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5603b2805f0f | 73F69FA2E0E3 | We should not rely on technology for childrens' education due to the fact that it may be psychologically damaging for the youth. | Claim | Effective |
672b5f4a147a | 73F69FA2E0E3 | I've said how school has helped me develop long lasting relationship by putting my in a space where being social was somewhat mandatory. | Evidence | Adequate |
f79637adc115 | 73F69FA2E0E3 | Some people on the side of distance learning would argue that having relationships like that are monogamist and not a necessary need, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
c1459eb6d0fd | 73F69FA2E0E3 | however that is completely false. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
5ab062c584f2 | 73F69FA2E0E3 | We as a species are very passionate and thrive off of compassion. Studies have shown that this current generation is statistically the most depressed it has ever been. Connecting studies show that this is due to majority of millennials feeling lonely due to the inability to communicate properly with others. This is due to the over usage of technology to communicate rather than face to face interaction. Most people when asked when they have talked to others in person answer with either in school or in a place of business. We can't revert the effects technology has had on society but we can surely stop it from getting worse. Implementing distance learning would only cut off a form students from getting an already stagnant amount of social reaction that is needed. Thus leading us to an even more depressed society. | Evidence | Effective |
b6a1a74a58ad | 73F69FA2E0E3 | While in concept the idea of distance learning is great, through execution is where it fails. Distance learning causes much more harm than it does good by creating lost, socially inept individuals, along with furthering the growth of a future filled with depression. Schools simply offer more, allowing kids to find themselves and develop in a much more positive environment. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
cca92ee8dc07 | 7443D525E32D | Would students benefit from being able to attend classes from home?
The American Education System has grown a lot since it was originally curated. While I do believe there have been positives to have come from today's educational system, I also believe there are improvements that can be made. One important improvement would be the ability to attend classes online. | Lead | Effective |
15359fd51e32 | 7443D525E32D | I believe students would benefit very well from attending classes from home, | Position | Adequate |
33c8f8333ef2 | 7443D525E32D | the style of today's stress-inducing form of schooling. | Claim | Adequate |
30597e019857 | 7443D525E32D | First of all, this would be very beneficial because attending classes from home would help relieve stress from students with social anxieties or anxieties involving the typical school format. | Claim | Effective |
0c6a1db8de6f | 7443D525E32D | The stress levels of students has grown exponentially in the passed couple of decades, and I've seen it first hand. Students are growing more and more anxious as the expectations to get good grades, get into a good school, and follow a career in STEM become higher. How are we to expect our students handle these sort of worries while also trying to balance a social life? My younger sister has aspired to be many things; including a doctor, a biologist, and even a detective. But do to her hyper-thyroidism she has been held back by her medical testings and re-diagnosis' during the school year. This has caused an immense amount of stress and anxiety--but after many meetings and emails between my parents and the school, she was accommodated with home bound. Home bound is a form of at-home schooling that allows her to take some classes from home and work with teachers outside of school hours in order to help her get caught up. | Evidence | Effective |
8b8d0f236e0a | 7443D525E32D | Second of all, attending classes from home would allow for more flexibility when it comes to the scheduling of classes, and potentially assignment deadlines. | Claim | Effective |
43b594d0d0e7 | 7443D525E32D | If a student struggles to balance school, extra-curricular activities, and a job, they would probably find online classes to be very beneficial. When taking classes online, students are usually allowed for more freedom and flexibility. They can sleep in until noon, and then work on a class in the evening. Or if they work to help support their family, they can get up early, get their school work done, and work a job in the afternoon. Most online classes are scheduled similarly to college courses, and will allow students to plan when during the week they wish to take certain classes. My younger sister, who I spoke of earlier, has found this to be very beneficial, and something she will miss once she can fully reimmerse herself into a regular school schedule. | Evidence | Effective |
5af7ba097cac | 7443D525E32D | Lastly, attending classes from home would allow for more involvement of the parent in the students education. | Claim | Adequate |
444336a11eb9 | 7443D525E32D | Some parents do not get a full scope of what is going on in a students school day, and it can sometimes be hard for kids to communicate this to their parents. Some parents tend to job the gun when they take a look at their grades and are seeing their kid isn't doing too well, but what they aren't always considering is the other factors that go into it. A students grade could be reflective of not only their work ethic and focus, but how well a teacher is teaching them, and the sort relationships between other kids in the class. If a parent is able to be present when a student is working on their courses, they would be able to get a full scope of how their student learns. Not only that, but the student would have less distractions from other kids, and hopefully be able to avoid some of the flaws of an individual teachers style of teaching. | Evidence | Effective |
76fd4bd6dfeb | 7443D525E32D | Now while I do believe others would combat my claim with statements such as, "today's educational system has done amazing and has left many students with successful careers in medicine and engineering". | Counterclaim | Effective |
6206bd41e2e1 | 7443D525E32D | But to that I would say; there have also been many successful people in history such as scientist, Albert Einstein and entrepreneur, Gary Vee, who either dropped out of high school or didn't find themselves doing so great until university. | Rebuttal | Effective |
498813ae4e61 | 7443D525E32D | That is why I believe students would benefit very well from attending classes from home, to help relieve the stress of today's school system. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
906ef7d9f84a | 7450531F9573 | When asking for advice it is beneficial to ask multiple people. Each person is different and can have different opinions and view points. When you get multiple opinions you get a variety of different answers and ideas that you can use. | Lead | Adequate |
4b5829fdc403 | 7450531F9573 | Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better decision | Position | Adequate |
ecbdcbc1a18a | 7450531F9573 | all people have different backgrounds, | Claim | Effective |
7ea08874ca41 | 7450531F9573 | different experiences, | Claim | Effective |
b50a7de6f558 | 7450531F9573 | can provide new ways to think about something. | Claim | Effective |
35ba0ea50e94 | 7450531F9573 | Many people grew up different ways, in different places, and with different people around them. This can impact the way people think about things. According to a study, 90% of people who grew up in poverty know how important getting a job and being able to provide for others is. They know the importance of this because they grew up without it. For example when I was at a beach and I was debating whether or not I should use my money on ice cream or a sand bucket so I went around asking people what I should purchase. I went up to a man who was not from America and asked him what I should get and he said that since he didnt have ice cream in his home country, I should get that. The man didnt have ice cream in his country so his background influenced his decision to tell me what i should get. | Evidence | Effective |
e1519bedc90e | 7450531F9573 | Everyone's experiences are different even if they did the same thing. This can influence what they tell you. A study has shown that people who have had fun doing something are more likely to give positive advice, and those who have not had a good experience are more likely to give negative advice. When someone has had not good experiences with something will probably not recommend you do that same thing where as if someone has had a good time doing something they might recommend it. For example when a friend of mine was preparing to go on vacation to Florida, he was wondering if he should take a plane or drive. Many people he asked said that when they had been on planes they were not pleased with the comfort ability of them and that he should drive. Others said that in their experiences of being on a plane where quite enjoyable and that driving would be very long and boring. Each person has a different experience and has different advice to give you. | Evidence | Effective |
895ca4c2cbe9 | 7450531F9573 | Each person interprets everything you say differently and think about things differently. for example I was wondering if I should start writing an essay now or wait a little bit and brain storm. I asked my mom and dad what I should do and my mom said that I should think and do a little bit of it now, then later go back check it and do a little bit more. I didn't even think of doing that and it goes to show that asking multiple people can provide new ideas and ways of thinking. According to a philosopher if man gets caught up with work and close his mind to other ways of going about it, he will need someone else to open it for him. this explains that different opinions can help one open their mind to different things and make better decisions | Evidence | Effective |
687db3121c78 | 7450531F9573 | getting advice from multiple people is beneficial because all people have different backgrounds, different experiences, and have different ways to think about things. Multiple opinions help you make a better choice because you can see what other people think about a certain thing. Getting multiple opinion can also help you a chance to think of something in a way that you didnt think about. If you ever need advice in the future, ask multiple people about it and make your decision from there. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
68f06f00672e | 749E1B13022A | Have you ever had to make a hard decision so you asked multiple people for they're opinion on that situation? | Lead | Adequate |
7537ef5598b0 | 749E1B13022A | Having multiple opinions on a situation is better than having one opinion | Position | Adequate |
6f9600284f57 | 749E1B13022A | people can offer different point of views to the situation | Claim | Adequate |
430b8ee034d8 | 749E1B13022A | some people may have experience in the decision you are trying to decide | Claim | Adequate |
86f3a5154266 | 749E1B13022A | when you are making a hard decision all by yourself it can stress you out but when you ask other people for help and get their opinion it can relieve stress from yourself. | Claim | Adequate |
b76c613ead34 | 749E1B13022A | People can offer many different point of views on the situation and can provide different opinions about the situation. | Claim | Adequate |
6ccd3d32fbe4 | 749E1B13022A | Many people have very good decision making skills and help from those people can help you evaluate your decision and help you make a final decision. | Evidence | Ineffective |
1f7a1387aad6 | 749E1B13022A | people who can relate about your dilemma will be the best help to someone who is struggling to make a decision on their own. | Evidence | Adequate |
5c79ccdcae4f | 749E1B13022A | when making a hard decision all by yourself it can stress you a lot. | Claim | Adequate |
aa04fa1c04bb | 749E1B13022A | research shows that putting a lot of stress on the body when you are trying to make a decision can often make you choose the wrong solution. Asking other people for advice can help you relieve your stress and can help you make the right decision without stressing your body. | Evidence | Adequate |
a743dcc974da | 749E1B13022A | Having many opinions on a situation is better than having one opinion, because people can give you a different point of view on the situation than you had before. some people may have experience in the decision you are trying to decide, and when you are making a hard decision all by yourself it can stress you out but when you ask other people for help and get their opinion it can relieve stress from your body. that is why seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
5e2e3bddb1d6 | 7614540E8571 | "Hey Generic_Name what do you think about this new video game?" Generic_Name asked. "Dont ask just me because then you might be getting a bad opinion from me!" Generic_Name replied. "Okay, I'll make sure to ask someone else as well to get their opinion, thanks Generic_Name!" Generic_Name said | Lead | Effective |
b4c26022eb64 | 7614540E8571 | Asking for two opinions is good | Position | Adequate |
e2ea5a312d8f | 7614540E8571 | because you see the bigger picture | Claim | Effective |
5e3817fec412 | 7614540E8571 | eliminate bias, | Claim | Effective |
b0f0c6e5f6a9 | 7614540E8571 | and you can make a better choice. | Claim | Effective |
21fc3b6a21bb | 7614540E8571 | Firstly, asking for two opinions is good because you can see the bigger picture. | Claim | Effective |
a14f2f75774f | 7614540E8571 | "Hey Generic_Name should i get Space Defenders 4 or Battle for the Netherlands 2?" Generic_Name asked. "Is that even a question?" Generic_Name replied, "Get Space Defenders 4 man, the company for Battle for the Netherlands 2 is corrupted, they keep making the game more and more expensive!" "Whoa whoa whoa stop right there!" Generic_Name interrupted, "The makers of Battle for the Netherlands are making the game more expensive because they're getting lots of sales and want to make more profit! It's simple economics Generic_Name!" "Thanks Generic_Name! I'll take that into consideration when I'm deciding!" Generic_Name replied. Seeing the bigger picture allows you to see where a company or person might be getting their reasoning from when they make what seems to be a bad decision. When taking that extra info into consideration it allows you to understand the consequences of taking the other choice that might be more risky. With school laptops and computers, it might seem ridiculous the schools are getting such slow computers, but in fact they get them early so that they can last a long time and save a lot of money on technology for the years to come. | Evidence | Effective |
698e4cb40fbd | 7614540E8571 | Secondly, asking for two opinions is good because it helps you eliminate bias. | Claim | Effective |
1f2c457c82f1 | 7614540E8571 | "Hey Generic_Name do you think Fortnite or Minecraft is better?" Generic_Name asked. "Fortnite is way better than Minecraft dude," Generic_Name replied. "Well I'm still going to ask Generic_Name what he thinks because you might have a biased opinion and you don't know it!" Generic_Name answered. Biased opinions can seriously affect a companies sales, or a consumers choice, or even what materials are used to make the product in the first place! When using something that is biased, you get something that could be a much worse choice. Using non-biased opinions from friends and family is much more reliable than using a biased opinion since you are more likely to get a better product or service if you go based on facts, and not opinions. | Evidence | Effective |
f7b646513e48 | 7614540E8571 | Thirdly, asking for two opinions is good because you can make a better choice. | Claim | Effective |
44b2d1a5c642 | 7614540E8571 | "Generic_Name what do you think about Sauce Mixer 3? It has 200 reviews and they're all positive," Generic_Name asked. "I think you should get it if its got mostly positive reviews" Generic_Name replied, "What do you think Generic_Name?" "Well I think you should get Cheese Factory Simulator, its got the same amount of reviews with 94% of them being positive, and it's $8 cheaper than Sauce Mixer 3!" Generic_Name replied. Making a better choice can not only help you now, but it can also benefit you later when the price of the game might go up! Making a better choice can mean you have more of a certain resource to spare so you can donate extras to charity or some other organization. Not having that extra bit of money could mean you wouldn't have enough money to have nice food, or any food at all, until you have more money. | Evidence | Effective |
a741445ea85b | 7614540E8571 | "Hey Generic_Name?" Generic_Name asked. "Yeah Generic_Name?" Generic_Name replied. "Did you ever get that game?" Generic_Name asked. "Actually no I didn't, I was too afraid I was gonna make a bad choice!" Generic_Name said. "Well you're in luck! I just got an e-mail that the game is on sale for 20% off!" Generic_Name answered. "Oh cool! So now I can get this game and still feel good because I'll be saving money as well!" Generic_Name said. In conclusion, Asking for two or more opinions is good because it helps you see the bigger picture, eliminate bias, and make a better choice. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
e116ad2c849f | 763EF698F56B | Well In this part I think is good and bad idea. | Lead | Adequate |
5ba9b461e4c4 | 763EF698F56B | I think is good because if they have any emergency in home they do not going to dismiss any classes | Counterclaim | Adequate |
70273f2ac483 | 763EF698F56B | they can take classes from home they have already tools do not needed to go outside they have everything in home, and the teacher they do not need to wake up early everyday, and also some family they are going to agree because now they do not are going to think every time how is my daughter or my son if they are safe or if they are in trouble.
| Evidence | Adequate |
953fa9b1d9f1 | 763EF698F56B | the bad things that if they going to give to all the students to take classes from only or video confederation some students they not going to do their work. | Claim | Adequate |
b83b41ed324d | 763EF698F56B | in some others parts they do not have any internet or money to buy a computer they do not have opportunity that the others person have, also the teacher do not have any jobs they are going to need they works back, and some family they do not need to send to school to their sons because they do not have many or they want their son to work. Is very different have the people think is hard to take decision. | Evidence | Adequate |
2092b4c21865 | 763EF698F56B | if they are old they can choose what they want, they have to think very careful | Claim | Ineffective |
89dff46dfa1c | 763EF698F56B | if they said yes they want to take class form online , is going to be more easy from them because they do not have a job or they do not have to take care, they can do it they have a lot of time in the world if they do not have any computer thats is going to be a really good problem form them because they do not have school open or they do not have the materials they want for learn, they have to look for job but sometimes if your looking for a job they need to know how you was in school they need to see you record, you are going to need in the future. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d6d5e2b745ab | 763EF698F56B | If you are going to say no because we need to learn something, we do not have any money to pay to go to school theirs so many ways to go to school their have school that are free you do not need to pay anything, just you need is go to school everyday, and do not get in trouble. | Evidence | Adequate |
0e3a17ff3480 | 763EF698F56B | Is good idea if they do this in college for students they work they know, they have more responsibility.
| Claim | Ineffective |
6a21be88ae32 | 763EF698F56B | If you put a child with computer is going to be more concentrated in computer and maybe they going to have problems with their eyes or any problem when their grow up.
if is a old is more easy from them because they brain is more they can understand and they do not have any issues to work in the computers. | Evidence | Adequate |
cf0120450412 | 763EF698F56B | so is bad idea that they students take class form online they do not have any money or they do not work. | Position | Adequate |
44af7a3e4bf8 | 764CF7C9DF70 | All over the world, attending a school is a vital part of a person's schedule. The person could be a graduate student, under-graduate, or a high school student, but on all levels, it is so essential that daily activities are centered around it. With something as big as this there are bound to be people that, for some reason, are unable to attend school and with that comes obvious disparities in privileges given to certain people | Lead | Adequate |
4b1a1e9865f0 | 764CF7C9DF70 | For the people that are unable to attend school, online education should become readily available | Position | Adequate |
3f441477cfd9 | 764CF7C9DF70 | due to mental illnesses preventing a person from attending, | Claim | Effective |
0d8e16142468 | 764CF7C9DF70 | to allow people to have the chance to attend | Claim | Adequate |
699121e11f17 | 764CF7C9DF70 | and to give sick students the experience of attending school, as it is every person's given right to receive an education and nothing should prevent that in the modern world. | Claim | Effective |
102505447130 | 764CF7C9DF70 | In the past, mentioning mental illness was seen as a sort of taboo in society and there was a stigma surrounding the idea of a mental illness and the idea of getting help for one. In today's day and age, however, many people openly suffer from some sort of incapacitating mental illness and are open about getting help for it due to the actions of a very progressive society | Claim | Effective |
7d03e9c9e275 | 764CF7C9DF70 | A lot of these people who suffer are students actively trying to seek an education but cannot because of their condition. If the opportunity were available for these students to receive an education while also catering to their specific condition, they would greatly benefit from it. For example, if a high school student was suffering from crippling social anxiety and clinical depression and could not attend school, the consequences of he/she not receiving an education would greatly outweigh the benefits of he/she staying home for their condition. Not giving the student the chance to receive their high school diploma through online classes is only setting he/she up for failure later in life with little job opportunities and an overall lesser quality of life. If the student were to attend online classes from home, however, their condition would not be triggered due to them being in the comfort of their home and not in a public space, which is a usual trigger for most people, and they would receive an education. Some could argue that providing online classes to students with mental illnesses will only fuel their condition and that it is catering to a budding sense of entitlement, but that is very inaccurate in almost all cases. To force a student that is clearly suffering to go to school is not only cruel, but it also makes the student feel as if they do not matter and that their feelings are invalid. Feelings of invalidity and anger caused by students being in a place they are miserable in is definitely a factor in rising rates of teenage suicide and depression, so to implement a program for online students would not only save lives, but definitely make the kids of the world happier. | Evidence | Effective |
052fcdfa21a4 | 764CF7C9DF70 | Being able to attend classes online would greatly convenience thousands of students with little to no time | Claim | Effective |
0feddb0dd2cd | 764CF7C9DF70 | For example, college applications now require a multitude of skills and are looking for variety within the application pool which results in students scrambling to participate in a lot of extracurricular activities and taking a heavier course load to stand out. With these new additions come with a much more time consuming schedule and title to no time for the student to recuperate and recover from the day's events. If the student could take online classes and be permitted to arrive late or leave early to/from school, this would open a large time frame in which the student can do whatever they want. This extra time could be used to relax, be dedicated to homework, or even sleep for longer, really whatever the student wants to do with it. No matter what they do though, it is obvious that the opportunity to have a reduced schedule inside the school building would greatly benefit the student since it allows he/she to just feel like they have a choice in life, rather than dedicate very waking hour of his/her life to school. Speaking from personal experience, spending too much time dedicated to school can lead to a very quick burnout and feelings of exhaustion, both mentally and physically, which in turn causes my grades to suffer from school, ironically. | Evidence | Effective |
fc9e45d38a83 | 764CF7C9DF70 | In light of recent events, online school is becoming a very sensible path for many schools in the near future. | Claim | Effective |
cc3682fbaa5f | 764CF7C9DF70 | When pandemics hit, it would be very foolish to continue to send students to school, which can very easily harbor super-spreaders of a virus. With online classes though, the spread of a virus can be halted if everyone were to attend school online which not only protects students but also the staff. For example, the increasingly dangerous threat of COVID-19 is affecting daily life everywhere. Since the epicenter of this virus is in China, a country with a very large world presence, fears of it spreading arose in the other eastern areas like South Korea, Hong Kong, Taiwan, and Singapore. This resulted in schools closing down in those countries and switching to online schools to prevent the spread of the virus and the number of preventable deaths by this virus. Not only does this benefit the students by protecting them from a dangerous respiratory condition, but it also protects the world and those with weaker immune systems. | Evidence | Effective |
e576bc14d834 | 764CF7C9DF70 |
The world is very diverse and filled with many people with stark contrasts in their ways of life, so to deny those suffering from a condition or those that are unable to attend the right to an education would be a serious failure in the education system. There is no reason as to why someone could not receive an education, as it is the duty of governments, school systems, and politicians to make sure everyone has that opportunity whether it be through online education or lessening college tuition. Making changes starts with small steps and the first small step to make education accessible is through online classes for everyone in the country. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
3a787a39b28c | 76C0FD26B20A | I think sometime is good online | Position | Adequate |
ddd52d1b0cea | 76C0FD26B20A | because any students no have time so many students work part time,then can't go to the school the better option is take a little free time and make online. | Claim | Adequate |
f64ba4d2cc22 | 76C0FD26B20A | First :But is better they go to the school | Counterclaim | Adequate |
b8a8840a25a0 | 76C0FD26B20A | because if you need something you can took with you teacher or partner is past time with amazing friends | Evidence | Adequate |
653f48be1798 | 76C0FD26B20A | and learning more about what do you want in the future ,the things and feelings ,ideas and occurrences ,memories and expectations and possibilities ,fear desires ,delight the smallest and most ordinary issues of our lives as well as the large and mostpowerful ones. | Evidence | Ineffective |
90a70746bbc0 | 76C0FD26B20A | then online web is the tools for study we have that permit us to share with others what is really going on inside our minds and hearts .they are the only intruments that reveal whether speaks and writes | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
3c4b44b238f5 | 76C0FD26B20A | second : some times the students no came at the school | Claim | Adequate |
24c857799655 | 76C0FD26B20A | because they live long them no have money for transportation or when need buy any book ,any students don't have the support of your family ,i think is the way more easy and very well for the people can do it some thing ,we need more people have want learning more the way the best election for our the student speaks , writes and lives not on a thing barren changeless level but with all the breadth and height and depht and movement yyou have a right to as a human being .As you ever open discover those words ,the online can be the most important web you ever open. | Evidence | Adequate |
148c5fa1ae26 | 76C0FD26B20A | Third:There are probably very few people would claim online las their favorite book .However all the words are there ,it is the order | Claim | Adequate |
6105422c2973 | 76C0FD26B20A | ,But if you need company whose work it is to prepare materials that advance your learning and show you how to think for yourselves , the online web is the reason the words stand for things and feelings , from outline and notes to the final form of the paper .It tells you how to write paper .how prepare for applying for a job .However It gives you advice you need to choose the correct language and to avoid expressions ,after its helps you understanding their parts and pronunciation . | Evidence | Adequate |
d49196f74000 | 76C0FD26B20A | Finally : The online web is very well for everybody because in the web we can find the signification about whatever word, that we dont know and helps for keep going more learning for get good job ,after you can use the online web for look video that you are curious then helps own like better people make our life better for everybody, if you dont know the support your family the class online help for you keep gonig learning more . | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
a9de0dee11f8 | 7770B90F2FEF | Imagine a lost, confused version of yourself. Perhaps it's an essay, a project, or a personal situation that has you conflicted. You have no idea what to do or what to think of. You are stuck. The first thing that pops into your head is to consult your peers, but not just one. | Lead | Effective |
0bbdd5e07e84 | 7770B90F2FEF | Asking for advice from more than one person has many upsides. | Position | Effective |
20cd02821c1b | 7770B90F2FEF | You can see what others think of your situation, | Claim | Effective |
86503ef8af44 | 7770B90F2FEF | there can be many different thoughts. Someone may suggest a better idea to you than others, | Claim | Effective |
b63946ef6bf2 | 7770B90F2FEF | it is always beneficial for you to consider a different perspective. | Claim | Effective |
69b7a88a4df8 | 7770B90F2FEF | There could be multiple ideas that you didn't even think of before. For example, if you had a ton of homework, there are many different things that people could suggest. Do the hardest things first, do the easiest things first, or just wait until the next day to complete it all. They all have different opinions, but you can get it all from just asking multiple people for advice. | Evidence | Adequate |
78341bf1b21f | 7770B90F2FEF | Not all advice given is automatically good. Let's say, for example, you are planning to redecorate your bedroom. Someone offers a neon-yellow pillow for your chair. You think to yourself, no way . Someone else tells you to hang up squares cut out from cardboard around the border of the entrance. You think, huh, that's not such a bad idea , until you ask one more person. They suggest that you declutter your shelf and invest in new curtains for a clean and bright look. Brilliant! The third suggestion is far better than the rest. | Evidence | Effective |
91b71deb6cd4 | 7770B90F2FEF | Consulting others for advice can help you do that. Perhaps your situation isn't as horrible as you thought, maybe it could be easily fixed and dealt with. People other than yourself can help you see the good things in bad situations. You could have this sense of relief from just consulting someone for their opinion. Simple as that! | Evidence | Adequate |
3bd55d6e4c54 | 7770B90F2FEF | Asking more than one person for advice is critical. You can see what others think, receive many different opinions that are better than the others, and view your dilemma in a new perspective. After all of that, your situation could seem easier to understand and not so terrible as you thought. Asking just one person for their thoughts is a mistake, do not forget to ask another! | Concluding Statement | Effective |
22cbb2ee5132 | 793517BB1BB3 | In the life today, education is important for people, and an options of choosing school or places to learn are also make people thinking. From what I heard on the news, some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. But, is it truly helpful for student? or it is just the way to comfort student, so they can stay home and do whatever you want to do without the administer from the teacher. | Lead | Adequate |
5256e8e1a5cf | 793517BB1BB3 |
First, when we talking about schools, we are also talking about our future, this is really important more than anything. If we come to school everyday we will get a punch of information and ideas for our self, we could meet other people, contact with them and make friends | Evidence | Adequate |
bda5d720e1b6 | 793517BB1BB3 | In that way, you will never feel stressful or stuck instead of staying home and do your own work. | Claim | Adequate |
cf11ab36196c | 793517BB1BB3 | Second, even though school are welcome you to come, but somehow the weather, the distance or something about personal that make you not able to come to schools, and the better options for you that are stay at home and learning from online or conferencing | Evidence | Ineffective |
3e7c8adaab34 | 793517BB1BB3 | For me, if I have a chance to choose between two options, I will choose to be in class, not attend classes from home | Position | Adequate |
fde4580bede3 | 793517BB1BB3 | even though something will clog me, I will still want to come to schools. For example, if I spend in schools I could know a lot of things than I stay and take classes at home, | Claim | Adequate |
9b137878d8dd | 793517BB1BB3 | I will meet my friends and my teacher everyday, we will discus about stuff at school, joining some club to reduce stressful after schools. And if you decide to take classes online, it is not bad, but for me it is not helpful. You better to go to school, you have to contact with other people, having conversation and discus with each other. You have the right to choose your own options. But be active, don't be passive. | Evidence | Adequate |
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