had a chat in person whit those people.
In conclusion the world is constantly changing and technology is an important factor in actuality, but in those cases where technology is used incorrectly many people can get damaged. Technology is not a need but is a benefit, and if we are allowed to use it, we should do it whit responsibility and not depend from it. In spit of the fact some people believe that technology is more than necessary, and that there is no need of human interaction because it helps people with communication problems, in truth the limitation of human contact due the use of technology has just negative effects because we can experience more than one danger; like losing our family or being forced to a prostitute. Communication in person is necessary, there is no better way of live our life than enjoying the time whit our family, the little chats and of curs taking the opportunity of get to know better each one near us. A computer or a phone can never transmit our feelings, and if people want to express themselves they do not have to be trapped on technology. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
5F4D9997A207 | Students Early Graduation
Do you think that finishing the high school in three year helps a student to enter the university or work force one year earlier? As we know education is so important in our life and every one need to get good educate. Therefore, we need to study well to get good grades. It dosen't matter to finish high school in three year or four year. Therefore, students need to be active, hard working, and patient about the opportunities that school prepare for them.
Those student who are active in the class and participate in the lessons, they will graduate on time with a good grades that's why they don't need to do these following steps; work force one year, not having elective classes, and taking summer classes. Also, some students by taking serious the home works and completing the class work can rise their score and that helps them to do not fail on the test and no west one more year to study that subject again otherwise by failing it effect badly for their graduation year. I think the best way to solve this problem is to be as a good memmber of class and participate in schools lessons.
students with hard working can get good scores in the class and that scores helps them to be a better student in future. Even I am a student I can say that for sure that you will never lose something by trying hard and some times maybe the result will not pleasant but you should never give up and never lose hopes. For example; the student who never try hard for learning and they just come to class even they do not pay attention in lessons, these type of student will not pass the exmes and in the future they will face with lots of problem like taking classes during summer, not having elective classes. I know a lots of students who just had good score and pass their exmas and graduate without any rush.
Most of student need to be patient about the educational desitions because that desition could change their hole life. Finishing the high school early is not the point everyone knows that studying well and learning something in best way is important part of education. Although, high school students are teen and they have more time so they don't need to rush for graduating. Also, In my old school I knew a girl who wants to finish the high school sooner because she think that the faster you finish the faster you will be able to start the colloge but, that was not good idea so she undastand it later.
students need to be active, hard working, and patient about the opportunities that school prepare for them and if the lost these opportunities they will never get it back so, use from the time you have it right now before you lost it. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
5F5E1817CCA0 | I think working with a group or working alone it depends on the person because everyone is not a same. I feel strongly that I dont like work alone because its very boring and takes long time to finish work. However, I do like to work with a group because its so much fun and you will experience with others and its more easy to do something.
First, Working with a group is so much fun especially when you are do something with your best friends. When you are work with your friends they makes you laugh so hard and we do lot of fun things togethor. Some of my friends actually works well with other people. When I have a free time I like to play games with my friends. In the game you will team up with your friends and play against another team. You have to talk to your friends every single time and lesson to their idea to win game. Most of video games needs to be really good team work. You can't do anything by yourself.
Second, When you are working with a group you will interaction and feel the other people. Its like social experience. Talk to your team-mates, lesson and support their idea. Working a group is way better than working by yourself. If you are learning English by yourself its very hard but if you had a teacher then its much easy to learn and quickly
Finally, You can do things very quickly because there is a more than one person working. If your mom say's clean your house. You have to clean entire house by yourself and it takes long time to finish but if you clean with your brother or sister then its quite faster than clean by yourself.
Although, I like to work with a group of people because its so much fun and you will experience with others and its more easy to do something. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
5F679622B317 | Shoul we have to make challenging goals in are life?
Every goals that we make in our life is important to do it,even that is not like we thought. Also do our goals can affect are live psychologyly, such as can make us more confindent of ourselves. ''The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short;but setting in our aim too low, and achieving our mark." Setting our aim too high and falling short is more important because we feel better knowing that we did our best and we can discover new things that maybe we never thought to do.
First, we feel better knowing that we did our best to make are goals,even that is not at all like we thought. When I was 11 years old and I used to play soccer, and one of my goal was to win play in a proffesional soccer team and win trophies,even that I did play for a proffesional soccer team I won many trophies. Trying to make real the goals that we used to had when we were young make us to feel proud and confident of ourselves because we never get up, always fough to do it.
Another reason, when we make our goals, even that maybe we just complete tha half of our goals;we discover new things that maybe we did not know that we can made. For example, if my dream was to be a master chef, and I work at place where a cook food to helping homeless. So, I realized that I can make my goal helping other people. When my brother was a kid, his dream was to travel around the world;even that he is pilot and only go to airport, he meet his fiance in his job. Some people may say that complete only the half of our challenging goals make us disappoined of ourselves because we did not complete. However, copmplete a challenging goals make us proud of ourselves because we are people who worked really hard and we discover many things that maybe others will never do.
Overall, we learn more doing challenging goals in our life than doing small goals that maybe everyone can do essaly.
Also,
making challenging goals we realize that we are people who want to be succsesful in our life. In addition, making challenging goals make us in admiralble people because noy every person decide to make big steps in life. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
5F67A5D3DBB0 | I think students, parents, and including me wouldn't like the idea of adding a hour and half of a hour each day of the school thats why I disagree with the idea of extending the day of school because students have other things to do like pick up little brothers or sisters and take of them, help mom and dad with the house, do another type's of activities because if students are only thinking about school all the time we can stress out a lot and there's no rule that says that students can't have fun also we are in school for about 7 or 8 hours so i think thats enough.
First of all some of the students have little brothers and sisters and the parents work and they dont have the chance to pick up they kids because they get out of the work late, so the orders sibling haves to take care of they little brothers and sisters also little kids from elementary schools can't get out of the bus without someone picking them up, so the older siblings have to pick them up or else the little kids are going back to school and they get scared because they are the only one who are in the school and they are little so they don't know what's going on so that is one reason why we cant be in school more hours not even half of a hour.
Secondly students have to help they parents with the house how i said parents came from work late and they dont have time for nothing so students have to help them by cleaning the house, cook for they sibling and parents , they have to wash the dishes, wash they clothes, clean the rooms, some of the students have dogs and they have to go with them for a walk or take them to the doctor so when parents get home they can lay down and chill because they work really hard and all the students can do is helping doing the cleaning that is the second reason why we can't be at school more than we supposed to be.
Finally some students have another type of activities after school like dancing, soccer practice and soccer game's, basketball practice and basketball game's, step teams, community service, etc also that helps a lot to get your mind out of thinking about homework's, test's, classwork, so you dont stress out a lot because being honest sometime students have a lot of homework and test to do in each class and after school is the only time where you can get you'r mind out of school and also we are having fun for a little time because some parents are kind off strict and they don't let they kids to be outside after 8:30.
In conclusion we can't be in school more than 8 hours because all the students have more activities to do and have fun for a little time and we have responsibilities at home helping parents cleaning and taking care and picking up little siblings and we can stress out a lot if we spend more than 8 hours in school because that means more work to do and we would be only student and we would be tired because also we are not going to have time to chill and i know that no one is going to be happy about it because teachers have they children as well parents need the help of they kids and students need they own time so these are my reasons of why I disaree of adding a hour and half of a hour. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
5F8195FBA0CA | Imagine schools use cell phones in classrooms for educational purposes, students will not have a hard time to find information on their classes. Schools should not allow students to use cell phones in classroom, this rule is important because cell phones are the distraction, students will have an opportunity to cheat on the test or the exam, and cell phones will cause the laziness, lack of knowlegde, and procrastination to students.
Certainly, some people think cell phones should be allowed in classroom because students can have a cell phones' break after finishing their test, they can enjoy some entertainments on the cell phones, some students will focus more on education with the musics on their cell phones. Others believe cell phones should be allowed in classroom because students can easily work on the projects, they can search for more information that they do not know much about. Still others argue cell phones should be allowed in classrooms because they will help some foreign students with the dictionary apps on the cell phones. Cell phones also help students in classrooms such as: reviewing notes by playing kahoot, some games' apps which include school knowlegdes.
However, schools should not allow students to use cell phones in classrooms because they are creating an opportuniy for students to cheat on the test or the exam. Students will definitely use the cell phones during the test in classroom if cell phones are allowed. For example, students usually take pictures of the answers and send them to the other students. The second reason of why they cheat is because everything can be easily saved and taken on the little smart cell phones, so why do students have to spend a hard time to study for the test ? They can just easily write down information on their test from the little smart cell phones, so what is the point of education? This rule is definitely unaccepted.
Furthermore, schools should not allow students to use cell phones in classrooms because the cell phones are the huge distraction. Imagine everybody is sitting quietly in classroom, and suddenly the little noise is popped up from the cell phone, catches a thousand of people's views. Of course no one likes being distracted but having the cell phones during classes is the huge mistake that causes the bad things to everybody around. For example, some students always play some unappropriate songs very loud while everybody else is taking the test, this situation always happens in every school. The second reason is the person who is with a cell phone, can attract the other one who sits beside, and interrupt other students' business.
Finally, schools should not allow students to use cell phones in classroom because they will cause the laziness, lack of knowlege, and procrastination to students. Students will keep messing on their cell phones, and ignoring the education, causing the lack of knowledge. Students will not absorb enough knowledge into their brain because they can just easily search for information on their cell phone without thinking critically of what they are doing. They can have the good results but actually they have nothing in their brain from school. The more schools allow students to use cell phones, the more they are worsening their students.
Cell phones should not be allowed for students to use in classrooms because cell phones are the huge distraction in classrooms, even in other public places, students will have an opportunity to cheat on the test or the exam using the cell phones, and cell phones will cause the laziness, lack of knowlegde, and procrastination to students. If the cell phones are allowed in every school, students will not need to go for education because everything is available to use on cell phones. Schools only need the real hard working, and the real quality from students, not from websites on cell phones. Every school should always have to think critically about the effects of allowing students to use cell phones in classrooms. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 |
5F88187C25B8 | It has been said that positive attitude is the key to have a succesful in life.
I'm agree with the statement about the importance to have a positive attitude in life, because that's one point at favor that can helps us for work hard everyday and give the best that we can do and had a success in everything we can make and do in life. However, depend on people,how much they want have success in their life and if they're a positive people for work hard and have what they want in their life and give a better life to their next generation.
Success in life is not just to talk about the everything is going to be easy for us,but it the depend how the people think and how much they want to have succesful life,somethings you're going to feel the everythings is hard and not the way the you think but you keep faighting because you have one reason why you work that hard for give to their family a better economic and education, when we talk about a better economic and education we're talking about to proper a better future for ours sons and daugheters for one day they can have everything and don't be worry about to work for have money for collage or university that one reason why people have a positive attitude and want to have a succesful in their life.
Positive attitude, Change they way of people think, for example my father is man who don't have a good education but he has a positive attitude and the way he works hard for give to my family the best he can take is super wonderful, because he is showing me the when you want something you have to work super hard and put on your mind the you can do anything you want and depend if you like to do it, he is always tell me a goods advice and giving me a big lesson the i have to learn in life for have a better future.
Another point the affect so much today in day is the way the people think ,depend so much how you look the things and think about it if you can really make or some people they fast get desolution when something do not work for they and the way they wanna, but everything depend how that person works and how much love him or her put for get a good result, but thats not the end of everything, people have many change and tryies in life, is something doesn't work for you have to let go and look for another change and you need to have in your mind a positive attitude the you can make or do doesn't matter how many times you try for get that job the you like or the car the you wish with all your haerth of the house of dream, everuthing depend how hard you work and how much you faight how have the things the you wish to have in your life and everything have a one reason why you work hard in your life.
In my conclusion have a positive attitude is very important for have a succesful life and that helps people to have a vision why and why you work hard everyday of their life and show the importance the you need to have it and the controls of your mind and the power of make or do what you want to have in your life. doesn't matter how hard was for get there but one day you're gonna see and say i make all these when you finally are there you going to see the everything hads one reason why you do all those stuff and you're gonna be happy and thats one thing of many reason why we need to have a positive attitude in our life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
5F8F76B7A6FD | School districts offer programs that allow high student to graduate in three years time because it help student to start planning about what they want to do in college and what course they are going to take in college and to start planning how to get scholarship ,student aid, student loan, etc for college. some advantage of three year program is you can't stay too long in school in and that is great for me because school is boring and full of too much stress especially when you have to come to everyday even if you don't feel like come you still have to come .espicllay when you don't have friends in school is very boring . l know school is fun but the same time is stressful were you have teacher giving you lot of assignment . but in college you have your own schleude and is your choice to choose which day you like to come to school . you don't have to worried about friends every one will nice to you and in college you have study group were can join socialize with others . many people may that going very soon is not a good idea for them because don't want to leave their friends the making a new is going to be hard for them . well I don't think that is the reason for you not to go I mean you can still come and see if you want.
So finish school in three year time is a good Idea to me . | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
5F998012DDCD | The argument related to distance learning has often been a topic of interest to many people. Nowadays, many scholars support the idea of distance learning and it has been getting a great acceptance among many societies. Although some people think distance learning make students careless in doing their work, nevertheless, students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it saves the time they would spend by going to school and makes them more effective and efficient in their technology usage.
To begin, students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it saves the time they would spend by going to school. For example, it can take ten to forty minutes for a student to go to school. This shows that going to school takes students' precious time and makes them unproductive. Clearly, no one wants to waste his/her time on transportation.
Furthermore, students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it makes them more effective and efficient in their technology usage. For instance, students who spend their time on technological materials know more how to accomplish technology related tasks in a short period of time compared to students with no experience. This proves that taking online classes prepare students for higher education and learning. Obviously, the use of technology is growing fast in this age.
Overall, students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. This is because distance learning saves the time they would spend by going to school and makes them more effective and efficient in their technology usage. In conclusion, schools have to offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 5 |
5FBDFD6DB173 | Yes because people can be a failure, but you can be a success person too. And people try their best to become a successful person and not being a failure person.
First you can be a failure person at math, but you are good at science that is relate to math, then you are good at math and science,
but people are good at something that is their strengths. people can be success in some parts but you also failure in someways that you are good at.
Secondly some people are failures ,but they have a strength to be a success in anything. Although people can be failure to failure all the times, yet people always tries there best on anything that is possible to be a successful person all day long in their life.
thirdly You could be a success person in English class but the other person is bad at English that person who is good at English can teach that person who is bad at English to be a failure to be a success person. you can be a success person turn to a failure person but you can turn back to a failure person to a success person again.
People can be a success consists failure to failure without of enthusiasm therefore people need to try their best on anything that is relate to any job or school.
people can be a failure but it will grow to a success in every day life. furthermore failures can be a success person. additionally people try hard to be a successful person but some people can be a failure person in anything.
some people are failures in Korean, or some people are good at french if they try hard in korean or french they will be a successful in speaking and writting in korean and french. addition to failures and successers if you work hard and try your best you will be a success person, but if you don't try your best you will be a failure. | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 |
5FC3C342E64E | I agree with this statement because you are capable of doing anything you want. Just because you have mastered something it does not mean that you cant do anything beyond what you have mastered. Having to master something can be a very big accomplishment to people including myself. Mastering one thing is good but mastering more than one thing is a huge accomplishment. Everyone can go beyond what they have mastered you just have to try and never give up and you will have mastered anything you want. Mastering something takes time and dedication its not just something you can do over night. It might take days, months, years who knows how long but at the end pretty sure it will be worth it.
There are many things people can be mastered at such as teaching, playing football, etc. Just because you have mastered one thing it does not mean that you should be done mastering other things beyond what you already have mastered. If i were a NFL superstar it does not mean i cant go to school and become a doctor also when you retire you would have something to do. Thats an example of what you do to go beyond what you have mastered. Some people are born with skills and for them all they have to do is fully master it. Mastering is a skill that allows you to personally get a hang of what your best interest are. If you want to master something there a variety of ways to do so such as go to college or a camp etc.
Mastering something is not very easy it takes time and dedication thats why doctors take approximately 12 years to get the highest degree in becoming a doctor. I strongly agree with author Ralph Waldo Emerson cause if you dont master beyond your intentions you will not grow. This is true because there are many things to do in this world to not be mastered at only one thing. What it means by you will never grow up is because you will stay at the same level Intel you unlock your full potential. This is a great quote for someone who was trying to master one thing in there life but after reading this quote it will help them realize that they can master more than one thing.
This is a example on if you become a master at one thing and get lazy you will never grow up cause you have only mastered one thing in your life. Life it self is a precious gift and special skills are to so take advantage of it and learn as much as possible. So if you go above and beyond what you have mastered you will be a good and grown person. Its good in life to be good at just more than one thing cause it will help you in many ways such as getting jobs or getting in to schools. If you have more than one skills you could do anything you desire in life which is a good thing. That will be all for my S.A. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
5FC620AEDC8B | Prime Ministor Winstong Churchill said " Success consists from failure to failure without loss the enthusiasm". Failure had important role in the persuit of success because, failure help you to improve, to learn, and be strong in your life.
Firtsly, fail help you to improve in differents directions, at school, work, and also in your life. You cannot due verything rigth you fail one day and when that happen you had to get ready to come back and cheek where and why you fail, and try to find differents strategies to improve what you do.
Secondly, learn about your mistakes. If you make mistakes is because you're doing something wrong and probably you have to change somethings like your work style,skills, the way how you study,and your social communication, and try to find a differents ways to due better.
Lastly, be strong ,if you fail do not stay down, you don't want to be a destitute man, everybody want to be wealthy and what you have to do is get up and continue, push your self, work hard,because you have the control of yourself.
Inconclusion, failure do not push you down failure help you to go up, to improve in what you do, also help you to learn about your own mistakes and push you to find a different strategies to be a better person, worker,or student. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
5FE4F223CEA8 | One of my favorite middle school subjects is Math. Why Math is important because you will need to learn math thought high school and middle school even elementary school math is also important because math all the time in school and out of school to count money everything. For example you go to the store and get groceries the total would be whatever money it is and you'l pay but you need to know how much math you have to do. What if you know how to do math and you need a lot of help to count an amount of a number and if theres no one to help you have to use a calculator and other things. If you were to pay rent or something when your older it would be harder so you need math it's better for everyone. Math is meant for everything sports to count how much players there are to know a play for like a playbook. Thats why Math is important in school and out of school. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
5FEB3F213A84 | Have you ever wondered how people are really good at playing an instrument? Have you ever thought what is used to make an instrument sound soft, low, and/or relaxing? Well I've found a really good instrument that might seem easy but its actually difficult to learn and to play in front of judges.
One of the most played and enjoyed instrument in a educational schools, concerts, and even TV shows is a "Violin". Violins are a really enjoyable and interesting to watch. But have you ever thought how hard it could be for a person to learn the music and strings? Well learning the music it's hard for some. Mostly if you don't know what string plays what. The most easiest strings for people are the "D" and "A" strings. These strings are mostly used in every sheet of music you get.
Movies play a lot of orchestra music. Not just regular music but "Action" movies. Why you might ask, well when a intense part starts the movie plays a soft violin. When the movie is getting more closer to the part they play 2nd violin, Chello and Bases. Chello and bases are loud and deep reasons why movies like to play them a lot. Have you ever went to a Orchestra concert near by? Well if you have you probaly know how loud they get.
Well a side from Orchestra Violins playing in movies, orchestra also has their own assesment every school year. An "Assesment" is basically were a orchestra teacher gets to pick 30 students from their advance class and take them on a mini "field trip" representing the grade level and school's orchestra. What students basically do is play in front of professional judges from different counties. They rate your performance from 1 being the best, to 5 being the worst. That's basically what a violin and orchestra classes have. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
5FFB959ED7BA | I agree.
I agree with this statement, because I have impressions that I can't change in my mind. For example when my mom surprise me with my Play Station.
This Statement is based on my experiences, my first reason why i choose this was because the impressions is impossible to change, | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
6013DA298542 | Schools have partnered with local companies to let students explore the certain professions that local workplace perform the type of work you would like to pursue.
Many school pay to have a partnership with local companies some of the companies dont want to be patnershiped with the schools that are paying to be partnershiped with the company.
Sometimes local companies come to the schools and ask them to be partnershiped with the company some even ask for just a feild trip with the kids to explore the work or company to see what they have in the jobs and see what they do nonstop everyday for just work and gettin payed after a whole day of work.
Schools are wasting money to just get partnershiped with a company and also companies are wasting money for asking the teachers for a feild trip to go see the jobs what are going to do to stop the paying money part i know how about ask the teachers for a feild instead of paying the teachers and begging them to do the job that they going to tak the kids to the job after your done. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
602E786321EA | Others may think otherwise, Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow. Take Elon Musk for an example, he started out as a young kid who learned how to use computers but he did not stop there. Once he mastered computers he set higher and higher goals to master untill he ended up to be one of the richest man alive. I myself started with just drawing and graphic designing little art projects. then I started putting higher goals to master. Now I ended up learning how to use most of Adobe's products and doing commisions. Leonardo DaVinci was not just an artist. He was an inventer. he invented numerous of things, he had multiple skills. thats because he mastered all of these skills he set higher goals for himself and he achived them.
First examaple Elon musk. He was a bright kid. He leared how to use computers at a young age and mastered how to use them. Elon Musk did not stop there, He set higher goals to master. Elon Musk Drasticly Grew alot over the years. For and example he invented PayPal, SpaceX and Tesla. Now he is one of the riches man alive.
Second example is myself. I started out with just Drawing and graphic Designing a simple banner for my YouTube channel. then I started setting higher goals for myself to master. Now I ended up learning how to use most of Adobe's products. Doing commisions for YouTuber's and Esports teams and making money.
Last example is Leonardo DaVinci, Leoanrdo DaVinci was no ordinary artist from the Renissance Age. What made Leonardo DaVinci Stand out was that he was not a quitter infact he loved setting higher goals for himself to master. He loved growing, learning and mastering new things. Leoanrdo was not only an artist he was an inventor a scientist and that why he grew up to be one of many people biggest inspiration infact he is my inspiration. Leoanrdo was not a quiter and that's what made him grow up to be special and successful if life.
Now other may say that you dont need set higher goals to grow. But I think quite the opposite becuase if you don't set higher goals for yourself then learning new things and growing new skills would most likely be impossible unless you try to surpass your last achivement therfore you won't be able to grow and be as successful in life. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
603863409B06 | Most of students live with so much stress for study so hard and each time they depress more. They need to take a break sometimes. May breath fresh air and entertain themselves in something that can motivate to follow forward. I agree that students should be required to take one of these classes. It's very important to be creatives in some moment. Taking that type of classes make to students being relax forgetting for a moment the problems, helps to lose some fears, and above all they can benefit in their future.
Arts in general can help to people who can need a break of all the problems they have everyday and thus not live with stress. I have a friend who live with so much stress for every thing he pass. He try to be the best in all of his classes, but that cause more stress on him. For that reasons, he decide to take one or two free hours everyday to relax himself. The best decision he take was to choose a music class. After he start to take the class, he told me: "The guitar class is very amusing and interesting. It helps me to forget all the problems that cause me stress. It was the best decision I take." Now I see how my friend is so happy and calm after he start his guitar class. He changed because he found something that he really likes to do and that helps to be relax.
The performance class helps students to being more sociable with the others and lose one or more fears. I'm a girl with a lot of fears, but my biggest fear is to talk with others. That fear start to appear with the passing of the years. I was not a timid girl when I was a kid, but little by little I think more in what the rest think about me. That's why I decide to take a drama class. I need to confess that the first classes was very hard for me because I didn't speak with anyone, but with the passing of the days I start to speak with my companions. They were kind with me so that was more easy to me to have a conversation with someone.
The art classes can be very important to some people because it helps to have a good future. I have a teacher who I always show her my drawings and sculptures because she is my favorite teacher. She is not a art teacher, but I know she appreciate me so much because every time we talk she told me: "Your drawings are so beautiful, in the future you can be a teacher of art or sculpture. I know you are going to have a great future doing what you really likes." I think a lot of what she told me and probably after I finish NOVA I'm applying to some university about art, and maybe I can apply for a grant about art.
In conclusion, it's better if students take a music, a drama, or an art class so that can relax and have fun at the same time. Most of the people believe that type of classes should be electives because some students don't like to play a instrument, act, or even drawing. But I think that every student needs to take one of that classes to leave all the stress away. That type of classes are for students to turn on that creative part that they have inside and can have fun, not to being boring and stressing every time. It's good to take a break sometimes. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
604E0EA00305 | Allowing students the use of cell phones during class for educational purposes can be a threat, because it might cause an effect on the students education cycle. Some schools don't allow students the use of electronic devices inside their classroom, because the use of cell phones can be a distraction and it can also become an addiction for students in school.
This idea of letting students use their cell phones in their classrooms might stop the developing of their brain and is gonna lead students not to pay attention in class by letting them use their cell phones for special needs in class. However, cell phones have different types of effects worldwide , it can cause people to become slow in their learning and thinking abilities, it can cause vision problems, and it can also be a distraction for everyone.
It has been said that seventeen percent of the world's population has increased their thinking and learning abilities and the number are raising by using their phones daily.
Students are the future of hundreds of nations, students should be teach with words, books, or by letting them find information inside magazines or finding new words in dictionaries.
Some schools don't allow students to take out their electronic devices during class, because schools have computers inside liberties for students to find information when they have permission from their teachers or when they have school work.
By letting students use their cell phones in classrooms for educational purposes can cause a big impact in their physical life and also academic. Experts have discovered that ninety four percent of the students in school use their cell phones to cheat in schoolwork and exams. Most of the students in school struggle in their way to collage or because they didn't used the right method for learning or finding information when they had schoolwork, they didn't developed their thinking ability that at the end it became something hard for them to remaster. This method effects millions of students around the globe when they get out of their education system, this is one of the reasons why a percentage of students struggle in their lifetime when they end their education.
In addition, experts have discovered that when teenagers use cell phones in daily routines in a certain amount of time they might experience vision problems or they can also end up blind, this is all caused by the reflection of the light from their cell phones, this is why experts recommend schools to teach students with books and not to let them use technology because they might experience vision problems at least once in their life time. The cell phone use in classrooms for educational purpose can become an addiction or a distraction for students in school or in their life outside school , they can develope a routine when they won't be able to live without their cell phones and sometimes this cell phones addictions guide people to end up getting hit by cars or by getting involve into car crash accidents, because they were too distracted on their cell phones while driving or crossing the streets.
In conclusion, schools should not allow students the use of cell phones in their classroom for educational purposes, because all of this might guide students to struggle in their academics, or in their personal life outside school. Students take advantage of the use of cell phones in their classroom, students will used this method to cheat in school. Sometimes this school methods end up taking thousands of lives for being distracted on their cell phones or trying to help students with technology. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
605BF3B67175 | Dont you want to know why a positive attitude is the key to success in life?
I absolutely agree with the statement. For this reason I am going to provide you some details that support my opinion. Hopefully, at the end of this essay you will agree that attitude is the key to progress in life.
First, I think that to have a wonderful attitude in life will help you to be confident, because, people surely will trust on you; besides, if you have an exemplary attitude, you are demonstrating to others who you are and how your behavior is.
Second, I have been seen that people who have a better attitude, they succeed in life. In addition, it will develop your skills to make more friends; for instance, supposing that you are in High School, and you have resentful behavior with your classmates, what will happen is that rarely they will talk to you, the reason is because they already know about your behavior.
Third, I have read some segments from online resources; reportedly, more than a half people (70%) who have a filthy attitude, in the future they become pessimistic people. By another hand, if you demonstrate your nice attitude, you will have better opportunities in life.
In conclusion, if you are one of the people who have a awful attitude, I am sure that it will not let you to develop as a person. However, if you show your awesome attitude, you will succeed in life. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
605C1B4CE788 | Today I'm going to share my thoughts about Author Ralph Waldo Emerzon wrote to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest acomplishment.
I would say yes is the greatest acomplishment because if you trying to be someone in the world but you don't have no body to be with you is wanna be more difficult but if you try your best you can make it but if you have like people with you that is trying to help you is wanna be more easy, so I think to be your self in world that is constantly tying to make you something else it's one of the greatest acomplishment.
I would say is true because to be yourself around people that is negative is wanna be difficult. So to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you soemthing else is the greatest acomplishment.
for example
If you just been yourself and you making all that you want, a lot of people they not wanna like that so they wanna try to make you fall, so if you been in a world that is constantly trying to make you else is always wanna be the greastest acomplishment.
if you are in a world that people like you only for been yourself it is good becasue you just been yourself you can make anything happen and if you have a world that is constantly trying to make something else is the best acomplishment because everything is wanna be more easy for you sometimes you have to choose decision and i think just been yourself you always can taje the right ones | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
605DDF3EA948 | Students would not benefit attend classes from home.
Recently, Generic_Name has been going to school the past 10 years.
In those years, Generic_Name has proved his apprenticeship by taking classes in the school.
More often his grades are the higher in the class, and his teacher is glad that he still going to her class.
Learning in school with a teaher next to him was important for Generic_Name to get those grades.
Teachers believe that students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it makes student's attention lower, and they do not learn as the same way.
Firstly, student would not benefit from begin able to attend classes from home because it makes student's attention lower.
For example, Generic_Name wants to get out of school next week, yet he wants to takes classes online, but his teacher told him that is not the best option for him.
This example shows that the teacher is telling Generic_Name don't take classes online, it would not benefit his attention at classes in the same way that school does.
Even though, Generic_Name thinks that is the best idea, at the same time is not because the only way to don't lose his attention at classes is to continue the school.
Thus, attend classes from home is not going to benefit a student attention.
Secondly, students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they do not learn as the same way.
For example, Generic_Name is a student of a New York's school, his teacher says that when he started classes online he did not learned as the same way that he used to do at school.
This example shows that when Generic_Name did not continue classes in school he started to have problems with the topics because students can not learn in the same way that in school.
For Generic_Name was not important learn properly in home or school, but for his teacher yes becuase they knew already that it would not benefit learning in the same way.
Thus, distance learning is not the best option fro a student.
On the others hand, some people believe that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home.
It is true, it can be possible when a student do not speak the language, and his/her parents prefer that the student take classes online.
However, still proof that students would not benefit being able to attend classes from home.
For example, the teachers of Generic_Name and Generic_Name say that distance learning does not help students to improve their attention and apprenticeship.
Thus, it can benefit students the classes online in 20%, but the classes in schools benefit students in a 100%.
In conclusion, to restate the point students would not benefit attend classes from home.
The first reason is because it makes students's attention decrease.
Further, students are not going to learn in the same way that they used to do in school.
However some people believe that taking classes online from home will benefit to the students.
Thus, coming to school is the best way that is going to benefit the students to attend in classes. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
6060D28C05B6 | Some schools in United States ofter classes from home because is good option to students . Some school have decreased bullying and high and middle school because some students get bullied. Students don't want to go more at school and they want to get classes at home. If they get classes at home they don't learning. Some Schools offter distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. students get distract at home. Students get fall in environment learning. Students feel more pressure at home. But students can get relaxing at home.
Students can get distract at home because they have easy to use phones. They feel more bored at home because they need stay at home more time. Also students don't do anything at home because if they stay at home is esay to get more distract. If students sleep in class they want to sleep at home too. Many students work and they would tired and they don't want to learn.
Students don't pay attention in class they too don't pay attention at home because is more hard. Also they want to listening to music or play.
Students fall in environment learning because they learn at class when the teacher explain if students attend classes from home by online is hard they learn. Students can ncreased to learn at home. Also is more hard to students understand by online. Also many students have hard time in class to understand that teacher explain in more hard they learn at home.
Some schools affter classes from home because they think is good option to students. Also students can stay more relaxing from home. Students have more time to do homework. Also they feel more comfortable at home. Also they feel safe at home with their family. Also student sleep more and stay with more energy to receive the class by online. But students get more distract stay near the family and they don't want to pay attention.
Conclude if students get classes from home by online they don't want to pay attention because is more easy they get distract. Also they don't want to learn by online. Students can get fall in environment learning and is hard they learn at home. Also they want to play or use phone and not is good option to students get class at home they get distration and decrease to learning. Also students get frustration in class because they don't understand but if they get classes in online they don't learning too because is more hard they learning from home. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
60623DB5DE7A | Four-day work week, a remarkable idea to conserve energy and resources, some businesses have adopted the idea of a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. I think this idea is amazing, workers would have a day off and they won't be wasting energy and resources like in a regular day of work. Therefore i think my school should follow this model and extend the school day two hours in a four-day school week. Students would be happy of having a day off, and most of them would support the idea of having a four-day school week. By following this idea, my school would conserve energy and a lot of resources such as papers, school materials, food, etc.
A four-day school week benefit students and teachers in many ways, students would have a day off and time to do extra curricular activities such as sports or work, teachers would be at home and have time to spend with their kids and be with the family, and all of us would be conserving energy and resources. One disadvantage of having a four-day school week is that some parents work 5 days a week in different companies and these companies might not have the four-day work week so they won't have time to be with their kids at home in the day off, and some of them would be forced to change their five-day work week to a four-day work week, so they can be with their kids at home.
Personally, i would prefer the four-day school week, because,i have a part-time job after school , it is from 5 to 10pm, and having a day off would allow me to have time to do some extra work at home and to change my schedule for in the morning so i can have the rest of the day to work on my stuffs, have time to chill, or maybe to do my homework, and help my mom with whatever she needs.
Having a four-day school week, would let me have time to do a lot of things during the day, for example, babysit my little brother if my mom goes out, go to the gym or maybe help my dad. I can get another job to work on the weekends, the thing is that it would allow me to be busy, and to generate money.
In my family, my dad is the one who is always at work, he works from 8am to 6pm everyday, he doesn't have a day off, but it is okay for him. My mom, she doesn't work, she is always at home taking care of me and my little brother, for my parents, it wouldn't be a problem for me to have four days of school a week, because my mom would take care of me during that day off.
In conclusion, i think having a four-day school week, would benefit a lot of people, because just like me, there are plenty of students that would love to work more and generate money, and for the teachers, well they would enjoy have a day off and spend time with their kids at home. | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
607A39D981DE | Students and their families should consider any activitie that they want to get involved in school before getting in. If students get involve in many of them, then they will not have time to do any of their work from school. Not doing work from school will affect their grades , and they also won't be able to participate anymore, for having bad grades. Parents as being the ones giving permission to the student, should talk to the school and ask if it is posible for their kid to not participate in all of them because of the time, and other responsabilities they have.
First of all students should talk to their parents before taking any desicion, them both need to consider that if the student gets involved in many activities, then they will not have time to do any work from school.
If the students spend too much time on the activities, then he/she would not have time for them other responsabilities. The school should make an runion for parents, so they can agree on the terms that the school want. Activities at school should not be controling, or making the students join so many activities.
If the student does not do the school work, then they will have bad grades, that will affect them by not being able to participate anymore in any of the school actiities. Students should not be able to participate in more than two activities at school. because they will get tired a lot, and therefore they will not do their homeworks. Participating in any of the activities should also be a credit for the students.
Schools are responsable for any activite that it is happening in school, they should contact parents, and also have a reunion, so they would get the parents opinions. Parents as being the ones giving permission to the students, should considered any type of activitie that the student wants to get involved in. Participating in school it is good for students, but not when they do extraactivities.
Some of the activities should be reunating with the students after school, and help them with any questio they have, or repasing anything that they didn't understand in the class.
I think Schools should not control students involvents.
Parents should be the ones desiding, and analizing before allowing their kids join any type of activitie in school. Students should not be able to participate in too many activities that would effect their grades. parents and school should agree on the desicions of wha is going to be better for the students. When students are responsible with their shool work, and their activities, they should get extra credit. | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
60ACDFA1609E | Agree you will never grow if something beyond of what you have mastered. However, some people believe that you don't have to do this to grow that you can grow conform the time. Emerson's was right with this quote people have think more then just of what they believe, if they grow they will achieve their dreams if they achieve they will grow you just have to believe in what you are.
Unless you try to do something respect, you have to do the best of you if you want to grow. Base in my experiences I'm growing, I try hard, and I try to convince the other do to the same, we want a better world we students to grow if they grow this will be a proud for the others. If we don't an open mind this will be the opposite we will never grow,no matter what is happening he we have to grow.
At the end of all of this we will have something do where we can be support our live, always come something better, you have to be organize with your things. The idea is to be your self don't ever let other people to control you just be you, and the decision is on you.
Don't you ever be an a position to where you have to decide between to options? That's when you to believe in yourself, to thing want your want to be grow or stay in the floor. If you grow will be more opportunities for you and maybe don't just for you can be for the others who are around of you.
Give the best of you to make it, for example if you don't try to grow what will be of you what kind of person you will be.
There are benefits to grow like you can be a person who can do almost all the things ,you can be accept or be sociable. Emerson gave us a great point with this statement we have to appreciate of what he wrote in my view he completeright about to try something beyond what you have already, just try and you can make it. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
60AE13D3F07B | I think our character traits are formed by influences beyond our control. Everybody has a different character trait and I believe it is formed by our parents, brothers, or sisters. It is the responsibility of adults to teach their child how to behave and that is usually how their traits are formed. As children begin to go to school, most often they meet other kids and become friends. Friends also have an influence on how traits are formed like for example: Kindness, friendly, honest, and more. The influence mainly comes from parents and are the role models for their children. Our character traits are formed by influences. Many people around the world have different character traits, Everyone is different on the way they behave around others. Therefore they are formed. My character traits are quiet, funny, and calm. These traits for formed because of school and my friends. John Lubock mentions that "your character will be what you yourself choose to make it." I think that this quote explains that you are able to choose it by yourself. I disagree and I believe that other humans make our character traits. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
60AEEA05E1A9 | Online classes, i think that if students really trying to learn something is not need for them to take classes online but sometimes, teachers cannot teach al the students well because is only 1 teacher and like 30 students in every class room, and i think that online classes are not a bad idea because they been teach by a computer and they have to pay attention or they will fail, but at school they wont fail that easy because they can get copy from another students and thats how they will pass classes better at school then online .
Now lets really talk about online classes, is a perfect solution for students that for some reason they cant go to school in case that they had a car accident they cant walk but they parents dont want them to fail the school year , or they dont feel like going to school thats why online classes are the best choice not only for me for a lot of people like student and parents; I mean school is not that bad at school students can make more and more friends every year online they will get tired if they have to see the same computer and hear the same voice everyday. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
60CCF0F2DF38 | Dear Winston Churchill,
I strongly believe that, failure plays a huge role in pursuing success, and I have a personal story and also information to back up my statement "that failing is the key to success".
The news article of daily life, had a section dedicated to failing is a key to success, in that portion it talks about how the most successful people in the world had to fail so many times and hardship in that portion of the article it interviews Bill Gates and he quote on quote said that "failing thought me that you have to try harder and harder every time you fail in order to successed", and without failing he would not be the CEO of Google.
I personally have experienced how failing is the key to success. I started playing football in my freshman year in high school. I was trying so hard to get a starting position on the football team. I was doing really bad during team practice, and one day my coach came up to me and told me that I should quit football, and how it was not the right sport for me. So I got cut from the team but I did not listen to what my coach said to me. I kept practicing over the off season working harder then ever. When sophomore season came up and we had to go through tryouts in order to make the team. I was doing really good in the first two days of the tryouts but then I started doing really bad on the third day, and then the coach came up to me on the last day of the tryouts, and told me that I did not make the team. I started feeling really hopeless but I still did not gave up and kept working harder and harder. On my junior season it was time for the football tryouts once again. I started doing really good, and the coaches were really impressed of what I was capable of doing. Last day of the tryouts the coach came up to me, and told me that he was really proud of me. He was really surprised that I didnt gave up, and after that he told me I made the team as a starting defensive tackle.
In conclusion this is why I strongly agree that failing is a key to success, without failure we as human beings would not be able to improve in our day to day life. It is because of failing which keeps us successful, and makes us humans work harder for what we want in life.
Sincerely,
Generic_Name | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
60D8EB883A45 | CAN WE ACCOMPLISH BY ALWAYS DOING SOMETHING OR NOT DOING SOMETHING
Can people accomplish by always doing something? Thomas Jefferson wrote,"Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." Do we accomplish more if we are always not doing something productive? No, being inactive won't help accomplish nothing just by standing or laying down at home doing nothing. Although, we can accomplish more if we are always doing something. People would learn more things, meet new people to achieve goals in life and how much can be done if we are always doing something.
People would learn more things if they are more productive. I remember when my mom signed me up for a soccer team. I didn't know I was going to be joining a soccer team, or wanted to play on the soccer team;however, I did it and I learn how to kick a soccer ball, how to be a golly and I improved my speed. Another example was when I had a vocabulary test for English but I didnt know half of the vocabulary words, so I study till I learned the words.
Meeting new people to achieve a goals. I like being a indoor person, but when soccer season comes and I join a team I interact with new people and coaches to achieve my goals on how to become a better teammate or how I can improve my speed and mentality to become a great soccer player. Another example was when I talked to a new math teacher to help me on a equation I didnt understand. he helped me understand the equation, and helps me every time I need help on something in math now.
Imagine how much can be done if we are always doing something. people would be able to accomplish so many goals if we are always doing something instead of staying home and laying down and watch TV all day. when we get some free time we can work on something that would help us in the future and make us think better. Maybe when we think we dont need help, but actually do ask someone to help you to understand more instead of staying with the same mindset.
Although, some people maybe don't got that much time to accomplish things. Thats why they go inactive but still accomplish their goal on a long term time. Inactivity also can also serve a purpose, depending on the person maybe they dont got money or a transportation vehicle to get to their destination. Although, they can't just do nothing and wait for something good to happen to them.
People can accomplish their goals by always doing something that would helped them in the future. Thomas Jefferson wrote,''Determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." People would learn more things, meeting new people to achieve a goal and how much can be done if we are always doing something productive. Although being inactive won't help accomplish nothing just by standing or laying down at home doing nothing. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
60D9DD69CE8D | Generic_Name
March 14, 2019
Writing SOL
Where is one place you would like to visit?
I would like to visit Florida because they have really nice weather.
Florida is something special to me because I have family in Florida.
The place I would visit is my grandfather grave because my grandfather had died last year
To, begin The reason why I picked Florida is because I have really nice, cool family in Florida.
My grandfather had dies last year after he had fell and hit his head on the ground.
He is special to me because if it was'nt for him I would not be playing soccer right now.
Every time I score a goal i always do a celebration for him.
I have something valuable of his and that is the gold chain that I got on now that he gave me and I had never took the chain ever since he gave it to me.
I will take off this chain the day I die.
I had promised him that I will love soccer forever and go to college to play soccer.
The college that I'm going to is Generic_School.
The reason why I would like to go to this college is because I had went there for a scholarship and I had got the scholarship and they said that I am really good for my age.
Here go some tips if your not good at soccer you should go outside and practice makes perfect.
If your not good at it you should try I mean it is really not a hard sport if you think about it.
If someone say that you suck let them keep on telling you that for me I will take that as motivation.
The reason why I love soccer so much is because of my grandfather he loved soccer just like me.
Everytime I had went to Florida to go visit family me and my grandfather we would always watch soccer games and tell me some formation to play when I grow up.
The favorite things that my grandfather love to do was drawing, playing soccer and teach me some new moves.
Every morning we would wake up he will always take me and my brother to waffle house and we would tell some stories to me and my brother about what he did when he was growing up.
When he had fell and went to the hospital I was not but when my mom face time my aunt he found out that we could not move body shoulders down and then he had to get some brain surgies and all that then the week after all that he had died and we face timed my aunt and he prayed on the phone and we all was crying.
I had a soccer game the day after he died and I had scored 6 goals and every time I had scored I had always kissed my hand and point it up to the sky.
After the game I was crying because I was proud of my self that I played a game with all that stress over my shoulders and I said to my self I did that for my grandfather.
Then right after the game my mom had came to me and started crying because I told her that I was going to score 6 goals just for my grandfather and I did what I said I was going to do.
That night I was praying and telling my grandfather that I had scored 6 goals just for him and I was saying to my head that I was going to do that more often.
My next soccer game I had scored 5 goals but every time I go on the pitch I had always kissed my chain and touched the ground and point at the sky and I still do that today.
My soccer game in 2 more weeks and I am going to do what I need to do to take my team to the championship and I will play all my soccer games just for my grandfather.
All the soccer games I play they will always be for my grandfather and he will never forget that and if I have to do anything just to get some goals I will then just for him.
When I was in Florida my grandfather had bought me a soccer poster and a soccer jersey of my favorite soccer player.
He had got a jersey customize for that say my last name and my favorite which is number 7 and that is my favorite soccer player number to.
When I was little he had always send me some of his drawing and like always write a little back that say I will always love u miyo and miyo mean son.
When I was 10 years old he came down here to Virginia and he was visiting and he will always wake up at 4 o clock in the morning to go fora bike ride and when he came back he had always fix breakfast for us.
In the afternoon he will always 1 v 1 me or my brother in soccer for some money like 10 dollars but that is if we beat him do.
This why I play soccer just because of him.
Like when I get frustrated in the soccer game I will always take a deep breath and think about my grandfather and that is what always calm me down when I get frustrated.
He had always tell me if someone is talking trash always smile because that dont talk the most is the most strong ones in the game and I always tell them look at the score board.
Here go the reason why I would like to go to Florida:
Family and my grandfather grave.
I would like to go to Generic_City studios.
Go to the beach and get some nice weather.
In conclusion, Where is one place you will like to visit?
I would like to visit Florida because Florida have nice weather.
Florida is something special to me because I have family down in Florida.
The place I would like to visit is my grandfather grave. Another place I would like to visit is Generic_City studios because like your like in a movie because there are people that are dressed up as some characters.
Another place I would like to visit is the indoor soccer field and play some soccer there with some family and maybe some new friends if I meet some there. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
60E686BA1E09 | When people ask for advise, they usually don't know what path or choice to make.
When people make a wrong desition they can mess something up in their life. That can mean the world to them like a wife/husban or his/her kids. They can set a bad influence on small kids by going to jail or by doing something a criminal might do. That is why most people go to jail and don't come out for a very long long time. That sucks to not see your mom/dad for a very long time and that can be depressing on some people.
Then if they make a good choice they won't get in trouble or get in federal trouble. that can make a good influence on your childeren and that can give them a better futer in this world. If you talk to the right person that gives you good advise. That can be a very good choice for you and your family because they won't have to see you in jail through a little window.
Just what im saying is if you mess up by talking to the wrong person you can set a bad influence on people, more family and that would suck to see your chidren and wife through a little window in a prison trust me I have been through it all. if you get in bad trouble you can probubly fix it and just get a ticket, fin, or mistimener you can fix it dont make the wrong choice and get in trouble do what you think is the best for you and your family. Don't think bout other just worry bout you and your family not anybody else
Also if you do they can take your stuff, steal money, stab you in the back and also become an turn on you, a freind is a doller in your pocket and your pocket gots a hole my mom says that to me a lot. Just do what your heart says not other people because the can get you in a lot of trouble.
This is what can go good for you, if you make the right choice you can go to college and get a degree in something you like. You can get a good job and get a good house, good car and always have money on you just in case of anything. You also can help out your perents get a good house and you won't have to put them in a home and you can also bye what your kids want when ever they wan't and you won't have to go through the bad stuff in the world like most people go through to put food on the table. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
60E9300D597C | Each people in the world should have any to trip in life because each failure,wrong, and bad day our help a better each aspect in the life as social, personal and work, and this consist in learn for each failure and no come back to fall in the same not is advancing nothing in his life.
my mother is the best woman in the world because she never had help of my father or other people for care me to me and my brother and with a lot effort she to achieve give them a life very good and ours show that in the life a bad moments as good people but always is united as family and help of god can out of this failures for achieve in the life "sucess" that each people to deserve .
For example, in this world there a lot people that are very succesful in his life is because they each pursuit his happiness, every day they wake up with a great spirits from follow to from in his life to achieve his dreams, goals and the sucess. Also can be that others days they have a bad day but always follow fighting an against always the people has that is firm in a only target that is " Pursuit of success". Also all the people that has sucess in the life always are very humble and respectful with it them.
In this world there always there problems for any things, but with so effort,hope, intelligence because all people has problem or failure in the life but no for this should to leave of fight , because the life to try of follow to follow because all the things has any out .
other examples is, when a student take a test and the first time not pass of test but he don't never give up, because always there a more opportunities and only should to follow study and better for that the second time should be better.
Also i have a example that i'm live in my life each day that is when a people as me,when i going to live a other country very different to mine with his way to live and it more important his language is very hard no can to communicate with them, but the beginning is very hard for any people change of country and is more hard if no know the language, but i don't give up because i know it that i'm very smart and with more effort, faith, and help of my teachers, mom and family little to little better my english and each day i learn of new things in the life because never leave of learn in the life. i disagree not can understand it and not can say nothing.
For this failure plays a role very important in ours life because show as the people has abilities for can do any things and know that all the people has intelligence for can achieve it. The failures in the life to help to better and think about that can help to better and however, i think that each people has a goal in the life and not should to renounce a ours dreams, goals that should of achieve it.
Because in the life each people to choose his destiny in the life but i think that all people has a fault but each people has of power for eliminate it of his life.
In conclusion, all the people should of has any failure for can better and achieve his success and happiness in the life with love, hope, and effort for that nothing in the life is so easy , everybody needs is very focus in the life because until the own family may be can think that you are a dump but can show you that you are "the best" and that nobody can stop your success in the life and nobody can to take your dreams and goals of your mind and heart and always each day should of think this is my best day, and wake up with spirits of better and be a great pride for your wife, son and people that believe in you , and with help of this people so important in you life give you spirits for achieve it and they to go with your steps to sucess in the life . | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
60ED0B48B8F2 | If you alone in the world you can make nothing if you trying to make somehting you can't because somebdoy support to you, you can't associate with the technology and you can dessarollate nothing maybe just you can survive and after then you dead, I think i'm agree with Emerson's Wrote,because when you can make all you want individuality i think you can be better because you dont need help to other person or something,so all your responsabilities is with you,when you need to help to the other person somethimes everithing to be fine and somethimes no,because somethimes your plans about you want to do or about you thinking is not really well like about you imaginate to do,the imagination is other thinks,you can imaginate all you want but in reality all your imagination is not the same because you can imaginated much thinks but in the real life you can't make all your imagination about you want is like imposible doing all your imagination perfect,so my conclusion is we can live alone in the world but you need support to the people too because the same time all the world desarollate,and the same time we destroy the world cause we make much contamination,deforetation, we create much machines ruin the world,change climated. I think the author waldo Emerson wrote he reference about like what you doing alone in one world if you care the world o destroy de world if u can alone or need support the people. | 1.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
60FD2E2FB768 | Imagine you are in school and you had to sit an a room with four wall. Moreover, you had a frustrating day because of teachers, students and school work. And then you had to stay in that room for another one and a half hour. How would you feel after all of that? Beside, students might not function well, since there is more class time which means more classwork and homework. That is why the school board should not add one and half hour to the school day.
First, some students have sports, clubs and many things to do after school. However, they are tired from the school and school work as a result, they will not function right. For example, my friend plays soccer and she had school for another one and half hour when she went to practice she passed out, since her brain was not function nether were her body. An addition, when students get back from school or sport it will be dark outside. Which is a unfair for students and it's bad for the students safety.
Next, students will not have time to spend with there family members nor there friends because they would have homework and projects to do. Neither will teacher have time to spend with there kids, since they have test to grad and paper work. In the same token, students would not be motive to play or have fun because all they would think about is school. Beside, the students will not have a lot of time to sleep.
Furthermore, one day the students will not have the energy to go to school. Similarly, they will become depressed and have a negative mood. And the students might not even want to come to school any more. Which put the students in a high risk.
In conclusion, The school board should not add one and half to the school hours. Students will not function well, since there is more class time which means more class work. Additionally, some students have sports and many things to do after school. However, when the students get back from school or sport it will be dark outside which is bad for the students safety. Moreover, students and teacher will not have time to spend with there family members, nor there friends because they would have homework and projects to do. In the same way, they would not be motive to play or have fun because the students mid will not construed. lastly, one day the students will not have energy to go to school. | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
610FA0016255 | Self-esteem doesn't come from praise or achievement, In my opinion both of those are only "supporters" to recognize the person effort, all of about self steem really comes from ourselves, our thoughts, ideas and efforts we've done. Self-esteem is what to make you be,what you transmit, act or just to look like, that's why is really important to have that present beacuse evryone should have self-esteem.
Some people believe in praising a student's to build self-esteem, even if the work is not the student's best effort, also so meany people believe that praise given for deficient work undermines learning by lowering standars, I agree with this one because as humans we are, while more peole are praising us, we just will start to act maybe worngly because is too much attention.
Teachers might support students to get better as people also keep getting motivated while they're doing a test or classwork, sometimes with words to make them feel they are doing a great job but they shouldn't do that everyday because not everyone notices the value those actions has.
First, If for example there were 3 students who are very lazy but they start to do better things, the teacher will probably praise them because they made an "effrort" but if teachers start to do that everytime,students coul act as lack of attention even if they don't, and there is the problem, of course students must be more confident in orden to learn when they are making some efforts to do their work,however some of them just take advantege of that, when they just think because they have good grades they should to get an achievement or praises from others, even if they don't.
In addition, If in our own homes parents do teach us what's to have a good self-lesteem and how we have to be, we'll not need the approvetion ur opinion from other people and it will be enough because we'd already know how to act like, and just to think that we need an achievement or praising from someone to prove we're good on something, it's completetly wrong, you don't have to get an achievement to prove you're good on something you like it or enjoy to do.
The only thing we have to do is always make an effort, just prove to yourself you are good on something because you want to, not because you're waiting for an action from a person, also not everytime you have to get sometime to prove you are doing a good job bc you are not always to do a good job, beacuse nobody is perfect and everyone has a lot of mistakes, just do it for yourself.
Not always everything is gonna be super easy in life to us, sometimes you have to go through several situations that will make you grow as a person, every human've had self-esteem issues at least once and that's alright. I think we shouldn't depend on a opinion to get better each day for ourselves, we've to notice we are not perfect, we have mistakes and not everyone always will be cheering up us, we have to fail once or more and then just get up and keep going, with our skills and mistakes also knowing that not always we have to get something to prove our knowledged, that's where self-esteem comes from. | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
6130E5495CB1 | Is enjoyable for everyone because you can do all sort of fun activities. One way I like spending my time is playing soccer with all my friends we gather around to play every day almost and some time we like to do competition in group seven to play who get the most goals and then we let the girls play when we finish playing girls and then we compare and the teams with more goal wins a prize same for the girls who is better of course we another match with the boy to double the prize then the match start for the boys for about hours is lot entertaining and fun you sweat, laugh,
tell scary tails when the night comes we all get creep out at some point. When we finish, we do a picnic to get our energy back and drink a lot of water to keep hydrated and while we prepared the food we play some short game to gain more appetite first we play limbo to stretch the body then is dash ball to burn calories last is baseball to stretch the muscle and then we take a break to eat and play even more its help you a lot to maintain your physical health if you go to the park three days a week thats why I love the park so much it help me a lot to get relax. It help you with your health that why I dont go to the doctor to much is joyful to me when I go to the park. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6134797D8497 | It has been that fisrt impressions are almost impossible to change on your experiences. I agree with this statament for several reasons. I have many experiences,but some are impossible to change. When I came to this country and when I travel with my sister and my friends to Generic_City and my first day in the School.
First, when I came to this country. This is my first impression impossible to change. When I was in my country I was happy to came to this country to look my parents and sibling. I leave of my country in October 25, 2015. I was in Guatemala for 15 day. I feeling sad, because I don't know who are the other people came in the group. After I was in Mexico for others 10 days. I not eat anything, because I don't liked the food that they gived me, also i was for anothers days in a place called Matamoros is close to the river that with to cross to came to this country. After to cross the river a men of imigration take me to the imigration office and he start to call to my parents to ask about my imformation. I was happy to speak to my parents. My parents pay a ticket to travel to here. I cray of the emotion to see my parents after a few years.
Second, I went to Generic_City with my sister and my friends. This is my second experience tha is impossible to change. I was happy to share time with my friends and my sister in Generic_City. We wented to Time Squared. We take many pictures infront of the tower. After we walked to the red stairs we sit there to look anything and we continued walked to go to the anothers beautiful places that the City has.
Finally, my first impression in my first day in the School. I was happy to go to the School. I feeling sad, because when the teacher start to explain something in English i don't know what she said and I ask to my friends that they speak Spanish they start to explain me what the teacher explain in English. Every day in Schood I learned somenthing different and I feeling happy. Every day when I came to the house after School I speak in English with my lilttle brother than he born here. He teach me English sometimes.
In conclusion, this are my three impressions that impossible to change in my own experiences. I believe that the experiences that we has in the life are only that never past again is only one time. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3.5 |
6141DB282925 | Thomas Jefferson wrote a letter to determine never to be idle. It's one the most important things that happen in the world,One of this was with young people, they be disrespecfull with oldes people. At this point I think everyone be agree with the statement of Thomas Jefferson.
For example, That is one of the problem that happen on many schools cause let's say when teacher tryed to explain us something about the intimate section they star to Idle when this is no funny. Also Thomas Jefferson inspire peopler to help others when they was idle to a inoccent people.
Additionaly we can stop the kind of problem if we work together helping each other.
It's wonderful if peolpe work as a community and tryed to help other,cause Thomas Jefferson was a men who like to help people on what he can. When someone else was Idle to you don't put attention and keep figthing on what you want .Like everyone know we have different talens and always one person of them was jealousy and tryed to Idle you cause he don't want you or someone else progress more them he that unfair everyone have different dreams and work hard vfor what they want.
On my opinion wse can work as a group and tryed to stop those peolpe who Idle others. Also we can do something else cause lety's said if vsomeone Idle otyhers and we bdon't help these guys the problem continued and repeat cuade anyone work with the kind of problem.
something else was some people don't like to help others. That cause that kind of problem but we as a community we can work on that and tryed to stoped. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
61445D1ABF16 | One...two...three...START! Identify an enjoyable educational activity such as doing the science fair, singing, playing an instrument and many others. In my opinion, the most enjoyable educational activity is art because it makes me less stressed out, I could find new styles, it could be my future career.
First of all, it makes me less stressed out about everything. Whenever I take a test, I will start to over think a lot and loose concentration. Most of the time, I will always doodle on my paper because it lets me concentrate more and loose my mind a bit. I mostly take a break whenever I'm taking a test just to calm myself down a bit and doodle. Personally, I took the SOL yesterday and I mostly doodle half of the test because I was over thinking too much. I was stressing out really bad yesterday and I just doodled on my paper. I always doodle on my notes, my work, and my test because it's really fun in my opinion. It helps me a lot and make me concentrate more often now by doing a simple thing like doodling.
Second, I could find new styles in my art. I am a self-taught artist and I like trying out new styles. It's very interesting sometimes and very fun to do. It may be really complex for me but I still try my best to get the hang of it. In my opinion, it is really creative and it may also shows your feelings about life. I could draw how it's like to be scared of the dark or being scared of heights. One of my friends have sleep paralysis and most of the time she draws about how it feels like to have sleep paralysis. It very amusing to me and interesting because it can tell a story about my life.
Additionally, it could be my future career. Since drawing is my favorite thing to do in life it could be easy for me to get a job that deals with art. There are many art programs in college and I'm mostly interested in doing animation. Animation is very complex sometimes depending what type of animation am I doing. There are two main types of animation, 2D and 3D animation. 2D animation is more like a picture and many cartoons use 2D animation. 3D animation is more realistic and it's a lot more complex than 2D because you have to model objects, humans and many others that I could add. 2D animation is more like just drawing on a piece of paper while on the other hand, 3D I had to mostly use a program for to just do 3D animation. Most of the time it is hard to find a job that you want and it takes time and hard work to get it. Mostly my future job would be an animator since I've drew so much in my life.
I love doing art because it makes me less stress out about everything, I could find new styles in art, and it could be my future career. Art is mostly my favorite enjoyable educational activity in school and many other places. It is very enjoyable in my opinion and it really helps me through tough times in life. It could be very hard sometimes but it is still fun to do. | 5 | 4.5 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
61471CA2532D | In my experiences be disagree with this statement because everybody have different personalitie, The person have one day bad, and the persona change.
however the first impressions can be change, Everybody have different personalitie becuase the people make much caracterist tha see different for example a person can have much cualidad that other people don't have, Also do not always other person have that be yourself.
The person have one day bad becuase something the people in the school can have stressful for example when have so much homework during in class , also the person in the job is possible that have problem for example the other person can cause conflict and making is mad.
However the people change becuase they can have a good expression of a manner that your attitude can be esplendi,
for example no every person have bad comportamient.
In conclusion every one can be different personalitie and not is imposible change our impressions have that be we yourself. | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
615FAEE4F8EF | School should not extend the school days more than eight hours. Some people think that spending more time at school would be a good idea because students would have more time to study. Others think that An 8 hours of school time is enough time to study every day. This is an controversial issue and school time should not be too much .This change would affect students and teachers because some students have part time jobs,students would not have enough time to do their daily activities with friends and family,teachers and students would be tired by the the end of the day and they would not do good.
Some students have part time jobs and they take some rest before going to work after school. Some students go to work right away after every school to get out early and do their homework after. By adding two hours a to the school schedule would make students who have job work till late. Even though some students need to work as much time as they can to help their families or pay something they are trying to buy. Some of this students would be also constantly tired of spending too much time at school and then going to work.
Another reason why school days should only be eight hours long and not ten is because students would not have enough time to do their daily activities. Students hang out with family and friends. Some students are part of a sport team and they have to have time to go practice. Even some students help their family to either clean or any other thing that has to be done at home. Some students have to take care of their little siblings after school because their parent have to go shopping or work. Students also need to do what they like and by doing that they would be more active.
Another reason is that teachers and students would be tired by the the end of a ten hours school day and they would not do good. Some students are already tired in the 4th hour of school. Some students do not want to do their work in the last class and some fall sleep even in a eight hours school day. Even teachers would get tired of being teaching and grading papers all day long. When it comes to a history teacher they have to talk a lot in every class and they get tired. By making every school day 10 hours long would put to much pressure to students and teachers that they would be exhausted by the end of the day that they would not be able to pay attention in their work.
School itself it hard sometimes but working and studding is even worst and those who work and study at the same time often need time time to get things done, and by spending too much time in just one thing can affect the other .Every one has personal things and activities to do and some require certain among of time. Studing and teaching requieres focus and creativity but when students and teachers get tired all that is missing. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
616C3D5795E8 | I think i agree on the Churchill statement because :
every time you failure more and more ,every time you learn something new , for example :
my mom always puts me to clean the house but every time i went to do the cleaning, she used to say "you din't clean here or "you are missing a part of the floor that still is dirty" so i just say to my self next time i'm gonna clean better in this part of the room and i keep smiling not given up.
To learn how to clean the house in a perfect way i decided to clean the house every Saturday so i can practice more , it passed two month and then i went to clean again and i mop the floor , clean the windows , clean all the tables,so i finished and my mom says great job you now know how to clean in a perfect way!!.
remember to success you don"t even have to think about what you do wrong just keep working on it ,and keep dreaming!!! | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
6186246910E1 | students should graduate in three years instead of four years.
It is better for students to graduate in three years because students will finish the career that they choose early and they will be able tho help their families.
The first reason is that students will finish the career that they choose early. students will have 1 years less to graduate. For example, a student is planning to graduate in 2021 and start his career to finish it in 2026 but now that students will be allow to graduate 1 year early then the student will finish his career in 2025. It means that the students will reach their goals early. Students can reach a better life in less time working hard with positive mind.
The second reason is that students will be able to help their families. One year less make the difference. For example, a student's mother is really sick and the student have a part time job ,but he don't gain enough money to buy his mother medicines and he have to graduate but he is still in his third year of high school so he have one more year but now that he can graduate in three years he can receive his diploma and find a full job time to gain enough money to help his mother. It means that one year less can help you change the life of your family to better. One years less can brings chances for others.
Some people believe that students should not graduate in three years instead of four years. However, others including me believe that students should be allow to graduate in three years because students will finish the career that they choose early and they will be able to help their families. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
61992F84D5D1 | When you are a kid your parents tell you what your character is have to be they teaching you how you have to be they intent to help you to be a better person, for example they tell you what is wrong and what not, what you can do and what you can't do.
But when you are a big person you can choose whoever your character is gonna be, for example you choose what is wrong and what is good for you because you are big now and you can do your own decision. You're able to thing and get the responsibilities to choose your own character, and you are agree if you make a mistake your gonna take the consequences, because your choose to be like that.
So is not beyond our control because you thing how you wanna be for your life for the things you are learned before in the past and that is the things the changing you. is nothing out of control because you can choose your character, Examples if theres a man who needs help you can choose be a good person and help him or just let him there and thats make you a a bad person and when you needs help nobody is gonna help you.
The character is important in a person because the character make you who you are thats why you have the power to choose what your character is gonna be you cna choose how you wanna be a good person or bad person and thats the person you wanna be.
And you character is what make you the person you are and the people is ginna say that your are a good person or not depend the what your character choose and thats it the character it was make a person.
So thats what i said, i said we choose our own character traits. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
61B9D7E74839 | National park is a wounderful place for kids and adults to spend the outdoors with friends, pets, and family. Thier are fun activities all over the park, we have board games, toys, picnic, sports, and other cool thing all around the park. We also have a donations to feed the homeless people, if you donate to people in need we will give you exclusive T-shirts for helping the people in need of you're help. An example is if you are bored sitting at your house all day long, so come on down to our amazing national park to come and joy the sweet fun. We can also have a game of soccer of two team that will go aganist one another, and who ever team win the game, we will give them the prize at the end of the day. We will also have a boys vs girls, game, on game called toggle war, witch do you guys think who will win boy, or girls come on down and see for you're self to see who is better. We also provide a pie eating challage to see who will claim the belt of March 21, 2019. Friends and family can enjoy all day long at the national park into March 21, to March 29, 2019. March 22nd, is when we will have chess war, and buy two, get one free ice cream. On March 23, is when we will go out as group to play a game of teamwork twenty teams going aganist each other on a race for about three hours of your time, it will cost you ten bucks each per person. On March 24, is when we will give a donation to help that are beging for help so they can stay alive into the next day by day so please come down help our world be in peace so can all have a better future ahead of us. March 25, we will have a brand new adoption enter for dogs that need a happy family to stay with, or they will never get to be seen into how long it can take for the poor little guy. On March 26, is where we are going to clean the town where we live in to make the world in a better place.
We will also be glad if we can get over hundred more people to come and help in the way down for our big town in need of you're nice work. March 27, is where we can be in all together as a whole family to party for our great work of cleaning, donations, and adopting over hundred dogs in one day. March 29, is the last day to have a woderful day to be outside where we will have give away for people who was with us all day long. Community park is where we are getting a sign up for different clubs all over the world. a wounderful place for kids and adults to spend the outdoors with friends, pets, and family. Thier are fun activities all over the park, we have board games, toys, picnic, sports, and other cool thing all around the park. State park will have a fun advangers all over the state.
A wounderful place for kids and adults to spend the outdoors with friends, pets, and family. Thier are fun activities all over the park, we have board games, toys, picnic, sports, and other cool thing all around the park. We also have a donations to feed the homeless people, if you donate to people in need we will give you exclusive T-shirts for helping the people in need of you're help. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
61C4FCA012D7 | The school food should change because a lot of students they did not like it and many students feel sick when they eat school food and many students skip their lunch to go and buy food from stores if schools provides the same food for student many students will leave class and learn they will not lean anything for being late in the class and more.
The school lunch should to be healthier for student to eat. Otherwise many students will not go to their class or lunch because they skip class to go buy food. Many students at my school argue that the food should change. And others student say the food should stay the same because they like it and it healthier for them. For example one day at my school students got into agreement saying that they are happy with the school menus that they have those why many students do not skip classes. Other students may not like the idea of changing because they think the new change will worst then they have.
If schools change to healthier food for students many student will be in the class to learn and stop thinking about skiing class to go buy food. For example one of my classmate always goes out to from school during class to buy food and i ask him why he said the school food are not good enough for him and those the problem he skip class to go to buy food. changing school food will be good idea and also bad because same students want same food they have now day but other want change and those where all arguing start. The good way to make students happy about is to keep the one they most like and get ruined of the one they do not like.
Some may argue that changing school menu would be bad idea because the new menu would be something that the students may not like do or not healthier for them. Other people think that many students get sick when they eat school food and many students are not learning and they do not go to classes in time or they skip same periods. In my idea i think changing school menu would be good idea because the menus that school provides are not healthier and same of them are not good for our bodies. The best way to provides healthy food for student is change the menu that most students heat.
To summarize, the main reason to change school menus is there are many students agree with the idea and there same who disagree about changing the school menu. I think good way to solve this problem is they have to keep the menu they already have and students like to eat most. And change for those who agree with the idea. Otherwise it will clause same problem for school principal. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
61D13513C992 | Advice. Advice is something you seek, and search you can ask advice on anything it can be advice for you hair, advice for you dog, doctor advice you can partially ask advice on anything. When people are searching for advice they usually ask more than one person, I think thats best, because you can see from different points of views. I think only taking one persons advice may not help you find a solution or a make a good a choice, another positive thing about asking advice is you can also learn something new or meet someone new.
Asking multiple people is better than asking one person for advice, because only asking one person may not get you the advice that is best needed. Asking multiple people for advice is something that can help you find a quicker solution. There are many positive sides when asking people for advice, like having different points of views that can give you tons of ideas and information for the advice that you are looking for. When you are gathering all these opinions you can discover new information and the advice you are looking for.
There are many positive sides when asking multiple for people advice. When you ask people for advice it could be a stranger, a family member, a friend. Entire way you are communicating with others and you can make friends while asking the for the advice you are looking for. You can learn new things about you friends, and family members, when you ask them for advice . You can also meet someone new and develop communicating skills.
When you ask for advice its best to ask more than one person. I think that it a good idea to see from different points of views and asking multiple people because, you discover different opinions and ideas. Only taking one persons advice may not help you find a solution or a make a good a choice.
you can also learn something new or meet someone new when asking someone for advice. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
61E85C09E36D | Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble,or do they unfairly interfere young people's lives?
In my opinion yes curfews have to take care of them , it does matter if they are young, Also if they are in the night. This is a good intention from curfews, to protect them at the end the only beneficiaries are the teenagers.
For example if they are in the middle of the night they can get a trouble , because they going to do wherever they want when nobody is watching them, for other part if curfews say not they have to respect the rules .
Otherwise nobody are in the street playing or doing something good in the night, all people are in home resting or with their family doing other things, they have to apply the same for teenagers.
Also in the night someone can steal your properties, or doing something bad to someone or to you , why? to you because maybe you are watch what others are doing to someone, and you try to help or do something.
Some people thing that have fun in the night is good idea. but is not, for examples going to the clubs is not good in my opinion, because you don't not anybody ,or something can happen ,for example in Las Vegas almost 3 years ago someone shooting a club in the middle of the night many people die. In conclusion curfews have to take care of the teenagers this is good for them. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
62102D1B1A52 | Do you agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success? If the statement about the role that failure plays in the pursuit of success, it could help people to do better things. People can have a better future. Also people can feel more positive.
First, people can do better things. For example, my cousin Generic_Name had a soccer game at Generic_City, she and her team was talking about how they will need to play on the field, they needed to play better than the other games because the team that she was going to play against is one of the best teams that plays on that field and also her team needed to have more goals scores to keep being on the list so the can win the championship, so when they started to play they was playing like they planned it before the game and at the end of the game they won and everyone was happy because they never thought that they was going to have the chance to win that team, but they never give up.
Next, people can have a better future. For example, my parents after they got married they always wanted to have a better future for them and for all there kids they was going to have, so both of them was planning to cross the board from Mexico to the United States, so after a week they finally cross the board and they was living with my grandma, when my dad started working after a couple of months my dad bought a new house and they started to live there, then they were saving money to buy more stuffs because they was going to need to buy a lot of things like: beds, clothes, shoes, table, chairs, etc. After some years they finally got everything they needed and they had two kids and finally got to know that they will have a better future.
Last, people can feel more positive. For example, when my cousin talk to her coach about that I wanted to be in a team of soccer, the coach called me and told me that he wanted me to play soccer with his team the next weekend, but before that I told him that I was not that good at playing soccer and he told me that I will learn easier and faster if I go to practices, so when I went to my first game I was so nervous about that I was not going to play good as the other girls do, and I did not wanted them feel bad if we lose for my fault, but I kept playing and I never thought that at my first game I was going to make a goal, but overall I kept going from failure to failure and never loss my enthusiasm and that is one of the reasons that helped me feel more positive of myself.
In conclusion, I believe that going to failure to failure will not loss the enthusiasm, at the same time it could be one of the betters reasons by making people do things better, make people have a better future, and also people can feel positive by them self. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
62196AC0ABE8 | The British naturalist and politician John Lubbock wrote you your character will be what you yourself choose. In my opinion we choose our own character, and how we respect other people teachers, and students. My mom teach me how to behavior but she do not choose my own character, nonetheless some peoples make us strong but they don't choose own character, but on the other hand sometimes we need to change our character for example, my English teacher have a beautiful character but apart from that, sometime she need to changes her character because the students do not put attention in the classroom, and she have to be rude that way they stop talking and distract the other students, but however she never change her beautiful character.
The first step that I say that nobody choose our own character is because when we are sad nobody can change our attitude or own character somebody can try to help us but they don't gonna change our attitude because when we are sad sometimes we are angry, and our character is so bad that we don't want to do anything we just want to be alone or we just need to take a brake because maybe we are stress. My mom teach my how to behavior and that I have to respect the older peoples but she don't choose how my character it gonna be
In other words some peoples make us strong like my mom she teach me how to be strong too, and some peoples teach you that how to be strong but they don't choose how we gonna be how we gonna act, they can't teach us or change us our character we are the only person who decided If we need to change our character, however sometimes we need to change our character and that is gonna help us in the school in the house and in the life, and a person who is very respectful nice and have a good character is very important because what happened if you are angry have a bad character in the work nobody is gonna like to work with you the same happened in the school, if we have a bad character nobody is want to work with us that why sometimes is very important to change our character
The last reason but not the less important is without a doubt sometimes is important to changes our character like for example, my English teacher have some students that they don't care about the class, and she need to change her character in the class so that way the students stop talking and distracting the class, and when she change is character they stop to talk because she put angry and rude, but however she never change her character she always are happy she only change the character when the students are talking or playing in the class but they don't change the teacher character she change her own character
Nobody can change our character we decides if we change or not, sometimes it is important to make some changes to be a better person, and to help our self or to help other people, a person with a good attitude and with a good character always is gonna be good work with them we need to know when we need to change, and why we need to change and that is gonna help us for the life and for everything and always it is important to smile. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
62243789233B | In today's society, many people agree that having a simple goal and achieving it is better than having a huge goal and failing to achieve it, but i disagree. One of the greatest artists, Michelangelo, said that setting our aim too low and achieving it is a great danger for some of us. He stated this thought because he failed and made mistakes before he was known as a great artist. Michelangelo rather fail by doing something big than his life than doing something small and achieving it. I agree with Michelangelo because you learn from past mistakes, you learn to take risks, and having bigger goals help you improve ones self.
Michelangelo is a great artist because of his work, but he learned from his own work to keep moving forward. People can learn from past mistakes by seeing what went wrong and practice doing better at it; for example, in a show called
Masterchef, chefs must impress the judges by their skills in cooking but one chef gets eliminated every episode. When a chef gets eliminated their dreams may get crushed, but they had the courage to go on and did their best and can learn what they did wrong. Another example is taking the permit test as a teenager. The permit test is something big for teens since it is something related to their future. When I took the test I was nervous and failed by one question, but i checked the answers I got wrong and studied them a bit more and passed the next time I took it. These examples prove that you have the ability to learn from past mistakes, grow as a person, and that you might have to take risks in doing so.
Taking risks are mostly involved in big decisions that involve jobs, education,etc. I believe that taking risks are better than small decisions even if those risks don't turn out the way you wanted them too. In a show called Shark Tank, people come in to persuade investors to invest in their products, but they do not always succeed. The people who do not get investments keep moving forward and take their own risks to get a investor. If you learn to take risks, you later get use to it and you can speak more in front of people and state your opinion. Another example is having a meeting for a job. It is best to have a meeting in person than online because it is not as easy so you get challenged and the person interviewing can know you better and you can most likely get the position. Taking risks can make you a better person as a whole and those mistakes can help you improve.
Michelangelo and I agree that having a bigger goal and failing is better than having a small goal and achieving it. Having a bigger goal can increase your confidence and help you put your head in the task you want to overcome. People view their mistakes and overcome it so they can do better next time. Small goals do not involve much effort and work as bigger achievements; by choosing to accomplish a simple task, you as a person may get use to the easy way out and can get lazy over time. Setting a higher aim for yourself is better because you can improve your skills and knowledge. Bigger goals are better because of how much they help you improve.
A great artist once said it is great danger setting a small aim for yourself. Setting a bigger aim and failing is best because you learn from your mistakes, you learn to take risks, and bigger goals help improve ones self. Smaller aims are a scapegoat compared to bigger aims because of how much easier they are. It is best to challenge yourself so that you are ready for anything that comes your way. Even if you take the high route and fail, it does not mean you can try again. In conclusion, setting a bigger aim and failing is alright and better than setting a small aim due to it being more easy. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
622ECD91DA0C | It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. This statement is false because you can't judge a person based on their appearance because sometimes people are just having a bad day and when you become friends with them you find out how that person actually is.
For example, you meet a person that has a lot of tattoos and you have a bad impression of them, but then, you interact with that person and you find out that he/she is not what you thought; therefore you can't judge a person based on their appearance. I think that how a person dresses doesn't determine the type of person someone is, but if you let someone to express their feelings your opinion on them will completely change.
In addition, when you become friends with someone and you talk with them, sometimes they tell you that when you met them, they weren't having a good day. Also, what a lot of people don't understand is that everyone have problems and they don't know what other people are passing through.
Sometimes you have a bad impression of someone because of what other people say and the opinion you have on them do not change until you start talking to that person, I think that this an error that a lot of us make, we judge a person without knowing how they actually are. For example, once I had a friend that talked really bad about a girl and I believed everything he said, but when I started talking to her, she was completely different from what this one friend had told me about her.
In conclusion, people are not always what they seem to be and you can't judge them on how they look. I think everyone should first try to get along with someone and then, they can judge. That's why I think that you can change first impressions. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
623B7BD7613C | If you have heard of the author Ralph Waldo Emerson, then maybe you would have remembered that he once wrote, "To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment" and if you don't agree with his statement on individuality; here is why you should. You should have the freedom to make choices for yourself and have independence of action and thought.
Although pleasing loved ones and being like everyone else in a collective identity can set a moral behavior or have good personal characteristics by which an individual is recognizable as a member of a group; like a sense of belonging. It also feels good when collective aspects of the communities's characteristics; like values or common interests by which something is distinctly recognizable or known and is indivisible to the individual and so you start to feel proud of your community, much like patriotism or nationalism.
But you should have the freedom to instinctively or consistently question your community if it contains fundamental errors in reasoning. For example a principle, belief, idea, or opinion of a collective or person's authority that is considered to be absolute truth is dogma. You should also be sometimes skeptical of the advice of you're friends and family members as well because they could mistakenly give you the wrong opinion about a course of action but you should still listen and have trust in them on everything else.
Inclusion you should be yourself and think for yourself and aggregate the qualities and characteristics that distinguish one from others and have the assertion of one's own will and personality. | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
623E0AD2EF3E | Whats one place you would love to visit? One place I would like to visit is Ethiopia. I would want to visit Ethiopia because I havent visited in over three years. Secondly, most of my family members live in Ethiopia. Finally, Once I arrive I would want to talk to my family members go eat Ethiopian food with them and cherish that moment forever.
I would want to visit Ethiopia because I havent visited in over three years, lots of things has changed from then to now. But those past couple of years in Ethiopia wasn't the best for people who live there or who has family there. For Example my grandpa died a couple days after my 11th birthday and even though I didnt cry, scream, or kick that day or the day after that, it made a horrible impact on my life and my mothers. Secondly, There was a plane crash this year, more than 200 people were affected and one out of those 200 people happened to be one of my close friends. In addition to that there was a war a couple months ago that I didnt know about till a friend came up to me and said "How do you feel about the war thats going on in Ethiopia" I didnt know what to say because I had no clue that there was a war I felt ashamed that I didnt know what was going on in my own country. I've lost a lot of people i've cared about those past three years and I couldnt do anything about it because i was a million miles away.
Secondly, most of my family members live in Ethiopia. I hate having to talk to them on the phone and not being able to hug or see them in person, I hate having only 30 minutes to talk on the phone when I can talk to my relatives for hours in person, I hate how I am paying two dollars everyday just to talk to them when we can talk for free in person. Since I havent seen my family members in a long time I feel like I have a obligation to see them. I can get them small things from America and bring it to them, they can sell it to get lots of money because one dollar here is $30 there or they can keep it and cherish it.
Finally, Once I arrive I would want to talk to my family members, go eat Ethiopian food with them, and cherish that moment forever. I would go on long car rides because it would make some time for me and my family members to just sit and talk and have no where to go. We can go to the zoo since I never went and I would love to bond with my family members especially if its somewhere I never went before. My family members and I could have a cook out or I can just sleepover a friends house.
In conclusion, I would love to visit Ethiopia because my family and friends are there since i've missed so much while I was in America. I'd love to breathe the fresh air and eat the fresh food my grandma makes. Plus I would love to run around the backyard with my frirends. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
6253F73FBABF | As my opinion i disagree because "you could be someone beyond the world" if you are positive of yourself. you could take a risk of many things you want to do in life and become something wonderful of it. you can graduate and became someone you wanted to, thats growing masterly of no matter how many times you have try but where has got you.
Be a person with so many mistakes but the also is going to learn from them and,you will still come back up and start trying again.
If you have done so many things and you still feel like no other person is going to appreciate of the things you have done and then you feel like theres nothing that you could do that could be good enough for nobody. Dont stop trying do not ever make yourself feel like you gotta do things for other people just be great how you are with or without mistakes you could be wonderful and make yourself happy and proud of them.
In life theres so many responsibilities you have to take care of and no matter what does responsibilities are you still take care of them you dont give up because if you do you wouldnt be able to go to school and becoming someone in life you wouldnt be able to to eat you wouldnt be able to work or to do many things but you stills do them because you have to and because you do become someone out of them you become a person that graduates a person that works everyday to put food in the table a person that after words its gonna be proud for they have done and that is always good enough and that you grow everyday from it. you could become a person that could afford a car with nobody asking help and you grow everyday with or without people because you are strong like that. theres another step where family comes along and you got to be able to take care of your family you got to get your family food you gotta get then clothes you gotta get them shoes you gotta get them the most important things they need and you still get your family out of any circumstances you still get up every morning to get your money and help your family or each other up and you still grow from not just growing from it but you also get to know how something people get to appreciate what you really do for them. honestly you grow of some many ways you didnt have no idea you could but you still get through it.
be someone in life is about growing little things you have left out to make them bigger. Believing in yourself is always something that is gonna help you to a positive person.
Making good choices in your life is another part of you not just because sometimes you learn from them or where they could take you but how you get when you learn from your bad choices and how sometimes you react and you say to your self that you just want for your self to do good things.
Dont ever in your life say that your things are never worth of any tries you have made because the're really are worth of every single part of your life there are step you always take. If you want to be a great person dont thought of yourself you know you could do it you could grow of it other people would love so any wonder things and person you really are.
being positive of your self is the most amazing thing you could do like for example you could be positive and just be like i will pass a test or i will pass but you are just being positive that you are sure you could do it because not you only are positive of yourself you are also showing that you could believe that you can do it. being organist with your self is less stress full because you dont got worry about get so many things out of your way the same day. Happy is showing every body that no matter they think about you you dont pay any attention to them even if you have try your best to become friends and it still not even working out so you just gotta leave the person and just let it be you just gotta show the person that you did try and if for that person your friendship wasnt good enough then dont bother. Unless you really dont try at all you will never grow even if you have put your best effort your best part you will grow and become a person that others are just going to admiral you.
could you really learn from life yes!! you can be aware of it but hey!! we are not perfect nobody was born perfect we can make as many mistakes we can or we could be the greats but no theres nobody perfect that could tell you that you cant do something when you know more then anybody else that you can and that you are not perfect. It doesnt matter how people make you feel at the end of the day it would only be you and your family and the effort to put on the things you want to become the best not perfect but the best. Sometimes is just matter of time for you to really tell yourself that you could try your hardest and not give because life is not about just being a completely fail nope you could tell youself you can do it because you got it.
"BE SOMEONE BEYOND OF OTHERS CUZ YOU GOT IT" | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
62654020C48D | Are you one of the students that is home schooled? If not, here are some of the benefits, why some students choose to attend classes in their home, by the way of online or video conferencing.
Some people believe students will benefit from being able to attend classes from home, however, home school is a great way of student to attend classes because they can focus in their studies, it's more safer, and they can avoid bad influence from others.
Attending classes through online or video conferencing has a lot of benefits like what I mention from the first paragraph, that homeschooling can help students to focus in their studies. For some reasons, some students that go to school can't be focused on their studies/activities because they are distracted by some of their classmate that is very naught. For instance, there are some people that born in this world that are very naught, like even you defy him/her they will not listen to you and then sometimes, some of the other students will raise their pride and just walkout from their class because they don't want to listen any objection from their action. Another reason for home schooling is that, it's more safer for them to study. For example in today's society, a lots of bad things happening in the world, like school shootings that cause a lot of innocent students to die, like what happened in Florida, a few months ago. One of the reason also of homeschooling is that, they can avoid bad influence from others. Like for example, some of the school are diverse ethnic, students characteristics are diverse also, like some of the other likes to go shopping mall, likes to strolling anywhere, likes to bully others, likes to fight, likes to not go home after school instead go to other houses that they don't really even that much know, and many more characteristics.
Although students will have benefits of attending classes from school, however, attending classes from home has much more benefits. Attending classes from home by the way of online or video conferencing can really benefit to the students because one of the biggest benefits is that, they are more safer to study in their homes, they have a great time to focus in their studies, and they can avoid bad influence from others. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
6269A525D482 | I think it is a good idea because students might be tired of working at school everyday. Lets say that students want this the same school schedule that has a longer winter break, a year-round schools, and a week off in the spring and fall because people want more time to do spend time with family, do homework, projects etc...
First, We can spend time with family and friends, we can watch a movie with them, eat food together as a family, have parties and celebrate at our house. We need families to stay together as a group because if we don't then we are going to miss them too much as we go to college or get our new place to live. Nobody wants to stay alone because if they want to stay alone that's okay if you want.
Second, We can go on a vacation to the beach, the pool, Disney world etc... I love going to the pool in the summer because we don't have to stay at our house all day and all night. There is so much to do outside then just staying inside and doing nothing. We must stay with our family because they love you so much and they want to spend time with you too.
Finally, We can relax from work and studying we are tired of working so hard that we need a break. We are studying so hard for school, we did lots of tests and quizzes that we are tired from. We all enjoy summer vacation because we can spend time with our family and friends, we can invite our friends to eat , go to mall, watch a movie etc...
In conclusion, We must spend time with family and friends to go anywhere in the world for a vacation. We can enjoy each other by going to a amusement park or a museum to play and take pictures to save it on our phone for memories. We need to be together as a family, work as a team, having fun on a vacation. People might think that their family is annoying or they don't love them but your parents and siblings love you because we are not perfect in every way. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
62B3C9C3398E | Do we have to live other people experiences?
If we want to live our own life you should start by taking a break. Think how people would like to live their lifes and then, use this as an example but do not use it for your own. We all know that life isn't easy as we want but that's life, we cannot change it. If you put your life in hands of an expert you will have the opportunity to succed but it will feel strange and you will regret later. Why? if you ask why, and this is because everything you have done it's thanks to someone else not to you, you are not living your own life, youar not having fun, no mistakes, no experiences, no control of your own life. There's always going to be a person telling you what to do and if you don't follow his/her directions something could go wrong. That's why you should live your life as you want to live it without anybody help. At first, you can have a teacher during a period of time but it doesn't mean that you will have to go and ask for help everytime you have a problem. Make your own decisions mean that you will do mistakes but you will learn even more from this and it will help you to do thigs better and it also will help you like a human. When I said human I mean that you will have your own thoughts about something and your own way to live your life and no like a robot that just follow direction and have no sense of humor.
People will never discover their great mental power because until I know they just develop the 70.3% of their mental capacity and it makes them feel useless sometimes. I don't really like to talk about other people life but one example could be Homeless people. Everyone thinks and look at the as a piece on somethings useless but if you really meet them and talk to them you will realize that they are smart and all they do and what they have in their brains is even better than what we have. The way they think and the way they look at other people make them specials and unique. Now, what can experts do to change their life or take the control of what they want to do?. As we all know, they cannot do anything and no matter what the situation could be the answer will be the same. Their decisions and their style of life before the actual I think were made by someone else and after a while they were not able to pay for what they had. Experts help you to get things but do you really think they will help you when you are really on trouble? or will they help you with things you have to pay? the answer to this is NO. In my opinion they help you because they want something from you or they will try to get something from you after you learn it. Two years ago I met an old man from Washington DC, his name was Generic_Name. His parents are from Generic_City and Generic_City. Before homeless he was a mechanic but one day while he was fixing a car he met a person who told him that he could help him to have his own workshop and he accepted. Everything was good for the first years but after some years the person left the country and Generic_Name didn't have the capacity to manage the whole store. Bussiness came down, deppression started to make him use drugs, and after a while he lost everything he had and the expert (person who help him) wasn't there to help him when he really needed him.
If you think you have the capacity to succed on your own, you have to do it and don't let anyone ruin what you have planned for your own future. It doesn't matter if he is a proffesional, you just need to learn what you need but never let them maneuver your life. People will always try to control your life but you are the one who is going to decide if you want to live the life they want you to live or the one you want to live. I am not saying that you have to ignore the advices they give you but don't follow their directions.
Nothing is difficult if you really try it and nothing can be impossible if you really want to do it. Do not live like a robot, don't let anyone take adventage of your incapacity to succed just because you do not know anything. Ask questions, ask for advices and opinions but don't do want they want to do with your life. I know life isn't easy to live but remember that we just have one and after death we cannot do anything about it. Life is going to beat you up, experiences will make you stronger every single day, decisions will make you be independent, and at the end you will see that everything you did was good and you have what you wanted without anybody help. My friend, if you let people maneuver your life, then you will cry and you will not have the future you wanted. Everything will be destroyed and disgrace will follow you anywhere.
Don't follow experts, be one of them and do your own life, have a family, have a car, an partment or whatever you want to have without asking anyone. Help is given by God when you born. He gave you two arms, two legs, two eyes and a body. A person help you to walk and talk and one time you learn this you become an indepentent person. Do everything by yourself and don't let people make you feel useless because God make them the same as you and as everyone else but they have not develop their mental capacity the waht make them special. If you do everything by yourself people will try to destroy you but be strong and try even more until get what you want. Never try to kill yourself if you don't know what to do it is better if you believe in God and in his help because he is the only one who can help you without taking anything away from you.
Never give up and follow your dreams, live your life as you want to live it but remember that no one can control what you can do if you don't want to. Life depends of you and what you do with it. No matter what happen you have to do what makes you happy always just trusting God. Remember that just God and family are our friends. Anyone else is just people we know. Fight for what you really want no matter what comes next. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
62DCD859B7FB | I undestand the company Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, " Unless you try to so something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow. Base on your experience, I think is a good idea from Ralph Waldo because he is trying to convince us if we do not think before doing anything we will never grow.
Is it important to know if we do not think before doing anything we will never grow. For example, if we want to invest our money in something that is very expensive and we do not have a lot money to pay it but we insist to invest in that we are not going to get ahead. Another example is, when is almost time to pay bills we have to save money to pay them.
Because he is trying to convice us if we do not think before doing anything we will never grow. I think is a good idea from Ralph Waldo. Thank you for considering my ideas regarding. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
62E5030D1A59 | Imagine getting a job that you're most interested and enjoys the most that later on life, you became super rich or making decent money but doesn't mind as long as you enjoy it and still continuing on. Life can be hard if people don't enjoys their jobs, causing them to have depression. That is why, students should select to visit and learn about the work that interests them because, it gives them more time to think, making plans for their future, and to gain experience through out the school years.
Students should be planning for their future and to decide which class to take in order for them to learn about the work that interests them. Many students have successfully acquired the jobs they intended to work because of how much work they put into to plan and learning the stuff they need to know on how to run the job. Planning is really important for all of our lives. For example, the military uses a plan and tactics in order for them to calculate and for the plan to be successful. Because of that, planning has a big impact in our lives and helps us to decide on what jobs to do and to give us the time to think. This way we can understand the situation and whether or not if the people and their families to decide if it's a good idea.
Students can gain little experience by taking the class every each year, this way students can learn more about the Jobs they want to be in. For example, JROTC are similar to military but trained to be a marching men and to juggle with rifle (from what I know of). They exist because, it helps students to understand what its like for them to experience JROTC. I also think this is very important. It's like, warming up for a swimming contest but, how can you win if you don't know how to swim? Swimming class exist to help people to not drown. If you take swimming class every year, and gain a little bit of experience, you will be able to win the swimming contest. All this reason is to proof of why gaining experience is a good thing and help you understand the job you wanted to applied for.
Giving students the time to think on what jobs their most interested on is also very important for this prompt. For example, students need time to think whether or not if it's the right class for them. Every year in high school students are required to pick three choice to pick their class. It is called the Course Election, where students gets to pick three class that are interesting for them or forced to pick because it is a requirement. I really like this idea, it helps us understand what we're interested on and what to learn. I think three years is enough for students to plan and to have a little experience for their future.
In conclusion, student are more successful if they are to be picked for themselves instead of the school choosing for them, because the more they like the class and the job they are going for, the harder they will try to succeed. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
62EA3F855DB2 | It is a better choice asking more than one person because when you ask them what's your problem or question most of them are going to say something else while some are just going to say the same thing. But it's not a good idea just asking your problem or question to one person. Because that person might be wrong and not know ask your examples:mom,dad,ant,uncle your friends anyone you trust and thats how you get multiple opinions and when your making a better choice by asking anyone you know. But don't ask one person cause one that person might not know and two it's not a better choice by asking only one person and sometimes you might not trust that one person by his or it's idea. And you might get your problem or question answered by asking multiple of people. Conclusion that you should ask more than one person so you can get more multiple opinions and you might get the right answer of your problem or question by the right person. But some people don't like telling other people there question or problem one cause there scared or shy or they might think that the person will not know or understand what the person is talking about that sometimes can happened it happen to my friend once where he had a math question asked the teacher but the teacher didn't know what he meant or what he was talking about so the teacher tryed to tell him his question but that wasnt the question my friend ask for so he told a student that sits next to him and he understanded what he was talking about so he then helped him with the question he had. | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
62EDBC22A953 | I think that success, are composed by failures, but not for everyone.
Success are for a better life, but to have a better life there will be always complicated things(FAILURES), that may be you will want to stop doing that thing that is going to help you to succeed.
The important role of failures on success is that, if you don't fail once you will not learn; failures plays that important part in success, learn is based on what you did wrong, I am saying based on wrong because If you did something wrong before, you learn that part, What do you did wrong? and next in the future you already know what you did wrong and now you will make it right.
Now, sometimes we give up so easy on what we want or on what we are fighting for, some loss the enthusiasm for the success and others not, I agree with that, some think different and if you think different about the failures its going to help you to make that success. I'll say, once my aunt told me "Believe in what you can do, and not in what you can fail on", she hasn't never give up on what she can achieve in her life. For example I'm from Generic_City and all my family are Hispanic and our home language is Spanish, and speaking English its not easy for me, but I never thought that I was going to be able to speak it. I told myself that everything its possible in life, you born for a purpose, not just because your mom wanted you to be born.
There was a time, I got stress, anxiety and depression. I was failing in school and I felt so sick that I was giving up so easy and fast. Failures comes one after one, and after one, that I told myself "You are going to be okay, and you are going to do what you like and succeed and make your parents feel proud of you". I started to think positive, and do the things right, nothing last forever, I got rid of my depression but still with stress and anxiety, but from there to now it doesn't mean nothing for me. Failures can cause a lot of things like, feel hopeless, loss enthusiasm and giving up so easy for those who are weak, but if you are strong enough to believe that you are going to make it you will make it, you are going to have your levels of hope, enthusiasm and faith high that nothing will stop you to succeed.
Failures are more challenges added to your life, to be in the top of the mountain you should hike until you can see the ocean behind the mountain. There will be more than failures, there will be big obstacles and some times people will put traps in your path.
Some people will just want to see you fail in the field and some will be happy to see you in the top of the mountain. Some people fails in their path because they dont understand the meaning of the failures.
In conclusion, I agree with the idea that Success consist of going from failure to failure, even if you loss your hopes or enthusiasm you got to keep going in your goal to succeed.
More than 50% of people, I will guess, fight for their future they put all their effort to succeed and if they can, we can. Failures come as a good parts of success to set it down and success in life. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
62F578BA97ED | The negative effects of Technology allows people to complete many tasks like check out books, shop, and play games with out speakings to other person, all that make people to get not soscial communication, vison problems and force the libraries to change.
First, not social communication. The people spend more time than the neccesary using technology, and they forgot about the circle of the persons around them. For example, when they're playing video games, they spend hours playing videos games that makes them forgot about the person next to them. Secondly, Vision ploblems. This is the biggest one, around a 60% of the students in the school use glasses becuase the time that they spend in their smart divices them eyes ball get burn, also is those days is the first thing that the parent put in from of their childrens. Finally the probles with the Libraries. The technology force libraries to makes changes becuase, in the 20th Century not one want to read a book that's why libraries start buying the new technolgy for they costumers.
Inconclusion the Technology in the 20th Century help to much but we need to know how to use it becuase the negative effects will be more bigger. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
62F7911DE51F | Once author Ralph Waldo Emerson Said "unless you try to do somthing beyond what you have masterd you will never grow", and he is right. To truly understand what thee author is trying to is saying you must understand that to say that you have mastered something is to be able to do it without failer. In order to grow you must set goals for your self. Even if those steps that you take are small they help you walk the path of achiving greater things. Not everything comes easy it may take years to master or even learn, but with the right amount of confidence and self confodince you can reach mastery.
If you can ride a bike than learn how to ride a mottercicel, if you are able to make a cupcake than learn how to bake a cake, if you know how to float then learnand teach your self how to swim. Small tasks like these can help you improve skills that you already know and have. By improving those skills you can reach higher places and do bigger things. Untill you push your self you will never reach the goals you set but with the right amount of dedication you can reach your goals and move beyond what you already know. Just becuase you can't do one small task doesn't mean that you can not master it you havr to keep trying and trying till you can master it but until then you will never grow. Now it's up to you to decide weather or not you want to grow as a person or not weather to grow or stay the same and never to achive your goals in life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
6305A432AB38 | The Benefits of Having A Good Attitude.
It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. The importance of having a positive attitude can be bigger of what some people may think. A positive attitude describes how much effort people are putting into the problems they are facing. To see the good side of the things in life help to be successful. A positive attitude is the key to success in life because a positive attitude will help not to give up and will make things easier.
First, a positive attitude is the key to success in life because being positive help no to give up. For example, in the text "People Who Became Successful After Adversities", many people had a hard time before becoming successful. Even though, that people had adversities they always had a positive attitude towards the problems, that hope they needed to become someone. A positive attitude can change the view of the problems. Having a good attitude help people to not give up when facing adversities.
Furthermore, a positive attitude is the key to success in life because it makes things easier. For example, a person with a positive attitude will always see the good side of the problems. When people have a good attitude toward a problem, to face it becomes easier since people will look for a solution instead of being stuck. The attitude with which people face problems, shows the effort and how much people try. A positive attitude make things easier for people to be successful in life.
Many people may argue that a positive attitude is not the key to success in life because people does not always need to be positive to become successful. For example, there is many people who became successful without the needing of a good attitude to do things. This argument has a point, since people does not always have to be positive when facing something. However a positive attitude will help everything to go well. For example, people who have a positive attitude in life will attract good things, and everything will go well. Even though many people may argue that people does not always need to be positive, a positive attitude will help to make everything go well in life.
To summarize, it has been said that with a positive attitude people become successful in life because a positive attitude help not to give up, and a positive attitude will make things easier to go through. People with a good attitude do not give up when facing problems. Having a good attitude, will make things easier to go through. Some people may say that a positive attitude is not always needed to become successful, however a positive attitude is the key to success in life. To be positive in life is really important, since it helps people to face problems and become successful. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
631F9CBDFD7A | Would doing school work at home benifit you? Working from home would benifit me because I can take breaks whenever I need to, as some students like work on the computers, and may see their family.
First, when working from home I can take breaks so I don't get stressed or angry. Some students need time to finish their assignments and not be counted as late. Students possibly have late assigments because they get stressed during school hours and they don't want to do it at home. However, if they work from home, they can complete those assignments at anytime and still get a 100%.
In addition, some students like to work on the computers better than on paper. For example: I like working on the computers because I like to multitask, so in this case I prefer working on the computers more then on paper. Mulltitasking is better for me because I like to listen to music and do some homework. Multitasking is a skill and not everyone has it.
Lastly, some students don't want to leave their family and prefer to be at home. For example: I have a sister that can't leave my mom, and I bet that she prefers doing school work from home. Personaly I prefer working from home and not leave my family. However, we do need to leave them at least when we're 20-21 or sooner. Working from home would benifit me because I get to be on the couch and not be sitting under the desk. I do like the confert at my house better then in public scools.
Overall, Working from home would benifit me because I like to work on the computers, I can take breaks, see my family, and be on my couch. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
6330EB716872 | Kindness,you may know it and I might know and everyone might know, but what is kindness? and why does kindness have such a huge impact on others?
First of all, what is kindness? well kindness is when you give back to others like doing big things like donating to charity or something small like holding the door for others, but what really is kindness? those are just simple things we do, but why? why help others? We choose to help others so then they can help others and we can show the world to be better. Kindness is the key to making someone happy or feel like giving back we help others so they can try to give back.
Secondly why does kindness have such a huge impact on others?
Well we all like giving back, some might disagree or agree but we just want the world to be a better place not just for ourselves but for your kids. You just want you and your kids to be nice, because one day they'll look back and be thankful that someone helped them by holding the door or complimented them and just like that they feel something inside them they feel happy just by one thing someone does they can have a HUDGE impact on them.
In conclusion, Kindness has a HUDGE impact on others and what really kindness means to you and me and by just doing the smallest things you can change someone and they can can also change someone because of you! | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
63314DE11287 | The main piece to improve your skills is during the process of keep learning. Most of the people got to the point where they become successful, thinking that they have the sufficient knowledge to stay where they are and not move forward. The most common mistake that someone can make is believe that they have learn enough to the point where is nothing else to learn. I strongly agree with the words that Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, people that have got the title of professional and keep being successful in their daily are the ones that are still adding productive information to their life and career. The actual key that makes people become professionals everyday and give them the recognition of master is through the process of keep learning new things.
Convince yourself that yo are not good enough "Yet" this to motivate you to believe that you need to learn more. Examples that we can see everyday, teen mothers when a young girl or even in some cases girls that are still considering a kid have to been each to be a mother. Teen mothers learn through the pregnancy to; take care of the baby, change diapers, give appropriate food and how give them bath. The process of being a mother for the first time, does not end when you give birth to the baby. There is not a book where it details you how to take care of your child, even if there is one it would probably not be as helpful as you learning each day.
If there were a class of "How to be a mother for the first time if you are a teen" it would not cover all the expectations that you baby requires because you will be the only one that knows your baby, its behavior and what its needs are. Even adult mothers have said that they keep learning how to be mother everyday.
Do not push back yourself because of the fact that you seen to be far away from your objective. If you have been studying for years, since first grade and still have to go to an University, it could make you think if it would be necessary those extra years. The answer is yes, even if you have been in school for about 10 years and still have to go to college to get you the information that you need to be able to get a decent job, yes it is necessary. The years where you have been taking classes that does not look that t would help you in the future in any way. They do have a purpose, and it is to inform you and help you to develop skills that have not been discover, whether you like math, history, science or languages. Any subject that you have learn is to help you find what you really like and how you can used for the future. That is why there are those extra years for college, to start to focus on your objective and teach you what you actually need to become successful. After you have got the extra years, does not mean your learning have also stop, when you get to practice for the career you have selected you keep developing your skills and growing as a person, and this because of the motivation of keep going beyond of what you already manage.
Going beyond your expectations as a person would bring you benefit to your life. If you get a job based on your skills, experiences or knowledge it would also require the same process of keep learning. If you got the job where you always wanted and they approved you to work there because you qualify and you have study the career for years does not specific mean you know everything and you would directly get to the work and lead yourself to become another worker. Like always and how the Author Ralph Emerson emphasizes you would have to keep trying new material. You have experienced the process to gather the sufficient information to get this job, but now you are being told to go beyond and now you need to learn the system of the factory, office, building, hospital or any apartment you have being positioned. In this case does not mandatory need to keep educating yourself, but to improve in your work and become an efficient person you need to keep learning new skill that would apply to your job. Like is being remarked again the importance of keep learning to do new things so you can grow.
The importance of always going forward and learn to manage new things will make you grow as a person in your life and improve the labor work. If you do not try nothing new and do not applied on your daily, do no expect to become successful as a person. You are the only one that knows how to lead yourself and what weakness and strengths you have, as a captain of your life you know where your boat should go, the wind could make you take different directions which is why you have to recognize where exactly your destination is. The fact the it seems that you have got far enough where you might feel afraid to go beyond, which could ruin what you already have does not mean it will. People argue that they are scared to keep going forward and decide to just stay stand where they are because is been far enough. You should not let yourself be the obstacle to keep learning new things to do. If you feel like that was enough and you got to were you stay, it is because you can go more fatter with the experience that you have. Do not stay in one point and make sure to keep walking and doing new stuff to help you grow, do something new everyday and prove yourself that you have become a successful person every time you go a step ahead. Keep growing to encourage yourself and others to keep doing something new and always going in different direction without stopping. | 2.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
638D7F913AAB | Do you think the greatest accomplishment in the world is to be yourself in a world that is trying to change the person you are?, because I do not think people should change themself ever for what god brought us in the world for who we are and not changing ourself for others. So yes, I agree with Emerson statement about individuality, because people in this world are trying to change themselfs for others or just changing themselfs because they dont like themselfs for who they are. There are so many reasons why I agree with this statement especially in today's society that most people in this world are changging themselfs for someone else. I don't agree with the fact that people have the courage to change for others, because in any case they should just be thereselfs and love them for who they are, is the greatest accomplishment and feeling ever.
It is the greatest accomplishment because of the feeling that you loved yourself and secceeded without someone bringing you down and making you change yourself is the best feeling to feel. Otherwise the people who are trying to bring you down are winning and you are giving them the power that they should not have. In today's generation with all the social media we have people that have been rude and comment someting bad to make you feel bad about yourself and then some people change themself just because of a comment that could hurt someone. But if you can secceed people will leave you alone, because they know you will not listen to the rude comments you would recive and there just wasting there time. So then you have the power and accomplished the negetivity that people are trying to change yourself.
Also being yourself does not mean you wont have mistakes because everyone does and that is okay just without you changging yourself and accomplishing thing is the best part of life. It is okay to have mistakes because everyone learns from them and next thing they will do better then the last time they did something bad or had a mistake. People will go through tough times but it does not mean you should automatically change yourself for that. Everyone goes threw a situation that they probebly think they hate themself and wanna change the person they are, but I think that is wrong and they should be thereselfs and understand that everything will be alright at the end without them trying to change themselfs.
In my opinion I do not think that changing yourself will help with anything and I think it would probebly make things worst. LIke for an example if you change yourself nothing is gonna happend just you letting yourself down and changing who you are that should not have been in that situation. Also people would most likely notice and ask why you change yourself and that would bring back memories and make you go back in time and see why you change yourself. But if you dont change yourslef no one would know and wont bring up any badly past back memories. Also mistakes can happend and if you change yourself and go back and see old pictuers of you of how you used to be you might not like for who you are now and you cant go back because you change yourself for someone you did not want to be I mean you could always try but why try after you did it and cant go back.
So just be you and do not change for others who are constantly trying to make you something else who it is'nt you. It is such an amazing feeling and more people in this world would be great if they would'nt change for someone else because they would get the confidence and not worrying about what others has to say about them. People would most likely be so positive if they would be themself and not changing constantly or ever themselfs for people who are ignorent. People who love you would never say to change the person you are because that is just wrong and they know that they would not want to lose you as the person you are. So in all saying that everyone should not change and be themselfs in a world that is constantly trying to change them. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
63AB55DADABF | Do you think we should extend our school day? No, I think we shouldn't extend the time because we already get enough learning and our classes are long. I also don't think we should extend the time because we will be getting out of school later. If we we extend the time then we could be very exhausted during the school day. This could also be very difficult for the bus drivers because they will be getting home extremely late and it will be dark when they are driving the kids home back from school.
We get enough time in school already so there is no need to add more time the the school day. We learn enough in every class, and we learn everthing that we need to learn in that hour and a half. We learn what we have to learn and if we add time the the teachers won't really know what to do. I think we understand that they are saying and we understand the concept they are teaching us. The school day would be way longer for elementrary kids. I don't think its fair for elementray because they stay in their classes the entire day . It would be very broring because they are going to be sitting there for eight and a half hour. It would be very broing for them, because they don't get to switch classes like middle and highschool. They should also have some fun during the school day they shouldn't just sit there and high school and middle school at least get to move around while they are switching classes. They really can't do anything after school is done.
If we extend the time in school we will be at school later. Kids will be tired the next day because they wont get home until the evening. They wont pay attention to class because they didn't get enough sleep and they will not be paying close attention to what the teacher is saying because the class it too long. We will also be getting home late. Elementray kids will be getting home around 5:00pm. They won't be able to do many activities after school because they are getting home late. When they get home they will have to eat, shower, and go to sleep because they have school the next day and they deserve some fun. High school kids wake up around 5:00am and they will be at school for eight hours and then they wiil go home and do their homework. They will be tired because they don't get enough sleep and they have to wake up very early. They also can't do activities because of the homework they have and how early they have to wake up and the time they get out of school. They will get home late and they can't do much because they will have to focus on homework and school.
Extending the time could be harder for bus drivers. Bus drivers need enough sleep so that they can drive the students safely to school. Sleep is the most important and you should get at least eight hours of sleep, and that can't be possible for bus drivers because they will get home late. They all need to rest good so that they can be wide awake. If they don't get enough sleep this could lead to crashes. Crashes could happen if it's too dark and the bus drivers can't see outside. Elementray students would be getting out out around 5:00pm and around that time it will start to get dark and it isn't good for bus drivers, because they cant see if they are somewhere very dark. They also won't get to see their family as much anymore and spend time with them. They need to spend time with their family it is important to spend time with them. If they get home around eight then they will get to spend very little time with them. They have to go to sleep early because they need to wake up on time. Crashes aren't good because the parents can sue the county and that will be the countys fault because it was dark outside and maybe the bus driver couldn't really see outside.
I dissagree with adding one and a half hour to the school day. I think seven hours is enough time for a school day and to learn all the materials that we nned to know. What do you think should we add one and a half hour to our school day? | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
63AB7F39EBC6 | I disagree , because it's true the firts impression in a personis the most important when knowing a other's.
As humans depends of other's for the survivor;our's characteristics are for genetic of it's way. For this to treat the way of to attach in a group of people.
some people thinking that no it's neccesary because,no we depends of the opinion of he people or the world,for the opponent each person have the different way of interact ,each person have an different way of think,personality,character,and the way of to act. The stereotype's of the society of base in the system of that eachperson of the world is different not all aresame and that each individual have are world,the place were they it felling better and comfortable. Respect the opinion and the intimacy of the people.
In exchange of other people have an idea different...in a new job,in the university,and place's important's of any place;we obligation of the respectful and amiability. The people have the capacity to be good and refined,the impression of the people duty of be always of the better.
A manager to the to contract a people have that to see the personality of are people for know that is the person the found for the place of work.
In my opinion,I believed that all having different way's of tobe. And depends of as to trat a the other's people...We are people that wrong,in a household where are teachen valuesy where are teachen that our's impression duty to be the most important ,but not impressing the first time is the better. Something we do it error's but learn a change and a be different,change the bad things that did. Can change;maybe no now but with the time and us way of thinking,we having the possible of do.
Generic_Name have a different personality,and character,I think that my character no it's the best for it reason I need change not a everyone know this part of me,but i know that my impression depend of my values and my decision of be better. In the society that I to found ,I know my impression not a all people to it to gratify but duty dependencyof be better and that my impression depend of me and not of the other people.
In conclusion , the impression and the actual society;it's important in different factor's: the job,the school and place where I found ,but duty understood that allare different's ans somethingwe do mistakes and something wea have bad day;s ans our's characters not are a good impression,but I can change ,are humans and to do mistakes but the better that can do as humans is accept us mistake and change. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
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