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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hardwork and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Anwser: Among human aspirations, a prosperous life is among the most common. Some believe that peserverance and hard effort are essential to success, while others believe that material wealth and good looks are more important. Both sides of the argument are discussed in detail in this article, and i will offer my reasoning for supporting the first opinion. On the one hand, it is true that attractiveness and money play a major role in a person's success, particularly whether they launch their own company or work in the film industry. First off, it costs a ton of money to launch a business since you need to buy equipment, recruit employees, and rent an office. Consequently, having money is not the sole factor in success, rather it plays a significant role in a successful film. Secondly, performers benefit professionally from having a nice look. Actors with a good look have a significant edge in their field because audiences are drawn to powerful, attractive women who make an impact. Nevertheless, for those who aspire to succeed, perseverance and hard effort are more crucial. For instance, success in certain fields like sports requires physical activity, while success in education requires perseverance and curiosity. Daily training and excercise are necessary for athletes to stay in top physical condition and perform at their best. In addition, for the purpose of education, researchers must maintain their curiosity in the surrounding human existence. Futhermore, loans to banks can be used for financial issues, and positive traits can cover up negative appearances. Many successful performers owe their success to their comedic sense or acting prowess, so if someone has faith in their abilities, they will succeed if they work hard and are determined. In conclusion, material wealth and good looks can help people advance in their jobs, but persistence and hard effort are the only ways to succeed. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hardwork and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Anwser: Among human aspirations, a prosperous life is among the most common. Some believe that peserverance and hard effort are essential to success, while others believe that material wealth and good looks are more important. Both sides of the argument are discussed in detail in this article, and i will offer my reasoning for supporting the first opinion. On the one hand, it is true that attractiveness and money play a major role in a person's success, particularly whether they launch their own company or work in the film industry. First off, it costs a ton of money to launch a business since you need to buy equipment, recruit employees, and rent an office. Consequently, having money is not the sole factor in success, rather it plays a significant role in a successful film. Secondly, performers benefit professionally from having a nice look. Actors with a good look have a significant edge in their field because audiences are drawn to powerful, attractive women who make an impact. Nevertheless, for those who aspire to succeed, perseverance and hard effort are more crucial. For instance, success in certain fields like sports requires physical activity, while success in education requires perseverance and curiosity. Daily training and excercise are necessary for athletes to stay in top physical condition and perform at their best. In addition, for the purpose of education, researchers must maintain their curiosity in the surrounding human existence. Futhermore, loans to banks can be used for financial issues, and positive traits can cover up negative appearances. Many successful performers owe their success to their comedic sense or acting prowess, so if someone has faith in their abilities, they will succeed if they work hard and are determined. In conclusion, material wealth and good looks can help people advance in their jobs, but persistence and hard effort are the only ways to succeed. Your lexical resource score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hardwork and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Anwser: Among human aspirations, a prosperous life is among the most common. Some believe that peserverance and hard effort are essential to success, while others believe that material wealth and good looks are more important. Both sides of the argument are discussed in detail in this article, and i will offer my reasoning for supporting the first opinion. On the one hand, it is true that attractiveness and money play a major role in a person's success, particularly whether they launch their own company or work in the film industry. First off, it costs a ton of money to launch a business since you need to buy equipment, recruit employees, and rent an office. Consequently, having money is not the sole factor in success, rather it plays a significant role in a successful film. Secondly, performers benefit professionally from having a nice look. Actors with a good look have a significant edge in their field because audiences are drawn to powerful, attractive women who make an impact. Nevertheless, for those who aspire to succeed, perseverance and hard effort are more crucial. For instance, success in certain fields like sports requires physical activity, while success in education requires perseverance and curiosity. Daily training and excercise are necessary for athletes to stay in top physical condition and perform at their best. In addition, for the purpose of education, researchers must maintain their curiosity in the surrounding human existence. Futhermore, loans to banks can be used for financial issues, and positive traits can cover up negative appearances. Many successful performers owe their success to their comedic sense or acting prowess, so if someone has faith in their abilities, they will succeed if they work hard and are determined. In conclusion, material wealth and good looks can help people advance in their jobs, but persistence and hard effort are the only ways to succeed. Your grammatical range score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hardwork and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Anwser: Among human aspirations, a prosperous life is among the most common. Some believe that peserverance and hard effort are essential to success, while others believe that material wealth and good looks are more important. Both sides of the argument are discussed in detail in this article, and i will offer my reasoning for supporting the first opinion. On the one hand, it is true that attractiveness and money play a major role in a person's success, particularly whether they launch their own company or work in the film industry. First off, it costs a ton of money to launch a business since you need to buy equipment, recruit employees, and rent an office. Consequently, having money is not the sole factor in success, rather it plays a significant role in a successful film. Secondly, performers benefit professionally from having a nice look. Actors with a good look have a significant edge in their field because audiences are drawn to powerful, attractive women who make an impact. Nevertheless, for those who aspire to succeed, perseverance and hard effort are more crucial. For instance, success in certain fields like sports requires physical activity, while success in education requires perseverance and curiosity. Daily training and excercise are necessary for athletes to stay in top physical condition and perform at their best. In addition, for the purpose of education, researchers must maintain their curiosity in the surrounding human existence. Futhermore, loans to banks can be used for financial issues, and positive traits can cover up negative appearances. Many successful performers owe their success to their comedic sense or acting prowess, so if someone has faith in their abilities, they will succeed if they work hard and are determined. In conclusion, material wealth and good looks can help people advance in their jobs, but persistence and hard effort are the only ways to succeed. Your task achievement score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe that governments should strictly control the use of freshwater as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Anwser: We value freshwater resources, and it is a dispensable part of our life. One contentious issue that often arises is whether it is essential to allow citizens to consume freshwater lean on their preferences or impose severe restrictions because of the certainly finite in quantity. It is easy to understand why the suggestion that people are allowed to use freshwater as much as they want is crowned as a panacea. Those who harbor this proposal attribute the fundamental rights that people live from the fresh water. Therefore, the relative administrations are obliged to ensure resources to meet fundamental demands, such as drinking, food preparation, personal sanitation and household hygiene. If they can be eligible to consume discretionary fresh water, then it ensures they live in a healthy way instead of suffering from contaminated water. Plausible though the proposal seems, I would stand by those opponents, who attach more importance to the potential freshwater deficiency that will ensue. According to expert research, the world's freshwater reserves are just approximately 0.3 percent. However, The squandering of water resources can be noted almost everywhere. Insufficient freshwater resources have become one of the major crises in many countries thus it is impracticable to splurge while wasting. Allocating freshwater reserves wisely is likely to maintain the demand for household water for the purpose of human life. Therefore, departments are responsible for rigorously enforcing the rules to save depleted freshwater storage and ultimately attain sustainability. Overall, although an adequate supply of freshwater should be guaranteed, all parts of our society should make joint efforts to conserve the scarce resource to ensure the development of sustainability. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe that governments should strictly control the use of freshwater as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Anwser: We value freshwater resources, and it is a dispensable part of our life. One contentious issue that often arises is whether it is essential to allow citizens to consume freshwater lean on their preferences or impose severe restrictions because of the certainly finite in quantity. It is easy to understand why the suggestion that people are allowed to use freshwater as much as they want is crowned as a panacea. Those who harbor this proposal attribute the fundamental rights that people live from the fresh water. Therefore, the relative administrations are obliged to ensure resources to meet fundamental demands, such as drinking, food preparation, personal sanitation and household hygiene. If they can be eligible to consume discretionary fresh water, then it ensures they live in a healthy way instead of suffering from contaminated water. Plausible though the proposal seems, I would stand by those opponents, who attach more importance to the potential freshwater deficiency that will ensue. According to expert research, the world's freshwater reserves are just approximately 0.3 percent. However, The squandering of water resources can be noted almost everywhere. Insufficient freshwater resources have become one of the major crises in many countries thus it is impracticable to splurge while wasting. Allocating freshwater reserves wisely is likely to maintain the demand for household water for the purpose of human life. Therefore, departments are responsible for rigorously enforcing the rules to save depleted freshwater storage and ultimately attain sustainability. Overall, although an adequate supply of freshwater should be guaranteed, all parts of our society should make joint efforts to conserve the scarce resource to ensure the development of sustainability. Your lexical resource score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe that governments should strictly control the use of freshwater as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Anwser: We value freshwater resources, and it is a dispensable part of our life. One contentious issue that often arises is whether it is essential to allow citizens to consume freshwater lean on their preferences or impose severe restrictions because of the certainly finite in quantity. It is easy to understand why the suggestion that people are allowed to use freshwater as much as they want is crowned as a panacea. Those who harbor this proposal attribute the fundamental rights that people live from the fresh water. Therefore, the relative administrations are obliged to ensure resources to meet fundamental demands, such as drinking, food preparation, personal sanitation and household hygiene. If they can be eligible to consume discretionary fresh water, then it ensures they live in a healthy way instead of suffering from contaminated water. Plausible though the proposal seems, I would stand by those opponents, who attach more importance to the potential freshwater deficiency that will ensue. According to expert research, the world's freshwater reserves are just approximately 0.3 percent. However, The squandering of water resources can be noted almost everywhere. Insufficient freshwater resources have become one of the major crises in many countries thus it is impracticable to splurge while wasting. Allocating freshwater reserves wisely is likely to maintain the demand for household water for the purpose of human life. Therefore, departments are responsible for rigorously enforcing the rules to save depleted freshwater storage and ultimately attain sustainability. Overall, although an adequate supply of freshwater should be guaranteed, all parts of our society should make joint efforts to conserve the scarce resource to ensure the development of sustainability. Your grammatical range score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe that governments should strictly control the use of freshwater as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Anwser: We value freshwater resources, and it is a dispensable part of our life. One contentious issue that often arises is whether it is essential to allow citizens to consume freshwater lean on their preferences or impose severe restrictions because of the certainly finite in quantity. It is easy to understand why the suggestion that people are allowed to use freshwater as much as they want is crowned as a panacea. Those who harbor this proposal attribute the fundamental rights that people live from the fresh water. Therefore, the relative administrations are obliged to ensure resources to meet fundamental demands, such as drinking, food preparation, personal sanitation and household hygiene. If they can be eligible to consume discretionary fresh water, then it ensures they live in a healthy way instead of suffering from contaminated water. Plausible though the proposal seems, I would stand by those opponents, who attach more importance to the potential freshwater deficiency that will ensue. According to expert research, the world's freshwater reserves are just approximately 0.3 percent. However, The squandering of water resources can be noted almost everywhere. Insufficient freshwater resources have become one of the major crises in many countries thus it is impracticable to splurge while wasting. Allocating freshwater reserves wisely is likely to maintain the demand for household water for the purpose of human life. Therefore, departments are responsible for rigorously enforcing the rules to save depleted freshwater storage and ultimately attain sustainability. Overall, although an adequate supply of freshwater should be guaranteed, all parts of our society should make joint efforts to conserve the scarce resource to ensure the development of sustainability. Your task achievement score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Despite the increased access to education, a significant number of people cannot read or write. What are the disadvantages without these skills? And What actions should governments take? Anwser: The main focus of education is catering to the exam-oriented education system, resulting in numerous individuals lacking reading and written abilities. It embarked the public awareness and the relevant administrative department should shoulder the responsibility of addressing these problems. There are several drawbacks to the incapability of reading or writing. On one hand, they may have a lower competitive edge in the workplace which is a place that requires high proficiency in reading the important notes delivered by leaders and also writing sophisticated reports. Without these skills, they find difficulty in fulfilling their job duties and even surviving in the workplace. On the other hand, people who cannot read may have a series of obstacles in daily life such as their communication strength will be affected adversely. Reading is a kind of input way to build communication ability, people will not be able to speak logically and fluently without accumulative reading. Thus, it may jeopardize their interpersonal skills. Moreover, inadequate reading and writing skills may hinder the development of literature. A growing number of people who are not capable of reading or writing may have less exposure to the literature. Therefore, it will be harmful to the development of literatus. To alleviate the relative crisis, the authority should take the initiative to employ some regulations. First of all, the government should implement a diversified educational scheme to emphasize much more practical skills like lexical courses and grammar workshops rather than exclusive exam preparation lessons. The uprooted problem caused by this weakness is that people do not have a solid foundation in the language, so they need to be equipped. Additionally, the lifelong education motion should be paid attention to for the sake of the future. Reading-related activities or language-immersive extra curriculum should be promoted to boost public interest in reading or writing. The opportunities provided also can offer some awards as an encouragement. The education is proposed to boost public intelligence and the strengths of reading and writing are one of the criteria. The government should make more efforts to eliminate the disability of reading or writing so that achieve the aim of education. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Despite the increased access to education, a significant number of people cannot read or write. What are the disadvantages without these skills? And What actions should governments take? Anwser: The main focus of education is catering to the exam-oriented education system, resulting in numerous individuals lacking reading and written abilities. It embarked the public awareness and the relevant administrative department should shoulder the responsibility of addressing these problems. There are several drawbacks to the incapability of reading or writing. On one hand, they may have a lower competitive edge in the workplace which is a place that requires high proficiency in reading the important notes delivered by leaders and also writing sophisticated reports. Without these skills, they find difficulty in fulfilling their job duties and even surviving in the workplace. On the other hand, people who cannot read may have a series of obstacles in daily life such as their communication strength will be affected adversely. Reading is a kind of input way to build communication ability, people will not be able to speak logically and fluently without accumulative reading. Thus, it may jeopardize their interpersonal skills. Moreover, inadequate reading and writing skills may hinder the development of literature. A growing number of people who are not capable of reading or writing may have less exposure to the literature. Therefore, it will be harmful to the development of literatus. To alleviate the relative crisis, the authority should take the initiative to employ some regulations. First of all, the government should implement a diversified educational scheme to emphasize much more practical skills like lexical courses and grammar workshops rather than exclusive exam preparation lessons. The uprooted problem caused by this weakness is that people do not have a solid foundation in the language, so they need to be equipped. Additionally, the lifelong education motion should be paid attention to for the sake of the future. Reading-related activities or language-immersive extra curriculum should be promoted to boost public interest in reading or writing. The opportunities provided also can offer some awards as an encouragement. The education is proposed to boost public intelligence and the strengths of reading and writing are one of the criteria. The government should make more efforts to eliminate the disability of reading or writing so that achieve the aim of education. Your lexical resource score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Despite the increased access to education, a significant number of people cannot read or write. What are the disadvantages without these skills? And What actions should governments take? Anwser: The main focus of education is catering to the exam-oriented education system, resulting in numerous individuals lacking reading and written abilities. It embarked the public awareness and the relevant administrative department should shoulder the responsibility of addressing these problems. There are several drawbacks to the incapability of reading or writing. On one hand, they may have a lower competitive edge in the workplace which is a place that requires high proficiency in reading the important notes delivered by leaders and also writing sophisticated reports. Without these skills, they find difficulty in fulfilling their job duties and even surviving in the workplace. On the other hand, people who cannot read may have a series of obstacles in daily life such as their communication strength will be affected adversely. Reading is a kind of input way to build communication ability, people will not be able to speak logically and fluently without accumulative reading. Thus, it may jeopardize their interpersonal skills. Moreover, inadequate reading and writing skills may hinder the development of literature. A growing number of people who are not capable of reading or writing may have less exposure to the literature. Therefore, it will be harmful to the development of literatus. To alleviate the relative crisis, the authority should take the initiative to employ some regulations. First of all, the government should implement a diversified educational scheme to emphasize much more practical skills like lexical courses and grammar workshops rather than exclusive exam preparation lessons. The uprooted problem caused by this weakness is that people do not have a solid foundation in the language, so they need to be equipped. Additionally, the lifelong education motion should be paid attention to for the sake of the future. Reading-related activities or language-immersive extra curriculum should be promoted to boost public interest in reading or writing. The opportunities provided also can offer some awards as an encouragement. The education is proposed to boost public intelligence and the strengths of reading and writing are one of the criteria. The government should make more efforts to eliminate the disability of reading or writing so that achieve the aim of education. Your grammatical range score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Despite the increased access to education, a significant number of people cannot read or write. What are the disadvantages without these skills? And What actions should governments take? Anwser: The main focus of education is catering to the exam-oriented education system, resulting in numerous individuals lacking reading and written abilities. It embarked the public awareness and the relevant administrative department should shoulder the responsibility of addressing these problems. There are several drawbacks to the incapability of reading or writing. On one hand, they may have a lower competitive edge in the workplace which is a place that requires high proficiency in reading the important notes delivered by leaders and also writing sophisticated reports. Without these skills, they find difficulty in fulfilling their job duties and even surviving in the workplace. On the other hand, people who cannot read may have a series of obstacles in daily life such as their communication strength will be affected adversely. Reading is a kind of input way to build communication ability, people will not be able to speak logically and fluently without accumulative reading. Thus, it may jeopardize their interpersonal skills. Moreover, inadequate reading and writing skills may hinder the development of literature. A growing number of people who are not capable of reading or writing may have less exposure to the literature. Therefore, it will be harmful to the development of literatus. To alleviate the relative crisis, the authority should take the initiative to employ some regulations. First of all, the government should implement a diversified educational scheme to emphasize much more practical skills like lexical courses and grammar workshops rather than exclusive exam preparation lessons. The uprooted problem caused by this weakness is that people do not have a solid foundation in the language, so they need to be equipped. Additionally, the lifelong education motion should be paid attention to for the sake of the future. Reading-related activities or language-immersive extra curriculum should be promoted to boost public interest in reading or writing. The opportunities provided also can offer some awards as an encouragement. The education is proposed to boost public intelligence and the strengths of reading and writing are one of the criteria. The government should make more efforts to eliminate the disability of reading or writing so that achieve the aim of education. Your task achievement score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people argue that if children behave badly they parent should accept responsibility for the behaviour of children. Do you agree or disagree. Anwser: In the modern era there is a common belief that if offsprings are not nurtured properly in society , their parents should take into consideration this responsibility. However , other individuals surmise that this kind of misbehaviour does not affect the procreator's conducting style. I personally believe that while parents play a pivotal role in a youngster's life , upbringing impairments are not mainly the result of their mother and father's problems. On the one hand , those who believe that procreators have an indispensable role in children's upbringing and moral development , advocate that if there is any misbehaviour in the son and heir's actions, this misconduct is mainly the parents's sin due to their foremost responsibility on supervise the adolescents. To be more specific , parents are responsible for instilling values , setting boundaries , and teaching appropriate behaviour in teenager's life. Therefore , when children behave badly , these abnormal actions will be associated with their parent's behaviour style. On the other hand , I personally believe that those who blame merely parents for a child's misbehaviours overlook certain influencing factors , such as peers , school environment ,and society which can reshape and transform individuals into different personalities.Furthermore , children have been accepted as independent personalities in society ; therefore , they need to make some decisions individually even though these decisions could be wrong or trigger deleterious repercussions . While parents can influence young men's opinions, they can not regulate their every move and aspect of life precisely. For example , there are some parents who work in a five-to-nine job which will not give them a chance to control and pursue every move of their children ; therefore , this sense should come from not only the child's own mind but also understanding. In conclusion , I believe that although parents play an indispensable role in children's lives by reshaping and conducting them , it is not true to associate any adverse behavioural attitude with parents' responsibility. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people argue that if children behave badly they parent should accept responsibility for the behaviour of children. Do you agree or disagree. Anwser: In the modern era there is a common belief that if offsprings are not nurtured properly in society , their parents should take into consideration this responsibility. However , other individuals surmise that this kind of misbehaviour does not affect the procreator's conducting style. I personally believe that while parents play a pivotal role in a youngster's life , upbringing impairments are not mainly the result of their mother and father's problems. On the one hand , those who believe that procreators have an indispensable role in children's upbringing and moral development , advocate that if there is any misbehaviour in the son and heir's actions, this misconduct is mainly the parents's sin due to their foremost responsibility on supervise the adolescents. To be more specific , parents are responsible for instilling values , setting boundaries , and teaching appropriate behaviour in teenager's life. Therefore , when children behave badly , these abnormal actions will be associated with their parent's behaviour style. On the other hand , I personally believe that those who blame merely parents for a child's misbehaviours overlook certain influencing factors , such as peers , school environment ,and society which can reshape and transform individuals into different personalities.Furthermore , children have been accepted as independent personalities in society ; therefore , they need to make some decisions individually even though these decisions could be wrong or trigger deleterious repercussions . While parents can influence young men's opinions, they can not regulate their every move and aspect of life precisely. For example , there are some parents who work in a five-to-nine job which will not give them a chance to control and pursue every move of their children ; therefore , this sense should come from not only the child's own mind but also understanding. In conclusion , I believe that although parents play an indispensable role in children's lives by reshaping and conducting them , it is not true to associate any adverse behavioural attitude with parents' responsibility. Your lexical resource score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people argue that if children behave badly they parent should accept responsibility for the behaviour of children. Do you agree or disagree. Anwser: In the modern era there is a common belief that if offsprings are not nurtured properly in society , their parents should take into consideration this responsibility. However , other individuals surmise that this kind of misbehaviour does not affect the procreator's conducting style. I personally believe that while parents play a pivotal role in a youngster's life , upbringing impairments are not mainly the result of their mother and father's problems. On the one hand , those who believe that procreators have an indispensable role in children's upbringing and moral development , advocate that if there is any misbehaviour in the son and heir's actions, this misconduct is mainly the parents's sin due to their foremost responsibility on supervise the adolescents. To be more specific , parents are responsible for instilling values , setting boundaries , and teaching appropriate behaviour in teenager's life. Therefore , when children behave badly , these abnormal actions will be associated with their parent's behaviour style. On the other hand , I personally believe that those who blame merely parents for a child's misbehaviours overlook certain influencing factors , such as peers , school environment ,and society which can reshape and transform individuals into different personalities.Furthermore , children have been accepted as independent personalities in society ; therefore , they need to make some decisions individually even though these decisions could be wrong or trigger deleterious repercussions . While parents can influence young men's opinions, they can not regulate their every move and aspect of life precisely. For example , there are some parents who work in a five-to-nine job which will not give them a chance to control and pursue every move of their children ; therefore , this sense should come from not only the child's own mind but also understanding. In conclusion , I believe that although parents play an indispensable role in children's lives by reshaping and conducting them , it is not true to associate any adverse behavioural attitude with parents' responsibility. Your grammatical range score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people argue that if children behave badly they parent should accept responsibility for the behaviour of children. Do you agree or disagree. Anwser: In the modern era there is a common belief that if offsprings are not nurtured properly in society , their parents should take into consideration this responsibility. However , other individuals surmise that this kind of misbehaviour does not affect the procreator's conducting style. I personally believe that while parents play a pivotal role in a youngster's life , upbringing impairments are not mainly the result of their mother and father's problems. On the one hand , those who believe that procreators have an indispensable role in children's upbringing and moral development , advocate that if there is any misbehaviour in the son and heir's actions, this misconduct is mainly the parents's sin due to their foremost responsibility on supervise the adolescents. To be more specific , parents are responsible for instilling values , setting boundaries , and teaching appropriate behaviour in teenager's life. Therefore , when children behave badly , these abnormal actions will be associated with their parent's behaviour style. On the other hand , I personally believe that those who blame merely parents for a child's misbehaviours overlook certain influencing factors , such as peers , school environment ,and society which can reshape and transform individuals into different personalities.Furthermore , children have been accepted as independent personalities in society ; therefore , they need to make some decisions individually even though these decisions could be wrong or trigger deleterious repercussions . While parents can influence young men's opinions, they can not regulate their every move and aspect of life precisely. For example , there are some parents who work in a five-to-nine job which will not give them a chance to control and pursue every move of their children ; therefore , this sense should come from not only the child's own mind but also understanding. In conclusion , I believe that although parents play an indispensable role in children's lives by reshaping and conducting them , it is not true to associate any adverse behavioural attitude with parents' responsibility. Your task achievement score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: In country where there is a high unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hop of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: The ultimate goal of education for students is to achieve a desired job. There is a great amount of unemployed people in some countries even after graduation. Therefore, it seems useless for pupils to enter university in order to improve their knowledge and certificates. In my point of view, it is entirely true that people should not follow higher level of literacy in such cases. On the one hand, there are people who claim that studying after school time even with the pitfalls in society regarding career finding is helpful. Those people justify that it mounts the information of graduates when they get hired in any job either as an expert or simple worker. For instance , if workers have more academic knowledge their performance will be better. In addition , they believe that higher education boosts the country's culture and people will behave and counteract appropriately confronting foreigners or tourists. Overall, they consider education as a privilege. On the other hand, many believe that spending time on a thing which has no or little use in the future can be quite a waste of time. A case in point, when there is a few professional opportunities in the country most graduates will be jobless after all. Therefore , the money and time spent on training will be effectless. Moreover, discontinuing training will open the space and bring about the conditions in which one can learn a profession in order to get into the market and start a family sooner. However, studying in the university will provide some opportunities overseas. In a nutshell, one has to prioritize their needs and decide whether to be involved in education or not. Given the circumstances, I believe that human beings are granted a special amount of time in their lives and they should not allocate it for aimless activities like a higher level of education when there is no job perspective and rather use it for available practical purposes in hand. Your coherence and cohesion score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: In country where there is a high unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hop of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: The ultimate goal of education for students is to achieve a desired job. There is a great amount of unemployed people in some countries even after graduation. Therefore, it seems useless for pupils to enter university in order to improve their knowledge and certificates. In my point of view, it is entirely true that people should not follow higher level of literacy in such cases. On the one hand, there are people who claim that studying after school time even with the pitfalls in society regarding career finding is helpful. Those people justify that it mounts the information of graduates when they get hired in any job either as an expert or simple worker. For instance , if workers have more academic knowledge their performance will be better. In addition , they believe that higher education boosts the country's culture and people will behave and counteract appropriately confronting foreigners or tourists. Overall, they consider education as a privilege. On the other hand, many believe that spending time on a thing which has no or little use in the future can be quite a waste of time. A case in point, when there is a few professional opportunities in the country most graduates will be jobless after all. Therefore , the money and time spent on training will be effectless. Moreover, discontinuing training will open the space and bring about the conditions in which one can learn a profession in order to get into the market and start a family sooner. However, studying in the university will provide some opportunities overseas. In a nutshell, one has to prioritize their needs and decide whether to be involved in education or not. Given the circumstances, I believe that human beings are granted a special amount of time in their lives and they should not allocate it for aimless activities like a higher level of education when there is no job perspective and rather use it for available practical purposes in hand. Your lexical resource score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: In country where there is a high unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hop of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: The ultimate goal of education for students is to achieve a desired job. There is a great amount of unemployed people in some countries even after graduation. Therefore, it seems useless for pupils to enter university in order to improve their knowledge and certificates. In my point of view, it is entirely true that people should not follow higher level of literacy in such cases. On the one hand, there are people who claim that studying after school time even with the pitfalls in society regarding career finding is helpful. Those people justify that it mounts the information of graduates when they get hired in any job either as an expert or simple worker. For instance , if workers have more academic knowledge their performance will be better. In addition , they believe that higher education boosts the country's culture and people will behave and counteract appropriately confronting foreigners or tourists. Overall, they consider education as a privilege. On the other hand, many believe that spending time on a thing which has no or little use in the future can be quite a waste of time. A case in point, when there is a few professional opportunities in the country most graduates will be jobless after all. Therefore , the money and time spent on training will be effectless. Moreover, discontinuing training will open the space and bring about the conditions in which one can learn a profession in order to get into the market and start a family sooner. However, studying in the university will provide some opportunities overseas. In a nutshell, one has to prioritize their needs and decide whether to be involved in education or not. Given the circumstances, I believe that human beings are granted a special amount of time in their lives and they should not allocate it for aimless activities like a higher level of education when there is no job perspective and rather use it for available practical purposes in hand. Your grammatical range score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: In country where there is a high unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hop of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: The ultimate goal of education for students is to achieve a desired job. There is a great amount of unemployed people in some countries even after graduation. Therefore, it seems useless for pupils to enter university in order to improve their knowledge and certificates. In my point of view, it is entirely true that people should not follow higher level of literacy in such cases. On the one hand, there are people who claim that studying after school time even with the pitfalls in society regarding career finding is helpful. Those people justify that it mounts the information of graduates when they get hired in any job either as an expert or simple worker. For instance , if workers have more academic knowledge their performance will be better. In addition , they believe that higher education boosts the country's culture and people will behave and counteract appropriately confronting foreigners or tourists. Overall, they consider education as a privilege. On the other hand, many believe that spending time on a thing which has no or little use in the future can be quite a waste of time. A case in point, when there is a few professional opportunities in the country most graduates will be jobless after all. Therefore , the money and time spent on training will be effectless. Moreover, discontinuing training will open the space and bring about the conditions in which one can learn a profession in order to get into the market and start a family sooner. However, studying in the university will provide some opportunities overseas. In a nutshell, one has to prioritize their needs and decide whether to be involved in education or not. Given the circumstances, I believe that human beings are granted a special amount of time in their lives and they should not allocate it for aimless activities like a higher level of education when there is no job perspective and rather use it for available practical purposes in hand. Your task achievement score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words. Anwser: In many urban areas, the debate over whether to maintain aging buildings or replace them with modern constructions is intensifying. While some argue that the funds invested in old structures are excessive and advocate for modernization, I strongly believe that such spending is both necessary and beneficial. This essay will explore the significance of preserving historical buildings and why it merits continued investment. One of the primary arguments for the conservation of old buildings is the cultural and historical value they encapsulate. These structures serve as tangible links to our past, offering insights into the architectural practices and urban life of previous generations. In cities like Rome or Kyoto, old buildings are not mere relics but active components of the cityscape that continue to serve functional purposes while also attracting tourism. Investing in their preservation is not only a tribute to our heritage but also a means of sustaining economic vitality. Furthermore, old buildings contribute to the unique character and aesthetic diversity of urban environments. Architectural variety enriches the city experience, providing a sense of identity and continuity. The uniformity that often accompanies modern developments can strip cities of their individuality, leading to a phenomenon known as 'placelessness'. By carefully maintaining older structures, we retain the distinctive fabric of our cities. Additionally, from an environmental perspective, the refurbishment and adaptive reuse of buildings often have a lower carbon footprint compared to demolition and new construction. The process of retrofitting can incorporate energy-efficient technologies, marrying historical preservation with modern sustainability practices. However, it is important to acknowledge that not all old buildings may be worth preserving if they do not possess significant architectural or historical merit. In such cases, a balanced approach could be to create mixed-use developments that integrate the old with the new, ensuring that development meets current needs while respecting historical contexts. In conclusion, the expenditure on the preservation of old buildings is a wise investment in cultural continuity, economic sustainability, and environmental conservation. It is not simply a matter of nostalgia but a strategic choice that recognizes the multifaceted value these structures bring to our society. Therefore, I advocate for a considered approach to urban development that emphasizes the preservation of buildings that are of genuine significance. Your coherence and cohesion score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words. Anwser: In many urban areas, the debate over whether to maintain aging buildings or replace them with modern constructions is intensifying. While some argue that the funds invested in old structures are excessive and advocate for modernization, I strongly believe that such spending is both necessary and beneficial. This essay will explore the significance of preserving historical buildings and why it merits continued investment. One of the primary arguments for the conservation of old buildings is the cultural and historical value they encapsulate. These structures serve as tangible links to our past, offering insights into the architectural practices and urban life of previous generations. In cities like Rome or Kyoto, old buildings are not mere relics but active components of the cityscape that continue to serve functional purposes while also attracting tourism. Investing in their preservation is not only a tribute to our heritage but also a means of sustaining economic vitality. Furthermore, old buildings contribute to the unique character and aesthetic diversity of urban environments. Architectural variety enriches the city experience, providing a sense of identity and continuity. The uniformity that often accompanies modern developments can strip cities of their individuality, leading to a phenomenon known as 'placelessness'. By carefully maintaining older structures, we retain the distinctive fabric of our cities. Additionally, from an environmental perspective, the refurbishment and adaptive reuse of buildings often have a lower carbon footprint compared to demolition and new construction. The process of retrofitting can incorporate energy-efficient technologies, marrying historical preservation with modern sustainability practices. However, it is important to acknowledge that not all old buildings may be worth preserving if they do not possess significant architectural or historical merit. In such cases, a balanced approach could be to create mixed-use developments that integrate the old with the new, ensuring that development meets current needs while respecting historical contexts. In conclusion, the expenditure on the preservation of old buildings is a wise investment in cultural continuity, economic sustainability, and environmental conservation. It is not simply a matter of nostalgia but a strategic choice that recognizes the multifaceted value these structures bring to our society. Therefore, I advocate for a considered approach to urban development that emphasizes the preservation of buildings that are of genuine significance. Your lexical resource score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words. Anwser: In many urban areas, the debate over whether to maintain aging buildings or replace them with modern constructions is intensifying. While some argue that the funds invested in old structures are excessive and advocate for modernization, I strongly believe that such spending is both necessary and beneficial. This essay will explore the significance of preserving historical buildings and why it merits continued investment. One of the primary arguments for the conservation of old buildings is the cultural and historical value they encapsulate. These structures serve as tangible links to our past, offering insights into the architectural practices and urban life of previous generations. In cities like Rome or Kyoto, old buildings are not mere relics but active components of the cityscape that continue to serve functional purposes while also attracting tourism. Investing in their preservation is not only a tribute to our heritage but also a means of sustaining economic vitality. Furthermore, old buildings contribute to the unique character and aesthetic diversity of urban environments. Architectural variety enriches the city experience, providing a sense of identity and continuity. The uniformity that often accompanies modern developments can strip cities of their individuality, leading to a phenomenon known as 'placelessness'. By carefully maintaining older structures, we retain the distinctive fabric of our cities. Additionally, from an environmental perspective, the refurbishment and adaptive reuse of buildings often have a lower carbon footprint compared to demolition and new construction. The process of retrofitting can incorporate energy-efficient technologies, marrying historical preservation with modern sustainability practices. However, it is important to acknowledge that not all old buildings may be worth preserving if they do not possess significant architectural or historical merit. In such cases, a balanced approach could be to create mixed-use developments that integrate the old with the new, ensuring that development meets current needs while respecting historical contexts. In conclusion, the expenditure on the preservation of old buildings is a wise investment in cultural continuity, economic sustainability, and environmental conservation. It is not simply a matter of nostalgia but a strategic choice that recognizes the multifaceted value these structures bring to our society. Therefore, I advocate for a considered approach to urban development that emphasizes the preservation of buildings that are of genuine significance. Your grammatical range score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words. Anwser: In many urban areas, the debate over whether to maintain aging buildings or replace them with modern constructions is intensifying. While some argue that the funds invested in old structures are excessive and advocate for modernization, I strongly believe that such spending is both necessary and beneficial. This essay will explore the significance of preserving historical buildings and why it merits continued investment. One of the primary arguments for the conservation of old buildings is the cultural and historical value they encapsulate. These structures serve as tangible links to our past, offering insights into the architectural practices and urban life of previous generations. In cities like Rome or Kyoto, old buildings are not mere relics but active components of the cityscape that continue to serve functional purposes while also attracting tourism. Investing in their preservation is not only a tribute to our heritage but also a means of sustaining economic vitality. Furthermore, old buildings contribute to the unique character and aesthetic diversity of urban environments. Architectural variety enriches the city experience, providing a sense of identity and continuity. The uniformity that often accompanies modern developments can strip cities of their individuality, leading to a phenomenon known as 'placelessness'. By carefully maintaining older structures, we retain the distinctive fabric of our cities. Additionally, from an environmental perspective, the refurbishment and adaptive reuse of buildings often have a lower carbon footprint compared to demolition and new construction. The process of retrofitting can incorporate energy-efficient technologies, marrying historical preservation with modern sustainability practices. However, it is important to acknowledge that not all old buildings may be worth preserving if they do not possess significant architectural or historical merit. In such cases, a balanced approach could be to create mixed-use developments that integrate the old with the new, ensuring that development meets current needs while respecting historical contexts. In conclusion, the expenditure on the preservation of old buildings is a wise investment in cultural continuity, economic sustainability, and environmental conservation. It is not simply a matter of nostalgia but a strategic choice that recognizes the multifaceted value these structures bring to our society. Therefore, I advocate for a considered approach to urban development that emphasizes the preservation of buildings that are of genuine significance. Your task achievement score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Anwser: Many organisations think that dress smartly is a should for workers, while others believe in result of a job instead of presence. Dressing smartly is important for certain employees, depending on the working environment and purpose of their job. However, I believe that work quality should be the top priority. Wearing a uniform is essential for certain professionals, such as nurses, police officers, and employers. They believe a uniform is a part of their identity, making it easier for people to recognise them when needed. For instance, when people go to a hospital, they can quickly identify nurses by their uniforms, which are different from those worn by doctors and midwives. Similarly, employers should dress attractively when attending client meetings, as it makes them look more professional and boosts their confidence, resulting in higher-quality work. On the other hand, people working in art and technology, such as software developers and painters, believe that their work is more important than their attire. For example, software developers do not need to interact with a few people face to face, which means that their appearance does not affect their work quality. Additionally, they can work remotely from anywhere and anytime, so they do not have to dress up for work. Similarly, painters have the freedom to express their creativity in their work, which means they have the flexibility to dress as they want. In conclusion, while dressing well can boost confidence and make it easier for people to recognise you, the quality of work should always be the highest priority, and it is achievable without focusing on attire Your coherence and cohesion score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Anwser: Many organisations think that dress smartly is a should for workers, while others believe in result of a job instead of presence. Dressing smartly is important for certain employees, depending on the working environment and purpose of their job. However, I believe that work quality should be the top priority. Wearing a uniform is essential for certain professionals, such as nurses, police officers, and employers. They believe a uniform is a part of their identity, making it easier for people to recognise them when needed. For instance, when people go to a hospital, they can quickly identify nurses by their uniforms, which are different from those worn by doctors and midwives. Similarly, employers should dress attractively when attending client meetings, as it makes them look more professional and boosts their confidence, resulting in higher-quality work. On the other hand, people working in art and technology, such as software developers and painters, believe that their work is more important than their attire. For example, software developers do not need to interact with a few people face to face, which means that their appearance does not affect their work quality. Additionally, they can work remotely from anywhere and anytime, so they do not have to dress up for work. Similarly, painters have the freedom to express their creativity in their work, which means they have the flexibility to dress as they want. In conclusion, while dressing well can boost confidence and make it easier for people to recognise you, the quality of work should always be the highest priority, and it is achievable without focusing on attire Your lexical resource score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Anwser: Many organisations think that dress smartly is a should for workers, while others believe in result of a job instead of presence. Dressing smartly is important for certain employees, depending on the working environment and purpose of their job. However, I believe that work quality should be the top priority. Wearing a uniform is essential for certain professionals, such as nurses, police officers, and employers. They believe a uniform is a part of their identity, making it easier for people to recognise them when needed. For instance, when people go to a hospital, they can quickly identify nurses by their uniforms, which are different from those worn by doctors and midwives. Similarly, employers should dress attractively when attending client meetings, as it makes them look more professional and boosts their confidence, resulting in higher-quality work. On the other hand, people working in art and technology, such as software developers and painters, believe that their work is more important than their attire. For example, software developers do not need to interact with a few people face to face, which means that their appearance does not affect their work quality. Additionally, they can work remotely from anywhere and anytime, so they do not have to dress up for work. Similarly, painters have the freedom to express their creativity in their work, which means they have the flexibility to dress as they want. In conclusion, while dressing well can boost confidence and make it easier for people to recognise you, the quality of work should always be the highest priority, and it is achievable without focusing on attire Your grammatical range score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Anwser: Many organisations think that dress smartly is a should for workers, while others believe in result of a job instead of presence. Dressing smartly is important for certain employees, depending on the working environment and purpose of their job. However, I believe that work quality should be the top priority. Wearing a uniform is essential for certain professionals, such as nurses, police officers, and employers. They believe a uniform is a part of their identity, making it easier for people to recognise them when needed. For instance, when people go to a hospital, they can quickly identify nurses by their uniforms, which are different from those worn by doctors and midwives. Similarly, employers should dress attractively when attending client meetings, as it makes them look more professional and boosts their confidence, resulting in higher-quality work. On the other hand, people working in art and technology, such as software developers and painters, believe that their work is more important than their attire. For example, software developers do not need to interact with a few people face to face, which means that their appearance does not affect their work quality. Additionally, they can work remotely from anywhere and anytime, so they do not have to dress up for work. Similarly, painters have the freedom to express their creativity in their work, which means they have the flexibility to dress as they want. In conclusion, while dressing well can boost confidence and make it easier for people to recognise you, the quality of work should always be the highest priority, and it is achievable without focusing on attire Your task achievement score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Dicuss both view and give your opinion. Anwser: Most people believe that a successful life is a result of determination and a trying process while some people believe that appearance and money are the element factors. This essay believes with the first statement and provides some reasons for this case. First of all, hard work and determination are the best way to succeed. The reason is that when people work hard, they try to find different ways to solve problems. So, they can get a lot of experience which makes they be sensitive if they face difficulties. Moreover, the people who try hard a lot can receive recognition from others. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo, who is a professional soccer player, used to be a sweeper. Conversely, proponents of the significance of money and appearance posit that these factors significantly impact one's chances of success. Financial stability can provide access to quality education, valuable opportunities, and influential networks, all of which can influence one's path to achievement. Additionally, societal perceptions of physical appearance may shape interactions and determine opportunities, potentially affecting an individual's trajectory. In my view, success is a multifaceted journey that necessitates a comprehensive approach. Hard work is undeniably foundational, propelling individuals towards growth and resilience. Nevertheless, the strategic allocation of available resources and the ability to seize opportunities can magnify the impact of hard work and accelerate the journey to success. To sum up, although appearance and financial position have a great impact on achievement, hard work and determination are the most dominant factors in the way of success. Your coherence and cohesion score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Dicuss both view and give your opinion. Anwser: Most people believe that a successful life is a result of determination and a trying process while some people believe that appearance and money are the element factors. This essay believes with the first statement and provides some reasons for this case. First of all, hard work and determination are the best way to succeed. The reason is that when people work hard, they try to find different ways to solve problems. So, they can get a lot of experience which makes they be sensitive if they face difficulties. Moreover, the people who try hard a lot can receive recognition from others. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo, who is a professional soccer player, used to be a sweeper. Conversely, proponents of the significance of money and appearance posit that these factors significantly impact one's chances of success. Financial stability can provide access to quality education, valuable opportunities, and influential networks, all of which can influence one's path to achievement. Additionally, societal perceptions of physical appearance may shape interactions and determine opportunities, potentially affecting an individual's trajectory. In my view, success is a multifaceted journey that necessitates a comprehensive approach. Hard work is undeniably foundational, propelling individuals towards growth and resilience. Nevertheless, the strategic allocation of available resources and the ability to seize opportunities can magnify the impact of hard work and accelerate the journey to success. To sum up, although appearance and financial position have a great impact on achievement, hard work and determination are the most dominant factors in the way of success. Your lexical resource score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Dicuss both view and give your opinion. Anwser: Most people believe that a successful life is a result of determination and a trying process while some people believe that appearance and money are the element factors. This essay believes with the first statement and provides some reasons for this case. First of all, hard work and determination are the best way to succeed. The reason is that when people work hard, they try to find different ways to solve problems. So, they can get a lot of experience which makes they be sensitive if they face difficulties. Moreover, the people who try hard a lot can receive recognition from others. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo, who is a professional soccer player, used to be a sweeper. Conversely, proponents of the significance of money and appearance posit that these factors significantly impact one's chances of success. Financial stability can provide access to quality education, valuable opportunities, and influential networks, all of which can influence one's path to achievement. Additionally, societal perceptions of physical appearance may shape interactions and determine opportunities, potentially affecting an individual's trajectory. In my view, success is a multifaceted journey that necessitates a comprehensive approach. Hard work is undeniably foundational, propelling individuals towards growth and resilience. Nevertheless, the strategic allocation of available resources and the ability to seize opportunities can magnify the impact of hard work and accelerate the journey to success. To sum up, although appearance and financial position have a great impact on achievement, hard work and determination are the most dominant factors in the way of success. Your grammatical range score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Dicuss both view and give your opinion. Anwser: Most people believe that a successful life is a result of determination and a trying process while some people believe that appearance and money are the element factors. This essay believes with the first statement and provides some reasons for this case. First of all, hard work and determination are the best way to succeed. The reason is that when people work hard, they try to find different ways to solve problems. So, they can get a lot of experience which makes they be sensitive if they face difficulties. Moreover, the people who try hard a lot can receive recognition from others. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo, who is a professional soccer player, used to be a sweeper. Conversely, proponents of the significance of money and appearance posit that these factors significantly impact one's chances of success. Financial stability can provide access to quality education, valuable opportunities, and influential networks, all of which can influence one's path to achievement. Additionally, societal perceptions of physical appearance may shape interactions and determine opportunities, potentially affecting an individual's trajectory. In my view, success is a multifaceted journey that necessitates a comprehensive approach. Hard work is undeniably foundational, propelling individuals towards growth and resilience. Nevertheless, the strategic allocation of available resources and the ability to seize opportunities can magnify the impact of hard work and accelerate the journey to success. To sum up, although appearance and financial position have a great impact on achievement, hard work and determination are the most dominant factors in the way of success. Your task achievement score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: People today are more concerned with owning material possessions than with developing friendships and family relationships. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Anwser: It has been suggested that these days, we tend to prioritize the accumulation of possessions over the development of relationships with those closest to us. While there is some truth in the assertion that the world has become more materialistic, it is not necessarily true that this is at the cost of our loved ones. To begin with, given the growing amount of individual debt around the world, there is no better time to learn about the negative effects of personal debt than at school. Students would be less likely to borrow what they could not afford and more likely to stay in credit when they reach adulthood. Next, I believe that teaching teenagers how to manage their money within the school curriculum would be vital in allowing them to become financially independent, even before the age of 18. They would feel more confident in being able to control their daily or monthly expenditure and less reliant entirely on their parents for support or 'top-up' money. On the other hand, some would argue that teenagers are often too immature to become truly financially responsible, and so the classes would be a waste of teaching time. Others point out that teaching the concept of financial responsibility as a new subject would unfairly favor those students who are good at math, and even that it would be just another way for them to get the best grades. Despite this, in my experience, neither of these last two points is particularly valid. Most teenagers are keen to become financially independent as soon as they possibly can, while even the best mathematicians can experience difficulties with money at some point. In conclusion, financial responsibility should absolutely be taught as a genuine subject at school. Certainly, there are concerns over some students’ level of maturity or mathematical ability, but young people should not be denied the chance to become financially independent. It would help to ensure that current levels of debt are managed better in the future. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: People today are more concerned with owning material possessions than with developing friendships and family relationships. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Anwser: It has been suggested that these days, we tend to prioritize the accumulation of possessions over the development of relationships with those closest to us. While there is some truth in the assertion that the world has become more materialistic, it is not necessarily true that this is at the cost of our loved ones. To begin with, given the growing amount of individual debt around the world, there is no better time to learn about the negative effects of personal debt than at school. Students would be less likely to borrow what they could not afford and more likely to stay in credit when they reach adulthood. Next, I believe that teaching teenagers how to manage their money within the school curriculum would be vital in allowing them to become financially independent, even before the age of 18. They would feel more confident in being able to control their daily or monthly expenditure and less reliant entirely on their parents for support or 'top-up' money. On the other hand, some would argue that teenagers are often too immature to become truly financially responsible, and so the classes would be a waste of teaching time. Others point out that teaching the concept of financial responsibility as a new subject would unfairly favor those students who are good at math, and even that it would be just another way for them to get the best grades. Despite this, in my experience, neither of these last two points is particularly valid. Most teenagers are keen to become financially independent as soon as they possibly can, while even the best mathematicians can experience difficulties with money at some point. In conclusion, financial responsibility should absolutely be taught as a genuine subject at school. Certainly, there are concerns over some students’ level of maturity or mathematical ability, but young people should not be denied the chance to become financially independent. It would help to ensure that current levels of debt are managed better in the future. Your lexical resource score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: People today are more concerned with owning material possessions than with developing friendships and family relationships. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Anwser: It has been suggested that these days, we tend to prioritize the accumulation of possessions over the development of relationships with those closest to us. While there is some truth in the assertion that the world has become more materialistic, it is not necessarily true that this is at the cost of our loved ones. To begin with, given the growing amount of individual debt around the world, there is no better time to learn about the negative effects of personal debt than at school. Students would be less likely to borrow what they could not afford and more likely to stay in credit when they reach adulthood. Next, I believe that teaching teenagers how to manage their money within the school curriculum would be vital in allowing them to become financially independent, even before the age of 18. They would feel more confident in being able to control their daily or monthly expenditure and less reliant entirely on their parents for support or 'top-up' money. On the other hand, some would argue that teenagers are often too immature to become truly financially responsible, and so the classes would be a waste of teaching time. Others point out that teaching the concept of financial responsibility as a new subject would unfairly favor those students who are good at math, and even that it would be just another way for them to get the best grades. Despite this, in my experience, neither of these last two points is particularly valid. Most teenagers are keen to become financially independent as soon as they possibly can, while even the best mathematicians can experience difficulties with money at some point. In conclusion, financial responsibility should absolutely be taught as a genuine subject at school. Certainly, there are concerns over some students’ level of maturity or mathematical ability, but young people should not be denied the chance to become financially independent. It would help to ensure that current levels of debt are managed better in the future. Your grammatical range score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: People today are more concerned with owning material possessions than with developing friendships and family relationships. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Anwser: It has been suggested that these days, we tend to prioritize the accumulation of possessions over the development of relationships with those closest to us. While there is some truth in the assertion that the world has become more materialistic, it is not necessarily true that this is at the cost of our loved ones. To begin with, given the growing amount of individual debt around the world, there is no better time to learn about the negative effects of personal debt than at school. Students would be less likely to borrow what they could not afford and more likely to stay in credit when they reach adulthood. Next, I believe that teaching teenagers how to manage their money within the school curriculum would be vital in allowing them to become financially independent, even before the age of 18. They would feel more confident in being able to control their daily or monthly expenditure and less reliant entirely on their parents for support or 'top-up' money. On the other hand, some would argue that teenagers are often too immature to become truly financially responsible, and so the classes would be a waste of teaching time. Others point out that teaching the concept of financial responsibility as a new subject would unfairly favor those students who are good at math, and even that it would be just another way for them to get the best grades. Despite this, in my experience, neither of these last two points is particularly valid. Most teenagers are keen to become financially independent as soon as they possibly can, while even the best mathematicians can experience difficulties with money at some point. In conclusion, financial responsibility should absolutely be taught as a genuine subject at school. Certainly, there are concerns over some students’ level of maturity or mathematical ability, but young people should not be denied the chance to become financially independent. It would help to ensure that current levels of debt are managed better in the future. Your task achievement score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Anwser: It is sometimes believed that students who study college or university should live in school than live at home with their parents. This essay strongly agrees with this suggestion for several reason. The first argument given to support my opinion is that student will live independently. To be more particular, participating in dormitory at university or college can give students a chance to have experience of live independently and make their own decision in every situation without their parents' advices. It can be noted that students will have the opportunity to live in a completely new environment, which can be considered a miniature society, therefore, they can aquire many skills such as communication or leadership and gain more experience from their peers. Take Vietnam for an example, most of students who reach 18 are able to make a living on their own. For this reason, I believe that students should live in school when study college because it help them to try to live independently. Another point behind my belief is that college can lead students expand their relationships. This is because when their peers live in dormintory, they will meet a lot of friends and expand their relationships to try to cultivate more knowledge for learning purposes. Moreover, students can share their problems they encounter with their roommates, which are difficult to talk with their parents. This will help them feel more relieved when do not have relatives around. In modern day, lots of friendships were created in college or university and they helped each other a lot even after graduation. Thereby, live at school when study college is the best way for students to expand their relationships. In conclusion, I entirely agree that pupils who study college should live in school given the aforementioned arguments. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Anwser: It is sometimes believed that students who study college or university should live in school than live at home with their parents. This essay strongly agrees with this suggestion for several reason. The first argument given to support my opinion is that student will live independently. To be more particular, participating in dormitory at university or college can give students a chance to have experience of live independently and make their own decision in every situation without their parents' advices. It can be noted that students will have the opportunity to live in a completely new environment, which can be considered a miniature society, therefore, they can aquire many skills such as communication or leadership and gain more experience from their peers. Take Vietnam for an example, most of students who reach 18 are able to make a living on their own. For this reason, I believe that students should live in school when study college because it help them to try to live independently. Another point behind my belief is that college can lead students expand their relationships. This is because when their peers live in dormintory, they will meet a lot of friends and expand their relationships to try to cultivate more knowledge for learning purposes. Moreover, students can share their problems they encounter with their roommates, which are difficult to talk with their parents. This will help them feel more relieved when do not have relatives around. In modern day, lots of friendships were created in college or university and they helped each other a lot even after graduation. Thereby, live at school when study college is the best way for students to expand their relationships. In conclusion, I entirely agree that pupils who study college should live in school given the aforementioned arguments. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Anwser: It is sometimes believed that students who study college or university should live in school than live at home with their parents. This essay strongly agrees with this suggestion for several reason. The first argument given to support my opinion is that student will live independently. To be more particular, participating in dormitory at university or college can give students a chance to have experience of live independently and make their own decision in every situation without their parents' advices. It can be noted that students will have the opportunity to live in a completely new environment, which can be considered a miniature society, therefore, they can aquire many skills such as communication or leadership and gain more experience from their peers. Take Vietnam for an example, most of students who reach 18 are able to make a living on their own. For this reason, I believe that students should live in school when study college because it help them to try to live independently. Another point behind my belief is that college can lead students expand their relationships. This is because when their peers live in dormintory, they will meet a lot of friends and expand their relationships to try to cultivate more knowledge for learning purposes. Moreover, students can share their problems they encounter with their roommates, which are difficult to talk with their parents. This will help them feel more relieved when do not have relatives around. In modern day, lots of friendships were created in college or university and they helped each other a lot even after graduation. Thereby, live at school when study college is the best way for students to expand their relationships. In conclusion, I entirely agree that pupils who study college should live in school given the aforementioned arguments. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Anwser: It is sometimes believed that students who study college or university should live in school than live at home with their parents. This essay strongly agrees with this suggestion for several reason. The first argument given to support my opinion is that student will live independently. To be more particular, participating in dormitory at university or college can give students a chance to have experience of live independently and make their own decision in every situation without their parents' advices. It can be noted that students will have the opportunity to live in a completely new environment, which can be considered a miniature society, therefore, they can aquire many skills such as communication or leadership and gain more experience from their peers. Take Vietnam for an example, most of students who reach 18 are able to make a living on their own. For this reason, I believe that students should live in school when study college because it help them to try to live independently. Another point behind my belief is that college can lead students expand their relationships. This is because when their peers live in dormintory, they will meet a lot of friends and expand their relationships to try to cultivate more knowledge for learning purposes. Moreover, students can share their problems they encounter with their roommates, which are difficult to talk with their parents. This will help them feel more relieved when do not have relatives around. In modern day, lots of friendships were created in college or university and they helped each other a lot even after graduation. Thereby, live at school when study college is the best way for students to expand their relationships. In conclusion, I entirely agree that pupils who study college should live in school given the aforementioned arguments. Your task achievement score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion. Anwser: Whether achievements in life start from hard work and the strength of the will or comes from the outlook and money is such a controversial point. This writer believes that it is talent and diligence that success rises from due to the ability to solve the problem from the smallest thing rather than just use the money to come up with it. It must be recognized that the industrious one will start from the smallest elements. This is because, they do not want any unexpected problems to arise throughout the process. As a consequence, they will deal with the problem exhaustively, so it can lead them to many triumphs. Therefore, it is easy to understand why hard work is more vital than beauty and economic potential. However, some people argue that cash and outlook can break many obstacles. This belief is based on the strength of the relationship that economics and beauty are able to form, whether it is derived from themselves or not. This may be true, but if anything comes from you without your abilities, it will not be yourselves so it will not steady. Hence, economics and appearance is important, but it not always everything This writer believes that hard work is the most important element of triumph. This is because industrious will lead to many achievements, neither do money and appearance. Because of this, each employee should focus on diligence rather than the outlook. In conclusion, this essay has shown that the main factor of success is hard work. Therefore industriousness is more favourable than economic potential and appearance. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion. Anwser: Whether achievements in life start from hard work and the strength of the will or comes from the outlook and money is such a controversial point. This writer believes that it is talent and diligence that success rises from due to the ability to solve the problem from the smallest thing rather than just use the money to come up with it. It must be recognized that the industrious one will start from the smallest elements. This is because, they do not want any unexpected problems to arise throughout the process. As a consequence, they will deal with the problem exhaustively, so it can lead them to many triumphs. Therefore, it is easy to understand why hard work is more vital than beauty and economic potential. However, some people argue that cash and outlook can break many obstacles. This belief is based on the strength of the relationship that economics and beauty are able to form, whether it is derived from themselves or not. This may be true, but if anything comes from you without your abilities, it will not be yourselves so it will not steady. Hence, economics and appearance is important, but it not always everything This writer believes that hard work is the most important element of triumph. This is because industrious will lead to many achievements, neither do money and appearance. Because of this, each employee should focus on diligence rather than the outlook. In conclusion, this essay has shown that the main factor of success is hard work. Therefore industriousness is more favourable than economic potential and appearance. Your lexical resource score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion. Anwser: Whether achievements in life start from hard work and the strength of the will or comes from the outlook and money is such a controversial point. This writer believes that it is talent and diligence that success rises from due to the ability to solve the problem from the smallest thing rather than just use the money to come up with it. It must be recognized that the industrious one will start from the smallest elements. This is because, they do not want any unexpected problems to arise throughout the process. As a consequence, they will deal with the problem exhaustively, so it can lead them to many triumphs. Therefore, it is easy to understand why hard work is more vital than beauty and economic potential. However, some people argue that cash and outlook can break many obstacles. This belief is based on the strength of the relationship that economics and beauty are able to form, whether it is derived from themselves or not. This may be true, but if anything comes from you without your abilities, it will not be yourselves so it will not steady. Hence, economics and appearance is important, but it not always everything This writer believes that hard work is the most important element of triumph. This is because industrious will lead to many achievements, neither do money and appearance. Because of this, each employee should focus on diligence rather than the outlook. In conclusion, this essay has shown that the main factor of success is hard work. Therefore industriousness is more favourable than economic potential and appearance. Your grammatical range score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion. Anwser: Whether achievements in life start from hard work and the strength of the will or comes from the outlook and money is such a controversial point. This writer believes that it is talent and diligence that success rises from due to the ability to solve the problem from the smallest thing rather than just use the money to come up with it. It must be recognized that the industrious one will start from the smallest elements. This is because, they do not want any unexpected problems to arise throughout the process. As a consequence, they will deal with the problem exhaustively, so it can lead them to many triumphs. Therefore, it is easy to understand why hard work is more vital than beauty and economic potential. However, some people argue that cash and outlook can break many obstacles. This belief is based on the strength of the relationship that economics and beauty are able to form, whether it is derived from themselves or not. This may be true, but if anything comes from you without your abilities, it will not be yourselves so it will not steady. Hence, economics and appearance is important, but it not always everything This writer believes that hard work is the most important element of triumph. This is because industrious will lead to many achievements, neither do money and appearance. Because of this, each employee should focus on diligence rather than the outlook. In conclusion, this essay has shown that the main factor of success is hard work. Therefore industriousness is more favourable than economic potential and appearance. Your task achievement score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion. Anwser: Some individuals believe that being industrious and determined are the keys to being successful, while others consider that money and appearance are more vital than those ones. This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion that hard work and determination are the important things. On the one hand, it is true to admit that hard work and determination are the necessary personality of the type of successful people. When you meet an obstacle, the important thing is how you can solve the challenges, someone may choose to give up and keep away from them but successful people can learn from that, maybe they might not be good in some fields but with their patience and their effort they might obtain their achievement. On the other hand, money and appearance are considered to be the prominent factors which can have a big impact on the success of people. It is true to admit that if you do not have the money you might not achieve your dream and get through the obstacles or money if spending suitably can be a key to helping someone have more skills and knowledge such as using money to attend the classes to enhance yourself. In addition, appearance can also be conceded as a crucial skill because , through it, you can easily receive the other's respect. In my point of view, hard work and diligence are the indispensable factors which lead to the success of people's lives because patience and attempt can be the encouragement which stimulates you and help you to become more determined and from that you can easily achieve what you want. Take Pham Nhat Vuong as an example, in the pát he was just a person who sold noodle vendor street in Russia, but with his diligence and attempt, he started exploring and inventing technologies. Despite facing many challenges, he has not quit and the achievement that he deserves today is that of the most wealthy businessman in Vietnam. In conclusion, both hard work, determination money, and appearance are important. From my perspective, hard work and determination outweigh Your coherence and cohesion score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion. Anwser: Some individuals believe that being industrious and determined are the keys to being successful, while others consider that money and appearance are more vital than those ones. This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion that hard work and determination are the important things. On the one hand, it is true to admit that hard work and determination are the necessary personality of the type of successful people. When you meet an obstacle, the important thing is how you can solve the challenges, someone may choose to give up and keep away from them but successful people can learn from that, maybe they might not be good in some fields but with their patience and their effort they might obtain their achievement. On the other hand, money and appearance are considered to be the prominent factors which can have a big impact on the success of people. It is true to admit that if you do not have the money you might not achieve your dream and get through the obstacles or money if spending suitably can be a key to helping someone have more skills and knowledge such as using money to attend the classes to enhance yourself. In addition, appearance can also be conceded as a crucial skill because , through it, you can easily receive the other's respect. In my point of view, hard work and diligence are the indispensable factors which lead to the success of people's lives because patience and attempt can be the encouragement which stimulates you and help you to become more determined and from that you can easily achieve what you want. Take Pham Nhat Vuong as an example, in the pát he was just a person who sold noodle vendor street in Russia, but with his diligence and attempt, he started exploring and inventing technologies. Despite facing many challenges, he has not quit and the achievement that he deserves today is that of the most wealthy businessman in Vietnam. In conclusion, both hard work, determination money, and appearance are important. From my perspective, hard work and determination outweigh Your lexical resource score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion. Anwser: Some individuals believe that being industrious and determined are the keys to being successful, while others consider that money and appearance are more vital than those ones. This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion that hard work and determination are the important things. On the one hand, it is true to admit that hard work and determination are the necessary personality of the type of successful people. When you meet an obstacle, the important thing is how you can solve the challenges, someone may choose to give up and keep away from them but successful people can learn from that, maybe they might not be good in some fields but with their patience and their effort they might obtain their achievement. On the other hand, money and appearance are considered to be the prominent factors which can have a big impact on the success of people. It is true to admit that if you do not have the money you might not achieve your dream and get through the obstacles or money if spending suitably can be a key to helping someone have more skills and knowledge such as using money to attend the classes to enhance yourself. In addition, appearance can also be conceded as a crucial skill because , through it, you can easily receive the other's respect. In my point of view, hard work and diligence are the indispensable factors which lead to the success of people's lives because patience and attempt can be the encouragement which stimulates you and help you to become more determined and from that you can easily achieve what you want. Take Pham Nhat Vuong as an example, in the pát he was just a person who sold noodle vendor street in Russia, but with his diligence and attempt, he started exploring and inventing technologies. Despite facing many challenges, he has not quit and the achievement that he deserves today is that of the most wealthy businessman in Vietnam. In conclusion, both hard work, determination money, and appearance are important. From my perspective, hard work and determination outweigh Your grammatical range score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion. Anwser: Some individuals believe that being industrious and determined are the keys to being successful, while others consider that money and appearance are more vital than those ones. This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion that hard work and determination are the important things. On the one hand, it is true to admit that hard work and determination are the necessary personality of the type of successful people. When you meet an obstacle, the important thing is how you can solve the challenges, someone may choose to give up and keep away from them but successful people can learn from that, maybe they might not be good in some fields but with their patience and their effort they might obtain their achievement. On the other hand, money and appearance are considered to be the prominent factors which can have a big impact on the success of people. It is true to admit that if you do not have the money you might not achieve your dream and get through the obstacles or money if spending suitably can be a key to helping someone have more skills and knowledge such as using money to attend the classes to enhance yourself. In addition, appearance can also be conceded as a crucial skill because , through it, you can easily receive the other's respect. In my point of view, hard work and diligence are the indispensable factors which lead to the success of people's lives because patience and attempt can be the encouragement which stimulates you and help you to become more determined and from that you can easily achieve what you want. Take Pham Nhat Vuong as an example, in the pát he was just a person who sold noodle vendor street in Russia, but with his diligence and attempt, he started exploring and inventing technologies. Despite facing many challenges, he has not quit and the achievement that he deserves today is that of the most wealthy businessman in Vietnam. In conclusion, both hard work, determination money, and appearance are important. From my perspective, hard work and determination outweigh Your task achievement score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both vews and give your own opinion. Anwser: There is a belief that the success of individuals always needs studious and ambitious qualities. However, some inhabitants take the view that the external outlook and fortune availability should be more considerable. This writer will have a debate about this phenomenon and will include a straightforward perspective in the latter. It is vital to understand that determination has always been known as a key to success. From our ancestors’ generation to the modern world that we are living in now, people never stop putting effort into work to achieve their own goals. Without hard work, our society would not become prosperous and human beings would not stand at the leading position in our natural habitats as today. Take Bill Gates as a prime example, although he already gained incredible achievements in his twenties, Gates never became lazy but he always worked hard, which turned him into the most renowned billionaire in the world. However, fame and fortune are also essential parts of creating triumph in individuals’ lives. Since beauty is increasingly overestimated in the digital age, citizens who have good-looking appearances can benefit from gaining more opportunities to make a profit. Career employing including models, singers, or idols today make a favour in beautiful outlook, rather than available talents or determination. Another factor that creates inequality in human’s chance of thrift is the money that comes from families. People who were born into wealthy families do not need to concerned about financial hardships, instead, they just need to concerned about developing skills and qualities needed. Hence, they would become successful in a shorter time compared to those who are in poor backgrounds. In conclusion, although hard work is a vital factor, it is not the only way to achieve success, especially in the modern world, where beauty and high-living conditions are regarded more essential than ever. This writer has demonstrated that opportunities to gain achievements come from both ways, but fame and fortune nowadays are gradually taking larger accounts than a determinate mindset. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both vews and give your own opinion. Anwser: There is a belief that the success of individuals always needs studious and ambitious qualities. However, some inhabitants take the view that the external outlook and fortune availability should be more considerable. This writer will have a debate about this phenomenon and will include a straightforward perspective in the latter. It is vital to understand that determination has always been known as a key to success. From our ancestors’ generation to the modern world that we are living in now, people never stop putting effort into work to achieve their own goals. Without hard work, our society would not become prosperous and human beings would not stand at the leading position in our natural habitats as today. Take Bill Gates as a prime example, although he already gained incredible achievements in his twenties, Gates never became lazy but he always worked hard, which turned him into the most renowned billionaire in the world. However, fame and fortune are also essential parts of creating triumph in individuals’ lives. Since beauty is increasingly overestimated in the digital age, citizens who have good-looking appearances can benefit from gaining more opportunities to make a profit. Career employing including models, singers, or idols today make a favour in beautiful outlook, rather than available talents or determination. Another factor that creates inequality in human’s chance of thrift is the money that comes from families. People who were born into wealthy families do not need to concerned about financial hardships, instead, they just need to concerned about developing skills and qualities needed. Hence, they would become successful in a shorter time compared to those who are in poor backgrounds. In conclusion, although hard work is a vital factor, it is not the only way to achieve success, especially in the modern world, where beauty and high-living conditions are regarded more essential than ever. This writer has demonstrated that opportunities to gain achievements come from both ways, but fame and fortune nowadays are gradually taking larger accounts than a determinate mindset. Your lexical resource score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both vews and give your own opinion. Anwser: There is a belief that the success of individuals always needs studious and ambitious qualities. However, some inhabitants take the view that the external outlook and fortune availability should be more considerable. This writer will have a debate about this phenomenon and will include a straightforward perspective in the latter. It is vital to understand that determination has always been known as a key to success. From our ancestors’ generation to the modern world that we are living in now, people never stop putting effort into work to achieve their own goals. Without hard work, our society would not become prosperous and human beings would not stand at the leading position in our natural habitats as today. Take Bill Gates as a prime example, although he already gained incredible achievements in his twenties, Gates never became lazy but he always worked hard, which turned him into the most renowned billionaire in the world. However, fame and fortune are also essential parts of creating triumph in individuals’ lives. Since beauty is increasingly overestimated in the digital age, citizens who have good-looking appearances can benefit from gaining more opportunities to make a profit. Career employing including models, singers, or idols today make a favour in beautiful outlook, rather than available talents or determination. Another factor that creates inequality in human’s chance of thrift is the money that comes from families. People who were born into wealthy families do not need to concerned about financial hardships, instead, they just need to concerned about developing skills and qualities needed. Hence, they would become successful in a shorter time compared to those who are in poor backgrounds. In conclusion, although hard work is a vital factor, it is not the only way to achieve success, especially in the modern world, where beauty and high-living conditions are regarded more essential than ever. This writer has demonstrated that opportunities to gain achievements come from both ways, but fame and fortune nowadays are gradually taking larger accounts than a determinate mindset. Your grammatical range score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both vews and give your own opinion. Anwser: There is a belief that the success of individuals always needs studious and ambitious qualities. However, some inhabitants take the view that the external outlook and fortune availability should be more considerable. This writer will have a debate about this phenomenon and will include a straightforward perspective in the latter. It is vital to understand that determination has always been known as a key to success. From our ancestors’ generation to the modern world that we are living in now, people never stop putting effort into work to achieve their own goals. Without hard work, our society would not become prosperous and human beings would not stand at the leading position in our natural habitats as today. Take Bill Gates as a prime example, although he already gained incredible achievements in his twenties, Gates never became lazy but he always worked hard, which turned him into the most renowned billionaire in the world. However, fame and fortune are also essential parts of creating triumph in individuals’ lives. Since beauty is increasingly overestimated in the digital age, citizens who have good-looking appearances can benefit from gaining more opportunities to make a profit. Career employing including models, singers, or idols today make a favour in beautiful outlook, rather than available talents or determination. Another factor that creates inequality in human’s chance of thrift is the money that comes from families. People who were born into wealthy families do not need to concerned about financial hardships, instead, they just need to concerned about developing skills and qualities needed. Hence, they would become successful in a shorter time compared to those who are in poor backgrounds. In conclusion, although hard work is a vital factor, it is not the only way to achieve success, especially in the modern world, where beauty and high-living conditions are regarded more essential than ever. This writer has demonstrated that opportunities to gain achievements come from both ways, but fame and fortune nowadays are gradually taking larger accounts than a determinate mindset. Your task achievement score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while other think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Anwser: While many people believe that hard work and dedication are the key factors, there is a growing consensus that other factors play an integral role in achieving success. In this essay, I will explain the above points of view before giving my own point of view. On the one hand, it is undeniable that working wholeheartedly and consistently is the deciding factor for success. First, working hard helps people gain valuable knowledge and experience in aspects of life. To illustrate, young students practice certain types of exercise and score well on exams. Besides, determination makes people not discouraged and motivates them to continue forging ahead. On the other hand, the following reasons can be adduced to explain the importance of other features. First, experience is an undeniably important factor contributing to success. That experience brings a deeper scope of knowledge and creates a wealth of much-needed skills is an undeniable fact. Furthermore, finance seems to be a fundamental component, especially for startups and entrepreneurs. adequate funding appears to be a measure to prevent losses and ruin in the early years. In short, I firmly believe that besides work ethics and commitment, additional factors such as money or experience should not be overlooked winning requires not only hard work and dedication but also diverse additional qualities. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while other think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Anwser: While many people believe that hard work and dedication are the key factors, there is a growing consensus that other factors play an integral role in achieving success. In this essay, I will explain the above points of view before giving my own point of view. On the one hand, it is undeniable that working wholeheartedly and consistently is the deciding factor for success. First, working hard helps people gain valuable knowledge and experience in aspects of life. To illustrate, young students practice certain types of exercise and score well on exams. Besides, determination makes people not discouraged and motivates them to continue forging ahead. On the other hand, the following reasons can be adduced to explain the importance of other features. First, experience is an undeniably important factor contributing to success. That experience brings a deeper scope of knowledge and creates a wealth of much-needed skills is an undeniable fact. Furthermore, finance seems to be a fundamental component, especially for startups and entrepreneurs. adequate funding appears to be a measure to prevent losses and ruin in the early years. In short, I firmly believe that besides work ethics and commitment, additional factors such as money or experience should not be overlooked winning requires not only hard work and dedication but also diverse additional qualities. Your lexical resource score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while other think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Anwser: While many people believe that hard work and dedication are the key factors, there is a growing consensus that other factors play an integral role in achieving success. In this essay, I will explain the above points of view before giving my own point of view. On the one hand, it is undeniable that working wholeheartedly and consistently is the deciding factor for success. First, working hard helps people gain valuable knowledge and experience in aspects of life. To illustrate, young students practice certain types of exercise and score well on exams. Besides, determination makes people not discouraged and motivates them to continue forging ahead. On the other hand, the following reasons can be adduced to explain the importance of other features. First, experience is an undeniably important factor contributing to success. That experience brings a deeper scope of knowledge and creates a wealth of much-needed skills is an undeniable fact. Furthermore, finance seems to be a fundamental component, especially for startups and entrepreneurs. adequate funding appears to be a measure to prevent losses and ruin in the early years. In short, I firmly believe that besides work ethics and commitment, additional factors such as money or experience should not be overlooked winning requires not only hard work and dedication but also diverse additional qualities. Your grammatical range score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while other think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Anwser: While many people believe that hard work and dedication are the key factors, there is a growing consensus that other factors play an integral role in achieving success. In this essay, I will explain the above points of view before giving my own point of view. On the one hand, it is undeniable that working wholeheartedly and consistently is the deciding factor for success. First, working hard helps people gain valuable knowledge and experience in aspects of life. To illustrate, young students practice certain types of exercise and score well on exams. Besides, determination makes people not discouraged and motivates them to continue forging ahead. On the other hand, the following reasons can be adduced to explain the importance of other features. First, experience is an undeniably important factor contributing to success. That experience brings a deeper scope of knowledge and creates a wealth of much-needed skills is an undeniable fact. Furthermore, finance seems to be a fundamental component, especially for startups and entrepreneurs. adequate funding appears to be a measure to prevent losses and ruin in the early years. In short, I firmly believe that besides work ethics and commitment, additional factors such as money or experience should not be overlooked winning requires not only hard work and dedication but also diverse additional qualities. Your task achievement score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: discuss the both sides of the culture shock that people can encounter this situation Anwser: Culture shock occurs when people encounter a new and unfamiliar environment and some argue that it is acceptable, other parts of them are considered versus this idea. This essay will shed light on both aspects of my personal perspectives. On the one hand, when people move or travel to a place with customs or values, some of them have face-to-face communication and interpersonal skills problems. Adapting to a new background involves learning and understanding different customs, traditions, and social and common norms. This can help ensure alleviate anxiety and uncertainty. Moreover, the majority of these people describe it as a problem and do not accept the customs, and traditions of a new country or city. On the other hand, some proportion of these experiences travel to another country, and culture shock typically happens in the host country for individuals. Communication is also the biggest issue for newcomers. When the primary language is different from the individual’s native language in the new location, also, it changes inevitable and significant challenge. Offering cultural orientation programs that provide newcomers with insights into local traditions and highlight key factors of culture, including enchanting language assistance, and creating a language-friendly atmosphere are possible elements to enhance communication skills among the people in public areas. Taking all into consideration, it is the most effective way to overcome culture shock to learn as much as possible about new backgrounds before and after your arrival Your coherence and cohesion score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: discuss the both sides of the culture shock that people can encounter this situation Anwser: Culture shock occurs when people encounter a new and unfamiliar environment and some argue that it is acceptable, other parts of them are considered versus this idea. This essay will shed light on both aspects of my personal perspectives. On the one hand, when people move or travel to a place with customs or values, some of them have face-to-face communication and interpersonal skills problems. Adapting to a new background involves learning and understanding different customs, traditions, and social and common norms. This can help ensure alleviate anxiety and uncertainty. Moreover, the majority of these people describe it as a problem and do not accept the customs, and traditions of a new country or city. On the other hand, some proportion of these experiences travel to another country, and culture shock typically happens in the host country for individuals. Communication is also the biggest issue for newcomers. When the primary language is different from the individual’s native language in the new location, also, it changes inevitable and significant challenge. Offering cultural orientation programs that provide newcomers with insights into local traditions and highlight key factors of culture, including enchanting language assistance, and creating a language-friendly atmosphere are possible elements to enhance communication skills among the people in public areas. Taking all into consideration, it is the most effective way to overcome culture shock to learn as much as possible about new backgrounds before and after your arrival Your lexical resource score is 8.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: discuss the both sides of the culture shock that people can encounter this situation Anwser: Culture shock occurs when people encounter a new and unfamiliar environment and some argue that it is acceptable, other parts of them are considered versus this idea. This essay will shed light on both aspects of my personal perspectives. On the one hand, when people move or travel to a place with customs or values, some of them have face-to-face communication and interpersonal skills problems. Adapting to a new background involves learning and understanding different customs, traditions, and social and common norms. This can help ensure alleviate anxiety and uncertainty. Moreover, the majority of these people describe it as a problem and do not accept the customs, and traditions of a new country or city. On the other hand, some proportion of these experiences travel to another country, and culture shock typically happens in the host country for individuals. Communication is also the biggest issue for newcomers. When the primary language is different from the individual’s native language in the new location, also, it changes inevitable and significant challenge. Offering cultural orientation programs that provide newcomers with insights into local traditions and highlight key factors of culture, including enchanting language assistance, and creating a language-friendly atmosphere are possible elements to enhance communication skills among the people in public areas. Taking all into consideration, it is the most effective way to overcome culture shock to learn as much as possible about new backgrounds before and after your arrival Your grammatical range score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: discuss the both sides of the culture shock that people can encounter this situation Anwser: Culture shock occurs when people encounter a new and unfamiliar environment and some argue that it is acceptable, other parts of them are considered versus this idea. This essay will shed light on both aspects of my personal perspectives. On the one hand, when people move or travel to a place with customs or values, some of them have face-to-face communication and interpersonal skills problems. Adapting to a new background involves learning and understanding different customs, traditions, and social and common norms. This can help ensure alleviate anxiety and uncertainty. Moreover, the majority of these people describe it as a problem and do not accept the customs, and traditions of a new country or city. On the other hand, some proportion of these experiences travel to another country, and culture shock typically happens in the host country for individuals. Communication is also the biggest issue for newcomers. When the primary language is different from the individual’s native language in the new location, also, it changes inevitable and significant challenge. Offering cultural orientation programs that provide newcomers with insights into local traditions and highlight key factors of culture, including enchanting language assistance, and creating a language-friendly atmosphere are possible elements to enhance communication skills among the people in public areas. Taking all into consideration, it is the most effective way to overcome culture shock to learn as much as possible about new backgrounds before and after your arrival Your task achievement score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Anwser: There are two types of professionals based on how they choose places where they are going to work after graduating from their training. It is debatable whether they choose to work in the same country where they got their degree or not. People are divided into two different sides of this issue, the one who thinks it is a must to work in the same country and the one who thinks it is their freedom to choose which country they want to work in. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide clear explanations why it is required for them to work in the same country. Firstly, they owe to the country where they pursue their degree, especially if they get a scholarship for that. For instance, governments who provide scholarships for medicine schools clearly want to escalate local health services quality by helping potential doctor candidates to study medicine. They have spent a lot of money in order to establish great doctors who will be expected to cure the other citizens who get sick. Therefore, it is common sense that these doctors or professionals need to contribute back by working in that country. Secondly, they tend to learn knowledge that suits that country's characteristics. For example, engineers who learn civil engineering in a country who prone to earthquakes will tend to learn how to build strong buildings that are safe from earthquakes. Engineers who study in cold territory will be capable of constructing buildings that are safe from winter storms. Consequently, the more suitable their knowledge to the country's needs, the better and the more maximum they can utilize their skills. In conclusion, I believe that requiring professionals to stay and make use of their understandings in the same place where they pursued them is a great policy. Furthermore, the benefits and positive effects both the country and the individuals will gain are much more. Because if they do not contribute back to their surroundings, then their surroundings can not receive good impacts from them. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Anwser: There are two types of professionals based on how they choose places where they are going to work after graduating from their training. It is debatable whether they choose to work in the same country where they got their degree or not. People are divided into two different sides of this issue, the one who thinks it is a must to work in the same country and the one who thinks it is their freedom to choose which country they want to work in. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide clear explanations why it is required for them to work in the same country. Firstly, they owe to the country where they pursue their degree, especially if they get a scholarship for that. For instance, governments who provide scholarships for medicine schools clearly want to escalate local health services quality by helping potential doctor candidates to study medicine. They have spent a lot of money in order to establish great doctors who will be expected to cure the other citizens who get sick. Therefore, it is common sense that these doctors or professionals need to contribute back by working in that country. Secondly, they tend to learn knowledge that suits that country's characteristics. For example, engineers who learn civil engineering in a country who prone to earthquakes will tend to learn how to build strong buildings that are safe from earthquakes. Engineers who study in cold territory will be capable of constructing buildings that are safe from winter storms. Consequently, the more suitable their knowledge to the country's needs, the better and the more maximum they can utilize their skills. In conclusion, I believe that requiring professionals to stay and make use of their understandings in the same place where they pursued them is a great policy. Furthermore, the benefits and positive effects both the country and the individuals will gain are much more. Because if they do not contribute back to their surroundings, then their surroundings can not receive good impacts from them. Your lexical resource score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Anwser: There are two types of professionals based on how they choose places where they are going to work after graduating from their training. It is debatable whether they choose to work in the same country where they got their degree or not. People are divided into two different sides of this issue, the one who thinks it is a must to work in the same country and the one who thinks it is their freedom to choose which country they want to work in. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide clear explanations why it is required for them to work in the same country. Firstly, they owe to the country where they pursue their degree, especially if they get a scholarship for that. For instance, governments who provide scholarships for medicine schools clearly want to escalate local health services quality by helping potential doctor candidates to study medicine. They have spent a lot of money in order to establish great doctors who will be expected to cure the other citizens who get sick. Therefore, it is common sense that these doctors or professionals need to contribute back by working in that country. Secondly, they tend to learn knowledge that suits that country's characteristics. For example, engineers who learn civil engineering in a country who prone to earthquakes will tend to learn how to build strong buildings that are safe from earthquakes. Engineers who study in cold territory will be capable of constructing buildings that are safe from winter storms. Consequently, the more suitable their knowledge to the country's needs, the better and the more maximum they can utilize their skills. In conclusion, I believe that requiring professionals to stay and make use of their understandings in the same place where they pursued them is a great policy. Furthermore, the benefits and positive effects both the country and the individuals will gain are much more. Because if they do not contribute back to their surroundings, then their surroundings can not receive good impacts from them. Your grammatical range score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Anwser: There are two types of professionals based on how they choose places where they are going to work after graduating from their training. It is debatable whether they choose to work in the same country where they got their degree or not. People are divided into two different sides of this issue, the one who thinks it is a must to work in the same country and the one who thinks it is their freedom to choose which country they want to work in. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide clear explanations why it is required for them to work in the same country. Firstly, they owe to the country where they pursue their degree, especially if they get a scholarship for that. For instance, governments who provide scholarships for medicine schools clearly want to escalate local health services quality by helping potential doctor candidates to study medicine. They have spent a lot of money in order to establish great doctors who will be expected to cure the other citizens who get sick. Therefore, it is common sense that these doctors or professionals need to contribute back by working in that country. Secondly, they tend to learn knowledge that suits that country's characteristics. For example, engineers who learn civil engineering in a country who prone to earthquakes will tend to learn how to build strong buildings that are safe from earthquakes. Engineers who study in cold territory will be capable of constructing buildings that are safe from winter storms. Consequently, the more suitable their knowledge to the country's needs, the better and the more maximum they can utilize their skills. In conclusion, I believe that requiring professionals to stay and make use of their understandings in the same place where they pursued them is a great policy. Furthermore, the benefits and positive effects both the country and the individuals will gain are much more. Because if they do not contribute back to their surroundings, then their surroundings can not receive good impacts from them. Your task achievement score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion Anwser: Nowadays it is said that determination and hard struggle are the things that bring to successful development in life. Others argue that different factors like presentation and finance are also important. This essay will provide both sides and show the importance of determination in the job. First of all, tasks which need high education quality, diligence and persistence are the most important factors to get a promotion as well as receiving a large amount of knowledge. Working hard can attract the manager, lead to high promotions even well paid in the future. Moreover, persistent folk may be keen on working and exploring a lot of information in that field. Besides, experience in a job helps a nation have a strong ability to deal with achievement. For example, diligent folk can battle more effectively as well as quickly than lazy ones. On the other hand, it is argued that capital and arrival also play an important play in the job. Most businesses at communication. The main reason is that the beautify can help interaction with society be easier through reality and social media such as TikTok, Facebook, ..,etc. Furthermore, cash will be a good tool to have many relationships that have success. Take social media as an example, Facebook is very popular with a large amount of different online businesses, everyone just needs a visual presence and spends capital on content. It can earn a lot of bills from donations of fane and amount of viewers. According to my opinion, the focused community can bring success and a permanent series. Because a community with diligence have many opportunities to develop and improve knowledge and forcein variety of careers. What is more, it is easier to get a wealth series. In conclusion, hard creation, determination, bill and debut are the important factors for a successful program. However, hard work is the best way to succeed in life. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion Anwser: Nowadays it is said that determination and hard struggle are the things that bring to successful development in life. Others argue that different factors like presentation and finance are also important. This essay will provide both sides and show the importance of determination in the job. First of all, tasks which need high education quality, diligence and persistence are the most important factors to get a promotion as well as receiving a large amount of knowledge. Working hard can attract the manager, lead to high promotions even well paid in the future. Moreover, persistent folk may be keen on working and exploring a lot of information in that field. Besides, experience in a job helps a nation have a strong ability to deal with achievement. For example, diligent folk can battle more effectively as well as quickly than lazy ones. On the other hand, it is argued that capital and arrival also play an important play in the job. Most businesses at communication. The main reason is that the beautify can help interaction with society be easier through reality and social media such as TikTok, Facebook, ..,etc. Furthermore, cash will be a good tool to have many relationships that have success. Take social media as an example, Facebook is very popular with a large amount of different online businesses, everyone just needs a visual presence and spends capital on content. It can earn a lot of bills from donations of fane and amount of viewers. According to my opinion, the focused community can bring success and a permanent series. Because a community with diligence have many opportunities to develop and improve knowledge and forcein variety of careers. What is more, it is easier to get a wealth series. In conclusion, hard creation, determination, bill and debut are the important factors for a successful program. However, hard work is the best way to succeed in life. Your lexical resource score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion Anwser: Nowadays it is said that determination and hard struggle are the things that bring to successful development in life. Others argue that different factors like presentation and finance are also important. This essay will provide both sides and show the importance of determination in the job. First of all, tasks which need high education quality, diligence and persistence are the most important factors to get a promotion as well as receiving a large amount of knowledge. Working hard can attract the manager, lead to high promotions even well paid in the future. Moreover, persistent folk may be keen on working and exploring a lot of information in that field. Besides, experience in a job helps a nation have a strong ability to deal with achievement. For example, diligent folk can battle more effectively as well as quickly than lazy ones. On the other hand, it is argued that capital and arrival also play an important play in the job. Most businesses at communication. The main reason is that the beautify can help interaction with society be easier through reality and social media such as TikTok, Facebook, ..,etc. Furthermore, cash will be a good tool to have many relationships that have success. Take social media as an example, Facebook is very popular with a large amount of different online businesses, everyone just needs a visual presence and spends capital on content. It can earn a lot of bills from donations of fane and amount of viewers. According to my opinion, the focused community can bring success and a permanent series. Because a community with diligence have many opportunities to develop and improve knowledge and forcein variety of careers. What is more, it is easier to get a wealth series. In conclusion, hard creation, determination, bill and debut are the important factors for a successful program. However, hard work is the best way to succeed in life. Your grammatical range score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion Anwser: Nowadays it is said that determination and hard struggle are the things that bring to successful development in life. Others argue that different factors like presentation and finance are also important. This essay will provide both sides and show the importance of determination in the job. First of all, tasks which need high education quality, diligence and persistence are the most important factors to get a promotion as well as receiving a large amount of knowledge. Working hard can attract the manager, lead to high promotions even well paid in the future. Moreover, persistent folk may be keen on working and exploring a lot of information in that field. Besides, experience in a job helps a nation have a strong ability to deal with achievement. For example, diligent folk can battle more effectively as well as quickly than lazy ones. On the other hand, it is argued that capital and arrival also play an important play in the job. Most businesses at communication. The main reason is that the beautify can help interaction with society be easier through reality and social media such as TikTok, Facebook, ..,etc. Furthermore, cash will be a good tool to have many relationships that have success. Take social media as an example, Facebook is very popular with a large amount of different online businesses, everyone just needs a visual presence and spends capital on content. It can earn a lot of bills from donations of fane and amount of viewers. According to my opinion, the focused community can bring success and a permanent series. Because a community with diligence have many opportunities to develop and improve knowledge and forcein variety of careers. What is more, it is easier to get a wealth series. In conclusion, hard creation, determination, bill and debut are the important factors for a successful program. However, hard work is the best way to succeed in life. Your task achievement score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both views and give your own opinion. Anwser: People have different views about whether people should accept a bad situation or work actively to improve the situation. While accepting the circumstances seems conducive to peace of mind, I believe that we all should make active efforts to seek improvement and change. On the one hand, acknowledging and adapting to one’s circumstances can lead to a more serene and contented life. This perspective emphasizes the importance of inner peace and mental well-being, suggesting that constant thriving of change can result in unnecessary stress and distraction. For instance, in the context of an unsatisfactory job, acceptance might enable an individual to find value in the stability and security it provides, thus fostering a sense of gratitude and contentment despite the job’s shortcomings. On the other hand, it is perhaps more important for an individual to strive for enhancement of their situation. If we immerse ourselves in a bad situation, our mentality and self-confidence will be affected, which will frustrate our motivation and hinder our personal and professional development. To be more specific, it’s a better choice to take a more pragmatic approach that involves a thorough assessment of one's situation, the formulation of actionable plans, and the implementation of said strategies. For example, if someone is lack of money, sudden wealth is an illusion. Rather, one must seek ways to enhance their skills and professional value to secure better-paying opportunities and eventually improve their financial status. In conclusion, I can understand why people choose to accept a bad situation, but the pursuit of improvement is a better strategy for dealing with difficult situations in life. Your coherence and cohesion score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both views and give your own opinion. Anwser: People have different views about whether people should accept a bad situation or work actively to improve the situation. While accepting the circumstances seems conducive to peace of mind, I believe that we all should make active efforts to seek improvement and change. On the one hand, acknowledging and adapting to one’s circumstances can lead to a more serene and contented life. This perspective emphasizes the importance of inner peace and mental well-being, suggesting that constant thriving of change can result in unnecessary stress and distraction. For instance, in the context of an unsatisfactory job, acceptance might enable an individual to find value in the stability and security it provides, thus fostering a sense of gratitude and contentment despite the job’s shortcomings. On the other hand, it is perhaps more important for an individual to strive for enhancement of their situation. If we immerse ourselves in a bad situation, our mentality and self-confidence will be affected, which will frustrate our motivation and hinder our personal and professional development. To be more specific, it’s a better choice to take a more pragmatic approach that involves a thorough assessment of one's situation, the formulation of actionable plans, and the implementation of said strategies. For example, if someone is lack of money, sudden wealth is an illusion. Rather, one must seek ways to enhance their skills and professional value to secure better-paying opportunities and eventually improve their financial status. In conclusion, I can understand why people choose to accept a bad situation, but the pursuit of improvement is a better strategy for dealing with difficult situations in life. Your lexical resource score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both views and give your own opinion. Anwser: People have different views about whether people should accept a bad situation or work actively to improve the situation. While accepting the circumstances seems conducive to peace of mind, I believe that we all should make active efforts to seek improvement and change. On the one hand, acknowledging and adapting to one’s circumstances can lead to a more serene and contented life. This perspective emphasizes the importance of inner peace and mental well-being, suggesting that constant thriving of change can result in unnecessary stress and distraction. For instance, in the context of an unsatisfactory job, acceptance might enable an individual to find value in the stability and security it provides, thus fostering a sense of gratitude and contentment despite the job’s shortcomings. On the other hand, it is perhaps more important for an individual to strive for enhancement of their situation. If we immerse ourselves in a bad situation, our mentality and self-confidence will be affected, which will frustrate our motivation and hinder our personal and professional development. To be more specific, it’s a better choice to take a more pragmatic approach that involves a thorough assessment of one's situation, the formulation of actionable plans, and the implementation of said strategies. For example, if someone is lack of money, sudden wealth is an illusion. Rather, one must seek ways to enhance their skills and professional value to secure better-paying opportunities and eventually improve their financial status. In conclusion, I can understand why people choose to accept a bad situation, but the pursuit of improvement is a better strategy for dealing with difficult situations in life. Your grammatical range score is 9.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both views and give your own opinion. Anwser: People have different views about whether people should accept a bad situation or work actively to improve the situation. While accepting the circumstances seems conducive to peace of mind, I believe that we all should make active efforts to seek improvement and change. On the one hand, acknowledging and adapting to one’s circumstances can lead to a more serene and contented life. This perspective emphasizes the importance of inner peace and mental well-being, suggesting that constant thriving of change can result in unnecessary stress and distraction. For instance, in the context of an unsatisfactory job, acceptance might enable an individual to find value in the stability and security it provides, thus fostering a sense of gratitude and contentment despite the job’s shortcomings. On the other hand, it is perhaps more important for an individual to strive for enhancement of their situation. If we immerse ourselves in a bad situation, our mentality and self-confidence will be affected, which will frustrate our motivation and hinder our personal and professional development. To be more specific, it’s a better choice to take a more pragmatic approach that involves a thorough assessment of one's situation, the formulation of actionable plans, and the implementation of said strategies. For example, if someone is lack of money, sudden wealth is an illusion. Rather, one must seek ways to enhance their skills and professional value to secure better-paying opportunities and eventually improve their financial status. In conclusion, I can understand why people choose to accept a bad situation, but the pursuit of improvement is a better strategy for dealing with difficult situations in life. Your task achievement score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Technological development in earlier times brought more changes to the life of ordinary people then recent technological development have brought? Do you agree or disagree? Anwser: There are concerns pertaining to earlier technological developments compared to recent ones. Some folks believe earlier technological breakthroughs revolutionized the lives of humans compared with recent technological discoveries. I agree with this ascertion. To begin with, invention of telephones, television and cars drastically caused globalisation of the world. These appliances have improved communication as it has made it possible for people living in different parts of the world communicate at their own convenience and within seconds to minutes instead of having to wait for several months to deliver and receive information from a loved one. For instance, during the stone age periods, the means of communication used were not reliable or took really long, like sending letters through birds such as doves or having to post letters. There were instances where recipients reported to never receiving such letters. To add to the above, transport systems have made commuting from one place to another very easy. This has made it possible for a person living in a town that is several kilometers away to take up well paying jobs at better places and still be able to make it to work and back home everyday. It is common knowledge that the primitive generation were limited in terms of where they could work or even took several months to cover distances using animals or by walking. Such, has been overcome by better means of transport that still cover these same distances in hours. There has been several testimonies about this. Despite the positive notes quoted regarding technological advancements, in recent times, there has been some mishappenings with current discoveries. The glaringly harmful one is invention of guns. This, has led to the loss of many innocent lives. Undoubtedly, the remarkable potentials such victims may have had but was truncated because of their untimely demise in a way negatively impacts on society. Surviving persons live in fear and anguish of not knowing if someone by take their lives prematurely in the name of civilians being allowed to own guns in certain countries. It is obvious guns have done more harm than good to humanity. To conclude, technology has some positive impacts on society but this is especially true for the initial discoveries compared to the gross negative impact some later discoveries have had on the globe. I totally agree with this. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Technological development in earlier times brought more changes to the life of ordinary people then recent technological development have brought? Do you agree or disagree? Anwser: There are concerns pertaining to earlier technological developments compared to recent ones. Some folks believe earlier technological breakthroughs revolutionized the lives of humans compared with recent technological discoveries. I agree with this ascertion. To begin with, invention of telephones, television and cars drastically caused globalisation of the world. These appliances have improved communication as it has made it possible for people living in different parts of the world communicate at their own convenience and within seconds to minutes instead of having to wait for several months to deliver and receive information from a loved one. For instance, during the stone age periods, the means of communication used were not reliable or took really long, like sending letters through birds such as doves or having to post letters. There were instances where recipients reported to never receiving such letters. To add to the above, transport systems have made commuting from one place to another very easy. This has made it possible for a person living in a town that is several kilometers away to take up well paying jobs at better places and still be able to make it to work and back home everyday. It is common knowledge that the primitive generation were limited in terms of where they could work or even took several months to cover distances using animals or by walking. Such, has been overcome by better means of transport that still cover these same distances in hours. There has been several testimonies about this. Despite the positive notes quoted regarding technological advancements, in recent times, there has been some mishappenings with current discoveries. The glaringly harmful one is invention of guns. This, has led to the loss of many innocent lives. Undoubtedly, the remarkable potentials such victims may have had but was truncated because of their untimely demise in a way negatively impacts on society. Surviving persons live in fear and anguish of not knowing if someone by take their lives prematurely in the name of civilians being allowed to own guns in certain countries. It is obvious guns have done more harm than good to humanity. To conclude, technology has some positive impacts on society but this is especially true for the initial discoveries compared to the gross negative impact some later discoveries have had on the globe. I totally agree with this. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Technological development in earlier times brought more changes to the life of ordinary people then recent technological development have brought? Do you agree or disagree? Anwser: There are concerns pertaining to earlier technological developments compared to recent ones. Some folks believe earlier technological breakthroughs revolutionized the lives of humans compared with recent technological discoveries. I agree with this ascertion. To begin with, invention of telephones, television and cars drastically caused globalisation of the world. These appliances have improved communication as it has made it possible for people living in different parts of the world communicate at their own convenience and within seconds to minutes instead of having to wait for several months to deliver and receive information from a loved one. For instance, during the stone age periods, the means of communication used were not reliable or took really long, like sending letters through birds such as doves or having to post letters. There were instances where recipients reported to never receiving such letters. To add to the above, transport systems have made commuting from one place to another very easy. This has made it possible for a person living in a town that is several kilometers away to take up well paying jobs at better places and still be able to make it to work and back home everyday. It is common knowledge that the primitive generation were limited in terms of where they could work or even took several months to cover distances using animals or by walking. Such, has been overcome by better means of transport that still cover these same distances in hours. There has been several testimonies about this. Despite the positive notes quoted regarding technological advancements, in recent times, there has been some mishappenings with current discoveries. The glaringly harmful one is invention of guns. This, has led to the loss of many innocent lives. Undoubtedly, the remarkable potentials such victims may have had but was truncated because of their untimely demise in a way negatively impacts on society. Surviving persons live in fear and anguish of not knowing if someone by take their lives prematurely in the name of civilians being allowed to own guns in certain countries. It is obvious guns have done more harm than good to humanity. To conclude, technology has some positive impacts on society but this is especially true for the initial discoveries compared to the gross negative impact some later discoveries have had on the globe. I totally agree with this. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Technological development in earlier times brought more changes to the life of ordinary people then recent technological development have brought? Do you agree or disagree? Anwser: There are concerns pertaining to earlier technological developments compared to recent ones. Some folks believe earlier technological breakthroughs revolutionized the lives of humans compared with recent technological discoveries. I agree with this ascertion. To begin with, invention of telephones, television and cars drastically caused globalisation of the world. These appliances have improved communication as it has made it possible for people living in different parts of the world communicate at their own convenience and within seconds to minutes instead of having to wait for several months to deliver and receive information from a loved one. For instance, during the stone age periods, the means of communication used were not reliable or took really long, like sending letters through birds such as doves or having to post letters. There were instances where recipients reported to never receiving such letters. To add to the above, transport systems have made commuting from one place to another very easy. This has made it possible for a person living in a town that is several kilometers away to take up well paying jobs at better places and still be able to make it to work and back home everyday. It is common knowledge that the primitive generation were limited in terms of where they could work or even took several months to cover distances using animals or by walking. Such, has been overcome by better means of transport that still cover these same distances in hours. There has been several testimonies about this. Despite the positive notes quoted regarding technological advancements, in recent times, there has been some mishappenings with current discoveries. The glaringly harmful one is invention of guns. This, has led to the loss of many innocent lives. Undoubtedly, the remarkable potentials such victims may have had but was truncated because of their untimely demise in a way negatively impacts on society. Surviving persons live in fear and anguish of not knowing if someone by take their lives prematurely in the name of civilians being allowed to own guns in certain countries. It is obvious guns have done more harm than good to humanity. To conclude, technology has some positive impacts on society but this is especially true for the initial discoveries compared to the gross negative impact some later discoveries have had on the globe. I totally agree with this. Your task achievement score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Music should not be taught in schools. Instead other subjects such as computer and science should be taught. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Anwser: Music course should be replaced with technical courses in the school curriculum. From my perspective, science is a crucial subject but music has its own reputation in a student's career so music cannot be discontinued. There are many reasons for such an opinion which will be examined further in this essay. To begin with, music helps a person to calm down and a student feels relaxed when he practise music. A lot of students complain about pressures they face due to competitive exams and loads of homework they receive from their teachers. However, students who indulge in artistic subjects along with technical courses feel better. They do not have to suffer from stress that comes from their studies. The reason can be exemplified with a study suggesting that playing a musical instrument or listening to music before any exam helps a student to score better and tackle the stress in a composed manner. Moreover, music assists an individual to develop a quality called inventiveness. Music helps in generating creative ideas. For instance, Albert Einstein, a great scientist was an amateur violinist who loved to perform it in his free time. He once claimed that music helped him formulating and proving a myriad of his scientific laws because it impacted his brain energy to work in a certain way. This further get proven in numerous studies conducted after his death. In conclusion, there are artistic subjects that a student might be interested in but never gets chance to pursue, it may have serious impact on his inventive skills. Also, music acts as a stress burster and increases an overall productivity of an individual. Therefore, music should be treated as an essential art. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Music should not be taught in schools. Instead other subjects such as computer and science should be taught. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Anwser: Music course should be replaced with technical courses in the school curriculum. From my perspective, science is a crucial subject but music has its own reputation in a student's career so music cannot be discontinued. There are many reasons for such an opinion which will be examined further in this essay. To begin with, music helps a person to calm down and a student feels relaxed when he practise music. A lot of students complain about pressures they face due to competitive exams and loads of homework they receive from their teachers. However, students who indulge in artistic subjects along with technical courses feel better. They do not have to suffer from stress that comes from their studies. The reason can be exemplified with a study suggesting that playing a musical instrument or listening to music before any exam helps a student to score better and tackle the stress in a composed manner. Moreover, music assists an individual to develop a quality called inventiveness. Music helps in generating creative ideas. For instance, Albert Einstein, a great scientist was an amateur violinist who loved to perform it in his free time. He once claimed that music helped him formulating and proving a myriad of his scientific laws because it impacted his brain energy to work in a certain way. This further get proven in numerous studies conducted after his death. In conclusion, there are artistic subjects that a student might be interested in but never gets chance to pursue, it may have serious impact on his inventive skills. Also, music acts as a stress burster and increases an overall productivity of an individual. Therefore, music should be treated as an essential art. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Music should not be taught in schools. Instead other subjects such as computer and science should be taught. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Anwser: Music course should be replaced with technical courses in the school curriculum. From my perspective, science is a crucial subject but music has its own reputation in a student's career so music cannot be discontinued. There are many reasons for such an opinion which will be examined further in this essay. To begin with, music helps a person to calm down and a student feels relaxed when he practise music. A lot of students complain about pressures they face due to competitive exams and loads of homework they receive from their teachers. However, students who indulge in artistic subjects along with technical courses feel better. They do not have to suffer from stress that comes from their studies. The reason can be exemplified with a study suggesting that playing a musical instrument or listening to music before any exam helps a student to score better and tackle the stress in a composed manner. Moreover, music assists an individual to develop a quality called inventiveness. Music helps in generating creative ideas. For instance, Albert Einstein, a great scientist was an amateur violinist who loved to perform it in his free time. He once claimed that music helped him formulating and proving a myriad of his scientific laws because it impacted his brain energy to work in a certain way. This further get proven in numerous studies conducted after his death. In conclusion, there are artistic subjects that a student might be interested in but never gets chance to pursue, it may have serious impact on his inventive skills. Also, music acts as a stress burster and increases an overall productivity of an individual. Therefore, music should be treated as an essential art. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Music should not be taught in schools. Instead other subjects such as computer and science should be taught. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Anwser: Music course should be replaced with technical courses in the school curriculum. From my perspective, science is a crucial subject but music has its own reputation in a student's career so music cannot be discontinued. There are many reasons for such an opinion which will be examined further in this essay. To begin with, music helps a person to calm down and a student feels relaxed when he practise music. A lot of students complain about pressures they face due to competitive exams and loads of homework they receive from their teachers. However, students who indulge in artistic subjects along with technical courses feel better. They do not have to suffer from stress that comes from their studies. The reason can be exemplified with a study suggesting that playing a musical instrument or listening to music before any exam helps a student to score better and tackle the stress in a composed manner. Moreover, music assists an individual to develop a quality called inventiveness. Music helps in generating creative ideas. For instance, Albert Einstein, a great scientist was an amateur violinist who loved to perform it in his free time. He once claimed that music helped him formulating and proving a myriad of his scientific laws because it impacted his brain energy to work in a certain way. This further get proven in numerous studies conducted after his death. In conclusion, there are artistic subjects that a student might be interested in but never gets chance to pursue, it may have serious impact on his inventive skills. Also, music acts as a stress burster and increases an overall productivity of an individual. Therefore, music should be treated as an essential art. Your task achievement score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Anwser: There is a phenomenon where different regions around the globe are looking similarly as most goods can be purchased internationaly. I strongly believe this is a positive development as this makes market more competitive for buyers and it creates purchasing equality for most individuals. The main reason why, in my opinion, international purchasing is a positive trend is because it creates a competitive market to customers. This is because being able to purchase products from another country makes local stores more careful about their items' values as they might lose sales if their prices are too high. For instance, I always check new electronics' values online before I go to buy them localy because I want to know if sellers will charge me more than their products are worth. Moreover, another reason why I think countries looking similarly is a positive aspect is because it promotes trends among society and that might bring a sense of belonging to people. This is due to individuals feeling they belong in a group, and, therefore, creates social equality. For instance, in today's online world, some people feel inspired to renovate their homes to look like the newest trends from social media, and having the means to internationally buy furniture and decorations inspired by certain styles might make them happier about their surroundings. In conclusion, I totally agree that international market and trends are beneficial to society's development since this may create more competition among different companies as well as making countries more equal regarding what is fashionable at the moment. Therefore, in my opinion, countries should embrace looking similarly as this means people have more purchase freedom to buy whatever and from wherever they want. Your coherence and cohesion score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Anwser: There is a phenomenon where different regions around the globe are looking similarly as most goods can be purchased internationaly. I strongly believe this is a positive development as this makes market more competitive for buyers and it creates purchasing equality for most individuals. The main reason why, in my opinion, international purchasing is a positive trend is because it creates a competitive market to customers. This is because being able to purchase products from another country makes local stores more careful about their items' values as they might lose sales if their prices are too high. For instance, I always check new electronics' values online before I go to buy them localy because I want to know if sellers will charge me more than their products are worth. Moreover, another reason why I think countries looking similarly is a positive aspect is because it promotes trends among society and that might bring a sense of belonging to people. This is due to individuals feeling they belong in a group, and, therefore, creates social equality. For instance, in today's online world, some people feel inspired to renovate their homes to look like the newest trends from social media, and having the means to internationally buy furniture and decorations inspired by certain styles might make them happier about their surroundings. In conclusion, I totally agree that international market and trends are beneficial to society's development since this may create more competition among different companies as well as making countries more equal regarding what is fashionable at the moment. Therefore, in my opinion, countries should embrace looking similarly as this means people have more purchase freedom to buy whatever and from wherever they want. Your lexical resource score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Anwser: There is a phenomenon where different regions around the globe are looking similarly as most goods can be purchased internationaly. I strongly believe this is a positive development as this makes market more competitive for buyers and it creates purchasing equality for most individuals. The main reason why, in my opinion, international purchasing is a positive trend is because it creates a competitive market to customers. This is because being able to purchase products from another country makes local stores more careful about their items' values as they might lose sales if their prices are too high. For instance, I always check new electronics' values online before I go to buy them localy because I want to know if sellers will charge me more than their products are worth. Moreover, another reason why I think countries looking similarly is a positive aspect is because it promotes trends among society and that might bring a sense of belonging to people. This is due to individuals feeling they belong in a group, and, therefore, creates social equality. For instance, in today's online world, some people feel inspired to renovate their homes to look like the newest trends from social media, and having the means to internationally buy furniture and decorations inspired by certain styles might make them happier about their surroundings. In conclusion, I totally agree that international market and trends are beneficial to society's development since this may create more competition among different companies as well as making countries more equal regarding what is fashionable at the moment. Therefore, in my opinion, countries should embrace looking similarly as this means people have more purchase freedom to buy whatever and from wherever they want. Your grammatical range score is 5.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Anwser: There is a phenomenon where different regions around the globe are looking similarly as most goods can be purchased internationaly. I strongly believe this is a positive development as this makes market more competitive for buyers and it creates purchasing equality for most individuals. The main reason why, in my opinion, international purchasing is a positive trend is because it creates a competitive market to customers. This is because being able to purchase products from another country makes local stores more careful about their items' values as they might lose sales if their prices are too high. For instance, I always check new electronics' values online before I go to buy them localy because I want to know if sellers will charge me more than their products are worth. Moreover, another reason why I think countries looking similarly is a positive aspect is because it promotes trends among society and that might bring a sense of belonging to people. This is due to individuals feeling they belong in a group, and, therefore, creates social equality. For instance, in today's online world, some people feel inspired to renovate their homes to look like the newest trends from social media, and having the means to internationally buy furniture and decorations inspired by certain styles might make them happier about their surroundings. In conclusion, I totally agree that international market and trends are beneficial to society's development since this may create more competition among different companies as well as making countries more equal regarding what is fashionable at the moment. Therefore, in my opinion, countries should embrace looking similarly as this means people have more purchase freedom to buy whatever and from wherever they want. Your task achievement score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that the best way to improve the general well-being of school children is to make physical education compulsory in all schools. Others, however, think that this would have little effect on overall health and other measures are needed. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Anwser: The one of the highly controversial issue today relates to whether physical education course is either mandatory in the school curriculum or not. Nevertheless, this subject have less impact on health related issues and some other measurements should be taken. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then giving my opinion on the matter. One school of thought holds that the well-being of school kids should be improved through teaching them physical education in their daily routine. The prime reason for believing this is that it increases the physical fitness and boosts mental health of the children. As well as , it promotes a healthy lifestyle such as taking good diet, doing exercise and yoga and pursuing sports activities. In addition to this, it also teaches how to stay and work in a team with full co-operation along wtih maintaining discipline in the lives of children. On the flip side, other sections of society claim that making PE compulsory does not address underlying dietary issues or sometimes it could lead to negative impacts for less athletic children. To illustarte this, a survey has been conducted in United states and United Kingdom about a year ago, which shows the 80% school children who have studied with Physical education, they might not have significantly impact on their overall health without some broader lifestyle changes. Furthermore, some alternative measurements should be adopted for improving children's well-being. firslty, schools must implementing more holistic health programmes which address the mental, emotional and physical health of infants and giving access to mental health resources as well. what's more, fostering such environments for kids which helps to reduce their stress and encourage them in physical activity in fun and enjoyable way. In conclusion, after analyzing both sides of the arguement, I think that both these views have their merits. On balance, however, it is felt that, although physical education is indeed important among school kids, it must be part of a mutlifacted approach that also icludes education on nutrition and mental support as well. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that the best way to improve the general well-being of school children is to make physical education compulsory in all schools. Others, however, think that this would have little effect on overall health and other measures are needed. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Anwser: The one of the highly controversial issue today relates to whether physical education course is either mandatory in the school curriculum or not. Nevertheless, this subject have less impact on health related issues and some other measurements should be taken. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then giving my opinion on the matter. One school of thought holds that the well-being of school kids should be improved through teaching them physical education in their daily routine. The prime reason for believing this is that it increases the physical fitness and boosts mental health of the children. As well as , it promotes a healthy lifestyle such as taking good diet, doing exercise and yoga and pursuing sports activities. In addition to this, it also teaches how to stay and work in a team with full co-operation along wtih maintaining discipline in the lives of children. On the flip side, other sections of society claim that making PE compulsory does not address underlying dietary issues or sometimes it could lead to negative impacts for less athletic children. To illustarte this, a survey has been conducted in United states and United Kingdom about a year ago, which shows the 80% school children who have studied with Physical education, they might not have significantly impact on their overall health without some broader lifestyle changes. Furthermore, some alternative measurements should be adopted for improving children's well-being. firslty, schools must implementing more holistic health programmes which address the mental, emotional and physical health of infants and giving access to mental health resources as well. what's more, fostering such environments for kids which helps to reduce their stress and encourage them in physical activity in fun and enjoyable way. In conclusion, after analyzing both sides of the arguement, I think that both these views have their merits. On balance, however, it is felt that, although physical education is indeed important among school kids, it must be part of a mutlifacted approach that also icludes education on nutrition and mental support as well. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that the best way to improve the general well-being of school children is to make physical education compulsory in all schools. Others, however, think that this would have little effect on overall health and other measures are needed. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Anwser: The one of the highly controversial issue today relates to whether physical education course is either mandatory in the school curriculum or not. Nevertheless, this subject have less impact on health related issues and some other measurements should be taken. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then giving my opinion on the matter. One school of thought holds that the well-being of school kids should be improved through teaching them physical education in their daily routine. The prime reason for believing this is that it increases the physical fitness and boosts mental health of the children. As well as , it promotes a healthy lifestyle such as taking good diet, doing exercise and yoga and pursuing sports activities. In addition to this, it also teaches how to stay and work in a team with full co-operation along wtih maintaining discipline in the lives of children. On the flip side, other sections of society claim that making PE compulsory does not address underlying dietary issues or sometimes it could lead to negative impacts for less athletic children. To illustarte this, a survey has been conducted in United states and United Kingdom about a year ago, which shows the 80% school children who have studied with Physical education, they might not have significantly impact on their overall health without some broader lifestyle changes. Furthermore, some alternative measurements should be adopted for improving children's well-being. firslty, schools must implementing more holistic health programmes which address the mental, emotional and physical health of infants and giving access to mental health resources as well. what's more, fostering such environments for kids which helps to reduce their stress and encourage them in physical activity in fun and enjoyable way. In conclusion, after analyzing both sides of the arguement, I think that both these views have their merits. On balance, however, it is felt that, although physical education is indeed important among school kids, it must be part of a mutlifacted approach that also icludes education on nutrition and mental support as well. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people believe that the best way to improve the general well-being of school children is to make physical education compulsory in all schools. Others, however, think that this would have little effect on overall health and other measures are needed. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Anwser: The one of the highly controversial issue today relates to whether physical education course is either mandatory in the school curriculum or not. Nevertheless, this subject have less impact on health related issues and some other measurements should be taken. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then giving my opinion on the matter. One school of thought holds that the well-being of school kids should be improved through teaching them physical education in their daily routine. The prime reason for believing this is that it increases the physical fitness and boosts mental health of the children. As well as , it promotes a healthy lifestyle such as taking good diet, doing exercise and yoga and pursuing sports activities. In addition to this, it also teaches how to stay and work in a team with full co-operation along wtih maintaining discipline in the lives of children. On the flip side, other sections of society claim that making PE compulsory does not address underlying dietary issues or sometimes it could lead to negative impacts for less athletic children. To illustarte this, a survey has been conducted in United states and United Kingdom about a year ago, which shows the 80% school children who have studied with Physical education, they might not have significantly impact on their overall health without some broader lifestyle changes. Furthermore, some alternative measurements should be adopted for improving children's well-being. firslty, schools must implementing more holistic health programmes which address the mental, emotional and physical health of infants and giving access to mental health resources as well. what's more, fostering such environments for kids which helps to reduce their stress and encourage them in physical activity in fun and enjoyable way. In conclusion, after analyzing both sides of the arguement, I think that both these views have their merits. On balance, however, it is felt that, although physical education is indeed important among school kids, it must be part of a mutlifacted approach that also icludes education on nutrition and mental support as well. Your task achievement score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that all young people should be required to stay in full-time education until at least the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: Youngsters should engage themselves in the full-time education until the high school curriculum is finished. From my perspective, it is a great tool for a student and a lot of benefits will help him in his future. This essay will examine further the advantages of a continuous education. To begin with, students who wish to fulfil their dream to become a professional in any career then they need to show their capabilities by passing exams with better grades. This is only possible if they focus completely upon their studies by pursuing it in a full-time manner. For instance, in a country like India, there are many entrance exams held to test the mental integrity as well as capabilities of an individual to handle pressure by taking some of the toughest exams to get admission in the medical or the engineering schools. This can only happen if a student indulge in a full-time study which will help him to become as resilient as their profession requires him to be. Furthermore, students must be disciplined to follow a certain schedule for their studies so that they become habitual to gain knowledge everyday. Gradually, they will start believing that education is a lifelong journey. It has to be continued for the whole life to gain new skills and succeed in any career. To exemplify, the pupils who are disciplined during their school lives to gain knowledge contionuously they ensure that they always take steps further in their life to keep on gaining new skills and they easily learn them. A foreign language learning could be a daunting task for someone who discontinues education however the one who keeps on upskilling himself can easily grasp any new language. Thus, a discipline to follow a routine is essential to carry on education for the whole life. In conclusion, school teaches people to become disciplined and trained professionals in their respective careers while continuing it in a regular way and part-time education fails to impart such benefits for an individual. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that all young people should be required to stay in full-time education until at least the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: Youngsters should engage themselves in the full-time education until the high school curriculum is finished. From my perspective, it is a great tool for a student and a lot of benefits will help him in his future. This essay will examine further the advantages of a continuous education. To begin with, students who wish to fulfil their dream to become a professional in any career then they need to show their capabilities by passing exams with better grades. This is only possible if they focus completely upon their studies by pursuing it in a full-time manner. For instance, in a country like India, there are many entrance exams held to test the mental integrity as well as capabilities of an individual to handle pressure by taking some of the toughest exams to get admission in the medical or the engineering schools. This can only happen if a student indulge in a full-time study which will help him to become as resilient as their profession requires him to be. Furthermore, students must be disciplined to follow a certain schedule for their studies so that they become habitual to gain knowledge everyday. Gradually, they will start believing that education is a lifelong journey. It has to be continued for the whole life to gain new skills and succeed in any career. To exemplify, the pupils who are disciplined during their school lives to gain knowledge contionuously they ensure that they always take steps further in their life to keep on gaining new skills and they easily learn them. A foreign language learning could be a daunting task for someone who discontinues education however the one who keeps on upskilling himself can easily grasp any new language. Thus, a discipline to follow a routine is essential to carry on education for the whole life. In conclusion, school teaches people to become disciplined and trained professionals in their respective careers while continuing it in a regular way and part-time education fails to impart such benefits for an individual. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that all young people should be required to stay in full-time education until at least the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: Youngsters should engage themselves in the full-time education until the high school curriculum is finished. From my perspective, it is a great tool for a student and a lot of benefits will help him in his future. This essay will examine further the advantages of a continuous education. To begin with, students who wish to fulfil their dream to become a professional in any career then they need to show their capabilities by passing exams with better grades. This is only possible if they focus completely upon their studies by pursuing it in a full-time manner. For instance, in a country like India, there are many entrance exams held to test the mental integrity as well as capabilities of an individual to handle pressure by taking some of the toughest exams to get admission in the medical or the engineering schools. This can only happen if a student indulge in a full-time study which will help him to become as resilient as their profession requires him to be. Furthermore, students must be disciplined to follow a certain schedule for their studies so that they become habitual to gain knowledge everyday. Gradually, they will start believing that education is a lifelong journey. It has to be continued for the whole life to gain new skills and succeed in any career. To exemplify, the pupils who are disciplined during their school lives to gain knowledge contionuously they ensure that they always take steps further in their life to keep on gaining new skills and they easily learn them. A foreign language learning could be a daunting task for someone who discontinues education however the one who keeps on upskilling himself can easily grasp any new language. Thus, a discipline to follow a routine is essential to carry on education for the whole life. In conclusion, school teaches people to become disciplined and trained professionals in their respective careers while continuing it in a regular way and part-time education fails to impart such benefits for an individual. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people think that all young people should be required to stay in full-time education until at least the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: Youngsters should engage themselves in the full-time education until the high school curriculum is finished. From my perspective, it is a great tool for a student and a lot of benefits will help him in his future. This essay will examine further the advantages of a continuous education. To begin with, students who wish to fulfil their dream to become a professional in any career then they need to show their capabilities by passing exams with better grades. This is only possible if they focus completely upon their studies by pursuing it in a full-time manner. For instance, in a country like India, there are many entrance exams held to test the mental integrity as well as capabilities of an individual to handle pressure by taking some of the toughest exams to get admission in the medical or the engineering schools. This can only happen if a student indulge in a full-time study which will help him to become as resilient as their profession requires him to be. Furthermore, students must be disciplined to follow a certain schedule for their studies so that they become habitual to gain knowledge everyday. Gradually, they will start believing that education is a lifelong journey. It has to be continued for the whole life to gain new skills and succeed in any career. To exemplify, the pupils who are disciplined during their school lives to gain knowledge contionuously they ensure that they always take steps further in their life to keep on gaining new skills and they easily learn them. A foreign language learning could be a daunting task for someone who discontinues education however the one who keeps on upskilling himself can easily grasp any new language. Thus, a discipline to follow a routine is essential to carry on education for the whole life. In conclusion, school teaches people to become disciplined and trained professionals in their respective careers while continuing it in a regular way and part-time education fails to impart such benefits for an individual. Your task achievement score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make greater contributions to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: It is suggested that certain essential workers think nurses, doctors, and teachers are not getting the recognition they deserve and should be compensated better, whereas other folks, like movie stars or big-shot company bosses, are raking in amounts that seem way too high considering the nature of their work. I partly agree with given statements, because essential professions are hard workers, due to they influence a person’s self-development and protect them. Other people, although they do not directly influence a person’s condition, even those same businessmen influence the state of the exchange rate of money so that the state does not suffer from poverty. Therefore people should use criteria that should be considered in determining fair remuneration. On the one hand, some of movie stars and businessmen have huge fan groups, which create significant market demand. Which leads to consumption and promote economic development, so these contributions can’t be ignored. For example, when certain professions feel stressed in their work,they can enjoy by movies, of famous film actors and let them come back to their work full of energy. On the other hand, I do believe that it is understandable to pay more compensation to professional workers, because they affect to personal statements. For instance, teachers play a beneficial role in our society, which means they impart knowledge and experience to children, also instil ethical values into students, teaching them how to behave and set lifelong goals for them, motivating them to devote more time and energy to reaching their goals. These qualities are vital to the development of both individuals and societies. The question about criteria, maybe it is about time that people consider a few things. The major criteria is that how much a job contributes to society, because they are directly making the world a better place. For instance, doctors directly affect citizens lives, and help about 95% of illnesses people. Thus, a fair pay system should take into account how much a job contributes to society. In conclusion, although celebrities can promote economic development and inspire people’s spirits, those complex jobs can contribute more to advancing human society, so it is worth it for them to have higher salaries. Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make greater contributions to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: It is suggested that certain essential workers think nurses, doctors, and teachers are not getting the recognition they deserve and should be compensated better, whereas other folks, like movie stars or big-shot company bosses, are raking in amounts that seem way too high considering the nature of their work. I partly agree with given statements, because essential professions are hard workers, due to they influence a person’s self-development and protect them. Other people, although they do not directly influence a person’s condition, even those same businessmen influence the state of the exchange rate of money so that the state does not suffer from poverty. Therefore people should use criteria that should be considered in determining fair remuneration. On the one hand, some of movie stars and businessmen have huge fan groups, which create significant market demand. Which leads to consumption and promote economic development, so these contributions can’t be ignored. For example, when certain professions feel stressed in their work,they can enjoy by movies, of famous film actors and let them come back to their work full of energy. On the other hand, I do believe that it is understandable to pay more compensation to professional workers, because they affect to personal statements. For instance, teachers play a beneficial role in our society, which means they impart knowledge and experience to children, also instil ethical values into students, teaching them how to behave and set lifelong goals for them, motivating them to devote more time and energy to reaching their goals. These qualities are vital to the development of both individuals and societies. The question about criteria, maybe it is about time that people consider a few things. The major criteria is that how much a job contributes to society, because they are directly making the world a better place. For instance, doctors directly affect citizens lives, and help about 95% of illnesses people. Thus, a fair pay system should take into account how much a job contributes to society. In conclusion, although celebrities can promote economic development and inspire people’s spirits, those complex jobs can contribute more to advancing human society, so it is worth it for them to have higher salaries. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make greater contributions to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: It is suggested that certain essential workers think nurses, doctors, and teachers are not getting the recognition they deserve and should be compensated better, whereas other folks, like movie stars or big-shot company bosses, are raking in amounts that seem way too high considering the nature of their work. I partly agree with given statements, because essential professions are hard workers, due to they influence a person’s self-development and protect them. Other people, although they do not directly influence a person’s condition, even those same businessmen influence the state of the exchange rate of money so that the state does not suffer from poverty. Therefore people should use criteria that should be considered in determining fair remuneration. On the one hand, some of movie stars and businessmen have huge fan groups, which create significant market demand. Which leads to consumption and promote economic development, so these contributions can’t be ignored. For example, when certain professions feel stressed in their work,they can enjoy by movies, of famous film actors and let them come back to their work full of energy. On the other hand, I do believe that it is understandable to pay more compensation to professional workers, because they affect to personal statements. For instance, teachers play a beneficial role in our society, which means they impart knowledge and experience to children, also instil ethical values into students, teaching them how to behave and set lifelong goals for them, motivating them to devote more time and energy to reaching their goals. These qualities are vital to the development of both individuals and societies. The question about criteria, maybe it is about time that people consider a few things. The major criteria is that how much a job contributes to society, because they are directly making the world a better place. For instance, doctors directly affect citizens lives, and help about 95% of illnesses people. Thus, a fair pay system should take into account how much a job contributes to society. In conclusion, although celebrities can promote economic development and inspire people’s spirits, those complex jobs can contribute more to advancing human society, so it is worth it for them to have higher salaries. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make greater contributions to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Anwser: It is suggested that certain essential workers think nurses, doctors, and teachers are not getting the recognition they deserve and should be compensated better, whereas other folks, like movie stars or big-shot company bosses, are raking in amounts that seem way too high considering the nature of their work. I partly agree with given statements, because essential professions are hard workers, due to they influence a person’s self-development and protect them. Other people, although they do not directly influence a person’s condition, even those same businessmen influence the state of the exchange rate of money so that the state does not suffer from poverty. Therefore people should use criteria that should be considered in determining fair remuneration. On the one hand, some of movie stars and businessmen have huge fan groups, which create significant market demand. Which leads to consumption and promote economic development, so these contributions can’t be ignored. For example, when certain professions feel stressed in their work,they can enjoy by movies, of famous film actors and let them come back to their work full of energy. On the other hand, I do believe that it is understandable to pay more compensation to professional workers, because they affect to personal statements. For instance, teachers play a beneficial role in our society, which means they impart knowledge and experience to children, also instil ethical values into students, teaching them how to behave and set lifelong goals for them, motivating them to devote more time and energy to reaching their goals. These qualities are vital to the development of both individuals and societies. The question about criteria, maybe it is about time that people consider a few things. The major criteria is that how much a job contributes to society, because they are directly making the world a better place. For instance, doctors directly affect citizens lives, and help about 95% of illnesses people. Thus, a fair pay system should take into account how much a job contributes to society. In conclusion, although celebrities can promote economic development and inspire people’s spirits, those complex jobs can contribute more to advancing human society, so it is worth it for them to have higher salaries. Your task achievement score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5 Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay: Question: It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Anwser: Nowadays, many people are faced with problems which make them to take risks. They believe that risky decisions in their professional lives and personal lives will give them more benefits than drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss about the advantages of these which overshadow the disadvantages with some reasons. Undeniably, some risks can lead us to negative consequences which we cannot prevent. This means that the result from the action that we take comes to failure. When this situation happens, most of the people could feel depressed and have a trauma. As a consequence, they will never want to give their self another try to their lives. For example, a student who had fail in enrollment test for a good university will feel unworthy and never want to take another test. However, taking risks can be advantageous if we manage it well. When we have a circumstance that gives us a chance to take a risky decision, we are demanded to do our best. As a result, it can makesus improve our self. Moreover, if we handle it in a right way, we probably can get a result which we never thought before. For instance, my friend take a risk to resign from his job because he wanted to make his own coffee shop. He takes the consequence as a challenge for him to make his shop become one of the best shop. Finally, his hardworks lead his shop into the most popular in town. All things considered, the risk always occurs in every chance of our lives. Despite having some disadvantages, we can avoid them and take the advantages with some strategies like challenging ourselves and trying our best. This is why the benefits from taking risks can against the drawbacks. Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5 Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay: Question: It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Anwser: Nowadays, many people are faced with problems which make them to take risks. They believe that risky decisions in their professional lives and personal lives will give them more benefits than drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss about the advantages of these which overshadow the disadvantages with some reasons. Undeniably, some risks can lead us to negative consequences which we cannot prevent. This means that the result from the action that we take comes to failure. When this situation happens, most of the people could feel depressed and have a trauma. As a consequence, they will never want to give their self another try to their lives. For example, a student who had fail in enrollment test for a good university will feel unworthy and never want to take another test. However, taking risks can be advantageous if we manage it well. When we have a circumstance that gives us a chance to take a risky decision, we are demanded to do our best. As a result, it can makesus improve our self. Moreover, if we handle it in a right way, we probably can get a result which we never thought before. For instance, my friend take a risk to resign from his job because he wanted to make his own coffee shop. He takes the consequence as a challenge for him to make his shop become one of the best shop. Finally, his hardworks lead his shop into the most popular in town. All things considered, the risk always occurs in every chance of our lives. Despite having some disadvantages, we can avoid them and take the advantages with some strategies like challenging ourselves and trying our best. This is why the benefits from taking risks can against the drawbacks. Your lexical resource score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5 Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay: Question: It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Anwser: Nowadays, many people are faced with problems which make them to take risks. They believe that risky decisions in their professional lives and personal lives will give them more benefits than drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss about the advantages of these which overshadow the disadvantages with some reasons. Undeniably, some risks can lead us to negative consequences which we cannot prevent. This means that the result from the action that we take comes to failure. When this situation happens, most of the people could feel depressed and have a trauma. As a consequence, they will never want to give their self another try to their lives. For example, a student who had fail in enrollment test for a good university will feel unworthy and never want to take another test. However, taking risks can be advantageous if we manage it well. When we have a circumstance that gives us a chance to take a risky decision, we are demanded to do our best. As a result, it can makesus improve our self. Moreover, if we handle it in a right way, we probably can get a result which we never thought before. For instance, my friend take a risk to resign from his job because he wanted to make his own coffee shop. He takes the consequence as a challenge for him to make his shop become one of the best shop. Finally, his hardworks lead his shop into the most popular in town. All things considered, the risk always occurs in every chance of our lives. Despite having some disadvantages, we can avoid them and take the advantages with some strategies like challenging ourselves and trying our best. This is why the benefits from taking risks can against the drawbacks. Your grammatical range score is 4.0

You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0] The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5 Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay: Question: It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Anwser: Nowadays, many people are faced with problems which make them to take risks. They believe that risky decisions in their professional lives and personal lives will give them more benefits than drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss about the advantages of these which overshadow the disadvantages with some reasons. Undeniably, some risks can lead us to negative consequences which we cannot prevent. This means that the result from the action that we take comes to failure. When this situation happens, most of the people could feel depressed and have a trauma. As a consequence, they will never want to give their self another try to their lives. For example, a student who had fail in enrollment test for a good university will feel unworthy and never want to take another test. However, taking risks can be advantageous if we manage it well. When we have a circumstance that gives us a chance to take a risky decision, we are demanded to do our best. As a result, it can makesus improve our self. Moreover, if we handle it in a right way, we probably can get a result which we never thought before. For instance, my friend take a risk to resign from his job because he wanted to make his own coffee shop. He takes the consequence as a challenge for him to make his shop become one of the best shop. Finally, his hardworks lead his shop into the most popular in town. All things considered, the risk always occurs in every chance of our lives. Despite having some disadvantages, we can avoid them and take the advantages with some strategies like challenging ourselves and trying our best. This is why the benefits from taking risks can against the drawbacks. Your task achievement score is 7.0