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3E170458E9A1 | I
disagree that first impressions are almost impossible to change because the people may still get used to the place and take time know get how around work-
site and they can get loss on know we to go ,
the can have a bad day we thing happen like they car stop work and there have to ride a bus there but there traffic on the road were job site is, the can have disable that make the slow at do the work and it made take time to finisher the work,
and that why disagree we first impression are almost impossible to change but we all have bad day and other may still get use to the place and fewer have disable that we have to live with life forever but do hard work , never gave up,
a map in your phone to so you no we you go or get use to the place and one your boss may gave you a raise or you can be the next boss. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
3E1A0BAC4372 | Sometimes knowledge is very helpful but sometimes imagination could be helpful to.
When I was seven years old I imagined many things but they never happened. When I turned 13 years old things changed and they were not the same as I imagined before. I thought that I was gonna acomplish those imaginations in my head but they never did. One day I noticed that imaginations were not better than knowledge.
One day my mom and I were suffering because we couldn't get to the other side of the river and we decided to build a boat to get to the other side and we made it. The knowledge we used was unexpected because we never thought we were gonna make it to the other side. Knowledge is very helpful when you are struggling with something but you also use imagination because you think before building or making something.
I believe that imagination could be important sometimes but knowledge is more helpful and we use it very often. Imagination could change things but not better than knowledge. We might always think that imagination is better I agree with you but if you think of how easy it would be use knwoledge while you are struggling than you would understand the differences.
Knowledge is very helpful in many ways and very often. I disagree with the prompt saying that imagination is better than knowledge. Always try something first and if it doesn't work try using something else. You will always find the solution on something different just like I did with my mom. Always think of something that you can use to solve a problem. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
3E4B70F8555C | The benefits of working with a group or working alone. Which do you feel is more beneficial.
In my opinion, I believe working with a group is more beneficial because a group creates different ideas, team work to win the competition, and entertain the audience.
First, each person of the group has a different thoughts and different ideas. They share their ideas to create incurable, different, complete thoughts as a group. Some of the ideas are very difficult to reach the goal, but it is passable to think together and make it happen.
Team work to win the competition is to work together. Each person has to play a different correcter's and roles. Some of them in the group they have to support the main correcter in the stage or back of the stage. Rehearse time to make it inconvenient to be with family members to reach their accomplishment.
Finally, entertaining the audience is most important to each group member. An audience is the people come to enjoy the show, each of the group member are work hard to convince and entertain the audience. Each group member has one leader to follow their roles in specific time to make the show more interact.
I think, the wonderful job can be done working together as a team, developing their ideas and creating entertainment in their performances . And, also, their task is to gives the fans happiness and good time. Team members, families, and teachers will feel proud. I think working with a group it is more joyful.
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3E500A5390C1 | Prompt about having good attitudes
There is different kind of people on this world and they have lot kind of problem in there life like they dont have job otherwise cant anything in there life or somekind of problem,Its happen to me when i am being nice to much anyone anf they feel like they can ask me and i dont feel something to them becace i have one big problem i cant say no to them only otherwise. I can help them or be nice with them. I cant see them in difficult time.
I have experienced because i like help other people when other people and they are happy with you and they remebere you when you die that girl or boy help me they being nice and they are good and they can learn lesson from you and they feel good in their life aand i just want to say that do hurt someone in your life place if you do somthing good for them just do it becasuse may thet cant do good somrthing for you perants if you do it. you know god will be happy with you if do good. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
3E607F7C98ED | My dad always said, Pass your class or no fun in life. First thing I will like to accomplish in life is passing school. If you think school is not an important aspect of you if you would be a fool, all of the well known people you know have gone thought school. I will try to take more years of school after im done, then I would like to learn more about the history of Africa and Asia even more. I think that learning about the future is something I would have never thought I would do in times to come but here we are, they talk about it all the time but never do it so I would like to change that reality. Therefore that is one thing I will like to accomplish in the future.
Have you ever heard Never knock it till you try it, thats what i will be talking about. There are a lot of thing I have never done in my life, one of them is playing music, I always listen to music like rap or pop. I have always wanted to do the guitar but i was too scared to do it. Now I take lessons for it, im trying to play it in other places. I have also wanted to rap I have it in me I just have to try and get my vocabulary up so I can say more in my music. I will start to take trying new thing serious.
Fact checkers say that people who always play sports will live longer. What I will try to accomplish is playing every sport. I already play soccer so I am try to play more variety of sports. I have stared to play basketball more, I think right now playing basketball is more fun than soccer. I have played baseball and its fun but it is not for me, but as I said this is what im going to try in the future.
The limits of your language are the limits of the world, once said by Ludwig Witgettein. In the future will like to learn more about peoples language and where they come from. We used to travel a lot but now corona virus has it the whole world and people are scared to go any where, but nothing can stop us if we have God in our life. Now it has kind of cleared up we can travel and see how people live in second world places help them learn from them and use it in our lives. It does not hurt to learn and accomplish new thing in life.
Last thing I have to say is I am still trying to accomplish always having fun and being happy. Many people out there are not happy or have fun, Doctors say be happy is the best medication and the worst disease is sadness. One thing of staying happy is being healthy, health is an important aspect of life it tell if you stay or die. People who take their life are those who dont talk to people, those who are sad all the time, and those who are not happy. Those are all my reasons what I will try to accomplish in life. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
3E6C6F1FE64D | Imagine going to school and it's your first day back from summer vacation and you walk into class with a weird impression that some teachers want to change because they know you can change the way you act or talk to other people. I think first impressions can be change because there are people that struggle to show how they feel so they have this mean impression towards people the cause of it might be parents divorce a lot and a family member passing. Some resources say that 50 percent of the population tend to give students or parents an impression that is either showing how they feel towards something.
Firstly, changing an impression might be a challenge for some people but they said its impossible to change in my reasoning I think it's possible to change someones first impression. You really can't give someone an impression if you don't know anything about them or if you don't know them. You can't always say "oh their so mean" until they know your background. The reason I say that is because most of the time it's true most people would give an impression towards new students at school, but they don't know anything about the person. In reality, I disagree with first impressions are almost impossible to change because you can change that impression that people tend to have on there face.
Secondly, there are other ways you can show your impressions if you don't want to show them. The first one is that you need to try to befriend them and make a conversation you never know you and that person might have a lot in common that you just didn't know to begin with. Your impression doesn't judge but it's the way you show it because sometimes it led to making new friends, having good grades, and making your own decisions in life sometimes.
Thirdly, I think impressions can change because nobody said anything about "anything isn't impossible " but a lot of stuff is possible if you believe there is. My reasoning to this prompt is that if you don't try hard enough to change the impression you have on your face then how can you make friends or how can you ignore what people are saying about you . Everyone can change especially their impressions you just keep trying and get to know the person.
In conclusion, I think first impressions can be change if you act right towards people and how you treat others with your impression. Nothing is impossible if your don't try to change it or if you don't try to make a way to get people to be on the same level as you in the end. So I totally disagree with this prompt for saying that first impressions are almost impossible to change. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
3E750EB9F5C5 | I disagree beacuase anyone can change there impression anytime. If you don't like someone and your talking to them your impression won't be the same, as your impression to your family.
some people disagree because anyone can change there impression anytime. Like when have you seen someone impression the same when they gift them a toy then when they give them a book. Some people will agree that impressions dont change but you can fake your impression anytime.
other people will agree because some people can show the same impression anytime. there wrong because no one cant have the same impression everyday. Some people fake a smile every day and when they get home there down and crying a lot. other people that agree that people can have the same impressionthey gotta look at it from another point of view.
disagree beacuase anyone can change there impression anytime. If you don't like someone and your talking to them your impression won't be the same, as your impression to your family. other people will agree because some people can show the same impression anytime. there wrong because no one cant have the same impression everyday. Some people fake a smile every day and when they get home there down and crying a lot. i think no one have a good impression everyday | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
3E7DE9C1C160 | What lesson would you chose to teach elementary school students? Would you chose math because they like numbers, or science because they like playing with science experiments. I would chose science, because we use science every day by turning on a light, to throwing a ball up in the air. Another reason many students like science is because it is the most fun, by that I mean by all the experiments we do in science. One lesson I would like to teach elementary school students is about science because it is fun, it is the most easiest subject to teach, and it is the most used in daily life.
Firstly, one lesson I would like to teach is science because it is fun to most adults and kids. First, science is fun because you get to do different types of experiments. For example, If you want to learn about kinetic and potential energy you can use science experiments that have kinetic and potential energy in them. Some experiments can have you involved in throwing a ball so you can illustrate kinetic and potential energy. Second, science is fun because everybody can enjoy it.
For example, say one student does an experiment everyone in the class can experience it because they all witnessed it. Lastly, science is the most fun to make a lesson about because it involves you talking to other people and sharing your observations. For example, If you did a egg drop experiment, you will compare your results to different types of students in your school and hopefully learn from what you did wrong or the opposite. Therefore, science is fun because you get to deal with experiments.
Secondly, one lesson I would like to teach is science because it is the most easiest to teach to many students and adults. First, science is the most easiest because it does not require you to memorize or remember something every single time. For example in other subjects unlike science you have to memorize the root words for English, or memorize the formulas for math, But here all you have to do is memorize the terminology and you should be good to go. Another reason why science is the easiest is because it is involves experiments which are not hard to understand all it requires you to do it pay attention. For example, If you pay attention to the experiment then you will know every bit of it, But in math you have to keep on practicing again and again until you get it. Third, science is the most easiest to many students because it involves drawing pictures which is the most easiest way to understand something other than memorizing. For example, say that the students don't get it by words so, what you can do is illustrate for them so they get what you are trying to say. This works best in science because because science is the subject that involves the most of drawing and experimenting. So at last, science is the best subject to teach about because it is the most easiest to understand.
Thirdly, I would like to create a lesson about science because it is most used in daily life. Firstly, it is most used in daily life because everything can relate to science. For example, it can be related to light because light can cause radiation, it can be related to the air conditioning because it involves air traveling in currents. All of these thing are related to science and there is certainly more. Secondly, Science can help you understand more of your daily life by performing a lesson. For example, say that you don't know how to use a compass, science can tell you the answer to that because it relates to the magnetic field. Last, science is the most used in daily life for fixing things and being able to understand how things work. For example, science can tell us a lot of information, some examples can be how does a circuit work, how do fix a circuit, how does a light turn on so fast, or other possible things too. In addition, science should be the lesson because it is the most used in real life.
In conclusion, one lesson I would like to teach in elementary school is science because it is the most fun and makes a lot of students smile when they do science, it is the most easiest to teach because it involves minimum talking but a lot of drawing, and lastly it is the most frequently used in real life. So therefore, I should get my science lesson ready for the elementary school students soon because they would have the most fun in this while learning. Would you teach science why or why not? | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
3E9A664FFD33 | Although some say true self-esteem comes from praise of others because make people feel more comfortable with their life, actually it comes from achievements. Self achievements make people decide for themselves and teaches confidence.
Most people think that with praising students, they may be motivating the student to become a better version of them selves, and that the students might be developing confidence through small amount of work. Some also say, that is important to give credit to students work. No matter how bad it's.
People who decide for them selves, are most likely to get a high pay job; than someone who was used to being praised while was a student. It had been proved. kids who grow up in environments where their parents, teachers and peers, are happy with his/her academic skills without making them improve. Will be hard for them to get a high pay job in the future unless they have a special talent.
True self-esteem comes from achievements and confidence. For example; 3 years ago I start training mix martial arts; I was also living in a environment where people used to praise me. Which is not a bad thing, but I perfectly new that, that won't do any good on my future. I remember that before training MMA, I didn't have self-esteem neither confidence. Once I join the MMA academy coaches used to tell me, and still telling me "that technique is not good enough, that take down sucks". My coaches didn't praised me. My coaches taught me; what I needed in order to achieve confidence in battle or in anything I want to do in life.
Image a world where people listen to the rest, and don't try to make decisions for their own. It wouldn't make anyone for good, unless they are the kind of people, who need someone to depend on. For example; when my father was young he made decisions for his own. nobody praised for him. he developed a very powerful skill. He developed confidence. The confidence brought him to USA and had the opportunity to get a high pay job.
In conclusion I strongly believe students shouldn't be praise. I believe that praising students do good while they are young, but when they get older; they will want to have this feeling of relying on someone, and have more chances of ending up in low paying and boring jobs. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
3E9DF0451049 | I agree to the first expression, because it has meaning behind it,
and it makes alot of sense.
and its possible for it to change.
my life was complicated at first, but I always thought of a solution to escape my problems, as when I was little my life was a living hell, I always got laugh at, even if I didn't had a reason to get laught at, so I saw through my life and thought theres was a reason to live anymore, but then I ask people about there life, and they told me everyone love them, and that hurt me very much, so I gave up and didn't ask anyone for help. until one day. one person in my class told me if I was okay, and I responded back saying, ''I want to end my life'' and he in tears, gave me hope and told me if I wanted to play soccer in his team, and I told him, I will think about it, and after the day pass, I became a new member of his team, I practice so hard, his coach saw in me potential and told me I should be the captain of the team, and it made me so happy, I started asking my parents to buy me stuff like food, and stuff I needed for traveling with the rest of my friends, so then the days pass through, and I woke up so bright, I couldn't wait to get ready to travel with my friends, so when I arrive to the school, I started practicing and getting ready to play for the team, then I saw behind me my team with a soccer ball, to get ready for traveling, when we started packing up, we saw this huge bus that was so cool, even a giant could ride in it, so we ran as fast as we could to the bus and I got the first seat in the bus, so my friends got jealous of me, and start throwing papers, but I was so happy I ignore the team and started thinking of the soccer championship, then waste my time fighting for nonsense.
the next day we all woke up and the bus stop us at a food shop, were they sell all kinds of stuff, and I was so sad, I forgot my money, but I didn't forget to carry my lunch, so we all finish eating and came back to the bus and travel again, and traveling we saw through the window amazing places, until we stop and ran out of gas, and stop at middle of the road, I was so mad, I scream very hard, and threw papers, until the teacher told me to calm down, he told we could instead have fun playing soccer at a private place, because it didn't matter if we didn't make it to the league, what matter to are teacher, is to put smile on are faces. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
3EA2BA9DAB33 | Well i thik that is a good idea for all the students to be guide and know more about a career after high school younger age.
some reasons why they should know more aobut a career at younger age are:
They will be ready after they graduate and know'ing what are they gonna do.
It will be more easy after you graduate you don't have to worry about what career are you gonna study,
and it ognna make you more responsible.
Some students don't like this idea to be guide at a younger age they don't want to worry that much,
some student just want to finish high school firts and they have 4 years to decide what are they gonnna do after high school and what career are they gonna pick.
In conclusion staring knowing aobut college in a yourger age is no a bad idea, it will help you a lot and you will be more confindece, but they are other students who prefer to know more about college and what career they should pick after they graduate. | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
3EC60741B7BF | Yes i agree with churchill's statement for the role that failure and because he never loss the enthusiasm of to keep up and that happened with the role that consists of going from failure to failure but never loss the enthusiasm.
The role is something that consists in a good jod but you have to know how you use because if you don't know how you use your role is going to failure or if some people that you have don't know use that thing. But if that happend don't loss the enthusiasm because if you want that you role going up and make more money or others things, don't loss the enthusiasm and you have to study more about role for learn more and for that you role don't going failure because in you role you can do new things, and you can do jobs with others people that have role you can work with they like a group and work for a big company where the can pay you much money and with that you can do another company more big by yourself about role or if you want to you can do a different company that you like it you can do a better jod only you have to learn more about the job that you want to take always if you want to take a good job you have to study first before you take the job like when you study more about role because if you don't study more for different job you job is going to failure like the role always happend in jobs that you don't know use but never loss the enthusiasm if you like the role, or others things.
The enthusiasm is something like when do you like something like a better jobs, role, or others things that you like to do that's enthusiasm or when you like to do a good mechanic or a good doctor and you say i going to do this because i like it is my dream do a good doctor or a good mechanic or others things but that's the enthusiasm do something that you like to do and never loss the enthusiasm because if you loss the enthusiasm you never going to do anithing that you want or that you like don't loss the enthusiasm never do like Churchill's he never loss the enthusiasm because he want to keep up with the role and he like the role he study more and he learn more about role. This is my ideas and examples about this question about the role that you have to know how use the role and if you don't know use you role is going to failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 |
3EEB66F3630C | This is what the prompt is asking me to take a Position on this Issue. And to Support my response with resons and Specific examples on this prompt. So this is what the Countergraument is about and what it onces me to take the Position and Issue on is this Should people make their own Decisions, or should they seek Guidance from experts and Authorities about life's Important matters?
People should make their own decisons because in one point of another theres always going to be a time that we are going to have to make a decison on something like for example every four year's theres always a selection for a new goverment and what i mean by new Goverment i mean like a new President that when we have to make a Selection that a decison that we are making for our self but in this situation we are looking for our own Committing benenfical so that why it is good for us to star making our own decisons for our own self and specially for us as young Atults that we are in high school and that some of right now we are asking some bad choices but we can change that by staring making good decisons or at list trying to make the right decison in school. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
3EEEF86719CD | There are many reasons why people want to be independent. They major reason is because they want to start making their own decisions. Making your own decisions in life is a being thing in life it shows how responsible and independent you are. Some people choose to make goo decisions some choose to make bad ones. The bad decisions can cause a lot of damage to others in different ways.
Some examples of bad decisions are drugs, drunk driving, and joining gangs. these decisions can cause a lot of pain towards the people around you, joining gangs is a high risk of getting yourself killed and for no reason. once you get your self killed you did nothing but make everyone that love you cry. Then theres drunk driving you put yourself at risk as well as others that have a family waiting for them to come home to them. While you made the decision to drive after you drank alcohol you have to deal that to put others in the hospital because of the decision you made. Then you got drugs that is never good for you. The only way to stop doing them is to never start them. Your family wont be happy with you nether the people you love, but other than those there are some good decisions people make.
Decisions helps you figure out what you want to do after high school. Maybe Like what job you want to per sew or what you want to study in college or maybe if you want to start a family. All of these are good examples for making good decisions to make in the future. Jobs are really hard to find and get if you dont have experience. They are always looking for people who are ready and happy to be working in there store. But if your go to college first and youve figured out what job you want you now what you have to study to get that job. That helps you in many ways and with that you can make a family and not worry about haveing the money to support that family.
While people are trying to figure all that out we have kids that like to start trying to be independent and make their own decisions. while these kids are trying to do all that they have there family members thinking that my kid can do that on his own if you know what I mean by that basically what I'm trying to get to is that there mom and dad believe that there kid dosent need help with one thing. It shows them that there there turning in to a man or woman. there parents know that letting them make their own decisions help them think for them self and grow as a person. It also show there parents that they can handle them self when their by them selves
All these reasons show that making decisions is a hard thing to do for some people, but at the same time it shows people how to be independent in life and its a step kids and adluts have to take to move forward. Indenpendece is what people ask for in this worl and know that you have it what are you going to do with it? | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
3F1E511E2E1E | Schools that provides distance learning as an option to attend classes from home online, or video conferencing are few of all the country. It is a good idea for all students that wants to graduate, even if they don't have time to go to school every day.
Students some times don't have time to go to school every day, some of them works in a part time jobs; That's difficult to them because, they need to wake up earlier to go to school and do homework in the afternoon.
Some students decided not go to school any more because, they need to work to pay bills, and help their families in home. Also, with this option students can be relaxing in their homes and studying at the same time. Another example why this is a good option for students is because some of them need classes to graduate, and they can not get that classes done by the school year, but if they have the possibility to take classes online they can finish during the year.
However, this beneficial option is good for those students that are not eligible anymore to attend school because of their ages. There is a final age that students can be accepted by the school, and if they had more than the age the school said, they can not attend to school anymore, even if they want to continue going to school and graduate. That's why online classes from home is great idea for those students who wants the diplomat.
In conclusion this option is beneficial for all students that want to study and do other jobs in the same time. Those who work and wants to finish school, are benefit with this amazing idea that some schools provide. The're just few schools that students can assist for those who want to get their diplomas done with facility way to study. Is a really helpful option for all students in all the country. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
3F1ED9A56002 | The one thing students shouldn't have are phones. Why?
It is because students in different country always use their phones for my reason
The first reason why students shouldn't have a phone because of social media. What is social media that you might be asking? Well social media is where people can comment on pictures or video. The one that i should add to that is that students everyday will always go on their phone and posted a picture or a video of them self or with someone.
The second reason why students shouldn't phones because they might have download something that could get them hacked or giving information to someone that they don't know on the internet. The third reason why students should have phones because sometimes people can get bullied on the internet which the term is called cyberbullying. What is cyberbullying that you might be asking? Cyberbully is another form of bullying, but it is on the internet. The third reason why students shouldn't have a phone because some students will sometimes look on their phone without looking at where they are going. Some students got them killed because of that reason. So I suggest to not use your phone while you are walking across the street. The fifth reason why students shouldn't have a phone because of you posting a picture of you in a different country. Well that is risk because you could get robbed. How do you even get robbed first of all that you might be asking? Well you post a picture of you in a different country and that is giving the robs more of a chance to rob your house. The sixth reason why students shouldn't have a phone because they might prank call some local fast food restaurant. If you prank call the police, you will get yourself in trouble for that reason which many people in different country prank call the police for funny reason and also bad reason. The seventh reason why students shouldn't have a phone because it could explode because you are using all the time. If you are using it none stop, then it will explode on you so I suggest that you should use it for 2 hours or so. The last reason why students shouldn't have a phone because of how addicting it is to everyone.
That is the reason why students shouldn't have a phone | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
3F20E4B1AA0D | Should students have longers breaks during the school years? i have lestening to all the parents at school saying that students should get more longers breaks during the school year but i am totally desagree because, it is not a good idea having really longers breaks during the entire school year .Some students dont have the ability to learn easily than the others and if we get more longers breaks then we will not have time to teach those students who really needs help in school and it is not that the school is like trying to be mean to the students it is just that we think that if we give more education to the students then they will have a better future in their lifes.
First of all we all know that having breaks sounds reallly fun but sometimes we need to think about our future, in specific when we want to live a good life or have a better future and i think having breaks all the time it is not that necessary. For example, if someone is going to vacations, breaks and traveling around the world all the time, they probably dont know that is going on in the present or what are the news of the day , they are not being educate but in this case we are talking about the students so i think if students have really logers breaks all the time they are not going to be educate when they grow up , they are not going to do things by them self because they are not going to know how to do something .
second of all, giving breaks to the students all the time its is not good because, they are not going to have a good behavior in their future, some teachers works really hard to teach those students who dosen't have the ability to learn like others and when they going to vacations or breaks , all the hard work that the teachers were giving to the students will be gone because, they will not been focusing in school or they will not being focusing in what they were learning about. Also when students go to vacations or breaks they only think about having a great time with friends or family and i know that their are some others kids or students that sometimes are not like those students who dont really care about their future and i honestly think that if all the students could be educate individually will be a really good idea .
Finally, i think that the parents really need to know how important is to being educate when u are young because , when a person stars growing up everything in your mind change too. As adult i can say that it is hard to learn things when u get older. Sometimes when you get old, you star getting more lazy but when you are young it gets easy because , the only thing you have to do is study and focusing on school so that is why i think being educate is really important for a human and it is not good to be wasting time in longers breaks or vacations when we can waste all that time doing proyects, homework and activitides in school, and if the students have longers breaks then they will forget the knowledge during the breaks .
As a result , i think having longers breaks it not that really necessery for students specially when they are young because, a student dont really need that much time to relaxing or that much time to have a free time doing nothing . Also i can say that a student dont need a really a long break because, when i was in high school the only thing that i needed to be focusing on was in school becuse i wanted to have education, i wanted to have a better life and be a good person in the future. I also think that when you are educate you have more opportunity to get a job. For example , if you are not educate and you want to apply to get a job, the manager it is going to see that you are not educate enough to be working in the place ,so you absolully not going to have a chance to get a job. And i think that is really important for getting a job in whatever place you want to work in, so i really think that the students should not have longers breaks during the school year , that way students will be more polite in school and they will be focussing in learning more things that is going to take them to a better place ,to a better life and to a better future. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
3F2941C11D95 | By extending the school day two hours, students and teachers will have more advantages to learn and to teach.
I agree to follow this model by extending the school day two hours. There are many reasons of why it will be better and will benefit us as students. One of the reasons is that we will have more time in the weekend to review our notes, homework, and things that we need help with. Another reason is that we will be doing the same forty hours of school even if we will have a four-day school week. It also will benefit teachers by increasing their time to review test or projects made by the students.
Most of the time there are things at school that we do not really understand, and a four-day school week will give us more time to study and review these things at home. We the students have the opportunity to go to school and graduate, but also some of us have obligations and responsibilities. For example in my personal life, I have to work after school everyday. And most of the time when I get home, I feel tired and I just go to sleep, I forget if I have homework or not. Therefore this model will give us more time to work and being less worry about going to school five-day week. We can concentrate at school four days and the other day we can work and do homework or projects when we have to.
Also a four-day school week will benefit us because we will be doing the same forty hours. Therefore our grades and education would not change. And I do not think that is necessary to study all five days, it is not about how many days do you go to school, is about how you take advantages from it. For example if you go to school everyday just to talk with your teammates, is like you were absent. For that reason I agree to extend the two hours of school, that way we can concentrate four days and having in mind that we will have three days to study or to keep learning at home.
Another reason of why I agree to extend the school day, is because it will benefit the teachers also. It will benefit the teachers by giving them more time to review and grade homework, projects or test that students took in the class. It also will give us the opportunity to spend more time with our families and people around us. For example, I work with my father in construction, and I almost do not see him all day until the night. This four-day school week, will give me the opportunity to spend a entire day working with him without being worry about the school for a day. And just like me, there is a lot of people who will be benefit from it.
Finally, school should be extended two hours day, that way we can have more time in the weekend to prepare for tests, teachers will have more time to grade them. And we will have three days to spend with our families. | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
3F30E7FDE6F1 | Have you ever given someone an advice? Or has someone ever asked you for an advice? Well now days people sometimes talk to more than one person, to seek multiple opinions on their problems. However seeking multiple opinions it is good idea because with those multiple advises can help you make better decision you may know what to do when time arrives, they can also help you solve problems easily, and the people you went for an advice can help you not to do the same mistake they did.
Talking to more than one person so that you seek multiple opinions, can help some one make a better choice in many ways like knowing what to do when the time arrives. This can be useful because you know to do something in the right place and at the right time, and also this can help you in your life to do something in the right place and at the right time as scienctist Albert Enstein said.
Second, talking to more than one person in order to get good and multiple opinions, can help you make better choice for example they can also help you solve problems easily without stressing yourself, and that can be the main point because with the many opinions it boost your self-confidence and then you can solve your problems better and easily.
Third, again talking to more than one person in order to get multiple opinions, can help you make good decision by not making the same mistake the people that gave you advice did. This can help you by knowing their mistake and not doing them.
In conclusion,
people sometimes talk to more than one person, to seek multiple opinions on their problems. However seeking multiple opinions it is good because with those multiple advises can help you make better decision you may know what to do when time arrives, they can also help you solve problems easily, and the people you went for an advice can help you not to do the same mistake. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
3F3DC123EDF6 | Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble, or do they unfairly interfere in young people lives? Some people believe that debating the adoption of a 10 P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight curfew for teenagers while others believe that is not a good idea to debating the adoption of a 10 P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers. This is important because is not a good idea to debating the adoption of a 10 P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight weekday curfew for teenagers. This is going to help teenagers how to be responsible, get a job, and learn how to take care themselves.
First, teenagers have to learn how to be responsible because some teenagers do not grow up with their parents. For example, they have to go a school in the morning, and they have to go a work at night. This is important for teenagers who work and study hard. That is why is not fair that the city council debating the adoption of 10 P.M. for teenagers because they do not have some else to help them to pay bills or other stuff.
Additionally, most of the teenagers have a job at night because they want to go to the university. For example, teenagers only have time to have a job at night, and they help their parents to save money. Their is a lot of teenagers who really want to go to the university and universities are expensive. This is a big effort for teenagers that they really want to reach their own goal, and their parents do not have a lot of money to cover the bill of the university
However, not everyone agree with this position. Some people claim that debating the adoption of a 10 P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers. Nevertheless, teenagers are going to learn how to take care themselves because their are not going to live with their family all the time. For example, some teenagers take the decision to move to other state or country. And it is a good idea for them how to take care themselves without parents.
Based on this argument, one must conclude that is not a good idea to debating the adoption of a 10 P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight curfew for teenagers because this have to be an option for teenager to do what they really want to do. Some teenagers are responsible for they own self, this help them to be prepare for their own future, and be a teenager who can protect their self in a earlier age. This is gonna help teenager to maturity. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 |
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the conclusin my cosun coming the sementerio make flower for you mom my mom coming the united state he said my littler cousin said you death no quiero que nadie se muera como ella quiero que todos esten con migo becuase my mom death . | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1.5 | 2 |
3F4D8262235A | I think students would benefit doing school at home many kids maybe going through problems at home and could just be tired or maybe just annoyed of to much problems. Students working from home is good for kids that could be getting buliud either they speack up but dont see a change, having problems with adults here at school that don't really help much but just bring the student down, or maybe just being an anti socicl person. Online school is something really seroius to look into if tyour dealing with problems at home having so much stress in you and cant deal with more stress of school, or you just simply need to work to help out your family it could be a chance they need money but cant get enough to get bills paid and need help in paying them,maybe you dont really have time in showing up to school. I think online school is a good choice for many students that could have problems at school and not seeing a change. Students wouldn't have to get up so early in the morning having to look presentable or anything just having to have a good schealue that works good for both work and school. Both online work or video conferencing are good for kids that have their ways in learning like as in having videos chat with a teachers. Students can be fast learners just by reading insturstions they got it memorized and having the work ready in less than an hour. Others students are more to a visiual learners that have to see work getting it explaned to many time for them to undersatnd the work some students are slower than others. Online school would be the best choice to many students that just have it the ruff way and not easy. Other reason is because many kids get sick really easliy and its better to keep those kids away from others in getting sick. Online schools can really make a big change in kids that are just not ready have more stress in them and wouldnt have to deal with more problems with parents or maybe getting bullied. Oline schools would make a big change in those kids lifes in a positive way. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
3F645E7A81DB | "To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else a gretest accomplishment"
I agree with Emerson's statement it's important be yourself always and think about your future, depends own decisions what do you wanna be also we can to achieve our goals. In the world we have so many opportunities, everyone can do it, all can try no matter how many times you make a mistake, no matter what the people say about you. Just believe in yourself and be happy.
even if you dont feel sure about something like one day when i was working i was not sure about what i was supposted say like i was scared cause was my firts day at work and that what the costumer gonna say.
Sometimes i dont want talk cause its little bit hard speak another languaje but when they say you will be fine or they say positive things about me, that's means that always you find people that they support you and they give to encourage and different ways. Many times it's important take off the negative mind and be positive.
at school see kids that also have the same and also i remember when i start my firts days of the school was like that but if you be yourself and try to make you goals you can do more than you think. its better to focus in your own future than in someone else's bunisses, last saturday my friend's team won the final and i was so proud about the,
its important believe and try to support other people because they can make great accomplishment also.
finally, the best way to try got greatest accomplishment is be yourself and believe in yourself. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
3F722ACC887E | To conserve energy and resources some businesses have adopted a four day work week and consisting of 10 hours per day, everybody are different everybody do they want so can be good or can be bad.
I'm disagree because for me is the same thing that the businesses adopted a four day week that consist of 10 hours of work, because if they work the 6 day's at week doing 8 hours at the end is the 40 hours at week same with if you work 10 per day in four day's at the week.
When the businesses make the people work the 10 hours per day in four day's week the people get more tired and most people do workout in the morning or in the night and i think that if you work 10 hours per day you dont going to do your workout because your going to be tired and the only thing your going to do is sleeping
If the school follow the same model and extending school day two hours for some student is going to be good but at the time no because if the students come to school for four day and add two more hours they will be in home doing nothing and they can play all day in video games, and that cant get more energy, for other student can be bad because some students work after school and that can affect them.
As you read sometimes you get benefits and sometimes disadvantages one of the best benefits can be that you conserve energy and one of the best disadvantages is that your body can be tired, but at the end is going to be the same thing that businesses want four day week that consist of 10 hours per day or that businesses work 8 hours per day and there be the 40 hours at week referent with school they dont have to follow the businesses because students need to learn. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
3F80F96A6F5A | Some people believe in praising a students to help them build self-esteems. They believe that students must be self-confident in order to learn. On the other hand, other people believe that self-esteems comes from achievements. I think that self-esteems comes from both learning and achievements, but it mostly come by telling a students that there work is good for these three reasons. One reason is that people are giving good complement to student for their work that the student have done, sometime people would want to have the stuff the students would create, and last people would say nice thing to students so the other people wouldn't hurt their feeling.
The first reason is that people are complementing to student for their work that student have created. Some people would say nice things and walk away or they would stay and talk about what the student made and the meaning behind what the student created. I remember when I was a little kid, I built a toy car and my mom like it. So when i'm older, I want to create my own car and show my mom how good I am at building cars. My mom was the one who has help me boost my self-esteem. That is what teachers should do to student if they want to boost their self-esteem.
Another reason, is that sometime people would want to have the stuff that students would create. For example, say if you made a painting and someone on the street saw it. Then the person would want to buy it and you sold it to him. That would make you want to create even more painting and sell it. It would make the student think that the person like your painting that you created and that boost you into selling more painting. The more stuff you create. The more people would want to buy it. That is an another reason to help boost students self-esteems.
The last reason is that people would say nice thing so they won't hurt your feeling, But they do that because there jealous that they can't do the stuff that you can create. There are some people in the world that just give you hateful comment about your creation. And that doesn't mean that you can stop doing what you want to do. It doesn't matter because there are other people that are gonna like the thing that you create. There are people out there that maybe want to buy your stuff probably even a famous person would want to buy it.
In conclusion, people would try to believe in students so they could have self-esteem. But there also people out in the word that maybe don't like the stuff that you create. But there also people that do like the stuff that you create. That is why people are giving good complement to student for their work that the student have done, they sometime would want to have the stuff that students would create, and last people would say nice thing to students so the other people wouldn't hurt their feeling. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
3F908BB271AA | Nothing comes throught untill you work for it!
I feel comfortable or confident about this quote because once you already mastered something you keep feelling as if you are still missing something or maybe you think what you already have is not enougth so, you decide to start working on a different thing or proyect just to keep making grow what you have.
In this life nothing comes easy, you have to work harder to build something or what you have in mind, once you build what you got in your mind you still probbably not going to stop trying to build more than what you already have, because you already tasted hows it feel having much, so you keep going and build more and more only because you don't feel that what you got is enougth or you liked how is feel having much.
"Dreams never come throught, untill you make them happen." That can also describe or talk a little bit, about the quote of Ralph, because when you have a dream and that dream get into the reallity you are going to think like Ralph, you going to feel that is not enought for you and you are going to start trying to do something else to make grow what you got, sometimes this can be taken as a selfishness because you want more than you have but, if someone doesn't feel goog with what they have they can keep working to make it grow.
In my oppinion I am agree with the thoughts of Ralps because if I have something and if exist other way to make grow what I have, I would definitelly going to work for it so I can make it happen; hard workers always receive their rewards in the futere. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
3FC8F9902F11 | I agree that technology had a positive effects on people lives because is help them figure out some stuff or distract them by listening to musics, watch a movies,or play games.
Technology is something that people use some much for example to find a jobs,
to business, shopping, or teaching. Some people use to make music or movies like all those actors and actress they used technology. Is so popular that technology is everywhere for anybody went to used. It a nature is help other people too, it very differentiate when we used for different language for example with can used to translate any words in different language
We used technology to call people ,friend, family, or parents some people may say that it can make your lazy when I meant is that we can't even walk or to nothing but is not true we have machine that work with technology sport and it helps us find stuff or we can even have a jobs by technology and we can stay home every time. And it helps students for written a essay or taking text,quiz, or exam. School is a place that we can find technology people and many stuff relent to it .
People used technology because it was create to make stuff a little simple for an example we used technology right now for taking ours SOL why don't used paper for that so that why technology make stuff more easily for people . On another hand technology is very expensive one if we need to buy.
A cell phone is a part of technology is very popularly because it help us communicate with people we don't need to go the the house we just call or test message and we good to go.
In the environment people used technology so much that we can even account the number what I am try to say it technology is every benefit for young and adults people to used. We pretty much used designed jewelry, house. Everything we do is technology. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
3FD4C280E4EF | Summer
Prompt
Most students enjoy summer vacation, but some educators feel that the summer break is too long and that students do not retain information easily when they return in the fall. I think summer should not change because it would have a negative impact on students; such as, not enjoy summer time.
Some people argue that there should be a year-round schools, where there would be a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. Some student said that break during school year sounds good; however, they would enjoy better summer time because of the weather. In personals experiences, I enjoyed summer break better then winter break because in summer I was available to play outside; in the other hand, during winter break I wasn't available to play outside because the weather was too cold.
Student also think that they enjoy summer break better because they don't have the pressure of homework, and after school activities. I think summer break is long enough for those who need extra help, so they can attend to summer school. I enjoy summer break because it is also the part of the year where days are longer enough to expend time with friends. I also enjoy summer break because it is the only par of the year where I can spent time fishing, which is what I enjoy the most.
I think having certain of breaks during school year will make difficult for student to concentrate. Think you don't understand a topic in algebra; you get some help, and finally you start to understand it, but you realize that fall break is next week, and it will interrupt with your learning. I think thats a consequence of having certain of breaks during school year.
There should not be a short summer break because it is the only time people spend the most time with their family. I think that's the most important think of summer; spend time with the family. It is also the part of the year that people get off their stress. People is adapted with the school program and they will not like the idea of having it change. I think the society is adapted with the system that we have currently. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
3FE7AF072783 | Soccer has always been the most important priority in my life. It is not just a game but a whole different world for of its own. In the other hand, education has been also an essential part of my life. Living in a world full of competitions and challenges needs so much of a person's will power and hard work then just having an outstanding goal and not working on it. Business is something devastatingly related to education and hard work but sports are also a type of business that most of the people do not observe it.
Lionel Messi, the greatest soccer player of all time, is the person I mostly want to meet. I have always been fascinated by your skills and finishing in the field. Every teenager changes their goals for their future at least 5 times, but I have had this dream of being the greatest soccer player in the world since my first year in middle school. I can assure Messi that if he takes me to the Barcelona's beautiful stadium, I will do my best to show him how serious I am to be the greatest soccer player. I believe Messi can select me to show the true feeling of being the greatest soccer player and to let me see the most beautiful stadium of their team because soccer has always been the top priority in my life, it is not just a game but a whole different, beautiful, and unbelievable world for me, and soccer is the only game that I can play all my life without any regrets.
It was the first year in middle school that I actually understood what soccer is. Since then I have been in love with soccer. I lived in Generic_City and my parents are Asian; that is why I have had quiet some obstacles during my life because any Asian parent wants their child to study, study, and study. I was always against those who thought that sports cannot be a true career and business. I never gave up; although my parents told me hundreds of times to work on your education and study hard, but I kept it all balanced and I didn't let my parents know that soccer was always the top priority in my life. Soccer teams and opportunities in our school is important, like working hard and getting into JV was really important for me, and I will surely work hard and do my best next year to get into varsity too.
Some people believe that soccer is just a simple game which anyone can play when they have free time and have nothing to do. I totally disagree with that concept. I believe soccer has its own world. It can be a professional career and it can be a brilliant way to earn money for those who works to earn money. The first day I watched Messi's video on YouTube had me surprised that how can a person be so magnificent at controlling, dribbling, passing, and shooting. He was just perfect. There are hundreds of soccer players out there who have unbelievable and outstanding skills like: Cristiano Ronaldo, Paul Pogba, Neymar Jr, Mbappe and so many more.
Did it ever happen to you that you have played for hours and hours and your mom calls you to come home saying, "it is enough", but you feel like you had just started playing 10 minutes ago and how did the time went so fast? It is always the feeling I have when I play soccer. I never get tired mentally while I do get tired physically after 3 hours of playing. I want to play more and more and that feeling never gets old. That feeling shows how much you love the action you are doing. Money is one of the most crucial thing to survive in this world but if I had to choose between never ending amount of money in my bank account and freedom to play as much soccer as possible, I would gladly choose soccer.
Most of the time my imaginations are so nice that I just do not want to move and ruin it because all I imagine is me playing in professional soccer game and millions of people being my fan and I have all the skills that I wanted to have. Imaginations are nice but in real world we have to work real hard and with passion to achieve our goals. Although most of the people believe that soccer must stay as a game that anybody can play in their free time, but I completely disagree because soccer is a complete professional career for anyone who wants to play. Anybody in this world can be the greatest soccer player but the key is to work hard and challenge yourself every single day to become better. No one is perfect that is why we have to practice all the time to be better person in our lives. | 4 | 4.5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4.5 |
4000ADB040FE | Introduction: technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. people can check out books, shop and play game without speaking to another person.
Reason:
I think the people cant do nothing without help because is necessary to have help from others. people who dont us technology I think is negative because without technology the people can do nothing for example they cant to have contact with other or for a jobs. I believe the people who use the technology can to be positive because can do anything, how have a job or the technology can go to be negative to because somebody use the technology, how in her house, for example; the child can cause a problem with they eyes, or another thing more.
I think people cant do nothing without help of other, because is necessary to have help from others, or help of the technology. The technology can help at the people for a job, but the technology can effect to the family to, for example; at the child, to use technology is good, but I think we can put a limit for her effect to have. The effect have the technology with the family is can cause a problem with other or for a job, because someone use the technology.
I think without technology people dont dont can to have a job because somebody use technology for therby the technology, so I can to be positive, Howeve the technology have effect at the people and help at the people with a job, and for to have contanct to with another people. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
4002D91C6B6C | In some school districts they offer programs which allows students to graduate in three years rather than four years as normal. Which means students would be a year early for college and a year early in the workforce. Allowing high school students to graduate in three year is not a good idea because they won't be able to attend more elective classes in school, they will start stressing about a lot of school work, and they won't be able to enjoy their four years of high school with friends.
Trying to graduate early is not the best because it could be so stressful, focusing on getting good grades and passing in a short amount of time. As the University of Virginia did an experiment on teenagers, that which they should not be putting too much stress on themselves. As some students like to work and want to succeed in the future so they think it's faster and easier to graduate early. You should be in high school for four years as traditionally and not trying to rush through your high school years and graduate.
You should enjoy your years of high school, as normal sometimes we have stress because it's too much of work, but four years you get to have more fun classes. As three years you won't be able to be in elective classes, which it could lead to less opportunities. During summer you have to do school work so you can be able to graduate and also after school you have to do work. Some might think that four years of high school is too much but it's really not that much, you really won't feel when the years pass by.
In the other hand some students think that being in high school for only three years it's a good idea because they think that it's easier to get away from people and dramas, faster to start working, going to college faster, and they are rushing through life. They want to succeed but the faster way and they don't want to be in high school because they think it's too long and it takes a lot of years through their lives.
As in some school districts they offer programs which allows students to graduate in three years rather than four years as normal. Allowing high school students to graduate in three years in not a good idea because it's too much stress about school work, they won't be able to be in elective classes, and they won't enjoy their high school years with friends. The school district should not offer this program because students should be in high school as normal. | 3 | 2.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
400E5AA27067 | It has been said that first impressions are impossible to change, I disagree with this stiemant. The reason
I disagree with this is because first of all first impressions are a snap chat of who you are.
Second of all the more time you spend with a person the more likely that they will change there mind of who they thought you were from the first time they meet you. At this time of peride people are starting to get the idea that first impressions are't always correct, so they are willing to give a second chance.
First impressions are a snap chat of who you are, for me personally first impressions are always heard because based on the few second I spend talking to a person they will always think of me as that person specie if am never going to see them aging. Job interview is a big one because based on how you present your self at that moment of time will determan whether you get the job or not, and you might get nerves and act a sertine way that will not help you get the job even tho that's not who you really are. For example like a year ago I had soccer tryouts for a big soccer team the whole month I have been training and feeling good, but when the day came I was nerves because I never had the chance to tryout for a big team like that. I ended up not getting into the soccer team because the whole time I was worried what time the coaches will think of me and they were not impress with me the first, but this year I made it into the team the coaches liked me because I was much comfortable on the ball this time then last time and the coaches changed there mind about me . What am trying to say is first impressions are not impossible to change.
The more time you spend with a person the more likely that they will change there mind, Sometimes you will like person based on for the few seconds you seen them or talk to them, but then when you spend more time with me you come to find out that they are not as much as inserting as they seam. For example I had this kid in my class he was funny and seem inserting. but the more I got to now him i found out that he is funny when they are a group of people around him but when you talk to him one on one he is like a whole different person. This just goes to show that it is not just bad first impressions that are not impossible it's the good one's too.
People are starting to get the idea that first impressions are't always correct, Job are starting to understand that first impressions are not always correct for that reason they are willing to have two job interviews with. Sometimes it might be first on the phone than in person or just have two job interviews in person and I think that is a good idea spicily for people like me who are not good at first impressions.
inconclution,
Some people might say first impressions are impossible to change and I can see where they are coming from, but all am trying to say is the more time you spend with a person you are going to have more understanding of who they are. The only time I would say first impressions are almost impossible to change is if you are going to see the person just for one time and never see them aging. If that is the case than what ever the image of you they have that will just be it but be sides that first impressions are not impossible to change. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
4025349AD977 | By having a good attitude you can get out of problems and be a success in life. To start off, you can get out of problems by having a good attitude. This evidence shows that, you can get out of problems by having a good attitude, Like when I broke a plate and my mom was mad at me, and I kept a good attitude, so she was not mad at me anymore. This detail suggest that, you should always have a keep a goood attitude beacuse you keep a good attitude problems aren't going to be problems. clearly, having a good attitude can help you and others if you want. additionally having a good attitude can help you become a succes in life. For example, when going to a job interview and you keep a good attitude the whole time that might be a reason for the company to hire you. This detail suggest that, you should always keep a good attitude because more opportunities will come to your way. To conclude, keeping a good attitude can help you make friends, get a job, and more opportunities will open for you. By having a good attitude life will treat you better. keeping a good attitude can save you from some problems and give youy better opportunities. You should considered keeping a good attitude because is the best for you. life will be yours by having a good attitude. From what problems can a good attitude save you from. | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
402843726F3B | One day Thomas Jefferson said "It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing.
Although Thomas Jefferson said "that it is wonderful how much may be done if we are alwayas doing". Some people think that it is imposible that we are always doing something because we need time to our family and we need a break too. Actually many people think that if we are always doing simething we can accomplish a lot things. we can gain more experience. However other people say that sometimes we have to stay inactive to do not get stress or to do not get crazy. If we are always doing something we can work on new staffs and learn more. stay inactive can help to your body to relax for a while.
In conclusion However some people say that stay inactive is good because you have time for you and your family. Actually always doing something is better because because you can try new things and gain experience. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
402CAB074577 | In some districts, teenagers that are in high school take courses in the evenings or during the summer in order to graduate in three years instead of four years.
Students who take the three years program do not have elective courses and have to study harder than others.
I think it is an unconscious idea to graduate in only three years instead of four. In fact, I strongly disagree with the purpose of that program.
To begin with, students who decide to study during evenings and summer will be constantly overwhelmed.
Because the academic level is more intense in colleges, they will tend to quit when they enter college and start working without their college degrees.
For example, one of my friend graduated last year after only 3 years of high school.
He used to stay late at school because of his extra courses.
Last summer, he started college.
After only two months, he started giving up by going to work at some restaurants rather than going to his classes.
I had a conversation with him last month.
He assumed that he stressed himself over the past three years and now he can not do it anymore.
Based on his experience, I realized that grinding to graduate in only three years will help some students finish high school earlier than the others, but it will not take them further.
In addition, students who decide to graduate with the program of three years and go to college or work usually lose track of their social life.
Because they dedicate their entire time on studying, they do not have time to enjoy their life and have good memories with people around them.
For instance, a few years ago, my older sister who decided to graduate with the program of three years in high school lost track of her social life.
She used to go to school every single day including the week-ends.
She was combining that tough program with her part-time job.
I could literally stay at least three days without seeing her despite the fact that we lived in the same house.
When she finally graduated and went to an out state college, it was worse because she used to answer my messages every month instead of every day.
We lost any type of affinity that we had because of that program.
It was also hurtful to see that at the end it was not worth it because she gave up after two years of college.
Obviously, the program of graduation in three years has a negative effect.
However, some say that it is an advantage that people should consider because it will help them start their career one year earlier.
I respect their point of view but I believe that the traditional graduation after 4 years is essential because students will have time to be mature before getting into the most challenging part of life.
Therefore, I still strongly disagree with that idea of graduating in three years.
In conclusion, the traditional graduation after four years in high school is crucial and we should stick to it.
Because high school is where teenagers grow in their social life, no one should break the pattern by trying to graduate earlier.
In order to protect teenagers'social life and help them grow adequately during their adolescence, I urge the authorities to outlaw the program that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of four. | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 5 | 4 | 4 |
4032ED0063E4 | Online schools is a good idea but not for everybody, some people do good being home schooled but some just cant do it. Online class are not easy not anybody can pass thats why they not meant for everyone. Being home schooled is nothing like regular school you don't have to wake early, you get to choose what time you do your work.
Not having to wake up early everyday is nice but knowing you have to get something done right after you start is not fun and specially if you not getting the help you need not being able to ask the questions you have makes it a lot harder,
you also have to try and do your best because if you fail you can't talk to your teacher about helping you make it up and helping you pass it like regular school.
If you are home schooled you missing out the fun in regular schools not talking about class meaning all the fights, all the fire drills, all the dances and friends sometimes having trouble in regular school i always tell myself i need to drop out or take online classes but home schooled is not just for everybody and probably at least 60% of home schooled students either don't finish or go back to regular school.
ragular school is better then home schooled or online you have better chance of passing if you work with other people and get help and give help because in life we get what we give. trying your best at anything is all that matters not giving up keep trying one day you going to make it . | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
40331978F344 | When creating movies, games, or any other art, its a good idea to get advice from others instead of just one person, first off, its a good strategy to make your work more diverse, makes it more appealing, and more opinions is better than one.
First off, when creating art, its important to get advice from others, but the more you get, the more clearer and more diverse it becomes. They can tell you if you messed up and why. They can give you ideas to make characters to fill in the gaps, They can also help expand the story.
Second off, If you want to seem as appealing as possible, you should ask people for what they want and work with them. If you want your work to succeed you must work with others so you both get what you want. appealing to peoples opinions also helps your work by showing that you care. everyone has different opinions, one person might like one thing while everyone else hates it. appeal to the bigger opinion.
Lastly, the more opinions you have, the more messages your art will have. One person isnt enough to give enough opinions. instead of just one opinion, you should have multible opinions so you can give your art a message. listening and getting feedback from multible sources will help you and your art in conclusion, three good reasons why to get multible opinions is; making it more appealing to a general audience, fill in gaps, and get feedback. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
40467A05CC2A | Career is the most important in people life. if people do not have a career, then will become a unemployed vagrant. People do not have work, so they do not have money. As the saying goes,if you do not have money then you can not do anything. therefore career is most important.
At a young age,students thought is more brisk. student will thing about the career that they will do in the future. At that time people have a illusion,visualize a bright future, have a expect on the career in the future. At this time, if the teacher gave student guide to selected towards a specific carreer. students will fiem and unshakable their thought. they will do the best one can to achieve the goals. Student will bring pressure on thierself. if do not have pressure,then do not have improve. In the high school, should provide the courses of select to guide them towards a specific career. For the reason: first ,by do this can develop good habits on the student, in the school. Second, student not only can study hard but also can get skills. Third students will be good at their class that they choose to be a career. In the school,develop the courses of specific career has more advantage. For example,student graduate on the university, they are not face with on the obtain employment. I think it is a good idea for student to gain the skill for the career.
On the another way, develop the career courses early, it will give student more pressure, because in this time student are still immature. if gave they more pressure,can not make students students but can make students fell repugnant. This way just run counter to student's intentions. Not all students need pressure to improve thierself. But some students do not need pressure. They do not engage in honest work and have neither learning nor skill in the school. sometimes students are not sure that they work on something in the future. This career class may gave this student more pressure,they should choose a career that they want to be in the future. Therefore,this ways just make students fell disturbed.
In short,the courses of study in high school are selected to guide to a specific career it is a good idea for students to commit to a career. Career is important. students should plan it early. In order to, can be batter able to work in the future. So can not face with obtain employment. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
405CEC6E7F5D | Do you ever wonder if we should choose our own character by trait or let our characters be formed by influences beyond our control? I will argue that, we should choose our own characters by traits and not by influence. I think that we should choose our own traits, because we will be choosing our own fate or destiny, we shouldn't let other people decide our path and make a good character of yourself
Your character is your fate or destiny to choose on what ever path you should take. We all know that we should go to our own path to life and choosing what is best for our lives. You are the only one that can take control of your character and nobody should have the ability to take it from you. The fate or destiny is at the power of you hands and you are the only one to decide on what trait you will have on your character.
Don't let people decide on what path you should take and live with it. We should choose our own path to life and enjoy it. Many people know that we should be yourself and nobody else, we should be the character we choose to be. We all have our own character, we shouldn't influence people because you think that it is better for them. We shouldn't do that to other people because it was great for you, let them decide on what path they're going to take. We should only give them advice, but don't decide for them.
Make a good character of yourself, don't let anyone make you feel down. We are the ones to decide our own path of happiness. We can be many things if you believe that you can achieve it. If you think that this is a better way to a good character, then take it, endure it, make it worth it.
In conclusion, we should choose our own character traits. You might say, "I think people's influences can be good for our character." you are not wrong, but not all influence can be good for your character. It is what John Lubbock said,
"Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."
It means that you are the one to take control of your own character. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
40788D50B102 | I agree because when you tell someone the truth you have to be honest to eachother the whole time and to let the other person know what they are feeling inside of them that they do not want hear from the other person of what they just said to them. Another reason why you shoud be honest with eachother is to tell them the truth what's going on,
because if you don't wanted to keep it inside for so long you should tell your trusted friend or tell an adult that you trust the most and tell them what's going on. After you are finish talking to your trusted friend or to an adult the best thing to do is tell your friend that you have been not telling the truth to them and tell them the truth what's going on. After you finish telling the truth the other person that you trusted on for so long they will never forgive you of what you just did. And that's why it's important to let the other person know the truth. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
408A7D3D2EEC | Imagine seeking advice from multiple people and choosing the best decision that suits you. How does that make you feel? Asking for advice can be defined as someone who asks help from multiple people and makes the right decision. Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better decision because they can see which advice is better, more experienced, and see the persons point of view.
Asking advice from multiple people can help you see which advice is better. Let's say this person needs to ask their teacher what book to choose. But, they also asked their friends the same question. They can now see which decision is better for them. It also depends if the advice is decent or not because if the advice is horrible, then that decision you make can affect the outcome.
Another way asking advice from multiple people can help you is they might have more experience. For instance, they need help picking a collage that suits their interest. When they ask their parents for advice, the parent might pick a different collage that could be better. But, that's because they have more experience and can see whats best for them. Grandparents especially, went through a lot when they were kids. So, if you need advice, ask adults who are more experienced in life!
Lastly, asking advice from multiple people can help you see the persons point of view. For example, they can see what other people have to say and can help you make that better decision. Let's say they need help painting their house but dont know what paint color to choose. But, when they ask someone for advice, they can see what the other person has to say and make the right decision based on that advice.
In conclusion, asking advice can help someone make a better decision because they can see the persons point of view, more experienced, and they can see which advice is better. Asking for advice is important because they can see which advice is better and can see other peoples perspective. This affects you because its on you to ask for advice and make the right decision! | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
40AA29D2F32B | Dear, Manager
I would like to visit your companies to explore if the crear is good encore for me.
If I like what is available for to do.
I want to know more and see how it needs to be done.
The companies is big that you can have a lot of employees to do work faster. The students can see how it feels to work or to be in a companies. You can make the student know how it feels to be a manager and to work up to 7 hours. You can tell them how long they will work and when there lunch at when it is time. You can show how it is all organized and where everything is at to get anything fast when it is need for the product to be done in order to sell it to the people.
People will wonder how the companies work and it could be tiring if at night.
How big can a companies even be are there any limit to the area going to be used for the company.
What is the cost for a companies for it to be build. Dose a companies have to be remolded and cert en times like every 5 to 6 years. Where can a companies be build at in urban places are rural places. When do people come to bring stuff to make something to sell it because they will need stuff to make the thing to sell it and get money to invest to the company so it will grow. What is the cost for all the meltarsils of the company to be able to run correctly so not a lot of money is put in to it and get broke and struggle with money that is needed.
Going to a company can help others if they want to work in a company.
Some people want to see how it feels to work or be a manager and time to put in to work.
What will a company do if they run out of money and supplies dose the company need to be sold.
Will a company pay lots of money for the bills from most of the elctristy. will a company get in to trouble if the supplies they make is not good? All companies are big but some are bigger than other because they sell there stuff faster and get more money from it and they get better stuff to use and make there company even bigger with better stuff to make the supplies and surly more employees. every company makes there own stuff they can't tack other people supplies and take the credit of the managers.
What wll happen if on company steals an idea form someone will they get a fine of a lot of money are they will go to jail for stealing the idea of the other company.
Will all companies have work all the time.
Do companies work on festive days like Christmas or new years.
Will employees get some days to have vacation.
After all the work is done all the machine get turned off if in a festive day.
When a employ gets sick do they have to call the manager to say they can't go or they just don't go and wait if the manager calls him because he wasen't there.
If they get sick during work will replacement person come to replace them for the days or in tell they feel better.
When there is a fire will they get money from all the thing they got destroyed or that don't work any more.
It will be nice if students can go to the companies and see how it is like to be a manger or employ or even a expert so the can control the money so they don't get broke in the future of the company.
Know everyone will know how it feels to be a manager or employ of any job that needs the manager or employs.
All of the these will help and see how it feel to control the company and how they do it and when get sick while in work.
Sincerely,
Generic_Name | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
40AF66A621E0 | Example :
Some student in High School try to the best in class and I thing is a good idea to try to pass the notes with a good grade does care the short you are the thing is try to learning and thing in all the thing you ready know ,I believe in opportunity in High School ,
Thesis , One topic that is frequently debated is whether or no students should commit acareer young age .Some people think that student commenting to a career at young age is beneficial , they feel that is an advange for them , I believe than students should commute at a younger age because they can explore more about the career , Find out if a career it's a good choice , and they can explore other options , at Reason : some student take a regulate cases and if fine because you try to the best to and learning very fast and if you small does care doe and that's help for you life
Second Reason :
Some Student take all the class with a good credit and they pass a another good class because they ready pass them you good , because you are sect to go in universities ,
Three Reason : if you take a good position you good because you ready know all the class so them you are prepare in your life because you ready take hart time in High School ,
Conclusion : Some Student take hart class and them they practice and learning Avery single days in ,High School they are Smart Student and they try to learning because they wanna prepare in life , If you prepare you are in good position because you ready graduate in High School and Universities to , Some Student take regulate class so is good because you ready prepare in you High School time you learning in all the class so if you grad due of Universes you good because you can find a very good jobs Them you happy because you make a hart time in High School bout you make you future
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I believe in some Societies , because they try to the best in the community in is fine because all boys can go to the High School and learning hart and pass a good time to
Their courses in high school are select to guide a specific career
I believe in all the class and all my grade
I believe and opportunities so is true because if you are smart boys you are select in high school | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
40C0290A53F1 | American jazz legend Duke Ellington said "A problem is achance for you to do you best." The meaning of this is when you have a. Problem you have a chance to fix it before anything get even worse. I disagree with Duke Ellington because sometimes you can't always. Fix your problems, you might not be able to resolve the problem you have and. If you try to do your best with the problem and it doen't work out you are going to make the problem even worse than it was before.
Theres a problem with your sink and you don't know how to fix. It so what do you do you call a plumer to fix your sink pipes the plumer goes away to do another job and .Your sink starts to spit out water again you try to fix it because you where watching the plumer. Do it the first you try to fix it and the water leak gets worse and starts to flood your house so now you. Have to call the plumer again and pay again also you could havea called him before it started leaking again he could have walked you threw it.
Some kids have pets and when those pets pass away and there. Parents try to replace the pet with another pet it will be hard for the kid he might not eat,sleep or even talk for along time. when my dog lucky died it was hard for me and my brother we barly ate or talked my dad. Tried to get other dog be me and my brother both knew it wasn't going to be the same.
When your in school and you a kid sad and you ask him "whats worng." And he doen't say anything back and you start talking about coming over after school because. You have to do project with this student and you say" ask your dad if I can come over"
then the kid starts to cry because his dad passed. Away in a car accident last night then he tells you his dad died last night you made him worse than he was 20 minutes ago just from saying one simple thing.
So american jazz legend Duke Elllington i disagree with that becasue you can make a lot of thing way worse than it ways from doing one think like trying to fix the sink, trying to replace a passed away pet and trying to make someone feel happy when you tried to make them feel happy. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
40DB9B4FC90A | Our good behavior is something the motivate us as a way of thinking or, feeling as one on self to be someone important in our life. Because, it described us by having a good conduct, a positive personality, and a attitude. This is something the help us to have a good success in life. Because if we want to do something in our life we always need to be positive.
My first reason is having a good conduct it help us to be a better person, every where we go. Because, is going to be useful
For example: If the students go to the school every day; they have to behave with the teachers. They need to be respectful with them. We must do everything that they say because, we are smarter people to understand what is good and bad for us.
My second reason is a positive personality is also important. It help us to be more successful. For example: If we are taking a test; we always need to be positive instead of being negative or, if we have bad grades we can asked the teacher to help us. We must do our home works, and extra works so we can improved our grades.
My third reason is a good attitude is also important because it described who we are. For example: I helped my friend friend to find a new job were I work. So, she got a interview for the job. I told her to have a good attitude so they will might accept her were I work. I think is important to help others.
We always need to have a good attitude so we can be someone in our life. Because, we are smarter people, and we know what is important for us. Also is going to help us to be successful in life. We most be positive and do what is important to us. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
40DD3FF566D8 | How many times you try to give up, how many times you wake up, there is a lot of difficult things in the life. While many are discouraging by going into failure to failure but never give up, stay happy keep working hard and you'll find success. I'm firmly agree to Churchill words, no matter what, you have to keep the enthusiasm and keep working hard to get success. There is a lot of difficult parts in the life for example I was a clearly example of this because I went to failure to get success. When I was in 10 grade I take for the first time the Geometry Test, I was so nervous because I was going to take one of most difficult exams that I have never take it and yes I fail and then I take it 3 more times and I fail again. After 3 times of failure I take some minutes to think about it. And I say what is the best thing that I can do, Well the best way is preparing my self to take the test again. Finally after 4 times I pass it, and this situation give a big lesson never,
never loss the enthusiasm never give up, failure make me learn new things that will help me to improve and be success. One of my reason for this should be that
I have to had the Geometry test to be available to graduate that was the reason that motivate my self to pass the test.
Another difficult part of my life was when I move to this country, it was very painful because I leave all my family in my old country and all my friends that I know from my infancy, but that is not the very difficult part. when I move to this country I never though that the language would be a problem but i was wrong. It's very hard when see someone talking to you but you can't understand, it's feels pretty bad. Then I start to study English to improve my pronunciation and understand better, but like I say before I never give up I keep working and I will find success. My reason for this is that I want to a better future and I know that if I speak two languages I will have a better future.
My conclusion to all this would be that no matter what you have to keep the enthusiasm even if you fail many times keep working hard and you'll find success. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
40E6BC53EC01 | Just imagine you have an important basketball game at your school. Since you have three hours to get to the school, you decided to go watch a movie with some friends. When the movie finished you realize is already late, and that you need to go home to get the basketball uniform and your water. Ten blocks away your house you realize that the traffic is getting for ever, you feel like is never going to end,
that the minutes passed so slowly, really nervous, and sweaty. When you get home and check the clock you see you have just twenty minutes to get ready and go to school, your mom is screaming at you really angry because she is always telling me to be responsible. You arrived your team is already playing without you. Since you get there late Generic_Name tells, "You are not going to play today, because you are not responsible." I think a good lesson I can teach to the kids is responsibility at home, school projects, and sports.
First, responsibility at home is really important because is were we live, and when you are responsible you show respect to your parents. One day my best friend Generic_Name called me because she wanted to get a coffee and tell me she was really nervous of failing the year because she have not been responsible. I told her, "I am going to ask my mom." When i asked my mom she told me really angry, "Have you fix your room and wash the dishes?" I respond, "I have fixed my room, but I have not washed the dishes." I supposed that she was angry so that was an no. I tell
Generic_Name I cannot go, and she was really sad about it. Later I realized that I was not responsible about doing my duties at home. That is why you need to be responsible of doing your duties at home.
Next, you need to be responsible with school projects because in this way you get better grades. When I was in elementary school I remember I need to do a science project for the science fair. I wanted to get the first place of all the school cause I knew that i will feel really happy of it. I decided to do a wave experiment, but it was really complex and i knew it would take a long time to do it. I collect all the materials and build it, but i did not remember about the poster. The poster need to be really big and with the hypothesis, procedure,
materials, results, and pictures. I did not make my best work in that poster, so I get i ninety percent and third place. I feel really good about the results, but I learn that in order to be better we need to be responsible at school.
Finally, responsibility at sports. I did not know we needed to be responsible when practicing any sport. Just imagine you have the last soccer game of the year. Generic_Name have told you many times the directions of what you need to do all the week before the game, but you have not follow them correctly. One of the directions was eat healthy, but you have been eating pizza all the week. Other direction was drink a lot of water every day, but instead of drinking water you drink soda. The day of the game has came, and you did not get prepared because you did not wanted to be responsible. When you are at the middle of the game you start to feel really dizzy. Generic_Name and the nurse take you out, and tell you why are you so ill. In sports you need to be responsible of your health.
Responsibility is what make us be better. In think responsibility help us have a better place to live. I list three ways we can show we are responsible. To show the importance of it. Ways we can show we are responsible are making duties at home, at school, and practicing any sport. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
410957337087 | Distance learning
In century twenty-first the education in United states and another countries became better that before thanks to technology. Moreover, the technology helps schools to teach their students with a better way. Now, classes are created creative and effective. The schools had been creating different programs such as "Distance learning" to offer a different option to students. This is a program that help students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Therefore, there is a question that every body is making Is the distance learning a better option?.
As all programs, it has many advantages. The benefits of this program are following: Anytime class: you do not need to wake up very early in morning, you will be able to attend classes anytime that you consider best. No drive: you do not need drive to school or anywhere, you will skip the traffic. Comfortable: it will be comfortable, because you will stay in the comfort of your house. Work and study: you will be able to work and study at same time, because you can attend classes anytime that you want. No bullying: you do not have to suffer bullying from anybody in school anymore. Focus: you will be focus in class, because you will be alone in your house without company.
it also has disadvantages such as no teachers: you do not have any teacher with experience around of you. if you have a question, you can not ask to some else. Sociable life: you will lost a sociable life in school, because you will stay in home. No books: you do not have all the books to study. Depression: you will pass for a depression that could be caused from being locked in home.
Well, is the distance learning a better option?. In conclusion, in my personal opinion it is. I think that this types of programs will be useful and success. There are many peoples that needed programs as this, because they does not have full time to go to school. Those people that need work and study at same time, because they do not have all the resources or money. This programs was created for all you, people that can not go to school. At end if you want to join to a programs as this, it up to you. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
410D72D3CCE8 | Great people had discovered great things for us and if it was it because of them, our community wouldn't be the same. It has been said that to be yourself in a world that constantly try to make you someone else is the greatest thing yourself can do and accomplish. Personal thoughts and opinions agree with this statement and proof to be real with articles and autobiography of examples from successful people.
First one of the reasons of being yourself is better than being controlled is to think in about someone who has already accomplish something. An example can be: Nicolas Tesla, Martin Lutherking, Neil Armstrong, and Albert Einstein. They all have done a something that changed everything, not only their life but everyone's life. Being controlled by the government to go to school and do what they want will not help in life goals; to be successful the community have to achieve their goals to make a change.
Furthermore being yourself will help in self confidence and will help in life accomplishments. For example, big man with an opportunity to work with a company much superior than his, has to go to a conference to talk about bussines, his self confidence isn't really well supported and he ruined the conference because of it. All successful people have something in common and its having self confidence. It will help you in real world challenges, and being what a person is everyday is the best thing to do.
In the other hand, the community keep its way having trouble to live and following the government's "help". Only people with great disciplinary actions can success with this help and its why people keep following what they say to do. In Virginia there are a lot of public schools, they all teach the same thing and have the same exams. This is the same school 10 years ago and people have goals that cannot be accomplished because of school limitations.
In conclusion, Reading at all the people who has accomplished something for them and for us the key to be successful is that community have to change its way to accomplish goals and to not only depend on schools that will not teach us how to life after school is finish. Depending on government is not the way to be successful. Self confindese will make successful people as well as goals. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
410E1DE75773 | Do you like to participate in Extracurricular activities?
Extracurricular activities are important and it help with kids to be social and make friends and also. I agree with this decision because it is an environment where you can find people that has the same interest as you, improving social life and it kills time.
First and foremost, extracurricular activity are important because it is an environment where you can find people that has the same interest as you. when you spent time with the people you fit in with you have the chance to learning more from each other.
Secondly, extracurricular activity are important because it helps you with you social life, which leads to communication skills. communication skill can be something that you can use in the future. A lot of kids do not know how to be social and by joining an Extracurricular activities they can work on improving their skills.
Lastly, Extracurricular activities are important because it kills time. kids spend a lot of time on social media and activities help students to verbal communicate to their friends.
In conclusion, Extracurricular activities are important and it help with kids to be social and make friends and also. I agree with this decision because it is an environment where you can find people that has the same interest as you, improving social life and it kills time. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 |
4148186C6D84 | I have seen a lot of people in a bad attitude because something happens that they dont likes examples= 2. failed in a test that's an attitude of worrying.3 More examples like you and your friends got into a fight and they are always in worry that if we could be friends one again and that depends on their attitudes. 4. Another one is when your parents get into a fight that makes your kids in a worry thinking that there might be a separation beetween them.5. some people are worry while taking a test worrying that they might fail the test.6. Another example is getting bad grades similar to failing.7. And more getting bullied and no one even stands up for them that's a depressed attitude and might decides to kil them self.8. More attitude is acting cool in a class and behaving not well enough and even cussing at a teachers.9. There is another point when you've got an attitude dont show to your friends you probably dont want them to worry too and if you do that way you are spreading your worry and everyone will be and that is not good. | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
41641B53F554 | I am writing to support the idea that students have to choose or identify a caree beafore they enter high school.
First of all, I support the idea on students choosing a career before they get to start high school.
That wey they will know, what they like to be when they graduate from high school.
For example some students will became profetional sport players, architects, doctors, etc.
Because thinking on becaming some one very important in the society at a young age will make them proud of them selfs, and that woul lead them in to a succesifull pat.
Secondly, for young students will be easier to get to where they want at a youn age.
Because they are young, they don't have to think a bout anyting ells but studying.
For example they don't have to think a bout payin bills, or taking care of the family.
The only thing they have to worry a bout is studying, and follow their dreams to be what they want to be.
In conclution, this are my reasons on why I support the idea that the student need to identify a career by the time they enter high school.
Thank you for your time and attention.
sincerely,
Generic_Name | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
41A2385450D9 | I'm agree which this to say the first impression is impossible to change,To be honest whicth my self friends and people etc... , Be direct with the other person , Say the true and respecful, Be comprehensible , understand the another person,
some day of this week my friend bring a pants and i'm saw him, my fist empression was ''naa this not going which you , so i will honest with him , if somebody tell me something that is not pleasing for me i'm sure that i going to put my impression face , and maybe the other person don't like, but it's impossible to change my impression , I will direct which the people ,if the people don`t like my impression i'm sorry for them, yeah maybe it's not correct to say the fist impression , i'm agree for that too, and i understand that some people put angry when i do that , but i can't change my actituded because i'm like this, it's the same with the another people they got them own impression but in different ways , that's fot that i'm agree , and i understand that is so important to me beacuse i don't know if the other person feel bad when i say the first impression , that's why i need to improve my impression , some people and my friends are annoying with me for this , and that's why i need to practice respect to myself and the another people.
The fist impression is bad idea because if i'm in the job and my boss tell me that my work is not like this, and i say my fist impression that's sure that my boss will put annying because maybe he try to teach me, and the fist thing that i do is my impression and is not a good imprression,
some impression are good because when somegirl look beautiful my impression going to be wow i like how they look today , so impression can be good or bad,
the impression can used in different ways, can use in possitive and negative forms so we decide what kind of impression to used , but a lot a time we only used a negative impression in that is not correct , for example if i or some friend bring something or do something we need to do an possitive impression but we always give a negative impression and that is not correct we need to encourage this person but we only do negative things.
Having a godd impression we are more than we can imagene because everybady respect to you and nobody got problem with you , and thats a opportunities to alot of ways in your life . | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
41BB825BAEBB | My Mom, she always shares wisdom with me and shows how to be a wise person and she also introduce me to this world.
One day she decided to leave everything behind and start all over,because she wanted us to have a better life in the United States. She taught me whats right and wrong,
she told me "son always go for whats good but don't go through the bad path."
When you learn from others experience you become a better person.
However don't learn from bad influences they'll bring you down.
friends that are doing bad things are influences you don't need to follow their actions in order to become a better person just talk to a wise person they might give you a good advice.
My Grandmother also shared how to do the right choices. Once she told me doing the right choices will always have a reward.
so I always remember to do right choices.
If you learn how to be a wise individual other people will follow your steps like M.L.K. and his famous I have a dream speech he was an example of wisdom.
It is important to learn from the experiences of others because you want to be know as a person of character.
Imagine being the person, the person you want to follow.
Do what your Mom says trust she's not lying one day you might not get that same advice wisdom shows what is true and what is right this is important in a person's life because you develop those skills that your Mom and Dad show you and use them when you grow up. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
41D5C14587DA | I really think that, Ralph Waldo Emerson, was right when he wrote this or most of the people see it that way its like you went to collage and you get a degree and come back and still living with your parents when you could move out and get a job save some money to buy a house but if you still living with your parents it will be the same, because they will keep looking at you like a lil child into you start to get your own things for them no matter how old you are they will look at you the same way that look at when you born, i think that when Ralph wrote this he wanted to mean this.
For the rest of the world you already a grow man or woman when you get your life together and get your own car, house, and family that you will look out for, and you will do anything for them like your parents did it for you and it will be the same story but from a different side and the one whos telling the story and you will never what your children to grow you will look at them like your child the rest of your life i did not get into i sow my older sister taking care of her daughter it was there when i start look ma life from a different side i might not be an fully grow man but i move out my house when i was 15 and i thought it will hard to keepup we the rest of the world i think before you take your own path and stop worrid about the rest of the world thats when you really grow up familyis first, second, and tird.
I think that the best way to grow is do you first and there is no need for you to move out you just need to look at the rest of the word from a different side and thats when you really grow is not age or nothing like that is on you just dont worry about nobody beside your family and your frinds.
from a person that live this before at a yong age | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
41D9E5A1342B | The great artist Michelangelo I thinking he is the best artist because he said most of us lies not setting our I am to high and falling short.
setting and achieving they work in the same position I think so Michelangelo he know that,if the achieving is low the setting low too because is the same he doing good jobs also if, he get a new jobs he had more talent.
I think the setting is too low because the system is too low so he need good system and good setting and than everything is work after than he can work very good .
my recommend to Michelangelo is change the sitting if he change the sitting for one high he need more recommendation for he jobs he need doing a lot to doing for he jobs and the setting is to short he need one bigger because the short is a lot problem.
Also I have one more recommendation if you need the new system just change is more better make sure the setting is not short because if the setting is short always are low but if the setting is bigger the setting is more high and not falling.
50% I am agree but the other 50% no
I agree because he have nice talent and he do nice jobs also I disagree because the setting is very short and low but if get my recommendation is more better and he have good idea but he have bad idea too so let me get the agree because I like he history
I agree because he used setting and achieving is two thing very important on this history he have nice history my position is when i read the history is to confuse but now i understand what he doing .
example: just change the short setting to a bigger setting if more better fr you this my litter example thank you for read Michelangelo remember dont forget my recommendation . | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
41D9F5D10332 | I believe that students accomplish more when they are always doing something. That serves more of a purpose than not doing anything at all. Students learn more when they are doing something productive. Students accomplish more when they take action. Another reason why students accomplish more when doing something is that they get farther in life than others. Lastly they get mature and learn what life is about. That why i choose that when a students get all those thing in place the student will accomplish more that someone that is not doing anything in life in their whole lifetime.
The reason I choose that we accomplish more when doing something is that we cant accomplish something when not moving doing nothing. My first reason why we accomplish more when when doing something is that when we do something we are learning. For example in the 4th grade i was really mad at math , so I took action and practiced everyday after school for the rest of the year. I would get good grade after i took action and studied every night. What I'm trying to say is that i wouldn't have accomplish that if i wouldn't have done something. Another example is that studies show that students that are always doing things at home or after school do accomplish more than students that don't do anything at all. Finally they learn how to mange their time more better.
Students that accomplish things get more farther in life than others. For example my aunt is a doctor and she put her mind in everything that she did. For example she took a lot of test to take and study for. So what did she do she always was multitasking. Another example is that a person that has made so many challenges in life is going to understand that you need too do something for it.
Finally the reason is that students when they are doing their work they are going to understand what it means to be a adult.,and to be more mature in life. Students get mature when they start work and going to school because they start to mange their time more wisely. Like for example a students is going to work right after school and they have a lot of work to do. They make that time do do their work some other time when they have time or at work on break. Another example is that if a students have a goo example in life they will get really intelligent .
Finally students that accomplish more are the students that are doing something in life other that just doing nothing. Students that are accomplish more are learning life skills. Students that accomplish more are going to get farther in life than others that aren't doing anything. Students that are accomplish more things are going to become mature. For knowing that they are doing thinks that are smart. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
41DF6D292056 | In this essay we are going to discuss the various issues related to working in a group and working indvidually. The idea here will be to study the pros and cons with ralation to the particular indvidual and not to the group of which she is a part. First we will try to understand the dynamics of a group vis a vis individual, then understand the various issues involved in working as a part of the group. We would also see as to how those issuse will be influencing the person, be it in the positive side or being a hindrance.
Remamber last time when you had to do your project. You must have contemplated doing it by many ways. But some thing that comes to mind very in the beginning is either individually or in a group. Every body by facto knows what it is to be individual and perform a task individually, as she is the only person who is doing the task. But what is group and how it is formed and what are the dynamics involved in it.
So what is a group, we may dedine it as a collection of several people who come togethor to do a particular task or goal. And the group form, their structure and process and also deals with how it is functioning. This aspect of group dynamics is relevant in formal and informal groups of all types. In any organisational entity groups are very common entity and hence their study and group dynamics is an important area in the study of oranisational behaviour.
Being with group dynamics let us see what exactly it is about, it basically deals with why and how groups are formed and developed. In order to explain the same many theories have been proposed.
While group work has a host of merits, it also has its flip sids. Firstly, individual students usually lack the power to control the task as compared to when the work is assigned to one person for completion. Additionally, some group members tend to dominate in terms of contributions while othors may become dormant. In this case, the group may achieve its goal but limit other students. Work well together can achieve much more than indvividuals working on their own. A broader range of skills can be applied to practical activities and sharing and discussing ideas can play a pivotal role in deepening your understanding of a particual subject area.
Being part of a team will help you develop your own interpersonal skills such as speaking and listening as well as team working skills suck as leadership, and working wirth motivating others. Some of these skills will be useful throughout your academic career and all are value.
In order to maximise these benefits, you will need to manage your group work effectively. | 4 | 4 | 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
41EAC230D430 | People who have a lot of experience in life have started off the same way as everyone one else, from the bottom. Their first ever job was something that they probably had never done before, this makes it so that they had to learn and adapt to something they were unfamiliar with. Hiring these people, people who had little to no experience to what they are now are the one who went on in life by learning and adapting. Hiring new people can also benefit employers in a positive way, by having someone with no experience can help grow that person professionally. Also finding someone with a lot of knowledge at something may be difficult for they all have jobs that require experience. This in the end can make it hard for employers to find someone just right for the position they need
Hiring someone who doesn't have experience in the job position you are looking for can be a good thing, first, it can help the employee discover skills for themselves and outside of the job, second, it can or will make the employee much better and more reliable for the position. New employees need a mentor or someone who can show them the correct ways to do the job and who ever the mentor is, it can help them grow their leadership skills dramatically. Having skill diversity among the group can also be very beneficial it can result in the new employees finding new ways to manage things on the job and may even find ways to replace the old rules for better ones. Some people are fast learners so he/she will adapt to the new work environment very easily. Building up experience is a key part in life and and some point there will be a time to get a job and seeing that everyone has started from the bottom, and hiring someone new can really benefit the company and the employer
Do i think that employers should hire someone that doesn't have any experience at something; yes, once hiring he/she the employee will do whatever it takes to keep that job and find new ways to grow while on the job. it is also a good way to expand company diversity and skills.
In the end, anyone who is looking for a job should be given an opportunity to learn and acquire skills to become better and stronger experience wise. Employers should mostly take notice on how ready and determined he/she is for the job rather than hoe much experience they have. At some point even the employer was given a chance so whoever the person may be should also be given a chance at this opportunity. I hope you take this letter into consideration and offer positions to someone who is eager to learn and be part of your group.
sincerely
Generic_Name | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 |
41F8A61B0BB8 | My name is Generic_Name and i am 18 years old. I am currently in 11th grade and attending Generic_school. I dream big in graduating, starting a carrer, and making my family proud. My parents are from Generic_City, As my sister is from Generic_City. Currently i am from Generic_City. What i am very intrested in is, playing soccer and learning lots about criminal justice. When i graduate from Generic_school, I would love to maintain my dream goals in studying Criminal justice and explore new types of events to figure out my future job. What i am mainly Intrested in is, A DEA Agent. Being a DEA agent (Drug Enforcement Agent) was always my favorite type of police job ever since i was a kid. I would always see movies about them,One famous show would be ''Narcos'' with Pablo Escobar. My parents really love the fact that i am intrested in studying a carrer as an agent, They one hundred percent support me and see me as one in the future. I am also currently taking criminal justice in school, I have been for 2 years, and look forward to continue taking the same class in college as well. I am a very Brave type of person. I like to step up myself in achieving goals i set myself to one. I've once set myself into making the Generic_City soccer team, With a lot of practice and hard working, i've managed to achieve making the team and achieving my goals in my 10th grade year. I am also intrested in continuing my carrer as playing soccer in college,But what comes in mind first is Ciminal Justice. I have been researching many informations about DEA and searched up many documentaries. Being an agent seems to be very hard and need very hard working brave men to step up for any emergency. If i ever achieve my goals into becoming an agent, I am certain in helping the community and other countries, to maintain it safe and out of trouble in risk of losing or out growing any type of bad habits. What i will make sure of is: Finishing High School, Keeping my grades up, And finding myself a good high job, to start off my carrer into achieving my goals to become a DEA. I do believe one day i will try and find myself working very hard, Trying very hard to build myself up to a police , And graduating with an Advance Master Degree in becoming what i wish to be. I hope god to help me achieve my goals, And to never give up in my dreams. Until then, I will continue in studying and learning many more facts, Information about DEA. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
420269F2DE40 | Teenagers are really complicated these day's not trying to have an extra 2 hours in school.
They want to have school already to be over so they can do what ever they want to do. They think having school for a little more time is a waste of time. I agree not having school for an extra 2 more hours, it's a problem for us student's.
Teacher's have a problem when a student goes to sleep the flip out and start's to scream even the other side of the hallway teacher or student's can hear them. I agree on not having 2 more hours,student not getting enough sleep, also begin bored not doing work, and begin stressfull.
Student's these day's are alway's sleeping in class saying their not getting enough sleep. When teenager's are not getting enough sleep they start to sleep in class and not do their work. Reason why our teenager's are not getting enough sleep it's because they got their extra 2 hours of school. My teenager leaves the school late and also get home an extra hour late my teenager barley's get's his homwhork done on time. When it's time to sleep my teenager doesn't sleep why it's because he doesnt feel sleepy at all from coming home late.
Student's have a big issue on begin happy and having fun in school. Teenagers are saying if they have an extra 2 hours of school their going to be boring and also not doing their work. Student's will not listen to thet teacher of how bored their are in class. Student is not going to follow instruction by the teacher because it's a waste of time. Teenagers have a problem when their are bored they don't follow what the teacher is doing instead they talk to other classmate so they could be unbored.
Ever since the 2 extra school hour started student are having trouble to keep up to turn in their class work.
Teenagers are really worried to get their grade's up on time. Student's trying their best to turn in any late classwork they have for the teacher's. Teacher's worry's about their student why aren't they getting enough sleep. Teenagers parent are stared to realizing an extra 2 hours are stressfuling their student's.
Teacher are tried of seeing their student's sleeping in class. Student's not following instruction on what the teacher is saying because their bored. Student's having more hours in school are getting stressful. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
421FA3CBFD5C | The matter of always doing something is great. Some say if your to idle which means always hanging out or not doing much. Your not busy at any means your just wasting quality time, that could be used doing anything productive like getting important stuff done. At the end of the day the person that has acomplished the most has a better chance of liveing better, they dont have as much stress on thinking that they still have to get so much done but has not done anything.
The day i layed in my bed not doing anything was the day that i felt sorry for my self that i couldn't get up and do something simple ass get simple chours done like feed the animals or put to wash my clothes. Than I realized the next day when i went to sleep earlier the night before, I woke up with a better out look of the day i got stuff done and had extra time, to do what i like. In my free time I enjoy working with vehicles, change oil and all the main fuctions of a car.
I stay busy to a point for example i don't wanna stay up all night doing something that is not worth the time. They are people i know that work from 10 hours up to 14 hours a day, it's not a office it's outside mannual labor it's not fun. They still get home and do what is needed. That shows there is always time to do what's needed. If the type of person that works 8 hour shift's you have plenty of time to be productive and get something good done.
It's been shown by sciencetist that human that does the most each and every day, are likely to live longer. The reason is your not dealing with all that stress of getting things done. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
4228BAB7F096 | Former British prime minister Winston Churchill. Success consists of going from failure to failure without agree to stop failure in life. He said a failure can not success in life people agree with Churchill. Failure loss all doing like bad ideas. Like doing some isn't right. Success to not failure in life need to do is to star to success in life. Is one that have failed to success in life because Churchill said it. I failed one time but i study all of time and success in of pass the a test in a class. The who failed in a class have time to retake something to pass. Churchill say that because he sailed something in his year of time. The thing to success in something is went we want to pass a classes or something in life. To be someone in the fucher need success in self and not stop to be someone in the fucher. they are all of people how is failing in the word. They are all of people is success in many place in the word. Many people need help to pass a class to success in life and a family. And help his/her mother and father to help then. state of inability to perform a normal function adequately help. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
423B413192FA | Today I will like to explain to you the benefits of working with a group. In my opinion working with a group make things more easy and fun because students have the chance to exchange ideas and also learn more from each others it als help us to see things from different points of view.
First, working with a group make things more easy for students because they will all work together in each part of the assignment, one student can do the research while the other one write the information the other student can be looking for graphs or other information that they might need, students also get to have fun by working with a group because they can talk to each others and also laugh from their mistakes .
In addition, students have the opportunity to learn no just the topic of the assignment but also learn from each other, working with a group gives us the opportunity to exchange ideas and toughts it also help us to see the differfents points of view,by working with a group we also get help from each others because if one student does not know the answer to a questions the other students might have the right answer.
Last, for some students working with a group makes them feel more comfortable because they can help each other and support the different positions and ideas, by working all together they will have better result and they will learn more by having discussions and sharings their different opinions.
In conclusion working with a group have more benefits because the students learn more and have better results, they learn more from each other, they discuss the different points of view and they also learn to respect and listen to the different positions that they have. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
424005E31A04 | Do people ever told that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life ?
Well,that true for you to be success in life you got to have a positive attitude .
when you talking around attitude is how we act ,talk ,and how we deal with thing that are happening. Say that person you are working with and the person next to you do or says something that is not so great, and let say that you were really mad and very upset about ,and you choose not to fight or talk back to him/her. In my preview I would say you act base on what happen and you had a positive attitude about what just happen. Attitude can be a big problem for some people and Sometimes you just need to have a positive attitude .When your thoughts think that positive attitude is the key to success will you not wrong ,I know that when you choose to have a positive attitude it depend on what going on and how you want to handle the matter .For example you are on your way to the school and you meet one of the teacher let say Mrs. Jade,will Mrs. Jade asks if you are okay and she ask you if you are gonna come to school because you have many days of absent at school , and say that you have your own personal problems and you just don't want to tell her about it .So you decide not answer her because you are not in a good mood and you might talk to her rudely and she would think that you have an attitude or bad behavior and thought if I have problem with her or be rude to her it would be the worse so I will not say anything .That would it and you would just kindly walk way. Attitude can be anything in life attitude is not just the way you treat other it can be how you manage things and how you think and act with a positive attitude. When you think back it can also be something that create your connection with those who are in your surroundings. For example when you meet a someone for the first time and you were nice to them everything about you was positive and you were did not hind anything from her and that person might draw a liking into you .And you might end up being their friends or bests. The thing of having positive attitude is that many people might not act the same way as you ,so you have to be the one being positive .People say a beautiful heart comes from in and out of that person .It the same thing with having a great positive attitude when think about it people do and say what they want to said and no one is stopping them .So with positive attitude is the same way people do it because they want to and even if you say that you want to stop them I don't think that you would do it. Because it their choice to do what they want to do .Say when you want to eat can anyone stop you and if not then why would they stop you from what your doing .These things we do it so that our life can be great base on what we see we act,make choice ,and choose the right or wrong that why everything we do in this world we do it with positive attitude .And think about when you are making choices do you have to be a greater thinker or smart no all you have to do is have a great idea and a positive attitude to it when you say it because sometimes thing are easy said then done .when a person is saying something or doing something they have a way of doing and saying that this day .when people are talking they use attitude to do or say something and you have to away think that your the only one doing but sometimes it not just you it might be the other way around and you might say oh ,so that how it done .What l'm saying is that positive attitude can be a good thing to those who know what it means to them and why they are having it. Have you ever meet a person they're so nice to you when no body is around ,but when people are around they act so mean to you ,and some people are really nice to you ,because they mean it and they want to be your friend and when you at some of these thing does have something to do with positive attitude and most of them just put on an act and when your the one they doing this to sometimes you don't if having positive attitude or not everybody knows what we do in the future but I know one thing for sure .That if you have a positive attitude ,The your future clear for sure because when you about the future the only thing that comes to mind is how are success and all you need is positive attitude and focus on what you can do because believing is living .And if you believe you have to have that positive attitude going ,because once you start a journey one can never stop until it's end ,Positive attitude can be the thing that can help you do what other can't do ,if you ask why it because you have a life and that most of the people in the the world need positive attitude so that they can have a peaceful life and one most never stop until you find what your looking for. Having a good attitude can not only be the key to success in life but it can help you be a wonderful person. Being kind to someone,helping people,and making people about you happy and it can also make you happy. why ,because you have a positive attitude and when you success in life you will be happy. The thing is when talking about positive attitude can be the key to success in life, is like you are talking about happiness is a wonderful thing that happen in a world and make people happy. So when saying key to success in life your talking about how you act ,respect,what you do?, and how will you success in it when your looking for positive attitude so that you can success. Their are not a lot people who have a positive attitude in this world,but their are people who are bringing positive attitude in this world. When you think about success in life do you think it would be great if everyone had the chance to be success in life ,but to be fair life is suppose to be hard that way we can learn from our mistakes. Positive attitude help you be success in life ,because we live we learn everyone is a learner in this world. Because no one is perfect or wonderful forever. | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
4248882EDCCC | Why teachers should designed summer projects? it prepares students to be ready for the next school year. Students actually do what they suppose to be doing. Students don't have tow worried about what they need to be working on. Teachers should designed summer projects because it helps students to learn more on what they need to do and students know what they need to be doing without stressing about it; however if students designed projects it could be wrong.
First, teachers should designed summer projects because it help students on what they need to do. For example, it helps students to get to the level where they have to be for the next school year and students actually understand the subjects better. Students actually get the work done because they are doing. Teachers should designed summer projects because it helps students get ready and prepare. students should do what their teachers asks them to do so that they can get better and prepare.
Second, students know what they need to be doing without stressing about it. Helps students to understand what they have to work on. For example, there are many students that stress about it because they don't know what projects they need to be doing. Students take their time and do their work because they know how to do it. Many students don't get work done at home during summer because they stress about not knowing what they suppose to be doing, that's why teachers should designed projects.
However, if students designed the projects it could be wrong. Many students are lazy and they forget about the projects. For example, there are many students that don't want to do anything during summer they just want to have fun so they finish the projects the fastest they can without knowing what they need to be working on. Most of the students work during the summer and they don't have to actually do their work correctly.
In conclusion, teacher should designed summer projects because it helps students to learn more on what they need to to be doing and students know what they need to work on without stressing about it; however, if students designed the projects it could be wrong. Many of the students don't have to worry on what they need to be working on because they have everything they need. Most of the time students do what they suppose to be doing. It helps students to be prepare and become better at any subject | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
4256A9A1767F | In my oppinion people should seek guidance from expercts and authorities about life's important matter instead of making thier own desisions. A few people may not agree, but I personally strongly agree with my oppinion is very important. I belive asking and sharing our ideas lead us to making better desisions. Here are three reasons why seeking guidence from expercts and authorities is better than making desitions on your own.
In addition, confusion is one of of the most common reasons why people end up making bad desistion. A lot of people might not know what it is going on or how to make a good desicion because it is probably their first time going through a situation they have never been in. I was not in a position to make my own desistions, because I was young and confused on what was going well untill I asked someone for help,but when I started making my own desitionsions
Also, it leads you to do better when you communticate with others and gives you a better understanding on why making your desision with others helps you out more. When I began to speak out about my desisions to my closest friends and they helped me make me feel that I was not going through it alone and they always made sure that the desision I understand the desision I was taking before even making my next move. It honestly helped me a lot.
Furthermore, it makes your life less stressful. You talked about what you were stressing about instead of bottling It all up. It is like some stress relive. For exapmple, you have a big heavey backpack full with books inside and when you get some out the way, you take some books out , and the backpack feels less heavy. I would feel relive on talking about what was stressing me out when I had to make a desision, because it is hard.
In conclusion, Not only do you make a desision but you uderstand, you communicate, and you feel relived about your desision. In the end of the day you would feel not only good about your desision but sure about yourself and the people around you. These were the three reasons on why you talking to experts and ahorities about life is important. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
42587039161D | Do you think technology is helpful ? I think Technology allows people to do many stuff and i think its postive because that way if you have to go buy grocery you can just go grocery shopping online something else why i think it is positve is because pepole can also work from home like lets say if you work in a offiice you can use your laptop so that is what i think about this. For example when my sister feels sick or does not have time to go grocery shopping she goes online and she gets her grocery deliverd in front of the house.
Another reason why i think it is postive because lets say if you dont drive and need a ride you can download the app uber and get yourself a ride to go where you would like to go. Another reason is if you need to clothes shopping there is no worries because you can aslo go online and see what you want to buy if you dont have time to go in the store to see what u need you can always go online. something else is you do not have to go to the book store because you can read online and even check out books. you can bisically do everthing online pay your payments so many stuff these are some reasons why i think tecnology has been positve in peoples lives. Also another good reason is my grandma lives in Generic_City and now we can also facetime her from a diffreant country thanks to technology. One reason why it could be negative because if pepole order stuff and dont go out to buy somehting in the store they are not getting enougeh extracise and they are just being really lazy. Another reason why it could be a negative is nowadays pepole dont even talk face to face all they do is either text call stuff like for example when i go over my grandmas house for any holidays my cousins they dont communicate all they do is sit there be on there phones these are some negative reasons.
So these are some reasons why i think technology is positive nowadays. Another good example is when i go to Generic_City or travaling anywhere what my older sister does is she checks us in so that way we dont have to wait in the big line at the airport and we already have our seats picked so that is also a good thing. like i said in the top paragraph in my postion technolgy has been really halpful for pepole. you can really do anything with your phone you can also pay with apple pay if you leave your wallet at home that is something you can do pay with apple pay. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
4288F88C8D15 | I think if your good and sports you can participate in sports. But you atleast have to try to do better at school. Because if you don't them you can't participate in sports like compate with others school or team. It so cool because, one time I compate with other school in baskteball and voleyball. But we lost In voleyball but in basketball we won. I was So happy because you get so exited and then nervous because then you think that your going to lose but you never know ig you don't try. So I think that if you have a C or B you can still make to the team or do some sprots. When I won I was with a C avarage and my coach. Didn't care she put me because I was good. And that what I think principal so please don't change the rules. And if i want to do and acticity well if I have a C than, she atleast can check my conduct in class. Or maybe some student don't have a B avarage they could got and C and they could be one of the best. But the pricipal want to change the rule right. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
42AD5E1F4167 | Some school offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way online or video conferencing. Other school don't offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home because that's not great way to learn.
Desagree:. Other school don't offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home because that's not great way to learn.
1: Students wouldn't benefit being able to attend classes from home because if they don't understand something who can help them.
2: Distance learning is not the best way to learn because you need some school to learn what you need to know like student that you are.
3: If you take classes from home you can learn but if you take the classes direcly from some school thatone is the best way that you to learn.
Other school don't offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home because that's not great way to learn because students wouldn't benefit being able to attend classes from home because if they don't understand something who can help them, distance learning is not the best way to learn because you need some school to learn what you need to know like student that you are and If you take classes from home you can learn but if you take the classes direcly from some school thatone is the best way that you to learn.
Some school offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way online or video conferencing because for some students that's the best way to take their classes but for other student is not the best way because some student have to work after school and they have other responsabilities to do like the people who came to this country from another country and don't live with their parents this guys have to work and study at the time so that's why I think is not benefit to attend classes at home. For example the people who came to this country, they came for a better future, better opportunities and they need to learn a new languaje and that's not easy for everybady some people learn very quickly but other people not.
calsses by way online that's great for some student because they have a great idea and reasons to take classes from home for example some student have child and they have to care about their baby's so they can't go to school for them that's a great opportunuty to study and do what they want, this people just need motivation to keep going and they can gain their goals.
I think students they don't be benefit attend classes from home because at home they have too many things that can be disctracte for them with things like electronic devices, or persons like childrens, and any other distract thing.
Video conferencing that's good form to learn for some people who want to attend classes from home but if you have any question or any dude you can't ask to this video that's why I thing that the best way to learn is going to school and work hard every day to do and study what we want to do in the future, we have our future in our hand if we do any bad thing some day we pay for that, always we have to think and be sure for what we want and do. in this life everything the we do to somebody good or but someday that thing comeback to you and there woud you feel what other people someday fool for your foult.
The old people who have esperience in life they said to students keep going ''if you want you can...'' | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
42BF43BF8DBE | Why does the curfews are important in some cities and state for teenagers? The importance's of having curfews in the cities is that they will be out of trouble. Sometimes teenagers not follow the law especially on weekend. Having the curfew in the city will be more helpful for their life. Curfew keeps teenagers out of trouble because teenagers will always follow the law, and teenagers will never put them salve in a trouble that may hurt them some way.
Firstly, Curfew keeps teenagers out of trouble because teenagers will always follow the law. For instance, Generic_Name lives in Generic_City Virginia and he said that the law here is after 10 p. m. teenagers should not be on streets or anywhere else. He always follow the law and keep him self out of trouble. If the city adopted the curfew after that the teenagers will start breaking the law after these hours. Therefore, every state and city should require curfew for teenagers.
Secondly, Curfew keeps teenagers out of trouble because teenagers will never put them salve in a trouble that may hurt them some way. For example, My two friends went outside to have some fun and it was weekend. Saturday night there were out to get some ice-cream for them salve and family. The police stop them in their half way and asked them about what are they doing at this time outside;however, he said that you guys know that the curfew is after 10 p. m. teenagers should not be outside. They lied to police that we were in hospital with our mom, and in our way we bought some ice-cream also. Thus, teenagers never put them salve in a trouble so having curfew is much better then not having it.
Some people argue that, having curfew in a city or state is wrong because they think its interfering in young people's lives. This point is true that curfew keeps teenagers from getting in a trouble. However, curfew can safe teenagers lives because in this age they don't know wrong and right they do what they like, and what they are interested. Curfew unfairly interfere in young people's lives because some teenagers have their own rules, and they don't listen to anyone. Lastly, cities should have curfew to safe teenagers lives and do not adopted the curfew.
In conclusion, the importance's of curfew is to have a better and safe life in your city. Teenagers have the ability to follow the law and get safe of trouble. Some teenagers does not put their self in trouble even if they lie they never get in trouble. Some people says that curfew is a force on young people's lives. Therefore, teenagers should be responsible, follow the law, and keep yourself out of trouble. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
42DB5DABA590 | That older students can assist with the younger students and the younger students can pair up with the older students. I think this way because the older students can help with the subjects of the younger student that dose not know about. And that the older student can learn something about the younger student that he/she does not know about ether. To have more understanding of the old and young student. And to work together as one.
The older students have know the past year before the young. They know about the subjects they did and know what to do. This can help the young because when it comes to questions, they can do something about it. They can give examples of what troubles them when it comes to a hard question. To show what feels how hard or easy in class, projects, work, and homework can be.
The younger students has a fresh start to 5th grade to middle school or 8th to freshmen. Other students think that middle or high will be easy. Or other think that it will be hard for them self. To open up lockers, find there classes, etc. But by the older students can help them what works best for the student. They can understand of what to do in class. Because of the help of the older students. And they can also teach the other young students of the teaching of the older students.
The program can help each other by if they want to be helpful and to work the path to be more easier Maybe something won't be east on work in school. If the student wants to ask questions, to show hints, or how its going to be in the next grade. The program can make everything much more simple. And this is why that the program can help with the younger students and the older students can know something about the student. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
42F8715D04A3 | What would be you'r lesson to elementary students be? If I was asked to share a lesson to elementary it would be not to cheat. That lesson is important because the students could get into big trouble, show what they don't know, and loose their teachers trust.
First, If a student does cheat they could get in big trouble. One, they could get a zero on the test, and a zero on a test will lower the students grade. Second, the student could get sent to the principals' office and could get a call home. The students parents will also be upset. They would be in trouble at home and at school.
Second, If a student cheats on a proficiency test, it shows the teacher that the student doesn't know the material. For example, at the end of Spanish 1 you have to take a proficiency test. If the person you cheated off of doesn't know then, you fail and have to retake Spanish 1 again. For elementary it could be a spelling test. If they fail the spelling test they could also get a bad grade.
Last, the student could loose their teachers trust. The teacher would never let them seat next to a student during a test. Teachers trust is hard to gain back when you loose it. The students teacher will always keep their eye on the student that cheated. Those are the three good reasons why my lesson to the elementary students is important. | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
430762044028 | Why they are think studnets should have classes from home by way of online or video conferencing? Many of the studnets home is to far and maybe can't come or is come let. Every schools should have this option for students. This is make easy for some students.
First,some students wanna to stay home for classes this is good thing because you can fouces carfully and take you time and no body can't make you obsess. Some students maybe just need focuse to classes and he can't do in schools and he want to be school home. For Example; We have firend family him name is Generic_Name,Generic_Name wanted to be home school and do work in home. He do like to come school early. He told to him Mother and Father but they are is not agree with him because they says you have to go school and you can learning better and he do not have any option and he start to go school.
Second,the student want to stay home school they should know home school make your lazy because you don't have any activity to do you you stay home all time. For friendship you can't find good friend. this is make you unfriendly. for the class maybe you not understand what teachers means and you have some question. For Example;Generic_Name she is school home and she all time in home she doesn't have any friend she talk with her mother and father and her mother father is agree with she and she start to go school and she find alot friend and she understand better then befor.
Lastly,some teachers like to teach online and I think this is good option to for teachers because maybe teachers can teach better and maybe can foucse better then in class. Some teachers go to students home for the teaching just for one student and focuse to just one student. For Example;Generic_Name every Thusday have teacher she come every Thusday in Generic_Name home and she was help to Generic_Name to all home work. she talk to Generic_Name about home teacher is good then teacher in school because you focuse just for one student but in school you focuse just for maybe twenty students this is to hardc for me.
Studnets, should go schools this is not matter do you want go home school or normal school. some students have some physically problem I think they are need home schools because is easy then school because in school maybe somebody push and like some accident. For the physically students schools home is good because they can learning easly and they can focause better and nobody obsses.
Some students, need go school for the understand better. Some students need go school because if they are stay in home and they want home schools maybe in not listen to teacher or make copy. For friendly some people is unsocial and need make friend in school. Ithink school good option for this studnets. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
4351657CEC2F | Do I agree with churchill"s statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success? In my opinion I do agree with his statement because everyone fails at something in life. There's so many people that fail in the world and I definetly agree with churchill's statement because i think it really says a lot about life in general its not easy.
One reason is because I believe that everyone goes through some type of failure in life and I feel like that's the only way you learn from anything. I also think that people that fail are people that succeed at what they failed at. That's the only way you learn from anything for example people can fail at taking a test or playing a sport. Not everything people do the first means there gonna succeed which isn't always the case. I feel like when people fail that's when they can take the time and realize why they failed they learn from that mistake and the next time a oppurtunity comes for them to try again they can try there best and succeed. Trying your hardest is the best way to deal with a lot of things that's the only way to succeed in your best way.
Another reason I agree with this statement is because life isnt easy there are a lot of challenges your gonna come upon and all you have to do is try and if you fail the first time then there's always gonna be another oppurtunity around the corner. What I think churchill is trying to get at people is never give up and he's trying to say that it's okay if you fail the first time you try something there's always gonna be another chance to prove yourself and you can succeed at that goal or test you have in school or something like that. Iv'e failed many times in my life and on the second try i succeeded so churchill has a point when he says that it's okay to fail in life because thta failure prepares you to be better than you were the last time.
That is why I agree with this statement because i believe tha everyone deserves a second chance to prove themselves and what they are campable of. Churchill's statement should really speak to people and people should take it into consideration because there's always a time in life when you are going to fail and you are going to get a second chance at it again. I do completly agree with this statement because it makes you look at life and everything differently and in a better way that is why i agree with Winston Churchill. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
43533F92E05B | I agree this statement about the importance of attitude. However you always need to be a positive person. To be successful in life, you need to be positive and believe in yourself first. Do not listen what people say and don't let them to tell you what to do. Believe in yourself and don't take care about what they say and think about you.
To start, to be successful you always need have a positive attitude, the negativity will not take you nowhere. If you have a positive attitude, you will have everything you want in life. Also if you're a negative person it will not help you in anything. When you are a negative person you can not get what do you really want. If you want to get everything you want in life, you need to have a positive attitude. It does't matter what you have done for it, you always have to be positive and believe in yourself to have success.
Next, if you want to have success in life, you always need to have a positive attitude and a good vibe about yourself. You have to believe in yourself before something else. You are the only person who can be believe in yourself, and nobody else is going to do it for you. Every time you have something done for your success, think that you are going to get it, and always be positive. Do not let anybody ruin what do you want to be that successful person in the future.
Finally, if do you want to be successful in life, the only thing you need is believe in yourself. Do not listen what people say and think about you. Listen to your mind and your heart, they are going to tell you what is good for you. People will always judge you, it does't matter what you do. Don't let people to ruin your success, and believe in that you are going to be a successful person in the future, and you are going to get what do propose to yourself, it is up to you.
In addition, to be a successful person in life, you need to have good vibes and a positive attitude on you. Do not let people to tell you what to do when you already know what is good for you. If you let people to tell you what to do, you're not going to get nowhere. In life, nobody want you to have success, they don't want you to be in a better place than them. The only thing I can say is that you always need to have a positive attitude and believe in yourself before something else, that's how are you going to have success in life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
4353BF70C4A3 | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Schools goal is to offer for students classes from home to make sure students do their best in order to pass and graduate. Students would be benefit from being able to attend classes from home because students love the idea of taking their courses at home, will have more time to do any activities they could not do in school day time, and its more easier.
First, students love the idea of taking classes at home because students do not have to wake up early for school, that give students more time to sleep and all of us know how important to get your daily hour sleep on our brains. Also, it's good for students who are shy for what ever reasons. I know someone who took classes at home for third and fourth quarters, so he didn't have to go to school. The classes he took started at six PM every Monday and Wednesday. This guy told me that online classes were helpful for him and made him pass.
Second, students will have more time to do any activities. Schools started at eight AM and ends at three PM. At this time, students could do any thing like working in the morning time or help parents in anything or do anything else. Students could use this seven hours to do anything that may help them in the future. As I said before, online classes start at six PM and ends at eight PM. Generic_Name, my closest friend, took classes at home, so he could work and get money.
Students take classes at home at home because it's more easier. Many students said that is better to take our classes at home because it's more easier and teachers teach in really simple way that make anyone understand than what school do. Students wants to pass so they takes the easy way that the school offer to pass, and as I said before, schools offer distance learning to make students succeed. Generic_Name, one of my best friends, took online classes, and he told me that's his teacher was really good because of the way that the teacher taught them back then, makes everything easier and simple that even a kid could understand it.
Schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home not just because it's easy or can attend it from home. Schools goal is to make sure we succeed on this classes, and that's what schools here for. Is to open the way for us to create the future because if students are 20% of our present, they are 100% of our future. Some people or students do not like the idea of taking classes from home and will disagree with me. After all everyone have his own way of thinking and living. So what do you think of taking classes at home? | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
436450E48EC8 | If teens are at midnight at the streets, they would be breaking a law of the city.
It is a good idea because teenagers can get home early, their parents would bot be worry where they are at and they would not get in trouble.
Almost the mojority teens now a day they just want to hang out with their friends at midnight and the city is making a law that teenagers can not be in the streets at that time if the night. If they are, teens are breaking a law, and thus law is good because they can be more early at home and not get into troubles with the city and their parents too .
The city by creating this law, that teenagers can not be at midnight. Every single person is getting a lot because the streets would be more safety and with less problems in the city or community like robbing staff from house or places, assassinations that can be cause just by problems, less teens smoking and getting this time of things like vap, drinking alcohol, and smoking cigarettes, and thing that can cause them really bad thing in their lives.
Third reason is that by creating this law majority of all the teenagers the ones that are in the streets at midnight, they can avid things that are bad for them like get arrested by the cops, been sent to jail, or more if they are not from this country, if they are immigrants they can get into more problems like getting deported to their native country. And it cause them more problems in their future of getting a job or trying to get a better life.
Every city should do or make this law so that teens can be more awared what they have to do. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
437B5914340E | Why positive attitude is important in our life? People should have a positive attitude on their life. Specially on the work place, school, and home. But some people think that positive attitude is not that much important. It's important because they can make positive decisions, they people around them on work place will be good with them, and student with positive attitude can be respect full with their teachers and other students.
First of all, people with a positive attitude can make a positive decisions on their life. Because, if a person have positive thought and attitude they can good think and they can decided to have convention with good people. And every parents wants to teach their child to have good attitude with everyone, and they wants to their child respect them. And everyone like mother, father, brother, sister, friends will proud on them.
no matter where you are going, which communication you life, just be a positive with people and with yourself it will success you.
Moreover, the people around them on the work place will be good with them. Because everyone likes to be with a person that has a good and positive attitude. And to being good with each others. A person can have a good attitude and respect with people whom work with them. And you can save you job by being good and positive. If you work some where and you have bed attitude no body will loves you and they will never want to conversion with you. Being positive on work place.
finally, students with their positive attitude can be respect full with their teachers and other students. And also teachers will help and support them a lot. And students also learn in school to have positive attitude and teacher always telling to students if they have a negatives attitude, whats doing to happen with and if they have positives attitude, whats going to happen whit them. student by having negative attitude, they will lose everything on their life. just try to be positive by doing positive thing you will feel good.
It's good to have a positive attitude. And being success on your life. The attitude not going to change anything on your life, but the positive attitude can change one thing on your life thats a success you on your life. In life one thing is more important is to keep people around you. And how you going to keep them? by having positive attitude you can keep them. In my conclusion by having a positive attitude and being nice make your life easier. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
43AE9E4D0EFC | I would say that I am agree because If you want a succesful life you have to learn how to made your life easy showing to the world that you are special that you can be a nice person does not matter what the other people said or think, you have to take everything with calm and if you have problems you have to solve it with a good attitude because if you get angry you do not going to solve in a good way that is why you have to be a good person with everybody, have peace in your soul, and the last but not least have a good connection with the people that are around you, you have to put a happy face to everything that comming directtly to you.
When you are a good person with all people you made them feel good and also you feel it, because when you are a goood person you are saying that you are different to everybody, because in this world we can see that alot of people are so bad but that does not mean that all of them are aqualsbut ypu do not have to stop being a nice person just because you know people that have a bad attitude, the only thing that you have to do is be away from all of them and give to yourself a chance to know that really think like you that can make you feel as in family, this people will make you feel better because you are showing to them that you can have people around you that can make you have a better life and also more succes, for example I am a good person with all people ,with my family, and with my friends; I am gonna told you something about my friends they are specil I love them and they love me you know why because I took my time to know them, now I know what they like or how they spend their time and the most important they think that I am a succes person that make have a good attitude with them and I want them in my life and I think they will have a a nice life because I see in them that they will be very succes people.
I think that have peace is a important part of your life, because from your soul you get a lot of good feelings that make you feel comfortable,but in the same way sometimes you can have something and that make you be incomfrotable but there is you have to try to have peace, I konw that can be so difficult, do not have peace inside of you can affect you in some ways in your life, I think that to feel peace you have to do things that really like you or find something that you can make always and is not bored and also not get angry so easy because just for one problem you can be mad for a weekend or more and that is not good for you there is anything better than have peace, when I was 12 my younger brother did something that do not like me in that timeand I still remember since the first day I can tell you is not good have that mind inside of me, I am 20 now and I think that mind is gonna be with me the my whole life, but I trying to do not remember but when I remember I tell to my self that I love my brother and we are so close and he is a person that is there to hear me and when I talk with with him I tell to him everything thatv is happening in my life I feel peace in my soul.
A good connection with people that are around you can help you to have a good attitude because if you meet people that always are positives or always talk about things that are going to help in your life they can influence in your future because they know what they want in their life or what is bad for them those people is nice to meet, are interesting to hear, you can learn somethings from them and you can share some ideas, but in ypur life you will know a lot of people maybe good or maybe bad some of them are going to be nice, they will ask you to go outside a lot of days or they will invate you to have fun and you will think that those people are the good for your to be succes, but let me tell you sometimes the good people are the ones that offert to you not a party if not something that can be good for your life something that is not going to affect your future , and I know sometimes you are going to feel that the people that want to help you are the bad ones but not you are wrong, I know a person that I saw a great future he studied with me, he always had good grades, he always did homeworks, he was a nice guy this happen in the sevent grade, but when we attend the nine grade he start to meet people that they had bad grades they di not do homeworks and I think they don not wanted a future, some months later his grades goes down but was because he always when I ask him where he was, he was going something bad with his new friends and then he turns to one of them , and I think he do not attend college, this is why I am saying to have a successful future you have to be with people that are going to help you in your future.
I think we all agree after this three points that were; a good person with everybody, have peace in your soul, and have a good connection with people that are around you, this make me think how important is have a good attitude, show a good attitude to everybody, and have a good attitude does not matter what is happening in your life. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
43B0E1211D58 | School is a very important part in a person's life, however it takes away most of student's and teacher's day. In a normal public middle school in Maryland, a student first class starts at 8:15 in the morning and the last class ends at 3:00 pm. Which means that a student spends 7 hours and 25 minutes in school, that is a long time for a person to be receiving information nonstop. The school board should not extend the school day, because that would take time away from activities that students need or will need in the future, such as: students would have less time to do homework or study, students would have less time to participate in after school activities like sports, and students wouldl have less time to volunteer in community events.
Students would have less time to do homework or study. Students already spends more than seven hours at school and usually has 6-8 classes that last 45 minutes each from those 6-8 classes at least
3 would have assigned homework to the students which means that the students would need time to complete their homework with accuracy, if the school days werre extended students would have less time to complete their homework which means that their grade might go decrease for missing assignments.
Students would have less time to participate in after school activities such as sports, or clubs.
Every healthy person should exercise for at least 1 hour per day and at school not every student takes physical education (P.E.) as a course which leads to the thought that students might not me be getting the necessary amount of exercise per day, and even if a student did take P.E. a normal class lasts 45 minutes, which is not enough for a healthy person. If the school board were to add one and a half hours to the school day students would have less time to practice in an after school team. Clubs are just like sports are a very big thing in a school, clubs shows students opportunities they usually would not get in a school day. if the school board were to extend the school day students that are parts of clubs would probably get less time to spend time in those clubs.
Students will have less time to volunteer in community events. Community service is usually a requirement in most curiculums, in past experiences I have had to have 75 hours of community service those hours were earned for volunteer work, like helping a teacher with younger students or helping a teacher organize her classroom before the school year, etc. . Those acts were usually done after school and usually took around 2 hours. If the school board were to extend the school day srudents would have less time to finish their community service and could eventually fail beacause of not enough volunteering hours.
Overall it is just more convienient for the school board to not add anymore hours to the school day so students can have more time for their other activities like sports clubs and community service | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
43EE2C3C7EB5 | Have you ever wondered why teachers encourage working in groups? working in a group is far more beneficial, as you get to achieve faster, work productively, as well as learn how to work together with people, and sometimes, people you don't get along with. Working in a group can help bring in more thoughts, and bigger ideas, therefore i recommend we start working in groups over working alone.
Groups help you get things done faster, as you divide up the work between the members, more things are done at once, for example; while I write up an essay about a project, someone else can design the project!
Working in groups can be more thoughtful, while the group discusses the project or work, they are able to combine thoughts and think of more ideas and make the work thoughtful. Groups are also very fun! Have you ever had to work alone and just wasted your time staring at the clock go "tik tok tik tok", because of how boring things are going? In groups you are able to talk to friends and discuss the project as you go along and work with people you like.
Working in groups result in a better job done, as students get to divide the work based off what their good at, helps them make the project or work better. Students in groups are able to help each other by correcting each other' mistakes they are also able to teach their group mates things they dont know as well as share ideas and thoughts together to improve the work or project being made. Often times I see students' struggle but once in group they are always there to help each other improve and that is why working in groups is helpful.
It may be argued that students could possibly not get along together in groups, however, once students are forced to work together, they are also forced to get along to achieve and succeed. Something to keep in mind is that in the future, students might have to work with people they don't like, but have to get along with in order to succeed in their job and that's why we should prepare students and teach them to get alone with people. For example; I've had times where i had to work with people that i didn't get along with, but throughout the project we had to work together productively in order to succeed and get a good grade, and since that project we are now best friends.
After all, the decision is yours but I will encourage you to start assigning groups for projects, as it will help get things productively done with less time, and it will also teach students to get along with each other, create friends, and learn how to work as a team. Working in a group is much more beneficial and should start taking place more often. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
441097905601 | Dear Principal,
I would like to tell you about how I think about doing community service. The reason I wanted to tell you about this is because I understand that some students would like to do community service and not others. In my opinion I think there should be a reason why some of the students want to do community service and not others. If the students that want to do community service can do that. If there is only a small group of people than it would not be a good way to have the work done. Please consider this and if you don't like this than it will be fine to me. My other reason is not everyone would like to pick up liter. It might not be what students want to do during there free time. I understand that your the principal of this school and not every principal would consider this opinion because you believe that everyone should do community service. I all so understand that it is very important to do community service around the school and you can learn many things from doing community service and I also like to tell you that there should be a list of places that there going to do service at.
Sincerely ,
Your student at SCHOOL_NAME | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
442CFAE61CC3 | So we heard that our principal is going to let all the students to participate in one activity of their choice. But I have both reasons that might go alright or not. Lets just say if I agree or disagree with the principal decision and hopefully that our principal has a good feeling about this decision.
Lets start with a positive reasons. First responsibility, if the students get a activity that takes a lot of serious responsibility like for example serve on the student council or working on the yearbook, activity like that those have real responsibility to take care of. Next is not knowing it was the students talent, all activity will fill up very quickly and if any teacher puts a student that is not their favorite class they will notice that their very talented on a activity that they didn't like. Last positive reason overwhelmed, the student will get overwhelmed and sometimes is alright but at the end they still love the class.
Second, start with the negative reasons. It won't be their favorite if a student want to be a class so bad but then a teacher decides to put him/her to different class it's likely that the student wont be liking the class not a bit. Overwhelming, it's going to the same thing but the opposite its almost the same topic as the last reason of not liking the class and overwhelmed is the part cause of not liking the class which lead to our third last negative reason, dropping out its most likely that they gonna drop out the class it will get so stress and overwhelmed that the student decides to quit and that lead to have a no responsiblilty in life.
So I do agree with principal student or people need to have responsibility in life and without it theres going to be no job for that person who decided to drop of the activity they got asigned. | 4 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
443AA4F38C8B | I agree with Emerson's statement about individuality because, i think if you want to do something be yourself in the boren world then you have to change the style of living, make yourself change the way you want it to be, everyone have a different thinking and opinions about their life.
However, sometime is really hard to achief that goal, some other people can't do what they want because is take alot of time and fail, when people are doing the something the same over over again, but maybe when they are change to defferent, i feel everyone go work so early on the morning make people over time feeling really tired and bord, some people work at 3 or 4 make them tired but they can't change anything because they have no choose about their life, but people can change to a different thing so they can be more better person.
People change what they do alot but also they scare if they going to fail it, alot they don't really take a other step with something new so whatever they do, people need to change the way they think about thing around them so they can make decision about they like or don't like. Everyone got a good choose or a good decision about their life but the importand is to define the choose that they make and desigh more about they decision so they can become more better, in world have a lot of famous people that make a lot of defferences about their life, a lot of story before they are become famous person, they all normal people just like everyone else but they just be themself so they become a different person when they planed their own way to go or to do on their life.
The world not choose you but you have to choose the world. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
444D784C5791 | Having the benefit to work alone or in groups is a good thing. Some say that working alone is much better than working in groups because you get no distraction, you also have more advantage to get more work done on time, and get more time to actually think about your answers and not having to worry about someone telling you different, if your wrong or right.
When working in a group, you always end up doing all the work yourself or someone else copying the answer from your work becasue they didn't wanna work do their part of the work. Working in groups is not always a bad idea but when you end up doing the work yourself then it is. We sometime wanna work with people we hang out with, but in the end you never get work done. Someone is always doing all the work and that's when everybody copy's from that person's work, when they finshed the work.
To start off, working alone can cause you less distractions and it would also help you concentrate more on your work. For example, my phone brings down a lot of distraction to me, so therefore I put down my phone for a while and concentrate more on doing my work instread of being distracted on my phone and not getting any work done. That's why have less distractions and being concentrated more could get you to finsh more work on time.
Second of all, you also would get more advantage of getting work done on time. You would take your time to actually do the work instead of guessing or rushing to get done first. For instance, if you were working with a group, you would barely get any work done, but if you work alone you could get more work done than what the group would get done.
Lastly, you could actually think about your answers and why you choose that answer choice. For instance, if you were working in a group y'all wouldn't talk or think about the answer choice, y'all would just guess for every question so y'll would be the first ones to be done. When you work alone it's different, you take your time, look over your answer choices and double check to see if that's the correct answer.
In conclusion, these are the benifits for working alone and not wokring with groups, working alone is so much peaceful and easier then having to work with a group and rush your work and guessing on every question. Having to concentrate therefore less distractions, also having more time to actually get work done and lastly looking over your answer choices carefully. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
4462E068017D | This prompt is asking if they should reduce summer vacations because they think its hard for students to retain informartion easily after a long break.
Summer you can travel with your family to different places and have fun and not to worry about school things. Students should have summer break after months of been at school and they can take their stress out during the big break and focus on other things outside of school. You can travel to different places or countrys to see your love ones if you haven't seem them in a long time. Summer is like enjoy myself time because you can do things you can't do while you are in a school year because its a short time but summer is like two months break. Students can go to retake classes during the summer if they fail and they want to recover a credit for a class. Students that play sports would have more fun enjoying playing it because they don't have to worry about anything but stay in shape for their sports and they have more time to play sports. For the students that like to read a lot they have a lot of time to their self and can spend major of their time at the library reading tons of books. Students that like to travel a lot they can anywhere and later they can write journal or take pictures and tell their classmates how their summer went.
Bad things if they reduce summer break will be more school time. People wouldn't be able to go places because they have to attent to school and they would have to worry a lot. Most people would be stress from school if they don't have a long break like summer. Summer wouldn't be fun for students because thats when they all gather together and they have fun and enjoy theirselfs.
I think the school boards should not reduce summer break because you can travel with your family to different places and have fun and not to worry about school things. Students should have summer break after months of been at school and they can take their stress out during the big break and focus on other things outside of school. You can travel to different places or countrys to see your love ones if you haven't seem them in a long time. Summer is like enjoy myself time because you can do things you can't do while you are in a school year because its a short time but summer is like two months break. Students can go to retake classes during the summer if they fail and they want to recover a credit for a class. Students that play sports would have more fun enjoying playing it because they don't have to worry about anything but stay in shape for their sports and they have more time to play sports. For the students that like to read a lot they have a lot of time to their self and can spend major of their time at the library reading tons of books. Students that like to travel a lot they can anywhere and later they can write journal or take pictures and tell their classmates how their summer went. This is my support and i agree that they shouln't reduce summer break because it will have everyone go crazy. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
446CE95CF3F2 | Learning experince from others could help you a lot. The problem is that most people think that learning from others wouldn't help. The reason why learning from the experince from others is so you could learn from their mistakes, learn what they went through, and how they dealt with it.
You learn from peoples mistakes. If you learn from other peoples mistakes you could avoid them. I find it really helpful when I learn from others mistakes. Learning mistakes could help you in life to be sucssesful. My friends make a lot of mistakes which I learn from them. Most people do think making mistakes isn't a good thing, but I think it could help you improve on what you did wrong. What I'm saying is that learning mistakes frorm others is a good thing.
You learn what they went through. Learning what others went through could help you understand people more. Understanding people could help you understand people more. Another reason is that learning what they went through could help you a lot in the future. If you find someone like them, you could help them. You could get close to the person and know them better. getting to know someone could help you make a friend, which is something everyone needs. learning from other and what they went through could help you sometime in the future.
You could learn different ways on how they solved their problem. When you find out how they solved their problem, it could help you. You could be going through the same thing and might need help or advice. If someone else is going through it, you could help them or give advice. In my opinion, helping others is a big thing in life. You learn that most people could have the same struggle, and they solve it in different ways. I think it's a good thing to know that two people went through the same thing, and had different ways to solve it. In conclusion, you should learn how others deal with their problems.
Learning experince form others will help you learn form their mistakes, what they went through, and how they dealt with it. My claim is that you should always learn from others. Learning from others will defenitly help you in the future. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
447221C3FA00 | " Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"
Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". The thing is that if we going to do something good we have to failure anyways because for example, we are excited and we are going with enthusiasm to get a great results, but you never fail in the life and your enthusiasm is up. Success is failure one, two, trhee time. You are a human without loss enthusiasm is hard because some people have not enthusiasm to do the right things don't have power and are weak when herad something bad. I'm agree with him because to be a successfuly in the future your going to failre a lot of time. I have a friend that told me to get success in the life have to to fail and don't loss enthusiasm.
For me fail in my life is not something really bad, but just a little bit, you can keep getting good without problem. This is a important role because all people can think what they have to do about failure and how they can be preparate when their enthusiasm is up and later is down. Failure for me is not a mistake because by those mistake you learn and you can be better person. Some reason to be agree with him is that is true, you have to fail first and happens what the happens. Some people are not agree with this statement because they think that if you fail you going to be bad and your enthusiasm going down. Support ideas is not easy because this world have different kind of people with different kind of mind. Good examples to be success is do the best thing and if you fail don't say nothing to nobody, just do it and that sit. Some teenegers have the same problems everyday because when they are fail they think that something happen going to happen to them but they are their success to consist of going from failure.
In my conclusion I'm going to say that if you want to success in your life is necessary to fail because you learn from experience, you going to do everything right. For me in my future I'm not going to say nothing about failin g because I'm going to be calmly because I knew that with experience could be preparate for my problems. We have to be positive each day because you going to remember all the failure that you had in your past. I think fail is not bad for my life because it going to be a great experience. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
4477C08B4960 | Imagine that you are in the classroom two minutes before the teacher asked you to take out your homework, in that moment you remember that you didn't do the worksheet because you don't understand it, and you don't have anybody to help you.
First, kids have some problems to do their homework, or they don't understand what to do. Many childrens' have problem to stay focus in their homework, for example, many kids get distracted by little things ,or a person distracted them. Afterschool homework club is a great idea to help students, because the teachers can help them, and never miss a homework again. Also, they are many students that the fist thing they do when they get out of school is to play videogames.
Next, some childs know how how to do their work, but they only need motivation to do it. Teachers do fun games for the kids to do their work in a fun way. Many prefer to play games, and not to do their work. All students likes to play, so teachers make games that is related to the homework to the students do it, or make it more easier for them.
Furthermore, students don't write their homework in the agenda, so they forget to do it, or sometimes they are playing and don't remember to do their work. When a child don't understand something the teachers can explain them in afterschool to they understand better. If the students are in the afterschool homework club they never will miss a homework again because the teacher will help them.
Finally, the kids that is in the afterschool homework club will get good grades, because the kids return their assignments. If the kids don't understand something in the afterschool club explain the students to understand more. However, afterschool club is a great idea to help students, because the teachers, and friends can help the student, and never miss a homework again. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
44B06B4A6D7E | Schools offer distant learning as an option for student's who likes work from home, can there be good or bad benefits from working at home?. I think that working at home would not benefit student's, reason being home is more comfortable and relaxing .Working at a public school can help you get opportunity's with friend's or teacher's like a job or college career. Public school is more efficient because, other students can help you out on work and at home no one is there to ask for help. Talking to a teacher in person can be so much more helpful then on a computer . Staying after school is a big benefit to people who prefer public school because you can get work done that is needed, but at home I feel like you can't get the same help you need on the work.
Working from home can have its benefits like being with family more often. Working from home can be challenging for some people because home is more comfortable therefore the student would become more lazy and get bad grades. One thing about working at home is you would make your own schedule which could be flexible to your own time. Students who work at home would have no one to help them out with work outside of class which would be hard on the student
Students who go to public schools will benefit more then the students that work at home. Public schools bring more opportunity's as distant learning would not get as many . This issue could be solved depending on the student, some students like to be at home and some like to go to public schools . Public schools help student's with college information and helps the student choose his path in life. Working in a public school environment, helps more students do better in there classes makes them more productive. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
44BD35E3BD1D | A positive attitude is the key to success in life.
I agree with that.
I always have my smile with me, i don't like the people with bad mood or sad . everybody told i'm the most happy person who see in the world, in my school i have one friend special and she always sad but when she was with me she always smile, and the teacher told me when you are with her she always smile i never see she like that and i was like i like the people smile or with good attitude, it's does't matter if you have problem you smile, the life is beautiful like for me. i like to make happy the persons that's why i want to work in the hospital with children, I want to make for each other one smile this is my dream and i know i'm going to make it.
first when I had 19 years old and I was in United States for seven years ago, In my brain had the idea the to be a Citizenship for United States of America when i'm twenty one years i'm doing the quiz, is good idea to be Citizenship for two countries. When the day come down i was so nervous because i was like what happen if i'm not pass i was in negative but my families told you need to be in positive. you do it and to being positive and pass 1 hour later and the people who had my test he told you pass the test i was like i can't believe and my familie of outside i said to them i pass and they tell me i told you you need to be positive in the things you want. Because if you do with bad mood you does't understand. Because when you have the opportunity and realistic you do it and be positive. even though need to be positive because negative is not good for the live.
second realist, when i was in the school in mexico i want to play soccer because my both brothers likes to play soccer and me too so my brother ask to me a question you want to play soccer in your school and i was like yes y want it , so my brother wont to see in the school how can i play soccer and he's do the paper for the school and two weeks later i go for the first time to coach i was exciting, and three months for practice, and then for the last three months we had the first game and i was make a goal and for the third game some girls hit me with a ball and when i was running i had bill my leg i i go the the hospital and the doctor told i can't play more because my leg was so bad if i had other bill probably my leg go so bad and the doctor and my familie does't want to play more but my old brother give me to the specialist doctor for my leg because i was so sad for not play and does's like how i'm looks like , so for one years for treatment now i can't play.
third, it's does't matter if you have problem you smile, the life is beautiful like for me. i like to make happy the persons that's why i want to work in the hospital with children, I want to make for each other one smile this is my dream and i know i'm going to make it,I always have my smile with me, i don't like the people with bad mood or sad . everybody told i'm the most happy person who see in the world, in my school i have one friend special and she always sad but when she was with me she always smile, and the teacher told me when you are with her she always smile i never see she like that and i was like i like the people smile or with good attitude. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
44C1594D0950 | You can be a good musician or a good soccer player but in order for you to get better at what you do,In order for you to be successful in life,In order for you to win a competition or a race you have to try to do something beyond what you have already mastered. My name is Generic_Name. I attend Generic_School and i am a student athlete,i play soccer and football and based on my experience in these sports i agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson.
I have three main reasons why i agree Author Emerson,and the first reason is to get better at what you are doing you have to take bigger steps. In order for me to get better at football and soccer, i have to try to do something beyond what i used to do. I take personal Fitness in school and my goal is to get stronger, but i cannot get stronger if i keep on lifting the same weights i can not i get stronger if am always benching the same weight.
My second reason is that, it helps you win a race or in other words it can help you win a compettion. It is just like Uber competing with lyft, they both good at what they do but in order for uber to gain more customers they have to try to do something that is beyond what they have mastered. I play as a striker in soccer and i play as conerback in football but am not the only striker on the socccer team and am not the only cornerback on the football team so in order for me to start on the team i have to work harder than i used to.
My third reason is it will help you be successful in life. I just found out that the owner of Amazon started in a garage,when i first heard i told myself that he wouldn't be successful if did not take bigger steps in life and even though he is successful he is still taking bigger steps. Also, Trump had everything he wanted cars,money, houses but still wanted to compete with Clinton for the presidency. Let's use an iphone for instance,the more they keep on upgrading it the more they gain more customers. A lot of successful entrepreneurs took bigger steps by getting a loan to start their business.
Some people will say you don't have to try to do something beyond what you have mastered,you just have to try to do new things but trying new things does not help you grow because how is adding another workout to my old workout making me stronger?,I have to increase the weight to make me stronger or how am i gaining more customers or how am i growing or how is my business growing if am still working from a garage?, in order for my business to grow or for me to gain more customers i have to take some bigger steps like getting loan to find a new place.
I agree with Author Emerson because you can be perfect in what you do,you can be perfect in life but you have to try to do something beyond what you have already mastered to keep you growing. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
44D395C2AD83 | The success can consists from failure to failure. Sometimes life is hard but never loss your enthusiasm. Not everything in life is going to be great as you planned. From your mistakes you learn something new or how can you succes in something that you fail. You always need to think positive doesn't matter if you fail and fail again but you going to have success in your life just believe that you can do it.
First, Many times in your life you will feel like you cannot do it anymore but never give up you have to keep goin until you reach your goal. Life can be hard and you can fail many times but never loss your faith. Your enthusiasm and your faith fot what you want to reach is going to be your better weapons in your success. Never loss your enthusiasm because, you can reach your success but nothing in life is always easy.
Second, Mistakes or failure are good in life because, thats is what teach you what you are doing wrong or what can you do for reach your success. I know many people that had been in many mistakes or failures, but they never give up and they had been patience to be successful in life. Sometimes people think if they fail one time, they cannot do it better next time or improve. Your failure, is not always bad as you think it is.
Third, People sometimes fail and they are close from reach their goals or they success, but they think that everything is done. If you believe in your self that you can do it and you have faith everything will be possible in your life. People think that an obstacle in your life will be an excuse to not keep going and reach your success. Sometimes you have to pass for many obstacles in your life because like I said life is not easy and every success need sacrifice.
Finally, In life to have success you have to work hard and sacrifice in order to reach your success. Failure is a big obstacle in your life because, it can make you to give up and not try or continue reaching your goal or success. Faith, bellieve in your self, pray for what you want and work hard these are some facst that can keep pushing you for your success. If you think you cannot do something that you never have done and you are scare to fail just try, doesn't matter if you do it wrong, but you are going to learn what you cannot do next time. Failure help you to pursuit your success and it's something that all humans we have to do because we are not perfects. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
44D6EEDAE5BD | Most people will just act all childish just because they are having a bad day without even thinking that it can ruin their future. Bad impressions usually lead to failure, it can ruin opportunities, and people can also get themselves mistaken. I agree that someone's first impressions are almost impossible to change because it can affect their future.
Firstly to begin with, first impressions usually lead to failure in life when they are bad impressions. People need to learn how to act politely even if they are full of sorrow inside without showing it. When people make bad impressions about themselves, it always makes it harder for other people to see who that person really is. Loosing big opportunities always lead to a challenging future.
Secondly another, bad impressions always ruin many opportunities for people, especially young people. It is an every day thing in the United States. People can loose job opportunities and it makes it harder for them to get a second chance. Second chances are really big deal, no one can live without them. If someone did some awful things and did not get another chance, then that person just lost an opportunity of a lifetime and is going to regret it for the rest of his or her life.
Also, people get themselves mistaken all the time because of that. Other people will never see that person for who he or she really is when that person is acting in an unusual way which is not normal. They will look at that person as he introduced himself as. They would not want nothing to do with him. They would also think that he is mean even if he is just having a bad day.
In conclusion, no one should let problems make them show a bad impression about themselves. Everyone has problems. They just need to learn how to control themselves and not make any scenes about it to embarrass themselves. They should know that the consequences are real and they are not games. People need to grow up, be responsible, act fairly, and be happy. | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
44DCCF637033 | DEAR PRINCIPAL
All the students should perform community service because the adults are out there working the whole day and when they come back home they want to drive on a clean community. The students when they do community service they are learning about their future life it is like a job you can't slack off. The adults don't have enough time to do community work with their job and all that but who has more free time than the students or kids . That is not all when we clean up our community our children our going to live in a clean community so help make a better future. The students may this is corny but they know too that they want their children to in a clean community and for their grandchildren. The community service could be any not just cleaning up also help tutor your neighbors child with home work and any thing out side your house helping is community service. You can babysit your neighbors kids and other peoples kids too that could count as community. The teachers could have like a game where who ever does the most community service gets like a prize of the class.
There would be like when a student gets suspended they have do community work and give him or her an hour or more time .
So principal encourage more students to do community service during the day or after school. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
44E2726DA1B3 | Your principal has decided all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity. I agree because now days all kids do is stay home and be on there phones and do nothing. I know that because I used to do the same thing before and i didn't like to do anything at all but then I started playing a sport and it help a lot but i think that. Participating in a extracurricular activity may help you by staying healthy, get you out of trouble,and get you in a good college.
one example is staying healthy by playing a sport you can help prevent a lot of things like maintain a good weight, and keep you from getting sick. Keeping a good weight is good for your health because it keeps you from getting other diseases,more than 1/4 of the people in the U.S. are obese. Why not start at a young age and prevent from being sick and other things. Another thing that can help is eating healthy, we can prevent sickness to in order to do that you might want to think about trying out a new sport.
Another example is getting you out of trouble you can avoid a lot of drama. I learned that social media can get you into a lot of trouble, half of the time a lot of the drama comes from social media. Maybe if you join a club or a sports team you can think before doing something that can get you in trouble. One time my friend made the soccer team but she got in trouble so they kicked her off the team and she learned from her mistake and never got in trouble again. When in your in a cub or playing a sports half of the time you don't have time to be in drama get in trouble.
Last example is joining a club, working on the year book,serve in the student council and, playing a sport can get you into a good college now a days colleges are looking to see if you have participated in any sports or clubs. When i graduate high school i want to go to college and a study to be a general surgeon and participating in a sport or joining a club can help me get into a college. You meed new people when you join new clubs and make new friend ships. When you want to go into a club or in sports do something that you like not something your friends like or something that can help you in life with.
In conclusion staying healthy,getting out of trouble,and going into a new college can help you when you participate in a extracurricular activity. staying healthy by playing a sports and eating healthy can prevent you from getting sick. Staying out of trouble can avoid a lot of drama from school and social media think before you do something your going to regret . Joining a club or participating in a sport can help you get into the college you want and you can meet new people and make new friend ships. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
450A7F9AC54A | It was wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing for our gale or accomplish. I personally agreed with the " Thomas Jefferson wrote.
" Determine never to be idle" It is not good when you are not doing much work. Don't be un idle.
I support my idea with several reasons.
First of all,
I personally agreed with the Thomas Jefferson wrote. If you use your time properly,time is very important in your life you will be productive day use your time. For example I must be weak up in the morning do my exercise every day. I will be healthy It is very important when you have a good healthy. After that you will be managing your time for the hole day by firshing your time. Then I go on time my school. Because to have a good skill is very important. "knowledge is a power" I will get my a good education. Also, I go to my job and make my money in the mean time. For this reasons when use your time that will be a good productive day makes you happy. I heat to be seat and watching TV all day and play game.
Second, I am very happy for making some one happier or helping.
Because on my extra time I always go to the library and working as a voluntary helper for some people need help. Also, what ever i have information I shard with people and give a good information then make them happier.
In addition, I always go with the alimentary school when they have school trip.
Helping for the teacher. Especially, working with the kids it is fun and having a good time when i help the kids it make me happy.
Third, you will be a successful and accomplish your life. When you work hard you will be have a good life for the rest of your life. At the same time all your family have a good life. In addition, Life is short you need to be work hard don't be rune slowly it is good to be not idle. The more you work the more get success.
Eventhough, some times have a difficult time never give up you have to be strong and continue do some thing. Also, when you have a bud habite avoid as soon as a possible to be a successful person.
Incounuclsion, It was wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing the right way.
It is not good running slowly or not doing much work.
you should be work hard and discipline for every thing. That's way I agree with the wonderful Idea ' Thomas Jefferson wrote'
"Determine never to be idle. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
451321E506A6 | I think students doing home assignments will not benefit the student, because it doesn't help the student grasp the same kind of concepts like other students that do go to school.
The reason why I personally don't like home schooling is because if I'm at home I wouldn't get my work done. I'd be distracted by looking at my dog and looking at what my mom would be doing. Another reason why I would not like it is because I'm not getting the same kind of education like most of the other students. I wouldn't have the chance to learn with my classmates or go on trips to historical monuments and historical musuems with them. When you're home schooled you're mostly self-taught.
One other reason why I wouldn't reccommend home schooling is because you're not interacting with other students which can cause depression and anxiety. Another reason why home schooling is not such a great idea is because when he learns how to write and read and play a musical instrument and masters soccer, running, or other sports in general how will this particular student learn how to communicate to the real world if the parent has kind of isolated him from meeting people. One of the other reasons why home schooling is bad is because the fact that parents may lose patience when they are trying to educate their children. Some parent may be too overbearing or impatient, which may cause the child to react in a negative manner.
I think home schooling is a bad idea is because he wouldn't get the proper education like most students in school. That could possibly effect the student and also that student is not interacting with other students which could lead to depression and axiety. If the parent loses their patience the child would start to act up on them. For all of these reasons home schooling is not a good idea. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
451A840C382E | yes i am agree with Emerson statement: if we attempt to do something in our life to make a better life or what we have already otherwise we will never Develope.
what kind of attempting we have to do for development? we need to have education for development that we can make our life better.
we can start our education from beginning of our life which is called school, college, university, and etc.
we should learn and keep our education in these places until we reach to our goal and success.
education is a best option for us that we can know everything, make our mistake correct, and we try to receive our diploma as soon as possible by hard studying, and every day learning the new things base on our life.
we should looking for the way that we can grow our self and do not lose our opportunity in during our life.
education is a process of life can grow your mind to better know about new stuff. this is a chance probably happen for one time, but it doesnt matter whenever you get it. basically when the students finish these process,
they will graduate, and then they will gain their diploma from any of those places after that, they will become a educated person with a high careers in their society.
although, some of the people dont like studying, or maybe they dont want it, they are preferring work careers instead of education. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3.5 |
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