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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time.
Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while other think that good working atmosphere is more important,
Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Anwser:
What is more worth? A good working atmosphere or a high salary? Some peolpe think having more money and less freetime is better than earning less money and having more free time. There are pros and cons of both of the options. According to me it is glas clear what is more important.
On one hand, money leads to a more "free" spare time. With a high salary you can afford expensive activites when you are off work. For instance, you have the posebilites to go on fancy vacations, eat at expensive resturants and take your friends on luxierus events. If you have less free time but a higher salary you can afford to make all your spare time expensive and valuable.
On the other hand, working in an atmosphere you love, makes you not even remember that you work for the money. As an example, the old firm I was hierd at, I did forget about the money I made. When the salary came in to my account I just saw it as a bouns, sience I liked working there so much. When I was off duty I missed being at the office. My work and colleages became my free time. However, the tasks where not the best. If it was not for the great atmosphere, I would not like to work for more then a day. Of course money is important but if the workplace, itself, is not nice, it is not worth it.
To conclude, a high salary is very attractive, but if you hate the atmosphere at the company, you will spend all day looking forward to the end of the day. In comparsion with a great working place, where you do not even think about the fact that you work. If you love your work and the people you are surounded by, then it might be worth a lower income. However, this was my personal concusion of my work experience. If you hate your job, you will not be able to appuciate your spare time and the money you make, you will be busy having axciety about your work.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time.
Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while other think that good working atmosphere is more important,
Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Anwser:
What is more worth? A good working atmosphere or a high salary? Some peolpe think having more money and less freetime is better than earning less money and having more free time. There are pros and cons of both of the options. According to me it is glas clear what is more important.
On one hand, money leads to a more "free" spare time. With a high salary you can afford expensive activites when you are off work. For instance, you have the posebilites to go on fancy vacations, eat at expensive resturants and take your friends on luxierus events. If you have less free time but a higher salary you can afford to make all your spare time expensive and valuable.
On the other hand, working in an atmosphere you love, makes you not even remember that you work for the money. As an example, the old firm I was hierd at, I did forget about the money I made. When the salary came in to my account I just saw it as a bouns, sience I liked working there so much. When I was off duty I missed being at the office. My work and colleages became my free time. However, the tasks where not the best. If it was not for the great atmosphere, I would not like to work for more then a day. Of course money is important but if the workplace, itself, is not nice, it is not worth it.
To conclude, a high salary is very attractive, but if you hate the atmosphere at the company, you will spend all day looking forward to the end of the day. In comparsion with a great working place, where you do not even think about the fact that you work. If you love your work and the people you are surounded by, then it might be worth a lower income. However, this was my personal concusion of my work experience. If you hate your job, you will not be able to appuciate your spare time and the money you make, you will be busy having axciety about your work.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time.
Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while other think that good working atmosphere is more important,
Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Anwser:
What is more worth? A good working atmosphere or a high salary? Some peolpe think having more money and less freetime is better than earning less money and having more free time. There are pros and cons of both of the options. According to me it is glas clear what is more important.
On one hand, money leads to a more "free" spare time. With a high salary you can afford expensive activites when you are off work. For instance, you have the posebilites to go on fancy vacations, eat at expensive resturants and take your friends on luxierus events. If you have less free time but a higher salary you can afford to make all your spare time expensive and valuable.
On the other hand, working in an atmosphere you love, makes you not even remember that you work for the money. As an example, the old firm I was hierd at, I did forget about the money I made. When the salary came in to my account I just saw it as a bouns, sience I liked working there so much. When I was off duty I missed being at the office. My work and colleages became my free time. However, the tasks where not the best. If it was not for the great atmosphere, I would not like to work for more then a day. Of course money is important but if the workplace, itself, is not nice, it is not worth it.
To conclude, a high salary is very attractive, but if you hate the atmosphere at the company, you will spend all day looking forward to the end of the day. In comparsion with a great working place, where you do not even think about the fact that you work. If you love your work and the people you are surounded by, then it might be worth a lower income. However, this was my personal concusion of my work experience. If you hate your job, you will not be able to appuciate your spare time and the money you make, you will be busy having axciety about your work.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time.
Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while other think that good working atmosphere is more important,
Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Anwser:
What is more worth? A good working atmosphere or a high salary? Some peolpe think having more money and less freetime is better than earning less money and having more free time. There are pros and cons of both of the options. According to me it is glas clear what is more important.
On one hand, money leads to a more "free" spare time. With a high salary you can afford expensive activites when you are off work. For instance, you have the posebilites to go on fancy vacations, eat at expensive resturants and take your friends on luxierus events. If you have less free time but a higher salary you can afford to make all your spare time expensive and valuable.
On the other hand, working in an atmosphere you love, makes you not even remember that you work for the money. As an example, the old firm I was hierd at, I did forget about the money I made. When the salary came in to my account I just saw it as a bouns, sience I liked working there so much. When I was off duty I missed being at the office. My work and colleages became my free time. However, the tasks where not the best. If it was not for the great atmosphere, I would not like to work for more then a day. Of course money is important but if the workplace, itself, is not nice, it is not worth it.
To conclude, a high salary is very attractive, but if you hate the atmosphere at the company, you will spend all day looking forward to the end of the day. In comparsion with a great working place, where you do not even think about the fact that you work. If you love your work and the people you are surounded by, then it might be worth a lower income. However, this was my personal concusion of my work experience. If you hate your job, you will not be able to appuciate your spare time and the money you make, you will be busy having axciety about your work.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In some culture, children are being told that they can achieve anything if they work hard.What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Anwser:
Nowadays, students are taught that nothing is imposible if they give their maximum effort in their goal.The benefits of this norms are
that contributes to self-confidence and enhances the hardwork. The drawbacks are that it deteriorates mental health of the child and inhibits the time allocation for any extra curricular activities.In my point of view, I think the advantages are outweigh the disadvantages.
The main pros from the statement which says that the hardwork allows
to achieve anything is that it induces the self-esteem of every peer. A student can helieve in himself by this norm without thinking about other external factors. In addition, it acts as an incentive to target the goals by giving maximum effort. For instance, Dr. Abdul kaluan who was the scientist from India came from a family which had lower economic status. In an interview, he said that he succeeded in his life as he thought that he can get anything by his efforts. Consequently, he became the president of India by running to reach his dreams.
In contrast, there are many cons related to above compelled statement. The main drawback is that it might worsen the mental well-being of a child if he did not achieve his goal. For example, one child in India suicided since he could not get the first rank in school term test eventhough he tried at his best.
Moreover, working all over the time for the ambition affects the day-to-day actvities of students. They mostly allocate all of their a time to trying for their targets and not to the extra curricular activities such as physical exercise. As a result, they might affected by non communicable diseases at their early childhood.
In conclusion, there are many advantages and
disadvantages related to the statement which insists that hard work gives everything. Main benefits are that it induces the self confidence and improves productivity. The drawbacks are it affects the mental health and creates boredom. In my opinion, I think the pros outweigh the cons.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In some culture, children are being told that they can achieve anything if they work hard.What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Anwser:
Nowadays, students are taught that nothing is imposible if they give their maximum effort in their goal.The benefits of this norms are
that contributes to self-confidence and enhances the hardwork. The drawbacks are that it deteriorates mental health of the child and inhibits the time allocation for any extra curricular activities.In my point of view, I think the advantages are outweigh the disadvantages.
The main pros from the statement which says that the hardwork allows
to achieve anything is that it induces the self-esteem of every peer. A student can helieve in himself by this norm without thinking about other external factors. In addition, it acts as an incentive to target the goals by giving maximum effort. For instance, Dr. Abdul kaluan who was the scientist from India came from a family which had lower economic status. In an interview, he said that he succeeded in his life as he thought that he can get anything by his efforts. Consequently, he became the president of India by running to reach his dreams.
In contrast, there are many cons related to above compelled statement. The main drawback is that it might worsen the mental well-being of a child if he did not achieve his goal. For example, one child in India suicided since he could not get the first rank in school term test eventhough he tried at his best.
Moreover, working all over the time for the ambition affects the day-to-day actvities of students. They mostly allocate all of their a time to trying for their targets and not to the extra curricular activities such as physical exercise. As a result, they might affected by non communicable diseases at their early childhood.
In conclusion, there are many advantages and
disadvantages related to the statement which insists that hard work gives everything. Main benefits are that it induces the self confidence and improves productivity. The drawbacks are it affects the mental health and creates boredom. In my opinion, I think the pros outweigh the cons.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In some culture, children are being told that they can achieve anything if they work hard.What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Anwser:
Nowadays, students are taught that nothing is imposible if they give their maximum effort in their goal.The benefits of this norms are
that contributes to self-confidence and enhances the hardwork. The drawbacks are that it deteriorates mental health of the child and inhibits the time allocation for any extra curricular activities.In my point of view, I think the advantages are outweigh the disadvantages.
The main pros from the statement which says that the hardwork allows
to achieve anything is that it induces the self-esteem of every peer. A student can helieve in himself by this norm without thinking about other external factors. In addition, it acts as an incentive to target the goals by giving maximum effort. For instance, Dr. Abdul kaluan who was the scientist from India came from a family which had lower economic status. In an interview, he said that he succeeded in his life as he thought that he can get anything by his efforts. Consequently, he became the president of India by running to reach his dreams.
In contrast, there are many cons related to above compelled statement. The main drawback is that it might worsen the mental well-being of a child if he did not achieve his goal. For example, one child in India suicided since he could not get the first rank in school term test eventhough he tried at his best.
Moreover, working all over the time for the ambition affects the day-to-day actvities of students. They mostly allocate all of their a time to trying for their targets and not to the extra curricular activities such as physical exercise. As a result, they might affected by non communicable diseases at their early childhood.
In conclusion, there are many advantages and
disadvantages related to the statement which insists that hard work gives everything. Main benefits are that it induces the self confidence and improves productivity. The drawbacks are it affects the mental health and creates boredom. In my opinion, I think the pros outweigh the cons.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In some culture, children are being told that they can achieve anything if they work hard.What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Anwser:
Nowadays, students are taught that nothing is imposible if they give their maximum effort in their goal.The benefits of this norms are
that contributes to self-confidence and enhances the hardwork. The drawbacks are that it deteriorates mental health of the child and inhibits the time allocation for any extra curricular activities.In my point of view, I think the advantages are outweigh the disadvantages.
The main pros from the statement which says that the hardwork allows
to achieve anything is that it induces the self-esteem of every peer. A student can helieve in himself by this norm without thinking about other external factors. In addition, it acts as an incentive to target the goals by giving maximum effort. For instance, Dr. Abdul kaluan who was the scientist from India came from a family which had lower economic status. In an interview, he said that he succeeded in his life as he thought that he can get anything by his efforts. Consequently, he became the president of India by running to reach his dreams.
In contrast, there are many cons related to above compelled statement. The main drawback is that it might worsen the mental well-being of a child if he did not achieve his goal. For example, one child in India suicided since he could not get the first rank in school term test eventhough he tried at his best.
Moreover, working all over the time for the ambition affects the day-to-day actvities of students. They mostly allocate all of their a time to trying for their targets and not to the extra curricular activities such as physical exercise. As a result, they might affected by non communicable diseases at their early childhood.
In conclusion, there are many advantages and
disadvantages related to the statement which insists that hard work gives everything. Main benefits are that it induces the self confidence and improves productivity. The drawbacks are it affects the mental health and creates boredom. In my opinion, I think the pros outweigh the cons.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
⚪️ People these days watch TV, films and other programmes alone rather than with other people. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.
Anwser:
Nowadays, people are more interested in watching films and TV programmes all by themselves rather than with a crowd. Although this promotes comfort and flexibility, I believe that there is more of a drawback to this development than a benefit. This essay aims to discuss why the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
On the one hand, enjoying a film and tv programme alone gives comfort to a person since they do not have to worry about sharing their preferences with someone. They would not have to discuss wich film to watch or what the volume setting of the television should be. Furthermore, It is also appreciated by some to watch a film alone because they would not have to mind noises people make in cinemas which is pretty common when the plot of the film being watched is too intense.
On the other hand, disadvantages can be inferred from this development. It is undeniable that one way to bond with family and friends is through watching a film together. In this way, views and opinions could be shared with one another after watching the film and it could lead to a healthy discussion. It is also one way of spending time with the whole family during any get together.
In conclusion, while there are advantages to watching a film alone for some people, I believe that this would pose more of a disadvantage when it comes to quality time between friends and families.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
⚪️ People these days watch TV, films and other programmes alone rather than with other people. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.
Anwser:
Nowadays, people are more interested in watching films and TV programmes all by themselves rather than with a crowd. Although this promotes comfort and flexibility, I believe that there is more of a drawback to this development than a benefit. This essay aims to discuss why the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
On the one hand, enjoying a film and tv programme alone gives comfort to a person since they do not have to worry about sharing their preferences with someone. They would not have to discuss wich film to watch or what the volume setting of the television should be. Furthermore, It is also appreciated by some to watch a film alone because they would not have to mind noises people make in cinemas which is pretty common when the plot of the film being watched is too intense.
On the other hand, disadvantages can be inferred from this development. It is undeniable that one way to bond with family and friends is through watching a film together. In this way, views and opinions could be shared with one another after watching the film and it could lead to a healthy discussion. It is also one way of spending time with the whole family during any get together.
In conclusion, while there are advantages to watching a film alone for some people, I believe that this would pose more of a disadvantage when it comes to quality time between friends and families.
Your lexical resource score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
⚪️ People these days watch TV, films and other programmes alone rather than with other people. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.
Anwser:
Nowadays, people are more interested in watching films and TV programmes all by themselves rather than with a crowd. Although this promotes comfort and flexibility, I believe that there is more of a drawback to this development than a benefit. This essay aims to discuss why the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
On the one hand, enjoying a film and tv programme alone gives comfort to a person since they do not have to worry about sharing their preferences with someone. They would not have to discuss wich film to watch or what the volume setting of the television should be. Furthermore, It is also appreciated by some to watch a film alone because they would not have to mind noises people make in cinemas which is pretty common when the plot of the film being watched is too intense.
On the other hand, disadvantages can be inferred from this development. It is undeniable that one way to bond with family and friends is through watching a film together. In this way, views and opinions could be shared with one another after watching the film and it could lead to a healthy discussion. It is also one way of spending time with the whole family during any get together.
In conclusion, while there are advantages to watching a film alone for some people, I believe that this would pose more of a disadvantage when it comes to quality time between friends and families.
Your grammatical range score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
⚪️ People these days watch TV, films and other programmes alone rather than with other people. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.
Anwser:
Nowadays, people are more interested in watching films and TV programmes all by themselves rather than with a crowd. Although this promotes comfort and flexibility, I believe that there is more of a drawback to this development than a benefit. This essay aims to discuss why the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
On the one hand, enjoying a film and tv programme alone gives comfort to a person since they do not have to worry about sharing their preferences with someone. They would not have to discuss wich film to watch or what the volume setting of the television should be. Furthermore, It is also appreciated by some to watch a film alone because they would not have to mind noises people make in cinemas which is pretty common when the plot of the film being watched is too intense.
On the other hand, disadvantages can be inferred from this development. It is undeniable that one way to bond with family and friends is through watching a film together. In this way, views and opinions could be shared with one another after watching the film and it could lead to a healthy discussion. It is also one way of spending time with the whole family during any get together.
In conclusion, while there are advantages to watching a film alone for some people, I believe that this would pose more of a disadvantage when it comes to quality time between friends and families.
Your task achievement score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others say that having a friendly relation is better. What do you think?
Anwser:
There are some thoughts about students are afraid of teachers may be good, but others believe that it is better to have a friendly link between both. In my opinion, I think teachers should have a good relationship with students but sometimes, be strict about it.
There is one main reason making people think that students should be afraid of the teacher. This assumption comes from a deep-rooted thought that students would not follow the teacher's instructions and run out of morale. However, this thought may be wrong because this method not only makes the relationship between tutors and pupils become worse, but also makes students hard to take full of knowledge that they receive. For example, if students get stuck at some point in the problem, they may hesitate to ask tutors about a solution, gradually they will get slow progress in their performance after all. Additionally, in a class, the union of each individual is the most important thing in an academic environment to compete with other classes, and teachers are fundamental keys to connecting those pieces, otherwise, this class would not work out.
However, teachers should also be not too easy for students, as I have just mentioned these teachers are navigators to direct them to the right path. So if they are too easy or friendly, their class will be out of control, hence, there will be no more disciplined or organized. As a result, once more time, their performances would absolutely be affected with no right morale. From those points, a teacher who knows to be strict and easy appropriately at the right time may be the best, while they can navigate their little boys and girls to the right path.
In conclusion, making students afraid of teachers would not be a good idea, as it discourages students from asking tutors when encountering a tricky question or separates each individual in a class. On the other hand, if they are easy for students, they may be out of control. So, the teacher can balance two things above may be the best.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others say that having a friendly relation is better. What do you think?
Anwser:
There are some thoughts about students are afraid of teachers may be good, but others believe that it is better to have a friendly link between both. In my opinion, I think teachers should have a good relationship with students but sometimes, be strict about it.
There is one main reason making people think that students should be afraid of the teacher. This assumption comes from a deep-rooted thought that students would not follow the teacher's instructions and run out of morale. However, this thought may be wrong because this method not only makes the relationship between tutors and pupils become worse, but also makes students hard to take full of knowledge that they receive. For example, if students get stuck at some point in the problem, they may hesitate to ask tutors about a solution, gradually they will get slow progress in their performance after all. Additionally, in a class, the union of each individual is the most important thing in an academic environment to compete with other classes, and teachers are fundamental keys to connecting those pieces, otherwise, this class would not work out.
However, teachers should also be not too easy for students, as I have just mentioned these teachers are navigators to direct them to the right path. So if they are too easy or friendly, their class will be out of control, hence, there will be no more disciplined or organized. As a result, once more time, their performances would absolutely be affected with no right morale. From those points, a teacher who knows to be strict and easy appropriately at the right time may be the best, while they can navigate their little boys and girls to the right path.
In conclusion, making students afraid of teachers would not be a good idea, as it discourages students from asking tutors when encountering a tricky question or separates each individual in a class. On the other hand, if they are easy for students, they may be out of control. So, the teacher can balance two things above may be the best.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others say that having a friendly relation is better. What do you think?
Anwser:
There are some thoughts about students are afraid of teachers may be good, but others believe that it is better to have a friendly link between both. In my opinion, I think teachers should have a good relationship with students but sometimes, be strict about it.
There is one main reason making people think that students should be afraid of the teacher. This assumption comes from a deep-rooted thought that students would not follow the teacher's instructions and run out of morale. However, this thought may be wrong because this method not only makes the relationship between tutors and pupils become worse, but also makes students hard to take full of knowledge that they receive. For example, if students get stuck at some point in the problem, they may hesitate to ask tutors about a solution, gradually they will get slow progress in their performance after all. Additionally, in a class, the union of each individual is the most important thing in an academic environment to compete with other classes, and teachers are fundamental keys to connecting those pieces, otherwise, this class would not work out.
However, teachers should also be not too easy for students, as I have just mentioned these teachers are navigators to direct them to the right path. So if they are too easy or friendly, their class will be out of control, hence, there will be no more disciplined or organized. As a result, once more time, their performances would absolutely be affected with no right morale. From those points, a teacher who knows to be strict and easy appropriately at the right time may be the best, while they can navigate their little boys and girls to the right path.
In conclusion, making students afraid of teachers would not be a good idea, as it discourages students from asking tutors when encountering a tricky question or separates each individual in a class. On the other hand, if they are easy for students, they may be out of control. So, the teacher can balance two things above may be the best.
Your grammatical range score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others say that having a friendly relation is better. What do you think?
Anwser:
There are some thoughts about students are afraid of teachers may be good, but others believe that it is better to have a friendly link between both. In my opinion, I think teachers should have a good relationship with students but sometimes, be strict about it.
There is one main reason making people think that students should be afraid of the teacher. This assumption comes from a deep-rooted thought that students would not follow the teacher's instructions and run out of morale. However, this thought may be wrong because this method not only makes the relationship between tutors and pupils become worse, but also makes students hard to take full of knowledge that they receive. For example, if students get stuck at some point in the problem, they may hesitate to ask tutors about a solution, gradually they will get slow progress in their performance after all. Additionally, in a class, the union of each individual is the most important thing in an academic environment to compete with other classes, and teachers are fundamental keys to connecting those pieces, otherwise, this class would not work out.
However, teachers should also be not too easy for students, as I have just mentioned these teachers are navigators to direct them to the right path. So if they are too easy or friendly, their class will be out of control, hence, there will be no more disciplined or organized. As a result, once more time, their performances would absolutely be affected with no right morale. From those points, a teacher who knows to be strict and easy appropriately at the right time may be the best, while they can navigate their little boys and girls to the right path.
In conclusion, making students afraid of teachers would not be a good idea, as it discourages students from asking tutors when encountering a tricky question or separates each individual in a class. On the other hand, if they are easy for students, they may be out of control. So, the teacher can balance two things above may be the best.
Your task achievement score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people like to own the place where they live, but other people like to rent
where they live.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
Nowadays, there are various views whether people should own or rent the place they live in. Some people think that it is better to own the place they reside in, while some people argue hiring is much more convenient. Although i agree that convenience of renting is appealing to people, İ believe owning the place is the best option.
On the one hand, people who think owning the place they live in say it is a kind of investment, helping them to ensure their future. İt is impossible to foresee what future holds, so they consider making sure that they and their offspring will have a place to reside in is crucial.
Moreover, most people opt for owning a place instead of renting, to decorate it in the way they want without asking for a permission from anybody. for people who prefer renting a place it can be quite tough to refurnish or redecorate the place.
On the other hand, those who choose renting over the owning the place they live in believe it can be genuinely boring to live in the same place for a long time. Some people , particularly young generations, are looking for diversitiy and they can easily get bored. İn this cases they can quickly leave the place they live in without thinking about selling their home.
İn my opinion, while both approaches have true sides, it is better to own a place. İ think the idea of being independent is really enticing, making most people opt for owning a place. For instance, people who possess a home is more independent and able to make decisions themselves about their apartments or houses.
Taking everything into account, while there are diverse approaches about whether people should rent or own a place, i believe owning a place can be a great oppotunity in order to make an investment and be independent.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people like to own the place where they live, but other people like to rent
where they live.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
Nowadays, there are various views whether people should own or rent the place they live in. Some people think that it is better to own the place they reside in, while some people argue hiring is much more convenient. Although i agree that convenience of renting is appealing to people, İ believe owning the place is the best option.
On the one hand, people who think owning the place they live in say it is a kind of investment, helping them to ensure their future. İt is impossible to foresee what future holds, so they consider making sure that they and their offspring will have a place to reside in is crucial.
Moreover, most people opt for owning a place instead of renting, to decorate it in the way they want without asking for a permission from anybody. for people who prefer renting a place it can be quite tough to refurnish or redecorate the place.
On the other hand, those who choose renting over the owning the place they live in believe it can be genuinely boring to live in the same place for a long time. Some people , particularly young generations, are looking for diversitiy and they can easily get bored. İn this cases they can quickly leave the place they live in without thinking about selling their home.
İn my opinion, while both approaches have true sides, it is better to own a place. İ think the idea of being independent is really enticing, making most people opt for owning a place. For instance, people who possess a home is more independent and able to make decisions themselves about their apartments or houses.
Taking everything into account, while there are diverse approaches about whether people should rent or own a place, i believe owning a place can be a great oppotunity in order to make an investment and be independent.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people like to own the place where they live, but other people like to rent
where they live.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
Nowadays, there are various views whether people should own or rent the place they live in. Some people think that it is better to own the place they reside in, while some people argue hiring is much more convenient. Although i agree that convenience of renting is appealing to people, İ believe owning the place is the best option.
On the one hand, people who think owning the place they live in say it is a kind of investment, helping them to ensure their future. İt is impossible to foresee what future holds, so they consider making sure that they and their offspring will have a place to reside in is crucial.
Moreover, most people opt for owning a place instead of renting, to decorate it in the way they want without asking for a permission from anybody. for people who prefer renting a place it can be quite tough to refurnish or redecorate the place.
On the other hand, those who choose renting over the owning the place they live in believe it can be genuinely boring to live in the same place for a long time. Some people , particularly young generations, are looking for diversitiy and they can easily get bored. İn this cases they can quickly leave the place they live in without thinking about selling their home.
İn my opinion, while both approaches have true sides, it is better to own a place. İ think the idea of being independent is really enticing, making most people opt for owning a place. For instance, people who possess a home is more independent and able to make decisions themselves about their apartments or houses.
Taking everything into account, while there are diverse approaches about whether people should rent or own a place, i believe owning a place can be a great oppotunity in order to make an investment and be independent.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people like to own the place where they live, but other people like to rent
where they live.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Anwser:
Nowadays, there are various views whether people should own or rent the place they live in. Some people think that it is better to own the place they reside in, while some people argue hiring is much more convenient. Although i agree that convenience of renting is appealing to people, İ believe owning the place is the best option.
On the one hand, people who think owning the place they live in say it is a kind of investment, helping them to ensure their future. İt is impossible to foresee what future holds, so they consider making sure that they and their offspring will have a place to reside in is crucial.
Moreover, most people opt for owning a place instead of renting, to decorate it in the way they want without asking for a permission from anybody. for people who prefer renting a place it can be quite tough to refurnish or redecorate the place.
On the other hand, those who choose renting over the owning the place they live in believe it can be genuinely boring to live in the same place for a long time. Some people , particularly young generations, are looking for diversitiy and they can easily get bored. İn this cases they can quickly leave the place they live in without thinking about selling their home.
İn my opinion, while both approaches have true sides, it is better to own a place. İ think the idea of being independent is really enticing, making most people opt for owning a place. For instance, people who possess a home is more independent and able to make decisions themselves about their apartments or houses.
Taking everything into account, while there are diverse approaches about whether people should rent or own a place, i believe owning a place can be a great oppotunity in order to make an investment and be independent.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In some culture, children are being told that they can achieve anything if they work hard.What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Anwser:
People in diverse countries say to the minors that if are hardworking they will achieve whatever they want. Meanwhile, there are some benefits in this such as higher self-confidence and independancy along wiht several drawbacks like lack of being oversight in some occasions which can lead to hazardous situation.
It is widely acknowledged by general opinion that youngesters need to be assertive and work hard in their childhood in order to get used to that for their future. In this regard, they can benefit from its positive outcomes such as boosting their self-confidence in their adulthood because they are probably one of the successful ones. Moreover, it teachs youth that they should not rely on anyone else in their lives and rather to be on their own. By way of illustration, many successful celebrities nowadays had a very difficult childhood when they talk about their biography. All in all, even though it may be hard at the moment but it will impact the future in a positive way.
Though encouraging minors to be serious and make a lot of effort can lead to numerous achievements, There are some negative consequences derive from spending too much time on their tasks such as studying a lot and learning new skills which will affect them mentally in their adulthood as psychologists state. For instance, some people are isolated and when take consultations from the experts they point to their childhood which was filled with loads of tasks and not spending time with the same age children to play with. In addition, children are not fully aware of their talents when they are young and they try hard on something which they abondon it compeletely when they grew up. Overall, these drawbacks need to be supervised cautiously by parents.
To sum up, It is worth mentioning that, the harder you try the better result you can obtain. But we have to bear in mind that it is not exactly the same for children and it has its own consequences which may adversely affect the people in their adulthood.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In some culture, children are being told that they can achieve anything if they work hard.What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Anwser:
People in diverse countries say to the minors that if are hardworking they will achieve whatever they want. Meanwhile, there are some benefits in this such as higher self-confidence and independancy along wiht several drawbacks like lack of being oversight in some occasions which can lead to hazardous situation.
It is widely acknowledged by general opinion that youngesters need to be assertive and work hard in their childhood in order to get used to that for their future. In this regard, they can benefit from its positive outcomes such as boosting their self-confidence in their adulthood because they are probably one of the successful ones. Moreover, it teachs youth that they should not rely on anyone else in their lives and rather to be on their own. By way of illustration, many successful celebrities nowadays had a very difficult childhood when they talk about their biography. All in all, even though it may be hard at the moment but it will impact the future in a positive way.
Though encouraging minors to be serious and make a lot of effort can lead to numerous achievements, There are some negative consequences derive from spending too much time on their tasks such as studying a lot and learning new skills which will affect them mentally in their adulthood as psychologists state. For instance, some people are isolated and when take consultations from the experts they point to their childhood which was filled with loads of tasks and not spending time with the same age children to play with. In addition, children are not fully aware of their talents when they are young and they try hard on something which they abondon it compeletely when they grew up. Overall, these drawbacks need to be supervised cautiously by parents.
To sum up, It is worth mentioning that, the harder you try the better result you can obtain. But we have to bear in mind that it is not exactly the same for children and it has its own consequences which may adversely affect the people in their adulthood.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In some culture, children are being told that they can achieve anything if they work hard.What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Anwser:
People in diverse countries say to the minors that if are hardworking they will achieve whatever they want. Meanwhile, there are some benefits in this such as higher self-confidence and independancy along wiht several drawbacks like lack of being oversight in some occasions which can lead to hazardous situation.
It is widely acknowledged by general opinion that youngesters need to be assertive and work hard in their childhood in order to get used to that for their future. In this regard, they can benefit from its positive outcomes such as boosting their self-confidence in their adulthood because they are probably one of the successful ones. Moreover, it teachs youth that they should not rely on anyone else in their lives and rather to be on their own. By way of illustration, many successful celebrities nowadays had a very difficult childhood when they talk about their biography. All in all, even though it may be hard at the moment but it will impact the future in a positive way.
Though encouraging minors to be serious and make a lot of effort can lead to numerous achievements, There are some negative consequences derive from spending too much time on their tasks such as studying a lot and learning new skills which will affect them mentally in their adulthood as psychologists state. For instance, some people are isolated and when take consultations from the experts they point to their childhood which was filled with loads of tasks and not spending time with the same age children to play with. In addition, children are not fully aware of their talents when they are young and they try hard on something which they abondon it compeletely when they grew up. Overall, these drawbacks need to be supervised cautiously by parents.
To sum up, It is worth mentioning that, the harder you try the better result you can obtain. But we have to bear in mind that it is not exactly the same for children and it has its own consequences which may adversely affect the people in their adulthood.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In some culture, children are being told that they can achieve anything if they work hard.What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Anwser:
People in diverse countries say to the minors that if are hardworking they will achieve whatever they want. Meanwhile, there are some benefits in this such as higher self-confidence and independancy along wiht several drawbacks like lack of being oversight in some occasions which can lead to hazardous situation.
It is widely acknowledged by general opinion that youngesters need to be assertive and work hard in their childhood in order to get used to that for their future. In this regard, they can benefit from its positive outcomes such as boosting their self-confidence in their adulthood because they are probably one of the successful ones. Moreover, it teachs youth that they should not rely on anyone else in their lives and rather to be on their own. By way of illustration, many successful celebrities nowadays had a very difficult childhood when they talk about their biography. All in all, even though it may be hard at the moment but it will impact the future in a positive way.
Though encouraging minors to be serious and make a lot of effort can lead to numerous achievements, There are some negative consequences derive from spending too much time on their tasks such as studying a lot and learning new skills which will affect them mentally in their adulthood as psychologists state. For instance, some people are isolated and when take consultations from the experts they point to their childhood which was filled with loads of tasks and not spending time with the same age children to play with. In addition, children are not fully aware of their talents when they are young and they try hard on something which they abondon it compeletely when they grew up. Overall, these drawbacks need to be supervised cautiously by parents.
To sum up, It is worth mentioning that, the harder you try the better result you can obtain. But we have to bear in mind that it is not exactly the same for children and it has its own consequences which may adversely affect the people in their adulthood.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
Nowadays, Selfishness and greed have become the societal norm. Undeniably, modernization has tremendously affected people’s lifestyles in our contemporary world. A number of people believe that our traditional values such as respect for the family and the local community help us to build a better world. However, I firmly believe on this statement.
Today we live in an era of Technology in which the whole earth has shrunk and become a global village. Everybody is connected to everybody through telephone lines and the internet but the warmth of relationships has taken a back seat. Most people have more than enough wealth, comfort and freedom but their hearts Desire even more. Therefor people think that older people are good for nothing and that is why they do not respect them. Moreover, Counting money is became first priority of most of the modern people than spending time with their family. For instance, in many family children cannot able to meet their father on whole week except on holiday. When children wake up father already leaved for job and when father returned home at night children already go for sleep. This should be critical problem because it may effect growth of children. Father returned home at night children already go for sleep. This should be critical problem because it may effect growth of children.
In contrast, Life in the past was too simple. People respected each other and helped each other when needed. People spent time with their family every day by sitting together or by eating together. In the past they were habituated of sitting with their community and discussed any problem if any. There were very less divorce than now because they believed in each other and loved truly. If modern people respect each other, spend quality time with family and build a good relation with our local people then the result will be on positive side.
To conclude, living in this modern toxic world, we are all slowly being poisoned to death. Therefore, it is clear that the traditional value based society is a better world to live.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
Nowadays, Selfishness and greed have become the societal norm. Undeniably, modernization has tremendously affected people’s lifestyles in our contemporary world. A number of people believe that our traditional values such as respect for the family and the local community help us to build a better world. However, I firmly believe on this statement.
Today we live in an era of Technology in which the whole earth has shrunk and become a global village. Everybody is connected to everybody through telephone lines and the internet but the warmth of relationships has taken a back seat. Most people have more than enough wealth, comfort and freedom but their hearts Desire even more. Therefor people think that older people are good for nothing and that is why they do not respect them. Moreover, Counting money is became first priority of most of the modern people than spending time with their family. For instance, in many family children cannot able to meet their father on whole week except on holiday. When children wake up father already leaved for job and when father returned home at night children already go for sleep. This should be critical problem because it may effect growth of children. Father returned home at night children already go for sleep. This should be critical problem because it may effect growth of children.
In contrast, Life in the past was too simple. People respected each other and helped each other when needed. People spent time with their family every day by sitting together or by eating together. In the past they were habituated of sitting with their community and discussed any problem if any. There were very less divorce than now because they believed in each other and loved truly. If modern people respect each other, spend quality time with family and build a good relation with our local people then the result will be on positive side.
To conclude, living in this modern toxic world, we are all slowly being poisoned to death. Therefore, it is clear that the traditional value based society is a better world to live.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
Nowadays, Selfishness and greed have become the societal norm. Undeniably, modernization has tremendously affected people’s lifestyles in our contemporary world. A number of people believe that our traditional values such as respect for the family and the local community help us to build a better world. However, I firmly believe on this statement.
Today we live in an era of Technology in which the whole earth has shrunk and become a global village. Everybody is connected to everybody through telephone lines and the internet but the warmth of relationships has taken a back seat. Most people have more than enough wealth, comfort and freedom but their hearts Desire even more. Therefor people think that older people are good for nothing and that is why they do not respect them. Moreover, Counting money is became first priority of most of the modern people than spending time with their family. For instance, in many family children cannot able to meet their father on whole week except on holiday. When children wake up father already leaved for job and when father returned home at night children already go for sleep. This should be critical problem because it may effect growth of children. Father returned home at night children already go for sleep. This should be critical problem because it may effect growth of children.
In contrast, Life in the past was too simple. People respected each other and helped each other when needed. People spent time with their family every day by sitting together or by eating together. In the past they were habituated of sitting with their community and discussed any problem if any. There were very less divorce than now because they believed in each other and loved truly. If modern people respect each other, spend quality time with family and build a good relation with our local people then the result will be on positive side.
To conclude, living in this modern toxic world, we are all slowly being poisoned to death. Therefore, it is clear that the traditional value based society is a better world to live.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
Nowadays, Selfishness and greed have become the societal norm. Undeniably, modernization has tremendously affected people’s lifestyles in our contemporary world. A number of people believe that our traditional values such as respect for the family and the local community help us to build a better world. However, I firmly believe on this statement.
Today we live in an era of Technology in which the whole earth has shrunk and become a global village. Everybody is connected to everybody through telephone lines and the internet but the warmth of relationships has taken a back seat. Most people have more than enough wealth, comfort and freedom but their hearts Desire even more. Therefor people think that older people are good for nothing and that is why they do not respect them. Moreover, Counting money is became first priority of most of the modern people than spending time with their family. For instance, in many family children cannot able to meet their father on whole week except on holiday. When children wake up father already leaved for job and when father returned home at night children already go for sleep. This should be critical problem because it may effect growth of children. Father returned home at night children already go for sleep. This should be critical problem because it may effect growth of children.
In contrast, Life in the past was too simple. People respected each other and helped each other when needed. People spent time with their family every day by sitting together or by eating together. In the past they were habituated of sitting with their community and discussed any problem if any. There were very less divorce than now because they believed in each other and loved truly. If modern people respect each other, spend quality time with family and build a good relation with our local people then the result will be on positive side.
To conclude, living in this modern toxic world, we are all slowly being poisoned to death. Therefore, it is clear that the traditional value based society is a better world to live.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Environmental damage is a problem in most countries.
What is the cause of this damage?
What should be done about this problem?
Anwser:
In contemporary times, plenty of governments are complaining about environmental issues leading to essential impacts on the earth. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with recent issues and propose possible solutions to avoid them.
Environmental troubles, such as pollution and the greenhouse effect bring about devastating species and decreasing the air quality. Firstly, a myriad of lives in habitat might suffer from soil problems since the dirt quality is being directly affected by pollution made by people. For instance, in 1976, a vast majority of breeds disappeared in Japan since the effects provided by an atomic bomb destroyed soil ingredients. Secondly, the greenhouse effect considerably damages air quality. Therefore, the life quality of individuals decreased over the decade. For example, in the in the last 20-year period, almost 300.000 people died due to poor air.
In my opinion, the best solution to this problem is raising people's awareness and investing in electrical cars. Initially, some courses and brochures are likely to be prepared by administrations in order to enhance individuals' perspectives. Moreover, the proportion of driving cars that consume petrol allocates detrimental impacts. Therefore, in spite of the expenditure on electric vehicles, governments ought to encourage locals to use electric vehicles. Thus, this effect contributes to the air quality of the earth.
In conclusion, environmental issues might have serious impacts on people, such as collapsing breeds in habitat and harming air quality. However, 21st-century humans are able to overcome the issues by tending to electric cars and improving their knowledge of pollution.
e
17 Nisan 2024 Çarşamba
01:35
In contemporary times, a myriad of elderly people are emigrating to other countries. In my opinion, it has certain drawbacks. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of going abroad chosen by retired people and provide a logical conclusion.
To begin, emigrating to other countries for retired people has a remarkable effect on their life quality and healthcare. Firstly, elderly people need to rest their body since they had already sacrificed themself to earn money.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 5.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Environmental damage is a problem in most countries.
What is the cause of this damage?
What should be done about this problem?
Anwser:
In contemporary times, plenty of governments are complaining about environmental issues leading to essential impacts on the earth. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with recent issues and propose possible solutions to avoid them.
Environmental troubles, such as pollution and the greenhouse effect bring about devastating species and decreasing the air quality. Firstly, a myriad of lives in habitat might suffer from soil problems since the dirt quality is being directly affected by pollution made by people. For instance, in 1976, a vast majority of breeds disappeared in Japan since the effects provided by an atomic bomb destroyed soil ingredients. Secondly, the greenhouse effect considerably damages air quality. Therefore, the life quality of individuals decreased over the decade. For example, in the in the last 20-year period, almost 300.000 people died due to poor air.
In my opinion, the best solution to this problem is raising people's awareness and investing in electrical cars. Initially, some courses and brochures are likely to be prepared by administrations in order to enhance individuals' perspectives. Moreover, the proportion of driving cars that consume petrol allocates detrimental impacts. Therefore, in spite of the expenditure on electric vehicles, governments ought to encourage locals to use electric vehicles. Thus, this effect contributes to the air quality of the earth.
In conclusion, environmental issues might have serious impacts on people, such as collapsing breeds in habitat and harming air quality. However, 21st-century humans are able to overcome the issues by tending to electric cars and improving their knowledge of pollution.
e
17 Nisan 2024 Çarşamba
01:35
In contemporary times, a myriad of elderly people are emigrating to other countries. In my opinion, it has certain drawbacks. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of going abroad chosen by retired people and provide a logical conclusion.
To begin, emigrating to other countries for retired people has a remarkable effect on their life quality and healthcare. Firstly, elderly people need to rest their body since they had already sacrificed themself to earn money.
Your lexical resource score is 5.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Environmental damage is a problem in most countries.
What is the cause of this damage?
What should be done about this problem?
Anwser:
In contemporary times, plenty of governments are complaining about environmental issues leading to essential impacts on the earth. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with recent issues and propose possible solutions to avoid them.
Environmental troubles, such as pollution and the greenhouse effect bring about devastating species and decreasing the air quality. Firstly, a myriad of lives in habitat might suffer from soil problems since the dirt quality is being directly affected by pollution made by people. For instance, in 1976, a vast majority of breeds disappeared in Japan since the effects provided by an atomic bomb destroyed soil ingredients. Secondly, the greenhouse effect considerably damages air quality. Therefore, the life quality of individuals decreased over the decade. For example, in the in the last 20-year period, almost 300.000 people died due to poor air.
In my opinion, the best solution to this problem is raising people's awareness and investing in electrical cars. Initially, some courses and brochures are likely to be prepared by administrations in order to enhance individuals' perspectives. Moreover, the proportion of driving cars that consume petrol allocates detrimental impacts. Therefore, in spite of the expenditure on electric vehicles, governments ought to encourage locals to use electric vehicles. Thus, this effect contributes to the air quality of the earth.
In conclusion, environmental issues might have serious impacts on people, such as collapsing breeds in habitat and harming air quality. However, 21st-century humans are able to overcome the issues by tending to electric cars and improving their knowledge of pollution.
e
17 Nisan 2024 Çarşamba
01:35
In contemporary times, a myriad of elderly people are emigrating to other countries. In my opinion, it has certain drawbacks. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of going abroad chosen by retired people and provide a logical conclusion.
To begin, emigrating to other countries for retired people has a remarkable effect on their life quality and healthcare. Firstly, elderly people need to rest their body since they had already sacrificed themself to earn money.
Your grammatical range score is 5.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Environmental damage is a problem in most countries.
What is the cause of this damage?
What should be done about this problem?
Anwser:
In contemporary times, plenty of governments are complaining about environmental issues leading to essential impacts on the earth. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with recent issues and propose possible solutions to avoid them.
Environmental troubles, such as pollution and the greenhouse effect bring about devastating species and decreasing the air quality. Firstly, a myriad of lives in habitat might suffer from soil problems since the dirt quality is being directly affected by pollution made by people. For instance, in 1976, a vast majority of breeds disappeared in Japan since the effects provided by an atomic bomb destroyed soil ingredients. Secondly, the greenhouse effect considerably damages air quality. Therefore, the life quality of individuals decreased over the decade. For example, in the in the last 20-year period, almost 300.000 people died due to poor air.
In my opinion, the best solution to this problem is raising people's awareness and investing in electrical cars. Initially, some courses and brochures are likely to be prepared by administrations in order to enhance individuals' perspectives. Moreover, the proportion of driving cars that consume petrol allocates detrimental impacts. Therefore, in spite of the expenditure on electric vehicles, governments ought to encourage locals to use electric vehicles. Thus, this effect contributes to the air quality of the earth.
In conclusion, environmental issues might have serious impacts on people, such as collapsing breeds in habitat and harming air quality. However, 21st-century humans are able to overcome the issues by tending to electric cars and improving their knowledge of pollution.
e
17 Nisan 2024 Çarşamba
01:35
In contemporary times, a myriad of elderly people are emigrating to other countries. In my opinion, it has certain drawbacks. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of going abroad chosen by retired people and provide a logical conclusion.
To begin, emigrating to other countries for retired people has a remarkable effect on their life quality and healthcare. Firstly, elderly people need to rest their body since they had already sacrificed themself to earn money.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere.
Discuss both vioews and give your opinion.
Anwser:
In the modern era, artists are being backed financially by authorities while some individuals think the money can be spent on more beneficial things to society. I mostly agree with the statement and I think that funding should be spent on both public services and artists.
To begin with, supporting talented people have positive impacts on the community. Some of these guys are exceptional and by that help, they can gain a global reputation and create masterpieces which make their people to be proud of them. For example, Goteh was a poor guy when the prime minister of Italy discovered his talent and helped him to enhance it but now, he has a universal renown. Additionally, some of these artists can contribute to the appereance of their cities and their people as well and take parts of community jobs. The individuals who paint the walls of metro stations and people who teach music to gifted students for free are good examples of this issue.
Despite having some benefits, the budget devoted to artists can be dedicated to the whole community rather that just some members. Firstly, the government can use this budget to combat poverty, crime and other problems that are becoming just the daily difficulties. Last year in Saudi Arabia, for instance, the government devoted 30 million USD to help people to quite smoking and managed to reduce the rate of addiction in youth by 30 per cent at the end of that year. Secondly, the environment needs some attention as well. Therefore, this money can be contributed to environmental institutions which can revive our dear palnet. Finally, educational facilities can be bought for schools by this funding which help to train specialists for the future and increase the literacy rate.
To conclude, I think the governemnts should decrease their supports of artists and pay more attention about other concerns of society.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere.
Discuss both vioews and give your opinion.
Anwser:
In the modern era, artists are being backed financially by authorities while some individuals think the money can be spent on more beneficial things to society. I mostly agree with the statement and I think that funding should be spent on both public services and artists.
To begin with, supporting talented people have positive impacts on the community. Some of these guys are exceptional and by that help, they can gain a global reputation and create masterpieces which make their people to be proud of them. For example, Goteh was a poor guy when the prime minister of Italy discovered his talent and helped him to enhance it but now, he has a universal renown. Additionally, some of these artists can contribute to the appereance of their cities and their people as well and take parts of community jobs. The individuals who paint the walls of metro stations and people who teach music to gifted students for free are good examples of this issue.
Despite having some benefits, the budget devoted to artists can be dedicated to the whole community rather that just some members. Firstly, the government can use this budget to combat poverty, crime and other problems that are becoming just the daily difficulties. Last year in Saudi Arabia, for instance, the government devoted 30 million USD to help people to quite smoking and managed to reduce the rate of addiction in youth by 30 per cent at the end of that year. Secondly, the environment needs some attention as well. Therefore, this money can be contributed to environmental institutions which can revive our dear palnet. Finally, educational facilities can be bought for schools by this funding which help to train specialists for the future and increase the literacy rate.
To conclude, I think the governemnts should decrease their supports of artists and pay more attention about other concerns of society.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere.
Discuss both vioews and give your opinion.
Anwser:
In the modern era, artists are being backed financially by authorities while some individuals think the money can be spent on more beneficial things to society. I mostly agree with the statement and I think that funding should be spent on both public services and artists.
To begin with, supporting talented people have positive impacts on the community. Some of these guys are exceptional and by that help, they can gain a global reputation and create masterpieces which make their people to be proud of them. For example, Goteh was a poor guy when the prime minister of Italy discovered his talent and helped him to enhance it but now, he has a universal renown. Additionally, some of these artists can contribute to the appereance of their cities and their people as well and take parts of community jobs. The individuals who paint the walls of metro stations and people who teach music to gifted students for free are good examples of this issue.
Despite having some benefits, the budget devoted to artists can be dedicated to the whole community rather that just some members. Firstly, the government can use this budget to combat poverty, crime and other problems that are becoming just the daily difficulties. Last year in Saudi Arabia, for instance, the government devoted 30 million USD to help people to quite smoking and managed to reduce the rate of addiction in youth by 30 per cent at the end of that year. Secondly, the environment needs some attention as well. Therefore, this money can be contributed to environmental institutions which can revive our dear palnet. Finally, educational facilities can be bought for schools by this funding which help to train specialists for the future and increase the literacy rate.
To conclude, I think the governemnts should decrease their supports of artists and pay more attention about other concerns of society.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere.
Discuss both vioews and give your opinion.
Anwser:
In the modern era, artists are being backed financially by authorities while some individuals think the money can be spent on more beneficial things to society. I mostly agree with the statement and I think that funding should be spent on both public services and artists.
To begin with, supporting talented people have positive impacts on the community. Some of these guys are exceptional and by that help, they can gain a global reputation and create masterpieces which make their people to be proud of them. For example, Goteh was a poor guy when the prime minister of Italy discovered his talent and helped him to enhance it but now, he has a universal renown. Additionally, some of these artists can contribute to the appereance of their cities and their people as well and take parts of community jobs. The individuals who paint the walls of metro stations and people who teach music to gifted students for free are good examples of this issue.
Despite having some benefits, the budget devoted to artists can be dedicated to the whole community rather that just some members. Firstly, the government can use this budget to combat poverty, crime and other problems that are becoming just the daily difficulties. Last year in Saudi Arabia, for instance, the government devoted 30 million USD to help people to quite smoking and managed to reduce the rate of addiction in youth by 30 per cent at the end of that year. Secondly, the environment needs some attention as well. Therefore, this money can be contributed to environmental institutions which can revive our dear palnet. Finally, educational facilities can be bought for schools by this funding which help to train specialists for the future and increase the literacy rate.
To conclude, I think the governemnts should decrease their supports of artists and pay more attention about other concerns of society.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at art institution or organization as part of their programme. What are the advantages and disadvantages .
Anwser:
In the modern era, many higher schools exercise having unpaid work at companies as proportion of their course has many demerits. Some schools have had mixed results after unpaid internship programmes, so it is clear that people may have diverse ideas about this issue. Weighing up both sides, I think that there are more upsides that working at companies as studentstudents brings about.
There are surely a few demerits having an internship programme that affect their lives. Firstly, the most remarkable one is that if they are situated socially disadvantaged class, they have part-time jobs while they are studying. For example, in the case of Korea, many students have part-time jobs to pay their school tuition fees, and living charges. Secondly, another reasonable one is that some people do not participate well in their jobs.
In contrast, there are also diverse advantages with this phenomenon. First and foremost, the biggest merit is that when they find their jobs, they can get jobs more easily than other people who don't have any work experience. Most companies prefer to hire people who have work experience because they already know how to manage the companies and how2 to deal the problems.
To sum it up, it is clear that there is many advantages to further school student's work of not receiving their salaries; in contrast, there are also significant disadvantages because it is apparent that students pursue only work experience , not their income needs to consider many factors before it decides whether this phenomenon would have a positive effect on society and individuals. Thus, I strongly believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 5.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at art institution or organization as part of their programme. What are the advantages and disadvantages .
Anwser:
In the modern era, many higher schools exercise having unpaid work at companies as proportion of their course has many demerits. Some schools have had mixed results after unpaid internship programmes, so it is clear that people may have diverse ideas about this issue. Weighing up both sides, I think that there are more upsides that working at companies as studentstudents brings about.
There are surely a few demerits having an internship programme that affect their lives. Firstly, the most remarkable one is that if they are situated socially disadvantaged class, they have part-time jobs while they are studying. For example, in the case of Korea, many students have part-time jobs to pay their school tuition fees, and living charges. Secondly, another reasonable one is that some people do not participate well in their jobs.
In contrast, there are also diverse advantages with this phenomenon. First and foremost, the biggest merit is that when they find their jobs, they can get jobs more easily than other people who don't have any work experience. Most companies prefer to hire people who have work experience because they already know how to manage the companies and how2 to deal the problems.
To sum it up, it is clear that there is many advantages to further school student's work of not receiving their salaries; in contrast, there are also significant disadvantages because it is apparent that students pursue only work experience , not their income needs to consider many factors before it decides whether this phenomenon would have a positive effect on society and individuals. Thus, I strongly believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks.
Your lexical resource score is 5.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at art institution or organization as part of their programme. What are the advantages and disadvantages .
Anwser:
In the modern era, many higher schools exercise having unpaid work at companies as proportion of their course has many demerits. Some schools have had mixed results after unpaid internship programmes, so it is clear that people may have diverse ideas about this issue. Weighing up both sides, I think that there are more upsides that working at companies as studentstudents brings about.
There are surely a few demerits having an internship programme that affect their lives. Firstly, the most remarkable one is that if they are situated socially disadvantaged class, they have part-time jobs while they are studying. For example, in the case of Korea, many students have part-time jobs to pay their school tuition fees, and living charges. Secondly, another reasonable one is that some people do not participate well in their jobs.
In contrast, there are also diverse advantages with this phenomenon. First and foremost, the biggest merit is that when they find their jobs, they can get jobs more easily than other people who don't have any work experience. Most companies prefer to hire people who have work experience because they already know how to manage the companies and how2 to deal the problems.
To sum it up, it is clear that there is many advantages to further school student's work of not receiving their salaries; in contrast, there are also significant disadvantages because it is apparent that students pursue only work experience , not their income needs to consider many factors before it decides whether this phenomenon would have a positive effect on society and individuals. Thus, I strongly believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks.
Your grammatical range score is 5.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at art institution or organization as part of their programme. What are the advantages and disadvantages .
Anwser:
In the modern era, many higher schools exercise having unpaid work at companies as proportion of their course has many demerits. Some schools have had mixed results after unpaid internship programmes, so it is clear that people may have diverse ideas about this issue. Weighing up both sides, I think that there are more upsides that working at companies as studentstudents brings about.
There are surely a few demerits having an internship programme that affect their lives. Firstly, the most remarkable one is that if they are situated socially disadvantaged class, they have part-time jobs while they are studying. For example, in the case of Korea, many students have part-time jobs to pay their school tuition fees, and living charges. Secondly, another reasonable one is that some people do not participate well in their jobs.
In contrast, there are also diverse advantages with this phenomenon. First and foremost, the biggest merit is that when they find their jobs, they can get jobs more easily than other people who don't have any work experience. Most companies prefer to hire people who have work experience because they already know how to manage the companies and how2 to deal the problems.
To sum it up, it is clear that there is many advantages to further school student's work of not receiving their salaries; in contrast, there are also significant disadvantages because it is apparent that students pursue only work experience , not their income needs to consider many factors before it decides whether this phenomenon would have a positive effect on society and individuals. Thus, I strongly believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks.
Your task achievement score is 5.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
The most debatable argument nationwide is about the transportation system within the country. Many people believe that the government ought to invest their budget in the development of railways rather than on roadways. I totally agree with this statement because the trains are faster and more eco-friendly.
To embark on, trains do not deal with congestion as like cars. They are faster and more convenient as they reduce the journey time which can be used productively to spend time with family and friends. At this time people can read books and do some other significant tasks. For instance,the Canadian government is spending money on railways to interconnect Toronto and Ottawa to reduce the time and issues faced by highway traffic while driving. Moreover, the opportunity for employment may also increase with easy travel. To be clear, for instance, if an individual is not able to find a job in their locality. However, a nearby town can enhance has numerous job opportunities. Then, commuting by train is the best option.
Secondly, locomotives tend to produce less harmful gases than cars. The carbon emissions are lesser comparatively cars. For example, new technological advancement states in their report about bullet trains,which run through electricity might be more helpful in reducing the effect of global warming and maintain a good environment.
Furthermore, due to large compartments train is more spacious than a car or van. It can carry more people in one go. However, the maximum occupancy in car is five or sever seater.
In conclusion, in my opinion state authorities should spend more money on railways compared to roadways as they are more convenient and do not deteriorate the ecosystem.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
The most debatable argument nationwide is about the transportation system within the country. Many people believe that the government ought to invest their budget in the development of railways rather than on roadways. I totally agree with this statement because the trains are faster and more eco-friendly.
To embark on, trains do not deal with congestion as like cars. They are faster and more convenient as they reduce the journey time which can be used productively to spend time with family and friends. At this time people can read books and do some other significant tasks. For instance,the Canadian government is spending money on railways to interconnect Toronto and Ottawa to reduce the time and issues faced by highway traffic while driving. Moreover, the opportunity for employment may also increase with easy travel. To be clear, for instance, if an individual is not able to find a job in their locality. However, a nearby town can enhance has numerous job opportunities. Then, commuting by train is the best option.
Secondly, locomotives tend to produce less harmful gases than cars. The carbon emissions are lesser comparatively cars. For example, new technological advancement states in their report about bullet trains,which run through electricity might be more helpful in reducing the effect of global warming and maintain a good environment.
Furthermore, due to large compartments train is more spacious than a car or van. It can carry more people in one go. However, the maximum occupancy in car is five or sever seater.
In conclusion, in my opinion state authorities should spend more money on railways compared to roadways as they are more convenient and do not deteriorate the ecosystem.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
The most debatable argument nationwide is about the transportation system within the country. Many people believe that the government ought to invest their budget in the development of railways rather than on roadways. I totally agree with this statement because the trains are faster and more eco-friendly.
To embark on, trains do not deal with congestion as like cars. They are faster and more convenient as they reduce the journey time which can be used productively to spend time with family and friends. At this time people can read books and do some other significant tasks. For instance,the Canadian government is spending money on railways to interconnect Toronto and Ottawa to reduce the time and issues faced by highway traffic while driving. Moreover, the opportunity for employment may also increase with easy travel. To be clear, for instance, if an individual is not able to find a job in their locality. However, a nearby town can enhance has numerous job opportunities. Then, commuting by train is the best option.
Secondly, locomotives tend to produce less harmful gases than cars. The carbon emissions are lesser comparatively cars. For example, new technological advancement states in their report about bullet trains,which run through electricity might be more helpful in reducing the effect of global warming and maintain a good environment.
Furthermore, due to large compartments train is more spacious than a car or van. It can carry more people in one go. However, the maximum occupancy in car is five or sever seater.
In conclusion, in my opinion state authorities should spend more money on railways compared to roadways as they are more convenient and do not deteriorate the ecosystem.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
The most debatable argument nationwide is about the transportation system within the country. Many people believe that the government ought to invest their budget in the development of railways rather than on roadways. I totally agree with this statement because the trains are faster and more eco-friendly.
To embark on, trains do not deal with congestion as like cars. They are faster and more convenient as they reduce the journey time which can be used productively to spend time with family and friends. At this time people can read books and do some other significant tasks. For instance,the Canadian government is spending money on railways to interconnect Toronto and Ottawa to reduce the time and issues faced by highway traffic while driving. Moreover, the opportunity for employment may also increase with easy travel. To be clear, for instance, if an individual is not able to find a job in their locality. However, a nearby town can enhance has numerous job opportunities. Then, commuting by train is the best option.
Secondly, locomotives tend to produce less harmful gases than cars. The carbon emissions are lesser comparatively cars. For example, new technological advancement states in their report about bullet trains,which run through electricity might be more helpful in reducing the effect of global warming and maintain a good environment.
Furthermore, due to large compartments train is more spacious than a car or van. It can carry more people in one go. However, the maximum occupancy in car is five or sever seater.
In conclusion, in my opinion state authorities should spend more money on railways compared to roadways as they are more convenient and do not deteriorate the ecosystem.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Studies suggest that children spend more time watching TV than they did in the past and spend less on doing active or creative things. Why do you think it is the case? What measures and methods can be used to tackle with it?
Anwser:
The majority of the new generation is used to time for watching TV more and more time and they do not have to do any activities or any achievements. Because they are addicted to watching TV programs like cartoons. Therefore, it is are many cases and in this essay, I will discuss them.
On the one hand, nowadays the new generation is addicted to watching TV and they do not have to spend time on their activities. So children should not learn any other creative things like education, sports, etc. They are less of a future carrying. For example, they are not forced to like sports. It is given practice after school that way children do not attend it. Because they have scheduled for a TV program.
Moreover, sometimes they even eat while watching TV. They do not do outdoor activities. It affects children's brains. As a result, increasing addiction in the same way they are becoming mental issues.
On the other hand, I think that caspase to man in reason parent do not care the children. Therefore, they used it unlimited. Parents can solve this case by doing other activities ply as outdoor games with another child. For example, a parent can go to the park or coffee shop with their children. So they do not get addicted to it.
In conclusion, these days, children are addicted to they are pleasure time watching TV and they do not do any other activities to achieve. Therefore parents can solve those problems and they can improve other activities.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Studies suggest that children spend more time watching TV than they did in the past and spend less on doing active or creative things. Why do you think it is the case? What measures and methods can be used to tackle with it?
Anwser:
The majority of the new generation is used to time for watching TV more and more time and they do not have to do any activities or any achievements. Because they are addicted to watching TV programs like cartoons. Therefore, it is are many cases and in this essay, I will discuss them.
On the one hand, nowadays the new generation is addicted to watching TV and they do not have to spend time on their activities. So children should not learn any other creative things like education, sports, etc. They are less of a future carrying. For example, they are not forced to like sports. It is given practice after school that way children do not attend it. Because they have scheduled for a TV program.
Moreover, sometimes they even eat while watching TV. They do not do outdoor activities. It affects children's brains. As a result, increasing addiction in the same way they are becoming mental issues.
On the other hand, I think that caspase to man in reason parent do not care the children. Therefore, they used it unlimited. Parents can solve this case by doing other activities ply as outdoor games with another child. For example, a parent can go to the park or coffee shop with their children. So they do not get addicted to it.
In conclusion, these days, children are addicted to they are pleasure time watching TV and they do not do any other activities to achieve. Therefore parents can solve those problems and they can improve other activities.
Your lexical resource score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Studies suggest that children spend more time watching TV than they did in the past and spend less on doing active or creative things. Why do you think it is the case? What measures and methods can be used to tackle with it?
Anwser:
The majority of the new generation is used to time for watching TV more and more time and they do not have to do any activities or any achievements. Because they are addicted to watching TV programs like cartoons. Therefore, it is are many cases and in this essay, I will discuss them.
On the one hand, nowadays the new generation is addicted to watching TV and they do not have to spend time on their activities. So children should not learn any other creative things like education, sports, etc. They are less of a future carrying. For example, they are not forced to like sports. It is given practice after school that way children do not attend it. Because they have scheduled for a TV program.
Moreover, sometimes they even eat while watching TV. They do not do outdoor activities. It affects children's brains. As a result, increasing addiction in the same way they are becoming mental issues.
On the other hand, I think that caspase to man in reason parent do not care the children. Therefore, they used it unlimited. Parents can solve this case by doing other activities ply as outdoor games with another child. For example, a parent can go to the park or coffee shop with their children. So they do not get addicted to it.
In conclusion, these days, children are addicted to they are pleasure time watching TV and they do not do any other activities to achieve. Therefore parents can solve those problems and they can improve other activities.
Your grammatical range score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Studies suggest that children spend more time watching TV than they did in the past and spend less on doing active or creative things. Why do you think it is the case? What measures and methods can be used to tackle with it?
Anwser:
The majority of the new generation is used to time for watching TV more and more time and they do not have to do any activities or any achievements. Because they are addicted to watching TV programs like cartoons. Therefore, it is are many cases and in this essay, I will discuss them.
On the one hand, nowadays the new generation is addicted to watching TV and they do not have to spend time on their activities. So children should not learn any other creative things like education, sports, etc. They are less of a future carrying. For example, they are not forced to like sports. It is given practice after school that way children do not attend it. Because they have scheduled for a TV program.
Moreover, sometimes they even eat while watching TV. They do not do outdoor activities. It affects children's brains. As a result, increasing addiction in the same way they are becoming mental issues.
On the other hand, I think that caspase to man in reason parent do not care the children. Therefore, they used it unlimited. Parents can solve this case by doing other activities ply as outdoor games with another child. For example, a parent can go to the park or coffee shop with their children. So they do not get addicted to it.
In conclusion, these days, children are addicted to they are pleasure time watching TV and they do not do any other activities to achieve. Therefore parents can solve those problems and they can improve other activities.
Your task achievement score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Basically, reducing crime is so important for each society because people who are living in a country must save and feel free. There are different types of crimes that people will face in the future. Obviously, we should consider some policies to decrease criminal activities.
From my point of view, there are many alternative ways to recognise crimes and make new practices to protect folks. For example, being aware from childhood through our family and schools or universities could be an effective way to reduce crimes. Also, TV programs and social networks are other options in order to get to know about it.
In my opinion, some believe that giving longer jail sentences helps guilties to realize and punish them. According to some research, this issue does not work very well because a person who is in prison gets involved in many other problems such as being far away from their own family, emotional state troubles, lack of money and so forth. As a result, society should establish a new structure for reducing crimes and also prepare a range of facilities for criminals so that they can make a decent living for themselves and their families.
Taking everything into conclusion, I completely agree that giving prison is useful for a short time. On the other hand, I think substituted ways can help them to grow rapidly their personality. I believe that making a professional criminal system and using some psychologists help to reduce crimes.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Basically, reducing crime is so important for each society because people who are living in a country must save and feel free. There are different types of crimes that people will face in the future. Obviously, we should consider some policies to decrease criminal activities.
From my point of view, there are many alternative ways to recognise crimes and make new practices to protect folks. For example, being aware from childhood through our family and schools or universities could be an effective way to reduce crimes. Also, TV programs and social networks are other options in order to get to know about it.
In my opinion, some believe that giving longer jail sentences helps guilties to realize and punish them. According to some research, this issue does not work very well because a person who is in prison gets involved in many other problems such as being far away from their own family, emotional state troubles, lack of money and so forth. As a result, society should establish a new structure for reducing crimes and also prepare a range of facilities for criminals so that they can make a decent living for themselves and their families.
Taking everything into conclusion, I completely agree that giving prison is useful for a short time. On the other hand, I think substituted ways can help them to grow rapidly their personality. I believe that making a professional criminal system and using some psychologists help to reduce crimes.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Basically, reducing crime is so important for each society because people who are living in a country must save and feel free. There are different types of crimes that people will face in the future. Obviously, we should consider some policies to decrease criminal activities.
From my point of view, there are many alternative ways to recognise crimes and make new practices to protect folks. For example, being aware from childhood through our family and schools or universities could be an effective way to reduce crimes. Also, TV programs and social networks are other options in order to get to know about it.
In my opinion, some believe that giving longer jail sentences helps guilties to realize and punish them. According to some research, this issue does not work very well because a person who is in prison gets involved in many other problems such as being far away from their own family, emotional state troubles, lack of money and so forth. As a result, society should establish a new structure for reducing crimes and also prepare a range of facilities for criminals so that they can make a decent living for themselves and their families.
Taking everything into conclusion, I completely agree that giving prison is useful for a short time. On the other hand, I think substituted ways can help them to grow rapidly their personality. I believe that making a professional criminal system and using some psychologists help to reduce crimes.
Your grammatical range score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Anwser:
Basically, reducing crime is so important for each society because people who are living in a country must save and feel free. There are different types of crimes that people will face in the future. Obviously, we should consider some policies to decrease criminal activities.
From my point of view, there are many alternative ways to recognise crimes and make new practices to protect folks. For example, being aware from childhood through our family and schools or universities could be an effective way to reduce crimes. Also, TV programs and social networks are other options in order to get to know about it.
In my opinion, some believe that giving longer jail sentences helps guilties to realize and punish them. According to some research, this issue does not work very well because a person who is in prison gets involved in many other problems such as being far away from their own family, emotional state troubles, lack of money and so forth. As a result, society should establish a new structure for reducing crimes and also prepare a range of facilities for criminals so that they can make a decent living for themselves and their families.
Taking everything into conclusion, I completely agree that giving prison is useful for a short time. On the other hand, I think substituted ways can help them to grow rapidly their personality. I believe that making a professional criminal system and using some psychologists help to reduce crimes.
Your task achievement score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Today more and more people are using computers and electronic devices to access information. Thus, there is no need to print newspapers, books, or magazines anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Nowadays, there is increasing use of computers and other electronic gadgets to acquire information. Therefore, nobody needs to create written materials, such as newspapers, journals and so on. I am firmly of the opinion that using more technological devices is much more beneficial in terms of budget and easy access.
To begin with, the use of computers and smartphones has become ubiquitous in most parts of the world, especially in developed countries. That is because such technology offers a variety of materials, while the chances to get information from books are limited. For instance, if anybody googles some information, he or she can find a plenty of articles as well as reviews of different books simultaneously. In that respect, readers can move to internet for the purpose of searching for some information swiftly and easily.
Additionally, people are today more concerned about their budget and financial background, and be it in the field of education or career, purchasing a lot of books and magazines can sometimes be not affordable, specifically for the people from deprived areas. However, after internet has been put forward, societies have more chances to reach the data they need. Thanks to diverse websites, it is now reasonable to buy one phone or notebook and use it in order to search for pdfs of their needed materials. To exemplify, readers often opt for BBC and the New York Times sites or apps to read daily news and a variety of gripping articles.
In conclusion, I believe there are more possibilities to be familiar with the different facts by using electronics, such as quick access to a range of news and other essential information. Using internet is more economical as well, thus, there is no demand to print written tools.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Today more and more people are using computers and electronic devices to access information. Thus, there is no need to print newspapers, books, or magazines anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Nowadays, there is increasing use of computers and other electronic gadgets to acquire information. Therefore, nobody needs to create written materials, such as newspapers, journals and so on. I am firmly of the opinion that using more technological devices is much more beneficial in terms of budget and easy access.
To begin with, the use of computers and smartphones has become ubiquitous in most parts of the world, especially in developed countries. That is because such technology offers a variety of materials, while the chances to get information from books are limited. For instance, if anybody googles some information, he or she can find a plenty of articles as well as reviews of different books simultaneously. In that respect, readers can move to internet for the purpose of searching for some information swiftly and easily.
Additionally, people are today more concerned about their budget and financial background, and be it in the field of education or career, purchasing a lot of books and magazines can sometimes be not affordable, specifically for the people from deprived areas. However, after internet has been put forward, societies have more chances to reach the data they need. Thanks to diverse websites, it is now reasonable to buy one phone or notebook and use it in order to search for pdfs of their needed materials. To exemplify, readers often opt for BBC and the New York Times sites or apps to read daily news and a variety of gripping articles.
In conclusion, I believe there are more possibilities to be familiar with the different facts by using electronics, such as quick access to a range of news and other essential information. Using internet is more economical as well, thus, there is no demand to print written tools.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Today more and more people are using computers and electronic devices to access information. Thus, there is no need to print newspapers, books, or magazines anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Nowadays, there is increasing use of computers and other electronic gadgets to acquire information. Therefore, nobody needs to create written materials, such as newspapers, journals and so on. I am firmly of the opinion that using more technological devices is much more beneficial in terms of budget and easy access.
To begin with, the use of computers and smartphones has become ubiquitous in most parts of the world, especially in developed countries. That is because such technology offers a variety of materials, while the chances to get information from books are limited. For instance, if anybody googles some information, he or she can find a plenty of articles as well as reviews of different books simultaneously. In that respect, readers can move to internet for the purpose of searching for some information swiftly and easily.
Additionally, people are today more concerned about their budget and financial background, and be it in the field of education or career, purchasing a lot of books and magazines can sometimes be not affordable, specifically for the people from deprived areas. However, after internet has been put forward, societies have more chances to reach the data they need. Thanks to diverse websites, it is now reasonable to buy one phone or notebook and use it in order to search for pdfs of their needed materials. To exemplify, readers often opt for BBC and the New York Times sites or apps to read daily news and a variety of gripping articles.
In conclusion, I believe there are more possibilities to be familiar with the different facts by using electronics, such as quick access to a range of news and other essential information. Using internet is more economical as well, thus, there is no demand to print written tools.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Today more and more people are using computers and electronic devices to access information. Thus, there is no need to print newspapers, books, or magazines anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Nowadays, there is increasing use of computers and other electronic gadgets to acquire information. Therefore, nobody needs to create written materials, such as newspapers, journals and so on. I am firmly of the opinion that using more technological devices is much more beneficial in terms of budget and easy access.
To begin with, the use of computers and smartphones has become ubiquitous in most parts of the world, especially in developed countries. That is because such technology offers a variety of materials, while the chances to get information from books are limited. For instance, if anybody googles some information, he or she can find a plenty of articles as well as reviews of different books simultaneously. In that respect, readers can move to internet for the purpose of searching for some information swiftly and easily.
Additionally, people are today more concerned about their budget and financial background, and be it in the field of education or career, purchasing a lot of books and magazines can sometimes be not affordable, specifically for the people from deprived areas. However, after internet has been put forward, societies have more chances to reach the data they need. Thanks to diverse websites, it is now reasonable to buy one phone or notebook and use it in order to search for pdfs of their needed materials. To exemplify, readers often opt for BBC and the New York Times sites or apps to read daily news and a variety of gripping articles.
In conclusion, I believe there are more possibilities to be familiar with the different facts by using electronics, such as quick access to a range of news and other essential information. Using internet is more economical as well, thus, there is no demand to print written tools.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.
Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Anwser:
Nowadays due to the prevalence of globalisation and technological advancement students have more chances to apply in a foreign universities when they are in homelands. In this essay I would like to describe the benefits and drawbacks of this study.
To commence with education is valuable key to success and developing the individual personality and qualifications. It plays a valid role in forming basic knowledge, information systems and communication in particular in different teaching areas. Teaching give the students a great deal of opportunity and possibilities to choose the course that students prefer. For instance: in our country (Uzbekistan) there are many universities, but students can’t find their specialisations, because we have a lack of faculties and directions. Meanwhile when students study abroad they have a lot of opportunities to find the appropriate jobs and gain experience, skills and knowledge. Although students discover the world of a foreign country and communicate with citizens of this region, make new friends and get acquainted with their culture and history.
As for drawbacks If you leave your country, you will probably have more problems that you will have to deal with. For example, you should find an apartment and pay the rent, as well as think about food and drinks. In addition, you will have to face other situations, for example, how to get medical insurance or get a study permit for foreigners in this country. Last but not least, if you stay abroad and do not return to your hometown, your country will not benefit from your knowledge.
In conclusion, I believe that a person should decide for himself where to get higher education, without any pressure. Currently thanks to globalization and the development of communications, it is much easier to change jobs and lifestyles.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.
Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Anwser:
Nowadays due to the prevalence of globalisation and technological advancement students have more chances to apply in a foreign universities when they are in homelands. In this essay I would like to describe the benefits and drawbacks of this study.
To commence with education is valuable key to success and developing the individual personality and qualifications. It plays a valid role in forming basic knowledge, information systems and communication in particular in different teaching areas. Teaching give the students a great deal of opportunity and possibilities to choose the course that students prefer. For instance: in our country (Uzbekistan) there are many universities, but students can’t find their specialisations, because we have a lack of faculties and directions. Meanwhile when students study abroad they have a lot of opportunities to find the appropriate jobs and gain experience, skills and knowledge. Although students discover the world of a foreign country and communicate with citizens of this region, make new friends and get acquainted with their culture and history.
As for drawbacks If you leave your country, you will probably have more problems that you will have to deal with. For example, you should find an apartment and pay the rent, as well as think about food and drinks. In addition, you will have to face other situations, for example, how to get medical insurance or get a study permit for foreigners in this country. Last but not least, if you stay abroad and do not return to your hometown, your country will not benefit from your knowledge.
In conclusion, I believe that a person should decide for himself where to get higher education, without any pressure. Currently thanks to globalization and the development of communications, it is much easier to change jobs and lifestyles.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.
Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Anwser:
Nowadays due to the prevalence of globalisation and technological advancement students have more chances to apply in a foreign universities when they are in homelands. In this essay I would like to describe the benefits and drawbacks of this study.
To commence with education is valuable key to success and developing the individual personality and qualifications. It plays a valid role in forming basic knowledge, information systems and communication in particular in different teaching areas. Teaching give the students a great deal of opportunity and possibilities to choose the course that students prefer. For instance: in our country (Uzbekistan) there are many universities, but students can’t find their specialisations, because we have a lack of faculties and directions. Meanwhile when students study abroad they have a lot of opportunities to find the appropriate jobs and gain experience, skills and knowledge. Although students discover the world of a foreign country and communicate with citizens of this region, make new friends and get acquainted with their culture and history.
As for drawbacks If you leave your country, you will probably have more problems that you will have to deal with. For example, you should find an apartment and pay the rent, as well as think about food and drinks. In addition, you will have to face other situations, for example, how to get medical insurance or get a study permit for foreigners in this country. Last but not least, if you stay abroad and do not return to your hometown, your country will not benefit from your knowledge.
In conclusion, I believe that a person should decide for himself where to get higher education, without any pressure. Currently thanks to globalization and the development of communications, it is much easier to change jobs and lifestyles.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.
Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Anwser:
Nowadays due to the prevalence of globalisation and technological advancement students have more chances to apply in a foreign universities when they are in homelands. In this essay I would like to describe the benefits and drawbacks of this study.
To commence with education is valuable key to success and developing the individual personality and qualifications. It plays a valid role in forming basic knowledge, information systems and communication in particular in different teaching areas. Teaching give the students a great deal of opportunity and possibilities to choose the course that students prefer. For instance: in our country (Uzbekistan) there are many universities, but students can’t find their specialisations, because we have a lack of faculties and directions. Meanwhile when students study abroad they have a lot of opportunities to find the appropriate jobs and gain experience, skills and knowledge. Although students discover the world of a foreign country and communicate with citizens of this region, make new friends and get acquainted with their culture and history.
As for drawbacks If you leave your country, you will probably have more problems that you will have to deal with. For example, you should find an apartment and pay the rent, as well as think about food and drinks. In addition, you will have to face other situations, for example, how to get medical insurance or get a study permit for foreigners in this country. Last but not least, if you stay abroad and do not return to your hometown, your country will not benefit from your knowledge.
In conclusion, I believe that a person should decide for himself where to get higher education, without any pressure. Currently thanks to globalization and the development of communications, it is much easier to change jobs and lifestyles.
Your task achievement score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
The media has become too influential in peoples lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
The communication sources are widely affecting lives of masses to a greater extent. Some individuals hold a negative opinion for such development. From my perspective, it is true and the reasons will be examined further in this essay.
To begin with, a majority of media outlets are notably spreading some sort of political agendas to get funding from political parties. They report news with partial facts to favour a political side. When people watch such content in the news they get influenced by this and vote for that party in the elections. For instance, some investigational facts are concealed by the reporters which are related to corruption cases against some popular leaders and only favourable news is shown which is usually presented to attract public attention towards them to gain reputation among people.
Furthermore, social media also affect personal choices. Some people buy products from the internet because these are promoted by the famous people. To exemplify, some actors promote food supplements to lose weight and people make decision after watching such motivational advertisements and do not consult their doctor before using them. This, however is a detrimental attitude towards their health and sometimes it even causes adverse effects. Ergo, it should be certainly avoided.
In conclusion, media can create any kind of impression on its viewer's minds based on the content it creates. It has sometimes affected personal and political choices of individuals and could even act as an instrument for businesses promotion. Overall, its influence has been used in a negative manner to generate leverage.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
The media has become too influential in peoples lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
The communication sources are widely affecting lives of masses to a greater extent. Some individuals hold a negative opinion for such development. From my perspective, it is true and the reasons will be examined further in this essay.
To begin with, a majority of media outlets are notably spreading some sort of political agendas to get funding from political parties. They report news with partial facts to favour a political side. When people watch such content in the news they get influenced by this and vote for that party in the elections. For instance, some investigational facts are concealed by the reporters which are related to corruption cases against some popular leaders and only favourable news is shown which is usually presented to attract public attention towards them to gain reputation among people.
Furthermore, social media also affect personal choices. Some people buy products from the internet because these are promoted by the famous people. To exemplify, some actors promote food supplements to lose weight and people make decision after watching such motivational advertisements and do not consult their doctor before using them. This, however is a detrimental attitude towards their health and sometimes it even causes adverse effects. Ergo, it should be certainly avoided.
In conclusion, media can create any kind of impression on its viewer's minds based on the content it creates. It has sometimes affected personal and political choices of individuals and could even act as an instrument for businesses promotion. Overall, its influence has been used in a negative manner to generate leverage.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
The media has become too influential in peoples lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
The communication sources are widely affecting lives of masses to a greater extent. Some individuals hold a negative opinion for such development. From my perspective, it is true and the reasons will be examined further in this essay.
To begin with, a majority of media outlets are notably spreading some sort of political agendas to get funding from political parties. They report news with partial facts to favour a political side. When people watch such content in the news they get influenced by this and vote for that party in the elections. For instance, some investigational facts are concealed by the reporters which are related to corruption cases against some popular leaders and only favourable news is shown which is usually presented to attract public attention towards them to gain reputation among people.
Furthermore, social media also affect personal choices. Some people buy products from the internet because these are promoted by the famous people. To exemplify, some actors promote food supplements to lose weight and people make decision after watching such motivational advertisements and do not consult their doctor before using them. This, however is a detrimental attitude towards their health and sometimes it even causes adverse effects. Ergo, it should be certainly avoided.
In conclusion, media can create any kind of impression on its viewer's minds based on the content it creates. It has sometimes affected personal and political choices of individuals and could even act as an instrument for businesses promotion. Overall, its influence has been used in a negative manner to generate leverage.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
The media has become too influential in peoples lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
The communication sources are widely affecting lives of masses to a greater extent. Some individuals hold a negative opinion for such development. From my perspective, it is true and the reasons will be examined further in this essay.
To begin with, a majority of media outlets are notably spreading some sort of political agendas to get funding from political parties. They report news with partial facts to favour a political side. When people watch such content in the news they get influenced by this and vote for that party in the elections. For instance, some investigational facts are concealed by the reporters which are related to corruption cases against some popular leaders and only favourable news is shown which is usually presented to attract public attention towards them to gain reputation among people.
Furthermore, social media also affect personal choices. Some people buy products from the internet because these are promoted by the famous people. To exemplify, some actors promote food supplements to lose weight and people make decision after watching such motivational advertisements and do not consult their doctor before using them. This, however is a detrimental attitude towards their health and sometimes it even causes adverse effects. Ergo, it should be certainly avoided.
In conclusion, media can create any kind of impression on its viewer's minds based on the content it creates. It has sometimes affected personal and political choices of individuals and could even act as an instrument for businesses promotion. Overall, its influence has been used in a negative manner to generate leverage.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Many countries are experiencing population growth, and need to build more homes. Some say that new homes should constructed in existing cities while others argues that new towns should be built to accommodate the growing population. What are the advantages and disadvantages of these point of view
Anwser:
Unquestionably, every coin has two sides and so are the people. Society divided into two groups and therefore, choosing new site for construction of housing with increasing new-born generation has become a topic of debate among people. This essay will compare and contrast both of opinions with each positive and negative reasons.
Initiating with the points supporting idea of using remaining cites for extra houses, firstly, there is no need for extra fund to settle additional land site. Manipulating new housing foundation inquires high budget for designing fields and consuming materials for constructions, but it can be cost effective if they use existing cities. Secondly, their locations are already familiar to people, so populations may be possible to connect with present citizen with geographically near and convenient location to share facilities and surroundings.
On the other hand, It can shrink main cities, for example, Seoul, the capitol of Korea has problem of exaggerated concentration of new buildings which can cause increased traffic jam and gap between urban and rural areas.
On contrasting side, people who agreed with evolving new site for new born homes say that it can loosen geographical tension of present cities and develop facilities which more fit with new generations such as technologically advanced schools and hospitals. While, it also had side effects that during the process of choosing additional areas, an ambiguous criteria can lead to unreasonable competition between cities, because new development can create another financial benefits for them.
In conclusion to the above statement, neither its pros can be neglected nor its cons. It is a mixed bags of positives and negatives. In my opinion, the statement should not be underestimated while we are facing future generations’ problems.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Many countries are experiencing population growth, and need to build more homes. Some say that new homes should constructed in existing cities while others argues that new towns should be built to accommodate the growing population. What are the advantages and disadvantages of these point of view
Anwser:
Unquestionably, every coin has two sides and so are the people. Society divided into two groups and therefore, choosing new site for construction of housing with increasing new-born generation has become a topic of debate among people. This essay will compare and contrast both of opinions with each positive and negative reasons.
Initiating with the points supporting idea of using remaining cites for extra houses, firstly, there is no need for extra fund to settle additional land site. Manipulating new housing foundation inquires high budget for designing fields and consuming materials for constructions, but it can be cost effective if they use existing cities. Secondly, their locations are already familiar to people, so populations may be possible to connect with present citizen with geographically near and convenient location to share facilities and surroundings.
On the other hand, It can shrink main cities, for example, Seoul, the capitol of Korea has problem of exaggerated concentration of new buildings which can cause increased traffic jam and gap between urban and rural areas.
On contrasting side, people who agreed with evolving new site for new born homes say that it can loosen geographical tension of present cities and develop facilities which more fit with new generations such as technologically advanced schools and hospitals. While, it also had side effects that during the process of choosing additional areas, an ambiguous criteria can lead to unreasonable competition between cities, because new development can create another financial benefits for them.
In conclusion to the above statement, neither its pros can be neglected nor its cons. It is a mixed bags of positives and negatives. In my opinion, the statement should not be underestimated while we are facing future generations’ problems.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Many countries are experiencing population growth, and need to build more homes. Some say that new homes should constructed in existing cities while others argues that new towns should be built to accommodate the growing population. What are the advantages and disadvantages of these point of view
Anwser:
Unquestionably, every coin has two sides and so are the people. Society divided into two groups and therefore, choosing new site for construction of housing with increasing new-born generation has become a topic of debate among people. This essay will compare and contrast both of opinions with each positive and negative reasons.
Initiating with the points supporting idea of using remaining cites for extra houses, firstly, there is no need for extra fund to settle additional land site. Manipulating new housing foundation inquires high budget for designing fields and consuming materials for constructions, but it can be cost effective if they use existing cities. Secondly, their locations are already familiar to people, so populations may be possible to connect with present citizen with geographically near and convenient location to share facilities and surroundings.
On the other hand, It can shrink main cities, for example, Seoul, the capitol of Korea has problem of exaggerated concentration of new buildings which can cause increased traffic jam and gap between urban and rural areas.
On contrasting side, people who agreed with evolving new site for new born homes say that it can loosen geographical tension of present cities and develop facilities which more fit with new generations such as technologically advanced schools and hospitals. While, it also had side effects that during the process of choosing additional areas, an ambiguous criteria can lead to unreasonable competition between cities, because new development can create another financial benefits for them.
In conclusion to the above statement, neither its pros can be neglected nor its cons. It is a mixed bags of positives and negatives. In my opinion, the statement should not be underestimated while we are facing future generations’ problems.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Many countries are experiencing population growth, and need to build more homes. Some say that new homes should constructed in existing cities while others argues that new towns should be built to accommodate the growing population. What are the advantages and disadvantages of these point of view
Anwser:
Unquestionably, every coin has two sides and so are the people. Society divided into two groups and therefore, choosing new site for construction of housing with increasing new-born generation has become a topic of debate among people. This essay will compare and contrast both of opinions with each positive and negative reasons.
Initiating with the points supporting idea of using remaining cites for extra houses, firstly, there is no need for extra fund to settle additional land site. Manipulating new housing foundation inquires high budget for designing fields and consuming materials for constructions, but it can be cost effective if they use existing cities. Secondly, their locations are already familiar to people, so populations may be possible to connect with present citizen with geographically near and convenient location to share facilities and surroundings.
On the other hand, It can shrink main cities, for example, Seoul, the capitol of Korea has problem of exaggerated concentration of new buildings which can cause increased traffic jam and gap between urban and rural areas.
On contrasting side, people who agreed with evolving new site for new born homes say that it can loosen geographical tension of present cities and develop facilities which more fit with new generations such as technologically advanced schools and hospitals. While, it also had side effects that during the process of choosing additional areas, an ambiguous criteria can lead to unreasonable competition between cities, because new development can create another financial benefits for them.
In conclusion to the above statement, neither its pros can be neglected nor its cons. It is a mixed bags of positives and negatives. In my opinion, the statement should not be underestimated while we are facing future generations’ problems.
Your task achievement score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Pollution is becoming a major environmental problem. What are the causes and solutions to solve this problem?
Anwser:
Pollution is the mian environmental issue. The causes of this are that factories dumping waste materials to the rivers and having too many cars running every day on the world producing C02,and the solutions are to have stronger regulations for factories to force them follow regulations and to use electrical cars to avoid producing too much gasses.
One cause of this issue is that most of the factories do not follow the law and throw materials in the rivers or the sea. This lead water contamination such as too much oild and garabage that eventually fishes might eat these. As a result, humans might get sick because of this. If this do nto stop, very soon many sea animals might be extincted. For isntance, all over the world, many tuna fishes are dangerous to eat due to too much sea contamination. Another cuase is thta there are thousands and thousands of cars running every day in the world, so all the CO2 is hurtig the air quality that many elderly people suffer from lung diseases. On top of this, many families have two cars for each person because cars are very affordable in develop countries, so this increase the air pollution.
On solution about this issue is forcing factories to respect the law by improving regulations and giving them higher fines to protect rivers and the sea. Following stronger regulations many factories might feel scared to get a fine,a nd they might think a better way to dump their waste materias. For instance, they might recycle their waste materials and re-use these oild in a different way. Another solution is that the government need to give loands away with minimal interest on it to encourage people to buy electrical cars,a nd eventualy in the near future society will have less gas cars. Ont op of this, Department of Motors and Vehicles need to cancel registrations for all people who decide to keep cars that run by gasoline.
To conclude, dumping wasting materials in the river and having too many cars running every day might be some of the causes for having issues with pollution, and some of the solutions are to give stronger fines to factories and encourage people to buy electrical cars to avoid pollution.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Pollution is becoming a major environmental problem. What are the causes and solutions to solve this problem?
Anwser:
Pollution is the mian environmental issue. The causes of this are that factories dumping waste materials to the rivers and having too many cars running every day on the world producing C02,and the solutions are to have stronger regulations for factories to force them follow regulations and to use electrical cars to avoid producing too much gasses.
One cause of this issue is that most of the factories do not follow the law and throw materials in the rivers or the sea. This lead water contamination such as too much oild and garabage that eventually fishes might eat these. As a result, humans might get sick because of this. If this do nto stop, very soon many sea animals might be extincted. For isntance, all over the world, many tuna fishes are dangerous to eat due to too much sea contamination. Another cuase is thta there are thousands and thousands of cars running every day in the world, so all the CO2 is hurtig the air quality that many elderly people suffer from lung diseases. On top of this, many families have two cars for each person because cars are very affordable in develop countries, so this increase the air pollution.
On solution about this issue is forcing factories to respect the law by improving regulations and giving them higher fines to protect rivers and the sea. Following stronger regulations many factories might feel scared to get a fine,a nd they might think a better way to dump their waste materias. For instance, they might recycle their waste materials and re-use these oild in a different way. Another solution is that the government need to give loands away with minimal interest on it to encourage people to buy electrical cars,a nd eventualy in the near future society will have less gas cars. Ont op of this, Department of Motors and Vehicles need to cancel registrations for all people who decide to keep cars that run by gasoline.
To conclude, dumping wasting materials in the river and having too many cars running every day might be some of the causes for having issues with pollution, and some of the solutions are to give stronger fines to factories and encourage people to buy electrical cars to avoid pollution.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Pollution is becoming a major environmental problem. What are the causes and solutions to solve this problem?
Anwser:
Pollution is the mian environmental issue. The causes of this are that factories dumping waste materials to the rivers and having too many cars running every day on the world producing C02,and the solutions are to have stronger regulations for factories to force them follow regulations and to use electrical cars to avoid producing too much gasses.
One cause of this issue is that most of the factories do not follow the law and throw materials in the rivers or the sea. This lead water contamination such as too much oild and garabage that eventually fishes might eat these. As a result, humans might get sick because of this. If this do nto stop, very soon many sea animals might be extincted. For isntance, all over the world, many tuna fishes are dangerous to eat due to too much sea contamination. Another cuase is thta there are thousands and thousands of cars running every day in the world, so all the CO2 is hurtig the air quality that many elderly people suffer from lung diseases. On top of this, many families have two cars for each person because cars are very affordable in develop countries, so this increase the air pollution.
On solution about this issue is forcing factories to respect the law by improving regulations and giving them higher fines to protect rivers and the sea. Following stronger regulations many factories might feel scared to get a fine,a nd they might think a better way to dump their waste materias. For instance, they might recycle their waste materials and re-use these oild in a different way. Another solution is that the government need to give loands away with minimal interest on it to encourage people to buy electrical cars,a nd eventualy in the near future society will have less gas cars. Ont op of this, Department of Motors and Vehicles need to cancel registrations for all people who decide to keep cars that run by gasoline.
To conclude, dumping wasting materials in the river and having too many cars running every day might be some of the causes for having issues with pollution, and some of the solutions are to give stronger fines to factories and encourage people to buy electrical cars to avoid pollution.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Pollution is becoming a major environmental problem. What are the causes and solutions to solve this problem?
Anwser:
Pollution is the mian environmental issue. The causes of this are that factories dumping waste materials to the rivers and having too many cars running every day on the world producing C02,and the solutions are to have stronger regulations for factories to force them follow regulations and to use electrical cars to avoid producing too much gasses.
One cause of this issue is that most of the factories do not follow the law and throw materials in the rivers or the sea. This lead water contamination such as too much oild and garabage that eventually fishes might eat these. As a result, humans might get sick because of this. If this do nto stop, very soon many sea animals might be extincted. For isntance, all over the world, many tuna fishes are dangerous to eat due to too much sea contamination. Another cuase is thta there are thousands and thousands of cars running every day in the world, so all the CO2 is hurtig the air quality that many elderly people suffer from lung diseases. On top of this, many families have two cars for each person because cars are very affordable in develop countries, so this increase the air pollution.
On solution about this issue is forcing factories to respect the law by improving regulations and giving them higher fines to protect rivers and the sea. Following stronger regulations many factories might feel scared to get a fine,a nd they might think a better way to dump their waste materias. For instance, they might recycle their waste materials and re-use these oild in a different way. Another solution is that the government need to give loands away with minimal interest on it to encourage people to buy electrical cars,a nd eventualy in the near future society will have less gas cars. Ont op of this, Department of Motors and Vehicles need to cancel registrations for all people who decide to keep cars that run by gasoline.
To conclude, dumping wasting materials in the river and having too many cars running every day might be some of the causes for having issues with pollution, and some of the solutions are to give stronger fines to factories and encourage people to buy electrical cars to avoid pollution.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
the chart below showes the avrege monthly expenditure by brithish households in three years
Anwser:
The given bar chart describes the average monthly spending that was consumed by people in the UK in three decades ( 1990 , 2000 and 2010). Units are measured in pounds sterling.
Overall , there is indisputable evidence that almost all types of expenditure were the greatest in 2010 , compared to the years 1990 and 2000 .
At first , in 1990 , renting was the most used by British people , showing about 450 sterling pounds , while utility bills were the lowest ( just under 100 ).
As far as the next decade's spendings are concerned , it is worth mentioning that renting and utility bills are the highest and lowest as they were in 1990. The former is just above 500 , whereas the latter is nearly 90 sterling of pounds.
Looking at the chart in more detail , in 2010 , renting shows the highest percentage of expenditure , illustrating 600 pounds sterling. As for the smallest proportion of spending, Residents of the UK spent 100 pounds sterling on entertainment.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
the chart below showes the avrege monthly expenditure by brithish households in three years
Anwser:
The given bar chart describes the average monthly spending that was consumed by people in the UK in three decades ( 1990 , 2000 and 2010). Units are measured in pounds sterling.
Overall , there is indisputable evidence that almost all types of expenditure were the greatest in 2010 , compared to the years 1990 and 2000 .
At first , in 1990 , renting was the most used by British people , showing about 450 sterling pounds , while utility bills were the lowest ( just under 100 ).
As far as the next decade's spendings are concerned , it is worth mentioning that renting and utility bills are the highest and lowest as they were in 1990. The former is just above 500 , whereas the latter is nearly 90 sterling of pounds.
Looking at the chart in more detail , in 2010 , renting shows the highest percentage of expenditure , illustrating 600 pounds sterling. As for the smallest proportion of spending, Residents of the UK spent 100 pounds sterling on entertainment.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
the chart below showes the avrege monthly expenditure by brithish households in three years
Anwser:
The given bar chart describes the average monthly spending that was consumed by people in the UK in three decades ( 1990 , 2000 and 2010). Units are measured in pounds sterling.
Overall , there is indisputable evidence that almost all types of expenditure were the greatest in 2010 , compared to the years 1990 and 2000 .
At first , in 1990 , renting was the most used by British people , showing about 450 sterling pounds , while utility bills were the lowest ( just under 100 ).
As far as the next decade's spendings are concerned , it is worth mentioning that renting and utility bills are the highest and lowest as they were in 1990. The former is just above 500 , whereas the latter is nearly 90 sterling of pounds.
Looking at the chart in more detail , in 2010 , renting shows the highest percentage of expenditure , illustrating 600 pounds sterling. As for the smallest proportion of spending, Residents of the UK spent 100 pounds sterling on entertainment.
Your grammatical range score is 9.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
the chart below showes the avrege monthly expenditure by brithish households in three years
Anwser:
The given bar chart describes the average monthly spending that was consumed by people in the UK in three decades ( 1990 , 2000 and 2010). Units are measured in pounds sterling.
Overall , there is indisputable evidence that almost all types of expenditure were the greatest in 2010 , compared to the years 1990 and 2000 .
At first , in 1990 , renting was the most used by British people , showing about 450 sterling pounds , while utility bills were the lowest ( just under 100 ).
As far as the next decade's spendings are concerned , it is worth mentioning that renting and utility bills are the highest and lowest as they were in 1990. The former is just above 500 , whereas the latter is nearly 90 sterling of pounds.
Looking at the chart in more detail , in 2010 , renting shows the highest percentage of expenditure , illustrating 600 pounds sterling. As for the smallest proportion of spending, Residents of the UK spent 100 pounds sterling on entertainment.
Your task achievement score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air popular. tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more Do the advantages of shopping in this way outveigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
Nowadays, people are starting to shop online, and this business model is becoming more and more common. In the near future, we might not have physical store anymore. It is agreed that digital shopping has more positive impacts than negative shortcomings. This opinion will be analyzed by discussing the time efficiency improvements from developing e-commerce, and the environmental aspects in this topic.
Firstly, the most attractive point of buying things online is it saves us time. For example, going groceries shopping usually takes me half an hour to one hour, some times even cost me over one and a half an hour. This includes driving to the supermarket, picking the ingredients, checkout, and at last, drive back home and organize things in my kitchen. However, In this present world, time is money, and we should rethink about the way we allocate our 24 hours. In this situation, doing groceries online can save us two to three hours at least per week, which is clearly providing an opportuntiy for us to make a better use of our precious time. Thus, shopping online allows us to redistribute our time and attention on more valuable tasks.
Secondly, online and offline shopping is very different in terms of logistics aspects. While physical shopping requires merchandises on site, e-commerce doesn't. For instance, in normal shopping process, a book will be passing several houseware before entering physical store, and at last brought back home by customers. However, e-commerce can save us all these shipments and send the exact amount of books directly to customer. According to researches, e-commerce reduces the emissions up to 25% per product. Therefore, chosing online shopping can decrease carbon emission and can contribute to diminishing negative impacts on climate change.
To sum up, digital commerce improves our lives in both time-efficiency and environmental aspects. Not only we are benefited from gaining extre times, but also taking an action to save our planet.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air popular. tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more Do the advantages of shopping in this way outveigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
Nowadays, people are starting to shop online, and this business model is becoming more and more common. In the near future, we might not have physical store anymore. It is agreed that digital shopping has more positive impacts than negative shortcomings. This opinion will be analyzed by discussing the time efficiency improvements from developing e-commerce, and the environmental aspects in this topic.
Firstly, the most attractive point of buying things online is it saves us time. For example, going groceries shopping usually takes me half an hour to one hour, some times even cost me over one and a half an hour. This includes driving to the supermarket, picking the ingredients, checkout, and at last, drive back home and organize things in my kitchen. However, In this present world, time is money, and we should rethink about the way we allocate our 24 hours. In this situation, doing groceries online can save us two to three hours at least per week, which is clearly providing an opportuntiy for us to make a better use of our precious time. Thus, shopping online allows us to redistribute our time and attention on more valuable tasks.
Secondly, online and offline shopping is very different in terms of logistics aspects. While physical shopping requires merchandises on site, e-commerce doesn't. For instance, in normal shopping process, a book will be passing several houseware before entering physical store, and at last brought back home by customers. However, e-commerce can save us all these shipments and send the exact amount of books directly to customer. According to researches, e-commerce reduces the emissions up to 25% per product. Therefore, chosing online shopping can decrease carbon emission and can contribute to diminishing negative impacts on climate change.
To sum up, digital commerce improves our lives in both time-efficiency and environmental aspects. Not only we are benefited from gaining extre times, but also taking an action to save our planet.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air popular. tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more Do the advantages of shopping in this way outveigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
Nowadays, people are starting to shop online, and this business model is becoming more and more common. In the near future, we might not have physical store anymore. It is agreed that digital shopping has more positive impacts than negative shortcomings. This opinion will be analyzed by discussing the time efficiency improvements from developing e-commerce, and the environmental aspects in this topic.
Firstly, the most attractive point of buying things online is it saves us time. For example, going groceries shopping usually takes me half an hour to one hour, some times even cost me over one and a half an hour. This includes driving to the supermarket, picking the ingredients, checkout, and at last, drive back home and organize things in my kitchen. However, In this present world, time is money, and we should rethink about the way we allocate our 24 hours. In this situation, doing groceries online can save us two to three hours at least per week, which is clearly providing an opportuntiy for us to make a better use of our precious time. Thus, shopping online allows us to redistribute our time and attention on more valuable tasks.
Secondly, online and offline shopping is very different in terms of logistics aspects. While physical shopping requires merchandises on site, e-commerce doesn't. For instance, in normal shopping process, a book will be passing several houseware before entering physical store, and at last brought back home by customers. However, e-commerce can save us all these shipments and send the exact amount of books directly to customer. According to researches, e-commerce reduces the emissions up to 25% per product. Therefore, chosing online shopping can decrease carbon emission and can contribute to diminishing negative impacts on climate change.
To sum up, digital commerce improves our lives in both time-efficiency and environmental aspects. Not only we are benefited from gaining extre times, but also taking an action to save our planet.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air popular. tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more Do the advantages of shopping in this way outveigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Anwser:
Nowadays, people are starting to shop online, and this business model is becoming more and more common. In the near future, we might not have physical store anymore. It is agreed that digital shopping has more positive impacts than negative shortcomings. This opinion will be analyzed by discussing the time efficiency improvements from developing e-commerce, and the environmental aspects in this topic.
Firstly, the most attractive point of buying things online is it saves us time. For example, going groceries shopping usually takes me half an hour to one hour, some times even cost me over one and a half an hour. This includes driving to the supermarket, picking the ingredients, checkout, and at last, drive back home and organize things in my kitchen. However, In this present world, time is money, and we should rethink about the way we allocate our 24 hours. In this situation, doing groceries online can save us two to three hours at least per week, which is clearly providing an opportuntiy for us to make a better use of our precious time. Thus, shopping online allows us to redistribute our time and attention on more valuable tasks.
Secondly, online and offline shopping is very different in terms of logistics aspects. While physical shopping requires merchandises on site, e-commerce doesn't. For instance, in normal shopping process, a book will be passing several houseware before entering physical store, and at last brought back home by customers. However, e-commerce can save us all these shipments and send the exact amount of books directly to customer. According to researches, e-commerce reduces the emissions up to 25% per product. Therefore, chosing online shopping can decrease carbon emission and can contribute to diminishing negative impacts on climate change.
To sum up, digital commerce improves our lives in both time-efficiency and environmental aspects. Not only we are benefited from gaining extre times, but also taking an action to save our planet.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Many retired people today are choosing to live in other countries.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Anwser:
In contemporary times, a myriad of elderly people are emigrating to other countries. In my opinion, it has certain drawbacks. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of going abroad chosen by retired people and provide a logical conclusion.
To begin, emigrating to other countries for retired people has a remarkable effect on their life quality and healthcare. Firstly, elderly people need to rest their body since they had already sacrificed themself to earn money. Furthermore, moving abroad which are available to feel relax might contribute their mindsets. This way, they are able to proceed their with life without hesitations and depression. Secondly, it is obvious that people who are over 60 age may require to special treatment. In other words, were they chosen a place providing a well-equipped hospital system, eldery individuals would stay healthy. For instance, in Denmark life expectancy for a group, including retired persons, is almost 78 age.
However, staying away from hometown has some major disadvantages, such as cultural shock, and language barrier. Initially, old individuals might be sensible about conventional things in case of some situations. That is to say, it is possible that when they inhabit in other country, they would be encounter traditional differences. For example, one research conducted by Leiden University has already proven that plenty of eldery persons living in other countries are deciding to come back to their hometown due to cultural shock. On the other hand, people want to share their troubles with others in order to find a solution, yet because of the language issue, eldery people are unlikely to share their ideas. Thus, mental circumstances of people may be affected by it. However, considered whole negative impact on retired individuals, staying in their habitat would be the best choice for them.
Consequently, although emigrating to other countries to continue life has certain positive impacts, such as facilities, and relaxation. It has an extremely negative impact on elderly people's moods and customs.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Many retired people today are choosing to live in other countries.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Anwser:
In contemporary times, a myriad of elderly people are emigrating to other countries. In my opinion, it has certain drawbacks. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of going abroad chosen by retired people and provide a logical conclusion.
To begin, emigrating to other countries for retired people has a remarkable effect on their life quality and healthcare. Firstly, elderly people need to rest their body since they had already sacrificed themself to earn money. Furthermore, moving abroad which are available to feel relax might contribute their mindsets. This way, they are able to proceed their with life without hesitations and depression. Secondly, it is obvious that people who are over 60 age may require to special treatment. In other words, were they chosen a place providing a well-equipped hospital system, eldery individuals would stay healthy. For instance, in Denmark life expectancy for a group, including retired persons, is almost 78 age.
However, staying away from hometown has some major disadvantages, such as cultural shock, and language barrier. Initially, old individuals might be sensible about conventional things in case of some situations. That is to say, it is possible that when they inhabit in other country, they would be encounter traditional differences. For example, one research conducted by Leiden University has already proven that plenty of eldery persons living in other countries are deciding to come back to their hometown due to cultural shock. On the other hand, people want to share their troubles with others in order to find a solution, yet because of the language issue, eldery people are unlikely to share their ideas. Thus, mental circumstances of people may be affected by it. However, considered whole negative impact on retired individuals, staying in their habitat would be the best choice for them.
Consequently, although emigrating to other countries to continue life has certain positive impacts, such as facilities, and relaxation. It has an extremely negative impact on elderly people's moods and customs.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Many retired people today are choosing to live in other countries.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Anwser:
In contemporary times, a myriad of elderly people are emigrating to other countries. In my opinion, it has certain drawbacks. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of going abroad chosen by retired people and provide a logical conclusion.
To begin, emigrating to other countries for retired people has a remarkable effect on their life quality and healthcare. Firstly, elderly people need to rest their body since they had already sacrificed themself to earn money. Furthermore, moving abroad which are available to feel relax might contribute their mindsets. This way, they are able to proceed their with life without hesitations and depression. Secondly, it is obvious that people who are over 60 age may require to special treatment. In other words, were they chosen a place providing a well-equipped hospital system, eldery individuals would stay healthy. For instance, in Denmark life expectancy for a group, including retired persons, is almost 78 age.
However, staying away from hometown has some major disadvantages, such as cultural shock, and language barrier. Initially, old individuals might be sensible about conventional things in case of some situations. That is to say, it is possible that when they inhabit in other country, they would be encounter traditional differences. For example, one research conducted by Leiden University has already proven that plenty of eldery persons living in other countries are deciding to come back to their hometown due to cultural shock. On the other hand, people want to share their troubles with others in order to find a solution, yet because of the language issue, eldery people are unlikely to share their ideas. Thus, mental circumstances of people may be affected by it. However, considered whole negative impact on retired individuals, staying in their habitat would be the best choice for them.
Consequently, although emigrating to other countries to continue life has certain positive impacts, such as facilities, and relaxation. It has an extremely negative impact on elderly people's moods and customs.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Many retired people today are choosing to live in other countries.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Anwser:
In contemporary times, a myriad of elderly people are emigrating to other countries. In my opinion, it has certain drawbacks. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of going abroad chosen by retired people and provide a logical conclusion.
To begin, emigrating to other countries for retired people has a remarkable effect on their life quality and healthcare. Firstly, elderly people need to rest their body since they had already sacrificed themself to earn money. Furthermore, moving abroad which are available to feel relax might contribute their mindsets. This way, they are able to proceed their with life without hesitations and depression. Secondly, it is obvious that people who are over 60 age may require to special treatment. In other words, were they chosen a place providing a well-equipped hospital system, eldery individuals would stay healthy. For instance, in Denmark life expectancy for a group, including retired persons, is almost 78 age.
However, staying away from hometown has some major disadvantages, such as cultural shock, and language barrier. Initially, old individuals might be sensible about conventional things in case of some situations. That is to say, it is possible that when they inhabit in other country, they would be encounter traditional differences. For example, one research conducted by Leiden University has already proven that plenty of eldery persons living in other countries are deciding to come back to their hometown due to cultural shock. On the other hand, people want to share their troubles with others in order to find a solution, yet because of the language issue, eldery people are unlikely to share their ideas. Thus, mental circumstances of people may be affected by it. However, considered whole negative impact on retired individuals, staying in their habitat would be the best choice for them.
Consequently, although emigrating to other countries to continue life has certain positive impacts, such as facilities, and relaxation. It has an extremely negative impact on elderly people's moods and customs.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Public transport is essential but problematic. Describe some of the problems connected to public transport and suggest some solutions.
Anwser:
Public transport such as bus, underground, tram, etc, are popular in the street, and they bring a lot of benefits to citizens. However, there are many problems with people when they use public transport. People may receive dangerous trips, bad services, and delays when they use public transport. Drivers should be careful, facilities and schedules improved to provide better service for citizens.
On the one hand, it is easy to catch a driver who does not drive carefully in his bus, and it may lead to dangerous accidents nowadays. Because of outsourcing of drivers, a lot of public transport companies have to hire new drivers who are quite young and do not have lots of experience in driving. To handle the problem, public transport companies should provide better training for their drivers before driving passengers. Moreover, there are many old facilities in the buses and undergrounds that make passengers feel bad when using them. For example, there are a lot of old seats in the bus which have dack colors, and passengers do not want to use them.
On the other hand, public transport companies received many complaints about the delay of schedules for citizens. Passengers have to face the problem that they can be late anytime. For example, In my last exam in the second semester in college, I was late due to the delayed schedule of the bus. The schedule should be improved by using AI or better technologies to help passengers' lives.
In conclusion, There are a lot of problems when using public transport like dangerous trips, bad services, and delays. Therefore, Public Transport companies should train the driver, improve the facilities and schedule to provide the best service for their passengers.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Public transport is essential but problematic. Describe some of the problems connected to public transport and suggest some solutions.
Anwser:
Public transport such as bus, underground, tram, etc, are popular in the street, and they bring a lot of benefits to citizens. However, there are many problems with people when they use public transport. People may receive dangerous trips, bad services, and delays when they use public transport. Drivers should be careful, facilities and schedules improved to provide better service for citizens.
On the one hand, it is easy to catch a driver who does not drive carefully in his bus, and it may lead to dangerous accidents nowadays. Because of outsourcing of drivers, a lot of public transport companies have to hire new drivers who are quite young and do not have lots of experience in driving. To handle the problem, public transport companies should provide better training for their drivers before driving passengers. Moreover, there are many old facilities in the buses and undergrounds that make passengers feel bad when using them. For example, there are a lot of old seats in the bus which have dack colors, and passengers do not want to use them.
On the other hand, public transport companies received many complaints about the delay of schedules for citizens. Passengers have to face the problem that they can be late anytime. For example, In my last exam in the second semester in college, I was late due to the delayed schedule of the bus. The schedule should be improved by using AI or better technologies to help passengers' lives.
In conclusion, There are a lot of problems when using public transport like dangerous trips, bad services, and delays. Therefore, Public Transport companies should train the driver, improve the facilities and schedule to provide the best service for their passengers.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Public transport is essential but problematic. Describe some of the problems connected to public transport and suggest some solutions.
Anwser:
Public transport such as bus, underground, tram, etc, are popular in the street, and they bring a lot of benefits to citizens. However, there are many problems with people when they use public transport. People may receive dangerous trips, bad services, and delays when they use public transport. Drivers should be careful, facilities and schedules improved to provide better service for citizens.
On the one hand, it is easy to catch a driver who does not drive carefully in his bus, and it may lead to dangerous accidents nowadays. Because of outsourcing of drivers, a lot of public transport companies have to hire new drivers who are quite young and do not have lots of experience in driving. To handle the problem, public transport companies should provide better training for their drivers before driving passengers. Moreover, there are many old facilities in the buses and undergrounds that make passengers feel bad when using them. For example, there are a lot of old seats in the bus which have dack colors, and passengers do not want to use them.
On the other hand, public transport companies received many complaints about the delay of schedules for citizens. Passengers have to face the problem that they can be late anytime. For example, In my last exam in the second semester in college, I was late due to the delayed schedule of the bus. The schedule should be improved by using AI or better technologies to help passengers' lives.
In conclusion, There are a lot of problems when using public transport like dangerous trips, bad services, and delays. Therefore, Public Transport companies should train the driver, improve the facilities and schedule to provide the best service for their passengers.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Public transport is essential but problematic. Describe some of the problems connected to public transport and suggest some solutions.
Anwser:
Public transport such as bus, underground, tram, etc, are popular in the street, and they bring a lot of benefits to citizens. However, there are many problems with people when they use public transport. People may receive dangerous trips, bad services, and delays when they use public transport. Drivers should be careful, facilities and schedules improved to provide better service for citizens.
On the one hand, it is easy to catch a driver who does not drive carefully in his bus, and it may lead to dangerous accidents nowadays. Because of outsourcing of drivers, a lot of public transport companies have to hire new drivers who are quite young and do not have lots of experience in driving. To handle the problem, public transport companies should provide better training for their drivers before driving passengers. Moreover, there are many old facilities in the buses and undergrounds that make passengers feel bad when using them. For example, there are a lot of old seats in the bus which have dack colors, and passengers do not want to use them.
On the other hand, public transport companies received many complaints about the delay of schedules for citizens. Passengers have to face the problem that they can be late anytime. For example, In my last exam in the second semester in college, I was late due to the delayed schedule of the bus. The schedule should be improved by using AI or better technologies to help passengers' lives.
In conclusion, There are a lot of problems when using public transport like dangerous trips, bad services, and delays. Therefore, Public Transport companies should train the driver, improve the facilities and schedule to provide the best service for their passengers.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Public transport is essential but problematic. Describe some of problems connected to public transport and suggest some solutions.
Anwser:
Many public transportation systems are available these days, which people choose according to their convenience. By using public transport, a lot of issues occurred. I will explain the issues and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are a plethora of issues while using public transportation. Firstly, cleanliness issues are most common, we see in buses or trains where people eat and throw remaining stuff inside the vehicles. Moreover, Due to the crowd of people, there is no guarantee that some of them will be sick and able to transfer to others. Secondly, crimes are the biggest problem, snatchers take advantage of crowds and steal money as well. Thus, travelling by public transportation is not safe.
On the other hand, the support of the government and imposing some regulations and fines can solve these issues. To explain, there should be penalties, if people are not following their obligations and throw garbage or waste in their vehicles. Furthermore, authorities need to set up security cameras in each vehicle and station so that it helps to prevent crimes and can catch the snatchers as well. Therefore, these rules should be mandatory for everyone to follow this to settle these problems.
In conclusion, these problems can be solved by setting up some rules and then following them with the endorsement of the government.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Public transport is essential but problematic. Describe some of problems connected to public transport and suggest some solutions.
Anwser:
Many public transportation systems are available these days, which people choose according to their convenience. By using public transport, a lot of issues occurred. I will explain the issues and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are a plethora of issues while using public transportation. Firstly, cleanliness issues are most common, we see in buses or trains where people eat and throw remaining stuff inside the vehicles. Moreover, Due to the crowd of people, there is no guarantee that some of them will be sick and able to transfer to others. Secondly, crimes are the biggest problem, snatchers take advantage of crowds and steal money as well. Thus, travelling by public transportation is not safe.
On the other hand, the support of the government and imposing some regulations and fines can solve these issues. To explain, there should be penalties, if people are not following their obligations and throw garbage or waste in their vehicles. Furthermore, authorities need to set up security cameras in each vehicle and station so that it helps to prevent crimes and can catch the snatchers as well. Therefore, these rules should be mandatory for everyone to follow this to settle these problems.
In conclusion, these problems can be solved by setting up some rules and then following them with the endorsement of the government.
Your lexical resource score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Public transport is essential but problematic. Describe some of problems connected to public transport and suggest some solutions.
Anwser:
Many public transportation systems are available these days, which people choose according to their convenience. By using public transport, a lot of issues occurred. I will explain the issues and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are a plethora of issues while using public transportation. Firstly, cleanliness issues are most common, we see in buses or trains where people eat and throw remaining stuff inside the vehicles. Moreover, Due to the crowd of people, there is no guarantee that some of them will be sick and able to transfer to others. Secondly, crimes are the biggest problem, snatchers take advantage of crowds and steal money as well. Thus, travelling by public transportation is not safe.
On the other hand, the support of the government and imposing some regulations and fines can solve these issues. To explain, there should be penalties, if people are not following their obligations and throw garbage or waste in their vehicles. Furthermore, authorities need to set up security cameras in each vehicle and station so that it helps to prevent crimes and can catch the snatchers as well. Therefore, these rules should be mandatory for everyone to follow this to settle these problems.
In conclusion, these problems can be solved by setting up some rules and then following them with the endorsement of the government.
Your grammatical range score is 8.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Public transport is essential but problematic. Describe some of problems connected to public transport and suggest some solutions.
Anwser:
Many public transportation systems are available these days, which people choose according to their convenience. By using public transport, a lot of issues occurred. I will explain the issues and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are a plethora of issues while using public transportation. Firstly, cleanliness issues are most common, we see in buses or trains where people eat and throw remaining stuff inside the vehicles. Moreover, Due to the crowd of people, there is no guarantee that some of them will be sick and able to transfer to others. Secondly, crimes are the biggest problem, snatchers take advantage of crowds and steal money as well. Thus, travelling by public transportation is not safe.
On the other hand, the support of the government and imposing some regulations and fines can solve these issues. To explain, there should be penalties, if people are not following their obligations and throw garbage or waste in their vehicles. Furthermore, authorities need to set up security cameras in each vehicle and station so that it helps to prevent crimes and can catch the snatchers as well. Therefore, these rules should be mandatory for everyone to follow this to settle these problems.
In conclusion, these problems can be solved by setting up some rules and then following them with the endorsement of the government.
Your task achievement score is 6.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In certain nations, parents have high academic expectations for their children, resulting in limited leisure time. What could be the potential benefits and drawbacks of this for children and the society that are part of?
Anwser:
Parents encourage their children to focus more on their curriculum and they reduce their free time to join any other activities. This trend has some upsides and downsides which will be examined further in this essay.
Primarily, the reason why parents feel the need to reduce the leisure period for their wards is due to negligence their kids show towards study because of some distractions of Smartphone or Television. If parents have to ensure that their kid performs well in the academics then they only allow them a fewer breaks. The benefit of this approach is that kids become more competitive and serious for their studies. Subsequently, this process generates more highly trained professionals for a country. For instance, in India there are competitive examinations held to provide entrance admissions only to some qualifying candidates. If someone performs well in the exams then he could take part in high-class educational researches done by the Institutions. As a result, an individual can become highly trained professional.
On the contrary, if kids are not provided some leisure time they could turn into some boring monotonous creatures. The creative instinct might get diminished to a primitive level which is a special characteristic of a human mind. The world needs more innovative individuals who could help transformation in their surroundings. To exemplify, Albert Einstein, a great scientist had no ability to remember historical facts but was smart enough to contribute with his innovations to the society. Hence, the world needs more inventions not the test takers.
To conclude, enforcing high standards on children for the academic results might ensure them a great job however it cannot be counted as an extraordinary contribution. A person needs to invent something which is not possible with just academic performance. So, some time should be allotted for kids to develop their creativity.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In certain nations, parents have high academic expectations for their children, resulting in limited leisure time. What could be the potential benefits and drawbacks of this for children and the society that are part of?
Anwser:
Parents encourage their children to focus more on their curriculum and they reduce their free time to join any other activities. This trend has some upsides and downsides which will be examined further in this essay.
Primarily, the reason why parents feel the need to reduce the leisure period for their wards is due to negligence their kids show towards study because of some distractions of Smartphone or Television. If parents have to ensure that their kid performs well in the academics then they only allow them a fewer breaks. The benefit of this approach is that kids become more competitive and serious for their studies. Subsequently, this process generates more highly trained professionals for a country. For instance, in India there are competitive examinations held to provide entrance admissions only to some qualifying candidates. If someone performs well in the exams then he could take part in high-class educational researches done by the Institutions. As a result, an individual can become highly trained professional.
On the contrary, if kids are not provided some leisure time they could turn into some boring monotonous creatures. The creative instinct might get diminished to a primitive level which is a special characteristic of a human mind. The world needs more innovative individuals who could help transformation in their surroundings. To exemplify, Albert Einstein, a great scientist had no ability to remember historical facts but was smart enough to contribute with his innovations to the society. Hence, the world needs more inventions not the test takers.
To conclude, enforcing high standards on children for the academic results might ensure them a great job however it cannot be counted as an extraordinary contribution. A person needs to invent something which is not possible with just academic performance. So, some time should be allotted for kids to develop their creativity.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In certain nations, parents have high academic expectations for their children, resulting in limited leisure time. What could be the potential benefits and drawbacks of this for children and the society that are part of?
Anwser:
Parents encourage their children to focus more on their curriculum and they reduce their free time to join any other activities. This trend has some upsides and downsides which will be examined further in this essay.
Primarily, the reason why parents feel the need to reduce the leisure period for their wards is due to negligence their kids show towards study because of some distractions of Smartphone or Television. If parents have to ensure that their kid performs well in the academics then they only allow them a fewer breaks. The benefit of this approach is that kids become more competitive and serious for their studies. Subsequently, this process generates more highly trained professionals for a country. For instance, in India there are competitive examinations held to provide entrance admissions only to some qualifying candidates. If someone performs well in the exams then he could take part in high-class educational researches done by the Institutions. As a result, an individual can become highly trained professional.
On the contrary, if kids are not provided some leisure time they could turn into some boring monotonous creatures. The creative instinct might get diminished to a primitive level which is a special characteristic of a human mind. The world needs more innovative individuals who could help transformation in their surroundings. To exemplify, Albert Einstein, a great scientist had no ability to remember historical facts but was smart enough to contribute with his innovations to the society. Hence, the world needs more inventions not the test takers.
To conclude, enforcing high standards on children for the academic results might ensure them a great job however it cannot be counted as an extraordinary contribution. A person needs to invent something which is not possible with just academic performance. So, some time should be allotted for kids to develop their creativity.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In certain nations, parents have high academic expectations for their children, resulting in limited leisure time. What could be the potential benefits and drawbacks of this for children and the society that are part of?
Anwser:
Parents encourage their children to focus more on their curriculum and they reduce their free time to join any other activities. This trend has some upsides and downsides which will be examined further in this essay.
Primarily, the reason why parents feel the need to reduce the leisure period for their wards is due to negligence their kids show towards study because of some distractions of Smartphone or Television. If parents have to ensure that their kid performs well in the academics then they only allow them a fewer breaks. The benefit of this approach is that kids become more competitive and serious for their studies. Subsequently, this process generates more highly trained professionals for a country. For instance, in India there are competitive examinations held to provide entrance admissions only to some qualifying candidates. If someone performs well in the exams then he could take part in high-class educational researches done by the Institutions. As a result, an individual can become highly trained professional.
On the contrary, if kids are not provided some leisure time they could turn into some boring monotonous creatures. The creative instinct might get diminished to a primitive level which is a special characteristic of a human mind. The world needs more innovative individuals who could help transformation in their surroundings. To exemplify, Albert Einstein, a great scientist had no ability to remember historical facts but was smart enough to contribute with his innovations to the society. Hence, the world needs more inventions not the test takers.
To conclude, enforcing high standards on children for the academic results might ensure them a great job however it cannot be counted as an extraordinary contribution. A person needs to invent something which is not possible with just academic performance. So, some time should be allotted for kids to develop their creativity.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
To what extent do you agree and/or disagree?
Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money.
Anwser:
It is thought by some that the aim of working among individuals is solely for financial rewarding. Although I accept that some employees take extra hours in work only to obtain more money,I believe that the purpose of this tendency among people is to lay the groundwork for their future and escape form long-term dependency.
On the one hand,as some,especially those who have limited budget cannot make a living or cannot afford to pay for basic necessities,the main desire among them can be to obtain more salary.For example,there are many people who have many responsibilities such as raising their children or supporting their families do not have enough money to pay for their minors' education or other necessities and consequently,they can devote their time to work solely to gain more money.
On the other hand,I consider that the primary aim of taking additional hours in work is that they can want to build their lives and contemplate on their future.They dedicate themselves to their work as much as they can and want to gain more experience as well as becoming knowledgeable in their occupations.These valuable experiences can help to them run their own business and escape from long-term dependency,which create a sense of fulfillment among them.For example, in many developing countries , employees procure low salary and by working hard,they want to get experience and these experiences can lead to better opportunities for them and as a consequence,they can live autonomously without relying on salary.
Taking everything into account,while those who have limited budget can have a desire for solely gaining money by working more than normal,I believe that the main aim among them can be to escape from dependency and have a better lifestyle.
Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
To what extent do you agree and/or disagree?
Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money.
Anwser:
It is thought by some that the aim of working among individuals is solely for financial rewarding. Although I accept that some employees take extra hours in work only to obtain more money,I believe that the purpose of this tendency among people is to lay the groundwork for their future and escape form long-term dependency.
On the one hand,as some,especially those who have limited budget cannot make a living or cannot afford to pay for basic necessities,the main desire among them can be to obtain more salary.For example,there are many people who have many responsibilities such as raising their children or supporting their families do not have enough money to pay for their minors' education or other necessities and consequently,they can devote their time to work solely to gain more money.
On the other hand,I consider that the primary aim of taking additional hours in work is that they can want to build their lives and contemplate on their future.They dedicate themselves to their work as much as they can and want to gain more experience as well as becoming knowledgeable in their occupations.These valuable experiences can help to them run their own business and escape from long-term dependency,which create a sense of fulfillment among them.For example, in many developing countries , employees procure low salary and by working hard,they want to get experience and these experiences can lead to better opportunities for them and as a consequence,they can live autonomously without relying on salary.
Taking everything into account,while those who have limited budget can have a desire for solely gaining money by working more than normal,I believe that the main aim among them can be to escape from dependency and have a better lifestyle.
Your lexical resource score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
To what extent do you agree and/or disagree?
Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money.
Anwser:
It is thought by some that the aim of working among individuals is solely for financial rewarding. Although I accept that some employees take extra hours in work only to obtain more money,I believe that the purpose of this tendency among people is to lay the groundwork for their future and escape form long-term dependency.
On the one hand,as some,especially those who have limited budget cannot make a living or cannot afford to pay for basic necessities,the main desire among them can be to obtain more salary.For example,there are many people who have many responsibilities such as raising their children or supporting their families do not have enough money to pay for their minors' education or other necessities and consequently,they can devote their time to work solely to gain more money.
On the other hand,I consider that the primary aim of taking additional hours in work is that they can want to build their lives and contemplate on their future.They dedicate themselves to their work as much as they can and want to gain more experience as well as becoming knowledgeable in their occupations.These valuable experiences can help to them run their own business and escape from long-term dependency,which create a sense of fulfillment among them.For example, in many developing countries , employees procure low salary and by working hard,they want to get experience and these experiences can lead to better opportunities for them and as a consequence,they can live autonomously without relying on salary.
Taking everything into account,while those who have limited budget can have a desire for solely gaining money by working more than normal,I believe that the main aim among them can be to escape from dependency and have a better lifestyle.
Your grammatical range score is 4.0 |
You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
To what extent do you agree and/or disagree?
Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money.
Anwser:
It is thought by some that the aim of working among individuals is solely for financial rewarding. Although I accept that some employees take extra hours in work only to obtain more money,I believe that the purpose of this tendency among people is to lay the groundwork for their future and escape form long-term dependency.
On the one hand,as some,especially those who have limited budget cannot make a living or cannot afford to pay for basic necessities,the main desire among them can be to obtain more salary.For example,there are many people who have many responsibilities such as raising their children or supporting their families do not have enough money to pay for their minors' education or other necessities and consequently,they can devote their time to work solely to gain more money.
On the other hand,I consider that the primary aim of taking additional hours in work is that they can want to build their lives and contemplate on their future.They dedicate themselves to their work as much as they can and want to gain more experience as well as becoming knowledgeable in their occupations.These valuable experiences can help to them run their own business and escape from long-term dependency,which create a sense of fulfillment among them.For example, in many developing countries , employees procure low salary and by working hard,they want to get experience and these experiences can lead to better opportunities for them and as a consequence,they can live autonomously without relying on salary.
Taking everything into account,while those who have limited budget can have a desire for solely gaining money by working more than normal,I believe that the main aim among them can be to escape from dependency and have a better lifestyle.
Your task achievement score is 7.0 |