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ce136f4da9ce	8C15FC3C3BCB	People may say that school online doesn't affect friendships.	Counterclaim	Adequate
cb170158f72d	8C15FC3C3BCB	On the contrary, they are extremely wrong because you wouldn't be able to see them everyday as you normally do during the school day.	Rebuttal	Adequate
c19a90856ff7	8C15FC3C3BCB	Some people say that taking school online or with video cameras is beneficial. However, they are incorrect because it would be easy to cheat and students would face isolation from their friends. Cheating would be readily available as you don't have the teachers eyes on you which makes it easier to cheat, no matter how honest a teenager says they are because we are impulsive beings who rarely think logically. Isolation would be a terrible added factor of online school as friends keep most of us going during the school day.	Concluding Statement	Effective
3a944e67fe5f	8D2C20BDCDE0	Allowing students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing would be beneficial for students	Position	Adequate
9c0146feb738	8D2C20BDCDE0	because it would allow them to not have additional school days at the end of the year due to weather	Claim	Effective
bdce93afb354	8D2C20BDCDE0	allow them to not fall behind on work due to an illness or family situation.	Claim	Effective
449b98de2e6e	8D2C20BDCDE0	By offering distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home, they'll be able to continue their learning while not having to worry about falling behind or having to attend school later into the summer.	Claim	Effective
ae18ec2ac4dd	8D2C20BDCDE0	Many states in the United States get snow on a yearly basis, and as much as students love snow days, sometimes they can hinder a student's learning progress by preventing them from being able to travel to school safely.	Claim	Effective
f2c7898c76f7	8D2C20BDCDE0	Many states have a law saying that if too many days of school are canceled due to inclement weather, school days will unfortunately have to be added onto the end of the school year, so students can complete their education for that year. This can cause problems for many students as they might have a summer vacation already planned that'll have to be adjusted due to the extended school year. For instance, there was one year where my county had to add school days onto the end of the year due to additional snow days and that had messed up a lot of student's plans for the summer. Personally, I was able to adjust my vacation plans; however, I had many friends who ended up having to miss the last week of school due to this. If schools offered distance learning on these snow days, where students can still attend class online with their teachers, they can prevent additional school days at the end of the year due to weather.	Evidence	Effective
a21e95cea7fb	8D2C20BDCDE0	Distance learning by way of online or video conferencing is also beneficial to students because it'll allow them to stay on track with school work and not fall behind due to an illness or family situation.	Claim	Effective
53e434ea8374	8D2C20BDCDE0	There have been countless times where a student has been sick with a serious illness or had a family situation that prevented them from going to school for a week or so. Just missing one day of school causes a student to fall behind on a lot of work, so missing more than a week of school can definitely hinder a student's learning progress. I've had friends who were sick with an illness, like pneumonia, and were out of school for about two weeks; it took them weeks to be able to catch up and make up all of their missing work.	Evidence	Effective
57c36633fe47	8D2C20BDCDE0	Although a student should rest and recover when they're sick,	Counterclaim	Adequate
e126d35cfe0a	8D2C20BDCDE0	being able to listen in on class could help them have less work in school significantly.	Rebuttal	Adequate
172e28ea31e6	8D2C20BDCDE0	Another example where distance learning is beneficial for students is when they have a family situation. A student might be out of school for a couple days due to a family situation and could fall behind on work. Being able to go to school online or video conference would help that student stay on track with work and not have to spend a week trying to catch up on missed work when they return to school. For example, I had a family member suddenly pass away a while ago, and I had to attend their funeral. As a result, I had to miss a couple of days of school and fell behind on a lot of work. Because it was so sudden, I couldn't plan ahead with my teachers and eventually was stressed out when I came back to school due to the amount of work I had. If online learning had been an option for me, I would've been able to stay on track in school and not have to deal with the stresses of catching up on missed work.	Evidence	Effective
912443a7c298	8D2C20BDCDE0	I understand that online learning might not be beneficial for all students since each student has their own way of learning and that some students might not have the technology for it at home;	Counterclaim	Effective
3640a7d2bbb6	8D2C20BDCDE0	however, distance learning would be able to get rid of additional school days due to weather and help a student stay on track when they need to miss school.	Rebuttal	Adequate
d8a426778ec4	8D2C20BDCDE0	Online learning could also be implemented easily due to the fact that everyone has a chrome book in school, so many schools could install an app on the chrome book that allows for online learning to be possible.	Rebuttal	Adequate
f2cbf1c00a90	8D2C20BDCDE0	Although many students would not like online learning,	Counterclaim	Adequate
98049cb9f168	8D2C20BDCDE0	I think it would be a beneficial option to implement into the school systems in the long term.	Rebuttal	Effective
92fe03fb015b	8D2C20BDCDE0	Many students struggle during the school year because of missing school days, whether it's due to weather or due to a family situation, and distance learning would be a great option for those students to be able to stay on track with the school curriculum while missing school. Offering online learning will help a student continue their education, prevent them from falling behind in school, and create less stress for them to catch up on missed work; therefore, I think online learning would be beneficial for students and that schools should implement it into their systems.	Concluding Statement	Effective
54e0d0455b9f	8F85E4509835	Have you ever asked someone for advice? I always ask people for advise it makes things a lot easier.	Lead	Effective
e71a331bccde	8F85E4509835	When asking for advice seeking more than one opinion can help you make a better choice.	Position	Adequate
970b1e6fcb08	8F85E4509835	you would want to ask someone who has been through it before,	Claim	Effective
7ebf83e53c67	8F85E4509835	one person might not be good at giving advise as someone else would,	Claim	Effective
d91efc3051ba	8F85E4509835	one person might not have your best interest in mind like some others.	Claim	Effective
fe98bc8729ad	8F85E4509835	For example if you ask one friend they might have not experienced what your talking about, but if you ask another one your chances are higher because you asked more people. I always ask at least two people before making a big decision. If you asked for advise on how to swim you would want to hear from a swimmer not someone who cant swim so it would be smarter to ask multiple people. I once asked the wrong person how to ride a bike and I still feel the pain to this day. Just sit there and think for a second, The more people you ask the more likely youve asked someone that has gone through it before. This is like in the movies when a girl is in a breakup and is asking her friend what should she do. This is my first reason why I think asking multiple people for advice is better that one.	Evidence	Effective
4f22bae54b8a	8F85E4509835	What happened when you ask a friend for advise and the dont know so they give you almost like a guess? Chances are its not gonna be good. This has happened to me before and resulted in me losing lots of money. If you ask one person then another person ones advise might be better than the other one. So what if you didnt ask both? One time a friend told me to jump off the roof, but my other friend said us the ladder and I used the ladder and made it down safe. You could also ask three people and one isnt good at giving advise one is okay and the other is good dont you wanna ask all three so you can get good advise? This is usually like my friends vs. my parents. This is my second reason why I think you should ask multiple people.	Evidence	Adequate
9a1ae0db361c	8F85E4509835	What if you ask one friend for advice and their mad at the moment and they probably dont have your best interest in mind and you should get another opinion. I try not to ask mad friends for advise when possible. You should ask multiple people because everyone dosent know whats best for you. My parents are the only people who know whats best for me. Also your friends and peers dont always have your best interest in mind, sometimes they could give you bad advice to be funny. This happens to me all the time. This is my third reason why seeking more than one opinion can help you make a better choice.	Evidence	Effective
f81b6cc370c7	8F85E4509835	When asking for advice seeking more than one opinion can help you make a better choice. Reasons why are you would want to ask someone who has been through it before, one person might not be good at giving advise as someone else would, and one person might not have your best interest in mind like some others. This is why I feel like you should seek for more than one opinion when asking for advise. I hope you will seek for more than one opinion next time you ask for advise.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
25a9da68323a	8F8BCC081DC6	Home schooling, also known as home education, is the education of children at home, it is usally conducted by a parent, tutor, or an online teacher. Many families use less formal ways of home school in North America, whereas "home education" is only used elsewhere. Before the introduction to compulsory, school attendance laws most education was done at home. Homeschooling can affect social life. Attending public schools all your life you know a lot of people. So I think homeschooling can cause depression or cause anybody who tries home education to be lonely.	Lead	Adequate
9da7ad75ad2a	8F8BCC081DC6	In many states home education goes on as an alternative to public and private schools.	Claim	Ineffective
a8140c121b0c	8F8BCC081DC6	In other nations home schooling is illegal so students have no choice but to attend public or private schools. In the legal states students can be home schooling for many reasons. Some reasons can be like parents not wanting their kids around others while learning. Other reasons can be dealing with being kicked out of school and no other schools will accept you because of behavior. In my society today I know a few people that have been kicked out school and forced to be home schooled online.	Evidence	Adequate
fc2ced01fbea	8F8BCC081DC6	Being kicked out of school can be good or bad.	Claim	Ineffective
64e196a1afe0	8F8BCC081DC6	It can be good for students that don't learn well at school, but bad for those who learn well in school. If kicked out others may need more help and start to cheat on the work and look up answers. Causing them not learn as much as they did back in public schools. So if students know they wouldn't be able to learn well with a online teacher they shouldn't do anything to get kicked out school.	Evidence	Adequate
44bd7eface5b	8F8BCC081DC6	I think some students fit in the classroom and others need more help like hands on or close up.	Claim	Adequate
79f7ce341a80	8F8BCC081DC6	Disabilities could cause a student to seek help in person with a certified teacher. Not everyone learns the same way so not just everybody can attend classes from home. Everybody learns in their own way.	Evidence	Adequate
2d39e92a4d6e	8F8BCC081DC6	Overall I think home schooling is a good thing.	Position	Adequate
6e2ffd8eb8c3	8F8BCC081DC6	It can prevent school fights.	Claim	Adequate
b33661861dfc	8F8BCC081DC6	Also prevent skipping and being late to school missing insructional time.	Claim	Adequate
f8663b5fbdb5	8F8BCC081DC6	If I had the choice to home school I would do it. I feel it is a great choice to make. Therefore my stance on this prompt is home school or online classes.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
59f00d800cfc	907B493FEF99	It is alarming to think that less than twenty years ago virtual technology was just being invented, and ever since the turn of the 21st century the world has started to use technology and virtual data more and more. The world has started to trend in a direction in which humans rely on technology. For example, tools like phones and cars are used everyday. Virtual technology can be helpful however, and it is currently expanding to provide humans with new ways to make life easier. One way technology is being introduced to benefit humans is through distance learning or online classes. This new form of learning allows students to attend school from the comfort of their own homes.	Lead	Effective
5393c8dcf40c	907B493FEF99	Distance learning gives students a more customized and adaptive learning experience while giving students more time to engage in the extracurriculars they love.	Position	Effective
4eed41fe8826	907B493FEF99	One way distance learning is beneficial for students is because it allows students to customize their classes.	Claim	Effective
9c908e41650b	907B493FEF99	For example, Students in the public education system can only enroll in courses that are offered at their school. This may restrict students from taking classes that they are interested in or limit students from branching out and potentially finding a new passion. However, students taking online classes can choose from a wide variety of classes, that most likely incorporate their interests. The lack of restraint in regards to the courses offered in distance learning is beneficial for students. Not only do student have the freedom to choose what to learn, they also have the freedom to choose when to learn. Having the freedom of choosing when to learn is vital for students with specific needs or disabilities. When students are unable to go to school, learning can continue. This eliminates sick days, weather delays or cancellations, and school holidays. Furthermore, students are able to take courses at their own speed. Rather than the typical every other day school schedule, students can master a course in less than a month. The lack of restraint in regards to the courses offered in distance learning and when a student can learn is beneficial for all students.	Evidence	Effective
79950877cb52	907B493FEF99	Another benefit to learning from home is that it gives students more time to focus on their needs and wants rather than the schools.	Claim	Effective
51c43e566c52	907B493FEF99	In certain cases when student prodigies are more focused on a sport, a musical instrument or a job, learning from home can grant students more time to perfect their craft. Online learning allows them to have their primary focus being on what they love rather than on a rigorous and time wasting traditional school day. Another example is in the case of a student that does not thrive in a the social aspect of school. Sometimes kids feel overwhelmed and threatened by the large amount of students in one school. In order to feel comfortable, kids could video conference into school and learn from the comfort of their own home. School can be long and sometimes overwhelming so in certain cases distance learning can be beneficial.	Evidence	Effective
cea9975eb7bf	907B493FEF99	Learning is essential to grow as an individual but also as a population and with new technology, accomadating for certain needs is easy and beneficial. Distance learning is a way for students to customize when and what they want to learn as well as feel comfortable and adapt to their needs. Distance learning is a thing of the future that will soon benefit many.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
cc966d53ec3f	9151F588041F	Having a strong and well education is what is the most important when it comes to any person seeking the knowledge and insight to be able to pursue any career opportunities or other varying professions and lifestyles; furthermore, it is more widely known for students to attend a school and take courses from there	Lead	Effective
b62ba3488c1e	9151F588041F	Although it may be a better environment for students to go to classes and communicate in real life with their teachers and other peers, It would be more beneficial for students to have the choice to attend classes from home through the use of either online courses or video conferencing.	Position	Effective
a6d019aca0bc	9151F588041F	Online classes would be a great tool and advantage for those who wants to continue their education because it provides scholars not only to be more efficient and organized	Claim	Effective
9a846466419f	9151F588041F	but to also help those who are not comfortable in the environment of a school in general.	Claim	Effective
803f8b294dc2	9151F588041F	It is a modern era for both the teacher and the learner, so it is essential for all persons to have the opportunity to continue their education with ease and will.	Evidence	Effective
0dae495be300	9151F588041F	Without a doubt, it is a necessity for any student to have the skills of efficiency and organization through a means of completing the assignments and work provided to them, for it is what will help them in the near future.	Claim	Effective
0756e0ae27e3	9151F588041F	Online classes with help because to allows them to take notes or tests in a familiar atmosphere, which will make them more paced and manageable. Being able to do work or assignments at home is favorable because it lets students complete tasks without the need for judgment and pressure a normal, old fashioned institution would emit. Stress is a common factor in terms of learning, for the expectations of a normal school would have any person feeling doubtful and overwhelmed; however, these online classes provide students with the chance to do what they need to do with simplicity and intuition.	Evidence	Effective
f42cab42fbd6	9151F588041F	Some may say that one would not be able to learn well when only looking at a screen;	Counterclaim	Effective
cfa5ec472bca	9151F588041F	however, video conferencing allows the student to still be at home, but also learning face to face with their teacher or professor. Having all of your courses laid out with clarity through digital aspects shows that it would be easy for any person to become more organized and efficient though navigating these courses with clarity at home and managing your time well in a comfortable setting with efficiency.	Rebuttal	Effective
99e990581b69	9151F588041F	Not every person has the same lifestyle as the next, everyone has their own differing personalities and character traits that may or may not clash with others	Evidence	Effective
fca9df8d22df	9151F588041F	A comfortable atmosphere for a person seeking to expand their knowledge will be most beneficial because it allows someone who has difficulty in social setting to not feel as if they are being punished for wanting to continue on with schooling.	Claim	Effective
b7f46e2468f1	9151F588041F	People can be complicated, one may never know what is going on in another's life. Every person is different, no one is the same as the next in any way, shape, or form. Taking classes from home would help eliminate those who are uncomfortable in the environment an everyday school would have, such as those with anti-social tendencies or anxiety. Having so many students in just one building causes many conflicts, whether they be through two students, or between a student and their teacher. Within a school, it is inevitable for there to be an issue depending on how one may react and feel.	Evidence	Effective
43da2fb9c97a	9151F588041F	Although school from home would not completely solve these problems	Counterclaim	Adequate
c05fe270ab8b	9151F588041F	, it would help prevent conflicts such as bullying. Staying at home with the responsibility to complete work should be desirable for any person wishing to pursue their educative life, no person should feel uncomfortable or in dismay when it comes to wanting to learn.	Rebuttal	Effective
f8cba8de62b4	9151F588041F	Despite what one may believe when it comes to school, it is essential for anyone to have the opportunity to attend online school from home. Being in the familiarity and comfort of your own home causes beneficial aspects to ones life. It allows them to become more efficient, along with other skills needed to be successful. Prevention of any sort of conflict is important and needed to help whoever is having an issue. Online school is the new frontier, and to many, has already done its justice. Online school should be seen as the next best thing for any person who wishes to pursue their knowledge. It is time to get past the old-fashioned ideologies that learning should be done in a classroom, we are past that age and are continuing on into a new one.	Concluding Statement	Effective
376402ef22f8	93DC556B7C04	Many famous people who became famous for their work of whatever expertise they acquired usually didn't ask for just one specific person's idea. They saw many people's criticism to something that they made, and they improved their idea gradually, such as The Simpsons. When they first made the main characters, it seemed to be poorly drawn and the voices were weird, but as the episodes went on and on, the characters and voices had smoothed out and improved to what they are today. Having one person to ask for your opinion can sometimes be just the right thing to make your project approved by one person other than you, but sometimes asking other people can give you many more perspectives to look at, giving you an upgraded idea for the one you just had	Lead	Effective
764daae66bec	93DC556B7C04	Multiple opinions from different people is beneficial	Position	Adequate
d5979ab5b84f	93DC556B7C04	it can provide different perspectives,	Claim	Adequate
fd763a34607b	93DC556B7C04	they can help out with problems,	Claim	Adequate
a1e980d61517	93DC556B7C04	they can compliment you on how great it looks.	Claim	Adequate
82536b7bd39e	93DC556B7C04	Having many peoples' opinions presents you with different people giving their own taste at what they like and don't like with the idea you have.	Claim	Effective
0cf30172e729	93DC556B7C04	Not everyone has the same idea for the ideal project that you think of. Each person has a different mind set on what they like and don't like, and what could be added or removed. When it comes to ethnicity and people's income, people can say that the idea is too much money, or that some people might not like something about the idea because it upsets their culture or beliefs. This can make you consider whether you can change the idea to make it less cruel to the person's culture or beliefs, or you can also consider dropping the price of the idea you have. The idea can also affect different types of ages, because they can think that the idea is cruel or misunderstood. An example is if you were trying to make a game based on WWII, some older people would not like it because it can portray the wrong idea of what happened. Although old people might not like it, many teenagers or young adults might like the idea of your game, and creating this story line from the old people's perspective might make the teenagers lose interest in the game you made, so it makes you think a lot whether you should agree with the old people, agree with the teenagers, or have a combination of both an older, original WWII story line, and a less original WWII story line.	Evidence	Effective
edb91a93e8c8	93DC556B7C04	People can point out problems with your idea, and find a way to correct the it.	Claim	Effective
7059e240a647	93DC556B7C04	If there is an error or flaw in your idea, they can point it out so your idea won't contain that flaw anymore. An example is the Apple Company that makes a variety of electronics that people. They don't have just one version of the idea that they made; they have many different types of phones, each coming from different years with different ideas of the ideal iPhone that everyone would like to buy. People give their ideas to the Apple Company, such as having a phone with no home button, having a bigger-sized phone, or even having a brand new product, like AirPods. Many people who ask one person think it can be embarrassing to ask someone if there is anything wrong just to find out there is something wrong, although it doesn't matter if you get embarrassed or not. It matters that you got the mistake from someone and corrected that mistake for the better of the people. In fact, having more problems is better than having none, because that just means you just have some more to work on, and if the first type of your idea doesn't work out, you can always try again and again with your idea until it has reached the best outcome it can possibly receive.	Evidence	Effective
f57fd925f7ad	93DC556B7C04	You can get many compliments on your idea, producing a good feeling that your idea is great.	Claim	Effective
e542612e2bca	93DC556B7C04	The more compliments you receive, the more people who say they like the idea. Many famous writers used other people's thoughts to see whether or not their book is good, and they ask for their opinion. An example from me is my favorite series of books: Gone Series. On the front cover of the book, it has one quote from an author, and on the back there were many other quotes from other companies. Adding to the quotes, on the top of the book said #1 New York best Selling Book , basically saying to new readers that this series is good and popular. That is usually why on the front cover or back cover of a book contains a quote from different people or companies showing their good opinion about this book, so the readers can see that since this person liked the book, then it must be a good book to read. Having an award on your book also brings in popularity because winning something like the Pulitzer prize can bring a ton of attention to your book. It can give you more to believe in that your project will be good because you have many people who say your project is good. Not just the people who say that it's just "good", but also the people who point out the things that they especially liked within your idea, such as, "I liked how you included this part to make that huge problem go away." These kinds of compliments makes you feel even better inside, and it tells you that you can take your mind off that one part of the idea and imagine more possible problems.	Evidence	Effective
bb0214f191aa	93DC556B7C04	It doesn't matter if you have a mistake or two in your idea that was pointed out by someone. What matters most is that you asked people for their opinion, and having the best idea you can have. When you ask people for their opinion, it gives you inspiration, courage, and perseverance to keep on doing your best, because in the end, it can turn out to be the best thing you ever did, maybe receiving a ton of money, winning awards for your accomplishments, or meeting other famous people who also like and use your idea on a daily basis. If your idea just doesn't work out in the end, you could either ask more people for their opinion on how to revive your idea, or it can be your end to the project and give up on the idea. Either way, it can at least be the most fun you've had working on an idea in your life.	Concluding Statement	Effective
47156412ccb7	94DF4BBF522F	Children were told sometime in their life that everybody was unique and different in some sort of way, that there were absolutely no two people that looks the same, much less think and act the same. This applies in everyday life from then and getting advice is not the exception. Everybody has different beliefs, experience and ways to do things so it's hard to find one person that exactly understand you to the point of giving you advice perfectly.	Lead	Effective
133292504840	94DF4BBF522F	It's much better to talk to several different people and think about the different possibilities the advice might have to find the perfect solution for the problem.	Position	Effective
6abce1263c4e	94DF4BBF522F	different beliefs or prejudice,	Claim	Ineffective
d7360566d063	94DF4BBF522F	different experience	Claim	Ineffective
e1ba98bee5a8	94DF4BBF522F	different ways that we all think.	Claim	Adequate
9a48ec85b367	94DF4BBF522F	It's no opinion that everybody has different beliefs.	Claim	Adequate
b179c8679c19	94DF4BBF522F	People fight over their beliefs everyday on the news everyday and people usually become friends with others who has the same beliefs as them. Although beliefs may be factual or wrong, it's what people hold close to and no matter how hard you might try, prejudice is unavoidable with beliefs. As a person giving advice, this will change your advice a little if not a lot and as a person receiving advice this might challenge your own beliefs. Asking multiple people for advice might help you understand which is the beliefs that differentiate and translate into your actions.	Evidence	Adequate
4d1ab34a6547	94DF4BBF522F	Everybody was born differently, in different situations and in different times. This impacts their experiences, from every moment of their life.	Claim	Effective
955402682737	94DF4BBF522F	Even if two people go to the same event, they might still have absolutely separate experiences, because everybody might feel different things at different times. For example, if somebody wants advice on a person, two people might totally different and separate experiences with that one person because we don't behave and react to things the exact same everyday. Asking multiple people will avoid and help you combine the helpful experience and estimate what would happen, where if you ask only one person, their experience might be completely different from you.	Evidence	Adequate
dc6ba9bdcf32	94DF4BBF522F	Just like beliefs and experiences, they way people thinks is always going to be different.	Claim	Adequate
b30337524d07	94DF4BBF522F	An example is the thinking difference between children and adults. How children thinks aren't that mature yet but they can probably think quicker but less effective. Adults could think much slower but overall make the wiser decisions. This can impact advice giving and getting all kinds of point of views can help you sort out your thoughts and make the overall best decision for yourself on your own problem more than getting one piece of advice and doing the wrong thing for yourself.	Evidence	Adequate
a85e47b8135e	94DF4BBF522F	Getting advice is easier to manage and organize if it's from all kinds of different people. One person giving you advice may impact your problem to be even worse because they might have different beliefs, experience and the way they think may be different. The person who has the problem should be the one deciding, and getting advice from one person might pressure them to do what would make their problem worse or not the way the original person might have wanted it to go like.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
e611438fb0f2	952CB87D4897	In the vast idea of being right or wrong, an individual can easily be swayed or unsure whether something is just the way they wanted it	Lead	Adequate
c816251b2843	952CB87D4897	In this case, and many others, seeking outside advise or help can solve this problem	Position	Effective
b40ee602217d	952CB87D4897	Not only can seeking help create a better understanding for the person who was unsure of something	Claim	Effective
3ec9c0dea57d	952CB87D4897	but it can also relieve stress and anxiety, which is a major component of a decision about to be made	Claim	Effective
a12d1f46ed88	952CB87D4897	Also, a further benefit of asking for outside help, is for the well-being of others. If this decision could affect the lives of other individuals, its only common sense to be one hundred and one percent sure before making that decision, and what better way to be one hundred and one percent sure than asking the advice of others.	Claim	Effective
5b541f2e0932	952CB87D4897	Seeking understanding is a huge skill that many don't have and is a skill many should develop.	Claim	Effective
5f859b1cbec7	952CB87D4897	Asking someone a simple question like "Is this good to go?" can truly impact someone's mindset of how to deal with problems, and can give them strong advice of how to handle the problem they currently have. Multiple pieces of advise would make an even bigger impact on a person and give them more understanding of what others think. Because of this they will be more prepared, and have a different mentality for future problems. From my personal experience, I can relate to having others critic and check my work because I know the helpfulness and understanding I get, can make a real impact on me.	Evidence	Effective
02f0b46cf695	952CB87D4897	It has been proven that stress only causes harmful and emotional side effects to individuals. So, why not remove it? That is exactly why simple checks on your work, or something you may be unsure about can make a real impact. As stressful as everyday human lives can be, there's no harm done in taking a little out of your time to ask others about your situation and how to deal with it. Being more sure on something can cause an individual to worry less and end up making better decisions. Maybe you have a huge decision coming up like a proposal. You need to be absolutely sure and know it in your gut that this is the right decision to be made, and asking others can help you know that you are making the right decision or you are making the wrong decision	Evidence	Effective
06ae39f33e1b	952CB87D4897	The more advice someone has, the more confident that someone can be, and can have less stress going through with that decision.	Claim	Effective
5f4ccc061492	952CB87D4897	If you live by the motto "Put others before yourself" it is critical to understand that the decision you make could negatively affect others, as well as yourself. An example of this is smoking marijuana. By doing this, you could be causing others to be doing it as well, just because you are doing it. You could be at a legal age, but marijuana is still bad for you as well as others. Asking your friends if they are okay with it and if it is a good decision, can cause you to realize that in the long run, it is a bad and not a thought-out decision. Like said before, other people's lives are also important and seeking help before a decision, to make sure that it is good and well-thought out, can make a true impact in others.	Evidence	Effective
3e955fafe802	952CB87D4897	Also, as modern day society is getting bigger and bigger, and people are becoming more reliant on safety, it is extremely important to ensure and provide safety for each individual, and asking for other's advice can ensure you that your decision is safe and responsible.	Claim	Effective
2c96550bebb8	952CB87D4897	All people strive to do what's right, whether it be doing right toward others, or to yourself. Doing right toward others and yourself doesn't just mean getting good grades or achieving an award, but it means doing the right thing. Asking others for advice can ensure that you are doing right toward others and yourself. When doing this, you can seek out understanding of the problem you are facing, which can be an important skill for people to have. Throughout asking others for advice, you can relieve stress by knowing what you did was right, and you can be assured that what you are doing is safe and responsible, which won't have side effects that could harm or hurt others. A simple skill, asking others for help or advice, can truly make in impact in others and yourself.	Concluding Statement	Effective
01bf41146cf2	9627B47C10DE	Generic_Name woke up with a churning feeling in her stomach. She still didn't know whether she should cut off her toxic friend Generic_Name or not. She picked up her phone and read the text from Generic_Name. It read, "Hey ugly. You better not wear that hideous green shirt of yours today. I'm wearing my green dress and I don't want people to think we're matching." Generic_Name sighed and just ignored the text. She decided to text her friend Generic_Name, who is also friends with Generic_Name, and ask her what to do. The text read, "Hey Generic_Name, Generic_Name has been really mean to me recently and I dont know if I should stop talking to her or if I'm just being dramatic. Please help." Generic_Name responded, "Stop being so sensitive! Don't ruin the friend group with your petty drama and just let it go." Generic_Name didn't expect this reaction and she still wasn't sure if she should continue being friends with Generic_Name but she didn't really have another option.	Lead	Adequate
608e1d81f4ed	9627B47C10DE	Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice	Position	Effective

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People may say that school online doesn't affect friendships.

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On the contrary, they are extremely wrong because you wouldn't be able to see them everyday as you normally do during the school day.

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Some people say that taking school online or with video cameras is beneficial. However, they are incorrect because it would be easy to cheat and students would face isolation from their friends. Cheating would be readily available as you don't have the teachers eyes on you which makes it easier to cheat, no matter how honest a teenager says they are because we are impulsive beings who rarely think logically. Isolation would be a terrible added factor of online school as friends keep most of us going during the school day.

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Allowing students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing would be beneficial for students

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because it would allow them to not have additional school days at the end of the year due to weather

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allow them to not fall behind on work due to an illness or family situation.

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By offering distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home, they'll be able to continue their learning while not having to worry about falling behind or having to attend school later into the summer.

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Many states in the United States get snow on a yearly basis, and as much as students love snow days, sometimes they can hinder a student's learning progress by preventing them from being able to travel to school safely.

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Many states have a law saying that if too many days of school are canceled due to inclement weather, school days will unfortunately have to be added onto the end of the school year, so students can complete their education for that year. This can cause problems for many students as they might have a summer vacation already planned that'll have to be adjusted due to the extended school year. For instance, there was one year where my county had to add school days onto the end of the year due to additional snow days and that had messed up a lot of student's plans for the summer. Personally, I was able to adjust my vacation plans; however, I had many friends who ended up having to miss the last week of school due to this. If schools offered distance learning on these snow days, where students can still attend class online with their teachers, they can prevent additional school days at the end of the year due to weather.

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Distance learning by way of online or video conferencing is also beneficial to students because it'll allow them to stay on track with school work and not fall behind due to an illness or family situation.

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There have been countless times where a student has been sick with a serious illness or had a family situation that prevented them from going to school for a week or so. Just missing one day of school causes a student to fall behind on a lot of work, so missing more than a week of school can definitely hinder a student's learning progress. I've had friends who were sick with an illness, like pneumonia, and were out of school for about two weeks; it took them weeks to be able to catch up and make up all of their missing work.

Evidence

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Although a student should rest and recover when they're sick,

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being able to listen in on class could help them have less work in school significantly.

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Another example where distance learning is beneficial for students is when they have a family situation. A student might be out of school for a couple days due to a family situation and could fall behind on work. Being able to go to school online or video conference would help that student stay on track with work and not have to spend a week trying to catch up on missed work when they return to school. For example, I had a family member suddenly pass away a while ago, and I had to attend their funeral. As a result, I had to miss a couple of days of school and fell behind on a lot of work. Because it was so sudden, I couldn't plan ahead with my teachers and eventually was stressed out when I came back to school due to the amount of work I had. If online learning had been an option for me, I would've been able to stay on track in school and not have to deal with the stresses of catching up on missed work.

Evidence

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I understand that online learning might not be beneficial for all students since each student has their own way of learning and that some students might not have the technology for it at home;

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however, distance learning would be able to get rid of additional school days due to weather and help a student stay on track when they need to miss school.

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Online learning could also be implemented easily due to the fact that everyone has a chrome book in school, so many schools could install an app on the chrome book that allows for online learning to be possible.

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Although many students would not like online learning,

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I think it would be a beneficial option to implement into the school systems in the long term.

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Many students struggle during the school year because of missing school days, whether it's due to weather or due to a family situation, and distance learning would be a great option for those students to be able to stay on track with the school curriculum while missing school. Offering online learning will help a student continue their education, prevent them from falling behind in school, and create less stress for them to catch up on missed work; therefore, I think online learning would be beneficial for students and that schools should implement it into their systems.

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Have you ever asked someone for advice? I always ask people for advise it makes things a lot easier.

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When asking for advice seeking more than one opinion can help you make a better choice.

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you would want to ask someone who has been through it before,

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one person might not be good at giving advise as someone else would,

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one person might not have your best interest in mind like some others.

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For example if you ask one friend they might have not experienced what your talking about, but if you ask another one your chances are higher because you asked more people. I always ask at least two people before making a big decision. If you asked for advise on how to swim you would want to hear from a swimmer not someone who cant swim so it would be smarter to ask multiple people. I once asked the wrong person how to ride a bike and I still feel the pain to this day. Just sit there and think for a second, The more people you ask the more likely youve asked someone that has gone through it before. This is like in the movies when a girl is in a breakup and is asking her friend what should she do. This is my first reason why I think asking multiple people for advice is better that one.

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What happened when you ask a friend for advise and the dont know so they give you almost like a guess? Chances are its not gonna be good. This has happened to me before and resulted in me losing lots of money. If you ask one person then another person ones advise might be better than the other one. So what if you didnt ask both? One time a friend told me to jump off the roof, but my other friend said us the ladder and I used the ladder and made it down safe. You could also ask three people and one isnt good at giving advise one is okay and the other is good dont you wanna ask all three so you can get good advise? This is usually like my friends vs. my parents. This is my second reason why I think you should ask multiple people.

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What if you ask one friend for advice and their mad at the moment and they probably dont have your best interest in mind and you should get another opinion. I try not to ask mad friends for advise when possible. You should ask multiple people because everyone dosent know whats best for you. My parents are the only people who know whats best for me. Also your friends and peers dont always have your best interest in mind, sometimes they could give you bad advice to be funny. This happens to me all the time. This is my third reason why seeking more than one opinion can help you make a better choice.

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When asking for advice seeking more than one opinion can help you make a better choice. Reasons why are you would want to ask someone who has been through it before, one person might not be good at giving advise as someone else would, and one person might not have your best interest in mind like some others. This is why I feel like you should seek for more than one opinion when asking for advise. I hope you will seek for more than one opinion next time you ask for advise.

Concluding Statement

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Home schooling, also known as home education, is the education of children at home, it is usally conducted by a parent, tutor, or an online teacher. Many families use less formal ways of home school in North America, whereas "home education" is only used elsewhere. Before the introduction to compulsory, school attendance laws most education was done at home. Homeschooling can affect social life. Attending public schools all your life you know a lot of people. So I think homeschooling can cause depression or cause anybody who tries home education to be lonely.

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In many states home education goes on as an alternative to public and private schools.

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In other nations home schooling is illegal so students have no choice but to attend public or private schools. In the legal states students can be home schooling for many reasons. Some reasons can be like parents not wanting their kids around others while learning. Other reasons can be dealing with being kicked out of school and no other schools will accept you because of behavior. In my society today I know a few people that have been kicked out school and forced to be home schooled online.

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Being kicked out of school can be good or bad.

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It can be good for students that don't learn well at school, but bad for those who learn well in school. If kicked out others may need more help and start to cheat on the work and look up answers. Causing them not learn as much as they did back in public schools. So if students know they wouldn't be able to learn well with a online teacher they shouldn't do anything to get kicked out school.

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I think some students fit in the classroom and others need more help like hands on or close up.

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Disabilities could cause a student to seek help in person with a certified teacher. Not everyone learns the same way so not just everybody can attend classes from home. Everybody learns in their own way.

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Overall I think home schooling is a good thing.

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It can prevent school fights.

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Also prevent skipping and being late to school missing insructional time.

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If I had the choice to home school I would do it. I feel it is a great choice to make. Therefore my stance on this prompt is home school or online classes.

Concluding Statement

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It is alarming to think that less than twenty years ago virtual technology was just being invented, and ever since the turn of the 21st century the world has started to use technology and virtual data more and more. The world has started to trend in a direction in which humans rely on technology. For example, tools like phones and cars are used everyday. Virtual technology can be helpful however, and it is currently expanding to provide humans with new ways to make life easier. One way technology is being introduced to benefit humans is through distance learning or online classes. This new form of learning allows students to attend school from the comfort of their own homes.

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Distance learning gives students a more customized and adaptive learning experience while giving students more time to engage in the extracurriculars they love.

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One way distance learning is beneficial for students is because it allows students to customize their classes.

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For example, Students in the public education system can only enroll in courses that are offered at their school. This may restrict students from taking classes that they are interested in or limit students from branching out and potentially finding a new passion. However, students taking online classes can choose from a wide variety of classes, that most likely incorporate their interests. The lack of restraint in regards to the courses offered in distance learning is beneficial for students. Not only do student have the freedom to choose what to learn, they also have the freedom to choose when to learn. Having the freedom of choosing when to learn is vital for students with specific needs or disabilities. When students are unable to go to school, learning can continue. This eliminates sick days, weather delays or cancellations, and school holidays. Furthermore, students are able to take courses at their own speed. Rather than the typical every other day school schedule, students can master a course in less than a month. The lack of restraint in regards to the courses offered in distance learning and when a student can learn is beneficial for all students.

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Another benefit to learning from home is that it gives students more time to focus on their needs and wants rather than the schools.

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In certain cases when student prodigies are more focused on a sport, a musical instrument or a job, learning from home can grant students more time to perfect their craft. Online learning allows them to have their primary focus being on what they love rather than on a rigorous and time wasting traditional school day. Another example is in the case of a student that does not thrive in a the social aspect of school. Sometimes kids feel overwhelmed and threatened by the large amount of students in one school. In order to feel comfortable, kids could video conference into school and learn from the comfort of their own home. School can be long and sometimes overwhelming so in certain cases distance learning can be beneficial.

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Learning is essential to grow as an individual but also as a population and with new technology, accomadating for certain needs is easy and beneficial. Distance learning is a way for students to customize when and what they want to learn as well as feel comfortable and adapt to their needs. Distance learning is a thing of the future that will soon benefit many.

Concluding Statement

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Having a strong and well education is what is the most important when it comes to any person seeking the knowledge and insight to be able to pursue any career opportunities or other varying professions and lifestyles; furthermore, it is more widely known for students to attend a school and take courses from there

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Although it may be a better environment for students to go to classes and communicate in real life with their teachers and other peers, It would be more beneficial for students to have the choice to attend classes from home through the use of either online courses or video conferencing.

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Online classes would be a great tool and advantage for those who wants to continue their education because it provides scholars not only to be more efficient and organized

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but to also help those who are not comfortable in the environment of a school in general.

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It is a modern era for both the teacher and the learner, so it is essential for all persons to have the opportunity to continue their education with ease and will.

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Without a doubt, it is a necessity for any student to have the skills of efficiency and organization through a means of completing the assignments and work provided to them, for it is what will help them in the near future.

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Online classes with help because to allows them to take notes or tests in a familiar atmosphere, which will make them more paced and manageable. Being able to do work or assignments at home is favorable because it lets students complete tasks without the need for judgment and pressure a normal, old fashioned institution would emit. Stress is a common factor in terms of learning, for the expectations of a normal school would have any person feeling doubtful and overwhelmed; however, these online classes provide students with the chance to do what they need to do with simplicity and intuition.

Evidence

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Some may say that one would not be able to learn well when only looking at a screen;

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however, video conferencing allows the student to still be at home, but also learning face to face with their teacher or professor. Having all of your courses laid out with clarity through digital aspects shows that it would be easy for any person to become more organized and efficient though navigating these courses with clarity at home and managing your time well in a comfortable setting with efficiency.

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Not every person has the same lifestyle as the next, everyone has their own differing personalities and character traits that may or may not clash with others

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A comfortable atmosphere for a person seeking to expand their knowledge will be most beneficial because it allows someone who has difficulty in social setting to not feel as if they are being punished for wanting to continue on with schooling.

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People can be complicated, one may never know what is going on in another's life. Every person is different, no one is the same as the next in any way, shape, or form. Taking classes from home would help eliminate those who are uncomfortable in the environment an everyday school would have, such as those with anti-social tendencies or anxiety. Having so many students in just one building causes many conflicts, whether they be through two students, or between a student and their teacher. Within a school, it is inevitable for there to be an issue depending on how one may react and feel.

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Although school from home would not completely solve these problems

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, it would help prevent conflicts such as bullying. Staying at home with the responsibility to complete work should be desirable for any person wishing to pursue their educative life, no person should feel uncomfortable or in dismay when it comes to wanting to learn.

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Despite what one may believe when it comes to school, it is essential for anyone to have the opportunity to attend online school from home. Being in the familiarity and comfort of your own home causes beneficial aspects to ones life. It allows them to become more efficient, along with other skills needed to be successful. Prevention of any sort of conflict is important and needed to help whoever is having an issue. Online school is the new frontier, and to many, has already done its justice. Online school should be seen as the next best thing for any person who wishes to pursue their knowledge. It is time to get past the old-fashioned ideologies that learning should be done in a classroom, we are past that age and are continuing on into a new one.

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Many famous people who became famous for their work of whatever expertise they acquired usually didn't ask for just one specific person's idea. They saw many people's criticism to something that they made, and they improved their idea gradually, such as The Simpsons. When they first made the main characters, it seemed to be poorly drawn and the voices were weird, but as the episodes went on and on, the characters and voices had smoothed out and improved to what they are today. Having one person to ask for your opinion can sometimes be just the right thing to make your project approved by one person other than you, but sometimes asking other people can give you many more perspectives to look at, giving you an upgraded idea for the one you just had

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Multiple opinions from different people is beneficial

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it can provide different perspectives,

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they can help out with problems,

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they can compliment you on how great it looks.

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Having many peoples' opinions presents you with different people giving their own taste at what they like and don't like with the idea you have.

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Not everyone has the same idea for the ideal project that you think of. Each person has a different mind set on what they like and don't like, and what could be added or removed. When it comes to ethnicity and people's income, people can say that the idea is too much money, or that some people might not like something about the idea because it upsets their culture or beliefs. This can make you consider whether you can change the idea to make it less cruel to the person's culture or beliefs, or you can also consider dropping the price of the idea you have. The idea can also affect different types of ages, because they can think that the idea is cruel or misunderstood. An example is if you were trying to make a game based on WWII, some older people would not like it because it can portray the wrong idea of what happened. Although old people might not like it, many teenagers or young adults might like the idea of your game, and creating this story line from the old people's perspective might make the teenagers lose interest in the game you made, so it makes you think a lot whether you should agree with the old people, agree with the teenagers, or have a combination of both an older, original WWII story line, and a less original WWII story line.

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People can point out problems with your idea, and find a way to correct the it.

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If there is an error or flaw in your idea, they can point it out so your idea won't contain that flaw anymore. An example is the Apple Company that makes a variety of electronics that people. They don't have just one version of the idea that they made; they have many different types of phones, each coming from different years with different ideas of the ideal iPhone that everyone would like to buy. People give their ideas to the Apple Company, such as having a phone with no home button, having a bigger-sized phone, or even having a brand new product, like AirPods. Many people who ask one person think it can be embarrassing to ask someone if there is anything wrong just to find out there is something wrong, although it doesn't matter if you get embarrassed or not. It matters that you got the mistake from someone and corrected that mistake for the better of the people. In fact, having more problems is better than having none, because that just means you just have some more to work on, and if the first type of your idea doesn't work out, you can always try again and again with your idea until it has reached the best outcome it can possibly receive.

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You can get many compliments on your idea, producing a good feeling that your idea is great.

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The more compliments you receive, the more people who say they like the idea. Many famous writers used other people's thoughts to see whether or not their book is good, and they ask for their opinion. An example from me is my favorite series of books: Gone Series. On the front cover of the book, it has one quote from an author, and on the back there were many other quotes from other companies. Adding to the quotes, on the top of the book said #1 New York best Selling Book , basically saying to new readers that this series is good and popular. That is usually why on the front cover or back cover of a book contains a quote from different people or companies showing their good opinion about this book, so the readers can see that since this person liked the book, then it must be a good book to read. Having an award on your book also brings in popularity because winning something like the Pulitzer prize can bring a ton of attention to your book. It can give you more to believe in that your project will be good because you have many people who say your project is good. Not just the people who say that it's just "good", but also the people who point out the things that they especially liked within your idea, such as, "I liked how you included this part to make that huge problem go away." These kinds of compliments makes you feel even better inside, and it tells you that you can take your mind off that one part of the idea and imagine more possible problems.

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It doesn't matter if you have a mistake or two in your idea that was pointed out by someone. What matters most is that you asked people for their opinion, and having the best idea you can have. When you ask people for their opinion, it gives you inspiration, courage, and perseverance to keep on doing your best, because in the end, it can turn out to be the best thing you ever did, maybe receiving a ton of money, winning awards for your accomplishments, or meeting other famous people who also like and use your idea on a daily basis. If your idea just doesn't work out in the end, you could either ask more people for their opinion on how to revive your idea, or it can be your end to the project and give up on the idea. Either way, it can at least be the most fun you've had working on an idea in your life.

Concluding Statement

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Children were told sometime in their life that everybody was unique and different in some sort of way, that there were absolutely no two people that looks the same, much less think and act the same. This applies in everyday life from then and getting advice is not the exception. Everybody has different beliefs, experience and ways to do things so it's hard to find one person that exactly understand you to the point of giving you advice perfectly.

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It's much better to talk to several different people and think about the different possibilities the advice might have to find the perfect solution for the problem.

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different beliefs or prejudice,

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different experience

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different ways that we all think.

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It's no opinion that everybody has different beliefs.

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People fight over their beliefs everyday on the news everyday and people usually become friends with others who has the same beliefs as them. Although beliefs may be factual or wrong, it's what people hold close to and no matter how hard you might try, prejudice is unavoidable with beliefs. As a person giving advice, this will change your advice a little if not a lot and as a person receiving advice this might challenge your own beliefs. Asking multiple people for advice might help you understand which is the beliefs that differentiate and translate into your actions.

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Everybody was born differently, in different situations and in different times. This impacts their experiences, from every moment of their life.

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Even if two people go to the same event, they might still have absolutely separate experiences, because everybody might feel different things at different times. For example, if somebody wants advice on a person, two people might totally different and separate experiences with that one person because we don't behave and react to things the exact same everyday. Asking multiple people will avoid and help you combine the helpful experience and estimate what would happen, where if you ask only one person, their experience might be completely different from you.

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Just like beliefs and experiences, they way people thinks is always going to be different.

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An example is the thinking difference between children and adults. How children thinks aren't that mature yet but they can probably think quicker but less effective. Adults could think much slower but overall make the wiser decisions. This can impact advice giving and getting all kinds of point of views can help you sort out your thoughts and make the overall best decision for yourself on your own problem more than getting one piece of advice and doing the wrong thing for yourself.

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Getting advice is easier to manage and organize if it's from all kinds of different people. One person giving you advice may impact your problem to be even worse because they might have different beliefs, experience and the way they think may be different. The person who has the problem should be the one deciding, and getting advice from one person might pressure them to do what would make their problem worse or not the way the original person might have wanted it to go like.

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In the vast idea of being right or wrong, an individual can easily be swayed or unsure whether something is just the way they wanted it

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In this case, and many others, seeking outside advise or help can solve this problem

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Not only can seeking help create a better understanding for the person who was unsure of something

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but it can also relieve stress and anxiety, which is a major component of a decision about to be made

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Also, a further benefit of asking for outside help, is for the well-being of others. If this decision could affect the lives of other individuals, its only common sense to be one hundred and one percent sure before making that decision, and what better way to be one hundred and one percent sure than asking the advice of others.

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Seeking understanding is a huge skill that many don't have and is a skill many should develop.

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Asking someone a simple question like "Is this good to go?" can truly impact someone's mindset of how to deal with problems, and can give them strong advice of how to handle the problem they currently have. Multiple pieces of advise would make an even bigger impact on a person and give them more understanding of what others think. Because of this they will be more prepared, and have a different mentality for future problems. From my personal experience, I can relate to having others critic and check my work because I know the helpfulness and understanding I get, can make a real impact on me.

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It has been proven that stress only causes harmful and emotional side effects to individuals. So, why not remove it? That is exactly why simple checks on your work, or something you may be unsure about can make a real impact. As stressful as everyday human lives can be, there's no harm done in taking a little out of your time to ask others about your situation and how to deal with it. Being more sure on something can cause an individual to worry less and end up making better decisions. Maybe you have a huge decision coming up like a proposal. You need to be absolutely sure and know it in your gut that this is the right decision to be made, and asking others can help you know that you are making the right decision or you are making the wrong decision

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The more advice someone has, the more confident that someone can be, and can have less stress going through with that decision.

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If you live by the motto "Put others before yourself" it is critical to understand that the decision you make could negatively affect others, as well as yourself. An example of this is smoking marijuana. By doing this, you could be causing others to be doing it as well, just because you are doing it. You could be at a legal age, but marijuana is still bad for you as well as others. Asking your friends if they are okay with it and if it is a good decision, can cause you to realize that in the long run, it is a bad and not a thought-out decision. Like said before, other people's lives are also important and seeking help before a decision, to make sure that it is good and well-thought out, can make a true impact in others.

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Also, as modern day society is getting bigger and bigger, and people are becoming more reliant on safety, it is extremely important to ensure and provide safety for each individual, and asking for other's advice can ensure you that your decision is safe and responsible.

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All people strive to do what's right, whether it be doing right toward others, or to yourself. Doing right toward others and yourself doesn't just mean getting good grades or achieving an award, but it means doing the right thing. Asking others for advice can ensure that you are doing right toward others and yourself. When doing this, you can seek out understanding of the problem you are facing, which can be an important skill for people to have. Throughout asking others for advice, you can relieve stress by knowing what you did was right, and you can be assured that what you are doing is safe and responsible, which won't have side effects that could harm or hurt others. A simple skill, asking others for help or advice, can truly make in impact in others and yourself.

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Generic_Name woke up with a churning feeling in her stomach. She still didn't know whether she should cut off her toxic friend Generic_Name or not. She picked up her phone and read the text from Generic_Name. It read, "Hey ugly. You better not wear that hideous green shirt of yours today. I'm wearing my green dress and I don't want people to think we're matching." Generic_Name sighed and just ignored the text. She decided to text her friend Generic_Name, who is also friends with Generic_Name, and ask her what to do. The text read, "Hey Generic_Name, Generic_Name has been really mean to me recently and I dont know if I should stop talking to her or if I'm just being dramatic. Please help." Generic_Name responded, "Stop being so sensitive! Don't ruin the friend group with your petty drama and just let it go." Generic_Name didn't expect this reaction and she still wasn't sure if she should continue being friends with Generic_Name but she didn't really have another option.

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Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice

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