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91e008b3dbde | 34B96B0F6EBD | When you join the program, you will have opportunities to see parts of the world you never thought you would see. | Claim | Adequate |
101a1799d71a | 34B96B0F6EBD | You will see Europe, China, and even Greece. You an even take a gondala ride in Venice, Italy, or marvel at the sight of the Panama Canal. You can see th Acropolis in Greece and castles in Crete. But those are not the only benifits. | Evidence | Ineffective |
de2100b10cf3 | 34B96B0F6EBD | Even tough taking care of animals is hard work, you still have time to have fun. | Claim | Adequate |
9c58614054b6 | 34B96B0F6EBD | When we unload the animals, We often do things to pass the time where we used to keep them. Games like baseball, volleyball, and even table-tennis tournaments.
We sometimes do boxing, fencing, whittling, reading, and other games. | Evidence | Ineffective |
c408095d1ab2 | 34B96B0F6EBD | When you join the Seagoing Cowboys you will open up a world of opportunities. But it is much more than just an adventure, it opens up the world to you. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
d32aee609ee3 | 34C979F3ABAA | Is there an advantage to limit the car usage | Lead | Adequate |
ea86a6af6f7c | 34C979F3ABAA | There alot of diffrent advantages | Position | Adequate |
6826ef3d5b63 | 34C979F3ABAA | promoting | Claim | Ineffective |
461645ee618c | 34C979F3ABAA | protection | Claim | Adequate |
439210ca27fb | 34C979F3ABAA | bills | Claim | Adequate |
9d31a2b95d4a | 34C979F3ABAA | the united states who is promoting the new communities that are less dependent on cars , (rosenthal) if you think about its a good thing because then it gives us less usage and thats a good thing not a bad thing for the people who think so its not .promoting is like you trying to sell somthing to someone and making it sell .thats what you call promoting somthing. the goal is to promote alterative transportation and reduce smog,(selsky) | Evidence | Adequate |
e873aad94299 | 34C979F3ABAA | If the usage is reduce then the the greenhouse gases will reduce emissions from tailpipes ,(rosenthal) and thats a good thing becuase if you think about it it cant be a bad thing and never will be a bad thing .The greenhouse gases are a good thingnot somthing bad it helps plants grow. Millions of colombians biked,skated or took buses ,(selsky) and that even uses less green house gases. | Evidence | Adequate |
3ea278b11acb | 34C979F3ABAA | There will be bills passed 80 percent of apprpiation have gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transport, (rosenthal) and that makes it better if we have bills passed because that mean that we can do more if the laws are passed by the government. It was the third year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the day without cars,(selsky). | Evidence | Adequate |
d378b53bb5c9 | 34C979F3ABAA | the three advantages are that promoting , protection and the bills . That all helps limit the usage of the cars. well thats all for now. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
7160e4a9b009 | 35011B0C0225 | In America, we use vehicles on a daily basis to get around. You either drive a vehicle that you own, ride a bus, take a taxi, ride a bike, or walk. It is rare to see someone walking or riding a bike these days, but that is because we are so dependant on motor vehicles. If you take a look at other countries, you will realize that they are taking steps to cut back on the use of motor vehicles to help stop pollution.
It is uncommon in the U.S. for a whole town of people to "give up" their cars, let alone pay $40,000 for a parking space and a house. In Vauban,Germany, this "smart planning" movement was introduced to reduce the greenhouse gas emissions and the amount of cars in the area. "When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way," said Heidrun Walter, a mother of two and media trainer. 70 percent of families living in Vauban do not own cars and walk or ride bikes to reach their destinations. The town is not completely "car free," there is a main thoroughfare that runs from downtown Freiburg. Considering the town was only built about ten years ago, they are helping our environment in a big way.
Smog is a big problem in Paris,France. After several days of "near-record pollution," Paris temporarily baned driving to clear the cities air. About 4,000 drivers recieved a 22-euro fine and 27 of those drivers had their cars impounded because of their reaction to their fine. The fine worked and the cities congestion was down to 60 percent after five days of the smog. The cities weather was part of the reason why there was so much smog, but some people believed it had to do with the diesel fuel that was used throughout France. The public transit was free from Friday to Monday, but the smog eventually cleared and the band was lifted. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a322d301e71b | 352777B2AE3D | The author doesn't support his own idea | Position | Adequate |
bd39fb25ada5 | 352777B2AE3D | He lists the good of what would happen with some facts | Claim | Ineffective |
addf745d3f98 | 352777B2AE3D | The dangers are stacked high with exlporing Venus. With the temperture on Venus at the surface being over 800*F which in a spacesuit can still fry a person alive, and the litteral aicd rain, could malt the suit and well there goes a dead man. Even if we somehow manage to make a spacesuit that isn't going to melt or fry a person on Venus, then we can explore it. Tech these days is our down fall, we create tech thatwe use everyday, but with all the space exploration that is our go to, because we don't have the tech now to send a person from one side of the galaxy to the other. Once we do that then we can explore. Venus maybe closer to us, but there is no water present on the surface therefor no life could be living on that planet. To study Venus we would have to send someone there to collect samples, at which they have about 80% chance of death right at the moment, and a 20% chance of living | Evidence | Adequate |
26141b2dd44b | 352777B2AE3D | Do we want to risk someone just to explore a plant, when we haven't fully explored ours? What sence does that make? | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
4664053eac75 | 35694DE1F9DE | What is the reason why there is a face shape in Mars? No one know how it become a human face or if it a human face at all, and some think the reason behind it is that there are evidence showing live in Mars. | Lead | Adequate |
8d03863e773c | 35694DE1F9DE | I agree that the shape is a human face shape, but I also believe is just a landform. | Position | Adequate |
fe587a7f805d | 35694DE1F9DE | The reason is that as it stated in the article, the face is to attrack the people. | Claim | Ineffective |
2f75ba376d93 | 35694DE1F9DE | The first reason to support my claim is that the face is use to attrack people, so that the people who made up the idea can earn the money | Claim | Ineffective |
bdb92882edd5 | 35694DE1F9DE | According to paragraph three it said that,"huge rock formation.. which resembles a human head... formed by shadowss giving the illusion of eyes,nose and mouth." Following the evidence is that also on paragraph three it say," The authors reasoned it would be a good way to enage the public and attract attention to Mars." This evidence tell me that with the idea of having a human face in Mars, it allowed people to think and believe what they told them. | Evidence | Adequate |
dd903f7bd0fa | 35694DE1F9DE | On paragraph twelve, Garvin say that," It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. | Claim | Effective |
b8fb9e1794d4 | 35694DE1F9DE | The second reason is that the face was due to a land form. The evidence not only gave me the idea of how it was form, it also give me the idea of how it reminded them of the a real life thing happen in the United State. We can already agree with this evidence that the idea of the formation for a human face was due to landforms. Also when in a different planet landform are still the same as the earth by how the land change.
| Evidence | Adequate |
4bfd4adce766 | 35694DE1F9DE | There may be live in Mars, and no one know that is true. In any case the Face of Mars might looked like a real human face, but if you look closely at the face that viking take in 2001, it doesn't look like a face. In the picture it show how the landform change it, and that the reason for why there are no Face in Mars. This argument will show you why the Face of Mars is just any landform like you see in earth. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
79fc7bf1ee76 | 35C1EF0AD877 | Students want summer to be homework free, and not have to worry about summer projects. Most students will agree that summer is meant to give the brain a rest. Meant to give students time to have fun, be free, and enjoy the few months before school starts up again. | Lead | Ineffective |
6d5af9d56996 | 35C1EF0AD877 | Although some may disagree, schools should require summer work for students.
| Position | Ineffective |
44a9b3f54a95 | 35C1EF0AD877 | Students will come back to school from summer completely refreshed; however, if they don't do a summer project, they will feel lost. | Claim | Adequate |
380855624d93 | 35C1EF0AD877 | Some schools require a book report, or some sort of homework from some of your classes. Those book reports and homework keep you from forgetting the essentials in learning. The point is to make sure that there is some educational activity, and assure that students won't forget basic resources. Becoming lost mentally can feel like being dropped in a random part of the world. Without having some sort of tracker to keep students focused over the summer, students would feel lost and confused when they came back. Recovering from being confused and lost is easier said than done. As classes continue to progress, not knowing what happened before is brutal. Summer projects help prevent that with continual learning. | Evidence | Adequate |
2f656f751e57 | 35C1EF0AD877 | Assigning the projects to students can show the teacher many things. | Claim | Adequate |
dc55c6d66c10 | 35C1EF0AD877 | Summer projects can show the teacher what type of learner their student is. They can show what they've learned, their capabilities, and how much effort they put into their work. Teachers want their students to pass, and care about all of their students. Summer projects are ways to learn about their students and follow their progress. Summer projects help students get prepared for the lesson they will learn. Students being prepared for an upcoming lesson is essential in order to not make the students feel confused at the beginning. A strong start to a school year can determine the rest of the year. Students don't know how much a summer project has taught them until the year starts. When the student understands the lesson being taught, the school year will come much easier. | Evidence | Adequate |
6b66689eaa09 | 35C1EF0AD877 | Summer projects are frowned upon by most students. Although some may disagree, schools should require summer work for students. Students not feeling lost and keeping a influential mind set during summer is essential for a good school year. Teachers assigning the projects and learning their students writing and learning methods is key for helping students in the future. Summer projects are useful for students, but are frowned upon because they don't let the students have as much freedom as they want. Some projects may seem unfitting and unnecessary; however, they keep the minds running and working efficiently. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
78ecf4960f99 | 35DA1D474645 | Venus is sometimes called the " Evening Star". It is one of the bright points of light in the night sky. Venus is also more closely to earth then any other planet. | Lead | Adequate |
8b89c803afda | 35DA1D474645 | Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers | Position | Adequate |
136a33ab12b1 | 35DA1D474645 | because is our planetary neightbor. Venus is a Earth's twin. | Claim | Adequate |
4c51c23e0056 | 35DA1D474645 | Humans have sent numerous of spacecrafts to venus but for inly a couple of hours. Which actually is a good idea because not one single spaceship was able to go back to Venus more then three decades ago. Venus is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. Venus planet surface is almost 800 degrees
Farenheit.
The conditions are far more extreme then anything humas encounter on Earth. | Evidence | Ineffective |
02eac316c9bd | 35DA1D474645 | Venus could have probably be covered in large amounts of oceans and could have been supported by humans. It could be hard ot go back to Venus becuase of the pressure that spaceship could get. In order to go back, they have to try and make the mission both safe and scientifically productive. But it could not be productive if the solar power is plentiful and the radiation would not exceed Earths levels | Evidence | Ineffective |
9a888b77baa4 | 35DA1D474645 | It could be easy conditions to some humnas, but not all. | Claim | Ineffective |
837527ae50de | 35DA1D474645 | However, NASA is working on some approches to get to Venus | Claim | Adequate |
0eb5db49f3a6 | 35DA1D474645 | Some simplified electronics made of silicone carbide, have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface. Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick. but it can be extremly delicate when it comes to physical conditions | Evidence | Adequate |
86aa937cb1cd | 35DA1D474645 | The traveling on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edged of imagination and innovation. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
0943d2745d7e | 360B5117F715 | Taking a deep breath in a city filled with cars and buses, people would be inhaling all the emissions giving off by the heavy duty use of cars. Taking in smog is like breathing in dirt. Changes around the world are taking place to accomodate to the impacts caused by cars. In the twenty-first cenury, cars are a must to get from place to place. So, why is it that there is a decline in the buying of cars? | Lead | Adequate |
206b89ccebed | 360B5117F715 | no smog to inhale, | Claim | Adequate |
5921588924fa | 360B5117F715 | promote alternative transportation, | Claim | Adequate |
cba724478283 | 360B5117F715 | the culture in this society helps create less dependence on cars which leds to a better envrionment. | Claim | Ineffective |
d6695ce9c1aa | 360B5117F715 | First things first, around the world something known as "smart planning" is taking place. This is a movement to seperate suburban life from auto use | Evidence | Adequate |
02160e11beb8 | 360B5117F715 | One main reason this movement is taking place is to reduce emissions giving off by automobiles, that would soon lead to smog. | Claim | Adequate |
9921b16b31b3 | 360B5117F715 | the less dependence of cars would promote alternative transportation. | Claim | Adequate |
6f1a3b6bc9bd | 360B5117F715 | Having a city filled with people walking, riding bikes, and taking buses would allow a traffic free city. In Europe, cities are taking the step forward by creating a city where it is difficult to obtain a car. According to
Source 1:
"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars," by Elisabeth Rosenthal, explains the main motive why cities are making it difficlt to use cars, which is, "Its basic precepts are being adopted around the world in attempts to make suburbs more compact and more accesible to public transprtation, with less space for parking." This means, that by making it a struggle to obtain a car, it would help promote others to use public transportation or another method, which at the end of the day, would benefit the environment. | Evidence | Adequate |
91a6cc879fa0 | 360B5117F715 | Last but not least, the culture of the world is constanly changing day by day. | Claim | Ineffective |
af7b8f17d5bf | 360B5117F715 | In the twenty-first century, technology has taken over the lives of many. From apps to the internet, the changes are inevitable thanks to the breakthrough in technology. In
Source 4:
"The End of Car Culture," by Elisabeth Rosenthal, Mimi Sheller, a sociology professor at Drexel University, explains,"Different things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a long-term cultural shift." Mimi is talking about the recent decline of automobile sales occuring which mean less and less people are buying cars. She believes the reason behind the decline is due to the culture in which involves technology. Moreover, she goes on to say," Likewise the rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps has facilitated more flexible commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting to work." Again and again technology proves to be a saving factor in this world to humans, and in this case it is saving humans from injurying the only home it has. With the easy access of calling someone up for a ride or searching up public transportation near by, allows the environment to be fresher and cleaner, as well as, it allows humans to interact with one another without having to drive to that person's house. | Evidence | Adequate |
34683b3253a5 | 360B5117F715 | Movements take place to improve what seems to be a problem. It is obvious that the over usage of cars is a problematic case. | Position | Adequate |
10a9bc7bddbf | 360B5117F715 | Around the world, people are going around side by side, without depending on cars like they use to back a couple years ago. Improvements shown in places like Paris, shows how the limiting of automobile usage can greatly impact the envrionment to create a clean atmosphere. Not only would it help clear smog, but it would allow a stress free city from being populated by traffic jams and yelling individuals, who are experiencing road rage thanks to the taffic. A happier environment would be created when people are out rding bikes to places and walking with friends. In cocnclusion, the benifits of limiting car usage are as clear as water, it would reduce smog, promote other forms of transprtation, and would help our culture by creating a happier, cleaner atmosphere to live in. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
75b82799dd29 | 360DAF43CFF9 | The author supports his claims by giving the reader information on how Venus is a challege to explore | Position | Adequate |
92aa208fc861 | 360DAF43CFF9 | with it's thick atmoshphere | Claim | Adequate |
ecd6b35dccbd | 360DAF43CFF9 | and hot surface | Claim | Adequate |
b2baed5fb51b | 360DAF43CFF9 | A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrisive sulfuric acid in Venu's atmosphere. | Evidence | Adequate |
e7be407f0b56 | 360DAF43CFF9 | The author also claims that Venus is very hot like flaming hot, over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and that is one of the main reason why it's so challenging to land on Venus. | Claim | Adequate |
80be454d3335 | 360DAF43CFF9 | On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than what we experience on our own planet." | Evidence | Adequate |
6cf295c35f35 | 360DAF43CFF9 | The reasons on why scientists are still discussing about Venus today is because Venus is the only planet that use to look like earth | Claim | Adequate |
1d88c300d296 | 360DAF43CFF9 | with its rocky terrain and with that Astronmers are fascinated. "If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its sureface? Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system | Evidence | Ineffective |
3616b0a79c2a | 360DAF43CFF9 | However it is dangerous and that's the only thing that's stopping NASA from sending a human to Venus | Counterclaim | Adequate |
f78957163396 | 360DAF43CFF9 | because of the harsh conditions, and also Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. "These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. | Evidence | Adequate |
ced181286a44 | 360DAF43CFF9 | The author supports his claims by providing pros and cons on "The Challenge of Exploring Venus."
| Claim | Adequate |
98330233eff8 | 360DAF43CFF9 | The author explains on how NASA is studying Venus and how they can get images by sending a little ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet so it can provide limtied images on the ground surface. "However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard froms of photographyand videography ineffective." Many researchers are working on machines that would allow the machines to stay on Venu's surface longer. "Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to out knowledge of Venus." | Evidence | Adequate |
0904021dd42c | 360DAF43CFF9 | Venus is a challenge to get to with its hot surface, with its thick atmosphere, and atmospheric pressure. But scientists and astronomers are facinated by Venus, because they believe it had oceans and could have supported various forms of life. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
38a4c70ec99d | 3679FD464B98 | Mona Lisa is a famous painting by Leonardo da Vinci. There is many theories of Mona Lisa being sad, or feeling many other emontion but no body knows the truth but Da Vinci.
| Lead | Ineffective |
59a8b5d4bbf8 | 3679FD464B98 | Based on the text evidence,
" Making Mona Liza Smile,"
a new software called Facial Action Coding System has been developed to try infenitfing Mona Lisa's facial expressions. She could have up to six different basic emontions.
First of all, Mona Lisa overall expressions use she is 83% happy.
Based on this article, " the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's masterpiece). each expression is compared against neutral face (showing no emotion)." This is saying that even that she shows no expressions, she is certainly happy but might be having mix feelings as well.
Another reason Mona Lisa can be feeling disgusted, fearful, or even angry but yet she's very mysterious. In the text it says, " most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc." | Evidence | Ineffective |
84f2912973c0 | 3679FD464B98 | If humans have trouble figuring out if something is feeling happy or sad, how can a software be able to do such thing.
| Position | Ineffective |
654a807496a4 | 3679FD464B98 | The software FACS is interesting becuase it's able to know your emotions with any movement you do. For example, in the text it says, " even though individuals often show varying degress of expressions. Using a video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks thsee facial movements." If a gental move can determine an emotion, this software will have a challenge on finding out Mona Lisa's emotions because it's just a painting.
Therefore, Mona Lisa will be mysterious until the software identifies her emotions. Mona Lisa is and will always be a unique peice of art. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d3c06d51994c | 36F89CC566E6 | Can we calculate our emotions like math? Even we don't use this kind of techonology we can tell other people emotions by looking at their face. If we known all about what other people think about us, it didn't good for all of us.
| Lead | Ineffective |
b1d5fb891259 | 36F89CC566E6 | If we are happy, surprice, angry, disgust, fear and sad other people can seen by looking at our face. But some people can control their felling so sometime it hard to know their expression. Sometime it is good to know how people think about us but sometime not knowing what other pwople thik about us better. Some people can't tell other people emotion by looking at their face. Most human communication doesn't have emotion. They talked to each other because they think they have to.
Some people can know that the difference between a real smile and the forced smile. In real smile your muscles that begin at your cheek bones lift the coners of your mouth. In forced simle your muscles that begin at your cheek bones stretched sideways. If you are surprice you raises your eyebrows and if you are angry you tightens your lips | Evidence | Ineffective |
c2996141689d | 36F89CC566E6 | School should not use this technology to the students because this technology is good but bad at the same time. | Position | Adequate |
d528b618214d | 36F89CC566E6 | Students didn't come to school happy everday. Sometime students come to school sometime they are not enought sleep so they don't want to study or they get angry easily. Some students have some teachers they didn't like so if the teachers know that their communication can't be good. Even if we don't use this technology most teachers can understand our expression by looking at our face. | Evidence | Adequate |
d95e0de29b68 | 3713AC622BFF | The author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit | Position | Ineffective |
f772ca6e884c | 3713AC622BFF | despite Exploring Venus the Evening star," is the one of the brightest point of light in night sky, making it simple for even an amature stargazer to spot. Venu is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasinally the closet in distance too. they said the venus was the Earth twin it becasue Venus ans the earth was the closet planet in the hole planet on the space, and that why it the brightest point in the night sky; | Evidence | Ineffective |
bfd0576f2ef7 | 3713AC622BFF | this is why it's not worthy pursuit despite the danger it present | Claim | Ineffective |
b7fae483fb66 | 3713AC622BFF | On Page 2. it said " No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explanin why not a single sapceship has touches down on venus in more than decades. Numerous factors cintribute to Venus's reputation as challenge planet for human to study, despite its proximity to us". | Evidence | Ineffective |
2e4b5245965c | 3713AC622BFF | Exploring Venus was despite the danger because On page 3. said " Even more challenging are the cloud of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere". | Evidence | Ineffective |
2fbf1f5899dc | 3713AC622BFF | that why Venus is whorthy pursuit despite the dangers presents. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
d39547c43831 | 375EFDE3B08A | The advances of limiting car usage is not only helping the communtity but also yourself | Position | Adequate |
5d5c6d7d5062 | 375EFDE3B08A | In Vauban, Germany 70 percent of their families do not own cars, and 57 percent saold a car to live here. people find it better to walk to places rather than having to use a vehicle. "All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change," said David Goldberg, an official of Transportation America. The Environmental Protecton Agency is promothing "car reduced" communties. Delivery companies complained of lost revenus, while exceptions were made for plug-in cars. it was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. "It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution," said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife. Two other Columbian cities, Cali and Valledupar, joined the event. The day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid-1990s. In parks and sports centers their pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth, sidewalks. With all these changes, poeple who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit. New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyricketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities. A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. Bill Ford, executive chairman of the Ford Motor Company, proposed partnering with the telecommunities industry to create cities in which "pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources lower emissions and improve safety." | Evidence | Ineffective |
c7c9fba394ef | 377548575048 | It says that when Luke had to feed the animal he had to go when it was raining also and that he had to walk on a slippery ladder. Next he rode a cattle to Greece because he said it was a life time if he went. Then,the catlle boat trips were unbeliveable opportunity for a small town boy. Also,his second job was to take care of the animals every hour. For instance he couldnt work because his ribs wre crack. Then he rode to different countries. Its says Luke always found time to have fun on board,especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Then it says,but being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than a adventure for Luke it opend the world to him. Its also explains he has to take care of horses cows and mules that were shipped overseas. Next it helps countries recover their food supplies,animals and more 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA.For instance he knew it was an opportunity of life time. Luke and don signed up for it. don invited him to Europe and they had to ride a cattle. They also went to New Orleans for orders. He said it prepared him for work because he had things to take care of something. He said it opened the world to him. Then he said he went to different countries all over the world he got different jobs also. Thats how he convine others. | Evidence | Ineffective |
3d048e06937e | 37A7110DB0C7 | Nearly over 78% of students participate in after school or extracurricular activities in the US as of today. | Lead | Ineffective |
70b35be30ae2 | 37A7110DB0C7 | While it is important for a young adolescent to become involved in some form of an extracurricular, to make something of the such mandatory is unneeded and inconvenient for many. | Position | Effective |
168fad0012b3 | 37A7110DB0C7 | Taking part in a extra activities requires many resources which some people can't afford or simply don't have. | Claim | Effective |
9af53070a1d9 | 37A7110DB0C7 | For a student to become apart of something, it should be at their own free will and not because someone of higher status makes it not optional. | Claim | Adequate |
58508ceed692 | 37A7110DB0C7 | time consumption, | Claim | Adequate |
d21c282ccc72 | 37A7110DB0C7 | student transportation | Claim | Adequate |
c70fa81b00cd | 37A7110DB0C7 | student's overall mental health and happiness. | Claim | Adequate |
f271b64e6058 | 37A7110DB0C7 | For those who are on the free or reduced lunch plan, it's even more likely that they wont be able to place their child into an extracurricular due to costs. Activities such as sports, dance, theater, and clubs cost money, something many don't have much of. Whether it's to simply enroll your child in the sport, to pay for dance shoes, or to buy supplies it always comes down to some sort of price. Even if a family is not struggling with funding, many see it as unnecessary to spend money on something their child truly doesn't wish to participate in. | Evidence | Effective |
56355eab71cc | 37A7110DB0C7 | It isn't uncommon for students who live in larger families with younger siblings to watch after the younger children. Many students who are apart of extracurricular often don't have this job nor need to be home earlier due to this reason | Evidence | Adequate |
12440e810238 | 37A7110DB0C7 | When students are forced to spend their free time at a practice or rehearsal, this creates conflict within the household dynamic. | Claim | Effective |
9ba70801b41d | 37A7110DB0C7 | Without the children there to watch after their younger siblings or to perform everyday chores such as cleaning up after the house or tending to a farm if the student were to live in the more rural areas, it causes the family to have to search for daycare or hire an extra hand which is not only costly but also stressful. | Evidence | Effective |
9a8fda6d708f | 37A7110DB0C7 | transportation is also a main concern | Claim | Adequate |
b4f2346647af | 37A7110DB0C7 | Many parents or legal guardians travel and work for several hours, often getting home late. If children are at extracurricular while their parents work, this means there is no one who is available to pick them up or provide transportation to such activity or back home. While carpooling or busing may be an option in specific areas, this does not apply to students who do not have access to said buses or who live in extremely rural areas, further from the school or activity site. | Evidence | Effective |
817e05d34434 | 37A7110DB0C7 | Joining an outside group or involving yourself in a social setting where one participates in a hobby may be healthy and is encouraged | Counterclaim | Adequate |
55804cc6a979 | 37A7110DB0C7 | just because it is pushed for does not mean it should be mandatory. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
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