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5494132B7229 | Is better for students that are entering high school to know what they want to do after they finish high school? some pleople will say yes but some will say no and they are not wrong or right anwer in thise question is depending in your point of view and how fast you want to achive your goal and how good you want to be in your carrer and work.
The people that say yes they say that because when you know what career you want to take before entering high school you wiil choose you classes better depending in your career and what high school you want to attend because come schools have programs that count like college classes, and in high school you have only four years and that is not enough time for you to choose and you will end up in a carrer that you don't like if you choose the wrong one. If you know what you want to be you will cofus better in that career . You can join programs to help you more in your goals and when you know your goals you can achive them better. You also will try to see how can you get a scholarchip for your carrer and what college are better for you, and you will mead people that like the same thing as you and you can make friends. When you join programs some time you can get a scholarchip if you are good. For example my friend want to join the army so he is taking jrotc to help hem do better in the army but my other friend wants to do soccer for college so he is taking advance p. e. to be in shape and he is also in the school team to get a scholarchip, and me I'm taking business classes to help me know more about business marketing because I want to put my own store and Im putting everything of me to do that because that is my goal and i want to do the best of me in that project of my life.
People that say that you don't have to know what you want to be before you get in to high school. They say that you can join different programs and see wich one you like the most and you will choose your career from that decition and you will know what's about because some people choose careers that they don't like them maybe because they dind't know the stuff you have to do or they dind't expect to be like that. Is better to waste four years then wasting your entire live in a career that you don't like. you sholl try to get a scholarchip that way you don't pay for college.
If you dind't have a scholarchip and finish college and you are working in a career that you don't like and you dind't have a sholarchip you are going to be in debt and you are going to pay alot. If you only study for one year in college and you fell like that career is not for you you have to play for that year and is not cheap so you have to choose your career when you are in high school and see what's about before entering and if you like it because if you don't like that career you are going to waste your time. For example I dind't know what career I like before high school so I join jrotc and i dind't like it and a teacher told me to take business classes and I like it so I chose to do business for my career.
In conclution both of them are good options but if you know what you want to be before high school you can see what's that carrer is about in high school and if you dont like it you can change it and the other one you will have more chooses because you will not focus in only one career you will see more oportunitis. Is depending in the choose you make. All of thise dipend in how you are because evryone is defferent and not everyone is going for the same opsion. But for both of them you have to do your best in school to achive your goal and get a schoolarchip that way you dont pay for college. But first of all we have to finish high school and get good greads. and remember that is only one life so do your best and try to live the life that you want and don't let others tell you that you can't do something just belive in your self and that will be a big change adn wen you are in college do your best and do your work and life the live chill. | 3.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
54AC60510DC3 | Dear Districts School:
I am writing to express my support for the proposal to require that students can finish high school in three years. I am in favor of this proposal for two reasons.
One reason I am in favor that students can finish high school in three years is because some students they don't be able to take elective class and they don't have to waste their time to take another class. Most students can have more time to think and choose what career they want to continue to study. Since, they would like to go to the college and finish their career and get better job in their future.
Another reason I am in favor of this offer is because students can have their opportunity to start to work more and save their money to continue to study. However, some students they don't have family or helper that can help to them to continue to study. Although, students need to work hard to graduate more early, but they have to keep this opportunity that this programs offer for them.
Therefore, because this programs offer opportunity for students that want to finish their high school more early and if they want to continue to study they can take their time to work. I am agree with this proposal of this programs that students can finish their high school in three years. Thank you for taking my support.
Sincerely,
Generic_Name | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
54D835ADB326 | Everyday everbody try to do the best to live that day happy and try to make somebody also happy, for example when i was in Italy every year for the day of god everbody going to downtown and have some fun together like they drink,talk,eat and eat again, you can have some much fun there with no money the with money. This is important because you don't need money to be happy in your life just live your life with people the make you feel good and don't try to make you feel sad or bad.
In your life Don't follow nobody and don't trust no one just your self. For example do somethiing the you like and you need think about the you are better the everyone because some people in this life are jealousy and something they can break you dream and you can not follow your dream because he say someting the make you sad or he do someting to you the you feel the with the thing the he did you can stop follow your dream. This is important because Don't live somebody also your life and don't make someone also control and tell you what you need to do with your life.
Everyday I
think about world can be if everyone are able or think to help the next youth. For example one day I was in Italy I was going to the super market with my dad and i think was my friend too with I don't know wherever, we going t obuy all the food the we need and when going to the register to pay what we buy I saw a guy try to buy a sandwich but he tell the register the only money the he have was $0.50 cent the sandwich was i think $2 then when i saw him turn the sandwich back to the register I take the sandwich and I buy for him, he was so happy and he tell me," My friend you make my day better" i was so happy that day. This is important because you don't need spend a lot of money to make someone happy.
In conclusion I think we are complish more when we always do something for somebody and I want say to everone the to live your life and never give up, because the time the you give up iss when you not trust your self anymore and that's is not a good thing. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
550D53DE2832 | I understand what are you tying to say about determine never to be idle which means not working or being use to not be idle you must to do something everyday to change you're life, and accomplish you're goals, which is I agree with for two reasons.
one is if you have a goals trough the year something that you want to accomplish or you have a dream you must start to take a step by step reviewing it every single day saying to your'e self I can do it even though when no body see you're work no matter how long it will take , but eventually you will get to that point where you want to be as long as you tying you're best every day, and you will be successful in life.
A lot of people want to accomplish their goals, but the thing is they don't actually take action why because they afraid of fielder you can always win, but you can be the best as you could be, and you never be same again because you come this way if you don't do something every day you're life will never change.
Therefore, I strongly believe that if you are doing something everyday you will see the result at the end. you're life will change, and you will accomplish you're goals. I fully support, and respect you're words, which is I agree with.
Thank you for you're consideration. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
55174E1DFC5B | One thing I would like to accomplish in the future is to be a marine biologist and visit the ocean.
There is so much about the ocean that we don't know about. About 5% of the ocean is discovered and our earth is made of 75% water and 25% land.
Marine biology is a job were you work with animals. there is so much you could do as a marine biologist. for example, you could swim with animals and collect data, you would work in a lab to find cures with animals, you could even not directly with animals but research about them.
The ocean is an amazing place and is full of magnificent creatures. i would love to swim with sea life and help them in any way i can. if i see an animals caught in a net. I would try and save it. If there were animals in a bad situation such as injured, harmed, caught. I would help it. so many animals are killed every year. either for clothes, food, wild fire, pollution, loss of habitat, etc. over 700,000 thousand animals are killed every year. that includes sea life and land life. So many animals that are endangered like the black rhino. the great white shark, etc just from poaching. sharks are hunted for their fins and then just tossed back into the ocean to die. same goes for the black rhino. they are hunted for there horns and then just left to die. i want to accomplish saving some animals when i grow up.
In the ocean coral reefs are dyeing because of people and habitat distraction. some people think that coral reefs are just rocks growing out of other rocks but they are actually animals and they are living and breathing just like us. maybe they dont have noses like us they are animals and they should be treated like animals. in ten years we would have lost 100% of our coral reefs. That doesnt mean that all the coral reefs are gone it means that there wouldnt be enough coral reefs are a good habitat. Animals need coral reefs to live in and hide from predators like bigger fish.
So many animals died from plastic just drifting in the ocean. there are more than 1 million plastic being dumped into the ocean each year. Sea life dies from plastic by getting stuck in it or eating since its not biodegradable. In the future i want to help sea life with all the plastic and at least help out with it. a lot of animals even get stuff and grow up with plastic stuck on them or in them. there is this turtle when it got caught in a tip tie. the tip tie was stuck around its shell and it couldnt get out so it just grew around it and deformed the shell. when helpers saw the turtle they took the zip tie off of the turtle and the the turtle was free but its shell was still deformed from the zip tie. when people are recycling they should at least up the bottle holders so if it does get in the sea and a animal finds it. it is less likely to get stuck in it. turtles eat jellyfish so when there is a plastic bag floating in the ocean. the turtle thinks its a jellyfish and eats it. after some time the turtle might die because it cant digest the plastic.
i want to accomplish visiting the ocean and go diving, snorkeling, touch wild life and help out with injured animals. | 3.5 | 3 | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
5564D9D8C845 | "Studies have shown that one way to improve student achievement is to start an after school homework club." Two-thirds of the students who join an after school activity club are more likely to succeed in academics then students who do not. Schools should establish an after school homework club because it can help students finish their homework, become more socially interactive , and give students some teaching experience.
Firstly, an after school homework club helps students finish their homework in time. Many student get a low grade in their class because of unfinished homework. They were not able to finish their homework because, they did not know how to do it. Teachers do not usually have the time to go through each student, and help them in class, but some teachers volunteer to meet with students who have difficulty in certain subjects in an after school homework club. Joining an after school homework club is a great way to finish your homework in time. Sometimes teacher might even give students some tips and tricks on how to solve a question, that they would not give out in class. My friend Generic_Name used to have a lot of difficulties with his math homework until he joined the after school homework club in our school. He learned many tricks on how to solve a math equation and even taught a trick to solve an "Integer Slope Inequality" equation.
Moving on, an after school homework club can help students become more socially interactive. While in an after school homework club, you can find students with the same difficulties as you. This will give students something to relate to and not feel out of place. Having group discussions on how to solve a problem and having group projects in your club will also help you be more socially interactive. My friend Generic_Name made many friends by joining the after school homework club in our school, and grew a lot of confidence. He is now much less nervous when talking to people than before.
Lastly, homework clubs can give students teaching experience for if they want to be a teacher when they grow up. Students can volunteer to help other students finish their homework in an after school homework club. This will give the student a lot of experience on how to teach, and deal with other students. There is a team of students is our school called the " Junior Honor Society", which helps students with academic difficulties every day after school. As a member, I have learned about a lot of ways to teach someone else, and because of my desire to be a teacher one day, this helps me a lot.
Schools should establish homework clubs because it can help students finish their homework, become more socially interactive , and can give students teaching experience. Ten out ten students have said that, joining an after school homework club has been the best decision they made in their life. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 5 |
5574E4DD548A | taking online clases is one of the best option, for many student who has problem to attendace in the school.
taking online clases can help to student, who need to work full time because they are having many responsability in there home some of the students are living by themself, people who have to pay bills and work extra hours and they are not having time for going to school decide to giving up and not finish there education .
many student don't have money for getting lunch or can not apply for get free lunch.
and they don t want to spend more money in the school or students who has childrens are paying babysitting the time when there are in the school, and want to continue studing.
Student can have better grades.
they can access online any time during the day, they can focus in clases they having more time to work in assigment, they can add extra time to check test, homeworks, vocabularies, etc they can memorise more easily, because they can repeat the information many times they want.
access online clases, student do not have another student to interrup the clases least problem between of students, getting online education , people will not skip clases becauses. they think be in a classroom is to bore and they decide to leaving the classroom. a big problem is a lot student s are missing the buss, because there a late for minutes them the a lossing a day of school .
people are getting sick easily the food from the school is not healthy, people pefer to not eat than eat the food from the cafeteria that is affecting attends .
this idea to have clases online it going to make students feels they are getting enoght help from the school, having online education is a great idea for student it will increseasing the attendance | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
558B9106B99B | In my opinion student have no time to sleep because they want to stay up and study, or do their homework, Also parents start calling school why my child failed in class, Although student should decide, actually school should decide because have time to get work done, falling the class, and sleeping in class.
student should have time to go home and do their work, they should have time to study, Also they should have time to do their homework. If student know that they have homework to do he have to do it on time.
However they start failing the classes, they start failing by not turning their work on time, if they do turn in their work on time their grades will drop. They should start paying attention and turn in their work on time. some student also sleep in class, Being to tired may be the case, if student stay up late and doing their work they can't get up on time for school they will get sleep in class and they can't do their work on time.
Because of not having time to work, failing, and sleeping in class, school should decide. Student don't have enough time to study. Student grades start going down and then they will fail the class, school should decide what student should do to pass the class doing their work on time, and not sleeping on class. If school want to their student have good grade in class, no sleeping in class and passing the class. school have to make a new law for student, the law is no phone in class and no talking in class, because phone is the only thing that student can't study If they make this law then every student will get a good grade and they will pass their class. Sleeping on time is parents responsibility, not school Parent have to tell their child to do their homework on time sleep on time and get up from sleep on time, then student can be success and student will have good grades in classes.
Most of student that sleeping in class is student that they are working after school, and they are working until
10 or 11 in a night, and they can't get up early in the morning so they sleep are sleeping in class, they are not paying attention to their study, and their grades will drop, then they will fail the class. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
558C7F83201B | do you think students should have a career plan by time thy enter high school ? i think no , because they can always change their minds ., like if they end up not like the career they thought they wanted at first . and they pick a new one . in high school you have to take math and history and science and many other classes . and then you pick electives you are interested in . and high school students have to pass all there classes and some high school students have after school activities like staying after for extra help on subject or being on a school teams and clubs . and they just want to hang out with there friends and family and have fun and not to worry to much on what career they want to have in the future . and they might have other stuff going on . and i dont think its a good idea to commit to a career at a young age because your interests change .and i think students shouldn't be expected to that early on. and its not a good idea. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
559902F0A513 | People often credit their succeses having a good attitudes. Thats is a good thing you can do. But alot of people don't, only a handfull of people credit their succes. You can change that when you have difficult time with life you can have a good attitude. I know its super hard and out of this word it just does not make no sense but theres benefits. Wow theres benefits thats super lit and i can prove because i saw it in youtube or use my smart brain. The number one benefits having a good attiude in difficult time is you have good luck like becoming a word class soccer player only with a bit of luck and good attitude you will make it. With charming good attitudes people will follow you in difficult time beacuse you got good attitudes. If you got a bad attitude people will easliy guess that you have a bad day or difficult time, people will stay away from you and that not good at all. Another benefits having a good attitude in difficult time is you will be happy in life you will be so happy that you could be the joker that never have bad attitude in difficult time. Having a good attitude in difficult time is the best it can helps not doing bad choices in the outside word. Theres one thing I want to share with the people about benefits, good attitudes in difficult time can change your life just think of it how much time have you have difficult times in your life just add good attitude in difficult time you will so succesful that you make trump jealous that will be awesome.
In my own experience having a good attitude in difficult times fells so uncomforable but its worth it. In the finals we lost the score was one to zero but I was in a good attitude in a really difficult time that we lost. My teammates was in a bad attitudes try to cheer them up and I said ''at least we went though to the semi finals it was quite hard for us.'' Then my teammate was quite happy because going to the the finals is hard. That my experience how good attitude changed my teamates in diffcult times. Having a bad attitude in dfficult time is harsh trust me when my cousin rage quite in fifa when he got a bad attitude in diffcult time, when its raining the internet did not work I was chilling in his bed you know but I hate the rain too so I was in a bad attitude. So we both was in a bad attitude so I have witnessed one a bad attitude we was fighting not physical but kind of we were talking smack each other. But we do that when we have a bad attitude but why I said in my head we never have a good attitude in diffcult time in current time,but long time it was lit beacuse we have good attitude because we awalys go to the park and play soccer. We have great time even if it was raining long time ago we have good attitude in diffcult time. For me good attitude in diffcult time feels like heaven only if you do it right, but bad attitude in dfficult time is the devil. This is why good attitude in difficult time will be the best and help you succed in life. | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
55AEC9A9BB4C | It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to the success in life, I'm totally agree in this case, because as we are growing up, we are thinking in just positive things. when we are kids, we start thinking in what we want to be when we grow up, then we turn to adolescent and we start thinking in what university we want to go, and finally when we turn to the age of adult we start thinking in what we gonna do to give a better future to ours children.
First, when we where kinds we have only positive attitude,we only think in positive things as what we want to wen we grow up, for example: some kinds said theta they want to doctors,astronauts, and teachers; some kids said that they want to be doctors because, they want to save lives,
and find the priest for the cancer, some kids said that they want to be a astronauts because, they that to go to the moon, some kids said that they want to be teachers because, they want to teach others kind something that they know and they know is gonna be helpful for them in life.
Second, when we turn to the ages of adolescent, we start thinking in our graduation of high school and what university we want to go that is better for us, we think in positive thing that can can be better in our lives, something positive so we can have a better future and not be in gangs or things like that that can cost our lives, In my opinion positive attitude in can help you to find find a better way in your lives to find what you really want to be, and just that it can help you to find good friends and good works, because your attitude It's what makes a better person.
Finally, when we turn to the age of adult we start thinking in what we gonna do to gives a better future to ours children. when we turn to adults and we have kids we start thinking is positive things that can help to our kids in there future, if we have a positive attitude everything that we do for ours kids It's gonna be all right, because we know that what we are doing is positive and not negative, but is we do things with a negative attitude we know that ours kids are gonna get things wrong and then they gonna a have a negative attitude as we teach them in home, thats why we have to teach then just positive attitude.
In conclusion,
positive attitude is the key to success in life, because positive attitude it can help you to find a better life, makes good friends, find a great job, and it can help you to gives a better future to ours kids, positive attitude is the key to keep going forward and have a better life. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
55C7EC027A88 | Lately many people have said students should have a shorter summer vacation about 45% of people have. They think it would be better for students so they don't forget what they learn the year before when the come back in the fall. They think students should have year-round schools, but is that a really good idea? Well here are many reasons why there shouldn't and why it would be a horrible idea. Many people think that students shouldn't have to year-round schools because the students might have a summer job, It's no enough time, they shouldn't have to worry school for that long, and it's just too many things for them to remember.
Many students normally middle schoolers and high schoolers have to work during the summer. Many students have to work after school and it's just to much for them. Some might work because the need to help their families with money, others to buy something they really want or need, and some is so when they get out of high school and they can have enough money to get into collage. Whatever the reason may be they need the three month summer vacation so they can have more money to do whatever they need with it and have a year-round school will not help them because after work they need to do homework. About 85% of students that work and have go to go school will have to stay up really late so they can do thier homework. Students often do not get enough sleep. They stay up late night hours doing homework , project or studying. In reality it's just too much work for students to keep up with school for that long.
A three to four weeks for summer vacation is just not enough for students, not even teachers. They deserve a longer summer vacation after all the hard work they have done for those nine months, the least they could get is a three month vacation. They just need to relax and take care of themselves because they sometimes be stressing out too much. Which that could lead to bad health and many other problems. They need a longer vacation because three to four week is not enough. What if they want to travel they can't not for long so they can't really enjoy it. They also need to spend more time with their families, many just don't be as close to them because they are too focus in school. They just a well needed vacation of no more stress for three months.
Another reason why a year-round school is not the greatest idea is that it's just too much for students and teachers to remember. Students already need to remember a lot to pass the SOL. Having a year of school will just keep adding too that. It's also a lot of work for students to be doing. A lot of worksheets, tests, quizes, projects, and for teachers too they need to be planning the next class and need to be grading a lot of papers. Plus another thing to think of is what about summer school? For the students that didn't pass the SOL or the class. When or how will they have the time to pass? There's a lot of things that should be planned out first.
On the other hand I get why it would be nice to be in a year-round school. Students wouldn't forget as much things. Normally when students come back in the fall they are clue-less of what the learned three months ago. A year-round school will decrease that. Students would also get to see their friends more. Often many students don't get to see their friends during summer vacation. For the students that need it, they could get extra help. Also for the students that really like to learn new things this would be a great time too.
However even though all that would be kind of nice. We don't know if the decrease of students forgetting things will actually work because not many students even touch their backpack during any vacation so they would most likely will forget a lot of things either ways. Nowdays even though students might not see their friends. They still manage to text or facetime. Maybe some students might have a car and will be able to go vist them or hang out for a bit. If students need extra help they can get a tourter for that extra help that they may need and if we have a year-round school for them it wouldn't be fair for the other students that do not need that extra help. If they really want to learn new things they can go to classes somewhere for whatever they would like to learn. It's just more better having a three month break.
That's why there shouldn't have a year-round school there just wouldn't be much of benefits. It'll most likey stay with the same problems or even worse. That's why there should be a year-round school because students might have a job, it's not enough time for them, they shouldn't have to worry about school for that long, and they just would have to remember too many things. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
56053054CB1F | I believe that your character will be what you yourself choose to make it, The disicions you make can play a big role in how you turn out to be. For example the people you hang with, How you grew up and the type of household you were in, And my last example is is your motivation because being motivated can help you build good character traits for the future.
The type of people you hang with play a big role in your character because you can pick up a lot of good and bad things from different people. They can influence you to do a lot and you know what they say "you are who you hang with" for example if you hang with people who do nothing but good you are going to want to do nothing but good but if you hang around people who are lazy and sit at home doing nothing with there day you are also going to become lazy and not motivated to do anything.
The way you grew up and the type of household you were in also plays a big factor in your character because thats what you are around, That's the energy with you all the time for example if your paerents are having problems at home all the time and you can become depressed and feel down all the time, Since thats the energy thats in the house, Which can make you start struggling in school since you would be down all the time. But on the other side if your household is very good, everyones happy and the vibe is good it can make you a very happy and positive person since thats all the energy you're getting, nothing but positive vibes and it can help you with school.
Your motivation in my opinion is the most important part of building good character traits because it's so good to be motivated and having a something to work for, If you have that the past does not matter and you can be the most awsome person that you can possibly be for example if you are really motivated you can become anything you want. Your past and all the things you overcame can motivate you another example is if you and your family is really struggling that is going to want you to push harder, And in that procces it would build a lot of good character traits that will be with you forever.
In conclusion you make your character and choose the people you hang out with, The type of hpuse you are living in and the things that lead up to you being motivated and i dont think you can get influenced beyond your control because you can control everything you do for example if you don't like your friends switch things up, If you dont like how things are going at home go live with someone else. Everyone should always know that nobody can or should control you, Everyone makes choices bad or good you are the one who made that choice. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
56080A912BB5 | Generic_Name writing sol march 19, 2019
If I do always something I can do more that one. Many people belief is always do something we can do more thing; because, if more practice something we have more abiliti to do something. When, I do always something the next time I do better. Likewese, I have to read book for book project I can do. If always I do project more good grades have, and I can do more project. I have to read for mu quiz if always study fot the quiz I can do better.
I have to read book, biography, ect.
In Generic_Name claas I have to read book for book project. If always I read book I can do more project more extra poins. In Generic_Name class we need to read the lions book for abc project if always I read this book we can do more project. In my History class I need to read biography if more read I can have good grades for this class. I thing if more do something I can do more thing, and more good grades I can have.
In my class I have to do project. In Generic_Name class always we need read book; because, if more book read more book project can do. In Generic_Name class we have abc projec about The Lions book if always reed this book more project I can do. In my History class I need read biographis for extra poins more biographys read more extra poins have. When I stady more I can have more extra poins.
Always I have to stady for my quiz. In my science class I need read my notes for my quiz if I more stady is more essay my quiz. For my sol I need to stady always; because, is so important for my I have gooh grades in the sol. Always I do quiz in my History class if always practice for my quiz always I have good grades. Is more esay for my always stady for my quiz that a bad grade.
Sometimes if always I do something I bored of this. However, if I consentrate in I do I can do better things. whet, I read my book, stady for my project and quiz I need consentration; because, if always do something, and don't concentration I don't do nothing. In my opinion if always stady whit consentation I can do everithing good, and I can have good grades. for this reason and many more that always I do something is better the I dont do nothing. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
5630E056A0DB | The world has many rules that needs to be follow, and if someone tries to escape that rules a lot of things can happen whethere it's a good thing or bad. Some people believe that to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is not the greatest accomplishment because not following what the world wants can make a big impact on a persons life; however, to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something is the greatest accomplishment because Being able to be someone who the person is not suppose to be can bring success into a persons life, not letting people influence a person characteristics is a big accomplishment, having to be someone who a person wants to become can show the person full capability
Being able to be someone who the person is not suppose to be can bring success into a persons life. Being different can isolate someone from the society and this can change a persons life choice. A person who think and act different can have another way of facing problems in life which makes them different from other people.
Not letting people influence a person characteristics is a big accomplishment. Being who the persons wanna be can give someone originality. The person can act freely and become who it wants to be also they do not have to worry about peer pressure.
Having to be someone who a person wants to become can show the person full capability. The person do not have to worry about what others think of whats it can do. Acting as what the persons not suppose to be can give a big advantage in creativity.
Some people believe that being someone that you're not can is not the greatest accomplishment because this can make a big impact in someones life; however, showing who you really are is one of the biggest accomplisment in a persons life becase acting different can lead to success, being different means the persons have full control over their actions, having to be someone who a person wants to become can show the person full capability. To be someone that a persons dont want to become is complete fine because this shows that no body is limiting the person from being who they really are. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
56579FB8A60B | When you have a goal, No matter how long it takes, and you complete, it will be the greatest accomplishment.
To be yourself in this world that is changing over and over, you have to have a strong mind, a lot of people will not be agree with what you have to do in your life, But people over think everything people say, if you want to go more higher than where you are; you will have to make some decisions in your life to make those greatest accomplishment that you want to finish and get to the top.
I agree with this statement, because the time passes in your life is going with it, the more you do the more you get and that is what people don't get, if you want to make accomplishments in your life you have to worked out man, For example Lebron James how do you think he went where he is now, Making steps in his life, goals, family help, you have all of it it is right there you just have to get it.
"To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else"... honestly I will not take it like is changing you, because you are the one changing your life, yes you will be seeing stuffs you will make some errors but that is how you are going to reach what you want in life. you are going easy you will get it easy and you will get it shipper too, if you work hard at the first time, at the end it will come easy and you will be thanks full.
A great accomplishment?, That can be anything, every one is a world, what I mean by that is that every mind have the power to do what it have to be done, either a teacher, family, friends, they are just telling you where is the door, your friends are not going to opened for you, not your parents or teachers, you are the one who will opened if you want to do it and get out, and get that goal or accomplishment that you have to complete.
I can be a example for this, I used to hate school a lot, i went tot his time that i didn't wanna even go there, but there was this English 10 teacher that just speaking with me one day just one day, yes I was having F at that moment, after all that thinking a lot about what she said I passed her class at the end with a B, not knowing that I was going to be able to do it, but I did it just doing what i have to do, like I said people can just tell you where is the door you have to go get it.
"to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment", yes it is; put your self together get all the help you need if they are good person they will help you, staying quit you will not get it, asking for help will not make you smaller it will make you stronger, and that is what we need be strong and get that goal or accomplishment done thanks. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
5666CD4AA5CD | The Success Of Life
The success of life to fall down is important , because with enthusiasm you can do everything, that you would like for your future, still if you fall down. Life in this world is hard to get up, but be strong person with enthusiasm, your life can be easy and not complicated. To fall down in life, you can have many negatives things in life. Life can be more hard as you think it is. Enthusiasm have many positive opportunities in life. This positive opportunities can make your life more easily, because growing with enthusiasm, your future can have more patient,less stress, and more happiness in your life. To failure without lossing enthusiasm can have the sucess of your future. Bringing success into your life, you can learn lessons, that would help you to find opportunities, for you to walk forward. In this statement I agree with mr, Winston Churchill, because this is a every important role statement, that can help people to bring the positive way for making easy life for people in this world.
To fall down in life, you can have many negatives things in life. Life can be more hard as you think. To have better opportunitites, you have to bring that energy to be strong person without giving up. If you want to have dreams, with no enthusiasm it would be hard you to get it. An example" i want to have the goal, to have this big dream, going to collage." If you want this dream with negatives thoughts, things without studying, and be lazy to have a job, to safe money for your collage, you can't do anything. Another example " i want to have a car, a house, a dog, and having a trip everywhere in the world." You can have a job, but if you are lazy to work, you can get fired, not getting that much money , that you need for all your things you want to have. To have negatives thoughts, you can't have all your things, that you would like to have for a better future into to your life.
To have enthusiasm can bring more easy and posititve thoughts, to accomplish your goals. Because with enthusiasm you can have less stress, you can have more energy, and be patient with everything. To have less stress, with positive thoughts you can make easily things, still If you think that it is hard for you. An example " i want to pass my sol's in school." If you want to pass the hardest test in school, to graduated you can study, paying attention to your teacher, do your homework that day is due and having your things on time. You can pass your classes and your sol's, without thinking that much stress in your mind. Another example " i fell my exam of math class." You can fell your exam, but you can't give up, because you can have another solution. Teachers give sometimes, opportunities to their students staying after school or come more prepare next time larning a little bit more, because it can be more easily to pass it.
To failure without lossing enthusiasm you can have the success of your future. To have the success into your possitive way, you can have less stress and you can learn the lessons finding better opportunities to move forward. An example " I did not graduated, because i did not pass one class, it was a requirement for graduation." It is ok If you did not pass it, but you can have a choice by finding opportunitites in others places. You can repeat school one more year, you can go to other schools that prepare you to pass your exams, and classes, you can go and find information about that class or subject. Another example " I got fired in my favorite job, because i accidently broke a delicated plate." You can be sad, but always go and find opportunitties in others places, that can hired you, because if you have experience ready, so it would not be hard for you where to hired you. Becareful what you do, only have the positive way and have the energy, that customers can be surprise about you, how hard you work in your job that you really like.
To fall down can bring you negatives things. Negatives thoughts can bring you in a bad ways, because you want to have that goal that you want to reach, but you can't. This can be a big situation, if you want to reach that goal, but you have to try your best on doing the oppositive way. To have a enthusiasm you can work really hard and make it more easily. Working hard be happy can bring you that attituded, that we all want to see. In this world is hard to bring people in a positive way, because life is hard , but they are people that they want to show that, you can't give up always move forward. To failure without lossing enthusiasm, you can have the success in to your future. This is a lesson that everyone have to follow and not make it hard. If you are negative, just find a way to make you think a lot, because that stress you out and have a negative thoughts, never give up just move forward. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
56AC4BE71C2F | If weather or not students should or should not attend class from home by online video conferencing . I think in my opinion students should do that and work from home , for example if one day you are feeling sick but you want to attend school and get all your work done that will be one method . Another example will be if you are out of town and you still need to get work your done , the perfect way will be doing it online. Lets say if I wanna study at home and do my work it will be better I will get my work done , wouldnt be distracting at all and feel much conformable in my opinion others might think it is better to go to school. I honestly feel much better doing work at home then being school, if you need help or anything just email the teacher. Another example will be getting to do all the work from doing it in bed but yet still doing your work from home should be an option or be required . In conclusion I say that students should be attending classes from home and it should be an option so they could still get there class work done. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
56C4259AA5C2 | Is always good to try new ideas, I disagree with Emerson's statement. Nobody can tell you if you can do something or if you can't, the unique that can stop you is yourself. Learning new thinks help us to recreate our minds, help us to make new projects in life or work, help us to create new ideas and most of the time we can have fun. Also try to do something more besides you career will help you to have more options of work and more possibility to have a better economic situation.
In fact, it will help you to be responsible in all the staff that you do daily, in your home, in your job, in the school, with you friends, etc. It will prepare you for what is coming in the future and it will help you get mature mentally.
However, take two or more careers at the same time can harm you, and make harder you progress in your main career. For example: I got a friend his name is Generic_Name, he's taking film producer career, he needs to take those classes for almost three more years. In addittion, he started to do photography career like two months ago. He really like both careers, and Generic_Name think that if he take both careers at the same time it would be easy in the future for get a better work and make more money. But he realize that it will be really hard to do both careers at the same time, he began to feel the stress and the pressure that he will no do it really good on both careers. He realize that it was really complicated and that he was losting his time and his money on something that it wouldn't end really good.
Then my recommendation was to finish first film producer career because it was the career that he really wants to finish first, it was his dream to be a film producer and make some movies, we always talked about this. So I said first you need to finish film producer career and after that, it will be better to take photography career like second choice. Anyways, Generic_Name was really frustrated because he thought that he will do it really well, but his mistake was that he didn't organize his time and his life; that's what happen with most of the people that think that do more than one career is impossible, and is not that, is just that you need to organize yourself and your time. After that Generic_Name understood that do easch career at the time it would be better and he decided to start with film producer first and add Photography career after two more years.
In Conclusion, take two different careers or masters are not a problem, you just need to organize your life and check what is the priority for you, it doesn't matter how long you take, in a future you will see all the benefits that you are going to have, how you grow up and how you can be an example for other people that think "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have alredy mastered, you will never grow up", if you try to do something beyond what yopu have already mastered it probably being easier, but that doesn't mean that if you do another career you will not be a successful person. Finally you just need to demostrate that you effort and you sacrifice is going to be for something better in your life. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
56E188D44884 | The first impressions are difficult to change because is something special that forever goes to stay in our minds for example when someone go for the first time to the beach, it is the first impression and is as a picture taken in his mind that will never disappear,there are a bunch of impressions the people can not forget such a new father when he come in the hospital and look at his wife with the baby on her arms is something that is undelete in the mind,good impression are alike to persuase the mind of the people, a beginner political always is trying to leave the best remain in the mind of the people to later get their votes because he win because knew that leave a good first impression was the trick to convince them. The firs impression can be used to persuade but also many times to hurt a person that is why always consider to be carefully at leave it.
I am agree with the statement, never someone could have the capacity to change something have left recorded in his mind, I have examples for my opinions such as an inmigrant who just pass trough the border from mexico and the border patrol cath him up he always going to remember that the border patrol did that his dreams stop because he was an ilegal guy, everybody have different experiences no always the impression going to be to turn us in a happy mood,this stament is quite real, everyone have to think about leave a good impression ever. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
56E32CEEB127 | We should accomplish always when doing something to determine do to wonderful things. if we do more things we will accomplish the goals we have in our heads to go on forward. Thomas Jefferson he accomplish many in his life having to make write the declaration of independent he did not waste time to relax around and chill his buddies. When we start doing something with our life we set goals every year what do you do?, the every next we try to accomplish our goals because when we are trying check our goals we are always doing something it never stops and it will never stop because thats we are non stop workers . many people can waste there time and not finishing there goals . Each person has something in there hearts to not stop and there motive to keep going on forward and trying to do something there life .over the years you see news things examples new phones and new shoes and TV but whos behind the idea a person and what did they do worked hard to make improvement. we are always doing something thats how the world is right now to accomplish new things every year generation to generation always improving .When we do things we do it for a purpose because its wonderful how much we can never stop giving up we always have to be doing something because if people see you not doing something its a waste of time for you and the person .This is how are world is runs by doing something in your life by going to school learning then going collage and finding a career for yourself and all this is by doing something your life to accomplish your goals and to improve your life to grow more and more gain knowledge and not stop what you want to do. We do accomplish when always doing something. in your life there always people pushing you forward and sometimes you feel like not doing nothing do but do something because if you do it you a accomplish a goal that your parents give you . Example summer break you stay home not doing nothing playing video games and eating all the food and not working and your parents are and you leave the dishwasher all full and did to clean the house and when your parents come and see you not doing nothing of course they might mad. Your parents why dont you leave the videos games and start doing something in the house and start washing the dishwashers and getting a job to make money and this is when you have to start doing looking accomplishing your goals not in the house wasting your time and not do nothing. do we accomplish more if we are always doing something and the answer is yes and dont stop doing something cause everyday your accomplishing it without knowing it. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
56F9E8427D97 | I raised by my grandparents and they always told me that curfew is curfew no matter what. To me, old people's advice are really important and efficient. Curfews keep teenagers out of trouble because individuals get home on time, chance to get saved by dangerous situations, and they can do something else at home. Some people think curfew is unfairly interfering their lives. For me, it is not because I have an experience that I should need a curfew.
First of, you can go outdoor and hang out with your friends, shopping in the mall, playing sports and doing some assignments from school work. Moreover, you should have to go home on time because some parents are waiting for their child to come back to home safe so, they can sleep in peace. In my experience, it happened long time ago. I went to my friend's birthday party and we were having fun. I knew that I break the curfew rule but I did not mind it as it was a big deal. After my friend's birthday party finished and everyone went to home including me. My friend's house was not far from my house, so I walked. I started realized that someone was following behind me.
Second of, teenagers whom are under 18 years old can be saved by dangerous situations if you follow the curfew rule. In example, what I heard from my friend was that she was outdoor and hanging out with her friends when her mother called her to come home early but she did not listen. She get home around 12 o'clock in the night chased by drunk male person. At that time, my friend's phone battery died and does not have any money with her. All she can do was ran and tears were coming out of her eyes that couldn't stop.
Third of, curfews might be different for every individuals but it is usually 10 p. m. If you come home at 10 p. m not breaking the curfew rule. You have lot of time that you can spend in your home including work on school work, watch interesting movies, read fantasy books, or you can do whatever you want to do at home. 4 years ago during winter break, Me and my grandmother went to a store to buy a handcream and it was dark and freezing outside. We were on the way to home, but one stranger black tall guy put a gun on my grandmother's head and we gave him the handbag and the wallet. We ended up crying and shocking.
Finally, all those things happened to me in the past. I learned a lesson which is listening people's advice is really important in your life because lot of teenagers are out of control in this ages which are 15-18. Taking things serious is not useless it is more powerful and useful in your life. Curfew is one of the warning that can take you straight to your home safely. Do not do anything wrong that can ruin your life. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
5704CCBC8B55 | I think that my principal need reconsidering the school's cell phone policy.
First of all , the principal should let allow all students to bring phones to school and use them only during lunch periods , free time , and when a student have a emergency . Because you don't if a student's mom is calling because a emergency happen.
As you can see , that the principal need to let the student to have there cell phone , as long as the phone is turned off during class time or is in bivariate . That is why the principal need to let us use the cell telephone during school. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
570595740274 | Do students need summer break or they can handle not have summer but with more breaks around the year?
Students need summer break because students like summer more than other other times in the year because is hot outside and it doesn't snow all the day also, during break some students can do things that they couldn't do because of the school. For example have a job, just enjoy and relax outside with family and friends or have big families plans that they were expected, students have more odds to do all that in summer because.
They can put all their effort in their jobs. almost all the students that I know have summer job in fact I actually have two summer jobs. For students have a summer job is actually very important and it means a lot because it can be the first thing that they actually put all their effort, and is not only the fact that they put all their effort it can be the fact that they can be helping their family for example.
Their mom is having a bad time at work, the sells went down, is being two weeks since the last buyer went to the store, is not something new at the store that could bring buyer, and is being a bad moth for their mom, their son will try to help her paying small things like the internet, the water, the light or he could actually do his best, paying all that and paying the rent of the house, some teenagers not only work in summer for their own good some teenager work for help their family with everything they can however. Sometimes they need relax, doing nothing or going out to eat, watch a movie with friends or family, or go to party with your friends and enjoy summer how I said, I have two summer jobs.
The first one is in construction and the second one is in a place called Generic_Name. My first week doing all that I feel tired and I feel that I couldn't do all that anymore but I realize that my family needed me and I keep doing it, in my first work I actually learn a lot about how to measure things and how to use a electric hammer also my boss is my uncle so I spend good time with him and I meet some really nice people. The second one is in Generic_Name I had to take care of kids, clean the place and make food, I meet really nice people there that helped me a lot and I realize that I like work with kids. However some students don't have a summer job and that is fine, some students likely have some family plans or plan with their friends that they want to do for summer like.
Go some to another country with you parents, sometimes parents have vacations at the same time that summer start if they change the vacations it will interfere with the time that students spend with their parents. Some students actually don't spend a lot time with their parents in fact I am one of those. our parents work to 8 AM to 8 PM and when they come back they are tired and they just wanna eat and go to sleep, and we understand why they are like that. In summer we spend time with out parents we go out to eat, we go to the movies or we go in a travel to another country that is the first reason why student prefer the vacations in summer than in another time of the year the second reason can be.
because of the sun, we all have to accept that we get tired of the cold, rain, snow and frozen rain we all get tired, and we want the sun also with the sun your garden won't die or it wont look ugly. Sometimes when we have summer some times another school from another country or another state have summer that means they could come here or we could go there and spend time with them. I actually have some friends from Venezuela and every time they have summer they come here to spend summer with me however.
Yeah sometimes it can be hard retain information but students need rest for while, spend time with their families and friends, and if they want it or they need it get a job and do their best.
Can they change vacations for another day or just have more different vacations but not that long?
No summer is not only the time where students rest, also is the time when they spend time with their parents or friends, it can be the time for some students to work and help their family. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
573E39E45177 | Is distance learning such as, online learning or video conferencing more benefical than traditional learning?. In my opinion, I believe that most students that take online classes have a higher risk of failing. Therefore, they have a higher change of getting distracted. Studies confirmed that young adults are more likely to get distracted than adults since, their minds are not fully develop. I also believe that, every human being has a different way of learning and goes on their own pace.
There is positive's and negaitive's reasons about person-to-person learning and online learning. Person-to-Person learning helps the students gain more knowledge and interaction. While being in a traditional classes, you can ask questions anytime and gain a relationship with one another. The negaitives of tradtional learning is that, students attend to skip class, not listen to the teacher, and sleep during teaching. Students attend to do these negative actions because they might be force to go to school or they can not go on their own pace.
Online classes are not benefical but you can go on your own pace. Another reason is that, techonolgy is popular in this generation that students rather be in a device. Online classes have a positive side to them because there is many options online in what you want to learn about, but keep in mind that visual is harder than interacting. Visual is diffcult to understand because there is no instuctor or a teacher helping you in person. I believe that everybody is different and we all learn in different ways and different pace.
Some Students would not be able to attend at home classes because of personal problems such as, not having food to feed themselves, some do not have a roof over their heads, or they do not have access to a device. For an example, there are some students at Generic_School that do not have food at their home and all they eat is school lunch. It hurts to see Children that are not able to afford things in life that are in need such as, education. Education is in all of our life's and I hope traditional schools can still be popular as online schools. In this generation techonology is taking over students!.
In conclusion, I support my reasons and my opinions about, traditional learning is a better way to learn than online learning. They both have Pros and Cons but Traditional learning has been in our lives for so many years and techonology and devices are taking over students. Distraction is what young adults have trouble with, Online classes is not a great idea to pursued. There are many reasons and studies, why students should keep attending traditional schools. I also believe everyone works and learns in their own pace and that is why Person-to-person is way to pursued. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
5754104B2928 | We choose our own character traits through the choices we make,It can be shown through the actions or the way we communicate to others, this can either teach us a lesson or tell us the truth. The lesson that we are trying to learn can either change our character. Either way the character that chooses there own traits will start facing some difficulties in the beginning and start searching. The reason why we face difficulties is when we can either know if we need to change our traits to a better one.
The lesson that we are trying to learn and discover can either change our character because the changes that you get will determine the hardwork that you did to get where you are right now, the challenges that you face when you immendialtely face will get even more challenging from the start it will put you in a position that you aren't even ready for. We can make the choices that we want or know what might be good for us in the future that may not affect our characteristics.
The character that chooses there own traits will start facing some difficulties in the beginning like getting more in trouble or karma will come to them without knowing. It may also cause trouble and argument betwwen your family or friends because the choices that you make can either push them away from you and you will start losing confidence in yourself. the reason why we choose our own traits it's to refresh everything and start all over again with new beginnings and no negativity it will put you in a position where you will be happy and no regrets.
The reason why we face difficulties is when we can either know if we need to change our traits to a better one because it will determine the effort and struggle that we put in to get to our goal, It can either not be changed that fast because there are some puzzles missing in the book that we need to find to get there without no hesitations or problems. The signs of knowing that we need to change our characteristics is when everything is starting to fall a part that's when things start to get difficult.
When our character is formed by influences beyond our control can either bring us down to the point where you can't get up to fix them, It can't be fixed in a matter of seconds only patience, time and hardwork can change that. The environmnent that we live in may be the cause of the influences that you get that it can be difficult to face them, you can either do what's right for you and the importants of the changes that make. You can also ask for help when you are having difficulties when facing this controls into your life, People may not take this into a discussion because they are blinded with the lies that they are facing in there life and not actually figuring out or speaking out .
Many people have chosen the the path of which you can choose your own character because it is easier to know the mistakes that you made in the beginning and that might give a second chance to fix it. The signs that you may need to do might be infront of you it's like a missing puzzle that you need to find it to mend everytihng and start over to becoming a better you in anyway with no regrets and the pasts are gone. The results that you may get when actually changing your character will determine your personality and communication toward people around you . | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
579603CA894B | Why is it important to learn from the experience of others? Well it could help you in the future to make a decision or to pick in between stuff.
I think it's really interesting to hear about other people back experiences. In overall if someone is trying to talk to you about their past experiences you should pay close attention because it could come handy in life.
One of the reasons why it's important to learn about other's past experiences is because it could help you out in the future. For example if you encounter the same situation as them you'll know what to do,in the other hand if you didn't pay attention to them and you face the same situation they did you'll be clueless on what to do. If a friend is in trouble or he needs advice with something you could help them out because of other's past experiences.
Another reason why it could be important to listen to someone's past experiences is so you don't make the same mistakes as them. When I was 8 years old my grandpa used to tell me that smoking wasn't good at all even tho he did it all the time,then my dad told me the same thing about smoking so I'll always know that smoking it's not good for anyone's health and I won't make the same mistake my grandpa did.
In conclusion I think that listening to other people's past experiences is good because it will help a lot in the future and it'll help you make important decisions in life and you could even help other people when they are struggling. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
57A6B1103088 | Classes Online At Home
Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? Some people think it is good idea to take classes online. They say they have more time to do they homework. Some people think that take classes online is more easy than going to school. But I think that is more difficult because nobody explain you the thing. If people take classes online they will be not learning nothing. In my opinion it's not good idea because people need help from teachers, some people like to come to school, and they like to distract at school.
Some people like to do they work by they self, but others people need help from teachers. For example my sister always stay after school for help from teachers. She said that they help her with the things she do not know about her classes. She said that she learn too much about her teachers, and she like to come to school because the teachers explain the work. For example when she fail a test she stay after school with the teacher, they review about the test, and she learn more. The teachers find the way to help students after school. The teachers have others things to do but they don't care because they want the students to pass their classes.
Some students like to come to school because they make friends and have fun. For example my brother Generic_Name like to play sports at school. He said that play at school it's fun because he talk with other people. School it's important because we have to know about other people and learn more about what is hapen at school. People have the opportunity to come to school everyday and learn. However, In my opinion is important to come to school because when you graduate you going to be happy with your diploma.
Others might say that classes online is good because they like to work lonely. The school distract people from their houses. Some people need distract and also need socialism with friends. At school is the place that people like and feel safe. For example my friend say that she get distract in school she play a sport, or do a activity with others friends. Also the best way to get distract is to speak with adults people that know more about life. Also distract is doing your homework and listen to music.
In conclution, the teachers help students and they explain the things that the students do not know and online they have to do by they self. Come to school is the best way to learn what you want with your life and want you want to became in your future. School have many distract like games, books that you can read and take home. I think students should come to school and not take classes online. The teachers are the best because they help to much the students. Also they are good persons because explain when you don't know nothing. School is important in life because you need a good education and go to college to have a good work in your future. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
57A750437C3A | Ralph Waldo Emerson who wrote, "To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greastest accomplishment" I agree because if you do everything by yourself better things happens. Like how he saids be yourself can make you better by trying new things, so many reasons to be your own.
First of all, to be yourself can make you great life or more better can open new opportunities, by saying this a refer to get ideology with a great future. A example, making yourself with rules or putting time for something you want to do can be awesome way to start, someone told me if you fight for dreams and you really want to do it, you will get it by doing yourself. Then you can be proud of yourself by doing something the you never imaginate to do it.
Second of all, when you get staff done by your own can be a great example for so many kids in this world. Believe or not be an example for someone is the most accomplisment beacuase they want to do or be like you. Also by trying everyday something new can make you better. How this quote says " Hard work beat talents when talents doesn't work hard". Something useful is everyone learn new things by mistakes. Make mistakes is not a big problem, making a mistake means the you are trying to do it better and be better by learning how do it.
Third of all, the last but not least frienships have a lot with this, one question very important in here is How can I be sure the my friends are real?. Yes, probably that can be a problem that's why be yourself is the greastest accomplishment because friends can take you down with drugs, alcohol and bads things. That's doesn't mean the you can not have friends. That means you have to choose really well your friends because hypocristy exist maybe they want you down without future and great life. Hypocristy is the most danger thing in the world by hypocristy you can make people think about how they want to be or what they want to do.
In conclusion, doing yourself can make you better and open opportunites the you never imaginate. Try to do something the you love or like that's a good way to start to be yourself. Choosing what's good for you or what not and remember always fight for your dreams. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
57B782277D2F | Think about the benefits of working with a group or working alone and what do you feel is more beneficial? I think that working with a group is more beneficial because you can get things done quicker, share creative ideas, and it shows teamwork. It also saves up time when working in a group and when having deadlines.
First, working with a group gets things done quicker and you don't have to worry about much things when working with a group. When you have a group, they could be doing something else while you do another thing at the same time. However, having to do all that stuff by yourself slows you down and might not have time to finish. Your group and you are all doing something and that makes everything go quicker because your not doing it all by yourself. If you work alone you could be stressed and have to think of all the ideas. Working in a group can really bring more ideas to the stuff you and your group are working on. Also, you can divide the work with your group members and make things faster.
Second, sharing the ideas with your group can be helpful. It can also be very fun working with other people and having different opinions around. Someone in your group can be the most creative person and really help out on what you are working on. If you don't share your ideas then whats the point of being in the group. Everyone needs to have something to say and something to work on. If you work alone you will miss the opportunity to have someone helping you and have an opinion on it because when you present it, other people might something to say about it. Working alone can be frustrating and exhausting for some people because when they don't know something on one will be there to help them. Also, having to work alone might make you to multitask a lot and difficult for you to finish on what you are doing.
Last, shows teamwork and that teamwork makes everything better than having to work alone. When you show teamwork with your group it shows that all of you can be leaders in that group. Working in a group can be really fun because you be partnered up and meet new people or be with the same people you know and make the work effort exciting. When being in a group, you can your part while everyone else does theirs and it makes everything go quicker.
In conclusion, I would prefer working with a group than working alone because working with a group make things much easier and less work too. I wouldn't want to work alone because I wouldnt have anyone to discuss and share my opinions with. Having to do all that work by yourself can be very difficult in the process; things may not come out the way it should. Also, when you work alone you might not have many ideas to think of and with a group you can. Working by yourself may not be as much fun as in a group. If you had a group you would be able to divide the work, but working on something by yourself probably make it two times harder. That's why I think that working in a group is more beneficial than working all alone. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
57D4C53890E6 | should students be required to take a music class, a drama, or an art class. Some will agree and some wont. Every student has diffents talents, or are intrested in diffrent activities and subjects. Why cant students have the advantage of chosing class that fit to there prefrance. Studnets should be able to take a class that is intresting to them that does'nt have to do wwith music, drama, or art. Some students would like to take class for the opportunity of graduate earily. Others would like to take classes that are based on future careers that are intreging to them.
Having to take a class that is based on art or drama and not being good or intrested in it must be a little fustrating to a studnet. Studnets most likely will lose focuse or wonder off in class if not intrested. Sometimes might even oviod the class. As a studnet myself i amdit that losing focuse in class when not being intrested came very easy to me. Not only does it cause the sttudent fustraction but it also causes the teacher fustration to see a student not pertesapating in class.
School is a piec of pie for some students and having to take classes that are an easy A seems to be a wast of time for some studnets that would like to get high school over with and jump right into college. Some high school provide studnets free college credit classes that benifits fanatuly wise and skill wise. Having more then enough credits helps the student one graduate early and two have credits even before starting college. Taking advance classes or college credit classes looks really good on college resmates.
What if the students would have the advantge of having a glance of the career that they are intrested during high school. Not ever studnets know the career or path that they would like to take during high school, but some stduents do know. Also why not giving those students that are confused or lost about what career they would like to mager in college an opprtunity to expermant classes during high scchool. For example in my high school there is a program called career center where high schoolers are able to take classes that are based on intrest that they have some examples; cooking classes, amimal science, tec, child care and ect. Imagin if every student had the opprtunity to expermint careers early.
Every studnet has diffrent skills and intrest. why cant the school system benfit every student and give the opprtunity to make a students distuction a lot more easir when it comes to what intrest the student and choosing what colleges to attend to. Not every studnent is the same why treat them the same way. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
57DFE525E50A | Ever since I was in elementary school I have had an interest in your company. Technology was not as big as it is today, but for some reason I have always shown interest in the products that your company has made. When you created the windows PC it revolutionized the world of technology, and ever since then I have been taking technology classes, programming classes, and even engineering classes so that one day I can created something of my own or even be a part of something surrounding your companies work. It would mean a lot if you gave me the chance to come visit your company and learn about the things your company does such as, what type of work your employees do throughout the week, the environment among and which your employees work in, and how you maintain your servers for your computers across the world I would also like to learn a little bit more of your journey as an entrepreneur in your early days, the sacrifices you had to make and the chances you took to get where you are today.
I am the perfect candidate to be picked as an intern for your company because of the fact that i have dedicated my life to technology and even followed your footsteps. I know everything there is to know about computer science, programming, and engineering. Out of all the companies that deal with computers, yours is by far the best. I have researched everything about your company going back to the roots when you were in the garage building your computer and programming them to now being one of the richest men in the world having your employees build them for you. I aspire to become a great man like you and this the perfect opportunity to show you and everyone else what i am capable of. I believe that if you choose me as your intern you will gain an even greater advantage in the world of business and technology, I have a certain set of skills that allow me to learn things quick about human behavior and gain the advantage over competing companies i have studied the nature of consumers and i know exactly what they like to see and hear, having me learn a thing or two from you will give not only me a learning experience but you as well.
Giving me the chance to see your company work in person is one of my life goals and it would be an honor to learn how you managed to become not only one of the richest men in the world but also learn what made you decide to take on a challenge such as technology giving that it was one of the hardest things to adapt to in your time. You managed on your own to create something as big as your company with just an idea and some programs. Learning something from you is a once in a lifetime thing that probably never happens to most up and coming entrepreneurs like me. Giving me this chance not only helps me but it helps my family and my community. we live in a small town with not much technology and my dream is to change that I want the people in my town to experience the wonders of technology i want to show them that i learned everything I know from the man who started it all, the man who revolutionized the world.
In conclusion, giving me the chance to see the work you have created will spark something new in this world of technology. I have followed your footsteps, i have dedicated my life to technology and engineering. However with this opportunity i will create something of my own for my home town so that all my family members and towns people can experience the joys of technology. | 4 | 4.5 | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
57E8161AEF27 | I think It's a really good idea, And students they will benefit with this idea, Bacuse they don't have to travel to school eveyday, it will be a better option taking the classes only or video conferencing because is soo much easier. And i think is more beneficial beacuse i dont think, Students would want to travel eveyday to school and back.
I think students they will benefit with this idea, because they are not going to spend that much money, In traveling to school eveyday. It will be so much easier taking classes only, because students will have more free time to do their own things, after they're done with all their schoolo work at home: for example; if the students works it will be a better option of taking classes only because he/she will have more time in getting ready for work, and been on time to work.
Reasons why I say it will be a better option taking the classes only or video conferencing, It's because students they don't have to worry, about gettig in trauble for been late to school, Because if students will travel to school schoool, there will be a high posibility of not getting to school on time sometimes it can be for many reasons; for example: traffict issus, parents they might get sick or any other reason, It will be really hard for this students if schools wouldn't offer away to study and learn at home, schools they make it easier for this students who aren't able to come to school, Myself as student i think this is a really good idea made by the school, Bacuse it gives students the oportnity of study at home when they aren't caplable to show up to school for this type of reasons.
I am agree with schools that offers distance learning as an option for the students, Because some students don't have the ability as others students, That has the oportunity of riding the bus to school everyday from Monday to Friday, This students who takes online classes is because they really need it, And they don't have a way of getting to school eveyday , It might be more difficult for them , because they might not have someone to explain them as well as a teacher. Another reason why i think some students students take only classes is because some classes that they like, some school don't have them, and they really want to know about it, Aslo sometimes parents look trought schools to see the classes option they have online so they can apply to see if their sons can takes those classes online to learn about it. One of the major reason why student take classes online sometimes is because they don't have enaught credits, so they have to take classes online, Becuase even if they come to school they won't be able to graduate because they dont have all the credits needed, Some students don't live near the schools to come all the way to school so they decide to take the classes at home. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
57ED5BC70E40 | Dear Generic_Name
I believe that working in a group is way better than working by yourself, get to do less work than working alone .
Working with a group is more beneficial than working alone because when your working alone and you need help there's no one to help you,but when your in a group you get all the help you need.
When i work by myself i usually dont get my work completed. Sometimes i be wondering what are we supposed to be doing. However working by yourself in cress your chances of staying focused and productive. Although you got a better chances of getting a good grade when you work in a group. It all depends on the group if they like to work with each other. Also you could easily get distracted by your own group mates ,but the all depends on the group and the communication they have with each others.
My final reason is that working in a group is better than working alone you get your work done faster than you usually would have alone. There for working in a group has more beneficial like make new friends and new people. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
5807D5F42CEB | This is why employers should hire me. Employers should hire me because I can show hard work, really good hospitality, and good communication skills. These make a good employee.
First reason why employers should hire me is because I show hard work. Hard work is essential because the harder you work the more you get done, and that's really helpful. For example, if you're playing soccer and you are trying to score a goal, you can't just score it magically while just standing there doing nothing. You have to work hard to score the goal by running, passing, and communicating with your team. All of that relates to hard work.
Second reason why employers should hire me is because I show really great hospitality. This is really important because the more comfortable you can make the customer, the more they will enjoy the place and like it. For example if you're working at a hotel and a customer walks in, and right away you are not nice to them. They will start hating the place and they won't come back again. On the other hand if you're nice to them and make sure they enjoying their time. They will love the hotel and will always want to come back in the future.
Last reason why employers should hire me is because I show really good communication skills. This is yet another really important characteristic to have as an employee. The reason being is because if you can't communicate well with a customer, they will have a really time figuring out what they need to do. For example, if you are working at a shop and a customer walks in and asks you for a specific thing. Then you start to get nervous because you don't know what to say or how to act, then they will have a hard time trying to find that specific thing because you didn't know how to communicate.
These are the reasons of why employers should hire me. Employers should think of hiring me because I can show hard work, great hospitality, and good communication. And having these three characteristics makes an awesome employee. That's why employers should hire me. | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
58255BF759C0 | Imagine if community parks, state parks, and national parks provided a wide variety of interesting activities. Would you visit and tryout these activities? Would you tell a friend to come tryout these activities? I will be writing about two enjoyable ways to spend outdoors.
One enjoyable way to spend time outdoors is by playing sports. I say this because everybody loves playing sports both girls and boys like to play sports. People can choose to play soccer, basketball, baseball, or golf. These activities are enjoyable because people like to be active and when their active they play sports they go outside to play sports. They can play in competition or just scoring points whichever way is best to have fun.
Another enjoyable way to spend time outdoors is going to a pool. I say this because people like to swim when it's hot outside to cool them down a little. People can go to a community pool for people who know how to swim and for people who don't know how to swim. The people at the community pool can teach others how to swim but it's gonna cost some money but its worth it. I say this is enjoyable because people like to have fun in the pool especially if it's during the summer . People can swim and play volleyball or play catch while in the pool to have fun.
Inconclusion if community parks, state parks, and national parks provided a wide variety of activities people would go visit the place try them out and have fun. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
5828FAC247DF | Should student commit their career at a young age ?
In this statement i will argue if student should commit to chopse their career at a young age. In my opinion, i think student should think about their career at a young age. First reason why they should think about their career is because they could know some step of how to get into their career. They woukd know some steps on what to study or in other words know what classes are the right one to take. An example is that when i was in high school i didn't know what to study for. my teachers couldn't find the right classes for me to take. Most student get into high school without knowing what they would want to study for. Another example was that when i got into high school they ask me for my career i told them what i wanted to be. Once i got into 10 grade i change my mind and decided to change my career. When i try to get into my step for my second career it was already too late to apply which made me now find my own way to get into the career i wanted to be in. Most student get into high school with out knowing what they want to study for. Another reason is that when they don't know what to study for as their career, They don't find a way after in how to get into collage. It is always a good first step as a high schoolar to know what they want to be. Last exapmple is that i didn't think about my career when i was in middle school and now in my high school year i didn't get into any of my career i wanted to study for. When you know what you want your career to be teachers help you get the right classes. Teachers also help you get into the collage you want to study for your career. Some people think knowing what they want to study for before going to high school is just a rush thing for them. People be saying it's too early to know or think about your career. In my conclusion, Most student should know at their young age what they wanna be. My advice to all the young student making their way to high school they should start thinking what they want to be. When they get into high school they will know what to do, how to apply and they would know what classes are just right for them to take for their career. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
583DC3D2E7FC | I think that people who graduate a year early to go into the workforce, or start college early isn't a good idea or decision. People end up missing out on a lot of High school experiences. High school should be about making memories and making the best out of the four years they have left. Having time to be focusing on deciding what kind of career they want to have in the future. High school gets people ready for deciding about what they want to be when they grow up.
People who finish High school early might not be 100% sure on what they want to do or what they want to be. Also, having to take summer courses and classes takes away from having a summer and enjoying it. Spending time with family and friends, traveling. Although people have the ability to finish early you'd end up missing summer and always working on classes,doing projects,doing homework,or extra credit assignments,etc. Even though most people who finish early have a lot of pressure on them to try and get the most work done so they can finish early. It could get stressful because they're studying for exams and trying to stay on top of their grades and assignments.
I think it's better to have the full 4 years of high school because you would have more time to do things like sports, clubs,etc. Being apart of a team. Going to games and competitions. Going to powder puff home, football games, etc. Also if you're apart of a club like Photography,choir,film, or any club they would be able to make a lot more memories and have time.
Especially During their last year of high school. Missing out on senior events, senior class trips,having fun being a senior. Having Senior privileges, early release, late arrival, Eating at lunch in the senior patio. Having senior class trips, Graduating. finishing all your assignments and getting out of school a month early. Getting senior class rings, having memories of getting ready the day or night of graduation. During your senior year since your almost done with High school you get to have less classes because you have all your credits.
In conclusion i think it's best if people don't graduate early because they'd miss out on the full 4 years high school experience. Being able to make memories with friends, meeting new people throughout the 4 years. Participating in school clubs and sports teams. Making the most out of high school events like homecoming, and prom. I believe it's better and easier to graduate after the four years. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 |
584A4BB1E954 | Should these summer projects be teacher-designed or student-designed ? I think students should designed. students can do this well.
One reason why summer projects from students. Because if the student designed their project they can choose their projects. For example, some students need an essay project but teachers give harder projects for students and they can't do this projects. And some students not have idea about the projects from teachers but when students choose their projects they have good ideas about their projects. However, some teachers did not like to students choose their projects .This is not the only reason summer projects from students is good.
Some may argue summer projects from teachers is good. This is because the teachers have more information about summer projects and they know what kind of projects is better for students. However, some students not have information about summer projects and they did not like to complete the summer projects from teachers in the summer.
In conclusion, I think the students need to choose their projects because if they choose their projects they like the summer projects and they really want to complete their projects in the summer vacation and they have good ideas about the projects. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
584C6453CA5A | A small kindness can change a person because if the person sees you helping someone he will know that helping is the right thing to do instead of doing nothing to help a person and that guy is ganna help than others will start helping, and before you know the whole country might help but if you don't choose to help and instead you want to bully or be mean or hurt people, nobody is ganna help you or say to the person to stop instead they will start doing it, in life you have to choose a side if you want to be good or bad, stop bullying or help the bully, stop a person from hurting a nother person or help them hurt that person you have to choose, if you choose "good" people will follow you and start doing it and respect you but if you choose the "bad" people will follow you but they wont respect you the way you want them to and before you know the whole city or town will hate you from what you started. | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
58567312BDAB | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way online or video conferencing. Students would not benefit from being able to attent classes from home because: students would not have a social communication with their classmates, students would not ask questions to the teacher for help when they need it, and students would not participate in class activies or projects.
Firstly, students would not have a social communication with their classmates because students are taking classes at home, there is not a way to meet new friends. For example, in the school students would know different types of people, races,and cultures. Also, students would know each other, share special moments, and have a friendship. Secondly, students would not be able to ask questions to the teacher because they are at home, taking classes online, sometimes students get confused or they have some question but they can not ask to the teacher. For example, students do not understand something, it is hard for them to ask about it because there is not a teacher who would answer all the questions that they need or if they are doing a homework and they get confused, it would be hard for them to finish it because they do not know if they are doing right or wrong their homework. Thirdly, students would not be able to participate in class activities or projects because they are taking classes by themselves at home. For example, in the school, students can work in groups projects, expositions, and activies. Moreover, when students work in groups, they can learn how other students work, the tecniques that they use and skill that they have.
In contrast, some students would benefit for taking classes online from home because, students feel safety at home, some students live far away of the school and they do not have transportation. Also, some students have jobs and other responsablities.
In conclusion, some students would not benefit from taking classes online from home becasue, they would not have a social communication, they would not ask question os ask for help, and they would not participate in class activies. | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
588B09153941 | No i do not consider that extra two hours a day beacuse it will be a little hard on the students.
10 hours is a lot of hours for a student to be in school and each class would be 2 hours per lucture and that would be stressfull and long. And also there wouln"t be enough time for after school activities if school end at 5p. m and 85% of the students in school join a sport or a band, so if they do practies or the lesson will end late and the students would be tried once they get home and there would be no time for their homework or if you have a test the day after it would be a inconvienes for me to stay up all night to study and get up a couple of hours later and go back to school. And just bcause the businesses extended there work week schdule doesn"t mean student have to beacuse the grown people that have a job its easy for them to work an extra two hours because they dont have all this extra resposiblity a student has.
Plus the people that work get paid by salary or hourly so it really doesn"t matter to them their getting paid regarless if they work 2 hours or 10 hours and students don"t. So i feel like its unfair for ya"ll to add extra school hours to student"s . | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 |
589CEB00ED37 | Why is having a good behavior when trying to influence or per swaying others? Lets see humans have a brain with that they have emotions, habits, and other cool stuff in the brain. You see people have to talk with one and each other if they don't they will slowing go insane. Some people may say "why bring up the brain" you see the brain is what controls your thoughts or emotions of someone or something.
Lets see If someone was feeling down after a person's family pass way, you will try to influence him to move on, but to do that you have to talk to him with a calming voice so can he will feel more relaxed and calm. Why did his mood change? because the person that helped the other person knew by speaking calmly to his friend that he would always have him by his side. If you talk to him with a mean tone, he will get aggressive with you, he would start attacking for not caring about his lose. Because you chose a behavior that didn't fit with the situation, you just made him more mad and now he wouldn't trust you with anything.
When at war and you feel like the enemy side is going to run over you, the commander of the army will say a speech to light up the mood of his soldiers by telling them "this wouldn't be the end but a new beginning of the war, if we die, we die for our country and for our families." The commander influence the soldiers that the war is not over yet it's just the beginning and if they die, they die for a reason to protect the innocents back home. why did the commander bring up their families? As a person would you want to see your wife, sons, or daughters suffer from people whos wants to hurt them. It gives the soldiers a boost and a reason to fight to protect the people they love. The commander influence them to fight to protect their love ones.
World War 2, Germany has lost everything money, land, and people. So a dictator name Adolf told to himself that the Americans and the Jews were the problem. Adolf when to a social club and told the people in that club that he was mad at the Americans for taking everything from them and that they should fight to get their land back. The people in the club agreed with Adolf that they should fight. So you see now how Adolf influence the people in Germany by his anger at America. He had a group of German people to fight against his side and over through the president of Germany.
The best way to influence someone is by that person's behaviors towards them. If you have some disagreements a law, you will try to influence people to agree with you that this law doesn't seem fair. Influence people at your job for better working conditions or more time in your breaks, and what would be your behavior angry because you feel like you are not being treated fairly like the higher ups. The person's behavior will define the influence you make on them, it could good or bad it just depends on what behavior you choose.
Every single person in this world has an opinion and view points on this world and when they feel like something is fair or not fair, they would share their opinions with other people and they would choose their tone to per sway other to follow them. To influence others you have to have the same behavior as the people you are trying to influence or it wouldn't work as well if you have the same behavior. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
58A9AE90D009 | What I think about extending two more hours in school would be a bad idea because school can be very stressful and give you so much work that can cause people headaches and won't even have time to do their homework at home and they would get really tired and sleepy that looks like their brain will explode with so much work they do and they would have health problems too a person would not resist too much of their body either.
My opinion about it is that they should keep the five-day school week instead of four because I think it's really unnecessary to add more hours to school and take one more day of off. I think if that happens they will take the time from other students time with what they are doing outside of school and activities. The idea would be very pointless and useless. I think five days of school is better than four because five days they have seven hours of school and it's shorter. For me I would get really stressed with more hours of school be more hours means more work to do and I would get really tired of doing so much work and I would get really exhausted. People would have many things in their head and worry too much about it that would cause so many stress and a headache and it would not be good for them.
I think there is some other way to conserve energy and resources than adding hours to school and work. For example they should take care of the earth by recycling and cleaning the water and save up energy. I think it is the best idea to conserve energy and resources because it really important to take care of the earth and learn how to take care of the earth. Many people these days are careless and would prefer to do it in another way like adding more hours to school which is not helpful and that won't do nothing of helping energy and resources, so we have to do another way to conserve it. What I think people should use their brains and do what's best for the whole world and every around us and be helpful. Like for example restore energy would be a good idea or volunteer would be another thing to help the planet, there are so many ways you can do it and how you can do it so it would be really helpful if Everyone would join doing it.
Many people would be disappointed for adding hours because they are subtracting their time and very important things they have to do. A lot of people that over work themselves means their they would get really tired and lazy and the community would be very disappointing and out of control. Another problem would be that if they overwork and get tired and them while driving and could get into to a car accident and that's another why their are so many accidents happening lately and that is really bad so it is a bad idea.
Know one would agree to work more hours and that would cause them to have health problems and their body does not take to much exhaustion in them and that is really dangerous and would risk their life's for it, i would not over work myself if I were them that is too much to Handel and would get me sick too that my body would not take it either so no it would be a really bad idea. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
58E485E875D5 | Try your best' Many people say this sentence to people who have test or have thier own projects. Because trying the best you can, will make better result than doing nothing. Like this, always doing something can accomplish more. More you tried, better result will came out. Such as Edison and many people who live successful life in our society.
First, There will be many mistake while making a decision. But we need to keep thinking of it and find a way. Example, Edison, who made a light bulb, do you think did he make it without mistake? No, there are a lot of failed experiments and mistakes. But he didn't stop to make it. He did keep practicing and, figure out other way to success making the light bulb.
Second, in our society, there are a lot of people who accomplish more than other. Almost of them always did something like practice their experiment, find a way to figure out it, think about their purpose and each way to make it correct. Also they wanted to solve question of their problems. People can't be inactivity to do these. Doing a lot of work, and never to be idle, can accomplish more.
Third, some people can say 'There are people who didn't work that much but live successful life'. If there are? That people was really lucky. Almost of them, there is no one who accomplish more, with out any effort. Idle people do not focus on their project then, how can they make the result better? Example, someone who practice everyday and, work until late night will accomplish more than lazy one.
Lastly, try a lot of thing and keep doing something will make you grow. Sometimes inactivity can help you to rest and releax your selves but if we being more activity and always doing something, we can accomplish more. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
58EBDB3621E5 | Students would benefit, from being able to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. There are a lot of kids with disabilities who wants to go to school but they are afraid of being bullied by other students in school.
There are some parents who are in college, and have many responsibilities and still needs education. There are some other kids that needs to go to school but can't get out of their houses because of their sickness or health conditions.
The first reason why students would benefit from attending classes from home by way of online or video conferencing, is because of those kids with disabilities who wants to go to school ,but are afraid of being bullied because of their physical appearance. I remember when i was young , i used to get bullied in school because of my bow legs. Kids could laugh at me , and that used to hurt my feelings at the point of not willing to go to school.
This same thing is still happening today to a lot of kids in different schools , that they don't want to go to school because of being bullied and judge for their physical appearance yet they can't do nothing about it . That's why classes from home by way of online would be so important to kids who are going through this kind of situations.
The second reason is because of the parents who are in college and have many responsibilities, as taking care of their families and work, but still needs education.
Last year my sister had a baby, yet she was getting ready to graduate in college. She couldn't stop studying just because she got a baby. The online classes from home helped her a lot , because she was able to nurse her baby and take her classes at the same time.
The third reason is because of those kids that needs to go to school, but can't even dare get out of their houses because of their sickness. I had a friend who had a very bad disease that could't allow her go outside where there is sunlight because it could burn her skin. She wanted to go to school but she couldn't because of her health condition. The classes from home by way of online helped her finished her high school studies and graduated.
Some people may disagree by saying that students wouldn't benefit from being able to attend classes from home by way of online, because they won't have fun, make friends and other things, however i believe that they would benefit because a lot of those students who take classes from home by the way of online, ends up finishing their studies, and their wouldn't be any difference from the one who made it in school. Having friends and fun is good but ain't the priority , the priority is to get what's important and what will help in the future.
Yes, students have a huge benefit ,from being able to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
58EF6CAF956B | Do you want to know the reason why it is important to have someone who can share wisdom and experience with you? Well, I know there are a lot of reason. The benefit of having someone who shared wisdom and experience with you is that, people will show new things, you will get an opportunity to learn new things, and you won't feel like you are the only one who is experiencing this.
When my friend shared how she overcome being alone, because she couldn't speak English well, I realize that I can overcome being alone too. It was hard for me to talk with the other kids, because I was afraid that they will laugh at me, because I couldn't speak well, and then my friend says "try to talk with them, otherwise you won't be able to speak with them,". After that, she told me If I want to communicate, I need to be confident. Like that, She shared her experience.
The another benefit is that you can learn new things from the person who shared their wisdom to you. When they tell you about their experience, you will gain strength from it and you won't be afraid to do new things. When the people who tell you about their experience see you doing new things, they will support you, so that your experience will be memorable.
There are times when you feel like you are the only one who is experiencing this, but when someone tells you about their story, you will feel that you are not the only one who is feeling like this. When they shared their story, you will gain an opportunity to make new friend. You two will share your feeling about the experience and become closer. On the other hand, the funny and the sad stories will make you two have fun while you talk.
Since you know that there are a lot of reasons to share your experience, I wish you could use them to share your wisdom in the future. Don't you think it is the time for you to seek and ask other people's experience? | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
58F6D70A2DC7 | Should the city council adopt the 10:00 P.M. curfew?
Curfews keep teenagers out of trouble because it keeps most of the teenagers by not sneaking out of their houses, and not getting into bad habits.
The curfew would keep teenagers safe by the increase of robberies.
The curfew would save teenagers out of trouble by not letting teenagers go outside by them selves. The curfew helps teenagers feel safe that they would be no one in the streets.
When teenagers are left home alone, they get scared because they are by themselves and they are afraid that someone would break into their house. Most house robberies occur at night and it makes teenagers worry that robberies can take place anywhere. Teenagers regret going anywhere at night because of the curfew and robbers. Some teenagers does not like going outside at night when there is a curfew because they don't want to break the law, and they don't want to get kidnapped. Some teenagers won't go outside either because they are scared of dark, and that kidnappers with catch them, because robbers and kidnappers are often out in midnight. Teenagers, that know why the curfew is on, they will obey the law and not break the law.
Teenagers often walk to stores at night to grab snacks, or drinks, the curfew will help them not go to stores at midnight. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
5902C2E86345 | Is influencing others other even a good? I believe that there are better ways to influence other than just by your own. One other better way is to look at other people and see how they have seceded in life. Another way is to see ones appearance and how they act. Others think differently and believe that your own behavior the the best to influence others.
My first reason why I believe there are better ways to influence other is one will look at other and want to be like them. This will want him or she to start and think on what they want for them selves. Maybe they do not know what they want to be yet when they grow up. So by seeing others and how they have seceded they are going to want to try new things. Looking at others by can also help the influence them by what not to do and learn form others mistakes. This could help them start on the right way. Thats why feel like looking at other can influence others.
My second reason is ones appearance cause when someone sees someone they judge off your appearance and how you act. The way someone else looks will want them to be like you if you are dressed with a suit and tie. That is because a person that is dressed sharp or elegant makes you look prfecinal Also seeing others the way they act can influence others to want to act like them. They might see how other act towards them and them probably want other to act the same with him or herself.
Others think differently and feel that your own behavior is the best way to influence one another. Some people might believe this because one person could impact one person so much that it will want that other person to do the same. I feel like that not the best way cause its hard for just one person to do so much. I feel like one person can not do as much as many other people can.
Therefore,this is why I feel like there are better ways to influence others than your own. Like notice others and see how good they are doing in live and might get inspired. Another is a way one looks to someone or they way they are as a person. Others might think the opposite and say that ones owns actions it the most impact full way on other people. This is why believe that one persons actions is not the best way to influence others. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
5902D762C891 | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing? my opinions students should be benefit from being able to attend classes from home because, sometime students doesn't have time when students free they will be done online class or homework, test,assessment. some students doesn't have parents so,they need to work and make money pay for rent and food. some time they will be sick and they won't attend class. some time students take action and going to visiting some place they will be attend online classes. now every area social online. Students use phone they will looking for YouTube,and they learn some think there video. when students doing online classes attend if they didn't know that they will be taping the Google and students get some information.
First, students should be benefit from being able to attend classes from home because, sometime students doesn't have time when students free they will be done there homework,test, assessment. some word students doesn't understand but they will be taping on the phone and translation from another languish or they will be looking for dictionary. where students doesn't matter because they will be doing online class any area, any place. example:-1. students traveling to bus workplace,rest time, talk to another person. many parent think students does,t leading any think at home they are always use the phone and play game, taxing masses,talk to another person said parent, But not like that one because they will leading some think there. student taxing another person students learning to spell correct. when student talk to friend the will learn to correct tone.
Second, students should be benefit from being able to attend classes from home because,some students doesn't have parents so, they need to work and make money pay for rent and food. Students work a lot so,students not attend classes. i know how will be going to schools they leaning a lot. when students not understand teacher enplane every think and explain math. at schools have time what time students enter the class what time go to next class and what time lunch every think teacher make time table. students follow the rule. some students it's fine this rule some students it's not find this rule. So, students at home take online classes they will be make a time table. Schools have teacher to learn and at home we have friend,brother and sister every body teach them. if students does't have a family they will call the friend and talk and discourse to the project and homework. My be they doing go to Google and taping problem sentence and students gets some answer. Students learn to fast looking for video.
Third, students should be benefit from being able to attend classes from home because, some time students will be sick and students won't attend classes. if that time students have online classes students doing homework and project,assessment at hospital and at home. Students sitting in the hospital they are boring if students have some attend class they are doing some online classes. And they students have time going to fast. Students attend classes finish they doing some plan. But, students doesn't to make plant January is to rarely to know this information because, students plan after depend school on there teacher and consular. And summer , winter vacation too and there plane my be change. So, students,would benefit from being able to attend classes from at home.
Finally, students should be benefit from being able to attend classes from home because, now every area social online. So, some time students take vacation and going to visiting some place and they will be attend onion classes. students use of cellphone with at home and work traveling time so students attend online classes. schools have five day a week a class so students want to spent time with family. students want to go to vacation with family looking for new place. students want to all the time free. they don't want stay one place. When students will be go to new place students mind fresh and they think they will be doing every thing. So online classes should benefit for students. When student mind fresh there mind new think they learn new word. So students active doing every thing and students tell there friends and they will be decide go to there pace. There are learn for social and active physic subject.
In conclusion, students should be benefit from being able to attend classes from home now every area social online so, use of cellphone and computer,lop tap with doing attend the classes at home. we are looking for video and talk with friend,we are learn some think there video. if students have online classes students make some plan going out side with family and friends and students doing to attend online classes. Now students very smarts because students attend online classes and students no depend any body all. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
591164D3C800 | I agree with Albert Schweitzer " Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is he only thing." Setting a example to others it's the best way to influence others because for example there are two students named Generic_Name and Generic_Name. Both of them are in the same school. Generic_Name has good grades he is always doing his school work, never dose anything to upset the teachers or get in terable while Generic_Name is the complet opposite.
Generic_Name has poor grades, always talking back to his teachers and never dose his school work he also get in to fights with other students. Generic_Name has a idea he wants to help Generic_Name to become a better person and influence him to do well in school. Generic_Name have the same first block class as Generic_Name. Generic_Name decided to get bad grades and talk back to his teachers.
Generic_Name is doing all of this because he wants Generic_Name to realize just because you have bad grades in school that dose not mean you can not change that. The next day Generic_Name gets good grade he apolegize to his teachers and Generic_Name seas Generic_Name having bad geades and the next day Generic_Name change that and started doing good agine. Generic_Name thinks to him self if Generic_Name can change so can I. The first thing he dose is to go and apolagize to his teachers for being rude he started studing, getting good grades. The moral of this was that some one's behavior could have a influence on others this is why I agree with Albert Schweitzer. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
5915757AEE1A | Let's be honest technology is the best way to convert our things more easy or speak with family's who are really far away;technology can do things that you never could do in one or two hours,I'm going to tell my experience with the technology,When I became to the United state,because I'm from Generic_City and my first thing to come to my head was. what happen if go to school in then,I don't know. how to use a computer,because in Generic_City,we have nothing of technology in our school,so was my first day in one American school,I was so scary,the teacher give us a computer for work in a homework and then was so confuse,I ask one student who was close to me,I say can you help the with computer. how to sign in? and he says yes I can help you with that,two days later I learn how to sign in,but that was not the complicated thing,the complicated thing was search things in Google,next day the teacher give us another homework to do the class,the was so hard for me it was find seven president with his correctly description,I take a decision go to library and take the hard way to do my homework,the teacher give of one day to do this,I star to find this read and read each book contain at least one full page for find the information then I was looking for,I give my homework to the teacher,but I see someone's homework he tell me he did his homework with computer and I say wow,also the teacher was telling everybody the best way to do the was in Google this wed side have all the information that you need,I was so frustrated,I say in my head here in the United state find the easy's way by learning how to use the technology,now my goal was learn how to use this technology.
I ask the teacher to teach me a to how to use the technology,he tell stay after school and going to teach you OK.
That was my first class learning the basics things about about a computer. About three weeks I learn the basic things. That's the star of a new future for me. I am so wonderful for the people's that help in the moment now I can easy do my homework with the help of the technology. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
591B7E3E2B40 | When people ask for advice, they mostly don't talk to one person they talk to more then one. This can help you and other people to make a better choice. They can give you more opinions. You would have more people to talk. They all have different ideas.
One reason that can help you and other people to make a better choice is talking with more people other then one. When you are talking to more then one person they have more opinions then one person. Making a cirlce and talking about what you think is going to help you make a better choice could help more then one person. If you think that one opinion is not going you make you do a better choice you have another choice to make.
Talking to more people for an advice. They could have different ideas that you can help you with the right choice that you want to make. You can hear different people taliking and not only one. If you and other people think that the choice that you are going to make is not a good choice you have more then one person to talk to. You would have more people that will help you with your adice.
This are my reasons why this can help more people make a better choice. They are many more reasons that can help people to make a better choice. If you are talking to one person they are going to help you but if you are talking with more then one person. You have a better chance to make a good choice. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
5923F6631724 | ' Why do we have to go school for eight and a half hours for five days per week? We can't do anything after school!'' Please imagine that situation. If that situation became for real, how are students going to react to it? Of course, they are going to be mad, and they might have more stress. Therefore, although some people agree with adding one and a half hours to school each day because students can have time for studying, and it is very educational for them, I disagree with that idea because it interferes their family time and after school activities, and it is going to become cause of they have more stress.
First of all, students can't have time for family and other activities. At recent, many kids hang out with their friends than families especially teenagers. I think students should have more family time to having great relationship with thier families. Additionally, some students have activities after school. Activity is an essential way to relax and have fun, and it also helps students find new hobbies and make new friends. As a result, if adding one and a half houres to school, it steals a lot of wonderful opportunities from students.
Second, it gives more stress to students. Some students have large amount of stress already. During the school week, they study for about seven hours per day, and sometimes they need to work on project and study for quizes and tests. Also, they have homework at least one subject everyday. That's why students have a lot of stress. To decrease their stress, school needs to give a time to relax for them after school.
In conclusion, adding more time to school has many disadvantages for students. Students need family time and time to work on their activities after school to have fun and relax. School is not a place that give a stress to them. School is a place that give a opportunity to get interesting knowledges to them. I believe school should overrule this idea if you think about students. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
593E2802E27C | Do you really think student are going to learn just sitting on their vidoeo game? The issue that the studenrs are going to come across is that they are not getting the help they need and they are not even smart enough. Stiudents studying at home is not something that should be allowed anywhere, although yes school is boring and there is nothing to do, but we should be blessed to have a free public school.
Other places around the world parents/gardians have to pay so much money that it is just redicouls and the majority of students don't go to school because they don't have the funds for it.
Home school should not be around, because the students are taking the bafit of the home and most of the home school student don't graduate or finish high school because they are too busy being home doing all the unimportant things when they should be in school getting work done and hopefully graduating. In case students do take the online schooling they should at least have someone monter them and see the progress they have done every wee or two, this way it is going to lower the mount for students that don't graduate. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
597618D3F66C | Can more hours in school help conserve energy?. The way we can save energy is by going to school for 4 days , and being in school for 2 extra hours. I think it's a bad idea for the school to adopted the idea. This idea can make it harder for students that have things after school.
The disadvantages of adding two extra hours to school can cause a lot of problems for the student ,and the teachers. Especially for students that have jobs and, have activity after school like sports and clubs. Also the student will be tired after school and they will have less time hang out with friends after school .The teachers can also have problems because they can possibly live in a different county and they might need to leave earlier to pick up their kids from school. Either way i think it's a bad idea because it could ruin everyone daily routines.
The advantage to be in school longer is that you would be able to finish work on time. Have more time on test and quiz. Will be able to learn more things in class and get more time in a class. Therefor, teacher would rarely give out homework. Students would be able to take more class ,and even be able to graduate faster because we are in school longer. Also we will have four days a week in school ,so that's means we have three day off so we can get some rest. We might be able to get out of school faster became the amount of time we are in school.
Well I still think it's still a bad idea for school to start later because a lot of problems for students , and the teachers. I think the students won't like the idea because some students have work after school ,or they have to pick up their siblings from school. Or even have sports after school. Some teachers possibly live thirty-minutes away and they might need to get their kids ,and they might need to go to the store and get food for dinner. So that's why I think it's a bad idea to adopt the idea that the business is having because it's different between students and grown ups. Our job right is basically school because are there for seven hours a week. So i hope the school doesnt con stir this idea for school. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
597D76A3BF40 | I would like to start of this topic with a important question that no human being really thinks about, "How is technology impacting our health?" That is one of the most important questions that we can't leave unanswered.
The use of technology have rooted in our lives, from the moment we wake up till the moment we go to bed we have hundreds of interaction with various devices, software programs, and tools. Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having any contact with others. People can check out books, shop, and play games without speaking to any other person. The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had negative effects on people's lives.
While one might think that the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive effects on people's lives, others might think that the lack of human contact due to the use of technology had negative effects on people's lives which most people agree with.
When comparing two human beings, one human being that always uses technology to do everything, shop, check out books, play games, do homework, and even talk to friends or family members, that person is most likely going to get sick, be in a lot of pain, or even feel depressed sooner then the person that prefers not to use technology at all but instead of using technology they would rather go out to the store to buy a book, go out to the store to shop new clothes, and even instead of calling on the phone to check on a family member they would rather go out and see them in real life. The reason the person that uses technology more is more likely to get sick or be in pain sooner than the other one is because not only computers and devices encourage more sedentary behavior among users but they also frequently lead to poor posture, neck stain, back issues, and hearing loss. This sort of behavior can lead to chronic pain and discomfort that is hard and not really easy to treat.
Now that we have explained and understood this topic a little bit better let's go back to the question that we asked at the beginning, in case some of you guys forgot the question, the question was
"How is technology impacting our health?" If people really took the time to think about this question that we usually always leave unanswered we would have known that technology isn't impacting our health in any positive way, technology actually makes us stressed, makes our eye vision bad, gives us back pain, hearing loss, and a lot of other negative outcomes. Another reason why people might feel depressed when they use technology a lot, is because they don't really interact with people and dont have any friends since all they do is stay at home and do everything on their device. It's scientifically proved that every human being need at least one or more friends to talk to every time they feel down and don't feel really good about something. That is the reason why most of the people that use technology a lot, sometimes feel depressed and don't really like to interact with other people around them.
In conclusion , technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others and the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had a negative effect on people's life and if people don't learn how to control and manage their time and not use technology every chance they get, our next generation will be exactly the same as this one right now .The sad thing about the limitation of human contact due the use of technology is that there is no turning back at this point we are in a society where technological innovation and progression is the norm; It would take a minor miracle to reverse all this disaster. In order for all of this mess to get better,
people need to start learning about how to balance their time even if they're using technology, otherwise it is only going to get worse and many people will start feeling pain in their back, getting sick, feeling depressed due to the lack of interacting with people and due to the use of technology. | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
5985EA6F171A | I think is a good idea that the students start thinking about what they want to study in the college, what they want to be in the life, and they start preparing for the future in the high school. It is a good idea because they can start working when they are really young, It is a good idea too because they can make money when they are young, It is a good idea because they can buy they own things with their own money, like a house, a car, or whatever they want, and they can get graduate really young and that is the way to prepare you for something.
For example you can stop living with your family you can be indepent, nobody can tell you anything you can rent your own room just for you and you can have your own space, another example is that you are young maybe you make a wrong decision in the career that you choose but the good option is that you are young you already did the high school maybe you already work so you have money you can start another career more important something that these time you already liked because you are more older you know more about what you really want. Also in the work that you have you can study a little bit more and you can scale to another position too much better when you are young you're body don't feel so tired when you work because you have more energy, but when you are more older your body start feel tired, you start loose energy the sickness come your body hurt you have to go more to the doctor, so when you are young you can work more for you retirement.
In conclusion is a good idea that the students start commit a career at a young age because that are going to help them to be someone in the life, also that are gonna help them to be an important person. But the more important is that you are going to work in what do you love to do. The benefit of start preparing for a career since the high school is that you are going to be a young with a lot experience, also that help to the young students stop thinking on bad things, like cigar, tobacco, alcohol etc. Also help them keep their mind busy and to be in high school and not in the streets with bad friends that help them to keep a educational way. And is something that they are going to use in the life and is something that is good, what we need now is a societies based on education because that is a good thing because the education come with a lot of opportunities and with that opportunities the students can lear a lot, the learning is the best thing on the world. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
598C1E9B27C8 | Your character will be what you yourself choose to make. Do we choose our own character traits, or is our formed by influences beyond our control?
Examples:
1. Some people are influenced by friends
2. Everyone has their own life traits
3. Not everyone has bad traits
I believe everyone in this world has their own choice of traits but, their are some other people who are influenced by others which include, Friends,family, even people who don't know you well and dosen't wanna see you succeed and can hold you back your traits. But therefor there's people who follow their own good traits witch will lead you to a better and a successful life. Last but not least not everyone has bad traits some people will have a good influence on you witch could be good deed and take you the right way it all depends on you how you well your mind process to find out if its bad or good for your life.
1. I believe everyone in this world had their own trait of living some have good deed but some negative for example, bad traits can come from friends, family, even people not close to you i believe that because not everyone is raised with a happy living families which lead them to a bad trait of how they grew up but, on the other hand some are raised with a happy family which gave that person a good deed of living with good traits but again that could be ruin for you if you spending time with someone with bad traits.
2. Therefore everyone in the world has their own trait for Example people with success in life having big beautiful house and expansive cars had good traits which have lead them to a better life for the next generation but on the other hand bad traits will lead you to nothing but a bad life and negative traits and if you become friends with them and you had good trait you are being influenced and controlled by someone else, Some other traits can come from your relationships like if you have a girlfriend thats the worst influence that could change everything in your life and some can break you apart mentally but some can take you the right way examples of a bad relationship arguments,blaming yourself,hurting each other with actions. that could leave you with a scar you can't heal from and can bring bad traits for your future.
3. Last but not least not everyone is controlled and influenced by others because for example smart people, people will try to put you on negative deeds if you have a successful life they will hate and will try anything to take you off your path don't let any bad influence get to them and understand the fact they are trying to ruin your life, you have to step up for yourself and stay away from the bad influence that could control you and lead you a negative path my advise for the people who feel like they are being influenced and are controlled what you choose your character to be thats how your gonna be and how your gonna live so think to yourself and say what your traits are a negative or a positive. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
599128B82FF0 | Careers are important to succeed in life. students are interesting in a career that can help them in the future or in the present. In my personal life, I used to assist to a barbering career, I learn the basics. This had help me to cut some people hair by this I earn some extra money while I am In High School. Any career is hard but is vital in life. I believe that it is a good idea for students to join a career in a young age because they gain more experience, students can work in a young age. These are two major things why they should participate, sooner I'll explain it.
Students could gain more experience in a particular career. This is because the brain still fresh and is perfect to learn new things. Teenagers would be able to learn new things everyday. They can learn how to solve a simple thing, for example at home with electrical or mechanical issue. Furthermore, students could be able to be masters in the future of any career. They could be experts because they will have a longer period of time to practice and keep finding stuff to learn. If a person have experience they can even become managers.
A career would help to find better jobs. sometimes people see careers as a waste of time but, if a person go to a job with a career taking;that person is able to earn money. If a person have experience they can even become managers. Besides, students are able to work in a young age. They could work in summer break. I believe that this can help them to save money to go to college. Furthermore, teenagers are capable to practice their skills.
In conclusion, any career can be useful to succeed in life. Teenagers are able to choice their future. They could master the career to perfection. Students, because they are young they have time to learn a lot. They should decide to join one before is too late. This can help them to have a better future. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
59981B992996 | My first paragraph is , I think that some schools offer distance learning, for students because if they dont want to attend to school in the morning ; for example they can take that classes online, the classes that they miss the day they are out of the school . Students would be benefit from being able to attend classes from home, because if they are in High School and if they are in 12 grade , and they need some classes to pass they can take online that classes . Because if they dont pass that classes they are going to lose the year in High School , and all the students they are not going to graduated.
My second paragraph is , what I think is if schools offer classes online and/or video conferencing , to the students that means that they really want to help students when they dont attent to school. For instance ; that schools are really good they need to help all students that they need some help , if they offer that classes online is because they want all the students to work hard every single day at home or anywhere, they wanted to work on those classes online , and if you take classes online you can take notes to help you when you have to take a quiz about what you read and what you know.
If students deside to go school , they can take all the classes that they want to take . They can take in the school were they went but; if they don't want to take classes online its does't matter what they want to do if they work from home by the way online , they can work in the school if they want or at home if they wanted to work really hard without any reason and if you get good grades on that classes and you understand everything you can pass that classes.
That school's give us a oportunity to work on classes online , if we want to work with other's classes that we don't have yet . For example , if you at home don't have any internet , what you can do is if you want classes online you can go to the library and work on those classes there , you are not going to pay nothing if you work on that classes , they give you free that classes that's why the school's give you that option to you and for all the student's if you are a smart student and you study really hard , you can finish that clases in less than a moth but if you study hard every day at home or at school that can help you. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
59ADAA4D04E5 | People who value self they have defrine indidual to follow yea people should make theri decions becuse their odols and they go to new live they shold experts from a position odold have they problems which they can t do obothev they live i shold be respsbel for my self good friday waste my and parens time becuse is no good ifd you live weth your mother then you need follo ther rules bat if odeol what to live he can go onwer becuse he can desede take a position on thise people relince weith they problems if you are 21 then you are odold you can do aththing you whato | 1 | 1.5 | 1.5 | 2 | 1.5 | 1 |
59CE34172C44 | In my opinion it's a good idea to change the cafeteria menu, because in my school some time I have good menu but most the time I have bad food like class of food, and a lot of people don't like it, because every week they do the some food, that's why meny students they don't like cafeteria menu.
I think it's a good idea to change the price of the menu, because some students do not have money for buy lunch, and some people don't eat because don't have money, more when the cafeteria has a good menu.
In my opinion it's a good idea to know what menu has every day in the cafeteria, all the student want to know what is the menu every day.
I think the more import thing is change the time of one hour lunch because most the student want to talk with friends, and some student after eat, they want to go to one class room and talk about classes with the teachers.
In my opinion it's a good idea to change to a new menu because most of the students don't like the cafeteria food, for example in my school most the time I have bad food because they don't want to change the menu of the cafeteria, and all my friends we talk about the food and they said that most the people they don't like the cafeteria menu. Another importation thing about price of food, most of students don't have money to buy food because the price of the menu is high, it's good idea put all the price down and the students that don't have to much money can buy, and it's good idea to know what food the cafeteria has every day, for example they has to put a calendar in the fron door of the cafeteria and all the students can see what day has a good food. it's a good idea to change the lunch time, for example my school, I have one hour of lunch and after eat I can go anywhere, but most the time I go to my class room to do homework, or talk with my friends and I can learn more because they talk more about classes, games or friends. This it's a good idea for change all the thing about cafeteria menu. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
59E62F702421 | Students should be allowed to do that because they want to learn so much from the professions. They want to learn because this could be their future if they want to. Schools should often do it and will affect these students careers. Kids have these types of dreams that they want to do and learn to get into. They often have the right to ask anybody why these things will help students have a good career and a college degree. The main reason is that this can help kids so much and tell their parents what they learn.
The reason why schools should allow to do this so that kids can go to college and when they are done they can do the job forever and they get the emotion inside of them. Learning so much is the only thing that should help students in school to get all the information inside of their head so that can get them where they want to be. Some don't really have a good thing what they want to do when they are trying to think what they want to do in their life, but it can be a hard choice to decide. Things can really get so good when ever we decide what we tell our parents what we want to do for our lives and other people's too. What we think is that when we go out in the world and see what we think about or something that shocks you when you get so surprised about it and you get it in you head and thats what you want to do.
The job that kids want to do when ever they grow up is the only thing they want to do or something else that's more better than the other one. Things can often have many reasons why kids should get jobs and buy their own things so parents don't have waste any more of their money on them. It's a good thing that parents should make kids work for a job to get money and save up to go to college and have a good time. The thing is that schools have the right idea to teach kids what they should and what they should learn about. This is why it's the right idea to make schools teach students other things that they should. For kids that wanna play sports should really work hard on keeping track on what they should do at school of homework, projects and many other stuff. It's a good thing that kids should keep track on what they to do in order to pass the grade and graduate. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 |
5A3B42349C84 | Thomas Jefferson wrote
The president Thomas Jefferson wrote "it is wonderful how much may be done if we are doing." what these means is if your always work, even for society or for your self. Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something,or does inactivity also serve a purpose?. Some says inactivity serve a purpose because is a rest to get strong and keep working. Although some say always doing something is better because if you always work hard you get your goals and you are productive to the society.
Millions of people wake up every morning to work give all of them and make their best doing work, but what about people who don't work. Even if you can't find a job you can rapport to the society or your growth as a person. you can do social work or help people, you have to be an active person. Is important to say everybody needs to rest, but if you get to much rest you won't be able to reach your dreams and goals.
Do something always is good if your doing good things, work hard and passionate for what your do every person who work is for something. they want to reach goals dreams some of them got to pay to much thing or some of them just love work and make money or support your family. everybody works for something and that makes them work. My mom always tell me if you want something go for it, make it happen all of us needs a good future a better future, thats why you always have to do something. It is the reason why is better doing something than nothing.
Lets talk about the society view. In society you have to do something even if you have a dream or not because you gotta eat, where to live, pay bills, taxes and any needs that you have to cover so you have to have a job. And not just a job you can do other things to always do something like i said before help people that makes you growth as a person, and even tho is free or they pay you if you love what your do, or love to do a productive human for the society you will consider do good things.
Do something is important in the humanity because that makes these world work and grow up. dreams and goals make people do what their do. think about if you are a productive person or you does inactivity may be changes your mind. in conclusion the president Thomas Jefferson give us these quote to think about what do we do or what we should do on our life. Is good to take a break, but don't forget you have goals an dreams that you have to make them reality. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
5A74C94F9813 | I will like to visit new york because it is a fun place and there are a lot of things to do in new york and have stuff for you to like do and go to like places like muesams or stuff like that that you can visit I will like to visit the beach because of places oceans and like spend time with people you know and gonna go play basketball and going shopping and going to eat at a resurant and stuff and looking around and see if you like the places and stuff and going to roller coasters and flying a helicopter across the ocean and riding boats too and walking on the sand. I will like to visit Noth Carolinia because family is over there and places that you want to like be at or see and going shopping too and going to take a hike on the mountains and going driving and going to go see the rivers and going to go fishing up there and hunting too and going to go watch ball games and stuff and going to go watch animals up there and going to the zoo. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
5A89482533D9 | The tenchnology had negative and positive effects on peple's lives, becuase not all people know how to use corretly. One of he positeve affects that tenchnology had is that pepole can get their onw ustuff without contacts with others people. But also this have negative effects on people lives, For examlpe had the limitation on humans contacts.
The limitation on humas contacts is one of the biges problem in the society . Every time the tenchonogy advance more and faster, and every time it is more involved in our life , changing the dynamismics of society constlanty.
This also afect people in many ways it can be said that it is a threat to humanity because is make them dependent.
For example people that how like to do all their work at home they do not like to contacts with others, people they just have contact with their self and on my opinion that is not a good way,because you need to had contacts with the other peoples to understand how to do the work or any question that they have.
People had developed tenchnology as an aid to civilize ,adquiere more knowledge ,expende their social relationships But some people misuse it and abuse it by killing and creating threats to humanity so the world could be in crisis.
In comclution , The tenchnology had a negative effect on the society just for people that who know how to use corretly or because they think that tenchnology is everyting and they can do everyting with the tenchnology . | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
5A8CC59C2D7D | People in the day a day allow characters to be shape base in others personal opinion. Understandable people care about what and how others think about them. Especially if they are important persons like friends,family,or girlfriend in those cases People get afraid to loose them or make them unhappy.
"JOHN LUBBOCK" once wrote a amazing quote that speaks the true. "your character will be what you yourself choose to make of it. that quote along changed my mindset, many people would disagree with John and his way of thinking but i personal agree with what he wrote,theres a lot of true behind his words, People shouldn't focus about others opinions or let bad experiences or events shape its character. I personal believe characters arent beyond our control after all we are the ones that control our way of thinking and reacting to them. My self has seen my tree closes friends Generic_Name,Generic_Name and Generic_Name ended up really bad after they decide to let bad events,experiences, and opinions shape the way of their characters.
Generic_Name one of my closest friend decided to let one big events shape his character and at the end everything went wrong for my dear friend. When he was a little kid he contently got hit by his parents in he grew up mad and he started using violence at school he would get in trouble all the time and his parents would get super mad and would use violence against him too they say it was to "teach him a lesson" everything went like that for him until many years passed and he got married and he contently used violence every time she did something wrong, he was mad about what its parents did to him so he would always hit his wife until one day he end up killing her and himself.
Generic_Name my other close friend let experiences shape his character in a bad way.
when he was a young man falling a love with pretty girls many of those girls just wanted to play with his feelings. Those girls never took him seriously until one day he got tired of the way girls would treat him and he loose feeling and he become just like those girls he didn't like at first. My friend Generic_Name started playing with girls feeling and he end up by him self and never finding true love, one he got true love but bad experiences make him loose feelings for all females and he played the one true love he had.
Generic_Name friend of mine let opinions got the best of him, he was contently trying to be someone he wasn't just so people he love would love him back but at the end he was just hurting him self because he wasn't happy like that he was just lying to himself and acting for other people.
people dont let bad experiences events or opinion to shape the character you yourself control or every one would end up like my friends that decided to let others control what they would have to. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
5A977087E7E8 | Dear Principal; Changing the cafeteria lunch for a healthier lunch is a good idea. There is going to be new food, healthier food, and different types of food that others students never taste before. As a student I really like this idea because there is going to be a healthy food for all of us.
New lunch menu, having a new lunch is going to make many students happy because there are students that are getting tired of having the same lunch almost everyday, but it also can effect others students because there are many students that enjoy eating the same lunch and they never get tired, In thus case is better is you as a principal talk to the cafeteria manager and ask her for a list of wich food is the students favorite and at the end ypu and your company can decided whether you change the menu or not, but as a students I think it's also better if you just see wich food students like and take away the food that students eats the least and change that for the new food and live the food that students likes.
Students might be happy, Because you are not taking the food that students likes and also bringing different menu that students will be happy to have. We are trying different menu and that is also making us be different from others schools and they would see our school as a example, and they are going to do the same and is quit better because is not only our students that are getting tired of the cafeteria menu, there are others students in different schools that are also going trough to this issue. Schools from different states might see us and take the same idea as you have principal, that is going to halp not just the students it also helping our parents to save money, Because students that dont like the menu no more are telling their parents to buy then food from outside, and somentimes does parents dont have the money to do so. It also can help students dont skip classes to go buy from from outside bucause they dont like the food no more, that can help the students, parents, and also the school from not having a bad reputation.
Tasting different types of menu, trying new things like food is somenthing that students also loves I put my self for example. There are students that likes to try different food, the cafeteria have bad and healthy food but its not equal and for that we need a change, we need to have more healthier food, some studets are also alergit to food that is in the cafeteria and thats why they dont eat and they get sick because they eat only at home and most of the time we in school and we dont have the opportunity to go out and buy food. Bringing healthy and different lunch menu is good, becase we are able to taste differnt food and healthier, students wont need to get out of class just to go and buy food from outside, its dangerous that just for students that skip it also for our parents, Because the school call and let our parents thet we skip and they get worry for you fo not letting then know where you are or what are you doing.
My conclution is that students are going to be happy if you just ask the cafeteria manager fo a list of wich food students loves the most, and one of wich one they like the least. Thats is going to help all students to be conform with the new changes that you wants to do, students are going to have their favorite food and others students wont need to skip class to go out and buy food, parents won't be worry no more and students are not going to take any risk of getting sick because they dont eat. Healthy food it can help us with many things like, your body, less fat, and more proteins are going to be in our body. Parents won't have to buy food for the kids no more and they are going to save money, Changing the school menu is a great idea that most of the students are going to understand, and for the one that don't they are going t get used to it. Thats going to help every students and people from outside are goin to see the changes in the school and others schools should start doing the same for their students. Healthy life with less risk of everything. This is my sincerity opinion and hopefully the Principal takes some ideas of what the students think and what is the best for all of us. Thank you ! | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
5A9C20C851FD | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I extremely disagree with those schools that are offering distance learning for students because students wouldn't be benefit from attended classes from home the students just will be worth probably, they would like to take online classes but then they wouldn't attend they might be sleep, and they wouldn't care about the online classes.
The several schools that are offering online or video conferencing classes to students, those schools are doing that in the worse way, because those schools that are offering online classes just would make the students more lazy to attend to school and to receive classes with the teachers at schools, but I believe that students better attend to school than to receive online classes because attending to school the students get an opportunity to know others students and make new friends, and being at home receiving the online classes students don't get the opportunity to know, and meet new people from the same age as them so that's why I believe that those schools that are offering the distance learning to students to receive online classes are doing in a bad path.
Although some say that students should attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing is much better, because students don't has to attend to school and receive the classes with teachers, actually students shouldn't attend to classes from home by way of online or video conferencing, because students wouldn't learn the much as they learn at schools with teachers, and some students doesn't have internet or electronic devices at home to attend for online classes.
Some say that students should attend to online classes or video conferencing. One reason, school offer that option because they don't want to student waste time to attend to school and they believe that students would be benefit receiving classes from their home. However, students can have more time to sleep for those who work until midnight can be a benefit receiving those online classes, but to those students that doesn't work it would not be a benefit even though it will be worth because they just will waste their time on the phone all day and even in the night too because they wouldn't have to wake up early and get ready to attend to school.
I extremely believe the opposite, students shouldn't attend to online classes or video conferencing because students will just waste their time at home and not taking the classes on their computers or others electronic devices. Otherwise, Some others students doesn't have the same benefits as the others have for example: some students doesn't have the sufficient money or the same opportunity as the others to buy an electronic device such as computer to receive the online classes, so those students has to attend to school and receive classes with the school personal, that's one reason why I extremely disagree with some schools option like the learning distance. Another reason, attending to school students learn more faster than being at home with a computer because when they are receiving the classes on the computer they will check their social media at the same time as they are taking classes. However, attending to school students can learn many new words from the school personal and leaning new words can be such a great benefit.
In conclusion,
however some say that attend to the distance learning is better, but I extremely believe the opposite students shouldn't attend to the distance learning, because that wouldn't be a good benefit in their education, and in their knowledge students that take the distance learning they wouldn't learn the same way or the much as they learn when they attend to school and the teachers teach.
I disagree with the distance learning that some schools offer to students because the distance learning it wouldn't be a benefit for students who attend to the option distance learning it would be just worth it because they would not learn that much and probably they will not pay attention to what on the classes are teaching to them. Many students will prefer to take the distance learning just because they don't want to wake up early and go to school. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
5AA45740A848 | Dear, TEACHER_NAME
I think phone policy at school should not let students use their phone during class or free time. For several reasons. First, school has to be an area of education and not of free time. Because in my point of view its a distraction to your self and the people around you. Second, phones could get stolen by the people you don't get along with. Also, another reason for school policy to know is that it can cause drama between friends and also people you don't know. Finally , phones can cause cheating, cheating is what school doesn't want so that's one of my main reasons why i don't want phones being used in school hours, | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
5AAD796F4D6B | Why having a good attitude tours someone can have good causes. Having a good attitude tours someone you just meet, can bring good actions like a great friendship or relationship, a reason for a person that wants to hang out with you is because that person thinks your great person and they would like to spend more time with you because you give them a good impression to them and they think your a great person.
For example, lets say your mate wants you to meet his or her parents, so to give them a good impression you would have to, have a good attitude tours everything they say in order to give a good impression to them. another example can be work, having a good attitude at work can be a lot less stressful and more positive in your life and others coworkers because your not complaining of how difficult your day was, they have it difficult too, but maybe not having so much stress in your mind or complaining how life is treats you, you can even hang out with your friends or your coworkers time to time and make new friends or people like you even little more because at the end of the day everything would still be the same so be more positive. So having a good attitude tours your friends, family or coworkers can lead to positive outcomes. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
5AC16E188F1B | Today technology is arriving into the schools. Some schools offer distance leraning as an option for the students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Do you think that this would benefit students? I believe that it would not benefit students because of technology distraction, student behavior, and the different in capacity and ability for a student to understand things.
First reason, technology is an useful tool that people can use to learn or discover things, but it can be a huge distraction on young people. Today the technology is everywhere and it has everything which make it a powerful distraction for student's. Also, the students can copy any work from the internet while they are taking their online classes. The students will not learn anything if they copy every single work from the internet. Most students on school classes get distracted really easy by something around him, and also get bored when the teacher explain a new theme. I believe that is going to be more bored and distracted being at home alone doing conference and watching videos about the class. My home can distracted me more than my phone or computer, most kids have a video game, TV, family, and so others things that can catch their attention.
Second reason, student behavior can be a problem with online classes. A
lot of students do not respect or listen to their teacher at school, and
I am not wrong thinking that it would be the same at home with online classes. Most of this students do not listen to their teacher because they do not understand the way that the teacher explain or they do not like the teacher. So you can have an idea of how worst it can be i will give you an example, if a student do not like the subject of the day he can easily end the video conference with his teacher or he can just not listen to what he is explaining. The student can also not enter in to the class at the right time. I believe the there should be someone near the student to tell them what to do and how to do it.
Last reason, not all students have the same capacity to understand things. Not all the students have the same capacity to learn or understand by just watching videos or looking at pictures. I am a person who need someone to be physically near by so he or she can tell me how to do things. All the students that have this disability would be affected by this type of classes and this would make them to loose their credit on the class. At the same time this new type of classes is creating a barrier between students, teachers, and school.
Conclusion, the online classes do not benefit students because it can create a barrier between students, teachers, and school. The technology used for this programs can generate a distraction, and that can be a huge problem on future, the environment and behavior of the student can be a barrier too, and the different in capacity or ability to understand things can also represent an huge problem. At the end non one benefit from this online courses. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
5AC1AB0965F6 | Ever since I was little I would dreamed of going to Hawaii. I would always think of seeing the beautiful crystal clear blue seas. I would want to go scuba diving and get a view of the animals in the ocean.
reasons why I would want to go to Hawaii because it has a huge water park. I always have fun at water parks because it has big slides and big pools and other fun stuff. But Hawaii water park is like three times the size of the water parks I've been in. During the summer I like to go to my pool and spend my time there. I always wished I had a slide in my pool. But my pool is still fun. I invite my friends to make the pool more fun. We play sharks and Minos and other games.
Another reason why I would go to Hawaii is because I want to try out their sea food. I heard their sea food is really good and it come fresh out the ocean. Personally my favorite sea food is crab. But i like crab better when its a crab soup.
One more important reason why I would want to go to Hawaii is because I want to spend time with my family. I rarely get to spend anytime with my family. The reason that is because I have to go to school and my work and stuff. Then my when i comeback home my dad has to go to work. He comes back around midnight. So basically I never get to see him. I probably see him like for 10 minutes but then I cant. At least I get to see him during holidays.
The first thing I would want to do when I get to Hawaii is go to the huge water park. I want to go there to have fun. I also want to ride all the slides in the park. I want to play around with my family and have fun with them. Me and my dad always go on big slides when we're in a water park.
Another activity I would want to do when I get there is ride a bike around the city i'm gonna be staying at. I want to get to know the city and all of its locations. I also would love to ride on the mountains so i can get a nice view and take some photos.
Something else I would do is swim in the crystal clear oceans with my family. I have never seen my feet when i'm in the ocean and i want to experience that. I also want to have fun throwing a ball around with my family.
The first things I would want to see in Hawaii is go scuba diving and get to see the beautiful sea creatures swim around the ocean. Also for reason I want to get to touch them, and I want to see my families reaction. I always wanted to sea wild sea creatures. I never get to sea them because the closest ocean to me is dirty so you cant see nothing under the water. I want to see them swimming around and see other animals in the water. Every time I see a sea creature. The only way I would see one is if I caught it with a fishing rod or its dead on the sand or In the aquarium.
I would really want to go on a helicopter and see all of Hawaii. I just want to explore and get a beautiful view of Hawaii. At least see two dolphins hop from the ocean. That would be a perfect moment. But I just want to see Hawaii. I would probably go see one of does fire performance too.
One more thing I would want to go see in Hawaii is my family having fun. I want to see them having fun because I rarely get to see them having fun. We usually don't have fun because were not always together. One of my family membesr has to work and the other has to do something else. I really wished we could spend time longer together.
I would go to Hawaii because I get to increase the relationship with my family and have fun. If I got to Hawaii i'm not be stressed out during that time. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
5ADD410B9783 | A student does not need to be success to be praised, an achievement doesn't always necessary to have a self-esteeming come from effort failure and motivation,
First, success is not the only thing that can make a student be praise.
It is their effort whats matters even though a student did not do well on hes work, but a least he tried to do it, may be he is good at it, but he is have been a hard time on his life at that time, if a teacher or someone said good job you did it well i am proud of you. He is gonna be happy of that someone understand him at his bad time, and support him.
Second, failure is where a student achieve, learn, and gained experience, e never going to achieve at something without fail. Example, my on experience i have been seem achieve, and things that i did not succeed on it, in my life i had failed many school test or not get the score what i want to me it a fail, but to others it not, i always get mad at myself if i do not succeed at any tiny gold. When my teachers or someone tells me something nice, Good or they are proud at my work i felt so my proud of myself i am so proud that i have peoples who can understand me and support me. One day a teacher said " i'm proud to have as my student and to be your teacher you had showed me that no matter what where you came from you can achieve anything you want, also in how hard you have worked maybe your work is no that good, but i had seeing you work harder keep being like this do not gave up on your dream or what you are doing "
she praised me with all her words made me cried , and to keep going believe in myself that i can do everything.
Third motivation and self- confident, is what makes the difference, and changes a student life.
being confident on what we are doing on our life or working on something even if we don't give our best at least we tried it, sometimes we achieve in something and we don't learned any new thing because we already know hoe it is done it, if a person praise someone it motivates them to keep going and and not give up on their dreams even if its hard and impossible self-esteem makes a person fight back.
Finally, self-esteemed won't be always be for achievement, an self-esteem will be always on a student who are willing to do what is hard not the easy thing even though, they don't succeed and or achieve they know who they are and what they are able to do, lowers standard is better then nothing.
some people may think achievement are required to praise while others think that is not, and for this reasons it doesn't be necessary to be success or achieve a gold to be praised by someone. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
5AEAF1C7B87C | In today's world we believe positive attitude is not a key to success, only hard work is. However positive attitude is key to success. When we have positive attitude it helps us achieve our goals in life, at places such as: office, school, business and many more. On the journey of life we learn many things one of them is to have positive attitude in any hardships we go through.
In company's employer looks for positive attitude in workers, simply because they want someone who can make company more successful. If workers have positive attitude toward their job it will make them more productive in job and lead company to success.
It's very important to have positive attitude in life in order to succeed in schools and collages. Student's who have positive attitude toward their studies are likely to succeed in life. For example students who have bad attitude towards their study they are not going to be successful in school simply because they are going to give up,compare to students with positive attitude.
Businessman who are successful in their field compare to others who are not. One of the major difference is when successful businessman goes through hardships they keep positive attitude and try to execute the problem and it leads them to success and who are not successful they simply give up and gain bad attitude.
As it said in our society that hard work is key to success actually it's not only key to success. Having positive attitude is also key to success and it has many benefits for example helps us to achieve our goal in life and many more. I strongly agree that positive attitude is key to success in life. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
5AFBB5573AB3 | Have you ever just sat at home all day and used your phone? Oder food or play games and Facetime friends? being on technology doesnt help you make friends or help you get out of the house.
Some people say its a negative effect on people because all they do is use their phone when they need something, instead of going out getting fresh air or hanging out with friends. People that are constantly on their phones can cause them depression, because all they do is sit at home, and the phone provides them everything. it can also draw you away from friends and can be a distraction at school
It also can be a positive effect because you get to text your friends, for example example if a friend moved out of state you would still have contact with them. its also easier to do homework, or you can read a book online instead of going to the library and getting one.
"Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others" in that quote it says that you can finish a task without having contacts with people, how is someone suppose to have social contacts with people? how do you learn new things or new meet people? Thats why technology can be bad for someone people.
For example when I'm on my phone all day cause i'm sick or stayed home from school I get bored being on my phone all day, yes the phone is useful but it doesnt help staying in your room all day watching a movie or a show, you dont get to learn anything. Talking to people and having social contact is sometimes better, you learn a new word or a new fact each day, but theres some negatives in all of it, you can lose close friends because you get distracted on your phone and you dont listen to what they have to say.
Theres a lot to do beside staying at home and being on your phone, you can go out and get lunch with friends instead of sitting at home and eating alone. I know a few people that don't have many friends, so they are usually on their phones a lot, you can see the difference, people that are on their phone a lot and just sit at home don't really know how to act in public. People sometimes dont like going out and trying new things because they got used to being on their phones.
In conclusion technology is a negative effect on people because it doesnt allow them to see whats outside of their phones. They tend to just use their phones when sometime its better if they talk to their friends in person. Using your phone can take you away from your friends and it isnt a good thing. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
5B0E80E62A8C | Do people have a skill in them? A skill is something special that a person can do. I have a skill in math because I can help kids and I have good grades in math.
I have a skill in math because I can help kids. For example; if one of my friends need help in math I can help them. If people are good at something then they should help others, so other people can understand what is happening. In the same circumstances people should get good grades.
I have a skill in math so I can get good grades. For example; if I get a test on math and if I am good at math then I should be able to get good grades. If people are good at something then they should be able to get good grades in that class. In the meantime people should so do their best in their skill.
Every on in the world has a skill in something. I am good in math because I can helps students and I can get good grades. I hope you learn that everyone has a skill in them even if you donot relize it. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
5B14D81A0167 | Yes, I agree with Churchill's statement, because it is true that failure is one of the ways to get better from that failure.
Also failure is a common thing that happens to people, and it also help us to learn better from the mistakes, then giving up. For example my friend Generic_Name, he had 20 dollars in his pockets and he went to a game store to get the news video game at was only 25 dollars. But there was even a new updated on a game that he already have, and it was 10 dollars. And he won't get paid back until two weeks and the updated won't be availed until next week. so he went bought the updated game, but he didn't knew there was a sale on the new game on the online store that was only 16 dollars. But now he sometimes check to see if there any sales or deals before he goes to the store.
For another example a old man said he bought a new car but realize it was missing some pieces. Then he started to look round the internet to see if any of the parts that he needs are buy able. So far there wasn't a whole all of the items for the car. but he didn't stop giving up that easily. But one day he find all the parts and fix his car.
Also I had a friend who was going to the park, but forgot where is the park is and sometimes forget how to get back. Because he takes along way back home and to the park. Which he should take the short cut like I tell him, but he doesn't care, he like long walks. but one day he designed to take the short path thought the area, and he kinda like it its easier get to places for him. So he told me and he felt sorry that he didn't listen to me first, but I forgave him. And now he even listen to other people too like friends, and family too. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
5B2FC963E89D | A person life, is like a little story, there way to think or act goes with what they have been though, some have gone from easiest to harder situations, there are many situations that people go through all the times. There own way to be, the way they go through situations, makes people take decisions or actions that someone that has gone through the same situation can help them inspired or make positive things in there life. Once you go through many situations it will be helpful to be inspired and think in someones life.
There are so many different opinions and ways to influence someone, they can be reasons or things that happened in the life of a person that will not necessary be inspired by a example of someones action, or life. Also a inspiration can make you feel confidence in a situation were you think you do not know what to do. The influence of a person can always be helpful.
A example is only main thing to influencing others, there are many different ways to inspired people. One example that I think is, that they can be moments were you do not need someone to inspired you, you need to think your situation because you are going to try to make it better by the way you think is the right decision for you.
Another example that I think of is, that we are humans and we are going to make mistakes and the people needs to learn from their mistakes, they can be many ways of trying to inspired a person but there times were you do not even think of someone to inspired you.
When people think of a inspiration or a motivation to do something they do not realize that they probably have been though the same situation but everyone is different, things may work for that person but that does not mean that it can benefit you, it should just be to see it as an example and try to make it better for you and get the positive things.
Sometimes it is just an coincidence that they have gone throng the same situation, and they feel identify not necessary inspired, it can also be a way to see how people can have many different ways to handle a situation, like what did I did that that person handle it different than from what I went through if it was the same situation, what can a make different if that situations happens again.
Is that there times that they feel touch by the way there life, or situation is similar to someone who when throng the same situation, it can be inspired by the way that they went throng the same problems, feel identify with something that happened to a friend, a family member, or them self. There are times that just by the action that someone can know, can feel, can think they way they felt in that situation, can be so influence by them, for knowing that you have not been the only one that went though that.
But it can be helpful to have someone that can inspired some one with there experience, sometimes people do not know what else to do they feel like there the only ones that have gone through the same situation, and a inspiration of a person can help them feel that they have someone who has been through that and that if they did it they can do it. It can also just be in there head that they think they need someone as an example just to be better or to feel confident with them self.
There always going to be good or bad moments sometimes you experience something that can make them be that person who inspires, I think it can definitely inspired someones action. A behavior can influence others, but everyone has different ways to think and it is not necessary if they watch someone doing a positive or negative thing will influence them is all in they way they want to act, the kind of person they are and the way they think. But it is a good thing to inspired other and make them look what you have been trough and be a part f a influence that someone can be touch or identify by your life | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
5B40AA0E6C2B | It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. I agree with this statement about the importance of attitude of the people. I think is very important to be positive and has a good attitude with everybody.
In the other head, many people likes the people that has a positive attitude. For example when I was in my country Generic_City. There is a woman call Generic_Name she have a small restaurant in the park front to her house . She was sell I say was because I don't know if she still has the restaurant. However In the restaurant she was sell many type of food. For example soup, chicken, pupusas and Generic_Name need someone to help her with the restaurant job. And there is a woman her name is Generic_Name she is very smart however she has a bad attitude with every body.
She went to apply for the restaurant job and she has a good experience in the restaurant. And there is other woman name Generic_Name she is very nice and she always try to help others in the community also she has a positive attitude with the people. Generic_Name call Generic_Name and Generic_Name Because Generic_Name want to interview. Also she want meet they and see how they are and what they know about work in a restaurant.
The fist woman the come to Generic_Name house was Generic_Name she don't say good morning she just went to Generic_Name and say I am interesting in the job.
Generic_Name was very surprising because her just ask for the job don"t in troduce herself and Generic_Name told her that she already has someone to help her in the restaurant. Generic_Name just say ok bye. After one hour Generic_Name come to Generic_Name House and she say good Morning I am Generic_Name it is here where they are hearing someone to help work in a restaurant.
Generic_Name told her yes so Generic_Name was talking with Generic_Name and Generic_Name know that Generic_Name know a little about work in a restaurant bout she notice that she is smart and with the time she well be learn fast and she well be appreciate the opportunity that Generic_Name is give to her. Also Generic_Name has a positive attitude went she was speaking with Generic_Name.
In fact I think has a positive attitude is the key to success in life. For example, few days ago my father was very worry because he has just two days to finish one of the big job the he has. He was thinking to ask my brother if he has time to came help him. My brother told him that he is going to help him and he look at my father he was very worry and he ask my father what is happen why he look worry.
my father told him that is for the job that he has he just has two days to finish and my brother always has a positive attitude and he told my father to don't worry that everything is going to be okay. And he is going to do his best to help him with the job. He is going to do the more fast that he can and he is going to ask his friends to came and help hem with his big project. After two days they finish the job on time. And My father boss was so happy that they do a great job and my father was very proud of my brother because he has a positive attitude and he believe in his self.
This is why I think that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Because is help to win many things with the family and other persons. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
5BE99F2E4030 | Have you ever been thinking about doing something fun and active outdoors with your friends and family? Well, I'm going to share with you some ideas of having a great time outside. I like to invite my friends over and play with my dog outside. Or if you and your family are going on a trip or vacation, you might go to the beach. But what is it that makes these activities fun? Sometimes you may not feel like going outside and just want to stay inside and play video games, which is fine sometimes but you can't just play video games all the time. You should go outside and be active more often.
Like I said, if you have a dog you should always play with them because it's fun for both of you! Dogs tend to make everyone feel happier inside and they help reduce stress. Another great outdoor activity would include playing sports. Playing sports is one of the most fun activities you can do outside with other people. Sports like basketball, soccer, football, baseball, volleyball are all great fun activities for outside! One amazing enjoyable activity would include going a near by park because theres so much to do there! You can do a variety of fun activities such as playing with your dog, playing a sport, you can go on the swings, you can go on the slide, run, jump, you can have so much fun at parks!
Sometimes when I get stressed or upset, I like to go outside with my dog and just observe the great outdoors. It makes me feel a little bit better and my dog helps me reduce my stress. I love my dog so much and so do a lot of other people. They are really fun to play with and spend time with. Going on walks is fun for me and my dog. Walking your dog in the neighborhood is a great way to get out and be active.
Doing outdoor activities is great for everyone because you can have fun with all your friends and family and feel strong and energetic. Even if you don't like the activity, you should give it a try. Or, if you're feeling down, maybe an outdoor activity will make you fell better.
I talked to you about the benefits and the different ways you can have an enjoyable time outside. I recommend that you try doing one of these activities and spend time with your friends and family. Maybe going outside will be your new favorite thing! | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
5BF6D0C37809 | I agree
If you wanna get a healthy life , would you change it ?
change the schools menu gonna be a great opportunity to improve the kids healthy because they will eat less fast food and junk food, they will get a good health. the schools will spend less money buying good food for their students, and the some students with overweight will loose weight.
it has been said that eat fruits and vegetables are a good way to start a good feeding, these kinds of foods got a lot of good tings on like protein and fiber. In fact some kinds of foods like hamburgers, pizza, candies, etc are pretty bad for your feeding and healthy because they got many sugars, and calories on .In fact eliminating those kinds of junk food or fast food would a god opportunity to improve student's health.
The schools in the country spend millions and millions of dollars every year on fast food. Some fast food are really expensive, moreover some schools would like to earn more money and spend that money on education. in fact, that is a good chance to start earning money.
Some students with overweight have problems in school, like having bad grades and bulling . By changing the schools menu will allow the students to loose weight in fact salads, fruits, and vegetables would permit students to loose weight and also it will let then to be in a good shape. To be in a good shape would allow you to get good grades in classes as PE. Some students have bulling problems for overweight, by having a good shape would let them to stop it.
In conclusion changing the schools menu would be a good idea because the students will get healthier food, the schools will have an extra chance to expend less money and give a better education for students, and having a good shape would improve student's grades and will stop other issues on their daily lives. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
5BF7AAC78AB5 | Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that " success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." I agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. Just like saying "if you want to know everything you got to not know anything first." , "if you want to be rich you got to be poor first." , "You got to learn how to walk before you run."
Every people that are smart, rich and well-know there are all born without any of that just like every single one of us, no one is perfect. We all have something that we are good at and something that we are bad at.
The way to successful is not hard to get there. Do what you are good at. Make sure you are enjoin what you are doing. Just like this one man that I forgot his name said "get a job that you are enjoin doing it, a job that you have fun doing it and you will jump out of the bed in morning."
You are who you are right now because of all the mistake you make in the pass. "success consists of going from failure to failure." you lean from your mistake. If you never do anything wrong that mean you never do anything at all. All the mistake you make you better because you lean from it. You can also lean form another people mistake too. It's one of the reason why most of thing in world got better.
Soccer is the sport that I like. I'm not that good at it but not that bad either. When I first start playing I don't know a lot about it so I keep playing unit I know a little bit more about it. Then I start playing with the pro player because I know that I'm gonna make a lot of mistake and all those mistake gonna help lean how to play and how to get better and it does. I make a lot of mistake I still do but I like to take a hit sometime it make me stronger. you know what they say "what doesn't kill you make you stronger." so I keep trying and trying hope that I can make that to be my job. Mistake dose help you it may be a big one something or a small one but all the mistake help you. I was really bad at soccer once but now I petty good at it.
All of this should explain why Churchill said that"success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." Mistake is a part of you it's a part of everything but it's not all way bad.
(make me pass please) | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
5C017EF0CF1E | It's important to talk to a guidance and authorities expert when making a decision. People may say that making your own decision is good but others, say seeking guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters is better, because it's helpful to hear other people's advice and they are experienced.
some people may argue that making your own decision is good because it make's a operson independent and people don't have to hear other people's opinion. They have a point but how do they know they are making the right choice if they don't try talking to a guidance expert.
Seeking guidance form experts and authorities about life's important matters is important because it's helpful to hear other people's advice. For example if my friend Generic_Name had to make a life changing decision it's important that she goes and talks to a guidance counselor. Also if she doesn't speak to a guidance expert and she makes a wrong choice who knows what could happen. It also makes room for less mistakes when you talk to others who are experts in guiding people. It's good to talk to a guidance counselor to make sure the decision being mabe is benefiting the person in a positive way. It's important to seek for guidance when making a decision.
Seeking guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters is better because they are experienced. If people were to talk to others who don't have any idea what they are talking about, than that might not be helpful for the person who needs help. Also it makes it easy to trust someone who is experienced. which means the person who needs help would be less stress out when having to make the decision. When speaking to someone who is experienced it makes it easy for people to talk to with out having to worry if the person is going to say the wrong thing. Speaking to a guidance and authorities who is experienced is important when making a decision.
In conclusion when making an important decision its important to talk to a guidance and authorities expert, to reassure what the person is doing is right for them, So that the decision they make does not affect the person in a negative way. It also helps the person grow and it shows them when making choices they don't have to go through it alone. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
5C05D79FE75A | Should people make their own decisions or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters?
In my opinion, I think that people should seek guidance form experts and authorities, for many reasons this solution has prove to be effective, if a person listens to other people opinions, then the decision the person makes will not be base only on his/her opinion.
First, lets say if a male person seek guidance from experts and authorities when taking a decision, it shows that he is obedient and he will not act recklessly when taking a decision about his life, it shows that he is willing to listen to other people perspectives.
Second, in my opinion i think that asking for guidance shows matureness, it shows that you care about yourself and others opinion, it also shows wiseness when you ask others for guidance first so you can decide and make the best decision.
In conclution, people should seek guidance from experts when taking a decision about their life, I think that if people set aside their pride and worries, we humans would make better choices not just for us but for our entire environment which it also includes other species. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
5C2A497012B9 | Would students benefit from being able to attend classes from home?
yes and no; yes, because students who are taking online classes or taking classes at home would be more focused, since there's no distraction like other students or teachers. No, because it is not very active socially and physically, unlike going to school, interacting with people, and playing sports.
Also, if the internet's not working then the student would have to skip the class because internet is what loads the videos and is used for face timing with the students. Some students can't learn just by watching a video or taking an online class, they have to actually experience the situation to understand. But the majority of the students can learn from videos and online classes.
Since technology is growing, I think in the upcoming future there will be just online classes that you can take and schools will be there but the students will go there only if the internet is down or any other internet problems, that way the students won't miss a single day of class. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
5C31B4B9B185 | Do you think that the programs of graduate in three year is a good way?
some school need student that they have online classes and they can graduate before than three year for one part the program of graduate in three year is not good, because is more hard, My brother need help for teachers for graduate, and in the school classes he learn more, and he pay many attention to the teacher because he want graduate in three year etc.
some student take this program in summer school, because they want to finish the high school in three year, and go to the college in less time.
The program of graduate in three years is not good because student need help for the teacher, student learn more with teacher help, and they pay a better attention etc.
The program of graduate in three year is good, because you graduate in less time, and you can go in summer school for graduate the next year, but is more hard, more responsibility, and more work etc.
Should the school districts offer this programs? this programs offer many opportunity to graduate in three years, so i think that this is good for student, and they can have more opportunity to graduate in three years. | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
5C3757B0C6AE | I agree that having a positive attitude is key to be successful in life. Having a good attitude in any working space is key to any job also you have never heard anyone in a party with a bad attitude and to be more honest with you having a good attitude anywhere will help you a lot. I agree just not only for having just a good attitude but to make some one smile and the bad vibes go away I'm grateful that I have a good attitude. Also maybe having a good attitude in the work place will speed up your day so you could go back home and do nothing and relax. I work at a restaurant and I feel as in if i have a bad attitude at work time goes slower but when i have a good attitude at work time goes so fast. It's your first impression of a person it help if u have a good attitude it will help you on the long run. Make a situation for bad to good for a hundred to zero fast which is a good thing.
Then, I think that having a good attitude at work will help a lot of people in the long run because you could find your future wife and you could find someone famous or better things. And most people don't think about how having a good and not bad attitude will benefit them. Having a good attitude will take you places were people could never think of and will help up be successful in like get a good job, get promoted,then get to the top and make lots of money. I know a lot of people want to be rich and make lots of money so got good attitude in life some don't. everyone have their own ideas and have their own perspective of each other. Lots of people are negative in the world most people have it the hard way became the are poor dont have anything more to live for but that is wrong people you need to keep your head up no matter what happens.
After that, I think that I also said that being kind to people and giving them a smile will cheer a lot of people up, and make the world a better place and make everyone be grateful for what they have. People dont want to be by themselves they want to be with other humans and wants a better for everyone. In all honestly people should work for a better work space and have a good attitude. Having a good attitude is extremely good for work place and more. I think that people need to know whats bests for them and there heath. I also imagine lots of people with good attitude but there are a lot of people with bad attitudes. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
5C3A7990C870 | People who mastered with experience and not knowing what to do next, can find themselves a new alternative skill. The Brain does not have a limited amount of knowledge. The good thing about it, is that the Brain never gets full. What they can achieve, lead to society were people pass down to the generation and to generation, expecting a challenge to test there skills and multitask is a benefit opportunity.
Most people, has a unique a ability. That all over the world want to hear your name. These pass few years, people pass down there outstanding skill to generation to generation. Back way before, Ancestors tell their children of they can do for a future life. Then they tell there future children and the next; it in our blood. People around the world would say "Hey, i like this guy, he can do anything". Theses people want to be follow in his/her shoes. What you already mastered such as: a Gunsmith, a Formula 1 driver, an Investor, a Stock Broker, a Magician or even a Scientist would tell their own children what do to and what not do to. In fact, tell them to be in their shoes. Generation grows bigger and bigger; Wonder what would happen next.
On the other hand, you might as well encounter something that you never try before, a challenge. In this position, people want to test their master skill to the test. It good thing because you want to prove yourself ,as an expert, that you want to be anonymous person who tries so hard to achieved their goal. People will say "Dream Big" or "Just do it" that gets people motivate to face their mastered skills to the next level. Dreaming for a challenge beyond their skill, is a goal for them, they dont want to give up. If they do, whats the point of hard work.
Furthermore, benefits is what you want in life, it happens everywhere: jobs, schools, and physical health. Nowadays, people want more benefits then just one. By multitasking, these opportunity help there job more easy, but some times not so easy. when you are doing more than one skill: a promotion and a rise(money) can come as a reward. That being said, "Unless you try to do something beyond what you already mastered, you will never grow" is not all true. People can have 2, 4 or maybe 8 skill that can show what they got.
In the end, there are a lot of ways to ensure that people can go beyond than anything. Pass down your skill in next gen, a challenge to prove them self that they are worthy, and benefits for being a multitasker is one thoses reason that he/she is something special. Doing beyond what you master, can make you grow. Never stop of what you love to do in life. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
5C656CD57F67 | Identify a talent or skill you have, and explain how you develop and use it.
Everyone has a talent and a skill. I personally think that my talent is photographing, but photographing take skills as well. Taking pictures is relaxing, fun, and cool at the same time.
Photographing is I guess not easy and hard because while taking pictures you have to find the right angle the your photo and as well you can just take your picture in your own way.
How I developed photographing is by going out and looking at intense images.
when I go out, I always think about if I should take some photos of whats there like: the River
People, and maybe other Cities as well as Nature. While taking pictures, it's really relaxing because you can feel the wind breeze on your face and you can release your stress.
For me I think that its fun because you can take pictures whatever you want, I also think that taking pictures is cool because you can see how things looks like up close how it looks like on camera.
How I use it is by releasing everything that is on my mind. I also use it for improving my skills as well. For me sometimes its a little bit hard because I need to find the right angle for the photo Im taking. My photograph skills aren't that good, but I practice everyday so I could take better images.
During my free time I go out and find some photographic things like: Insects, the Moon, and other objects, and take pictures of them.
To conclude , in my opinion I think that photographing can be your talent and your skill as well because if you like looking at intense images then you can take an intense picture too, or you can take it just for fun. Besides, maybe you can try to see how your photograph skills are too. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
5C69070E1E48 | Students would benefit and not benefit from being able to attend classes from home is because you can stay at home ,not distraction,not friends or groups,tools from school that you may need,students can cheat.
Students would benefit from being able to attend school from home because you can stay at home and by staying at home you can wake up late for school. There is some students that hate waking up early for school that's one of the reasons of having the opportunity to take your classes in online. Staying at home you can be eating whatever you want there is not going to be teachers telling you that you can't eat. There might be people that doesn't have the transportation to go school and get in time for school and because children doesn't like waking 6 AM in the morning. That chance to take classes at online many students would prefer having online classes.
Other reason why students would benefit by attending classes from home is because there is not distraction at your home you can be at your room alone without no one to distract you when you're taking your classes or when you're taking a very important test. By being alone at home you can concentrate more about the things that you're learning because your friends are not there with you to distract you with another things.
Like I said there is not benefit too of having classes in online because students doesn't have friends or a group of friends to share their ideas. There is children that may need a group or a friend to talk about their ideas in classes or maybe you have a problem with something and you don't have no one to help you ,and by having not classmate it might be boring being alone.
students may need tools from school for example you need to read a book and you don't have one because you just don't own books at home and that's why I think it would not benefit because in school you have a library you can go there to find a book and there is different types of books students can pick.
Other reason why it would not benefit the students is because they can cheat.
students can cheat at everything because you don't have a teacher that is taking care that the student don't cheat at a test. If the students doesn't want to do a class he can can pay someone to make it for then ad pass it for them.
Different people might have another opinion about taking classes at home but I think there is benefit and not benefit because students can use this opportunity to waste their time or take advantages about having classes at home. In my opinion there will be some students that will take this serious and do the right thing. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
5C6CE74DEBCB | To begin with, did you know that this year there has been bigger problems with climate change than now, last year, and the other years before that. To say nothing of, i agree that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life. For this prompt i have some reasons why i agree why having a positive attitude is the key to success. In addition,climate change would always be the problem we would have with our earth but, hoping it would'nt be as bad as today.
Further more, the First reason why i agree to having a positive additude is the key to success because, having a good mind can help you get things done faster. For example, during school hours i complete my work on time when im not feeling too tired, or when im feeling like im doing great, and when im having alot of good energy. Having a good mind to gets things done faster, can help you not stress about uncompleted work. A positive mind can have very good idias and accomplish your goals. In conclution, having a positive mind can bring important things done faster.
In addition, having a positive additude gives good vibes everyone likes, enlighten other people day, or can lead to good things in your life. For example, when im working and im having a bad day there always a customer who changes my mood to a very positive mood and i start to work better. Having a good mood or mind can leave a good job. To conclude for, having a good mind or great attitude can lead you to big important things in your life that can lead you to greatness.
Third reason why, good attitude can help your mental health , help other people around you, or people you very close to. For example, i would be very close to my older sister because she always gaved good additude,good vibes, and she had more expirience in life that she could help me with. To say more of, this example can lead you to be more confident in your self. To say nothing of, this can also lead to feel good about your self and love your self mentally and emotionally.
Finally, having positive mental health can bring yourself to have good feelings about your self to get things done and feel good about it without hesitation.
In conclution, Having a Positive addittude is a good thing we should all do in our lives. In addition, to having these reason why i agree to having a positive attitude is the key to success in life is because, without having a good additude we wouldn't get things done and things would get things done the wrong way or not good enough to be great. Furtheer more, not having a great additude can lead to not accomplishing your goal or be successful as you would like in life. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
5C72AB0B1232 | What's a career? a career is an occupation or a profession that someone do. People can start their career at any time in life. It's a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because career would prepare students for what they want to become in the future, and it can help students learn more skills and experience when they work with others.
Firstly, career can prepare students for what they want to become in the future. Consider someone who wants to become a doctor. People who want to become doctors usually work at the hospital so they can watch how doctors do their work. For example, Generic_Name was a student at Generic_school and he wanted to become a doctor one day. Generic_Name started to work at the hospital after his parents told him that they didn't have money to put him in college. Generic_Name learned a lot of of things about doctors before he went to college; and when he went to college, it wasn't so hard for him because most things about doctors seemed familiar. Generic_Name graduated with a bachelor's degree and he became a good doctor. This proves that committing to a career at a young age can be helpful in the future.
Secondly, Career can help students learn more skills and have more experience of things in life. for example, Generic_Name loves when someone plays guitar and he always say that he wish he knew how to play guitar. Generic_Name was hired after he applied on a part time job which was called " Teen fun time". it was a good job for Generic_Name because they could teach him many different things including guitar. Generic_Name was taught how to play guitar by some guy who liked how Generic_Name was a hard worker and nice to everyone. After hard months of training, Generic_Name could play guitar by himself. people loved how Generic_Name played guitar, therefore, his manager made him play at the entrance of the building so people can enjoy while entering the building. Generic_Name was able to draw, paint, and cook after he worked at the Teen fun time for a while. Teen fun time made Generic_Name a good guitar player and a great cooker.
Some people may say that it is not a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because some teenagers turn into disrespectful children to their parents when they receive their first checks. For example, Generic_Name was hired at the boys and girls club. After he received his first check, he could not do anything his parents ask him to do and he would claim that he's going to be late to work. His parents did not like it and it made them unhappy sometimes. However, committing to a career at a young age is good because it teaches teenagers a lot of stuffs they need to know in life. Teenagers also make money from a career, which means that they can help their parents with small needs like buying clothes for themselves and shoes.
In conclusion, a career at a young age prepares students for their future career. If someone want to become a pilot, they have to work at the airport so they can get some ideas on how planes fly. Committing to a career at a young age can help students learn more skills and have more experience on things in life. By working with people, students can learn new stuffs from people they don't know. This proves that committing to a career at young age is good for students. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
5C764A810680 | Do you want your child home school to adopt the four-day school week and extend the schools hours?
I do not agree with schools extending the schools hours nor adopting a four-day week.
Some students have just do not like what they are doing in class or do not get the chapter, so they get others students to do it for them.
They can get a lot of homework, so if they extend the school day they are going to have more homework than usual and be tired.
Students can get home late and cannot spend time with their families, if they have a lot of homework.
Within four-day school week students can get stressed out worst than usual.
The way that parent can react for adding more hours.
First, some people act like they do not know what they are doing, just because they are lazy.
In my opinion, some students like others students to do their work and that is not fair for the other student.
Allowing to extend the schools hours is going to mess people schedule or their parents work schedule.
Some parents get out of work early and they got time to pick their child up, if we extend the schools hours that could really mess them up.
Students are so much smarter if they focus on what they want.
I believe that once you put your mind to it, you will get it.
Next, parents do not like their child to get home so tired.
Some parents like to know how was their day or how their grades look like, but if a student is tired all the time how she or he suppose to have good grades?
Sleep is one of the most important things that a human being needs.
A human cannot go long without sleep.
Parents like to see their child happy, with energy, and doing things that she or he likes
If students do not have the sleep they need to have, that is going to mess with his or her grades.
School is hard itself and I do not think adding more hours is going to be helpful.
Finally, getting home late and stressing out are one of the worst things ever.
Stress can lead you to have some type of illness in the future.
What some people do to release stress is that they get a day to themselves and go to a spa or shopping.
Other people get things done first and they would like to shopping or to do something they like such as going to the movies, play video games, and play any sport.
Students get a lot of homework in a week, imagine in a four-day week.
People should really think first what they are going to do and get it done.
Some people just like taking everything as a joke and that is not good, but that is on them.
In my opinion just do it, just get it done and get it over with.
Some people just get lazy but they still get it done.
No matter what's on your way, you can always get things done.
When getting home late from school or any activity all you want to so is rest.
Some people go to sleep knowing that they have homework or a test the very next day, if they did not study or got their homework done, they might have a zero or both things.
That is why I think it is important to study and not to adopt the four-day school week.
In conclusion, conserving energy and resources has a lot of benefits, but I do not agree with adding hours to school.
Students have it so much harder now days that I think extending the school day is going to be even worst.
Some disadvantages are people get stress easily, they will have a lot of homework, and finally they can get home late especially if they have to stay after school.
Honestly people who agree on this have their good or bad reasons, but these are my reason why we should agree to extend the schools hours nor adopting the four-day school week.
However, just do what's have to be done for you to accomplish your dream.
If they add more hours to the school or not, do not worry just focus on you. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
5C9B1FB411EB | It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. I agree with statement because having a positive attitude led to great success and great oppurtunity to do something that you would love, or admire.
With a positive attitude you could do more in life than a person with a bad attitude. For example, a person with a bad attitude trying to get a job as a model but gets mad over how the clothes looks on them or how the photos of them came out. Getting frustrated, or angry won't led to great success that would just make the sitution worser because modeling is a strict job and they have limited time . They can't deal with bad attitude, so you can't success with that job by being anoyed by something that you disagree on . With a positive attitude you could success with modeling because you don't have problems with nothing ,as least you had an oppurtunity to get the job.
Positive attitude led to great success like going to college, getting a good paying job, being respect by others. No one like a disrespecful person by being disrespectful you can't success in life. It's going to be diffucult but as least try be kind to others. People with positive attitude won't have a diffuclt time becuasuse there always kind and respectful to others.
I agree with statement positive attitude is the key to success in life. For example, if i was a hiring someone to work as a model and there two persons try to get the job but i need only one person i would see who haves a positive attitude i woundn't pick someone that don't have respect for others. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
5CA2DCC616C6 | Energy had become the most usable thing in the world; without energy students couldn't be able to find information for their homework or projects. In this life time is the most valuable thing students can lose. Although students would have a three-day weekend, they would not lose any minute of class, nevertheless they would have more time to work because they would go to school only four days per week, which would give them more time to earn more money at work, spend more time with family and friends, and do their homework and projects on those three-day weekend.
To begin, energy is the most usable thing everyone use, and if students do not start to conserve it, in the future it could be difficult to get. For example, technology in schools is advancing over the years. Teachers give homework and projects to students online where they have to use their smart phones, which need energy to get charge, so they can use them for their assignments. They also use internet, which requires energy to function. This proves that if Generic_School extend the school day two hours for a four-day school week to conserve energy and resources, teachers would have to start giving students homework in which they have to use books. Obviously, students would have to adapt to find information for their homework and projects in books, like old times, and stop using technology to find information.
Furthermore, students would like the idea of having a three-day weekend. For example, they could use that time for work, spend time with family and friends, and do homework and projects. This shows that students would not miss any day of school because they would spend the same amount of hours they usually spend at school, but only in four days; the two extra hours Generic_School would extend on the schedule for a four-day week, would sum the hours the students spend on a regular week, yet they will divide that time in four days. They also can earn more money if they work more hours on those days that they would have off. Students would also have more time to study for any test they may have, or do any homework or projects. Clearly, this will be a benefit for students and teachers. They would get an extra day off without missing anything at school.
Overall, students would enjoy their three-day weekend studying, working, or spending time with family and friends because they would have an extra day on the weekend. Students would also adapt to find information in books. In conclusion, if Generic_School extend the school day two hours for a four-day school, would be helpful to conserve energy and resources. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
5CAA840DD4C6 | AFTER SCHOOL HOMEWORK CLUB
Generic_Name
INTRODUCTION:
Havent you ever thought of starting an after school homework club for students who are having difficulty in certain subjects?.
BIGININ:Well in certain states school barely have extra help for students for Example in El Salvador, Nicaragua, Honduras and more states but in the united states is different they have extra programs the main thing is us the students they want a good education in my Generic_School we have an after school it's call Hornet 21 and in my opinion i think that having a program like that is awesome why you might be asking well here are some few reasons 1st of all you get to see on what the students need help 2nd of all you get to ask them on what they get stuck or don't understand. 3rd of all you get to meet you'r teacher and they get to meet you. there some students that are to shy to talk about it this will also help the teachers on where or what group they should them to work on what do they need work on? witch would be very helpful them and there teachers and the teachers might notices some changes or not. not every mistake can be change but you can start fresh again.
FIRST: it would also be helpful to see on what subject there really good and they are confident about it those teachers who help on everything like they know everything they move from one to another class room they could help those kind of students that get homework from different subjects for example like Math,Scients, Social studies. and the teachers could inform the students teacher on what there struggling and on what there all good on I mean you never know if those student's could be are next president or are next doctor, police.
this program is also nice because it helps students practice English not for all of them but for some of them yes this help me a lot.
MIDDLE: this program will also make the student proud of them self a little thing can change our world to be come better our country need programs like this programs that are going to success us programs that were going to be proud of this kind of programs have help a lot of students i know sens elementary school and not should middle school have it high school and elementary to and is also nice because some parents come late to work and the program would be finishing about 4:50 so there going to be fine when they get home so they can be home alone this after school activity would also get them prepare for there exams they could study and they would easy get an A or a B. END You could also do this to a student who doesn't want to do there work or nothing you can make them stay in after school and they can finish what they decided to not do and that might be a big lesson for them to learn you could also tell some of the students to spread the word to some of there friends so you could get more students everyday and if they stay Monday,Tuesday, Wednesday on Thursday and Friday they could have a free day you could have them do soccer basketball anything they want if they deserved it, you could also announced one day so the whole school would know about the program this could also be fun for the teachers not just for the students teachers to well that's what i think on a after school homework club. Base on this information I can say that schools do need this program Because it's really helpful for the student's. outside in the worlds there some kids who don't even know what school is because there working to feed there family. The community should do more programs like this so students get extra help. not all the county gets to have fun activities like us. and my opinion is yes it's good to have after school programs for schools and kids who care and that have a featured. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
5CB186BF742C | Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others, but the use of the technology had cause negative effects on people's lives because, people spend time on video games, people became antisocial, and it is less helpful.
First of all,
people became addictive playing video games, and they spend to much time on it. Video games take you out of contact with others. With the use of technology daily affect people's vision, with the time people use glasses.
Secondly, people became antisocial with the use of technology because, people prefer to spend their time on the internet than having a conversations with their friends. People use to have communication with others by the technology instead of hangout or doing any activities with them. The majority of the people prefer to shop online, and lost their time thinking if the clothes is going to fit them, instead of go to the store, try the clothes on and see if is a good idea to spend the money.
Finally, the use of the technology is less helpful and have a negative effect on people's lives because, the technology take people out from the real world, for example if people shop online and they have questions they have to wait to long to get their answers, but if they were at the store a worker would help them. The use of the technology affect the communication with other people.
In conclusion, technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others and it can be faster; however, the use of the technology affects people's lives, and the communication between two o more person. In my opinion people should use less technology, and enjoy conversations with their friends and family. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
5CF895003869 | "Unless you try something beyond what you already mastered,you will never grow" I agree with this argument because if people never try something new,they will never know if they choose the best option because never try. In my opinion be afraid is the worse thing in the world. In my experience afraid is the most thing that I feel stoped me because if I am afraid I never try something beyond things I have,even knowing that it can be better for me. Also if people try to do something new,they will learn more things than they already know. Keeping trying is the best option for all people in the world. Does not matter if they fail or they are wrong,and finally I agree with the statement because people will never know if they will get better opportunities in a job,college or in general life,if they never try or they never force theirselves to be successful.
First,if people never try something new,they will never know if the way they choose,was the best option because they will be always with the doubt thinking about what could happen if they were tried. They will never be brave enough if they never try to do something new because they are afraid. In my opinion the best example is when teenagers are in school,specially people who are from Central American countries,they are afraid because they do not speak the internacional language "Enlglish" so,they prefer do not try something like; speak with their classmates or even with their teachers,if they have any doubt they will never ask because they are afraid. They just do not want to try it because they are afraid classmates or teachers laugth about them,even when the teacher are good with them because some teachears are a kind of rude,not all of them but there are some of them. In my personal experience,the last year I had two teachers who was very rude with me and my friend. We were in our class when she asked for something that I did not understand and I asked her what was that,and she said that if we do not speak English we need to go back our conutry,and my other teachers was angry because in my class all the people was speaking Spanish and she said the same thing that my another teacher said before "If you do not speak English just go baxk to your countries". These are examples why teenagers are afraid to try new thins and they just prefer stay quite,but the only way to know how things are going to take place,is try it. If people try new things,they will be better person that they already are because they will figth for the things they want,they will be successful by theirselves.
Second,if people try to do new things,they will learn more things that they already know. When people try something new the results can not be always positive. They can fail,but at least they were brave to try something that they never try before and they have to be proud of theirselves even if they did not get what they want. However if they did not get what they want,they learned something new because people learn from the mistakes. Mistakes are the best way to learn because you will know what to do the next time that you try the same thing until you get what you want. Does not matter if you are wrong,you will learn because the life is a lesson that you learn every single day. In my experience when my uncle wants to get his license,we went to the DMV so many times but he always fail his test. We went to the DMV about five times till the day he pass his test,but he never give up even knowing that he can fail the last time we went,he wants to try it again and keeping trying still they have his license with him. So do not get frustrate if you do not get it the first time you try,just keeping trying,you will get it.
Finally,is people will never know if they will get better opportunities if they never try. So many people in the wolrd are looking for better opportunities but the most of the time they never get it,the only reason is because they never try. When people want to get a new job where they need to do something that they never did before they choose do not try it because they do not want to be wrong,but if they never try it,never will be better,never will get a best opportunity to be successful. Everybody is afraid about fail and fail is the most comun reason what people stop to doing something they want,but fail is not the worse thing in the world,the really worse thing is not try it. People can get better opportunities also in the college,they need to try something maybe the things can work good for them. Life is the best gift that we have,we can be sad,we can be happy,we can be whatever we want,and do whatever we want to do,but need to keep try it. If something does happened just like people want,keeping try it to get perfeccion. To get what they want,they need to force theirselves untill get and be who really want to be. Life is the best teacher we have. The life teach us be brave,be proud of ourselfs,be best person than we were yesterday,but life also teach us to figth to get better opportunities,and better lifestyle.
In conlcusion,try new things is better than stay with the things people already have. Try is the best option that people have,does not matter what poeple say about the way people decide to take,everybody is going to choose the best way for their lives. So keep trying,on that way you will mastering more things than you already have. Does not matter how good you are or how many things you already have. You need to looking for most better thing,better opportunities. People do not have to be afraid,people need to be brave to get what they want. Do not give up if the things do not take the place that you want,just keeping trying. Always will be better try new things,to continue grow up than stay where you are with the things you already have. Better life,better opportunities,best person in the world. I am very agree with the statement,and you need to be agree,too. "Unless you try to do something beyond what you already mastered,you will never grow". | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
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