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When you talk to more than one person, you know more the possible outcomes.
Claim
Adequate
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You always want to know the pros and cons of things, but it is normally hard to find them on your own. Talking to one person doesn't always help because they are also just one person
Evidence
Adequate
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Putting multiple minds together to think of pros and cons will give spectacular outcomes.
Claim
Effective
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Sometimes I need all the facts, pros, and cons. My mind and others needs help to come up with these pros and cons because we have a lot on our minds already about making the decision itself. We would be preparing to actually do it. I know I wouldn't be able to do it all on my own. I know I would need multiple people to help me because sometimes people aren't feeling their best. They might not be able to help you find all the pros and cons, but bringing together multiple people ensures that you get the facts you want. I wouldn't want to make a choice without knowing the cons of it. I want to know all the bad things that might happen even if it's for the best so that I can prepare for it. You would also get more detailed and possibly more profound pros and cons. You get all the facts when you work with more people, because more minds means more knowledge.
Evidence
Effective
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Everyone needs a support system, whether it's family or friends. When you ask for advice, you go to multiple people for help. You ask them for things to help you make your choice. I want people behind me to help me after I make my choice. If the choice knocks me down in any way, I want people to be there to support me. If I talk to multiple people, I know all of those people will help me if I fall. No one wants to feel alone after their choice. I would only make a tough choice if I was certain I had at least one person to help me. If I talked to more than one person, I know at least one of them will be able to support me because they helped me. They know what I was going through when I was making this choice
Evidence
Effective
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Talking to more than one person ensures that you have at least one person to fall back on after you made your choice.
Claim
Effective
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No one knows if they're doing the right thing. Sometimes they don't trust them self, sometimes they're too anxious, and sometimes they just need more people to support them. Talking to more people helps you make the best choice. You know what you're doing is for the best. You know that you heard what might happen, you've seen things through other points of view, you aren't anxious when you make your choice, and you know people have your back. Talking to more people helps you make a better choice because no one can do everything alone
Evidence
Adequate
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If you talk to more people, you trust them and yourself even more. You know what you're up against and you know what will come out of it.
Claim
Effective
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Asking more than one person for advice does wonders for you.
Evidence
Adequate
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After you talk to people you trust, you know what you're doing is the best you can do, and you know that your choice gives you the best outcome possible.  
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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As a consultant that helps other students with writing, I see many strange things from people with half finished essays. The one that grabs the trophy, however, was incredibly ridiculous. At the beggining of a students work, they talked about how Abraham Lincoln and George Washington had a conversation. Not only did it have nothing to do with their central theme of Lincoln being the best president, but I gaurentee you they did not have multiple people help review their work. We did get them the help they needed, and through multiple peoples advice, it was transformed into a pretty good persuasive essay. When searching for help, whether it's with editing a school paper, or understanding concepts that are confusing for you in a difficulty subject, it's always important to look for more than one opinion. If you were to only ask a singe individual, their response could be flawed for many, many reasons
Lead
Effective
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When you consult multiple people, however, the room for error decreases significantly.
Position
Effective
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For example, if you needed to write an unbiased paper on the pros and cons of making abortion legal, asking more than one person would limit the scope of the bias. If you only asked one individual, their statements could be tainted if they had a preexisting opinion on the topic
Evidence
Adequate
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. However, if you were to consult multiple people, the scope of the bias would be severely limited.
Claim
Effective
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The more people, the less bias you risk, so asking only one individual could end up ruining a supposedly unbiased report. Not only is bias a problem to consider when asking individuals, making sure their statements are accurate can be equally if not more important.
Evidence
Adequate
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When asking people for advice, you must always consider whether what they're saying is actually true.
Claim
Effective
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Bias is incredibly important to weed out, but often fact checks can also help root out some bias too. Biased individuals are more likely to lie or include misleading statements in their advice. By discovering false or misleading statements, you can also discover hidden bias in the individual. None of us are always right, so people have mistaken opinions about many topics. When looking for help, you always run the risk of including false information from a well meaning individual, as you have nobody to fact check them against. You have no way to tell if what they're saying is true, and, if they deliver it more confidently, you may already be convinced it's a fact. Luckily, when you ask multiple people, and fact check all of their statements against one another, you can assure yourself a significantly smaller chance of obtaining false information. Although fact checking against other people can certainly help, there are other ways, including searching on Google or looking it up with a textbook, to fact check correctly. However, some statements are simply opinions and cannot be fact checked, only compared to other people's opinions.
Evidence
Effective
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When attempting to rephrase a sentence that sounds strange or incorrect, or when trying to add more detail and glamour to an otherwise boring sentence, there is no right or wrong answer
Claim
Effective
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Certain techniques may work better or worse, but there is never a fix all type solution. So when taking advice from someone who, for example, is helping you edit your paper, some things they say you cannot fact check with Google or a textbook. If you were to only consult this individual, they would have full control, and may make suggestions that aren't the best for your paper. That's why, especially when dealing with highly opinionated topics like rephrasing sentences and adding additional detail, its crucial to consult multiple people and make sure most agree with your changes to ensure they're the best for your paper. Oftentimes in a writing help after school club I'm a part of, we have to deal with problems like these where students need more detail, but there's really no right and wrong way to phrase the sentence. That's why we consult each other to make sure every change we make is for the good of that persons writing.
Evidence
Effective
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Wednesdays, after school, I work as a consultant to the writing center. In the club, younger students, usually from seventh grade, come to get help with their writing from older, more experienced students. Many times, seventh graders come in with half finished essays that could barely be considered rough drafts, but as it turns out they've already turned them in and need to re-write them for a higher grade. The process can be difficult, and sometimes grueling if the seventh grader doesn't want to and cooperate, but I still love consulting. Working there is a joy, but one of the things that really makes us able to go above and beyond to help other students is the ability to cross check with other consultants and work together. Often, seventh graders are assigned only one consultant to help them with their work. However, like I've said above, one persons opinion can definitely be flawed
Evidence
Effective
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This is why we employ many talented consultants, so if one doesn't know what to do or accidentally makes a mistake, others can catch it and further assist them.
Claim
Effective
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Asking multiple people for advice, no mater the topic, is always an important and crucial step of the writing process. By asking multiple people, you assure the least bias possible, the highest form of fact checking, the best way to phrase sentences and other similar opinionated subjects, and you ensure none of those you seek advice from made mistakes. 
Concluding Statement
Effective
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You should always seek out for new Idea's and opinions
Position
Adequate
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Did you know that half of the top businesses in the world were not from the idea of the owner. It came from people with ideas and newly opened up opinions.
Evidence
Adequate
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When someone gives you an idea for a business there basically trying to help you
Claim
Adequate
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invest in money or help you gain money for the better if the buisnes and the owner himself. Let's say a construction worker is about to go and build a house or another type of building you need someones opinion or idea to make sure your doing it right so therefore people can by your builing. People even need ideas or opinions when it comes to eating at a resteraunt, your not going to eat nasty food are you?
Evidence
Adequate
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When people ask for advice the are asking for your opinion or how feel to feel about the subject the person is talking about.
Claim
Adequate
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When people bring up asubject about something you bring up more than one person because it was more then one persons Idea or opinion. Now that you cn see basically the whole world woudln't be what it is today if it weren't for idea's and opinions.
Evidence
Adequate
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The are is never a bad Idea or opinion also every question that you ask is a good question
Evidence
Adequate
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Things get built faster and even things get invented based off somobodys opinion
Claim
Adequate
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A5FBF588B2F4
Whenever you feel as if you need to ask a question go ahead and ask the question because there is never a bad question to ask because you might be on the verge of creating something new and just don't know it yet.
Evidence
Adequate
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A5FBF588B2F4
Lots of eventers createed a lot things based on there opinion on something. Thomas Edison belived that he could make a ball of light and what did he do he mad the light bulb and every single house in the world that uses electricity uses the light bulb,I even got one at my house. Bengimin Franklin wanted to find out what lightning was so he went outside with a kite and a and a key and he captured and it couldv'e killed him. But it did not instead of dieing he was the creater of elctrictity. How do you think you got to work today? Even public speakers have there own opinions how do you think African American children and American children are in the same school,becasue Martin Luther King Jr belived or felt as if that the shouldn't be segregated any longer. The thing is about that is that is was his opion and helt to need he needed to say what he thought to everybody now lookat the world.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Now that you have seen all of the evidence, you know that opinions matter no matter hiw stupid you may think it is. You could be on the verge to something beyond great or even an inventer. Just know you opinion matters know matter what!
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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People ask for advice, because sometimes they can't make the choice on their own. It's also not a bad thing to do when you are stuck and need some advice from other people. When people make choices on their own and don't ask anyone for help, they tend to make a bad decision. Some people feel trapped when trying to ask someone they trust for advice, because they are scared about how they are going to react. So then they don't ask them and then the problem they were trying to solve turns into a even bigger problem then before. Then at the last moment they decide to tell or ask the person for advice when it's already too late. Sometimes it can create another problem that they are going to have to solve, or it solves the problem
Lead
Effective
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Asking one person you trust for advice is something people do more often than asking multiple people.
Counterclaim
Adequate
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But there is also a problem when asking only one person. If you truly trust that person, but they don't give you good advice who are you gonna ask then. The only person you told your problem to was that one person, so you don't have multiple choices like when you ask multiple people.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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A66B5A9D1F00
Plus, what would happen if that one person you trust doesn't what to help solve your problem, there is no one else you can ask for help if you don't ask them for advice.
Evidence
Adequate
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if you ask multiple people you can see their advice from their perspective.
Claim
Adequate
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This would mean you would have a large variety of choices to pick from.
Claim
Adequate
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Advice from multiple people is better than asking advice from one person
Position
Adequate
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If you ask multiple people for help with your problem then they will give you multiple ways to solve it.
Claim
Adequate
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if you ask one person for help they may or may not give you more than one way. For instance, if one of your friends give you a solution but you don't like that solution and is trying to do another solution, then you have those other friends you can ask. You aren't limited to how many people you can ask for advice. Some people can also go to a trusted adult, and ask them for advice with the problem they have. But sometimes people don't do that, because the adult mite take the situation into their own hands and some kids mite not like all the attention they are going to get
Evidence
Adequate
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The good thing about asking one person is you don't have to really worry about them going around telling that much people about your problem
Counterclaim
Adequate
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. But with multiple people you have to remember who you told and tell them no to tell anyone.
Evidence
Adequate
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If you also ask one people and it gets to an adult, then you would have to explain your problem to them even if you didn't want to. Then word would get around that you snitched to a teacher and then thats how bulling starts
Rebuttal
Adequate
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So if your going to tell a teacher, say it anonymously so no one knows who said what. You also don't have to worry about getting bullied when you keep it to yourself. But sometimes, people can't do that
Evidence
Ineffective
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After you ask the people you wanted to ask for advice, your going to have to make a decision. Before you make a decision, you are going to have to think of the consequences. Consequences are the outcomes of your choices that you decided to make. There can be good consequences and then there can be bad ones. The bad consequences depend on the situation that you are going to be in or is already there. You have to think," If I do that what is going to happen. Is it positive or is it going to be negative." Normally, people always go for the peaceful choice so their can be less problems. People also make choices everyday on what to eat, wear, and when they should do their papers.
Evidence
Ineffective
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some people need help on choosing what car they hod get,
Claim
Ineffective
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like talk to other people on what places to go on vacation,
Claim
Ineffective
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you can ask people about jobs
Claim
Ineffective
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it's good to ask more then one person for a opinion, for example seeking multiple opinions can help some make a better choice.
Position
Adequate
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Secant of all, some young adults need help on what to get like a car, or a truck. Other people need a opinion on if he or she hod get a house, or a apartment. But it is good to ask more then one person for a advise.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Tear of all, talking to more then one person about a vacation is a good idea. Because more then one person has been that to the same places.
Evidence
Adequate
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Other thin is that you hod ask people opinions about work or jobs. And all so asking people for their advice is a good thin to do
Evidence
Adequate
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some people may not gave you a good advice. But seeking for multiple opinions from more then one person can help you make a better choice
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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"LET ME GO!" Generic_Name shouted. Generic_Name was struggling to escape the breath taking choke hold she was in. Her mind flooded with horrendous thoughts. Generic_Name's date was trying to kidnap her. While she was fighting for her life,all she could think about was how she regretted meeting up with this dangerous,strange man. In hope to find a partner, Generic_Name downloaded a dating app. She was aware of the risks of chatting with and meeting strangers, but she was not bothered by it. Generic_Name was going to seek opinions from her close friends, but she knew they would not approve. Generic_Name felt that since she was an adult, it was her duty make her own decisions, and deal with the consequences without the validation of others. She soon found out that her decision was a bad idea. Generic_Name should have asked for her friends' opinions in making the decision to meet up with a stranger from a dating app.
Lead
Effective
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Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice
Position
Adequate
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by introducing their mind to different points of views
Claim
Effective
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seeing how options weigh out,
Claim
Effective
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gaining wisdom from others.
Claim
Effective
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While making a decision, it is important to seek advice from others. Being introduced to how different people would handle a situation or make a choice, can help a person make a more beneficial choice. For example, if Generic_Name would have asked three of her friends how they felt about the dating app, the scary situation in the beginning possibly could have been prevented. One friend could have told her to be careful and bring protection just in case, the other may have suggested to meet up in a public area with a numerous amount of people, and the other friend could have listed all the dangers about meeting with strangers. A couple of her friends could have mentioned to her how they would meet up with someone safely, and the other friend could have opened her mind to scary perspectives of meeting with a man online. Generic_Name would have made a better choice if she would have considered the different points of views. Be aware of who you take advice from. Always make sure the person that is introducing you to different point of views is someone you can put your trust into.
Evidence
Effective
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To further explain,when you weigh out options you are determining how one decision or choice you make can be more beneficial than the other choice or decision. If Generic_Name would have went to a trusting adult or relative, they could have informed her about the pros and cons of dating apps. They could have informed her about the number of kidnaps or deaths that relate to dating apps,or the low number of striving relationships. With that knowledge, Generic_Name could have weighed out her options. She could have used that knowledge to make a better choice. For example, Generic_Name's options were to be single and discontinue the use of the dating app, or meet a stranger and possibly start a risky relationship. If the cons seemed worse on the ''meet a stranger and possibly start a risky relationship'' side, than she would have weighed out her options, and chosen to be single. When you weigh out your options, make sure you have full knowledge on all possible choices.
Evidence
Effective
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When someone shares their wisdom with you, it can alter the way you think or perceive things. All it takes is a wise individual to share their thoughts and advice with you, for you to make a better choice. Generic_Name could have possibly talked to her mother, or a wise person in her life and asked them for their intake or thoughts about her dating app situation. Gaining advice from someone who is wiser than you can make you deeply consider your choices. If a wise person in Generic_Name's life would have told her not to force relationships or just wait on your true love to appear, she would have deleted the app and been patient. When you look up to someone, especially if their wise, you take what they say into a deeper understanding. When gaining wisdom from others,take it into deep consideration.
Evidence
Effective
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Sparkling lights filled the room while blush colored flowers made a trail down the isle. The room had a peachy aroma. People slowly entered the church and the murmurs of voices were filling the air. Generic_Name was in the back dressing room getting her large, white gown fitted on her body. She was getting married to the love of her life. Generic_Name was a dove. Generic_Name was graceful and delicate. Nobody could ruin her day"Generic_Name its almost time to walk," Generic_Name's father called out. She could hear the soft music playing. Butterflies fluttered around in her stomach. She could not believe how almost four months ago she was going to meet up with a man from a dating website. The thought made her body cringe. If she would have went on that date, she would have never met her soon to be husband. Generic_Name was in love and happier than she had ever been. She was so glad she listened to the opinions and advice from her friends and family.
Evidence
Effective
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Introducing someones mind to different points of views, seeing how options weigh out, and gaining wisdom from others are all ways seeking multiple opinions can help a person make a better choice.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Some people say the class for students in the home , online, or videoconference is benefic for students other people say this is the bad things for studednts because they no learn more expecific and they dont practice in the clasroom because in home some students not have apropiate thins for stade.
Position
Adequate
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People say the classes from home is good
Claim
Adequate
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ecause some students they need work for something like some students they need pay rent , bills then if studen like that take a classes in the home they have time for work and they get the mone for you suport and they dont need go some school because the classes online is beter. but some students take classes in the home they dont have a propiate things like some students dosent have a computier and if they dont have how they take the classes and other reason is benefic . When you take classes online i thing you can chose the classes more better for you, and you classes is more ease but when you need precentation sometihing else is hard because some times you cant learning to much in classes online.
Evidence
Adequate
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We can fine the reason for students take the classes online
Claim
Adequate
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that reason are: some stundents not have the same posivilites like another students they can go school , other students work a full time they dont have time for go school everiday , and other student like caming in this countre the other countre some times theo have more the 21 years old then they cant stared school because they old and the school onle recived people before 20 years old . In the united states people have oportunities for can gradute wherever you age and this oportunities is like you can make the GID diploma this diploma you can fine in school but yo go school after in the night some times. this programs is for doing more ease the life for people old or students not have time for stude in regular school this programe is better because is like the same diploma the hig school then peple have this deploma they can fine a job more ease and they can go some universite.
Evidence
Adequate
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we have other reason the schools have this oportunities
Claim
Ineffective
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because some students they learning more the others, is like the leavel is hight then te school is ease then they chose take classes oline and this students is benefit they can work and they can hepl your family .
Evidence
Ineffective
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some people say the classes online, home , or video conference that not good
Counterclaim
Adequate
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because some peolpe they dont take the classes and that is a one reason for people not have a good education but some boys when they have a classes oline they dont take and the time for the classes they doing other things and some times this thing not have a good ideas and some times people have problema or they intrevol whit police and the reason is for they dont go school for good education and your parents not give the good education.
Evidence
Adequate
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Other pepole saysome school not have this oportuniete take classes in the home or onlines
Counterclaim
Adequate
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but they have others choses like school in the night or after school.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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but when you in the group your work is more ease for you because you have other peoples and thye help you in thing a goods ideas and they can make a good work if you work only you need more time for doing you work and some times we can chese a good things and some times we need others opinions the other peoples.
Evidence
Ineffective
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i agree because some times the classes in oline make ease and is a good oportuinite for some students
Claim
Adequate
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for graduateand they can have a job, because some studen live alone and they need pay some bills then when take a classes online they have time for work and your life is more confortable,
Evidence
Adequate
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but this oportunities some times have a problems
Counterclaim
Adequate
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because some people not have a the same beneficts and this people need other thins like others helps and i thing school need other things not onle classes online or classes in the home because they dont know how is the life te other peoples ans when school have a this thins like classes oline and classes in te home they need put estrited rulers for students they make a shure when students take a classes and they need have a god teachers and good ideas for students take a classes and not have preblems when they need graduate, because sometimes students have a problemes for graduate and that not is good.
Evidence
Ineffective
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I have other opinion for the classes take in the home this classes not is for all students
Counterclaim
Adequate
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because some studen like your age is 12 in 15 they need take a classes in the school they dont need job because they can work for you age and this students they need go school for learning more specific thing and practice more in the class taht reason is because some times some guys not want to go school and they skip the classes and school if the school not have a good control for this and this stundents need more motivation and more enfoques in the life, this guys need classes in the home some times when parents is estricted they can change and they dont doing any more time bad chose.
Evidence
Adequate
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All school have make a sure this oportunities is better for students for examples they know if students feeld good in home and the relation whit family is better some people when tehy have a problems they cant enfoques in you school and this is a problem when you need graduate if you take a classes in the school and you have this problems you can talk whit other people like teacher or your friends but if you have a this problems and you take rthe classes in the home you cant talk whit other people for solve your problems. that why i say you need go to school when you have the oportuinite because the school is better bescase we need learn something the others people and we make a good personalite for future and chose a good ideas for my life.        
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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When people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one person. Since they might need help, and they might try to get the most advice possible
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I think taking advice from others is really helpful.
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new ideas,
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different mindset
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you can help others.
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One effect of taking advice is new ideas
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So, what i mean by this is you may have different look on things. math for an example you might be confused on how one person teaches it, but then go to a different person and they teach it a way you understand it. Also, it doesn't have to be about school it can be maybe your having a ruff time at home or something is going on in your social life.
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you can get a new mindset
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Lets say if you were really negative and you went to go seek advice from from therapist. Then you can have a new mindset on how life is and possibly become more positive. Since now that the internet is a thing you can get advice on almost anything. I remember this one time in my life how i was really negative, and i went to someone for help and now i'm more happier then i have been
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you can help others.
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I know what you might be thinking how does this have anything to do with taking advice from someone. Just let me explain. So, lets say if anyone of your friends is having a ruff time and you can give that said person advice. Also you can be a therapist yourself or a life coach. Thats the wonderful thing about the world. You can get advice and give it too.
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Mots people usually ask for advice, and they will most likely go to more than one person. Sometimes a person might need help, and so they go to the most advice they can get. I think taking advice from others is helpful. The reason for this is you can get new ideas, a different mindset, and you might be able to help others yourself
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Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. That might a good idea for some students but not all
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Today, many High Schoolers from the age of 15 to 18 have jobs. They work part time to help their parents pay for their phone bills, cars or something else. Sometimes they might want to work more, but school is 5 days a week, they have to do homework every night even on weekends. Going to work after school is very overwhelming. They get out at 9 or 10 depends on where they work, go home and do their homework, then go to bed probably late, and have to get up early the next morning. That goes on days after days. Many students can get stressed out easily
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So I think attending classes online or video conferencing help lots of students who have jobs.
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Staying at home and study is still better than waking up and getting ready early in the morning to go to school.
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