tasksource/argument-feedback · Datasets at Hugging Face

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ada3fc19c9bf	399030918355	I was 18 before arriving in Greece,but I was heading to Greece with 335 horses, and loads of hay and oats to feed the horses with	Evidence	Ineffective
0485e5a05b00	399030918355	I told them about giving out horses in Greece, and the time I toured other incredible sites like an excavated caslte in Crete.	Evidence	Adequate
efd9b5676379	399030918355	After being out of breath from persuading them to sign up, I thought that it was worth being out of breath. Now Don Reist and I have twenty extra helpers for our future trips to spots all over the world, and new friends to tell stories with.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
7f01bb11d5c7	39AF0292F9B3	Schools are places where kids end up spending the majority of their childhood in. Most kids end up disliking school for one reason or another, while others might love school. To have the ability to know how a child is feeling and map their patters can become useful in more ways than one.	Lead	Effective
a4086854e840	39AF0292F9B3	The use of reading a students emotions is valuable in many ways	Position	Effective
4fc14910397a	39AF0292F9B3	helping with possible depression	Claim	Effective
85f45b245fd0	39AF0292F9B3	enhancing the material	Claim	Effective
ae3aae8e97a4	39AF0292F9B3	creating a better enviroment.	Claim	Effective
fd08c7ebf869	39AF0292F9B3	School can be a stressful time for many students and also a time of growth. Especially in high school and even middle school, the childs body is going through puberty. This chemical change in the body can lead to mood swings and other issues especially when school stress is added on top. This technology is capable of indicating "...the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one"(paragraph 7).	Evidence	Effective
e947c266cdf3	39AF0292F9B3	With the aid of this technology the school can help students before they develope mental illnesses like depression that often go unseen due to hiding true emotion.	Claim	Effective
d466b2ca2efb	39AF0292F9B3	Also, in many schools students usually find the learning material to be sub par or boring in many cases. However with the aid of this technology "a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored" (paragraph 6). If a teacher was able to pin point when exactly a lesson becomes boring it would majorly help with being able to reconstruct it as well	Evidence	Effective
c4ab1af791df	39AF0292F9B3	For difficult classes being able to know when the students are lost would help significantly in increasing the understanding of the material as teachers will be able to know exactly what the students dont understand, and thus be able to help them achieve better grades.	Claim	Effective
6695c2d175a7	39AF0292F9B3	Being able to understand students emotions in a learning enviroment can also help with improving the school overall.	Claim	Effective
d575e8eaf2b2	39AF0292F9B3	SInce the technology would be able to understand the basic emotions like "...happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness" (paragraph 3), this can give a school tons of feedback on how to improve. For example, with negative emotions, a school would be able to improve its cafeteria food quality from knowing what foods are highly unpopular, and as a result save food from wasting. Or during school events, even though the event might be a success knowing how each of the students felt about the event would help with improving it for next year. The addition of this technology would allow a school to be the best the possibly could.	Evidence	Effective
c6c3c36b8c63	39AF0292F9B3	The addition of this facial technology can be quite revolutionary in a school setting. As students often dont share their true feelings, issues can be confronted and the students mentality can be improved. Also a better, and positive learning enviroment can be created. The ability to remove student confusion and make learning interesting would go a long way in helping not only the students grow and move forward positivly, but also the school as a whole.	Concluding Statement	Effective
e0a0d54aee6d	39BA457D842C	Venus may have some dangers	Lead	Ineffective
9d0db0441b71	39BA457D842C	The author think's venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.	Position	Adequate
63985d07bc7f	39BA457D842C	Here are some things you should know about Venus	Claim	Ineffective
9cc00caea054	39BA457D842C	Venus may be called " Evening Star ". The Evening star is one of the brightest point of light in the sky. Even though Venus is called a Star it's actually a planet. Venus is the secound planet from the sun. It being close to the sun makes it hard to examine closely.	Evidence	Ineffective
d8d7cd136685	39BA457D842C	Venus may be very challenging to get around or to beable to find more out about	Claim	Adequate
685ec865fb0f	39BA457D842C	Venus is the closest to the earth. Venus is like a cloud-draped world. One of the dangers of Venus is it being cloud-draped because humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on Venus. No spacecraft lasted the landing more than a few hour if that.	Evidence	Adequate
e68689855e1c	39BA457D842C	A reason Venus is a dangerous place is the atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide.	Claim	Adequate
9adf081c208a	39BA457D842C	Venus has challenging clouds that are highly corrosive sulfuric acid. The temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we feel on our own planet. How we know this informaiton can help understand that the author thinks venus has some dangers on it. For example , " These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth ; such an enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. "	Evidence	Adequate
3a257b6f65dd	39BA457D842C	Venus would be a worthy pursuit depite the dangers because Venus was once the most Earth-like planet in the solar system.	Claim	Adequate
4d1c8cf4c397	39BA457D842C	Venus used to be covered with largely oceans and may have supported various forms of life. To this day Venus has some features that are analogous to those on earth. Venus surface is a rocky sediment. Venus also has some familiar features such as valleys , moutains and craters.	Evidence	Adequate
d47dac0905fa	39BA457D842C	This concludes how the author think's that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Venus may be harmful to humans but at one point Venus was just like our home. Venus once has forms of life like we do today on planet earth. Venus might be something interesting but the danger's is what keep's us from landing.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
9ad96fa7ca65	3A23BC10DD8C	I am going to tell you the reasons Luke joined the program	Position	Ineffective
c14f78b6bc29	3A23BC10DD8C	One is "he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime".	Claim	Adequate
0e7f851fe8d6	3A23BC10DD8C	"luke also found time to have fun on board.	Claim	Adequate
ca923486d048	3A23BC10DD8C	a great opportunity of a lifetime to join the program.	Claim	Adequate
fc323bdc0716	3A23BC10DD8C	Well my first reason is Luke bomberger had no idea that his life would change soon after his high school graduation. second is But being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger it opened up the world to him. One more reason is that he said"I'm grateful for the opportunity"he says. Both of thoses reasons suport why he thought it was a great opportunity.	Evidence	Adequate
4e9cfd4fa528	3A23BC10DD8C	he also found time to have fun on board especally on return trips after the animals had been unloaded.	Claim	Adequate
1a27fdb9b374	3A23BC10DD8C	One peice of evidence is "Table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling,and games also helped pass the time". My second peice of evidence is "Luke also toured an excavated castle in crete and marveled at the panama canal on his way to china.	Evidence	Adequate
d92b00af25cb	3A23BC10DD8C	both of thoses statemeants help me answer question. Which is why he joined the program. Both of my reasons were it was great opportunity of a lifetime and Luke was also able to have freetime found time to have fun on board.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
a4deffbf9f4a	3A40FAC3D585	The face is just a natural landform	Position	Adequate
b49afbd276cf	3A40FAC3D585	nobody lives on Mars it's just a empty planet. They NASA says that the face on Mars had became a pop icon but i don't think that just because NASA has images that it's ture. You can't always believe people.	Evidence	Ineffective
083e1ecae1db	3A40FAC3D585	Although few scientists believed the Face wan an alien artifact, Some People think the Face is bona fide evidenve og life on Mars. Evidence that NASA would rathr hide, lets say conspiracy theorists. The caption noted that the rock formation resembles a human head, formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth. This would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.	Evidence	Ineffective
52150c6abb12	3A40FAC3D585	Many people thought that is was an alien momument, but on April 5, 1998 Mars Globsl Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time. A Man named Micheal Malin and his Mars Oribter Camera team wanted to prove that there were no aliens. Him and his team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos	Evidence	Adequate
bde6c3ba2202	3A40FAC3D585	People should have been satisfied with knowing that there wasn't an alien monument after all.	Claim	Adequate
6728de44be8d	3A40FAC3D585	Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001 the Mars Global Surveyor drew closer for a second look. They has to rool the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view to get the picture. Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the cameras mamimum resolution. In the 2001 image each pixel span 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the 2976 Viking original.	Evidence	Adequate
dbeb940a5bec	3A40FAC3D585	I think that the researchers shouldn't be having to look seversl times just to prove certain people wrong. If they don't believe then they need to go to Mars for themselves. It'd great that they got the comparsion but they went through trouble to get there. It was not an easy target. In face, it's hard work.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
69323ddbbf11	3A46013B0369	Today many people are using technology for many reasons but there is one piece of technology that has been used a lot more recently. The smartphone or mobile phone, many people think that it is not that dangerous but it is as dangerous as most things that can damage or hurt people just not as much. As it can hurt people in many ways the most severe way is to be in a car accident just by looking at a phone for even a second. Not only could that person hurt themself but whomever else is in the car or the person they have crashed into. If it is such a bad way to drive why don't people stop looking at their phones while driving?	Lead	Adequate
075ee118c0cd	3A46013B0369	Well many people are worried about how their social status is doing and how their friend's day is rather than their safety.	Claim	Adequate
049b7521f4c7	3A46013B0369	So even if the majority of people were to stop there would always be that other percent who don't care. Although drivers should not they would still need their phones for GPS. Many states already have this situation classified as illegal but some states do not. Even if they were to turn the sound some people may not know where 1/2 miles to turn is.	Evidence	Adequate
929b9bda9fa0	3A46013B0369	There are consequences to driving with a person on his or her phone but in some states they should not even if there should be.	Evidence	Ineffective
69ea7777a173	3A46013B0369	It should be illegal to drive using their phones.	Position	Adequate
cc5cb4f00732	3A46013B0369	People who drive with phones should get a ticket and they should have to pay the fine or they would get jail time.	Claim	Adequate
ba1b6b597904	3A46013B0369	Many people do not realise just how dangerous not looking at their surroundings are when driving a car. People have to worry about cars coming or going or when they have to stop, go or even yield.	Evidence	Adequate
cd5ab88179b7	3A46013B0369	It is known that when drivers get on the road there is a risk of crashing by the car or the person's actions so why make that percentage higher.	Claim	Adequate
1e13deac1b17	3A46013B0369	Also risk not only themselves but other people. It is just not right and not fair for other people they could have potentially hurt or damage their possessions.	Evidence	Adequate
876dcc453d57	3A46013B0369	Cell Phones carry A lot of information like the weather or the news and mainly social media. What someone is doing or how they are doing are important to their friends. Many people would agree that these reasons cause them to look at their cell phones	Evidence	Adequate
b1d7fc52afc8	3A46013B0369	And would convince other people to stop or text them before they drive to say that they are not going to be responding while they drive.	Claim	Adequate
65cde62e43f8	3A46013B0369	Many people drive while using their cellular devices and it causes problems for many people. It is illegal in some states and some in not but even in the illegal states people still do it knowing they could cause damage to someone or themselves or even pay a fine. It should be illegal anywhere so people can think about whether or not they want to get a ticket. People should stop to think that they may make someone's day worse. People should just stop using their phones while driving in general but not everyone chooses to do it.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
8710a706575b	3A7412AECF21	The use of tecnology reading your face is a bad idale for some things but not all things. Emotions are what humans have. The Facial coding system enables computer to read face exspreshions like happy ,sad,frown,fear,disgust,anger,and suprise	Lead	Adequate
3bb6376aeff4	3A7412AECF21	The Coding system should not be on every ones computer becuse some people hate adds and the system would just keep showing diffent ones each time.	Evidence	Adequate
ad85f78b066f	3A7412AECF21	On the Facial Action Coding System would not be bad if you could shut it off and on other then it being on non stop all day tring to read your face.	Claim	Adequate
c7869b7d9db9	3A7412AECF21	The program would be alsome to look at old pitures to see if they were happy or what not	Claim	Ineffective
5e950840d51b	3A7412AECF21	the program makes a 3-D face that has all 44 major muscles in the model . It has to move like a human face dose.	Evidence	Ineffective
5ba0b9e453df	3A7412AECF21	The Facial Action Coding Systm would be cool if the creater could make it read other creachers like cat or a dog for we could see how they feel	Claim	Adequate
21ee51da5437	3A7412AECF21	cats wag there tail but my cat is happy when he wags his tail what dose that mean than? My dog growls when he vplays what dose it mean? Maby later on they can move on from human faces to other animal faces.	Evidence	Adequate
a4f84df0aab5	3A7412AECF21	Dr. Paul Eckter man has alot of good idals with his program. He just needs it were the people can turn it on and off othere than being on all the time. like how when some people are angry they turn tv on or funny videos. That could turnout to becume disaster.	Evidence	Adequate
e587123028c5	3A7412AECF21	The Facial Action Coding System is a good idal for school work for if the student would get bord it could change there studing ways up or class room asiments.	Claim	Adequate
a1f454b32a9a	3A7412AECF21	The program could read diffent shown emotions in the program. In fact us human perform the same impresive caculation every day. The "Making Mona Lisa Smile" was neat to see what the program had to say. The Facial Action Coding System read the Mona Lisa painting and it said she was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted,6 percent fearful,and 2 percent angry.	Evidence	Ineffective
23ab9bce5a87	3A7412AECF21	The Facial Acting Coding System is a great program and in time it could read how humans feel and animals in the future.	Position	Adequate
835d67db4a70	3A7412AECF21	I think it will be a great program for computer to have. As long as you can turn them on and off at times. It would be a good way to get rid of adds. Dr. Huang thinks that Da Vinci studied human anatomy to help him paint facial muscles precisly enough to coney specific emotions. The program would help the police with criminals becuse it would read there face and tell them what going on .	Concluding Statement	Adequate
eea8df882fe5	3A748C1D650A	Do you think technology can read your emotion	Lead	Adequate
f55f2a3633db	3A748C1D650A	In my opinion I believe technology can't read your emotion	Position	Ineffective
46cadf151f9f	3A748C1D650A	First of all, emotion has to do with what you're thinking about	Claim	Adequate
c11e9f3de0c0	3A748C1D650A	a face can lie	Claim	Adequate
0d8136cccef9	3A748C1D650A	and a drawing doesn't always mean it's happy when there is dark around it.	Claim	Adequate
da071a0651cb	3A748C1D650A	First of all, when you try to see someone's emotion you don't really pay attention to their face you pay attention to how they act and how they talk	Claim	Adequate
a566f94b116c	3A748C1D650A	Someone can be hyper and talkative some days and the next they can be smiling but not hyper or talking to anybody. Kids come to school and put on a happy face when actually they don't want to be there. It's the same with everything else.	Evidence	Adequate
d29bdaee5da5	3A748C1D650A	Secondly, a face can lie. Everyone has something they're thinking about but nobody knows exactly what they're thinking about.	Claim	Adequate
aff2a97c8e42	3A748C1D650A	Everyone hides their emotion a certain time in life; therefore, you can easily smile but it doesn't mean you're happy.	Evidence	Adequate
b606f71a2c3e	3A748C1D650A	Lastly, in the story the author talks about how they can also use the new technology they made to know the emotion of drawings like Mona Lisa.	Claim	Ineffective
f60c4827d4cf	3A748C1D650A	When you look at the picture of Mona Lisa you see her smiling but the picture has to color and the smile does not look like a real smile, it looks like a fake smile. Also, in the picture of Mona Lisa the background is of a lonely lake or pond which is also without color. Color shows alot of emotion depending on the colors you use, like dark colors determine sadness and bright colors determine happiness but red is in between and usually determines hate; someone being angry.	Evidence	Adequate
8bf677170f78	3A748C1D650A	In conclusion, technology can not read emotions. Emotion has to do with what is going on in your mind, facial expressions can easily lie, and emotion in drawings determine the colors of the the art.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
e6906c095c88	3A777021089B	Imagine this, you've had a long day as a student waking up early and working hard to do well in school all day, but then you remember you have Basketball practice tonight! This excites because you have become close friends with your teammates, and it serves as a nice break from everything going on in school.	Lead	Adequate
26b63bebece8	3A777021089B	Attending after school clubs and activities can give you a place where people with similar interests and hobbies all come together.	Claim	Effective
95055f2e26d7	3A777021089B	After school clubs can be a safe space where you and your friends get together to do something you all enjoy, and you could make new friends along the way. Being in a club can provide a safe space, and the people there often share your interests.	Claim	Effective
087e056a0720	3A777021089B	Activities like these can make you an all rounded person while also giving you a break from school.	Claim	Effective
3b852a6f653b	3A777021089B	Activities from football to Rubiks cube club can create a safe space for the people on the team or in the club.	Claim	Effective
d4bad22b7fdb	3A777021089B	What do I mean by "safe space?" A safe space is where people can share how they feel, and why they feel that way. An example could be if you're on a football team your teammates become your friends and that gives you a whole community of people who care about you. It doesn't even have to be a team it could even be a group that likes horses, but they still have something in common to bond over. Teammates also tend to build you up, and give a boost in confidence which can help you be a stronger person. Did you know that having fun with your friends and participating in the activities you enjoy can even help you get into college?	Evidence	Effective
10735f34cfc6	3A777021089B	I think that having students participate in an extracurricular activities could very beneficial for many different aspects of their development, such as social, emotional, and in some cases even physical.	Claim	Effective
7130cf7e8433	3A777021089B	Most students are very focused on their academics and doing well to look good for college. What they might not know is colleges don't only look at grades they also look at your extracurricular s. Looking at what you did after school as well as in school helps hem see that you are able to juggle both things at once, but what they don't know is we actually enjoy it! Though it might seem like a lot especially with all of our school work, it could serve as the well deserved break we need.	Evidence	Adequate
54270525879d	3A777021089B	Students have a lot on their plates between school, homework, and studying, sometimes it's good to take a break	Claim	Effective
6bb5351e8b55	3A777021089B	What better way to relax then do something you enjoy with other people that enjoy it as well. Playing a sport after school can help you create close friends and teammates. When you think about stress reliving one of things you might think of is one of your favorite things to do with some of your friends. Well guess what, you just explained what a club is. In that portion of your day you don't have to worry about acing that test all you have to think about is swishing that three or winning that chess match.	Evidence	Effective
16612819f598	3A777021089B	As a whole I think that after school activities could be beneficial to students in many ways. Many students might not fit in to friend groups, but with after school clubs they know they have similarities with their peers. It's a great way to relive stress with the people you care about while doing something you care about	Concluding Statement	Adequate
d5bbcf6d549f	3A777021089B	That's why I think that having everyone participate in a club or sport could be very beneficial for these reasons, and I think it's a great addition to our school systems.	Position	Effective
257d02eb4ef8	3A88FA2C4060	Did you know that passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of green house gas emission in europe and up to 50 percent in some intensive areas in the united states .there were 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile in the unitedstates,the enviorment protection agency is promiting "car reduce". communities and legislators are starting to act if cauiously in previous years80 percent of approiations have by law gone to high ways and only 20 percent to other transport.	Evidence	Ineffective
7164afee185a	3A88FA2C4060	many thing consists of having a caer if you dont have a car you can hardly get around	Position	Ineffective
c5dd6fe46767	3A88FA2C4060	it would be very diffucult to do the thing you want to do!	Claim	Adequate
7641a02ac715	3A88FA2C4060	many people have cars for many reasons they have cars to get them around ,to and from work, and alot of other reasons .without a car many things will be very hard to accomplish. alot of things come with having a car you have to make sure its running right ,make sure all the tires are good , fix it if it need fixing ,and tend to it when it needs to be fix. cars come from many places all over the world thers car part that come from all over the world you just got t know your carb and when there is a problem! in this enviorment some people say cars are bad because of the gas that be in the air and that gas is expensive but without a car nothing is possible well i wouldnt say possible but it would be very hard to get around .now a days you need a car just to go around the coner and back!	Evidence	Ineffective
9add198e1383	3A98BE969D1F	Ding, ding, ding. Thats the sound of a school bell at the end of the day. Over 500 kids rushing to their bus, but not one of them is staying after school. It's not that schools don't have after school it's that students just don't care or they don't know what's out there. In all my years of going to school I have all ways participated in after school activities, and every single one of them has helped me in some way, and that's why I think that students should participate in them	Lead	Effective
d65bb7845a52	3A98BE969D1F	Students should be required to participate in sports, working on year book, or serving on student council	Position	Effective
0fe754368a9c	3A98BE969D1F	it helps them maintain grades	Claim	Adequate
f17567874bde	3A98BE969D1F	gives students a chance to interact with other students,	Claim	Adequate
1f4e4d5db365	3A98BE969D1F	they have a chance to give back to their school.	Claim	Adequate
d5cc53c0a864	3A98BE969D1F	Students that play sports have to maintain their grades when they'er off the field in order to play on the field.	Claim	Effective
0fed599419be	3A98BE969D1F	This helps them to have a "C" or higher and they can apply what they learn on the field to when they'er off the field. A student in my class is always asking for his absent work because he has to leave early for one of his games. This student doesn't play just one sport but 3. So when he comes back the next day he has to make up all of his work if he wants to stay on the team. An example of applying what student learn on the field to off the field is my friend that plays football. He said to me "I could never make a touch down if some one wasn't covering my blind side",then he said, "It's not about if I win because I would have never maid it if there was no one on the team to cover me." Then the next day at his game he maid sure that the crowds were celebrating him and the team when they won.	Evidence	Effective

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I was 18 before arriving in Greece,but I was heading to Greece with 335 horses, and loads of hay and oats to feed the horses with

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I told them about giving out horses in Greece, and the time I toured other incredible sites like an excavated caslte in Crete.

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After being out of breath from persuading them to sign up, I thought that it was worth being out of breath. Now Don Reist and I have twenty extra helpers for our future trips to spots all over the world, and new friends to tell stories with.

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Schools are places where kids end up spending the majority of their childhood in. Most kids end up disliking school for one reason or another, while others might love school. To have the ability to know how a child is feeling and map their patters can become useful in more ways than one.

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The use of reading a students emotions is valuable in many ways

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helping with possible depression

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enhancing the material

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creating a better enviroment.

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School can be a stressful time for many students and also a time of growth. Especially in high school and even middle school, the childs body is going through puberty. This chemical change in the body can lead to mood swings and other issues especially when school stress is added on top. This technology is capable of indicating "...the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one"(paragraph 7).

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With the aid of this technology the school can help students before they develope mental illnesses like depression that often go unseen due to hiding true emotion.

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Also, in many schools students usually find the learning material to be sub par or boring in many cases. However with the aid of this technology "a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored" (paragraph 6). If a teacher was able to pin point when exactly a lesson becomes boring it would majorly help with being able to reconstruct it as well

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For difficult classes being able to know when the students are lost would help significantly in increasing the understanding of the material as teachers will be able to know exactly what the students dont understand, and thus be able to help them achieve better grades.

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Being able to understand students emotions in a learning enviroment can also help with improving the school overall.

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SInce the technology would be able to understand the basic emotions like "...happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness" (paragraph 3), this can give a school tons of feedback on how to improve. For example, with negative emotions, a school would be able to improve its cafeteria food quality from knowing what foods are highly unpopular, and as a result save food from wasting. Or during school events, even though the event might be a success knowing how each of the students felt about the event would help with improving it for next year. The addition of this technology would allow a school to be the best the possibly could.

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The addition of this facial technology can be quite revolutionary in a school setting. As students often dont share their true feelings, issues can be confronted and the students mentality can be improved. Also a better, and positive learning enviroment can be created. The ability to remove student confusion and make learning interesting would go a long way in helping not only the students grow and move forward positivly, but also the school as a whole.

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Venus may have some dangers

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The author think's venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.

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Here are some things you should know about Venus

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Venus may be called " Evening Star ". The Evening star is one of the brightest point of light in the sky. Even though Venus is called a Star it's actually a planet. Venus is the secound planet from the sun. It being close to the sun makes it hard to examine closely.

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Venus may be very challenging to get around or to beable to find more out about

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Venus is the closest to the earth. Venus is like a cloud-draped world. One of the dangers of Venus is it being cloud-draped because humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on Venus. No spacecraft lasted the landing more than a few hour if that.

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A reason Venus is a dangerous place is the atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide.

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Venus has challenging clouds that are highly corrosive sulfuric acid. The temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we feel on our own planet. How we know this informaiton can help understand that the author thinks venus has some dangers on it. For example , " These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth ; such an enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. "

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Venus would be a worthy pursuit depite the dangers because Venus was once the most Earth-like planet in the solar system.

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Venus used to be covered with largely oceans and may have supported various forms of life. To this day Venus has some features that are analogous to those on earth. Venus surface is a rocky sediment. Venus also has some familiar features such as valleys , moutains and craters.

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This concludes how the author think's that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Venus may be harmful to humans but at one point Venus was just like our home. Venus once has forms of life like we do today on planet earth. Venus might be something interesting but the danger's is what keep's us from landing.

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I am going to tell you the reasons Luke joined the program

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One is "he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime".

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"luke also found time to have fun on board.

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a great opportunity of a lifetime to join the program.

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Well my first reason is Luke bomberger had no idea that his life would change soon after his high school graduation. second is But being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger it opened up the world to him. One more reason is that he said"I'm grateful for the opportunity"he says. Both of thoses reasons suport why he thought it was a great opportunity.

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he also found time to have fun on board especally on return trips after the animals had been unloaded.

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One peice of evidence is "Table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling,and games also helped pass the time". My second peice of evidence is "Luke also toured an excavated castle in crete and marveled at the panama canal on his way to china.

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both of thoses statemeants help me answer question. Which is why he joined the program. Both of my reasons were it was great opportunity of a lifetime and Luke was also able to have freetime found time to have fun on board.

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The face is just a natural landform

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nobody lives on Mars it's just a empty planet. They NASA says that the face on Mars had became a pop icon but i don't think that just because NASA has images that it's ture. You can't always believe people.

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Although few scientists believed the Face wan an alien artifact, Some People think the Face is bona fide evidenve og life on Mars. Evidence that NASA would rathr hide, lets say conspiracy theorists. The caption noted that the rock formation resembles a human head, formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth. This would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.

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Many people thought that is was an alien momument, but on April 5, 1998 Mars Globsl Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time. A Man named Micheal Malin and his Mars Oribter Camera team wanted to prove that there were no aliens. Him and his team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos

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People should have been satisfied with knowing that there wasn't an alien monument after all.

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Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001 the Mars Global Surveyor drew closer for a second look. They has to rool the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view to get the picture. Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the cameras mamimum resolution. In the 2001 image each pixel span 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the 2976 Viking original.

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I think that the researchers shouldn't be having to look seversl times just to prove certain people wrong. If they don't believe then they need to go to Mars for themselves. It'd great that they got the comparsion but they went through trouble to get there. It was not an easy target. In face, it's hard work.

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Today many people are using technology for many reasons but there is one piece of technology that has been used a lot more recently. The smartphone or mobile phone, many people think that it is not that dangerous but it is as dangerous as most things that can damage or hurt people just not as much. As it can hurt people in many ways the most severe way is to be in a car accident just by looking at a phone for even a second. Not only could that person hurt themself but whomever else is in the car or the person they have crashed into. If it is such a bad way to drive why don't people stop looking at their phones while driving?

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Well many people are worried about how their social status is doing and how their friend's day is rather than their safety.

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So even if the majority of people were to stop there would always be that other percent who don't care. Although drivers should not they would still need their phones for GPS. Many states already have this situation classified as illegal but some states do not. Even if they were to turn the sound some people may not know where 1/2 miles to turn is.

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There are consequences to driving with a person on his or her phone but in some states they should not even if there should be.

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It should be illegal to drive using their phones.

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People who drive with phones should get a ticket and they should have to pay the fine or they would get jail time.

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Many people do not realise just how dangerous not looking at their surroundings are when driving a car. People have to worry about cars coming or going or when they have to stop, go or even yield.

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It is known that when drivers get on the road there is a risk of crashing by the car or the person's actions so why make that percentage higher.

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Also risk not only themselves but other people. It is just not right and not fair for other people they could have potentially hurt or damage their possessions.

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Cell Phones carry A lot of information like the weather or the news and mainly social media. What someone is doing or how they are doing are important to their friends. Many people would agree that these reasons cause them to look at their cell phones

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And would convince other people to stop or text them before they drive to say that they are not going to be responding while they drive.

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Many people drive while using their cellular devices and it causes problems for many people. It is illegal in some states and some in not but even in the illegal states people still do it knowing they could cause damage to someone or themselves or even pay a fine. It should be illegal anywhere so people can think about whether or not they want to get a ticket. People should stop to think that they may make someone's day worse. People should just stop using their phones while driving in general but not everyone chooses to do it.

Concluding Statement

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The use of tecnology reading your face is a bad idale for some things but not all things. Emotions are what humans have. The Facial coding system enables computer to read face exspreshions like happy ,sad,frown,fear,disgust,anger,and suprise

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The Coding system should not be on every ones computer becuse some people hate adds and the system would just keep showing diffent ones each time.

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On the Facial Action Coding System would not be bad if you could shut it off and on other then it being on non stop all day tring to read your face.

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The program would be alsome to look at old pitures to see if they were happy or what not

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the program makes a 3-D face that has all 44 major muscles in the model . It has to move like a human face dose.

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The Facial Action Coding Systm would be cool if the creater could make it read other creachers like cat or a dog for we could see how they feel

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cats wag there tail but my cat is happy when he wags his tail what dose that mean than? My dog growls when he vplays what dose it mean? Maby later on they can move on from human faces to other animal faces.

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Dr. Paul Eckter man has alot of good idals with his program. He just needs it were the people can turn it on and off othere than being on all the time. like how when some people are angry they turn tv on or funny videos. That could turnout to becume disaster.

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The Facial Action Coding System is a good idal for school work for if the student would get bord it could change there studing ways up or class room asiments.

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The program could read diffent shown emotions in the program. In fact us human perform the same impresive caculation every day. The "Making Mona Lisa Smile" was neat to see what the program had to say. The Facial Action Coding System read the Mona Lisa painting and it said she was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted,6 percent fearful,and 2 percent angry.

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The Facial Acting Coding System is a great program and in time it could read how humans feel and animals in the future.

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I think it will be a great program for computer to have. As long as you can turn them on and off at times. It would be a good way to get rid of adds. Dr. Huang thinks that Da Vinci studied human anatomy to help him paint facial muscles precisly enough to coney specific emotions. The program would help the police with criminals becuse it would read there face and tell them what going on .

Concluding Statement

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Do you think technology can read your emotion

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In my opinion I believe technology can't read your emotion

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First of all, emotion has to do with what you're thinking about

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a face can lie

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and a drawing doesn't always mean it's happy when there is dark around it.

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First of all, when you try to see someone's emotion you don't really pay attention to their face you pay attention to how they act and how they talk

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Someone can be hyper and talkative some days and the next they can be smiling but not hyper or talking to anybody. Kids come to school and put on a happy face when actually they don't want to be there. It's the same with everything else.

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Secondly, a face can lie. Everyone has something they're thinking about but nobody knows exactly what they're thinking about.

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Everyone hides their emotion a certain time in life; therefore, you can easily smile but it doesn't mean you're happy.

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Lastly, in the story the author talks about how they can also use the new technology they made to know the emotion of drawings like Mona Lisa.

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When you look at the picture of Mona Lisa you see her smiling but the picture has to color and the smile does not look like a real smile, it looks like a fake smile. Also, in the picture of Mona Lisa the background is of a lonely lake or pond which is also without color. Color shows alot of emotion depending on the colors you use, like dark colors determine sadness and bright colors determine happiness but red is in between and usually determines hate; someone being angry.

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In conclusion, technology can not read emotions. Emotion has to do with what is going on in your mind, facial expressions can easily lie, and emotion in drawings determine the colors of the the art.

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Imagine this, you've had a long day as a student waking up early and working hard to do well in school all day, but then you remember you have Basketball practice tonight! This excites because you have become close friends with your teammates, and it serves as a nice break from everything going on in school.

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Attending after school clubs and activities can give you a place where people with similar interests and hobbies all come together.

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After school clubs can be a safe space where you and your friends get together to do something you all enjoy, and you could make new friends along the way. Being in a club can provide a safe space, and the people there often share your interests.

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Activities like these can make you an all rounded person while also giving you a break from school.

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Activities from football to Rubiks cube club can create a safe space for the people on the team or in the club.

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What do I mean by "safe space?" A safe space is where people can share how they feel, and why they feel that way. An example could be if you're on a football team your teammates become your friends and that gives you a whole community of people who care about you. It doesn't even have to be a team it could even be a group that likes horses, but they still have something in common to bond over. Teammates also tend to build you up, and give a boost in confidence which can help you be a stronger person. Did you know that having fun with your friends and participating in the activities you enjoy can even help you get into college?

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I think that having students participate in an extracurricular activities could very beneficial for many different aspects of their development, such as social, emotional, and in some cases even physical.

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Most students are very focused on their academics and doing well to look good for college. What they might not know is colleges don't only look at grades they also look at your extracurricular s. Looking at what you did after school as well as in school helps hem see that you are able to juggle both things at once, but what they don't know is we actually enjoy it! Though it might seem like a lot especially with all of our school work, it could serve as the well deserved break we need.

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Students have a lot on their plates between school, homework, and studying, sometimes it's good to take a break

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What better way to relax then do something you enjoy with other people that enjoy it as well. Playing a sport after school can help you create close friends and teammates. When you think about stress reliving one of things you might think of is one of your favorite things to do with some of your friends. Well guess what, you just explained what a club is. In that portion of your day you don't have to worry about acing that test all you have to think about is swishing that three or winning that chess match.

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As a whole I think that after school activities could be beneficial to students in many ways. Many students might not fit in to friend groups, but with after school clubs they know they have similarities with their peers. It's a great way to relive stress with the people you care about while doing something you care about

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That's why I think that having everyone participate in a club or sport could be very beneficial for these reasons, and I think it's a great addition to our school systems.

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Did you know that passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of green house gas emission in europe and up to 50 percent in some intensive areas in the united states .there were 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile in the unitedstates,the enviorment protection agency is promiting "car reduce". communities and legislators are starting to act if cauiously in previous years80 percent of approiations have by law gone to high ways and only 20 percent to other transport.

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many thing consists of having a caer if you dont have a car you can hardly get around

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it would be very diffucult to do the thing you want to do!

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many people have cars for many reasons they have cars to get them around ,to and from work, and alot of other reasons .without a car many things will be very hard to accomplish. alot of things come with having a car you have to make sure its running right ,make sure all the tires are good , fix it if it need fixing ,and tend to it when it needs to be fix. cars come from many places all over the world thers car part that come from all over the world you just got t know your carb and when there is a problem! in this enviorment some people say cars are bad because of the gas that be in the air and that gas is expensive but without a car nothing is possible well i wouldnt say possible but it would be very hard to get around .now a days you need a car just to go around the coner and back!

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Ding, ding, ding. Thats the sound of a school bell at the end of the day. Over 500 kids rushing to their bus, but not one of them is staying after school. It's not that schools don't have after school it's that students just don't care or they don't know what's out there. In all my years of going to school I have all ways participated in after school activities, and every single one of them has helped me in some way, and that's why I think that students should participate in them

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Students should be required to participate in sports, working on year book, or serving on student council

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it helps them maintain grades

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gives students a chance to interact with other students,

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they have a chance to give back to their school.

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Students that play sports have to maintain their grades when they'er off the field in order to play on the field.

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This helps them to have a "C" or higher and they can apply what they learn on the field to when they'er off the field. A student in my class is always asking for his absent work because he has to leave early for one of his games. This student doesn't play just one sport but 3. So when he comes back the next day he has to make up all of his work if he wants to stay on the team. An example of applying what student learn on the field to off the field is my friend that plays football. He said to me "I could never make a touch down if some one wasn't covering my blind side",then he said, "It's not about if I win because I would have never maid it if there was no one on the team to cover me." Then the next day at his game he maid sure that the crowds were celebrating him and the team when they won.

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