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e890c20f6b77 | 32A121824D02 | The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because the planet itself is dangerous | Position | Ineffective |
54d7b219642d | 32A121824D02 | Venus is the same as the Earth, I mean it is reffered to as Earth's "twin", but there both the same only because of the density and size. Both planets do have the same shape and density, but planet Earth is much more safer than Venus.
| Evidence | Adequate |
80642772370d | 32A121824D02 | Venus has a thick atmoshpere, so it makes it harder to breathe. | Claim | Ineffective |
978ae2b1e99b | 32A121824D02 | For example, in the text it says," a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere." It's impossible for somoene to even live on Venus because of it's own atmosphere. | Evidence | Adequate |
79530e19b3b8 | 32A121824D02 | Exploring and studying the planet Venus is actually challenging when you think about it | Claim | Ineffective |
05fee23a3411 | 32A121824D02 | People tried to study about the planet, people have tried to explore, but in the end, it ends up failing. For example, in the text it states, " since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us." This is explaining how bad the planet really is. | Evidence | Adequate |
e8113711adb2 | 32A121824D02 | No spacecraft can even touch the ground on planet Venus | Claim | Ineffective |
9c689768c5a6 | 32A121824D02 | The reason why no spacecraft has touched down on planet Venus is because of the clouds itself. For example, in the text it explains," the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmoshpheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet." Venus has a temperature of 800 degrees fahrenheit, while Earth's highest temperature is at least 110 to 120 degrees. So planet Venus is very hot, that probably explains why no spacecraft can land on the planet because it's so hot in the planet that the clouds trap all that heat inside.
| Evidence | Adequate |
6fcbdd743b8e | 32A121824D02 | In conclusion, these are the reasons why the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
c9a48722276e | 32AA6576C80B | I'm a scientist at NASA and I know that the face is just a natural landform. I have plenty of reasons why that is, and why it wouldn't be an alien. Yes, the face on Mars has become a pop icon, but that doesn't mean people could just assume it's an alien. | Lead | Adequate |
ce0ab7ec0e4e | 32AA6576C80B | NASA has plenty information and data for why it's just a natural landform. | Position | Adequate |
4cd6dcdaf450 | 32AA6576C80B | My first reason is that NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The picture noted a huge rock formation which seemed to be a human head that had eyes, nose, and mouth. | Claim | Adequate |
dd7284a87c8b | 32AA6576C80B | You just have to think about it, those characteristics are obvious. I mean yes, it was found in Mars, but that doesn't mean it couldn't have been a human. People just have to think more into the possible and not the impossible, because everything is possible.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
735f3fbae9a1 | 32AA6576C80B | My second reason is that they photographed the face. Other scientists at NASA saw that it clearly looked like a human head. | Evidence | Adequate |
a85c441a1ca1 | 32AA6576C80B | My third reason is that they even snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos | Claim | Adequate |
33795ef39a15 | 32AA6576C80B | When the image first appeared on a JPL web site, it clearly revealed a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all. | Evidence | Adequate |
74c194343a76 | 32AA6576C80B | This is why I, as a scientist at NASA think it's a natural landform and not an alien . these three reasons I have should make people think about it again and decide it's officially a human head. Those who believe it's an alien, should believe more in miracles. Anything could happen in Mars or any other place around the planet. This is only my opinion, but it sure makes me feel like I'm right about my thinking. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
87f347ccbf49 | 32D94C1BA4A5 | In 1973, the first handheld cell phone was made. 23 years later, the first ever flip phone was introduced to the public. Cell phones have come a long way since they were first invented, and today people rely on them for more than just communication. Smartphones. For instance, can do anything you can imagine, and we rely on them so much there's no telling where we would be without them. In fact, people use their cell phones practically 24/7. People text on the toilet, stream music in the shower, and unfortunately, use their phones while driving. This is probably the worst thing about cell phones. Phone related car crashes are one of the most common causes of fatalities in teens and adults. 1.6 million crashes a year are the result of people using their phones while driving. | Lead | Effective |
6c4593c54581 | 32D94C1BA4A5 | No one, not even the most skilled driver in the world should be able to use a cell phone in any way while driving.
| Position | Effective |
986542f5604c | 32D94C1BA4A5 | It's not always easy to control a vehicle. Weather conditions, traffic, and other people make driving very difficult sometimes. If you add the distraction of a cell phone, driving is 10 times more difficult to focus on. | Claim | Effective |
ff686a388a59 | 32D94C1BA4A5 | You've probably seen someone text and drive. In the few seconds they take to glance away from the road and at their phones, a car crash could happen. It only takes one second for your car to swerve into the other lane. Phones should never be used while driving for many reasons, and the main reason being that it is extremely dangerous. Texting and driving makes you 23% more likely to get in an accident. It's so much smarter to wait until you've reached your destination to use your phone. If you can't wait, you can pull over on the side of the road. If not, you could greatly risk your life. | Evidence | Effective |
8523ab151d51 | 32D94C1BA4A5 | Another important reason why operating a phone while driving should be prohibited involves other drivers as well as passengers that may ride in your car. | Claim | Effective |
9fc4772feb45 | 32D94C1BA4A5 | When someone rides in your vehicle, whether its a friend or your child, you are responsible for them. By using your phone at the wheel, you put both you and your passengers at risk of injury or even death. You also put the strangers driving beside you at risk. Texting and driving doesn't just risk you. Most fatal car crashes involve more than one car. If you don't want to live with the fact that you hurt someone you love or even just a stranger, using your phone while driving shouldn't be an option. | Evidence | Adequate |
286ea8fabc39 | 32D94C1BA4A5 | Lastly, in some states, using your phone while driving is illegal and can cost you a lot of money | Claim | Effective |
6fed7dc6ab29 | 32D94C1BA4A5 | In georgia, for instance, holding a cellphone while not parked, or even pressing one button on a phone can get you a ticket. With each offense, the fines get larger. It's not worth paying a large ticket to send a short text message. Additionally, if someone dies in a car crash because of your actions, such as texting and driving, you could be charged with vehicular manslaughter and go to jail for up to 20 years. Texting and driving tickets, if shown on a police report for a wreck you are responsible for, will greatly increase your insurance rates, making your life a lot harder than it was before you decided to text and drive. Unless you have a money tree in your backyard and don't mind ridiculous insurance for the rest of your life, its best to wait until you get home to use your phone. | Evidence | Effective |
897b97095c89 | 32D94C1BA4A5 | In conclusion, it's hard to imagine why anyone would think using a phone while driving is a good idea. Nothing good can come from texting or talking on the phone behind the wheel. The best decision anyone can make is to completely forget about their phones while driving and focus on the road. You risk so many things by using your phone while operating a vehicle.. You risk your life, your friends life, strangers lives, and even the money in your pocket. The only exception to being on a phone while driving should be to report an emergency. Otherwise, the use of a cell phone is risky and should be completely banned all over the world. Statistics alone should be enough to open people's eyes to the dangers of using their phone in the car. Phones are distracting and without a doubt should not be used while operating a vehicle. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
2c1a483382d6 | 32E2949B0C66 | Do you ever want to do something fun at your school that you really like? Well you came to the right school, cause the principal made a rule that you either have to play a sport or join a club that you like.
You could play on a basketball team
You could play on a football team
You could play on a flag football team
You could play on a baseball team
You could play on a softball team
You could play for a soccer team you could join a cheering team | Lead | Adequate |
199bbe0f3729 | 32E2949B0C66 | I agree with the principal | Position | Adequate |
00d34ed71058 | 32E2949B0C66 | hen we get home we don't do anything and kids are lazy nowadays. We either take a nap, eat, watch YouTube, or play video games. | Claim | Effective |
e96f34ab13c0 | 32E2949B0C66 | Also it will give kids a chance to have fun | Claim | Adequate |
17f78eb97960 | 32E2949B0C66 | make new friends | Claim | Adequate |
aaf938ed643d | 32E2949B0C66 | see what they like so they can do it the future. | Claim | Adequate |
6d2382ffc3fd | 32E2949B0C66 | kids are overweight, they're lazy, most of them won't do anything cause they are out of shape. | Claim | Adequate |
7e785b818266 | 32E2949B0C66 | Probably the first thing they do when they get his eat and play video games and watch YouTube. So that is why the principal put in the new rule, they could make new friends while they're after school or join something their friends are in. Also it will be good if your going to play in high school sports cause you already known what it takes to be on the sport team. | Evidence | Adequate |
32f3e41efef5 | 32E2949B0C66 | It is really fun cause you when you play a game that is home you will feel good cause everyone from your school is there cheering you on. | Claim | Adequate |
266a49b78829 | 32E2949B0C66 | Also if you win your game at home it feels nice cause everyone is cheering your team on and then when you go back to school everyone will be taking about the win. If you don't believe me ask anyone that plays/played for a school team, most likely your parents played for a school team both of my parents did. | Evidence | Adequate |
e13c4a144385 | 32E2949B0C66 | If your not interested in sports you could do other afters school activities like
Book club
Yearbook club
Dance club
Cooking club
Computer club
Student council
Engineering club
You could do those clubs in stead of playing sports | Claim | Effective |
a70408cfc9f9 | 32E2949B0C66 | You could also do many other things that you like if you don't like any of this thing. Ask your teacher if you could make club and if she says yes go to her office. If you don't like your club cause everything was filled it is fine, cause you could join it the next semester but you have to be one of the first to sign the sign-up sheet. Also you be given a snack at the beginning of your after school period you could choose anything and, if you take the bus it will be there so you can go home. | Evidence | Adequate |
4a81fd873c9a | 32E2949B0C66 | But if you don't take the bus you will have to be picked up by 4:30 and then you be home and do whatever you want to do. But if your parent can pick you after school you could leave at the normal time school gets out and if your not feeling good you could also leave at the normal time. But before you could anything you have to do your homework and then go to your after school club. | Evidence | Ineffective |
495fd4582f79 | 32E2949B0C66 | If you don't want to go you will have to go to the principal and explain why you can't, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
985fea4f63a9 | 32E2949B0C66 | if it is a dumb reason you will have to go to after school. Like if you have a broken leg and you play on a sport team you could still go to practice and see what they are doing and see al the drills they are doing. Also if you fake an injure and the teacher find your big trouble cause you not listening to the principal. | Evidence | Adequate |
40dd1f54de8b | 32E2949B0C66 | But you could get kicked out if your being bad and you will have to serve a punishment cause your still on school grounds. Like you you hit a student you will get suspended but if you hit the teacher you will get expelled.
If your playing sports it is all year long until the season ends, if your coach finds out your is taking drugs you will get kicked of the team. You will have the same rules as a high school cause you probably play for the high school team. But it won't costs any money cause the principal made us join the clubs so we could do something after school. Most likely we will find our hobby forever cause we are going to do it for the rest of the semester. If you find something that someone is doing and you want to do it just tell the teacher cause they will put you guys together. | Evidence | Ineffective |
8b21dc954598 | 32E2949B0C66 | If you still don't agree with me you should just try it out cause it fun, | Claim | Adequate |
dcc7f88f5842 | 32E2949B0C66 | You could have fun, make new friends and bond over things you all like. Like sports if you join one of the sport teams you could meet someone with same interest like you. Same with all the other club that the school is providing to the students, like book club you could like the same book as someone else and be best friend over that one book cause you joined the book club. I met one of my best friend through basketball and we liked other stuff that wasn't basketball related.
| Evidence | Adequate |
a623272da8bf | 32E2949B0C66 | Most likely you won't like it at first but then when your half-way through the year you will love it. | Claim | Adequate |
1e62eaaa0702 | 32E2949B0C66 | Most of the time I join a club that i like cause it fun to meet new people that have the same interest as you. Sometimes the club isn't fun but that is okay cause you could join a new one. Most of the time everyone will be shy at the beginning cause no one knows each other but half way through the semester you will known everyone. Cause everyone won't be shy cause they will see you everyday plus, when your in school at lunch and you don't known anyone and you see one of those people you could sit with them. When you meet a new person they will have friends so you could more friends when the new person shows you to them.
| Evidence | Adequate |
d926d0172568 | 32E2949B0C66 | So what we know is that joining an after school program could give you a lot of benefits and friend. Also they is a lot of clubs and sports you could join for fun. Also eat a free snack so your not hungry when you get home to your parents. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
5a58186b08ae | 331502EB3762 | This story is about a new technology that is called a Facial Action coding system that are able able to recognize other people faces. I'm explaining what I think about people using a facial recognition. | Lead | Adequate |
d3626df5dc1a | 331502EB3762 | This whole facial recognition thing is awesome and I think that it is safe for us humans. | Position | Adequate |
23e4d297fc5d | 331502EB3762 | These people can actually use it for there iphones now. For example a person uses a facial recognition for his phone,that's good because because can't nobody else can get into his device.
The thing about it is who was the person to come up with this idea I think its cool but there using up all this technology. I think that there is a reason for everything and I wonder what made that that person come up with that idea. | Evidence | Adequate |
a0e96bfd768f | 331502EB3762 | Another reason why I think this is a cool idea is because it knows who you are even when you have on different face expression | Claim | Adequate |
a35db74f6afe | 331502EB3762 | That's amazing how a computer can express how we feel .I 'm so surprized that a computer can do that. I some time ask myself how do they do that. | Evidence | Ineffective |
787815f1195b | 331502EB3762 | I think that computers would need a lot of energy to do that I don't know it's amazing. I sometimes think that it is not impossible for this to happen but it really is. I think about all the gadgets that my mom had back then. I would usually say that they're going to make alot of different things in the future. Their already trying to make self-driving cars.
This story is amazing. I think that there are going to be more things that are going to surprise me. This one is the first greatest techonolgy I ever heard about. When I grow up I dont want to use all of this technology because I think that it is to much for me. I would consider only using something simple. | Evidence | Ineffective |
34c743b786a0 | 331502EB3762 | This story told me alot. It told me what a computer could do that i never knew about which is surprizing. I just told my story about how i'd feel about all this new technology. That story was interesting and I think that I would probably use that one day. If I would use it I would be careful with it. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
12de31ee437f | 336F8093CF86 | in the beginning of the story it is saying that the people and cars are able to work together because it will stay there and be with them most of that. | Position | Ineffective |
b0f05ca484e0 | 336F8093CF86 | Then there are the casws of the underly populate areas in a city so they might go and vreate an area for them to live and play around in. They might have just gotten taken in as if the were to go and drive or even walk with them for as long as possnle. Then there are the way some of them that are driving a certain car for a time being until they were able to help the enviornment that is neer by. Then in the second passage it is saying that people will try to use there cars less so that the smog will go fading little by little or is it going to start to disapate. I must say that it might take a while until they might have made it at the time they could have done it so they might even try to create a day when no one will be using a car so they might get a better life and they might be able to pervent smog also and they might get to a part of the atmoshere and depleat the ozone layer making the sun even harsher for us. So these are the things about the people that were trying to stop the bad effects on the inviornment. | Evidence | Ineffective |
fb57cfa14396 | 3383B3E35D18 | If I was arguing with some one that the face on mars was not real and that it was some thing that just happend on its own I think that it could go both ways and that it could of been an alien but it really just probly happend on its own.
| Lead | Adequate |
c67b37a17a1b | 3383B3E35D18 | We could argue and argue about this subject but if I was a scientist I would make a camera that could go farther and depper into mars outmasphere so we could see what was going on for some days to mounths to see what would happen if nothing happend then I would be right if we seen aliens there then he would be right.
But it would be alot easyer said then done to make that camera that can go that far into space to see that much for that long it would not be a easy task. But for the sack of seeing if aliens were real then it would be worth making to see if aliens are real or not. Because that would change every thing that we now about a different life force then use. It would blow up I would become famus nowing im the one that made the camera. | Evidence | Ineffective |
76ac71c88f72 | 3383B3E35D18 | And not even that i would prove that guy in the lab wrong that it is not even aliens that it is just sand and rock. | Position | Ineffective |
5097cde6e866 | 3383B3E35D18 | But It would be pretty cool to see aliens and we only seen this way back in 1976 I wonder how long it has been there it could be billions to only 40 years old. But i would get to work to see if i could build the camera to send to mars and see what was going on on mars. And if I was to build it and if it would work I would keep it there on mars untill it ran out of battries and if there was yto be nothing then I would be right but if there was to besomething then that guy from the lab would of been right.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
b4cf1f69f8ac | 3383B3E35D18 | But that is what i woud do if I was a sientist that worked for NASA abd there was a big argument about what it was then that is what I would do to see just make a camera to see which one was right me or the guy in the lab. Hopfully I would even be able to build that if i was a scientist that worked for NASA. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
2ab294314397 | 340734FCEDC4 | The implications of technology that can detect emotions simply by reading the muscles in the face sound truly remarkable. The thought that one can tell what another is thinking simply by plugging data or maybe even a picture into an algorithm sounds like fiction, but may soon be a reality. The article, "Making Mona Lisa Smile" by Nick D'Alto briefly discusses the possible use of such technology in a classroom. The system could examine student's faces, and if they read to be unengaged or uninterested, could adjust the lesson to make learning more interesting to that group of students. That type of technology could revolutionize learning, and customly tailor lesson plans to the feelings of students on any given day. | Lead | Effective |
99ceb1521d47 | 340734FCEDC4 | Technology that reads people's emotions would be beneficial in a classroom setting, | Position | Adequate |
df593d6509f3 | 340734FCEDC4 | because it would adjust lesson plans | Claim | Adequate |
66ff7163be95 | 340734FCEDC4 | make learning more fun, | Claim | Adequate |
dd93689a7c04 | 340734FCEDC4 | and could also help students struggling to focus in class.
| Claim | Adequate |
e753f5db6d3f | 340734FCEDC4 | The technology to read emotions would greatly change the way students learn. If a teacher used this technology and noticed that all of his students were bored and uninterested, he could alter the lesson plan to make it more fun | Claim | Effective |
52d28d739427 | 340734FCEDC4 | Not all students will feel the same, though, which is also where this technology could come in. At the beginning of a school year, perhaps, the teacher could use the technology on the class to see how they feel about the particular subject. Then, the students who are excited about the subject and show interest could be sorted into a class that can be run in a way that makes the class educationally suitable for students who actually want to learn that subject. The students that do not show as much interest, or none at all, could be sorted into a seperate class that makes the subject more fun, but still teaches the same points as the other class. | Evidence | Effective |
0ac1d80684ca | 340734FCEDC4 | Another application of such technology in the classroom could help to make learning overall more fun for all students | Claim | Effective |
9220c1ad0731 | 340734FCEDC4 | If many students start to become bored, then the teacher could come up with a quick game to enrich the learning experience. If many of the students are already interested with the subject matter, the teacher may not have to do as much adjusting. If the students need to be enriched with games and activities, now the teacher will immeditely know. This could overall make learning a lot more fun, but introducing more games and activities into the curriculum as see fit. If the students want to play knowledge enriching games, they can just show disinterest, and the system would pick that up and inform the teacher. The technology to read student's emotions in the classroom as a very basic level could make learning more fun and personal to the student. | Evidence | Effective |
091e678c6f8c | 340734FCEDC4 | Reading students emotions would also be helpful to identify those students who are struggling to focus or simply understand the material being presented to them in class | Claim | Effective |
793ea05af023 | 340734FCEDC4 | If a student shows confusion or discontent, it may be able to pick that up and show the teacher specific students that need help. The teacher could take the student aside and ask if they need help, and then adjust their learning accordingly. Another way this technology could help struggling students is to set them up with tutors that are doing well in the class. If a student is excited to learn consistantly during that class period, they could be sat next to a struggling student in order for the one not doing as well to recieve help from a peer. The ability to read emotions in the classroom would help students who are struggling tremendously. | Evidence | Effective |
8c11cc880c33 | 340734FCEDC4 | Adjusting lesson plans, making learning more fun, and helping struggling students are three of the main reasons in which emotion-reading teachnology would be amazing to introduce into the classroom. The students would control the class, not the teacher, and it would make the learning experience more customized to each particular class. As well, it would allow for more interesting games and activities to be introduced into the curriculum in order to keep learning entertaining and entriching. Students who struggle with particular subjects would be able to recieve help using the technology, and the teacher would not have to guess which students are struggling only based on grades. The technology of emotion-reading should be applied to all classrooms when it becomes widely available, because it could help both teachers and students improve the learning environment. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
c2b660e60c0a | 3415EF8F87AA | You should particpate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. | Position | Adequate |
460a08f7a2aa | 3415EF8F87AA | It is a great way to get out and help people | Claim | Adequate |
e875c4275b7e | 3415EF8F87AA | You also can have fun with it. | Claim | Adequate |
3ab53b3f4386 | 3415EF8F87AA | You could help people | Claim | Adequate |
a8ec16811b01 | 3415EF8F87AA | getting them food,water, animals,and more. They lost thing in the war,so cloths on them can be good. They will be so thankful for your help. That will be alsome to do. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d04e6efeb6f6 | 3415EF8F87AA | You could have fun | Claim | Adequate |
8909e8f33c09 | 3415EF8F87AA | You could bring your friends and family and you could work together. You could make someone day shine with a smile. You could look around the ocean and look for animals. That what would be fun.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
792333cb4aaf | 3415EF8F87AA | we need more people to take care of are plant, and go do things that can help it. | Claim | Adequate |
2464a2e6f14d | 3415EF8F87AA | This could help it so much. We could change people's lives by doing this. This is a important job for people, because it could keep people from dieing. | Evidence | Ineffective |
b9fc4fdfa763 | 3415EF8F87AA | You should join the Seagoing Cowboys. It is fun and you can help people. It also can change lives in a good way and keep people from starvation. I hope you join, becaues we need you too. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
4ad039b0e44c | 346934F6BA88 | I always did love taking care of animals and doing other stuff as a crew of the Seagoing Cowboys.
I am here because many people argue whether be a Seagoing Cowboys is something you should do. | Lead | Ineffective |
17aa926ab3d6 | 346934F6BA88 | I believe that being a Seagoing Cowboy is worth the risk | Position | Adequate |
7beb74b67ce4 | 346934F6BA88 | help people | Claim | Adequate |
78754b2dc95a | 346934F6BA88 | just have fun. | Claim | Adequate |
6aa2dd7319d4 | 346934F6BA88 | Helping people in need is really what matters in lfe | Claim | Adequate |
49bd4b3b2427 | 346934F6BA88 | Its really in every human job there is. A dentist helps your teeth keep clean, a teacher helps you learn, and a mechanic helps you fix your car. Almost every human job out there is all about helping people. In my case I got to help people in need after World War II . I was in a group called UNRRA, which was a group who helped pople in animals and food supplies. I feel good now that I know I got to serve countries that were left in ruins. I am sure mighty proud that I became a Segoing Cowboy. It helped me realize that not only I need help but other people are also in need of help. | Evidence | Adequate |
ca99df24aae9 | 346934F6BA88 | I also had lots and lots of fun while I was a Seagoing Cowboy. | Claim | Adequate |
613c1fb0526e | 346934F6BA88 | In case you ever got bored, there was no problem playing games. There were so many to choose from. There was baseball, volleyball, table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling. I was so entertained. When we played games the time flew by as if it were a cheetah on the clock. There was usually no way you could have got bored with all the choices you had as entertainment. This is another reason why you should join Seagoing Cowboys. | Evidence | Adequate |
0a4a916aa732 | 346934F6BA88 | I will warn there will be risks in doing this though. I know it sounds kind of dangerous, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
1e3f89067f13 | 346934F6BA88 | I believe that it is worth it, and I would know. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
bba59760ca6b | 346934F6BA88 | I once was night watchman, I had to check that every thing was going smoothly. Everything was going okay untill I slipped on a ladder and fell on my backside. I was heading for a entrance at the side of the boat, but a small strip of metal stopped my slide. I could have flown straight into the Atlantic Ocean. I also had broken ribs so I coulndn't work | Evidence | Adequate |
72a7764fe55e | 346934F6BA88 | Even though this happened I am still very grateful that I am alive and still helping people in need. I feel good putting my life at risk for millions of people in need. | Evidence | Adequate |
42d448731c3c | 346934F6BA88 | I know that there is risk but it is worth it. You get to have fun and have a good feeling in your heart, all for just helping people in need. I am grateful for the oppurtunity, and it made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs. I do believe that being a Seagoing Cowboy is worth it. Who knows maybe you'll become the next one. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
ab4749e87f80 | 34B96B0F6EBD | With a time like this, your country needs you most. | Lead | Ineffective |
071a06b8a879 | 34B96B0F6EBD | That is one of the many reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys | Position | Adequate |
be824b49d679 | 34B96B0F6EBD | you will see amazing sights | Claim | Adequate |
a9f1f5e2898b | 34B96B0F6EBD | have fun while you work. | Claim | Adequate |
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