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2a5965653e61 | 871287046F85 | If multiple people help your situations, in which you asked for advice on, it can help you see different point of views and come to a better decision. All of this can improve the very important life skills of perspective and open mindedness.
| Evidence | Adequate |
695ccd757d99 | 871287046F85 | Now, you might be thinking to yourself, "She's crazy, I only need one persons advice". | Counterclaim | Adequate |
7cfa8982c06a | 871287046F85 | Well, imagine how much better it would be to look at your situations from different angles. Wouldn't that be pretty nice? | Rebuttal | Adequate |
46be73569eb1 | 871287046F85 | By getting multiple peoples inputs, you are also raising your trait of perspective. | Claim | Adequate |
34031d49723f | 871287046F85 | What is perspective, you ask? Perspective is being able to look at a situation and not just picture one scenario or solution, but multiple. This trait can get you very far in life. An example is if a student applies to colleges, he or she needs to look at multiple reasons to pick that specific school. | Evidence | Adequate |
e9ce049cb9d8 | 871287046F85 | asking multiple people for advice is better than asking one is because not only will you gain more knowledge about one trait, you'll gain two. The other trait is open mindedness. | Claim | Adequate |
34858ef5c1df | 871287046F85 | Have you ever heard someone say, "You have to be more open minded."? Well, what they mean by that is that you or whoever they're talking to, has to not be so closed in on one idea. One of my personal experiences, is when I was doing kick boxing. I did kick boxing my whole life and I loved it, but that doesn't mean it's the only sport I can do for the rest of my life. So, I decided to do volleyball too. I did this because I had to be open minded to other sports other than kick boxing. | Evidence | Adequate |
a9d8c436c019 | 871287046F85 | My last reason is about the people you get advice from. I don't know about you, but I have multiple people in my life who are important, not just one. You probably do too | Evidence | Adequate |
36d9b3a82112 | 871287046F85 | The people you get you advice from, can be crucial to your decision. | Claim | Adequate |
58e3f662274e | 871287046F85 | I only ask for advice from people I trust such as family, teachers, and my best friend. People you trust and love most likely trust and love you just as much or maybe even more. If they don't want to see you hurt or unsuccessful, they wouldn't give you bad advice. When I need advice, I ask my mom, my grandma, and my best friend. I do this because they all give support to the answers they give me. Also, if it is a "yes or no" question, I can use the majority rules system.
| Evidence | Adequate |
a37264d5f175 | 871287046F85 | , asking for advice from multiple people will make the decision more successful than just asking one person. This is because you will learn and gain very important life skills such as perspective and open mindedness, and because you can ask multiple people that you adore and trust. Now tell me, what will you do with your advice next time? Ask one person? Or two? Or maybe even more? Next time, use these examples to think about how many people to ask for advice. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
f90e1b4d8a00 | 872A3AAEC127 | There are many aspects to learning and education that is different for all students. Some people are naturally gifted in certain areas, and others may struggle in that same area. Nevertheless, everyone learns at a different pace, and it can't be expected for everyone to flourish in the same environment. | Lead | Effective |
01026b3ff4d2 | 872A3AAEC127 | This is why attending school from home would be very beneficial and necessary to particular individuals.
| Position | Effective |
09da9093d52f | 872A3AAEC127 | Home schooling could be an advantage to those that struggle with the pace of standard in-school education. | Claim | Effective |
d99e4d348a5a | 872A3AAEC127 | Especially in this day and age, many more people are concerned with tending to the specialized needs of kids. The way we learn and develop is being taken a lot more seriously now, and the importance of having the right accomodations for your circumstances is highly enforced. Those that may learn at a lower level or at a slower pace now have the option to not feel judged by the rate that all of their peers are learning at. By being in the comfort of their own home, it could allow them to become more confident in their abilities and achieve more compared to if they were in a standard school. Along with the elimination of judgement, it could also drastically improve their level of thinking as well. There's a huge difference in spending time to focus on the needs of one student as opposed to an entire classroom of students. By isolating an individual, it allows for their educator to identify their strengths and weaknesses which makes the process of helping them a lot less difficult. | Evidence | Effective |
7445eec65142 | 872A3AAEC127 | In addition, there are also many social factors that could go into a student thriving while being taught at home rather than in school. | Claim | Effective |
a9fc089d7082 | 872A3AAEC127 | It's no surprise to anyone that bullying and harrassment goes on, not only in adolescence, but all throughout life for some people. If a child was facing this type of harrassment in school, the ability to take classes from home would eliminate that stressor for them. They wouldn't have to worry about coming into class every day and having to confront their bullies. This would be beneficial for a multitude of reasons, and it can also be a preventative measure to ensure the safety of students as well. Peers have an enormous amount of influence and power over the actions of certain individuals, and being forced to interact with that kind of behavior all the time could potentially pose as a threat. Being taught at home gives students the ability to control who they get to see and when, and for some people, it is absolutely necessary for them to have this option. | Evidence | Effective |
9dde75df3f9e | 872A3AAEC127 | Finally, learning from home could prove to be beneficial for those that need to complete their education but already have a plan for their lives. | Claim | Effective |
7ac554646406 | 872A3AAEC127 | In this new era of social media and technology, "social media influencer" is a very popular career path for people to take on. This generally entails posting pictures or videos, having sponsorships with companies, and interacting with their fan bases. Another common facet for this lifestyle is travelling. With all of this extra work these influencers choose to incorporate into their lives, school becomes a lot harder to maintain. Online based learning, in this case, makes it a lot more accessible and easy for these young kids to finish their education while still pursuing their dreams. | Evidence | Effective |
0437c3f29b42 | 872A3AAEC127 | Overall, online and home-based learning proves to be very advantageous to a mass of people all over the world. Whatever the circumstance may be, merely having the option to opt out of standardized in-school learning is a very forward and advanced way of taking into consideration the needs of others. It gives students the opportunity to become confident, feel safe, and even pursue their dreams. For these reasons, I believe being educated from home is an exceptional concept that is appreciated by many. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
8bb4ea7d8beb | 87328D07C574 | Multiple opinions change surveys drastically. You may have received a data project at school or a survey for a new town project. These studies are most effective when more opinions are collected from. In order to make major decisions, you must first ask the people involved | Lead | Effective |
aa896adf20ea | 87328D07C574 | Seeking multiple opinions is a key part of collecting rich data. | Position | Effective |
2897301bf6b3 | 87328D07C574 | The most effective way to collect data is by collecting the opinions of the ones involved. | Claim | Effective |
71aba3a240bb | 87328D07C574 | Rich data comes from the true opinion of the people. When I was in sixth grade, I did a survey on whether or not people should keep fields to farmers, or sell the land to businesses and urbanize the land. Starting out with only my families opinion was not only just a bad idea, but jeopardized the surveys reality. After seeking multiple opinions, I have seen the value of when more people are involved. | Evidence | Adequate |
e101cd69c76d | 87328D07C574 | Today, petitions are used to persuade ideas for rules or laws in society. The more people on the list, the more likely the petition will be considered. Multiple opinions have a leading role in persuasion. Seventh grade taught me a valuable lesson when I decided to create a petition on banning a specific math program called IXL from my school lessons. This petition started out with only a few people but it changed heavily when I asked many more people. More people wanted to join this petition I had created after viewing the stunning amount of signatures added. The shocking amount of people added to one side of the argument caused them to jump onto the bandwagon too. I knew the average number of people on one side after considering some offsets in which I concluded was driven by bandwagon | Evidence | Effective |
ab9b36e21e1d | 87328D07C574 | If one side of an argument has more people, that argument will become more popular among moderates. Multiple opinions help fianl decisions when acknowledging bandwagons. | Claim | Effective |
7bc3b9d9b9f2 | 87328D07C574 | While most situations are best for all opinions, some data is best collected from just a designated group of people. | Claim | Effective |
9d43622a3162 | 87328D07C574 | For example, an election for the Senate seat representing Virginia is best decided for residents of Virginia. It would be nonsensical for a resident of another state to vote in this example. The people involved in this should be considered into the data. A right choice for a decision comes from the people that are affected and involved. | Evidence | Effective |
58b91d3b7499 | 87328D07C574 | As long as it might take to gather, more opinions matter. Multiple opinions matter because it show the true opinion of the ones involved and affected. Bandwagons must be considered into data because some will choose the side most picked. Choosing the best choice is interrupted by bandwagons that should be acknowledged into a final choice. When collecting data, make sure to collect from only those involved and effected by the decision. Seeking multiple opinions is a key part of collecting rich data. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
52d3fefb80f0 | 897004C788FB | In a Presidential vote, does the country ask only one person about who they want for president, or the whole country? You could only imagine what only having one person's opinion could do to this country. Having people vote as a whole seems to be very beneficial to America, and may be beneficial to you as well. | Lead | Effective |
133454866385 | 897004C788FB | Sometimes it is better to have multiple people state their opinion before you make a big decision | Position | Effective |
76c6ef8029c6 | 897004C788FB | You should seek advice from multiple people because it will help make your choice easier, | Claim | Effective |
86fa87846fc2 | 897004C788FB | give you different viewpoints | Claim | Effective |
ba30fa5ec5bf | 897004C788FB | improve the outcome of your decision.
| Claim | Effective |
865a5eeb69cf | 897004C788FB | This takes some stress out of your choice because then you know what the majority thinks. At the end of the day it is still your choice to make, regardless of what anyone thinks or says. There are an endless amount of decisions that people seek personal opinions on no matter how serious. When you're going out to eat with a group you ask them where they want to go. The NFL or NBA Most Valuable Player isn't chosen by just one person, it's asked about by fans, coaches, and players to see who the majority thinks deserves it. Now this does not guarantee the right choice will be made, but in the past it has proven that it has the potential to be helpful. | Evidence | Effective |
e5cd4e45df83 | 897004C788FB | These different viewpoints could really effect your on view on a decision. Many people make poor choices because they are biased towards what they think is right. Most likely you will not get the same opinion and view on a situation over and over again. No matter how you look at it it's beneficial. Either you receive the same view over and over and it makes your decision very clear, or you get different viewpoints and a new way to look at the situation. | Evidence | Adequate |
3f91c9c512e3 | 897004C788FB | With the help of trustworthy and honest peers, your decision is a lot more dependable. Hearing what others believe to be true tends to help. You have to remember to ask trustworthy people, and even then your decision may not be a good one. Even some of the smartest people in America, including our president, congress, and all of the houses ask for opinions from the people. Sure a few bad choices have been made, but I strongly feel the good heavily outweigh the bad. I also believe that the good outweigh the bad on even tiny decisions made day to day when you have multiple different perspectives. You can't go wrong with other people's help on choices no matter how big or small. | Evidence | Effective |
0041916de7e8 | 897004C788FB | You should seek advice from multiple people because it will help make your choice easier, give you different viewpoints, and improve the outcome of your decision. It is truly better to ask around for help on a topic then choose on your own. The are way more benefits than downfalls. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
79fa6e115c3d | 897004C788FB | For instance, out of all the presidents we have ever had, we've had many good ones and few bad ones | Claim | Adequate |
95e319503095 | 897004C788FB | With different perspectives you can either add to your argument or see through another persons eyes on why they think what they think. Would you rather take the risk of making a poor choice or receive insight on what you should really do? | Concluding Statement | Effective |
bf1b467d9c8a | 8A4D99910F10 | Students will struggle to learn the subjects that the school requires them to take such as History, Math, Science, and English.
| Position | Adequate |
0e4c6281fd19 | 8A4D99910F10 | Attending to school can have a huge impact in your life. How would it affect you, if you don't atten to school?. would it be the same if you learn all the materials by watching videos?. would you be able to ask questions just the same way other students do?. | Evidence | Adequate |
1110b4c6d00e | 8A4D99910F10 | Making a decision of taking class from home can make a huge impact in your life and the future. | Claim | Adequate |
23382c7ac17c | 8A4D99910F10 | For example a high schooler that takes classes online that wants to be a history teacher they can struggle a lot because a video can't give you enough information, for you to know the story. a video only summarize the story comapring to when you're in class you can ask questions and also have more information from your teacher. Having a teacher explalining you everything and working with other students can help your grade and also your GPA for you to attened to good collages and be able to have a lot of advantages. | Evidence | Adequate |
13a6648cad9f | 8A4D99910F10 | Students will have more benefits and advantages of learning the materials, if they atten to school. students will also have good grades and apportunities for them to get a scholarship and have a higher GPA that would help them attened the collage they want to go to. | Claim | Adequate |
e19610519eb4 | 8A4D99910F10 | For example if students don't have a high GPA, the most common thing that would happen would be that they will be rejected by a lot of collages. Having a high GPA can help you get into good collages without having to pay and you can also earn money while you're attending collage. students will be able to graduate early from collage and with a really high degree that could benefit them by finding job where they start at the top like others professionals people. | Evidence | Adequate |
02e8eadf7ef6 | 8A4D99910F10 | Students will struggle a lot looking for collages that are not too expensive or collages that can help them save money. | Claim | Adequate |
7de6bec3bc28 | 8A4D99910F10 | For example nova is an academic instutude collage that has a lot of benifits for students such as saving money for collage. Have apportunities of going to others university or instutudes where you can work as an asisting and get well paid. Nova can be very helpful institutude that students can attened to because they only attened to nova for two years. At nova they prepare students to when they are ready to move on to a four year collage but you need to have a good GPA and have all the requirements that nova asks for. | Evidence | Adequate |
c78e064bf9c9 | 8A4D99910F10 | However not everyone agrees that atteneding to school is benificial for students. some students think that having to show up to school is a waste of time and that it would be better if they learn by looking tutorials on youtube or being able to attend classes from home. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
6f0f650053e2 | 8A4D99910F10 | For example if students don't attened to school they won't be able to understand anything which it will cause them to stress out and make them give up on there dreams. | Evidence | Adequate |
7bc982c18df5 | 8A4D99910F10 | students won't adchieve if we let them attend classes from home. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
a29064b658b6 | 8A4D99910F10 | Students also don't agree about having good grades and a good GPA. For example students think that they can still go to the collages they want to attened without matter of there grades and GPA that all they had to do is pay. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
3288b14046c3 | 8A4D99910F10 | but the question is "do you have the money to pay collage?". | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
8aa107b2a8b7 | 8AAA87E056FD | Have you ever needed advice from someone? If so, you probably talked to multiple people before you went on with what you were going to do. | Lead | Effective |
8f37e6176624 | 8AAA87E056FD | many reasons people do this | Position | Adequate |
7b59cac712b0 | 8AAA87E056FD | getting different perspectives | Claim | Effective |
1ade2eddba30 | 8AAA87E056FD | see the other side of an issue | Claim | Effective |
bbaa24cd1b2a | 8AAA87E056FD | get more information on the subject. | Claim | Effective |
75f7335c6b4e | 8AAA87E056FD | You can talk to people you may not see eye to eye with and get insight on their differing opinion. This leads to good discussions with people on the topic you're trying to learn about through the information you're given. | Evidence | Adequate |
d95442d72c68 | 8AAA87E056FD | With advice, you want to know the other side of something and if what you're going to do is right or wrong. | Claim | Effective |
0ae88e25b756 | 8AAA87E056FD | You can develop potential arguments to strengthen your side and you can know everyone's views to go along with your subject. Based on what you learn from everyone, you could get the full circle of information on what you'd like to learn about. | Evidence | Effective |
e2d4fd6405e3 | 8AAA87E056FD | You can learn from other's experience, and in the end learn from your own. You'll know what went wrong in what the person did and why you're getting that advice. Other people will also think one thing is more important than the other. You'll have an overall bigger decision to make in the end with who's advice you're going to follow and how you're going to do it. | Evidence | Effective |
01dc7315e348 | 8AAA87E056FD | People ask other people for advice because they can get different perspectives, see the other side of something, and have the most information they could get. Everyone needs advice at some point in time and with the information they get from others, they can make the best decisions possible. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
165a686a8c04 | 8B8155332486 | Seeking mutiplle opinions is a great idea for many people. | Position | Adequate |
acca92e469fb | 8B8155332486 | some things could be bad and nobady wants that and, there could be people who has the right information. | Claim | Adequate |
a733621d852c | 8B8155332486 | Looking for people with the best advice is the good part, thats why some people look for more people with advice, to see who has the best advice. | Evidence | Adequate |
f14fd29ad3d6 | 8B8155332486 | Not alot of people will have good advice for what you're looking for | Counterclaim | Ineffective |
fd44792fef0b | 8B8155332486 | but sometimes could be good intel on some other things you'd probably need to know like life standards, what to eat so you can get better, and what can make you better. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
a4eab54d31ac | 8B8155332486 | Getting advice from mutiple people is a really good idea because not everyone is going to give you all information because their either going to forget about it, not want to say, or don't want to talk about it all the way. | Evidence | Adequate |
a9a0779ee295 | 8B8155332486 | The more the advice the person gives you the better, the most advice is the advice that will teach you more about what you need to know. | Claim | Adequate |
c3c5767f3ec6 | 8BCB7962E7E3 | The United States has one of the worst public school systems in the modern world. Places like Sweden and Denmark show fantastic, flawless designs that allow students to properly use their time for both school and non-school activities. Our public schools, however, show many flaws that were enacted by generations in the past. Students fail to learn proper time management, as they are forced to go to places they are unfamiliar with and follow prepared schedules in and out of class. As this continued, the government discovered the flaws and are beginning to try new solutions. One of these solutions is online classes that students can take at home. | Lead | Effective |
3a9d2ace25e0 | 8BCB7962E7E3 | I believe that Students would benefit from online learning | Position | Adequate |
215dfc3027af | 8BCB7962E7E3 | because it allows the students to learn in places more familiar to them, | Claim | Adequate |
bfda40a618c1 | 8BCB7962E7E3 | relearn challenging information, | Claim | Adequate |
747900c75141 | 8BCB7962E7E3 | build proper time management skills. | Claim | Adequate |
b1d33c927a76 | 8BCB7962E7E3 | One of the systems' largest problem is forcing students to attend and learn in places that are unfamiliar and daunting to them | Claim | Effective |
3b1e3fd4a079 | 8BCB7962E7E3 | According to majority of students in a poll last year, research has shown that students consider school buildings as uncomfortable, as well as unfamiliar. On that same poll, the same research claimed that students found the idea of learning at home appealing, and a much better suited place to learn. This same evidence supports the ideas that parents whose children are in homeschooling programs share. Hearts, a homeschooling program ran through Generic_City and all over the east coast, has a much larger graduation rate in students and higher averaged grades than public schools in the same areas | Evidence | Effective |
be778faee046 | 8BCB7962E7E3 | Some people could argue that this holds the threat of exposing distractions to students. | Counterclaim | Effective |
5070ac677fe2 | 8BCB7962E7E3 | With the ability to modify their own environment, students can create their own spaces that allow them to concentrate on their studies with ease. | Rebuttal | Effective |
0d3db3cc73b9 | 8BCB7962E7E3 | All of this information supports the idea that learning at home is a working solution that the government should endorse and improve within their schools. | Evidence | Adequate |
36653495d355 | 8BCB7962E7E3 | The second reason that online classing would be a good idea is the ability to allow students to study specifically hard material. | Claim | Adequate |
3b3a2e1c355d | 8BCB7962E7E3 | Majority of current online classing has a system that allows teachers to record or stream lectures that explain the material. Then, if students had questions, the teacher could answer them in the stream or message the students independently. This method is fantastic, because all of the lectures can be recorded and shown for future reference at other times. If students didn't understand the material, they could just load up the needed information and relearn it and solidify the information into their memory. With this, students can make sure that they received and understood all of the content that they need to know for the classes that they are taking.
| Evidence | Effective |
48def81a365e | 8BCB7962E7E3 | Finally, online classing would give students the opportunity to learn valuable time management skills. | Claim | Adequate |
76e9fa815d17 | 8BCB7962E7E3 | Along with having control over setting, students would be given control over how they use their time. Homeschooled students often have a lot of time to allocate for school and other activities. This is essential for every student to understand and master, as they will have the same choices when they grow into adults. Students who have other obligations outside of school will be allowed to modify their learning time each day, as well as take breaks from work as needed | Evidence | Effective |
9d039b814b5e | 8BCB7962E7E3 | Many people argue that students can abuse this opportunity as to skip learning altogether, and allow them to grow bad habits. | Counterclaim | Effective |
143d6b88a17a | 8BCB7962E7E3 | The entire purpose behind having the choice is to learn from mistakes. If no mistakes were made, then no one could improve. Online classing allows students to learn what to do in a safe and open environment. Without that chance, students would make the same mistakes in more important matters, and harm their well being later in life. | Rebuttal | Effective |
1564e8f843b7 | 8BCB7962E7E3 | The largest flaw that has been located is this: some students benefit more from learning in person rather than online. | Counterclaim | Effective |
893649f3e7ec | 8BCB7962E7E3 | The beauty behind this whole process is that online classes don't eliminate the ability to have face to face classroom interactions that students have today. | Rebuttal | Effective |
59610809ae57 | 8BCB7962E7E3 | Yes, online classes are meant to somewhat eliminate this factor, but in person interactions are also needed to have students grow. Hearts, the program mentioned above, has a system that has students meet their teachers in person once or twice a week. This allows teachers to show students real life applications with the information taught in class, as well as give students the ability to have social interaction with both teachers and other students. This allows the students to gain the pros of both online classing and the modern classroom interaction | Evidence | Effective |
076c6625107c | 8BCB7962E7E3 | Students would benefit from online learning because it allows the students to learn in places more familiar to them, relearn challenging topics and units, and build proper time management skills. Throughout this article, evidence has been placed that support all three of these factors. Learning at home gives the students the ability to be taught in more comfortable environments rather than the common classroom. The ability to relearn lectures and other class materials allow students to master the topics given to them. Time management skills can be learned, as the students are given control over the ability to use their time in ways that they think is best. Even some of the common flaws of online classing has been addressed and solved. The ability to change the way we learn is something that I believe is essential to allow minds to reach their highest potential. No one learns the same way as the person next to them. That is why if people are starved of the choice to learn the way that they want, then us as a country will not be able to grow along with the rest of the world. If this method is amplified and improved, then America can become one of the most educated countries on earth. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
184e4130efc6 | 8C15FC3C3BCB | Everyday I wake up and catch the bus at 6:50 in the morning, and I don't get home until 5:45 at night. That's nearly twelve hours of being on the bus and being at school when I could be doing something more productive like cleaning my room, sleeping, or studying for a test. As much as I don't like school, taking it online would hardly be helpful. | Lead | Adequate |
2c8b22d19f04 | 8C15FC3C3BCB | Some people may say that taking school online or with video cameras is beneficial. Clearly, they are wrong | Position | Effective |
2a691feb478f | 8C15FC3C3BCB | it would be easy to cheat | Claim | Effective |
552dd0577aa1 | 8C15FC3C3BCB | students would face isolation. | Claim | Effective |
1499181c0e35 | 8C15FC3C3BCB | With online school, it would be extremely easy to cheat. | Claim | Effective |
9eb11e2410bf | 8C15FC3C3BCB | Many students would say that they would never do such a thing, that they must honor their integrity, but they're lying. Teenagers are impulsive, and if there is an easy road out, we are going to take it, simple as that. For example, if a teacher gives an assignment and they say the answer key is on schoology to check our work, we're going to maybe attempt it. When we don't succeed, guess where we're going: Schoology. I'm saying that I don't trust teenagers to be able to honestly do every single assignment on their own especially if there are no eyes watching. Another example of this would be in a scenario of this said online school. Imagine that there's a big test due on the 18th in math that you haven't studied for. Today is the 17th. Everyone else has done the test and taken pictures of it in case their computers shut down, while others had malicious intent. You haven't studied at all. Your failure is imminent as you already have a C in the class and you need a C to graduate. Your heart is thumping, you don't want to seem a failure to your parents. So what do you do? Ask the teacher for an extension? No, he's too strict and he's going to say no. So you think your only option is to cheat. So you text a student who took picures for the wrong reason. You get the answers you so desperately wanted. But at what cost? You take the test and get a 70. You nearly failed, but you didn't. You find out a few days later that several students have asked for an extension and received one. That is the mindset a lot of students go through when they cheat on a test or assignment. | Evidence | Effective |
486264d64424 | 8C15FC3C3BCB | Some people are going to say that happens regardless of whether or not it's in person or online. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
8d786a5f8636 | 8C15FC3C3BCB | They are wrong because it's much easier to cheat online with a very low chance of getting caught.
| Rebuttal | Adequate |
abaf5ba9ca11 | 8C15FC3C3BCB | One thing a person could face while attending online school is isolation. | Claim | Effective |
2d8046c20efb | 8C15FC3C3BCB | In prison, solitary confinement is a punishment, so why make it an everyday thing as a free person? The best part about school for most, if not all, of us is our friends. For those with best friends, going a long time without them is a task. You don't have your laughing buddy and you miss them, even if you have other friends you couldnt be with. Most people feel sad when they don't have a friend to be with them in class and share the same struggles with when you fail or do bad. School is at least seventy-seven percent better when you have friends to go at it with. When you're in your room all day learning, that's no fun. School is required by the government and is already sad enough as it is. The only thing that personally keeps me going is my friends. Without them, I would have no will to do my work as they are the ones constantly telling me to do this and do that and don't procrastinate. Those friendly reminders are honestly what keep me from failing my classes. I couldn't name all the times I forgot to do an assignment and my friends were like, "did you do so and so?" And I would say, "oh wow I completely forgot about that, thanks for reminding me," and would get started at lunch or in the morning. So if school were to be offered online, those reminders would fall through the cracks and I would have missing assignments left and right. | Evidence | Effective |
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