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BA0D3D6A8A94 | I disagree with this plan. I say this because the amount of hours we come to school everyday is enough. If the school board add another hour and a half to the school day all students will be tired, and the students would not be able to learn everything during the day. Being in school for a long period of time and getting homework would put a lot of pressure on the students. For most students the amount of time we come to school at the moment is already putting a lot of pressure. If the school board add another hour and a half most of the students will surely dislike school and maybe even drop out or show no interest in school work or homework. Students would also have a very short amount of time to study for tests or the big projects that they have to finish outside of school at home because some students have a part time job.
Students need some free time for their happiness and physical health. As a middle school student I can say that I get to have free time and do my school work just fine at the moment but with getting one hour and a half added to my school schedule I don't know if I would still have the time to have fun and do my school work and still manage time to spend with my family and friends. It would effect my health if I don't get enough free time to play with my friends or do the things I like. For those students who have a part time job won't be able to spend enough time with their family or friends or get some time to rest. It would surely effect their mental health, physical health and happiness because they are not going to get enough time to work out or do something fun to rest their mind.
Teachers with part time job would have a difficult time on teaching students their best and having a part time job. Mostly all teachers have a part time job because they have a big family and their income from teaching is not enough or they want to save money. All of them have their personal reasons for it. But teachers can not have a good part time job if the school board add another hour and a half to the school day Because teachers must stay after school at least once or twice a week to help the students that needs help or want to take a retake on a test. Teachers will not have enough time for a good part time job or to really take good care of their kids for the ones that are married. The ones that are not married to just take good care of their mom and dad. So teachers would either have to quit teaching or get their salaries increased. So they wouldn't need a part time job to earn more money and they would have time to take good care of their family.
Drivers already are taking a risk for driving in the morning when it's dark. It's very difficult for them to drive a school bus that's full of students when they can't really see the road. Adding one hour and a half is the last thing that the bus drivers need on their plate even if the school board adds one hour and a half to school day it's okay for the bus drivers. But what's not okay is the after school program. After school program is for two hours and with adding one hour and a half to the school day that's three hours and thirty minutes later than the normal time. It would be really dark. So it would be really hard for bus drivers to drive and it would be too risky. It would be dangerous for the bus drivers and all the students that is going to be in it.
After school is a program that helps every student make up missing work, retake a test or redo their homework to bring up your grades. It also help the school finish their work quick when students stay to help for their serves hours. But sadly the schools might have to shut down after school program if they add a hour and a half to school day because it would be hard for teachers, bus drivers and students. Students wouldn't stay after school because by the time the school finishes all the students would be really tired. | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
BA14C47026ED | The principal is considering changing school policy and she have what the students is good and the principal where the students change possible policy. Be sure to support and specific reasons . many students have a grade C average and least a grade B average to principal in sports or other activities. she would to hear the students views on this possible policy change. and the principal can do in participate in the students to policy change. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 1.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
BA1651806E60 | I think is a great idea to identify your career during High School, Because it will help you to move on what you want to work on or who do you want to be on the future.
First i think is a good thinking because during High School you can find a class that can be related about the job the you want or the person you want to be.
My second Though is that it will help you and you will learn more about the job and have more experience that way wen you get the job you will know what is about it and how it works.
My third though is that it will make you progress before you get the job you will know what to do.
My conclusion is that it's good to plan thinks during High School because that way people help you and teach you about the job or the person you want to be it will make you progress. | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
BA3B6D562BB1 | What is something you would like to accomplish in the future. I would want to go to collage. To get a good job like being a cop or being really good at a sport or being a famous chef and you can be a barber and have your own barber shop. For that u will have to go to Barber school and chef you have to go to cooking school and for being a police man or female. For being very good at any sport you have to go to collage and play there what sport do want to play.
But first you will have to go to collage for like 2 to 4 years to able to have a good job.
Reason 1 i would like to go to collage. For i can get a good job and get payed a good amount of money and i want to be a famous chef the makes food to superstars. I can cook for my self of friends and family go to collage for it have have a cooking race like whoever makes a better cake in like 5min. I can travel all different countries and have races and try different foods. You can get paid by cooking for other people.
Reason 2 you can be a famous sport player you can get very good at it. Or you can be a barber and go to barber school and have your own place and have your own job. By the way can a cop or anything you want you just need to train and be good at it. If your going to play sport you needed to play in high school for you can go strait to get a collage degree and then you can play in collage.
Reason 3 when your in collage you can still go to work and get good money and buy what ever you want. Also you can go to collage and the morning and the after noon you can go to work. Or you have a choice you can live in collage or live at you house. Anyways you can practices doing what you want to do. You just need to go to collage if you want a good job.
Conclusion You can go to collage to get good scholarships and degrees. And you can have a very good job doing what you want to do. I want to be a cooker or a barber or i want to be a soccer player. You can be anything just believe in your self and you will get your dream of being what ever you want. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
BA541CCAA2FF | We will not be benefice of taking classes online and the reasons can be for slow internet, get distracted and not having time.
There is a bounch of students that have problems with slow internet, some times the internet doesn't
load the wed pages and with slow internet we can not due our online classes. One time i was with my friend in his home and he was taking his class online like every day and then the internet when down and he did not finish his class online and the internet didn't work until the next day.
Most of the time we get distracted at home, for reasons that are not even important at all like we wan to eat, our parents need help and they call us and we need to use the restroom every time and those reasons can be a big issue for people who take classes online.When i was in LOCATION_NAME i took some classes online, it was my first class and my uncle did not know what i was doing classes online and he call me more then 3 times and because i was using my headphones and i did not ear when he call me the 3 times he get mad, he disconnect the computer and the computer shot down, i did not finish the class beacuse of my auncle and the teacher tell me that i was so disrespectfull to her and she didn't wan to give me classes again.
One of the most common problem is the student don't have time for example we have jobs and we don't have time for classes online. Some of the students are in club or they go to church, they also take care of there little brothers, with these reasons is why taking classes at home is not a really good idea.
Do you really thing that taking classes online can benefit student? Issues can occur, when we are doing the classes online from problems of slow WI-FI and also problems or differences with family that may affect us in our concetration with the classes, that's why i don't agree of having classes online. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
BA57C427DB35 | I remember when I was in elementary school my teacher would always show me life lessons or lessons that would help me in life. I still follow the lessons she gave me. You guys as young kids, should follow these life lessons I will tell you. The first one is you when your older do you want to have a good job have good money? You will always respect others,yourself and properties.
It's really important to follow those lessons because when your interviewing for a job or something like that you are gonna use those rules and life skills and show that your responsible and care about your future. when your going out with your friends like heading to the movies your gonna show the workers respect and kindness. Kindness is another example of a lesson. That my family always taught me and others as well bacause they know others like it when you give them respect. When your older people are gonna realize how respectful you are and mature you are. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
BA5DC45B0E3F | Our character develop sometimes by our own choices, and other times it develops by the influences in life, we can choose what kind of a person we want to be either good or bad, some choose to be both you can't really pick a side and stay at it , there's good in every bad and there's bad in every good. Some choose to be bad because they think if they choose to be a good person people will take advantage of them since good people always the ones who cares so much , help others all the time , and think about people happiness before theirs. They're wrong in my opinion because being a good person is better than being bad who are most likely the selfish ones that don't care about anyone except themselves. But in my opinion having a character isn't just about being a good or a bad person , it's about having a good personality , loving yourself and loving people , making others happy , having a positive energy , but also most importantly not forgetting about yourself. No one can really have a perfect character everyone got a dark side in them but only show it when needed , like if they were hurting or something bad happened to them or any other life reasons, that's if you choose your own character and choose to be good or bad. Sometimes you really can't choose your own character because the influences of life will choose it for you nothing will be in your control , it all depends on the life you were born in , like your culture , religion , and the people around you , but that's not all sometimes the way life goes is the reason your character change you can choose to be something and life's decisions will choose something else for you , life can be like a puzzle it never lets anyone stay as they are , they always change , grow up , be mature , or things that happens with them in life will make them grow up even if they're young or still not an adult yet. For me I think age isn't the thing but a number , the thing that make you mature is your character and the way you think , if life didn't force you to have a specific character then choose your own character and make it different don't try to copy someone else and be life them , just be you , be different it's more beautiful. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
BA6FC6ECE68E | Some school districts have been offering programs that are allowing high school students to graduate a year early instead of the regular four years. In my opinion most students who agree with this and actually want to graduate a year early just do it to get school out of their way. They choose to take courses in the summer than a nice trip to a beach or hang out with some friends. I mean who wouldn't want to graduate a year early right? but in the end it's not even worth it.
I know that school may not be all fun and games but all that education and knowledge sure does take you far in life. Graduating a year earlier than your other classmates doesn't make you more than them, it doesn't make any student seem smart, it's just them taking the short cut to end school.
I believe it isn't a good idea for students to graduate a year early. I say this because senior year just brings more new experiences to your life. Also you get more opportunities to get a little taste of a few colleges when they come to the schools. You get help with your resume's, and just things that prepare you for a good future. Senior year is the "best" year as some students say. Graduating a year early, just makes you miss all those nice and fun experiences with friends, including the activities the school does that last year. Some students may not agree with this but senior year just gives you that extra push into making your future better. The last year of high school is like the guide to the beginning of your new life as an adult with more goals to be accomplished.
Another reason why I dont think it's a good idea for students to just take the "easy"way out is because some students just do it to end their school life. I believe that the students who'd want to graduate a year earlier would be the ones who skip class, don't do their work, are always late to school and so on ,but to make it clear I was just referring to the bad influenced kids. High school isn't a race and neither is who has the best things in life because those you earn them by your hard work. Some students end up not even going to college, they just go straight into the workforce. Being one of those students who get to graduate a year early, it literally doesn't make you cool. I personally think that going straight to the workforce isn't the best option because to be honest, they just end up working in a Chick-fil-A, McDonalds, Burger King and all those jobs that don't even pay well. An education can get you a job! A job that'll pay you well and something that you know you'll have as a secure job and not having to change every other month or every three months.
For those students who are planning on finishing high school in three years they must have a plan whether or not they plan on still getting into a college. If some of those students still plan on going to college then they should be aware that some colleges may expect four years of high school. Also colleges may look on your school record and just see the type of person you were and may not accept you. All this coming to a close that not all colleges will be acceptable of you only having to do three years of high school. For those who don't plan on going to college, they have to have a better plan for them to survive in the real life. Some students just don't take the school serious but only if they knew that, that's the key for them to open to get to their future.
If I were agree with school districts allowing students to finish school a year early, I'd think about the positive side it has. I believe that some students may actually do it because they love school that much that they'd want to get a head start with their career. That's good I'm not saying it's bad, it's just something I wouldn't do. Students who are more than prepared should be the ones graduating early. Only students who have had perfect attendance and do their work and get good grades should only get that opportunity.
In conclusion, school districts should not allow high school kids to graduate a year early. They have to earn it and demonstrate their hard work. Senior year is the last little push a high school student gets before starting a new chapter of their life. School may not be the best but it can sure give you the best career life. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 5 | 4 |
BA71C09852E8 | Generic_Name is a student that just finished middle school and is getting prepared to start high school. He is really excited to find a career throughout high school and knowing which one would suit him best. Unfortunately after he told his parents, they were not amused with his response. Generic_Name was sad that his parents didn't encourage him and wasn't as excited to find a career as he was before. Although some people think that it is ridiculous for students to identify a career at a young age, they are wrong. Students with benefit in knowing to identify a career because this will improve their knowledge, learn new skills, and teaches them how to make their own decisions.
Students will be able to improve their knowledge whenever starting high school because this will get students to be prepared for any task at any time. Students are also going to be noticing that there are more opportunities throughout the school and have the option to choose what suits them best. Students can be able to notice that high school many students really improve from freshman year to senior year and can compare how much they really care about the students education. For example, Generic_Name is a sophomore and is looking at a career to become an English teacher, but he hasn't really improved as much in his English class. He talked to his English teacher about it and wanted to get tutored and really know how to become a teacher. In less than two months, Generic_Name has improved so much in English and is finally understanding what to do and feeling confident that in the future he will become a teacher. Students will also benefit at finding a specific career if they learn new skills.
Students will be able to learn so much throughout high school and especially learn new skills. Many students whenever they start high school they can learn new skills, for example: playing an instrument, playing a sport, or even learning how to cook. Students will also learn new basic skills, weather its Math, Science, or History. Students can also learn new skills if they could join a club or activities throughout the school. Students will have the opportunity to learn all of these skills and could really help them out to find a specific career. For example, Generic_Name is a senior and wants to find a career about becoming a guitarist, but his teachers were concern due to how magnificent he is with Technology and Science. Generic_Name wasn't really interested in those careers and has told his teachers that he wants to play for the world. The teachers we're upset with Generic_Name but understood that he made his decision and we're still happy and proud of him. Generic_Name was glad he finally found the perfect career for him and was very happy with it. Students will have the chance to make their own decisions in high school.
High school really wants students to make decisions and teach them that they are becoming young adults and need to understand that they can also make decision on their own. Students will be able to have the decision to go for a standard diploma or an advanced diploma. Students also have the opportunity on weather to choose to go to the army or work whenever they finish high school. Another decision students will get is what career will suit best for them. Teachers really help out students with finding the right and best career for students. For example, Generic_Name is a freshman and really wants to graduate with an advanced diploma. She is doing really well in all her classes and teachers are recommending her many careers. Generic_Name decides to go to see her counselor about which career would she enjoy best. Her counselor tells her that it is her decision on what does she really like to do and recommends her great careers. Generic_Name really struggles on what to choose but will sooner or later realize what she wants to do.
Students will be able to achieve more intelligence, learn more tasks, and open new opportunities for students to know how to identify a career. Generic_Name started high school and isn't too happy about it. He is doing decent in his classes but isn't feeling confident about finding a career, but one day whenever he got home his parents decided to find him careers and told him that they have all their support and will encourage him no matter what. Generic_Name is filled with joy and encouragement that he started to improve in his classes and is starting to find a career that knew that he would love and enjoy. He went to go talk to his counselor about careers and Generic_Name heard so many options he didn't know what to choose, but in the end he finally made up his choice and chose the career he know he would love. | 3.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
BA89E5BB44E3 | I may not have experienced working before, but I will be very useful and responsible at work. For my first step to know better and experience about real world, which real wrold I meant after graduated college and have real career, I need to learn and experience how to work at here. I could've go to a other place but as I am teeneger, can not go to for long distance so I choose here. One of the reason you should hire me, is I was in varcity swim team at school before so I know how to team work with co-workers, and I could use team work for team for customer servise also, like if I brought wrong order for a customer, I apologize first and bring right order with some extra cutomer servise. Second, I al ways help my mom and do chores for her. Clean living room, kitchen, basement, bathroom, and other rooms. That helps me when customer is complaining about like a table is dirty, or floor is mess, I can go there quickly and clean them fast as I could and go back to my job. Also, my hobby is to playing games. But I limited the time when to stop so I do not over-play and control myself to keep playing and stay up till midnight. Also, I have lifeguard certificate, so I know how to first aid a customers. For example, when a customer start choking, I can first aid and if that succeed, that customer will lovd this place come more often then usual. As conclution, I never worked before, but I have all these skills and responsbilities, you should hire me tothis place. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
BA9DA5122C58 | I think that we should have after school homework clubs in school because it can really help kids get homework done at the right time so they don't get a zero on their homework.
There is kids that get too much homework so homework club would be a good time for them to get their work done so fast that they don't need to worry about it when they get home. Some kids might struggle in one class because they have a lot of assignments that they need to make up. Homework club will give students plenty of time to get missing work done, and they should move the grade up to an A or B. You could also get homework from a bunch of different classes, and homework club will give them enough time to get the easy assignments done, so that they can focus on getting a hard assignment done, and that would leave the students with one assignment left to do.
Homework club can be seen as a way to spend your time wisely when it comes to getting homework done. It reduces the stress of getting too much homework because students will realize how much time that they have to get their work done so they can focus on the activities that they do in or outside of school.
For example, someone might have soccer practice at 5:30, and homework club might be from 2:30 to 4:50. That would give a student enough time to get a lot of work done before soccer practice. It's better to finish homework early because you would not need to worry about it for the rest of the week.
Sometimes kids need assistance from teachers because they are struggling to understand the subject, and they may need a teacher's help. The could stay at homework club so students can work with the teacher to get the work done. A student might leave an assignment at the last minute because they had other assignments to do. If homework club will give a student two hours in a half to do their assignment, they should be able to get their work done just in time. Homework club can give relief to a student when they have left an assignment at the last minute.
I believe that if a lot of kids went to homework club, then all students will be successful.
That would mean that kids will get As and Bs from now on, and they would not need to stress about their grades. It just takes students to use their time wisely at homework club to get homework done,
and no one will have any problems. | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
BAAFCD5BD313 | Im agree so the student can basically learn more on this time, but if it is putting one hour and half more should give some type of food or snack for them, because on this time the student will be hungry and too tired to stay on school studding, but i'm agree with idea because a lot of parents or guardians go to work early and just come back tonight and cannot stay home for caring they children and this one and half hour it will be to much helpful for the parent/guardians and also teachers who like to teach.
Will be helpful for the learning of the kids because all the hours on school is good for the learning and you can learn more and more all days on school in this time, and when they put this one hour and half it will be good for all because also the family as the teacher like too see that person is learning something different that you teach them to do it.
Getting perspective about the life, and will know that life is not that easy because it have they good this and they bad things happening all time around them.
When they put more time for the school the student can enjoy what they want and what they like example:Sports, Math, Science, Technology, English, Arts, Library or chess club that is the examples what the student can choose, they whatever he wants for their fun on that time and this good time will open the mind of the kids.
Because of this time they can like more school and he can stay everyday and also can choose what you like and what you want to do it for learning different things on school, is not too much time but but they gonna have a lot of fun and and this open the eye of them so they can see that school is not just boring for them ,but you can also have a lot of fun.
If i wold give a suggestion or a complement on this i just will say it about snack for the people who is staying more time than others, because it will provide that the student do not get weakness, sickness or heading, for some reason this can be affected if you do not eat something all day . | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
BAB7CCC403CE | One of my greats skill that you will want to hear it is math,and let me tell you how I develop this skill. It took me a long time to get this skill. I had to study and study until I got it. I had to learn and learn but it was worth it. Let me tell you the step on how I did it.
First I learned how to do math so I can under stand it. Let me tell you how I learned math. First I go to math class and let the teacher teach me how to do math. Then I review and review until I under stand it.
Next I did my home work to under stand the problem. One way I did this is asking a family member or a teacher to help me. One other way is by using my notes to find my info. Or I can check the internet for videos on how to do math problems. This is the next step on how I became good at math.
last thing I do is never give up and believe can do it. one way on how I did that is when ever a question get hard I say that I can do it. One other thing I did to believe was to all ways find another way to answer the question. Then I trusted my self when I new the answer. This is one of the ways on how I became good at math.
One of my skills is math and how I develop was. To begin with I learned how to do math so
I can answer the question. Next I did my home work to under stand the problem. Last thing I do is never give up and believe can do it. In conclusion that is how I develop my skill about math. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
BAD99FB704BB | Is honesty always the best policy?
An old proverb says honesty is the best policy. sometimes, however, honesty might get really bad effects.
honesty is a good characteristic , if the the situation is very serious or you and yours friends did something really bad , you need to be honest and speak the true, but sometimes honesty is not always the best policy because you might hurt someone's feelings or you and people around you might get in little troubles.
Honesty is not always the best policy because you might hurt someone's feelings. For example ,one of Generic_Name's friends tells her something and ask Generic_Name to keep it a secret,
the next day someone is trying to persuade her to say her friend's secret out loud and she just reply by saying, " what secret are you talking about? , my friend didn't tell me a secret or something like that." she did the right thing by laying because if she would not lied about it ,
the friend that asked her to keep the secret would feel upset and nobody else is going to trust Generic_Name. Another example is that if your friend ask you if she looks good in a certain outfit , however, that is not your style and you don't like it at all , the best thing to do is to say that you like the outfit, if you tell her this , you will not hurt your friend's feelings.
One more reason of why honesty is not always the best policy is that you or people around you might get in trouble. For example , If you and your sister ate something that your mom left in the fridge while saying " I am going to work and when I come back , I will eat this." when your mom arrives home, you tell her that you and your sister didn't heard when she say that she will eat it later on. This way , you and your sister will not get in trouble , however , you know that it was just a white lie and that if you do something serious the next time , you need to be honest and tell her the true.
In conclusion , honesty is not always the best policy because you might hurt someone's feelings or you and people around you might get in trouble, however, there are many situations in where you need to be honest and speak the true. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 2.5 | 3 |
BAEC88ECE833 | Is setting a good example by your own bahvior the best way to influence other people, or are there better ways to influence others? Examples are not the main thing to influence other is just a way to say what you really mean. You have to show them what you are traying to explain, what you want them to know about you and things you have done. The best and better ways to influence others would be a good speech, trustworthy, and actions.
First, speech have been always a way to tell people what you form thinking, what you want to achieve, speech always influence people, people got influence by speeches, when they hear their owns needs or just when the speaker talk about good things like a better country, better education, and jobs. They kind of like it and get atracted to it
Second, trustworthy are good ways to influence people, is a way to gain people to trust in you, When a person tried to influence you want that those words to be true, when people says the truth there are alway be people that will get inspired and influence to say what they think or just to say the truth.
Finally; action, action have been the best way to influence people, when people make the rigth thing and theirs action show their achievement, and shoe people what they have done for them and for the society, people get influence by their goods action. There is when the people get influence and they just want the right things.
Examples are not the main thing to influence other, examples is just a step to say what you really mean. when you want to influence somebody there are better way to make that and the best and better ways to influence them would be a speech, trustworthy, and actions; however, examples are always needed in there to make something credible. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
BB0157B70CA5 | Homework can be hard most of the time, and you need someone to help you with it. Having an afterschool homework club can be fun and a good thing to do in school. An afterschool homework club can be good for the kids that don't get to finish their homework or don't understand the homework. On the other hand, we have the people that don't have time to do things after school.
An after school homework club would not be good for some of the students. People don't always have the time to do something after school. They have other things that they have to do like, practicing for a sport, dance, sing, learning an instrument it could be anything the problem is that they don't have enough time to do homework, even when they get home. An afterschool homework club is good for the kids that don't have nothing to do for the afternoon so they can stay and finish homework from that day or something that they need to finish.
I am one of those people who is against the afterschool homework club. Sometimes I need to go to preactice, so I don't have time to finish my homework but, I try my best to finish it and turn in the homework the next day. Teachers might don't have the time to stay after school too, because they have things to do like if they have a pet they have to give it food so it won't starve or have kids and they need to take care of them so nothing bad happens to them. So that is another reason why they should not have afterschool homework club.
Most of the students won't have a ride back home because their parents can be working, they can be sick, or they are not home. I don't think the school is gonna take care of all the students that go to the afterschool homework club. That is another reason why afterschool homework club is not good. What if the kids get hungry while begin in the afterschool homework club. I don't think the school is going to have food. If the school is thinking about making a club they could make it at the last class so the students take that block so they can only do homework.
It would be better if the school makes the club at the last class of the day so the students take that block for only to finish homework. So the students that don't have time after school won't struggle about not finishing their homework at time because, they have other activities to do after school. It could be good too so everyone can take a little break of the day they had. This could help a lot so, if theachers have things to do like, grade papers or homework to check they can take that block to do all of that.
Another good idea could be, that they can make the club at fist block, at the start of the day, like if one of the students never did their homework last night they still have time to finish it in the morning before they go to class. My favorite one was the one in the last class because, everyone gets a little break even the teachers. Everyone gets to finish their homework and no one has worrys about not finishing their homework and have a little bit of more free time in the afternoon. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
BB06ADBF1640 | sources consisting of going faildlue to future. i agree because sometimes we get tired or we had to many things in we are mind.
I think is difficult to focus on many things because a lot of students they work.
also if we had only two hours school we are with energy is more essay.
School is really important because many job thye ask for diploma if you dont have dimplo maybe you dont get the job.
a lot the students they don't like to como to the school. i
I think that's really bad because on the future if you dont have diploma you never had a good job.
is really important. sometimes we dont undestad how is importan come to school.
school is not easy but when you want your diploma nothing can be hard for you.
come to school is really good becayse we learnd about a lot stuff. sometimes is neccesary come to school because we had to study for test. after when yoou finish everyitng you will really happy. statement is true schools career guard i made it out which was learning the cheers it. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
BB0EA66E43C4 | I would like to graduate because its' important to me and you need to be graduated to work in certain jobs. Then i would be actually be proud of my self that i graduated from school and saw that i finished school and yes it is important to graduate because its a important thing that you have done in your life.
Also you can get any jobs you like if you graduate and take education and finish school. Would you like to graduate? if so you should. Here are the reasons why you should its a great thing to graduate out of school because you can be done with school you can join any educational if you want and you would be proud of your self.
Also you need to pass most of your class's in order to graduate for high school or anything like that. You can also go to university and get your bachelor degree if you really want to but first you need to get your high school diploma and graduate from anything in college.
After all of that you can do any career you want because you graduated from mostly everything and thats why its important to graduate. And there is more reasons why you should graduate but those are the mains ones for me its like my own Opinion i dont know about what other's think about you just need to take education in order to have a good career or get a good job if you want.
Also graduateing can show you that you learned new subjects and you passed them and you feel great about your self when you do those new things. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
BB18A75AC035 | Work requires a lot of concentration. At Generic_School, I prefer to work alone because I do what I think, no body interrupt me and I concentrate better when I am by myself. I will give three reason and examples about why I think working alone is better than working with a group.
To follow at what my brain tells to me is the best decision I can ever do. I remember one time when I was in middle school, I was working with a group of five students. That day the teacher told us to make a surprise to the children with cancer. I had an idea to make a letter and a big poster with some illustrations to make those children happy, but we didn't because my partners didn't want to make the poster and we only did the letter. that's why I always believe that is better to work alone.
In my English class, the other day teacher made some groups, and each group had to make an essay about the contamination of earth. I was in a group of four, I was trying to do my best by reading a book about earth and what causes earth get pollution, when one of my partners stopped me by removing the book that I had, that made me really angry, and now that makes me over thinking that working alone is one of the best choice that one person can make.
I remember the last year here at Generic_School, Generic_Name my health teacher told the class to make some groups for presentations about drugs and its diseases that these can cause. And also, each group have to pick their topic about what are you going to present she said. I asked her if I could make the presentation by myself and she told me that I can, but it may be difficult for you because it is hard to explain in front all your partners she said. I did my presentation about the alcohol, and she congratulated me because the hard work that I did.
She told me that she was glad about me because I did the best presentation from the class. That's why I always prefer to work alone, so no body can interrupts what I think.
In conclusion, these years really changed my point of view because now I think that working alone is one of the best choices that a human can make because it makes a person over think and believe more in their self. Now I am ready to continue with this adventure. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
BB240E6FF61F | Since the early societies with important philosophers such as Aristotle and Confucius, the world have been in a complex debate arguing about the best way to influence other people. As result, several ideas about how to influence people emerged, such as an internal agreement through the creation of the early constitution in Athens by Aristotle. Early constitution which tried to combat the earliest authoritarian ways to influence people through force. However, those ways to influence people were not effective because those factors dictate the people's actions and created a hostile environment. Therefore, the best way to influence others is by our own behavior setting a good example because this generates stability, creates higher standards, and effectiveness.
Henceforth, setting a good example generates stability because this do not create a patron of dictatorship that generate differences and hostilities between the relationship follower-influencer. As result, this factor create an ideal and healthier relationship, which is reflected in the quality of the relationship environment. As a consequence, the stability created it by our own behavior and example make our message easier to be transmit it and receive it. For example, the relationship parent-son. This particular and common relationship completely reflected the influence of a good example and how the parent behavior dictate the stability in the family, especially in his relationship with the son. As result, if the parent set a good example and behavior the son would be more open to receive the parent's influence. Therefore, a high grade of empathy would be developed. As result, there would not be any differences and hostilities that can damage the stability of the relationship.
However, many people still argue that there are different ways to influence others rather than setting a good example, such as internal agreements (e. i., constitution and other behavior codes). However, those ways still fall into the dictatorship and authoritarian scheme that make people disagree and create conflict. In addition, those rudimentary and forcing methods do not help the persons and the influencer-follower environment. In contrast, deteriorate and break any possibility of improvement because this authoritarian limit you, instead develop you. Therefore, by showing a good behavior and setting a good example the influencing process change drastically because this process became more active, inclusive, and dynamic. As result, this influencing way create higher standards because this method of influencing people promote values such as integration and solidarity that reach improvement and cooperation. As result, the higher standards break the authoritarian barrier and open the path for cooperation, participation, and admiration in the follower-influencer relationship.
Therefore, a great example led by a good behavior becomes more effective because there is a dynamic cooperation between followers and influencers that boosted their performance and empathy in the relationship. Hence this dynamic cooperation becomes stronger, as result the relationship reach incredible stages of solidarity, which is translated into a better and healthier way to influence people. In contrast, the old "fashioned" authoritarian ways to influence people just deteriorate the follower-influencer relationship by dictating and forcing the followers' actions. As result, the net influence, effectiveness, and impact by the authoritarian ways become lower than setting a good example and behavior. For example, the actions by the Mohammad Gandhi in India with his pacific civilian disobedience movement; where he led an incredible number of people just by example and a good behavior through the diverse hostilities. This show the huge impact of setting a good example and the effectiveness that this way have on influencing people. Therefore, setting a good example is the best way to influence others because this way is the less damaging and authoritarian, and more inclusive and beneficial method to achieve a greater result. In addition, because this method promotes solidarity and unity, instead of division and competition. Lastly, because this method highlight humanity instead of cruelty. | 5 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 4.5 |
BB38DB117F33 | In some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. People who start a career can make it happen. Students who took it early can ask their counsler for advices. Many students believe that starting a career at a young age is a good idea because students can go to college after their courses, students can get a job after college, and students doesn't have to worry about making one in the future. Starting a career at a young age is a bad idea because it can cause students to quit their courses, it can cause lots of thinking to make one, and it can cause waste of time.
Students will quit their courses. For instance, when ever they went to class and took it for three weeks, they will usually give up. Furthermore, it can cause people to lose interest about their career. Teens who quit their courses, they have a hard time because it was difficult for them to keep up. Therefore, it is important to think first before taking that class.
It can cause lots of thinking to make one. For example, it takes time for adults to make their career. In addition, they will mostly think about getting a job first. Adults will usually think about getting a job because they want to earn money first. Not only that, adults like to spend time with their friends, but they make their career after they get paid enough to start their life.
It can cause waste of time. In fact, kids will spend time playing video games than making a career. Moreover, they think that career is school related. When making a career, kids will often write "don't know" and they will usually get back to their hobby. Thus, it is essintial to make a plan first before making a career at a young age.
Making a career at age of twelve or under is careless because it made people over think, it made them go back doing something, and it can cause them negative towards their courses. When ever they took their class about two ore three weeks, they usually will give up. Kids will often write "don't know" on their career paper. Making a career will take time for people to make, but don't give up easily if they can't pace up. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
BB430219DBB4 | In my opinion it's not a good idea because in every country in world it's role that student have to study 12 yeaer in the then have to go to college. There is some people in the world that they would like to graduate early because they don't like school the only reason they don't like the school is that they wake up early and they can't sleep. If we graduate on the time then we can do something to the country. it's good if someone want to take courses because they will learn more things they will have more experiance.
In the other country's the rule in schools are every student have to study 12 years, 7 or 6 book in a book, 12 or 14 test two time in the year the one test is in the half year and the other test is in end of year. In other country after graduate every student of school have to take a big test for college or university in this test the score are start from 1 to 400 hundred the top score is 400 hundred if any one get the first position the president will gave him gift and some money also. The most university are 4 year but only docter have to study 7 years.
Our response is that to tell the student who want graduate early that it's not good to graduate early because you didn't learn anything you came to schools to learn something not for time pass. there is some student they are coming school for time pass they want to pass their time if you ask them a question they can't answer it for that reason we have to complete 4 year in high then graduate. If a student graduate early then college and university will hard for him because he did'nt learn the thing that he need it in the college or univerrsity.
Working in school time is not good for student, because he can't learn anything like in the morning he is coming to schools and after schools he is going to work and he is coming from work night and he sleep so when he will study if he did'nt study he can't graduate. it's rule that 18 year or over 18 have to work but someone is in the school and he is 18 it's not to work his family have to support him to study. It's family responsibilty to tell his child to study. when he gradute then he have to work because he dosen't have to study too much because collage is easy that school.
I hope they change the rule that when student finish thire class and pass ESOL than the are graduate, because the student will take the class that they need it to finish high school and they only focuse on the ESOL and the class that they need if they didn't study the other subjects then why thay make the class they make the class to study and learn something for that reason they have to make a new rule. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
BB5B58E098AB | Well i think we choose our own character traits,because its up to you what you want to do, we choose if we want to be happy,sad,or angry. I've learned that with my mom,she always tells me,"you choose to be happy,sad,angry"
Sometimes our character is formed by influences beyond our control,and that's okay everyone has diffrent reasons to be mad or to be sad,happy but we can change it if we want to. The British naturalism and politician John Lunnock was right about what he wrote,this helps a lot of people to understand that if someone do,did,say,or have said something to you ,it'll be our choice to get mad,sad,or just ignore what happened..
After that your character it'll be what you choose to make it.
For example,i've been trought a lot this past years ,my chilhood was not the best i did not had a father or my mom when i was a little girl,i grew up with my grandparents my uncle raped me when i was seven years old,my other unclu he used to hit me all the time in my head,my grandma used to hit me with the belt , i was fat when i was a little girl,and people used to make fun of me,
That really affect me ,because i'm unsecure about my body,or how i look,i've in Hospitals because i try to kill myself last year,because i was depressed,because all the things that i've been trought and now i choose to be happy,im going to therapits on Monday's,i started working ,i play soccer,or i go out with my sister.
I have choose to be happy .
Sometimes it's hard to be happy,even that you know you want to be happy you just don't see one reason to be,and it's sad because you know your family it's feeling the same pain you feel inside of you ,the only thing you think in those moments are, "why would i do this" or "why am i trying so hard " .
Those are the worst feelings,when you want to get up in the morning but you can't.
In conclusion,my opinion it's that everyone needs to know that ,our character will be what we choose to make ,we have to make good decisions to be good. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
BB5D6C14712D | I agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success because, the more the try the more experiance they will get, they will get more power, they can cortrol people, and they will get freedom and respect.
Most of people are scared of losing or failing. They think failure is the end of the carrer. For example most people when they fail in business they give up, or some people don't try things because they are scared of the unknown.
One of my mintor alwasy telling me the more you try the more experiance you will get. For example i tried many types of business and i failed on some of them like i tried to do real estate i brought a house and i lost $50,000 because i didn't know how much the house worth. Also i tried Bitcoins and because i joined late i lose $7,000. But i never said i'll quit, what i did is i got a mintor his name is Generic_Name, he is doing real estate and i leanred a lot of things from him and one of my friends is good on bitcoins so i asked him to teach me and he became my mintor.
After you get the experiance you will get power and what i mean by that is it will be hard to fail. For example Bill Gates is a powerful man in business do you think he will be in debt? the answer is no it will never happend because if he lost everything he made other people will help him to success again and everybody want to work with him.
Then, you have to have a control because you don't want other people to tell you what to do. for example who has the cotrol in the hosptal? the doctors or who has the control on companys? the ceos. The reson why they have the control is they are more succesful, or more educated, or they are powerful. Another exapmle if someone has a company he will have the most cotrol because he'll be the most powerful person in the company.
The last thing you will get is the freedom and respect. As a business man what i mean by freedom is you can go where ever you want when ever you want, and what i mean by getting recpect from people are two ways the first one is when you are more educated than them and when you make more money than them.
At the end success is like the marathone, you don't want to be the first preson who get it but you want to enjoy it. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
BB7BD362A162 | Some businesses have adopted a four-day work week day to be able to save energy and resources with the ten hours each day. My school is also considering to adoted this model. There are benefits and disadvanges that school shall consider. Students, parents, teachers and other workwers members should also give their opinion abouth this new model. Their opion is very important because they will be working for an extra two hours each day but they will also have one more week day free. After school hear their opinion then school should make the decision about adopted a four-day work week.
In my opinion as student I could said that this is not a good idea, because we will have to stay for an extrea two hours in the same place which would not be good for students, be at school for 8 hours is hard for us and I could not imagine be there for a longer time. Although we will have an extra day for be with our family and do homework or any other assignment but whatever we still do all those things with the two day we have now. Shool should also consider that some teachers and worker members have their kids and they cannot be with their babysitter for a ten hours. They need to be with they family after school and do others things. Stay for two more hours will be very stressful for everyone.
School will use the same amount of energy, because they will be using a energy for two more hours each day which is equivalent if they reduced the five-week day to four-week day. The same amount of energy will be used in both ways. Make a new change will afect not only at school it will also afect society. Everyone is adapted to the sistem as it is now if thre is any change there will be needed new rules for example what students will be doing two more hours in school or what we are suppose to do with an extra free day during the week. If students have an extra day doring the week will not be beneficiary, because they can use these time to play video games or spend their time doing things that are not good for them.
If school approved the new model they will need to raise the work's wages for the two more hours of work in each day which will count as over time, because the legal hours per day for a person should work is just eight hours. In fact they will be paying more money compare to the money they are paying now. Now they are just are not paying over time. The eschool should not be adopted this new model, because they will be using more resources.
In my opinion school definite should not adopted the new model, because there are more disadvatanges than benefits. If any other school have not done before is because it is not good for students. The new chage is not neceessity for our school. The same energy will be used and there will be more resources used. For some businesses might work but it wil not work for our school. I hope my school do not decided to make this new change. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
BB8064D7B327 | My friend is home schooled because she use to get bullied a lot so she wanted to drop out, she could'nt deal with it anymore. Her counselor gave her a better option taking online classes because she had very good grades and she wanted her to graduate and have a good future. In some schools they offer distant learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I think getting home schooled is a good benefit for students who have situations at school, for student drop outs, and it's easier and quicker.
The primary reason on why it's a good benefit, it's that it helps you if you have bad situations at school such as you always get into fights with other students, you are getting harassed or bullied, you have problems with your teachers, or you think you're wasting your time and you could be working and getting money. Having online classes can help you stay out of trouble or helps you stop what ever you are dealing with. Not only it stops the situation but can help you improve and graduating with no problem. If you are having problems talk to your counselor and ask for a possibility for online classes or your parents if you can get home schooled.
Secondly, it benefits the students who are dropping out of school. Most of the students who are dropping out are for financial reasons like, they want to help there family so, they drop out and start working or some teens get pregnant at a young age and there parents most likely they dont support them or help them in anything that they need so, it causes them to drop out. It helps them further there knowledge and can possibly get a better job. It makes them feel happy knowing they can finish school because they know they already making a decision by dropping out but they can still graduate by taking online classes. I remember when i was at student counseling aide and one day a student came to ask me where should he leave his laptop because he was planning to drop out, he looked upset. Generic_Name ask him why? he answered "i wanna help my family out they dont have any money right now" she gave him an option for online classes he didnt know it was possible to do that and It made him happy.
Finally, getting home schooled is easier and quicker. You can take your classes when ever you are free. If you need to take a break, you can and continue when ever you are ready. it's non-stressful comparing to regular school. Its proven that getting home schooled its less stressful than regular school. Generic_Name is a science teacher at SCHOOL_NAME he said "88% students are stressed about school because of homework and not having to finish assignments on time". He also said "only 5% are stressed when they are home schooled". In conclusion, it's less stressful and help you feel non-pressured while you are taking your online classes. It also, gives you free time and gives you advantage to do what ever you like. You get to be home and relax wake up when ever you like to, do your classes take brakes if you would like to, too me it sounds amazing!
Some people might say that getting home schooled is bad because if you have any questions you dont have a teacher to ask or a physical teacher to help you understand the topic you are learning about but it's a one on one class. There's no students just you and your instructor, it helps you focus which i personally think it will help you more comparing sitting in a class room with your friends not paying attention, playing around or not getting work done. I think it's a good benefit having online classes because it helps with people who have bad situations at school, people who are planning to drop out and its a fast and easier way to get your classes done. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
BB87E18DA024 | Student should not find a career at a young age because they haven't choose or think about what career they want to have many student think about what career they want at a young age but, it's better to find what carrer they want when they enter high school because student can talk to a counseling to see what they are intrested in and can see what carrer is similar to what they like.
A lot of student have troubling time to find what career they want to have many student career doesn't end so well, once they enter high school student can find what career to have in the future, student can even visit a website to see what career are intresting for them or can visit careers search in school..
If i have to choose a career at a young age i would not think of anything because i haven't find what career i'm intresting in also, it'll be better i enter high school and find what career i like and enjoy because thinking of what career i want would be hard at a young age also, i can talk to a teacher about career in high school so they can help me of what career are available that are right for me and i don't think student should find a career at a young age it would be hard for them to find one.
I have to disagree of student finding a career at a young age because if student do find a career at a young age then they won't be forcusing in school work they mind will be them having that career by now and will brag about it to there friends and teacher no one want to hear thats also, it may not be the right career for them they need time to think the right career they want to enjoy in life. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
BB8A59BA8C61 | I disagree that first impressions are impossible to change because, at first they could be shy, there personality could change, and they can come off rude in the beginning.
The first time ever meeting you they can just be shy because there getting to know you. That's how some people work. It happens a lot in the work area. When I first went to work for my first day I was really shy and didn't talk to anybody, but now that i've been working there for 3 months and i've gotten so much comfortable with everyone there.
Once you have gotten to know the person there personality changes thought out your friendship. It makes you think who you probably met in the beginning. Sometimes they could just be lying to you just to see if your a good friend or just to make them sound better about them selves.
When you first meet someone they can for sure come off rude but then after you get to know them its like there another person. Thats how I really am, I just come off as a really mean person.
You could bump into someone and th ey probably get mad and start talking to you so rude. You'll never know they could become your best friend.
In conclusion, a first impression is possible to change because they might come off shy at first, They could change thought out the friendship, and they could come off rude at first. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
BB8DBBD8C4AB | I agree with this statement, because is hard to be yourself, in a world like this, where the people judge everything in your life, and you have to be how they want, they always are telling you what you have to do or what you not, and they not care about your opinion.
A example:
In my personal life is with my family, they always are telling me what I have to do, and when I do something wrong they judge me, they want to select my friends, my clothes, include my shoes, in a situation like this is difficult to be what you really what to be, and the razon is because they don't give us a chance to demostrate what we really are.
Another example is:
With the people of outside, we never are going to be how they want, if they saw you with a boy who use tattoo they think he is a bad boy, if you are a fat girl your ugly, if you are skinny girl your ugly too, if you use a mini skirt you are a creazy women. So we never will be fine.
Everybody can judge, but we have to be strong, we have to try to demostrate what we are, or what we like to do.
Razons:
We can have a lot of bad situations in this life, Maybe one day we can feel bad or sad, Because we not feel good with the people who judge, maybe we are tired to feign to be another person, or maybe we can think in a negative way. A example of this could be say "I never do something good", " I am not a good person". So we need to be what we want to be, and love yourself is the most important thing, if you not love yurself no one can love you more then you, obviously we have to know what decisions we want to take, you have to feel good with yourself, with your decisions. You have to show what you are, if you feel good you will be good.
All this are razons for which one is hard to be yourself, and is for that razon i agree with Mr. Ralph Waldo Emerson, cause i feel identified with what he say; I feel a winner, i feel happy with my personality, and is because i don't care what the people say, or think about me, is my life, I take my decisions. If I am a creazy women who always is imperative but i feel good with that am fine. I like to be happy, be my self. I really love me. I don't have to feign nothing. The little girl who always was doing what the people saying is in the past not in my present. I learning to be my self, so "Yes" I make a greatest accomplishment in my life, and is nice to be your self, now i feel relax, and satify with my decisions, I desmostrated what I am. I have a beautiful life, and my life always is with laugh, laugh, I am creazy, and I love to be creazy, my personality is unique. and i like that, so I feel very happy. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
BBB9D66F934C | So i think it we should do the four day school week here at Generic_School.
Because here are one advantage and one disadvantage. The one advantage is that the student will get a three day week end. And then here is a another advantage is that the student would have enough time to finish their homework and project. And then for the one disadvantage is that the student would have a longer school day because they are adding the eight hour that we are going to miss for Friday school day. they would be dividing that eight hour of school for the four day of school that we are going to have. and then here is a another disadvantage like would the student who play sport have short practice because of this like if we do in real life would that actually happen.
So here is my first reason why it is a good reason for this to happen because it would save the school a bunch of money on electric bill. And then here is another good reason that we should do this is that it would help the teacher teach to student understand the material a little bit better. And then here is second reason why it is a bad reason to do this and school like this will give student who play sport a short time to do homework at home because they have school then after school they have practice
So in conclusion we should try this for a month and then after that month we can see if we should keep this thing going on for the rest of the school year. like we can ask the student if they want it to stay. Or we can back the regular secudule like we go the regular time that we get school and then we go back to the five day school week. like in my opinion we should try this out and see how this turn out like would most of the student like this or would most of them hate like i think this is going to be like a 50 50
chance of this working and not working. like i feel like most of the student would like and the rest of student hating this because the extending hour of the school day but the student who are going to love this is because of the three day weekend and then for the teacher they all would love this idea for the school year | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
BBE74D844874 | The Ways To Success In Life
Failure plays an important role in the path of success. To gain success in life we all have to go from difficult situations. We do not have to lose hope at failure. Failure is the key to success. We learn the lesson from our mistakes. If we will not do the mistake so, how would we learn the things more better. We should learn the things from our failure instead of losing hope. Encourage yourself and other when you you are facing the failure is a good thing. If someone fails again and again in their goal, we have to encourage them for not to lose hope,determination about goals and be enthusiastic.
We need to help people if they need us,if we see someone who are losing their hope because of the failure, we have to encourage them for not to lose hope. Because if they lose hope, they are destroying their dreams and goals by their own hands. At least we have to try something until we reach to our goal. There was a spider, who wants to go to his home but he was not reaching to his home because it was so high, he tried first time he failed, he tried second time he failed but he did not lose the hope. When he tried the eighth time, he reached to his goal just because he did not lose the hope. We have to try as many time as we can but never lose the hope.
We should have determination about our desire. If we are determine about our desire then we can reach to our goal. For the success we have to do a lot of things like hardworking but the main point is determination. For instance if we think we can not do this thing then its really happen. First we have to prepare our minds that this is my desire and I will have to reach my goal. There is nothing wrong to make or see the dreams but the determination about your dreams can take you to path of success.
Be enthusiastic about your work and goal is the great way for success in life. We have to be thrill about our goal. Enthusiasm is a great thing, we have to learn from the failure with out loss of enthusiasm. In the pursuit of success we do not have to be sad. Be happy that you learn from your mistake and now u can do that better than before. From the failure we are getting more experiences. For example when teens go for their first job, they do not have experience. They do not know how to manage their time in job, how to take customers and how to deal with the difficult situations. Every day they do mostly mistake and learns from their failures. At the end of the year they are master in everything but if they do not lose hope and be enthusiastic about their work.
Life is so hard but we can make it easy if we don not lose hope, be determine about our goal and be enthusiastic. To gain the success we have to do a lot of hard work but if we fail at any point we do not have to lose hope and just sit down because we fail. We have to learn from our mistake and just try, try and try until you reach to your goal. If we fails after hard work it does not mean we can not fulfill our dreams. However if we fails after a lot of hard work it means we have to try again. Because hard work will never waste so just keep trying until you reach your goal. So, we should never have to be afraid from the failures. It is good for us to learns more from failure and do better next time. Never give up on your dreams and desires. Try for your ambittions and happiness. One day you will get the success, as Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill said that:
"success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
BBE8AE3B2B09 | - Is it a good idea for students to finish high school in three years?
In my opinion it is not a good idea because the normal time to be in school and the normal and traditional years to spend in high school is four years. Graduating early is not a bad idea but neither is a good idea, why? because some students need to learn more before graduating. In school you just dont learn math or English, for example you also learn:
How to save up money for a better future
How to have a better behavior
You learn how to spell some stuff correctly
How to write essays
There is a lot that you must know before graduating. Most of these stuff you learn in high school, and yes it might be a possibility that you can just learn all of that in three years by doing extra tests maybe staying after school, extra work, and not having any elective classes. Most of the teenagers would love to graduate a year early but doing all that stuff its a lot of stress, maybe instead of enjoying the weekends with your friends or family you just stay home finishing work from school. Some teenagers also have a job after school and doing extra work not spending time with your family nor friends can stress you a lot take a lot of time and yeah it could be worth it but what if you dont pass any of those classes or you do but graduate without even knowing whats the difference between a debit card and a credit card. In my opinion graduating early should not even be allowed because for example i have this one friend that is doing that and taking extra classes, she doesnt have any elective classes, on the weekends she doesnt go out nor spends time with her family, every time i see her instead of seeing her happy i see her stressed and tired, because she works and comes to school but shes most likely graduating this year and that something that you should be proud of, thats something that is going to help you a lot in a future and you can also start saving up money earlier than you thought, but in a future when you look back and remember your high school moments you wont have cute or fun moments to remember all you will remember is ow hard you used to work to get there and how many times you missed maybe a family dinner or a family reunion or a friends sleepover. Graduating early is actually good because you can have a better future but graduating early wont let you enjoy your life right now that we are young. Honestly i thought about graduating early one time and i told one of my friends and all he said was " If you know you wont regret it in a future go ahead" that got to my head a lot because this age that we are in now, is only once there wont be no other chance to go back and be 17 years old again, and to enjoy your parents and the time that you have with them right now. Basically my option is no, it is not a good idea to graduate early. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
BBE9DDA6E3BD | When I was in the fifth grader I went to the camp over summer the first day they made us do a project with a group to earn the title of the best group. The benefits of working in the group or working alone. Working in the group is more beneficial rather than working alone to work in the group is fun, makes me be more responsible and it is also the easier and creative way of finding solutions for the problem.
First of all, working in the group is fun. For example, I have a friend who didn't like to work with anyone or even talk in his classroom,,, one day his teacher put him with group of students after working with them he finally made a new friends and the work that teacher was giving them was much more enjoyable with mates. For that reason I think this is a great way of learning, communicating and building friendship with people around us.
Also group work makes us more responsible. I have friend his name is Generic_Name and I want to tell you something about him he is the most irresponsible student I have ever seen, but when it comes to a group work he is getting his job always done because he doesn't want his group lose the competition or simply fail the project. This made my vision clear that working with others makes people more responsible.
Some say working with a group distracts them from the task, but I will disagree with them because I believe, that working in the group helps you find the creative way of solving the problems. In my computer science class we usually work with groups so there is this guy that thinks he knows more than some of us and for that reason he didn't work with us, so we solved the problem the way that no one in our class has solved the problem this way and the teacher gave us extra points for being the creative group of the class, and the smart guy that I mentioned before couldn't solve that problem. This is way I don't like to underestimate my teammates or classmates I know that together we can be smarter, faster, and even
If the problem seems unsolvable together we can do it.
In conclusion, working with a group is enjoyable, make you fulfill your obligations, and makes it easy for students to solve any kind of tasks. Finally, students are not going to be stressed about the problem and will complete the task with higher quality. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
BBFEBE9529A1 | I am agree that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Because all the people are not easy to get a good impression, and also are not easy to change the mind. In my experience most the time when a impression come up to my self, it is impossible to change the mind, because if I don't like something my impression is very bad, but it is impossible to change my impression. Most the people do the same things I do, because we are people and we almost have the same feelings.
The first impression is always something has too much that we can talking. Most the time the first impression is hard to change is like a decision; when you took a decision is impossible to change, because is something the human have never goes down always up. this mean that the person when the have a impression about your car, picture, family, or friends they never will change the impression for them, but if the change should be impossible like a decision.
Based on my experience the first impression is impossible to change, pretty much on the humans and the animals. why I says on the animals, because long time ago, I had a dog this dog was very intelligent he do every thing I tell him, but sometime he had some impression that was impossible to change. Always I give to him good food, but something a give food that him don't liked, and his impression was very bad, always was hard that him change his impression. | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
BC0703638937 | Haven't you got an advice from multiple adults in your daily life? Most of the times I believe that people ask for multiple advice from multiple people because they want their adive to impact them in a certain way. However, sometimes one person cannot be convinced by one voice they like to hear multiple voices to be convinced. Most often people are not motivated by themselves which would make it harder for them to be motivated by a single voice because those people needs to hear multiple opinions to make them better or motivated. So let's say that this one person likes to change his or her life and become more motivated, be in the best shape of his or her life, so he or she ask about 10 people how to get motivated and how to work hard to achieve your dreams. Hearing motivating and powerful words from other people can impact your life without you even knowing.
He gets about the same advice from people as he did from the people before and as he heard all of those people talk about the same topic now he or she would be motivated because sometimes not only one voice but two would put a big impact on someone's life and help them. My teachers, friends, family, and all of the people I've met in my life had gave an advice that I heard and took their advice because it meant something to me and it was deep. I would want more people to give me advice that can impact my life, for example my friend's dad always gives him advises but he has hear his dad tell him the same advice over and over again at the end of the day he will get bored and not listen to his dad's advice which would impact him negatively.
Sometimes life gets hard to certain people and they would like to hear advice from multiple people which will impact them in a positive or a negative way depends on who they ask advice from. For example if I were to ask advice from my brother all the time he would just repeat everything he said from before and that would not help me at all, after all they say "two brain is better than one."
Listening to other people's advises can impact you in a way that would make you do the right thing in the future and not only it can impact you it can impact the people around you. You could also use the people's advises you heard and give that advice to another person that also needs to hear it. This is my thoughts on why some people would like multiple and how it can affect them in a certain way. | 2 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
BC0B186645A9 | Living on this planet, everyone has there own character traits. But does everyone create their own characteristic traits or are they influenced by those they surround their self's with.? John Lubbock, a British naturalist and politician wrote, "Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it." I take a position on representing that you are in control choosing and creating your own character.
In building your own character it's all in your mindset. Mindset takes a big part in someones character because it shows what kind of person you are and how you represent your self and how you portray things in life. The way you think has an effect on you as a person and how you betray things in life. It also takes part in who you surround yourself with. Do you surround yourself with people who have goals in their life or inspire you to become a better you.?
It also takes part on things you choose to do and say on a daily bases. The decision you make could lead into something better or for the worse in current situations or in the long run.
Having motivation and a goal in the your life builds you as a person and sets you for growth. When you see someone in your life not doing well and not in a good current situation you want to avoid being in that position. But when you start seeing someone in your life doing better things and living the life that you want to accomplish, it's on your part to doubt yourself or make that you motivation. When you strive for something in life and start working hard for it, your mentality starts to change to do better and get to your goal.
Some may argue that the people you surround your self with is beyond your control on how your character traits are formed. Yes the people you surround yourself with everyday might have an effect on your characteristics, but it isn't beyond your control. You can have something to motivate you to be better then who you surround your self with. You have control over your thoughts and how you see things in life. It take's part on you and what you strive for in life.
In conclusion, Your own character traits are somethings that come within you and how you portray life. Your character traits are't something that is beyond your control but is something that you can control with motivation and a goal to strive for and it all comes from a strong mindet. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
BC1F1C37721E | Is it possible to impress someone at first time? Based on my experience I am extremely agree with this statement. It's possible to impress someone based on what we are, what we are doing, and what we want from them to do, because now days which everyone is fully educated and knows what is wrong or right, believes on their own. We can impress people towards our religion, towards our government party, and towards out country to visit.
We can impress people towards our religion by giving them the ideas of what is it about. How it will change up your future, how it will impact on your kids, how to treat with others, and also the idea of understanding someone better. Take them with us to the place where we practice our own religion, tell them the truth and advantages of it, and also show the religious cultures.
We could impress people towards our government parties to support us by voting us. Promise them that we would not let them down, we will accept their wants and help them to advice it, we will make their education department strong that everyone can get education, and we will make sure that we provide them their dream jobs after they graduate college.
We might impress someone to visit our country by telling them about the situation of our country, and tell them how cheap the things are. Show them the beautiful places, historical temples, culture, different kinds of foods, clothing, also about the rights of people.
To conclude, impression is something that people do for others to get their attention for a specific thing, such as impressing people to convert to their religion, motivating people to vote for a specific government and choose a good leader for their country, and also impressing people towards their countries situation to persuade them to visit their country. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
BC4A0CFD6CAF | Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. Today, people prefers to interact with technology than people. They can check out books, shops, and play games without speaking to another person. Some people thinks the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology have positive effects on people's lives because technology makes more easy their lives, for example they not need to leave their houses for buy or to joint with another person to play games. However, I think the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology have negative effects because people prefers to shop on online than stores, people use more technology to talk, and also children plays with technology than with another person or toys.
Today, people prefers to shop by online than stores. I saw and lived this experience many times about buy by online but I not feel comfortable as a store. Online shops makes feel lazy, alone, and when you have questions obout the product nobody can answer you. I bought by online many times but one day I understand that online shop is not healthy for me because when I go to stores I'm practicing my English vocabulary, I walk alot that means that I doing a little exercise, and meet new places and people. Shop by online avoid the human contact and gives negative effects on people's lives.
People use more technology to talk, as facetime, facebook, whatssap or others applicationes. I agree to talk with this aplications with people who lives far away but I prefer to join with my friends or family to talk who lives close. Sometimes, I came out with my sister and their friends who always are in their phones texting or taking pictures. In my personality, use the phone when you are sharing with another person is not respect and you are not enjoying the moment. The use of phones during a meeting avoid the interaction with other human, and gives negative effects on the people's live.
Finally, children more plays with technology than with another child or toys. In the past, children plays with toys or they made their own toys. This helped to children to developed their imagination or decover their skills. Also, children invented plays involving run, saltar or make force; this plays helped to children to enjoy healthy and socialiting with other child. But today, children prefers to play with technology avoing come out and carring to be lazy, obesity, and addicting to the technology. Children's break times likes to use their phones than talk with their friends or family. They think that interacting with family or friends are old things and that is most enjoy use the phone in their break times. The use of technology for children is a negative affect because they not play or relationing with another people.
Today, people use more technology than interact with another person, carring people to complete taks wotout having contact with others. These limitation of human contact due to the use of technology have negative effects on people's lives. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
BC8115EEB029 | Being a teenager is hard in are decae. Because as a teenager growing up in this period of time is hard. If you do not follow the trend, do what others does. People will judge you and,also you might not be cool enough to have friends. But at the end of the day you have yourself respect. I agree that you should be yourself. Because you should be proud of who you are ,and will be succes, happy, and do what you good at.
Some people say, Individally we are one in order to be one only you got be proud of who you are ,nor letting anyone change you. For instance, first when I moved in here in 2016 from Egypt. I was a 14 years old. It could have affected me. When people were making fun of my English. because I did not know how to speak It ,and did not know the culture. Which It was hard for me. But I was proud of me self for trying to learn ,and still I'm learning everyday something new. It's a good feeling to feel proud of yourself. Even when people try to hate on you or make fun of you're accent. If you are a strong person nothing will stop you. From being proud ,and making you're family proud because they work hard for to be succesful in the future.
Succes is not easy. There is a lot of reason's for those who are succful. They worked hard for It. Mian reason how they became succesful is never give up. That is the key not giving up, being yourself. While people in my school having ''fun''. I stay home studying to become succesful ,and make myself proud. Also my family. Teenager should not be a follwer. Everyone should be them self. For example,There is always the good ,and bad. You choice who you hangout with. Will help you with what you wanna be in the future. If you hang with people that do sports and healty that is good because you will be succesful.
Once you do what you always had planing for in the future. You will feel happy. And to be in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else. That will even make you happier. To be more specific. Trying to be you're self while everybody is differnt is not easy. Sometimes students affor me to smoke in the bathroom. I always say no. They might laughe at me for not smoking ,and not being ''cool'' . However, I think of who I'm if I do not like doing something. I should not do it because someone else is doing it or to make other happy but not myself.
Some might say, I disagree you should not be you're self. Because other people can not be them self or might harm them self in a way. such as doing drugs,skiping school, not being respectful to you're family ,and friends. However, I think being yourself in a world that is trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment. cause it makes you. proud of who you are,succesful in what you do Aslo, It makes you happy for what you have accomplish. | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
BCB9C4BF0092 | PROPER_NAME
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October 24, 2018.
Some schools use cell phones in the classroom for education purpose. Many people say cellphones is a great tool for specific things, such as something you may want to know or something you do not know. In my opinion cell phones should not be allow to used it the classroom because students use cellphones all day and do no pay attention, cellphones it can be used for other things, and cellphones distract you.
The students use the cellphones all day and do not pay any attention during class is really bad for students because, they come to school to learn and not be in their cellphones. For example, cellphones it may help you to look for something you might want to know, but when the test and quizzes comes students are not going to know anything because students did not pay attention for being in their cellphones the hall day doing nothing.
Cellphone it can be used for other things, for text with friends or, play games during classes, for watch videos during class, listen to music and not listening on what the teacher is saying. Also students use cellphones to take videos, or photos that they want to search in their social media or just for have fun. For example some students likes to take photos of someone just for have fun or just for bully them in their social media.
Some people say cellphones is a tool to do homework, project, or something you want to do in your cellphone, or when you are confused with something, however cellphones distract you to do those kind of stuff, such as being at your apps and not doing what you suppose to be doing while because you are texting or face timing someone and you get distract and you forgot about to finish your homework or classwork that the teacher have signed you to do,and your grades might go down into a zero if your keep distracting yourself being in you phone during class time.
In conclusion some schools use cell phones in their classroom for educational purpose. Cellphones should not be allow during classroom for educational purposes because students would not learn anything if they are in theirs cellphones during classroom , we know that every student love being in their cellphone during the day, but cellphones will not help student in their educational purposes, and cellphones are not gonna help you learn what you need to learn during students school education. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
BCDED505B597 | Dear. Principal,
I think the best and awesome policy is policy number 1 , because the students need their cell phones to call their family members to pick them up. I see a lot of students use there phones in class, but maybe if you give them other free times to use it they may not use it during class periods. Having to use phones in your own free time is not a bad idea, but need to remember to turned off their phones in class.
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2/28/11 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3.5 |
BCE3D895D850 | We accomplish more if we are always doing something. I agree with that. People,who are always doing something will get a good habit. An active process creates a the positive success, and in the road of the success, it would never had a footprints of lazy people.
We'll create a good habit and accomplish more, if we are always actively focusing and doing something. With the good habit, we always feel good and comfortable to study, learn, and do everything. It'll make everything easier. Especially the way people look at you will be changed to positive and respect. Good habit also help you create a good process.
An active process creates the positive success. Restaurant would not able to serve a delicious meal, if they didn't have a good preparation. We are the same. Nobody could be a good doctor, a good architecture, or anything good think, unless they tried hard and focused. So working hard, and always doing something is the key to open the successful gate.
In the road of the success, it would never had a footprints of lazy people. We can't have a good result, if we'll be lazy, and inactivity doing, learning something. Nobody want to hire or work with a lazy people, because they have none, they can't make a good result. We should not feel enough for something, that'll be a reason make us become lazy. So we should work hard every time, and we should not think:" Inactivity would serve a purpose".
We should work hard to get and good process, and the good process'll create success. Never enough for something. In the road of the success, it would never had a footprint of lazy people. Thomas Jefferson wrote, "Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing.". | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
BCEDACE63B48 | Althogh some people say that is important to adoption of a midnight weekday curfew for teenagers because is unfaily interfere in young people's lives Actually, is important to adoption of a 10 P.M weekday curfew for teenagers because it will keep them out of troubles with others people or with their family too. Also they can spend more time with their family.
Those who believe that adoption of a midnight weekday curfew for teeagers will be important have their reassons.
It will be unfaily interfer in young people's lives.
Also it breaking the laws because teenagers have freedom to do wethever they want but not bad things for example, don't do drugs or other things.
Others people think that adoption of a 10 P.M weekday curfew for teenager will be important they have their reassons too. For example, it will keep teenagers out of troubles. Also, they can spend more time with their family. My other reason it because sometime teenagers don't dou their homework because they want to go out with their friends and they forget to dou thier homewor ,and at least if they go early to thier houses they can finish up the homework.
In conclution I think it will be important the adoptionof a 10 P.Mweekday curfew because, they can be with their family. Also they can be duing other staf at home for example, duing their homework. | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
BCF16DEB277E | Many people can set a good example by the way the behave but you can also Influence people by the your professional career you have. I believe example is not the main thing it is the only thing because younger people growing up look up to you by the way your behavior is and they hear the kind of language you use towards friends and adults.
For example, when I was growing up I looked up to my brother I watched his actions very closely. One day I saw my brother giving food to poor people at 7 eleven and I was shocked, the next day I went to give food at 7 eleven. Eventually, as I was leaving the store the manager called me up and asked me why I was giving food out and I told him that I saw my brother giving so I thought that was the right thing to do. In another occasion my brother and mom went to the toy store to buy some toys for a birthday present for my cousin and my brother really wanted this toy so and my mom said that she was not going to buy for him so he started kicking the floor because he was mad at my mom and because of that my mom bought him the toy. So the next day my mom took me to the supermarket with her and I really wanted this snack from the shelf and she said that I could not buy it so I started kicking the floor and crying therefore my mom bought me the snack. Since I saw my brothers actions and behavior towards my mom and saw it worked out well I did the same thing.
For instance, one day I heard my mom arguing with my dad on the phone because of some misunderstanding they had and my mom was using foul language to address her part of the side and my dad was using it too. So later on in the day my mom called me on the phone and told me to go get my little brother at school and I told her it was not my problem to get him and then I started using foul language on the phone because I thought it was okay because she used on my dad. In another occasion I heard my brother giving out compliments to people on the street and by the way he spoke it influenced me to say the same thing as him as walked the streets.
Some people may argue that people get better influenced by a person of its professional career because they think they got to the place there at right now by showing they can go anywhere no matter what example they show.
In conclusion I believe that example is the one and only thing that influences others becasue what your actions do your younger sibling and friends are going to follow it and get influenced by you. the actions my brother took I followed them if though they were good or bad I got influenced by it. Also the way my mother was speaking and the language she was using towards my dad influenced me to speak back to her that way when she called me. | 4.5 | 3 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
BD0CEEC9B429 | People should seek guidance from experts and authorities about lifes important matters for many reasons, there are some emotions following our own decisions whether is right or not, people shouldn't always follow their heart and do something it could cost your life in the future. Another suggestion is asking for help to those who knows how to guide and gives ideas to people following their own decisions . Having some different types of ideas from different people or culture it can help us to work and do better in life because life's important matters. It can help our sociatity do better for our new childrens and the anyone whos around in our environment.
First of all, some particular people sometimes shouldnt always follow their heart or emotions whether is right or wrong we can always seek for help and do what we like to do in our daily life. For example, the other day I made the worst decision because I didn't have the courage to share my thoughts with anyone in my family or friend about quitting my job or not. I felt like if I suggested to ask someone to help me clear my mind I was going to do better now. Next, later on I saw my manager and told me they had a better job position for me with better health insurance plan. In this case I feel that seeking for guidance is not always a bad idea, is the opposite we can help each other. I made a bad decision for not comunicating with others about my problem whether to stay or leave, what i did it was left the job.
Secondly, in many cases we think we know a lot, but in reallity is that other people can help us to do and give new ideas in our life. Than, If I want to change something in my life I have to love myself more and have the courage to comunicate with others and let them know what I am thinking and expect a better results. On the other hand, making your own decision can also help you to be succesful about life and not depend on others. For example, someone whos expert, can let me know and give me some advices about a proyect because they alredy know it or went through and have lots of experiences in that area. I always believe imformation is important if we working as a team is the best for the human we get to know each other time and values. Although, everything works best when we seek for a true guidance.
To conclude, in many cases people are really succesful because they met or know someone from different culture and shares different types of ideas. In this world we live in many times this is the best way to work with as a team by seeking help from experience people and open up our brain more to understand the problem and to move on forward in our life. If woman and man work together life's gets easier because we all putting our effords so that we can have a better tomorrow for our lifes and childrens. Lets all do better and be better for a better tomorrow. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
BD4BFB4E8C6B | Many will say that distance learning is a really good option for students. Several students will benefit from distance learning by having better attendance, less problems , and it will also help students with certain disabilities or health problems . On the other hand , some will disagree by saying that if students dont attend actual school they will become lazy and irresponsible. Distance learning will benefit many student and also school.
Distance learning will benefit students in many ways such as better attendance . If students are allowed to attend school while at home it will give them less chances of not attending. Something that students hate most is waking up in the morning to get ready for school. Having to wake up so early in the morning just to attend school for about eight hours will cause a student to become lazy and tired.
Unfortunately some student are born or are diagnosed a certain disability to where they cant attend school . However those students with disabilities have a right to have an education. Distance learning will really benefit those students by allowing them to attend school from home. There are many reasons why students benefit from distance learning but being able to help a child with a disability on their education is the most important reason.
If students dont attend their actual school there will be less problems. Some students are treated really bad in school , many are bullied , and also many like to be drama queens . However if students attend school at home it will benefit a child because they wont have to see other students and there will be less drama and more education. Schools will stop having so many bullying problems.
On the other hand many will disagree and say that if students stay at home and pursue their education there they will become irresponsible and lazy. Students should be allowed to attend school how they want to . If a students becomes lazy because of distance learning the problem is within the student. Many will agree that it will make a student less lazy and more responsible. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
BD67708C0609 | I really need to find a career path. With your help, I think we'll be able to come up with a solution. You should come my school not just to help me, but to help others too. Students need to gain experience to at least understand what to do, and how to act in the work place. They can really benefit by finding a new career. Their interest can take them a long way. Your help can take them a long way, and they can potentially help you too. Coming to my school would help me gain experience, find an interest, and gain something beneficial.
Experience is key in finding a job that interests you. If I join an internship I can potentially gain a lot of experience. An internship helps you to prepare for whats to come later on in your career. Work ethic and how to do your job are things you might learn. I really need to learn whats the wrong thing to do, and whats the right thing to do in the work place. For example, you need to learn how to address your boss in a polite way. If you mess that up, it could possibly cost you your career. I really need to learn this stuff to improve my career later down the line. I know you would be capable to help me with that.
Benefits are things you gain out of a situation. If you help me I will benefit from this, and you could benefit from this too. I can gain a lot if you help me. I could pursue an amazing career that would help me out a lot. My career would help me pay for bills, rent, and my car. If your internship helps me find a good career, that career can help me financially. It's like a domino affect. It can also benefit me emotionally. If I really like my job, that makes me happy. Don't forget that this could benefit you too. You could potentially gain knowledge about what your doing wrong and what your doing right. You can improve as a manager of your business; possibly changing your work style or business style. I can help you with certain things too if I join your internship.
You have to be interested in something to start a good career. What is your career going to be based around? You can help me find a job I'm interested in or lead me down a path where I can start the job I'm interested in. In my opinion, you have to like your job to succeed in your career. If you don't, It could lead to quitting. If I know what I want to do, you can point me in the right direction and I'll work hard in order to reach my goal. If I don't know what I want to do, you can help me find something. You can see what I'm good at and what I'm not good at, what my likes and dislikes are, and from there you can help me find a career I want to pursue. I know you will help me find a career I'm interested in.
In conclusion, experience is something I want to gain in order to know how to do other things. I want to gain a lot of benefits, because they will lead to good and better things. I really want to find a good career that I'm interested in so I can manage myself. I know if you were to come to my school and talk to me, and let me join your internship, I would be able to gain all these things. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
BD8683F93B5A | Dear Generic_Name
I understand that you are considering the benefits of working with a group or working alone. This could be a big deal depending the class because the majority of students prefer to work alone, we should use some of the time that we have in class to vote and see what students want, but i agree with the idea of working with a group for two reasons: we can devide the work and you get to talk to other students while their working.
First reason is that it feels like we do get the enough time to work, when we get to work with groups everything gets a lil bit more easy because there is less work to do, and if they decide to work alone, you would notice that they are going to have more problems completing the assignment, while the other studens that are working in group they would find this assignment more easy, so the way the teacher don't have to spend to much time with only one student.
Second reason is that they should not have problems finding the information because while some of them are writing the other students should it be serching for anwsers, for example, students that are working alone they would find this a lil bit harder because they have to do the writing and searching part by them self. The best part of working with a group is that the work can be finished a lot faster and they can have more time to recheck the work and make sure that you are not missing anything in blank.
Also, there is a lot of benefits of working with a group or working alone, but its clear that those students are not going to work with other students because they say that they don't like to be talking to other students, that they prefer to work alone, but anyways the teacher should be agree with this, thats how she would know if you need more help with the assignment then other students.
I strongly believe that working with a group could be the best choice for students because they are not going to spend to much time doing the assignments, so you could work with someone and devide the work wich positively affects, therefore, we must try it and see what benefits can we get from this and voting could be a good idea to decide if students would like to work in group.
Sincerely,
Generic_Name | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
BD889A4D831B | Students have to attend school to learn more efficiently, but long distance learning is not good because you have to take your own notes online ,however, if you were to attend school on regular time, you would not have to worry about taking your own notes. Although, online is still a option because you just need a computer or a laptop to take online classes, and not having to worry about missing the class when the teacher took notes that day. All you have to do for online school or video conferencing is get online and do all your classes, and not worry about getting to school. Students need to go to school instead of online or video conferences to learn more and participate in class or school.
Going to school than taking online classes or video conference is way better because you go to school and actually pay attention and not get distracted of what is around you in school ,however, taking online classes can get you easily distracted when you're at home or a public place trying to do you work and you hear people talking and having conversations all around you. While you're in school you can peacefully finish all your work in class and ask for a question, or even help from the teacher, but if you're taking online classes your only source is most likely going to be a online source, or the guides they give you online which might not be always correct. The information online could be outdated. while the information at school is planned out and ready to be given out by the teacher or staff at school. Even though, everyone would prefer online classes over actually going to school, people should consider going to school for a backup just in case the people taking online classes don't like how it is done. Going to school and learning just for being in class helps you in a lot of ways such as visually, speaking, and self control, however, if you're at home taking online classes it will only help on your visual learning.
Taking online classes can probably be difficult sometimes, because people can forget to take the class the day you need to log in ,however, going to school and knowing which days to go to school is very helpful because you can learn without any problems happening. Although taking classes online and not having to go anywhere and stay where you are is good, you're putting your grades at risk, the computer can malfunction or even be corrupted with a virus on it, and it can slow down your computer or even shut it off every time you need to do your work. This is why going to school is more efficient. The people that go to school have no worries just bring all the materials they need for class and work and pay attention. Also students can have more time to work and can be actively speaking with our teachers too, for questinos and answers to help students. Students need to go to school instead of online or video conferences to learn more and participate in class or school. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
BD951BF14177 | Do you know that many people like to make their own decisions? Making your own decisions is not really good idea because a lot of people think wrong and they make a lot of mistaks. Seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters much better because you can get many good ideas from people who had experiences before and know better than you.
Making your own decisions can make your life worst. Also, it's not good for young people to make their own decisions. For example, I know one boy he is 17 years old. He was all the time take his own decisions. He had money problems and he didn't tell anyone about his problems. After 2 years he became homeless.
Seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters is really helpful for everyone. Also, it can make your life easyer and better. For example, one of my best friends he is older than me. I had problems with my life. I went to him to ask for help and I told him about all the problems. He started to talk with me and gives me solutions.
Making your own decisions is really not good idea specialy for young people. It can make your life bad and you may have many problems. Seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters can be really helpful and it can be the solution for all the problems.
Seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters will make you success in your life. Also, You will have less problems and your life will be easyer and much better. Seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters also really good decisions to make to be success. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
BD9FE34E4670 | I agree with this statement, because one there's no knowledge without imagination, secondly Albert
Einstein has made many inventions and he has succeeded, and lastly you can be creative with your imagination. one reason, is there is no knowledge without imagination, because your have to be open minded about things. Imagination isnt just a picture in your head. knowledge is something to see, and think about. its not hard to use your imagination its fun, because you can think about anything you want. even if you have to write a essay, then you need to use your imagination as well. Many people invent things, but before they make it they think about what they want to make, and they imagine what what they want. People invented cars, motorcycles, bikes, and skateboards, But before they made all those things they drew it out they took there imagination, and put it on a peace of paper.
My second reason is Albert Einstein invented many things he might of failed on some, but he succeeded on many. He said " imagination is more important than knowledge" he made that statement because he used it to make his creations great. It helped him on many things. and it can help us too. For example if your are writing something, you have to use your imagination on it. If you are listening to music, then you are using your imagination as well. Albert Einstein was a very smart man. he had made many things in life, and we use it till now. Even if your thinking about something then your using your imagination too. People had made phones all different types of phones, People have made flip phones, iPhone, and androids they all invented that, and used there minds and creativity to make all that.
My last reason is to be creative with your imagination, I chose this because if your making a book you need to let the reader think, and picture the scene in there mind, or if your reading a book then you have to imagine it in your head instead of just reading it, and doing nothing. Also if your teacher is explaining things to you, then you have to think about what shes saying, and think about what your going to do. for example I once had to make a assay for my teacher, and it was about life bellow water it was pretty hard, and I had to explain what was going on in the ocean. It took a while to make, but I ended up saying that people keep throwing trash in the in the ocean can you imagine how many animals, and creatures are dying every day because of that? I imagined all of it, and people should not throw trash in the ocean. Every time I read a book I saw it all in my head, and it was cool, and fun! Also every time I wanted to draw something, I would have to see it in my head, and see what I should draw. Even if you are trying to make song or some thing, then your have to imagine how the beat is gonna go, and figure out if it sounds good to you. Even if your making a poem then you have to think what rhymes or doesnt rhyme. Also there are doctors that have to see if they can save someone, they have to think and see in there head if they should get this, or that. Everyone uses there imagination there isnt knowledge without imagination. There are kids that get read to, and they imagine whats going on they dont just listen they think about what they hear. That is why I agree with Albert Einstein. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
BDA166D1989A | The famous artist Michelangelo once said, "The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark." His quote implies that completing a low goal is far worse that failure. In my opinion, I agree with Michelangelo's quote; when people aim too low, they are preventing themselves to have learning experiences. In order for growth and improvement, one must be required to step out off their comfort zone. Because aiming high comes with better resluts, it can serve as motivation to completing a goal. Although one may fail while aiming high, you will gain experience and knowledge from the situation.
To begin with, growth comes with attempting to accomplish new things out of your comfort zone. While always staying in your comfort zone, aiming low, you will be confining yourself, which prevents you from improvement. When you set your aim high, it assists with finding out what you are truly capable of. For instance, when working towards a goal, it comes with finding your true self. You can learn about your interests and hobbies, or even new ideas and thoughts that come to mind. When setting you aim high, it improves you as a person and helps with your own growth.
Not to mention, aiming high for a goal is possible when you have the right mentality.
When you aim high, the results are more motivating than when going for a goal set low. For instance, when achieving to graduate high school, one may aim to graduate as valedictorian. Being the valedictorian comes with great results such as getting into a better college or even just feeling better about yourself. If you put your mind to it, belive in yourself, and work hard towards it you will be able to accomplish any goal.
Furthermore, failing at achieving a goal provides experience. When you fail, you can use that situation to understand where you went wrong. In order to succeed the next time you attempt again, you can improve your mistakes. Failing is essential to the learning process as it gives you a chance to better yourself to prevent future mistakes. This knowledge you have accumulated from this certain situation, will be useful if applied to other life problems. On the other hand, when you aim for a low mark, there is no learning lesson you may gain.
However, some people believe nothing is wrong with setting your aim low. Instead, they believe that going for a goal set too high is worse as it means it will come with failure. These people view failing as a discouragement as others may consider them as a weak.
However, aiming high and failing gives you a life-longing experience by having the chance to improve your mistakes. When attempting again, you will have gained the knowledge to do so.
In conclusion, I believe that setting our aim too low and achieving it is far worse than aiming high and failing. For the fact that we need to grow as a person, we can not always stay in our comfort zone. By setting goals too low, we are preventing ourselves to grow and improve. By setting goals to a higher level, we can gain experience and knowledge that comes with the path to achievement. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
BDA991AF3ABE | Thomas Jefferson once wrote "determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." I strongly agree with this quote for many reasons. If you're not doing something to help you get better, you'er failing, doing something for a purpose makes you succeed in life, and inactivity does not serve a purpose to this quote. Although, others may think different and disagree with this quote, other people in this world needs this motivation.
If you're not doing something to help you get better, you're failing. This role plays a huge part of others because failing is not a choice. You may fail a couple of times on this and that but what are you doing to not fail again? If something isn't right and want to fix it, do something about it.
In the other hand, doing something for a purpose makes you succeed in life. I play baseball for 10 years now and my goal is to make it to the big leagues but with this being my goal, I have to do something to help me achieve my goal. Success is not giving to you, you have to earn that success and by that, do something to help you succeed your dream.
At the end, inactivity does not serve a role in this act. Inactivity is getting in the way of you not achieving and succeeding. I take inactivity as a negative act because I dont want to be sitting at home or anywhere not doing something to help me get better. Be the one who changes your life by doing what it takes to do something in life to reach your highest goals.
Let this quote be a inspiration of achieving and succeeding in life or at anything. Be the one that can make a change. Doing something makes you accomplish more. It takes effort and hard work to do something but at the end, it all pays off. Only you can change yourself whether you want to be successful or not. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
BDAE1D4B6C20 | The quote, '' hard work pays,'' means a lot when it comes to doing something and one staying idle. The world today upgrades itself each and everyday,which tells us that we should always be doing new everyday as humans.
Although some people say that been idle is the best way to go because it relaxes the body and gives it a new form of strength actually doing something always not only exposes one to new ideas and strategies but also makes the human body active and vibrant at all times. There are a lot of chances one can benefit from been productive other than been idle.
To start with, there are a lot of goodness in been productive than been an idle man. People who invest in their time to produce something meaningful are known across the globe because of their hard work and dedication. Due to how hardworking they are, they get the chance to explore new ways of doing things and new ideas that would help them in their next exploitation. For instance, since Bill Gates is hardworking man, he is known across the globe and due to this he has been exposed to other new things that would help him in whatever he is doing now. Again, when there is a football match between two different teams, and if one team is seen practicing so hard than the other, it would be considered that the team seen practicing the most would deliver more than the other team with no doubt.
Moreover, doing something always makes an individual active and lives longer than been idle. A person who is seen to be doing something productive all the time is considered to be adding more years to his or her age due to the fact that working tirelessly everyday helps keep the body in form and shape which by so doing prevents diseases that attack people. For instance when a person walks about a half and a mile to work everyday, it is very difficult to see that individual get sick because the body is always busy looking for something to do. On the other hand, idleness brings nothing but retrogression and failure because you're not able to bring forth anything productive and therefore it becomes a waste of time,energy and resources. One can make the comparison so easily between a productive person and someone been idle, a productive person can always be seen advancing from one stage to the other while an idle person will be seen at the space that he is at always.
Furthermore, when people say '' time is money,'' they are definitely talking about how one is able to use his available to produce something meaningful for himself to get money and have some other benefits as well. No one gets rich by just sitting at home, folding his hands and just expect something to happen. People may argue on this that one can make it in life when he or she inherits the possession from his family. This may be true because you may have everything to yourself but everything will be squandered if one does not work hard to top it up or add more to what he has. People choose idleness because it is more relaxing and the easiest way to go because you just sit there and wait for whatever happens to happen. Been idle can also affect a person in way or the other. In the sense that, if a person is seen to be at one place all the time, it may be considered that the person may be lazy and this may deprive him off certain opportunities that might help him in one way or the other.
Last but not least, working hard or been productive gets one a recognition or a specific type of award that goes a long way in life. There is no doubt about the fact that people who work hard are awarded the most and are the ones that are shown to the world for others to see and emulate their footsteps. For instance, Usain Bolt has been winning almost all his race in the Olympics and it sends a good message about him to the world because of how hardworking he is. Due to this someone else can decide to emulate his footsteps to become a world star like him.
Again no one chooses to be last in whatever he is doing but rather aims at the high spot. Although some people say that been idle is the best way to go because it relaxes the body and gives it a new form of strength actually doing something always not only exposes one to new ideas and strategies but also makes the human body active and vibrant at all times.
It always good to look at the brighter side of good and it is always advisable to go for what is right. Productivity brings a lot of good things in a person's life than any other thing a person can think of while Idleness brings nothing but retrogression in one's life. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
BDC0340D4BD5 | Dear Generic_Name,
I have always wanted an opportunity to visit and learn about the police force. I am very interested in crime and like to help people. At school I am taking a criminology class. I would like to look for more opportunities to see what it's like to be a cop. Not only do I like to help people I like to solve things. I am interested in making this my job and I want to be able to understand everything that cops do. I want to be selected to explore new things and further my knowledge on how to be a good cop.
In additon, I am capable of doing this and I believe I can go far in this career. I will take this opportunity serious and I will let it teach me new things. I am open to knowing what's it's really like out in the world. Having to solve things and really working your head to solve a case is what I find really intresting. If I could help anyone in any way I would and that is what cops do everyday. I know that this will help me pursue a career in the police force.
In conclusion, as the manager of the police force I hope that you can see that I am capable of doing this and will select me to visit. The like I have for solving things and helping others will help me as a cop. I strongly believie I can be a good cop when I get older. Having criminology class made me want to be a cop even more. I hope that you select me to learn and see what it's like to work in the police force. | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
BDF13939FA26 | Students may say inactivity is the way to go, However other student say keeping yourself occupied will lead you towards achievement. But staying occupied is the way to go if you wanna be successful and achieve things in life. Sitting around and doing nothing wont lead you to anything sucessful in life.
If your at home sitting around having nothing to do will not help you to be successful. If you try to find something productive to do it will help you in the future. To be productive or to do something productive really does'nt have to be school work related it can be anything like having a job, chores or helping around the community.
Lets say you have home work but you dont feel like doing it, because your used to not doing anything and or are lazy to do it. which means you are more likely to procasanate. On the other hand if your used to doing your work the same day its assigned and or turn it in on time you are less likely to procasanate because you are used to staying occupied and doing all your work.
From my own expierence, when i was 14-15 years old i wouldnt do anything at home or at school which caused me to do negative things that didnt lead me to achieve my goals at that moment. Now that im 17 years old i keep myself busy by doing school work or working my part time job, which wont cause a negative effect on me because im preparing myself for my future and life goals.
Overall students think that doing nothing is the way to go, but other students say that keeping themselves occupied leads them to a succeful and positve life.
Now a days i can tell that teenagers that have been getting into legal trouble really dont have anything to do outside of school. While other teenagers actually do outdoor and indoor activtiy to keep themselves out of trouble. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
BE1752DCF09C | Some students take online classes they think is good to take more classes than in classroom.
However, when they need to turn the work and they are stuck in problem they can not find teacher to help them, or the device has broken, so students they can not turn the work.
Although some people think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home, it is actually true that students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because there are no teacher for help them and some students they do not have internet at home.
When the students find a problem they will need teacher for help them to turn the work before the deadline.
However, if there are no teacher for helps them, then students will can not turn the work on time and students will get bad grade.
As result, one student is takes class online, in one day he find problem that he can not understand it and there are no teacher for help him, then he get bad grade because he can not understand the problem to turn the work on time.
So, if the students take the classes in classroom they will turn the work on time because there are teacher in classroom.
Therefore, students need teacher for solve the problem that the students was stuck on it to turn the work.
Some student they do not have internet at home or they do not have good internet to do the work.
However. some students when they do the work they can not submit it before time end because they do not have good internet.
As result, one student he live in area that they do not have good internet, so when he want to submit the work the network does not working and then he get bad score because he did not submit the work.
So, if the students take the classes in classroom they do not need internet to submit the work.
Therefore, students they do not need internet to submit the work in classroom.
To conclude, students will benefit from taking the classes in classroom to get good grade, understand the lesson and learn form lessons to help them in life time.
Therefore, classroom was benefit more than take the classes online because students will find teacher to help them and they do not need internet to turn the work. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 4 |
BE1B8DAE1D75 | Does finish high school in three years it's a good idea? or it's better the traditional four years of high school? Finish high school early it's a good idea for most of the students. However, in other cases students preffer the traditional four years of hihg school because in that way they are allow to take all the clasess that they need to be more prepared for their future.
Finish hihg school early can be a good idea to star thinking about the future. For example, it can help you to mature faster and take the rihgt decisions about what do you want to do the rest of your life and how you want to live. Also, this can help you to chose the college that you want to go and be more focus on your future and find the job that you want. Finally, it's a good oportunity to star working and make money and at the same time to overcome challenges in the future.
Finish high school early it's a big oportunity to be someone in life and working at the same time will help you a lot, start living your own life one year younger than others can help you to see the real world and it can be a good experience. As a result, you can make proud your family and show others that finish high school one year early it's not a bad idea if you work very hard. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
BE2532E0867B | Technology, it may be a helpful tool, but it's also a distraction which affects adults and children. This means that now, almost everybody are so into technology in certain way. I get that people use technology because of their jobs, but for other people is a distraction. I'm not saying it's a bad to have technology, what i'm saying is that now people don't hangout like they used to, they don't go shopping anymore now, they only want to be at home this is why, I considered a negative effect to people's lives.
Now almost teenagers, don't hangout with their friends anymore because they just can face time or call them without going out of their house. If they do hangout they are only on their cellular devices and not socializing; that's mean to the person that they are hanging out. They are only worried about their social media for example, they only see how many likes, comments and followers they get. Also, about what people say about them in social media and if they get tag in a picture. This is how people is now, they don't see the importance of talking to each other, they only want to know about what people say about them in social media.
People now does not want to go shopping stores anymore, which this means that stores are closing because of people buying everything online. So buying everything on online is the new thing on technology, therefore people now doesn't need to go out to buy what they need, now people just can order it that's why, they are being more lazy. For example, if they want pizza they just order it online or they saw a cute dress, but they didn't wanted to go to the store and buy it, they just order it online. And they get it to their house, so they don't go all the way there.
In this generation, almost everyone stays at home because they just want to be alone watching Netflix or being in their cellular device. Back then, people always went outside and play with their friends in the streets. It was fun to play with other people, people enjoyed it. Sometimes they even got the chance to meet more people. Now, if they want to be play with other people, they just download a game on their cell phones, computer or even on social media; now they have games too. Also, people used to go watch a movie or hangout at least, but now people stay at home because they can see the movies or playing videogames with other people online.
In conclusion, people don't hangout like they used to, they don't go shopping anymore, now they only want to be at home. Technology had people changed a lot during this generation. But, what i have seen technology is a negative effect on peoples life. This why it's not a good thing of having technology, because is keeping people away from the other people. It's a distraction that's taking away from not talking to family, friends, etc. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
BE28A2EEAE06 | There are many kinds of enjoyable educational activities. Completing a science experiment is the most enjoyable activity. it's the most enjoyable activity because doing a science experiment teaches kids to have more responsiblity on completing something. it teaches them to work hard together and have responsibility. My favorite thing about doing a science experiment is teamwork. I think that working together is important because it teaches kids to bond like family,talk to each other about it, and learn what mistake you made about it. Even if you don't make a mistake you still learn different things at the end, like bonding and learning how the experiment was supposed to be done.
The activity is enjoyable because my friends and I get to do experiments together as a group. We assign a person to do a different task so everyone can work. Our teacher tells us to clean up after ourselves for her next classroom so she could get more organized. Doing a science experiment is helpful because people will start to like learning about science. This activity also makes you understand better as you are doing the experiment. These are the reasons why i think completing a science experiment is a enjoyable and educational activity. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
BE3784039C72 | Small acts of kindness has an impact because it can help you out, they can believe in you, and you guys can play sports with each other.
It can help you out on your education and other things. For example, you went outside and saw an old man on a sidewalk and you helped him walk across the road thats means you are showing him respect. I has a day where I saw a homeless man at a store and I had to give him $5 dollars because he was a nice man, plus he gave me respect. After that day I went to the store to see if he was still there, since he was so generous . When I was him I was shocked that what was he wearing. He has like a $10 dollar cloths on and he told me how to get an education from his buddy that is rich.
They can believe in you what you say. For example, you gave your mom respect and honor her a prize for being a careful mom, she will believe in you that you can do the SOL test excellently. People believe in you when you dont lie a lot. I lied to my dad once and he still believed me buy when I lie twice and he figures it out, I'll get an punishment. Some people doesn't care because they don't understand what are they talking about like sports or something.
You guys can play sports with each other. For example, there was 2 people in a park and they saw each other and both of there favorite color is blue and they became best friends and played sports that they each liked. I has a friend when I didn't know before also he was very athletic, he was the same kind as me but i'm not really a athletic person. I talked to him and said hi, "he said" hi back so normally. I told him can I play and he said sure and after that we became good friends.
It can help you out, they can believe in you, and you guys can play sports with each other so thats why small acts of kindness has an impact. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
BE4764F7BFF1 | The Downside of Online Classes
A couple of schools offer online classes through virtual videos and video conferencing for students to take from home. Some schools might think that students would benefit from this and others think that this is not a good idea. From my perspective, students would not benefit from taking online classes for many reasons such as; they could get distracted easily, they miss out interacting with teachers and students, and they would eventually get bored of online school at home.
To begin with, many students K though 12th grade get distracted easily. The distraction is not because we don't want to do the work, but it's our minds. Everyone's minds work in a different way and theres always going to be that part of us that gets distracted by the small things around us. Also, technology is somewhat of an issue because it distracts many people because of the games and many apps that it has. Students could go off task and go off playing games or watching videos while they are supposed to be learning and doing their work online. For example, sometimes even I get distracted while doing my work at home through my computer or smart device because of the many other things I could be doing instead of doing homework. There are many distractions online and around us that could make us go off task instead of keeping us focused to do our work.
Furthermore, many students would miss out on interacting with other students, teachers, and staff. In other words, when you are taking online classes the only person there with you would be your teacher, whom is communicating with you through your computer. No one else would be there with you to help you through it, everything would have to be on your own. Ultimately, if you are in a school many teachers and students would be there to assist you with any questions or concerns that you might have. Also, you would miss out on a lot more exciting events such as school dances,
football games, and pep rallies. There is so much that you would miss out if you wouldn't go to a public school and decided to take online school instead.
Ultimately, you would also be spending almost all day in your house because of online classes. A regular school day is about 8 hours, meaning the online classes would be about the same time , or more or less. In school 8 hours is already tiring enough because of the learning and listening, but think of 8 hours at home with no breaks in between, that would be extremely exhausting. Almost all students that attend school come for a full 8 hour day, which includes break in between classes, then once school is over they go back home to be able to relax. If you are at home for 8 hours doing work, you wouldn't want to spend time relaxing at your home because eventually it would get boring there after a while. In my experience being at home gets boring to the point where I don't know what else to do to not be bored at home. In other words, being in the same place for a whole day would get boring and uncomfortable.
On the other hand, other schools claim that it is a good idea for students to take online classes. They are in favor of taking online classes through video conferencing. Some of the schools think that online classes are a good idea because many students could possibly avoid drama, get 1 on 1 assistance, and learn quicker. Although some of it is true, online classes should not be necessary. Online school should only be necessary if a student does not feel safe at their school because of personal reasons.
Overall, online classes are not a good idea at all unless it is necessary because of safety issues. Besides that, it would not be a good idea because many students would get distracted when they are supposed to be doing work, students would miss out on interacting with other students, teachers, and staff, and they would spend most of their day at home which is unhealthy. | 5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
BE68C5AB58A1 | Having you wonder why people able to accomplish so much just in few days? Today society people always works so much they miss out their opportunity in life. Although some might argue that, it is better to does inactivity also serve a purpose, actually it is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something because can lead successful and you gain experience.
It is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something can lead to successful. Thomas Jefferson say it is always good do something. For example,My uncle when my came to united States he always do somethings with his hand such as construction and fix people car my uncle always doing somethings new if thous wasn't good them but tried able to accomplish them as such files tax for people he was able accomplish them.
My uncle now files tax people get pay a lots;
when people do not know how files tax they came to him files for them by that he was successful because he accomplish more if always doing somethings now he has own company where people work for him. He always advisory worker in order for you to successful always do somethings new. This show that it is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something. Another example, it is better to accomplish more if we are always doing lead successful for example,Bill Gate who always doing somethings he was the first person to create Microsoft.
Bill Gate like always like do somethings with computer. He was successful because he always like to do somethings
Bill Gate was rich man on the whole world today because he always do somethings build computer. This show that it is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something because can lead successful
It is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something you gain experience. for example, my brother who was doing somethings he able to accomplish more things. The first my brother do his internship how to construction wasn't good at all but he was also keep doing it instill he was able accomplish it now he know to how to fix roof and many more things he is expert construction build. This that It is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something you gain experience. Another example I wasn't good at Algebra at all I was fail the class also Got F on classwork and test to
I decide to stay after with teacher start practical math question I understand little by little but the first take my math test able pass test got B on the test my first every to got B on math. I use thought that wasn't at my math class but always do somethings in my class able to gain experience in class. This show that
It is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something you gain experience.
The other side claim that it is better to does inactivity also serve a purpose, because you can be more wise about around you however it is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something you can learned for example, when my mom came to American she did not know how to speak English. She always practical how to read in English and write English. She was able to accomplish that because she always somethings with English leaned how speak English. This show that is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something you can learned.
Another example It is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something you can learned . Always doing something you can learned from it for example I did not know how to cook anythings any time put dish on fire never come out good but when always keep cook it start to turnout good I was able accomplish always something new with my dish.
Finally it is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something because can lead successful and you gain experience. Although some might argue that, it is better to does inactivity also serve a purpose they are wrongs. Never stop trying something new in life it will turn out be more successful then you never to be expected. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
BE6A28051A30 | In my opinion, i completely agree with this association church statement. Success consists of going from failure to failure until you get what you're being fighting for, without losing your enthusiasm. However i realized that the time period it's not the same to the one that we're living on. Company Association, Churches, and Governments are not alike as before, because now if you are trying to achieve something and for some reason you failed, people will start judge on your acts that you're not capable to become your dreams reals. Eventhough failure plays an important role in the pursuit of success. I would like to share one specific example that fail is the promotion that brings you to success.
I would like to lasso the example of your first day on your new job. We all passed through that situation , you feel like you're not lace in, in the directions that your boss or supervisor gave it to you to do and thanks to that some employees start laugh at you, about your failure and no one is loyal to come up to you and teaches you how to do it they stand by and wait until they see that you made it wrong then they try to help you. But, let me tell you something that you already know, the world isn't a rainbow it's a very mean and nasty place and it doesn't matter how rude you are, it would put you into your knees and keep it permanently if you let it. Not you, not me, even no one hits that hard like life does. But, it does't care how it hits, the only thing that really cares is about how much you can take, how much you can get hit and keep moving forward. If you know what you worth, then go out and get what you worth, but you must have to be able to hold out hits and not to came and blame others and say; I can't be the person that i want to be, because of him or her, or anybody. That's how winner is done.
In summary all the proofs plays an important factor in how to be successful in life, sometimes is that shove that you needed to get higher. In addition to this, you have to be able to hold out the criticisms of others, if you are not capable your enthusiasm will get shrink and all the effort would be vainly. | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3.5 |
BE928441C9D6 | I agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. I believe Churchill about what he said ''success consists of going from failure without loss of enthusiasm ''
sometimes in life you have to be a failure to be successful. For example , I know friend of mind when he first came to the USA he didn't even try to speak English.
After a while the time came and he had to learn and try when he tried he filed and filed couples times in till he be came a successful . me in person filed couples times in all SOLS
but I had fix and I kept trying and trying in till pass all of them. at the same time it might be a bad thing because some of us when they fail they give up so easy.
I sagest we should teach student about what that success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
BEC3906A1122 | Do you think that teenagers should be home by 10 p. m. or not? In this computer, I will argue that teenagers should have a curfew and be home by 10 p. m. to keep them safe and away from trouble. The streets will do you know good, so if teenagers get curfew that will be keep them away from the streets and be home safe with their family and friends. I can relate to this prompt, because I'm a teenager and I know how it feels like not having a curfew to save you from getting in to trouble that's why I will argue that it's important to have a curfew.
I think that if teenagers have curfews it will keep them away from trouble like I have already said. Not having a curfew is like you sending your kids to go die or giving them away to the streets and telling them they can do whatever they want and they will not get in trouble. Curfew will help a lot if the government make it a law that teenagers should be home by 10 p. m. if they are home their will be no getting hurt or being in trouble will the law or your parents. I'm a teenagers myself and I would love to keep a curfew that will keep me away from trouble and other bad creams that will get me in trouble will the law or keep me away from my family. No one loves getting in trouble,but if they are out last will other people they call friends that will get them in more trouble, because not all friends are friends when it comes to the streets; or going to jail. I know for sure that if we teenagers have a curfew their will be know one dying, getting hurt, or getting in trouble with the law which means going to jail not all the time, but their are lots of teenagers who go to jail just, because they don't have curfews. I know I'm a child and I don't know much about the law, but I rather get a curfew than go to jail or get in trouble with the law and my family just for staying out last at night.
Teenagers will be safe if they have curfews they will not be in streets or get their parents worried about where they are or what they're doing. Safety is the number one thing in the United States and any other country. The curfew will help them, because if they said 10 p. m. they have to be inside than they're inside, because no one can get to them where they're a safe place like there homes. They will be safe they will not get in to fights with people they don't know all, because of they were out side all night. They're too young to be outside last at night they need to sleep; because I know some teenagers go out on schools and that can ready affect them, because if you don't get enjoy sleep at night you will not be able to do your work in class and when you are sleeping you will miss out on what the teacher is talking about and when it comes to test you fail it all, because you didn't go sleep and stay outside with your friends all night. Teenagers need to be where they're safe, so that nothing will happened to them and their parents will not worry, because there are lots of creams out there you don't want your kids to be outside at night with all the crazy that's going on out there it's scary and I know no parents wants to see there kids get hurt, because they didn't have a curfew and they don't know when to come home. Curfew is there to help and keep us safe and the government need to make that law I really know that if they have curfew time hours how country will be a better place and no one will feel scared to go outside or stay there for long.
Curfew will make you have a better future it might sound crazy, but if we have curfews now as teenagers in the future when we get a job it will be easy for us, because we are already use to getting home quick, so that will not be a problem for us at work. The curfew will be a big help to us in the future like I said going to work early will not be a problem, because no office want a person that comes to work last. So, giving us a curfew at this age will help us a lot in the future.
Some people say that having a curfew is a bad and interfere in young people's lives, but they're wrong, because it keeps them away from trouble, safe, and they will have a better future if we have the curfew.
That's why in the future I would love to see the government make a law about that to keep us safe and keep us away from trouble, so i would give an arm to see that the government make that law I don't know how, but i know that "God" will make that happened in the future. | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
BEE04EB31D59 | What is the best leaning environment? Working in groups or working alone? Some people like to work in groups and others like to work alone. Many people have their ways of learning certain things. Some may like working in groups because it makes the work easier, bring up their confidence and social life. Others may like working alone because it helps people concentrate, they like to get their work done faster and they don't feel uncomfortable towards other people.
First, Working in groups might make the work easier, help bring up their confidence, or their social life. It can make their work easier by separating the work to make it faster to deal with the work. It can help bring their confidence by talking to other people. It can help them bring courage to make new friends and learn about each other. It can also help them with their social life. Instead of being on their phones they are learning together and getting work done. They are also getting to know each other.
Second, Working alone can help people concentrate in their work, they could be fast workers, and they don't feel uncomfortable towards new people. It can help them by concentrating in their own work to feel more comfortable with themselves. They could be fast workers because they are not being distracted and they can go on their own speed. They won't feel uncomfortable or awkward by other people because some people don't like meeting or being with people. Most of them just want to be alone or with people they might know.
All in all, find what you feel more comfortable with it could be being alone or being in a group to study with people you might want to get to know or with your friends that your comfortable with. Working alone is the best choice for most people because they might be able to work faster, they are fully concentrated in their own hard work and they might just feel comfortable with themselves. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
BEE8F91F40E7 | It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change but that is not true open minded people and second chances help change the first bad impression that was given accidental.
First, people with open minds for example a teacher may see a student as a troublemaker but after the students second impression the teacher sees that the student after all isn't a troublemaker but a respectful student. An employer with a open mind may see an employee's first impression as someone who may not be worthy for the job but as the employee processes throughout the job his employer sees' that the employee after all is worthy for the job. Some may say that first impressions are impossible to change but that is not true first impressions can be changed by open minded people who are willing to give the second chance to change their impression,
Second, people who give second chances to others so they can show second impressions for example a father giving their daughters friend a second chance to show their impression again of not being a bad influence to their daughter. A business boss who gives a second to a employer to prove there a good influence to the job who can help grow the business.
To conclude, first impressions can be changed by open minded and second chances. First impressions will always be possible to be changed for a better impression. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
BEFA85A6134B | Have you ever come across of asking people for an advice if so great. Asking people for an advice is a good way to see what is good and bad. Why cause if you do something stupid your going to regret it. The good part is that it's gonna be for something that your gonna get better at. If so lets say your having a hard time baking a cake and you ask for someones help. The person you ask for help might say " Don't bake that cake for to long and use less eggs". So in that case you learn from the mistake and now you know how to bake a cake.
First of all it's great for asking an advice cause you can ether learn from it. When something wrong your friends are there to tell you what to do or what no to do. Cause if you dont ask people for there option it can mess you up. Let's say your about to fight someone without no one concern. If you would of ask for an advice they would of told you "Dont fight fighting is not the way to go just stay with me you'll be fine".
Asking for an advice is the way to go less getting in trouble.
Secondly advises can take you far in life you might say how it's just words, but each words have meaning. You remembering what people tell you in situation. Remembering the words they told you and you wont be in that same situation cause you learn from your last mistake. The word that can take you far in like is "Tell me who you your hanging around with, i'll tell you who yo really are". That sentence is strong cause it keeps you thing what your doing with your friends and what have you been do. Just ask for an advice to no get in trouble and be a great person in the world.
Lastly advises are great way to show that you care about someone cause not everyone is there for each other. Other might not care your going threw tough time, but ask people for an advice to not to anything stupid or something your gonna regret in the future. Another thing try to asking other people for an advice cause two is better then one. Remember don't do something stupid there are people around you that want to help you in your goods and bad. Lastly be smart of what your gonna do its not gonna hurt you if you talk to someone and get an advice from an old person.
In conclusion, asking people for an advice is great cause it can help you in situation. Such as good and bad there are always time your gonna need to talk to someone. Always ask for help never stay quite cause cause your gonna do something your gonna regret. How I hope I showed you what is good for asking an advice and the pros and cons. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
BEFC24511B26 | The effects of students gets involved of a program, is relate ship,teamwork, and truth willy because all this thing builds up like a friend ship. Also the students will experiment this well there in a program as a team.
Relate ships is a important work with someone else. Also the program can make these students become friends. Friends can lead up to best friends. Relate ship can also help other people, what they did wrong to people. It can make them real lies relate ship is important to people.
Team work is other thing that is important to the program,because it share friend ship ,and relate ship. Team work can assist there team in game or in praction. It will effects a lot of people as a team. The program help both the students by assist each other. The older students show and help the younger students.
Lastly truth willy is very important, because it is part of people life. Truth willy will make program better and truth willy to other people. This will help the students trust each other will and as a friend or family. The both students will get more friends and look each other. The students will trust each other as a team work or a friends.
Inconlotion relate ship, team work, and truth willy make up a friend ship, and the program that the students will be as a team or a family. The program also help a lot to the students. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
BF01FFEF8CB3 | When you ask for advice, you ask multiple people right? I do. One of the reasons why seeking multiple options can help you make a better choice is because when you ask more than one people for advice, they mostly give you different ideas and the more ideas you get from people the easier it feels to make that choice. Another reason why seeking multiple options can help you make a better choice is that when you ask different people for advice they would give you their own opinions about that choice. For example, if you ask your friend for advice for a choice you are going to make, that friend might tell you something positive about it, in the other hand, if you ask another friend for advice for a choice they might tell you something bad about it which will be way different than what your other friend said. The third reason why I think seeking multiple options can help you make a better choice is because if one person told you a negative advise and the other person told you a positive advise, you could pick which one you think is helpful. The fourth reason why I think seeking multiple options can help you make a better choice is because if you ask a friend for advice they can tell you their personal thoughts about that choice and if you ask another person they might give you their personal thoughts about it. For example, if you ask a friend to tell you if you should do your homework or not that friend might say "No dont do your homework and lets hang out" ,in the other hand, if you ask your other friend if you should do your homework or not he might say "Yes do your homework because if you dont you might get a bad grade", and then you would have to pick which one is better for you. To conclude, if you realy need advice, you should ask multiple people so then you could get more ideas. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
BF0AF86DFDE1 | I agree with the plan of having an afterschool homework club. Because some students have a hard time finishing homework by themselves and if teachers stay with the students to help them finish their homework that would be amazing because that would mean less students failing. Also some kids might not have computers or any electronic device in their houses. Although if their is no afterschool homework club that may be good because students cant get help from any teachers and that could be good because they can know that not everything in life is easy unless you are good at it or try your best and your hardest. Another good reason that I think might be good for having afterschool homework clubs is that sudnets get a chance to enteract with other students and they also get a chance to veiw or examine how the other students do their own homework.
Some kids migh take advantage of having afterschool homework club by cheating the answers off of somebody and then leaving. So I think if the afterschool homework club shouldn't let students look at each others work until they are done. And some kids may take it as fun club and talk through the whole thing. But there is always the kids that do what they are supposed to do. They do not play around,joke around, and distract anyone from doing what they are supposed to do.
So, at the end I think that there should be an afterschool homework club because there is more details to back it up then there is for backing up not having the afterschool homework program. And alot of kids could change their work habbit and not get as much as bad grades. And mostly kids who care about their grades would want to join so there is high chance that kid do what they are supposed to do. But not having an afterschool homework program would mean that kids that really need to improve their grades would have a chance to do so and would have a chance to finish then grade they're in with good grades to start of for their next year. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
BF21550BA5BF | Dear Mr Manager
I would like to work at Outback Stake House, and I just want to say your food is amazing and I just want to work there because im really interested. And I know I will start low but I want to billed my way up to the cook, and I was wondering if it would be OK to visit and take a look at the resteront and see where is everything like a meeting. And the time where I am available is Saturday, wendsday, or Thursday if thats OK with you. My plane is to work there until im done with high school and after that I will go to college, but while I am working there I want to please the customers so they can come back again,and I just want to work hard and get promoted. And the reason why I would like to work there is you pay good money and I just really like that resteront itself and it would br new for me. And ya that is why I would like to work there and what I would like to pursue there i hope they hire me.
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BF267B42A2A4 | The humanity now in days had been not so good lately, there is many different opinions on how you should do things in life or how you should act. It is well informed that people can be complicated but nobody will said the life will be easy all the time. I think people should start making their own decision because, they can learn about life, have a better understanding on how life works and how to value their-self and be efficient person on their own.
However, there is a big chance that people can tell you how you really should live your life, you have to experienced it in persons there will be a day when you are going to fall or something can happen you are not aware on how life can be so hard and difficult in times. Also mistakes are allow nobody is perfect life will surprise you anytime without you notice it you got to be ready to face it not matter how easy or hard it could be. When you make your owns decision you will be capable of making the right decision for yourself.
Meanwhile, it is hard to understand life sometimes but is part of our daily life and you have to understand how it really works so the way you do not stress out for a simple thing, life gives you challenges that only you as the only responsible of yourself have to face it and all will depends how you take things it will be a result of it. As we grow life will make us stronger or weak it all depends but best choice of making the right thing is that you should be aware that anything can happen without given you a hint it will hit you on the right time or not on the best time you wanted it. Anything that will hurt you will make you strong and that's how you know that your are living life.
Lastly, people might not notice it but if we do not love ourselves nobody will do it, people do have to depend on some else to be happy it's all about you. In addition anything you do will not make others happy you have to learn to do everything on your own because that more efficient you are the more good things in life you will make. Be your own and value every single thing that is around, but remember nothing is easy life can surprise you anytime.
In conclusion, people should start making their own decisions to be aware of what life really is if your learned and have a better understanding about life in a daily routine anything that will happen will not surprise you. Loving yourself will make you love others. Hopefully people will take a note that life is all about you and not others each person has a different thoughts and ways of seen life. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
BF56324B3A86 | Do you know how many people are unhappy for be someone that they don't are?. At the present time in the world exist millions of people that don't live their life of the way that they want. Sometimes is difficult be yourself in a world where the whole people think that be different is wrong, but the truth is that the greatest accomplishment in the life of each human is be unique and have individuality in all your presence, because be yourself is the goal of the happiness, fight against the prejudice of everyone is not easy and accept you exactly like you are, looks like a war if the whole world is trying to change you.
Many people think that have a success and amazing life is have a lot of money, be an important person or have material things but all this things in really don't matter in the process of be yourself, because a person can have all this things but this things don't define you like a person and this aspects don't give the happiness, and something very important in the life of everyone is that, if you don't have happiness you don't have nothing. Is a fact that at least the 60 percent of people is not happy with their life, but studies affirm that this can change just if they choose be hones with themselves and take out of their life want they don't want. And the first step to be happy is be yourself. The people don't can live being liar with themselves, because this just bring like consequence a miserable life. A person have to accept their personality and their interest based on their thoughts. A serious consequence that the people get if they don't be honest with themselves are diseases like depression, This is a very dangerous problem and one of the most common causes are don't be agreeable with the person or the way that the person is living. For this and many others reasons is that is very difficult be yourself but is the biggest reward.
Alongside of your life you have to make a lot of decisions and is important always hear you. The people cannot allow that someone take decisions for they if that affect who are they.
First is very important know exactly what do you want because that is the same that be happy with yourself.
Always take your own opinion first, is the answer of be really happy because is very easy follow the opinion of the others based in their life's or be influenced for a world that always is trying to make you someone else, someone that they don't are. But at the end what a person want is the answer of be really happy.
Everyone in the world is trying to find their correct way in their life, and be honest about feelings and all mentioned in this paragraph can be the answer to arrive to the goal and be happy with yourself.
Is a fact that actually the world is a constantly war, because the majority of the citizens in the world are trying to fight for their rights and be honest with themselves and also with the whole world. But is true that this is not a easy task. The only person that someone need worry about what they going to think is yourself!, a person don't have to worry about the opinion of the others, just care what do you think!. Unfortunately, not everyone understand this, and sometimes the people wants that the world accept us form the simple fact of be a person. Is very hard be like you really are if millions of people want change your mind and they refuse to accept that everyone is different, that there are things that don't have that be equal and that it's fine, that the diversity is part of a balance. Everyone is here, in their country, in their community to learn about the others, and have respect of they, don't care their race, color, language, traditions, customs and many others things that represent and define a person, this is the correct, not be equal. Nowadays a lot of people is trying to make this world a better place where the prejudices not exist and where each person can be what they want and have the rights that the people need and deserve. Is a difficult battle but without doubt the result is the greatest accomplishment. And is a fact that if the people are happy with how they are, and they accept their form of be, with their qualities and defects, anyone, and studies repeat that anyone can affect you, because you are really on the top of the goal and when you are there nothing can make you go down.
Many philosopher and researchers believe that the problem with the society that don't accept and allow the people that is different, is because since the beginning of the world the people hidden their really feelings and interests for the fear of be rebounded. In part is own fault because the people never said something when something was wrong, but never is late, an actually the majority of the people is trying to change the perspective about what is fine in the world. That is why accept you exactly like you are, looks like a war if the whole world is trying to change you. We have to be strong and don't allow that anyone dispute your decisions. Another reason therefore is hard be yourself is for you, sometime the people are so exigent with themselves, you are your own most hard critical. If everyone would honest with themselves , this would be something normal for the society, but is such difficult accept us, that is seen wrong be unique. We definitely have to change this way of see the circumstances and make it normal.
Is clearly that we have a lot of learn but I think that we going to the correct way. The people have to travel many obstacles for win their individuality and always remember where we are and where we want arrive.
Be yourself, is really difficult if a whole society is telling you that you can not be different and that be unique is wrong, because how you can understand who are you, if anyone give you the chance to know it, but without doubt discover the answer will be the best accomplishment that a person can have because live being you, is the better that could exist, for a complete life. | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
BF580042A644 | The city council is debating on having curfews for teenagers, weekdays they have until 10 p. m and on the weekends they have until midnight. This is for the teenagers to be safe and not be out late because something could happen to them if they are out on the streets at night. This rule would be an outstanding one because they can cause less trouble and they can stay out of trouble at the same time. This rule won't interfere with young peoples life, it would keep them safe at home and their parents don't have to worry about them doing anything bad. The teenagers can be talking to their friends, loved ones, and family on their phone or be playing with them on PlayStation or Xbox.
My first reason why I think they should the adopt the curfew rule is because it keeps them at home and keeps them safe. For an example, if your teenager stays home and doesn't go out passed his curfew then he or she won't get hurt or even worse shot by a dangerous person . If the city council adopt the curfew rule they can prevent your son or daughter from getting beat up or getting shot . This rule can prevent anything dangerous happening to your son or daughter, this will keep them inside and they can study, catch up on miscomplete assignments , and do homework. You won't have to worry about them that much because you know they are safe at home and won't try to get you in a serious problem. It's also your job as parents to keep watch out on your son or daughter because they can try sneaking out. The city council can't really do anything about your teenager sneaking out from your house so you are responsible for watching your kid.
My second reason why I think the city council should adopt the curfew rule is to keep your teenager from breaking the law and to keep them from doing horrible things. To demonstrate, If your teenager is not out on the street then he or she can be drawing or painting on paper instead of doing graffiti on building or walls . This could prevent teenagers from getting in trouble and prevent people from cleaning up the teenagers own mess. If you have talent to draw amazing objects then try showing it in school or on your personal items and not on the cities property. I suggest buying a ton of paper or objects that you can paint on instead of doing graffiti on buildings or walls own from the city council. If your teenager is caught doing this , he or she is gonna be in a serious problem and they will have to clean it.
My final reason why I think it's important to have a curfew rule is because this will prevent your teenager from doing illegal things such as drinking or doing drugs. We don't know what our kid could be doing passed curfew so I think we need this curfew so we can make sure they are not doing anything illegal. This keeps our kid safe and also out of trouble because its horrible to be drinking and doing drugs. For an example ,If your teenager was caught doing illegal things and doing it passed curfew , it would be extremely terrible and your teenager would be in a whole lot of trouble. This is why having a curfew and checking on your kids room once in awhile will help you prevent this from happening and also keep your teenager from having a black out, crashing or a overdose. If your teenager has some bad friends, tell your kid to stop talking to them because they might try forcing him or her to do something that they do not want to do. Instead of doing those things , just talk to your loved ones, friends, and family on the phone or play with them on PlayStation or Xbox.
As a result, having a curfew on weekdays and weekends is important because this could prevent anything from happening to your teenager. I do not think they interfere with young peoples life but keep them safe from anything happening to them , keep them from breaking the laws and getting in trouble by the police .My three main reasons from having a curfew were to keep them from doing anything illegal, to keep them from getting hurt or killed,
to keep them from doing graffiti on buildings and walls, and makes the parent communicate with the teenager and see what they are doing .One last important thing is to always communicate with your teenager because they want your help but deep down they won't ask for it , so it's important to check up on them once an awhile and see how they are doing.
This is why I think the city council should adopt the curfew rule . The curfew rule is an outstanding rule and I think more city councils should adopt it as well. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
BF5D1465DFFC | I agree what Duke Ellington's said because sports, school, and family there is always a problem and a chance for you to do your best. Sports is what most of people do play a sport but we always get frustrated when the opposite team scores a point so we try our hardest to score back the point. School is what a lot of humans struggle on its our work sheets and test but every question wrong we get it makes our brain smarter so do our best and not pick the wrong answer. Family is people we love and hang out with all the time but not very often we get into problems but every time we have a problem we just have to find a solution to do our best. This is why I agree what Duke Ellington said about a problem is a chance to do your best.
Sports is fun activity we can all do but most of the people do or watch but a lot of the player or fans. Start to become angry because their opponent scored a point but. The players can solve the problem and do their best to try to get the point back. When I was ten years old i played on a soccer league my team was losing to our rivals our coach told us the problem why they keep scoring on us. The team and I fixed the problem an tried our best trying to win back again and we did win. My brother plays basketball he used to be terrible at playing basketball he missed every shot but fixed the problem by practing more and tried his best. Most of the sports have a problem but they fix it.
School is a place where we make friend learn new subjects. For some people in school they struggle a lot on worksheets, test and quizzes. I used to struggle on test and quizzes but when i got the test or quiz back i studied on the questions i got wrong. So when next time I took the test i would get those questions right. So the problem i got wrong i tried my best to remember it so i would not forget it when i have the same questions on the test
Family are people we love and hang out with but sometimes we have problems with each other. When problems happen we try to fix our way and try our best to not have problems anymore. When I was younger I never wanted to share with my siblings. But i had to fix the problem and try my best to share with my siblings. My older brother dislike me to use his video game so my parents help fix his problem with me and my brother sharing.
This is the essay about how Duke Ellington saying help a lot of people to fix their problem. All of my problems were fixed so it my help people fix their problems to fix them. The problem to people is that they dont know how to fix there problems and that is why a lot of people struggle on that. I used to have a lot of problems with stuf now i fixed them. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
BF5E7CD37E4B | " Imagination is more important than knowledge "
Can imagination be more important than knowledge?
I think that imagination can be more important than knowledge. Due to the imagination of some scientists have created a massive number of inventions that benefit almost all the people of the world in that part is when knowledge is created based in imagination. In movies of sci-fi the director imagine a space full of flying cars and gas stations in the space, one great example was in the movie "Return to the future 2" the director and the writer of the movie imagine a skateboard that could elevate one ore two inches from the floor and they put it in the movie, and now scientist invented a skateboard that can elevate four centimeters from the floor.
First of all, whiteout imagination the world couldn't be the same like we know it right know,the imagination can help to improve your knowledge. Think about that a world whit geometrical forms like squares or rectangles, horrible! For example: Bill gates was a normal person, studying in a normal university, and whit a normal family. But one day he imagine how to improve his knowledge of school of the systems of computers, then he invented windows, so thats is a great example o how imagination can change the world.
Also, the imagination can help people work. You use it in projects, you use it in homework, also you use it in tests (Like me right now). For example: I was in a project of a debate of countries, my team was N.Korea, i needed to imagine if i where in Generic_City presenting my statement to all affiliated countries of UN, so i began to write, i though i was going to lose, because my enemy was the Westerns powers, but then we could win due i could imagine if the situation was like i where a person of N.Korea speaking to orders governments.
Third, imagination makes you feel better, when you are bored or when you are sad, the imagination always can make you appear a smile in your face. For example: i meet a partner that was depressed, i tell him "i know how you are going to be happy, imagine you and the people you love to be near are in a vacation, then imagine you are whit out problems, whit out school, whit out homework,etc. Now i think now you are willing to be without stress or difficulties in these day", he told me he was better.
Finally, I think and many people does is that whit out imagination we couldn live happy and whit a lot of fun, knowledge is a part of the bast world of imagination. People famous and normal people are successful by the imagination they use in theres life. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
BF5E801B7FD6 | "i think that the principal have to considering allow student to bring phones to school and use them during lunch periods and other free times, as long as the phones are turned off during class time.. because they have to call your parent when the school is end at 3:50".or if you a emergency u cant call your parent .first than all ,all kids like to have a phone but some of this kids use in the school to chat with other kids and they don't listen to the class you cant not use the phone in class if they used the teacher can giving him a detention . i think that are kids not use his phone in class. so i agree with the principal to allow student to bring to school y case of emergency if u need you can used. so u can bring your phone and used when you finish the school. :) | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
BF652DD7B469 | There are a lot of poeple these days that having a bad attiude during a difficult time. Here are some ways to try to have a good attiude during these times.
Getting a bad grade on a test or quiz. Their are kids in middle and high school who study and at times get bad grades. These kids have trouble knowing that they failed their test or quiz. One way to provent this from happen is by having a good mindset. They can deepdown be mad, but if they put tell themselfs that "i'll try harder next time" they could do better on the retake or on the next quiz or test. Even when some kids that study a lot and fail some of they overreact during it.
Overreacting is another promble kids have. Some kids overreact by saying "if i fail this i wont get a job". Other times kids thing negativly about themselfs and they bring themselfs down. They could be telling theemselfs " i'm going to fail" or anything else instand of that they sould try telling them say "i'm going to try to do my best. They dont know intill they try to do their best.
Having a good mindset can help. Havin a good mindset meaning to think positivly and to know that not having passed their test or anyting in life. That everyone had to start from one place and build on. Other times kids should learn from their mistakes. They might have or might have not fail and they shouldn't put it on themselfs because they could fail if not.
These are ways to provent kids from having a bad attitude to having a good attitude during their difficult time. They should try to be more calm and the should try to not overreact at much. They should also try to have a good mindset during it. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
BF72FB4B953F | Three year graduation
Is it beneficial for students to graduate a year earlier then the rest or could graduating earlier impact a student's health? Many high schools allow students to choose between graduating in three years or the traditional four years. Some students accept this offer with the idea of leaving early and not dealing with drama. In my opinion early graduation is not worth the mental, physical, and emotional stress.
To start off, when you choose to graduate within three years you are choosing to work during summer and do all core classes for junior and senior year in one semester. you worry so much whether you are going to pass or not here is where stress applies. Generic_Name, a college student at John Tyler community college, was suppose to have graduated last year skipping her fourth year but, unfortunately she couldn't keep up with everything. She had to do all her junior classes in one semester and her senior classes during second semester causing her to stress and have a mental breakdown in the middle of her Biology class. After consulting with her guidance counselor she came to the conclusion that she will have to do her fourth year of high school for her mental health's sake.
Now with that being said, transitioning from junior to senior year is hectic. You have to make sure you have enough credits to continue: make sure you keep up with all your classes and their requirements: and you have to stay up late studying and doing homework. A young adult needs at least 8 to 7 hours of sleep to properly function through out the day. A student that stays up doing late night homework and studying do not obtain most of those hours leaving them with only 2 to 3 hours to sleep;therefore causing them to be tired all day long the next day. The lack of sleep has a big impact on a student who wants to graduate early, for they fall asleep in class and miss out on important notes.
In addition, the simple attempt to graduate is emotionally stressful. Now imagine only having one year to do both junior and senior classes. Once again you worry about passing but this time you question yourself. You ask yourself " Am I capable of making it? and Am I smart enough?" and dwell on these questions. Eventually you start putting yourself down and start thinking whether you made the right choice or not. This is where your emotions come in to play. Meanwhile you are trying your hardest to do all your work you start feeling angry at yourself because you simply can not keep up. Soon enough you give up on everything your education and most importantly your future.
On the contrast, for many high school students graduation is an exit ticket. The faster we manage to graduate the better. We no longer have to wake up early in the mornings, we do not have to interact with students and their negative attitudes, and we no longer have to be caught up in high school drama. but even though graduating early seems glorious it is not worth all the emotional, mental, and physical stress of doing both years in one semester.
In conclusion, three year graduation is more than just saying " let's do it!". It takes away from your sleeping schedule; stressing you out when you fall asleep in class and fail to copy notes. Causes you to worry so much whether you are going to pass or not and mentally stress. you eventually start to question yourself, feel insecure and emotionally stressed. Graduating early seems glorious but once again it is not worth all the stress. | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
BFA732D9C006 | Buisness and schools should really consider the four day work week because it would help conserve energy for them. Schools and buisness would be having ten hours of work to do each day for the four days they have.
Students would have more time to do work and finish their assiments with the two extra hours of school. Students with low grades can get more help if its needed for them. Teachers wouldn't have to stay after school if there are two more hours of school. Students would learn more with the time they have to show the students.
Students would have an extra day of no school, so they can rest up. The students would have more time to be with there family. Students that have a job can go to work to make themselves the money they need. Students with big amounts of homework can catch up with that extra day, so all their work is completed. They would have time to do sports or something with the free time they have.
Energy would be saved without and extra day. Alot of our natural resources dont stay forever so we would have to help out by not using water, electricity and etc. So much energy would be saved if there was a four days of school. Electricity cost alot of money for a big building like a school to keep paying for.
Thats why schools should have school for four days to save the cost and energy that way the schools aren't left without energy in the future. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
BFAEA615906C | All individuals should follow their own instincts, and ideas. when trying to build a successful future, people should create their own ideas, make good decisions, and experiece new things by themselves to get more confident in their lifes. However pleople should make their own decisions and manage their ideas to do what they think is correct.
First, people should create their own ideas. although, they have to follow their instincts, and don't led anybody disturb their mind. Think on how they want to improve and try new things. Also seeking ideas from other people is not a very good thing when it won't benefit them. To understand what the role of life is, people should expand their ideas And work out more by themselves.
Second, people should make good decisions. In other words, people should decide what they really want. When people make good decisions they tend to be successful and encourage themselves to keep growing. Decide what people really want, and what can they really do, is very important, since not everyone is able to do what other people can do. Therefore, confidence is the key to make good decisions. We can also say that people need time to think about any bad consequenses that can result from any of their decisions.
Third, people will get more experince. In fact, people know more about life when their experience is greater. Experience will help people to know how to face problems whenever they make a mistake. Also, an important point of experience is that lessons of life won't led people make the same mistake over and over. Correct or incorrect decisions would make people more experienced. That's why, experienced peolple are more likely to success than not experienced peolple in order of the kind of knowledge that they have.
In conclusion, people as builders of their own life, should be independent, and don't wait until someone tell them what to do, and how to do it. Reasonable people would make up good ideas, be careful with any kind of bad decisions, and use experience as a tool to success, and build a great future for them. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
BFB07811C92D | It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Some people think that they can control there first impressions at any time that they wanted to, but thats is not right, first impressions are so fast that it does not let you think, or express in a different way they are faster them a second, there are impressions that can be change, but it depends in the situation that you are in, and other can not be change no matter what you do. I agree with this statement, because impressions are an affect, feeling or image retained after an experience.
Some impressions had a really bat affect in our lives, less say there was a time were maybe the only impression that some had was really not the one he wanted, but was the only one he could do, for example let say that there is a student in a classroom, maybe he is not feeling good, and he fart that it makes a realy loud some, and that everyone in the class hear it, his first impression will be to act normal but he could not act normal, because he knows that it was so loud that everyone heard him, so his going to feel shame of him self, his face is going to get red, and his hears and but thats something you can not control.
The feeling that some get at the firs impression is almost like something you don't have every day, well if you have embarrassing moment every time them you may get the wired feeling every day. Went you get the firs impression and is not every day situation is almost all time shame, confusion, uncomfortable, some times pain. But when is a every day thing, them is almost all the time happynes, like the feeling I get went my family ask me embarrassing questions or we have embarrassing moments. Is almos all the time happiness. Because it is a very day thing that they ask me things that it makes me uncomfortable.
The experiences that people get went they have a lot of firs impressions, are so impressive that they can act normal in a lot of situation,
for example went they were use to act embarrass or shame now they are capable to act normal, because of the experience that they had. Like I personable had a lot of experience that now insted of feel shame or embarrass I only get happiness. like went my mom ask me if i had a girlfriend I only smile or answer her that i do not and it is all normal, or at school went my friends ask me if I'm dating the girl I like, the answer I give them is yes or not, like a normal student, I dont get shame or anything. Because I had some experience during my life that it make me feel normal now.
I hope that in the future one day, when someone ask me something embarrass, and make me get a moment when my first impression is shame, or embarrass my feeling don't show up, and my experiences take place, for it not to have more affect in the moment, and make it more embarrassing than what it is already, because I dont want it to make me lost my mine, and make the moment the worst one in my life. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
BFB1E692333A | Imagine having a healthy life, but with negative attitude you will not feel great you will not feel good or excited about anything all of the energy that your body have is going to go away. It will be impossible to live happy with a negative attitude, but if you have a positive attitude everything is going to feel better. Having a positive attitude will help you succeed, have a good life, and higher emotions.
To succeed in life you will need to have a positive attitude. If you have a positive attitude you will succeed in life. Imagine having a job that you do not like, and you are thinking of looking for a better job, but you are not sure or you are having a negative attitude, those two things are going to keep you back from getting a better job. If you make goals in your life, and you want to accomplish all your goals you will need to start by having a positive attitude, for example you see a car that you really like, and you say it to your self I want the car or my goal is to one day be able to buy the car. You will start by putting more effort in your job to earn more money to get the car, and in all the process to get more money you will need to be positive or you will not get there. If you want to have a better position in your job or in anything that you are doing right know you need to have that positive attitude to get were you want to be.
Having a positive attitude is going to make you have a good life. If you have a good life you are going to have less stress and you are going to be healthy. Most of the times we do things to be happy and feel good, but if you are doing all those things with a bad attitude it will be difficult to feel the happiness. Having happiness in your life is very important because if you are not happy your are going to be depress and going through depression is a very difficult thing. Keep in mind that if you start having a positive attitude you will get through anything.
Finally higher emotions are going to help you stay strong and have a positive attitude. Positive attitude reflects in everything. If you have high emotions a lot of people are going to want to be around you mostly the people that have negative attitude or very low emotions because all they will want is to feel like you, they will want the good attitude. By having high emotions you can help a lot of people that are in a very bad place. Having high emotions will also help you create strong relations with other persons because you will understand how the others feel.
In conclusion, having a positive attitude will help you accomplish a lot in life it will make your life easier, and the other people arrow you. Positive attitude will help you succeed big in life you are going to have a lot of people arrow you because they will love the energy and the positive attitude that you have. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
BFB53ACD3DD5 | Have you asked to your-self what might people think about you or what impressions they have about you? That's a hard question to answer, but I guess everybody does it. First impressions not always are positive for our-selfs, it can make you doubt about your-self, look for people's approval, and get a low-esteem. First impression not always come into your life with good intentions.
As first point, first impressions make you overthink what to do and what to say, making you doubt about your-self, and loosing your confidence. Nobody should wonder what others think about them, because each person have their own life and their own problems.
In high schools, mostly the 90% of students look for the approval of their friends. Teenagers are the most affected. Essentially, this teenageers do not have their own life.
In facts, first impressions affect all people but mostly the teenagers. They get a low-esteem, all because the system in what now we life, first impressions.
I remember my first year of high school, I was afraid like a little chicken as we said in my country with no idea what to do or what to say, wonderig what they were thniking about me. There were a few days that I din't want to go to the school because I could felt tha the other students had bad impressions about me. | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
BFCE7D755436 | Do you think should student to use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes ?
A lot of young people has cell phones that can use for many ways. The young people use their cell phones for text with their family or do their homework, but Today's many kids are going away from people. However, they use the cell phone in bad ways in classroom, so, I believe students should not use the cell phones in class because they could cheat in their exams and get easy score.
The first reason , when the teacher says, "get out the phone, we are going to start study in our phone". The students does not care when the teacher is giving the instructions of the topic. A lot of students are going to playing games or listening music and when the teacher ask question about of the topic they would say, "i do not know' and every body starts to laugh because they were not paying attention in the classroom and their grades is going down.
The second reason,Today's in the world student only put their face in the cell phones. A lot of student use the cell phone for their social media in classes, therefore, Student are not paying attention in class when the teacher is explaining the topic. However, student when the cell phone is allowed to use, they will have more focus in their social media than classes. For example, A lot of student have the famous "snapchat" that it is film videos for ten seconds and share in your story for people see them, Student with their cell phones are going to put any video in their story to showing the teacher talking or everybody laughing.
Another reason and is the most important, Student cheat in exams with their cell phones because the teacher says, "you can use your cell phones in this test". however, students do not study for any home work or test. they can get a easy score. For example, they know can use the cell phones in test, but this time the teacher says, "you cannot use the cell phones in this test." The student are going to get bad scores because they thought that can use the cell phone to get a great score. however, a lot student do not study for any test when they can use the cell phone.
However, The propose of the teacher is that student earn easy information and good scores. The allowed to use the phone has a good way that students can search homework or read a book. Sometimes the teacher gives homework to do at home and you will use your cell phone for solve the homework. For example, students are learning other language and do not know some word in the information gave the teacher, they can use the translate to know the word.
In conclusion, Students should not allowed to use the cell phones in classrom because they are not going to learn anything at the final of year. Allowed to use the cell phone is a disadvantage for students in the futures in their jobs because they were always in their cell phone playing or social media. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
BFD5F32AA3C2 | People should make their decisions because first everyone should depends on himself in life to get more experience second people are not going to learn unless they make their own decisions third making decisions make people stronger and know what to do in a hard situation.
One Decision Can Change A Person Life!
However, some people might argue with that, because they think that people should not make their own decisions but they should seek guidance from experts to make a better decisions for them.
First, everyone should depends on himself and make a better decisions in life to get more experience for example a student can't get a good grade unless he makes a decisions to pay attention to the teacher and doing the homework.
Second, people are not going to learn unless they make their own decisions for example nobody will be by your side all the time and in the hard situations to help you make a good decision and a person should not just think once but twice and think far and know what are the consequences of every decision.
Third, one decision can change everybody life and that is on of the reasons why people should depend on them self because nobody cares about you more than you. Other reason is most of the successful people they started from nothing but they made a good decisions and they became successful.
In conclusion, people should make their own decisions because first everyone should depends on himself in life to get more experience second people are not going to learn unless they make their own decisions third making decisions make people stronger and know what to do in a hard situation.
Are you gonna make your own decisions now? | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
BFE92DE70CA2 | Although i believe it's a good idea to be our self where ever we are. over all being our self is better than act deafrient. Also not being comfort with it. Because being our self is mean trust our self. Not believing to any one who come to as, and till as any thing to Change as. then reaching our goal by trusting our self. For example. Being our self shows those people how strong we can be,and continuing our way to improve.
In a word that we see people change accomplishment. We should trust our self to not change. To a bad person, or any thing that a society try to make as. Trusting our self and continuing our way to improve more. to show a society how strongly we trust our self. So that way we keep our self in better way. Also i believe we can progress people around as. Because it show people that they can do same as we do.
When we see that some people really try to change as. Or a society that is Changed already, and they are following a different ways to improve their life. Also they try to change as as the way they want it. To follow their way, and we know that it is not the way we can improve. So to be our self, and we chose to improve our life in other rule. It is because we see something that is not going right, but the society has changing. Also it looks when those people try to improve, and they get that, they heard other people. and they dont know they rich something they effect some other thing that they dont know about about.
I believe it is not acceptable for as to do the same to heard some people. Then we should follow some other way to our life.
Clearly " is society that is constantly trying to make as change in highest improvement.(Author Ralph Waldo Emerson) I should believe to my self. That i can rich my goal successfully. progress on the thing that i need and want. So i should not let ant one to turn me from my goal. Because there is some people who want as, to not rich our goal or dreams. To advents my self i would work so hard. But is some people who is trying to fail as in our way to rich our goal. Then going to embrace as for are fail, also try to stop as to rich that dream. But i believe if we trust our self, and have a big goal to rich to. It will be possiball to get it. Then no one can get our way to stop as.
being our self trusting to our goal, and respect our self, makes people to respect as. As will as we do to them. Also reaching our goal dreams In a right way. But being in a society that people as changed. then try in to change me. SO i see the can improve but in not right way, and not respect between people. So then i believe i should be my self.
finally I believe it is good idea to be our self. and do the things that makes as happy about it. So if see in society that is changing, and see some people trying to, Change me. Even i do the right thing to improve. But those people saying to so the thing other, i know that is not right to do it. Because they way the are saying it could heard people. but they jut look forward to improve. Over all i believe to be my self and the the thing in right ways. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
BFEA2E7F1486 | To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment because at the day of today there's a lot people that doesn't want to accept the way that you are or you want to be. They will never be satisfied, they will judge you, they will talk bad things about you, but at the end it's just a obstacle that the life put in your way, so you can surpass it and finally find yourself and be how you are.
To be yourself in this actual world it's difficult for some people because sometimes they don't support the judges from other people and most of this people just decide to end with their life. For example the LGBT community get a lot of hate, judge and bad things from other people that is not part of it. People in this world just talk about others without thinking the pain that they can cause by saying just a few simple words. Other example is the people from other country that travel to another, there are people that are racist and make people feel that they are from another world, when they are actually they same, the only thing that change is the culture and language.
To be yourself in a world that is contantly trying to make you something else is one of the most important things that people have to achieve, to live the life better because you will never progress in your emotional life if you don't make people accept the way that you are.
For teenagers to be theirselves is most difficult because they are in a young age and sometimes they don't really know how they are or how they want to be, and when they finally find it, the hard part is coming. Then for older people, most of them don't care what people say about them, I have seen a lot of older people that dress and make to their selves what they want and I really like to see them because it makes me to be less insecure about myself, they just make me think a lot.
Live the life by showing how you are, the opinion of other people doesn't have to make you more insecure or make you think that if you do this or other things you will get judged or hated. You have to fight to achieve this because life is better if you do it, is better if you don't care about others comments, you will be more stronger than before if you fight with all this situations.
You will be more happy and will have a great life if you are yourself, you will be more certain about your opinions, decisions and actions. You can help other people to achieve this goal that is "To be yourself" because sometimes there is people that need from others to make a change in their life.
If you help them and they accept your help, they will be thankful to you because you help them a lot and you was with them, when nobody wasn't.
At the end of your days you will be really thankful to you because you live life the way that you are, not the way that others wanted you to be. You will think in all the things that you have to supported and achieved just to get your goal, to be who you are and at end you will knew that it wasn't hard. It was just obstacles that maked your life more stressful and harder but you did it. You got all the things that you wanted and the most important was, to be yourself. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
BFEE2D5C0FDC | I am agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson to always keep tryaing to do best . My greatest acomplishment were to be student of the month in my school . I always try to be successful in my classes. Maybe best of the class but if you can trying yo can be one of then. Alson you can make a goal for the year to get an A on your Geometry classs. I always try to compete with my friends who can get the best note on my exam.
My cousin is the only one that gets the best grade at home. she study alots and always gets very good grade. I admire her because English is not her first lenguaje and her mom is so proud of her . One day I want to be like her so can my family feels proud of me.
The greates thing that i want to is graduate for that i have to pass my clases and exams .For that I have to pass my others SOL and others elective classes that I have this year. the most dificult class that I have next semester will be Earthscience but I will pass that class and the SOL and i feel like i can do it.
Finally this are resons why i am agree Ralph Waldo on constantly try to make you greatest acomplishment on his life .I want to do the same in my life too. This are some reasons why i was agree. Always Try and never give up that you always can do greatest acomplishments on your life you only have try hard and you will success. | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
C01AC1CDDD65 | Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it?
I think is true that our selfs choose to make it be because one main reason is because nobody force us to do something we dont want to do we our selfs choose to do it or not do it, its all in our hands in making a decision and also in a decision we decide our personally in weather being a good person or being a bad person and also have to take in count if we are going to accept our consequences from our own decision of what we have choose to be and also how is going to show in our character as our personally around people and your family.
Do we choose our own character traits, or is our character form by influences beyond our control?
We choose our own character traits but we could be influences by other people and it our decision in weather doing what the rest of the people are doing and being influences by them we should take a position on the issue and to be influence but by our own selfs and not pretending who we are really not just because the rest of the people are doing it, it doesn't mean that we have to do it to it our choose and decision in weather doing it or not, we should be influences by our own form and beyond of our own control and letting nobody controlling us let live our own life. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
C02F3803D0D1 | People think that first impressions are almost impossible to change. I disagree with that because impressions is just what you think, always make you think different things, and you never know whats gonna happen.
Impressions is like when you thought somethings, its just what you think about someone or something. For example:My impression is that she is not telling me the truth. you think that she's not telling you the truth but you don't know the truth.
Impressions can make you think different or bad just because how you look at someone or something. For example: If you see someone that has a bad looking, your impression is that he might be poor but, you can change your impression if you see that he has the Iphone of the year, or he has a Lamborghini, so it can make you think different.
When women get pregnant they always get impress and trying to guess what the baby is gonna be. For example: When my mom got pregnant and she had me, her impression was that it was gonna be a girl, and she wanted a girl, but here i am, 18 years old, a big boy and she was impress and sad, but when she see that i was very handsome her impression change she's happy now.
Some people believe that just with their impression you are what they say.
Next time you think that the first impression is impossible to change, you have to think the first impression does not say everything about a person or something.
I hope you never impress by something or someone, that can be different that you thought, thats why we dont judge, God is the only one who can judge. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
C045A27AFE82 | I agree to this beacase students like us always have to got to shcool evreyday of the week and somtimes students get stressed out beacause evreyday we have to got to shcool so it should be better if they extend the shcool time to shorter time or half way. In my opinion it hink that 3:15 is to much of our day so i think that we should make the shcool time shorter. I think it will be the best thing for evreybody because somtimes people have to do thing at home . Sometime si just to late to do them beacasue at 3:15 is already getting dark so i think it shuld be best for all of us if we should get out half time. It will better evreyone beacause evreyone will have time to doanytging that they have to do at home. The last thing i see is that other shcools get to get out more early that us and what i think is that is mot fair they come out early and we dont. But somtime we should have more time out of shcool because when i go home i have things to do. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
C05745235FE7 | Is it good idea for high school students, the can graduate in three years instead of traditional four years? Some school distract offer program that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of four years. Most high school students who follow this plan must take courses during the summer or may not be able to take elective courses. If students end up their high school in three year, the would missed most of opportunities that could provide better knowledge and education for them. Students should not require to graduate in three years instead of four years because students could't get enough credits to graduate, and students can not improve their confidence and their knowledge.
To begin with, first reason, students could't receive enough credits to graduate. For example, when college student want to be successful Doctor, he or she must get enough classes during the 7 years to receive approximately credits to get their diploma, if the require to graduate in 5 years, the can't construct enough confidence to be a good Doctor for the community and society. This example shows, students should't graduate early, because the can't developed and improve their life skills, education, and knowledge. If students graduate early, the would get an anxiety and different kinda problems in their life. High school traditional four years is the natural path that can help student to be success and give them more educational opportunities.
Furthermore, second reason, students can't improve or developed their confidence and their knowledge. For example, when the student who graduated early try to do an experiment he/she would't believe their decision and the does't have any positive confidence to get the result successful. This example shows, students should not graduate early, because the would't have any strong confidence to do something successful. Students should't required to graduate in three years instead of traditional four years of high school. If students graduate in three years of high school, the will face to anxiety problems, challenges, and work challenges.
Some people's argue that, students should be require to graduate in three years because students will receive the most opportunity to continue their education skills. For example, when I was in Afghanistan I was about to graduate high school in 2 years, also I had the most opportunities to receive grateful education. However, students should't be require to finish their high school in three years instead of four years because students would be leftover from others and the would never confidence on the experiment and life skills. Students should't graduate in three years, the should take the elective classes to get more information about the world, regions and humans.
In conclusion, Students should not require to graduate in three years instead of four years because students could't get enough credits to graduate, and students can not improve their confidence and their knowledge. However, Some people's argue that, students should be require to graduate in three years because students will receive the most opportunity to continue their education skills. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
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Prompt-My prompt is explain to people why seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice
Seeking muitipule opinions is a better choice beacsue you can get a bunch of diffferent opinions and they most likey will have a better point of view. Its better to have mutilple choice then just having one choice or opinions now for some examples Example one If a student is having issuse at home they have mutiple opinions which are 1. talk to a counsler 2. talk to the school social worker 3. talk to a trusted adult 4. talk to a friends parent 5. talk to other family members..
example two a lady haves a few job offers but he goes for one and thinks he not going to pass the interview but he stll has a few jobs lining up behind him the job offers are1. sceintest at nasa 2. host on the ellen show 3. a buisness owner.
I also feel like asking one person would not be the best choice bescause what if they dont have have the best opinions or best advice,i feel like for the bst advice ask more then one person make sure the person is trustable make sure the person knows what they are talking about.
To make sure this trusted person know what they are talking about ask them a few quetions iif they answer them right then they might be a person you can trust
If your the one taking to the kid or adult going having issues have patince with them its probroly a hard topic for them | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
C0800EF2C22A | First,for example some people prefer working in grougp because they would get extra help. The other person in the group become with a new idea. I think working in group it is fun becuase each person in the group would l help. That why I prefer working in group than alone because the desventage of working alone is I can not get help from anyone. Also I can not finish it early it would take long.
Second, for example If I work in group we would descuss first and then be an a agreement. Then start working each person in group would have to answer and with different answer. If any one in the group does not know the answer the group would help him or her. It is easy and fast to finish any class work if it is in group. Working in group it is fun because each person learn from another idea of the other person.
Third, working by yourself it is kinda hard. Some people prefer working by themself because they think it better. Working alone is more stressful. That why people should work in group. It help and it is more better and less use of their mind.
Fourth, for example if I do a classwork by myself and it is hard. It would take me more time to do the researchs in google. Also I would finish it late. That why I prefer working in group than alone.
fifth, finally I would like to recomend to each students to work in group unless they are smart enough to do it by themself. However some students or people like to wotk alone if they smart then probably they would finish it on time. Teacher should be agree with me. When students work in group it is less stressful because they can hel each other. Therefore students or people should work toguether because it is less stressful and it would benefits a lot. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
C09D3287E6AF | i in introduce the reader attention?. it has been said that first impression are almost impossible to change. how it change with the first in precision that is impossible to change my central ideas is support witch specific information and example that will persuade my reader;it has been said the first impressions are almost impossible to change. the content of my paper relates to my central idea and addresses counterclaims when appropriate. base on you experience do you agree or disagree with this stamens? i agree with this stamens because this stamen talk that impression to change no all change like example no all people has impression or change some one change' but not all..
are positive attitudes that key to success your life?
yes. that positive altitude is the key for life. for example if people had been unhappy the negative things is are they are ruing everything from them and also if you are one of them if you altitude is good things are beside if you good person. like god blessing you in addiction in everything you need positive altitude are good to live good life and peacefully on every singles place there are going to be people they have negative altitude they going to try to hurt you that people are angry all the time is not them fault is just because around of them just they has a negative and all that people want to hurt you you must be strong and show that they don't has to be negative and all way has to be positive to have a better life in the future. that is why altitude is good. not for you for the people that they around you to cause you don't hurt them's in conclusion the positive altitude is the best choice you can do because negative altitude just attrack that bad things and positive not and that that key to success in the life.... | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
C0B30026B439 | Something I would like to accomplish is being able to stop being so indecisive and to make the make the right choice on time, this is important because this skill would help me be fast on things I like to do, such as writing or trading items.
Main reason why I would like to accomplish being decisive, is because it effects the way I think, for example; ''What if I'm writing this essay, and I include some other thing that doesn't have to do anything with the prompt I'm meant to be writing about?" Then, I erase everything and start again, I sit for more then 20 minutes and end up with the worst decision. I would like to accomplish being able to choose my best decisions fast enough, that I dont have to worry about it.
I been working on this for a long time time now, and it's not easy, I ask myself if it's this possible. Being able to decide for myself is important to me because I wont have to be asking people around me such as parents, teachers, or classmates to tell me if anything I do is good enough, and I'm always asking for opinions, ending up regretting for what i chose,
In the classroom is hard to concentrate on the assignments and tests because I will have tons of questions going around my head, when ever i can't decide for myself I end up dis concentrating and start to think about lots of different things.
In conclusion, Indecisive is a big problem and something I would like to accomplish by time goes on, and something I can do to change this is practice to stay with one answer and not change anything that comes to my mind first, but it takes practice. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
C0C29B07C7C0 | Do you want your kid to be assisted by a older student? Well look no further, this program could make your child be more smarter, prepare the young student for whats coming in the future, and a older student can help the younger student with his/or her homework.
The older student that is assisting the younger student could make him smarter. What i mean by this is that the older student will help the student on math, language arts, and science which the older student already took. The older kid already knows the concepts of the subjects that the younger student is taking, which means he will teach him the concepts. This means that the younger student would already know the concepts of the three subjects that the older student taught him which is science, language arts, and math.
The older student can prepare the younger student for the future. The older student can teach what he is learning to the younger student. For example, the older student can teach the concepts of algebra which the younger student is taking next year. The young student might even study algebra with the older student. The older student can teach other subjects like physical science, and civics economics which the young student could be ready for.
The final reason why this program is helpful is because the older student helps the younger student with his homework. The younger student might ask for help on his homework and the older student will help him. If the student does not understand the question then the older student would teach him.
This program is actually pretty good for your child if he does not understand and need help on a subject that he has trouble on. This program can make your child be more smarter, be prepared for whats coming in the future, and a older student can help the younger student with his/or her homework. This is why the program is helpful. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
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