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My grandmother always says ''If you want to accomplish your goals you have to try different ways to get in the top of your objective.'' Back in my country Bolivia the mayority of old people said that you have to be resourceful if you want to get what you want. I am agree with this statement. In my opinion, I believe that people have to try to make something else to accomplish their goals because people don't trust themself, people don't take second chance, doesn't matter the time. To begin with, most of people do not trust themself. There are people that think that can not do it, but they are wrong because if you propose something to yourself you have to work on it, you have to be a positive person if you want to persevere. You most have to trust in yourself. For example, my older brother never trust in himself, he always says what about if I do this and it no gonna work, he was negative, he always had negative thoughts, he never tries make something else to get on top of his goals or what he wants. But one day my grandma talked to him. My grandma told him that he has to try even though things are hard, if he want to accomplish his goals he had to try to make something else to achieve his goals. Secondly, there are people that don't take second chance to get on top of their goals. The 60% of people when they have something done, they don't like the result so they don't want to do it again because they did ones so they don't want to do it twice, they think that they gonna get the same result. For instance, in my situation, I used to ignore the secod chance because I thought that if I did one time and it wasn't that great so is gonna be the same the second time, but I was wrong. Hence, it wasn't like that,so what I trying to say is that is essential to try, try, and try, ''My mom always says don't be scared to do it, the thing that are worth it isn't eassy you have to try and give your best.'' In addition, many people said you must have to try something else it doesn't matter the time. There are people that does't care how many time they try something, to get in their goals. The just think that they want to accomplish their dreams. For example, my best friend Generic_Name always says don't worry about the time you have to get what you want, you have to accomplish the things that you porpuse yourself take the advantage of the time. To sum up, as you can see if you want to accomplish your goals you have to try different things. Just try keep in youjr mind that the ones who work in what they want they to achieve. Manyh people may think why people should try twice, but that's not the point. The point is that you have to keep going and try your best to get your goals. I think people don't believe in themself, don't try twice, and people don't think about the time.
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Imagine going to a school that has a longer student release time then any other school, imagine feeling tiered and restless everyday you come home from school, well the school board is about to make that "dream" happen for this school. The school days should not be extended because most of the students will not have a plesent time spending more hours in school, for example most students at the end of the school day feel tiered and they just want to go home and sleep, if an extra hour gets added to the school day most of the students will be angry and agitated. A second reason why an extra hour shouldn't be added is because it will be confusing for parents, it will be confusing for parents because most parents have a specific time that they pick up their kids and when the time changes for the students release, parents will get confused and it will be a disaster. A finial reason why an extra hour shouldn't be added is because after school courses will be longer, this will be a issue for after school buses because they will have to change their whole schedule for picking up students in the afternoon. In conclusion, students shouldn't have to have an extra hour added to their school days, and the school board should keep everything the same.
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To to successful you may have to archive it. You might encounter or even fail so many times, but who cares, as long you try and try you will be successful. So will you just give up if you failed? and of course, people will judge you because you're not perfect. That's why Winston Churchill once said "success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Some people say you could use your failures as your motivation and encouragement. In life, you will fail a lot of time but it's important that you keep fighting and learn from your mistakes. To begin with, a lot of people thinks failure will only make you look bad and some thinks its the end of the world for them but that's not the case. Every each person make mistakes and having a motivation in your self will get your somewhere: however, when a person is lack of motivation in their life, they won't be as much successful and failure will take over. Secondly, when it comes to hard times, a lot of people say that there's no point of trying if you're meant to be a failure. Every each person in this world know that they're capable of, and every each person know what their weakness are. However, having encouragement won't mean anything because if you're encourage enough, you will get back up and do anything you can to be successful. At last, learning from your mistakes is the key to be successful. You will fail and fall but its very important that you get up and keep fighting because once failure takes over, it will be hard to get back up. Also you will need to earn the key to success, but once you find it, you will achieve anything in life not because you didn't give up but because your learn from your failure and mistake. In conclusion, people say you could use your failures as your motivation and encouragement and in life, you will fail a lot of time but it's important that you keep fighting and learn from your mistakes.
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No, I am disagree with Emerson's statement. Some people think that just because they manepulate you will change. If some elses want to make you different, or change you is because; They are not happy with theirselfs. I think that if the people that are aroud you wants to chage you is becuase they love how you are and want to be like you ; That best thing that you can do is get away from the people and make new ones that are possive and help you to become a better person, human. The worse thing that you can do is change because of others. People treated you bad becuase they want to accomplish their goal that is break you into pieces but, if you don't let those commen, actions hurt you everything is going to okay. Last year there were some girls that detely were hurting me my feels. In adition, Every day they would told me dress good you have to be like this act like you are a model; They would also make fun of me too because i was dressing so poorly. i was wearing the same shoes every day same pants. When they saw me they would make the face like they were going to trow up. Therefore, i never let them make my self esteem go down. I was so possitive also my family give me good vibes too, They would told me you know were you wanna get at. You know your goals those are the want you have to pay attention to. Inconclution, don't let people make you something else. Some people think that you are going to change because they want but, they are wrong because you can be however makes you feel great with yourself. In the future i see that nobody is going to judge you.
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Everyone has a talent or a skill. But they are all unique. Skills that I have are: intelligence, talent and athletic. Ways I show intelligence are by performing clever tasks, giving good ideas or advice, or teaching other people how to be intelligent like me. A way I show intelligence is by giving good ideas or advice when there is a problem. Another way of showing intelligence is learning something quickly. I always learn and understand stuff because I am very intelligent. I can also teach someone else something if they don't know it. Teaching other people is easy because I very intelligent. These are some ways of how and why I am intelligent. Ways I show my talents are by showing my special abilities, intelligence, and being athletic I am very talented in a lot of different ways. I show my special abilities in school by using my brain to solve problems. It is easier because I am intelligent. Since I am intelligent, I can solve any type of problem. I can solve the ones not even teachers can solve because I am intelligent. I am also very athletic. I like to play sports and do excercise. These are some ways I show my talents. I show my abilities of being athletic by playing sports, doing excercise, and running. I love to play sports. You can have fun and do excercise at the same time. I also like to run. It is a good way to excercise. Finally I like to do excecise. It is a good waty to lose weigth, lose calories and get fit. This is why I like to do excercise Everyone has a talent or skill. But they are all different. Skills that I have are intelligence, talent, and athletic.
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Some businesses only work 4 days in the week maybe to conserve energy or maybe to the employers can rest one more day. I think it is a good idea to extending the school day two hours to a four days school week, but one reason that I agree with this opinion is that the student could more time to do their homework and they could work too. The schools could save more energy if we go to school 4 days per week because we used a lot of energy during school day. Many students have babies they have to care them when they are out of school this option can be benefits for this students how have to be parents and students in the same time I love this school where i am because they help the students who do not have who can care their kids. In my point of view this option can help me and the rest of the students too, because we could do a lot of things in that day for example I have to work after school because i have to pay my rent, food, clothes and other things that a person need and If I only came only four day in the week I could work all the day and make more money to help my mom. I agree with the businesses who only open 4 days in the week because they want to save energy and money, For example when i was in mu country my family and I always saved energy because we don't had the money to pay the energy, sometimes I forget to turn off the TV and my mom yelled me and said "turn off the TV because you don't pay the energy." and sometimes i get mad because i wanted to listed music and watched TV. Some students have to do many things in the same time for example they have to be parent, student, and labor and the week is to short to them to do all the things and a day off can be so good for them because it's not easy to anyone to be responsible. I admire my mom because she was dad and mom for my and my brothers and I was think how can she do all those things and then I realized that she wake up everyday because she want the best for us and doesn't matter how tired she felt. We can't "never give up" because fighting. In conclusion, I agree that the schools extending the school day two hours and we came only 4 days on the week because sometimes we feel tired and we can rest one day in the week because we have to work in the weekends too and the school can be beneficial too because they can save energy, food, water, money and a lot of other things. The Government will can make that my dream came be true to have only 4 days of school.
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Why i agree with the school board planning to add one and a half hours to school is because it would give us more time to learn in each of our classes and it would benefit everyone. my reason for why i agree with the school boards planning to add one hour and a half is because if we are doing a worksheet or any notes and we dont finish the notes because of how less of a time we have in the class and with that that extra hour we can get some more time to finish work we need to finish. Another reason why i think that would be a really good idea is because it would not only give us more time to finish and do work but it would also be very helpful to the teachers. because it would give them more time to teach us and finish things they need to do. and Teachers won't have to worry about not finishing their lesson because of how much time they have in that class. I also believe that if we do extend the school day longer we would learn more because of the extra time we are getting. and it would give us more time to learn. if we dont know how to do that subject the Teacher would have more time to go over it again and tell us step by step how to do it and help us to improve and get better at it. Another good reason is because that extra hour can help us get better at the subject you dont like or can help you get better grades because the Teachers can show you how to do it and you won't struggle in test because the Teacher reviewed it with you and it would benefit you because you would start getting better at it. The extended hour can benefit the teachers a lot because it would give them more time for planning and doing stuff they need to do and what that extra hour we can make up all the work that we didn't finish. The problem's if we do not get the extra hour is Teachers wont have time to get through their lesson because they wont have much time. and student's wont be able to get help on what they need help on. another reason is that students will fall behind because they won't have much time to get through the subject they need to finish and they will have to finish the next day while other people will be finished with that subject. These are my reasons why i would agree on the school extending the school day one hour and a half longer because it would benefit the students and the Teachers.
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I think it is a good idea for students to identify a career by the time they enter high school. However some students are not good at every but if they do what they really love it can learning fun for students. It can also impacted students to finish their goals and became better person in the future. Some student don have that kind of privilege as some students have to all subject so they can graduate from high school to go to college. That what make some students dropping out of high school, because they think they are not smart enough or some students cant afford to pay for some school supply. I think it is a good idea for students to identify a career by the time they enter high school. First, it can make learning fun for students and they can enjoy what every career they what in future. Second, it can impacted students to go to school learn instead for skipping school making them falling their classes. Third, students should be expected to take a career that make them happy and want to do and they are also willing to do, also achieve their goals. example for students to like the idea of identify, is to prepare them college and some may not go to college and start working. Inclusion students should chose a career the like and love. If they study the career they like their be less drop out of high school. They can also be success on what ever they can achieve in life. Also help them to a great future and everything is possible, however, I think that is a good idea for students to commit to a career a young age and to also help them became better person and make good chooses. Thank you for reading my eassy!!! sincerely Generic_Name
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Working alone will always be a better progress to your knowledge. Some people think that is better to work in group than by yourself. But many famous people has shared their own stories of life and it show how working alone can open your brain to another level and acomplish more of what others think that just can be done in group. I read an old story of my favorite wrestler , and he explained how he worked really hard at the gym to become one of the best wrestler man in the whole story;that's why I think is better to work alone because working alone help to increase your understanding , it show that you are willing to grow on your own, and it will be one more step forward of your knowledgy. Consider,for a moment, working alone will help to increase your understanding and if working alone have so many people on the top of hall of fame why we should not try to be one of those people , but to be one of those people we need to work harder than ever. However, people must work alone and they must feel the pain of the hard work that they need to get done. Furthermore,to increase your understanding you must try to learn or do something new every single day of your life, In order to see the result of the hard work that you are doing , does not matter if that is a meantal or physical work as long as you are doing a safe work to succed in those goals. Besides, working by yourself is safer than working in group and when people work alone it show the desires to grow by their own experiences because a lot of times we trust people that we should not trust for many reason as envious of what you are cusseding at, pervert people in your group doing the wrong work that they should not do,and many times they do the wrong work just to see you down or because they are not interesting on the topic or kind of work than the group supposed to be doing. According with paragraph one ,working alone will definitely take you to succed in your goals and you will get each of your goals done. However, you must be focus and give all the motivation to those dreams that you have in life. There is a lot of people that think is better to be working in group than by ourselves because five heads think better than a single one. True , I agrees that five heads think better than one , but how about not every menber in the group is agree with the topic or the material that they are working on; what could happen there is problems between themselves because none of them have the same goals or thoughts. Moreover, it could even cause discussiones with teachers, and it will be worse for the group, so which means working alone would be the best option for everyone to take. That way every person can work on their goals and express their diffrent thoughts without getting into discussions. Concluding with paragraph one,two and three,'' working alone would be the best fit to you to acomplish everything you want as long as you work for it,''. That is why I always try to work alone in all ways because it help to discover new things , a new person inside of you, but also it help to push yoursel forward and always do your best in every single thing that you do on your own because at the end of the way whatever you acomplish,''that is gonna be your legacy,''. If it were up to me , working alone would definitelly be the first option to people to take in a classroom or any place that you are working on.
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Students failure the game every time when we have a game with another team, because for some reasons they do not beat the game. Sometimes student do not sleep as well, or they do not have much energy to play, because they do not eat before start the game. Everybody needs to know before they have a game we need to eat healthy, and drink enough water. Sometimes famous death for that kind of reason, so we need to learn about the experience. Life is very important for everybody, so we need to look what's the first thing we can do before they think and act too. Family is more important than the game, so they do not have time to practice. Sometimes family want to explore places for example; New York, Florida, and Boston that state has beautiful place to swim play, and we can do everything. That's why student do not have time to practice the game. Game is an important thing they can learn too much, and maybe in the future they can get a award like a professional or famous on games. Some students do not have time to practice, because they need to work to pay the bills for example; pay the insurance for the car, pay the rent where they live, and also pay the bill for the cellphone. That's is the reason we do not have time to practice. That's why we failure the game, because we work at night and then we are going to school all day. When it is time to practice the game we do not have energy to play, so that is the cause we lost the game every time. We needed to work a part-time on that way we got more time to practice the game, so the next time we can win the game. Sometimes the family do not help them, because they said we need to learn how they make a money to obtain the food for each person. Eating healthy is good for everyone, so we need to eat every day. Also we can eat fruit every time, because that has to much protein. That's is the first thing we can do before beat the team, because that make they strong. they need to go the gym too, because that help you to get a healthy body. Sometimes the first thing we can do is eating, and then go to sleep this is not a good choice for them. Please help all the students who is trying to work and continuing to go to school, because they are the future on the world. We need to help them because sometimes we have a dream, but no body try to help that's why students can't realized they dreams. If they can continuing to study in the future they can earn to much money, because in the past it was hard for them, but now is more easily then the first time when they start
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I believe that changing the school lunch menu would be a good idea, there are reasons why the change of the lunch would be good idea; It can help students who are sick, It can help the students who play in a sport team, it can help those student who abuse eating at home. First reason: healthier school lunch menu can be good for many students who does fitness and also for those who play in the school sports teams, they need to be healthier, for example soccer players needs to be with good weight, so they can play good in their games, but if they are eating things with a lot grease they would not be on the team, because they are not eating healthy. Second reason: The change of the school lunch menu can also be good for those students who abuse eating at home, for that I think the healthier lunch menu can be a good idea, because they abuse eating bad thing at home but, they eat healthier at school, that is the second reason why I choose that the healthy lunch menu is a good idea, because the students are eating better than what they eat at their homes. Third reason: This last reason is to show that the healthy food is better, because it helps students who are with any type of disease whether is a terminal disease or a normal disease, it doesn't matter what kind of disease can be, it just that eating healthy help them for example, there are many student who are with diabetes sometimes they to bring their lunch from their home, because at school there nothing they can eat, because everything may have grease or sugar on it, and that is the reason why student bring their lunch, because of their disease, so that is why I think healthy food can a good option for the school lunch menu. In conclusion, the healthier school lunch menu would be a good idea because it will help a lot students in many ways including teachers, students, and all the people who works a the school, I think is a good idea to be healthy not just out of school also inside of the school, we just want to maintain our habits, and that can be good because, we are doing the right thing, and that is my opinion about the school lunch menu, we just want to improve with the school and doing this we will.
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Important lesson,can tech you lessons, about the students,and what school. Always be safe at school. learn to succeed College/sloarships. you have to be focus and work hard. Help other students. help others students to have a better future. sports sloarship. keep grinding work harder to go pro. All of this can help you in the future. Students. students from different schools are very different. Dont try to get bully or dont be the bully. Do your Homework. If you dont do your homework u will get a bad grade. Study for a test. If you dont study for a test theres a good chase you might get it wrong. just work hard to order to sussed. Lessons can help you in life .Jobs. Get a good job to retrace. Sports. sport. can help you go pro and be famous. Dont do dumb stuff. dont rob,dont break into homes or stores just dont do that. These things can help you in the future. Learn from lessons. You have to learn form bad lessons. I think this essay was easy and it was good. By: Generic_Name
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Taking advantage of opportunities at a young age will significantly impact your future abilities of choosing your correct career path. Futhermore, when you're young, you have more time to research about the career that you are interested in. Most teenagers at a young age choose multiple careers of what is most interesting and cool looking to them. What's very important is that the particular person is willing to pursue in that career. At a younger age, most children get encouraged by their parents to love a specific subject. Nonetheless, depending on the subject that a teenager likes, that'll most likely be the career they pursue. It may also not be the career path they choose since it differs as they grow. When you're at a young age, you tend to gather information quickly, and also learn quicker. Parents make sure that their child not only succeeds in life, but also chooses the carrer they believe is most fit for their desire. Choosing a career may include lots of pressure and thinking. It's always best to talk to your parents for advice, or to speak with your teachers. The parents may sign their child up for activities they think would be identical to their career choice. Most teens would feel that their parents only wanted them to pursue in a career that they have, or from a family legacy as tradition. Nevertheless, it's always important to have a young aged teenagers opinion about their career path as well. Teens at a young age tend to become more interested in careers more than adults. It's a fact that a teenagers brain consumes 5X the information quicker then it would if an adult had. Being freshly exposed to a career at a young age benefits the teenager for future desires. It'll give the teenager some time to think about what careers he/she wants to get into, and how she/he is going to do it. When there is a young aged teenager, it's best that they gather information slowly, and step-by-step. For example, youtube videos upon the career, games, and movies. Every young adult would prefer some entertainment with a little bit of knowledge, and facts being thrown at them. These activities will satisfy the teenager, and It'll be the introduction to their future career path. Teenagers play an important role in today's generation. It is vital that they should have some experience or knowledge upon what career they want to obtain, and become successful in. High school provides plenty of options for young adults, espesically programs and clubs that they could attend. High schools also provide AP courses, which is an advance placement course. These courses will be a bit difficult, but will benefit the teenager of whichever career they want to achieve. It's always necessary for your teenager to stop by, and speak to his/her counselor once in a while to check up on his/her grades, and how she's doing overall. The counselor will provide him/her the best information needed to achieve the teenagers goal. When providing options to a young age teenager, it's best that you make it seem less work as possible. Teenagers most likely wouldn't like the sound of work, and would much rather hear about electronics, or the new clothing line at hot topic. Nevertheless, it's an exquisite idea to make sure that a teenager begins choosing his/her career during high school, so they could be more accurate with it once they are old enough. It will give the brain enough time to obsorb all the information they learn, and use it for the future.
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Hook Is it really true that Imagination is more important than knowledge. Thesis I honestly disagree with this knowledge is important. Claims Knowledge is more important than Imagination. Can Imagination be helpful to you. Imagination can happen to some people. Knowledge is more important that Imagination Knowledge helps your future become successful so how will Imagination help you. It wouldnt really help you just by seeing things with your head. Lets say you played would you rather would you rather have good knowledge or have Imaginations. Is there a way for Imagination to help you? Can Imagination be helpful to you Seeing things with your head wont help anything ,but it might help you if you think of anything it will just appear ,although, its not really there. Lets say you want a snow day you just Imagine its snowing outside but you still have school and theres not really snow there. Some people do Imagine things but why? Imagination can happen to someone A person starts to imagine things when he or she feels alone ,so he or she starts to think of an imaginary friend and they think that helps them not feel alone. Say that you just played your new game and you start to imagine in your head how fun the game was ,and what things you did in the game. Lets see what we learned. Conclusion That was all my reasons why I disagree what Albert Einstein said. Knowledge is more important than Imagination, what can Imagination do to help you, Some people can start to Imagine and think that it will help them. those where my reasons why i disagree.
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Not everyone in the world is able to accomplish their dream. There are so many obstacles that make a dream impossible and a lot of important things to give up in order to reach it. The British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." I agree with Winston Churchill because I also believe that failure, hope, and enthusiasm are the three keys to success in life. First, all the things have two sides. the bad side and the good one, not everyone can see this two sides because of two simple reason. The first reason is because they do not try hard enough to find a solution. The second reason is because they loss their hope. Failure has two side but they are hard to see. The bad side of failure is that you did not reach that goal in your first or second try and you give up everything. The good side is that you fail but you learn a little bit on the way and that the next time you will be more close to reach that lovely goal. Second, some things that i have learn from family, friends, and own experiences is that hope is the most powerful thing in the world. Most people tempt to lose their hope when they fail, while for others that maintain it can be more able to success. When I try something and I fail I always ask a question to my self. The question is What would I be without hope? When i answer that question I feel that all my strength and enthusiasm that I need for reaching that dream come to me. Lastly, a person can not reach a goal without been enthusiast. No one in the world would fight for something that is not interested on. Enthusiasm is what give you the strength and hope to keep trying until you success. Enthusiasm can also be lose by a person when they fail so many times. The thing that make people lose their enthusiasm is the time. In conclusion, in order to be a successful person in life you need to make sure not to lose the three keys. Failure, that help you to gain experience, hope that help you to not give up, and enthusiasm that help you to keep trying. This are the three keys. Next time that you fail just thing about this three keys and you will be able to success in your life.
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A career at a young age? In some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter to high school, but the big question here is: Do you think is a good idea for students to commit to a career to a young age? To commit to a career at a young age is a good idea for students, who are interested to study a long career, for example: Doctors, pediatric, layer, teachers, etc. If students start to study this careers at a young age, they will be a great future for this country. Also if students start to study at young age they will have more opportunities to continue with their careers, for example; if a teaher wants to start a new career, they can do it because he is young and has the capcity to continue. To start a career at young age also has some desventages, here are some explamples why is not a good idea to start with their career at young age. Probably they will get tired of the school, they will to regret to study some career that years later reliace that they do not like. In conclusion to commit to a career at young age is a exelent idea for the students, that is why, we have to motivate and support them with their careers, would be a good idea if teachears and consular, start to help them to find the corect career for their life.
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Some school are offering distance learning ash an opportunity for a student attend classes from home by way of online or video conference. I think this would be a good idea because is offering a good opportunity for people that can not be able to attend the school during the morning for other occupation personal and give a chance to get the diploma .Also is good opportunity to the people the can not be able to attend classes because they work. Is good opportunity for the people that can not attend classes and miss school because they do not have transport to go school. But is amazing that can take one class online without attend to school that's a lot of benefit for people that don't work .Is offering a big opportunity to take the class at home and do not drive every day to the class in the school. Being able to to attend classes by home online is a good opportunity because not all school is offering the chance to take classes by home online. Taking classes online can improve the student and offering the opportunity to graduate without attend the schools and miss classes for not reason. This would be more benefit because some student skip classes when they go to school so they are losing his grades. But with the opportunity doing online student can make the class and not skip school and class for not reason. Student can learn more with this benefit doing online because they can no get distracted by his friend of the side and can get more focus in the class online. for instance The students would be better doing the class online because when they go to school they get a lot of distracted and not put attention to the teacher when they talk .But online no body is making noise by your side and interruption to you that's helping to you a lot .Is good benefit to can graduated and doing all the think well online at home. Some student can be more benefit because they have to work and be able to do online is good opportunity to all students can finish the school. For example they can finish extra work after they work a long they and be able the pass the grade doing all the step at home without go the school and miss the class offering the opportunity to do online without going anywhere just by doing online can be more benefit because can not be more stressing like in the school when you have to do a lot of work do not get the correct time to do it ,but when with this opportunity can be the best option to can finish late and extra work. and Also they don't have to find a transport to go to the school every day they only have to join online and make the work. Finally i think this opportunity is huge benefit for the people the don't have the chance to go the school and for those students that need to graduated because they have to do a lot of think but want to get his diploma this can be the best opportunity for those people that want to be some one in his future some people have to work hard every day and they don't have good opportunity to finish they high school but in this school they offering a huge benefit that give to us a opportunity to take classes online that's going to be for me the best opportunity the i never seen before in schools .
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In this competitive world people have to be a mastered in many things, but people are used to work in places that they are in comfort. Usually, people don't try to do something new that they are already do. What is the best advise to get growing? Ralph Waldo's statement is one, which motivates to others to explore new areas, and people will not grow, if they do always the same. To begin, in the society there are many jobs where is necessary to expand in new areas to get improvement like photographers that usually work shooting pictures, but they know how to shot a video also. Photographers can explore new areas like cinematography world or work as a journalist. They know that explore new areas is best way to grow as professional. In addition, people already know that leaving the comfort zone is another way to get a personal growing like student that travels to another country to continue his studies or like a doctor how explores new medicine branches to find a cure for illness. Both have the knowledge that exploring areas that they commonly are no related, will help them to grow. Exploring new areas led everyone to get a growing. To add, People will not be able to grow, if they don't change in order to grow. Persons that know how to do something very well, such as carpenter or construction, they decide to create their own businesses ,but they are scared to fail. They are afraid to do something new as manage a businesses even if they are mastered on it. Entrepreneurs should to undertake their companies, and they should to invest in new equipment try to grow. if they just keep doing the same without invest, they will not grow as company. In contrast, many people say if someone do always the same, they will be a professional in that area. like a professional sport player because they do always the same. However, even the professional sport player do something different every time, they have to improve their skill. If they just keep doing the same they can't play and be the best player either. This ideology is applied to many different areas where the subject want to be successful. In conclusion, Ralph Waldo Emerson's statement has the reason, for people is not able to achieve their goal when they do constantly the same. People should explore beyond they are used to do in order to get growing. In many circumstances dare to do new things will gave people a benefit. Changes in live are always good it is just will to do it. People don't have to be mastered in one thing but many of them.
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Imagine a place where honesty is the best policy. I disagree with the old proverb because honesty might hurt peoples feels around you, honesty can make people not like you no more, and honey can not be used in a matter that you speaking of. First when you tell people how you really feel about them it might hurt you in a way too, when people find out how you feel about them it can be good or bad, when people tell true about someone it may hurt them, and how people tell you how they feel about you it can be hurtful. Second when you tell someone how much you do not care about them can make you look bad, when you have a friend that you tell stuff that you do not like about him can be hurtful, when you talk about people in front of them can not help your friendship with them, when you said hurtful things about them they will not like you any more,and how you tell people about what you do not like about them it can be harsh. Finally when you tell people how you really feel in a different way can still be hurtful, the way you tell someone you do not like them can be more hurtful to them, when you speak of some one but in a different way can still grateful of hurtful, when you talk about someone in a nice vice but it can still be mean, and how you talk about someone is up to you no matter what you say. There for you should not tell people how you feel about them no matter what you said or what they said about you.
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There are some student that from a young age they have in mind of what career they want to choose i life. there some that they don not know from which career to choose from so is very important that when you enter high school you try to select a career that you would like for your future in life, but also you need to be thinking if you are going to go to college you need to start thinking about that to. some societies want student to to choose to which college there going to go to or what they want to be in life or what kind of things they make them happy or in what they are good for? many people have skill on many different things when you get to high school you will to choose something. some societies let student decide they wait until there going to graduate to see what they would like to, some choose to continue with school other choose to not go to college. so is very important that you start from younger age at seen what career you like which university you would like to go because with having something in mind you will find out why are you studying so hard what are you spending a lot of time in school Example: if you choose what you like or what you wan to study it will be very easy for you that when you want to graduate you won't struggle to much thinking about what do i choose or what is best for me? many people don't know what they want or many people do not choose nothing they only want to graduate and get their diploma and there done, but other they fight for what they want what are capable to do or show.
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I'm very interested in the nurse and now there's an opportunity that school tell us to strive for an internship in this hospital, i'm very glad to attend this competition. Because i really like and also thirst for be a nurse and i think nurse can help a lot of people. First, i usually learn some knowledge about nurse in books or online. There's some books that people write their experience about how could they become a nurse, how the nurse job looks like and also some story that they have met. Actually i know, it's a hard job to learn, even my first language is not English, it become harder. But when i see the story, see the interesting experiment, i'm fascinated. Sometimes, i also go to find some volunteers about nurse, it always help me learn a lot that i can't learn from the book. Second, i think to be a nurse is arrogant. People always say " Nurse is just like an angle", they help people from disease. As i said, i have read a story that makes me shake: Once in a night, the nurse was ready to finish her work, but suddenly, a man run in to the hospital and there's blood in his arm, he said somebody want to hurt him, that nurse keep him in to the restroom and called 911 first, she try her best to bind up his arm, she wrote in the book" I'm so scary and my hand was shaking, but soon i clam down, i know i'm the hope for him". This story makes me have different understanding about nurse, this job can even save people's life. What a mighty job it is! In conclusion, i hope i can get this opportunity, this hospital have high opinion in VA, and there's more projects that can makes me learn. This is a rare chance for me and i have plenty of time during the summer brake.
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We have many parks that provide a wide of variety of interesting activities for everyone. There is many activities to enjoy ,But i will give you a specific activity that people would enjoy spending time outdoors. Why someone might find that activity enjoyable?, i will explain and give specific details. As we all know that parks provide many activities for us. One enjoyable activity is playing soccer ,You don't need to have good skills to play soccer. Many teens play soccer or they are in a soccer team , because they enjoy it. I know there is a lot of enjoyable activities , but i chose soccer. I play soccer with my friends and family , we really find it enjoyable to go outdoors and have some fun together. Many kids don't like going outside because they think sports are boring , But they aren't boring to me. In the summer time parks are open for you to enjoy activities with your kids and family. You can choose to do any activity you think is enjoyable for your family. Soccer is a sport that can help you keep you healthy and have a good body shape. Your kids will enjoy playing soccer with their friends outdoors. Many parents don't let their kids go places with their friends , because they think something bad might happen to them. Meanwhile , many kids like to play other sports that are different than soccer , but they still enjoy it. Soccer is the same as many sports kids do at school or at parks. Teens spend their time at parks playing many sports during the summer time. My family go to parks to enjoy the water and play games that they never played before. If i enjoy playing soccer i think you will too , why not have some fun and probably hurt ,but hope that doesn't happen to anyone. You feel free when you play a sport you like to play or you might want to try a new sport. Always try something new because there isn't a lot of time to enjoy moments like that. Also,I think someone might find playing sports enjoyable , because it's fun playing outdoors with your family or friends. We have two seasons that we can play outdoors and you will enjoy it. Also parents will enjoy spending time with their kids. Why not take time out your day so you can spend time with your kids more. Yes , you might not like it but many people do like going outside to the park with their children. I think spending time with your kids will let them know that you care and love them. In my conclusion one way you could have an enjoyable time outdoors is playing sports. why not go outdoors and have some fun with your friends. Enjoy the time you have with your family and friends , imagine if something happens that causes you to not go outdoors. You might not like going outside ,but do it for you and your own health. Outdoors can also help you get stress out and excise your body more. Enjoy the time you have to enjoy with your family. What activities do you like to spend time outdoors for ?
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How to meet some people in many way in online or outside and to not speaking to another person like going out you cant speaking with a person in the shop, library, and going to play something to do outside. Some people change how the people they are. different people like to make new friend's by speaking to someone or everyone. Someone person are different form other person because people are not the someone form other. If someone don't speaking someone is not good to speaking someone form who you don't know. If you like to meet someone who you don't know speaking to the person, and before to to the person look at him or her, and be nice the him or her. if you think of something first think to speak the person make idea of your self. I like to make friend all the time and i f make friend and his can be my friend too because he is my friend and to make is to be nice and good to everyone in main please. These many opportunities to make friend like help and work in a group and can meet new people in a group for class and form family can meet new people speak or no speak the new people. Some people can change to not speak with no one because is not use self speak with someone you don't need to do. I think the best is to do anything or something. A positive in live is best to is you can have all of friends and negative you get a pet or just do it make friend. When i go some please with my dog some don't speak with someone or i see a friend cell and with speak about anything and i go to the a store i speak with the workers to fun a tool for my house and i go to school i meet new people in my classes or out of class. Some people are bed and good because i don't like the bed people and they get mad fast and the good people are so nice with everyone.
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I agree that success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm because you will be exited for your next step and you want to know whats gonna happened once you have passed. For example if you fail on doing something, you will be exited on doing it again until you haven't pass because you might be thinking thats your dream to achieve it or its really important to achieve what i fail in it. I heard story of a guy he fail a lot but he didn't gave up because he was still interested on the experiment, so he failed like 408 time I think and he passed at 409th times so you can imagine that he was still exited and interested on that experiment that he failed 408 times and he got success at 409 times. So in life when people failed on something they move on because they might not be interested or exited on that thing that they have failed but many other people will keep trying until they haven't achieve it. they will keep trying because they love it or they are still exited on that work that they have failed. I know some people don't like doing one thing again and again but if you want to be success in life you have to keep doing it until you haven't achieve it because you can't be success in life without being a failure. when people failed on something they might say that its hard and i am not gonna do it again because they didn't try their best on it, but if you keep trying you will get some hint on it and it will be easier to achieve what you working on. So if you failed on something be enthusiasm on it it will help you more to be success in life.
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Some people believes that making mistakes is how peoples move on to success. Othes believes that is if we are determinated person and having positives thoughts without limitations. Some others people realized right before they are committing the mistake and they are just avoiding them. Although some say, successing in life without failures, our lifes wouldn't make sense, because we would not learn how to be success in our life's. Actually, successing in life with failures is more baneficial to our life's, because we learn how to believes on us, and we may have a life without doubts. As a result, if we are the kind of person who doesn't makes any mistakes and realizing to success. i think that we wouldn't know what are we doing wrong to be determinated person. Also most of the people wouldn't have knowlwdge to succes in their lifes. Actually, when people cling to themselves isn't good for their goals in lifes. However, I believe that making failures is how we move on to succe ss in life and is more beneficial to our life's. Otherwise i can tell the 80% of the people belives that making failures is how we learn to success and we become a civilized person. Sometimes most of the people have goals to achieve in their life's. As a matter of fact, when we are setting goals to our life's and we can't get that goal it's because we are doing something wrong and we don't even realize what's wrong with it. its when we are learning to be focus and making sure next time to be success and whatever we did wrong. In fact, sometimes it's hard to when we have had failures a fewers times, because we do not want to commit mistakes, but i think that is a beneficial for most of the people. Because the most mistakes we have and at the same time we overcome to have more experience in life. First of all, when we fix what we did wrong. Also I believe that fixing problems is a good way to be success in life. second of all, my suggestions are that to be a positive person, and determinate, smart, and wise person it make us a better person in success. In conclusion, some people believes that having failures is how we are success in life and others don't think that way. However i do believe so that to be a success person, we have to fail a fewers times, because it's really important to me to be a determinate person. I think that those are my thoughts to be a better person in successful. and by the way, I'm totally agree that we have to fail first to be a success person.
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Should you start looking for career before you enter high school? Will it help you out and help you get a job that way, and is it important to set goals while your in high school and try to reach those goals in the future? All those question's are important to me because on my opinion those are ways to succeed in life. Those question's can help you in the future if you use them. Knowing what you would like to do in the future can help you out because your school might have classes or after school club's for it. Yes it is important for young student to start looking for a career before they enter highschool. Why is it important? Its is important because if student's know what they want to do in future, they can take classes in high school to help them do that career. For example if I wanted to be a mechanic, I could take auto collision in edison, and that would start to help me out and give me experience. Knowing what you want to be in the future can help you out a lot, and you do what you like to do, and on my opinion knowing what you want your career to be gives you a advantage in the future. For some people it isn't a problem to go to high school without know what there going to do in the future. They try to find out what what they like, and what they dont like as a career for the future. Some people go to college not knowing what they want to do and find out till there in college. My sister is one of them because she went into college not knowing what she wanted to do or be, but once she started going to college she found out what she wanted to do which was a ultra sound doctor. Now that she knows what she wants to do she studying and trying to reach her goal as being a ultra sound doctor. If you already have a mindset on what you want to do you can set goal's for yourself, and once you reach those goal's set harder ones to reach. You can set many type's of goal's like one day owning a 5 bedroom house or owning your dream car. You can set goal's with what ever you want like in the future, present, at school , anywhere. If your still in school a goal you can set is getting a and b honor roll or turning in all your work or even showing up to class everyday. One of my goal's is to own my first car before I graduate which is a Lexus Is300 2001. Setting goal's is important in life, and Ithink everyone should set some goal's for themselve's.
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The life is being more modern, people also need to improve themselves. That's why some schools want to offer some programs which are good for students. Some school districts offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. Most students who allow this plan must take courses during the summers or in the evenings or may not be able to take elective courses. This plan has two positions,some people agree, but others don't think it's a good idea. Is it a good idea? It is. It is a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early if the students want because they can save time, they can have new experiences, new challenges which help for their life in the future, they still can take elective courses also have vacations latter after college or work if they want. Let's start with the first reason now. Do you agree that the time is limit? The time is the only thing you can't move back. Because of this, a lot of people, especially students are thinking how to spend time helpful. These programs will help many students save time. They can save one year in school, that also means they can reach success early one year. Many people spend summer having vacations to relax, and evenings watching TV, but the other people spend this time studying. They choose have more time after success instead of have time when they haven't had anything. The next reason will be the reason help students the most. Most students who follow this plan will have a lot of experiences also challenges because they must have the same knowledge in shorter time than, they will have pressure, but it will grow up ourselves. They can become stronger, independent by working on own and have more information about lessons because this time is not enough for teachers can teach everything, they must research more. The last reason refers to elective courses. Many students like these courses, but some students don't. These programs do not require to take elective courses, so some students can skip these course which they don't like or do not helpful for their career. They also take these courses after college or work if they want. They can choose also consider what is they need. Moreover, this plan don't require you skip these elective courses, you just may not be able to take these, so if you want to take courses, you can plan for this. It depends on your choice. On the other hand, many students do not agree this plan. They think it gives stressful for them, they worry about they cannot have enough lessons. But if you think that it means you don't confide your ability also don't try for your future. Sometimes, the life needs challenges to grow up and it will be interesting. To enter college or the work, all we need are knowledge or skill, not how long we took them. You can choose your way, success will come soon or later depends on you. Conclusion, we should support some schools offer these programs that allow high school students to graduate early if they can. Our life will change if we change, our success will come if we try, and it will happen early if we have a plan. After all, which one do you agree with? It is a challenge but many students can do. However, it will be fair if students can choose take or not these programs.
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I'm agree because your first impression it will be the one that represent who you are and it will show your personality, and the people will judge you becauseyour aparience and your actitude, for example, when i was looking for a jod at chipotles restaurant for the first time, they where looking at me strange like i was a bad person or a criminal. The next day i went to popeye's restaurant with different type of clothes, and they didn't look at me in a strange way, and that was because i was dressing properly, and because my friend tell me to dress better because in the first time when i went to chipotle i was dressing as a bad guy and that make me look inapropiate and i did get the job. After that i went to chipotle restaruant just for fun to prove if my friend was right and he was, the people from chipotle didn't look at me in a strange way as the first time, i think it's because they didn't remember me but when the manager comes he said, "hoo hellow you're back," then he leave. The manager was the only person who remembers me and he did not change his opinion about me, i didn't care because by that time i did get the job at popeyes so i decide to leave out of there. In conclution that day i learn that the first impresion metter and it could affect in your life.
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Try different thing to grow. I agree about some time we has to do something the we never do before to learn more and grow to sometime we has to try something different thing to grow because you get defferent, experience and that are how we grow when we try different thing the we already know and if you not try you will not grow because you will no learnd different thing yoou allways try something that person is going to telt you some word that you will feel the you cant not do that or other that you will not grow, about if you not try you will stil not grow of the word that there person said to you about that is not a ostacule if you what to grow you has to try something that you never mastered before because that are how we grow going somethig the we never do before sometime we get fearful because we never do different thing about sometime you has to try if you try you can get beter oportunity sometime you will feel that you cant not you it but you allways has to kip this word in your maid you can do this you are strom you cant do it all the thing the you what to do it because you are a strom person you can do it what ever you what dont be fearful because that can be a ostacule to not grow do all that thing that you what becuase you can do it sometime we can not grow but it ok if that cant happen and sometime we cant grow very fasters that are my reasons remember allways do it dont feel fearful thanks you to take time and read my prompt.
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When I think about wisdom I think about my grandpa he tell me story of how he lived back in his countries. He talk about how he grow up poor and barely had anything to eat or get though the day and how going to school was a big deal. He also told me how his brother and father died when he was six-eight, but he also told me how he came to America and how hard it was. When my grandpa was born he was born poor. He had one brother a dad and a mom his dad did constructing and his mom most got everyone ready for school and tried to make everyone food. The closest school near my grandpa was 3.4miles away he had to go walking, but he went to anyway school he cared about his learning and he found it fun. It was a big deal to go to school where my grandpa lived or lived near by not many people get even get to go school at all it was that special. My grandpa was only five when his father died his father was a man with a lot of problem. His father got him self into so much other people and gang. People looked for father but he kept low until one day he went to work and there were four people waiting for him he tried to run but he was to late because one of them shot him with gun they left him with three gun shot in his body laying on dirt he bleed out before the they could come and save him. As for grandpa brother he got sick he said sick for two months my grandpa told me he was smart man he teach my grandpa how read and write better my grandpa said "he the reason why he got such high grades in school" when he got sick that when my grandpa tried to do everything for him so he can stay alive but back then medicine wasn't very good, and keep in mind we not in the u. s.a and it the year 1976 and if you did have that type of medicine it very expense. The most my grandpa and his mom can do is pray to god every night to get his blessing for his brother and his brother died in his sleep. They dug out a grave for him and everyone said there prayers his mother won't stop crying for one month but then she accept the fact he was dead. When my grandpa got more older had two daughter and two son and he meant my grandma. He had to take the test to go to u. s.a. He told me it was hard because you had to learn a lot about u. s.a off of a notebook they give and out of that notebook they ask you 50 question out of the 200 question they could ask you, and it all random after he passed him he start to pack his back to America he said "bye" to my grandma his two daughter and two sons. When he was going to America he wanted to go to Virginia and he did he told me it was hard at first because he only know a little bit a of English he was looking for a job and he found one he worked at a restaurant and two other job once he start to make money he start to save it up to bring his daughters and sons and his wife he took him about 8 months he said to get all the money saved up. Once he brought them I was born soon after we lived in Generic_City for as long as i can remember now my grandpa works at a schools and is happy with things are right now.
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The benefits of having a good attitude There are a lot of benefits because of having good attitudes, we can get more time to make again what we were doing and do not stop until we make it the best we could. In other way, been with a good attitude can help us improve in life that helps us to learn, to concentrate and, to be a good thinking of someone else. Also, something kind of the same happened to me some time ago when my father was teaching me how to drive, and every time I did something wrong he yelled at me and one day I was with a really bad attitude because of that and than I realized that been mad was not going to help me so i changed my attitude and i learn to drive really fast. Been mad only makes us worst at doing that because we are not thinking about the positive thinks of that activity just at the negative thinks and thats what makes everything worst. The benefits of having good attitude its that it can help us to try again something we miss, been frustrated only makes us waste our time and, also having that good attitude makes us improve a lot.
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The option of distance learning can be helpful for students in many ways. Internet have the access of having to take classes online or communicating with a teacher. Students can get the same knowledge in school or in their house but easier. Bullying is the major problem in school;however, teachers can avoid bully by having the option of distance learning. Teenagers might be bad influence for other teenagers by forcing students to drink,smoke, or even worse to use drugs. The majority of students have responsibilities to take care of after school, taking other classes online,taking care of their siblings, or have a job. Even though teachers try to avoid bully, is hard to make sure students are well behave some do not listen at all and not care or some are lazy. Some student's lives are tough for many reasons it can be by their parents that do not pay attention to them, stress by having too much school work, or some of them have already a job, and adding one more by bully, it can bring bad consequences. In many cases students suicide because of the stress, or they are tired of people not paying attention to them, and not care about what happens in their life. They are cases that teachers are aware of bully, but they ignore the fact that the school is not a save place to be anymore and that they are big problems going on at the school and having to deal with it is better than having to call their parents and do something about it. Teenagers do not realized the fact that they can be responsible for someones death and they be can put in jail by many years, and ruin their live by making fun of someone,or punching other students, it can be something silly and that little things can ruin their lives. Some students might be a bad influence for other students by forcing them to do several things that can bring consequences for the rest of their lives by being in jail,being unhealthy,or change their life in a bad way. In this days is normal or cool for a student to drink, smoke, use drugs and forcing other students to do the same. The "if you do not do this I am not your friend no more", or " you do not love me if you do not this" or even worse "if you do not drink with me I am going to tell everyone your secrets" that makes students be afraid of losing their friend, girlfriend/boyfriend forcing them to make actions that do not beneficial them at any pint of their lives. Teachers in high school are though to students; however, some students do not care about their education at all and they go to school to talk to a friend or distract other students effecting other students education. Some students are always energetic, getting in trouble all the time,distracting other students, being a bad influence, instead of giving them referrals or suspending them it can be recommend to do home school to avoid any type of problems. It is a good idea to start saving money for college/future and having a job. It is difficult to study or do homework while having a job students get stress and frustrated to have to attended to school and a job. School waste time in lunch or having other activity when students can do all their work in home and a few hours they are done and can take care of other responsibilities. In students houses can take their time and not have to rush in a assignment or in a test, having the opportunity to not get stress over school work. Having to wake up at the morning it is a hard thing to do for the majority of students, not having a good rest at night can effect students by ,grades, not concentrating, falling asleep at class, not paying attention,always been tired,or skipping some classes can effect when they graduate. In conclusion having the opportunity to do home school can make a big difference in a good way to the school and to the students education. That it is something that can be a easy way to learn and have the same knowledge like the other students, but in easier way. Internet have the access to many apps to help students can be a fun way to learn instead be sitting in a classroom for two hours. Students can avoid the fact that are some students that do not care at all and if they do not care about their live they are more possible not care about other student education. Going to school now it is something that some teenagers do not considerate important student can take any class online.
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I believe it has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Because you keep a best future form you life if you have positive attitude you have better opportunities and a better success and your life .The positive attitude the help a you have many opportunities an different thing what you make for example an your life personal , works, family but form principal and my himself . If you have the positive attitude you have the better success level personal or professional . Form when you have a positive attitude with other personas you success in life is better. Because i thinks maybe the other person i have an day bat ,when you have the expression and you face is a smile you help the other person a smile, and think what pass your problem. Your positive attitude a help an other personas a proceed with your life and best your life. The positive attitude a help every day, i have an good day because when my i have a positive attitude with other person my feeling is very good why thinks what with can see the person with a smile the help a no thinks a the problem for an moment . And feel what help a other persona an situation bat an this moment an attitude good for my help a your life. I think what you have the positive attitude you have better success an your works. Because form example an your works and you have a positive attitude with your team or members of works .I then you have better opportunities with promotion a better status what you make o practice a positive attitude the you help a have an best relationship with your team .And your works is better that environment is best . If you have the positive attitude for help the other people an your word the environment never being evil, what the best environment and a think what your words be best environment what you have and to help a you have lot success an your life . When you have the positive attitude with you family that relationship is better .And you feeling is good .And then help a what your life form being a better person .What that relationship an the family is the best, for your have an best future what they are your best team for your life .because for example and my life my family help my everyday because when my father is died me help you have an good relationship with my family for survive of depreciation ,and more thing . And have an good with relationship with my family me help as the positive attitude help a survive any problem in this moment. But conclusion i think what you have the positive attitude your success in life. Is the best why the attitude is the key of success , when your positive attitude never your be alone en your life .Because the have positive attitude with other person help a your life a level be professional, personal wherever the attitude is the best key for your life .Remember when your action is good your reward is the success where you go .Surcharge though in this moment is the worse , never your change you attitude with other person , because the other person no have that blame form your problem or action in this moment . And you personality is bat with the other person the other person with you maybe are equal you .And the remember if you have forever your have positive attitude with other peoples form you have the best success in your life .
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Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we always doing. I like to do accomplish more if i always want to do something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose. I like to do something with Bangladashe abusing children and adnormal kids. First of All, I like to do something with Bengladshe abusing children because Bangladash is very poor Country. Lot of children did not go to school because they do not enaph many to scevive that resone they don't go to school. Some children work in fcatorry and somre children working in people house but people are abusing them like people are not paying enaph money. Secendly, I want to do work with Bangladash adnormal kids. I like to work with them because they are not like normal kids. Many familly did not accept that kind of kids. They think adnormal kids did not help them at all. I am thinking another way if they get poper gidenecs they can help in out susity. Inconclution, Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we always doing. I like to accomplish more if i always want to do something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose. I like to do something with Bangladashe abusing children and adnormal kids.
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Generic_Name. Introduction: We can see to simple nudes ayes when some people have the high enthusiams and we can detected if a person are sad, happy, when you talking or with yours expressions to the other people. The people who have enthusiams are the persons who ever have more people in the around whos can help them, so if they see a person sad, they go where him and they try to be happy him again or they asked you how they can help that person, but a person who doesn't have enthusiams they worry about to other people. People who have enthusiams: They can to do all whatever they wants, because they are happy. They can create a grat ideas when they are happy in that moment. They can help to other person who need help. They can to be the best in everything. They can to be happy to ther people who are tired or sad. People who doesn't have enthusiams: If you doesn't have enthusiams, you can not do anything. How you can help to other person if you doesn't have your own enthusiams. If your enthusiams is bad, don't be alone. If you don't have enthusiams, you doesn't wants to do anything. Do you agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success? No, I'm not agree whith him because, if we failure and failure everytime again, so we enthusiams go to down, but if we failure just one time and the next time we are more preparate, is almost same that happen to me the day nobvemver 19, 2018, that for see the hour from my phone, some people think that I did cheat in the SOL, but I doesn't need do that for pass this SOL. Conclusion: The bad enthusiams not just affect one person, that affect to the people who are in the around because if we can transmit cheerfulness to the other person and the other size the coin, other people can transmit the bad enthusiams I think so, so the person who have a good enthusiams they try to help to the other people. Winston Churchill with that he said, I understand that thing; That person whos failure and failure, are the person more strong because each failure they return more strongers and they do the best job.
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Hello students my name is Generic_Name. Today we will be doing basketball lesson for P.E class. Basketball is one of the best sports, it's also fun to play with friends. So we are going to do some basketball moves the frist basketball move were going to do is the crossover. the crossover is the greatest move in basketball history. frist thing you have to do is move the ball to your right and then swich it to your left as fast as you can. The next move is around the back, you pretty much have to do is move the ball around your back and then you're done simple as that. Now we're going to talk about stories about the greatest basketball players, that was used to be in the NBA. The frist man we're going talk about is Kobe Brant, who used to play with L.A Lakers, and won fore champions chip games. He was the player in the leage no one can stop him, people call him The Black Mamba because he was too fast. The real thing about him is he's a father, a porducer, and he has his own basketball school called Mamba acadme. He teaches good lesson like we did before. But sad news about him is that he died on a helacopter crash in Febary 17, 2020. some of his kids were in the helacopter carsh too. Kobe died in the age of 41 and people never sad that this happen. The next basketball player we're going to talking about is Lebron James which he's still in the leage. He only won three champion chip games, and play for only two teams. Lebron used to with the team called Clevlond Cavalers, then he went in the Mimai Heat. Leborn James is now playing in the L.A Lakers that kobe used to be in. People name him King James because he was the best at doing every thing. That means he's good at offence, defence, he a lot of adwords. But thats not just the real him, he's a father, loves to work out, and he teaches his son to be a good basketball player. This next story is not about a famous basketball player, this story is about me. When I was young I always love waching great basketball players so I got my ball and just start praticeing basketball moves. I was doing jump shots, lay up's I was doing every thing. At my high school year I play for the schools team Generic_Name, we won a lot of games but we only won one champions and then the other games we kept loosing. But it dosent matter about wining what matters is how hard you play. So in conclosoion they all have in common guys. like were Kobe teaches his kid to work hard and thats the same way that we did to. Rember to always lisent to your teacher and consentrate on their lesson that there giveing to you, so you can do the lesson correctly.
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Do you think you give off right by having a negative attitude? Imagine being at the DMV everyone given you stares, and your family telling you ''you're not gonna pass". As you sit taking the test ,all those comments replaying in your head. Can you see the difference? as if i was to be possitive, my attitude reflects off of what i give, and that is the key of success in life. A positive vibe can make your days go faster. Everyone in this world has challeges, but i mean who doesn't? so with that being said we can overcome with putting effort and what you do or believe. The ability to have a positive attitude creates a mind set of trying new things, like driving, traveling, last but not least, education. Adjusting to a new enviroment helps alot with mental health. My story starts with me going to the DMV. something i notice was, i was hearing negative comments about me not passing my test. My friends kept telling me that is was difficult and hard. Meanwhile at the time, it kept replaying in my head, and i reacted in a negative way. One way we can avoid being gloomy is to stop hanging out with people who are bad influence, because if we do we give off the same energy. However if you will have potential on succeeding,and you well feel much better of your self. Some people say that being negative is normal, but they are wrong because if you are always negative everyday that will not take you enywhere. It is always good to be positive, and if you are positive all things go well. In conclusion, is how we the people should change the way we see things, and move foward for better result. I hope that we can be more considerate on how we take things in life.
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Do you think immagination is more important than knowledge? Why do you think it's important? Let's see why I think it's important! Well think about this you have the knowledge, but you never immagine things that you think you can't do. If you just immagine or think bigger about what you want or what you want to do. One day you will achive your goal or dream. One of the reason why I think immagination is importantant is that if you don't immagine what you want to do in future as your job or hobby. When your in school your not going to try your best and show effort. If you don't learn anything at school when you are older to get a job, your not going to get the job you want, because wherever you are there will be someone that want the same job as you but trying harder than you, learning harder than you, and showing more effort than you. Which means effort creates achivements. For example, you went to an interview for a job at a store to be a cashier and there are 15 people that want to be cashier. But they only need one. So first they asked everyone what do you do when the costumer comes in. One of them said you have to smile and say hey, do you need help with anything? and you said you continue doing whatever your doing. Who do you think there going to pick? Of course the first one right? because she showed them effort and willing to do the job. That why you have to immagine what you want to do in future and try your best in school. Second reason is that you have your knowledge, but if you don't immagine or think bigger your not going achive big things in your life. The people who failure in life are the people who quit something one step away from success. That's what a lot of people do. But the people who successed in life are the people who took the step that a lot people quit which the hardest step to take. For example, you want to start a company, but the people around you said that your not going to success. Although they said that you started a company anyways. After a month no one wanted to invest you company. You kept asking people to invest your company. So one person did, with that money you payed the bill. Then nothing happened to your company. But if you stop asking people when no one wanted to invest your company your company would of been closed. So you have to immagine thing and use your knowledge to achive them. Third reason is you have to immagine things as your dream and get a lot of knowledge by learning at school. When I was little I wanted to become a docter when I grow up. Then I started immagining to help and more stuff. When I go to school. I told myself you have to be good at science, math and other subject to become a docter. So I will have knowledge about things that you have to know to become docter. so you have to get a lot of knowledge to achive the things you immagine. So I think immagination is more important than knowledge. But knowledge is still really important. I feel like everything starts with immagination first. Then you go to school to get your knowledge increase every year. You work really hard to make immagination becomes reality.
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Students Need to Identify a Career I am in 11th grade and I still thinking in what career should be better for me, if I could expected a career by the time I entered to High School, I could not being worry about what career should be better for me. I think that is a good idea that students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school, because in the four years that they are in high school they can get prepare in the career they want. By the time the students enter to college it will be much easier for them because they have already decided what career should be better for them. There are four year in high school, students can use those years to star to learn a little bit in the career they chose. For example, I had one friend that he wanted to be a scientist, so when he was in high school he get prepared to a scientist, he started to look what he need be a scientist, he looked how many years he had to go to college, he found that science has a lot of math problems that he did not know and he started to learn math. The four years in high school can help you to get prepare in your the career you want. Another reason why students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school is that when go to college it will be much easier for them. If the students identify a career by that time, in college they can only focus in the career they chose. There are many students that go to college and they have not already decided what career should be better for them, and in many cases there are students that are out of college and still thinking what to do with their life. That's why it is important for students to identify a career by the time they enter high school or at least when they are still in high school. In my opinion it's good idea that students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school, because if they could identify a career that they might think they would like, that could be a lot of helpful, because by the time they go to college they don't get stress because they don't have much time to decide what career could be better for them.
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It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Some poeple think the impressions is impossible to change. There is some poeple is not impossible for them to change the impressions. I agree that the first impressions are almost impossible to change. I believe that impressions for the first time is herad to change it. The first reason that I agree for the first impressions are almost impossible to change is because, the first impressions is impartant for the poeple. Some poeple think the first impressions they can change it ,but the first impressions is almost impossile to change or forget it. For some of the poeple impressions is impartant. Also, for some of the poeple impressions is not impartant. Impressions is effect of someone has thoughts about a person. The second reason is that I agree for the first impessions are almost impossible to change is because, of the feeling. If the poeple has the first impressions or the first feeling is almost impossible to change. Some poeple can change and some poeple can not change it. However, Some poeple think that the first impressions is head to change. In conclusion, I believe that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Some poeple think is head to change the first impressions. But some poeple think that is essy to change the first impressions. An my experiences I think that is almost impossible to change the first impressions. Some poeple think that first impressions is when a person thought or feel about someone.
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Is playing a sport a fun activity for students? Does it help students exercise? Does it help students get healthier? I agree that playing a sport is a fun activity to all students for many reasons. To begin with, playing a sport is a good way to be more energetic. Playing a sport can help students exercise. Students might do some warm up games, do some work outs or they can practice at home with their families. Playing a sport can also help students get healthier. Students get more energetic, eat healthy food, and get in good shape. Playing a sport can help students do better things. They could run faster, get stronger, and it can help them do better in class On the other hand, playing a sport is bad for some students. Students might get sick for being outside. If is winter and students are playing outside all day they might get sick from the cold or if is spring they might get sick from pollution. Some students might get injured. Students might break their arms or legs for playing with others students that are bigger than them. Some students might not be good at sports. Students might suck at soccer, football, or basketball and they won't play. Even though playing a sport is bad for some students, they can still play. Even though students get sick they can still play. If some students get sick they can get medicine and go back to play. Even though some students might get injured they can recover. Some students might break their legs or arms, they can wait a few weeks and go back to play. Even though some students might not be good at sports they can still learn. Some students might suck at soccer, football. or basketball with practice they can learn how to play. In conclusion, playing a sport is fun because you play with your friends, run around, or just feel the wind in your face. It helps students exercise by doing some warm up games, work outs, or practice at home with their families. It helps students get healthier by eating healthy food and get in good shape. I agree that playing a sport is a fun activity to all students for many reasons.
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Certain Occupations Through Internship and shadowing to discover Many schools have partnership with companies that allow students to explore certain occupations through internship and shadowing opportunities to discover. Many schools look for the best for you to graduate and to have the best paying job, like I think it's a great idea that the school let's them go out to discover many things that we don't even know and things we never even knew that it excited at all. Students this days don't even know what they want. I would and will do it of convincing my principle of school to let kids to explore bunch of things like I said before like trying to take them to field trips for them to learn how to use credit cards and take them out to explore nature and study countries. The oppurtunities to discover will take him to the highest of knowing what he will really want in his future and college for a fact that many kids don't take lead for being scared. Taking the biggest step ever to learn the new life becoming adults. You should never listen to people taking because they will want one thing and another you should think of what you really are passion of working without any complain. I would convince my manager to take me many places so I will be clear and happy about it. Lets say principle or manager to lets explore new things like better paying wage job like that you won't be killing yourself. That would help of us thinking if we learn something we love it we can even make our own business and will make lots of money. that will be a fact why asking your principle for many things of going out to explore bunch of things, like that you won't be worrying about money, paying stuff, and won't be dealing with bosses because I hate that they pressure you so much. If I ask to explore I would love to learn to read panels of when they build houses and buildings because they make a lot much money since their isn't much people to do that. If your parents don't afford shouldn't be a problem if you have good grades you can earn scalerships to pay for them, You just worry about going out and finish high college of 4 years and enjoy it because you will definitely miss it after wards.
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I think it's great for the older students to work with the younger student, because some young students haven't learned about what the older students learned, being a helper to younger ones especially in a school can be an amazing thing to do for example They can help to teach them how to walk for the preschoolers They can teach how to welcome people It also helps them to have a great future The Older students can also (maybe) earn some money for being an excellent helper to the younger students. It can also be a great hobbies for the older students to teach younger students how to live their normal lives and to greet others. Another reason why the older students to help the younger students is an excellent idea is how to be respectful and trustworthy to others. There can be a chance where the older students can teach younger students how to help others as well for example Pick up someone else stuff if it fell on the floor Help an old person cross the road Teach kids how to write neatly This kind of program could help the environment so much. The students can also travel around the world to help younger students in other countries for example United Kingdom Norway Sweden Denmark Canada And more! Having this type of need and help could this world so much. It helps across the country, around the world, all types of students can help others younger students how to live their lives, it can help go to collage and get a job that their very great at and in their job they can learn as well, it can make them get a talent from their job so they can learn how to do stuff in their jobs and become very good at. So yes I would recommend for the older students to help younger students (even around the world) how to live their normal lives. It can help so much for others and it teaches respect and that's why in every school they should have older students helping younger students and in other countries they should also have older students help younger students how to live normal lives and have a great future and they can also help their families and other families.
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Based on my experieneces, do I agree or disagree with Emerson's statement. I do agree on what Ralph Waldo statement said,"Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." You should always push yourself to the max on everything you do. Try finding a better and faster way to solve what you already mastered. Work even harder then you worked before. Also try something more harder than the previous thing you did. For example Lebron James, he wasn't rich or wealth when he was little, he had to work hard to get where he is now. Lebron trained everyday to get better, stronger, and put his best on the basketball court so he can stand out from the rest. Even today Lebron James is training to be come the best NBA player ever and works really hard to beat/break other famous NBA players records. Each NBA superstars have different stories to tell on how they got there. Not only just NBA players work hard, other people around the world has stories to tell on how they never stopped working harder than before to grow. .These are the reasons and examples on why I do agree with Raplh Waldo statement.
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Dear, principal I think that is required to have community service . I would said because if they got in trouble they could serve time in community service. If kids help we could help the environment around us and people that need help. We could help families in the community. That is why I think we
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I strongly agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson. because your never going to succeed as a person in the work force or something else. because these people wont step out of their comfort zone. because they are too lazy or scared. Ralph has a very good point : Lazy, shy, scared people wont succeed or grow as a person or in the work force. Doing more than what your good at helps grow your confidence, and your way of doing things for the better. Doing more could possibly give you a little higher pay raise or be a boss at a at a big company. Doing more than what your already good at can go a long way for you. You should start doing better right now because it will benefit you in so many ways. Not doing more than you can already do can possibly give you bad rep. Or some people will see you as a lazy person in life. Because that person is not pushing him or her self to do more or the beyond because that person isnt motivated to do anything more that their good at. That person wont succeed as much as the person that is doing more or the beyond. One time when i was a small Child. My Uncle always talked to me about a lot of stuff. The most important thing he told me is to do more than what i can already do. Because it will take me places and it will make my life a lot better. He said if you do more. I will succeed more in life. When i got older he talked to me more about it. Because he knew i was gonna do more in life. Now i work as hard and beyond than the other person. And make more money because i work more than i already mastered. I think working beyond than your comfort zone will help a lot. You can be really successful if you challenge yourself in life. It could be school or work. It doesnt hurt if you challenge your self. You will succeed as much than the other guy.
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Community parks provide a lot of fun ways to spend time outdoors. One of my three favorite ways to spend time outside would be playing sports, gardening and exercising. It's a productive way to spend your weekends. First, Playing sports outdoors is very fun way to spend the day. You can play with your family and friends. You learn about communication and teamwork while playing sports. Communication is a life skill that is used everyday. You'll always talk to someone weather your saying good morning or good night speaking is always needed when talking to someone. Teamwork shows you how to value players on a team. Knowing your teammates worth and dreams is always a great way to start a lifetime friendship. Playing sports outdoors is a great way to spend your time. Next, Gardening is a way to help out plants and to have fun. Gardening or watering plants gives the plants energy. Gardening may be done with family and friends. Your spending quality time with those around you. Buying seeds and planting them helps out the plant world by giving them new places to live. You may fix up the parks gardens to make it look nice. You don't lose anything from watering plants. Cutting grass or cleaning up around the neighbor hood is a good thing to do. Your doing a favor to your neighbors and nature. Gardening is a relaxing and fun way to spend your day outdoors. Finally, Exercising isn't done by many people, people just want to spent time indoors and just watch television. Exercising is very important for humans to do. An average human is suppose to exercise three times a week. Going to the park and going for a run is a great way to exercise. Your loosing body fat and building up muscles. You may see animals and plants while your running. You can also exercise with your family and friends you don't have to exercise alone. Exercising is very relaxing and it's helps with blood pressure. You don't have to eat that healthy but its good to exercise at least three times a day. In Conclusion, Spending time outdoors is very enjoyable. You can do these activities with the people around you. Three enjoyable ways you can spend time outdoors is by playing sports, gardening and exercising
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Positive attitude is the key to success in life. It has a big impact in our life, and remove negatives thoughts in an incredible way. Also, if we do not start thinking in a positive form; life will be hard for us. Furthermore, positive attitude guarantee a different way of thinking it can change the way we are, and how our minds are more open to others opportunities. I agree with positive attitude because it can change our lives for a better future. Positive attitude is the thing that all humans needs in life. Firstly, if we have a positive attitude our lives can change in the way that very few people can reach. For example, we will gain more opportunities to jobs like have a good recommendation of the society, finding jobs would not be that hard, and gain to have more friendships. In addition, other case is the behave with the family that almost all young people has for example: having good communication, feel good around them, etc. Also, discussing with other people would not be a issue because we are prepare for how negative attitude appears in the persons who does not want to change the way of think. Moreover, our positive attitude can change the mood of a person. Secondly, positive attitude improves our mind state in the way that negative thoughts cannot go into our brains. However, sometimes this negative thoughts can also ruin our day by putting obstacles like, the boss is angry and we do not know how to react, having a bad lunch, or no having enough hours of sleep. but, positive attitude has a big impact that right away make us think in a different way and make us feel secure. In sequence, an experience at school that all human being has is when we have a test and we are worry that we will not pass, the teacher comes and say "is not a big deal, i know you all can do it" and that is where positive attitude comes. Also, positive attitude has to influence in everybody, so we can have a better world. Thirdly, we all are different, but we can try to improve our skills in positive attitude by reading books, listen to other people, and make a change in our habits. On the other hand, we can try to make contact with people that has positive attitude to the maximum, they will help us to see things from a different perspective of view. In addition, introducing new people in our lives will make a big change. Also, it will make us more responsible at the time that we have to read, write, or talk in an appropriate way. lastly, this will lead us to a better and different way of think; it will improve our knowledge. Lastly, positive attitude can support us by building a better future for our lives. But, sometimes it can be difficult to manage our emotions. Positive attitude can improve us to do better in our emotions. It will make us strong in whatever situation we are passing through. A lot of people that are around us would not like it but, is a process that we want for be different than them. Positive attitude is ambition for those who wants to live better and wants to reach their dreams.
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Dear Reader's This statement is wrote by Ralp Waldo Emerson, it's trying to help to the peoples who's thinking about his life, if it's better work indibiduality? called; to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greastest accomplishment. This realization is important for the world and people's who make a good choice. you nee be complete that work before you get some problems with the organization from whatever country you are and thinking about your future. The central idea with the Emerson's statement , i'm agree with the statement, I gonna be expresed my personal opinion, it's a good accomplishment because is better one thing you need think is what is your purpouse in the future and better, what you wanna do for the life , you need be prepared for take a good accosmplishment in the future and take a good organization for you realization in company's or whatever you work. When you work hard you always gonna be a good person for the people's what are around of you , tha's gonna be a good notice for you realization, and for your famil gonna be enpresive of you , by that you need think positive in the life be a champioms work indibidualiy and take a good decision's for yor organization , in that part you need be very careful , be respelful with the other's peoples around you and they gonna be happy with you. if you work by your self that is help to your realization , by that i'm agree with the statement Emerson's , he was thinking about him self and that helped to him , he take a good decicion by that he wrote the statement " To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment" work indibiduality thta are the sum of qualities that characterize and distinguish an individual from all other's , personality or separate, and is most important and better, because people's in the team sometimes not work hard, they just work for survival in the day in tha's is not good you need work every day for take better future with you, and if you dont work that dont gonna be help with the accomplishment , and you need continue with the work you are doing because that gonna help you in the future with the organization. The appropiate accomplishment for your self it's when you work hard always you gonna be a big person in the future or to the world, and them you gonna see the results of your work believe you tha's is a big notice from you. The purpose it's be yourself in a world, your future is in the front, work by yourself that's make happy to the future and to the people's in the world. The conclusion are in yourself work hard for you better future in the world, take a good desicion's with the peoples, because that is gonna help to you , the purpose in this statement is think in yourself for be a big person in the future and to organized your life , that mean say take a good desicion's dont get bad thinks about your life if yo go donw never stop work hard and them you gonna be happy with your position you are that is better now. be positive with yourself.
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Is it true that some students at some point in their life want vacation time? Yes, because not everyone is a retard that wants to be studying and going to school all the time. Almost every student wants rest from homework. I think having a summer break for students is a good idea because it gives students some time to relax their brain and body. It gives them time to spend some time with their family and enjoy thier every minute of life. First of all, I think it's a good idea to have summer break because it gives students some time to relax their brain and body. It gives students some free time to do what they want to do like trying new things out, playing new sports and finding what their real talents are, instead of doing school work and other activites all the time. Doing meditation is really good for your brain and mind, and it's only done when you have time for it and nothing to distract you. Secondly, I think it's a good idea to have summer break for students because it gives them time to spend some time with their family. Some of us are really bad at giving our parents time in life because it's just too much to do everyday. Half of student's day they spend in school and get no extra time for their parents. Spending time with parents is not wasting time when your really enoying it and it's a good time spend. On the other hand, some people might argue that it's not a good idea for students to have summer break because they will waste their time by being home all day or texting their friends. It will kill their education time and won't give them enought time to get to where they want to be in future. In conclution, I think it's a good idea for students to have summer break because it gives them the opportunity to go new places they never been to and try out new dishes they never tasted. I think life is too short to be doing homework and studying for tests, and planning for your future. Life is about having some fun time and enjoying every little moment with your family and friends instead of focused on one thing all day and everyday which is school.
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Career commitment Having a good career after graduation is every students success. Most student are wondering when is the perfect time to start thinking of what career they should focus on, so should student commit to a career at a young age, or students should wait after graduation to commit to their career? Students may have a lot of chances to learn about different careers, and different field of studies while they are waiting to chose what career to focus on before graduation; however, it is a great idea for students to commit to their career at a early age. It is a great idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because student will know what type of courses are required for that particular career, students will not worried about what to do after graduation, and students will be able to develop some basic fundamentals skills needed for their future career. Initially, it is a great idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students will know what type of courses are required for that particular career. As a student looking for a successful career it is always a great idea to stay on top of your academic purposes. Knowing your purpose make is easy for you to elevate, and push yourself to achieve your goals, it will be really easy for a students to finished their courses because they already know what they need, so all they have to do is display some effort, and confident in them self. For instance, a student may wants to get a major on computer engineer. some of the requirement needed for that are: Math, Science, some wide knowledge on Computer software, and Computer Hardware. By knowing all these will be a great advantage for that student. That would a great reason why student should commit to a career at a young age because it helps them know the requirement needed for that particular career. Secondly, it is a great idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because student will not be worrying about what to do after graduation. As a student there is a lot going on in our personal life. Thinking everyday about what to do after graduation will be a stressful situation to be in. Knowing what to do before you graduate will not lead you to a stressful situation. An example, will be a student may have some family issues, and thinking of how to tackle those issues, so having to think about what to do after graduation without you knowing already will be really stressful. In that case I will say it is batter for students to commit to a career at a young age because students will not have to worry about what to do after graduation. In addition, committing to a career at a young age is a great idea. because students will be able to develop some basic fundamentals skills needed for their future job or career. To get started with a career you may need to know basic skills that will help on the way, and I think it is a huge advantage for student to start practicing some of these skills before going to the actual field of work ( career ). For instance, an Internship Program. Student may be attending an internship class, to develop some skills. Student that attended a internship class may feel one hundred present confident to display what they have learn during their Internship class to the outside world. More Importantly this will help students to get started after graduation. Fundamentals skills are essential for any jobs or careers, so for any student that have the chance to learn some fundamentals skills of a particular job or a career would be a great head start for that student. That is why it is a great idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because it will help students develop their some basic fundamentals skills needed for future career. In conclusion, it is important for students to commit to a career at a young age because students will know what type of courses are required for that particular career, students will not be worrying about what to do after graduation, and students will be able to develop some basic fundamentals skills needed for their future career. For students to get a successful career students should always think ahead in terms of academic purpose. Knowing your purpose as a student is very important, and will always help students to be successful. As a final thought I would say knowing your major at a young age is very helpful, and it is an advantage for you as a student.
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Of course the first impressions are almost impossible to change, when you meet with someone, you are waiting that this person can be nice to you, it depens on how you are as a person, sometimes people can make you think good or bad about them , that doesn't mean anything bacuse you dont know how somebody really is as a person until you start knowing about them or start talking with them by any way, you can get information about them from friends or someone who already know this person in case you really want to know about them. It is okay to look over the person you will meet because that way you are feeling sure with yourself about what this person can do or say about you. Your personality is something that can define you as a human. If you want that people talk good about your personality when you meet them, you will have to give good impressions by doing things like saying hi when you arrive to some place, talk about the good things you have done, sports you play or any healthy activities you can achieve. If you are a socialist person you know people will look at your personality when you meet them because they want to know if you are a pleasing person, the minds can change, imporessions never do, even if you know a person for a long period of time, you will never forgot how they was before you meet them for the simple fact that the first time is something that almost nobody can forget. Another reason or example can be when you are looking for a job, you can give good impresions to your probably next boss and the people you will be working with, not just by how you acting it can be by how you are dressing too, your underwear many times can show much about you.
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Having school every single day is nobodies favorite free time to others it's there favorite hobby it also takes time and alot of studying to. There making everything so easy for us this year they will do 3 years of high school if I studying really hard to not stay for all 4 years by that addition they will be including to have courses during on summers or in evenings or may not be able to take elective courses. Which will be really helpful for me to have more hours to myself more of my free time I could studying way more to. More than I knew about these prgrams im glad I found about it because it can be a big change for me and everybody else. It's a 50 50 deal to me because your going to miss on 1 year ,but also you can do so much go apply to colleges and have a job because you would have more time for all the better thats coming to you. On the outcome you would be helping yourself out spend your summer on school time or you can have less hours of going to school on evenings sleep in more in the miday. All 4 years you can be doing the total of 3 years you would just be doing fulltime but it's also the choice you make on evenings or in the summer days. Luckily you can do anthing what you want and could imagine if you can put your mind to it and it will appear better days. Although everything in life you will get because its how you want your future to be but if it's for you it will not go away. At any age you can graduate young or as a older person but when you do you will be a successful leader. My main priority in life is school since I was a child I always love coming in to school it was always my focus in life to overcome the end of it. School has always been my favorite because you saw your friends and it's how you start your day also good connection than having a studying buddy to make everything work. A high school deploma is your way to the next door it's access to everything you will ever need later on to your future. After your done high school you will be feeling as a pot of gold apply in purssure and you will get there apply to many awesome colleges and now that you have time you can have a job. The program is an outstanding choice and make the choice now your missing on a life time opportunity.
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Due people has to do all by they self? Sometimes is hard to do all the job with out help. Or sometimes we only want some one who can we talk to. By working alone it makes feel alone. I believe that working with a group is better because we meet new cultures, we learn how to communicate and we help each other. We meet new cultures by others student who are in our group. We start to learn know his culture and what they believe. We start to learn about they language and how they communicate in their language too. Also the food and the music from their country. Meet new persons from others country's is good so that way we start to know more about the world. We learn how to communicate with others person not only our language in others to. We start to talk with new person's. We start to share thing's from our culture and what like to do and our free times. We start work together and getting better by communicating. Communication is important for every one. In groups we can help each other in projects or even in late work if we miss a day of class. Went there is a new person the group can help the new student with school stuff: where the next class is, where the cafeteria is, where the buses stop, etc. Also be in a group helps to perform our skills for communicate and language. Be in a group also help to make work more easy because we help each other by putting ideas together. Groups are the best way to perform language speaking. Some people might say work alone is better because is only my self no one more, but in a group is more easy way to learn with help. Know new culture's from different's parts of the world is fun. Communicate is something important for live and our society to. We give support, we get support by working in group. Interact whit people helps a lot and make work more easier.
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Im talking about if the school days should be extended by one and a half hours or not and the effects it'll have towards the students, teachers, and the whole school together. So adding an hour and a half to a school can open a lot of opportunities to learn, more electives, and what most students would think of a longer day at school is bordem, but school is where you socialize the most during the day and as a kid school is where you meet most of your long time friends so there is more then just being bored at school it's a place you can socialize, have fun, and learn all in one day. If it were up to me whether to leave the school schedule as it is or to add an hour and half to the school day I would have to disagree because if the teachers were to give piles of homework then when you get home you'd be exhausted and drained to the point where you arent able to then even if you did manage to then you would be so tired that it would effect the next day which would cause you to barely do any work in school so the students need to get out of school so they can get their homework done. If students were to stay at school till 4pm assuming there bedtime is around 9pm then the would basically only have 5 hours to do their homework but wait so then imagine if they had chores to do around the house then once they've done their chores they'd be even more exhausted so after all that they had done what if they wanted to relax a little bit now they have such little time to do anything during their time off from school that they might have to stay up longer then they usually do now it's about 6am in the morning after last night they could barely get a goods night rest and their body and mind are completely drained for today and all they have is good breakfast to get their mind to at least keep them knowledgeable for the day and this whole cycle repeats over and over but then you can at least get a good weekend of relaxing so that you'll be refreshed for the weekdays. I disagree with the decision to extend the school day because of the effects that it has towards students and how it can effect their mind and how much productivity they are able to produce could be affected due to overwhelming amount of work put upon a child. There are definitely many pros to having a good education and to be able to live a good life. Students may not want to go to school and can find it very overwhelming but at the same time the students are working very hard so they can have the best possible life they can. School is a place where you go to learn, have fun, and the school has provided the time so that students can learn what they want by having electives that they like the best because that what they might want to be when they grow up because if the school didn't have such excellent teachers the students could never succeed on their own and that's why the teachers have to relate to the student so they can have a much better understanding so that they can proceed to adulthood where their decisions can affect them badly.
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Taking classes online or video conferencing is one of the best way to help students,who can not afford to go to college and for older people that couldn't get the chance to further their education because of their financial state. Financial issues has become one of the problem in this generation of mankind, whereby students either have to pay to live on campus or out of campus to further their education,which has caused a lot of students out of school dorms because, they struggle to pay for them. Most students have daily jobs to help them afford to pay the bills, based on their level of education. Working and schooling is a difficult task on students because, one have to make time for school and work to be able to make everything easier and stress free. Transportation and parking space has also been an issue for some reason, why some students prefer to take online classes from home to prevent them from being late to class. Colleges with large mass of land may not have enough parking space for students and we also believe that, not every student own a car or any type of moving vehicle where by one needs to park. when one is being able to attend classes from home, they get the chance to begin their lesson anytime during day after a long stressful day. Students benefit from being able to attend classes online from home because, they accomplish more and get worked done faster in due time. With less distractions, they understand and enjoy the lesson, it helps them concentrate and more focus on what is being taught to them. They get to ask questions online, they also get more time to go over the lesson again to the right state of understanding the lesson. Lecturers reduce a lot on online students with less work and projects for them to have be ready for other assignments being given to them. Taking classes online or video conferencing gives one enough to take care of other things, to be on time for lectures, help other students that couldnt go to college to feel they also have the right to achieve their goal once in a life time and to help others without transportion save money and more organised and time managment.
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The purpose of always doing something helps us get different kinds of experiences, it helps us accomplishe what we are doing and gives a purpose to what we want to do in the future. Throughout life, the experiences that you get can help keep you motivated on what you should and shouldn't do as well. In comparsion, when you are inactive you aren't benefiting from anything and you are just not getting enough experience for what you want to do in the long run. This is a major factor on how well you live your life and how you want your life to be. I do suppoort that we accomplish more when we are always doing something and it helps contributes to how we all live our daily lives. One factor why I believe that this contributes to our daily lives is that, it helps you get an education on something new or just a job that you are interested in. While, going to school and getting an education is a major rule in a human life; it is not for everyone and it all depends on how much effort you put in and if you are willing to put in the effort as well. In many different countries and cities, not all jobs require an education all you have to do is have experience in a certain area or part that makes you want to learn more. This helps decrease inactivity and upbulid activity while you are doing something like helping your community, feeding the homeless, giving advice to young kids. It all just depends on how well you put yourself out there and willing to make a committment about it as well. A second factor why I believe you feel accomplished by doing something is that, it gives you a purpose in life and a feeling that won't be given again. From my experience of helping kids with their homework afterschool it has always given me always a good feeling and making me proud that I am helping the community. This helped me gain self-satification for myself and let me understand the importance of showing kids at a young age how to be accomplished when you put the energy and time too. Another example I ever felt when doing somethingis when I play lacrosse , and how everytime I don't make my mile time I strive to do better for myself. Lacrosse has helped me put in an understanding on how self-satisfication doesn't come easy it takes time and effort. This benefitted me get motivated for what I should do more and always helping me understand that if I put in my time and energy then there won't be a problem on feeling accomplished. Doing something you love and getting that satisfication helps you serve purpose and feel more accomplished for yourself as well. One last example of how always staying active can help influence your accomplishment is that you are acknowledging that you are given a purpose to uphold. I do feel like many people don't seriously take the opportunites given and it is very hard to undertake as well. I would certainly always feel accomplished when doing something that can help let others know I care and not just for my own image. I agree that many different factors can influence decision making but also making others understand how important you are to someone as well. In conclusion, the more work you put in ;the more you are in feeling accomplished and in pleasing yourself as well. This can help give you a self-esteem boost for yourself and let others know that you are willing to put in dedication for yourself. Many people that I have talked to said that they have always felt like their ciommunity helps them grow and feel like they should give something back as well. Doing something remotely even small can benefit anyone's day in comparsion in doing nothing. Working for what you need to do is different for working for what you want to do and this helps you understand the need for self -satisfication and social-satisfication.
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I think that they should not do a homework club because what if students don't got time for that. A other reason would be is that many students don't do their homework nowdays so it was just be a waste time for the teachers unless they are getting paid extra for staying after school now thats a differnt story. A other reason is what if none of the students stayed after school the school would have to be sure if students would a tend this homework club. Students should be able to do thier homework on there own to be honest so that way they learn more cause maybe the teacher might be giving the students the answers and that's just not right! My other reason why they shouldn't do the homework club is what if most teachers don't give out homework like i don't get a lot of homework but maybe somone else wouldn't get homework. Would any teachers parpicate in the homework club, do they know that teachers would argee on doing this club? How long would this homework club be a hour or 30 minutes at what would it end because students have stuff to do out of school. Do pranets know about this club would they let their childiren stay after schook is a way for them to get home if anyone can't pick the student up?? Would this homework club interfir with any other after school clubs or what if students already do a club and they need help with homework but they can't go to the homework club because they have to go to the club they do. Does the whole school want to do this or just some students cause not this club would be worthless. In conlusion i think that they should not do the homework club.
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People discussing that by your own behavior the best way to influence other people , or are there better ways to influence. For Example, have a good behavior I make better person for influence to family and can teach to brethren thing good thing good in the future. Other people think, that influence to the children with bad thing not is good because they can learn thing bad in yours life. However, this can cause problems in the children because they learn bad influence of the person older and have bad record for yours future. Children learn bad influence of the person older. for example, when a children see to parents smoking or drunk they learn the that parents make. have bad influence is when a person have bad behavior and bad behave. Many person learn bad influence since children because the parent not the educate good and not the learn good thing. Have bad record for future. For example, when a person it's in the prison or when to commit a crime, this person no can escape to other country because already it's register in the system of other country. Have bad record in your life no es good because this affect for the remainder of yours life. Many people that commit ofensa because not are person with good manners and too person that have children and not give good education the that teach the same that they learn. In conclusion, the parent have that teach good influence and teach good behavior to the children because the children are the priority and the future of every country. For example, when a child and person learn to teach to the other good influence the humanity outside better because not have more crime and delinquency. This is very important because everyone of the person have that learn the good of the life and teach to the other the best because the influence the teach and also wreck.
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It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Some people think that are impossible to change, because they had been said or think that you cannot change your first impression, when you at first meet or start knowing someone, that is not true because clearly you can change your first impression, even though it can be the same or different as the first impression you had at the beginning of everything, but you may also be insecure or confuse of your own thoughts and feelings. I am in disagreement with this prompt that it has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change, because just imagine clearly your first impression it may not be the same when at first you start knowing someone, when at first you meet someone, or even when at first you look someone by the first time, people may also said that is impossible to assume your first impression at someone, because your perspective of someone may be different from another perspectives of others, you may have the same perspective or also different from other people. The day when at first came to United States it was really hard for me and for my family from Mexico, I was really nervous and also a little scared, it was one of my dreams that became real, I was so impressed and surprised of everything, the first impression that I used to have of United States changed, now that I am living in United States, the impression is different because now I know how is to live in a different country. Not always is going to be how you thought it would be, but it can be even better, even thought your impression was different or was the same at the beginning. The day I came to this school Generic_School, my impression from when I meet my counselor Generic_Name were different from my impression after I meet her, I thought she was going to be really mad and mean counselor or I even thought she was going to be a counselor that doesn't like Hispanic people, but all my thoughts were wrong, my impression was really wrong because my thoughts about her were wrong, now that I know how is my counselor, my first impression and perspective changed from the one that I used to have and believe. In conclusion, as the end of this prompt that it has been first impressions are almost impossible to change is wrong, that is not believable because your first impressions and your own thoughts can be wrong, even though you thought it was going to be something at the end is not how you thought it was going to be, first impressions are possible to change because they can be wrong even though your perspective can be true, or it can be also wrong. Don't let first impressions to trick you because they may be wrong, you can change them if you want, but make sure to be secure.
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I don't think the principal should make the students clean up litter or do community service because they might have other thinks to do with their family's. Elementary students can probably do it because they might not have anything to do because they still in elementary and they probably have time to pick up litter or maybe jr high students can help too if there not to busy maybe some of the students that don't play any sports can probably help too. In some schools the principals are probably gonna require all the students to do community services because how they probably act or maybe she or he gonna make they bad people do community service. People like me can probably do it on weekends just to help others because im always busy during the week. The principals should make the people who act bad during the week and during the weekend that will probably help them change a lot they gonna get tired of picking up litter and doing community service.
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The quote says, "Unless you try to do something beyond what you already mastered, you will never grow." I disagree with this statement. Because people need extend their studies, so that they can learn new important information that can benefit new research, also they can set new ideas, so they can make new studies and discoveries. Thirdly they can grow by teaching other people how to learn the same material . You can grow be doing a lot of different activities and teaching methods First way to grow is to try to learn more by studying. This is an important factor to learn more about in full detail like Isaac newton he discovers the law of gravity because of an apple that fell on top of his head. Then he makes a lot of theories about what may cause such phenomenon, so he studied it by creating equations and and a math subject called Calculus. Their are many others for example: Shakespeare, Beethoven, Albert Einstein, Stephen Hawkins, and Leonardo DaVince. These smart men did not stop because their is always something new to discover and grow. Second way to grow is discovering new information. Every single day people learn something new, which is a benefit our society weather it's good or bad because you can have new ideas or discoveries. An example is cancer. A deathly decease that can kill you and there is no cure. Scientist are doing experiment on trying to find a cure and that takes a lot of time to gather information. These scientist do not stop even though they mastered science. They want to continue helping people from suffering this bad decease they want to grow and learn more they will not stop until they find a cure, so people can live as long as possible with their families. Third way to grow is by teaching other people. Teaching other people can help you be a better person and letting people know your methods, so they can succeed with your help. Doing that will help yourself and other. It's another way to a good mentality, also you can grow bigger. In conclusion there are different ways to grow even though you mastered it. That is why I disagree with this statement, and their is never enough or to good to learn. I will never get tired of learning new fascinating stuff about this world and the outer world.
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Have you wondered why local companies and organizations plus the different schools doesn't add up well this will answer why? This prompt will try to figure out the answer of this question. These local companies and organizations that allow students from different schools should interact certain professions. Teachers and students can think of organization that allow other schools to join in that profession. I think i should do is help the students that needed help with the organization they wanted. If the employer wants me to visit I will say this if i get accepted for this job first of all thank you second is you probably want to go to my office. I chose this job is because I like to help other people with what they really need not want but need. Students should create new professions in the future so then the future students can access the professions that the students from the past did the same with teachers. The local companies can grow even bigger if they needed to. Some local companies and organizations hate students because they touch very expensive, valuable, dangerous items plus they don't even pay any attention to you. Others can be totally calm about it. They actually answer some of your questions, listen to you for once not faking it. This workplace that i'm working at (if i'm enrolled) well i had to find a backup job but it will take a while so i have to find specific job for it.
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Ralph Waldo Emerson believe that "to be yourself in a world that constantly trying to make you something else you not is the greater accomplishment." personally i disagree only cause now a days most young adults, child, and teens prefer to be around the same individuals who act, talk and basically does everything the same exact way. Its a little creepy in all honesty but its the world we live in where people just wanna fit in and act normal to seek comfort and approval from someone else even when they dont need. another reason i do not agree is cause this generation prefers technology over human contact so its easy to see why they dont go their own path but instead they prefer to just follow the crowd and not follow what they want its mind blowing how we gotta take an sol too just to see if you smart when all you can do is just sit in a class and listen to a student and see how smart they are without a dummy boy test but im just a young student whos following the crowd just to get a diploma even tho at this point a diploma will barley take you far but it looks good on resume so thats why i am doing this exact test to follow the crowd of dead students just trying to graduate for a family that dont even care if im dead or alive as long as i got a diploma
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My Talent A talent or skill is something that is unique about everyone. It takes time to develop a talent or a skill. A talent or skill basically is something you are good at doing. Many people have the ability to move their ears, but some don't. Most people like dancing and are good at it, so it is a talent. Around the world, many people have more than one talent. My talent is to sing and write music. Some people in the world haven't found their talent yet. One way to develop talent is to try everything. If you try everything, you'll eventually find something you are good at. During this process you'll probably be trying different things you haven't done before, like sky diving. Even though finding a talent or skill might sound hard and take some time, it can be done easily. By trying everything you can find many actives you might be interested in. Soon, those activities might become a talent or skill. Sometimes by trying everything, you might not be able to find your talent, but you can always look at it another way. Trying different strategies can be helpful to find a talent as well. Another way to develop a skill or a talent is to make a checklist. You can make a checklist about the activities you would like to try. Most researches say, a talent is something you are interested in doing. If you are interested in baking, it might soon become one of your talent or skill. Simply by making a checklist, you can find many interests. Even though there are a lot of steps for making a checklist, you'll will find a talent or skill soon. The third way to develop a talent is to go outside. If you go outside, you will learn and experiences many things you didn't know. Many people these days are stuck in there electronics and never notice the world outside of them. If you go outside and explore you'll find many interests and enjoy them. The world outside of us is big and has a lot to offer and has opportunities, like cooking, acting, sing, and e. t.c. There is so much that awaits in the world. Everyone has a talent or a skill, if not, they can find one eventually. Three ways to develop a talent or skill is to try everything, make a checklist on activities that interests you, and go outside. These three ways can help you find a talent and your talent may help you find career. Sometimes the activities you are interested in and are good at doing, might not be your talent, because skills and talents can just be hard to find. A talent or a skill is something that is unique and plays a good role of describing who you are.
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Everyone would like to receive praise for their work, even if the work is not their best effort, that will make them not to think low of themselves and just give up. In my opinion, true self-esteem comes from praise because it gives an individual determination, and self confidence. Although, some people believe that self-esteem comes from an achievement because it gives self-discipline; for instance, a student did a poor job on a classroom test , that means he is not receiving any praise and didn't achieve anything, but because of that he will be self-discipline, so he would do a good job next time and receive an achievement. I think true self-esteem come from praise because it gives an individual determination. For example, if a student gets a non pleasant grade in class, and the teacher praises the student but also tell him to do better next time, that would give the student hope and determination to do better next time. In addition, true self-esteem comes from self-confidence. For instance, I am in a soccer club, but every time we practice I don't do better because I don't have the confidence, but instead of the coach cutting me off the team, he came up to me and told me that I can do better. He praised me and courage me to do better. That is going me to build self-confident in me and I would start doing better during practice. According to my reason and examples stated above, I think true self-esteem comes from praise because it gives a student determination and help build self-confidence in a student. To all the teachers, please praise a student work and let the student feel like the can do more and better.
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Do you think attitude is a big part of life? In society today the main factor to your success is having a good attitude. A positive attitude is important because it may help you with new people, jobs, and will bring more joy into your life. With a positive attitude it can help you meet new people. Being uplifting and joyful will help you with being in contact with new people. If you have a bad attitude people will usually not want to interact with you. Attitude is a main factor with starting a new friendships or relationships. With having a job, attitude is the key to doing your best. When going to a interview having good attitude makes a good first impression. Also, with having a job and talking to customers you always have to have a positive attitude towards the customer. Teamwork, having a job you have to work together and communicate with one another in a positive manner. A good attitude will bring more joy into your life. Without a positive look in life you would be miserable all the time. When being positive you have a better outlook on life. You have to be welcoming to others instead of pushing them away. It's important to stay positive in life, if not it will bring more negativity towards you. A positive attitude is important because it can help with meeting new people, jobs, and it'll bring more joy towards your life. Having a positive attitude always, can be a bad thing as well because some see that as a sign of weakness but overall a good attitude will make you succeed in life. In the future a positive attitude will make life stress free.
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When asking for advice, 93% of the people in America talk to more than one person. I think seeking multiple opinions will help you make a better choice rather than asking one person for advice. It could also help you out with other situations through out life. This is why you should talk to more than one person when asking for advice, you can get other peoples opinions, the way others understand your situation, you can see situations differently. When you talk to more than one person to ask for advice you can get other peoples opinion. Everyone you know thinks differently. Sometimes people may have some of the same thoughts but not every situation has the same solution. What one person has to say is different from what another person says. People understand things differently. Some people you talk to will not understand your situation. They will not see the situation the way you see it. If they do not completely understand your situation they could say the wrong thing. When they say the wrong thing it could make your situation a lot worse. You should always have multiple people you know you can trust and you could talk with to ask for advice in any situation. While others will know exactly what to say and do because they probably have been in situations like yours. You can see other situations differently. When you talk to more than one person to ask for advice you start to see things differently. It changes the way you think about any situation. You will have an open mind and you will know what to say when other people ask you for advice. Knowing what to do when other people ask you for advice can help you out with a lot through life. It can help build stronger relationships and people can trust you. Trust is very important because people can talk to you about anything and you will know how to react and what to say. In conclusion, talking to more than one person to ask them for advice can help you make the better choice. It can also help you out with other situations later in life. This is why you should talk to more than one person when asking for advice, you can get other peoples opinions, the way others understand your situation, you can see situations differently.
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Do you enjoy spending time outdoors? People are always looking forward to playing outside. They spend most of their time outdoors. Kids who have nothing to do always consider going outside. swimming, basketball, and playing in the playground are enjoyable outdoor activities. Swimming is a fun and enjoyable outdoor activity that people love to do. People of all ages enjoy swimming. Swimming is also really healthy and good for your body. Kids enjoy swimming because they're many different things to do while your swimming. Kids love to play games in the water. Elders enjoy swimming because it relaxes their bones. Swimming is peaceful, fun, and safe. Basketball is a sport that many people enjoy. Most parks always have a basketball court. People even have basketball hoops at their house. My school recently did a vote on the most enjoyable sport, and 80% chose basketball. Basketball is played throughout the entire world. Schools also have basketball courts for students. Playing in the playground is an activity kids love to do. They're many different things to do while playing in the playground. Most parks always have a playground. Kids appreciate playing in the playground. Some people have playgrounds in their backyards. playgrounds are safe and fun for kids to play in. Students love going to school just so they can play in the playground. Kids can play at the playground all day without stoping. In conclusion swimming, basketball, and playing in the palyground are enjoyable outdoor activities. These outdoor activities are played throughout the world. So what are your favorate outdoor activities?
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Teacher want to make a homework clube for student at schools. I think they want to start this club so students do there homework for offten and teacher are going to helps you if your need help. This is going help kids be responsible and learn more. Doing a homework club after school is going to help kids alot. 2. I think its a good idea but also a bad idea. The reson why i think its good is because it can help kids if they need help. The reson i think is a bad idea is beacause kids are going to have to stay after school but its bad cause they might have somthing planed. Its good and bad cause kids need to learn how to be responsble. 3. Tenns/kids might think its a waist of time. They might get bored and just might not to there homework. They wont like staying after scchol kids and teens might just think its a waist of time. They just mont like it at all. 4. i support this because its going to help students out by doing there homework. Students are going to do there homework now. Even tho they might thinks its dumb its not its relly going to help them. Hopefully student start doing there homework now.
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Using the checklist is important because if you think something is done incorrectly, you can see on the checklist and go over the checklist for writers. If you see something that you might have done wrong, you'll know the mistake that you did. But if you refuse to check the list for writers, you might not know what you did wrong, and you might make the same mistake over and over again. Making sure you have everything correctly, can help you in the future and you will learn a few skills that you might have not known about. Not everything has to be done perfectly, you could make a few mistakes and you could be fine with it. Some people like everything to be done perfectly well and done correctly, learning a few skills can make you have better achievement than others. Other's may not want everything be done well and say "eh, good enough." or say "well, thats close enough." Everyone has different opinions and different thoughts. Most people are too lazy and don't want to check the checklist for writers, or just want it to be over, so they don't check and get things done incorrectly. Checklist for writers has everything a writer might need, like seeing if you have done your grammar correctly or if you use sentences in a great term, and use punctuation correctly. Those few skills and make you a better writer and make you successful, editing is one the checklist for writers. Editing is important because you edit things and make it better by making it amusing or interesting. Editing something can be fun because you can get to add things, have plenty of more ideas. One of the important things besides using good grammar and spelling is making your message clear. People can get confused because they don't know what kind of message you're trying to give. People can misunderstand your message and you might get embarrassed because they couldnt understand your message. Thats why you need, well you don't need to, but its better if you do check and see if your message is done well.
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Dear Teacher, I think that working in group or working alone has some advantages and disadvantages. But in my opinion I would say that one that is more beneficial is working in a group. Working in a group is less work and more ideas. As I was saying that their are advantages and disadvantages, My first advantage of working alone is that you get to work alone with no distraction from others. Second advantage is that you can focus and ask the teacher for help. Last reason is that you can put as many ideas you want and a lot of effort and ask the teacher to check your work to see how you doing working. The disadvantage of working alone is that you will not get the work done faster. My second reason is that working alone is not fun because you working independent and doing all the work. My first advantage is that working in group you get to hear different ideas from each other. My second advantage is that you can talk together and gets lots of ideas and fix mistakes together. Last advantage is that working in a group you can finish the work faster. The first disadvantage is that working in a group their is going to be too much talking and also not focusing. Second disadvantage is that when you are working together some times one person does the whole work and the other doesn't. Last disadvantage is that you can easily get destructive and not get the work done. To conclude this I think working in a group is more beneficial. I choose working in group because their are many advantages. Therefore working in a group is less work and turning in work fast, As a result you won't have to worry about asking for help or not having ideas because thats is why you are in a group to get your work done and have a lot information. Sincerely, Generic_Name
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Students use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes. The students we should to consider for what they permit us use our cell phone in the class, and they give us the opportunity and don't spend our time and others things and we should focus in our work. Many student's when the teacher said you gays can use your phone in the class for search information or some work sometimes that we do is play video games, or see Facebook, Instagram or something else and we don't focus in that the teacher said in the classroom, and spend our time and things that affect us. For example i know a person when i was in my country when we are in the class the teacher said search information in internet that story of this person or when we was in math class, uses our phone for the calculator but there was one girl that she never do that the teacher say and she start to see Facebook and send messages to his friend that are in the same class and that affect the persons who her is message sometimes there is students that they absolutely do that the teacher say or the school and that case, is really good idea use the cell phone cause help us in the class or to have more information about something that we want to know for example in my case i am a person that don't have too much time in this country, and sometimes when i am reading in my English class and find one word or sentence what i dont know what is that means i need search information about that for understand what am doing, is the same in my math class too much times i dont know how traduce symbols and need use my phone for that i think of that way is very good, school permit us use our cell phone too can be the best way for learn more things and makes our work in the way that the students likes also can be more helpful for the student's and also for the teacher's. I think all depends of the student, use cell phone in class can affect or also can be good idea for learn in the school the school give us the opportunity, that use our phone we should that feel grateful for the opportunity and uses the phone for the work not for other things what can do that our grades come down.
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The statement is "the first impression is almost impossible to change" which is a different feeling for everybody, but for me, I disagree. In fact, the first impression is really important and sometimes true, but I think the first impression does not define a person, an object or a situation. Having a first impression is a human reflex, like having an opinion or a judgment. We are doing it unconsciously. The first impression is most of the time not real, you need to search deeper to make an opinion and when you really have an opinion, then, the first impression is not important anymore. For example, when you meet someone, your first impression might be that you think she is supercilious and even a little bit mean. Therefore when you really get to know her deeper then you will find that she just had a bad day and that she is nice and sociable. Sometimes it's the contrary, a person seems really nice but in reality she is not, so your first impression was wrong. It is not good to stay on a first impression because most of the time it's wrong. Moreover, the physic, behaviors or attitude can change an impression. If the person do not smile and seems to be rude but in reality is the nicest person, then it will be awkward for you because you thought she was bad. Sometimes a person can have a bad reputation because of the first impression he shows and it is not his fault, some persons just don't smile every time. Sometimes you can be disappointed because you didn't get to know the person because of your first impression. The first impressions is not only for people but also for a situation or an object. For example if you are in a library and you want to buy a book, the first thing you are going to do is looking at the cover of the book. If it's pretty you will more easily choose this one instead of a book with a black cover and only the title, because it is your first impression. But your first impression is wrong because you didn't take time to read the resume and you will find soon that the pretty book is actually boring instead of the black book which is really interesting. An object can look nice but have a bad quality. The first impression is the color and the shape of the object, like the physic and the attitude of a person. In conclusion I would say that the first impression is sometimes right but most of the time it's not. In my opinion, you must not keep in mind your first impression of a person, it's most of the time wrong. You have to get to know the person to build your own opinion. It is normal to have a first impression, like judging, but you must not take the habit to stick with your first impression.
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Did you know that one of our students got 1000 dollars cash price because our principal put him in one of our school activity ! Our principal told us that we should participate in at least one of our school activity. First I did not like it. Then I thought of one kid that went to my school and got a 1000 dollars just because he was good at his activity. So I agree with this decision because students can get to know each other, students can a college degree, and it helps them learn new things. This activity can get students and new students to know each other. They can find there new best friend in there. New students can get out of there shy sell and can make new friends there. Even old students can make new friends there too. Probably the whole class room can become friends ! Kids can get to know each other more better if there in a school activity. If a student is good or great at there activity. They can also get a big college degree in it. Like Art or sports. there art work can go in a Art Show or in sports you can go in a big show ! Maybe you can get a college degree in any activity. Also can get money and a college degree. Students can learn new things in there school activity. Students don't know yet what and what not there good at yet. So students need to try out for these activates so they can know. Student can explore too. They still have time to try out new things and to find out what there good at. They might be good at drawing and they just don't know it yet. Probably your good at drawing too. Theses school activities can help you and your future out. Students can get to know each other more, students can get a collage degree, and students can learn new things. Students can get better in school with this and there future can be made with this too. I think this is going to be a good plan for students and kids.
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Do you think that should be students finish high school in three years, enter college and get a job early? Some students, parents and teachers are agree with that the students finish the high school fast. I think the students should be finish high school in three years because, they will can graduate of the university more early, they will get a job fast and probably they will can do you're life better, to age early and be independents. In this paper, I will argument that in my country El Salvador; The High school is of three years. My old sister was graduated of the high school at you're seventeen years old. she enter to the university and now she will graduate of nurse at you're twenty-one years old, however, I feel that is better that the high school should be of three years because, I'm in the high school and I will graduate at my nineteen years old. I think that, I will late to graduate for the university, more if I take a profession of eight years to studies. In my school, the students, parents and teachers voted, to know how many are agree with that high school should be of three years. The 70% of the votes was the answers that yes, they are agree that the high school was three years. Some teachers says that, is a better way that the students will can have opportunity to graduate more fast, since that some students don't pass the class or the scholar years. They have the reason because, my brother don't pass the scholar years, now he need to repeat again the grade nine. He will take five years in the high school not four. My mom was graduated too at you're seventeen years old in high school. When she was twenty-five years old, she graduated of doctor and then she got a good job in the hospital. In the same time she went to night school because, she want to be too heart's specialist and she was graduated again when she had 30 years and now she have two good job, have better life. I think that she can graduate early, because she only got three years en high school. Three years in high school is better way to that the students can graduate early. Some school districts are disagree with that but, they are wrong because, the students will can have more fast a good job, if they going three years at high school. In the future I hope that the high schools will be of three years not four.
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Inactivity always serve a purpose Thomas Jefferson wrote; of how "wonderful much may be done if we are always on it nonstop." Will I believe, that inactivity always serve a purpose because in order to finish what your doing, you have to take breaks between them and your body won't shut down while your doing it. Although, some people may say we accomplish more if we are on it all the time. Inactivity always serve a purpose because in order to finish what your doing, you have to take breaks between them. To begin with, that's why now in days we have Saturdays and Sundays off. For example, our bodies wouldn't be able to function without any stopping point. Next, we're not even going to be able to sleep with all that pressure building up on us. Lastly, even animals take rest after along day of hard work to continue on moving. Inactivity always serve a purpose, because your body won't shut down while your doing it. For starters, we can be working, but we might be falling asleep at the same time anything can happen. However, we might even get hurt doing work hours depending on what your job is. To finish off with, we can lose our lives while driving or cost others. some may say we accomplish more if we are on it all the time, because we can get more work done and we can finish faster. First, we can learn something faster if we are on it all day nonstop without rest. Second, if we are on just on that we make better results of ourselves doing what we are doing. For example, if we are building an apartment or house you name it. We might just finish faster without a stopping point. It'll just take less time to get there, Just as a journey that takes you wherever you go without stopping. lastly, is great when you don't stop moving forward and accomplish your goals your'll make it. Inactivity always serve a purpose, because in order to finish what your doing, you have to take breaks between them and your body won't shut down while your doing it. Still, some people may say we accomplish more if we are always doing something. In the end, I believe Is all up to you to determine weather or not to be Idle.
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I think that failure is the key to success in life, That means that without having any obstacles you are not going to succed. Churchchill's is right that failure is the pursuit of success. You have to try to do what you want to do. If you have a dream to become someone you want to fight for it. Make good choices and try hard. Sometimes is hard to achieve your dreams, because maybe you are not capable to do things or you don't know how or where to start. You can ask for help to your parents, teacher, and people outside of school, so they can help you with something. People make mistakes, And they learn from it. You have to try over and over to do what makes you happy. You can fall down one or three times, but you have to get up many times you can. Make a plan, and write down the things that you want to do, and don' t be shy to ask for help when you needed. Be a enthusiam person, If you fail to do something try to do it again. Nothing is easy in life, with effort everything is possible. If you are in school try to do your best at school and ask questions to your teachers. For example: I am a high school student. At first I was a very shy person, well I'm still a shy person but not like I was before. I was shy to ask for help to my teachers and whenever I needed help I didn't know what to do because I was shy and quiet. At first I did't know how to ask for help, but then I realize that without asking for help to my teachers I was not going to succed, and I would never learn how to do things. I was also shy to asked my parents to help me with something, so everytime I needed something I used to go locked my self in my room and figuring thing out, But I also learn to ask them for help, even though they don't speak english, they still helped me with my school work. You have to do the same thing and ask for help to a trusted adult that can help you, so you can succed in your life, If you have bad friends stay away from them, because they are not good people and you are going to end up ruining your life. I believe that if you fail, try to do it again. Do what makes you happy and succed in your life. Make an effort and achieve your dream, because you are living of that, And if you fall down get up and do it again.
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Have you ever thought of the affect of going out after 10 p. m. at night? Night time is the scariest period of the day; nothing is more dangerous and harmful than at night. People would rather stay at home than going out at night. A city council should adopt curfews for teenagers because it is safer, teenagers can stay out of trouble and they can have more time to spend with their family. However, some people think that curfews would unfairly interfere in young people's lives because they might have an emergency and everyone has freedom to do what they want. In some cases, for instance, teenagers might have an emergency or something important at night that they need to be there as soon as possible, city council cannot let them stay at home. It will be unfair if other people can go out at night, but not teenagers. Everyone has freedom to do what they want, others cannot force teenagers to stay at home everyday after 10 p. m. at night. Although some people think that having curfews are not a good idea, I still insist that the adoption of curfews for teenagers would be a fantastic idea. In the first place, a city council should adopt curfews for teenagers because it is safer. It is very scary if teenagers hang out at night because someone might follow or kidnap them without they notice. No one knows what is going to happen next. Staying at home not only keep teenagers safe, it also make them be caution to everything around them. Furthermore, teenagers need to protect themselves from others, so that they will not get hurt. In short, it is necessary to adopt curfews for teenagers because they will be safer. Additionally, it is important for teenagers to have curfews because they can stay out of trouble. Teenagers nowadays have a very playful mind and they would do anything to enjoy themselves; however, they can get into trouble very quickly. Curfews can prevent and stop teenagers from breaking the law. They can stay at home and do something productive and meaningful to themselves. Moreover, curfews can prevent teenagers to meet harmful people outside of the society and make a bad decision. Therefore, a city council should adopt curfews for teenagers because they can stay out of trouble. Lastly, it is a great idea for a city council to adopt a 10 p. m. weekday curfew and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers because they can have more time to spend with their family. Spending time with their family is the best moment that nobody wants to miss. Instead of going out with people below standard and breaking the rules, teenagers can have a wonderful time with their family at home. Because of curfews, the relationship between teenagers and their family will grow and be healthier. To sum up, it is nice to have curfews because it helps build up a better relationship. In conclusion, it is the best idea to have a city council adopt curfews for teenagers because it can protect teenagers from danger and risk, they will less likely get into future conflicts, and they can have an enjoyable time to spend with their family. Curfew benefits both teenagers and the law. Curfews can raise the world to a higher level and make a clean society for all teenagers. Let's make the adoption of curfews come true!
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I want to visit Egypt because Egypt is a great country, I want to see the pyramids that are made from thousands and thousands years ago,and I want to see the great museums that are in Generic_City. The pyramids are very huge. There are like 3 big pyramids and there like 6 other pyramids aren't that big as the first 3 pyramids. Pyramids are so hard to build to make them again. The pyramids need a lot of stone and it need some are like very big stones that are located in the very bottom of the pyramids,and it's hard to reach the max high of the pyramids because they are so high up. These pyramids are from the 7 fantastic and amazing things in the world because no body on this earth now can build these pyramids. The people who built the pyramids called the Pharana. Museums in Egypt. Museums are a great place to visit when anyone will visit Egypt. These museums are huge but not huge as the pyramids. These museums have a lot of stuff that anybody world be interesting to see them, like people who died from thousands and thousands years ago, they did something like a magic or a process that keep their bodies, and the museums have their bodies. Anyone can see her or his eyes, face,legs,and head and thats absolutely real. These museums is in Generic_City. The Egyptian people have a great cultures. Egypt have a lot of good other stuff. It have beautiful places that anybody can walk in it and buy something to eat or drink. Some people go sit down and relax and others like buy some clothes from these shops in the mall, some oher people play games like soccer or other games,and there are a lot of these places in Egypt. Some kids play soccer in the street. Egypt is very diffrerent than any other country. These places located in Generic_City and one of these places called City Stars. The beaches in Egypt. Egypt have the mosy beautiful beaches, like if you go to Generic_City and there is two more places that I forgot the names for it. Egypt have a lot of amazing hotels and it's not located in Generic_City, it's located in some other places. Hotels in Egypt have swimming pools,free food,and free drinks. Anyone can have so much fun on the beach in the summer.
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Technology is an important thing in our lives at this moment and it will be more important in the future. Humanity always try to look forward for what is better for our lives and make everything more easier. While some people say this is a good thing, some people think it's bad for our lives because people stop interacting face-to-face in public, they don't want to get out of the place where technology is at, and some might have an agressive behaivor when they told them technology is bad for them. In the past people always met in the street, there was no technology were with a single ring we can saw our friends into a little screen and talk to them. Now, this problem became a bad thing in our society, people don't go outside to meet friends, or just enjoy how the city looks, they prefer to stay at home and talk to people that they don't know who they are. Some of these people might say that there's no difference when they talk to a stranger online because we used to talk strangers in the street;however, there's a risk when you talk to this people online and it's the fact that some of them used fake accounts to hack personal information and other things. When we used to meet strangers in the street, we saw how they behave and what they're doing, and that's how people made friends in the past, saw how they act and behave,but now Internet is the key of making a friend that we don't know if it's real. When we were kids it was all fun to play outside: in the streets,going to a friends house, or even going to the park with them, but now things have change a lot since we were those kids who played in the streets. Now with the new technology people made video games, and now is the popular thing between kids and teenagers. All we have to do is to connect the device to the TV and just play, but some people play the whole day and they don't want to go outside to play any sport, or going to a friends house. When they go to school the most common topic between every kid is about video games, and that can affect their lives because playing all the time won't help anyone to study for an important test,or doing their homework. In the past when they created the first console it was a wonderful thing, but some kids didn't have the enough money to buy it, so instead of save money for a tiny console, they save money to eat something like an ice cream, a burguer, and go to attraction parks,but now we can see how the kids and the teenagers from now don't want to get out where technology is at. Due to the amount of technology we have now develop, a new behaivor where if we prohibited them to use technology, they reach to the point where they become agressive. Families have issues when their kids became agressive just because the prohibited the use of technology, and this reaction is trendy right now in different parts of the world. Some doctors said that the reason why they react like that is because they are in an imaginary world where they can do whatever they want, until the parent try to take apart their"world" to become a normal kid, but now that technology is in every single corner, it's hard to make a kid stop use technology. Even teenagers went to a ponit when they are playing video games they break everything they got on their sight, including the video game device that their parents bought for them. Some people might say that technology is something positive in our live because we create artifacts that make our lives more simple;however, technology is bad in our lives because we stop acting like normal people and we want to make our lives more easy, and that can affect how our saciety can be in the future if we don't control the use of technology.
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If I was to explain to my teacher if I prefer to work in groups or work alone, I would pick work alone. Working alone is good because you could think of ideas that some students can't think about. For example,working alone can get you a better high score in the class then working in groups. Another example is when your working in groups it can cause you to not finish the work you started because your either talking or not focused in what your supposed to do. In some cases some students like working alone because they get to turn in there work on time so they don't have to fail the class. Another example, some students are really quiet and they are shy to talk to people so they work alone so they don't need to be behind everyone else who isnt doing there work. Students often don't really get a lot of help from other students when they work in groups. Often some kids make the mistake on joining groups but then when it comes to doing work only 2 students do the work and then the other 2 don't do anything. Students sometimes don't even do anything they just sit around and talk to there friends about other things then they talk about the work they need get done or there on the phone or playing games. For example some students don't like doing anything they just like to sit around and talk but on the other hand they are students that like doing there work so it's best to see that students like working alone then to be working in groups. In some cases some students don't let them talk to there friends because they think they are gonna make there child fail that class and some parents are gonna blame the friends then there own children. For example if a parent gets a phone call from a teacher saying oh your student is failing my class because there not doing there work like they used to before the parent is gonna feel bad because there gonna think oh my child is hanging out with kids there not supposed to be with. In my opinion I think it's best for students to work alone then to be working in group. Sometimes in life we want everything but sometimes we have to earn them all by ourselves not with someones help but our own help.
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Students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. When students enter high school, they begin to work at a specific job to earn some money in order to be prepared for their future career. It is not a good idea for students to commit to a specific career at a young age because it will cause distractions from school work, students are still getting education, and specific jobs will distract students from activities they enjoy. Students should not commit to a career at a young age because it will cause distractions from school work. In high school, teachers and other faculties take education seriously and gets harder for students every year as they develop. Students get a lot of homework and tests they have to study for and need to focus on education in order to graduate from high school and get to a good collage. Spending time on a specific job before their actual career can distract students and decrease their grades. For example, a high school student goes to work at a salon after school but they have so much homework and a test to be prepared for, but they have don't have enough time to study and accomplish their homeworks since their specific job is in the way. So they begin to get a low grade and fail tests, which can also give them a low self-esteem. Students should not commit to a career at a young age because are still getting education. High school students are still young and are still developing, they need to spend their high school years to study and get a good education in order to develop. In their high school years, students begin to get an idea of what they wish to be for their future career, so they are still learning about it and that's how they get a better amount of money, be well-educated, and live a good and healthy life. For example, high school student is not well-educated and is still developing, so they need to keep studying and learning in school to graduate and get to a good collage to study about their future career that interests them and the dream job they are wishing to work for. A specific career will take them away from their dream job. Students should not commit to a career at a young age because specific jobs will distract students from activities they enjoy. It is important for students to do activites they enjoy to be healthy and have something positive and enjoyable to do. When they get a specific job during their high school years, it will take them away from these enjoyable and positive activities they and will have no time to do it when they have a specific career and school, which can also cause stress for students and will never find anything positive that they enjoy to do. For example, a student plays football and really enjoys it and it gives them positive energy. But they have to go to school and need time to do their schoolwork and study to pass. When they get a specific job, they don't have time to do their favorite activity and also not have enough amount of time to study and do schoolwork, which can cause stress to students. In conclusion, students should focus on studying and education in high school and not get a specific career that will distract themselves from school or any activities they enjoy to just to get money. They have to keep developing and study hard to get to a good collage and be prepared for their dream job to get a good amount of money and live a better life.
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Yes you can influence other people by you setting a good example by your own behavior. When you give someone advice, on what not to do or what to do, they won't take you serious because you're not following your own advice. They'll see you as if you're playing around if you do the opposite of what you told them. That's why a lot of people say "Actions speak louder than words". There's a difference on saying things, and actually doing them. Therefore, there are people who knows you, and want to be like you. You never know if they can come up to you, out of nowhere and ask for opinions and advice. You can't just say anything, you can say something you do, and something you follow. Keep in mind that there's a lot of things people see in you. How you behave can change the way they see you too. Believe it or not, people actually see what you do. If you have siblings, they see your actions without you knowing, and they could do the same things. Giving advice to people is easy, but they would want to see you follow your own advice too. There's people who you might not know, but they do know you and they act the way you do because of the way they've seen you behave around them or around other people. People who tries to copies you and your actions. There are people in this world who watches your behavior and actions. Yes, you can influence others by you setting a good example by your behavior. set an example, before you give one.
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I remember when I was having a difficult time because of problems. I had a bad attitude but I counldn't have a bad attitude infront of my friends because they didn't fo anything for me to have a bad attitude with them. I had a good attitude with then at all time. People often credit their successes to having good attitudes. To have benefits of having a good attitude. Always smile infront of family and friends because you don't want them to think that something is wrong with you and ask you a lot of questions. Stay positive at all times because positivy can actually get you somewhere in life. Just act like nothing happened to you. Having successes even during a difficult time. Always try to make it through the day without thinking about it. Think about them good times even if it was with your friends or family. Go out and have fun and experience the world. Always believe in yourself and you will make it and be happy. Don't worry about nothing. Have a good attitude even if you are having a bad time in your life you will always get through it. Be true to yourself. Never be hurt have postive vibes.
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Working in a group is more benificial . Why is more beneficial working in a group ? because if you have a group your group can help you in ideas , writing ,examples and information. If you working alone you do not have someone who can supor your idea. The benefits what you have working in a group. The benefits are you can talk with your group abuth the work and also you can hask cuesthions and you can talk abuth examples and than they can toldyou how they can do the work and the group can suport your ideas. Working alone do not have to moch benefits. The benefits are you can use ideas of your shelf the other is not one goin to disturb you and you can put your examples but that will be more dificult because you need to find the information and not one goin to suport your ideas. For example working in a group in high school the english teacher say the students goin to do groups of four. For do a progect the students say yes, one of those students say i will colect the information, the other say i goin to writing the information and the other say i will put the examples of the progect and other say i will reading the progect and also i goin to do a expocition in class is more good because you will stay more relax because the group is help you. For example working alone in class, the high school teacher say we goin to do groups because we have a progect but if you want work alone you can do it. the student say i like work alone because no one goin to disturb in my work the studen can put ideas of him shelf but you do not have some one to talk abauth the progect. and you will have nebous inclass you will be distracted and boring. Why some people do not like to work in groups? the people do not like work in groups becase they have problems with the people in the group meybe he do not feel well in the group or he feel some nervous in the group or because some people lika work in silent. Why the most people like to work in groups? that is because the people like work with friends, he feel well talking with the group, he like answer the cuestions of the group.
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With can use cell phone in the classroom because it can help a person to identified a answer. If we can use cell phone for useful thing than it's good and if we missuse phone than it's not goods. Nowdays all school are allow to use cell phone. It's also help in study or to search something. If student are use cell phone in class for educational purpose than it's good and if they connected with social media or something else than it's effect to the study. Effect of phone like they connected with social media or something else , they cannot focus on study , or they cannot disturb by phone. If they use phone in useful then there is good like they can search anthing , they learn easily . There are to many thing are helpful and to many are harmful. Some teachers are allow to use phone in class and some are not. If we want to focus on study than we want to use phone in class for helpful thing like to search some topic or some thing related to our study. We can use cellphone on social media after class or before class it's defends on students. If we use cellphone in class then it is helpful and harmful thing. I support that we cannot use phone in class. We should focus on study. igore all the apps during class.
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The ancient Greek storyteller Aesop said, "No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted." Small acts of kindness can have an impact on othes because, if you do something good, if you do something important, if you help somebody. First, small acts of kindness can have an impact on others if you do something good like give food to somebody the it's hungry the person in going to be impoact because you are doing something important something the others didn't do. Second, small acts of kindness can have an impact on others if you do something important like yake care of something. Third, small acts of kindness can have an impact on others if you help somebody like help a person save her work for the person her work it's importat the person it's going to be impact if you help her and save her work. Is not important how small or biger are acts kindness the importnat the you are diing the things you are helping others you are doing something good for others and thats the important thing.
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I agree that a positive attitude is the key to success in life because people are Motivated , Happier and Work harder. Many people disagree that having a positive attitude doesn't mean anything and others think it makes a huge impact in success. Many studies have shown that having a positive attitude helps people succeed better and is a key. First, I truly believe that if you really stay motivated and I'm convinced that I want to be successful, I continue to push myself each time I want to give up. When I pay attention to the certain things I want to achieve. I give dedication when I want one specific thing and try not to worry about other things that aren't related to what I want or succeed. I try to stay as focused as possible because once I'm determined and make that my main focus, then It'll make me want to keep my positive energy towards my goal. Secondly, If I want to have a positive energy I must remain Happy. If I truly believe in myself then I will continue to have a positive energy, but even if I don't believe in myself I will remain to have a positive energy and a positive attitude. By succeeding with a positive attitude I must prioritize my goal making it my first reason to stay positive and to work harder. Keeping it always in my mind and reminding myself; for example " oh this is what I have to look for" or "this will help me by succeeding my goal I want to achieve", those two examples are ways to bring it to my mind all the time and remember what I need to be looking for. Thirdly, If I work harder by putting my all into it and dedicating my time and keeping my positive energy then that's one way i can always succeed. By keeping my energy positive and succeeding I will make work twice as much as I need to for my goal to come true. If I know i truly want that goal and what to succeed I won't give it up that easily because that will be my main focus and my main priority. Having a positive attitude is a huge key to succes because people get motivated, happier and work harder for what they are trying to achieve in life. Many people disagree that having a positive attitude is a key to success and others think it's a huge difference when you do because that's peoples main focus in life. Always have a positive attitude for the things a person including yourself may want in life!
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In my personal opinion the tecnology come here to help to us in many different positive ways. such as, shopping online, make a bills payments, now I don't need to go to the stores to buy something I need it. This method make me save time and something save money as well, because in some case online purchase are cheaper that go buy straight to the store. Make online payments is one the most part I like to do using the tecnology, because make me save a lot of time. back day I have to make a longers line in the stores to make my payments now I can do it from my house. when you buy something online now, you don't need to speak with someone to make a desicion because the stores webside are really expecific with their products, they give to you the details on what are you looking for and most the time give a exactly image how the products are. sometimes you can have fun time using the tecnology, play videos games is one of the good things we can do with the tecnology, with the videos games you can met new people from diferent part of the world, there exist some videos games provide you that option. learn new things always is good. This is a new type of style or life that most the people like it. Thanks to the tecnology by Email, my and my daughter teacher have more comunication, the teacher always keep me inform how my kid is doing in the school, Also that way I know all the event my daughter school have schedue. The tecnology is helpful for everyone beacuse help to everyone improve our knowledge, make our life more easy to handle it. In most the job the tecnology is using as a new tool, emails is the best way to share imformation in the work now. someone who know how to used the tecnology right, that person is value for two person. In conclution, The tecnology is the one of the most important things we have in our life now, if you are using it, you should realized is worth it.
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The reason why you should agree with Duke Ellington quote . First this is a good quote for students who are always working hard and make a lot of mistakes because they get motivated from this quote. This quote can make someones day better . First reason is there a lot of people in the world who has a lot of problems. so I think that this quote would light up there day and make them fell better. second reason is that people that dose not have any problems could save this quote in there brains and when they are facing a problem they could use it to help them through that time and to do better. lastly I think when Duke Ellington was going through trough times he used his own straghe to help him to do his best and not give up. Next reason why you should agree with Duke Ellington is that when people have a lot of problems most of them just give up for example most people dose not have enough money to pay there bills some sell their house while others sell the cars and most people become homeless and live in the streets but if the hear this quote it might help them not to give up and do there best. My final reason why everyone should agree with Duke Ellington quote is it's hard going through a problem because any thing can happen some people lose there jobs because of a problem. In conclusion I think that everyone should agree with Duke Ellington's quote because it can help you not give up when you are going through a problem.
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Some people they take art class because they like it and the other student they do in class for arts or they try to do art class. Example: The art class is make them good life and better because the other people they try to do art class but they try to do it. Example: Like I can say that for my sister, my sister she like art because she wanted to do art in her life, when she didn't know anything she was do art home and she was try her best to know art she wanted to know how they do art but now she do art because she try her best and the teacher tech her some thing she didn't know how she can do but now she she make art. The student do that because art is make money better the art class is very good to them some student they take that class because they know that is make better to them, Some of them they do art home and they do in school and they ask the teacher to help them how they can make art because some people they want to make sure if they know better. Some people they make art of the use of the Imagination the effort to produce beautiful objects, as by arranging forms, sounds, or words, some student they do group to make sure if they can help each other in class for art because if they don't help each other they can know anything They need to help each other and they can know each other some student they do that because art is make money batter. Example: The other student they go to school and they take art class because they want to make money but is not to easy to know art all time or to make one day the other student they try to do that in their home. The other people they believe that the art class is better to use,The art is make money to the other people that why the student need to take art class and art class is make better to them. If they get in college they can do art by self because they can know anything if they didn't do in school that why they need to remember that thing they was do in school some student they do that when they get in college because they want to make more money and they want to do little business. Some student they feel like they can draw something to make money and the people they can feel that the art is good to use, the student they cant draw some picture in class or in there house they can make to someone and they can to pay them the money if they pay them the money they can get more power to make art in her life some people they try that too.
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Education meals are important to students' ;having a meal given of our choice will help us improve obstacles that we phases everyday. A meal contains:the main course, a side of vegetable or fruit,and a drink of our choice. Given a healthier meal we will be productive in school,and our everyday life. Eating a healthier meal will reduce the chances of being obitisty. A lack of a bad food would result the chances of not getting enough knowledge,compare to having a healthy meal. The school cafeteria should serve a healthy meal. Students look forward eating lunch during school,because lunch refuels the mind,and the body with important victims. Lunch is the second important meal of the day,because students look toward a short break during school to refill their body,and mind. Eating a healthy meal in the middle of day will help students pay attention during school. Junk food is bad to serve during lunch, because it won't allow the students to be more active during the day,and pay attention in class. Overall students need a healthy meal to go on with there life during school,and outside school. Throughout the years the chances of being obesity has increased. One of the main reasons why is because school lunches has served unhealty food. Junk food is unhealthy for the human body,because getting enough food will make you gain weight. Calories are based on what you eat,eating unhealthy will make you gain weight while eating healthy will help you balance out calories. Eating healthy will help reduce the chances of being obesity. Eating a health meal during school will make the students be productive during school. Biting into an apple is the same thing, as drinking a sip of coffee. If we don't serve healthy food the chances of being active in school will decreases. If we serve our students unhealthy food than they will be lazy throughout the day. Giving the students a healthy meal will make them be more productive. Therefor serving your students a health meal for lunch will help them accomplish obstacles in school. Serving your students will help them improve of being smart. Knowing that if you serve your students healthy options on what to eat they will not be obese. Productive is based on what we eat. If you serve unhealthy food you the chances of being smart,being fit,and active in school will decrease.
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Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because the students like to have class in home. The students can use the computation to do her homework. The students can have time to do his homework. The students can use the online to do the homework and the his works. The video conferencing they can helping the students to do the worth and the homework. The students con have a video conferencing to took to the teaches when the students have a questions. The etudents like to have class in home. can have time to do sand in the home to do homework and can have all day to the work to the teaches. they can call to the teaches to helping when the student have a question. the most of the student can have class in hoe is morale to do writing. the stundents can have time to go to the job. some schools do have after distance learning as on option for students to attend class from home by way of online or videos conferencing
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As teens mature, they form opinions about issues that affect. Not is a good idea to said that first impressions are almost impossible change. Not is a good idea because all can be change, maybe we are expressions don't be nice. Is possible because to change because you don't feel that people you begin know take a bad impressions of you can and you can change. is very nice that people said he/she is very nice person and respectful. you can are more friendly. Is nice the have have good thought of you. Is possible because maybe you demonstrated you face sad or angry and you don't are like show you can change. You don't demonstrated when you don't are happy or have problems because nobody help is better you are always happy. When you are express in front someone said or do good things. you can be happy face. You personality is first thing the people are the first impression have of you. While some people that is possible because only for the people think you are friendly and maybe you don't are not only for this reason you need to change,Others argue that is possible to change because the people you begin know take a bad impression of you and you can change , because it possible because you want work in a place where you need demonstrated are friendly and smile and don't are like this they need in the job , you need change because so, the people don't want you attended. Is good demonstrated that we are nice person for what the people have good impression of we. It good that people think you are a person friendly and don't have any problem for this reason. Is good you first impression any job be nice because you form for treated the people is very important in any job. In conclusion not is impossible change you first impression that other people have you but you can demonstrated that you don't are the they think.
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Last week, I had a math test on my first period. I prepared well for the test, but on that day, I woke up late, and I realized I got late for my school. I also have missed my school bus; therefore, I had to walk the whole way to my school. I was tired and tensed. As a result, I couldn't do well in that test, but if I was taking online class, I could take the test from home and be able to not get into all this trouble. Online classes can save us from getting into all this kind of problems and save our time also. Although some say students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because sometimes, students might not understand their lecture or work on online classes, and as a result, they would not be able to do well in that class, actually students would benefit from being able to attend online classes from home because sometimes, students don't want to go to school because of sickness or being not at home, so they can stay home and take classes from wherever they are at that time and by taking online classes, high school students can save a lot of time and can work for more hours or do some other courses or activities. Those who believe students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home have their reasons. They say sometimes students might not understand their lecture or work on online classes, and as a result, they would not be able to do well in that class. For example, if they get a project or assignment, some students may have trouble in understanding how to do/complete that assignment or sometimes, they might not understand a topic from a lecture in online class. However, students would benefit from being able to attend online classes from home because sometimes, students don't want to go to school because of sickness or being not at home, so they can stay home and take classes from wherever they are at that time. For example, if I get sick, I don't need to miss school. I can stay at home and take my classes from home. Again, if I'm not at home or may be I'm at my relative's place or my friend's place, I'll be still able to attend those classes. Also, students would benefit from being able to attend online classes from home because by taking online classes, high school students can save a lot of time and can work for more hours or do some other courses or activities. One example is that, if I don't need to come to school to attend classes I would be able to make my own schedule and I can do my job for more hours in weekdays and save money for my college. Again, I can finish my school works quickly and take other courses which can help me in my future career or, may be I can do some other activities I like. In conclusion, students would benefit from being able to attend online classes from home because sometimes, students don't want to go to school because of sickness or being not at home, so they can stay home and take classes from wherever they are at that time and by taking online classes, high school students can save a lot of time and can work for more hours or do some other courses or activities. Online classes can help us in many ways. Not only it will save our time but also it can give us opportunity to do a lot of extra activities and enjoy the day.
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Hey my name is Generic_Name, and today im here at Generic_School talking with some of the students about life threating situtions where you have to take actions. let's say there was a lockdown in your school and the bad guy was at your classroom and he was banging on the door, and broke the glass window to unlock the classroom door now he found his way in! now the best thing to do is grab anything like books,desks,chairs anything you can throw at him. Now lets talk about fire drills the best thing to do is not panic, you just got to act fast and think smart your main priorty is for you and your friends to get out the building safely. follow your teacher during the fire, cover your mouth with your shirt or sweater dont inhale the smoke thats how you pass out from the smoke. Now the last thing im gonna go over with these 5 graders is what to do when an earth qauke is happening, the first thing u wanna do is get underneath or sink something stable tuck and duck your head. dont go under something that can fall on you that could be very risky and dangerous.
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It was a really nice day so we went to the park. We were going down the slide at the park, and I was with my brother, and sister. If I haven't told you what their names are, I'll tell you right now! My brother's name is Generic_Name, and my sister's name is Generic_Name, My name is Generic_Name. My siblings are pretty annoying, but I still love them. It was really sunny, and warm, Then this cute guy came, and right away I text my friends about it. My brother somehow started playing with Generic_Name. Generic_Name told me he already knew Generic_Name. He had a really cute little sister, and she's two years old, and her name is Generic_Name, and Generic_Name is ten years old. I asked Generic_Name what his brother's name was, he told me it was Generic_Name. When Generic_Name told me his brother's name, my heart started beating really fast, I was really happy that I would do anything in this world. Generic_Name comes up to me, and says hi, I was really nervous, me and Generic_Name were talking while are siblings were playing. We got to know each other, and now we're best friends. I'm so glad I met Generic_Name! We have so much things in common, we both like the same sport, which is soccer. The saddest thing is that we don't go to the same school, I go to Generic_School, and he goes to Generic_School. We got each others instagram, snap chat, and our phone numbers. We all wanted to hang out again, but tomorrow It's going to rain, and It's going to be really muddy, and wet outside. We got home, and we ate dinner, we all took a shower, and did our night routine. I had so much notifications from my friends, I totally forgot i sent them a text, I told them everything that happened. We had school tomorrow, and me and my friends were talking about it, but Generic_Name didn't seem as happy, as we all did. She told me she needed to talk to me, but in secret. So we went to the library. Generic_Name told me she knew Generic_Name, and she told me so much bad thing about Generic_Name. Generic_Name is Generic_Name's ex girlfriend. I was very upset, and started crying, I went straight to my house, and Generic_Name came with me too, she's my best friend, and she's always there for me, when I really need her the most, I told Generic_Name what Generic_Name told me. Generic_Name told me that all those bad things she told me about Generic_Name aren't true, she did that, so I would stop liking Generic_Name. I called Generic_Name that I needed to talk to him, so I gave Generic_Name my address. Generic_Name came over, I told him everything that Generic_Name told me, he told me she was lying, because she's jealous of me, and she liked him, but Generic_Name didn't feel the same way as Generic_Name did. Generic_Name told me that he liked me since the time, he made eye contact with me. I really didn't expect Generic_Name telling me that, I thought he would never like me. I don't trust a lot of people just my best friends, and my most favorite teacher, because the people that care about you the most, are the ones that want the best for you, they're not jealous of you, like Generic_Name was. Girls shouldn't change over a guy that doesn't feel the same way as you do, and boy's shouldn't either! God has someone waiting for you! If you really trust someone, don't loose their trust! A lot of people can give bad or good experience to you, but you have to see who's being a bad friend to you, and who's being a good friend to you. There are a lot of people that can give you bad influence, and a lot of people can give you good influence. Be careful in who you trust, there are several people that are there for you no matter what. If there is something wrong with you, talk to the person you feel more confident talking to, you can talk to your mom, dad, your principle, counselor, dean, or anyone you truly trust. There's always a time where you accept some bad friendships, that give you bad influence, but it's okay. I did to for accepting my friendship with Generic_Name, if she really was a good friend, she would of told me she wants the best for me, and not lie about something that isn't even true, When someone lies to you, it's hard for you to gain their trust. You have to learn your lesson to the people that lie, your realize how you loose friends by just lying. Me and Generic_Name are now dating, we are focusing in school, because school is important, and no matter what others say, me and him are going to be happy, and no one will ever change that. Be careful in who you trust, and never change for anyone, because you are amazing just the way you are!
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Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make better choices because they can get different perspective from other people, more option to choose from, and other ways to solve problem. Things can go really bad sometimes if someone doesn't ask for more than one option to choose from. First of all, getting different perspective from other people is anther reason for someone to ask for multiple opinions. Let's say Generic_Name was going to the mall, but when she got there she didn't know where this on store that she really wanted to go was. She asked a dude where it was and the dude said " In the second floor". She went to the second floor and did not find the store so she asked another person and other person said "It's on the first floor next to the ice cream shop". She went down to the first floor and went next to the ice cream shop got an ice cream and found the store. Generic_Name was so happy she found that store because if she had it asked the other person she would never had found the store. Second of all, having more than one opinion is better right?. For example lets say Generic_Name moved to New York and it was her first day of high school, she had know clue where her school was nether her parents. Generic_Name parents told her to just walk to school and see where other students where going. She saw this girl with blue eyes and brown hair, " "She looks like a high school" Generic_Name said, so she ran up to the girl and asked "Hey what's your name" Generic_Name she said I'm in high school what about you" "Oh same" Generic_Name said. When they got in the school Generic_Name had to go in a complete different way and Generic_Name was complete lost again. However, While Generic_Name was walking in the hallway she was asking a bunch of people to see where she had to go. She got multiple answers saying to go to the same place. See asking multiple opinion is better than one because what happen if she only had asked one person they could had been room and she could had gone to the wrong room. Lastly, Another reason why seeking multiple opinion is good, is because it can solve problems. For example, Generic_Name was having a sleepover with two friends. They were making food in the kitchen when her mom told her not to. While they were having fun cooking the oven caught on fire. Generic_Name was finking out she didnt know what to do "AHHHHHH WHAT SHOULD I DO" she said freaking out. One of her friends said call 911 while on the other hand her other find told her just trow water it will be fine your so dramatic. Generic_Name decide that calling 911 was the smartest or lets say better idea. 911 came and solved the problem. Overall, seeking multiple options can help someone make better choice by getting different perspective from other people, more options to chose from and can solve problems. Generic_Name found the mall she had to find, she found the place had to go and her house didnt burn down. Let's just say somethings really bad could had happen if Generic_Name didnt ask for more than one opinion.
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I think that students should take a art, muisc, and drama class. Cause by taking these classes they can learn more about what happens ineach classes. Also, if they do one of those classes they can recive credits on their GPA. First reasoon, student can learn what happens in that class like art. Art is a great elective class because tehy can have more credits and they can learn more interesting things in that class. Also, art can do things for the student because while time pass and they are great in drawing it could take him or her to collage it could make better digree collage. For example, if you also can be in a art contest in your school or anywhere else. Secondly, students can do these classes. However, music is also a great elective class because it could help you like in school and anywhere else because they know how you sing. But, music is not only singing students can also play insterment like giutar, flut and many more. So, student can also impress them with insterment. Also, it helps with credits by it could take them to a different better collage. Lastly, these classes are better to take as an elective class because they can perform in events in school like drama. Drama is a great elective class because students get to move around and have fun and dance. Also, they can do it on their free time and as their elective class. For example, students can impress their family with their amzaning talent. Also, with their talent they can go to different countriesand perform their and other places too and preform too. In clousion, this is why students should take art, music, drama as their elective class. That ways they can get credits for doing these classes. imrove with their talents and go around the world.
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