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35D43561EE62 | Studies have shown one way to improve a student achievement is to start a after school homework club. Some ways this club can help students can be help with home work,help with classes,and having a talk with teachers. would you volunteer by helping a student?
How can this club help students? It can help kids with home work,not every one likes home work,home work is like getting sand or dirt in your delicious ice cream. some students are not good at doing there home work so this club can be good for helping them with homework. You can get help with subjects like math,science,and reading. Do you need help with any subject from school?
Reasons why I would volunteer for this club. I don't mind helping students out with work but if its bad kids then I am not helping them,I do not want to be treated like trash. It wont affect my agenda because most of the time I am just staying home playing video games so I don't mind helping out,I will finally have something better to do. Helping someone is like a firefighter getting a cat out of a tree,I am the firefighter and the cat is the student and the tree is the students problem. The feel of knowing someone looks up to you because you helped them get better in math is a outstanding feeling. I like helping people out because it is some thing nice to do and I think every one should help students get better at school subjects so we all can do something nice as a team.
Studies have shown one way to improve a student achievement is to start a after school homework club. how can this club help students get better at school work? It can help them with home work like science,math ,and reading. Reasons why I would volunteer for the club and what I would teach.1 reason is because helping a student makes me feel amazing and it helps me be a better leader,being a leader can help me with running a company or other jobs. The subject I would teach would be science because I know a lot in science,I have a wonderful grade in science,and science is fun because you can do experiments. this is why a after school homework club is good for students who need help. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
35D50C79C5CB | Studies have shown that one way to improve student achivement is to start an afterschool homework club. Teachers and Students volunteer to meet those who either have difficulty in certain subjects or who want to finish their homework early.
My opinion is that I find it a good idea to have a homework club, because when I was in 4th grade I went to a homework club and what I did there was of course work on homework but if you finished early you could finish work from later on that day or on things that you could do on the next day and I would always rremember I would be ahead on every paper she assigned to the class because I already completed it! When I didn't do homework club I would sometimes miss fun friday because during fun friday in order to play you must have all your work done and be caught up. But when I joined homework club I haven't missed one fun friday game!
In conclusion I suggestion having a homework club, it help with grades and getting ahead in class! It's also very fun | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
35D983476332 | Dear. Reader's
It's all my pleasure to be writing this answer, thank you for give me this opportunity to express my opinion and ideas based on my experiences. Even if my answer is agree or disagee; i believe that the life is short and you never know when is going to end. The first impression too but in this case we can know when is going to finish because is a big different between this two. I'm disagree with the statement that the first impressions are almost impossible to change, i believe that we can change the first impression but not in one second i'm gonna tell you some reason the i feel with my experiences that i want to know you.
First, "the first impression the you receive is very important" Well i'm not sure of that but is something that other poeple say, so we can think that for one moment maybe is true; because for some people is important the what other people think about them so put this case and the table and start think why base on my experience i"m not going to say that is true but i can give you one reason that i think. Well is depent the who is the person because if is a boy who you like you wanna receive a good impression but if is not pass the time you or him can change the impression because now you alredy know the person the boy the point is the time why? because the first impression is a second but also you can change pass on time.
Second, the impression is how you look like or the expression on your face good we find another point because is other impression the we can change and you gonna think how well this is a situation before one year ago i was talk with a person and she look in the first mad, but she wasn't mad the face of her was express mad but she wans't pas the time more and more my so my first impression was the she was mad now i think the oppossed of her
The time is the words more important in the life that we can stop or pass and also we can forget because his live in our life but the impression is something the we can forget the we can pass and something the can't lived in us because is something that we can change is something that we can move.
In conclusion everything is based on time and if you ask me that if is a possible change the first impression i'm gonna say yes because you never going to forgot the first impression the you receive from other person but you can also change later and your mind or in your background. Always we can change something thanks for everything. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
35E552843ADF | Teachers and students volunteer to meet with those who have difficulty in certain subjects. By having a afterschool homework club. Reasons for a afterschool homework club? An afterschool homework club would be nice to have because they get better grades, they could study more, and they could understand the subject better
First of all, they get better grades by helping each other on their homework and they can socialize to know more people, make new friends. Plus they can make up stuff they haven't done at all and have a zero in their grade. It also benefits in all ways, you could get straight As by just taking 1-3 hours extra hours of your day and putting the work into it. If you don't work at all you could consider trying harder to pass the class.
Next, they could study more. Studying more could be a benefit because better test grades, better quiz grades, etc. Also they could get ahead on their classes by doing extra homework and normal work. If you never study you could start by considering to join this club. It could be loads of fun if you make it fun.
Therefore, they could understand the subject better by getting someone to help them. Doing loads of extra work to get your grade up and understand it better. They could help each other out and could achieve their goal of getting to understand the difficult subject.
Finally, those are the reasons why the idea would be a benefits for everyone. It could help everyone out in every way. Thats why I consider this idea to be true and make the club available for everyone. Also theres a ton more benefits that could help too. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
36035C063AB3 | Can many things be done if we are always doing? succeed comes with hard work and hard comes with trying, but everyone has different opinions and points of views. Although others believe otherwise, there is always something new to learn in this world, we can influence others for the better, and we can accomplish more if we are always ready to keep doing something.
I believe the world has plenty of things and places we have not yet explored, learned about or have seen before. Everywhere you go, you learn a something new about someone or something; it could be a new culture, places in the world or even a new language, but that is only if you keep doing. For example, I was born in Generic_City and when I came here for the first time everything was new to me. Starting from seeing different faces to a completely new language, I kept trying to learn more and more about the United states because that is how you keep on doing more and not stopping your learning process. When i first went to school here i was afraid and very shy, but that did not stop me from learning the language and sure i learned something new every day because there was so much to explore all around. That is why I believe that there is something new to try and learn everywhere you go. If you encourage yourself to keep doing, you would not believe all the things you can do for yourself. Which those things sometimes can help you improve yourself and the way you view different things as well.
If you keep doing and learning more, you can absolutely influence others for the better. You can teach others from the mistakes you have made from trying new things and from all the experiences you have had before as well. Someone that I look up to as my role model is my older sister, because she taught me how to be the strong young women I am today. She influenced me for the better, because of what she has been through before me. One thing she taught me that was very important to me is to not give up on my goals and my mindset from the beginning. She once told me that people will doubt me no matter who they are, and one of those people was my mother. My mom taught that my sister and I would not even get to college, but here I am as a junior in high school and my sister about to graduate college. A day never went by without my sister reminding me of how strong and independent I can be if i keep trying and keep learning because the world is full of things to learn from, good or bad. My sister had to keep learning and was always trying to do something new, because she new she could influence me for the better so i could learn from her mistakes. There is always gonna be someone out there with advice for you and to influence you for the better, but if you keep learning and trying nothing is impossible. Influencing others can be very important, mostly for the younger generation. They look up to us now and it should be an honor to show them the rights from the wrongs but that is only possible if you try to have a good mindset of always wanting to be a better person and knowing what you want. Never stop trying to learn new things because there will always be something out there to learn from and to look at it from a different point of view.
Accomplishing a goal can be very hard sometimes and even makes you wanna give up but that is something you should not do. If you are always doing and trying new things you can accomplish so much more than you would ever imagine you could. My goal was to learn English, go to school, and graduate all to prove my parents and my older sister i could. I accomplished part of my goals so far and that makes me feel very proud of myself because i feel like i am slowly accomplishing my goals in a short period of time. When i was younger and until now i have always liked books and that is something that helped me learn English and to improve my learning techniques in school as well. I have not yet graduated but that is a goal that i am maintaining and that i know i will accomplish soon, but the only way that will happen is if i keep doing and learning more every time i possibly can. You may have people who doubt you or who do not want to see you succeed but you should never let them control your mindset and the way you do things. A positive mindset always comes with a positive outcome, and always surround yourself with good people because we are here to make good things happen to each other. But keeping your mind open to new things will always help you learn more everyday and have new experiences too.
You just need to believe in yourself and understand that there is so much more out there that you could not know about, and that it is always good to encourage yourself to go out there and try things you have never tried before. always influence others for the better and accomplish all your goals no matter how hard it can get, because at the end of the day every good thing you do will absolutely pay off later on when you least expect it or see it coming. In conclusion I believe Thomas Jefferson's quote is very true because of all the wonderful things we can learn, experiences we can have, and things we can accomplish with time if we keep on doing. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
363295DC545F | Although some people say to spend time doing nothing is not a big deal. Because is a way to relax yourself give you a little bit of time, actually never to be idle and manage your time wisely you will be more success.
Spending time not doing things is a good way to relax body refresh our mind. Sometime when you stuck on something when people are facing the probleme,they can't think any idea to solve but take a few seconds break set yourself in a idle mode, poeple might find an another way to solve so idle yourself is not a bad happend.
Idle might change a person when they are use to have a idle time. People might be lazy and tired to doing something. Imagine If everybody have habit on taking a rest and they are use to it. The world might be changed,the world will not progress the economy is going down and when people chasing their goals they will not trying their best, immutable is people used to be have a idle time.
Determine never to be idle is a big step is how much may be done If we are always doing. This will make people have more confident,is a basic element how will you be successful. Keep doing it even you will take a long time to achive. Manage your time in a smart way the more accomplish is the more works you need to do. Even though the goal is not easy to reach don't stop trying. One day you will succeed.
These are the reasons determind never to be idle is important .Its how much we try and how much we receive, idle your time is not going to solve anything for you. Reach your purpose is not a final goal, enjoy the journey while you doing it might receive another products and manage our time in correct ways. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
3651697D855B | FAILURE PLAYS IN THE PURSUIT OF SUCCESS.
I agree with the statement by the British Prime Minister Winston Churchill, who said that " success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". The word "failure" is been pictured as been a disapointment to family, friends or to oneself. Mostimes,everybody wants to succed in anything they do, but faces some challenges at the process to acheive that expected goal. This challenges are not necessarily proposed to affect you in a bad way, but sets a room for improvement and perfection.
Failure brings a feeling of confidence to a person, working on a project for a long time and fixing mistakes you came across. Makes an individual confident,understanding everything that concern that work and feeling more relaxed doing it without so much anxiety. Mr Rubio, was told to come up with an Architectural plan for a building close to a water fall. Rubio knew this project was close to impossible for him to complete this task, but he accepted it and started making the building plan. After he taught he came up with a suitable plan for the building, it got rejected by the state building commitee, because they asked him why certain things were placed this way and he couldn't answer effectively . He had to go back and identify he's faults in the building plan, and come up with a bettter one. Rubio had sleepless nights, communicating with various Architects and Civil enginers to get some idea on he's work. When Rubio was convinced he was ready to take the project to the board meeting he felt confident in himself and knew he could explain evrything corncernig he's building plan to the comitee. When he turned in the drawing, and was asked some certain questions he quickly answerd them with absolute confidence and got approved.
Secondly, the more you face challenges life throws at you makes you stronger. If everything in the world moved in a positive way we won't invent things inorder to satisfy our human needs. Isaac Newton and other scientst encounterd a problem and decided to solve this problems by making inventions. So work could be done faster, reduce Man power and done more effectively. Before isaac Newton got the light bulb to work , he failed ninety nine times of he's experiment. This failures didn't stop him from acheiving he's goal, he kept on striving hard making research and later came up with a long lasting light bulb. Which helps us see clearly in a dark place.
Although it takes time, to achieve this goals after failing. Most people would get frustrateed and quit, there is an old saying "nothing good comes easy". To achieve whatever you desire in life, you have to be ready to encounter difficulties and failure, but approching this problems knowing that you are going to get better it just takes time and patience. After acheiving this goals what would be seen is your acomplishments rather than your failures. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
36677FE57D6B | I disagree with the principal because. Students have homework and doing activities can get them stressed about school. Also some students have to take care of there siblings. Sometimes something important happens and your not home because your doing after school activities.
Student have homework and doing after school activities. They dont have time to do home work and they an be failing a class. And failing a class can get you kicked out of the activity your in. And when your failing a classes you can get held back a grade and that will go in your record.
Some students have to take of there siblings. Because there parents are working and there is no one home to take care of them. Maybe your baby brother is choking on a toy and your not home to save the baby . Maybe your parents went on a business trip and they will not come back for a week there is no time for after school activities you have to cook for them take them to the park.
Maybe something important happened at you house and your not home. If your mom is a single mom and she has a medical condion and something happens to her. You are not home because you have after school activities. You had to go somewhere after school but you forgot and you go to you after school activities and you remember when you on the way home but you know its to late. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
367781F47105 | Most students in high school who would be looking forward to attend college barely have enough time to even get a part time job. They would work as hard as they could for a better and brighter future. For that specific reason,committing a career by the time they enter high school would be a bad idea for the students. They would need more knowledges,they would be too young to to decide,and that could also ruin their dreams. Students should not commit a career by the time they enter high school because they would not benefit from it.
firstly to begin with,lack of knowledges could not only destroy their dreams,but also them. They would not have enough experience. Everything would be confusing for them because they didn't have a chance to learn them back in high school. One thing for sure,they wouldn't be good at it as well as they would be if they finished high school and attended college. Also,they wouldn't be as open as they should be.
Secondly another,being young and have to decide something that is going to be a big part of their future is the hardest decision. They might regret it in the future. There is a fifty percent chance that they'd change their mind when they grow up. When they are young,scared,and have pressure on them they usually make the worst decision,but later in life when they would finally realize it. It'll be too late to fix it. They also would even blame their parents in some kind of way.
Also,that one decision can ruin their life and dreams completely. They wouldn't even be interested in going to college. They might drop out high school when they would start recieving checks because they need money and they get it at least every week,"so what's the point of going to college",they would think. They would also need more time to think and decide what they really want before choosing something they might regret.
In conclusion,not only high school students,but every other kids in general have the right to have enough time to decide what they want when they feel ready to. They need to finish high school,go to college,and have a chance to choose what they want to be. When they don't have enough experience they are usually shy and scared when doing something because they don't know what they are doing. When this happen,the kid can blame whoever he or she wants because his or her parents and the school guidance should have sat down with this kid and tell the kid all about high school,college,career,and better future because that's what they are here for. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
3691B4714FD5 | Conserving energy and resources, this is what the most part of the society is worried about, some bussineses are even adopting a four-day work week, each day consisting of ten hours; but should schools apply this model by extending the school day two hours? Well, I belive that schools should adopt this model because: It gives students a longer weekend to vacation, or simply to their favorite activities, second reason would be learning part, students will have a longer period of time for each class, which means they can learn farter, or memorize it easier; then we have the most important; the resources and energy saving.
Almost every student loves to have a loger weekend, one example could be my neightbor Generic_Name; he loves to go camping on weekends, sometimes he tells me, he wish to have a longer weekend, that would allow him to go even further or simply to stay loger at the same place, I am pretty sure that the three days weekend would make him happy, others may also be thankful, because they will have more time to do their homework or just to study. Me, as an example, I rather to stays at home and study; sometimes, I feel like the weekend went off a lot faster than the usually.
The second reason, which is so important for students, I belive it is; the longer classes that we will have, this will make a great impact on the grades of the students, longer classes will make us learn quicklier,Generic_Name my brother is one of those student that forget some important things about any class, I always tell him, "Generic_Name study, do your homework," and he has already forgotten what the homework was about, I belive Generic_Name will get better and remember the homework with the loger period of classes; also in my class of science, sometimes the whole class is experimenting with some wird liquids, and we are still mixing when, the bell rings, my theacher, Generic_Name, says, "it would be greatful, if we would have more time so we would be able to finish the experiments," and of course! the entire classe agree with what he says.
Some people might say that students would forget somethings during weekend, however the four-day school week will help to conserve energy and resources; there is a massive wave of air polution in this world, and one of the biggest is fosil fuel, millions of kids are dropped to school by their parents, if we start coming to school a day less; it would casue a great impact over the polution, it could reduce polution a lot, also the government will save a lot of money in terms of food sources, every day, schools give tons of food just for students, a non-classes friday could help to save that much resources.
As a conclusion, I belive schools should adopt this four-day school week because; it will make students to enjoy the new schedule, the three-days weekend, this will give more time to do our favorite activities or to study. It will also give us longer classes, where we could have bigger activities without being worry about the time, at least not as much as before, but it will be enough, and my last one which I belive the most important, society will have less air polution, and also the the government will save a lot of money if we get the four-day schoool. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
36A5035117B4 | Have you ever stop and think what made the person that you are right now? I believe that there are much greater ways than just being a good person, because being a good person can be bad and having more possibilities is more beneficial than just having one
Although many people think that your own influence can be the best way, i believe there are better ways to teach people the right path. My mom mother never yelled at me before, she is always nice with, because every time she starts to even think about, she remembers her father how she was always mean with her, as much as she wanted hated him she told to herself to never treat people the way her father did, So even if my her father wasn't a good Role Model, she was still able to get better as a person.
When i was younger my Brother and i would play video games, but i always had to sleep early than him because i was the youngest one. I never wanted to sleep but Brother always told me that: "if you dont' sleep you won't be able to talk and see anymore". He did lied to me,but it was for my own good.
In conclusion, Being just a good isn't the only thing that matters, you also need motivation and be capable of doing anything that you want to do, even if the adults are agressive and evil. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
36A74F4F050A | Do we pick our own character traits? Can it be pick by the type of influences that is beyound our control? if so then What kind of traits would we have? How are the trailts we choice is the right traits for us?
Most people say the type of traits a person can have define who are as a person, and saying that is ture because the kind of trait you would have or choices can define your character. like for instances let's say you are a very working person your so dedicated to your work that is a trait of dedication or when a person is so nice to you that shows kindness another trait. Even mabybe a person who likes to read that would be a bookworm this is also a trait. Everybody has a trait that they choose.
We choose our owns traits because we think or we know that's the kind of traits we want to have. I am a person who loves to read books, loves food, kind to others, and who can be lazy at most time. A guy name John Lubbock Said " Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it." I'm choosing these traits to be myself and myself only.
The kind of traits i have is kindness, lazyness, bookworm, foodie, and family orident all of these trait are the traits i chocies because it make the person i am today.
Being family orident , i've always loved being around my family because it's gives this joy and happiness just to be around them, plus they make me feel so safe and sound when i'm with my family,all of my traits make up who i am.
Others think it's the opposite because your trait can be choose by the type influnces but i have to disagree on that because people in this world choice the kind of traits they want to have. It dosen't matter on many traits you might have they can still define who you are. Or weather if they are good traits or bad traits they can still define who you are,becuase you are your own person. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
36B2E183713B | People and educators feel like we need to have year round schools, is that a good idea? I feel like we do need to have year round schools. Because when we go back to school most of the students don't remember anything from last year, we would get more days to understand things and remember it.
If we start to remember things we did we would not need to have to go over so many things and get to the new stuff for like Math, History, English. The more days were in school we understand the things more and it will stick to us more. Because the more that we start doing in class and we get help with it, we will know what to do when it comes for us to takes test or Sols.
Like sometimes when I come back to school I really don't remember what we learned last year or how to do certain problems for math or what ever class it is. But maybe with this year round school thing I might be able to remember these things depending what we learn in class. I think the reason we don't remember things so much is because we really don't pay attention or we're not really focused on what we're learning. So now with the more days we have maybe we could get a chance to try different teaching methods so the other students can get more attached to what we are learning about and focus more o things in class.
I'm liking the idea of this year round school, because there more opportunities we can have and more ways so we can focus because of the days were going to have. The only downfall of this is that are summer is going to be less than usually but I mean well get other days off so thats good. Hopefully with this new school thing it will be easier to remember all the information and things we learn.
I feel like that the year round school thing could work, it would help out tons of people with remembering things. So there classes could become easier because they would remember what they did last year and know how the problem or question is. It would honestly help me out a lot because I would be able to do more work because I would know how to do the work. I think this would work and be very successful so we can try and see what happens! | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
36BBFBB5EA41 | It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life; I agree with this statement about the importance of having a positive attitude. In life you live and learn lessons, dealing with stress after stress, or learning that every struggle you faced at the end it will pay off.
The key to success in life is having a positive attitude: never envy what others have, nor wish bad upon a person for their success. Trust the process, life will knock you down, get you at your lowest but having that positive attitude towards every struggle and having that positive mindset to others will get you further than you think, having that negative attitude towards everything wont get you far in life: hatred, jealousy, and hard headed wont take you nowhere: in life you are going to face the fact that not everything will go right, and not everything is going to be how you want it.
This statement about having a positive attitude is the key to success in life is true, nothing will get you far if you have a negative attitude towards everything that comes your way. If something didnt work out there's always a reason why it didnt went how you expected it, either you decide to work harder to get where you want to get or just give up and not do anything to get you closer where you want to be.
I agree with this statement, no matter how hard it gets having that positive attitude towards your losses, other peoples successes, and working extra hard will get you further. The key in life is to have a positive attitude. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 |
36F66596E3B7 | Some students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school.
Some students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school,identify a career during highs school help ,more time to decide,however,They dont have to identify a career during highs school.
Fist,Some students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school, identify a career during highs school help to increase the basis and experience about the career do you want for future and it is a good idea for to commit to a career at a young age because they need to start develop responsibility about the future and it's good for the student start follow the goal.(example) If a student identify the career during the highs school improve the opportunities to go ready for the university. Sdents are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school.
Second,Some students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school. Students that choose a career in highs school have more time to investigate about career the they wan and have the opportunity to change the career and choose another career and the student do not loss the time, when student go to the university will be secure what career they want to study. (example)If a student identify the career during the highs school and the student think the career I dont like I want another career the student dont loss time and money in the university study a career that the student dont wan. Students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school.
In conclution,Students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school,identify a career during highs school help to increase the basis and experience about the career do you want study ,students that choose a career in highs school have more time to investigate about career the student wan and have the opportunity to change the career and choose another career and the student do not loss the time and money study a career that they dont like .Some students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
371739A95793 | We need always doing something is very important that our body is always in movement the people who are in movement have less odds to get sick because have much energy.
Always we need to doing something, the most people have a goal a day it can be in your work or in any place where you are, some people like to work all day because they like to have body moving, that is good when your body is always moving your muscles get used to holding something always, at the end of your activities the only thing you need is to relax.
A body in moving is more healthy, is less likely to get sick and that help you because if you are the person who like always doing something but if you get sick that can be hard for you because you are accustom to always doing something, the people who are always in movement sometimes are the people more old.
You need sufficient vitamin too, if you want to be always doing something remember you need vitamin too your body need a nutrient because you need a good nourishment, if your body are weak you can not strive it can be dangerous ,all you need is doing everything with precaution but is very good always doing something, your body need much movement in a day.
We are always doing something, we can never be in one place, most people are very active, there are many who are still sitting always have to be an activity, it is very good to always be doing something to help your mind to clear up a bit and created movement in you body in the same way makes you very well.
It is wonderful doing everything you want, but you need to know how dangerous it can be because everything have a limit you don't have to strive your body to make more than you can do. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
37193A72B5D2 | Teachers and some adults think that some students are expected and have the capacity to identify a career by the time they enter high school. Student are the only ones who can decide If they are able to take care of that responsibility or not.
In my opinion I think different and I don't think that young students are able to carry out with a career and a will support my reasons. First of all I think about all of that students who are already independent by their self, they probably have a job and need to pay their own bills, the rent, their phone, and they maybe have no time to carry out with all of that responsibilities with their education and the career at the same time, they need to work hard study and that is not easy for them. As the same time they probably have a lot of homework to do and they need to be responsible at their job. Another good reason I have is that some students without time they have no help, and they have no support from other people to try and see if they are able or they are already capacity to care about the career in high school, many students are able to do it but some of them are not able to pay for the help or the stuff need for the classes, some students have the luck to find people who just want to help them, and give them the opportunities to go on and help them with the decision they take to carry out with the career in high school but teacher or other people just don't want to help them just because they think and the give their opinion that they are not ready to take that decision and they still learning and have not the capacity to work on it and they just leave them and the don't give the students the opportunity to explain or show them that they are able to do it. Also a lot of students are fighting and giving all of they can with their education and they are giving up, they get tired with all the classes they have with all the responsibilities they are carry on and that why is hard for them keep studding in high school but must of the student are strong and still working to getting prepare even if they are having problems at their house or problems with their family they just wanna move on. Even though that some of students are too young in high school and they are still learning about how life is, how hard is to take care about the responsibilities the adults are already taking on and they think how hard can be if they take the decision to identify a career by the time they enter in high school it can be difficult to them because with the rest of the courses the are taking they will take more then normal classes. For some reason the students are not even thinking about their career when they are just enter the high school they are probably focus in the responsibilities they are going to have or they are already have in high school with their education, they have to take care of them. A lot of student make a mistakes, for example when they doesn't care about their education and they focus on being the best in their personality how many friends can they have or how good can they look, they need to ripen on their attitude and star thinking about their education they need to think how good in their education can be better on or how good grades can they have to make their family proud or how far can they go if the keep working hard and make proud of their self.
People can think that it would be easy for them or some of they can think that it will not. I think that it is not a good idea selected to guide them toward a specific career, thats why I just explain my reasons so they can see that it will be difficult, hard and stressful, they are too young and they can't take care of a big responsibility. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
3741D275F8BC | Some people think that taking classes from home is a easy way to study without having to leave home. While others think that students would not be able to learn as much as they would attending to school. For some this is a big deal while others justify this as a modern way to study. Technology could be helpful for some but not everyone in terms of studying. Most people think that schools should not adopt such way of education. People say that this is not the best way for study. The reasons people say that studying from is not a good way to study, is because students would not be inspired to do their work,not everyone has access to internet,teachers would help the students more in person That through a computer.
One of the reasons people are saying that studying from home is not a good idea that students would no be inspired. Meaning that being studying from home they would not have the same environment as in school. Assisting to school would help students to focus in what they do. They would do better seeing other students working. Walking around school during free time and seeing projects made by others students could help students to be more creative. Talking to others students and sharing experiences would make students to put more effort. People say that an inspired mind creates great things.
Another reason people argue is because not everyone has access to internet. Either due to economic or others type of reasons not everyone counts with access to a computer. Having some students taking classes from home while others who also want but can not because they do not have access to Internet does not seems good. Some students have to work in order to either pay their bills or buy things that they need and can not afford to have a internet source. There could be paces where getting good
Internet connection could be tough because of the location or weather. This issue have people saying that access to internet is a problem when it comes to study from home.
One more reason is than teachers would help the students more in person than trough the computer. Talking to though computer is not the same as talking in person .People say that students would best understand things their teachers teach them in person because they would explain with more details. Some also say that interacting with the teacher would help students confidence and learning. Some teachers have different way to teach and help the student to fully understand the topics. Students would experiment best learning by having their teacher in front of them or by their side.
Meanwhile people still argue about this issue and that should be a way to solve it. Attending classes from from is not alway a good idea beacuse students would not be inspired,not averyone has acces to internet,and teachers would help students more in person. With all said we can conclud that the best way to study is by attending to school and no from home. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
374CF6E834A5 | Year-round schools have more break over the year, you may have more break during the year but you will have less vacation time over the summer, it's going to shows that year-round schools has more stress, less vacation time and less money make over the summer.
The first issue about year-round schools is more stress, the main thing students stress about is what clothes should they wear to school everyday it makes students to buy more clothes even when they have a lot of clothes because some students want to look better than everyone else in school by not wearing the same clothes everyday to school. students are not the only people who stress teachers will stress about what lesson should they teach and they will a lot assignment to grade.
The second issue about year-round schools is less vacation time, students will have 3 to 4 week vacation over the summer so student won't have as much vacation time as they would like to have because 3 to 4 week vacation is not a lot of time for student to go to another country for long time. parents will be affected by this too because some responsible parents can't leave their kids and go to another country alone.
The third issue about year-round schools is less money make, student can't work over the summer because they don't have the time, one month is not a long period of time to work you can still make some money but you can's make as much money as you could make in 3 months not only the students would make less money government will too they would buy for the electricity and water and other stuff.
Some may say you will have more breaks over the year, but you will not have as much vacation time over the summer.
Some other may say you will not forget anything you learned if you have short break time, but learning everyday without any long breaks will make you a lot of stress. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
375ABFC3D6F5 | The school cafeteria plans to change to a new healthier school lunch menu. One reason that I think that is best to change the school lunch menu is that it could eliminate bad eating habits. Students can learn to eat without being tempted to eat junk food at school. Another reason on how you can switch the food is by substituting the schools junk food by exchanging it with something much more tasty and nutritious food that could lead into healthy eating routine to all the students.
Some students say that they disagree on changing the school lunch menu.
If were to eliminate students favorite school lunch meals; it could lead to them not to eat or buying junk food outside of school.
However school lunch teachers are preparing tasty, and nutritious lunch ideas to serve to their students. Eating a nutritional diet could increase focus in class, increase lifespan, and minimize harmful toxins and bacteria to the body. Changing the school cafeteria lunch for healthier menu. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
3766B7A3A5E0 | There are many different ways to look at this statement. Even though Mr Lubbock does make an excellent point in his argument I do not support it. I believe that our characteristic traits have a lot to do with the people that we choose to surround ourselves with. We have all been influenced in a certain way by someone. Whether if that was being convinced into doing something that we didn't want to do or if it we were given a confidence boost to tackle the challenge ahead of us.
There have been many cases where someone gets into a lot of trouble by doing something that they didnt want to do. They were brainwashed into doing what everyone around them told them to do because they were the people who they truly trusted. But in the end they where just let down by them. For example there are many known cases where some innocent teenager gets a drug addiction because they were influenced to do them by the people who they were surrounding themselves with. This one poor decision has now changed that persons entire life by someone who they probably wont even remember their name in ten years. They wont get the opportunity to play in any sports teams because of their current state. People will look down on them because of what they have done in the past. They wont get the same job opportunities as other people because of their mental and physical state.
Because of this we should be able to love ourselves the way we are and we shouldnt need the influence of people around us to shape our lives, we should be forward and honest with people, if you dont want to do something they that are telling you to do you need to build up your confidence and tell them that you wont get involved in such a thing.
Does this mean that you will loose a couple friendships? Sure but at least you did what was right and you were able to take control over your life and make what you think are the right decisions. Now that person is probably going to get into a lot of trouble by what they have done but you wont because you were able to take matter into your own hands and do what was right for your future.
In conclusion take control over your own life and dont do what everyone tells you to do. Go with your instinct and if you believe that something is wrong then dont do it because it might change your future for ever for the better or for the worst. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 |
37A8D06A04AC | What do you think about benefits of working with a group or working alone? Every country, every school, every teachers have teaching for students how to working together to playing games on assignment. And games can make for students likely work together to create atmosphere funny, if they working with a atmosphere new, they could be give some ideas faster and learning better. Why we need to teaching them the way like that? If we did not teaching the students working with a group, what happen will be?
Almost the students really like working alone than working with a group. Because they think they can give some idea bad, and they don't want somebody complain when they do something wrong. If parents or teachers don't teaching them working with a group and believe by them self, they will never successful on the way they are. When Bill Gate was young, him learning about software and computer, when him did not have more idea. Bill Gate told friends about working with him, Bill Gate said: We could be create something new about software and computer. After two years, they could be create the new computer and software. Five years later, Bill Gate become rich people in the world. If Bill Gate did not told friends working with him, than we never know about software and computer like him created that. Bill Gate said: If the war appears, you did not working together, your country will be lost.
Why we necessary to working with a group? Because working with a group might be make your love each other and understand when you work. When a group understand each other, they would be do some project better and always will be on time. Like a company they never have one people working in there, because one people could not be do some project better a group. Every people working in company, they never working with alone, because they don't know where you fail when you writing essay. That's why we need a group can fix your fail and make you do better in your job. When you working with a group, you can learning some ideas your friends talking and the way they working. Danial Williams Hale said: Everything you learn, everything you practice, it's would be help you some case.
If you like working with a group, you can learning skill about your friends, you will be easy to successful on the goals. Like playing games, they need a team working together, if one people in a team like working alone, they can make your team loser. If you like working with a group, you will be have more friends and second language if your friends from another country. If in the world, we don't working together, maybe the world war three will be occur and the peaceful never got in the world. And we will never know culture of another country.
In general, working a group can make students learning about how to work together and give an ideas best. And can be understand more about the life with people in group, can share problem and working better. If you teaching for your son or daughter working together, when they grow up, they can brainstorm better and faster. However, If they knew how to working with a group, they can create one company and system. They will leader a company grow up and never go down. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
37D67E614E05 | Dear TEACHER_NAME
I do think students should do community service so we can live in a cleaner world.
And they can help our world.
People should stop littering and pick up there mess that they did so other people don't have to pick up there mess that they did.
I think doing community service student can learn so next time they can think before they litter.
from STUDENT_NAME | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
37DD80EFE4D4 | Would you like your child go to the college or work force early ? Why not ?
Some schools offers ways to a student to be prepared and go into their goals .
However, most of the students think that they are ready to reach their goals early instead of going 4 years high school because it makes more complex for a student who wants to finish high school and be prepared for the future. I consider saying , there are ways for them to get ready because students get jobs , start college early and get experience or success that can makes them a professional as quickly as they can .
For instance, start college early,
the student could learn more about their careers and get some ideas for what they look for .
Other reason is the students get jobs easily, makes them work for the future for not being the guy who works in restaurants and other stuffs with a low income .
Lastly , Be success in your life, that's why parents are so prouds of their childrens and taking care for a good path
Finally , I conclude saying that going 3 years high school is going be easiest to a student because the could learn more , get more experience and be successfull in their daily life , as much as they can , student provide more percentage of intelligence that can be more well known at a short period | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
380164B1BAB5 | Some high school districts offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. I think this is a bad Idea because students should be required to be in school eight hours everyday. Allowing these students to take online courses they lack teaching and intructions in a classroom, evening school is a poor idea, and elective courses should be required to boost their gpa. Letting students to have these options they might not enjoy school as they should.
In other words, I think students should and must be placed in a classroom. Take an example physical education and health is a required course for graduation. However, how can you allow a student to take a course like that online and expect he or she to learn. I am not saying it impossible; I think they should be taught. A course like this deserve to be in a gym somewhere so students can interact with one another. Also, most students do not comprehend well through a screen and this might affect their way of learning.
Also, I think evening school is a bad idea because students need that eight hour of sleep every night. Giving them these options it could lead to bigger problems. This could ruin he or she lifestyles because they have to be willing to get up at night to attend school. Abscences could rise up because the students could be tired. When they have this option parents might not be able to take them to school if they live far and this could lead to safety issues.
In conclusion, school districts should insist the traditional four years of high school. When they have an extra year, they could use it to boost their grades. Having elective courses could help the students dramatically. Most students tend to score low in one class then others. Letting students take elective courses it could boost their gpa. Students should be placed in a classroom with everybody else and it would give them the opportunity learn and interact with each other. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
3814F9116CD1 | Well the business that I want to visit is about hospital or pharmacy,and now I will try to convince to get the permission the manager of the business.
Hello sr , how are you? I hope that you are good , the reason why I am writing this letter is because I want to tell you or ask you or get the permission of you , if I can visit your business? Well I have some reason ,why I want to visit your business :
First I wanna visit your business because
I am interest and I wanna learn more of your business, because I want to work or have a career in my High School , probabily may you ask why I am so interesting of your business , but the answer is this is because one day I was at my hause playing soccer with my friends, and after we done to play, my mom call me that was a mergency at my sister hause, so I drived so fast that I can , when I was there , my sister had a heart attack , so we took her to the hospital , so after the thirty minute was nobody there who can attend us and the more time that we was spanding more bad was my sister , so I was so angry with the hospital service, so we didn't want to continue weating in the same hospital , so we went to another hospital that people said that is good hospital , but real was that there was the same thing , so my question was where are the doctors? why nobody attend us? my sister is almost die after 30 minutes a doctor came to us to attend my sister , now my sister is good she has no problems with her heart , but when the doctor done to attend us , I asked him a question , I said why all the hospitals take to long for attend the people?
and he said It's becuase we don't have many medicament to attend all people who enter sick or with serious problems also he said we don't have a good suply for attend the people who came very sick or almost dieing, also we don't have many doctors in here, that why we are slow to attend the people.
well I was thinking about all people who die because in many hospital don't attend them, but sometime the people don't see the problems that happenning in the hospitals ,also many doctors don't get a pay , but they still working because they see the needs the people have.
well I thought that may be I can be a doctor who save life and help people who need it , that is why I am interest in this business or job.
Second reason why I wanna convince you to let me visit your business it's because I wanna be a doctor, and learn how talk to sick people , and see what things you use to emergency , also I want to have a good aventure , also I wanna meat people to make new friends , my second point is a little be friendly , because in your business you have to make friends to help or you can help them, like sometime we don't know something how do it , and may be your partner know how do it, that I am trying to explaim is that if make friends in job or business is to work problems that you don't know together, but if I make friends in the business it's to work , not for play during the work..
Third reason I want to convince you is that many people or students wanna explore certian occupations , I select this one because I wanna learn about your business, how they work ? what type the rules is in your business, and how much you pay , what days we have free, all the normal things that we know that I have to learn , and also I want to know, how many days we work by week? .
Fourth reason that I want to convince you maneger is that your business is the best one and I wanna learn everything of your business and know more everyday and , you know what? when I was little my mom asked me that what I wanna be when I have more age or what are my dreams , everyday my mom asked me the same questions and I said I wanna be doctor the person who save life who help people and my mom told that if I put all the me , also I tell you a short story , One day when I had five years old , I was in the school , and some bad people that they only like to play around and make people angry , one day I was studying and one of those kids started to annoying me and teld me bad words , but he told me one thing that I never I will forget is that he told me that never I will have my dreams in my life, that I will looking for but never will be real, and I started to think about it and I was like sad because I thought that if that he told is real, if I never find my dream, what will happen with me ? what will be my life? and one day I was thinking in room I said I never give up , I will fight for my dreams , and nobody teld me what to do , I just will follow my heart for everything , the point of this short story is that never give up if have a dream looking for ,don't let people who make you feel bad , don't listen negative people , just do it wherever you want to be or what want you that the people says when you die or something like that...
fiveth reason that I want to convince you that let me visit your business, is that many people have the chance to explore or visit a business but some people just don't care or they try but , if they can't make real , they give up or they just move to another job or another dreams, but it's not how many time you go down , if no how many you get up, for example: I want to visit you business because that interest me and that why I am writing this and give you many examples of me and another people is because I want to learn if you give me the permission, I think that if let me visit your business, I will have more interest and I will have more emotion to be a doctor that is the work that interest and I will be honest with you all this that I wrote is for have your permission for I can visit your business and can know things that I want to know or see things that I never see before , also I want to tell you that , if you give me the opporttunity to visit your business , and hope that you can let me visit your business if is like that , thank you for take a little of your time to read this , I hope that you have a great day. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
3816B67C0B31 | When working alone, I agree that it is more time saveing and benifical because. You are more focuesd and consentradedon what your are doing. So when working on a job or school profect, you can gain experiance on working alone. You are also more indipendent when working alone, and that is helpfull when gong to colleg or getting your first job. Others can distract you and waist your time when working as a group, and you'll end up doing all the work . Ending up with a bad score in your grade. So because of this , people should be able to consetrate on their self , and do their own work alone when the time comes to do so.
First of all, working alone can make you more independent .So when you grow up, and leave off to colleg. Your not going to have any body to leach on, so you should be more consentrated on your self then others becouse. No one is going to want help you on your work. So from being independent, you gain that self confidence, and experiance of working alone. From this you are able to do your own choices. That allows you to get a job, or buy stuff that you want.
Second of all, when working alone. You gain a better understaning on the sudject insted of others opinons confusing you on what to do. Independent work can make you understand what your doing , and get a good score at the end or a higher paycheck if its a job. Other may distarct or confuse you on what the sibject is your doing. For an example, You might be doing a battery replacement on car. you would read instructions on how to do. then see an example on what to do, but from that point. the instructions is diffrent then what your trainer did. You might be confused on what your about to do, and then mess put at the end. Others may tell you that your doing it the wrong way, and distract on what your doing. SO working alone may save you time, and be more consentrated on replacing the cars battery, and finishing the job.
Finally, working alone can make you more focused insted of being distracted by others. You should focus on your own work then copying the same thing as another student. THat student might no bo corect and you are going to end up with the same failure grade as you stident you copyed from. Or when working in groups. Some students may be lazy. Leaving you with no time left, and making you do all the work. Sometimes others may have a different idea on a subject, amking you both fighting over witch one to do. Or some student may be playing around, making lots of sound. making you distracted, and not finishing the work you were supose to do. It is better to work alone because it will help you fous more, and get a good grade at the work you have done.
In conclusion, working alone can save your time, and make you independent on making your own choices. It will also give you that confidence of working independent, so you dont have to ask other on what to do. Working alone is just a good skill to have when you go off into your own life adventure. When you are able to do your choices ehter if its good or bad. You are more independent and responsible of doing your own work, and choices of what todo. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
38203808F81B | Should students be expected to commit to a career at a young age? Some societies say yes, by the time they get to high school they will be given courses to guide them toward the career they have chosen. With the students given the classes needed by the guidance teacher, It will get them a well paying job right after graduating because they will already have the classes needed for that job. If they plan on going to collage to become a scientist they will offer you classes for free and you won't have to pay for those classes in collage. By having students identify a career by the time they enter high school seems to me like a great idea. once they know what there career is going to be they can take the classes required for that job.
Once the student has identified the career that he or she desires, the guidance teacher will step in and set up the classes that you'll need to take for the career that you've chosen. when I first entered high school the guidance teacher pulled everyone out of class to ask us what our career was going to be. I remember telling her that I wanted to become a carpenter, she said"great choice we actually have another school that you can go for the second half of school". I told her that seems great, she also put me some math classes because in carpentry you use math to measure. That was how the guidance teacher helped me achieve the career that I wanted by helping me get the classes that I needed to become a carpenter.
By committing to a career at a young age actually helps the students succeed in life. How does it help the student succeed? It helps the students get a good job by the time they are out of high school, by giving him the classes required for the career he wants. For example some of the students that didn't commit to a career when they where in high school are now working in a low paying job. Some are even in a lot of debt paying for the classes needed for the career they want while they could of got some classes for free in high school. One of my cousins went to high school and every year the guidance teacher would ask him what he wanted his career to be. He would always say I don't know yet, time went by and when he finally found what he wanted his career to be it was to late. My cousin is now in big debt with the bank trying to pay for his classes that he needs for his engineering job.
If one of the students decides he wants to become a scientist when he grows up. The guidance teacher will give him the classes needed like Biology and science classes. Once he gets into collage he will already have some of the classes required to become a scientist. He will only have to pay for the classes that are not provided in school. My uncles daughter is studying to become a teacher, when my cousin was in ninth grade she told the guidance teacher that she wanted to become a teacher. She was given some of the classes that are required to become a teacher but they told her that she would have to go to collage but they would give her all the classes that they could offer so she wouldn't have to pay as much when she went to collage to become a teacher.
Other people argue that a students should not commit to a career at a young age because they don't know about all the careers that are out in the world. They could chose one and latter change there minds into anther career. The is a good chance that all the students who chose the career they wanted ends up being the job that they have in the future. With having the students to commit to a career at a young age is good because they will be given the classes they need in order to be successful in the career that they've chosen. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
3821238FE334 | "I don't need to go to school for to learn new things, I can learn the same things in my home" Some students believe that is not necessary go to school to learn because they can attend classes from home. Some schools offers distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home. This is a good option for students whose can not come to school for their jobs or their kids but, they want to study and to get a High School Diploma. The majority of people assure that students need come to school for to learn but, they are wrong because students can learn the same things at home. Many students would be benefit from being able to attend classes from home.
First, Some students can not come to school everyday because they have a full-time job and their parents do not support them. For example, Many students do not have the same opportunities than others students so, they have to become independent. As a result, they have to leave from their homes and to find a job so, they sacrifice to study because they don't have time to come to school. With this option, they can go to work then, they can take their classes at home after work without to feel pressure by their responsibilities.
Second, This option can avoid the absents for students don't like come to school. For example, Some students don't like come to school and they prefer stay at home because they are attacking by schools' bullies. These students feel more confident in their home than in the school and, they believe that this option is the best way for to solve their school's problems. They also prefer this option because they are shy and they don't like to speak or to do presentations in front of the class by the students make fun of them.
Another reason for this option can would help many students is the students have kids and they can not come to school by their kids because they don't like that another person take care their kids and they prefer stay at home with their kids than come to school. Attending classes from home is an excellent strategy for students whose can not come to school by their kids because they will can take the classes and to get a High School Diploma without to leave their kids with someone else.
As you can see, Many students would benefit form being able to attend classes from home because it's a big opportunity to finish their High School even if they can not come to school frequently by their jobs or kids. It also helps students don't feel confident in the school for schools' bulliers or their feelings. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
38452CB371C9 | Generic_Name
Generic_Name
3rd period
11/08/2018
Former British prime minister Winston Churchill once said ''success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. you learn from your mistakes every time you fail in your live. you keep trying hard till you achieve what you want and studied hard for in life. failure leads to success and it is important for everyone to fail in life, failure plays an important role in our daily lives. failing does not always mean it is the end of the world you have chances in life to keep trying hard . everyone has always an experience of failure in life nobody every succeeded without failing in their lives.
First when you fail sometimes you get disappointed and say am never going to succeed in life but when you see the mistake you did the first time you try hard until you pass it. for example last year i failed my world history exam i was so disappointed that i did not want to retake again but our teacher gave me the paper back to see what i did wrong i saw that i did not read the question.
from that day on i began reading my questions and i got the highest grade in class. i learned i should always read my questions before answering because if i do not read i will fail again and i did not want to retake the test again, when i read the question and i finally began to understand the question. i learned that i should always read my questions even if am in a hurry to go and it does not matter the situation reading a question is important. i learned that guessing is not good sometimes it results in failing, i should study the night before a test.
Second a person should always learn how to study hard on everything you are given even if it is hard just try your best. last year when i gave my mum my world history final exam results she told me that i should try hard and she knows i can pass the test i told her that i will but am scared to take it again. my mum made sure that i studies every day and one day when i stayed after school for extra help. i also achieved passing this world history by trying my best to understand what the question is asking . paying attention in class also made me pass not only the final exam but also the class.
when i passed this exam i was so excited because i studied hard to get at least a eighty nine on the final exam and i was also passing the class and i was understanding my work i was also on top of my assignments.
Third failing something you took for the first time is not a bad thing it tell you that you need to keep working hard. for example one day i came back home crying and my mum asked what was wrong and i told her am still failing the world history exam. she told me that failing does not make me dumb it simply tells me that i need to correct my mistakes. she also told me that as a kid she also was failing her classes but she tried hard and hard and she now is very successful at wok. i also asked her how can i be successful? she told me that keep trying your best even if it is not your best accomplishment. she also told me that she would always be proud of me because she sees me working hard and trying to do my best. when i finally studied a lot and re-took the same test and passed it i was very proud of myself and said failure always leads to success.
however, some people may say that failure does not play a big role in your life because there are other ways to suceed. you will always suceed anything in life withour failing, you do not need to work hard for what you want and you can always achieve everything as long as you do it. but they are wrong because failure is always the number one thing that leads people to sucess. failing leads you to try hard in life you learn from your mistakes. when you fail it does not mean it is the end of the world. you keep trying hard till you achieve what you want and studied hard for in life. failure leads to success and it is important for everyone to fail in life, failure plays an important role in our daily lives. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
386C2A01AD9D | If you could pick a job what would it be? Have you ever saw someone who needed help but you could not do nothing. I would like to pursue to be a Doctor because I would like to help people and they get payed a lot of money.
First of all, I like to help people because when I was five my mom was vary sick I barely could do noting at all so that is why I want to be doctors has talent they can save their family and if I was older I know what she needed I was five. For example,people get sick a lot and I want to help people with cancer or lost a leg a arm,or an body part. I want to change someone life. For instant to many people die from little thing and I want to pervent that is one reason I want to be a doctor. In closing I think I should work for sick people.
In addition, doctor get paid a lot of money for helping people but you have to go to school and finish college for you can have a lot of money. A outer reason why,doctor get paid a good amount of money because they work 24/7 non stop to help us in need of help or in life. They save people life of course they get paid a lot, In conclusion I will love to work to be a doctor.
I would like to pursue to be a Doctor because I would like to help people and they get payed a lot of money.
This evince show helping people can help. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
387857083AAE | I agree with Albert Schweitzer, because he's a man with a lot's of experience and influence.
Let's say he is wrong and my behavior is not the best way to influence other people, and maybe people only care about famous people and look up to them and get influenced by their behavior.
Some people may agree with that statement, I just feel like it's not completely true.
For example, let's say I was very unknown by a lot's of people and they see me saving a kitten of the road.
Will people be influenced by my behavior? even thought they don't know me, would they agree with my choice in saving the kitten? or will they follow someone who's famous?.
Albert Schweitzer said, "example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing." What he is saying is that no matter how famous or how infamous you are, everyone will follow someones example no matter what the conditions my be, at the end someone will follow your behavior because they are influenced.
This is why the quote that says "first impression is the last impression" because no boss is going to hire someone who's: show's up to work late or nor properly dressed or doesn't look serous to take the job.
The conclusion of this statement is, that everyone is influenced by someone's example and it doesn't matter who the person may even be.
At the end I personally still agree with what Albert Schweitzer said and I can not find a better statement or an argument that people may not know the right answer to.
Everyone has to have some kinda example to look up to or look down on based on their behavior or actions. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
389752B5BECF | Generic_Name
18/Oct/2018
Schools offering online or video conferencing distancing learning for students is a great idea. Its a great asset for students because they can learn and work their assignments on home or cross the country. Help students with high anxiety that they can finish their assignment on safe working place for them. Many students surfer from anxiety or other social disability this program can help them get their work done with out any problem. This program can help students to learn in a comfortable place for them and learn cross the country.
A person around the world can use theses online classes to get their education from the schools far away to them. A students that lives in India can take classes from a school in America that can help young adults to go to schools without traveling or leaving their love ones. This program can help students not paying high trips or travels for going to their schools.
That can help students save money and a safe and comfortable learning place. Students that live in cross the world can try benefit from this program.
If students are sick and the schools have this benefit, they can learn at home and their grades wont fall down. Students can do their work online and watch the conferencing videos to catch up in their home.
A student name Generic_Name was sick for 3 days and couldnt go to school; He watch the videos on home and did all of his work online. Generic_Name said that this program help him to not fail those 3 days and to not fall apart. The teacher and the schools were happy with the program did to the students.
Students with high anxiety and social disability could benefits with this program by staying in comfortable learning place. Student name Generic_Name, she have couple social disability and extremely high anxiety and couldn't go to school because of this. This program help her pass all her class with no worry of anxiety attacks or other social disability. She finished her work online, and she ask for help during videos conferencing if she didn't understood the topic. Generic_Name could have fail her school year without this program, this program benefit her to succeed school year.
This program can really benefit students and change the ways of we learn. Students living cross the world could learn to their schools that are in different countries that they wont need to spend high money to travel cross the world. Students that were sick couldn't go to schools they could do it in their home. Students with high anxiety and social disability could work in their comfortable work place and pass their class. The program can benefit students for helpig them learn. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
3898358B58BB | To conserve energy and resources, Some businesses have adopted a four day work week, With each day consisting of ten hours. My school should not follow this model or even consider extending the school day by two hours. At my school a full day of school consists of seven hours. Seven hours is more then enough, Now having it to be nine hours would be very overwhelming for everybody. Extending it two more hours is too much stress on the students , as well as the teachers. Also most students have a part time job after school and won't fit everyone's schedule. There is a lot to do after school and extending school two more hours would not help. It also would not only affect the students but the teachers too. Some teachers have a second job to go to after school, Some teachers have children to go take care of at home. Also it is scientifically proven, That if students are in school for more than the seven hours they usually are in school, The students mind shut down. once the mind shuts down the body does too. So whenever the teacher is teaching the students isn't picking up the information and isnt learning anything. The student isnt focousing and also tired. So it would not benefit the students much , by adding the two hours. It will most likely have the students failing, because they're not leaning or doing their work. No good benefit will come out of extending the school day, Only bad. The school board should leave it how it is. My school should not follow this model by extending the school day by two hours. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
38AB1DF25E7F | Does a positive attitude is the key for success in life? Do you think is True or False.
First of all, Everyone have to have a positive attitude. Just imagine; a world without positive attitude, The world that we know will not be the same. Then, we'll have angry people everywhere. For example, there will not be sensible people at your Job, at the Mall, at the Store, even on your own home. The Virginia State University made an survey about if,
" Is positve attitude is the key to success in life" the 95% said Yes and the 5% said No. So do we need positive attitude to success in life, the answer is Yes. Back to My question "Do you think is True or False" is True, You need positive attitude if you want to success in life. I agree that we need positive attitude but not just in life, we need to success on everything. In conclusion everyone need a good attitude in life to succeed.
I know that I didn't pass My Test but I did My best. I am not good at writing how you see here. I can't write paragraf.
Thanks for your time have a nice day. :) | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
38B60A8516C2 | I believe that having 3-4 weeks break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall, sounds like a good idea. It will be easier to hold the information when you return in the fall. The days will be shorter since the school year is longer. I believe not everyone has something to do over the 3 months of summer break.
It will be easier for people to hold the information when they return in the fall. A large amount of people forget what they learn in school when they return from the 3 months of summer break. Everytime summer break comes I forget mostly all the information information I learned, it just leaves my head over those months. When we get 3-4 weeks over summer break, not all the information will leave. It will be easier for us students to not forget what we learned over the months.
School days will be shorter since the school year is longer or we can have one weekday off and have school at a regular time. They can change it so students don't have to wake early in the morning. Some people can't wake up early and some people get off work late and have school the next day. Students can have one weekday off, like a Wensesday or Friday off. It will give them time to relax and stay focus on school. Since, the school days are shorter, they can have time to theirselfs and not be stressed.
I believe not everyone has something to do over the three months of summer break. They might just do something for one month and for the another two months might not do anything. They might just stay inside and play video games all day and not read or not pick up a book the whole break. They might not even exercise all day. Students need to have something to do over the breaks, so they can keep learning.
Sometime I believe it's a bad idea. Students will stay a school the whole year until they gradute, and they need to spend time with their family. Some students don't really like school and they will get too stressed and breakdown over the year, so they need a long break from school. Students need time for theirselfs, so they don't stress as much. Students will stress over too much work and they have after school jobs, so they can't do their homework.
Having 3-4 weeks of summer break, a longer winter, and a week off in the spring and fall is a great idea. It will be easier to hold the information when you return in the fall. School days will be shorter since school year is longer. Not everyone has something to do over the 3 months of summer break. That's why I believe students should have 3-4 weeks of summer break, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
38CADC812CBA | Imagination can be more important than knowledge because imagination might help us with our knowledge because imagining on creating something it might help us on the future. For example, you are imagining something that you wanna make your knowledge is to try and never give up.
First of all, knowledge might help us to in our lives but it's important to imagine how we can live in our future with our skills of knowledge that we can have. In order to do something creative we have to have experience what were doing.
In conclusion I agree what enistein said because when you imagine you see stuff that you don't realize and knowledge is about your skills and effort you can do on things. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
38DF7BD353A9 | Its a good idea for student to try to finish high school early so they can start there grown up life.
when you finish school early you can start going into the work force earlier. Start working as early as you can so you can save up money for your life. you have more time to thick if you want to go to college.
Start thinking more about your self you have time to do what you want to and not having to worry about school. Go travel the world visit family and friends, you only live once so why not finish high school in 3 years. You dont need to get up early to go to school anymore,dont have to worry about homework and tests. You dont have to miss out on anything anymore youll have lots of free time.
your parent wont have to worry about spending money on you school supplies. your parent wont be on you ass much when your done with school like are you done with your homework, classwork how are your grades. no need for you to eat threat nasty school food for other year. you wont have to walk up trying to not miss the bus in the morning. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
38EE843B5CD1 | Dear, Principal
What you are doing the thing is the wrong for people that like sports such as soccer, football, baseball, basketball and other sports student would like to do. I think it would be best if you would let students like me do these sports. I think that the grade average should be a pass grade for students. A grade B average is wrong and should be a C or close to an D as long as it passing. You should think about what you are doing to people that like sports. I like soccer and it would wrong if i didn't get to try out for that all because i don't have a B as a average. You should learn a way how to improve grades without taking sports away from us the students. And that also goes for other activities. Think about and thanks for your time. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
38FA6185D43F | Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm" and I agree with what former said because to succeed in something you have to accomplish many steps to get there. Feeling motivated helps you succeed and accomplish your goal. Its better to keep failing at something over and over again because you can see what you need improvements on but eventually you're going to succeed.
For an example, my sophomore year I was taking geometry and I didnt do very well during the school year but there was a point where I just didn't even care anymore. I failed all four quarters for that class during the year and I don't blame anyone but myself because I know I was capable of passing and succeeding the class. The reason why I didn't pass the class was because I didn't feel motivated and I just gave up too quickly just by a few fails I made. I kept failing constantly so I didnt even try anymore but If i would've followed from what Former said, I know I would've succeeded during the year.
However, I took the class again that same year during summer school and I knew I had to pass and give it my all. From all the fails and mistakes I made, I learned from them. I kept practicing and I kept motivating myself, there wasn't a moment when I doubted myself. By the end of summer school I passed the class and all I had to pass was my SOL and I know I had to work hard to pass the SOL so I kept studying. The same day I took the test, I was going to receive my score and I took my time on it but eventually, my teacher told me I passed and I ended up getting the highest score from the class. I was proud of myself even though I failed many time I eventually succeeded.
Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm" and from my experience thats why I agree with what Former said. The most important thing you can't do it do is give up because If i would've gave up I would've never succeeded. Its worth it to fail over and over again but without loss of enthusiasm and eventually succeeding. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
3904D0B954A3 | Most students enjoy summer vacation, but some educators feels students doesn't retain information as easily when they return in the fall and summer break is to long. But they should also think about the students point of view. They don't see the students point of view. How they feel about this? But No, Educators shouldn't make students' break year-round school, where there should be a 3-4 week break in the summer, and a week off in spring and fall because they don't have as much time spending with their family and most students also have responsibility.
The first reason is that they don't spend time with there family. School is taking there time when they go back home. Students comes everyday day at home to do their homework and make sure they have everything ready for the next day of there school life. Some even has projects to work on. While the student is only worry about that; they forget about there parent for a while. That can really effect them because they don't give enough truth to there parent about whats going on in there life. Anything can be happening. And educator feels that student's breaks are too short. That the first reason why they shouldn't make students' break year-round school, where there should be a 3-4 week break in the summer, and a week off in spring and fall.
Finally, the second reason is most students also have responsibility. Student also have a life and things to do. In summer, spring and winter break is where most students try to help there parent around and use there free, how ever they want. They don't have to stress as much over homework and projects. Most student also believe everything they learn at school is not worthy information that why they come back forget most of the thing they learned at school. This is the last reason.
Although, some people feel that summer break is too long and that students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall. There are people who believe over wise. The fact remain that educators shouldn't make students' break year-round school, where there should be a 3-4 week break in the summer, and a week off in spring and fall because they don't have as much time spending with their family and most students also have responsibility. That why they shouldn't remove summer spring and winter break. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
392BCD798D37 | What people can give she or he own ideas? people need to express their ideas, don't be afraid because, all people has own ideas all peoples has her or she own ideas , they be continues and to express opinions, I think is very good idea have my own ideas because ,I can say my opinions, is not necessary to seek guidance from experts you can do it . is fine try to say your opinions but if you are afraid or panic you never be successful in your life. for me is most better people make their own decisions.
People to seek guidance from experts they never be success in the life, always they wanted help from the experts, spend their money people are rights, if they can say their own opinion will has more opportunities for looking a good work,
people express opinion in the future they will has a good work, if has a opinion they say it.
sometime other people are disagree with my opinion but I should be the people make their own decisions is to much better because that person can express their ideas and has most opportunities, looking for a good job. or sometime their own ideas be successful and they doing a company, but you can express your ideas and don't be afraid , you need to try and looking a good future for you and your family.
my conclusion is people give their own opinions they have more opportunities in any place they will go because in a work they want a people are decide. all people need to trying and do not be afraid. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
39492CE9549E | Teachers can justify students knowledge more accurately than students. Teachers are very experienced compare to the students because they gained so much knowledge in their life. By doing the teacher designed projects, students can learn something that they did not know about. Teachers would know what topics they really need to focus on and what are the most important things they need to know about. Students summer projects should be designed by their teachers to make sure that they are being effective, hardworking and responsible for their work during the break.
Summer projects of the students should be designed by their teachers to make sure that the students are being effective during the summer break. Teachers know the academic ability of their student because they know how the students answers some specific types of questions, they know how the students think and understand. For Example, In my fifth grade there was a math teacher named Generic_Name. Ms. Generic_Name and I spent so much time with each other to discuss my mistakes on a test, She asked me do to test corrections on a paper. I solved all the questions correctly without a time limit, She came to me and said, "I knew you could do it, because I have seen you working very hard these days". Then, I realized that I knew how to solve these problems but I was scared to complete the test before the timer goes off because I did not know I could complete everything. This examples describes that the teachers know our academic ups and downs than ourselves. They also know what we need to learn to succeed in our class, So when they design a project to their students they make sure that the students are going to be effective on their break and learning something new which will help them in their future.
Summer projects of the students should be teacher-designed to make sure that the students are hardworking even during the summer break. Teachers know the capacity of hard work we do in our class, they observe the amount of effort that we put into different things like talking, reading, writing and singing, etc. For example, one of my teacher in 10th grade was really nice to me, she always used to ask me about my hobbies and interests. I had a presentation in her class and I went to ask her for help the day before the presentation because I was preparing for almost a month, I wanted to ask her if I did any mistakes in the slides. After I showed her my slides, she gave me a big hug an said "I know how hard you worked for this presentation, I gave you a hard project to see is you are capable to do it or not. Even though you came to United States two months ago, you did a fantastic job". I was very happy to hear her saying that I did good and on the day of my presentation I felt really confident on my work. This example explains how the teacher knew that I worked so hard to do my best. By assigning me a hard project based on my level of understanding, I worked hard to understand and analyze every single detail. That helped me to gain confidence on my self and my level of hard work improved a lot. When teachers design the project they make sure that the students are trying to work hard and they want to see how your working level is improving.
Summer projects of the students should be designed by their teachers to make sure that the students are being responsible for their work during the summer break. when teachers design the project they know how long it is going to take the students to complete the project and how well focused and responsible a student need to be while doing this project. For example, My history teacher in 10 grade was very strict, she always wanted our whole class to turn in everything that she posted online in one day. After 2-3 months of struggling in her class, everything was going really good till the last day of that academic year. All of my work was completed on time. This example says that even though I worked really hard in the beginning, when it came to the end of the year I was really happy for being responsible for my own work. By learning how to be responsible from that teacher, helped me a lot in all of my other classes too. Summer projects given by our teachers can make us feel responsible for ourselves, by doing the projects teach us how to be focused and concentrated to get them done on time. when the students design the project they take it easy because most of the students just pick something they already know or they already feel confident on, which will not make them feel responsible.
Teachers are very experienced to know how students think about something, they can understand what students know and what we do not know academically. They always try to teach us how to build our academic skills. They want the students to be in an amazing position, they always want to see the best from us because they know how the student are. Summer projects of the students should be teacher designed to make sure that they are being effective, hardworking and responsible for their work during the break. | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
394F5867B7EC | Working alone is great but have you ever thought about the benefits of working in groups? for example, when you are working with a group of people it it easier to get ideas; for example,you can all put your thoughts tougher and find out the resolution. Also working with a group makes it faster to finish the tasks; some people take longer than others so its good to have people around to help.
Most people believe that working alone is better but working in a group is more beneficial for example,if there is a problem that needs to be solved it is easier to solve it because there are more people to figure out the problem and to give their opinions; which will help throughout the way. In other words, if one of the group members has trouble with the assignment another group member could help them out;instead of figuring it out by themselves.
Working in groups could also make assignments become complete faster for example,some students while working alone take a long time and end up having to take their assignments home for homework; while in a group they can come up with a solution together and get it complete. It will also benefit the teacher because there won't be any late papers.
There are benefits of working in a group but there are also benefits of working by yourself for example,sometimes it gets loud in the group and it will be hard for them to focus and get their work done also some students like to mess around and play fight instead of getting there work done. Even tho working in groups could cause a lot of talking and play fighting , it is still a more beneficial way for students.
In conclusion, working alone is a better way for students to show what they know but working in groups is more helpful for students who are struggling. It has been listed on google that Researchers have proven that it is a more helpful way to learn. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
395189B8B76B | Many schools have partnerships with companies that allow students to explore certain occupations through internships and shadowing opportunities. I would like to be selected to visit and learn about the work that interested me,
because it would help me to be prepare on my future is a great opportunity. One of the reasons that I would like to be selected is because that can help me to find the right job and to know how to do it ,and to learn about it more, Because I can have more experience on doing my job. For example if I have to do one thing I should know how to do it and is better to learn something before doing it.
Another reason is because not all schools have partnerships with companies to visit and learn about the work that interest students, that way I know what's the work that interests me by having that type of help on schools, By doing that type of help students learn new things and have more opportunity in life and have better jobs and have more money by doing the type of jobs that they want to have in there future is a great help for schools to have that. Students should already know what they want to learn about work.
I think that is a great help for schools to discover whether they are interested in pursuing that type of employment, so student learn more and they can find a job that they want that is why I want to be selected and visit and learn.
Those are great opportunity to discover whether students are interested in pursuing that type of employment. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
39524C93F4D4 | People will tell you that without doing something, you'll never get what you want. I agree. Accomplishing something is a great feeling when you know you've done it because when you know you put in the time and effort for it and get a great result. It shows that the time you toke to make it was worth it. Sitting around, letting people hand you stuff will get you no where in life, because instead of you doing something, you wait for them to give it to you, not aware of what that person had to do to.
What does it mean to accomplish something? To me accomplishing something is when you worked hard for what you did and you're satisfied with your result. That to me is accomplishing something. Whenever I set my mind to anything, I do whatever it takes to make it. For example, I had a championship finals in a week and I needed time to prepare my mind and body for the game. The time came to play the game and all I could think about was winning that trophy. We ended up winning, and I won what I was waiting to accomplish. I don't think I could have made it if I didn't make an dedicate my time to win the finals.
Kids nowadays are spoiled by there parents to get whatever they want just by asking. I can understand that some parents care about what the needs of there own children, but I often see parents buy usless things for there kids and that can be a problem because when they know they can get these things that aren't any use for them,
they go asking for other stuff that they don't need. A solution to this problem can be when they are old enough to get a job, to get one so they can make money, so they can buy things for them selves. Instead of leaching on Mommy and Daddy's money all the time. Getting a job shows that you're doing something to get what you want, for example, a house, a car, anything you can spend you're own money that you need. The effort you showed got to where you are and now you know you accomplished it.
A person I know that has accomplished alot in his life is Cristiano Ronaldo. He is a soccer athlete and was born in a small town in Portugal. Like others there, his family was really poor and couldn't afford him anything really. He was a trouble child in school and misbehaved when things didn't go his way. He was very talented in soccer though. He would go outside, find anything round and did whatever he would do to a real soccer ball. He was noticed by coaches when they would here a young kid scoring goals not any normal kid would. He moved to the capital of Portugal and would play for the towns Division one team. He never forgot his family back home. He would have made a ton of money to send back to his family and bought them a house in a much nicer and safer location. His goal was to be the best player in all of soccer. He worked in and out of practices to get better and play for a club that people would notice that he was. He was bought by one of the greatest teams in all of europe Real Madrid. He was the most highest paid athlete at the time and whenever he got his pay check, he would always use it for a good cause like, family, charity, etc. He would eventually be nominated for the best player award five times and would end up winning those times. He accomplished what he had dreamt of becoming, and I hope people could see his story and realize you can't just sit around and do nothing, you have to put in time and effort to get what you want.
I can understand when people can get lazy and not do anything to accomplish anything. Not everyone is perfect. But sooner or later they'll realize that without doing something, you can't get what you want. Sometimes people are fortunate to recieve things just by asking, but do you want to live a life leaching off people? Letting them know "oh this person can't live without me because I get him everything" I know I wouldn't. I hope to accomplish here that, you have to make an effort in order to accomplish something. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
39776B3A4C70 | Dear, Generic_School.
For some of the students, school is really far away for them, some student arent able to be in school for there health issues or gifted youngsters, is a really wonderful thing that the schools are offering online classes for the kids, it can really be a big help for there parents and there children.
My aunt, she has two children and one of them is gifted she can't walk normally, my aunt works everyday and is really frustrated , she has to take her to school everyday in the morning and take her home in the afternoon, from there home to school is like a 30 minutes of a ride and the way back , there is no bus able to take her where she lives , during the winter she wasn't a fan of the cold, the kid mostly feel sick during winter season, during at that time every morning they go outside to the car so my aunt can drop her to school she always felt sick, she was not able to attend school normally, it is really hard for my aunt, i told my aunt about the offer that the school are gonna make, about the online school and she really supports that decision she told me " That would it be a wonderful thing for me and my child" she is really joyful about the offer that the schools are making,
I fully do support this offer, from the schools having online classes it does help a lot of kids and parents, with they struggles and timing at home, it will be a big help for the counties of Generic_City, we want all the kids to learn at same time so they can be prepare for there future.
Thank you for your time.
Generic_Name. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
3991A6F647D3 | Why is not a good idea to conserve energy and resources in the school ?
Some students said that is a good idea, because is less than energy, and we can safe more resources but,I think that when we have homeworks and we don't have computers in our homes we have to make that homework in the school, library ,warhawtime or in the classroom but what happened if we don't have energy in the computers ?
We can fell some points of this class for not make that homework on time .
Is this happened in two hours of a day of school imaginated four days of school ?
This can be a problem for students because we don't have resources to make our homework on time ,and we can feel really bad about this problem ,we can have problem with our parents too.
Some students have the resources in their houses because they parents can pay for that and is the reason why they said yes is fine to conserve energy and resources in the school ,but other students they can't because their parents can't pay , or others reasons like they don't have their parents here, they have just mom and their mom have more daugthers or brothers and she have to pay rent ,car ,bills we really don't no but are a lot reason why they can't pay for internet .
I think that energy and resources in the schools is not a bad idea, but for some students is a good option to make homework and enjoy of them with accesible confidence, if we don't have energy for four days of school can be really hard to make everything at the same time like other students because we are a lot students and we can't use that same computer at the same time because is not the same homework or is not easy to find it and we can take more time then others, that's why I think that is not a really good idea for all students,
Other students think in not because some students use that internet just for see facebook or video games and they lose time that other can use , but they can't talk for everyone because some students use that internet for really good reasons like homework , read books , and other things .
Other reason to not conserve energy can be the air conditioner if we don't have energy the air conditioner is does't work and depends how is outside the weather can be affect at the students, and teacher because what if is snow outside and we don't have air conditioner we can get sick or pain in bones, if we don't have energy we can't charge the phones and we can't talk with our parents or if we have an emergency and we don't have energy how we called at the ambulance ,is that's why energy is a really good resource to comunicated with other and make somethings importants .
In benefits ,we can safe more energy because we use the energy just in limited time , the bill of the energy in the school can be less than then before and we can have more resources for our school too .We can have differents activities outside.
In conclusion , if we don't have energy for four days of school ,everything can be hard for us ,some businesses can be conserve energy and resources because is a different condition in their business , but for schools the energy is a good resource to the knoledge of the students . | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
39929B24673E | The success is something that everyone gets one day. Some persons don't success, because they maybe don't have the opportunities to success. Others persons don't success because they don't want to success, they don't want to be a impotant person, with a perfect job, or house. Success sometimes have something bad; to get success, in jobs, or in life, people go throw a lot of bad things. I agree with Churchill's statement, it's a true statement, and so important too.
First, people have to have enthusiasm, if people lose enthusiasm they breakdown, they deteriorate. Failure make some people more weak, and others so hard in thinking in perfect things for there life. Failure is something that every person have, or they go throw failure before. People can failure in jobs, people get fire from there jobs they failure.
Second, failure plays a amazing role in the pursuit of be better; However, when people failure to much, the perfects things come after. In peolpe life something chance when they go throw to much failure. They think different way, they see the thinks differents. When people failure, they start thinking in different way, because they go from failure to failure. People maybe think that they are not going to be a respect, or a important person, that's why they think like that.
However, some people failure a lot of time, but they don't care they try again, and if they failure they try again, they don't stop trying they don't loss enthusiasm.
Example: A person go to a school, to find a job like a teacher, he want to be a english teacher, they went to the main office to talk with the principal. She said, " We don't need a english teacher in this school, we already have one, and he is so amazing in his job." The teacher went to the other school to find job. He went in, and talk with the principal, she was so nice, and she accepted him in the school as a english teacher. He was so nervous, and so happy to hear what the principal said. He did not loss enthusiasm, the first school he went they tell him that they already have a english teacher, and they don't need another one. The second school accepted him, and now he is a english teacher, because he didn't loss enthusiasm. He failure in the first school, but he success in the other one he went.
Last, Some persons are amazing to failure, but others are angry, or sad to failure, there is different types of persons. Some they like to failure, some they don't like to failure. All the persons failure in one time in their life, but they maybe success when they failure. Some success and they don't failure anytime. Enthusiasm is something important that any person have not to loss it.
Success is something in your life, but people go throw a lot to get success, they failure and failure, and than get success. Some people don't success, because they don't want or they can't. Once people success, others are going to success too. A person success everyone success. People have to not loss enthusiasm to success. Some people success and don't have failure? Some persons success with not having failure, but later in life failure comes. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
39B3FC0EAE2A | Imagine being a loner for the rest of your life because you only relied on yourself. This quote says " think about the benefits working with a group or working alone." Working alone helps you complete what is task to you with no distractions, and creates an important skill to be independent. Working in a group helps with your commutation skills, and each person has their own role to play in a group, so it's less stressful. Although, working alone is more beneficial, actually, working with a group is best beneficial.
Those who believe, working alone is more beneficial have a point because you don't need to relay on anyone. You have more control on what you're working on, these are also your own ideas not anyone else. Working alone keeps you concentrated on what you are working on. For an example when you're working alone it's less likely to get distracting by someone. Working alone can develop independent skill, this skill is good to have in the future. In reality no one is there to hold your hand and guide you. The benefits working alone are completing your own work with your own reasons and less distractions.
However, the benefits on working with a group helps to get the job done faster. Listening to what others say is great listening skills; people like when you listen to them. In a group you can combine ideas and relay on each other. For an example you're confuse you have your group to explain to you what you need to do. This benefits your commutations skills and willing to speak up when you don't understand something. There is nothing wrong with reaching out for help, it shows you want a better understanding on the topic. Working in a group also has an advantage in speeding up the possess since each person is working on what they're assign to. Everyone has their weaknesses and strengths, the goal is to find what best fits for everyone in your group, so you work together as a team. If you make a mistake you have your group to give you feedback on what you should work on.
Additionally, working in a group can reduce stress because you're only focus on one part on what you're working on. We know projects, assignments, etc..can be really stressful, all you have in mind is " I have to finish all this."
Working in a group isn't so stressful because everyone has their own role they're working on. Everyone relays on each other to finish their own part, so they can finish faster.
In conclusion, working with a group is best beneficial because you finish your work faster and its less stressful than working by yourself. You can learn new things by working with others, also it increases your communication skills. You can also help one another by focusing on their weaknesses and giving feedback. Therefore, this is an important experience to have because in the future you'll have to learn to work with one another at any job you apply to. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
39B6454376C8 | Dear TEACHER_NAME,
I'm writing this letter to you because i think that is better to not allow students to have cell phones at school at all because they might get distract when they have their cell phones and they might use them during class. I think this is better because some students bring cell phones to school and they use them during class and they don't pay attention to the teacher and they are always distract when they have cell phones, some students don't pay attention because they are using cell phones in class and when the teacher ask them a question they don't know what to answer because they didn't pay attention when the teacher was talking. Another thing is that some students are now getting in trouble because they are using cell phones talking to other people that they don't really know and they give that person information about them and about school and they don't really know who that person is and they could be in danger because that person knows everything about them and about the school.
Sometimes students have their cell phones turn on during class and when the teacher is talking the phone begins to sound like someone calling or a message and they interrupted the teacher and the teacher have to take time from the lesson and tell the student to turn on the cell phone or to give it to her.
Sincerely,
STUDENT_NAME. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
39BB85E5CB5A | have you ever thought of just staying after school just to finish your homework, and wish not to do work at home when you can relax at home without thinking and stressing about doing your homework instead of remembering that you did it after school, that's why I think it's a good idea to have an, after school club because then the students will take advantage to finish there homework. and get help from and get more specific direction or other things that students need help on.
So, i think if students go to after school club to finish there homework, etc then the students won't have to worry about it at home and keep there grades in good shape. Also to keep it simple it's important to have something important like this (after school club) to let the students know they have after school to help them complete there homework.
And then, if students need help on completing there homework, etc then the students can come to after school to get the help they need. And create a bond with other students by helping each other.
therefore i think there should be a after school club to help, do, and support. 3 gt | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
39E0A362CF29 | The Generation of today they all want success instead of failure,for success to occur we have to fight for it,success does not come by itself every single human have to built,A success live without losing the enthusiasm,but the problem of today, is that people usually likes to give up things. Although, some say that success does not consist of going from failure to failure actually, it does consist of going from failure to failure,one reason is,because we are getting stronger. At some point we fail in something,for my own perspective it is like a new opportunity for us,so we can learn from our mistake. In general all the people at some point can commit an error,but the problem here is not the mistake committed, the problem is that people start losing the willing to learn,and willing to be better. there is not even one perfect human, who does not fail in anything. Another reason is because you can meet your level. It is really important for us to know our capacity. I am sure that our brain is not limited we put limit in our lives we all have the ability to get things done, it doesn't matter the situation or the problem. There always have been solutions for every single situation,for all the people who does not give up.
Those who believe, that success does not consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm have their reasons. They believe that failure does not give a good outcome to be re joy of;They seem failure like a pain hurting people making them feel really bad, and it makes them not to keep trying. They also think that failure make them doubt themselves,and that is not true my argument is not to give up so easily. They have to try until they get it done,and clearly,but nevertheless they regret it.
In my point of view, I believe that when failure occur we get stronger. An example of this would be my friend Generic_Name: 20 years old, a white man,black eyes, and black hair. He wanted to go to college, to study electricity, but his finance was slow,so decided to learn it without going to college. I knew right away that he will be challenged to make his way thought,so he start practicing looking tutorials, how to fix things, how to change a lamp, all that kind of stuff,but my surprise was when the time pass he apply for a electricity company. I said to him
! are you serious ! don't tell me that you already know electricity. He got a moment of silence... and respond yes, i make my own way he start explaining me all the difficulties part that he was on. He said that at some point he wanted to just forget that,but something inside of him wanted to keep trying. Of course the people were saying no you cant do it in a funny way,but he did not listened to the people. Moreover he wanted to keep going. He knew that it was something hard to become an electrician,but not impossible. Today Generic_Name is a really good electrician. He did not only learned electricity. He also learned how to paint houses. This is a proof that we cannot give things up only because it seem hard. It is not based on your finance. Some people have a low economy,but still there is not wall that can stop the willing to do something. It only required a personal character and volunteer. What might happened if Generic_Name loss the enthusiasm he probably will be putting less importance on him.
I also think that when failure occur frequently, we will know and meet our level our own capacity, like what are we made of. A prove of this can be my sister in law. She was on high school senior year. She had some problem in her algebra 2 class at the beginning she did not understood anything. She was in every single class,but the problem was that her grades in algebra were critical,so she talked with her boyfriend Generic_Name which is my brother. She was saying that she did not wanted to go to her algebra 2 class. Not anymore,because it was too hard she feel less intelligent and she wanted not to keep trying. My brother respond, I think that you are just starting in the way that you have not try like I would like you to try, if you doubt yourself that is a problem,because I can see a really smart person right in front of me. Believe in yourself and try again after that, she decided to give everything or nothing, so she was studying really hard, asking a lot of questions to the teacher, with that hunger to learn, and be the best in her Algebra class. Even though her classmates were ironic. Her eyes were not on them. In addition she learned a lot at the beginning she was below of her classmates, more often she was the Hornet in her class with a reward for trying super hard, and get things done on time. Image what might occurred if my sister in law give up, so easily of course she will fail the class in all quarters and have that tone of loser on her.
In conclusion, when failure comes don't let it the opportunity to take over you,because you will be thinking of yourself bad things. If you are having hard times and you can't see things clear, just ask these question to yourself Do i am doing enough for it or i am just starting?. every single of us have a big ability there no exceptions. there is people who really know what they want,and fight for it and there is people who easily give things up. We should be those kind of people who does not look for their goals and dream who are sitting down expecting how other people naturally reach to their dreams. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
39F27C7223DB | Have you ever want an extra help in a subject or some extra help in finishing your homeworks correctly? Studies have shown that one way to improve student achievement is to start an afterschool homework club. I'm gonna agree with this idea because it's a helpful club for all the students , and it can make a big different in our grades! I can tell you the purpose and the reasons why did i agree with this idea!
In order to be proud and gain many students' achievement, you would like to have some extra help to improve your learning memorize. In my school, i can see there're already students that did a wonderful job, but the president, teachers, would like to have some more to be proud about their school. According to that, afterschool homework club could be a good way to make it came true. Also, participate in this club can help you understand a learning target more clearly. Why don't you agree and try?
Teachers and students volunteer to meet with those who need help either in homework or extra help in certain subjects. Example, an important test that could include stuff from last year or stuff that're hard to understand, an afterschool homework club can help you out with teachers and students! In an afterschool homework club, you would feel more comfortable than in class. Because you can talk about many subjects, have fun with your friends, feel free to start a conversation about ideas or topics. It's extremely entrusting. You can also ask for a common study guide for the whole club and we can all solve together to increase teamwork skills. Then we can help each others on what they get stuck, and we will get their help back! This is another way to improve your learning memorize in an afterschool homework club.
Gaining some achievements, improve your grades, be proud of yourself, afterschool homework club can help you. It may sound very simple, but it can effect your learning a lot! That's the reasons why i said that i agree with the idea to set up this club. I would like my school to start to establish afterschool homework club. Would you agree or disagree? Would you participate in this club if your school start to open it? | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
39F578D9212E | An enjoyable place where you can go spend time outdoors is going to the beach because you get to do a lot of stuff. For example, you can get to spend time with your family and have fun with them or with your friends. You may be thinking that the beach is somewhere where you can go and come back that same day but what you don't know is that you can go to a hotel and enjoy the hotel and the pool. You can go eat anywhere you want there is a lot of options you can choice from. There is a lot of fun things you can do for example you can go to the haunted house, the carnival, and the art work they have so you can take pictures with your family or other members. The beach is a place where you can go to relax and get sun tan and go swimming.
The reason why you should go to the beach is because you need to have some fun time and not be stress about a lot of things in your life and enjoy the times you have with your family and capture memories with them. One of the most importance part of going is to be able to not be bored at home and do nothing. The beach is a place where you can walk around and see things you haven't seen and also taking pictures of where you have been. You can go to restaurants or you can bring food of your own. You could be able to meet new people you haven't meet before. There is a lot of clubs at the beach you can go there and dance and have some drinks. You could go to the store and buy clothes,hats,sun glasses, and more.
The second reason why you should go is because they have good hotels you can stay in and you would want to pick a hotel that is right next to the beach so you could see a good view of it. There are these bikes you could ride with your whole family and you would all be able to piddle on it or you could bring your own bike or any other stuff you might want to ride. The waves of the beach is cold but it is worth it because the waves are really big and can push you really hard but that depends if you could swim. You could also go to the pool that is in the hotel and be there if you don't want to go to the beach. Sometimes, people would want to be at the beach and stay at the hotel for like two weeks or more but I consider you being there for like about four weeks because you would be eligible to discover new things or see new things.
The last reason would be go when it's 4th of July because when they have fireworks at the beach it looks really pretty and nice. The beach is a place where people could get married or have a romantic time there and they enjoy doing that. There are people that do there shows there like to get money for doing stuff for living. I would want to actually live at the beach because I don't need to go from where I live to the beach because it's really far away but anyways, at the beach there is a lot of great stuff there and nice people and I know for a fact that you should diffidently consider going and not over thinking it.
In conclusion, I recommend you going because you are going to have a lot of fun especially with your friends and family and you would remember that in your spending time outdoors you had a good time. Don't forget the hotels,the food, and the pool are such amazing part of why you should go to the beach. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
3A2DBB1E0556 | I believe that my skill is I can speak another language,Korean, fluently. Speaking another language is not effortless but the effort give pleasure that I can help other people. It is tired and hard to help other people, but assist make people glad. My ability is I can speak Korean, acquired Korean by reading the books, can use my skill usefully by teaching Korean to Korean - American and communicate and help Korean.
I developed my Korean skill by reading books often. I read a Korean book at least in a week. Mostly, it was hard to understand and I had to find the words meaning in every single time. However, I could improve my writing skills,
vocabulary skill and I could speak Korean and write logically. For example, I took World Language Exam last year, I could use the words that I saw when I was reading a book. Also, I could make my writing clearly, organize and I understood prompt very well. In addition, my parents read Korean books to me and my brother. That made me to understand and speak in Korean fluently.
I can use Korean skill very usefully by teaching Korean to Korean- American. Usually, people who were born in America but their families are Korean, and they don't know how to write, speak and write in Korean. For example, I go to the church every Saturday and help to teach Korean to the teenagers or children. It is hard but they can learn Korean from Korean school and communicate with families. For example, they become teenagers, and they can speak only English and their parents can speak only Korean. They will not able to communicate each other. They will become farther. Nevertheless, teenagers can ignore their parents that they cannot speak English.
Communicate with Korean can be useful because some Korean are immigrated to America with not enough English skills. They need help with bills, housing and information of America. If you go any stores or community center, they are having difficult because they can't speak English so they cannot understand what the owner is trying to say. If you can speak Korean, you can help them. For example, I was student ambassador which is help new students to touring the school and help them with the schedule. The new student came to our school and she was Korean and she cannot speak English. I introduce the school, and class schedule in Korean to her so she can understand about school system.
There are lots of advantages if you speak another languages. You can acquire Korean by reading books that help to improve your writing, reading, vocabulary skills. Also,teaching Korean to children or teenagers and can communicate with Korean can help people. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
3A38B9DD6723 | In every success of a person there is always a humble story of how did they start from the beginning of their journey. At some point, being successful does not mean you have gone through a lot of struggles, but it was destined for you to be successful. In every story there are different types of story because it is based on where you came from, what education you have finished, and your status in life.
However, I agree with Churchill's statement because success comes after failure. Failure is really an important role for every success. If I fail, I did not hesitate to stand back for myself to pursue success. The greatest blessing in my life is being successful after I have gone through failures. For instances, Graduating high school, I won't be graduating if I did not fail and try harder to reach my goal. At some point of my life, failure is within me because I am not making any move to pursue my planned success. Planning ahead of my success is not bad actually it prepares me to become a successful individual, if I will fail at this time maybe planning my success is not a good idea because it was planned and I know what kind of success is waiting for me. I'd rather be a failure with clean conscience than a successful cheater.
I conclude that in every success of a person is within you. You hold your own fate. If success is really for you be thankful of what kind of success you are receiving at that moment of your life. Be humble, keep your feet on the ground. I will end this by saying if you fail once, stand up twice. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
3A71C888CE45 | Should your school extend the school day for two hours or they should not extend the school day for two hours? If your school extend school day for two hours there are some thing you can't do. You can't play after school games. You can't do your homework. You have less time to work. You going home late. You can't fresh your mind.
Reason one, students who work after school they have moer time on work. For example, if your working time is four o'clock to ten o'clock. If you work regular time you going to make more money. Students need to work becaus they needs to pay the cell phome bills or on gasolin.
Reason two, students who want to play after school game they can play the game. If they don't have time to play after school game they can't fresh there mind. For example, students who live one or two hours away for school they have time to play after school game.
Reason three, students can fresh there mind. Students can't fresh there mind because they are studying more then they need. For example, some time students can't remember what they learn in class, but can do other thinks. Some time student haveing so much fun in the class. Because there mind is so much fresh.
That why school can't extend the school day for two hours. Students can get tired in ten hours of study. Students can't fresh there mind. They can't play after school game. Students who work after school they have less time on work. That why school shouldn't extend the school day for two hours. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
3A94013B23DD | "Determine never to be idle...it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing," a quote from Thomas Jefferson, meaning the more active we are, the more we are able to accomplish. Although many would believe being active would be the obvious answer, there are reasons as to why being inactive may allow us to achieve more. By being inactive, we have plenty of time on our hands to accomplish things, we have the energy to accomplish more, rather than constantly being worked up and doing something, and we also have time to brainstorm ideas.
Constantly doing something does not give us the time we need to accomplish goals. By always have a fixed schedule or always having to do something, we feel as though we connot risk wasting any time by trying to achieve something. Having those few extra minutes out of the day can allow us to create or focus on our hobbies, which then can get us to accomplish things. For example, over the summer, my dad decided to take time out of his job to focus on his love for plants. He then decided to make it his goal to bulid a garden, by taking time out of his very fixed work schedule to do it. By the end on the summer, he had accomplished his goal; just from taking some time off.
Always doing something causes us to lack the energy we need to accomplish things. When constantly doing things and working, we are too tired to achieve anything, because we put all our energy into everthing else we do. We become fatigue and restless when constantly doing something. For example, my mother is always doing something; she goes to class, goes to work, then comes home to clean and cook. She is never able to accomplish anything because she does not have enough energy. When we constantly work, all we want to do after is sleep, rather than causing us to want to accomplish things.
By not always having to do things, we are able to new brainstorm ideas. We can brainstorm goals that we would like to accomplish. When always doing something our minds are focused on other things, rather than focusing on acheiving goals. We dont have time to sit and brainstorm when we are constantly working. Our minds cannot focus on multiple things at once, meaning it does not have space for other thoughts of accomplishments.
Even though many people think that constantly being active helps accomplish more, it is not always true. We can accomplish just as much, or even more when being inactive than always doing something. By being inactive we have the time to accomplish things, we have the energy to achieve more goals, rathan than being tired and restless, and we are able to brainstorm ideas without other thoughts in our minds to distract us. | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
3A9630FC8DFA | What's next, what do you want to be when you grow up , A sienstest, teacher, astronaut, A soccer player,a singer, what is it,
After elementary you go to middle school, Then high school, And then collage, But what's next, what do you want to be or when do you want to be after collage you get a job go to work make money, or even have a family,
Now lats talk about elementary school for a sec elementary school is important right because that's the first school you ever go to, you learn how to speak, write, read, make friends, and learn about plants also animals and more fun thing to learn about,
then it's middle school, more two grades 7 and 8, its just like elementary school but it gets you ready for high school.
Now it's High school is the big place you learn about new things, And get your drivers lie sens, your GP, learn more about collage and more things you never learned about, join a club like, football, soccer, facts, coreiss, singing, band and more.
Finally it gets harder collage, you get to pick your collage, And you need to work hard and earn your degree to become what you want to become in life, also earn your diploma.
After collage where are you going, what do you want to do, how do you want your life to be like. lats say Im a doctor, I go to work at my favorite job, I make money for me and my family with out your degree and diploma, I cant work there I need to go to collage to earn it and work hard for it also to never give up for what I want.
most in portent part in your life is your family.
The money you make by your favorite job goes to your car, house,things you need, work, and your kids, they go to school and do the same thing you did, they learn how to read, write, speak, and more its like a circle, First elementary school, then middle school, and high school, finally collage,
And finally my last response, I would always tell myself when Im sad, mad, maybe even depress, is when it's happy it's always smiling and never stop's"
Last but not lest school is the most important thing in your life it's for your future, and for your hopes and dream's to come true, And to just live life the way you want it to be like don't be a follower be a leader
Now ask yourslfe what do I want to be | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
3ACDDFC9DD0C | Some schools use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes. In my opinion, i think that it is good idea to permit or allow cell phones during classes' period.
First of all, it is easier to search information. It became to help to students and teachers too, because, it is easier for students to search different information form different topics or classes. Also, the teachers can send information or assignment to the students and they can check it at the moment.
Consequently, they can save time. They can use many tools that help to do easy the work. use the Google translate it is one of the tools more important for some students that the English is their second language, because, it is fast to search the wolds on it.
Third reason, it is useful manage a different social media to be informed in some areas. The students can share information about the different programs, event or sports game that they have in the school. furthermore, it is a manner to keep them involved in the different events at that schools.
Finally, i think the schools should permit or allow cells phone to the students during the classes' period because, it is easier to search information, they can save time to find the new worlds using the Google translate, and manage social media to be informed in some areas. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
3AD5BFDC11E4 | People who want to success in life have to failure more than once without loss of enthusiasm. Enthusiasm is important because is what keeps you doing what you want to accomplish. I strongly agree with the statement of Minister Winston Churchill.
I personally think that in life there is always up and downs. For example, when i got bad grades i always think on what am i not doing right so i can fixed it. However, to success in life you have to failure more than once but you have to know that there is going to be obstacles that are going to bring you down but you don't have to let them stop you because you have to think on what you want to accomplish or in what you want to success. If a person losses interest in something they want to, then they're not going to keeps going. In conclusion, you have to fall so you can get up and keep going to the goal.
Loss of enthusiasm can not give you success in life. For example, when you have a goal and there is many obstacles is because your close to get to rich it. However, you can keep doing what you love so you can accomplish the goal that you wanted. Although, there will always be somethimg that try to stop you but you don't have to let stop you. In conclusion, if you don't loss enthusiasm you can do whatever you want.
To success in life you have to think positive and act positive in front of anything that want to stop you. Although, you have to show then what you are capable of and what can you became if you don't loss enthusiasm. However, you have to failure so you can have a lesson and you can learn from that lesson. In conclusion, to success you have to failure more than once so you can accomplish the goal. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
3ADC97CB1DB6 | First impression can change. Most of the times they do change. It's rare for someone to act the same once you've met them because eventually they change. Nothing really is the way it seems to be. When it comes to first impression its always important to act a certain way. Everything changes , people change, things change eventually.
When it comes to first impression people always change. Sometimes when you meet someone they always want to seem kind to the other person for them not to think anything bad of them but good. When you go into a job interview you want to dress appropriately, you also want to act appropriate, and respectful with the other person when that may be out of your comfort zone. Some people can change in a relationship they act all sweet at first but then one day they'll just switch up on you and act different and be different from when they first met the person. Most of the times thats always the case people just act different from what they got in their first impression.
Nothing seems like the way it should be. Meeting people is nice but from what you can gather from the first impression is not always enough. I've met people who have thought i was mean because of the way I looked that was their first impression on me but then they said when they started to actually have a conversation with me and actually talked with me they realized that I was really nice and not mean. Thats the thing about the first impression it always changes. People can look at certain way but act completely different. I like to dye my hair different colors some people find that intimidating because of how I look but i'm a nice person I love to meet people and talk but it may not look like I do.
Meeting people is an important thing in life. Everyone is always meeting people which means first impressions matter. When you meet someone you dont want them to hate you, you want them you like you. You have to act nice and polite even if you are not in the mood to be nice or even if you're the meanest person you have to be respectful with others around you. You change the way you are most people do it and dont realize that they do change from when they first were with the other person. I've met friends who i thought would do good for me in my life because of my first impression with them but turned out to be toxic and bad for me. When you see a rose it beautiful, it has a beautiful color to it, it smells good bur when you want to grab it there are thorns and it hurts you.
In conclusion things arent always the way it should be. Everything changes , First impressions always changes it's possible. It takes times to sometimes notice the change but people do change from there first impression . | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
3AFA78FFFC15 | So I would be talking about how people should sign up for something at there own school because people should do something they love thats my first reason. Everyone should be doing something its not like your doing it serious but sports is hard in my opinion because you have to be really good at that sport thats my second reason. Not to be on the electronics all day that would'nt be good at all compare that doing something all the time. But people should do something in there lives because you only live once so do something. Thats why agree to this so people would'nt all that because if you really love something or sport then you should make dreams come true so your good at it that is all I have to say about people should do something activity at school or sport.
Reason number one love something then do it because people should believe what they do also some people dont believe in there self they just knock there self down like believe that your good at it. What if there really good at what they do like people should follow there dreams by being good in that one activity or sport they love. We need really great people to do something dont be doing stuff you really dont like because u dont need to do something it dont make sense. This paragraph was about how to do something you actually wanna do and believe what you really love about your school like dont just sit down and relax like do something in your life its apart of life too.
Reason number two everyone should do something in there lives should'nt be lazy because that would'nt take you no where when your all lazy and stuff dont do work or anything. Do sports and activity so your body could be healthy because a lot of sports will take you some where. Probably professional sports that would be really great for you like big time. Be active al the time so your could help your own body it could probably grow like that and thats all I have to say about my second reason.
Reason number three is not to be in electronics all day long because its a distractions to others you need to practice what your doing in a activity. Be home all day you should really play outside with friends or make plans during the weekend because it would be fun for you and your friends. won't have much sleep at night because if your just distracted about being on your phone all the time you'll probably be tired in school or even at practice or after school. So you shouldnt be on the phone all day your play outside go to the movies or chores doing something doesnt get you bored all the time. So this paragraph was about you should stay off your electronics all the time not all but sometimes just go outside and play.
Thats all my reason I hope that a lot of people try something that there good at. People try something new in life because life is'nt easy at all but you just got to fight for it and be at anything. We all should try something new it would be amazing for other some people got people to look up. To so look up to someone its good because there probably a great person with a great heart. You should look up to others because other people made a big accomplishment. So thats all I have to say about being a leader not a follower like do something once again u only live once make ur life go big. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
3B2DADB10DCA | A exelent worker man come for a student who choosed a career that he love when he was at young age and study that career for a long time. children at yound age learn more fasther them when they are getting older. Also some parents like to ask their children what he or she want to be in the future for example: doctor, teacher, dentist, police or engineer. At school teachers' tell students' to do a draw about what they are dreaming to be in their future and every students' at young age are have in mind what they will be in the future. It is a good idea fo students to commit to career at young age.
Students need time to prepare for they career in way to succeed in what they want to be in their future.
For example, all career take time to learn about each subjec and students might don't have enough credits to past some classes and they have to take the class again. In addition some students wants to be doctors' and the career for doctors' take a long time and a lot of money that they need to have in way to be get that career. Such of people have to save money in way to pay for they education for their career, but in some cases the government pays them education for to be a qualify student their school. Career takes time and knowledge in way to do exelents in what you are planing to be when get older.
Students will have the opportunity to learn more than one career and they will have the choose to decide what career they like most. For xample, students have have the option to change they career to other career that they find out that they like most. Furthermore students are young age can have many ways of opportunity to make a good future for their life. Also student can decide which career give them a good job for to have a better salary. Staring to study career at young age you have the option to learn about more career and get that one that you feel that you are good at.
Some people believe that students at young age don't have a good knowledge about what they want to be in the future. For example, they argue that students has to be more older to understand how to choose a career and how to be sure what career they want to be in ther live. Such of people says that student just like to be what his or her mother, father, uncle, cousing or some persone that they might almire career is, they might even now enything of thoses career that they want to be becuse they don't have much of knowledge about the job. Even though they says that students don't have in mind how really career that them want is not that easy that how they think it's; they says that students are not responsible enough to decide for ther future career at young age. People think students are not old enough to be ready to take a position in their live.
In conclusion students decide what career they want for their life. But also straring a career at young age students will have more opportunities to learn thinks that might help them in their future job. Deciding for what you want at a long time help students to do things better beacuse you have more time to fix you mistakes in your career. A good person with a good job and with a great future in font is the one who stared working for what they want at young age. High school will encurage students career at aerly age. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
3B355996A407 | Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break should these projects be teachers designed or students designed?.
I'm taking pocition of this topic, In my opinion students should be have their own projects during the summer, the students already knows, whats the problem is or what they have it trouble with. students involved in summer projects, could be one way to students can learned also students can have more skills if they keep practice with their own projects and ideas they are going to be ready when they coming back to school , I'm totally agree with that the students should be designed their projects,For example, I'm a student of ESL, I like to make my on projects during summer to dot not forgot what
I already learned during the year, in others words students need to work in their on projects during their break
The firs reason about this topic, some students, who feel more comfortable making their on projects is that they will know how the topic goes, because they were the ones who created. in fact, If schools let students to make their own projects , they will be more comfortable because they will know what the topic is about and it will be easy for them to make it.
Second reason, students needs to make their own projects during summer could be more help for the students , when they came back to schools, because they are not going to forgot it, what they already learned,the students don't have to stop working their own projects because if they stop probably they become lazy. for example ESL students, if they don't try to make their own projects they will be forgot everything.
I think that the students, needs to have their own projects during summer, that would be a good for students,
also , students, won't forget everything that already leard during the year, because they are still working on their own projects and understanding better their projects, I'm totally agree with that the students, can do better without teacher during summer, students can be more active and show more their abilities, if they try they will make it. there are many points to students make their own projects during summer. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
3B6893E9CA71 | If we're always doing somthing then we're always busy. As long as we keep busy we'll sooner be done then later. For example if there's a project to be due, then that project must be due, and if the teacher gives you a due date it would be more motivating to finish it on time then later or even late. As long as the person doesn't give up and keep focus, then there's nothing to worry about. Staying on task isn't that hard, but if there's any distractions you must remove yourself from that situation and get back on track. Like imagine if a student was in class having trouble focusing because the students around them we're distracting or noisy. Then they may ask the teacher that they prefer working in the hall because the noise in the class is to distracting to them. The key is when it comes to doing something you must keep busy to reach that goal of finishing or being done. There are going to be some challenges, but you just need to overcome those challenges and learn from it its all about learning and progressing as you keep working towards it. These are some of the reasons i think would help best to keep moving forward. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
3B81809AA132 | "Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something" yes people accomplish more when they are doing something. I believe that when people put in the effort to do more things that, it could help accomplish more for them in life. The reason why people accomplish more is because since day one they've been working hard and every chance they had of doing something productive that it would help them get to where they need to be in the future that they would take it. They knew that at a point of time when they get a job that they would have to take care of their parent when they older. This is why our parent's always push us and tell us to do better in school because they already been through our situation and it took them the hard way to learn and they don't want us to learn the hard way they want us to learn the easy way so that it would be easy for us to get a scholarship.
Back in the old days when our parents were growing up they didn't have no technology to learn they had to struggle to learn, they didn't have no bus to take them to school like how we do now days. But back in the old days is was easier to get a jobs and it was easier get into colleges because all they needed was a GED. But now we need a Masters Degree, and a High School Diploma just to get a job that pays good enough for us to live by yourself and to start a family. Now it very hard to get an academic scholarship because now you need at least a 3.8 grade point average (GPA) to get an academic scholarship. This why we need to be always doing something so that we can make our parents happy and also make ourselves happy that we've made an accomplishment.
These are the reasons why i think we should do more, push ourselves more to get to where we need to be in life as a teenager because our parents can't keep telling us the same things over and over for us to listen we should just listen the first time so that we could make them happy and take care of them as when we get older and into our adult stage. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
3B851F58BCDC | Have you every wonder why people graduate so young age is because they smart than class meet?
Although some might agruenming that graduate in three is bad ideas actually graduate three is good ideas because be more mature for real world and you are able take full responsible of their own.
First reason is graduate three is good idea because be more mature for real world. Many people today they does know how real world work.
for example, many teenage does not know how real world work; teen drink and drive involve themselves in accident they hurt themselves and other people without think about their action because their parent bail them out of problem so they don't care if hurt some one are not.
All they know some has take care them. This shows that if teenage graduate three year they will be more mature for real world and they learning their lesson what to do and not what to do.
Another example,
is parent take teenage their full reasonable like pay for car insurance if brake the law parents stand for them say my child is innocent because parents defends for them if do some wrong convinces themselves they do right thing so be to late for them they think that way real world world work they wound't able to learned from their mistake. This show that teenage graduate three year help them to know their surrounding know full action they take full responsible own act.
Second reason is good ideas teenage graduate because it full rsponable of their own they will pay house rent and bills, light bill for example,
my mom pay for phone bill so real they care where money come all know is pay for bill. this shows teen will be more rsponable if pay the own bill be care bill not to go up. Another example I use to much light and water so when water and light bill come will go up ; my mom is only one that has pay bill.
this shows that if teenage doesn't how much they use water and light bill because their take care of those things for them.
Other some side might argument that graduate in three is bad ideas because you miss out life you don't know to have fun you will be stress out you know what make you happy. other example is on enjoy the moment you have as teenage.
At the end graduate three is good ideas because be more mature for real world and you are able take full responsible of their own you will know what life lay out you out their. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
3B8E36166444 | I am agree that a good attitude is the key to be success in life. Have a good attitude also help to be a better person. Also for been success in life a person need to have a good attitude but also need to do the best on what is doing. A person need to have a good attitude for show that is a good person a good worker. having a good attitude is the key of been success in life because: new opportunity, help to ne flexible, and help to face problems.
A good attitude is the key of been success in life because you can take new opportunity. Have a good attitude help to see the new opportunity that are out there. An example from my experience is: When i came to Unite State four years ago I was scare to start a new life in a new country. I was afraid to go to school because I did not English. With the time I think and I said to my self that learned a new language will give me new opportunity in me life and will help to be success.
Have a positive attitude is the key of been success in life because help to be flexible. been flexible is the how a person can put then self in a new situation a do well. an example is: One of my friend tell me one time that she argue with a costumer at his job. She is a cashier at a restaurant in the mall it was her first job. She said that the customer get mad and start screaming at her because they did not put something in his food she said that she start screaming at him too. But them she said that she realize that she should not be argue with the costumer. She said that she change her attitude a stop screaming at the costumer and she said that the customer calm down after she change her attitude.
Another good thing of haven a good attitude is that help to face problems. Sometime face problem with a positive attitude help to see solution. There are problem that we think does not have a solution but there is always a solution just need to be positive a figure out the best way to solve the problem. An example is: In my first year of school in United State I took PE2. that class was really difficult for me because me english was not good. But I face that problem be trying my best and asking me teacher or friend for something that i did not now. Have a good attitude with me friend and teacher and work hart help me to pass that class.
A positive attitude is the best way to be success in life because give new opportunity, help to be flexible. help to face the problems. For been success in life is not just work hart all the time is about to have a good attitude too. A good attitude help in work in life and everything a person do. A person need to have a good attitude in their life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
3B93AE972238 | In this school year I may be doing Homework club because I want it to get all of my homework done at school and to turn it in on time. Homework club is a go thing that I chose because their are teachers their to help you to get your homework done. Another go thing in homework club is that if you have trouble with your homework the teachers could help you with it. kids will love if the school time never changed so they could get home on time and even the bus driver and the teachers to.
Well I think that the kids won't like it because lot's of kids will be coming home late in night will the bus driver and the teachers if they live far from school. The after school stuff will be late into the night for the kids who will be staying and some of the teachers to and the bus driver to if the schools add one and a half hour to school each day. Kids will hate it if the school adds another one and half hour to school each day so some kids hope that they do not started school at 8:00 o'clock in the morning and they finished school at 5:18.
Some kids will kind of love the idea that the school is adding one and half hour because some kids love school that they just don't want to go home and do their homework because you have to take your baby brother. Some kids will love to stay after school and the stuff they do and lot's of kids will problem stay at homework club to get all their homework done for all their classes so they do not get a bad grade if they did not do their homework. Some kids will like to come home at 6:50 or 7:00 o'clock because they could just eat their food and they did all of their homework and they could just watch T.V.
Some kids will love the idea to add one and a half hour to school each day and some of the kids will hate the idea. Lot's kids will love the idea to stay after school for a long time and they could come home late and some kids will hate to have to come home late if you have after school everyday. Some kids will agree with this some won't agree with this. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
3BD4B53512BD | some people get in a good mood or something is happening that is happy. sometimes people just dont think about the bad mood they just want them to do be in a good mood.
people sometimes dont care about the mood or sometimes they want them to do something fun to be in a good mood. people should always be happy never sad,mad,bad mood. sometimes people get in a bad mood because when they wok up or when there mom get mad at them for thing they didt do and a lot of people are always sad. likely a lot of people always having a good attitude. wider why people do get mad a lot for nothing.
people should make other people happy when there in a bad mood or when they need help some people get bully a lot of this word they should help does people and try to make them happy and never one should be nice to other and tell people that you trust dont tell no one who is fake to you or something like that and its good if you tell your teacher for help if something is happening people should never be sad in this word god made this word so people can be happy when a slime face and be kind to people and never do bad stuff and be in a good mood. never do what people tell you what to do,be you believe in yourself do never give up in life. if people say that you cant do nothing dont be with them if there your friends because there are fake to you. dont be sad what people say,always do your best and get real people in your life. do good at school never be in a bad mood at school people can think its because of the teacher or its because you dont want to be at school because its boring. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
3BDF36560245 | In my opinion having contact using the technology they bing a lot of benefits in our's life . Im agree with this because is helpfull and you can do many thing in two minute you can take the computer and do what you need to do.
First:
benefits is to do is pay may bill in the phone, sometime you don't have a time because you working full time and you need to pay a bill,
when is time to go a lunch you can take your phone and call or search a web cite and to do it. is very important because you can do everything where ever you are.
Secondly: in this time the tecnology it's became important you can see in the web cite or in the phone you can unloading one app like Amazon they have a option to shop online it is more easily to shopping in your home. Other thing is my history, one time it's happen to me for my mistaken i'm drive in
Ezzi Pass and the company send a bill in my house then i'm search how to pay in the web cite and im do it . It is easy to me to pay this is the big benefits bring the tecnology on peoples lives.
The third: your checking accout you can check your balance how much money you have left in the phone and to do many tasks for exmple in may life I have class in the school and all may course is in web cite i'm using the computer it is usefull to me doing many tasks or home work.
In conclusion: the tecnology on the life of people is very importan and bring more skill, helpfull ,usefull to do something and doing more easy life, in this time the technology give a lot advantage in our's life . | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
3BE469553D75 | Although, people would like to be taking there classes online because people would rather sit at home on there computer than actually go to school and sit in class and listen to there teacher.
I mean I see why people would choose that for an example say if your late to class. You won't be because your taking online classes and you have so much time to get ready. When you have school you have less time to get ready even to have breakfast.
If your feeling sick for the people that take online classes it's much easier for them because that can sit in bed and do there homework. Even if they have a doctor appointment for being sick they can just sit in the wait room in that time being they can just do there work while they wait. If they don't Internet they can just use hotspot.
When your on a vaction won't have be worry about miss school work because your taking online classes. Even if your on another state you can still do the online classes. Plus, the online classes only taking like an hour to finish.
If it was me to chosse if I want to take online or just normal school. I'll pick school because it's much easier for me to learn because teachers would make sure your learn by making take test or quizes. Plus, your can stay after school if your miss one day of school. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
3BEF322748A1 | Imagine that you got a project in your college and in that project you have to interact with different people and you have to write about their lives, but now you will be thinking that it is really difficult project to do because in all those previous years of high school all you did was to avoid people.
Some people believe that technology saves your time as you can buy or sell things online. However, so much use of technology effect your eyes and brain in a negative way.
Therefore, usage of technology should be made less and people should interact with each other more, because the more friends you will have the less you will go in the depression.
Use of technology have a lot of negative effects on people's lives. Too much use of technology weakens your communication skills with other people. Recently it has been said that there are some kind of radiations on your phone and other electronics which affects your brain and body in a negative way. Too much use of phones, laptops and television can weak your eye sight making it difficult for you to see.
Some people say that technology can be used for different kind of resources . On the other hand, it can also leads you towards the cyber crime which is really bad for you, because if you are caught once doing that crime the rest of your life you will be in jail.
Now a days, if you will go outside, in many places you will see that there will be friends or family sitting on the same table but no one is talking with each other, everyone is on their devices.
There are many people in today's world who do suicide or are in depression just because they think they have no one to whom they can talk and can share their problems.
For example, if there is some one is trying to talk to you and is trying to be your friend but you are busy in using your phone and the next day you came to know that the person who was trying to talk with you yesterday did suicide today because that person thought that he had no one to whom he can talk. So you will blame yourself and you will regret at that time for not talking with that person.
Hence, people should interact with each other more and more and they should try to know about each other life intead of using their devices all the time. People should spend more time with their families because not everything is found on Google,there are somethings which you learn by spending time with your family and your family will be the only one who will be with you every time, in your good and bad days, but your devices will not be with you and also they will not support you at that time. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
3BFECA0F8470 | Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive or negative effects on people's lives? My opinion is negative for people's lives. Because we can do nothing without technology. If we are in the house, we didn't do any communicate with family. We will get sick. I believe technology is bad for our life. And technology will hurt many people.
First of all, Technology had negative effects on people's lives. Because we can do nothing without technology. Since, I was in Generic_City, I forgot my phone to bring outside. And I was doing nothing that day. I thought I have to focus my life without technology. We can do many things without technology. For example, we can do shopping with friends, we can play board game with people, and we can do talking each others. I believe technology making me more dumb. Also, technology will be my life controller.
Second reason is if we are in the house, we didn't do any communicate with family. When I was in my house our family did not talking and they are doing their own work. I was so sad about this. My mom just watch TV, my dad did a slept, and my sister did play the phone game. At that time I want a talk to my family but they was very busy. I miss my time to talk about my school life with my family. Also we did not know about each family members favorite and what you don't like. So When my birthday party, my family members don't know what I want to get.
want a say, " You have to do communicate with your family as much as you can." It will be help your whole life.
Last is we will get sick. For example, your eyes get hurt. Because if you watch video a lot, you will get blind. So you can not see anymore. Your health is very important in your life. Too much technology will dangerous in your life. I love game, but I delete my all games because when I was young, I started the game, but I get sick more and more. I thought "If I am doing game more I will be die." So I was delete all my games. Also, You will be overweight.
Because your not moving and you ate a lot, you will be fat. I worry about that. Don't kill yourself.
In conclusion, technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. But my opinion is this will be negative for people's lives. Because we can do nothing without technology. If we are in the house, we didn't do any communicate with family. We will get sick. I think you can do technology. But not that much. Please plan your time and use it. It will be help you. This century is technology century. But use it safe. I believe you can do it. I will try too. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
3C2AFBFEDA6B | Although most people would want to graduate and enter college or the work force a year early,others may argue that school should be the four years. One should be allowed to grow up. It should be mandatory to do four years of high school and here is why.
First of all,school prepares students to face up and go against the real world,some students may need at least one more year in school to get their mind set for their future. Staying the extra year can make the student focus more on the classes that they're taking. If students decide to only go for three years, they can forget about sports or any after school activities they want be in. They will have to put all their effort and energy into passing their after school classes.
Second of all,students can be more independent. Students learn how to manage time to do work and extra activities. Students can also learn how to be more reliable and build up their confidence on doing things on task and on time. By doing the three year only, they cant take breaks and if so the students wont have enough time to rest their bodies and be able to do what is asked.
Some may argue,that students staying for three years are going to have enough knowledge to be able to take on the real world. However,students that have four years would have a more since of what they are going to do after the four years have passed. In conclusion,students should stay and have a better understanding of what is going to come up next. | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
3C487F5D1994 | I go with three years because many students are the helping hand in there family now a days .and many employers need need employees to. The military are always looking for people who want to join the force this three years will make it easy for them to employ some of the students in the army, air force,navy e. c.t. Some people are old to be in high school if you are 20years old and still in high school if they tell you that is four years instead of three years you will be kick out if that school and that is not a good thing. There are lot of ways that graduating younger better than graduating old you can finish school by the age of 18 and then still be learning but not in high school. if you beside to go to collage and finish your fours diploma or more you can that high school fours can be a disaster for the students.
The three years program is helping the student to finish school early and making him/her responsible in life be ready for life early by going to collage and spending the rest of the year that they should have be in high school in collage or other work places. there are a lot of ways that you can get in jobs great jobs and stuff all because you are young. Some work places need young people to work for them if you not young or if you are that old they will not take you in that job or that work place. for example i was trying to apply for a job in the internet i went through all the documents but what i so was you can't applied this job if you don't have a high school diploma think about if you were homeless and you need a job as soon as possible and they came and said that you can't have this job if you don't have high school diploma you,and you need that job but you still have fours to finish that is not a good helping point.
This program will help the student a lot in saving time in his or her life time and finish school in a young age that is a big advantage for the student to have more stuffs to think about in life and just being in high school . This program is gonna save you a year of high school .If i have the right to this program i will make sure i do all the necessary was that i should do to finish school i year before my actual year. That will make me finish school in a young age and start looking for a job or go to collage. It depends what you want to do when you finish but it is a great idea and a great program to join to it saves time ,it can enable you to quality for jobs that required jobs that consider age. If it was me i can spend all summer without having a fun with my friends and go to the program do all work just to graduate early is just for a summer . Other one is that staying after school and i don't see any difficulties in doing that .it will save you time and even money because some school is not for free you have to pay to be in that school and other said stuff to pay too. All that will be limited for just pay three years instead of four years. it saves money and saves time. Programs like this have to be stand and be form as a big low that every school should do. It will even help some of the parents because not all students ride the school buses some of them they are brought to school by there parents a pick them again after school is not easy and some parents are working they can't always do that if the three years stands it will benefit the parents too by the way .The contain of my paper is minimize the years in high school. it also helps in man y ways like saving time, saving money , i can even say saying gas too because some parents take there children to school very day so if this policy stands legal and all the schools in the area are doing it they gonna make things easy for both the students and parents . | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
3C56844D4CF0 | Many students become involved in extracurricular activities enrich their educational experiences, and some even become involved in so many activities that they have little time to or complete homework assignments. In my opinion it would be better if the school has controls in the students involvement in extracurricular activities. Therefore, school offer the capacity that students have to develop their potential. Secondly, school count by with the necessary tools that students needed. Thirdly, school helped the students a level physical with the sports. If the school simplify by pushing the controls and the extracurricular activities for the students, their are more productive at school and teaching-learning process undoubtedly be win-win for all the participants involved in this activities.
The first reason that support the school has a controls in the students involvement in extracurricular activities, is school offer the capacity that students have to develop their potential some students to take advantage of the opportunities, while that some students their classes seems boring. For example, I don't have any idea that the biology class was a interesting class, because I was observing the animals, plants, bacteria, and human body, biology is a wonderful class in this class I learn the importance that have the activities in the school. Therefore, everything was I learn because the schools offer to me the capacity to develop me potential.
The second reason the school has a controls in the students involvement in extracurricular activities. If school count with the necessary tools that students needed, research has shown that teenagers experience with the school has a control with the students. For example, the school count with the books, computers, and different classes, and with everything that a students needed to their life , this statement helped to students go to different schools. Some instruments has the ability to change the students attitude and impact everyone and should be strongly considered.
The last reason to support the school has a control in the students involvement in extracurricular activities, is school helped the students a level physical with the sports. Some schools helped the students to have the best level the sports and to make the dreams to paying. For example, my youngest brother playing in soccer team this is good for him, and he says me everything in the team is wonderful and is a inspiration for him because he has a the most wonderfully experiences in the sports. Students can be more productive at school and in their activities, because the schools bring the opportunity to parctice some sport.
I truly believer that having the school has a control in the students involvement in extracurricular activities can be more would better is the right step towards a more convenient and enjoyable educational experience, and considered that schools offered the potential that students have to developed their potential, by and large school count with the necessary instruments that students needed, lastly school helped the students a level physical with the sports, I hope my voice get heard to the schools and their make this issues, schools can be more productive if their has the control with the students. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
3C693CBFEFB5 | Have you ever wanted to know if your attending a classes from home does it benefit you ? Many students want to be educated and successful but, many problems come in there way causing public or private schools not to be the best decision for them. They decide they want to do school online and have said it has befitted them so much because, when they were doing public school they were failing there classes or the problems they were facing got harder for them to be in school. Many students have done online school and have been so successful and not only being successful but it has benefited them in whatever situation They're in right now.
Although some may argue otherwise, but through family experiences, prodcasts i've watched on the radio, and from hearing some celebrities talk.
One of my cousins named Generic_Name has been through so much and has not been able to continue going to public school. she's struggling a lot trying to keep her grades up and trying to get to school on time. she has an eating disorder. An eating disorder can be really hard at times when dealing with that and school . Her family has decided to let her do online school , and has helped her so much because while being at home eating and also going to doctor appointments she has the option to do her assignments online and also sometimes some teachers come to her house do homework assignments with her that help her a ton. Through online school she has overcame her struggle with her eating disorder and has also been so successful. As many years went by she has studied more an more. "it's so crazy"
because while having so many problems she was facing she became a lawyer.
Some may argue that it's impossible how she became a lawyer after just doing online school, that its unfair how she got to where she is now because of home schooling, some people may say that by doing online school it can't benefit you nor can it make you a successful person it's just they way to failure. That's not true because when you hear so many stories and people talking about their experiences with home schooling you have to take to consideration that maybe it helps some and not others.
Many prodcasts on the radio have mentioned many real life situations on this subject . One i've heard that struck out to me was when this mom was talking about her son Generic_Name being really popular on social media, She said that all throughout his high school years students his age and older have been bullying him and trying to get in fights with him for no reason. The mom signed her son up for online schooling. Generic_Name did online school as well as he did video conferences with his teachers every other day . Generic_Name has found it to be more easy he said that he is more concentrated because, it's just him and his laptop there's no distractions no more students bothering him trying to fight him. Since social media is such a big thing to keep up with when doing online school ,he can do both social media and be educated. However, some may argue that Generic_Name has to be a man and grow up, he can't always hide from people that are mean to him. That's true he can't always hide from people like that, but if he's fed up with it then maybe it was the best decision you can only handle so much hate.
Celebrities have talked in their interviews about them choosing home school over school and how beneficial it was to them. There's this girl named Generic_Name .She said Being big on social media is really hard Dealing with the hate, dealing with people exposing you constantly for nothing, dealing with your name always being in people's mouth. Generic_Name has said that she's been bullied so many times and has found it harder for to deal with it. She has said that at one point she got depression and got harder and harder for her to continue going to public schools. Teachers recommended her to do online school. She took that advice and did home schooling for the rest of high school and also did online school for college as well. She said that she feels more successful. Generic_Name said that online school was the best thing she did and that she decided that for college she is going to a public college and she is also going to continue being big on social media. Some may argue that, They don't see how it benefited her. It have a major change on her, she knew what she wanted to do or be so how did it benefit her. It benefited her in so many ways, she no longer is afraid of what people think of her on social media. Sometimes people need space from public school and then when they feel that they are ready they can go to public schools again.
The importance is for people that are going through the same problems for them to look and read from past experiences. For them to see if online school is beneficial for them. In the future people can look back at this and see what people were going through and how much they were struggling. This helps to see about how the past was like to compare to how it's like now. A solution is for people to do online school if they feel like being in public school is harder for them or for, whatever reason it may be. Also for people to notice and to realize that as being said multiple times that for people that are big on social media It's hard to cope with all the hate they get. A solution is for people not to give hate to others. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
3C78D0790E7B | Is Emerson right about the statement he wrote? Emerson's statement stated that "unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." I agree with this statement because it lets you know that anyone can push for a higher acomplishment in their own life. As well, reading the passage gets people thinking on their goals, if they should push to reach for higher limits. I'll tell you why Emerson's statement is right.
As a start, many people are inspired by Emerson's statement and its made them believe more in themself. Having a powerful statement can really open other peoples eyes to strive for high goals. As well, push boundries that they never thought they had. People with start to have faith knowing they can rise above their own expectations. For example, many people give up and stop trying to reach their goals. Then they have no idea on what they want to do or what they can manage to do.
In fact, people who past beyond thier own boundries have a successful life style. They start to know what they can handle and how to fully succeed, It make them feel like they can complete any type of task that they're given. People start to feel better on themself knowing what the can do. Some people say its a weight lifting feeling they get once they find out what they were missing out on. For example, people ened up over thinking things and made it harder on them self for not achiving the goals.
As a matter of fact, People end up gaining more experiance on what they do. They also start to want to take on new challenges so they can have more experiance. They want to be filled with many different ways to have a strong mind and successful life style. People who has gained so much experiance can get any type of work within seconds because of their experiance, nothing has ever stop someone from believing they can do more. For example, people with the most experiance struggle less for work.
In conclusion, Emerson's statement shows a strong componet in peoples lifes. Making it one of the most insperational quotes that has ever existed. People start to end up valuing in themself more then they ever thought they could. People who can't do things that are beyond their own ability hasn't grown yet. Many of the people are too scared to reach for higher expectaions when they have the ability to take it. Overall it befits the people more when they end up gaining more work experiance. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
3CACE02FBD5C | There is a debate about if do we accomplish more if we are always doing something or does inactivity also serve a purpose. Some people think that is not necessary be always doing something. They feel that they need to have some extra time to be with their family and be a person that always is doing something will take away that time. In my opinion is more satisfactory be always doing something because the more you are busy doing good things or thinking and what you can do is a help to not get involve in horrible things or and drugs, you will have the opportunity to be able to give all your family need and deserve, and also you will have the satisfaction of be a good example for your kids and a support to the society.
The people that is involve in drugs, the people that get out to the streets to steal to can survive those people easily give up and did not try to find another way to get ahead, that people who make drugs, to sell drugs or the ones that consume drugs that people are living a dangerous life they are always hidden for the police or hidden because bad people are looking for them. They probably did not have another option or just they did not effort on doing something and all that thoughts became to do what they thought was easy.
Being a person that is active and always is making new things that person can be certain that they family will have everything. That person know that their kids will have the opportunity to go to school and get a excellent education. That person know that in the house will never be short of food, clothe and health. All that and more you and your family will have if you make the right choices and keep always doing new things or always be doing things and keep busy.
Now in our society good and hard working people is almost are scarcity because now some people the work in some countries the people doe not want to work they prefer be in their home doing nothing. But the people who is working those people are making the change for this society that people will become a example for all the kids but they will be a support a big support for the community.
There are some reasons why I think that the people that is always doing something accomplish more that the people that does not do anything. Is a complete satisfaction to know that all the you have is because yo worked for it and you work hard and like Thomas Jefferson said the determination never be end is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something. We can make a lot of things but we just have to have dedication and love what you do. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
3CD660D1E7BB | True self-esteem comes from achievement because all the constant work and dedication put into the goals you have accomplished will continue to build up the confidence in yourself and the way you do things.
Achievement is a major role for building anyones self-esteem because it lets you know that you can accomplish anything you put your mind too. That feeling you get after you have finshed something that you've been working on for a long time and doing a very well on is the best feeling ever. It makes it seem that nothing can get in your way no matter how hard it may be at first. Accomplishing one thing can be the start of many more achievements because once you have passed an obstacle, the ones that follow you know require you to work harder on.
The confidence that you build makes you want to keep moving forward and work twice as hard. Overcoming something not only makes you feel good about yourself but it keeps you motivated. It motivates you to keep going and setting higher goals for yourself.
All it takes is one to make you want to succeed more. Wanting the best is never a bad thing because it is going to teach you that hard work and success is going to push you to become your best.
Your true self-esteem takes time to build and small victorys like passing a test or even winning a difficult soccer game for your school is the start of it. Little things like those are the small steps that will make you strive for bigger and better things in life. Eventually all that hard work will pay off and you might be the top of your class. All it takes is committment, dedicaton, hard work , and one small achievement .
One achievement can have a huge impact and change the point of view on how you think about things. Changing the way things are thought of and done can make someone want to finish more and set more goals for themselves that one day they want to accomplish. Which helps better themselves and have confidence that they can do it. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
3CDCFB2C7F25 | I believe that doing nothing is accomplishing nothing, it gets you nowhere. Being active, and having a purpose are essential in being successful, also always doing something is better then doing nothing.
To start off, being active can mean that you're accomplishing or trying to accomplish what you're doing. For example a boss of a company will always be trying to keep his business from loosing money, for he can't cant loose the company, so the boss will work towards saving the company.
Secondly, having purpose in life, or a goal is better then dreaming about it; for instance, if you ask a successful person how they got to where they are, they won't say I dreamed for it, they'll say I worked towards my goals and didn't give, even if they thought they were gonna fail.
Finally, always doing something is better then doing nothing. For example, if a student goes to school just to sit around and do nothing, he or she are wasting a opportunity to learn, and get an education towards what they want in life.
Some people might say, what if you fail pressing a goal; for instance, someone is trying to make money, or getting a job and keeps failing, they learn from the mistakes and keep the right mind set, if someone can do all that they'll flourish in the future.
In conclusion, this is why i believe doing nothing is accomplishing nothing, as Thomas Jefferson said,"Determine never to be idle". | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
3CDD56FF3477 | Today, at school, most people are required by teachers to work with a group in order to prepare them to work in society and be able to communicate with their future colleague. I believe that there is more benefits for students to work with others rather than working by their own because they can share their ideas together and don't work alone allow them to be faster.
First, by working with a group students can share their ideas and discuss on the work they have to do. By sharing their ideas, their work will be stronger and longer because every person of the group bring his own point of view, his own examples or experiences and their own way to work, to proceed. While working alone can be difficult when the student have no ideas or is lost and don't know how to do his work, so in a group they can help each others to understand and push them to work For example, if in a group a person have more facilities on the topic than others, she can help others who have more difficulties to work. Working by groups allow students to grow and enrich their skills to be better because they learn from each others. Working with a group help them to be prepared for working by their own.
Secondly, working with other students can be more efficient. Students, by sharing ideas, are working faster because they don't have to find all by them self and do all the work. They can share tasks so one person have one job rather than do everything alone so it's more efficient and beneficent for all the group but also for the teacher because the work will be done faster, so the class can move on and do more things during the year and if they help each other they probably don't need help from teachers, so teachers can be focus on students with real difficulties. Working with a group can prepare them for their future jobs so they can be able to communicate to other people and learn how to work not only for them self but also for everyone and they learn to help each other so they will be more productive in the future. For example, if in the future, they will work in a society where they need to work together on a project with many people and their boss don't want them to work by their own, they already learn how to be efficient in a community so it won't be a problem for them. They will be already used to work with a group and they will know how to proceed.
Some people can think that working by groups can do the opposite and prevent students to work by talking, laughing, having fun with their friends, which can be distracting them or if a person in the group don't want to work it can impact other's work so it's unfair for people who really want to work and are motivated to have a good grades. However, students can keep working at home if they are late on their work, they can communicate by phone or they can meet during the weekend or after school so the work can be done in time or teachers can make the groups in order to prevent distractions. Also, if a person don't want to work and impact other's work, the person will be graded lower which can motive her to work or if it's not the case, students from the group can help her and to be motivated and push her to work by giving her little tasks to do or easy tasks.
In conclusion, I think that working with a group bring more benefits for students rather than working alone because they can share their ideas, their way to proceed and work faster by helping each others. If teachers want their students to be more efficient and enrich them self for their future, it's important that they do more activities and work in groups. | 5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
3CED6DDF77BE | School districts should not offer programes that allow high school students to gradutade in three years instead of the traditional four years because elective courses are important as well as academic courses, the summer courses are expensive and parents should let the children to enjoy the summer.
Elective courses are important besides the academic courses. A student should collect the other knowledges also. Only academic courses are not gonna help him/her to be a good human being. Afterall, he/she has some hobbies in his/her life like cooking, painting, designes, dancing, singing. Think, a student is only studying because he/she wants to graduate earlier than the traditional four years. What will happen next? At the point he/she will be tired of life which is absolutely unfair. Maybe she/he has a very good artist. How can he/she expose? The answer is through electives. No matter what a person works with, if he/she doesn't like to do that work, it never last longer. So, elective is a way to make student happy and cheerful. When the academics make them tired, electives help them to get out from there.
Summer courses are expensive in some of the schools. Sometimes middle class family can't afford the courses fees. For this, the rich kids take the courses only. The poor kids stay behind. The poor kids can't afford the courses just because of money. Maybe they are more talented than the rich kids. They also should get that opportunity. Isn't it unfair for the poor students? Yes, it is. So, they shoudn't continue with this three years method. We should treat all the students equally.
Students should enjoy the whole summer by doing outside activities. Students usually have school 9am to 5pm. They spend their whole time in the school. How can they make themselves involve with outside world? Normally they can't in the regular school days. For this, governments make this rule to free the studnets in the summer so that they can enjoy outside activities. If they think about the summer courses, it's not possible to enjoy their summer honestly. A student leads a robotic life in usual school days. For mental health a person needs some free time or vacation. It's absolutely not possible for a person to lead a regular life everyday. Entertainment is important. A routined life, 9am to 5pm then returns to home, again homework. Life can not run like this. I understand that every parents want their child to be smarter than others. But it doesn't mean that they just have only one way to prove themselves by taking the summer course and entering college earlier. They can be a good artist or journalist. The parents should think about the children also. Not only about their academic abilty. There is a record in the United States that students attemp suicide because of study pressure. Isn't it shame for a country? A student is attempting suicide. why?
because he/she can't handle the pressure. Without life, what will you do with the education? Mental peace is important. So, for mental health a student has to enjoy the summer.
We have only one life to enjoy. Let's not waste it by thinking about academic career only. We have much things to do as well as academic. Just need to keep patience and walk with the flow. Life is beautiful. | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
3D29C845934D | It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to succeed in life. I strongly agree with this statement. Having a positive attitude, will make you be more successful in life. By having a good attitude can make a big difference. Always have faith in yourself.
For example, if you have a test and you have a negative thought about something, don't automatically think you're going to fail, look over your test and check for any mistakes you might have made. Then when you are done checking over the test and feel better about it, then you should tell yourself you are going to pass it. Having a positive attitude can change your life completely. It is always important to have faith in yourself. You got this!
The next thing is when you are out in public, it is always important to give a good and happy attitude to the people you see. Even if you don't know them, it can make anyone's days. It can makes you a better person just by smiling at a person. You never know if that person is having a bad day and just by giving them a smile and a few words, it can make their day better.
Another thing is if you are a teacher or parents and you're having a rough day due to a personal or medical problem, still try to give the kids a possible attitude. They look up to you and care about you. They don't deserve to be yelled at over the smallest things that wasn't even their fault. Having a negative attitude towards the students or your children is not a good thing. You might hurt their feelings or even worst think that they are not good enough for you. You are not being very successful if you keep on yelling at innocent children or even your own kids.
In conclusion, Having a possible attitude is the key to success in life because it can make you a better person and give you a lot of self confidence. So If you ever feel unsure about something, look over and think what feels right to you. Also if you see a strangers, kids, etc, smile. It can make anyone's day just by seeing that one smile. So just a little reminder to never bring out your anger out on anyone ever! | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
3D3C80EF2AAA | "It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to Chang" i agree with this quot, for three reasons.
First, when you meet someone and you see how they act you get those feelings about them if it was hate or love. Second, you may never meet that person agean, so the way he act this one time is gong to make you judge them. Third, or even if you see them every day the way they act toured you give you thats feelings that never will Chang toured them or your impressions. Finally,that why you cant Chang your first impressions.
Those feelings that you get turd that person, if it was love or hate is because of the way they act.
For example this one time i met someone and it was my first time meeting him so i did not know what to expect from him. After talking to him i did not like the way he talk or his personality so my impressions for him was not good and i never Chang the idea that i took of him. I never met that person aegean in my life. Thats why when you take that look at someone you never chang your mind.
changing how people think is hared | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
3D4475C949C2 | The idea of schools allowing their students to take classes from home is is an excellent idea. Not all students learn the same way,or at the same pace as everyone else. Having the opportunity to learn in a way that is most comfortable for you, can really show improvements in grades. Students who are sick and are not able to attend school also have an advantage of doing missing work from home. This will give students no excuse for being behind with school work if their able to do classes from home.
Students that are often sick, or miss a lot of school because of personal reasons would have an advantage with doing their classes from home. If students have the opportunity to do classes from home they dont have to stress about returning to school, and having a lot of class work to make up. Therefore, students will no longer have an excuse for failing classes because of absences if they have the option to do it from home. When i had my surgery last school year it was nearly impossible for me to catch up on all my missing work, the only way i could do my class work was if someone picked it up from school. Unfortunately my parents both work so while i was out of school i had no way to do it from home. It was very difficult to finish all that work after getting back, because i was not given many options of getting the work done. If i was given the option to complete my class work from online this would have really helped me maintain my grades up.
Seniors might be in the position where they need more than the usual amount of classes to graduate by their final year. Having to be in such a difficult position and only being able to attend morning or night school can make it harder to get these classes done on time. This will only make it stressful, and discourage students to get the classes done by the time of graduation. Not only do some seniors have jobs after school but having to attend a full day of school, and either morning or night school can be tiring and overwhelming. Overdoing yourself can also decrease the amount of people that pass their classes because of the reason that they have to much to get done in a matter of one school year,so allowing students to do some classes online will make it easier for more students to graduate.
The idea of online classes might sound difficult for some students because they tend to learn better face to face. Schools can offer virtual teaching lessons for those who have an issue with attending all their classes at school and learn better by someone verbally explaining each concept to them. Not all students have computers at home which is understanding, in order for students to complete online classes from home they will need a computer,schools can offer students a borrowed computer or laptop in order for them to participate in online classes. Schools can Introduce a system where they provide for those who need the help of obtaining a computer and to still be able to do their classes from home. By providing for those who need the computers, students will not be held back from the idea of doing classes from home just because they dont own a computer.
Having the choice of doing classes from home can be very beneficial to students. This gives students the opportunity to complete more classes and actually do them without having the excuse of being absent to school. Given the chance of doing classes from home can increase the passing levels for more classes. The idea of doing classes from home can be helpful for students who need it, and encourage students who need the option of at home classes to actually get these classes done from home. I think all schools should have an option that allows students to do classes from home. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
3D72844EC5B0 | Well, I'm desagree with this statement, because no always your first impressions of something it's impossible to change. Sometimes you will have a lot of impressions of people,things,or animals..However some percent of humans can not change their first impressions ,because they think that ,they are sure about their impressions , and there is when your mind has to change,so you can check first to make sure that yours impressions are rights,and I will support my response putting myself like a example; One day , I was at my house doing some work out ,and then I started to having some strainghts impressions, That
I had the impressions that my girlfriend was cheating ,with my best friend, so I get mad ,because that impression was to difficult to believe, also you have to be carefully, when you have a bad impressions of someone, you have to know how reaction will be. Also you have to make sure that yours impressions is right, so I called my girlfriend and we had a long conversation , but the thing is that I did not know , how tell or ask her my impression that I had with her and my best friend, however I was trying to change my impression, but my mind and my brain was confucing, because that impression can put me in problems with my girlfriend or somebody else, so the thing is that I did change my impression ,knowing that not all your impressions thyat you think are rights, some impressions that you get sometimes, it's because you are not sure about something, or you no truths in that person who make you have a bad impression. My point of this statement is that the first impression it's possible to change, in the way that you, always will have a good impressionas or bad impressions, so on my example is that sometimes you have to keep your impressions and just let the things happens or like passing the time you will know if your impression was right or not. Now, when I have impressions I keep for myself, that is one of the ways to change your first impressions, because that help me on my first impressions. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
3D739817CC30 | people should choose achievement for self - esteem. because that may help them to put more work , more skills, and more existent for get some thing . but some people think praising is good for self - confident in order or learn . self -confident is cant not help them , because the might be lazy for learning some stuff .
here are reason why they should be achievement .
achievement for student more hard working than praising student . for example let say you are try to work very hard if the teacher praised to student the student going to give up the work or get so upset . student needs achievement to more work done.
praising is not a bad thing. so this is why people should pick an achievement .
let say you wanna make students to do some project for about how to draw an art . if one of them succeed on their project and other one praising him it will not make sense for them . but if you active them that will be their for history of their school years.
and lastly achieving the student makes them more happier than praising the student . because may the get high points or good grade (A or B) or better than praising the student .i should say self-esteem comes from achievement .
these are the three reason why self-esteem comes form achievement . | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
3D8CF58944E1 | I think schools shouldn't add one and a half hours more to schools because kids need time to rest there brains, have enough time to make it on time to there after school activities, and students need more time to finish up their homework and studying.
First, kids need time to rest there brains by going outside, and watching on the TV for a little.
If schools add more time, then students will not have any time to have fun which causes them to not have much time to sleep, less time to sleep effects their school day. An example of that is if I had extra time to my school then I would have had no time to play, take a nap, or watch youtube. That causes me to not have enough sleep time. This type of rule is not healthy for the students.
Second, kids need time to make it to there after school activities. after school activities are usually straight after school, but if students add more time to school then kids will not make it to his or her after school activity. An example is if a student had to go to football practice everyday at 4:00, then students would not make it if school ended at 4:15. without physical education and only just education by sitting in a chair just writing and reading is not healthy for your body. that's why students need more time for there after school activities. this is also bad because it effects your sleep time also which makes you tired for school the next day.
Last, students will not have enough time to finish up there homework from all the time from school and other stuff they have to do at home. For an example is if there was a test the next day, and I havn't studied so I had to study, I wouldn't have had enough time to study because the extra time in school or if I had to do an after school activity. This is not good for students to add time to school so they do not have enough time to study or finish homework because they will not get a good grade on the test or quiz and especially get a bad grade in the class.
Back to the thesis, they should not add an hour and a half of school because it will effect our brain, body, and grades. It will affect it by being late or not showing up to his or her after school activity, less time for the kids brain to rest, and not having time to finish homework or to study.
Why would people want to add time to school? | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
3DAC64829E27 | Do you think students would benefit from being able to attent classes from home?
on my opinion students would not like the idea of taking more time to study, because nowdays students are very busy, stressed, and tired of school, they would not like to have to hear more stuff that has to do with school . besides some people are more smart and they could take the class just to see how thats going to help, but sometimes people dont try the stuff and thats why, they never know if they are going to like it or not.
Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students from home by way of online video conferencing
I think, students are not going to have any benefit to attent classes from home. some of the studends have to work, do stuff at home, or stay in school on other activities. students sometimes, actually need some help with some classes but they might not like to be taking the classes at home, The studend taking the class at home could get distracted by so many things at his house. While some other studends that have better grades and like school they could take the class, but they also will have homework and things to do at home.
Students would not get any benefits by taking classes at home because, the online class could be also start teaching the same work that the teacher already teach you, or either the online class could be teaching different ways how to solve a problem that the student will get very stressed and after that its not going to be able to learn something from it and instead helping the student the online class is going to make it more difficult. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
3DB503D247B3 | Dear, Teacher
What do I think about working with people or working alone, I think both have great benefits but it depends on the type of person if they are social, antisocial , or if they been through stuff. But if I was to pick one I would choose to work with a group because of how many advantages their are, if your stuck and you need help you can always ask for help from your group because theres more than one, working with your group is easier than working alone because you can do different parts at the same time meanwhile when you work alone it takes longer, it becomes more difficult if you need help and not knowing what to do. Working together gives us a bigger boost of an IQ because multiple brains are better then one and gives us a better over all grade or if the person that is working alone and is very smart he could find things easier. Working together could be fun because of the people you are working with or meeting new people in the group that you don't know and learning from them and what experience they been through.
Disadvantages are people are going to force the smarter person of the group to do all the work, if people choose the group they'll choose either the smart people of people that they get along with and mess around and not do anything, if the teacher finds out that the smart ones from the groups do all the work they'll get an f. People who choose people to be in their groups are going to abuse their power. People who choosed to work alone would be struggling because work hard and they would have to do all the work, it would be boring and long with no one to socialize, if were stuck you and you needed help no one is there to help. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
3DC3405DF531 | all tho some people say online classes is good. they have their reasons. Tacking online classes i good it has it's bad. if you take online classes you can stay home and dont you don't have to go to a school building and you don't have to wake up early and go to school and you wouldn have to go to school and see people you dont want to see and you dont have to eat the school lunch you can eat whatever you want to eat when ever you want to eat and you wouldnt have to follow and rule you can make you one rolls and it would be esyer to take a test when you online classes cuz you can look things up on the internet and pass you test but when you you in school you have wake up early and get ready to go on the buss and you have to go to your classes on time and then you have to sit in a small class and sit in a desk and do your school work and you have to follow rule like you would have to go to your classes on time and if you do make it to class on time then you would have to go to the tarty table and if you keep doing it you would happen more then three times you would have to go to iss and what iss is you would sit in this quit room with out your phone and and you cant talk anyone. and is you dont go to class at all they will find you and put you in iis and they will call you mom or dad or email your mom or dad telling them that you wasnt in school and i dont know about you but my parents would get mad that i wasnt in school when they saw me go to school in the morning. And when you disrespect your teacher they will call security on you and they will come and get you and tall to you. And if you get in a fight with a student then you will be in a big trouble the security will come and get you and it its really bad they will call an ambles and this time the principle and the police and parents will get involved and the other person parents might press charges and that would not be good for you on your reared beauty when you apply for coleg they will see that you had a bad history and they wont want that tiyp of beaver in their school so you would be hurting your fucher. And if you do or take drugs or sell drugs in school then you would be in soo much trouble with the school and with the police and you parents and you could go well if your eithing and older and if your danger then that you would go to jive. and you would probably be kicked out of school and you would have to go to a new school and love all your friends and you wound have the same friends in the same school as you and that would be so sad and you wound have to go to jell and earthing so i think it beter to go to the online classes not that i get to eat all i want but becuth it a lot going on in schools that you have to go thour and you mith not like it i think it would be a good exprmnt to try online classes | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
3DC539E4E871 | I believe that if some school districts offer programs that allow to graduated in three years instead of the traditional four years, It couldn't be a good idea, Because most students following this plan must take course during the summer or in the evenings.
One reason is that students may be not able to get the enough knowledge because the time in class must be less than the normal time in school.
Second reason is that even if students graduated early from high school, students won't be able to take elective course.
Third reason is that some students work during summer or at night time so it couldn't be a good a idea
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In conclusion i can say that if some schools offer programs that allow students to graduated in three years instead of four even if it sounds good it is not a good idea, because most of this students must take the course during summer so there are some reason why it couldn't be the best way in order to graduated, including that some students may be not able to get enough knowledge, and some students have to work in summer time. | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
3DCF3E6F4A13 | Well most students enjoy summer vacation because was one of the most beautiful station in the year for one all of students, they enjoy with the families, friends that things in the summer, though some teacher say the summer break is too long and that students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall.
I think that summer is one of the most special station or period because you share more with your Family, Friends, and all students have merit to share more with the most important persons in their lives because a lot of our parents working 10 to 12 hours of Monday to Saturday in sometimes Sunday too, and they don't have a lot of time to share with they families.
In my case, I love when it's summer vacation because I have a lot and good experiences with my Family, with God when left to the house our going to different places, I feel that is these period is when I share more with my mom, She is the most important person in my life, she is who are always with me in the good and bad things, she is who give me advice every day about the good and bad things to not make that things that I don't need to do and don't pass for a lot of things that she pass when she was young, I love these time of summer because is when I pass more time with my mom and she help me to be better every day in my School, Work, Church and everywhere that going.
The mother is one of the most important person what I have in my life because she is who always are in there for me and help to always be good person, good in my school and a lot of more things. And I have beautiful experiences with God and these is that I love more is to pass my time with God because I learn more about things important and that help my life.
I think the 2 months that all students have to summer is a good time because are pass like 9 months in school and these is too much because sometimes you want to make something but school is to difficult and that people can't to share with special people.
Well when the educators or teachers say that summer vacation is too long because student do not retain the information is not true because the students retain these information about Works, Projects, Homework, Classwork the information is in our Brain, Mind, are that things important and basic.
I don't agree that person argue should be year-round and that only have 3-4 weak breaks in the summer is like only one month and you can't enjoy and make your summer funny with you parents because you are thinking in school, I don't be agree with these the summer is when you can pass more time with your important person because there is the period when they have the vacation to, I thing the summer is for enjoy and pass a funny time with your Mom, Father, Brothers, Sisters, and all your Family.
I say that is good to have 2 months and like 2 weeks of vacation because you clearing you Mind, you don't thing in a lot of Homework or Works of School. I have one experience in my life when I were in Generic_City that only thing that I have in my MInd was Homework, Projects, Presentations in my School, Programs of my School and one day my family say I want to going to share with all and I say I can't go because I have a lot of work to do and I need to finished and my uncle say Generic_Name is time to share with your family, is time to you clearing your mind about school and I say another time I need to finish my works about school and all my family going to share and I stay in my house working in all my projects of school and I sit in my room, I was thinking you loss beautiful time with my family for to make my works, and I say is time to you share more with your family because your family in every moment stay there.
Everything the specific moment when you have time with share with your family, friends share because you don't not in what moment you can loss your Mom, Father, Brothers, Uncle, Sisters, Aunt, Cousins, etc, when is time to school make all your works in time.
Don't take you Education like obligation, taken like one of the opportunity to be better.
In some moments you have difficult time but you need to continue, to be stronger, the education is where you learn more about the all things Human, Animals, Solar System, H2o and a lot of things important what help you life in the future you learn things what in your future you can put in practice, you can teaches another person that need to know more.
For everything have time, your Family, Works, Friends, School all these things depends about you, for these reason I think When is time to school is school, When is time to your family is family.
So you need to think and put your agenda in order to you make the important things in order so right now I change a lot of things in my life and these it is the Monday to Friday to be concentrate in my Education, Saturday to Sunday in God and my family, when it's time to pass with my family I pass time with my family and now I share more.
And for these reason I think the summer vacation is important because a lot of students don't have their parents in here maybe live 8 hours, 10 hours in when it's vacation they going to pass time with their Parents.
You need to be have the order in your life you need to make time for everything.
The Education is important because is where you learn things important but most important for me is my family because they can one day no be in here in the Earth because they dead.
And I think when it's summer vacation the Educators or teacher enjoy to their vacation and pass good time with their family and when it's time to come back to school review somethings because not everything forget somethings are in the brain that only need to do is to review.
Then the summer vacation are so good 2 months and 2-3 weeks to you enjoy with all the persons important and special to you, so enjoy and pass a funny summer vacation.
So enjoy, teachers don't thing the summer is too long because is a shorter period that one student have for vacation, teacher enjoy vacation!!. | 2 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
3DE204C5895E | Businesses have adopt a four day work week with each day consisting a ten hour shift to conserve energy and resources. Schools are considering to follow this model. Although a four day school week is what every students want, I disagree schools should have to extended two hour more for a four day school week because it leaves student less time to do school work and sports activities through out the day and it will ruin there sleep schedule.
Schools should have to extended two hour more for a four day school week. It will leave less time for students to do there school work and sports activities through out the day. Student would normally leave school around three in the afternoon. If schools extended two hour more from the normal time they'll leave around five in the evening leaving them less time less for homework. Kids that have after school sports, have games and practice for two hour. The kids would've come straight to do there homework and other things.
Schools should not have a four day school week. It will ruin students sleeping schedule. If students are still up late trying to finish there homework, are getting less sleep. Students that have after school sports would stay up later to finish up things they haven't finished. The students that come to school tired always gets less sleep. If a student have a test the nest day and stay up studying, they will come to school too tired to take the test.
Others may say having a four day school week would be great. It will be less stressful for students. Students won't have to worry about school as much and it will leave them more time to do homework on the days off. However, I still believe that having longer hour for school is not healthy for the students. Schools shouldn't have to extended two hour more for a four day school week because it leaves student less time to do school work and sports activities through out the day and it will ruin there sleep schedule. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
3DFE1FE3FCE8 | Success is the most important thing in this world. British Prime Minister Winston Churchill said "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. I agree with him Because failure played a important role to be a success. Success is when people do hard work to get what they want to get from their lives. Most people want their success in school and to a dream job.
Graduating from school is the big achievement because for some people its hard to pass sol's or exam. They study hard to pass that class so they can graduate from school. Like if someone came from another country and that person does not know how to speak English. That person might fail all of the classes like English, history, and science. That person will try their best but they might not get on the first time and they will keep try until they get what they want. If some student fail there test from that failure that student know how they can fix in the next test or how they can be better then the last test. They can be more prepared.
A lot people find a job which they like to do but some people does not get their dream jobs. And some people never give up. One person who want to be a dancer but his dad does not support him. He never give up to convince his father but still his father does not listen to him. He leave his house to be dancer but after leaving the house he has nothing, he don't even have money to pay for his school, but still he never give up. He started his know dance workshop where he get money so he can pay for his school. Now he is the one of the best dance choreographer in India Remo Dsoza. When people went for job interview some people get the job on the first time. But some people have to work hard until they got the job too. They work on how they can be better next time so they can get the job.
In conclusion, success is the thing which everyone wants but they are not going to get it give they did not work hard. To became a successful people have to learn from their mistakes. Failure is the key of success because if people are not going to fail they can't be better next time. In this world people who are successful in their lives right now they also have failures in their live too. To become Successful people have to learn from their failure. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
3E156DCB07C7 | We accomplish more when we are always doing something not when we are being inactive. There are many people out there who are most of the time through out their day are being idle and never doing anything, they're always sitting around and won't do what's the best for them by trying to at least accomplish something in there daily life. Although some say being idle does not serve a purpose, actually being idle does serve a purpose, rather you should go out and accomplish something better for yourself.
You might say being idle is not the good for you, but being inactive can sometimes be the best for you. Thomas Jefferson said that "Determine never to be idle." Thomas Jefferson doesn't realize that the reason being idle can sometimes be good is because you might not notice this, but in your daily life you can be doing to much for yourself to the point where you won't even realize how much you have accomplished. Once in a while you should think to yourself what you have done and accomplished during the week or day, it makes you think that you may need to be idle and put some time away from things that you usually be doing. What myself believes in is that you aren't always going to be doing so much for yourself in your daily life on what you want to accomplish in. Sometimes you need to put it all away for a short amount of time and give yourself a break and just be idle for once not for such a long period of time, but make time to do your own things. One thing that is true about being idle is that it serves a purpose for being inactive, but the reason why that is good because you can always go accomplish it another time and you can come up with thoughts or ideas, for later on when you want to accomplish it.
However, in my thoughts always being idle isn't good for you because you may have time to be idle, but you don't have all the time in the world to be idle. It would then just keep you away from doing things that you want to accomplish on, Which will then make your mind not want you to do things in anymore. In my perspective what myself believes in is that being idle for to long is such an impact on your life because when you take your time away from the things that you usually are always doing and have a daily schedule for it makes you forget what you had going on and what you were trying to accomplish in. Thomas Jefferson said that "it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." Which is true because you can get so much done if you are always doing, and it is wonderful like Thomas Jefferson said. You're doing a lot of work and accomplishing it all by succeeding in the things that you need to get done, and it's an amazing thing to do because you rather do it now then doing it at another time and put so much stress to yourself. In my opinion, accomplishing it at the right time is better than accomplishing it at a different time. To explain what my opinion said is, do it at the right time when you have the chance to do it rather than doing it at a different moment of the day. It will makes things much better for you because it's better to get things over with now. You would't want to worry about it later on it would then just make things much more of a problem.
Additionally, in my thoughts being idle keeps you away from doing the things you want to get done, it makes an impact on yourself on what you're trying to get done and it can distract you from your work. Something that is true is when you're are being idle, it keeps your focus on staying in the moment that are in which is doing nothing. An example of being idle is staying in bed all day on your phone. Why would somebody want to be doing that when you can be out accomplishing your goal and succeeding on what you want to become in life. Thomas Jefferson also stated that "Determine never to be idle" if you were to never be idle you can accomplish so much and keep on doing what you always do. People shouldn't let themselves get distracted by being inactive, they should take an advantage of all that and think rather than being idle they can be out accomplishing there goal and reaching for somewhere better. In my opinion, people should do more to get to where they want to be in their life because if people are doing that then you're definitely accomplishing something better for yourself.
In conclusion, although some say idle does serve a purpose and should be accomplishing their goal rather than being idle. In my conclusion people shouldn't be idle because it will easily distract them from doing better things and accomplishing their goal, and it wouldn't be great for everyone. Once in a while people would get inactive way to much and just forget about what they have to do or accomplish in. Many believe being idle is good for you, but it can lead to a bad habit of you always being inactive and no want to achieve in your goal. In my statement idle does serve a major purpose in peoples daily life and can just keep them away from doing what they do. Some say people should accomplish more on always doing something and shouldn't get inactive. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
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