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63BAE4B3ADDA | Being yourself in a world that wants you to be something else is a great feeling but it takes time to be happy for a example,your parents want you to be a doctor or a lawyer but you want to be a rapper or dancer but you don't know how to tell them because you think they would would be disappointed.
would you want to make your parents to feel disappointed,ll give another example people who like the same sex, theirs been so many stories an articles of people dying because their expressing them selves a lot of people are scared so they don't tell anyone so they become depressed they use a lot drugs to lose the pain but nothing ever works.
In my opinion i agree with Ralphh Waldo Emerson it's a amazing feeling to be yourself and not follow other people because at the end of the day you need to be doing things that make you happy not for other,your priories come first be who ever you want to be like and who ever you want you live one life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
63C74FF7DB27 | Take learning distance on home is not good ideas . first reason is not the same to take on school. when we going schools we have more option to learning. sometime when we don't undertant something we can ask the teacher for helping or they can explain many times. But sometimes we have to take the classes on home. for example if you are sick or have a spcific reason that you can going schools is necesary take online because if we whant to learn is the matter we we have to take the classes. the important thing is that we have the energy to continues with your goals.
The Learnig distance on home some time be helping to be more possitive and focud because we can take the clases any hours we can. Also when we cut the clases on home we have more chance to listining. The other option to take the clases on home is that we can do other things that we whant.
Some schools give the chance to often the clasas on home that is great ideas. but sometimes is really important to going schools beacuse when we going schools we have more chance to take more clases and graduated with the other student. Also take clases for video conferencing or going school is little similar becuaser we can see the teacher that is explain the clases. That uniquet things is we can not ask the teacher for helping.
In conclusion. To be attend on schools is more important and helping more tham the distance learning or video conferencing. On my posisition attend on schools is more necesary because we have more opportunity to learm and continues to do the things that we whant. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
63E2278271E4 | The British john Lubbock wrote 'your character will be what you yourself choose to make it'
there for is a bit concerning about how kids change there characters just because they dont fell good about them selves and have a lot of thinking inside of them the traits that you carry will have a dominance over them but i dont think that its best answering the question there for do actually they take control beyond our control.
There for it will be not always the case between how other view your things and traits makes you in insecure how other people see you and you change to make your self better than our parents gave us something we just got it from society like there is a lot of influences in the internet and more things that can go far behind the imaginable and they are not controlled by anyone they are just more likely to have more influences beyond there control but there is a lot of influences in this world you just got to find the right one for you and stick with it general likely there is more change in society for different perspectives.
Secondly there is a possible out come that you everyone can get out of this, just like other people that change there perspective at looking at things there for i should say that i have changed a lot since i got here in Virginia and am adapting to being normal well the normal way of being normal for other people there are influences beyond our control because what you see on the internet you will want to mimic it one day like there is a lot of rapers talking about 'girls, god there is a it of are influences in our daily lives always hearing what a rapper did or what type of things he is going to do there for its a bit concerning about all that because for a person that just moved here is a lot of change there is a lot of people that influence almost all the world in California there is where i lived all the artist and musical players and all of them have a purpose of having more people being influenced by them and making a lot of money if they get a lot of attention from a lot of people.
There is kids just like adults that get influence by others there is a possibility that we choose our own ideas of being influenced that are out of our control we choose to be this way we choose our path always they follow what we want there for i am proud of the world we live in.
There is a posibility that new things come out every year new things that 'kill' us or maybe other things like war and most of the things happening to our world and more polution and more virus that want to kill us and it is being more influenced by others to be scared of it becasuse you could die from that there is a lot of thinnking behind every smart influences.
Have a nice day, that is what makes us movie froward every time that we get stuck. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
6418C102917D | In cartoon sponge bob square pants sponge bob he say's " imagination" as to us is inferring for us to use our imagination, like no matter how old you are what disabilities you have is inferring to everyone ,But do you ever think imagination is important than knowledge?
Beginning,with this statement i agree because, when we were young little kids we would always imagine that was our big thing like, as an other parent would probably say to your child " your child has a big imagination ". And imagination will always be apart of us we grew up having our little or big imagination's how do you think we would imagine us in the future or like some other examples: how we want to wear out clothes, what type of clothes we wanna wear, what design we want on our cake, or and how we imagine unicorns, ninjas,or any of those type of things ,and superheros. without imagination we wouldnt know about that or the sense of knowing what that is.
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having imagination is also good because were not always gonna use our knowledge like for disable people not all of them have knowledge or even know what that is,for one example blind people yeah they have knowledge but also in there life they use there imagination throughout a blind person's life imagination is something they will use in there life spam and you wanna know why how do you think blind people know what a teacher is talking about or how they are drawing it blind people use there imagination they use it so they can understand what the teacher is doing or when there walking down the street or when buying clothes,There number one thing there gonna always use is imagination knowledge might also help because you have some information about it or do they just magically know what there doing no they imagine it,or they imagine were this thing is or that thing.
In conclusion, i agree with this statement " imagination is more important than knowledge " because for those given reasons like the one about us as kids we would use our imagination and how we would use it for ourselves and the other given example for the blind people how they have that throughout there life spam. therefore those are my reasons i agree with the given statement. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
6422237D967F | Would you like someone deciding what's best for you or take matter into your own hands? Well in my opinion people should make there own decisions because they can decide how they want things and what makes them happy in there own way even though some would argue that, people should seek guidance from experts and authorities because some times they know whats best for us and our own health. Yes, sometimes when you seek for guidance they help you out a lot and lead you to the right path. They also, help you find whats happy but its not like if your doing it because you want your just doing it to better yourself and your not doing what you want your doing what your told.
Deciding what u want probably is what's best since your going at your own paste, your taking it how you want. your going at your own paste with things. Also, no one can stop you from doing what you believe is best for you. You can find your own ways to cope with things without anyone telling you other wise. Going at your own pace is better then getting rushed, doing what you dont want, and doing what your told even. However, getting help pushes you to do it better.
Seeking guidance isnt bad at all either you get the help you need, you get that push forward to bettering yourself. Sometimes in life there are moments where your not your best help and you need a hand. Theres nothing ever wrong with getting a little help. You sometimes need a hand to understand your values to get to recognize them and meet them.
we all have different life matters because we all dont care about the same thing. we all care about different things. your life important matters are valuable and there something that only you can decide on not any one else. Sure, our values all are different in every type of way thats the reason to why we should decide on our own why our life matters are important. thats why in my opinion people should make there own decisions, find out there matters, what there good at and what the things that they value are. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
642CB997325C | Working Beyond
Do you need to work beyond what you have mastered to grow? Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow. Not everyone agrees that a person can grow after they have already done what they needed. However I agree because people grow by trying new things, people succeed by trying new things, and gain more experience.
Many people grow by trying new things. When people work beyond what they know they try new things. Trying new things can help them grow in many ways. People who try new things may know their job better and work harder. In addition people will get better at what they do. They will have more experience then others and know their surroundings.
Many people may succeed when they try new things. People will become more successful. They will know what has to be done and what does not because they have worked hard and know better. In addition they will know their way around. They will not need much help because they have done the work and grew to be better.
Finally people gain more experience. When people work beyond they will be more experienced. They will have more experience then others and help others when they need the help. People will be more educated in that topic and help others.
While many people think you can not grow. There are a lot of people who are probably growing because they went beyond to learn. Unless you do not do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow.
In conclusion people who go above and beyond grow because they have done more to help them grow and become better and to succeed. You should try and go beyond and see if you grown. | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
642E44E8DD25 | I would like to visit a engineering work place, or company. I would like to learn all about planning how do build something, and to they come up with good building ideas. What is the most hard part that a engineer has to take very series?.
If i was able do visit one of these companies i would get very happy. My mom told me that this is a good job, but it's a risk that people that want to have this job have to take in order do get pay very well. One of my teacher in Generic_School his dad was a engineer he told me that his dad didn't like math because it was to hard, but he got a job in the engineering company and he good checks. This teacher that i'm talking about didn't like science, or math and at the end he ended up teaching math, and science he is very good at it, and a very nice teacher too. I think all of this that i talked about is teaching me that i need to have good grades in my prealgebra class.
Engineering for me is easy do say, but i wanna experience does hard problems. On Saturdays and Sundays i work with my dad. My dads lets me cut the grass and it not easy, he keeps telling me to get good grades, so i don't have be like him all day in those hot days. I guess that working all day in a very hot summer is not food. My dad taught me that working under the sun is very hard a it makes your back hurt he told me that i need to be better them him. When i'm older i would get a good job, and i would help my dad, and my mom even dough they told me that when get older they are going to go back to El Salvador , but i'm still going to help them.
I think that i would give engineering a chance if not i'm going to find another job. thats ones of my job, or company i would like to visit if it was close to my school. Another company, or job would be frying airplanes i is good job i o ways wanted to fly one, but its do hard plus i don't think i'm going to go to college i think that this jobs are just to hard for me to learn especially me it take a long time for me to remember something. I think i can make it if only i put mu effort on it. My teachers tell me that i'm smart only when i want to, they o ways tell me to give it a try and i o ways ended up learning it sometimes i think that teachers sometimes understand students and hoe they feel. I get mad when don't understand something. i haven't done good in 7, and 8th grade. I think that all of these happen because i made new friends. I think that flying airplanes is much harder then learning engineering, but the only thing i need to do if put my effort in everything
I think that is not a bad idea do have some company around schools they should make field trips, kids could ask question that they would like to ask. This essay made me think more about what job would i like to do in the future. I think that i would stay with the engineering job i would like to put all my thoughts in to it and get a good college degrees, and get the job that i dream off. I think that my dream wold come true, and if it does or doesn't well i guess i would learn another thing i pay to go to college and get that job. i will try to make all my family happy and help all of them. I'm really good in everything if i only put my mind into it.
My name is Genric_Name, and i came to America to get a better future, and to all my SOL thank you for reading my essay. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
648D40256ADB | The societies of enter high school for the people having a good course for people want to have a good career because there think that having a good career that have better jobs in the future for the people already the experience for that careers. Yes, Because some the student will get more course that there want to learn to be there future career for the student there like. Like examples for me as student for high school is that i like to do engineer that one of my career that i like do and also that one my course as well. Because there alot of student want to get a good career to start off a position course and a better future job for the student likes. It because the student and the high school teacher there will think that student need a good career that ways if there get older there finally have experience for a career helping the people out. At least as younger student to get a experince to have a career any people that is young to get use to it for experience. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
649C7912163C | Have you ever thought of a place in the world you would like to visit? Some people would go to France to see the popular Eiffel Tower; while others would go to Hawaii just to relax. For me however, I would like to visit Generic_City because the people there are well mannered and kind. And also because there are amazing waterfalls and parks.
To begin with, the people there are well mannered and kind because they treat each other like brothers and sisters instead of mortal enemies. And something I would like to do once I arrive, is to greet these grateful and thankful people because they are gentle to one another. Furthermore, most of the people in Dubai make a honest living and there is rarely any crimes caused by residents.
Additionally, there are amazing waterfalls and parks because the designs and structures are well made and created. For instance, when visiting the waterfalls at night, it is very colorful which makes it beautiful to watch. Also, something I would like to do when I arrive, is to go on a boat ride because it is very peaceful and it make you feel calm as the ride goes along.
In conclusion, a place in the world I would like to visit is Generic_City because the people there are well disciplined and nice. And Also because there are outstanding waterfalls and parks. | 4 | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 5 | 4 |
64A8183557F7 | Should students graduate in three years?
Some school offer programs that allow students to graduate in three years. Students should graduate in three years because, they have more time planing what they want to do, they have more time to work and save money for college and they have more time to spend time with their family. To have ideas who they can do during that year.
Students should graduate from High school in three years because, some students don't know what career they want or they don't know if work or continue studying. In that year they can think and choose what they want. One of my friends graduated the last year of school and she stay at home because she doesn't know what career choose, so she just stay at home because she doesn't know what to study and can't find a job yet.
Some students after four years in High School, they take one year more to think and relax at home. That is why i think is a good idea just three years of High School. They can take that year to work and save money for college, if they want to. They can just start work to adapt to their new life or new thing that are going to learn. In a fact, student can graduate in three years of High School because is better for them. I think is better because it help those student that are more than eighteen to graduate not too old.
Some people think that students should not graduate from High school in three years because, they have less time, but they are wrong because, students can take the most important classes or they can take classes in the evenings. Some students take courses during the summers. Some students want to graduate early because have some goals that they want to complete. In the future there can be online classes for those who need extra classes.
In conclusion, graduate from High school in three years is a good idea because, students can start college or the work force one year early. Students have more time to search a good college and to prepare their thing. This is good for parents too because, they can go to the college that their son or daughter wants to go. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
64A9ECB1C55A | Have you ever thought about asking other people for advice? Perhaps, people sometimes talk to more than one person because they will be able to know which is the best choice to go with, to find their next step, and that person will stop thinking about their choice too much.
FIrstly, the person will be able to know which one is the best choice to go with. I have exprienced it when I make a wrong choice. One time, I planned to clean the car. Than, I asked my parents about it, and they said that You should not clean the car because there is a lot of different diseases that are in the car. I said to myself that my parents are right because I can be sick, tired, and can have different kinds of diseases. Then, I decided that I will not going to clean the car. It is better to ask advise from the people that are your friend or family. Moreover, it will help you to make better choice in your life. One time, I decided to play video games with my friend, and I actually had a test after that day. My friend just ask me that if I have a test. I told him that yes I do have test tomorrow, then he give me an advice that you should not play any video games tonight because video games can make you tired, bored, and can't think about your question in the test. When I thinked to myslef that if I play video games, I will not be able to think on my test the next day of it. I recommend to ask good people fo an advice.
Secondly, the person will find their next step. I have exprience that when I don't find my next step, I would ask for advice from other people. Once, I did not know how to do my next step my math assighnment. I asked my friend that should I multiplie or add, she showed me a trick for an easier way to always find your step when you are stuck on that kind of question. I likly use that trick trick, and I mostly find my step. I recommend that a person will have to ask for advice if they even know the answer. In addition, there was a time that my sister had a problem with her next step. It was an important assighnment so I did'nt help her but, I give some advices and that helped her a lot to, fix her step thet she was stuck. I will say that a person should ask people for an advice.
Lastly, the person will stop thinking about their choice too much. I have expreinced it when I think about my choice so much. Once, I had a choice that I could take the Mock writing SOL or I could get the original and a higher level writing SOL. I always thinked which one should I go for, and one day I was angry for no reason and that was because of how much I thinked about which one I should go with. I asked my dad about this and he said that you should take the original because this is a challenge for you. Additionally, I said to myslef that if I get this writing SOL and if I pass this, my parents ahould give at least a gift and I said to my dad that this challenge is great. Again, I recommend people to ask advice from someone to know and research more about something.
In conclusion, people somtimes talk to more than on person because they will be able to know which is the best choice to go with, to find their next direction, and that person will have to extract his thinking about their choice too much. Consenquently, I would always recommend to ask an advice from a person you know or knows the best. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
64AE19BBA321 | A problem is a chance for you to do your best. I agree with this statement because of many reasons, first reason why I agree is it never will solve the problem if you don't try to at least do it, second reason is that you feel more competitive to face the problem, the last reason is that your friends and family can help you a lot with the problem.
If there is a problem going on with your life you should always try to solve that, and do your best to solve it. If you don't do anything about the problem it is going to effect your life even more. So you might as will do all you can to do something good that can solve the problem. For example someone comes and bullies you everyday, and if you dont do anything about that then its gonna get worse and worse everyday.
When you see a problem getting in your way of accomplishing your goals, you should always stand up for your self and face the problem, and beat the problem so it can never bother you again. Their are many you have to face during your life for example, if there is a someone that always bothers you or bullies you, you should do something about it.
If you had a problem face you there probably someone that helped you a little to solve it. Its always really important to tell a friend or a family whats going on in your life because it always makes you feel better. The reason why it makes you feel better is because when your saying all the problems to your family or friend they kinda have ideas how you can solve it. For example if a bully starts to beat you up then the only people that can help you is family and friends.
A problem is a chance for you to do your best. This statement is a really good statement because it really motivates people to face there problems, and get them out of there way. I agreed to this statement because of all the reasons I was talking about in the other paragraphs. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
64B53DEF0467 | Technology is good for many stuff. For example, technology is good for research, homework or otherstuff. But, they their is a negative effects on people's lives. Technology can be use for bad stuff like in internet, researching bad stuff in the website. But like I said technology is good for many stuff
Technology is good for research because when your doing a project or study for test. But you dont know anything you just research in the website. Also good for your homework, you can find the answer or get informtion rewrite on your word. But, technology has negative effects on people's lives.
(I was talking a the computer).
Technology is good for play game. For example, I have a Playstation Four and so many video game. I play all day not get bored. But then, much too technology can cost your eye to get hurt or loose your eye sight. Their a other thing is bad for us as a teen. We waste so much time on video game rather spend time on doing our homework,prove writing skill, reading.
technology (phone) is good for communication with other people in fairy away places. For example, My family live in Generic_City, but my aunt and unlce live in Generic_City. But we use a phone to call them if their fine and we talk them about our life. Even tho were fary away them we still communicat with them. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
64EB91C84A32 | Being able to attend classes online is a dream come true. Many students miss a huge amount of school days because of personal reasons, health, or sports. However, taking a online class would resolve those issues. Students would benefit from online education because there's no reason to miss school and to work in a better environment
Whenever a student misses a day or days of school they fall behind. They then have to do extra work to get all caught up. It causes lots of students stress and sometimes failure. Weather can also cause school to cancel. For instance, snow storms, or floods but working at home doesnt cause you to miss out on school. Students can never be absent in online school because everything is on a laptop. They will always be up to date with there assignments or exams. Students don't have to worry about being late to class anymore either. Instead, students will be stress free sitting on there bed learning.
Every student would rather be at home working then to be working in a classroom. Our own homes make us feel relaxed and clam so therefore, its a safe environment to work in. We don't need to do fire drills or lock down drills in our homes because we know our homes are secure. Also, when students are focus and working on assignments, the time goes by to quick. Next thing you know the bell rings and the students havent finished the assignment yet. Working at home won't make students feel rushed at all. Instead they'll have all the time they need. Adding on to classes going by to quick, classrooms can get very loud. Unlike a classroom filled with students, your home is peaceful with no distractions.
To conclude, students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. On the other hand, some students think online school isnt for visual learners but online class has many ways to educate visual learners.
Online class has video conferencing to help better understand. Online school is for every student. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
65051CE36DA7 | One place i would like to go visit in this world would be portorico because it looks like a wonderful place to live in and because i want to experince how it is to live there or how school is for them. It might be a life changing for me to see how they live there maybe i might start being greatful for what i have and they dont and i would start helping others mor often.
One reason i would go to portorico is to see how they do stuff different like what they wear,what they eat, and what they do on daly it would be intersting seeing all that and i would like to try new food and wear the cloths they wear and try to see how it feels to be a portorican.
Another reason i would love to go to portorico is because at the USA i am not greatful for what i have and maybe if if i go over to portorico i will be greatful for what i have because i will see the difference of how i live and how they live it will also melt my heart to see them eating unhealth and i am over here throwing my food away because i dont want it.
My final reason for wanting to go to portorico is because i will want to see how their parents are with the kids like when they get in trouble. I also want to see how teachers are with their students when they get in trouble because i want to see if they are different than El Salvador cause there they hit their students with the ruler and that is not okay.
In conclution I would like to see every difference they have from the USA and El Salvador and i want to try every food that they have and spend time with students. I want to be greatful of everything that i am able to have and they dont and maybe share the stuff that i have and they dont. Now i really want to go to portorico and explore new stuff and have a nice adventure. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
65131EC5DD6A | Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of techology had positive or negative effects on people's lives.
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Because people sometime left the important stuff for be on their phone and that can distract to be preparate for any other things. Also people's due bad things like don't put attention on class or don't look their childs .However people's like to much techonology that they do all with that, we sometime are not responsible that we fight we others person's just for we cool or for be increduble. If we put limited using to much techonology we cannt effect our life and we can see that we can survive with that. but for person's who has business is more easier by using techonology. And students who need to make some homework or look for somenthing is a good choose.
Thousand of people's can a bad decition on using the techonology, because they never put a limited choosing not good decition but other's people used very well and understand that we have real life and we need to preparate for make a very well deciton, techonology had positive and negative effects. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
6515E6AFD11E | Although some people don't agree with this quote for being negative,however others and I agree of the enthusiasm quote because to learn something new in life and to make mistakes for something great later.
Do you agree with the Former Prime Minister Of England Winston Churchill quote? There others take this quote in a positive way or in a negative way. People that have enthusiasm will most likely to take the quote to their own hearts that doesn't want to quit or gives up yet. Like the quote says from failure to failure that will follow up to a pursuit of success. So here comes the reasons of enthusiasm in the quote.
Learning something new that actually comes up great. A lot of people learn from their own failures in the past for doing something that wasn't easy for their own lives. Like example someone wants to speak a different language but failed many times,that actually doesn't wants to give up on the language that trying to learn. And it's better to make mistakes for something greater later in life. Like if you failed a lot and that you learn from your own mistakes from those mistakes will do something greater in the future.
Others may disagree that quote doesn't fit right their own selves and for being negative. Others careless about the enthusiasm how it will help for their lifetime. So they don't have the positive attitude and thinks about nothing at all. Negativity is the main point that they fail to fail without trying the best and the enthusiasm with them in life it's worthless to them in life.
Although some people don't agree with this quote for being negative,however others and I agree of the enthusiasm quote because to learn something new in life and to make mistakes for something great later. With this quote I agree with the power of the enthusiasm in lives. People should take the quote like it's a everyday thing in life | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
6521895BA018 | One time, my friend used all type of drogas for example: cocaine, marihuna, ciggarett,alcohol,etc. But one day he asked me what school am i going? i said Generic_School, can i go with you? he asked me, of course i said. I am tired to use all this drogas, i want to be something else in my life. Since this moment he chenged his life. Now he wanna be a doctor for to help people to become a some else in their life. I am agree with Emerson's statement about individuality because i can demostrate that they said is wrong, to show them what is defference between to make and to talk, and to be concetrate. Those thing i can show the people that i can doing with myself and that make me a greatest accomplishment.
I feel to be myself, it is not depend what people said about me. If i want to change or to be something else in a world, i have to do what my mind say to me, for example if i wanna be a teacher. And they tell me to be a teacher is not important because their payment is trash, they just can earn $1000 each months. But if i like to be teacher do not matter what i earn. They will trying to make me confuse. Maybe they already tried it, but they could not do it , that is why they believe that i could not do it either but not all time is the same, the world change every day so i need to try to show them that what they said it, it was wrong. So it is important do not pay attention people who try to make me confuse.
Also there are two defference between to make and to talk because i can believe in myself but if i just talk and to say i will do this, i will do that and i will not doing nothing. That way i can help the world even i lie myself. But if i did not said none and to show people that i change my life with my attitude. they will come at me and ask me what happend with me? because i am changing. I will tell them that i want to be something else in a world. That will be my greatest accomplishment.
Even if i believe in myself i need to be concentrate because i am human and i am not perfect, i can fail with my decision if i am not concetrate. Because bad people will like to see me on ground they will tell something fun that i missing. For example to study, many people do not like to study because they say that school is boring so that i am doing they believe that is boring. They will try to convence me doing wrong things so i have to demostrate them that i wanna be something else in a world not just have fun.
In conclusion, work individuality is not easy i have
To showto the people that sometime we do not need help from somebody else. Just believe in myself, do not heard what they said about me, to show them what is the defference between to make then to talk and all time to be concentration in what i am doing. Thus i something else is the greatest accomplishment. "The world needs me". if | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
6531927DF837 | The mind can perform differently when extensively staring into a phone screen and causes a lot of distractions in the classroom setting depending on how it's used. As for educational purposes, using a cellphone to probably schedule some test dates, or save notes for later use can really improve keeping track of class subjects and assignments, considering most individuals carry their cellular devices on them every time of the day. We also have notifications on our devices to notify us on when we've missed an important assignment or other things.
The real issue is whether the students are actually taking advantage of it's dependability to actually improve their classroom performance. The human brain can be effected on how long you use the phone regardless of where you are, and that issue goes across all devices. When having used your phone maybe in the middle of the night before a major test, your sleep is cut by maybe an hour due to the eyes being exposed to blue light shifts, which is the brightness of the phone seeping into your eyes, so it is very critical on how the person uses the device before, during, and after school.
Now another big issue is having the freedom and functionality to use the phone however you'd like. This is where a teenager's habit of text, calling, or sending pictures, brings up the debate of using cellphones for educational purposes. It is very easy to get distracted by other uses of the phone while also very easy to take answers from maybe a friend or find cheat sheets online. We don't have the right to control how people use their phone and that's where my opinion on it leans towards restriction policies and or, giving full responsibility to the teacher about when they can use their phone.
Our phones are also effectively useful for keeping a calendar and keeping us notified of the important things in life especially in the educational sense where paper and memory just don't suit us very well anymore in this day and age. Phone's are evolving rapidly and manufacturers are finding new ways of making them more useful for work, school, and social media. Modern education now requires plenty of technology to keep us updated, and there will eventually be a day where education is fully integrated into computers and touch screen devices.
I do agree we need some form of policy or agenda to make use of the phone to help our student's with how they're approaching their education. Teachers must have to conduct the convenience of the phone and whether a certain student can use it properly and educationally. It is a unique creation we have come to experience in our time, and I hope our generation can think heavily on this matter with a progressive and open mind. All it takes is serious debate and rationality for both sides of a subject matter to be comfortable and conclude with what helps us most while also advancing our students properly. | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
653620381DB3 | Do you think that high schoool should only be 3 years instead of 4 years. well some might say it would be better having 3 year's of school other then 4 year's. but the way to achieve it is difficult.
I think that school should be only 3 years. beacause some student don't really want to be in school for too long. this can give student's a goal so that they don't have to stay for 4 years. it would give the students a higher chance to focus in school and then head out to college for those who are interested.
I belive that if student's can find a goal of having to be going for 3 years in school instead of 4 year's. it would take them hard work and confident in order to earn it but other's might say that they perfer to be in school longer. because of friend's or liking to learn alot and it no rush toward them for they are interted in learning.
but in the future I hope that evey student can find a way to be seccessful in there time in school. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
654DF9ECDD42 | Friday, March 22, 2019.
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Should people guiadance from experts and authorities about life's important matter or should people make their own decisions? Why make own decision is better?
Generic_School, have different kind of career that student can choose for study in their life, also there is people who help to select which subject is better, they make opinion about why you have to take that career. Hear ideas and opinions sometime make you to do best things and get successful in the life.
Some students are thinking about choose Science, Why they prefer Science?, They believe that science could bring it better opportunities in their life, for example: Exist important people who created tools that are availabe to save life of people. There is more people who invented different kind of instruments, the microscope is one, this tool really that is very important, this one help us to see stars more close or any other thing that are a far of us. Those are some examples that why we took the decision of choose Science, does not matter what the instructors of the University said.
Generic_School, also have the career of study History, some guys voted for that one, But Why?, just because for a few reason, one of them is that they want to learn more about how each war started, Life's Presindents, etc. History is a great subject that teach us many important events that we even dont know that was real in the life, however, at end of the day just you have the option to do waht you like and want.
Following own instincts and ideas, is the best way to get what make you happy, remember, does not matter what others think about you. The life is about " HEAR ADVICE AND THEN TAKE YOUR OWN DECISION". | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
65593BCE26BF | Many schools have partnerships with local companies. It allow students to explore certain professions. Students needs a lot of stuff to success in life. Schools should have the qualities to help their students success.
Schools should have a partnership business to help all the students to reach their goals. Helping the students to improve their skills and give them time to improve their brains as well. Having a partnership is much easier, because members helps when its needed.
Partnership is easier, because if the business doesn't work out, then everyone will take the risk not only one person. Taking the risk alone is very hard, It's as hard as touching the clouds. Having all the risk alone is horrible, for an example it can causes living in the street or losing all the money that the person have. I want to live a good life when I grow up , so I won't like to take all the risk by myself. I don't want to lose all my money so I would be happy to have a partnership member to help me out. Plus Not working alone, I do not like to work alone in life. I would love to work with other people when I grow up.
Sharing Is one thing I like about partnership. It's not only sharing the risks, but sharing the good stuff too. Sharing ideas to make the profit better. Sharing money to grow the business. Yes, sharing is a really good thing in a partnership business. Partnership is not about loneliness, but its about happiness. Working alone is really boring , but by talking to the members of the partnership can be really fun. By doing that the members gets to know each other much more. I believe that all is it about is trust and happiness.
Some people might thinks that Partnership is not good. They believe that partnership business is not helpful at all, but they are wrong it is helpful. They think that the members might not get along with each other, and at the end the business will break down. Getting along with each other takes time, but picking the right people for the business is needed. People who thinks that partnership is bad they are actually wrong, but they have points though. Partnership is about learning new stuff from other people, and it's the most important thing in a partnership business.
A lot of schools now are having a partnership with local companies, which is a good thing. It will help students to improve their skills. It will also help the students to reach their goals and success in life. Plus having a partnership business is much easier, and
No one takes the risk alone. Schools should have the qualities to help the students success in their future life. | 2.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
655BD307F87D | Many students in high school are looking for the way to reduce their time in school, there are several reason for students to think about it. These students might be passing through hard situatons, such as: economical crisis, issues at home, need of independence or any other problems that is not allowing them to be in school the time they should be in, but some people do not need a short period in high school because of they are struggling, this group of people might want go to college earlier or get a job as soon as possible for personal reason.
In the United States, we live everyday a situation call "migration", this type of situation make people to leave their countries for some valid reason, regardless the issues they will have coming into the country. In fact many of this people is looking a better life here, the life they could not have in their countries because of their governments, scarcity of resources, scarcity of jobs, low wages, dangerous areas and many others situations that nobody would like to live. Between this group of people we can find students that were in school in their countries, but when they come into this country and they get in high school, as a result of the "bad" education from certain countries, these students are settled in grades where they should not be because of their age and learning capacity. This is one of the main reasons why high schools and the departament of education should have programs where this group of students can find better opportunities of learning without changing the time they should be in school.
In another point of view, for school districs to offer this type of programs, the country will get benefits because of the students will get in college earlier and we are going to get a lot of professional people that can help to improve our nation.
Economy will be a good reason to want get out of high school one year early, this is because many people do not count with the amount of money that is needed to go to college, many students prefer to work to make money for their payments instead of getting financial help from the bank that they will have to pay with higher interest in the future. Other students think about the possibility to go to college out of the country because of the high cost of them, but they still have to work and get extra money.
The departament of education of the United States is encharge for all these changes and they should take this option because it would benefit people, would benefit the country, and will benefit students in general.
The program could work if students stay after school or they come at night, this would give them more opportunities to make a plan where they can work hard to reduce their time in high school, it is really important to keep on mind that many students already work in their free time and they might not be able to do an extra time in high school, that is why this offer should be analyzed in order to the student benefit, but at the same time giving the enough amount of knowledge they will need. | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
6574B5B58A11 | Always being active, determined to become successful can lead to lots of accomplishments; however, some people think it is necessary to procrastinate. Thomas Jefferson quoted
"Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something."
Having the mind set of being able to accomplish assignments, and being active in anything can lead to being successful in life, having the ability to not procrastinate, and people start to see that a person is responsible or trustworthy. These are reasons why it is important to be motivated, and to be able to accomplish assignments.
Having the mind set of being able to accomplish assignments, and being active in anything can lead to being successful in life. Having the motivation of being able to accomplish assignments on time and the accuracy is important; therefore, it shows that a person is organize. Organization is important because it shows that a person can arrange equipment or utensils neatly, for it helps in the future. Accomplishing assignments can lead to success in life and becoming financially stable because of finishing assignment on time and by completing them. The sensation of having motivation to complete assignments and being successful in life is amazing.
Having the mind set of being able to accomplish assignments, and being active in anything can lead to having the ability to not procrastinate. It is important to keep track on which assignments has to be completed because having a incomplete assignments passed due can cause trouble. It makes it harder for a person to finish an assignment at the last minute because of the rush. Procrastinating is not the key of finishing any assignments on time and by having the assignments accurate. Being able to complete assignments on time is precisely important because it can help in the future with any assignments that crosses.
Having the mind set of being able to accomplish assignments, and being active in anything can lead to people seeing a person as responsible or trustworthy. People can see a person as responsible because they complete assignments on time or before hand. People do not have to tell a person repeatedly to have an assignment completed by a certain date. Other people can see a person as trustworthy because they stick to what they asked to do. They finish the assignment before hand or on time, which makes people trust them more. Accomplishing assignments can help reach goals, and it can help in the future.
It is important to have a person active and and determined to complete assignments without procrastinating. Even though people might think it is not important, but it really is because it helps a person with massive assignments. It gives them knowledge on why it is very important to keep on track and to finish work on time. Being successful in life, having the ability to not procrastinate, and people seeing a person as responsible or trustworthy are all reasons why it is important to accomplish assignments and being active in anything that wants to be completed. | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
6586DF43A92D | I agree with British Prime Minister Winston Churchill when he said that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". Because we are all failures, but we all succed in life, if we work hard. Success is not going to come to us as esay as pie " we go to success". To go to success we have to be failures in a consistent matter but we learn from being a failure, to fix our mistakes. Knowing that we want a better future and that we want to be successful in many things such as in school, work, sports and many other things we have in life ,that we want to become successful gives us enthusiasm eventhough if fail to do good at moments. Trying hard and keep tryin till you reach success helps us to keep our enthusiasim.
Being successful in school well help us in our daily life. We will go from failure to failure without the loss of enthusiasim. We know that by being successful in school we are going to have many opportunities in life. Being a failure is not bad, it makes us strong to keep trying more and more. To graduate from high school we all need to pass a certain amount of SOL. Sometimes we pass the SOL some times we dont,Thats what leads us to success because we are going from failure to failure but with enthuisasim ,since we keep trying and trying till we pass the SOL. Because we know that passing the SOL is leading us to success and that we have to work hard and go to success because its not going to come to us if we loss our enthusiasim to keep trying.
Work can make us go from failure to failure ,but enthusiasim well take us to success. Being successful in work may be hard that it might make us feel down or even make us feel like giving up. But always working hard and with alot of enthusiasim will help us succeed and acomplish many things such as getting a higher payment and getting a better employment can be possible if we always work hard towards success and with enthusiasim. Keeping enthusiasim is good because it doesnt only helps you to be motivated to keep working hard towards your goal / Success, but it helps your peers as well since your transmitting them the good vibe and enthusiasim. Others well succed too since your transmitting the good vibe/ enthusiasim to them they will be inspired by you.
Playing a sport is not easy. Alot of practice and dedication is required to because successful in a sport. Becoming successful in a sport will take you from being a failure and to a failure once again . But if you really want to succed in that specific sport that you like ,you will have to try and keep trying with enthusiasim. Trying with enthusiasim willl help you become successful in that sport that you like and that you have been practicing with your dedication and enthusiasim.
Others may say that " Success consists of going from failure to failure with loss of enthusiasim". People say this because they dont try as hard, if they get things wrong at first they give up. People wotn try to work hard and go to success they just give and wait for success to come to them (THATS NEVER HAPPENNING!!!). People also say this (" success consists of going from failure to failure with loss of enthusiasim") because they find it impossible that enthusiasim gives you the strength to keep trying.
Since they are the ones who are the failure that wont work with the enthusiasimto succeed.
Being a failure is not bad. Working to success with the loss of enthusiasim just because we fell a couple of times is bad. Because if we dont work to success and lose our enthusiasim we will never succed in anything we will just live our daily life as a failure. We are all failures but if we work hard we will become a better failure, A failure that succeed in life not a failure who just gives up and loses its enthusiasim. Working to go to success with enthusiasim will help you accomplish your goals and also it will inspire others. Others will also get the same energy as you and will work towards success with enthusiasim. A failure is what makes us strong and successful we just have to give that failure enthusiasim to keep trying and to succeed. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
65975436BE5C | True self-esteem dose come from praising someone to keep going and to follow their dream. Like a good friend once said "never let anyone put you down always get right back up on your feet". This is saying that people should believe in their self more than what other people say about them that will drag them down. People need to have thick skin to block all the negative haters and disbelievers because having courage, confident, and trust can help with self-esteem.
First, people need to be confident in their self in order to fallow what they want to achieve in life. For example, I was not confident on passing the SOL and my teacher was praising me to be positive and not to over think it. Then it came to the SOL, and when I finished it, the next day my teacher told me that I had passed. She later then told me that I should believe in my self more. This show that when someone praises another person that they will have confidants in their self.
Second, courage can be helpful in over coming fears that can drag one self down. For example, when running a relay race and you start to fall behind. People end up giving up and saying in their head I lost there is no way to catch up because Im all ready in last place. People will want a friend to cheer them up and encourage them not to quit and to keep fighting. From the courage that is given to them then they will keep running till the finish line. This shows that courage can praise someone to keep going.
Finally, many young teens should trust what adults say to them and not ignore them. However, some may say that teens can do what ever they want, they are wrong because teens need to be taught life lessons. For example, when I was younger I steal from stores with a couple of friends. My mother told me not to hang out with other teens that will cause trouble. Which I didnt listen to her and we got caught by the workers and they called our parents to come pay for the belongings we stole. This shows that by praise from adults, teens will make good choices that wont get them punished.
In conclusion, praises can be very helpful for a person to feel good about their self. When taking any kind of test people will want to be successful. To when having to play in a sport people will want to win and not quit. Also to listen to people that are there for others no matter what. This shows that having courage, confident, and trust can help with self-esteem. | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
65B1F548E8BE | As teen mature, they make opinions about issues that can affect them. Some school offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I think students should not be benefit to attent classes from home.
Students would not be able to socialize with other students. For example, staying home every single day and not going out can lead you to depression. I personnel can't stay home all day and only focus on school. Also, teenagers need to interact with people more often and not be home all day. In conclusion, students need to get out of their home to clear their mind about all the work the school gives them.
Students would not be responsible in the future. For example, when they grow up they will not have the knowledge and the resposability it take to get a job out side of home. Students would not know all the resposabilities it takes to wake up every single day in the morning to go to school and do all the work that is required to do to be able to graduate. In other word, it will affect them not knowing how hard it's to work hard for something they never force them self to do. In conclusion, teenagers should get the experience and the hard work it take to be successful in life at a young age.
While some people believe that students should not be benefit to attend classes from home, others argue that students should be benefit to attend classes from home because they can do their work on their own pace. Althought this might be valid,There is several ideas to considered such as, Students would not be able to experience of being part of a club or sport in school. For example, Schools have many activies that can be helpful for students futher in life. Students will not know how it feel to be part of a team or how to work as a team. Also, In the furure sometimes they will be required to work with a group of people but they will not be comfortable because they never had that experience. In conclusion, Students wouldn't be able to do any activies in school.
Students shouldn't be allow to take classes at home while other student's go to school. First, Students will be isolated in their home all the time. Secondly, They will not know the hard work they need to put in to achieve something. Finally, Students wouldn't be able to enjoy the life of a teenager. As a result, Do you think it will help student's in the future? | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
65B7FDE783F2 | I am student for Generic_School,I have work after school finish school in go to Mai work is all day finish fast. I work four day for week is,I need finish high school in go to fiend university in finish four years. in open businesses for Mai self in work in nether people in make money in big businesses open nether place.
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I think each school or work for school good for you life for horizon school help you how think finish high school in go university in go work after class is help your self for make money help for life in think businesses if you need businesses man is high money bet you steel need stated how work businesses,open businesses for Mai self in work in nether people in make money in big businesses open nether place, he life in horizon he need merit or hoes in car he need life good or happy. in think nether world, open schools nether place in help people is no have money,help for fiend work. in stop fight country in kill people in Chang world for good in life help people what need home or food anther need.
I think each school or work for school good for you life for horizon school help you how think finish high school in go university. bet Chang preview the text, be student he work in school he cant high money in takes he cant buy hoes in Gus for he car in finish high school he need go to university in buy class in room he lief in food in finish university,he need work or job. he need make money for he life in horizon he need merit or hoes in car he need life good or happy. he no how work four day for week in help people. how think finish high school in go university in go work after class is help your self for make money help for life in think businesses if you need businesses man is high money bet you steel need stated how work businesses,slued for businesses man how work in thinking in take people take neither businesses man help to gather. I think all school need money for help student study very good for finish high school in go university what he do math sines he client finish university in go work in make money in good life. | 1.5 | 2 | 1.5 | 1 | 1.5 | 2 |
65CC82C9B3C9 | I I agree because people should have more time to rest mostly because the effect of the stress and the health of their body. Schools should be the same, they could have more time to do their homework and rest, because there is stress in children. In the majority of middle schoolers and high schoolers there is always stress and preoccupations about grades. Most of high school teenagers stress and worry about colleges if they got in or not. And by taking the four-day weekend we are reserving energy and resources, by not driving cars or motorcycles because of the toxic smoke a vehicle throws to the air we breath.
Sometimes some of the big businesses become of abusive or people's hours to get extra work done. It should be people's decision if they want to stay extra hours if they want to get their work done. People work to live and not live to work they somehow got to look for ways to provide themselves and sometimes their families. If they were to finish their jobs with everything done , they get to go home and be with their families.
Having the time off can be people to catch with work if they are behind or for teenagers to catch up with homeworks. School sometimes can be exhausting because some people could be depressed or stressed out to get their things done. Everyone can run out of energy especially when everybody expects for you to do good. Every single member of your family is always telling you to do good just to get things in life is very stressful. Working hard through four days it is more then enough to get work done if you put your mind to it.
People need the extra time to relax, because it is not good for the body mentally and physically. Working too much causes stress and grueling because thinking too much about work and worrying about the bills that they have to pay. By being worried too much can even cause you to go to the hospital so it would be not be good for your health. When you think about the things you have to do to support yourself you have to put yourmind to it and not slack if you want that advantage of thedays you are going to have work.
In conclusions I agree because people should have more time to relax and not stressed about their jobs and what they have to do. People get exhausted and start to worry about all of their responsabilities they have to do. Working for 10 hours is more then enough for a person. Sometimes teeagers and adults carry many preoccupations that they shouldn't worry about but they have to if it envolves them. Schools should be the same and not be so stressful, it could be dangerous to stress and not sleep because they worry about the responsabilities that have to be done. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
65DBDD75CA50 | Jonh once said, Technology had positive and negative effects on people's life, people complete many tasks without having contact with others. Some people said that technology is good because they can do many thinks, like find books, information and do works more easy. Other people thinks differents, they said that technology is bad because had negative effects on people life, if people do not know how to use it, they can will have problems because sometimes people send archivements or informations to the wrong person or publish it. I think that technology is bad because with technology we can do many thinks, but some people use technology for hacks, steal acounts and cheat persons.
First, some people said that the technology is important in this era, because is more easy to do many thinks,
for example, search specific information more fast.
To do homeworks or company works with more information and explanations make projects, glide planes or to find books and work without think a lot.
Second,the technology is very important to some people, because many times they used it to do they works and make some project, the technology in this era provoked many wrong thinks, it created many electronic thinks that are advanced. Then, the purpose of use technology if for good reasons and with the technology always people will have easy infornation but they wil not learn the technology caused that people lose their time playing videos games and visiting wrongs wed site. However, the technology caused many problems, the people are using the electronic thinks a lot, the cellphone, video games etc. It are creating a obsession in the people, many kids and adolocents have problems with they vision, because pass a lot of time in the cell phone, computer or playing videos games causing cancer, tumor or lose their vision.
Finally, the obsession that technology are creating is very worrying, many kids don't do the homeworks, the students text in class and do not put attention, other persons driving texting causing accidents. Some parents permit that they kids use technology, but they do not have the contol of them the adolecents use technology for have fun sometimes causing problems. Today in this era the technology are advancing and provoking that people do not learn and sometimes it cause the death, persons use technology sometimes to hacks acounts and steal informations, photos or they publish inappropriate photos in they acounts causing bullyng or making the person feels bad. Also, the technology is very advance that the people are creating robot to make more easy the works, but is is a ploblem because the robot will be remove the people jobs, causing that the people leaving whithout job.
In conclusion, the technology had negative effects on people's life, creating obsession on people and doing more easy the ability to do works,but for people tha use technology a lot need to have a limit, and if they have acounts with important information they need to protect it with a strong password, if they have kids and permit that use technology they need to control them what they do and put a limit how much can use the computer, cell phone or videos games. people have to put their own limit to control technology when it cause problems. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
66133AC6189A | On my experiences I think It would be impossible to change the first impressions becuase one different people have different types of characteristics traits. For example one of my friend who move to text,her characteristic traits I remember she was so nice to everybody when she use to live her in virginia and also she use to get along with everbody at the school. This shows that type of impressions that my friend Generic_Name has.
Another example is when I was in lunch line with my friend Generic_Name,a spanish girl touch my hair,I did not know that girl was the girlfriend of the boy that was in one of my class. Until then when I was going to my third class I ask that boy if he could help me find this class because I did not know where all my classes were,when he came up to me to explain the schuedule and told me and him had the same class,his girlfriend look at me mad. This shows that at first the girl of the boy was nice and then the girl of the boy was kind of mean to mean.
Last example everbody has different types of impressions,it could be in a good way or bad way. Sometimes people impressions might change or they might still be the same. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
66241AEC8351 | Changing our school meun to much healthier choice's is a good idea because its good for the students to eat much healthier food in school. Eating more fresh fruits and water can help students focus and not fall asleep in class. Eating junk food could make you tired and you won't have theenergy to do anything. Its better to take away the opition of getting junk food that the cafeteria puts out for students. Students wont be so tempted to eat it, and could chose a better and healthier choice.
Most students want to stay in shape, so they try to eat healthier. adding more healthier choices in th school caferteria meun could help them stay in shape. most students don't workout so they depend on the food they eat. Some students tend to buy food and then throw it out becuase of how the food is made. The school could make a slald bar for those who chose to eat it and they could add there own toppings so they could eat somthing they like instead of throwing it out.
I think having fruits smoothies, organic bake goods, and a salad bar could be very good for every school to have because the school could make a lot of money selling this at school and its healthy for students to eat and enjoy. most students wont have to get uber eats to get food that they like if the school sold smoothies or bake goods. And staff members that get lunch from the cafeteria could enjoy having a healthier lunch.
in conclusion changing the schools cafeterias meun to much healthier choice would be good for students and staff members so they could stay healthy and focus. | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
66288718AF60 | When you need advice do you just talk to one person or more? Its way better telling people the things that happen so you can get there view because you might not see it the way they do. When you tell more people you get more advice and thats good. Let's say that you have some things going on in your life and you want some advice to try to make it a bit better so you ask a couple of your friends to help you and give you some advice. They give you advice and you take it and try it and it works so it made you feel it better but thats only one advice they gave from all your friends so there is still a bit more. So you day got better. An yes i understand sometimes you don't want to share your stuff with people so you just have one friend you tell everything to and they help with everything they listen,give back what they think. An yea you might have a different thought of if this like you might think just telling one perosn is better because you don't feel like sharing your stuff with people and i get that but when you need advice do you just want that person or alot of people giving you advice. It's your choice on what pick.
But i still asking people for some advice is better because like i said earlier they give more advice, They will give there option and tell if if your in the right or wrong. An they will always be there for you no matter what, thats why i say yes. because you never know what they will tell you or do about the things you tell them but if there real friends they'll stick by yotu side no matter what. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
6642E181B08D | I think that summer is to enjoy the weather, family, friends and if you have a pet also him and everything else.
no body would like to be thinking about school work or trying to figure it out to complete homework.
In my opinion students need to relax from a big long year of school and this is not just convinient for for young people, we also know that we have a clear example of Adult people( older people)
they also need a big break from their jobs because they might feel really tired or stressed with work same as students and so that i am not trying to compare adults with young people I know they have even more responsabilities with their lifes but students comes to be more understanble because of the reason that they need to save more energy and have enough sleeping time but adults also need the same things and due that many jobs required just a week of vacation (sometimes even more) they feel really streess and tired and that why they would really wish to have a big vacation to can spend time with their family etc. same with student now that they have the opportunity to have a big vacation enjoy it.
Plus many students really love summer because the weather( the warm breeze) the feeling of summer or the feeling that you know like freedoom not worry about your grades, activities, projects and etc. makes a lot of diference between a long break and a shorter brake, but I also take the position of the educator, I know they wouldnt like to been repeating things to make student remenber of the subjects they saw the last year and having issues with things they forgot, That would be really stressful but come on! Who wouldnt like a big vacation? good for some teachers that save money to enjoy summer.
I also take the student position and as student I identified my self with the first character I describe when Students need the vacation to relax, but theres another big example of why vacation should be longer. first of all some student plan their goals during the summer probably to get a full time job during summer ( i KNOW EVEN SOME TEACHERS do )
to can save money and spend it on things they need another example is to save money for collegue, yes for collegue.
and probably this is the major goal of many students trying to have a great summer because of the only reasong that they dont have as much support as the other students but at the same time I understand teacher or educators because their goal is to push us up in our goals and the once a year a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week of in spring and fall sounds really nice since some student may love the weather by those times even though they like to see the fall so theres not problem concluding with everything else it will be almost the same as the regular summe vacation except that It will be more shorter.
In conclusion, the break that we already have is perfect because of the only reason of that many student love it, the weather is so chill the beaches are already open and is enough time to go out of town to see your family and have a great time with them and good for those who liked to work during summer just to have some extra money or help a little of bet their spences. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
6686DB25FBD0 | I believe that gaining life experience and learning from your mistakes and working hard, comes when we are always doing something and accomplish more. Accomplish more and always doing something is important to me because it gives me more opportunity to be successful in life .
To begin with,by practicing playing my favorite sport ,soccer everyday after school and on my free time; because I was in my school team and I was really bad and weak at it .Practicing helped me to overcome my weakness and to learn from my mistakes ,and also to know the rules of the game and basis of soccer.
Some people believe inactivity serve a purpose that led you to success;however, we gain life experience and learning from our mistakes if we are always doing something or we accomplished more . Also,by practicing soccer everyday and working hard on it,I learned tricks and how to kick the ball directly to my teammates and how to be good goal keeper and catch the ball as well. And that gives me more experience and strength to continue.
Another example,one day we were playing and their was judgments there,choosing the best player to be in the "International Soccer Team" ,depending on how the player plays and how they follow the rules. Three days later, I got nominated to participate in the International team and I also got honored for being the best player in the game and of course, that led me to successful opportunity in the future.
In conclusion, by working hard and always doing something makes, you to gain life experience and more opportunities and to accomplish more. To accomplish something is not easy, you have to face a lot of difficulties and facing those difficulties and get over it that's what meant by accomplish .It will walk you through a lot to accomplish something in your life, you just have to keep going and to work hard and never give up and all of that will pays off by being success in your life . | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
66C2FA45A48B | Energy and many different resources are a big patrimony that nature gave us,every single person need to take care of every single resource that we have like energy,water,etc. All of those resources complement each other to do their functions for example: without water we would not have energy,water helps to make energy when it is coming down like a waterfall,so there is when water produce energy. We also know the sun is an energy reproducer and we can get a natural energy,the type of machine that is used for that kind of energy is a little expensive,but is better than a normal energy that we use every single day, it is less dangerous for our enviroment. An example of sunlight energy can be the calculators that need to be charged with light,so they do not need batteries which is a good one.
The government and obviously every single person need take care of this amazing resource to conserve it for a long time. Conserve and earn energy is a big challenge for all,we thought that little things like leave the lights turn on for along time and do not use them is a loose of energy and money,those little things affect us believe it or not and of course affects our aconomy. Energy is one of the most expensive resources,we pay for electricity,because to reproduce energy it goes through an expensive process.
The prompt says that adopt a four days of work with each day consisting of ten hours it is going to conserve more energy. I thing that can help us to reduce the lost of energy,but at the end we make the change. I think ten hours of school is not going to make a big difference,first of all that change will create many conflicts with students who practice a sport,have things to do after school,or need to work after school the time is not going to adjust.
Parents will get in troubles to pick their children or to leave them in an extracurricular activities,even if the school adopt that proposal that does not mean that all of the jobs and schools are also going to adopt it,so that is going to affect families who have children in that school. I believe the change is going to be stressful for many parents who both of them need to work. One example can be when people who need a babysitter to take care of their children,we know that person also have a family or have things to do after job and if her job take more time that she usually do is going to affect her. Not all of the people are able or agree to work till late,and if they accept they want to be paid more.
Having a long days of school,I mean more hours that we used to do can be stressful for students that are very mischievous or rude,they just want to go home early as they can and if the school add more hours they are going to be more rude than they are. We are teens,we just want to have a good adolescense. The good thing is that we are going to have one more day off out of school. We used to have two days out of school,but now we are going to have three,so if we add the days like early dismissal,vacations,or because of the weather those are going to be lost days,in fact we are going to lost more days,so I think that is going to affect our academic life. The period of time that we used to have to finish the unity for each class sometimes does not adjust and we get busy,imagine if we just have four days of school plus the teens that like to be absent. In fact,all in the world has advantages and disadvantages as I mentioned.
One of the advantages that I can see is that teenagers are going to be more hours doing good things being in the school,and not waisting their time doing things that are disturbing for them. We usually go to school an average of seven hours,if the businessses want to add two or three more hours to be in total ten hours taking out one day,and becoming just four days of school each day ten hours of work,In my opinion is going to be the same,because the two or three extra hours that they would add is the same that one more day of school;however,what is going to happen with the students that are in sports,have other activities or students that are in clubs,they will going home till night,I believe that is not good for anybody,they are not going to have time to do their homework for the next day,or an extra activity if they want during the rest of the day.
In conclusion let the things stay same till this day,we can conserve energy doing other type of proposal that not affect too much the people and their activities. We can start doing little things like turning off the lights of our house when we do not stay there,or when we do not use them. Those are my thoughts,so we can help our world being more educated with our enviroment and the resources that they provide for us. Energy is something indispensable in our life,so if we do not take care of that resource we are going to have a lot of problems in the future,as energy become more expensive or something like that. We can provide huge things to our country and the world if we want. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
66F03584BCA5 | Should people make their own decision, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters ? Some people value self reliance and feel the need to follow their own instincts and ideas. Although these people are confident and trust themselves,I believe people should ask for advice from their parents and other professionals before making important life decisions.
First of all, most people respect and value their parents. For example, when I consider getting another job,I like to discuss my options with my parents. They help me look at both the good and bad things about different job. They bring up things that I may have not thought about. Their advice help me make better decisions. I appreciate their knowledge because they know me very well and want the best for me. Therefor, I thing It' is important to ask for their guidance in these matters.
Secondly, I would ask not only my family, not also my teachers when I make decisions about my education. For instance, after I graduate from high school and earn my diploma I will ask my teacher about the possibility of going to a community college or taking extra classes to help me get a good job that will make me happy and provide me with skills make so that I can live a better life. My teacher have worked hard with me to provide me with guidance and the skills I need to be smart in life.
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I think people should ask for help and guidance from their parents and teacher before making important life decisions. Both my parents and my teachers know my strengths and weaknesses and can help me in making the best decisions. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
66F7AD6B99E2 | I should agree because it can make your grades higher by joining sports, after school subjects or classes, and it make you more smarter and more. In my school we join sports and some after school classes and if we join some sports or some activities after school we have credits and it add up to your grades and people doesn't want to participate because they're lazy and sometimes they make up stories that the have headache, sick, stomach ache, and just skipping after school classes. And sometimes they fail some classes and teachers wants to convince them to join and stay after class and make their grades up.
I have a friend that is a bit of a trouble in school his name is Generic_Name he ask me if I could help him do his work and I said to him that " You can join activity classes at social studies, or stay after school, and it makes your grades high and you can learn something " And he didn't followed me, and thats why he still have one F on Social Studies.
If I was the principal I would make every students join sports and make them stay after school for those school activities, and if they have like an F in one class or a missing assignment I would call their parents and ask the parents if their child can stay after class and make their bad grades or missing assignment gone and make their grades higher and get extra credits for participating for after school activities.
And if I was the student I can convince them by letting students know if they have problems on their work or missing assignments I would let them convince to join the after school activities or stay after to do some retakes on their test or quizzes and figure out what is wrong with their grades and fix them and make their grades high. And those who doesn't want to join the after school activities will remain have an F for the 2nd quarter.
The best thing is for the students who want to try or join the team for basketball, tennis, badminton, baseball, hockey, and wrestling is the best thing because few students always wants to join or try for the team. And my two friends join for basketball and hockey my one friend named Generic_Name wants to try out for baseball this spring season and he is really good at basketball and baseball, but the only wrong for him is he has bad grades. I know that students should have good grades before you try out for the team. Generic_Name made a decision to stay after class and do the retakes and after 3 weeks Generic_Name has good grades and he try out for baseball and made the team.\
I agree that students should participate to after school classes or sports. Even me I stayed after school just to finish my work or do some retakes and get a better grade this year. Before I also don't want to go to after school classes, but when I got a really bad grades I started to go to a after school classes and finish work and do retakes and here I got some good grades. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
66F8D7FB98BE | I think that several people make there own decision's then other people about there life because" they might need help on what to do?"for the people that need guidance to know more info.
I belive that the the people that found a way of making there own decision were so confidence that they had to decided on what to do. but if they don't, it would be wise to ask for assistance to make decision with experts so that way they can have in idea of what decison to make. because if they had made there own decision that they had regret that would have been there issue for not making a wise chose. but anyway people who are confidence can make there own choices.
other however the ones that need assistent might not know what to do when they have a decision to make. those people ask for help. they ask for guidance so that they can have more of an idea of what they are going to decide which gives them a more higher opportunity to decide which could led up to a good or bad situation. it all depend's on the person who is determen to decide.
i suggest that both ways all depend on a person because we all have our difffent way's and many can cause a huge impact on people life the more info you know the better you have to understand what path you are taking because new's had spred that people are making wrong decision which led to to be indanger.
some say that making your own decision is your issue while some ask for assistent to know what to do in a situation. which can be good for several people around the world. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
66FF0907BF26 | Do you ever wonder if most students use their phones in school for educational purposes? In my opinion cell phone use in a classroom is not a bad thing depending weather they take advantage on getting work done or goof around the majority of the students in school take advantage of their phones about Seventy Five percent of students like to use their phones for social media and music. When teachers are in classes during instructional time about half the class is paying attention, the other half of the class is on their phones texting friends or updating social media and then don't know what the lesson is about when they get called on to answer questions on the board.
Phones are usually a distraction to teachers and also to the person using the phone. Phones can also be a positive thing when doing paper work or projects when listening to music it can help concentrate more without getting distracted from others peers. When listening to music when you're working it gives off a positive affect on your brain, it gets your mind going with different types of ideas and keeps you from falling asleep. Cell phones bring hundreds of resources that would be able to help you get answers or help you understand certain questions , meaning of words , and how to pronounce different type of sentences from other languages.
Most teachers don't allow phones or headphones in a classroom because they assume everyone's going to start texting and be on social media, cell phones are important to have close just in case of an emergency at home. In case if you wanna check up on your siblings, mom, or dad even if you can notify the school about contacting your parents or your parents contacting the school it'll be easier for them to call you.
Some schools usually provide tablets for students to use so they wouldn't have to worry about loosing an assignment or turning it in late, but the majority of the time you need internet to be able to open up assignmets to turn in school students usually have tablet problems and turn it in so it could get fixed. Cell phones is a big help it can usually download applications that you neeed to do work without being behind in certain subjects so there shouldn't be an excuses on why assignments are late, or missing and that's why cell phones are a positive affect for educational purposes as long as teachers are consistant on supervising students cell phone use. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
6712BD512DB7 | I agreed that the greater of us lies and not in setting our aim high or low, but setting our aim too low will achieve our mark because many people around us are down and falling for some reasons. But, they are trying their best to climb up to the top in order to achieve their goals and learning from their mistakes. However, many others are lying or cheating to get a better score and failing down slowly. In fact, many people are working-hard to accomplish the goal that they want to achieve.
Setting our aim too low will achieve our goals because people have a weakness in their job and that's the reason why that they should be trying their best to fix their mistakes. I used to failed my math class last year because I didn't understand the unit because it's was too hard for me. So, I started to stay after school with my teacher and asking questions because I want to make sure that I understand the lesson. However, that didn't work out a lot as I expected because the assignment was different from what my teacher was explaining to me. But, I did not give up yet so I decided to study more at home and do some research about the lesson. And I finally understood the lesson. No matter how hard the work is, but what's important is that I put my time and efforts on it.
Another reason why setting our aim too low will help us achieve the goal is that by trying your best and work hard for it in order to achieve. However, many people are cheating to get the their goal so easily. My best friend got a high score on the test because he cheated and the test was hard as well. The teacher was wondered how did he got a high school on the test because he was the only one who got the highest score in the class, then he lied to my teacher that he studied a lot last night. But, the teacher caught him cheated on the test by using the notes because his answers was exactly as the notes said. So, it's not a shame that you are failing at something; but, it's a more worst that you lie to people and start falling down.
Also, setting our aim low will help us achieve the goal because many people are working-hard to get what they want. During the summer break, I told my mom that I want a new computer because my old computer is glitching and broken down a lot. Then, she told me that I work to earn money and get the new computer. She also said that it will helps me learn more things about the world. So, I started to work at a small restaurant and my position was cashier. It helps me counting the money faster and also it helps me improve my positives toward the other people.
Many people disagreed that setting our aim low won't help us to achieve our goal because sometime lying could be good for some reason and achieve the goal very easy. However, once the people find out that you're lying to them then you know the consequences. Sometime people starting at the lowest score to the highest score because they are doing their best of abilities to get the what they wanted to.
In conclusion, starting at the lowest point to the highest point will help you figure out what you need to do or learn in order to reach the goal. For example, if you don't try your best to achieve your goal and it's the worst thing that you could've ever done. However, the other are spreading lies to people how they achieve their goal easily and convincing people to be like them. But, keep trying your best and never give up to achieve your goal; then, you can get what you want. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
674F5DA988D2 | The city is debating doing a curfew of 10 P.M. week day, and a midnigth weekend curfew,
this a good council because if the city do curfew all teenager can be safe and they can have resposabilidad with dont breaking the law, with a curfew the city can try to keep safe all citizen and the young people can keep out of troubles.
My first reason why is important to try to make a curfew in the city is because in the nigth is too dangerous for the citizen and especially is more dangerous for young people,if we have a curfew we can keep all citizen and the most important the teenagers safe.
My second reason is because the parents do not have to worry about the teenagers because if the city do a curfew, we can keep the teenager out of troubles, and the parents can feelling good because everybody wiil be in home safe.
My third reason is because if the city do curfew we can keep the teenagers out of drugs and alcholismo, because the young people is the first coustomer of drugs, if we have a curfew we can take away of the jail at a lot teenagers. A curfew can keep safe at all teenager and all citizen.
My conclusion is do a curfew is a good opcion to keep all the teenager out of troubles, if the city council do curfew can being safe all the citizen. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
6751442A85E4 | I remember when I got in trouble for making the wrong decision. In this essay, I will argue that making decisions on your own can lead to some problems and you need someone's help. People should seek for guidance before making any decisions because it prevents them from getting into trouble, can help you make the right choice, and you can be more successful in life.
Consulting with an expert can help prevent bad situations. Although, it might sound silly sharing your personal life. It can help you in many ways. For example, when you're angry and want to do something that will cost you your whole life. That's the time to express your feeling to someone else. The best way staying out of trouble is having someone guide you because you don't want to end up one day behind bars.
Making the right choices can lead to a healthier life. Meaning that, it's most likely for you to have a positive mind. I remember when I decided to break my friend's trophies. I was so mad that I wasn't thinking right. The next day I woke up and realized what I had done wasn't right. However, I decided to talk to my parents and they gave me some good advises regardless to what I had done. After that, I apologized to my friend and everything went back to normal. I felt relieved because I had so much pressure on me. Sometimes it's better to make the right choices because it releases our stress.
Having a successful life is what everyone wants. In order to be successful in life is to take advises from your parents. As a teenager, we might think we know everything but it's the complete opposite. The key to success is always get advises from an expert or even your parents, which will make you a better person in life.
Some say that, we as teenagers can make decisions on our own; but, they are wrong because not everyone can handle their own situations. Seeking for help from someone else is always a better option. In the future, I hope teenagers like me seek for help when making an important decision. | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
676A161C4CEE | Can a possitive attitude be the key to success in life or should we live the way we believe is better?
Daily we live the way we want to. But, sometimes we don't consider the important things that can make us success in life. Attitude can be one of those facts that can make us success. There are some specific reasons about the importance of attitude and why we should consider this or not a fact to success in life.
The importance of attitude is a fact to success in life. As we know, we need a possitive attitude to get some things in life. For example, in a job to get better opportunities we need a possitive attitude to develop our skills.
To live a healthy life. For example, if we have a possitive attitude we will avoid dangerous sickness.
Easies way to live. For example, being relaxed is a result of having a possitive attitude.
In conclusion, a possitive attitude is the key of success. It teach us the easies way to live successfully in life. In my opinion, i agree with the statement that a possitive attitude is the key of success. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
6792C2E73B6A | Some people agree with the statement ''success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm'' because the failure help to learn how other's to be prepared and better understanding. But many people disagree with Churchill's for the reason what they don't believe in the failure because if they fail something they do better the next time. Since, no one is perfect everybody have something bad and something good this don't make a different the other's.
Although many people concern the failure how something the need due for doing a better person in the life but that does the means they can't due. Some people thinking what the failure is important for they life because they learning a new things and they put all of they for doing good person. Clarity, this people due everything for not failure something.
Additionally, many people don't believe in the faillure they say is somenthing happed in the life for doing a better person. If they fail a class or don't pass the class they keep trying and never give up. Surely, with failers they learn from the expirence they will not loss the enthusiasm.
Ask you can see failure is not always a good way to major sucess. One need to success failure is put a attention and due a better person and trying hard. If this people trying the things wiil be better in they were doing. Although all many people are success with failure.
Truely, failure is part of life and we need to understand our failers so the we can successed. By understanding our failers learn how doing better and not worry about the failers. Since they are worry about the failers one can have more enthusiasm to success. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
67D58F9FA53C | I agree with the principal because that what he said said all students hood at lest participate on a sport,club,or after school activitis. The principal wants students tp join sports maybe because he want some students to get on shape or to atend some after school activitis for example like a dance club to see how students do and art club to see how students draw and students council. The yearbook like take pictures of all the teams,clubs,or groups the school has. or take photographs of all the teachers of the school like put what they do or what they teach students. School coincuals like take a photographs of them and write on the top what they do there names favoryte thing and others. And sports i do agree with the principal is for students can learn to do team work conumect with others and trying there best to win or at list not loss the game that's how they can learn and it shows the teacher how good there in one thing then the other
.And students council i don't now what that is or what it means but i think if like to help keep the school or help janutors, teachers,or the principal with something. And i agree again becaude people or example students need to get on shape learn how working out feels like and then when they grow older they would be like "wow" because school is not just learning math sciences sociol studes and laugen arts no,school is a aportuniti to now how life is and how it is ti work hard and trying our best to do or conplet something on life. Okay this off the topic that we are talking about okay, all most every billoner drop of of school and collage to start what they wanted to do and what there dream was the did not stop it they all went for it
Okay now this is back on the topic. I also disagree because some students need to do some at home like help there father or a family member o something of life or have to work in a reasterunt to help there family with bills or other thing like that is why some don't have the time to do any of dos after school activitis and others,or have to take care of a sibiling or a family member and don't have the time to stat for after school activitis for the cause of dos thing that I just said. And i disagree inone thing again some students just stay after school to finish a test,work,progetor a asy for the teacher or just stay to learn more about what there wanna do of the work or esy is wanna be about. But in one thing some not all students some hood really stay after like the ones that can't speak english, or the ones who need help on writing on english,or the ones who really need help to read on english .
Or the ones that want to learn more about a other laenguech they can just stay in the same class that they have the leangucj they want to learn about and just tell the teacher if they can stay after or not no if the teacher is gonna stay after for then they can stay after and learn more of the leanguch they are learning about. The students that are in sports they can just stay after pratising with other students on the soccer filled. And for the student council students can just do what the student council dos because i have no idia what is or what it means .
So what I am trying to say is that yes some students hood stay after school to participate on one of this activitys the principal has probited for them i can help them on soemthing not like help them alot but just a little for the students know how it is to do something. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
67D7FC66C2F6 | Have you ever had someone to shared wisdom and experience with you before? A friend that has been with you for years. You trust that person, shared your wisdom and experiences with that person. My best friend Generic_Name has shared her wisdom and experiences to me. She help me with art things, how she become best friend with me, and how she like to help so many people.
She was home school Kindgarden through Third grade, but when she went the Generic_School, and she was put to Third grade. Before Generic_Name met me, she didn't know anyone, she had a different teacher and class. When she in Generic_Name's class, I walk in the class, that is when she first met me ,and Generic_Name told Generic_Name that "Generic_Name is the same grade as you and you guy can be friends". After that Generic_Name, and I became friends very fast, as the years past, our friendship grew and now we are in the eighth grade, we still best friend.
Generic_Name likes to help so many people like I do. When somebody drops something, she would pick it up and give it to the person who drops it. She holds doors for teacher, and students even have their hands full with books, or papers. When a friend needs help, she would try to help her friend the best she can because she cares about her friends; want to help them the best can and, she don't give give so easily. She likes to help teachers by help passing out papers, running errands for them, and doing a favor for a teacher.
She is also good at help people with art things because she and I are taking art class this years, but her art class comes first and I have art class second. She likes to tell me what the art homework is ahead after the class is over, and going to her next class. When I need help of what I should include, I would ask Generic_Name, and she would give me some advise of what I include in my art drawing. I would said to Generic_Name " That is great idea, Generic_Name, thank you so much"!
Some times to have a good idea, she will get a computer look for some good ideas, or used your imagination.
Having a friend to share their wisdom and an experiences to is meaningful because you and your best friend have gone through so many thing with you, and have been by your side withe all this time. Having your best is can help you get through challenging things, or be there for one another when they need you the most. My best Generic_Name has share her wisdom and experiences with me; how she help me with art things, how she becomes my best friend, and how she so many people. I am so happy and very thankful that Generic_Name is my best friend because without her help, I wouldn't make it this far at all. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
67DD73D48474 | 83% of people say that the idea of extending the school day by two hours is a bad plan, For those who dont know the average school day is abut 8:00 am -2:45 pm. The time that students get out of school should not change because the changing of the time would case cognitive impairment and students not having inf time for their jobs after school.
The idea of extending the school day would case cognitive impairment, For example, When my friend got sleepy for doing a school project late last Kite he would constantly forget he had homework and always feel uninterested in doing stuff, When I got tired I have forgotten to check the time that I had to get to work.
The plan would case students not having inf time for their jobs after school. For instance, When I had to stay after school for a test I had to miss work, and my manager had to cut my pay for messing work, Because i had to stay after school I lost my chains to get paid for my hard work.
Some people say that the plane would give students a four-day week than are five-day week. However it still dose not address that facts that people well not retain much memory of what they lend do to long school hour, and not having inf time of finding a job. It would be best to not to change are present schools start times and end times. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
67E711AF87A2 | Are you done trying to reach your goal in life? Author Ralph Waldo Emerson is right. If you have accomplished somthing in life but you are not where you want to be then go for more. Keep trying to go beyond from what you have already masterd. It puts your self out their, and lets people know you want more then what you already have. You will defenetly grow if you keep trying. In the process of trying to master things in life it will be important for professionalism,money,and being successful.
Having professionalism in you takes a lot of work and time. For example, Cristiano Ronaldo is a profesional sorccer player, he was once a starter in soccer. Of coures it took time and hard work and lots of practice to get to where hes at.
Another example when i stared playing soccer i was 4 and it was really hard, it was hard to kick a ball or to keep up with the ball, but i went to the feild with my freinds every day and i wanted to be really good so i did not give up. I nocticed my self growing a lot and now i play for a really good soccer team and planning on going to a good soccer collage. However Jobs is something that takes time and hard work. If you work hard at a job and show people that you are good at it, it can get you a better jobs in the future.
Money dose not come to you for free you must do something for it for example, when i was 12 years old i was to young to get a job so i would go next door and ask if i can mow thier lawn or if they had any jods for me.
When you are trying to reach a goal in life and you are growing big time more money gets involved, which is a really good thing. If your boss sees you doing really good at your job your boss can give you a raise or make you be assistant manager because they notice that you are growing and that you want to master more. The more you grow the more better you'll get.
When you made it to where you want to be, you were seccessfull. you tried your hardest and did as much as you can to get to the top. To be seccessfull you need to study a lot try to listen and watch a lot. when you are growing you make mistakes which is fine it happends to a lot of people. You will learn from your mistakes and lessions. For example when i was 5 years old and i was at my soccer game i accidently scorded on my own team and it never ended up happening again cause i learned from my mistakes. Some may say if you don't go beyond from what you have accomplished, you will still grow. They are wrong because the more further you go to accomplish things will make you grow more and it wil help you reach more goals in anything.
Always try to do more then what you have already done. Dont let anyone stop you. You will not grow if you don't go beyond from where you are at. It's good to do anything it takes to master something in life. There are lots of ansers and help everywhere to grow. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
67F6FEDD7677 | Some schools have programs for youngers and olders student why they make programs like this or how can they help each others Okey. This program help both students to learn about what are the responsability of the olders students and the youngers student to see what they going to do when they becomes a older and the olders student can learn from de younger student.
The olders student can teach about mistake because every one have different mistake they can teach younger student to do right things and can help each others
The yourger student can also learn about theres mistakes they make the program to thye olders students can go to visit the yourger student to help them, to them they can help the youngers student to learn from theres mistakes the olders student can teach the younger student about the life to do the right things
The youngers student needs the olders student like the olders student need a adult to they can say dont do this is the same the younger student need the olders student they can help each others if the youngers studetn have a promble or a question they can ask the olders student to do right this some student of the youngers schools they dont know english the olders student can help them some times the olders student needs the youngerts students to do somenthing like if the olders sstudent dont know somenthing they can ask the younger students if someone has problems with something they can help each others they can do many dinfferent things together there are many types about programs that can help younger students and olders student sometimes if is a fight with youngers students the olders student can stop them and say to them to do the right thins because in this life everyone has mistakes nobody is perefect they can help each others to the rights things and the different about this two kinds of student is the olders student have more responsability and the younger student have responsabily but the dont have much like the olders students or the olders students dont have the mu\ch responsability from the adult one time my dad tell me that when he was youngers he need help with somenting but he dont want to tell a older person he tell me if one time i need help with something i can ask a older one to help me to do tghe right this and to learn from ours mistakes we can help each others olders students are important because they can help the younger student to know about this life the younger students start to learn more about this life the olders student know what is right and what not right they can help each others to practice the armony of this two kinds of students the youngers student can learn much about thir sames mistakes know a big problem has the olders student dont want to help the youngers students the diferent betweet is the olders student know the right things and the bads things so thas why the can help each others
Also in betwen thius two kinds of student are a different types somentimes the olders studeents dont want to help the youngers students and the younger student dont want to listeng from the olders student so theirs is a problem somentimes the olders student want to teach somenthing important to the younger student ,and the younger student dont want to listeng the olders student so we have a different there like now the oplders student dont want to listeng the aldult or theirs teachers so whent someone says dont do this more you do it and when the consecuense cames we dont want that so my we need the olders student to teach as to know what is good or bad like the olders student need a adult to they cant tell them dont do this or do this but they cant hit them they can only tell them don't do this this is bad for you or what is good for you they need thir helps esch others they can proctect each others | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 |
68004683BC3C | I Disagree the school board is adding one and half hours each day of school. We have regular school days seven hours a day. Also some people stay afterschool that palce two more hours of school. That is nine hours of school. I usally stay afterschool for peer helpers every wenesdays. That helps me to get my communite servers up I already have six hours, I just need nine more hours that is it. But either way I love helping special kid's and also I will love to finish this year helping PROPER_NAME, even though I'm about to finish my community severs hours I will still help the kids.
Anyways this about me disagreeing with school borad. What I'm really trying to say we wake up at six o'clock or five o'clock and we come to school and we do our work. Some of as have good grades and some of as are trying our best. We recpect our teachers as much as we could, we do our work and we some how understand what the teacher gives us. Also we try our best as we could.
Another example that you can't add more hours to our school is that some students have sports afterschool not in school out of school. Even though there is sports in my school they already sign up for other sports. Some students wants to just go home and be in her/she home and just study quietly instead of afterschool, afterschool is every loudly its not for everybody. All of us have good examples and they will tell why its a bad idea and they will disagree with you. But I know where you guys are coming from you want us to have more education.
I really hope you don't add more hours because seven hours is enough for us to learn. We got other things to do afterschool. If you add more hours, students will be picked up every last period and not even be there when the teacher is teaching. Also we will not have afterschool activity because students can't stay afterschool past six o'clock. Also if you add more hours parents will take out their childern and they will put them in a different school. That what I think about you adding more hours to school. I hope you think about it and think about if your idea we are actally taking benfits.
Why I disagree with school board is wrong that you guys are adding more hours of school. For example, like I said I stay afterschool on wendesday's and seven hours of school place the two more hours for afterschool. It gives me headace and our late bus is the last one to go, so basically I go home five o'clock and sometime when the late bus comes early I go home like 4:48pm. When I go home I eat and take a shower I watch for a little bit I say I'm take a nap it doesn't end up a nap it ends up I wake up at six o'clock. Also sometimes when I don't stay afterschool, I take nap at home I wake up at eleven o'clock, I go to sleep at three o'clock. This why I want don't you guys to add more hours because it will effect our sleeps. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
6805FE96E548 | Students having the option to have distance learning would only be great for students who are responsible and cable of keeping up with their assignments. Distance learning is beneficial to students because they won't have to worry about getting up early to go to school and also, don't have to worry about that amount of time they have in class to finish an assignment. Taking online classes gives the student more freedom to expand their thinking while having their own space at home.
A way that distance learning benefits students is not having to wake up at 6 or 7 am in the morning to go to school. Some kids don't show their full attention in school because they're not a morning person. Having to wake up in the morning and sit in a classroom for 2 hours is uncomfortable. For example, I'm not the type of student that can sit in a classroom for 2 hours or more and listen to a teacher talk. I would, prefer to move around and also eat while i'm doing my work that makes me feel more focus. But, in high school your not allowed to randomly get up and walk around it would make the teacher feel unsafe or the students. Waking up at 9 to 10 is a good time to start your online classes because you had enough time to wake up shower , eat and that most important part is that you dont have worry about what clothes your going to wear to school.
Another reason that distance learning is beneficial to students is because as high school students is not really easy to keep up with a teacher. when they're teaching a lesson with 28 more students in the classroom that probably already understood the assignments. There are some teachers are just not the type to go back and repeat their self. For example, When a student miss class it feels like you missed a whole quarter. The teacher is not going to explain the whole lesson to 1 student she would simply say check online for the assignment. This is an example of why students would prefer to take online classes because theres no way a student can be absent. Student can walk around anywhere with their computer or phone and simply pull up the school work and start doing it on their free time.
Some students would say its better to come to school, meet people and have the high school experiences. Although it sounds fun. Theres still students that would prefer being home and getting their work down at home then being in school dealing with drama or extra assignments. Theres students who would rather focus on online classes and finish them and also have a part time job on the side to help them pay for their colleges.
In conclusion, distance learning is an advantage to students who are proactive and for students who learn better on their own. Having to do your school work online and especially at home makes it feel more comfortable. Its also helping students get ready for the real world when they have to take home assignments from work and make sure to stay focus. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
681B9CD21B07 | Dear principal,
My name is STUDENT_NAME and I want you to consider policy one for various reasons. The first reason why we should have cell phones is because some parents like to check up on there son's and that can't happen in policy two, but in policy one we can do that and if you are a parent wouldn't you like to check up on your son or daughter? Second, I don't see why we shouldn't be able to bring them at all because say we forgot our homework at home and say we already missed a day of homework and if we miss another one we will get a detention, we can just call our mom during lunch break or passing period and tell her if she can bring our home work. Lastly, say we are in a lock down because someone had a gun in the campus and the man or women cuts the power off so no one can call through the telephones we can just grab our cell phones and call the police. I'm not asking you to approve it I'm asking to considerate please. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
68256AC96C72 | At a young age some students are determine to identify a career they want to do in the future by the time they enter high school. For example, their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward a specific career in life so they can be successful. Students should not commit to a career at a young age.
Committing to a career at a young age can cause students to have stress. For instance, some students are being pressured by their parents into finding a career before they go to high school and that can lean them into having stress. The younger students in elementary school think they know what they already want to do for a career in the future, but once they get older and enter high school they start to change their minds about the career they choose as a kid. There are some students that have a strong concern or eagerness that they wont be able to find a career they like before they enter high school or graduate form high school. All of this can later lead to a state of mental, emotional strain, anxiety, or they start think they wont be successful in life. Students might not know what they still want to do in the future since they're still young. For example, students have trouble trying to identify a career they want in life. Students shouldn't have to worry about what career they want since they're still young and they can later end up to stress. They should also try to focus on being just kids; then once they start to get older they can start to think what kind of career they want to do later in life.
In conclusion, i think students shouldn't commit to a career at a young age because of all the stress they might get they might not know what career they want in the future. While this may be true, others argue that students should commit to a career at a young age. This can later lead them into having a successful life if they start to study the careers the students want at a very young age. For instance, when students start to study a career they want, they can end up having a very successful job in their future. Students can also work in a long-term commitment in a particular profession. Committing to a career can lead to causing mental or emotional stress. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 |
682B94FF269B | This someone i will talk about is important, because he is my father,
.1. my father is someone important for me because he is the man that takes care of me from the day i born,
.2. he is so nice,
.3. he never get mad from me.
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. he always good with any body
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. he help people who need help
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.he is so generous with us.
EVERY MOMENT AND EVRY DAY I spend it with my dad i learn something important and useful from him about any thing,As we know our parents are older than us so they had more experience than any of us also they help us in many things and when when we need any thing or we dont know what to do in any situation at any time ,every adults experiences who ever they are they have to be learn from any situation they put in so they may be know what to do so we must know from them to not put in this situation.
Thats why we have to share information, all of this things that is my parents done and told me about and they also told me about what they do at the past and what shouldnt i do now or any time and, there advises and stories helps me always to not fall in trouble so i must do what they told me; as we know there is a reason for every thing and the reason for why i love my parents because my dad and my mom work and have more experience in their job to told me about and for my collage, and they are the important people that care about me,and their experience can help me in my future job a lot.
Sometimes my father takes us to the place that there is a lot of old people there to se mt grand mother and every old man or lady tell us beautiful stories about what is the interesting things they do in there past and what are they jobs and what must they do in their jobs and my grand father there told me about his past in military and what he do in it and where did he go with the army in a period of time.
from the last paragraph about what i said i took more experience in jobs and another things but the most thing i got from this stories is wisdom i cant write it but i know what it means, it means that share experience and wisdom with other people to make them learn what to do in any time to make it pass from grandfathers to fathers to sons . | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
68392F53B9D7 | I disagree with the saying "A problem is a chance for you to do your best'' because not everyone always learns from their mistakes,the problem may have already affected them,the way to be successful in life is to hardly have any mistakes.
I disagree with the saying "A problem is a chance for you to do your best" because not everyone learns from there mistakes. some people cannot remember if they had a mistake a long time ago and that mistake comes up again, for example, my brother had failed his drivers test and when he took it again he failed again. Furthermore, when your nervous and you had a problem, Some people get trauma and they think of that problem and they are afraid of doing it again, For example, I missed a tackle at football once and I was scared of doing it again, so when I had the chance of doing it again I thought about if i would miss it like last time.
I disagree with the saying "A problem is a chance for you to do your best" because the problem may have had already affected them so they would not be able to change it. some people may have made a really big mistake so they would not be able to be the best if they have had that chance. For example, somebody on the news had the death penalty for murder so they would not be able to change that. Furthermore, people have had the opportunity to get something great but they chose not to, they cannot go back and change that. for example my sister got this award but she refused to take it so she cant go back.
I disagree with the saying "A problem is a chance for you to do your best'' because the way to be successful in life is to hardly have any mistakes. A lot of people had had many mistakes in their life and failed to achieve their goal, for example, my cousin wanted to be a lawyer but then had a lot of problems with what she was doing so she quit law school. when people have a lot of mistakes they tend to get more mistakes and then they end up trying to figure out how to deal with all them. for example, I was taking a test and I tried to figure out some of the questions at once but then I ended up mixing all of them up.
In conclusion,I disagree with the quote "A problem is a chance for you to do your best" because not everybody can acknowledge what do do after they have made a mistake, the problem may have already have had a negative impact on them already, And the way to be great is to rarely have any mistakes | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
683A4FE3661C | It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. well i gree with the statement, because how your impressions is sonting you can not change like me when i see my familly my impressions are good because is the first thing i shod to dent, like when i see my mather i express my impressions to her are sonting diferent because i feel happy to see her or when i take to her and sonting i do to my bothers or my friends.
Tirst, the impressions is sonting almost not change, like my friends in school oneday i talden i liven the school the first impression they put waus sad becuase i live the school and they do not want to me live the school they want to me staing with thend, but i take to my friends i i sead to dent i have to go se my mather i my contry because i miss her like my brothers i have see my familly and 7 years the impression when i saed this to my friends was so sopraision.
Seccond, when i go see my mother and brothers in my contry for the first time the impressions they put in ther faese whas so happy to see me one more time after 7 years. My mother she was more happy to see me, but when my brothers see for the first time the impressions they put was so different then the impression my mom put to me they sead to me i do not looke nothing equal like bifore now i look like a big men and not like boy.
For example, how i expression my impression is sonthing special like when i do not see my familly or friends and 3 or 4 years i will be sad and my impression is going to be depress. Impression are so many way to expression like the time they tolk me my father was death i was 5 years old my impression was like nathing because i do not comprehend what my mom tolk me of my father.
In conclusion. the first impressions are almost imposisible to change the is true because how impression are is sonting ameising you expression things when you see sowant or people do you no see in aloge time like example in my familly i have not see my granfather but i now the firts time i ging to see my granfather my impression is going to be many. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
684166ED2438 | School should not follow this made because businesses is dfferent to school if we cam to school for two day and make ten hours we cant do all the nesesarie stuff. And if businesses adopted a four day work week and make each day ten hours worckers will get tire just for conserve energy. | 1.5 | 1.5 | 1.5 | 1.5 | 1.5 | 1.5 |
685ABA004ADB | Many people believe that they should seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matter.
Other people believe that they should make their own decisions.
It is good for people who make their own decision, so that way they learn from their own mistakes, they need to learn how to get up whenever they feel in trouble. People who make their own decisions they know the consequences, but they know how to grow up as a person, and beat up any problem that they have. Sometimes, it is good to ask someone for advices because older people seems to have more experience in some topics.
First, people who made mistakes in life, they need to learn how to not made that mistake again.
If someone is there just telling people what to do and what not to do, people will never learn how to not made that mistake again.
Sometimes, it is good to ask someone for some help, but they do not have to tell them exactly what do.
If someone need help in something, they need to paid close attention, and see how is that person doing something.
Due to the fact that many people made mistakes, they have to learn how to do decisions by themselves.
Second, people who has been guided by their parents, but their parents are not with for them. Since their parents are not with them, and there is difficult time where some people will need the help of their parent, but because they was use to it, that their parents do everything for them, they will never know what to do.
Because of that, people will never know how to get up and do everything by themselves.
Sometimes, it is easier just to ask someone how to do something, but sadly one day they will be in the same situation, and they will never know how solve it.
Third, people who make their own decisions in life they already know the consequences, but they know how to beat them and grow up as a person.
Sometimes, people do no like to make their own decisions because they are scare to the consequences, but that is a way to grow up as a person. Also, that is how people are a better someone in the future by making their own decisions.
If people are afraid to the consequences of their own decision so that mean that they are not grow up.
In conclusion, people who made mistakes in life, they will learn from those mistakes.
People learn how to not make mistakes by making mistakes, but if people had never made a mistake in their life so that mean that their is someone who guide them through everything in life.
People are not perfect, they learn from their own decisions.
Also, people who is use to be guide by a parent, they do not know how get up whenever they are in a difficult time.
Parents will never be beside people to hold their hands all the time, and that is why people have to learn how to get up.
People who make their own decisions they already know that there are consequences, but they know how beat them, and grow up as a person, and be a better someone.
Because of all this, people believe that they need to make their owns decisions.
It is okay to ask for some help, but not with everything. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
6867A6767D25 | An enjoyable educational activity is Avid for anyone that has a dream they want to achieve. The first reason why
I say this is because this activity is not only to help you become a better person but also to encourage you to go to college . Secondly They give you tutorials not only to see where your at but to help you improve in any class . In addition you also get the opportunity to go on beautiful fun field trips. Lastly Its like saying you have another family no matter where you go.
In Avid you learn to become a responsible and hard working person in a way that you have a binder check every week to stay organized. Its like another class but in Avid we all have a dream that we all want to achieve in which we know we have to keep trying and there's no giving up in till we accomplish it. College is something not everyone is looking forward to as a teenager but some of us are, but if we start hanging around with the bad types of people it can drag us to the deepest part of an ocean in other words theres no coming back up to where you use to be. Not saying you should'nt be friends with that type of people I mean you can but in my perspective don't get involved as much as your other friends is.
Secondly tutorials are a big part of Avid it shows your teachers and peers around you how much you know and how strong you are and the effort you but into a tutorials to get in front of the group and explain what you are having problems with but also helps you learn from your peers and its like sharing the brain cells. Tutorials in other words shows your personality in a way when your not a shy person to go in front of your group and talk some people don't like that they like keeping them self in a inner circle talking less but listening to the tutorials.
In addition you get field trips which most middle schools or high schools students don't have that opportunity you get to visit colleges and learn about them it helps you know more about colleges and also having fun by walking around with a person guiding you to where you should go plus you get to meet knew people once your there. It's just a very cool opportunity you have to be able to do things not all students are allowed to do. One of the most funnest and amazing things the Avid activity has is we do fundraisers to raise money to go to King's Dominion and once your there you well be like I've earned this because for example your working hard and your not doing nothing fun like whats gonna make you keep doing that like even is you wanted to be someone in life your gonna work as hard as you can without looking down because you have something that's giving you the support and keeping you strong. In my point of view I'm working hard and something that encourages me to do better is my niece. The Avid activity is basically kinda the same you work hard doing tutorials and making coneal notes and at the end of the year you get to go and have fun with friends and ride roller coasters its just a really fun thing to do.
Avid for me and any other students I think would agree Avid is a family we do something everyone agrees and everyone has fun with it to no one talks bad about anyone and even thought we all come from different places around the world no one is mean to one another we all stay together we all learn the something if one the Avid students want to give up we make sure they don't because we're a family and something we always say when we're down is ''dream, believe, achieve ''. This activity helps you and school but also knowing your making your self proud but also you're parents and family .
In conclusion the reason why I think this activity is enjoyable is because your getting to meet knew people and you never know you would find you own best friend there. You get to do cool activities and join programs. Also its like a family so if you have a family that doesnt really care about you Avid can cover that in a way you can be your self and you don't have to pretend to be anyone else. Its just a big opportunity you get to be in it you should be a risk taker because once you are you never know it can lead you to a positive direction you can become a great person and become someone in life. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
68685615FE0C | There is a debate about the opportunity offered by the schools for the students who live far, to receive classes without going to the school by way of online or video conferencing. Some people believe that the best way to learn is going to the school independently if the student live close or far and participating with more students in the classes. Other people believe that no matter on what way you receive a class, you always have the opportunity to learn something new. I believe giving the opportunity to students that live far from the schools can take the classes by way of online or video conferencing is a great way to learn, because the student can pay more attention being alone, if the student have questions the teacher can answer them easily, and the student do not have to waist time going to the school just for one class.
First reason why I believe giving the opportunity to students that live far from the schools can take the classes by way of online or video conferencing is a great way to learn because the student can pay more attention. Sometimes when you are in a classroom with more than 20 students is really hard focusing on what the teacher is talking about, because there are always some students who really like to make fun of the teacher, laugh with other students, interrupt the class with questions like "can I use the restroom?", and in someway you cannot even take notes; but when you are at home, all by yourself, without any distracction you can really be sure that you are paying atenttion and taking notes.
Second reason why I believe giving the oportunity to students that live far from the schools can take the classes by way of online or video conferencing is a great way to learn because if the student have questions the teacher can answer them easily. For example, lets say that you are in a classroom with a bunch of students, each of them have differents questions about the class, and the teacher said that he is going to answer each question by alphabetical order, unfortunately, your las name is "Generic_Name". In this case one of the best way to get that question answer as soon as possible, is having a conference class between you and the teacher.
Third and last reason why I believe giving the oportunity to students that live far from the schools can take the classes by way of online or video conferencing is a great way to learn because the student do not have to waist time going to the school just for one class. There are some cases where a student just have one class every day; what if this student live half an hour away from the school, it would be way more easy if this student can take all his classes in two days online, also, this can be a great oportunity to have a job while you are studying.
In conclusion, the opportunity offered by the schools for the students who live far, to receive classes without going to the school by way of online or video conferencing is so great, beacuse the student can pay more attention being alone, if the student have questions the teacher can answer them easily, and the student do not have to waist time going to the school just for one class. So, this opportunity offered by the schools to give this type of classes can motivate each student that live far to not excuse themselves to not finish a class, also, each school that do not have this classes should considered create them. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
6886DF2A98BE | Scientist Albert Einstein once said, "Imagination is more important than knowledge." I agree with what Albert Einstein said. Some people think its the other way around were knowledge is more important than imagination. imagination and knowledge could be used for a lot of things. I think that imagination is more powerful than knowledge because you can come up with many things and in order to get knowledge on something you need imagination.
Imagination is something you need to come up with things. You need to think about it first, get the things you need to create it, and then study from it. Imagination can help you a lot, You can use your imagination to your advantage, you can use it keep you busy. you can build things, draw things,and create things from your imagination. you can do many more things with your imagination. Imagination has no limits.
In order to get knowledge of something, you would need to use your imagination. You would need to take notes and study from it. you use your imagination to get knowledge. You can learn so much from your imagination and its very useful. we have to be careful with our imagination and our knowledge. Its ok to make mistakes while learning, you just have to learn from them.
In conclusion I think imagination is more important. We use out imagination every day. We learn things every day. It would be hard without imagination. Imagination can be used for a lot of things like making a cartoon show, drawing, and thinking. You can also use you imagination while you read. We wouldnt know much because we get our knowledge from our imagination. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
68E75FD12673 | Have you ever been to a park ? Chances are you have, It doesn't matter what kind but you most certainly had fun right. Going to parks Is always fun, mostly because of the activities you do at the park to have fun. At the park you always find a fun activity to do, and people enjoy doing those fun activities because you get to play with other people, you are able to make new friends, and most of those activities can help you live a healthy life.
When people go to the park the tend to do fun activities, and most of the time they play those activities with friends and or other people. And when you play those activities with someone else you can have more fun. Another good reason for playing with someone else Is you also get to talk to them. And when you start playing with someone It could lead up to more people joining, and will make It even more fun. So remember when you go to the park try to bring a friend so you both can have lots of fun at the park.
People like going to the park to do fun activities, and when they go they often start to talk to new people. When they talk to new people theres a high chance of them becoming friends, So another reason why they enjoy the park Is they can make new friends. And who doesn't like to make friends, as a result they can meet up at the park and have fun together. And then they'll eventually make a more friendly status with each other. So going to park can be enjoyed in different ways, theres a chance you might just make a new friend.
Finally my last reason why people go to the park Is they can enjoy the park and the activities and also live a healthy life. You might not even notice that most of the activities we do at the park can be positive and help us with a healthy life. Its Is always a positive thing to live a healthy life you can do so much by keeping your life healthy. Thats why most people like going to the park you can have fun and be healthy at the same time. These were reasons why people like going to the park, plus who doesn't like the park.
People like going to the park for many reasons, and all of these reason were positive. Who doesn't want to play with friends or other people, who doesn't want to make new friends, or even have and live a healthy life. So If you hate parks just remember these reasons why you should go, It can make your like very happy. | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
690713606EEF | I disagree because students don't only like sport or making year books and student council students also want to try other things like art, music, computers. Students like other things not all students like the same things. There are other things to try out extracurricular activities. I think the principal should think about other extracurricular activities.
Like other schools don't have only 3 extracurricular activities there are other extracurricular activities to think of like I said their's art, music, cooking, chess club, drama, computer, science, math, reading, writing, anything else not only sports making year books or student council if they repeat all 3 extracurricular activites that dumb boring and
Maybe some students may agree with these decisions some student will not argee because not all students share the same personality or have something in common and some students like sports some don't some students don't like making year books some students don't like student counciling. In my personal opinion art is a activity I want.
There are many extracurricular activites I want to do I would do art reading and drama because I love to draw I love to read marvel comics especially Dr. Strange Spider-man Guardians of the galaxy and black panther I love drama because I am going to be a actor, and a director when I grow up and I know a lot of students don't only want to do sports malking year book or student council students love other things. I know a lot of students and people opinion.
If you must participate in one of these extracurricular activities well everybody will think schools boring but the thing is it's the principal decision and chose if he or she want all the students to participate in at least all 3 extracurricular activity then you really have no chose but anyone can still disagree on all extracurricular activities maybe you can ask the principal if you dont want to do any of the activities. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
6907AC535720 | "Stop doing that, your cousin cut his hand because he was doing the same thing". A lot of times people say an example to make you know what would happen if you continue doing it. But, is the example the best way to influence people? Yes, an example will make you know that you are doing something bad, it will let you know what are the consequences of it, and you know that the example influence others, because you can see that your parents are the most important example in your life; they are going to make you as a person.
When you are doing something bad and the people see it, they will probably tell you an example of something that you are doing something bad or innapropiate; for example, when you are climbing a tree, your mom would tell you stop doing that, your sister broke her arm because she was climbing that tree, that is going to make you think if you are doing something good or bad. It is going to make you know that people are telling this to you, because they don't want you to have bad consequences. Another example would be that when you are drinking, somebody would tell you don't think to drive, because my uncle died because he was drunk and he had a car accident,so you will know that people are advising you, because they know that you are doing something bad. When people tell you a good example to stop doing something, it will make you know that you are doing something bad.
A lot of times you are doing something, and you don't know the consequences of your action, maybe, it can break your arm, or it can send you to the hospital; but when people tell you an example it will let you know the actions; for example, if you are listening to music very loud, you couldn't know that it can make your ears very bad, but when people tell you turn the music down, my sister's ears are very bad because she was listening to music very loud; after that you know that you better stop doing that, because it will bring you very bad consequences, and you do not want that, so you would stop. Another thing, is that knowing the consequences of your actions, could help another people; for example, if you are drinking you should know that you can not drive, if you do not drive another person will not die, because you know that you can have a car accident, and that is because people told you an example of what is going to happen if you drive while you are drunk. An example can help you to know the consequences of your actions.
A lot of people say that you are who you are because of your parents, and that is right, your parents are the most important example for you. They are going to tell you what is good and what is wrong; your parents influence you because they are your most important example, and that is what an example does, influence you, tells you what is good and what is wrong; for example, if your parents are good people, you should be a good person, but if your parents do not care about you, they do not listen to you or they treat people bad, you are going to be somebody who doesn;t listen to people, you will not care about anyone, so your parents are your most important example, because they have taught you what is good and what is wrong; and you can see again that the example influences you. The parents are your most important example and influence.
We saw that an example can make us think what is good and what is wrong, it is going to tell us the consequences of our actions, it will make you think that you are doing something bad, and we can see that the example influences you because we have our parents, we are going to be the same as them, because they are the people that is going to teach us how to act. So yea, the example is the best way to influence people. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
692357D5F3F0 | For student that try to graduate early. Is a good idea to graduate early if they are thinking go to college or if they try to work. Student need to be able to take class out of the school. Some student will need to take class in summer school. For some student is more difficult to graduate early because they need work for help in theirs houses. For make this possible student must need to be; determine, preparete, and flexible.
Student that try to graduate early they must need to be determine. they need to be determine for be able to past all their class an exams. and example is; "I have a friend that is graduate early and she is taking class in the evenings". Student that are determine is going to be more easy to finish high school early. Yet if you are planing to go to college is a good idea to graduate early.
Student that try to graduate early they must need to be preparate. They need to be preparete to take more class during school year. They need to be preparete to have a full skehchule and not be able to take elective class. they need to prepare because they maybe need to take class during summer. They need to be prepare to pass all their class and exams that they need for graduate early and not to stress out.
Student that try to graduate early they must need to be flexible. Sometimes you have to be flexible for what you have to do like if you work and go school if you try to graduate early you have to be able to stop working and focus just in school. Students need to be flexible for new things and face in the best way. Like if you find difficult in one of your class you should ask your teacher for help. Student need to be flexible because if they take class in the evening or online is going to be different and maybe difficult for them but they need to be able to find a way to be successful.
Is good for student to graduate early from high school. Yes is good if they feel they can do it and pass everything what they need to pass. Student need to be determine, preparete, and flexible for pass the classes and exams for graduate early. The opportunity that schools offer to graduate early is really good for student that think about go to collage. Graduate in three years is good for students because they can start college early and be finished in less time. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
69241D10E69A | Online school a great tool for young scholars that might not graduate on time due to missing school days, or any other inconvenience. Online school could not only help scholars to graduate on time, but also help a portion of scholars that are looking to get a job for future education, or helping their households. Online school may also be a helpful option for scholars with disabilities, or illness that might stop them to attend school.
Although online school might be a good tool for some scholars it can also cause negative outcomes such as students not doing their assign work, or not passing the class due to less time with students. Other issues that must be faced ,are some students not having computers, or not having access to the internet to do their assigned work. Overall online school is a great tool for students that may struggle to attend school. Once its issues are met and something has being done online school may not be only a great tool for some scholars but also an opportunity to finish school without any issues.
In conclusion online school might have many issues but once its issues have being solved and students get help with access to computers, or internet it could make a big impact on young scholars. Online school may also help economy by allowing students to have enough free time to get a job to help in their households, and their future. Therefore online school should be an option in every school to help students achieve their goals, and well being | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 |
692FAA1828D2 | Have you ever gone out to a park, or just even made an attempt to go out and enjoy the outdoors ?
Some people love going outside and enjoy spending time with their family. Just by going outside you learn something new while you are there whether it is about your family or something you never knew. So take time and effort and go outside and enjoy the time with your family . And help someone out wile you are there, like a homeless person or someone in need of help.
Some fun and athletic activities you can do at a community park are , to meet lots of new people that live in your community. Something you can do at a community park is go running; You can even take some of your friend with you as well. You can also take your bike to the park and listen to music while you are biking. some community parks also have a pools. You can go swimming and enjoy the cool water on a hot summer day or even throw a pool party and invite your friends . Some people like to bike, swim and run to feel good about what they have accomplished .
Some other ways you can enjoy the day outside is by taking your sibling to the park. This is a great way for them to get there energy out and you can enjoy the time with them. And they will feel so tied they won't even bother you for the rest of the day. If you like adventures then you will enjoy going hiking ,its a great way of looking and enjoying nature and getting fit as well. You can also take your dog on a walk, some people like to do this because their dogs get some exercise and so do you. I think these are all great ways to stay moving and it makes you feel good about yourself.
Swimming, biking, running, hiking, going to the park etc. There are lots of more ways you can stay fit and enjoy the outdoors , these are just some great activities you can do outdoors. Some people like doing all of these things to feel like they have accomplished something . Some other people might do these things to get fit or lose weight . People also do these activities to spend time with their family or to meet new people. I think everyone should try doing something outdoors like getting into a new hobby or a new family activity to do . Thses are activities I think are great to do outdoors . | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
6932E62C6338 | Thomas Jefferson was a president, and he wrote this to help people to do their work always.
It is really good when we are doing our work and it will be done when we doing it always and we will learn it to do it will be easy for ourself.
Somtime it will be boring to do our work always but it is good that we can learn it really good if we do it always.
I am doing my work and my job and my sport always because it will help me to remember it and also doing always is good that can learn us till we can teach it for example: when we are reading a book always it will help us to learn a lot about everything the people that they are not doing good and always there work and there job they are lazy people and they will not learn anything when they do not doing it always.
If we think about it we can see the diffrent between the people that they doing always are better than the people that they do not doing it always so like: doing homwork always, sleeping on time always, going to sport always, going to job always and etc.
We will help the people and tell them to there there work always we should help them.
In the first when the school start i was not good and i was not doing my homworks and studing always until my friends help me and told me to do my work always and i am glad that i learn this to do my work always and i want everyone to do there work always never forget it. And also when we are always eating good food it will keep us healthy and we do not need go to the doctor always.
keep doing it always. | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
694C96A1E9A0 | It has being said that a positive attitude is the key of success in life. Many people might think different from what i do. I agree with this statement, because being positive in life makes me happy and when i am happy i do my work with happinest. Maybe not all the time my work is going to work out but at least i had fun doing it. During the time when i am doing my work to reach the goal, i am always being positive. When i play soccer for the school, and we have hard games aginst others schools who have a better team than we do, but no matter what i am always positive. Also when i am at work i have stuff to do before leaving my work. i dont like going home late, so i am always positive that i will be finishing all the stuff so i can leave work early.
Doing my homework every night is a stuggle beacause i work everyday, and i do not get time to do it before going to work. So what i tried to do is do all my work fast at work so like that i can go home and get my homework done.
Playing soccer for the school is the most fun activity i have done in my life, because i get to meet new people and compete against better players. Sometimes i have to play against some players that are really good at soccer and i might not have a chance to beat them but that doesnt mean i will stop being positive. I am always telling my self i can do it. I tried to pass my positive attitude to my team mates. When everyone starts being positive we play better games and we beat the good teams that we could not defeat a year ago.
I love my work, but sometimes i am to tired and i just want to go home.
I do not get leave my job till i finish cooking all the stuff that need to be ready for the next day. Also i got to clean the floor an the kitchen. If i want to leave early i need to be positive, that i will finish every thing fast. Like that i would not have to leave late. The good thing about my work is that i get to work with my best friend, he is always positive like me, so we do our job faster but well done.
When i get homework and i have to work the night i just want to cry. But i tell my self that if finish all the work fast. I would get to go home and do my homework. i would not have to go to sleep late, beacuse of my work and homework. Being positive helps me finish everything fast so can go to sleep fast.
In conclusion, Being positive is the key of success in life beacause, being positive gives you happinest and makes you do your job with more joy. Many people should change their negative attitude because neggative people never succed in life. When you are a positive person more of your goals are going to be achive. Also just not that you will make other people start being positive. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
696B864AED8C | Most of the people thinks that having a positive attitude is the key to success. It has been said that a good attitude is the best way to reach the goals. I totally agree that is important to have a positive attitude to success in life.
Having a good attitude can helps people to get a job. For example, if there is two guys on a job interview and one of them show a positive attitude while are asking him questions but, the other person is answer all the question with a bad attitude, the person with a positive attitude will get the job because, a good attitude show who you really are.
Showing a positive attitude can really show where you came from and how your parents educate you. Other wise, if a person show a bad attitude and he is insulting all the people and his way that demonstrate that his parents didn't gave him a nice education. Because, the attitude came from how your family had teach you to respect the people.
A nicely attitude can even help in the education. In other way attitude is the most important key in education because, nobody will teach someone with a bad education. It is important to demostrate a positive attitude when a teacher is explaining something because, that way you desmostrete the techer how much effort you are putting in the education and that you really want to success in your life.
Other people thing that is not important to have a good attidute to succes in life. Because, sometime you can be in a bad moon and attitude is something that you can't control. So, attidute is something is simething that can you hold.
In conclucion, having a positive attitude can help you reach your goals because a good attitude demostrete personality, education, and how careful you are with other people. Having a positive attitude can tell how your parents grothw you up and how you really care to learn a high education. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
698A3F2B43B9 | Have you ever thought about staring your future career in a young age? Well, This question has been asked to a lot of people. Lot's of people have responded to this question saying "yes" and "no". Everyone has their reason why they start in a young age and why they don't start in a young age. In my opinion young student's should start to think about their future career in a young age because it will give them an idea of what they want to be in their life and they will know what kind of courses or classes they will be taking to get to their goal. Even though, some would argue that young student's shouldn't start to think about their future career in a young age because they will spend less time with friends and family.
My first example is, it will give them an idea of what they want to do in their life in the future. For example, young age student's can change their mind and might not want to choice that path no more. Also, If that happens, young student's get's lots of time to think of another career path they want to take. For example, a kid is thinking about being a police but then later on he wants to be a doctor, that give the kid time to think about what he wants to be. Lastly, student's get a head start of what their future career is going to be like. In addition, This head start gives them time to plan and organize everything they need. For example, kid's have lots of things they want to be so they get a head start so they can get an idea of what career they choices to take.
My last example is, They will know what kinds of courses or classes they will be taking to to get to their goal. For example, student's can choice the right classes that will help them achieve their goal. Also, they don't have to stress out about them taking the wrong classes. Like, If a kid want's to be a doctor when he grows up he will already choice the courses of being a doctor. Lastly, student's knows what types of material they will need for the classes; to help them get prepare. In addition, This helps the student's a lot because they will already have the mind set to think of what they will be needing in the future. Like, that's a good skill to have, knowing what you need in the future and not worry about it in the last minute.
Some would argue that student's shouldn't start to think about their career in a young age because they will spend less time with their friends and family. For example, kid's are so full of energy and want to go out and have some fun all the time. Also, they want to make precious time and memories with their friends and family. Sure , it's nice to go have some fun and get to enjoy life with the ones you care about more. However, you got to remember that you going to be the one responsible for your own future and if you put effort your going to have an amazing impact in the future with your career.
In conclusion, student's should start to think about their career in a young age because it will give them an idea of what they want to do in their life and they will know what kinds of courses or classes they will be taking to get to their goal. It will keep them focuse on their goals and will make a big impact in their lives since they already have everything planed out. In addition, this will prepare them for the real world. So now, Do you think young student's should start their career in a young age? | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
69A8A08ED3E9 | " In this world you decide who do want to be either you get along with it or someone teach you" although some people think that our character formed by influences beyond our control nevertheless we choose our character traits people on your environment and also people who you talk to i believe that the one that influence me is that we choose our own characters
First People on your environment influence a lot because in front of them you decide who you want to be and you choose your traits so i think that you choose your traits on the type of environment that you are on on you are living for Example My brother Generic_Name when he was around me he was a different person we talked like brother help each other as brothers when he was around Dad And mom he was another type of person he was not the same with me he was more kinder but when we were on school he another type of person he was mean He didnt care about me and other people he wouldn't treat me he changed his traits to a whole different level That proves that a person can changes their traits depends on the environment that they are growing.
second people who we talked too we eventually we change our way to be to different people the way that we talk to our people are a different person when u talk to your relatives friends coasins brotheres we eventually changed the way to be for example one day A guy named Generic_Name recived a call from his parents saying Generic_Name its time to come home And Generic_Name respectfully said Tes mom i will go home right Away after he finish his call he talked to us saying Dude i need to leabe but like right now!! screming that proves that we change the way that act with different people or the way that we talk with different types of people.
to conclude we choose our character traits because we talk and and people around we choos ehow we act aroubd people people who we talk to are the ones that affect us more because thats the one that we do on daily bases the other one people on your enviroment is the way that u want to be looked by different type of people around your self. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
69C15737269C | We can't remove the impressions of the mind, and neither to change the impressions, Never again forget my first impressions, I can't change the last in my life, I remember the impressions in my life, when i was a children my mom, she also say: "You have good impressions and bad impressions but remember, you learn new things with impressions of the life" Would i like to change some impression, I have memory very bad, but i know it impossible my first impressions it was very painful, my mom and my father could have divorce, my life to change, it was my first impressions, but now I understand, the older people sometimes don't know the concequence, My second impressions it was when my uncle say: You want go to USA, that's moment was very happy, because i wanted to live in USA, always to change my life in my country, this is a good memory, all problem life's are necesary because we can to learn new things for the life, My last impressions it was the death of my best friend in my contry Guatemala, it was very impressions because he has a stranger disease, it was a moment very painful for me ever since my life is different
My position for this topic is, we don't change the last impressions, but we can change the impressions of future, to learn and understood the last things is a good reason for continue the life | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
69C237AC88FF | Dear TEACHER_NAME
TEACHER_NAME i agree of community service because i done it before. It's not bad and it doesn't take nothing of my time. I had to do 120 hours of community service. At first i thought it would be boring but a few days later it was fun. I had to do 120 because me and other friends did trespassing at SCHOOL_NAME. It kinda sucks because i had to go to court and my mom and dad were mad because they had to pay 200 dollars for the ticket. That wasn't cool!! Well the next day i went that same school and they told me that i couldn't be there at all! and they also said that if they see me there at that same school they would call the police on me again. That's why you shouldn't drive fast or pass red lights because they would double the money. Now i noe not to go to that school again. But once in while i go there to say hi to the principle and the teachers i had when i was in 6 grade and when i was in 5 grade those were my best teacher ever. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
69FD256DCE38 | There is a quote about success contsists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. people have different opinion about failure, some say failure is the worst thing that can happen to you, and it makes you not want to try your best on something . however in my opinion, I thing failure is the best thing that can happened to us humans because. it gives us the the corrage to try something over and over until you gat it, it makes us humans learn from our mistakes, and it gives us the strenth
First failure gives us the corrage to try something over and over until you gat it because, I have fail before when I was trying out for the school soccer team, I work so hard for it I go to training everytime, and be there on time but i did not made the team I was so sad that i did not made the team but it give me the corrage to try more and more.
Second failure makes us humans learn from our mistakes. we humans are not parfect we all make mistake and learn for it. it like me I am a teenager who cant speak english everwell, whenever I spoke to someone my age thay kept on making fun of me, but I never give up on myseif I know that if I learn from my mistakes I will be better at speaking english.
Finally failure make us stronger. in life in other to get what we want we have to go throught failure it teach us to be strong and to nevergive up on yourseif. everyone go through failure for example president Donold Trump in other to be a president he has to go through som failure.
In conclusion failure is the best thing that can happend to us humans. it teach us to be strong in anything that we want and to learn from our mistakes. failure play a enthusiasm in our lives that makes the world a better place. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
69FF884BCEA1 | i don't agree whit considering changing school policy so that student may not participate in sports or other activities unless they have at least a grade B average because getting a B in all classes is going to be hard everybody love to play sports o other activities.a gree whit you if you put that the student cut play sports or other activities if they have lice a C.because is going to be more easy for them to get a C+ than a B because you tiring see in which class they need to have a B for the y cut play sports or other activities.
so that mean that they need to have in all the clases B for they cut play sports or other activities.i don't agree whit you because is going to be hard for them to get a B for that they cut play sport or other activities and many of the student have C on there clases,they are going to pase whit C they are doing a good jod in class.in me opinion,i see that i let the student that have C,B AND A to play sports and other activities byt the students that have D and F they cut not play in sports or other activities because there are feling the year and if why leat them play so they are not going to do good in class for that they cut pass the year.that is why i don't agree whit your idea because if they have C is fin they are pasing the year but the students that have D and F they are not pasing.dos are the students that you need to see that if they don't have C or B they cut not play or participate in sports or other activities.your adia is good but like those student that have c they are doing all that they can to pass that years and is not fear to them that they are doing all that they can to get a C and that you see that they need to have a B for that they cut play sports or other activities.finally,i don't agree because is not going to be fear for them that they get C on there class and you set that they cut not play sports or other activities because they don't have B. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6A00BED6B62D | Do you think it is a good idea for students to start their career such a young age and stress about it? I will tell you guys why it is not a good idea. Reason number one students can feel a lot of pressure on them. Reason number two students still do not know what them want to be yet.
Students can get a lot of pressure because students have not found out what they want to do in life. Students can get over welled so easily. Students think about it to much what they want to be when they grow up. Especially freshman they just stated school they do not need any stress when it comes to think about their career. Freshman do not what they want to be yet. They are just new kids that have just stared high school and they do not need to think about it yet. Students already have enough stress and, they do not need anymore of that. Students already have stress from school, sports, home problems, and the list can go on.
Students still do not know what them want to be yet. It is hard to find something want you like to do in life as your career such as a young age. Students may thing they have found the one that they really want to do in life but, they change their mind and, they what want to go for the other career. Therefor, students need more time to think about what they want to do in life. It takes time to think about what students what to be to grow up. There is a lot of things to do for your career so students just have not found the right one yet. They need time to make sure what they really want to do in life and they feel it is the right one.
Some might says it is a good idea for students to commit a career such a young because it will benefit them in life. Here it is were I am go to prove them wrong. Students get stress so easily and they do not need any more of that. Students do not need to feel pressured and it is okay to say that they do not know what that want to be when they grow up. It is not okay to rush students as they enter high school. Students can make their own mind when the thing it is the right time and, also they think they really think what they want to be when they grow up just give them time. To my congestion it is not a good idea for students to commit to a career as they enter high school because they need time to think about it well. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
6A0DE6BCFA73 | The limitations of human contact due use technology had negative effects in peoples's lives. Imagine how many accidents happen in they week because the use of the technology using programs a lot. Generic_Name was driving and playing his favoitrs games online,and he did not look to the red light. Limitatios with humans can cause many problems in your life. We need to have limit technology use. Technology gave negative effects in time with family, driving while you are testing, and energy electricity.
First of all, families have limitation of time to talk about their problems because they dedicate more time to technony. For example, Generic_Name was a girls in public high school. She was talking with an old man; the man was looking everyday, and she do not figure out because the man told her that he was in another country. Next, she did not talk with the families and she was one more of many young victim of kindnap. Another example, peoples in families use technology inapropiately causing get all on troubles and having less communication between them as human.
Secondly, some people prefer to talk in text message while they are driving. This is cause of many accidents peoples use devices in their car. Sometimes person does not even look who is begin stting next to them. The are some problems as someone told me. Generic_Name was driving with his mother who was in another country: She came to see him, but he did not left the phone alone and look at his back the computer after a two miles, they crash crossing a railroad. Also, we knows the risk of doing it. People think tha using technoly and have less communication with their family anywhere is safe, but they are wrong because one distraction for our limitation with others human can be deadly.
Thirdly, energy is anothers problem because people spend more money. Even know, this increase a lo of accidents because custome's companies just buy lof of thing as computer, cellphone, and toys. The problem is many peoples spend more time plugin in setting beside its divice charger to get some energy in their computer or cellphone. One more example in about this problems Generic_Name was addicted to the computer in his room. He was charging it. He was friendless because of this reason, and Generic_Name did not talk with his family as normally; however, he just say good bye everyday.
In conclusion, Everyone has to stop using technology for unimportant reaso or things. This will be more safe for you and your family. In ddition, limitation of human contact have more consecuences while you are with your family, driving, and spend more enery. It's your time to chane this word. ACT NOW!!! you can chane verything talk to your mother, father, and your whole family and peoples. I change. I am waiting for you because we do not want our future generation get adiction. The government and the whole word need to be safe: lookin around our beautiful natural resources. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
6A47B80F3283 | I believe, the schools which ones offers distance classes for students is a really good option for alot of people for a several reasons.
Some persons wants to finish carriers of schools, but they cant for this reasons.
- They does not have much time to do it,
because they have to work, pay bills and stuff like that.
-Some students get out of the schools becauses they wants to help their family , and pass more time with them; take caring of they youngues bothers, sister, or work to get many into their house.
Taking classes at home wil be the better options for the studens which ones wants to conitinue their carrier after high school, into the university,becasuse they can have a time to work, and to pay they carrier , and to get done what they wnats to be and their future ...
Some carriers are really expensives, and a parents cant pay for it. Well the students can work and get many. And the same time with this programs they can still continue with they classes .
Also begin home taking a classes, should be a better more consentration and relaxing eating an apple, least worrys and getting ready for a better future. Doing classes work and the free time and having time to do others staff.
Classes a distance, will be the better option for alot of peoples, they can have time to do many things done at the same time .
work,take of they kids, have time free for your own and, with their family. Takinf a classes at home are the best way for those peoples wanst to finish they carriers in Universities or High Schools . | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
6A4F483B0224 | You will never grow into something you want to be in the future if you don't find your inner indite. Once you've found it, you could do all sorts of things and find what's best for you. Some people have great talents, some have bad ones, but they have one thing in common is that they practice really hard to master them. No matter what they say, don't let it get in your head just focus on getting to master your talent first.
Practice makes everything perfect even if you found something new, and you want try it out. The first time you won't get it so easily like you thought you would, but though lots of practice you will get it right in no time and better at it to. An example of this is if you're riding a bike, you fall down, but through practice you'll be riding your bike without falling off of it anymore.
We were all born with some talent that we don't know of, we just got to figure out what it is. If you found something you're really good at, then stick with at all times, and never let that talent slip away. If it does then you will be forgetting everything, and the talent you once had, and you'll have to find a new one. Based on your experiences try to find something different but a little simmer.
For example, if you worked at fast food restaurant you might want to work at a store next time. They have one thing in common is money.
Whether having a talent or just practicing, know that you're having fun whether you hate it or love it, and not for very long you will master it in no time. If you have done some of these, then you are ready to master a new talent. Different things can have an impact in your life, but that's how we all stated from very beginning; we never known we had a special talent until we try something new. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
6A7F75AD2ADE | The students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home.
Is better study from home because some students no have the time for study in school, because a lot students in the world that have that working for following her goals and being somebody in life. In the world has students that also working for careful the his parents or help at her brothers. Some students that want study in school by can not do, because sometime the family was passing by a situation difficult the money and so don't have more famalies that helping, is unique way that her children's work for that help at her family, and so some students can follow to study in her home. All the students that study in her home for online have that being responsible.
First, some students that have that working for help at her parents and also study in home. For example, Generic_Name that working everyday the week him want that her parents have a better life economic. Generic_Name to take a choice to go out the school and Generic_Name put at working. Him search the best way for have a job and help at her family with expense the home, Generic_Name also study choice take classes in home every night. Generic_Name want that when finish her studies want enter in the universsity, for have a job better and steady. Him want being lawyer the law for help a many people that was passing por moments difficult and that her children's don't can study in school because his parents no have a life economic good, and being the world a better place.
Secondly, The students that study in her home in online have that decide being resposible. For example, Generic_Name that want study medicine by not is responsible with her studies. Her parents choice that Generic_Name leave school and don't study more becuase her no put the her part by have better calification in school, the parents the Generic_Name to put stand up, 5am for go at the company and help in her businness. Generic_Name was very angry with parents, but Generic_Name choice and think the things that the best way are study and she say her parents that want follow her studies in home in online. Generic_Name learned the her mistakes and finish her studies and now she was in the university study for nurse, and is a better person and responsable with her studies.
In conclusion, some students that not like study in school and home,some parents working everyday for that her sons can have a better future and being somebody in life. many people no have money for that her sons study for online, the students the day now think that best way is to leave school and follow study more but also can study in the home and the sometime have a job and pay her studies and help at her parents. and follow study for that day the tomorrow do more better and peoples with respect, and help the poeple poor. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
6A9031A05632 | Ibelive tha use the cell phones in the class room for educational purposes is a fantastic idea, because student will save a lot of time finding imformation or doing others works. Teachera will not worry to collect books or magazines that normaly stuednt use to fine imformation. Student by using their phone, the work is going to be more easy because phone are more practical to use.
The idea to use phones in class is a good idea because will not only helpe students it will helpe teacher too. Student by usin their pohe they will save a lot of time, because sametimes student have to fine imfromation for a project and project need a lot of imfromation. Fine imformation in books, magazies is harde worke and studen they do that. With the phone student can fine the imformation more faster then normal and they have more time to do others work.
Teacher will not have to worry to collect all the material that stuend use to do their work. For example, in some classes they have to fine a lot imformation classes like Goverment, Biology and World history one and two. Student to fine this imformation they use books and magazines and when bell ring the stuen live the material they were using and the teacher have to collect all the thinks that they were using, but by usin phone they will not left all that mess teacher would not worry to clean the mess.
Studen will compleate all their work because if they have a project that need to finde imfromation they will do it faster in their phone. Phone are more practicle to use and more easy them books or magazine that student normaly use. The big reasen that student give that why they don't finish their work is that they dont have sufficient time because fine imformation in books is hard.
In conclusion phone will be a fantasctic i dea beacause will not only help stuenden it will help teachers too. The work will be more easy for student they wiil finish their works on time and teachers will not worry to cleand the mess the tuden do when they use books or magazine. They not going to have a escuse that why they don't finish their because with phone is going to be easy. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
6A977849DE08 | More is better than one. Asking more than one person will never harm you in any way. What it will do though is make you mare confident about what advice you are getting.
So, whenever you ask for advice, always ask more than one person.
You should ask more than one person for advice because you might find something that help you with another problem. You might not find what you are looking for but it can help you in the future. Whenever I ask for advice I always have one person that tell me something that's completely different but it always help me out later or with another problem. For example, once I asked my friend if he could give me advice on what to study for the math test. He couldn't give me advice for the math test but he ended up giving me advice for the science test.
You always want to make sure you are getting the right advice and collaboration is a big key to finding if the advice, opinion or fact is correct. If more than one opinion collaborates or says the same thing it's more likely to be true than the one that doesn't. This method can also help you with a project. For example, when you're working on a project you want to go to more than one website to check if they have the same information. That way you know for sure you are getting the right information. If you ask multiple people for their opinion on something and five of them same give you the same thing but one person says something totally different. You know he is wrong.
Collaboration is a good way to check if the information is correct but what if you don't understand the information or don't have enough to back it up. Asking more than one person for the same thing can help you build on the same thought and make it better. Maybe you just don't understand what they are talking about but somebody else might restate the same sentence and that might help you understand it better. I know this because Rome and Islam used the same technique and that's what helped survive for so long. For example, when Rome was going to war with Carthage they didn't have a navy but they found boat from Carthage was up on shore. They took the boat apart and made hundreds of copies of it but they improved it by adding a plank so they can walk over to another boat and attack them.
If you are working on a project, a essay or just asking for advice always ask more than one person to make sure it's correct and the best. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
6AB122D640E1 | If we work together the more we learn. From partnership you can learn and hear what other people come up with. I chose partnership because of diccuse in groups, work in groups, and learn more.
First, discusing in groups is one thing that partnership is. If one person doesn't get something another person can come up with other ideas. If I came up with new ideas i can share my ideas with the group i'm in. People can also hear what another student can up with in their own ways. Students can also correct themselves if they messed up on a word.
Second, working in groups is another idea of working with partners. People can help one another if they are having trouble understanding something. I can also learn new things just by hearing what a student came up with. In a group we can also check each others paper to see what they came up with. We can all work together to come up with new ideas so that our paper makes sence.
Third, by learning more we can get the hang of using that learn strategy. Coming up with new ideas to improve our writing. In group we can talk about each others paper if we think there should be a puncuation ore if a word is spelled wrong. If someone didn't puncuate a sentence correctly we can find a good puncuation to place it so that it would sound right. we acn also revise our paper to each other and hear what each others paper needs correction.
In conclusion, working in groups, learning more, and discuse in groups are reasons why i chose partnership. Working with partners brings new ideas in each others work. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
6AB2B78CE0AF | One topic that is frequently debated is technology is a positive or negative effects on people's lives. Technology is a positive effect because mostly everything is online. I believe that technology is good because books are online, get talk to other people through a laptop or a smart phone, and can write it on a notepad or word document. Everyone thinks technology is bad cause of the things they see on the news.
Not everyone has time to go to the bookstore and find the book there trying to look for. All books are online now and makes it an easier and faster. When you go on a road trip and nothing to do, you can read on your smart phone or any devices. Parents don't get a lot of time to relax and read a book, but on road trip they can while their children are sleeping in the back. Online books are easy to carry because it's on their smart phones. No more looking for your book when you lost it. Plus online books doesn't loose your spot, gives you an option to put a bookmark on the page you want to save, and if you don't know a word it will give you the definition and translate in another language.
Some people lives in another country or states and it's hard to communicate over a letter or phone call. Using a tablet, laptop, or anything devices that has a camera can do video chat. You can't write a letter and wait for 5-7 days or probably more for a responds. Email is one of the way to send a rough draft or a final draft. Other people can also edit or help you on it. Also on video chat you can call up to how many people and all the time you want. People complain how they can't meet up because they already have plans for other things, but they can just set up a time and day and they can do from everywhere they are at.
Technology is going to upgrade is the near future. Right now everything is at a start point, everyone thinks it's fun to have a tablet, laptop, smart phone, or headphones. Some people like to show when they get something new, but they have to take care of when they get it because technology are expensive. Just think about it in the future more technology will come and no more paper and pencil because everything will be on technology.
Most people like that technology is growing because it's better. Even kids have tablets for learning their ABC's and 123's. In schools, they sometimes provide tablets and laptop for students because they want them to learn better and makes sure they have something to do their work on. Sttudents likes technology because they can research what they need for their project or homework. Also they can watch videos how to do something or explain it better.
Technology is a good way to communicate with or without speaking. . There's many ways to get to everything with no issues or problems. I think technology will be a big part of people's live soon. People should get used to all the technology right now because sooner or later it will become bigger. Everyone will miss paper and pencil, but its a safe and better way to get through everyone. Also it's a good way to communicate with other people faster. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
6ACB38C6577C | Should a students work be praised no matter how bad it is? This sounds like a good idea in theory, but when you think of it only in the educational field is really a terrible thing to do. As people; We all want to be praised for how we work and we can only get better if we practice something over and over and over again and can get even more if we`re happy with what we`re practicing and happiness comes with every praise. But if all we got while learning was praise but nothing to improve on then what would be the point to continue learning if all we get is a "this is amazing" or an A+ on every assignment they got. They would improve but students also develop zero tolerance to any criticism and probably going to want all the attention focused at them.
A great example to this would be any artist; artists are based all around the idea of everything they make are things that they'll hate even if theres true improvement. they get praised but thats not what drives them to do better its the hatred of what they do that gives the motivation to improve and even take criticism with a grain of salt but use it to get better. Using what we learned from any artist it`d be a terrible thing to do, as the purpose of a student is to learn and use what they learned in the world and in the world theres going to be people who criticize what they do and if they cant take that criticism they`re most likely gonna get fired.
In conclusion. I`m not saying that praising to much is a bad thing and i`m also not saying you should make the student hate what they`re doing. But i am saying that with every praise should be a criticism just to balance it out and show the students that with every positive comes a negative and that the worlds not just going to be all praise to a person. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
6B20E9C115AF | I believe that a possitive actitude has a good impression in othre persons. But there around you are person who can influence you to be a bad attitude peson with others. The decison you make to be who you are is to realize that other person will act the same way to you as you just did to them.
Everyone need to be respected don't matter the age, country or religion becuase we all are humans. Been in a poaitive attitude will appeal the attraction of other persons to you by that will hepl you to success. Because if someone is being rude to them and you act different and start helping them they will notice that you have a good attitude to others that you dont even know. By the way you cannot judge someone just for their apparience is like judging a book with out reading it, it can be someone who will look with an angry face, a sad face even it can look weird but if you dont start sharing time, knowing each other, know what they like and what they do or how they are you cannot put your bad attitude just for how they look, they can also treat you as the same you did to them
However, people cannot recieve a bad attitude from you as if they were different to you. I think that we all are same with some differences than others as religion, country, color, etc... . I feel that recieving a bad attitude from a person that you even know is the badest thing that someone can do to you becuase you don't know that person and if you show that reaction from you that means that you're like that with everyone and show that you dont have respect to others. Even in your job is when you need to be the more kind as possible to keep those person that you don't know with you becuase as they need you, you also need them at the same time becuase they will help you to keep that job that you need, also your impression to them has to be best, as you show them at work you also need to show the best of you out of work that will show that you're successeful person in life and that you dont act good just when you need it and that is how you are and they can also trust in you because you are being honest to them.
Considerating that don't matter what you cannot give a bad treat to other person just because you woke up in a bad mood. I believe that if you are in bad mood and think that everthing is going to bother you is better for you to figured it out as soon as posible on you own, because people can not be involved with your own personal problem and i think even if you are not felling well you also need to be in a good attitude to the people because if you let you bad attitude to ruin the days of other they will think that you're always like that and will be enough to them to think the worse of you. However knowing that you don feel well and you gave the best of you to others before, that will be a great acomplishment for you and from now on you will be and example and will help othres that feel the same as you to continue and leave that bad mood behing and show the best of them.
In conclusion a good attitude is one of the important things to success in life. I think that every person have the right to be respected not for what they have is just we all need respect. People cannot be treat it bad because of you mood or just because you didn't like how that person is. Doesn't matter what you can't act bad with other persons, even if you don't know them and think that you will not see them again but the reality is that in other day you can really need from that person but that person will not be there for you because of how you acted before. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
6B2FD789B8C8 | To converse energy and resources, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. My school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours. This model will be helpful for students, and teachers at same time. By giving them more time to relax. It be the best option for students because it will give them more time to experience, learn new information in a young age. We all as a student need more time to prepare for future, and work as hard as possible to pass our classes. Furthermore, same for the teachers, they will be able to have more time with their families; and they can enjoy their lives with three days weekend. My school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours because teachers and students will have more time to relax,
to grow and achieve more, and to help others.
We all need to relax, specially if we are a student because school is so stressful, and two days weekend will not give enough time to students to relax. Two days weekend will just be enough for students to spend time with their families and do their homework; it will not give them time for themselves. Moreover, by two days weekend students can not relax and work for themselves. I personally rather to have more time during the weekend because I will have more time to finish everything that I wanted to do during the week, and I will have time to relax. During the weekdays students can learn more and they will have more time in school to spend with their friends. Some people think that three days weekend will make students forget what they learned during the week. But they are wrong because students will have more time to go over what they learned, and they have enough time to practice more.
Most of the people loves to exercise, read, meditate, and swim in their free times. Three days weekend will give students and teachers more free time to care about themselves. Most of my friends love to exercise, but some of them gave up on exercising because they don't have time to do it. They are working Saturdays' and studying on Sundays'. One of my teachers told me, that she loves to read book in weekends, but she does not have time to read because she has a lot of work to do. Reading, exercising, meditating, and swimming will help human to grow and learn more to achieve more. Also, four days weekdays will teach students to work harder. Some people think that students and teachers should not have longer weekend than usual because they have winter break, and spring break. But they are wrong because longer weekend can help both students and teachers to care more about themselves by giving them free time.
Some of the students love to help others, by volunteering. Three days weekend will increase students chances to help others because they will have more time to do it. My sister loves to volunteer and help other; she is volunteering once a month. She told me that she wants to increase it and do it more, but she can not because she has a lot of homework and she does not have time. Although, their are a lot of students who need help in some of their classes because they have a bad grade. If we give the students more time to study, they will get better grades. Last year during winter break, my math teacher told me that I have to try harder and study more, I told him that I can not understand the notes. We met in the public library and he helped me to study. He said, "I love to help students outside of school, but I don't have time to do it". I think we have a lot of teachers like that, who wants to help students outside of school, but they don't have time. If we have longer weekends, teachers will be able to help more students. Some people think that schools should have two days weekend because they are not getting tired. But they are wrong teaching and learning are the most hardest things in the world.
To converse energy and resources, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. my school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours. And this will help students and teachers to have more time to relax, to care about themselves, and to help others. Students can have more time with their families,
to grow, and to work harder and achieve their goals. Furthermore, teachers are also the same, teachers need more time to spend with their families and kids, and they will be able to plan what are they going to do, or what they want to do with certain students who needs help. Also, in weekdays they can learn more, or teach more. Which it is a great opportunity to both of them to achieve more. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
6B370155C425 | I think reading would be a enjoyable educational activity because you might find a book very intresting to you and it will also help your brain better at reading. reading is fun and also educational but it all depends on the person because some people might not like reading they could like reading when they are adults. and the best thing about reading you can do it anywhere like at school,friends house,airport ext. some people are into alot of different genre's like comedy,or horror,drama,ext. i like reading diary of a wimpy kid,and comic's my favorite was diary of a wimpy kid dog days it was about a kid named greg getting his first dog and not knowing how hard it is to take care of it.
if you don't like reading alone their are some things called bookclubs if you don't know what they are they are a group of people friends,family ext and they read the same book as you and talk about it they tell predictions,summarys, if you are wondering where the bookclubs could be located in librarys or you can make your own wiyh your friends or family. and this is what i thinks is a enjoyable educational activity. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
6B3A8DAB21EB | Wednesday 03, 20, 2019
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Working in Groups or Alone
In school sometimes we work in groups and sometimes we work alone. Working alone is fine because we don't get headaches from classmates; however, working in in groups is better because we get extra help from classmates. Working in groups is better because we get extra help from classmates, we get more opinions, and it takes less time doing the assignment.
First, working in groups is better because we get extra help from classmates. For example, we divide the assignment with our classmates. Each person has their own part to do and we finish it faster than do it alone. Working in groups is better because we will have more contribution from classamtes.
Second, working in groups is better because we get more opinions. For example, every person in the group give opinions. We get more ideas if we are more than only one person. We don't have to think everything about the assignment because we will have thinking help. Working in groups is better because we get more ideas.
Finally, working in group is better because the assignment will take less time to be completed. It will take less time because we will get more support and all the work don't will be completed just by one person. There will be more help and each person will do a little work what means that we will finish faster because it will take us less time doing the assignment than do it alone. Working in groups is better because the assignment will take less time to be completed.
In conclusion, working in groups is better because we divide the work with our classmates, we don't have to think everything about the assignment because we will have thinking help, and the assignment will take less time to be completed. Working in groups is a gift. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
6B3B3CB54EB9 | My opinion about conserve energy and resources.
I have two points of view, the bad and the good one. I think this is a good idea but, it has bad things.
I think if we want to conserve energy and resources we just need to have four-day school week. Four-day school week can be benefits for the people that have to work everyday, but it has a disadvantage and is that we are not going to learn to much like a five-day school week.
My first point of view is that this can be good for many students. If my school follow this system can work for many students that have to work every day. First reason is that they can have one school-day off so they can go calm to the job. They can have that day off in school and job. Second reason is that, this can be good also for those students that skip school everyday, maybe if they know that we just got four-day school week they would want to come to school. Third reason is that teachers can have more time to work on projects and do all that work that they have to do.
Second point of view is that is system can not be a good idea. First reason is that students would not learn as much as five-day school week. Second reason is that is going to be tired to be ten hours of school. Third reason is that two more hours of school are not a good idea for those that have a part-time, they would not be on time in their jobs. Two more hours of school can be frustrate for many students.
My position on this issue is that this would not work. First reason is that many students that have to work they would like to go to school beacuse of two more hours. students that have to work start they shift at 5 pm and school would end at 6:04 pm, students would skip the last classes. I think if this is to conserve energy and resources it would not work beacuse is like they are adding part of the last day of school to each day so like the same think.
My conclusion is that is not a good idea my school sould not approve this issue. This like the same think as five-day school week. If they don't add two more hours this maybe can work, but I think this going to be hard for students and teachers. With this system we are not going to conserve energy and resources is going to be the same thing. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
6B425FA21020 | I think seif-esteem come from praise, in my opinion, praising is good for student to built self-esteem by theirself.
expecially the praise come from their teacher, you know everyone like that other guys to praise him/her, i dont want to my parents criticize to me. even though common people, I care people's talk, Dosen't everybody care?
as a student, I understand that means in my mind, if I make some mistake, I know this is my fault early, when teacher criticize to me ,I will so sad, It isn't has a strong mind in everyone's heart, we are human not god, so don't bring blow to kid when he/ she get trouble. they are fragile, because they have different thought, more blame to others, more counter to you. you should try to encourge to them, say you are good, if student have some fault really, Don't say no ,should say:I think you can do it better.
It improtant to make progress when they are growing up. the great education is nurtured little by little early. I trust you can do it or blame them simply ,Let me compare and think about it. It's not in the same way.
You are distinctive! I really think that is truth. i admit you are right so long as you can say you understand by use your way. actually right or wrong is not improtant. but this is serious that you want to probe the problem of the learn is necessary, we can't blow them.
In a words, even thouht always miss''right anwer'', try to praise me and friends, you are good,and you can do better, I am also proud of myself, self-confident make me too strong, whatever they say anything, adjust mind by myself, that is prefect enough ! | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6B479AF72202 | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote,''to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment''. Although some people disagree about Emerson's statement, actually I agree because society is always trying to make people change their point of view, their culture, their belivers. First never give up, Second always love and be proud of yourself and Third don't forgot your roots.
Here are some reasons why I agree with Emerson's statement. First, the world is trying to make change but you have to never have to give up. Becuase it's important to continue being yourself, not matter if some people are not going to like it, the only one who have to feel comfortable with yourself it's you. Second, always love and be proud of yourself. It's important to be proud of who you are because eventhough you make mistakes sometimes that doesn't have to make change who you are. You just have to learn from your mistakes, I know it is difficult but no one says that would be easy ,but you can do it. Love yourself because every of your features, your character and your personality is what identify you, is make you unique, different from anyone else in the world that wants you to fit on it. Third, don't forgot your roots. If you are from another country you are forced to change yourself, trying to pretend that you are someting else, but you must have to stop it. Because in a world that is constantly trying to make you be something else your biggest accomplisment is to show that you are better than what they expected you to be.
Finally what are you waiting for!. Don't let the world change yourself, remember to never give up always fight for is better for you, love and be proud of yourself always and don't forgot your roots because every part of yourself is what make you unique, special and that is your greastest accomplisment. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
6B56C630FFC5 | Principal
This is my opinion of your future change in the school activities. I'm not in favor in this change, if the students are good players, the principal have to let they play at least they have a grade C average, but if the students don't have a good grade, like F or D, the principal have to tell they that they can't play anymore, till they make a good grade.
This change can do a good change because the students that play a sport or if they are in the band, and if they care more in the activity that they play, maybe that can be distorting the student, that can be the reason of why they don't have good grades, so the students what the students have to study at the same with their sport or other activity, and be good with both. Maybe the students are better in their activity because sometimes we have more fun, and because we like to be in more movement. I have to tell that the idea of tell us about this cange and for give us the opportunity to let us tell you, our opinion is good. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
6B850987631D | If schools offers students distance learning as an option, that student should take the offer. That's my opinion if a school ever offer me online school. If I would have chosen this offer, I would have 3 reason why I agree that offer. Student should always think first if a school offers you something.
My first reason is, student can take their time in the morning to wake up and take a shower. For example, if a student wakes up late to school, that student wouldn't have time to do stuff he/she planned in the morning. But online school, that student can wake up late and take their time what he/she planned in the morning. My second reason is that its less cheaper. In online school, students only need: a computer, notebook, and something to write with. Students also receive free food from their home. But in regular school, some student pay money to get food, and the supplies for each class can be expensive. My last reason is student sometime finish their online school early, and have the rest of the day to play games, or hang out with friends.
In conclusion, student should always pick the right decision, when it comes to a offer in school. I think online school is good for students. Why, because if a student that is having family problems, and missing school every day. They can take online school, so they don't fail a grade, or miss any important assignment. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
6B8C02811FF6 | Yes i agree for that all we have that be our selves for put to go out a head we live in the own world where the people judges our behavior and not sees its errors. because in this world to be bieng you yourself and don't matter how you are, you have that yourself, always we need remmerber that you can change the world, not the world change you.
all of them we have a problem but we need learn, follow our dreams i want graduate this year sometimes i think i can't anymore but i have a son i need to follow because he follow me i want change the world for my son he need make a better person because he need help other people i want that he follow her dreams.
we need change our to think for that change the world we need make major people i need make better people i need help to the people poor, and the ancient people we need change our character because we want a better future for our children they need learn to be bette people they knoe our future.
in the school i learn about no judge the people if we have a different type of skin and different color and nationality don"t matter in this world all the peole are the same.
i don't change my manner of to think because you need to be yourself. don't chage your ideas to be a big person in the world in conclusion don't worry be happy because the life is short you need live the life don't matter that the people think follow your dreams " i want study in the university i want to pass my tests i want a be a big person that my son see that all can you can make whattever you want if you can and you want you can.
We can change the world for a world better. | 1.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6BB4BEB51A80 | People can learn without making mistakes. People should seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important. People should not make their own decision. First, they would learn in a better way, also people need someone to advise them. As well, the world would not be destroy as it is now.
People would learn in better way. To begin, if people seek the guidance from experts they would not make a lot of mistake, and their life would be better. For example, a person who seek the guidance from experts it would have more opportunities. Likewise, a student who doesn't understand math class can talk with his teacher or other expert in math and the teacher can explain it. On the other hand, if the student doesn't talk to anyone he provably would fail math. In addition, a person who get a new job need someone to explain it what to do. While, if nobody explain it the new employee would make many mistakes. As you can see, the people who take the advise of a experts would learn better.
People need someone to advise them. For example, everybody have problems, but not everybody have someone to advise them. First, a new student came to my school and he didn't know the rules of the school, so he did something that it wasn't good and he get in big trouble, but if someone would explain him he would't get any trouble. Therefore, many teenager do whatever they want because they doesn't have anyone to guide them, and the result of that is those teenager get it many troubles each day. While, the teenager who are guide for any expert they do well in everything they do. As you can see, everyone need someone to guide for the right way, and nobody would do a lot of mistakes.
The world would not be destroy as it is today. For example, if everyone would have the opportunity to have someone to advice them the world would'n be danger to anyone. Furthermore, in many countries the people are in danger because their governors doesn't know how to guide a country, but if an expert took the control of the government the people would not be in danger anymore. Likewise, teenager sometimes live by them-self, so they don't have anyone to tell them what is good and what is bad; teenager many times do bad things and they don't even know. As I repeat, if the whole world would have someone to guide everyone the world would not be destroy as it's today, everything would be in peace.
In conclusion, if everyone would have the opportunity to have an expert guide during life the entire world would be better. Likewise, people would make better choices in their life. Also, with a expert guide the people nobody would be in danger again. Furthermore, teenagers and kids would have a better future around the world; as well, the world would be in peace, and people would learn in a better way. Also, if someone doesn't know something he/she can talk with an expert and the expert would guide her/him. Finally, life would be better and easier if everyone talk to an expert what is going on, so nobody would do a big mistake. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 |
6BC83A3F4934 | In the this world everyone have twenty-four hours for one day. What are you doing for a day? Do you accomplish something? Everyday you want do somthing, maybe you are inactive. sometime you do this thing, and you want to other thing on the same time.
I am a student sometime I have had homework to do. Determine never to idle? For example; After school, I need thoughtout I have project to do, I want to relax do nothing, and I want to eat dinner. Is it struggle in the my mind. Which I want to do first? If I finish my project, after the time, I can to want I want to do ,is purpose for a day.
My position is if I always focus one thing, I will cacccompish more. If I am idle, it is waste my time, and I can not to my purpose. You do anything have had process. Never have idle for life? I think maybe, but I feel is impossible, because you can be idle, this is your life, you can decide idle or completely do something.
I believe doing something you like, you are quick accomplish. If I have some problem thing, on the idle time, I can think about find some solution. Think about how I can to my purpose. When you be to purpose, I will wonderful done much to do. Life is your what is want to do, do more? or idle for time? | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
6BDF73E50719 | THE SUCCESS OF LIFE
the success of hes life is through because when you are star every time you failure and failure,but the that failure you learn how you continue your life but and your road you see are new failure and you are star again but like that you learn how to continue your life; because and your future the that failure you are stay there because you know how you attack that fail the you have and your life and try to find the we ideas what are you like and don't forget the you have your family and ask questions if you have or are your friends the more closed you, but don't forget in time have a person they said if your friends but that person is try to destroy you because he or she have a jealousy you because he see the you have more opportunity then you try try to change your opinions and your goals but never follow that directions the that person.
When you have a opportunity take that because that is your like, Try to have a new opportunity and get that before other person have the same carrier not keep your goal because if that person get first that carrier your life change because you said my carrier stop here because other person won the job first them me,like in my life I have a job but in times is so burn and them said I one to change my job a other more better because not pay me the enough to work their like the all week I work 5 days the that 5 days I work 4 days for my self and is not to easy to clean everything for my self I took with my boss to find a another employed, but she said no because this mouths is not business and thats why she no can to find a another employed to help me, to this point I failure because a not won enough money to help at my mom like pay the rent or help and another object.
the enthusiasm they show you, the you never due back you need to go at front the everything you never give you secrets at others person because that person use and you give him more opportunities he you have thats why you never when I said never give your secrets at person because is like you give your goals house, car and including the family , because all at that person;the enthusiasm dislike your first goal because that help you at can work you get your goals and studying is the most important because as you not study you never get you want to want because the study is the most important in your life, the your grades in your schools demonstrate if you fight for yours dreams or you want to work and never work the you like it, because in times you have a negatives times you go away the you road.
The negatives things is take the wrong way,because in times you have a persons jealously they try the you not stay more up the thats persons and try the you go down but never follow that directions the that person because affected your job or your company or and you want to work and don't forget what yo like the have family and friends they help you and friends the your ask if you have a question.
Don't follow the directions the thats person bad, because that person destroy your your goals and another things the you have but never give have you you work, how can you do,how you organization and another thins the you have for take the good direction the yous companies the your goals because is so important the you continue how you dude and how you work, thats why the you never the follow the bad things.
Today I learn the enthusiasm give you goals and good directions and is not important if you failure because I know the you can find another alternatives they help you go for a good directions at the top, and you foollow the negatives thins because the that bad things you go away if you follow the the bad directions but never forget you have a family and friends they stay there to help you and if you had e question you can ask maybe give you a good ideas or others things. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
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