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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
These days, it is inevitable that cutting-edge technology, such as the internet, has undoubtedly impacted human behaviours negatively and positively. Many run-of-the-mill people deeply believe that the internet broadly facilitates people to communicate with an unknown person in different parts of the world more easily; in contrast, others convey that it actually generates a detrimental effect. Hence, this essay is going completely to articulate more detail both views and provide a supporting notion to them.
On the one hand, it is noticeable that integrating cyberspace and advanced technology makes it more convenient to hit someone up recently. They totally provide an excellent way to touch with other friends and relatives without mulling over the place and the time. For instance, based on the statistical data in a country, over 85% of the human population select online platforms, encompassing Zoom and Whatsapp to come across their friends rather than hang out in a specific place. Consequently, the number of users has increased remarkably in terms of communication facilities, which have been set perfectly up.
On the other hand, some proponents consider that the addicted resident is definitely going to be an introvert and turn down all societal activities. It has been commonly proved that people prefer staying at home to enjoying or hanging out with offline partners. Case in point, nowadays, believing or not, many students in a university are more passionate about online classes than down-to-earth meetings. As a result, in the future, the condition possibly arouses a drawback such as an isolation issue, which will come about as soon as possible.
To sum up, this is a real circumstance and there are two strong arguments regarding the internet's impact on society. My take on this, citizens must be aware that the internet, only a superb invention to assist their daily life, must appropriately utilize it; however, It is not to take over entirely their life.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
These days, it is inevitable that cutting-edge technology, such as the internet, has undoubtedly impacted human behaviours negatively and positively. Many run-of-the-mill people deeply believe that the internet broadly facilitates people to communicate with an unknown person in different parts of the world more easily; in contrast, others convey that it actually generates a detrimental effect. Hence, this essay is going completely to articulate more detail both views and provide a supporting notion to them.
On the one hand, it is noticeable that integrating cyberspace and advanced technology makes it more convenient to hit someone up recently. They totally provide an excellent way to touch with other friends and relatives without mulling over the place and the time. For instance, based on the statistical data in a country, over 85% of the human population select online platforms, encompassing Zoom and Whatsapp to come across their friends rather than hang out in a specific place. Consequently, the number of users has increased remarkably in terms of communication facilities, which have been set perfectly up.
On the other hand, some proponents consider that the addicted resident is definitely going to be an introvert and turn down all societal activities. It has been commonly proved that people prefer staying at home to enjoying or hanging out with offline partners. Case in point, nowadays, believing or not, many students in a university are more passionate about online classes than down-to-earth meetings. As a result, in the future, the condition possibly arouses a drawback such as an isolation issue, which will come about as soon as possible.
To sum up, this is a real circumstance and there are two strong arguments regarding the internet's impact on society. My take on this, citizens must be aware that the internet, only a superb invention to assist their daily life, must appropriately utilize it; however, It is not to take over entirely their life.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
These days, it is inevitable that cutting-edge technology, such as the internet, has undoubtedly impacted human behaviours negatively and positively. Many run-of-the-mill people deeply believe that the internet broadly facilitates people to communicate with an unknown person in different parts of the world more easily; in contrast, others convey that it actually generates a detrimental effect. Hence, this essay is going completely to articulate more detail both views and provide a supporting notion to them.
On the one hand, it is noticeable that integrating cyberspace and advanced technology makes it more convenient to hit someone up recently. They totally provide an excellent way to touch with other friends and relatives without mulling over the place and the time. For instance, based on the statistical data in a country, over 85% of the human population select online platforms, encompassing Zoom and Whatsapp to come across their friends rather than hang out in a specific place. Consequently, the number of users has increased remarkably in terms of communication facilities, which have been set perfectly up.
On the other hand, some proponents consider that the addicted resident is definitely going to be an introvert and turn down all societal activities. It has been commonly proved that people prefer staying at home to enjoying or hanging out with offline partners. Case in point, nowadays, believing or not, many students in a university are more passionate about online classes than down-to-earth meetings. As a result, in the future, the condition possibly arouses a drawback such as an isolation issue, which will come about as soon as possible.
To sum up, this is a real circumstance and there are two strong arguments regarding the internet's impact on society. My take on this, citizens must be aware that the internet, only a superb invention to assist their daily life, must appropriately utilize it; however, It is not to take over entirely their life.
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
These days, it is inevitable that cutting-edge technology, such as the internet, has undoubtedly impacted human behaviours negatively and positively. Many run-of-the-mill people deeply believe that the internet broadly facilitates people to communicate with an unknown person in different parts of the world more easily; in contrast, others convey that it actually generates a detrimental effect. Hence, this essay is going completely to articulate more detail both views and provide a supporting notion to them.
On the one hand, it is noticeable that integrating cyberspace and advanced technology makes it more convenient to hit someone up recently. They totally provide an excellent way to touch with other friends and relatives without mulling over the place and the time. For instance, based on the statistical data in a country, over 85% of the human population select online platforms, encompassing Zoom and Whatsapp to come across their friends rather than hang out in a specific place. Consequently, the number of users has increased remarkably in terms of communication facilities, which have been set perfectly up.
On the other hand, some proponents consider that the addicted resident is definitely going to be an introvert and turn down all societal activities. It has been commonly proved that people prefer staying at home to enjoying or hanging out with offline partners. Case in point, nowadays, believing or not, many students in a university are more passionate about online classes than down-to-earth meetings. As a result, in the future, the condition possibly arouses a drawback such as an isolation issue, which will come about as soon as possible.
To sum up, this is a real circumstance and there are two strong arguments regarding the internet's impact on society. My take on this, citizens must be aware that the internet, only a superb invention to assist their daily life, must appropriately utilize it; however, It is not to take over entirely their life.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
These days, it is inevitable that cutting-edge technology, such as the internet, has undoubtedly impacted human behaviours negatively and positively. Many run-of-the-mill people deeply believe that the internet broadly facilitates people to communicate with an unknown person in different parts of the world more easily; in contrast, others convey that it actually generates a detrimental effect. Hence, this essay is going completely to articulate more detail both views and provide a supporting notion to them.
On the one hand, it is noticeable that integrating cyberspace and advanced technology makes it more convenient to hit someone up recently. They totally provide an excellent way to touch with other friends and relatives without mulling over the place and the time. For instance, based on the statistical data in a country, over 85% of the human population select online platforms, encompassing Zoom and Whatsapp to come across their friends rather than hang out in a specific place. Consequently, the number of users has increased remarkably in terms of communication facilities, which have been set perfectly up.
On the other hand, some proponents consider that the addicted resident is definitely going to be an introvert and turn down all societal activities. It has been commonly proved that people prefer staying at home to enjoying or hanging out with offline partners. Case in point, nowadays, believing or not, many students in a university are more passionate about online classes than down-to-earth meetings. As a result, in the future, the condition possibly arouses a drawback such as an isolation issue, which will come about as soon as possible.
To sum up, this is a real circumstance and there are two strong arguments regarding the internet's impact on society. My take on this, citizens must be aware that the internet, only a superb invention to assist their daily life, must appropriately utilize it; however, It is not to take over entirely their life.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
These days, it is inevitable that cutting-edge technology, such as the internet, has undoubtedly impacted human behaviours negatively and positively. Many run-of-the-mill people deeply believe that the internet broadly facilitates people to communicate with an unknown person in different parts of the world more easily; in contrast, others convey that it actually generates a detrimental effect. Hence, this essay is going completely to articulate more detail both views and provide a supporting notion to them.
On the one hand, it is noticeable that integrating cyberspace and advanced technology makes it more convenient to hit someone up recently. They totally provide an excellent way to touch with other friends and relatives without mulling over the place and the time. For instance, based on the statistical data in a country, over 85% of the human population select online platforms, encompassing Zoom and Whatsapp to come across their friends rather than hang out in a specific place. Consequently, the number of users has increased remarkably in terms of communication facilities, which have been set perfectly up.
On the other hand, some proponents consider that the addicted resident is definitely going to be an introvert and turn down all societal activities. It has been commonly proved that people prefer staying at home to enjoying or hanging out with offline partners. Case in point, nowadays, believing or not, many students in a university are more passionate about online classes than down-to-earth meetings. As a result, in the future, the condition possibly arouses a drawback such as an isolation issue, which will come about as soon as possible.
To sum up, this is a real circumstance and there are two strong arguments regarding the internet's impact on society. My take on this, citizens must be aware that the internet, only a superb invention to assist their daily life, must appropriately utilize it; however, It is not to take over entirely their life.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
These days, it is inevitable that cutting-edge technology, such as the internet, has undoubtedly impacted human behaviours negatively and positively. Many run-of-the-mill people deeply believe that the internet broadly facilitates people to communicate with an unknown person in different parts of the world more easily; in contrast, others convey that it actually generates a detrimental effect. Hence, this essay is going completely to articulate more detail both views and provide a supporting notion to them.
On the one hand, it is noticeable that integrating cyberspace and advanced technology makes it more convenient to hit someone up recently. They totally provide an excellent way to touch with other friends and relatives without mulling over the place and the time. For instance, based on the statistical data in a country, over 85% of the human population select online platforms, encompassing Zoom and Whatsapp to come across their friends rather than hang out in a specific place. Consequently, the number of users has increased remarkably in terms of communication facilities, which have been set perfectly up.
On the other hand, some proponents consider that the addicted resident is definitely going to be an introvert and turn down all societal activities. It has been commonly proved that people prefer staying at home to enjoying or hanging out with offline partners. Case in point, nowadays, believing or not, many students in a university are more passionate about online classes than down-to-earth meetings. As a result, in the future, the condition possibly arouses a drawback such as an isolation issue, which will come about as soon as possible.
To sum up, this is a real circumstance and there are two strong arguments regarding the internet's impact on society. My take on this, citizens must be aware that the internet, only a superb invention to assist their daily life, must appropriately utilize it; however, It is not to take over entirely their life.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Anwser:
These days, it is inevitable that cutting-edge technology, such as the internet, has undoubtedly impacted human behaviours negatively and positively. Many run-of-the-mill people deeply believe that the internet broadly facilitates people to communicate with an unknown person in different parts of the world more easily; in contrast, others convey that it actually generates a detrimental effect. Hence, this essay is going completely to articulate more detail both views and provide a supporting notion to them.
On the one hand, it is noticeable that integrating cyberspace and advanced technology makes it more convenient to hit someone up recently. They totally provide an excellent way to touch with other friends and relatives without mulling over the place and the time. For instance, based on the statistical data in a country, over 85% of the human population select online platforms, encompassing Zoom and Whatsapp to come across their friends rather than hang out in a specific place. Consequently, the number of users has increased remarkably in terms of communication facilities, which have been set perfectly up.
On the other hand, some proponents consider that the addicted resident is definitely going to be an introvert and turn down all societal activities. It has been commonly proved that people prefer staying at home to enjoying or hanging out with offline partners. Case in point, nowadays, believing or not, many students in a university are more passionate about online classes than down-to-earth meetings. As a result, in the future, the condition possibly arouses a drawback such as an isolation issue, which will come about as soon as possible.
To sum up, this is a real circumstance and there are two strong arguments regarding the internet's impact on society. My take on this, citizens must be aware that the internet, only a superb invention to assist their daily life, must appropriately utilize it; however, It is not to take over entirely their life.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In this contemporary era, teenagers learn from different resources. It is a controversial issue whether pedagogues have more influence on offspring for their aspiration and social enhancement whereas, some believe that parents have a substantial role over their children. From my perspective, I disagree with this statement and the reasons are mentioned in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, Progenitors play a dominant role in bringing up their social skills as they are the first contact in their lives. Juveniles spend only limited time at school and most of their leisure time at home. This helps them to learn numerous activities and to interact with family members. For Instance, a study of research at the University of British Columbia showed that around 90% of children's upbringing is dependent on their guardians who prefer to raise them with proper attention and care. Thus, It demonstrates that parents have more control over schoolchildren's cognitive rather than tutors.
Secondly, youngsters develop their skills through socioeconomic development. To illustrate, children emulate their mothers and fathers more than their teachers in school. This is an integral part of where toddlers belong to. The more polished and educated the family is, the more knowledgeable and friendly attitude the children possess. they follow in their footsteps and cooperate with others. For Instance, studies have shown that 85% of aggressive heirs are inherited from either an aggressive father or Mother. Hence, it indicates that parents have more power over preschool children than preceptors.
Overall, it states that parents play a predominant role in enhancing the social skills of their children. Although teachers play a vital role in educating and socializing children, guardians have a substantial impact on children's social development.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In this contemporary era, teenagers learn from different resources. It is a controversial issue whether pedagogues have more influence on offspring for their aspiration and social enhancement whereas, some believe that parents have a substantial role over their children. From my perspective, I disagree with this statement and the reasons are mentioned in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, Progenitors play a dominant role in bringing up their social skills as they are the first contact in their lives. Juveniles spend only limited time at school and most of their leisure time at home. This helps them to learn numerous activities and to interact with family members. For Instance, a study of research at the University of British Columbia showed that around 90% of children's upbringing is dependent on their guardians who prefer to raise them with proper attention and care. Thus, It demonstrates that parents have more control over schoolchildren's cognitive rather than tutors.
Secondly, youngsters develop their skills through socioeconomic development. To illustrate, children emulate their mothers and fathers more than their teachers in school. This is an integral part of where toddlers belong to. The more polished and educated the family is, the more knowledgeable and friendly attitude the children possess. they follow in their footsteps and cooperate with others. For Instance, studies have shown that 85% of aggressive heirs are inherited from either an aggressive father or Mother. Hence, it indicates that parents have more power over preschool children than preceptors.
Overall, it states that parents play a predominant role in enhancing the social skills of their children. Although teachers play a vital role in educating and socializing children, guardians have a substantial impact on children's social development.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In this contemporary era, teenagers learn from different resources. It is a controversial issue whether pedagogues have more influence on offspring for their aspiration and social enhancement whereas, some believe that parents have a substantial role over their children. From my perspective, I disagree with this statement and the reasons are mentioned in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, Progenitors play a dominant role in bringing up their social skills as they are the first contact in their lives. Juveniles spend only limited time at school and most of their leisure time at home. This helps them to learn numerous activities and to interact with family members. For Instance, a study of research at the University of British Columbia showed that around 90% of children's upbringing is dependent on their guardians who prefer to raise them with proper attention and care. Thus, It demonstrates that parents have more control over schoolchildren's cognitive rather than tutors.
Secondly, youngsters develop their skills through socioeconomic development. To illustrate, children emulate their mothers and fathers more than their teachers in school. This is an integral part of where toddlers belong to. The more polished and educated the family is, the more knowledgeable and friendly attitude the children possess. they follow in their footsteps and cooperate with others. For Instance, studies have shown that 85% of aggressive heirs are inherited from either an aggressive father or Mother. Hence, it indicates that parents have more power over preschool children than preceptors.
Overall, it states that parents play a predominant role in enhancing the social skills of their children. Although teachers play a vital role in educating and socializing children, guardians have a substantial impact on children's social development.
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In this contemporary era, teenagers learn from different resources. It is a controversial issue whether pedagogues have more influence on offspring for their aspiration and social enhancement whereas, some believe that parents have a substantial role over their children. From my perspective, I disagree with this statement and the reasons are mentioned in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, Progenitors play a dominant role in bringing up their social skills as they are the first contact in their lives. Juveniles spend only limited time at school and most of their leisure time at home. This helps them to learn numerous activities and to interact with family members. For Instance, a study of research at the University of British Columbia showed that around 90% of children's upbringing is dependent on their guardians who prefer to raise them with proper attention and care. Thus, It demonstrates that parents have more control over schoolchildren's cognitive rather than tutors.
Secondly, youngsters develop their skills through socioeconomic development. To illustrate, children emulate their mothers and fathers more than their teachers in school. This is an integral part of where toddlers belong to. The more polished and educated the family is, the more knowledgeable and friendly attitude the children possess. they follow in their footsteps and cooperate with others. For Instance, studies have shown that 85% of aggressive heirs are inherited from either an aggressive father or Mother. Hence, it indicates that parents have more power over preschool children than preceptors.
Overall, it states that parents play a predominant role in enhancing the social skills of their children. Although teachers play a vital role in educating and socializing children, guardians have a substantial impact on children's social development.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In this contemporary era, teenagers learn from different resources. It is a controversial issue whether pedagogues have more influence on offspring for their aspiration and social enhancement whereas, some believe that parents have a substantial role over their children. From my perspective, I disagree with this statement and the reasons are mentioned in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, Progenitors play a dominant role in bringing up their social skills as they are the first contact in their lives. Juveniles spend only limited time at school and most of their leisure time at home. This helps them to learn numerous activities and to interact with family members. For Instance, a study of research at the University of British Columbia showed that around 90% of children's upbringing is dependent on their guardians who prefer to raise them with proper attention and care. Thus, It demonstrates that parents have more control over schoolchildren's cognitive rather than tutors.
Secondly, youngsters develop their skills through socioeconomic development. To illustrate, children emulate their mothers and fathers more than their teachers in school. This is an integral part of where toddlers belong to. The more polished and educated the family is, the more knowledgeable and friendly attitude the children possess. they follow in their footsteps and cooperate with others. For Instance, studies have shown that 85% of aggressive heirs are inherited from either an aggressive father or Mother. Hence, it indicates that parents have more power over preschool children than preceptors.
Overall, it states that parents play a predominant role in enhancing the social skills of their children. Although teachers play a vital role in educating and socializing children, guardians have a substantial impact on children's social development.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In this contemporary era, teenagers learn from different resources. It is a controversial issue whether pedagogues have more influence on offspring for their aspiration and social enhancement whereas, some believe that parents have a substantial role over their children. From my perspective, I disagree with this statement and the reasons are mentioned in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, Progenitors play a dominant role in bringing up their social skills as they are the first contact in their lives. Juveniles spend only limited time at school and most of their leisure time at home. This helps them to learn numerous activities and to interact with family members. For Instance, a study of research at the University of British Columbia showed that around 90% of children's upbringing is dependent on their guardians who prefer to raise them with proper attention and care. Thus, It demonstrates that parents have more control over schoolchildren's cognitive rather than tutors.
Secondly, youngsters develop their skills through socioeconomic development. To illustrate, children emulate their mothers and fathers more than their teachers in school. This is an integral part of where toddlers belong to. The more polished and educated the family is, the more knowledgeable and friendly attitude the children possess. they follow in their footsteps and cooperate with others. For Instance, studies have shown that 85% of aggressive heirs are inherited from either an aggressive father or Mother. Hence, it indicates that parents have more power over preschool children than preceptors.
Overall, it states that parents play a predominant role in enhancing the social skills of their children. Although teachers play a vital role in educating and socializing children, guardians have a substantial impact on children's social development.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In this contemporary era, teenagers learn from different resources. It is a controversial issue whether pedagogues have more influence on offspring for their aspiration and social enhancement whereas, some believe that parents have a substantial role over their children. From my perspective, I disagree with this statement and the reasons are mentioned in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, Progenitors play a dominant role in bringing up their social skills as they are the first contact in their lives. Juveniles spend only limited time at school and most of their leisure time at home. This helps them to learn numerous activities and to interact with family members. For Instance, a study of research at the University of British Columbia showed that around 90% of children's upbringing is dependent on their guardians who prefer to raise them with proper attention and care. Thus, It demonstrates that parents have more control over schoolchildren's cognitive rather than tutors.
Secondly, youngsters develop their skills through socioeconomic development. To illustrate, children emulate their mothers and fathers more than their teachers in school. This is an integral part of where toddlers belong to. The more polished and educated the family is, the more knowledgeable and friendly attitude the children possess. they follow in their footsteps and cooperate with others. For Instance, studies have shown that 85% of aggressive heirs are inherited from either an aggressive father or Mother. Hence, it indicates that parents have more power over preschool children than preceptors.
Overall, it states that parents play a predominant role in enhancing the social skills of their children. Although teachers play a vital role in educating and socializing children, guardians have a substantial impact on children's social development.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In this contemporary era, teenagers learn from different resources. It is a controversial issue whether pedagogues have more influence on offspring for their aspiration and social enhancement whereas, some believe that parents have a substantial role over their children. From my perspective, I disagree with this statement and the reasons are mentioned in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, Progenitors play a dominant role in bringing up their social skills as they are the first contact in their lives. Juveniles spend only limited time at school and most of their leisure time at home. This helps them to learn numerous activities and to interact with family members. For Instance, a study of research at the University of British Columbia showed that around 90% of children's upbringing is dependent on their guardians who prefer to raise them with proper attention and care. Thus, It demonstrates that parents have more control over schoolchildren's cognitive rather than tutors.
Secondly, youngsters develop their skills through socioeconomic development. To illustrate, children emulate their mothers and fathers more than their teachers in school. This is an integral part of where toddlers belong to. The more polished and educated the family is, the more knowledgeable and friendly attitude the children possess. they follow in their footsteps and cooperate with others. For Instance, studies have shown that 85% of aggressive heirs are inherited from either an aggressive father or Mother. Hence, it indicates that parents have more power over preschool children than preceptors.
Overall, it states that parents play a predominant role in enhancing the social skills of their children. Although teachers play a vital role in educating and socializing children, guardians have a substantial impact on children's social development.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Anwser:
People in diverse countries say to minors that if are hardworking they will achieve whatever they want. Meanwhile, there are some benefits in this such as higher self-confidence and independence along with several drawbacks like lack of oversight on some occasions which can lead to a hazardous situation.
It is widely acknowledged by the general opinion that youngsters need to be assertive and work hard in their childhood in order to get used to that for their future. In this regard, they can benefit from its positive outcomes such as boosting their self-confidence in their adulthood because they are probably one of the successful ones. Moreover, it teaches youth that they should not rely on anyone else in their lives and rather be on their own. By way of illustration, many successful celebrities nowadays have a very difficult childhood when they talk about their biography. All in all, even though it may be hard at the moment, it will impact the future in a positive way.
Though encouraging minors to be serious and make a lot of effort can lead to numerous achievements, There are some negative consequences derived from spending too much time on their tasks such as studying a lot and learning new skills which will affect them mentally in their adulthood as psychologists state. For instance, some people are isolated and when they get consultations from the experts they point to their childhood which was filled with loads of tasks and not spending time with the same-age children to play with. In addition, children are not fully aware of their talents when they are young and they try hard at something which they abandon completely when they grow up. Overall, these drawbacks need to be supervised cautiously by parents.
To sum up, It is worth mentioning that, the harder you try the better result you can obtain. But we have to bear in mind that it is not exactly the same for children and it has its own consequences which may adversely affect people in their adulthood.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Anwser:
People in diverse countries say to minors that if are hardworking they will achieve whatever they want. Meanwhile, there are some benefits in this such as higher self-confidence and independence along with several drawbacks like lack of oversight on some occasions which can lead to a hazardous situation.
It is widely acknowledged by the general opinion that youngsters need to be assertive and work hard in their childhood in order to get used to that for their future. In this regard, they can benefit from its positive outcomes such as boosting their self-confidence in their adulthood because they are probably one of the successful ones. Moreover, it teaches youth that they should not rely on anyone else in their lives and rather be on their own. By way of illustration, many successful celebrities nowadays have a very difficult childhood when they talk about their biography. All in all, even though it may be hard at the moment, it will impact the future in a positive way.
Though encouraging minors to be serious and make a lot of effort can lead to numerous achievements, There are some negative consequences derived from spending too much time on their tasks such as studying a lot and learning new skills which will affect them mentally in their adulthood as psychologists state. For instance, some people are isolated and when they get consultations from the experts they point to their childhood which was filled with loads of tasks and not spending time with the same-age children to play with. In addition, children are not fully aware of their talents when they are young and they try hard at something which they abandon completely when they grow up. Overall, these drawbacks need to be supervised cautiously by parents.
To sum up, It is worth mentioning that, the harder you try the better result you can obtain. But we have to bear in mind that it is not exactly the same for children and it has its own consequences which may adversely affect people in their adulthood.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Anwser:
People in diverse countries say to minors that if are hardworking they will achieve whatever they want. Meanwhile, there are some benefits in this such as higher self-confidence and independence along with several drawbacks like lack of oversight on some occasions which can lead to a hazardous situation.
It is widely acknowledged by the general opinion that youngsters need to be assertive and work hard in their childhood in order to get used to that for their future. In this regard, they can benefit from its positive outcomes such as boosting their self-confidence in their adulthood because they are probably one of the successful ones. Moreover, it teaches youth that they should not rely on anyone else in their lives and rather be on their own. By way of illustration, many successful celebrities nowadays have a very difficult childhood when they talk about their biography. All in all, even though it may be hard at the moment, it will impact the future in a positive way.
Though encouraging minors to be serious and make a lot of effort can lead to numerous achievements, There are some negative consequences derived from spending too much time on their tasks such as studying a lot and learning new skills which will affect them mentally in their adulthood as psychologists state. For instance, some people are isolated and when they get consultations from the experts they point to their childhood which was filled with loads of tasks and not spending time with the same-age children to play with. In addition, children are not fully aware of their talents when they are young and they try hard at something which they abandon completely when they grow up. Overall, these drawbacks need to be supervised cautiously by parents.
To sum up, It is worth mentioning that, the harder you try the better result you can obtain. But we have to bear in mind that it is not exactly the same for children and it has its own consequences which may adversely affect people in their adulthood.
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Your lexical resource score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Anwser:
People in diverse countries say to minors that if are hardworking they will achieve whatever they want. Meanwhile, there are some benefits in this such as higher self-confidence and independence along with several drawbacks like lack of oversight on some occasions which can lead to a hazardous situation.
It is widely acknowledged by the general opinion that youngsters need to be assertive and work hard in their childhood in order to get used to that for their future. In this regard, they can benefit from its positive outcomes such as boosting their self-confidence in their adulthood because they are probably one of the successful ones. Moreover, it teaches youth that they should not rely on anyone else in their lives and rather be on their own. By way of illustration, many successful celebrities nowadays have a very difficult childhood when they talk about their biography. All in all, even though it may be hard at the moment, it will impact the future in a positive way.
Though encouraging minors to be serious and make a lot of effort can lead to numerous achievements, There are some negative consequences derived from spending too much time on their tasks such as studying a lot and learning new skills which will affect them mentally in their adulthood as psychologists state. For instance, some people are isolated and when they get consultations from the experts they point to their childhood which was filled with loads of tasks and not spending time with the same-age children to play with. In addition, children are not fully aware of their talents when they are young and they try hard at something which they abandon completely when they grow up. Overall, these drawbacks need to be supervised cautiously by parents.
To sum up, It is worth mentioning that, the harder you try the better result you can obtain. But we have to bear in mind that it is not exactly the same for children and it has its own consequences which may adversely affect people in their adulthood.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Anwser:
People in diverse countries say to minors that if are hardworking they will achieve whatever they want. Meanwhile, there are some benefits in this such as higher self-confidence and independence along with several drawbacks like lack of oversight on some occasions which can lead to a hazardous situation.
It is widely acknowledged by the general opinion that youngsters need to be assertive and work hard in their childhood in order to get used to that for their future. In this regard, they can benefit from its positive outcomes such as boosting their self-confidence in their adulthood because they are probably one of the successful ones. Moreover, it teaches youth that they should not rely on anyone else in their lives and rather be on their own. By way of illustration, many successful celebrities nowadays have a very difficult childhood when they talk about their biography. All in all, even though it may be hard at the moment, it will impact the future in a positive way.
Though encouraging minors to be serious and make a lot of effort can lead to numerous achievements, There are some negative consequences derived from spending too much time on their tasks such as studying a lot and learning new skills which will affect them mentally in their adulthood as psychologists state. For instance, some people are isolated and when they get consultations from the experts they point to their childhood which was filled with loads of tasks and not spending time with the same-age children to play with. In addition, children are not fully aware of their talents when they are young and they try hard at something which they abandon completely when they grow up. Overall, these drawbacks need to be supervised cautiously by parents.
To sum up, It is worth mentioning that, the harder you try the better result you can obtain. But we have to bear in mind that it is not exactly the same for children and it has its own consequences which may adversely affect people in their adulthood.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
|
<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Anwser:
People in diverse countries say to minors that if are hardworking they will achieve whatever they want. Meanwhile, there are some benefits in this such as higher self-confidence and independence along with several drawbacks like lack of oversight on some occasions which can lead to a hazardous situation.
It is widely acknowledged by the general opinion that youngsters need to be assertive and work hard in their childhood in order to get used to that for their future. In this regard, they can benefit from its positive outcomes such as boosting their self-confidence in their adulthood because they are probably one of the successful ones. Moreover, it teaches youth that they should not rely on anyone else in their lives and rather be on their own. By way of illustration, many successful celebrities nowadays have a very difficult childhood when they talk about their biography. All in all, even though it may be hard at the moment, it will impact the future in a positive way.
Though encouraging minors to be serious and make a lot of effort can lead to numerous achievements, There are some negative consequences derived from spending too much time on their tasks such as studying a lot and learning new skills which will affect them mentally in their adulthood as psychologists state. For instance, some people are isolated and when they get consultations from the experts they point to their childhood which was filled with loads of tasks and not spending time with the same-age children to play with. In addition, children are not fully aware of their talents when they are young and they try hard at something which they abandon completely when they grow up. Overall, these drawbacks need to be supervised cautiously by parents.
To sum up, It is worth mentioning that, the harder you try the better result you can obtain. But we have to bear in mind that it is not exactly the same for children and it has its own consequences which may adversely affect people in their adulthood.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Anwser:
People in diverse countries say to minors that if are hardworking they will achieve whatever they want. Meanwhile, there are some benefits in this such as higher self-confidence and independence along with several drawbacks like lack of oversight on some occasions which can lead to a hazardous situation.
It is widely acknowledged by the general opinion that youngsters need to be assertive and work hard in their childhood in order to get used to that for their future. In this regard, they can benefit from its positive outcomes such as boosting their self-confidence in their adulthood because they are probably one of the successful ones. Moreover, it teaches youth that they should not rely on anyone else in their lives and rather be on their own. By way of illustration, many successful celebrities nowadays have a very difficult childhood when they talk about their biography. All in all, even though it may be hard at the moment, it will impact the future in a positive way.
Though encouraging minors to be serious and make a lot of effort can lead to numerous achievements, There are some negative consequences derived from spending too much time on their tasks such as studying a lot and learning new skills which will affect them mentally in their adulthood as psychologists state. For instance, some people are isolated and when they get consultations from the experts they point to their childhood which was filled with loads of tasks and not spending time with the same-age children to play with. In addition, children are not fully aware of their talents when they are young and they try hard at something which they abandon completely when they grow up. Overall, these drawbacks need to be supervised cautiously by parents.
To sum up, It is worth mentioning that, the harder you try the better result you can obtain. But we have to bear in mind that it is not exactly the same for children and it has its own consequences which may adversely affect people in their adulthood.
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Your task achievement score is 6.0
|
<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Anwser:
People in diverse countries say to minors that if are hardworking they will achieve whatever they want. Meanwhile, there are some benefits in this such as higher self-confidence and independence along with several drawbacks like lack of oversight on some occasions which can lead to a hazardous situation.
It is widely acknowledged by the general opinion that youngsters need to be assertive and work hard in their childhood in order to get used to that for their future. In this regard, they can benefit from its positive outcomes such as boosting their self-confidence in their adulthood because they are probably one of the successful ones. Moreover, it teaches youth that they should not rely on anyone else in their lives and rather be on their own. By way of illustration, many successful celebrities nowadays have a very difficult childhood when they talk about their biography. All in all, even though it may be hard at the moment, it will impact the future in a positive way.
Though encouraging minors to be serious and make a lot of effort can lead to numerous achievements, There are some negative consequences derived from spending too much time on their tasks such as studying a lot and learning new skills which will affect them mentally in their adulthood as psychologists state. For instance, some people are isolated and when they get consultations from the experts they point to their childhood which was filled with loads of tasks and not spending time with the same-age children to play with. In addition, children are not fully aware of their talents when they are young and they try hard at something which they abandon completely when they grow up. Overall, these drawbacks need to be supervised cautiously by parents.
To sum up, It is worth mentioning that, the harder you try the better result you can obtain. But we have to bear in mind that it is not exactly the same for children and it has its own consequences which may adversely affect people in their adulthood.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 6.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Pollution is becoming a major environmental problem. What are the causes and solutions to solve this problem?
Anwser:
More and more people are getting concerned about environmental problems nowadays. Pollution is destroying our planet every day and in this essay, we are going to discuss the causes of it and the ways to deal with this problem.
First of all, I'd like to point out, that one of the biggest pollution sources is factories. They not only burn the trash in the suburbs of big cities but also pour huge amounts of dirty oils and water into the rivers and oceans. Thus killing and ruining nature around the city, making it impossible for farmers to plant cultures there and forcing marine life to migrate or simply die out.
I am absolutely convinced, that if businesses around the world get together and try to find a better way to deal with waste it will significantly change the situation. There are a lot of ways to help our planet for us as well. For example, we can start sorting out the trash at home. It won't take a lot of time or bring any kind of discomfort in our daily lives. Furthermore, the last research on this topic showed, that people who pay more attention to environmental problems are 65% happier and more satisfied with their lives.
The obvious conclusion is that we have to rely on ourselves first when it comes to global topics. Of course, if all the factories in this world switch to environmentally friendly systems it will solve the major problem, but unfortunately, we don't have any influence in that sphere. What we can do now is to stop mixing all the kinds of trash together.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Pollution is becoming a major environmental problem. What are the causes and solutions to solve this problem?
Anwser:
More and more people are getting concerned about environmental problems nowadays. Pollution is destroying our planet every day and in this essay, we are going to discuss the causes of it and the ways to deal with this problem.
First of all, I'd like to point out, that one of the biggest pollution sources is factories. They not only burn the trash in the suburbs of big cities but also pour huge amounts of dirty oils and water into the rivers and oceans. Thus killing and ruining nature around the city, making it impossible for farmers to plant cultures there and forcing marine life to migrate or simply die out.
I am absolutely convinced, that if businesses around the world get together and try to find a better way to deal with waste it will significantly change the situation. There are a lot of ways to help our planet for us as well. For example, we can start sorting out the trash at home. It won't take a lot of time or bring any kind of discomfort in our daily lives. Furthermore, the last research on this topic showed, that people who pay more attention to environmental problems are 65% happier and more satisfied with their lives.
The obvious conclusion is that we have to rely on ourselves first when it comes to global topics. Of course, if all the factories in this world switch to environmentally friendly systems it will solve the major problem, but unfortunately, we don't have any influence in that sphere. What we can do now is to stop mixing all the kinds of trash together.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Pollution is becoming a major environmental problem. What are the causes and solutions to solve this problem?
Anwser:
More and more people are getting concerned about environmental problems nowadays. Pollution is destroying our planet every day and in this essay, we are going to discuss the causes of it and the ways to deal with this problem.
First of all, I'd like to point out, that one of the biggest pollution sources is factories. They not only burn the trash in the suburbs of big cities but also pour huge amounts of dirty oils and water into the rivers and oceans. Thus killing and ruining nature around the city, making it impossible for farmers to plant cultures there and forcing marine life to migrate or simply die out.
I am absolutely convinced, that if businesses around the world get together and try to find a better way to deal with waste it will significantly change the situation. There are a lot of ways to help our planet for us as well. For example, we can start sorting out the trash at home. It won't take a lot of time or bring any kind of discomfort in our daily lives. Furthermore, the last research on this topic showed, that people who pay more attention to environmental problems are 65% happier and more satisfied with their lives.
The obvious conclusion is that we have to rely on ourselves first when it comes to global topics. Of course, if all the factories in this world switch to environmentally friendly systems it will solve the major problem, but unfortunately, we don't have any influence in that sphere. What we can do now is to stop mixing all the kinds of trash together.
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Your lexical resource score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Pollution is becoming a major environmental problem. What are the causes and solutions to solve this problem?
Anwser:
More and more people are getting concerned about environmental problems nowadays. Pollution is destroying our planet every day and in this essay, we are going to discuss the causes of it and the ways to deal with this problem.
First of all, I'd like to point out, that one of the biggest pollution sources is factories. They not only burn the trash in the suburbs of big cities but also pour huge amounts of dirty oils and water into the rivers and oceans. Thus killing and ruining nature around the city, making it impossible for farmers to plant cultures there and forcing marine life to migrate or simply die out.
I am absolutely convinced, that if businesses around the world get together and try to find a better way to deal with waste it will significantly change the situation. There are a lot of ways to help our planet for us as well. For example, we can start sorting out the trash at home. It won't take a lot of time or bring any kind of discomfort in our daily lives. Furthermore, the last research on this topic showed, that people who pay more attention to environmental problems are 65% happier and more satisfied with their lives.
The obvious conclusion is that we have to rely on ourselves first when it comes to global topics. Of course, if all the factories in this world switch to environmentally friendly systems it will solve the major problem, but unfortunately, we don't have any influence in that sphere. What we can do now is to stop mixing all the kinds of trash together.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Pollution is becoming a major environmental problem. What are the causes and solutions to solve this problem?
Anwser:
More and more people are getting concerned about environmental problems nowadays. Pollution is destroying our planet every day and in this essay, we are going to discuss the causes of it and the ways to deal with this problem.
First of all, I'd like to point out, that one of the biggest pollution sources is factories. They not only burn the trash in the suburbs of big cities but also pour huge amounts of dirty oils and water into the rivers and oceans. Thus killing and ruining nature around the city, making it impossible for farmers to plant cultures there and forcing marine life to migrate or simply die out.
I am absolutely convinced, that if businesses around the world get together and try to find a better way to deal with waste it will significantly change the situation. There are a lot of ways to help our planet for us as well. For example, we can start sorting out the trash at home. It won't take a lot of time or bring any kind of discomfort in our daily lives. Furthermore, the last research on this topic showed, that people who pay more attention to environmental problems are 65% happier and more satisfied with their lives.
The obvious conclusion is that we have to rely on ourselves first when it comes to global topics. Of course, if all the factories in this world switch to environmentally friendly systems it will solve the major problem, but unfortunately, we don't have any influence in that sphere. What we can do now is to stop mixing all the kinds of trash together.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Pollution is becoming a major environmental problem. What are the causes and solutions to solve this problem?
Anwser:
More and more people are getting concerned about environmental problems nowadays. Pollution is destroying our planet every day and in this essay, we are going to discuss the causes of it and the ways to deal with this problem.
First of all, I'd like to point out, that one of the biggest pollution sources is factories. They not only burn the trash in the suburbs of big cities but also pour huge amounts of dirty oils and water into the rivers and oceans. Thus killing and ruining nature around the city, making it impossible for farmers to plant cultures there and forcing marine life to migrate or simply die out.
I am absolutely convinced, that if businesses around the world get together and try to find a better way to deal with waste it will significantly change the situation. There are a lot of ways to help our planet for us as well. For example, we can start sorting out the trash at home. It won't take a lot of time or bring any kind of discomfort in our daily lives. Furthermore, the last research on this topic showed, that people who pay more attention to environmental problems are 65% happier and more satisfied with their lives.
The obvious conclusion is that we have to rely on ourselves first when it comes to global topics. Of course, if all the factories in this world switch to environmentally friendly systems it will solve the major problem, but unfortunately, we don't have any influence in that sphere. What we can do now is to stop mixing all the kinds of trash together.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Pollution is becoming a major environmental problem. What are the causes and solutions to solve this problem?
Anwser:
More and more people are getting concerned about environmental problems nowadays. Pollution is destroying our planet every day and in this essay, we are going to discuss the causes of it and the ways to deal with this problem.
First of all, I'd like to point out, that one of the biggest pollution sources is factories. They not only burn the trash in the suburbs of big cities but also pour huge amounts of dirty oils and water into the rivers and oceans. Thus killing and ruining nature around the city, making it impossible for farmers to plant cultures there and forcing marine life to migrate or simply die out.
I am absolutely convinced, that if businesses around the world get together and try to find a better way to deal with waste it will significantly change the situation. There are a lot of ways to help our planet for us as well. For example, we can start sorting out the trash at home. It won't take a lot of time or bring any kind of discomfort in our daily lives. Furthermore, the last research on this topic showed, that people who pay more attention to environmental problems are 65% happier and more satisfied with their lives.
The obvious conclusion is that we have to rely on ourselves first when it comes to global topics. Of course, if all the factories in this world switch to environmentally friendly systems it will solve the major problem, but unfortunately, we don't have any influence in that sphere. What we can do now is to stop mixing all the kinds of trash together.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Pollution is becoming a major environmental problem. What are the causes and solutions to solve this problem?
Anwser:
More and more people are getting concerned about environmental problems nowadays. Pollution is destroying our planet every day and in this essay, we are going to discuss the causes of it and the ways to deal with this problem.
First of all, I'd like to point out, that one of the biggest pollution sources is factories. They not only burn the trash in the suburbs of big cities but also pour huge amounts of dirty oils and water into the rivers and oceans. Thus killing and ruining nature around the city, making it impossible for farmers to plant cultures there and forcing marine life to migrate or simply die out.
I am absolutely convinced, that if businesses around the world get together and try to find a better way to deal with waste it will significantly change the situation. There are a lot of ways to help our planet for us as well. For example, we can start sorting out the trash at home. It won't take a lot of time or bring any kind of discomfort in our daily lives. Furthermore, the last research on this topic showed, that people who pay more attention to environmental problems are 65% happier and more satisfied with their lives.
The obvious conclusion is that we have to rely on ourselves first when it comes to global topics. Of course, if all the factories in this world switch to environmentally friendly systems it will solve the major problem, but unfortunately, we don't have any influence in that sphere. What we can do now is to stop mixing all the kinds of trash together.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
It is better to save money than to spend it.
How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world.
Anwser:
Some claim that it is more beneficial to purchase less. Having assessed the current global events, I strongly agree with this assumption because hardly anyone can anticipate what will happen in the future, and cutting down on unnecessary purchases makes it easier to meet their long-term goals.
It is true that the public should begin to manage their payment effectively for these two primary reasons. Firstly, the future could be fraught with unpredictable circumstances, and if anyone refuses to keep money for a rainy day, they may find themselves drowning in financial burnout. A clear example can be seen with 49% of workers in Microsoft who end up getting into debt after the sudden employee termination. Secondly, small sums of money can contribute to a three-fold increase in bank accounts in the long run, thus achieving long-term goals such as cars or property.
One might argue that members of society should use their salary to fulfil their desires. This is predicated on the saying that you only live once, which means that individuals should live every moment so that they do not regret not making their time and effort worthwhile. However, provided that the world is currently dealing with many serious crises like climate change or energy exhaustion, I feel that it is extremely unwise to follow such an extravagant lifestyle. The COVID-19 pandemic in 2019, for instance, caused misery to the majority of Vietnam as they neither saved up nor spent reasonably.
In conclusion, I believe that people now need to prevent excessive spending, for this helps them not only tackle unforeseen difficulties but also achieve a material milestone in their lives.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
It is better to save money than to spend it.
How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world.
Anwser:
Some claim that it is more beneficial to purchase less. Having assessed the current global events, I strongly agree with this assumption because hardly anyone can anticipate what will happen in the future, and cutting down on unnecessary purchases makes it easier to meet their long-term goals.
It is true that the public should begin to manage their payment effectively for these two primary reasons. Firstly, the future could be fraught with unpredictable circumstances, and if anyone refuses to keep money for a rainy day, they may find themselves drowning in financial burnout. A clear example can be seen with 49% of workers in Microsoft who end up getting into debt after the sudden employee termination. Secondly, small sums of money can contribute to a three-fold increase in bank accounts in the long run, thus achieving long-term goals such as cars or property.
One might argue that members of society should use their salary to fulfil their desires. This is predicated on the saying that you only live once, which means that individuals should live every moment so that they do not regret not making their time and effort worthwhile. However, provided that the world is currently dealing with many serious crises like climate change or energy exhaustion, I feel that it is extremely unwise to follow such an extravagant lifestyle. The COVID-19 pandemic in 2019, for instance, caused misery to the majority of Vietnam as they neither saved up nor spent reasonably.
In conclusion, I believe that people now need to prevent excessive spending, for this helps them not only tackle unforeseen difficulties but also achieve a material milestone in their lives.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
It is better to save money than to spend it.
How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world.
Anwser:
Some claim that it is more beneficial to purchase less. Having assessed the current global events, I strongly agree with this assumption because hardly anyone can anticipate what will happen in the future, and cutting down on unnecessary purchases makes it easier to meet their long-term goals.
It is true that the public should begin to manage their payment effectively for these two primary reasons. Firstly, the future could be fraught with unpredictable circumstances, and if anyone refuses to keep money for a rainy day, they may find themselves drowning in financial burnout. A clear example can be seen with 49% of workers in Microsoft who end up getting into debt after the sudden employee termination. Secondly, small sums of money can contribute to a three-fold increase in bank accounts in the long run, thus achieving long-term goals such as cars or property.
One might argue that members of society should use their salary to fulfil their desires. This is predicated on the saying that you only live once, which means that individuals should live every moment so that they do not regret not making their time and effort worthwhile. However, provided that the world is currently dealing with many serious crises like climate change or energy exhaustion, I feel that it is extremely unwise to follow such an extravagant lifestyle. The COVID-19 pandemic in 2019, for instance, caused misery to the majority of Vietnam as they neither saved up nor spent reasonably.
In conclusion, I believe that people now need to prevent excessive spending, for this helps them not only tackle unforeseen difficulties but also achieve a material milestone in their lives.
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Your lexical resource score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
It is better to save money than to spend it.
How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world.
Anwser:
Some claim that it is more beneficial to purchase less. Having assessed the current global events, I strongly agree with this assumption because hardly anyone can anticipate what will happen in the future, and cutting down on unnecessary purchases makes it easier to meet their long-term goals.
It is true that the public should begin to manage their payment effectively for these two primary reasons. Firstly, the future could be fraught with unpredictable circumstances, and if anyone refuses to keep money for a rainy day, they may find themselves drowning in financial burnout. A clear example can be seen with 49% of workers in Microsoft who end up getting into debt after the sudden employee termination. Secondly, small sums of money can contribute to a three-fold increase in bank accounts in the long run, thus achieving long-term goals such as cars or property.
One might argue that members of society should use their salary to fulfil their desires. This is predicated on the saying that you only live once, which means that individuals should live every moment so that they do not regret not making their time and effort worthwhile. However, provided that the world is currently dealing with many serious crises like climate change or energy exhaustion, I feel that it is extremely unwise to follow such an extravagant lifestyle. The COVID-19 pandemic in 2019, for instance, caused misery to the majority of Vietnam as they neither saved up nor spent reasonably.
In conclusion, I believe that people now need to prevent excessive spending, for this helps them not only tackle unforeseen difficulties but also achieve a material milestone in their lives.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
It is better to save money than to spend it.
How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world.
Anwser:
Some claim that it is more beneficial to purchase less. Having assessed the current global events, I strongly agree with this assumption because hardly anyone can anticipate what will happen in the future, and cutting down on unnecessary purchases makes it easier to meet their long-term goals.
It is true that the public should begin to manage their payment effectively for these two primary reasons. Firstly, the future could be fraught with unpredictable circumstances, and if anyone refuses to keep money for a rainy day, they may find themselves drowning in financial burnout. A clear example can be seen with 49% of workers in Microsoft who end up getting into debt after the sudden employee termination. Secondly, small sums of money can contribute to a three-fold increase in bank accounts in the long run, thus achieving long-term goals such as cars or property.
One might argue that members of society should use their salary to fulfil their desires. This is predicated on the saying that you only live once, which means that individuals should live every moment so that they do not regret not making their time and effort worthwhile. However, provided that the world is currently dealing with many serious crises like climate change or energy exhaustion, I feel that it is extremely unwise to follow such an extravagant lifestyle. The COVID-19 pandemic in 2019, for instance, caused misery to the majority of Vietnam as they neither saved up nor spent reasonably.
In conclusion, I believe that people now need to prevent excessive spending, for this helps them not only tackle unforeseen difficulties but also achieve a material milestone in their lives.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
It is better to save money than to spend it.
How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world.
Anwser:
Some claim that it is more beneficial to purchase less. Having assessed the current global events, I strongly agree with this assumption because hardly anyone can anticipate what will happen in the future, and cutting down on unnecessary purchases makes it easier to meet their long-term goals.
It is true that the public should begin to manage their payment effectively for these two primary reasons. Firstly, the future could be fraught with unpredictable circumstances, and if anyone refuses to keep money for a rainy day, they may find themselves drowning in financial burnout. A clear example can be seen with 49% of workers in Microsoft who end up getting into debt after the sudden employee termination. Secondly, small sums of money can contribute to a three-fold increase in bank accounts in the long run, thus achieving long-term goals such as cars or property.
One might argue that members of society should use their salary to fulfil their desires. This is predicated on the saying that you only live once, which means that individuals should live every moment so that they do not regret not making their time and effort worthwhile. However, provided that the world is currently dealing with many serious crises like climate change or energy exhaustion, I feel that it is extremely unwise to follow such an extravagant lifestyle. The COVID-19 pandemic in 2019, for instance, caused misery to the majority of Vietnam as they neither saved up nor spent reasonably.
In conclusion, I believe that people now need to prevent excessive spending, for this helps them not only tackle unforeseen difficulties but also achieve a material milestone in their lives.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
It is better to save money than to spend it.
How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world.
Anwser:
Some claim that it is more beneficial to purchase less. Having assessed the current global events, I strongly agree with this assumption because hardly anyone can anticipate what will happen in the future, and cutting down on unnecessary purchases makes it easier to meet their long-term goals.
It is true that the public should begin to manage their payment effectively for these two primary reasons. Firstly, the future could be fraught with unpredictable circumstances, and if anyone refuses to keep money for a rainy day, they may find themselves drowning in financial burnout. A clear example can be seen with 49% of workers in Microsoft who end up getting into debt after the sudden employee termination. Secondly, small sums of money can contribute to a three-fold increase in bank accounts in the long run, thus achieving long-term goals such as cars or property.
One might argue that members of society should use their salary to fulfil their desires. This is predicated on the saying that you only live once, which means that individuals should live every moment so that they do not regret not making their time and effort worthwhile. However, provided that the world is currently dealing with many serious crises like climate change or energy exhaustion, I feel that it is extremely unwise to follow such an extravagant lifestyle. The COVID-19 pandemic in 2019, for instance, caused misery to the majority of Vietnam as they neither saved up nor spent reasonably.
In conclusion, I believe that people now need to prevent excessive spending, for this helps them not only tackle unforeseen difficulties but also achieve a material milestone in their lives.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
It is better to save money than to spend it.
How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world.
Anwser:
Some claim that it is more beneficial to purchase less. Having assessed the current global events, I strongly agree with this assumption because hardly anyone can anticipate what will happen in the future, and cutting down on unnecessary purchases makes it easier to meet their long-term goals.
It is true that the public should begin to manage their payment effectively for these two primary reasons. Firstly, the future could be fraught with unpredictable circumstances, and if anyone refuses to keep money for a rainy day, they may find themselves drowning in financial burnout. A clear example can be seen with 49% of workers in Microsoft who end up getting into debt after the sudden employee termination. Secondly, small sums of money can contribute to a three-fold increase in bank accounts in the long run, thus achieving long-term goals such as cars or property.
One might argue that members of society should use their salary to fulfil their desires. This is predicated on the saying that you only live once, which means that individuals should live every moment so that they do not regret not making their time and effort worthwhile. However, provided that the world is currently dealing with many serious crises like climate change or energy exhaustion, I feel that it is extremely unwise to follow such an extravagant lifestyle. The COVID-19 pandemic in 2019, for instance, caused misery to the majority of Vietnam as they neither saved up nor spent reasonably.
In conclusion, I believe that people now need to prevent excessive spending, for this helps them not only tackle unforeseen difficulties but also achieve a material milestone in their lives.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
Anwser:
In order to reduce the crime rate, more and more security camcorders are being installed in public venues these days which some critics would consider invasive. However, I believe that the benefits prevail over the drawbacks on this occasion.
One of the major benefits obtained from the installation of video cameras is for criminal identification. This system enables authorities to access an unlimited amount of data on each citizen, simplifying their responsibilities and enabling them to make time for other vital matters. Moreover, a noticeable reduction in the days spent on each crime case adds to the advantages of this approach because it saves a lot of time for law enforcement to take other essential actions such as background checks and scene research instead. On the other hand, these camcorders can guarantee the safety of individuals in a more efficient way, enhancing their social life simultaneously. Numerous studies have shown a significant increase in public interactions among total strangers due to their previous knowledge of the existing security cameras in the area.
However, invading individuals’ privacy can be accounted as one of the major downsides of this approach. These measures endanger the sensation of relief and implement the constant fear of being under surveillance; therefore, people would not be as motivated to go outside as they usually would due to the lack of comfort. Besides, they might fear that the collected data by public camcorders would be put to use for other purposes rather than reducing crime rates. For instance, if this sensitive information falls into the wrong hands, it could be used as leverage for extortion.
In a nutshell, despite the aroused criticism towards the construction of security cameras, I side with the group that believes the pros prevail over the cons because even though the privacy invasion cannot be neglected, communities could benefit from an improvement in the means of general safety.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
Anwser:
In order to reduce the crime rate, more and more security camcorders are being installed in public venues these days which some critics would consider invasive. However, I believe that the benefits prevail over the drawbacks on this occasion.
One of the major benefits obtained from the installation of video cameras is for criminal identification. This system enables authorities to access an unlimited amount of data on each citizen, simplifying their responsibilities and enabling them to make time for other vital matters. Moreover, a noticeable reduction in the days spent on each crime case adds to the advantages of this approach because it saves a lot of time for law enforcement to take other essential actions such as background checks and scene research instead. On the other hand, these camcorders can guarantee the safety of individuals in a more efficient way, enhancing their social life simultaneously. Numerous studies have shown a significant increase in public interactions among total strangers due to their previous knowledge of the existing security cameras in the area.
However, invading individuals’ privacy can be accounted as one of the major downsides of this approach. These measures endanger the sensation of relief and implement the constant fear of being under surveillance; therefore, people would not be as motivated to go outside as they usually would due to the lack of comfort. Besides, they might fear that the collected data by public camcorders would be put to use for other purposes rather than reducing crime rates. For instance, if this sensitive information falls into the wrong hands, it could be used as leverage for extortion.
In a nutshell, despite the aroused criticism towards the construction of security cameras, I side with the group that believes the pros prevail over the cons because even though the privacy invasion cannot be neglected, communities could benefit from an improvement in the means of general safety.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
Anwser:
In order to reduce the crime rate, more and more security camcorders are being installed in public venues these days which some critics would consider invasive. However, I believe that the benefits prevail over the drawbacks on this occasion.
One of the major benefits obtained from the installation of video cameras is for criminal identification. This system enables authorities to access an unlimited amount of data on each citizen, simplifying their responsibilities and enabling them to make time for other vital matters. Moreover, a noticeable reduction in the days spent on each crime case adds to the advantages of this approach because it saves a lot of time for law enforcement to take other essential actions such as background checks and scene research instead. On the other hand, these camcorders can guarantee the safety of individuals in a more efficient way, enhancing their social life simultaneously. Numerous studies have shown a significant increase in public interactions among total strangers due to their previous knowledge of the existing security cameras in the area.
However, invading individuals’ privacy can be accounted as one of the major downsides of this approach. These measures endanger the sensation of relief and implement the constant fear of being under surveillance; therefore, people would not be as motivated to go outside as they usually would due to the lack of comfort. Besides, they might fear that the collected data by public camcorders would be put to use for other purposes rather than reducing crime rates. For instance, if this sensitive information falls into the wrong hands, it could be used as leverage for extortion.
In a nutshell, despite the aroused criticism towards the construction of security cameras, I side with the group that believes the pros prevail over the cons because even though the privacy invasion cannot be neglected, communities could benefit from an improvement in the means of general safety.
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Your lexical resource score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
Anwser:
In order to reduce the crime rate, more and more security camcorders are being installed in public venues these days which some critics would consider invasive. However, I believe that the benefits prevail over the drawbacks on this occasion.
One of the major benefits obtained from the installation of video cameras is for criminal identification. This system enables authorities to access an unlimited amount of data on each citizen, simplifying their responsibilities and enabling them to make time for other vital matters. Moreover, a noticeable reduction in the days spent on each crime case adds to the advantages of this approach because it saves a lot of time for law enforcement to take other essential actions such as background checks and scene research instead. On the other hand, these camcorders can guarantee the safety of individuals in a more efficient way, enhancing their social life simultaneously. Numerous studies have shown a significant increase in public interactions among total strangers due to their previous knowledge of the existing security cameras in the area.
However, invading individuals’ privacy can be accounted as one of the major downsides of this approach. These measures endanger the sensation of relief and implement the constant fear of being under surveillance; therefore, people would not be as motivated to go outside as they usually would due to the lack of comfort. Besides, they might fear that the collected data by public camcorders would be put to use for other purposes rather than reducing crime rates. For instance, if this sensitive information falls into the wrong hands, it could be used as leverage for extortion.
In a nutshell, despite the aroused criticism towards the construction of security cameras, I side with the group that believes the pros prevail over the cons because even though the privacy invasion cannot be neglected, communities could benefit from an improvement in the means of general safety.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
Anwser:
In order to reduce the crime rate, more and more security camcorders are being installed in public venues these days which some critics would consider invasive. However, I believe that the benefits prevail over the drawbacks on this occasion.
One of the major benefits obtained from the installation of video cameras is for criminal identification. This system enables authorities to access an unlimited amount of data on each citizen, simplifying their responsibilities and enabling them to make time for other vital matters. Moreover, a noticeable reduction in the days spent on each crime case adds to the advantages of this approach because it saves a lot of time for law enforcement to take other essential actions such as background checks and scene research instead. On the other hand, these camcorders can guarantee the safety of individuals in a more efficient way, enhancing their social life simultaneously. Numerous studies have shown a significant increase in public interactions among total strangers due to their previous knowledge of the existing security cameras in the area.
However, invading individuals’ privacy can be accounted as one of the major downsides of this approach. These measures endanger the sensation of relief and implement the constant fear of being under surveillance; therefore, people would not be as motivated to go outside as they usually would due to the lack of comfort. Besides, they might fear that the collected data by public camcorders would be put to use for other purposes rather than reducing crime rates. For instance, if this sensitive information falls into the wrong hands, it could be used as leverage for extortion.
In a nutshell, despite the aroused criticism towards the construction of security cameras, I side with the group that believes the pros prevail over the cons because even though the privacy invasion cannot be neglected, communities could benefit from an improvement in the means of general safety.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
Anwser:
In order to reduce the crime rate, more and more security camcorders are being installed in public venues these days which some critics would consider invasive. However, I believe that the benefits prevail over the drawbacks on this occasion.
One of the major benefits obtained from the installation of video cameras is for criminal identification. This system enables authorities to access an unlimited amount of data on each citizen, simplifying their responsibilities and enabling them to make time for other vital matters. Moreover, a noticeable reduction in the days spent on each crime case adds to the advantages of this approach because it saves a lot of time for law enforcement to take other essential actions such as background checks and scene research instead. On the other hand, these camcorders can guarantee the safety of individuals in a more efficient way, enhancing their social life simultaneously. Numerous studies have shown a significant increase in public interactions among total strangers due to their previous knowledge of the existing security cameras in the area.
However, invading individuals’ privacy can be accounted as one of the major downsides of this approach. These measures endanger the sensation of relief and implement the constant fear of being under surveillance; therefore, people would not be as motivated to go outside as they usually would due to the lack of comfort. Besides, they might fear that the collected data by public camcorders would be put to use for other purposes rather than reducing crime rates. For instance, if this sensitive information falls into the wrong hands, it could be used as leverage for extortion.
In a nutshell, despite the aroused criticism towards the construction of security cameras, I side with the group that believes the pros prevail over the cons because even though the privacy invasion cannot be neglected, communities could benefit from an improvement in the means of general safety.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
Anwser:
In order to reduce the crime rate, more and more security camcorders are being installed in public venues these days which some critics would consider invasive. However, I believe that the benefits prevail over the drawbacks on this occasion.
One of the major benefits obtained from the installation of video cameras is for criminal identification. This system enables authorities to access an unlimited amount of data on each citizen, simplifying their responsibilities and enabling them to make time for other vital matters. Moreover, a noticeable reduction in the days spent on each crime case adds to the advantages of this approach because it saves a lot of time for law enforcement to take other essential actions such as background checks and scene research instead. On the other hand, these camcorders can guarantee the safety of individuals in a more efficient way, enhancing their social life simultaneously. Numerous studies have shown a significant increase in public interactions among total strangers due to their previous knowledge of the existing security cameras in the area.
However, invading individuals’ privacy can be accounted as one of the major downsides of this approach. These measures endanger the sensation of relief and implement the constant fear of being under surveillance; therefore, people would not be as motivated to go outside as they usually would due to the lack of comfort. Besides, they might fear that the collected data by public camcorders would be put to use for other purposes rather than reducing crime rates. For instance, if this sensitive information falls into the wrong hands, it could be used as leverage for extortion.
In a nutshell, despite the aroused criticism towards the construction of security cameras, I side with the group that believes the pros prevail over the cons because even though the privacy invasion cannot be neglected, communities could benefit from an improvement in the means of general safety.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
Anwser:
In order to reduce the crime rate, more and more security camcorders are being installed in public venues these days which some critics would consider invasive. However, I believe that the benefits prevail over the drawbacks on this occasion.
One of the major benefits obtained from the installation of video cameras is for criminal identification. This system enables authorities to access an unlimited amount of data on each citizen, simplifying their responsibilities and enabling them to make time for other vital matters. Moreover, a noticeable reduction in the days spent on each crime case adds to the advantages of this approach because it saves a lot of time for law enforcement to take other essential actions such as background checks and scene research instead. On the other hand, these camcorders can guarantee the safety of individuals in a more efficient way, enhancing their social life simultaneously. Numerous studies have shown a significant increase in public interactions among total strangers due to their previous knowledge of the existing security cameras in the area.
However, invading individuals’ privacy can be accounted as one of the major downsides of this approach. These measures endanger the sensation of relief and implement the constant fear of being under surveillance; therefore, people would not be as motivated to go outside as they usually would due to the lack of comfort. Besides, they might fear that the collected data by public camcorders would be put to use for other purposes rather than reducing crime rates. For instance, if this sensitive information falls into the wrong hands, it could be used as leverage for extortion.
In a nutshell, despite the aroused criticism towards the construction of security cameras, I side with the group that believes the pros prevail over the cons because even though the privacy invasion cannot be neglected, communities could benefit from an improvement in the means of general safety.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
To what extent do you agree and/or disagree?
Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money
Anwser:
It is thought by some that the aim of working among individuals is solely for financial reward. Although I accept that some employees take extra hours in work only to obtain more money,I believe that the purpose of this tendency among people is to lay the groundwork for their future and escape from long-term dependency.
On the one hand,as some,especially those who have a limited budget cannot make a living or cannot afford to pay for basic necessities,the main desire among them can be to obtain more salary.For example,there are many people who have many responsibilities such as raising their children or supporting their families do not have enough money to pay for their minors' education or other necessities and consequently,they can devote their time to work solely to gain more money.
On the other hand,I consider that the primary aim of taking additional hours in work is that they can want to build their lives and contemplate their future.They dedicate themselves to their work as much as they can and want to gain more experience as well as become knowledgeable in their occupations.These valuable experiences can help them run their own business and escape from long-term dependency,which creates a sense of fulfilment among them.For example, in many developing countries , employees procure low salaries and by working hard,they want to get experience these experiences can lead to better opportunities for them and as a consequence,they can live autonomously without relying on salary.
In conclusion ,while those who have a limited budget can have a desire to gain money by working more than normal,I believe that the main aim among them can be to escape from dependency and have a better lifestyle.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
To what extent do you agree and/or disagree?
Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money
Anwser:
It is thought by some that the aim of working among individuals is solely for financial reward. Although I accept that some employees take extra hours in work only to obtain more money,I believe that the purpose of this tendency among people is to lay the groundwork for their future and escape from long-term dependency.
On the one hand,as some,especially those who have a limited budget cannot make a living or cannot afford to pay for basic necessities,the main desire among them can be to obtain more salary.For example,there are many people who have many responsibilities such as raising their children or supporting their families do not have enough money to pay for their minors' education or other necessities and consequently,they can devote their time to work solely to gain more money.
On the other hand,I consider that the primary aim of taking additional hours in work is that they can want to build their lives and contemplate their future.They dedicate themselves to their work as much as they can and want to gain more experience as well as become knowledgeable in their occupations.These valuable experiences can help them run their own business and escape from long-term dependency,which creates a sense of fulfilment among them.For example, in many developing countries , employees procure low salaries and by working hard,they want to get experience these experiences can lead to better opportunities for them and as a consequence,they can live autonomously without relying on salary.
In conclusion ,while those who have a limited budget can have a desire to gain money by working more than normal,I believe that the main aim among them can be to escape from dependency and have a better lifestyle.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
To what extent do you agree and/or disagree?
Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money
Anwser:
It is thought by some that the aim of working among individuals is solely for financial reward. Although I accept that some employees take extra hours in work only to obtain more money,I believe that the purpose of this tendency among people is to lay the groundwork for their future and escape from long-term dependency.
On the one hand,as some,especially those who have a limited budget cannot make a living or cannot afford to pay for basic necessities,the main desire among them can be to obtain more salary.For example,there are many people who have many responsibilities such as raising their children or supporting their families do not have enough money to pay for their minors' education or other necessities and consequently,they can devote their time to work solely to gain more money.
On the other hand,I consider that the primary aim of taking additional hours in work is that they can want to build their lives and contemplate their future.They dedicate themselves to their work as much as they can and want to gain more experience as well as become knowledgeable in their occupations.These valuable experiences can help them run their own business and escape from long-term dependency,which creates a sense of fulfilment among them.For example, in many developing countries , employees procure low salaries and by working hard,they want to get experience these experiences can lead to better opportunities for them and as a consequence,they can live autonomously without relying on salary.
In conclusion ,while those who have a limited budget can have a desire to gain money by working more than normal,I believe that the main aim among them can be to escape from dependency and have a better lifestyle.
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
To what extent do you agree and/or disagree?
Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money
Anwser:
It is thought by some that the aim of working among individuals is solely for financial reward. Although I accept that some employees take extra hours in work only to obtain more money,I believe that the purpose of this tendency among people is to lay the groundwork for their future and escape from long-term dependency.
On the one hand,as some,especially those who have a limited budget cannot make a living or cannot afford to pay for basic necessities,the main desire among them can be to obtain more salary.For example,there are many people who have many responsibilities such as raising their children or supporting their families do not have enough money to pay for their minors' education or other necessities and consequently,they can devote their time to work solely to gain more money.
On the other hand,I consider that the primary aim of taking additional hours in work is that they can want to build their lives and contemplate their future.They dedicate themselves to their work as much as they can and want to gain more experience as well as become knowledgeable in their occupations.These valuable experiences can help them run their own business and escape from long-term dependency,which creates a sense of fulfilment among them.For example, in many developing countries , employees procure low salaries and by working hard,they want to get experience these experiences can lead to better opportunities for them and as a consequence,they can live autonomously without relying on salary.
In conclusion ,while those who have a limited budget can have a desire to gain money by working more than normal,I believe that the main aim among them can be to escape from dependency and have a better lifestyle.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
To what extent do you agree and/or disagree?
Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money
Anwser:
It is thought by some that the aim of working among individuals is solely for financial reward. Although I accept that some employees take extra hours in work only to obtain more money,I believe that the purpose of this tendency among people is to lay the groundwork for their future and escape from long-term dependency.
On the one hand,as some,especially those who have a limited budget cannot make a living or cannot afford to pay for basic necessities,the main desire among them can be to obtain more salary.For example,there are many people who have many responsibilities such as raising their children or supporting their families do not have enough money to pay for their minors' education or other necessities and consequently,they can devote their time to work solely to gain more money.
On the other hand,I consider that the primary aim of taking additional hours in work is that they can want to build their lives and contemplate their future.They dedicate themselves to their work as much as they can and want to gain more experience as well as become knowledgeable in their occupations.These valuable experiences can help them run their own business and escape from long-term dependency,which creates a sense of fulfilment among them.For example, in many developing countries , employees procure low salaries and by working hard,they want to get experience these experiences can lead to better opportunities for them and as a consequence,they can live autonomously without relying on salary.
In conclusion ,while those who have a limited budget can have a desire to gain money by working more than normal,I believe that the main aim among them can be to escape from dependency and have a better lifestyle.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
To what extent do you agree and/or disagree?
Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money
Anwser:
It is thought by some that the aim of working among individuals is solely for financial reward. Although I accept that some employees take extra hours in work only to obtain more money,I believe that the purpose of this tendency among people is to lay the groundwork for their future and escape from long-term dependency.
On the one hand,as some,especially those who have a limited budget cannot make a living or cannot afford to pay for basic necessities,the main desire among them can be to obtain more salary.For example,there are many people who have many responsibilities such as raising their children or supporting their families do not have enough money to pay for their minors' education or other necessities and consequently,they can devote their time to work solely to gain more money.
On the other hand,I consider that the primary aim of taking additional hours in work is that they can want to build their lives and contemplate their future.They dedicate themselves to their work as much as they can and want to gain more experience as well as become knowledgeable in their occupations.These valuable experiences can help them run their own business and escape from long-term dependency,which creates a sense of fulfilment among them.For example, in many developing countries , employees procure low salaries and by working hard,they want to get experience these experiences can lead to better opportunities for them and as a consequence,they can live autonomously without relying on salary.
In conclusion ,while those who have a limited budget can have a desire to gain money by working more than normal,I believe that the main aim among them can be to escape from dependency and have a better lifestyle.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
To what extent do you agree and/or disagree?
Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money
Anwser:
It is thought by some that the aim of working among individuals is solely for financial reward. Although I accept that some employees take extra hours in work only to obtain more money,I believe that the purpose of this tendency among people is to lay the groundwork for their future and escape from long-term dependency.
On the one hand,as some,especially those who have a limited budget cannot make a living or cannot afford to pay for basic necessities,the main desire among them can be to obtain more salary.For example,there are many people who have many responsibilities such as raising their children or supporting their families do not have enough money to pay for their minors' education or other necessities and consequently,they can devote their time to work solely to gain more money.
On the other hand,I consider that the primary aim of taking additional hours in work is that they can want to build their lives and contemplate their future.They dedicate themselves to their work as much as they can and want to gain more experience as well as become knowledgeable in their occupations.These valuable experiences can help them run their own business and escape from long-term dependency,which creates a sense of fulfilment among them.For example, in many developing countries , employees procure low salaries and by working hard,they want to get experience these experiences can lead to better opportunities for them and as a consequence,they can live autonomously without relying on salary.
In conclusion ,while those who have a limited budget can have a desire to gain money by working more than normal,I believe that the main aim among them can be to escape from dependency and have a better lifestyle.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
To what extent do you agree and/or disagree?
Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money
Anwser:
It is thought by some that the aim of working among individuals is solely for financial reward. Although I accept that some employees take extra hours in work only to obtain more money,I believe that the purpose of this tendency among people is to lay the groundwork for their future and escape from long-term dependency.
On the one hand,as some,especially those who have a limited budget cannot make a living or cannot afford to pay for basic necessities,the main desire among them can be to obtain more salary.For example,there are many people who have many responsibilities such as raising their children or supporting their families do not have enough money to pay for their minors' education or other necessities and consequently,they can devote their time to work solely to gain more money.
On the other hand,I consider that the primary aim of taking additional hours in work is that they can want to build their lives and contemplate their future.They dedicate themselves to their work as much as they can and want to gain more experience as well as become knowledgeable in their occupations.These valuable experiences can help them run their own business and escape from long-term dependency,which creates a sense of fulfilment among them.For example, in many developing countries , employees procure low salaries and by working hard,they want to get experience these experiences can lead to better opportunities for them and as a consequence,they can live autonomously without relying on salary.
In conclusion ,while those who have a limited budget can have a desire to gain money by working more than normal,I believe that the main aim among them can be to escape from dependency and have a better lifestyle.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generation. What are the reasons for this, and How this problem be tackled.
Anwser:
Nowadays, it is a dime a dozen that people often run into the obesity issue, which is a ubiquitous phenomenon around the world. The run-of-the-mill people certainly believe that the young generations are possibly more vulnerable to being overweight than the older citizens. Hence, this essay is going to elaborate on the legitimate reasons and how supposedly people and government come across the aforementioned challenge.
To begin with, there might be two crucial causes that play an important role in the formidable problem coming about to teenagers. First, it is inevitable that they feel like eating the processed meal frequently containing a lot of sugar in their daily life. Let's say, a snack must questionably provide over 50 grams of sugar. In addition, they also avoid training their bodies physically in terms of boosting the carbohydrate metabolism that is possibly conducted at home. Based on the data, only 40% of adults in Indonesia allocate their downtime to hit the gym.
Moreover, to resolve the issue, parents and the government are required to collaborate together, which takes into account their specific actions. For instance, the mother must undoubtedly play a paramount role in providing healthy food that is convenient for their kids every day to deter consuming unhealthy meals. In contrast, it coincides with the government that supposedly makes a tough regulation regarding the ready meal production in a company to reduce utilisation more sugar cane.
To sum up, based on this essay, commercial foods and movement exercises may contribute to the level of obesity that has been inferred by many researchers. Consequently, citizens and nations must totally go together to diminish the issue in two various ways.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generation. What are the reasons for this, and How this problem be tackled.
Anwser:
Nowadays, it is a dime a dozen that people often run into the obesity issue, which is a ubiquitous phenomenon around the world. The run-of-the-mill people certainly believe that the young generations are possibly more vulnerable to being overweight than the older citizens. Hence, this essay is going to elaborate on the legitimate reasons and how supposedly people and government come across the aforementioned challenge.
To begin with, there might be two crucial causes that play an important role in the formidable problem coming about to teenagers. First, it is inevitable that they feel like eating the processed meal frequently containing a lot of sugar in their daily life. Let's say, a snack must questionably provide over 50 grams of sugar. In addition, they also avoid training their bodies physically in terms of boosting the carbohydrate metabolism that is possibly conducted at home. Based on the data, only 40% of adults in Indonesia allocate their downtime to hit the gym.
Moreover, to resolve the issue, parents and the government are required to collaborate together, which takes into account their specific actions. For instance, the mother must undoubtedly play a paramount role in providing healthy food that is convenient for their kids every day to deter consuming unhealthy meals. In contrast, it coincides with the government that supposedly makes a tough regulation regarding the ready meal production in a company to reduce utilisation more sugar cane.
To sum up, based on this essay, commercial foods and movement exercises may contribute to the level of obesity that has been inferred by many researchers. Consequently, citizens and nations must totally go together to diminish the issue in two various ways.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generation. What are the reasons for this, and How this problem be tackled.
Anwser:
Nowadays, it is a dime a dozen that people often run into the obesity issue, which is a ubiquitous phenomenon around the world. The run-of-the-mill people certainly believe that the young generations are possibly more vulnerable to being overweight than the older citizens. Hence, this essay is going to elaborate on the legitimate reasons and how supposedly people and government come across the aforementioned challenge.
To begin with, there might be two crucial causes that play an important role in the formidable problem coming about to teenagers. First, it is inevitable that they feel like eating the processed meal frequently containing a lot of sugar in their daily life. Let's say, a snack must questionably provide over 50 grams of sugar. In addition, they also avoid training their bodies physically in terms of boosting the carbohydrate metabolism that is possibly conducted at home. Based on the data, only 40% of adults in Indonesia allocate their downtime to hit the gym.
Moreover, to resolve the issue, parents and the government are required to collaborate together, which takes into account their specific actions. For instance, the mother must undoubtedly play a paramount role in providing healthy food that is convenient for their kids every day to deter consuming unhealthy meals. In contrast, it coincides with the government that supposedly makes a tough regulation regarding the ready meal production in a company to reduce utilisation more sugar cane.
To sum up, based on this essay, commercial foods and movement exercises may contribute to the level of obesity that has been inferred by many researchers. Consequently, citizens and nations must totally go together to diminish the issue in two various ways.
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Your lexical resource score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generation. What are the reasons for this, and How this problem be tackled.
Anwser:
Nowadays, it is a dime a dozen that people often run into the obesity issue, which is a ubiquitous phenomenon around the world. The run-of-the-mill people certainly believe that the young generations are possibly more vulnerable to being overweight than the older citizens. Hence, this essay is going to elaborate on the legitimate reasons and how supposedly people and government come across the aforementioned challenge.
To begin with, there might be two crucial causes that play an important role in the formidable problem coming about to teenagers. First, it is inevitable that they feel like eating the processed meal frequently containing a lot of sugar in their daily life. Let's say, a snack must questionably provide over 50 grams of sugar. In addition, they also avoid training their bodies physically in terms of boosting the carbohydrate metabolism that is possibly conducted at home. Based on the data, only 40% of adults in Indonesia allocate their downtime to hit the gym.
Moreover, to resolve the issue, parents and the government are required to collaborate together, which takes into account their specific actions. For instance, the mother must undoubtedly play a paramount role in providing healthy food that is convenient for their kids every day to deter consuming unhealthy meals. In contrast, it coincides with the government that supposedly makes a tough regulation regarding the ready meal production in a company to reduce utilisation more sugar cane.
To sum up, based on this essay, commercial foods and movement exercises may contribute to the level of obesity that has been inferred by many researchers. Consequently, citizens and nations must totally go together to diminish the issue in two various ways.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generation. What are the reasons for this, and How this problem be tackled.
Anwser:
Nowadays, it is a dime a dozen that people often run into the obesity issue, which is a ubiquitous phenomenon around the world. The run-of-the-mill people certainly believe that the young generations are possibly more vulnerable to being overweight than the older citizens. Hence, this essay is going to elaborate on the legitimate reasons and how supposedly people and government come across the aforementioned challenge.
To begin with, there might be two crucial causes that play an important role in the formidable problem coming about to teenagers. First, it is inevitable that they feel like eating the processed meal frequently containing a lot of sugar in their daily life. Let's say, a snack must questionably provide over 50 grams of sugar. In addition, they also avoid training their bodies physically in terms of boosting the carbohydrate metabolism that is possibly conducted at home. Based on the data, only 40% of adults in Indonesia allocate their downtime to hit the gym.
Moreover, to resolve the issue, parents and the government are required to collaborate together, which takes into account their specific actions. For instance, the mother must undoubtedly play a paramount role in providing healthy food that is convenient for their kids every day to deter consuming unhealthy meals. In contrast, it coincides with the government that supposedly makes a tough regulation regarding the ready meal production in a company to reduce utilisation more sugar cane.
To sum up, based on this essay, commercial foods and movement exercises may contribute to the level of obesity that has been inferred by many researchers. Consequently, citizens and nations must totally go together to diminish the issue in two various ways.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generation. What are the reasons for this, and How this problem be tackled.
Anwser:
Nowadays, it is a dime a dozen that people often run into the obesity issue, which is a ubiquitous phenomenon around the world. The run-of-the-mill people certainly believe that the young generations are possibly more vulnerable to being overweight than the older citizens. Hence, this essay is going to elaborate on the legitimate reasons and how supposedly people and government come across the aforementioned challenge.
To begin with, there might be two crucial causes that play an important role in the formidable problem coming about to teenagers. First, it is inevitable that they feel like eating the processed meal frequently containing a lot of sugar in their daily life. Let's say, a snack must questionably provide over 50 grams of sugar. In addition, they also avoid training their bodies physically in terms of boosting the carbohydrate metabolism that is possibly conducted at home. Based on the data, only 40% of adults in Indonesia allocate their downtime to hit the gym.
Moreover, to resolve the issue, parents and the government are required to collaborate together, which takes into account their specific actions. For instance, the mother must undoubtedly play a paramount role in providing healthy food that is convenient for their kids every day to deter consuming unhealthy meals. In contrast, it coincides with the government that supposedly makes a tough regulation regarding the ready meal production in a company to reduce utilisation more sugar cane.
To sum up, based on this essay, commercial foods and movement exercises may contribute to the level of obesity that has been inferred by many researchers. Consequently, citizens and nations must totally go together to diminish the issue in two various ways.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generation. What are the reasons for this, and How this problem be tackled.
Anwser:
Nowadays, it is a dime a dozen that people often run into the obesity issue, which is a ubiquitous phenomenon around the world. The run-of-the-mill people certainly believe that the young generations are possibly more vulnerable to being overweight than the older citizens. Hence, this essay is going to elaborate on the legitimate reasons and how supposedly people and government come across the aforementioned challenge.
To begin with, there might be two crucial causes that play an important role in the formidable problem coming about to teenagers. First, it is inevitable that they feel like eating the processed meal frequently containing a lot of sugar in their daily life. Let's say, a snack must questionably provide over 50 grams of sugar. In addition, they also avoid training their bodies physically in terms of boosting the carbohydrate metabolism that is possibly conducted at home. Based on the data, only 40% of adults in Indonesia allocate their downtime to hit the gym.
Moreover, to resolve the issue, parents and the government are required to collaborate together, which takes into account their specific actions. For instance, the mother must undoubtedly play a paramount role in providing healthy food that is convenient for their kids every day to deter consuming unhealthy meals. In contrast, it coincides with the government that supposedly makes a tough regulation regarding the ready meal production in a company to reduce utilisation more sugar cane.
To sum up, based on this essay, commercial foods and movement exercises may contribute to the level of obesity that has been inferred by many researchers. Consequently, citizens and nations must totally go together to diminish the issue in two various ways.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generation. What are the reasons for this, and How this problem be tackled.
Anwser:
Nowadays, it is a dime a dozen that people often run into the obesity issue, which is a ubiquitous phenomenon around the world. The run-of-the-mill people certainly believe that the young generations are possibly more vulnerable to being overweight than the older citizens. Hence, this essay is going to elaborate on the legitimate reasons and how supposedly people and government come across the aforementioned challenge.
To begin with, there might be two crucial causes that play an important role in the formidable problem coming about to teenagers. First, it is inevitable that they feel like eating the processed meal frequently containing a lot of sugar in their daily life. Let's say, a snack must questionably provide over 50 grams of sugar. In addition, they also avoid training their bodies physically in terms of boosting the carbohydrate metabolism that is possibly conducted at home. Based on the data, only 40% of adults in Indonesia allocate their downtime to hit the gym.
Moreover, to resolve the issue, parents and the government are required to collaborate together, which takes into account their specific actions. For instance, the mother must undoubtedly play a paramount role in providing healthy food that is convenient for their kids every day to deter consuming unhealthy meals. In contrast, it coincides with the government that supposedly makes a tough regulation regarding the ready meal production in a company to reduce utilisation more sugar cane.
To sum up, based on this essay, commercial foods and movement exercises may contribute to the level of obesity that has been inferred by many researchers. Consequently, citizens and nations must totally go together to diminish the issue in two various ways.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
It is responsibility of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement.
Governments have no obligation to provide this benefit.
To what extend to you agree or disagree with these statements?
Anwser:
Each person is obligated to have a retirement plan after their career, and it is not the government's duty to have a retirement schedule for their own people. I strongly disagree with this statement, because of the services that citizens provide for them and their basic assurance.
Firstly, civilians pay all sorts of taxes to them, whether it relates to cargo shipped from other countries. Or, the money paid for their gas, water supplies, and electricity, with all of them being basic human needs. All of these are being cut from an individual's income which they hardly earned by working under the same system. For example, if a citizen is law-obedient and has an honest career earning his salary, they should never be worried about what comes after in their senior years. This is the least they could expect.
Another reason is that this relationship is not one-sided, with civilians also providing all types of benefits for them. If people belonging to the same system are flourishing in their jobs; that also means the same for the country. For instance, if hand-crafted goods bring a lot of attraction to the government area, with tourists roaming it and buying their products, that means the people are being paid a good amount of money, so it will bring the same success to them as well. So the reasonable reaction to this is to assure their future for their good deeds.
To conclude, with the many great assets that individuals provide for them as well, such as tax paying and complementing their government's good image, it is mandatory for them to have a solid foundation that enables them to rest easily after their careers.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
It is responsibility of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement.
Governments have no obligation to provide this benefit.
To what extend to you agree or disagree with these statements?
Anwser:
Each person is obligated to have a retirement plan after their career, and it is not the government's duty to have a retirement schedule for their own people. I strongly disagree with this statement, because of the services that citizens provide for them and their basic assurance.
Firstly, civilians pay all sorts of taxes to them, whether it relates to cargo shipped from other countries. Or, the money paid for their gas, water supplies, and electricity, with all of them being basic human needs. All of these are being cut from an individual's income which they hardly earned by working under the same system. For example, if a citizen is law-obedient and has an honest career earning his salary, they should never be worried about what comes after in their senior years. This is the least they could expect.
Another reason is that this relationship is not one-sided, with civilians also providing all types of benefits for them. If people belonging to the same system are flourishing in their jobs; that also means the same for the country. For instance, if hand-crafted goods bring a lot of attraction to the government area, with tourists roaming it and buying their products, that means the people are being paid a good amount of money, so it will bring the same success to them as well. So the reasonable reaction to this is to assure their future for their good deeds.
To conclude, with the many great assets that individuals provide for them as well, such as tax paying and complementing their government's good image, it is mandatory for them to have a solid foundation that enables them to rest easily after their careers.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
It is responsibility of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement.
Governments have no obligation to provide this benefit.
To what extend to you agree or disagree with these statements?
Anwser:
Each person is obligated to have a retirement plan after their career, and it is not the government's duty to have a retirement schedule for their own people. I strongly disagree with this statement, because of the services that citizens provide for them and their basic assurance.
Firstly, civilians pay all sorts of taxes to them, whether it relates to cargo shipped from other countries. Or, the money paid for their gas, water supplies, and electricity, with all of them being basic human needs. All of these are being cut from an individual's income which they hardly earned by working under the same system. For example, if a citizen is law-obedient and has an honest career earning his salary, they should never be worried about what comes after in their senior years. This is the least they could expect.
Another reason is that this relationship is not one-sided, with civilians also providing all types of benefits for them. If people belonging to the same system are flourishing in their jobs; that also means the same for the country. For instance, if hand-crafted goods bring a lot of attraction to the government area, with tourists roaming it and buying their products, that means the people are being paid a good amount of money, so it will bring the same success to them as well. So the reasonable reaction to this is to assure their future for their good deeds.
To conclude, with the many great assets that individuals provide for them as well, such as tax paying and complementing their government's good image, it is mandatory for them to have a solid foundation that enables them to rest easily after their careers.
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Your lexical resource score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
It is responsibility of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement.
Governments have no obligation to provide this benefit.
To what extend to you agree or disagree with these statements?
Anwser:
Each person is obligated to have a retirement plan after their career, and it is not the government's duty to have a retirement schedule for their own people. I strongly disagree with this statement, because of the services that citizens provide for them and their basic assurance.
Firstly, civilians pay all sorts of taxes to them, whether it relates to cargo shipped from other countries. Or, the money paid for their gas, water supplies, and electricity, with all of them being basic human needs. All of these are being cut from an individual's income which they hardly earned by working under the same system. For example, if a citizen is law-obedient and has an honest career earning his salary, they should never be worried about what comes after in their senior years. This is the least they could expect.
Another reason is that this relationship is not one-sided, with civilians also providing all types of benefits for them. If people belonging to the same system are flourishing in their jobs; that also means the same for the country. For instance, if hand-crafted goods bring a lot of attraction to the government area, with tourists roaming it and buying their products, that means the people are being paid a good amount of money, so it will bring the same success to them as well. So the reasonable reaction to this is to assure their future for their good deeds.
To conclude, with the many great assets that individuals provide for them as well, such as tax paying and complementing their government's good image, it is mandatory for them to have a solid foundation that enables them to rest easily after their careers.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
It is responsibility of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement.
Governments have no obligation to provide this benefit.
To what extend to you agree or disagree with these statements?
Anwser:
Each person is obligated to have a retirement plan after their career, and it is not the government's duty to have a retirement schedule for their own people. I strongly disagree with this statement, because of the services that citizens provide for them and their basic assurance.
Firstly, civilians pay all sorts of taxes to them, whether it relates to cargo shipped from other countries. Or, the money paid for their gas, water supplies, and electricity, with all of them being basic human needs. All of these are being cut from an individual's income which they hardly earned by working under the same system. For example, if a citizen is law-obedient and has an honest career earning his salary, they should never be worried about what comes after in their senior years. This is the least they could expect.
Another reason is that this relationship is not one-sided, with civilians also providing all types of benefits for them. If people belonging to the same system are flourishing in their jobs; that also means the same for the country. For instance, if hand-crafted goods bring a lot of attraction to the government area, with tourists roaming it and buying their products, that means the people are being paid a good amount of money, so it will bring the same success to them as well. So the reasonable reaction to this is to assure their future for their good deeds.
To conclude, with the many great assets that individuals provide for them as well, such as tax paying and complementing their government's good image, it is mandatory for them to have a solid foundation that enables them to rest easily after their careers.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
It is responsibility of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement.
Governments have no obligation to provide this benefit.
To what extend to you agree or disagree with these statements?
Anwser:
Each person is obligated to have a retirement plan after their career, and it is not the government's duty to have a retirement schedule for their own people. I strongly disagree with this statement, because of the services that citizens provide for them and their basic assurance.
Firstly, civilians pay all sorts of taxes to them, whether it relates to cargo shipped from other countries. Or, the money paid for their gas, water supplies, and electricity, with all of them being basic human needs. All of these are being cut from an individual's income which they hardly earned by working under the same system. For example, if a citizen is law-obedient and has an honest career earning his salary, they should never be worried about what comes after in their senior years. This is the least they could expect.
Another reason is that this relationship is not one-sided, with civilians also providing all types of benefits for them. If people belonging to the same system are flourishing in their jobs; that also means the same for the country. For instance, if hand-crafted goods bring a lot of attraction to the government area, with tourists roaming it and buying their products, that means the people are being paid a good amount of money, so it will bring the same success to them as well. So the reasonable reaction to this is to assure their future for their good deeds.
To conclude, with the many great assets that individuals provide for them as well, such as tax paying and complementing their government's good image, it is mandatory for them to have a solid foundation that enables them to rest easily after their careers.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
It is responsibility of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement.
Governments have no obligation to provide this benefit.
To what extend to you agree or disagree with these statements?
Anwser:
Each person is obligated to have a retirement plan after their career, and it is not the government's duty to have a retirement schedule for their own people. I strongly disagree with this statement, because of the services that citizens provide for them and their basic assurance.
Firstly, civilians pay all sorts of taxes to them, whether it relates to cargo shipped from other countries. Or, the money paid for their gas, water supplies, and electricity, with all of them being basic human needs. All of these are being cut from an individual's income which they hardly earned by working under the same system. For example, if a citizen is law-obedient and has an honest career earning his salary, they should never be worried about what comes after in their senior years. This is the least they could expect.
Another reason is that this relationship is not one-sided, with civilians also providing all types of benefits for them. If people belonging to the same system are flourishing in their jobs; that also means the same for the country. For instance, if hand-crafted goods bring a lot of attraction to the government area, with tourists roaming it and buying their products, that means the people are being paid a good amount of money, so it will bring the same success to them as well. So the reasonable reaction to this is to assure their future for their good deeds.
To conclude, with the many great assets that individuals provide for them as well, such as tax paying and complementing their government's good image, it is mandatory for them to have a solid foundation that enables them to rest easily after their careers.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
It is responsibility of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement.
Governments have no obligation to provide this benefit.
To what extend to you agree or disagree with these statements?
Anwser:
Each person is obligated to have a retirement plan after their career, and it is not the government's duty to have a retirement schedule for their own people. I strongly disagree with this statement, because of the services that citizens provide for them and their basic assurance.
Firstly, civilians pay all sorts of taxes to them, whether it relates to cargo shipped from other countries. Or, the money paid for their gas, water supplies, and electricity, with all of them being basic human needs. All of these are being cut from an individual's income which they hardly earned by working under the same system. For example, if a citizen is law-obedient and has an honest career earning his salary, they should never be worried about what comes after in their senior years. This is the least they could expect.
Another reason is that this relationship is not one-sided, with civilians also providing all types of benefits for them. If people belonging to the same system are flourishing in their jobs; that also means the same for the country. For instance, if hand-crafted goods bring a lot of attraction to the government area, with tourists roaming it and buying their products, that means the people are being paid a good amount of money, so it will bring the same success to them as well. So the reasonable reaction to this is to assure their future for their good deeds.
To conclude, with the many great assets that individuals provide for them as well, such as tax paying and complementing their government's good image, it is mandatory for them to have a solid foundation that enables them to rest easily after their careers.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that countries with strong economies should accept more refugees and provide them with basic necessities such as food and accommodation. This essay completely agrees with the statement because it is morally right to support those who have fled their war-torn homeland. Additionally, it could be beneficial for host countries in the long term, as these people represent an additional labour force.
It is totally right to help others in severe cases, such as natural disasters or wars. It would be cruel to merely observe displaced people suffering rather than lending a hand. Moreover, before nations became wealthy, they underwent numerous difficulties related to political instability and other circumstances. Consequently, they have gained valuable experience that could be applied. For example, the European Union has ample resources to assist refugees with food and housing issues, thereby making adaptation smoother.
Countries that provide shelter for foreigners could experience a significant benefit. The individuals sheltered will be integrated into economies, resulting in an increase in job openings, higher employment rates, and more taxes paid. Overall, this will definitely stimulate GDP growth. For instance, the immigration policy of the US was relatively soft, and many refugees were hosted during the last 50 decades; today, the country has one of the strongest economies in the world because of the high contribution of labour market expansion.
In conclusion, it is morally right to show great compassion and assist with the basic needs of those who suffer from natural catastrophes or war conflicts. Furthermore, in the long run, wealthy countries will be able to benefit from this support, resulting in expansions of the labour market.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that countries with strong economies should accept more refugees and provide them with basic necessities such as food and accommodation. This essay completely agrees with the statement because it is morally right to support those who have fled their war-torn homeland. Additionally, it could be beneficial for host countries in the long term, as these people represent an additional labour force.
It is totally right to help others in severe cases, such as natural disasters or wars. It would be cruel to merely observe displaced people suffering rather than lending a hand. Moreover, before nations became wealthy, they underwent numerous difficulties related to political instability and other circumstances. Consequently, they have gained valuable experience that could be applied. For example, the European Union has ample resources to assist refugees with food and housing issues, thereby making adaptation smoother.
Countries that provide shelter for foreigners could experience a significant benefit. The individuals sheltered will be integrated into economies, resulting in an increase in job openings, higher employment rates, and more taxes paid. Overall, this will definitely stimulate GDP growth. For instance, the immigration policy of the US was relatively soft, and many refugees were hosted during the last 50 decades; today, the country has one of the strongest economies in the world because of the high contribution of labour market expansion.
In conclusion, it is morally right to show great compassion and assist with the basic needs of those who suffer from natural catastrophes or war conflicts. Furthermore, in the long run, wealthy countries will be able to benefit from this support, resulting in expansions of the labour market.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that countries with strong economies should accept more refugees and provide them with basic necessities such as food and accommodation. This essay completely agrees with the statement because it is morally right to support those who have fled their war-torn homeland. Additionally, it could be beneficial for host countries in the long term, as these people represent an additional labour force.
It is totally right to help others in severe cases, such as natural disasters or wars. It would be cruel to merely observe displaced people suffering rather than lending a hand. Moreover, before nations became wealthy, they underwent numerous difficulties related to political instability and other circumstances. Consequently, they have gained valuable experience that could be applied. For example, the European Union has ample resources to assist refugees with food and housing issues, thereby making adaptation smoother.
Countries that provide shelter for foreigners could experience a significant benefit. The individuals sheltered will be integrated into economies, resulting in an increase in job openings, higher employment rates, and more taxes paid. Overall, this will definitely stimulate GDP growth. For instance, the immigration policy of the US was relatively soft, and many refugees were hosted during the last 50 decades; today, the country has one of the strongest economies in the world because of the high contribution of labour market expansion.
In conclusion, it is morally right to show great compassion and assist with the basic needs of those who suffer from natural catastrophes or war conflicts. Furthermore, in the long run, wealthy countries will be able to benefit from this support, resulting in expansions of the labour market.
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that countries with strong economies should accept more refugees and provide them with basic necessities such as food and accommodation. This essay completely agrees with the statement because it is morally right to support those who have fled their war-torn homeland. Additionally, it could be beneficial for host countries in the long term, as these people represent an additional labour force.
It is totally right to help others in severe cases, such as natural disasters or wars. It would be cruel to merely observe displaced people suffering rather than lending a hand. Moreover, before nations became wealthy, they underwent numerous difficulties related to political instability and other circumstances. Consequently, they have gained valuable experience that could be applied. For example, the European Union has ample resources to assist refugees with food and housing issues, thereby making adaptation smoother.
Countries that provide shelter for foreigners could experience a significant benefit. The individuals sheltered will be integrated into economies, resulting in an increase in job openings, higher employment rates, and more taxes paid. Overall, this will definitely stimulate GDP growth. For instance, the immigration policy of the US was relatively soft, and many refugees were hosted during the last 50 decades; today, the country has one of the strongest economies in the world because of the high contribution of labour market expansion.
In conclusion, it is morally right to show great compassion and assist with the basic needs of those who suffer from natural catastrophes or war conflicts. Furthermore, in the long run, wealthy countries will be able to benefit from this support, resulting in expansions of the labour market.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that countries with strong economies should accept more refugees and provide them with basic necessities such as food and accommodation. This essay completely agrees with the statement because it is morally right to support those who have fled their war-torn homeland. Additionally, it could be beneficial for host countries in the long term, as these people represent an additional labour force.
It is totally right to help others in severe cases, such as natural disasters or wars. It would be cruel to merely observe displaced people suffering rather than lending a hand. Moreover, before nations became wealthy, they underwent numerous difficulties related to political instability and other circumstances. Consequently, they have gained valuable experience that could be applied. For example, the European Union has ample resources to assist refugees with food and housing issues, thereby making adaptation smoother.
Countries that provide shelter for foreigners could experience a significant benefit. The individuals sheltered will be integrated into economies, resulting in an increase in job openings, higher employment rates, and more taxes paid. Overall, this will definitely stimulate GDP growth. For instance, the immigration policy of the US was relatively soft, and many refugees were hosted during the last 50 decades; today, the country has one of the strongest economies in the world because of the high contribution of labour market expansion.
In conclusion, it is morally right to show great compassion and assist with the basic needs of those who suffer from natural catastrophes or war conflicts. Furthermore, in the long run, wealthy countries will be able to benefit from this support, resulting in expansions of the labour market.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that countries with strong economies should accept more refugees and provide them with basic necessities such as food and accommodation. This essay completely agrees with the statement because it is morally right to support those who have fled their war-torn homeland. Additionally, it could be beneficial for host countries in the long term, as these people represent an additional labour force.
It is totally right to help others in severe cases, such as natural disasters or wars. It would be cruel to merely observe displaced people suffering rather than lending a hand. Moreover, before nations became wealthy, they underwent numerous difficulties related to political instability and other circumstances. Consequently, they have gained valuable experience that could be applied. For example, the European Union has ample resources to assist refugees with food and housing issues, thereby making adaptation smoother.
Countries that provide shelter for foreigners could experience a significant benefit. The individuals sheltered will be integrated into economies, resulting in an increase in job openings, higher employment rates, and more taxes paid. Overall, this will definitely stimulate GDP growth. For instance, the immigration policy of the US was relatively soft, and many refugees were hosted during the last 50 decades; today, the country has one of the strongest economies in the world because of the high contribution of labour market expansion.
In conclusion, it is morally right to show great compassion and assist with the basic needs of those who suffer from natural catastrophes or war conflicts. Furthermore, in the long run, wealthy countries will be able to benefit from this support, resulting in expansions of the labour market.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that countries with strong economies should accept more refugees and provide them with basic necessities such as food and accommodation. This essay completely agrees with the statement because it is morally right to support those who have fled their war-torn homeland. Additionally, it could be beneficial for host countries in the long term, as these people represent an additional labour force.
It is totally right to help others in severe cases, such as natural disasters or wars. It would be cruel to merely observe displaced people suffering rather than lending a hand. Moreover, before nations became wealthy, they underwent numerous difficulties related to political instability and other circumstances. Consequently, they have gained valuable experience that could be applied. For example, the European Union has ample resources to assist refugees with food and housing issues, thereby making adaptation smoother.
Countries that provide shelter for foreigners could experience a significant benefit. The individuals sheltered will be integrated into economies, resulting in an increase in job openings, higher employment rates, and more taxes paid. Overall, this will definitely stimulate GDP growth. For instance, the immigration policy of the US was relatively soft, and many refugees were hosted during the last 50 decades; today, the country has one of the strongest economies in the world because of the high contribution of labour market expansion.
In conclusion, it is morally right to show great compassion and assist with the basic needs of those who suffer from natural catastrophes or war conflicts. Furthermore, in the long run, wealthy countries will be able to benefit from this support, resulting in expansions of the labour market.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
It is argued that countries with strong economies should accept more refugees and provide them with basic necessities such as food and accommodation. This essay completely agrees with the statement because it is morally right to support those who have fled their war-torn homeland. Additionally, it could be beneficial for host countries in the long term, as these people represent an additional labour force.
It is totally right to help others in severe cases, such as natural disasters or wars. It would be cruel to merely observe displaced people suffering rather than lending a hand. Moreover, before nations became wealthy, they underwent numerous difficulties related to political instability and other circumstances. Consequently, they have gained valuable experience that could be applied. For example, the European Union has ample resources to assist refugees with food and housing issues, thereby making adaptation smoother.
Countries that provide shelter for foreigners could experience a significant benefit. The individuals sheltered will be integrated into economies, resulting in an increase in job openings, higher employment rates, and more taxes paid. Overall, this will definitely stimulate GDP growth. For instance, the immigration policy of the US was relatively soft, and many refugees were hosted during the last 50 decades; today, the country has one of the strongest economies in the world because of the high contribution of labour market expansion.
In conclusion, it is morally right to show great compassion and assist with the basic needs of those who suffer from natural catastrophes or war conflicts. Furthermore, in the long run, wealthy countries will be able to benefit from this support, resulting in expansions of the labour market.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Many working people get very little or no exercise causing health problems. what are the causes and what is the solution to this problem.
Anwser:
There is a tendency of sedentary lifestyle among the people who are employed, which is causing serious medical issues including obesity and diabetes.This behaviour of avoiding exercise is attributed by most individuals to a lack of time and a busy routine which can be sorted out by relaxing the working schedule and having mandatory physical training at workplaces.
With the rising inflation, the masses are forced to perform duty for a longer duration to earn money.Some people do more than one job to cover their expenses.They leave early in the morning and come back home late in the evening.I know one of my cousins who is a teacher at primary school.After school hours, he works as an assistant manager in the evening at a local company.He has been following this routine for five years which has caused him to become overweight and develop joint problems.In addition, lack of motivation is another factor that prevents the populace from adopting a healthy lifestyle.My sister after coming back from duty in a hospital is always feeling lethargic and goes to bed immediately.
There are a number of ways to deal with this menace of a sedentary lifestyle.First of all, the governments should enforce the working hours for every sector.Moreover, companies and factories should relax the job routine for employees.Many departments have started implementation of such policies.For instance, the executive of Suzuki workshop in our country ordered employees to stop taking the cars for service after 1500hrs, so that staff could timely leave for their homes.Secondly, the compulsory games period in the institutions can improve the overall health of citizens.In a military set-up, for example, there is a timetable for the physical activity in which everyone has to participate.This model can be adopted by other organizations.Furthermore, there should be more gyms at the place of duty.It will also encourage the employees to be more active.Finally, the problem of a casual attitude towards health can be overcome by regular counselling of the workforce by the psychologist.
In a nutshell, the dilemma of a sedentary routine causing multiple ailments due to overburdened and overstressed individuals in a society can be managed by providing them with the proper place and proper time for healthful activities
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Many working people get very little or no exercise causing health problems. what are the causes and what is the solution to this problem.
Anwser:
There is a tendency of sedentary lifestyle among the people who are employed, which is causing serious medical issues including obesity and diabetes.This behaviour of avoiding exercise is attributed by most individuals to a lack of time and a busy routine which can be sorted out by relaxing the working schedule and having mandatory physical training at workplaces.
With the rising inflation, the masses are forced to perform duty for a longer duration to earn money.Some people do more than one job to cover their expenses.They leave early in the morning and come back home late in the evening.I know one of my cousins who is a teacher at primary school.After school hours, he works as an assistant manager in the evening at a local company.He has been following this routine for five years which has caused him to become overweight and develop joint problems.In addition, lack of motivation is another factor that prevents the populace from adopting a healthy lifestyle.My sister after coming back from duty in a hospital is always feeling lethargic and goes to bed immediately.
There are a number of ways to deal with this menace of a sedentary lifestyle.First of all, the governments should enforce the working hours for every sector.Moreover, companies and factories should relax the job routine for employees.Many departments have started implementation of such policies.For instance, the executive of Suzuki workshop in our country ordered employees to stop taking the cars for service after 1500hrs, so that staff could timely leave for their homes.Secondly, the compulsory games period in the institutions can improve the overall health of citizens.In a military set-up, for example, there is a timetable for the physical activity in which everyone has to participate.This model can be adopted by other organizations.Furthermore, there should be more gyms at the place of duty.It will also encourage the employees to be more active.Finally, the problem of a casual attitude towards health can be overcome by regular counselling of the workforce by the psychologist.
In a nutshell, the dilemma of a sedentary routine causing multiple ailments due to overburdened and overstressed individuals in a society can be managed by providing them with the proper place and proper time for healthful activities
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Many working people get very little or no exercise causing health problems. what are the causes and what is the solution to this problem.
Anwser:
There is a tendency of sedentary lifestyle among the people who are employed, which is causing serious medical issues including obesity and diabetes.This behaviour of avoiding exercise is attributed by most individuals to a lack of time and a busy routine which can be sorted out by relaxing the working schedule and having mandatory physical training at workplaces.
With the rising inflation, the masses are forced to perform duty for a longer duration to earn money.Some people do more than one job to cover their expenses.They leave early in the morning and come back home late in the evening.I know one of my cousins who is a teacher at primary school.After school hours, he works as an assistant manager in the evening at a local company.He has been following this routine for five years which has caused him to become overweight and develop joint problems.In addition, lack of motivation is another factor that prevents the populace from adopting a healthy lifestyle.My sister after coming back from duty in a hospital is always feeling lethargic and goes to bed immediately.
There are a number of ways to deal with this menace of a sedentary lifestyle.First of all, the governments should enforce the working hours for every sector.Moreover, companies and factories should relax the job routine for employees.Many departments have started implementation of such policies.For instance, the executive of Suzuki workshop in our country ordered employees to stop taking the cars for service after 1500hrs, so that staff could timely leave for their homes.Secondly, the compulsory games period in the institutions can improve the overall health of citizens.In a military set-up, for example, there is a timetable for the physical activity in which everyone has to participate.This model can be adopted by other organizations.Furthermore, there should be more gyms at the place of duty.It will also encourage the employees to be more active.Finally, the problem of a casual attitude towards health can be overcome by regular counselling of the workforce by the psychologist.
In a nutshell, the dilemma of a sedentary routine causing multiple ailments due to overburdened and overstressed individuals in a society can be managed by providing them with the proper place and proper time for healthful activities
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Many working people get very little or no exercise causing health problems. what are the causes and what is the solution to this problem.
Anwser:
There is a tendency of sedentary lifestyle among the people who are employed, which is causing serious medical issues including obesity and diabetes.This behaviour of avoiding exercise is attributed by most individuals to a lack of time and a busy routine which can be sorted out by relaxing the working schedule and having mandatory physical training at workplaces.
With the rising inflation, the masses are forced to perform duty for a longer duration to earn money.Some people do more than one job to cover their expenses.They leave early in the morning and come back home late in the evening.I know one of my cousins who is a teacher at primary school.After school hours, he works as an assistant manager in the evening at a local company.He has been following this routine for five years which has caused him to become overweight and develop joint problems.In addition, lack of motivation is another factor that prevents the populace from adopting a healthy lifestyle.My sister after coming back from duty in a hospital is always feeling lethargic and goes to bed immediately.
There are a number of ways to deal with this menace of a sedentary lifestyle.First of all, the governments should enforce the working hours for every sector.Moreover, companies and factories should relax the job routine for employees.Many departments have started implementation of such policies.For instance, the executive of Suzuki workshop in our country ordered employees to stop taking the cars for service after 1500hrs, so that staff could timely leave for their homes.Secondly, the compulsory games period in the institutions can improve the overall health of citizens.In a military set-up, for example, there is a timetable for the physical activity in which everyone has to participate.This model can be adopted by other organizations.Furthermore, there should be more gyms at the place of duty.It will also encourage the employees to be more active.Finally, the problem of a casual attitude towards health can be overcome by regular counselling of the workforce by the psychologist.
In a nutshell, the dilemma of a sedentary routine causing multiple ailments due to overburdened and overstressed individuals in a society can be managed by providing them with the proper place and proper time for healthful activities
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Many working people get very little or no exercise causing health problems. what are the causes and what is the solution to this problem.
Anwser:
There is a tendency of sedentary lifestyle among the people who are employed, which is causing serious medical issues including obesity and diabetes.This behaviour of avoiding exercise is attributed by most individuals to a lack of time and a busy routine which can be sorted out by relaxing the working schedule and having mandatory physical training at workplaces.
With the rising inflation, the masses are forced to perform duty for a longer duration to earn money.Some people do more than one job to cover their expenses.They leave early in the morning and come back home late in the evening.I know one of my cousins who is a teacher at primary school.After school hours, he works as an assistant manager in the evening at a local company.He has been following this routine for five years which has caused him to become overweight and develop joint problems.In addition, lack of motivation is another factor that prevents the populace from adopting a healthy lifestyle.My sister after coming back from duty in a hospital is always feeling lethargic and goes to bed immediately.
There are a number of ways to deal with this menace of a sedentary lifestyle.First of all, the governments should enforce the working hours for every sector.Moreover, companies and factories should relax the job routine for employees.Many departments have started implementation of such policies.For instance, the executive of Suzuki workshop in our country ordered employees to stop taking the cars for service after 1500hrs, so that staff could timely leave for their homes.Secondly, the compulsory games period in the institutions can improve the overall health of citizens.In a military set-up, for example, there is a timetable for the physical activity in which everyone has to participate.This model can be adopted by other organizations.Furthermore, there should be more gyms at the place of duty.It will also encourage the employees to be more active.Finally, the problem of a casual attitude towards health can be overcome by regular counselling of the workforce by the psychologist.
In a nutshell, the dilemma of a sedentary routine causing multiple ailments due to overburdened and overstressed individuals in a society can be managed by providing them with the proper place and proper time for healthful activities
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Your grammatical range score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Many working people get very little or no exercise causing health problems. what are the causes and what is the solution to this problem.
Anwser:
There is a tendency of sedentary lifestyle among the people who are employed, which is causing serious medical issues including obesity and diabetes.This behaviour of avoiding exercise is attributed by most individuals to a lack of time and a busy routine which can be sorted out by relaxing the working schedule and having mandatory physical training at workplaces.
With the rising inflation, the masses are forced to perform duty for a longer duration to earn money.Some people do more than one job to cover their expenses.They leave early in the morning and come back home late in the evening.I know one of my cousins who is a teacher at primary school.After school hours, he works as an assistant manager in the evening at a local company.He has been following this routine for five years which has caused him to become overweight and develop joint problems.In addition, lack of motivation is another factor that prevents the populace from adopting a healthy lifestyle.My sister after coming back from duty in a hospital is always feeling lethargic and goes to bed immediately.
There are a number of ways to deal with this menace of a sedentary lifestyle.First of all, the governments should enforce the working hours for every sector.Moreover, companies and factories should relax the job routine for employees.Many departments have started implementation of such policies.For instance, the executive of Suzuki workshop in our country ordered employees to stop taking the cars for service after 1500hrs, so that staff could timely leave for their homes.Secondly, the compulsory games period in the institutions can improve the overall health of citizens.In a military set-up, for example, there is a timetable for the physical activity in which everyone has to participate.This model can be adopted by other organizations.Furthermore, there should be more gyms at the place of duty.It will also encourage the employees to be more active.Finally, the problem of a casual attitude towards health can be overcome by regular counselling of the workforce by the psychologist.
In a nutshell, the dilemma of a sedentary routine causing multiple ailments due to overburdened and overstressed individuals in a society can be managed by providing them with the proper place and proper time for healthful activities
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Many working people get very little or no exercise causing health problems. what are the causes and what is the solution to this problem.
Anwser:
There is a tendency of sedentary lifestyle among the people who are employed, which is causing serious medical issues including obesity and diabetes.This behaviour of avoiding exercise is attributed by most individuals to a lack of time and a busy routine which can be sorted out by relaxing the working schedule and having mandatory physical training at workplaces.
With the rising inflation, the masses are forced to perform duty for a longer duration to earn money.Some people do more than one job to cover their expenses.They leave early in the morning and come back home late in the evening.I know one of my cousins who is a teacher at primary school.After school hours, he works as an assistant manager in the evening at a local company.He has been following this routine for five years which has caused him to become overweight and develop joint problems.In addition, lack of motivation is another factor that prevents the populace from adopting a healthy lifestyle.My sister after coming back from duty in a hospital is always feeling lethargic and goes to bed immediately.
There are a number of ways to deal with this menace of a sedentary lifestyle.First of all, the governments should enforce the working hours for every sector.Moreover, companies and factories should relax the job routine for employees.Many departments have started implementation of such policies.For instance, the executive of Suzuki workshop in our country ordered employees to stop taking the cars for service after 1500hrs, so that staff could timely leave for their homes.Secondly, the compulsory games period in the institutions can improve the overall health of citizens.In a military set-up, for example, there is a timetable for the physical activity in which everyone has to participate.This model can be adopted by other organizations.Furthermore, there should be more gyms at the place of duty.It will also encourage the employees to be more active.Finally, the problem of a casual attitude towards health can be overcome by regular counselling of the workforce by the psychologist.
In a nutshell, the dilemma of a sedentary routine causing multiple ailments due to overburdened and overstressed individuals in a society can be managed by providing them with the proper place and proper time for healthful activities
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Many working people get very little or no exercise causing health problems. what are the causes and what is the solution to this problem.
Anwser:
There is a tendency of sedentary lifestyle among the people who are employed, which is causing serious medical issues including obesity and diabetes.This behaviour of avoiding exercise is attributed by most individuals to a lack of time and a busy routine which can be sorted out by relaxing the working schedule and having mandatory physical training at workplaces.
With the rising inflation, the masses are forced to perform duty for a longer duration to earn money.Some people do more than one job to cover their expenses.They leave early in the morning and come back home late in the evening.I know one of my cousins who is a teacher at primary school.After school hours, he works as an assistant manager in the evening at a local company.He has been following this routine for five years which has caused him to become overweight and develop joint problems.In addition, lack of motivation is another factor that prevents the populace from adopting a healthy lifestyle.My sister after coming back from duty in a hospital is always feeling lethargic and goes to bed immediately.
There are a number of ways to deal with this menace of a sedentary lifestyle.First of all, the governments should enforce the working hours for every sector.Moreover, companies and factories should relax the job routine for employees.Many departments have started implementation of such policies.For instance, the executive of Suzuki workshop in our country ordered employees to stop taking the cars for service after 1500hrs, so that staff could timely leave for their homes.Secondly, the compulsory games period in the institutions can improve the overall health of citizens.In a military set-up, for example, there is a timetable for the physical activity in which everyone has to participate.This model can be adopted by other organizations.Furthermore, there should be more gyms at the place of duty.It will also encourage the employees to be more active.Finally, the problem of a casual attitude towards health can be overcome by regular counselling of the workforce by the psychologist.
In a nutshell, the dilemma of a sedentary routine causing multiple ailments due to overburdened and overstressed individuals in a society can be managed by providing them with the proper place and proper time for healthful activities
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the last century, society has been extremely dependent on the use of fossil fuel-based energy, whereas it is lately known as the top cause of environmental issues. Thus, most people think that the development of alternative energy sources should be prioritized. I completely agree with this statement and the reasons will be explained in this essay.
To begin with, the excessive use of fossil fuels has been damaging the environment. It is because this energy source is emitting carbon dioxide which leads to greenhouse gases. Even worse, it is not only negatively affecting the air quality, but also the climate. As an illustration, the average temperature in Indonesia has been above 32 degrees Celsius in the afternoon and the rise of sea level is at an alarming rate. Furthermore, without alternative energy, some coastal areas will be covered by seawater only in some years ahead.
Not only damaging the environment, fossil fuels existence is nearly into its extinction. This is because the generation of this kind of fuel comes from animals' fossils. Consequently, it took years to produce the energy while the rise of population and human dependence on energy forced humans to use it excessively. Hence, it is essential for the government and global cooperation to limit the use of fossil fuel-based energy and explore safer alternative sources of energy which are not harming the earth and are sustainable.
In summary, I agree that investing in the research of safer alternative energy sources is critical for some reasons. It is because fossil fuels are affecting some negative impacts on the environment such as poor air quality and climate change while the need for energy is inevitable for human life.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the last century, society has been extremely dependent on the use of fossil fuel-based energy, whereas it is lately known as the top cause of environmental issues. Thus, most people think that the development of alternative energy sources should be prioritized. I completely agree with this statement and the reasons will be explained in this essay.
To begin with, the excessive use of fossil fuels has been damaging the environment. It is because this energy source is emitting carbon dioxide which leads to greenhouse gases. Even worse, it is not only negatively affecting the air quality, but also the climate. As an illustration, the average temperature in Indonesia has been above 32 degrees Celsius in the afternoon and the rise of sea level is at an alarming rate. Furthermore, without alternative energy, some coastal areas will be covered by seawater only in some years ahead.
Not only damaging the environment, fossil fuels existence is nearly into its extinction. This is because the generation of this kind of fuel comes from animals' fossils. Consequently, it took years to produce the energy while the rise of population and human dependence on energy forced humans to use it excessively. Hence, it is essential for the government and global cooperation to limit the use of fossil fuel-based energy and explore safer alternative sources of energy which are not harming the earth and are sustainable.
In summary, I agree that investing in the research of safer alternative energy sources is critical for some reasons. It is because fossil fuels are affecting some negative impacts on the environment such as poor air quality and climate change while the need for energy is inevitable for human life.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the last century, society has been extremely dependent on the use of fossil fuel-based energy, whereas it is lately known as the top cause of environmental issues. Thus, most people think that the development of alternative energy sources should be prioritized. I completely agree with this statement and the reasons will be explained in this essay.
To begin with, the excessive use of fossil fuels has been damaging the environment. It is because this energy source is emitting carbon dioxide which leads to greenhouse gases. Even worse, it is not only negatively affecting the air quality, but also the climate. As an illustration, the average temperature in Indonesia has been above 32 degrees Celsius in the afternoon and the rise of sea level is at an alarming rate. Furthermore, without alternative energy, some coastal areas will be covered by seawater only in some years ahead.
Not only damaging the environment, fossil fuels existence is nearly into its extinction. This is because the generation of this kind of fuel comes from animals' fossils. Consequently, it took years to produce the energy while the rise of population and human dependence on energy forced humans to use it excessively. Hence, it is essential for the government and global cooperation to limit the use of fossil fuel-based energy and explore safer alternative sources of energy which are not harming the earth and are sustainable.
In summary, I agree that investing in the research of safer alternative energy sources is critical for some reasons. It is because fossil fuels are affecting some negative impacts on the environment such as poor air quality and climate change while the need for energy is inevitable for human life.
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the last century, society has been extremely dependent on the use of fossil fuel-based energy, whereas it is lately known as the top cause of environmental issues. Thus, most people think that the development of alternative energy sources should be prioritized. I completely agree with this statement and the reasons will be explained in this essay.
To begin with, the excessive use of fossil fuels has been damaging the environment. It is because this energy source is emitting carbon dioxide which leads to greenhouse gases. Even worse, it is not only negatively affecting the air quality, but also the climate. As an illustration, the average temperature in Indonesia has been above 32 degrees Celsius in the afternoon and the rise of sea level is at an alarming rate. Furthermore, without alternative energy, some coastal areas will be covered by seawater only in some years ahead.
Not only damaging the environment, fossil fuels existence is nearly into its extinction. This is because the generation of this kind of fuel comes from animals' fossils. Consequently, it took years to produce the energy while the rise of population and human dependence on energy forced humans to use it excessively. Hence, it is essential for the government and global cooperation to limit the use of fossil fuel-based energy and explore safer alternative sources of energy which are not harming the earth and are sustainable.
In summary, I agree that investing in the research of safer alternative energy sources is critical for some reasons. It is because fossil fuels are affecting some negative impacts on the environment such as poor air quality and climate change while the need for energy is inevitable for human life.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the last century, society has been extremely dependent on the use of fossil fuel-based energy, whereas it is lately known as the top cause of environmental issues. Thus, most people think that the development of alternative energy sources should be prioritized. I completely agree with this statement and the reasons will be explained in this essay.
To begin with, the excessive use of fossil fuels has been damaging the environment. It is because this energy source is emitting carbon dioxide which leads to greenhouse gases. Even worse, it is not only negatively affecting the air quality, but also the climate. As an illustration, the average temperature in Indonesia has been above 32 degrees Celsius in the afternoon and the rise of sea level is at an alarming rate. Furthermore, without alternative energy, some coastal areas will be covered by seawater only in some years ahead.
Not only damaging the environment, fossil fuels existence is nearly into its extinction. This is because the generation of this kind of fuel comes from animals' fossils. Consequently, it took years to produce the energy while the rise of population and human dependence on energy forced humans to use it excessively. Hence, it is essential for the government and global cooperation to limit the use of fossil fuel-based energy and explore safer alternative sources of energy which are not harming the earth and are sustainable.
In summary, I agree that investing in the research of safer alternative energy sources is critical for some reasons. It is because fossil fuels are affecting some negative impacts on the environment such as poor air quality and climate change while the need for energy is inevitable for human life.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the last century, society has been extremely dependent on the use of fossil fuel-based energy, whereas it is lately known as the top cause of environmental issues. Thus, most people think that the development of alternative energy sources should be prioritized. I completely agree with this statement and the reasons will be explained in this essay.
To begin with, the excessive use of fossil fuels has been damaging the environment. It is because this energy source is emitting carbon dioxide which leads to greenhouse gases. Even worse, it is not only negatively affecting the air quality, but also the climate. As an illustration, the average temperature in Indonesia has been above 32 degrees Celsius in the afternoon and the rise of sea level is at an alarming rate. Furthermore, without alternative energy, some coastal areas will be covered by seawater only in some years ahead.
Not only damaging the environment, fossil fuels existence is nearly into its extinction. This is because the generation of this kind of fuel comes from animals' fossils. Consequently, it took years to produce the energy while the rise of population and human dependence on energy forced humans to use it excessively. Hence, it is essential for the government and global cooperation to limit the use of fossil fuel-based energy and explore safer alternative sources of energy which are not harming the earth and are sustainable.
In summary, I agree that investing in the research of safer alternative energy sources is critical for some reasons. It is because fossil fuels are affecting some negative impacts on the environment such as poor air quality and climate change while the need for energy is inevitable for human life.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the last century, society has been extremely dependent on the use of fossil fuel-based energy, whereas it is lately known as the top cause of environmental issues. Thus, most people think that the development of alternative energy sources should be prioritized. I completely agree with this statement and the reasons will be explained in this essay.
To begin with, the excessive use of fossil fuels has been damaging the environment. It is because this energy source is emitting carbon dioxide which leads to greenhouse gases. Even worse, it is not only negatively affecting the air quality, but also the climate. As an illustration, the average temperature in Indonesia has been above 32 degrees Celsius in the afternoon and the rise of sea level is at an alarming rate. Furthermore, without alternative energy, some coastal areas will be covered by seawater only in some years ahead.
Not only damaging the environment, fossil fuels existence is nearly into its extinction. This is because the generation of this kind of fuel comes from animals' fossils. Consequently, it took years to produce the energy while the rise of population and human dependence on energy forced humans to use it excessively. Hence, it is essential for the government and global cooperation to limit the use of fossil fuel-based energy and explore safer alternative sources of energy which are not harming the earth and are sustainable.
In summary, I agree that investing in the research of safer alternative energy sources is critical for some reasons. It is because fossil fuels are affecting some negative impacts on the environment such as poor air quality and climate change while the need for energy is inevitable for human life.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
In the last century, society has been extremely dependent on the use of fossil fuel-based energy, whereas it is lately known as the top cause of environmental issues. Thus, most people think that the development of alternative energy sources should be prioritized. I completely agree with this statement and the reasons will be explained in this essay.
To begin with, the excessive use of fossil fuels has been damaging the environment. It is because this energy source is emitting carbon dioxide which leads to greenhouse gases. Even worse, it is not only negatively affecting the air quality, but also the climate. As an illustration, the average temperature in Indonesia has been above 32 degrees Celsius in the afternoon and the rise of sea level is at an alarming rate. Furthermore, without alternative energy, some coastal areas will be covered by seawater only in some years ahead.
Not only damaging the environment, fossil fuels existence is nearly into its extinction. This is because the generation of this kind of fuel comes from animals' fossils. Consequently, it took years to produce the energy while the rise of population and human dependence on energy forced humans to use it excessively. Hence, it is essential for the government and global cooperation to limit the use of fossil fuel-based energy and explore safer alternative sources of energy which are not harming the earth and are sustainable.
In summary, I agree that investing in the research of safer alternative energy sources is critical for some reasons. It is because fossil fuels are affecting some negative impacts on the environment such as poor air quality and climate change while the need for energy is inevitable for human life.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Anwser:
With the technological progress, driverless cars, which existed in science fiction only before, are currently being developed. Some people think that it will bring a range of benefits if this technology can be widely used. I agree with them, and I will demonstrate my opinions in this article.
Individuals can benefit from automated vehicles in several ways. For example, road accidents, which are usually caused by humans, will be reduced since an accurate auto-driving computer system can rarely make mistakes. If driverless cars are the norm, people can go everywhere safely. Also, disabled people’s living will be more convenient because instead of spending much time waiting for publicly accessible transport, they can go anywhere by car that doesn’t require manual control.
Society, too, has much gain. Vehicular accidents affect not only drivers and passengers but also the surrounding infrastructure. This leads to extravagant waste of public funds in repairs and hinders people’s daily travelling. If self-driving automobiles that have well-programmed avoidance systems become widespread, the number of traffic congestions will be remarkably reduced, thus decreasing the money cost of infrastructure reconstruction.
Nonetheless, I also agree that others hold the opposite view that these autos are still not error-free. However, this technology is still in the development process, and it will have been thoroughly tested before it officially comes into use. I believe that the advantages would outweigh the drawbacks when the use of driverless vehicles is widespread.
In conclusion, driverless cars should be used widely once they are available in the market as they will not only contribute to human welfare but also decrease the loss of social economy.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Anwser:
With the technological progress, driverless cars, which existed in science fiction only before, are currently being developed. Some people think that it will bring a range of benefits if this technology can be widely used. I agree with them, and I will demonstrate my opinions in this article.
Individuals can benefit from automated vehicles in several ways. For example, road accidents, which are usually caused by humans, will be reduced since an accurate auto-driving computer system can rarely make mistakes. If driverless cars are the norm, people can go everywhere safely. Also, disabled people’s living will be more convenient because instead of spending much time waiting for publicly accessible transport, they can go anywhere by car that doesn’t require manual control.
Society, too, has much gain. Vehicular accidents affect not only drivers and passengers but also the surrounding infrastructure. This leads to extravagant waste of public funds in repairs and hinders people’s daily travelling. If self-driving automobiles that have well-programmed avoidance systems become widespread, the number of traffic congestions will be remarkably reduced, thus decreasing the money cost of infrastructure reconstruction.
Nonetheless, I also agree that others hold the opposite view that these autos are still not error-free. However, this technology is still in the development process, and it will have been thoroughly tested before it officially comes into use. I believe that the advantages would outweigh the drawbacks when the use of driverless vehicles is widespread.
In conclusion, driverless cars should be used widely once they are available in the market as they will not only contribute to human welfare but also decrease the loss of social economy.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Anwser:
With the technological progress, driverless cars, which existed in science fiction only before, are currently being developed. Some people think that it will bring a range of benefits if this technology can be widely used. I agree with them, and I will demonstrate my opinions in this article.
Individuals can benefit from automated vehicles in several ways. For example, road accidents, which are usually caused by humans, will be reduced since an accurate auto-driving computer system can rarely make mistakes. If driverless cars are the norm, people can go everywhere safely. Also, disabled people’s living will be more convenient because instead of spending much time waiting for publicly accessible transport, they can go anywhere by car that doesn’t require manual control.
Society, too, has much gain. Vehicular accidents affect not only drivers and passengers but also the surrounding infrastructure. This leads to extravagant waste of public funds in repairs and hinders people’s daily travelling. If self-driving automobiles that have well-programmed avoidance systems become widespread, the number of traffic congestions will be remarkably reduced, thus decreasing the money cost of infrastructure reconstruction.
Nonetheless, I also agree that others hold the opposite view that these autos are still not error-free. However, this technology is still in the development process, and it will have been thoroughly tested before it officially comes into use. I believe that the advantages would outweigh the drawbacks when the use of driverless vehicles is widespread.
In conclusion, driverless cars should be used widely once they are available in the market as they will not only contribute to human welfare but also decrease the loss of social economy.
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Anwser:
With the technological progress, driverless cars, which existed in science fiction only before, are currently being developed. Some people think that it will bring a range of benefits if this technology can be widely used. I agree with them, and I will demonstrate my opinions in this article.
Individuals can benefit from automated vehicles in several ways. For example, road accidents, which are usually caused by humans, will be reduced since an accurate auto-driving computer system can rarely make mistakes. If driverless cars are the norm, people can go everywhere safely. Also, disabled people’s living will be more convenient because instead of spending much time waiting for publicly accessible transport, they can go anywhere by car that doesn’t require manual control.
Society, too, has much gain. Vehicular accidents affect not only drivers and passengers but also the surrounding infrastructure. This leads to extravagant waste of public funds in repairs and hinders people’s daily travelling. If self-driving automobiles that have well-programmed avoidance systems become widespread, the number of traffic congestions will be remarkably reduced, thus decreasing the money cost of infrastructure reconstruction.
Nonetheless, I also agree that others hold the opposite view that these autos are still not error-free. However, this technology is still in the development process, and it will have been thoroughly tested before it officially comes into use. I believe that the advantages would outweigh the drawbacks when the use of driverless vehicles is widespread.
In conclusion, driverless cars should be used widely once they are available in the market as they will not only contribute to human welfare but also decrease the loss of social economy.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Anwser:
With the technological progress, driverless cars, which existed in science fiction only before, are currently being developed. Some people think that it will bring a range of benefits if this technology can be widely used. I agree with them, and I will demonstrate my opinions in this article.
Individuals can benefit from automated vehicles in several ways. For example, road accidents, which are usually caused by humans, will be reduced since an accurate auto-driving computer system can rarely make mistakes. If driverless cars are the norm, people can go everywhere safely. Also, disabled people’s living will be more convenient because instead of spending much time waiting for publicly accessible transport, they can go anywhere by car that doesn’t require manual control.
Society, too, has much gain. Vehicular accidents affect not only drivers and passengers but also the surrounding infrastructure. This leads to extravagant waste of public funds in repairs and hinders people’s daily travelling. If self-driving automobiles that have well-programmed avoidance systems become widespread, the number of traffic congestions will be remarkably reduced, thus decreasing the money cost of infrastructure reconstruction.
Nonetheless, I also agree that others hold the opposite view that these autos are still not error-free. However, this technology is still in the development process, and it will have been thoroughly tested before it officially comes into use. I believe that the advantages would outweigh the drawbacks when the use of driverless vehicles is widespread.
In conclusion, driverless cars should be used widely once they are available in the market as they will not only contribute to human welfare but also decrease the loss of social economy.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Anwser:
With the technological progress, driverless cars, which existed in science fiction only before, are currently being developed. Some people think that it will bring a range of benefits if this technology can be widely used. I agree with them, and I will demonstrate my opinions in this article.
Individuals can benefit from automated vehicles in several ways. For example, road accidents, which are usually caused by humans, will be reduced since an accurate auto-driving computer system can rarely make mistakes. If driverless cars are the norm, people can go everywhere safely. Also, disabled people’s living will be more convenient because instead of spending much time waiting for publicly accessible transport, they can go anywhere by car that doesn’t require manual control.
Society, too, has much gain. Vehicular accidents affect not only drivers and passengers but also the surrounding infrastructure. This leads to extravagant waste of public funds in repairs and hinders people’s daily travelling. If self-driving automobiles that have well-programmed avoidance systems become widespread, the number of traffic congestions will be remarkably reduced, thus decreasing the money cost of infrastructure reconstruction.
Nonetheless, I also agree that others hold the opposite view that these autos are still not error-free. However, this technology is still in the development process, and it will have been thoroughly tested before it officially comes into use. I believe that the advantages would outweigh the drawbacks when the use of driverless vehicles is widespread.
In conclusion, driverless cars should be used widely once they are available in the market as they will not only contribute to human welfare but also decrease the loss of social economy.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Anwser:
With the technological progress, driverless cars, which existed in science fiction only before, are currently being developed. Some people think that it will bring a range of benefits if this technology can be widely used. I agree with them, and I will demonstrate my opinions in this article.
Individuals can benefit from automated vehicles in several ways. For example, road accidents, which are usually caused by humans, will be reduced since an accurate auto-driving computer system can rarely make mistakes. If driverless cars are the norm, people can go everywhere safely. Also, disabled people’s living will be more convenient because instead of spending much time waiting for publicly accessible transport, they can go anywhere by car that doesn’t require manual control.
Society, too, has much gain. Vehicular accidents affect not only drivers and passengers but also the surrounding infrastructure. This leads to extravagant waste of public funds in repairs and hinders people’s daily travelling. If self-driving automobiles that have well-programmed avoidance systems become widespread, the number of traffic congestions will be remarkably reduced, thus decreasing the money cost of infrastructure reconstruction.
Nonetheless, I also agree that others hold the opposite view that these autos are still not error-free. However, this technology is still in the development process, and it will have been thoroughly tested before it officially comes into use. I believe that the advantages would outweigh the drawbacks when the use of driverless vehicles is widespread.
In conclusion, driverless cars should be used widely once they are available in the market as they will not only contribute to human welfare but also decrease the loss of social economy.
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Your task achievement score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Anwser:
With the technological progress, driverless cars, which existed in science fiction only before, are currently being developed. Some people think that it will bring a range of benefits if this technology can be widely used. I agree with them, and I will demonstrate my opinions in this article.
Individuals can benefit from automated vehicles in several ways. For example, road accidents, which are usually caused by humans, will be reduced since an accurate auto-driving computer system can rarely make mistakes. If driverless cars are the norm, people can go everywhere safely. Also, disabled people’s living will be more convenient because instead of spending much time waiting for publicly accessible transport, they can go anywhere by car that doesn’t require manual control.
Society, too, has much gain. Vehicular accidents affect not only drivers and passengers but also the surrounding infrastructure. This leads to extravagant waste of public funds in repairs and hinders people’s daily travelling. If self-driving automobiles that have well-programmed avoidance systems become widespread, the number of traffic congestions will be remarkably reduced, thus decreasing the money cost of infrastructure reconstruction.
Nonetheless, I also agree that others hold the opposite view that these autos are still not error-free. However, this technology is still in the development process, and it will have been thoroughly tested before it officially comes into use. I believe that the advantages would outweigh the drawbacks when the use of driverless vehicles is widespread.
In conclusion, driverless cars should be used widely once they are available in the market as they will not only contribute to human welfare but also decrease the loss of social economy.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Television channels are now broadcasting more content related to violence than in the past which is creating adverse effects on children.I completely agree with this as kids tend to develop an aggressive character and imitate wrong actions at a young age.
First and foremost, by watching programs that promote violence,children develop a nature of aggression.Moreover,they don't have the capability to discern what is right or wrong and they easily get attracted towards violence and aggression.For example, movies like Shakthiman or Iron Man are targeted at young boys and girls below 15 years of age.During this period,their brain is not programmed enough to identify the good or bad messages in the movies, rather it easily catches the moves which creates an adrenaline rush, causing the children to react aggressively.As a consequence,it is very likely to form a violent behaviour among these little ones.
Secondly,children greatly observe whatever they see on big screens and resultantly replicate what they watch.This again leads to imitations that are unhealthy and unethical.For instance, there are several incidents reported in many parts of the world regarding suicides among small kids.The study which was conducted in the USA on this topic illustrated that in most of these cases, the young people were trying to copy certain acts of their favourite characters from TV series and ended up losing their lives.Hence, any program related to violence is extremely dangerous and can harm children in many ways.
In short, the violence on television has negative effects on children leading to aggression and unhealthy imitation.The media should apply responsible care while streaming child-related programs so that the next generation of citizens is given the right direction to grow and live in this world.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Television channels are now broadcasting more content related to violence than in the past which is creating adverse effects on children.I completely agree with this as kids tend to develop an aggressive character and imitate wrong actions at a young age.
First and foremost, by watching programs that promote violence,children develop a nature of aggression.Moreover,they don't have the capability to discern what is right or wrong and they easily get attracted towards violence and aggression.For example, movies like Shakthiman or Iron Man are targeted at young boys and girls below 15 years of age.During this period,their brain is not programmed enough to identify the good or bad messages in the movies, rather it easily catches the moves which creates an adrenaline rush, causing the children to react aggressively.As a consequence,it is very likely to form a violent behaviour among these little ones.
Secondly,children greatly observe whatever they see on big screens and resultantly replicate what they watch.This again leads to imitations that are unhealthy and unethical.For instance, there are several incidents reported in many parts of the world regarding suicides among small kids.The study which was conducted in the USA on this topic illustrated that in most of these cases, the young people were trying to copy certain acts of their favourite characters from TV series and ended up losing their lives.Hence, any program related to violence is extremely dangerous and can harm children in many ways.
In short, the violence on television has negative effects on children leading to aggression and unhealthy imitation.The media should apply responsible care while streaming child-related programs so that the next generation of citizens is given the right direction to grow and live in this world.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Television channels are now broadcasting more content related to violence than in the past which is creating adverse effects on children.I completely agree with this as kids tend to develop an aggressive character and imitate wrong actions at a young age.
First and foremost, by watching programs that promote violence,children develop a nature of aggression.Moreover,they don't have the capability to discern what is right or wrong and they easily get attracted towards violence and aggression.For example, movies like Shakthiman or Iron Man are targeted at young boys and girls below 15 years of age.During this period,their brain is not programmed enough to identify the good or bad messages in the movies, rather it easily catches the moves which creates an adrenaline rush, causing the children to react aggressively.As a consequence,it is very likely to form a violent behaviour among these little ones.
Secondly,children greatly observe whatever they see on big screens and resultantly replicate what they watch.This again leads to imitations that are unhealthy and unethical.For instance, there are several incidents reported in many parts of the world regarding suicides among small kids.The study which was conducted in the USA on this topic illustrated that in most of these cases, the young people were trying to copy certain acts of their favourite characters from TV series and ended up losing their lives.Hence, any program related to violence is extremely dangerous and can harm children in many ways.
In short, the violence on television has negative effects on children leading to aggression and unhealthy imitation.The media should apply responsible care while streaming child-related programs so that the next generation of citizens is given the right direction to grow and live in this world.
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Television channels are now broadcasting more content related to violence than in the past which is creating adverse effects on children.I completely agree with this as kids tend to develop an aggressive character and imitate wrong actions at a young age.
First and foremost, by watching programs that promote violence,children develop a nature of aggression.Moreover,they don't have the capability to discern what is right or wrong and they easily get attracted towards violence and aggression.For example, movies like Shakthiman or Iron Man are targeted at young boys and girls below 15 years of age.During this period,their brain is not programmed enough to identify the good or bad messages in the movies, rather it easily catches the moves which creates an adrenaline rush, causing the children to react aggressively.As a consequence,it is very likely to form a violent behaviour among these little ones.
Secondly,children greatly observe whatever they see on big screens and resultantly replicate what they watch.This again leads to imitations that are unhealthy and unethical.For instance, there are several incidents reported in many parts of the world regarding suicides among small kids.The study which was conducted in the USA on this topic illustrated that in most of these cases, the young people were trying to copy certain acts of their favourite characters from TV series and ended up losing their lives.Hence, any program related to violence is extremely dangerous and can harm children in many ways.
In short, the violence on television has negative effects on children leading to aggression and unhealthy imitation.The media should apply responsible care while streaming child-related programs so that the next generation of citizens is given the right direction to grow and live in this world.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Television channels are now broadcasting more content related to violence than in the past which is creating adverse effects on children.I completely agree with this as kids tend to develop an aggressive character and imitate wrong actions at a young age.
First and foremost, by watching programs that promote violence,children develop a nature of aggression.Moreover,they don't have the capability to discern what is right or wrong and they easily get attracted towards violence and aggression.For example, movies like Shakthiman or Iron Man are targeted at young boys and girls below 15 years of age.During this period,their brain is not programmed enough to identify the good or bad messages in the movies, rather it easily catches the moves which creates an adrenaline rush, causing the children to react aggressively.As a consequence,it is very likely to form a violent behaviour among these little ones.
Secondly,children greatly observe whatever they see on big screens and resultantly replicate what they watch.This again leads to imitations that are unhealthy and unethical.For instance, there are several incidents reported in many parts of the world regarding suicides among small kids.The study which was conducted in the USA on this topic illustrated that in most of these cases, the young people were trying to copy certain acts of their favourite characters from TV series and ended up losing their lives.Hence, any program related to violence is extremely dangerous and can harm children in many ways.
In short, the violence on television has negative effects on children leading to aggression and unhealthy imitation.The media should apply responsible care while streaming child-related programs so that the next generation of citizens is given the right direction to grow and live in this world.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Television channels are now broadcasting more content related to violence than in the past which is creating adverse effects on children.I completely agree with this as kids tend to develop an aggressive character and imitate wrong actions at a young age.
First and foremost, by watching programs that promote violence,children develop a nature of aggression.Moreover,they don't have the capability to discern what is right or wrong and they easily get attracted towards violence and aggression.For example, movies like Shakthiman or Iron Man are targeted at young boys and girls below 15 years of age.During this period,their brain is not programmed enough to identify the good or bad messages in the movies, rather it easily catches the moves which creates an adrenaline rush, causing the children to react aggressively.As a consequence,it is very likely to form a violent behaviour among these little ones.
Secondly,children greatly observe whatever they see on big screens and resultantly replicate what they watch.This again leads to imitations that are unhealthy and unethical.For instance, there are several incidents reported in many parts of the world regarding suicides among small kids.The study which was conducted in the USA on this topic illustrated that in most of these cases, the young people were trying to copy certain acts of their favourite characters from TV series and ended up losing their lives.Hence, any program related to violence is extremely dangerous and can harm children in many ways.
In short, the violence on television has negative effects on children leading to aggression and unhealthy imitation.The media should apply responsible care while streaming child-related programs so that the next generation of citizens is given the right direction to grow and live in this world.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Television channels are now broadcasting more content related to violence than in the past which is creating adverse effects on children.I completely agree with this as kids tend to develop an aggressive character and imitate wrong actions at a young age.
First and foremost, by watching programs that promote violence,children develop a nature of aggression.Moreover,they don't have the capability to discern what is right or wrong and they easily get attracted towards violence and aggression.For example, movies like Shakthiman or Iron Man are targeted at young boys and girls below 15 years of age.During this period,their brain is not programmed enough to identify the good or bad messages in the movies, rather it easily catches the moves which creates an adrenaline rush, causing the children to react aggressively.As a consequence,it is very likely to form a violent behaviour among these little ones.
Secondly,children greatly observe whatever they see on big screens and resultantly replicate what they watch.This again leads to imitations that are unhealthy and unethical.For instance, there are several incidents reported in many parts of the world regarding suicides among small kids.The study which was conducted in the USA on this topic illustrated that in most of these cases, the young people were trying to copy certain acts of their favourite characters from TV series and ended up losing their lives.Hence, any program related to violence is extremely dangerous and can harm children in many ways.
In short, the violence on television has negative effects on children leading to aggression and unhealthy imitation.The media should apply responsible care while streaming child-related programs so that the next generation of citizens is given the right direction to grow and live in this world.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Television channels are now broadcasting more content related to violence than in the past which is creating adverse effects on children.I completely agree with this as kids tend to develop an aggressive character and imitate wrong actions at a young age.
First and foremost, by watching programs that promote violence,children develop a nature of aggression.Moreover,they don't have the capability to discern what is right or wrong and they easily get attracted towards violence and aggression.For example, movies like Shakthiman or Iron Man are targeted at young boys and girls below 15 years of age.During this period,their brain is not programmed enough to identify the good or bad messages in the movies, rather it easily catches the moves which creates an adrenaline rush, causing the children to react aggressively.As a consequence,it is very likely to form a violent behaviour among these little ones.
Secondly,children greatly observe whatever they see on big screens and resultantly replicate what they watch.This again leads to imitations that are unhealthy and unethical.For instance, there are several incidents reported in many parts of the world regarding suicides among small kids.The study which was conducted in the USA on this topic illustrated that in most of these cases, the young people were trying to copy certain acts of their favourite characters from TV series and ended up losing their lives.Hence, any program related to violence is extremely dangerous and can harm children in many ways.
In short, the violence on television has negative effects on children leading to aggression and unhealthy imitation.The media should apply responsible care while streaming child-related programs so that the next generation of citizens is given the right direction to grow and live in this world.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Scientists predict that all people will choose to speak the same global language in the future.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
Different languages have been created worldwide in order to establish one principal way of communication. Nowadays, many researchers argue that eventually everybody will communicate their ideas with a unique prose, and then dialect variations currently known will disappear. I believe that it will lead to positive and negative aspects, hence in this essay, I detail both sides.
To start with, human beings have been looking for one standard type of speech because of the necessity of improving our channels of communication, thus the English language has been chosen as the global one. Consequently, hundreds of people are enabled to travel and communicate their feelings, thoughts, and beliefs freely. For example, research performed in Colombia has been exposed internationally without boundaries because our ideas and discoveries are clearly shown in a specific and singular way. For this reason, people are able to acquire knowledge and learn cutting-edge terms and tools easily.
On the other hand, there are innate characteristics of each mother tongue in which they represent their own history. Therefore, indigenous maintain their traditions and inherit their native lingo generation by generation. For example, in Colombia, the "Wayuu" culture has its own idiomatic reference as well as crafts and rituals that are mainly related to its customs. Then, the Colombian government has recognized those as relics.
To sum up, establishing a worldwide standard of communication is crucial to remove communication limits, however, keeping mother and foreign languages is vital owing to its historical representation. Besides, it is preponderant to recognize our aboriginal practices and our lands.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Scientists predict that all people will choose to speak the same global language in the future.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
Different languages have been created worldwide in order to establish one principal way of communication. Nowadays, many researchers argue that eventually everybody will communicate their ideas with a unique prose, and then dialect variations currently known will disappear. I believe that it will lead to positive and negative aspects, hence in this essay, I detail both sides.
To start with, human beings have been looking for one standard type of speech because of the necessity of improving our channels of communication, thus the English language has been chosen as the global one. Consequently, hundreds of people are enabled to travel and communicate their feelings, thoughts, and beliefs freely. For example, research performed in Colombia has been exposed internationally without boundaries because our ideas and discoveries are clearly shown in a specific and singular way. For this reason, people are able to acquire knowledge and learn cutting-edge terms and tools easily.
On the other hand, there are innate characteristics of each mother tongue in which they represent their own history. Therefore, indigenous maintain their traditions and inherit their native lingo generation by generation. For example, in Colombia, the "Wayuu" culture has its own idiomatic reference as well as crafts and rituals that are mainly related to its customs. Then, the Colombian government has recognized those as relics.
To sum up, establishing a worldwide standard of communication is crucial to remove communication limits, however, keeping mother and foreign languages is vital owing to its historical representation. Besides, it is preponderant to recognize our aboriginal practices and our lands.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Scientists predict that all people will choose to speak the same global language in the future.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
Different languages have been created worldwide in order to establish one principal way of communication. Nowadays, many researchers argue that eventually everybody will communicate their ideas with a unique prose, and then dialect variations currently known will disappear. I believe that it will lead to positive and negative aspects, hence in this essay, I detail both sides.
To start with, human beings have been looking for one standard type of speech because of the necessity of improving our channels of communication, thus the English language has been chosen as the global one. Consequently, hundreds of people are enabled to travel and communicate their feelings, thoughts, and beliefs freely. For example, research performed in Colombia has been exposed internationally without boundaries because our ideas and discoveries are clearly shown in a specific and singular way. For this reason, people are able to acquire knowledge and learn cutting-edge terms and tools easily.
On the other hand, there are innate characteristics of each mother tongue in which they represent their own history. Therefore, indigenous maintain their traditions and inherit their native lingo generation by generation. For example, in Colombia, the "Wayuu" culture has its own idiomatic reference as well as crafts and rituals that are mainly related to its customs. Then, the Colombian government has recognized those as relics.
To sum up, establishing a worldwide standard of communication is crucial to remove communication limits, however, keeping mother and foreign languages is vital owing to its historical representation. Besides, it is preponderant to recognize our aboriginal practices and our lands.
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Scientists predict that all people will choose to speak the same global language in the future.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
Different languages have been created worldwide in order to establish one principal way of communication. Nowadays, many researchers argue that eventually everybody will communicate their ideas with a unique prose, and then dialect variations currently known will disappear. I believe that it will lead to positive and negative aspects, hence in this essay, I detail both sides.
To start with, human beings have been looking for one standard type of speech because of the necessity of improving our channels of communication, thus the English language has been chosen as the global one. Consequently, hundreds of people are enabled to travel and communicate their feelings, thoughts, and beliefs freely. For example, research performed in Colombia has been exposed internationally without boundaries because our ideas and discoveries are clearly shown in a specific and singular way. For this reason, people are able to acquire knowledge and learn cutting-edge terms and tools easily.
On the other hand, there are innate characteristics of each mother tongue in which they represent their own history. Therefore, indigenous maintain their traditions and inherit their native lingo generation by generation. For example, in Colombia, the "Wayuu" culture has its own idiomatic reference as well as crafts and rituals that are mainly related to its customs. Then, the Colombian government has recognized those as relics.
To sum up, establishing a worldwide standard of communication is crucial to remove communication limits, however, keeping mother and foreign languages is vital owing to its historical representation. Besides, it is preponderant to recognize our aboriginal practices and our lands.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Scientists predict that all people will choose to speak the same global language in the future.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
Different languages have been created worldwide in order to establish one principal way of communication. Nowadays, many researchers argue that eventually everybody will communicate their ideas with a unique prose, and then dialect variations currently known will disappear. I believe that it will lead to positive and negative aspects, hence in this essay, I detail both sides.
To start with, human beings have been looking for one standard type of speech because of the necessity of improving our channels of communication, thus the English language has been chosen as the global one. Consequently, hundreds of people are enabled to travel and communicate their feelings, thoughts, and beliefs freely. For example, research performed in Colombia has been exposed internationally without boundaries because our ideas and discoveries are clearly shown in a specific and singular way. For this reason, people are able to acquire knowledge and learn cutting-edge terms and tools easily.
On the other hand, there are innate characteristics of each mother tongue in which they represent their own history. Therefore, indigenous maintain their traditions and inherit their native lingo generation by generation. For example, in Colombia, the "Wayuu" culture has its own idiomatic reference as well as crafts and rituals that are mainly related to its customs. Then, the Colombian government has recognized those as relics.
To sum up, establishing a worldwide standard of communication is crucial to remove communication limits, however, keeping mother and foreign languages is vital owing to its historical representation. Besides, it is preponderant to recognize our aboriginal practices and our lands.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Scientists predict that all people will choose to speak the same global language in the future.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
Different languages have been created worldwide in order to establish one principal way of communication. Nowadays, many researchers argue that eventually everybody will communicate their ideas with a unique prose, and then dialect variations currently known will disappear. I believe that it will lead to positive and negative aspects, hence in this essay, I detail both sides.
To start with, human beings have been looking for one standard type of speech because of the necessity of improving our channels of communication, thus the English language has been chosen as the global one. Consequently, hundreds of people are enabled to travel and communicate their feelings, thoughts, and beliefs freely. For example, research performed in Colombia has been exposed internationally without boundaries because our ideas and discoveries are clearly shown in a specific and singular way. For this reason, people are able to acquire knowledge and learn cutting-edge terms and tools easily.
On the other hand, there are innate characteristics of each mother tongue in which they represent their own history. Therefore, indigenous maintain their traditions and inherit their native lingo generation by generation. For example, in Colombia, the "Wayuu" culture has its own idiomatic reference as well as crafts and rituals that are mainly related to its customs. Then, the Colombian government has recognized those as relics.
To sum up, establishing a worldwide standard of communication is crucial to remove communication limits, however, keeping mother and foreign languages is vital owing to its historical representation. Besides, it is preponderant to recognize our aboriginal practices and our lands.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Scientists predict that all people will choose to speak the same global language in the future.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
Different languages have been created worldwide in order to establish one principal way of communication. Nowadays, many researchers argue that eventually everybody will communicate their ideas with a unique prose, and then dialect variations currently known will disappear. I believe that it will lead to positive and negative aspects, hence in this essay, I detail both sides.
To start with, human beings have been looking for one standard type of speech because of the necessity of improving our channels of communication, thus the English language has been chosen as the global one. Consequently, hundreds of people are enabled to travel and communicate their feelings, thoughts, and beliefs freely. For example, research performed in Colombia has been exposed internationally without boundaries because our ideas and discoveries are clearly shown in a specific and singular way. For this reason, people are able to acquire knowledge and learn cutting-edge terms and tools easily.
On the other hand, there are innate characteristics of each mother tongue in which they represent their own history. Therefore, indigenous maintain their traditions and inherit their native lingo generation by generation. For example, in Colombia, the "Wayuu" culture has its own idiomatic reference as well as crafts and rituals that are mainly related to its customs. Then, the Colombian government has recognized those as relics.
To sum up, establishing a worldwide standard of communication is crucial to remove communication limits, however, keeping mother and foreign languages is vital owing to its historical representation. Besides, it is preponderant to recognize our aboriginal practices and our lands.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Scientists predict that all people will choose to speak the same global language in the future.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Anwser:
Different languages have been created worldwide in order to establish one principal way of communication. Nowadays, many researchers argue that eventually everybody will communicate their ideas with a unique prose, and then dialect variations currently known will disappear. I believe that it will lead to positive and negative aspects, hence in this essay, I detail both sides.
To start with, human beings have been looking for one standard type of speech because of the necessity of improving our channels of communication, thus the English language has been chosen as the global one. Consequently, hundreds of people are enabled to travel and communicate their feelings, thoughts, and beliefs freely. For example, research performed in Colombia has been exposed internationally without boundaries because our ideas and discoveries are clearly shown in a specific and singular way. For this reason, people are able to acquire knowledge and learn cutting-edge terms and tools easily.
On the other hand, there are innate characteristics of each mother tongue in which they represent their own history. Therefore, indigenous maintain their traditions and inherit their native lingo generation by generation. For example, in Colombia, the "Wayuu" culture has its own idiomatic reference as well as crafts and rituals that are mainly related to its customs. Then, the Colombian government has recognized those as relics.
To sum up, establishing a worldwide standard of communication is crucial to remove communication limits, however, keeping mother and foreign languages is vital owing to its historical representation. Besides, it is preponderant to recognize our aboriginal practices and our lands.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty.
Anwser:
Capital punishment is a legally authorized killing of a convicted criminal, and due to its nature, it continues to be a subject of debate. For some, the death penalty is a sensible way to punish violent criminals, while others claim that the death penalty should not be utilized in the contemporary world. There are numerous reasons why such disagreements exist, and the most critical factors in the given discussion are related to retribution, the cost-effectiveness of this punishment’s implementation, moral values and the risks of wrongful executions.
Death penalty often serves as a legal vengeance, which provides a sense of finality to grieving families. By executing the convict, the victim’s family members and friends can feel that justice has been served properly, as any other punishment may seem insufficient from their perspective. While this element of revenge can seem solely based on emotion, it can be considered an advantage because of how it complies with the demands of the victim’s relatives.
Another benefit to using the death penalty is saving a significant amount of money. This is possible by reducing funding on sources such as food and electricity that are needed to maintain prisons where many felons reside for a long-term period. In other words, when criminals are executed, their basic needs are eliminated as well, meaning less taxpayer money is needed for prison maintenance. This also allows the government to allocate more of the country’s budget to other sectors, such as education and healthcare.
Despite the apparent upsides of the death penalty, there are millions of people who support the abolition of capital punishment. The most common reasons for such a degree of disapproval are usually moral objections, with people often referring to legal executions as ethically wrong. Taking a life, regardless of any circumstances, appears to be uncivilized for a progressive part of society, which is probably why more than a hundred countries already abolished the death penalty, leaving life imprisonment as the most severe punishment a convict can get.
The last major talking point is the likelihood of wrongful penalties, which many cite as the most significant drawback to using the death penalty. As history shows, there are certain cases where innocent individuals are mistakenly punished for what they have never done, and in the imaginations of some people, similar faults can lead to mistakes in using the death penalty, too.
In summary, capital punishment presents convincing advantages and disadvantages, which will likely cause more controversy in the short and long-term future.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty.
Anwser:
Capital punishment is a legally authorized killing of a convicted criminal, and due to its nature, it continues to be a subject of debate. For some, the death penalty is a sensible way to punish violent criminals, while others claim that the death penalty should not be utilized in the contemporary world. There are numerous reasons why such disagreements exist, and the most critical factors in the given discussion are related to retribution, the cost-effectiveness of this punishment’s implementation, moral values and the risks of wrongful executions.
Death penalty often serves as a legal vengeance, which provides a sense of finality to grieving families. By executing the convict, the victim’s family members and friends can feel that justice has been served properly, as any other punishment may seem insufficient from their perspective. While this element of revenge can seem solely based on emotion, it can be considered an advantage because of how it complies with the demands of the victim’s relatives.
Another benefit to using the death penalty is saving a significant amount of money. This is possible by reducing funding on sources such as food and electricity that are needed to maintain prisons where many felons reside for a long-term period. In other words, when criminals are executed, their basic needs are eliminated as well, meaning less taxpayer money is needed for prison maintenance. This also allows the government to allocate more of the country’s budget to other sectors, such as education and healthcare.
Despite the apparent upsides of the death penalty, there are millions of people who support the abolition of capital punishment. The most common reasons for such a degree of disapproval are usually moral objections, with people often referring to legal executions as ethically wrong. Taking a life, regardless of any circumstances, appears to be uncivilized for a progressive part of society, which is probably why more than a hundred countries already abolished the death penalty, leaving life imprisonment as the most severe punishment a convict can get.
The last major talking point is the likelihood of wrongful penalties, which many cite as the most significant drawback to using the death penalty. As history shows, there are certain cases where innocent individuals are mistakenly punished for what they have never done, and in the imaginations of some people, similar faults can lead to mistakes in using the death penalty, too.
In summary, capital punishment presents convincing advantages and disadvantages, which will likely cause more controversy in the short and long-term future.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty.
Anwser:
Capital punishment is a legally authorized killing of a convicted criminal, and due to its nature, it continues to be a subject of debate. For some, the death penalty is a sensible way to punish violent criminals, while others claim that the death penalty should not be utilized in the contemporary world. There are numerous reasons why such disagreements exist, and the most critical factors in the given discussion are related to retribution, the cost-effectiveness of this punishment’s implementation, moral values and the risks of wrongful executions.
Death penalty often serves as a legal vengeance, which provides a sense of finality to grieving families. By executing the convict, the victim’s family members and friends can feel that justice has been served properly, as any other punishment may seem insufficient from their perspective. While this element of revenge can seem solely based on emotion, it can be considered an advantage because of how it complies with the demands of the victim’s relatives.
Another benefit to using the death penalty is saving a significant amount of money. This is possible by reducing funding on sources such as food and electricity that are needed to maintain prisons where many felons reside for a long-term period. In other words, when criminals are executed, their basic needs are eliminated as well, meaning less taxpayer money is needed for prison maintenance. This also allows the government to allocate more of the country’s budget to other sectors, such as education and healthcare.
Despite the apparent upsides of the death penalty, there are millions of people who support the abolition of capital punishment. The most common reasons for such a degree of disapproval are usually moral objections, with people often referring to legal executions as ethically wrong. Taking a life, regardless of any circumstances, appears to be uncivilized for a progressive part of society, which is probably why more than a hundred countries already abolished the death penalty, leaving life imprisonment as the most severe punishment a convict can get.
The last major talking point is the likelihood of wrongful penalties, which many cite as the most significant drawback to using the death penalty. As history shows, there are certain cases where innocent individuals are mistakenly punished for what they have never done, and in the imaginations of some people, similar faults can lead to mistakes in using the death penalty, too.
In summary, capital punishment presents convincing advantages and disadvantages, which will likely cause more controversy in the short and long-term future.
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty.
Anwser:
Capital punishment is a legally authorized killing of a convicted criminal, and due to its nature, it continues to be a subject of debate. For some, the death penalty is a sensible way to punish violent criminals, while others claim that the death penalty should not be utilized in the contemporary world. There are numerous reasons why such disagreements exist, and the most critical factors in the given discussion are related to retribution, the cost-effectiveness of this punishment’s implementation, moral values and the risks of wrongful executions.
Death penalty often serves as a legal vengeance, which provides a sense of finality to grieving families. By executing the convict, the victim’s family members and friends can feel that justice has been served properly, as any other punishment may seem insufficient from their perspective. While this element of revenge can seem solely based on emotion, it can be considered an advantage because of how it complies with the demands of the victim’s relatives.
Another benefit to using the death penalty is saving a significant amount of money. This is possible by reducing funding on sources such as food and electricity that are needed to maintain prisons where many felons reside for a long-term period. In other words, when criminals are executed, their basic needs are eliminated as well, meaning less taxpayer money is needed for prison maintenance. This also allows the government to allocate more of the country’s budget to other sectors, such as education and healthcare.
Despite the apparent upsides of the death penalty, there are millions of people who support the abolition of capital punishment. The most common reasons for such a degree of disapproval are usually moral objections, with people often referring to legal executions as ethically wrong. Taking a life, regardless of any circumstances, appears to be uncivilized for a progressive part of society, which is probably why more than a hundred countries already abolished the death penalty, leaving life imprisonment as the most severe punishment a convict can get.
The last major talking point is the likelihood of wrongful penalties, which many cite as the most significant drawback to using the death penalty. As history shows, there are certain cases where innocent individuals are mistakenly punished for what they have never done, and in the imaginations of some people, similar faults can lead to mistakes in using the death penalty, too.
In summary, capital punishment presents convincing advantages and disadvantages, which will likely cause more controversy in the short and long-term future.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty.
Anwser:
Capital punishment is a legally authorized killing of a convicted criminal, and due to its nature, it continues to be a subject of debate. For some, the death penalty is a sensible way to punish violent criminals, while others claim that the death penalty should not be utilized in the contemporary world. There are numerous reasons why such disagreements exist, and the most critical factors in the given discussion are related to retribution, the cost-effectiveness of this punishment’s implementation, moral values and the risks of wrongful executions.
Death penalty often serves as a legal vengeance, which provides a sense of finality to grieving families. By executing the convict, the victim’s family members and friends can feel that justice has been served properly, as any other punishment may seem insufficient from their perspective. While this element of revenge can seem solely based on emotion, it can be considered an advantage because of how it complies with the demands of the victim’s relatives.
Another benefit to using the death penalty is saving a significant amount of money. This is possible by reducing funding on sources such as food and electricity that are needed to maintain prisons where many felons reside for a long-term period. In other words, when criminals are executed, their basic needs are eliminated as well, meaning less taxpayer money is needed for prison maintenance. This also allows the government to allocate more of the country’s budget to other sectors, such as education and healthcare.
Despite the apparent upsides of the death penalty, there are millions of people who support the abolition of capital punishment. The most common reasons for such a degree of disapproval are usually moral objections, with people often referring to legal executions as ethically wrong. Taking a life, regardless of any circumstances, appears to be uncivilized for a progressive part of society, which is probably why more than a hundred countries already abolished the death penalty, leaving life imprisonment as the most severe punishment a convict can get.
The last major talking point is the likelihood of wrongful penalties, which many cite as the most significant drawback to using the death penalty. As history shows, there are certain cases where innocent individuals are mistakenly punished for what they have never done, and in the imaginations of some people, similar faults can lead to mistakes in using the death penalty, too.
In summary, capital punishment presents convincing advantages and disadvantages, which will likely cause more controversy in the short and long-term future.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty.
Anwser:
Capital punishment is a legally authorized killing of a convicted criminal, and due to its nature, it continues to be a subject of debate. For some, the death penalty is a sensible way to punish violent criminals, while others claim that the death penalty should not be utilized in the contemporary world. There are numerous reasons why such disagreements exist, and the most critical factors in the given discussion are related to retribution, the cost-effectiveness of this punishment’s implementation, moral values and the risks of wrongful executions.
Death penalty often serves as a legal vengeance, which provides a sense of finality to grieving families. By executing the convict, the victim’s family members and friends can feel that justice has been served properly, as any other punishment may seem insufficient from their perspective. While this element of revenge can seem solely based on emotion, it can be considered an advantage because of how it complies with the demands of the victim’s relatives.
Another benefit to using the death penalty is saving a significant amount of money. This is possible by reducing funding on sources such as food and electricity that are needed to maintain prisons where many felons reside for a long-term period. In other words, when criminals are executed, their basic needs are eliminated as well, meaning less taxpayer money is needed for prison maintenance. This also allows the government to allocate more of the country’s budget to other sectors, such as education and healthcare.
Despite the apparent upsides of the death penalty, there are millions of people who support the abolition of capital punishment. The most common reasons for such a degree of disapproval are usually moral objections, with people often referring to legal executions as ethically wrong. Taking a life, regardless of any circumstances, appears to be uncivilized for a progressive part of society, which is probably why more than a hundred countries already abolished the death penalty, leaving life imprisonment as the most severe punishment a convict can get.
The last major talking point is the likelihood of wrongful penalties, which many cite as the most significant drawback to using the death penalty. As history shows, there are certain cases where innocent individuals are mistakenly punished for what they have never done, and in the imaginations of some people, similar faults can lead to mistakes in using the death penalty, too.
In summary, capital punishment presents convincing advantages and disadvantages, which will likely cause more controversy in the short and long-term future.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty.
Anwser:
Capital punishment is a legally authorized killing of a convicted criminal, and due to its nature, it continues to be a subject of debate. For some, the death penalty is a sensible way to punish violent criminals, while others claim that the death penalty should not be utilized in the contemporary world. There are numerous reasons why such disagreements exist, and the most critical factors in the given discussion are related to retribution, the cost-effectiveness of this punishment’s implementation, moral values and the risks of wrongful executions.
Death penalty often serves as a legal vengeance, which provides a sense of finality to grieving families. By executing the convict, the victim’s family members and friends can feel that justice has been served properly, as any other punishment may seem insufficient from their perspective. While this element of revenge can seem solely based on emotion, it can be considered an advantage because of how it complies with the demands of the victim’s relatives.
Another benefit to using the death penalty is saving a significant amount of money. This is possible by reducing funding on sources such as food and electricity that are needed to maintain prisons where many felons reside for a long-term period. In other words, when criminals are executed, their basic needs are eliminated as well, meaning less taxpayer money is needed for prison maintenance. This also allows the government to allocate more of the country’s budget to other sectors, such as education and healthcare.
Despite the apparent upsides of the death penalty, there are millions of people who support the abolition of capital punishment. The most common reasons for such a degree of disapproval are usually moral objections, with people often referring to legal executions as ethically wrong. Taking a life, regardless of any circumstances, appears to be uncivilized for a progressive part of society, which is probably why more than a hundred countries already abolished the death penalty, leaving life imprisonment as the most severe punishment a convict can get.
The last major talking point is the likelihood of wrongful penalties, which many cite as the most significant drawback to using the death penalty. As history shows, there are certain cases where innocent individuals are mistakenly punished for what they have never done, and in the imaginations of some people, similar faults can lead to mistakes in using the death penalty, too.
In summary, capital punishment presents convincing advantages and disadvantages, which will likely cause more controversy in the short and long-term future.
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Your task achievement score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty.
Anwser:
Capital punishment is a legally authorized killing of a convicted criminal, and due to its nature, it continues to be a subject of debate. For some, the death penalty is a sensible way to punish violent criminals, while others claim that the death penalty should not be utilized in the contemporary world. There are numerous reasons why such disagreements exist, and the most critical factors in the given discussion are related to retribution, the cost-effectiveness of this punishment’s implementation, moral values and the risks of wrongful executions.
Death penalty often serves as a legal vengeance, which provides a sense of finality to grieving families. By executing the convict, the victim’s family members and friends can feel that justice has been served properly, as any other punishment may seem insufficient from their perspective. While this element of revenge can seem solely based on emotion, it can be considered an advantage because of how it complies with the demands of the victim’s relatives.
Another benefit to using the death penalty is saving a significant amount of money. This is possible by reducing funding on sources such as food and electricity that are needed to maintain prisons where many felons reside for a long-term period. In other words, when criminals are executed, their basic needs are eliminated as well, meaning less taxpayer money is needed for prison maintenance. This also allows the government to allocate more of the country’s budget to other sectors, such as education and healthcare.
Despite the apparent upsides of the death penalty, there are millions of people who support the abolition of capital punishment. The most common reasons for such a degree of disapproval are usually moral objections, with people often referring to legal executions as ethically wrong. Taking a life, regardless of any circumstances, appears to be uncivilized for a progressive part of society, which is probably why more than a hundred countries already abolished the death penalty, leaving life imprisonment as the most severe punishment a convict can get.
The last major talking point is the likelihood of wrongful penalties, which many cite as the most significant drawback to using the death penalty. As history shows, there are certain cases where innocent individuals are mistakenly punished for what they have never done, and in the imaginations of some people, similar faults can lead to mistakes in using the death penalty, too.
In summary, capital punishment presents convincing advantages and disadvantages, which will likely cause more controversy in the short and long-term future.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are with an adult? What is your opinion about this?
Anwser:
In many places around the United States, a child who is between the ages of 13 and 19 is expected to be given a midnight curfew or be accompanied by a grown-up. I agree that parents should impose this rule for the benefit of their children because it ensures their safety and helps parents succeed in bringing them up.
It is a common belief that staying out at night could be fraught with unexpected dangers. This is because the overall crime rate is much higher than ever before, and teenagers ought to obey the curfew or they may become the victims of these serious crimes. That is to say, they could be extorted, robbed of their properties, or, at worst, ruthlessly murdered. For example, recent research showed that secondary students who do not return home until early in the morning fall prey to human trafficking.
One of the primary aims of this rule is to work towards a proper upbringing. The main reason is that if minors manage to stick to the given time, they will stand a good chance of cultivating rock-solid self-discipline. As a result, they could organize their time more effectively, raise concerns about self-protection, or be able to resist the temptation to go home late. For instance, Will Jackson, a child psychologist, claimed that juveniles who strictly follow the time limit are more well-brought-up and careful than their peers.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the imposition of a curfew does play a vital role in keeping teenagers safe and offering them good parenting.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are with an adult? What is your opinion about this?
Anwser:
In many places around the United States, a child who is between the ages of 13 and 19 is expected to be given a midnight curfew or be accompanied by a grown-up. I agree that parents should impose this rule for the benefit of their children because it ensures their safety and helps parents succeed in bringing them up.
It is a common belief that staying out at night could be fraught with unexpected dangers. This is because the overall crime rate is much higher than ever before, and teenagers ought to obey the curfew or they may become the victims of these serious crimes. That is to say, they could be extorted, robbed of their properties, or, at worst, ruthlessly murdered. For example, recent research showed that secondary students who do not return home until early in the morning fall prey to human trafficking.
One of the primary aims of this rule is to work towards a proper upbringing. The main reason is that if minors manage to stick to the given time, they will stand a good chance of cultivating rock-solid self-discipline. As a result, they could organize their time more effectively, raise concerns about self-protection, or be able to resist the temptation to go home late. For instance, Will Jackson, a child psychologist, claimed that juveniles who strictly follow the time limit are more well-brought-up and careful than their peers.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the imposition of a curfew does play a vital role in keeping teenagers safe and offering them good parenting.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are with an adult? What is your opinion about this?
Anwser:
In many places around the United States, a child who is between the ages of 13 and 19 is expected to be given a midnight curfew or be accompanied by a grown-up. I agree that parents should impose this rule for the benefit of their children because it ensures their safety and helps parents succeed in bringing them up.
It is a common belief that staying out at night could be fraught with unexpected dangers. This is because the overall crime rate is much higher than ever before, and teenagers ought to obey the curfew or they may become the victims of these serious crimes. That is to say, they could be extorted, robbed of their properties, or, at worst, ruthlessly murdered. For example, recent research showed that secondary students who do not return home until early in the morning fall prey to human trafficking.
One of the primary aims of this rule is to work towards a proper upbringing. The main reason is that if minors manage to stick to the given time, they will stand a good chance of cultivating rock-solid self-discipline. As a result, they could organize their time more effectively, raise concerns about self-protection, or be able to resist the temptation to go home late. For instance, Will Jackson, a child psychologist, claimed that juveniles who strictly follow the time limit are more well-brought-up and careful than their peers.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the imposition of a curfew does play a vital role in keeping teenagers safe and offering them good parenting.
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Your lexical resource score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are with an adult? What is your opinion about this?
Anwser:
In many places around the United States, a child who is between the ages of 13 and 19 is expected to be given a midnight curfew or be accompanied by a grown-up. I agree that parents should impose this rule for the benefit of their children because it ensures their safety and helps parents succeed in bringing them up.
It is a common belief that staying out at night could be fraught with unexpected dangers. This is because the overall crime rate is much higher than ever before, and teenagers ought to obey the curfew or they may become the victims of these serious crimes. That is to say, they could be extorted, robbed of their properties, or, at worst, ruthlessly murdered. For example, recent research showed that secondary students who do not return home until early in the morning fall prey to human trafficking.
One of the primary aims of this rule is to work towards a proper upbringing. The main reason is that if minors manage to stick to the given time, they will stand a good chance of cultivating rock-solid self-discipline. As a result, they could organize their time more effectively, raise concerns about self-protection, or be able to resist the temptation to go home late. For instance, Will Jackson, a child psychologist, claimed that juveniles who strictly follow the time limit are more well-brought-up and careful than their peers.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the imposition of a curfew does play a vital role in keeping teenagers safe and offering them good parenting.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are with an adult? What is your opinion about this?
Anwser:
In many places around the United States, a child who is between the ages of 13 and 19 is expected to be given a midnight curfew or be accompanied by a grown-up. I agree that parents should impose this rule for the benefit of their children because it ensures their safety and helps parents succeed in bringing them up.
It is a common belief that staying out at night could be fraught with unexpected dangers. This is because the overall crime rate is much higher than ever before, and teenagers ought to obey the curfew or they may become the victims of these serious crimes. That is to say, they could be extorted, robbed of their properties, or, at worst, ruthlessly murdered. For example, recent research showed that secondary students who do not return home until early in the morning fall prey to human trafficking.
One of the primary aims of this rule is to work towards a proper upbringing. The main reason is that if minors manage to stick to the given time, they will stand a good chance of cultivating rock-solid self-discipline. As a result, they could organize their time more effectively, raise concerns about self-protection, or be able to resist the temptation to go home late. For instance, Will Jackson, a child psychologist, claimed that juveniles who strictly follow the time limit are more well-brought-up and careful than their peers.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the imposition of a curfew does play a vital role in keeping teenagers safe and offering them good parenting.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are with an adult? What is your opinion about this?
Anwser:
In many places around the United States, a child who is between the ages of 13 and 19 is expected to be given a midnight curfew or be accompanied by a grown-up. I agree that parents should impose this rule for the benefit of their children because it ensures their safety and helps parents succeed in bringing them up.
It is a common belief that staying out at night could be fraught with unexpected dangers. This is because the overall crime rate is much higher than ever before, and teenagers ought to obey the curfew or they may become the victims of these serious crimes. That is to say, they could be extorted, robbed of their properties, or, at worst, ruthlessly murdered. For example, recent research showed that secondary students who do not return home until early in the morning fall prey to human trafficking.
One of the primary aims of this rule is to work towards a proper upbringing. The main reason is that if minors manage to stick to the given time, they will stand a good chance of cultivating rock-solid self-discipline. As a result, they could organize their time more effectively, raise concerns about self-protection, or be able to resist the temptation to go home late. For instance, Will Jackson, a child psychologist, claimed that juveniles who strictly follow the time limit are more well-brought-up and careful than their peers.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the imposition of a curfew does play a vital role in keeping teenagers safe and offering them good parenting.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are with an adult? What is your opinion about this?
Anwser:
In many places around the United States, a child who is between the ages of 13 and 19 is expected to be given a midnight curfew or be accompanied by a grown-up. I agree that parents should impose this rule for the benefit of their children because it ensures their safety and helps parents succeed in bringing them up.
It is a common belief that staying out at night could be fraught with unexpected dangers. This is because the overall crime rate is much higher than ever before, and teenagers ought to obey the curfew or they may become the victims of these serious crimes. That is to say, they could be extorted, robbed of their properties, or, at worst, ruthlessly murdered. For example, recent research showed that secondary students who do not return home until early in the morning fall prey to human trafficking.
One of the primary aims of this rule is to work towards a proper upbringing. The main reason is that if minors manage to stick to the given time, they will stand a good chance of cultivating rock-solid self-discipline. As a result, they could organize their time more effectively, raise concerns about self-protection, or be able to resist the temptation to go home late. For instance, Will Jackson, a child psychologist, claimed that juveniles who strictly follow the time limit are more well-brought-up and careful than their peers.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the imposition of a curfew does play a vital role in keeping teenagers safe and offering them good parenting.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are with an adult? What is your opinion about this?
Anwser:
In many places around the United States, a child who is between the ages of 13 and 19 is expected to be given a midnight curfew or be accompanied by a grown-up. I agree that parents should impose this rule for the benefit of their children because it ensures their safety and helps parents succeed in bringing them up.
It is a common belief that staying out at night could be fraught with unexpected dangers. This is because the overall crime rate is much higher than ever before, and teenagers ought to obey the curfew or they may become the victims of these serious crimes. That is to say, they could be extorted, robbed of their properties, or, at worst, ruthlessly murdered. For example, recent research showed that secondary students who do not return home until early in the morning fall prey to human trafficking.
One of the primary aims of this rule is to work towards a proper upbringing. The main reason is that if minors manage to stick to the given time, they will stand a good chance of cultivating rock-solid self-discipline. As a result, they could organize their time more effectively, raise concerns about self-protection, or be able to resist the temptation to go home late. For instance, Will Jackson, a child psychologist, claimed that juveniles who strictly follow the time limit are more well-brought-up and careful than their peers.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the imposition of a curfew does play a vital role in keeping teenagers safe and offering them good parenting.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people argue that museums and art galleries present nation's art.
Are you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Recently, the phenomenon of visiting buildings has been a heated debate. Although many believe that salons and foundations illustrate a nation's art style around the world others do not. I profoundly believe that travelling to an exhibition could be a good idea to understand about craft perspectives and help us to meet with different people.
From my point of view, museums are spiritual places to find out about different artworks and cultures.
For example, some foundations show us the history of a country and a painter's biography. On the other hand, a series of famous artists give value to buildings or galleries and they wanted to record their points. As a result, many countries are known for a variety of artworks and their artists such as Italy, France and so forth.
In my opinion, this issue is crucial for many people because they can introduce their country's prestigious to other countries. For instance, Iran as an ancient land with a wide range of arts is celebrated among reputation neighbour countries. In contrast, someone who does not meet with many aspects of art thinks there are many things to present their nation's craft such as jewellery or dressing design. Generally speaking, artworks are the best option to show and expand a specific country's culture or indigenous people who are living there.
Taking everything into conclusion, there are several ways to demonstrate the art vision. Not only visiting galleries and museums are important places to spend time with our family or friends but also they give us ample opportunities to realize about folks and nations.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people argue that museums and art galleries present nation's art.
Are you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Recently, the phenomenon of visiting buildings has been a heated debate. Although many believe that salons and foundations illustrate a nation's art style around the world others do not. I profoundly believe that travelling to an exhibition could be a good idea to understand about craft perspectives and help us to meet with different people.
From my point of view, museums are spiritual places to find out about different artworks and cultures.
For example, some foundations show us the history of a country and a painter's biography. On the other hand, a series of famous artists give value to buildings or galleries and they wanted to record their points. As a result, many countries are known for a variety of artworks and their artists such as Italy, France and so forth.
In my opinion, this issue is crucial for many people because they can introduce their country's prestigious to other countries. For instance, Iran as an ancient land with a wide range of arts is celebrated among reputation neighbour countries. In contrast, someone who does not meet with many aspects of art thinks there are many things to present their nation's craft such as jewellery or dressing design. Generally speaking, artworks are the best option to show and expand a specific country's culture or indigenous people who are living there.
Taking everything into conclusion, there are several ways to demonstrate the art vision. Not only visiting galleries and museums are important places to spend time with our family or friends but also they give us ample opportunities to realize about folks and nations.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people argue that museums and art galleries present nation's art.
Are you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Recently, the phenomenon of visiting buildings has been a heated debate. Although many believe that salons and foundations illustrate a nation's art style around the world others do not. I profoundly believe that travelling to an exhibition could be a good idea to understand about craft perspectives and help us to meet with different people.
From my point of view, museums are spiritual places to find out about different artworks and cultures.
For example, some foundations show us the history of a country and a painter's biography. On the other hand, a series of famous artists give value to buildings or galleries and they wanted to record their points. As a result, many countries are known for a variety of artworks and their artists such as Italy, France and so forth.
In my opinion, this issue is crucial for many people because they can introduce their country's prestigious to other countries. For instance, Iran as an ancient land with a wide range of arts is celebrated among reputation neighbour countries. In contrast, someone who does not meet with many aspects of art thinks there are many things to present their nation's craft such as jewellery or dressing design. Generally speaking, artworks are the best option to show and expand a specific country's culture or indigenous people who are living there.
Taking everything into conclusion, there are several ways to demonstrate the art vision. Not only visiting galleries and museums are important places to spend time with our family or friends but also they give us ample opportunities to realize about folks and nations.
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Your lexical resource score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people argue that museums and art galleries present nation's art.
Are you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Recently, the phenomenon of visiting buildings has been a heated debate. Although many believe that salons and foundations illustrate a nation's art style around the world others do not. I profoundly believe that travelling to an exhibition could be a good idea to understand about craft perspectives and help us to meet with different people.
From my point of view, museums are spiritual places to find out about different artworks and cultures.
For example, some foundations show us the history of a country and a painter's biography. On the other hand, a series of famous artists give value to buildings or galleries and they wanted to record their points. As a result, many countries are known for a variety of artworks and their artists such as Italy, France and so forth.
In my opinion, this issue is crucial for many people because they can introduce their country's prestigious to other countries. For instance, Iran as an ancient land with a wide range of arts is celebrated among reputation neighbour countries. In contrast, someone who does not meet with many aspects of art thinks there are many things to present their nation's craft such as jewellery or dressing design. Generally speaking, artworks are the best option to show and expand a specific country's culture or indigenous people who are living there.
Taking everything into conclusion, there are several ways to demonstrate the art vision. Not only visiting galleries and museums are important places to spend time with our family or friends but also they give us ample opportunities to realize about folks and nations.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people argue that museums and art galleries present nation's art.
Are you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Recently, the phenomenon of visiting buildings has been a heated debate. Although many believe that salons and foundations illustrate a nation's art style around the world others do not. I profoundly believe that travelling to an exhibition could be a good idea to understand about craft perspectives and help us to meet with different people.
From my point of view, museums are spiritual places to find out about different artworks and cultures.
For example, some foundations show us the history of a country and a painter's biography. On the other hand, a series of famous artists give value to buildings or galleries and they wanted to record their points. As a result, many countries are known for a variety of artworks and their artists such as Italy, France and so forth.
In my opinion, this issue is crucial for many people because they can introduce their country's prestigious to other countries. For instance, Iran as an ancient land with a wide range of arts is celebrated among reputation neighbour countries. In contrast, someone who does not meet with many aspects of art thinks there are many things to present their nation's craft such as jewellery or dressing design. Generally speaking, artworks are the best option to show and expand a specific country's culture or indigenous people who are living there.
Taking everything into conclusion, there are several ways to demonstrate the art vision. Not only visiting galleries and museums are important places to spend time with our family or friends but also they give us ample opportunities to realize about folks and nations.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people argue that museums and art galleries present nation's art.
Are you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Recently, the phenomenon of visiting buildings has been a heated debate. Although many believe that salons and foundations illustrate a nation's art style around the world others do not. I profoundly believe that travelling to an exhibition could be a good idea to understand about craft perspectives and help us to meet with different people.
From my point of view, museums are spiritual places to find out about different artworks and cultures.
For example, some foundations show us the history of a country and a painter's biography. On the other hand, a series of famous artists give value to buildings or galleries and they wanted to record their points. As a result, many countries are known for a variety of artworks and their artists such as Italy, France and so forth.
In my opinion, this issue is crucial for many people because they can introduce their country's prestigious to other countries. For instance, Iran as an ancient land with a wide range of arts is celebrated among reputation neighbour countries. In contrast, someone who does not meet with many aspects of art thinks there are many things to present their nation's craft such as jewellery or dressing design. Generally speaking, artworks are the best option to show and expand a specific country's culture or indigenous people who are living there.
Taking everything into conclusion, there are several ways to demonstrate the art vision. Not only visiting galleries and museums are important places to spend time with our family or friends but also they give us ample opportunities to realize about folks and nations.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people argue that museums and art galleries present nation's art.
Are you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Recently, the phenomenon of visiting buildings has been a heated debate. Although many believe that salons and foundations illustrate a nation's art style around the world others do not. I profoundly believe that travelling to an exhibition could be a good idea to understand about craft perspectives and help us to meet with different people.
From my point of view, museums are spiritual places to find out about different artworks and cultures.
For example, some foundations show us the history of a country and a painter's biography. On the other hand, a series of famous artists give value to buildings or galleries and they wanted to record their points. As a result, many countries are known for a variety of artworks and their artists such as Italy, France and so forth.
In my opinion, this issue is crucial for many people because they can introduce their country's prestigious to other countries. For instance, Iran as an ancient land with a wide range of arts is celebrated among reputation neighbour countries. In contrast, someone who does not meet with many aspects of art thinks there are many things to present their nation's craft such as jewellery or dressing design. Generally speaking, artworks are the best option to show and expand a specific country's culture or indigenous people who are living there.
Taking everything into conclusion, there are several ways to demonstrate the art vision. Not only visiting galleries and museums are important places to spend time with our family or friends but also they give us ample opportunities to realize about folks and nations.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people argue that museums and art galleries present nation's art.
Are you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
Recently, the phenomenon of visiting buildings has been a heated debate. Although many believe that salons and foundations illustrate a nation's art style around the world others do not. I profoundly believe that travelling to an exhibition could be a good idea to understand about craft perspectives and help us to meet with different people.
From my point of view, museums are spiritual places to find out about different artworks and cultures.
For example, some foundations show us the history of a country and a painter's biography. On the other hand, a series of famous artists give value to buildings or galleries and they wanted to record their points. As a result, many countries are known for a variety of artworks and their artists such as Italy, France and so forth.
In my opinion, this issue is crucial for many people because they can introduce their country's prestigious to other countries. For instance, Iran as an ancient land with a wide range of arts is celebrated among reputation neighbour countries. In contrast, someone who does not meet with many aspects of art thinks there are many things to present their nation's craft such as jewellery or dressing design. Generally speaking, artworks are the best option to show and expand a specific country's culture or indigenous people who are living there.
Taking everything into conclusion, there are several ways to demonstrate the art vision. Not only visiting galleries and museums are important places to spend time with our family or friends but also they give us ample opportunities to realize about folks and nations.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
“In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.” Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
There is an opinion saying that the number of vehicles will decrease in the next two decades in comparison with current days. However, I disagree with the given statement owing to a number of compelling reasons.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that the world population is increasing dramatically. That is, the more population grow, the more cars are needed to meet their needs. A good illustration of this is developing countries like India where the birth rate is almost out of control so this phenomenon leads to more demand for cars to facilitate people with them. In addition, still, there are no alternative solutions for the plurality of cars so it seems highly unlikely this problem to be solved in this short period of time.
Yet another compelling argument against this idea is that the existence of car manufacturers is dependent on increasing usage of them. To put it differently, these factories do anything to survive in this competitive market. Take leasing for example; giving people this opportunity to purchase a high-quality car with small proportions of money tempts anyone to buy it. Furthermore, as long as public transportation has not improved and is incompetent everyone prefers to use their own cars which causes a significant increase in the number of automobiles.
To sum up, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that we will be the witness of a growth in the number of cars all over the world. This is mainly because the rate of birth is growing and car producers try to sell their products to avoid bankruptcy.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
“In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.” Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
There is an opinion saying that the number of vehicles will decrease in the next two decades in comparison with current days. However, I disagree with the given statement owing to a number of compelling reasons.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that the world population is increasing dramatically. That is, the more population grow, the more cars are needed to meet their needs. A good illustration of this is developing countries like India where the birth rate is almost out of control so this phenomenon leads to more demand for cars to facilitate people with them. In addition, still, there are no alternative solutions for the plurality of cars so it seems highly unlikely this problem to be solved in this short period of time.
Yet another compelling argument against this idea is that the existence of car manufacturers is dependent on increasing usage of them. To put it differently, these factories do anything to survive in this competitive market. Take leasing for example; giving people this opportunity to purchase a high-quality car with small proportions of money tempts anyone to buy it. Furthermore, as long as public transportation has not improved and is incompetent everyone prefers to use their own cars which causes a significant increase in the number of automobiles.
To sum up, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that we will be the witness of a growth in the number of cars all over the world. This is mainly because the rate of birth is growing and car producers try to sell their products to avoid bankruptcy.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
“In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.” Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
There is an opinion saying that the number of vehicles will decrease in the next two decades in comparison with current days. However, I disagree with the given statement owing to a number of compelling reasons.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that the world population is increasing dramatically. That is, the more population grow, the more cars are needed to meet their needs. A good illustration of this is developing countries like India where the birth rate is almost out of control so this phenomenon leads to more demand for cars to facilitate people with them. In addition, still, there are no alternative solutions for the plurality of cars so it seems highly unlikely this problem to be solved in this short period of time.
Yet another compelling argument against this idea is that the existence of car manufacturers is dependent on increasing usage of them. To put it differently, these factories do anything to survive in this competitive market. Take leasing for example; giving people this opportunity to purchase a high-quality car with small proportions of money tempts anyone to buy it. Furthermore, as long as public transportation has not improved and is incompetent everyone prefers to use their own cars which causes a significant increase in the number of automobiles.
To sum up, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that we will be the witness of a growth in the number of cars all over the world. This is mainly because the rate of birth is growing and car producers try to sell their products to avoid bankruptcy.
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
“In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.” Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
There is an opinion saying that the number of vehicles will decrease in the next two decades in comparison with current days. However, I disagree with the given statement owing to a number of compelling reasons.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that the world population is increasing dramatically. That is, the more population grow, the more cars are needed to meet their needs. A good illustration of this is developing countries like India where the birth rate is almost out of control so this phenomenon leads to more demand for cars to facilitate people with them. In addition, still, there are no alternative solutions for the plurality of cars so it seems highly unlikely this problem to be solved in this short period of time.
Yet another compelling argument against this idea is that the existence of car manufacturers is dependent on increasing usage of them. To put it differently, these factories do anything to survive in this competitive market. Take leasing for example; giving people this opportunity to purchase a high-quality car with small proportions of money tempts anyone to buy it. Furthermore, as long as public transportation has not improved and is incompetent everyone prefers to use their own cars which causes a significant increase in the number of automobiles.
To sum up, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that we will be the witness of a growth in the number of cars all over the world. This is mainly because the rate of birth is growing and car producers try to sell their products to avoid bankruptcy.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
“In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.” Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
There is an opinion saying that the number of vehicles will decrease in the next two decades in comparison with current days. However, I disagree with the given statement owing to a number of compelling reasons.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that the world population is increasing dramatically. That is, the more population grow, the more cars are needed to meet their needs. A good illustration of this is developing countries like India where the birth rate is almost out of control so this phenomenon leads to more demand for cars to facilitate people with them. In addition, still, there are no alternative solutions for the plurality of cars so it seems highly unlikely this problem to be solved in this short period of time.
Yet another compelling argument against this idea is that the existence of car manufacturers is dependent on increasing usage of them. To put it differently, these factories do anything to survive in this competitive market. Take leasing for example; giving people this opportunity to purchase a high-quality car with small proportions of money tempts anyone to buy it. Furthermore, as long as public transportation has not improved and is incompetent everyone prefers to use their own cars which causes a significant increase in the number of automobiles.
To sum up, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that we will be the witness of a growth in the number of cars all over the world. This is mainly because the rate of birth is growing and car producers try to sell their products to avoid bankruptcy.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
“In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.” Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
There is an opinion saying that the number of vehicles will decrease in the next two decades in comparison with current days. However, I disagree with the given statement owing to a number of compelling reasons.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that the world population is increasing dramatically. That is, the more population grow, the more cars are needed to meet their needs. A good illustration of this is developing countries like India where the birth rate is almost out of control so this phenomenon leads to more demand for cars to facilitate people with them. In addition, still, there are no alternative solutions for the plurality of cars so it seems highly unlikely this problem to be solved in this short period of time.
Yet another compelling argument against this idea is that the existence of car manufacturers is dependent on increasing usage of them. To put it differently, these factories do anything to survive in this competitive market. Take leasing for example; giving people this opportunity to purchase a high-quality car with small proportions of money tempts anyone to buy it. Furthermore, as long as public transportation has not improved and is incompetent everyone prefers to use their own cars which causes a significant increase in the number of automobiles.
To sum up, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that we will be the witness of a growth in the number of cars all over the world. This is mainly because the rate of birth is growing and car producers try to sell their products to avoid bankruptcy.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
“In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.” Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
There is an opinion saying that the number of vehicles will decrease in the next two decades in comparison with current days. However, I disagree with the given statement owing to a number of compelling reasons.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that the world population is increasing dramatically. That is, the more population grow, the more cars are needed to meet their needs. A good illustration of this is developing countries like India where the birth rate is almost out of control so this phenomenon leads to more demand for cars to facilitate people with them. In addition, still, there are no alternative solutions for the plurality of cars so it seems highly unlikely this problem to be solved in this short period of time.
Yet another compelling argument against this idea is that the existence of car manufacturers is dependent on increasing usage of them. To put it differently, these factories do anything to survive in this competitive market. Take leasing for example; giving people this opportunity to purchase a high-quality car with small proportions of money tempts anyone to buy it. Furthermore, as long as public transportation has not improved and is incompetent everyone prefers to use their own cars which causes a significant increase in the number of automobiles.
To sum up, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that we will be the witness of a growth in the number of cars all over the world. This is mainly because the rate of birth is growing and car producers try to sell their products to avoid bankruptcy.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
“In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.” Do you agree or disagree?
Anwser:
There is an opinion saying that the number of vehicles will decrease in the next two decades in comparison with current days. However, I disagree with the given statement owing to a number of compelling reasons.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that the world population is increasing dramatically. That is, the more population grow, the more cars are needed to meet their needs. A good illustration of this is developing countries like India where the birth rate is almost out of control so this phenomenon leads to more demand for cars to facilitate people with them. In addition, still, there are no alternative solutions for the plurality of cars so it seems highly unlikely this problem to be solved in this short period of time.
Yet another compelling argument against this idea is that the existence of car manufacturers is dependent on increasing usage of them. To put it differently, these factories do anything to survive in this competitive market. Take leasing for example; giving people this opportunity to purchase a high-quality car with small proportions of money tempts anyone to buy it. Furthermore, as long as public transportation has not improved and is incompetent everyone prefers to use their own cars which causes a significant increase in the number of automobiles.
To sum up, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that we will be the witness of a growth in the number of cars all over the world. This is mainly because the rate of birth is growing and car producers try to sell their products to avoid bankruptcy.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In this current society, governments in many nations are allocating funds to technological advances in order to address the masses’ requirements. From the writer’s experience, while this circumstance occurs due to the demand’s increment in tackling the regular housekeeping tasks, the parliament expenses are suitable in covering a range of benefits in the enhancement of citizens’ living conditions.
It must be acknowledged that the rising demands of possessing typical automation for supervising daily routine missions have led to governments taking part in this field. To be specific, the superior functions of automatons have the potential to be in charge of everyday tasks, especially housework. Consequently, this alternative allows the general public to possess more practical timeserving along with periods of relaxation, which is considered convenient for commuters and night-shift workers. Take the capital Tokyo in Japan as a perfect example, where most households own typical housework machines in order to afford the need to tackle such a regular basis.
Another point worth mentioning is that the appropriate use of funds from the government covers a range of profits in the enhancement of living conditions. In other words, by using an abundance of expenditure, many aspects of technology can be improved as well as the expansion of robots, allowing families to be capable of possessing a technological machine. As an outcome of this, the quality of living of each individual can be improved with a positive prospect, which is a premise for a further technological implication and better living circumstances. This is true in Dubai, where the appearance of robots can clearly be seen with an extreme frequency, this is because people increasing demand of owing robots in order to support their domestic life.
In conclusion, technology is currently being invested with the governments taking action to tackle the continuous requirement of the society in addressing the housework. Furthermore, the parliament's action in allocating funds to improve this aspect can bring huge benefits for intensifying the living conditions.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In this current society, governments in many nations are allocating funds to technological advances in order to address the masses’ requirements. From the writer’s experience, while this circumstance occurs due to the demand’s increment in tackling the regular housekeeping tasks, the parliament expenses are suitable in covering a range of benefits in the enhancement of citizens’ living conditions.
It must be acknowledged that the rising demands of possessing typical automation for supervising daily routine missions have led to governments taking part in this field. To be specific, the superior functions of automatons have the potential to be in charge of everyday tasks, especially housework. Consequently, this alternative allows the general public to possess more practical timeserving along with periods of relaxation, which is considered convenient for commuters and night-shift workers. Take the capital Tokyo in Japan as a perfect example, where most households own typical housework machines in order to afford the need to tackle such a regular basis.
Another point worth mentioning is that the appropriate use of funds from the government covers a range of profits in the enhancement of living conditions. In other words, by using an abundance of expenditure, many aspects of technology can be improved as well as the expansion of robots, allowing families to be capable of possessing a technological machine. As an outcome of this, the quality of living of each individual can be improved with a positive prospect, which is a premise for a further technological implication and better living circumstances. This is true in Dubai, where the appearance of robots can clearly be seen with an extreme frequency, this is because people increasing demand of owing robots in order to support their domestic life.
In conclusion, technology is currently being invested with the governments taking action to tackle the continuous requirement of the society in addressing the housework. Furthermore, the parliament's action in allocating funds to improve this aspect can bring huge benefits for intensifying the living conditions.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In this current society, governments in many nations are allocating funds to technological advances in order to address the masses’ requirements. From the writer’s experience, while this circumstance occurs due to the demand’s increment in tackling the regular housekeeping tasks, the parliament expenses are suitable in covering a range of benefits in the enhancement of citizens’ living conditions.
It must be acknowledged that the rising demands of possessing typical automation for supervising daily routine missions have led to governments taking part in this field. To be specific, the superior functions of automatons have the potential to be in charge of everyday tasks, especially housework. Consequently, this alternative allows the general public to possess more practical timeserving along with periods of relaxation, which is considered convenient for commuters and night-shift workers. Take the capital Tokyo in Japan as a perfect example, where most households own typical housework machines in order to afford the need to tackle such a regular basis.
Another point worth mentioning is that the appropriate use of funds from the government covers a range of profits in the enhancement of living conditions. In other words, by using an abundance of expenditure, many aspects of technology can be improved as well as the expansion of robots, allowing families to be capable of possessing a technological machine. As an outcome of this, the quality of living of each individual can be improved with a positive prospect, which is a premise for a further technological implication and better living circumstances. This is true in Dubai, where the appearance of robots can clearly be seen with an extreme frequency, this is because people increasing demand of owing robots in order to support their domestic life.
In conclusion, technology is currently being invested with the governments taking action to tackle the continuous requirement of the society in addressing the housework. Furthermore, the parliament's action in allocating funds to improve this aspect can bring huge benefits for intensifying the living conditions.
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Your lexical resource score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In this current society, governments in many nations are allocating funds to technological advances in order to address the masses’ requirements. From the writer’s experience, while this circumstance occurs due to the demand’s increment in tackling the regular housekeeping tasks, the parliament expenses are suitable in covering a range of benefits in the enhancement of citizens’ living conditions.
It must be acknowledged that the rising demands of possessing typical automation for supervising daily routine missions have led to governments taking part in this field. To be specific, the superior functions of automatons have the potential to be in charge of everyday tasks, especially housework. Consequently, this alternative allows the general public to possess more practical timeserving along with periods of relaxation, which is considered convenient for commuters and night-shift workers. Take the capital Tokyo in Japan as a perfect example, where most households own typical housework machines in order to afford the need to tackle such a regular basis.
Another point worth mentioning is that the appropriate use of funds from the government covers a range of profits in the enhancement of living conditions. In other words, by using an abundance of expenditure, many aspects of technology can be improved as well as the expansion of robots, allowing families to be capable of possessing a technological machine. As an outcome of this, the quality of living of each individual can be improved with a positive prospect, which is a premise for a further technological implication and better living circumstances. This is true in Dubai, where the appearance of robots can clearly be seen with an extreme frequency, this is because people increasing demand of owing robots in order to support their domestic life.
In conclusion, technology is currently being invested with the governments taking action to tackle the continuous requirement of the society in addressing the housework. Furthermore, the parliament's action in allocating funds to improve this aspect can bring huge benefits for intensifying the living conditions.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In this current society, governments in many nations are allocating funds to technological advances in order to address the masses’ requirements. From the writer’s experience, while this circumstance occurs due to the demand’s increment in tackling the regular housekeeping tasks, the parliament expenses are suitable in covering a range of benefits in the enhancement of citizens’ living conditions.
It must be acknowledged that the rising demands of possessing typical automation for supervising daily routine missions have led to governments taking part in this field. To be specific, the superior functions of automatons have the potential to be in charge of everyday tasks, especially housework. Consequently, this alternative allows the general public to possess more practical timeserving along with periods of relaxation, which is considered convenient for commuters and night-shift workers. Take the capital Tokyo in Japan as a perfect example, where most households own typical housework machines in order to afford the need to tackle such a regular basis.
Another point worth mentioning is that the appropriate use of funds from the government covers a range of profits in the enhancement of living conditions. In other words, by using an abundance of expenditure, many aspects of technology can be improved as well as the expansion of robots, allowing families to be capable of possessing a technological machine. As an outcome of this, the quality of living of each individual can be improved with a positive prospect, which is a premise for a further technological implication and better living circumstances. This is true in Dubai, where the appearance of robots can clearly be seen with an extreme frequency, this is because people increasing demand of owing robots in order to support their domestic life.
In conclusion, technology is currently being invested with the governments taking action to tackle the continuous requirement of the society in addressing the housework. Furthermore, the parliament's action in allocating funds to improve this aspect can bring huge benefits for intensifying the living conditions.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In this current society, governments in many nations are allocating funds to technological advances in order to address the masses’ requirements. From the writer’s experience, while this circumstance occurs due to the demand’s increment in tackling the regular housekeeping tasks, the parliament expenses are suitable in covering a range of benefits in the enhancement of citizens’ living conditions.
It must be acknowledged that the rising demands of possessing typical automation for supervising daily routine missions have led to governments taking part in this field. To be specific, the superior functions of automatons have the potential to be in charge of everyday tasks, especially housework. Consequently, this alternative allows the general public to possess more practical timeserving along with periods of relaxation, which is considered convenient for commuters and night-shift workers. Take the capital Tokyo in Japan as a perfect example, where most households own typical housework machines in order to afford the need to tackle such a regular basis.
Another point worth mentioning is that the appropriate use of funds from the government covers a range of profits in the enhancement of living conditions. In other words, by using an abundance of expenditure, many aspects of technology can be improved as well as the expansion of robots, allowing families to be capable of possessing a technological machine. As an outcome of this, the quality of living of each individual can be improved with a positive prospect, which is a premise for a further technological implication and better living circumstances. This is true in Dubai, where the appearance of robots can clearly be seen with an extreme frequency, this is because people increasing demand of owing robots in order to support their domestic life.
In conclusion, technology is currently being invested with the governments taking action to tackle the continuous requirement of the society in addressing the housework. Furthermore, the parliament's action in allocating funds to improve this aspect can bring huge benefits for intensifying the living conditions.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In this current society, governments in many nations are allocating funds to technological advances in order to address the masses’ requirements. From the writer’s experience, while this circumstance occurs due to the demand’s increment in tackling the regular housekeeping tasks, the parliament expenses are suitable in covering a range of benefits in the enhancement of citizens’ living conditions.
It must be acknowledged that the rising demands of possessing typical automation for supervising daily routine missions have led to governments taking part in this field. To be specific, the superior functions of automatons have the potential to be in charge of everyday tasks, especially housework. Consequently, this alternative allows the general public to possess more practical timeserving along with periods of relaxation, which is considered convenient for commuters and night-shift workers. Take the capital Tokyo in Japan as a perfect example, where most households own typical housework machines in order to afford the need to tackle such a regular basis.
Another point worth mentioning is that the appropriate use of funds from the government covers a range of profits in the enhancement of living conditions. In other words, by using an abundance of expenditure, many aspects of technology can be improved as well as the expansion of robots, allowing families to be capable of possessing a technological machine. As an outcome of this, the quality of living of each individual can be improved with a positive prospect, which is a premise for a further technological implication and better living circumstances. This is true in Dubai, where the appearance of robots can clearly be seen with an extreme frequency, this is because people increasing demand of owing robots in order to support their domestic life.
In conclusion, technology is currently being invested with the governments taking action to tackle the continuous requirement of the society in addressing the housework. Furthermore, the parliament's action in allocating funds to improve this aspect can bring huge benefits for intensifying the living conditions.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In this current society, governments in many nations are allocating funds to technological advances in order to address the masses’ requirements. From the writer’s experience, while this circumstance occurs due to the demand’s increment in tackling the regular housekeeping tasks, the parliament expenses are suitable in covering a range of benefits in the enhancement of citizens’ living conditions.
It must be acknowledged that the rising demands of possessing typical automation for supervising daily routine missions have led to governments taking part in this field. To be specific, the superior functions of automatons have the potential to be in charge of everyday tasks, especially housework. Consequently, this alternative allows the general public to possess more practical timeserving along with periods of relaxation, which is considered convenient for commuters and night-shift workers. Take the capital Tokyo in Japan as a perfect example, where most households own typical housework machines in order to afford the need to tackle such a regular basis.
Another point worth mentioning is that the appropriate use of funds from the government covers a range of profits in the enhancement of living conditions. In other words, by using an abundance of expenditure, many aspects of technology can be improved as well as the expansion of robots, allowing families to be capable of possessing a technological machine. As an outcome of this, the quality of living of each individual can be improved with a positive prospect, which is a premise for a further technological implication and better living circumstances. This is true in Dubai, where the appearance of robots can clearly be seen with an extreme frequency, this is because people increasing demand of owing robots in order to support their domestic life.
In conclusion, technology is currently being invested with the governments taking action to tackle the continuous requirement of the society in addressing the housework. Furthermore, the parliament's action in allocating funds to improve this aspect can bring huge benefits for intensifying the living conditions.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In an ever-progressive society, there is a growing trend towards investment of authorities in new technicalities around the globe. This issue is due to the many benefits that the internet provides which affect many range of people in getting on well with unhackneyed automation.
Central to this issue is the point that advanced technology provides society with a large number of utilities. In other words, the Internet enables local communities, regions and, nations to develop, attract, retain and, expand job-creating businesses and institutions. It also improves the productivity and profitability of large, small and, home-based businesses and allows them to compete in local, national and global markets. By digitizing government services and information, e-government can streamline administrative processes, reduce paperwork, and save time and money. For example, electronic information systems are being applied in Vietnam and many countries around the world have contributed to demographic control. Hence, the ultimate goal of e-government is to provide an increased portfolio of public services to citizens in an efficient and cost-effective manner.
Perhaps, there are some witnesses who prove that ultramodern technology have a detrimental effect on social life in the near future, inaccessibility in many people bracket. E-government sites that provide web-based access and support often do not offer the potential to reach many users, including those who live in remote areas, have low literacy levels, or exist on poverty-line incomes. Some sort of hybrid system may be required to co-exist as the e-government journey transitions. Thus, inaccessibility is one of the drawbacks of new technology.
In conclusion, e-government can enhance citizen's services in many ways. Nevertheless, it also has a negative impact on many users.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In an ever-progressive society, there is a growing trend towards investment of authorities in new technicalities around the globe. This issue is due to the many benefits that the internet provides which affect many range of people in getting on well with unhackneyed automation.
Central to this issue is the point that advanced technology provides society with a large number of utilities. In other words, the Internet enables local communities, regions and, nations to develop, attract, retain and, expand job-creating businesses and institutions. It also improves the productivity and profitability of large, small and, home-based businesses and allows them to compete in local, national and global markets. By digitizing government services and information, e-government can streamline administrative processes, reduce paperwork, and save time and money. For example, electronic information systems are being applied in Vietnam and many countries around the world have contributed to demographic control. Hence, the ultimate goal of e-government is to provide an increased portfolio of public services to citizens in an efficient and cost-effective manner.
Perhaps, there are some witnesses who prove that ultramodern technology have a detrimental effect on social life in the near future, inaccessibility in many people bracket. E-government sites that provide web-based access and support often do not offer the potential to reach many users, including those who live in remote areas, have low literacy levels, or exist on poverty-line incomes. Some sort of hybrid system may be required to co-exist as the e-government journey transitions. Thus, inaccessibility is one of the drawbacks of new technology.
In conclusion, e-government can enhance citizen's services in many ways. Nevertheless, it also has a negative impact on many users.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In an ever-progressive society, there is a growing trend towards investment of authorities in new technicalities around the globe. This issue is due to the many benefits that the internet provides which affect many range of people in getting on well with unhackneyed automation.
Central to this issue is the point that advanced technology provides society with a large number of utilities. In other words, the Internet enables local communities, regions and, nations to develop, attract, retain and, expand job-creating businesses and institutions. It also improves the productivity and profitability of large, small and, home-based businesses and allows them to compete in local, national and global markets. By digitizing government services and information, e-government can streamline administrative processes, reduce paperwork, and save time and money. For example, electronic information systems are being applied in Vietnam and many countries around the world have contributed to demographic control. Hence, the ultimate goal of e-government is to provide an increased portfolio of public services to citizens in an efficient and cost-effective manner.
Perhaps, there are some witnesses who prove that ultramodern technology have a detrimental effect on social life in the near future, inaccessibility in many people bracket. E-government sites that provide web-based access and support often do not offer the potential to reach many users, including those who live in remote areas, have low literacy levels, or exist on poverty-line incomes. Some sort of hybrid system may be required to co-exist as the e-government journey transitions. Thus, inaccessibility is one of the drawbacks of new technology.
In conclusion, e-government can enhance citizen's services in many ways. Nevertheless, it also has a negative impact on many users.
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In an ever-progressive society, there is a growing trend towards investment of authorities in new technicalities around the globe. This issue is due to the many benefits that the internet provides which affect many range of people in getting on well with unhackneyed automation.
Central to this issue is the point that advanced technology provides society with a large number of utilities. In other words, the Internet enables local communities, regions and, nations to develop, attract, retain and, expand job-creating businesses and institutions. It also improves the productivity and profitability of large, small and, home-based businesses and allows them to compete in local, national and global markets. By digitizing government services and information, e-government can streamline administrative processes, reduce paperwork, and save time and money. For example, electronic information systems are being applied in Vietnam and many countries around the world have contributed to demographic control. Hence, the ultimate goal of e-government is to provide an increased portfolio of public services to citizens in an efficient and cost-effective manner.
Perhaps, there are some witnesses who prove that ultramodern technology have a detrimental effect on social life in the near future, inaccessibility in many people bracket. E-government sites that provide web-based access and support often do not offer the potential to reach many users, including those who live in remote areas, have low literacy levels, or exist on poverty-line incomes. Some sort of hybrid system may be required to co-exist as the e-government journey transitions. Thus, inaccessibility is one of the drawbacks of new technology.
In conclusion, e-government can enhance citizen's services in many ways. Nevertheless, it also has a negative impact on many users.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In an ever-progressive society, there is a growing trend towards investment of authorities in new technicalities around the globe. This issue is due to the many benefits that the internet provides which affect many range of people in getting on well with unhackneyed automation.
Central to this issue is the point that advanced technology provides society with a large number of utilities. In other words, the Internet enables local communities, regions and, nations to develop, attract, retain and, expand job-creating businesses and institutions. It also improves the productivity and profitability of large, small and, home-based businesses and allows them to compete in local, national and global markets. By digitizing government services and information, e-government can streamline administrative processes, reduce paperwork, and save time and money. For example, electronic information systems are being applied in Vietnam and many countries around the world have contributed to demographic control. Hence, the ultimate goal of e-government is to provide an increased portfolio of public services to citizens in an efficient and cost-effective manner.
Perhaps, there are some witnesses who prove that ultramodern technology have a detrimental effect on social life in the near future, inaccessibility in many people bracket. E-government sites that provide web-based access and support often do not offer the potential to reach many users, including those who live in remote areas, have low literacy levels, or exist on poverty-line incomes. Some sort of hybrid system may be required to co-exist as the e-government journey transitions. Thus, inaccessibility is one of the drawbacks of new technology.
In conclusion, e-government can enhance citizen's services in many ways. Nevertheless, it also has a negative impact on many users.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In an ever-progressive society, there is a growing trend towards investment of authorities in new technicalities around the globe. This issue is due to the many benefits that the internet provides which affect many range of people in getting on well with unhackneyed automation.
Central to this issue is the point that advanced technology provides society with a large number of utilities. In other words, the Internet enables local communities, regions and, nations to develop, attract, retain and, expand job-creating businesses and institutions. It also improves the productivity and profitability of large, small and, home-based businesses and allows them to compete in local, national and global markets. By digitizing government services and information, e-government can streamline administrative processes, reduce paperwork, and save time and money. For example, electronic information systems are being applied in Vietnam and many countries around the world have contributed to demographic control. Hence, the ultimate goal of e-government is to provide an increased portfolio of public services to citizens in an efficient and cost-effective manner.
Perhaps, there are some witnesses who prove that ultramodern technology have a detrimental effect on social life in the near future, inaccessibility in many people bracket. E-government sites that provide web-based access and support often do not offer the potential to reach many users, including those who live in remote areas, have low literacy levels, or exist on poverty-line incomes. Some sort of hybrid system may be required to co-exist as the e-government journey transitions. Thus, inaccessibility is one of the drawbacks of new technology.
In conclusion, e-government can enhance citizen's services in many ways. Nevertheless, it also has a negative impact on many users.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In an ever-progressive society, there is a growing trend towards investment of authorities in new technicalities around the globe. This issue is due to the many benefits that the internet provides which affect many range of people in getting on well with unhackneyed automation.
Central to this issue is the point that advanced technology provides society with a large number of utilities. In other words, the Internet enables local communities, regions and, nations to develop, attract, retain and, expand job-creating businesses and institutions. It also improves the productivity and profitability of large, small and, home-based businesses and allows them to compete in local, national and global markets. By digitizing government services and information, e-government can streamline administrative processes, reduce paperwork, and save time and money. For example, electronic information systems are being applied in Vietnam and many countries around the world have contributed to demographic control. Hence, the ultimate goal of e-government is to provide an increased portfolio of public services to citizens in an efficient and cost-effective manner.
Perhaps, there are some witnesses who prove that ultramodern technology have a detrimental effect on social life in the near future, inaccessibility in many people bracket. E-government sites that provide web-based access and support often do not offer the potential to reach many users, including those who live in remote areas, have low literacy levels, or exist on poverty-line incomes. Some sort of hybrid system may be required to co-exist as the e-government journey transitions. Thus, inaccessibility is one of the drawbacks of new technology.
In conclusion, e-government can enhance citizen's services in many ways. Nevertheless, it also has a negative impact on many users.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
Anwser:
In an ever-progressive society, there is a growing trend towards investment of authorities in new technicalities around the globe. This issue is due to the many benefits that the internet provides which affect many range of people in getting on well with unhackneyed automation.
Central to this issue is the point that advanced technology provides society with a large number of utilities. In other words, the Internet enables local communities, regions and, nations to develop, attract, retain and, expand job-creating businesses and institutions. It also improves the productivity and profitability of large, small and, home-based businesses and allows them to compete in local, national and global markets. By digitizing government services and information, e-government can streamline administrative processes, reduce paperwork, and save time and money. For example, electronic information systems are being applied in Vietnam and many countries around the world have contributed to demographic control. Hence, the ultimate goal of e-government is to provide an increased portfolio of public services to citizens in an efficient and cost-effective manner.
Perhaps, there are some witnesses who prove that ultramodern technology have a detrimental effect on social life in the near future, inaccessibility in many people bracket. E-government sites that provide web-based access and support often do not offer the potential to reach many users, including those who live in remote areas, have low literacy levels, or exist on poverty-line incomes. Some sort of hybrid system may be required to co-exist as the e-government journey transitions. Thus, inaccessibility is one of the drawbacks of new technology.
In conclusion, e-government can enhance citizen's services in many ways. Nevertheless, it also has a negative impact on many users.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people aim to achieve balance between work and life, but only a few people achieve it. What problems will be caused by poor work-life balance? How can its negative impacts be prevented?
Anwser:
A large number of the population try to gain a suitable balance between work and life, although, only a few number of them are able to achieve this goal. Depression and unsatisfied are feelings that those who can not achieve that balance have to deal with and they have to make a timetable and rules to control this occurrence.
To begin with, citizens when reaching adulthood, have to have a job for their life and find a good balance is essential for their well-being states. If they do not achieve this goal they might find themselves in an unhappy life that they did not follow their dream. The consequences that might happen are significant. For example, if adults cannot have their entertainment time and they ignore their basic needs they will face depression because the brain needs relaxation time and needs to recover itself. In addition, because of unsuitable work-life, they are not able to spend reasonable time with their family and friends and gradually they will show unsatisfied emotions about life.
To tackle this problem, it is vital to consider a plan that indicates our needs and how we can have access to them, for instance, in Iran most of the population and the government considered an agreement that an individual just can work for 8 hours a day and they cannot participate in the workplace more than this hours. Moreover, the company managers have to consider this restriction to let their employees have a happy life and the authorities have to monitor the company's behaviours with their staff and put limitations to control their actions.
In conclusion, in my opinion,having a reasonable work-life balance is one of the main rights of humanity and people have to find it by rules and timetables which are considered by the communities, if the population can not achieve that goal they might feel unwell and struggle with its consequences.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people aim to achieve balance between work and life, but only a few people achieve it. What problems will be caused by poor work-life balance? How can its negative impacts be prevented?
Anwser:
A large number of the population try to gain a suitable balance between work and life, although, only a few number of them are able to achieve this goal. Depression and unsatisfied are feelings that those who can not achieve that balance have to deal with and they have to make a timetable and rules to control this occurrence.
To begin with, citizens when reaching adulthood, have to have a job for their life and find a good balance is essential for their well-being states. If they do not achieve this goal they might find themselves in an unhappy life that they did not follow their dream. The consequences that might happen are significant. For example, if adults cannot have their entertainment time and they ignore their basic needs they will face depression because the brain needs relaxation time and needs to recover itself. In addition, because of unsuitable work-life, they are not able to spend reasonable time with their family and friends and gradually they will show unsatisfied emotions about life.
To tackle this problem, it is vital to consider a plan that indicates our needs and how we can have access to them, for instance, in Iran most of the population and the government considered an agreement that an individual just can work for 8 hours a day and they cannot participate in the workplace more than this hours. Moreover, the company managers have to consider this restriction to let their employees have a happy life and the authorities have to monitor the company's behaviours with their staff and put limitations to control their actions.
In conclusion, in my opinion,having a reasonable work-life balance is one of the main rights of humanity and people have to find it by rules and timetables which are considered by the communities, if the population can not achieve that goal they might feel unwell and struggle with its consequences.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people aim to achieve balance between work and life, but only a few people achieve it. What problems will be caused by poor work-life balance? How can its negative impacts be prevented?
Anwser:
A large number of the population try to gain a suitable balance between work and life, although, only a few number of them are able to achieve this goal. Depression and unsatisfied are feelings that those who can not achieve that balance have to deal with and they have to make a timetable and rules to control this occurrence.
To begin with, citizens when reaching adulthood, have to have a job for their life and find a good balance is essential for their well-being states. If they do not achieve this goal they might find themselves in an unhappy life that they did not follow their dream. The consequences that might happen are significant. For example, if adults cannot have their entertainment time and they ignore their basic needs they will face depression because the brain needs relaxation time and needs to recover itself. In addition, because of unsuitable work-life, they are not able to spend reasonable time with their family and friends and gradually they will show unsatisfied emotions about life.
To tackle this problem, it is vital to consider a plan that indicates our needs and how we can have access to them, for instance, in Iran most of the population and the government considered an agreement that an individual just can work for 8 hours a day and they cannot participate in the workplace more than this hours. Moreover, the company managers have to consider this restriction to let their employees have a happy life and the authorities have to monitor the company's behaviours with their staff and put limitations to control their actions.
In conclusion, in my opinion,having a reasonable work-life balance is one of the main rights of humanity and people have to find it by rules and timetables which are considered by the communities, if the population can not achieve that goal they might feel unwell and struggle with its consequences.
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people aim to achieve balance between work and life, but only a few people achieve it. What problems will be caused by poor work-life balance? How can its negative impacts be prevented?
Anwser:
A large number of the population try to gain a suitable balance between work and life, although, only a few number of them are able to achieve this goal. Depression and unsatisfied are feelings that those who can not achieve that balance have to deal with and they have to make a timetable and rules to control this occurrence.
To begin with, citizens when reaching adulthood, have to have a job for their life and find a good balance is essential for their well-being states. If they do not achieve this goal they might find themselves in an unhappy life that they did not follow their dream. The consequences that might happen are significant. For example, if adults cannot have their entertainment time and they ignore their basic needs they will face depression because the brain needs relaxation time and needs to recover itself. In addition, because of unsuitable work-life, they are not able to spend reasonable time with their family and friends and gradually they will show unsatisfied emotions about life.
To tackle this problem, it is vital to consider a plan that indicates our needs and how we can have access to them, for instance, in Iran most of the population and the government considered an agreement that an individual just can work for 8 hours a day and they cannot participate in the workplace more than this hours. Moreover, the company managers have to consider this restriction to let their employees have a happy life and the authorities have to monitor the company's behaviours with their staff and put limitations to control their actions.
In conclusion, in my opinion,having a reasonable work-life balance is one of the main rights of humanity and people have to find it by rules and timetables which are considered by the communities, if the population can not achieve that goal they might feel unwell and struggle with its consequences.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people aim to achieve balance between work and life, but only a few people achieve it. What problems will be caused by poor work-life balance? How can its negative impacts be prevented?
Anwser:
A large number of the population try to gain a suitable balance between work and life, although, only a few number of them are able to achieve this goal. Depression and unsatisfied are feelings that those who can not achieve that balance have to deal with and they have to make a timetable and rules to control this occurrence.
To begin with, citizens when reaching adulthood, have to have a job for their life and find a good balance is essential for their well-being states. If they do not achieve this goal they might find themselves in an unhappy life that they did not follow their dream. The consequences that might happen are significant. For example, if adults cannot have their entertainment time and they ignore their basic needs they will face depression because the brain needs relaxation time and needs to recover itself. In addition, because of unsuitable work-life, they are not able to spend reasonable time with their family and friends and gradually they will show unsatisfied emotions about life.
To tackle this problem, it is vital to consider a plan that indicates our needs and how we can have access to them, for instance, in Iran most of the population and the government considered an agreement that an individual just can work for 8 hours a day and they cannot participate in the workplace more than this hours. Moreover, the company managers have to consider this restriction to let their employees have a happy life and the authorities have to monitor the company's behaviours with their staff and put limitations to control their actions.
In conclusion, in my opinion,having a reasonable work-life balance is one of the main rights of humanity and people have to find it by rules and timetables which are considered by the communities, if the population can not achieve that goal they might feel unwell and struggle with its consequences.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people aim to achieve balance between work and life, but only a few people achieve it. What problems will be caused by poor work-life balance? How can its negative impacts be prevented?
Anwser:
A large number of the population try to gain a suitable balance between work and life, although, only a few number of them are able to achieve this goal. Depression and unsatisfied are feelings that those who can not achieve that balance have to deal with and they have to make a timetable and rules to control this occurrence.
To begin with, citizens when reaching adulthood, have to have a job for their life and find a good balance is essential for their well-being states. If they do not achieve this goal they might find themselves in an unhappy life that they did not follow their dream. The consequences that might happen are significant. For example, if adults cannot have their entertainment time and they ignore their basic needs they will face depression because the brain needs relaxation time and needs to recover itself. In addition, because of unsuitable work-life, they are not able to spend reasonable time with their family and friends and gradually they will show unsatisfied emotions about life.
To tackle this problem, it is vital to consider a plan that indicates our needs and how we can have access to them, for instance, in Iran most of the population and the government considered an agreement that an individual just can work for 8 hours a day and they cannot participate in the workplace more than this hours. Moreover, the company managers have to consider this restriction to let their employees have a happy life and the authorities have to monitor the company's behaviours with their staff and put limitations to control their actions.
In conclusion, in my opinion,having a reasonable work-life balance is one of the main rights of humanity and people have to find it by rules and timetables which are considered by the communities, if the population can not achieve that goal they might feel unwell and struggle with its consequences.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people aim to achieve balance between work and life, but only a few people achieve it. What problems will be caused by poor work-life balance? How can its negative impacts be prevented?
Anwser:
A large number of the population try to gain a suitable balance between work and life, although, only a few number of them are able to achieve this goal. Depression and unsatisfied are feelings that those who can not achieve that balance have to deal with and they have to make a timetable and rules to control this occurrence.
To begin with, citizens when reaching adulthood, have to have a job for their life and find a good balance is essential for their well-being states. If they do not achieve this goal they might find themselves in an unhappy life that they did not follow their dream. The consequences that might happen are significant. For example, if adults cannot have their entertainment time and they ignore their basic needs they will face depression because the brain needs relaxation time and needs to recover itself. In addition, because of unsuitable work-life, they are not able to spend reasonable time with their family and friends and gradually they will show unsatisfied emotions about life.
To tackle this problem, it is vital to consider a plan that indicates our needs and how we can have access to them, for instance, in Iran most of the population and the government considered an agreement that an individual just can work for 8 hours a day and they cannot participate in the workplace more than this hours. Moreover, the company managers have to consider this restriction to let their employees have a happy life and the authorities have to monitor the company's behaviours with their staff and put limitations to control their actions.
In conclusion, in my opinion,having a reasonable work-life balance is one of the main rights of humanity and people have to find it by rules and timetables which are considered by the communities, if the population can not achieve that goal they might feel unwell and struggle with its consequences.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Many people aim to achieve balance between work and life, but only a few people achieve it. What problems will be caused by poor work-life balance? How can its negative impacts be prevented?
Anwser:
A large number of the population try to gain a suitable balance between work and life, although, only a few number of them are able to achieve this goal. Depression and unsatisfied are feelings that those who can not achieve that balance have to deal with and they have to make a timetable and rules to control this occurrence.
To begin with, citizens when reaching adulthood, have to have a job for their life and find a good balance is essential for their well-being states. If they do not achieve this goal they might find themselves in an unhappy life that they did not follow their dream. The consequences that might happen are significant. For example, if adults cannot have their entertainment time and they ignore their basic needs they will face depression because the brain needs relaxation time and needs to recover itself. In addition, because of unsuitable work-life, they are not able to spend reasonable time with their family and friends and gradually they will show unsatisfied emotions about life.
To tackle this problem, it is vital to consider a plan that indicates our needs and how we can have access to them, for instance, in Iran most of the population and the government considered an agreement that an individual just can work for 8 hours a day and they cannot participate in the workplace more than this hours. Moreover, the company managers have to consider this restriction to let their employees have a happy life and the authorities have to monitor the company's behaviours with their staff and put limitations to control their actions.
In conclusion, in my opinion,having a reasonable work-life balance is one of the main rights of humanity and people have to find it by rules and timetables which are considered by the communities, if the population can not achieve that goal they might feel unwell and struggle with its consequences.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Global warming is one of the one of the biggest threats human face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing at the alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Anwser:
Global warming has become one of the most urgent challenges in recent years which is caused by humans and the release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. This essay will dig into this phenomenon, including the impacts of this and giving temporary solutions.
To begin with, there is an indisputable fact that global warming is the main reason which leads to high temperatures. We can clearly see that after each year, the average temperatures rise more than one to two degrees Celsius causing extreme heat weather and melting ice. More importantly, with the ascending sea levels, storms and hurricane events, humans will deal with the loss of land for residential and farming. As a result, not only agriculture will be affected in a negative way, but the habitation will also be challenging in the near future.
Turning to the way to tackle this issue, some solutions could be mentioned. First and foremost, establishing flood barriers can curb water incursion into residential areas. In addition, governments can encourage their citizens to optimize the amount of pollution emissions by supporting finance for renewable energy resources such as wind energy, solar energy, etc,... For example, in many developing countries such as the UK, by operating these renewable systems over two decades, these resources have reduced the burden of the missing energies, replacing most fossil fuels and contributing nearly half of the electricity mix.
In conclusion, the needs of each individual and government are urgent. By giving efficient strategies and making numerous efforts, our community can solve this difficult threat.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
Global warming is one of the one of the biggest threats human face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing at the alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Anwser:
Global warming has become one of the most urgent challenges in recent years which is caused by humans and the release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. This essay will dig into this phenomenon, including the impacts of this and giving temporary solutions.
To begin with, there is an indisputable fact that global warming is the main reason which leads to high temperatures. We can clearly see that after each year, the average temperatures rise more than one to two degrees Celsius causing extreme heat weather and melting ice. More importantly, with the ascending sea levels, storms and hurricane events, humans will deal with the loss of land for residential and farming. As a result, not only agriculture will be affected in a negative way, but the habitation will also be challenging in the near future.
Turning to the way to tackle this issue, some solutions could be mentioned. First and foremost, establishing flood barriers can curb water incursion into residential areas. In addition, governments can encourage their citizens to optimize the amount of pollution emissions by supporting finance for renewable energy resources such as wind energy, solar energy, etc,... For example, in many developing countries such as the UK, by operating these renewable systems over two decades, these resources have reduced the burden of the missing energies, replacing most fossil fuels and contributing nearly half of the electricity mix.
In conclusion, the needs of each individual and government are urgent. By giving efficient strategies and making numerous efforts, our community can solve this difficult threat.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Global warming is one of the one of the biggest threats human face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing at the alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Anwser:
Global warming has become one of the most urgent challenges in recent years which is caused by humans and the release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. This essay will dig into this phenomenon, including the impacts of this and giving temporary solutions.
To begin with, there is an indisputable fact that global warming is the main reason which leads to high temperatures. We can clearly see that after each year, the average temperatures rise more than one to two degrees Celsius causing extreme heat weather and melting ice. More importantly, with the ascending sea levels, storms and hurricane events, humans will deal with the loss of land for residential and farming. As a result, not only agriculture will be affected in a negative way, but the habitation will also be challenging in the near future.
Turning to the way to tackle this issue, some solutions could be mentioned. First and foremost, establishing flood barriers can curb water incursion into residential areas. In addition, governments can encourage their citizens to optimize the amount of pollution emissions by supporting finance for renewable energy resources such as wind energy, solar energy, etc,... For example, in many developing countries such as the UK, by operating these renewable systems over two decades, these resources have reduced the burden of the missing energies, replacing most fossil fuels and contributing nearly half of the electricity mix.
In conclusion, the needs of each individual and government are urgent. By giving efficient strategies and making numerous efforts, our community can solve this difficult threat.
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Your lexical resource score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
Global warming is one of the one of the biggest threats human face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing at the alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Anwser:
Global warming has become one of the most urgent challenges in recent years which is caused by humans and the release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. This essay will dig into this phenomenon, including the impacts of this and giving temporary solutions.
To begin with, there is an indisputable fact that global warming is the main reason which leads to high temperatures. We can clearly see that after each year, the average temperatures rise more than one to two degrees Celsius causing extreme heat weather and melting ice. More importantly, with the ascending sea levels, storms and hurricane events, humans will deal with the loss of land for residential and farming. As a result, not only agriculture will be affected in a negative way, but the habitation will also be challenging in the near future.
Turning to the way to tackle this issue, some solutions could be mentioned. First and foremost, establishing flood barriers can curb water incursion into residential areas. In addition, governments can encourage their citizens to optimize the amount of pollution emissions by supporting finance for renewable energy resources such as wind energy, solar energy, etc,... For example, in many developing countries such as the UK, by operating these renewable systems over two decades, these resources have reduced the burden of the missing energies, replacing most fossil fuels and contributing nearly half of the electricity mix.
In conclusion, the needs of each individual and government are urgent. By giving efficient strategies and making numerous efforts, our community can solve this difficult threat.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Global warming is one of the one of the biggest threats human face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing at the alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Anwser:
Global warming has become one of the most urgent challenges in recent years which is caused by humans and the release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. This essay will dig into this phenomenon, including the impacts of this and giving temporary solutions.
To begin with, there is an indisputable fact that global warming is the main reason which leads to high temperatures. We can clearly see that after each year, the average temperatures rise more than one to two degrees Celsius causing extreme heat weather and melting ice. More importantly, with the ascending sea levels, storms and hurricane events, humans will deal with the loss of land for residential and farming. As a result, not only agriculture will be affected in a negative way, but the habitation will also be challenging in the near future.
Turning to the way to tackle this issue, some solutions could be mentioned. First and foremost, establishing flood barriers can curb water incursion into residential areas. In addition, governments can encourage their citizens to optimize the amount of pollution emissions by supporting finance for renewable energy resources such as wind energy, solar energy, etc,... For example, in many developing countries such as the UK, by operating these renewable systems over two decades, these resources have reduced the burden of the missing energies, replacing most fossil fuels and contributing nearly half of the electricity mix.
In conclusion, the needs of each individual and government are urgent. By giving efficient strategies and making numerous efforts, our community can solve this difficult threat.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
Global warming is one of the one of the biggest threats human face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing at the alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Anwser:
Global warming has become one of the most urgent challenges in recent years which is caused by humans and the release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. This essay will dig into this phenomenon, including the impacts of this and giving temporary solutions.
To begin with, there is an indisputable fact that global warming is the main reason which leads to high temperatures. We can clearly see that after each year, the average temperatures rise more than one to two degrees Celsius causing extreme heat weather and melting ice. More importantly, with the ascending sea levels, storms and hurricane events, humans will deal with the loss of land for residential and farming. As a result, not only agriculture will be affected in a negative way, but the habitation will also be challenging in the near future.
Turning to the way to tackle this issue, some solutions could be mentioned. First and foremost, establishing flood barriers can curb water incursion into residential areas. In addition, governments can encourage their citizens to optimize the amount of pollution emissions by supporting finance for renewable energy resources such as wind energy, solar energy, etc,... For example, in many developing countries such as the UK, by operating these renewable systems over two decades, these resources have reduced the burden of the missing energies, replacing most fossil fuels and contributing nearly half of the electricity mix.
In conclusion, the needs of each individual and government are urgent. By giving efficient strategies and making numerous efforts, our community can solve this difficult threat.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Global warming is one of the one of the biggest threats human face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing at the alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Anwser:
Global warming has become one of the most urgent challenges in recent years which is caused by humans and the release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. This essay will dig into this phenomenon, including the impacts of this and giving temporary solutions.
To begin with, there is an indisputable fact that global warming is the main reason which leads to high temperatures. We can clearly see that after each year, the average temperatures rise more than one to two degrees Celsius causing extreme heat weather and melting ice. More importantly, with the ascending sea levels, storms and hurricane events, humans will deal with the loss of land for residential and farming. As a result, not only agriculture will be affected in a negative way, but the habitation will also be challenging in the near future.
Turning to the way to tackle this issue, some solutions could be mentioned. First and foremost, establishing flood barriers can curb water incursion into residential areas. In addition, governments can encourage their citizens to optimize the amount of pollution emissions by supporting finance for renewable energy resources such as wind energy, solar energy, etc,... For example, in many developing countries such as the UK, by operating these renewable systems over two decades, these resources have reduced the burden of the missing energies, replacing most fossil fuels and contributing nearly half of the electricity mix.
In conclusion, the needs of each individual and government are urgent. By giving efficient strategies and making numerous efforts, our community can solve this difficult threat.
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Your task achievement score is 6.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
Global warming is one of the one of the biggest threats human face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing at the alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Anwser:
Global warming has become one of the most urgent challenges in recent years which is caused by humans and the release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. This essay will dig into this phenomenon, including the impacts of this and giving temporary solutions.
To begin with, there is an indisputable fact that global warming is the main reason which leads to high temperatures. We can clearly see that after each year, the average temperatures rise more than one to two degrees Celsius causing extreme heat weather and melting ice. More importantly, with the ascending sea levels, storms and hurricane events, humans will deal with the loss of land for residential and farming. As a result, not only agriculture will be affected in a negative way, but the habitation will also be challenging in the near future.
Turning to the way to tackle this issue, some solutions could be mentioned. First and foremost, establishing flood barriers can curb water incursion into residential areas. In addition, governments can encourage their citizens to optimize the amount of pollution emissions by supporting finance for renewable energy resources such as wind energy, solar energy, etc,... For example, in many developing countries such as the UK, by operating these renewable systems over two decades, these resources have reduced the burden of the missing energies, replacing most fossil fuels and contributing nearly half of the electricity mix.
In conclusion, the needs of each individual and government are urgent. By giving efficient strategies and making numerous efforts, our community can solve this difficult threat.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 6.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
People are living much longer than before, and this creates enormous pressure on government services. What are some of the effects of a much larger, older population and what can governments do to deal with this problem?
Anwser:
The recent advancement of science and medical treatments resulted in an increased human life expectancy. Conversely, if the aged population rises it creates challenges for the government such as increased expenditure on healthcare and retirement pensions. This essay will discuss the effects and solutions that can support governments in addressing this issue.
Nowadays, people are undoubtedly living more due to the progress of science and technology that allows humans to receive different treatments to heal diseases that in the past were uncurable. Although this is incredible progress for human beings, the impacts of having an increased aged population are significant. The elderly group usually receive retirement funds mostly paid by the government in most of the countries. In other words, this means that if more individuals are getting older, the government must spend more money to pay monthly pensions to retired citizens. In addition, aged citizens often require more health assistance which means an increased demand for public health resources such as hospitals, nurses and doctors. Hence, if nations are not prepared it can result in a health system collapse.
To tackle this issue, authority leaders must start planning the future of their society in advance. An effective way to prevent the pressure caused by the aged community is to review compulsory contributions made by the current workforce and companies to retirement funds. A tiny monthly increase in the percentage allocated to retiring plans can successfully relieve governmental financial pressures. Likewise, considering that humans are more active, increasing the number of years workers need to work before retiring can be an effective measure. In countries such as Brazil and Australia, for instance, authorities are currently reviewing working time conditions and laws to prevent future public wealth collapses caused by the predicted rise of the elderly.
In conclusion, a large aged community can create challenges for governments such as high costs to pay retirement wages and pressure on the healthcare system. To solve these challenges, nations must invest in planning, reforming laws and work time during life, and increasing the percentage of retirement funds contribution and the number of years.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
People are living much longer than before, and this creates enormous pressure on government services. What are some of the effects of a much larger, older population and what can governments do to deal with this problem?
Anwser:
The recent advancement of science and medical treatments resulted in an increased human life expectancy. Conversely, if the aged population rises it creates challenges for the government such as increased expenditure on healthcare and retirement pensions. This essay will discuss the effects and solutions that can support governments in addressing this issue.
Nowadays, people are undoubtedly living more due to the progress of science and technology that allows humans to receive different treatments to heal diseases that in the past were uncurable. Although this is incredible progress for human beings, the impacts of having an increased aged population are significant. The elderly group usually receive retirement funds mostly paid by the government in most of the countries. In other words, this means that if more individuals are getting older, the government must spend more money to pay monthly pensions to retired citizens. In addition, aged citizens often require more health assistance which means an increased demand for public health resources such as hospitals, nurses and doctors. Hence, if nations are not prepared it can result in a health system collapse.
To tackle this issue, authority leaders must start planning the future of their society in advance. An effective way to prevent the pressure caused by the aged community is to review compulsory contributions made by the current workforce and companies to retirement funds. A tiny monthly increase in the percentage allocated to retiring plans can successfully relieve governmental financial pressures. Likewise, considering that humans are more active, increasing the number of years workers need to work before retiring can be an effective measure. In countries such as Brazil and Australia, for instance, authorities are currently reviewing working time conditions and laws to prevent future public wealth collapses caused by the predicted rise of the elderly.
In conclusion, a large aged community can create challenges for governments such as high costs to pay retirement wages and pressure on the healthcare system. To solve these challenges, nations must invest in planning, reforming laws and work time during life, and increasing the percentage of retirement funds contribution and the number of years.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
People are living much longer than before, and this creates enormous pressure on government services. What are some of the effects of a much larger, older population and what can governments do to deal with this problem?
Anwser:
The recent advancement of science and medical treatments resulted in an increased human life expectancy. Conversely, if the aged population rises it creates challenges for the government such as increased expenditure on healthcare and retirement pensions. This essay will discuss the effects and solutions that can support governments in addressing this issue.
Nowadays, people are undoubtedly living more due to the progress of science and technology that allows humans to receive different treatments to heal diseases that in the past were uncurable. Although this is incredible progress for human beings, the impacts of having an increased aged population are significant. The elderly group usually receive retirement funds mostly paid by the government in most of the countries. In other words, this means that if more individuals are getting older, the government must spend more money to pay monthly pensions to retired citizens. In addition, aged citizens often require more health assistance which means an increased demand for public health resources such as hospitals, nurses and doctors. Hence, if nations are not prepared it can result in a health system collapse.
To tackle this issue, authority leaders must start planning the future of their society in advance. An effective way to prevent the pressure caused by the aged community is to review compulsory contributions made by the current workforce and companies to retirement funds. A tiny monthly increase in the percentage allocated to retiring plans can successfully relieve governmental financial pressures. Likewise, considering that humans are more active, increasing the number of years workers need to work before retiring can be an effective measure. In countries such as Brazil and Australia, for instance, authorities are currently reviewing working time conditions and laws to prevent future public wealth collapses caused by the predicted rise of the elderly.
In conclusion, a large aged community can create challenges for governments such as high costs to pay retirement wages and pressure on the healthcare system. To solve these challenges, nations must invest in planning, reforming laws and work time during life, and increasing the percentage of retirement funds contribution and the number of years.
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Your lexical resource score is 8.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
People are living much longer than before, and this creates enormous pressure on government services. What are some of the effects of a much larger, older population and what can governments do to deal with this problem?
Anwser:
The recent advancement of science and medical treatments resulted in an increased human life expectancy. Conversely, if the aged population rises it creates challenges for the government such as increased expenditure on healthcare and retirement pensions. This essay will discuss the effects and solutions that can support governments in addressing this issue.
Nowadays, people are undoubtedly living more due to the progress of science and technology that allows humans to receive different treatments to heal diseases that in the past were uncurable. Although this is incredible progress for human beings, the impacts of having an increased aged population are significant. The elderly group usually receive retirement funds mostly paid by the government in most of the countries. In other words, this means that if more individuals are getting older, the government must spend more money to pay monthly pensions to retired citizens. In addition, aged citizens often require more health assistance which means an increased demand for public health resources such as hospitals, nurses and doctors. Hence, if nations are not prepared it can result in a health system collapse.
To tackle this issue, authority leaders must start planning the future of their society in advance. An effective way to prevent the pressure caused by the aged community is to review compulsory contributions made by the current workforce and companies to retirement funds. A tiny monthly increase in the percentage allocated to retiring plans can successfully relieve governmental financial pressures. Likewise, considering that humans are more active, increasing the number of years workers need to work before retiring can be an effective measure. In countries such as Brazil and Australia, for instance, authorities are currently reviewing working time conditions and laws to prevent future public wealth collapses caused by the predicted rise of the elderly.
In conclusion, a large aged community can create challenges for governments such as high costs to pay retirement wages and pressure on the healthcare system. To solve these challenges, nations must invest in planning, reforming laws and work time during life, and increasing the percentage of retirement funds contribution and the number of years.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 8.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
People are living much longer than before, and this creates enormous pressure on government services. What are some of the effects of a much larger, older population and what can governments do to deal with this problem?
Anwser:
The recent advancement of science and medical treatments resulted in an increased human life expectancy. Conversely, if the aged population rises it creates challenges for the government such as increased expenditure on healthcare and retirement pensions. This essay will discuss the effects and solutions that can support governments in addressing this issue.
Nowadays, people are undoubtedly living more due to the progress of science and technology that allows humans to receive different treatments to heal diseases that in the past were uncurable. Although this is incredible progress for human beings, the impacts of having an increased aged population are significant. The elderly group usually receive retirement funds mostly paid by the government in most of the countries. In other words, this means that if more individuals are getting older, the government must spend more money to pay monthly pensions to retired citizens. In addition, aged citizens often require more health assistance which means an increased demand for public health resources such as hospitals, nurses and doctors. Hence, if nations are not prepared it can result in a health system collapse.
To tackle this issue, authority leaders must start planning the future of their society in advance. An effective way to prevent the pressure caused by the aged community is to review compulsory contributions made by the current workforce and companies to retirement funds. A tiny monthly increase in the percentage allocated to retiring plans can successfully relieve governmental financial pressures. Likewise, considering that humans are more active, increasing the number of years workers need to work before retiring can be an effective measure. In countries such as Brazil and Australia, for instance, authorities are currently reviewing working time conditions and laws to prevent future public wealth collapses caused by the predicted rise of the elderly.
In conclusion, a large aged community can create challenges for governments such as high costs to pay retirement wages and pressure on the healthcare system. To solve these challenges, nations must invest in planning, reforming laws and work time during life, and increasing the percentage of retirement funds contribution and the number of years.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
People are living much longer than before, and this creates enormous pressure on government services. What are some of the effects of a much larger, older population and what can governments do to deal with this problem?
Anwser:
The recent advancement of science and medical treatments resulted in an increased human life expectancy. Conversely, if the aged population rises it creates challenges for the government such as increased expenditure on healthcare and retirement pensions. This essay will discuss the effects and solutions that can support governments in addressing this issue.
Nowadays, people are undoubtedly living more due to the progress of science and technology that allows humans to receive different treatments to heal diseases that in the past were uncurable. Although this is incredible progress for human beings, the impacts of having an increased aged population are significant. The elderly group usually receive retirement funds mostly paid by the government in most of the countries. In other words, this means that if more individuals are getting older, the government must spend more money to pay monthly pensions to retired citizens. In addition, aged citizens often require more health assistance which means an increased demand for public health resources such as hospitals, nurses and doctors. Hence, if nations are not prepared it can result in a health system collapse.
To tackle this issue, authority leaders must start planning the future of their society in advance. An effective way to prevent the pressure caused by the aged community is to review compulsory contributions made by the current workforce and companies to retirement funds. A tiny monthly increase in the percentage allocated to retiring plans can successfully relieve governmental financial pressures. Likewise, considering that humans are more active, increasing the number of years workers need to work before retiring can be an effective measure. In countries such as Brazil and Australia, for instance, authorities are currently reviewing working time conditions and laws to prevent future public wealth collapses caused by the predicted rise of the elderly.
In conclusion, a large aged community can create challenges for governments such as high costs to pay retirement wages and pressure on the healthcare system. To solve these challenges, nations must invest in planning, reforming laws and work time during life, and increasing the percentage of retirement funds contribution and the number of years.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
People are living much longer than before, and this creates enormous pressure on government services. What are some of the effects of a much larger, older population and what can governments do to deal with this problem?
Anwser:
The recent advancement of science and medical treatments resulted in an increased human life expectancy. Conversely, if the aged population rises it creates challenges for the government such as increased expenditure on healthcare and retirement pensions. This essay will discuss the effects and solutions that can support governments in addressing this issue.
Nowadays, people are undoubtedly living more due to the progress of science and technology that allows humans to receive different treatments to heal diseases that in the past were uncurable. Although this is incredible progress for human beings, the impacts of having an increased aged population are significant. The elderly group usually receive retirement funds mostly paid by the government in most of the countries. In other words, this means that if more individuals are getting older, the government must spend more money to pay monthly pensions to retired citizens. In addition, aged citizens often require more health assistance which means an increased demand for public health resources such as hospitals, nurses and doctors. Hence, if nations are not prepared it can result in a health system collapse.
To tackle this issue, authority leaders must start planning the future of their society in advance. An effective way to prevent the pressure caused by the aged community is to review compulsory contributions made by the current workforce and companies to retirement funds. A tiny monthly increase in the percentage allocated to retiring plans can successfully relieve governmental financial pressures. Likewise, considering that humans are more active, increasing the number of years workers need to work before retiring can be an effective measure. In countries such as Brazil and Australia, for instance, authorities are currently reviewing working time conditions and laws to prevent future public wealth collapses caused by the predicted rise of the elderly.
In conclusion, a large aged community can create challenges for governments such as high costs to pay retirement wages and pressure on the healthcare system. To solve these challenges, nations must invest in planning, reforming laws and work time during life, and increasing the percentage of retirement funds contribution and the number of years.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
People are living much longer than before, and this creates enormous pressure on government services. What are some of the effects of a much larger, older population and what can governments do to deal with this problem?
Anwser:
The recent advancement of science and medical treatments resulted in an increased human life expectancy. Conversely, if the aged population rises it creates challenges for the government such as increased expenditure on healthcare and retirement pensions. This essay will discuss the effects and solutions that can support governments in addressing this issue.
Nowadays, people are undoubtedly living more due to the progress of science and technology that allows humans to receive different treatments to heal diseases that in the past were uncurable. Although this is incredible progress for human beings, the impacts of having an increased aged population are significant. The elderly group usually receive retirement funds mostly paid by the government in most of the countries. In other words, this means that if more individuals are getting older, the government must spend more money to pay monthly pensions to retired citizens. In addition, aged citizens often require more health assistance which means an increased demand for public health resources such as hospitals, nurses and doctors. Hence, if nations are not prepared it can result in a health system collapse.
To tackle this issue, authority leaders must start planning the future of their society in advance. An effective way to prevent the pressure caused by the aged community is to review compulsory contributions made by the current workforce and companies to retirement funds. A tiny monthly increase in the percentage allocated to retiring plans can successfully relieve governmental financial pressures. Likewise, considering that humans are more active, increasing the number of years workers need to work before retiring can be an effective measure. In countries such as Brazil and Australia, for instance, authorities are currently reviewing working time conditions and laws to prevent future public wealth collapses caused by the predicted rise of the elderly.
In conclusion, a large aged community can create challenges for governments such as high costs to pay retirement wages and pressure on the healthcare system. To solve these challenges, nations must invest in planning, reforming laws and work time during life, and increasing the percentage of retirement funds contribution and the number of years.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
Anwser:
In many nations, despite becoming wealthier, healthier and living for a long time, youngsters do not feel happy. It seems this issue stems from two main reasons and some actions should be taken to address it fully.
it is generally acknowledged that young generations make a busy lifestyle for themselves and do not allocate enough time to even think about things that make them feel better. This gradually kills their emotions and transforms them into a machine. For instance, we witness some well-off people who live like robots and do not consider anything but earning money. Additionally, this wealth brings some major problems to their personal lives along with comfort. They assume everyone is a rival and try to win an imaginary competition. It can therefore be concluded that money increases the quality of their life but omits their happiness.
It is widely accepted that they need someone to contribute to them with their daily tasks. These individuals are not able to confront all of the problems stemming from their wealth. Moreover, they must have a plan for their life including spending time with their loved ones, their hobbies, attending parties and so on. In this way, they do not allow stress enters to their life and influence them. As an illustration, successful company owners have a knowledgeable consultant to think about difficulties and suggest proper solutions.
Consequently, nowadays it can be seen some people earn a considerable amount of money and live healthier and longer, but with no signs of fullness. Two main causes and their relevant solutions are discussed in this essay which can help people get rid of negative emotions led by the mentioned issue.
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Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Focus on the logical structure, presence of introduction and conclusion,supported main points, accurate use of linking words, and variety in linking words to give coherence and cohesion score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your coherence and cohesion score is <score>'. For example: Your coherence and cohesion score is 6.5
Now, please give coherence and cohesion score for the following essay:
Question:
In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
Anwser:
In many nations, despite becoming wealthier, healthier and living for a long time, youngsters do not feel happy. It seems this issue stems from two main reasons and some actions should be taken to address it fully.
it is generally acknowledged that young generations make a busy lifestyle for themselves and do not allocate enough time to even think about things that make them feel better. This gradually kills their emotions and transforms them into a machine. For instance, we witness some well-off people who live like robots and do not consider anything but earning money. Additionally, this wealth brings some major problems to their personal lives along with comfort. They assume everyone is a rival and try to win an imaginary competition. It can therefore be concluded that money increases the quality of their life but omits their happiness.
It is widely accepted that they need someone to contribute to them with their daily tasks. These individuals are not able to confront all of the problems stemming from their wealth. Moreover, they must have a plan for their life including spending time with their loved ones, their hobbies, attending parties and so on. In this way, they do not allow stress enters to their life and influence them. As an illustration, successful company owners have a knowledgeable consultant to think about difficulties and suggest proper solutions.
Consequently, nowadays it can be seen some people earn a considerable amount of money and live healthier and longer, but with no signs of fullness. Two main causes and their relevant solutions are discussed in this essay which can help people get rid of negative emotions led by the mentioned issue.
[/INST]Your coherence and cohesion score is 7.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
Anwser:
In many nations, despite becoming wealthier, healthier and living for a long time, youngsters do not feel happy. It seems this issue stems from two main reasons and some actions should be taken to address it fully.
it is generally acknowledged that young generations make a busy lifestyle for themselves and do not allocate enough time to even think about things that make them feel better. This gradually kills their emotions and transforms them into a machine. For instance, we witness some well-off people who live like robots and do not consider anything but earning money. Additionally, this wealth brings some major problems to their personal lives along with comfort. They assume everyone is a rival and try to win an imaginary competition. It can therefore be concluded that money increases the quality of their life but omits their happiness.
It is widely accepted that they need someone to contribute to them with their daily tasks. These individuals are not able to confront all of the problems stemming from their wealth. Moreover, they must have a plan for their life including spending time with their loved ones, their hobbies, attending parties and so on. In this way, they do not allow stress enters to their life and influence them. As an illustration, successful company owners have a knowledgeable consultant to think about difficulties and suggest proper solutions.
Consequently, nowadays it can be seen some people earn a considerable amount of money and live healthier and longer, but with no signs of fullness. Two main causes and their relevant solutions are discussed in this essay which can help people get rid of negative emotions led by the mentioned issue.
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Your lexical resource score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Emphasize varied vocabulary, accurate spelling, and proper word formation to give lexical resource score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your lexical resource score is <score>'. For example: Your lexical resource score is 6.5
Now, please give lexical resource score for the following essay:
Question:
In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
Anwser:
In many nations, despite becoming wealthier, healthier and living for a long time, youngsters do not feel happy. It seems this issue stems from two main reasons and some actions should be taken to address it fully.
it is generally acknowledged that young generations make a busy lifestyle for themselves and do not allocate enough time to even think about things that make them feel better. This gradually kills their emotions and transforms them into a machine. For instance, we witness some well-off people who live like robots and do not consider anything but earning money. Additionally, this wealth brings some major problems to their personal lives along with comfort. They assume everyone is a rival and try to win an imaginary competition. It can therefore be concluded that money increases the quality of their life but omits their happiness.
It is widely accepted that they need someone to contribute to them with their daily tasks. These individuals are not able to confront all of the problems stemming from their wealth. Moreover, they must have a plan for their life including spending time with their loved ones, their hobbies, attending parties and so on. In this way, they do not allow stress enters to their life and influence them. As an illustration, successful company owners have a knowledgeable consultant to think about difficulties and suggest proper solutions.
Consequently, nowadays it can be seen some people earn a considerable amount of money and live healthier and longer, but with no signs of fullness. Two main causes and their relevant solutions are discussed in this essay which can help people get rid of negative emotions led by the mentioned issue.
[/INST]Your lexical resource score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
Anwser:
In many nations, despite becoming wealthier, healthier and living for a long time, youngsters do not feel happy. It seems this issue stems from two main reasons and some actions should be taken to address it fully.
it is generally acknowledged that young generations make a busy lifestyle for themselves and do not allocate enough time to even think about things that make them feel better. This gradually kills their emotions and transforms them into a machine. For instance, we witness some well-off people who live like robots and do not consider anything but earning money. Additionally, this wealth brings some major problems to their personal lives along with comfort. They assume everyone is a rival and try to win an imaginary competition. It can therefore be concluded that money increases the quality of their life but omits their happiness.
It is widely accepted that they need someone to contribute to them with their daily tasks. These individuals are not able to confront all of the problems stemming from their wealth. Moreover, they must have a plan for their life including spending time with their loved ones, their hobbies, attending parties and so on. In this way, they do not allow stress enters to their life and influence them. As an illustration, successful company owners have a knowledgeable consultant to think about difficulties and suggest proper solutions.
Consequently, nowadays it can be seen some people earn a considerable amount of money and live healthier and longer, but with no signs of fullness. Two main causes and their relevant solutions are discussed in this essay which can help people get rid of negative emotions led by the mentioned issue.
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Your grammatical range score is 9.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Use a mix of complex and simple sentences, ensuring clear and correct grammar to give grammatical range score for the essay. The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your grammatical range score is <score>'. For example: Your grammatical range score is 6.5
Now, please give grammatical range score for the following essay:
Question:
In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
Anwser:
In many nations, despite becoming wealthier, healthier and living for a long time, youngsters do not feel happy. It seems this issue stems from two main reasons and some actions should be taken to address it fully.
it is generally acknowledged that young generations make a busy lifestyle for themselves and do not allocate enough time to even think about things that make them feel better. This gradually kills their emotions and transforms them into a machine. For instance, we witness some well-off people who live like robots and do not consider anything but earning money. Additionally, this wealth brings some major problems to their personal lives along with comfort. They assume everyone is a rival and try to win an imaginary competition. It can therefore be concluded that money increases the quality of their life but omits their happiness.
It is widely accepted that they need someone to contribute to them with their daily tasks. These individuals are not able to confront all of the problems stemming from their wealth. Moreover, they must have a plan for their life including spending time with their loved ones, their hobbies, attending parties and so on. In this way, they do not allow stress enters to their life and influence them. As an illustration, successful company owners have a knowledgeable consultant to think about difficulties and suggest proper solutions.
Consequently, nowadays it can be seen some people earn a considerable amount of money and live healthier and longer, but with no signs of fullness. Two main causes and their relevant solutions are discussed in this essay which can help people get rid of negative emotions led by the mentioned issue.
[/INST]Your grammatical range score is 9.0</s>
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You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
Anwser:
In many nations, despite becoming wealthier, healthier and living for a long time, youngsters do not feel happy. It seems this issue stems from two main reasons and some actions should be taken to address it fully.
it is generally acknowledged that young generations make a busy lifestyle for themselves and do not allocate enough time to even think about things that make them feel better. This gradually kills their emotions and transforms them into a machine. For instance, we witness some well-off people who live like robots and do not consider anything but earning money. Additionally, this wealth brings some major problems to their personal lives along with comfort. They assume everyone is a rival and try to win an imaginary competition. It can therefore be concluded that money increases the quality of their life but omits their happiness.
It is widely accepted that they need someone to contribute to them with their daily tasks. These individuals are not able to confront all of the problems stemming from their wealth. Moreover, they must have a plan for their life including spending time with their loved ones, their hobbies, attending parties and so on. In this way, they do not allow stress enters to their life and influence them. As an illustration, successful company owners have a knowledgeable consultant to think about difficulties and suggest proper solutions.
Consequently, nowadays it can be seen some people earn a considerable amount of money and live healthier and longer, but with no signs of fullness. Two main causes and their relevant solutions are discussed in this essay which can help people get rid of negative emotions led by the mentioned issue.
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Your task achievement score is 7.0
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<s>[INST] You are an Ielts examiner and you need to grade the following essay. Ensure a complete response with clear and comprehensive ideas, relevant and specific examples, and an appropriate word count to give task achievement score for the essay The score must be in [0.0, 0.5, 1.0, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 3.0, 3.5, 4.0, 4.5 5.0, 5.5, 6.0, 6.5, 7.0, 7.5, 8.0, 8.5, 9.0]
The expected output format is exact 'Your task achievement score is <score>'. For example: Your task achievement score is 6.5
Now, please give task achievement score for the following essay:
Question:
In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
Anwser:
In many nations, despite becoming wealthier, healthier and living for a long time, youngsters do not feel happy. It seems this issue stems from two main reasons and some actions should be taken to address it fully.
it is generally acknowledged that young generations make a busy lifestyle for themselves and do not allocate enough time to even think about things that make them feel better. This gradually kills their emotions and transforms them into a machine. For instance, we witness some well-off people who live like robots and do not consider anything but earning money. Additionally, this wealth brings some major problems to their personal lives along with comfort. They assume everyone is a rival and try to win an imaginary competition. It can therefore be concluded that money increases the quality of their life but omits their happiness.
It is widely accepted that they need someone to contribute to them with their daily tasks. These individuals are not able to confront all of the problems stemming from their wealth. Moreover, they must have a plan for their life including spending time with their loved ones, their hobbies, attending parties and so on. In this way, they do not allow stress enters to their life and influence them. As an illustration, successful company owners have a knowledgeable consultant to think about difficulties and suggest proper solutions.
Consequently, nowadays it can be seen some people earn a considerable amount of money and live healthier and longer, but with no signs of fullness. Two main causes and their relevant solutions are discussed in this essay which can help people get rid of negative emotions led by the mentioned issue.
[/INST]Your task achievement score is 7.0</s>
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