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4CB787139508 | The school board plans to add one and a half hours to school each day. I disagree with this plan because everyone will be in a bad mood they will start to skip school and do bad acts, teens will be late to work and lose there jobs, and i feel like if we add more time to school there will be no tine for family.
First, the school bored wants to add more time to school. Kids and teachers are already tried, adding more time will make it worst it will start making kids wanna skip school or even start acting bad. I have a friend who will already skip school some days. he said, "school can get to boreding who will wanna sit in class longer inside of playing soccer with you friends." I think there will be more kids will skip school like my friend.
Then, some kids or teens like the high school kids, will be later for there jobs. My sister work at PizzaHut right after school. Adding more time to school will make her late to work, they will even fire her for being late. If the school board adds more time they will be taken jobs and money away from teens like my sis.
finely, family is every inporden if the school bored adds more time to school there will no time for family. School already take up a lot of time. I love to be with my family and i'll pick it over school anytime. Me and my family watch movies each friday. My step dad picks outr the movies with my little brother, and i help out my mom making the popcarn. It's so much fun, but if school has to be longer then I will not be able to watch movies and others kids will not be able to family stuff too.
All in all, I hope you agree with me and don't add more time to school. | 4 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
4CFAF19AF547 | Technology has it ups and downs with some being useful to use humans and some being harmful and destructive. Has technology come to a point where we need to use it in our everyday life or has it become where we don't even need it because we're to lazy to do thing ourselves. I think that limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has had many negative effect on people's lives because it can cause depression or isolation, can cause some people to lose their touch of reality, and can harm your physical or mental health. Likewise, technology can cause many harmful things.
In other words, technology can cause depression or isolation can really be very bad situation especially if you have both. Depression can be caused by technology because many kids around the world get bullied through social media ,and some get very emotionally depressed. That's when kids want to isolate themselves and don't go to school. Many people around the world like playing video games, and some are very into it that they don't even know that they are isolating themselves from everyone around them. Most people around the world have a phone, a cellular device, and use it all day and don't even come out once. Technology can cause a big impact on people's life and causes them to have depression.
Consequently, technology can also make people lose their touch with reality. Some people can easily manipulate other through the internet. At a young age kid like to TV, YouTube video ,and things like that, and many kids if not all are very gullible. Many videos on YouTube can make kids believed something thats is not true or even brainwash them. Adults also can get brain washed through the Internet. Many conspiracy theories say that the government are trying to brainwash people with technological advancement machine and many to believe that it's not true. Some people even get brainwashed by playing so many video game at a young age, and believe what they do in a games is what they can in real life.
Additionally, as technology keeps on progressing it's just going to keep on getting worse for our physical and/or mental health. Eye doctors say that if your always on a device and it will effect your vision. Technology can mental change you as a person because some people want to be like someone on the internet and change the way they dress and even in some situations their personality. In some cases people have watch many videos of people doing very dangerous stunt. Some people actually try and attempt the same stunt they saw on the video and fail miserably and end up going to the hospital.
In the other hand, technology can come and be useful. It can also safe peoples lives in a situation where someones life is at risk. Technology can also come in handy for us to win wars. It's usefulness can make someones life way more efficient. Technology just overall makes like so much simple and easy. People don't even have to stress about thing as much as they used to anymore because of technology. Technological advancement can change the world as we know it. However, technology can malfunction anytime or anywhere. Technology advancement machine can be the cause of someones death. People might think that technology is going to make life easier, but it's only gong to get harder. If people just let technological advancement machine do everything for them their physical health is just going to plummet down because people are not getting the exercise they need. Also people need to understand technology is getting in the way of something beautiful, the Earth. Technology is causing pollution around the world and killing our home.
Overall, technology is causing all these horrific things to use and we don't even know it until we look around use. I personally think that limitation of human contact to the use of technology can have a negative outcome on people's lives because can cause people to lose they're touch with the outside world, can cause depression or isolation, and can a severe effect and people's physical or mental health. So, technology can be ignored but it will never go away. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
4D23A7FA9408 | Although some say students wouldn't benefit attending classes from home because students will not have the opportunity to work in groups with other students, actually students would benefit attending classes from home because they will feel comfortable and students can be more safe.
Those who believed not being able to attend classes fom home wouldn't benefit students because they can't work with other students. Around 200 articles said that students that attend online classes don't have the best projects just because they can't have other student's opinion. For example, so many different ideas by having a group can be more interesting than only having a person's ideas.
However, students would benefit attending classes from home because they can feel comfortable. Furthermore, a school survey showed that students prefer online clases because that makes them feel comfortable just to be seated inappropriate. I agree with these people because I like to be seated in many ways, but in school rules is only a way to be seated.
Also, students would benefit attending classes from home because they can be more safe. Lately, more than hundred school shootings had happened, so it show us being at school can be dangerous. Other big danger can be gangs at school they can be an influence with so many bad things on a child's life.
In my opinion being able to attend classes at home can make parents happy; they don't have to be worried for their child's safety.
As you can see students wouldn't benefit from being able to attend classes from home because students can't stay connect with other students, actually being able to attend classes from home would make students feel comfortable and secure. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
4D35A86F4929 | I agree with Thomas Jefferson that we can accomplish many things together. In many cases people are in active and they lose a lot opportunities. It is better to be society, fight for the benefits and to be .an active person. This can change many things in people's lives.
We have to be society to not procrastinate about daily tasks. If we are always participating and if we are always involving ourselves in an event or task that is beneficial to oneself or other. It helps build a sense of standards for society and also builds up a persons attitude
Accomplishing something does not always mean achieving a goal, it could also be perform regular tasks with the best benefits.
They have to fight for benefits what they want and no waist any opportunity. In my case i am always an inactive person and lose a lot of opportunity along the way. The opportunities I had and i lost because i am an inactive person and that's bad.
It is better to fight every day to achieve the things we want in life. With the thing that i had to past is better to fight and strive to be successful.
Active person can help people reach their goals, It feel good help people and use time wisely. In this world people have big goals in order to reach these goals people need to work for them. Small action like help or participating in community people take that like a big change in society. Time is limited in a day people use this time to accomplishing they goals. Being in active person can change the world and make a difference.
In conclusion it does not matter who you are but we have to be sociable. to meet the goals and have benefit with the things we want and fight for the things we want to achieve in life. And do not waste any opportunity and also help those who need it to be a better person. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
4D377B163021 | I agree with what American jazz legend Duke Ellington said,if theres a problem in the world and yo know how to solve it it like your opportunity to show the world that your a person that could matter to everyone like if you know the sou lotion to a problem then you are more likely to be more successful at what you do. Another reason is to help others with what there dealing like love problems like losing a life time best friend or family member like you can help them with a solution and may help others with health problems homework problems stuff your good at and ways you can help them your not just helping them your helping yourself with staying and helping people can make yourself feel proud like a person that matters in life and you will be known of what you do. think like this if you help others and people think good about you,then your not going to be forgotten and not be alone in life and have a better future ahead of you its like your dream life and supporting others with helping them in difficult issues. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
4D3C1E2D2E03 | I agree with Churchill's to be success consists of going from failure to failure without loss enthusiasm, it that's matter if you are failure and you are not even losing your enthusiasm but at list you try, that is the most important thing.
First of all,
you will never know everything but the most important things is trying because if you dont try, you will never learn, but sometime its okay to be failure without a enthusiasm that means that you dont care, you are not interesting in anything or another way to see that dont have a enthusiasm is when you waste time for example if i feel like i am just losing every time and i dont even has a enthusiasm, something to be focus, I will enjoy my time to try to better, to be a winner I always will be try to increase.
Secondly, some time people love to be a better person but there will be people who doesnt enjoy the time to increase, I just know one thing for sure sometime people like to stay in the same step because if you want to be a winner, you must try and see what you can do to go up, I will try to have a good future, a better future for my family, to have my own things, living failure make you a weak person everyone can see that you are weak, that you are not smart enough , that you are comfortable for what you have, but you must be a ambition person to have more than what you have.
Thirdly, if you dont want to live failure you must to win the opportunity, I just know that this world is for smartest people, here survive the person who can use there brain carefully, people who are not making bad mistake but we are humans,m humans make mistake but that is okay you must fix it you must to increase yourself to keep something in your heart that can motivate yourself.
Concluion, on my opinion i can said its okay if you want to stay in the same step,but you will never understand the meaning of life if you never try, you shoul try at least one time. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
4D3CF318797A | Technology has came a long way of the past hundreds of years. Technology has made so many things possible for us humans, we took a man to the moon because of technology. But technology also, has its pros and cons. Us as humans, we're depending on technology way too much. People are buy clothes, and buying food without having to talk to another person.
Technology has made it so easy for people to buy things online. You can be sitting on your couch, pull out your phone, and order bananas, hammers, and a eagles beak. The next day, a drone will fly to your house and deliver it right on your door step. We don't have to leave our houses anymore, or talk to anyone. We're able to do this because, of the use of technology.
People don't even have to leave their house anymore to see someone. You can pull out your phone, and live video chat with anyone you want to see. Some people might think that's a good thing, that we'll never leave our houses again. But us as humans, we need that human interaction. Without having to leave our houses how can we travel the world, or even meet our soul mate. we're not going to be able to do that sort of things, if technology is just making everything so easy for us.
There are ways that technology is helping us like transportation, and constructing buildings. But the limitation of human contact, is due to the use of technology. We need to stop depending on technology to do simple task for us. This needs to stop before it becomes normal for people to do these sorts of things. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
4D65BE0B15B8 | Thomas jefferson i am agree with this wrote that you did, I think he wrote it because sometimes people are not doing good thing and right.
First, when we are accomplish something we need to be proud of yourself , it is wonderful when other people are getting done their goals.
Second, we may not believe on what other people said to you because sometimes you are right but if you pay attention you can go down with your goals, that why you have to finish your accomplish alone.
Also, when we done something we feel very happy and that can help us to follow what we actually need to be a great people.
For example: if we are idle we never can be great on our future, we need to know and be sure that if we do not follow our dream, it can not come true, like when you are in the college and you said i need to be a nurse or something like that you have to go to the college every single day and stay strong for all that you are making and when you done, you will see your that dream come true and them you can see all the effort that you did.
In conclusion: we need to know that everything can be possible and be sure what we are doing because is the only way to stay strong and not down of everything because we need to be proud of yourself and not be selfish with other people because of anyway everbody need to have the same right, we need to feel happy about what other people is doing, because on the end you can see your effort and your dream come true! | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
4D7E52C79A3D | Does students think that learning from home would be helpful for them? Learning from home won't be as helpful as much as you go to school and learn in the class from teacher. I don't think that students would learn anything from video or online conference because if they don't learn anything while their at school, so how would they learn from home. They might have work at home or at outside, which makes them distracted or disturbed them from their work, and they might have problems with it. Every student has the right to make their decision but this idea won't work out.
Mostly, in every home there is problem which we don't want to share with anyone or we don't want anyone to know about what is happening in our home. Like fighting with mom, brother or father anyone in home or we might don't want anyone to know why are fighting. I mean people have privacy in their life or difficulties which they don't want to share with anyone, and even if they do the work from home it might not help as much as we are in school.
Commonly, every student is not equally intelligent so they can understand one thing in one time. Most of the time and most student take a long time to understand one thing in this situation if they decide to put distance learning then those student might not understand clearly and of course they won't come to school, so they can have a day off.
I mean if a student can't learn something from school how could he or she learn from home.
However, every student want to learn more and achieve something and most of them don't even care. The person who want to achieve something always try their best to do it, but the person don't care would get a chance to not learn. I mean everyone want to relax in home because school work are really tough, but even after that every student try their best to learn and distance learning can't help it out. if you are out somewhere and you're teacher is trying to teach you in online you might not get what they are saying.
However, some people might think that distance learning might help them but if they can't learn in school then how will they learn when they are not in school. I don't think if you are far away from school so you can learn anything from that. Anyway I don't think that students or the teacher might have that time to talk to every student or teacher to ask question or answer them. One teacher can handle a class together, but same teacher can't handle every student differently, so I don't think that this idea would work. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
4D816E688FBD | This Essay Is about:To conserve energy and resources do we have to extening the school day two hours, four-day school week?
My opinion about this question is that we don't need to extend the school day and go to the school four-day a week.
Why? Easy, because if the students spend more time in the school everday, we just loose energy.
We get tired, we are not focus in class, we forget what we learned, affect your communication with your family.
We get tired even now, that we just come for seven hours. If we spend more time in the school, the students are gonna be more tired than normal they are. Getting tired students start loosing they energy and, they do not pay attention what the teacher is saying. Sometimes I feel like I can't anymore my body and my mind need to take a rest. Your mind start loosing power when you get tired. Get tired and do not have a good rest is not healthy.
we are not focus in class.
When you start the day after a good rest, your mind start the day fresh. If your mind is fresh, you get better focus and powerful mind to think about what you are doing. During the day after few hours, you start getting tired and, loosing focus about what you are doing. If we spent more time in class, we gonna get bored and we can start talking with the neighbor, distract the others students and interrupt the class. After the school time students are gonna be so tired (body and mind) that they will want to arrive at home take a rest, leaving the homeworks without do it.
We forget what we learned.
It is so simple forget what we learned during the day, specially if we are going fast and talk about different topics. If we extend the school day, we most see different topics and we will going fast,forgeting about the last topic. This happend because we lose focus,when we are thinking in the differents process and topics. When your mind is process one information (let's say "Math") and, you do not even practice for a while, you just get it and, the teacher pass to the next unit (beacuse the period is longer cause the extending school day), you most will forget what you learned last unit.
Affect your communication with your family.
how extending the school day, affect your communication with your family?
Well, let's say the most of the time you are in the school, some parents work during the day. But in the afternoon when the kid arrive at home parents spend time with them. If extending the school day, by the afternoon the students are gonna be more tired than normal they are and, they just will want to take a rest the rest of the afternoon. You have three days of weekend to do what ever you want and, have a conversation with your family?
of course you have an extraday now, but remenber that's just for students your parents still working one more day. The weekend the students can use it for homeworks that mean you do not have much time to have a conversation or pass time with your falimily.
My conclution is: If you gonna get tired, do not gonna be focus in class or you will forget what we learned, it is not a good idea to extend the school day, because at the end do not bring anyhelp for students. And can be worth for some of them. Take a good rest, be focus in class and keep what you learned, those are the students beneficts. The extratime I spent on my homeworks at home plus the school day, it is enough to learnd and be focus on study and get a fresh mind. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 |
4DAACF629E7F | Generic_Name
Generic_Name
03/20/19
''Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow''. Try to be better, and learn things that we don't know is the only way to grow. Trying new things to be better on things that we are already good. Having always family's motivation to keep going up, and for our learning proces. Learn from our mistakes, to grow as a person and never say never to anthing is a goog meaning of grow. For these reason i think we have to learn something beyond wath we have already mastered.
Trying new things to be better on things that we are already good, to grow. Meny people practise new different sports, to learn somethings new. take clases in the school, that we never taked to improve as a student. Have a different job, where we can improne our workers skills. For these reasons and many hothers i think try new things can help to grow and improve and what we have already mastered.
Having always family's motivation is the best support and our learning process. many people always try to think about this word ''family'' because, is the word that give averyone power to keep giong. Motivation to be learning, to help our familis is a big example of grow. Help others can have a big meaning end the others persons and for you too. For these reasons and many others i think having family's motivation is the best support and our learning process.
Keep learning from our mistakes, is the best way to grow as a person. When we try to learn something and so many times we make a lot of mistakes, that mean that something good is coming. Some people like to make correction to help, and that is one of the best wat to improve. Never say never, always keep going because that's way the mistakes exist, becuse we learn from them. For these reasons and any others, keep learning from out misrakes, is the best way to grow as a person.
In conclution, i am agree with Ralph Emerson Wrote. We have to try to do something beyond what we have already mastered. Trying new things to be better on things that we are already good. Having always family's motivation. Keep learning from our mistakes. This are many raison to be agree with Raph Waldo Emerson wrote and, if we want to grow we have to learn somethings new. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
4DB99E2F46E3 | Yes. Having a positive attitude helps you alout to be a succesful person in life. It helps you to be a parent, coatch,teacher,and friend....ect
Positive atitude is one of the basic rules that all employees follow such as a waeter or cashier. They learned it to win the customer and to get the business seccessful. When i worked in Krespy Kreem my manager tought me something which is a way to win the customer with a positive attitude that i have to follow. the service called "the sweet" service this word stand for smile,welcome,entice,engage,and thank. Having a positive attitude help you to beacame a friend and close to people and people will alwys feel confortable to talk to you. But having a negative attitude will make poeple fell unsafe around you and you will be lonely and not welcomed to the most of people.
Having a positive attitude also help you to be a teacher because you will always motivate your students and provide for them education. The reason why students skip classes is because of the teacher's attitude. students prefer the teacher who give a friendly smile. Positive attitude helps me alout to be an successful athlet because my coach is always happy from the way i act and my leadership that i do infront of my teamates. It makes me a respectful person and trustful guy.
In fact attitude is the way the person present his/her personality. People with a negative attitude are mostly asocial and introverts.
In my opinion having a positive attitude helps you to be a parent because the childrens get scared from the person who's always angry and frustrated. that's why most of the parents hide thier nerves and they act nicely infront of the child. Couple relationship consider attitude because most of momen prefer the guy with a positive view and who's open for evryone. The best way to live your life and be polite all the time is to have a positive attitude most poeple respect the person who give a smile and greet them. One of the importance of good attitude is bieng a family member. My uncle is the type of person who communicate and discuss with evryone and the way he talk is likeable from evryone because his always friendly and welcomed from poeple.
Politicians with positive attitude are always persuasive because they use communication skills to convince the audience by telling thier speech. Attitude is a way to find a job because when the person get an enterview with a manger he has to answer the question kindly and with a respectful way. One of the reasons of bieng a good student is acting with a positive attitude infront of my classmate.
I agree that a positive attitude is the key to success in life becuase its the way to live with poeple and find a job and create a family. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
4DBC5B5272FF | Generic_Name Key To An Excellent Success
With a positive attitude you'll get somewhere in life like Generic_Name who's always has this positive vibe with him, even when he works, goes to school or even when he's kinda had a rough day. He determines himself to be positive every single day. Generic_Name grandmother, tells him it's better when you're always positive everyday will show much he will grow. "The more of a positive attitude the more you'll get in life" she said.
His key to an excellent success is by working hard and having that positive mentality vibe. He never likes to see anyone or try getting himself to be negative. With his, mentality he'd achevied so, much in work and school. Generic_Name been getting so many scholarship's due to his work ethic. He's said before" when you're negative you'll do nothing in life to be successful,all you'll do is hurt yourself and not be very successful cause of it." Generic_Name just always has that positive mood. He's done everything to help people in need and also to get his career and life great. People will always look up for, his positively and working ethic.
How does he determine to keep that positive attitude for his success. He always, avoids himself getting in a negative vibe, by doing something that makes him feel great to take it away. Tries to make peoples days like buying them clothes and such. Spends sometime with the family, cause who doesn't feel better when they're with the family. He also, tends to keep his mentality very strong for himself. Asks for help from people when he feels so down. All he does is just to be positive. Even if something tries to make him go down. He always ties himself to be great and positive each time like how his grandmother told him.
He took the words from his grandma. She told him a story how she was always negative back then, in his age. In school they used to bully her she lost her mother at an early age at that time and on how long took her being successful in getting a house. Ever since, then Generic_Name took those words and always makes himself the positive guy. When he did he's done so much, in school and work. He's been offered to so many things in life. He's bought a home for his grandma, getting paid millions. The work and postiveity he took is rising his life to the top. Everything what he took from his wonderful grandma when he was young made him a great successful man.
Just like, how everyone says the best attitude of being positive brings success to life. His grandma's words with always be in his head. This is why a positive attitude in life will make you successful. In his words"a positive attitude,mind and mentality will make you and your life great." | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
4DBF966A37CA | Is our past our future?
Many people won't grow, for the simple reason that they still live in the past, want to repair a mistake from the past, and miss somebody or something they had before.
Is totally true and the reason behind it if we don't let our past go as humans we know that at a certain time those things might come back and probably will hurt us a little bit more than the first time.
Living the past is something not easy but we have to understand that there are so many good and bad times in life. That sometimes, whenever something happen to us when get stuck and stop doing what you were doing for that moment . We feel like it will be the ed of the world because once something happen happens we felt like that little mistake will the fine our future but when is not five to six months can pass and we still living in the past. We still living in something that instead for us to stop us it showed us a lesson on how things in life work because we think we can't do anything that will fix our mistakes we've done in life.
Repairing certain things in our lives something could be harder than it seems the reason why is we feel we've do many bad things that all we feel inside of if that we're guilty for the simple reason that we just don't fin a solution and we feel like we've hurt eve the one around us when probably it was just something that life wanted us to happen to teach us a lesson and learn from it, but we see it on a negative way like if it happen only God knows why this and that happened to me like it was the biggest things of our lives.
When people had gotten hurt in the past sometimes is one of those painfullest things because once someone had hurt us we don't socialist with people when that's when also you are hurting people by not talking to them by not doing anything and because at once someone fail to us we don't want to trust anybody for a simple of one person when it shouldn be like that we juts have to learn how to forgive the ones that ave hurt us in he past but we felt like that is not the right thing to do.
in all of this three thing we just have to learn how to live with it our past won't define who you are right now or who your are going to be in a few years we just have to learn to live no matter what we all have situation in life that we right felt down at some point but if you fall just get up and continue the race. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
4DCA7736B00C | Changing the school menu healthier is a good idea. There are some food that is being served to the students that is not healthy at all. In some of the foods there is so much oil, that is not healthy instead it can make us sick. The more healthier students are the more productive they will be. They will feel like they are more energetic and want to run around, that means they will want to try out for sports. Some of lunch food now makes students really lazy because of all that oil, that means they just want to sleep and not do anything at all. The healthier food will help out many kids with health issues. The students need to be healthier young, for the future they don't have any health issues. The healthier food can help students with their body, less fat and motivates them to be someone they thought they couldn't be. The more healthier students are, the less sick they are. Students are more present in school. Students need some of the vitamins from the healthy food. There are so many good benefits of having a healthy lunch, not only for health issues but make students feel really good about themselves. The healthy food is less expensive than the food they are serving. Students like fruits, vegetables and many more healthy food, they should have the option to choose the type of healthy food they would like for lunch. There are so many amazing benefits of eating healthy, it helps out in life style and makes people feel really good about themselves. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
4DD1ED4D20D2 | A science experiment is enjoyable and educational because you are in a group some times and you are have fun and you are learnig new stuff. Other school subjects should do that because people pay more attention to it nobody likes having a teacher sit there and give you a packit to learn nothing all day. Science expreiments are the best because you see whats happening and your getting it more. It makes it better to get a hands on activty then just looking at a book all the time. I feel like more people have As than Fs in science because the experiment helps people alot. Over all its just a better than to do because helps peoples grade helps them understand what they are trying to teach them.
I personally like science expreiments more than any other classs becasue it helps me have an A in that class. Other people like it because people in my scince class always get happy when the teacher says we do have an expreiment to do. Overall i feel like expreiments are more educational and fun activtys | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
4E0094B179E0 | School is a time where you will receive assignments and it is your decision to complete them. Doing your work affects how teachers will think about you and how you will grow in the future. However there is one thing I disagree with in school. It is how the teachers praise students who aren't giving their best efforts. I believe that true self-esteem comes from achievement and it is not right to support those who aren't really trying.
The first reason I disagree with the teachers method to boost kids self-confidence is because they are too dependent on others. They will look for someone to always keep them up but in a world like this you can't depend on anybody. They can't always depend on someone to help them succeed. Students can become too attach and expect to always be praised by what little they do. What would happen if their was no one to support them. They would do nothing because their wouldn't be anyone to motivate them.
My second reason would be that they dont accomplish their achievements. When you accomplish a goal you have this feeling of happiness or relaxation. If students are always praised for their efforts they will never actually try to complete the task because they will have the feeling of completion. They have no reason to keep going if they seem to be done which could be a bad in the future. In the future they probably will fail their assignments because they believe that they have done good when they have but not good enough to complete it.
Their are some benefits on teachers motivating students such as them gaining confidence and self-esteem. It could really help people in the future. You motivating them could later cause them to motivate others in to doing their work. I just dont want teachers to go too far and praise them for writing their name,sometimes you have to be strict. It might hurt at first in the end it will all work out.
Those are some of the reasons of why I dont support teachers motivating students. Students should learn how to work alone and shouldn't ask for help. However i'm not discarding the option of teachers helping student. I'm just saying that they should only focus on what those who really need the help. Hopefully their will be change and teachers will only help those who actually try. | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
4E0F689E099B | Imagine a world full of good positive attitude! in this world a positive mind set takes you a long way for example, lets say one day you have decided to go eat out and waiter was having a bad attitude how would that impact you? offended ? perhaps irritated at the waiter for how he/was treating you with a bad attitude. well i'm gonna tell you the pros and some cons if there is any such as at work, home public,and by yourself.
First, People now a days just have a mask on and underneath that mask is a unhappy, sad person,and people live with that causing them to have a bad or a fake attitude toward the people around him/her making the environment not a very positive one. Ive always been told not to be mad or get mad at something it will make that situation 10x harder than it needed to be.
second, Surrounding yourself with positive people, people that have a great attitude ,people who love to see you succeed in you goals or at anything, people who dont bring you down, people who support and love you, people that tell you can do it. Hang around people with that attitude and i promise you, you yourself will succeed be happy in and out and have a positive attitude.
Life is always gonna have its ups and downs shoot, shoot i'm only a 17 year old boy and i had lots of barriers lots of downs lots of fake people that have came in and out of my life but my mother that mistakes are the beauty in life that you learn from them and prosper and grow dont let that change your attitude because it will change the way you think the way you talk i can go on and on about how a positive attitude can make you a better person and be successful in life.
Having a negative attitude is just negative and thats a ugly word being negative can impact you in so many ways at work nobody wants to hire a rude or behaved person because it would make the company look bad make your parents look bad and make you look bad. a negative attitude can bring, negative, thoughts negative actions and nobody wants that. even at home having and bad attitude and mama and thats a attitude you are going to regret when you get a smack across the face.
So yes i strongly agree that a positive attitude will take you a long way. Make you a better person and last make you successful person in life. Stay positive in a negative situation because it will make things ten times worse if you are mad or down learn to heal yourself time a time out step outside take a breather and think before you say or do. life is beautiful but its makes it ugly if you attitude is ugly so change it and make yourself a better. healthier person. i know this is out of the promt but to be succesful in life and to be what you wanna be you have to do that yourself nobody is going to do it for you. but first START OFF with making YOURSELF HAPPY for you not for anyone else. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
4E0FDE02216A | Technology has had such positive impact in the world. Know a days people dont have to do much if they want to food all they have to do is take out there phones, some people find a problem with that and i just cant understand why. If something is making a impact on your life making a lot of things easier to do and have fun while you doing it. Back in the day if I ever wanted food i would have to get on my phone call a place and wait for it to driver, know I can order what ever i wanted and can track the driver to see where there at.
Sometimes technology doesnt help in everyday things. It is very important tho that people still know how to do things without technology to because it will come in handy sometimes. Older people have a such a bad thing for technology because they think, every kid is brain washed and just stays on it all the time. Kids these days kinda know how to do both like its not every day i get to type on a computer I'm usually just writing stuff on paper.
Technology has come a very long way. It has its perks and its down side,but we can all agree that its made life easier. Sometimes people abuse it and its ok because you can still live with out technology. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
4E13812BC1ED | Meet new people and make new friends is fun. Having social relationships; is a good way to have a good community. Always, when we see new people that we are about to meet, we have first impressions- ideas, feelings or opinions about a person based on the superficial. For some people, first impressions are almost impossible to change. However, I disagree with this statement, because this can change by: introducing each other, know more about favorite things, and ask questions about their life, then our first impressions will change.
When a person is about to meet another person, they act differently as they are in their daily life, which is totally fine, because they are going to introduce each other and it will change. One day, when I was in my freshman year, I was really nervous and exciting at the same time, and this because I did not know anyone at the school, but I meet one girl; she was really kind and friendly. So, we introduce each other, and my first impression before introduce each other was, that she was serious and shy. The importance of this, is that our first impression can change after introducing each other, because we can have an idea of how the person is, based on their look or way to act, but this idea can be totally different after cross a few words each other.
Furthermore, a good way to change our impression is knowing more about the other person, know about their favorite things such as hobbies, sports, and others; putting this in practice it can change the way of thinking of both persons. In my way of thinking about the impressions, these can be bad or good impressions, and a personality is part of the impression because it shows the behavior of a people. So, it is important to know more about the person; about their personality and by this could have a clue about the personality of the person.
Finally, different person has a something important in their life, and that is what makes special to a person. For example, all my friends before they know me, they think that I look shy, calm and serious before they know me, but time later these impressions change for them. They told me now "when we saw you for the first time, we though that you was so quite and serious". And they said this, because they know more about me and about my life now, and they think that I am a fun friend and happy, so this is what makes me special, that I always look serious, but when the people know me, they think that I am friendly and happy. And I think that always, when we see a person that we never seem before, we should think to ask about their life, because details about their life can help us to change our way of view and think about the person.
Therefore, first impressions can change, they are not always accurate in the way of how the behavior of the people can be. We could think that people are as the way of their physical appearance, but that is completely wrong. In order to meet new people, we have to introduce each other, know more about them, and ask questions about their life, then we can have a clearly personality about the person. After this, our impressions would change to a positive or negative impressions. We should not trust in our first impressions about a person, we should meet the person and our first impressions will change. | 4 | 2.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
4E1C62576A76 | Dear, Principal
Its a good thing that your require all students to perform community service, Because its a good thing that we should have are community clean . I think we should have it clean because what if someone from another state comes to are state there going to see how dirty it is . They will start talking bad of are state and people would not come no more . Also if that family was thinking to move were we live , there going to change there mind ,because they saw how dirty it was and people want a place to live and were is clean . So Principle is a good thing that you trying to change that. Not all students could do that also adults they could help too .
sincerely, STUDENT_NAME | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
4E22E3143561 | Agree, living in a world where you sometimes has to be someone else to fit in the society or with friends it doesn't makes us feel confident it is not the best feeling, because we are pretending to be someone else not who we are. And when we do that, the only one who will get hurt is us, if we are and behave exactly as we are may be there won't be too much people around us but that is not the most important accomplish, the most important accomplish is when we learn how to love our self and be who we are no matter if there won't be a lot of people surround us, if someone will loves me it has to love me for who I am not for who I pretended to be.
Everyone in this world deserve to be love for who they are, no one needs to be someone else to be love or accepted , we have to stop trying to be someone else just to fit with a group of people because if you're not like them, then that's means that you don't belong to that place. Been who we are is what makes us special, there are no specifics forms that forces you how to be, pretending it won't make you happy. Just will make you feel that you don't deserve to be love, it will make feel desolate, it will make you feel that you are not funny as the rest of your friends. But when we learn how to be our self in this world where it constantly triying to make us feel or be someone else it is the greatest accomplishment, because when we know how love our self for who we are and how we look then we will be capable to love someone else for who they are not for who they pretend to be.
Feeling like you don't deserve to be in this world is not the best feeling sometimes all you wanted to do is just go to a place where nobody knows you, where you want to start over again and do what you really love, be who you are and if someone gets to knows you it will accept you the way you are but something that we can't see is that we don't actually needs to go to the other side of the world to start over because we can try to start with our self, we have to start loving us the way we are. Why do you think that sometimes we feel desolate too? Do you think that is because we are been honest we our self? It is important to ask our self that question because it makes us think about our self for a minute and forget about the rest of the people about what they would think of me, most of the time we forgot about our owns feeling about how we gonna feel at the end if we do or behave the way that the society is asking us to do. And when we forget about our self that is the time when we feel desolate, and what can fill that what we think is missing? Is learn how to be our selves. If you're not funny as they want you to be or they might say that you have to be like the rest, that's not right because you will make yourself to a side and you will start been someone who's not you, someone you don't love but you have to be that way so you can be accepted and when that happen you are losing the greatest thing you have inside of you to give... Been who we are maybe it won't makes us see the perfect person in the world but it will make you happy to know that you have accomplish the greatest goal! Which is to be yourself in a world that always wants you to be someone else. Now that I had learn how to love myself I'm able to see that everyone deserve a change to be themselves, to show what they have, learn how to be you it also help you to see the beauty in the rest of the people that is surround you it also makes you free to stop thinking that they need certain things to be love or accept. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
4E29345CF8A9 | Students are expected to identify a career?
I think students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school, because student should think in their future wild there in high school because they can start to get ready to University or college to choose what career they would like to study.
I think student can start thinking in what kind of career they want to study in high school at a young age because is important to students to known what career they want to story after finishing high school.
in some societies,students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school because they can select a specific guide to help study better for your career.
FOR EXAMPLE: My friend is in high school right now and she is thinking about collage, what does she want to became and she tell me she want to be a teacher to teach other kids math because she is very good in math so she is getting really to college and studying to became a teacher.
However; other said that young boy don,t have to worry about any career wild there in high school because they still younger, but otherwise i think is a good idea to start thinking in college when you are in high school because is important for kids to known what career they want. | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
4E443B00DBFA | something i would like to accomplish in the future. Would be to be an amazing guitar player. And become one of the best in the world or in the U.S.A . the guitar is one of my favriot instruments. I like to play it makes me feel good
I started playing because of many Hispanic musicians that play guitar. But the Maine reason i wanna play Is for my uncle that use to play. He thought me a little bit and then he was killed. so now i play for him. And i want to become one of the greatest guitar players.
And all the people i look up to play guitar. One of the people i look up to is Jimmy Hendrix. He was amazing he played behind his back. and with his teeth and another person look up to is Johnny cash. he played every were and any were. Did you know that he was the first person to play in a jail. But then not to long ago los tigres del norte played at that same. jail in memory of him los tigres del norte is a famous band in south America. I also look up to Ariel Camacho an amazing singer but he plays a different instrument called requinto. those are some of the people that inspired me to play.
that is what i would like to do in the future. And there might be good money in it. And if i am any good in the future. and i would buy my mother a house. and i would try to walk on the red carpet. i would travel the world with my band. singing. or i might move to Mexico and pursue my dream there same thing but in Mexico.
Those are all of the reasons why i would do it in the future. And why i play now. And did you know that the guitar is the most known instrument around the world. And that more then two thousand people a state in the U.S play it. So thats what i want to do. Not to become a rock star because i dont think there are Hispanic rock stars. because ill be singing in Spanish. thats it. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
4E59508F6D0B | As our lives progress on technology keeps advancing further and further. Which leads to less person to person communication and our education is getting worse from over use of technology.
The more technology is invent the more person cummunication get worse becuase people are not going to wanna go shopping and do other in the real world all there going to do is oder stuff on online and what messes thing up is that not that much people are going to have job because most of the people are going to oder thing online instead of going out.
As the technology incresses student are not gonna pay adtion in school because of the technology most student have phone by the time they are in 6th grade. Mostly now days student like to order a lot of thing over the internet and mostly thing that u can buy over age. So technology is bascily taking over the world.
So as our lives progress on technology keeps advancing further and further. Which leads to less person to person communication and our education is getting worse from the over use of technology. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 4 |
4E7DD441DAC8 | I beliece that high school students, shouldn't and should commit to just one career. My first reason that they shouldn't is that the students can change want to do as a career. My first reason why that thwy should is that this we don't need to go colloge if we are studying the class in high school. My other reason we should is that it good to now about that career you want to do in the future. For an example like JROTC is an amzing thing it shows about how militray life is going to be if go throw that path. A other example is AOL it shows a care you want to learn about like becoming a firefighter and more like that. A other great expame is a career for a day. So those are great explames to help students unstand that career more in deafeth. My other reason why we shouldn't is that this high school we are speacking about we don't have to chose just one career and stick with it. But lastly it's your chose go to a school that does makes you do that or not do that! | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
4E81E4116D94 | People have more oportunity to graduate more early. The program have benefits for all the students. Also they can make a plan to take curses during the summer or the evenings. People think is a good idea for the students does not can finished the school, and they can finished in this program. After they finished the school, they can enter to study in the college.
First, people think is a good idea because they can graduated more early. Everyone has a oportunity to finished the school in three years. Also for the other students do not can continue study, this program is a oportunity for continue, and they can finished. For the students have a older years they can study in this program. They can take the oportunitues to study the curses during the summer or evenings.
Second, the program have benefits for all the studnts. Some people not can finished the school because they work, but with this program they can do the both things. The students can to study, and work. They need do both things because they not have help to other person, for that reason many students forget the school, and they choice the work to the school. The benefits is their can continue study and finished school.
Next, some people can take a curses during the summer or the evening. For the students not have many economic, and they working for their can continue to finished school.
Also in this program they can graduated more early and they have a good age. After they can go to the college or university for they can continue thier careers. Some students choice study in the evening because in the morning they work or have other differents planes with their families or other activities. Other prefer study in the evening because is more interesting and more funny.
In conclusion, some people think is good idea to the school offer programs to the students. They can continue study, and they can graduated more early to the school. The students can go more to the college in a good age. They can finished the school in three years. For the students not have many economic have benefits, because they not have help to other person they can work in the worning and they can study in the evening. The students can do the both things. Also they can finished the school they can go to the college or university for finished their caree. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
4E8ED336CF7E | Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble
Do they unfairly interfere in young people lives the curfew wants to Procter them people would think that they are interfere in their life. they want them to be save people won't like other people do what they said.
they want to stop adoption at 10pm somethings people like the wrong way.
I think that curfew are trying to Procter them, and they don't want to interfere in their lives. But if the the curfew are adopting teenagers on the street after those hour they are breaking the law they are saying that the don't want other one to do adoptions after 10pm on weekday and on the midnight of the weekend. The curfew want to interfere in other people lives, because people won't like the curfew say something what they are respecting and they are not doing the right thing. Curfew they think that they are doing the right thing but they are not cause, if they would be doing the right thing they would already stop all that. It is unfairly that they are doing that because the dont have to care about other people. I think that they don't have to do that because somethings, people would like it, but not all the times they would like it | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
4E91C3BA11D0 | Imagine being a new sixth grade student in middle school and, not knowing the expectations nor, knowing anything about the place you are around. Elementary students should need to know what will go on in middle school and it's expectations. So explaining it will make it easier for sixth grade students.
once coming to middle school
First of all, students should know about the class room expectations. Middle school student should be respectful, responsible, and productive. Kids should know better than to play around ,or ignore teachers and ignore their work. Students should come to school ready to learn not to play around. Kids should be quiet while a teacher is talking and should also be silent while taking a test or quiz. They shouldn't be throwing stuff around the room or be yelling or screaming. When i used to talk i would get in trouble but, i would always listen to the teacher.
Second of all, students should know about halls and lockers expectations. While walking in the halls kids should be safe. Students should not run in the halls and, should not push and shove other kids. Because students could get injured. At your lockers you should get your things for the next class and not talk to your friends in the hallways. If you cant open you locker ask a teacher near by. But you shouldn't kick your locker. If i couldn't get my locker open i would just ask a teacher to help me. Don't kick or slam you locker respect the schools things because it provides you with the things you need to learn with.
Last but not least, you must know the lunch expectations. During in line to get your lunch you shouldn't be touching everything nor, keep a hold up in the line. Be productive and get your lunch fast then take a seat at you table. If you need anything raise your hand dont get up with out permission. Don't throw food at people pick up your trash once you leave and, dont make a mess. While eating you should stay in you own seat and not at others tables. Once i would go to lunch i would get my food fast then take a seat with my friends at my table. In the cafeteria it is super loud so try not to scream or yell because it will be extra louder if you do.
In conclusion this is why teaching kids about middle school is a good lesson to teach elementary school students. So that once they go to middle school they would be ready. The students would already know most of the school expectations and how things work around. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
4EB117877F23 | I feel that we should work in groups because its more beneficial and others might have a better idea then you about something. Working alone might be boring for some people and if that person does know that they are doing the groupe could hekp them.
The first reason why I think wokring in groups is more beneficial is because more than on brain think better. More then one person can help on what they are working on. They can help each other on what they need help on. Four people in a group can get things down faster then only one person. People in groups have less to do then one person because in a group everyone does something and being by yourself mean you have to do everything on your own. You also get more tired if your wokring alone and in a group your talking to one other and discusing what you are going to do.
Another reason why I think wokring in gourps is more beneficial is becuase you can learn something new from another person and if your working alone you only have what you know. In a group you come up with more ideas and support them if you think they are right or wrong. If you work alone you get stressed out and if you work in a group you know what you have to do and thata the rest of your group is doing, but if they need help you can help them out on what they need.
My thrid reasaon why I think working in a group is better is becuase you can support other people ideas and oppinions on what they think is better on the work. They can have a better idea then you do and might work better on the job. If you wokr alone you only have your ideas that you think are good but if you work in a group someone could have a better idea or oppinion.
I feel that we should work in groups because its more beneficial and others might have a better idea then you about something. Working alone might be boring for some people and if that person does know that they are doing the groupe could hekp them. People in groups have less to do then one person because in a group everyone does something and being by yourself mean you have to do everything on your own. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
4EB4E8611272 | It has been said that a positive attitude is the key success in life. I believe this topic is coverstal and I have both resarch and personal experience to share that will demonstrales that many people positive attitude is the key success in life.
Everyday, when we wake up we need to think about today what is plan we need to finished? do not lazy, many people need dream. One reason, If we attitude to think about what is plan need to finished ,we don't feel boring., we feel a lot power. For example: the students will know next class should be taking the test ,the students plan to study tonight ,they do study guide, more practie during the test they will get good great. Another reason, sutdents can to do voluter or study SAT,get high soccer, also need to do very well in the class taking AP class get high GPA. For example,students on the weekend can go to hosptial or go to library to do voluter, learn society experience that is helpful get into college, and spend some time to study SAT to finish homework.
Apporoximately two year ago, I have friend, she said: I want become a coffee store with book Boss, she sucess. Beacause, during she college four year, she everyday spend half day went to part- time, earn money, earn experience,learn how to make nice flower on the coffee cup, she record what book the people like to read. she know what she want .
Inconclusion,I believe that positive attitude is important the key success in the life, we need think about what knid the life I want, and we have better furture in our life. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
4ED1965FD68F | Technology had become stronger in the last 10 years in humans lives, industries like Apple, Microsoft, Amazon are industries that had become really important, thats because humans use technology really often. Technology facilitates things like work online, send emails, and connect with family and friends by social media, News around the world , that kind of things had a good impact in humans society. In the other hand, there are people that dont use technology for that kind of things, people that use technology to entertain their self, those who use technology to entertain their self are mostly teenagers that abuse the use of technology, playing video games for hours, shopping online, watching YouTube videos,make some kids to font be interested in books, stay in their phone for hours. these kinds of teenagers stop seeing their family and friends, they prefer to stay in theirs own world. Technology had become addictive for some people and thats, were technology limit humans lives. In cases where teenagers are really addictive to technology parents prohibit the use of technology, some schools in the united sates prohibit the use of technology and thats because some teenagers cant control the use of it. Technology is necessary, to communicate, work, shop, and some times to have fun but not abusing the use of it. Social media plays a big roll in the use of technology, social media allows to communicate with any person around the world, thats something that had become dangerous, meting new people in social media, someone that you dont really know, in some cases people go on this kind of dates and some of them disappear. People should use technology more careful and dont abuse the use of technology. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
4EE0B81B9133 | You are in trouble. As your teachers might tell you, behave when you are in school. That includes in the halls, cafeteria, and even on the school bus. By following simple rule that are established for your safety, you won't lose your school staff's trust.
Behave when you are in the halls. when the bell rings, and you are dismissed, go to your other class immediately. Don't take a walk around the school, go to the gym, or cause a traffic by standing in the halls and talking to your friends. It's not a safe nether is it responsible. Keep your hands to your self, unless if it's an activity that allowed you to touch the other students or even staff members with adult supervision.
Behave in the cafeteria. Once you are in line to get your food, you should respect others by waiting your turn. This isn't only respectful, but it's even a good habit. Walk back to your seat, don't run. Running could cause for you to spill your food, and someone could slip and that resulting in an injury. When you finish your food, cleanup after your self if necessary.
Behave when you are on the school bus. When you are on the bus it's nice of you to greet your bus drive, but you don't have to. Quietly walk to an open seat and sit down. Sit with your grade level. Once settled, you could quietly talk to the person sitting next to you, don't yell across the bus. On the bus it is important for the bus driver to be able to see from the back window or door to prevent car accidents, don't put your stuff in the middle of walkway. If you are going to be eating on the bus, which you are not aloud, unless the bus driver said so, clean up any mess that you may have caused.
Showing responsible and appropriate behaviors could make teachers more flexible with any other improper behavior that you may cause. For an example, you are a bad student, you were late to class, and you decided to run. The teacher catches you, and you get in trouble. Example two, you are a good student, you were late to class, the bell rings but you don't run, the teacher forgives you.
"You are free to pick to choose your actions, but you aren't free from the consequences" said somebody. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
4EECC9B3CF7F | Can people accomplish more if they are doing something? yes, the more people thrive to be active the more they will accomplish. Thomas Jefferson wrote, "It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing". Although some say being inactive serves a purpose, nevertheless, if people are doing something productive they will accomplish more because they will become active and gives self confidence.
To begin, many people are inactive which does not serve them a purpose. For example, everyone is doing something on their agenda weather it's working, school, or shopping. People are accomplishing daily tasks everyday. This shows that, when people are doing something it serves them a purpose to be active which helps accomplish goals. Clearly, if people do not commit to becoming active they will not accomplish many goals.
Furthermore, this gives people confidence and assurance that goals or tasks will be fulfilled. For instance, when being active while accomplishing goals people start to have confidence and assurance that being active can help with accomplishments. This proves that, people are best when active because they become confidant with themselves.
Overall, while not being active and doing something productive people will not see the potential they have. In conclusion, when humans are doing something, they accomplish goals which help them develop confidence and can measure how much they are active. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
4F158CCF45AC | First, i would say i agree with most of the student that they are intersting to finish their high school in three years,and in my opinion that is good for them so, they can have more years for college and some of the students have to do that to graduate early for example, i am one of them i have to finish the high school in three years because when i came to united states i came too old and i didn't take the freshman year in united states that is why i have to graduate in three years.
Most of the students are preparing for good colleges and some of the colleges you have to stay so many years to finish them. and also from my experinse it is hard enough as it as in four years but i know so many students have done it before and they sucssed on it. and i know some student have done it too but in 2.5 years. and i almost have done it and it have been good for me but it need alot of work and you have to study hard and foucces in your school and do your homwork and get good grades and don't do any pronlems in school becasue if you did any thing wrong you are going to stay more years at the school.
it is good to graduate early whenn you are young so you will have alot of years in college to be a heigher education. at the end i would say and support every one that want to graduate early because it is good for their future and i have to say thank you for the people that they are helping me to do that. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
4F22FF7F59A0 | teenagers in this epoch just want to spend time on cellphones instead of help their brain maintain doing something different but been inactivity just absorb our time and we just want to spend hours on bed doing nothing people may try to always be busy maintain the brain distracted. We always accomplish more if we are always doing something because been inactive dont serve for any purpose.
It accomplish when we are doing something we maintain our brain busy and we make many things on the day instead of been doing nothing its helps us to develop and create different ability thats the reason why the teenagers after they work,for been busy the mayority of the teenagers get bored when the are at home doing nothing.
When people is doing nothing just been inantive they waste their time it doesnt helps them for any purpose doesnt give any beneficts to the brain. The teenagers in this epoch they should maintain busy and dont waste the time after school they may practice any sport or any instrument.
Other people think that been inactive its good because they thing they dedicate time to them selves girls taking care of skin and boys playing there games or been inactive is good because they can rest after school thats the view of point of others.
Determine never been idle always doing something this helps to find the abilities for every people,helps to grow in society because the body is active doing many things and teenagers doesnt have time for using the cellphones they waste time do it.
In this epoch is very important that people maintains doing something is very important is amazing how many things may be done if people are always doing. been busy helps the people for many things some guys after classes they practice soccer or they practice any instrument,and others helps in things at home helping cooking or cleaning. When you make things kind of things your brain and you maintains you busy and distracted of all.
Teenagers should take their time to make things helps them,they choose to stayed at home and be on bed all the citizen should determine not be idle always find to do something.
when our parents go to their work they been busy and give things we need and we dont care about that because is not our effort and sacrifice because we decide just to nothing be idle and stayed at home on bed. But when teenagers decides to work to be busy and always maintaining doing something they see how much is the sacrifice they have to make to have all the things they want,because they need to helps things at home.
for example,
If people stayed at home they are not going to be able to grow as a society.
There are many things we can make to always be busy and brain too
You get distracted of the time you spend on your cellphone and used your time on others things.
The people always are things to do as little they see but it helps us to be busy also helps us to share with others when we make different things to be busy our daily routine chance because every day we have others things to do. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
4F35BA561593 | Some people ask if it is better to work with a group or alone? Everyone has different opinions about the benefits of working in a group or working alone, some people prefer working alone and others prefer working in groups. I believe that the best way for the people to improve is by working in groups because they learn more and understand better.
First, working in groups help the people to improve in school or at work because they learn new things. For example, listening other ideas and points of view from their partners. One day my English teacher make groups of four in class and gave each group a piece of paper, then he put some questions in his board and told us that we need it to answer them as a group, when we finish the teacher told us that we were going to discuss it, then when each group discuss their answers with the class we all realized that each group had different opinions, ideas, and points of view. Each group learn something new from each other.
"Everyday we all learn new things in life".
Second, working in groups help the people improve because they will understand better. For example, asking their partners if they have a question or didn't understand really well. My history teacher gave the class an assignment that we need it to completed by the end of the class, when the teacher gave the instructions i didn't understand her really well, then i ask one of my partners if he could explained to me again in order for me to understand it, be able to give my opinions and help my group.
"We could do more if we all help each others".
Many people believe that is better to work alone because they will concentrate more. For example, they will not get distracted with anyone and will finish the work faster. A friend of mine has always work alone because she said that when the people is working in groups they tend to start talking, distract others, don't do their work and by the end of the hour only got a couple of questions done. However, this argument is meaningless because if they don't understand really well, then they would not have a partner who could explained to them what they are doing. For example, not finish their work because they got stuck in a part. Not having someone to discuss the work with could be hard sometimes.
In conclusion, there's a lot of benefits when working with a group. Some of the others benefits that working in groups has are; making new friends, having the opportunity to learn more about your partner, and learn more about yourself. Having to work with someone is a good idea because you don't have a lot of pressure about having to finish the work on time or not having idea what to do. Even though some people say the opposite, i believe that working in groups is better than working alone.
"Sometimes you will need a little help from others in order for you to improve". | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
4F5775B0B88D | How do people like spending time outdoors?
A lot of people like going outdoors because it's really fun to be outdoors and hang out with friends and family.
In my opinion the best activity to do when someone goes to a communtiy park is riding bikes.
I think that when people ride bikes they can lose wieght, get in shape, and spend time with family and friends.
To begin, when people ride bikes outside with friends or family.
They have an epic time, when they ride bikes outside they can feel the sun on there back and the breeze going through their hair.
Riding bikes in the summer time and under trees with a lot of shade is awsome.
People enjoy riding bikes because, they spend time whith friends and family.
That is why when someone goes outside to ride a bike they have an awsome time.
Also, when riding bikes outside they can lose wieght and get in shape.
When they go outside to ride a bike their legs make movement.
And when they bend their stomachs to move their legs a little, their stomach also make's some movement.
And all that body movement helps them get into shape, the best way to get in shape when they ride a bike is when it's really hot outside.
Their bodies start sweating, and that helps them lose wieght.
That is why when people ride bikes they get in shape.
The best activity to do when people go outside is ride a bike.
Because when people ride bikes they can lose wieght and get in shape.
They can aslo spend time with family and friends.
A lot of people like going outside to be with the ones they care for.
What do you like to do whey you go outdoors? | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
4F6A4668D513 | The character is the way how you act or behave, and I think that you can form your own character and you can choose your own character traits, no one can influence in what your character or personality is. However some people may think that your character can be influence by which you interact with (like parents), and your personality is based in others personality.
You choose what you want it to be, no one can choose your own way, or in this case your character, is primordial that you choose your own traits, if you don't do that then you'll be un-secure of your self and that can carry many problems to distinguish who you are, or where you should go in life.
Have your own character is a big thing to have, because many people can imitated others character or personality from their parents or any famous person, but if you have you own character that means that you are unique. A recent study in the University of Virginia shows that people who choose their own character and their own way to act, or behave, they are happiest than the ones that imitated other people personality.
You are your owner, your are only yours! Since you are a baby you start forming your character or personality, you have control of what you want to be or what you want it to do. But some people will argue that your parents are whom form your character and they chose your personality traits, but that is not true, your character is formed by your own experiences in life, as Jonh lubbock wrote "Your character will be what your self yoose to make it."
In conclusion, you can be whoever you want, your character will be formed by you based in your experiences in life, no one can choose what your character or personality will be. People will always judge you, but You always must do do what your heart tells you to do, be always happy with your own personality or character, and don't let people choose how you will act (not even your parents), make your own character and act in the rigth way. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
4F75DF4CEBE9 | This topic brings in a lot of question and concerns like '' Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it'?.
What are you suppose to think of when this question gets asked from you, well people don't really have a an answers for you,So i think that people get controlled by each other because of power. Some people think they got it all cause they have control over certain things then most people dont't have and they take advantage of them so they think its right for them to do what they can or cannot do to them. People dont need other people to show them how to belong or what they need in there life its not fair for others to pick what they want to do. People want what other people have to fit in or to roll along with them,But other people dont like that feelings cause they think they look cool, new cloths, new shoes, new bags etc they get it all and dont get me wrong people go for that some just dont. You only get to create your own self but you choose to follow others because thats the new trend and you want to fit in with what they offer to you its like a shiny new toy you can resist because then you wont be like other people.
Influences are what catches people attention they want to persuade you into something or speak to you in matter that you dont even realize in till later. They get to change you because they know how to do it they speak in way they just gets your attention and you fall for it and next thing you know you want to be like them,talk like them,eat where they go, where they visit and who they are friends with. Those people what to see what they can get from you and how beyond you can take things people crave the attention they want what other people have,So they try to much to become them and they dont even realize in till it to late and not wanna go back. I get the point why they all do that to show how much things get done,how you want it,what needs to be done or what needs to happen. People go to their influences to hear what they already know but they dont want to be alone about it cause then people wont find them to cool to hang with. Most people think they need it to survive because they never really let themselves answer for them and they dont do anything about its like a drug to them they can't resist of it.
You are your own person you just dont know how to be yourself or you think they wont approve of you,So now you probably think if you do what other people do and act like them you will think your getting notice by other people that makes you feel good and you continue to do so. So you lost yourself and cant even recognize yourself because you went to far now you cant even choices what you wanna do because people expect that from you now you let them choice your own life. They have power you don't control yourself they do you let people get the best from you and you let them have it because you didn't want to be weird and now things you aint always easy so now you gotta live with it. Trying to impress someone isnt you,its just wrong influences make you do anything you pick from good or bad and it goes one way you decide if you want that for you not what other people think and how they can get to you so quick that you do it and it all goes down hill from there. Make your future about what you think is best for you and only you stop making it what you what other people to view you as do you.
Influences may get you places but are they the right ones though or is it something i just want you to hear. Making the right choice is great you decide what your gonna do,how your gonna live your life,and be yourself,But choice tp make the wrong choice and now people control you they get to what they want because they went for it and you cant get it back any more. People like to make a little stop for themselves inside your head so they can persuade you into anything and get what they want so they do by telling you this is the greatest thing every its the most amazing thing i did. Dont be fooled by that its all in your head you want to fit in i get it but dont take it to far where even your own close people tell you that you have change .So many things are gonna be asked from you and not even you will know how to answer because you let other people control you and talk for you that it became a things that you cant even get out of. It's better if you just stay in your lane and go for the good influences and not the bad type you create your own story not other people.
Wrong to right is always the choice being a good influence is great you teach people the right way not the bad type. So many people choose bad and not good they want to fit in so bad thats its going bad for them picking the good is always right. You dont need to impress people when you got yourself and no shame for you just do what is asked and make a great thing happen. Right chooses bring you more things in life then bad getting good people in your life is always the answer a good influence can get you to a lot of things in life and you won't even notice in till it has happened. A chance to pick a good life then a bad one i'll take it bad influences bring you no where its a joke if you pick the wrong influence make a good pick. So yes creating your own life is better and deciding on good influence then to have a life that will bring hell on you, yes i will always do so. Good infleuence is always the answer not things wrong about that and will always be my choice for you be the right infleunce that other need to hear from you speak up do whats right for you and yourself make a better you and let other people hear you speak you bring goood things into other's people's life not just yours. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
4F7F24918F42 | As a student myself, I think students would benefit from attending classes from home, because attending classes can help students manage their own time and learn how to self control, and can follow their own pace of learning.
As day by day passes, I believe that lots of students are sick of repeating the same dull sketchual, and wish they could stay at home for school, on the other hand, they will not have to wake up so early everyday when they worked on their homework till so late. When students attend classes from home, they will be able to manage their own sketchual, learn how to control their time efficiently, be more self-reliance, and prepare for the future.
In conclusion, it is a benefit for students to attend classes from home, because they can learn how to make their own plan, and learn how to manage time, which I believe that it will help the students a lot in their jobs, future life goals or even their entire life. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
4F89EB8CB97F | I think this is a great idea, normally a person graduated in four years, but if we graduate en three years of school it will be the best for our future, because we can take advantage, start college one year early, and finish it one year early, and it will better for any student who wants to take advantage in life. I think it will be better but this is going to be hardest because you have to study more time, and have classes in summer, and evenings but all effort has its rewards.
If two girls are in High School one of these (person A) took the programs that allow students to graduate in three years, and the other one (person B) took the traditional four years.
The person A graduated from high school in 2015 and the person B in 2016. while the person A was studying her first year in college and working, the person B is in her last year of school, obviously 2019 is the last year for person A in college and graduate from college will help her to work in something about her career.
Well what I do is if I graduated in just three years I will take advantage for work hard and take some few classes before go to college all the fourth year, and then the next year I will have a good amount of money for college, and when I going to college I keep working but less hours, I think this of allow high school students to graduated in three years is great idea. Knowing that the students only have three years in high school it will help the students to put effort in high school and to finish early high school and college. If more students are interests in this program it would be better for everyone, because you are going to graduate in three years, you are going to college, and then you are going to be a young professional. I think that if you are young and professional you will have more opportunities to have a job in everywhere.
people is going to say that the high school is going to be more difficult because you are going to have many classes in only three years, and that you will not enjoy your vaccation in summer or can not do something that you like in evenings, but how I said before all efforts has its rewards. If you finish school early and going to college after that you can enjoy or do everything. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
4F98619F7A18 | People go through good things in life and bad things but when it comes to success everyone gets happy about it even thorough the bad times.
First, when having a positive attitude you think more. It opens up your creativity makes you a critical and creative thinker. It helps you think about positive things and not negative things. When your at a difficult moment and you have a positive attitude it motivates you to keep going and not to give up. Even during a difficult time if you were to have a positive mindset It would help you In the future by giving you confence to get out of that position you were In. Even going through a difficult moment is a good thing because it will help you during the long run because your getting a taste of the how life actually goes. Next time your In a difficult moment try to have a positive attitude it will help you through those hard times and it will motivate you not to give up.
Secondly, when I was in 7th grade my friend was taking a very important test. The test was about 35 questions and I remember he was worried that he wasn't going to pass it. He started to tell me ''what happens if I don't pass it my parent's are going to get so mad at me''. He also told me ''I'm not going to pass this test''. What I told him was ''don't worry about it do your best and you got this just have a positive attitude''. Then I went to the bathroom and once I came back I saw him jumping around and happy. Once I got inside the classroom I said ''what happened I said'' he said ''I passed the test''. I got so happy that just by having a positive attitude great things can happen to you.
Thirdly, It doesn't matter where you are weather your in a airplane or even in Mexico having a great attitude can change so much. It can even change you and your life. I once said to myself having a great a positive attitude means having a great day. When your at a difficult moment in your life or just anytime. You feel stuck of sad and you feel like you want to give up be positive and say to your self you got this I can do it. One benefit of having great attitude is it motivates you to be successful and to not give up.
People go through good things in life and bad thing's but when it comes to success everyone want's it and feel's happy about it even thorough the bad time's. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
4FA6CCB0D1BA | Is it a good idea for students to finish high school in there years and enter college or the work force one year early. yes we need to done high school because it's to important to for life,but about your familiys and for your country. Then however If you not finish high school it,s not good because you not ger a good work and anyjob.
Is it a good idea for students to finish high school. The First it,s to important to your life because if done the school we can choes whatever you want,Then we going to college just chose your option to lear a four years to college, After that i,m looking find a job.
The Scond, about your familiy. If you finish the high school your familys to happy because we can leave to a good life with your whole familys, and we can get a strght life. Then your familys is always to makeing to happy.
The fainliy, If you finish high school and college you get a good job,and whatever you want to get the job,but we can suport to your family and your conutry If you get a good job suport to other people If you can,thrn even everones we need you. however If you not finish school we can get a good job because you don,t have high school diploma that,s mean a document confering a privilege or honer so don,t have that why, but you work to like clean,shopers and like the simple you get the job, and you not happey bcause some people distraicting, and It,s to mach tarid. that means we can do finish your high school. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
4FCEF99DE6F0 | When was the last time you looked up from your phone to admire the sky? The first thing everyone does when they wake is check there phone. We depend on technology everyday, we live with it. Technology is changing, evolving even, but are we? I mean, we put our lives in technology though the internet comparing ourselves with one and the other. No wonder so many of us are depressed, they see what other people have but to blind to see what they have is important. Everyone sees the same thing but have a different perspective.
Time wasting is a big one. Peoples eyes are glued to there own personal screen. Sheeple. They care about the new, the best, the bad, and the ugly. They only care about themselves and there phones and shirts with a red bar that says supreme in white text. Competing for the most likes and for the most clout, the fake life they make on the internet is all they care about. Talking the most negative to people through face to facetime never to the other persons face. Scared if they don't fit in or have the latest, the biggest, and the most expensive, the more it cost the better they think. That is all because of technology, wasting time on the screen. The mind and body are effected, a lot of people slouch and have a arched back. A lot of back problems is the most I have been seeing around. I have back problems because of being arched a lot as a kid, it is only in time where everyone has a arched back and the ones with straight backs will be in charge. I say that because you can not stand tall if your back is arched.
Technology has positive effects, it can help to find answers to your homework. You can find love, make a new life, find a new home even. Technology is not that bad it's just people misuse it and abuse it. It helps us but it hurts us at the same time, and people don't see that. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
4FD4CE18CCDF | I think seeking multiple opinions would be better, because you can actually view multiple perspectives and then decide which one is the best. For example, you can make a list of pros and cons to see which one you like the most. Or, you can take a vote on what to do. You will also be able to listen better and be more supportive of other people. You will as well as compromise better with multiple people rather than one specific person.
For example, let's say someone wants a dog. He or she is going to have to listen to many people's opinions about having a dog. One person could say, "Having a dog is a very big responsability. So don't get one unless you ready to take on the risks for it." Another person could say, "It's really easy to own a dog. All you have to do is feed it, wash it, play with it, take it out on a walk, and clean it's mess." After he or she listens to both people, he or she makes a pros and cons list and decides which side has more and which one is the best.
Another example, someone wants to play a sport, but it can be too dangerous. One person says, "Don't do it. It's not worth risking your life and slowly dying in the hospital." Another person says, "Do it! It's not only fun, but it can also help you be more cooperative and you are being active." Again, someone can agree with both answers, so that's why people need to compromise, to both get what they want.
One example of a compromise, you want to watch the new movie
Billy Madison.
However, you are underage. It can work out if you ask someone if he or she has ever seen the movie. If yes, ask he or she if there's any scene okay for your age. If yes, you will probably be able to only watch the movie once. Otherwise, you are goind to have to wait until you're at the age.
Another example is, you want to stay up. However, your parents never let you. You can talk to them and see if they can let you stay up for at leat just one night. If you're lucky, you will probably be able to stay up during the weekend. But never on a school night.
That's why I think seeking advice from multiple people is a better choice. Not only it will help you more, but, it can also teach you how to deal with real-life situations. Also compromising and making a list will help you with that. It will as well teach people how to listen better and be more supportive of others. Then you decide whether if it's right or wrong. | 3.5 | 4.5 | 5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 |
4FD5B8B612C6 | Does going from failure to faliure consist of success.? It does , a lot of people in their life have failed to do something in life for example: failed a test ,failed to do a work assignment ,failed to show up to work once or twice, ect. You can fail a test , fail to show up to work but you get an opportunity to fix that mistake but some people just dont care about that opportunity.
Say you were to get a 75% on a math test but you wanted to get a better score you did study, but didn't show up to class , or stay after school to get extra help. So then you ask the teacher if you can re-take the test and the teacher say that you can but you have to show up to class ,and stay after if needed extra help ; because without studying, or showing up to class ,ect. How will you pass the math test or any test if you dont study . It's okay to fail and fail no one is perfect not everyone is going to get it right the first time unless you just have goodluck but still you have to study for a test no matter what.
Let's say you had a band concert tonight , you had a positive mind set because you have been practicing since February you were nervous not because you have a concert but also because you have a solo part but you know you got this because you've been practicing ,studying the notes and staying after with the band. It was time for the show; you guy's finished and did a wounderful job playing the music and did an amzaing job for you'r solo part. Not only did you practice and stay after you kept a positive mind set for yourself.
You just can't give up on yourself because you failed you have to push and push yourself even if you don't have enought positive in you if you want to become a nurse ,actor , jet flyer it doesn't matter what you want to be you have to push yourself and have a positive mind set.
Without a positive mind set your probably not going to end up were you wanted to be in the first place. So if you fail the first or second time just know not to give up just yet and to think positive. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
4FE6EABBFC00 | One topic that is frequently debated is if people should make their own decisions or seek guidance about life's important matters. People think that they should make their own decisions. They feel that it makes them learn from their mistakes and become mentally strong. I believe that people should seek guidance from experts because they know more about life's important matters, some people don't know how to make the right decisions , and they may help them with valuable lessons.
Experts may know more about life's important matters than most people. They might've learned from experience or studied others, a class of sociology. They know if something is wrong with the person, if they had a bad day, and if they had sleep.
Some individuals don't really know how to make the correct choices, they often try to make the worst choices work but that will never happen. They're afraid on what the good choices bring, if it brings good or if it brings worse.
As you have read, it is strongly recommended that people should seek advice from experts, because we will not let others make bad decisions unless they are good ones. | 5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 |
4FFF2AD2EAE8 | Have you ever had a subject that you liked or you know it so well? If I
had a chance to talk to a elementary school, I will teach them about English. The reason why I would chose English because you will need to know it throughout you whole life, you need to know how to use correct grammar, and its easy to learn. English is fun and easy to use whenever you need it.
First, If you live in
America you will need to know the basic language and thats English, you will use English throughout your whole life. In school you will start learning English in preschool and it goes throughout your whole life. When people come from other places that are not in America some people have trouble speaking English because they have not learned about it. So if you have not learned it when you were young it going to really hard for you to understand. When you get older and you have a job you will need to talk to people and you will need to know how to write and type. Even though if you dont have a job you will still need to learn how to speak English. When you need to do important work for the government or tax work, you need to sign and write you information. In real life if theres an emergencies and you well need to talk to someone you will need to learn how to speak English. Finally, English will be with you fro your whole life and it helpful if you know how to speak it.
Second, one of the biggest thing you will need to know in life is how to write in English. In life there are going to so much times where you need to write you name and the date. When you get older you will need to learn how to write your address and make sure that grammar is correct like commas, period, and spelling arrows. Also, will need it when your in school you well need it everyday by writing your name to writing a whole essay and it needs to not have any grammar problems. You will also need when you have a job and if you become a teacher you will need to learn the more detail information. When there is important information that you will need to sign your address, you will need to add commas and that involves you learning English. Finally, this is the reason why its important to learn English because you will need to know the grammar to it.
Third, English is the easiest to learn because if you get how to write you will know it for your whole life. If you learn how to use commas and other things then you will learn it for your whole life. There is three things that you will need for English and it how to speak, or write, and grammar. You will need those things for essay projects and more. It is easy to learn because you are using it for your whole life over and over and when you do things over and over and it gets stuck in your head. English is also fun because when you get something it makes you feel good. You might not know but you are using everyday even if there is now school you are texting or writing a letter. This is another reasons why I would like yo teach a class about English because it easy and at the same time its fun.
Last, these are all the reasons what I will teach a elementary school about English because your whole life depends on you speaking English, you will need to learn how to write in English, and it easy an easy subject to learn. First, speaking English is not really hard and it will become really useful. Learning how to speak English your life will move slowly because you dont have to worry about someone else talking for you your whole life. Second, you would even know that your using English but you are because you are always typing or writing and you will need to learn English to be able to do that. Last, the easiest subject to learn is English because when you get it you will always use it. English is and amazing way to learn how to speak and it can be fun. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
503960784148 | In every school privated or public is they good idea created a new menu the food in loch created one sitio web for students they can enter and star the plate form, questions or encuest they defined a students they school known like food and they see students they have one alergie's they prevated in loch they never occured one problem witch students some students is don't like food in the school, they take food for home is bad because the point is every students is need eat food for have a very good energy in classes.
One idea for student's is they every school realized every year differents options in menu for bote students in one sitio web and when they have a results change the menu in school is a very well benefit for students because when you eat good your brain is more concentrate in your work is have more energy, one idea is in the morning take a frut's, or cofee and then in loch eat popeyes,chipotle,tacos and others more options because students in a long time is omg again this food the point is change food in school every year differents options for eat it's good have differents menu for year eat new food.
School is need created the importants points they students need realized after school teh first is the every students is need due ten minutes the exercise then go to lonch and take foood for eat then go to your regular classes in teh 10:00am go to lonch and eat tacos,popeyes,chipotle etc. and drink a natural water they contained natural fruts then keep going with your classes is very well take differents options in the school they realized for students look for your benefit and students is more concentarte,have new energy brain always positive because the change is wounderful in your life is very well health.
When students is coming to classes after eat students is contained more energy in your brain is more clear is major benefit for students eat food they very like is more concentrate in the work for classroom students they need have to bote for differents options in school menu change every year because for take basically it's the same time food is tired look the same menu in school for that reason students is think no eat after school and go to tour house or students take alwayas food to school because the food in school is don't like for the 50% the students because the lane for wainting in take your lonch is very slow and big for that reasons someone people is don't eat or eat food the your house is important see that points in students because is bad for students don't like food in the school.
In my conclusion they schools is have created every year new questions or format's in sitio web for comparate, conform pass the years and then change the menu and see they better options for food like eat for students it's a very well idea for students and teachers for drinks is good always contained differentes water the fruts natural because is very good how you body contained water and eat good is very health for your body someone students they have sports with more reason they need have a good network nourishment's for conbained full energy in the coaching is very good contained witch a lot variety the food are the students and someone the teachers is take food they more like.
Course always included the good health for your body the big poin is they creater sitio web for students can visit every year before star the school due one the formation they have every school for it's for facile take the opinions and then change the menu in schools public or private and then when you coming to school existing new variation the menu's they students bote more for eat and every students alwasys take food in school and the actitudes the students and the teachers is more happy because they star eat food the like for everybody in school, in change the school created one protested for created new food in school more menu existing motre lane for take food and eat and then the students is look more happy and wainting very fine because take more time for eat well. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
50419253BA19 | Should take classes like music,a drama,or an art class be required? Although some say that arts class should not be required,actually it should because students can develop talents and also it can help students to lost some stress. In addition, students will find a fun way to be less stress. I am agree with the assertion that student should be required to take an arts class.
Those who believe that arts class shouldn't be required they have their reasons. For example they believe that students may not like the class assigned and they also think that it can cause that a student may start cutting his classes.
From my perspective I believe that arts class should be required to students because they can develop talents. I believe that because when I was in my country there was one private high school that was located at my city,in that high school all students were required to take an arts class and nevertheless some of them knew how to pain,act,and sing and they were so talented in any arts class that they were taking. Also in my country every year there is a competition that call the most talented students from the country, this competition only awards students that are very talented in arts class such as pain,act,and sing an the students that just to go to the high school that was in my city they frequently just to take first place in those competitions and that's why I believe that that arts class should be required for students it will help develop talents.
From my point of view, I think that arts class should be required because it can help students to lose some stress. I believe it because like a student that I am every time when I get off from my Algebra 2 class I am always super stress,but after that class I have the art class. In that class I always lost all my stress when I start drawing things even though I do not how to draw but it help me a lot to keep my main clam. Also why I believe that arts class help students to be less stress is because the environment in the class is always nice,and the students are always focus in the things that they are doing without making to much noise and that is why I believe that arts class should be required to help them to don't be stress the all day in school .
To summarize students should be required to take arts class because they can learn to do other things that other people can't do and also it can help them like a way to feel better after coming from other class that was awful. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
5056C7637313 | PROMPT
People should believe that the true self esteem of students are absolutely coming from the achievement only. Because of praising students in a long times, it migt be would make them image anything that they want to do is all for other's praise to them. Also, the achivement of students are only come when they can be self confident to face any hard works. The praise given is something that cannot be stay in one person foever, praise is to support students spirit while they become successful.
First of all, praising students in a long times, it might be would make them think of anything that they want to do is all for other's praise to them. Because students can easily get distracted by praising from others, they could not be focus to be themselves when there's too much praises for them. Students need to remember that people may give praise to bring them up and surely can bring them down anytime. So, students do not need to listen to anybody's praise or anything that is unreal. Otherwise,a better way is students should be believing in themselves that they can do well on anything hard works.
Secondly, the achivement of students are only come when they can be self confident to face any hard works. Students should learn how to handle any hard works when they go out to the real life. They need to facing to real things, real problems and that is how they can be true self esteem. They can't be afraid or lose their spirit whenever they fail. Also, students can be achivement while they know exactly what they should do to reach their goal on the future. Student better know that people only remember to them when they become success, but if they aren't no will care about them.
Finally, the praise given is something that cannot be stay in one person foever, praise is to support students spirit while they become successful. Because the praise from others to them can easily forget very quickly. So students should know the goods and bads of the praise, it could bring students to more success when they know that the praise of people can helps. Students can be famous and getting praising from others anytime when they do something great or they can show people about how well their capability are.
The achivement of people are not coming from anyone's praise, that is about how hard they were try and what were they faced to reach their goal. Also only believing in themselves could bring them to the successful in future. There are nobody can help or follow them until the end of your goal, so they should do their best they can to show their ability. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
50611B996992 | During this time our society are magnifying in many ways. Therefore, people has to work, study, or do any personal things every day. People don't conseve their energy and resources in the way that people get tired daily. Nonetheless, there are some businesses had the idea to work four days per week each day consistenting of ten hours. As well as, schools should follow this project by extending the school day two hours. In my opinion, school should follow this great idea because students can do differents routine, be less stressful, and get better grades.
To begin with, the majority of students do the same rutine daily some enjoy to play sports on the school. Whereas, someone will like to try another kind of sport outside the school but they don't have sufficient time to do it. Elsewhere, if the school follow extending the school day and leaving one or two days off students can do different rutine and have thier own space. All in all, students can try different sports with their families or friends outside of school. In others words, doing differents routine will help the energy and resources for students.
Second reason, for some students is stressful go to school everyday. As well as, some has to work to late, or do homework, or has problent to get sleep at night. If this happend during this time they loss their energy and is difficult for student to focus on their class. However, students that are stressful can have health problem. In other case, students can be less stressful and active if their sleep more such as, if they get two days off of the school they can repose their tiredness and get energy.
Lastly, the energy and resources are a important priority for a student. Likewise, that all students do their homework and be on time in their class. nevertheless, the majority of the students has problem be on time or do homework some of them miss school days just because they didn't do their homework. Altogether, durin this days off students can do their homework with resources, patience and dedication. After all, this could help student to have better grades.
To conclude, the priority for people life is to conserve energy and resouces. Rather, we are on time to help our students's health. Lately, doing different rutine will help us to progress and be healthy. If we are healthy we are less stressful we will be with energy. After all, energy, time, and resources are the key to be successful. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
5061F044BC43 | Although some say that school lunch menu don't need to be change because the new lunch menu would be more expensive, and some students throw the food, actually some say that will be a good idea to change the school lunch menu because some students declare that they sometimes received an expired food so they think that food is from one year ago and some students say that eat the same food every year is bored because all students from high school are study four years, and some students start hate the food and they prefer to take food from home or they buy food like pizza, burrito, etc. and that is not good for health.
Some of my classmate took the lunch and they throw the food because they don't like the food and they said that they prefer another type of food that school doesn't have anymore, and they did not think how expensive is that type of food and they say if we are not pay we can throw all food.
My little brother said that one time in lunch time he took an expired milk and for that he said that he prefer to get food from home like chicken or buy in pizza and soda, and that is not good for him for that my aunt wanted talk with the pricinpal if they can change the cafeteria menu for lunch.
I have three year in High school, and I don't like the lunch menu because the last two years I eat the same food and for that I don't take lunch this year because I know is the same lunch and I prefer to take the food at home and, I don't take the lunch during the school.
In conclusion I think that schools has to be change the lunch menu because sometime students received expired food, and some of students are bored to eat the same food every year. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
506A69171959 | Do you have a goal in your life? How can you accomplish to your goal? I think everyone can get a goal, but many people ask, "how can I get a goal?" Because they cannot wait until the finish goal line, also they cannot concentrate on their goal. We cannot see the finish line,that is why people always give up in fort of the finish line you are always doing something, then you can do accomplish more. This is three reasons you can do accomplish more if you are always doing something.
First is when you concentrate on one thing and think about that, then you can get a power to get in your goal. Concentrate power is amazing, Every history of the scientists were concentrate one thing and always do something. For example, have you seen the Newton's notes? He always thought and concentrated to gravity and earth. He took notes every seconds and minutes, he never stopped take notes. Today, we learning his notes everyday like Newton's first law, second law, and third law. If you think about it and concentrate one thing, you can closer to your goal.
Second, If you keep going to your goal, you can get into the summit. Whenever you are and whatever you want, if trying to do that, you can make it. For example, David in the Bible, he practiced throw the stone everyday. He never forgot to practice throw the stone, and one day he met an enemy. Everyone thought David will die because David was so small and young, but the enemy was really big and strong. Do you know the end of story? David won the battle because of the stone, he attacked enemy's head. what is the main idea of this story? Throw the stone is really small and tiny thing, but he attacked enemy and saved the nation. If you keep going on any small thing and tiny thing, you can make it and you can make more biggest thing, you could not imagine thing.
Third, you keep dreaming and keep trying to your goal you can get the accomplish to your goal. Keep trying and keep dreaming are really important. If you don't have dream in your life, you can never get that. For example, Aristotle was experiment everyday. Also the result was different everyday, but he keep trying figure out the result. If you gave up that time and stopped challenge, then maybe we don't know who is the Aristotle. Many scientists also said this, keep dreaming is better than not dreaming. Keep dreaming and get more closer to your goal in your dream, get a hope and keep challenge.
Finally,
when you concentrate on one thing and think about that, then you can get a power to get in your goal. Becuase the concentrate power is amazing. Do not give up and keep going to your goal, you can get into the summit. Whenever you are and whatever you want, if trying to do that, you can make it. You keep dreaming and keep trying to your goal you can get the accomplish to your goal. If you want to something to do and something to accomplish, you have to know what is my goal and what should I do for my goal. If you know exact your goal and then always doing this three, you can make it. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
5077C09B20DC | It's a wonderful day to spend outdoors and do something productive. Spending more time outdoors is better than being at home or being on your phone all day. Families can do different types of activities outdoors. Going to the state fair is something all families or friends can do that is fun. Another way of enjoying outdoors is going camping with your family.
Spending more time with your family outdoors can be fun and productive. People can go hiking with other people. Hiking is an outdoor activity that you can walk. When your like stress you can walk and listen to the beautiful birds chirping.
Like for an example, fishing, hiking, going to the beach, doing cookouts, and going to the park is an activity. Everybody would be occupied, and would have so much excitement in what they are doing. For an example, last summer I went to Pocohuntus State Park with my family. We went on a tour around the whole park. As we were walking, we had seen a building. We had entered the building, and inside it was a mini zoo. The mini zoo was filled with all different types of animal. There was animals that wasn't from Virginia, and brought it from another state. I would love to go back with my family this summer again.
Going to the state fair has a lot of options for you to do. Like for an example it has games, and roller coasters and more variety of games to play. The state fair is a really fun place. For instance, I went to the state fair last year with my cousin. The state fair was full of people and enjoyment. Their was a lot of games, roller coasters, a mini farm, there was a concert, a lot of food courts, and horse racing. That day was a really productive day because we had to walk from station to station. I rode a roller coaster called the "Dome" it was really scary and it kept spinning upside down, sideways from left to right. This is a good outdoor activity to do with families or friends.
Another way to enjoy outdoors is to go camping with your family. You can play games, do campfire, and make moores while you are in the outdoors. For example, when I was 8 years old I went camping with my family. I remember that day it was so cold. I slept in the back in the trunk with my cousins, and then I transferred to the passenger seat because it was so cold. The next morning everybody woke up and then after we took a walk around the lakes. Afterwards everybody packed their stuff and headed back home.
All of these are examples of doing outdoors activity with your family . Spending time outdoors with your family like hiking, going to the state fair, and going camping is fun and everybody will enjoy their day. Everybody should at least do one of these activities outdoors, so you can feel relief from everything you have in mind. Having fun at these places would want you to go back again | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
508A9EC12C44 | Technology in the currently life we have is something great, but sometime can be bad. The technology is in all places is in home, work place ,hospitals,schools, vehicles is in everywhere you go. Because the technology make the human life more easy in many things. But make the people more easy I thing is no something the technology make people be lazy the people play video games and other thing. They choose stay in home playing when the can go out an play with the friends soccer or other sport thing the get a healthy life.
Technology I agree because in the actuality the technology help us in many things to save life to study you go everywhere you see technology. Now we need that for have a great life with the technology make the life more easy help others. To safe life the technology is a key for example the machines the hospital have help to doctors to safe a peoples life. In the schools or job helps also in the schools the computers helps the students to make the classwork. In the job if you work for example in construction, the machine and tools are technology for they make more easy the work.
Thanks to the technology we can get communication with other people like family, friends, etc. If you are in other place or country you can get communication the 24 hours of the day an the 7 days' of the week have a great communication with your favorite person. Now you can get communications also for social media and messenger or calls .But always be have to take careful because the people use technology for bad things.
In conclusion the technology every days save or helps people. we use everyday in us life is something grand. But always we have to take be careful the technology help us but sometime people can get a addiction. In the life everything in excess can be dangerous so we have to take a valance in our lifes. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
5098F28A2EF3 | .
It has been said that 1st Impressions are almost impossible to change. This statement to me is wrong. Impressions can be changed not only because people always mature in life, but also people may change by others actions, and they way life treats one another.
Impressions can be changed because people mature in life. For example, my mother tells me all the time that I was not the same kid she raised because of my appearance and the way I act around others. So, it is because I have matured that I have changed, if I was 7 or 8 years old, I would be shay to talk to people and try to be polite to not cause problems. Also, people would never smoke or even talk back if their impressions matter like they did when they were little. So peoples impressions change when you get mature in life
Impressions can be changed because of the people around them. For example, my little brother may not do all the things that he does now if it weren't for my behavior around others, back then my little brother would be very shay to speak. Then he saw how I spoke to others; with security, courage, and calm. He learned that from me and now he talks to anyone he enjoys hanging out with. So, with people being and influence in someones life, you would make a good or a bad impacted on someone's life which would change someone's impression for sure.
Impressions can be changed because the way life treats one another. For example, a week from my birthday I was going to turn 14 my dad got arrested; I did not feel like I wanted to throw a party, I hated everything cause I said to my self life isn't fair, Then the next morning in school, every ones impression of was that I never felt sad, I was a happy young teen; Until the next day everyone was wishing me a happy early birthday. I didn't feel happy about it because my mind was all caught up on my fathers arrest. People noticed that and their impression changed because I never felt happy in my life, everything went wrong. Instead of everyone greeting me every morning, they just gave me space because they thought that I was depressed and I was for a good time. Now people take me seriously now because I didnt make jokes. So peoples impression changes ever since they saw the way life wasn't fair.
In conclusion, It has been said that 1st Impressions are almost impossible to change. This statement to me is wrong. Impressions can be changed not only because people always mature in life, but also people may change by others actions, and they way life treats one another. All of these reasons are true because no one really knows what life, maturity, and the people around you can do to affect someone's 1st impressions of you. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 |
50E361CD561E | Working in a group is more benefitial than working alone because there are so many diferent ideas that the group members can have to achieve a great work.
The majority of students that I have asked about it say that working in group has been more succesful for them because in fact it is way faster,you get to share your ideas and support others. Many times that I have worked on something by my self I always wonder about many things or opinions about my work and it is hard for me to check if it is good or what would people think about my work.
It is also benefitial for teachers because students will have less questions for them,so teachers can use that time for grading or other things while the students are working in group. I have seen some teachers having a hard time grading and explaining at the same time because every single student is working by their own.
Teachers must have their students working in a group than alone because as I see it is more benefitial and better,this will have students to come up with better work and they also get to interact with diferent people and learn from them. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
510CA49B78BB | Is setting an example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people? Sometimes it is not the best idea to mirror other people's behavior because some people do not always have a positive behavior. There could be time's that someone could be in a negative place of mind, reckless, and does a lot of horse play; other time's people can be charming, properly mannered, and influential.
Growing up in the Generic_City area, I have been able to witness a lot of drugs, gangs, and violence. The example these group of people decide to display is not a very positive act on their behalf; this is not a pathway you would want to be taking because of the bad outcomes from it. I remember I had a friend who's father shot himself due to the poor choice he made which made him reflect and he figured that was the only solution.
On the other hand, some people decide to be very influential to society in a positive manner. Out of my three years of high school I was able to see some students making their way for others by not being selfish; a lot of them did volunteer work as well to help the community and to hopefully inspire others to do so as well. I actually got the opportunity to throw a kids halloween party at a church: I enjoyed it, it was a lot of fun.
Honestly, I do not feel like I am a good example nor do I feel like I am a bad one either. I make mistakes: it is how I was taught. Growing up I believed that the only way you are ever going to learn is by making mistakes and being able to evaluate the error of your mistake; only then you can truly improve yourself and help insipre other people as well.
In conclusion, I am mutual about examples being the best way to influence other people because of it not always being a positive thing due to the poor decisions some people choose to make. Truthfully I think it is a better idea to be the best you that you can be because at the end of the day there is only one of you and so many of us; it is best to stay unique. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
5132328226C2 | Afterschool Homework Club
Most students do not enjoy doing their homework at home; for it can get quite frustrating. A lot of students favorite part of their school day is going home, but some other students favorite part of the day is their afterschool club. Now teachers and students are volunteering to meet with people who have difficulty in subjects or who want to finish their homework early,but afterschool. I think it is great that people are staying afterschool to help other people with school work and learning. It is a good to be a part of an afterschool homework club because it makes teachers do what they're best at, it helps students understand certain things better, and a club made for troubled kids makes other kids not afraid to ask for help when they don't understand something.
A teachers main job is to teach their students common knowledge that they will need when they become independent adults. Although the main job for teachers is teaching, they can, and should, also inspire their students. With this afterschool club students will be inspired to help others when they see their own teachers helping others to better understand something. Feeling believed in is an amazing feeling that students will feel in the club. The teachers who are helping the students aren't getting paid to be their, they are volunteering to help the students because they believe that the student can learn and understand something better, with their help. The people who volunteer to help their students would also be helping their community. The smarter that the teachers make their students the brighter the future we're headed towards. Not only can the afterschool homework club help teachers do their job, but it can also give students the extra help that they need to understand a subject.
Learning and understanding something new is something a lot of people struggle with. Some people struggle with learning something new because the class period that they learned it in was too short. A lot of times when learning something new it is important to have time to understand it, and one class period is not long enough. The club would give students extra time to understand the subject, and possibly do the homework that the subject required. Doing homework at home can be stressful at times. A lot of times a home is loud and distracting, but with a one-on-one class with a teacher it would be quite and not distracting. There are different ways that a person learns best. Some people are visual learners and some are verbal learners. Some students dont understand what they're being taught because of the way its being taught. A visual learner could be learning verbally, and it might just be very confusing because of it being taught verbally. The club would have teachers teaching in the students proffered way. Because of students getting extra help, more students are becoming unafraid to ask for help when they have trouble understanding something.
This club makes students know that they aren't the only ones that have trouble in school. A lot of people feel dumb because they cant do something properly or even understand it, but with the club they would see that they aren't the only ones struggling to understand the subject. If a person that you knew was getting help from a teacher afterschool and the next day they completely understood the subject, wouldnt you want to go be a part of the club too? Most people think of afterschool clubs as a fun and relaxing activity to calm down their mind from their stressful day at school. Afterschool activities are like school, but it's fun, and it is exciting. Learning can be made fun in afterschool clubs because they have students all sharing their struggles and getting help for them. The afterschool homework club would be a safe place for all the people who are afraid to ask for help, but arent afraid to be a part of a group. The club makes people feel welcome, not alone, and so much more.
The afterschool homework club benefits all the people in the community. It benefits the students by giving them the help they need to succeed. It benefits the teachers by giving them a chance to inspire others to help each other. The afterschool homework club benefits the students parents because it prevents the students from coming home to complain about their homework that they dont understand. The afterschool homework club is the best thing a school could do for their community. | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
515244292F97 | When people ask for advice from more than one more person it is because they want to be sure about the choice and they might want to be sure that they are not wrong. People will also need other peoples choices because they are not sure if they are correct or wrong. Seeking for more advice will help you know other peoples opinions and how they feel and it will also depend on the question they are being asked. People might want others opinion because they want to know if people agree or disagrees with them and they might want to see if they feel the same way or different. When people want more advice it is because they want the best for them or they want the best others.
Some people might also need more advice because they are confused and they might not know what do in the life and might be worried. Advice from other people can be good or bad because some people will just give a lot of bad advice so life doesn't go good for you some people will give you good advice because they want the best for you. Asking other people for advice can help a human make a really good choice and for a human to go good in life and so that later in life they can have a good idea of what they need to work on.
People will be needing other peoples advice because they don't want to have a bad vision of life because if they do they won't know what life is actually about. Good advice would actually help a lot of people with their health or with their work so they have a really food living environment. Advice will also make you a better person and people might or will accept you like who you are and that is what matters in life and in good advicePeople might also need adviceto have a better mind of what they want to do in their lives and other peoples lives. That is why people seek for more advice from others so they can have a better life and vision of life to. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
516E5D64BF6E | I think that people make their own decisions is technique good. I agree with that for 2 reasons. people have to improve their lifes without help and guidance. People know which is the best decision by themself.
First reason, people have to improve in their lifes without help or guidance. The people have to be indepentdient, also the people have to follow their directions.
Additionally, people know which is the best decision by themself. The people have the responsability to improve their lifes or not, and the people will assume their own responsability if their decisions are bad.
Some people would argue that people don't have knokledge to have a good decision,and they do not have a guidance to follow; however, the people do not have all the time good decisions sometimes the pople choose bad decisions, and the people do not has to have a guidance to follow.
It's clear that people can make their own decisions. I strongly believe that people have the best decisions by themself, and people have to improve in their lifes without help or guidance. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
519A1A92C8C8 | Success consist of going from failure to failure withouth loss of enthusiasm, and I'm agree with this statement, because can do what it wants if try and try, and everything is doing with effort , and than a failure can be for a better oportunity in the future.
Did you heard that failured means success sometime? well effort is the best way that you can reach what you wish. Can do what it wants if try and try, so let me tell you something about a friend that is close to me, and he was in failre to failure, so one time he came to me and he told me his problems, and than he cry and I tell him, "don't worry everything will be okay", and than he said - I'm gonna try again this is the second time that I failure, and I will try again until to have what I want, and I tell him that I always will be there for him, because he is my friend and the friend is to be there for each other when it need, and then two years later he told me that he finally has what he was trying to do in the pass and he was very happy and I was happy too. If my friend didn't try he were unhappy, and maybe he were a miserable person, but he were strong and he did it.
do you know "what you can do with effort", means? effort is something that it has to be preasent in your life everything is made it with effort, when I was 14 years old I was in my country, I was in 9th grade, and my friends and I was happy for our graduation, but I was acared because we had a final exam and the exam was about my country history, but is not that simple because I had to know a book of 6 parragraph, and some of the parragraph is like 10 sentences each, and I had to tell to the principal the antire book, so and then I had to learn 50 question about my country that it comes in the book too, so I had to take the test writing about this 50 question, but I already took one and I fail, and I was scared about it, but I tell my self you can do it, you have to pass, and I was studying averyday after school at my home, with my friends, and sometimes my counsins help me how to do it, or they help me to learn; they asking me the questions to know if I knew correctly each question and answer, so the day of the test I was a little scared and nervios, because I feel I will forget everything, and finally it was my turn, and I did it right I was so happy with myself because it was hard, I put all my effort in this test and I did it, and my frinds and I graduate at the same time. If I were lazy and not interest in to pass this exam maybe I had to repeat the school year and I were disappointed with my self.
A failure can be for a better opportunity in the future. Now I come with a anecdote of my uncle Generic_Name that already died he was illiterate, and his job was the security in a night club, and that was his job in his entire life, and one day the boss went with new rules for everyone, and his boss tell him his job
-you have to write the number and the name of the people that come in the nightclub every day, and my uncle tell to his boss
-I would like to do that Sr. but I can not read and write I'm illiterate and I can not do what you are asking for my Sr. his boss tell him
-I'm so sorry Generic_Name but if it is like that you can not work anymore here, and my uncle Generic_Name answer,
-but what I'm going to do I can not do anything else this was my job in my entire life. His boss said,
-I'm sorry Generic_Name. And then my uncle left the place he was upset telling to himself what I'm goin to do I need a job, and he remerber that he fix the chairs of the night club, and he said
-I can do that in the town and earn some money just for my food , and he went to his house and find some nail and tools, but that was not anough, and he had some save money and he went to the city to buy what he needs; the way to get to the city was two days in mule and when he come back to the town the next day his neighborhood went to his house and told to my uncle
-you have a hammer that I can borrow,
and my uncle tell him
-Yes! but I can't borrow you my hammer, because I need it I have to work, and his neighborhood said
-Please I can bring you tomorrow in the morning,
and my uncle puzzling said
-Ok!
At the next day his neighborhood tell to my uncle
-where did you buy this hammer because is really good can I give you the money and you can go buy other one for you,
and my uncle said
-well it's okay I'm going tomorrow in the morning,
the other neighborhood knew that he will go to the city to buy some things and they ask if he can bring things to them, and they will pay extra money, and he tell them
- okay no problem I'm come back in two day then he were thinking about how he will earn money doing travels to the city, and buying things for the other people in the town, so he decide that will be his job and than he did it, and earn enough money that he ask to the store but a truck come to drope the merchandise to his house, and like that he were improve his little store in the town than he remerber one of his friend can make tools and like that they fabricate the tools and they find more people to make it too, and little by little he make a a big hardware it was the first hardware in the town; the day to open for the first time his hardware someone ask him to sing in the book and he said
- I would like to sing, but I can not read and write, and the man said
- WHAT! I can not believe that Sr. if you made this factore been illiterate what would you do if you could read and write, and he asnwer maybe I keep my old job and I still were a security of a night club. if my uncle didn't try to find some job for himself he didn't reach all the he had at that time.
Success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm, so you never have to forget about the enthusiasm because if you do not motivate yourself you never will get what you want, what you wish, your dreams, and the best way to reach all of this goals is with enthusiasm. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
51BAD5699073 | As we all know we get Science,Social Studies, or Math project/experiments. We all have to follow through and do them and sometimes they are fun. Most of the time they can be just a sit and write. But sometimes they are really fun to do with your friends. It can be a play and you can have tons of fun doing that. Also it's good for you and your grade so it is a win win.
Most of the time people have good time with their projects and enjoy doing them to score better in their grade. Sometimes we all get projects like building explosive volcano at A science fair. Also projects like going on A field trip to A museum to get info about the World War 2 for Social Studies. Project can be fun when done with A friend or with just A project buddy. You can also do much more with help from A teacher. It can be fun to show your project in front of the class. Some people like to be constant with their grade so that is what they do.
A play can be fun, you can dance, reenact characters, and even just do a reality play. Or you can dress up as a character. Science experiments are really fun to deal with chemicals and to see chemical reactions. It can be fun to play an in interment and to play out loud to the crowd. With your friends and be playing your interment with you. You can do so much with playing an interment and it can be fun at the same time. Playing an interment can be a lot of fun playing for an audience and it can be fun hearing what sound you are creating. Sometimes you can just work with the music and play with a friend and maybe crate a song and play it. You can spend good time with creating a song and playing it with your friends. It can also be fun by doing it and playing in front of the whole class. Going to different places to perform is kinda cool and fun traveling. Music is A lot of fun when you are doing it with A friend or a teacher. I think project can be a great way to show creativity. The more the interment gets played the more the project will get more fun to play with your friends. The music is fun done with a partner as A project.
A concert can be A good place too play your music. A musician can direct the project. They can be really fun and enjoyable when it come to that. The musicians play the music it can be good for the enjoyment of the music that goes into you ear and the project letter can be an A+. You can also do stuff like playing your interment and doing a lot of stuff like that.
You can also lower your grade by not doing what you were assigned So u have to do the project assignment you are as were to do with your partner. Projects are kinda fun because you can let your mind be wild. So the project are really fun and easy A
.Doing simple activities like these are easy A's and easy work to do with your buddy. Doing simple stuff can make you get good grades effort and good time doing A ENJOYABLE project both of ya'll got an A on the assignment. It can be really enjoyable or really boring. Most of the time project are just so you can get your own type of veiw to somthing you can learn from it.
Projects are kinda boring in a way but most people like to do them. In my opinion projects are done not to learn whats on it but to do the assignment and bring it in on time.
I think some people like to do there project to learn but i don't like them they are fun and enjoyable but it's not my thing. Theres a lot of ways to do projects you can write it on a paper or you can type it on a computr and then prit it out out and glue it on A poster board. Well im done with my S.O.L | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
51C93A7260DE | Have you ever thought what school would be like for you and other, students in your school would have a program where older and younger kids will gather around, do different activities and projects and learn at the same time.
Think about programs you will want to be included in your school,that will help you learn faster and make you understand things better and differently,you will also get help and subjects you have struggles on a daily bases. In my opinion i feel like students feel more better and cofterble talking to students there age just because it might be easy for them to explain things better to someone who is the same age. There's times where student's feel more pressured by an adult so that's what makes them not want to ask for help.
Now think to yourself and ask yourself if you find it better, having a program where all students can gather around just to ask for help when is needed and so socializes with them. Because theirs always time you get to school and talk to your everyday friends but you dont really know theres other people you havent met yet so making a program for everyone is a good way to get to know others in the program.
So with all that being said if you want to have a program at your school, that will help you and other student's gather around and bond together like friends and get to know everyone in your school. Is not just in the program that will be in your school but people that you walk by every other day gather around and teach everyone something new and they can give back to you and teach you something new everyday to anyone in the program.
But back to the main starting point of the paragraph if you want to start a new program at your school talk to one of your teachers or your principle and share the ideas you have thought of or the ideas you have in mind and gather around to start something new and make school a better place. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
51CE1DCC5307 | Some people might have heard this before, "The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark." This is what the great artist Michelangelo said. People might not agree with this, yet setting aims higher is better. This is because by setting our aim high, people will be able to achieve bigger goals. Setting aims high might conceive more unique thoughts than people with rivet thoughts that set their aims too low. There can be significant possibilities towards many directions too.
Firstly, by setting your aim high, there can be significant possibilities towards many directions. Many people set their aims before they do or think about something. For example, which do you think will have more possibilities for job. Just applying for cleaning dishes because that's easy, or applying for every work field you can work for. This is the same for schools. For an other example, a student that does not know what he wants to do for his future choosing to go to the military, or going to collage with many opportunities. Going to the collage can increase the job opportunities and he might find a better job than going to military.
Furthermore, setting our aim high will help people to conceive more unique or their real thoughts than people with rivet thoughts that set their aim too low. For example, people that aim low are most likely conceal or are not aware of their thoughts. This is because people that aim low will not try to achieve something too hard for them. On the other hand, people that aim high will try to achieve more harder tasks, and think about more things. This will help the human brains to develop and can help people to think in a unique way than other people. Famous artists that have created significant art works could have not created anything great if they have set a limit for their self. They all did not make any limit for their self and their abilities to create great works. All the unique ideas and arts exist because the famous artists aimed high.
In addition, by setting our aim high we can achieve bigger goals than setting a lower aim for a higher possibility. For example, Just working for the minimum requirement for an assignment than working for the maximum of that assignment, which will give you a better grade? The answer will most likely be working for the maximum of the assignment. If you have your aim low you might give up before you achieve a task even if that was an important task. If your aim is high you won't give up and achieve the task. Therefore, having your aim higher is better than just trying to do the easiest thing you can.
Some people might say that by setting the aim too high that can make them suffer. This can be true, but that does not mean you should aim too low. what is important is to keep everything balanced to the best. Everyone has been said to eat a balanced meal when they were a small child. This is the same for everything. Understanding your own abilities and setting the aim to what you can possibly achieve rather than setting the goal for something easy. Some might say that if people don't aim high they won't have to work hard, so they will have less stress. They might have less stress but not every stress is bad for people. Stress can even help people sometimes. For example, I was a student in Japan that hated school and was too lazy to do any work. I had a lot of stress and that made me stay at home all the time. Staying at home did not relieve my stress at all, and I did not feel good about my self. Therefore, I chose to go to school again. Stress will mostly affect bad for you, but there are good affects too.
Finally, The hole point about this is that running away and choosing the easy way is not the best decision. Aiming low might look like it's the simple and easy way thats safer but whats really the danger is for people to forget to aim high and believe they can achieve great things. The best is to make a decision that wont make you regret and making the best aim you can make. No one has to be excellent or perfect, but everyone should try their best in their short life so they can die with no regret. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
51DA4BA94C7C | The research study has shown that there are 25% of people thinks that trying same things over and over can never make you flourish in you life. Some people believed that you always have to try something new everyday, while other believed that they always want to work in something that they always flourished in. Although, doing what they know can make people feel confident but, its salient for us to flourish in our life, because you can learn new things to be successful, you can have more experience, you can also mastered in more things than you are in right now for more opportunity.
First, trying new things can help you to be successful, sometimes you inserted that into your mind that you have never done that thing then,you end up saying that you can't do that, but never ever make that egregious decision in you life unless you never try you never going to know. For Example, a friend of mine named Generic_Name, once said that "Try Try but don't Cry" it means that don't ever think that you can't do it, you can and you can do it in better way than anyone else don't ever break your confident because of you nervous or for any other reason, but that's not how it works, you just need to fight through whatever reason you had. A myriad of people thinks that when they don't know what to do they always give up instead of trying, but its salient for all of us to put that confident into your mind. Also sometimes it can erroneous your feeling when nobody going to gives work to you because you never have done that work and also you refused to do it.
Moreover, it is important for you to have more experience of everything than you have in order to flourish. Experience can make such a difference in what you have learn because it can prepares you from the beginning, so then you can't struggle any more in future, it can be harder at the beginning for some people, but it will get way more easier as you work through it in future. For Example, a student at Generic_school named Generic_Name had said that "if I take classes that related to my career in high school it can make myself to be prepare for career in future." It means that he can have a myriad of experience in high school since, he is a flourishing student, also he can learn and experience things very quickly, so then its easy for him when he'll going to enter into his own career field. He'll not going to have that much trouble of being in that field like now a days other people have, and also He'll not going to be full of experience when he will go their or how it works, but he can learn basic things that he suppose to have in order to be in that career field.
Lastly, you can mastered more than you are right now. If you mastered more their are more opportunity for you to get more scholarships. Scholarships can help you to graduated from high school with more credits and their are more chances for you to get accepted in collages. you can get to the collage that you really want to go into. There are myriad of collages that want you to be more intelligent and have mastered in everything because that's what they stand for since, it higher level of education they need, so its hard if you don't mastered more its not always like how you think that that's going happened sometime collages look for some staff that you never good at, so its important for all of us always be active. Its not fun to mastered more but sometimes you just have to make fun by working hard and putting you best effort into that work.
In Conclusion, it is salient to all of us to be good and stay active in everything that we can, because you never know when that all stuff that you have experience on can help you so we just need to be prepare it can flourish your future life. Its better for you to try flourishing from beginning of everything you have to have little bit of experience about everything it can also open up your future door to get success. For instants job, career and many other things that can help you to grow you experience that's the reason why we have to know or learn everything that is important it can help you to get into a career that can change your life. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 |
51DD6A82BD9D | American teens love there phones they love to text and call all of there friends but this i starting to be a problem at schools all over the United States. Teenagers all over the U.S text during class or during lunch. Phones are taken by teachers and taken to the office.
The principal is reconsidering the schools phone policies:
policy 1 Allow students to bring phones to school and use them during lunch and other free times. policy 2 Do not allow students to have phones at school.
First, students should not be allowed to have phones at school because . Students are going to text during class . people might say , students wont use there phones during school because they are mature enough to follow directions but i say no some students might listen but others are not going to care and use the phone . Next phones going off in class is a distraction for all of the students and the teachers , but students might say that they will keep there phone on silent , but i say no students mig | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
51E3EAF96CD0 | Student's true source of self-esteem is achievement. Student's who put more time and effort into a certain task or subject will most likely achieve more, eventually boosting the student's confidence to strive for success and opportunities.
Student's need to be self-confident in order to achieve the goals they want to achieve. Student's get self-confidence, by achieving different tasks such as in or out of school activities. Student's can also gain confidence by making and learning from mistakes. student's learn at their own pace and shouldn't be afraid to get some questions wrong, all student's should be self-confident in themselves in order to achieve goals and different opportunities for a good career or a good paying job.
Student's self-confidence is key when it comes too performance. Student's who are confident in themselves tend to do well in activities like sports: soccer, football, basketball..etc. Student's should be confident in order to do well in sports games even if the team is losing, being confidant will give the student the urge and strive to keep pushing and even comeback and win the game.
Student's should be confident at all times even under pressure weather thats in school or out of school activities. Being confident will build up the student's self-esteem, to achieve the goals or career, the student want to achieve. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 |
520EAF052C7E | I Think that Technology is a positive thing. Becuase it help's people get there stuff done thru the internet
The internet has become a huge part in our life's becuase we use are phones for every thing. it's good that technonlogy has improved because back in the old days technology was not there but now.
you can order anything online and it will be there less then a week. now and days if people are sick they can use there phones to look up how they can cure themselves. it has also improved because back then people couldn't facetime to see their relatives. but now they can see their family memebers from any forein country.
If need to learn how to cook or bake all you have to do is look it up on google and it will show you pictures,videos.
and also show's other recipes on how to cook other foods. you can mostly do everything oline and it's easy to do. technonlgy has developed a easy way on how to get shuff done with out leaving the house. most people send most of there day in there phone watching videos. socail media has also inproved. a lot of people just post pictures.
Some people like social media because it's like a news paper it tell's you what has been going on in people's life.
it also shows funny videos and new stuff that people have invented. you can also talk and meet new people by texting and facetime. I believe that tecnology has taking over the world because some people can not live without there phone. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
52105DDA12EB | 85% of the people trying to do all things the there are ready have done.
The issue is not all the people are doing what there ready need to do because, the people this days are doing that the thing is the best, and sometimes the best is doing what there already have done and there they never going to grow; doing things the are the are not going to help the rest of there life.
I disagree my first reason is,is you can try to do different things and help your future. My second reason is, don't be shy to do all things different. Last reason, don't be your self all the time because you never going to to know the world the you live and you never going to know your self if you never do different things.
You can try to do different things and help your future; For example if you want to do something in you life you need to start thinking about something, because in my family my sister past for the same thing the she was wasting time, but one day my mom took to her about her future if she don't start to thinking, and today she is a doctor because she stop doing the same things the she already have done.
Don't be shy to do all things different; For example my dad is was scare to do his company because he things all the work is going to be so different, and I told him if you never going to try different things we never going to grow in the future. and now we the company and the work in good, and help him a lot because hi try hard to do it.
Don't be your self all the time because you never going to know the world the you live and you never going to know your self if you never do different things; For example my mom she always said be your self all the time but one day I told her mom that is not great because if you be your self all the time you not going to rich want you want in life because your self like to do the staff the are simple are self don't like work hart to rich are gold in life.
Conclusion I
disagree the all people are doing the same things there are ready done and they don't want to grow to be something in there life. People we need to start thinking about our future because ans start doing different thing not be you self all the time. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
523130079501 | "Their are advantages of cell phone usage in class but their even more disadvantages to it." cell phones aren't great for students to use in classroom because it cause distraction and make students not focus while teachers give instructions. Teenagers get so easily distracted by anything because they are careless and aren't aware. Phones aren't beneficial nor useful. Students should use either school or home laptop it is more beneficial and useful than cell phones and in that ways teachers will be easily find out what they have done in class.
First of all, the reason why cell phones aren't useful for students in classroom for educational purpose it's because of distraction; that will bother the whole class ,and might bother teachers too. Since cell phones are one of the rule to be use in class then all have to follow it. For instance, if teacher assign work for students to do during class on their phones imagine what will be the result nothing might be done by the end. Laptops have big screen so that teachers can follow up with their students. With cell phones is difficult for teachers to know weather or not the student have done something in class. Students have good tricks especially teenagers. They might be acting like they are working but truly they are messaging ,and once the teacher approach he/she change the page so they can show evidence that they are working. Teachers are even smarter they know how to deal with students like this. They either sit with them to help them out or ask to come after school if they really struggle and can't do nothing.
In this situation is a good idea for teachers to collect phone before class starts and hand them back by the end. Any advice could be more useful then cell phone. That is also the reason why cell phones aren't beneficial.
Additionally, cell phones aren't always beneficial the reason why is because it distract easily. It cause problems between students. For example, if their are two students playing soccer on their phone how will they focus; they can't control themselves one shout happy scores ,and the one who lost want to beat the other guy who win and so on. Cell phones shouldn't be use at all in class but only with teachers permission. It will be even better if two teachers help out in the class with work. They both will help students pay attention and participate. Both together will be able to control phones usage. It is hard when you are working on an essay and suddenly a message pop up you can't control yourself ,and you can't focus just because of the message you are carious and really want to know what is happening. That is the reason why cell phones shouldn't be use in class just because of distraction and the impact that might happen to students from using it.
However not everyone agree, some argue that cell phones is great to be use in schools for educational purposes. First think about the disadvantage that could happen with this use or rule. Think about others and how that might effect them. Will you be able to control yourself if you receive a text from a friend?. In fact, there are many things that might cause distraction but one of the biggest distraction are cell phones ,however, any other things can be control. Any other device will be okay because it will easy to be seen by teachers. Cell phones won't help you at all however it will bring your grades down and it will bother you. Not everyone have same opinion other have positive view on the use of cell phones. Which is okay but think about it more. Look to it's positive and negative impact on students and you fill find the answer.
Why most students will agree with the use of cell phone in class?. Some student aren't always aware of what they are doing and they are careless. They think messaging or whatever they are doing in class is more important then their grades. Students should avoid all distraction such as food, cell phones, and music to help our society develop.
If all students focus and pay attention that will have a huge impact on the environment. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
5241864FBC48 | My Grandma always use to say that "working with a group is fun and all, but at the end of the day, I would have to understand what the group activity was about, but at the same time working with a group can get more work done and we help each other." She explained to me that there isn't group work when it comes down to taking a test or quiz. Students are always sitting down and learning maybe getting up and working with a couple of classmates can help learn too. I'm the one in a seat answering the questions on a test or quiz. There is no group work involved when it comes down to that. I think working alone and working as a group can both be beneficial.
First when working in a group I can understand my classmates more than my teacher. I can understand more especially if a student just like me explains everything. I might not understand somethings or tend to forget, however someone in my group could know or refresh my memory by giving me notes, or vise versa. I can get a ton of work done as a group, but do I really understand what I just did. For example, say we have a group of five students, three of them are constantly talking, the other two students are the only ones in the group that are actually doing the work. The grade that the group received was a 95. If the students are quizzed on what they have just completed, the students that were talkative are most likely to get a lower grade than the two students that were actually doing the activity without getting off topic.
Second when working alone there are no distractions. I would get my work done peacefully, at a rate I would like to go. I would not get as much work done as if I was in a group, but the teacher would know that it's all my work. For example, say I'm working with a group, we get a 93 for the whole group work. I received a quiz on what we just did and I got a 78. After that performance, the teacher gave me notes and went over the same material with me. I studied; and I took the quiz again. This time I got a 90. Therefor, this goes to show that working alone helps the teacher figure out what you need help on.
Some people say that working in a group can cause fights,distractions, and poor quality work ethic. I feel like working alone is more beneficial. Everything can not be done in a group. Sometimes you have to work alone to fully grasp the subject. Working alone lets your brain process better especially at it's own rate. The teacher can really see what you need help on.
In conclusion, I think that both working in a group and working alone are beneficial. I think that working alone is more beneficial because everyone works and really understands the subject at a different pace. Working in a group does not show the teacher a specific person's work. Thats why I think working alone can better help yourself and is more beneficial. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
524CD617574D | Do you think success consists of going from failure to failure? Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." In my opinion, when you want to reach your goal or your dream you can fail or success but you shouldn't never give up you should keep trying till you reach your goal. So, I do not agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of the success. There's no people that hasn't failed in his/her life at least once but there are some that did success, you only have to work really hard or fight for what you want, and you shouldn never loss your enthusiasm, that is something that people should never forget, to have enthusiasm for something.
First, there is not people that has not failed at least once in their whole life. In this world there is a lot of people that had mistaken, failed or disappointed. For example in their goal, getting a job, not getting good grades in school, not succeeding and etc. there is no perfect people that hasn't make any mistake. Failing does not always have to be about your personal life. You could fail your family or friends just by lying them or disappointing them. Maybe there are some people that hasn't failed just few like 1%. I do said this because my cousin, she has never disappointed or failed their parents she has really good grades and have a higher score in school she already graduated with a scholarship. Now she is in Virginia Tech University.
In order to reach your goal or your dream, you have to work really hard to success. If you had failed once or more do not get sad or depressed yourself you are strong enough to handle it. There is always an opportunity or another chance that life will give you. Work hard you should never give up easily, fight for what you want reach your big dream. Life is not easy life is hard no one ever has said that life was easy if you want something you have to work hard for it, I know you get drop down(sad) by failing in something but you can get up. If you can't success in something make another plans there is a lot to do and another opportunities that you can get, do not just get stuck in one thing. Look for other things that you want and maybe you will like it and enjoy it.
People in this world should never lose their enthusiasm. You are enthusiasm for something go for it do not let other people to do that for you or take it. Enthusiasm is something to appreciate and work hard for it. Not everyone is enthusiasm they dont have that; that interest, that strong warmth of feeling, or that inspired of something you would love to do or have. Be proud of yourself if you are enthusiastic for something. People without it has no feeling for something they don't care about their lives or future they only get what they can do for it, they don't give their feeling for it. They accept what they get. For Instance, when I was a kid I use to be really good at my school I was the best student with good grades, but when I moved here to US I had to start again because I didnt know any English so to success with my English I really had to work hard.
In conclusion, I do not agree with Churchill's statement. Success does not have to consists of going from failure to failure. You do fail a lot of times but If you don't give up and work really hard you can success for your goal or your big dream. Just never lose the enthusiasm that you have for something, that keeps you up for it, the warmth feeling you have the inspire and interest for it is strong so don't give up. Always work hard for what you want and you will success. Life isn't easy not even for reach people. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
525E9A75CAA0 | What if you can go vist anywhere in the world? Where would you go,their are many place in the world but I would want to go to Hawii.
I would want to vist hawii with freinds and family. Because we can go to the beach,we can eat coconuts,ice cream and we can get a nice tan. We can go surfing. Me and my freinds and femily can live in a house all together near a nice beach. And we can have a lot of fun on the nice beach
First we will have to find a house near a beach. Then we will have to put what ever we brought on the trip into the room we picked. Then we can get some stuff for the beach like surf boreds,some sun screen,sun glasses, and some stuff for the sand. And when the sun goes down we can watch it,and we can watch the sun go up in the morning.
After we get the stuff for the beach then we can go to the beach. When we have the stuff for the beach we can use the surf boerd to go surfing. Me and my brother and freinds can have a race with the surf boerds. After we are done having fun on the beach we can stop by somewhere and get something to eat then we can get some nice ice cream.
This is why I picked Hawii out of any place in the world and I hope that one day that I will wake up to the sound of waves and see the sun rise up out of my window and eat coconut out side on the beach. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
526E417A97BD | Many people tell me I have talent in soccer. For most of my years I trained to get better and better so I can become the best on my team. There were some faster players on my team and there still are. If you have ball control and skills you will be able to dribble past faster and stronger opponents. Also you will be able to hold the ball in your possession until someone opens up for a clear pass. Some skills I have are ball control, speed, agility, stamina, and dribbling.
I developed ball control by practicing and watching professional soccer players play. My dad knows drills to gain ball control he taught me how to do them. Then I started doing those drills 3 times a week. I knew I was making progress because I was keeping more possession of the ball during my games and practice. I was able to keep possession of the ball until my teammates got open for a good position to receive the ball.
Speed, agility, and stamina are some of the basic skills you need for this sport. For speed I did a lot of running, I would run at least 3 laps around the field for warm up with my brothers and dad. I also did many exercises for my leg muscles not too much weights because that would make my legs stiff. For agility I did some similar drills to the speed ones but faster movement and there are many different drills I also had to do with quicker pace. For stamina it was just a lot of running to get better at not getting tired too early and to be able to play for full 90 minutes of your game with enough energy.
I enjoy doing drills for dribbling because it's fun. My strongest skill in soccer is probably dribbling. I used to do a lot of drills for dribbling when I was new to the sport and I did more drills and got better and better each time. I would mostly play left mid because I was able to keep possession of the ball longer. Also when there's no one open to receive the ball or in a good position to receive the ball I would have to dribble through many players and I would go to the left corner so most of the defenders would come and try to get the ball leaving the striker open and making it easier for him to score and sometimes I dribble to the goal and try to score. Do you think you can work harder to achieve a goal? | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
529A633179FF | Have you ever wondered about the important's and the difference between imagination and knowledge? Knowledge and imagination are both very important but I think knowledge is more important. Imagination is like thinking about something, or putting your self in that situation, while knowledge is an understanding gained by actual experience and it is also known as something learned and kept in your mind. Knowledge helps a lot of people to get jobs so everyone should try to get a knowledge so they can use it to help other people that dont have a very good knowledge.
Majority of all the humans in the world get their knowledge from schools. They either get it from a public school which is made by the government or they get their knowledge from a private school which is made by and individual, or a group of people. Schools provide knowledge to students by putting them in classes with students that are their age. you need knowledge to give the students the information you learned, you cant be selfish with you knowledge because you must have been thought by some one, or you must have used someones resources to be intelligent. So if you a good education help other people that are not as smart as you because they can help you when you need it in life.
If there was no knowledge in the world there will be no electronic devices that we can use, there will be no new inventions. We are gonna need more doctors to study and find out the cures to all the new diseases that is spreading around the world thats why we have schools and teachers to help. I think all knowledge should be free from first grade to the end of your college year. having to pay for college education makes a lot of students drop out and do drugs and they always get addicted to drugs and alcohol they even try to be you tubers or rappers which must of the time does not work.
finally I disagree that imagination is more important than knowledge. So if you have a good knowledge you should be proud to share it with others. Imagination i also good for you but you should focus more on getting you knowledge so you can help others. helping others makes makes you feel much better about your self and it makes you day better. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
52A8DE60E2D4 | Imagine a world thats black, gray, dead, full of people with depression, this could happen because of how people think that small kind acts couldn't help others at all.
These small acts of kindness could benefit the whole world, change it too. This could Create self reputation. Self reputation can be created a lot of different ways, but one kind and easy way is by being kind to others around you, this could help create or maintain relationships of any kind, another way this could benefit you is because sometimes other people will be nice to you in exchange this could impact you and others immensely, i know this from experience because sometimes i just give a simple short compliment to others and it lights up their day, and sometimes when i am feeling down and its noticeable, people are nice to me in exchange. This would make you more noticeable anywhere, people will know you as the kindest guy/girl around, so then people will ask you for a compliment or they will be nice to you.
This next way i will be talking about could really help out our community, or even the whole world. This could change the world because, the world we live in is pretty corrupted in many ways, but we could change that by being nice to others, for example if you are nice to someone they are going to feel happy so that person would want others to feel happy so he is kind to others, so it basically just loops, if more people are kind then the more people they will influence causing more people to be kind. This could give others the reputation they want, like being more noticeable, i know this because it happened to me, i had just decided to be kind to others around my school, and it made me more noticeable, causing other classmates to be nicer in order to be more noticeable, so everybody wins practically.
Lastly a really kind way to impact others with kindness is, you could make them feel better about themselves, like Aesop said, "No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted." Like complimenting someone could make their day, and this impacts them and others around that person because they noticed that someone had been nice to that person and had made their day too, because it's wholesome. You could change peoples lives, like it changed mine, i was usually around 11 years old, and i had some trouble at school and home, but the people that are my friends now, just made my whole year, maybe my whole life because i knew some of them were going to stay with me till the end. You could be kind to someone that really need support, like people that are having trouble at home and school, this could change their lifestyle into a more happy way.
These are all reasons why no matter how small and act of kindness can be it could really change someones life. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
52AD70C9FE05 | What is a small acts of kindness that can have an impact on others? What do people feel when they have some of that kindness in their life? When you get a act of kindness do you give some of that lite kindness that orders need? You need that small act of kindness like the ancient Greek storyteller Aesop said, "No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted. Who has that small act of kindness that can have on impact on others, what do people feel when they have some of that kindness in their life and when you get a act of kindness do you give some of that lite kindness that orders need.
What is a small acts of kindness that can have an impact on others? The small act of kindness is a very important because people can't get a smile on their face ever day. That smile on you face of that kindness is good for your health. That small act of kindness can make some one day. You dont now what they are going throw that why it is wasted in people life. They are people when they get that small act of kindness give to others.
What do people feel when they have some of that kindness in their life? When the person get that kindness they feel like they are being loved. You can feel the kindness that person has for you. They can make feel happy inside and out side. That can be one of the grates feel in the world that you have to have. You don't have to give an object to some to make them happy. You can just be kind to them you can make their day.
When you get a act of kindness do you give some of that lite kindness that orders need? The act of kindness should give to others to show them that you love them. That they gave that kindness that you don't all ways get. Just being their for some can show that you are giving that kindness back. You can help some clean there house that is giving kind back to others. You can just give a person a smile that give a sing that you are give kindness.
Who has that small act of kindness in your family, what does your family feel when they have some of that kindness in their life and when you get a act of kindness do you give some of that lite kindness that orders need.
Do you have that small acts kindness in life? What something that make you feel like they are being kind to you? What is something you do to be kind to other people? What do you consider to be kindness? | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
52B24BAEDC8C | dear TEACHER_NAME i think the you should let students use their cell phones during free times like lunch time and in class when their teacher give them free time in class or during the morning because i think it's not fair because only teacher can use their phones and not us because what if we get an emergency call like the teacher and we have to go home because that's what the teachers do when they get and emergency call they get sub and go home what if something like that happens to us what if someone has and a emergency like get hurt in p-e time or something else because that's why we get phones for an emergency so that's why i believe is better to let student's use their cell phones on free time or lunch time or an emergency call because something might happen on time or they want to talk to their friends on my space or internet to talk to their cousins or family or want to call their family to know what are they doing or if they are ok or if they need enything or if their parents are going to pick them up after school or have an appointment with the doctor and i think their phones need to turn off when they need to when the teacher tells them to turn them off because other students are going to get distracted and might not pay attention on what there doing and they are not are going to do | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
52D0FED6AF38 | Many people debate about this topic since one of the most known scientist said this statement. A lot of people agree and disagree, and from my knowledge, I agree. Imagination is something that everyone has, not everyone has knowledge. Imagination can lead you to imagine things that other people haven't. This is how many scientist got fame by just thinking about new things.
With imagination you can think about a new type of computers, new math formula, or a new type of material that hasn't been invented yet. Many scientist invented new stuff from just thinking about new formulas or experiments that they could to make something new. There's also things like the periodic table, that the scientist who made it spent days and nights just thinking about new substances and materials, when he went to sleep, he dreamed about new substances that later on got on the periodic table.
Thinking about things in places you shouldn't, like school, could either lead you success and give new things to do and study, or low grades because you weren't paying attention, must of the times is the second option. Thinking is most of the times in math, where you have to do a hard equation and think and do a lot of work. If you like to think, that might be your favorite class and you will get good grades. Getting good grades in math is really good, it means that you have a good memory and you can easily learn new things (it usually means that when you can do a lot of problems without having difficulty).
Imaginations can also give you knowledge, when you think, it opens a new whole world of ideas. You can basically do anything you want. You can basically experiment with anything you want, but you might not get the right answer or the thing you expected but you will also learn why. These type of things can also help you to learn why something did or did not work as planned. It also helps you think about stuff that you could or not do in real life, for example doing something that is ilegal and you shouldn't do. It also helps when you think a rule or a law is dumb, you can thing what could happen if you did it, that could work to see why it's a rule.
Imagination is something that everyone has and everyone can use without a limit. Using it can lead to a lot of stuff, such as success and making new things. Knowledge is something not everyone has and not everyone can use, imagining can lead you to learn new stuff without doing much effort or risking to do it in real life and might get in trouble by doing it. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
52DC3B7C3952 | Working From Home
Should students be allowed to attend classes from home? I agree that attending classes while at home would be beneficial for many people and can actually help them work better. One reason is that it would be less stressful for the student and put a lot less pressure into getting the work done. Another reason is that it would give them more time to work, for example they could relax and take little breaks while working instead of having to cram all that work into one class session. My last reason is that it would help improve grades. If a student is allowed to work while being at home, it would allow their brain time to think more about their work and how they can improve it.
Attending classes from home would be less stressful and put a lot less pressure on the student. For example, one class session is an hour and thirty minutes. Teachers give a lot of work to students and expect them to get it done without any problem, but the problem is they can't because being forced to do a lot of work is not very fun and with very limited time can put a lot of stress on the teenage brain and also damage their mental health. Expectations now a days are really high for students but their mental health and state aren't taken into consideration.
Time is of the essence. Students need time to get their work done and whatever they aren't able to complete becomes homework. Having to do a lot of work without being able to take a break can really suck. Imagine if you had to do a bunch of work without being able to take a rest because whatever you don't complete you're gonna have to complete at home. If students could work from home, they'd have all the time they need to get their work done and they could take a break if they got too tired. At home students wouldn't have to worry about time because they could complete the work at their own pace.
Grades are important, and when a student gets a bad grade, it isn't exactly the best look. Working from home would allow students more time to think about their work, when in a classroom students can't spend a lot of time thinking because they don't have much time. On the other hand, being at home would give them all the time they could possibly need to complete their work and how they could improve it for a better grade. If students could improve their work they would get better grades, and there's no better place to do that then home, the place you're most comfortable with.
To sum it all up, students should be allowed to attend classes from home because it causes less stress and pressure which is better for their mental health, gives them more time to think and do their work, and helps improve their grades while in a place they're more comfortable with. | 5 | 5 | 4.5 | 5 | 5 | 5 |
52F0677ACD21 | It is possible to change your first impression, because not everything is how you might see at first, lots of things are different then you may think they are, so many people think that lots of things are bad, just because that is what came to their mind when they first saw it.
We should never judge someone or some things on our first impression because we could be wrong, and miss judge things that we think is not right, we even have different first impressions on other people, without even knowing about them, or what kind of person he or she is. You could be wrong on some of the things that you may seee because it maight not be how and what we see,and you could have miss. In 10th grade I miss judged one of my friend because I thought he wasn't the person I wanna talk to. Even tho I had some classes with him I would not talk or be around him, because my impression was that he does not shows respect not only to other students but teachers too , therefor I won't talk to him so he would never know me and won't be mean to me.
However, Later I realize that he was one of my best friend and the nicest person I had ever met, who I can trust and hang out with. Even tho, you may think that you can not change your first impression if you think about it, it might change your first impression. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2 |
52F9582F9C86 | Every student should have the opportunity to be involved in extracurricular activities for them to enrich their educational experiences. Here are some reasons why they should be involved in activities, when they're involved in activities they have the opportunity to do different kind of stuff outside home, school, and even work. They also learn how to be independent and responsible. Also being in extracurricular activities could also help the students health.
First, when students are involved in activities outside school and home, it gives them the chance to experience different things outside school, home, or even work. They learn different kind of things. Things they wouldn't learn in school. For example during school they learn about math, science, history, and english. When they're home they do nothing but homework and help around the house some students have to work. If they're involved in activities, they have the opportunity to experience different kind of stuff for example: if a student decided to do a sport they would learn about that certain sport and they would also play it and enjoy it with a team. If they play a sport they would have to also practice at home, but not verse others or be in a team to practice with.
Second, students learn how to be more independent when involved in activities. For example, when I decided to join figure skating I wasn't independent, I didn't really know how to do things by myself, and when I joined at first it was kind of hard because I needed help with everything but as time passed by I started to learn how to be more dependent. I started doing almost everything by myself without any help, I was more dependent at home, school, and figured skating. Being involved in this activity, also taught me how to be more responsible. When doing activities you need to learn how to use your time wisely because you will need time for school, homework, family, and the activity you're involved in. Being involved in an activity is a good way to learn how to be responsible, how to be independent, and how to manage your time wisely.
Last, joining an activity can help with your mental and physical health specially if its a sport. Joining an activity is a good way to distract yourself from school, home, or work. This is because you will be thinking about the rules of the activity or about the point of that certain activity. It also helps your physical help meaning that it helps you exercise and it helps your body do what it needs to do. Being involved in a sport is a good way to help you exercise and distract yourself from other things. Being involved in activities such as sports or school clubs allows you to enjoy that time. If its something you really like then its something you can look forward to after having a bad day or a stressful day. When I had a bad day I would always think about skating and what I should do to make my jumps better. I would also go to the skating ring and practice, this helped me be more active and helped my physical health too. Being involved in a sport or any other activities is a good way to help students look forward for things.
Some people may argue that schools should control student involvement in extracurricular activities because some students don't have time to do school assignments but that shouldn't be their problem, that would be the students problem because students should know that if they join more than one activity they will still need to do school assignments such as homework or projects. Students should learn how to manage their time and use it wisely. Students and families should control the student involvement in extracurricular activities. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
52FEF34F4AC7 | Should students take online classes? Students can learn more by taking online classes? students have benefits for attend classes from home?.
On this paper I will argue about how students have benefits attend classes from home, and how improves skills for he future.
I think that students would have benefits for attend classes from home, because is a new opportunity for study more, and for improve more the skills more online classes for the future.
Teenagers that are attend classes from home I think will be more healthy, because that means that students will be more able to sleep , and will be have more time to rest the brain, and more time to do all the things at home, because a lot of students they do not sleep during the night the reason, because they work others that always talks with a friends and others that they use technology, and waking up at the early morning make the students brain tired, and makes the students do nothing at school for the rest of the day.
Students will be more organizing there time meaning that students will be able to have more time to have job, or do others activities during the day, or after taking classes online, because when they attend to school they do not manege very good the time they always doesn't care about time or do something important.
Students will be putting more attention to classes, because when teenagers attend to school most of the things that distract the students are the friends and the technology means that teenagers when are around friends distract the mind out of the class, and that causes that students don't pass the class, or the test, otherwise when are taking classes from home there is no body around that can distract and loss the attention of the students and will be more easy to do homework, projects, and study for test.
Some people say that the idea of students attend classes online from home will have more benefits is a bad idea, because they say,"Teenagers are lazy, and they will sleep more late at night".
Students taken classes online will be more smart, because there will more practice skills for the future where will be benefits of know how classes are doing online, and they where taking.
On the future students will be able to attend classes from home, and will have benefits for skills, and this will make the teachers more easy to turn any work or practice any class that they missed, and that way students can have more ideas how will things will change and compare between attend to school and take classed online. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
532528134425 | A example is the best way to show others peoples how to do a better thing, when somebody is teaching and provide some examples is one way feel the teacher wants to help.
When i was a child my grandmother shows me many ways to set things and advice, i would like to say i want to teach my friends and others peoples things like they dont know, another ways is tell them or teaching like how to play soccer, how to find this, etc.
In my life i have learn many thing like i never think i do like maintenance in toys, fix computers, and other things.
And i like my teacher teach very well because is one way to learn better others teachers dont like teach very well or just like to be angry with the students in the class and thats the reason why the students say i dont like the teacher because is angry or dont teach very well.
Give examples is the vest way to understand thing like i never understood. behavior is other thing how behavior we are in the class or in the house, our behavior is one part important in the life because the the others peoples could say that person have a good behavior i would like he can tell me a advice or example how to make this or fixed.
A example is not the main reason to influence others,there are many like the peoples watching you. just to watch others peoples i am learning new tools for the future.
I have no plan after High School the only thing is i like technology and electricity the most two parts of mi, the life is like a second we can lose everything or die.
I would like to say some words before i leave, we are human everybody make mistakes, you and me, the only thing to fixed is learn about the mistake i made or someone can help me to have a good behavior in our school or no matter where.
There is one more way is read newspaper, watch the news, ask peoples, ask questions, there are so many ways.
A good example is see how much you can do, how much do you know, dont matter what kind of color you are, you are special for everyone from the most youngest until the most oldest, every one can give a little knowledge how much he know.
There are many advice we can use to exhibit our effort and value, many peoples come to me and they ask me for a question or advice they tell me everything they want to say because they trust on me, i am the people like listening another when they need help.
I am a people who can feel many thing for others peoples.
We have the life, family, friends, neighbor , many people who can help and have a big heart, the reason we are here is for something, maybe no one knows but another yes they have a purpose on this beautiful world that our God give us.
And my final reason is have a good day every day i try to be on time every day in class because i dont like be late is one reason for me this is my goal for this year and of course pass the SOL and the class at he end everything worth, my teacher are a good example of how to influence with others peoples, comment, conversation, i like the school is one of the most reasons. | 3.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
5335796068E8 | Students should commit to a career in high school, because they would get a better understanding about the career they want to do by the they are out of high school.
Students would know what to do after high school. The student wouldn't worry about what job their going to get or what collage they want to go to. They would have everything figured out and it would put less stress on them. For example, If you already know what you want to do it would be easier to apply for collage and you could get a part time job in the career that you chose.
Students would know a lot about the career they want to do. In high school they could research things about their career like how much they pay,the conditions they work in, and if it takes a lot of work. They could also talk to people that are in that career and take academy classes. It would make it easier for the student because they would be well educated about the career. For example, when they apply for collage or a job they could say that they've been studying and have a better understanding of that specific career. It would give them a better chance in getting accepted or getting the job.
It would be easier for the student to get a job in the career. The student would have a better chance of getting a job in the career they want to do if they have been learning and taking classes in high school. They would be prepared and wouldn't be scared of not knowing what to do when they get the job. If the career they want to do requires them to go to collage it would be easy for them to pass the classes because they would know mostly everything. For example, when they apply for the job they could see that they finished collage which would give them a high chance of getting the job.
In conclusion Students should have a career in mind when they are in high school. It would make it easier for them and their future. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
5355F44A1FE4 | !!Ops Ops!!
Technology allow people to complete many goals without having contact with other , But has a limitation of technology, technology have a positive effects on people's lives.
First , technology make our life more easy by paying bills from their home. also help to started a care without going a college or people that can not walk. They can used the technology to order some food, to send money to other counties. From long time ago the technology, change a lot the way that we can talk with our family from a video or testing without had contact with the person also, somethings their is not enough money to travel so, we saved money.
Second , technology make people finish the goals in from a computer with out speed 8 hours, like the regular class. because some people want a better future but they did had the opportunity, like other to go School because they have to work, take care of her own family so, they stop there dream; they had to used the technology, to finish High School now a lot people are able to the technology, in the computer to given a class without go to school to graduate have a diplomat.
Finally, technology is so important in 2019 because every where you go everything have to do it with a computer because long time ago the used to send letters to communicated to others people now we have phone computers to call make an a appointment weather all people, now know how to used the technology ,because is so important everything we need we can find in the Internet finish also, everywhere you go there is technology example today people from 56 or they used there phone to call uber, taxi to go everywhere, a lot of apps to used.
In conclusion, technology there is not limitation because we all need technology here some reason why? Because in this year, 2019 we all need pay bills, shop without going to stores. because somethings some people dont had a car. They can not walk so, there will be always technology to used make our goals come true. Dont matter if we did get at the first, but there will be a second chance we called technology we can make it ; The Technology have everything in this word. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
535D427F9FF9 | Yes, I agree with this statement because If you try your best to believe on yourself it will make impossible, like applying for you first job or anything that you wanna be for your career. specially you need it when you are going to college that will help you to save more money and you can get what ever you want. It will change your impression by how you get more skills like how to knowing yourself by finding jobs where you comfortable with. so that way when people wants to know you by personality they will know that first impression it has impossible to change because you have made yourself to make it and think that you can do it like other people do, then you will realize that you made a good experience. Not everyone has a same first impression because they had different personality and idea for their self, some of them is not changing of their impression the reason why is they do not trying them self what they believe that everyone has knowledge even if they can. The people who experiencing their impression that has already change their life, they are the one who having more self confident and they willing to sacrifices to spend time not for just wasting time. Based on this statement impression will change as impossible If they are being like kind a person do not really care about future career because they want to be useless as a person. They are not going to be successful with their achievement specially nothing can be change for their entire life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
53607F113053 | Although they say it is better to not try to redo things you already mastered then you will never grow,Actually it is better to retry something you already mastered,one example is you will have more experienced on the task your suppose to accomplish with. Another example is they would take you in as a responsible person.
One of the following examples I mentioned was how you will have more experienced on the task your suppose to accomplish because having that experience their is so many things that can get done. With the experience you can multitask. In today's society people around the world have their own jobs and work and from now then have experienced the job. For me when I got my first job I didn't have no experience I did not know what I was doing so they trained me from then I started getting the hang of it I knew from then what my job was to do. I've been working at Party City for a year already and I already have experienced even have the chance to become a manager from the store. All I know is that with experience things can get accomplished and turn out fine to the best things that get done.
Another example that i mentioned was they can see you as a responsible person and they know what rights and wrongs you can show them. A responsible person can show so many ideas or reasons for someone to be that good person they expect themselves to be. In today's society that we live in their is so many people all around the world who are responsible for their actions they know what is best. For example when it comes to babysitting one of my siblings its a huge responsibility to take care just like how my parents left them for me thats how they want to come and find them. It's my job for them to make sure they don't get hurt and for me to have the time to feed them and to please them from the things they want. My mother calls me responsible since I know that I love kids and its my job to keep them safe. Responsibility matters in society good things can come your way if you honestly see yourself doing big things that are right in life.
However the opposite of trying something you already mastered is "If you don't retry something you mastered then you will never grow" meaning won't get to accomplish what you could have accomplished more and wont experience new choices or things. The things that people in society do which in life it can come to a time that you have to redo something it is best to retry and if you don't it then you wont accomplish things meaning it wont take you nowhere cause you would forget other then that you wont get to experienced anything new that you couldn't accomplish.
Through out society we know that it's best to retry things and to keep completing the accomplishments that wanted to get done either it's best to keep building up more experiences and to be come responsible person or to not even retry to do the things you were doing before which they would not get you nowhere. Through out life it's a big chance which you can see yourself happy and from then having a smile on your face. People even complementing you about how well done things you accomplished. What I believe in is to never give up to retry things that were done before and that it can still be redone no matter what day it is in life, it's always better to accomplish then to not even try. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
53633B5F5F15 | Some people say that it is impossible to change your first impressions. You learn from your experiences because your action, words you use or say, and your appearance can show exactly who you are. People agree with this statement because you can change your appearance, words you used and your actions.
First of all, when you meet someone for the first time the way you act is important. Due to the fact that your actions speak louder than words is true. Your actions are things you can not change from your first impressions. When you start to act in front of somebody you just met, do not be mean or rude to them.
If you do that they will think you are not a good person to be around. You need to make sure you do not mess up the first time.
When you speak to someone you just met do not use bad words because if you do they will think you do not know how to talk to someone. When you talk ,you can use big words or just talk normal because no matter how many times you talk well to them you are gaining their trust. Make sure you do not mess up or stutter a lot I know you may stutter but you can always try your best not to stutter so much. If you mess up some people are nice enough to give you a second chance. Make sure you do not talk with your hands when you meet someone new.
In addition your appearance is the most important thing of first impressions. Your appearance is something you can not change. Your appearance is the way you look on the outside and inside . People always focus on people appearance the way you act and the words you say but mostly on your appearance. When you have a bad appearance they will think you are bad person and they will not want to be friends with you. If you have good appearance they might like to be friends with you, but it depends on their first impressions too.
If you like the way they act or the they talk or most of all their appearance. If their first impressions was good then you might want to be friends with them. Your first impressions are impossible to get out of your head and also impossible to change.
On the other hand you might be able to change people's minds. Some days you can have a bad day and other days you might have a good day. Some people appect that you are having a bad day and they know you are not like that. However, no matter what happens to you there is always a second chance at first impressions.
To sum up some people say that your first impressions are impossible to change and people agree with that. The important things are your actions, words, and your appearance. People will always learn from their own experiences. You need to always be careful of what you do, say and look like to someone. Clearly, you meet new people everyday. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
5384378F1AC2 | The great question here is, should schools allow students to use cell phones for educational purposes or should cell phones be prohibited in the classroom? In my opinion, schools should use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes. Some school staff members may claim that cell phones should be forbidden in the classroom even for eductional purposes. Because, they think students will lose their attentions. However, I firmly believe that shools should allow students to use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes.
Students will be effective academically as long as they use cell phones in the classroom. There are several reasons for my opinion. My first reason is that as a student, whenever I use cell phones in the classroom, I can search things easily and take pictures when nedded if my teachers allow me; which will help me on my studying when I go home. Another reason for my opinion is, if I don't have my phone with me, I will be eager until the bell rings and get my phone back without concentrating on the class. For example, I have a friend whose father took her cell phone forcing here to study the whole school year. Stubbornly, she stops doing what he tells her to do. Instead, she persistently hang-out and have more fun. As a result, she got F's for all of her classes. Therefore, using cell phones in the classroom helps the learning-teaching process.
Using cell phones in the classroom helps to call if something happens in the class. For instance, if a stranger comes with a gun or if a lock-down happens and I hear the stranger's voice, I will call 911 for help. Secondly, if an emergency occurs like fire, hurricane, and a huge lightneing while I am in the class, I may need to call to my family to let them know how I am doing. In that case, they will know about my situation. To sum up, most people like doing things which are forbidden for them. Students may hide and use their phones for another purpose eventhough they are not allowed to use it in the classroom; which is more riskier than using in front of the teachers. Consequently, the positive effect of using cell phones in the classroom is more influential.
In conclusion, schools should use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes. Other people say that cell phones should not be used in schools during class periods. I obstinately argue that phones should be used in the classroom for the purpose of education since the positive effect is more influential and using cell phones is more quicker than using laptops or other electronic devices. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
53CF6D801CAF | I'm agree with what has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in the life. "Generic_Name, my son, remember, you always have to have a positive mindset." This is a quote that my grandmother kept telling me over and over again before I came to the United States. She used to tell me that negativity attracts failure. throughout my life I have always looked at the positive side. For this reason I believe that having a positive attitude is the key to success as it assists in keeping resiliency, and courage, which are essential in accomplishing goals.
We must have a positive attitude to be successful because it helps humans to be resilient. I have gone through numerous of challenges in my life including being homeless, but I always look at the good things I have, and think about those who do not have any support. A positive attitude helps people be resilient and confront everything that comes their way.
Another reason why we must be positive is because being positive brings courage. Courage allows us to not give up when we want to accomplish goals. For instance, crossing the border is dangerous, however, with courage and being positive, I have been able to cross it. Now I am about to graduate high school. I have also been successful and will be an electrician, I could not accomplish this without a positive attitude.
There are many people out there that think that being positive bring people's hope down if things don't go their way. But I do not agree. being negative brings bad wives, and bad wives brings bad things this is why I also surround myself with positive people.
To conclude , being positive is the key to success. I strongly believe this because positively brings resilient and courage. Resilient and courage are two characteristics that are important to succeed. In my life, I have been able to succeed because I have remain positive. So, I say, to everyone, think positive! | 5 | 4.5 | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
53D17839AAC0 | Technology allows people to complete many tasks with the limitation of human contact and can provide the use of less work and less communication. it could also be asked that whats the point of working here if theirs technology here ?. Most workers may ask that and will be furious with technology because of the fact that they will have less work and probably less hours of work, since technology is taking over their jobs. it could also be said that technology could be taking over some jobs that require less work, which could be bad for the job environment because that means less job opportunities for people.
First, it could be rude to the staff that work their because of less human communication. How is it rude? Well think of it like this: someone is better than you at your job and you wanna be better, but you cant because the person you're going up against is a computer and knows mostly anything and everything on what to do in those situations. Most people may have to face the fact that you can't do anything about technology.
Second, The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology will have negative effects on peoples lives because of the fact that technology will help most people in some cases, but most people wouldn't appreciate the help from technology because it could be taking over their jobs and have less human contact with others. But the fact is people should appreciate technology because of what they're providing. Most people may not see it that way or feel like its helping them.
In conclusion, I believe with the reasons I have provided that technology will have a negative effect because of the way they're taking over most jobs and seeking happiness to people that enjoy it. People wouldn't like to admit the fact that technology is actually helping them and providing less work for them. Technology is actually seeking to steal most peoples jobs by doing their work for other people. I truly believe that the negative effect on technology is doing jobs for others that have the ability to do it . | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 |
53E542321463 | Dear Principal,
I agree with what you think but sometimes students need sport so that they can think better. I am in a sport and I wouldn't like to miss my sport. I believe students should keep playing sports but their grade average should go up at least to a B. I am worthy that students grades will go up.
Think about it's if the students are in sports because you nor their parents would want them out of the house to go with a group of bad people. so think about what I am telling you then write back. I hope you agree with what i am writing. Just think that you were a kid without sport and out in the street with those bad people.
Sincerely STUDENT_NAME | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 4 |
54099C3AE7CE | My Talent
Imagine,
having an amazing talent or skill but no one knows about it. Some people might say that hiding your talent is wrong but I think that it helps me to focus more and to develop it better. Singing is my talent , I love singing
I develop it by practicing and I use it by writing my own songs .
First of all , I love singing , my Talent, which i develop by practicing.
For example , I am always looking videos up to develop my voice and practice but sometimes I practice on my own.
The more I practice the easier is going to be for me to sing without any help, For me developing my talent is really important because my talent is my dream .
Another example is that I go to singing lessons to practice and develop my voice , sometimes they give you some notes that you can use to practice at home , with the notes they give you, your voice is eventually going to sound clear focus and mature.
Furthermore, I use my talent by writing my own songs , when I my own songs the writing will give me an extra writing skill and most of the time some old memories come back.
For instance , I usually write about my old memories , old feelings or the way i am feeling at the moment. Another instance , writing my own songs will give me an extra writing skill.
By writing all the time you learn new techniques , new ways of writing or new lyrics.
In closing , i use my talent by writing songs and that gives me extra writing skills , i develop my talent by looking up videos and by going to singing lessons . Also, my talent is my dream so i usually put a lot of effort on it . | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
54304ACFE477 | when we're born we come out of our mothers womb, the first thing we naturally do is screech and cry, and if we dont cry the doctor hits us on our backs and try's to make us cry. And from that cry on we develop our own kind of sound and our own screech with its own pitch. They take our fingerprints where there will never be two of the same, even when were born with our twin it will never be the same no matter how much alike we are. from there on we start to learn and develop our own persona. After were born our brain starts to function even with little stuff, babies learn to cry when they're hungry, want to be changed, when theyre in pain or simply want attention. When children get older into the toddler stage they start to learn how to walk by observing everyone else they learn to talk by listening to everyone else around them. We learn how to grab our bottle, pick up a fork or spoon, and practically our own daily doings. But we learn all that from observing and listening to everyone else. When we hit our 6-12 years of age where we have a tendency that we want to fit in be in the cool kids group and we watch TV see celebrity's see that there are musicians, actors, painters, policeman, firemen, dentist, doctors, mayors chefs, soccer players, basketball players, football players, baseball players, hockey players, tennis players, volleyball players etc the list could go on and on, but the point here is the fact that we influences. But as we get older in our teen years 13-19 we start to have our own kind of voice at least until were old enough to make them, we all take our own paths and we choose to make the decisions that we make, our parents dont go with us throughout the day telling us what to do or not do making our each and every decision for us, they sure do give us a hell of advice because they already went threw that stage and they dont want to see fail and get hurt but sometimes its good that we fail and make mistakes because then we learn what we can or cannot do. Now as you turn into an adult that net that we used to have when we were living under mom and dads roof is no longer there its gone we dont have that privilege anymore, and we need to grow up and create and develop our own persona officially. when you get a job it comes with responsibilities and from there we learn if were responsible or irresponsible, if were social or non social if were lenient of non lenient, patient or impatient, forgiving or unforgiving. Id like to think that were all born to grow and learn about our rugged society, and based on what we've lived is how were going to act because we can literally live in a shit hole of a place and have the happiest attitude ever and have a better attitude then a boy or girl complaining that she didnt get the car she wanted, verses the kid that saw his mother get beat by his dead beat dad or the kid that was up all night wondering if his mom was going to come home tonight or even the kid that went to sleep hungry. So honestly i don't think that were born with labels i feel like we all can make our own decisions of what were going to make of life, if you'r going to sit there and make everyone see you as a pity. A huge play of your character is your mentality is you have a broken done weak mindset your going to have negative vibes and weak dead beat character, but if you have a strong mindset and the will to get stuff done then youll have a broad and respected character. In conclusion id like to think that we create and build our own character and and that were not given a label by any higher power of what our character is going to be in life. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
545E9BF477C1 | the reason i think that we should not have more school time is because some people in school would not be able to keep up with other kids. and most kids get ttired of being in school for six hours imagine being in school for longer then that and even more kids would start going to sleep in school. because they are already tired of all the classes during the day.
with another good reason that i disagree with adding more time in school is because some people have to do things after school like take care of family or go somewhere important and if you added more time then they would not be able to do get this stuff done because they would be stuck in school learning longer then the time they are accually supposed to get out.
i belaive that there should not add more time to school because it would also be a waste of time because teachers would have to do even more stuff done buy more stuff for students and get more work done grade more papers because we would have a longer school time and then the teachers would have to write more speak more and do stuff more then they would if we had only six hours in a day.
with another reason that i dont thing school should not be longer is that it would not only affect the students and the teachers but it would affect everyone because then the whole school board would have to do more work and the school would loose a lot of money because the school board would have to buy more stuff for students and get more things that kids would need to get everything set up good for the students.
with another good reason we should not have longer school cause if we had longer time kids would not be able to handle so much because they would be learning so many thing in one day and then it would confuse them and when they are going to take a test they would be confused because they were pressured to learn so much in a short period of time and they would not like that because they might fail. | 4 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
548EC5B339E3 | When we talk about technology and ways to improve our life, What is the first think that come to our minds: Cell phones, computers, internet etc. However technology is also present in the field of the medicine, food daily life etc. Now you think that technology is Just cell phones computers and internet.
I'am pretty sure that student would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. I was a clear example of this situation, last year I take an online course and of course it benefit my self a lot. How I get benefit: well first I pass the class that I was needing. It makes you feel more comfortable, because you're attending to class from home. It is more flexible, what I means with flexible you have more time to work in other things, also you have the option to turn in the homework a little later, one last thing you administer you time whatever you like.
Student would get benefits in many ways. If they study from home and if they also go to the normal school they can graduate much early than the usual. They can find a job too, if they organize their time wisely. If they have a job so they could earn money and they can use to pay college.
If some student ask me I obviously recommend them to take online classes, it is a good way to improve your weakness and also you are going to be more success.
My conclusion is yes student get benefits in many ways when they take classes from home. and I think that every school should have the option to choose if the students wants to take online classes, and also is a good idea to help the student to be more success in the life.
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