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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: The migration of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing the world's cities today. Discuss the main causes. What solutions could be used to tackle the situation? Anwser: Cities globally faced challenges because a large number of people moved to the cities. The main reason could be the lack of jobs in the countryside. To tackle this problem the government should distribute the factories in the countryside. Recently, the Migration of individuals to the cities has created problems across the world. It means the growing population in the cities provides the cities with different challenges. furthermore, as much as people become more in the city’s privet cars will become a lot. For example, traffic jumps are one of the reasons for crowds. Moreover, moving a large number of people to the cities provides cities with a lack of residential areas. For instance, in Melbourne City which is the host of a huge number of international students and tourists, people face in challenge of accommodation. Therefore, moving the population to the cities is a big concern. However, the growing population in the cities is a big challenge. How to solve this problem is an arguable point. The way how to tackle this problem needs to refer back to the root of this challenge which is jobseekers. For example, the establishment of factories and supermarkets in the cities attracts a large number of jobless people from the countryside. To tackle this subject government should policy which accordingly industries distributed to the countryside to keep people too far from cities. To conclude, moving people to the cities is a problem across the world. because the individuals in the countryside need jobs they have to live where can access duties. Therefore, how to solve the problem government should separate industries in the countryside. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: The migration of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing the world's cities today. Discuss the main causes. What solutions could be used to tackle the situation? Anwser: Cities globally faced challenges because a large number of people moved to the cities. The main reason could be the lack of jobs in the countryside. To tackle this problem the government should distribute the factories in the countryside. Recently, the Migration of individuals to the cities has created problems across the world. It means the growing population in the cities provides the cities with different challenges. furthermore, as much as people become more in the city’s privet cars will become a lot. For example, traffic jumps are one of the reasons for crowds. Moreover, moving a large number of people to the cities provides cities with a lack of residential areas. For instance, in Melbourne City which is the host of a huge number of international students and tourists, people face in challenge of accommodation. Therefore, moving the population to the cities is a big concern. However, the growing population in the cities is a big challenge. How to solve this problem is an arguable point. The way how to tackle this problem needs to refer back to the root of this challenge which is jobseekers. For example, the establishment of factories and supermarkets in the cities attracts a large number of jobless people from the countryside. To tackle this subject government should policy which accordingly industries distributed to the countryside to keep people too far from cities. To conclude, moving people to the cities is a problem across the world. because the individuals in the countryside need jobs they have to live where can access duties. Therefore, how to solve the problem government should separate industries in the countryside. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: The migration of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing the world's cities today. Discuss the main causes. What solutions could be used to tackle the situation? Anwser: Cities globally faced challenges because a large number of people moved to the cities. The main reason could be the lack of jobs in the countryside. To tackle this problem the government should distribute the factories in the countryside. Recently, the Migration of individuals to the cities has created problems across the world. It means the growing population in the cities provides the cities with different challenges. furthermore, as much as people become more in the city’s privet cars will become a lot. For example, traffic jumps are one of the reasons for crowds. Moreover, moving a large number of people to the cities provides cities with a lack of residential areas. For instance, in Melbourne City which is the host of a huge number of international students and tourists, people face in challenge of accommodation. Therefore, moving the population to the cities is a big concern. However, the growing population in the cities is a big challenge. How to solve this problem is an arguable point. The way how to tackle this problem needs to refer back to the root of this challenge which is jobseekers. For example, the establishment of factories and supermarkets in the cities attracts a large number of jobless people from the countryside. To tackle this subject government should policy which accordingly industries distributed to the countryside to keep people too far from cities. To conclude, moving people to the cities is a problem across the world. because the individuals in the countryside need jobs they have to live where can access duties. Therefore, how to solve the problem government should separate industries in the countryside. Your grammatical range score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: The migration of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing the world's cities today. Discuss the main causes. What solutions could be used to tackle the situation? Anwser: Cities globally faced challenges because a large number of people moved to the cities. The main reason could be the lack of jobs in the countryside. To tackle this problem the government should distribute the factories in the countryside. Recently, the Migration of individuals to the cities has created problems across the world. It means the growing population in the cities provides the cities with different challenges. furthermore, as much as people become more in the city’s privet cars will become a lot. For example, traffic jumps are one of the reasons for crowds. Moreover, moving a large number of people to the cities provides cities with a lack of residential areas. For instance, in Melbourne City which is the host of a huge number of international students and tourists, people face in challenge of accommodation. Therefore, moving the population to the cities is a big concern. However, the growing population in the cities is a big challenge. How to solve this problem is an arguable point. The way how to tackle this problem needs to refer back to the root of this challenge which is jobseekers. For example, the establishment of factories and supermarkets in the cities attracts a large number of jobless people from the countryside. To tackle this subject government should policy which accordingly industries distributed to the countryside to keep people too far from cities. To conclude, moving people to the cities is a problem across the world. because the individuals in the countryside need jobs they have to live where can access duties. Therefore, how to solve the problem government should separate industries in the countryside. Your task achievement score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: : Write about the following topic: A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. Anwser: In the current time, people tend to judge the value of other people by the position in society and wealth. Traditional aspects such as kindness, honour, honesty, and trust do not seem to be important anymore. I agree, but not completely. In this essay, it will be discussed both sides and some examples to illustrate this position. Firstly, it is necessary to say that this behaviour has been true since ancient times. Materials possession have been used in the History of human beings to define the importance of a person. Wealthy people have a huge influence in politc, economic, law, and religious issues. Economic power is a key component in every election or way to choose a governant. For example, kings, imperators, prime ministers, and presidents around the world have been always supported by rich people. Without money, neither a congressman achieves a position. Another example to illustrate the power of money, is when someone commits a crime. If the person has no money to pay a good lawyer, probably he or she will go to jail. On the other hand, a rich person will linger to the maximum judgment, and sometimes will be declared not guilty. Even when the wealthy person is declared guilty, the time in prison will be shorter. In conclusion, despite the cultural aspects said before, nowadays, this trend is changing. For instance, today, young people prefer spending less money on things such as housing, cars, technology and clothes than in the past. More and more people are giving more worth for features like honesty, bravery, integrity, and trust. I believe that new generations will make better choices and give more value to simple things. . Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: : Write about the following topic: A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. Anwser: In the current time, people tend to judge the value of other people by the position in society and wealth. Traditional aspects such as kindness, honour, honesty, and trust do not seem to be important anymore. I agree, but not completely. In this essay, it will be discussed both sides and some examples to illustrate this position. Firstly, it is necessary to say that this behaviour has been true since ancient times. Materials possession have been used in the History of human beings to define the importance of a person. Wealthy people have a huge influence in politc, economic, law, and religious issues. Economic power is a key component in every election or way to choose a governant. For example, kings, imperators, prime ministers, and presidents around the world have been always supported by rich people. Without money, neither a congressman achieves a position. Another example to illustrate the power of money, is when someone commits a crime. If the person has no money to pay a good lawyer, probably he or she will go to jail. On the other hand, a rich person will linger to the maximum judgment, and sometimes will be declared not guilty. Even when the wealthy person is declared guilty, the time in prison will be shorter. In conclusion, despite the cultural aspects said before, nowadays, this trend is changing. For instance, today, young people prefer spending less money on things such as housing, cars, technology and clothes than in the past. More and more people are giving more worth for features like honesty, bravery, integrity, and trust. I believe that new generations will make better choices and give more value to simple things. . Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: : Write about the following topic: A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. Anwser: In the current time, people tend to judge the value of other people by the position in society and wealth. Traditional aspects such as kindness, honour, honesty, and trust do not seem to be important anymore. I agree, but not completely. In this essay, it will be discussed both sides and some examples to illustrate this position. Firstly, it is necessary to say that this behaviour has been true since ancient times. Materials possession have been used in the History of human beings to define the importance of a person. Wealthy people have a huge influence in politc, economic, law, and religious issues. Economic power is a key component in every election or way to choose a governant. For example, kings, imperators, prime ministers, and presidents around the world have been always supported by rich people. Without money, neither a congressman achieves a position. Another example to illustrate the power of money, is when someone commits a crime. If the person has no money to pay a good lawyer, probably he or she will go to jail. On the other hand, a rich person will linger to the maximum judgment, and sometimes will be declared not guilty. Even when the wealthy person is declared guilty, the time in prison will be shorter. In conclusion, despite the cultural aspects said before, nowadays, this trend is changing. For instance, today, young people prefer spending less money on things such as housing, cars, technology and clothes than in the past. More and more people are giving more worth for features like honesty, bravery, integrity, and trust. I believe that new generations will make better choices and give more value to simple things. . Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: : Write about the following topic: A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. Anwser: In the current time, people tend to judge the value of other people by the position in society and wealth. Traditional aspects such as kindness, honour, honesty, and trust do not seem to be important anymore. I agree, but not completely. In this essay, it will be discussed both sides and some examples to illustrate this position. Firstly, it is necessary to say that this behaviour has been true since ancient times. Materials possession have been used in the History of human beings to define the importance of a person. Wealthy people have a huge influence in politc, economic, law, and religious issues. Economic power is a key component in every election or way to choose a governant. For example, kings, imperators, prime ministers, and presidents around the world have been always supported by rich people. Without money, neither a congressman achieves a position. Another example to illustrate the power of money, is when someone commits a crime. If the person has no money to pay a good lawyer, probably he or she will go to jail. On the other hand, a rich person will linger to the maximum judgment, and sometimes will be declared not guilty. Even when the wealthy person is declared guilty, the time in prison will be shorter. In conclusion, despite the cultural aspects said before, nowadays, this trend is changing. For instance, today, young people prefer spending less money on things such as housing, cars, technology and clothes than in the past. More and more people are giving more worth for features like honesty, bravery, integrity, and trust. I believe that new generations will make better choices and give more value to simple things. . Your task achievement score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think the changes have been very positive, while others believe they have been negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion. Anwser: In our time people really have different lifestyles from the way they lived in the past. Most of them think that changes have been very positive while others consider they have been bad. In my opinion, there have been good and at the same time some negative changes between past and present time. As for advantages, first of all people are having so many things in modern time which make their life easier a lot. For instance, technologies have been risen sharply so people can contact each other from different countries within one second. Comparing to the past people sent letters to each other and it took so much time to deliver them. Likewise, there are many companies which are providing their services to make your own smart house. In my mind, it is one of the biggest innovation because it gives high security level and smart machines so they can make your house clean instead of you. In addition, recently people made a huge discovery - they made the artificial intelligence. For now people are smartеr than this thing, however, day by day it is learning a lot. May be it will be smarter than people in one day. On the other hand, there have been some negative modifications. Actually, these changes made influence, especially on people. For instance, children are playing video games for the whole days and do not study at all. As for the second negative effect I consider that there are many hackers and guys who want to scam people online. This is one of the hugest problem which is impossible to solve. To conclude, people made so many changes in their lives. With this modifications it is easier to live at all. Also, big problems come with big success so you need to be careful in the internet. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think the changes have been very positive, while others believe they have been negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion. Anwser: In our time people really have different lifestyles from the way they lived in the past. Most of them think that changes have been very positive while others consider they have been bad. In my opinion, there have been good and at the same time some negative changes between past and present time. As for advantages, first of all people are having so many things in modern time which make their life easier a lot. For instance, technologies have been risen sharply so people can contact each other from different countries within one second. Comparing to the past people sent letters to each other and it took so much time to deliver them. Likewise, there are many companies which are providing their services to make your own smart house. In my mind, it is one of the biggest innovation because it gives high security level and smart machines so they can make your house clean instead of you. In addition, recently people made a huge discovery - they made the artificial intelligence. For now people are smartеr than this thing, however, day by day it is learning a lot. May be it will be smarter than people in one day. On the other hand, there have been some negative modifications. Actually, these changes made influence, especially on people. For instance, children are playing video games for the whole days and do not study at all. As for the second negative effect I consider that there are many hackers and guys who want to scam people online. This is one of the hugest problem which is impossible to solve. To conclude, people made so many changes in their lives. With this modifications it is easier to live at all. Also, big problems come with big success so you need to be careful in the internet. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think the changes have been very positive, while others believe they have been negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion. Anwser: In our time people really have different lifestyles from the way they lived in the past. Most of them think that changes have been very positive while others consider they have been bad. In my opinion, there have been good and at the same time some negative changes between past and present time. As for advantages, first of all people are having so many things in modern time which make their life easier a lot. For instance, technologies have been risen sharply so people can contact each other from different countries within one second. Comparing to the past people sent letters to each other and it took so much time to deliver them. Likewise, there are many companies which are providing their services to make your own smart house. In my mind, it is one of the biggest innovation because it gives high security level and smart machines so they can make your house clean instead of you. In addition, recently people made a huge discovery - they made the artificial intelligence. For now people are smartеr than this thing, however, day by day it is learning a lot. May be it will be smarter than people in one day. On the other hand, there have been some negative modifications. Actually, these changes made influence, especially on people. For instance, children are playing video games for the whole days and do not study at all. As for the second negative effect I consider that there are many hackers and guys who want to scam people online. This is one of the hugest problem which is impossible to solve. To conclude, people made so many changes in their lives. With this modifications it is easier to live at all. Also, big problems come with big success so you need to be careful in the internet. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think the changes have been very positive, while others believe they have been negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion. Anwser: In our time people really have different lifestyles from the way they lived in the past. Most of them think that changes have been very positive while others consider they have been bad. In my opinion, there have been good and at the same time some negative changes between past and present time. As for advantages, first of all people are having so many things in modern time which make their life easier a lot. For instance, technologies have been risen sharply so people can contact each other from different countries within one second. Comparing to the past people sent letters to each other and it took so much time to deliver them. Likewise, there are many companies which are providing their services to make your own smart house. In my mind, it is one of the biggest innovation because it gives high security level and smart machines so they can make your house clean instead of you. In addition, recently people made a huge discovery - they made the artificial intelligence. For now people are smartеr than this thing, however, day by day it is learning a lot. May be it will be smarter than people in one day. On the other hand, there have been some negative modifications. Actually, these changes made influence, especially on people. For instance, children are playing video games for the whole days and do not study at all. As for the second negative effect I consider that there are many hackers and guys who want to scam people online. This is one of the hugest problem which is impossible to solve. To conclude, people made so many changes in their lives. With this modifications it is easier to live at all. Also, big problems come with big success so you need to be careful in the internet. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working. Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion Anwser: While there is a belief that people of retirement age should not be allowed to work , there is also a viewpoint that individuals should have opportunity to continue their employment after age of sixty-five. This essay will first explore both viewpoints and then present a personal opinion which favors having free choice of retirement. To begin with, supporters of retiring after 65 argue that this opens up employment opportunities for younger generations. With an aging population, job opportunities for young people are decreasing and this limits their employment opportunities. Particularly , unlike younger workers, aged people have difficulty using new technologies to speed up and improve work ,so they prefer outdated methods. Furthermore , people argue that individuals over 65 often face health problems and this has a negative effect on the prosperity of companies. Concentration problems and slow work speed among older people affect their productivity, which can lead to slow business development. For example, in companies where there are many people over 65, data or money leaks happen due to lack of attention. On the other hand, those who believe that retirement should not be mandatory argue that older people with experience and certain knowledge bring their workforce to the development of companies. Specifically, people who rely on their experience are valuable and can make wise decisions in difficult situations. Also, people with experience are an opportunity for mentoring for young workers. By sharing their valuable knowledge, they promote the younger generation and improve organisational aspects of work. In addition, financial problems are a significant factor for supporters of working after 65 years of age. Since many older people face financial problems due to small pensions, continuing to work is a way to provide themselves with a more comfortable life. For instance , people who receive a pension and continue to work suffer less from a lack of finances. In my view, there should be a free choice for retirement. Many older people have knowledge that provides an opportunity for the development of the younger generation as valuable workers and subsequently the prosperity of the company. Also in some countries, tiny pensions for retirees leave them no choice but to continue working.q In conclusion, although people who work after 65 years of age have negative characteristics, they also improve the workforce, and I believe that older people should be able to choose whether to continue working or not. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working. Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion Anwser: While there is a belief that people of retirement age should not be allowed to work , there is also a viewpoint that individuals should have opportunity to continue their employment after age of sixty-five. This essay will first explore both viewpoints and then present a personal opinion which favors having free choice of retirement. To begin with, supporters of retiring after 65 argue that this opens up employment opportunities for younger generations. With an aging population, job opportunities for young people are decreasing and this limits their employment opportunities. Particularly , unlike younger workers, aged people have difficulty using new technologies to speed up and improve work ,so they prefer outdated methods. Furthermore , people argue that individuals over 65 often face health problems and this has a negative effect on the prosperity of companies. Concentration problems and slow work speed among older people affect their productivity, which can lead to slow business development. For example, in companies where there are many people over 65, data or money leaks happen due to lack of attention. On the other hand, those who believe that retirement should not be mandatory argue that older people with experience and certain knowledge bring their workforce to the development of companies. Specifically, people who rely on their experience are valuable and can make wise decisions in difficult situations. Also, people with experience are an opportunity for mentoring for young workers. By sharing their valuable knowledge, they promote the younger generation and improve organisational aspects of work. In addition, financial problems are a significant factor for supporters of working after 65 years of age. Since many older people face financial problems due to small pensions, continuing to work is a way to provide themselves with a more comfortable life. For instance , people who receive a pension and continue to work suffer less from a lack of finances. In my view, there should be a free choice for retirement. Many older people have knowledge that provides an opportunity for the development of the younger generation as valuable workers and subsequently the prosperity of the company. Also in some countries, tiny pensions for retirees leave them no choice but to continue working.q In conclusion, although people who work after 65 years of age have negative characteristics, they also improve the workforce, and I believe that older people should be able to choose whether to continue working or not. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working. Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion Anwser: While there is a belief that people of retirement age should not be allowed to work , there is also a viewpoint that individuals should have opportunity to continue their employment after age of sixty-five. This essay will first explore both viewpoints and then present a personal opinion which favors having free choice of retirement. To begin with, supporters of retiring after 65 argue that this opens up employment opportunities for younger generations. With an aging population, job opportunities for young people are decreasing and this limits their employment opportunities. Particularly , unlike younger workers, aged people have difficulty using new technologies to speed up and improve work ,so they prefer outdated methods. Furthermore , people argue that individuals over 65 often face health problems and this has a negative effect on the prosperity of companies. Concentration problems and slow work speed among older people affect their productivity, which can lead to slow business development. For example, in companies where there are many people over 65, data or money leaks happen due to lack of attention. On the other hand, those who believe that retirement should not be mandatory argue that older people with experience and certain knowledge bring their workforce to the development of companies. Specifically, people who rely on their experience are valuable and can make wise decisions in difficult situations. Also, people with experience are an opportunity for mentoring for young workers. By sharing their valuable knowledge, they promote the younger generation and improve organisational aspects of work. In addition, financial problems are a significant factor for supporters of working after 65 years of age. Since many older people face financial problems due to small pensions, continuing to work is a way to provide themselves with a more comfortable life. For instance , people who receive a pension and continue to work suffer less from a lack of finances. In my view, there should be a free choice for retirement. Many older people have knowledge that provides an opportunity for the development of the younger generation as valuable workers and subsequently the prosperity of the company. Also in some countries, tiny pensions for retirees leave them no choice but to continue working.q In conclusion, although people who work after 65 years of age have negative characteristics, they also improve the workforce, and I believe that older people should be able to choose whether to continue working or not. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working. Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion Anwser: While there is a belief that people of retirement age should not be allowed to work , there is also a viewpoint that individuals should have opportunity to continue their employment after age of sixty-five. This essay will first explore both viewpoints and then present a personal opinion which favors having free choice of retirement. To begin with, supporters of retiring after 65 argue that this opens up employment opportunities for younger generations. With an aging population, job opportunities for young people are decreasing and this limits their employment opportunities. Particularly , unlike younger workers, aged people have difficulty using new technologies to speed up and improve work ,so they prefer outdated methods. Furthermore , people argue that individuals over 65 often face health problems and this has a negative effect on the prosperity of companies. Concentration problems and slow work speed among older people affect their productivity, which can lead to slow business development. For example, in companies where there are many people over 65, data or money leaks happen due to lack of attention. On the other hand, those who believe that retirement should not be mandatory argue that older people with experience and certain knowledge bring their workforce to the development of companies. Specifically, people who rely on their experience are valuable and can make wise decisions in difficult situations. Also, people with experience are an opportunity for mentoring for young workers. By sharing their valuable knowledge, they promote the younger generation and improve organisational aspects of work. In addition, financial problems are a significant factor for supporters of working after 65 years of age. Since many older people face financial problems due to small pensions, continuing to work is a way to provide themselves with a more comfortable life. For instance , people who receive a pension and continue to work suffer less from a lack of finances. In my view, there should be a free choice for retirement. Many older people have knowledge that provides an opportunity for the development of the younger generation as valuable workers and subsequently the prosperity of the company. Also in some countries, tiny pensions for retirees leave them no choice but to continue working.q In conclusion, although people who work after 65 years of age have negative characteristics, they also improve the workforce, and I believe that older people should be able to choose whether to continue working or not. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that children should aim to their best at what they are doing while others believe it is not necessary for them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion Anwser: Nowadays, many people think that kids should get the best results for what they do. Meanwhile, others argue that it is not necessary for them to do so. These two opposing viewpoints have sparked a lot of debates. In this essay, I will look at the issue from both sides. From my point of view, I think it is imperative for the youth to put in the necessary effort in whatever they do. To commence with, the great efforts improve the quality of the population. Once teenagers have determined their own path, they will do whatever it takes to achieve their goals. For example, a child has a dream of becoming a successful businessman, and in order to make it come true, this child will definitely study hard to broaden his horizons. In the future, this child will become a productive person and join forces in promoting the community. In addition, a big goal can change the way children think and act. From simple thoughts to deeper thoughts, they gradually form in the minds of children when they think big. They will become more confident, independent and responsible. ieltsxpress ieltsxpress preply IELS tutors starting from usd 5 per hour However, some adults believe that their adolescence may have developmental and health problems if they are too stressed out to try to achieve their goals. Modern children have a boring daily routine. They only go to school, then graduate and return home, but continue to study. They learn like a machine, they do not participate in fewer outdoor activities, their days are not as colorful as many other children. Also, when they spend all their time sitting and studying, they can have many health problems, according to WHO. ielts xpress To conclude, the issue is still half-finished. Children may get better, but they may also have health issues. However, they should still have ambition in the work, for it is better than in vain and lost. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that children should aim to their best at what they are doing while others believe it is not necessary for them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion Anwser: Nowadays, many people think that kids should get the best results for what they do. Meanwhile, others argue that it is not necessary for them to do so. These two opposing viewpoints have sparked a lot of debates. In this essay, I will look at the issue from both sides. From my point of view, I think it is imperative for the youth to put in the necessary effort in whatever they do. To commence with, the great efforts improve the quality of the population. Once teenagers have determined their own path, they will do whatever it takes to achieve their goals. For example, a child has a dream of becoming a successful businessman, and in order to make it come true, this child will definitely study hard to broaden his horizons. In the future, this child will become a productive person and join forces in promoting the community. In addition, a big goal can change the way children think and act. From simple thoughts to deeper thoughts, they gradually form in the minds of children when they think big. They will become more confident, independent and responsible. ieltsxpress ieltsxpress preply IELS tutors starting from usd 5 per hour However, some adults believe that their adolescence may have developmental and health problems if they are too stressed out to try to achieve their goals. Modern children have a boring daily routine. They only go to school, then graduate and return home, but continue to study. They learn like a machine, they do not participate in fewer outdoor activities, their days are not as colorful as many other children. Also, when they spend all their time sitting and studying, they can have many health problems, according to WHO. ielts xpress To conclude, the issue is still half-finished. Children may get better, but they may also have health issues. However, they should still have ambition in the work, for it is better than in vain and lost. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that children should aim to their best at what they are doing while others believe it is not necessary for them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion Anwser: Nowadays, many people think that kids should get the best results for what they do. Meanwhile, others argue that it is not necessary for them to do so. These two opposing viewpoints have sparked a lot of debates. In this essay, I will look at the issue from both sides. From my point of view, I think it is imperative for the youth to put in the necessary effort in whatever they do. To commence with, the great efforts improve the quality of the population. Once teenagers have determined their own path, they will do whatever it takes to achieve their goals. For example, a child has a dream of becoming a successful businessman, and in order to make it come true, this child will definitely study hard to broaden his horizons. In the future, this child will become a productive person and join forces in promoting the community. In addition, a big goal can change the way children think and act. From simple thoughts to deeper thoughts, they gradually form in the minds of children when they think big. They will become more confident, independent and responsible. ieltsxpress ieltsxpress preply IELS tutors starting from usd 5 per hour However, some adults believe that their adolescence may have developmental and health problems if they are too stressed out to try to achieve their goals. Modern children have a boring daily routine. They only go to school, then graduate and return home, but continue to study. They learn like a machine, they do not participate in fewer outdoor activities, their days are not as colorful as many other children. Also, when they spend all their time sitting and studying, they can have many health problems, according to WHO. ielts xpress To conclude, the issue is still half-finished. Children may get better, but they may also have health issues. However, they should still have ambition in the work, for it is better than in vain and lost. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that children should aim to their best at what they are doing while others believe it is not necessary for them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion Anwser: Nowadays, many people think that kids should get the best results for what they do. Meanwhile, others argue that it is not necessary for them to do so. These two opposing viewpoints have sparked a lot of debates. In this essay, I will look at the issue from both sides. From my point of view, I think it is imperative for the youth to put in the necessary effort in whatever they do. To commence with, the great efforts improve the quality of the population. Once teenagers have determined their own path, they will do whatever it takes to achieve their goals. For example, a child has a dream of becoming a successful businessman, and in order to make it come true, this child will definitely study hard to broaden his horizons. In the future, this child will become a productive person and join forces in promoting the community. In addition, a big goal can change the way children think and act. From simple thoughts to deeper thoughts, they gradually form in the minds of children when they think big. They will become more confident, independent and responsible. ieltsxpress ieltsxpress preply IELS tutors starting from usd 5 per hour However, some adults believe that their adolescence may have developmental and health problems if they are too stressed out to try to achieve their goals. Modern children have a boring daily routine. They only go to school, then graduate and return home, but continue to study. They learn like a machine, they do not participate in fewer outdoor activities, their days are not as colorful as many other children. Also, when they spend all their time sitting and studying, they can have many health problems, according to WHO. ielts xpress To conclude, the issue is still half-finished. Children may get better, but they may also have health issues. However, they should still have ambition in the work, for it is better than in vain and lost. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give Your Opinion. Anwser: Nowadays, many people believe theatres are outdated since movies can be watched on mobile devices, while others think films are best appreciated in the cinema. This essay discusses both sides of this argument and explains why I believe theatres are still important to society. There are two main reasons why people think cinemas are unnecessary these days. The first of these is that it is much cheaper to watch films at home. This is because paying for a monthly movie platform subscription costs less than buying several tickets to go to the theatre. For instance, I try to avoid going to the movies when my monthly budget is short. Moreover, it is a lot more convenient to watch a film or series at home since people can watch them whenever they want. Also, one does not have to dress appropriately, and therefore, can watch it wearing their pajamas if they want to. However, there are also merits from watching movies in a cinema. Firstly, the experience is often more immersive. This is because the sound system is usually better, as well as the screen size and video quality. In particular, I always watch my favorite movie franchises at the theatre because I want to be totally immersed into the story. Furthermore, new releases are often played first in a cinema. This is due to directors wanting to give the best visual results to the public and also to insite curiosity between those who have not watched it yet. Therefore, people who watch films there know what the story is about first. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have merits. However, overall, I think that the advantages of being able to have a more lively experience in a cinema and the fact that people have the opportunity to watch it first outweigh the disadvantages of being a bit more pricy and not so convenient due to film schedules and having to wear appropriate clothing. Furthermore, in my opinion, budget difficulties can be minimised by buying tickets during promotional days or using coupons. Your coherence and cohesion score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give Your Opinion. Anwser: Nowadays, many people believe theatres are outdated since movies can be watched on mobile devices, while others think films are best appreciated in the cinema. This essay discusses both sides of this argument and explains why I believe theatres are still important to society. There are two main reasons why people think cinemas are unnecessary these days. The first of these is that it is much cheaper to watch films at home. This is because paying for a monthly movie platform subscription costs less than buying several tickets to go to the theatre. For instance, I try to avoid going to the movies when my monthly budget is short. Moreover, it is a lot more convenient to watch a film or series at home since people can watch them whenever they want. Also, one does not have to dress appropriately, and therefore, can watch it wearing their pajamas if they want to. However, there are also merits from watching movies in a cinema. Firstly, the experience is often more immersive. This is because the sound system is usually better, as well as the screen size and video quality. In particular, I always watch my favorite movie franchises at the theatre because I want to be totally immersed into the story. Furthermore, new releases are often played first in a cinema. This is due to directors wanting to give the best visual results to the public and also to insite curiosity between those who have not watched it yet. Therefore, people who watch films there know what the story is about first. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have merits. However, overall, I think that the advantages of being able to have a more lively experience in a cinema and the fact that people have the opportunity to watch it first outweigh the disadvantages of being a bit more pricy and not so convenient due to film schedules and having to wear appropriate clothing. Furthermore, in my opinion, budget difficulties can be minimised by buying tickets during promotional days or using coupons. Your lexical resource score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give Your Opinion. Anwser: Nowadays, many people believe theatres are outdated since movies can be watched on mobile devices, while others think films are best appreciated in the cinema. This essay discusses both sides of this argument and explains why I believe theatres are still important to society. There are two main reasons why people think cinemas are unnecessary these days. The first of these is that it is much cheaper to watch films at home. This is because paying for a monthly movie platform subscription costs less than buying several tickets to go to the theatre. For instance, I try to avoid going to the movies when my monthly budget is short. Moreover, it is a lot more convenient to watch a film or series at home since people can watch them whenever they want. Also, one does not have to dress appropriately, and therefore, can watch it wearing their pajamas if they want to. However, there are also merits from watching movies in a cinema. Firstly, the experience is often more immersive. This is because the sound system is usually better, as well as the screen size and video quality. In particular, I always watch my favorite movie franchises at the theatre because I want to be totally immersed into the story. Furthermore, new releases are often played first in a cinema. This is due to directors wanting to give the best visual results to the public and also to insite curiosity between those who have not watched it yet. Therefore, people who watch films there know what the story is about first. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have merits. However, overall, I think that the advantages of being able to have a more lively experience in a cinema and the fact that people have the opportunity to watch it first outweigh the disadvantages of being a bit more pricy and not so convenient due to film schedules and having to wear appropriate clothing. Furthermore, in my opinion, budget difficulties can be minimised by buying tickets during promotional days or using coupons. Your grammatical range score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give Your Opinion. Anwser: Nowadays, many people believe theatres are outdated since movies can be watched on mobile devices, while others think films are best appreciated in the cinema. This essay discusses both sides of this argument and explains why I believe theatres are still important to society. There are two main reasons why people think cinemas are unnecessary these days. The first of these is that it is much cheaper to watch films at home. This is because paying for a monthly movie platform subscription costs less than buying several tickets to go to the theatre. For instance, I try to avoid going to the movies when my monthly budget is short. Moreover, it is a lot more convenient to watch a film or series at home since people can watch them whenever they want. Also, one does not have to dress appropriately, and therefore, can watch it wearing their pajamas if they want to. However, there are also merits from watching movies in a cinema. Firstly, the experience is often more immersive. This is because the sound system is usually better, as well as the screen size and video quality. In particular, I always watch my favorite movie franchises at the theatre because I want to be totally immersed into the story. Furthermore, new releases are often played first in a cinema. This is due to directors wanting to give the best visual results to the public and also to insite curiosity between those who have not watched it yet. Therefore, people who watch films there know what the story is about first. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have merits. However, overall, I think that the advantages of being able to have a more lively experience in a cinema and the fact that people have the opportunity to watch it first outweigh the disadvantages of being a bit more pricy and not so convenient due to film schedules and having to wear appropriate clothing. Furthermore, in my opinion, budget difficulties can be minimised by buying tickets during promotional days or using coupons. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodmaking should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: In the ultra - modern epoch, it is a point of debate that schools are essential for child's development. Majority of folks are in the favour of theoretical education such as academic success and passing examinations due to its number of merits rather than focusing on the practical skills like food making, sewing and carpentry work. Because they have a belief that skills learnt from family is a better way than in the school. I totally disagree with this statement. The upcoming paragraphs would illuminate on my arguments related to conception and will lead to a logical conclusion. To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared. The top notch concrete reason is that students can choose their career easily. This is because, when schools include these skill-building classes in their curriculumn, students can not only learn the practical skills, but also aware about their personal choices for their career. As a result, they can easily make their decision whether they want to go with the fundamental education or academic studying. Another pivotal aspect is that all the students do not come from skilled worker's families. For instance, some student's parents come from professional area. As a consequence, they cannot able to provide atmosphere to their children about livelihood skills such as cookery, dressmaking and wood working at home. So, it is beneficial to teach social skills in the schools for all the students, who come from educational background families. To conclude, schools should focus on the fundamental education as it provides opportunities to learn practical techniques to the students, who do not come from the skilled worker's families and it is also beneficial for the students, who confuse to choose their career as they can aware about these skills in their early stage of life. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodmaking should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: In the ultra - modern epoch, it is a point of debate that schools are essential for child's development. Majority of folks are in the favour of theoretical education such as academic success and passing examinations due to its number of merits rather than focusing on the practical skills like food making, sewing and carpentry work. Because they have a belief that skills learnt from family is a better way than in the school. I totally disagree with this statement. The upcoming paragraphs would illuminate on my arguments related to conception and will lead to a logical conclusion. To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared. The top notch concrete reason is that students can choose their career easily. This is because, when schools include these skill-building classes in their curriculumn, students can not only learn the practical skills, but also aware about their personal choices for their career. As a result, they can easily make their decision whether they want to go with the fundamental education or academic studying. Another pivotal aspect is that all the students do not come from skilled worker's families. For instance, some student's parents come from professional area. As a consequence, they cannot able to provide atmosphere to their children about livelihood skills such as cookery, dressmaking and wood working at home. So, it is beneficial to teach social skills in the schools for all the students, who come from educational background families. To conclude, schools should focus on the fundamental education as it provides opportunities to learn practical techniques to the students, who do not come from the skilled worker's families and it is also beneficial for the students, who confuse to choose their career as they can aware about these skills in their early stage of life. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodmaking should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: In the ultra - modern epoch, it is a point of debate that schools are essential for child's development. Majority of folks are in the favour of theoretical education such as academic success and passing examinations due to its number of merits rather than focusing on the practical skills like food making, sewing and carpentry work. Because they have a belief that skills learnt from family is a better way than in the school. I totally disagree with this statement. The upcoming paragraphs would illuminate on my arguments related to conception and will lead to a logical conclusion. To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared. The top notch concrete reason is that students can choose their career easily. This is because, when schools include these skill-building classes in their curriculumn, students can not only learn the practical skills, but also aware about their personal choices for their career. As a result, they can easily make their decision whether they want to go with the fundamental education or academic studying. Another pivotal aspect is that all the students do not come from skilled worker's families. For instance, some student's parents come from professional area. As a consequence, they cannot able to provide atmosphere to their children about livelihood skills such as cookery, dressmaking and wood working at home. So, it is beneficial to teach social skills in the schools for all the students, who come from educational background families. To conclude, schools should focus on the fundamental education as it provides opportunities to learn practical techniques to the students, who do not come from the skilled worker's families and it is also beneficial for the students, who confuse to choose their career as they can aware about these skills in their early stage of life. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodmaking should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: In the ultra - modern epoch, it is a point of debate that schools are essential for child's development. Majority of folks are in the favour of theoretical education such as academic success and passing examinations due to its number of merits rather than focusing on the practical skills like food making, sewing and carpentry work. Because they have a belief that skills learnt from family is a better way than in the school. I totally disagree with this statement. The upcoming paragraphs would illuminate on my arguments related to conception and will lead to a logical conclusion. To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared. The top notch concrete reason is that students can choose their career easily. This is because, when schools include these skill-building classes in their curriculumn, students can not only learn the practical skills, but also aware about their personal choices for their career. As a result, they can easily make their decision whether they want to go with the fundamental education or academic studying. Another pivotal aspect is that all the students do not come from skilled worker's families. For instance, some student's parents come from professional area. As a consequence, they cannot able to provide atmosphere to their children about livelihood skills such as cookery, dressmaking and wood working at home. So, it is beneficial to teach social skills in the schools for all the students, who come from educational background families. To conclude, schools should focus on the fundamental education as it provides opportunities to learn practical techniques to the students, who do not come from the skilled worker's families and it is also beneficial for the students, who confuse to choose their career as they can aware about these skills in their early stage of life. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people thing that the best way to succeed is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinions. Anwser: University education is enormous popular and common all parts of the world. Therefore, some people believe that studying at university is an achievement way to accomplish in life. However, some argue that university education is not chosen way to get successful today. In my opinion, education at university is extremely useful for people to create a good lifestyle in their entire life. To begin with, why people feel that the studying at university is the best way to live successfully in the world is that it gives them helpful method and informations which use in their careers. In other words, when individuals graduate from university, they would manage their processes in any situation. For example, in 2003, Apply company obtained the best company aware in the USA. This is because it only hires employees who graduated from university. It puts this rule that they can solve a problem with themselves. Consequently, its workers leaded to get the amazing prize. On the other hand, the main cause of people thinking the education university is not a correct way to achieve succeed is that there are so many alternatives and quick ways for it such as special courses and beginning to work early. As a matter of fact that German government encourages young citizens to attend occupational schools to improve their practical skills rather than learn theory knowledge at university. Hence, The German government found in a statistic, most students who participated private colleges could achieved in their careers. Consequently, the German government decided to continue this method in this country. Personally, I believe that education university is prominent benefit impact to individuals for getting accomplishments. In fact, focusing on other ways to success achievement is not experienced method in most part of the world. Nevertheless, system education at university has favorable experiment to get accomplishment. Indeed, Irish are most successfully people compare to other locals. This is due to the fact that majority of individuals in Ireland have graduated from university and found a good jobs. In conclusion, university education is a helpful way for individuals to achieve something in their life or it is not useful for them is a controversial topic. Reasons mentioned above supports studying at university is a beneficial way to prepare an accomplishment lifestyle. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people thing that the best way to succeed is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinions. Anwser: University education is enormous popular and common all parts of the world. Therefore, some people believe that studying at university is an achievement way to accomplish in life. However, some argue that university education is not chosen way to get successful today. In my opinion, education at university is extremely useful for people to create a good lifestyle in their entire life. To begin with, why people feel that the studying at university is the best way to live successfully in the world is that it gives them helpful method and informations which use in their careers. In other words, when individuals graduate from university, they would manage their processes in any situation. For example, in 2003, Apply company obtained the best company aware in the USA. This is because it only hires employees who graduated from university. It puts this rule that they can solve a problem with themselves. Consequently, its workers leaded to get the amazing prize. On the other hand, the main cause of people thinking the education university is not a correct way to achieve succeed is that there are so many alternatives and quick ways for it such as special courses and beginning to work early. As a matter of fact that German government encourages young citizens to attend occupational schools to improve their practical skills rather than learn theory knowledge at university. Hence, The German government found in a statistic, most students who participated private colleges could achieved in their careers. Consequently, the German government decided to continue this method in this country. Personally, I believe that education university is prominent benefit impact to individuals for getting accomplishments. In fact, focusing on other ways to success achievement is not experienced method in most part of the world. Nevertheless, system education at university has favorable experiment to get accomplishment. Indeed, Irish are most successfully people compare to other locals. This is due to the fact that majority of individuals in Ireland have graduated from university and found a good jobs. In conclusion, university education is a helpful way for individuals to achieve something in their life or it is not useful for them is a controversial topic. Reasons mentioned above supports studying at university is a beneficial way to prepare an accomplishment lifestyle. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people thing that the best way to succeed is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinions. Anwser: University education is enormous popular and common all parts of the world. Therefore, some people believe that studying at university is an achievement way to accomplish in life. However, some argue that university education is not chosen way to get successful today. In my opinion, education at university is extremely useful for people to create a good lifestyle in their entire life. To begin with, why people feel that the studying at university is the best way to live successfully in the world is that it gives them helpful method and informations which use in their careers. In other words, when individuals graduate from university, they would manage their processes in any situation. For example, in 2003, Apply company obtained the best company aware in the USA. This is because it only hires employees who graduated from university. It puts this rule that they can solve a problem with themselves. Consequently, its workers leaded to get the amazing prize. On the other hand, the main cause of people thinking the education university is not a correct way to achieve succeed is that there are so many alternatives and quick ways for it such as special courses and beginning to work early. As a matter of fact that German government encourages young citizens to attend occupational schools to improve their practical skills rather than learn theory knowledge at university. Hence, The German government found in a statistic, most students who participated private colleges could achieved in their careers. Consequently, the German government decided to continue this method in this country. Personally, I believe that education university is prominent benefit impact to individuals for getting accomplishments. In fact, focusing on other ways to success achievement is not experienced method in most part of the world. Nevertheless, system education at university has favorable experiment to get accomplishment. Indeed, Irish are most successfully people compare to other locals. This is due to the fact that majority of individuals in Ireland have graduated from university and found a good jobs. In conclusion, university education is a helpful way for individuals to achieve something in their life or it is not useful for them is a controversial topic. Reasons mentioned above supports studying at university is a beneficial way to prepare an accomplishment lifestyle. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people thing that the best way to succeed is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinions. Anwser: University education is enormous popular and common all parts of the world. Therefore, some people believe that studying at university is an achievement way to accomplish in life. However, some argue that university education is not chosen way to get successful today. In my opinion, education at university is extremely useful for people to create a good lifestyle in their entire life. To begin with, why people feel that the studying at university is the best way to live successfully in the world is that it gives them helpful method and informations which use in their careers. In other words, when individuals graduate from university, they would manage their processes in any situation. For example, in 2003, Apply company obtained the best company aware in the USA. This is because it only hires employees who graduated from university. It puts this rule that they can solve a problem with themselves. Consequently, its workers leaded to get the amazing prize. On the other hand, the main cause of people thinking the education university is not a correct way to achieve succeed is that there are so many alternatives and quick ways for it such as special courses and beginning to work early. As a matter of fact that German government encourages young citizens to attend occupational schools to improve their practical skills rather than learn theory knowledge at university. Hence, The German government found in a statistic, most students who participated private colleges could achieved in their careers. Consequently, the German government decided to continue this method in this country. Personally, I believe that education university is prominent benefit impact to individuals for getting accomplishments. In fact, focusing on other ways to success achievement is not experienced method in most part of the world. Nevertheless, system education at university has favorable experiment to get accomplishment. Indeed, Irish are most successfully people compare to other locals. This is due to the fact that majority of individuals in Ireland have graduated from university and found a good jobs. In conclusion, university education is a helpful way for individuals to achieve something in their life or it is not useful for them is a controversial topic. Reasons mentioned above supports studying at university is a beneficial way to prepare an accomplishment lifestyle. Your task achievement score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your experience. Anwser: A portion of society believes that children must do educational activities in their leisure time instead of wasting time on unproductive activities. I am totally disagree with this statement. I will give the reasons and example in upcoming paragraphs. To start with, First of all , leisure activities are just for rejuvenate our mind and body, and get relaxation after spending great amount of time on studying in the classroom. Hence, if children spend their leisure time while doing educational activities, they will end up to become study worm. As a consequence, they will have more health hazards such as bad posture, and it will hinder their physical growth which plays a crucial role in their study. As it always said that a healthy mind stays in a healthy man. Additionally, by doing productive activities all the times, pupils could distract from their families and culture. Childer need to be aware about their culture and moral values. Not spending enough time with their parents by their offspring could lead to become a bad citizen and they could get fed up of studying. To exemplify, one of my uncle's son was doing educational activities All the time, even in his free time, their parents was sending him for taking extra classes to get higher marks in his study. As a result, his physical growth Has hindered, as he was not getting enough time for physical growth. To sum up, I would say, Childer should spend their free time on playing games and spend time with the families in order to be healthy and be a good member of society. Otherwise, there could be some bad consequences of doing educational activities all the time. Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your experience. Anwser: A portion of society believes that children must do educational activities in their leisure time instead of wasting time on unproductive activities. I am totally disagree with this statement. I will give the reasons and example in upcoming paragraphs. To start with, First of all , leisure activities are just for rejuvenate our mind and body, and get relaxation after spending great amount of time on studying in the classroom. Hence, if children spend their leisure time while doing educational activities, they will end up to become study worm. As a consequence, they will have more health hazards such as bad posture, and it will hinder their physical growth which plays a crucial role in their study. As it always said that a healthy mind stays in a healthy man. Additionally, by doing productive activities all the times, pupils could distract from their families and culture. Childer need to be aware about their culture and moral values. Not spending enough time with their parents by their offspring could lead to become a bad citizen and they could get fed up of studying. To exemplify, one of my uncle's son was doing educational activities All the time, even in his free time, their parents was sending him for taking extra classes to get higher marks in his study. As a result, his physical growth Has hindered, as he was not getting enough time for physical growth. To sum up, I would say, Childer should spend their free time on playing games and spend time with the families in order to be healthy and be a good member of society. Otherwise, there could be some bad consequences of doing educational activities all the time. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your experience. Anwser: A portion of society believes that children must do educational activities in their leisure time instead of wasting time on unproductive activities. I am totally disagree with this statement. I will give the reasons and example in upcoming paragraphs. To start with, First of all , leisure activities are just for rejuvenate our mind and body, and get relaxation after spending great amount of time on studying in the classroom. Hence, if children spend their leisure time while doing educational activities, they will end up to become study worm. As a consequence, they will have more health hazards such as bad posture, and it will hinder their physical growth which plays a crucial role in their study. As it always said that a healthy mind stays in a healthy man. Additionally, by doing productive activities all the times, pupils could distract from their families and culture. Childer need to be aware about their culture and moral values. Not spending enough time with their parents by their offspring could lead to become a bad citizen and they could get fed up of studying. To exemplify, one of my uncle's son was doing educational activities All the time, even in his free time, their parents was sending him for taking extra classes to get higher marks in his study. As a result, his physical growth Has hindered, as he was not getting enough time for physical growth. To sum up, I would say, Childer should spend their free time on playing games and spend time with the families in order to be healthy and be a good member of society. Otherwise, there could be some bad consequences of doing educational activities all the time. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your experience. Anwser: A portion of society believes that children must do educational activities in their leisure time instead of wasting time on unproductive activities. I am totally disagree with this statement. I will give the reasons and example in upcoming paragraphs. To start with, First of all , leisure activities are just for rejuvenate our mind and body, and get relaxation after spending great amount of time on studying in the classroom. Hence, if children spend their leisure time while doing educational activities, they will end up to become study worm. As a consequence, they will have more health hazards such as bad posture, and it will hinder their physical growth which plays a crucial role in their study. As it always said that a healthy mind stays in a healthy man. Additionally, by doing productive activities all the times, pupils could distract from their families and culture. Childer need to be aware about their culture and moral values. Not spending enough time with their parents by their offspring could lead to become a bad citizen and they could get fed up of studying. To exemplify, one of my uncle's son was doing educational activities All the time, even in his free time, their parents was sending him for taking extra classes to get higher marks in his study. As a result, his physical growth Has hindered, as he was not getting enough time for physical growth. To sum up, I would say, Childer should spend their free time on playing games and spend time with the families in order to be healthy and be a good member of society. Otherwise, there could be some bad consequences of doing educational activities all the time. Your task achievement score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Nowadays many poeple choose p be selfe-employed,rather than to work for a company or orgnasation. why might this be the case? what would be disadvantages of being self-employed? Anwser: These days, being self-employed is getting so popular among individuals. People like to work for themselves as being their own boss gives you a fulfilling feeling. Although working for your own provides variety of advantages, there are some drawbacks like more responsibility and stress because of more work load which should be considered. One of the reasons that people select to be their own boss is that they can make and organize their daily plan with more freedom. This is because they do not have deadlines to finish their task and answer their supervisor question about it. For instance, in one recent paper mentioned that women who work independently instead of in a company feel more calm, confident, and glad. They admitted by working in this way they are able to spend much quality time with their family and friends. Despite advantages, self-employment faces some challenges as well which should be taken into account . it is clear that by employment in a company or firm, individuals benefit from some advantages. For instance, company or government pay as a vacation or sick days pay which is not possible to have as a self-employed. morever taxes is another essential thing in work which is need knowledge and time managment. By self-employment, you need to keep track of your taxes. Even it is essential to make a budget for it throughout the year. Those who choose to work for themselves should pay attention more to their savings. This is because their salary is not consistent every month. To sum up, although being of your own boss is a very powerfull feeling, there are so many disadvantages about it compared to employment that should be taken in consideration. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Nowadays many poeple choose p be selfe-employed,rather than to work for a company or orgnasation. why might this be the case? what would be disadvantages of being self-employed? Anwser: These days, being self-employed is getting so popular among individuals. People like to work for themselves as being their own boss gives you a fulfilling feeling. Although working for your own provides variety of advantages, there are some drawbacks like more responsibility and stress because of more work load which should be considered. One of the reasons that people select to be their own boss is that they can make and organize their daily plan with more freedom. This is because they do not have deadlines to finish their task and answer their supervisor question about it. For instance, in one recent paper mentioned that women who work independently instead of in a company feel more calm, confident, and glad. They admitted by working in this way they are able to spend much quality time with their family and friends. Despite advantages, self-employment faces some challenges as well which should be taken into account . it is clear that by employment in a company or firm, individuals benefit from some advantages. For instance, company or government pay as a vacation or sick days pay which is not possible to have as a self-employed. morever taxes is another essential thing in work which is need knowledge and time managment. By self-employment, you need to keep track of your taxes. Even it is essential to make a budget for it throughout the year. Those who choose to work for themselves should pay attention more to their savings. This is because their salary is not consistent every month. To sum up, although being of your own boss is a very powerfull feeling, there are so many disadvantages about it compared to employment that should be taken in consideration. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Nowadays many poeple choose p be selfe-employed,rather than to work for a company or orgnasation. why might this be the case? what would be disadvantages of being self-employed? Anwser: These days, being self-employed is getting so popular among individuals. People like to work for themselves as being their own boss gives you a fulfilling feeling. Although working for your own provides variety of advantages, there are some drawbacks like more responsibility and stress because of more work load which should be considered. One of the reasons that people select to be their own boss is that they can make and organize their daily plan with more freedom. This is because they do not have deadlines to finish their task and answer their supervisor question about it. For instance, in one recent paper mentioned that women who work independently instead of in a company feel more calm, confident, and glad. They admitted by working in this way they are able to spend much quality time with their family and friends. Despite advantages, self-employment faces some challenges as well which should be taken into account . it is clear that by employment in a company or firm, individuals benefit from some advantages. For instance, company or government pay as a vacation or sick days pay which is not possible to have as a self-employed. morever taxes is another essential thing in work which is need knowledge and time managment. By self-employment, you need to keep track of your taxes. Even it is essential to make a budget for it throughout the year. Those who choose to work for themselves should pay attention more to their savings. This is because their salary is not consistent every month. To sum up, although being of your own boss is a very powerfull feeling, there are so many disadvantages about it compared to employment that should be taken in consideration. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Nowadays many poeple choose p be selfe-employed,rather than to work for a company or orgnasation. why might this be the case? what would be disadvantages of being self-employed? Anwser: These days, being self-employed is getting so popular among individuals. People like to work for themselves as being their own boss gives you a fulfilling feeling. Although working for your own provides variety of advantages, there are some drawbacks like more responsibility and stress because of more work load which should be considered. One of the reasons that people select to be their own boss is that they can make and organize their daily plan with more freedom. This is because they do not have deadlines to finish their task and answer their supervisor question about it. For instance, in one recent paper mentioned that women who work independently instead of in a company feel more calm, confident, and glad. They admitted by working in this way they are able to spend much quality time with their family and friends. Despite advantages, self-employment faces some challenges as well which should be taken into account . it is clear that by employment in a company or firm, individuals benefit from some advantages. For instance, company or government pay as a vacation or sick days pay which is not possible to have as a self-employed. morever taxes is another essential thing in work which is need knowledge and time managment. By self-employment, you need to keep track of your taxes. Even it is essential to make a budget for it throughout the year. Those who choose to work for themselves should pay attention more to their savings. This is because their salary is not consistent every month. To sum up, although being of your own boss is a very powerfull feeling, there are so many disadvantages about it compared to employment that should be taken in consideration. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?e? Anwser: It is true that wild animals are impossible to see nowadays, especially in cities. Some people think that there is no particular place left for wild creatures. So, it is just a wastage of our bountiful resources, to provide them protection in this century. I completely disagree with this statement and believes that these animals should be protected and the individuals should do respect their habitats , no matter what. First of all, wild creatures are crucial elements of our food chain. They provide us balance between food cycle. Even, they live on top of pyramid because in nature, these all wild species are connected with each other and extinction of any one of them can create a chaos in whole food supply chain. For instance, nature works in a cycle and shortage or extinction of any wild animals could lead to maximization of other species, which can be reason of food scarcity. Secondly, these are more beneficial to secure our future in this Scientific era as they can be used for medical aims. The wild animals may have the genetics of their ancestors and these could be advantageous for Scientists to carry their previous researches continue, which has been done for medical purposes, to examplify. Therefore, protection of these animals will be helpful to make our forthcoming life better in drug fields. To conclude, I would like to say that food supply chain can be balanced only if, these wild creatures are saved by humin beings and these are not only aidful for our food system but also will be beneficial for the Medical Science in coming times. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?e? Anwser: It is true that wild animals are impossible to see nowadays, especially in cities. Some people think that there is no particular place left for wild creatures. So, it is just a wastage of our bountiful resources, to provide them protection in this century. I completely disagree with this statement and believes that these animals should be protected and the individuals should do respect their habitats , no matter what. First of all, wild creatures are crucial elements of our food chain. They provide us balance between food cycle. Even, they live on top of pyramid because in nature, these all wild species are connected with each other and extinction of any one of them can create a chaos in whole food supply chain. For instance, nature works in a cycle and shortage or extinction of any wild animals could lead to maximization of other species, which can be reason of food scarcity. Secondly, these are more beneficial to secure our future in this Scientific era as they can be used for medical aims. The wild animals may have the genetics of their ancestors and these could be advantageous for Scientists to carry their previous researches continue, which has been done for medical purposes, to examplify. Therefore, protection of these animals will be helpful to make our forthcoming life better in drug fields. To conclude, I would like to say that food supply chain can be balanced only if, these wild creatures are saved by humin beings and these are not only aidful for our food system but also will be beneficial for the Medical Science in coming times. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?e? Anwser: It is true that wild animals are impossible to see nowadays, especially in cities. Some people think that there is no particular place left for wild creatures. So, it is just a wastage of our bountiful resources, to provide them protection in this century. I completely disagree with this statement and believes that these animals should be protected and the individuals should do respect their habitats , no matter what. First of all, wild creatures are crucial elements of our food chain. They provide us balance between food cycle. Even, they live on top of pyramid because in nature, these all wild species are connected with each other and extinction of any one of them can create a chaos in whole food supply chain. For instance, nature works in a cycle and shortage or extinction of any wild animals could lead to maximization of other species, which can be reason of food scarcity. Secondly, these are more beneficial to secure our future in this Scientific era as they can be used for medical aims. The wild animals may have the genetics of their ancestors and these could be advantageous for Scientists to carry their previous researches continue, which has been done for medical purposes, to examplify. Therefore, protection of these animals will be helpful to make our forthcoming life better in drug fields. To conclude, I would like to say that food supply chain can be balanced only if, these wild creatures are saved by humin beings and these are not only aidful for our food system but also will be beneficial for the Medical Science in coming times. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?e? Anwser: It is true that wild animals are impossible to see nowadays, especially in cities. Some people think that there is no particular place left for wild creatures. So, it is just a wastage of our bountiful resources, to provide them protection in this century. I completely disagree with this statement and believes that these animals should be protected and the individuals should do respect their habitats , no matter what. First of all, wild creatures are crucial elements of our food chain. They provide us balance between food cycle. Even, they live on top of pyramid because in nature, these all wild species are connected with each other and extinction of any one of them can create a chaos in whole food supply chain. For instance, nature works in a cycle and shortage or extinction of any wild animals could lead to maximization of other species, which can be reason of food scarcity. Secondly, these are more beneficial to secure our future in this Scientific era as they can be used for medical aims. The wild animals may have the genetics of their ancestors and these could be advantageous for Scientists to carry their previous researches continue, which has been done for medical purposes, to examplify. Therefore, protection of these animals will be helpful to make our forthcoming life better in drug fields. To conclude, I would like to say that food supply chain can be balanced only if, these wild creatures are saved by humin beings and these are not only aidful for our food system but also will be beneficial for the Medical Science in coming times. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development? Anwser: adults in many countries. Leisure activities for children should make them relax. Because, they have to face pressure from education all day; after school young adults should find an activity that makes them feel relaxed. Everyone has their own ways to make themselves feel relaxed as well as young adults. In my opinion everything has pros and cons. The pros, of this activities it’s make some young adults feels relax some of them can make money from shopping like influencer in TikTok that’s review about the item that they buy to make other people who interested in the same thing or need the same item how good and bad of the product. It can make money for them and also can share the experience when they use the item accompanying the decision making people who want to buy the product. However, it can make the owner see and pay for them to review their product. Albeit, shopping has pros actually it has cons to come with.Like, some young adults can’t manage money to balance in daily life and shopping most of them spend a lot of money to buy anything that they need without thinking about the next day. Similarly, some young adults are shopping because they are trendy; buy everything in trend at that time even if they didn’t like it too much. This can have a negative effect on both parents and young adults because parents must earn enough money to cover expenses and it creates bad habits for childrens also.​​ To deduce, everything has pros and cons depending on how young adults make money. Even some adults don't understand this trend of young adults but, open your mind and consult and support them. As having said that some young adults can make money and make many chances for themself if they get support from parents it will make many pros for them. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development? Anwser: adults in many countries. Leisure activities for children should make them relax. Because, they have to face pressure from education all day; after school young adults should find an activity that makes them feel relaxed. Everyone has their own ways to make themselves feel relaxed as well as young adults. In my opinion everything has pros and cons. The pros, of this activities it’s make some young adults feels relax some of them can make money from shopping like influencer in TikTok that’s review about the item that they buy to make other people who interested in the same thing or need the same item how good and bad of the product. It can make money for them and also can share the experience when they use the item accompanying the decision making people who want to buy the product. However, it can make the owner see and pay for them to review their product. Albeit, shopping has pros actually it has cons to come with.Like, some young adults can’t manage money to balance in daily life and shopping most of them spend a lot of money to buy anything that they need without thinking about the next day. Similarly, some young adults are shopping because they are trendy; buy everything in trend at that time even if they didn’t like it too much. This can have a negative effect on both parents and young adults because parents must earn enough money to cover expenses and it creates bad habits for childrens also.​​ To deduce, everything has pros and cons depending on how young adults make money. Even some adults don't understand this trend of young adults but, open your mind and consult and support them. As having said that some young adults can make money and make many chances for themself if they get support from parents it will make many pros for them. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development? Anwser: adults in many countries. Leisure activities for children should make them relax. Because, they have to face pressure from education all day; after school young adults should find an activity that makes them feel relaxed. Everyone has their own ways to make themselves feel relaxed as well as young adults. In my opinion everything has pros and cons. The pros, of this activities it’s make some young adults feels relax some of them can make money from shopping like influencer in TikTok that’s review about the item that they buy to make other people who interested in the same thing or need the same item how good and bad of the product. It can make money for them and also can share the experience when they use the item accompanying the decision making people who want to buy the product. However, it can make the owner see and pay for them to review their product. Albeit, shopping has pros actually it has cons to come with.Like, some young adults can’t manage money to balance in daily life and shopping most of them spend a lot of money to buy anything that they need without thinking about the next day. Similarly, some young adults are shopping because they are trendy; buy everything in trend at that time even if they didn’t like it too much. This can have a negative effect on both parents and young adults because parents must earn enough money to cover expenses and it creates bad habits for childrens also.​​ To deduce, everything has pros and cons depending on how young adults make money. Even some adults don't understand this trend of young adults but, open your mind and consult and support them. As having said that some young adults can make money and make many chances for themself if they get support from parents it will make many pros for them. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development? Anwser: adults in many countries. Leisure activities for children should make them relax. Because, they have to face pressure from education all day; after school young adults should find an activity that makes them feel relaxed. Everyone has their own ways to make themselves feel relaxed as well as young adults. In my opinion everything has pros and cons. The pros, of this activities it’s make some young adults feels relax some of them can make money from shopping like influencer in TikTok that’s review about the item that they buy to make other people who interested in the same thing or need the same item how good and bad of the product. It can make money for them and also can share the experience when they use the item accompanying the decision making people who want to buy the product. However, it can make the owner see and pay for them to review their product. Albeit, shopping has pros actually it has cons to come with.Like, some young adults can’t manage money to balance in daily life and shopping most of them spend a lot of money to buy anything that they need without thinking about the next day. Similarly, some young adults are shopping because they are trendy; buy everything in trend at that time even if they didn’t like it too much. This can have a negative effect on both parents and young adults because parents must earn enough money to cover expenses and it creates bad habits for childrens also.​​ To deduce, everything has pros and cons depending on how young adults make money. Even some adults don't understand this trend of young adults but, open your mind and consult and support them. As having said that some young adults can make money and make many chances for themself if they get support from parents it will make many pros for them. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinio Anwser: We are living in an extremely competitive world. This society is continuously pushing us, making us to feel that we must be the best in everything we do and that we must have rivalry with our colleagues to be better or get more recognitions than them. However, in the long run, I don’t think this theory has been proved true. In this essay, I would like to argue why I believe that the education approach should be reconsidered in our schools, so kids stop competing between themselves and they are shown about the importance of cooperation to achieve their goals. It has been widely instilled in our educational system that you have to be always better and if possible, the best. Research shows that more than 80% of the high school student have felt the pressure of having to have better qualification than their peers. Unfortunately, when they haven’t, this have had a negative impact in the mental health, making them feel they were not enough, or that they were not worthy. On the other hand, it has been observed, that in those educational methods, such as Montessori or Regio Emilia, in which the focus is on the cooperation, there is no wiliness for being the best in the class. Instead of that, there is ambition for achieving goals, but always working together as a team and making contributions. In conclusion, the current competitive education systems must be reconsidered. Although, being competitive is not a negative attribute, in my opinion in schools the pupils should be educated to work together and shown the power of teamwork. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinio Anwser: We are living in an extremely competitive world. This society is continuously pushing us, making us to feel that we must be the best in everything we do and that we must have rivalry with our colleagues to be better or get more recognitions than them. However, in the long run, I don’t think this theory has been proved true. In this essay, I would like to argue why I believe that the education approach should be reconsidered in our schools, so kids stop competing between themselves and they are shown about the importance of cooperation to achieve their goals. It has been widely instilled in our educational system that you have to be always better and if possible, the best. Research shows that more than 80% of the high school student have felt the pressure of having to have better qualification than their peers. Unfortunately, when they haven’t, this have had a negative impact in the mental health, making them feel they were not enough, or that they were not worthy. On the other hand, it has been observed, that in those educational methods, such as Montessori or Regio Emilia, in which the focus is on the cooperation, there is no wiliness for being the best in the class. Instead of that, there is ambition for achieving goals, but always working together as a team and making contributions. In conclusion, the current competitive education systems must be reconsidered. Although, being competitive is not a negative attribute, in my opinion in schools the pupils should be educated to work together and shown the power of teamwork. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinio Anwser: We are living in an extremely competitive world. This society is continuously pushing us, making us to feel that we must be the best in everything we do and that we must have rivalry with our colleagues to be better or get more recognitions than them. However, in the long run, I don’t think this theory has been proved true. In this essay, I would like to argue why I believe that the education approach should be reconsidered in our schools, so kids stop competing between themselves and they are shown about the importance of cooperation to achieve their goals. It has been widely instilled in our educational system that you have to be always better and if possible, the best. Research shows that more than 80% of the high school student have felt the pressure of having to have better qualification than their peers. Unfortunately, when they haven’t, this have had a negative impact in the mental health, making them feel they were not enough, or that they were not worthy. On the other hand, it has been observed, that in those educational methods, such as Montessori or Regio Emilia, in which the focus is on the cooperation, there is no wiliness for being the best in the class. Instead of that, there is ambition for achieving goals, but always working together as a team and making contributions. In conclusion, the current competitive education systems must be reconsidered. Although, being competitive is not a negative attribute, in my opinion in schools the pupils should be educated to work together and shown the power of teamwork. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinio Anwser: We are living in an extremely competitive world. This society is continuously pushing us, making us to feel that we must be the best in everything we do and that we must have rivalry with our colleagues to be better or get more recognitions than them. However, in the long run, I don’t think this theory has been proved true. In this essay, I would like to argue why I believe that the education approach should be reconsidered in our schools, so kids stop competing between themselves and they are shown about the importance of cooperation to achieve their goals. It has been widely instilled in our educational system that you have to be always better and if possible, the best. Research shows that more than 80% of the high school student have felt the pressure of having to have better qualification than their peers. Unfortunately, when they haven’t, this have had a negative impact in the mental health, making them feel they were not enough, or that they were not worthy. On the other hand, it has been observed, that in those educational methods, such as Montessori or Regio Emilia, in which the focus is on the cooperation, there is no wiliness for being the best in the class. Instead of that, there is ambition for achieving goals, but always working together as a team and making contributions. In conclusion, the current competitive education systems must be reconsidered. Although, being competitive is not a negative attribute, in my opinion in schools the pupils should be educated to work together and shown the power of teamwork. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspaper and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear. What is your opinion? Anwser: Many people believe that the advance of technology is more and more fast such as e-books and thus traditional means of communication include books, newspaper and magazines will no longer exist while others suppose these means of communication will survive forever. In my opinion, printed media still play a fundamental role in people’s life. I will discuss both of these views before giving my opinion in this essay below. On the one hand, when technology develops, people tend to use high-tech equiqments such as ipad, laptop or mobile phone and usually do not read printed media like books, newspaper and magazines because high-tech equiqments like e-books may bring easily and update information extremely quickly. For example, when a event is taking place such as a extreme traffic accident, immediately online news will give it to residents. By contrast, traditional printed newspaper just can report in the next day. In addition, it is convenient for student to study because they can study everytime and everywhere with their laptop. On the other hand, traditional means of communication include books, newspaper and magazines still have a positive impacts on citizen because some people especially older people can not use high-tech equiqments and they feel difficult to interact with them. Moreover, it is comfortable for older people to read printer media because their eyes are tired less. Besides, reading printed newspaper and drinking coffee in the morning are daily habits in their life. In conclusion, both of these media are useful and bring positive values for people. They will always survive and develop together. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspaper and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear. What is your opinion? Anwser: Many people believe that the advance of technology is more and more fast such as e-books and thus traditional means of communication include books, newspaper and magazines will no longer exist while others suppose these means of communication will survive forever. In my opinion, printed media still play a fundamental role in people’s life. I will discuss both of these views before giving my opinion in this essay below. On the one hand, when technology develops, people tend to use high-tech equiqments such as ipad, laptop or mobile phone and usually do not read printed media like books, newspaper and magazines because high-tech equiqments like e-books may bring easily and update information extremely quickly. For example, when a event is taking place such as a extreme traffic accident, immediately online news will give it to residents. By contrast, traditional printed newspaper just can report in the next day. In addition, it is convenient for student to study because they can study everytime and everywhere with their laptop. On the other hand, traditional means of communication include books, newspaper and magazines still have a positive impacts on citizen because some people especially older people can not use high-tech equiqments and they feel difficult to interact with them. Moreover, it is comfortable for older people to read printer media because their eyes are tired less. Besides, reading printed newspaper and drinking coffee in the morning are daily habits in their life. In conclusion, both of these media are useful and bring positive values for people. They will always survive and develop together. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspaper and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear. What is your opinion? Anwser: Many people believe that the advance of technology is more and more fast such as e-books and thus traditional means of communication include books, newspaper and magazines will no longer exist while others suppose these means of communication will survive forever. In my opinion, printed media still play a fundamental role in people’s life. I will discuss both of these views before giving my opinion in this essay below. On the one hand, when technology develops, people tend to use high-tech equiqments such as ipad, laptop or mobile phone and usually do not read printed media like books, newspaper and magazines because high-tech equiqments like e-books may bring easily and update information extremely quickly. For example, when a event is taking place such as a extreme traffic accident, immediately online news will give it to residents. By contrast, traditional printed newspaper just can report in the next day. In addition, it is convenient for student to study because they can study everytime and everywhere with their laptop. On the other hand, traditional means of communication include books, newspaper and magazines still have a positive impacts on citizen because some people especially older people can not use high-tech equiqments and they feel difficult to interact with them. Moreover, it is comfortable for older people to read printer media because their eyes are tired less. Besides, reading printed newspaper and drinking coffee in the morning are daily habits in their life. In conclusion, both of these media are useful and bring positive values for people. They will always survive and develop together. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspaper and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear. What is your opinion? Anwser: Many people believe that the advance of technology is more and more fast such as e-books and thus traditional means of communication include books, newspaper and magazines will no longer exist while others suppose these means of communication will survive forever. In my opinion, printed media still play a fundamental role in people’s life. I will discuss both of these views before giving my opinion in this essay below. On the one hand, when technology develops, people tend to use high-tech equiqments such as ipad, laptop or mobile phone and usually do not read printed media like books, newspaper and magazines because high-tech equiqments like e-books may bring easily and update information extremely quickly. For example, when a event is taking place such as a extreme traffic accident, immediately online news will give it to residents. By contrast, traditional printed newspaper just can report in the next day. In addition, it is convenient for student to study because they can study everytime and everywhere with their laptop. On the other hand, traditional means of communication include books, newspaper and magazines still have a positive impacts on citizen because some people especially older people can not use high-tech equiqments and they feel difficult to interact with them. Moreover, it is comfortable for older people to read printer media because their eyes are tired less. Besides, reading printed newspaper and drinking coffee in the morning are daily habits in their life. In conclusion, both of these media are useful and bring positive values for people. They will always survive and develop together. Your task achievement score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: some people believe the best way to tackle pollution is by paying tax others disagree. discuss both views and state your opinion Anwser: In the modern world, nowadays the environmental issue is numerous problems in many countries. which is the government pay attention to this problem. Some people think that the solution to this problem is the government should increase taxation. In my opinion, I believe that taxes is the best method for this problem. To begin with, the solution to countering the pollution by addition taxes, if the government increase taxes, the pollution awareness of people will be better than the past. Because they will be concern about the cost of punishment, which is result to more expense. Moreover, the taxes from this solution would be managed by the government to improve their countries. For example, they will improve facilities for recycling industry or create new innovations to tackle this problem. In contrast, some people argue that there are many method to address this problem rather than taxes. Firstly, the government should upgrade people knowledge about types of pollution and pollution source. Due to when they know abuot these information, they will be protect themselves from emerge pollutions. Secondly, the government should encourage people to clean recycling their plastics for reduce the pollution. Lastly, From individual solutions the people should utilize mroe in public transport than drive own cars, which have a part for reduce air pollution problems. To conclude, the taxation is one of the best solution for improve awareness and strict to tackle pollution. In contrast, there are many solution for this problem such as knowlegde of pollution, encourage people to recycle and public transport. I strongly believe in taxation. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: some people believe the best way to tackle pollution is by paying tax others disagree. discuss both views and state your opinion Anwser: In the modern world, nowadays the environmental issue is numerous problems in many countries. which is the government pay attention to this problem. Some people think that the solution to this problem is the government should increase taxation. In my opinion, I believe that taxes is the best method for this problem. To begin with, the solution to countering the pollution by addition taxes, if the government increase taxes, the pollution awareness of people will be better than the past. Because they will be concern about the cost of punishment, which is result to more expense. Moreover, the taxes from this solution would be managed by the government to improve their countries. For example, they will improve facilities for recycling industry or create new innovations to tackle this problem. In contrast, some people argue that there are many method to address this problem rather than taxes. Firstly, the government should upgrade people knowledge about types of pollution and pollution source. Due to when they know abuot these information, they will be protect themselves from emerge pollutions. Secondly, the government should encourage people to clean recycling their plastics for reduce the pollution. Lastly, From individual solutions the people should utilize mroe in public transport than drive own cars, which have a part for reduce air pollution problems. To conclude, the taxation is one of the best solution for improve awareness and strict to tackle pollution. In contrast, there are many solution for this problem such as knowlegde of pollution, encourage people to recycle and public transport. I strongly believe in taxation. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: some people believe the best way to tackle pollution is by paying tax others disagree. discuss both views and state your opinion Anwser: In the modern world, nowadays the environmental issue is numerous problems in many countries. which is the government pay attention to this problem. Some people think that the solution to this problem is the government should increase taxation. In my opinion, I believe that taxes is the best method for this problem. To begin with, the solution to countering the pollution by addition taxes, if the government increase taxes, the pollution awareness of people will be better than the past. Because they will be concern about the cost of punishment, which is result to more expense. Moreover, the taxes from this solution would be managed by the government to improve their countries. For example, they will improve facilities for recycling industry or create new innovations to tackle this problem. In contrast, some people argue that there are many method to address this problem rather than taxes. Firstly, the government should upgrade people knowledge about types of pollution and pollution source. Due to when they know abuot these information, they will be protect themselves from emerge pollutions. Secondly, the government should encourage people to clean recycling their plastics for reduce the pollution. Lastly, From individual solutions the people should utilize mroe in public transport than drive own cars, which have a part for reduce air pollution problems. To conclude, the taxation is one of the best solution for improve awareness and strict to tackle pollution. In contrast, there are many solution for this problem such as knowlegde of pollution, encourage people to recycle and public transport. I strongly believe in taxation. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: some people believe the best way to tackle pollution is by paying tax others disagree. discuss both views and state your opinion Anwser: In the modern world, nowadays the environmental issue is numerous problems in many countries. which is the government pay attention to this problem. Some people think that the solution to this problem is the government should increase taxation. In my opinion, I believe that taxes is the best method for this problem. To begin with, the solution to countering the pollution by addition taxes, if the government increase taxes, the pollution awareness of people will be better than the past. Because they will be concern about the cost of punishment, which is result to more expense. Moreover, the taxes from this solution would be managed by the government to improve their countries. For example, they will improve facilities for recycling industry or create new innovations to tackle this problem. In contrast, some people argue that there are many method to address this problem rather than taxes. Firstly, the government should upgrade people knowledge about types of pollution and pollution source. Due to when they know abuot these information, they will be protect themselves from emerge pollutions. Secondly, the government should encourage people to clean recycling their plastics for reduce the pollution. Lastly, From individual solutions the people should utilize mroe in public transport than drive own cars, which have a part for reduce air pollution problems. To conclude, the taxation is one of the best solution for improve awareness and strict to tackle pollution. In contrast, there are many solution for this problem such as knowlegde of pollution, encourage people to recycle and public transport. I strongly believe in taxation. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Anwser: It is often argued that higher calorie food is harmful to the human body. So, the price of such items should be beyond the limit of common people purchase. I completely agree with this opinion and this essay will describe the reasons for my opinion. First of all, Junk foods are produced using such ingredients, which create negative impact on the important organs of human body. This may lead to fatal diseases and also sometimes failure of some organs. For instance, some diseases live diabatic, high blood pressure, kidney failure are direct effect of eating much sugar contain foods. Moreover, Obesity has become a global problem throughout the world, which is increasing day by day because of sugar contain food selection. That is why it is necessary to increase price of Some selected food, which are injurious to health. Secondly, fast foods are mostly preferred by teenagers. By eating much, this can be an addiction for them, which brings negative results for childs. For example, children lose their appetite to healthy food items, which are mandatory for their growth. The brain development of children is badly affected by such kind of food habits. Moreover, child’s teeth are damaged by higher calorie foods as it contains higher level of sugar . Sometimes teenagers more addicted to such foods may become matter of Irritation for parents. Thus, the impact future generation is adversely. To conclude, I strongly believe that initiatives must be taken to raise the cost of sugary food because it is unhealthy for individuals. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Anwser: It is often argued that higher calorie food is harmful to the human body. So, the price of such items should be beyond the limit of common people purchase. I completely agree with this opinion and this essay will describe the reasons for my opinion. First of all, Junk foods are produced using such ingredients, which create negative impact on the important organs of human body. This may lead to fatal diseases and also sometimes failure of some organs. For instance, some diseases live diabatic, high blood pressure, kidney failure are direct effect of eating much sugar contain foods. Moreover, Obesity has become a global problem throughout the world, which is increasing day by day because of sugar contain food selection. That is why it is necessary to increase price of Some selected food, which are injurious to health. Secondly, fast foods are mostly preferred by teenagers. By eating much, this can be an addiction for them, which brings negative results for childs. For example, children lose their appetite to healthy food items, which are mandatory for their growth. The brain development of children is badly affected by such kind of food habits. Moreover, child’s teeth are damaged by higher calorie foods as it contains higher level of sugar . Sometimes teenagers more addicted to such foods may become matter of Irritation for parents. Thus, the impact future generation is adversely. To conclude, I strongly believe that initiatives must be taken to raise the cost of sugary food because it is unhealthy for individuals. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Anwser: It is often argued that higher calorie food is harmful to the human body. So, the price of such items should be beyond the limit of common people purchase. I completely agree with this opinion and this essay will describe the reasons for my opinion. First of all, Junk foods are produced using such ingredients, which create negative impact on the important organs of human body. This may lead to fatal diseases and also sometimes failure of some organs. For instance, some diseases live diabatic, high blood pressure, kidney failure are direct effect of eating much sugar contain foods. Moreover, Obesity has become a global problem throughout the world, which is increasing day by day because of sugar contain food selection. That is why it is necessary to increase price of Some selected food, which are injurious to health. Secondly, fast foods are mostly preferred by teenagers. By eating much, this can be an addiction for them, which brings negative results for childs. For example, children lose their appetite to healthy food items, which are mandatory for their growth. The brain development of children is badly affected by such kind of food habits. Moreover, child’s teeth are damaged by higher calorie foods as it contains higher level of sugar . Sometimes teenagers more addicted to such foods may become matter of Irritation for parents. Thus, the impact future generation is adversely. To conclude, I strongly believe that initiatives must be taken to raise the cost of sugary food because it is unhealthy for individuals. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Anwser: It is often argued that higher calorie food is harmful to the human body. So, the price of such items should be beyond the limit of common people purchase. I completely agree with this opinion and this essay will describe the reasons for my opinion. First of all, Junk foods are produced using such ingredients, which create negative impact on the important organs of human body. This may lead to fatal diseases and also sometimes failure of some organs. For instance, some diseases live diabatic, high blood pressure, kidney failure are direct effect of eating much sugar contain foods. Moreover, Obesity has become a global problem throughout the world, which is increasing day by day because of sugar contain food selection. That is why it is necessary to increase price of Some selected food, which are injurious to health. Secondly, fast foods are mostly preferred by teenagers. By eating much, this can be an addiction for them, which brings negative results for childs. For example, children lose their appetite to healthy food items, which are mandatory for their growth. The brain development of children is badly affected by such kind of food habits. Moreover, child’s teeth are damaged by higher calorie foods as it contains higher level of sugar . Sometimes teenagers more addicted to such foods may become matter of Irritation for parents. Thus, the impact future generation is adversely. To conclude, I strongly believe that initiatives must be taken to raise the cost of sugary food because it is unhealthy for individuals. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: The internet is a great invention that brings a host of advantages for the world population. However, there are several issues in terms of security and control of personal data. Do you agree or disagree with this? Anwser: The issue of the internet's position in modern life has sparked a heated debate among many. It is widely argued that the internet has created a tremendous amount of opportunities and benefits, but this notion is not without its critics. While some people prefer to narrow down to only positive effects, their proponents prefer to elaborate on disadvantages and dangers of using the internet. I am firmly of the belief that both sides have reasons to discuss. On the one hand, it is undeniable that we hardly imagine our daily routine without internet usage. Modern technologies have permeated at all levels starting from casual communication through mobile internet and searching a new job and finishing up with completely new phenomenon such as artificial intelligence, social media and On the other hand, there are a few problems we can obtain. Firstly, due to the lack of security, we can face a huge personal protection problem. We constantly see the news about how our sensitive personal data was stolen by hackers and sold to people who can blackmail us. Secondly, using social media could lead to some psychological issues such as fear of missing out and social anxiety. Overall, the internet stands as a pivotal element in modern existence, weaving through the fabric of our daily lives and offering both immense benefits and significant challenges. While it opens doors to vast opportunities and advancements in communication, employment, and technology, it also presents considerable risks related to privacy, security, and mental health. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: The internet is a great invention that brings a host of advantages for the world population. However, there are several issues in terms of security and control of personal data. Do you agree or disagree with this? Anwser: The issue of the internet's position in modern life has sparked a heated debate among many. It is widely argued that the internet has created a tremendous amount of opportunities and benefits, but this notion is not without its critics. While some people prefer to narrow down to only positive effects, their proponents prefer to elaborate on disadvantages and dangers of using the internet. I am firmly of the belief that both sides have reasons to discuss. On the one hand, it is undeniable that we hardly imagine our daily routine without internet usage. Modern technologies have permeated at all levels starting from casual communication through mobile internet and searching a new job and finishing up with completely new phenomenon such as artificial intelligence, social media and On the other hand, there are a few problems we can obtain. Firstly, due to the lack of security, we can face a huge personal protection problem. We constantly see the news about how our sensitive personal data was stolen by hackers and sold to people who can blackmail us. Secondly, using social media could lead to some psychological issues such as fear of missing out and social anxiety. Overall, the internet stands as a pivotal element in modern existence, weaving through the fabric of our daily lives and offering both immense benefits and significant challenges. While it opens doors to vast opportunities and advancements in communication, employment, and technology, it also presents considerable risks related to privacy, security, and mental health. Your lexical resource score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: The internet is a great invention that brings a host of advantages for the world population. However, there are several issues in terms of security and control of personal data. Do you agree or disagree with this? Anwser: The issue of the internet's position in modern life has sparked a heated debate among many. It is widely argued that the internet has created a tremendous amount of opportunities and benefits, but this notion is not without its critics. While some people prefer to narrow down to only positive effects, their proponents prefer to elaborate on disadvantages and dangers of using the internet. I am firmly of the belief that both sides have reasons to discuss. On the one hand, it is undeniable that we hardly imagine our daily routine without internet usage. Modern technologies have permeated at all levels starting from casual communication through mobile internet and searching a new job and finishing up with completely new phenomenon such as artificial intelligence, social media and On the other hand, there are a few problems we can obtain. Firstly, due to the lack of security, we can face a huge personal protection problem. We constantly see the news about how our sensitive personal data was stolen by hackers and sold to people who can blackmail us. Secondly, using social media could lead to some psychological issues such as fear of missing out and social anxiety. Overall, the internet stands as a pivotal element in modern existence, weaving through the fabric of our daily lives and offering both immense benefits and significant challenges. While it opens doors to vast opportunities and advancements in communication, employment, and technology, it also presents considerable risks related to privacy, security, and mental health. Your grammatical range score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: The internet is a great invention that brings a host of advantages for the world population. However, there are several issues in terms of security and control of personal data. Do you agree or disagree with this? Anwser: The issue of the internet's position in modern life has sparked a heated debate among many. It is widely argued that the internet has created a tremendous amount of opportunities and benefits, but this notion is not without its critics. While some people prefer to narrow down to only positive effects, their proponents prefer to elaborate on disadvantages and dangers of using the internet. I am firmly of the belief that both sides have reasons to discuss. On the one hand, it is undeniable that we hardly imagine our daily routine without internet usage. Modern technologies have permeated at all levels starting from casual communication through mobile internet and searching a new job and finishing up with completely new phenomenon such as artificial intelligence, social media and On the other hand, there are a few problems we can obtain. Firstly, due to the lack of security, we can face a huge personal protection problem. We constantly see the news about how our sensitive personal data was stolen by hackers and sold to people who can blackmail us. Secondly, using social media could lead to some psychological issues such as fear of missing out and social anxiety. Overall, the internet stands as a pivotal element in modern existence, weaving through the fabric of our daily lives and offering both immense benefits and significant challenges. While it opens doors to vast opportunities and advancements in communication, employment, and technology, it also presents considerable risks related to privacy, security, and mental health. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people say that the government should pay for the public healthcare and education while others say it is not the governments responsibility do you agree or disagree? Anwser: There has been a heated debate over who should be responsible for the public healthcare and education. Some argue that those money should be paid by individuals since they enjoy the service. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies and needs to be examined meticulously. First, government bears the responsibility for these costs of healthcare and education, since the right to have access to those services demonstrartes fairness in the society. In a society where people have to pay premium prices to essential prescription pills and education, these high costs will widen the gap between rich and poor. For example, people from wealthy families is able to provide the best treatment for their parents with chronological diseases and the best education resources including studying overseas for their childern. By contrast, for poor families, it is likely that a minor health problem for the elderly and book fees for children may cost their entire income for a month. As a result, they will not receive healthcare and education they deserve. This situation could be worsening generations after generations, resulting in social inequality and potentially social unrest. Admittedly, it seems fair to believe that if the public healthcare and education are paid by the goverment, it will generate much burden on the government budget. This is especially true to some underdeveloped regional governments that is alreading struglling with debt. If they decide to make healthcare and education free to all citizens, they may go bankruptcy and siginificantly impact the whole operation of the government. However, with the advancement of technologies such as artificial intelligence, the human's productivity will inevitably be increased dramatically, which will generate tremedous amount of social wealth for the government to cover the extra costs for all the healthcare and education. In conclusion, while it will put more burden on the government if all the member in the society could have free healthcare and education, with the help of modern technology, it is still necessary for the equality of the whole society. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people say that the government should pay for the public healthcare and education while others say it is not the governments responsibility do you agree or disagree? Anwser: There has been a heated debate over who should be responsible for the public healthcare and education. Some argue that those money should be paid by individuals since they enjoy the service. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies and needs to be examined meticulously. First, government bears the responsibility for these costs of healthcare and education, since the right to have access to those services demonstrartes fairness in the society. In a society where people have to pay premium prices to essential prescription pills and education, these high costs will widen the gap between rich and poor. For example, people from wealthy families is able to provide the best treatment for their parents with chronological diseases and the best education resources including studying overseas for their childern. By contrast, for poor families, it is likely that a minor health problem for the elderly and book fees for children may cost their entire income for a month. As a result, they will not receive healthcare and education they deserve. This situation could be worsening generations after generations, resulting in social inequality and potentially social unrest. Admittedly, it seems fair to believe that if the public healthcare and education are paid by the goverment, it will generate much burden on the government budget. This is especially true to some underdeveloped regional governments that is alreading struglling with debt. If they decide to make healthcare and education free to all citizens, they may go bankruptcy and siginificantly impact the whole operation of the government. However, with the advancement of technologies such as artificial intelligence, the human's productivity will inevitably be increased dramatically, which will generate tremedous amount of social wealth for the government to cover the extra costs for all the healthcare and education. In conclusion, while it will put more burden on the government if all the member in the society could have free healthcare and education, with the help of modern technology, it is still necessary for the equality of the whole society. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people say that the government should pay for the public healthcare and education while others say it is not the governments responsibility do you agree or disagree? Anwser: There has been a heated debate over who should be responsible for the public healthcare and education. Some argue that those money should be paid by individuals since they enjoy the service. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies and needs to be examined meticulously. First, government bears the responsibility for these costs of healthcare and education, since the right to have access to those services demonstrartes fairness in the society. In a society where people have to pay premium prices to essential prescription pills and education, these high costs will widen the gap between rich and poor. For example, people from wealthy families is able to provide the best treatment for their parents with chronological diseases and the best education resources including studying overseas for their childern. By contrast, for poor families, it is likely that a minor health problem for the elderly and book fees for children may cost their entire income for a month. As a result, they will not receive healthcare and education they deserve. This situation could be worsening generations after generations, resulting in social inequality and potentially social unrest. Admittedly, it seems fair to believe that if the public healthcare and education are paid by the goverment, it will generate much burden on the government budget. This is especially true to some underdeveloped regional governments that is alreading struglling with debt. If they decide to make healthcare and education free to all citizens, they may go bankruptcy and siginificantly impact the whole operation of the government. However, with the advancement of technologies such as artificial intelligence, the human's productivity will inevitably be increased dramatically, which will generate tremedous amount of social wealth for the government to cover the extra costs for all the healthcare and education. In conclusion, while it will put more burden on the government if all the member in the society could have free healthcare and education, with the help of modern technology, it is still necessary for the equality of the whole society. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people say that the government should pay for the public healthcare and education while others say it is not the governments responsibility do you agree or disagree? Anwser: There has been a heated debate over who should be responsible for the public healthcare and education. Some argue that those money should be paid by individuals since they enjoy the service. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies and needs to be examined meticulously. First, government bears the responsibility for these costs of healthcare and education, since the right to have access to those services demonstrartes fairness in the society. In a society where people have to pay premium prices to essential prescription pills and education, these high costs will widen the gap between rich and poor. For example, people from wealthy families is able to provide the best treatment for their parents with chronological diseases and the best education resources including studying overseas for their childern. By contrast, for poor families, it is likely that a minor health problem for the elderly and book fees for children may cost their entire income for a month. As a result, they will not receive healthcare and education they deserve. This situation could be worsening generations after generations, resulting in social inequality and potentially social unrest. Admittedly, it seems fair to believe that if the public healthcare and education are paid by the goverment, it will generate much burden on the government budget. This is especially true to some underdeveloped regional governments that is alreading struglling with debt. If they decide to make healthcare and education free to all citizens, they may go bankruptcy and siginificantly impact the whole operation of the government. However, with the advancement of technologies such as artificial intelligence, the human's productivity will inevitably be increased dramatically, which will generate tremedous amount of social wealth for the government to cover the extra costs for all the healthcare and education. In conclusion, while it will put more burden on the government if all the member in the society could have free healthcare and education, with the help of modern technology, it is still necessary for the equality of the whole society. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your opinion Anwser: People are becoming concern towards values to instill in their children. They have different views weather young people should be taught to be competitive or co-operative. While a spirit of competitiveness can sometimes be useful in this life, I believe that the ability to co-operate is more important. On the one hand, competition can be a great source of motivation. When teachers use games or prizes to introduce an element of competitiveness into lessons, it can encourage children to work harder to undo the other pupils in the class. This kind of healthy rivalry may help to build children’s self confidence, while pushing them to work independently and progress more quickly. When these young people leave school, their confidence and determination will help them in competitive situations such as job interviews. It can therefore be argued that competition should be encouraged in order to prepare children for adult life. On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to prepare children for the many aspects of adult life that require co-operation. In the workplace, adult are expected to work in teams, follow instructions given by their superiors, or supervise and support the more junior members of staff. Team collaboration are much more useful than a competitive determination to win. This is the attitude that I believe schools should foster in young people. Instead of promoting the idea that people are either winners or losers, teachers could show children that they gain more from working together. In conclusion, I can understand why people might want to encourage competitiveness in children, but it seems to me that a co-operative attitude is much more desirable in adult life. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your opinion Anwser: People are becoming concern towards values to instill in their children. They have different views weather young people should be taught to be competitive or co-operative. While a spirit of competitiveness can sometimes be useful in this life, I believe that the ability to co-operate is more important. On the one hand, competition can be a great source of motivation. When teachers use games or prizes to introduce an element of competitiveness into lessons, it can encourage children to work harder to undo the other pupils in the class. This kind of healthy rivalry may help to build children’s self confidence, while pushing them to work independently and progress more quickly. When these young people leave school, their confidence and determination will help them in competitive situations such as job interviews. It can therefore be argued that competition should be encouraged in order to prepare children for adult life. On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to prepare children for the many aspects of adult life that require co-operation. In the workplace, adult are expected to work in teams, follow instructions given by their superiors, or supervise and support the more junior members of staff. Team collaboration are much more useful than a competitive determination to win. This is the attitude that I believe schools should foster in young people. Instead of promoting the idea that people are either winners or losers, teachers could show children that they gain more from working together. In conclusion, I can understand why people might want to encourage competitiveness in children, but it seems to me that a co-operative attitude is much more desirable in adult life. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your opinion Anwser: People are becoming concern towards values to instill in their children. They have different views weather young people should be taught to be competitive or co-operative. While a spirit of competitiveness can sometimes be useful in this life, I believe that the ability to co-operate is more important. On the one hand, competition can be a great source of motivation. When teachers use games or prizes to introduce an element of competitiveness into lessons, it can encourage children to work harder to undo the other pupils in the class. This kind of healthy rivalry may help to build children’s self confidence, while pushing them to work independently and progress more quickly. When these young people leave school, their confidence and determination will help them in competitive situations such as job interviews. It can therefore be argued that competition should be encouraged in order to prepare children for adult life. On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to prepare children for the many aspects of adult life that require co-operation. In the workplace, adult are expected to work in teams, follow instructions given by their superiors, or supervise and support the more junior members of staff. Team collaboration are much more useful than a competitive determination to win. This is the attitude that I believe schools should foster in young people. Instead of promoting the idea that people are either winners or losers, teachers could show children that they gain more from working together. In conclusion, I can understand why people might want to encourage competitiveness in children, but it seems to me that a co-operative attitude is much more desirable in adult life. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your opinion Anwser: People are becoming concern towards values to instill in their children. They have different views weather young people should be taught to be competitive or co-operative. While a spirit of competitiveness can sometimes be useful in this life, I believe that the ability to co-operate is more important. On the one hand, competition can be a great source of motivation. When teachers use games or prizes to introduce an element of competitiveness into lessons, it can encourage children to work harder to undo the other pupils in the class. This kind of healthy rivalry may help to build children’s self confidence, while pushing them to work independently and progress more quickly. When these young people leave school, their confidence and determination will help them in competitive situations such as job interviews. It can therefore be argued that competition should be encouraged in order to prepare children for adult life. On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to prepare children for the many aspects of adult life that require co-operation. In the workplace, adult are expected to work in teams, follow instructions given by their superiors, or supervise and support the more junior members of staff. Team collaboration are much more useful than a competitive determination to win. This is the attitude that I believe schools should foster in young people. Instead of promoting the idea that people are either winners or losers, teachers could show children that they gain more from working together. In conclusion, I can understand why people might want to encourage competitiveness in children, but it seems to me that a co-operative attitude is much more desirable in adult life. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Anwser: In today's world, manufacturers tend to advertise that their own products are made for the first time in some areas. If advertisers disseminate their products are new, it is more likely to appeal more buyers to purchase. As nowadays, people can get information on the internet whenever and wherever they want, they often pay attention to new things which may provide opportunities for the mass to access to fashion to showcase status and identities. By emphasising the factors of being new, the manufacturers are able to earn profits and access to big reputations to defeat other factories in the same area. While this phenomenon has its cons and pros. As for its advantages, advertisements which focus on new factors of some products may result in positive competiton between manufacturers. Thus, this can help improve the service provided by producers and even help incentive more new ideas of designing products. When more and more consumers begin choosing and buying ideal items with new features, the economy is likely to grow due to the constant upgrade of products. By contrast, fake dissemination of new features or functions of some specific items may lead to negative impacts on society. Because some things bought by people are sometimes important to physical or mental health rather than simply show off wealth. For example, if advertisers emphasise food or drinks with new flavours or ingredients but choose to tell lies to conceal the low nutrition feature of these products, this may tend to be detrimental to people's body conditions. To sum up, it is reasonable and necessary for businesses to think highly of the factor of being new in their products to attract consumers to buy and this is likely to be a double-edged sword. Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Anwser: In today's world, manufacturers tend to advertise that their own products are made for the first time in some areas. If advertisers disseminate their products are new, it is more likely to appeal more buyers to purchase. As nowadays, people can get information on the internet whenever and wherever they want, they often pay attention to new things which may provide opportunities for the mass to access to fashion to showcase status and identities. By emphasising the factors of being new, the manufacturers are able to earn profits and access to big reputations to defeat other factories in the same area. While this phenomenon has its cons and pros. As for its advantages, advertisements which focus on new factors of some products may result in positive competiton between manufacturers. Thus, this can help improve the service provided by producers and even help incentive more new ideas of designing products. When more and more consumers begin choosing and buying ideal items with new features, the economy is likely to grow due to the constant upgrade of products. By contrast, fake dissemination of new features or functions of some specific items may lead to negative impacts on society. Because some things bought by people are sometimes important to physical or mental health rather than simply show off wealth. For example, if advertisers emphasise food or drinks with new flavours or ingredients but choose to tell lies to conceal the low nutrition feature of these products, this may tend to be detrimental to people's body conditions. To sum up, it is reasonable and necessary for businesses to think highly of the factor of being new in their products to attract consumers to buy and this is likely to be a double-edged sword. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Anwser: In today's world, manufacturers tend to advertise that their own products are made for the first time in some areas. If advertisers disseminate their products are new, it is more likely to appeal more buyers to purchase. As nowadays, people can get information on the internet whenever and wherever they want, they often pay attention to new things which may provide opportunities for the mass to access to fashion to showcase status and identities. By emphasising the factors of being new, the manufacturers are able to earn profits and access to big reputations to defeat other factories in the same area. While this phenomenon has its cons and pros. As for its advantages, advertisements which focus on new factors of some products may result in positive competiton between manufacturers. Thus, this can help improve the service provided by producers and even help incentive more new ideas of designing products. When more and more consumers begin choosing and buying ideal items with new features, the economy is likely to grow due to the constant upgrade of products. By contrast, fake dissemination of new features or functions of some specific items may lead to negative impacts on society. Because some things bought by people are sometimes important to physical or mental health rather than simply show off wealth. For example, if advertisers emphasise food or drinks with new flavours or ingredients but choose to tell lies to conceal the low nutrition feature of these products, this may tend to be detrimental to people's body conditions. To sum up, it is reasonable and necessary for businesses to think highly of the factor of being new in their products to attract consumers to buy and this is likely to be a double-edged sword. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Anwser: In today's world, manufacturers tend to advertise that their own products are made for the first time in some areas. If advertisers disseminate their products are new, it is more likely to appeal more buyers to purchase. As nowadays, people can get information on the internet whenever and wherever they want, they often pay attention to new things which may provide opportunities for the mass to access to fashion to showcase status and identities. By emphasising the factors of being new, the manufacturers are able to earn profits and access to big reputations to defeat other factories in the same area. While this phenomenon has its cons and pros. As for its advantages, advertisements which focus on new factors of some products may result in positive competiton between manufacturers. Thus, this can help improve the service provided by producers and even help incentive more new ideas of designing products. When more and more consumers begin choosing and buying ideal items with new features, the economy is likely to grow due to the constant upgrade of products. By contrast, fake dissemination of new features or functions of some specific items may lead to negative impacts on society. Because some things bought by people are sometimes important to physical or mental health rather than simply show off wealth. For example, if advertisers emphasise food or drinks with new flavours or ingredients but choose to tell lies to conceal the low nutrition feature of these products, this may tend to be detrimental to people's body conditions. To sum up, it is reasonable and necessary for businesses to think highly of the factor of being new in their products to attract consumers to buy and this is likely to be a double-edged sword. Your task achievement score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Anwser: As the development of the technology rises, there will be more automatic items such as driverless transportations. Although it has some positive effect on the convenience of people' life, I consider that the negative effect outweigh the positive effect. First of all, it is convenient for people to going out by driverless transportations. Compared to the vehicles which are needed to be drived by people, travellers who are in a car can appreciate the scenery without any focus on the driving route, which makes people enjoy the journey better. Furthermore, some people who are not comfortable driving cars such as the disabled, driver-less cars would be more suitable for them.Therefore, they can drive a car to go out by themselves. On the contrary, there are some negative impacts like safety issues on the cars, buses and trucks which are driverless. It is not sure that whether the technology can be completely controled. For example, during the driving, if there is an emergency such as the obstacles lying in front of the vehicle, we don't know whether the vehicle will be stopped. If it won't stop, it will result in a serious danger, which may effect passengers' life. Additionally, it will lead to the unemployment of drivers who earning money from this job. For instance, many taxi drivers making a living by drivng cars. However, driverless car will replace it, so that the drivers will lose this job, which may cause the rate of unemployment increase and even an negative impact on enomy. Consequently, it may result in the problem of safety and unemployment. In conclusion, there are some benefits from the driverless transportations, I still think the disadvantages are quite more. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Anwser: As the development of the technology rises, there will be more automatic items such as driverless transportations. Although it has some positive effect on the convenience of people' life, I consider that the negative effect outweigh the positive effect. First of all, it is convenient for people to going out by driverless transportations. Compared to the vehicles which are needed to be drived by people, travellers who are in a car can appreciate the scenery without any focus on the driving route, which makes people enjoy the journey better. Furthermore, some people who are not comfortable driving cars such as the disabled, driver-less cars would be more suitable for them.Therefore, they can drive a car to go out by themselves. On the contrary, there are some negative impacts like safety issues on the cars, buses and trucks which are driverless. It is not sure that whether the technology can be completely controled. For example, during the driving, if there is an emergency such as the obstacles lying in front of the vehicle, we don't know whether the vehicle will be stopped. If it won't stop, it will result in a serious danger, which may effect passengers' life. Additionally, it will lead to the unemployment of drivers who earning money from this job. For instance, many taxi drivers making a living by drivng cars. However, driverless car will replace it, so that the drivers will lose this job, which may cause the rate of unemployment increase and even an negative impact on enomy. Consequently, it may result in the problem of safety and unemployment. In conclusion, there are some benefits from the driverless transportations, I still think the disadvantages are quite more. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Anwser: As the development of the technology rises, there will be more automatic items such as driverless transportations. Although it has some positive effect on the convenience of people' life, I consider that the negative effect outweigh the positive effect. First of all, it is convenient for people to going out by driverless transportations. Compared to the vehicles which are needed to be drived by people, travellers who are in a car can appreciate the scenery without any focus on the driving route, which makes people enjoy the journey better. Furthermore, some people who are not comfortable driving cars such as the disabled, driver-less cars would be more suitable for them.Therefore, they can drive a car to go out by themselves. On the contrary, there are some negative impacts like safety issues on the cars, buses and trucks which are driverless. It is not sure that whether the technology can be completely controled. For example, during the driving, if there is an emergency such as the obstacles lying in front of the vehicle, we don't know whether the vehicle will be stopped. If it won't stop, it will result in a serious danger, which may effect passengers' life. Additionally, it will lead to the unemployment of drivers who earning money from this job. For instance, many taxi drivers making a living by drivng cars. However, driverless car will replace it, so that the drivers will lose this job, which may cause the rate of unemployment increase and even an negative impact on enomy. Consequently, it may result in the problem of safety and unemployment. In conclusion, there are some benefits from the driverless transportations, I still think the disadvantages are quite more. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Anwser: As the development of the technology rises, there will be more automatic items such as driverless transportations. Although it has some positive effect on the convenience of people' life, I consider that the negative effect outweigh the positive effect. First of all, it is convenient for people to going out by driverless transportations. Compared to the vehicles which are needed to be drived by people, travellers who are in a car can appreciate the scenery without any focus on the driving route, which makes people enjoy the journey better. Furthermore, some people who are not comfortable driving cars such as the disabled, driver-less cars would be more suitable for them.Therefore, they can drive a car to go out by themselves. On the contrary, there are some negative impacts like safety issues on the cars, buses and trucks which are driverless. It is not sure that whether the technology can be completely controled. For example, during the driving, if there is an emergency such as the obstacles lying in front of the vehicle, we don't know whether the vehicle will be stopped. If it won't stop, it will result in a serious danger, which may effect passengers' life. Additionally, it will lead to the unemployment of drivers who earning money from this job. For instance, many taxi drivers making a living by drivng cars. However, driverless car will replace it, so that the drivers will lose this job, which may cause the rate of unemployment increase and even an negative impact on enomy. Consequently, it may result in the problem of safety and unemployment. In conclusion, there are some benefits from the driverless transportations, I still think the disadvantages are quite more. Your task achievement score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: In the modern world, nowadays health care play a crucial role for quality of living of people, They argue that the government should give them the benefits of the health care system free. In contrast many countries people must pay by own. I strongly agree with the government should take care the healthcare services. There are several reasons for this, firstly the health care system is important for cost of living in people. Due to the cost of medical services is so expensive as a result when people get sick they will pay for this services as impacts to expense. Thus, the government should make public welfare for medical care to reduce expense of people. Moreover, when people have welfare the stress from living would decrease meaningfully. As a result to address other problems such as aging society or low birth rate. Additionally, the hidden benefits of the government health care service is taxation from the services would reverse to the government, because when poeple use the medical welfare, they will utilize in the government hosipital. Furthermore, there are impact to mediacal education system, because they can generate source of case study in the hospital for doctor students. Which as a result to the development of health care technology and innovations for helping the people. To conclude, many countries people will pay for their medical care and services. In contrast, some people suggest that the government should take action for this services. I agree with the government should make welfare for healthcare system. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: In the modern world, nowadays health care play a crucial role for quality of living of people, They argue that the government should give them the benefits of the health care system free. In contrast many countries people must pay by own. I strongly agree with the government should take care the healthcare services. There are several reasons for this, firstly the health care system is important for cost of living in people. Due to the cost of medical services is so expensive as a result when people get sick they will pay for this services as impacts to expense. Thus, the government should make public welfare for medical care to reduce expense of people. Moreover, when people have welfare the stress from living would decrease meaningfully. As a result to address other problems such as aging society or low birth rate. Additionally, the hidden benefits of the government health care service is taxation from the services would reverse to the government, because when poeple use the medical welfare, they will utilize in the government hosipital. Furthermore, there are impact to mediacal education system, because they can generate source of case study in the hospital for doctor students. Which as a result to the development of health care technology and innovations for helping the people. To conclude, many countries people will pay for their medical care and services. In contrast, some people suggest that the government should take action for this services. I agree with the government should make welfare for healthcare system. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: In the modern world, nowadays health care play a crucial role for quality of living of people, They argue that the government should give them the benefits of the health care system free. In contrast many countries people must pay by own. I strongly agree with the government should take care the healthcare services. There are several reasons for this, firstly the health care system is important for cost of living in people. Due to the cost of medical services is so expensive as a result when people get sick they will pay for this services as impacts to expense. Thus, the government should make public welfare for medical care to reduce expense of people. Moreover, when people have welfare the stress from living would decrease meaningfully. As a result to address other problems such as aging society or low birth rate. Additionally, the hidden benefits of the government health care service is taxation from the services would reverse to the government, because when poeple use the medical welfare, they will utilize in the government hosipital. Furthermore, there are impact to mediacal education system, because they can generate source of case study in the hospital for doctor students. Which as a result to the development of health care technology and innovations for helping the people. To conclude, many countries people will pay for their medical care and services. In contrast, some people suggest that the government should take action for this services. I agree with the government should make welfare for healthcare system. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: In the modern world, nowadays health care play a crucial role for quality of living of people, They argue that the government should give them the benefits of the health care system free. In contrast many countries people must pay by own. I strongly agree with the government should take care the healthcare services. There are several reasons for this, firstly the health care system is important for cost of living in people. Due to the cost of medical services is so expensive as a result when people get sick they will pay for this services as impacts to expense. Thus, the government should make public welfare for medical care to reduce expense of people. Moreover, when people have welfare the stress from living would decrease meaningfully. As a result to address other problems such as aging society or low birth rate. Additionally, the hidden benefits of the government health care service is taxation from the services would reverse to the government, because when poeple use the medical welfare, they will utilize in the government hosipital. Furthermore, there are impact to mediacal education system, because they can generate source of case study in the hospital for doctor students. Which as a result to the development of health care technology and innovations for helping the people. To conclude, many countries people will pay for their medical care and services. In contrast, some people suggest that the government should take action for this services. I agree with the government should make welfare for healthcare system. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Teleworking has been on the increase in recent years. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Anwser: Today, working within virtual spaces is trending among worker society. This is a good trend and bring more benefit for employees as it give more time to focus on what is important. Working virtually can save more time and make individuals more productive. The saved time can be used to do more tasks. For example, In metropolitan city such as Jakarta, people usually spend time more than 1 hour just to commute from their home to the office. People used to meet another person to discuss something that can be discussed by call or video call. Today, Zoom and Google Meet can facilitate an online meeting that can save minutes or even hours due to moving from one place to another place just to attend an offline meeting. Workers could be more productive if they spend it on working rather than trapped on traffic jam just to attend a 15 minutes of meeting. Therefore, less time will be spent on something unproductive and give employees more time to focus on their job. Teleworking also could help boost mental health among society. Less time to spend on travelling between home and office means more time to do something more after office hours. Thus, people can have more quality time for their loved ones. For instance, people can immediately meet with their family or their friends and spend the time to do something more fun like watching a movie after working hours. In addition to that, it can reduce the amount of stress after long hour of works. The activities can boost relationships between individuals and their family and friends which eventually will make work life balance. In conclusion, teleworking bring more benefits as it can reduce the amount of stress from unproductive time spent on commuting. Thus, it can boost productivity toward quality of work and also can give more time for individuals to spend time on family and friends. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Teleworking has been on the increase in recent years. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Anwser: Today, working within virtual spaces is trending among worker society. This is a good trend and bring more benefit for employees as it give more time to focus on what is important. Working virtually can save more time and make individuals more productive. The saved time can be used to do more tasks. For example, In metropolitan city such as Jakarta, people usually spend time more than 1 hour just to commute from their home to the office. People used to meet another person to discuss something that can be discussed by call or video call. Today, Zoom and Google Meet can facilitate an online meeting that can save minutes or even hours due to moving from one place to another place just to attend an offline meeting. Workers could be more productive if they spend it on working rather than trapped on traffic jam just to attend a 15 minutes of meeting. Therefore, less time will be spent on something unproductive and give employees more time to focus on their job. Teleworking also could help boost mental health among society. Less time to spend on travelling between home and office means more time to do something more after office hours. Thus, people can have more quality time for their loved ones. For instance, people can immediately meet with their family or their friends and spend the time to do something more fun like watching a movie after working hours. In addition to that, it can reduce the amount of stress after long hour of works. The activities can boost relationships between individuals and their family and friends which eventually will make work life balance. In conclusion, teleworking bring more benefits as it can reduce the amount of stress from unproductive time spent on commuting. Thus, it can boost productivity toward quality of work and also can give more time for individuals to spend time on family and friends. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Teleworking has been on the increase in recent years. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Anwser: Today, working within virtual spaces is trending among worker society. This is a good trend and bring more benefit for employees as it give more time to focus on what is important. Working virtually can save more time and make individuals more productive. The saved time can be used to do more tasks. For example, In metropolitan city such as Jakarta, people usually spend time more than 1 hour just to commute from their home to the office. People used to meet another person to discuss something that can be discussed by call or video call. Today, Zoom and Google Meet can facilitate an online meeting that can save minutes or even hours due to moving from one place to another place just to attend an offline meeting. Workers could be more productive if they spend it on working rather than trapped on traffic jam just to attend a 15 minutes of meeting. Therefore, less time will be spent on something unproductive and give employees more time to focus on their job. Teleworking also could help boost mental health among society. Less time to spend on travelling between home and office means more time to do something more after office hours. Thus, people can have more quality time for their loved ones. For instance, people can immediately meet with their family or their friends and spend the time to do something more fun like watching a movie after working hours. In addition to that, it can reduce the amount of stress after long hour of works. The activities can boost relationships between individuals and their family and friends which eventually will make work life balance. In conclusion, teleworking bring more benefits as it can reduce the amount of stress from unproductive time spent on commuting. Thus, it can boost productivity toward quality of work and also can give more time for individuals to spend time on family and friends. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Teleworking has been on the increase in recent years. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Anwser: Today, working within virtual spaces is trending among worker society. This is a good trend and bring more benefit for employees as it give more time to focus on what is important. Working virtually can save more time and make individuals more productive. The saved time can be used to do more tasks. For example, In metropolitan city such as Jakarta, people usually spend time more than 1 hour just to commute from their home to the office. People used to meet another person to discuss something that can be discussed by call or video call. Today, Zoom and Google Meet can facilitate an online meeting that can save minutes or even hours due to moving from one place to another place just to attend an offline meeting. Workers could be more productive if they spend it on working rather than trapped on traffic jam just to attend a 15 minutes of meeting. Therefore, less time will be spent on something unproductive and give employees more time to focus on their job. Teleworking also could help boost mental health among society. Less time to spend on travelling between home and office means more time to do something more after office hours. Thus, people can have more quality time for their loved ones. For instance, people can immediately meet with their family or their friends and spend the time to do something more fun like watching a movie after working hours. In addition to that, it can reduce the amount of stress after long hour of works. The activities can boost relationships between individuals and their family and friends which eventually will make work life balance. In conclusion, teleworking bring more benefits as it can reduce the amount of stress from unproductive time spent on commuting. Thus, it can boost productivity toward quality of work and also can give more time for individuals to spend time on family and friends. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Learning a new language at an early age is helpful for children. Is it more positive for their future aspect or have some adverse effects? Agree or disagree? Anwser: Nowadays, most of households put their kids in spesial course in their infant's phase, but the most common of which is conversation learning . Even a lot of people argued that it is too early to put them in class, I personally approve this decision. I come to believe speech skill is important to our children as it has plenty of advantage. First and foremost, base on researchs, early age is called a golden era to learn as our brain is still fresh to receive all the information. In extension, communications skill can encourage their values in the future since many of jobs today require their employee to have wide speech skill, such as mandarin or english. By join an extra class, youngsters will spend their time into beneficial activity rather than just play. I now that folks sometimes argued that forced early teenager to take an extra class will steal their play's era. However, I think it is not relevant anymore today since a number of class currently was walked in more interactive and friendly mode. The activity can be packaged just like a games for kids, such as singing and discussing together. On top of that, they can keep in touch with their peers face-to-face instead of being alone. In conclusion, communications class for infants are absolutely approved as long as it is not pressure them. As an adult, we should authorize them with unstrict class in order to make them eager to learn. I believe in the future, there will be founded a lot of Interactive learning method, for instance using Virtual Reality. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Learning a new language at an early age is helpful for children. Is it more positive for their future aspect or have some adverse effects? Agree or disagree? Anwser: Nowadays, most of households put their kids in spesial course in their infant's phase, but the most common of which is conversation learning . Even a lot of people argued that it is too early to put them in class, I personally approve this decision. I come to believe speech skill is important to our children as it has plenty of advantage. First and foremost, base on researchs, early age is called a golden era to learn as our brain is still fresh to receive all the information. In extension, communications skill can encourage their values in the future since many of jobs today require their employee to have wide speech skill, such as mandarin or english. By join an extra class, youngsters will spend their time into beneficial activity rather than just play. I now that folks sometimes argued that forced early teenager to take an extra class will steal their play's era. However, I think it is not relevant anymore today since a number of class currently was walked in more interactive and friendly mode. The activity can be packaged just like a games for kids, such as singing and discussing together. On top of that, they can keep in touch with their peers face-to-face instead of being alone. In conclusion, communications class for infants are absolutely approved as long as it is not pressure them. As an adult, we should authorize them with unstrict class in order to make them eager to learn. I believe in the future, there will be founded a lot of Interactive learning method, for instance using Virtual Reality. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Learning a new language at an early age is helpful for children. Is it more positive for their future aspect or have some adverse effects? Agree or disagree? Anwser: Nowadays, most of households put their kids in spesial course in their infant's phase, but the most common of which is conversation learning . Even a lot of people argued that it is too early to put them in class, I personally approve this decision. I come to believe speech skill is important to our children as it has plenty of advantage. First and foremost, base on researchs, early age is called a golden era to learn as our brain is still fresh to receive all the information. In extension, communications skill can encourage their values in the future since many of jobs today require their employee to have wide speech skill, such as mandarin or english. By join an extra class, youngsters will spend their time into beneficial activity rather than just play. I now that folks sometimes argued that forced early teenager to take an extra class will steal their play's era. However, I think it is not relevant anymore today since a number of class currently was walked in more interactive and friendly mode. The activity can be packaged just like a games for kids, such as singing and discussing together. On top of that, they can keep in touch with their peers face-to-face instead of being alone. In conclusion, communications class for infants are absolutely approved as long as it is not pressure them. As an adult, we should authorize them with unstrict class in order to make them eager to learn. I believe in the future, there will be founded a lot of Interactive learning method, for instance using Virtual Reality. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Learning a new language at an early age is helpful for children. Is it more positive for their future aspect or have some adverse effects? Agree or disagree? Anwser: Nowadays, most of households put their kids in spesial course in their infant's phase, but the most common of which is conversation learning . Even a lot of people argued that it is too early to put them in class, I personally approve this decision. I come to believe speech skill is important to our children as it has plenty of advantage. First and foremost, base on researchs, early age is called a golden era to learn as our brain is still fresh to receive all the information. In extension, communications skill can encourage their values in the future since many of jobs today require their employee to have wide speech skill, such as mandarin or english. By join an extra class, youngsters will spend their time into beneficial activity rather than just play. I now that folks sometimes argued that forced early teenager to take an extra class will steal their play's era. However, I think it is not relevant anymore today since a number of class currently was walked in more interactive and friendly mode. The activity can be packaged just like a games for kids, such as singing and discussing together. On top of that, they can keep in touch with their peers face-to-face instead of being alone. In conclusion, communications class for infants are absolutely approved as long as it is not pressure them. As an adult, we should authorize them with unstrict class in order to make them eager to learn. I believe in the future, there will be founded a lot of Interactive learning method, for instance using Virtual Reality. Your task achievement score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Many museum charge for admission while many others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages? Anwser: The chart illustrates the annual salaries (in thousands of US dollars) of doctors compared to other professions across seven different countries in the year 2004. Overall, it is apparent from the chart that doctors consistently earned higher wages than those in other professions. In particular, the United States topped the list with the highest overall salaries. American doctors earned an impressive $120,000 annually, which was significantly higher than their Finnish counterparts who received around $70,000. Moreover, the pay for other professions in the US was reported at $40,000, nearly double that of the same category in Finland, where the average salary was approximately $50,000. In Germany, the Czech Republic, and Italy, the salary figures for doctors were quite similar, with each reporting around $60,000 per year. Conversely, the pay for other professions in these countries was markedly lower, standing uniformly at $20,000. This amount was the minimum observed in the dataset and precisely half of that reported in Switzerland. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Many museum charge for admission while many others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages? Anwser: The chart illustrates the annual salaries (in thousands of US dollars) of doctors compared to other professions across seven different countries in the year 2004. Overall, it is apparent from the chart that doctors consistently earned higher wages than those in other professions. In particular, the United States topped the list with the highest overall salaries. American doctors earned an impressive $120,000 annually, which was significantly higher than their Finnish counterparts who received around $70,000. Moreover, the pay for other professions in the US was reported at $40,000, nearly double that of the same category in Finland, where the average salary was approximately $50,000. In Germany, the Czech Republic, and Italy, the salary figures for doctors were quite similar, with each reporting around $60,000 per year. Conversely, the pay for other professions in these countries was markedly lower, standing uniformly at $20,000. This amount was the minimum observed in the dataset and precisely half of that reported in Switzerland. Your lexical resource score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Many museum charge for admission while many others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages? Anwser: The chart illustrates the annual salaries (in thousands of US dollars) of doctors compared to other professions across seven different countries in the year 2004. Overall, it is apparent from the chart that doctors consistently earned higher wages than those in other professions. In particular, the United States topped the list with the highest overall salaries. American doctors earned an impressive $120,000 annually, which was significantly higher than their Finnish counterparts who received around $70,000. Moreover, the pay for other professions in the US was reported at $40,000, nearly double that of the same category in Finland, where the average salary was approximately $50,000. In Germany, the Czech Republic, and Italy, the salary figures for doctors were quite similar, with each reporting around $60,000 per year. Conversely, the pay for other professions in these countries was markedly lower, standing uniformly at $20,000. This amount was the minimum observed in the dataset and precisely half of that reported in Switzerland. Your grammatical range score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Many museum charge for admission while many others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages? Anwser: The chart illustrates the annual salaries (in thousands of US dollars) of doctors compared to other professions across seven different countries in the year 2004. Overall, it is apparent from the chart that doctors consistently earned higher wages than those in other professions. In particular, the United States topped the list with the highest overall salaries. American doctors earned an impressive $120,000 annually, which was significantly higher than their Finnish counterparts who received around $70,000. Moreover, the pay for other professions in the US was reported at $40,000, nearly double that of the same category in Finland, where the average salary was approximately $50,000. In Germany, the Czech Republic, and Italy, the salary figures for doctors were quite similar, with each reporting around $60,000 per year. Conversely, the pay for other professions in these countries was markedly lower, standing uniformly at $20,000. This amount was the minimum observed in the dataset and precisely half of that reported in Switzerland. Your task achievement score is 9.0