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2D63639F997F | Is it having a possitive attitude the key to succes in life?
If someone would ask me if a possitive attitude is the key to be succesful in life. I honesty would agree with them. Because in a big part of life everyone is going to have to deal with ups and downs, Some more than others but everyone have to go through something bad for something good to happend. everyone have to fight for what they want, and on that fight is going to be bad parts and good parts but if you stay possitive most of the time you are going to win the fight , accomplish what you were loooking for and be succesful, But if you aren't just keep trying and be possitive everytime.
Always have possitive thoughts a possitive attitude and keep trying, Get up over and over intuil you accomplish your dreams, Do not give up because if something i have learn is that if you give up and think negative, you would never be succesful and know what you are actually capleble of, Thats why a lot of people is just stock in the same place because they are scare for what is going to happen, Because they have more negative thoughts then positive ones, That's making them not be succesful in life, thinking that they are better where they are and not where they can be.
A example from my life is when life just decided to punch me in the face, just change my life. About two years ago when i was in freshmen year of high school, my doctor told me that i have a bad arteria is the vein that gives oxygen to the heart, So i had to have a heart surgery.
This is how everything started, One day I woke up got ready to go to school, went to school like usual. at the time I was in middle school, Generic_School, I was playng soccer and i have got to tired went to the bathroom I felt like something wasnt right, I drop to the ground and felt nausia, I didnt give it any atention and just kept going with my day like normal. Almost around six months later i had another mini heart attack, But at the time i didnt know what it was. I was just laying on my bed and i just started feeling a sharp pain in the chest, But it went away in about 30 minutes. when everything got serious was later on about another six months later when I was at school at the time i was almost finishing freshmen year at Generic_School, my chest started to hurt badin class, So what i did was go to sleep in class and see if it would go away, Then when i woke up the pian wasn't there anymore. I wen to my house and about 4 hours later the pain started again and it was bad so I told my mom and we went to the emergency room in the hospital. At the time i had a infection in my trought so the doctor said that it was doe to the infection, then they told me to go to a heart specialist. The apointment was on a monday my mom had decided that we wern't going to go so she call the place to cancel the appointment and they told her that it was important for me to go because it was something serious. They told us that what i had was mini heart attacks, he told us that i was going to have to get a heart surgery because there was more posibilities for me to die of a heart attck then to die during the surgery, so i didnt have any other choise more then take the chance and have the surgery done.
The whole time i was pissitive, I wasn't scare at all i didn't have bad thoughts. So the day that i was going to have my surgery finally came. The doctors read to me all the chances that i had to die if something went wrong bacuse they had to stop my heart and conect the veins t a machine so they could work on my heart, i was just calm and thinking possitive all the time with a smile on my face and having a possitive attitude. I had my surgery and everything went perfect in a week i was out of the hospital, In about three months i couln't wait any longer so i got a job start working making moneyand going to school, always possitive. And now i am makin almost
$1,100 per week and i'm just 18 years old still bought my second car crash it fix it and sold it then I bought me a 2017 Subaru WRX STI and my life is just going better and better some down and ups but getting up no matter wha, always trying and giving bad moments a smile and always possitive because things always are going to hapend but that's how life is. I dont know where i would be right now if i had a bad attitude all the time, and negative thoughts, thanks god i'm still here alive.
Hope you guys like it and remeber always possitive attitude. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
2D6FA4DEBFD6 | Its a good idea for students to commit to a career at young age because their ready for work, they have specialized classes, and they will already have a plan figured out.
My firsr reason why I agree for students to commit to a career at young age because they give you opportunities after graduating high school. you won't find it hard to figure out what you really want after graduating high school. once you have enough work experience, it will be interested in college. this can save you form career mistakes, and save you time and money. also you will be more competitive when applying for college. and your experience or part time job can build a srtong profile for you as an applicant.
My most important reason why I agree for students to commit to a career because ,It gives a sense of direction to our life by giving life a purpose worth fulfilling. Achieving career of satisfaction to us It also helps us attain certain status in life and society.
In conclusion, these are the reasons why I agree Its a good idea for students to commit to a career at young age because their ready for work ,and they have a plan what should they do after graduating high school and they have experience these will help them when they plan go to college . | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
2D8464A3BD5B | One year ago. I though that business was the career that I wanted to study, but it was really hard to me. I could not do anything good in that class. I was fail that class and I was really stressful I did not knew what to do. I realized that business it was not for me, but I though that was to late to change my decision. I talk with my counselor and she said that I could change the career. So, I
decided to chose another career and now I know what career it is the right one for me. I do not know if I going to change it again, because I can be a undecided person. As well, I realized that happens every time that it was normal. I talk with my classmate, and they say that same thing happen with them. Although some say that is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students can select courses in their high schools to help them improve in their right career, actually it is a bad idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students might select a wrong career that is not right for them and students can be undecided in what they want to study.
Some say that is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students can select courses in their high schools to help them improve in their right career. The only problem is that they do not know that is a problem for students. Everyday I heard students, classmate or even my friends that said '' This class is really hard for me, but I can not change it because this class help me improve my career".
That words make me think that they are unhappy and stressful.
The best way to help students is that they can change a new career. Maybe that career that they are starting are not for them or students can be undecided in what they want to study, and they just pick one.
There is a lot of reasons why is a bad idea that students commit to a career at a young age, but I just have two of them.
In addition, it is a bad idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students might select a wrong career that is not right for them. The dream of all kids it is to be like their parents. They want to study the career that their parents studied, even go to the same university they parents go. Sometimes is different their parents put pressures on them to studied a career that they dont want. So, students chose the career that their parents studied or they parents wants them to study . Then they realized that the career they pick is not right for them. This is a problem because now students are unhappy and stressful. Sometimes they wants to quit school because they think school is hard for them. When is just because they pick the wrong career. If someone do a statistic about how students feel about their career that they chose. I think the probability of that students said that they think the career they pick is not for them will be above of one hundred percent.
Also, it is a bad idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students can be undecided in what they want to study. There are a lot of career that students can pick, it is difficult just pick one. Students can find skills that help them in another career. Even though their skills are good in the career they pick before. They decide to pick another career. Sometime the decision that students takes are not the right one, but they continue experiment new careers. That is basically life is about, decision. When students takes a wrong decision in their careers. they are learning. Maybe students decides to learn two careers or more than two they take different course or classes to achieves their goals. I think students can be undecided in what they want to study and that is the best thing that help them in their career, is good that students can experiment different courses.
In conclusion, it is a bad idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students might select a wrong career that is not right for them and students can be undecided in what they want to study. Sometimes students can be very impulsive and can chose whatever career they want, but they not realize what career is the right one. Also, students sometimes could not decide what career they want to study. The best way to help students is to let them know what they want to learn. I think students will be more decide in whatever they want to study. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
2D940E7F240C | Do you think that schools should extend the school hours for 1 hour and 30 min? I agreee with this plan because it would help students education.
It can help students with their education:
The teachers would be able to explain more to the students so they can understand properly. Teachers can help educate the students by using the extra time to do more projects. The teachers can read more books with the class so they can be good readers and writers.
It would give students less days of school:
Students can get more relaxing time and come to school with a lot of energy. Students can get more time working on school work/homework at home during the weekend. Students wouldn't have to worry about going to school on the days that the school chooses to skip.
It can help students can get a lot smarter with extra hours:
The students can get extra time to do homework and trying to understand everything during the extra 1 hour and 30 minutes. The teachers can take the whole class to the library to check out or read books with the classroom. Students can have an extended gym time to get rid of all the energy inside them so they can learn and obtain all the information from the teachers.
I think that the extra 1 hour and 30 minutes would help students with education. It can really help the students because they get more time on their weekends and it gives them more time to study,work on homework, or finish a project. Should schools give more time for the teachers and students? | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
2DAA07621328 | Technology is taking the must attention than the comunicacion with other peolpe. Technology allows to complete many task without having contact with other people. Algouth, people say that technology is the future of our lives. Nevertheless I think people have the reason and this bring negatives effects on people's lives, the technology is taking our comunication with other person but its true we are going foward so each day the technology its growing in to our daily lives. In this present people can check out any book they want to read, shop, and play video games without speaking with other to another person.
In the past the people could come in the librery search for a book that the person wanted to read or ask to one of the employes from the librery for help to find a book and then that person will take a seat and spend the time he want to spend in the librery reading that book, that person comunicated with someone but now in this present people don't talk to any one because of the technology. In this present you don't have to move to anywhere to read a book you can do it from your house seating in your sofa just with one clic with the computer. The technoly helop us im many ways but depends and how you are usining. I used to go to the librery and read many books but like I said before now I just read a book in my room from my tablet and I did not need to speak with any person.
Go to the shopping store and buy thing for the bathrooom, livingroom, garden, and the garage was funy in the past because you were talk with people at the store during you were serch for some items. technoly change the way how to shop because you can use your computer to shop in online even if you don't have a computer you can do it from your phone the technology change our live in many ways. Technology is taking our laughs,smile,and the opportunity to met some friend. I used to buy some food at Chipotle restaurant and I laugh when I see my working at Chipotle and that is how should have to be, not how I do now, I just use my phone to order food from the app Uber Eats and they bring my food to my door and that it.
Have fun with friends in the school,strets,and the parks it chagend thanks to the technology. This reason why technology it changed our way how to live makes me feel sad, childs in the past used to have fun with anything because technology not was to big. but that changed when parents started to buy a cell phone for thir kid thta was the most error they could do because kids doesn't have the must intelligent brain to reconize how long they spend their time in the cell phones, technology took the childhood of our kid. when I was a kid like 10 year old I used to play with my friends after school in the floor with littler cars and we inmagent that we are like pilot of faters cars it was so funy. I think our kind have to enjoy their live having fun, not spend the time with the cell phones playing games.
To conclud I thing it has limitation of human cantact due to the use of technology had negative effects on people's lives. Those negative effect could destroy our lives for just use the technoly every single minute. the comunication with others its over because the technology is taking the must time of our lives. True technology is the future of the world but keep it in main how you can use the technology and the technology don't use you. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
2DDFC0DFC442 | Highschool is a big step in the growth of students. The step from middle school to highschool is a very diffecult one. As kids start to grow older there minds also change and sometimes the dreams they had of becoming someone or something is different in highschool.
Many young students in highschool don't really know what they want to be when they get older. And sometimes highschool forces kids to try to find the job or jobs they want to do when they get older. I feel like as a highschool student my self, and as an 11th grader I still don't know what I want to be when I am older. I feel like for young adults like me school isnt the only thing they have in mind. For example, I have a lot of out of school activitys that take away from always just focusing on school. Also for highshcool kids relationships can be a hard. They take up all your time and they also make you angry and stressed. And that can also take away from learning and your future as I know very well myself.
As young adults, Students that don't really have the ropes done in our day to day life in highschool I dont think commiting to a career in highschool is a good idea. I think schools should be teaching kids about different jobs and fields they might want to get into. But I dont think forcing kids to make there choises in highschool is something teachers should be focusing on. Instead they should be focusing on how different students learn in others ways. There are always kids that can learn and achive everything by just sitting in a class room and listening to a teacher talk. And there are the kids that can't just learn in a class room. The kids that have hard time at school becasue they have disabilities.
Teaching students in highschool to be succesful is what highschool need to do. I feel like schools mainly focus on getting kids to collage and what not. But some students dont want to go to collage or even get a job durring or even after school. I feel like school should help students become successful in school but not drive them towards anything. Meaning students should feel free to do what ever they want after highschool. And it all starts with teachers asking kids what they want to do when they grow up. And a lot of students dont even know what they are going to do in the next 2 months to come.
Sometimes collage is not what everyone wants. For me I want to take a gap year right out of highschool. And go play soccer somewhere. In my highschool days so far, Highschool was always been hard and its a big step from middle school. The teachers are not really on you as much as they were in middle school. So it makes u feel like u have more time for yourself. And its good in some ways becasue it teachers u how to be indepentent. But also as teachers give u more lead way students become more likely to do worse. They think its just easy to skip classes and not get in trouble. So for me everything that i have explained makes choosing a career during highschool really hard.
All in all students should feel like they have the fredom to do what they want when they are at the later years of highschool with out the burden of everyone around him or her telling them they have to go to collage or that they have to choose a career when they are in highschool.
I think Making studetns choose a career when they are in highschool is not something schools should be focused on. They should be focusing on having kids grow and not having them choose there careers at a young age. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
2DE38160D46B | I don't believe school should follow in businesses footsteps and do the four-day school week. I believe that school should stick with the five-day school week. Because it would be better for the students in the long run.
If school keep the five-day school week there would be a lot of benefits with that. like if students have five-day school week there would be so much free time for students to do whatever they want like take care of responsibility, after school clubs, homework, study. And free time is way more useful to students.
Now some can argue saying that if school had four-day school week they would have more time because they would have a extra day off of school. And that true but there a catch with that it only one extra day off like say if you were in a club and you meet on Thursday then you would have to show up to the club later because school was longer now of course i'm using that as an example. So if school did have the four-day school week then yes you would have a extra day but like I said before there would be a catch to it.
Now even i'm not going to lie and say that five-day school week is the greatest thing they have there. They do have there down fall. Like for starter we have five days where we have to show up to school. And also school is long on enough with the five-day school week. So yea... five-day school week do suck too.
In conclusion, I believe that school should keep five-day school week and not the four-day school week. As I believe that it is better for students in the long run. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
2DFC9CC1793A | I agree that loser can try to achieve success their are many types of loser who try and get success in around the world like in school some student can't pass the sol and some student pass quick in one time, but the loser who fail the sol first time he gonna try to achieve and pass in second time because every old man say never give up do it whit hard work, and do whit your heart then the success will come to you essylry.
Next, to be honest a lot of success can harm you because they can'tcontrol them self and invest their money anywere like in casino in Alcohol,Druges, and all that can harm your feature like your kides gonna be have so much money he will get everything what he need sport Car, nice House, so he will think i dont have to do anything he dose'nt have the stress on his mind to do somthing in life in small age he will smoke Cigrate and Drink Alcohol.
Then, if you control your success in right position your feature gonna be amazing like obama he is the Presedent of United State of America he have a so much power in his hand to do anything, but the most important thing is he know how to use that power he have big coltrole on his success he also have lot of money,but he don't have any bad habit like Drug or somthing he also made his feature good and he say to his two daughter he say to them go and find work for your self you guys can dependenton me you have to satnd on your legs and show the world what you can do every.
On the other hand, big example of the presedent of India first he was on the street he selling tea and he dose not have enough money to study,but luck is most important in our life his luck chang and he is the presedent of india he did so much stragle and hard work in his life and get success,but he don't have any controle on his success and he invest money on useless things and people in india say he is not a good for
India people hat him he higher the cost of fule,food,elericety,rent and more, and if he had the controle on his success India was gonna be like America.
Finilly, I campare both American and Indian presedent and see the success and failure power in my opinion the United State of America have the success controle power that's why people like to leve there and they also like there presedent,and India dose not have success power that's why people dose'nt like presedent,and they don't want to leve their, so this is the power of success if you use carefully you good but if you don't you die. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
2E043F67934C | According to former bristish prime minister, Wilson Churchile, he said, " success is consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". Which indicates that bieng generaly successful is formed by multiple mistakes and, over and over failures and also being passionate to what we want to achieve. In my opinion, I'am totally agreed to his wisdom of words by Wilson, Churchile, because there are many persons in general that could shows that the fauilures is part of success without loss of love to what we do.
For instants, A famous and big star NBA and MVP basketball player Micheal, Jordan once said that, the process of being successful is an action of repaetation of practice including failures. This clearly indicates, before micheal became a successful basketball player star, he recieves and faced hardship competing and playing basketball in sevelar yaers of his caceer in NBA. In addition, According to micheal's father, he said, micheal fails so many times to his dream caceer such as: physically, emotionally and, mentally. However, he didn't stop chasing his dreams because, I know and, he knows how much he loves playing basketball. These also shows, Micheal obtained his successfulness because, he is basketball enthusiast. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
2E3FC44757FB | Do you ever help somebody out and good things come out of it? or helped out a young person and they see you as a role model? well guess what!
There this program called "Older students assist younger students" .
What I think on this program that pairs older students with younger students is important because the students that are older already learned about what the younger students are learning about so they give out ways on how they learned it and show it to the younger students . Another reason why this program that older students assist younger students is good and important because a older student can also get more information from what a younger student already knows and not a older student.
This program is not only good and important but it also helps out any age ,in other words this program can help anybody out when help is needed. You can help out anybody and they will see you as there role model for showing them the good things you should do and what comes out of it from the good descion you did. Having a negative mind wont get you nowhere in live so that is why older students help around younger students because the younger students are young and still dont know what they plan on being in the future. Not everybody has a role model because they have there own plans in the future or because they just dont want to do what everybody does as a living but when they get some help from a older person who already knows what they are doing the younger students start to wake up notice that you got to do what you got to do in order for you to get where you want to be.
The only thing is that only some school's have this program and it sucks becuase there is some people who want help or need assist from someone who has already been what there going thru so if you have this program use it wisley and dont take it for granted. everybody in the world can get the help they need so they can be someone in life so that is why they have that program were older students help out younger students so the younger students wont make error mistakes in there future life.
What would you do if you had this program and how would you use it in the furture of yours? I 100% this prgoram is a good idea. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
2E5A3E5FD179 | I disagree, to have one and a half hour added to our school hours. It would cause stress and angry, to students and teachers. Teachers would have to stay longer at school to grade papers. Students would get hugry and sleepy and have less tie to play.
If the school board plans to add a hour and a half hour to school, then students would try to stay home. Students would try to miss the bus and try to get sick if theirs a test or anything that seems underwhelming. Students would get low grades if theirs a lot of homework and less time to do it, they would just not try to do it. Teachers would get more paper work from students and try to make plans for the students for them to learn a easy way, so it wont make extra work for all of them. Students would have less time to practice from sports or other actives if theirs more homework and if they are failing a classes and get kick of the team if they play a sport.
Students would be starving more if they dont eat breakfast, because they dont have time. Students go to school at different times so they wake up different times as well, and dont get time to eat or make something later. Students would bring food to school and would leave trash, and its extra work for other people who have to clean it. And when school over they would have less time to have something fun to do. Students would sleep and not do home work and not do their chores or stay up to do homework or study and play games. They would have less time to eat and not have the energy to wake up and get ready for school and to stay awake at school.
Teachers would stay longer at school, to do the extra work, and miss important things that they have to attend. They should get paid more to stay longer and deal with kids. Teachers would get stress and try to deal with the kids that cause trouble and distractions in the classroom. They would get more strict and angry. Its bad for them since their getting older and it can cause some health problems and probably would retire because of that. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
2E6495FC2C72 | Ralph Waldo Emerson
"To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment." I agree with Emerson's statement about individuality because each person is a world and we have to do our things separate and does how we learnd about life doing our on things life is not easy as how we thing when we are with our parent's but you have to be older not young so we can decide to do our own things.
We have to work for what we want nothing in this life is easy, All the people need to take a decision in life but firts we need to go to school and then graduated and look for a job and like that we are going to know more about life and make decision and kowing more about life but we always need the endorsement of our parent's. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
2E8A8C550F8D | This essay is about some schools offer distance learning as an option for the students attend classes form home by way of online or video conferencing , I think some students would benefit from take classes by their houses, because some students work in the night this is a problem for the students who working in the night because the school start 7:30 this is to early for some students because they work and they don't sleep well.
Example one is about my friend he work after school sometimes he work between
5 to 12 and he after this he need to wake up at 5 for go to the school , I think this is heavy for him because he always is tire in the first class because he can sleep well in the night , but he need to graduated from high school because this is the only way he can have a better life. Many students in high school work after school , I think this program can help they because they can continue working and they can sleep more , this can help they to have a better grades because they can sleep more because sometimes they have a bad grades because they don't have the time to do the homework and the study for the test .
Example 2 is about the many girl in high school are pregnant , this program can help this girls because I see many girls don't want to return to high school , when they are pregnant because when they're pregnant sometimes people say bad thinks about they ,because they're to young for have a baby. but with this program they can take the classes from their houses .This can help they to graduated from high school because this is a better way to completed their classes , cause sometimes many girls decide to continue in the normal schools but when they have the baby they can not to continue because they need to take care for the baby. but with this program they can finish their classes.
For my conclusion this is a good idea because they can help many students who have some problems . because they can finish high schools , because they don't have time because sometimes they need to work. but with this program they can help this students because this is a good idea for help this students . because they can benefit if they take the classes from their houses. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
2E8C8C439D36 | Should the school extend the school day two hours? It depend of the schools and the parents, if they approve the extending of the school days and also see if there is any benefits or disadvantages of this.
In my opinion it can be a disadvantage for some students, because some of the students have to work after the school and they will not have time for do the homework or projects or even their own free time, and that is why they don't have time for do it,but the most problem of this is; if the parents of the students are going to approve or not about this change to the school, because some of the parents take the education of their son or daughter so serious, and that can be one of the big problems to the schools.
But there is too benefits for students or some students only, because they are going to have more time in classes for learn more and also for do the projects in the classroom and not in their houses as homework.
Another benefit too is they can have for time for the activities in the school if that was as a class they have.
I will approve and disapprove, because there is so many disadvantages of this, but to the same time there is benefits too about this change of the school.
But in my opinion, I'll disapprove this change, because I'll don't have time to do my homework or have time for me.
And that is what I think about this change and the advantages and also the disadvantages. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
2E98035B8362 | American jazz legend Duke Ellington said, "A problem is a chance for you to do your best. "
I agree, because when a problem is present you have a chance to learn a lesson, new things and methods to solve it.
When a problem is present you have an opportunity to learn a lesson and keep trying to solve the problem until you find the answer to it.
When you have a problem you can also learn new things like what is it that is making the problem, what it is affecting, and whom is it affecting.
When you have a certain problem you can also learn other methods to solve it like how and who made the problem, how can you solve the problem, and what plan you can use to solve it.
For example you are facing a bigger problem that you have ever faced before and when you finale solve it you have learned a new lesson, method, and two or more new thing about how you can,may or will solve your future problems even if they are tougher than the ones you ever faced before because the bigger you get, the bigger your problems become.
For another example, imagine yourself as a detective in a homicide case, you are facing the problem of learning new evidence and using new methods, while using the lessons and new thing you have learned while were investigating the crime scene. You have to use all of those tactics to find the corporate, because all you need is to use the lessons you have learned while you are learning a new one, learning two or more new things, and having a method to capture the corporate (criminal).
And that is why i agree that a problem is a chance for you to do your best. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
2EA9DA7AAD2C | Thomas Jefferson said "determine never to be idle." What he means is that people should not just sit there and do nothing for their whole life because it won't help them accomplish their goals. Some people say doing something serves a purpose. Others say that inactivity also serves a purpose. Doing nothing at all is a bad choice. The best option to serve a purpose is to actually do something by helping others and the world then staying idle and not doing anything to help others.
First, the reason why Thomas Jefferson said that people should never be idle is because he wants to change their lives forever. Another reason why people should take this advantage is that if people don't do any activities in their life, then they won't be able to achieve their goals in the future. Most people will say this, "doing something serves a purpose because it could help other people get their work done." It's good to start doing activities at a younger age because they will be able to experience it and get used to it later on. Also, doing activities can help them gain more respect and they could get famous. It could be too late to start doing activities when they are older, but people just have to think of what they are going to do to fix it.
Next, most people will say that they don't know what activity they should do. For example, i didn't want to do any activites like other people did so i went and did karate for 4 years. A year later I started to swim every Saturday and eventually I have been getting better. After that I started to go to the gym from Monday through Thursday every single week. It's not too late to start an activity at a younger age, but for an older age it could be. The people just got to work hard if they want to achieve their goal, but the only way they could do it is if they can believe that they can do this.
In addition, other people think that not doing any activity serves a purpose. They say that because they think their parents do most of the work so they don't have to do any of it. Also, there are people who are just lazy and don't care about their life. Others think that doing activities doesn't really achieve their goal in the future. Most people just don't know what they want to do in life.
Lastly, Thomas Jefferson doesn't want people to be idle for their whole life because he wants to help them do activities that they think its interesting. Another reason why people should take an advantage of this, so when they are young, they will understand of what is gonna happen in their future, and then as they get older, they will have full potential by doing it. Also, it will help them and other people get the job done. They will not have to struggle in their future. The thing about activities is to never give up, even if they mess up its ok, they just need to practice and practice nonstop. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
2EB94A444839 | Some schools offer an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Schools think that it is a benefit that help students who don't want to go school or if they have diseases, they can't go schools. Taking classes in home or schools have some similar benefits but not overall benefits.
Although, I think taking classes from home have benefits and not because some students have health problems and it is not a benefit because students can't learn good like in school.
At first, taking classes from home can be a benefit because it helps students who have health problems like students that have problems to walk or different disease. Also, for students that their parents don't let them to go for problems. For example, if students who have arthritis, they can't go to schools because they can't walk. It would be better for they because taking classes by online or they can make a video conferencing with a tutor. They can learn about all classes they want to know and it would be a benefit for their future because they will get a diploma that will be help for them. Also, it can be a benefit for students that had problems in schools like fight with others students. Those students can take classes in home with help of someone or by online. In this way, they can get help and learn things without go school.
Moreover, I think it is not a benefit for students who don't want to go schools because if they don't like the schools, they will be doing whatever they want because there won't be a teacher who tell them what to do; and they can't learn good because there are no one who explain them the class. There are many students who don't speak English and they don't want to go school but they want to learn. For example, I can't speak English so good because I am not a native American, so if I don't want to go school and want to learn the language, taking classes from home would be hard for me because in home I will learn slower than schools because in schools are many people speaking English and in home I just hear one time at day. It better if I hear English the most of the time because I can learn so fast because I will make friends to help me. For me, taking class in schools is better than home because now I go to school and it is hard even if I go to school. I am improving the language with help of teacher and friends.
In conclusion, taking classes from home is not a hundred percent a benefit. It just have some benefits for some students. For some students taking classes from home is hard because they don't learn too much. Overall, if I take classes in home or school,
it is something relevant because even if I am in one or anther place, I am learning something. It is not a thing of other world. It is just for students that have the purpose to learn and be someone in life. Going to school help me to improve my life each day. Each day, I can learn something new and now my language is improving because I have people who want to teach me and I am a stronger person because no one can laughing of me because I am learning. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
2EBC2F60AAE9 | life most important matter is when we make decisions for success or failed. The thing is when you make the right decisions which is a good thing however when we make the wrong thing. However we as Human learn from the mistakes we did wrong and try not to make it again and to do it better. Like for some instead when we have to trust your self for it to happen. In the way at People at think want guidance for some one it may be good or bad which sometime is must be good to have it when we need it in a bad time.
I think people should decisions for there own. Also to believe there self because nobody know you like you know your self .For example how would you know what is inside if the people mind and for you try to help him or her. Some people have to believe there self and have good faith and Am sure is going to help you to solve all your Issue.
In this world we live in people don't care about you they only care there self and money,family. For instead if you fail people think at they are better then you at is why nobody would never try to make you better person .All people these Days only care about there safe and money,family. At is why i choose to make my own decisions and if i failed i am going to try it again to i be better what i do. I have min reason to think at most people don't care about people.
For the people who choose to go seek with someone. I understand what it feels like to be. however i think they should talk with there self first and tell your self. What i am do wrong and how can i make it right and what i need to do so you can learn it. Your self because people are not going to be with you when you need them or for there to ask them for life important matters. At is why you should decision life matter's for you in do the right thing. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
2EC0647293F6 | Hello Mrs. Generic_Name my name is Generic_Name,I am from Generic_City, I used to live in Generic_City but, now I am living in Generic_City a pleasant and espectacular city. I go to school every Monday to Friday it is my last year of high school so I am exited to graduate. I am 18 years old I am the last of my three brothers Generic_Name,Generic_Name and, Generic_Name that have growth next to me and had gave me very fun and good moments.
I honestly feel that I good person who likes to help everibody. For example, when I was 13 years old I remember going with my dad to the auto garage where he spent working the last hours he had free. I always was looking at him and, paying atention at everything he was doing to learn and memorize because I really enjoyed helping my dad.
Mrs. Generic_Name I want to say that I am interested and, lookig for any work that could be available for me but, first I would like to visit you, to explain me and learn about your business. I told him if we could have an interview the next day, that was going to be Thursday at 9:00 a. m. The interview was necessary, like that we were going to be able to talk about what he need on his companie and, what I was looking for.
I went to Mrs. Generic_Name's companie for my interview. I was nervous, this interview was very important for me it was the day where where I could be selected for Mrs. Generic_Name. WHile he fineshed asking me some questions, he gave me two options to choose. option number one was, working at night for 25 dollars per hour and option number two was, working at day for 20 dollars per hour. I choosed option number two, working at the day for 20 dollars hour. I was very happy with my new job. Mrs. Generic_Name is a good person, he selected me and now I am very grateful with him.
As I said Mrs. Generic_Name I think my services will be very help in your companie,I am very exiced to start working for you and I now it will be a big pleasure for me.
See you the next week Mrs. Generic_Name, have a wonderful day. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
2EEB160A4BD1 | 85% of people think that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life. It has been said that people who have a great attitude have more opportunity to sucess in life than people who have a negative attitude. However, some people may think that a good attitude is not always necessary because there are job that doesn't required a positive attitude. Having a good attitude can help you to find a job, make new friends and help you to archieve your goals.
For example, it can help you to find a job and if your job required to comunicate with others people your attitude will make people to like you, also your manager will like how you work and how you treat the costumers. Furthermore, your attitude can make you the best employer in your job and help you to find a better job.
In addition, a good attitude can make you find new friends and they will always want to talk to you or be all the time with you even if they don't feel good they know you can make them happy because you have a positive attitude that they like. More over, you could only have friends that have a great attitude like yours because people that have a negative attitude would not like to have you as a friend because you are always happy.
To archieve your goals you may need to have a good attitude because when you don't feel good and you don't want to continue trying your attitude will help you to never give up and continue trying until you archieve your goals. When I don't want to continue in high school and I just want to get a job I like to have a good attitude and think about my goals and how far I'm right now and that help me to make me happy and to not give up.
In other words, your attitude is really important in your life not everyone has a good attitude and not everyone think that attitude is important, but a great attitude can help you with many things like to make good decisions, to be a better person, and to make people love you. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
2EEEE9C5E227 | Are first impressions impossible to be changed? It has been said that they are almost impossible to change. Most people tend to agree with this statement, but what if they are wrong? I personally disagree and believe that there are ways to make impressions change. It's all about giving the person the opportunity to show and see who they really are.
First impressions are judgments we made before getting to know the individual. These impressions can be on favor or against the person being judge. Thinking on ways to make these impressions change, I have found some good ways and these can be; getting close to the person, asking to their close friends about them, asking teachers or other adults. All this based on my life term experiences.
Getting close to the person meaning; talking to them personally, this could make a big change on the impression been transmitted the first time you saw the person. By talking to the person you will find so much things and probably things of your interest. When talking to a person you are making judgments in your head, but your mind always changes from what you thought this person was before.
Asking to their close friends about them is a risky but also a good idea. Their friends know them better and can provide a good opinion on them. When asking their friends, you should make a comparation on all of their opinions, this would help to know this person's circle. Social circles are very important and most of the time define a person's being. Knowing this person's circle will change that first impression on their social side.
Asking teachers or simply community adults will help a lot to change that first impression. Maturity level is something we always judge when comes to impressions. Teachers will tell you what is this person attitude at school. Community adults will tell you how does this person behaves on their everyday living. Whether you find it positive or negative, opinions definitely make the first impression change.
People say that first impression only last a very short moment, therefore it can't be change because it's just flash judgment on a person. On the other hand we have people like me that believe that as long as you have not contact with that person's circle, you are still in the first impression and it can be change. Getting to know an individual, Talking to their friends, and others adults' opinions are all first impression changers.
Overall first impressions are possible to be change and we need put these steps on play. If we would to follow these steps we would not be hating on each others and will live in a better world. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 |
2EF984473EC5 | Which do you feel is more beneficial?
Do you prefer working in group or working alone? There could be many reason on either ones. As a school project, i would prefer working in group. what would you like to choose working in groups or working alone.
I choose working in group because you can task for help when it's needed. If you get stuck, you could ask your partner for help. If you done understand something , you could ask your partner for help. If you got question you could ask your partner also. If you don't know what to do you could ask your partner.
Working alone could be confusing at time. Working alone could be hard and have no help. If you got a question you have no one to ask. Also if you get stuck it could be hard to get back in track. Working alone could get stressful. Working alone is not easy, you gotta think harder.
Working in groups can be easy. Working with a partner could finish up quick. You guys could talk about it. One could be drawing while the other one could be writing. Working together will be easy when brainstorming. You guys could be doing two different things and still get it done. When working in groups establishes a better relationship. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
2F10C8035FEA | What thomas jerfferson wrote to deternime never to be idle it is wonderful how much may be done if we always doing may mean something to him being his opinion from what he is saving may be true every one can accomplish something for what they have done like for intance to help others or to finish something import.
My opinion to what he is saving might mean that everyone has their own diddent way by accomplishing something on their paste some people maybe slow on what they do and get thing done that way and for some other people maybe the opposite they would know what they are doing and get thing done faster than other
When we do something and getting it done we do accomplished thingas way more faster the more we finish something the more greater feeling we get in with ourselves like being proud. but no that may not be true accomplishing something may be hand for some other people.
People that get thing done are ussually the people that want to succeed on their work, without slaking off. They would always stay on task and acomplished with what they got to do. For those people that don"t accomplish something on time usually maybe really busy with many things and things and not getting the other things finished.
for what it is always a good thing by accoplishisomething more, because we get things done and not having ton worried about anything else. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
2F268BE28055 | Failure play's an important part in your life and it also lead you to success. why would many people thinks that failure lead you to success?. Well failure is one of the things that help you look back at yourself, so that you can start asking yourself questions that matters and that will help you succeed. You cannot survive in this world without you failing, or you having some kind of trouble that want to make you give up. The reasons why I agree with Churchill's statement is, because school, parents, and your career are things that help and give you hope, so that you can succeed.
The first things that play's an important part and you need in life is Education. School teach you things the hard ways and by you learning it the hard ways, help you fix your mistake in a better way. Your school work is what going to lead you to your success and your next journey in life. Without your education, it will be hard for you to succeed, or to even think about what kind of experience you could've have and what kind of person you could've been. You failing is teaching you how life is, what your next journey can be, and how much effort that you going to put into it. For you to succeed you have to fail, so that you can actually grow up, learn how life goes, and learn from your mistake. Education help you succeed in a better, clean, and a proper way.
The second thing that's important and that you need in your life is your parents. They advise you of how they were able to succeed, have a family, and how failing is a bless, because you get to learn from that. Your parents support you in the good moments and also in the bad moments. It is when other people are supporting and giving you advice other than your parents, because you going to have to choose if it a good advice or a bad one. That is why when you happen to have any of your parent supporting you, or giving you advice, you should be greatful. Some teenagers loose hope and their confident when they're failing, because they have no support, no one to give them advice, and they're lonely with no parents. That is also why your parents play an important role on your success even though, you keep failing.
The third thing that helps you see things clearly and that challenge you, is your career. when you have a career, or want to have a career, it is where you going to start making mistakes. By you having a good career and want to keep it, but you keep failing actually help you learn how to succeed. You having a job helps express yourself, more mature, and it help you learn how to challenge yourself, so by you doing that, leads you to success. You challenging yourself, help you see a better and a more challenging person. Your career help you stand up for your mistake, challenge yourself, and fix your mistake.
Most people would think that failure leads you to success and fewer people would think that failure leads you to giving up. "Success consist of going from failure without loss of enthusiasm." They might think that it is peoples opinion, because why go to school when you can succeed the dirty way. What these people think is that their succeeding, but what they don't know is that their keep failing over and over again. Playing it the dirty way is not you succeeding, but it is you proving to yourself that you keep failing. That is why failure play an important role in pursuing your success.
I agreed with Winston Churchill, because success does consist of you failing. The reasons why I agreed with
Winston Churchill is, because Education, parents and career are important things and people that helps you succeed. By you failing thesempeople and things are the one's giving you advice and help you be more self assured. Everyday in this life you're challenging yourself with new things and these things, are things that you need to keep doing, so that you can succeed. You will never be successful unless, you failed. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
2F3210D23414 | Students now can take classes from their houses. Schools are offering students the possibility to take classes online from their houses, I think is a excellent idea because sometimes students dont have the possibility on getting a ride to get to school, or it makes it easier for students that have to stay home for personal reasons, or even if you want to take a class during the summer to get more credits and get to graduate earlier.
Sometimes students do not have the possibility on getting rides to school and the county do not offer them a bus transportation system that can take them to school, for example in my country Costa Rica there is not a free transportation system to get to school and the only transportation system is the public one and you will have to pay for it, its an excellent idea from the schools to have this kind of classes that you can take from your own house.
Some students have reasons that make them stay home, such as girls being pregnant, students taking care of their parents that need people to take care of them because they are sick or have any disability and they can not stay home alone, in those cases students can finish their school courses at home and take care of their loved ones at the same time.
Some students just do it to finish high school earlier, they have the opportunity on taking classes online during the summer and be able to get less classes on their senior year or just graduate earlier if they taking the standard diploma, that is a smart thing to do if you are planing on go to college and finish your carrier on a young age, and start working at young age too.
On my opinion I think that having that opportunity is a good thing and a bad thing because going to school is the best decision that you can make on your life, you get to make friends and get to know a lot of people during all the time you spend at school, but not everyone have that opportunity, thats why this opportunity that the school is giving you is unique and can help you a lot, the only thing you need is a computer or a electronic device that can get access to the internet. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
2F3E35DA88B0 | W
h y schools shouldn't allow students to have and use cell phones for educational purposes? Although some say that schools should allow students to have and use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes, actually they shouldn't because students most of the time will be using their cell phones just to be in social media and also students probably will try to use their cell phones to cheat.
Those who believe that schools should allow students to have and use cell phones in classroom for educational purpose they have their reasons. They believe that it will be more easy for students to complete assignments and also it will help students to turn in their work on time.
In my opinion I think that schools shouldn't allow students to have and use cell phones in classroom for educational purposes because students most of the time will be using their cell phones just to be in social media. I think that because when I am in my Algebra 2 class my teacher always assign us to complete some work that we have in blackboard,but what I noticed in the last month was that most of my classmates that were around me they weren't doing the assignment instead some of them were just playing video games,watching videos in YouTube and using Snapchat.
I think that schools shouldn't allow students to have and use cell phones in the classroom for educational purpose because students may use the cell phones to cheat. I believe that because such as a student if I was taking a test and I didn't study and I have the cell phone with me I will try to use it to find some answers in Google and also if students are allow to use the cell phones in the class they may use them to cheat by taking pictures of other student study guide,assignments and homework.
In conclusion schools shouldn't allow students to have and use cell phones for educational purpose because they will spend most of the time in social media and also they may use the cell phones for cheat. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
2F56C4AD3F46 | Students should their cellphones for educational purpose, because the reason why they should use their phone it can make things easier for them to use it on there work. The students phone can be used as caculators for their math class. In history class the students can search for the answer and write it down on their paper. If the teacher wants to do an phone activate the students can use their phone to do that activate. The Students will be more active on their work if they had their cell phones with them in school.
In a math class the students can use their phones as caculators for educational purpose in case their actual caculator ran out of batteries. The students will have to use their phone in order to work on their math problems. The students can also use their phone to make a straight line so the students can do their work fast or running out time for their class. The teacher can give the students to take pictures on the board so they can remeber what their work is on tomorrow. Cell phones can be used in many things math class it can help students in their time of need.
In history class cell phones can benefit you if you use it right. Incase the teacher wants you to go on a cite to see which year was it that brought us here and get the answer. If theres a time when a student is about to leave early they can ask their teacher to let them to take picture of the board so the student can write down on their notebook. The teacher can also bring in a fun activate thats related to their class and the students phone so they can play kahoot. If the student wants to know whats happening around the world they can look on CNN 10 for answers. Cell phones can be a real benefit for the students if they given the ability to use their phone for educational purpose.
People might have some disagree meants with the use of cell phones. They might think that it's an distraction for students when they use it. The students need to read books so they can actually get the answers. Some other people might say that cell phones can cause some cheating for their quizzes or test. The that their are some people might say that, not all students can be that way.
In conclusion cell phones should be used for educational purpose so the students can be more active when they are on their phones. If the teacher allows the students to use their cell phones it can bring a lot of interactions with the students. The students can education can be improved because of the use cell phones. The use of cell phones can make school a little bit more fun. The students will be excited when it comes to usuing their phones kahoot will be great the students use it. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
2F7B0CE01B4B | People who take decisions with guidance from experts and authorities have a higher chance of making a correct decision then others, although many prefer going with his or her own instinct or idea. Seeking guidance helps to see from a different perspective, which could allow for a better choice to be made. At some point and time we all need advice from someone who is experience or would like to know what is there perspective of another person, even though may think that they need to make decisions themselves without anyone's advice or opinion.
Taking decisions is a tough thing to do in general, but seeking guidance from experts and authorities can help you make this decision with less frustration or confusion. For example, we seek advice on a daily base from our teachers, following our parents foot steps, but we rely on our own thoughts, we listen to our elder closely because they have more experience. People who lose sight of seeking guidance usually end up making a wrong or bad decision. Most people tend not to think about the cause of what made this decision come back or the effect it can have on others. As for, Someone who seeks guidance it is likely that they have gone through the same situation or something like your situation and can help you make a decision that can help you but also consider the effect it may have on others. As a result, with the advice of someone whom is more experience can bring a positive outcome.
Decisions are made on a daily bases from when people get up to when they go to sleep. For example, If someone has to take a decision some may fall into pressure and that led to take a decision that may not be the best and can have a negative outcome. When asking someone with experience there can be various ways or choices given to or ways to approve the situation. They can also give feedback on a decision someone was planning to take that could work out but also, could have been something that effected the person who was making the decision. As a result, If the person who was making the decision had not gone to get feedback or advice the choice of the decision could have been a decision that made to another decision allowing the decision process to be repeated and stay with a negative effect until that person has asked for advice from someone with experience.
People who make their own decision get ready for life guidance could help in difficult times, although they think that It Is smart just going with the idea or instinct they have it is also a good thing to ask for someone opinion or advice. Because, they may not being seeing the bigger picture or maybe they are not seeing the pro's and con's or the decision they are going to take. Asking for advice is also another way to assure that what you are going to do Is right. Therefore, whenever taking a decision it is best to ask someone for advice because it is likely they have gone through the same thing that someone is going through. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
2F81111E7831 | Most student enjoy summer vacaction,but some educators feel that the summer break is too long and that student do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall.
Most of the student have reason that is to much break during summer break, but I am disagree with the idea of change the schedule of vacaction time. Could be during summer break the student forget some information of school, but all student wait for summer because much student like to travel to their country during vacation time, or some student only can see their family during summer break and their like to pass time with them, I guess is better time to take vacation in summer. Also the eductors need to think about the thing they can do during summer break because during winter the weather is really bad and also is too much snow and is too cool for to go out side.
Another reason that why is bad idea to get break during winter is because in winter the job is slow, and the center recreational are close like the pool, beach, park, and the fair. I think 3-4 week break during summer is a little be of time to have fun with the family, and enjoy their vacation I dont see the main point of the change because if they change the longer break for winter it take the same time because they also want that student take a week break durin spring and falls; Is more complicated if they change the schedule.
Therefore is a bad idea to change because it should be the same way it doesnt matter what time or what station is the break it should be the same way, because if they do in winter they going to forget information, eather is not good idea because the student cant enjoy their break for the weather.
In conclution I am desagree with the idea and is better during summer break, because could be the same time that the student loose. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
2F93B934ED27 | Control Our Characters
According to what the British naturalist and politician John Lubbock have been say, "Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it." Our character formed by influences beyond our control.
We should all choose to control our character because that will save us from trouble,
trust our self, and have a lot of relationships with friends.
First, we should all choose to control our character that will help to save many of us from trouble because being in trouble that very bad and many people will not talk or keep in touch with us or have any friends also. For example,
Generic_Name always many students keep saying bad stuff to him to make him fight with them, but he never care about what they say he always go to tell the security about them. He dose not want to be in trouble, that make them very angry because they are in trouble not him. That makes Generic_Name safe, and out from trouble. We have to be strong enough always and find another way to control our character to be in safe said, not being strong by fight and be in trouble. Control our character will make us trust our self.
Second,
we should choose to control our character that will make us trust our self because when we control our character we will trust our self in everything. For example,
Generic_Name works in the hospital hard to make everyone feel better, not sick one time one person was sick about to died, but she dose not cry because of that she control her character and she trust her self, So she give him a medicine and he dose not died he feel very well. Generic_Name never give up she always trust her self and she control her character with everything. We must control our character so we never give up and we can trust our self.
In the other side, some people may argue that choose to control our character will make some people think that we are sick, scared, alone. Thats true because when we choose to control our self a lot many people will think that way. However, we choose to control our character because that will make everyone want to be with us we will have big relationship with everyone. For example, Generic_Name always control her character she also has big relationship with everyone many people want to be her friends they like how she control her character. People are very likely to people who have good character and to people control their character that's why we have to control our character.
Lastly,
We all should choose to control our character to be out from trouble, to trust and believe our self, and to have a lot of friends. The result from when we control our character always we will be away from any trouble. Also, when we control our character we will trust our self in all the stuff and in anything even if it's hard. Therefore, many friends we will have while we control our character, friends do not like to have friends who is always angry dose not know what to do they like the friends who always control their character and who know everything. To control our character is not hard if we need a better life. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
2FE31DD4FD98 | Personalty, I disagree that my school should follow the model by extending the school day with two hours. The school would have more disadvantages that benefits. My point of view this issue is that school decision might affect students schedule, students health and the school will create a unneeded investment that can create also a problem on parents income.
My first opinion concerning the fact why my school should not follow this model, it is the reason that would create pressure on students schedule. Most of the schools have sports teem or music band. Some teenager are included in a teem or a bad, they would need time after school to practice their passion. Taking away that time by adding two extra hours, the students will be under the pressure and will have to choose the school instead of the activities that they love. The two extra hours might create a disorientation for students schedule and students mind .
The role of students is to learn and be prepared for the future, to put pressure on a young person will give a wrong perspective of the life. Even if in the future some students would possibly have a career that include a four-days work, the school should not be like a job. Cutting one day of a student schedule would create more homework and they would be suppose to learn by themselves. If the students would be tied or they will need to do other activities, most of the student would rather prefer to stay home than go to school.
For example, in Romania, the Music schools had Friday off and two hours added for the rest of school days. For most of the students was a hard period. Being at an artistic school has already harder, students played four instruments and they tried to keep their grades up. Most of the students decided leave the school after the decision of expanding the school day was approved. However after three month the school went back to normal schedule, but the school lost a lot of students.
The second reason that I support my opinions have reference to students health. Spending a long time in the same place, students might cause eating disorder, physical and psychical pain. For a young student that have homework or other activities, would be harder to have a clear mind everyday at school. Sitting almost all day it might develops back problems and others problems.
Spend more than seven hours at school students might create a sensible body. However, a young human being should not have problems with their body.
Eating disorder can be a really big problem for students, in this days most of the young people prefers unhealthy food. At schools many of the young scholars are picky, they would prefer to skip lunch or just eat snacks and other unhealthy food. The lunch is the important meal of the day, and it happened to be at school. Students will need to eat better and the school will need to add more time at lunch .
My last reason why I degree with extending the school day it is the fact that school create unneeded investment and the parents budget will have to suffer. Even if the school have the purpose to conserve the energy and resources, adding the extra hours would be the same as a normal five days of school. The school would not conserve the energy, in fact would create a uncomfortable situation for students. School would need to invest more in a healthier food for give the protein that a young student need.
For the students that dont have a free lunch or reduced price for lunch, the parents or the guardian of the teenager will be force to pay more for their children to eat at cafeteria, and also the parents will add some extra snack or food.
With all my reasons , my opinion is that my school or other shouldn't follow this model and extending the school hours. Some people said that is a good idea to create the opportunity of a free day ,that help students to spend more time with family. However I think the school should give the opportunity for students to feel comfortable and not to be under the pressure of the time. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
3012637E06B5 | People should make their own decisions . Because everybody knows what is better for his or her life. And seeking help from an expert wont help because the person will not be able to help you for the rest of your life. Making your own decision. The more you able to make your own decision you be able to teach your kids how they should make their decision. Following your own instinct and ideas will be bad sometimes and always making your decisions should be positive.
One thing about this world is not to rely on someone, because everyone is doing everything to survive. Example if youre not able to make your decision, you will always depend on someone and at the end of the day the person will fail you. Thats why is very important to make your own decision. And rely on your self not anybody. And reasons why every individual should to make their own decision is to achieve their goals in life. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
301A4BFAE56A | Working in group would be much better, because you will be able to get more help by the other people, like how people in my country say "
2 brain's think more than one
". If you work by yourself it will be hard because you would have to do alot of work by yourself, like if the teacher say's that all the student's will choose to work with someone or by yourself, because they would make a poster and it has to have drawing, colored, and write some stuff about it, for the one who is doing it alone it would be hard, and for the one that are working in group can meet in any of their houses, while someone is doing the writting the other one would be doing the drawing and colored, so it would be easy for them to do it.
There are alot of people that think that working by themselves would be more easily because they would not have to worry about to meet somewhere with your partner, or getting worry about that your partner doesn't do the right thing on the poster(or not did it). Doing it by yourself would take a lot more of time but you will do it the way you would like.
Working in groups would be better than doing it by yourself, if you are in a sport you would not like to work by yourself , because you will need the help from your team mates so the team can win, if you do it by yourself the team would not be able to win because you are not working together , the whole other team will try to get the ball away from you and your team mates will get mad at you because you didn't pass the ball on time and you lose it. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 |
305EFA6DBBBF | Do we choose our own character traits?
As the British naturalist and politican Jonh Lubbock wrote, "Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it." I certanly agree that everyone is capeable of choosing their own character trait, they are independent enough to have control over themselves', they're capeable to choose in what type of enviroment they want to be in, or how to react to bad or good circumtances, at the end of the day we all have the freedom to choose who, and what we want to be.
Jonh Lubbock wrote, "Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it.' everyone have the completly control over themselves, no matter how bad the circumtances may be or how tough a problem is, everyone will always be allow to choose either to smile or cry, to be positivee or negative for example;
My grandma, she's a 78 years old lady that have work her entire life, she's a very independent women who always says, "If i don't do it, no one can make it as good as i can." Always with a positive attitude, never sitting down, because she says that sitting down is a waste of time, and she have always been so energetic, until one day that sadly she had a really strong stroke in the middle of her brain that made her lose movement on half of her body, and her voice, her doctor told us that she was going to stay in a wheel chair for the rest of her life, it was hard to see someone so positive and with so much energy, in a wheel chair for the rest of her life, everyone was really shock and depressed about it including my mom, but even though my grandma knew what was going on her positive attitude never change, she took over the circumstances and she never gave up on herself she decided to be "positive", even though it was a rough time in life, this example helped me to see that everyone have their own control or they can choose who they want to be in the hard or easy times.
Everyone can have the freedom to choose the enviroment around them, how they wanna live, with who they wanna leave, people have the abilitly to understand when there are toxic people around them, to understand how much an enviroment can change the way they act, to understand that they can change the negative enviroment into a positive enviroment, everything in your character depends on your onw person, yes the enviroment that is around you can affect a lot on your character, affects on what you do in a daily base, but at the end of the day it alwasy depends on you, who you wanna be, who the people around you should make you feel, and how positive or negative it should be.
Having a reaction with other people around you can show them what your character is, it can show people your weakest part, and can shows them how dangerous or calm you can be, reactions are a really big part of our characters either if we have the control of them or not, how we react and how we respond depends on us, for a lot of people having their own character it's really hard, because of their negative or positive mood, sometimes we want to be or act like other people that we see at school, but that's like stealing their characters, at least but not last everyone have the freedom to choose what their character traits are or can be.
In conclusion everyone is free to choose what they character should be, no matter if they are going through a rough time or have the whole word agains them, theywill always have the chance of trying to be someone else character or build their own, but it will alwaysbe what they choose their character traits to be. | 3 | 3 | 4.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
306796D0279E | I disagree with this statement because people can show the oppositive to the attitude they showed before. And they can show no a good way at the first time for some good reasons; maybe they are shy, or have had bad experiences with a good group of people.
Sometimes the people can think a person who saw for the firsrt time and saw he or she needed help and the person didn't help is because the person did't want to help but is because the person is no extrovertive and think is no a good idea to ask.
Sometimes a person says "Hi" with a good tone to a person who saw for the for the first time and the person respons with no a good tone and the happens the same thing with other person, then the person no is kind like before, and when see other person doubt if say "Hi" with a good tone, and when they are meeting each other the other person relize the person was so kind before.
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307D618AF467 | they'are looking to hire someone who is responsible and hard working and often a person who has experience. I think they should hire me because I am responsible and hard working even though I may not have any experience in the type of work.
First of all. I'll work hard to get the job and I'll do my best to understand the work that you all do. It may took some time, but it will be worth it. I am not a lazy worker, I am a fast leaner. I have done some other type of job, and I've done good because I don't just ask them to hire me, I ask them to hire me because I really want the job and work with them. However, sometimes people just don't like to hire people that doesn't have any experience with the job and they don't hire them or just ask them to leave, or they just tell them that they are not worth it to waste their time. Nowadays , people work where they can get accepted because other jobs would not accepted them and they do the to get at least the money to pay their rent and some other stuff. They don't think about what they are going to do if they keep working for hours and getting paid less, but if people would like to work for less hours and getting paid more, they would try to find a job where they can do their job for less hours and for more money. What I am trying to say is that I would like to be hire to this job, because I would work harder to be manager. I am qualify to this job even though I don't have any experience. Trying to work hard for a job is something that life teach you and could be worth it for me, and for my future. I could have a better life if I work harder, I would be prepare for any type of thing to do in this job. I may be ready for any type of things to do in this job.
Although, in may took some time to be able to work well, doing other type of job is kind of hard because people are used to work in different type of job and it is kind of hard because we cannot get used to work in this type of job in just one day and it is hard, but people could try, even me I would try to get used to this job and i will work hard enough to be manager. Even though, people may think that it is easy to do a job and get used to it fast, but it not true it is hard to get used to it to other job when you were doing other job. Some people are so cold heart and would not care about your feeling and would just try to make you quit the job and it is not right. If that happens to me I would not let it slide, because I would like to do my job in peace and with no interruption. It right for people to seek a better job position, even though if you are starting to do it, but it is normal for people to seek a better position: just like me a seek for better position in the job. However people would not let you in peace, they would try to make you quit, but if you don't let them be like that to you they would get tired of doing that to you and they would see how much you are getting better and with a better position. I would love to see people that hate me to see me grow in the job that I would do if they hire me, I am not going to be a lazy guy in the job I would work harder to get to manager and later on I would do more and so much more to be an owner of my own business. Who wouldn't want to be an owner of their own business, everyone does want to be and want to have it, just like me everyone have had a dream of owning a business but after all that start you have to work harder to get it. that what I would do in this job. Eventually, I would understand the stuff of the job and I would do them and be much better then the others.
Finally, doing a job that you have no experience, but you are a good candidate, that means your are capable of doing so much more and be a better worker or even be your own boss. You only have to work hard enough to get it and to achieved your goal, it doesn't matter if it take one or three years, you have to keep going until you achieved your goal and try to work hard to achieved that goal. I would do all that to achieved my goal, it doesn't matter if it take me two or three years; I would do my best to do it. I would take the risk and do it better than anyone else in this job, or other type of job, Learning different things can make you know more and more qualify to do other type of work. knowing more stuff about other type of jobs, it make you more qualify to do more and to be able to work in more stuff or even to owne your own business. Work hard and try to take a risk. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
30A7E68EFC88 | My position is this argument is that behind every success there is a failure. It's important to understand that failure is not something bad its just something in the way of your success. These are my opinion on what i thing about. these paragraphs that you are about to look at have a mixer of things from hard working to failure just a little background of what you are about to read.
Starting a company can be really hard because there are a lot of failure that you'll have to go through to get to success. Because you won't be a big company from the start you have to built up to have a big company. For example the company apple it started in a garage and now its one of the biggest company to be know. Failure is just something that's in the way of you becoming successful. Because what it takes is hard work that you need to put into your company or whatever you are trying to be successful at. If not someone else that's trying to get the some thing as you will get it before you. Because you did not work hard enough
Becoming successful in something is a hard thing. Because of other people can be trying to do the same thing you are trying to do and sometimes not everyone is successful because of someone else that worked hard then them of the successes. Being the best at what you do is difficult because people are going to bring you down those are failure because they hate on your successes and what you have accomplished.
Working hard on something that you on you'll be successful in because if not other people that are on the same race as you trying to be successful are working more harder then you are going to be more successful because of the hard work they put in. If you are starting a company try to be the best at what you are doing because that's the only way you'll be successful because you are the best at what you are doing and no one else can't beat you to the top.
My position is this argument is that behind every success there is a failure. It's important to understand that failure is not something bad its just something in the way of your success. Those are my opinion on the argument | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
30B9B18CCCC2 | I believe technology is good thing because you can do your online shopping from home with get out out of your home,read books off the web, play games with other people making new friends just by staying home.
Many people can't drive to meet up with people.
So they just stay home and call them on there phone or call family from the other side of the world to say hi by using technology. find friends to chat with. Play games with online.
Some people use technology to learn new things or maybe see what other people are dong on Facebook, and snap chat. Technology is a good thing to use when you need help trying to learn new things. Kids at school can use technology for school. Technology can be use for homework school cluds. School can make it a safe thing to use. Many teens will lear how to use technology.
Other people will tell you that technology is bad for you because your not making new friends faces to faces,or going out to place to have fun. The people who say technology is a good thing have a good point because some people are better of staying home or even doing work from home where they wont have to talk to other people.
Old people can use technology to rd books back anything they want to read. There are many books online to read about war , cars , sport and many more. Old people can learn how to use technology so when they want to call family or friends on the web they can.
Many people use technology to Oder food off line and get it dropped off at home. Technology can Chang every one life.
Many people can benefit off the web and help them with taxes and how to do it or let someone do it for you online. Many people dont know how to talk to people so hey are sacred to leave the house so they use technology to talk to other people and find things hey both like.
They can order things offline and get it the next day. If like technology can Chang everyone life and make it better.
There are many games player online like to play, or can downloaded off line. Many people make money by use technology or playing games. Teens will enjoy playing games for days and win and may be get payed for it. What i'm trying to say is technology can be use in many ways that helps you to use it or work with. So many people ill be use technology in there life and make it easier to leave life better.
You can many new friends and play games with them online.
Every life would be better if we use technology in our everyday life and help use do everything technology can do for use in life. Old people life would be better. Teens will finish the homework fast by the help of technology. So ya i think technology is a good thing to use use in your everyday life any many be they will make it better and better in the years. Technology would make work life so much faster and easier. So people should use technology will we still have it in our life. Many people would find it very helpful. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
30DDC17D2986 | First impressions are very important but could they be changed?. Yes, yes they could be changed because first impressions don't justify who you are as a person and some people don't act the same when you first meet them. However some people are really judgmental about first impressions and could block off any type of relationship they had with you being job related, maybe girlfriend or boyfriend, and friends.
First impressions are serious which drives a lot of people insane. Because they don't know how the people are going to react to them but, its okay that doesn't define who you are as a person. A great tip of advice is being able to read a room that means how people are acting in certain time and place. Like whats the vibe and mood if you should be more relaxed, goofy,serious etc. If you can read a room first impressions will become a lot easier because you will know how to act.
But that's not the only way to have a good first impression most people dont act the same say on the first date,its probably going to be awkward and silent because you dont know how to act verses seeing someone for the 5th time. You know what to say, you know how to have an okay conversation. But dates arent the only situations that first impressions fall into. Jobs, jobs are the biggest make or break for first impressions from experience you can't be nervous and just be real you dont have to act differently. If your job takes you for what you have then its a great job.
However first impressions are very very judgmental. Some people take first impressions over anything because its the first glimpse they have of you and how you act as a person. And if they dont like you won't give you a job or another date depending on the situation. And there is nothing you can do about it. not even getting the chance to change the first impression. So is it hard to change a first impression yes,but its not impossible. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
30FE0B8168BE | Imagine a life where people think the same and look the same, it be like a world without stain, to some people will sound perfect,but life is attempt to do mistakes and learn from it, where people can't compare themselves, where you can accept that in some cases, there are better people than you or worst than you, life is like that, but the greater accomplishment is to be different than others.
First, if people in the world including you are the same, the world will get bored for example; when you working an a factory that do the same thing every day, after a long time working there,you are going to get bored. The better way to do is doing something diferent every day, same with people if you and the people stay the same nothing is going to distinguesh you, but since you born you came with your own thoughts and qualities,for those reasons you have try and work for yourself.
Secondly, working by yourself and focus about you, and your own goals will help you to get your goals very quickly, because if you do the same thing that the people is doing, you will stay the same like them and lose interest about what are you doing and be an ordinary person. We have a talent to discover, but you have to work individual to reache it, no one is going to do it for you.
Third and last reason doing something that every body is afraid to do it , is a way to show that you are diferent, no matter what people said. In the beginning they are going to tell you a lot things ,so you can stop it, but when you reached they are going to be astonishing.
In conclusion; the best way to live, is trying to make you something else, so people can distinguish you from others, where you can improve your self, and try to be different than others. You will enjoy your life and have a better future,so people should try to be an individual person to have a better future and be succesfully in life. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
310CDA45739E | Imagination is like thinking to do diet and go to gym to get slim. Knowledge is just like running on a treadmil for 2 hours in a weak to get your weight under 79.
I believe that Imagination is more Important than knowledge, because when the writer writes a book, first they Imagine the topic for their book. They don't start to write the book unless they Imagine the topic.
Same as, the writers Imagine what they want to write about, they don't just start to get Information about something, asking their parents what to write, how to write. They Imagine, then they start their work.
However, Imigination is also similar when you think with your sister to convince your mom to get you lots of candy. You don't ask your dad, how to convice mom to get candy. For example, the person who get the idea to Invent phone, frst he Imagine,
what does phone look like, how many buttons should be there, and then he also get help with his knowledge but first he Imagine what does phone look like, how will people buy this, why should they buy my phone.
Also If we use knowledge more than Imagination, the new generation will only use the cell phones to search for their homeworks. They will not Imagine to do homeworks or other things by theirself. They will just copy someone's idea, which is going to demolish their brains. There will be no more good inventions, The people's brain will stop working. Also, people will not do their work because they know they can just copy someone's idea.
For example, If I dont Imagine that when I will be 16, how I am going to get a job. What If I just go to Youtube and search for it, but I will not find anything and I will waste my Important time. Incase if I imagine what kind of job I want to do or where I want to do, I am pretty sure that It will not waste my time. Infact It will give me some ideas for future. In my opinion we should imagine more than using knowledge.
Imagination keeps your brain work and It also keeps you active. If we dont use imagination then how our new Inventors will Introduce their creative inventions. If the stylists doesnot use their imagination then how we are going to wear brautiful clothes. If they use just knowledge and don't use their imagination, I guess they will not get that much success in their buisness. Designers use their minds to help with their clothes design. They imagine the ideas for clothes, so the people will buy more and more clothes from them.
The people who use Imagination more than knowledge live longer. From now I will also use imagination as more as I can. So I will give an opinion to all of you who are reading this use your imagination than knowledge and get success in your work. I don't say that using knowledge is a waste of time, use your knowledge also but not all the time, also use your mind to imagine good, Intresting things.
In conclusion Imagination is more Important than knowledge. So, I will agree with scientist Albert Einstein. I will also force you to think about this. Writers, designers , Inventors all uses their Imagination more than knowledge. Now I will also try to focus on my Imagination more than focusing to copy other's information. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
3134FDB9DB86 | Would you like four day of school stay of five? Can that be possible same, companies are trying this new way of school, I think most of the student and teacher would like, However most of the student does not know their benefits or desadvage, the student just think about their time they can spend doing other stuff like play videos games, play around, going out, but never time how values is the time they are using right, and step to going 8 hours class they going to have 10 hours the disadvantage will be the you have no have to stay more at school which me you, which you going get tired you going to have less time time to complete you homework they less classes is going to be harder to stay focus, more classes which me more homework. you going either awake more early and get of school more late, more project the classes are going to be longer the they used to your going to more tired, more angry,long topic to study, more test less life socials, life would be more harder the already is your gonna have to pass more class to graduate, you need to be focus and all your classes if u wanna graduate you gonna have less energy to be in class and for does the already work its going to be difficult to wake up in the morning your going to be exacting those people are going to be sleeping in class ,the school most provide more food they student are going to hungry, bad time about tree free day you can forget import time or topic the you need in class so the teacher in going to need to explain again and we student are losing time the can be sending in a new topic.
Four day of school strep of five benefits if you stay focus during the day with 10 hours you going to be learn at lot which good the most your learn the best life is for you, have new3 classes the you want to have but you couldnt have for the reason of time now you can have classes the you are interesting, you can joy in new class that can you be good at it talent5 the you didn't the you have .Education is the base of the world is the pendent what you studying and how good you are is how you status is life going to be which me have more hours is going to be useful in life education yours4elf in the best status the you can do in life; we gonna have more a hours you have have more teacher so teacher so the can not be tired and give the expectfict as its, the good time is a extra free day which me you can spend with your family or with your friends people can go more relax to school less pressure, more focus, have time to fisish your homework.
In conclusion and my option i strongly believe the they should life 5 day of school so people the work after school can have time to do anything they need, how can be mo refocus during class, less tired less pressure no be worry about they you going to have more classes the you don"t need you have time to be in after school active help you family during the afternoon be you homework it way you life can be more eassy and the life teacher can be more essay for them too. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
3137C16C109D | The firts impression are almost impossible to change. Do you think the first impression are almost impossible to change. Although some people think the first impression is imposible to change. actually is true is impossible to change.
The first impression is impossible to change. for example, when a friendo surprise me my first reaction is smile because, I fill so happy, exiting in this moment you maind no think in what happen arrond you first, the reacction when someone surprise me oh my God that is beautiful becasue, I never think one member of my family do something for me, secound reaction or impression for what is impossible to change is how you filling in that moment, what will be your first words, people see this in you that is soo exited becuase is the first impression nobody chage this becuase is my life my decitions. third when someone surprise me a bad day change in a good day, my family, friends or a girlfriendo do this
I never thing in the problems or in what situation I'm, oh men thisi smile nobody in this world chage how you filling when someone special in my life is whit my nobody change that moment soo special.
my conclution is when you have a bad day someone special in your life and traid to surprise this impression you never forget, The firs impresion nobody change. becuase is part of my life, the first impression is a good reaction becuase your happy, if you has a bad day that surprise changed the moment fot a good moment a momente with you not thing in what happen around you or in problems and this is my conclution for what I thing to the first impresion. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
31490B1FA765 | Art classes are importants for some people but not all students want to take this class they could be doing something that they would like to do,such sports,science and many other classes. Students do not see art as a big deal this days,they do not see a lot of outcome from art classes,is to hard to have a carrear coming from art,really hard to be successful in the art market,art can be that important in the students life. Do something cool or nice to do its the best thing,if the person do not like the class,will be a big chance of the student try to skip class, walking around the school wasting time, a time that they could be using to do something that they would like to do,problems with teachers can happen if they do not agree to do the work in class. This can affect the student in so many ways,and nobody want to see a student not happy with what he is doing at school,this just do not take the student time but also the teacher's time to teach who wants to learn something in the class. Those are real problems that happens in every schools,so to avoid this problems i think art class should be elective. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
314E6ED40C6A | I remember one time when I applied for one school that was private. I talked with the principal of that school, and he told me that. I needed a specific career for to be in his school.
Students need a specific career by the time they enter to high school.
I'm agree with this article because you already know what do you wnat to do and study to be a proffesional in a future just choose a career that you like it, and then do it.
choose a career that you feel that you like it, and practice all the time for example; I like the mechanic career. I like the cars, and I feel that mechanic would be a good career, because you fix the cars, and I think I can get good money for it.
when you feel that something you like it, you want to do all the time, if you have a career that you like it, practice you career for example; I love play soccer and, play soccer is one of my favorite things I like to do in the summer I practice a lot soccer , one of my dream is to be a proffesional soccer player one day because I love soccer choose one career of proffesional always keep in your mind, and try to do the best to get your career. Each student have a career that they like, but sometimes they don't get the career that they want for reason of the life, but do you best to get finished you career one day for example; my sister she wanted to be a nurse, and she always practice the things that one nurse do, and she always studied a lot for be a nurse, and now she have six year working of nurse. She get career that she wanted, and she told me that when she was little she wanted to be a nurse, and now she is a nurse.
Found your self first and look what you want to be in a future, is a lot things in this world, and you look for something that you feel happy doing it found a career that you like it, and try to get it. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
31B604C7D90F | Should school cafeteria change to a new, healthier lunch menu, for students? In this essay, I will argue why school should not change to a new healthier lunch. School should keep the same lunch menu because students will lost their favorite foods, students will start to pack their own lunch, and foods will be wasted.
Reasons why school should keep the same lunch menu instead of changing to a new, healthier school lunch menu, because each students have their own favorite foods, such as Chicken Sandwich, Pasta Chicken, and Tortilla. Futhermore, Tuesday is my favorite lunch day because it's Tortilla's day. Tortilla, also a healthy food because it have a corns, meats, tomatoes and other vegetables depend on what we like. For me, when I get to eat my favorite foods I feel blessed especially when I'm hungry.
These days, there are many restaurants out there like Mcdonald, ChickfillA ,and many more. Hence, instead of paying for school lunch that you don't like people can just bring their own lunch from home or from outside. It's better for people to buy foods from outside rather than buy foods at school and wasted. Sometime home foods are cleanier than school foods. Students might consider bringing their own lunch. The good thing about it is we can choose what we want to eat.
Every type of foods are expensive, we the students doesn't want to waste it. Thinking back to the poor people outside there craving for foods, I felt bad for them. In contrast, it's hard for us to eat the foods we doesn't like even if we are hungry. If the students doesn't like the foods, they might throw away, or not purchasing it. The school foods will be wasted, and at the end they will throw it away too. Providing students favorite foods are important, students will eat and school will not suffer from wasted.
School cafeteria should keep the same lunch menu. Some says, healthy school lunch are good for students health, but they are wrong. If school principal continues to change school cafeteria plans, students will not be happy and might start changing school for a better lunch. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
31D67F9A82BA | Click! click! click! This is the sound of my fingers typing against the keyboard. Today I will visit the local workplace because I will make computers more durable, advance technology, and better technology.
Have you ever used a computer that is too slow? Today I will visit the local workplace to make these changes. First to start I will better technology by having less cookies, quick access to sites, have Internet everywhere, and make the computers portable and movable. Then I will make technology more advanced. To achieve this goal I will make computers have faster browsing, longer battery life, privacy, and have software protective systems.
Lastly to improve computers I will make durable laptops by using stronger materials, stronger computers, and reliable an efficient. I would like to visit this local workplace and company because I will like to make a profession in science and technology as well better the future for all people.
In conclusion I will improve the technology by making more durable computers, advance technology, and better technology. So, next time you think of exploring a profession make a trip to the nearest workplace and take a brief look about the job. | 4 | 4.5 | 5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
31EEF9A4A29B | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I think that students will benefit more from distance learning than from going to school. Not everyone agrees that going school is for them. Distance learning is gives a better chance to learn all your education.
Here are a couple reasons why I support the idea of distance learning.
First, reason why I think that distance learning is more beneficial to you is because you can manage your time better with class work and classes. You have the opportunity to work on your own schedule. Separate the classes throughout the day instead of all bunched up at once. More time for you to focus on either classes you kind of struggle with or classes most important. All work does not have to have a due date or time limit. You can take your time to understand the material at hand and do all your work when capable.
Secondly, the more comfortable the environment the better you work. Schools environment isn't so good for students, sometimes we sit in classes where its hard to learn. Hard to learn because a lot of kids do not take there work serious, stay off task, and distract others from learning. That harms the learning environment makes kids get a little frustrated at times with there work. Its not easy to do your work while not being able to concentrate correctly and being distracted. When you are in a comfortable environment, work is not so complicated. You can relax, think straight, and focus on the task at hand with no problems. Being able to attend class from home keeps you away from the bad environment.
Last but not least, the safety of the students is always important. While in school kids can be harmed in different type of ways. Some get bullied others get into altercations. This is hard to stay away from because you are in school and it surrounds you. This can definitely throw off a student and get them off track. When kids start to think about many other problems instead of there school work it is not good. Attending your classes at home, online, or through video conference is the safest way to attend. You wouldnt have to worry about the school drama or the bullies. Your mind will be strictly focused on the work you have to do and nothing less.
In conclusion, the idea of students attending classes from home, video conference, or online. Is most beneficial because of there safety, work environment, and schedule. I agree with my reasoning and support them to the max because distance learning is the best way to learn. Your student should give distance learning a chance its worth it. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
32380C91070A | It has been said that the importance of positive attitude is a key to success in life. i believe that have positive attitude is better then having a negative attitude.
Its better to foward then moving backwords to put postive thought head and keep moving ahead.
I agree that having a positive attitude is the key to success, it help in many way when talk to someone or when talk to costumer. Having a positive attitude help when working in a work place For example,
when a costumer is giving a hard time instead reflecting back it better to respond with a positive attitude then a bad one. Then matter will turn out better.
when reflecting back with a negative attitude the outcome isnt great it worst it better to smile then be mad.
Its important to have positive attitude because there better outcomes having a better attitude is a big key to success it help when dealing a bad situation. Having a positive attitude change the way you see thing there much better outcome like seeing a smile on someone face because the attitude you gave them was positive and not negative. The action we do reflect on what is said or done, just like attitude reflect back. when giving the right attitude everything is better and there no bad responds or action done.
The important of attitude is the emotion some gives when thing change for example, when a job gives a raise to someone the person attitude change because there happy. Small things changes a person attitude and a way of thinking. when thinking about the way your attitude can change in just a split second by the action taking place is pretty amazing how not only when someone is happy the attitude they show is better then it was before.
In conclusion having a postive attitude is very important when to talking to someone. It is big part of life and it will help you with succes when facing a problem in the long run. the important of attitde is the way to think or feel and what makes you happy.
There is so much succes when you have the right attitude. Don't let the wrong attitude reflect back do better. Being negative won't help,
i agree with having the right attuide is the key to succes. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
323F5DADC975 | Dear principal
I think is great idea that the student must B average to participate in sports because it would help student there grades and benefit or learn more. some many kids all the world want to be sport famous player. and another reason is that they have to do their homework , study for their test and participate in class so that can play any activities they want or dream about that they will be come one day. getting B or A average in every day i would be awesome because some o]f the student don't believe that they can do they work and get good grand to they can play the sport the like to be come on day.
always believe in your self no matter what other thing about. once again i love
that idea !!!!. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
325B2F7BB3B1 | Are positive attitudes the key to success in life?
Yes, The positive attitude is key for life. for example, if people are happy the negative things are running away from them. And also, if you are with good attitude, good things are beside you; it's feel like god is blessing you. In addition positives attitudes are good to live good and peacefully on every single places there are going to be people that they're not going to thinks as you, they just want to hurt you but, that people that are angry all the time is not their fault is just because around of them just negative things are happening. So, thats why good attitudes are good not just for you, and is good for the people around you too because you don't hurt them. And you can get a better job to support your self and support your family, never let them alone. In conclusion the positive attitude is the best choice you can do, because negative attitudes only a track the bad things, not positives and thats the key to success in life. Happy wife Happy life! | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
327AAC23CF5D | On my Opinion i think is a good way to the student that they can take classes on online or on video chat is a good way to do it, because some students sometimes some of then they live so far of the school so they dont have other way to educate they self and i think is a good communication to learn.
Is a good benefit because is a easy way to do it, easy and fast and is good too because sometimes some days is snowing and when is snowing all school are closed. And they close the school because the students can not trasportate to the like that because the streets are freeze and really complicate to transport to the school.
If i have to take classes on online or video chat i will because more easy for me and is not difficult to learn on online or video chat. And because i can have more free time i can do more things and i can have a job.
And think too for some student is not good because they dont have the opportunity to have a computer t do they classes online or they dont have internet is difficult for them. Is a good option online classes but not for all students some of them are benefit and some of them dot.
Only classes are a good reason to use because is a good way to cominitate in a long distance, but Free online schools, have to be free all schools online for all students they dont have to pay nothing.
The time if they take online classes they they go not miss nothing because they can star when they want.
On my oponion is a goog way to do it. | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
327EB11122D0 | Hello mi name is Generic_Name and my prompt is about ''Failure'' and ''Success.''
What i think about this?
The failure is a feeling so bad, when you have a bad day or something was wrong,your feel the person most useless. Yes, I agree with Churchill statement, because he have all the reason. Each person failure has a recompense and all the good what you do make and God give to you multiply.
We all have success why?,because everybody work so hard and they wish make all your dreams. In the personal, i think all start since down, when you everyday work hard your successful is each day more big and blessed,I have three reasons why i agree with this prompt.
My first reason:
Never say ''I can't'' because when you have a purpose you have to make,maybe many persons tell you ''forget it,you never can't this possible'' but you have to know when something is realize with the heart all is possible in this life never forget it.
My second reason:
Always you listen when somebody tell you something,because his advice can help you in the future and you can use the same advice for help other persons too. You need to be better every day for make a present and future so much better and be able to get what you wish.
My third reason:
If you not believe in who are you, you are in a big problem, the unique person can say what you can do or you can't not are you nobody else. In your life you have friends,teachers and you family is the most important in the world the people believe in you. Follow you dreams,follow you future, and always smile and when something was wrong, not feel bad,of course when you have a error you can learn and be a best person each day.
What is my point of view on this?
The life is so hard and beautiful,you can be wherever you want,follow you way and never stop,make the difference and never stop of dream. Be a nice person and do not even threat bad other people. Therefore, you never hands down when you see the past and now the present you can see what long you are, stay strong,be intelligent not lying and always say the true. When passed the time you can see all effort you dedicated,all is possible.
Detail Support:
My detail support is about the immigrant, this is a good example for this prompt,they came to United State for a better life,is very difficult and danger,because sometimes many persons died or have problems in the way, how much time is? honestly i dont know sometimes is one week,two weeks or more than of one month. When they finally here in United State is a new beginning is a new life,of course is so complicated and so sad,because is a new country and new culture y the most important the language is different.
The principal thing is learn talk, and writing in English. After this if you have your permission of work,you can star working in a restaurant o something you can learn fast and easy or if you are minor of age you need go to middle school or high school dependent what age do you have for after you can graduated. and attain a best work. This is so hard but not impossible,maybe you have many days bad,and you cry so much,but each sacrificed has its pay back.
Thank you for you patient and dedication for read this. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
327F36243259 | Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. People can check out books, shop, and have fun without speaking to another person. Has technology a positive or negative effects on people? Technology has a positive effect on people because people are using technology to help our health, some people are using technology to help others, and some students are getting help from technology.
Certainly, some people think that technology has a negative effect on people because some people are using technology to destroy our planet. Others believe that some people are using technology to affect others. Still others argue that teens are getting distracted by technology.
Furthermore, technology has a positive effect on people because people are using technology to help in our health. Scientists are discovering new technology that can develop the human body. Technology helps people that need a body part, technology could help a person that lost a hand or foot. Technology can help workers to be safe, when a worker needs to climb a wall, technology may help. Technology is getting solutions to some diseases. Some countries are developing cures by technology, people are trying to get a cure for cancer. Technology will get cures for diseases, technology will get a cure for AIDS. Developing new technology can help our community.
however, technology has a positive effect on people because some people are using technology to help others. Scientists are helping community to understand our environment. Scientists have been discovering, discovering how our universe was formed. Scientists will discover new technology, new technology that will help us to know what may happen in the future. People are discovering new technology that can help our planet. People can discover new ways to save our planet, people can elaborate new ways to recycling. New technology that help our environment, people could develop new ways to get energy. People can have a better live by using technology.
Finally, technology has a positive effect on people because some students are getting help from technology. Students can help themselves at school by using technology. Students can get help on homework by using technology, students can see how to complete a homework on Google. Students can learn more, students can see more about a topic by using technology. Students have been using technology to discover more about their dreams. Students can get help with jobs, a student can learn more about a future job. Students can know more details about their jobs. Technology is a great tool to investigate.
Technology has a positive effect on people because people are using technology to help in our health, some people are using technology to help others, and some students are getting help from technology. If people use technology, then their lives would be more easier. People need to use technology to have a better live, and be carefully with it. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
327F4BCC9E4B | The idea that businesses have made is very important. Finding means to conserve energy and resources are important in our daily life. Most people use energy and resources in their day to day activities which put more pressure on the use of energy and resources. This four-day work week will conserve the workload on energy and resources. I agree to the fact that my school should follow the four-day school week with each day consisting of ten hours.
When the school time is extended, it will make students have more time to do any unfinished assignments in a particular class. Students can do more work and cover many topics in a day. This will make teachers do a lot of work in a day. For instance, any project that you didnot finish can be done the next day in class, students will have enough time to ask questions about what they are being taught, they will have sufficient time to go to teachers and practice more if they have other questions related to what they were taught. This will make classes fun and more entertaining. Students will have adequate time to study and understand the concept of what they are being taught in class.
If this adaptation is considered in my school, it will cut down the usage of energy and resources. The school uses more energy and resources due to the population of the students. Some examples of such equipment that uses higher energy are as follows : Air Condition, Laptops, Printers and many others. These machines uses high barometric pressure. Throughout this four-day school week, we can conserve the energy we waste in the school.
Others may say students might get bored due to the increase in hours because they are used to the normal daily routine but hasn't considered the benefits of it. When this is taken into consideration, more energy and resources can be kept from wastage.
In summary, the four-day routine and extending of time will be beneficial to conserving energy and resources in the shool. This will make students work hard in class, reduce the work load on energy and resources, seek more help from teachers if they are finding difficulties in a particular class. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
32A1DC59F4EF | I planned my paper before writing it. Because if you planned your paper before writing it is more easy so you can be ready to writte any important information about anything that the teacher tell you to writte about. I can be saomething that can help you to make your grades better because if don't planned your paper can cause you a lot of problems because when is your turn comes to writte. you are not going to be ready so the teacher is going to look at youu and she will be upset with you for example. if i don't planned my paper in time i can get in travel too because i an not doing what the teacher tell me to do so thats why you have to prepared in time before you get in travel because you are the one who is loosen point's not the teacher becuase she is telling you what you have to do. but if you decide not to follow the rules is going to be a problem.
One morething is you planned your paper on time you are doing great because planned your paper before writing it is something good the teacher is gonna be happy in you will get better grades. another example of planned your paper before writing is the information you have to writte is really important you don't ganna miss the information so thats why you have to be prepared in be ready for what is going to come.
I checked my paper to be sure that my message will be clear to my reader, is really important to checked what you writing or what are you going to do because if a writte a paragraph an if didnt write corretly an i handet to my reader an his start reading it his going to tell me what i did wrong so you have make sure checked your paper with a message before you handet to the reader or to you parents etc. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
32B2D5592E1D | This teens manual I talk to talk about expectation. Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home.
The first I ready to talk about some expectation. That's great to some students learning option to take some class in home, for example, some people do others things to help in home one example is he/her work in some place to help his family. Other example, regularity students nope have the opportunity go to the schools because the students things they not equality or things he/her can't do anythings to learning. I support the way to some teachers or one person is working to schools or some people have permission to teacher to go the house the person nope lost any classes they provide.
The another reason, Responsability, for example,
the place where I born people need to walk a lot distance to go learning and graduation some teachers sometime they go to the house where you live to teachers somethings to you. Other example, some time the people nope have transport or some people not have money to pay the transport to go schools. To graduate or learning more you do a lot things to graduate, however, if you put you responsibility you can do a lot or things to learning. Always the people is intelligent to great in school they can obtain beneficial scholarship to helping you and the family.
Reason of this teens. People take classes the way online, some examples, a lot people taking that's way because some people are elder; but they things is better to graduate because he/she work and others things. Some people things that's is more better for then I things that's is great to do both side. People can helps another person or example some reason why he/her taking that's journey to graduate. Always one person in class is coming four or less days to schools the attends is so bad students things is better go to work that's why a lot students take that's route. Some students don't matter anythings about the school, however, students particularity not a lot both some person things bad.
Next reason, offer to learning to night is better too, for example, some people things that is better option too, however, not a lot person have some opportunity to attend classes in home in the morning or late. A lot students take the opportunity to finish the school online. Person take that opportunity is because they have another weigh, for example, they go to work or stay in home to do nothing about his life.
That's great to some students learning option to take some class in home, for example, some people do others things to help in home one example is he/her work in some place to help his family. The place where I born person walk a lot distance to learning and somethings to graduation some when teachers sometime they go to the house where you live to teachers somethings to you. People can helps another person or example some reason why he/her taking that's journey to graduate. Some people things that is better option too, however, not a lot person have some opportunity to attend classes in home in the morning or late. My options I take the position to learning or finish my high school online, because that's really great to explain another person your experience about to finish school online. Always the person things somethings they not have good ideas to his life or something similarity. Opportunity great things for the person have major action.
Great take both ideas in this teens. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
32E2949B0C66 | Do you ever want to do something fun at your school that you really like? Well you came to the right school, cause the principal made a rule that you either have to play a sport or join a club that you like.
You could play on a basketball team
You could play on a football team
You could play on a flag football team
You could play on a baseball team
You could play on a softball team
You could play for a soccer team you could join a cheering team
I agree with the principal because, when we get home we don't do anything and kids are lazy nowadays. We either take a nap, eat, watch YouTube, or play video games. Also it will give kids a chance to have fun and make new friends and see what they like so they can do it the future.
So if you don't agree with me, I'll give more reasons like kids are overweight, they're lazy, most of them won't do anything cause they are out of shape. Probably the first thing they do when they get his eat and play video games and watch YouTube. So that is why the principal put in the new rule, they could make new friends while they're after school or join something their friends are in. Also it will be good if your going to play in high school sports cause you already known what it takes to be on the sport team.
It is really fun cause you when you play a game that is home you will feel good cause everyone from your school is there cheering you on. Also if you win your game at home it feels nice cause everyone is cheering your team on and then when you go back to school everyone will be taking about the win. If you don't believe me ask anyone that plays/played for a school team, most likely your parents played for a school team both of my parents did.
If your not interested in sports you could do other afters school activities like
Book club
Yearbook club
Dance club
Cooking club
Computer club
Student council
Engineering club
You could do those clubs in stead of playing sports, You could also do many other things that you like if you don't like any of this thing. Ask your teacher if you could make club and if she says yes go to her office. If you don't like your club cause everything was filled it is fine, cause you could join it the next semester but you have to be one of the first to sign the sign-up sheet. Also you be given a snack at the beginning of your after school period you could choose anything and, if you take the bus it will be there so you can go home.
But if you don't take the bus you will have to be picked up by 4:30 and then you be home and do whatever you want to do. But if your parent can pick you after school you could leave at the normal time school gets out and if your not feeling good you could also leave at the normal time. But before you could anything you have to do your homework and then go to your after school club.
If you don't want to go you will have to go to the principal and explain why you can't, but if it is a dumb reason you will have to go to after school. Like if you have a broken leg and you play on a sport team you could still go to practice and see what they are doing and see al the drills they are doing. Also if you fake an injure and the teacher find your big trouble cause you not listening to the principal. But you could get kicked out if your being bad and you will have to serve a punishment cause your still on school grounds. Like you you hit a student you will get suspended but if you hit the teacher you will get expelled.
If your playing sports it is all year long until the season ends, if your coach finds out your is taking drugs you will get kicked of the team. You will have the same rules as a high school cause you probably play for the high school team. But it won't costs any money cause the principal made us join the clubs so we could do something after school. Most likely we will find our hobby forever cause we are going to do it for the rest of the semester. If you find something that someone is doing and you want to do it just tell the teacher cause they will put you guys together.
If you still don't agree with me you should just try it out cause it fun, You could have fun, make new friends and bond over things you all like. Like sports if you join one of the sport teams you could meet someone with same interest like you. Same with all the other club that the school is providing to the students, like book club you could like the same book as someone else and be best friend over that one book cause you joined the book club. I met one of my best friend through basketball and we liked other stuff that wasn't basketball related.
Most likely you won't like it at first but then when your half-way through the year you will love it. Most of the time I join a club that i like cause it fun to meet new people that have the same interest as you. Sometimes the club isn't fun but that is okay cause you could join a new one. Most of the time everyone will be shy at the beginning cause no one knows each other but half way through the semester you will known everyone. Cause everyone won't be shy cause they will see you everyday plus, when your in school at lunch and you don't known anyone and you see one of those people you could sit with them. When you meet a new person they will have friends so you could more friends when the new person shows you to them.
So what we know is that joining an after school program could give you a lot of benefits and friend. Also they is a lot of clubs and sports you could join for fun. Also eat a free snack so your not hungry when you get home to your parents. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
331103D7D5CF | "Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing, " said by the philosopher, physician, and humanitarian Albert Schweitzer. Giving a good example by your own experience might influence other people; it depends on the situation. In my opinion, giving a good example is not the only thing to influence people as said in the quote, but there are things other than setting a good examples that influence people. For example, if someone had experience in playing basketball, and another guy was a beginner, it will be helpful if the experienced one helps him and shows him how to play by training him, but if the experienced one tells the begginner person an example of how to shoot the ball but not by showing him, it wouldn't be helpful to him and won't influence him.
One of the reasons i think that example might not be helpful is because when time moves on, the way that things work changes. Some people when they set a good example to influence someone that need motivation, they set an example from their own experience that might be some years ago, That can create a problem. For example, if a computer science major who graduated 10 years ago, and another one who just started college to study computer science and have some obstacles, if the major gave examples to the other guy about what he did in college 10 years ago to influence him, it would be a problem because as time goes we humans move forward in technology and we develop the education, so if the major gave the other guy his own experience it would be different than college now. This example won't help the guy who just started college, but it would be better if the major showed him the way to study and try to explain to him things.
Sometimes people understand examples wrongly and influence others in an incorrect way, and it can be a big problem, It can turn motivation into failure. For example, there was a famous quote saying that failing many times without loss of enthusiasm leads to success, if someone study medicine in college and then he found himself failing tests and projects, but he took this quote as his influencer and he didn't lose enthusiasm, maybe after a while when he find himself still getting the same grades, he will lose enthusiasm and he will give up. The problem here is that he misunderstood the quote, the quote meant that he shouldn't loss enthusiasm even if he fail many times, but he thought that after failing two or three times he will do more better.
Some people may argue that setting a good example by your own behavior is the only and best way to influence other people, because they think that if people follow the examples of the experienced people, they will succeed and will be motivated to do more work. For example, if someone successful gave an example of how he became successful, and what obstacles did stop him, and how did he get through them, Maybe some teenager listen to him and become influenced, and then he work hard to become like the successful guy. Or maybe someone who failed in something listen to the successful guy and learn how did he get through the things that stopped him, and then he become motivated to be successful and he work hard to reach his goal.
In conclusion, influencing others by your own experience might be helpful to some people, but also it can become a problem and not helpful to alot of people. Furthermor, using examples from your own behavior is not the only way to influence others, thats why i disagree with the quote, because examples could be perfect, but it is not the best or the only way. There are other ways as i mentioned, that could turn people's lifes from failure to success. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
33113B7D1125 | People sometimes ask more then one people for advice because they want to see if they say the same opinion or if they have a better opinion then the other person , For example I have a problem at home and i don't know what to do or i'm stressed about it and i ask my friend about it and she tells me her opinion on what she will do if she's in that situation but then i don't know if to do what she said or I didn't like her advice and i ask another person and i liked her advice, But i want to know if theres a better advice so I ask someone else and they tell me another advice to another person, So that's why some people ask more then one person for there advice just to get more ideas on what to do or something like that cause asking more then one person is a better idea because you'll get more advice and you will be thinking which advice is better and which one is inapropet .
So now you ask more then one person about something you don't know what to do or if you have trouble solving something other people can help you and give you good advice and other can give you advice but are bad choices so just ask someone for help or ask someone you trust and will help you. But do you know why it's a good idea asking for help? Well it's good to ask for help because some one can give you advice on what to and what to not do and asking to much people can give you way much ideas on what to do,This helps so much people that needs help because they are like asking people for help and they are helping us to do better choice then a bad choice, Every one can give you a advice on whats better for you problem or question and it will help so much like Parents, Family , and Friends.
Kids can ask advice to everyone even there Teacher, Counselor , And mostly there parents they're always be there if you need help and need advice and they will give you a really better idea, But what i think is better for you guys is ask an a adult then a student just to not make a bad idea and start doing things your not suppose to, So kids just talk to a grown up and they will help you with the advice you need.
We all sometimes need advice by someone so just ask and you'll get a advice you need and everyone will help you help your self don't think that only you need advice we all have something to tell a person and give us there opinion, We are like asking them what they gonna do if they need a advice and is passing the same thing we passing.
When the person you talked about gived you a advice you'll think about it and if it's a good choice you do it and everything comes to peace that's why i can help you if you ask for an advice and it will help you in the fueature too so just ask for advice and they'll give you it.
What if a friend dosen't give you an advice? Then tell your pearents or an adault a school or work to help you, Did you know older people need advice too? Yeah older people need advice too they even need help on things like us not just because they are older it dosen't mean they are not like us that they need advice.
In what do we need advice? We need advice in somethhing we have done bad or you don't know what to do or you have problems you need some advice from someone for they can help you on it that's really important helping someone that needs a advice.
What happens if you don't get an advice? What happen is that you will get depress or get stressed thinking on what to do, And if you get depress if can be dangoures you'll be always be upset won't want to do anything you won't even want to eat or anything that's why if you need a adivce ask someone to help you and you'll be so much better. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
331760E7A5CB | John Lubbock, a famous writer and well known for his master peaces inspired by many others such as friends, family, and other famous writers. John Lubbock once said "Do we choose our own character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control?" it is a very outstanding move, because 86% of the writers use their experiences, knowledge and everything they have known as a different way to interpetrait, and make a book.
Most of the people decides to choose their own character traits, this is due to how their parents treated them and how their childhood was, all thought it is different when someone has had a rough childhood and yet they decide to be a good person, this, this is being different to decide to be different then the person that has caused pain or sorrow to someone, that is moving on for the best, moving on for what is right; on the other hand we have people who do not agree with this, if there is a good side to something there also has to be a negative side is the balance of the universe and the bad side, or the people that can not move forward let the influences of many others affect their point of view of all the situations upon them.
Those people are hurt, full of pain and shame to something that they can not escape from, those people need help because who verdicts that they can escape from their past for a extended period of time. the people who tend to have a bad personality is either because of their past or their present along with the males according to a researcher in Harvard university 78.48 of the population believes that being a male means that they have no right to show their emotions, to be heartless, to be cold. women had fought for their right to vote women fought for their freedom and men are still men. the male population decides to be quiet and dont let their emotions to affect their significant others.
The people have fought in many wars, conflicts and yet there is not for sure that there is equal rights, All of the generation Z are saying "equal rights equal fights" but yet nobody see those equality traits women want their freedom to be exactly like men to look just like men an yet the real men are unable to show emotions and feelings without being judge or lynched.
So why did this British politician Lubbock said "your character will be what yourself choose to make it" because everyone has their own personality and everyone faces their own challenges along with their own problems, men can not be like women because men will get denigrated for it, and women are always free to do what they want because they will judge everyone that is against them. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
331D60E145C4 | One time in high school I met a teacher who looked like a mean person and who didn't like to interact with students or explain over again the stuff that he taught, so I went to talk to my counselor about if there were any possibilities if I could change the class, but she said no. After a while of taking his class, I realized that he is a very good teacher and a very nice person because every time I asked him for help, he would always tried his best to make me understand the topic and do good on my quizzes/ test. It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Some people say that you can know someone's character by just the first impression. First impression are possible to change because they might had a bad day, and you always have to know the character before in order to judge it.
People all over the world are always going to have bad days, and that's normal because life consists on having good days and bad days; if you're having a bad day, of course you won't have a good attitude towards people. For example, some people can have problem at their house, work, school, etc... and obviously that's going to affect on their behavior and they might treat you good or bad, it depends on the situation. When you first see someone and they seems like a bad person, that doesn't mean he is a mean person; he can just be having a bad day or something bad happened. In order to judge someone you have to know the character first.
In life you can't be walking judging people just because they did something or just by their looks. For example,The majority of the population in the whole world knows the saying "
Don't judge a book by its cover
" this meas that just by looking at person from his outside, doesn't mean they are going to be like that on the inside. People might look either a mean person or a good person, there is some people that look like they are a good person and that they have a nice behavior, but at the end of the story they might do you wrong and you are going to be the one losing by trusting the person by just thinking they had " a good personality"; However, there is also the people that looks like a "bad person" but some of those people can be nice from the inside, and you might need help from them at one point.
In conclusion, first impression are possible to change because people might be just having a bad day, and also because after you get to know the character as they originally are, then you are going to start thinking differently about that person. It's important for you to know the character first before you start judging that person, because you never know if that one person that you rejected/judge at the beginning, can be the person that you need the most in the future. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
332F7B4392BA | Former BirtishPrime Minister Winston Churchill Once Said That "Success Consists Of Going From Failure To Failure Without Loss Of Enthusiasm".
In my opinion, the former Birtish Prime Minister Winston Churchill was right about his statement, saying that ''success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Because in life, before you achieve any of your dreams or goals, you've to pass through some difficulties.
Some people may disagree with Winston Churchill saying because they've not experince any hardship, or any failure in life before.
The reason is because they were born with silver or gold spoone in their mouth. They don't even know how hard ship is or looks like. Those people have no idea how it feels to be a failure, or a loser, or to even loss enthusiasm in life.
Even though, some of them are rich today, but they when through a lot of difficulties, disappointments, and they even lost hope in themselves to the point that they couldn't believe that they will make it in life because of the stuggle or hard ship they when through.
In addition, failure plays an important roles in our pursuit of success. The reason I'm saying this is because if you don't have any experince of failure or without the loss of enthusiasm, you won't know the important of that wealth you have or your parents has.
For example, my mother once told me her story that when she was in Africa in my country Liberia, she when through a lot of difficulties, disappointments, and hard ship during the civil war and after the civil war. According to my mother, she said things was really hard on her, and she said that she had no one to helped her to the point that she used to asked people in the community for food to eat just so she and my oldest sister can be able to salveged from hunger.
In summary, the Birtish Prime Minister Winston Churchill was right about his statament that says "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm''. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
33ADAAB38BFC | Should students be allowed to have cell phones during school? I think that students shouldn't be able to have cell phones at school at all because first its to distracting and the student wont be learning anything because he/she would be occupied doing something there not supposed to be doing. Second is school is a leaning environment not a place to be doing other things with your cell phone we come to school to learn! The third why i think having cell phones on campus is because we all have ore free time to do whatever we have to do.
The first reason why i think havening cell phones on school campus is because its really distracting and we wont learn anything because well be occupied on our cell phones. For example , we need to forces on more important things such as school work and maybe after school activates. I think we shouldn't be able to have our phones because 50% of students that have cell phones fail there classes because while the teacher is explaining something important the student us either messing around or texting another student which is not only affecting he/she but others around them.
The second reason why i think cell phones shouldn't be allowed on school campus is because school is a place to learn not use your phone in class. We come to school for one reason and one reason only at that is to go to school and get the education we need for a better future and all of the above. We need to help all students get ahead of life and have good jobs that they could all be proud of.
The third reason why i think having cell phones at school is a bad idea is because we all have free time i do understand we also have to have a social life and communicate with other students or peers. Not everything is fun and games sometimes we just need to expect the what our parents do what they do because they love and care about us.
We shouldn't be able to have cell phones because honestly its just a waste of time and we could do so much better and if we do a good job in school than we would have time for other things because in life there is time for everything but it also has its own time. we shoulnt be abl | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
33AF50FB5ED9 | Some schools have an after school homework club where students and teachers help other students with homework. I think that a homework club would be beneficial to students because it could help with grades, it is not mandatory, and could help with teaching skills.
Homework is a staple of school an students hate it, so why not get some help with it. Most students forget about homework and get a bad grade because of it. Why not get help with homework and remember any other home works you have to do. With a few good homework grades they could pass their classes.
Students all have different ways of thinking and learning, and why should their learning be all the same. If every student had to go and take part in this club the more introverted students would be more tired out. If the students are tired out they are not going to learn anything and that effects them in a bad way, but the homework club is not mandatory that is why it is not a class that we have to go to every other day.
Some students have big dreams, but don't know how to get to them. If someone wants to be an anthropologist, the study of humans, they will need to be smart and brave enough to publish their findings. A homework club can help make trusted bonds and encourage people to talk and speak up for themselves.
So many schools have a homework club but not many people know about it and are failing because of it. I think that a homework club would be beneficial to students because it could help with grades, it is not mandatory, and could help with teaching skills. I hope that this essay will have you consider putting your child in a homework club. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
33CC5A37AC8C | This prompt is talking about if we are choosing our own character traits or is our character formed by influences. First you can choose your own character you just got to know about the person life in what the person did back when he was a teenager in what the person became when he start getting older. In my opinion choosing your own character would make you realize about things that happen back then when everything back then was really dangerous for example they had slaves,mudered people, treating people badly, people been racise and more that people did in we still have on this day because people dont want to listen or they just dont care about what they are doing with there life like can we atleast have peaceful without seeing peoepl dying or taking childrens from there mothers. As you can see life from back then was kinda different for example mothers would marry their own children they would have children with their own child they would force you to marry a old man that you dont even wanna marry or have kids with a old guy that you dont even love this why its good to do your own character because you be searching for information that you dont even know about in it be very interested.
First of all you have to include for information about your own character or if the character formed by influences beyond or control by anything many characters be having there own influences in you gotta find it out to see about or if they are controlling anything for examples like a kingdom,slavery. and being part of a war. As you can see when been through so many wars in some characters be soldiers or a leader of a war to teach his soldiers how to fight a war when they get into a war. For example british soldiers has fight so many wars with alot of countries they either fight for stealing food or because they own them money they do not want to pay them back or because they have a little issues going on between them in they fight to solve their issues.
As you choosing your character you can be creactive with it like you can put somemany things that you need like examples, reasons why you choose this character, get ideas for your character , give alot examples find anything you can so your character can have so many information that it is need it for your character. choosing our own character might be a little hard but we got to find a way to get all the information for it so we can start writing about them in how when find this character interested in we got to know alot of things that this character you are doing has a good information and you want to be curious about.
This quote or prompt helps to figure out about a character that you would like to talk about in what to know about it to see if it helps you later on, in to see what they did to help other people about everything that they went through in this help the students to see that been on a war it is not easy because you are trying everything you can to be alive like searching for your own character it is very interested because you want to see about them in learn alot about the in how they did everything they could to help eachother in to see how we fight for the equal rights alot more thngs that we know now.
My conclusion- how to choose your own character can be easy for you to write about in to find alot of things and important thigns that you would need for your character when you are putting your examples to a five page paragraph about how this character do alot of things in his past and to see if he still doing ,more things now in then. In by you choosing this character would make you realize alot of things in how everything happen back then when people was just trying to live and survive. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
33CCEE3933ED | Have you ever thought about growing? Most people wanted to get better after they have had worked on themselves to be successful already, but in the other hand, people did not have opportunity to go to school. or may be they just did not feel confident enough that they could be better. In my opinion, I think that people should try their best to be something that will benefit other people so that you gain support and just keep expanding.
The first reason why I agree on Emeerson's statement is because. The more you have experience in something, the more chances you have on getting better at it. I think that getting better at something is really important in life in order to live a good lifestyle. But some people are not able to make changes to their selves. They maybe dealing with family issues or personal issues that is keeping them to take advantage of changing.
Another reason why I agree on Emeerson's statement is because. Most people have skills that they learned when they were young which is considered knowledge. That specific skill or knowledge might help you advance something. But at the same time a lot of people have disappointments on their selves and surroundings, which can cause the thinking of not changing to the better.
The final reason of why I agree on Emeerson's statement is because. Most people when they are confident and comfortable, then they would release the skills and persuade the change that is going to make them a better person, and that could change their life forever. it is convenience and worth making the change no matter what the situation be so do not take advantages the wrong way
After all, there has been a lot of different opinions and ideas all around the world, but you as an individual should know what is best for you. we have talked about why and why not people should move up to the next step which is changing. changing can harm or improve you if you do it the right way, by taking chances since young then, most of us would have a lot more better strategies and know what is right from wrong by the time we grow. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
33CFC6838E04 | Dear: Generic_Name
I agree for the possitive attitude is the key. Because is good when you have a very good attitude. Also if you got a good attitide you can has positive thins in your life you can has to many fiend. And you can't have problems. because you, are very positive in your success life. You will , make very good decision, for your posiive life. The things most important in your kife is you get a job you need to have a attitude . Because if you don't have a good attitude you can improve in your life, The society if bad with you .Because you don't have agood attitude and , but you has to be possitive in your life to has a good attitude in your life.
Also sometime is good but some day is no because is a hard work to have a good attitude when a person don't want to talk to you that why is very hard to be positive Because sometime people talk bad thing about, you and you dont have a good raction in your life and the is not good for me and you need to calm down to will you have a positive thing in your life you has to wait for everythin nothing is easy in this life.
For example , you will has to have a good attitude ,well had to has positive things in your life to be a very good person , and yopu need to be a very good person because the society can said the you has a very great attitude in your life, And you can make where ever you wants if you have a very good positive attitude with your life and anything. Also you can make your own positive attitude not one make your decisions every one help to you has a positive life to have a very good decisiond.
When you has a great good positive attitude for your life is when you got everythin right .You can't worry for anything for the only thing the you can importam is to have a attitude right and the people dont talk bad about you, and the society. I think the positive life is the most importamt in every life. Every single life has to be positive an got a very good attitude. And every body cant have a greAt position to make the society most better.
I was thinking the attitude is very importamt for every body because if you don't have a great attitide you can get a job . Because in a job need people with a positive attitud. Also you can't improve and ,any job the you, cant have because you got a very greatt positive attitude about , you be very friendly every peron and every person who not have a very good attitude, the person never improve because,i think no body want a person the is not positive in his on life in every work need people with a very geat positive in his own life in has a great attitude | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
33DEFCDAD05F | Technology has made a positive impact in our lives. Technology can be used for many things whether it's browsing the web, shopping, or planning for vacation. Technology has had impacted us negative wise and positive wise. For a lot of people they see technology as a huge positive impact for people.
People may think now that technology is out people contact other people way less but high chance that's not the case. People that do things like gaming or just connection with others online make it way easier to meet other people. For example theres websites like Omegle where you just go on and get into a voice chat with a random person around the country or maybe in other countries. There's also many other websites or apps where you can contact random people or even friends and family. There's also gaming, for gamers you usually go into lobbies or servers with thousands of people which is also an easier to contact people. For example if you own a PC, a PlayStation, or even an Xbox there's many games where you can contact people if you're making new friends or even just playing with them for as long until someone gets off. I have heard many stories where people have met online and grew a friendship even though they've never met in person they probably have each other's social media and numbers.
Many people use technology to shop. Online shopping is an easier way of finding things you need or even things you want. People commonly do online shopping only because it's just easier and quicker. Some people may have a busy schedule so it will make things easier if they're running errands or even just going out and spending time with family or friends without having to add something else to their list of plans. Online shopping is probably something everyone has done multiple times and many people can agree that it is easier and quicker than driving out to the store and searching through the whole store to find the things you want or need.
In conclusion of this technology has made a positive impact in our lives in many things that people do on a daily basis. Technology could be seen as positive or negative depending on how people see it but in my eyes it's done a good job and has definitely made things easier for a lot of people. | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 |
33E25E6A8028 | dear principal, i think students should be allowed to bring cell phones to school during the school day. It is important to allow students to have them incase of a emergency . cell phones are also important to have because they are very useful if something goes wrong they are able to call 911 or 311 for personal help. They should also be allowed because cell phones is a good way to let students keep contact during school free hours.
It is important to let students have them incase of a emergency . A lot of students can use their phone if they have been hurt . If a student gets bullied by other peers they can call the school and let them know that someone has been hurt by other students from school. If something bad had happen to that student during school hours they can always use their cell phone.
they are also useful to have because sometimes a lot of things can go wrong.
Students at some point we have accidents like spilling milk on our shirts or not making it to the washroom and we can use our phone to call mom and dad to bring us extra clothing. cell phones are not always to text but also just a good thing to have during school.
you never know what can happen during the end of the day like going home. Their are so many dangerously things that can happen and its important to have a cell phone to call 911 . and they are cool to be allowed during free classes and be able to use them at some point during our day.(: | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
33E7F1C7E399 | Summer should be normal for students and people. summer should be to enjoy with your family and friends. summer is there to have fun go shopping ,swimming ,and go vacation. summer is not go be there fro long time because winter is coming so you have to spend time with anybody. Some people doesn't spend time with there friends or family because they have to work or do some thing important thing.
Summer is one of the best weather that could happen because is not cold but is warm you can go to the beach to have fun. people like summer is one the best thing that can happen because there water to play ,go camping ,and hiking. On summer there like thousand thing what to do like going to another state ,and spend the night are your friend house. Kid like to spend time with there friends some of the time sometime with there family or with there aunt or uncle. Summer is fun like really fun because there no school get to stay home and play video games.
Summer is to stay home or get out of the house and have some fun with your friends. when summer comes the the flowers from the tree grows and grows and turn in to fruit. When winter come come the flowers from tree falls ,and it get cold. Summer is go be there every year so we can have fun with friend and family or go out town to visit your all old parents. sometime summer can rain a lot because is is warm weather it can rain when is cold too.
School ends on summer because they let kids have to have some fun and teachers can have break to. Some time summer can get to hot it can get to 100 digressed even more. some people invited to have pool party in the summer. people like summer because they can do what they want like go fishing ,camping ,and go diving. Summer can be good or bad because it depends what do you do wrong.
Summer bring as the fair where there are avouch of game in there so you can go with your friends or family. Summer is good weather so you can go swimming your friends and family. In summer they open the pools can go to the river and swim and other thing to do. Many people go to visited there family or they go to placed like California ,Generic_City ,and Florida. summer is the best thing that you can do because is go be there each year and do something that you want to do. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
33F18D5D8867 | Would it be surprising to know that kids learning at home help then not stress out as much? Stress is mainly caused by students getting to much school work that cannot all handled in one night. Everyday kids complain about having to much homework and when working at home there is not any homework. Allowing children to work on their own schedule helps them become more motivated to work. Students being educated at home gain more freedom to create their own schedule and their own rules. Learning at home and not at school helps kids to succeed and have better grades. No only does learning at home provide less distraction, it provides students with flexible schedule.
First, Students complain about having to much homework because students who spend a lot of time on their homework and don't have enough free time for them to relax is considered having to much homework. When they get out school and they have to practice some sports them they have to go to their house just to eat and them to do their homework, they cannot spend time with their family. Homework can limit the time. Students can spend with their friends, family, or other activities they can do. Too much homework can also give students more pressure from parents interference, this may cause unhealthy amount of stress. This is why students prefer home school.
Second, One of the best things about home school is that It can be done at anytime because It can be done at any time, children have a flexible time schedule with mean that the parents can helps. The student can work around schedule instead of the parent working around the students schedule. Some students have trouble working at a school because they cannot understand the material at the pace set by teachers. Home schools allow students to work at their own pace and on their own schedule. Another thing about homeschooling is that there are not rules about technology or how to dress. This is good because instead of worrying about the rules, the students can focus on their studies.
Third, when you are taking a test or taking notes at a public school there are may distraction that can make students loss focus on what there are doing. This is another reason that learning from home would benefit student. Learning from home won't have the distraction that that a classroom has. As a result of this, student won't loss focus on the work they are doing and get better grades. One of the reason students get distracted in the first place is because they are in an environment they are no familiar with, which makes then feel uncomfortable. If a student learns from home they will feel more relaxed and comfortable and won't stress about work. In a school, you are stuck at desk for 6 hours and have limit time to eat and limited bathroom breaks. This does not helps students at all. In conclusion, the environment at home will benefit student's by giving them better grades.
In conclusion, Students should be offered classes online because the environment is less stressful, which could benefit test scores. At home there is less distractions, rather than at school where are many different things to worry about. The flexibility of the time students are allowed to complete work would benefit the mental health and grades of the student. Many students successfully take some, and even all, classes from home. School systems and all districts should offer distance learning. | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
340BCFE7E249 | When elementry students have a lesson on what they are about to learn. It is very important because they need to pay attention what is the teacher is teaching the class. Elementry school students should know what is the lesson is on, they should take notes if they a quiz or sol on it. Students should pay attention in class because if you don't pay attention in class, you don't know what is the lesson is about. If a student doesn't know what is the lesson is on, then find a way to explain what is the lesson is on. Some students that don't pay attention in class, then asks them what is the lesson is about?
Some students don't like to pay attention in class becuse they don't want to learn about the lesson that is given to them. The teachers have to give the lesson because so the elementry school students can learn more things. They can also help the elementry school students if they are having trouble misunderstanding the lesson that the the teacher is given. Teachers have to pay attention to the kids to make sure that they are learning something everyday. The teacher's job is to teach elementry school students to learn something everyday they come into school. Other teachers might help other students to learn more about the lesson that the teacher was given to them. The whole elementry school can also help with the lesson that kids are having misunderstanding about the lesson is been given to the teachers. Teachers can help the student on the other things that part of the lesson.
achers are helping the kids learn something everyday because if the kids are not learn nothing then, the kids don't know anything about the lesson. Elementry school students should learn the lesson so they can do more things about the lesson, but if the elementry school students don't know what they are learning then, they don't know what other things to do about the lesson. Other kids might help the kid that doesn't know a lot everyday. They can also help each other out. The teachers can help the students learn something everyday. If a student didn't know something in the lesson then, the teacher can help them on it.
The elementry school students should ask about the lesson. If a student doesn't know how to do the other things that go with the lesson then, ask the teacher how to do it. If elementry school students know more things about the lesson then, they know how do the other things about the lesson. They can also help other students that don't understand what is the lesson is talking about. The elementry school teachers can if a way to explain to the student doesn't understand what is the lesson is talking about. This is what is important to elementry kids.
I hope elementry school students can learn more things in the future. Students should pay attention class so they know what is the lesson is talking about. Teachers should keep an eye on the students that they are paying attention and they are learning something everyday. The students that don't pay attention should pay attention in class, so the student can understant what is the lesson is talking about and the student can learn something new everyday when the student go to school. Students should learn new things when they go to school eveyday. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
3418CB8125B3 | I think i agree because some people were seeking success and some other people were doing the same but they were doing their best to reach what they asked for. People didnt want to to loose what they needed because they have to keep doing what they are doing to reach that goal that they always think of. Assuming like you want to be something that you like to be you have keep trying until you get to it because is like you want to have it to your own self. People dont like to fail because they dont want to fail, they work hard to achieve the goal. Winston Churchill was telling people that when you fail to do something people will get it and stand up for it. Even though people already achieve their goal, they to keep going at it. Winston Churchill was maybe tell the people about how important to take a role that are engage to success. People felt inspired about his quote because makes think that people were strong about the the feeling that they have to succeed into it. People believed that if they succeed through it they would achieve it. I conclude that if people want to succeed into what they are in, or already done, they still need keep trying and push themselves to achieve that goal. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
34317A7F1262 | I think is a good idea for young people to take a career a young age, because they are learning more stuff and when they going to the university they already going to know what career they are taking for their future, its good to them because they can be someone in their life doing their own stuff for them.
If they take a career in high school is going to be better learning the same stuff from the university. But is good idea if they take a career in the university because they can teach him better the stuff he need for a creer. The career is the future for young people doing the right stuff and thats why the most people want to take a career for their future, and high school are preparing them for the university. Thats why is good idea to selecte a career in high school thats the future for our lifes. The university help you a lot in the future if u want to be someone in your life you have to do the right things.
The university help you a lot in the future if u want to work in a big stuff, you can do it because u took the career in th euniversity. Thats why in high school we can selecte a career for our future. but at the same time is bad to take a career for other people because they are thinking, a lot of that and they can't not consentrate, in the stuff they doing. The career can make us a better person for our family, teaching them to the right things, we can do in your life to be someone everyone can be someone, if you ready to take a career. Everyone can do it with help from our high school and the university thats going to help you a lot in your life.
We can show our parents the we can do stuff for our future making, the right stuff for our life and everyone will remember who you was if you showing, people that u can do stuff selecting the right career for our life everyone can be a doctor,police,teacher, and other stuff thats why is good idea to selecte, a career at young age. Studied hard is a good stuff because you doing the stuff you want and like for your future showing your parents you taking a career they going to be happy for you and you can show other people if you can do it they can do it too. Thats why we have to learn things in high school, for the future. | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
3438C0C5ACEA | I oppose to extending the school day to one and a half minutes or ninety minutes. Students need to get back home sooner so they can practice their homework and do some of their own hobbies at their spare time. Schools must have an appropriate schedule so students can actually have time to work at home afterwards. The school board shouldn't extend the school day by adding one and a half hours because the students won't have time for themselves at home, the classes would take longer, and the school will end at evening time.
First off, students always want to get back home when school is over, but if the school extends the time, the students wouldn't have time to do their own activities at home. For instance, if one student comes home at 4:50 pm, and they finish their homework at 5:30 pm, then their parents would tell them to get ready for bed because kids have to sleep early at 8:00-9:00 so they can be ready for school the next day.
Secondly, classes would also have an extended amount of time in the daily schedule if the school day extended. Students will start complaining about the slowness of the class due to the start and end times of classes being changed. For example, the kids would be complaining over the lesson taking so long. Some students would also fall asleep during class too. Therefore, extended class times can affect how students will behav during class.
Lastly, the school will end at the evening time. Students would be feeling less energetic when school ends, and they won't be able to get home to do their homework because they're half asleep. When they get home from school, their parents will notice how tired and exhausted they are from what happened at school and the students will have to rest and sleep for the entire day. If the school extends the schedule, then the students' energy won't be enough for them when they return home from school.
In closing, extending school hours will affect the students' behavior and the time they have for themselves at home. The kids won't be able to do the fun stuff at their spare time after finishing their homework because they have to go to bed early for school. They'll also feel tired and complain about the length of the school time. When they return home, they'll groggily enter the house and end up resting for the rest of the day. Schools don't need to extend the day by adding one and a half hours to each day. They need to require a proper schedule so the students can behave properly during the day. | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 5 | 4.5 |
343A80DD6FB3 | Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others.
People can checkout books, shop, and play games without speaking to another person.
Has the limitation of human concact due to the use of technology had positive or negative effects on people's lives?
Towards to technology, lack of communication is going to ruin our human sociaty.
Especially when phones are advancing in the next years.
One day, technology will take over the human population.
Say this, one day a boy meets this girl from school and they were talking through a social media,
but one day, they thought to meet up in person and when they saw each other, it was really awkward at first, but then they became very good friends. So they started to go to the movies, the mall, restuarants, and etc.
They started as two random strangers to having a, boyfriend and girlfriend relationship. Saying this to someone is really touching, because liking someone is to die for, but there's rules to follow and things to do and not just kissing or making love, its being there for them and hopefully you'll be there too.
Meeting that special person is a blessing, because for so long people have been trying to talk to this special someone,
but its really hard to confess it through person, but throught a screen is pretty easy, but do you really mean it?
Saying "I love you" means alot to someone, but actually saying it over and over again, it just warms my heart to say this, but i think im in love. Not just saying to make people to break through a screen, because saying "i wanna break up" it really just says you do not have the heart to say it to their face. Honestly everyone who does this, should just atleast try it and see what's more than life, then just being on the phone most of the day.
Once the day comes everyone will just destroy their own phone to prevent from robot abomination.
Sticking together as one, we can stop phone users and type of electronic device to end this obsession once and for all. Opening up to someone, its like a flower is about to blossum. Seeing that special someone is a delight!
Through peoples lives this is a negative thing toward human lives. Knowing that someday we will come together as human beings and sttle this like us! | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
344D7B1A7E49 | I agree with Emerson's statement. Why would some people never grow up? Some people may have childish personality so it's most likely that the person won't be able to change much. The three reasons are: your attitude, violence, and lastly friends that some people are using you and say some harsh things when your not around.
Some may say that some people will be able to change. They are wrong because some people won't be able to change how they act towards you. My first reason is attitude: some people won't be able to change to change your attitude towards them, and won't be able to change how you act towards them. For example, I sometimes have a very bad attitude towards my sister, Generic_Name. I always yell at my sister, Generic_Name for asking me to do something or give her something even though she's younger than me by three years.
My second reason is violence: Some people won't be able to change their violence, and some people my end up hurting their closest friends. For example, back in middle school I was always a sweet girl who doesn't hurt people, but after, when I cut my hair some people end up calling me names which made me upset and I started to get a little violent towards the people who call me names. I'm still sweet towards my friends who understands how I feel when someone call me names, but I also try very hard to control my violence so I won't get in trouble. The second example is: My youngest sister, Generic_Name gets violent when my other sister, Generic_Name gets her angry. Afterwards, she tries very hard not to get violent just like me.
My last reason is friends: Some people wants to use you for money because they wanted to buy clothes only for themselves. The other one is some people will act nice, but, when you leave they will say very cruel things to you. For example, I watch my favorite movie where the popular, mean girls are acting friendly to the new girl, but when the new girl leaves the popular, mean girls say harsh things about her so the new girl won't be able to hear them.
In conclusion, why would some people never grow up? The way the person is acting childish would make them not change that much. I agree with Emerson's statement, because some people can be very childish, and its most likely won't be able to change that much. The three reason are: some people have a very bad attitude, sometimes get very violence, and lastly some people may use you and say very cruel things about you when your not there. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
34553E598A00 | FIRST, I CHOOSE TOHAVE THE LONGER SPRING BREAKS.SECOND ,THE STUDENT CAN TRAVEL TO VISIT THEIR FAMILY.THIRD, ENJOYA THE BEACH FOR TIME THAT STUDENTS WANTS.DOESN'T HAVE WORRY ABOUT GOING BACK TO SCHOOL.
FIRST I CHOSE THAT STUDENTS SHOULD HAVE LONGER BREAK BECAUSE THE STUDENT NEED TO FUN FOR THE BREAK . II CHOSE THAT STUDENT HAVE THE LONGER SUMMER BREAK BECAUSE THE IS MY FAVORITE BREAK IN MY ALL FAMILY STAY HOME OR SOMETIME WE ARE TRAVEL SOME ANOTHER COUNTRY .
THE MOST OF THE STUDENT TRAVEL FOR ANOTHER PLACE .THE SOME STUDENTS CAN TRAVEL TO VISIT THEIR FAMILY BECAUSE THERE FAMILY WAS A DIFFERNT COUNTRY OR DIFFERENT PLACE .WE ARE VISIT HOME BECAUSE WE ARE ENJOYA THEIR FAMILY.WE ARE TRAVEL THE THE FUN PLACE BECAUSE MY FAMILY WAS A LOVE THERE .
WE ARE TRAVEL THE BEACH WE ARE ENJOY THE BEACH FOR MY FAMILY OR MY FRIENDS BECAUSE MY FRIEND AND WE ARE PLAY THE SAND WE HAVE THE FUN .MY ALL FAMILY WAS GOING THERE WE HAVE FUN. I CHOSE TONOT HAVE LONGER SPRING BREAK BECAUSE WON'T CATCH COLD .MORE DIFFICULT FOR STUDENTS OF THE CANSANTRATE .I CHOSE THE BOTH SIDE BECAUSE THERE WAS A NOT HAVE LONGER SUMMER BECAUSE WE CAN CATCH COLD MOVE DIFICULT FOR THE CONSANTRATE FOR THE STUDENTS .WE ARE TAKING THE LONG BREAKBECAUSE WE ARE FORGET THE EVERYTHINGS . I THINKS ALL STUDENT ENJOYA THE SUMMER BREAK BECAUSE THE SUMMER BREAK WAS THE FUN FOR THE STUDENTS.
MOST OF THE STUDENTS TAKE THE LONG BREAK BECAUSE TNE STUDENTS MOVE THE DIFFERENT PLACE .SUMMER BREAK TAKE THE 1WEAK FOR STUDENTS .THERE WAS THE DIFFERENTS KINDS OF THE SEASON BECAUES MOST PEOPLE LOVE SUMMER OR WINTER AND SPRINGS.SOME PEOPLE LOVE THE SUMMER OR SOME PEOPLE LOVE THE WINTER OR PEOPLE THE SPRINGS. THE SUMMER BREAKS OR WINTER SOMST OF THE PEOPLE ENJOY WINTER .THIS SPRING BREAK I WAS A TRAVEL TO MY COUNTRY BECAUSE I'M VISIT TO MY FRIENDS .I LOVE TO VISIT MY FRENSD .I THINK I AM MOVING DIFFERENT PLACE FOR THREE DAY THIS PLACE WAS A BEAUTIFUL.THER WAS DIFFERENT KINDS OF FLOWER OR DIFFERENT KINDS OF THE COLORS OR DIFFERENT FROOT OR DIFFERENT DRESS
DIFFERENT KINDS OF FESTIBLE.MOST STUDENTS LOVE TAKE 4,4 WEAK BREAKS THE SCHOOLS . | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
346D75CE413A | It's good to have afterschool homework club, because it could help to understand the homework and be great at it. For example, I went to afterschool homework club in every tuesday and thursday at my old school for English. I thought it will be bored, but then it was fun and easy to understand. Sometimes in homework clubs, They do fun lesson to under what to do on the homework. For example, at my old homework club, We sometimes have a field trip to the public library to some fun lesson. In homework club, you sometimes get help from the teacher, or classmates. At my old homework club, We sometimes video chat to some famous authors. Sometimes we play fun games with the principal. But there are thing to get used to, Like you need to know if someone is picking you up, or you are ride the bus. For example, I forget my mom is not picking me up, because she was at work. It took me two hours for a ride, because everyone in my family was busy. And you leave two hours later the your regular time to leave school. The goal in Afterschool homework clubs is helping student to understand the subject that have trouble on. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
346E77F08903 | My opinion is what, the student and doctor have that to make less time, in the hospital because for to be for to receive, better the classes in the school, because all the doctors for aux to make good his work, have that to rest good because being doctor is nothing easy is one run, very hard, beautiful, of so much dedication and love. I think that is so good that recieve two hours the classes but also is very important that work, the sufficiently, the legal of 7 at 8 hours because. He have that conserve his energy for all the day have that eat good.
Also I think that four-day work week, is good so have more time for preparation more study more in his house in the school. also have more time for to be with his family etc, for example; He doctor have that to be disposed the 24 hours the day because, for the emergency's his benefits the work in on hospital are so much so how for Her also for his patient. for the doctor is very important. that He doctor to be disposed every day every time, also if the doctor work work, more more his pay is so good for everything. he have more opportunities in the life. | 1.5 | 1.5 | 1.5 | 1.5 | 1.5 | 2.5 |
34716B652420 | I thing working with a group of persone it will be super good, because the time going more faster, and also that fell more good working with a group, and because we can helpind of each other, and I thing we can make more friends when you work with a group, what happend whent you work alone you can be bored really faster or sometinh like that, and you goind super slow and you dont not what to do to make the time going super faster, you cant talk with not body and finished it faster, and you fell the time goin slow and you dont know what to do to make the time going faster, and for example when you are working with a group of people you fell good, beacuse when you dont know something they can helpind you with the ting that you dont know, and thats how you can make a idea of how to doing it new time, and also if you work like that you can finished it super faster, lest suport that I working with a group of 4 persone each one have to do one part of the proyect that we doing it and explaint one part of the proyect but if one of us forget something we can help explait it, what happend if I work by my self on the presentation I have to reading and explaint everything not body can helping me with the presentacion or when I dont undestand something, a presentation have to be with a lot of anwer and explait much, thats why I thing is bettler work with a group of people. | 2 | 1.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
3498E7E2DAB6 | In the principals office there is quote stating that " your life can be beneficial if your doing something very productive, because it can lead you to great success in life" In some way we ask ourselves if we are do something with our lives and be thinking ahead on what we want to do with our life and what can take us to success. Is that true?. Its more than just having something to do. Life is very short, As long as you are doing something with success. Living is an option as well as just giving up and not trying very enough. Accomplishing something in life to any dream you want to have. If you dont try as hard in life, you will never succeed and imagine all those who gave up and thinking... Where they are now?. Living life can only be chosen just by you and it's only your choice to think in what direction you want to take. Although some may believe that life,belief, and hope prove that doing something with your own future can accomplish and lead you to a successful life.
Your life can be turned around very quick, if only you are doing something very little that makes you happy and know that sticking with it, can take you anywhere you want in your future just only by trying and not giving up on your own self. Not trying and thinking way ahead of your own future can bring yourself down which can lead you to depression, low self of esteem , and as well of not having very much hope. In human society it has been discovered that in most of our population much as 40% of our people in the U.S are unemployed and don't have anything to do which leads them to go down in their life. There is so much poverty going on in this world and just by thinking about it and you think to yourself and say what did they do wrong in life that brought them to were they are now?. Your future can be so easy as long as you try and have hope in your own self. Just by knowing that you have accomplished anything in life can lead your own way to success. Your future can only be held in your hand no one else. Like its said once life can only chosen due too live a long term of time or short period of time its all held under your back, your shoulders, and your own self future. Being successful life is very important to your life having many accomplishment can make your self feel very motivated and make it very good. You can make your life very easy and not to hard just as long your are doing something that makes you happy and also as long what right direction you are taking and what good path is in your way. Life isnt easy either, it can be very difficult just as long as your trying at your very best and your pushing yourself into having great success, you will be at your very best and the top est you can be. The choice you make, can make it very effectively on you and it can change anything.
The make key in life is as well having much belief on your own future or in life.
Belief can only be happened by you and no one else, It can be very good and at its best just as long your try and making your life not to difficult. Having belief isnt bad at all its just a feeling you have on yourself and that the feeling makes it good for just for yourself and no one other. Every person in the world is very different in their way, everyone isnt the same in the way you see or in the perspective you think in. In society each person can think any type of way they want and they only problem is that you should be only be worrying about yourself but no other. There has been many issues due too how you believe and what others think about you and get to worried about it. Our world shouldnt be like that, in our belief we should stay positive in each one of us and stay motivated in any situation you go through. The belief in come in any one and whoever think in the mindset of way, we can all go through difficult times and not have any belief in ourselves. But only yourself can change no other can do that for you. The accomplishment in life can mean allot in yourself and can also have no good beneficial idea just for you, but something you can also do is give a big impact in human society.
In setting a good state of mindset can change you very completely, another word to help yourself could also be hope. Having hope could lead you very far in life and also having great accomplishments that can also lead you to a big success. If you cant see it but others can see how your life is being impacted on you not doing something with your life. Only you can change that, but as others can't. Another key to life is hope. It can take you very far and also lead you in any direction yourself takes or as well in any path you want. Having hope is an option and a belief you want or can have. Not every person has hope or believes in themselves because all they want too do is fail. Others can see you fail and not try, but it is very hard for you to see yourself. In life if you have it can lead too do good things in life and have great accomplishments that no other has, just by having good hope. Just know to yourself that having hope can lead yourself to great victory and a great life that no other can have but you.
In those who dont believe that if are doing something isnt an accomplishment to success, which that takes my position in saying that themselves thinking that is wrong. Because a key to success in life is having many accomplishments and lead you very far. But in those who also say that being inactive is a way too success is also wrong on their point of view and isn't a true fact statement. Inactivity cant take you too far in life and isnt a beneficial success to life. Having anything to do that you enjoy can lead too good accomplishments and also great success.
Having a great life,hope, and belief can take you very far and lead you to any direction or path you want to take. Any one can have a great life just as long as you try. Life is easier as long you make it a success. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2 | 3 |
349FF2E7D179 | Although, setting a good example by your behavior is helpful to others, there are other ways to set a good example. Talking to people and persuading them to do good is influential, you can save someone's life by talking to them, you can help someone be successful by talking to them and influencing them to do good helping them take the right path to becoming successful, seeing someone fail knowing you could've spoke to them and influenced them on the right path would suck; I personally would feel horrible, sometimes all it takes is a couple words to influence someone. People don't always pay attention to your actions, people pay attention when their spoken to, when you talk to someone one on one it's so much easier to get their attention rather than you behaving good in class for example. Actions can determine the way you change someone's decisions, the way you behave can set a good example to other people but ask yourself would you rather have someone talk to you or you go off based on how someone else behaves?
Confidence in yourself is also a good way to influence people, you need to be confident in what you're going to say to the other person, you need to be assured of what you're going to say to them. In order for you to be confident you need to genuinely know that person in order to find ways to influence them. Once you talk to them and get to know them better you can go ahead and influence someone, it isn't always how you behave there are plenty of ways you can influence someone. Confidence in yourself is important because once you're confident everything will go smoothly, find out what the person likes and dislikes once you have that in hand you're good to go. Honesty plays a big part when it comes to influencing someone, why? When you speak with honesty you won't hesitate in what you're talking about, you won't feel guilty of lying because you're speaking the truth. Respect is also something you should when influencing someone, when you show someone respect the connection of the dialogue increases and the other person will be interested in talking to you.
Determination into influencing someone is probably the most important thing, when you're determined into doing something it's because you really want to do it, nothing is stopping you from doing what you're determined to do. When you're determined into influencing someone you feel secure in what you're doing, that's when confidence kicks in determination and confidence are somewhat alike, determination is when you've decided to do something and there's no turning back, once you feel determined influencing someone will be easy, especially if you know the person well. Decision making on yourself is important too, you can't go off influencing people to do wrong you need to do a self check and ask yourself if you're ready to influence people, you have to ask yourself do my actions match what I say, when influencing someone you want to influence them to do good not bad.
Preparation, you have to prepare yourself before going off to influence other people, why? Because you can't go off influencing people if you're not prepared to do so, do research on how to positively influence people, practice it with friends and family. Influencing people isn't easy, it takes a lot of practice, determination, confidence, respect and just getting to know the person well, once you have all those qualities you're able to go off and influence people that need help, people that need someone to talk them through, there are people out there that rather have someone talk to them and influence them on the right path rather than watching how other people behave.
Behavior isn't the only thing the only thing you can do to influence someone, to influence someone you need to be prepared, you need to have confidence in yourself before going and trying to convince people to do things how you tell them to because sometimes we feel like we're right but we never take the time and think if we're wrong or go back and see what you can improve in. Make sure you're on the right path so you can ahead and help someone else take the right path with you. Go ahead and influence someone just remember that your behavior isn't the only thing that people look at, people look at your qualities and how you approach them, make sure you do everything correctly and you'll be set. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
34A066E69905 | There are two types of working. one of them is workinng with a group, another one is working individually. Although some people prefer to work alone. I belive it is so much better to work in a group. If we compare these two working types, the benefits of group work are more then those working alone.
Firstly, I prefer to work in a group because group work allow a person to work according to his or her strength, since the the group members apply their strong side to the work, the completion time will be faster. For instance, I was involve in a car desgin project several years ago. one person made engineering calculation to understand which parts are critical for our design, I made the drawings of the car components, and another friend of mine made the presentation for our project, then he present it to the teacher, He gave us a good respond and additional points since we completed our work before the due date. to be more precise, we did a great job, because we devided the work according to our strong sides.
Another reason why I prefer to work an a group is that I think that this type of work establishes a stonger relationship between the group members. As humans, sociallzation it important for us and working with a group give us a chance to improve our relationship. when people are in a group, they have to communicate with each other at each step of the process. for example, in our last year elective course, I made new friends becaude we were involved in a group project together. Thankds to the project, we did build a great relationship among each other, and we are still in touch.
lastly, group work improves the sense of responsibility. All group members are aware that their perperformance effects the group, so all group members try to do their best and work hard to get better results. For example, A few years ago, some of my friends and I participated in a competition which was related to optimization. since there was a lot of thing to do, we devide the topics among each other. we did not have enough information about one of the shared parts. however, a person who got that subject made a lot of effort to learn the topic well. He attended online course and read books related to that field. Eventualy, he accomplished it and did a great job. what I'm trying to say is that in a group work, even if a person does not have enought information related to his or her working area, he or she may learn things with his or her effort becuse he or she knows that a miskake will cause negative outcomes.
In conclusion, working with a gruop makes things more easier and helps make the group member work more happily. If we take the info account to all these factors, we may reach the conclousion that working in a group has more advantages than working alone. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
34AC1808D15A | Some school districts offer programs that allow high school student to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years.
student who follow this plan must take courses during the summer or in the evening.
Is it a good idea for student to finish high school early?
I believe that is not a good idea for a student to finish high school in three year. The reason for this is because they might have a change of heart in what they want to be. Also having four year of high school gives them time to see if they really made a good choices on their career. Also "will they go along with take courses during the summer?"
when it time to have fun,relax and enjoy the hot nice weather with family and friends. These are one of the reason that its not good idea.
Another way to look at this is to find out if there going to stick with the career they pick.
For example, when pick a job everyone look for better pay and benefits to see if the best fit for them . For a student it is totally different because they are look for better pay instead of look for a fitting job they will like an enjoy and stay at . Instead they look at a job that didn't suit them, then just quit looking and jumping from job to job.
Therefore i find it best if student take there time and complete all four year of high school so that they see what they like to do and complete all their goals and achievements.
Another subject is that entering college and the work force one year early is stressful with a lot of responsibility.
There no time to be acting out. Taking your time in high school isn't so bad there not as much stress, as in going off to college because of the expenses there will be.
entering college one year early is stressful there many reason. one of these reason is there no time to slack off its all about studying and getting everything done. where in high school you time to turn thing in later if there not fully completed.
As you see there a big different in the two, think about the choices before making a quick one.
In conclusion having four years of high school let them have time to figure out what they want to after they leave to see what they become. There no rush there time, to see what they want to be and what their going to do. There many goals that can be achieve also thing to get better on. Once you leave high school it time to response able for these reason i think it best to do all four year because there no rush on see who you want to be. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
34C829F3DC6A | Going to parks can be exiting for people because they get to have fun by playing tag, hide and seek, or maybe look at insects. I like going to parks because i get to ride my BMX bike around with my friends. some adults go to parks to exercise, others like kids get to play and have fun by swinging or playing on the slides.
Some kids go outside in front of their house and play other games like hopscotch, jump rope, or like other people they can do other activities outside and ride bikes around or go to a skate park. there are endless amounts of activities for people to do outside, playing on the swings at the park can be fun because when i go there i like to see who can go the highest and sometimes i just do it for fun when im bored
People that like to find and inspect bugs can go at the park, the park has lots of bugs including butterflies, ladybugs, caterpillar, and fireflies. some people find bugs interesting for some reason. theres also a park called a dog park. but you would normally see kids having fun, Other people at the park like to play tag, tag is a very fun game and i think that kids would have fun playing it, hide and seek is also an option. theres no point of going to the park if you can't have any fun. My favorite thing to do at the park is play on the swings, when i get bored i start to ride my BMX bike around my neighborhood. Spending time outdoors is good for you. The park has a lot of things you can explore there,but playing is my favorite.
There can also be some animals at the park like birds and ducks, there is also a place called a dog park where dogs go to play and have fun, dogs need fun too! at the dog park you can teach your dog tricks there or just let him/her have fun, maybe even let them meet new dogs! but in my opinion a normal playground is better. Taking your dog for a walk is an activity you can do outside but you can do anything outside or in a park as long as you have FUN. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
34D76C62269C | If you still attended school, how would it feel to go to school the whole year? Just have off 3-4 weeks of summer break, maybe 2 weeks of winter break and 1 week in fall and spring break.
Well I can imagine that and just imagining that makes my head hurt.
Just having to come for 8-9 months of school is hard for some students and I would think that less number of students would come to school if we had a year-round school. Just having a normal school year(8-9 months)is amazing. Although some people say that having a year-round school is a amazing idea because that way students would not forget what they had learned over the year, actually having a year-round school is not a great idea because students would have less stress about school and also students would try harder when they come back from summer break.
Although some people say that having a year-round school is an amazing idea because that way students would not forget what they had learned over the year.
Also because students would come back after 3-4 weeks and still remember.
Having a year-round school would give students more time to learn all the material they have to know and more easy and faster. also have more opportunity to get better grades because you are more time in school. I read in a article that it said that the more time you spend in school and focus the better it is for you in the future. Having a year-round school has advantages and disadvantages such as being more time in school,less time being out of school, maybe less school activities, less summer time , etc.
Many things can change when the school changes. is always better to keep the old way than start a new way and not be successful.
I think that not having a year-round school is a good idea because students would have less stress about school.
Students wont be as stress because of school the whole year and only a little bit of vacation. Stress can be something bad not just for students but for everyone. Stress causes illness such as your head hurts,back hurts, feel like not doing anything, etc. Not having a system of school like that can give students more time for vacation alone or with the family. Having a 3-4 moths of summer vacation is enough for you to have a really nice vacation with family or like I said before alone. school causes a lot stress for students and having to come all year is more stressful. enjoying your summer is not just about one week or two is about having time for yourself and family.
also not having a year-round school would make students try more for the next year that they come back to school.
When students have more time off school it makes them want to come back. Students want to come back and start the year. Some of them get so tired of being at home that they just want to come back. Also being on regular school break students enjoy more the summer than just 1 month or less. They have more opportunity to go explore the world and everything. Much more freedom for the summer. When is summer students cant wait to leave school but when its like 2 months out of school they want to come back. Summer is the best season for a student because is when they enjoy most of there time with the family,friends and having fun in the summer is the best memories and maybe the best memories they have with friends and family. My best memories are the ones in summer that I enjoy mostly with my family.
In conclusion, some people say that having a year-round school is great because that way students wont forget what they had learned over the year but I think that having a year-around is not a good idea because students would feel more fatigue than the usual and also when they come back to school they would feel more comfortable and ready to learn more again.
Being out of school is a great thing but when you are almost done with summer you just want to go back to school and see your friends and than is the same thing when you are going to summer you feel so excited that you just want to be done and not come back but is the same feeling when you are coming back from summer to start the year. Having pretty experiences and sharing time with the family is amazing that is what makes summer amazing. wouldnt you want to have your children with you in summer vacation? | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 |
34E4FB64EEBA | Don't you think that we should be what we are no matter who is around?
Is important that we give or have our own opinion. For me, my opinion is always important because is what it makes me unique, and what I think is that I know that some people is afraid to be what they are. Because they are afraid to the reaction of people that they love, for example the most important person in my life is my mom and she is the center of my life, like my dad... But you know something? I'm nervous about the reaction of them, if I act like I want, If I dress the way I like it, I'm afraid that my family or my friends judge me.
I think that the author "Ralph Waldo Emerson", is right. I'm agree with the Idea that he have about the world.
People around us is just looking for something to talk about and if for example, I do something wrong, the friends of my mom will talk about me and in a worst case, my mom will do the same. The world influence a lot in ourself in many ways for example:
You will see people following what other person say if he move to one side he or she will do the same.
When we are little people influence, tellling you to do the same that the other kid is doing. In some schools they don't let you to use imagination, like, you have to do what is there and in my opinion the kids should be free to write or draw what they want. I think that it will help to develop our ideas and be succesful.
Mom always is telling you to be like him or she. That she wish this and that and we are tryinng to do those things and be like they want, that we forget about us and we try to be someone else.
We have many expectations about what we can be, how many things can we accomplish, we make many questions to ourself and we try to be someone that is not us, just to make happy the rest of the people, when we should be looking for our own happiness, life is short, life is now and we have to be what it makes us happy, life doesn't make sense if we live in a place or have people around us that is just stealing our happiness. The world is big and is true that influences, even in our decisions. We have the choice to be what we want. Is our decision, is our opinion, is important to be what we are and not what they want.
There is some people that is not agree with this idea. They think that the world is not trying to make you someone else, that there is not any influence and be what the other people tell you to be, that the opinion don't affect and it shouldn't have any problem to act or be what they want. But, I think that people around us can influence in our decisions, because we don't want that people we love get upset about us. We are always worried about the opinions of the rest and that is a big example of how the world influence about us and in our personality.
We all have have something that it makes us unique and special of be. Everybody have different opinions, and there are some people that want others to follow what they said and is not the way it works. The world have many of good things and bad things but what will happen if we just follow what they said, people that is guiding is thinking that it will have the same or better results, but no, we have different results to the differents situations and that's why is important to be what we are and do what we like, because in that way, we know how to act to the situation and if will be a good thing for us to follow, is very important that we show ourself and get courage to confront many difficult situations. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
34E9C436DECE | Whenever I play football, we do 2 laps around the field After running laps we then stretch for 15 minutes. Later we pass the football to eachother or we punt the football and someone has to run and try to catch it. I find that activity fun,because I get to be with my friends/teammates and we get to travel with eachother too different places like Generic_City,Generic_City,Florida etc. On the bus too Generic_City we study with eachother like how we're going to help eachother out or like a mini game plan. We sometimes help eachother with homework or needing someone to help study. We love to play football beacuse we are pushing our body to become stronger,healthy,body in check,and our mind out the gutter as in our mind roaming freely but thniking at the same time. Whenever I play left-mid I got to keep eye on my oppenent that is in front of me because who knows he might end up getting the ball passed to him and it's my job to stop him from going further then where he is because if he goes further it'll effect me because it's my job to make sure he doesn't reach the end zone or go further then the spot they were originally at. Football for me release any stress I have on my mind like I just release the stress and be focus more on the field the thing I was stressing about earlier because like for a person like me i stress a lot and think too much for my brain and my head ends up hurting because of too much stress,over thinking,things on my mind. Football is a very enjoyable sport to play.
I enjoy uploading songs and get paid cause it's one way of making money by the internet but at the same time it can be really hard sometimes becaus eyou have to think what song you're going to upload and make sure theres no mistakes in it very well audio quality.
I like video games as well beacause you think what your next move is about to be beacause lets say you're playing fortnite with your friends you got to over thinking the other team thats pushing thats pushing you and your team because they might be better then you guys combined so you got to out play them. Once out play them you got to kill the other teams to win the game | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
34F016931102 | Some students would benefit if they understand things easily without a teacher explaining everything and if they don't need help like in math, but other students would not benefit if they don't understand things ,and if they need extra help or ask questions that will be a problem for them taking classes online or video conferencing.
Student who would benefit are those who understand things easily, and if they want to be alone to have a better concentration in what they do classes online is a good option because they will be taking solo training, and it's comfortable to take these classes without going to school they would have more time in home for example, I preferred to take classes online because that will give me more time to prepare everything that I need to go to work, because when I arrive from school to home, I have to do everything really quick ,things that I have to do like wait for my little sister in the bus stop from school then, I have to cook ,and that takes me time, and I have to be ready at 3:30pm to go to my work ,but classes online would benefit me because, I need help understanding classes like geometry or English is not easy for me to understand some words in English, and I need to ask a lot of questions.
Students who would not benefit are those who like to be with friends in school and talk with people that can be an issue for them because taking classes online they will be alone, and they could have some possible technological problems, and if they don't have self-control having a computer in front of them certain time of the day they would not be successful with classes online.
Some people think that students who take classes online don't make the same effort like those who take classes in school , because they don't wake up in the morning to take the school bus like normal high school students do ; however ,I think that students that take classes online male the same effort because they need to have time to take those classes and they have to respect the schedule that teachers give to them to attend class, they have to be in front of the computer a lot of time that can is not good but they do it because they want to graduate like other students wants. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
352F0193E251 | Dear Generic_Name,
Would you rather work with friends who are going to keep you distracted from off topic conversations ? In my opinion, it would be better to work alone so that you can focus on your work. In my science class, we always get the opportunity to work with partners. But i rather work alone and if I need help or don't understand something I can always ask my teacher. If you work alone you have a better chance of learning more and passing your final exam. Its good to work with partners sometimes.
Although, you have a better chance of passing your class. You also get the chance to get good skills. Like to not depend on anybody for help, to be a leader not a follower.
Before my uncle passed away, he told me to never depend on nobody for help. You have to climb the steps by yourself to get to where you want to be. I want to own a mechanic shop by myself when i am older. Ill work on all the cars by myself with no employees. You can learn a lot of skills by working alone.
Everybody has different opinions,some people say working with partners may be easier and helpful. But you have to think about all the distractions and trouble making kids. Letting other students do all the work and then copying and take credit for someone else work. I use to be one of those kids until i noticed I am never going to learn or get somewhere in my life if I keep letting people carry me over my steps.
To conclude,working with partners may be easier,faster and exciting. Working alone is a mans job,to not be a follower. To not let anybody else do their work or to carry them over your steps. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
3550660EE2EC | A enjoyable educational activity is when I was doing a science experiment wewas building a volcano. It irupted we was all smiling because we didnt know it was gonna work. we put soda inside the volcanoe and we shaked it a little and then put mentos it went high. we had to clean it up after there was a mess every where but it was fun. As soon as everybody left I was taking to the teacher to ask her wat I got.
He told me that I got a B and I got mad because I got a B I was all like how and he told me that there was soda every where. it was messy and it had mentos in it and I was like please give me an A or can i at least remake it. He was like you can have one more chance to remake it I was all like thank you. it took me a while to make it and think what I can do so it wont spill anywhere. So I thought of putting a cone around the volcano put I was all like nah because whats the whole point of putting it if you cant see it.
I got an idea I put a lighter in side and a put a special paint that blows up with just fire. it can not make a mess I dont have to clean the floor I think this the best idea. i did it and i tryed it out at my house and it always blew up every where and I kept on thinking and thinking but I had no idea Ithought that it had to much paint and iI kep on putting it little by little.
It kinda worked if I put a little in a bootle and light it like that but thene I had an idea that if a put newspaper under it and let it burn it will help it and it did and then i kept putting more and more news paper it took like 16 news of paper and my brother helped me do it it was hard because i didnt know which way to put it. I got it all finished and I took it to school.
It was my turn i represented the volcano I lit it on fire and the whole volcano fell and I was mad. after school the teacher called me and told me.''you did a great job but it failed but guess what you get an A for at least trying'' I was so happy I didnt belive it I did it. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
3564BBEC4A09 | Should be there a difference between people who wants to find more accomplish or inactive!
There is a debate between people who thinks should people more accomplish then inactive. Some people believes their journal will take them to their destiny and they doesn't have to accomplish any thing. It doesn't matter for some people to make decisions and others think different. Because they think their destiny will take them to where they should be. In other hands, I believe what Thomas Jefferson said, "Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." This quote shows me why we have to make our decision so fast and not let to wait. Because we don't know what will happen in the future. We have to being more active, so it will help the country economy. When we are active the country rules and powers can change. Being active is optimal for immigrants too because it help them to learn new language. People always have to take life seriously because how they will know there will be a tomorrow. We should try to make decision before our destiny makes one for us.
First,
when people are more active by working hard it help the economy of a country. Many people accomplish succeed by working hard in difficult environment and it is beneficial for a country to have some excellent active workers. By accomplishing more succeed in your job they can rise your salary. In other jobs they always honor those who are working so hard. It's less chance to be loser. To find sussed everything basically inside your hand. When people accomplish more is not just for their beneficial it is for their country too.
Second, In the past women didn't have any rights in to the government until ninetieth amendments. Before women were inactive and that leave them behind, but after while they start having job in the government branch by protecting their rights. When women start being active it help them to accomplish more success. In America women are having more rights than any other country because they were fight for their freedom. In my own country which is Generic_City, women are afraid of men because women are not active and they never try to having voice in public. Still today men are making decisions for the women and treat them like a slave person, Some female from my country try to being active to make a differences in my country.
Third, some of immigrants try to be an active in their life by moving into another country. For immigrants it doesn't matter to accomplish more or not they just want a basic life. When my mom made the decision to move to the United State I was afraid to learn English and my mom use to tell me you can do it if you really wants to learn. When I first start school in U.S I was so nervous about how can I introduce my self to the teacher because I wasn't able to say hello even in English, but I trust my mom and everything changed. Finally, I get the success and that makes me really happy.
In conclusion, we all will find the success by working hard and not let anything make feel us failure. By accomplish more you will be succeed just don't lose your self. Be hard work and an active person is better than acting like loser. When people inactive they always behind of others and their life is meaning less. People should always accomplish more because there should be a line between who wants win and who wants lose. However, many people can't handle success because they lose their self to quickly. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
3567E4ED2023 | One quote that is debated today is minister Winston Churchill success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. I think that failure is one important thing to learn how to be. They feel has to do fast all the thing. I believe if you have goals you can be better very time. other reason is if you respect each another because that is everything you need.
Same people think if you do everything fast that going to be right but, you has to take slow. When you think failure is the right way because you learn new thing and going to help and everything you trying to do in your life. Another thing important from failure to failure is listing other person who try to help.
My option is if you trying to do many thing that same time is not going to work because you has many thing but, if take a moment is work. As you have read the best way from failure to failure is never give up because if you try many time that going to be much better because every person has mistake to be good in that way you lean you dont know how good you are in something you never has be try. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
35954693FE8E | High school, the most perfect time to plan for the future. In some societies, students are required to identify a career by the time they enter high school. The high school will select courses for students to guide them toward the career they are considering. Some people say that it is not a good idea to identify career at high school because students are not ready for entering the adult world. While other people say that it is a good idea because it helps students to plan for their future. To me, I believe that knowing what am I going to do is important. Once people have their goals, they can plan and prepare for their futures.
How can people plan for their futures? By thinking about the careers they want to enter, they might also think about what are the things they like to do. They could choose the careers that are the most interesting to them and the perfect colleges base upon their interests. Also, people can have more time to work on their dream such as search more information, meet basic requirements, and get advises from their counselor. Therefore, when people are ready to go to the college, they won't be confusing about what to do. Because they have their goals with them.
What about prepare for the future? Well, some schools will provide courses that will fit to students the most. If the students identified their careers, they could do better at studying the related objects in college than those who haven't think about that thing at all. Because the students know what they want to be, they can choose to take related courses to learn the knowledge they might use in college courses for their career. Some people can even save thousands of money just by taking AP courses which will give them the credits that college will accept.
Some may argue that it is too early for students to think about their future by the time they enter high school. They have plenty of times to do that during their senior year. However, if students don't know what are they going to do after high school, they will have no idea about which college is the best for them and what career they want to have. By considering and taking the courses in high school, people could get to know the career and decide whether or not they want this career. It is better to change your mind in high school than in college. Because by that time, people will waste their money and time to change their majors.
Anyway, identifying your career when you are entering high school is a really good idea. You can choose the courses that are perfect for you and your career and also be ready for college since you have your goal already. Therefore, high school is a perfect time to think about the future. It is the entry to the adult world. So don't just doing nothing but waiting for someone else to help you to decide, after all, we have to choose our own futures right? | 4.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
35A1342EF397 | Is it good for a high school student to graduate in three years instead of the four year traditional? Let's call it the high school shortcut. Some school districts offer this opportunitie to high school students in order to make them graduate one year earlier. Based on my personal perspective, an early high school graduation is a very good experience for high school students. The high school shortcut makes student motivated to think about building their future quickly, increases the degree of their maturity and also help those students to proceed in life easily and faster.
High schools should make sure that students are motivated to think about their future and help them by making sure they're in the right path. Some students don't try to enter college right after graduating, some of them will take a year off and some of them don't try to enter college at all. By motivating to think about their future a mean that they would propably be more motivated to enter college at a young age than a certain type of age.
Going to college and start chasing your dream at a young age will make students more mature. Life after high school is something serious weither you go to college or enter the military starting it at a young age would make students more ecxited and make them became mature at a young age. So with the high school shortcut students will have the ability of gainning a lot knowledge about the branche they want to study young and quicker.
As soon as the high school students gain the knowledge that high school provides, proceeding easily and faster with the high school shortcut is and good opportunitie that should be chosen. Some of those high school students think that it's a waist of time taking a four years high school knowing that a three year high school that provides the same type of knowledge is a possible choice for them.
As far as I'm concerned, I strongly believe that the high school shortcut which is graduating i three years instead of four years is a great opportunitie. Either students who wants to graduate early or even students who wants to take their time in high school should take advantage of this opportunitie. | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
35A7E263AC71 | the prompt says "Unless you try something beyond what you have mastered you will never grow". one would say that is something very wise to say .But due to the lack of wisdom around the world it is basically useless to say anything wise. I personally agree apart from physically growing I'm almost done. Going back to the topic I do agree with what author Ralph Waldo Emerson said in his quote, That if you don't try something beyond on what i have mastered am I really growing in any way ?
I have try anything new and just do the same routine over and over i'm not going to make far in life .Although I can't think of a reason why someone would disagree the statement. I have tried many thing my seventeen years of being alive, and I can say I have grown to be the person I am now .Many people don't try new thing only because they are quick to judge on the presentation of the new item or new person , but if people actually gave the new experience a chance it could be life changing for better or worse .
So going back to you trying something beyond what i mastered I won't grow or something like that it's all in perspective if I wish to try something new and be a better person in society I will but if I wish to not try anything at all and just to the same boring routine day after day .Sooner or later I will get bored of everything .Even though some may argue by saying "that's how I got successful in the first place by doing the same routine over and over". In some cases that may work for example in sports the athlete must do the same thing over and over until the get better at the sport or like a dance they practice the same dance over and over until it;s ready to be shared with the world how well one can dance . And for others trying a new routine can lead them to success (well maybe not everyone is talented)
In conclusion trying something new does change who you are in a bit by either helping or destroying yourself .People do grow to be wise and old and other don't grow old wise just young and reckless. Author Ralph Waldo Emerson was a wise man to say "Unless you try something beyond what you already have mastered you will never grow.
thank you for taking the time to read this essay . | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
35C5C7E2BB5E | Working with a group or working alone which one is more beneficial? Well to me working with a group is more beneficial for many reasons. First off you can get help from other members of your group, you don't have to do everything alone you can give each person one thing to do, and you can learn more about the topic. Now that you know my reasons of why i think being in a group is much better and more beneficial then working alone let me go more in depth about it.
Working in a group is great because they can help you with the assignment. If you are struggling and one of your group members sees that you need help then they will help you. They will try and make you understand the problem so you know how to do it. They will give you different strategies and other ways to figure out the answer. For example my math teacher put me and one of my friend in a group for a assignment we were doing and i did not understand the concept. I asked my friend to help me and she sat down with me and showed me how to do it. She gave me multiple ways on how to do it and if it wasn't for her help i would still be lost and not know what to do.
Another reason why working in a group is better then working alone is that each person in your group gets a specific thing to do. If each person gets a specific thing to do in the group then everything will go by much faster. You would not have to worry about doing everything by your self and putting that stress on your body you will have other members in your group that will do their part of the assignment. Last week in history class my teacher put me in a group with 3 other members. We all had a specific thing to do i had to find the citation for the information we got,Chloe found all the information on the topic, Marcus found pictures of the information, and Sean found videos to support the information that we had. We finished the project at then end of class and we also got a A as our grade.
Finally you can learn more about the topic with your other group members. They could find information on your topic that you once did not know before. It can give each student new ideas and information to make the topic more clear for them and also find new discoveries. It will also help them for test and even a quiz because they just did group work and also answered questions and learned new things as well. This is my final reason on why working in a group is much better then working alone.
You can learn more about the topic, you dont have to do all the work by your self, and also your other group members will be helping you if you do not understand the topic and need a little more help. These are my reasons of why i think this is much better then working alone all the time. Having a group will give you more advantages then just being by your self trying to do all the work. It is much more beneficial and i also gave valid reason of why i think being in a group is much better then working alone. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
35CF1B2B1326 | I think, with that changing 4 days of work in a week have disadvantages and some benefits. because people will not have time to live their normal life or do work at home, they will use the same amount of energy and resources and people will not support to work many hours in a day.
In addition, people have already their own routine to work, even thought if some busines try to change work days.
To began,
people will not have time to share with their family, also working 4 day a week for 10 hours will cause problem in your family, children in those time do not have enough responsibility to be home by their self, even thought, people will not have time to do work at home. For example; to clean their house, to go work after school and to coexists their problems or thoughts with the family. And to do other works at the end of the day.
Second, working 10 hours a day they will use the same quantity of energy and resources because is the same sum of hours that all people work, if they work 8 hours a day for 5 day, even that people may use more energy, because the rest of the week people will need energy, as well to work 10 hours a day will use the same amount of resources, to make up all the works that you need to do.
Lastly, people will not support working 10 hours a day, because many people have their routine to work, or some of them have problems working to many hours, another reason why people can not work 10 hours a day is that they have their own routine work, as well student in school will not support to be in class. For example many student gets bored in class juts been 8 hours in school and if we compare there will be a lot if issue with their attendance. another point is many student work to support their self, so in that occation they will not available to work and make money.
To conclude, to work 10 hours a day is to hard for many people and they will try to work less hours in a day, because they can not have time to share with the family, also they can get sick for being working to many hours. even thought on this times some people worked 10 hours a day, but at the end of all that working to much can cause serious problems with your health. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
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